A Breath Away
2011 Award Category: Elves: Wilderland
Story Type: Story ✧ Length: Short Story
Rating: General ✧ Reason for Rating: N/A
Summary: Rumil is but a breath away from losing the only elleth he loves, but will love survive? Read and Find out. ONESHOT.
Reviewed by: Kara's Aunty ✧ Score: 4
Nice to read a story about one of the more minor elf characters for a change. My favourite part, where I almost welled up, was at the mention of the lost kitten and how Rumil rescued it, and how both he and Erulande offered it a home and grieved when it died years later. That hits very close to home. The punctuation does need a little work, but I was pleased to see Rumil get his elleth in the end (even though she did almost perish in the process!).
Author response: thank you so much for the review!..Not received many for this little piece. I had wanted to get into the ONE shots and thought Rumil perfect. I am so glad you enjoyed it and hopefully, someday..i will write more...thank you again.
Reviewed by: Adonnen Estenniel ✧ Score: 1
A happy-minded tale.