A Silmaril in the Morning

Author: rhyselle

Nominator: rhyselle

2011 Award Category: Poetry: General - Third Place

Story Type: Poetry  ✧  Length: N/A (Non-Fiction or Poetry)

Rating: General  ✧  Reason for Rating: N/A

Summary: A poem that connects First Age Arda with the present. Just what do we see when the morning star hangs in the pre-dawn sky?

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Reviewed by: Fiondil  ✧  Score: 5

A lovely poem, and anyone who has had the good fortune to be awake just before dawn has no doubt had the pleasure of seeing these ‘stars’ shining brilliantly in the velvet night. I remember my own feelings of awe and delight making a night climb up Mt. Tai in China under the full light of Tilion, reaching the top and seeing Earendil shining on the eastern horizon while below us the land was hidden under a sea of clouds as we waited that October morn for the coming of Arien. Of course, I was the only one who thought of them in this manner, but that just made the experience the more enjoyable.

Reviewed by: Kaylee Arafinwiel  ✧  Score: 3

Just lovely! You draw an exquisite picture here with your words -- as lovely and striking for me as any of the pictures you've taken with your camera, Rhyselle, meldanya. I was drawn in and could see the Star of Earendil in the dawning sky, exactly as if I was there. Thank you so much for this. Alaita Eru!

Reviewed by: Dreamflower  ✧  Score: 3

I like this: a simple poem about someone noticing and appreciating the Stars. Yet the use of the names given them in Arda firmly plants the poem there, and the reader can easily envision someone heading out in the early morning entranced by the stars still visible before the Sun rises. I like the poem's structure as well; good use of rhyme and good scansion.

Reviewed by: Elleth  ✧  Score: 3

I very much like the notion of Middle-earth being a continuing tradition until this day, and seeing it put into verse is even more fun, so this was an unexpected treat to find. Thank you very much for sharing this.

Reviewed by: Kitty  ✧  Score: 2

This was quite lovely. It was zabeautiful glimpse of the morning. Thank you. I enjoyed it very much!

Reviewed by: Adonnen Estenniel  ✧  Score: 2

A beautifully crafted piece, where the speaker's emotion is evident and heartfelt. A touching ode to the skies and what lies in them.

Reviewed by: Nieriel Raina  ✧  Score: 1

Lovely poem. Makes me want to go star gazing.

Reviewed by: Phyncke  ✧  Score: 1

I enjoyed the rhyming scheme of the piece and the scope.