Light and Leaf and Color

Author: annmarwalk

Nominator: Marta

2005 Award Category: Genres: Romance: Drabble

Story Type: Drabble  ✧  Length: N/A

Rating: G  ✧  Reason for Rating: n/a

Summary: Priior to their marriage, Denethor thinks about how much he misses Finduilas when they are apart.

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Reviewed by: Nancy Brooke  ✧  Score: 3

Very good. I began to wonder at Denethor's seeming sentimentality but, when I completed the drabble and knew it as a whole saw more his giving her the news and describing the city he loves before getting straight and to the point. Very insightful characterization.

Reviewed by: Marta  ✧  Score: 2

Nice job connecting Cel's piece with Denethor's reply (which, if I recall correctly, we don't get). This is a nice glimpse of kinder!gentler!Denethor very much in love.

Reviewed by: Dwimordene  ✧  Score: 2

Annmarwalk accesses the horticultural imagination that simply stumps me. That it's Denethor who speaks is even more impressive.