Return Journey to the Mountain

Author: Dínossiel

Nominator: Lindelea

2006 Award Category: Races: Hobbits: Children

Story Type: Other Fiction  ✧  Length: Ficlet

Rating: G  ✧  Reason for Rating: N/A

Summary: A small adventure, the prelude to a larger adventure, as seen through the eyes of a young author. (What is it about hobbits and adventures?)

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Reviewed by: Dreamflower  ✧  Score: 3

I am very impressed with this seven-year-old's knowledge of canon--getting Merry's and Pippin's age right, and knowing who Paladin was, for example, as well as her vivid imagination.

Reviewed by: Lindelea  ✧  Score: 2

Hi, Sweetheart! Love the story. Very promising beginning, quite exciting. How's the new one coming along?

Reviewed by: Inkling  ✧  Score: 2

Poor Pippin, I hope he got rid of the leeches! And Merry was right to ask permission before setting off. Nice work, Dínossiel...keep writing!

Reviewed by: Marigold  ✧  Score: 1

An fine effort from a budding writer! Write more soon!

Reviewed by: Llinos  ✧  Score: 1

Imaginitive and true to canon. An excellent story!