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Msg# 8181

Re: Reviews Now Available Posted by PGF October 01, 2007 - 1:16:59 Topic ID# 8180
For the past hour, I have been unable to access the MEFA site - is my
computer being obnoxious, or has anyone else had similar trouble? At
any rate, I certainly hope the situation is temporary.


RAKSHA


<<<<--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "aure_enteluva" <melayton@...>
wrote:
>
> Hey guys,
>
> As many of you may have noticed, reviews are now visible at our
> website. Go to http://www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/ and log in. Or if
> you don't have a password, click on "log in as guest". Once logged
in,
> click the "Read Reviews" link, and you'll see all of the final
reviews
> that have been entered. That's 930 reviews available for your
browsing
> privilege, at the time I'm writing this email.
>
> There's been some confusion on whether you can still enter reviews.
> The answer is YES. Reviewing is absolutely allowed until these
awards
> end on DECEMBER 30. The only difference is that you'll no longer be
> able to *edit* final reviews. You can enter new reviews, and edit
the
> draft and hidden ones. I hope everyone will continue to do that.
>
> Annmarwalk has volunteered to post the reviews to the MEFAwards
Yahoo
> group. (LJ folks, she'll be giving you guys links to the Yahoo posts
> where the reviews are posted, so you won't miss out.) She'll be
> posting 50 or so reviews a day until we're caught up. This means
that
> for a while, the reviews she posts every day won't be the ones
posted
> on that day. In the past people have been confused by that. We
stagger
> posting the reviews so people don't come home to 900 reviews in
their
> inbox. If you want to see the most recent reviews you can find them
at
> the website.
>
> Authors: While it is by no means required, sometimes authors have
> wanted to email their reviewers to thank them for their comments.
> You'll notice that members' emails are not visible on our webpage.
If
> you would like to send an email to a reviewer, please email it to
> mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com, and I will forward it along to the
> reviewer (along with your email address in case they choose to reply
> back). Of course, if you know the reviewer's email address, feel
free
> to email them on your own.
>
> Occasionally you may find a review that you think needs correcting
for
> some reason. Sometimes a review is accidentally entered for the
wrong
> story, or it does not follow the award rules (for instance, quotes
are
> not blocked off.) Other times, the reviewer composes reviews in a
word
> processor and just made a mistake coopying and pasting into the
review
> form. If a review seems off, email mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com to
> discuss it.
>
> I think that's it! Happy reviewing guys!
>
> Marta
> (MEFA Admin.)>>>>
>

Msg# 8182

Re: Reviews Now Available Posted by elhanan\_austin October 01, 2007 - 1:23:27 Topic ID# 8180
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "PGF" <PGail99@...> wrote:
>
> For the past hour, I have been unable to access the MEFA site - is my
> computer being obnoxious, or has anyone else had similar trouble? At
> any rate, I certainly hope the situation is temporary.
>
>
> RAKSHA

I;ve been trying to get into MEFA as well with no luck. Usually when I
can't access a website it means that the Chinese gov't has blocked it.
But I can't imagine why they would block this site. There's nothing in
it that is detrimental to the Chinese gov't. Not like Wikipedia. I hope
this is just a temporary glitch.


Fiondil

Msg# 8183

Re: Reviews Now Available Posted by Elena Tiriel October 01, 2007 - 2:41:54 Topic ID# 8180
Hi Marta!

I just want to say how excited I am to finally be able to read reviews, not
only for my own story but also for my friends'. It is thrilling!

That's what makes the MEFAs so extraordinary -- and so inspiring.

To all the volunteers who make the MEFAs possible each year: thank you! ;-)

- Barbara, whose contented muse is raising a glass of fine Dorwinion to the
MEFA volunteers


On 9/30/07, aure_enteluva <melayton@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hey guys,
>
> As many of you may have noticed, reviews are now visible at our
> website. Go to http://www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/ and log in. Or if
> you don't have a password, click on "log in as guest". Once logged in,
> click the "Read Reviews" link, and you'll see all of the final reviews
> that have been entered. That's 930 reviews available for your browsing
> privilege, at the time I'm writing this email.
>
> There's been some confusion on whether you can still enter reviews.
> The answer is YES. Reviewing is absolutely allowed until these awards
> end on DECEMBER 30. The only difference is that you'll no longer be
> able to *edit* final reviews. You can enter new reviews, and edit the
> draft and hidden ones. I hope everyone will continue to do that.
>
> Annmarwalk has volunteered to post the reviews to the MEFAwards Yahoo
> group. (LJ folks, she'll be giving you guys links to the Yahoo posts
> where the reviews are posted, so you won't miss out.) She'll be
> posting 50 or so reviews a day until we're caught up. This means that
> for a while, the reviews she posts every day won't be the ones posted
> on that day. In the past people have been confused by that. We stagger
> posting the reviews so people don't come home to 900 reviews in their
> inbox. If you want to see the most recent reviews you can find them at
> the website.
>
> Authors: While it is by no means required, sometimes authors have
> wanted to email their reviewers to thank them for their comments.
> You'll notice that members' emails are not visible on our webpage. If
> you would like to send an email to a reviewer, please email it to
> mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com, and I will forward it along to the
> reviewer (along with your email address in case they choose to reply
> back). Of course, if you know the reviewer's email address, feel free
> to email them on your own.
>
> Occasionally you may find a review that you think needs correcting for
> some reason. Sometimes a review is accidentally entered for the wrong
> story, or it does not follow the award rules (for instance, quotes are
> not blocked off.) Other times, the reviewer composes reviews in a word
> processor and just made a mistake coopying and pasting into the review
> form. If a review seems off, email mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com to
> discuss it.
>
> I think that's it! Happy reviewing guys!
>
> Marta
> (MEFA Admin.)
>
>
>


[Non-text portions of this message have been removed]

Msg# 8184

Re: Reviews Now Available Posted by Arthur Boccaccio October 01, 2007 - 3:22:12 Topic ID# 8180
Well, something happened while I was out shopping. Now I can get in. Thanks
to whichever Maia has duties over the internet.

So now I better go and see which of the reviews I've done so far are ready
to be posted. *grin*

Fiondil


On 10/1/07, Elena Tiriel <ElenaTiriel@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Marta!
>
> I just want to say how excited I am to finally be able to read reviews,
> not
> only for my own story but also for my friends'. It is thrilling!
>
> That's what makes the MEFAs so extraordinary -- and so inspiring.
>
> To all the volunteers who make the MEFAs possible each year: thank you!
> ;-)
>
> - Barbara, whose contented muse is raising a glass of fine Dorwinion to
> the
> MEFA volunteers
>
> On 9/30/07, aure_enteluva <melayton@gmail.com <melayton%40gmail.com>>
> wrote:
> >
> > Hey guys,
> >
> > As many of you may have noticed, reviews are now visible at our
> > website. Go to http://www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/ and log in. Or if
> > you don't have a password, click on "log in as guest". Once logged in,
> > click the "Read Reviews" link, and you'll see all of the final reviews
> > that have been entered. That's 930 reviews available for your browsing
> > privilege, at the time I'm writing this email.
> >
> > There's been some confusion on whether you can still enter reviews.
> > The answer is YES. Reviewing is absolutely allowed until these awards
> > end on DECEMBER 30. The only difference is that you'll no longer be
> > able to *edit* final reviews. You can enter new reviews, and edit the
> > draft and hidden ones. I hope everyone will continue to do that.
> >
> > Annmarwalk has volunteered to post the reviews to the MEFAwards Yahoo
> > group. (LJ folks, she'll be giving you guys links to the Yahoo posts
> > where the reviews are posted, so you won't miss out.) She'll be
> > posting 50 or so reviews a day until we're caught up. This means that
> > for a while, the reviews she posts every day won't be the ones posted
> > on that day. In the past people have been confused by that. We stagger
> > posting the reviews so people don't come home to 900 reviews in their
> > inbox. If you want to see the most recent reviews you can find them at
> > the website.
> >
> > Authors: While it is by no means required, sometimes authors have
> > wanted to email their reviewers to thank them for their comments.
> > You'll notice that members' emails are not visible on our webpage. If
> > you would like to send an email to a reviewer, please email it to
> > mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com, and I will forward it along to the
> > reviewer (along with your email address in case they choose to reply
> > back). Of course, if you know the reviewer's email address, feel free
> > to email them on your own.
> >
> > Occasionally you may find a review that you think needs correcting for
> > some reason. Sometimes a review is accidentally entered for the wrong
> > story, or it does not follow the award rules (for instance, quotes are
> > not blocked off.) Other times, the reviewer composes reviews in a word
> > processor and just made a mistake coopying and pasting into the review
> > form. If a review seems off, email mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com to
> > discuss it.
> >
> > I think that's it! Happy reviewing guys!
> >
> > Marta
> > (MEFA Admin.)
> >
> >
> >
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>
>
>



--
Auta i lýmý! Utýlie'n aurý! ý Battle Cry of the Noldor at the Dagor
Nirnaeth Arnediad

Aurý entuluva! ý Battle Cry of Hýrin at the Dagor Nirnath Arnediad

Utýlie'n Estel ý Hope hath come


[Non-text portions of this message have been removed]

Msg# 8185

MEFA Awards Digest for October 1 (Part 1) Posted by ann walker October 01, 2007 - 4:50:01 Topic ID# 8185
Title: For Every Evil 2 <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3477152/1/> ý Author:
Mirrordance<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=757
ý ID:
119<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=119>
Reviewer: juno_magic<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=358
2007-06-01 13:16:45
This modern day AU story is original, refreshing and unique.

Plot and especially pacing are superb. In some ways the action-packed story
can be compared to the best aspects of thrillers written by authors like
Grisham, Clancy or Dan Brown. Just like these stories "For Every Evil 2" is
impossible to put down. The flow and the rush of the story are simply
perfect. A definite page turner!

If anything, the chapters and scenes are a bit on the short side. However,
they are still well within the limit of what can be considere an average
chapter length for fanfiction.

Description and setting are generally sparse in the style of modern novels,
with a few glorious exceptions (such as the chaos in Legolas' apartment -
that was hilarious, very well done). A bit more description, a bit more
setting might make the story an even more pleasant read, but it is already
very balanced, so that this is no detriment to the quality of the story in
general.

The characterization of the story relies heavily on the general vision of
the characters of the Fellowship as generated by the movies. But while it
sometimes seems that the LOTR characters are used like easy "labels" -
because it's simply clear how readers will react when "Gimli" or "Boromir"
act in a certain way - this is done adroitly and skillfully, always
achieving the best possible effect.

And there are - sometimes very tiny - scenes that really let the LOTR
connection of the characters shine dramatically and highlight stories that
run deep into the past of Middle-earth. That way the story always stays
close to LOTR in spite of its modern setting and plot.

Additionally, the characters of this story are extraordinary and compelling,
namely Chandra, YinYang, Julianna and Montes. They are fleshed out and feel
very real.

Although details concerning style and language (especially the use of
tenses) can still be improved, there is nothing that keeps the reader from
enjoying the story.

All in all, "For Every Evil 2" is definitely one of the best and most
original modern Tolkien fan fiction stories available.
Title: Strange
Stars<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=6954
Author:
Jael<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=685
Races: Cross-Cultural ý ID:
120<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=120>
Reviewer: juno_magic<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=358
2007-06-01 14:01:07
This is one of the most unusual Tolkien fan fiction stories I have ever
read. Most of all, it proves that even the most extravagant "Alternative
Universe" ideas can be written well.

The author finds a way to create an absolutely believable background for
Legolas' unusual mission of travelling to the court of the Haradric emperor
in the guise of a courtesan. The reader quickly suspends her disbelief and
readly accompanies Legolas on this chancy diplomatic errand.

Jael's Haradric "býthnaru" is not a prostitute. The "býthnaru" is a figure
with the same cultural depth as a geisha. Indeed, in some ways the story
reminds of "Memoirs of a Geisha" in its compelling, bittersweet strangeness.

The plot moves along easily, alternating tense and more languid chapters,
following a winding path between political and sexual intrigue. Every
chapter has its own plot within the plot and highlights an aspect of the
Haradric culture, of Legolas' mission and of Legolas' character.

What is most remarkable about this story is how the author uses sexual
situations as a stylistic device. These situtations show cultural
differences, drive the plot of the story, and give insight in the various
characters in a masterful way.

Some scenes will make some readers very uncomfortable, although they do not
cross the verge to NC-17. But this effect is obviously intended, and very
successful: no scene will leave the reader unmoved!

The setting of the story is rich and deep, the descriptive passages allow
the reader to taste the sweet wine of a far away country and to hear the
lament of peacocks. The country and the culture of the Haradrim really come
to life in this novella. Alien, sometimes strange, but absolutely authentic.

In addition to the unusual, intriguing plot this story has truly unique and
impressive characters.

Most of all, Legolas always remains true to the Elf we know from "Lord of
the Rings", in spite of certain changes due to the "alternative universe"
approach of the story. He remains a steadfast, loyal friend, and in spite of
the sexual situations into which he is drawn (almost) never loses that air
of Elvish aloofness. The author imbues Legolas with a sweetness of character
that gives an amazing warmth to the story and helps the reader to stick with
the story even through unpleasant, tense scenes.

Last but not least, the original characters are amazing. Tolkien once said
something along the lines of how the mountains glimpsed in the distance are
what makes a story a really great read. Concerning the orignal characters in
"Strange Stars" this is definitely true. Every character has a life, a
history, a story of his or her own, sometimes only hinted at, and always
compelling.

It is to be hoped that many readers and reviewers will be willing to give
this story a chance in spite of its unusual premise. If they don't, they
miss an intriguing and memorable story.


Title: Not Fade
Away<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=6416
Author:
Jael<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=685
Genres: Drama: Elves in Later Ages ý ID:
127<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=127>
Reviewer: juno_magic<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=358
2007-06-01 14:28:45
This is a wonderful, lighthearted modern day Tolkien fanfic story. But in
spite of its humourous touch, it connects to canon in a believable way, thus
creating an outstanding AU.

By showing how Elves might have come back to Middle-earth, and how they
might have endured even today without fading away certainly alleviates the
keen disappointment felt at the end of LOTR.

Concerning the main characters of the story, it's very satisfying to get
such a unique and sane glimpse at the family dynamics of Legolas' family.
The protagonists, their stories and their behaviour feel real and
believable. One charm of the story is how unnamed or less well-known elves
get their say in this story, granting the reader delightful new
perspectives.

The protagonist is really well done. She's neither too good nor too bad to
be true, and spectacularly real, which makes her very easy to relate to and
to root for.

One of the highlights of the story is definitely that it doesn't go
mainstream concerning the romance sub-plots. Here we have definitely unusual
relationships - very believable, and funn.

Many stories that belong to the genre "humor" end up not being very funny at
all, but rather silly. This story is different. Well-handled emotions and a
fast-paced plot make it difficult to put the story down.

Little details delight the reader - the occupation of Elves in the modern
world, the dangers of the modern world for Elves ... always original,
refreshing, and a lot of fun.

Last but not least the style of writing is thoroughly enjoyable. Clear,
engagine prose, an eye for the hilarious without overdoing it, and dialogue
that perfectly fits characters and scenes make for a great read.

Fluffy and funny, this is not filling, but makes the reader long for more!

Title: The Course of
Love<http://aranel-took.fancrone.net/stories/col_contents.php
Author: Aranel
Took<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=600
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ý ID:
179<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=179>
Reviewer: juno_magic<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=358
2007-06-02 10:10:46
"The Course of Love" is a wonderful sequel to "The Roots of the Ivy",
Aranel Took's story about the half-hobbit Ivy, daughter of Merry and ýowyn.
This story follows Ivy's children as they grow up, come of age and find
love. It is a entertaining, epic story that presents the culture of Hobbits
and Rohirrim in a very realistic, loving way.

But although "The Course of Love" is generally a lighthearted, romantic
comedy, there are also darker moments that show clearly that Hobbits are not
happy fluffy children, but real people. The plot and perspective of the
story are unique, original and refreshing, because the author dares to move
beyond canon characters to many strong original characters. That is what
makes Aranel Took's stories so very enjoyable: no matter if she writes about
Hobbits, dwarves, or even Legolas, her characters are never flat, cardboard
characters, but always real, full of life.

While the story is epic enough to satisfy readers who prefer novels, the
pacing never lags, and the individual chapters are crisp and clear-cut.

The story's forte is undeniably brilliant dialogue. Witty and funny, it is
also used as a stylistic device to give depth to the various characters.

Last but not least it's a very moving, touching story that will elicit many
"Awww's". But it's also wise to keep the door closed, because other scenes
will have the reader roar with laughter!

All in all: perfect summer reading for everyone who loves Hobbits and
original stories!

Title: Stirrings of
Shadow<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=5257
Author:
Fiondil<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=743
Genres: Adventure: Incomplete ý ID:
233<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=233>
Reviewer: dancingkatz<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=770
2007-06-03 16:48:29
This is a wonderful story in both plot, writing style, and
characterization, particularly of the younger Aragorn and King Thengel. I
have always wondered what my favourite Ranger had gotten up to during his
years in Rohan that would give him such a shining reference from Thengel to
Ecthelion when he went to Minas Tirith. I was very pleased to find that the
Aragorn in this story, while eventually warranting that excellent reference
is still young, making mistakes and learning from them at the same time he
is clever, brave and honourable. So many stories make him out to be more
perfect than can be believed regardless of his age or experience (or lack
thereof) that he can't possibly be the same character in Tolkien's books. I
can very easily see that the Aragorn in this gap-filler story will
eventually be the man who becomes the King of the Reunited Kingdoms.

The depiction of the Rohirrim as a race, culture and as individuals sets
this story apart from many others concerning Gondor's allies. It is very
clear that the author has a good knowledge of the Anglo-Saxons on which
Tolkien based this culture. The naming conventions and use of Old English as
well as the smoothly integrated descriptions of people, places, horses and
so forth make the Rohirrim real, not flat stereotypes. Thengel and the other
inhabitants of the Riddermearc are real, interesting and not just names in a
longfather tree.

The mysteries and intrigues, the interactions of Aragorn and the Rohirrim,
the intrigues and humor amidst everything else make this an unforgettable
story to be read again and again,
Title: Fruition<http://community.livejournal.com/sons_of_gondor/371588.html
Author:
EdorasLass<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=299
Genres: Alternate Universe: Gondor or Rohan ý ID:
7<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=7>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177
2007-06-03 17:10:20
We know that EdorasLass, well known as the author of the charming
Nanny-and-bitty-'Mir stories, can also do drama, suspense, and creepiness ý
we've read ["Come When You Are Ready" and "Love Me And Despair"]. So it
shouldn't come as any kind of a surprise at all that, in this startling AU,
she can twist favorite characters up and down and inside out, to give us a
whole new and slightly horrifying world to consider.


With her skillful pen, she' s turned Middle-Earth's favorite Madonna figure,
Finduilas, into a two-faced witch, lecherous and demanding, with language
[more suited to a dockside whore]. She's given us the the swoonworthy
Imrahil as a Machiavellian prince, a corrupt and devious tool in his
family's long-standing plan to achieve control of Gondor. It's almost enough
to make you pity poor, besotted Denethor, willing to sacrifice his life in
defense of his wife's honor. And bewildered, unfortunate Thorongil ý locked
in his chamber, his world turned upside down within a matter of hours. His
moment of realization comes almost a split-second too late, and it is his
reflexes and training that save him. But even he is unable to thwart these
long-standing plans.

What I particularly love about AU's is that we * can * stop imagining when
we want to. It's a good thing ý I'm not sure what would have become of young
Boromir in this newly-imagined world, one where Faramir doesn't exist at
all! Ouch.
Title: Celebration <http://tanaquilotr.livejournal.com/29416.html> ý
Author: Tanaqui<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Drabble ý ID:
139<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=139>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177
2007-06-03 20:04:58
I first read this drabble on a warm summer's day, hay-cutting time where I
live, and was enchanted by the warm, pastoral feel. It must have been
tremendously satisfying to Faramir and Eowyn, and to all the goodfolk of
Ithilien, to take a day to rest and celebrate the good life they are working
so hard to provide for themselves and their children. There's a festive,
Brueghel-esque feel to the tale ý I can almost hear the shouts of the
children, the good-natured taunts and laughter of the archers, and the
breathless hush of the crowd as Faramir begins to tell his tale.


Title: Remembering
Anew<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=5094
Author: Pearl
Took <http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=72
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ý ID:
88<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=88>
Reviewer: Cuthalion<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=407
2007-06-03 20:21:14
I discovered "Remembering Anew" a few months ago... plus the fact that it
originally had been meant as a longer sequel to three small stories posted
before. Those three little tales ("Remembering", "Remembering More" and
"Remembering Aright") tell the story of Jebbin and Other Brandybuck,
descendants of Merry Brandybuck and Pippin Took 400 years after the Ring
War; during a "Hide and Seek"-game in Brandy Hall the two little boys
discover a messy mathom room - and two ghosts. They have no idea that this
is the beginning of a thrilling adventure...

Though the three little vignettes are beautifully written and a delight to
read, the longer sequel "Remembering Anew" was what really captured my
heart. Jebbin and Other have grown up meanwhile... in a Shire that has
entirely forgotten about the truth of the Quest. Frodo Baggins is only
remembered as an addle-brained old fool, Samwise Gamgee's glory has faded
during the centuries and the "true" heroes are Meriadoc and Peregrin. Their
- ridiculously exaggerated - adventures are common "knowledge" in every
hobbit school. But Jebbin and Other know the truth (because they actually
know the "true" heroes), and when Jebbin discovers the original tale of the
Ring War and dares to write an own book about his new revelations, a
dangerous avalanche of slander and deceit breaks down on him.

The style is wonderful, the author has a palpable, deep love for hobbits and
their society (including all strenghts and weaknesses). The idea that
historians might mess up with the true story of the Ringbearer and his brave
deeds (with the evil "assistance" of a very unexpected villain) is more than
original, and the twists and tribulations of the intricate plot keep the
reader hooked from the first word up to the last. This is one of the most
amazing and interesting tales I've read for years. Well done!

Title: Brothers at
Heart<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=4512
Author:
Radbooks<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=428
Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA ý ID:
330<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=330>
Reviewer: runnerbeast<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=712
2007-06-06 04:08:51
I really loved this story. I was quickly pulled into Aragorn's journey
from Rivendell and away from his elvish family as he takes up residence with
his dunedain family. I thought it was fun reading about all the struggles he
had, big and small, to over come as he grew accustom to living with humans,
and discovered this new and capable side of himself. It was amazing how the
author, slowly took him and us from seeing him as Estel, and from his roots
with the elves, and emerged him as Aragorn the Chieftain to the Dunedain. It
was so creatively and smoothly done amidst all the daily life, relationships
and heartaches going on in the main part of the story.

Every turn in this story left me waiting for the next part to see what would
happen and to see how and if Aragorn could handle the situation, which made
the story very exciting and fun to read. I wondered if the dunedain men that
had never met him before would follow him as their leader. The author made
the situations in the wilderness believable and realistic as darkness
started to cover Middle Earth. She brought out things that I had never
thought of before and it was very interesting and fascinating.

I think the way this adventure brings together the close friendship of
Aragorn and Halbarad is my very favorite part of this story. The major
crisis in the story brings them ultimately to a better understanding of
themselves, the trust they know they can have in each other, and the start
of their deep life long friendship. They truly become brothers at heart.
Title: Relaxation
Techniques<http://edoraslass.livejournal.com/95033.html>ý Author:
EdorasLass<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=299
Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ý ID:
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Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177
2007-06-07 00:50:58
It's a very simple story, really: Thýodred is angry and overwrought from a
difficult encounter with Grima and the King's Council; Boromir helps him to
unwind. The result, from the skilled and loving hands of EdorasLass, is
neither smut nor schmoop but a heartening tale of honesty, affection, and
trust.

What I've always loved about EdorasLass's writing of these characters is how
she vividly portrays them as perfectly matched in power and strength, and
the affection and regard of their people. But they are also in complete
understanding of each other's burdens and insecurities, more so than anyone
else in the world. Their rare meetings provide opportunities to relax and be
themselves without self-consciousness, allowing them to set aside for a time
the Alpha-male personas they must continually present to the world. Although
physical intimacy, past and future, is implicit in the story, the focal
point is the emotional intimacy that exists between Boromir and Thýodred,
which draws and binds them far more firmly than simple passion.

I would certainly be remiss in my comments if I did not dwell a bit on the
imagery here: Theodred pacing the room like a restless lion; the bemused
Boromir ordering him to sit down; the moment when it seems their whole
relationship hangs in the balance. [ý"Sit. Down." Boromir repeated
forcefully, crossing his arms over his chest and facing Thýodred squarely.
"You need to calm yourself, and you cannot do that when you are stalking
around the room in such a manner."

Thýodred's eyes narrowed dangerously at the unmistakable note of authority
in Boromir's voice. A heavy tension suddenly hung between them, but Boromir
ignored it and only continued to stare at the other man as he might a new,
impertinent recruit. He hoped that he had not pushed Thýodred too far ý
Boromir was aware that he stood a chance of having that anger turned on
him.]

And certainly any Boromir fan will appreciate the loving detail with which
EdorasLass describes of the skillful use to which our hero puts those hands!
A very satisfying addition to the chronicles of Boromir and Thýodred's
relationship.


Title: Miss Dora Baggins' Book of
Manners<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=4819&cid=19283
Author:
Dreamflower<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=115
Genres: Humor: The Shire or Buckland ý ID:
239<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=239>
Reviewer: Marta<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2007-06-07 01:25:56
This piece is neat, not just for it's insightful world-building about
hobbit society but also becasue of the voice. It sounds like the perfect
hobbit goodwife. I enjoyed the read.
Title: No Man's
Child<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=4835
Author:
Anoriath<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=354
Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete ý ID:
198<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=198>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177
2007-06-08 00:49:54
In this richly detailed story, a gravely wounded Aragorn is recovering "at
home" in the Angle, the northern lands traditionally occupied by the
Dunedain. The seriousness of his injury reiterates to companions and
counselors a burdensome fact: the line of Elendil will fail unless Aragorn
can produce an heir. Amid the burdens of constant warfare in the North, the
fate of Gondor seems a far-off dream, and so Aragorn consents to take a
woman of the Dunedain to wife. Nienelen, his bride, soon realizes that
another holds his heart, but her duty to her Dunedain heritage is no less
than his, and she accepts her responsibility to bear his children, order his
household, and protect and lead the folk of the Angle in his absence.

Anoriath is an artist, no less than Brueghel the Elder, and her pen brings
the extraordinary tapestry of the Angle to life just as vividly as his
brush. No detail is too small for her meticulous and loving examination:
cooking, dyeing, and herblore; animal husbandry; Dwarvish visitors;
agricultural economics of the mid-Third Age. She has created a world rich
beyond even the Professor's imagining.

When her view moves inside though Aragorn's house, though, Anoriath's
wordcraft takes on the cool northern light of a Vermeer painting. Voices are
muted to the barest whisper, and words are of the coolest courtesy, for the
anguish that underlies this tale is the desolation of Nienelen and Aragorn's
relationship. It's a heartbreaking tale to read, yet we cannot help but be
transfixed by the exquisite telling of that tale.


Title: Flame Rekindled <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3048804/1/> ý Author:
Istarnie<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=816
Races: Elves: Incomplete ý ID:
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Reviewer: Ellie<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=768
2007-06-08 16:41:40
You have so wonderfully captured the tortured soul of Feanor and I am in
awe of your take on what a spirit must go through in order to heal. You have
done fantastic job of portraying Feanor and how torn he is between hatred,
jealousy, pride, and love. I really like the way Mandos shows up every now
and then and prods along the healing process. I love the way you have built
this up with the early jealous thoughts on the arena and then the way you
tie it all together at the end.

I also loved the part where Feanor is realising how he and Fingolfin should
have been there together to face Morgoth, fighting shoulder to shoulder as
the proud sons of Finwe and in that way they would have overcome MOrgoth
instead of Fingo0lfin having to face him alone and Feanor never facing him
at all.

I had never before considered the two of them standing together to face
anything. They truly would have been a united front difficult to overcome.
It is so very sad that this realization never came until too late for either
of them.

Your Nerdanel with her soothing words and her ability to calm his agitated
fea is absolutely wonderful. WOW!

This truly is powerful writing and I ma enjoying this sotry very much. Keep
up the most excellent work!

Title: The Waves' Song <http://lady-branwyn.livejournal.com/40828.html> ý
Author: Branwyn<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=240
Genres: Drama: General Drabble ý ID:
6<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=6>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177
2007-06-09 15:26:39
So very beautiful and sad. I love the way you've used seafarer's terms:
[waves, mast, sail] to deftly evoke Arwen's melancholy, the sea-longing of
her people superimposed upon her anguish over the loss of her beloved spouse
and companion. Your imagery, as always, is extraordinary: the lone
elf-woman, the streaming hair, the skittering leaves. There's such an
aching, autumnal feeling of loss and desolation. What a heartrending figure
she must have presented to any of those who chanced to see her thus. I
wonder what stories were told about her by those who watched from the
village below.
Title: The Lesson <http://lady-branwyn.livejournal.com/60087.html> ý
Author: Branwyn<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=240
Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ý ID:
29<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=29>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177
2007-06-09 15:38:59
[How gently men are schooled in war, so gently that they see not the
lesson.]

Another thoughtful tale from the pen of Lady Branwyn. Faramir ponders how
effortlessly, yet efficiently, men are taught to kill. For the most noble of
reasons, of course: to feed themselves and their families, to protect their
wealth, for the survival of their homeland. All quite necessary purposes,
yet to the insightful Faramir, there's a melancholy undertone to the lesson.
I wonder what he would think of our age, where killing is glorified as
recreation and entertainment; yet we cry out in dismay when madmen take that
fateful step from fantasy to reality.


Title: Romance<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?stid=6648&SPOrdinal=7
Author:
Greywing<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=739
Genres: Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet ý ID:
375<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=375>
Reviewer: Oshun<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=589
2007-06-09 21:02:02
I'm an idiot that somebody else actually nominated this story and I did
not, since I feel at least in some small part responsible for forcing you to
write it (as part of the coterie of writers who made you endure those
endless Eomer/Lothiriel romances!). Anyway, the best revenge is a good
offense--I'm sure I got that wrong. Nevermind, this is an awesome romance.
One of the best ever, and, as a dear friend often tells me, the most
exciting eroticism is that which leaves EVERYTHING to the imagination. Loves
those lines: ["]They kissed in the darkness, and did a great many things
besides. Imrahil found them.["] You are a naughty girl, Greywing, and people
think you are so innocent. I know better! Congratulations on a great small
piece.
Title: Perchance To
Dream<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=5295&cid=21890
Author:
Cathleen<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=579
Genres: Drama: The Fellowship ý ID:
386<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=386>
Reviewer: tracyboo<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=819
2007-06-10 01:34:54
Cathleen,
Oh yeah, I'd say this winter has proven inspirational to somebody! LOL! This
is definitely written by somebody who is less than enamored with the cold!
LOL!

I enjoyed the interaction amongst the Fellowship and the thing with the
frozen frog was both sort of creepy and kind of sad. Poor critter! I loved
the dream sequence. It felt very powerful and prophetic and I think that it
helped give Pip what he needed to go on. Wonderfully creative story hon!

Tracy
Title: "A Cat Of A Different
Color"<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=5229&cid=21662
Author:
Cathleen<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=579
Genres: Mystery ý ID:
385<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=385>
Reviewer: tracyboo<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=819
2007-06-10 01:37:07
Cathleen,
This story was not only great fun, but I felt it was very much in keeping
with Tolkien's style of story telling!
Tracy
Title: A Million Little Stars To Light Their
Way<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=5193&cid=21457
Author:
Cathleen<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=579
Genres: Drama: The Shire ý ID:
387<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=387>
Reviewer: tracyboo<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=819
2007-06-10 01:39:20
Cathleen,
Oh, but that was heartbreaking to read! Merry and Pippin will always
remember Boromir with nothing less than love and respect. What a loss!
Tracy
Title: May It Be a Light to You in Dark
Places<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=5134&cid=21167
Author:
Cathleen<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=579
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan ý ID:
388<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=388>
Reviewer: tracyboo<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=819
2007-06-10 01:41:06
Cathleen,
Loved this story hon! Of course you know that already! LOL!
Tracy
Title: Youngest
Son<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=5207
Author:
Bodkin<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=411
Genres: Romance: Second Age or Earlier ý ID:
406<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=406>
Reviewer: Ellie<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=768
2007-06-11 19:35:10
I love this interaction between Finarfin and Earwen. The way Finarfin
admires Earwen from afar and the way she looks upon him from the distance,
egged on by her amused and highly amusing girlfriends is so cute! I liked it
when her friends points out that Finarfin is much more muscular than he
first looked after he takes off his shirt and his saving of Earwen's little
brother from his unpleasant encounter in the waves was charming. Finarfin
handles the annoying little brother very well and tries to be a gentleman
toward Earwen especially after the pleasant distraction of her clingy wet
dress. The dark foreboding at the end was a nice touch and a reminder of
what is to come for them both. I always enjoy your stories and your deep,
often clever insight into the characters you portray in them. The settings
are so well described that I feel as if I am really present with the
characters as they interact. Good work and well done!
Title: Decorum<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=6291
Author:
Larner<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=242
Genres: Humor: The Shire or Buckland ý ID:
59<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=59>
Reviewer: Dwimordene<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8
2007-06-15 19:08:40
Dora Baggins and her reams of good advice ý I had vague memories of this
very minor character from Bilbo's eleventy-first birthday preparations.
Having had an excellent fic experience when somebody retrieved Angelic
Baggins and her mirror, I decided to give this a try. I was not
disappointed!

The story turns on the outward and the inward, or the appearance and the
absolute heart of the thing: what is decorum? Dora Baggins thinks she knows,
and her precise, proud, critical, and primly pompous observations of her
book-binding relatives' manners are priceless. They are as precise as they
need to be in order to convey that slightly petty, anal-retentive character,
even as we know from Frodo's thoughts that his good manners are a show. Of
course, one might think that that's exactly what manners are for ý for other
people, not to be idolized in themselves.

Dora's shock to find her relatives a little later on indulging in terribly
non-decorous ways is the repayment on a virtue that has perhaps begun to
ossify.

But perhaps even that was a good thing, or else her appreciation of decorum
went deeper than was apparent. When it matters most, she recognizes true
gentility and decorum and honors it. She may not be one of those
revolutionary characters ý she doesn't have enough of the fire in her for
that, I think ý but she's good people in the end.

And of course, a model of decorum.
Title: Passages<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=723
Author: Isabeau
of Greenlea<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=182
Genres: Drama: Incomplete ý ID:
60<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=60>
Reviewer: Dwimordene<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8
2007-06-15 19:08:55
There is something about that awkward stage between being a child and
becoming a (young) adult that rarely fails to pique interest. Perhaps it is
because we have all been there before (or will be there eventually). The
process of disillusionment with parents, of finding out they, too, have
their secrets and their regrets, and that we do not always understand these
or agree with them is certainly universal.

Isabeau's fanfic universe continues to grow more elaborate, and this story
focuses on the OC bastard son of Boromir, as he starts that passage from
childhood to adulthood and begins to discover some content for long-sensed
secrets about his late father. What he does not expect is that gaining
insight into those secrets will place him at odds with his adoptive father,
another of Isabeau's OCs, Andrahar.

From there on out, there's intrigue, slave-trade, rescues, and relationships
to be mended. While the story reads best and make most sense to those who
know the backstories, I think it is still possible to enjoy it without
having these things.


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Msg# 8186

MEFA Awards Digest for October 1, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann Walker October 01, 2007 - 4:54:04 Topic ID# 8186
Title: Graceful and Green · Author: Alawa · Genres: Drama: Ithilien ·
ID: 62
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:09:13
The traumatic experience of warfare calls for some of the most
strenuous and difficult works of mourning. It is not just the others
who are lost, but we ourselves as we had been who are lost, and both
losses require to be laid somehow to rest - memorialized.

Mourning and remembrance are the very substance of this stylish story,
with the two hobbit narrators  outside the ranks of those whose
rituals they share in, and yet brought inside them, enabled to
integrate their own loss of self, their own traumatic transformation
from ordinary hobbits of the Shire to the sacrificial deliverers of an
entire world.

Sam's drama is most interesting, and rightly central, I think: the
Sam-Gollum relationship was not only antagonistic, but between it and
the demands of the journey to Mt. Doom, Sam has been brought to see
parts of himself that he did not know existed, parts of himself that
Gollum brought out, and which now have a claim on him in the grieving
process. ["He's still here isn't he?"], Sam asks Mablung, and the whole
story to me turns around what to do with what is still here, and yet
must be in some way left behind.

["Rosemary for remembrance. Isn't that how it goes?"], Frodo says, and
so gives the key to the work undertaken throughout the story, by
various characters as they come to terms with the selves they have left
behind in the crucible of war, the selves they are not yet, and the
many who have been lost.

Title: Truce · Author: meckinock · · ID: 65
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:09:35
Meckinock has a deft hand at characterization, which is definitely
needed when writing Denethor. Very few Denethors get my attention as
having that combination of haughtiness, confidence, envy, and latent
fragility, all wrapped up in a sharp intellect. Meckinock's does, and
shows himself to have not simply intelligence but a genuine, ironic wit
where appropriate.

Denethor's general dislike of Thorongil, his recognition of an eerily
kindred soul in his least favorite captain, is well portrayed, right
down to the moment of weakness when dislike combines with insistent
curiosity to provoke deception. Denethor is out to learn the truth of
the man, who fascinates him as only a puzzle can, whether mechanical or
living. At the same time, it's a disavowed fascination, but one that
breaks through uneasily at times. No doubt this is why Denethor ends up
on the path to discussion of love lives with Thorongilwell, that, and
the fact that for the moment at least, Thorongil is at his mercy and so
in a way, less threatening.

I'm also quite intrigued by Denethor's characterization of Finduilas 
I've seen many different presentations of her, but this one stands out.
It's only a portrait, and given at one remove, but it is revealing and
also tantalizing. Denethor clearly does know himself and also her, and
knows in some sense that it would be a mistake, perhaps, to marry
herbut as with his little white lie to Thorongil, it is a mistake he
will be unable to avoid.

All this, and there are only two chapters. Hurry up and post more of
it, please! I am curious to know who will make it out alive, in what
the conversation about love will issue, and how Denethor is going to
resolve the fiction his curiosity has landed him in.

Title: A Time for Joy · Author: meckinock · · ID: 66
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:09:55
Meckinock tends to have an eye for the mortal perspective, and her
Halbarad has always tended to be the representative who gives it its
full due: no longing for what is impossible, nor bitterness that others
have what human beings do not, namely immortality.

Here, we find that Halbarad is the occasion for another airing of that
view, this time from the perspective of his wife. We begin with the
call, the arrival home of riders in the present day, after the Ring
war, but so quickly enter a flashback that the reader finds herself for
a moment out of joint, and then simply moving with the flow of memory:
another ride home, Eirien's fears, and the threatened, fragile
existence the Dúnedain eke out on their long watch, and which she sums
up in the following exchange:

[Pausing only long enough to pull the shutters closed and get a sword
in my hand, I ran for the door&. Three of them carried Halbarad into
the house, moving in discordant unison like some great, multi-limbed
insect. On their heels followed another group carrying my husbands
father. As I turned to follow them, a hand caught my shoulder. It was
one of the sons of Elrond; in the dark I could not tell which one. "The
time for swords is over," he said, and moved to pry mine from my
clenched fingers. "There will be no pursuit."

I stared at him. "The time for swords is never over," I replied, and
went to help the other women fetch bandages and water. ]

There is no reprieve and no time lived outside of watchfulness, of a
sort of waiting on death, which in this instance claims Eirien's
father-in-law but not her husband, despite his wounds. This
lack-of-reprieve, the fact that their time is a time of swords,
dictates a certain attitude towards life and death, towards joy and
grief. Meckinock paints an adept and sensitive picture of these poles
of human lifecompassion in mourning, and the refusal to denigrate it,
or to repress it, even though life goes on, and in the aftermath of
tragedy, there is always much to do. As Eirien puts it, as she sits and
watches over her wounded husband:

[Once we were alone his smile faded and he fell into silence for a
while, grieving for his father, and I held him quietly, happy for the
warmth of his body, the sound of his breathing. I badly wanted to tell
him of the baby, to bring joy into this joyless day, but I held my
tongue. Both Halbarads grief as a son and his joy as a father required
their full due, and should not be mingled in memory lest neither be
clearly recalled.]

One way of approaching this story is to take it up as a sort of
meditation on the Biblical phrase, [To everything there is a season],
including grief and joy. Paradoxically, though there is a season for
all things, Eirien herself, in order to respect the space of death and
life, grief and joy, in others, puts herself out of step with the
proper time. We get perhaps a hint of this in the blurring of times in
the opening of the story, and in the lines quoted above: she takes up
the sword when the moment for swords is past; she holds in joy for the
sake of grief that should be felt in full; and in the end, when her
turn comes to be the widow, she is out of step with the joy of others.

[Truly my grief must be an unwelcome guest at this gathering of joy.
Even Brandol looks guilty, and with bitterness I see that he is as
exuberant as the rest. Of course he is. For him, Halbarad has been dead
for two months or more. The grief of the Grey Company has been steadily
fading, while the promise of this joyous reunion has sustained them
through the journey home and trials so bitter I can scarce imagine
them. They will miss Halbarad, honor him, drink a toast to his courage
and get on with the business of living. It is the way of life.]

And so, as she has ever done, she puts herself out of step with her own
season of grief:

[I resolve for the sake of my husbands love of this people that as I
once held back my joy to give grief its due, so now I will do the same
for joy. ]

But she does it, strangely enough, in an effort to respect a disruption
of the proper order of things. For the king has been crowned, and so
she declares that ["The time for swords is over."]

In the end, it is perhaps Eirien's place to show us that despite there
being a time for all things, it is a human, mortal truth that we are
always out of step with this cosmic or 'proper' time, too early or too
late in our joys and our griefs, that we are in some way condemned to
be untimely creatures. But this untimeliness, which imposes its own
trials, is what makes Eirien a humane character, someone who suffers
and endures and who knows how to take a wound without bitterness, and
so faithful to the essence of a mortal life.

Title: Come Back to Me · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance · ID: 67
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:10:11
All right, mea culpa  yeah, I put her up to this by requesting
tree-sex with water spirits. It was a moment of desperation. And Marta
answered the call.

I had never thought about exactly how this sort of scenario might work
(that's the beauty of crack!fic nuzgul: *you* don't have to think about
how they might work; that's some other poor sucker's job); and in point
of fact, I try not to. Marta, however, plunged right in and found a way
of writing this story so that not only did the water-spirit/talking
tree dynamics seem plausible and sexy, she made it convincingly work as
a lesbian encounter. This despite the marriage-like arrangements both
Goldberry and Fimbrethil are currently in, despite certain problems and
uncertainties.

In fact, it's because of that uncertainty on Fimbrethil's part that
this relationship becomes possible. That by itself is not necessarily
enough, however, since I've seen any number of slash stories that make
space for the possible without yet taking care of the charge of
"arbitrariness." Why should this *have* to happen, now, and between
these two? What is it that is driving them and that makes this a good
story? It's a sort of branching out (no pun intended) by Fimbrethil,
her efforts to make sense of her situation at the moment, and the need
for companionship that a water-spirit, not truly bound by her form or
her gender, can provide.

Goldberry's own description of her relationship to Bombadil plays on
themes Tolkien wrote for them, but turns them to purposes that do not
as easily find a place in Tolkien's story:

["And what would my love mean," Goldberry asked, "if it came out of
fear or mastery and not from free will? For us children of the West,
love is not such a simple thing as it is for you. Tom and I are
partners, certainly. He brings me lilies and I remind him of all in the
world that is worth saving. But does he love me? My kind does not love
each other as yours do; that is for ents and elves and everything else
made from the bones of Arda. I certainly do not feel bound to him."]

Originally bodiless, there is a sort of boundlessness and bondlessness
to the love of a minor spirit  and this perhaps is precisely what
attracts Goldberry to Fimbrethil, along with, perhaps, the opportunity
to find another thing in the world worth saving.

So give this one a try  it's an unusual look into an obscure chapter
of Middle-earth's history.

Title: Divine Intervention · Author: Meril · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 68
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:10:30
I had not seen the original poem until this year's Back to Middle-earth
Month, letter "V". I was delighted, and even more so when Meril added a
new verse from Yavanna's point of view.

Meril takes these two Middle-earth semi-divinities and gives them
wonderful, deificially catty personalities -- a sibling rivalry worthy
of and able to last the ages& in free verse poetry, no less. Varda's
poem has the ethereal precision that matches her position as the firer
of stars and cosmic observer: she plays the long game, notices disorder
in one time and place and redeems it in another time and place. Her art
is perfection, and there's a satisfying coolness to this poem  like
cut glass.

For Yavanna's poem, however, Meril takes the divine and the earthy and
combines them to yield a luscious, insouciant, mercurial mood, all
overlaid with the sleepiness of an ancient forest. Where Varda's verse
is cool, Yavanna's is all summertime warmth. Her divine sister is shone
in a less favorable light, and the mortal that commonly interests them
is subjected not to the even balances of inscrutable divinity, but to
the caprice of an irate, playfully vengeful spirit, whose love changes
with the seasons. Yavanna is the wildness that ancient societies used
to fear in elemental goddesses, and Meril captures this perfectly,
leading us to wonder: just what would happen in Middle-earth if Yavanna
were awake more often?

Title: The Sword of Elendil · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Drama: Incomplete · ID: 69
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:10:46
I got hooked on this story by the promise of a sustained telling of the
story of Aragorn's return to the Dúnedain, after his long stay under
the faery hill, as it were. It's been a lot of fun to watch it unfold 
Aragorn has that mixture of confidence, but also of doubt, and of
displacement as he returns 'home' to a place he has never known. It is
a coming of age story that is slowly unfolding towards the man Aragorn
must become.

Naturally, therefore, throughout the story, the shadow of Aragorn's
father lies heavily upon him: Arathorn is the ghost standing at his
shoulder, like an ethereal yardstick against whom he is measured by men
who had served his father, and who have had to struggle to keep the
Dúnedain alive in the absence of the Heir. That Aragorn and his mother
have been completely inaccessible to even Gilraen's family does not
help, for it has bred wariness and bitterness against Elrond among the
Dúnedain. When all one has of one's real father is a name and a
standard, whereas one's adoptive father has all the substance of
reality and much to do with the man one is, this sort of conflict is
both painful and difficult to handle.

At the same time, Aragorn is struggling to come to terms with his
tempestuous relationship with Arwen, trying to balance between the love
he desperately hopes may await him in the future and the past that
propels him onward, whatever he might desire. Halbarad's companionship
through it all is both welcome to readers who love the idea of
exploring that relationship further, and provides a unique viewpoint on
Aragorn, since all the other characters with whom Aragorn interacts are
either much older or else much younger than he is. Halbarad is a peer,
and their different lives provide another sense of the difference
between Rivendell and the Angle.

So, Ranger fans  give this story a read through, I think you'll enjoy
it.

Title: The Dryad · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: General Drabble · ID: 71
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:11:01
Drabbles are so very touch and go  one wrong word, and it can throw
the whole thing off for me.

This drabble tackles a single suggestive line in Tolkien's work, and
transforms it into a story of the essence of Ithilien. I love the
opening, with its three quick words that seem to make "Ithilien" just
another word * for * abundance and beauty.

The dryad who emerges as Ithilien's last defender, growing more shrubby
and earthy with the passing years, bringing color and new greenery to
the land, is a wonderful character. She is as stubborn as a weed in
refusing to give up the fight for her home, and although I just said
she seems to grow shrubbier with the years, she also paradoxically
seems to lose a bit of her substance as she goes about, slinking from
root to root. It's a long, hard fight, and she gives in the manner that
I imagine plants do  unstintingly, and perhaps not without cost, dryad
though she is. Her affinity for our favorite Ithlien Ranger is
unsurprising  she recognizes a kindred soul in him, someone to
protect, in order that he, too, could protect her home.

A lovely, imaginative piece, Imhiriel!

Title: Seen in the Halls of Dwarrowdelf · Author: Aruthir · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 73
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:11:19
I read this story on the strength of another reviewer's well-chosen
quotations, and felt I had been well-rewarded for following the link.
Desire and darkness come together here, and transmute into a kind of
obsession that leads to the death of an entire civilization.

Aruthir's look into the heart of the Dwarven soul, in its desire to
know, to master, and to create is effective, but I especially like the
point of view. The poem is a sort of warning from beyond the crypt, the
ghosts of Dwarven miners chanting their litany of foolishness,
self-reproach, in a sort of sign-post to travelers, as the poem itself
says: beware!

Sometimes, writers attempt this perspective and it just comes off flat,
as if we can see a little too well the pretense; this effort I think
works. Perhaps it is in part because it's a little too tempting to
apply the lesson to contemporary situations; perhaps it is the poetic
stylization, which I quite like. Whatever it is, it works very well to
keep this feeling genuinely eerie. Give it a try!

Title: A Boy and His Lob · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor · ID:
162
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-15 19:11:42
"Charlotte's Web" is one of my childhood favorites  it's almost an
inherited taste. My mother used to read it to the first-grade students
she taught thirty years ago, and would get all teary-eyed and weepy
about poor, self-sacrificing Charlotte.

Imagine my surprise to find this story, which is sort of like
"Charlotte's Web," except crazier and with more sexual innuendo (or,
you know, *any* sexual innuendo). I know someone out there in fandom
has written a story about Legolas taming one of the spiders of
Mirkwood, but this takes it one step further: Legolas acquires his very
own arachnid pet, on which he lavishes affection, though of course he
doesn't tell anyone about the spider. In Mirkwood, having a pet spider
is probably like owning a pet skunk that hasn't been de-skunked 
likely to get you run out of town and the pet taken away to a Tragic
Fate.

Anyhow, Legolas discovers that his pet is smarter than it looks, and is
able to make webs that have words in them  words it has heard Legolas
say, no matter how inflammatory or revealing. I'm sure readers can
imagine the comic potential this sort of pet brings with it&

In any case, IgnobleBard's sense of humor shines through in all its
irreverent glory  this story is maybe not for the kids, but for
everyone else who's ever loved "Charlotte's Web" and laughed 'til it
hurt over a parody of a favorite book, you might give this one a try.

Title: Regrets and Consolations · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama:
Youth · ID: 430
Reviewer: HonNVin · 2007-06-15 19:20:28
Oops! I'd left the review in the other section... uhh...
Well, I'll say here what I said there... this story is just full of
vibrant, colorful visuals, as is always with Mews' work. She paints us
a perfect picture of a mother's thoughts and emotions. It's written
with finesse and clarity, ending on a sweet note. Love it, I do. :)

Title: Mettarë · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men · ID: 34
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-06-16 09:01:07
By the blood of our people are your lands kept safe,  Boromir cries
out, in anger and frustration, in the film version of The Fellowship
of the Ring. Many authors have focused upon his jealousy and suspicion
of Aragorn, but Galadriel instead has chosen to examine Boromir's
carefully veiled despair for his people, and how Aragorn is able to
provide him an unexpected measure of comfort and reassurance.

It is Mettarë, the midwinter holiday, and the hobbits are trying to
recreate in Rivendell at least a semblance of what they would be
experiencing at home. Boromir watches wryly, torn between condescension
and envy, comparing his own recent experiences in winter campaigns to
the unconcerned celebrations common in less troubled lands. He expects
Aragorn to commiserate with him, as a fellow warrior, and is startled
and somewhat insulted when Aragorn instead joins the halflings to sing
an ancient Mettarë hymn. (The imagery that this always brings to me is
that of the Psalmist: How can we sing the Lord's song in a foreign
land? When will the anthems of Numenor be sung again in Gondor?) Even
though the words of the song are strange to Boromir, the ages-old
message of death and rebirth and hope are clear.

The story ends with Boromir begging Aragorn to sing the song again, a
powerful depiction of the beginning of his empathy for his companions,
and his growing acceptance of Aragorn's lineage and leadership.

Title: Burning Son · Author: Aruthir · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA · ID: 436
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-16 15:44:24
This set of inter-connected vignettes falls into two halves for me. The
first is a portrait of Wulf, in his relationship to his father and the
destiny he believes is his. It provides a certain framing for what I
think is the second part, but also in many ways the heart of the story:
namely, the story of how wars end, and the relationship that the end of
war has with those who began it.

Wulf is a classic megalomaniac, with an eye that is sharp where the
weakness of his father is concerned, but blind where he himself is
concerned (a trait he seems to share with his father, though he does
not recognize this). Freca, the drastically overmatched challenger of
Helm, was a fool in the eyes of his son, but a fool who made one worthy
gesture: he dared to try to give more to his son than he himself had.
Wulf therefore treats the invasion of Edoras as a moment vengeful
justice -- the accomplishment of his father's dream at the hands of the
more worthy son.

When the tables finally turn, and the Rohirrim return to drive Wulf and
his people from the city, Wulf is paralyzed by failed dreams. He has
failed to mold the wills of his people into a conquering force that
would bring all Rohan into his grasp; he has failed to rule
effectively. He claims that all common concerns - such as cold and fear
- are beneath him, and he exacts the ultimate price from those about
him who, as it were, feel these things on his behalf. His is the end of
a MacBeth, if we follow Levinas's reading: Wulf's greatest pain is that
the world does not end when he does - that his own callous defiance
(his madness, as others, even his own people call it) of the world is
not in the end the sustainer of the world, so that destroying him does
not bring down darkness.

We see this point driven home, among others, in the second part, where
we discover how the war ended. Helm's daughter and her warriors come
upon Wulf's wounded young cousin, Reth, alone. The lad does try to defy
them, but Feanwen convinces him to put down his sword, with the fateful
words: ["In another world, we could have been friends. In another
world, I could have been your Queen. Put down your sword."]

And the boy at last does. But when he does, and Feanwen approaches, he
discovers that he, too, has a blind spot, just as his cousin did. But
where his cousin's blindness concerned his own invulnerability and
greatness, Reth's blindness is the blindness that marks a man still
human - he trusts that the enemy, too, can weary of war, can act
sincerely towards another, and so discovers the kernel of truth falsely
presented in Feanwen's words. War ends with the extermination of all
those who could raise it again - the cousin of Wulf, one imagines,
could not be allowed to live, for he might become a symbol, and a spur
to action - if not of his own will, of the will of others who dream as
Wulf does and wish, through the chance position that others have
occupied, to advance their own vainglorious wishes.

The world doesn't end with Wulf, but he would have been most affronted
to learn that not even the war ended with him - that it ended with a
cousin he would have deemed too weak to be allowed to live (and who,
alas, was slain by taking advantage of that 'weakness'). This, Aruthir
intimates, is the price for the innocence of the children of Rohan, who
listen to the loremaster's tales of this time without understanding
their significance.

And sadly, while the war may have ended, wars continued - we know that
in the Third Age, the Dunlendings will rise again to continue the cycle
of hatred. So Wulf's cousin, in a sense, dies in vain - and Feanwen's
honor, too, is wrecked for no reason. Who knows what might have
happened had trust won the day in that one moment? Might history have
been different? Who knows?

Title: The Essence of Fire · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 278
Reviewer: TrekQueen · 2007-06-16 17:14:40
I get shivers each time I read over this drabble! The inner monologue
is so true to the "fire within" from intense Curufin. I love how you
describe it as an element that is a part of every fiber of his being
and experiences. Ambition, love, anger, revenge... so many themes here
all down to the one moment he sees the flames of the ships. Intense!

Title: Property Rights · Author: Salsify · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID:
74
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-16 18:55:01
Salsify's Dwarves are always a wonderful read: she captures their sense
of place and displacement, their sense of the importance of belonging
and of belongings.

Here, we have the confrontation between Thorin and Bard at Erebor
redone, so as to examine what might have been driving each one. Old
history, barely a note in the Appendices, is brought to bear in the
form of ancestral tales passed down among Men and Dwarves, but passed
down differently.

Bard, frantic to protect his people from weather and starvation after
the destruction the dragon had wrought, can think only of the way the
Dwarves approached Fram: demanding goods, taking, apparently, no heed
of the fact that Fram had risked his life to rid them of the dragon,
and surely deserved recompense. Instead, Fram was slain by the Dwarves,
who were outraged with what he was willing to give them. Thus he comes
to the negotiation wary already, needing recognition first from the
Dwarves that he has a claim on their treasure as the dragon-slayer, and
also as the newly-made king of the destitute people of Esgaroth.

Thorin, however, remembers the story of Fram and the Dwarves
differently: coming out of the tradition of craftsmen, who had poured
their labor into the creation of the treasures of Erebor, the problem
is not the greed of Dwarves but the glory-besotted, might-makes-right
attitude of Men, who are blind to the sort of careful work of the
craftsmen and the way that such work connects it to its maker. It is
the craftsman who owns the goods, and the family when he dies, owns the
memory of what he was in the goods that are passed down. These are not
merely things that are useful or decorative; they are a record of
generations of labor and skill and identity.

Thus the meeting is at an impasse before ever the first words are
spoken  not out of ill-will or any particular malice, arrogance, or
greed, but out of caution, out of different ways of understanding the
connection of persons and things that never are given an explicit
voice.

It's a wonderful look at cross-cultural misunderstanding, which
requires a solid portrayal of each side of the dispute, and Salsify
delivers. Recommended for any fan of "The Hobbit," of Dwarves, or of
Bardings and little-explored corners of Middle-earth.

Title: The Turn of the Tide · Author: Altariel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 72
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-16 21:15:23
Once upon a time in Tolkien fandom, there was a real 'thing' in the
Alternate Universe category, for substituting Faramir for Boromir on
the quest. Obviously, the real killer would be the Parth Galen scene 
if Faramir is immune to temptation, then just what would happen there?
How would the quest go forward? How would he and Frodo get along? He
and Aragorn? Would Denethor go out in a despairing blaze if Boromir
were in 'safe' in Gondor? All these questions were certainly waiting to
be explored, and quite frankly, once I encountered Altariel's work, I
expected she would eventually succumb and write her own version.

Well, it's been several years since that initial reading of "Fire
Sermon," but finally, here we have it! Faramir goes to Imladris in
Boromir's stead!

Except, you almost miss it in the opening paragraphs  it isn't until a
little later that you realize that 'the Steward's son' isn't Faramir,
but Boromir, and then we see the unique focus Altariel brings to this
AU scenario: the relationship that is set up between Eowyn and
Denethor.

At this point, obviously Eowyn is at a low point herself: she has slain
the Witch-king, but that has not made her feel any less the prisoner.
She is, in many ways, Denethor's match  two people badly scarred by
their encounter with the Enemy's malice. And so there is the danger of
a new mauling, on one side or the other, for badly wounded people are
not always safe to be around.

I love the way Altariel aligns youth and anger, and the confused
uncertain defiance of fate over against the hardness and bitterness of
age that knows too much. I also love the way that Eowyn's swift meeting
and loving of Aragorn is effectively redirected: a chance encounter
with Faramir on his ride north to Imladris is all it takes to impel her
towards Gondor, when there seems to her to be no hope beyond simply
seeing the land for which Faramir may well have given all.

The relationship with Boromir in the first part of the story, as we
learn how Eowyn met and loved Faramir, and how she came to Gondor, is
beautiful in its spareness  a virtue Eowyn gives to Boromir, which
strikes me as fitting in its way. It raises so many questions that must
be left unanswered, suggests so much that will not be fleshed out in
this vignette, and so leaves one with the sense of loss and worry for
Boromir, who seems also to have been hurt along the way, though free of
the Ring's spell, he lacks the drivenness of bookverse!Boromir. Anyone
who has wondered what Boromir might have been like had he not gone on
that quest should definitely read this story!

Actually, anyone who loves the Steward's family of Gondor should read
this, or who finds Eowyn an interesting character. It's a lovely AU,
done in very few words, none of them wasted. Beautiful work, Altariel!

Title: Reflections of the Past · Author: shirebound · Genres: Alternate
Universe: The Shire or Buckland · ID: 359
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-17 21:42:41
The story takes place in the author's "Quarantined" universe, and
introduces a new character: a puppy named Scamp, who becomes as fully
rounded and known as the other characters in the story. There is
humour, tenderness, even a bit of adventure with the discovery of a
treasure in Bag End that has nothing to do with Smaug's treasure. The
find is amazing, and believable, in the author's capable hands, and
leaves the reader wishing to be able to descend the stairs to Bag End's
deepest cellar, and view the ancient and precious beauty which resides
there. A gentle pleasure of a read.

Title: Wings · Author: ErinRua · Genres: Romance: With Rohirrim · ID: 9
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-06-17 22:07:08
This was a really nice story. It's nice to see Eomer out of his
element, but he seems to adapt well. Nice start to a long friendship
between him and Imrahil.

Title: Alone and Forsaken · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Drama: Vignette
· ID: 466
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-18 13:50:50
'Brilliant!"

I could have cried at the paragraph about Aragorn and the City...
omg... wonderful writing... Indeed, it felt as if Aragorn WAS
belittling all Gondorians... because Boromir was unaware of the
Rangers' part in the battle should have been used to help him see, not
to berate him!
And the ending was perfect.... Though It is sad to know how the whole
thing ends! Though I almost choked on the last line - so incredibly sad
- he needed every ounce of strength to help him battle the Ring!
Again BRAVO - briliant!

Title: A Message And A Bottle · Author: Larner · · ID: 467
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-18 14:21:50
Excellent - I had such fun reading that I noticed nothing but the story
- which is the best way to read. I stink as a reviewer of details... I
had to read through tears at the part in the tavern... and when Frodo
found the bottle. And the tension you created as the returned bottle
was opened by Sam - intense and wonderful. Milky tea - I loved it! The
burned vineyard - yes - a good vine can live through anything - as I
found out just this past week while visiting a vineyard in New Zealand!
Wonderful tale!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Longing · Author: Larner · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 468
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-18 14:31:15
An excellent tale - gripped me from the moment I started reading.. I
loved your thoughts on lembas, leaving loved ones, and all kinds of
such... I just re-read it before sending it off for nomination and,
again, found myself in tears as I read your description of Pippin's
longing. It spoke of so much - the feelings were raw - Brilliantly
written part... Thanks for sharing this.

Title: South · Author: Aliana · · ID: 469
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-18 14:45:59
This was beautiful - hauntingly peaceful, yet poignant. It all means
very much to me. Beautiful.

Title: Marking Fours · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 1
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-18 20:37:53
The connecting theme of four and father-son relationships works well in
these (appropriately) four drabbles. Faramir comes full circle,
achieving in the final drabble, in the presence of his own son, what he
could not in the first of the four: grief for his father. In between
there is forgetfulness and an almost-defiant indifference towards
Denethor: as Faramir discovers he loves Eowyn, he forgets himself; and
as he begins to make the first steps towards a new life with her, he
puts his old one aside, and Denethor and all of the concerns he can
imagine his father might have about this new life, are among those
things set aside. But grief eventually does have its day, as Faramir
begins a new chapter in his new life that recalls the old one in ways
that cannot be ignored or set to one side  it is in Elboron that he is
reminded that he himself was once someone's son, and is finally able to
grieve for his father. Nicely done, Raksha! Faramir and Denethor fans
should like these.

Title: Blooded · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 3
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-18 20:38:22
Faramir's first experience of warfare is one I have seen done before,
but a well-written 'first blood' story is always a welcome addition to
the fanfic corpus (no pun intended). Faramir here is contrasted with
Boromir, and there is an interesting element of deceit implied here,
when Faramir silently and accusingly thinks that Boromir should have
told him what it would really be like to kill another person. He feels
the mismatch of pride and horror  his pride attaches to his own
survival, but he can only feel numbed and horrified by the slaughter of
his enemies. I love in particular Faramir's horrified memory of his
enemy's death, of ["the quivering end of him."] I found that an apt
turn of phrase. And the fear that finally haunts Faramir seems
appropriate, the sort of thing that might well haunt someone newly come
to war in the lull after the first battle, as well as suited to Faramir
in particular.

Title: Beneath a Gibbous Moon · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 4
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-19 05:47:05
These conversational vignettes link together nicely over generations,
as Man and Elf ponder similar questions of hope and acceptance of fate,
of faith and necessity. The first one, between Elros and Oropher is in
many ways the most interesting to me: Elros's sense of his place in the
world, and of the relationship between all bodily beings and the Valar
is dead on the money, I think, and it is interesting that youth and
mortality should teach something to elven age and immortality. Yet I
think it is exactly the sort of lesson that a mortal creature can,
potentially, understand far better than one for whom death is an
unnatural fate.

By the time we reach Legolas, the general flow of advice goes in the
other direction, from Legolas to Aragorn, although the there is a
common sense of trying to come to terms with what may come, with the
chances of fate and possibly of divine intervention.

The middle episode marks an interesting interlude in that it seems to
me at least that both Man and Elf share a common self-confidence, in
many ways, or a trust in the wisdom and abilities of one's * own *
species or abilities that marks both Isildur and Thranduil, and which
sets that set of interactions apart from the other two, where, despite
the fact that lessons are learned, there is a greater sense of the
universality of the struggle and frustration with fate.

An interesting set of vignettes, all told.

Title: The Waves' Song · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 6
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-19 05:55:02
Elegantly crafted, as is usual with Branwyn's fics and ficlets, this
drabble gives a grey, lonely image of Arwen at the end of her life.
There's a sense of a return to the elemental, a disintegration as Arwen
stands in the face of a storm beneath Lorien's boughs, with her hair
streaming out behind her. I love the opening line: ["Winter swept from
the north on grey gull wings."] For some reason, authors can basically
buy me for a line or two with seagulls in it  I don't know why. But
this was lovely, as is the notion that in the winter winds that make
the trees sway, there's a hint of the sound of the sea that suggests
that Arwen shall soon, as it were, 'go home.'

Msg# 8187

Re: Reviews Now Available Posted by Marta Layton October 01, 2007 - 23:19:11 Topic ID# 8180
PGF wrote:
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Hi Raksha,

I'm not sure what happened. I've been able to access the MEFA site when
I've needed to all this afternoon and evening. Are you still having
problems?

Marta

Msg# 8188

Re: Reviews Now Available Posted by Marta Layton October 01, 2007 - 23:34:38 Topic ID# 8180
Hi Barbara,

You're most welcome. I'm glad you enjoy the reviews. It's far from a
single effort, as many volunteers and reviews work hard on all of this.
*cheers for all the MEFA peoples*

Marta

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Msg# 8189

MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by ann October 02, 2007 - 6:48:01 Topic ID# 8189
Title: South · Author: Aliana · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 8
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-18 14:45:59
This was beautiful - hauntingly peaceful, yet poignant. It all means very much to me. Beautiful.

Title: A Life Between - No Secrets · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General Drabble · ID: 446
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-19 16:50:15
I had a difficult time trying to get to this - I'm not familiar with LJ - but this was well worth the difficulties. Sensuous, to say the least, and in so few words. Very well done. I especially liked the ending. Something that is known - something that is dreaded. Very, very nice!

Title: Sweet Memories · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits · ID: 272
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-19 17:01:35
I had to laugh because I usually don't like flowery descriptions, but I loved how you immediately sequed into Frodo's total disinterest in it. I love the simplicity of the moments that you bring to mind; they are delightfully told. I love the short, quiet telling of the tragedy, and Frodo's gently leaving the river behind.

I was a little disconcerted with the ending. It seemed too 'pat' for me - but loved the idea of the 'bond' between the two - not that I'm a great thinker or such - but it never dawned on me that the two of them were orphaned right around the same age. I think I would have enjoyed a little more of their friendship. Perhaps there is a sequel?

Title: Fruition · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 7
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-19 17:02:26
EdorasLass seems to be making a tradition of AUs that raise the hair on the back of a reader's neck – first [Love Me and Despair], and now this story, which shows a far more ruthless crew of Dol Amroth nobility than anyone would have imagined. Imrahil is perhaps the hardest to believe, given that we actually see him, hear him speak, and glean something of his character in Tolkien's work. Imrahil's characterization is the one point I'm not truly able to swallow – I'd believe this far more easily if Imrahil, too, were the unwitting victim of manipulation by sister and father.

That said, it's an almost perfect power play – and it leaves one wondering indeed how the battle for Minas Tirith and for Gondor would have turned out some half a century later. How would the thorny issue of succession play out when Aragorn knows he has enemies in Gondor who would literally kill for power? Even before then, however, would Boromir even come north? Would Boromir be alive at all? Who knows? And if anyone from Gondor did appear in Imladris, no doubt Aragorn would be on his guard from day one, even assuming that person – Imrahil's heir? Boromir? Faramir? – were ever chosen to accompany Frodo.

This is a story that raises far more questions than it answers, for all it is a very short story. Read it if you like political thrillers or are feeling the need for something dark and disturbing.

Title: Divided · Author: Pen52 · Genres: Drama: The Fellowship · ID: 223
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-19 17:09:42
Wow! This was good. The level of tension surprised me. I liked Boromir's anger and frustration. I liked Pip's questions, though it took me a bit to get used to your style, and I liked Aragorn's character. I think you did very well here. But, as I said, I especially liked the tension. It still has me tingling in a slight fear.

Title: The Gates · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-19 17:16:09
Every so often, Gimli hijacks Isabeau's creative side, and it's always to good effect: from ["Repairs"] to ["The Old Dwarf and the Sea"], Gimli consistently shows up as a well-written, strong personality who gives a unique look at the lives of Elves and others. In this story, Gimli once again demonstrates that he has more sides than many give him credit for, and this time, there's no Elf in view to draw his attention: this time, we see Gimli working among his own people to make good on the promise he had made to Aragorn, namely, the rebuilding of the gates of Minas Tirith.

Gimli knows himself to be no master craftsman, but he does want a part in the crafting of the gates, and he even extracts -- very humbly, very politely, for this is a Dwarf whose courteous tongue even Galadriel has praised as enabling him to ask the most audacious favors -- a promise from the dwarven mastersmith, Snorri, that he will have some small part in their making. Snorri swears that Gimli's name will be placed on the gates among those of the other smiths who will be involved in the making of the gates. This is enough for Gimli, who settles into negotiating all the necessary matters for the upkeep of the smiths, content with the idea that at some point, he will be asked to help craft the gates.

Two years later, the gates are finally complete, after a lengthy creative process, involving much negotition, research, customs inspection and arguing with penny-pinching and occasionally penny-thieving merchants, community public relations and reparrations, and the occasional bailing out of Dwarves from city cooling pens for rowdy, drunken artisans. Gimli has managed to shuffle everything and everyone along, and keep all the balls in the air, but he hasn't been able to lay finger to hammer or any other crafter's tool, which grieves him.

Snorri, however, is unmoved, and he has kept the literal terms of his promise -- Gimli's name is on the gates, and a wise old dwarven craftsman bids Gimli look again at the role he has played that none of the craftsmen could have. It's a good old 'know thyself' moment for Gimli and satisfying to see him come into his own beyond the two skills he admits he has -- killing orcs and prospecting.

Definite must-read for Gimli fans!

Title: Forcing a Path · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Drama: The Fellowship · ID: 400
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-19 17:22:25
Delightful tale - this was so well-written that I honestly believed the incident was from the book. Imagine my surprise when I realized it was not - but part of the author's imagination. This was my first 'taste' of 'fanon' - for that is what it is to me now. This incident is forever part of Tolkien's Fellowship of the Ring.

I loved the descriptions you used, the characters were spot on, and the level of tension great during the avalance itself. The dialogue was fun too - love to see these two working together.

Excellent tale.

Title: A Million Little Stars To Light Their Way · Author: Cathleen · Genres: Drama: The Shire · ID: 387
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-19 17:40:18
I'm writing as I'm reading - pay no attention! This is great so far. I love the fact that you have Pip & Merry still suffering from the effects of their journey. I cannot imagine that they were unscathed. I love that you have the Hobbits remembering Boromir with grief... I like the flashbacks, you write them well... they are easy to see what is the present and what is the past... I always thought one of the hardest things for the Hobbits would be the lack of a fire and nice warm food - you bring this out nicely.I almost cried at Pippin's anguish - he asked the same question I have too often asked - why did Boromir have to die - and then, I got chills as I read of their discovery of 'Boromir's constellation!!! Great idea. Excellent ending! *sighs*

Title: "A Cat Of A Different Color" · Author: Cathleen · Genres: Mystery · ID: 385
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-19 17:57:50
I love the ease with which you write your descriptions and your dialogue. I love how Boromir prepared to tell his story, his easy laughter, the Hobbits teasing, Aragorn's wonder. And I liked Sam feeling so at ease that he could pop in with his own little thoughts. I loved the diagram and the fact that the cat, I should have thought of it, could not speak! And I loved Boromir's tale, much better than the one about Queen Beruthial!

Title: South · Author: Aliana · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 8
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-19 18:07:30
Aliana has a way of finding just the right words, and of drawing them all together into a sort of collage made of memories and (often enough) music: songs and tunes are recurring motifs, as if they are the stuff that hold memories together. Perhaps they are, in a way. Songs and silences – moments of memory that hold characters and a story together.

In ["South"], Merry's dreams of horses lead him from a full life in which nothing apparently is lacking back to Gondor, to a visit with Eowyn in Ithilien. All along the road, Merry finds himself seeking after some sign of old memories, something to make them perhaps real once more, though he always pulls back, always stops his questing with the realization that one cannot love the present journey for the way it evokes a past one. It's the hobbit, or rather, the Brandybuck in him that saves him: ["you must love the road for the road."] And one's wife for being who she is, as Merry wisely does.

Once in Ithilien, he stays with Eowyn, whose husband is negotiating with Harad, hoping to avoid a new war to the south. He finds that seeing the horses of his dreams does not answer to whatever it was that drew him out to Ithilien. This is, in many ways, I think, the key to the whole story: what place does the dream of horses have in this? I really love Aliana's portrayal of the dream: the easy way out is to make the dream's content have a direct meaning, a one-to-one correspondence with whatever it is that troubles Merry.

But dreams don't work that way: they are indirect; it's the dreamwork that is important, that translates whatever unconscious desire or anxiety vexes Merry into these images of horses. And so we find it isn't really about the horses, or even about Eowyn * insofar * as she is associated with horses. It's about loss: the fading of horses into the distance in his dreams repeats the fading of memories or the reduction of the fullness of Merry's life to a [strange knotty tune]; it repeats or represents the peculiar shrinking of Merry's world:

["He once thought that leaving the Shire, seeing all the wilds and wonders and terrors of Middle-earth would make his world larger, and it has. But in some ways his world is also smaller, now, shrunk down to the roomful of people with whom he can sit in silence and not feel the need to explain."]

Eowyn is one of those people, one of those to whom he can say ["Frodo's gone," Merry murmurs without really realizing], and who can reply, [from across the table, across mountains and oceans and cities.

"I know," she says. "I know."]

This is the difference between Eowyn and Estella that matters:

[He sits and listens to her breathing beside him, and he realizes that he's come because he needs her. He needs Estella, too, of course, and he loves her, loves her and their son more than anything else. But Éowyn understands a small obscure piece of him, a strange knotty tune playing itself out always at the back of his mind. And so he needs her like he needs Legolas and Gimli and Éomer, like he needs Strider—not that he's really old Strider very much anymore, it seems. Like he needs Faramir and Sam and Pippin. Like he needs Gandalf and Frodo.]

This is why in the end, Merry, like Pippin, cannot remain in the Shire, but must eventually pass south to end their days among those who understand the strange melody that time and war and hardship have introduced into their lives. Merry needs such people in order not to be alone, and perhaps that is what this story is about in the end: the recognition, the proof that Merry is not alone. And so the dreams cease, as that one anxiety, perhaps, finds an answer and so is able to be laid to rest.

Beautiful story-telling, Aliana, in every conceivable way. If you love Tolkien's work, read this story, you won't be disappointed.

Title: Drawing Straight With Crooked Lines · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Drama · ID: 76
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-19 19:03:26
It was brilliant to start out with Boromir's death scene - and wonderfully told too - just that short little bit set the stage for the 'meat' of your tale... and drat! I found it difficult to know that Boromir did not hear and feel Aragorn's final farewell.
Boromir's sense of not caring where he was or what was happening - because he was so burdened by his guilt - gave a beautiful, poignant start to the rest of the tale.
When I first read this on SoA, it was my first introduction to 'your' Namo - I still am in awe of this character - the beauty, peace and just ease of presence of the Vala is comforting. Though I know he can be fearsome!
I loved Boromir's reaction to him - though his body was reacting totally different than his mind.
I loved the sense of pure shame that came out of your writing of Boromir's admission of guilt. And I loved even more that, after the first hesitant admission, Boromir took ownership of it, and declared it more firmly. That is what I would have expected of him.
I loved Boromir's discomfiture when he realized what he already knew - that he stood (sat) before one of the Valar. And which Vala it was!
I love Namo's reasoning - and making Boromir walk that path himself - it explains to the Man of Gondor exactly why he did what he did - and what a great thing it was - though the cost - in the end was horrid. [Fulfilled his destiny] - I do like the sound of that - makes his death a little easier - though still pain-filled.
And I so love the argument for Faramir's cause - and the reason why he could not go - and Boromir's quick defense - as always - of his brother!
I'm glad Boromir finally had a moment to grieve, though it was unnessary, for Gondor and for Minas Tirith.
I love the fact that Namo helped Boromir see the worth that he held in Boromir's eyes! That was a true gift for Boromir.
I absolutely ADORE (well almost) Namo's regard for Boromir and that he lets Boromir see that regard, that love, that acceptance.
I loved the ending - that Boromir decided to stay and wait - and I absolutely loved WHO he was waiting for!
This was such an incredible tale - so totally out of what I would consider mainstream Tolkien fiction - you are truly gifted. As a writer and as a man!
Lastly - I must comment on the title - it is perfect. It tells so much in so little words and gives such hope to all of us. Thank you for the gift of that and for the gift of this tale. I am blessed to have read it. *stops as tears fill her eyes*



Title: Through the Eyes of Another · Author: grey_wonderer · Races: Hobbits: Merry and Pippin · ID: 136
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-20 01:59:45
Although it is difficult to imagine Merry and Pippin as very old hobbits, this story presents them in such a way that they are easy to see as the elders they were when they left the Shire to go and be with Eomer in his last days, and it is even easier to believe they are still the Merry and Pippin we came to know and love in the books and the movies. Their banter is true to the characters, and so are their motives and actions. Pippin is still Merry's "little cousin", and Merry is still the protective older brother to his young cousin. It is heartwarming and touching to read about them in this setting and context, and the author writes them with the warmth and humor that suffuses so much of her fanficiton.

Title: A Life Between II · Author: Elen Kortirion · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 445
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-06-20 03:32:43
Congratulations on an extremely effective use of the true drabble format: to create an entire story in 100 words. Like the foreshadowing and the the sentiment conveyed without resorting to sentimentality.

Title: Turned Earth · Author: Dana · Genres: Alternate Universe: The Shire or Buckland · ID: 26
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-20 20:47:44
At first glance it seems impossible that this story could work. Hobbits and Zombies? The terms are antithetical. And yet, in this author's capable hands, the concept not only works, it is extraordinarily believable. Grounded in the solid soil of the Shire, peopled by the hobbits we know and love, it gives us a truly horrible premise and makes us believe it's happening, because the hobbits are so real, their reactions and their emotions are so real. The events unfold in a carefully paced and rendered chronology, as the characters come face to face with things so terrible they can scarce believe them, and yet they must, in order to survive. It is the love they bear for one another, Merry for Pippin, Rose and Sam for each other, Frodo for all his kin and friends, that gives them the strength to fight and survive. In the end, the story returns to canon, and that too, adds to the believability of the tale.

Title: Golfing Fever · Author: lbilover · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest · ID: 75
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-20 22:21:49
I am not a golf fan. And, it turns out, neither is Frodo Baggins. But Sam is very much a fan, one who has the deepest admiration for an excellently played game. And a hobbit named Mungo Baggins, a cousin of Frodo's, is superb golfer. When Sam displays what Frodo considers an inordinate admiration for Mungo, to the point of wanting to caddy for him in an upcoming Four Farthings Gold Tournament, Frodo becomes alarmed by the thought that his cousin may have insidious designs on his gardener. This brings him to the realization that he himself is in love with Sam, and he must do something to keep Sam from Mungo's clutches. But Frodo needs Sam to caddy for him, and to help him practice his game. The story relates the progress of their practices and Frodo's growing awareness of Sam's attractive and lovable qualities, and an account of the Tournament play and the aftermath. A delightfully entertaining read.

Title: Lost in Translation · Author: sophinisba solis · Races: Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 31
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-21 19:48:26
"Lost in Translation" takes the reader deeply into the mind and heart of Peregrin Took, in the days after the hobbits arrive in Rivendell. Pippin feels left out and alone because no one seems willing to take the time to tell him and Merry about their beloved cousin's condition. Even Merry is acting like someone Pippin doesn't know, and Pippin feels lost and helpless. Only afterr Frodo awakens are Pippin's questions and concerns answered. The scene between Pippin and Frodo is poignant and touching, and reveals a relationship of trust and love that is believable and wonderful to contemplate.

Title: The Archives Incident · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure: Minas Tirith · ID: 38
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-21 20:19:50
An exciting tale that takes place after the quest, when Frodo and Pippin, on their own in the Citadel, decide to explore the Archives. Led by curiosity, they go even deeper, into an old underground section, where they find many ancient scrolls, including one with Isildur's account of the taking of the Ring, and the inscription on the band. Accidentally locked into the ancient place, with creeping dangers surrounding them, the two hobbits must make the best of their situation and keep themselves alive and unharmed until their friends can come to find them. There are humour and cousinly banter, thrills and supsense, and loving h/c in this story, and a very satisfying conclusion.

Title: Mistaken · Author: Fawsley · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 490
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2007-06-22 02:19:34
This drabble so simply, yet so effectively conjures up this scene which we all know, but Fawsley spins it around, turns it on its head and makes it into a small, beautifully polished gem of understated comedy. There is no setting, no 'he said...', but it works so well, because be we book fans or movie fans - we can all visualise the exchange - and smile.

Title: A Moment Lost · Author: Fawsley · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 491
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2007-06-22 02:26:45
The tone of this drabble is just right; that quiet, slightly rueful introspection from someone who perhaps undervalues himself, but actually has all the strength of character that's needed. And it has such a great final line! So economically written, without frills yet so telling in its affirmation of Aragorn's kingship in spite of his personal doubts.

Title: Returning the Favor · Author: cpsings4him · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 340
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-22 20:23:28
This story reveals a Pippin who is quite different from the little Pip who started the quest with his cousins and Sam. More mature and thoughtful, he comes to bring something beautiful to Frodo in Minas Tirith, but, finding him sleeping, he lingers to watch over Frodo and to contemplate the ways in which the quest has also changed Frodo. He recalls happier days, when they were both young, and perhaps he grieves for those days, but his deepest feeling is gratitude that Frodo remains with them. The story is full of love and tendeness and gentle regret for what might have been.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 16
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-23 04:32:10
Oi, this was entirely too funny! We know Tolkien was not fond of diminutive Elves, but neither was he fond, I believe, of Dwarves who had not enough dignity to manage being terrible or frightening, no matter how much they might otherwise appear as irritable and somewhat pompous bumblers at times. Disney Dwarves really should be anathema, and here we have poor Thorin stuck in a roomful of cartoon bumblers, forced to hear them out as they apply for the position of companions on the quest for Erebor.

The idea that Gandalf put Snow White's hapless crew up to this just makes it better, though I suppose Branwyn might have meant that Gandalf was instrumental in getting this quest off the ground, hence anything that goes wrong-ish on the way to Erebor, including ridiculously unqualified companions, is in some way the wizard's fault.

Short, sweet, and funny – this is for anyone to enjoy!

Title: Wings · Author: ErinRua · Genres: Romance: With Rohirrim · ID: 9
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-25 02:28:19
["Wings"] is a sweet vignette, a nice scene between Eomer and his future father-in-law. Eomer's sincerity and wonder are clearly portrayed, as is Imrahil's appreciation of these qualities in his soon-to-be son-in-law. What I loved best, though, were the descriptions of the landscape, and the sense of the continuity of the sea and the plains of Rohan – their mutual airiness and freedom that Eomer finds and adores in his beloved, though it took a journey to Dol Amroth for him to realize what it was about Lothiriel that he responds to.

Title: No Man's Child · Author: Anoriath · Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 198
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-25 02:59:44
Being the shameless Aragorn groupie that I am, a story that proposes to test what happens when Estel fails of hope and marries a woman of the Dúnedain in order to preserve the line of Isildur is of course going to get my attention. It's a theme I've explored in different ways, but I've never aimed to do something 'irreversible,' as it were: I've never tried to think out what would happen if Aragorn deliberately chose not to marry Arwen. Fortunately, I will never have to now, thanks to Anoriath.

The title, ["No Man's Child"], is also its basic premise, which is sort of like "no man born of woman shall slay MacBeth" or "No living man" prophecies: it is not to be taken literally, as we see in the prologue, where we learn why Nienelen is 'no man's child' (anymore). So we know immediately, if the first-person perspective didn't give it away, who will be chosen as Aragorn's bride. Despite this, there was a bit of a red herring thrown in with Halbarad, which worked well in context.

Anoriath brings to this story a detailed account of life in the Angle – the tone and style fit the perspective of someone immersed in a feudal economy. There are dynastic obligations, household obligations that go far beyond the nuclear family I think many of us (me too!) tend to write, tithes to keep track of, fields and grain-yield calculations, the need to pay attention to seasons, husbandry, trade, and of course, politics. Anoriath builds up a rich picture of life in a quasi-Mediaeval, rural setting, and her characters move in it as easily as they breathe. As a city-dweller, I appreciate the ability to bring that setting to life without it seeming labored.

But if the characters move in their setting naturally, this is not the same as saying there is no struggle to cope with the world as it presents itself. Nienelen is thrown into the role of Lady of the Angle, and must fulfil the obligations of caring for the people of the Angle, and find her allies among the women and certain of the men, even as she struggles to deal with a marriage that she knows is not a love-match at all, but a feudal obligation. Worse, she knows full well that there is someone Aragorn loves still, but about whom he will not speak.

The relationship between Aragorn and Nienelen is presented as respectful, good-humored, tinged with sadness, but also extremely formal, which I found striking: Nienelen never calls Aragorn by his name or any endearment. He is her lord, and she thinks of him as such; likewise, I think Aragorn calls her by her name only once or twice throughout, and only in rather late chapters comes up with something like a pet name for her. Otherwise, she is his lady, and he calls her as such. Theirs is a match mediated by ritual, courtesy, and affection, but they both love someone out of reach. Getting children on Nienelen is a chore – one that has its pleasant side, granted, but sex, and especially a sexual expression of affection, is clearly an issue:

["Should I brush my fingers upon the lids of his eyes and down the line of his nose, or press a kiss to the corner of his mouth where lip and cheek meet, what would my lord make of it? Aye, in taking me to bed, I was reminded naught so much as his first act as my husband, when, despite the pain it cost him, he stood between me and the threat of flame. Should he have the power to prevent it, he would ne'er allow pain or fear to threaten me. Could I do no less for him? Should I not burden him with a yearning he had not wished from me?"]

And then there is the devastating reunion episode, where after they end up joking with each other, there is an accidental reference to the Beren-Luthien episode that sobers them both and leads to this line:

["When the task is done, and he stands before me wound in a sheet, his hair dripping onto his shoulders and his skin flushed and warm, my lord leans to me and presses his lips upon my cheek. It is a chaste kiss, rich in affection and dismissal."]

Anoriath doesn't overplay these moments; they unfold quietly and naturally, so one feels like an intruder on an intimate scene, but also feels the break in that intimacy, the way in which this is simply not what either Aragorn or Nienelen hoped for.

Aragorn throughout maintains a robust sense of humor about their situation, and treats Nienelen with all the kindness and respect one could ask, given the way men and women interact in the society Anoriath has built up. He makes her his partner and his friend, and the mother of his children, and even his lieutenant, in a way – she is his eyes and ears and representative in the Angle when he is away on his frequent long journeys. He teases her and tries to make the best of the marriage, including some hysterical, half-serious jokes touching on their own need to have children – he does as Gandalf advises, and tries not to continue looking over his shoulder at the road not taken. This doesn't mean he doesn't have his regrets that fundamentally shape his relationship with his wife.

The story is not yet finished, so are left waiting to see where Anoriath will take us with the next chapter. We're getting closer to the events of LOTR, which, I imagine, may be where the choice for amdir, hope grounded in the world, instead of estel, hope that transcends all grounds the world may or may not furnish for it, may become important.

Dúnedain fanciers should definitely give this one a try!

Title: The Harper · Author: juno_magic · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 10
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-25 03:21:58
Juno Magic has a uniquely dialogical way of telling a story – the interlocutor is present, asks questions, but we hear only one side of the conversation, which is put together by the respondant, who tells us, at stylistically appropriate intervals, what the other person has said. I enjoy the form in its own right, following the speaker over themes and time.

The harper for the royal house of Rohan tells of his (I assume) coming to the world 'down below,' the flatlands beneath the high, lonely mountain village where he was born. It is the coming of an old, blind, tormented bard to the village, after the Ring-war, that sparks a child's curiosity and courage. Of particular interest is the harper himself, rather than the songs he sings. For the blind old bard does not care for the songs themselves, and as the story unfolds, and we see more and more the bitter contempt, entwined with self-loathing, the bard has for the subject matter he sings of, and his reasons for it, one begins to think that there is more to this bard than is apparent. That perhaps he is someone we ought to know, though there is nothing so specific to his account of himself that would tip us off definitively.

But by the time the young prince of Rohan decides he knows who the bard was, the reader has probably come to a similar conclusion. It's very well done, and the mystery remains. Well done, Juno! Another lovely side-view on Middle-earth.

Title: The Spear of the Lily · Author: The Bookbinder's Daughter · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 11
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-25 04:10:38
Evocative and poetically descriptive – there is an appropriate tenderness in the careful description of a husband deeply in love with his wife, and eager to know her every look. The Bookbinder's Daughter shows us Eowyn come into her own, as it were – the lily in bloom, rather than dying of frost, as she puts it.




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Msg# 8190

MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by ann October 02, 2007 - 6:49:10 Topic ID# 8190
Title: Hossis · Author: Fawsley · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 520
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2007-06-25 15:44:43
This begins almost anonymously and as such is a delightfully constructed mystery that seems to be completely AU, before it twists and resolves itself into a heart-achingly poignant piece of canon literature. The characterization is fresh and delicately delineated, so that we can all read and look and say – yes, it could have been that way. I do not want to give the game away to anyone about to read the story, but I do urge you to read it with a completely open mind, all the more that your breath will hitch as you read the final lines. It is an exquisite piece of misdirection that never makes the reader feel fobbed off with irrelevances designed to make you misconstrue the events – simply, the writing is focussed and spare, and in its simplicity carries more weight than many much lengthier tomes.

Title: He Came To Meet Me · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Romance · ID: 33
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-26 18:47:33
This is told from the pov of Diamond of Long Cleeve, and it gives a powerful portrait of a hobbit lass who is strong and independent, one who knows her own mind, and is believable and lovable. It tells of how Diamond and Pippin fall in love, and have their first kiss, and is surrounded by Diamond's memories of the year that the Travelers were away, and the Shire was occupied. Elegant prose and a tender, emotional love story

Title: Mettarë · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men · ID: 34
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-27 03:23:42
I loved this story. The poignancy of Boromir's predicament... the horror of it all... really comes through very well. I found his opinion that Orc attacks and ambushes cause the day not to be one of joy as incredibly telling and sad. The terms you use, like [grief nursed like a living thing] hurt so much! Accurately describe what I would think would be the feelings that rend this great man's soul. And the constant reference to blood in places where it shouldn't be... [unvoice pain glittering in his eye] broke my heart. Very well written.

Title: Foray · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA · ID: 55
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-27 03:30:14
I really liked this. I liked Boromir being solicitous of his brother... that he went to farewell him, knowing their father would not be there - and that you used the excuse that he was too busy instead of the tired 'he hated/loathed/despised' Faramir. The phrase that you use for Rangers - I could believe it was slang for Rangers. I liked that Boromir would like Faramir to remain in MT where it is safe... happened to 'go that way' in a story of mine. I like that Boromir can already see that Faramir will be great.

Title: Despair · Author: Silivren Tinu · Genres: Drama: The Fellowship · ID: 171
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-27 03:36:56
This was a dark story, but well written. I wasn't sure Aragorn would call Boromir a fool - I think he had a bit more self-control than that. But the rest of the story was very good. I liked that Boromir thinks the Ring follows orders. Good thought there! Legolas' need to make Boromir understand for Aragorn's sake and for the mission's. His sharing his thoughts on watching his people die. Legolas' feeling the evil and hearing the whispers - very good! The final [be safe] was perfect... for those in Mirkwood and in Minas Tirith.

Title: To Light the Way · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood Elves · ID: 12
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-27 04:38:24
Admittedly, Mirkwood is not my favorite locale, but this is a well-told story, with a point that no doubt Tolkien would agree with. I have certainly had many a conversation with a fandom friend who * is * a Mirkwood maniac about the very topic of the relationship between war under the Shadow of Dol Guldur and the festive, if also somewhat secretive, revels and merry-making of the Mirkwood elves that we see in ["The Hobbit"].

Dot draws in Elladan and Elrohir to make the point that celebration is a necessary renewal of spirit, and so also of hope in times when whole peoples were powerless to do more than hold the line (and slowly lose it) against Sauron's forces. Elladan's comparison of the Mirkwood Elves with Men was met with amusing reactions, but the point is not without merit. Fans of the twins and of Mirkwood Elves in general should enjoy this.

Title: The man in the woods · Author: Dot · Races: Men: Eriador or Rivendell · ID: 13
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-27 04:57:15
Dot takes characters from meckinock's version of the Angle and deploys a pair of them in an adventure of her own crafting. And it's not an adventure in the way that children usually mean it – which is precisely the point of the story.

Halbarad's young son Alagos and daughter Falathren creep out to play one morning, after their father goes off on some unknown but urgent errand with Aragorn. The usual children's games occur, and Dot, carefully constructing this as a memory narrated to an unknown other by a much older Falathren, uses that reflective distance to point out the ways in which Falathren at that point was an innocent, who understood neither the nature of her father's duties, nor her own place within the community of the Angle:

["Though unaware yet that my birthright as a Dúnedain woman was not to fight for our future but to sacrifice my loved ones to it with a resolute heart, I nevertheless did not mind that Ada never told me I’d be a good Ranger. Besides, I was still young enough to need a father’s company, not his approval"], Falathren tells us.

But this day's Ranger-play turns out to be truer than imagination (even that of ["a girl with a boy’s imagination"]) had ever intended. They happen upon a body, dead by some violent, unknown hand, and Falathren, in a fit of hysteria, refuses to follow her brother home for help. Instead, she waits by the body, covers it with her cloak, and stands a sort of vigil, out of the conviction that the young man, whoever he was, should not be alone.

Later, when Aragorn and a few others come to rescue her from the task, we understand that this was the very errand that had taken Halbarad away early, the search for the missing man. Falathren has unwittingly done a Ranger's duty, though it is in the patient, resigned acceptance of loss that Falathren sees in the faces of the women of the Angle that she recognizes her own future – that she recognizes her own place vis-à-vis Rangering, rather than in her play-time fantasies.

Unsettling and sad, but poignant and all too real – well done, Dot! Ranger fans will surely enjoy this one.

Title: Crossing towards Sunrise · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 14
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-06-27 05:17:37
The quays of Tol Eressëa are ripe for stories of reunions, for the making or breaking of hopes and dreams as the Elves who have left Middle-earth come home to long-lost loved ones, to say nothing of those whom they have done an injustice.

Elrond's arrival in Valinor is logically placed under the list of people he has lost, both those who left him earlier, to strange (or mortal) fates or otherwise, but also those whom he has finally left behind. The key figure in his arrival is Celebrian, whose fate he cannot know until he reaches Aman, but to whom he must explain the absence of their children.

Imhiriel picks Gandalf as her pair of eyes – a daring choice since Gandalf can be difficult to write, especially given the first person perspective. The figures who play into Elrond's anxiety as the ship approaches the Blessed Realm are carefully enumerated, while those who play a roll in supporting him are shown in that capacity. Well-constructed – fans of Elrond should give it a read.

Title: Not Fade Away · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later Ages · ID: 127
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2007-06-27 12:25:17

I found "Not Fade Away" through a rec in Live Journal, started to read it the day before yesterday and finished it yesterday afternoon. The prologue takes place in the fourth age of ME, but the rest of the tale is entirely set in our modern world, introducing a heroine of a very unusual kind.

[She looked at her mirrored reflection dispassionately, telling herself that this was the face of a born patsy. Nondescript brown hair, eyes somewhere halfway between blue and grey, tall, thin, no bosom or butt to speak of.(...)She was no raving beauty -- a good solid six out of ten, assuming she was in a generous mood with herself, which she wasn't at the moment.]

Not the perfect Mary Sue, hm? But guess what her name is: M. Susan Walker (the M. stands for Mariposa - no Mary anywhere to be seen. *grins*). And she couldn't be more different from any of those annoyingly perfect ladies blushing teen authors flood the fandom with. After her divorce she finds a new job she'd never hoped top get: A company called "Dale Toys" offers her a position as designer and illustrator, and her new boss, Aaron Rivers, is one of the most attractive men she has ever seen, married to a stunningly beautiful wife who seems practically ageless, and father to a son called Leif who looks like he's barely five or six years younger than his dad.

[Posey gasped. He was too gorgeous to be true. A man this delicately beautiful had to be as gay as the day is long, and what a waste, she told herself. He held out a hand that would have been the envy of her piano teacher mother - those long fingers could span eleven keys easily.]

Oh, and did I mention that the FBI and the IRS think that Aaron Rivers is a "commie", supporting civil rights, looking for his employees among immigrants, and sharing his fortune freely with those who are in need - he must be planning crimes against the US, that's for sure. *grins* Plus that Mariposa draws the background for a new video game called "The Quest for the Lonely Mountain", without having any idea about hobbits, elves and Middle Earth whatsoever... one of the many details that made me fall for this funny, thrilling, original tale.

When she finally finds out why all those gorgeously looking men and women constantly cover their ears, and when she meets an elder man all clad in brown who finally takes it upon him to explain the mystery of Dale Toys to her, we land right in the middle of one of my favorite scenes:

[Wendell sighed. "Linda, hold her hand," He smiled at her, took a deep breath, and the friendly middle-aged brown man disappeared as the veil lifted. She saw light and beauty and something young yet unimaginably ancient.

"Stop it, please stop," she whimpered.

"Mariposa, put your head between your knees," she heard Linda saying, and she immediately obeyed, until the buzzing in her head stopped. "I wish you wouldn't do that, Aiwendil, "Linda continued sharply. "It unnerves even me."]

Love it to pieces. And if you really would like to see a "modern day woman meets elves"-story with beautiful characterizations, wildly original (but believable) ideas and a great plot, go and read Jael's tale. She deserves it, for she fueled my enthusiasm for fanfiction once again, and she's a gorgeous writer.

Title: Like Falling Asleep Again · Author: lbilover · Races: Hobbits: Merry and Pippin · ID: 299
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-27 17:43:33
A story of ravishing tenderness and beauty. It tells of Merry and Pippin, grown old, but still deeply in love and as inseparable as ever they were, after they have left the Shire and come to Minas Tirith to spend their last days there. The dialogue is spare and alive with the light-hearted spirit of the two hobbits, as they talk about their lives together and their undying love for each other. There is melancholy in this tale, but it is a sweet melancholy that makes one smile through tears.

Title: Force of Nature · Author: shirebound · Genres: Alternate Universe: The Shire or Buckland · ID: 360
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-27 19:20:43
This story is a lovely addition to the author's Quarantined universe. It's a wonderful place, a pleasure to visit with hobbits and rangers and that sweet little rascal, Scamp. It always makes me feel good to read about Frodo and Estel and Bilbo, and having Merry and Pippin, and Halbarad and Thalguron along just made it a happier time for all. There is h/c and a mystery concerning the Old Forest, and the experience furthers the trust and understanding amongst Aragorn's rangers and the hobbits of the Shire.

Title: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream · Author: Blackbird Song · Genres: Drama: Ithilien · ID: 301
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-27 21:20:29
A powerful tale of nightmares that come to Pippin and Merry first in Buckland before the quest begins, and later in Ithilien, after the final battle before the Black Gates. It is also a deeply emotional exploration of the bonds between them, of a love that binds them closer than either even realizes.

Title: Letting Go · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 230
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-27 21:36:11
This story gives a powerful portrait of a strong, loving father who only wants what is best for his son, and slowly comes to the realization that he cannot provide that for him. Paladin's anguish on behalf of Pippin, who is suffering terribly from nightmares, is believable and touchingly portrayed. The relationship between father and son is shown as sympathetic and one of mutual respect and caring, as Pippin tries to spare his parents the knowledge of the horrors he and Merry, and Frodo all endured in the quest and the war of the Ring. It presents a compelling and logical reason for Merry and Pippin moving to the Crickhollow house to live.

Title: The Long Winter · Author: Baranduin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 159
Reviewer: Mews1945 · 2007-06-27 21:59:41
This story is based on an old legend called "Saving Spring". Sam tells the story to Elanor one cold, snowy night, seated by the fire, the perfect place and time for telling old tales. It concerns a long, hard winter in the shire, as recalled by an old hobbit who once told the tale to small Samwise. Sam and Elanor's conversation frames the story, but gives a very clear portrait of a loving father-daughter relationship, deeply based in the prosaic world of the Shire hobbits. The legend itself is a weaving of myth and fairy tale, with magic, enchantments, talking beasts who were once hobbits and men and elves, a wicked sorcerer and a lovely maiden imprisoned in a dungeon. The writer guides us from the cozy fireside of the hobbits to a lonely castle made of ice, and brings us back again with assurance and deftness. A beautifully told tale.

Title: Gathering the Pieces · Author: Ellisande · · ID: 543
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-28 19:11:53
A beautiful rendering of a span of Finduilas' life. I am most impressed with the simple beauty of the words. And Imrahil's part. And Denethor's love. And Boromir. And, especially, the ending. Nicely done!

Title: The Dark Night of the Soul · Author: Ellisande · · ID: 544
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-28 19:22:44
I can't even begin to express how beautiful and haunting this series of vignettes/poems is. It really undid me as I read them; my heart broke for Denethor. His love is so tranparent, so fragile, and yet he sees himself as a poor substitute for what she could have, in fact, have had. I adore the one where he berates himself for what he considers his selfishness. I love the technique of crossing out some of his words, as if he actually were writing these. The sad part is - if that is so - did he ever speak to her of the love he had? Incredible beautiful, sad, and heart-rending pieces. Thank you!

Title: Elements: Dreams of the Dead, Visions of the Living · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Genres: Alternate Universe: The Shire or Buckland · ID: 202
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-28 19:32:11
I had to laugh by the time I was finished with this because I write little notes in the side margins and there were FOURTEEN 'Oh My!'s'

This is a beautiful telling. I loved having Pip's carving be such a focal point. You caught me well when you had Boromir say that [the best dreams are the ones in which I am dying] - of course, I had to read on. And he was right. You had me biting my nails, in tears, nodding my head in agreement, and mourning those whom I love... Merry's death was beautifully written and who would I not love to die in Aragorn's arms!

But of course the best, for me, were the Boromir parts! *sobs* One thing that amazed me - I just finished writing a chapter in a tale I'm working on - and I put what the collar might have meant to Boromir. My idea and yours are not the same - but I love your idea and I love the obscure line that you base it on. Not many people remember Boromir's collar. I made the stone a White Opal from South Harad.

Again - glorious tale - very much appreciated your sharing this!

Title: Comes Now The Plaintiff, Frodo Baggins · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 17
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-06-29 20:12:22
This was a really fun read. Besides being true (!)--Frodo really did have a hard go of things on the Quest to destroy the Ring--and in our modern lawsuit-happy culture I don't doubt for a moment that he would have won a pretty gold-piece or two. I am not overly familiar with legal language, but what you have here seems realistic, and somehow that made it all the more hilarious.

On one level this piece works as pure humor. All of the names given for Gandalf, Aragorn, and Faramir at the beginning are simply hilarious, and the reference to other fictional cases was similarly chuckle-inducing. And it was all so hobbity! This reminded me of Tolkien's references to convoluted Shire legal customs, and I could very easily see this happening. It also strikes me as a particularly hobbity way of dealing with being forced to go off on a (horror of horrors!) adventure. Yet under all of that, there seems to be a biting commentary on honour and its place in Middle-earth versus our modern world. Even so, it doesn't forget its humorous roots. Quite a nice piece of comic writing all around.


Title: Gifts · Author: Acacea · Genres: Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 500
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-30 02:14:01
Delightful little moment. I have a granddaughter who is eating everything right now and I can sooooo commiserate with Denethor. And I loved the ending!

Title: Behind Every Great Man... · Author: annmarwalk · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 52
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-30 02:17:21
Very nice, indeed! I'm glad Denethor had someone looking out for him at least at some time. Mormegil must have died sometime before 3019!

Title: 13th Birthday · Author: stefaniab · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 138
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-30 02:30:26
Oh! My! The first chapter - I love Boromir pouncing on his brother to surprise him, I love him hiding the fact that he's on a plain old regular soldier's leave! LOL - and I love the part with Denethor and the stone and Faramir's fear for his father. *chills*
I love Boromir's buying the horse, but I'm doubly pleased with Faramir's concern with funds - and Boromir's troubling thought that Faramir was becoming too much like their father. *chills*
I loved the comaraderie between the troops! I had forgotten that Boromir too is still green.
The scene in the 'Home' was perfect as was the matrons obeying Denethor's law and Faramir discerning a 'use' of the moment.
It made me happy to see that Denethor chose Faramir's horse.
Oh my goodness! The last part - you saved the best for last - when reading things about Denethor and Faramir - I tend to cringe and wait for the worst - but you saved the best for last. I loved the ending. I loved the gift. And I loved the advice given. For Denethor to know that Faramir will have to use the stone... to help Boromir govern Gondor. Such a hideous thought - when one knows the price paid for such use - but so right of Denethor to offer it to his son... how odd!
And, of course, the very last part was delightful
Thank you for a great read - I had not expected this and if you could see my beaming face - you would be happy!

Title: Duty and Devotion · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 411
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-30 02:35:07
Ah ha! So the Dark Lord is the one ultimately who 'saves' Faramir - nice way of writing this chilling event!

Title: Could Will Have Its Way · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-30 02:43:08
I liked this very much - a very good reason for the Steward to look into the Palantir.

Title: A Useful Skill · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 46
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-06-30 02:52:18
Very nicely done. I love that you have Denethor take a part in F&B's lives... and not an unkind one!

Title: Duty Bound · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War · ID: 212
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-07-01 04:25:57
Wow - knocked my socks off with this one. Love Pip - love the question - first and last - and am stunned by the answer. Though Denethor did not marry till he was in his late 50's.... I'd expected the same for his sons.... But I like the idea - Bittersweet tale but beautifully written. Excellent tale. Thank you so much for sharing it. *wipes tears from her eyes*





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Msg# 8191

Re: Reviews Now Available Posted by PGF October 02, 2007 - 17:54:52 Topic ID# 8180
The problem persisted for altogether about 90 minutes I think; so I'd
thought it a temporary glitch. But alas, I have the same problem
again right now - I can reach this site, and even the page with links
to MEFA 2007 and 2006, but when I click on the link to 2007, I'm
redirected to AOL's search page, where it says "Error Gateway
Timeout", just like last night.

I have no difficulty going to any other website; so I think the
problem is at MEFA. Hopefully, I'll eventually be able to access the
site again, but in the meantime, it's inconvenient.


RAKSHA






<<<<--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Marta Layton <melayton@...>
wrote:
>
> PGF wrote:
> >
> >
> > For the past hour, I have been unable to access the MEFA site -
is my
> > computer being obnoxious, or has anyone else had similar trouble?
At
> > any rate, I certainly hope the situation is temporary.
> >
> > RAKSHA
> >
>
> Hi Raksha,
>
> I'm not sure what happened. I've been able to access the MEFA site
when
> I've needed to all this afternoon and evening. Are you still having
> problems?
>
> Marta>>>>
>

Msg# 8192

Re: Reviews Now Available Posted by araneltook October 02, 2007 - 20:19:07 Topic ID# 8180
Hi Raksha,

The hosting company appears to be having some trouble, so it's out of our control.

Sorry for the inconvenience,

Aranel

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "PGF" <PGail99@...> wrote:
>
> The problem persisted for altogether about 90 minutes I think; so I'd
> thought it a temporary glitch. But alas, I have the same problem
> again right now - I can reach this site, and even the page with links
> to MEFA 2007 and 2006, but when I click on the link to 2007, I'm
> redirected to AOL's search page, where it says "Error Gateway
> Timeout", just like last night.
>
> I have no difficulty going to any other website; so I think the
> problem is at MEFA. Hopefully, I'll eventually be able to access the
> site again, but in the meantime, it's inconvenient.
>
>
> RAKSHA
>

Msg# 8193

ALERT: MEFA site may be down Posted by araneltook October 02, 2007 - 20:54:03 Topic ID# 8193
Hi everyone,

There's been some trouble with accessing the MEFA site since yesterday, where you may get
a timeout error when trying to access the site. As far as I can tell, this is a problem at the
hosting company. If you get a timeout error, wait a while and try again (one outage lasted
about 90 minutes).

Sorry for the inconvenience,

Aranel

Msg# 8194

Question? Re-writing. Posted by Agape October 02, 2007 - 20:56:22 Topic ID# 8194
Hi,

Newbie here again. Just wondering. I got a couple reviews that made
some suggestions that I thought were worthwhile. Can I make changes now
that the tales have been nominated?

Many thanks,
Agape

Msg# 8195

Re: Question? Re-writing. Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 02, 2007 - 20:58:48 Topic ID# 8194
Gee, I hope the answer is yes, because I am constantly finding typos and
pickies I want to change in my stories--post in haste and regret at my leisure
is my motto.

Oshun



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Msg# 8196

Re: Question? Re-writing. Posted by Marta Layton October 02, 2007 - 23:10:47 Topic ID# 8194
Hi Agape,

I make changes, especially if they're fairly small ones. There's no real
problem with that. If (when the story's nominated) you expect to make
significant changes, you might want to nominate it as a work-in-progress.

But that's obviously not what's going on here. Go ahead and make the
changes. :-)

Marta

Agape wrote:
>
>
> Hi,
>
> Newbie here again. Just wondering. I got a couple reviews that made
> some suggestions that I thought were worthwhile. Can I make changes now
> that the tales have been nominated?
>
> Many thanks,
> Agape
>

Msg# 8197

Re: Question? Re-writing. Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 02, 2007 - 23:18:13 Topic ID# 8194
Whoops! I just realized that I think I do have a problem. A drabble series
of mine has been nominated, that I still am adding to--thought of it as a
complete set when it was entered, but realize I have added a chapter or two since
then and might add more. Perhaps it should be changed to a WIP.

It's number 388 "It Gives a Lovely Light"

Oshun





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Msg# 8198

Issues with Reviews Posted by aure\_enteluva October 03, 2007 - 0:15:13 Topic ID# 8198
Hey guys,

Now that several reviews have been made public, it seemed like a good
idea to review some reviewing issues. Some of this may seem basic, but
bear with me. :-)

First: how reviews are scored. The length of your review works out to
a point value between one and ten. The longer you write, the more
points your review is worth. This means that you want to try to give
your longest reviews to the stories you liked the most.

There is no such thing as a negative review. If you don't like a
story, you should just not review it. Even if you write something very
short, that's giving the story points.

On the topic of negative reviews.... the MEFAs do allow constructive
criticism, but reviews that are entirely or even mostly negative may
be inappropriate. This doesn't mean you can't talk about aspects of
the story that didn't quite work for you, but it's important to mix
these concerns with things you *did* like. Since you're reviewing the
story you must like it enough to want to give it a few points in a
competition. Be sure to talk about why you liked the story enough to
review it.

The difference between constructive criticism and negative reviews is
discussed more fully at

www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=FAQvoting#vot_4

There may be a few reviews that really are too negative for the
author's tastes. If you think a review is too negative, you can email
the admins to discuss it. If we agree with you that the review needs
to be removed we'll contact the author and ask if they'd like the
review taken down. (If a review's removed the author does lose the
points from that review, but it's also no longer visible at our
website.) For more information on how this works, see

www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=FAQvoting#vot_8

Occasionally someone will submit a review for a wrong story. They'll
just click on the wrong link, or copy the wrong paragraph from the
word processor where they compose their reviews, or whatever. If you
see something where it looks like this has happened, please email
mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com so we can look into the problem.

One other issue that's come up once or twice is quotes. Quotes from a
fanfic story, from Tolkien, or some other source don't count toward
the length of the review used when determining how many points a
review is worth. So our website counts things correctly, please
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Msg# 8199

Re: Question? Re-writing. Posted by Marta Layton October 03, 2007 - 0:29:17 Topic ID# 8194
Hi Oshun,

Tough call. :-) Let me talk this over with the other volunteers and get
back to you in a day or two, okay?

Marta

heartofoshun@aol.com wrote:
>
>
> Whoops! I just realized that I think I do have a problem. A drabble series
> of mine has been nominated, that I still am adding to--thought of it as a
> complete set when it was entered, but realize I have added a chapter or
> two since
> then and might add more. Perhaps it should be changed to a WIP.
>
> It's number 388 "It Gives a Lovely Light"
>
> Oshun
>

Msg# 8200

MEFA Reviews for October 3, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann Walker October 03, 2007 - 5:19:41 Topic ID# 8200
Title: The Steward's Archives · Author: dancingkatz · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 337
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-07-01 04:35:02
Beautifully written and I loved the titles. I have the darndest time
with titles, but yours were perfect. Every little tale bore such
wondrous meaning and emotions and the last - of Finduilas meeting him,
holding him, kissing him to healing - was gorgeous!

Title: Snare · Author: Ruby Nye · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA ·
ID: 539
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-07-01 16:54:47
Oh! Oh! Oh! Here he is again, that very creepy Man from Ruby Nye's
drabble Never Lack. This ficlet was a revelation to me  I admit to
the slightly patriarchal, condescending Mannish viewpoint of hobbits,
that they are cute and jolly and childlike (Hobbit members of the
Fellowship excluded, of course  they must have been the only ones with
any gumption.) I believe there is a history here, a backstory that I
shall have to investigate to broaden and widen my understanding of The
Troubles, and how some hobbits fought back against their oppressors
before the Travellers even returned.


In this chilling scene, Pervinca Took is actually in the Ruffian's
grasp; she has orchestrated her own capture to distract him while her
compatriots escape. Being a Man, and somewhat stupid, he is gloatingly
examining her at his leisure, caressing her arms and cheeks and chin,
before moving further south. We see her fighting her disgust and fear
and more than a little bit of worry that something might go wrong with
the plan [Over his shoulder and twenty yards up she saw a hobbit's foot
vanish into the bushes. She could do this, she repeated in her thought,
as she swallowed against the heaving in her belly. She could.].

The tale ends abruptly, a deliberate (and masterful) choice by the
author. Somewhere in the back of my mind I'm still worrying about
Pervinca, and hoping that everything went as planned, and the Ruffian
got his just desserts. I 'm hoping they hurt him a lot.




Title: Letter to Frodo · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 540
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-07-01 18:21:06
Although Boromir has spent many years seeking to expiate his guilt over
his actions at Amon Hen, there is still one person from whom he seeks
forgiveness. In this story, a missing scene from her novel The Long
Road Home, AmandaK shows us how Boromir is able to express his remorse
and attain a measure of absolution.

One of the outstanding strengths of AmandaK's writing is her ability to
elevate the slightest details of action, or description, or
characterization to such a mesmerizing level. She sets her scene her so
well that we can feel the summery white-heat of the City and the warm
dusty dark of the Pelennor at night. We can easily visualize Boromir as
he wipes away the sweat, both from the heat of the day and the
emotional tension of writing the letter. We can taste that [wicked
barley drink] Faramir offers him, to both soothe and hearten him. The
details lend a rich sense of immediacy to the events and conversations
unfolding around us.

AmandaK does not share the contents of Boromir's letter with us, and
this is wise, for the sacrament of confession should be a private
matter. She has already shown us his acts of penance, during the long
years depicted in her novel; now we are able to share in his
absolution, his sense of peace in letting go of the past and moving
with clear sight and purpose into the future.

Title: Multicultural Interactions · Author: annmarwalk · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 18
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-04 01:58:23
This is a sweet little double-sided vignette  the tale of an
encounter, told from two sides. Elboron, the perpetually tardy, vaguely
absent-minded, guard-in-training with an adolescent's speed and
corresponding lack of agility; and Elanor, who seems to have become a
self-possessed, down-to-earth young woman with a good sense of humor.
They don't know each other, but they know each other's fathers, and
unwittingly provide a measure for the truthfulness of the tales their
fathers have told of each other.

These matching vignettes each provide a nice glimpse into the world of
Fourth Age Middle-earth, and we find that the next generation is
growing very nicely into their more peaceful inheritance.

Title: Comes Now The Plaintiff, Frodo Baggins · Author: EdorasLass ·
Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 17
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-04 01:58:58
Rather than take aim at fanfic writers, this time Frodo is going after
his erstwhile companions for damages inflicted during the course of the
Quest. And he's suing for change of venue, given the obviously high
possibility of an unfair trial in Gondor or Arnor. I'd like to see the
Haradric court take this one up without inciting Armageddon III in
Middle-earth. Cute  has all the style of a court document (in this
context, a compliment, rather than the usual curse), although I think
Plaintiff Baggins might want to make sure he's getting a movieverse
court for charges 19 and 20 at least, or the bookverse one may find him
guilty of PTSD-induced memory loss. ;-)

Title: Stopping by Woods · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 19
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-04 01:59:38
I was very glad to see a companion piece to Branwyn's lovely ["The Road
Not Taken"]. Both evoke the uncertainty and mystery of the unknown, and
in this one, suggest the heaviness of a past that remains alive for one
Lord Faramir, though his raven hair have turned white as the snow lying
mixed with the leaves on the side of the road.

Branwyn's language is, as always, precise, poetic, evocative  I always
have a clear image in my mind reading her stories, and it is inevitably
a beautifully drawn image at that. Here, I can see the milestone rising
out of a drift of golden leaves and snow, besides the pale, bare birch
trees  skeletal reminders of other and more cherished dead. Boromir's
journey, still riddled with gaps and perhaps haunted by the questions
of a brother who wonders still whether anything might have been done to
change the end of Boromir's tale, colors the entire emotional
landscape.

Yet Faramir is not overwhelmed by the loss  he is, despite his age,
still full of promises for the future  to go and follow his brother's
trail one day, and to make an end of the evening in more congenial
Yuletide company than the snowy woods can provide.

Well done, Branwyn! Very enjoyable!

Title: Bliss and Beauty · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabble ·
ID: 20
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-04 02:00:12
Nice encapsulation of Tuor's relationship to Gondolin. The drabble
quite literally builds up to the final section, each new paragraph
begun by a number, climbing ever higher until we reach the climax, when
Tuor fully experiences the bliss of Gondolin in his marriage to Idril.
The reader can feel anticipation mounting, which works well for a love
story, even one so quickly told as this one.

Good use of a short space, Imhiriel.

Title: Escape · Author: Bodkin · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA ·
ID: 24
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-04 02:19:13
Every so often, the essentially anonymous character game works well 
it gives you just enough information to anchor the perspective, and
denies you the rest, forcing you to fill out the words and actions of
the character with general ideas, suspicions, hints  hoping that
perhaps at the end there will be a name revealed, and all the guesswork
you've invested in trying to tie the story and the nameless character
to an actual name or event will be vindicated.

Bodkin doesn't go in for vindication, not for her Ranger or for her
elven patrol leader: they remain merely "Ranger" and "patrol leader,"
although one could fill in a couple of names and there would be nothing
in the books to contradict the guesses. But part of the reason one
would want to do this is that these two nameless characters, dutifully
about their business and slightly irritated when said business
intersects with someone else's, are well-drawn. They have their own
personalities, and the reader wants them to have names.

The bit about the message being 'in' the Ranger's head was a classic
bit of literalism trumping the figurative and made for a good laugh
over the elf's hopes of learning its contents. Neat trick, that!

Readers who enjoy Rangers, Elves, Mirkwood, or a well- (if briefly)
written Radagast, should take a look at this story. Good job, Bodkin!

Title: Signs · Author: permilea · Races: Hobbits: Children · ID: 384
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2007-07-04 02:24:29
A very cute little bit of mischievous wee Pippin, as an amused Frodo
tries to be stern. I liked Pippin's logic in this.

Title: Turned Earth · Author: Dana · Genres: Alternate Universe: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 26
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-04 03:03:40
Once upon a time, I was far too squeamish to watch anything labeled
horror, but thanks to the intervention of friends with well-loved tapes
and entirely too much interest in finding bizarre B horror movies, I've
come to see the fascination of it. Plus, hobbit zombies. Even if I were
not friends with the bad horror night filmfest crowd out here, there's
no way not to read this story.

Dana's characteristic style, a lace-like structure that gets all the
important emotional strands together in a minimum of description, is
evident, and it works surprisingly well. Or rather, there's no surprise
that it works well, except one really REALLY does not expect hobbit
zombies to come wandering up the drive. And in daylight, at that. But
moving on&

The story exploits a canon occurrence I would never have thought of in
order to slot the appearance of hobbit undead into a believably
bookverse story. The curse of Saruman, overturning the bounty of
Galadriel's gift and poisoning the very earth of the Shire, sending
back the dead to destroy the living, was an inspired point of
departure, even if it doesn't come out 'til near the end of the story.
It turns an otherwise inexplicable occurrence into the last revenge of
a wizard gone bad, and a moral struggle for Frodo, who becomes once
more a sort of sacrificial figure who can, as it were, 'negotiate' with
the evil power at work.

Dana's Rose is a wonderful figure  I really like the voice she gave
her: sturdy, solid hobbit sense, and a lot of native guts, but
certainly able to be overwhelmed. Her Merry and Pippin are as they ever
are  splendid. And her hobbit zombies are creepy and disgusting and
make for some memorably understated gore.

The summary may suggest a strange tale  and it is that, but it is an
excellent story to read with the lights out. Give it a try!

Title: The Lesson · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 29
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-05 02:40:51
This drabble actually made me cry. I *know* that's not Branwyn's
intent, but it did. While I am something of a pacifist in my "real
world" life, I do recognize that our options for diplomacy would not
have been realistic in Tolkien's Middle-earth. This is how I reconcile
myself with the glamorization of heroics in war--within Middle-earth,
it truly was self-defense, no matter what I think about it outside of
fiction.

But the way Faramir is schooled in the ways of war in this drabble was
heart-breaking, because I know that it would be all too easy to fall
into this trap. While I think Faramir would very rarely have to hunt
for his dinner in Minas Tirith, certainly if he was ever expected to
travel in a reasonably small group (which seems like a real
possibility), it would be a useful skill to have. And arguably it's not
"wrong", at least not in the way that killing a human could be. And so,
step by step, Faramir is gently eased into the ways of killing until he
can aim his arrow at an enemy soldier (who is still a man). Truly this
is the captain who does not ["slay man or beast needlessly, and not
gladly even when it is needed"], yet he is not so over-ridden with
angst that it paralyzes him. It's a very nice, almost quiet, commentary
on how war might affect a sensitive soul like Faramir.


Title: A Middle-earth Mary Sue Tragedy · Author: Lily Baggins · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Incomplete · ID: 595
Reviewer: Baranduin · 2007-07-06 19:25:13
A modern girl drops into Middle-earth right in the middle of the Quest.
Think you've seen that tired old thing before?

Well, you haven't if you haven't read Lily Baggins' masterpiece of Mary
Sue comedy. You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll ... well mostly you'll
laugh. I know I do every time I read this story!

Title: A Little Knowledge Can Be A Dangerous Thing · Author: Tanaqui ·
· ID: 616
Reviewer: Tiana Luthien · 2007-07-07 18:08:51
This is a delightful drabble series about the far-reaching effects of
Arwen's dowry. You've nailed the characters of Aragorn and Faramir, and
I love the way you've shown them dealing with some of the more
"irritating" facets of becoming King and Steward. Humourous and
well-written, I look forward to more in the series :) (ok, that was
shameless).

Title: A Little Knowledge Can Be A Dangerous Thing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races: Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 352
Reviewer: Tiana Luthien · 2007-07-07 18:08:51
This is a delightful drabble series about the far-reaching effects of
Arwen's dowry. You've nailed the characters of Aragorn and Faramir, and
I love the way you've shown them dealing with some of the more
"irritating" facets of becoming King and Steward. Humourous and
well-written, I look forward to more in the series :) (ok, that was
shameless).

Title: Lost in Translation · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 31
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-08 03:10:02
Language is such a difficult thing to present well in a story 
obviously, we all use and abuse and play with language when we write,
but making it a theme and attempting to write a drama around it is a
little more difficult. Sophinisba uses Pippin as her vehicle for
conveying how the failure of language to communicate anything (because
one party can't understand a word of it) requires a different approach
to language  a different way of understanding how one gets put in a
place and relationship with other speakers.

Pippin's perspective is such an excellent choice precisely because he
is a young and inquisitive hobbit, the youngest person going on the
quest, and when Frodo is being healed at Rivendell, and there is no one
who will speak to the hobbits in their own language or tell them
anything other than what seem like platitudes or put-offs, his
frustration and sense of being totally out of control with no one about
who cares even to try to help him regain his footing is visceral.
Imagine having a relative hospitalized in a foreign country where
people will only use your language to say "We're doing everything we
can. Surely your (insert relative here) will be fine." Sophinisba
portrays that sense of being deliberately shut out of something that
concerns you most intimately extremely well.

Even names become an issue: the fact that all the names Pippin has for
the people he knowseven himself!are different from the ones he is
familiar and comfortable with (Gandalf is Mithrandir, Aragorn has too
many names that aren't either Strider or Aragorn for him to keep track
of, and Rivendell, to his exasperation, isn't actually called Rivendell
in Imladris).

It takes a discussion with Frodo to help Pippin come to appreciate the
way in which the Elves (and other speakers of Elvish) enter essentially
into a different way of thinking and dealing with other people. Frodo's
advice to Pippin  don't try to learn the language  isn't meant to be
obscurantist or the like, but is essentially advice to stop trying to
be in control all the time. Stop insisting that others use your
language and enter into relationships with you on your own terms;
listen for how they say, not what is said, and that will do more to
keep frustration at bay than all the (fruitless) time Frodo spent
attempting to make sense of Sindarin declensions.

Pippin, being young and curious, and so essentially open to the world,
is able to absorb the lesson, which means he has overcome the first
hurdle to entering a more cosmopolitan perspective. Very well done,
Sophinisba! I quite liked this, and I suspect Pippin fans and those who
love the collision of cultures will enjoy it as well.

Title: Exploring the Wild · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 30
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-08 03:10:33
Another in the Nanny series, and a delightful little tale. Boromir and
Faramir may live in wild and untamed lands by comparison to what most
readers of fanfic, decked out with computers in homes replete with
climate control and electronics, but by comparison to how most people
of less than noble rank live, they are quite sheltered from the weather
and the land. It is easy to forget this, given our own perspective, and
this story, about Boromir and Faramir camping out for the first time
with some off-duty Rangers in the gardens of Minas Tirith, does a good
job of bringing out what a difference class makes in Gondor's
stratified society.

The two Rangers are great characters  Halhigil seeking to escape
boring precautionary confinement in the Houses of Healing after an
illness, Elchim apparently just off-duty, and neither of them,
apparently, with children of their own  prove well able to handle the
two young boys, with only a minimum of warnings and coaching from
Nanny. Nevertheless, even they have to admit that looking after the
energetic brothers, who are eager and curious to know anything the
Rangers care to tell them about the art of Rangering and living off the
land, is a full time job and not an easy one at that.

The brotherly dynamic is well-portrayed: EdorasLass writes Boromir and
Faramir with voices that are appropriate to children of their age and
class, and she shows their closeness very well. Nanny's sense of the
quiet of her nursery, and her anticipation of 'empty nest syndrome',
provide a sobering counterpoint to an otherwise light-hearted story.

Well done!

Title: The Lesson · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 29
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-08 03:11:02
[How gently men are schooled in war.]

Faramir's reflections here give an insight into the way that the
slaying of one's fellow human beings forms a continuum: from the
playing at war that a child does, to the active hunting of
progressively larger, more dangerous animals, and there is never any
reason to think that one is doing wrong in any of those situations.
Whether or not any of them are wrong in themselves, the way in which
they are used, a training ground for the far more morally ambiguous (at
the very least) act of war is surely troubling. The steady wearing away
of horror at the thought and then the sight of death that you wreak all
comes to a head when you have an enemy soldier at the point of your
sword or in range of your bow.

Title: He Came To Meet Me · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Romance
· ID: 33
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-08 03:41:49
I've read a couple of Diamond-Pippin romances, and Diamond does seem to
get cast relatively often as a sort of spitfire wild child. I don't
mind that, but I do like the way Sophinisba's Diamond is simply very
much taking things on her own terms  she doesn't push unduly, but she
won't be moved if she isn't willing. She is a bit like her wayfarer
rock: she knows where she is, she stands out to herself in her own mind
as this sort of person, not another sort. She seems to know, more or
less, what she wants, and to do just that, without ostentatiousness.

The brief depiction of life on the moors and out in the stony,
treacherous lands of Long Cleeve during the Time of Troubles was very
well done. I loved the matter-of-factness of life as viewed through
Diamond's eyes  she doesn't trouble herself unduly with the fact of
desire, though she allows it to trouble her, which is to say she lets
others into her life and lets them go, too, and expects to feel the
sting and keep going.

Pippin respects that in her, it seems, and certainly his own
experiences of war suit him to understand her own contribution to the
resistance of her own folk. She is not a rebel in the full-fledged
sense, but more an opportunistic guerilla who tries to keep her own
business out of the way of dangers. He can appreciate that, and her
love of the land, and she appreciates his seriousness, and the way he
seems to fit so into her own dreams and fantasies  as if there has
always been a place prepared for him, though she did not realize for
whom she was preparing it until he showed up one day on the moors after
the Troubles.

A very understated, well-written romance  quite enjoyable!

Title: Thirst · Author: sophinisba solis · Races: Hobbits: Vignette ·
ID: 32
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-08 03:42:18
A lovely set of interlocking vignettes, all centered around water in
some way. They could as easily be centered around something else  it
is much more the character interactions that are being aimed at than
anything that has to do with a simple need for thirst.

The dynamics among the cousins in strange places like Bree, for
example, are at issue in the first vignette, as the strains of the day,
the need for caution, and the fear of pursuit lead to the brink of an
argument. Is this or isn't it home, and who gets to answer that
question, finally? gets fought out over the ostensible choice of ale in
quantities measured for Men versus water. The questions of what should
we do and expect on the quest gets covertly argued over with Boromir
around the idea that there simply isn't any drinkable water in Mordor
(and therefore everyone should really go to Minas Tirith). The
pre-festivities Cormallen scenes are scenes that are returned to again
and again by many writers, but Sophinisba made it fresh as Merry
dribbles water into injured friend's and cousins' mouths.

But I liked most the encounter between Merry and the nameless woman of
Minas Tirith. A woman who may likely become a war widow in the days to
come, she and Merry talk about pipes and the need to repair them for
water to flow, as a way of (not) talking about the agony of not knowing
whether their loved ones will live or die, of being so utterly
powerless to impact even the simple decisions of others as to who will
stay in Minas Tirith and who will go. Powerful writing in a very short
space.

Merry fans will most certainly appreciate these, but really, they are
recommended to anyone liking a good vignette.

Title: Irreverence · Author: Aratlithiel · Genres: Humor · ID: 619
Reviewer: Budgielover · 2007-07-08 04:54:36
This quiet moment between Frodo and Pippin perfectly captures their
relationship, their personalities, and their love and affection for
each other. It is a heart-warming story filled with quiet humor, and
makes the reader feel as if she has been given a gift, a momentary peek
into a loving relationship that we all cherish.

Title: Mettarë · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men · ID: 34
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-08 23:32:17
Much has been written of the innocence of hobbits in comparison to
other members of the Fellowship. Boromir in particular usually is a
marked contrast to them, as he is here. Here, he and Aragorn know very
well that ["War makes soldiers of us all" & "And widowers& and
orphans."] Aragorn, however, isn't only a soldier; Boromir seems caught
in a bit of a rut, that breaks only at the very end of the story,
suggesting how stifling the roles of soldier, orphan, and (potentially)
widower are.

Title: And We Will Travel North · Author: bewize · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 39
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-09 00:31:33
The brother dynamic between Elladan, Elrohir, and Aragorn has been the
subject of numerous stories, but I do like this one for its unambiguous
'transformation' of the brothers. Their love for their human brother,
who will leave them in so short a space of time as Elvenkind count such
things, leads them to put off the Elf-lords for a time and to become
["for a short time that which we are not: Men of the North."] It has a
sort of House of Ruth flavor to it that I like. Fans of the twins,
Elrond's family, or those interested in mortal-immortal interactions
should like this one.

Title: The Archives Incident · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure:
Minas Tirith · ID: 38
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-09 00:32:11
For some reason, I can't think of many post-Quest Pippin-and-Frodo
stories, so this was a nice change of pace, and written with
Dreamflower's usual good style.

As someone who spends a lot of time in libraries, and who is not wholly
convinced that the universe's sense of humor would be beneath creating
an earthquake in Illinois just so I could get buried in the stacks, I
can appreciate the idea that libraries contain unknown and lurking
dangers. City-dweller that I am, rats are not something I'm used to
thinking of as a threat, but Dreamflower successfully made them
menacing, and who would want to be locked in a library without a light?

The story moves from a humorous discovery that Minas Tirith's library
keeps a fair share of godawful poetry on its shelves, some of it about
one Captain Thorongil, even, to the excitement of discovering
little-used passages and rooms and old scrolls, to the terror of
becoming locked into those little-used spaces with nothing but rats for
company. Frodo and Pippin work well together, and Frodo as caretaker
post-Quest is always a good thing.

Of course, they are finally rescued before the rats can get at them,
and fortunately they keep a hold of the bad poetry. While I regret not
seeing Aragorn's reaction to it, the last line was a perfect end to the
story.

Title: It's No Mystery, Really · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits: Merry and Pippin · ID: 36
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-09 00:33:04
Grey Wonderer can write a marvelous Merry and Pippin, and usually
there's humor aplenty. This story features the dreadful duo in a
domestic dispute  specifically, Pippin, having caught Merry's cold,
proceeds to be stubborn and foul-tempered about it.

The device of the book is cute and smoothly executed, allowing Merry
and Pippin, under the very thin guise of pretending to talk about the
plot of a book, to discuss their own slightly strained relationship at
this very moment, in all its predictability. Some harmless name-calling
is thereby able to be slipped in without further wounding pride, and
catharsis is achieved.

Nicely done!

Title: Three Turnings of the Year · Author: Ruby Nye · Races: Hobbits ·
ID: 37
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-09 01:11:25
Given that I am a sad, sad angstbunny addict, the Occupation of the
Shire has to be one of my favorite Shire fic-themes ever. No
disappointments here!

I love Ruby Nye's casting of Pervinca  first, the tween-aged,
devil-may-care lass out to have a bit of fun where there's fun to be
had, even if it takes a bit of trickery and shadows to get it. Poor Sam
is classically confounded, but in the end, I liked his
mortified/dignified response to Pervinca's efforts at a second
seduction. And I liked that she respected that, that she knows there
are some things that "a little harmless fun" cannot answer to.

The transformation of Pervinca into wife and sentry, resenting the loss
of her freedom to roam, and yet taking up the responsibility of it is
also well done. She's been hurt badly by the disappearance of her
darling brother Pippin, and the losses and confinement to Tuckborough.
She and Everard struggle with their marriage and their fears for absent
loved ones, and in a warm, funny turn, decide that they will have a
child and name it after Pippin if he doesn't come back. And if it's a
girl, it'll be "Pippette," which makes both them and the reader laugh
hysterically for the little moments of defiant humor that break into
the grueling reality of resistance.

For the final turning of the year, after the Troubles, Pervinca heads
off to enjoy the pleasures denied her  disguising herself, pretending
to be somebody else, visiting old friends and lovers, enjoying the
party and the freedom. It's as if she's going to slide right back into
her pre-Troubles ways, when an unexpected meeting with a lass she never
knew before brings out the maturity she has gained, and which she
cannot simply divest herself of now that the Troubles are over. Lovely
and touching, sad and triumphant at once.

Well done, Ruby Nye!

Msg# 8201

MEFA Reviews for October 3, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann Walker October 03, 2007 - 5:20:30 Topic ID# 8201
I've seen a very few stories that attempt to give Gandalf a romantic
interest. They are usually well-written, and I can see how it might
happen, but there's an essential something that's missing  intuition,
I guess, whatever it is that makes you go, "Aha, so that's how it
works!" Juno's story supplies me with that "Aha!" moment.

Juno's writing is strong, and features her usual story-within-a-story
frame, the narrator speaking directly to the reader to frame the
locale, the history, put the question in the reader's mind, invite the
reader in. And then she switches to her primary character, who tells
the rest  Juno has that enviable gift of telling a fully lived out
life in just a few words. She doesn't need many, for all are well
chosen. One gets a strong sense of the isolation of Himling, of its
being a waymarker, a boundary stone (not just having one)  it stands
on the borders between myth and reality, permanently linked to
legendary Himring, between one world and the next. It is a place where
a wizard does not simply come, but in some way dwells, on the border of
any map of Middle-earth, forgotten and forgetting, and imbued with its
own curious remembrances.

Tamer's acceptance of her place in the life of this tiny society, and
her devotion to her master, the Grey Wizard who occasionally comes for
a respite from carrying the rest of the world's burdens on his
shoulders, is well-portrayed. We watch her fall in love in a way that
makes sense in the context of her life, and requires no questions nor
any extraneous declarations of love or the sorts of courtly romantic
episodes one often sees deployed in romance stories.

Gandalf's reactions, too, make sense, and I love the ending  the way
in which Gandalf has to sacrifice something for a love he will never be
able to settle into. Juno gives an explanation in author's notes of
what is at stake, and what this episode in his life could mean in terms
of canonical events, but really, it isn't needed. The story makes sense
on its own terms, and I think the thing that cements it for me is that
Gandalf does not fall in love with someone who is like him, or with
someone who is classically beautiful, or one of the Eldar  in some
sense, they are too much akin. Gandalf is attracted and bound
eventually to that which is different from him  he goes out of himself
quite literally here, becoming something that no other of his kind has
been  save, perhaps, Melian. And so he is able to understand, not just
know, human love and human grief in a way that no other Istari ever
shall.

Beautiful story, Juno, and beautifully told. I'd recommend this to any
Tolkien fan.

Title: And Not To Yield · Author: Lady Marshy · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 117
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-07-10 02:47:58
Dark, terrifying, brutal  I've never read anything quite like this
story. Faramir and Eomer together have led the last small bands of
Rangers and Rohirrim fighting against those who wield the Ring. These
two, the only survivors of the bloody siege in the far recesses of
Henneth Annun, have been captured and brutalized, and are now awaiting
execution. This tale chronicles their last days, their steadfast
loyalty and devotion to each other and to the memory of those who have
already given their lives for the honor of Rohan and Gondor, and the
impact of their courage upon those around them.

Some imagery has been drawn from historic accounts of the Fourth Age
(the execution of Charles I, the actions of Resistance fighters
imprisoned during World War II) and skillfully integrated into the
story. The slash elements are understated: this is far, far more that a
tale of desperate, anguished men seeking solace and brief escape from
the dire situation they share. It is clear that their devotion to each
other transcends the physical nature of their relationship, allowing
each of them to face death with unblemished honor and dignity.

The startling conclusion left me shaking with shock. An absolutely
unique and riveting tale that readers will long remember.

Title: Strange Stars · Author: Jael · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 120
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-07-10 13:09:15
I didn't quite know what to expect when I started this story. Legolas
going to Harad as a courtesan? The premise seemed preposterous and
totally outlandish. This story could have been a farce, but while it
has it's humorous moments, the overall tone is more serious. The story
drew me right in. Through Legolas' mission at the court of King
Khorlai, the reader gets to know the members of the kings household and
through them the cost of the war for the Haradrim. Legolas has to do
some quick thinking to pull off his role without sacrificing his
dignity, and he is put to the test for how much he is willing to do for
Elessar's sake. I loved his first encounter with the king's sister who
had some very surprising ideas of how to spend an afternoon with the
new bethnaru.

Title: The spaces between two silences · Author: illyria-pffyffin ·
Genres: Drama: With Aragorn · ID: 677
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2007-07-10 20:55:21
Stories about Arwen Undómiel are increasingly rare in this fandom, and
I appreciate each (really good) one I'm able to find from the bottom of
my heart. This one is a pure jewel. Illyria has always been able to
paint pictures in lush colors with her words, and this is a fine
example. When she describes the wedding ceremony of the King and Queen
of Gondor, her imagery is intoxicating:

[The ladies of Khand lined the path for some distance, waving their
arms and stamping their feet so that their bangles and ankle bracelets
jingled like a hundred rattles, their shrill ululation drowning out the
music. Southron fire dancers and knife dancers leapt onto the street
before us, tossing and twirling their torches and daggers in a wild,
whirling dance to the alarmed and awed shrieks of the spectators, then
retreated, bowing deeply when we rolled past.]

Before the reader's eyes unfolds the tapestry of a deep and unerring
love, embracing the present and enduring even the bitter consequences
of the decisions a man and a woman once made. And Arwen won't regret
her choice, even in her darkest hour:

[Here my Estel walked forever. I could see him, young and grave and
beautiful, walking among the trees. I could hear his voice, his
laughter, his tales, his songs, hidden like treasures in the gurgling
of the springs and the sighs of the breeze. If I closed my eyes I could
feel his hand wrapped around mine, a warriors hand, a healers hand, a
lovers.]

This is marvelous, nearly poetic storytelling... and a tale that moves
the heart and soul.

Title: Rock and Hawk · Author: Adaneth · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 221
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 03:05:32
Adaneth brings to bear a wealth of research into a way of life that
frankly, I can only look at from the outside and imitate. She gives a
strong sense of the world her characters inhabit, and their
relationship with it, which has the happy effect of placing the reader
in a fictional space that immediately has its own feel, its own unique
image, and a sense of solidity  of its having its own rules.
Subcreation, anyone?

With the sea and its nearby shore all washing around the reader's
imagination, we then meet the characters, and begin to see the
unfolding of a fascinating encounter not only between the sexes, but
between different races. The Dwarvish point of view, shown primarily
through the Dwarf Veylin in his interactions with Men and his own
people, is a difficult one to write well, I find, but Adaneth does it
effortlessly (or so it seems; the measure of the author's skill is that
it always looks effortless when done well). One falls into the Dwarven
world and discovers that it is not quite like ours, and the differences
grow more pronounced as we get a better feel for the Dwarves.

Saelon, our primary human touchstone, is also well-portrayed, given a
strong personality against which the Dwarven characters can come up and
interact. Her isolation from her own people, her independence as a
woman, and especially as a woman of the Dúnedain, living in their
decline, makes her quite singular and startling. Yet she fits with the
sea and shore that she loves, thereby providing many opportunities for
those less rooted in it to grate against her.

The force that brings the Dwarves and Saelon together is a set of
mysterious creatures  fiends or demons, who knows?  that no one can
seem to kill, and which become progressively bolder as time goes on.
This is a threat that seems a cross between the Grendel of Beowulf and
the legendary Beast of Gévaudan: it dismembers what it kills, preying
upon the outliers of settlements and their animals at first, taking
victims without warning and often leaving no traces behind. As time
wears on, they eventually attack houses, driving the people of Srethan
Brethil, Saelon's original home, right onto the doorstep of her
isolated sea-cave, where she is thrown into the role of Lady and
liege-lord all at once.

By the end of the story, the beasts still remain at large  the need
for vengeance among both Men and Dwarves remains strong, but it has
also become a more real possibility, due in large part to the slow
growth of something like friendship between Saelon and Veylin. They do
not fully understand each other, but they do respect each other and the
distance between them, as well as the possibility of a more substantial
set of ties. Time and another story will tell whether vengeance is
claimed and a neighborly relationship achieved, and I quite look
forward to it.

Highly recommended reading for anyone with any interest in Tolkien's
Middle-earth. Well, well done, Adaneth!

Title: A Mother's Touch · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 03:22:17
Smaug and his mother  what a pair! The image of fearsome Smaug as a
pink-and-white-scaled wriggling little wyrm who plays in the mud is,
quite frankly, hysterical. I think, however, that my favorite
incongruous 'image' is this:

["Mama, I'm back," chirped her son]

Dragons chirping. Like sparrows, maybe? I love it, and it makes me
smile every time, thinking of Smaug as chirping.

Title: Inroads · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 45
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 03:31:32
Eowyn in the Fourth Age is something of an enigma  we all wonder, can
the shield-maiden really become a gardener, healer, and consummate
diplomat? War is so much simpler in many ways, when the solution is the
simple elimination of whoever stands in your path.

Raksha takes on one aspect of this question in this short ficlet,
showing the trials and tribulations of being unable to confront the
enemy head on and offer no other terms than death or surrender. The
ladies of Minas Tirith, defeated in the matrimonial game by Eowyn's
capture of Faramir, are not all gracious losers. Nor do they forget
that she isn't one of them.

It takes a young girl with heart but no falsity to break the strain of
the evening and remind some of the resentful ones that Eowyn has, after
all, earned her joy and is worthy of respect.

Title: A Useful Skill · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children ·
ID: 46
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 03:40:51
Ok, I admit it, this one just makes me go "Awwwww!"

I love the father-son dynamic here  Denethor, usually so very on top
of matters, gets to do a classic double take:

[Faramir, not surprisingly, was sitting on one of the couches, his head
bent low over a 

Denethor blinked, sure he must be mistaken. But he was not; it was no
book which held Faramir's attention, it was a sock.]

Surprise, and confusion, plus a confrontation with boundless, innocent
childish enthusiasm, have him a bit set back on his heels. This, alas,
comes off as irritation with Faramir, who, in the manner of young
children, senses that he has somehow offended the Order Of Things, but
isn't sure how or why his newfound abilities rouse paternal wrath.

Fortunately, Denethor does back down, after getting a reminder that
even for the highly born, soldiering demands the ability to take care
of one's own things. Nanny, Faramir's teacher in this as in other
matters, gets a brief appearance and is understandably slightly
flustered to find Denethor presiding over his son's efforts. That
Denethor finds her relief amusing is telling of his rather imposing
personality  a comic but revealing end to the ficlet.

Title: A Thankless Task · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Drama: Youth ·
ID: 49
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 03:51:03
& and this one makes me smirk slightly and imagine a very nasty road
for Boromir to tramp upon, which would require the mending of many an
article of clothing.

Boromir's efforts to get Faramir to sympathize with him, or else to
agree to do his sewing for him, are typically elder-brotherly, when
brothers discover what their siblings are for (the doing of the chores
they don't want to do themselves). Faramir's willingness to stand up to
his brother, whom he adores, and argue with him, suggests he ought to
be able to do so with his father  a subject that is briefly discussed,
though only as a hypothetical possibility at this point.

Alas, we know that when it counts, he isn't able to do it  he'll still
ride out to defend Pelennor, and without having challenged Denethor's
will about it. That casts a shadow over an otherwise light-hearted
story.

Title: Sunshine and Roses · Author: shirelinghpc · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 531
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-11 22:28:02
A very sweet and touching story of how the hobbits and other walkers
spent their time in Minas Tirith. It could probably benefit from a beta
for mechanics (things like sentence fragments and punctuation, for
example), but the underlying gap-filling is excellent. I enjoyed it
very much.

Title: The End of Dark Days · Author: annmarwalk/EdorasLass CoAuthors ·
Genres: Drama: Minas Tirith · ID: 56
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 22:59:43
The heroines of Ann and EdorasLass finally get a story together, it
seems. Despite the slight sense of jarring to find that everyone
including her friends calls Nanny "Nanny", it is a lovely little set of
scenes, as Nanny and her girls return to Minas Tirith to discover what
has become of her menfolk and, of course, Faramir.

And while I really should have seen it coming, the only
half-acknowledged tale of just how Denethor died, and how close he came
to taking Faramir with him, was appropriately shocking when seen
through Nanny's perspective  Nanny, who had no idea of what was
waiting for her in the cryptic hints of strange happenings where 'her
rabbit' is concerned.

A mix of mourning and remembrance and laughter, all laced with a strong
undercurrent of nervous exhaustion, gives this a tone appropriate to
the circumstances. An enjoyable read  well done, both of you!

Title: Better Days Ahead · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 51
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 23:00:10
Shagrat gets a voice in this little ficlet, and a very orcish voice it
is, one part arrogance and bravada, another part lusting after ghoulish
fantasy that would certainly have consequences in the world should they
manage to carry out their 'plans.' Apparently, Shagrat has either heard
of Saruman's experiments in Uruk-hai eugenics, or else something
similar was going on in Mordor, and they mean to continue it. In either
case, ew.

Nevertheless, for an orc, it is at least a vision, even if one that no
one really wants to contemplate except other orcs. Rape and murder,
terrorism and human trafficking are nothing new in the world,
unfortunately, and if anyone would think of them as an escape from
trouble and way to rise in the world while taking revenge on their
enemies, well, orcs would certainly be the ones to think of it!

Title: Measures of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 50
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 23:00:41
One of the interesting things about couples like Faramir and Eowyn or
Aragorn and Arwen is the different rate of aging. Raksha takes up this
theme, and the pains it imposes on the partner who ages more swiftly,
in this case Eowyn.

Jealousy can become a problem  jealousy, and nostalgia, which can sour
a relationship. It requires much more sensitivity on the part of the
younger (or more youth-ful) partner to handle the way in which time,
flowing differently for each in a radical way, does not enable them to
share certain things at the same time, and seems to make them in some
way unsuited to each other.

Faramir is in this instance able, by force of sincerity unmarred by the
slightest hesitation, to help Eowyn forget the difference in vigor
between them, and to feel loved and desirable rather than a burden.
It's a sweet little vignette, and I am sure fans of Faramir and Eowyn
will enjoy it.

Title: Getting Away from it All · Author: Bodkin · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 63
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-11 23:37:02
Everyone has to take a little time off, even if that time is in between
allowing the plots of courtly enemies to ripen to the point where they
become vulnerable to one's own counterplotting.

I like the lazy, bantering tone of this, although there is one point
where the swing to the serious seems to come out of nowhere. Otherwise,
however, an enjoyable day off for the king and queen, prince and
princess!

Title: Keeper of the Jewels · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Adventure:
Minas Tirith · ID: 64
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-12 03:46:54
There must surely have been some in Gondor who were less than pleased
that there was a claimant to the throne after all, and perhaps even a
few who would take that displeasure further than opposition in council
rooms. Cuthalion sets up a plausible scenario in the Prince of Lebennin
and in his meek, desperate daughter, Artanis.

One suspects that the flaw in the Prince of Lebennin's plan will be the
way he treats his daughter, and in fact, that is the case. This allows
poor Sam to be rescued before his captors can dispose of him along with
Aragorn. It also allows for the redemption of Artanis.

I like the depiction of the relationships among the hobbits, and
between them and Aragorn, and loved that Ioreth got a few moments of
triumph, even if only in a recounting. A quick, enjoyable read.

Title: Foreign Ways · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor or
Rohan · ID: 54
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-12 04:02:22
Mag the cook is indeed a cook at heart, willing to taste-test anything.
And also, an apparently adventuresome young woman once upon a time,
willing to be lured into taverns by strange blond strangers with no
Westron who want to stand her and her best friend drinks. It all turns
out well, however, and Mag gets to add another few culinary items to
her list of enjoyable things to eat.

Eowyn, newly arrived from Rohan, and eager to accustom her Gondorian
staff to Rohirric fare provides an entertaining reminder to Mag of that
earlier encounter, which Mag handles with grace and a bit of a white
lie, but Eowyn is delighted with her enthusiasm. Plus, Mag can now
enjoy certain Rohirric delicacies once again, secure in the new
knowledge of how to make them herself, thanks to Eowyn. A cute bit of
cross-cultural interaction, Ann!

Title: Sea Food · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 53
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-12 04:02:47
This reminds me of the old sea food diet joke  see food, eat it.
Except this time, it actually works the other way around: see food,
don't eat it.

Young Boromir and Faramir show themselves to be still on the sensitive
side when it comes to the difference between what is served on the
table and what they have to catch for themselves. The crabs got lucky
this time, though Boromir's last comment shows the truth of the old
'out of sight, out of mind' (and conscience) truism. Cute story!

Title: Behind Every Great Man... · Author: annmarwalk · Times: Mid
Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 52
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-14 02:09:14
Oh dear! I can sympathize with Denethor in his floral confusion 
telling flowers apart has never been a strong point, I'm mostly content
just to look at them and admire. But Mormegil makes such an effort to
make Denethor look good, even to the extent of signing Denethor's name
to the inquiry as to Finduilas's favorite flowers, that now the poor
bridegroom will have to keep track of flower names when clearly he's
already somewhat flustered. An amusing ficlet!

Title: Drawing Straight With Crooked Lines · Author: Fiondil · Genres:
Drama · ID: 76
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-14 03:15:54
Fiondil draws out clearly what Boromir's failure can and does in the
end help to facilitate, when perhaps nothing less would have done to
set things on a path where there was hope of victory. I liked the
calmness of the hall, and Boromir's initial reactions to Mandos  both
nicely detached, and the latter also amusing. Maybe a touch too calm
for me in the end, but then, I like the turbulence of Boromir's
character and find him to be most interesting when he's at crisis
points. It's a nicely written story, though, and those wanting
redemption for Boromir will surely appreciate it.

Title: Golfing Fever · Author: lbilover · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest ·
ID: 75
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-14 03:20:18
I admit that I had a serious moment of hesitation over this story. In
the first place, while I enjoy well-written fanfic, usually my
interests run towards other areas in Eriador (ones with Rangers in
them, more precisely). In the second, however, and more importantly: I
HATE golf. I do not see the point. At all. I am very much with
Ibilover's Bilbo on this one.

But I did end up reading it, and was hooked from the first chapter.
This one goes up with Daffodil's story about soccer-playing hobbits  a
hysterical, sexy combination that you never saw coming. Given my hatred
of golf, I found myself quite in accord with Frodo: who knew that
golfing terminology so leant itself to innuendo? Ibilover does not miss
an opportunity, or at least, I couldn't spy one she didn't pounce on,
but it never feels overdone, has a light, humorous touch, and the story
goes quickly, with the reader chortling and shaking her head all the
way.

Sam's apparently single-minded focus on golf is a source of much ironic
humor throughout, as is Frodo's running distracted commentary on the
joys of golfing (with Sam), and in the end, we discover that turnabout
is most definitely fair play. Merry makes for a funny interlude  I was
glad to see him, and his wicked sense of golfing style trotted out for
the occasion of his cousin's mysterious demands.

So thank you, Ibilover, for your careful interrogation of your father 
I appreciated it! Give this one a chance if you're into amusing,
light-hearted romantic comedy, even if you absolutely despise the game
of golf.

Title: The Captain and the King · Author: plasticChevy · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 738
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-07-14 03:25:32
This absolutely boggles my mind that this tale has not been nominated
before this. I went to the log from previous tales - and lo and behold
- it was not there. Imagine my joy to think that I, undeserving lover
of Boromir and plasticChevy's wondrous tales, am able to nominate this
glorious story.

I usually don't read AU's - but this one grabbed at my heart and held
it - I have read it at least five times and not once, not once, have I
been disappointed. Even though I know what is going to happen next... I
am still on tenter-hooks waiting, biting my nails. Never have I found
such a touching, heart-wrenching, tension-filled, angst-overflowing,
wondrous tale of what might have been. The premise was perfect and
believable.

I don't think one moment went by that I did not have my heart in my
throat as PC took these two wonderful, stalwart men through terrors and
trials unimaginable. Their growing friendship and love was just a
delight to read. Their courage and fortitude exemplary.

The characters are all true to Tolkien's world - Aragorn is perfect as
King, Boromir is absolutely gorgeous as Steward, and those in the
perifery are splendid.

I absolutely adore this story! I do not even have the words to say how
much I love this tale. Thank you, PC, for sharing this monumentous
work.

Title: Geometry · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble · ID:
80
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-14 03:28:28
A brief, poignant representation of Denethor and Faramir, after
Boromir's death. The childhood image of a clumsy, lopsided triangle,
points for people joined together, is undone and one can imagine the
gaping division between Faramir and his father quite clearly.

Title: The Steward's Tale · Author: plasticChevy · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 739
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-07-14 03:35:16
From the moment this tale opens with Boromir and Faramir working out,
my heart was taken by this story. I loved the brothers' interaction. I
loved Gil's place in this.

My heart went out to the little creature that has so been so profoundly
touched by the erstwhile Steward of Gondor. I love how she must work so
diligently to earn the respect of those around her. I love the group of
'spies' that she pulls together so that her lord, her Steward and his
King are protected. - Ah! It's a great tale - and well-written too!

Oh! and the pictures are awesome too!

As for Boromir and Aragorn - the friendship that grew in her previous
tale, The Captain and the King, is even stronger and purer... if such
could be the case. The two of them have grown into a fiercesome duo -
fighting for Gondor against all who would harm her.

And there are those there - besides the known Orcs and such - the inner
terror that tries to rules the halls of Minas Tirith are potent and
nasty.

Boromir's captivity is horrid... and his dearest servant and faithful
companion, Borlas is so sweet...

Incredible tale - I sit and wait for each installment. Thank you!

Title: Free and Gay · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 81
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-14 03:35:27
Ah, poor Boromir, prisoner to the covetous looks of the ambitious
mothers of Minas Tirith! Very understated slashiness, and the brotherly
banter was fun. Faramir has no idea of what awaits him, once the ladies
of the court begin to notice him. Boromir does, and finds more than one
reason to wish to spend Yule in the field, in the company of soldiers
and such celebrations as they can arrange for themselves.

Title: The Rose in the Courtyard · Author: claudia6032000 · Races:
Cross-Cultural: The Fellowship · ID: 560
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-14 19:31:41
Damrod finds Frodo contemplating the single blooming rose in the
gardens of the Houses of Healing and finds each wonderful, and begs the
Ringbearer's pardon for possible rough treatment in Ithilien.

Some slight grammatical errors, but a pleasing story.

Msg# 8202

CORRECTION to MEFA Reviews for October 3 (Part 2) Posted by Ann Walker October 03, 2007 - 5:25:55 Topic ID# 8202
The beginning of the first review in this set was inadvertently cut
off. Sorry, Juno!

Title: Tamer's Tale · Author: juno_magic · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID:
41
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-09 01:15:49
I've seen a very few stories that attempt to give Gandalf a romantic
interest. They are usually well-written, and I can see how it might
happen, but there's an essential something that's missing  intuition,
I guess, whatever it is that makes you go, "Aha, so that's how it
works!" Juno's story supplies me with that "Aha!" moment.

Juno's writing is strong, and features her usual story-within-a-story
frame, the narrator speaking directly to the reader to frame the
locale, the history, put the question in the reader's mind, invite the
reader in. And then she switches to her primary character, who tells
the rest  Juno has that enviable gift of telling a fully lived out
life in just a few words. She doesn't need many, for all are well
chosen. One gets a strong sense of the isolation of Himling, of its
being a waymarker, a boundary stone (not just having one)  it stands
on the borders between myth and reality, permanently linked to
legendary Himring, between one world and the next. It is a place where
a wizard does not simply come, but in some way dwells, on the border of
any map of Middle-earth, forgotten and forgetting, and imbued with its
own curious remembrances.

Tamer's acceptance of her place in the life of this tiny society, and
her devotion to her master, the Grey Wizard who occasionally comes for
a respite from carrying the rest of the world's burdens on his
shoulders, is well-portrayed. We watch her fall in love in a way that
makes sense in the context of her life, and requires no questions nor
any extraneous declarations of love or the sorts of courtly romantic
episodes one often sees deployed in romance stories.

Gandalf's reactions, too, make sense, and I love the ending  the way
in which Gandalf has to sacrifice something for a love he will never be
able to settle into. Juno gives an explanation in author's notes of
what is at stake, and what this episode in his life could mean in terms
of canonical events, but really, it isn't needed. The story makes sense
on its own terms, and I think the thing that cements it for me is that
Gandalf does not fall in love with someone who is like him, or with
someone who is classically beautiful, or one of the Eldar  in some
sense, they are too much akin. Gandalf is attracted and bound
eventually to that which is different from him  he goes out of himself
quite literally here, becoming something that no other of his kind has
been  save, perhaps, Melian. And so he is able to understand, not just
know, human love and human grief in a way that no other Istari ever
shall.

Beautiful story, Juno, and beautifully told. I'd recommend this to any
Tolkien fan.

Msg# 8203

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 3, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Berni Crumb October 03, 2007 - 7:14:37 Topic ID# 8201
Ann,

The header info for the first review here is missing. What story is it and
who reviewed it?
Thanks!

Vorondavý ar linalmiý,
Rhyselle

Fantasy remains a human right: we make in our measure and in our derivative
mode, because we are made: and not only made, but made in the image and
likeness of a Maker. -- J.R.R. Tolkien, On Fairy-Stories, 1939

On 10/3/07, Ann Walker <ann@marwalk.com> wrote:
>
> I've seen a very few stories that attempt to give Gandalf a romantic
> interest. They are usually well-written, and I can see how it might
> happen, but there's an essential something that's missing ý intuition,
> I guess, whatever it is that makes you go, "Aha, so that's how it
> works!" Juno's story supplies me with that "Aha!" moment.
>
> Juno's writing is strong, and features her usual story-within-a-story
> frame, the narrator speaking directly to the reader to frame the
> locale, the history, put the question in the reader's mind, invite the
> reader in. And then she switches to her primary character, who tells
> the rest ý Juno has that enviable gift of telling a fully lived out
> life in just a few words. She doesn't need many, for all are well
> chosen. One gets a strong sense of the isolation of Himling, of its
> being a waymarker, a boundary stone (not just having one) ý it stands
> on the borders between myth and reality, permanently linked to
> legendary Himring, between one world and the next. It is a place where
> a wizard does not simply come, but in some way dwells, on the border of
> any map of Middle-earth, forgotten and forgetting, and imbued with its
> own curious remembrances.
>
> Tamer's acceptance of her place in the life of this tiny society, and
> her devotion to her master, the Grey Wizard who occasionally comes for
> a respite from carrying the rest of the world's burdens on his
> shoulders, is well-portrayed. We watch her fall in love in a way that
> makes sense in the context of her life, and requires no questions nor
> any extraneous declarations of love or the sorts of courtly romantic
> episodes one often sees deployed in romance stories.
>
> Gandalf's reactions, too, make sense, and I love the ending ý the way
> in which Gandalf has to sacrifice something for a love he will never be
> able to settle into. Juno gives an explanation in author's notes of
> what is at stake, and what this episode in his life could mean in terms
> of canonical events, but really, it isn't needed. The story makes sense
> on its own terms, and I think the thing that cements it for me is that
> Gandalf does not fall in love with someone who is like him, or with
> someone who is classically beautiful, or one of the Eldar ý in some
> sense, they are too much akin. Gandalf is attracted and bound
> eventually to that which is different from him ý he goes out of himself
> quite literally here, becoming something that no other of his kind has
> been ý save, perhaps, Melian. And so he is able to understand, not just
> know, human love and human grief in a way that no other Istari ever
> shall.
>
> Beautiful story, Juno, and beautifully told. I'd recommend this to any
> Tolkien fan.
>


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Msg# 8204

Re: Question? Re-writing. Posted by aure\_enteluva October 03, 2007 - 23:45:47 Topic ID# 8194
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, heartofoshun@... wrote:
>
> Whoops! I just realized that I think I do have a problem. A drabble
series
> of mine has been nominated, that I still am adding to--thought of it
as a
> complete set when it was entered, but realize I have added a chapter
or two since
> then and might add more. Perhaps it should be changed to a WIP.
>
> It's number 388 "It Gives a Lovely Light"
>
> Oshun
>

Hiya, Oshun!

I've discussed this with some of the other volunteers, and I think it
will be best if it stays where it is. I don't like to move stories
around this late in the competition except for WIPs that are
completed, and I think it will just be simpler all around if we leave
it in its current main category. Obviously you can't anticipate
situations like this; I was only saying for people to label their
pieces at WIP if they *expected* to be adding to them, situations like
yours will pop up and there's not much we can do to say "no" to the
muses. :-)

What I can do, if you like, is add a line to your summary saying your
piece is an ongoing serial - that the individual ficlets are finished
but you are still adding parts. Would you like for me to do that?

Marta

Msg# 8205

Re: Question? Re-writing. Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 03, 2007 - 23:48:01 Topic ID# 8194
In a message dated 10/3/2007 11:45:59 PM Eastern Standard Time,
melayton@gmail.com writes:

What I can do, if you like, is add a line to your summary saying your
piece is an ongoing serial - that the individual ficlets are finished
but you are still adding parts. Would you like for me to do that?




That would be so kind! Thank you so much.

Oshun



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Msg# 8206

MEFA Reviews for October 4, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann Walker October 04, 2007 - 5:21:00 Topic ID# 8206
Title: Reunion · Author: Fawsley · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 489
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-14 19:35:33
As one who delights in reading and writing Thorongil recognition
stories, this is wonderful! A gem!

Title: Twice blessed is help unlooked for · Author: Tanaqui · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 631
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-14 19:39:24
Imrahil is shocked to find that not only do the black ships coming up
the river disgorge not allies for the enemies of Gondor, but instead
more troops of defenders led by a far too familiar form from his past,
recognizing Thorongil in the form of the Man who leads them.

A wonderful story for those of us who love to see Thorongil reflected
in the form of our favorite Ranger of Eriador and King.

Title: The Slave of the Ring · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men · ID:
418
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-14 19:52:05
Boromir is already somewhat resentful of Aragorn taking command after
Gandalf's fall; but when they stop by Nimrodel to tend the Ringbearer
and Sam's wounds he finds a new glimpse of the Ring captures his
attention and imagination. One can certainly see the beginning of the
obsession that in the end will lead him to entreat Frodo to bring the
Ring to his city and then to command him to give it over.

Good use of mood and images, and a nice contrast between Boromir's
feelings and those of Gimli looking a the mithril corslet and Aragorn
ignoring the Ring to attend to Frodo's bruises.

Title: Come Back to Me (Drabble) · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 538
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-14 20:00:28
Some time long after Elessar's reign, apparently, the Ents themselves
are diminishing once more--gone treeish; aging remarkably; being
accidently slain by men in their wars on one another. And Treebeard
decides it is time once again to seek the Entwives.

A nice one with excellent images and thought behind it.

Title: South · Author: Aliana · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor or
Rohan · ID: 8
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-07-15 00:25:58
It's the custom, over at LiveJournal where I first read this achingly
beautiful story, to quote favorite passages from the story in our
comments. In a sense, it's a lazy way to respond; but on the other
hand, it provides quick and rewarding validation to the author that the
words and phrases she labored over with such loving care did, in fact,
resonate with her readers. It's probably a good thing the custom is not
used to great extent here at the MEFA's, else my review would consist
mostly of lines and phrases and oh, single words, because each word
Aliana has chosen is, quite simply, perfect. Can writing be both warm
and cool at the same time? The Meriadoc that Aliana has written here is
not the irrepressible Merry but the mature, thoughtful Meriadoc, and
her Eowyn is not only the loving Princess of Ithilien, but also
Dernhelm, the same companion of the road, the battlefield, who
journeyed with him to the edge of life and back.

The premise of the story itself seems familiar, uncomplicated: years
after the War, Meriadoc dreams of the great horses of Rohan [dreaming
bits of horses, manes and tails, fetlocks and hooves ... dreams of
their hoof beats passing off the edge of something] and travels by
himself to visit his comrade-in-arms Éowyn in Ithilien. Their reunion
is not so much full of recalling old war stories as it is the need for
communion with one who has shared a life-changing experience, the only
one who can really understand *how it was* at Dunharrow, at the
Pelennor.

What I found so heartrending about this story is that it gave me a
glimpse of the future, our future, when men and women who served
side-by-side in war will meet, not to reminisce, but to take comfort in
each other's quiet strength once again. It's really the story of There
and Back Again, for those who were not granted escape across the Sea.

Title: Exploring the Wild · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 30
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-07-15 00:45:53
EdorasLasss Bitty stories are always overflowing with laughter and
color and pure joy. This delightful excursion had its origins in a
single drabble, now seamlessly incorporated into the story of Boromir
and Faramirs first field trip, a day of introductory skills training
with two Ithilien rangers and a night spent under the stars.

This tale is a bit longer than many of the others, and introduces
several new characters, each of them perfectly realized for their
purpose. The rangers who volunteered to lead and guide the bitties
are both impressed with and amused by their young charges, taking back
with them an appreciation both for the constricted lives of city
children, and an understanding of the youngsters who will grow to
become their commanders and leaders. The young guardsman who sings them
to sleep with a ranger lullaby is boyishly endearing, and a fine foil
for Nanny. Events in the rollicking tale are alternately hilarious and
winsome: the boys wide-eyed disbelief when Nanny reveals the planned
adventure; Boromirs banishment of Nanny from their tent because
["There aren't any girl Rangers, Nanny, and you are a girl, so you
can't play."]; bittyRanger!Faramir refusing to go to sleep without his
beloved stuffed rabbit.

ELs love for, and understanding of, young children shines throughout
with vividness and affection. Its such a treat to read these tales and
see the beginnings of the men our heroes will become.


Title: Chronicles of Blood · Author: Aervir · Times: Mid Third Age:
2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 390
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-07-15 00:58:46
A very nice interlude between Faramir and Mithrandir. Faramir is bored
with his studies of dry military history and tactics, and would rather
be reading something livelier, more epic. Aervir has given us a bit
of a different view of Faramir, showing that he can be just as whiney
and petulant as any other schoolboy, a wonderfully realistic dimension
to his character  I don't think we've seen him too much of him at this
gawky, difficult age. It's very telling, too, that he's too tired and
restless to make the connection himself between the dry official
accounts, tallies of supplies and troop movements, and the very
personal tales behind the military actions. I also really like the way
he almost becomes embarrassed when he realizes he's sounding childish
and complaining - certainly it would be painful for him to imagine
himself somehow diminished in Mithrandir's sight. The warmth and
affection of their relationship shines through clearly, a theme I
always enjoy reading.

[These dry chronicles were not written with ink, but... with the blood
of ordinary men.]

Although this tale is short, it is powerful. It's very easy to imagine
Faramir remembering and internalizing those words to share with his own
children, that they might recognize and appreciate the sacrifices made
for them.


Title: Never Lack · Author: Ruby Nye · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: General Drabble · ID: 453
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-07-15 01:02:24
This drabble is horribly creepy in a creepiness-creeps-up-on-you sort
of way. It's not so ominous in the first reading, but oh, the second,
and the third - it just made me hunch myself up and look over my
shoulder worriedly. I'm frightened for the hobbits who had to bite
their tongues and move very gingerly around this character. If there's
an entry for Creeps of Middle-Earth in the Encyclopedia of Arda, this
guy's picture would be in it, right next to Gothmog The Potato-Headed
Orc and Grima Wormtongue.

All joking aside, probably the most disturbing aspect about this
drabble is that's it's so very plausible. We've seen this in our own
age: persons who consider themselves insulted and abused, either in
actuality or in their imaginations, who somehow manage to find the
opportunities to exact their revenge upon the world. We saw them at Abu
Ghraib and Virginia Tech. It's timeless, and universal. The Dark is
still with us.



Title: Brotherhood · Author: Bodkin · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017
TA · ID: 733
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-15 17:46:12
I've always enjoyed this series of tales, and the exploration of the
developing relationship between Elladan, Elrohir and Estel.

It seems typical of Estel in the last tale to apologise for spoiling
the day. I liked Elladan's comment: 'Adar never let Naneth come back in
until after he had finished the splint. The 'never' speaks volumes for
the amount of practise Elrond has had!

His later comments about watching and loving over and over are
desperately sad. How many chldren like Estel have they watched grow -
and then seen them die like Arathorn?


Jay

Title: To Represent the Elves · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Humor ·
ID: 810
Reviewer: Wimsey · 2007-07-15 22:14:20
This story set during the first part of the Fellowships journey
captures perfectly the spirit of the Hobbit Pippin, and the elf
Legolas. It represents so well the essence of what I think Tolkien
envisioned their personalities to be. I particularly loved how much of
the Legolas from the books was represented in the dialogue and in the
actions that happened during the tale.

Title: Poking The Badger · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 209
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-16 02:22:43
A delightful story dealing with the consequences, to Merry and Pippin,
of drinking the ent-draughts, when it comes to settling back into Shire
life. Some things will never be the same!

Excellent characterisation and dialogue. The allusions to the past are
very natural, and add to the sense of connection and family.

Title: For the Dwarves, Gimli · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 155
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-16 02:25:14
There's no doubt that Tolkien's works are male-heavy and female-light.
I don't think he was particularly sexist, at least for his time, and he
did create some outstanding female characters. But it's only in
fanfiction that we get to explore, and read, more about the female half
of those lengthy family trees.

Here is one such story, that introduces Nandi, mother of Gimli. She is
seen not as a warrior or craftswoman, but as a mother - fiercely
devoted to her son, and practical, sending him on his way to Imladris
with extra treats and supplies.

An intriguing slice of family life among the Dwarves, as well as a
chapter dealing with the ramifications, in the Fellowship's quest, of
Nandi's generosity to her son.

Very entertaining!

Title: Rohan's Future · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Humor: Gondor or
Rohan · ID: 79
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-16 04:07:21
I am glad that I am not in a position to be thinking of having
children. This speaks precisely to the horrific fantasy of parenthood
that would be guaranteed to make one begin thinking that birth control
is a great and glorious thing and should be employed ruthlessly.

I can quite imagine that between Lothiriel's personality, with its
ruthless logic, and Eomer's enthusiasm and energy, you would end up
with Aelfwine, Eomund, and Hrothgar as offspring: beautifully innocent
little sadists in the Freudian sense  never intending harm, yet
single-mindedly in pursuit of requiring their environment to answer to
their desires and interests, to the disadvantage of anything qualifying
as 'environment.' You can't but love them& from the distance of perhaps
a few miles. From up close, as Uncle Amrothos discovers, maintaining
one's sanity and composure is a constant battle that only the King and
Queen seem capable of managing with anything like serenity.

Rohan's future will most definitely be in smart and eager hands, but as
Eomer notes, the kingdom has to survive the growing pains of its three
young princes, to the point where some active concern for the welfare
of others, rather than a benign neglect, begins to take hold. Of
course, one might argue Amrothos has not entirely learned that lesson 
what on earth was he thinking in deciding that having his nephews build
a siege engine was a good idea?  but then again, temporary insanity is
a plea that would, if it were able to be used, have a lot of mileage in
the royal court of Rohan, I suspect.

In any event, a hysterical story, brilliantly written  well done,
Madeleine! Highly recommended to any Tolkien-lover.

Title: Merry's Wedding · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest ·
ID: 84
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-16 04:23:08
Given the opening paragraph, with its premise of Merry marrying Estella
twice, one halfway expects some madcap prank gone wrong or something of
that sort. What the reader gets instead is a glimpse into a very
intense bit of imaginative play by the younger hobbits of Brandy Hall,
inspired by a real wedding that is soon to come. They decide to stage
their own, as realistically as they can, and everyone sets to work to
make it happen, including Merry, drafted as the bridegroom to Estella
who has been talked into playing the part of the bride. With Frodo
dragged in to play the part of Mayor and officiator, the tweens even
get permission from Rorimac to borrow a priceless heirloom that is
traditionally used in weddings.

Some of the adults get wind of it, and even sneak out to watch, but
they respect both the play and its seriousness. Lovely little tale,
Larner!

Title: The Dwarf Dagger · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: The
Shire · ID: 85
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-16 04:49:33
A thoroughly unpleasant tragedy, spurred by the spiteful, arrogant
behavior of one Lalia and tweenish hurt feelings that come of it. It is
the sort of thing that leaves one wondering how this disaster managed
not to be averted  it seems like it so easily could have been. And
yet, fortune doesn't follow logic and angry, upset hobbits don't
either. Bilbo is right  never neglect the courtesies, or at least,
don't trample on them in such a way as to indicate that courtesy itself
is unimportant.

The ending felt a bit rushed, but then again, there is nothing, in a
sense to dwell on  the senselessness of the tragedy is appropriate to
the circumstances and requires no dwelling.

Title: A Useful Skill · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children ·
ID: 46
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:12:22
This is a lovely scene between young Faramir and Denethor, and much
more like what I had always imagined their relationship to be before
war came to Gondor. The child's voice is very strong and rang true to
my minds' ear. Denethor, too, seems very in character with canon (as
little as is directly stated about him). A particularly strong moment
is the one in which Denethor realizes his son is not obsessing over yet
another book; his surprise and confusion, combined with his
canon-assisted reputation for impatience with his younger son, make
that quite an exciting moment for readers who are automatically
cheering for Faramir to be worthy of his father's praise.

Title: Could Will Have Its Way · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:12:53
A very nice, though dark, piece. The repetition and variation of the
refrain-type line gives this drabble a very musical, or at the least
lyrical, quality. While not truly the ravings of a mad man, there is a
certain desperation implied here that increases toward the end and
accelerates the tone from despairing and lonely to utterly hopeless and
obsessed, as well as a feeling of foreboding and the constant memory of
an old ache woven in between the words. Very nicely done and well worth
the reading, particularly since giving so much in so short a space is a
skill I find difficult.

Title: Perturbation of Fate · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 428
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:13:31
This is a very vivid drabble, a story form I find very hard to do well.
Sound works hard to set the scene and make this vignette come alive,
and while the noises the ocean makes were never directly mentioned,
they are what came to mind as I read and stay with me now as I write.
The melancholy of Maglor's vigil comes through very strongly as well,
grouped as it is with anger and frustration. As I've come to expect
from Rhapsody's writing, this is an excellent characterization of one
of the sons of Feanor and his relationship with the silmaril, handled
delicately with a caring master's touch. No one theme is over used or
underplayed, but all are woven together neatly and securely in a small
space and time.

Title: Seen in the Halls of Dwarrowdelf · Author: Aruthir · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 73
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:15:59
Wow. It even reads dwarf-like: bold, rhythmically, hammering on the
point that pride and vanity always go before a fall, strong. Mature,
but still a little rash in its sorrow. The images I saw as I read it
were very vivid, very colorful, which surprised me considering it's set
very very deep underground. My room nearly echoed with the hammers and
voices of dwarves. An excellent piece.

Title: Youngest Son · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Second Age or
Earlier · ID: 406
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:17:13
Very nice! And a wonderful reminder not to overlook the physique of the
"scrawny" lads either. ;) I think, though, that Earwin's change of
demeanor seems a little sudden. A bit of insight into her thinking
about Finarfin as he deals with her brother's injury and subsequent
mischievousness might ease us into the transition along with her. He's
***WONDERFUL*** with the younger boy, and suddenly as smooth and
charming as his eldest brother or a couple of his nephews once he
relaxes. Funny how that happens in human interactions too. I'd like to
see your Finarfin with Amrod and Amras as boys, perhaps a companion
piece as they are swept up into the quest for the Silmarils? I'm so
glad I clicked that story link. :)

Title: Lord Námo's Yule Gift · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor · ID: 335
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:18:15
How wonderfully sweet and funny a story this was! I think this is the
first piece I've seen delve into the realm of Tolkien's afterlife, and
it was an interesting look with a surprising cast of characters. I was
glad to see that, in your Halls of Mandos, rest awaits even the most
troubled of Middle-earth's inhabitants. The characterizations of Merry
and Pippin were spot on to the goofy lads from the book and I was very
impressed with the way their relationship seemed to mesh well with the
immortal inhabitants of the Halls. The descriptions of the rooms were
lovely, but I believe my favorite part was the discussion of Yule and
Yavanna's generosity with decorations. It was, indeed, a lovely gift
for Namo, and an equally lovely one *from* Namo as well. Bravo.

Title: Seeking to Please · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring
War · ID: 193
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:18:55
This was quite an interesting character piece in many regards, most
notably of Elrohir, whom I've often read as less than enthusiastic
about his sister's mate. I appreciated that Aragorn/Estel/the
Dunadan/Thorongil/whatever his name is, respected warrior though he
was, never got so arrogant that his mate didn't make him nervous. This
also seems a good prequel to the scene in the films when Arwen arrives
in Gondor. I enjoyed it very much.

Title: Journeys in High Places · Author: Illwynd · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 259
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:19:56
The relationships between these men are very well done, described
vividly with very few words and none of those wasted. Your Denethor
reads much like the one I pictured in my mind, without his madness
corrupting his love for his children. What is/was his reaction to
knowing his children were nearly taken from him by an avalanche? My
other unanswered question is, did they make their goal and finish the
journey in the time they'd decided? It was a very nice "how Boromir
learned it all" situation as background for the canon trip up the
mountain in Fellowship, and a good gap filler for the relationship
between elder and younger son.

Title: City of Trees · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 641
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:20:22
Very clever. I don't suppose two such formidable elves could live year
after year without quarrels. Luckily they have plenty of time to get
over them as well. A very nice idea, and a very telling character
piece-- in which one character never appears at all!

Title: Dissonance · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor
· ID: 450
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:20:32
I hope it will not seem harsh of me to say that at first glance, I
hesitated to read this story. I've read very few good works of fiction
that use the present tense well. Having finished it now, I will say
that this is not one such. The draw into this story is slow, with just
enough details to pique the curiosity without being too telling.
Surprisingly little of the character is revealed until she encounters
the man behind the door, but the details we are given appeal to all the
senses. I was especially impressed with the excellent use of scents and
odors, which it seems are often overlooked in favor of visual details
even though the sense of smell triggers so many memories. Reading this,
we experience along with the character her meeting with the man behind
the door. We don't just see what happens and observe her reactions; we
feel and smell and see through her perspective. Very excellently done.

Msg# 8207

MEFA Reviews for October 4, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann Walker October 04, 2007 - 5:23:07 Topic ID# 8207
Title: Escape · Author: Bodkin · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA ·
ID: 24
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:20:39
Ooh, a Radagast story! The Dunadan grew on me quickly, and I was most
impressed with his ability to win over the elvin captain without ever
humbling himself more than necessary. At several points I laughed aloud
at the dialogue, which flows very naturally. My beta-reader's eye
caught a typo ["I picked up my escort no more thaT a day or two after
parting from Mithrandir and my captain."] and there was a bit of
pronoun over use as the first word in the sentence, but aside from the
latter being a common error of my own, it fits with the speaker voice,
making it an understandable decision.

Title: A Passing Troll · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Humor: The Shire
or Buckland · ID: 210
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:21:38
Oh that's terrible! And yet I laughed, so I suppose it wasn't
unbearably so. I like Sam's solution for the situation (very practical
and straightforward, just like him), and Pippin's boasting falls well
in line with his mischievous nature. The mix of practicality and jest
feels quite Tolkienian. Well done.

Title: Signs · Author: permilea · Races: Hobbits: Children · ID: 384
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:28:51
How darling! There's Frodo's characteristic patience and Pippin's
mischievous nature, and with a healthy dose of humor besides. Frodo, it
seems, is a hobbit with quite an understanding of children, or at least
of that particular child. It's easy to see, with this sort of basis,
how their friendship could continue through their adult lives.

Title: Cophetua · Author: Jael · Genres: Romance · ID: 242
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:34:16
Wow. What a wonderful way to spend an evening! You wrote very strong
women in this piece, not the least of which is Aunt Asa. In spite of
the short amount of time she is before us, her life and choices leave a
lasting impression. Your Thranduil is quite a man in many respects, and
it is easy to see why Sigrid loves him so... twice. Similarly, your
Legolas is very mature and the relationship between the two follows
more closely with my impressions of canon than some other stories I've
read. Also, thank you for the thorough author's notes. I always find
such things very helpful (and I shall remember 'gweth' for the future).
A lovely piece.

Title: Field of Dreams · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama · ID: 374
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:37:31
This piece reminds me, a bit, of the Laura Ingalls Wilder books that I
read and re-read countless times as a child. It is heartrending, the
picture of a manless Gondor you've painted. The character voice is
great and does so much for the story, but I'm afraid the last two
sentences really don't add much to the ending. I think a stronger image
to end on would be, instead of simply restating that her husband is
dead, to fill him into the memories she's seeing, so we as readers will
feel the hole he has left for ourselves, closer to the way she does. It
is always better to see than be told. I teared up as I read, I enjoyed
this so much. Thank you for it.

Title: More Than Just Years · Author: Llinos · Genres: Adventure: Minas
Tirith · ID: 362
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:47:39
How wonderfully sweet! A great look into the relationship between the
wizard and the youngest hobbit, disturbers of the peace both of them.
I've never given much thought to baby hobbits, but Pippin was adorable
and it was heart warming to see Merry, even then, looking after him so
well. I'd have a hard time climbing a 50 foot hay wagon too, the poor
little lad! I find myself wanting to hug all three of them, and even
more so at the end when the faith Pip put in his gift from the wizard
is revealed. A very nice little piece.

Title: Tamer's Tale · Author: juno_magic · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID:
41
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:48:03
And very nicely done wizard romance it is! Aside from a few typos that
my beta's eye caught, this was an effortless read with a distinctive
poetic feel all its own. I am impressed to see a short piece answer the
"how" of Gandalf's humanity so well. Bravo.

Title: Not Fade Away · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later
Ages · ID: 127
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:49:25
Wow, wow and again I say thee wow! I love your play with names. I love
the puns. I love how the Rivers corporation celebrates the winter
holidays, costumes and all, and I most overwhelmingly adore the cast of
characters and how they've adapted to the times and places in which
they live. You've created such a plausible and happy world that the
elements of Mariposa's life before the job change stand out like dirty,
smelly sore thumbs. I think it helps that I've been to Chicago and,
while I don't know it exceptionally well, memories of the dirty snow
and joggers at the lake were readily available for me to fill in as
moving wall paper for your story. One of the best modern girl meets
elves stories I've ever read. This was a GREAT way to spend an evening!

Title: Crossing towards Sunrise · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 14
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-16 05:50:07
Very very nice. The catalogue of Elrond's losses is, once one sees it
all listed, quite devastating. I appreciate the way, even with all
those sadnesses on his mind, you've let the Hobbits help him smile. His
bitter-sweet reunion with his wife, though, is the master stroke here.
I must confess I thought the narrator to be Cirdan for a while, but
when Shadowfax was mentioned I realized who it must be. A very nice
read. Thank you for it.

Title: Five Things That Never Happened to Theodred and Boromir ·
Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 545
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-07-17 23:47:40
One of the greatest delights I've found in fanfiction is how a skilled
writer can take a minor canon character and breath such life into him
that, in retrospect, it's difficult to imagine Tolkien's world without
him. Such is the case with Théodred, son of Théoden: when we first hear
of him in The Two Towers he is already dead; in Unfinished Tales he
did manage to live for three pages. In the films he was robbed of
twenty years of his life even before he died (for he was of an age with
Boromir, not younger and prettier than Éomer and Éowyn). Yet in the
hands of writers like Kortirion, Scribendi, and EdorasLass, Théodred
lives life to the full, with loyal and devoted companions at arms, an
affectionate family, a steadfast lover. Despite the Shadow that, to
some extent, oppresses all of Middle-Earth, Théodred's life is rich and
full of joy.

Well, mostly. In this chilling series, EdorasLass kills Théodred three
times, breaks his heart once, and forces him to live to a ripe old age
before he is able to snatch any happiness at all. (Thank heaven for
small mercies.) In the course of wreaking such havoc she also
instigates war between Gondor and Rohan, slaughtering the leaders and
ruling families of each nation and clearing the way for the triumph of
the Dark Lord. Alternately, she adds a Tenth Walker who must watch with
growing fear the changes in his beloved before dying valorously at his
side.

* Happy sigh * Of course it's all angsty, and heartbreaking, and
relentlessly wibble-inducing. But it's also a marvelously satisfying
read, especially to those who know that this AU is AU to her standard
AU, where Boromir and Théodred and Théodred's children and Théodred's
cat all live in blissful ignorance of the future that canon holds for
them.


Title: God of Wrath · Author: Katzilla · Genres: Drama · ID: 369
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-18 05:31:17
Wow! This is remarkably close to being a romance from a writer who says
she cannot write such things. Yet it isn't the usual "boy meets girl"
scenario. As always, Katzilla's images are stunning; vivid, graphic and
dark but not overly worked or handled with kid gloves. She is certainly
never afraid to delve into the darkest parts of human minds and hearts,
or the depths of cruelty the forces of the Enemy could conjure! Eomer
here seems to me a very good mix of the film's brash, angry young man
and the mature, responsible warrior of the books. The narrator, too, is
a warrior in her own way, soldiering on through the trials of daily
life after horrible loss-- and horrendous torture-- and that warrior's
spirit seems to be what binds the two, even if it's for only a short
time. The conflict between the two, the universal argument of ending
conflict once and for all versus being a compassionate victor, is very
well balanced within the narrative, and in history as well. The
problems that plague Katzilla's characters are not those of a specific
story or fandom; they are as real for us as they are to her characters,
making each work of fiction seem far more realistic than many would
dare hope.

Title: My Treasure · Author: Armariel · Genres: Poetry: With Hobbits ·
ID: 332
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-18 15:13:33
Of all the writers of poetry focused on the times and characters of the
World of Arda, Armariel is the one who almost always evokes the
greatest emotional response in me. This poem, looking forward to the
coming of Samwise Gamgee-Gardner to Tol Eressea, is one I find
especially moving, and the imagery evoked by the word choice is
exceedingly powerful. This isn't just an incipid arrival anticipated,
but one that has the two of them foreseeing the type of greeting that
one expects when new worlds are born. It will be a collision of joys
enough to light the skies of the Undying Lands with the delights of
renewal both shall know as they come together once more. Images are
powerful, words dripping with anticipation and eagerness.

I am proud to nominate this free-verse poem for the perusal of all
others.

Title: The Three Hunters · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure ·
ID: 333
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-18 15:55:42
In this story we don't see much directly of the familiar Hobbits of
which Dreamflower usually writes, but more the thoughts and memories of
Aragorn, Gimli, and Legolas as they follow the trail left by the Uruks
who captured them at Amon Hen and carried them across Rohan to the
eaves of Fangorn Forest. As each remembers incidents in which the
abilities, charm, and determination of Merry and Pippin to do all that
could be done for Frodo's sake were best displayed to them before they
set out from Rivendell, each of the three hunters binds himself to the
search for these two young cousins, finding the alternative
unthinkable. Then at Isengard they meet with the quarry and all seems
so very hobbity--food, drink, shelter, and means for comfort
found--save these have clearly been driven, beaten, and savaged--as
well as having grown both physically and emotionally as a result of
their experiences.

A wonderful story to illustrate just how special was the creation of
Hobbits....

Title: Ours · Author: Queen Galadriel · Races: Hobbits · ID: 334
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-18 16:11:10
All Hobbits appear to have a magnetism to them, drawing those of good
will to champion them and seek out all that can be done for them; but
this capacity is especially strong in the person of Frodo Baggins. In
spite of (or perhaps because of) his apparent fragility Frodo draws to
himself the love and protective instincts of those who come under his
spell. In this story we see Sam accepting Bilbo's inclusion of himself
as one of those who sees Frodo as "ours," then another vignette in
Gondor where Sam recognizes Aragorn has come to love the younger
Baggins as deeply as himself, and so Sam is willing to accept that
Frodo is "ours" as much as far as Lord Strider is involved as is true
for himself. Then in the final thoughts, the "ours" shifts to Merry,
Pippin, and himself hoping that this leaving of Middle Earth grants the
healing their Frodo so clearly needs.

Queen Galadriel is a young writer who has yet managed to find her feet
in her writing; and in this story she has managed to clearly and
convincingly communicate the love these all feel for Frodo and share it
with the rest who have come to the conviction that Frodo is equally
"ours."

Title: Lord Námo's Yule Gift · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor · ID: 335
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-18 16:44:51
When Meriadoc Brandybuck and Peregrin Took arrive in the Halls of
Mandos just before Yule of the year 70 of the Fourth Age, it appears
that the ancient edifice will suffer greatly at the event. After all,
who else would enter those hallowed halls to set the souls of the
departed mortals among whom they find themselves wishing after Yule
decorations and perhaps setting off a minor revolt? When the rest of
the Valar look on this advent with amusement and seek to give the two
Hobbits what they wish Namo finds it both amusing and embarrassing as
he finds ropes of balsam and wreaths of candles shining everywhere and
himself under the mistletoe....

But when our irrepressible two seek to make certain that Namo himself
isn't alone at Yule they find he is willing to allow them to join his
own Yule plans as he sits by the sleeping Turgon, who is nearly ready
to know the Judgement that is his by rights. And all learn more of the
nature of ineffible joy and delight.

Fiondil's ability to portray so many characters, including the Valar
themselves, so beautifully, with humor and love, make his stories ever
a joy to read, and this one a true delight.

Title: Yours to command · Author: Lialathuveril · Genres: Romance: With
Rohirrim · ID: 129
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2007-07-19 19:29:45
"Yours to command" by Lialathuveril is her third big Éomer/
Lothiriel-saga so far. The first one, "Of Falcons and Mûmakil", set the
theme the author feels dedicated to ever since, and "Yours to command"
is the most surprising variation so far. When Èomer of Rohan ponders
the thought where he should search for a suitable wife and queen, he
remembers Prince Imrahil and the fact that his noble battle companion
has a daughter. Perhaps she might be the right choice... but when he
makes the first, careful steps in this particular direction, people
seem to be rather uncomfortable with the mere idea. And when the young
Rohan King finally gets to know the Princess, he suddenly understands
why... for Lothiriel is blind.

I doubted for a while if I should really give away the special twist of
this tale, but Lothiriel's very unique perspective of a woman who has
to rely on her ears, her fingertips and her sense of smell to find her
way through a dark world is one of the aspects that make this story so
special and thrilling. Since the accident that took her sight away her
father is overly protective, and Éomer is like a fresh, unexpected wind
in a universe that keeps her firmly in place, an obedient daughter, a
noble woman constantly in need of a helping hand. Their love story is
delightfully told, full of humor, sizzling passion and wonderful
characterization. Lothiriel is strong, clever, courageous and utterly
believable, and Éomer is the hero every woman with a heart dreams of.
There is even a villain thirsting for revenge, and the reader spends a
lot of time biting fingernails and sitting on the edge of the chair
while a dangerous conspiracy unfolds. I guess I don't give too much
away if I reveal that in the end the lucky Rohan King actually gets his
girl... for "Yours to Command" is firmly rooted in canon, giving
delightful, strong-colored glimpses of rohirric life and Dol Amroth
nobility. completely with ballads, poems and a hysterically funny
"bride manual" for noble women by a certain Belector - the quotes from
that gloriously uptight and prude tome alone give the reader a good
snicker every time they appear.

If you love Éomer (and Lothiriel) and really good romances, this is the
choice for you.





Title: Moira · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 676
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2007-07-19 19:33:08
I have followed Illyria's writing for years, and she included the
thoughts and plans of the Valar once before, in her amazing story
"Divinity". Here she takes even a step further, and she describes the
creation of elves and men in wonderful, shining images, like this one:

[I am reminded of the red tinge in the eastern sky as I watched my Lord
kindle the light in the spirits of Men, a finite incandescence so
bright it nearly blinded me. Wake up, my children, my Lord had spoken,
to the sound of a deep, solemn chord that somehow trembled with
restlessness, an undertone of cries of glory, paid full in blood, and
laments of great loss, fierce with pride. Wake up, my Lord had said,
your time is brief, while the new song suffused the bones of the earth,
humming in the rivers, taking root.]

This time the Vala telling this astonishing tale watches the making of
an entirely different kind - not the Firstborn, not the race of Men or
dawarves (though each of them has its own, shining appearance in this
story) but the coming of... hobbits:

[They are hidden, my Lord, from the eyes of the enemy, because they
neither rise up against him nor do they have aught that he might wish
for himself, power and knowledge and craft. It is in their weakness
their strength lies.]

As a great hobbit fancier I was (of course!) delighted to find here
what both the Silmarillion and the Lord of the Rings refused to tell:
how did the halflings come into being, what made Ilùvatar create them
in the first place? Of course this is fanfiction, of course this is a
tale from Illyria's imagination only, but I can't help thinking that
even the Professor would have approved of what she does here - finding
the words to sing of Eru's plans for the Little People, of their
rustic, earthy way to celebrate life and to enjoy what they have been
given. The author has written many beautiful tales, but this is perhaps
the best and most "tolkienesque" tale she ever told.

Title: No Escape · Author: Aranel Took · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 324
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-19 19:51:43
This is a vivid and poignant snapshot of the brave Dwarves on the edge
of doom, about to fall to the orcs and Balrog in Khazad-dum. The
tension is palpable, as is the unnamed dwarf-woman's grim resolve.

Title: A Time to Reap · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Adventure:
Incomplete · ID: 415
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-20 07:23:49
In the story previous to this one, Aragorn was kidnapped and tortured
by disgruntled lords who thought they desired to return to the
government under the line of Stewards, and to rescue him Faramir was
forced to pretend to be one of the rebels, even to the point of
branding his beloved King on the shoulder to convince the rest that he
was indeed part of their plans. Now King and Steward need to undergo
reconciliation and to let go the fear and anger and guilt each bears in
his heart of hearts. The Queen and Princess Eowyn are able to convince
the two of them to leave the city for a time to find peace in the
countryside about the White Mountains and the farms at their bases.

An excellent depiction of how guilt and fear can override our good
sense, and the psychological aspects of seeking healing for these
maladies of the spirit.

Since Linda and Raksha began their partnership, LindaHoyland's writing
has markedly improved, becoming more intense and powerful; and her
choice of quotations to open each chapter is inspired.

Title: To Light the Way · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 12
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 18:12:25
I really like the teasing between the twins. Moments like this say so
much about their closeness: I have been foolish, brother, Elladan
said once they were alone.

Elrohir grinned at him. I can well believe it.

Elladan slapped him lightly. Try not to discourage me from my moment
of self-discovery, please, Elrohir. Those moments are few enough.
I like the differences between them too - Elladan is so much more
impatient than Elrohir. You can feel his tension and exasperation with
the wood-elves, and their apparent obliviousness to the encroaching
shadow.

Thranduil is right, though - he can do no more at this time than to
offer hope, but it is so vital. If his people despair, they will never
win the battle. I liked the twins' realisation of this at the end.

This line made me laugh out loud: 'Elrohir spat his mouthful of cider
back into his cup as discreetly as possible. Choking could be an
ill-advised move.' Poor Elrohir - there is nothing worse than suddenly
laughing in the middle of drinking something!!



Title: Journey Home · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood Elves ·
ID: 102
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 18:15:26
Nendir is a wonderful OC! He seems so young and vulnerable at first,
but his injury makes him realise the comradship of an elven patrol.

Legolas is wonderful as the patrol's captain, and I like the simple
expression of his worries about his father. Thranduil ... Thranduil is
just marvellous. Such a short walk-on part, but he steals the show! The
way his presence fills the chamber despite his humble dress, and his
gratitude for Nendir's words about Legolas.

A lovely story, Dot - I'd like to see more of Nendir!



Title: The man in the woods · Author: Dot · Races: Men: Eriador or
Rivendell · ID: 13
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 18:17:17
This is lovely, Dot. The small, incidental details you've included are
great - the little girl tucking the frayed end of her skirt into her
knickers; the children climbing over the fence the neighbour had put up
to stop his goat eating the washing. These tiny snippets add so much
life and colour to the story!

Little Falathren is so brave as she sits beside the dead warrior to
keep him company, but I feel sorry for her as they return to the
village - she sees that her job will always be to sit and wait, while
others do the great deeds. She could be a great warrior and Ranger too!


Title: Youngest Son · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Second Age or
Earlier · ID: 406
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 18:52:29
I really liked this story, and I rarely read anything much to do with
the Silmarillion!

The opening scenes on the seashore were beautiful - I loved your
descriptions here. Drowning elflings seem to be a very good way of
bringing hesitant couples together!!

Title: Escape · Author: Bodkin · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA ·
ID: 24
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 18:58:50
You have some wonderful characters here, even though they're unnamed.
The man - Isildur's heir, since he hails from Imladris and knows
Elrond's sons so well; but he's not Aragorn or Halbarad. The elf
captain - wonderful leadership, and I like the interaction with his
patrol. And his brother receives the reports? There's the guardian as
well.

Wonderful characterisations, Bodkin. I love this tale.

Title: And We Will Travel North · Author: bewize · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 39
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 19:05:31
I really like this, especially anything with the twins and Estel :>)

Love the last line: 'becoming for a short time that which we are not:
Men of the North.' I've always liked the image of Elladan and Elrohir
with the rangers, especially the idea that they only joined them to
support Aragorn.

Msg# 8208

Re: Question? Re-writing. Posted by Marta Layton October 04, 2007 - 15:27:04 Topic ID# 8194
Hi Oshun,

It's done. Let me know if anything needs correcting.

Marta

heartofoshun@aol.com wrote:
>
>
>
> In a message dated 10/3/2007 11:45:59 PM Eastern Standard Time,
> melayton@gmail.com <mailto:melayton%40gmail.com> writes:
>
> What I can do, if you like, is add a line to your summary saying your
> piece is an ongoing serial - that the individual ficlets are finished
> but you are still adding parts. Would you like for me to do that?
>
> That would be so kind! Thank you so much.
>
> Oshun
>

Msg# 8209

Re: Question? Re-writing. Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 04, 2007 - 16:11:54 Topic ID# 8194
Thank you so much.



Oshun


-----Original Message-----
From: Marta Layton <melayton@gmail.com>
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Thu, 4 Oct 2007 4:23 pm
Subject: Re: [MEFAwards] Re: Question? Re-writing.







Hi Oshun,

It's done. Let me know if anything needs correcting.

Marta

heartofoshun@aol.com wrote:
>
>
>
> In a message dated 10/3/2007 11:45:59 PM Eastern Standard Time,
> melayton@gmail.com <mailto:melayton%40gmail.com> writes:
>
> What I can do, if you like, is add a line to your summary saying your
> piece is an ongoing serial - that the individual ficlets are finished
> but you are still adding parts. Would you like for me to do that?
>
> That would be so kind! Thank you so much.
>
> Oshun
>





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Msg# 8210

MEFA Reviews for October 5, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann Walker October 05, 2007 - 5:36:52 Topic ID# 8210
Title: Beneath a Gibbous Moon · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 4
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 20:23:35
Wow - this was brilliant, Bodkin - perhaps your best yet. I'd come to
the conclusion that it *couldn't* be Legolas and Aragorn, or you
wouldn't have been so vague - but I never guessed Thranduil and
Isildur. That gives the story a whole new layer of sadness for them
both, because we know what happens. Very, very well done.


A tomorrow built on Hope as well.

Poor Aragorn is so despondent - knowing there is such a very slim
chance of any of them surviving, and knowing that he brought them all
here. He's right, it takes a special kind of courage to face almost
certain death against such odds.

Legolas is very elvish here - so calm and accepting, at peace with
whatever will happen despite his regrets and might-have beens. It would
be good to have someone like that at your side, I think.

Title: Great Oaks · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance · ID: 319
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 20:38:06
I love it when other people have birthdays! There is such a rush of
wonderful stories for us all to enjoy.

I simply loved Thranduil here. He seems so very elfy - yet quite
different to the Silvan elves. I like the way they simply up sticks and
move, without leaving a trace behind.

Love at first sight - that seems very elfy too. The moment Thranduil
saw the face among the leaves, I knew who she was, and that he was
lost.

The ending was great. I loved Faroth's astonishment when this totally
unknown elleth appears, and Thranduil immediately asks her to marry
him!


Title: Day and Night · Author: Peredhil lover · Genres: Drama: Youth ·
ID: 190
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 20:43:22
Poor Elrohir. His desperate determination to reach his brothers is
driving aside all his own exhaustion and pain - no wonder Glorfindel is
so concerned. I'm not surprised that Elrohir ignored him though, and
I'm glad Glorfindel saw the sense in a compromise. Trying to reason
with either of the twins at a time like this seems a *very* wasted
effort!

I loved the final scene with E3 all sleeping peacefully. Very nice, and
very sweet.

Title: Fell and Fair · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 526
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 20:50:33
This is wonderful! I love the idea of a series of drabbles from
different POVs before, during, and after the battle. You chose such
unusual characters, too - the widow, the wolf, and the warg for
instance, which make this so interesting.

Most of all I love the legend of the Grey Ghostriders sweeping to the
rescue before riding off again. A pity they weren't there for Eomund.

***

["She is our grandmother."]

*Grin*

I wish I could have seen Eorl's face at that!

I love this collection of drabbles - and the subject matter. I really
liked the twins' appearance described from the horse's POV.

Thank you for this wonderful update! There are two parts I particularly
love - Galadriel's musings on the fate of the males in her family,
destined to be warriors; and Elrohir's thoughts as they cross the
Anduin that all their training was focused on that moment. It's a
chilling thought.

I love the lembas blessing too - the qualities and strengths it confers
seem to sum up the twins so well!


Title: Lighting Fires · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure: Pre-Ring
War · ID: 95
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-07-20 22:42:17
I felt very sorry for Estel here - he tried so hard and didn't give up,
but he still couldn't solve the problem. He should have asked Elrohir
to start with - his brother was injured, but not unconscious; and he
has far greater experience.

Estel is learning some harsh lessons - like the one about leaving
injured companions till last to ensure the message gets through. Mind
you, I can't see either of the twins abandoning the other in these
circumstances!

Elrohir was too hard on Estel. Yes, it was an important lesson he had
to learn, but he's only 11! It was funny when Estel began to argue the
point Elrohir had been making though :)

This has been a lovely tale. I like anything with the twins, but this
one with just Elrohir and Estel was a refreshing change.

Title: A Queen Among Farmers' Wives · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor:
Drabble · ID: 635
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-21 19:00:38
A very jolly drabble about Farmer Maggot's cheerful return from a night
of pleasant inebriation with Tom Bombadil and Mrs. Maggot's initially
less than cheerful greeting. [Ring a dong dillo!] indeed!

Quite well written and down-to-earth - I could easily see it happening
in Tolkien's Middle-earth.



Title: Stricken From the Book · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama: The
Shire · ID: 348
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:13:43
I love Larner's hobbits  they are so solid and real, and occasionally,
grumpy, as Benlo Bracegirdle is! Benlo Bracegirdle, who seems to be a
rather sour, not terribly pleasant or congenial fellow, for all he
appears to be staunchly honest and scrupulous, is tasked with the
equally unpleasant job of overseeing the legal business left behind by
the demise of Lobelia and her son Lotho. It is quite the mess! Lobelia,
trying to right a few wrongs, has left, as we know from the books, all
her assets to be used to help the hobbits made homeless and harmed by
the Occupation. This leads to all sorts of funny legal business, with
some trying to claim redress for things that never happened, and all
manner of shady Sackville-Baggins dealings that have now to be
addressed by the survivors and the struggling acting-Mayor, Frodo.

The striking out of names from the family book is less central, in many
ways, than the Benlo-Frodo relationship, although it is, ironically,
Benlo who might well have put the idea in Frodo's head. Broken families
and broken spirits sometimes try to cast out parts of themselves in an
effort to escape the trauma.

Benlo and Frodo aren't friendly  but as the story goes on, and the
toll of the Ring on Frodo's spirit becomes more and more evident, Benlo
begins to warm to him. We see, through his eyes, and his shock as he
begins to learn, little by little, just what Frodo and Sam and the
others actually did in the last few years, resonates painfully with the
line in RoTK, where Sam laments to himself that no one seems to know
Frodo's story, or to appreciate him as he deserves. A few loyal
lieutenants do  Isumbard and Berilac, Rose and a few others  but
Benlo (and many like him) have not the faintest notion. As Benlo
becomes acquainted with what Frodo has endured, he becomes, quietly,
one of his supporters, if from a distance.

A satisfying story, Larner!


Title: Requesting Mercy · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 681
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:14:07
When Frodo woke up at Rivendell, and heard what Gandalf had to tell him
about the effects of a Morgul-blade, he was extremely grateful that at
the time, he had not known what he faced.

Larner, however, gives Frodo the knowledge, gleaned from Aragorn's
hesitant, reluctant (and highly edited) explanation of what
Morgul-blades do to their victims, and how he knows of their effects.
Poor Frodo, on top of facing a strangely colorless world, save for the
differently colored auras his friends are beginning to show, and severe
pain, cold, and lassitude, now has to deal with the ultimate choice:
should his struggle against the Morgul-blade fragment take a definitive
turn for the worse, will he become a wraith or will he ask for mercy
and a quick death? And if the latter, who should be entrusted with the
task?

While I'm not quite sure I buy Frodo's reasoning for excluding Aragorn,
who has, after all, done this before for other mortally-stricken
comrades, the interesting debate is the choice between Sam and Merry.
We also find that Frodo can and does have a will of his own, and one
that he will successfully oppose to even future kings  he has a
ruthless side, in the way he gets Sam to agree to take responsibility
for ensuring Frodo never becomes a wraith and that Aragorn isn't
required to step in.


Title: If You Should Die Before I Wake · Author: PipMer · Genres:
Drama: With Merry · ID: 277
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:14:40
The Fields of Cormallen, post-Black Gate and pre-celebration, seem to
be a popular story locale for those who like stories about the hobbits.
PipMer shows us Merry's journey to Cormallen and anxious waiting by
Pippin's bedside. I liked the way Gandalf's voice was used early in a
letter to set up the situation, and the notion that the Black Breath
lingers, even after the downfall of Sauron, is intriguing. Poor Merry,
for a little while absolutely certain Pippin had died because unable to
distinguish dream from reality!

Title: Mushrooms · Author: claudia6032000 · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 561
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:15:09
This is one of those misadventures that could all too easily have
occurred, and it is a credit to Claudia's descriptive skill that I felt
vaguely ill myself after reading this, and then went hunting for
information on mushrooms. The fruit of this research has been a firm
resolve never to eat any mushroom that was not grown in a mushroom
farm, for they seem entirely too likely to be poisonous!

I do wonder what poor Frodo ended up eating, though. Given the symptoms
and the time delay, I have to wonder whether he shouldn't have needed
some sort of organ transplant before the end of it! Ugh! The failure to
warn against picking foreign mushrooms, however familiar they may seem,
is one of those little things that slip the mind, to everyone's regret
 I am sure it is an episode our heroes will not forget for some time!


Title: Where There's Life, There's Hope (and in need of vittles) ·
Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble · ID: 463
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:15:38
I think this will resonate more if one knows annmarwalk's Mag the Cook,
but even for those who do not, there's something primordially joyful
about the idea that after such an ordeal as Aragorn and Minas Tirith
have endured, the scent of a cook's ordinary activity should bring hope
and relief. In all the chaos and horror after battle, when one is most
exhausted and disoriented, the idea that somewhere, someone is carrying
out the ordinary task of cooking a meal can be a sign of the endurance
of the human spirit.

Title: Answers and Questions · Author: Peredhil lover · Genres: Drama:
Youth · ID: 189
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:16:12
The Elladan-Elrohir influence on young Estel's life is often the
subject of fanfiction, either tangentially or directly. Usually, I have
seen the twins acting together, in accord with each other on how to
care for and train their mortal adoptive brother. Peredhil Lover
presents a twist on that, giving Elladan and Elrohir distinctly
different approaches to Estel  so different, Estel can't recognize
Elladan's reaction as remotely stemming from love.

Elrohir's explanation, coming at a pivotal moment for a young man of
Aragorn's lineage and station, seems to blend with a general
coming-of-age, where responsibility and knowledge are both taken up in
a way for the first time.


Title: Blessed by Ilúvatar · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Drama: Elves
in Later Ages · ID: 485
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:16:40
White Wolf shows us the labor and loss of the Elves of Mirkwood,
toiling against the Shadow and losing their sons to its malice. Even
the royal family is not immune, as we begin the story at the funeral of
one of Thranduil's sons.

What we discover from this, and from the long, hard watches, and the
many other funerals that must be attended, is that Legolas is the
result of Thranduil's wife's desire for a new child. Not to replace the
lost brother, but there is a sense in which it is Narilal's death that
prompts that desire and gives the royal couple the will to act upon it.


Title: Stone of the King · Author: Rowan · Races: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 309
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:17:06
An excellent moment in Frodo's development. Rowan gives a plausible
voice to the Ringbearer, as he begins truly to appreciate just how
heavy the burden of the Ring can be. One wonders what Frodo must have
thought of Isildur, and as he passes the Argonath, Rowan takes the
opportunity to show us, and to show us Frodo's essential compassion.
Feeling the weight of the Ring and its treacherous ways of worming into
the hearts of its bearers, he cannot find it in him to condemn Isildur,
despite all that has come from Isildur's failure to destroy the Ring.
Perhaps only another Ringbearer can have so visceral an identification
with Elendil's doomed son and accept just how little choice the Ring
leaves its bearers.

Title: Erestor and Estel: Hidden · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama:
Youth · ID: 167
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:17:31
A cute little vignette, featuring a confrontation between and young and
active Estel and a serious scribe of Imladris. Nice banter between the
two, and despite Erestor's frustrations with Estel, we note that he
seems to know exactly how to handle him, suggesting that he has spent
more time with Estel than one would expect, given his rather forbidding
demeanor. Even other Elves are not quite so wise to Erestor's ways as
one young boy, apparently. But in some sense, that doesn't matter: the
important point is that Estel knows Erestor well enough to befriend
him.

Title: Divided · Author: Pen52 · Genres: Drama: The Fellowship · ID: 223
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:18:38
Pen52 takes up the difficult topic of prejudice, division, and
forgiveness, using Pippin, Aragorn, and Boromir to good effect in this
interlude within the Mines of Moria.

It begins innocently enough with Pippin's enthusiastic (and
never-ending, it seems, harking back to Gandalf' comment in TTT)
questions to Boromir about the Swertings, aka the Southrons and
Haradrim, as Aragorn is forced to explain when it seems that Boromir
initially does not recognize the name. Pippin, of course, is simply
curious  wanting to know who they are, whether Boromir has ever
encountered any of them, how they dress, what they look like, how they
talk. Boromir is quite clearly taken aback, and one begins to wonder
whether his initial failure to respond to Pippin did not have more to
do with his consternation that light-hearted Pippin should have any
interest in the Haradrim than with any failure to understand the
reference.

This episode serves to highlight the fact that Men, unlike hobbits (so
far as Pippin and the others are aware), face the Enemy divided, with
some bowing to Sauron and others refusing him. Nor is this the only
division among Mankind, for where Aragorn refuses a wholesale
condemnation of the Haradrim, pitying the many who are moved by fear
rather than love of their master, and by fear of Gondor, rather than
anything else, Boromir cannot see beyond their service to the Dark
Lord. Whatever their motives, those motives cannot excuse their
opposition in Boromir's eyes, nor cover over Gondor's dead.

Had Boromir lived to be Aragorn's steward, one wonders what would have
become of this division between them over the Haradrim. It seems clear
from the way Pen52 ends the story that a cure and rapprochement would
have been hard to come by: there is something about killing your own
kind that wounds the killer, as Aragorn intimates. There is something
lethal in the very divisiveness of war between Men that makes every war
a civil war that cannot but profoundly wound even the victors.

An interesting and thoughtful story!


Title: A Mother's Wish · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 429
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:19:06
Maglor is such a tragic figure in many ways  the only brother whose
fate remains unknown in the end, and so he is the subject of many a
tale that tries to write an ending for him. Rhapsody shows his story
from a different angle: from the perspective of a Mother still grieving
her child, yearning for him, who finally responds to his song. One
hopes something comes of her answering to his singing, some
reconciliation and reunion.

Title: The Gaze of the Lady Galadriel · Author: Aprilkat · Genres:
Drama: The Fellowship · ID: 600
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:19:36
This ficlet is a snapshot of a moment, more a mood piece than a fully
articulated moment. One feels its incompleteness and the anxiety of its
ending. What it is that the Lady Galadriel showed to each member of the
Fellowship remains, for the most part, a matter of pure guesswork, with
only a few characters even giving hints of what they might have been
shown. Boromir's sense that they are being tested or tempted is here
borne out by Frodo's testimony, careful though Frodo is to leave silent
what specifically he was offered.

Aragorn's troubled silence, as he and Frodo sit together in Lorien, is
enigmatic, and leaves the reader wondering as to his thoughts, or what
he saw. Brief, but intriguing.


Title: Last Light · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Drama · ID: 194
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:20:06
This is a fantastic evocation of Orthanc, written believably from the
perspective of one of the trees of Fangorn Forest. The picture at the
beginning makes for a moving and compelling image of a tree in its
anguish  helpless before 'the quick ones', whom we realize after a
time are human beings and orcs. The tree (a Huorn, perhaps?) is
anything but quick  it is, however, all too aware of its helplessness
and the slow sense of doom building and marching upon it is very well
portrayed.

The tree, the last of its stand, remains alone amidst the ruin of its
kind, overlooking Orthanc, spared only because it chanced to be the
favorite perch of Saruman's spybirds, the crébain whom we later see
flocking over Eregion. The tree hears their news, enduring the
sharpness of their claws that seem to sap the life out of it quite
literally in a way.

There can be something tragic about trees, and about the natural world
when faced with the relentless march of inventive human beings and
wizards who use them for their own ends. Here, these ends are wicked,
and the tree seems to suffer from that knowledge. Orthanc here assumes
a menacing mien that it did not have previously  for it is one thing
to read Treebeard's reaction, and another to glimpse the power of
Orthanc from the perspective of one of its immediate victims  one of
the ones who will not survive to tell the story.

Well done, Ignoble Bard!


Title: In the Hours of Joy · Author: Spindle Berry · Genres: Drama:
With Merry · ID: 289
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 15:49:16
Ive noted before that the period between wounding and Pippins (and
the other hobbits) waking at Cormallen seem to be fertile fields for
writers. Usually, the perspective is that of Merry, occasionally of
Aragorn, and even more occasionally, other Fellowship members. Spindle
Berry takes us through this period of anxious waiting and uncertainty
from Gimlis perspective. Gimlis love of the hobbits, and his anger at
their condition, the sense that this is utterly undeserved  a
desecration  finds expression in a few different ways. His anger
towards Gandalf, whom he silently accuses of failing to value the
hobbits enough to leave them safely behind, for example.

But he also finds himself waiting and watching Merry, as Merry keeps
his seemingly interminable vigil over Pippin. It is almost as if
Gimlis own friendship for Pippin and concern are displaced onto Merry,
as if he must watch Merry only because Merrys unique friendship with
Pippin must not be violated  as if Gimlis own grief for Pippin should
not intrude, and so instead it fixes on the effects of Pippins
wounding on Merry. At least, this is the sense that I get.

Legolass brief and more or less quiet appearance is well-played, as is
the moment when Pippin wakes. Then only does the title lose its ironic
quality, as Elf and Dwarf, assured now that Merry and Pippin will be
well, experience their own catharsis and a rebirth of interest in each
others unique perceptions of the world.

Nicely done!


Title: The Undiscovered Country · Author: Wimsey · Genres: Drama: Elves
in Later Ages · ID: 715
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-07-23 16:10:47
Wimsey takes a look at the difficult ending of Arwens and Aragorns
marriage. This is one of the most painful parts, in my opinion, of that
story, and the enigma of Arwen at the end is one that has attracted
many fanfic writers to attempt to fill in what she was going through.
Wimsey uses the classical stages of grief in an attempt to portray
Arwens frame of mind, as she goes through the sense of unreality and
isolation that intense mourning brings.

I think I liked best that when she meets with her grandfather and
brothers, at the edge of Lothlorien, she does not have to convince
them. They are able to allow her to go with dignity and with grace,
which suggests their own process of mourning differs from hers.
Bittersweet in the end, as one might hope, and well-written.


Title: Leaf Subsides to Leaf · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Drama:
Elves in Later Ages · ID: 105
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 06:50:02
Sad and beautiful vignette about the last meeting between Thranduil and
Legolas, as Legolas prepares to leave Middle-earth forever. I find it
very reasonable that Thranduil refuses to leave his home, and equally
reasonable that Legolas refuses to stay in the changed world where he
was born. The prose is simple and elegant, befitting the starkness of
the moment of eternal farewell between a loving father and his son.

Title: Green · Author: annmarwalk · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 461
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 07:31:21
Lovely, evocative account of Faramir's awakening to hope...I continue
to stand in awe of Annmarwalk's vocabulary; her ability to bring forth
physical sensations so vividly in short pieces like this.

And the last line is utterly gorgeous.



Title: Love Story · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 273
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 07:32:35
Cute ficlet that presents a most unusual version of the classic tale of
Beren and Luthien. I love the way that the most beautiful, high-Elven
episode of the Silmarillion has been transmuted into a legend, and now
a play, for a different race. It shows the power of both stories and
storytelling.

Innovative and amusing!

Title: Don't Be Deceived · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 351
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 07:33:11
A wonderful double-drabble chronicling an encounter that if it did not
actually happen in Tolkien's world, should have.

Imhiriel takes skillful advantage of the similarity between
descriptions of Bard of Esgaroth and Strider, in this story of an
encounter of Gandalf and a young friend with an enigmatic dark-haired
grey-eyed Man.

The identity of Gandalf's hungry, whining companion, juxtaposed with
the mysterious attitude of the man they encounter, strikes me as quite
funny as well as ironic. Well done!

Msg# 8211

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Title: Fissures · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Dwarves · ID: 804
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:19:24

We do not hear too much, in LOTR and its Appendices, about what Gimli's
people thought of his becoming an Elf-Friend. Thundera Tiger addresses
the problems and possibilities that the changes in Gimli can cause,
through a Dwarf OMC who is unsettled by Gimli's new appreciation for
other cultures and races.

Well-written and credible. Gimli is characterised as both something of
an opportunist and a future statesman desirous of maintaining fragile
alliances.

Title: Matriarch · Author: Aervir · Races: Men: General Drabble · ID:
449
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:20:37
A vivid snapshot of a formidable woman - Morwen Steelsheen - as seen
through the eyes of the child Eowyn.

I adore the phrase [her voice being the sound of horns on the wind];
not only does it fit the profile of the woman called Steelsheen, but it
ties in with the stirring moment of the Rohirrim's arrival at the
Pelennor in 3019; a fitting literary leitmotif as it were.

And the last line is terrific!

Title: The Turn of the Tide · Author: Altariel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 72
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:21:52
A truly stellar AU that left me screaming for more.

The story is short and ostensibly simple; in this Alternate Universe,
Faramir went to Rivendell while Boromir took his place in Ithilien; and
Faramir met Eowyn on his way, and they fell in love and spoke vows.
Now, Boromir, having allowed Faramir and Frodo and Gollum to procede
from Ithilien to Mordor, prepares to accompany Aragorn's host to the
Black Gate; and Eowyn and Denethor stay in the City, waiting for the
people they love to return or die.

The moods are sketched subtly, with elegance and perception. There's a
curious sympathy between Denethor and Eowyn; it is lovely to see him be
the one to give her the starry mantle. And it's fascinating to see an
Eowyn who has never thought herself in love with Aragorn, whose heart
is fixed on Faramir.

The language is occasionally Tolkienish; at least in beauty of
expresson - the bit about the world seeming to exhale is awfully pretty
and perfect for that point in the story.

And I love the last paragraphs, particularly Eowyn's triumphant mention
of Denethor's sons returning after great deeds!

Title: Conjuror · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: General Drabble · ID:
432
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:24:10
This drabble is a fascinating study in power, opening questions as to
who wields power, and how power should be wielded. The dialogue between
Denethor and Mithrandir is beautifully written, and could come straight
from LOTR. Denethor's need, and desire to dare things that are beyond
his ken for the sake of his people, are succintly brought into the
piece, in vivid contrast to Mithrandir's more avuncular (and to some
degree, patronizing) approach to the disposition of supernatural power.

The air seems to crackle with the conflict of these very powerful
individuals. One cannot blame Denethor for wanting to save his land by
any means possible, and one sympathizes with his impatient reaction to
Mithrandir's cryptic utterances. Denethor craves answers, not riddles
and enigmas. And yet, the use of Power against the natural order of
things, to bend it to one's will in all manner of weaponry and
regardless of consequences, is a two-edged sword. Sauron has done so,
Saruman is doing so; Mithrandir has good reason to warn Denethor
against this course, and to explain why he will not employ the same
means as their Enemy.

An intriguing drabble, subtle but very thought-provoking, that asks us,
as well as Denethor and Gandalf, about the fine line between Power and
Desecration.



Title: A Boy and His Lob · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor · ID:
162
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:32:03
Here's Legolas as a bratty teenager. A REALLY bratty teenager!

This is certainly one of the more unusual variations of the
young-Legolas-and-his-pets stories I've seen. Outrageous and punkish;
but it works as a story, and is funny.

Title: Sea Food · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 53
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:36:45
This is an utterly charming slice of life of the sons of Denethor, in
childhood and sharing carefree moments with their Uncle Imrahil in Dol
Amroth.

Lovely descriptions of the seashore and tidal pools. Imrahil's
tenderness and fondness for his young nephews shines through in an
understated way. The boys' fondness for the unforeseen adventure is
typical of youngsters everywhere, and their reluctance to cook the
creatures they've caught shows their essential good nature, as well as
their innocence and privileged status. I loved little Faramir's
farewell to the crabs.



Title: The Unbearable Smugness of Being Feanor · Author: Ignoble Bard ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 164
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:39:09
An enjoyable and somewhat nasty romp through an AU scenario pitting the
disembodied souls of two of the biggest egos in Tolkien's works -
Melkor and Feanor - against each other in a war of words within the
Void. And a surprise ending that makes a lot of sense, actually.

Wonderfully apt title! Melkor certainly is right that Feanor is just
too smug.

Title: At the Sign of the Prancing Pony · Author: Marta · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 163
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:41:39
Very hobbity little piece from the POV of someone we hardly ever see in
Tolkien fanfic. The drabble rings quite true and could have come from
the Professor's own pen. I love the image of hobbits moving with
greater speed and agility than cloddish big folk; and Nob's cheerful
determination, despite his nervousness, to succeed in a new endeavor.

Title: Stopping by Woods · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 19
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:43:52
Perfectly beautiful, and yet tinged with an overlay of age and regret.
This is a winter story, set in the winter of the land, and the winter
of Faramir's life, a bittersweet paean to his lonely, ironic effort to
retrace Boromir's journey forth from the lands of their youth. It is
sad and yet somehow fitting that a young Rohir, to whom Boromir would
be only a legend, accompanies Faramir. For Faramir, Boromir is a
memory, a brother perished in his prime. Faramir himself was fated to
live to an old age that, while not decrepit nor bitter, seems
regretful. And yet, Faramir, as ever, acknowledges the sorrow of his
brother's loss, and turns from contemplation of the dead to thoughts of
life and the pleasure of feasting in a nearby landholder's hall.

I love the ending, with Faramir initiating a Rohirric song in which his
young companion joins, welcoming whatever joy remains to be taken.

An excellently structured and scripted piece that flows easily but
never takes the easy way...And of course, a great tribute to both
Tolkien and Robert Frost.


Title: Burden of Guilt · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men · ID: 123
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 09:48:19
[Burden of Guilt] is a worthy sequel to Linda's earlier epic [Shadow
and Thought].

The tale takes the reader into somewhat darker territory. A chain of
events is set off by a letter that Eowyn wrote but never sent in the
earlier story, that somehow reaches Eomer and triggers an escalation of
misunderstanding, violence, and injuries with nearly fatal consequences
to Eomer, Faramir and others, as well as the possibility of a
Gondor/Rohan war. In a counterpart to the main plotline, Arwen bears
her and Aragorn's first child, attended by the pregnant Eowyn.

There are few writers who can match Linda in the delineation of
hurt/comfort, angst, and Gondorian and Elven medical techniques, most
of which are well and plausibly described and used here.

My favorite scenes, for sheer heart-thumping pulse-pounding drama are
those chronicling Eowyn's own traumatic delivery of her and Faramir's
firstborn.

In the course of the story, Faramir and Aragorn solidify the friendship
that began to develop in [Shadow and Thought]. Linda is a comparitive
rarity among Fourth Age Aragorn writers; she concentrates more on the
relationship of Aragorn and Faramir rather than the more frequently
written friendship of Aragorn and Legolas. Tolkien's intent seems to
have been that Aragorn and Faramir would work together and like each
other as well as respect each other, and a line mentioned in HoME that
was omitted, but never contradicted, in ROTK, portends close friendship
King and Steward.



Title: A...Like An Antagonistic Arwen · Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha
the Demon CoAuthors · Genres: Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID:
758
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-24 14:35:06
Each of these drabbles stands fine on its own, but together, as a
series, seems rather repetitive, although I realize those repeated
elements were likely compulsory. I also found myself somewhat
dissapointed that Arwen's predominant response was indignation; perhaps
a way could be found show her greater range within the scope of the
challenge.

Title: Growed · Author: agape4gondor · Races: Men: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 218
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-24 15:11:49
Interesting idea - that everything that takes place in the books
relating to Boromir is tinged with the knowledge of his own death.

But I thought this quadrabble was problematic - the experientiual
story, though charming, is really extraneous to the climax (Boromir's
foresight), and the confusion of formal and childish language ("I am
growed, are I not, Boromir?") was unfortunate.

Title: Forcing a Path · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 400
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 18:59:06
A bracing adventure that is an extrapolation of the scene in FOTR where
Boromir leads Aragorn in forcing a path through the snows of Caradhras.

Boromir and Aragorn are both well-served here; the characterisations
are good; both Men are heroic and yet human as they pit their mortal
strength against the winter's fury. The irony of Legolas' graceful,
easy path across the same snow through which the Men are trudging holds
true here as in the passage that inspired the story.

I liked the mutual respect and determination that is apparent between
Boromir and Aragorn.

Title: More than Meets the Eye · Author: Dadgad · Genres: Humor: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 128
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-24 20:02:45
A splendid tale of the event mentioned only in a few lines in The
Hobbit: the Battle of the Green Fields, where Bullroarer Took killed
the great goblin king Golfimbul with a club and, in so doing, invented
the Game of Golf.

A straight story of the battle would have been good enough, but Dadgad
takes a more interesting track, of having the tale told through the
eyes of Elladan and Elrohir, reporting to their worried father, about
the doings of the goblin horde and the not-so-hapless halflings.
Elrond's concern for the hobbits, who he fears would have been
destroyed by the rampaging goblins, leaving a broken, refugee
population, is touching; and the Elves' lack of greater knowledge of
the halflings well integrated into the story.

The Elf-twins' point of view increases the gosh-wow effect of the
story; the charm and appeal of the hobbits is emphasized by the growing
admiration of the Elves, who witnessed such strange and unexpected
occurances.

The tenacity, courage, imagination and capacity for stealth of the
hobbits is brought out superbly in the story; as is their
provincialism.

The story has some marvelous touches of humor, such as the apparent
invention of the Shire Horse breed, and the genesis of the game of
golf, and the priorities of the Dunedain Chieftain Arasuil.

This is a hidden gem of a story - I can only hope that it is not the
last Tolkien fanfic tale that its author will write.


Title: In Aragorn's Safekeeping: Life in the King's House · Author:
Radbooks · Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 416
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-25 13:10:11
Perhaps the one "Mary Sue" I have felt was truly well done and mature,
the original "In Aragorn's Safekeeping" was a wonderful find. Now we
are continuing to follow the lives of Rebecca and Thomas, the two
teenagers found dropped into Middle Earth following a tragic bus
accident in 1940s America as the two families were headed west into
Washington State. Having been adopted by Aragorn and fallen in love,
these two now prepare for their upcoming wedding as they continue to
adjust to life as the King's Wards and with Arwen as their foster
mother, and to the loss of their own families. New traditions need to
be made; and understanding how their own familiar Christian upbringing
contrasts with the belief in the Valar held by the Dunedain among whom
they now live are explored. We see the new family relationships form
and strengthen and the two of them weather their first major
disagreements.

It's as fascinating a look at how such a relationship would impact the
household of the new King and Queen of Gondor and Arnor as was the
original tale, and I look forward to seeing it continued and brought to
closure.

Title: Domestic Crisis · Author: SurgicalSteel · Races: Men: Eriador or
Rivendell · ID: 729
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-07-25 13:36:58
There is quite a contrast between Aragorn's favorite kinsman, Halbarad,
and his brother Thalguron. Halbarad is constant, the lover of one woman
only--his wife Serinde the surgeon and healer, is the height of
responsibility. Thalguron is promiscuous and a bit of a ne'er-do-well,
and generally knows the amazement of his brother, cousin, and
sister-in-law. As for the day he left his weapons where Halbarad and
Serinde's small children could get their hands on them---- Well!

But there comes the day when Thalguron manages to do everything right,
and both his brother and his sister-in-law are approving of him, seeing
the reflection of the man he could and should be, and he finds the
approval almost more than he can bear....

Quite an amusing look at how some work at promoting an image of
irrespectability, and a lovely addition to Surgical Steel's universe.

Title: Tales of the Innkeeper · Author: Allee · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 237
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-25 15:00:24
I imagine the hard part about writing a series, is to keep growing the
story while keeping it from becoming repetitive. This author does an
admirable job, but, collectively, the image that emerges of Elessar did
seem to me a bit overly virtuous, even in his faults. And - a nitpick -
having the Inn Keeper continually address both King and Steward by
their names I found annoyingly informal.

Title: Multicultural Interactions · Author: annmarwalk · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 18
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-26 05:49:34
A great story about a meeting I've never seen chronicled before - that
of Elanor Gamgee and Elboron of Ithilien, the children of Samwise and
Faramir.

Young Elanor and Elboron are both beautifully written - children of the
peace of the Fourth Age, they have an appealing appreciation of beauty,
the courtesy that marks their fathers, and a certain recklessness
stemming from joyous spirits. The reader can see traces of their
parents' influence, and the changes that the events chronicled in LORD
OF THE RINGS have wrought - young people can enjoy their childhood even
while paying attention to duty, and there is more communication and
interaction between the different races of Middle-earth.

Annmarwalk imbues Elanor and Elboron with appealing traces of their
parents: Elanor has both the practicality and instinct to reach for
greater things that makes Sam such an appealing and interesting fellow;
while Elboron's musing on the significance of words during a mad dash
from the library shows that he is indeed Faramir's son.

Sam is also brought into the story, in perfect characterisation, via
the advice he gave to Elanor and she quotes back to Elboron.

The story promises that the legacies of such different, but powerful
characters, as Samwise Gamgee and Faramir of Gondor, will be well
cared-for by Sam's daughter and Faramir's son.

Title: Free and Gay · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 81
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-26 06:04:19
An unusual ficlet dealing with burdens and the difficulty of escaping
them. Though the summary mentions slash themes, the tale can be read,
in my opinion, without inclusion of the idea that Boromir is a
homosexual - or with inclusion of that premise.

The story presents the most famous Gondorian brothers in Middle-earth
seizing the opportunity to relax and celebrate Yule with the officers
of the other military companies. It's like a big, happy, Boyz Club - no
women allowed, or at least no women present. The soldiers are
coordinating strategy, and also feasting on good, fresh food, and
dancing.

But Boromir is still tense and apparently burdened. His words, and more
importantly his thoughts, reveal that more conventional social
gatherings, where lords' daughters and their mothers stalk him
relentlessly, feel like traps to him. He is in no hurry to sample the
maidens' charms; far from it, he can't wait to escape them.

Whether Boromir's revulsion for the particular young women whose
mothers look him over like the butcher's goods stems from homosexuality
or a dislike of the pressure to bed a maiden and produce an heir, can
be left to the reader to decide. Tolkien's description of Boromir as a
man who had no interest in marriage or women, favoring a soldier's
life, could indicate he was homosexual, or could mean he just preferred
army life and had a low sex drive.

This is a good story whichever way you read it. I particularly loved
the description of the group dancing - the image of the men dancing in
circles is beautiful and powerful, there's an earthy, almost ritual
feel to it. And Boromir's being out of step in the center of the rings,
is a rather poignant image that one can also take as sinister
foreshadowing of his eventually coming under the sway of a different
ring. Boromir is a strong man, but even a strong man can feel trammeled
at the center of the forces that rule his life and also threaten to
destroy his world.




Title: Elements: Dreams of the Dead, Visions of the Living · Author:
pipkinsweetgrass · Genres: Alternate Universe: The Shire or Buckland ·
ID: 202
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-26 06:17:03
Intriguing and sensitively written variation on the connection between
Pippin and Boromir. I like the relationship that is established between
Pippin and Faramir, and then their sons. And the death of Pippin is
beautiful and sad.

I loved the ending.

Title: For the Dwarves, Gimli · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 155
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-26 17:42:34
Very well done. As a series should, with each of these three ficlets a
little more of the story becomes clear, well linked one to the other
but never repetitive. The loving interplay between Gloin and his wife,
Gimli's later forthrightness about his mother's insistence, and then
how Nandi's only interest is in the world that is her children ring
true and touchingly.

Title: Multicultural Interactions · Author: annmarwalk · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 18
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-26 17:48:21
Very well done. Both these characters come leaping off the screen (as
well as flying across the courtyard), full, unique, and charming, but
it is there similarities which make the story work past its ending, and
how it leads you to imagine the warmth of their next meeting.

Title: No Escape · Author: Aranel Took · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 324
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-26 17:51:23
Hmmm ... this one is complicated. The feelings of this mother, trapped
with her young ones - valliant, desperate, and brave come through clear
and strong. And the ambiguity I read in the ending only heightened the
tale, but I have to wonder what families were doing there then, and the
wondering almost spoiled it.

Title: Jewel · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 325
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-26 17:53:30
I enjoyed this thought very much. I appreciate plausible departures
from the actual text, and the idea that craftsmanship among dwarves
would be used to woo seems wonderfully appropriate. I thought the very
last phrase, however, could have been modified to take the story a mite
further, rather than repeat what we had already been told.

Title: The Lesson · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 29
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-26 17:58:11
The language of this drabble is lovely, and it is formed very nicely of
those successive paragraphs, each one taking something from the one
before and moving forward with it. But the end is, sadly, poorly done.
It was a wonderful idea, but the content of the drabble belies it, as
each example clearly demonstrated Faramir got the lesson all along.

Msg# 8212

Story now complete Posted by christinex1001 October 05, 2007 - 10:41:28 Topic ID# 8212
My story "Heart's Blood" is now complete. Does it need to be moved to
a different category? Not sure of the process...let me know what I
need to do. (I'm ChristineX at the MEFA site.)

Thanks!

Msg# 8213

Re: Story now complete Posted by Marta October 05, 2007 - 11:44:03 Topic ID# 8212
Hi ChristineX,

First things first - CONGRATULATIONS! Finishing a story is always such
an accomplishment.

Now, what will happen is we'll move your story to a different
subcategory (one with completed stories) so it will compete against
them. Whatever votes were entered for this story while it was a WIP
will carry over. The other admins and I are still discussing where the
best place to put it will be, so please watch this group for the next
day or so for where we'll put it.

In the meantime, I have changed your story information so it says it's
a completed story, not a WIP. I'll change the subcategory when we make
a decision, obviously. I'm pasting the story information below. Is
there anything else that needs to change? Like, are there new warnings
or characters, etc.?

Marta



Heart's Blood
(Story: Novel) Rating: Mature · Enter New Review
Story Author: ChristineX
Nominated by: ChristineX

Award Category: Genres: Romance: Incomplete
Story's URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3510800/1/Hearts_Blood
Romance Partners: Sauron/f
Story Summary:
Lithiníel wanted to die. Therefore, Sauron desired that she should
live. What happened next defied all expectations.... Set approximately
40 years before the War of the Ring.
Reason for Rating:
This story focuses on a dark romance and is fairly intense in places.
Also, future chapters will contain content of a sexual nature.

(Story: Novel) Rating: Mature
Genres: Romance | Races: Villains | Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA
Story Setting: Mordor · Characters: Sauron, Original Female
Character(s), Other Villains
Characters for Categorization: Sauron
Events and Time Periods: N/A · Sub-Genres and Poetic Form: N/A
Source Material: N/A


> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: christinex1001 <christinex1001@yahoo.com>
> Date: Oct 5, 2007 11:41 AM
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Story now complete
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> My story "Heart's Blood" is now complete. Does it need to be moved to
> a different category? Not sure of the process...let me know what I
> need to do. (I'm ChristineX at the MEFA site.)
>
> Thanks!
>

Msg# 8214

Re: Story now complete Posted by christinex1001 October 05, 2007 - 17:55:43 Topic ID# 8212
The only thing I can think of is that the Mouth of Sauron is also a
fairly significant character in this story, but I'm not sure if that
really affects the categories or not. Otherwise, everything is still
the same. It should probably still be rated mature, even though it
turned out there wasn't quite as much sex as I thought there would be. ;-)

Thanks!

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Marta <melayton@...> wrote:
>
> Hi ChristineX,
>
> First things first - CONGRATULATIONS! Finishing a story is always such
> an accomplishment.
>
> Now, what will happen is we'll move your story to a different
> subcategory (one with completed stories) so it will compete against
> them. Whatever votes were entered for this story while it was a WIP
> will carry over. The other admins and I are still discussing where the
> best place to put it will be, so please watch this group for the next
> day or so for where we'll put it.
>
> In the meantime, I have changed your story information so it says it's
> a completed story, not a WIP. I'll change the subcategory when we make
> a decision, obviously. I'm pasting the story information below. Is
> there anything else that needs to change? Like, are there new warnings
> or characters, etc.?
>
> Marta
>
>
>
> Heart's Blood
> (Story: Novel) Rating: Mature � Enter New Review
> Story Author: ChristineX
> Nominated by: ChristineX
>
> Award Category: Genres: Romance: Incomplete
> Story's URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3510800/1/Hearts_Blood
> Romance Partners: Sauron/f
> Story Summary:
> Lithin�el wanted to die. Therefore, Sauron desired that she should
> live. What happened next defied all expectations.... Set approximately
> 40 years before the War of the Ring.
> Reason for Rating:
> This story focuses on a dark romance and is fairly intense in places.
> Also, future chapters will contain content of a sexual nature.
>
> (Story: Novel) Rating: Mature
> Genres: Romance | Races: Villains | Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA
> Story Setting: Mordor � Characters: Sauron, Original Female
> Character(s), Other Villains
> Characters for Categorization: Sauron
> Events and Time Periods: N/A � Sub-Genres and Poetic Form: N/A
> Source Material: N/A
>
>

Msg# 8215

MEFA Reviews for October 6, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 06, 2007 - 5:23:40 Topic ID# 8215
Title: Enter the Fourth Age, Hastily · Author: Dwimordene · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 140
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-26 18:00:40
This is a lovely idea, but the form - the extraneous dashes and the
painfully run-on sentence - made it almost impossible for me to read.

Title: Sticky Sweet · Author: SheBit · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 196
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-26 18:03:19
This is interesting, but there's a step missing - the reader must
infer that it was the color which reminded Aragorn of berries, which
reminded him of the pastries; the connection itself is not in the words.

Title: Celebration · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 139
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-07-26 18:06:08
Nice! This was well done and, as a only good drabble can, appeared
effortless and in no way constricted. The contrast drawn between Eowyn
and Faramir - she involved, he standing back until requested, and then
shining - was lovely, interesting, and enhanced both characterizations.

Title: The Undiscovered Country · Author: Wimsey · Genres: Drama:
Elves in Later Ages · ID: 715
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-27 00:29:33
A sad, haunting look at the last months of Arwen's life, from the
death of Aragorn to her own passing. Arwen's reactions are very
credible; particularly in the 'anger' phase, when she rages against
the Valar and begs them for respite from the pain she feels.

Arwen is also written as a queen, whose words and desire still carry
weight, even in her decline, rather than a fragile fading flower. She
makes a decision and sticks to it.

A thoughtfully written story...

Title: Here We Go Round The Mulberry Bush · Author: Isabeau of
Greenlea · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 512
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-28 06:28:49
A delightful piece focussing on Pippin's reacquaintance with the
feisty and passionate young Diamond of Long Cleeve, after he has made
his heroic return from the Ring War.

Pippin seems to have met his match here, and hasn't yet figured out
whether to be puzzled or pleased - which is very much in character for
a hobbit who has matured, but has not completely grown up yet. I like
his mention of Diamond's cooking skills as well as her physical charms
- that seems very Hobbitish. And the story is a wonderfully
appropriate response to the "P Like A Pink Pippin" Challenge!

Title: The Departure of Boromir · Author: Narnian Sprite · Genres:
Drama · ID: 622
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-07-28 20:49:00
Yes, this piece is short, but it has a beautiful, poetic quality about
it. Boromir's transition from his last moments on Middle-earth to his
last journey to the unknown future is described in a touching way. I
like the Halls of Waiting as a place to reflect on one's life and a
place to heal and get ready for the last journey over the sea.

Title: Foreign Ways · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor or
Rohan · ID: 54
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-07-28 20:50:14
This is a nice little story. Getting some familiar food in a foreign
land is really important, I can say from my own experience. I like the
way you describe Mag's experience in the tavern.

Title: Drawing Straight With Crooked Lines · Author: Fiondil · Genres:
Drama · ID: 76
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-07-28 20:50:54
Boromir dies and has a very interesting conversation with Namos. I
love the way, how you answer some questions I always had about
Boromir's death in the book. What he did was betrayal, but if he
didn't do it, what would have happened then? The whole story is
touching and spreads a sense of peace and calm. I loved the
conclusion. A solution worthy of Boromir.

Title: Force of Nature · Author: shirebound · Genres: Alternate
Universe: The Shire or Buckland · ID: 360
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-07-28 20:51:57
The Quarantined universe is slightly AU since Aragorn gets to know his
companions on the quest already as children, but I don't mind, they
all can keep a secret. The characters are true to how I imagine they
would be at their age, and in this story Halbarad gets introduced to
the hobbits. After a little Angst because of the strange poison
Halbarad and Frodo get exposed to all ends well. I love the addition
of the little pup who hides in Halbarad's boots. Luckily Halbarad was
in no condition to need his boots.

Title: The Undiscovered Country · Author: Wimsey · Genres: Drama:
Elves in Later Ages · ID: 715
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-07-28 20:52:59
In this story we follow Arwen from Aragorn's death to her own leaving
this world on Cerin Amroth. It is a sad story, but it describes the
stages of her grieving realistically. The part about her stage of
depression was the most touching to me. It was described so true to
what I know of depression. But at the end there is a ray of hope.

Title: Family Jewels · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 464
Reviewer: dancingkatz · 2007-07-29 04:44:22
This is a lovely piece, with so many connections between Faramir and
his family and the Feanoreans from Chapter 9 of the Silmarillion. In
other hands the parallels and the point where Faramir chose a
different way than Maglor could have been unwieldy and so
in-the-reader's-face obvious that it would be a difficult and
uncomfortable read. However, you handled this so well that the
parallels are more than apparent while the writing and storytelling
remain beautifully smooth.

Additionally, it was lovely seeing how a grown-up Faramir who is a
parent has a different understanding of the events and actions of
Feanor than he did as a child and even a young man with no family.
Even better was his choice to forgive Denethor instead of following
Maglor's refusal (or failure) to forgive Feanor.

Even the naming of Faramir's daughter, Miriel, while a somewhat more
obvious parallel to the reader, doesn't jar. It's a perfectly
appropriate name in my opinion given that Faramir considers his
marriage and family to be gifts he had never expected to have.

An excellent read, touching, thought-provoking and well-crafted.

Title: Returning the Favor · Author: cpsings4him · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 340
Reviewer: dancingkatz · 2007-07-29 04:47:19
This is one of the loveliest character pieces regarding Pippin and his
relationship with his cousin Frodo, that I have ever read. Unlike so
many stories that I have read, Pippin here is an adult, not a faunt in
an adult's body. He's still under age and still gets so excited or
enthusiastic that he ignores the rules of common courtesy, but what
goes on in his head is definitely the thoughts and feelings of a grown-up.

I'm not usually fond of stories written in first person but when the
muse says that's how it needs to be done, there is little an author
can do but comply and do his or her best. And your best here is
absolutely superb. The characterization, the hints of how the people
of Minas Tirith see the Ringbearer (and Pippin, for that matter), the
descriptions of a hobbit attempting to adapt to a physical world made
for people nearly twice his size all add to the texture and atmosphere
of this piece.

I highly recommend Returning the Favor to any fan of Pippin or Frodo.
Most excellent work!

Dancingkatz

Title: Coda · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Second Age: Drabble · ID: 627
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-30 05:41:47
That this token of Maglor's love for his foster-son should end up in
the sea as wreckage is heartbreaking, both for the loss of the
sentiment it represents and the lore itself.

A sad testimony to the power of nature, and angered gods, to destroy
some things, and doubtless people, of worth.

Title: The Case of the Purloined Mushrooms · Author: Inkling · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 298
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-30 05:43:27
A fine hobbit mystery, set in the youth of Frodo Baggins, and making
wonderful use of the hobbit fondness for mushrooms, and Frodo's
history of having purloined them in his childhood.

There's an angry farmer whose mushrooms are being stolen, intrusions
by the well-meaning but rather pushy Dora Baggins, the usual bad
behaviour of the Sackville-Bagginses, an unusual black watchdog who is
not entirely what he seems, and a very well-written Frodo at the heart
of the mystery.

I liked the unassuming but crafty and good-hearted OC hero, Abelard
Archer, hobbit postman, quite a bit. He is both quite hobbitish and
rather Sherlockian in his skill as a problem-solver and amateur detective.

I love the allusions to Austen and Doyle, too!

Title: In Aragorn's Safekeeping: Life in the King's House · Author:
Radbooks · Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 416
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-30 05:46:40
A worthy sequel to [In Aragorn's Safekeeping], with the consistent
characterisation seen in the first story. I liked the fact that Thomas
and Rebecca have not become instant Gondorians; that although they are
happy, they miss many aspects of the home to which they cannot return.
Their determination to have an American/Gondorian "Christmas" is
touching and quite reasonable, considering their origins.

Title: Wind of Change · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Crossover · ID: 669
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-07-30 06:00:57
Maglor's presence in modern times or known history is a fairly common
subject for Tolkien fanfiction, but I have never seen him brought into
this particular event.

Maglor's involvement in the celebration of a great event in recent
German history is well and credibly written. I could just picture the
ancient and beautiful Elf, standing apart from the common humans, but
drawn into their joy.

Imhiriel paints some lovely word-pictures, in particular this one, of
Maglor's voice raised in song:

[It was borne on the wind like seeds, like gleaming snowflakes, like
scintillant, flaring sparks of fire, like nourishing drops of rain. It
made the melody, made the other voices transcend their simplicity, to
be transformed into an overwhelming expression of joint celebration.]

The excitement of a wonderful event is brought to life here through
the onlookers and through the presence of our friend from so long ago...





Title: A New Reckoning · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 308
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-07-30 09:34:35
Wow. What an epic undertaking this was, but what a wonderful outcome
it gave! I thoroughly enjoyed the pure Hobbityness of this story, and
all in one sitting. I simply couldn't make myself wait to finish it.
(I also find myself inexplicably craving a mushroom and cheese
omelet...) I did find the odd typo or awkward spot here and there, but
with seventy chapters those are expected, and were very *very* few.
Your beta should be proud as well.

I truly love your Legolas; a perfect mix of the inquisitive and
mischievous with the wise and regal. He is, to me, the Legolas of the
books. And speaking of the differences in movie and book canon,
Pippin's chagrin about the song in the Green Dragon was a perfect
touch! I wept my way through the wedding from the moment Gaffer Gamgee
saw his son until Pippin went off to MC, so to speak. The only real
disappointment I felt as I read was when I realized I could find no
meaning or Old English equivalent for the name Pybba. It has always
been one of my favorite of Tolkien's little jokes that the
underestimated mount of an underestimated hero was named "Stumpy".

Finally, but most remarkably to me, is the entirety of Chapter 29. I
once discussed with a fellow college literature major friend the
possibility of telling a story in print through lines of interrupted
dialogue. I have not yet found the courage to attempt it. It was
excellent. Seamless transitions from speaker to speaker, location to
location, with very good flow. It was truly a joy to read, and I
smiled through the whole chapter. So, so well done. I will be
recommending this to my friends outside of the awards as well. One of
the best hobbit pieces I've read to date.

Title: Golfing Fever · Author: lbilover · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest ·
ID: 75
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2007-07-31 01:34:09
This is an absolutely charming fic that focuses on an area of canon
often overlooked by fan fiction writers: golf in the Shire. Just as in
present day, golf was all rage for obsessed hobbits everywhere,
including our very own Sam Gamgee. As he slips further and further
into the golfing madness, doting on about his wonderfully amazing
golfing mentor Mungo Chubb-Baggins, the usually level-headed Frodo
comes to the slow determination that in love, war and golf, all is
fair game. The high jinx that ensue will keep the reader giggling with
delight, and the number of innuendos scattered throughout is just
amazing - who would have thought that golf would lend itself to so
many arousing images! The tournament is surprisingly action-packed and
nail-biting and kept this reader on the edge of her seat. And the
author does all this while keeping our wonderful hobbits in character.
This is a Frodo I can very much see going on to carry the One Ring
some day. The author also does a marvelous job of explaining all the
confusing golf terminology and rules for us laypeople while keeping
the reader entertained with this delightful screwball comedy. I have
read this story many times, and it always leaves me chuckling and
feeling all warm and sappy inside. This story is a definitive hole-in-one.

Title: Circumstantial Heroes · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Minas
Tirith · ID: 684
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-07-31 02:35:45
A really lovely tale. It seems perfectly clear to Pip that Aragorn
needs protecting. It's a shame, for Denethor. Really quite lovely.

Title: Exploring the Wild · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 30
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-07-31 02:41:55
Delightful tale. I loved Denethor's part in this. Putting a tent in
the garden turned into such an adventure for the boys. And the Rangers
who came to help them 'grow' were just perfect. As I said, a
delightful tale.

Title: Respite · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017
TA · ID: 389
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-07-31 02:45:06
An incredibly beautiful picture calls forth an incredibly beautiful
tale. The woman looks like Finduilas might have, the boys are lovely
in their innocense. The sense of 'peace' and 'respite' is enchanting.
Evocative image, gorgeous words.

To have lived under the Shadow with two young sons - how incredibly
horrifying - especially in knowing that they might very well die
defending Gondor. She has probably already seen too much death and
destruction.

And yet, the peaceful scene that you and the painter portray gives one
hope!

Title: Honor Unabated · Author: Linaewen · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 570
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-07-31 03:02:58
This was absolutely delightful. You had me in tears during many parts
of it. Finding Theoden, seeing Faramir, and Pippin - so beautifully
written. My heart went out to Denethor; how glad I was to see Boromir
come to his 'rescue' and help bring him peace. Each part was
wonderfully described and full of such emotion that it sometimes
became difficult to read.

I did so wish that it could end otherwise, for I agree with Boromir's
assessment - that Denethor loved his people and did the best he could.
Both men needed to hear what Boromir had learned.

Very well done indeed.

Title: Even Quicker Than Doubt · Author: Keiliss · Genres: Romance:
Second Age or Earlier · ID: 365
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-07-31 05:23:38
I had read this amazing piece "Even Quicker Than Doubt" earlier and
lost it! Was thrilled to find it again recently. It centers on an
infrequently covered time frame of the early-Second Age immediately
before the departure of Elros for Númenor. Is chock full of great
characterization, setting and mood. Its youthful Elrond is absolutely
adorable. One cannot help but love this character.

The way the author casts the differences between Elrond and Elros: the
elf side flightier and the man side more stoic and solid, but nothing
black and white--is a refreshing departure from the more common
noble-elf routine. I was able to accept the setup of Elrond's and
Elros's choice/separation as a heartless crime of the Valar--or at
very least really badly done.

A most wonderful little dog is developed as a real character and
serves as a catalyst for important reflections on the personalities of
others. Galadriel is presented as a believable pain-in-the-ass, while
still retaining her dignity and remaining one of the "good guys."
Gil-Galad is kingly, masterful and lovable; of course, Glorfindel is
incredibly appealing and Erestor is a priceless gem with his own
well-documented history.

The story is visual in a seemingly effortless way--which, of course,
as a writer I realize is actually quite difficult. It makes me want to
film it.

(I love the differences between the early-Second-Age and
late-Third-Age versions of all of these characters--making implicit
that a lot of life and living goes on in the interval.) I also love
the way the writer distinguishes the bred-in-Aman elves and those that
awakened at Cuiviénen from the ordinary born-and-bred-in-Middle-earth
elves. Congratulations to Keiliss on a wonderful achievement.

Title: A Boy and His Lob · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor · ID: 162
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:37:58
This was one of the first stories by Ignoble Bard's that I've read,
and it captured my interest right away. It is hard to write humor that
does not feel cliched or forced or modern, and this story captures so
much of that. It never becomes too adult, but parts of it feel
delightfully naughty. Yet there is more to this piece than just that.
When Legolas is sulky because his last pet ate a chambermaid, it made
me chuckle out loud. My own brother might have reacted the same way
(had we grown up to Mirkwood), and it gives the piece a quirkiness
that really, really pops (to borrow a phrase from the author).

If you like to laugh at things that are just a little risque without
completely leaving PG territory behind, this piece is a nice fun read.


Title: Friendship of Their Kind · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Early
Third Age: 1-2850 TA · ID: 425
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:39:08
I have read nearly all of the pieces that Dwim has posted in recent
years (save the sprawling WIPs), and as I've read them I've noticed
that there is always a nugget of deep thought buried somewhere in
them. Even in her humor or drabble, or (in this case) what might have
turned into a simple adventure story in less capable hands. It has all
the qualities, and it certainly works on that level. She caught my
attention immediately with Belendir's opening cry of ["Faugh!"] and
her use of details within the cave was both horrifying and
gut-wrenchingly, wonderfully graphic. Just as it should be.

But then she moves into what might be called deeper territory. Not
convinced to give us a simple tale of rangers destroying a dragon's
nest (which would be fresh territory in fanfic and good in its own
way), she gives us a piercing portrait of what is the difference
between the rangers and the type of men that characters like Barliman
Butterbur might mistake them for. Her experienced ranger Halandur has
his two green recruits prepare final rites not just for the dragons'
victims but also for the dragons' young. When Televur and Belendir
question this, she has Halandur explain, ["because you are Rangers,
not brigands and not beasts, and this is often that little distance
that makes the difference"]. In a way this reminds me of Christ's
statement, ["You have heard that it was said, 'Love your neighbor and
hate your enemy.' But I tell you: Love your enemies. (…) If you love
those who love you, what reward will you get? Are not even the tax
collectors doing that? (Mt 5:43-44, 46)] We like to think of our
rangers only doing nice things, but in the wilds when facing darkness,
I think that their hands might get a little dirty at times.
Distinctions like this come to make all the difference. Statements
like that make this story more than just a thrilling adventure tale,
or an engaging gapfiller, or a coming-of-age fic. They give the piece
lasting depth.

Msg# 8216

MEFA Reviews for October 6, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 06, 2007 - 5:25:37 Topic ID# 8216
Title: Relaxation Techniques · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Romance:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 283
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:39:49
Ah, the many facets of Theodred. We've all seen in-luv!Theo and
hott!Theo, but here he gets to develop some rather nice sides of his
personality. And he is an rascal, that's all there is for it. Even
peeved, he is great fun, and Boromir met him point for point. I love
seeing our boys in real situations like this; the passion (and not
just the erotic sort) was tangible in the room, and Boromir was very
skilled at the relaxation techniques. Nice work, EL.

Title: The Gates · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:40:03
It's so nice to see the One Dwarf (or at least the only one that
really matters :^P) get some much-needed character development here. I
loved the idea that Gimli's gifts might be different from those
typically prized by dwarves, but that they were very much needed for
the work he's going to do in Aglarond. Yet he still seems very
dwarven, just as I imagine from canon. Very nice work.

Title: Transformation · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General Drabble
· ID: 185
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:40:27
What I love most about this drabble is the keen sense of imagery that
seems to pervade it. It starts with Imrahil's clothes: sailor's pants
and half-open linen shirt, and especially that leather thong. It makes
him seem almost roguish, but it hearkens back to a simpler day before
he had to be prince, and I think it captures an awful lot about the
fourth age, that duties of command and duty in general, need not blot
out everything an individual enjoys.

But the imagery does not stop there. There's the [silver swan-ship
glinting in the sun], and the [sleek lines] of the ship, and not least
the sound of Imrahil's carefree laugh. It's all so vivid, the scene
just jumps off the page.

Title: Sarn Gebir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 398
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:48:04
Ah, this was delightful! Boromir really is in his element here; the
whole passage (up until the very last line) reminded me of the line in
the appendices that he prefers the company of men-in-arms. I do think
he thrived when there was something to protect, a simple plan of
action he could implement and see doable steps to achieve some end.
All of the cloak-and-daggers of the Fellowship just would not suit
him, and it's easy to see why the Ring would wear him down.

But then that last line. Ah! It put such an edge on the entire piece.
Even when action is required, he can't have lasting peace from the
Ring trying to wedge its way into his heart, which is sad, tragic
even. That last line transformed this vignette, and it left me thinking.


Title: Elladan and Elrohir's Not So Excellent Adventure · Author:
Fiondil · Races: Elves · ID: 97
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:52:58
I love this! The situation seems like it should raise all sorts of red
flags for plausibility... but I found myself buying into it
completely. Elladan and Elrohir are so like teenagers about to leave
for college, so sure they can do anything they might want to, and
their elders are not without their foibles, which keeps the whole
story moving along.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 16
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 23:00:23
*snickers* Even the infallible wise old man archetype character has to
have a sense of humor, and clearly Gandalf has just that. As does
Branwyn--not that she is old, or a man, but the sense of humor bit she
definitely has down. Surprisingly, I've never seen this irreverent
take on the dwarves, and it works really well. This had me chuckling
before I'd finished my first cup of coffee, which is saying something
(as I can be dead to the world). It's quite a feat in 100 words. Read
this, you won't be disappointed.

Title: And Thought How Blessed He Was · Author: Imhiriel · Genres:
Romance: Drabble · ID: 670
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 23:12:53
First, I have to say just how delightfully *hot* this piece is.
Writing erotica is always a tricky business and never more so in a
drabble where word economy is at such a premium, but Imhiriel
accomplishes it with incredible sensuality. The author somehow makes
the needed brevity work here, tantalizing snapshots that create a
really intense scene.

But this piece isn't just about the erotic content. There is a deeper
meaning about how Aragorn adjusts to a life at peace. Rangers have no
home, but kings can, and Imhiriel investigates it brilliantly here.
This was one of the best drabbles I've read in quite a while.




Title: Lost in Translation · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 31
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 23:36:35
Sophi, you really caught the frustration a non-native speaker in a
land where they don't really speak the language. I understand German
better than Pippin does "Elvish", but even I have similar moments when
I visit my family over there. And Pippin wants some information that
is so desperately important to him, I find it remarkable how well he
controls himself. And of course there are those other issues of trust
and the need to understand precisely. Nice work!

Title: The Scars of Stone And Sky · Author: Lady Elina · Times: Late
Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 719
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 23:45:39
This was a really interesting piece, told with great use of detail and
a gentle touch that brought this alive. Not only do you handle the
attraction and the physical sensations well, but also the despair is
effectively established for the reader. I do not generally like
Aragorn slash stories--not because I dislike slash in principal, but
in my interpretation of canon I have a very hard time seeing him
loving anyone but Arwen--but this is one of the few that convinced me
of the relationship's plausibility.

Title: He Came To Meet Me · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Romance
· ID: 33
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:01:58
This has a nice pastoral feel to it. It's a nice gap-filler for the
occupation of the Shire, as well as a nice character piece of the kind
of hobbit Pippin might fall in love with.

Title: It's No Mystery, Really · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits: Merry and Pippin · ID: 36
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:07:06
As with most of GW's pieces, this one left me chuckling a little under
my breath. I don't know that I'd really call it properly humor, but
the tension and the quiet jibes between cousins are very well done,
and even more importantly they added to a sense of comfort and ease
that I am sure these two would have in GW's universe. Also, Pippin
seemed duly irate for someone a little under the weather. This was a
fun read.

Title: Crossing towards Sunrise · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 14
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:22:15
What really made this piece remarkable to me was what the author does
with Gandalf's character. Too often he is portrayed as without doubts
or weaknesses, but here he does not know what to do. (And in truth,
there's nothing much he can do. Bilbo is well-drawn, too, and Elrond's
tension is palpable. This has some very nice character-writing, and is
well worth the read.

Title: Alone and Forsaken · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Drama: Vignette
· ID: 466
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:30:09
Sometimes a character's mindset is not the prettiest place to be, yet
it is necessary to crawl into his headspace to understand why he does
what he does in the canon. And Boromir's handling of Frodo's and
Aragorn's rejection of his argument is just such a case. This piece
gives us very nice glimpse into the desperation Boromir might have
felt. It doesn't make what he did right, but maybe it makes it a
little more understandable. I particularly liked the thought that of
course a country who had been tested so thoroughly would have no
strength left. It makes sense, and more importantly, it makes
Boromir's desperation believable.

Title: The Waves' Song · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 6
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:31:03
This brought on a real *sniffle* moment. The writing is so
atmospheric, and you can almost feel the ennui and lethargy in your
bones. Poor Arwen indeed. Yet as a reader I really liked it; it was
very affective.

Title: Left Behind · Author: Elanor · Genres: Drama: With Merry · ID: 28
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:02:43
This is such a fun story. I love all of the details, especially the
bit about Finduilas setting up the garden in the Houses of Healing.
But what really stands out is the insight into Merry's and Faramir's
character. They both seem completely reconcileable with their canon
selves as well as exemplars of their races, while still the story
added to how I understand them. I don't know if a story with this much
angst can be properly "enjoyed", but I certainly found myself thinking
for quite a while after I'd read this story.

Title: Tamer's Tale · Author: juno_magic · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 41
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:07:46
There are some things, it seems, that just should not work even in the
hands of the most skilled writer. Gandalf is and always will be a
stodgy old man, and before I read "Tamer's Tale" I never would have
thought that a Gandalf romance would have worked. Yet this story does
it. The erotic content and the tension between Gandalf and the OC here
is very nicely told, never getting too explicit but creating a
meaningful relationship that I could esily relate to.

And this story is sensuous in more ways than just that. Juno creates
an entire world, built around the concept of the last remnant of
Maedhros's fortress and tells the story of a whole family. Yet the
story did not feel weighed down by the backstory, and everything I was
told was both interesting in its own rite and pertinent to the larger
story. That's not something that's always easy to do here, but Juno
pulls it off marvellously. This is a must-read for fans of convincing
and well-rounded original characters.


Title: Respite · Author: Lindelea · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 303
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:12:53
This story is both truly sad and truly beautiful. It is beautiful in
the use of details. Drabbles often suffer for them, but this drabble
has a topic that is well-chosen and does not try to tell too much, and
so can tell what snippets it chooses to focus in on in a fuller way
than I seem able to accomplish these days. It's an admirable tale, and
while I still want to know more about Faramir in Ithilien, I was not
left feeling like there had to be more to the story in order for me to
be really satisfied.

The beauty of this piece also lies with the theme the author gives us.
I find it telling that Faramir makes his intellectual development a
priority even in Ithilien. We would excuse him if at the end of a
day's hiking he collapsed and didn't do anything cognitive if he could
help it. Or even if he drunk himself into a stupor to drown out what
he saw. Yet this drabble drives home the point that Faramir, and
Gondor by extension, is still more man than animal.

But there is also the darker underside. Because there are always more
raids to plan, and Faramir is dragged away from what he might enjoy.
That's the reality of Ithilien at this point in history, and the
contrast with bookish!Faramir really drives home the depth of the
conflict between Mordor and Westernesse.


Title: The Perfect Girl · Author: nikara · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 232
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:23:28
This is an interesting look at the Mary Sue phenomena. Your thoughts
about why young authors write Sues was intriguing. I agree, creativity
should be encouraged and I'm not crazy about the common reaction to
these stories.

Title: Unstrung · Author: Tehta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 161
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:31:03
This piece is, quite simply put, brilliant. Beyond brilliant,
actually, but I fear that English fails me here. As with a ll of
Tehta's work there is an understated quality to it that sneaks up on
you until it hits you like the proverbial ton of bricks. But the piece
is so understated that I am convinced my epiphanies are my own, not
the author's theme. That's just part of the brilliance.

Tehta includes author's notes at the end of this piece to explain some
of these references, and I'm glad she did, obviously, but I also found
that I did not need them as much as I thought I would. Without giving
away any of the surprises, I will say that I do not read much Silmfic,
have only read the Silmarillion twice, and even I puzzled out *most*
of what she hints at in the text before I got to the notes. But
because it was only suggested instead of told outright, it made me
think about what was going on much more. A similar thing happened for
me in "Gathering the Pieces". And ironically, the titles of both
pieces reflect just how I feel about the pieces. Here I was unstrung
in my own way; when I finally saw the extent of the Feanorians' fall I
had to cry, because it felt like I was experiencing it with them.
That's quite an accomplishment given my self-professed ignorance of
the Silmarillion.

But where Tehta really shines is in her description of the artists'
craft. I was completely blown away by her description of what art
takes out of the artist and the demands it has. The bits about the
difference between falsity and truth in art reminded me of some of my
favorite passages in _The Handmaid's Tale_, and affected me in much
the same way. Interestingly, all art (and I include fanfic in this) is
an imitation of Tolkien's original books (or Jackson's movies, if
they're movieverse), and so to affectively mimic them the author must
first have the qualities Maglor needed to mimic his brothers. Tehta
truly understands, pities, loves, (and perhaps fears?) her beloved
Feanorians, and it shines through here. Of course, she goes beyond
that by commenting on areas where Tolkien didn't go (at least not that
I've read), but that mimicry is the foundation that makes this piece
so strong.

"Enjoy" isn't the right word for this piece. It unsettled me, it moved
me, it made me think, and it connected me with the First Age Elves in
a way I don't think I had previously. At least not these Elves. I
eagerly anticipate more short pieces like this from Tehta.


Title: Stopping by Woods · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 19
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:41:28
Oh, this is simply beautiful! "Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening"
is one of my all-time favorite poems, and you have brought it to life
in Middle-earth. What really shines through this short tale is the way
that even I, being as fond of this poem as I am, did not realize just
how closely you had followed Frost's formula until I reached the
verses you quoted at the end. It was seamless, and seemed so natural!

But let's not just stop with the way you took charge of a beautiful
and poignant poem and made it say something new; because this story is
about much more than that poem. I love the imagery of Faramir with
white hair seeking out hints of his brother's last journey. The word
"relic" comes to mind, because he really does remind me of a medieval
Christian making pilgrimage to a saint's shrine. The fact that this is
set so late in his life makes me wonder just how much of all those
years since the War of the Ring he has given over to finding peace
about Boromir's fall, and understanding his conquering. I don't think
it dominated his entire life to the point that it blocked out
everything else good he could have enjoyed, but I do think his grief
would buoy up from time to time.

What I really admire about this story, though, is the way you look at
the "road" Faramir cannot yet travel. At first I thought he was very
literally going to follow in Boromir's footsteps by riding to
Rivendell, but it's more than that. He is old, and tired, and I can
see him maybe being ready to die (he did live so long), but after
Denethor despaired of life, I think that might be the promise he has
to keep: that he will not give up on life too soon, and that he'll
always find joy and not let himself be weighed down too deeply.
Perhaps I'm reading too much into this! But even so, it made me think
and that thinking proved remarkably fertile ground, especially when
you consider the vignette's short length. Really, really brilliant
job, this piece.


Title: Concussion · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure · ID: 711
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:49:16
This is a charming tale, with lots of neat interactions between
characters I wish Tolkien had written more together. You found an
interesting canon accident, and the healing and the injury itself was
realistic as I understand the times and cultures. Nice work.

Title: The Burning of the Year · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 2
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:51:28
This is a great piece. There is so much detail, the first part of the
scene just leaps off the page. And there is a historicity to the piece
developed through the reference to the old sacrifices of the King's
Men on Numenor's sacrifices to Morgoth that call to mind Tolkien's
intricate backstory. It gives the characters and Gondor's larger
situation a depth that creates a more compelling story, not that the
simple Denethor-Faramir conflict is lacking for poignancy.

Yet what really does it for me is that final line: "[fire will cleanse
the final sacrifice]." At least as far as I understand Greek
philosophy, water is the element that cleans, and fire that devours. I
think it is a sign of how desperate Denethor has gotten that he sees
cleansing in the pyre's obliteration. Telling, and tragic. Well done
getting the point across.


Title: Blooded · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 3
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 02:51:49
This is a very nice portrayal of the young Faramir first coming into
his manhood. The battle scene is told engagingly but without
overwhelming the story (as it could have), and the focus is kept
squarely where all of us Faramiristas love it: on the angst that makes
the young man into the aptain, steward and prince we all come to love.
Faramir is very realistic here, almost stoic, and he knows his duty
well; yet that does not mean he has to like it. It's a sober and
realistic portrayal of Gondor's peril and Faramir's character.

Title: The Accidental King: Five Reasons Why Finarfin Deserves an
Appreciation Month · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 5
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 03:07:42
This essay is really well put-together; it does for Finarfin's
character what Marnie's fiction and essays did for me for Marnie (that
is to say: made him a WHOLE lot more accessible, and pretty sexy to
boot :-P). Kidding aside, I had always thought of him as something of
a non-starter, canonically: great fodder for fanfic, but not a lot to
go on. Yet in what is unsaid and in the nuances of what is said, Dawn
shows us a side of Finwe's youngest son hat I never imagined. And he's
a really interesting and intriguing character, with all of the alure
of Faramir's nobility or Frodo's insistence that he will not use a
sword that has so captured the imagination of us Ring War fanatics.
I'm glad this essay gave him a bit of limelight.

Title: Fruition · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 7
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 03:21:22
Ooh, AU indeed. You are indeed the master of the short and dark AU; I
couldn't stop reading, and while my head kept protesting that no, no,
this could never in a million years happen, my heart is less sure.
Truly things were on the edge of a knife, and one ruthless lord could
have toppled so much.

Msg# 8217

MEFA Reviews for October 7, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 07, 2007 - 4:31:30 Topic ID# 8217
Title: Relaxation Techniques · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Romance:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 283
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:39:49
Ah, the many facets of Theodred. We've all seen in-luv!Theo and
hott!Theo, but here he gets to develop some rather nice sides of his
personality. And he is an rascal, that's all there is for it. Even
peeved, he is great fun, and Boromir met him point for point. I love
seeing our boys in real situations like this; the passion (and not
just the erotic sort) was tangible in the room, and Boromir was very
skilled at the relaxation techniques. Nice work, EL.

Title: The Gates · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:40:03
It's so nice to see the One Dwarf (or at least the only one that
really matters :^P) get some much-needed character development here. I
loved the idea that Gimli's gifts might be different from those
typically prized by dwarves, but that they were very much needed for
the work he's going to do in Aglarond. Yet he still seems very
dwarven, just as I imagine from canon. Very nice work.

Title: Transformation · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General Drabble
· ID: 185
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:40:27
What I love most about this drabble is the keen sense of imagery that
seems to pervade it. It starts with Imrahil's clothes: sailor's pants
and half-open linen shirt, and especially that leather thong. It makes
him seem almost roguish, but it hearkens back to a simpler day before
he had to be prince, and I think it captures an awful lot about the
fourth age, that duties of command and duty in general, need not blot
out everything an individual enjoys.

But the imagery does not stop there. There's the [silver swan-ship
glinting in the sun], and the [sleek lines] of the ship, and not least
the sound of Imrahil's carefree laugh. It's all so vivid, the scene
just jumps off the page.

Title: Sarn Gebir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 398
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:48:04
Ah, this was delightful! Boromir really is in his element here; the
whole passage (up until the very last line) reminded me of the line in
the appendices that he prefers the company of men-in-arms. I do think
he thrived when there was something to protect, a simple plan of
action he could implement and see doable steps to achieve some end.
All of the cloak-and-daggers of the Fellowship just would not suit
him, and it's easy to see why the Ring would wear him down.

But then that last line. Ah! It put such an edge on the entire piece.
Even when action is required, he can't have lasting peace from the
Ring trying to wedge its way into his heart, which is sad, tragic
even. That last line transformed this vignette, and it left me thinking.


Title: Elladan and Elrohir's Not So Excellent Adventure · Author:
Fiondil · Races: Elves · ID: 97
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 22:52:58
I love this! The situation seems like it should raise all sorts of red
flags for plausibility... but I found myself buying into it
completely. Elladan and Elrohir are so like teenagers about to leave
for college, so sure they can do anything they might want to, and
their elders are not without their foibles, which keeps the whole
story moving along.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 16
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 23:00:23
*snickers* Even the infallible wise old man archetype character has to
have a sense of humor, and clearly Gandalf has just that. As does
Branwyn--not that she is old, or a man, but the sense of humor bit she
definitely has down. Surprisingly, I've never seen this irreverent
take on the dwarves, and it works really well. This had me chuckling
before I'd finished my first cup of coffee, which is saying something
(as I can be dead to the world). It's quite a feat in 100 words. Read
this, you won't be disappointed.

Title: And Thought How Blessed He Was · Author: Imhiriel · Genres:
Romance: Drabble · ID: 670
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 23:12:53
First, I have to say just how delightfully *hot* this piece is.
Writing erotica is always a tricky business and never more so in a
drabble where word economy is at such a premium, but Imhiriel
accomplishes it with incredible sensuality. The author somehow makes
the needed brevity work here, tantalizing snapshots that create a
really intense scene.

But this piece isn't just about the erotic content. There is a deeper
meaning about how Aragorn adjusts to a life at peace. Rangers have no
home, but kings can, and Imhiriel investigates it brilliantly here.
This was one of the best drabbles I've read in quite a while.




Title: Lost in Translation · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 31
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 23:36:35
Sophi, you really caught the frustration a non-native speaker in a
land where they don't really speak the language. I understand German
better than Pippin does "Elvish", but even I have similar moments when
I visit my family over there. And Pippin wants some information that
is so desperately important to him, I find it remarkable how well he
controls himself. And of course there are those other issues of trust
and the need to understand precisely. Nice work!

Title: The Scars of Stone And Sky · Author: Lady Elina · Times: Late
Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 719
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-07-31 23:45:39
This was a really interesting piece, told with great use of detail and
a gentle touch that brought this alive. Not only do you handle the
attraction and the physical sensations well, but also the despair is
effectively established for the reader. I do not generally like
Aragorn slash stories--not because I dislike slash in principal, but
in my interpretation of canon I have a very hard time seeing him
loving anyone but Arwen--but this is one of the few that convinced me
of the relationship's plausibility.

Title: He Came To Meet Me · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Romance
· ID: 33
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:01:58
This has a nice pastoral feel to it. It's a nice gap-filler for the
occupation of the Shire, as well as a nice character piece of the kind
of hobbit Pippin might fall in love with.

Title: It's No Mystery, Really · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits: Merry and Pippin · ID: 36
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:07:06
As with most of GW's pieces, this one left me chuckling a little under
my breath. I don't know that I'd really call it properly humor, but
the tension and the quiet jibes between cousins are very well done,
and even more importantly they added to a sense of comfort and ease
that I am sure these two would have in GW's universe. Also, Pippin
seemed duly irate for someone a little under the weather. This was a
fun read.

Title: Crossing towards Sunrise · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 14
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:22:15
What really made this piece remarkable to me was what the author does
with Gandalf's character. Too often he is portrayed as without doubts
or weaknesses, but here he does not know what to do. (And in truth,
there's nothing much he can do. Bilbo is well-drawn, too, and Elrond's
tension is palpable. This has some very nice character-writing, and is
well worth the read.

Title: Alone and Forsaken · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Drama: Vignette
· ID: 466
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:30:09
Sometimes a character's mindset is not the prettiest place to be, yet
it is necessary to crawl into his headspace to understand why he does
what he does in the canon. And Boromir's handling of Frodo's and
Aragorn's rejection of his argument is just such a case. This piece
gives us very nice glimpse into the desperation Boromir might have
felt. It doesn't make what he did right, but maybe it makes it a
little more understandable. I particularly liked the thought that of
course a country who had been tested so thoroughly would have no
strength left. It makes sense, and more importantly, it makes
Boromir's desperation believable.

Title: The Waves' Song · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 6
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 00:31:03
This brought on a real *sniffle* moment. The writing is so
atmospheric, and you can almost feel the ennui and lethargy in your
bones. Poor Arwen indeed. Yet as a reader I really liked it; it was
very affective.

Title: Left Behind · Author: Elanor · Genres: Drama: With Merry · ID: 28
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:02:43
This is such a fun story. I love all of the details, especially the
bit about Finduilas setting up the garden in the Houses of Healing.
But what really stands out is the insight into Merry's and Faramir's
character. They both seem completely reconcileable with their canon
selves as well as exemplars of their races, while still the story
added to how I understand them. I don't know if a story with this much
angst can be properly "enjoyed", but I certainly found myself thinking
for quite a while after I'd read this story.

Title: Tamer's Tale · Author: juno_magic · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 41
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:07:46
There are some things, it seems, that just should not work even in the
hands of the most skilled writer. Gandalf is and always will be a
stodgy old man, and before I read "Tamer's Tale" I never would have
thought that a Gandalf romance would have worked. Yet this story does
it. The erotic content and the tension between Gandalf and the OC here
is very nicely told, never getting too explicit but creating a
meaningful relationship that I could esily relate to.

And this story is sensuous in more ways than just that. Juno creates
an entire world, built around the concept of the last remnant of
Maedhros's fortress and tells the story of a whole family. Yet the
story did not feel weighed down by the backstory, and everything I was
told was both interesting in its own rite and pertinent to the larger
story. That's not something that's always easy to do here, but Juno
pulls it off marvellously. This is a must-read for fans of convincing
and well-rounded original characters.


Title: Respite · Author: Lindelea · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 303
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:12:53
This story is both truly sad and truly beautiful. It is beautiful in
the use of details. Drabbles often suffer for them, but this drabble
has a topic that is well-chosen and does not try to tell too much, and
so can tell what snippets it chooses to focus in on in a fuller way
than I seem able to accomplish these days. It's an admirable tale, and
while I still want to know more about Faramir in Ithilien, I was not
left feeling like there had to be more to the story in order for me to
be really satisfied.

The beauty of this piece also lies with the theme the author gives us.
I find it telling that Faramir makes his intellectual development a
priority even in Ithilien. We would excuse him if at the end of a
day's hiking he collapsed and didn't do anything cognitive if he could
help it. Or even if he drunk himself into a stupor to drown out what
he saw. Yet this drabble drives home the point that Faramir, and
Gondor by extension, is still more man than animal.

But there is also the darker underside. Because there are always more
raids to plan, and Faramir is dragged away from what he might enjoy.
That's the reality of Ithilien at this point in history, and the
contrast with bookish!Faramir really drives home the depth of the
conflict between Mordor and Westernesse.


Title: The Perfect Girl · Author: nikara · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 232
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:23:28
This is an interesting look at the Mary Sue phenomena. Your thoughts
about why young authors write Sues was intriguing. I agree, creativity
should be encouraged and I'm not crazy about the common reaction to
these stories.

Title: Unstrung · Author: Tehta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 161
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:31:03
This piece is, quite simply put, brilliant. Beyond brilliant,
actually, but I fear that English fails me here. As with a ll of
Tehta's work there is an understated quality to it that sneaks up on
you until it hits you like the proverbial ton of bricks. But the piece
is so understated that I am convinced my epiphanies are my own, not
the author's theme. That's just part of the brilliance.

Tehta includes author's notes at the end of this piece to explain some
of these references, and I'm glad she did, obviously, but I also found
that I did not need them as much as I thought I would. Without giving
away any of the surprises, I will say that I do not read much Silmfic,
have only read the Silmarillion twice, and even I puzzled out *most*
of what she hints at in the text before I got to the notes. But
because it was only suggested instead of told outright, it made me
think about what was going on much more. A similar thing happened for
me in "Gathering the Pieces". And ironically, the titles of both
pieces reflect just how I feel about the pieces. Here I was unstrung
in my own way; when I finally saw the extent of the Feanorians' fall I
had to cry, because it felt like I was experiencing it with them.
That's quite an accomplishment given my self-professed ignorance of
the Silmarillion.

But where Tehta really shines is in her description of the artists'
craft. I was completely blown away by her description of what art
takes out of the artist and the demands it has. The bits about the
difference between falsity and truth in art reminded me of some of my
favorite passages in _The Handmaid's Tale_, and affected me in much
the same way. Interestingly, all art (and I include fanfic in this) is
an imitation of Tolkien's original books (or Jackson's movies, if
they're movieverse), and so to affectively mimic them the author must
first have the qualities Maglor needed to mimic his brothers. Tehta
truly understands, pities, loves, (and perhaps fears?) her beloved
Feanorians, and it shines through here. Of course, she goes beyond
that by commenting on areas where Tolkien didn't go (at least not that
I've read), but that mimicry is the foundation that makes this piece
so strong.

"Enjoy" isn't the right word for this piece. It unsettled me, it moved
me, it made me think, and it connected me with the First Age Elves in
a way I don't think I had previously. At least not these Elves. I
eagerly anticipate more short pieces like this from Tehta.


Title: Stopping by Woods · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 19
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:41:28
Oh, this is simply beautiful! "Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening"
is one of my all-time favorite poems, and you have brought it to life
in Middle-earth. What really shines through this short tale is the way
that even I, being as fond of this poem as I am, did not realize just
how closely you had followed Frost's formula until I reached the
verses you quoted at the end. It was seamless, and seemed so natural!

But let's not just stop with the way you took charge of a beautiful
and poignant poem and made it say something new; because this story is
about much more than that poem. I love the imagery of Faramir with
white hair seeking out hints of his brother's last journey. The word
"relic" comes to mind, because he really does remind me of a medieval
Christian making pilgrimage to a saint's shrine. The fact that this is
set so late in his life makes me wonder just how much of all those
years since the War of the Ring he has given over to finding peace
about Boromir's fall, and understanding his conquering. I don't think
it dominated his entire life to the point that it blocked out
everything else good he could have enjoyed, but I do think his grief
would buoy up from time to time.

What I really admire about this story, though, is the way you look at
the "road" Faramir cannot yet travel. At first I thought he was very
literally going to follow in Boromir's footsteps by riding to
Rivendell, but it's more than that. He is old, and tired, and I can
see him maybe being ready to die (he did live so long), but after
Denethor despaired of life, I think that might be the promise he has
to keep: that he will not give up on life too soon, and that he'll
always find joy and not let himself be weighed down too deeply.
Perhaps I'm reading too much into this! But even so, it made me think
and that thinking proved remarkably fertile ground, especially when
you consider the vignette's short length. Really, really brilliant
job, this piece.


Title: Concussion · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure · ID: 711
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:49:16
This is a charming tale, with lots of neat interactions between
characters I wish Tolkien had written more together. You found an
interesting canon accident, and the healing and the injury itself was
realistic as I understand the times and cultures. Nice work.

Title: The Burning of the Year · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 2
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 01:51:28
This is a great piece. There is so much detail, the first part of the
scene just leaps off the page. And there is a historicity to the piece
developed through the reference to the old sacrifices of the King's
Men on Numenor's sacrifices to Morgoth that call to mind Tolkien's
intricate backstory. It gives the characters and Gondor's larger
situation a depth that creates a more compelling story, not that the
simple Denethor-Faramir conflict is lacking for poignancy.

Yet what really does it for me is that final line: "[fire will cleanse
the final sacrifice]." At least as far as I understand Greek
philosophy, water is the element that cleans, and fire that devours. I
think it is a sign of how desperate Denethor has gotten that he sees
cleansing in the pyre's obliteration. Telling, and tragic. Well done
getting the point across.


Title: Blooded · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 3
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 02:51:49
This is a very nice portrayal of the young Faramir first coming into
his manhood. The battle scene is told engagingly but without
overwhelming the story (as it could have), and the focus is kept
squarely where all of us Faramiristas love it: on the angst that makes
the young man into the aptain, steward and prince we all come to love.
Faramir is very realistic here, almost stoic, and he knows his duty
well; yet that does not mean he has to like it. It's a sober and
realistic portrayal of Gondor's peril and Faramir's character.

Title: The Accidental King: Five Reasons Why Finarfin Deserves an
Appreciation Month · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 5
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 03:07:42
This essay is really well put-together; it does for Finarfin's
character what Marnie's fiction and essays did for me for Marnie (that
is to say: made him a WHOLE lot more accessible, and pretty sexy to
boot :-P). Kidding aside, I had always thought of him as something of
a non-starter, canonically: great fodder for fanfic, but not a lot to
go on. Yet in what is unsaid and in the nuances of what is said, Dawn
shows us a side of Finwe's youngest son hat I never imagined. And he's
a really interesting and intriguing character, with all of the alure
of Faramir's nobility or Frodo's insistence that he will not use a
sword that has so captured the imagination of us Ring War fanatics.
I'm glad this essay gave him a bit of limelight.

Title: Fruition · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 7
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 03:21:22
Ooh, AU indeed. You are indeed the master of the short and dark AU; I
couldn't stop reading, and while my head kept protesting that no, no,
this could never in a million years happen, my heart is less sure.
Truly things were on the edge of a knife, and one ruthless lord could
have toppled so much.

Msg# 8218

MEFA Reviews for October 7, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 07, 2007 - 4:33:56 Topic ID# 8218
Title: South · Author: Aliana · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor
or Rohan · ID: 8
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 03:33:01I already knew that this author
could write hobbits from her Eowyn-and-Frodo vignette from I think the
2006 awards, but in this piece her skill really shines. They are adult
and have weighty concerns that must be addressed and dealt with, yet
they still have that buoyancy I love so much, and it hits the reader
all the harder because Merry is so very weighed down by his wartime
horrors. Excellent character writing, Aliana.

Title: To Light the Way · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 12
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 03:41:26
This piece runs on a risky tension that could have descended into
sentimentality if handled by a less skilled writer, or simply
cancelled each other out and left the reader feeling "blah". On the
one hand, there is the high energy of the Mirkwood elves and even at
times the twins. This is well developed and even through their
melancholy we see moments that calls to mind the ["pretty fair
nonsense"] of the Rivendell Elves in _The Hobbit_. But there is also
the darker undertones of the weariness and the general grief the elves
have had to suffer, and the hopelessness of their general situation.
It reminds me a bit of Eowyn's hopelessness of finding a death worthy
of song, only without the hopelessness. Because the elven (or perhaps
Sindarin/Avarin) joviality wins through, giving us a glimpse of a
people that are too buoyant to be held down. It's a remarkably
effective way of characterizing a people, and it works marvellously
well here.

Title: The man in the woods · Author: Dot · Races: Men: Eriador or
Rivendell · ID: 13
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 03:47:46
This was very well done. The little girl and her brother were so
realistic, and I think this is just how life might have been in the
North in those years.

Title: Multicultural Interactions · Author: annmarwalk · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 18
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:00:03
In "Multicultural Interactions" Annmarwalk puts her gift for
characterization to extremely good use as she has to deal with two
minor characters who are barely names in the canon, and from very
different cultures. Elanor could not be anything other than a hobbit,
really, and the curiosity tempered with common sense that Ann infuses
her with are just what you'd expect from Sam's and Rosie's daughter.

Yet the character who really stole my heart in this tale is Elboron.
He is a bit like Bergil in his way, and also has characteristics that
remind you of any teenage boy: tripping over himself with excitement
at the things happening around him. But there's also Gondorian pride
and a touch of how Faramir treats the hobbits in Henneth Annûn. It's a
lovely portrait of a boy growing up in a time of peace.

Really, this pair of stories made my birthday week when she wrote it
for me. Some of my favorite work by her; I doubt it will disappoint.


Title: Bliss and Beauty · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabble
· ID: 20
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:06:33
This is really nice. The imagery you use is exquisite, and the use of
the numbers creates a very poetic look at their love, which I found
fitting.

Title: Escape · Author: Bodkin · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA
· ID: 24
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:12:00
This was really nice work. I love stories where we only figure out
peoples' identities slowly, when they're done well, and this
definitely qualifies. You also do a good job of developing the
tensions between men and elves. It reminded me somehow of the Battle
of the Five Armies, where the so-called "good guys" would have been at
each others' throats if the baddies hadn't shown up.

Title: Exploring the Wild · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 30
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:13:55
This was a lot of fun to read. Your young Boromir and Faramir are
always so full of life, and Nanny was laugh-out-loud funny at points.
And I got a definite giggle at the revelation that even Haloth doesn't
know Nanny's real name. I guess nobody does. Nice work, EL!

Title: Thirst · Author: sophinisba solis · Races: Hobbits: Vignette ·
ID: 32
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:14:09
What I most liked about this set of vignettes was the subtle way the
theme of water was used. It's not always obvious, but it always felt
natural and the different ways it connected Merry to other people he
met seemed to mirror his changing experiences quite well.

Title: Mettarë · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men · ID: 34
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:14:25
Oh, this was beautiful. What I like most about this is the theme that
you develop here about the price that Gondor must have paid to resist
Mordor so long. There is a taint that settles on them, much as they
might fight against it, and you portray it really well, first by
Boromir's disdain for the holiday and then by his need to hear the
song again. If Aragorn's treatment of Boromir is any indication, I
think he'll be a good king for Gondor.

Title: Three Turnings of the Year · Author: Ruby Nye · Races: Hobbits
· ID: 37
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:14:51
These vignettes were delightful. It doesn't surprise me given the
author that she should capture the pastoral quality often associated
with hobbit life, without them seeming that childish. That's a hard
quality to get at (innocence but not childishness), and the author
sidesteps the problem by giving the hobbits real problemms. Vinca's
concern for Pippin and the after-effects of the Shire Occupation in
particularly give these encounters weight, but they are still holidays
and they never descend into angst. Good work; I think anyone who likes
serious but not overly depressing stuff will enjoy these.

Title: Outmatched · Author: Tiana Luthien · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 132
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:15:08
LOL! Great interaction between Eomer and here, I can see a
friendly-antagonistic relationship working good between those two. It
really seems to fit their character, and the humor here was very sharp
and in-character for the two of them. I really liked this, Ti!

Title: Gentlemen's Night Out · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor: Gondor
or Rohan · ID: 181
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:15:25
This story is a really fun read--I love imagining the gradual dawning
of realization on Legolas and the twins' revulsion about not wanting
to know who Legolas has slept with. And that line, [The Edain consider
such things a virtue?], really had me chuckling. You had some good
characterizations, and an innovative approach to LACE as well.

Title: Seeking to Please · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring
War · ID: 193
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:17:04
This was really nicely done, Gwynnyd. It always seemed odd to me that
Aragorn and Arwen parted the way they did, then came together again
and were betrothed with nothing happening in between. Very mythic, but
also rather unrealistic. You've done a good job of filling in this
pocket of time when they might have been less comfortable with each
other.And having Elrohir give a more distanced view of things was a
touch of briliance, I loved his observations.

Title: Here We Go Round The Mulberry Bush · Author: Isabeau of
Greenlea · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 512
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:17:25
Hee! This was a fun little read. It's fun to see hobbits in their
element, and you certainly wrote them there. Pippin had best watch
himself around that lass.

Title: Fell and Fair · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 526
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:17:49
Oh! This drabble series took my breath away. I have always loved Elena
Tiriel's drabbles for both their excellent writing and deft use of
canon. As with all of her stuff, "Fell and Fair" uses what little
canon we have about the Battle of the Fields of Celebrant to great
use, and in fact the whole series is inspired by a rather obscure
quote in HoMe. But the series is not stultified as many gapfillers can
be, and it tells us a whole new side of canon. It reminds me of
nothing so much as Marnie's "The Battle of the Golden Woods", one of
my favorite fanfic stories--only this is in drabbles, which makes the
accomplishment all the greater.

"Fell and Fair" has another thing in common with Marnie's novel: the
Sindarin elves are really in their element, and Celeborn especially.
Anyone who knows me well knows that I am a Celeborn fangurl, but it
has to be a certain type of Celeborn. For one, he has to be passionate
and wise at the same time, and have a good sense of humor. Check on
that count; his interactions with his lieutenant and their remembrance
of Doriath was absolutely hilarious, and the (rather misleading….)
tension of the fencing match with Elrohir was…. well, passionate is a
good word here, as the author knows from my previous comments. :-D I
most love Celeborn when he is not only Sindarin but very central to
Doriath's politics, and Celeborn & Galadriel also need to be in
balance, with Celeborn neither being overwhelmed by Galadriel's power,
or vice versa. Again, check on both accounts; F&F definitely succeeds.

The making of the lembas, the departure of Celebrian, Elrohir's and
Elladan's connection to the Edain, fleshing out the Gondorian
history…. there is *so* much to love in this series, and the only
regret I have is that it's not finished yet.


Title: Moira · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 676
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:18:06
This is a neat look at the hobbits, and their place in the Song. It
was nice to see how they were not forgotten by the PTB, even if the
other races didn't take much notice of them.

Title: A Kingly Discussion · Author: GamgeeFest · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 780
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:18:28
Oh, this was really fun to read, Gamgee Fest. The hobbits' reaction to
the Big Folk was perfectly believable. You really captured that
hobbity sense of humor well here, putting a unique spin on the
canonical facts about both races.

Title: Forcing a Path · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 400
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-01 04:19:07
This is a nice little moment. I always wondered what happened when
Boromir and Aragorn left the Fellowship at Caradhras, and you've
filled that gap well.

Title: Perturbation of Fate · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama:
General Drabble · ID: 428
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-01 04:57:05
Effective, but sad, Maglor drabble. The piece presents a good reason
for Maglor's not returning to the West; but it's also a terribly
tragic one; that he still feels bound to his oath and to its object,
the Silmaril.

Rhapsody presents a haunting portrait here of an Elf bound too much to
a past as horrible as it was glorious, and his refusal to leave it behind.

Title: Marking Fours · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 1
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-01 05:06:36
This amazing drabble quartet densely packs a whole gamut of emotions
and ideas into just four hundred words. I was especially impressed by
the themes of the good/bad father,light and darkness and the
progression of time and grief.
It is ironic that Denethor who as his father gave Faramir life, should
seek to take that life away. I see Aragorn as becoming a symbolic
father to Faramir, by his healing of him. Faramir has a rebirth by
again coming forth from the darkness at his King's bidding.

For a man of Faramir's character, knowing the manner of his father's
death must have been a cruel blow. I like the author's idea that he
met Eowyn the day he heard the dreadful news.

I like the way Lothiriel helps and advises her cousin on preparing a
home for Eowyn. Faramir is finally starting to shake off Denethor's
shadow when he realises he no longer cares what his father would have
thought.
I always imagine Faramir as a good father, but having some issues to
overcome in being able to be the father that Denethor was not to his
own children. it is fitting that Elboron's first word,and hearing
himself addessed as "father" should finally unleash Faramir's long
supressed grief.

These drabbles are a fine writing acheivement and I highly reccomend them.

Title: The Burning of the Year · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 2
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-01 05:06:54
This is a haunting and somewhat chilling tale, which seamlessly blends
ancient myths with Tolkien's world.

Mettare is being celebrated in what will eventually prove to be one of
the most momentous years in Gondor's history. As Boromir is seeking
the answer to the riddle that he and his brother dreamed, it is
Faramir's place to lead the New Year procession.

The Steward's younger son tries hard to keep up his spirits, despite
knowing that the hour of destiny is at hand and badly missing his
elder brother.

It is heartrending to see how hard Faramir tries to win his father's
approval but always to be compared to Boromir and found wanting.

A sense of foreboding overshadows this story and what should be a
joyous celebration for Faramir and his father is overshadowed by the
knowledge that none may live to see the year out.

The writer skilfully uses the sacrificial rituals that form part of
our history and culture to show Faramir as the chosen victim, albeit a
symbolic one

Faramir hopes for some show of warmth from the father he admires but
can never please but is given only grudging praise.

The author uses a variety of symbols, which strike a chord in the
reader, light and darkness, life and death, old and new, fire, two
wreaths, one living and one dead.

The story is dark with foreboding throughout and ends with a chilling
foreshadowing of what Denethor will eventually do to his son. The
symbolic sacrifice, almost becomes a real one.


Title: Blooded · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 3
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-01 05:07:17
What must it be like to kill? That is fortunately a question we most
likely will never know the answer to.. For a sensitive young man like
Faramir, Killing must have been a traumatic experience, especially for
the first time.

I would think killing with a sword would be especially nasty and
gruesome. Maybe the reason Faramir became an archer, was that is a
more distant method of despatching an enemy?

This thought provoking and well-written story explores the young
Faramir's feelings on making his first kill. Unlike his companions he
does not boast of his deeds, neither does he rush off to be sick.

The other young men hasten to give their swords heroic names. Faramir
has only a dagger to name, the sword being an old one of his father's
already named, ut can only think of a very prosaic title.

Reading this moving story made me realise how hard it must have been
for someone like Faramir who would rather play a lute or become a
scholar, to embrace the destiny that Sauron had forced on Gondor's
young men.

Faramir fears being unable to do his duty. We knowing, Faramir, know
he will but at what cost?

This story shows Faramir as a man apart, set at a distance from the
other young men, both by his rank and his qualms about killing. Unlike
Boromir, he is not a natural soldier, but the fact he has to overcome
his revulsion and fear, makes his triumph over it all the greater.


Title: Keeper of the Jewels · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Adventure:
Minas Tirith · ID: 64
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-01 05:21:04
This story had me on the edge of my seat from start to finish,eagerly
awaiting each new chapter of this exciting adventure.

I love the way the Fellowship show they can still work together when
Sam is kidnapped in a case of mistaked identity.I especially enjoyed
the writer's portrayal of Aragorn and his devotion to the missing Hobbit.

It is always a risk to use original characters in a work of
fanfiction, but the original character is a highlight of this story.

Lady Artanis begins as one of the villains, but shows herself more
than capable or redemption.Neglected by her family, she is drawn into
their scemes against Aragorn, but gradually comes to see his true
nobility. Aragorn ,for his part, shows true greatness in his treatment
of her when all is revealed.

A most enjoyable read.

Title: The Tides of the World · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late
Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 101
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-01 05:34:42
This is a beautifully written and bittersweet vignette which shows
Aragorn's greatness and also his humanity.

I read of his exploits on March 15th 3019 with awe, as he raises the
Army of the Dead,overthrows the Corsairs sails to Gondor, fights in
the battle and then instead of resting,spends all night healing the sick !

This touching ficlet explores the aftermath of Aragorn's exploits on
that memorable day. When the weary soon to be King is finally able to
seek his tent, he is so exausted that he can hardly walk and Elladan
and Elrohir anxiously escort him and tenderly care for their foster
brother. They give him wine and try to coax him to eat, but he cannot.

Finally, they undress him and put him to bed. I loved the image of
shirtless Aragorn, while wondering if he would not be cold despite the
fur covering in March !

Now free to rest,as so often happens, Aragorn's mind is too
overwrought to sleep and he mulls over the events of the momentous
day, the victories and the deaths,most especially the loss of
Halbarad. This brave warrior is all too often overlooked as his death
must have been a grievious blow indeed for Aragorn, who obviously
cared deeply for his kinsman and friend.

This ficlet is a delight for anyone who loves Aragorn as it gives a
welcome glimpse into the humanity and frailty of this wonderful man

Title: Adolescence · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor ·
ID: 143
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-01 05:35:31
I think every parent will identify with this story about the problems
of raising teenagers, be they human, Hobbit or Princesses who are part
Elf !

Aragorn and Arwen's teenage daughter and Samwise's Elanor are weary of
parentel restrictions and like teenagers everywhere, decide to see if
they can get round them and slip out unnnoticed.

The young Princess had not reckoned with her royal father's
considerable tracking skills from his Ranger days and he catches up
with her and Elanor, just in time to save them from getting into trouble.

The King had fears he was growing apart from his daughter as she grows
up,but her escapade,does at least allow them to enjoy an afternoon
together,as it does for Sam and Elanor.

I loved this charming and delightful story and the way the friendships
between the families are obviously spanning the new generation.

Msg# 8219

Re: Story now complete Posted by Marta Layton October 07, 2007 - 9:43:10 Topic ID# 8212
Hi ChristineX,

I have moved your story "Heart's Blood" from Romance/Incomplete to
Romance/General. The new categories are listed below.

I saw in your other email that the only other change you thought should
maybe be made was listing "Mouth of Sauron" as a character. There
weren't very many MoS fics, so we combined it with some other minor
villains into "Other Villains". Your story does have that listed
already, so we can't really add Mouth of Sauron.

I think your piece is set now! Look over it and let me know if I need to
change anything so it has the right information.

Marta

--- Genres: Romance: General
33 He Came To Meet Me (Story: Short Story) sophinisba solis
67 Come Back to Me (Story: Short Story) Marta
242 Cophetua (Story: Medium Length) Jael
319 Great Oaks (Story: Short Story) Bodkin
499 Taters and Thyme (Story: Short Story) Cuthalion
601 Torn from a Map (Story: Short Story) sophinisba solis
608 A Tale of Elrond And Celebrían (Story: Novel) Nemis
667 Harvest Bonfire (Story: Short Story) Cuthalion
678 February Bride (Story: Short Story) Cuthalion
709 Heart's Blood (Story: Novel) ChristineX

--- Genres: Romance: Incomplete
267 Sons of the Stars (Incomplete: Medium Length) TrekQueen
465 A Hidden Hope (Incomplete: Novel) dancingkatz
559 Unexpected (Incomplete: Novel) Madeleine
698 The Allure of the Dark Angel (Incomplete: Novel) white raven
699 To This My Love Hath Come At Last (Incomplete: Medium Length)
Roh_wyn



christinex1001 wrote:
>
>
> My story "Heart's Blood" is now complete. Does it need to be moved to
> a different category? Not sure of the process...let me know what I
> need to do. (I'm ChristineX at the MEFA site.)
>
> Thanks!
>

Msg# 8220

Question about marking reviews Posted by linaewen0 October 07, 2007 - 21:37:20 Topic ID# 8220
I hesitated to ask this because I figure the answer is obvious, but I
haven't figured it out yet, so here goes!

When it says "Mark all reviews on this page.: Mark & Load" -- what
does that mean, and how does it affect the reviews?

Possibly related to that, why am I being told I have not read a
review? Do I have to mark it for it to count as being read?

Just want to make sure I do everything right!

Linaewen

Msg# 8221

Re: Question about marking reviews Posted by Marta Layton October 07, 2007 - 22:10:22 Topic ID# 8220
Hi Linaewen,

When you mark a review you're telling the website that you are done
looking at it and don't want to see it when you look at reviews in the
future. When you go to look at reviews, the website's "default" is to
show only those reviews that you haven't marked before. (You can click a
"show marked reviews" link to see all the reviews.

When you click "mark & load", it marks all the reviews on that page, and
displays the next page of reviews.

And yes, an unmarked review is considered the same as an unread one.
Until you mark a review, the website doesn't remember that you looked at
it. It's kind of like saving a file after you've made changes - hitting
"mark & load" is like hitting save; if you close the window without
doing that the webpage won't remember that you read the reviews.

But marking a review doesn't affect anything about the review itself. It
doesn't change the review or give it more points or anything like that;
it just means the web page won't show it to you again unless it's
somehow edited (like if an admin goes in and adds square brackets to
mark off reviews), or if you tell the webpage to display the marked
reviews to you.

Does that answer your questions?

Marta

linaewen0 wrote:
>
>
> I hesitated to ask this because I figure the answer is obvious, but I
> haven't figured it out yet, so here goes!
>
> When it says "Mark all reviews on this page.: Mark & Load" -- what
> does that mean, and how does it affect the reviews?
>
> Possibly related to that, why am I being told I have not read a
> review? Do I have to mark it for it to count as being read?
>
> Just want to make sure I do everything right!
>
> Linaewen
>

Msg# 8222

Re: Question about marking reviews Posted by linaewen0 October 07, 2007 - 22:28:30 Topic ID# 8220
Yes, that clears things up wonderfully. Thank you!

Lin

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Marta Layton <melayton@...> wrote:
>
> Hi Linaewen,
>
> When you mark a review you're telling the website that you are done
> looking at it and don't want to see it when you look at reviews in the
> future. When you go to look at reviews, the website's "default" is to
> show only those reviews that you haven't marked before. (You can
click a
> "show marked reviews" link to see all the reviews.
>
> When you click "mark & load", it marks all the reviews on that page,
and
> displays the next page of reviews.
>
> And yes, an unmarked review is considered the same as an unread one.
> Until you mark a review, the website doesn't remember that you
looked at
> it. It's kind of like saving a file after you've made changes - hitting
> "mark & load" is like hitting save; if you close the window without
> doing that the webpage won't remember that you read the reviews.
>
> But marking a review doesn't affect anything about the review
itself. It
> doesn't change the review or give it more points or anything like that;
> it just means the web page won't show it to you again unless it's
> somehow edited (like if an admin goes in and adds square brackets to
> mark off reviews), or if you tell the webpage to display the marked
> reviews to you.
>
> Does that answer your questions?
>
> Marta
>
> linaewen0 wrote:
> >
> >
> > I hesitated to ask this because I figure the answer is obvious, but I
> > haven't figured it out yet, so here goes!
> >
> > When it says "Mark all reviews on this page.: Mark & Load" -- what
> > does that mean, and how does it affect the reviews?
> >
> > Possibly related to that, why am I being told I have not read a
> > review? Do I have to mark it for it to count as being read?
> >
> > Just want to make sure I do everything right!
> >
> > Linaewen
> >
>

Msg# 8223

MEFA Reviews for October 8, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 08, 2007 - 6:43:47 Topic ID# 8223
Title: Healing Lessons · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Cross-Cultural:
With Pippin · ID: 296
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 05:38:28
I never would have thought of such a thing, and yet it seems so common
sense for that particular person. What a brilliant and remarkable idea!

Title: Taters and Thyme · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance · ID: 499
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 06:15:22
You've made me hungry, a true sign of a good hobbit story! As always I
love your Lily, so sweet and caring while still keeping business-like
and doing what needs done. And poor Sam, shut out of the room for the
first time! I'm not sure if it's a translation decision or a whoopsie,
but the line in which Lily says she will ["put the cake in the oven"]
threw me for a moment since I'd been drooling over thoughts of a pear
*pie*, neither of which are technically the same as the sort of
strudel-type dish or tart I think you probably had in mind. (It's
funny how strongly food can bring people together once they figure out
what they're eating! :) )

The most powerful moment of the whole piece, which is saying a lot for
such a short but jam-packed story, was Sam's trip to the garden. The
relief he felt there on his knees in the dirt resonated with me as
both a gardener, a cook and a die-hard Sam lover. The undertones of
parenthood and care-taking are so subtly woven into this story it
really only just struck me how much they move the narrative: his
feelings of responsibility toward Rosie as her time comes and his
distress at not being with her, his memories of his own mother
teaching him to cook, how Lily steps into those shoes once the little
one arrives; all are vital to the story, but in such a quiet way. Yet
another wonderful hobbit tale from one of the most talented hobbit
writers I've had the pleasure to read!

Title: Irreverence · Author: Aratlithiel · Genres: Humor · ID: 619
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 06:25:16
After reading this I feel I may, perhaps, have missed something by
having no siblings. It seems somewhat out of character with the way
post-War Frodo is often written, and yet at the same time it somehow
works. The insults made me laugh, which is of course very hobbit-like.
This one, I think, deserves more reading and reviewing by someone with
the benefit of growing up with brothers. I feel somehow that I don't
"get it", which is sad because it was quite the enjoyable read.

Title: If I Keep You Beside Me · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 548
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 06:26:42
This was so sweet. Very in character with how I've always seen Pippin,
though I'll confess I haven't thought much on his relationship with
Boromir.

Title: Ever in your Arms · Author: White Gull · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 668
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 06:33:11
I like your answer to the interminable "what if", and am very
intrigued by how exactly Ivy was healed as a wee one. If that hasn't
been written yet, perhaps it should be? This piece very nicely ties up
all of its loose ends, and gives us a glimpse of the other Fellowship
members in the early fourth age as well. The flow is lovely and
characterizations excellent. Very well done.

Title: Unstrung · Author: Tehta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 161
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 06:36:05
Whether the title can be considered a warning in and of itself or not,
I was not quite expecting that! (I do heartily appreciate the pun
involved.) Wow. An impressive characterization of the last living sons
of Feanor and their thoughts on the end of their quest.

Title: Despair · Author: Silivren Tinu · Genres: Drama: The Fellowship
· ID: 171
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 06:42:48
Very well done. I can see this fitting quite easily into the canon on
the situation, and would certainly hope Legolas would see fit to
attempt an intervention, if only to lighten Aragorn's burden of worry.
I like the use of song at the moment of his decision as well, which is
something I've not seen done in a story involving an elf in the
presence of the One Ring. It makes perfect sense, and hearkens back to
the Ainur's original purpose, reminding readers familiar with the
Silmarilion just how much had already been lost because of Morgoth's
discord.

Title: The Promise in her Eyes · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 100
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 06:43:41
I found myself smiling as I read this, though I also don't trust the
speaker explicitly. He seems too much of a braggart, but I may just
have known too many similarly-motivated musicians in my life. I
enjoyed the character of Eomer being the tough, but in my mind fair
guardian, of his baby sister. You wrote some very good images of Eowyn
as a happy young girl as well. I found the language a bit
contemporary-sounding at times. ["I swear I didn't know who she
was..."] ["All right, yes, she was wearing..."] ["So you can see how I
thought she was only some minor noble's daughter, can't you? You
wouldn't expect the Lady Éowyn to flirt so boldly, would you?"]
Perhaps its the word order, or the use of filler words like "all
right" that lend it a modern tone that I wasn't expecting. Whatever it
is, it was mildly distracting but by the time the scene is fully laid
it is no longer an issue to me. A very nice slice-of-life in Rohan story.

Title: Hazardous Going · Author: Auntiemeesh · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 788
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 11:14:49
Sometimes it does just take a mother's touch to start feeling better.
Very good characterization of the two hobbits and the OFC is well done
as well.

Title: Pippin's Little Experiment · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 291
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-01 11:20:41
I laughed quite long and hard about this one. A friend of mine years
ago nearly did a very similar thing. It seems delightfully Tookish,
and he deserved every bit of ribbing he got! A very nice means of
slipping some humor into an otherwise rather dark bit of canon. Well done.

Title: Who is this Gil-galad, of Whom You Speak? · Author: Erunyauve ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 250
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2007-08-01 14:46:07
A very interesting essay about one of my favorite elven characters. I
was shocked to learn that so little was actually written in canon; I
hadn't realized that most of what 'I know' was fanon. Thank you for
clearing that up, well done!

Title: A Game of Chess · Author: Altariel · Genres: Romance: Gondor ·
ID: 609
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-02 00:01:38
Please forgive utter frankness from a complete stranger. As the adult
child of a "heavy handed" parent, I cannot accurately begin to explain
the effect this story has had on me. I see a good measure of my own
qualities, both good and bad, set down here in black and white, and as
pathetic as this may sound, have come to realize that I need to have a
talk with someone close to me. I have always hoped that something I
write might do good for others in one way or another. Whether this was
your goal or not, I felt I should tell you that you have done so here.

The story itself is so easy to read and the changes in PoV very well
handled. The line between moving narrative and simply "enjoying the
view" so to speak is walked confidently and well. The flow is
excellent and the characters both in canon and simultaneously more
human and "real" than many I've seen. Nothing is overstated or
over-used. This story, I feel, is remarkably better than much original
fiction available in the mass market.

Very well done, and my most hearty thanks. At times, one needs
catharsis. I found it here.

Title: A Mother's Touch · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-02 05:42:16
Even fierce dragons must once have been babies and had mothers who no
doubt thought their offspring the most beautiful beings on earth as is
the custom of loving mothers everywhere.

This delightful ficlet imagines the childhood of Smaug and his fierce
but adoring mother,Readfah.

Like children everywhere,Smaugh likes to get muddy and play in the
dirt. This ficlet brought back fond memories of childhood, I recall as
a small girl, I once got so covered in mud and coal dust, my mother
had me wash my hands in the backyard, so I can feel for this small
dragon !

Readfah is proud that Smaug does not quail before her wrath and
naturally thinks her son is adorable and beautiful,all the more so as
he is descended from the greatest of Morgoth's dragons.

I love the writer's allusions here to the Nordic mythology, which
inspired Tolkien's writing. Smaug is a close relative of Fafner, the
grim dragon who guarded the Nibelung Hoard of treasure and the magic Ring.

It says a great deal here, for the writer's skill that she can make
these tough and evil dragons, so lovable and endearing to the reader,
though we are not allowed to forget how brutal they really are.Smaug
is reminded, he should only get dirty with the blood of his prey,
while Readfah's claws could eaily kill a horse !

Title: Falling Into Shadow · Author: Marigold · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 205
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-02 06:11:09
Not only Frodo was in extremis as the four Hobbits reached Rivendell
accompanied by Strider and Glorfindel; this third encounter with the
Nazgul left Merry also facing darkness with his first full bout of the
Black Breath. I know that in my own writing Merry was relieved of his
first true bout by Strider carefully and quietly using his own power
to deal with the last of the malaise hanging about the Brandybuck as
he reenters the Pony; to see someone else also recognize that Merry
was perhaps more susceptible on the Pelennor due to earlier encounters
is heartening.

The love between Merry and Pippin is strongly expressed as well as the
foresight of Glorfindel, which even he dismisses as too fantastic.

Excellent short story that may indeed be followed through upon.

Title: A Mother's Work · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Vignette · ID: 134
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-02 06:40:06
To see the mothers of each of the four Travelers facing the day to day
challenges of raising children and dealing with husbands is always
fascinating. Dreamflower has managed to bring each alive, and their
children alive as well--the adults who sought to take over Frodo's new
gift; the frustrations of facing how quickly small children can get
into mischief and danger; the grief of losing a beloved nanny; dealing
with infants who will eat all the plums they can get hold of and cram
pretty ribbons into their mouths while daughters gather wool and grab
one another's toys.

And we see the joys and frustrations and triumphs of being wives and
mothers.

Lovely moments shared.

Title: Getting Away from it All · Author: Bodkin · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 63
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-02 06:45:14
A wonderful moment of relaxation by four of the most responsible
individuals within Gondor, enjoying rare moments of peace within
Ithilien while ever aware their lives have changed now. They take
their ease in a circle of guards, and their discussion touches on the
machinations of the courtiers and lords of the kingdom. But they are
confident and competent--surely they will prevail as they work
together to forge a new future of Gondor in a time of peace.

As always, a most worthwhile read by this most superb of writers.

Title: The Dwarf Dagger · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: The
Shire · ID: 85
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-02 06:56:15
Now and then we are moved to write a tragedy, and that Dreamflower has
done here. As Adalgrim's children explore the Great Smial under the
guidance of young Ferumbras and are led into the Took Treasuries,
events are set into motion leaving them accused of having stolen a
dagger crafted by Dwarves, intended as a gift from Lalia to her
husband the Thain; and we see one child so upset she leaves alone to
return to the farm in Whitwell, although she fails to reach her objective.

It's not often anyone looks at the childhood of the older sisters of
Paladin and Esmeralda. They often appear as maiden aunts living in the
Great Smials and doting on Pippin and his sisters; but to see their
developmental years is a pleasure, if a solemn one in this case.

A wonderful look at the lives of those who preceded our beloved four,
and the Shire as it was then; and also a wonderful look at the
self-centered Lalia before she made herself the Took and the terror of
Tookland.

Title: The Case of the Purloined Mushrooms · Author: Inkling · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 298
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-02 07:06:02
Inkling truly needs to write more than she does, for this is such a
delightful story as we find intrigue within intrigue. Sherlock Holmes
has little on this postal delivery hobbit who sets out to solve the
mystery of the purloined mushrooms.

Frodo does have a reputation already as a mushroom thief that preceded
him to the Westfarthing, stemming back to invasions of Bamfurlong Farm
in search of Maggot's mushroom patch. But is the real thief this time
indeed Frodo, or is it young Meriadoc Brandybuck who's really at
fault, and Frodo's only refusing to answer questions to protect his
beloved cousin? Or is it someone else entirely? And what is Bilbo's
secret herb or spice that makes his mushrooms to special?

These questions will be answered, and most delightfully. A wonderful read.

Title: God of Wrath · Author: Katzilla · Genres: Drama · ID: 369
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-02 07:13:28
When Katzilla warns that there are dark themes present in this story,
she is being brutally honest. The Rohirrim under Eomer have made a
practice of allowing those whose lives have been worst damaged by
incursions of orcs and Dunlendings to see to it that captured enemies
suffer before they die. But one Rohirric woman has her own concerns as
to how this practice itself is destructive, and manages to communicate
her discomfort to Eomer himself. She's lost her family, but not her
spirit of caring, we learn.

Yes, dark themes, but necessary ones as we consider the ethics of war.

Title: Behold the King · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 433
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-02 07:20:25
A prettily written story, in two short chapters, of Aragorn's
coronation, from the points of view of both Steward and King-to-be. As
key players in a millenia-long drama of history that now reaches its
culmination, the perspectives of the last Ruling Steward of Gondor and
the man to whom he will yield Gondor are fascinating, especially when
pared down to three hundred words apiece.

In the story's first chapter, Faramir searches out the ancient crown
that he will present to the returned king, and prepares to give it to
the man who will replace him as Lord of Gondor. The second chapter is
stronger, from Aragorn's point of view as he makes the mythic change
from ranger and warrior to King.

There's a wonderful moment where the reader feels like cheering, as
Aragorn is conscious of finally being able to be his true self, the
king he was born to be.

A fascinating concept, ably translated into this short but sweet
story. I wish I had written it!



Title: Shadow and Thought · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Drama:
With Aragorn · ID: 122
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-02 07:22:49
This is a thoughtfully and sensitively written angst epic, one of the
better ones of the genre. There is some torture, it is not overly
graphic, and the treatment of wounds is down-to-earth and
appropriately realistic.

But the salient characteristic of this early Fourth Age tale is the
presentation of Eowyn. Here, she is not Faramir's happy bride,
enjoying the joys of peace and connubial bliss. Rather, Eowyn
misinterprets a canon remark made by Aragorn at her betrothal, and
believes that the King of Gondor induced Faramir to marry Eowyn for
political and personal reasons. Eowyn tells no one of her certainty,
but her hatred and resentment blazes beneath a cold and snappish
exterior. It is as if she is poisoned, her emotional wounds as
damaging to her spirit as the physical wounds sustained by Aragorn are
to his body. In an interesting plot twist, it is Eowyn, angry and
frustrated, who must tend the badly injured Aragorn, although she
views him as the cause of her misery.

There's a very intriguing sub-plot, toward the end, involving two
madwomen, a mysterious child, and a fire which forces Faramir to
relive certain feelings and associations he would much rather forget.

All in all, this story is quite entertaining as well as angstful...



Title: Mardil Goes A-Courting · Author: Le Rouret · Genres: Humor:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 366
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-02 19:21:03
To be honest, I was lured into this story by the first chapter, which
featured the lovely spectacle of naked Legolas and Faramir sunning
themselves in Ithilien after escaping a tedious social engagement. But
the rest of the tale does not disappoint -

Legolas puts his hand to the fine art of matchmaking, for a mortal
friend of his, a forty-year-old bachelor lord in need of a wife who
can provide a good dowry as well as children. Never mind that the
bachelor lord has no idea or stated interest in Legolas' plans, or
that those plans go from clever to positively machiavellian; but what
follows is a vastly entertaining story.

Legolas' perfect design, and self-satisfaction, do suffer a huge bump
in the road, but there is a happy ending.

LeRouret can write comedy as well as tragedy and adventure; and this
story is a pleasant romantic comedy. And I love the characterisation
of Mardil of Ethring, the lonely "Silver Knight" whose life is turned
upside down by Legolas' well-meant plan.

Title: Justice · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 633
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-02 20:38:04
A nice glimpse of Aragorn's justice and mercy when he becomes
king.Winning hearts by kindness is surely the best way to proceed and
Aragorn does this by caring for all his people including defeated enemies.

Title: The Green Hill · Author: Baranduin · Races: Cross-Cultural: The
Fellowship · ID: 562
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-02 20:47:00
A beautiful and atmospheric ficlet in which Aragorn tells Frodo of how
he plighted his troth to Arwen and the spot where they stood. I
especially enjoyed the glimpse of Aragorn laughing and looking young
again.Who indeed could resist the beauty of twilight?
I also enjoyed the obvious depth of friendship between Aragorn and
Frodo shown here.

Title: A Moment Lost · Author: Fawsley · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 491
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-02 20:50:07
A lovely drabble showing how the mantle of kingship gradually falls
upon Aragorn so that he is unmistakebly King.The aura of majesty that
can command the dead is far more than a crown which the writer conveys
well here.

Msg# 8224

MEFA Reviews for October 8, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 08, 2007 - 6:46:53 Topic ID# 8224
Title: The Essence of Fire · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 278
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-02 20:58:17
A well written and thought provoking drabble on the ambiguity of fire.
Fire is the most mysterious element,both creative and destructive and
Curufin's character shows all these ambiguities both in passion and
destruction.

Title: Thinking of Marigold · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor ·
ID: 349
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-02 21:00:39
An amusing tale concerning the folly of thinking of pretty girls while
naked for young Hobbits.Maybe Pippin should think of flowers instead !
I don't think, from what I recall of the book though, that frodo lost
his clothes,just the other three. Naughty but nice !

Title: Could Will Have Its Way · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-02 22:19:18
Intriguing look at Denethor's reason for starting to look into the
palantir. The reason revealed in this drabble makes a lot of sense,
given Denethor's life and what he has most prized.

Excellent characterisation of Denethor; I could almost hear him
thinking the words...And good framing with the first and last lines.


Title: The Lesson · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 29
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-02 22:25:20


This drabble is one of the best-crafted I have seen of this very
specific form of ficlet. The craftsmanship is subtle; the reader
doesn't realize it, but if you look, it's there; and adds to the
effect. The drabble is a wonderful bit of introspection perfectly
framed by an action sequence - beginning, middle and end all linked by
the lesson that Faramir has learned and is now putting to use.

Faramir is written perfectly in character here - he is at once the
calm, seasoned, warrior and hunter of foes, and the philospher-prince
who understands the price that warriors pay, and regrets it, though he
knows there is no choice. There's a faint tinge of irony and regret
that is very Faramirish...

Beautiful, quiet and effective.


Title: Geometry · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble · ID: 80
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-02 22:28:38
This piece is a stark drabble that uses geometry as Faramir's metaphor
to summarize the relationships between himself and his father and
brother, and the effect on that [lopsided triangle] when one side is
removed.

The days of Boromir's absence must have been increasingly hard on the
father whose favorite son he was; and the brother who loved him. This
drabble presents, with a minimum of well-chosen words, the sorrowful
spectacle of a broken family, in geometrical shapes, and the naked
truth of [diverging angles].

The excellent characterisation of Faramir and Denethor seems
effortless. Faramir's thoughts are particularly well-written, and,
well...Faramirish. Denethor's reaction to Boromir's loss seems right
on target.

Excellent use of the challenge prompt!

Title: A Song of Silence · Author: Nessime · Races: Men · ID: 156
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-03 13:39:41
Wow. This is quite a moving tale. It unfolds nicely and at just the
right counterpoint to the near panic of the city's evacuation. Your
women are so strong, and it is very touching to me that the narrator
would think of her mother-in-law's greatest treasure at a time when
their very lives are at stake. There is so much love in this story,
and it is well expressed in very few words, which I sometimes find
hard to do as I write. I actually grew misty eyed when her son
returned and mounted, then again when Deorwyn made so clear her
perspective without any words. An excellent short piece.

Title: The Case of the Purloined Mushrooms · Author: Inkling · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 298
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-03 13:48:39
You have no idea how delightful I find this story! Believe it or not,
my family owned a mostly black beagle which hunted mushrooms for my
father in the woods near our house. He never ate any since some, of
course, are dangerous, but my father and I are *quite* fond of wild
whites, and have had a hard time finding them since the dog passed
away. This tale of yours brought back so many happy memories for me,
I'll be bookmarking it as a favorite.

As for the story itself, your narrator is quite engaging, though I am
most impressed by how well you write cranky old woman hobbits. Lobelia
and Dora squaring off in front of the fireplace is an image that
promises to stay with me for days! All the complexities of the Baggins
and Brandybuck families were present in a very nicely understated way,
and already Sam's loyalty to Frodo is apparent, as is his honesty and
trustworthiness. It was just so... hobbity! A great pleasure to read,
and I am sure I will do so again.

Title: Belonging · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Second Age or
Earlier · ID: 422
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:11:21
A sweet interlude in the marriage of Elrond and Celebrian, as they
camp out and enjoy the beauties of nature and each other. There's a
wistfulness underneath it all, in that the author succeeds in driving
home the couple's happiness and their hopes for the future and the
reader knows that this happiness will be, ultimately, bittersweet.

Nicely done, as usual, from this excellent writer.

Title: Worship · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: General Drabble · ID: 586
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:12:43
Tuor is unfortunately not written about as much as some of Tolkien's
other Men; which is unfair, since he was a great and influential hero.
In this drabble, Marta spotlights Tuor's thralldom in the hands of the
Easterlings.

Marta skillfully reveals Tuor's intransigeant, independant and brave
spirit. He cannot directly fight the superior physical force of his
captors; but finds a way to circumvent them and keep his hope, and his
beliefs, alive.


Title: The Bearing of Burdens · Author: Larner · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 792
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:17:27
I think this might be the only time that Larner has written a story
from the point of view of Faramir.

I hope it will not be the last.

Larner writes the Captain-Steward-Prince with her customary blend of
sensitivity and perception. His conversation with Sam is well-written,
as I would expect from someone as skilled with dialogue as is Larner.
Sam and Faramir came through troubled waters to a state of
understanding and mutual respect in TTT, and it is nicely reprised
here, now that both are safe and the Enemy fallen (and that pesky Ring
gone for good).

I love Sam's emphasis on how important Faramir's kindness and
friendship was to Frodo in Ithilien. I agree; and have always thought
that Faramir gave spiritual sustenance to the weary hobbits as well as
physical provender - but Larner, through Sam, expresses it much better
than I can here.

Title: Great and Terrible · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General
Drabble · ID: 721
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:18:55
Tanaqui shows us, in a mere hundred words, how great and terrible
Aragorn could truly be as Lord of the Ring, in this Alternate Universe
drabble.

Of course he takes it with the best of intentions. And thereby wends
the road to Hell.

I particularly liked the line about Denethor bowing to Aragorn - it
kind of brought chills to my spine...

Very good sketch of the consequences of well-meant but poor judgement.






Title: The Company of Heroes · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 393
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:20:23
I love the way Annmarwalk captures the dynamic of the Gamgee children
- happy, busy, and fanatics for stories, like their father. Stories
where the true events of chronicled in LOTR are translated into
children's tales and legends for others fascinate me; and this is a
fine example; especially since Sam is present.

I disagree with Sam's conclusion that he and Boromir [were all like
mummers in a play], their parts chosen before they ever were born - I
have seen this before in various other LOTR fanfics; perhaps because
so many love Boromir, whose courage and heroic death is undeniable, as
a character. However, it makes sense that Sam might come to this
conclusion; and the story works very well.


After all these years, thinking about how it all happened, and how it
might have happened differently, I can see that Lord Boromir had a
part to play, just like that stinking Gollum did. Maybe it was all
written out for us, long before we were ever born, and we were like
mummers in a play.

Title: First Flight · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 513
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:22:03
A spirited ficlet about the first flight of two famous Eagles;
attended by their (OC) proud parents and a radiant Radagast.
Well-written, lively and quite entertaining; with the Eagle family
behaving like, well, wise, sentient giant birds of prey.

Nice characterisation of Radagast as well, in his role as protector of
birds and beasts.

Title: Comforting Silence · Author: Radbooks · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 157
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:24:18
A good and perceptive look at the characters of Faramir and Aragorn as
seen through the lens of intense grief - Faramir's for the loss of
Eowyn. The grief process differs for everyone, and the author
recognizes that, and paints a vivid picture of a bereft widower
exhausted by the aftermath of his beloved wife's death. Aragorn is
well-written here; he knows just how to handle Faramir's grief and
weariness.

I liked Faramir's frustration about not being able to find the right
words, when words had always come so easily, to voice his feelings for
Eowyn. That would be typical of the character...

Title: Foreign Ways · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor or
Rohan · ID: 54
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:35:13
A heart-warming (and stomach-warming!) paean to the multicultural
bridges forged by love of interesting foods. Mag the Cook is a
beguiling, credible OFC who has appeared in several of the writer's
stories, and is delightful as the narrator in this piece, interacting
with Eowyn in the early years of the Fourth Age.

And the culinary snippets and tips are well-researched, and only add
to Mag's considerable charm.

Title: Heart of Lamedon · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Gondor
Drabble · ID: 288
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-03 20:38:52
A fine drabble from the viewpoint of Angbor, through whose domain
Aragorn brings hope and horror on the way to save Minas Tirith.
Angbor's pride and courage when facing a frightening situation are
nicely brought out here. I loved the line: [Death comes down in a cold
gale driven by this ragged eagle of a man.]

This is an uncommon subject for a Tolkien drabble, and well worth a
second, and third, look. Also, it's one of my favorite pieces by its
skilled author.

Title: Comforting Silence · Author: Radbooks · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 157
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-04 00:55:17
This is a deeply moving story about a topic,whic many of us shy
from,the agony of losing a loved one. At such times friends often say
the wrong thing,or worse avoid the breaved person.
In this story, the writer shows how Aragorn is able to offer the
bereaved Faramir comfort,simply by being there as a comforting presence.
The reader is left with the impression that the widowed Steward will
in time be able to deal with his loss.We could all do with a friend
like Aragorn in times of need !

Title: "Dumpling" · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor: The Shire
or Buckland · ID: 777
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-04 01:51:35
Young Merry has a bad day with a recalcitrant sheep, a bored dog,
Pearl Took and her little brother.

Funny, though not for poor Merry, who just cannot get any respect from
hobbit or beast...

Title: The Stranger · Author: mistycracraft · Races: Men: Eriador or
Rivendell · ID: 89
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-04 01:54:00
Excellent vignette about a young man's first encounter with the
mysterious Ranger Strider. The author makes wonderful use of Strider's
capacity to appear sinister, the aura of danger that surrounds him,
and his frankly dangerous look; all of which would at least intimidate
many provincial men.

But the story is not all about danger, and picks up on one of
Tolkien's themes that one should not always judge a book by its cover...

Title: The Third Eagle · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 630
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-04 05:57:15
A bird's-eye view of the rescue of Frodo and Sam from Mount Doom -
that is to say, a very BIG bird.

I would have liked to see an expanded version, if only because
Tolkien's Eagles are such neat critters, but this drabble works well
as it is, with an excellent last line. Meneldor's determination,
compassion, and disappointment are credibly written.

Title: Rauros, golden Rauros-falls · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor:
Drabble · ID: 624
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-04 05:59:12
Boromir lives!

Oops. Well, maybe he should have stayed dead.

Excellent variation on the familiar fanfic theme of Boromir! Lives!
Dramatic, logical, and so tragic. And I still laugh every time I read it.

Title: Knave of Hearts · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 252
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-04 12:22:08
This is why I no longer baby sit! I can't imagine having to try to
keep up with a hobbit faunt in *any* way, let alone keeping him away
from food! A delightful little slice of life story that gave me a good
chuckle. Very nicely done.

Title: Still Waters. · Author: Ellie · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Fingolfin · ID: 529
Reviewer: Istarnie · 2007-08-04 14:18:30
I have enjoyed every story I have read by this author. She has a way
of conveying the personality of the characters that is realistic,
interesting and beautiful. This story I find particularly poignant. It
is one of only three tales I have read that focuses on Anairë, wife of
Fingolfin. She is a character about whom little is known; yet Ellie
manages to give her a history and background in this short piece. She
convincingly conveys the little we can glean from HoME 12 about the
anguish of Anairë's choice to abandon her husband and children on the
journey from Valinor, and her abiding friendship with Finarfin and
Earwen. But the heart of the tale is her love / hate relationship with
water, as the title suggests. I read this story a couple of times
before it totally sank in, just how much pain Ellie manages to convey
through the medium of water. The contrast between Anairë's
pre-rebellion love of rain, fountains and the sea, and her
post-rebellion association of those natural elements with the shedding
of tears and the slaughter at Alqualondë is thoughtfully expressed.
The story starts with a storm; both physical and emotional, and ends
with the irony that it is only in the still and scented waters of her
bath that Anarië finds solace - a very fitting conclusion. From
reading this tale, I feel as if I have finally gained a better
understanding of Fingolfin, and an understanding of a lesser-known
character; one that I would like to know more about. I am hinting here
that Ellie should write further stories featuring this lady of the Noldor!


Title: Three Turnings of the Year · Author: Ruby Nye · Races: Hobbits
· ID: 37
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-08-05 02:07:06
This memorable sequence follows Pervinca Took as she celebrates three
Yules: before, during, and after The Troubles, each tale illustrating
how she grows and matures during those years as a result of her
experiences, and those of her fellow hobbits.

In the first tale, [Follow Me in Merry Measure] we meet a bored and
somewhat willful Vinca. She's apparently a bit of a sexual
adventuress, and the momentary object of her affection is young
Samwise. Sam, though, is flustered, now that he has discovered the
true identity of the young lass whom he'd kissed with such vigor the
night before. ["It was grand fun, and you as lovely and as wild as a
stream at snowmelt. But it's not just tween games to me. I like it to
mean more."] he tells her. There's a beguiling wistfulness, yet an
emptiness to Vinca; she's trying to fill it with music and dancing and
flirtation, but we sense her chagrin, and just a bit of shame, as she
bids him farewell.


The second tale, [Winds Were Blowing, Stars Were Glowing] is quite
different in mood, for Pippin and Frodo and Merry and Sam are gone,
who-knows where, and no-one will talk about them, and Men are
prowling, [in their swaggering insolence, in their dangerous numbers].
This is not a Yule for carefree celebration: there is little visiting,
if any, and some hobbits , lad and lasses, have already taken up arms
to patrol the borders of the Shire. Vinca, as a daughter of the Thain
and Took, has been been fulfilling the traditional woman's role:
providing [tea and dry clothes and sometimes a warm shoulder to the
hobbits fleeing in from outlying villages.].

Yet Vinca is a Took, through and through, and longs to do more. Her
new husband, Everard, senses this, and fears that one day she will
leave him, and the safety of her hearth and home, to take a more
active role in the defense of the Shire. (In another wonderful Ruby
Nye story, "Snare", we see that she did just that.) But in this tale,
she appears to set aside these urges and be a dutiful wife, for the
moment, at least.

[Sing With Hearts Aglow], set immediately after the War, is
heartbreakingly beautiful. Vinca has abandoned the luxury of the
traditional Tookish Yule to travel, simply garbed, throughout the
Shire. She needs to see for herself how her countrymen have fared, and
seeks to give such assistance as she can. Vinca stops in at a simple
Yule celebration at Bywater and meets a group of musicians and their
sister, Betony, a survivor of imprisonment and torture in the
Lockholes. Betony tells Vinca of her sister Dittany: ["She sang like a
lark at sunrise, she shouted cheer to the lads we could see across the
way. When they brought her back the last time she was in a very bad
way; she smiled at me, but in the morning when I woke she was cold."]
Dittany's courage comes to symbolize for Vinca the strength and
resilience of her people.

Ruby Nye's wondrous descriptive skills are showcased throughout the
three tales: she vividly describes the Great Smial's Banquet Hall
where [a thousand candles blazed nearly bright as day, and the ceiling
echoed with merry singing while pipers and fiddlers played with a
mighty will], a frigid winter garden where [... a sleet-storm had
passed, leaving the hummocks and needle-trees glittery in the
starlight], and a simple, in hobbit terms, post-war Yule: [The little
round tables along the walls were covered with plain linen and perhaps
a few less dishes and bowls than they might in years past, but the
crowd round them was cheery and bright as any Yule celebration could
wish.] In contrast to her lush descriptions of the settings, rich with
color and scent, Ruby's description of her characters, and her
dialogue, is understated, subtle. These hobbits are no longer jolly
and carefree, blissful in the belief that no evil will ever befall
them. They are survivors, no less than the Men of Gondor or Rohan.
Their war was just as brutal, and their triumph, just as inspiring.

Title: Temptation · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851
- 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 419
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-06 18:44:50
One of the reasons why I like this ficlet is that it goes where I
personally haven't seen any Tolkien fanfic go before - Aragorn being
overtly sexually tempted not just by a woman other than Arwen, but an
OFC who is young, attractive, but very common and not particularly
worthy of him. I have seen stories where Aragorn is tempted by women
more beautiful, or exalted in station, or both.

A lesser writer might have made the girl, whose affections are for
hire, totally unlikeable in character, a greedy strumpet trying to
take advantage of ol' Tall-dark-and-long-legged. But Linda shows that
the girl is not soliciting sexual favors, and money, totally of her
own free will. There's a subtle grace, and a delicacy, in this ficlet
that I really like, that does not diminish the sensuality and slight
overlay of sadness.

Aragorn cannot free the girl from her unhappy life; but he does what
is in his power to mitigate her unpleasant circumstances - I really
like it, Aragorn's actions are very typical of the character. And the
girl is well-written, half-predatory, half-pathetic. The sexual
attraction felt by Aragorn is written particularly well, and is very
believable. Linda convey's Aragorn's human failings, and human nature,
as well as his more-than-human heritage and training.

Excellent response to the challenge prompt!

Msg# 8225

MEFA Reviews for October 9, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 09, 2007 - 5:45:02 Topic ID# 8225
Title: On Starless Waters Far Astray · Author: Empy · Genres:
Crossover · ID: 557
Reviewer: TrekQueen · 2007-08-06 19:01:17
Recently becoming a slash writer myself as well as having a love for
Imrahil and crossovers, I just had to read this fic. I loved the
imagery and descriptions depicted in the story, right down to the
frigid mist of the sea and the rough, creaky planks of the decks on
the ship. I also was quite happy to see some knowledge of sailing/ship
terminology that gave it a true "feel" of knowing the environment and
placement being presented. I also liked the switching POV since it
gave an insight as to how both Imrahil and Norrington were trying to
figure out what to do with one another without the ability to truly
communicate. Cute and a touch of anxiety getting me going saying "ACK!
what is going to happen next with these two?!?" Poor Norrington,
hopefully his dreams and wants will come true one day.

Title: Shadow and Thought · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Drama:
With Aragorn · ID: 122
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2007-08-07 00:27:08
Imo, this story needs a good line and content beta. An interesting
idea poorly presented: not a good representation of the author's
abilities.

Title: Under the Ring · Author: Holdur · Races: Hobbits: Vignette ·
ID: 215
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2007-08-07 02:08:33
This is a wonderfully unique story, to me at least. I don't know that
I've seen many stories where Frodo gets so beautifully angry. It is
something that doesn't happen much in the books, some in the movies,
but that makes an interesting study.

Also, Merry's anger is out of character. Intentionally out of character.

We are getting to see the Ring affecting more than just Boromir and
Frodo, which is all the books show. It is logical that it would have
affected the others as well. It was getting stronger and stronger -
why should it only affect the one wearing it and the one who so
strongly desired it?

The best way for it to divide the Fellowship would have been to get
them bickering. This seemed to be the preferred method of Its maker as
the Orcs were constantly arguing amongst themselves. Quite
appropriately, near the very beginning of the story, Frodo feels that
Merry's cruelty towards Pippin feels familiar, that it is like the
weight he bears around his neck. Later, Merry thinks he sees a golden
glint in Frodo's eyes and at the same moment, thinks he hears a
hissing laugh. These are wonderful allusions to what is really causing
the caustic behavior of the hobbits. Both hobbits push the clues aside.

The characters in this are well written and believable. A wonderful
look at what might have happened.

Title: Seeing Red · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Humor: Drabble ·
ID: 121
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-08-08 21:35:45
As someone who proudly writes stories inspired by the Jackson films as
well as Tolkien's writings, this story made me scream! With laughter.

Linda Hoyland's reputation as the Queen of Angst is well-deserved, but
she also has a humorous side that she indulges every so often. "Seeing
Red" is a perfect example. It's funny in of itself, but it also has a
deeper meaning, to me, than perhaps Linda even intended. In a few
words, Linda summarizes and satirizes the more outrageous
Faramir/Denethor fanons that have arisen out of the Jackson films. I
have my own opinions as to why these fanons have arisen, but they are
outside the scope of a review. Before I make this review longer than
Linda's ficlet, I just want to encourage her to write more humorous
pieces.

Title: The Turn of the Tide · Author: Altariel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 72
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-08-08 21:36:49
In this story, Altariel spins a "wish-fulfillment" AU for all of us
who love Denethor and his sons. Altarial uses Tolkien's style well,
without "trying too hard" or using overly stilted language. She
presents a ferociously chilly Eowyn at the Houses of Healing,
interacting with characters who in canon are dead before her maiming
on the Pelennor Fields.

Altariel's story unfolds its AU aspects at a leisurely pace, which
leaves you wondering why Boromir is alive, how was it that Faramir and
Eowyn met and fell in love in Rohan, and what the heck was Denethor
doing at Eowyn's side when Sauron fell?

This story works as a unit. However, to me it suggests a jumping off
point for a story that Altariel might spin in greater detail in the
future. At least, I hope she will. For starters, I want to know how
incipient king Aragorn and ruling Steward Denethor form their new
government?

Title: Green Magic · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Crossover ·
ID: 312
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-08-08 21:38:06
This tale could have been predictable--modern woman, hiking with her
child in the Northern California redwoods, meets a peculiar forest
ranger. Any Tolkien fan will immediately recognize the ranger as none
other than Tom Bombadil, still alive after all these millenia, and
well-suited to his 21st century occupation. Yes, such a story could be
formulaic. In fact, the woman's adventures are familiar indeed, as is
Tom's warning to her.

I took particular pleasure in the description of the tall redwood
forests, which I, too, have hiked, and know how deep and dark some of
these woods can be (Humboldt Redwoods State Park, for instance). The
story's tension ratchets up as you wonder if the woman will experience
the same horrors as the hobbits in the Old Forest, across the sea and
the ages. And then, just when you think matters have become too
predictable, Gandalf's Apprentice throws you a twist.

A highly recommended, short read.

Title: Soap · Author: Aliana · Genres: Alternate Universe: Gondor or
Rohan · ID: 552
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-08-08 21:38:38
"Soap" might be how Tolkien would have portrayed the siege of Minas
Tirith, had he set Lord of the Rings in the time during which it was
written (World War II and its aftermath). The relation between the
wounded and grieving soldier Beren and the nurse who cared for his
now-dead friend is touching.

Title: Hossis · Author: Fawsley · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 520
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-08-08 21:39:59
I reviewed this story before the author filled out the form to
categorize it. I had no idea what era the story belonged to or what
characters and races to expect. Therefore, I had an enjoyable time
trying to figure out the identity of the powerful brothers and the
woman's elderly husband. Turns out I was many, many decades off the
mark. What a shock when Fawsley reveals that what I thought was a
"common person's tale of grief during wartime" is instead a
significant moment in Third Age history.

Title: The Tragedye of Leaflet, Prince of Mirkwood · Author: Jael ·
Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 243
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-08-08 21:42:59
This story is laugh-out-loud priceless. It works if you have a good
knowledge of slash fanon, and works better if you have some knowledge
of Shakespeare. And if you know the 5th act of Hamlet, you are
guaranteed to be rolling in the virtual aisles. Jael has a good grasp
of the Bard and throws in wonderful barbs at Shakespeare as well as
Tolkien slash fanon.

Like a Middle Earth Hamlet and Horatio, Aragorn and Legolas come upon
a group of grave diggers making merry as they prepare a grave for an
elleth named Orofiriel. (Ophelia, anyone?) Seems the unfortunate
she-elf has thrown herself in the river and drowned, all for the lack
of attention from the elf her parents would have her wed: Legolas. The
story commences to explain the reason for the unfortunate elleth's
feelings of neglect. Digs are made at slash fanon, even sly hints at
mpreg, but Jael goes after Shakespeare as well. I really enjoyed how
she handled Shakespeare's stage directions, for example:

[LEGOLAS and ARAGORN exchaynge a nervouse look]

and better yet:

[ARAGORN receiveth ye dirtye look]

Some seminal scenes from Hamlet's fifth act are given a Middle Earth
spin. Legolas contemplates the skull of his servant. The grave diggers
sing rollicking songs, but this time the tune is "Earendil was a
mariner." Best of all, when Orofiliel's father throws himself into
grave, in the style of Polonius, Legolas must do so as well. We are
then treated to a melee in the grave, where everyone tries to one up
the other in how much they love the departed.

"The Tragedye of Leaflet" is not to be missed, especially for those
who enjoy Middle Earth parody.

Title: Burden of Guilt · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men · ID: 123
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-08-08 23:43:18
Linda Hoyland lets her angst thing fly in this compelling,
over-the-top tale of a misunderstanding between Faramir and Eomer that
leads to a ring of bizarre consequences. Ya want torture? Ya got
torture. Ya want Faramir weeping buckets? Ya got poor abused Faramir
weeping buckets, and later joined by a hugely pregnant Eowyn weeping
buckets, and a host of other characters riddled by angst for various
reasons. Meantime, poor Aragorn staggers about in exhaustion and
torments himself with guilt and feelings of inadequacy as he tries to
heal them all. Whew. That last sentence will give you an idea of the
pace Linda sets up and barely lets go of throughout a 60 chapter novel.

"Burden of Guilt" required me to suspend my own notions of some major
characters in the Tolkien canon. For example, weepy, defenseless
Faramir and loutish, pig-headed Eomer took some work for me to accept.
Still, I quickly surrendered to the power of Linda's lightning fast
narrative. These somewhat AU characterizations work so well in Linda's
story. If you can accept, and even delight in, Aragorn's Elven
mind-meld healing technique two thirds of the way through, then you
are assured a wonderful time through the remainder of "Burden of Guilt."

Title: In The Shadows I Wait · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama:
Youth · ID: 248
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-09 03:18:57
What if a sword were sentinent and could chose its owner?In the
mything world this is not quite such a silly question as it might
seem, when we remember tales of swords that only one person could draw
from a scabbard or a tree.
This is the story of how young Aragorn obtains his first sword,or
rather how the sword chooses him.It turns out that the sword and its
owner are well matched given whom it once belonged to.
I liked the idea that it was the least showy of swords which proved
best for Aragorn.
A very unusual ,enjoyable and well written story with some nice
moments for all the major characters.

Title: A Little Knowledge Can Be A Dangerous Thing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races: Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 352
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-09 03:19:18
This drabbles are beautifully written and a pure joy to read. They
deal with Arwen's dowery and Faramir's delight in seing the books she
has brought from her father Elrond's library at Rivendell.
Aragorn is all too eager to divert some of the funds otherwise
intended for the Royal Wardrobe towards having the books copied for
Faramir,which provides a delightful thread of humour throughout.

Title: Rage · Author: Deandra · Genres: Drama: Minas Tirith · ID: 353
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-09 03:19:38
This is a touching story about the courtship of Eomer and Lothiriel
with an added twist as the writer has roughly based it on the old
fairy tale of the monster transformed by the love of the princess.

Lothiriel has come to Rohan to spend the winter with Eomer and Eowyn
and as a prospective bride. However, Eomer's withdrawn and drunken
behaviour soon makes Lothiriel plan to leave but has not bargained for
the climate of Rohan.

Gradually after an accident Eomer begins to thaw and love blossoms.

I love the way the writer uses the seasons to reflect Eomer's troubled
emotions.

We gradually come to learn what troubles Eomer through the eyes of
Lothiriel.

This is a realiistic portrayal of the horrors of having lived through
war and loss as well as being an enjoyable read.

Title: In the Bloody Cottage · Author: Soubrettina · Races: Men:
Eriador or Rivendell · ID: 581
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-09 03:19:54


How bleak the future of Middle Earth would have been, had Aragorn not
survived as the Elves who saved him in this story knew and I believe
Ivorwen did too.

I love Gilraen here, her courage shines through as a brave girl
willing to sacrifice herself for her child. I liked Ivorwen and her
stoicism too and Arathorn's love for his young bride.

My only minor crititicism is the over modern use [he's fine]

A friend recommended this gem to be and I am glad she did as I would
otherwise have overlooked it.

Title: Comes Now The Plaintiff, Frodo Baggins · Author: EdorasLass ·
Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 17
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-09 07:05:16
A novel and completely delightful 'real life' interpretation of
certain aspects of the plot of LORD OF THE RINGS, in the form of a
legal complaint, on Frodo's behalf, against Gandalf, Aragorn, and Faramir.

EdorasLass knows her legal forms and this is straight-on accurate. Not
only is the legalese perfect, but there actually is cause for action,
if one applies American law, here. Gandalf's habit of being cryptic
and not telling the whole truth can be used in a suit for the
infliction of emotional distress via magical coercion; Aragorn did put
Frodo in harm's way at Weathertop, and Faramir did take the hobbit
from his appointed path to Henneth Annun and subject him to
interrogation and (more) distress. And when one considers all the
other cross-jurisdictional factors, all sorts of legal hijinks can
ensue. I could almost visualize some shady ambulance-chasing lawyer,
catching up to a weary Frodo after the Ring War and persuading him to
bring suit against all sorts of folks.

I loved the slyness of the "a.k.a."s - Gandalf as "Magneto"
(referencing one of Sir Ian's other movie roles) and "Stoned Old Guy
In the Hat"; poor Faramir as "The Spare", and Aragorn as "Frankie 'The
Hammer' of Pelargir" (which I could actually visualize, don't ask me why).

Chock-full of reasons to chuckle. I personally could not stop laughing
while I read this.

Title: The princess from the sea : a Gondorian fairy-tale · Author:
Fawsley · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 652
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-09 10:17:50
I loved it a lot. It is all wrong ;), but fitting. It could be a
fairy-tale of late FA, when the long line of ruling Stewards collapsed
to two or three names.

Title: Thyme is a great healer · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 723
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-10 06:50:16
I love Faramir's tucking the sprig of rosemary into the clasp in
remembrance of Boromir. Faramir has a good life, but he will never
forget his brother. Sam of course, remembers the smells of cooking,
the stewed rabbit, and thinks of traveling through wild Ithilien with
Frodo and Gollum.

Excellent blend of joy, prosperity, and wistful but no longer sad
remembrance.

Title: Harvest Bonfire · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance · ID: 667
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-10 06:51:02
Good to see Rosie Cotton not written as Super-Mom, or at least as
Super-Mom with Kryptonite in the form of exhaustion from attending to
so many children. The solution, while a temporary one, emphasizes the
strength and close-knit relationships of friend and family.

Credible and touching story.

Title: Behind Every Great Man... · Author: annmarwalk · Times: Mid
Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 52
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-10 06:56:18
Oh, I love this! Perfect characterisation of Denethor, the
perfectionist bridegroom! The last line is perfect - hey, I have
something in common with the future 26th Steward of Gondor!

Mormegil is a delightful addition to the OC's of Gondor - a quietly
competent, gracious but not obsequious valet to Denethor.

Title: Oliphaunt am I · Author: Elemmire · Races: Hobbits · ID: 768
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-10 07:18:36
Fascinating history of how hobbitkind came to know oliphaunt-kind,
through actual sight, lore and legend, and fearful glimpses on
desperate battlefields. I loved the section with Isengar Took, the
original writer of the oliphaunt poem, and his un-hobbitlike travels
farther south than any of his kin (that we know of) - nice use of
canon. I enjoyed the mix of family history, lore, legend and big scary
walking facts.

Title: Through Daeron's Eyes · Author: dancingkatz · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 187
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-10 08:28:19
I liked both honorable Daeron and pranking Hal, as well as Boromir as
seen through Daeron's adoring eyes. The glimpses of Faramir were few,
but a real treat: it never yet occurred to me that he could have been
a prankster himself, and it makes lots of sense, minding nature of the
ranger warfare and Robin Hood overtones of his ITB appearance. And I'm
certainly grateful for the likable, competent and noble Denethor.
Council scene seems a bit of a parody, probably, intentional. I hope
there will be some development for Daleth and his uncle: so far they
both are generic petty annoyances with disproportional airtime. With
the way they beg for attention, they must either redeem themselves or
turn into real villains. Framing Daeron as Boromir's bastard son is a
nasty idea, but not a productive one, since people who matter know the
truth.
I'm looking forward for the next installment (and it's a relief to
guess from the summary that at least one of the beautiful OCs will
survive the war). Definitely going to follow the updates.

Title: The Turn of the Tide · Author: Altariel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 72
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-10 08:54:22
The only successful attempt to show that "if Faramir went to Rivendell
it was better thing" I can recall, and I looked really hard. This
short story is breathtaking, it is true to its pace as a poem should
be, and as precise in tone. From Boromir's "My brother!" to Denethor
staying on the path to kingly gifts, everything is in place. I love
realist!Eowyn who doesn't care for Numenorian mystics (and realist
Denethor who has no use to it), and I wish Altariel had written it
all, or even few more episodes in between... But guess it's to much to
ask for.

Title: Between Crown and Mantle · Author: Marastar · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA · ID: 701
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-10 09:53:13
A lovely ficlet! There is no analogy between that Faramir and her
Faramir, but a parallel, a recurring theme. I liked the stalling,
chilled quality of Eowyn's introspection.

Title: Lamentable Tidings · Author: rhyselle · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 742
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-11 07:47:01
Lamentable tidings, indeed. I'm very impatient for the next chapter.
I cannot say I like this story, there is not much to like in it,
really, besides Baramir being alive so far and Denethor being
reasonable (but Gandalf appearing not so, which is sad). But it is
enticing reading, and I hope Farmir will emerge out of his ordeal
alive, even if one-handed. Will Aragorn restore Faramir and so prove
himself acceptable for Denethor?
The parallel between the horn and the bow was very powerful, as well
as glimpses of Sauron; I believe Denethor is too mild at this point,
but he didn't brood upon the cloven horn for three days. Faramir's
misery is beyond belief -- it probably takes supernatural powers to
keep the prisoner out of shock with such manner of interrogation.

Title: On Starless Waters Far Astray · Author: Empy · Genres:
Crossover · ID: 557
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-08-11 19:04:45
What an odd, disturbing, and entralling story, at the same time
dreamlike and nightmarish. Telling the tale from Norrington's point of
view draws us in masterfully so that we are share his anger,
frustration, and confusion. Middle-earth is not familiar to us,
neither language nor dress nor even climate. We feel those pinpicks of
unease, just as he does, as his situation becomes increasingly bizarre.

And Imrahil! At first, he reminds me here as nothing so much as a
great cat, toying with his prey. There's no need to treat Norrington
in this manner; he's obviously injured, exhausted, not a threat in the
slightest. Imrahil's air of decadence, his ennui, is quite intriguing
- that he would treat a stranger so, purely for his own entertainment,
without any intimation of lust or anger or even a need to prove
dominance. But at the same time, he seems to be drawn, despite
himself, to the mystifying and mysterious Norrington, as if desire is
the only language in which they might be able to communicate. Yet he
makes no use of Norrington's surrender. Perhaps he had reconsidered,
found these actions to be without honor, and abandoned his dispirited,
not-entirely-willing partner?

The surprising ending adds another surreal element to the tale - that
poor Norrington is doomed to repeat this experience, over and over,
until -- what? Empy gives us no hint at all; we can only each try to
imagine a fitting end. [Review partially cannibalized from the
anonymous one I left at the original post. Did you guess that it was
mine?]

Msg# 8226

MEFA Reviews for October 9, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 09, 2007 - 5:45:50 Topic ID# 8226
Title: Twice blessed is help unlooked for · Author: Tanaqui · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 631
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-11 22:42:35
This is a great drabble. I particularly like the heavy and weary
Imrahil here. Imrahil ITB is a secondary character with very few lines
and details, and his cameo (at least in my imagination) is bright and
flat like a Patronus, to borrow from another fandom. Thanks for the
added depth.

Title: The Tides of the World · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late
Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 101
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-11 23:10:32
A fantastic ficlet. I love Aragorn's steady, if weary, voice, his
counting of losses and gains, the ascending note in the last line
["And now -- a new day"]. I believe Aragorn walking back to his tents
on his own legs is very much in character (but I hate to think he
missed another night's sleep, as the ficlet implies... hope they would
not disturb him)

Title: Better Days Ahead · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 51
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-12 03:10:16
This is scary! Not many people risk writing from uruk-hai POW. Very
impressive. ["They didn't even win fair"] was a great touch. Orks must
have their notion of fair, too.

Title: Shadows of the Past · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 331
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-12 07:22:58
A rarely used subject for a drabble or any other Tolkien fanfic - the
effect of his murder of Deagol upon the unhappy Smeagol as he became
Gollum and even after. The drabble neatly addresses the question of
how Gollum felt about his crime, and how much he remembered as the
years past - with subtlety and a slight shiver. Nicely done.

Title: 13th Birthday · Author: stefaniab · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 138
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-12 20:03:28
This is quite an enjoyable romp through a Tolkien fanfiction
sub-universe that is mostly movie-verse but with a hint of bookverse.

The story concerns Boromir's efforts to give his younger brother a
happy thirteenth birthday and induct young Faramir into the ranks of
physical and legal maturity. Boromir is portrayed as a cheerful,
loving older brother, charismatic, and more clever than he lets on;
which is right on the mark with Sean Bean's delightful version of the
character. Faramir is a quiet boy who is far more perceptive, seeing
things his brother could not and would not, his gentle disposition
troubled by hints of darkness to come.

There are lots of Neat Bits - such as Faramir being physically strong
and well-trained enough to slip out of Boromir's surprise attack, and
Faramir's concern for Denethor, and the wonderful last paragraph. My
favorite chapter is probably the third (also the last); where there is
a very smoothly flowing confrontation between the somewhat inebriated
Boromir, the alternately amused and wistful Denethor, and the quietly
content Faramir (who has a secret). One wishes one could freeze the
family at that point, and never move into the more bitter days of 3019...

The story may not be strictly Canon, but it is a very good read,
possibly the best from a very entertaining writer.

Title: Still Round the Corner · Author: lbilover · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 515
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-12 20:24:28
Much has been made in Tolkien fanfiction of the reunion of Sam and
Frodo in the Undying Lands. This is a story of Sam's last moments with
the son who bears Frodo's name - and it is extremely well done.

I like Frodo Gardner's sorrow for his father's departure, his efforts
to persuade him to stay, and his slight resentment of Frodo Baggins'
hold on Sam; this is natural, but never strays into malice; Frodo is a
good-hearted and sensible hobbit, very like his father. It cannot be
easy to be the son of a living legend, one of the two hobbits who
saved Middle-earth; and Ibilover conveys Frodo's wistful recognition
of his own unadventurous life very well. Sam's reply, that Frodo
(Baggins) gave his all so that Sam's children and descendants would
never have to pick up a weapon, is wonderful and very hobbit-like.



Title: Warriors' Scars · Author: Marta · Times: Early Third Age:
1-2850 TA · ID: 648
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-08-12 22:09:31
This is a turning point for Elladan - he's no longer focused just on
his own grief. And the way I see the twins, when Elladan takes that
step, Elrohir will follow.

I love Glorfindel's support - spoken and unspoken - to father and sons.

Title: More than Meets the Eye · Author: Dadgad · Genres: Humor: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 128
Reviewer: Jay of Lasgalen · 2007-08-12 22:15:22
Very, very good, and full of sly humour. I like all the subtle
references you've squeezed in - the Granny Smith apples, the Shire
horse, how Bullroarer Took got his name, and the golfing jokes.

Tolkien's comment in The Hobbit about how 'the battle of Greenfields
was won and the game of golf invented at the same time' always amused
me - thanks for expanding on it. And with the twins, as well!


Title: Too Many Adverbs · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble ·
ID: 660
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-13 04:36:24
Boromir the Bold and hardy and forward in battle would certainly have
been a handful as a boy; and perhaps most of all to the loremaster
assigned the task of teaching him. In this amusing drabble by Branwyn,
the loremaster tries to persuade his young charge of the importance of
mastering adverbs.

Boromir is written exceptionally well here; as a youngster who is not
fond of book learning and grammar, yet is clever enough to wear out
his tutor in a verbal fencing match. We also see the persistence and
determination that are so much part of Boromir's character in later
life. I can almost see the patience of the poor loremaster, who seems
to be a good teacher, fading.



Title: The Case of the Purloined Mushrooms · Author: Inkling · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 298
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-14 03:36:30
A delightful tale and well worth reading. I loved the characters:
Frodo, Bilbo, the messenger (best of all), and all others involved. I
liked the differences between the messengers - quite well told. And
the mystery was, well, a mystery. Well done!

Title: A Dragon in Buckland · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Mystery ·
ID: 206
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-14 03:38:27

This was such fun, Pearl. I loved every moment of it. And what a great
idea. Merry should be very proud of Pippin, especially since he
brought others in to learn about caring for others. I thoroughly
enjoyed it and especially the 'dragon' at the end. Well worth reading!

Title: In the Dark · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Mystery · ID: 484
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-14 03:41:13
Wow! You never let up, did you? I kept waiting and hoping for some
kind of happy or hopeful ending - but no.... what a tense tale. My
heart was in my throat for Legolas. He endured as long as he could.
But then, when you had the same thing happen to Aragorn, I think I
nearly died. VERY tense, very scary, very goose-bump making tale. I
still am not quite over it. Very, very scary! Congratulations!

Title: The City and Star Island Line · Author: lipstick · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 524
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-14 03:51:03
This was a great tale. At first, I was a little befuddled, but quickly
caught the 'spirit' (giggles) and read the rest with delight.

I do love the ghost tale as it is being told.... especially the line
about the miles from fifty to a thousand... and then the ending line -
just delightful.

But the true tale was much more enduring and harder to read and to
bear the grief... though the time is over and done with, the scar
remains...

I got goose-bumps when I read about the paraffin - I had to read the
section TWICE to finally realize - because my mind did not want to
even imagine the horror of the smell. POOR FARAMIR... incredibly horrific!

And the sacrifices and Faramir's response to them, upholding his
family's honour - as horrible (and that word is constant throughout
this review because of your tale!) as horrible as the idea was -
Faramir's response made me laugh. Sadly. (I apologize to Faramir.)

The gift of the Phoenix - how chilling and once again, horrible, but
befitting dearest Faramir - for he did rise from the ashes to a really
glorious Steward. However, is the old Steward going to rise again?
More goose-bumps!

I love the description of Eowyn's love for Faramir and how it
broadened her horizons. I loved her thoughts of him. And then that
they both have nightmares - chilling. *runs off to get a blanket*

And I do love the ending - for the horror is dispelled and love and
laughter win the day. And Faramir thinks kindly of his father - whom I
just happen to adore.

Many thanks for a delightful, horror-filled reading!

Title: The Stone of Erebor · Author: Primsong · Genres: Mystery · ID: 401
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-14 03:55:29
I loved every moment of this tale. You really know how to write Bilbo
and make him believable and seem like the tale is one Tolkien himself
wrote. But even further in amazement for me is your writing of the
Dwarves! You do an excellent job with them.

The mystery was such fun - and difficult to figure out. I loved the
'bits' of Dwarvish history. I loved the nuances of their culture which
you generously share. I love Bilbo's trying to work around that
culture and almost failing and yet succeeding.

I loved the fact that Bilbo was held in such high esteem by some of
the Dwarves and yet held in suspicion by others - even the King Under
the Mountain. I loved his kidnesses in all situations. Even being
called a thief again!

Delightfully written mystery with the burglar Bilbo Baggins right in
the middle of it all with Dwarves, and assorted venues! High suspense,
lovely writing, great character depictions. No one writes Bilbo quite
like this!

Title: Fair Folk and Foul · Author: Adaneth · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 222
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-14 23:32:57
Adaneth continues the saga of the exiles of Srathen Brethil and their
chance alliance with a Dwarvish colony that has just established
itself nearby. The monsters still lurked as of the end of the last
story, and they remain a threat as [Fair Folk and Foul] opens. The
intervention of a Ranger squad sent by the Chieftain, Aragorn, who
arrives from over the mountains to hunt the beasts is matched by the
first stirrings of interest from Lindon - not that the emissary seems
particularly friendly!

Tension builds as misfortune strikes, depriving Saelon's people of
their Chieftain, and halving the number of settlers in the village. At
this point, it's time for a motley crew of Dwarves and Men - only one
of whom is a Ranger - to take on the creatures.

And while I don't recall seeing any leading quotes from [Beowulf],
this is essentially a transfiguration of that tale - the repeated,
unsuccessful and costly attempts to slay the monsters when they come
hunting in the hall, the one companion (Veylin) who manages to lop off
a paw, the journey of oath-sworn companions who dare to bait the beast
in close quarters, who must finish the job by seeking the monsters in
their watery lair, and the revelation of the Grendel-mother all come
together in the final chapters of the story.

The cultural interactions are very well done - there is a definite
shift between the perspective of the Edain and Dunedain and the
perspective of Veylin and the Dwarves. Adaneth, as in the previous
installment, shows this very well, and the difficulty of forging an
alliance across cultures where so much scope for misunderstanding
lies. Veylin and Saelon continue to be regarded askance, as a pair of
unlikely ally-friends, and individually precisely because everyone
wants to know why on earth they seem to get on so well and are willing
to fall back on the oldest motive in the book (and the one most likely
to cause offense).

One would hope the survivors of Srathen Brethil and Veylin's folk
would be able to settle down and begin to build an alliance based on
more than a desire for vengeance against a mutual foe. But that elven
emissary, with his arrogant and foreboding words, remains at large -
the Lindon affair hasn't even begun yet, and who knows what twists
that will introduce?

I look forward to the next installment! Stories like these are some of
the reasons I love MEFAs - I find things I had been wanting to read
but lost track of, or had not had time for, or simply had not known,
and have an excuse to make the time to sit with them.

Well done, Adaneth! Both stories in your Dunhebaid cycle I would
recommend to anyone with a love of Middle-earth - this is just the
sort of tale to help fill in the history of the place with the
adventures of war and peace.

Title: Dawning Hope: A Day Out · Author: Radbooks · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA · ID: 659
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-14 23:38:12
Theodred suffers a traumatic day when he decides to take his recently
bereaved young cousins out for a day, to take their minds off of their
sadness. Although much emphasis is put on the fact that Theodred lacks
experience of children, being used to warriors, he seems to do well
enough in my book. The real challenges here have less to do with Eomer
and Eowyn being children than with the mishaps that can befall even
adults when a horse spooks.

Apparently, commanding soldiers does work well enough for keeping
young cousins together in the midst of medical emergencies!

Title: The Young Knights · Author: Soledad · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 98
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-15 03:22:37
A vivid story of a tournament in Lossarnach that brings together
several canon and original characters of Gondor and Rohan and
elsewhere. Soledad brings her usual medievalist skills to the writing,
the details of the contests, the clothing and weaponry, is excellent.

Of course, I had my eye on the wonderful adventure of 13-year-old
Faramir, who meets his first Shield-maiden as well as Anborn of the
Ithilien Rangers, and shows his skill in the junior archery match. It
is rather heart-rending to realize that Faramir's fiercest competitor,
the older boy, Derufin, will die on the Pelennor in March 3019.

A colorful pageant of life in prewar Gondor in the late Third Age.

Title: Breath of Spring · Author: Ribby · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 763
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-15 03:29:45
A fine drabbled snapshot of Faramir's dark vale experience. I liked
the role of odors here - the tang of blood and death that plagued
Faramir during his time under the Black Breath, and of course the
smell of Spring that is associated with the athelas used by Aragorn to
revive him. Tolkien seems to associate the season of spring with
Faramir, and that link is well-reprised here.

Title: A Very Rain of Sparrows · Author: Dwimordene · Races: Men · ID: 440
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-15 08:06:54
Life on the eastshore of the Anduin, there on the edge of Ithilien,
wasn't easy during the brief reign of Castamir. Getting by, meeting
taxes and supporting home and family grew worse and worse each year.

Aethrin's family, like all within his village, is struggling. His
widowed mother might make it if she accepts the suit of one of the
King's men; but Aethrin's older brother objects to the thought of her
marrying one from outside the village, particularly if it's mostly for
a level of financial stability.

The poverty and pride of the family and place have a distinctly
accurate feeling; and the use of dialect is extraordinarily well done.
A story well worth the reading.

Title: The Steward's New Clothes · Author: GypsieRose · Genres: Humor:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 511
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-15 08:16:19
A clever, humorous look at Denethor's boring wardrobe and his choices
for his wife and children from the Tailor to Middle Earth.

Very cute.

Title: Life Lessons · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 582
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-15 08:24:11
An interesting thought that Arwen might think to teach Eowyn to bake
lembas, although where they would grow and reap the grain is a
question, as it is said in the Letters that all must be done in a
particular and sacred manner.

Good sense of mood to the story, although I wish that Arwen would
assert herself and insist on tending her own daughter as much as she can.

Title: Mentor · Author: Nessime · Times: Second Age: Drabble · ID: 653
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-15 08:31:34
Those who settled in and were born to Numenor it was hoped would
eschew the evil known within Middle Earth--but when Ar-Pharazon had
Sauron brought there the lessons now being learned were anything but
wholesome.

A drabble that manages to project mood very well.

Title: They also serve who only stand and wait · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 724
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-15 08:36:37
A marvelous look at those who would serve as beacon tenders and the
life they would most likely know. Very realistic feel to this drabble!

Title: A Princeling Lost · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Humor: Gondor
or Rohan · ID: 795
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-15 08:55:35
To escape stuffy welcomes and stuffier clothing, Elboron disappears
from Emyn Arnen to the healer's cottage.

Excellent atmosphere, and all too realistic look at the attitudes of
wary young boys seeking a more relaxed atmosphere when all threatens
to become too formal.

Title: How Pippin Looked After Merry · Author: PipMer · Races:
Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 822
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-15 22:35:56
As Pippin sees a stricken Merry carried into the Houses of Healing, he
finds himself remembering the one time during their childhood Merry
came close to dying, and also praying for the aid of Valar and Creator
to assist his cousin.

It is perhaps slightly AU--but how many in the real world who
ordinarily fail to consider spiritual matters manage to do precisely
this--in moments of crisis open themselves to pleading with God to
assist those they love?

Inspires thought, which is the point of good writing.

Msg# 8227

MEFA Reviews for October 10, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 10, 2007 - 4:45:49 Topic ID# 8227
Title: Under the Eyes of the Evenstar · Author: Raksha the Demon ·
Genres: Drama: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 680
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-15 22:47:05
In watching Boromir bathe Arwen realizes this one is perhaps not as
great a threat to Aragorn's destiny as she first thought. A moment of
foresight brings her compassion to the fore where but moments before
she verged on resentment of his words to her beloved at the Council.

Well written and gives an appreciation for the setting and situation.

Title: Once Upon a Strongbow · Author: Legolass · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 685
Reviewer: aralas · 2007-08-16 15:54:41
Once Upon a Strongbow reads like one of those warm, easy fairy tales
or fables you tell by the fireside as the day draws to a close, and it
actually does achieve that effect, but what it also does is touch on
values and issues that are pertinent to real life and real people.

The writer refers to a recurrent theme in Tolkien's works – that of a
great bond between an elf and a human – and weaves her own delightful
story around it. The story features a much older Aragorn, and
heartwarming interaction between adults and children.

The contents of the tale are lovely, but what makes this story truly
unique is the way Legolass has done the narration. She has not only
inserted elements from two of Tolkien's stories into her own, but has
also played around with timelines using a creative technique I have
not come across elsewhere, not even in published works. The
deceptively simple fable-like tale is in fact a pretty complex piece
of writing, but it is crafted so well that it looks effortless. I
cannot say more without giving away the plot, but I will say that it's
well worth reading the story if only to enjoy the superb crafting of it.

All in all, Once Upon a Strongbow is an excellent read. It has no
grand adventures or heart-stopping drama, but in its own quiet way, it
left a lasting impression on me.

Title: Inroads · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 45
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-16 17:49:29
This is a lovely, inventive and insightful moment, well and truly
depicted. I can't help but focus more on the young women, notably,
than Eowyn. Here Raksha gives us a wonderful glimpse into a full
character. It is easy to imagine how war has changed her and her
world; she was, indeed, brave to approach the lady and to have lived
through all that went before that night.

Title: Better Days Ahead · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 51
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-16 20:50:30
Good stuff! Chilling and humorous all at once, which is a neat trick.
I particularly liked Shagrat launching a rape campaign in that it
echoes what we read in the news from current ethnic conflicts, and
that they're blood will rise up, perhaps long after they themselves no
longer can. Well done and never rushed.

Title: Here We Go Round The Mulberry Bush · Author: Isabeau of
Greenlea · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 512
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-16 20:52:54
I liked the premise of this story, but it disappointed. The writer
never lets us see what Pippin likes in Diamond, except for her looks
and her forwardness, so he comes off as an opportunist. Where's the
love or even glimmer of it, here? What makes them more than the hobbit
equivalent of a one-night stand?

Title: A Mother's Touch · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-16 20:57:09
I really liked this. At first, the identity of the mother was
wonderfully ambiguous, and then, when it is revealed, artfully embued
with the tenderness and firmness that is any mother's hallmark. So
much history and culture is woven in here, and yet it remains a most
specific and individual vignette.

Title: Some Dark Place · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 226
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-16 21:00:41
Very nice! the author has teased only the barest mention into a
wonderfully telling and probably story. Well done!!

Title: Duty and Devotion · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 411
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-16 21:03:59
Oooooh! Interesting! That Beregond would have gone to Faramir's side
not immediately, not out of pure love for his commander, but after
some several minutes deliberation, after some smallness of spirit
(resentining Pippin), and only after a fatalistic vision of the
Nazgul. Very interesting!! Well done.

Title: Calm after the Storm · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 350
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-16 21:06:51
This is nicely done, evocatively depicting the heat of the day, the
aftermath of battle, the weariness, but I couldn't help wanting more -
some mote of Imrahil's individuality. This sailor commander could be
anyone.

Title: Burning Your Bridges · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Poetry · ID: 125
Reviewer: Chathol-linn · 2007-08-17 02:22:42
I liked the spare and vivid imagery of the night battle. The author's
use of fire imagery was very effective in contrast to the black pitch.
The opening of this poem reminded me of the way Seamus Heaney begins
his translation of Beowulf – urgent and immediately present. Nice job.

Title: Hiraeth · Author: Llinos · Genres: Poetry · ID: 803
Reviewer: Chathol-linn · 2007-08-17 02:36:41
This contemplative poem gets its poignancy from the poet's love of
natural beauty – the trees, the quiet rill or dene, the Sun and Moon.
The reader is there in the greenwood, where desire for the sea fades
and returns with no release. An effective capturing of the Elven
sea-longing in a few words. I loved the title and admired the author's
idea to select that particular Welsh word. It definitely added to the
haunting Elvish quality of the poem.

Title: The hunt across Tirion · Author: Tinni · Genres: Poetry · ID: 607
Reviewer: Chathol-linn · 2007-08-17 02:43:10
I was taken by the idea of the hunt for the crystal roses, which
seemed like a pretty original device for a poem about Valinor. I think
the author must be very well versed in Silmarillion lore, because of
the careful attention paid to the Quenya names. And the ending was an
expression of love. You don't often get that with Fëanor. Nice Job.

Title: Come Back to Me · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance · ID: 67
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-17 05:53:57
I am somewhat ambivalent about reviewing this story, because, to me,
Tolkien and most Slash do not mix. I may read Tolkien slash, but
cannot find it in my heart to believe most of it in the same way I
read other quality Tolkien fanfic.

This story is well-paced and well-written; with good dialogue. Marta
does a particularly fine job with Goldberry's voice. Slash aficionados
should enjoy the story; it is certainly a novel pairing.

Title: Gone Fishin' · Author: Aranel Took · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 322
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-17 06:30:08
A wonderful way of showing, not telling of, Aragorn's occasional
discontent in his role as King. He has spent so much of his life as a
wanderer in the wilds; that being settled, having a home and wife, and
others to which he is constantly accountable, is not yet a perfect fit
and might never be. Aranel Took uses only a hundred words to convey
all this with a very smooth and natural drabble; giving us a king who
still yearns for the simplicities of a Ranger's life.

Title: Duty and Devotion · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 411
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-17 06:40:45
Excellent and thought-provoking drabble. I'm not sure I agree that it
was a realization of imminent Doom that finally galvanized Beregond to
make his fateful decision, but it could have happened that way and the
concept works well within this drabble.

I like the attention paid to the gravity of the choice that Pippin has
hastily thrust on Beregond.

Of course, the last line made me want to jump up and yell Go, Berry,
Go!...

Title: The Inner Light · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 236
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-17 07:48:52
Intriguing story which creates, delineates, and sustains a connection
between Erestor and Maglor. Erestor's backstory and chosen fate were
very credible; and I loved the ending.

Title: And Thought How Blessed He Was · Author: Imhiriel · Genres:
Romance: Drabble · ID: 670
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-17 07:52:00
A lovely drabble anticipating and framing the wedding night that
Aragorn had dreamed of for so long. There's a wonderful sense of both
tension and awe; the reader can feel the weight of years upon Aragorn,
how long he has waited for this moment. And Arwen's blend of
sensuality and tenderness is just right. She is giving him permission
to feel sorrow as well as joy, to finally find release in all senses
of the word.

The sexuality is very lightly implied here; just right for the ficlet.

Very well done.



Title: Keep your secrets · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 751
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-17 08:19:56
Merry's justifiably concerned that during the trip from Bag End to
Crickhollow Pippin just might let something slip to alert Frodo to the
Conspiracy. Wonderful humorous moment caught in drabble form.

Title: A Game of Chess · Author: Altariel · Genres: Romance: Gondor ·
ID: 609
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-17 11:56:14
The marriage between Eowyn and Faramir might have been one of the most
romantic threads within LOTR, but in many ways it was also a rather
rushed one. The idea that in the stresses of new parenthood and the
first period during which Faramir is active Steward while the King is
fighting a defensive war to the east the marriage between the Prince
and Princess of Ithilien might have suffered is all too likely,
perhaps. The preconceptions and self-absorption of each leads to what
appears to be a break in their happy marriage. At least the two of
them do manage to recommense communication with more openness, and in
the end their marriage and commitment are the stronger.

Whether Denethor was always abusive toward his younger son is
uncertain; certainly in the last couple years, at least, their
relationship was not good. If it was abusive, then that Faramir turned
out as well as he did is a wonder and a blessing.

Some will be distressed by Faramir's memories of his father, but they
are well depicted here, I think. The first-person POV going back and
forth between Faramir and Eowyn with occasional visions from Imrahil's
POV are well done. Descriptions are marvelous, and the feeling for the
settings are remarkably well done. All in all, well, well worth the read.

Title: Crossroads of Time · Author: Ellie · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 382
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-18 02:47:19
I started reading your tale about 2 days ago - got hooked - line and
sinker - and so last night I thought I'd just try to read as far as I
could and then go to bed - WELL - I never got to bed till 2:30am -
read from 6:30pm on - with a quick break for a bite and then back into
the thick of Gondolin...

You write very well - the story was riveting, the characters very good
and the situations were plausible... I thought your premise was
believable - with the time machine and such. My heart broke for the
entire family - and I loved the ending. Though I was ready to deal
with their separation, I rejoiced in their reunion.

I was very surprised that you took the story all the way to the Fall
of Gondolin - The four hour timespan had me thinking this was going to
be a short pice - BUT I loved that you wrote that time! Their
courtship was delightful, the ban by Turgon rescinded believably, and
their children were a delight. Sadness abounds for the Elves but you
made the tale positive. I liked that very much.

The story really, really works! Great job and thanks for sharing!!!

Title: The princess from the sea : a Gondorian fairy-tale · Author:
Fawsley · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 652
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-18 02:50:20
This was a very nice tale. I think it is more a fable than a fairy
tale. Ask Finduilas to forgive me - my favorite character was the
horse! I love how he walked, then plodded, then continued on! Delightful.

I also very much loved the outside/inside and what makes a person
worthy. Nice job!

Title: Wherever the Surge May Sweep · Author: sparkofire · Genres:
Alternate Universe · ID: 579
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-18 02:56:00
I shouldn't review this! As I read, I went back to make sure it was
complete - for I was sucked into this story - completely and I knew I
could not bear it being something I would have to wait to see what
happens.

I shouldn't review this! But every chapter, after Lothlorien, was
filled with tears.

I shouldn't review this! But your writing is beautiful; the tension
you build (and have now left me wallowing in) is incredible; and the
situations and characters are gorgeous.

I shouldn't review this because I read it from start to finish -
started at 10pm - against my better judgement - and could not stop
until I read the very last word. At 4AM.....

The story is so chock full of angst that I just sat on the edge of my
seat and held my breath! Every chapter was so full. Legolas and
Aragorn were perfect!

I can't say how beautiful this story is, how much it has touched me to
the core, and how much I respect your writing! I don't have the words
and I am ashamed. Your characterizations are beautiful, your settings
easy to imagine, but your 'heart' imbedded in this tale, makes it alive!

Please - tell me when the next book is ready???? Please!

Title: The Love of Lore · Author: Oshun · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 271
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-18 05:21:16
This is a delightful short piece with two chapters dealing with small
boys who have a bent towards lore and scholarship - Faramir, and,
decades later, his own son Elboron.

Young Boromir's anger at his baby brother stealing a favorite book,
followed by skepticism at the child's claim and then pride in his
brother's accomplishment, ring very true.

And I adore the second chapter, with Faramir accepting Aragorn's
compliments with an appealing modesty as well as joy. The imagery of
little Elboron reading to little Eldarion is just perfect, and also
believable.

Charming and very entertaining, with good characterisation.

Title: The Beginning · Author: Oshun · Genres: Romance: Second Age or
Earlier · ID: 339
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-18 05:27:04
Well-written vignette with Gil-galad and Elrond beginning a romance.
Slash aficionados should enjoy it. The tale is sweet without being
cloying, with a slight and appropriate edge, and definite without
being graphic; promising passion to come.

Title: The Witch-king's Cloak · Author: Radbooks · Genres: Humor:
Parody · ID: 106
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-18 06:33:48
It seems the Witch-King is in a royal snit because his cloak was
destroyed at Weathertop; and the spare cloak is not as well-made.

Snork! A funny and clever piece - of course the WiKi would be arrogant
in all things, even his clothing. Next thing you know, he'll be
swapping fabric swatches with the Uruk-Hai.

I begin to feel sorry for the little tailor of Minas Morgul.

Msg# 8228

MEFA Reviews for October 10, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 10, 2007 - 4:46:50 Topic ID# 8228
Title: Left Behind · Author: Elanor · Genres: Drama: With Merry · ID: 28
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-19 01:50:59
Oh my goodness - what a delightful, sad, sorrowful, joyful, tense,
ernest, incredible tale.

I loved every piece and part of it - the normal - being left behind is
so very sad... but the terror that Faramir and Merry must endure -
first at the thought of what their friends would find at the Black
Gate - but even further - with the repercussions of the Black Breath
upon them... both of them had it twice over - Faramir at the battle of
the bridge in June, right before Boromir left on the quest - and Merry
at Weathertop. *shivers*

I am madly in love with Denethor and struggled as I began to read your
'explanation' of Finduilas' death. I can accept it - and to me that is
very good writing. I could see Denethor putting Gondor before her -
Eru forgive him. And, sadly, I could see her accepting it. *shivers again*

And Faramir and Boromir's part - how they had ever survived and grew
to be strong and sure men of Gondor, I do not know.

Very well written. I am grateful to have found this tale and been able
to 'share' in Merry and Faramir's experience.

Title: Candles · Author: Eretria · Genres: Drama: With Merry · ID: 305
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-08-19 02:41:25
This was a very nice tale. I had to shiver, of course, at the ending,
but found the tale well written.

PS - I love the look of your website.

Title: The Use of a Good Bit of Chain · Author: bodldops · Races:
Hobbits: Vignette · ID: 344
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-20 05:21:22
Very clever way of answering the 'girl-saves-M-e' challenge. Daisy is
definitely not a Mary Sue; just a rather sweet-natured Hobbit lass
trying to do something nice for Frodo. And thereby hangs the tale; of
which it could be written that Even the Smallest of Good Deeds Can
Make A Difference...

Title: A Game of Chess · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble
· ID: 605
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-20 18:07:34
Methinks that Denethor will not be able to write off Lieutenant
Thorongil's chess skills as 'beginner's luck' for very long. Maybe not
even this first time, given that Denethor is perceptive and I suspect
that Thorongil isn't above letting a little of his intention shine
through in the end. Nice snapshot!

Title: When the King Comes Back (the Great Smials) · Author:
Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: The Shire · ID: 262
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-21 06:42:07
Intriguing and sensitively written account of the changes in the
relationship of Pippin and his father, Merry and his family, after the
end of ROTK, and the hobbits who stayed in the Shire's receiving
official notice of the King's Return.

I liked the characterisation of Paladin; a tough older hobbit who has
not always had patience with his rather scapegrace heir, and now has
to face that not only has the kid grown up fast, but he suffered along
the way. I loved Paladin's insistence that his son was going to be
kept busy with his duties so he could not get into any more trouble -
at that point, Paladin really had very little comprehension of how
Pippin had matured, not to mention traveling through so much danger.
There's an interesting parallel of Paladin/Pippin to Denethor/Faramir;
though it is made clear that Paladin is a better father and dearly
loves all his children.

Title: Resurrection · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 265
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-22 06:10:51
A beautifully told Alternate Universe story of the injured Halbarad's
physical and emotional recovery. Badly wounded and close to death, he
survived, and grappled with the strangeness of renewed life in a new
world he had not expected to see.

I like the way that Halbarad, whose strength and courage have never
been in question, does not easily accept his own survival; he has been
marked by battle, pain, and suffering, and the acceptance of the death
that was nearly his. But he does not give up; there is no death-wish
here, merely curiosity as well as the will to endure.

Aragorn's appearance is perfectly written; Dwim writes the two old
comrades and warriors very well, their relationship one of understated
friendship and love.

Title: Enter the Fourth Age, Hastily · Author: Dwimordene · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 140
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-22 06:22:52
Excellent evocation of Treebeard and his slow, but accurate,
observations of the changing world.




Title: The Essence of Fire · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 278
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-22 20:19:37
The drabble has a compelling, driving rhythm, supported by the
repetition of ["fire"]. The actual and metaphorcial uses of fire in it
paint a convincing, evocative picture of Caranthir's set of mind, his
feelings and his motivations, driven as he is by passionate creativity
on the one hand, and destructive force and violence (in words and
deeds) on the other - just as fire can be both creative and destructive.

It's remarkable just how many events which support the premise and
which build on one another - both canonical and original - are touched
on here in the space of just 100 words.

Title: Thengling Mighty · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 420
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-22 20:20:48
An alliterative drabble for the Rohirrim - nice idea, and so very
fitting for the culture! I think the beginning is a little flat, but
the second half truly makes up for it, and the last sentence is wonderful.

Title: A Moment Lost · Author: Fawsley · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 491
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-22 20:23:50
Lyrical, poignant style which evokes Aragorn's thoughts very well, I
think: calm, introspective, perhaps with a touch of self-irony. I
think it's very in-character that it is more an inner process than
outward manifestations that would be the decisive factor for him in
embracing the kingship.

It also seems to me very believable that it would be a slow, gradual
process with many steps in between in fits and starts. Some of them
momentuous and sharply defined, like when Elrond revealed his lineage
to him when he became 20, or when the quest started; but some of them
an unobtrusive development where it is difficult to see a transition
or delineation, for example learning to be the Dúnadan to his people
in the North, or the times in various countries of Men where he garner
invaluable experiences over longer periods of time.

Title: The Arachnid's Appeal · Author: TrekQueen · Genres: Humor · ID: 114
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-22 20:28:29
The premise alone had me in stitches. And no, I won't ask how this
letter would be practically possible - I imagine a very, very large
parchment and sundry blotches on the letter, Shelob and her
surroundings might be part of it...

I love the idea of Shelob as a fastidious connoisseur, and the
*timing* of the letter is priceless. It makes me wonder if Sauron
received it yet before his demise.

Title: Between Friends · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Poetry · ID: 396
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-22 20:32:15
The language of this short poem is very clear and stark, fitting for
the context. The descriptions are stripped to essentials. Nothing
fancy or elaborate, yet evocative and moving, quite appropriate for
the simple and relatively unsophisticated protagonists.

The beginning of each stanza shows the good times, the real friendship
between Sméagol and Déagol, which make the respective ends - showing
what Sméagol's nature as it is being exacerbated and twisted by the
Ring, made him do - even more horrifying in contrast. And not only his
deeds, also his apparent detachment in recounting them make for a
chilling impression.

Title: Safe In My Arms · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Drama · ID: 470
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:31:35
It is always nice to see Denethor get a little grace and forgiveness!

Title: Of Numenor That Was · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 424
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:37:24
Thank you, Marta, for my birthday present!

Rereading these, I'm still caught most by Gimilbeth and Nenheri -
Gimilbeth is so evidently confused, it's hard to tell what her state
of mind is. One cannot but feel for her, but one also wonders: did she
agree to this? If so, did she know what she was agreeing to? Or was
she an unwilling sacrifice? Who is this woman, about to give her all,
or have it taken from her, for the sake of the Dark Lord?

Nenheri's tale, water to fire, brings a necessary redemptive moment to
the story. It's not clear whether she considers Gimilbeth a child of
the One in the sense that *all* creatures are children of Iluvatar, or
whether she means that Gimilbeth in the end was faithful. In either
case, her compassion and determination to right what can be righted
have a cleansing effect and help round out the story in a way that is
satisfactorily cathartic, but doesn't cheapen the horror.

Title: Shadows of the Past · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 331
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:41:34
Marta's inner Gollum-fangirl gets a day and drabble out. I like the
understatedness of this piece - there's a lot of distance toward the
character, and yet that distance is written in such a way as to feel
like a disavowal. That brings us right back in close to
Smeagol/Gollum, to Gollum at war with Smeagol and the guilt that
cannot be purged, no matter how well-hidden it may be. It's an eerie
look into the sad and strife-ridden inner world of a character who is
being eaten alive by Ring-lust and self-loathing. Well done!

Title: Leaf Subsides to Leaf · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Drama:
Elves in Later Ages · ID: 105
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:49:03
Generally speaking, my interest in Legolas is... not exactly high. But
this was a lovely scene between Legolas and Thranduil - one gets the
sense of them both having endured beyond enduring, and yet finding it
in them to part without bitterness in the end. Legolas's patience is
very beautifully portrayed, and Thranduil's pain as well. But it is
the lightening of the story at the end, as they move through the anger
that comes with hurt and bewilderment to acceptance of loss that makes
the wounds shown here have meaning.

Well done, Ignoble Bard!

Title: Charms of Wisdom and Grace · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ithilien · ID: 460
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:52:45
An interesting domestic vignette - Faramir seems to acquire many an
unusual talent for a young nobleman, but all to the good for his peace
of mind, it seems. And although he weaves for the warriors in his
life, he stays true to his own sense of what is worthwhile in Gondor:
not the warfare itself, but wisdom, grace, peace.

Title: Following the King · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Drama:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 735
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:57:08
Sophinisba writes a wonderful Pippin, and does not need many words to
bring him to life. I like the way the drabble revolves around the
notion of all their struggle being "for Frodo": the thought initially
comforts, motivates, spurs Pippin onward until circumstances conspire
to turn that "for Frodo" around in its meaning, making it a mockery of
that same effort. But then there's the second reversal, as Pippin
moves through horrific disappointment to the grim determination to
face that last stand, once again for Frodo, in a tribute to him.

Very well done!

Title: Conversion · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama: With Aragorn ·
ID: 169
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:59:16
Pentangle gives us the story of the war from the perspective of the
peasants of Gondor, who inevitably would suffer, overlooked as all
attention goes to the warriors who man the walls.

Talion's bitterness and sense of powerlessness to prevent loss, to
prevent any of the misfortunes that have befallen his village and
family, are clearly portrayed and find a target in the person of
Aragorn. Aragorn fortunately recognizes the desperation behind the
rage and insults, and instead of lashing back, is able to give Talion
some of his dignity back. And also, some of the tools he will need in
order for the peasants to begin to recover.

Title: Fell Memories · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 191
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:59:28
Ah, I remember these! Thanks to Tolkien's incredibly overloaded
timeline for Aragorn in 2980, all sorts of questions arise as to where
exactly he was, what he was doing, how long he was about it, and what
effects they might have had on him.

Gwynnyd chooses to let him stumble into the hands of orcs and a nasty
situation that might fit with the notion that the enemy has laid traps
for Aragorn before. That he escapes at all is a miracle, and it lends
the irony of his self-description to the Elves ('weary') a very
painful edge. Weary in more than body, though he is certainly that,
but struggling with the psychic bruising that comes of having to
reevaluate precisely how he is supposed to handle his role as Heir of
Isildur, implacable opponent of Sauron.

Very dark, and the more so for the brevity of the individual
snapshots. Well done.

Title: Seven Deadly Sins - Theodred · Author: EdorasLass · Genres:
Drama: Vignette · ID: 754
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-23 00:59:40
EdorasLass gives us Theodred in several different moods, possibly
'sinful' as the challenge requires, but really! I doubt there's must
to apologize for in most of these, but that is a part of the charm of
the series.

I think my favorite was the envy one - world-weary warrior contrasted
with his beloved young, and extremely naive still, cousin is always an
interesting encounter. Poor Theodred! Nicely written, as always - it's
good to see Theodred get some time in the fanfictional limelight, and
EdorasLass never disappoints on that score.

Title: Wings · Author: ErinRua · Genres: Romance: With Rohirrim · ID: 9
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-23 01:28:43
This short story has such an uplifting feeling!

The portrayal of Éomer is marvellous - true and vivid and so very
*present* and tangible. Both the honesty of his feelings, his
directness, and his worth as captain and leader of men are apparent,
especially in my favourite passage: ["Pale eyes searched the prince's
closely, their intensity a reminder why Éomer of Rohan was reckoned a
captain among men. Yet at the same time, that look held something
astonishingly open, something that was being offered with the entirety
of a great and noble heart."]

Éomer's mood comes through so clear in this story, his elation is
truly contagious. At every re-read, I feel this giddy, burbling
feeling inside myself. And I love it that he can appreciate the beauty
of the seascape when it is such an alien environment for him. And that
he also can find similarities with his beloved grass plains.

Wonderful description of the setting, especially of the sea in all her
glory. And the characters' relation towards each other and towards
Lothíriel, love and respect and affection is depicted very real, clear
and believable in just a few well-chosen, succinct words and images.

Your Imrahil is also wonderful and just as I imagine him and his
relationship to his son-in-law. Amidst his understandable sorrow that
his daughter will leave him to live far away, he never begrudges it,
he knows Éomer will cherish and love her and both will be happy, and
he knows he really doesn't *lose* Lothíriel, but *gains* a new member
of the family.

Title: All in a Day's Work · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 421
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-23 01:33:55
This series is constructed marvellously well. Not only is each drabble
complete in itself, but each builds on the previous one, and so the
entirety of it paints a picture that is bigger than its individual
parts. Additionally, it portrays some of the many diverse professions
it takes to work together successfully in such a scheme.

The strategy for this battle is devised very well. I can clearly see
Imrahil being so inventive and sneaky!

I admire the amount of small details you managed to include in each of
the drabbles: the marines tossing the bales onto the dock, the ship
having to be handled ineptly to fool the corsairs - to the chagrin of
the rowers - the archer being asked to think of the chained oarsmen
(captured Gondorians) on the enemy ship etc.

And the last drabble, reserved for the Prince himself, was a worthy
climax. Of course he would make good use of the Corsair ship and all
it contained!

Each of the characters, from the farmer who is so quick to ride to
alert the soldiers, to the factor who is concerned about his wares,
from the clearly inexperienced marine to Imrahil himself, all are so
very real and three-dimensional. All have their defining character
traits, which sometimes (or even most of the time) don't even have to
be described, but are shown by a gesture, a way of speaking or
evaluating things.

Title: Between Friends · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Poetry · ID: 396
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-23 10:45:31
An interesting poetic expression of the betrayal and murder of Deagol
by Smeagol. Ah, what that small band of gold wrought! This poem
manages to capture the feeling of violence that appears to follow the
Ring wherever it goes.

Title: Jewel · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 325
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-23 10:50:44
I'd never thought to be enchanted by the courtship of Dwarves, but
this one of Gloin and his lady love is delightful. The image of Gloin
giving the object of his desire the reverence usually reserved for a
rich vein of ore is priceless!

Msg# 8229

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by KAT702H@aol.com October 10, 2007 - 12:41:32 Topic ID# 8229
I wanted to thank the reviewers who indicated which site the story is on.
It helps a lot. I can also see why the moderators requested longer reviews.
If the review is too short, I more than likely will not read the story.

Tari



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Msg# 8230

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Imhiriel October 10, 2007 - 16:39:49 Topic ID# 8229
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, KAT702H@... wrote:
>
> I wanted to thank the reviewers who indicated which site the story
is on.
> It helps a lot. I can also see why the moderators requested longer
reviews.
> If the review is too short, I more than likely will not read the story.

Tari, on the MEFA website you can easily see on which site the story
is located: the title of the story is a link, so when you just hover
over it with your cursor, you can see to which site it will lead.

I don't think the moderators have requested longer reviews, and I
don't think they should do so.

This is a competetion - each reviewer is completely free to choose the
score according to his/her opinion of where to place the story in the
range of 1 to 10 we have available as points. That means reviewers
should be judicious with how long a review they will write - perhaps
in comparison to other stories in that subcategory, perhaps according
to a personal system etc.

There are reviewers who operate on a narrower scale, or some who use
the full range available. So that a story a reviewer gave 5 points
might mean for this reviewer the highest point he is going to give,
whereas another reviewer who rates this story equally high might give
it 10 points.

Meaning you can't conclude from the length of the review/the number of
points given, how "recommendable" <g> a story is.

I hope I could clear this up, but if not, perhaps a moderator could
correct me or clarify.

Imhiriel

Msg# 8231

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Súlriel of Menegroth October 10, 2007 - 18:06:12 Topic ID# 8229
My available time has decreased dramatically over the last year or so and I
can tell you that if I leave even a one or two pointer it means it's
something that I really loved. Some are longer, but most of mine are 2 to 4
pointers this year. I know it's not much, but at this point I'm feeling
pretty good just to be still hanging in here.

In the past, I have used, or tried to use, longer reviews for those that
especially touched me in some way, but I can't do that now. I certainly
appreciate and admire people that can. And while the system is set up to
give more points to longer reviews, it still allows for those of us who
don't have as much time as we'd like to participate at a level we're
comfortable with.

Sulriel


On 10/10/07, Imhiriel <Larys.HMF@web.de> wrote:
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com <MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com>,
> KAT702H@... wrote:
> >
> > I wanted to thank the reviewers who indicated which site the story
> is on. > It helps a lot. I can also see why the moderators requested
> longer
> reviews. > If the review is too short, I more than likely will not read
> the story.
>
> //snipped//
> I don't think the moderators have requested longer reviews, and I
> don't think they should do so.
>
> This is a competetion - each reviewer is completely free to choose the
> score according to his/her opinion of where to place the story in the
> range of 1 to 10 we have available as points. That means reviewers
> should be judicious with how long a review they will write - perhaps
> in comparison to other stories in that subcategory, perhaps according
> to a personal system etc.
>
>
> .
>
>
>


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Msg# 8232

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Marta Layton October 10, 2007 - 22:01:07 Topic ID# 8229
Hey guys,

The question of how long to write reviews is a hotly debated one, to be
sure. Some people are naturally verbose; I know that when I am in a
certain mood I often find that I've written 1500 characters for a story
I really like without even really realizing it. They may not all be
perfectly-chosen or the epitome of literary criticism - but they're
written, they describe the story, the author will have my reaction and
the story has the points I wanted to give it.

Other people may not be quite as lucky, and so for whatever reason they
struggle to write a longer review. As an author I value EVERY review I
receive through these awards, whether it's one point or ten, and I
imagine other authors feel similarly. While I love the long ones, I
certainly wouldn't want people to feel bad about their reviews being short.

Let me repeat that, because it's really very important. PLEASE do NOT
feel bad if you never break 100 characters on your reviews. Or if you
only review five stories. This is a fanfic competition, and that means
it should be fun. Yes, we work hard to run it professionally and make
sure everything is as fair and user-friendly as it could be, but at its
most basic, the MEFAs is about fandom. It's about grad students and
accountants and doctors and stay-at-home moms and janitors and retired
men in goofy hats, all sitting at their computers and reading stories -
and then leaving the authors some feedback. And yes, by doing that we
identify the pieces that the most people enjoyed the most. But mostly,
these awards are about the sheer joy of fandom, letting the authors know
how much we loved their stuff and helping future readings find the
stories that the most people enjoyed. So however many stories you
review, and however many points it is, that's better than saying nothing.

Btw, Imhiriel, I'm not saying that you disagree with the above
statement. Rather this discussion reminded me of some things I've been
rolling around the back of my head, and it seemed a good time to talk
about it all.

Back to the question at hand: reviewing should be fun, and you shouldn't
feel bad for not being able to write enough or as long of ones as you'd
like. Now, the fact remains that we are a competition, and we want the
best stories to get the most points. But this doesn't mean everyone
needs to write ten-point reviews. Rather, figure out what point range
makes you feel comfortable. Some people can hit seven without breaking a
sweat, other people have to really work to reach three points. WHichever
group you find yourself in, gauge your reviews so that you give the
longer ones to the stories you like most and the shorter ones to the
stories you still like, just not quite as much as the ones you're crazy
about. Obviously the longer the review that comes naturally the bigger a
range you have to work with. But really, don't stress yourself to reach
ten points if it's too much of a stress.

So yeah. Long reviews are good for the stories you like, but long for
you - not necessarily long according to the ten point scale, if you find
that too much stress.

Marta
Súlriel of Menegroth wrote:
>
>
> My available time has decreased dramatically over the last year or so and I
> can tell you that if I leave even a one or two pointer it means it's
> something that I really loved. Some are longer, but most of mine are 2 to 4
> pointers this year. I know it's not much, but at this point I'm feeling
> pretty good just to be still hanging in here.
>
> In the past, I have used, or tried to use, longer reviews for those that
> especially touched me in some way, but I can't do that now. I certainly
> appreciate and admire people that can. And while the system is set up to
> give more points to longer reviews, it still allows for those of us who
> don't have as much time as we'd like to participate at a level we're
> comfortable with.
>
> Sulriel
>
> On 10/10/07, Imhiriel <Larys.HMF@web.de <mailto:Larys.HMF%40web.de>> wrote:
> >
> > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com>
> <MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com>,
> > KAT702H@... wrote:
> > >
> > > I wanted to thank the reviewers who indicated which site the story
> > is on. > It helps a lot. I can also see why the moderators requested
> > longer
> > reviews. > If the review is too short, I more than likely will not read
> > the story.
> >
> > //snipped//
> > I don't think the moderators have requested longer reviews, and I
> > don't think they should do so.
> >
> > This is a competetion - each reviewer is completely free to choose the
> > score according to his/her opinion of where to place the story in the
> > range of 1 to 10 we have available as points. That means reviewers
> > should be judicious with how long a review they will write - perhaps
> > in comparison to other stories in that subcategory, perhaps according
> > to a personal system etc.
> >

Msg# 8233

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Agape October 10, 2007 - 22:43:17 Topic ID# 8229
Gonna try to make this quick.

Last year, I won one of the awards for MEFA, yet had never heard of
it. Someone nominated my story. I didn't know that there were reviews
to read or anything. I just received a congratultory email.

This year, I was nominated again and decided to 'look into' the
MEFA's...

What I found was a TREASURE TROVE - the best thing, for me, about the
MEFA's is getting to read stories from websites I'd never even heard
of. I would never have read these stories, if not for MEFA.

So - I'm able to review... but also able to really, really enjoy some
incredible stories written by some incredible authors. For this, I
cannot thank the organizers and volunteers enough.

For those who nominate - bless you! For those who agree to share
their stories - bless you! It has been, and will continue to be, a
truly wonderful experience for an avaricious Tolkien fan and reader!

Agape

Msg# 8234

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Bonnie L. Sherrell October 10, 2007 - 23:31:03 Topic ID# 8229
A lot of the reviews I'm doing are also only two and three pointers
this year--sorry, but that's the way they seem to go. And a number of
drabbles and other ficlets I'm not giving a good deal of review to,
even when I love them dearly, as it's very hard for me to feel
comfortable writing reviews that are notably longer than the stories
that generate them. A psychological thing, I suppose.
Bonnie L. Sherrell
Teacher at Large

"Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR

"Don't go where I can't follow."

I mourn for this nation.

Msg# 8235

Announcement: Negative Reviews Posted by aure\_enteluva October 10, 2007 - 23:33:34 Topic ID# 8235
Hey guys,

Earlier this week the other admins and I had to remove a negative
review. It's something that happens every so often, and so I want to
talk a little bit about negative reviews.

The MEFAs *do* allow you to offer constructive criticism in your
reviews. It's often a fine line to tread between offering thoughtful,
helpful criticism, and being too negative. And the vast majority of
MEFA reviews are FINE in this regard. But occasionally a review will
come through that is so negative it's hard to see how it could be
taken positively.

If you haven't heard from me about a review, you're fine. When a
review you write is taken down, I'll email you to let you know what's
going on. So please don't start second-guessing yourself. Like I said,
the majority of reviews - the vast majority, actually - have been
fine. But there are always a few that are too negative, and it only
takes one review to leave a nasty taste in an author's mouth. The
MEFA's are about fannish good times and identifying high-quality
stories, and I work too hard to want to have people not enjoy them. :-)

That's why we have a procedure in place to handle these reviews. If
you see a review that is entirely or wholly negative, email
mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com. A group of long-term volunteers (myself
included) will check it out, and if we agree that it's negative enough
we'll take it down. (If you're reporting a review of someone else's
story, we'll check with the author before we do this.) When we take a
review down the story loses the points it would have gotten from that
review, and so we want to ask the author what they want us to do.)

Now, don't start reading reviews suspiciously looking for ones that
are too negative! The inappropriate ones will jump out at you. But if
you see a review that's a little too harsh, please do email
mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com. It may be nothing - but if it *is* a too
negative, we want to handle it.

Some good FAQs on this subject:

Can I be critical in my reviews?
www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=FAQvoting#vot_4

Can an offensive review be removed?
www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=FAQvoting#vot_8

PS - I'll probably be making an announcement like these once a week
for the next few weeks, to help explain some aspects of the awards
people might find confusing.

Marta
(MEFA Admin)

Msg# 8236

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Marta Layton October 11, 2007 - 0:05:51 Topic ID# 8229
Hi Agape,

I'm glad you enjoy the awards! They really are a lot of fun. My biggest
regret is that this year I haven't had the time I wanted to spend on
actually READING all the stories. RL is just too busy. But what I have
read, I have really enjoyed. So many new gems, and authors I hadn't
found before!

So yeah, I second everything you say. Thanks. :-)

Marta

Agape wrote:
>
>
> Gonna try to make this quick.
>
> Last year, I won one of the awards for MEFA, yet had never heard of
> it. Someone nominated my story. I didn't know that there were reviews
> to read or anything. I just received a congratultory email.
>
> This year, I was nominated again and decided to 'look into' the
> MEFA's...
>
> What I found was a TREASURE TROVE - the best thing, for me, about the
> MEFA's is getting to read stories from websites I'd never even heard
> of. I would never have read these stories, if not for MEFA.
>
> So - I'm able to review... but also able to really, really enjoy some
> incredible stories written by some incredible authors. For this, I
> cannot thank the organizers and volunteers enough.
>
> For those who nominate - bless you! For those who agree to share
> their stories - bless you! It has been, and will continue to be, a
> truly wonderful experience for an avaricious Tolkien fan and reader!
>
> Agape
>

Msg# 8237

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Marta Layton October 11, 2007 - 0:14:03 Topic ID# 8229
Bonnie L. Sherrell wrote:
>
>
> A lot of the reviews I'm doing are also only two and three pointers
> this year--sorry, but that's the way they seem to go. And a number of
> drabbles and other ficlets I'm not giving a good deal of review to,
> even when I love them dearly, as it's very hard for me to feel
> comfortable writing reviews that are notably longer than the stories
> that generate them. A psychological thing, I suppose.
> Bonnie L. Sherrell
> Teacher at Large
>

Hi Bonnie,

Speaking as an author I've been glad to have your reviews. I think the
important thing is that you praise the stories you like and don't get
stressed by the awards, and (so far as is possible within the 1-3 point
range) you give the longest reviews to those stories you like most.
Honestly, I have seen so many subcategories that were decided by just a
point or two. Every vote really does matter - and to the authors, even a
short review can make our day.

Marta

Msg# 8238

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Kathy October 11, 2007 - 3:49:40 Topic ID# 8229
A lovely tribute to the spirit of the MEFAs, Marta! And thank you for
that indelible image of "retired men in goofy hats" reading and
writing LOTR fanfic...I'll be grinning about that for a while! :)

Kathy

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Marta Layton <melayton@...> wrote:
>
> Hey guys,
>
> The question of how long to write reviews is a hotly debated one,
to be
> sure. Some people are naturally verbose; I know that when I am in a
> certain mood I often find that I've written 1500 characters for a
story
> I really like without even really realizing it. They may not all be
> perfectly-chosen or the epitome of literary criticism - but they're
> written, they describe the story, the author will have my reaction
and
> the story has the points I wanted to give it.
>
> Other people may not be quite as lucky, and so for whatever reason
they
> struggle to write a longer review. As an author I value EVERY
review I
> receive through these awards, whether it's one point or ten, and I
> imagine other authors feel similarly. While I love the long ones, I
> certainly wouldn't want people to feel bad about their reviews
being short.
>
> Let me repeat that, because it's really very important. PLEASE do
NOT
> feel bad if you never break 100 characters on your reviews. Or if
you
> only review five stories. This is a fanfic competition, and that
means
> it should be fun. Yes, we work hard to run it professionally and
make
> sure everything is as fair and user-friendly as it could be, but at
its
> most basic, the MEFAs is about fandom. It's about grad students and
> accountants and doctors and stay-at-home moms and janitors and
retired
> men in goofy hats, all sitting at their computers and reading
stories -
> and then leaving the authors some feedback. And yes, by doing that
we
> identify the pieces that the most people enjoyed the most. But
mostly,
> these awards are about the sheer joy of fandom, letting the authors
know
> how much we loved their stuff and helping future readings find the
> stories that the most people enjoyed. So however many stories you
> review, and however many points it is, that's better than saying
nothing.
>
> Btw, Imhiriel, I'm not saying that you disagree with the above
> statement. Rather this discussion reminded me of some things I've
been
> rolling around the back of my head, and it seemed a good time to
talk
> about it all.
>
> Back to the question at hand: reviewing should be fun, and you
shouldn't
> feel bad for not being able to write enough or as long of ones as
you'd
> like. Now, the fact remains that we are a competition, and we want
the
> best stories to get the most points. But this doesn't mean everyone
> needs to write ten-point reviews. Rather, figure out what point
range
> makes you feel comfortable. Some people can hit seven without
breaking a
> sweat, other people have to really work to reach three points.
WHichever
> group you find yourself in, gauge your reviews so that you give the
> longer ones to the stories you like most and the shorter ones to
the
> stories you still like, just not quite as much as the ones you're
crazy
> about. Obviously the longer the review that comes naturally the
bigger a
> range you have to work with. But really, don't stress yourself to
reach
> ten points if it's too much of a stress.
>
> So yeah. Long reviews are good for the stories you like, but long
for
> you - not necessarily long according to the ten point scale, if you
find
> that too much stress.
>
> Marta
> Súlriel of Menegroth wrote:
> >
> >
> > My available time has decreased dramatically over the last year
or so and I
> > can tell you that if I leave even a one or two pointer it means
it's
> > something that I really loved. Some are longer, but most of mine
are 2 to 4
> > pointers this year. I know it's not much, but at this point I'm
feeling
> > pretty good just to be still hanging in here.
> >
> > In the past, I have used, or tried to use, longer reviews for
those that
> > especially touched me in some way, but I can't do that now. I
certainly
> > appreciate and admire people that can. And while the system is
set up to
> > give more points to longer reviews, it still allows for those of
us who
> > don't have as much time as we'd like to participate at a level
we're
> > comfortable with.
> >
> > Sulriel
> >
> > On 10/10/07, Imhiriel <Larys.HMF@... <mailto:Larys.HMF%40web.de>>
wrote:
> > >
> > > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com <mailto:MEFAwards%
40yahoogroups.com>
> > <MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com>,
> > > KAT702H@ wrote:
> > > >
> > > > I wanted to thank the reviewers who indicated which site the
story
> > > is on. > It helps a lot. I can also see why the moderators
requested
> > > longer
> > > reviews. > If the review is too short, I more than likely will
not read
> > > the story.
> > >
> > > //snipped//
> > > I don't think the moderators have requested longer reviews,
and I
> > > don't think they should do so.
> > >
> > > This is a competetion - each reviewer is completely free to
choose the
> > > score according to his/her opinion of where to place the story
in the
> > > range of 1 to 10 we have available as points. That means
reviewers
> > > should be judicious with how long a review they will write -
perhaps
> > > in comparison to other stories in that subcategory, perhaps
according
> > > to a personal system etc.
> > >
>

Msg# 8239

MEFA Reviews for October 11, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 11, 2007 - 5:24:53 Topic ID# 8239
Title: By Sorrow Unawares · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits:
Gapfiller · ID: 254
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-23 11:02:37
They are on their journey, and Pippin finds himself startling awake
while on guard in Hollin to find a badger within the camp. Only all is
not as it seems, and Pippin startles awake to find the badger and the
rising well that had stolen Gandalf away are themselves a bad dream,
as was the previous wakening; but Gandalf is still gone. And once
again the Ring has succeeded in convincing a member of the Fellowship
of guilt. Wonderfully eerie and well written.

Title: A Ranger's Love (Song to Arda) · Author: Michelle · Races: Men:
Eriador or Rivendell · ID: 112
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-23 11:09:23
A lyrical look at the world inhabited by the Rangers of Eriador, seen
in each of the seasons with a final look at Arda as a woman, harsh and
embracing by turns. A most interesting characterization of the
Ranger's habitat.

Title: It's No Mystery, Really · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits: Merry and Pippin · ID: 36
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-23 11:17:09
Is it a mystery if one has followed the story a time or three before?
Merry and Pippin debate this question as Merry steers a cold-laden and
grouchy Pippin to bed.

The love is there, and the illness-borne grouchiness, well presented
and described.

Title: A Wish for Yestare · Author: rhyselle · Races: Men: Gondor ·
ID: 178
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-23 11:33:50
Not all Denethor-Faramir stories are filled with rancor between father
and younger son. In this when Faramir's fingers fashion a parchment
boat proper to the Yestare tradition of sending candles down the
Anduin to bear wishes for the coming year Denethor takes it, not in
criticism for his younger son's inattention, but to share with his
son, both wishing for the safe return for Boromir's return from the
trackless north.

A very well done piece, and a foreshadowing of Boromir's own eventual
commitment to the River.

Title: The Treasure Hunt · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves ·
ID: 320
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-23 11:45:04
Young Elladan and Elrohir have been demanding to know when their
parents will return--perhaps a bit too often; so Glorfindel sets a
treasure hunt in which the twins seek to find further clues by solving
the riddles he presents them with.

A charming tale of keeping children of any sort busy when they can't
wait for mom and dad to return home.

Title: With No Pity · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Villains:
Drabble · ID: 391
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-23 11:49:55
Although the thoughts of the defenders would be applicable to either
heroes or villains, this time it is the Enemy's forces that find their
camp attacked by Elves. Unfortunately, in this war it is kill or be
killed.

Very well constructed drabble.

Title: Tales of Thanksgiving · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First
Age and Prior · ID: 184
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-08-23 17:02:11
Where do I even start with this one? Dawn Felagund has created a whole
new canon of the Fëanorians, the entire the House of Finwë, for that
matter, beginning with her wonderful novel Another's Man Cage. Every
single character has a rich and fully-developed backstory that is
consistent throughout this story cycle and reflected in these ficlets
and drabbles. The stories are filled with tragedy and comedy, warmth
and humanity, and completely internally consistent with one another.
Even character lives and breathes. The book canon is seriously
considered and reflected. The psychological insights and her ability
to engage and emotionally involved the reader, utterly without
manipulation or any easy shortcuts or cheap tricks, are outstanding in
a writer who is so young. Every story stands on its own and yet all
enrich the others and make me so look forward to their development as
she continues with this saga. Please do not stop writing these, Dawn!
Waiting for the prequel and sequel to Another Man's Cage, these short
stories and ficlets provide a much desired temporary satisfaction for me.

Favorites for me include ["Hatred"] a dark, edgy Fingon/Maedhros slash
ficlet (actually a departure from Dawn's personal canon for the two
protagonists). Another one that really moved me was the near-endgame
story of interactions between Maedhros and Maglor, ["Evidence Of"]
which made this reader question which one was truly the crazier of the
two at this point. I cannot count the number times I have read
["Hatred"]. Oops! Now the reader of this review is wondering if I am
crazy. I don't think so--just really taken in by Dawn's ability to
paint a vivid picture. This atmospheric piece takes off and tries to
explain, leaving much to the imagination, how Fingon and Maedhros
might have found themselves estranged before the flight of the Noldor.

Title: Some Dark Place · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 226
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-23 19:47:25
The descriptions of the Nuzgûl sound truly horrifying, and Aragorn's
difficulties at regaining his composure are very understandable.

That he was so affected that he lost all dignity and still shivers
even long after he was rescued really explains his strong reaction
even years afterwards when he alludes to his encounter with the
Ring-wraiths in FotR. His fear at the certainty that he would have to
confront them again in his future is an additional layer.

I very much like the idea that it was Halbarad who came to the rescue
of his chieftain; and you manage to depict a strong bond between them
without being so overt it would distract from the focus of the story.

The story is well-structured, shifting between the reassurance of his
rescue and the comfort of Rivendell to look forward to, and the
flashes of memories of his terrifying encounter; ending with the
ominous thoughts about the future.

Title: Sarn Gebir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 398
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-23 19:48:30
Gives a strong sense of urgency, of the tension of the moment.
Boromir's alertness, his stress, his concern for the others' welfare,
his ability as a leader who looks after those who are in his care, are
very clear. A nice gap-filler for this moment in their journey,
especially as the undercurrent of tension between him and Aragorn at
this moment in time is also subtly evident.

Title: First Among Equals · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 564
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-23 19:49:27
Faramir's excitement before the battle actually starts communicates
itself to the readers. The small details of the reality of the battle
- sweating hands, the grazes, the hunger afterwards - ground the
narration and flesh it out.

It seems to me that after the first arrow until the end of the story,
Faramir blends out his emotions (not only his fear), but this, too, is
realistic, and the best way to deal with it.

Title: Letter to Frodo · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 540
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-23 20:59:10
Intriguing premise. I wish we could know if Frodo "received" the
letter, but the actual ending leaves me with the same uncertainty as
Boromir himself, which is an equally good choice.

Title: Kindred Spirits · Author: Cathleen · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 377
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-23 23:45:27
This touching story nicely shows the growing bond between Pippin and
Boromir. Both love their families and miss them, but Pippin can barely
comprehend Boromir's harsh background. Boromir's love for his brother
is very apparent here,even being willing to draw Denethor's wrath away
from him.

Title: "A Cat Of A Different Color" · Author: Cathleen · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 385
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-23 23:50:07
As the owner,or more accurately slave, of two tortoiseshell cats, i
found this story a sheer delight. Boromir entertains the company with
a tale of a cat from days gone by, which has a clever twist in the
tale,or should I say tail? it is nice to imagine that the Fellowship
may have shared stories to entertain each other on their travels

Title: The Eagle's Gift · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
Minas Tirith · ID: 591
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-24 00:05:32
It is Denethor's wedding night and the proud heir to the Stewardship
is surprisingly nervous as he waits to bed his bride. To his dismay,
his thoughts are interrupted by Thorongil, his father's favourite
Captain who comes with a gift from Ecthelion, a fertility charm, a
small horn to be worn around the bridegroom's neck.

How very ironic, in light of future events that it will be Aragorn who
ensures the survival of Denethor's line, by reviving the son whom
Denethor tried to burn! It seems apt, then, then Aragorn bears the
charm, which is supposed to ensure that the House of Hurin continues.

The tension between the two men and their discomfort, is brilliantly
written and you can feel the air crackling between them. Denethor
softens somewhat at the realisation that he has a lovely bride
awaiting him, while the rumours of Thorongil's virility, are just idle
talk.

It is so tragic that Denethor's jealousy of the man he felt had
usurped his father's affection, should so poison his feelings towards
Thorongil. These two scions of Númenor could have been friends as
close as brothers.

I think this is the best Thorongil and Aragorn story I have ever read
for the writer truly understands what motivates these characters.


Title: Requesting Mercy · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 681
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-24 00:12:33
This story is all too chillingly plausible and addresses a question I
have often considered.What if Frodo had not been rescued in time,or
what if Elrond had been unable to remove the shard of the Morgul
blade? It is very likely that Frodo would have vastly prefered death
to life as wraith, something Sauron cannot understand, that it is
better to trust the One than linger in a life that is no life.
This story explores the question of who Frodo would have asked to kill
him him and the choice falls on Sam.
This story beautifully portrays the feelings of Sam, Frodo and Aragorn
and the bond of love between them.

Title: For all the Gold in Harad · Author: Elendiari22 · Genres:
Drama: Incomplete · ID: 584
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-24 00:20:53
This delightful and heartwarming story concerns the adventures of
young Eldarion and a Princess from Harad who becomes his teacher.

Eldarion proves every inch his parent's child in his compassion,warmth
and resourcefulness.

The lovable Princess is soon taken under Aragorn and arwen's wing and
taken on a holiday with them, where young Eldarion unexpectedly helps
to bring the lonely Princess well deserved happiness.

I love the way the writer shows how these characters enrich one
another's lives and goodness and compassion triumphs.

Title: Despair · Author: Silivren Tinu · Genres: Drama: The Fellowship
· ID: 171
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-24 01:22:24
After Lothlorien, as we all know, tension rises within the Fellowship
as, in the wake of grief, the Ring feeds, perhaps, on the fear and
anticipation that everyone feels. Silivren Tinu highlights the
mounting antagonism between Boromir and Aragorn, giving substance to
the possibility that ultimately, their relationship will be one of
bitter rivalry. But she turns then to Legolas, who shows himself to
have more in common with Boromir than Boromir himself recognizes.

Legolas breaks the rule of elvish thumb against the giving of advice -
in this situation, though the stakes are high and he may be wrong, he
cannot do otherwise than to risk showing his hand, as it were, and in
no uncertain terms. Not that that hand could be said to be totally
unheralded, but for Legolas to actively warn and beg a hearing goes
against the usual elvish tendency to reticence.

We know how Boromir's story ultimately ends, so we know in advance
that Legolas's advice will, in the end, fail to take root. But I liked
very much the way Silivren Tinu handled this - she didn't end it on a
definite note, with Boromir's mind made up. She leaves us with a
foreboding but ambivalent image of him, which heightens the tension
for the reader as he or she compares this ending with what we know
lies ahead. Well done!

Title: Dear · Author: Febobe (Frodo Baggins of Bag End) · Genres:
Drama: The Fellowship · ID: 811
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-24 01:30:41
Febobe does an excellent job getting Sam's voice in this story - I can
very easily slip into his perspective and the world looks about as I
would imagine it for a hobbit of his interests and age and class.

Sam's worries for Frodo, his sense of being still far from home, are
spot on. His way of handling that distance, and of handling the
spiritual ache that comes of it, is the kitchen and his master. Of
course, everyone is worried about Frodo, but I get the sense that for
Sam, there's a way in which worrying about Frodo's appetite also helps
bring a sense of normalcy to life, and certainly it gives him an
excuse to bring a bit of the Shire home by way of his frying pan and
the dishes that come out of it.

Very enjoyable! Sam fans will most certainly like this one.

Title: In Silence Remembered · Author: fantasyfan · Genres: Drama: The
Shire · ID: 598
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-24 01:41:08
Fantasyfan draws us into an account of the Battle of Bywater through
the eyes and thoughts of her anonymous OC. Sometimes, it is hard to
get the tone of a character to work with a story - some characters
don't seem able to narrate certain stories very well. With OCs, there
is no text to fall back on to gauge one's efforts, unless one looks
very generally at similar characters and settings. Fantasyfan
successfully gives a sort of Everyman perspective, one that sounds
convincingly like a hobbit who'd gone through the Troubles, but who
is, at the end of the day, an ordinary denizen of the Shire who needed
someone else to help him to the point of acting on his frustrations
and fears and sense of injustice.

She also captures the confusion of battle, and its ugliness, in a way
that is not over-the-top, but which feels appropriate to the
character. The death of his best friend, Matty, is well-portrayed, and
his reaction to that loss seems very credible, psychologically. I
loved that it was Sam who helped lift him briefly out of his shock and
despair, and that it was more a certain look or shine to Sam than
anything Sam actually said.

Haunting, but hopeful! Good job!

Title: The Last Temptation · Author: Maeve Riannon · Genres: Drama:
Second Age or Earlier · ID: 264
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-24 01:47:40
["The last temptation is the greatest treason, to do the right thing
for the wrong reason."]

I ended up reading ["Murder in the Cathedral"] solely for that one
line. I can certainly appreciate the translation, here: Melian, who
might have taken form and fought back as only an outraged Maia could,
to protect failing Elured and his brother from a cruel death in the
snow or at the hands of invading Feanorians, is tempted for a moment
to do just that.

But we see very quickly, as the vision of her vengeance unfolds, that
something else is at work - something far more frightening. There is a
smothering quality to her 'justice', and an insularity to it as well,
that lead straight to a disfiguring of the beauty that belongs to a
Maia who serves. Her actions might well have been 'the right thing',
but they would be poisoned at the root.

Title: Father and Son · Author: Istarnie · Genres: Drama: Second Age
or Earlier · ID: 718
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-24 01:54:28
Go not to the elves... not even with a direct question about the state
of one's knowledge, it seems!

Feanor can tell himself that he did not know that one of his sons was
still aboard the ships, but even if that is objectively true, that
slip - ["Yes and no"] - that is not really a slip, is all too
revealing. If he truly had thought Amras would betray him, one gets
the feeling that he would have acted no differently, that he did, in
some way, wish him dead.

Maedhros may or may not see it that way, but Feanor's anguished wish
for Nerdanel's understanding (or rather, her forgiveness underneath it
all) seems quite telling. Well done.

Title: Through the Eyes of Another · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits: Merry and Pippin · ID: 136
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-24 02:50:41
The feelings of Pippin's discomfort on the journey is evoked very
well. The slow, gradual revelation of just *when* this journey is
taking place and what Pippin's *real* problems are was a neat trick,
and had me fooled for quite a while, until I stumbled over Merry's
revelation of his old age and it became clear they were camping near
Dol Baran on their final journey from the Shire to Rohan and then Gondor.

I like it that the limitations age has set them are acknowledged, but
they are in no way a hindrance to what they want to achieve - Pippin's
discomfort is as much because of rough outdoor living as about his
memories of the palantír.
Wonderfully vivid and in-character dialogue between the two close
friends and cousins.

Title: Bilbo's Gifts · Author: Llinos/Marigold CoAuthors · Races:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 207
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-24 02:51:09
Long in places, but lovely character interaction. The way the children
spoke was especially sweet, as were small details like Frodo's toys &
Merry's assorted "gifts".

Title: The Company of Heroes · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 393
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-24 02:53:44
A wonderful family portrait. All characters are distinct, each with
their own personality, and the mannerisms of little children are very
spot-on.

Sam's ambiguousness towards Boromir even after all these years, his
reluctance to even think about him or re-evaluate his opinion strikes
me as very in character for Sam, as does the fact that he would
seriously think about it when the question is directly put to him by
one he cherishes. His final assessment may still be a little
luke-warm, but it is honest, and understandable considering his fierce
loyalty towards Frodo.

Title: Spring after Winter · Author: annmarwalk · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 462
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-24 05:17:06
Ann has always been able to say so much with such an economy of words!

Sam awakens reluctantly to find Gandalf, a laughing, joyous guardian
angel, beside him, there where he and Frodo sleep within Ithilien.
This is such a bright, shining moment, and so very well caught.
Descriptions of Sam's reluctance to wake and the delight of finding
Gandalf by him and that he lies in such a pleasant place--how truly
wonderful!

As always, Ann, hooray!

Msg# 8240

MEFA Reviews for October 11, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 11, 2007 - 5:26:44 Topic ID# 8240
Title: Faint Heart Never Won Fair Lady · Author: Marta · Genres:
Romance: Gondor · ID: 604
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-24 05:29:58
What a wonderful look at Faramir's wooing of Eowyn with the advice of
Hurin. It is very nice to see the character of Hurin fleshed out here,
and to see how the gift of the starry mantle might have served a
practical use for Eowyn.

Excellent writing and fine crafting of this delightful tale. Thank you
for it.

Title: Firelight · Author: Songspinner · Genres: Drama: Ithilien · ID: 817
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-24 06:37:57
Three tales of what is seen in the light of fires within the camp at
Cormallen: Gimli works to renew the blade of Pippin's sword; an
exhausted Aragorn falls asleep as Legolas lights a brazier to keep the
sleeping Hobbits warm; Pippin recalls the climbe up to the beacon
tower and the fear of other fires that appeared to take away those
he'd come to love and honor. A series of tales of healing and renewal.

Excellent imagery and characterization, particularly of Pippin and
Legolas.

Title: Oliphaunts and String · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 658
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-24 09:22:17
Poor Deagol is missing, and sweet Smeagol has changed, what with
insisting the little frog he's tied up with string is an Oliphaunt
he's going to train. But his grandmother suspects the situation is
much worse; and when Deagol's body is found at last she realizes whose
hands left those bruises on the poor lad's throat. But turning Smeagol
out in painful in the end....

To think of Smeagol starting as a sweet lad, the apple of Gran's eye,
with so much promise that went to naught once he saw the Ring in his
cousin's hand...well! A sad tale of descent.

Title: The making of a Ringbearer II "Anchored" · Author: obelia
medusa · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 533
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-24 09:28:24
The youth of Frodo is a common enough theme, and is explored in this
one. I find the slowness of maturation of young Hobbits (Frodo, in his
tweens, is still in actions a child with a child's interests) in this
story to be rather exaggerated, but the descriptions of the intrigue
and machinations of the S-Bs is fascinating to watch.

Title: Matchmakers · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Drama: With Merry ·
ID: 587
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-24 09:59:52
When orphaned boys are too old for games and naps but not old enough
yet to take a Man's role, what's to be done for them? Pippin seeks to
find out why certain boys he's been seeing are stealing from the
grocers shops and so on in the lower city, and Merry is learning that
many widows and widowers are in need of companionship and aid. Now--to
match them up.

Quite a different premis than I'd seen before, and quite an original
means of learning what's going on her.

Well worth the reading.

Title: In the Bloody Cottage · Author: Soubrettina · Races: Men:
Eriador or Rivendell · ID: 581
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-08-24 20:06:40
Oh, Soubie, Soubie, I'd forgotten how gloriously quicksilver your
writing is, how your characters' thoughts dart and wheel about like
the hummingbirds and swallows outside my window. What is ostensibly a
glimpse of the moment of fruition of Arathorn and Gilraen's
relationship is a lovely and painful stream-of-consciousness ramble
involving goats living and dead, visiting Elves, the simultaneous
necessity and expendability of Dúnedain women, and the joy and anguish
of childbirth.

Your descriptive skills are extraordinary, but they, too, are
shimmery, dreamlike: [Gilraen's clever little feet began to falter of
a time; that she began to ache and to vomit, and fall asleep on the
ground while her goats wandered away; she waned in the cheek, and
waxed in the flank, and when winter came the laces in the shift that
Isilní had woven her barely let out far enough.] What a unique, yet
perfect, description of pregnancy! And the line [Gilraen watched the
little bulge of a foot appear, close to her ribs. She tried to tap it,
but it vanished again] made me whoop with glee, for I had that
experience myself, tickling my unborn daughter's foot. What a joy to
find it here! I don't suppose pregnancy has changed all that much,
really, from the mid-Third Age to the Late Fourth.

[In The Bloody Cottage] is not an easy read for fans of linear
narrative and clearly defined (and rigorously followed) rules of
punctuation, but for those whose imagination and sense of adventure
are energetic and unrestrained, soaring like the sparks of a bonfire
or the shooting stars of a Northern summer, Gilraen's story is
transformed from that of desperate duty and pain into a triumph of joy
and hope. Brava!


Title: Renascence · Author: Kenaz · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 577
Reviewer: Ignoble Bard · 2007-08-25 02:23:11
If there is such a thing as a perfect Elf story, I believe this one
would top the list. It opens with Legolas, plagued by sea longing,
making a visit to Minas Tirith to see Aragorn. While there he runs
into Elrohir and they renew their acquaintance. As it happens, they
have more in common than Legolas realized: ["Princes at liberty and
roving souls"] as Elrohir puts it, and they decide to travel together
to Legolas' forest home. While on the road they discover an affection
for each other that both had always harbored but fate had not allowed
them to explore. Their journey takes them to Lothlorien, where they
meet a much different and merrier Haldir than Legolas remembers from
the quest. Then it's on to the Greenwood where dangers of the past
still lurk and Legolas and Elrohir meet an unexpected, frightening
challenge.

In the course of his final errantry, Legolas discovers a new love,
reaffirms old bonds, and learns that his restlessness is not only a
result of sea longing but of something deeper. The story is full of
great conversations and descriptions, well paced with fully realized
characterizations and packed with action and suspense. There is not a
single element of this story that seems contrived or forced. It is as
flawless and beautifully crafted as an elven jewel. It is a rare story
that delivers on all counts, including a steamy side of slash, with
such style and finesse that the reader, upon coming to the end,
scrolls up and begins to read all over again. I would recommend this
story to anyone who enjoys curling up with their laptop and spending
some quality time with two utterly beguiling and noble Elves.

Title: Death of Hope · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 618
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-25 03:59:31
How does a woman who has lived for over 3000 years deal with death?
Here, Linda tackles the sorrow of those who are left behind by dead
loved ones; via this drabble from the point of view of the newly
widowed Arwen.

I quite like the way Arwen's thoughts wander, looking both into the
past and the future; this strikes me as very real, as does her
preoccupation with her beloved and recently departed husband. Her
uncertainty is conveyed well in the drabble. And Arwen's apparent
calm, culminating in an extremely powerful last line, is quite effective.



Title: Getting Away from it All · Author: Bodkin · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 63
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-25 04:51:07
This is a truly delightful story which sees Aragorn and Faramir and
their wives enjoying a rare day of relaxation at Faramir's home in
Ithilien.

I especially enjoyed the two former Rangers futile attempts at fishing
and the way the writer depicts what is obviously a warm and close bond
between the four characters.

The story also has darker undertones as King and Steward desire time
away from the court to discuss difficulties with the Council.

I also feel sorry for the trapped life these former free spirits are
forced to live. Their freedom is but an illusion with ever present
Guards in the background.

I would love to read a sequel and learn what happens next !

Title: Under the Eyes of the Evenstar · Author: Raksha the Demon ·
Genres: Drama: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 680
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-08-25 05:11:34
This is an interesting premise for a story about what might transpire
when Boromir and Arwen met. Although Tolkien never mentions such a
meeting, it is reasonable to assume it must have taken place during
the Fellowship's long stay at Rivendell.

What must Aragorn's wife to be have thought of the man who stood in
the way of her intended's path to the throne and with it her hand in
marriage?

This story makes the meeting both poignant and amusing.

I admit to some reservations about whether it would really be
permissible for a group of Elf maidens to be ogling Boromir or any
other male in the bathing chamber, or even for Arwen herself to be
allowed to see a man bathing, but it makes a delightful image and when
Tolkien didn't tell us, we are at liberty to imagine Middle-earth
customs as we please. As Elves live so long, they might well be
broader minded than humans despite their strict morals. One thing is
certain, after weeks of wandering in the wild, Boromir would certainly
need a bath!

Arwen is initially the perfect hostess, overcoming her natural
hostility to Boromir by making a supreme effort, but when she sees his
weariness she pities him.

This well written and perceptive story ends on a poignant and chilling
note .Arwen shares her father's gifts of foresight and realises that
Boromir will never again see his homeland.


Title: The Dwarf Dagger · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: The
Shire · ID: 85
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-25 06:30:52
A fine short story, sharp as Lalia the Great's temper, about an
unfortunate incident and the misunderstanding it causes, triggering a
tragedy in the Took family. This is set during the early childhood of
Pippin's father Paladin; with Bilbo a young hobbit coming into
maturity, and Paladin himself a very young child.

Excellent characterisation; not to mention outstanding knowledge of
Hobbit family relationships.

Title: The Accidental King: Five Reasons Why Finarfin Deserves an
Appreciation Month · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 5
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-25 06:33:47
A worthy exploration of Finarfin's decision to leave the Noldor,
following the Kinslaying, and return to Valinor. The essay reveals
Finarfin as an Elf of Conscience, who made a difficult decision with
no guarantee of forgiveness for following his rebellious kindred. I
also appreciated the section detailing the impact of Finarfin's
children's actions on the future of Middle-earth.

Excellent use of real-world quotations.

Title: Duty Bound · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 212
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-25 06:37:37
An outstanding Boromir romance that is all the more poignant because
it is doomed. Bodkin undertakes to explain Denethor's apparent lack of
interest in securing the succession by having him find a suitable
maiden for Boromir to marry, despite the lack of interest from the two
parties.

Boromir's young, duty-bound bride Emeldis is an extremely believable
character - she is unhappy in her predicament, but resolved to carry
out her responsibility, proud, and rather prickly. Bodkin writes her
so well that the reader can't help rooting for Emeldis and hoping she
can salvage some happiness out of the situation.

Boromir is also very well served here; good-hearted enough to want to
be kind to his young wife, but not really understanding how to make
her happy, or unselfish enough to know to unbend enough not to try,
but to listen. His natural arrogance wars with his essential humanity
here, and his lack of experience with women who are not his relatives
is obvious.

What gets me, in reading this story, is that Boromir and Emeldis do
come to care for each other, and joyfully anticipate the child that
will be born. And then it all falls apart, with sudden and devastating
tragedy.

Brownie points for excellent Faramir characterisation (he is quietly
wise as usual), and a lively wife for Imrahil; also a good job
depicting the entire Dol Amroth clan, especially little Lothiriel.

Title: In the Waiting · Author: Altariel · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 392
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-25 06:39:59
Altariel is one of my favorite writers of my favorite Tolkien human,
Faramir of Gondor. Here is a fine vignette from her virtual pen; and,
as is often the case, it resonates with fine characterisation and
elegant prose.

In this tale, Faramir is still the bleak Captain we saw in The Two
Towers; holding out even when there is little hope. But he has crossed
a sort of mental rubicon, in succoring rather than slaying or
imprisoning the hobbits and, above all, allowing them to convey the
Ring to Mordor instead of seizing it and taking it to Minas Tirith.
Faramir knows that his father will not be pleased at the course he has
taken; and though he knows that Denethor will verbally rake him over
the coals for his choice, Faramir does not regret that choice and
knows he did his best, for Gondor and even for Denethor. The story
shows Faramir becoming even more mature than we might have realized;
he takes the responsibility not only of judging his father, but of
possibly saving his father from himself.

The last line is rather appropriately chilling.

Title: Keepsake · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits: Vignette · ID: 256
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-25 15:28:02
This story shows a scene that I sorely missed in the books - a
farewell between Gandalf and Pippin. It acknowledges the special bond
between those two; Gandalf recognising that, indeed, this "fool of a
Took" has grown up, and Pippin becoming aware of how he will miss the
Wizard.

Title: Candles · Author: Eretria · Genres: Drama: With Merry · ID: 305
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-25 15:32:36
Very atmospheric storytelling. The care and fear, affection and
uncertainty are palpable, even if they are not always expressed
directly; very in-character for Hobbits. An ominous ending of the
story; it resonates even if the reader knows it will end well.

The most moving detail for me was how shaken Pippin clearly is still
by memories of Merry's bout of desperate confusion due to the Black
Breath.

Title: The spaces between two silences · Author: illyria-pffyffin ·
Genres: Drama: With Aragorn · ID: 677
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-25 15:34:26
I like the contrast between the lyrical beginning, and the somewhat
gross details of Aragorn's adventures in the South. But then Aragorn,
too, turns more "poetic", and the beauty of his narration and the
environment that surrounds them blend together.

The second part was a change of pace and mood compared to the first.
The loud, crowded joy at their marriage, tinged with the awareness of
past grief and future tasks for the royal couple.

The third part again is loud, but completely different in tone -
mourning for the king. And Arwen observes it all, but is tangibly
detached from it, numb in her grief.

And at the end, silence again, and memories of happier times. And the
hope for reunion beyond death. The story come full circle again.

Title: She Watches · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits: Gapfiller · ID: 640
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-08-25 15:38:16
The title is very apt, as Rosie watches her husband going about his
daily routines, where one can sense that they are done not out of rote
but with loving care; and ponders about him and his adventures and how
they would affect him and his relation to her and his home.

She can appreciate all that he has seen and done, she can be uncertain
for short moments about whether a simple Hobbit life can be enough
now, but these doubts are never for long: she trusts in his honesty
and their love for one another. And, very importantly, she accepts,
without any resentment or fear or jealousy on her part, that still
there is a small part of her husband she won't be able to touch or to
share, and which will take him away from her at the very end.

I like this strong, perceptive and compassionate Rosie.

Title: Point of View · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 750
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-25 18:12:43
Nice characterizations: Sam, in his humility, wouldn't be able to
understand Aragorn's interest. It takes Pippin to point out the worth
of having other PoVs around, especially from those who were central to
the entire tale. Good job on Sam's voice, and I like that the King
Returned will forever be Strider to his old companions of the road.

Title: Thyme is a great healer · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 723
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-25 18:12:56
Wonderful connection drawn between the two, especially given their
initial meeting in Ithilien. There is a strong bond there, with their
mingled and separate memories, and I loved how you set up the encounter.

Title: Come Back to Me (Drabble) · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 538
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-25 18:16:19
Bittersweet indeed, and a rather painful drabble about Treebeard
resuming the hunt for the Entwives. Treebeard's PoV is very well done.
The poignant and gradual decimation of his companions is given to us
clearly but without being overly sentimental, and by various logical
deaths. At the same time we are made aware of the dramatic passage of
time since the beginning of the Fourth Age by both the list of deaths
and the increasing boldness of Men. (At least, that was certainly my
impression - I had always imagined that the Old Forest was respected
and kept sacrosanct for a long, long time. But alas, the lives and
memories of Men are short....)

Excellent three-word ending, which left me hopeful for him even with
the sadness permeating the drabble.

Title: Reunion · Author: Fawsley · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 489
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-25 18:17:32
Nice setup of atmosphere and placement in time, and excellent
description of the old man's aging ["the long, slow death of the
senses"] and contrast to his death-dealing in earlier years. His joy
at having the King Returned is very clear, and good use of Falborn as
a connection to Thorongil/Aragorn's past.

Title: The Northmen · Author: SheBit · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 451
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-25 18:17:45
I like the rich descriptions, and the non-antagonistic way the
disparities are drawn between the two cultures; different, not rivals.

Title: Enter the Fourth Age, Hastily · Author: Dwimordene · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 140
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-25 18:19:47
This is an absolutely magical drabble, from the title to the style. It
catches the Entish way of speaking so perfectly, and the irony of the
title is well-placed and made me smile. I love the construction of the
drabble, with the emphatically offset final word.

The images called forth by Treebeard's litany are precise and
evocative, and vividly painted with excellent descriptions; each is
carefully chosen specifically for the universal response that each of
us has towards such quiet and calming scenes. Every time I read this
drabble, I can feel a sense of peacefulness and contentment steal over me.

I liked the brief reference to Merry and Pippin (and their possible
influence on "hastifying" Treebeard a bit?). They had such a strong
effect on one another, and a powerful influence on the results of the
Ring War; I enjoy believing their connection lasted the rest of their
lives, whether or not their acquaintance was ever renewed after the
hobbits left Gondor.

The effects of time are so well-explored in relation to Elves, and I
imagine that there's much of that same feeling with Ents: The growing
impacts of Men, the feeling of an end to their primary time and
influence in Middle-earth. The coming of the Fourth Age must have
seemed quite sudden indeed to an ancient like Treebeard.

Title: Celebration · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 139
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-25 18:26:39
Faramir fought long, hard years for just this exact result: Peace for
the people of Gondor, and Ithilien in particular. I wonder how often
he (and everyone else) was struck by how *normal* this day was
compared to the warfare of the Third Age.

This is a lovely drabble, calm and flowing. The list of activities
conjures up images from my personal memory bank of joyful days spent
at county fairs (activities may change, people don't!). I loved the
connection between the Lord and Lady of Ithilien and their folk, the
mutual respect and affection - this came through loud and clear.

Msg# 8241

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Arthur Boccaccio October 11, 2007 - 5:53:27 Topic ID# 8229
Well, I'm semi-retired and don't wear goofy hats (except for my "Rebel since
1861" cap that I bought in an Adidas story in Manzhouli, Inner Mongolia,
China *grin*), but I do appreciate the sentiments given here as well. Every
review is a treasure simply because something in the story spoke to the
reader enough to inspire them to set their thoughts and feelings down, even
it it's just "Wow!". That single word reivew is no less welcomed by an
author than a review that ends up being longe than the story itself (and
perhaps more so!).

And like Agape, being new to MEFA, I find this a treasure-trove of stories
and authors I would normally never get to read or meet. It is impossible for
me to read, much less review, every story posted on this site, but I know
that I can come back to it at my leisure and read stories I normally would
never have access to. So thanks to all who work hard in putting this site
together and allowing the rest of us access to the best of Tolkien
fanfiction and the people who write them.

Fiondil.


--
*Auta i lýmý! Utýlie'n aurý! ý* Battle Cry of the Noldor at the *Dagor
Nirnaeth Arnediad

Aurý entuluva! ý *Battle Cry of Hýrin at the *Dagor Nirnath Arnediad

Utýlie'n Estel ý* Hope hath come


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Msg# 8242

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by KAT702H@aol.com October 11, 2007 - 9:14:45 Topic ID# 8229
I agree. Were it not for MEFA I would have missed a lot of wonderful
stories. Unfortunately because I belong to several sites, I may not pick a story
to read if it doesn't have enough information. I just don't have the time.
Sorry.

Tari




In a message dated 10/10/2007 11:43:31 P.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
agape4rivendell@gmail.com writes:




Gonna try to make this quick.

Last year, I won one of the awards for MEFA, yet had never heard of
it. Someone nominated my story. I didn't know that there were reviews
to read or anything. I just received a congratultory email.

This year, I was nominated again and decided to 'look into' the
MEFA's...

What I found was a TREASURE TROVE - the best thing, for me, about the
MEFA's is getting to read stories from websites I'd never even heard
of. I would never have read these stories, if not for MEFA.

So - I'm able to review... but also able to really, really enjoy some
incredible stories written by some incredible authors. For this, I
cannot thank the organizers and volunteers enough.

For those who nominate - bless you! For those who agree to share
their stories - bless you! It has been, and will continue to be, a
truly wonderful experience for an avaricious Tolkien fan and reader!

Agape









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Msg# 8243

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Imhiriel October 11, 2007 - 9:43:53 Topic ID# 8229
Posted by: "Marta Layton" melayton@gmail.com aure_enteluva

> Btw, Imhiriel, I'm not saying that you disagree with the above
> statement. Rather this discussion reminded me of some things I've been
> rolling around the back of my head, and it seemed a good time to talk
> about it all.

I understand. You are saying (and much better and more coherently) what
I meant basically ;-).

> So yeah. Long reviews are good for the stories you like, but long for
> you - not necessarily long according to the ten point scale, if you find
> that too much stress.

I know that last year, I was very much in the 2-5 range, with some rare
"trips" to higher points. It was one of my resolutions for this year to
better use the full range available. Especially for drabbles and very
short pieces, this was (and still is) sometimes difficult for me, but
I'm really trying, and it gets easier with time and practice.

Imhiriel

Msg# 8244

Re: Announcement: Negative Reviews Posted by Bonnie L. Sherrell October 11, 2007 - 11:31:30 Topic ID# 8235
I've always appreciated those reviews that I've received that have been
truly constructive criticism, but have been infuriated by those that
reflect only a matter of taste where it is the reviewer's assumption
that everyone should have precisely the same taste as the reviewer
himself/herself.

There have been a VERY few stories I've gone over on the site that I've
actually read and didn't review because I personally was offended by
them, and I'll admit they've mostly been stories that assume Frodo and
Sam had a sexual relationship going, or Aragorn and Legolas. This is
strictly a personal thing for me, although I have been known to read
such stories and even enjoy them if they were deliberate parodies or
particularly well and tastefully or humorously done. But I WON'T give
negative feedback on them, as what I find offensive is NOT the truth
for everyone. One story I've seen on this year's MEFAs that is a
Frodo/Sam pairing I know is very well and sensitively written, but I
can't bring myself to like it, no matter how I try to remain objective
about it. Better I leave it to those who don't mind the idea of such a
pairing, as the author will be far more likely to receive the true good
and constructive feedback his/her well-written story deserves.

But I remember too many reviews I got on HASA where the negative
comments were biting and themselves very offensive, only because the
reviewer disliked the premise on which the story was written, so
instead of rejecting the story on the basis of its writing and
cohesiveness or the way it fit or didn't fit into canon I'd get "I
can't believe that someone would act/change in that way" even though
there was nothing in canon to indicate such and such wasn't possible,
or there were indications in the Appendices or in the Master's letters
that precisely the story I wrote was probable.

I guess what I'm trying to say is the old saying, "If you can't think
of anything nice to say, it's better to say nothing at all."
Bonnie L. Sherrell
Teacher at Large

"Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR

"Don't go where I can't follow."

I mourn for this nation.

Msg# 8245

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Kathy October 11, 2007 - 13:49:35 Topic ID# 8229
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Arthur Boccaccio" <namondil@...>
wrote:
>
> Well, I'm semi-retired and don't wear goofy hats (except for
> my "Rebel since 1861" cap that I bought in an Adidas story in
> Manzhouli, Inner Mongolia, China <snip>

I dunno, Fiondil, I'd say that qualifies! ;)

But I must say the thought of an Adidas store in Inner Mongolia is
profoundly depressing.

Kathy

Msg# 8246

More MEFA Reviews chat & question Posted by stephanie.brucker@sun.com October 11, 2007 - 16:57:45 Topic ID# 8229
Hi Fiondil and Gang -

This is my second year as a MEFA reviewer and author. I'm not very
prolific as a writer, but I am a jolly fanfic reader. I mostly read
Steward and Sons fanfic on Stories of Arda and tolkienfanfiction during
the year.

However, when the MEFAs come along, I'm presented with a huge list of
stories on subjects I would never have dreamed up on websites I didn't
know about. I indulge in hobbit humor, elf angst, bad guys of every
Middle Earth stripe, essays (all of 'em last year), and even tales with
a Vala or two. The MEFAs expand my knowledge of Tolkien's universe and
the fan culture that has grown around it. For that I am eternally grateful.

My question is for Marta and the MEFA admins: When is the 2007 list of
stories made available to the general, non-reviewing public? Some folks
that I know have expressed an interest, and I would like to send them a
URL. (I probably should look at the schedule, right?)

- Steff



Arthur Boccaccio wrote:
> Well, I'm semi-retired and don't wear goofy hats (except for my "Rebel since
> 1861" cap that I bought in an Adidas story in Manzhouli, Inner Mongolia,
> China *grin*), but I do appreciate the sentiments given here as well. Every
> review is a treasure simply because something in the story spoke to the
> reader enough to inspire them to set their thoughts and feelings down, even
> it it's just "Wow!". That single word reivew is no less welcomed by an
> author than a review that ends up being longe than the story itself (and
> perhaps more so!).
>
> And like Agape, being new to MEFA, I find this a treasure-trove of stories
> and authors I would normally never get to read or meet. It is impossible for
> me to read, much less review, every story posted on this site, but I know
> that I can come back to it at my leisure and read stories I normally would
> never have access to. So thanks to all who work hard in putting this site
> together and allowing the rest of us access to the best of Tolkien
> fanfiction and the people who write them.
>
> Fiondil.
>
>

Msg# 8247

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Chris October 11, 2007 - 17:07:52 Topic ID# 8229
This is my 3rd year with the Mefa and I discovered that each year my reviews
got longer and I'm not an author. But practicing writing reviews seems to do
the trick. I don't sweat the points. Whatever comes to my mind I write down.
When I look at the reviews this year, it falls naturally for me that stories
I like more get longer reviews. The bulk of my reviews is around 3-4 points,
but surprisingly I have written several 10 point reviews without really
trying.With a story I really like that was not much work and it didn't take
me longer than stories I have not much to say about. Writing a review for a
story which was ok, but not outstanding, I find more difficult than writing
a review for a favorite story of mine.

So, I think, people should stop worrying about points. No one is alone in
this competition writing reviews. In the end, I think, it will even out and
the most loved storie will get the most points.

Chris

Marta wrote:
>
> Hey guys,
>
> The question of how long to write reviews is a hotly debated one, to be
> sure. Some people are naturally verbose; I know that when I am in a
> certain mood I often find that I've written 1500 characters for a story
> I really like without even really realizing it. They may not all be
> perfectly-chosen or the epitome of literary criticism - but they're
> written, they describe the story, the author will have my reaction and
> the story has the points I wanted to give it.
>
> Other people may not be quite as lucky, and so for whatever reason they
> struggle to write a longer review. As an author I value EVERY review I
> receive through these awards, whether it's one point or ten, and I
> imagine other authors feel similarly. While I love the long ones, I
> certainly wouldn't want people to feel bad about their reviews
> being short.
>
> Let me repeat that, because it's really very important. PLEASE do NOT
> feel bad if you never break 100 characters on your reviews. Or if you
> only review five stories. This is a fanfic competition, and that means
> it should be fun. Yes, we work hard to run it professionally and make
> sure everything is as fair and user-friendly as it could be, but at its
> most basic, the MEFAs is about fandom. It's about grad students and
> accountants and doctors and stay-at-home moms and janitors and retired
> men in goofy hats, all sitting at their computers and reading stories -
> and then leaving the authors some feedback. And yes, by doing that we
> identify the pieces that the most people enjoyed the most. But mostly,
> these awards are about the sheer joy of fandom, letting the authors know
> how much we loved their stuff and helping future readings find the
> stories that the most people enjoyed. So however many stories you
> review, and however many points it is, that's better than saying nothing.
>
> Btw, Imhiriel, I'm not saying that you disagree with the above
> statement. Rather this discussion reminded me of some things I've been
> rolling around the back of my head, and it seemed a good time to talk
> about it all.
>
> Back to the question at hand: reviewing should be fun, and you shouldn't
> feel bad for not being able to write enough or as long of ones as you'd
> like. Now, the fact remains that we are a competition, and we want the
> best stories to get the most points. But this doesn't mean everyone
> needs to write ten-point reviews. Rather, figure out what point range
> makes you feel comfortable. Some people can hit seven without breaking a
> sweat, other people have to really work to reach three points. WHichever
> group you find yourself in, gauge your reviews so that you give the
> longer ones to the stories you like most and the shorter ones to the
> stories you still like, just not quite as much as the ones you're crazy
> about. Obviously the longer the review that comes naturally the bigger a
> range you have to work with. But really, don't stress yourself to reach
> ten points if it's too much of a stress.
>
> So yeah. Long reviews are good for the stories you like, but long for
> you - not necessarily long according to the ten point scale, if you find
> that too much stress.
>
> Marta
>

Msg# 8248

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Barbara Rich October 11, 2007 - 19:10:03 Topic ID# 8229
The only story in which I actually "count" points for a review is when I
review for my nominees--naturally I want to give them as much as I can. Yet
usually, if I liked it enough to nominate, I can almost always think of
enough to say without worrying about it--they are usually natural 10
pointers. Sometimes I have to remind myself not to go overboard for them.

For all the rest, I give the same sorts of reviews I give the rest of the
time: whatever pops into my mind, whether 1 point or 10 or anything in
between. Normally, I find most reviews fall naturally into the 2 to 3 point
range for shorter pieces, and 1 or 2 points for the others. If I have more
time to spend reviewing, they also tend to be longer.

To me, the most important thing is to be both honest *and* positive! Points
are secondary.

Dreamflower


On 10/11/07, Chris <grzonka@comcast.net> wrote:
>
> This is my 3rd year with the Mefa and I discovered that each year my
> reviews
> got longer and I'm not an author. But practicing writing reviews seems to
> do
> the trick. I don't sweat the points. Whatever comes to my mind I write
> down.
> When I look at the reviews this year, it falls naturally for me that
> stories
> I like more get longer reviews. The bulk of my reviews is around 3-4
> points,
> but surprisingly I have written several 10 point reviews without really
> trying.With a story I really like that was not much work and it didn't
> take
> me longer than stories I have not much to say about. Writing a review for
> a
> story which was ok, but not outstanding, I find more difficult than
> writing
> a review for a favorite story of mine.
>
> So, I think, people should stop worrying about points. No one is alone in
> this competition writing reviews. In the end, I think, it will even out
> and
> the most loved storie will get the most points.
>
> Chris
>
> Marta wrote:
> >
> > Hey guys,
> >
> > The question of how long to write reviews is a hotly debated one, to be
> > sure. Some people are naturally verbose; I know that when I am in a
> > certain mood I often find that I've written 1500 characters for a story
> > I really like without even really realizing it. They may not all be
> > perfectly-chosen or the epitome of literary criticism - but they're
> > written, they describe the story, the author will have my reaction and
> > the story has the points I wanted to give it.
> >
> > Other people may not be quite as lucky, and so for whatever reason they
> > struggle to write a longer review. As an author I value EVERY review I
> > receive through these awards, whether it's one point or ten, and I
> > imagine other authors feel similarly. While I love the long ones, I
> > certainly wouldn't want people to feel bad about their reviews
> > being short.
> >
> > Let me repeat that, because it's really very important. PLEASE do NOT
> > feel bad if you never break 100 characters on your reviews. Or if you
> > only review five stories. This is a fanfic competition, and that means
> > it should be fun. Yes, we work hard to run it professionally and make
> > sure everything is as fair and user-friendly as it could be, but at its
> > most basic, the MEFAs is about fandom. It's about grad students and
> > accountants and doctors and stay-at-home moms and janitors and retired
> > men in goofy hats, all sitting at their computers and reading stories -
> > and then leaving the authors some feedback. And yes, by doing that we
> > identify the pieces that the most people enjoyed the most. But mostly,
> > these awards are about the sheer joy of fandom, letting the authors know
> > how much we loved their stuff and helping future readings find the
> > stories that the most people enjoyed. So however many stories you
> > review, and however many points it is, that's better than saying
> nothing.
> >
> > Btw, Imhiriel, I'm not saying that you disagree with the above
> > statement. Rather this discussion reminded me of some things I've been
> > rolling around the back of my head, and it seemed a good time to talk
> > about it all.
> >
> > Back to the question at hand: reviewing should be fun, and you shouldn't
> > feel bad for not being able to write enough or as long of ones as you'd
> > like. Now, the fact remains that we are a competition, and we want the
> > best stories to get the most points. But this doesn't mean everyone
> > needs to write ten-point reviews. Rather, figure out what point range
> > makes you feel comfortable. Some people can hit seven without breaking a
> > sweat, other people have to really work to reach three points. WHichever
> > group you find yourself in, gauge your reviews so that you give the
> > longer ones to the stories you like most and the shorter ones to the
> > stories you still like, just not quite as much as the ones you're crazy
> > about. Obviously the longer the review that comes naturally the bigger a
> > range you have to work with. But really, don't stress yourself to reach
> > ten points if it's too much of a stress.
> >
> > So yeah. Long reviews are good for the stories you like, but long for
> > you - not necessarily long according to the ten point scale, if you find
> > that too much stress.
> >
> > Marta
> >
>
>
>


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Msg# 8249

Re: Announcement: Negative Reviews Posted by Marta Layton October 11, 2007 - 19:19:14 Topic ID# 8235
Hi Bonnie,

> I've always appreciated those reviews that I've received that have been
> truly constructive criticism, but have been infuriated by those that
> reflect only a matter of taste where it is the reviewer's assumption
> that everyone should have precisely the same taste as the reviewer
> himself/herself.
>

Those comments can be frustrating, to be sure. I tell myself when I've
come across reviews like that (and they're rare within the MEFAs, much
more than in fandom at large) that I don't *have* to dwell on them - I
can just move on and focus on other things.

> instead of rejecting the story on the basis of its writing and
> cohesiveness or the way it fit or didn't fit into canon I'd get "I
> can't believe that someone would act/change in that way" even though
> there was nothing in canon to indicate such and such wasn't possible,
> or there were indications in the Appendices or in the Master's letters
> that precisely the story I wrote was probable.
>
> I guess what I'm trying to say is the old saying, "If you can't think
> of anything nice to say, it's better to say nothing at all."

That's more true for the MEFAs than with general kind of reviewing -
because with every word you say, you're giving the story points! There's
no such thing as a review worth negative points - so if you don't like a
story, the best thing to do really is just to not review it.

Marta

Msg# 8250

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Marta Layton October 11, 2007 - 19:58:43 Topic ID# 8229
Hi Fiondil,

> Well, I'm semi-retired and don't wear goofy hats (except for my "Rebel since
> 1861" cap that I bought in an Adidas story in Manzhouli, Inner Mongolia,
> China *grin*), but I do appreciate the sentiments given here as well. Every
> review is a treasure simply because something in the story spoke to the
> reader enough to inspire them to set their thoughts and feelings down, even
> it it's just "Wow!". That single word reivew is no less welcomed by an
> author than a review that ends up being longe than the story itself (and
> perhaps more so!).
>

I agree - I love them all, personally. :-)

> And like Agape, being new to MEFA, I find this a treasure-trove of stories
> and authors I would normally never get to read or meet. It is impossible for
> me to read, much less review, every story posted on this site, but I know
> that I can come back to it at my leisure and read stories I normally would
> never have access to. So thanks to all who work hard in putting this site
> together and allowing the rest of us access to the best of Tolkien
> fanfiction and the people who write them.
>

There were times (like when I was working as opposed to being a grad
student) that I could read nearly every story I really wanted to. Not
every story, but the ones with summaries that interested me. This year,
I realized early on that wasn't going to happen, both because of my
school obligations and the fact that categories were announced later on
in the summer (so I knew I'd get less done in that free time). But the
thing is, that's okay. I'm still reading some great stuff, and whatever
I read is better than if I didn't.

I'm so glad you and Agape and other "newbies" are enjoying the awards so
much. Thanks for letting us all know.

Marta

Msg# 8251

Re: More MEFA Reviews chat & question Posted by Marta Layton October 11, 2007 - 23:11:12 Topic ID# 8229
Hiya Steff!

> However, when the MEFAs come along, I'm presented with a huge list of
> stories on subjects I would never have dreamed up on websites I didn't
> know about. I indulge in hobbit humor, elf angst, bad guys of every
> Middle Earth stripe, essays (all of 'em last year), and even tales with
> a Vala or two. The MEFAs expand my knowledge of Tolkien's universe and
> the fan culture that has grown around it. For that I am eternally grateful.
>

*grins* I wasn't nearly as big of a Thranduil fan before some fantastic
MEFA stories over the years convinced me that yes, he really is a
delightful character.

> My question is for Marta and the MEFA admins: When is the 2007 list of
> stories made available to the general, non-reviewing public? Some folks
> that I know have expressed an interest, and I would like to send them a
> URL. (I probably should look at the schedule, right?)
>

I don't know that there's any definite date. I know that Aranel was
talking about putting together a database displaying all of the
nominations over the years, which would include 2007, but we're talking
after the results are announced for that.

The simplest thing to do is probably to log in to the site as guest. To
do this, go to http://www.mefawards.net (while you're not logged in) and
click the "login as guest" link. This will show you the voting page, but
the links to actually add something to the site (like to enter a review,
or to nominate a story if we were in that season) don't work. If you
click on one it will tell you that guests do not have access to that
site feature.

So even non-members can look at the stories nominated (by clicking on
the "Browse Nominated Stories" link) or read reviews (by clicking on the
"Read Reviews" link). The only difference is that they can't do the
things restricted to members, like vote.

If you need a list of the nominated stories I could probably come up
with it over the next few days. However, to actually gather the links
would be more effort than I can really put into it. Let me know if you'd
like a list of the titles and authors, though, and I'll do it.

Marta

Msg# 8252

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Rhapsody the Bard October 12, 2007 - 2:59:03 Topic ID# 8229
Hi all!

Chris wrote:
>
> This is my 3rd year with the Mefa and I discovered that each year my reviews
> got longer and I'm not an author. But practicing writing reviews seems to do
> the trick. I don't sweat the points. Whatever comes to my mind I write down.
> When I look at the reviews this year, it falls naturally for me that stories
> I like more get longer reviews. The bulk of my reviews is around 3-4 points,
> but surprisingly I have written several 10 point reviews without really
> trying.With a story I really like that was not much work and it didn't take
> me longer than stories I have not much to say about. Writing a review for a
> story which was ok, but not outstanding, I find more difficult than writing
> a review for a favorite story of mine.

Oh dear, this is my 3rd edition as well and I am even not sure in what
range I normally review. Am I a 3 pointer, 5 pointer, perhaps a 7
pointer? I never looked at that to be honest and I am starting to wonder
if I actually should keep an eye on that by now given the responses :) I
always try to review immediately after I read the story (with fresh
impressions), some stories I like to let it rest a bit longer or I read
it again. Then I just type away, do a quick spell check in word and
voilá, read it over once more and hit on submit review. The thing is, as
for length, the length of my reviews isn't any different from reviews I
normally leave on archives, so yeah. :c)

As for reading: no I can't read everything I'd like to. I have a huge
wish-list and I hope I can make it before the end of the year because I
am currently on a varied reading diet of Miffy, Dribble (reading with my
son who's very fond of books), mixed with Tolkien, fan fic and other
novels. I asked the powers that be for more hours in a day and darn,
that still hasn't happened! If I don't get around to review the stores
left on the wish list, I leave a review on the archives after the
deadline passes.

> So, I think, people should stop worrying about points. No one is alone in
> this competition writing reviews. In the end, I think, it will even out and
> the most loved storie will get the most points.

Absolutely, for me personally the MEFA's isn't about who wins, I always
loved it because it is one huge story sharing fest for me. It's like at
the start every reader/author comes with a list of stories they liked so
much the past year, that they want to share with others and the reviews
show how much the others liked them as well. To me it always feels like:
ooh this is a good tip, or this story is really nice and I should read
more of this author, or I never thought Ranger/Hobbit/Orc/Elf/Maiar
stories could be so much fun!

Read, review and most of all: have fun!

Rhapsody

Msg# 8253

MEFA Reviews for October 12, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 12, 2007 - 5:38:25 Topic ID# 8253
Title: A Simple Wish · Author: Claudio · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 220
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-08-25 18:27:22
This is a great story: funny, subtle, sly and inventive. Beautifully
written--economical and lean and yet rich in undercurrents. The idea
of taking an obscure (nearly unknown except for the geekiest of
readers) canon character like Ithilbor and turning him into such a
memorable individual is awesome. But then Claudio is always so
imaginative and uses canon in the most delightful (disrespectful in
the best sense of term) way. Love the manner in which he take sthe two
personalities and developes them in this story and plays them off of
one another in such thoroughly believable and humorous ways. To say
this is not a typical interpretation of Celeborn is such an
understatement. Like most of his stories it holds underneath a nearly
cynical edge a profound humanity that always gives me a smile as well
as laugh. It paints poor Celeborn as simultaneously longing, cautious,
and apparently clueless and yet with more self-knowledge in the end
the reader is led to expect. It gives us such a nice quirky twist with
the ending. One of my favorite short stories of Claudio's and
thoroughly statisfying on so many levels.


Title: The Rose in the Fisted Glove · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama:
Second Age or Earlier · ID: 240
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:54:09
The experience of the Mirkwood elves in the War of the Last Alliance
is a gap that I never would have thought to fill, but I found your
portrait of these days to be both compelling and believable. I loved
the Silvan take on Laws and Customs of the Eldar. And I must say that
the interlude between Thranduil and Galion was very hot. This was a
really nice story, and I'm glad I read it.

Title: The Ground Portends · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 638
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:54:50
Thevina Finduilas is probably one of the top five authors who I wish
would return to the Lord of the Rings fandom more often, and this
piece is evidence of just why that is so. She really "gets" whatever
she is writing about, no just as an individual character but as both
an example of a certain culture and an individual within that larger
culture. Gimli here is very much a dwarf's dwarf, and the craftsman's
eye for looking at the "fire" within the people he meets is really
cleverly done, but he is not just any dwarf. Thev works in so many
details that bring him to life, like the fact that he would have been
young to be at the Battle of the Five Armies and the reference to his
quarrel with Eomer over Galadriel. I also see a dwarf who is open
enough to the values of different races to thrive in a colony on the
borders of a mannish kingdom: in short, just the kind of dwarf Gimli
would have had to be.

Yet there are lots of authors who can "get" races, and not all of them
lift them off the page as Thevina does. Her thorough knowledge and
deft use of canon details is well-matched by her technical skill in
writing a good story. I would wager that JRRT himself could take
lessons from her on how to incorporate backstory without it weighing
down the narrative unnecessarily, and she somehow manages to get
across exactly what Gimli is feeling without me feeling like I had
been told something that should have been obvious. Each of these
skills by itself would make for a good story that I would probably
want to read; together, they make for a story breath-taking in both
its beauty and authenticity that feels like it could have been lifted
from the pages of canon. Brava, Thevina!


Title: Duty Bound · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 212
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:54:57
This is a really interesting look at what Boromir's wife might have
gone through, might he have been pressured to marry before the events
of The Lord of the Rings. I tend to interpret Boromir as most likely
gay and even with het!Boromir I have a hard time seeing him as ever
having been married -- but Bodkin convinces me that he could have been
married. This story connects really well with canon events,
establishing Denethor's motives in a way that avoids making him seem
unreasonable, and the OC wife was charming. Actually, all of the OCs
were, as I particularly liked Imrahil's wife as well. And Lothiriel
was charming. The ending was also believable, tragically normal for
the times and making the story plausible. Nice work, Bodkin.

Title: Thoughts About The Old Forest · Author: pippinfan88 · Races:
Hobbits: Gapfiller · ID: 141
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:55:16
This is an interesting scene for a gapfiller, and the author handles
it well. The scenes were believable and hinted at the hobbits'
characters and their worries, and so built on canon in a new and
convincing way. Which is *always* a good thing!

Title: Too Many Adverbs · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble ·
ID: 660
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:55:47
*snerk* Every student (or teacher) knows the frustrations of grammar,
and I'm sure young Boromir would have been a special terror to his
tutor. Branwyn does a good job of capturing his situation.

Title: Five Things That Never Happened to Theodred and Boromir ·
Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 545
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:55:55
If I needed any convincing after "Love Me and Despair" that EdorasLass
is the master of the short-form alternate universe piece, this "Five
Things" list would have cinched it for me. True, the genre isn't
exactly brimming with competition, but regardless EL always does such
a good job of creating a completely different world in a very few
words. She really gets how one little change would affect so much.
Here she gives us five scenarios, some happy and others
blood-chillingly horrifying, but all comment as much on what was as
what could have been. The vignettes give both Bormir and Théodred, and
their fanon relationship, a wonderful depth. This is one of those
stories that have made it nearly impossible for me to see these two
characters as anything but lovers; it feels so real.

And this series of what-if scenarios hilights how the author can
succeed with so many different styles of writing. #4 has the level of
high tragedy I remember from Love Me and Despair, and it left me with
that same feeling of success being so tenuous during the Ring War. #5
develops one of the saddest things about their relationship (that they
died so close n time, but apart), while #3's happy ending makes their
canonical early deaths so much more tragic. #3 also shows EL's gift
with writing erotica, and her inability to forget that these
characters are warriors and "men's men". Their passion even as old men
is obvious.

And then there's #1. So sad! And #2, so sad but in a different way.
Both could have happened all too easily.

*dabs at eyes* Beautifully told, EL! A wonderful job as always.


Title: Journey's End · Author: Altariel · Genres: Drama: Ithilien ·
ID: 442
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:56:05
This is a really great play on the scene in "Henry V" where the king
passes as a common soldier among his people. The first time I read
this story, Altariel kept me guessing until the very end at the
identities of those two; I guessed it was canonical but for a while
was convinced it was Beregond and Bergil! Knowing their true
identities, I enjoyed nuances of the story a lot more this time
through (but I won't give the game away to people reading this review,
because the guessing and looking for clues is half the fun).

But "Journey's End" is more than just a play at mistaken identity.
Altariel does a remarkable amount of worldbuilding in such a short
space, giving us a picture about what life in Gondor in the Fourth Age
might have been like, and in particular at how the resettling at
Ithilien might have progressed. The OCs were compelling, and I think
the details Altariel tells us are very likely how it really would have
happened. All in all, a very enjoyable read for people who like a
plausible but still light-hearted and fun Gondor.


Title: The Most Beautiful · Author: Meril · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 508
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:56:29
This is beautiful, Meril. I love the way that you have captured the
heady beauty of the song and made it seem very, very "real". That sort
of "high-order" existence certainly has its benefits, but also its
limitations, as you illustrate when you have Melian realize that
simple pleasures would be lost if she lived that way. And the
descriptions you give of Melian's joy in her daughter's first words
were profound. What a way to flesh out a (to me) fairly enigmatic
character. I really enjoyed this.

Title: End Times · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble
· ID: 702
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:56:58
I really liked this! I know from experience that it's not easy to
write drabbles focusing on one sense, and you did a good job getting
across how hearing things but not being about to see them or otherwise
perceive them could be terrifying.

I must also say, it was very "Mag" to slap the screaming wench. Nice
touch. :-)

Title: The Turn of the Tide · Author: Altariel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 72
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:57:27
Ooh, chilling and compelling all the way through. I really like the
connection between Eowyn and Denethor, as I can see how they might
have gotten along very well.

Title: Those Darned Socks! · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 188
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:58:58
Great stuff. I'm sure that Boromir would have been a poor pupil at
darning socks, and this is a nice tie-in with your universe – and a
good character moment for him as he finally learns the necessary
patience and humility.

Title: Circumstantial Heroes · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Minas
Tirith · ID: 684
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:59:10
Ai, there is so much to love about this story! First off, I must say a
hearty THANK YOU for addressing the question of how Aragorn arrived at
his decision to give Beregond clemency. Of course as a reader I would
have been heartily dis-satisfied if the good guys who don't Die
Heroically (TM) are punished for their good deeds. But from a
practical concern it always bugged me where Aragorn had found the time
to find out the true story about someone much of the Citadel would
have considered traitor. The conversation between Faramir and Aragorn
was delightfully done.

And speaking of delightful, that brings us to the topic of Pippin. Who
was completely precious (um, in a non-Gollumesque way :-P). Him doing
full guard duty *and* keeping stealthy watch by night showed real
character and devotion to his king. And the way Aragorn and he discuss
duty really did an affective job of characterizing by contrast both
the Shire and Gondor. On the same topic (delightful), Hithdol was a
pure joy. A really wonderful OC who came complete with nuzgul. Several
of them, but now I want to read the story of that conversation between
the Ranger and Hithdol about Aragorn's bed partners. That was hilarious!

All of the servants and OCs were so well developed, and the touch of
realism in your notes (paper mills south of Harlond!)... it made for a
most enjoyable read, and a moving one. Really good job here.


Title: Future Imperfect · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851
- 3017 TA · ID: 749
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-25 23:59:24
Denethor is one of my favorite characters in Tolkien's legendarium,
and also one of my *first* loves (so I am particularly fond of my view
of him). That makes it rather difficult to write a story with him as a
key character, that resonates with me. But with "Future Imperfect",
Tanaqui does just that. There is a subtlety to Denethor's motives and
hopes for his younger son here, that somehow manages to walk the line
bgetween overbearing liege-lord and generic (and somewhat wimpy)
father-figure. It makes Denethor sympathetic, but still very much
Denethor.

But this story is not just a piece about Denethor. As with many of
Tanaqui's pieces Faramir is very much present, and as with all of her
stories involving Faramir, he is written spot-on. I love the fact that
he is a true student, to the point of seeing martial training as
"studying". I do think he would love these stolen moments to read what
he wanted, and that would be a huge sacrifice for him when he went to
Ithilien. Yet Faramir already exhibits some of the skills of
observation he'll need as a ranger, and in the end I think Denethor is
right that Faramir is well-suited to that posting. And right about the
other things, too. It's a lovely snippet of life for Gondor's first
family.


Title: Last Light · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Drama · ID: 194
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-26 00:00:16
This was a really neat perspective. You got into the Entish headspace
really well, and through it offered an illuminating new view on the
corruption of Saruman.

Title: Resurrection · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 265
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-26 00:00:27
"Resurrection" does what the alternate unierse genre really does best.
It takes a departure from canon and looks at how what changes (and
what remains the same) has to say about the events that actually did
happen. In this case Dwimordene takes Halbarad's death at Pelennor as
her departure. What does this tell us about the actual canonical
story? Halbarad's death is never actually told in the book, and his
character is never even mentioned in the movies, so one might wonder
whether this is a big enough departure. But I have always loved
Halbarad, and in a way he represents the Northern Dúnedain to me. He
is in my mind Aragorn''s past, and when he dies it feels like
Aragorn's unglamorous years as a Ranger are being crucified, so that
Aragorn-the-king can be resurrected from them.

Dwimordene gives us a different view of how events could have
unfolded. If Halbarad had survived, there would have been a much less
king break between Strider and Elessar. Not to say that Aragorn's
*memories* of his past don't affect him even in canon, but I think
this portrayal of Halbarad's resurrection from Pelennor would require
a much different integration between Strider and Elessar, and by
extension Eriador and Gondor. In a way a Halbarad-lives AU is similar
to a Denethor-lives AU, but with much more emotional pull simply
because there are less obvious political consequences.

In any event, this story's a beautiful read told mythically and
brimming with spiritual language and imagery that makes you cry. Even
without thinkin about how Halbarad's survival would have affected the
canon. I highly recommend it.


Title: Property Rights · Author: Salsify · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 74
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-26 00:00:35
Ai, well done, Salsify! You have taken some (to most people) obscure
incidents from the history of dwarves and northern Men, and used it to
give a context and depth to the events before the Battles of the Five
Armies. It's really remarkable that they ever managed to find peace,
and it makes Bilbo's optimism and courage all the more heroic. This is
a really good gapfiller for The Hobbit, and a truly original idea -
nice work!

Title: The Sword of Elendil · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Drama: Incomplete · ID: 69
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-26 00:00:45
This was a story idea waiting to be written: an in-depth look at
Aragorn's transition from Rivendell to the Angle. Gandalfs Apprentice
really captures the politics well and creates a convincing picture of
what life in the Angle might have been like. Good work!

Title: Fell Memories · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 191
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-26 00:00:58
This was really done. The torture at the hands of the orcs was a
little *too* effectively done at times, and it made me really feel for
our would-be king. And Aragorn's homelessness at the end was
heartbreaking. Nice work.

Title: A Texas Gay Boy in King Thranduil's Court · Author: Ignoble
Bard · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 182
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-08-26 17:01:46
First of all, the title grabbed me immediately. I am a great fan of
Mark Twain and the idea of a Tolkien-based [i]Connecticut Yankee in
King Arthur's Court[/i] crossed with a Legoslash story was just too
humorous on the face of it to pass up. When I first read it I did not
know the writer's work very well and yet this story seemed to promise
me that it would necessarily be an entertaining and funny fic.
IgnobleBard's humor did not disappoint me, but delighted, and the
story contained all the elements I have come to love in his
work--warmth, humor and careful crafting. Sorry, as a New Yorker, just
the mention of Texas in this context gave me a chuckle in and of
itself. (To be gay in Texas? Well, could be worse I guess. Numerous
places come to mind. But, for those who don't know the U.S well, I'll
just say: it is not San Francisco.) I also adored the physical
description of the protagonist. He is just so cute and such a parody
of a Mary Sue (I think the writer calls him a Gary Stu?). The gags did
not get old for me and Legolas is adorable. Thranduil is well-handled.
A light-hearted, more thoughtful than it seems on the surface, romp. I
read it again now and then to remind myself of why I thought it was so
funny. I highly recommend this story.

Title: The Company of Heroes · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 393
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-26 18:18:30
It's one thing to want to explore how Sam might have come to grips
with lingering ill-feelings toward Boromir, and another to bring about
his resolution through his children, in effect, his own voice. Well done.

Title: Web of Treason · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 124
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-26 20:56:47
This most ambitious of Linda's stories takes a darker turn than do
most of her tales. [Web of Treason] examines, as its central theme,
the question of whether a good man can remain good while doing evil
deeds to accomplish a noble purpose. There are no simple answers, and
the verdict is largely left to the reader.

In the story, Aragorn disappears and Faramir comes to suspect a cabal
of lords who have made already made a dubious political move on the
Stewardship in Council, as well as a surprising proposal of marriage
for the infant Eldarion - which Elessar had opposed. Faramir decides
that to find his missing King and friend, he must feign sympathy for
the suspect lords, and infiltrate their ranks. To accomplish this end,
Faramir must lie, deny and betray his allegiance to the very king he
wants to save. A terrible price is exacted; which endangers Faramir's
soul, Aragorn's life, and the trust and love between them.

Linda reveals considerable depth and courage as a writer by choosing
to end the story in the way that she does - not with joy and
forgiveness, but with doubt and shadows. Even heroes of Aragorn's
mettle cannot completely recover from prolonged torture in a month or
two, though the king is saved and restored to power. Time is needed,
and there is still hope; a more upbeat ending would be less believable.

Excellent depiction of Aragorn as an upholder of justice, dispensing
both mercy and the ultimate penalties for treason.

Arwen is well-written here; as a woman of strong will, enduring fear
and physical hardship without ever losing faith in Aragorn.

There is also a delightful OFC - Elbeth, the mysterious child saved in
Linda's story [Shadow and Thought], provides both extra pathos and a
welcome thread of lightness amidst the sturm und drang. She is by
turns a wilful brat and a kind-hearted angel of mercy; and is
effectively revealed as a lonely child surrounded by venal
opportunists who alternately neglect or spoil her, including her own
mother.

The story is well worth the read, though it takes the reader down some
dark and unexpected paths.


Title: The Wink of an Eye · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 664
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-26 20:58:19
An unexpectedly amusing little piece, wherein it is seen that Denethor
has under-estimated the Dark Lord's evil mind again, and that said
Dark Lord really does have a sense of humor, even if the joke is
always on someone else.

Linda now has me wondering whether Sauron planted some scary
jack-in-the-boxes in the Sammath Naur, or filled Cirith Ungol with
whoopie cushions.

I get the eerie feeling, after reading this, that Sauron is still out
there somewhere, amused at mortal follies, and always getting the last
laugh.

Denethor really should have learned from this singular episode and
buried that perky but pesky Palantir somewhere...



Title: Welcome · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Elves: Fixed-Length Ficlet ·
ID: 694
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-27 01:36:24
Elrond would be the perfect host; there is something very strong and
yet kind and welcoming in him; this drabble captures it perfectly.
Excellent setup to the welcome by the mention of the various things
Glorfindel remembers from Valinor and does not know in Middle-earth.



Title: The Ground Portends · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 638
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-27 03:05:43
Few Tolkien fanfiction writers get inside the heads of the Khazad as
seemingly easily as Thundera Tiger. I really feel like it is Tolkien's
Gimli speaking, thinking and acting in this story. Gimli's thoughts of
Galadriel, his recognition of her as a catalyst, work nicely here.

Msg# 8254

MEFA Reviews for October 12, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 12, 2007 - 5:40:36 Topic ID# 8254
Title: A Game of Chess · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble
· ID: 605
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-27 03:23:18
A clever vignette that carries a certain wry sadness. Denethor deigns
to teach Captain Thorongil the game of chess; unaware that Thorongil
is already familiar with the game, and Thorongil plays along,
unwilling to dispell Denethor's illusion.

When is it important to tell the truth, and when is it better to veil
oneself? Aragorn spends much of his first 87 years being someone else.
Sadly, Denethor comes close to treating Thorongil in a friendly way
here, and still, Thorongil remains hooded.

What would have happened if Thorongil had offered Denethor more trust?
We will never know. This intriguing snippet raises all kinds of
possibilities while drawing a portrait of two powerful men who can
never be friends.

Title: Elements: Dreams of the Dead, Visions of the Living · Author:
pipkinsweetgrass · Genres: Alternate Universe: The Shire or Buckland ·
ID: 202
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-27 20:29:27
This is a lovely vision, with true, complicated and compassionate
characterizations. The first two chapters I thought were great, nearly
flawless but the introduction of the fairy element took things in a
cliched direction I was sorry to see, no matter how tenderly those
cliched elements were used. Pippin actually became a sort of Mary Sue,
I'm sorry to note.

Title: Perturbation of Fate · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama:
General Drabble · ID: 428
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-28 03:28:59
I have seen a number of stories that try to figure out an end for
Maglor - sometimes he dies, sometimes he has a close encounter of the
Christly kind (and usually then dies), sometimes he just remains in
Arda seeking after the likenesses of lost
siblings/cousins/lovers/lovers-who-are-cousins...

I like this take on his fate, because Maglor has always seemed so
damaged by the end of the story that I'd think he'd be rather
unhinged. The idea that he remains the only one of his brothers who is
ultimately faithful to the oath and its self-imposed exile seems
right. None of Feanor's get are able to lay down their burden
peacefully. It's sad, but it does fit in my mind with the tenor of
Maglor's last appearance in the book.

Title: All in a Day's Work · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 421
Reviewer: phyloxena · 2007-08-28 09:59:51
Cool! Imrahil is adventurous and practical, and cares for his people.

Title: Concussion · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure · ID: 711
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-08-29 06:15:17
A good hurt/comfort story that involves hobbits other than Frodo or
Pippin; that is, one particular hobbit, namely Bilbo after the Battle
of the Five Armies. Well-researched and with a delightful cast of
characters.

Title: Respite · Author: Lindelea · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 303
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-29 08:48:48
Gondor's favorite son gets little chance to read while traveling
throughout the wilds of Ithilien with his Rangers; but for a few
stolen moments his imagination is stirred until reports of the enemy
are given.

A wonderful drabble involving our beloved Faramir, reading within
Henneth Annun, evoking mood and setting well.

Title: Field of Dreams · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama · ID: 374
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-29 09:02:05
The war has cost this farm its menfolk, father and sons; and the widow
and their daughters remain to complete the harvest.

A well told, all too realistic look at the aftermath of the war told
from the point of view of one who has lost most of her joy in it, but
who struggles still to provide not only for herself and her remaining
children but for those left with nothing within the city as well.

One of the best pieces I have ever read by Agape, and one I'm proud to
endorse.

Title: Measures of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 50
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-29 12:22:03
This is a terrific piece of writing, a great example of how an epic
story can be conveyed through a single scene. Throughout, the author
includes all the details of Faramir and Eowyn's now long and happy
marriage, and much about their characters, with strokes so sure they
are hardly noticeable: Eowyn's being a warrior, noblewoman, and ruler;
her trust of and attraction to Faramir; her Rohirric cultural
background; her mother- and woman-hood; Faramir's strength and
nobility of character, his courtliness, and Gondorian ethnicity; that
it was he who sought her in courtship, and that they have had a long
and successful union. I had to read this piece through a second time
and make detailed notes before I felt I'd uncovered most of its
treasure, buried in plain sight. Though not a drabble, it should be
required reading for anyone considering that form as it exemplifies
all the hallmarks of the best drabbles: grasp of a single moment,
crystal-clear vision, and profound depth.

Title: The Smile That Wins · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 258
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-29 12:27:38
This piece starts out well, with sweet and fresh details, but then
gets muddled. I found it very AU - Eowyn was in such despair when she
and Faramir met, how could smile remembering Eomer when she wished so
much to be riding out dying beside him? And is that a typo in the last
line? [could *she* be mere *man*]? Sorry, just doesn't work for me.

Title: All Lies and Jest · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 104
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 16:58:56
This is a great look at how LACE, if it had been available to the
Silvan elves, might have affected things. I think questions like these
would have been unavoidable in the wake of the slaughter of the War of
the Last Alliance, and Thranduil's spiritual quest (and the dealing of
the aftermath, with no God he could argue with) felt genuine. This
story made me respect what the character had to endure even more than
I had after just reading canon, and it really added a new dimension to
the Mirkwood Elves for me.

Title: Emmaus · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama: Vignette · ID: 636
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 18:28:31
It seems that every one who writes Gondor (except possibly me -- knock
on wood) has written their version of Faramir being called back from
the Black Breath. Which makes it a tough spot to write, if you want to
seem like you're saying something new. But Dwim does that here, making
his wanderings seem almost peaceful at first, then mixing just enough
dark dreams in to accentuate how much he had to lose. The stone with
the seashell fossil was a touch of genius in particular, and a great
way to touch on how much the world had changed since Numenor's
destruction.

Title: Fissures · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Dwarves · ID: 804
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 18:38:43
I can think of maybe three authors who really "get" dwarves on a
fundamental level and write them well, and Thundera is certainly on
this list. In "Fissures" she shows her skill both with turns of
phrases like [nothing he could put his hammer on] and with the way
certain cultural factors like the importance of heritage and the way
Otin thinks in metaphors of masonry. No one could mistake this for a
story about men, elves, or hobbit if a few names and canon details
were changed. Which is what I like so much about all of Thundera's
writing, but it shows through particularly well here.

Characterization aside, though, this is a really good piece of
writing. I particularly liked the ending, which has just enough
closure to keep me from thinking I've wasted my time reading the
piece, but is also open-ended enough that the conflict transcends the
single scenario the piece examines. It made me think that Otin will be
looking over Gimli in the coming years, and so felt like a natural
peak at a life that began before the first word and continues on after
the last. Which gave the piece a very integral feeling. I liked it.


Title: Farewell · Author: Vilwarin · Genres: Drama: With Aragorn · ID: 706
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 18:41:04
This is an interesting piece. I particularly liked that it was from
Halbarad's POV--that felt fresh, and you captured him nicely.

Title: Sometime Ever After · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 363
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 18:42:00
Ai, this was a good read! As with most of Dwim's stories I find myself
completely sucked into her world. Her writing style creates a very
vibrant scene, as when she writes [Valar, merciful Valar, someone
anyone Niennapleasesomethinginthisworld MUST. KNOW. MERCY, AI ERU--!]
-- that was more powerful than any description of what Aragorn was
physically feeling could have been, and made me ache for Aragorn. A
similar thing happened when she slips into the dreamworld (if it can
truly be called that). The scenes felt so genuine and rich, it was
like I was seeing them play out before my eyes.

Yet Dwim's beautiful writing isn't the only thing I liked about this
story. The scenes with Aragorn and Halbarad that we see tell the
reader about the strong bond Aragorn and Halbarad had, one that even
seems to transcend death. It is almost as if Aragorn was living with a
ghost, who was just as much a part of his life in the early Fourth Age
as Arwen or Faramir were. I know that feeling, and Dwim captures it
beautifully. It seems perfectly natural to think of Halbarad
baby-sitting Aragorn's daughter, and I imagine Aragorn in his
hallucinating state would be all too willing to accept the
authenticity of the moment. It's a horrible injustice that Halbarad
should not have continued on living -- and I think it speaks to
Aragorn's and Halbarad's closeness that even several years into the
Fourth Age, he should dream Halbarad into his life.

Really nice writing, Dwim -- as I said, the read was beautiful.


Title: Celeborn's Trees · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 514
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 18:50:14
Ah, lovely little moment! Celeborn shines through admirably here; I
can see why Galadriel would fall in love with him.

Title: Enter the Fourth Age, Hastily · Author: Dwimordene · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 140
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 18:52:09
There's something about Treebeard that always fascinates the author in
me, and perhaps in true Entish fashion I should not try to simplify
that something into hasty words. But you hit it on the head in this
drabble. Funny that a piece about the lon-winded Ents told in just 100
words could do that, but there is an almost Zenish quality that seems
to fit Treebeard's character very well here. It really "worked" for
me. And the ending of that single word, [peace], seemed to sum up the
drabble perfectly. Excellent character writing here!

Title: Deadly Fate · Author: TrekQueen · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Fingolfin · ID: 282
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 18:52:38
This is such a huge, mythic moment in Tolkien's history; you made it
seem real, and the sacrifice tangible. Good work.

Title: A Thankless Task · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Drama: Youth ·
ID: 49
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 19:00:39
This is a nice interlude. It seemed very like Boromir not to want to
do "women's work", and Nanny's practical wisdom shown through well.

Title: Descent · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Early Third Age: 1-2850
TA · ID: 632
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 19:00:55
This is a delightful little interlude, developing a lot of the world
of Gondor during the Kinslaying. Even though there are all original
characters, it is wonderfully tied to the politics of
book-canon!Gondor. The names in particular were foreign enough to make
it clear that both boys were not native to Gondor. I really liked this
slice of life.

Title: The Undiscovered Country · Author: Wimsey · Genres: Drama:
Elves in Later Ages · ID: 715
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-29 19:01:17
This is an interesting look at Arwen's grief. You fleshed out what she
must have felt, and made me really feel sorry for her.

Title: The Return · Author: mistycracraft · Races: Men: Eriador or
Rivendell · ID: 90
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-29 19:10:49
When the new King and his lady wife come to the village on their
progress through their lands, Edric the tavernkeeper looks to see if
his Ranger friend Strider is in the King's train but fails to see him.
Yet that evening Strider does come to the inn to have his second bowl
of stew at the place, and spends some time speaking with Edric of the
years that have intervened since they first met when Edric was yet a
boy. Oh, he's been a year married, and his bride has seen to it his
wardrobe is now filled with well cut and constructed and becoming
garments.

Then comes the wife and the realization hits--the King Elessar is Strider.

A wonderful encounter charmingly told.

Title: Prince of Winter · Author: jastaelf · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 93
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-29 19:16:35
I am unfamiliar with the "Dark Leaf" arc, but I was easily able to
decipher prior events with but a few well-blended references - a
difficult task that JastaElf carried off well. The sole uncertainty
was just how old Legolas was, but I understood the important point: He
was a very young Elf, possibly an adolescent.

The premise is intriguing, as is his carefully constructed ancestry.
They contribute much to explaining Legolas' "difference" from other
Elves, pointing forward to LotR. In fact, given how little Tolkien
stated on Legolas, I'm not even sure the story has to be considered
AU, but rather a fascinating extrapolation.

The story itself has very good descriptions of Elven rituals and
excellent characterizations and interactions, especially
Celeborn-Legolas. I particularly loved patient, fatherly, magnificent,
sexy Celeborn, and the chemistry between him and Galadriel.

Title: The Blue Book of Bilbo Baggins, or, Tales of the Forbidden
Silmarillion · Author: Gandalfs apprentice/Greywing CoAuthors ·
Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 195
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-29 19:18:31
This is a very original retelling of the "myths" and stories of Arda,
at turns both touching and extremely funny. They resonate well with
our own real world myths, without being mere copies of them.

The introductions at the beginning of each chapter are works of art in
themselves, capturing wonderful characterizations of some of our
favorite LotRs folks, and leading into the tales perfectly. Even the
[Notes from the Translator] had me in stitches. The transmutation from
the [Blue Book] into [Laws and Customs of the Eldar] felt particularly
inspired.

Title: Stopping by Woods · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 19
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-29 19:19:37
A wonderful working together of a journey by the aging Steward Faramir
with Robert Frost's famous poem, as Faramir finds that in stopping by
a waypost he has been following a part of the path taken so long ago
by his brother. Soon enough, he realizes, he will need to follow the
path that will at last lead to a reunion with Boromir; but for tonight
he will go into the village and drink a cup in memory to many.

Very nice interweaving of themes.

Title: Resurrection · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 265
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-29 19:20:38
I've lost count of the number of times that I've read this now, but it
still brings misty tears to my eyes with the wondrous mixture of
uncertainty and sadness and pure, light joy it contains. It's
certainly become one of my favorite stories, AU or not, for its moving
themes of death and life and the steadying call of duty and friendship.

For one, the portrayal of Halbarad's near-death experience is just...
exquisite. Somehow the perfect blend of word choice and sentence
structure and length, and it feels as though I am sharing this
horrific experience with Halbarad, understanding at least something of
the terrible hold that it has on him - alive, and yet not really
belonging to life. The symbolism of the [One All In Grey] (Mandos) is
used very well here to represent Halbarad's closeness to death, as is
the references to the transparency, filminess, insubstantialness of
himself and the world around to show his semi-living state.

I was hoping for Aragorn's return as much as Halbarad and the people
were, though not for his kingship, of course - but for what he means
to Halbarad. The deep and easy relationship is so well done, even
though shown only sparingly, exactly as I'd see two such longtime
friends and comrades sharing. And Aragorn, of course, knows just what
Halbarad needs to anchor him to reality and living - the call to duty,
to friendship and those who *need* him.

The dream at the end was particularly beautiful, and left me with the
strangest and most wonderful mix of joy and bittersweet sympathy. The
Return of Halbarad will probably be no more easy than the Return of
the King, but I greet it just as happily.

Msg# 8255

Spoilers Posted by LizaLlinos@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 6:17:24 Topic ID# 8255
Hi Everyone

I'm filled with admiration for all you organised people who have done so
many reviews already! Now I am back from our ScotMoot (and once my badsickness
has cleared up) I shall be making a start on my own.

Could I make one teensy request tho? I don't know if this has been mentioned
before, but if when reviewing you reiterate part of the story, could
reviewers please try not to put spoilers into the review? I think this applies
especially where there is a twist or a surprise ending which is what makes the
story stand out.

Many people might be drawn to read and review from seeing an existing review
and having spoilers in them can really water down the impact of the story on
a new reader.

Hope this is okay to mention.

Cheers
Liza



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Msg# 8256

Disappearing reviews Posted by ejackamack@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 6:32:00 Topic ID# 8256
Twice now, I've written a review, previewed it, hit the button to save it
and it has vanished into the ether. Instead of getting the screen telling me
it's been saved, I just get a blank white screen. When I go back to check my
reviews I've written, it's not on the list. I haven't written many so far,
and this is 2 of the 9, which to me is a pretty big percentage. One of them
was a ten-pointer, too! It's rather discouraging to go to the trouble of
reviewing if you don't know if it will actually save or not, and I'm not really
good at remembering what I wrote the second time around. I guess I'll just
have to copy and paste from a Word document instead of writing it on the site
proper, so I can work around the glitch. Anyone else having trouble like this?

Isabeau



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Msg# 8257

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by Barbara Rich October 12, 2007 - 7:37:09 Topic ID# 8256
Last year I had that problem several times. I think a few were me
forgetting to hit "save" on the preview page--but not always. At any rate,
this year, I'm pasting in most all my reviews to avoid the problem.

The other thing that also happens is when you go back to the original
"browse nominations" page, it will still say "enter new review" until you
hit "refresh", and if you click on it, it will be just as if you didn't
write the review. That also took me a while to figure out.

Dreamflower


On 10/12/07, ejackamack@aol.com <ejackamack@aol.com> wrote:
>
> Twice now, I've written a review, previewed it, hit the button to save
> it
> and it has vanished into the ether. Instead of getting the screen telling
> me
> it's been saved, I just get a blank white screen. When I go back to check
> my
> reviews I've written, it's not on the list. I haven't written many so far,
>
> and this is 2 of the 9, which to me is a pretty big percentage. One of
> them
> was a ten-pointer, too! It's rather discouraging to go to the trouble of
> reviewing if you don't know if it will actually save or not, and I'm not
> really
> good at remembering what I wrote the second time around. I guess I'll just
>
> have to copy and paste from a Word document instead of writing it on the
> site
> proper, so I can work around the glitch. Anyone else having trouble like
> this?
>
> Isabeau
>
> ************************************** See what's new at
> http://www.aol.com
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>
>
>


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Msg# 8258

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by araneltook October 12, 2007 - 7:58:09 Topic ID# 8256
Hi Isabeau,

Do you remember if you had been logged in for a long time (2+ hours) while writing the
review, but not clicking on any other buttons or going to any other pages? It may be that
you were logged out while writing your review. If you were just typing in the text box, the
system would not pick that up as "activity" and may have logged you out (we have an
automatic log-out after two hours of inactivity for security).

I'll try and replicate the problem. In the meantime, if it happens again could you send us
the URL of the blank page? (That goes for everyone--if you get a blank page on the MEFA
site, please send us the URL).

Sorry for all the troubles!

Aranel

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, ejackamack@... wrote:
>
> Twice now, I've written a review, previewed it, hit the button to save it
> and it has vanished into the ether. Instead of getting the screen telling me
> it's been saved, I just get a blank white screen. When I go back to check my
> reviews I've written, it's not on the list. I haven't written many so far,
> and this is 2 of the 9, which to me is a pretty big percentage. One of them
> was a ten-pointer, too! It's rather discouraging to go to the trouble of
> reviewing if you don't know if it will actually save or not, and I'm not really
> good at remembering what I wrote the second time around. I guess I'll just
> have to copy and paste from a Word document instead of writing it on the site
> proper, so I can work around the glitch. Anyone else having trouble like this?
>
> Isabeau
>
>
>
> ************************************** See what's new at http://www.aol.com
>
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>

Msg# 8259

Re: Spoilers Posted by Marta October 12, 2007 - 8:39:55 Topic ID# 8255
Hi Liza,

Spoilers are always difficult to handle. On the one hand I know how
hard it is to to write good long reviews, and putting a limit on what
people can discuss will only make that longer. But on the other hand,
I know that other reviewers may see the review and I don't want them
spoiled. (Or people who don't vote but read nominated stories on their
own, like Tari.)

So I don't want to say that people shouldn't say spoilers, but I am
sympathetic. If you think it would help I can write up a FAQ about
spoilers, and suggest that people put up a notice at the top of the
review (within the square brackets used for quotes so it's not counted
toward the total number of characters) that the review contains
spoilers. That way people could decide for themselves whether to
review. The other thing I can suggest is that people use the "hidden"
option for reviews containing spoilers, so they're not visible until
the end of the awards. That won't help people reading outside of an
award year, but it would mean reviewers aren't seeing those spoilers
until after the year's awards is over.

Unfortunately, it's really impossible to police this, but I'm happy to
encourage people to at least warn you that a spoiler's coming. Would
that be helpful?

Marta

On 10/12/07, LizaLlinos@aol.com <LizaLlinos@aol.com> wrote:
>
>
>
>
>
>
> Hi Everyone
>
> I'm filled with admiration for all you organised people who have done so
> many reviews already! Now I am back from our ScotMoot (and once my badsickness
> has cleared up) I shall be making a start on my own.
>
> Could I make one teensy request tho? I don't know if this has been mentioned
> before, but if when reviewing you reiterate part of the story, could
> reviewers please try not to put spoilers into the review? I think this applies
> especially where there is a twist or a surprise ending which is what makes the
> story stand out.
>
> Many people might be drawn to read and review from seeing an existing review
> and having spoilers in them can really water down the impact of the story on
> a new reader.
>
> Hope this is okay to mention.
>
> Cheers
> Liza
>
>

Msg# 8260

Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by BLJean@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 10:03:02 Topic ID# 8260
I couldn't finalize any more reviews last night (I'd saved them as "hidden" over the course of the week and planned to finalize them Thursday), so I went in this morning first thing to finalize a bunch. So folks ought to be seeing them *next* Friday...

Just wanted to chime in on the long-versus-short discussion, albeit belated. I don't know why it is I can be so long-winded when writing out of my imagination, but when writing facts each word comes like pulling teeth. The reviews I've managed so far are all short, 1 to 3 points, but the words are very carefully chosen at least. And the three-pointers are definitely the stories that had the most impact when I read them. (And I liked the 1 pointers or I would not have left any feedback at all.)

So if you are wordy in your feedback, you can arrange it so that your favs get 10 points and your least favs get 6, but if you're not wordy, your reviews still count as votes, and you can weight them in the same manner. If someone's not going to read my reviews because they're short and pithy, well, that's their choice. But though my feedback doesn't have a lot of words to it, I think it hits the high points.

(Perhaps it has something to do with the fact that I've tackled drabbles to review first, and like someone else mentioned, I have trouble writing reviews longer than what I'm reviewing.)
?
*********

Liza, good point about spoilers. Is it a spoiler to say, "Nice surprise ending" or that the ending took one by surprise, or to mention the fact that there's a plot twist in the feedback? I apologize if so, for I've used those words in a couple of reviews before reading your post.

**********

As to negative reviews, I don't see much point in writing them. I have the impression that this is not a forum for concrit - might be better to email the author for that. Unless of course you absolutely love the story and don't mind bumping up the point value. And certainly, if you absolutely hate a story, you'll give it fewer points by saying nothing.

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Msg# 8261

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by araneltook October 12, 2007 - 11:19:30 Topic ID# 8256
Hi Isabeau,

Another question for you: Were you able to go right back to the MEFA site after you got
the blank page? I'm also wondering if there was a problem with the server.

Aranel

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, ejackamack@... wrote:
>
> Twice now, I've written a review, previewed it, hit the button to save it
> and it has vanished into the ether. Instead of getting the screen telling me
> it's been saved, I just get a blank white screen. When I go back to check my
> reviews I've written, it's not on the list. I haven't written many so far,
> and this is 2 of the 9, which to me is a pretty big percentage. One of them
> was a ten-pointer, too! It's rather discouraging to go to the trouble of
> reviewing if you don't know if it will actually save or not, and I'm not really
> good at remembering what I wrote the second time around. I guess I'll just
> have to copy and paste from a Word document instead of writing it on the site
> proper, so I can work around the glitch. Anyone else having trouble like this?
>
> Isabeau
>
>
>
> ************************************** See what's new at http://www.aol.com
>
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>

Msg# 8262

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by ejackamack@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 11:23:24 Topic ID# 8256
In a message dated 10/12/2007 8:37:40 A.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
aelfwina@gmail.com writes:

The other thing that also happens is when you go back to the original
"browse nominations" page, it will still say "enter new review" until you
hit "refresh", and if you click on it, it will be just as if you didn't
write the review. That also took me a while to figure out.




I thought something might happen like that, so I went back to the actual
place where you read the reviews you've written and they weren't there.

Cut and paste definitely seems to be the way to go. I suppose I was
due-don't remember it happening to me last year.

Isabeau



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Msg# 8263

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by ejackamack@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 11:25:44 Topic ID# 8256
In a message dated 10/12/2007 8:58:34 A.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
araneltook@gmail.com writes:

Do you remember if you had been logged in for a long time (2+ hours) while
writing the
review, but not clicking on any other buttons or going to any other pages?
It may be that
you were logged out while writing your review. If you were just typing in
the text box, the
system would not pick that up as "activity" and may have logged you out (we
have an
automatic log-out after two hours of inactivity for security).



No, I'd only been on for forty-five minutes at the time, and I would read a
piece, then review, read, then review. So I don't think I was logged out.

I'll get that URL for you if it happens to me again.

Isabeau



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Msg# 8264

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by ejackamack@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 11:28:24 Topic ID# 8256
In a message dated 10/12/2007 12:19:53 P.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
araneltook@gmail.com writes:

Another question for you: Were you able to go right back to the MEFA site
after you got
the blank page? I'm also wondering if there was a problem with the server.




No, there wasn't a problem with that at all, I was able to go to other parts
of the site immediately with no problem.

I'm on dial-up, but I don't think it was a timing-out issue either-the white
page would appear almost instantaneously. I thought I had previewed them
before I tried to save, but I suppose it's possible I forgot, in which case
this is probably just a tempest in a teapot.

Thanks for your help, Aranel-sorry to be a bother.

Isabeau



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Msg# 8265

Re: Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by ejackamack@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 11:30:47 Topic ID# 8260
In a message dated 10/12/2007 11:03:22 A.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
BLJean@aol.com writes:

(Perhaps it has something to do with the fact that I've tackled drabbles to
review first, and like someone else mentioned, I have trouble writing reviews
longer than what I'm reviewing.)



I'll third that. I do write longer reviews, but it's for longer stuff. I
can't muster up more than 3 points so far for a drabble.

Isabeau



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Msg# 8266

Re: Spoilers Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 11:31:42 Topic ID# 8255
Sympathize with the spoiler point, although I admit I have been quilty a
time or two myself. (Kind of like the New York Times book review--hey, who needs
the book when the reviewer has given me the entire plotline!) I'll try to be
more careful myself. How about a little teaser now and then and not a
fullscale spoiler?



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Msg# 8267

Re: Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 11:41:01 Topic ID# 8260
I will be a heretic and admit that I don't think any drabble deserves more
than a 3 or 4, if a fine novel, research piece or a well-crafted long story
can only get a 10. (I make exceptions for drabble collections that are
interrelated and show grow and development of character and plot.)



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Msg# 8268

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by Imhiriel October 12, 2007 - 12:03:11 Topic ID# 8260
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, heartofoshun@... wrote:
>
> I will be a heretic and admit that I don't think any drabble
deserves more
> than a 3 or 4, if a fine novel, research piece or a well-crafted
long story
> can only get a 10. (I make exceptions for drabble collections that are
> interrelated and show grow and development of character and plot.)

I don't agree. I think a well-done drabble can merit just as many
points as any other story. I admit it is more difficult to write (and
I was very happy when I managed it for the first time), but I don't
think one should make a difference between a drabble and other forms
of stories.

What do you do then about poems, who are mostly also rather short (to
take two extreme examples, haikus or tankas)? Do you make a difference
between a 200-word drabble and a 213-word-"other ficlet"?

I just don't see where the length of a story has anything to do with
the points it "deserves".

Imhiriel

Msg# 8269

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by Imhiriel October 12, 2007 - 12:07:37 Topic ID# 8260
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Imhiriel" <Larys.HMF@...> wrote:
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, heartofoshun@ wrote:
> >
> > I will be a heretic and admit that I don't think any drabble
> deserves more
> > than a 3 or 4, if a fine novel, research piece or a well-crafted
> long story
> > can only get a 10. (I make exceptions for drabble collections
that are
> > interrelated and show grow and development of character and plot.)
>
> I don't agree. I think a well-done drabble can merit just as many
> points as any other story. I admit it is more difficult to write (and
> I was very happy when I managed it for the first time), but I don't
> think one should make a difference between a drabble and other forms
> of stories.

Addendum: I meant: manage to write a 10-point review for a drabble.

>
> What do you do then about poems, who are mostly also rather short (to
> take two extreme examples, haikus or tankas)? Do you make a difference
> between a 200-word drabble and a 213-word-"other ficlet"?
>
> I just don't see where the length of a story has anything to do with
> the points it "deserves".

Msg# 8270

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by araneltook October 12, 2007 - 12:48:49 Topic ID# 8256
Hi Isabeau,

Oh, no, you aren't being a bother. We need to know when the site isn't working. :-)

When you first enter a review, you only have the option of Previewing at first, so you
wouldn't be given the option to save until after you click "Preview this Review" and go to
the page to preview and edit your review. I'm assuming this is where it's messing up, after
clicking that first preview? Or did you get to the preview page and it's messing up when
you try to save?

Could I get your system information from you? If you don't want to post it on the Yahoo
group, you can email it to techsupport@mefawards.net. We need what browser you're
using and your operating system, with version numbers if you know them (e.g. "Safari
3.0.3 on Mac OS X 10.4.10"). Also, are you using AOL or a similar service to connect to the
internet?

Thanks,
Aranel

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, ejackamack@... wrote:
>
>
> In a message dated 10/12/2007 12:19:53 P.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
> araneltook@... writes:
>
> Another question for you: Were you able to go right back to the MEFA site
> after you got
> the blank page? I'm also wondering if there was a problem with the server.
>
>
>
>
> No, there wasn't a problem with that at all, I was able to go to other parts
> of the site immediately with no problem.
>
> I'm on dial-up, but I don't think it was a timing-out issue either-the white
> page would appear almost instantaneously. I thought I had previewed them
> before I tried to save, but I suppose it's possible I forgot, in which case
> this is probably just a tempest in a teapot.
>
> Thanks for your help, Aranel-sorry to be a bother.
>
> Isabeau
>
>
>
> ************************************** See what's new at http://www.aol.com
>
>
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>

Msg# 8271

Re: Spoilers Posted by Liza October 12, 2007 - 13:10:14 Topic ID# 8255
Hi Marta et al

I know it's hard not to put any spoilers in when reveiwing a story -
in fact probably damn near impossible. And Lin, I think it's fine to
say there's a twist in the tale etc. What I'm referring to is
actually telling readers how the story resolves. Just to say, "Oh I
liked the surprise at the end" is not really giving away what
happens, but there are quite a few reviews that actually give
specific details of how the story ends.

I'd really appreciate it (and I suspect others will too) if
reviewers could either, as Marta suggests, put [SPOILER ALERT] in
brackets or at least try not to give away the the ending, such
as, "they all lived happily ever after" or "they all died in
misery" - you know, the kind of detail that actually makes you
go "Aha!" or "Oh no!" as you read the final paragraph!

Ta muchly!
Liza


--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Marta <melayton@...> wrote:
>
> Hi Liza,
>
> Spoilers are always difficult to handle. On the one hand I know how
> hard it is to to write good long reviews, and putting a limit on
what
> people can discuss will only make that longer. But on the other
hand,
> I know that other reviewers may see the review and I don't want
them
> spoiled. (Or people who don't vote but read nominated stories on
their
> own, like Tari.)
>
> So I don't want to say that people shouldn't say spoilers, but I am
> sympathetic. If you think it would help I can write up a FAQ about
> spoilers, and suggest that people put up a notice at the top of the
> review (within the square brackets used for quotes so it's not
counted
> toward the total number of characters) that the review contains
> spoilers. That way people could decide for themselves whether to
> review. The other thing I can suggest is that people use
the "hidden"
> option for reviews containing spoilers, so they're not visible
until
> the end of the awards. That won't help people reading outside of an
> award year, but it would mean reviewers aren't seeing those
spoilers
> until after the year's awards is over.
>
> Unfortunately, it's really impossible to police this, but I'm
happy to
> encourage people to at least warn you that a spoiler's coming.
Would
> that be helpful?
>
> Marta
>
> On 10/12/07, LizaLlinos@... <LizaLlinos@...> wrote:
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > Hi Everyone
> >
> > I'm filled with admiration for all you organised people who
have done so
> > many reviews already! Now I am back from our ScotMoot (and once
my badsickness
> > has cleared up) I shall be making a start on my own.
> >
> > Could I make one teensy request tho? I don't know if this has
been mentioned
> > before, but if when reviewing you reiterate part of the story,
could
> > reviewers please try not to put spoilers into the review? I
think this applies
> > especially where there is a twist or a surprise ending which is
what makes the
> > story stand out.
> >
> > Many people might be drawn to read and review from seeing an
existing review
> > and having spoilers in them can really water down the impact of
the story on
> > a new reader.
> >
> > Hope this is okay to mention.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Liza
> >
> >
>

Msg# 8272

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 13:16:33 Topic ID# 8260
I absolutely respect your right to that opinion but could not disagree with you more strongly.?Although there is a?vague similarity to the?discipline involved in writing a drabble in comparison to a?poem, poetry?places far?different?and greater?demands upon the writer than any drabble, however moving or carefully crafted. I really refuse to accept, for myself, that a novel or long story,?which an author has spent months to years working on and thinking about, outlining, plotting, correcting, researching extensively,?is equal to a drabble that takes, at most, overnight to produce. I?do make an exception for authentic 100-word drabbles running against other drabbles (then I would rate them one against another and score accordingly), but?often double drabbles, ficlets, etc.,?are?placed in categories where they are compared to novels and other long pieces. I am careful and serious when I write drabbles or ficlets, but cannot begin to express the difference in labor, consideration and sheer?back-breaking, soul-wrenching labor?required to produce?my longer pieces?versus the others. Sorry. I know I get all too passionate about the question of writing.

-----Original Message-----
From: Imhiriel <Larys.HMF@web.de>
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Fri, 12 Oct 2007 1:03 pm
Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Long versus short reviews






--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, heartofoshun@... wrote:
>
> I will be a heretic and admit that I don't think any drabble
deserves more
> than a 3 or 4, if a fine novel, research piece or a well-crafted
long story
> can only get a 10. (I make exceptions for drabble collections that are
> interrelated and show grow and development of character and plot.)

I don't agree. I think a well-done drabble can merit just as many
points as any other story. I admit it is more difficult to write (and
I was very happy when I managed it for the first time), but I don't
think one should make a difference between a drabble and other forms
of stories.

What do you do then about poems, who are mostly also rather short (to
take two extreme examples, haikus or tankas)? Do you make a difference
between a 200-word drabble and a 213-word-"other ficlet"?

I just don't see where the length of a story has anything to do with
the points it "deserves".

Imhiriel





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Msg# 8273

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard October 12, 2007 - 14:07:44 Topic ID# 8260
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, heartofoshun@... wrote:
>
> I absolutely respect your right to that opinion but could not
> disagree with you more strongly. Although there is a vague
> similarity to the discipline involved in writing a drabble in
> comparison to a poem, poetry places far different and
> greater demands upon the writer than any drabble, however moving or
> carefully crafted. I really refuse to accept, for myself, that a
> novel or long story, which an author has spent months to years
> working on and thinking about, outlining, plotting, correcting,
> researching extensively, is equal to a drabble that takes, at most,
> overnight to produce.

Wow! Well I must be a different drabblist because some drabbles can be
stubborn as hell, add rebellious muses to the mix and cannot be
written just overnight... Every person is just different regarding
this, that's something to take into account. I sometimes can write a
vignette or a short story faster than some drabble (series) :) (I
actually have one drabble series waiting to be completed for months
and it is just hanging on the last drabble in the series, so I know
this can happen...) I daresay that drabbles can also involve a huge
amount of researching, plotting and thinking it over before it gets
written. The same applies for reviewing I guess. What works for one
person, doesn't have to be the same to the others... :)

> Sorry. I know I get all too passionate about the question of
> writing.

I know :) Each to their own. Want some cookies?

Rhapsody

Msg# 8274

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by LizaLlinos@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 14:38:53 Topic ID# 8260
Long? Short? It's all art - innit?
Verse this short!
Really ought
To be taught
To thwart
Or support
The thought
That aught
Can distort
Scores of the sort
That make you snort!

Verbosity however, has copious validity
Of enhancing the writer's talent and ability!
It displays profound wit and versatility
And raises their art to the heights of nobility.
So please don't disparage the acceptability
Of length over brevity with any hostility!
(We writers are fraught with such fragility)
Accept, I beg, the distinct possibility
That longness and shortness can find compatibility!
Succinctness may be lauded for its affordability
Whilst length is applauded for deductibility!

Sorry 'bout that - but I've been ill.

Liza


In a message dated 12/10/2007 20:07:59 GMT Standard Time,
rhapsodybard@gmail.com writes:

> Sorry. I know I get all too passionate about the question of
> writing.

I know :) Each to their own. Want some cookies?

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Msg# 8275

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 14:41:14 Topic ID# 8260
Hey, yes, Rhaposody, I'll take a cookie! I am not taking about extrensive series of drabbles or mixtures of drabbles and ficlets. But the single drabble. I can change a word or two in drabble for up to a year or more, but it is not in the same universe as writing a novella. But then nothing is easy for me to write. I will admit that sometimes it is harder to write 100 words than, say, 350 on the same subject, plot and characters. But harder to write than an average length short story of 3-10,000 words--not for me and I get asked to read them on a regular basis at an alarming rate. "Hey, I just wrote this. Will you take a look?" Not months--but an hour or less since I last heard from the person!


-----Original Message-----
From: rhapsody_the_bard <rhapsodybard@gmail.com>
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Fri, 12 Oct 2007 3:07 pm
Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Long versus short reviews






--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, heartofoshun@... wrote:
>
> I absolutely respect your right to that opinion but could not
> disagree with you more strongly. Although there is a vague
> similarity to the discipline involved in writing a drabble in
> comparison to a poem, poetry places far different and
> greater demands upon the writer than any drabble, however moving or
> carefully crafted. I really refuse to accept, for myself, that a
> novel or long story, which an author has spent months to years
> working on and thinking about, outlining, plotting, correcting,
> researching extensively, is equal to a drabble that takes, at most,
> overnight to produce.

Wow! Well I must be a different drabblist because some drabbles can be
stubborn as hell, add rebellious muses to the mix and cannot be
written just overnight... Every person is just different regarding
this, that's something to take into account. I sometimes can write a
vignette or a short story faster than some drabble (series) :) (I
actually have one drabble series waiting to be completed for months
and it is just hanging on the last drabble in the series, so I know
this can happen...) I daresay that drabbles can also involve a huge
amount of researching, plotting and thinking it over before it gets
written. The same applies for reviewing I guess. What works for one
person, doesn't have to be the same to the others... :)

> Sorry. I know I get all too passionate about the question of
> writing.

I know :) Each to their own. Want some cookies?

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Msg# 8276

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by Imhiriel October 12, 2007 - 14:59:26 Topic ID# 8260
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, heartofoshun@... wrote:
>
> I absolutely respect your right to that opinion but could not
disagree with you more strongly.?Although there is a?vague similarity
to the?discipline involved in writing a drabble in comparison to
a?poem, poetry?places far?different?and greater?demands upon the
writer than any drabble, however moving or carefully crafted. I really
refuse to accept, for myself, that a novel or long story,?which an
author has spent months to years working on and thinking about,
outlining, plotting, correcting, researching extensively,?is equal to
a drabble that takes, at most, overnight to produce.

I really don't want to get into a debate with you (and please pass
Rhapsody's cookies, I'm feeling a bit peckish at the moment <g>), but
it seems we are really seeing things very differently.

Just as Rhapsody, I often work longer and harder on my genuine
drabbles, where I have to weigh every single word doubly and
threefold, than I do on longer stories without any word constraints.

Of course not all my drabbles take that long, but the same is true for
a few of my longer stories which were written relatively quickly. So
for me there is little difference concerning the thought, work,
research and time involved in whether I'm writing drabbles or other
stories.

Imhiriel

Msg# 8277

Re: More MEFA Reviews chat & question Posted by Nieriel Raina October 12, 2007 - 15:08:09 Topic ID# 8229
I haven't had a chance to jump in here yet, so here goes. *waves enthusiastically* Hi everybody! This is my first year being nominated for MEFAs and reviewing and while I am currently behind in my reviewing, I am really enjoying the stories! I've actually been late reading some of my favorite authors' updates due to reading MEFA stories! It's a wonderful contest and I think it's great so many of you volunteer your time to to run/nominate/review for it!

I wanted to say, I'm glad you post the reviews like this on the group, because seeing other peoples reviews has helped me with writing my own.(I admit to being terrible at writing reviews. I never know what to say!) I was unsure exactly how it all worked for so long, I put off reviewing initially. But to see exactly how others review and the points they hit on helps immensly in knowing what to comment on in the stories I am reviewing. Thanks!

Marta,

>*grins* I wasn't nearly as big of a Thranduil fan before some fantastic
>MEFA stories over the years convinced me that yes, he really is a
>delightful character.

I wasn't a big Thranduil fan to start either, until I came across the MEFAs last year, and though I didn't actively participate, I found some wonderful stories (I think I'm still reading some of the nominations for last year that I saved the links for *grin*) and authors and ever since, the Elvenking has had a special place in my heart. He is such a complex character, that he is intriguing when done well. I was so pleased one of my Thranduil fics was nominated. *waves at Rhapsody*


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Msg# 8278

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 15:10:33 Topic ID# 8260
OK. Sorry, again. I'll drop it. Nothing is quick for me. It's all like sweating blood. (The longer it is the more blood I lose.)


-----Original Message-----
From: Imhiriel <Larys.HMF@web.de>
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Fri, 12 Oct 2007 3:59 pm
Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Long versus short reviews






--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, heartofoshun@... wrote:
>
> I absolutely respect your right to that opinion but could not
disagree with you more strongly.?Although there is a?vague similarity
to the?discipline involved in writing a drabble in comparison to
a?poem, poetry?places far?different?and greater?demands upon the
writer than any drabble, however moving or carefully crafted. I really
refuse to accept, for myself, that a novel or long story,?which an
author has spent months to years working on and thinking about,
outlining, plotting, correcting, researching extensively,?is equal to
a drabble that takes, at most, overnight to produce.

I really don't want to get into a debate with you (and please pass
Rhapsody's cookies, I'm feeling a bit peckish at the moment <g>), but
it seems we are really seeing things very differently.

Just as Rhapsody, I often work longer and harder on my genuine
drabbles, where I have to weigh every single word doubly and
threefold, than I do on longer stories without any word constraints.

Of course not all my drabbles take that long, but the same is true for
a few of my longer stories which were written relatively quickly. So
for me there is little difference concerning the thought, work,
research and time involved in whether I'm writing drabbles or other
stories.

Imhiriel





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Msg# 8279

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by Súlriel of Menegroth October 12, 2007 - 15:11:54 Topic ID# 8260
Priceless!!!!!

On 10/12/07, LizaLlinos@aol.com <LizaLlinos@aol.com> wrote:
>
>
>
> Long? Short? It's all art - innit?
> Verse this short!
> Really ought
> To be taught
> To thwart
> Or support
> The thought
> That aught
> Can distort
> Scores of the sort
> That make you snort!
>
> Verbosity however, has copious validity
> Of enhancing the writer's talent and ability!
> It displays profound wit and versatility
> And raises their art to the heights of nobility.
> So please don't disparage the acceptability
> Of length over brevity with any hostility!
> (We writers are fraught with such fragility)
> Accept, I beg, the distinct possibility
> That longness and shortness can find compatibility!
> Succinctness may be lauded for its affordability
> Whilst length is applauded for deductibility!
>
> Sorry 'bout that - but I've been ill.
>
> Liza
>
> .
>
>
>


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Msg# 8280

debate on long vs. short reviews (and forms) Posted by Marta October 12, 2007 - 15:26:39 Topic ID# 8280
Hey guys,

I've been reading the debate people have been having on whether it is
important to try to make your reviews long with interest, though I
haven't been commenting on every post.

And on that note I'm going to give my say on all of this. But I won't
go on forever, I promise.

LENGTH OF REVIEW

For the most part I take a live and let live approach to reviewing,
because I *do* want reviewers to enjoy what they're spending so much
time on. It shouldn't become a chore.

So when it comes to reviews, I'll never say "reviewers who write
points in the 6-8 point range are better than those who write in the
2-4 point range." Because that's not true. Each people have their own
length that comes naturally to them.

I do think it's important that when you write a review you givesome
thought to the length you're writing. For some people (authors and
reviewers), giving feedback is the most important thing about these
awards. And that's a laudable goal. But for other people the
competition really is important. For this reason it's important to
consider how many points you're giving a story. You don't have to wear
yourself out reaching ten points if four is what comes most easily to
you; but it is important to save those four-pointers for stories that
are really outstanding. Certainly if you write reviews that range the
whole gamut of possible points you want to make sure you don't give a
eight-point review to something that was good but not great, whereas a
truly spectacular piece gets three. For a lot of people the results of
these awards matter. So - while I don't want people to stress over
counting every character - it isn't something I want people to just
disregard.

That said - don't worry about it *too* much. Just do the best you can,
without letting MEFA reviewing become a stress.

LENGTH OF STORIES

On ficlets vs. novels: I'm not going to get into this debate, though
it's fun to watch. :-D For the MEFAs it's important to remember that a
213-word ficlet and a 70,000 word epic novel can end up competing
against each other. We don't categorize based on length, except that
stories that meet some *exact* word count (true drabbles - 100 words
exactly - and drabble variants, like double drabbles or series of
drabbles) compete together. It's not because they're short, but
because they have a specific form. There may not be as many
restrictions on them as a haiku or sonnet but drabbles really are
challenging to write well.

If you find yourself having a hard time writing long reviews for short
pieces, that really is okay for drabbles because they are all
competing together. But I think it's important to not write a shorter
review for a 247 scene (or even an 1,800-word vignette) simply because
it's short. It may be that the things you like in long stories just
aren't there in short ones, and so you more naturally like longer
stories than short ones. THAT'S FINE. And it's evened out by people
like me, who tend to like shorter ones. (No comment against long
pieces - this is my personal taste.)

But as things are handled now, every length of story gets thrown
together, excepting those that are some specific word count. So it's
really only fair to judge them by criteria that they can both succeed
(or not) at. Do they have good characterization? Is the pacing good?
Are they true to canon? Is the language a joy to read? Did the imagery
make the scene jump off the page at you? Yes, there will be
differences between the two. But as the two compete together, it
really is important to be as fair between them as you can.

But again, we're all human. And this should be fun, right?

So that's my word on these two interesting topics. I may not follow up
on replies (too busy of RL), though I will certainly read them. And if
you think the discussion is pertinent to the MEFAs, do feel free to
keep having it here. I'm not killing the conversation or anything.

Marta

Marta

Msg# 8281

Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs Posted by aure\_enteluva October 12, 2007 - 16:01:00 Topic ID# 8281
Hey guys,

I recently very nearly made a MEFA faux pas - not in my role as
administrator, but as an excited author and reviewer. I've been
reading a lot of really first-rate stories, and there have been some
things that I was so thrilled about I wanted all of my friends to read
them.

Someone recently pointed out to me that there is a rule against doing
this. Specifically, the rule says that MEFA reviewers shouldn't
publicly encourage other people to vote for specific stories. This is
a very natural thing to want to do, but there are reasons not to as
well. For one, it's very easy for people to get left out. It also
means one reviewer's opinion is having more of an affect on the
results than another's.

It's perfectly fine to encourage people to join up and vote. And I
won't even complain if you rave about a story you read that you really
liked. It's when the two activities happen at the same time that
there's a problem. Please try hard not to target specific stories and
tell people to go read them.

Thanks!

Marta
(MEFA Admin)

Msg# 8282

Re: Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 16:06:46 Topic ID# 8281
I'm laughing:

the rule says that MEFA reviewers shouldn't
publicly encourage other people to vote for specific stories


How public is public? Private email to more than two people, friend-locked lj entry? Of course, the reviews themself are public and if?my review?raves and says your story is the best fanfic I've ever read, that is rather public? Not trying to be argumentative. Just wondering how that works.


-----Original Message-----
From: aure_enteluva <melayton@gmail.com>
To: mefawards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Fri, 12 Oct 2007 5:00 pm
Subject: [MEFAwards] Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs






Hey guys,

I recently very nearly made a MEFA faux pas - not in my role as
administrator, but as an excited author and reviewer. I've been
reading a lot of really first-rate stories, and there have been some
things that I was so thrilled about I wanted all of my friends to read
them.

Someone recently pointed out to me that there is a rule against doing
this. Specifically, the rule says that MEFA reviewers shouldn't
publicly encourage other people to vote for specific stories. This is
a very natural thing to want to do, but there are reasons not to as
well. For one, it's very easy for people to get left out. It also
means one reviewer's opinion is having more of an affect on the
results than another's.

It's perfectly fine to encourage people to join up and vote. And I
won't even complain if you rave about a story you read that you really
liked. It's when the two activities happen at the same time that
there's a problem. Please try hard not to target specific stories and
tell people to go read them.

Thanks!

Marta
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Msg# 8283

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by ejackamack@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 16:16:11 Topic ID# 8256
In a message dated 10/12/2007 1:49:24 P.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
araneltook@gmail.com writes:

Or did you get to the preview page and it's messing up when
you try to save?
That's the one.

Could I get your system information from you? If you don't want to post it
on the Yahoo
group, you can email it to _techsupport@techsupportec_
(mailto:techsupport@mefawards.net) . We need what browser you're
using and your operating system, with version numbers if you know them (e.g.
"Safari
3.0.3 on Mac OS X 10.4.10"). Also, are you using AOL or a similar service to
connect to the
internet?

Yes, I am using AOHell. I'll send the other stuff to you. Thanks again,
Aranel!

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Msg# 8284

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by Chris October 12, 2007 - 17:25:37 Topic ID# 8256
I also think I had disappearing reviews, at least 2. But I didn't get a
blank page. I thought everything was ok, until I logged in next time and the
review wasn't there. Since it took me by surprise, I can't really say what
happened. Maybe I just forgot to save, but the second time I was pretty sure
that I saved the review. So, unfortunately, I don't have more information.

Chris

Isabeau wrote:
>
>
> Twice now, I've written a review, previewed it, hit the button to
> save it
> and it has vanished into the ether. Instead of getting the
> screen telling me
> it's been saved, I just get a blank white screen. When I go back
> to check my
> reviews I've written, it's not on the list. I haven't written
> many so far,
> and this is 2 of the 9, which to me is a pretty big percentage.
> One of them
> was a ten-pointer, too! It's rather discouraging to go to the
> trouble of
> reviewing if you don't know if it will actually save or not, and
> I'm not really
> good at remembering what I wrote the second time around. I
> guess I'll just
> have to copy and paste from a Word document instead of writing
> it on the site
> proper, so I can work around the glitch. Anyone else having
> trouble like this?

Msg# 8285

Re: Spoilers Posted by Chris October 12, 2007 - 17:28:09 Topic ID# 8255
Hmm, I'm guilty of writing reviews with spoilers. If your whole appreciation
of the story hinges on this spoiler it is difficult to leave it out. I like
the idea to put [spoiler warning] in brackets into the review, when it comes
to that.

Chris

> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com]On
> Behalf Of Marta
> Sent: Friday, October 12, 2007 9:40 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: Re: [MEFAwards] Spoilers
>
>
> Hi Liza,
>
> Spoilers are always difficult to handle. On the one hand I know how
> hard it is to to write good long reviews, and putting a limit on what
> people can discuss will only make that longer. But on the other hand,
> I know that other reviewers may see the review and I don't want them
> spoiled. (Or people who don't vote but read nominated stories on their
> own, like Tari.)
>
> So I don't want to say that people shouldn't say spoilers, but I am
> sympathetic. If you think it would help I can write up a FAQ about
> spoilers, and suggest that people put up a notice at the top of the
> review (within the square brackets used for quotes so it's not counted
> toward the total number of characters) that the review contains
> spoilers. That way people could decide for themselves whether to
> review. The other thing I can suggest is that people use the "hidden"
> option for reviews containing spoilers, so they're not visible until
> the end of the awards. That won't help people reading outside of an
> award year, but it would mean reviewers aren't seeing those spoilers
> until after the year's awards is over.
>
> Unfortunately, it's really impossible to police this, but I'm happy to
> encourage people to at least warn you that a spoiler's coming. Would
> that be helpful?
>
> Marta

Msg# 8286

Re: Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs Posted by meckinock@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 17:32:51 Topic ID# 8281
-----Original Message-----
From: aure_enteluva <melayton@gmail.com>
To: mefawards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Fri, 12 Oct 2007 4:00 pm
Subject: [MEFAwards] Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs










Hey guys,

I recently very nearly made a MEFA faux pas - not in my role as
administrator, but as an excited author and reviewer. I've been
reading a lot of really first-rate stories, and there have been some
things that I was so thrilled about I wanted all of my friends to read
them.

Someone recently pointed out to me that there is a rule against doing
this. Specifically, the rule says that MEFA reviewers shouldn't
publicly encourage other people to vote for specific stories. This is
a very natural thing to want to do, but there are reasons not to as
well. For one, it's very easy for people to get left out. It also
means one reviewer's opinion is having more of an affect on the
results than another's.

It's perfectly fine to encourage people to join up and vote. And I
won't even complain if you rave about a story you read that you really
liked. It's when the two activities happen at the same time that
there's a problem. Please try hard not to target specific stories and
tell people to go read them.

Thanks!

Marta
(MEFA Admin)



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Hey, Marta,

I'm not involved this year but I thought I'd throw my two cents in anyway.
You say you almost made a faux pas not in your role as admin but as a reviewer .
Just as an outside observer, it seems to me your role as admin, which is public and well-known, would have greatly exacerbated the offense of promoting
specific stories while the awards are still ongoing. One thing for an ordinary participant to rec specific stories, but for an admin to use her position to influence the outcome of the awards is something else. I'm not saying that's what you intended, but
those in a position of authority are always held to a higher standard.
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Msg# 8287

Re: Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs Posted by Súlriel of Menegroth October 12, 2007 - 18:21:37 Topic ID# 8281
It seems like to me that it's a matter of personal integrity.

Campaigning, canvassing or trolling for votes = bad. That's pretty simple.

I don't have a problem saying privately that I've found a 'hidden jewel'.
Since it is a competition I'm careful to say (at most) "read this, I think
you'll like it" rather than "you should vote for this one". I don't have a
problem privately pointing other people to stories that I've enjoyed. If
they choose to read them, if they like them, they'll decided on their own to
review(vote for them) or not. If I understand, the rules say only that
this needs to be done privately, and I agree.

Anyone that wants to read the letter of the law and find ways to skirt it
will do so. Casual conversation and/or an overly excited chatty lapse into
forgetfulness is one thing. Deliberately slipping through a loophole is
something else and doesn't change the intent or the outcome, or the morality
and ethics of the 'slipper'.

I applaud Marta for stepping forward with a public apology and an
announcement and reminder to all of us. I think that many people would have
tried to sweep away the *faux pas* and hope that people didn't notice. But
Marta took the opportunity as a reminder and I respect that. I think it's
indicative of the MEFAs overall, that she/it/they(the admin(s) and the
program overall) strives to be fair, fun and above-board overall. We're all
human and prone to human failings and it's really nice to be around people
who have the heart to try to rise above it in what ways we can.

Sulriel


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Msg# 8288

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by Elena Tiriel October 12, 2007 - 19:13:12 Topic ID# 8260
Bwahahahahahahahahahahaha!

*wipes tears of laughter from her eyes*

Oh, thank you for this, Liza!

And {{{hugs}}} on being ill... but it doesn't seem to have hurt your muse
any!

- Barbara, grinning madly

On 10/12/07, LizaLlinos@aol.com <LizaLlinos@aol.com> wrote:
>
>
>
> Long? Short? It's all art - innit?
> Verse this short!
> Really ought
> To be taught
> To thwart
> Or support
> The thought
> That aught
> Can distort
> Scores of the sort
> That make you snort!
>
> Verbosity however, has copious validity
> Of enhancing the writer's talent and ability!
> It displays profound wit and versatility
> And raises their art to the heights of nobility.
> So please don't disparage the acceptability
> Of length over brevity with any hostility!
> (We writers are fraught with such fragility)
> Accept, I beg, the distinct possibility
> That longness and shortness can find compatibility!
> Succinctness may be lauded for its affordability
> Whilst length is applauded for deductibility!
>
> Sorry 'bout that - but I've been ill.
>
> Liza
>
>
> In a message dated 12/10/2007 20:07:59 GMT Standard Time,
> rhapsodybard@gmail.com <rhapsodybard%40gmail.com> writes:
>
> > Sorry. I know I get all too passionate about the question of
> > writing.
>
> I know :) Each to their own. Want some cookies?
>
> Rhapsody
>
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Msg# 8289

Re: Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by MarigoldCotton@aol.com October 12, 2007 - 19:57:28 Topic ID# 8260
Hullo!

Lindelea said:"Liza, good point about spoilers. Is it a spoiler to say, "Nice surprise ending" or that the ending took one by surprise, or to mention the fact that there's a plot twist in the feedback? I apologize if so, for I've used those words in a couple of reviews before reading your post."

My own opinion is that sort of comment is?great and actually encourages folks who check out the reviews first to read the story because they are looking forward to seeing what you are talking about for themselves. What?I take as being a spoiler is when the review is sort of a summation of the contents of the story itself including specific plot points that give the high points of the story away.
?
Here are a few made up examples of what I consider to be spoilers -?"I actually cried when Faramir?killed Bob" or "I thought the ending where Frodo won the prize was really good" or "I?was so surprised when Blossom died in the last chapter"?or "I loved the amazing twist in the plot where it turned out that Pippin had the Ring in his pocket all of the time" and things of that sort.

I don't want to know beforehand that Faramir is going to kill Bob or that?despite the obstacles that Frodo will win or that Blossom is going to die or where the Ring is hidden. I *do* want to know that the other reviewers were caught up in the story or enjoyed the plot twists or found the content to be highly original and so forth.

Cheers!

Mari



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Msg# 8290

Re: Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by Marta Layton October 12, 2007 - 21:16:16 Topic ID# 8260
Hi Lindelea,

You and I think alike, apparently :-)

> Just wanted to chime in on the long-versus-short discussion, albeit
> belated. I don't know why it is I can be so long-winded when writing out
> of my imagination, but when writing facts each word comes like pulling
> teeth.

Different skill sets. Me, I've been writing graduate philosophy essays
for a year now and it's easier for me to analyze stuff than it ever was
(but harder to write fiction).

But whatever the case may be, I really appreciate your and everyone
else's efforts. Whatever length you write, the awards are better for it.

> As to negative reviews, I don't see much point in writing them. I have
> the impression that this is not a forum for concrit - might be better to
> email the author for that. Unless of course you absolutely love the
> story and don't mind bumping up the point value. And certainly, if you
> absolutely hate a story, you'll give it fewer points by saying nothing.
>

You're definitely right that negative reviews are counterprodutive. Some
people find it easier to really dig into a piece if they can present
both the positive and what didn't quite work. As long as a review is
still mostly positive we do allow concrit. But yeah, it isn't really the
best forum for detailed analysis of every fault.


Good points, Lin!

Marta

Msg# 8291

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by Bonnie L. Sherrell October 12, 2007 - 21:27:39 Topic ID# 8256
Last night I had that happen three times, and realized that I hadn't
hit the save validated review button. I ended up having to do it all
over again. I've learned to watch myself when I'm reviewing and I'm
tired.
Bonnie L. Sherrell
Teacher at Large

"Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR

"Don't go where I can't follow."

I mourn for this nation.

Msg# 8292

Re: Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by Bonnie L. Sherrell October 12, 2007 - 21:31:58 Topic ID# 8260
Well, considering how many reviews I've already done, you're all gonna
see what you're all gonna see at this point, whether they're spoilers
or not. Sorry if I've managed to give you too many ideas ahead of
time, folks.

Bonnie L. Sherrell
Teacher at Large

"Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR

"Don't go where I can't follow."

I mourn for this nation.

Msg# 8293

Re: MEFA Reviews for October 2, 2007 (Part 2) comments Posted by Agape 4Rivendell October 12, 2007 - 22:48:20 Topic ID# 8229
'Absolutely, for me personally the MEFA's isn't about who wins, I always
loved it because it is one huge story sharing fest for me.'

Rhapsody...

I absolutely love this phrase, Rhapsody - the MEFA's are like a
HUGEsmorgasbord.

I'm getting fat! LOL - thanks MEFA.

Agape


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Msg# 8294

Re: Spoilers Posted by Marta Layton October 12, 2007 - 22:58:09 Topic ID# 8255
Hi Liza,

> I'd really appreciate it (and I suspect others will too) if
> reviewers could either, as Marta suggests, put [SPOILER ALERT] in
> brackets or at least try not to give away the the ending, such
> as, "they all lived happily ever after" or "they all died in
> misery" - you know, the kind of detail that actually makes you
> go "Aha!" or "Oh no!" as you read the final paragraph!
>

I think that's really the best approach. There should be an FAQ on
spoilers going up in a few days.

Of course, there are loads of reviews this year that have already been
entered. I don't expect members to go and edit all their reviews - that
would be a lot of work! And not even possible for the reviews that are
already finalized. But for new reviews people enter, I think enter a
spoiler warning in [square brackets] is a good policy.

Marta

Msg# 8295

Re: Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by Agape 4Rivendell October 12, 2007 - 22:58:25 Topic ID# 8260
I'm sorry - I'm in the same boat as Bonnie - I wrote close to 50 reviews
before the process was complete and now I can't change those - all finals -
and I wouldn't even attempt it.

Sorry..... I hope I didn't give anything away - but I don't know.

Agape


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Msg# 8296

Re: More MEFA Reviews chat & question Posted by Marta Layton October 12, 2007 - 23:42:30 Topic ID# 8229
Hi Nieriel,

> I haven't had a chance to jump in here yet, so here goes. *waves
> enthusiastically* Hi everybody! This is my first year being nominated
> for MEFAs and reviewing and while I am currently behind in my reviewing,
> I am really enjoying the stories! I've actually been late reading some
> of my favorite authors' updates due to reading MEFA stories! It's a
> wonderful contest and I think it's great so many of you volunteer your
> time to to run/nominate/review for it!
>

I'm really glad to hear you are enjoying the stories! That's what it's
all about after all, and if the MEFAs can connect you with some good
ones, that's a definite good thing. *beams*

> I wanted to say, I'm glad you post the reviews like this on the group,
> because seeing other peoples reviews has helped me with writing my
> own.(I admit to being terrible at writing reviews.

Good! It can be a bit tricky to find your footing at first, to know what
to say. Sometimes examples can help a lot. I'm glad seeing them is
helping you.

> Marta,
>
> >*grins* I wasn't nearly as big of a Thranduil fan before some fantastic
> >MEFA stories over the years convinced me that yes, he really is a
> >delightful character.
>
> I wasn't a big Thranduil fan to start either, until I came across the
> MEFAs last year, and though I didn't actively participate, I found some
> wonderful stories (I think I'm still reading some of the nominations for
> last year that I saved the links for *grin*) and authors and ever since,
> the Elvenking has had a special place in my heart. He is such a complex
> character, that he is intriguing when done well. I was so pleased one of
> my Thranduil fics was nominated. *waves at Rhapsody*
>

*nods* He is a character that the more I learn about him, the more I
love. And he's a character we don't see that much of in canon, except
for _The Hobbit_ and that's through the eyes of one of his prisoners -
not his best light. I've loved reading Jael, and Elliska, and and and
.... so many more! And as someone who normally prefers Gondor, I really
never would have found these jewels except through the MEFAs.

Marta

Msg# 8297

Re: Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs Posted by Marta Layton October 12, 2007 - 23:54:46 Topic ID# 8281
heartofoshun@aol.com wrote:
>
>
> I'm laughing:
>
> the rule says that MEFA reviewers shouldn't
> publicly encourage other people to vote for specific stories
>
> How public is public? Private email to more than two people,
> friend-locked lj entry? Of course, the reviews themself are public and
> if?my review?raves and says your story is the best fanfic I've ever
> read, that is rather public? Not trying to be argumentative. Just
> wondering how that works.
>

Hi Oshun,

I don't know that I have hard and fast rules for what's too public. And
I don't want to get legalistic here.

I'd say if your flist is small enough, a friends-locked LJ becomes is
more like an email. But if you have a big flist (like I do - 117 and
counting), obviously just flocking it wouldn't be restricting it to a
very small number.

I'd say just use your best judgement. If you ever want to do something
but are not sure it's appropriate, send me an email at
mefasupport@gmail.com, and I'll tell you what I think.

As for reviews - well, they're *obviously* okay. :-) The rule against
trying to get people to vote for specific stories is really to keep one
person from having an unfair influence on who wins. (That's one of the
reasons, at least.) So since everyone can rave as much as they like in a
MEFA review and the people who read those reviews are mostly already
MEFA members, I think it's fine to be as lavish as you want with your
praise.

Marta

Msg# 8298

Re: Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs Posted by heartofoshun@aol.com October 13, 2007 - 0:02:41 Topic ID# 8281
No problem. I hadn't done it anyway (although I had unknowingly considered
putting a list on my lj of my favorite fics but had not done so). I was
surprised simply because the reviews are so public (kind of like if you want to
recommend something without violating the guidelines, review early and often!).
Anyway, nevermind, I'm being silly. I'm a big reviewer throughout the whole
year of stories that I particularly like. I use the MEFAs as an opportunity to
write slightly more thoughtful and somewhat longer reviews.



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Msg# 8299

Re: Spoilers Posted by Marta Layton October 13, 2007 - 0:59:59 Topic ID# 8255
Chris wrote:
>
>
> Hmm, I'm guilty of writing reviews with spoilers. If your whole appreciation
> of the story hinges on this spoiler it is difficult to leave it out. I like
> the idea to put [spoiler warning] in brackets into the review, when it comes
> to that.
>
> Chris
>

Hi Chris,

FWIW, I often find myself writing spoilers - maybe not for the big
finish, but certainly for plot details. I never thought to put a spoiler
warning in, just because it didn't occur to me. I do think the spoiler
warning is a great idea, and I like the idea of putting a spoiler
warning in. So long as you put it in [square brackets] so it doesn't
count toward the length of your review, I think that will be fine.

But please don't feel obligated to go back and add warnings to the
reviews you've already entered. This is something that's nice to do for
new reviews, but you don't need to go back and fix all the old reviews.
Better to spend the time reviewing *new* stories!

Marta

Msg# 8300

Re: Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs Posted by Marta Layton October 13, 2007 - 1:10:26 Topic ID# 8281
Hi Meckinock,

You're absolutely right. I do try my best to be above reproach in
anything that might comment on or affect the MEFAs, for precisely that
reason. Of course I'm human (we all are). I fully admit that I'm not
perfect and just try to work around the mistakes I make (or in this
case, almost make).

When I said that I almost made a mis-step as a reviewer rather than as
an admin, what I meant was that I hadn't done anything official that
award participants needed to be worried about. (Or even almost made that
mis-step.) The faux pas I nearly made would have been a post to my
private blog, and that would have been quite bad enough. I'm glad I
caught myself in time.

Thanks for reminding me that I represent the awards. I try to keep that
in mind, but it's always good to be reminded to be more careful.

Marta
> Hey, Marta,
>
> I'm not involved this year but I thought I'd throw my two cents in anyway.
> You say you almost made a faux pas not in your role as admin but as a
> reviewer .
> Just as an outside observer, it seems to me your role as admin, which is
> public and well-known, would have greatly exacerbated the offense of
> promoting
> specific stories while the awards are still ongoing. One thing for an
> ordinary participant to rec specific stories, but for an admin to use
> her position to influence the outcome of the awards is something else.
> I'm not saying that's what you intended, but
> those in a position of authority are always held to a higher standard.
> meckinock
>

Msg# 8301

Re: Recruiting Reviewers for the MEFAs Posted by Marta Layton October 13, 2007 - 1:14:50 Topic ID# 8281
Hi Sulriel,

> I don't have a problem saying privately that I've found a 'hidden jewel'.
> Since it is a competition I'm careful to say (at most) "read this, I think
> you'll like it" rather than "you should vote for this one". I don't have a
> problem privately pointing other people to stories that I've enjoyed. If
> they choose to read them, if they like them, they'll decided on their own to
> review(vote for them) or not. If I understand, the rules say only that
> this needs to be done privately, and I agree.
>

That sounds okay to me. Especially since you aren't telling people to go
vote for specific stories. You're just sharing a good read that you
found, and what they do with that is their own decision.

> I applaud Marta for stepping forward with a public apology and an
> announcement and reminder to all of us. I think that many people would have
> tried to sweep away the *faux pas* and hope that people didn't notice. But
> Marta took the opportunity as a reminder and I respect that. I think it's
> indicative of the MEFAs overall, that she/it/they(the admin(s) and the
> program overall) strives to be fair, fun and above-board overall. We're all
> human and prone to human failings and it's really nice to be around people
> who have the heart to try to rise above it in what ways we can.
>

Thanks. :-) I think it is important to be honest about slips or even
near-slips (like in this case), so that they can be corrected with the
least harm. I appreciate being around a group that lets me do that.

Marta

Msg# 8302

Re: Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by Marta Layton October 13, 2007 - 1:18:21 Topic ID# 8260
Hi Bonnie,

No problem. This spoiler thing is a new request; you and everyone else
couldn't have known about it ahead of time. Don't feel any pressure to
go back and add the warning to old reviews you've already written.

Thanks for all your reviewing! It's appreciated.

Marta

Bonnie L. Sherrell wrote:
>
>
> Well, considering how many reviews I've already done, you're all gonna
> see what you're all gonna see at this point, whether they're spoilers
> or not. Sorry if I've managed to give you too many ideas ahead of
> time, folks.
>
> Bonnie L. Sherrell
> Teacher at Large
>
> "Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the
> very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR
>
> "Don't go where I can't follow."
>
> I mourn for this nation.
>

Msg# 8303

Re: Long versus short reviews / spoilers? / negative reviews Posted by Marta Layton October 13, 2007 - 1:27:42 Topic ID# 8260
Agape 4Rivendell wrote:
>
>
> I'm sorry - I'm in the same boat as Bonnie - I wrote close to 50 reviews
> before the process was complete and now I can't change those - all finals -
> and I wouldn't even attempt it.
>
> Sorry..... I hope I didn't give anything away - but I don't know.
>
> Agape
>

Hi Agape:

Don't worry about the ones you've already entered. This is a new thing.
Just enter the warning on any new reviews you do, for this year and next
year (if you review again). Thanks!

Marta

Msg# 8304

MEFA Reviews for October 13, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 13, 2007 - 5:58:00 Topic ID# 8304
Title: Pick Your Battles · Author: Aliana · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 550
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-29 19:25:33
I'm always amazed that you can turn out something that is so relevant
and irreverent at the same time. Despite the post-modern twist, the
characterizations are right out of ["Fallen"] and add (in an odd sort
of way) to my further understanding of them in their original context.

It reads like a casual, humorous story on the surface, but there are
so many wonderful bits scattered throughout that invite much deeper
reflection. Like Valacar's not-losing/not-saving musings, and his
thoughts on his patients, and how he distances himself from the
battles but picks up clues from the wounded men's injuries. Or how
the newspaper (with its horrible lists) ["comes apart like a thing of
little consequence."]

Or how, tying it all together from title to finish, Valacar picks his
battles at the end. Really a delightful sideline to your other work!

Title: Only Eyes to See · Author: ChristineX · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 710
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-08-29 19:35:15
Definitely a dark and most unusual love story! I don't normally
read "girl falls into M-e," but this was skillfully rendered with
great characterizations. Well-written, the very funny asides and some
unexpected twists made for interesting and "must keep going" reading.
I felt that there may have been some timeline issues, but it didn't
interfere with my appreciation.

I completely enjoyed the testimony to the redemptive power of love
and that people are not always what they seem. I found myself
unbelievably sympathetic to the Nazgul Lord; I was divided between
the wish for a free M-e and the terrible approaching finality of
Gorendil's end. The cliffhanger ending was well managed and
completely unexpected.

Title: Yours to command · Author: Lialathuveril · Genres: Romance:
With Rohirrim · ID: 129
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-29 20:01:21
Had this not already been nominated, I would definitely have done so,
particularly with my background and the nature of Lothiriel!

Lothiriel of Dol Amroth was blinded in an accident some years
previously, and has unhappy memories of the White City and the Houses
of Healing. But now things are greatly changed, with the King
returned and a new King also of Rohan, whose sister is to soon marry
Faramir.

Then Lothiriel finds herself being attracted to Eomer, and is certain
he feels the same. But a manipulative lady of the court and a
vengeful Haradri intend to see to it there is no happily ever after
for the princess of Dol Amroth and the young King of Rohan....

For someone who admits she's not known individuals who are blind, the
author has managed to picture the condition both accurately and with
excellent sensitivity. Lothiriel is a survivor and resourceful, and
I'd be thrilled to have her as a student or friend.

Title: Firelight · Author: Songspinner · Genres: Drama: Ithilien ·
ID: 817
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-29 23:45:48
This is a wonderfully written little story. The characterizations are
spot on, especially Merry's concern for his young cousin. Gimli is
rough, and yet tender at the same time. Gandalf is ... well,
wizardly! Pippin is very child-like, and Aragorn is the attentive
healer.

Well done!

Title: Sunshine and Roses · Author: shirelinghpc · Races: Cross-
Cultural: Gondor · ID: 531
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-30 00:37:54
This was a wonderful story, centering on Sam. Sam's character is
painted as a very loving, yet very lonely and wounded hobbit, set
apart from the other three by his upbringing and social standing.
Faramir has the insight to see that something is wrong, and Aragorn
comes up with the appropriate medicine for what ails Sam...

Well done!

Title: For everything, there is a season · Author: Tanaqui · Genres:
Drama: Gondor Drabble · ID: 696
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-30 01:37:45
This was a gorgeous little ficlet. In just a few short lines, Tanaqui
manages to pack a waste of time and chances, following the journey of
a seed as it unwittingly gives birth to hope. The cycle of seasons
and the Biblical reference remind us that seasonal change, and the
growth and decay of the vegetal world have always symbolized life
emerging from death, a sort of drive to continue that is indomitable,
despite breaks and the deaths of individuals.

I think this was my favorite line, both for the sense of fate rushing
to disaster, but for the alliteration and mirroring of the creations
of Varda and Vana:

[Time passed, and the world hurried to ruin, but Varda's white stars
lit the sky and Vána's white stars danced and flickered on the
ground.]

Very well done, Tanaqui! A great ficlet to fill in a memorable moment
in the long, hard journey of Frodo and Sam.

Title: The Far Corner of the Garden · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ithilien · ID: 554
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-30 01:43:55
The clueless urbanite in me loves it when somebody can write about
gardens in a knowledgeable manner. Here again, gardening has more
than a merely practical or leisurely meaning - it is life, and it is
a symbol of life moving on, picking up and rebuilding after a long
war. And it is also celebration and remembrance.

Eowyn's four faces all come to light here: wifely, as she settles in
beside Faramir; royalty, as she plans for her people's sustenance;
the healer she swore to be in the planting of the medicinal garden;
and finally, the woman who lost so much of her family in the desire
to create a floral memorial for a dear, departed cousin out in the
corner of the garden.

Putting all four of these aspects together, we get a sense of how
Eowyn's life has progressed and where she stands currently.
Beautifully written, Ann!

Title: Tales of the Innkeeper · Author: Allee · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 237
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-30 02:24:06
A very sweet set of vignettes, set in the middle of a very bad spell
of cold weather and storms, featuring a king come in from the cold
and the innkeeper whose house becomes, unexpectedly, the royal
shelter for a time.

Allee's innkeeper has a Butterburish feel to him, though he's a bit
more overawed, I think, with Aragorn - no doubt it comes of not
having known Aragorn in his Strider guise. The innkeeper keeps a
certain covert watch on his king, unsure what to make of him, and by
turns surprised by what he's actually confronted with.

Most of the tension comes from the interactions between Aragorn and a
secondary character, a young guardsman named Carandol, who seems to
be Aragorn's perpetual personnel headache and pet project at one and
the same time. It is Carandol who sets up the situations that enable
the innkeeper to see his king dealing with frustration and some other
less pleasant emotions that might otherwise have remained untapped.

An enjoyable collection, Allee!

Title: Frodo's Thoughts - Boromir · Author: trikywun · Genres: Drama:
General Drabble · ID: 674
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-30 02:29:31
I like the focus on the way in which Boromir is more and more caught
between his oath to protect Frodo and his oath to protect Gondor.
Frodo's wish that the bind had been avoided sounds right.

Title: In The Shadows I Wait · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama:
Youth · ID: 248
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-08-30 02:55:40
Well, this was certainly an unexpected perspective! I quite liked it,
though. Pentangle imbues her nameless character with an air and a
mode of thinking, a way of being in the world, appropriate to the
particular circumstances. The frustration of uselessness and longing
to be put to good use, to fulfill the purpose the creator had
intended are palpable and appropriate. The notion of 'insomnia', and
the inability to forget and sink into dreams, was very interesting -
it helped accent that frustration and also the sense of desperation
as Pentangle's mysterious character struggles to gain the attention
of young Estel or any of the Elves to press a suit of his own.

The Elves arguing over what Estel's first sword should be are amusing
by turns, serious by others. I laughed at Glorfindel dragging Erestor
in to consult, and then having his councilor go all nostalgic-
sentimental in a way that threatens to play right into Elrond's
hands.

Eventually, though, Pentangle's OC manages to get the attention of
both Elves and Estel, and from there it all unfolds nicely, although
with a certain tragic poignancy, involving as it does the choice of
Elros.

Very well done, Pentangle! Those who like young Estel stories, and
Glorfindel bucking bureaucracy to provide some humor, give this a try.

Title: Duty Bound · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 212
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-30 15:26:51
I really enjoyed reading this story. A confirmed and single-minded
Boromir fan, the question of the Steward's succession has always
nagged at me, despite Tolkien's precedent set for small families of
late marraiges. This story explores a very interesting array of
reasonable scenarios: arranged marraige, the necessity of begetting
heirs, seasonable living and differing climates in Gondor, and how a
small city might handle plague - but weaves them well around the
central, engaging and very human story. I found the conclusion - that
the sad end of the arranged marraige Boromir at first resisted,
eventually reaffirmed his devotion to duty and country - touching and
compelling.

Title: Keeper of the Jewels · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Adventure:
Minas Tirith · ID: 64
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-30 15:27:34
This is a very well-written story. The characterizations of all the
hobbits are spot-on, as well as Aragorn and Arwen. The descriptions
are vivid and detailed. The story kept me on the edge of my seat
throughout, especially at the end.

Well done.

Title: Keepsake · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits: Vignette · ID:
256
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-30 15:28:16
As always, Marigold has done a great job vividly painting a familiar
scene.

Title: In the Dark · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Mystery · ID: 484
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-30 15:29:53
All right, so what spell holds Aragorn and Legolas, each apparently
alone, in totally dark stone cells with no discernible doors? And how
have they become separated? A wonderfully eerie tale with no real
ending. Worth the read, folks.

Title: Boys Will Be Boys · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 555
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-30 15:35:01
Embarrassment as much as his injuries appear to have kept Boromir to
his bed and asleep since his fall; but even he will awaken for Mags
and her offerings.

As always with Ann's works, so very much said in so few words, and
said so effectively. One can see the child lying with his face to the
wall refusing to respond to his father or the healers, but being
drawn back to acceptance of life by the scent of cinnamon. Well, well
done.

Title: Regrets and Consolations · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama:
Youth · ID: 430
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-30 16:09:01
This is a very well-written story! I could see everything in my
mind's eye due to the vivid and detailed descriptions, from Merry's
hair color to the clothes he was wearing. The reaction of Esmeralda
to Merry's disappearance is very believable and realistic, and
Frodo's feelings are as well.

Well done.

Title: Woven in Friendship · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Cross-
Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 290
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-30 16:11:32
I particularly like the open-endedness of this piece; it doesn't draw
conclusions - leaving that to the reader - but instead persents all
the elements. Those elements come with deceptive ease, are colorful,
vivid and strong.

Title: Time to Let Go · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey
Havens · ID: 261
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-30 16:14:37
This is a curious piece. I found [Sam-Dad] to be confusing - should
we see him from inside Elanor's head (Dad)? or from the outside of
the picture (Sam)? And I would have thought Elenor to have a more
unique perspective and experiences but the author merely recounts
things we already know.

Title: The Witch-king's Cloak · Author: Radbooks · Genres: Humor:
Parody · ID: 106
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-30 16:19:00
The challenge of any writer is to make the ordinary seem
extraordinary, the extraordinary universal. This is particularly
difficult for fanfic writers, since we're all working off the same
material, but this piece and this writer succeed so spectacularly!! I
just love this vision of the Witch King as a fearsome dilletante, so
worried about his image and his trappings! It certainly makes me see
him in a new light!

Title: Outmatched · Author: Tiana Luthien · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 132
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-30 16:24:57
This piece exemplifies something I love about fanfic. It depicts a
scene we can easily imagine might take place within Tolkien's world,
that is a perfect outgrowth of what Tolkien did give us, but is
completely original. I would love to read this from Faramir's
perspective; one can only imagine he knew he was being tested. I also
appreciate the brevity employed here; the piece is full and vivid,
but not cluttered with unnecessary or over-sized words.

Title: Triumphal Entry · Author: Garnet Took · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 244
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-30 16:26:28
I'm really not sure what to make of this. I really enjoyed and
respected the mix of poignant and joyful moments in the first
section, but found the end kind of shallow, devoid of the recognition
of sacrifice mixed with thanksgiving that made the beginning so
memorable.

Title: The Love of Lore · Author: Oshun · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 271
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-31 02:19:26
A wonderful pair of vignettes showing our beloved Faramir and his
love of learning. Good sense of setting and characters in an
economical format.

Title: Osgiliath · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-
3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 626
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-31 02:23:04
Boromir and Faramir upon the bridge of Osgiliath, fighting together,
leaping to safety in the Anduin, and realizing that for the fighting
to end something more must happen.

To combine so many emotions into such a short ficlet has taken great,
great skill.

Title: Pest Control · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 697
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-31 02:26:33
Aha! Faced with orcs in her berry patch, Fimbrethil goes into action,
finding ways to use their sorry remains to fertilise the corn, even.
Startling and yet marvelously funny as well.


Title: Oliphaunt am I · Author: Elemmire · Races: Hobbits · ID: 768
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-31 02:39:21
Hildifons started it with his wisp of a rhyme scrawled on a piece of
hide. Then Hildigar returned from his years at sea, where he'd gone
in search of his lost brother, and wrote the poem that later Sam was
to quote to Faramir and that Tolkien immortalized in "The Adventures
of Tom Bombadil." Then Pippin came home, and added a few lines
himself (based on movie-verse finding of Merry nearly crushed by one
of the beasts).

Are they real? Several now have said, "Yes."

Excellent imagery, and love the warning that not all cultures respect
childhood.

Msg# 8305

MEFA Reviews for October 13, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 13, 2007 - 6:00:11 Topic ID# 8305
Title: Heirloom · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits · ID: 778
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-08-31 02:54:43
Through the generations of the Ladies of the Great Smial, we see a
mithril thimble passed from one Mistress to the next, until at the
last Pippin entrusts it to Faramir to give to Goldilocks after the
sudden death of Diamond and the decision for him to leave with Merry
for Rohan and Gondor.

To see the generations pass, and this one object tie together
fathers, sons, uncles, nephews, and each new Thain's wife in order is
marvelous. And the reactions of the rest to Lalia is wonderful.

Well, well done.

Title: Between Crown and Mantle · Author: Marastar · Times: Late
Third Age: 3018-3022 TA · ID: 701
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-08-31 03:38:40
This was a nice read -- elegant, understated, connecting Rohan's
history with the Ring War, and presenting a nicely reflective Eowyn
that I really enjoyed. Thanks for writing it, it's a story I'm glad
was told.

Title: Merry's Wedding · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest ·
ID: 84
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-31 12:43:50
That was just lovely. At first, I was a bit thrown about by all the
names and characters, but then that seemed just right for a Hobbitish
tale about hobbits, told as if by a Hobbit to (I will flatter myself)
a neighbor or friend over the garden gate or an evening's fire. Not a
flaw in it.

Title: The Wizard's Coin · Author: grey_wonderer · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 480
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:36:43
The interactions of the hobbits in this story are truly delightful. I
especially liked the interaction of Pippin and Bilbo, and Bilbo being
quite befuddled by Pippin's antics. I also saw Merry's anger as being
very realistic, as was Frodo's attempts to be placating. Pippin, of
course, is drawn very well, which is one of Grey Wonderer's many
strengths.

Well done!

Title: In the Hours of Joy · Author: Spindle Berry · Genres: Drama:
With Merry · ID: 289
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:37:03
This little story touched me to the core. The description of Merry's
grief and anguish is so well-done, as are the concern of Gimli and
Legolas. The angst is very well-written; it made me feel the sorrow
that Merry must be going through as he watches his friends,
especially Pippin, struggle to survive. I especially loved this
partial line: [survival and recovery were not the same thing and were
not both always possible.] That was gut wrenching.

The possibility of hope at the end of this story was very uplifting,
after all of the angst. Highly recommended!


Title: Woven in Friendship · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Cross-
Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 290
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:37:25
This little vignette is heartwarming and very touching. As Pippin
speaks of his friendship with Merry, tears formed in my eyes as I
imagined what it was like for them to have been separated during the
seige of Minas Tirith. It must have been like missing a limb.

The analogy of friendship to the tapestries of Rohan was very well
done and thought out. Kudos!

Title: Pippin's Little Experiment · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 291
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:37:38
This little story is so funny it made me laugh out loud several
times. Humor mixed in with a bit of danger ... that describes this
story very well. Pippin, being Pippin, gets into a bit of mischief
that he can't quite get himself out of. The portrayal of Pippin's
personality is spot-on, as are all the other hobbits, especially
Frodo. I thoroughly enjoyed this little story!

Title: Crimson Fields · Author: Amrunofthesummercountry · Genres:
Drama: With Merry · ID: 295
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:37:49
This is one of my favorite Merry/Pippin stories. The angst that each
feel for the other during the battle and the aftermath is so heart-
felt, especially when Pippin finds Merry. When they realize their
true feelings for each other, I almost cheered! I do love a well-done
story that has Merry and Pippin as more than friends. It was so well
done here ... the step from friendship to more-than was very natural
and believable. They find comfort in each other, and the story left
me feeling very satisfied and joy-filled.

Title: Dreams the Way We Planned Them · Author: SlightlyTookish ·
Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 297
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:38:01
This is such a lovely story, about the battle between hope and
despair as Merry waits for Pippin to wake at Cormallen. The obvious
love between the two is portrayed very well, especially after Pippin
wakes. The dream of their own home and a garden is shared by them
both; Merry at first thinks its folly to dream of such while Pippin
is so ill, but Pippin dreams of it also, which gives Merry hope.
Hope, of course, wins out in the end.

Title: Like Falling Asleep Again · Author: lbilover · Races: Hobbits:
Merry and Pippin · ID: 299
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:38:18
This is another one of my favorite Merry/Pippin stories. The
characters are beautifully and realistically portrayed toward the end
of their lives in Minas Tirith. The closeness between the two hobbits
is very well portrayed; so well that it brings tears to my eyes every
time I read it. I highly recommend this to any Merry and Pippin fan,
whether you like slash or not. The slash is very mild, and the
relationship is portrayed as very sweet and loving.

Title: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream · Author: Blackbird Song ·
Genres: Drama: Ithilien · ID: 301
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:38:29
This story is very well written, primarily from Merry's point of
view. The despair he feels in Ithilien is felt keenly by this
reviewer as Merry thinks that Pippin has passed on. The flaring up of
hope again was also keenly felt, even more intensely. The love
between Merry and Pippin is so obvious and deeply felt. I just wanted
to wrap my arms around them and hug them both!

Title: Candles · Author: Eretria · Genres: Drama: With Merry · ID: 305
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:38:39
I can't even begin to describe how this story touched me. Merry and
Pippin, both afraid of the loss of the other, offering each other
comfort and support. On the eve of battle, Pippin needs reassurance
from Merry, and after Pip leaves, Merry watches two candles burning,
willing them both to stay lit, to keep the light alive. This has two
meanings, obviously .... literally, keep the candles burning, and
figuratively...keep hope alive in your heart. It's all Merry can do
to watch his young cousin leave for war without him, and all he has
left for company are two lit candles, slowly burning down. How will
it all end, for the candles and for the company marching on the Black
Gate? How will it all end for Pippin.

Very touching and eloquent story.

Title: A New Reckoning · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 308
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:38:48
This is a very in-depth look at some of the characters we have all
come to know and love, plus a few OC's the we come to admire. The
characters of Bergil and Freddy are more fleshed out as well. I
especially enjoyed the portrayal of Freddy's grief for Folco, and the
evolution of his healing process. And Bergil was a joy to watch,
trying to adapt to the ways of hobbits, especially their eating
habits! Well done, Dreamflower!

Title: Jewels · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete · ID:
311
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:39:01
This jewel of a story is splendid. I like long stories that portray
life in the Shire over a long stretch of time. This story does a
great job of doing that. From the hobbits' return from the Quest, to
the end of Merry and Pippin's lives, this story delves into certain
details and events that are never brought to light in Tolkien's work.

This author does a great job of portraying the different characters
in different situations as life unfolds.

Title: Reflections of the Past · Author: shirebound · Genres:
Alternate Universe: The Shire or Buckland · ID: 359
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:39:24
Some people might say that this story is pure fluff, but I like it
because it's very soothing and life-affirming. This is a sequel to
the author's work 'Quarantined', and takes place in an alternate
universe in that Frodo meets Aragorn before the fateful meeting in
Bree. The author does a splendid job of picking up from 'Quarantined'
and focusing on the developing relationship between Frodo and
Aragorn. Nice job!

Title: Oliphaunt am I · Author: Elemmire · Races: Hobbits · ID: 768
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:45:03
What a wonderful story! I like stories that give the Travellers and
the Shire a sense of history, so I really like this, delving into the
history of the Oliphaunt poem. Nice use of Tookish backstory! The
scene at the end with father and son was very tender, very nicely
done.



Title: Pippin's Sorrowful Day · Author: camilliatook · Races:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 812
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:46:08
This is a cute little story about wee Pippin, Frodo, Sam and a pinch
of Merry. Pippin is very cute and charming, as usual in these types
of stories. Frodo smartly plays the doting elder cousin, and Sam is
delightful as Frodo's friend and "servant". Merry shows up briefly,
but just enough to let us know who Pippin's favorite is.

Well done!

Title: Darkness on a Bright Morning · Author: Hai Took · Races:
Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 807
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:47:19
This was a wonderful little vignette taking place between the two
cousins. I could just feel the depth of their love for each other
from this little encounter. How right that Pippin wouldn't hold his
bruise against Merry, and how understandable that Merry would feel
such guilt for hurting his dear cousin, albeit involuntarily.

Nicely done.



Title: Signs · Author: permilea · Races: Hobbits: Children · ID: 384
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:48:02
This was just precious! I can just see Frodo trying to hold in his
laughter while admonishing that michievous little Took that we all
know and love. Just like a child, to take something as a sign to get
into trouble! I remember making excuses like that for my behavior
when I was a kid...it all rang so true!

Title: For Eyes to See That Can · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races:
Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 770
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:48:39
This is a wonderful gap-filler. Pippin anguish for his cousin in
palpable, and Merry's misery just as much so. It is good to know that
Pippin's sight allows him to see a good ending, as well as helps him
to find Merry in his distraught state.

The descriptions of the White City are vivid, as are the descriptions
of the folk going to and fro, including the injured.

Good job!

Title: The Long Winter · Author: Baranduin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 159
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:49:10
This was a lovely story. The descriptions of the snowy surroundings
were very vivid and detailed. I stories that give a sense of history
to the Shire, and this one did just that. Well done!

Title: Left Behind · Author: Elanor · Genres: Drama: With Merry · ID:
28
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:49:41
This is a fascinating story that explores the emotional well-being of
Merry and Faramir, or lack thereof, while they reside in the Houses
of Healing after the army leaves for the Black Gate. Merry's
spiritual connection with Pippin is explored, and Faramir's memories
of his mother are brought into focus as well. This story explores
their friendship as they both heal, and the support they give one
another during this time of separation from friends and family.

I especially like how the story begins with the parting of Merry and
Pippin, and ends with their very joyful reunion. This is the author's
first fanfic, and a splendid job she did.

Title: Ours · Author: Queen Galadriel · Races: Hobbits · ID: 334
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:50:10
This is a sweet little vignette about how Sam views Frodo at two
different times, during and after the Quest. The love that Sam bears
towards his master is very evident here, as is the fact that Merry
and Pippin love him just as much. Well done!

Title: In Passing · Author: Lily · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey Havens ·
ID: 613
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:50:43
Oh, this was just lovely! The description of Pippin's passing was
beautiful, with the metaphor of the sea and a far, green country. I
liked how it was Frodo who prepared the way for Pippin; another good-
bye, but a promise of reunion. How very beautiful.

Title: Still Round the Corner · Author: lbilover · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 515
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:51:15
This is a lovely vignette about Sam leaving the Shire for the Grey
Havens, from the perspective of his son Frodo-lad. It's heart-
wrenching and heart-warming at the same time. Saying goodbye is
always hard, but not as much when you know your loved one is going to
be reunited with a long-lost friend. One can't grieve when you are
rejoicing.

Msg# 8306

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by araneltook October 13, 2007 - 9:54:05 Topic ID# 8256
Hi Isabeau,

I did some research, and I think getting a blank page is a browser issue. Since AOL is
notorious for not 'playing nice', I would guess that is the problem.

I found this page on AOL's help section. Try following their advice, but still do your
reviews in a text editor first so they don't get eaten.

http://help.aol.com/help/search.do?cmd=displayKC&docType=kc&externalId=http--
helpchannelsaolcom-
kjumpadparticleId220993&sliceId=&dialogID=15466204&stateId=1%200%2015488379

Let us know if you continue to have the problem.

Good luck!
Aranel

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> araneltook@... writes:
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> Or did you get to the preview page and it's messing up when
> you try to save?
> That's the one.
>
> Could I get your system information from you? If you don't want to post it
> on the Yahoo
> group, you can email it to _techsupport@techsupportec_
> (mailto:techsupport@...) . We need what browser you're
> using and your operating system, with version numbers if you know them (e.g.
> "Safari
> 3.0.3 on Mac OS X 10.4.10"). Also, are you using AOL or a similar service to
> connect to the
> internet?
>
> Yes, I am using AOHell. I'll send the other stuff to you. Thanks again,
> Aranel!
>
> Isabeau
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Msg# 8307

Re: Disappearing reviews Posted by ejackamack@aol.com October 13, 2007 - 12:13:09 Topic ID# 8256
Thanks, Aranel!

I think the cut and paste option is the best method for me in the next
little bit. I intend to be shed of AOL here soon and go to broadband at last. So
hopefully that will improve things for me. I appreciate you taking the time
to look into this.

Isabeau



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Msg# 8308

Re: Long versus short reviews Posted by Barbara Slough October 13, 2007 - 23:52:15 Topic ID# 8260
Subject: Re: [MEFAwards] Re: Long versus short reviews













"LizaLlinos@aol.com" <LizaLlinos@aol.com> wrote:



Long? Short? It's all art - innit?

Verse this short!

Really ought

To be taught

To thwart

Or support

The thought

That aught

Can distort

Scores of the sort

That make you snort!



Verbosity however, has copious validity

Of enhancing the writer's talent and ability!

It displays profound wit and versatility

And raises their art to the heights of nobility.

So please don't disparage the acceptability

Of length over brevity with any hostility!

(We writers are fraught with such fragility)

Accept, I beg, the distinct possibility

That longness and shortness can find compatibility!

Succinctness may be lauded for its affordability

Whilst length is applauded for deductibility!



Sorry 'bout that - but I've been ill.



Liza
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Omy!
That's fabulous!
The short one was very Dr Suess-ical!

and the long one reminded me of Gilbert & Sullivan!
("Very Model of a Modern Major General") all the complicated rhyming!

Well done!
-Barb (Merbrat)










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Msg# 8309

MEFA Reviews for October 14, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 14, 2007 - 6:45:04 Topic ID# 8309
Title: Moira · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 676
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 17:51:45
This little story is splendid. The imagery it evokes is wonderful,
and the descriptions of the little folk are fascinating. The author
explains the strengths of the hobbits by pointing out how their
weaknesses are really not weaknesses at all, but defenses against the
Dark Lord.

Well done!

Title: Three Turnings of the Year · Author: Ruby Nye · Races: Hobbits
· ID: 37
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-08-31 18:18:09
How sweet and sad, all at the same time The journey Pervinca makes
from michievous tween to married matron, through joy, sorrow and back
again, brings tears to one's eyes. This story is bittersweet, and yet
hopeful at the same time. It shows that good things can come from bad
times, and that life does, indeed, go on.

Well done!

Title: First Flight · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 513
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-08-31 22:16:20
This was a great idea, well executed, reminding me how many stories
there remain in Middle Earth untold. It was nice to see this moment
in the life of a Great Eagle family, and nice to see Radaghast with a
having a respectful and respected place in it.

Title: Journey's End · Author: Altariel · Genres: Drama: Ithilien ·
ID: 442
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-09-01 17:25:36
What a terrific tale, taking right off from where Tolkien left Gondor
and building forward so naturally and easily. The pacing of this
story was gentle, the style economic, and yet brought the reader a
wonderfully full story, packed with details that only added to the
central focus, never detracted. The characters were beautifully
conveyed through actions and circumstances, the writer cleverly
subsumed in the narrator's voice telling us everything we needed to
know to feel this time and place.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 16
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-01 18:33:39
Although I've only seen "Snow White" once long, long ago, I
recognised the names of the Dwarfs, erm, Dwarves: what a charming
idea! And you managed to make each of the Dwaves distinct. It's a
pity it's "only" a drabble, I very much like this idea for a
crossover in a longer story... Even so, the picture you give of the
scene and some hints of how and why the Dwarves came to be there, is
sufficient to make the readers imagine an entertaining story beyond
the drabble.

I can very well imagine Thorin's face as he interviews these
potential candidates for the venture to the Lonely Mountain... And
I'd really like to know if it was really Gandalf who was behind it
all.

Title: Journey's End · Author: Altariel · Genres: Drama: Ithilien ·
ID: 442
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-01 18:36:32
The passage of time since the end of the WotR is implied subtly,
there is really no need for much exposition, it's all clear from the
way people think and behave, and the fact that the Rangers are no
longer so much in evidence (and needed).

Intriguing background for the PoV-character, and one I can very well
see as something in the New Age. It's also fascinating to be witness
to her thoughts and memories of the war, how she coped with her
losses and was brave enough to let herself be happy again, how she
made a new life for herself.

I liked how you went with and developed the idea of how similar and
yet different Aragorn and Faramir are; shaped by quite differing
lives and having different quirks (Aragorn's smoking, Faramir's
fingers revealing his interest in music) and yet with the common root
of the Dúnedain and similar character traits. It's wonderful to see
just how vivacious your Faramir has become as the shadow of his
earlier life has lifted in the intervening years.

My favourite detail was the idea of the ["impossible courtesy all his
kind managed no matter what the journey had been like"].

Title: Night of Love · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 617
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-02 04:03:23
Linda takes the idea, that Aragorn and Arwen's wedding night was not
utterly perfect, and spins it into a sweet and tender romantic idyll,
making gold out of straw, at least metaphorically.

It is reasonable to assume that Arwen might have been nervous of the
traditional wedding night consummation in a city whose cold stone
frightened her. Aragorn has a few worries of his own as well. How
this most famous bridal couple transcends their fears and finally
consummate their union should make most readers smile...

Title: The Horses of Eorl · Author: Branwyn · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 477
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-02 04:08:36
A sequel to Branwyn's drabble [Blackest Fate], this drabble is more
hopeful, dealing as it does with the fate of some of the horses of
the Mark, stolen and abused by the forces of Mordor and now freed and
back in Rohirric hands.

The horses suffer from having been abused, just as humans would. But
Radagast, who makes a heckuva horse whisperer, is there to help...

A lovely drabble on a subject not often touched on by Tolkien
fanfickers. Good work on showing (not telling) Radagast's patience
and skill with animals, even stressed ones, and his fundamental
humility.

Title: The Right Choice · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 437
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-02 04:09:10



Arwen re-connects with her mother in this elegant, lovely and quite
poignant drabble.

Though she does not, and cannot, see Celebrian, Arwen realizes that
she is now able to share her mother's feelings through her love for
her own new baby.

Arwen's knowledge that she and her mother are sundered until the
ending of the world makes a good counterpoint to the joy she feels,
showing the reader that Arwen understands her loss as well as her
gain, and yet has found joy and contentment. The hint that Arwen had
to choose between returning to her mother and the creation of her
future children, between the past and a strange future, is fascinating

The last line really makes me smile and want to cry a bit, too.



Title: Tradition · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Cross-Cultural: Drabble ·
ID: 691
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-02 04:16:08
A good look at a minor ROTK character - Gleowine, Theoden's minstrel,
who sings the last lament for the fallen king and then silences his
song.

What is particularly noteworthy here is the glimpse of Eowyn in a
rare conciliatory mode; presaging future success in diplomacy, as
befits the Lady of Gondor's Steward as well as the first Princess of
Ithilien.

Title: A Mother's Work · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Vignette · ID: 134
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 15:49:26
Cute! I could see these scenes very well, and they did a good job of
portraying life in the Shire. I particularly liked how you developed
the various familial relations. Nice job.

Title: Cultural Exchanges In Gondor · Author: Llinos/Marigold
CoAuthors · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 94
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 15:52:08
Delightful. What I love most about this series of moments involving
the hobbits in Minas Tirith is how you develop so much of the
Gondorian culture. Of course hobbits wouldn't have had shellfish
before, but I can easily imagine them in Gondor. And as for the
Haradric dance of the veils, that was pure genius -- hilarious to see
the different hobbits' reaction to it. And even though the hobbits
are in a foreign land, they still remain hobbits to the core -- just
as I would expect from these two authors. I really enjoyed these.

Title: A Useful Skill · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children
· ID: 46
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 16:10:15
This story does a good job of pointing out something I (and many
people) forget: Denethor is *old*. Not by historical standards to
marry, but certainly by modern standards, and he might have forgotten
more of what it was like to be a boy. Good of Faramir (and Nanny) to
remind him of that, even if it wasn't intentional. And it's a fun
read anyway. :-)

Title: 13th Birthday · Author: stefaniab · Races: Men: Gondor · ID:
138
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 16:12:43
This story has some really cute moments in Faramir's thirteenth
birthday. Of course it's mostly about the brothers 'mir, but I found
the scene with Denethor at the ery end really touching. It was all a
fun read.

Title: Great Books · Author: Lady Aranel · Genres: Humor · ID: 149
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 16:19:17
Oh, now that was funny! I love tales that investigate LACE, and this
story takes a new angle -- and one that seems surprisingly plausible,
at least to me. And I loved the hint of Arwen getting involved in
this group. She may not be as "safe" as her brothers think.

Title: Green · Author: annmarwalk · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 461
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 16:20:59
What I love so much about this drabble is the way it uses sensory
details to really pull the reader into the scene. That's not always
easy to do within the hundred-word constraints of a drabble, but
annmarwalk manages it marvellously. The smells she describe were ones
that, while reading, I swore I could smell too, and it's probably one
of the most affective descriptions of the scent of athelas that I've
ever come across. Juxtaposing that with the description of the scents
I assume annmarwalk meant me to associate with the Ringwraiths was a
powerful moment, and it made that terror all the more powerful to me.
This is a fine example of just how a drabble and a gapfiller should
work.

Title: Clothes Make the Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Humor: Drabble · ID: 625
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 16:29:47
Hee! Oh, this was a fun little glimpse into that moment. I love that
Celeborn still prefers the simpler things, but is smart enough to
know Galadriel needs to be humored. And that hopeful look of
Aragorn's at the end was priceless.

Title: Daybreak · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 705
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 16:31:25
Beautiful! There's such carefree joy in this; it's a really great
portrait of Faramir.

Title: The Dryad · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-
3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 71
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 16:38:11
This was nice. I liked the way the Dryad fought the shadow in her own
way, and her reconizing of Faramir.... I hadn't thought of that, but
it's nicely poetic that Ithilien itself would recognize something in
Faramir. It works well.

Title: Romance · Author: Greywing · Genres: Humor: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 375
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 16:40:15
What I love most about this drabble is the way it uses irreverent
details and juxtaposes some very romantic language with actions that
just aren't that. For instance, when Lothiriel's [raven locks] are
falling into her desert plate. There's a great bit of understatement
going, from when they danced [and did a great many things besides],
and then the understated conclusion of the whole thing -- I could
completely see it happening and found myself chuckling throughout.
Good work, Greywing.

Title: Comforting Silence · Author: Radbooks · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 157
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-02 18:10:23
Very nice moment between Faramir and Aragorn here. I can very easily
see this hard time for Faramir happening just this way.

Title: First Flight · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 513
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-02 19:01:00
I love your Eagles! Every single one has their own personality and
individual quirks, and although one can recognise behaviour similar
to those of humans and human families, they are still clearly birds,
with mannerisms appropriate for them.

And it's so much fun to see the mighty Windlord and his brother as
young eaglets! And to see the difference in the brothers - Landroval
impetuous and rash, Gwaihir deliberate and systematic - was a very
nice touch.

Loved Gwaenur's insistence on courtesy, as known from CMC and also,
more general, from canon in both LotR and TH.

Radagast's wince at the screeching, and his discomfort at the height,
were funny details. I'm very fond of the Brown Wizard, and you have
drawn him exactly as I imagined, very approachable and kind and down-
to-earth (pardon the pun).

Title: Missing · Author: conniemarie · Races: Hobbits: Vignette · ID:
731
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-02 19:02:11
The idea/legend of the Tookish Faery blood is one I always like
reading about, and your take on this was beautiful. I liked how Merry
sees it clearly in Pippin and Frodo, and also sees the differences in
how it manifests itself in each of them, but doesn't see - as Sam
does - that he has a touch of it himself.

Adding knowledge and practice of ["The Old Ways"] to the usually
mundane world of the Hobbits was very intriguing combined with this
idea of Faery blood. I love the idea of the Widow Rumble as a some
sort of Wise Woman.

This otherworldy thread - together with well-chosen descriptions of
the environment - gave the story an atmospheric, slightly eerie feel.

Insightful and precise characterisations for all the Hobbits. The
fact that these portrayals are shown as thoughts of the Hobbits about
each other makes it an even more intrinsic part of the narrative, as
opposed to "mere" exposition.

Title: The Archives Incident · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Adventure: Minas Tirith · ID: 38
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-02 19:02:58
It was a wonderful idea to let Frodo find Isildur's scroll, and to
picture the table with the documents on it as being left this way
when Gandalf hurried away from his discovery.

I think my favourite part was actually the (suitably dreadful and
terribly funny) heroic poem about Thorongil's exploits. And I'm right
with Frodo in wishing I could see Aragorn's face when he discovers
this poem!

Title: An Expansion of the Family Influence · Author: Auntiemeesh ·
Times: Early Third Age: 1-2850 TA · ID: 819
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-02 19:03:38
This story contains careful and realistic details about the project
of building a smial. It makes it interesting to follow the progress
(or lack of progress) step by step.

Unfortunately, apart from the main protagonist, the characters stay
rather remote, especially in the first half, where there is no
dialogue, only exposition.

Msg# 8310

MEFA Reviews foro October 14, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 14, 2007 - 6:46:44 Topic ID# 8310
Title: Unstrung · Author: Tehta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 161
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-03 01:58:38
Interesting narrative by Maglor about many events from the
Silmarillion. I like the way Tehta gets inside Maglor's head without
revealing all, showing the mystery and genius of Feanor's only
surviving son.,

Title: Renascence · Author: Kenaz · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 577
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-09-03 02:38:22
There are few special people who write Tolkien fanfiction who really
move me consistently and without fail. Kenaz is one of those. Each
story of hers is uniquely imagined and yet always carries the mark of
her own inimitable style, rich in psychological insight and fully-
developed characterizations. Her first Marchwarden novel was one of
the first fanfiction slash stories I had read and I recall writing a
gushy, soul-bearing letter in response. Since then I have been one of
her biggest fans and she has never disappointed me. This story is no
exception. I truly loved everything about this story. It contains one
of the most believable and inspired descriptions of sealonging that I
have read. It builds a new and expected relationship between the two
protagonists slowly and with care. One recognizes Legolas from canon
and believes entirely in the character she paints for Elrohir. The
use of the mythology and astronomy from Tolkien's legendarium is a
brilliantly executed device. Yet all of the most fantastical elements
are grounded by a solidly realistic portrayals. Legolas's differences
with his father and their deeply rooted love and commitment to one
another is beautifully written and described. I loved the use of the
inspiration of the poem of Edna St. Vincent Millay. The economical
yet lyrical writing of the love scenes is beautiful as always.

Title: Stirrings of Shadow · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Adventure:
Incomplete · ID: 233
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-09-03 03:53:26
A great tale - one which I will continue to watch for - to see where
you take this.

I love the idea of Aragorn's time in Edoras - the tale you are
weaving is quite good... I very much like him bringing someone from
the Angle with him. Sounds quite plausible. I also am enjoying the
story itself - great tension and many surprises. The fact that
Thengel is so sorely beset - by not only friends, but family too, is
difficult to read, but believable. I very much like Aragorn's
character - you write it well. I also like the Elves being 'slightly'
involved in things in Rohan. This also makes sense, at least the way
you have written it. The things Aragorn has to endure and then the
plague and then the nastiness with Thengel's mother. She seems to
have been a perfect spouse for his horrid father! Aragorn really has
become a beloved and helpful 'man of Rohan!' AND I really like your
OC's.

Very nice tale! Well-written too!



Title: Bathing Boromir · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID:
645
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-09-03 03:57:12
Giggling as only a love-sick woman of Gondor, I read this with
delight. Who would NOT love to bathe Boromir - be still my heart.
Delightful moments - and I do so love that you have Ioreth there with
him. I absolutely adore her thought about none will get close to HER
boy! Delightful. I also love the metaphor, if you will, between
Ioreth and Smaug! Thanks for sharing it.

Title: Emmaus · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama: Vignette · ID: 636
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-09-03 06:52:30
A very different idea of the wanderings of Faramir's spirit before
Aragorn called him back to life within the Houses of Healing, in
which he is tempted to hide in his memories of the Sea and Dol Amroth
as he remembers it from his youth.

A most visually compelling work, one that would do well, I think, as
a short filmed vignette. And to be called back to life from that, to
think he must go forth and face death and lead others to death upon
the fields of battle again and again, only to waken to the King
Returned....

Very good.

Title: And We Will Travel North · Author: bewize · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 39
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-09-03 18:22:51
I really like the way you've brought in theme of the doom of the
Elves being entwined with that of Estel, and the man he will become:
[ ...that day will be bittersweet. Our hope is for his success; our
alternative is our common deaths.] How farsighted of the Elves to see
so much in the hands of a child!

[ ...becoming for a short time that which we are not: Men of the
North.] This is a very intriguing concept, and one which I don't
recall seeing to much of: the Mannish heritage of the Peredhel, and
how they recognized and accepted that part of themselves to join with
the Dunedain, pledging their lives in fealty to both kin and king.


Title: Sticky Sweet · Author: SheBit · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 196
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-09-03 18:45:45
This startling drabble, by one of our most original writers, starts
innocuously enough: a cozy kitchen, a delicious treat warm from the
oven, a child's delight. The imagery and language is exquisite,
delighting the senses: [feather-light, honey-rich, wild, fragrant].
How fortunate we are to share in this vision, a well-loved child's
happy memory!

It is only when we read further that we discover to our shock that
the joyful small boy is Aragorn, now grown to manhood, taking refuge
for a moment in a comforting childhood memory from the shock and
anguish of Boromir's death.

It's difficult for me to articulate exactly what I love about
SheBit's writing. She doesn't write sweetness and light ( though she
does have moments of droll humor.) Often I have to stop and reread
several times, to try to decipher the hints she's slyly hidden in the
choice of a particular word, or bit of punctuation. I think what
fascinates me the most is SheBit's ability to see beyond the obvious,
to draw amazing and insightful and unusual parallels, to make me look
at Tolkien's world in a whole new way.





Title: With No Pity · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Villains:
Drabble · ID: 391
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-09-03 19:03:22
A very vivid and descriptive drabble with an unexpected twist. We are
used to tales of brutal and bloodthirsty slaughter, of desperate
defenders and small outposts overrun; but seldom have we seen the
words [blood-hungry, ravening, fell] used as they are in this unique
story. Yet we should not be surprised; the Professor wrote much, much
more of the fierce and terrible bright-eyed elves of "The
Silmarillion" than he did of the slighty woozy-sounding tra-la-lally
elves of "The Hobbit". Kortirion has given us an unforgettable view
of elves: vengeful, implacable, merciless.


Title: Glistening · Author: Ellie · Races: Elves · ID: 383
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-04 04:43:09
Intriguing set of short pieces, using the word 'glistening' in
connection with several generations of one line of Elves, from
Thingol to Elrohir. My favorite piece was that describing Elrond's
acquisition of Vilya; there's some lovely description of the fabled
ring. The last vignette, Elrohir's, is quite haunting as well.

Title: Elladan and Elrohir's Not So Excellent Adventure · Author:
Fiondil · Races: Elves · ID: 97
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-04 04:44:30
A truly excellent adventure story, with an undercurrent of humor and
immense charm. Young Elrohir and Elladan desire to travel alone from
Imladris to Lorien; their father grants the request, thinking he's
got all the angles covered to support his sons in their attempt to
make it on their own; but fate, and the youngsters' own rather
adolescent rebelliousness, combine to imperil the Peredhil.

There are a few instances of quasi-modern language, but overall, the
Middle-earth ambiance is credibly presented, the use of Sindarin and
Quenya first-rate, and the characterisation quite good. There are
several OC's - including some Dwarves.

I liked the way that the level of danger goes from amusingly low to
quite intense.

Title: Mistaken Identities · Author: Greywing · Races: Elves · ID: 201
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-04 04:50:40
A very amusing tale wherein several Elves who stayed on until Middle-
earth became Earth find their way into Greek mythology; but not
always the way one would think.

Poor Haldir. And how embarrassing for Celeborn!

Interesting concepts, used well with a light, refreshing writing
style.

Title: Beneath a Gibbous Moon · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-
Cultural · ID: 4
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-04 04:53:25
A beautiful tapestry of a story; woven of the meetings of three
generations of Elves with many more generations of one line of Men,
each one in the late night and early morning between momentuous
events - Oropher's conversation with Elros, Thranduil's talk with
Isildur, and of course, in a pleasing symmetry - Legolas and Aragorn
awaiting victory or death in the last hours before the last battle in
March 3019.

I think my favorite chapter is the first; mostly because the meeting
of Elros and Oropher is, I believe, unprecedented in Tolkien fanfic;
and Bodkin writes them both with such authority and skill. Elros
rings very true here; a young but already wise and perceptive fellow,
choosing to be a Man and a future King. He is definitely drawn with
elements of both kindreds; the vigor and restlessness of the Edain,
and the ancient wisdom of the Eldar; and his Noldor streak is most
definitely recognizable. And I love Oropher's description of drowned
Menegroth and Doriath - the language there is exquisite.

Title: What Was That Job Description? · Author: Larner · Genres:
Crossover · ID: 523
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-04 04:57:11
An elegant and amusing fanfiction universe crossover, with the least
likely denizen of Harry Potter's world ending up in Middle-earth, at
Elessar's court, of all places.

It's Gilderoy Lockheart, former golden boy of the Hogwarts Faculty.

Larner captures the golden-tongued wizard in all his glory as smooth-
talking impresario. Gilderoy tries his best, but the King of Gondor
is less credulous than the Hogwarts faculty, it seems. And no one is
impressed by Gilderoy's multiple winning of the [Witches Weekly Most
Charming Smile Award].

Gilderoy might do better to try the Star Trek universe and see if he
can convince anyone that he's related to Trelane or Q.



A great little read.

Title: Green Magic · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Crossover
· ID: 312
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-04 04:57:34
An outstanding story from a talented author, [Green Magic] is an
unusual variation on the 'Middle-earth Character In Modern Times'
theme.

In this story that is enchanting and sinister by turns, an American
woman traveling with her two sons encounters Tom Bombadil and some
leafy acquaintances, in a Western forest. What seems like a lovely,
quiet wood turns out to have some strange twists and turns,
literally, as paths disappear and strange voices come from old trees.

And the ending is...well, you'll just have to read it, but it works
very well in the context of the story.

Wonderful characterisation of old Tom, and the trees are nigh
Tolkienesque.

Title: Bound by Duty · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance: With
Rohirrim · ID: 175
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-04 05:43:02
A lively Lothiriel/Eomer romance. In this variation, Lothiriel
accepts the King of Rohan's marriage offer out of a sense of duty -
understanding and love of her husband and adopted country come slowly
during the course of the story.

Good use of language in constructing Rohir names. And I like the bit
about Lothiriel's being concerned about the newborn Elfwine's
resemblance to his Gondorian grandfather rather than his Eorling
longfathers.

Title: Some Dark Place · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Adventure: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 226
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-09-04 23:17:21
[...What still set his heart racing and his hands to unmanly
trembling, what brought a cold sweat to his brow was the certainty
that sometime, somewhere, he would have to face the Riders again.]

An extraordinarily vivid tale of Aragorn's first encounter with the
Ringwraiths, alluded to in "The Fellowship of the Ring." What makes
this tale particularly noteworthy is that Aragorn here is not young
and inexperienced, but already well on his way to being one of the
greatest fighters and trackers and travelers of the age. He is
already chieftain of the Dunedain; yet his terror and anguish and
humiliation are very realistic and palpable, revealing him as as one
of us, as frail and fearful as we are. It is how he has learned to
deal with his fears that has made him the firm and charismatic leader
we know and love. It's a unique and courageous view of Aragorn, well-
handled by one of his best writers. Bravo, Raksha!

Title: Anchor · Author: Songspinner · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later
Ages · ID: 772
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-04 23:17:54
Short, sweet friendship fic for Aragorn and Legolas. Legolas's sea-
longing gets a number of interpretations in fandom, and here we see
him struggling with it and finding an anchor in Aragorn and his
family. Aragorn (and others) likewise finds an anchor and help in
Legolas, so everyone keeps each other steady as the years pass. It's
nice that it's a mutual supporting.

Title: Field of Dreams · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama · ID:
374
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-04 23:24:32
Sad and sweet - after the war, there would have been many women, and
many families of only women with all their menfolk dead or still away
from home, in similar straits. The effort to bring the harvest in
short-handed and understrength would be grindingly hard, and the
knowledge that loved ones would not return to share the burden of the
work and the joy of it would weigh heavily on the survivors, as Agape
shows. Well done.

Title: Matchmakers · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Drama: With Merry ·
ID: 587
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-04 23:42:30
Clever Pippin, although he might've saved himself a lot of trouble if
he'd enlisted official help from the get go. There would be a lot of
orphans caught in between needing constant care and needing the work
that grown men do but for which they're not quite ready. Good to see
Merry and Pippin go to bat for them.

Title: Under the Eyes of the Evenstar · Author: Raksha the Demon ·
Genres: Drama: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 680
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-04 23:55:33
Arwen's relationship to Boromir is not often explored. One imagines
she must've met him and had an opinion of Aragorn's rival. I like the
ambivalence of her assessment. The turn from outright hostility to
understanding in the face of his exhaustion is well done, as is the
shift from there to unhappy foresight of his demise, which is nicely
understated in terms of tone.

Title: Worship · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: General Drabble · ID:
586
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-05 00:01:00
Osram must be quite frustrated and puzzled by his slave's
steadfastness - most others would have given up and made themselves
adapt, hidden all traces of their own thoughts and hopes. Tuor
doesn't - not completely. He still looks up to the sky and he doesn't
surrender hope, which must be just galling for his captor. I think
the choice to show Tuor from the outside is a good one - it keeps him
an enigma, and if the enemy is made, in a way, to testify to the
strength of his captive's conviction by his very frustration with
him, that has a stronger impact, in some ways, than hearing Tuor's
own thoughts.

Title: Farewell · Author: Vilwarin · Genres: Drama: With Aragorn ·
ID: 706
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-05 00:05:38
Poor doomed Halbarad! But I think his strength is, as ever, that he
does accept what's demanded of him without regret. I liked the
fumbling on the "thanks" - Halbarad throws Aragorn off a bit, but
that seems right. Aragorn has a lot to thank him for, and while much
of it might be duty in one way, Halbarad hasn't ever done only his
duty where Aragorn is concerned.

Title: Naming Places · Author: Elen Kortirion · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 447
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-09-05 00:30:03
This has always been one of my very favorite Boromir/Théodred
stories. Set very early in their relationship, we glimpse sly
Théodred plotting the exact method of Boromir's seduction. (The
imagery of his guards, chuckling to themselves in the background, is
an amusing touch – they know their prince all too well). An
imaginative and uninhibited lover, Theodred takes advantage of a
teachable moment to give Boromir a language lesson he will recall
breathlessly for years to come. For his part, Boromir seems
uncharacteristically hesitant, almost shy; perhaps the somewhat
straightlaced Son of Gondor is startled when he realizes exactly what
the golden prince is ready and willing to teach. His [wavering voice]
betrays his fear that this might be too good to be true!

The focus of the drabble is almost entirely on Théodred: it's
fascinating to see his mood change quickly from playfully lecherous
to reverent to almost worshipful by the time he reaches the final
word. In the space of just a few moments his world view has shifted,
as he begins to realize that his relationship with Boromir will be
more than just a passing flirtation. It's a tantalizing tale,
stopping just at the perfect spot to allow our imaginations to soar.


Title: God of Wrath · Author: Katzilla · Genres: Drama · ID: 369
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-05 00:34:35
One of the things that can get lost in adventure stories is the
effect that war, especially a long one, can have on the men and women
who fight it. Nobility is something we require of our heroes, or else
they fail to materialize for us as such, but the cost of war cannot
be wholly ignored. Katzilla takes a look at the brutal leveling
effect that warfare has on warriors and shows that the heroes of the
story are not immune and can be brought absolutely as low as the orcs
and sadists among us, for whom war is a form of normality.

Eomer's descent is appropriately sparked by what he fears most - not
dying, and not the death of his men (necessarily), but the thought of
a useless death that wouldn't save his sister. He can handle just
about anything short of that, but when he rides into a situation that
touches on that traumatic idea, he explodes. It takes an equally
traumatized survivor of another battle, a woman who has lived through
the nightmare Eomer envisions for his sister, to put a stop on his
fall. One hopes that both of them will have found the confrontation
cathartic and that perhaps they might regain a little more of
themselves than they had had before.

Title: Circumstantial Heroes · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Minas
Tirith · ID: 684
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-05 01:05:17
Gwynnyd gives us a king to be reckoned with, even if he is a bit out
of the loop and in a dressing gown. One can only imagine the upheaval
of (a) having a king after centuries of stewards, and (b) *being* the
king after that same period. Everyone would be playing catch up,
tripping over forgotten protocols, trying to figure out the place
they are supposed to occupy - Aragorn included.

In all that chaotic running about and getting accustomed to change,
it wouldn't be surprising if some things, even important things, got
accidentally left aside or shuffled to the back of a long line of
tasks. Not for any malice, but because there's just not enough time
to get all the details that would make the matter appear in its
proper light. Fortunately, Aragorn has Pippin to clue him in, even if
it happens unexpectedly one night, in a way that catches the new king
by surprise.

I've seen the attempt to handle Beregond's sentencing written a few
times, but Gwynnyd does a masterful job of setting the context, and
then letting it unfold in a way that doesn't give anyone involved
short shrift, but also shows that something has definitely slipped
through the cracks. Linking Beregond's fate to the set of Denethor's
most loyal servants who remain in Aragorn's service was well done,
and that interview with Brithnir was a sharp piece of writing in more
than one sense of that word.

Hithdol is another great character, and, as the title indicates, a
circumstantial hero just as much as Beregond or Pippin - a solid,
down to earth sort of fellow who isn't too proud to know his limits
and exploit them to the hilt to serve his people. He and Aragorn
ought to do well together. Nice comic moment between him and his king
over the matter of, um, keeping the king 'entertained' in his off-
hours and the problems of rumors.

A very well done vignette, chock full of politics that mark the
intersection of high justice and lower decks service. Highly
recommended!

Msg# 8311

Re: Spoilers Posted by Chris October 14, 2007 - 16:44:44 Topic ID# 8255
I have a bunch of reviews I havenät finalized yet, since I prefer to write
them hidden and then release them a week or so later to make sure they make
sense<g> What's not released yet, can be doctored<g>.

Chris

>
> FWIW, I often find myself writing spoilers - maybe not for the big
> finish, but certainly for plot details. I never thought to put a spoiler
> warning in, just because it didn't occur to me. I do think the spoiler
> warning is a great idea, and I like the idea of putting a spoiler
> warning in. So long as you put it in [square brackets] so it doesn't
> count toward the length of your review, I think that will be fine.
>
> But please don't feel obligated to go back and add warnings to the
> reviews you've already entered. This is something that's nice to do for
> new reviews, but you don't need to go back and fix all the old reviews.
> Better to spend the time reviewing *new* stories!
>
> Marta

Msg# 8312

MEFA Reviews for October 15, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 15, 2007 - 4:11:20 Topic ID# 8312
Title: Forcing a Path · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 400
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-05 01:10:22
I am in full sympathy with Boromir and Aragorn - snow is evil! A very
good thing both of them went to dig the Fellowship out, or Boromir
might have been in a very bad way indeed!

Title: And We Danced · Author: Phyncke · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Fingolfin · ID: 110
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-09-05 02:33:16
I loved this story from the first time I read it--months ago. It's
imaginative and unique, contradicting so many specific things that I
have in my own head about that time period and those characters. (For
example, I am one of those nutcases who believes Maitimo and
Findekáno are a canon couple!) But the writer's ability to draw me
into a totally different scenario indicates to me that she has done a
stupendous job in being able to replace my own preconceptions and
prejudices with her own creation. The atmosphere and ambience is
palpable—I clearly visualize the hall on the night of the Yule
celebration. When she describes the music and the dancing I can
almost feel the beat. It has what strikes me as a filmic quality to
it. The characters feel real and alive to me. Like the subtle push
and pull between Findekáno and Aikanáro—two warrior-princes, strong
of character and of will, who give only when they wish to, but are
capable of such tenderness. Lovely, romantic story, beautifully told.

Title: The Eagle's Gift · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
Minas Tirith · ID: 591
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-05 02:38:06
Oh dear, boys and their horns...

But that it would undoubtedly be treasonous, and Denethor would never
give Thorongil the pleasure, nor Thorongil accept it for fear of it
getting a report somewhere, these two would probably prefer to drink
to, say, meddling fathers who leave things to the last possible and
most awkward minute!

I can see the sparring over experience here - boys will be boys, men
will be men, and everything that seems to come with that. Denethor
does manage to humiliate Thorongil a bit, though Thorongil, being who
he is, isn't one to take that lying down, as it were. I like their
truce at the end, both of them suffering their stations as
Ecthelion's duty bound son and servant. For once, they understand
themselves to be in a certain solidarity!

Title: Concussion · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure · ID: 711
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-05 16:32:35
I don't usually read stories with Bilbo as the main character, but
I'm glad I found this one.

I also liked the way the other characters enteract with him.

Title: The Three Hunters · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure ·
ID: 333
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-05 17:15:25
This is a wonderful story, Dreamflower.

The different first impressions that Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli each
had of the younger hobbits is fascinating. And that ending is classec
Gimli.

Well done.

Title: I Bid You Stand · Author: storyfish · Genres: Adventure · ID:
225
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-05 19:11:19
This is a wonderful gap-filler for the movie. It gives us Merry and
Pippin fans something to cheer about.

They really did get cheated out of a lot in the films, and you've
given so much back to them. Pippin even got his troll.

Thank goodness for authors like you who make Peter's mistakes and
shortcomings ones we can live with.

Title: Sarn Gebir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Adventure: Fixed-
Length Ficlet · ID: 398
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-05 19:19:16
Nice little hint there at the end that Boromir was already feeling
the pull of the Ring.

Title: Dangerous Folk · Author: Budgielover · Genres: Adventure:
Incomplete · ID: 800
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-05 19:24:52
This story is off to a great start.

The idea of a race of goblins that live in the water is very creative.

Title: The Archives Incident · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Adventure: Minas Tirith · ID: 38
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-06 02:16:58
I just love this story. There is humor, drama and suspense all in
here. The bit with Pippin finding that horrid poetry is priceless.
The moment where Frodo sees the ring inscription is heart-chilling.

The rats are so believable that I shivered when reading about them.

Frodo and Pippin both show such wonderful resourcefullness and
determination. They are fantastic.

Great job, Dreamflower.

Title: Kissing Hope · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 574
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-06 03:39:39
This one is a short and sweet drabbled look at the relationship of
Aragorn and Arwen at the end of that golden summer in Lorien. It
works quite well here; as a play on clothing, status, and reality;
Arwen knows the man beneath whatever different raiment he wears, and
loves him. I like Arwen's play on words between [Estel] and [hope].

A fine snapshot of the last moments of a legendary season.

Title: Glimpse of Glory · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 575
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-06 04:05:42
It is never easy to capture Galadriel, most powerful of the Elves in
LOTR, in fanfiction. Lindahoyland does quite a good job in a hundred
words in this excellent drabble.

I like how Galadriel's thoughts, as she ponders Frodo's offer to give
her the Ring, begin with saving her realm, making the mallorns bloom
for a longer time, and end in her becoming a [beautiful and terrible
queen]. The line about flowers springing up in her footsteps really
works well, too.




Title: For All Things a Cost · Author: Súlriel · Times: Second Age:
Drabble · ID: 268
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-06 04:25:01
A female orc learns the hard way that any softness, even the love of
a mother for her offspring, can have dire consequences in their
society.

Unusual and credible; and rather sad. Good grasp of orcish speech
patterns as well.

Title: Fun with Farm'n · Author: Súlriel · Races: Villains: Drabble ·
ID: 269
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-06 04:28:06
Actually quite funny in a gruesome, Orcish way.

Good work in the recreation of the Orcs' speech patterns. Ugh, they
are quite nasty, aren't they?! The Orcish idea of fun is definitely
not human-tolerant. In fact it's not tolerant at all; as this drabble
cleverly illustrates.

Title: Truly Tested · Author: Súlriel · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 257
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-06 04:28:40
A fine drabble detailing the moments where young Aragorn kills for
the first time. The details are excellent, and help bring home the
shock and grisly, gritty transition of a skilled student into a
warrior.

Title: No Harm Will Come of It · Author: Marigold · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 456
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-06 04:30:43
This series was great fun to read; a spreading of treasure, like the
skill of reading itself. The characterisation of the Gaffer is
wonderful; he is very like Sam, though more provincial, perhaps as
Sam would have been had his mind not been given a window on the wide
world by Bilbo and Frodo; but canny enough to teach himself to read.
Of course, the last bit was excellent!

Title: When Day is Done · Author: Dana · Genres: Alternate Universe ·
ID: 23
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-06 16:41:51
This story goes to a place that I have often wanted to explore; the
world of what might have been.

Dana clearly knows these characters so well that she can put them
into a situation different than what really happened and make it
totally believable. I had to keep reminding myself that Merry and
Pippin did not go with Frodo.

The odd little things that Pippin keeps feeling are a nice touchstone
for the readers because he, like they, seems to sense that there has
been a slight disordering of the world.

There are some very interesting little questions raised by certain
events in this story that I really hope Dana fleshes out in a later
work.

Great job.

Title: The Blessing · Author: Golden/Pearl Took CoAuthors · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 235
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-06 16:59:09
This story is an amazing look at might have happened to Pippin as a
result of being crushed beneath that troll. No one could come out of
that intact.

Golden and Pearl are showing just what life would have been like for
someone who had suffered permanent injury from an accident such as
Pippin had. It is quite believable and heart-breaking realistic. It
is a story that will make you cry, but you will have to laugh, too,
just like life.

I can't wait to see how things progress as time goes on for all our
beloved characters.

It is not always the easiest story to read, but hope srings eternal
in all their hearts and it shines through in the telling.

Title: Turned Earth · Author: Dana · Genres: Alternate Universe: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 26
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-06 18:56:47
Creepy! That is the best way to sum this story up.

Zombies are scary enough, but hobbit zombies are a cut above. There
is something so wrong about the image of a gentle hobbit turned into
a lifeless, blood-sucking, killing machine. It makes it all the more
horrible.

Dana does a great job keeping her living hobbits hobbity and doesn't
let them slip out of character. Rose is especially believable. I also
love self-sacrificing Pippin. He would be that way.

This would be one of the best hobbity Halloween stories ever.

Title: Elements: Dreams of the Dead, Visions of the Living · Author:
pipkinsweetgrass · Genres: Alternate Universe: The Shire or Buckland
· ID: 202
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-06 20:29:54
This story truly is a journey of the spirit. It is as much about
Boromir as it is about Pippin and his fairy blood.

Pippin's gift allows him to have insights into what was happening in
the mind and heart of Boromir.

The story even follows them into their after-life, which is a rich
and pleasant experience.

There is a lot that goes on in this story. There are elements drawn
form many varied places such as classic literature and the Bible, and
they are all placed loving in Tolkien's world

This is a deep and memorable tale, and one that may need a second
look to get some of the deeper meanings from it.

Title: The Oarsman · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-
3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 357
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-07 01:29:16
Here's a pair of drabbles that convey the torment and deliverence of
the Corsairs' galley slaves from the slaves' own viewpoints. Tanaqui
has picked an unusual fanfictional subject here, and covers it well.
The horror of the slaves' existence is conveyed without melodrama,
but with actions and thoughts.

The second drabble is my favorite; and the last line is simply
wonderful.





Title: Firelight · Author: Songspinner · Genres: Drama: Ithilien ·
ID: 817
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-07 02:23:05
This is a very nice story of the great friendship of the fellowship.
They will always be there for each other.

Even the movie-verse element felf perfectly right in this story.

Title: Fell Memories · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Other Fixed-
Length Ficlet · ID: 191
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:27:01
Augh! Oh, Aragorn... I'd say this answers the question of ["How could
he be so weary?"] quite completely, and excellent tie-in to the quote
at the beginning. This is another gap that I'd not really thought on
much until you brought it up, and although the resulting images are
difficult to contemplate, it is so logical and fits the parameters
very well.

The drabbles build well on one another, steadily increasing the
terrible nature of what Aragorn is facing, on his desperate escape
and ugly injuries and his awful feelings of failure and unworthiness.
I loved how he fended off the Nazgul by chanting the Lay, and the
wonderfully appropriate quotes you worked in.

Title: A Quadrabble for Sam · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 397
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:27:29
Poor Sam! The affection between all of them is nicely shown, and
sweet humor at the end.

Title: Of Numenor That Was · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 424
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:28:29
Beautiful and horrific at the same time... The writing here is clean
and precise, fitting a great deal of information into each drabble
without feeling crowded or rushed. The atmosphere of each drabble is
set very well. The tension builds nicely, not only within each
drabble but over the entire series, until we get a sense of closure
and maybe a little peace at the end, helping alleviate the chilling
despair and sadness of what came before.

The voice of each of the characters rings true, and each is distinct,
contributing something new to the overall image being created. I
loved the title reference: Truly, Numenor made grand and wondrous
contributions to the world, but it had this dark side, too - the
horror that helped lead to its destruction.

I also liked very much the thread of religious belief that flows
through, from Eru to the worldly corruption by Sauron (who so
facilely interwove truth with his lies), and back to Eru again. ["I
am the Beginning and the End...."] I thought the written ambiguity of
Gimilbeth and Sakalzor in regards to their religious beliefs was
particularly well done, and left much to the imagination of the
reader as to how they could have arrived at their disparate points. I
could see many mirrors to real life situations, both good and bad.

Title: Blades of the Downfallen West · Author: Tanaqui · Genres:
Drama: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 441
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:29:07
Oh... So many wonderful phrases and images are called up in this,
from Merry's ["slow-kindled hobbit courage"] and ["Love conquers
fear, as day drives night before it."] to the Witch-King's arrogance,
to the references to Angmar and Earnur and Aragorn. It brings to mind
a richness and history that goes far beyond the basic drabble itself,
infusing everything with tremendous depth and consequence. And all so
subtly and cleanly accomplished that I hardly realize it until I'm
done reading, and start to really think about how it affected me.

Nice shifts in the PoVs, and I love the contrasting images: The
broken blade of the Downfallen, becoming the broken Witch-King
himself.

Msg# 8313

MEFA Reviews for October 15, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 15, 2007 - 4:13:18 Topic ID# 8313
Title: Family Jewels · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 464
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:30:11
Wonderful exploration of the themes of fatherhood and forgiveness.
The writing is well done, starting with the stirring quote about
Feanor and gradually leading us into Faramir's own difficult
relationship with his father.

Faramir's characterization and PoV is marvellous: The scholar reading
to his children; the father who loves them beyond measure; the leader
who struggled with the lure of the One Ring; the son who had to find
a very difficult forgiveness for his own father. Absolutely loved his
musings on his son and daughter and the emotions described as he
watched them.

The final paragraphs are extremely powerful, with Faramir struggling
against renewed fury at his own father - indeed, understanding his
love for Elboron and Miriel, Denethor's (and Feanor's) actions would
in some ways be even harder to comprehend. The parallel drawn between
Denethor and Feanor was unexpected but fit so well into the context
of the story, and gave me much to think about.

Title: Oliphaunts and String · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 658
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:32:09
An excellent descriptive title - one that had me wondering about the
subject, only to find its oblique reference poignant and perfect for
Smeagol's descent to evil under the Ring's influence.

A powerful perspective of a pivotal moment, told by the one who
perhaps loved Smeagol most. It was all the more difficult to watch
with his grandmother as the village leader, forced to choose between
her people's safety and her grandson. Very clever use of Smeagol's
voice to show the passage from who he was into who he became
(Gollum); and of the frog as a symbol for attempting the possession
and taming of the unpossessable and untamable.

Title: Under the Eyes of the Evenstar · Author: Raksha the Demon ·
Genres: Drama: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 680
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:33:02
Very nice incorporation of two prompts into an answer for a little-
explored corner of the fandom. I think my favorite part of this is
Arwen's voice and the overall tone of the story: steady, dignified
and reflecting a kind and forgiving heart. It could not have been
easy for her to accept a man who opposed her dreams, and blocked the
way to Gondor's throne.

Boromir's characterization is well done, also: Proud and determined.
Almost arrogant, but he too is not in an easy place. It must have
been difficult to accept that he and Gondor required aid, and then to
meet the man who would be his King! It fits well with the brother
Faramir describes to Frodo and Sam.

Title: Sea King; Seeking · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 689
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:33:41
This is a wonderful series. Each drabble is self-contained, but also
adds another pertinent viewpoint that rounds out the situation - a
rather tragic one, in my mind. In today's world, Aldarion and Erendis
would definitely be considered a "bad divorce" with high impacts to
their child. And they were both party to it: Aldarion making too few
concessions to his family, Erendis thinking that he could be kept
from the sea for any length of time, and plenty of unbending pride
from each of them.

The different voices feel distinct and the perspectives are well-
chosen, expanding my understanding and recalling my (long-ago)
reading of this story. There are beautiful turns of phrase and
references throughout each one. I particularly like Veantur's
thoughts of Aldarion never looking back to his home, Meneldur's
realization of the benefits of his son's voyaging, and poor
Ancalime's painful reaction to what she sees as her father's
rejection.

Title: Following the King · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Drama:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 735
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-08 06:36:42
Very nice representation of Pippin: Brave and loving his friends
dearly, his irrepressible nature shows through in his joking attempts
to relieve tension. I love his protective feelings toward his older
cousin Merry, and the surge of courage he has at the end for Frodo's
sake. Very perceptive thought of his, too, about Faramir and Eowyn
and Merry.

Title: A Suitable Tribute · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Drama · ID:
474
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-08 19:27:09
Ooh, interesting cross of the story of the little drummer boy
with "The Gift of the Magi". This is a neat portrait of both Gondor's
post-war need and the generosity of her people.

Title: The Arachnid's Appeal · Author: TrekQueen · Genres: Humor ·
ID: 114
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-08 19:27:20
This was cute. Shelob being so disgruntled about little things is
certainly good for a few laughs.

Title: The Blue Book of Bilbo Baggins, or, Tales of the Forbidden
Silmarillion · Author: Gandalfs apprentice/Greywing CoAuthors ·
Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 195
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-09-08 19:27:30
Nicely naughty, but still fairly consistent with the spirit of canon
(if sometimes in a slightly subversive way). And Greywing's portraits
just add to the fun, and looked vaguely similar to Lee illustrations.
These were a lot of fun.

Title: Concussion · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Adventure · ID: 711
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-08 22:29:12
The language of this story blends naturally with that used in TH,
especially in the inner monologues (including the exlamations) and
dialogues. The characterisations were perfect, from Bilbo to Gandalf
to the various Dwarves. I think it's especially difficult to capture
the small differences between the Gandalf from TH and the one from
LotR, but you did it very well. You also already hinted - very
subtly - at the closer bond with Balin that will endure beyond
Bilbo's homecoming.

I had to laugh at the scene modelled after Frodo's awakening in
Rivendell. And it was a nice touch to show the beginnings of Bilbo's
desire to learn the Elven languages.

Title: More Than Just Years · Author: Llinos · Genres: Adventure:
Minas Tirith · ID: 362
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-08 22:41:01
I like the picture you draw in the first part of the Hobbits
harvesting: the warmth, the colours, the different tasks, the
children playing...

It was nice to think the special bond between Gandalf and Pippin was
forged when the latter was still so young, and the portrayal of the
relationship between Merry and his little cousin was very moving.

I have a hard time believing Pippin really believed the ["magick"]
ear was his true source of courage up until after the lighting of the
beacons, but it was a touching expansion of the scene in the film.

Title: Bitter · Author: vladazhael · Genres: Drama: General Drabble ·
ID: 173
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-09 01:15:37
Nice use of the repeated line, each disaster outdoing the next until
Maedhros reaches his breaking point where his father is concerned.
The one unforgivable sin being that Feanor's madness ends on the
battlefield that day, without ever achieving its end... leaving his
sons the task that has outlived him. Well done!

Title: Justice · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 633
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-09-09 01:20:44
One always wonders how the peoples formerly under Sauron's domination
sorted themselves out after his defeat. We know the fate of some,
among them the slaves who worked the vast agricultural plains of
Mordor around Nurnen. Here we see them in the transition from slavery
to freedom - the contrast between the king of the freed slaves and
Aragorn is appalling, and Aragorn is appalled, but also determined to
do what he can to right the situation. It's a good, promising start
for the dawning new age. Well done!

Title: South · Author: Aliana · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor
or Rohan · ID: 8
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-09 06:02:47
Months after first reading this, I am still caught up by the beauty
and poetry of the prose. You unobtrusively tuck in reams of images
and information, yet it never feels dense or crowded but natural and
flowing. Your phrasing, pace and word choice are as stellar as
always, with delightful and spot-on characterizations.

The intro alone is worth exploring in depth. The way I'm drawn in by
the wonderful descriptions touching on many senses - I could feel
like I was sharing the dreams with Merry, both the horrific and the
mystical. The horse imagery in particular is marvelous.

Merry's interactions with the two most important women of his life
are excellent: Brief but precisely capturing why he loves them in all
their similarities and differences, with nice mirroring images of
Estella and Eowyn and the babies to draw the link.

I loved how you led us along with Merry into understanding why he had
the dreams and needed to make this journey as part of his post-war
healing. We're given the evidence of the hold his experiences still
have on his life; and finally, at the end, we share in his last dream
that he has found some sense of peace with his memories and how the
war has formed him.

Title: The Harper · Author: juno_magic · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 10
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-09 06:04:12
I did not remember the poem that inspired this story, but in reading
it afterwards I could see the very effective echoes from one to the
other, in not just images but tone, emotion and atmosphere. And
especially: ["...your inward winter"] - perfect for Maglor.

The setting is well done, the story within a story, the village and
people so well described that I could picture it all clearly. The
characterizations of the harper and child, and their interactions,
were excellent. You gave enough for me to guess Maglor's identity
before the end, but kept it subtle enough that I did not feel it
thrust at me. (I also suspect that he was not really blind, but told
others so and kept his eyes covered in order to disguise their
piercing clarity.)

We are left to wonder at his motives in going to this remote place,
then taking a student and passing on the ancient harp; but with hope
that he found some comfort in his long lonely bitterness.

Title: Getting Away from it All · Author: Bodkin · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 63
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-09 06:06:34
This peaceful scene, so gentle and bucolic, conceals quite the
seething mass of intrigue! The switch from lazing around to intense
political discussion was well-handled, and the quick but thorough
characterizations were excellent - I especially loved how you painted
both Arwen and Faramir.

Title: Comforting Silence · Author: Radbooks · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 157
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-09 06:07:10
Perfect depiction of two long-time friends at a moment when words get
in the way, and very nice characterizations. I liked that Faramir was
able to relax enough to truly rest.

Title: Fourth Age, Year 13 · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 628
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-09 06:08:10
Perhaps I am influenced by my own thus-far six-year journey along the
pot-holed road of parenthood, but I simply love this short look into
Aragorn's perspective on the matter.

Wonderful PoV, and the brief exchanges between he and Arwen are nice
illuminating glimpses into their relationship with each other and
with their children. The entire story is told in just the right style
of slightly-harried, semi-rushed experience, which is exactly life
with children ("Wait! How could she be thirteen already?"), and nails
perfectly so many of the landmarks of childhood and pre-teenagerhood.
I can personally testify to the endless questions and the worries
about death at that specific age, and I love the Mary Sue half-elven
princess that makes an appearance.

As an aside, yes, I imagine that Arwen and Aragorn did have an army
of servants to help with taking care of their children, but I still
think that they would be heavily involved with *raising* them, as
time allowed, especially with their Elven heritage. Who would want to
miss any of this, anyway?

The ending still gets me choked up and teary-eyed, for all the *hope*
that rings out from it. Every parent wants this sense of the
bountiful and joyous future to await their child, but how much more
so in Gondor, having come into peace off of a war thought unwinnable.
It's just wonderful, and captured so well; the phrasing and word
choice are excellent throughout, but it really moves me powerfully
here.

And next you can explore Liriel's feelings about her family picking
up and moving north for a while. Well, at least one assumes that
Aragorn took his teenager with him to Lake Evendim, although I
imagine the temptation was sometimes very strong to do otherwise...

Title: Mistaken · Author: Fawsley · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 490
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-09 07:19:02
Fast-paced but comprehensive dialogue. The characterisations are
conveyed very well merely by what the characters are saying: Gandalf
so certain and nearly desperate when nothing happens, Frodo reluctant
to have his possession be tampered with (even though it *isn't* the
real Ring, apparently... hmmm... makes one rather think...).

For me the funniest aspect was how much of the original dialogue from
book and film are still there.

Title: Clothes Make the Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Humor: Drabble · ID: 625
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-09 07:21:35
How can I not love this drabble - after all it had been a birthday
gift for me? But I like it just as well for its own sake!

This is such an insightful look at the protagonists of the drabble,
their relationship towards each other and also towards the other two
characters mentioned.

One can feel Celeborn's love for his wife even as he mocks her
action, his approval of Aragorn and his willingness to reassure him;
as well as Aragorn's discomfort at being spruced up so much, his
uncertainty about how he will be received by Arwen, and his
gratefulness at Celeborn's encouraging words.

I love how supportive and bracing Celeborn is towards Aragorn, and
that he evidently has no problems with Aragorn's love for Arwen
(unlike his son-in-law): It shows that in this decision, he and
Galadriel are of one opinion, and act as a team - which neatly
answers a question canon left open.

And still Celeborn can't resist making fun of Galadriel and the
customs of her people (but only once she is out of earshot,
apparently *g*)! It brings a smile to Aragorn and at the same time
acts perhaps also as an example for him that cultural differences
need not be an obstacle to love.

Title: May It Be a Light to You in Dark Places · Author: Cathleen ·
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 388
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-09-09 13:52:48
I found this to be quite uneven, although, perhaps intentionally so.
Still, one minute Eowyn's heart is twisting with painful memories and
then next she's allowing herself to enjoy the scene ... transitions
were cobbled together, didn't flow and disturbed the hope of peace
the author tried to find.

Title: The Gates · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Dwarves · ID:
70
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-09-09 14:00:16
Gimli the Middle-Manager! I always appreciate stories like this, that
not only illuminate aspects of Tolkien's work, but realize the
complications in it as well and fill them in smoothly and thoroughly.
What emerges here is not only a true character portrait, but also a
thoughtful portrait of Dwarves as a culture, and the everyday details
that make the heroic endings come about. Well done in every respect.

Title: Shells · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Races: Cross-Cultural:
With Pippin · ID: 506
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-09-09 14:14:59
This is a sweet story and, being a Marylander, I've a great fondness
for the crab element, but some of the other elements bothered me: why
Ioreth? just because she's the only motherly/nurse figure we know of?
Why isn't the flashback told from her point of view? This story could
have been a smooth as it is sweet.

Title: Wings · Author: ErinRua · Genres: Romance: With Rohirrim · ID:
9
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-09-09 14:19:40
Silliness? perhaps, but told as perfectly as any good work aught to
be. There is no need to take it lightly, though the subject is light.
The tone and pacing are gentle and consistent, the scope well defined
and not overreached, the characters clearly exemplified, the action
perfectly telling of the story's heart. I think we can take this
quite seriously, indeed!

Title: A Song of Silence · Author: Nessime · Races: Men · ID: 156
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-09-09 14:39:36
I really liked this tale. I loved your OC's and I loved the tapestry.
I have always liked the idea of Eorl and the ride to Gondor's aid.
That it was depicted in a tapestry seems very canon to me - but I
also loved that you kept true to Fengel's character and let the piece
fall into disrepair. My heart broke as her son ran off to join the
battle and again when her mother-in-law wisely left her cloth to rot.
Beautiful tale. Well written.

Title: Ten Thousand Years · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA · ID: 565
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-09-10 00:10:30
A wonderful first meeting between Arwen and Boromir. The idea that
Arwen could see this Man as a possible barrier to her desire to marry
Aragorn is one I'd not considered before. And to see Boromir begin
realizing where he'd come and with whom he was conversing....

Nice.

Msg# 8314

Re: Announcement: Negative Reviews Posted by KAT702H@aol.com October 15, 2007 - 11:12:36 Topic ID# 8235
I agree with this comment. I truly appreciate knowing stories have this
type of content. I would hate to start a story and then have to stop because it
contained subject matter which is offensive to me as these would be. I
don't think Tolkien would be very happy either.

Tari


In a message dated 10/11/2007 12:32:29 P.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
blslarner@hughes.net writes:

There have been a VERY few stories I've gone over on the site that I've
actually read and didn't review because I personally was offended by
them, and I'll admit they've mostly been stories that assume Frodo and
Sam had a sexual relationship going, or Aragorn and Legolas. This is
strictly a personal thing for me, although I have been known to read
such stories and even enjoy them if they were deliberate parodies or
particularly well and tastefully or humorously done. But I WON'T give
negative feedback on them, as what I find offensive is NOT the truth
for everyone. One story I've seen on this year's MEFAs that is a
Frodo/Sam pairing I know is very well and sensitively written, but I
can't bring myself to like it, no matter how I try to remain objective
about it. Better I leave it to those who don't mind the idea of such a
pairing, as the author will be far more likely to receive the true good
and constructive feedback his/her well-written story deserves.








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Msg# 8315

MEFA Reviews for October 16, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 16, 2007 - 5:20:22 Topic ID# 8315
Title: Kindness Rewarded · Author: White Wolf · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 494
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-09-10 00:13:33
When Legolas saves a small bird fallen from its nest, its mother
rewards him in keeping with her kind, to his amusement.

A nice, gentle fluffy piece, and well worth the read. Well written.

Title: Waters of Life · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 423
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-09-10 00:19:04
An offshoot of "A Time to Reap" in which Aragorn and Faramir bring
Arwen up Mindolluin to see the blessed lake that lies there,
surrounded by niphredil. A lovely, spiritual story, with a gentle
sensuality to it.



Title: A Little Knowledge Can Be A Dangerous Thing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races: Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 352
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-09-10 00:25:02
Ah, how marvelous a compilations of drabbles regarding the books
Elrond sent as part of Arwen's dowery, and that Aragorn had copied for
Faramir (in part to limit the rapid expansion of his royal wardrobe!).
Well written, each one a gem in its own right, and together marvelous
indeed.

Title: A Passing Troll · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Humor: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 210
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-09-10 00:29:36
One of the most marvelous short humor pieces Dreamflower has written,
she who has several such things to her name.

Now, where has Reginard Took's banished and shamed bride disappeared
to? She just went outside to finish a task--and never returned to her
brother's home, much to the relief of brother and sister-in-law. And
then Pippin and Merry bring Sam Gamgee to see the surprising sight of
a troll petrified by being caught out as the sun rose, apparently
caught in a great moment of digestive distress!

Well, well done, and a fitting ending for Hyacinth and her unholy
ambitions. Let the ivy grow!

Title: Celebration · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 139
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-09-10 00:33:07
Ah--a wonderful Midsummer celebration within Ithilien. Now, in tale
telling Faramir, who's kept himself out of the day's competitions, is
likely to shine. How nice to see the love of his people for their Prince!

Title: The Steward's New Clothes · Author: GypsieRose · Genres: Humor:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 511
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-10 03:16:59
A funny story that is based on, and pokes good fun at, Denethor's
penchant for wearing black.

Gypsie-Rose starts with her own adaptation of a verse from Dr. Seuss,
and the comedy proceeds from there.

Denethor is visited by his tailor, a wily merchant who apparently has
customers all over Middle-earth, from hobbits to Rohirrim. The tailor
keeps trying to get Denethor to buy and wear something that is not
black, while also bringing new wares for Finduilas and the children.
Their dialogue forms the heart of the story, and is crisply written,
broadly humorous but not totally out of character. The milieu is
apparently Movie-verse, due to the reference to Boromir's eyes being
green; but it can easily be applied to the characters in the book as well.

I particularly liked the sly reference to the Blue Wizards.

All in all, a fresh and lively piece; which is quite a feat
considering that Denethor stories usually aren't known for being perky.

Title: Too Many Adverbs · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble ·
ID: 660
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-09-10 14:41:06
Very cute! This shows us nothing new about the Steward's Heir but his
teachers is a wonderful character, struggling to find a way to reach
his student without being led too far afield.

Title: Circumstantial Heroes · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Minas
Tirith · ID: 684
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-10 18:09:11
This is a fascinating look at the behind-the-scenes manoeuvrings
within Aragorn's court in it's earliest days.

One of the things I liked best about this story is that Pippin appears
as more than comic relief. He is wise and loyal and honorable to a
fault. He is also very sweet as a sleeping drunk.

Aragron also shows that he is more than just a warrior from the
back-woods north. He handles Pippin's concerns and his own misguided
employees with wisdom and good grace, and just a bit of humor.

This has just enough of the elements of a good thriller to keep it
interesting. Great read.

Title: The City and Star Island Line · Author: lipstick · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 524
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-09-11 06:21:30
A gem of a Faramir & Eowyn story, with a lovely, ironic and
imaginative style that I really like. It's unusual, I can't quite put
my finger on why, though I know it's not just because of the
story-within-the-story...

This paragraph, wherein Eowyn thinks of Faramir, is particularly
delightful:


[When she fell in love with him the world suddenly stretched out
before her again, as full of possibilities as it had been when she was
a child. She fell in love with an island species mutilated and mutated
by a million years of inbreeding in pale cities always under attack.
She thought him as exotic as a dragon and as secret as the heart of
the forest.]


And of course I adored Arwen's wedding gift, which is even more nifty
than a sword or a tree...

I hope that the writer considers creating original fantasy or other
types of fiction of her own, because I would dearly love to read it.

Title: Geometry · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble · ID: 80
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-09-11 09:01:37
A wonderful drabble looking at the loss of Boromir from Faramir's
point of view, with himself and his father as now barely connecting
line segments without Boromir to tie them together. Excellent
evocation of mood.

Title: Perchance To Dream · Author: Cathleen · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 386
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-11 16:19:56
This is a different sort of view of Pippin having some sort of gift
than most other stories have. He dreams of a strange futere where no
one but he exists and a cat talks. Makes one wonder what would have
happened had he not gone on the quest.

All in all, this is a positive story, but with a sadness to it as well.

Title: The Lady's Offer · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 805
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-11 16:45:51
Short and to the point, this sums up very well what it must have been
like to have Galadriel herself look into your deepest thoughts.

Pippin blamed himself so much for what happened in Moria to Gandalf
that to have the wizard returned to life must have been very tempting
to the young hobbit. I have to wonder if the realization that he
himself would not get to see Gandalf's return might have played just
the tiniest role in his final rejection of the Lady's offer. Yes, he
wanted to help Frodo and he would never turn from that, but he also
would not have wanted to miss a chance to see the wizard again. It's
so nice that he later got to.

I like this version of what Pippin was offered very much. It is quite
believable. It makes me wonder what the author would have had Merry's
exchange with Galadriel be like.

Title: The Smile That Wins · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 258
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 18:10:07
Beautiful drabble, shot through with blue and white fire (like a
certain starry mantle). I think Faramir would compare her to fire,
facing and conquering a very particular fear of his.

Title: Summer Daze · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 471
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 18:11:04
Thoughtful and well-written account of a young man's exploration of
sex within the context of a morality different from our own.

Title: Circumstantial Heroes · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Minas
Tirith · ID: 684
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 18:13:19
Oh, splendid! A story that needed to be told, and an absolutely
fascinating glimpse 'below stairs' in the Citadel. I don't doubt that
Jeeves - sorry! - Hithdol will prove *very* satisfactory. The thought
of him serving Aragorn in the Houses of Healing before Aragorn even
knew he existed is tremendously touching. I hope we and Aragorn get to
hear his account of how he bested Brithnír.

The whole story is so well-conceived and executed, but a particular
nod to your excellent characterizations of the canon characters.
Pippin really is the hobbit that does the most growing up in the book,
and those hours spent watching Denethor decline into madness must have
been pivotal in this process. Faramir's cameos were very sensitively
handled, and without falling into melodrama. And as for your Aragorn...

["Aragorn tilted his head to the side and inquired, "Were you this
theatrically deferential to Denethor, or," he recalled something
Pippin had said earlier, "do you think this 'ragged upstart' will not
understand the insult?"]

Yes, that's definitely the King of the West talking!

Splendid stuff, thank you.

Title: Adrift · Author: fantasyfan · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: Gondor · ID: 313
Reviewer: White Gull · 2007-09-11 18:13:25
I hardly know where to begin in reviewing this fic. When I first
discovered LOTR fanfic, the first ones I searched for concerned
Frodo's awakening in Ithilien. Canon was too reticent, for me, and I
wanted to read more! Of course, I imagined my own versions, but
there's something more tangible to the senses in reading a
well-written account. There were a few well accounts that I found,
though none stayed with me without some gnawing, trifling
imperfections. I considered writing one of my own, but didn't think I,
or anyone else, could better, or add to what had already been written.
But then, I read this one.

Talk about tangible. The words fairly move with life and feeling. As
vague consciousness returns to Frodo, moving to sound, smell, taste,
then touch, then full memory, I feel with him every step of the way.
And it all seems so natural and so Frodo and so right. His pain at
full memory was truly painful, but it was also inescapable. And then,
to find the comfort of Aragorn was perfection.

My one complaint is that this story is - too short! But maybe that
just adds to its power. In some sections the prose almost reads like
poetry, the words are so well-chosen and well-placed. I am very
thankful to have read this lovely story. It complements canon as one
fan's idea of what Tolkien simply ran out of time to say. I agree.



Title: Marking Fours · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 1
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 18:13:54
Beautifully conceived and written drabble sequence. Grief can only be
put aside for so long, and it seems right that becoming a father would
make Faramir reconceive his relationship with Denethor.

Title: Bilbo's Dark Psyche · Author: Curious · Genres: Non-Fiction ·
ID: 519
Reviewer: White Gull · 2007-09-11 18:15:23
Where do I begin? I love this small essay; there is so much conveyed
in relatively few and very readable words. The subject is deep -
Bilbo's (and Gollum's and Frodo's) exposure to darkness and what they
do with it. Curious displays an equally deep understanding of Tolkien
and Bilbo and Gollum and Frodo, and an equally deep love for each.
Well, except maybe for Gollum!

The similarities between Bilbo and Gollum's backgrounds and experience
with the Ring and the Misty Mountains are striking. The choices they
made are not in any way similar, which Curious makes very clear. Tying
in Frodo's experience in the Barrow mound is effective and
thought-provoking.

I also liked the references to the 1937 version. That is something I
don't study on my own, and I appreciate the chance to learn from it.

That we all have a dark psyche is unavoidably true. What we each do
with it is pure choice, as Curious deftly leaves us thinking. I'd like
to think I'd choose as Bilbo and Frodo chose.

Title: Fourth Age, Year 13 · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 628
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 18:51:40
Oh how delightful! With just a faint bittersweet hue behind: he is
managing to savour every year, but how quickly they are passing by
and, behind it all, questions about the fates of Men and Elves.

Title: Osgiliath · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 626
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 18:52:09
It's the alliteration that makes this drabble so punchy; that, and the
terrible insight which we the reader share with Boromir: that no
matter how undefeated he has been so far, it will not be enough. Or,
ObEliot: "After such knowledge, what forgiveness?"

Title: Mastering Men · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 623
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 19:01:13
That will be the Captain indeed: calm under pressure, courageous,
inspiring others to the same. Well-characterized, and a good moment to
pick for the request.

Title: Thinking of Marigold · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor ·
ID: 349
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-11 19:03:46
This story, like almost all of Grey Wonderer's stories, is hysterical.

Poor Pippin. Only he could look at a bunch of flowers and end of with
a problem not related to flora at all. Flowers lead to names, names
lead to lasses and lasses lead to.... Need I say more?

The humor in this story is so sweet. Young love really can be quite a
laugh, for those not in it.

As with almost all of Grey Wonderer's stuff, this is not to be missed.

Title: Drawn With Love · Author: MerryK · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 569
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 19:19:00
A piece written with a great deal of love, I think, which shows in the
lovely characterizations ["Boromir was in charge now, and everything
would be all right"], and most of all in the descriptions, in
particular, of the artistic process, but also in scene setting ["the
usual unswervingly quiet breakfast"].

I'm entirely persuaded that Boromir - educated as a nobleman - would
be able to draw, and I like the insight in the author's note that it
comes from the practical side of his nature. And, on this occasion,
and for his brother, he achieves something beyond accomplished copying
or draughtsmanship. As the quotation from Jung at the start suggest, I
think that 'inner necessity' would help him find a creative spark to
produce something really special to help his younger brother remember
their mother.

A gentle and beautifully written delight; thank you.

Title: Thyme is a great healer · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Drabble · ID: 723
Reviewer: Altariel · 2007-09-11 19:25:23
A lovely, gentle piece: both of them have lost the person with whom
they shared the greatest trials of their lives, both of them,
together, are able to share that loss and find some comfort.

She's not central to the piece, but I like the deft little cameo of
Eowyn in the first line, proudly showing her herbs to a master gardener.

Title: Keeper of the Jewels · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Adventure:
Minas Tirith · ID: 64
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 01:01:21
Clear descriptions of the environment and the scenes, as well as the
characters and their actions; the emotions were captivating. I liked
the interactions between the members of the Fellowship. Artanis was a
very engaging original character, and I was glad she found healing and
contentment at the end.

The plot and its mystery was developed well, including red herrings
and unexpected twists and problems.

The way the topic of jewels was interwoven into the narrative was
lovely, from the office of "Keeper of the Jewels", to the colours of
clothes and furniture, to metaphorical gems for various characters.

There were some grammatical or vocabulary errors, but on the whole
these things didn't detract from my enjoyment (although I have to
admit that I didn't like the uncanonical princedom of Lebennin).

Msg# 8316

MEFA Reviews for October 16, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 16, 2007 - 5:22:27 Topic ID# 8316
Title: Journeys in High Places · Author: Illwynd · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 259
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 03:34:23
Very evocative descriptions, good characterisations. I didn't quite
like the few intrusions of the narrative voice, but apart from that,
the story flowed very smoothly.

An interesting look at the training of the Rangers; I found it very
plausible that it might have followed this or similar patterns;
especially the fact that they were already experienced warriors in
other areas before joining the Rangers.

The landscapes of the mountains, the abundance and challenge they
represent, are conveyed so immediately, I could really immerse myself
in the experiences of the protagonists.

What struck me as an intriguing detail was the comment in ch.1 about
Denethor *liking* the arguments between himself and Faramir, that they
were not (only?) due to a problematic relationship.

Title: Lighting Fires · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure: Pre-Ring
War · ID: 95
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 03:42:40
The plot of the story is built very well, with vibrant descriptions of
scenes and actions; good and fittingly varied pacing and suspense;
complex characterisations and lively dialogues.

Elrohir as viewpoint character was a good choice: he is young enough
to still be able to empathise with Estel, and be seen by him as a
comrade rather than an authority figure, and on the other hand, he is
old enough and aware enough of the dangers that the world has in
store, for Estel specifically, to be able to guide and tutor him. I
liked the several references to the difficulties in preparing him for
his future role without revealing it.

Estel's stage in his maturing, on the cusp between childhood and
adolescence, is captured extremely well, by action instead of
exposition. It's nice to see how he can completely immerse himself
into the reality of the "manoeuvre".

One of my favourite things was how Estel's - for a child so typical -
behaviour derailed the looming neat denouement at the end of ch. 5. It
contributed to the believability of the plot and let the resolution of
the final chapter feel more "earned".

Title: Exploring the Wild · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 30
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 03:43:10
An entertaining story that had me smiling often at the picture of the
two boys on their first "adventure". The characterisations of the boys
are delightful, and those of the original characters distinct and
realistic.

I liked the portrayal of Denethor very much. It is seldom that the
focus is on his capacity as a father, much less a good father to
*both* his sons. But I did miss at least a *brief* mention about
Finduilas' whereabouts, because judging from this: ["grouchy
four-year-old"], she was still alive at the time.

Title: Way Out West · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Adventure: Pre-Ring
War · ID: 769
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 03:45:08
I always find stories interesting about Hobbits exploring over the
boundaries of the Shire, and Merry & Pippin doing so only a few years
before their "real" adventure was an added bonus here.

I especially liked the short visit in Greenholm, with the two
tweenagers having to find some good reason to explain their far
journey to the innkeeper for *not* involving the word "adventure" -
Merry's solution was really a good one, and believable.

The story passes by too quickly for my taste, though, unfortunately -
one has barely time to enjoy the different stages. It was also a pity,
though understandable from the Elves' (and canon?) point of view, to
make them forget they had actually reached their goal.

Title: The Harper · Author: juno_magic · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 10
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 04:20:01
This story is a marvellous blending of style and content, both
informing and supporting each other.

The descriptions are evocative and poignant, from the details of the
harsh life in the mountains to the gatherings in the hall to hear
songs and news from the remote happenings ["down below"]; the
characterisations are complex and layered.

The portrayal of the difficult, unaccomodating harper is particularly
fascinating, with his genius, his bitterness and pain, and his secrets
that can be guessed at, but never pierced. I like the fact that the
hints that he might be Maglor are so subtle, and that it is never
stated as a certainty.

The spare, even austere style has a piercing clarity like the rare air
in the Ered Nimrais, the setting for the piece. The repetitions of
certain passages, the alliterations, the word order, which seem at
first glance drab or awkward, is in fact very effective, and fits the
epic style of the story: It insinuates the words in the readers' mind
like a chant, gaining power as they are repeated.

The flow and rhythm of the narrative voice further evokes and
strengthens the tight bond between language and plot in that it feels
like an epic which ought to be read aloud by a bard like the two
protagonists.

Reading the poem that inspired the story gave an even deeper insight
into the imagery and symbolism used in the story.

Title: The Spear of the Lily · Author: The Bookbinder's Daughter ·
Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 11
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 04:23:01
This short story draws a picture full of light and warmth, with a
dreamy, sensuous quality. The language is rich, elegant and lyrical,
using imagery and symbolism to great effect, yet never overwhelming
the narration. It is incredibly moving and poignant. The poem at the
beginning sets the mood perfectly, and it is wonderful to see echoes
of it later on in the story, seamlessly interwoven to fit with the
original metaphors.

It is a study of Éowyn as a dearly-beloved wife, made by Faramir, who
is observant and and insightful as ever. He can clearly see her beauty
of form and spirit, and has attempted time and again, even after years
of marriage, to capture it in spoken or written words as a token of
his love, although he is well aware of the fact that words can only
convey a small glimpse of reality. I like the slightly wry tone of
this realisation and his not too serious self-deprecation.

The fact that Faramir compared her to a lily withered by frost echoes
back to the passage in RotK when Aragorn says something quite similar
when he calls her back in the Houses of Healing. It is a wonderful
additional twist to connect the two men in this subtle way. It also
fits of course perfectly with title and poem, especially in throwing
into relief the changes since this first encounter that time and
new-found happiness have wrought.

Title: Unstrung · Author: Tehta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 161
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 04:25:16
A marvellous, compelling, forceful piece of work. Masterful use of
language, a tightly-plotted story, evocative and haunting
characterisations. The layers and symbolism of the story are poignant.
The seven-stringed lyre is an outstanding example of this, in
particular as the line between metaphor and actuality is unclear in
this case.

I love how themes are introduced early, resurface from time to time,
and are brought to a satisfying conclusion or leave the readers with
thought-provoking questions.

I also find details that show some facts from canon (or fanon) in a
new light or an unexpected twist very intriguing, in particular that,
for Maglor, the Noldolantë does not have the great importance it
usually is been given.

Maglor's thoughts on truth and art are particularly fascinating and
resonant; they reveal his true heart, as well as his fractured mind.
They also show that his narration might not be completely truthful,
that his point of view is unreliable, and that readers will have to
decide for themselves how much to believe him, which increases the
tense, unsettled feel of the story.

The lines that perhaps capture best, in all their ambiguity, his
character in this story are the following: ["I have perfect emotional
pitch"], and a short while later: [That I love, perhaps too much. That
I am an artist, and therefore a seeker of truth. And that I am a
mimic, and therefore a liar"] - the second passage in particular is
"proven" time and again in the course of the narrative.

Title: Pest Control · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Cross-Cultural: Drabble
· ID: 697
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 04:30:07
This drabble is constructed excellently: it begins so harmless, with
the stars and waving branches, quite the lovely, idyllic picture. But
then, like the protagonist, the readers slowly become aware of the
intruding note. The tension increases, the mood gets more violent, and
Fimbrethil's wrath explodes in carnage - but not mindless; she
actually has enough presence of mind and the pragmatism of a nurturer
and caretaker to think of a practical use for her "victims".

In addition, the sensory details go hand-in-hand with this
construction: first there is sight of her immediate surroundings. Then
smell; it seems quite appropriate for an Ent to have a better sense of
smell than of hearing, and also it seems to suggest that the stink of
Orcs can be smelled from very far away. Then sound, coupled, finally,
with sight again; and then she herself acts with power and determination.

Details I also liked were the fact that the odour of Orcs (*g*) can
clearly be distinguished from that of Men; and also that while
Fimbrethil ponders exactly this point, there is a slightly more
peaceful moment - and one that cleverly refers back to the passage
quoted in the author's notes - when she thinks about these Men who are
being taught by her.

Title: Sea King; Seeking · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 689
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-12 04:33:31
The story of Aldarion and Erendis as exemplified here shows how
ambiguous it would be to judge Aldarion's neglect of home and family.
He clearly has some form of sea-longing, even before he met his wife:
["But I was wedded to the sea long before I ever espoused her"],
looking forward to the sea instead of back at the home he left as
Vëantur notices.

His inclinations prove fortuitous for Gil-Galad and Middle-earth in
their renewed struggle against Sauron, so he has a - belated -
justification for continuing his voyages, as his father Meneldur
ponders. Meneldur seems to have been a rather conflict-shy man
himself, judging from sparse details in canon (notably UT) - captured
here very skilfully - which could not have helped with his
strong-minded family.

I loved the play on words in the title, and also how the many
strong-willed *women* of the family are here given a voice.

Title: Faint Heart Never Won Fair Lady · Author: Marta · Genres:
Romance: Gondor · ID: 604
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-09-12 05:19:11
This story is a sweet bit of fluff, but it rings true. Marta uses the
backstory of Faramir and Eowyn's romance to illustrate the hesitations
and the bold moves of a man in love. She also gives us insight into
the minor character of Hurin, Keeper of the Keys.

Title: Who is this Gil-galad, of Whom You Speak? · Author: Erunyauve ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 250
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-09-12 05:22:01
Erunyauve's essay speculates on the nature of one of Tolkien's most
elusive characters, the Elven King Gil-galad. The essay includes
quotes from the few existing Gil-galad references in Tolkien's
writings. Erunyauve speculates on the various cues about Gil-galad's
lineage, his position as a leader in Second Age Middle Earth, and even
his character--a nebulous proposition at best, but one ripe for
picking by fanfic-ers.

The piece is well written and recommended for anyone hungry for more
information about Gil-galad and other minor elven characters.

Title: Could Will Have Its Way · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-09-12 05:22:41
This haunting drabble is perfect for anyone who harbors a secret (or
not so secret) fondness for Denethor. Nancy Brooke presents a logical
and very sympathetic reason why the Steward of Gondor turned to the
palantir and began his slow descent into madness. The mood that she
creates in "Could Will Have Its Way" lingers long after the 100 words
are gone. The story fulfills the purpose of a drabble, in my opinion:
big impact with as few words possible. Well done!

Title: The Accidental King: Five Reasons Why Finarfin Deserves an
Appreciation Month · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 5
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-09-12 05:24:42
Dawn Felagund is a veritable font of knowledge about the First Age.
Her Silmarillion summaries for the Henneth Annun (HA) yahoo group are
such an excellent source for anyone who wants to make sense of the
Sil, let alone write fanfic that merely alludes to the events in those
mythic years.

This particular essay is more of an opinion piece than her summaries.
Here Dawn presents her opinion of Finarfin, the least reknown and
least appreciated son of Finwe, original leader of the Noldor. While
son Feanor is most reknown for creating the Silmarils and son
Fingolfin for his heroic deeds in the ancient battles in Beleriand,
Finarfin is known for what? For being one of the more vague, confusing
F characters that pervade the Silmarillion?

After you read Dawn's essay, you will appreciate how difficult
Finarfin's role was as leader of the diminished Noldor in Tirion. Dawn
exhorts that Finarfin wasn't weak or vacilating for not following his
older brothers to Middle Earth. Unlike them, Finarfin was a healer and
a peace maker. Moreover, for nothing else Finarfin is important for
siring his two illustrious children, Fingon and Galadriel, who play
important roles in the key conflicts of the First and Third Age.

Now, as I plunge into "The Children of Hurin," I particularly
appreciate Dawn's efforts to illuminate the Silmarillion and other
First Age tales for those of us who once were confused by them. All I
can say is, thank you and more please.

Title: The Most Beautiful · Author: Meril · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 508
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-09-12 05:25:27
Melian is one of my favorite female characters of the Tolkien canon.
So I really appreciate this lovely little story that examines what her
character might have been like, and what the reservations about being
"incarnate" and what her joys might have been.

Title: The Gates · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-12 14:19:49
When Gimli speaks to you, he comes through well and clearly. Here we
get not only an enjoyable tale, but one that showcases glimpses into
the world of dwarves and brings out some wonderful highlights to
Gimli's own character. Talents that made him an excellent member of
the Fellowship and Legolas's friend are beautifully drawn out and
broadened.

You give us a deep and realistic culture. Details are nicely shown,
like Snorri's age, in ways that paint a vivid picture of the
character. And Snorri in particular is an excellent and well-developed
OC: His interactions with Gimli are priceless (["Elvish mooning"] -
ha!), and his wise handling of Gloin's son is gradually and cleverly
revealed. Naturally the artisans are reverenced most among The Smith's
people, but Snorri wisely and rightly points out the irreplaceability
of those who sustain them. It is even more telling that he recognizes
the value of moving to the Glittering Caves to continue his and his
wife's crafts under Gimli's support.

["There I was actually able to indulge my one true talent besides
killing Orcs, and help the Men prospect a new vein of higher quality
ore."] Modest Gimli - and now you know there is another skill, and one
much rarer than the first two. Although I can't blame Gimli for being
reluctant to embrace it, when the result is being destined for endless
council meetings.

Title: The Ground Portends · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 638
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-12 14:20:41
An insightful peek into Gimli's passionate and secretive heart. This
gave me a strong understanding of his innate connection to the earth
(not just stone), and his almost jealous guarding of how it gives up
its secrets. Small wonder that Legolas's connection in Eregion
bothered him; it's like a stranger, who shouldn't even speak your
language, horning in on a long and cherished friendship.

And we get more: His affection for friends; his still-wary respect of
Legolas; his appreciation of Eowyn. I liked the consistent and clever
use of appropriate dwarven metaphors, especially ["like a blade
pressed to a turning wheel"]; and also how both those he's newly met
(Eomer) and those who've known him for months (Legolas) still can't
completely decipher his complex being. On top of it all, stellar
characterizations and great writing. The final touch was wonderful:
Gimli having to put his helmet back on so he could sleep. Nicely done!

Title: Seen in the Halls of Dwarrowdelf · Author: Aruthir · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 73
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-12 14:21:27
Extremely evocative - I could feel the Dwarves' fierce drive to
overcome this obstacle to their dreams, and the despair and agony of
the writer resonates throughout. The writing style precisely draws out
my reaction: Even though events are being recalled from far in the
past, the story has an immediacy that brings a reader right into each
moment described, as if I'm sitting and listening to the narrator
speak his tale. Your word choice and the structure of the story are
carefully considered, and there are many wonderful phrases that stuck
with me afterwards.

The pride and arrogance of the dwarves, the reasons behind their push
to uncover this mithril vein, are well described. In particular, I
love how we are led up to the actual release of the Balrog: How they
had almost given up when the least among them found such slight
success; the way the dwarves are singing, so overjoyed to make
progress on that (excellently conceived) monolith that they miss every
warning sign. I took away several morals for our own times.

Title: Fissures · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Dwarves · ID: 804
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-12 14:22:06
A fascinating dwarven perspective of Gimli, post-Fellowship, by one
well-positioned to see his friend's alterations. The moment when Odin
uncovers the root (*cough*) of his unease ("It's a tree!") is
precious: Odin is grieved, Gimli is delighted, and the fissure
revealed. Excellent title, too, with many layers of meaning that can
be applied.

Very good job on the PoV. The interactions and Odin's inner thoughts
are insightful, entertaining and well-handled. It took time for me to
understand Odin's great dismay, until he thinks frankly of the
unchanging nature of Dwarves, and the Elven way of changing all. Then
I began to see how the deep alterations in Gimli might be seen
extremely negatively by his people, even as a rejection of his own
heritage. And it is telling that Gimli has been avoiding the topic
himself, in a signal that he may perceive some of this also, but
refuses to bend to it.

Title: For the Dwarves, Gimli · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 155
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-12 14:22:24
Mothers... I laughed aloud at the warm socks, enjoyed Gimli's sharing
with Boromir, and empathized with Nandi's feelings at the end. You
conveyed her emotions very touchingly.

Title: The Weregild · Author: tyellas · Races: Dwarves · ID: 522
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-09-12 14:24:18
This is an excellent tale that spins out one possible method used by
devious and clever Annatar to snare a dwarf-lord. He applies just the
right levers to insinuate the ring past Bolin's formidable suspicions.
There is a terrific use of a female dwarf, and Tolkien's canon is very
smoothly integrated with the extrapolations of the story.

The setting is marvelous, beautifully described and very well thought
out: The audience chamber, the dais, the weregild and the ring itself
- they blended perfectly with dwarven culture and Annatar's purposes.
Annatar himself is only briefly shown but to great effect; obviously
he understands the people made by his one-time mentor only too well.
It's a bitter twist that he uses that knowledge to snare Mahal's own
creations so quickly, although we know in the end that he
underestimated their resilience to all but the gold-lust.

You give an absolutely wonderful introduction of Nili, catching me by
surprise but also with a definite feeling of, "But of course!" The
dwarven characterizations and cultural explorations in general were
carefully crafted and well done: Their insular and proud demeanor, the
interactions between Bolin and Nili, the admiration of the weregild
(and how it was packed!) and their refusal to accept loot from Eregion.

I particularly loved the way you portrayed Bolin's respect for and
appreciation of his wife. Indeed, I thought his sudden deceptive
behavior towards her at the end was the most telling method you could
have used, to show how deep and terrible a hold Sauron's ring
immediately gained on him. In fact, I wondered if the ring he removed
from his left hand was his wedding ring - a shudder-worthy symbolism.

Title: Lord Námo's Yule Gift · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor · ID: 335
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-09-12 18:08:44
This is a very sweet story. It may have been written tongue-in-cheek,
but it has a quality seldom found on humor pieces. The power of love
so clearly covers a multitude of sins, for many characters.

I loved the thoughts exchanged by the Valar and the Maiar. They gave
them a human quality not often seen in portrayals of the devine.

Wonderful story.

Title: A Crown of Woodland Flowers · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races:
Elves: With Mirkwood Elves · ID: 180
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 01:41:53
Dynamic story-telling, very vivid dialogues. Evocative descriptions.
It's so nice to read about this day away from duty, just the two of
them enjoying freedom, nature, and being together. The fact that in
the beginning we are told some of Thrandul's duties, makes Telparian's
plan all the more understandable.

Both characters are fully-realised and sympathetic. The interaction
between the characters is realistic, moving and very romantic.

I like this portrayal of Thranduil's wife: I have always thought she
must have had a strong personality, but with a softer, playful side,
and your version of her fits very well with this idea. Thranduil
himself is characterised equally well: he is clearly a king, but
relatively new to his duties after his father's death (not yet the
imperious authority figure of TH), and with great love for his wife.

And what a wonderful idea for the origin of the crown! His wife's
idea, the "magic" to keep the flowers fresh, the fact that the crown
would change with the seasons...

Title: Gone Fishin' · Author: Aranel Took · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 322
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 01:46:00
You give a real sense of what Aragorn is doing, every detail is so
vivid with an appealing economics of words. Paced unhurriedly, very
fitting for Aragorn's activity, yet with enough movement to keep it going.

Aragorn's wish to escape stifling formalities is palpable, especially
as the contrast between this and the natural environment of his
current whereabouts is so well drawn.

Title: The Ground Portends · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 638
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 01:47:39
Gimli's character and his mindset as a Dwarf are conveyed in a very
consistent and insightful manner. Language, imagery and vocabulary
reflect the chosen point of view in a subtle way, and so give the
story a distinctive "flavour".

Gimli's discomfort during the ride is depicted believably, and I got
the feeling that this only helps him to appreciate his natural
element, the solid earth, all the more. I couldn't suppress a smile at
Gimli's constant worshipful reminiscences about Galadriel, and that it
apparently discomfitted him - even so long after it had happened -
that Legolas as a Wood-elf had been able to hear the stones of Eregion.

The closer and more detailed look at this episode in LotR, filtered
through Gimli's PoV, brings it closer to the readers' attention and
makes even this rather uneventful scene interesting.

Title: Salt · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 743
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 01:50:14
The beginning sets the mood for a strange tale, quite in keeping with
the theme of strangeness set forth in the summary. I'm used to your
portrayal of Caranthir as an odd character, but that it is Nerdanel
who collects the tears of her children into phials to wear as a
necklace takes it to a new level of pecularity!

Very intimate portrait of Fëanor's family, and the special abilities
and character of Caranthir provide unique insight into the dynamics.
Tightly interwoven narrative, beautiful language and very good use of
symbolism and imagery, particularly, of course, of the Sea.

Although Caranthir talks about a broad span of time of his life, he
still comes back again and again to his earliest memories, showing how
they shaped him and influenced him even in much later times.

How extraordinary that the brother who is said to have no feelings is
so overcome at Celegorm's dying that he lets Elwing - and with her the
Silmaril - go without any hesitation.

It is difficult to single out one passage, but I think the one
beginning with ["At last, I understood why the sea had always risen in
wrath against my father and my brothers..."] in ch. 2 may be my favourite.

Msg# 8317

MEFA Reviews for October 17, 2007 (Part 1) Posted by Ann October 17, 2007 - 5:22:58 Topic ID# 8317
Title: Of Numenor That Was · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 424
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 01:53:48
A dark, dark but marvellous series, so poignant it hurts!

The grim details, the ash, the scents, the smoke blackening the sky
and everything around it are described very evocatively and chillingly.

The individual perspectives are chosen well: first the - literal -
overview by an eagle, then the tightly focused PoVs of two people
right in the midst of the atrocities, and as the finale a Maiar able
to walk in the carnage and show compassion for the victims.

The fact that it is left open whether the king's men had given her the
drink to dull her pain or to make her helpless strikes me as very
thougt-provoking detail. The same applies also to the twist of
combining the Wave with the Flames that consume her: In this context,
the Wave, at most other times only seen as the violent force that
consumed Númenor, here takes on a benevolent aspect, quenching the
Flames of the heinous sacrifice of the corrupted isle.

And in the midst of all that darkness you have Menelgund's offense at
nearly retching ["like a common gull"], which for some reason made me
laugh loud (I guess in compensation for the rest of the tear-inducing
story).

The following passage struck me the most, because it shows how far the
Númenóreans have fallen that they have even forgotten their own history:

["He knew Annatar's teachings well: how, when the One returned even
the dead would awake, and how those whose blood had slaked His thirst
would stand at His side when Taniquetil crumbled. Sakalzôr believed
those ancient truths completely; truly, his sister would join the
One's harem."]

Title: Bathing Boromir · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 645
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 01:55:25
The funny thing about this drabble is that it is completely clear why
Ioreth stands guard so emphatically, but the reason is not stated
outright - the brief statement that Boromir will take a bath shortly
is sufficient to explain everything!

I like Ioreth's protectiveness and no-nonsense manner here and her
disparaging (but I don't think meant absolutely serious) thoughts
about the younger women. She knows them, oh yes...

I can readily imagine the Ioreth whose prattling tongue we know so
well from canon using her eloquence in a much more forceful (and
coherent) manner when needed.

Title: The Burning of the Year · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 2
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 01:57:32
Evocative descriptions and elegant language. The ominous symbolism of
particular details - the reference to the ancient tradition of the
actual sacrifice of the Prince (Boromir?) for the good of his people,
Denethor ready to light the pyre, Faramir bedecked with the bounty of
the living land (Ithilien?) - are resonating.

The so problematic relationship between Faramir and his father are
portrayed with great insight and poignancy. Even in this so solemn
moment, Denethor must compare Faramir unfavourably with Boromir
["Almost as well as Boromir would have done..."], which I find
particularly petty. It's admirable how Faramir can overcome his
justified resentment at this with compassion.

The custom described doesn't mesh with my personal view of Gondorian
culture, but it is told convincingly, laying out an appropriate
background in history and enough details to let me *see* how it could be.

For some reason, this sentence: ["Nay, I cannot afford the ease of
despair."] resonated strongly with me. Yes, it certainly is often
easier to despair, to give up, than to strive against great odds. I
wonder if Denethor was lucid enough at the end to see his own actions
in this light, if he saw his state of desperation as easier to bear
than to continue to fight.

Title: Field of Dreams · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama · ID: 374
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 02:00:16
Very descriptive and detailed, the emotions and sensations of the
narrator are conveyed vividly. I like the sharp focus on every aspect
of harvesting - the sything, the sharpening of the scythe, flailing,
sieving, etc.; it really helps to define the protagonist, her
environment and her concerns.

The wide space taken up in the narrativethese everyday tasks that have
to be done no matter the circumstances, contrasted to the very brief
mention of the loss of husband and sons on the Pelennor Fields,
heighten the impact the latter has, by their very brevity.

Title: Last Light · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Drama · ID: 194
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 02:10:29
I always find stories told from the PoV of usually inanimate objects
interesting, especially when, like here, the specific "character
traits" are taken into account in description and narration.

Very lucid, elegant language, with poignant details of description.
The accompanying picture fits very well, from the general content to
the mood conveyed in it.

To watch this story unfold, to see the slow destruction and defilement
of Orthanc from the perspective of a tree was very poignant and
moving. A living tree, just that which Saruman was in the process of
destroying with his machinery and his creatures. I wonder if this tree
or some of its kin are the rowan-trees whose loss Quickbeam so
bitterly mourns.

To leave this last tree standing just to have a perch for crows seems
particularly cruel, and I dearly hope the tree held out long enough to
see the revenge on Isengard by Ents and Huorns, and that Treebeard or
some of his kin would be able to restore it.

The crows a very consistent imagery of death, and the constant
references to them gives the whole story an even more haunting feeling.

Title: Drawing Straight With Crooked Lines · Author: Fiondil · Genres:
Drama · ID: 76
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-09-14 02:12:02
The narrow PoV chosen for the story works very well to let the readers
see directly through Boromir's eyes what he experiences, and feel what
he feels. The slow revelation of his surroundings is well-done, with
clear descriptions.

The discussion between Námo and Boromir was moving, revealing, and
exceedingly poignant. I liked it very much that Námo encouraged
Boromir to answer his questions, think through his actions and see
them in the right perspective on his own, and only gently guided him,
instead of just explaining everything or even lecturing him. It was
wonderful to see Boromir learning that even his bad deeds had a part
to play and were turned to good, and that Frodo had forgiven him.

Boromir's emotions rang true, and were conveyed very movingly, and I
very much appreciated that his love, protectiveness and pride for
Faramir was made so unequ