Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards

Two Drabbles: Tar-Miriel and the Waves

Author: Ainaechoiriel
Nominator: Ainaechoiriel
2005 Award Category: Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble

Story Type: Drabble : Length: N/A
Rating: G -- Reason for Rating: N/A
Summary: Tar-Miriel's last thoughts as the waves take Numenor. One canon-based, the other AU


Reviewed by: sulriel -- Score: 2

I appreciate the clever use of repeitition of word and thought in this drabble set, the meter gives it a unique, almost poetic rythym. very nice.

Reviewed by: Thundera Tiger -- Score: 2

Even thought Tar-Miriel watched the waves too long, I suspect it was satisfying to see her husband's defeat. At least she had that much. I really liked the words about Meneltarma, too. Once they prayed and then they burned. Good stuff.

Reviewed by: Cheryl -- Score: 2

With these two drabbles I feel the emotion, the plight and the longing. Very difficult to portray in 100 words, but these were wonderfully done!

Reviewed by: nerwen_calaelen -- Score: 1

An interesting view of Tar-Mirel.