The Arial Object
Author: Beethoven's 7th
Nominator: Beethoven's 7th
2005 Award Category: Races/Places: Hobbits: Children
Story Type: Vignette ✧ Length: Short Story
Rating: G ✧ Reason for Rating: N/A
Summary: A very wee story about a wee toy and a wee boy, er Pippin that is.
Reviewed by: Rhapsody ✧ Score: 6
A very wee and lovable story on how Pippin views the toy he loves so much. I am captivated by the way, how Beethoven's 7th manages to describe a toy as a yo-yo in such detail and activity... truly amazing. Once you can spare the time you have to tell me how you pull this off. Besides the incredibly narrative, I loved the ending as well. It is so incredibly hobbity and so wee!Pippin: stopping immediately when mom tells elevensies is ready. Now how more hobbity can it get like that? *grin* I like the way how you write Pippin as a child, so incredibly carefree. Another great story Beethoven's 7th, you always leave me wondering how much more beautiful stories you have hidden ;)
Reviewed by: Thundera Tiger ✧ Score: 3
I love the way this little vignettes describes Pippin's toy. It's constantly spinning and constantly in motion. I was almost dizzy, actually, and in places, it made me think of what Pippin might have been like as a child. Great imagery all throughout. Very vivid.
Reviewed by: Leaward ✧ Score: 3
A very good description of movement, Beethoven's 7th, something I often struggle with. I could not, for the life of me, figure out what it was until the last paragraph and then it was one of those smack-yourself-in-the-forehead moments. The 'Aha! So that's what it was' statements followed. Nicely done.
Reviewed by: sulriel ✧ Score: 2
very very cute, - the arial object indeed. - my sons play with such, not in the house anymore due to the potential for damage *G*
Reviewed by: Dreamflower ✧ Score: 1
Cute little wee hobbit moment.
Reviewed by: SilverMoonLady ✧ Score: 1
What an interesting little moment... You left me wondering exactly what it was until the end!
Reviewed by: Marigold ✧ Score: 1
I love Pippin's exuberance!