Author: Ancalime8301

Nominator: Marta

2005 Award Category: Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette

Story Type: Vignette  ✧  Length: Short Story

Rating: G  ✧  Reason for Rating: n/a

Summary: Frodo struggles up the rocks outside Minas Morgul.

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Reviewed by: Rabidsamfan  ✧  Score: 2

A neat bit of storytelling, this. It makes me ache just reading it, and catches the dilemma of whether to trust or not trust Smeagol very well indeed.

Reviewed by: Marta  ✧  Score: 2

I really liked the physical details and the way you captured Frodo's weariness on this. It did feel like it lacked direction, though, and in some way's Frodo's resolution felt a bit hasty.

Reviewed by: Dwimordene  ✧  Score: 2

Given that I've now watched the full movie, it's hard to read a fic based on the trailer that excluded much of what we now know comes after. Still, the sense of Frodo's physical effort and the line about dark windows were well done.

Reviewed by: nerwen_calaelen  ✧  Score: 1

An intersting scene.