Two Drabbles: Tar-Miriel and the Waves
2005 Award Category: Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble
Story Type: Drabble ✧ Length: N/A
Rating: G ✧ Reason for Rating: N/A
Summary: Tar-Miriel's last thoughts as the waves take Numenor. One canon-based, the other AU
Reviewed by: sulriel ✧ Score: 2
I appreciate the clever use of repeitition of word and thought in this drabble set, the meter gives it a unique, almost poetic rythym. very nice.
Reviewed by: Thundera Tiger ✧ Score: 2
Even thought Tar-Miriel watched the waves too long, I suspect it was satisfying to see her husband's defeat. At least she had that much. I really liked the words about Meneltarma, too. Once they prayed and then they burned. Good stuff.
Reviewed by: Cheryl ✧ Score: 2
With these two drabbles I feel the emotion, the plight and the longing. Very difficult to portray in 100 words, but these were wonderfully done!
Reviewed by: nerwen_calaelen ✧ Score: 1
An interesting view of Tar-Mirel.