A Breath Away

Author: haldirsbaby

Nominator: haldirsbaby

2011 Award Category: Elves: Wilderland

Story Type: Story  ✧  Length: Short Story

Rating: General  ✧  Reason for Rating: N/A

Summary: Rumil is but a breath away from losing the only elleth he loves, but will love survive? Read and Find out. ONESHOT.

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Reviewed by: Kara's Aunty  ✧  Score: 4

Nice to read a story about one of the more minor elf characters for a change. My favourite part, where I almost welled up, was at the mention of the lost kitten and how Rumil rescued it, and how both he and Erulande offered it a home and grieved when it died years later. That hits very close to home. The punctuation does need a little work, but I was pleased to see Rumil get his elleth in the end (even though she did almost perish in the process!).

Author response: thank you so much for the review!..Not received many for this little piece. I had wanted to get into the ONE shots and thought Rumil perfect. I am so glad you enjoyed it and hopefully, someday..i will write more...thank you again.

Reviewed by: Adonnen Estenniel  ✧  Score: 1

A happy-minded tale.