Last of the Edhel
2004 Award Category: Races: Elves: Incomplete
Story Type: Incomplete ✧ Length: unknown
Rating: PG ✧ Reason for Rating: N/A
Summary: The elf had never had any trouble guarding an important secret in the heart of an ancient forest, but then, he'd never met Hermione Granger before.
Review scores are not available for 2004.
Reviewed by: Lady Aranel ✧ Score: N/A
I'd love to see this finished! The characterization of Thranduil is really wonderful, but Hermoine is a bit lacking. I'd like to see her rounded out more, what age is she supposed to be exactly? 22? 23? I'd like to know more about her background with men, why she seems to throw herself at Thranduil and not be more wary of him. Obviously, she can't resist his charms, but I think she'd be more analytical about it all. Also I can't see her declaring her love so quickly! I think I would have rather seen her intrigued, then angry, then bit by bit fall in love with him. I love how you've back tracked little pieces from each point of view, very unique, as is the entire premise. I also liked how you worked LACE in, very clever. I look forward to more!