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Title: King's Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 197
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-17 20:55:45
I have always regretted that Halbarad did not survive the Pelennor. Nice
story!
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Title: Beware the Sea · Author: Marta · Races: Elves: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 404
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-17 22:30:03
A beautiful set of drabbles, each one nice on its own, but collected
together, they show the power of the sea-longing, from the First Age all
the way to the Fourth. I was especially moved by Elrond's. Well done!
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Title: A Meara for Me! · Author: Súlriel · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 893
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-17 22:46:18
Informative and readable, especially for people who have no or little
knowledge of horses; a good source for appropriate vocabulary. (Little
nitpick: the singular of "mearas" is "mearh".)
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Title: In Sequent Toil · Author: IgnobleBard · Genres: Adventure · ID: 941
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-17 22:49:32
I have mixed feelings about this story. It started out very
dramatically, grabbing my attention, and I was quite agog to find out
what the Elf secret was. However, the truth was a big letdown and rather
gimmicky, and the story seemed unfinished to me. Why would there be such
a fuss about this map? I wasn't convinced. There has to be more to it,
says I. I was sorry to be disappointed. I wanted to write a rave,
because I like IgnobleBard's work. I wish I had a suggestion or two for
how to fix the problem, because it could be a great tale.
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Title: Birthday Kisses · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 59
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-10-17 23:46:04
In this piece set shortly after Finduilas' death, Faramir's sixth
birthday is celebrated at a subdued family get-together. The children
and the little pup are believable and very cute. Faramir and a puppy are
an irresistible combination! I love how, even at this young age, Faramir
shows an understanding of animals. He knows how to approach the puppy
without overwhelming or frightening it, and he also picks it up
properly. Raksha's experience with dogs shows in this and also in the
description of the greyhound.

Yet despite the cute children and puppy, the story never descends into
sentimentality; in fact, it has a steely subtext--even when Faramir is a
small child, Denethor is incapable of showing any warmth toward him. He
won't even take credit for his act of kindness in giving Faramir the
puppy. And how characteristically selfish of Denethor to send away the
family pet who would have been a comfort to his sons. His shadow
engulfing the two children as he leans over Faramir is an ominous touch
since he will cast a long and dark shadow in both their lives.

It is so sad that Denethor both physically and verbally distances
himself from his younger son! Imrahil's concern is well-expressed and
well-founded.
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Title: To The Abyss · Author: Minuialeth · Times: The Great Years:
Poetry · ID: 403
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-10-18 01:15:22
In this poem, the fight with the Balrog is shown from Gandal's point of
the view. The poet uses repetition very effectively. I especially liked

[Death with each blow I delivered
Death with each blow I received]

to describe the fight as they fell. Though Gandalf can be very
plainspoken, he does sometimes use a more formal manner of speech. The
high diction is appropriate to the dramatic situation, and it is heroic
without sounding stilted or quaint. Nice work!
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Title: Whispers of the Dragon · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 916
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 07:32:51
My favourite part of this is Sam's astute comment about the Ring's
whispers to Frodo: [Its like that dragon from Mr. Bilbos adventure.
That Smaug. He said dragons tell you just enough truth to make you
believe everything they say. You stop listenin to yourself and start
listenin to them. You cant listen to dragons, thats all. You cant
look em in the eye. He looked at Frodo intently. You cant listen,
Mr. Frodo. You just cant. ]
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Title: What Goes Around Comes Around · Author: Cathleen · Times: The
Great Years: The Fellowship · ID: 726
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 07:34:39
Excellent bonding by the Fellowship, with some very funny tales of the past!
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Title: Healing the Healer · Author: SlightlyTookish · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 935
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 08:04:42
There are a lot of fics about our hobbits being healed by Aragorn, but
this story is a nice bit of turn-about!

The hobbits quick actions to heal Aragorn from his cold are very
heart-warming, though the Man doesnt think so at first. Gandalfs words
soon make him understand though, how high in the affections of the
hobbits he actually is: [They are trying to help in the only way they
know, Gandalf said after a few moments. It is part of their nature, as
hobbits, to care so deeply for others.]

There are some good glimpses of the individual characteristics of the
hobbits in this. Merry is already very familiar with the use of
medicinal herbs, Sam seeks to hasten Aragorns recovery with appropriate
food, Pippins many experiences with illnesses allow him to give his
cousins a wealth of good advice, accepted gravely, perhaps even sought,
in how to best help their friend  I loved that Merry and Frodos close
attention to Pippin here made Aragorn realise that Pippin had gained
this knowledge by first-hand experience, confirmed by Gandalfs words of
explanation about Pippins illnesses; this is a favourite bit of fanon
for me  and Frodo supervises the whole operation.

Pippins surprise at Aragorns hairless feet was more than just sweet;
it was a telling indication at just how innocent the youngest hobbit is
about things outside the Shire.

And when their efforts really work, Aragorn is appropriately
appreciative and impressed. I loved the way that the story ended, with
Boromir apparently going to be next to receive the ministrations of the
hobbit healers!

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Title: Chance Encounter · Author: Dreamflower · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 187
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 08:19:44
This is a story that is enjoyable for many reasons. First is the
wonderful detail. It is easy to imagine the action taking place, whether
it is in the streets of the City, in the Court, or at a party at the
Guesthouse of the Fellowship. This, in combination with the terrific
dialogue, and situations, makes this tale eminently re-readable.

The interactions of all of the characters are very well done and I am
pleased to meet Menelcar again, a wonderful OC!

My favourite part of this story is Pippins exciting adventures to help
foil and capture the would-be hobbitnappers. After Pippin takes a
particularly dastardly one down Aragorn whispers to the Man just how
lucky he had been that his Sir Peregrin, slayer of a troll, hadnt
carried Trollsbane, and the Mans reaction is superb! So are Frodo and
Merrys reactions to Pippins heroism.

A very engaging story!

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Title: Shelter · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 217
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 08:24:42
I enjoyed the care and honour showed to the hobbits here. The
interactions of the Fellowship were lovely.
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Title: In the Service of the King · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: The
Great Years: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 138
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 08:58:56
There are some wonderful moments in this story. I think that my
favourite aspect of it is that thanks to Pippins words and actions,
some of the more sceptical of Minas Tiriths citizens come to understand
that they have been gifted with a King that is worthy of their respect
and who will rule them wisely. I love that when these citizens come to
have an audience with him that they make it very plain that it is Sir
Peregrin that convinced them that Aragorn will be a worthy King.

Pippins efforts to aid the children of the City, who have no place
where they *can* be children, is so very appropriate to the youngest
member of the Fellowship, now grown so much in maturity. Grey Wonderer
skilfully allows us to get to know some of these children, and the
reader cant help but be pleased that these youngsters will also benefit
under Aragorns rule. The youngsters also learn a lot from Pippin, about
maturity, responsibility, and doing what is right.

The other hobbits learn something too  not to necessarily assume that
Pippins motivations and actions are thoughtless or childish or any less
worthy than their own. He has grown up and matured, but they have
trouble acknowledging that. In this story they come a long way in
accepting Pippin for who he has become, and come to understand that they
cannot simply continue to treat him as the Pippin before the Quest. It
is very clear that they have been unconsciously treating him thusly
because of their own regret over what he has faced and overcome in this
adventure. They regret that he had to grow up so quickly, but they must
learn to deal with it - it does Pippin no favours to try to keep him as
the Pippin he once was by their own treatment of him.

This is one of Grey Wonderer's more serious tales, but it is not overly
dramatic or dark. The issues are dealt with in a serious, but light and
enjoyable way. An excellent read!

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Title: The Three Towers · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 113
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:03:49
I like that this tale gives the rest of the Fellowship a chance to see
where Frodo and Sam's path had led. An interesting idea, and a good read.
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Title: To See Justice Done · Author: Lindelea · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 306
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:07:09
Some almost unbearable angst here, as one has come to expect from
Lindelea, but with a happy canonical outcome.
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Title: Awake · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 837
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:19:00
I have longed for a story that fills the movie-verse gap of what
happened after the Ring-bearers were rescued by the Eagles and when Sam
walked through that door to see Frodo, no longer held in thrall by the
Ring. This one is wonderful!

From Sams slow awakening under the ministrations of his friends, to
that last moment when he and Frodo see each other again, this story is
filled with heart-touching moments and dialogue. Well done!

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Title: The Little Hobbit · Author: Claudia · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 680
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-18 09:23:56
I was very pleasantly surprised at how lovely and sweet this story
was--it was certainly not something I would ever have imagined as being
possible. Aside from the slashiness--which was barely there, except as a
plot device--it was quite like an actual fairy tale. I loved Merry in
this, even though his role was limited. And Frodo was very believable as
an incarnation of "the little mermaid". I liked also the very
hobbitiness of the hobbits. A delightful surprise!
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Title: Four Conversations and A Dream · Author: Forodwaith · Times: The
Great Years: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 90
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:32:51
I had never considered the changes that Arwen might experience now that
she is mortal; the extent to which she would lose her elvish senses in
payment for what she had gained. A very thought provoking story in many
ways.
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Title: Pride Before The Fall · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 742
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-18 09:33:23
Dark, plausible, and very realistic look at what could have happened if
Boromir had actually succeeded in gaining the Ring. Very well done!
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Title: Hidden on the Mountain · Author: Imhiriel · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 945
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:36:41
I had never considered that it was Gandalf who had set the sapling in
that high place. Very good!
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Title: But the Scent Still Lingers · Author: Imhiriel · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 947
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:42:07
A beautiful drabble. Little did the woman realise at the time that she
was dancing with the rightful King - I expect many citizens of the City
will have similar memories, and will delight to learn that Elessar is
their beloved Thorongil.
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Title: Following Orders · Author: EdorasLass · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:46:48
Grim and chilling. I wonder how these men faced Faramir, once all was
over, and to what duties they were set. Such callous, blind obedience is
ignoble and dangerous, driven by fear or not.
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Title: Last Defence of the City · Author: Branwyn · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 96
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:49:41
Denethor as he should have been! I wonder what the final outcome would
have been had this actually taken place? Excellent drabble.
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Title: Gondor Needs No King · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 207
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:52:09
Dark and chilling - reveals a lot and leaves a lot for us to imagine!
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Title: Holding the Line · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 581
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:55:16
Nice backstory to that moment in the film!
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Title: Drift · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 203
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:56:54
An interesting answer as to how Boromir's funeral boat happened to drift
towards Faramir when it did.
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Title: After The Storm · Author: chibi_kaz · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 773
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 09:59:17
A lovely work!
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Title: A Letter Home · Author: Frodo Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) ·
Times: The Great Years: Gondor · ID: 978
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 10:10:46
Whether or not Sam could have sent such a letter, I could easily picture
him trying to write one, and at the least relating the tale much this
way to his father when he got home. I loved the ointment for the
Gaffer's joint ache! I'll bet Sam really did bring some of that back
with him!
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Title: The Still Point · Author: stultiloquentia · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 87
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 10:16:03
A lovely story! Aragorn and Arwen's love is so beautifully depicted. So
too is the revelation that Arwen is becoming mortal, dreaming mortal dreams.
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Title: The Hours of Waiting · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 909
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 10:22:43
This is asbolutely lovely. Faramir and Eowyn and their speech together
is perfectly written. I especially loved that Eowyn had set the caged
lark free, and that Faramir would permit Eowyn to stand with him at the
last. Showing the two robins at the end was a beautiful way to finish
the story, much more effective than to have another scene between Eowyn
and Faramir.
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Title: A Length of Haradric Silk · Author: annmarwalk · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 69
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 10:27:40
Ah, Sam! This fabric will be used exactly for what the shopkeeper
suggested, and I'll bet in his heart that he knows it! Lovely
descriptions of the silk! I can just imagine Rosie's awe and pleasure
when she receives it.
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Title: All Save One · Author: LadyDeb1970 · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 691
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 10:31:20
A wonderful moment. I liked the reactions of all the Fellowship,
especially that of Merry and Pippin. This visit from spirit-Boromir
would help bring peace to all of their hearts.
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Title: Athelas · Author: Waltraute · Times: The Great Years: Gondor ·
ID: 243
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 10:37:39
How terrible that Bergil is so used to seeing death that he hardly
notices the bodies anymore. I think that old Mumbler had stayed and was
protecting the chest for this very reason, that he knew that this need
would come.
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Title: The Falcon and the Star · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: The
Great Years: Gondor · ID: 57
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 10:52:16
A wonderful description of the events that took place the night Aragorn
healed Faramir, Eowyn, and Merry. I loved that this was told from
Aragorn's point of view, learning his thoughts, and seeing his reactions.
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Title: The Price of Power · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great
Years: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 989
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 12:55:20
One catches a hint of regret, but Sauruman coldly does not let it touch
him. ["But trees are not an army"] Just wait!
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Title: The Gift of Gold · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres: Drama:
Remembering · ID: 267
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-18 17:09:44
This is a beautiful story af love and traditions. It features a trio of
hobbits not usually put together; Marigold (Gamgee) Cotton, Rosie
(Cotton) Gamgee, and Goldilocks Gardner. The passing on of some small
treasure has long been a wedding tradition in many cultures, and so it
is here that the "something old" comes beautifully into the story.

I like the mingling of sorrow and joy. So many special occations have
that quailty as we are joyful for the present but miss those no longer
with us. This story captures that beautifully.
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Title: Heirs of the Oath · Author: Elana · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 151
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-18 17:27:21
The connections you make here - from history, to the intended ceremony
that could never actually be carried out, to the finally realised
renewal of the oath, in joy but also with the shadows of sorrow - are
interwoven very cleverly and moving. The description of the Halifirien
is breath-taking.
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Title: Until Light Returns · Author: elliska · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 707
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-18 17:27:48
Very evocative descriptions of the beauty of the wood; no wonder
Thranduil chose to fight for it despite the odds. Thranduil's pride and
strength of mind, and also his satisfaction, joy and pride at the final
victory, is very apparent in the drabble.
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Title: By The Light of Earendil's Star · Author: Branwyn · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 83
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-18 17:28:19
Suspenseful (although I found some of the twists rather improbable),
interesting OCs. The portrayal of Denethor is wonderful.
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Title: I'm Writing This With My Left Hand · Author: Vana Tuivana ·
Genres: Drama: Poetry · ID: 641
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-10-18 17:52:13
Maedhros engages in the time-honored pasttime of prisoners everywhere,
scratching grafitti on the wall of his prison, but in this case, he is
writing on the side of a mountain with his one remaining hand! This
short poem is its own brand of weird, and I love it. The situation could
scarcely be worse, yet Maedhros' words are witty and sardonic. His
remark addressed to the hypothetical reader--

[and if anyone
but me
should ever
chance
to read this]

--is so typical of grafitti and makes his words seem authentic.

Kudos to Vana Tuivana for such an arresting piece of writing!
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Title: The Courtship of Peregrin Took · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres:
Romance · ID: 275
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-18 18:27:34
After her Where Roses Grow, this is Pippinfan's longest and best work.

It was an interesting experience for me, reading this tale of Pippin and
Diamond, seeing as I have written one of my own. It is sometimes hard to
read a story on a subject area I've written about as, of course, the
other author's take on it will be different and there is that feeling
that they "have it all wrong" because of that. But this tale is so well
crafted that it pulled me in anyway.

After yet another failed love (that part is a bit like my story), Pippin
meets Diamond. Her older sister had come to be nanny to Pimpernel's
sons. She and Pippin begin a friendship that looks to be developing into
something more - until she has to confess that she is still rather in
love with the hobit she had been betrothed to. When her family and
former betrothed show up, she realizes she still loves him and Pippin is
crushed.

What follows is a lovely sweet tale of two people helping each other
with hurts they have as Diamond becomes the new nanny for Pippin's
nephews. Like her sister, she takes the position to leave behind
unpleasant things at home. Gradually Pippin and Diamond become dear to
each other in ways no other has before.

It is a warm, loving story. Well crafted and with good caracterization
of all these dear hobbits.
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Title: Alas, for the dying of the trees · Author: Gandalfs apprentice ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 788
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 19:36:57
A lovely drabble that makes very clear the long friendship between Gimli
and Legolas.
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Title: Moon Friend: Tales of Isildur · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races:
Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 832
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-18 19:46:51
In this series of drabbles, Elena Tiriel explores various moments in
Isildur's life, and cleverly relates them to both the meaning of his
name and the qualities associated with the moon. As with all of Elena
Tiriel's writing's, she wields both vocabulary and the rhythms and
structure of her sentences to deliver prose poems of immense subtlety
and power.

The first drabble cleverly uses the blood-drenched appearance of a moon
in eclipse to hint at Isildur's secret and nearly fatal errand to rescue
a fruit of Nimloth, while the obscuring cloud cover mirrors the passive
resistance of the populace of Numenor, resentful of Sauron's presence.
In another drabble, Elena Tiriel provides a heartbreaking foreshadowing
of Isildur's fall to the ring through his oath made to his patron: the
inconstant moon.

The series also includes two drabbles characteristic of Elena Tiriel,
who has a scary connection to Dark Creatures: the perspective of an orc
who encounters the terror of Isildur, fleeing from the Disaster of the
Gladden Fields, wearing the Ring; and the ghostly Isildur learn the
eventual fate of his bones in a chilling encounter with Saruman and his
orc minions.

Overall, this is a powerful, beautifully expressed and moving portrait
of one of Tolkien's true tragic heroes: a noble and courageous man
brought low by the malign influence of Sauron.
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Title: Stewardship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 920
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 19:53:11
Gandalf must feel satisfaction indeed that he is leaving his Stewardship
in such capable hands.
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Title: Hair · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 321
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 19:55:29
Very funny drabble about learning and coming to terms with the
differences of others.
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Title: Such loveliness in living thing · Author: Tanaqui · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 904
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 19:58:45
A nice glimpse of Bilbo's first impressions of Arwen.
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Title: The Tenth Walker · Author: Lindelea · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 198
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 20:02:59
A thoroughly enjoyable story!
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Title: A Secret Gate · Author: Elanor · Genres: Drama: Incomplete · ID: 56
Reviewer: Gryffinjack · 2006-10-18 20:12:22
When it comes to LotR stories, the story at the very top of my list that
must be read is A Secret Gate.

This story transcends beauty and enters into an altogether different
realm with its poetic prose full of rich descriptions full of emotion.
The characters and scenes are so vivid that the reader feels as though
they were one of the characters, seeing and feeling what they do.

Reading this story is like stepping into a magical land filled with
wonder, faerie magic, and an intangible special quality that leaves the
reader in breathless awe. The story comes alive and is totally
captivating. I for one am extremely jealous of this writer's imagination
and writing talents.

The story is an extremely imaginative visit with Merry and Pippin at the
end of their days in the Shire and follows them as they decide to leave
the Shire and their offices behind and return to Rohan first and then
Gondor. This is the only story I have ever read where I can accept Merry
and Pippin being old and embrace their personalities as they have
developed through the many long years.

However, this is not merely a story about a trip to the South. The
writer artfully weaves into the fabric of this story Merry's and
Pippin's memories so that we see various events from their lives, such
as the moments when they first fell in love with Estella and Diamond and
the special relationship each has with his respective wife.

The story behind Pippin and Diamond is absolutely breathtaking and has
definitely influenced my view of Diamond. All of this writers'
characterisations, including her OC's, are so rich with detail that they
spring to life. The reader will see them and hear their voices clearly.
I am especially fond of a young hobbit named Jamy Bucket, who comes to
Brandy Hall with a message for the best Meriadoc the Magnificent, Master
of Buckland, that I have ever read and becomes much more than a mere
messenger. The author carefully sculpts Jamys background and developes
his story as he interacts with Merry and his family so that the reader
is left wanting to see much more of this engaging young hobbit.

The details about the lives of Pippin and Merry and their families are
sensational, each of their children given depth and a unique voice. But
it is Pippin and Diamond that truly steal my heart in this story, with
the other-worldiness and mysticism that envelopes their relationship.

The overwhelming brilliancy of this story is made all the more complete
by the wonderful addition of illustrations that are as rich and vibrant
with magic as the story itself.

I cannot recommend this story highly enough and anyone who does not read
this gem of a story is missing out on a really special treat.
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Title: The Stone's Lament · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 53
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-18 20:13:09
This would indeed be something to give Gimli pause, and perhaps begin to
consider Legolas as more than an unwelcome companion - once he got over
his distress that he himself cannot hear the stones lament.
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Title: Dark Appetites · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 833
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-18 20:23:57
This drabble is a wonderful example of how Elena Tiriel is able to get
inside the minds of Tolkien's darker creations. She cleverly picks up on
a single sentence in The Lord of the Rings and extrapolates from it to
give us a complete picture of the long-term fate of a defeated enemy.
The language proves an intense sense of Shelob's brooding malice,
continued anger and her enduring hunger  and desire for revenge. (One
feels the people of resettled Ithilien are in for a nasty shock some
day.) Another exquisitely turned tour-de-force from this drabble specialist.
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Title: Just Us Lads · Author: pippinfan88 · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 291
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-18 22:36:10
Ah the joys of an evening with just the lads! It must have been a rare
enough thing for Paladin and Pippin to get to enjoy. And the glorious
feeling of having his da all to himself must have been wonderful as
well. The story is as warm, relaxing and comfy as the scene it describes.
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Title: Work Detail · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 789
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-18 22:54:34
Very cute and sexy! It's nice to see Arwen and Aragorn together.
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Title: Making Merry · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits · ID: 663
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-18 23:02:12
The magick of the Elves when the times are happy instead of fraught with
danger! And to be part of the magick, what better can there be? Merry
and Pip are part of the magick, though the darkness tries to pluck Merry
away . . . but no! Hobbits are magick as well, don't you know - Marigold
obviously does!

A lovely and magickal tale indeed!
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Title: To Climb a Tree · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits: Children ·
ID: 646
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-18 23:05:44
This is an intense story, for all that it starts out humorous. Climbing
a tree has little yet all to do with it. The story is filled with the
love, concern and trust in each other that we have all come to expect
from Merry and Pippin. It has to do with growing up and with role
reversal and with putting another's needs above our own.

Merry and Pippin are breathless at the end . . . and so is the reader!
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Title: Relics · Author: Nickey · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 620
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-18 23:38:58
This is a truly magnificent story. The rambling nature of Sam's thoughts
keep thngs as moody and odd as his feelings. If September isn't right,
neither is the flow of the story, but in a way that is an artist's touch.

The Party when the Ring came to Frodo was in September. They left on the
Quest in September. Frodo left Middle Earth in September. None of these
are comfortable memories and just as the niggle at Sam, they disturb the
reader. Awkward. Uncomfortable. Just not right.

And so it is with the last stump of a tree lost while Sam, Frodo, Merry
and Pippin were gone from the Shire during those dark times. Just not
right. Nor with the hole pulling it up makes. Nor with a gleeful child
playing with odd new toys.

Just not right. Except that it makes for a wonderful tale for a chilly
autumn night.

Nicky's artistry shines!
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Title: The Eyes of Boromir · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Genres: Romance:
Poetry · ID: 632
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-18 23:49:22
Beautiful, lyrical and haunting. Everything a folk song should have: a
soldier, traveling, hospitaity, drink, unrequited love at first sight,
parting, battle and the death of both of the main characters. And oh,
how I could see it all happening! The handsom military man and a lass
with little hope of having much of a life.

Perfect. This is perfect!
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Title: You Never Know · Author: MysteriousWays · Genres: Humor: The
Shire · ID: 701
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-19 00:04:43
One really never knows what might happen when the day begins. Frodo has
a bad enough time with one naked hobbit, when there oughtn't be any. But
as more and more of them appear, poor dear Frodo is truly befuddled.

First of all, where does one look? Even if the other hobbit is another
lad hobbit, it's not polite to stare. And if the other hobbit is a lass
. . .

How about the elderly? Not pleasant viewing and one is still not sure
where to rest one's eyes.

About the only relatively safe naked hobbits are children, but even then
it is most awkward.

Frodo has a lot to figure out on his trip into Hobbiton to do the marketing!

Hilarious!!!
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Title: The Letter · Author: Gryffinjack · Races: Hobbits: Post-Sauron's
Fall · ID: 955
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-19 02:39:10
This one is a favourite of mine. The cousins and Sam are wonderful in
the first part of this story. I enjoyed their dialogue very much. I can
imagine that, good hearted lads that they are, they would want to let
their folks know that they were still alive and hoped to come home soon,
and I think that it is especially appropriate that Pippin, as the
youngest, had the idea to write a letter first.

And I can certainly understand his dilemma about what he should write!
Pippins tongue-in-cheek detailed list of all that went on while they
were away is hilarious because of the way that it is delivered, but the
events are all very serious and most things that happened are not things
that the folks back home would even be able to comprehend. To say such
things in a letter would confuse and frighten them rather than
enlighten. These four have gone through so much! Clearly bemused by how
to put all of this into a simple letter, the offhand and breathless way
that he recites their trials and tribulations to the others was very
hobbity and very much Pippin!

The letter that he ultimately sends is a perfect balance  not too much,
not too little, but certainly enough to make his parents understand why
he had to go, and that he was sincerely sorry for worrying them.

I loved Pippins parents in this story. So many stories make Paladin out
to be grim, small minded, and unloving, but I do not think that he would
be so. If he were, he wouldnt have raised such a worthy, valiant, and
loving son. I think that Pippin is a reflection of his father. And that
Merry is a reflection of Saradoc. They could not have had the values,
loyalty, loving hearts, and determination that they did had their
fathers not had these traits as well.

Eglantine and Paladins clear joy - and their worry - at receiving the
letter was very well done, as was their worry about what the lads would
find when they returned to the Shire. Little could they guess how well
equipped these four have become to handle the danger, or that they would
be the deliverers of the Shire. Indeed, all that matters to them in this
moment is that their beloved son will soon be home!

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Title: An Exchange of Views · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 931
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:26:00
An interesting dilemma for Faramir, and one he is obviously well up to
coping with. Very amusing, and I find myself wanting to read more about
this particular situation!
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Title: Making the Legends of Our Times · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 860
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:28:24
What a powerful moment! I find myself wondering what Eowyn would have
said to this revelation, and how the young granddaughter would have
reacted on finding out that this was no mere coincidence of names!
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Title: Of Stone and Fire · Author: Werecat · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 124
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:30:56
I have always been very amused by the thought that Galadriel freely gave
to Gimli what she denied to Feanor. Yes, I can imagine his outraged
reaction--and I can also imagine Gimli being not perturbed in the least,
for he had his lady's favor.
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Title: With Bow and Blade · Author: Lady Aranel · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 282
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:33:46
I like the idea that the connection between father and son was strong
enough to be felt through all the long leagues at this time of stress!
Very nicely portrayed!
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Title: The Oathbreakers · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 42
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:36:46
What a fascinating idea! I can see that Boromir might have accounted
himself among the oathbreakers, and taken this opportunity to make
amends--though surely he'd already done so in his last defense of
Frodo's cousins. And I can see Aragorn having this reaction, wishing to
keep his friend by him, yet knowing it to be unwise. Very moving!
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Title: Immortality · Author: LydiaB · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 494
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:39:30
Beautiful! I love the song of Nimrodel, and this drabble captures the
bittersweet tone, while giving her lover's POV! Very well done!
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Title: Until Light Returns · Author: elliska · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 707
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:42:02
What must it have been like, to watch such beauty be blighted bit by bit
over the ages? It is no wonder he was fierce in the defense of his land,
and it is a wonderful thing that he was finally able to take his part in
throwing the darkness down!
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Title: Autumn Hunter · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 353
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:44:34
Very sensual. I am afraid, though, that I do not know the identity of
the POV character. In spite of that, I was impressed by the imagery.
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Title: Seeker of Shadow · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 63
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 03:47:23
I only have a vague familiarity with the story of Aredhel and Eol. In
spite of that, I thought the imagery here was very evocative. And the
poetry was excellent!
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Title: The Usurper · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 834
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 06:29:38
Brrr... The author captured Castamir's ruthless and vengeful nature
here, effectively using his own PoV and highlighting a tense moment soon
after his victory. His rise to power did not make him generous, but only
deepened his pride and sense of righteousness. I especially liked how
his internal dialogue highlighted that he considered himself the
rightful ruler, and unfortunately not with any feeling of true
responsibility to his land or his newly-won people. The particularly
vicious sentence weighed on Ornendil, and the destruction of the city,
leave me glad that he himself is eventually overthrown. My only
"comfort," such as it is, is that this particular moment was likely the
start of the people's turning away from his "pure-blooded" ascendancy,
and back to the "half-blooded" true king, Eldacar. A very well-realized
and uncomfortable drabble.
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Title: A Little Thing · Author: Acacea · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 75
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 06:30:07
Very unique and clever perspective. I thought you caught the ambiance of
the river quite well, and having the aquatic life be affected by the
ring was an excellent touch (fish, etc. avoid it, even to risking other
dangers instead; the fern has long life because it is close enough to
influence). The feeling of the ring's waiting was well-represented.
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Title: Not In Vain · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Races: Hobbits: War of
the Ring · ID: 675
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-19 06:38:02
This story is written in a truly wonderful Tolkien voice. And if he
had written this scene I can imagine that the content would have been
almost in these exact words. One of my favourite things in fanfiction is
the exploration of the relationship between Pippin and Gandalf, and this
gapfiller is a marvellous effort in that area.

Pippin clearly misses his Merry so, and his conversation with Gandalf
shows that, but it also delves into much deeper matters and I am really
pleased at the maturity Pippin evidences here. And that Gandalf sees it,
and feels pride in the youngest hobbit.

Gandalfs conclusion that Pippin is deserving of, and can handle the
truth, and the sad details that he gives to him about the circumstances
of Boromirs death are spot on. His description of how the Ring almost
claimed Boromir does not make Pippin burst out with denial, but instead
spurs thoughtful recollections of Pippins own about Boromirs behaviour
and how he had frightened Merry and Pippin with the change that had
seemed gradually to come over him on the River. Gandalf is pleased by
his maturity and manages to make Pippin understand that Boromir had in
fact been saved by his death, that it was better so, and that Pippin
bears no blame for it. That thought had surely been a burden to the hobbit.

Gandalfs assurances that Pippin has a part to play on the side of good
and that he is not a piece of baggage but a very important part of the
scheme of things is a surprise to the hobbit but he accepts Gandalfs
wisdom.

But above all, he still misses his Merry.

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Title: A Letter Unwritten · Author: Bill The Pony · Races: Hobbits: War
of the Ring · ID: 855
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-19 06:41:24
Sam has some very moving thoughts about his love for Frodo.
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Title: We Shall Return · Author: Marta · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 650
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 06:43:07
Marta has given us a powerful look from the "other side." Little is said
of Castamir's sons, but I thought that this viewpoint captured their
probable outlook on the situation very well. The reference to Numenor's
seafaring roots was telling - in light of Castamir favoring the fleets
during his short-lived rule - and gave another plausible reason for
their discontent with Gondor, going beyond Eldacar's mixed blood.

I thought the reference to ["Pharazon's pillar"] was well-made. That
single line brought to mind that Numenor's pride led to both great
accomplishments and great folly; how ironic that Castamir's son thinks
of the monument to the achievement ("capturing" Sauron) that led to
Numenor's ultimate downfall. The connection between ["Eldacar... from
the North"] and Aragorn, and both being rejected out of hand by those
who would be displaced by their ascendancy, was yet another well-made
allusion to the link between pride and folly.
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Title: Home Again · Author: Súlriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 863
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 06:43:44
Very well-done and unique perspective! I've long been a cat-lover, and
thought that this drabble caught a cat's attitude and nature rather
well. Would love to see her Queen from the cat's viewpoint, too.
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Title: Tokens of Sorrow · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 874
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 06:44:19
It is always enjoyable to get a little-known or little-explored
perspective from an author, and Tanaqui does an excellent job with this
one. Invariably with obscure topics like this, I end up going back to
the source (here [Unfinished Tales]) to refresh my memory. Tanaqui
captured much about that time in few words: The weariness of battle,
Minohtar's kinship, the horror of the loss of the entire royal family. I
particularly liked the line where the leader of the Éothéod comes in and
can't figure out who's in charge, because Gondor's command has been so
decimated. The poignancy of this drabble helped me develop a much
greater appreciation of the event.
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Title: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship · Author: Elana · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 150
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 06:44:34
A humorous version of Gandalf encountering hobbits for the first time. I
has to laugh that it was the pipeweed that drew him in and cemented the
friendship.
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Title: Breeze · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races: Hobbits: War of the
Ring · ID: 974
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-19 06:48:21
This is just stunning. The author manages to give the breeze a perfect
voice, manages to make us see it as an ageless living entity. Its
thoughts are perfect here as it struggles to bring Frodo - and Sam - the
faintest breath of comfort. I have never read anything quite like this,
and it is utterly beautiful.
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Title: First Night · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: War of the
Ring · ID: 400
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-19 07:06:23
Poor Pippin. He is so very young and has been so very brave while on
this hopeless Quest, but now, sundered from all of his kin, his
homesickness is keen and sharp. His youth is highlighted by many things
in this story, and I particularly was struck by this in his thought when
he removed his shirt: [Why unbutton buttons I will only need to button
again in the morning? ]

His musings are spot on about the unfamiliar and uncomfortable City of
stone, and unsurprisingly all of his thoughts take him back to his
Merry, who has ever been his source of safety and comfort. He rues his
actions with the Palantír for he knows he has only himself to blame for
their separation.

His joy at the homey scent of lavender is such a relief to him, and I
liked very much his memories as he drifted off, and the beginnings of
the dream in which he is able to delight in the beauty of the Shire. The
rest of the dream is not so comforting, as he tries and fails to come to
his familys side, as if he will never be able to quite come home again.
And that is painfully true, because he has changed, and things will
never be exactly the same again even should he make it back to the Shire.

And at the end, Gandalfs mere presence comforts him. It is easy to read
the simple but heartfelt relief in his thought: [&hes back. Gandalf is
back.]

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Title: Until After · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: War of the Ring ·
ID: 897
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-19 07:26:05
Another wonderful story that Dana tells in a lovely stream of
consciousness style, a style in which she writes like no other.

Beginning in Moria, Pippins thoughts guide us naturally through the
beginnings of he and Merry becoming more than cousins, more than
friends, and the sporadic nature of their courtship is dictated because
of the demands of the Quest. But their new relationship becomes more and
more until by the time they are together in Minas Tirith it is clear
that they have given their hearts to one another.

The bit where Pippin awakens in Cormallen to Merrys kiss is lovely, and
his words to astonished Merry were perfect: ["Oh, I love you, fool of a
Brandybuck," he said. "You thought that I would leave."]

And he drifts to sleep again, with Merrys voice in his ears, anchoring
him to the knowledge that the Quest is over and that they need be
separated no longer.

Just beautiful!

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Title: Swan Dance · Author: Rhapsody · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 797
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 07:26:40
Such a sad drabble of a tragic event, and I thought Rhapsody did a good
job of capturing the Feanorian perspective - the importance of getting
those ships, no matter the horrible cost. We as outsiders understand the
falsity of their rationalization, but they would not - at least at the time.
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Title: Stronger Songs · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 688
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 07:27:24
I had never before considered this particular first meeting, but this is
an intriguing perspective. Of course Tom would try to save and protect
what he could of creation, prior to Beleriand's fall. I would love to
read of an actual conversation between he and Treebeard.
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Title: Great Heart · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: First Age and
Prior: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 64
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 07:30:13
I thought this was a very well done perspective on Huan and his destiny.
It heightens his eventual accomplishments that he started out as the
runt of the litter, or perhaps having to strive so hard as a pup is part
of what shaped his later determination. I particularly appreciated that
he could spot evil early on in his life, and that he knew his heart was
meant for someone else. It makes Huan's later obedience to Luthien and
then Beren very understandable. His "voice" was clear throughout the
drabble.

I grinned at the line about Huan wagging his tail at Orome: ["It is
something like greeting a mountain..."] Indeed! And the homage to the
Celtic hounds was lovely. I think I may always visualize Huan this way now.
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Title: The Importance of Being a Hobbit · Author: Lamiel · Races:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 961
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-19 08:01:36
This is a very hobbity story! Merry, whom I see as the most serious of
the hobbits when it comes to his position among the Fellowship, doubts
his ability to measure up as a warrior at the side of the Big People. He
frets at Pippins more carefree attitude and his habit of making the
others laugh. He continually sizes himself up and feels that he is
lacking in much more than just height.

But a conversation with Legolas brings things into perspective for him.
He comes to realise that the Dark Lord cannot be beaten with blade and
bow, and that the hobbits just being hobbits in their support of Frodo
is a mighty weapon in and of itself. When Legolas tells him that he had
no real hope of the Fellowships success until the younger hobbits had
been included in its numbers Merry is surprised, but quickly understands
just what Legolas means. And he suddenly understands that Legolas too is
doing his best to lighten the hearts of the Company.

Merry still intends to become the best warrior that he can be, but he is
comfortable now in the knowledge that, should he not succeed at arms, he
is still a valued and necessary member of the company. And so indeed is
Pippin.

Merry's voice is written very well here, and so are the rest of the
Fellowship. A very entertaining story!

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Title: The Decoy Hobbit · Author: storyfish · Races: Hobbits: War of the
Ring · ID: 257
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-19 09:05:24
This mostly book-verse story with just a touch of film-verse is one of
my favourites.

In the first part, I love that Pippin and Beregond have teamed up here
and worked out a system for felling orcs. It makes perfect sense that in
battle warriors would make use of their strengths in figuring out a
strategy against the enemy, especially when so outnumbered.

Pippins thoughts here about all of the times he has served as a decoy
are perfectly true, especially in his distraction of the Dark Lord. I
love the way that he refers to himself as [The Decoy Hobbit
Extraordinaire!], because among other things that is indeed what he is.
I am sure that was one of the reasons that Gandalf wanted Pippin and
Merry to be a part of the Fellowship  but just one of many reasons.

Even though Pippins thoughts are light-hearted here, there is still
plenty of grim reality, and his thoughts seem very much to me like a
hobbit out of his depth, trying very hard to keep the hysteria of his
alien surroundings and actions away by bantering silently with himself
in true hobbity fashion, making light of the graveness of the situation.
After all, there are no other hobbits to banter with, and no breath to
spare in doing so aloud anyway, to companions who will not understand
that this is helping Pippin to say sane and fight on and do his very best.

The grim reality really strikes home when he is wounded in the arm.
Caught up in the heat of battle it seems almost a trivial thing, and so
a warrior must think such a wound if he is to survive in battle. And
when Saurons Eye brushed over Pippin I actually gasped at the
realisation that Pippin would certainly have had to face that Eye
finding him once again when he was fighting so near to Saurons
stronghold. That he marched willingly to the Black Gate, within easy
reach of Saurons clutches, speaks immeasurably about his courage.

Pippins attack on the troll to save Beregond was heroic indeed, and his
thoughts about where he had ended up and the mental letter home were
sad, even though they were very much Pippin. His thoughts while he is in
limbo give testimony to how very near death he was, and I especially
liked that his own spirit flew so high that he espied the Eagles
returning from Mount Doom with Frodo and Sam, though he didnt realise
that was what he was seeing.

The parts where Gimli finds Pippin, and Gimlis tear falls, and when
Aragorn tries to call him back were wonderful. When Gandalf had to
quickly summon Aragorn to return because Pippin was slipping away from
them again was a very tense and angsty moment, but written with
appropriate simplicity from Pippins detached pov. The sound of the sea
on white shores shows us just how close Pippin was to leaving
Middle-earth forever.

I love the scene when Pippin is waking up, when he hears the sound of
Merrys weeping and thinks that someone had died, eventually making
himself come back to reality. And I think my favourite bit of the whole
story is when Pippin, after being reassured that Frodo and Sam have
fulfilled the Quest and still live, wants to know why Merry has been crying:

[But there's one more thing I need to know before I can rest. With an
effort, I raise my left hand and trace one finger down the damp still on
Merry's cheek.

"Then why?" I ask.

Merry leans in and grips my raised hand with both of his. "Oh Pip," he
says, "do you even have to ask?"

Is that all it was, then? Silly Merry.

I take one brave, deep breath. "I missed you too, Mer," I say, and
squeeze his hands back. ]

What a wonderful ending to a really enjoyable, and very re-readable
story. I do wish that this author would write more and often!
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Title: Claws · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 835
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-19 17:34:17
This is a deliciously Dark drabble, showing there is no honour amongst
thieves. Elena Tiriel takes us to the heart of a crow's delight in
sparkling gems, acquisitiveness and greed. For a moment, we soar with
him as he attempts to make good his escape. Then she deflates (or should
that be excarnates?) our excitement.

The brilliance of this drabble lies not in what is said but what is
implied  the manner of Smaug taking his revenge on the thief who has
dared enter his domain. Concluding with that delicious throwaway line
indicating this is not the first time such a duel has taken place....
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Title: The Usurper · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 834
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-19 17:38:30
Elena Tirel once again gives us a chilling insight into a Dark character
 and another one of the more obscure corners of canon she loves so
much. In this drabble, she makes us feel not just the ambition, vanity
and cruelty of the usurper Castamir, but also his pettiness, petulance,
self-absorption and lack of self-awareness  and all from Castamir's own
perspective. This is a tour-de-force in 100 words! The drabble provides
a fine exploration of Tolkien's frequent theme that evil contains the
seeds of its own undoing, by showing how Castamir would have turned the
people of Gondor against him by indulging his own appetites for revenge
and cruelty. Excellent work!
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Title: Strange Fortunes · Author: Tehta · Times: First Age and Prior:
Incomplete · ID: 81
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-19 18:07:03
The plot is entertaining (Author's Notes and "Extras" inclusive),
intricate and well-paced. Very good use of PoV.

Excellent, biting humour, underpinned with more serious threads and
themes, reminscent of social satires. It builds up the wonders of
Gondolin and its denizens in vivid details (sometimes using Tolkien's
own occasionally overboard descriptions), only to spike it all with
hilarious, wicked asides, double-meanings and bad poetry, courtesy of
Maeglin and Salgant.

The characters and their interactions were consistently well-drawn
(especially Ecthelion and Glorfindel). Maegling's portrayal as weird,
deluded, clueless, obsessed-with-Idril was hilarious, and occasionally
oddly touching. And the depiction of Salgant as an indolent sycophant
and bad composer was highly enjoable.
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Title: Dance on the Way Down · Author: Aliana · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 734
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-19 18:08:02
Wistful, peaceful, warmly-glowing tone, a lyrical, beautiful style. The
theme of the piece - the changes peace has brought, and the memories of
the ones who lived through war - flows like a calm undercurrent through
the story, gaining strength as the story goes on. The love between the
unnamed narrator and her husband is depicted very movingly.
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Title: Gandalf returned · Author: Rabidsamfan · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 990
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-19 18:09:18
Fascinating gapfiller. Resonant imageries - one can really feel Gandalf
"waking up" to full realisation.
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Title: Shadow and flame · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 876
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-19 18:10:16
Excellent use of language and imagery. What a humbling realisation for a
Balrog; oddly, it almost makes me pity him.
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Title: The Price of Power · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great
Years: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 989
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-19 18:11:13
Saruman's personal recollections of the forest and his former
connections to it show very well how far he has fallen, that he can give
this up: ["The Price of Power"], indeed.
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Title: Always a First · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Fixed-Length
Ficlet series · ID: 757
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-19 18:12:50
I loved the first and the last drabble: The character's respective voice
(teenaged Merry & spirited Estella) was so vividly portrayed.
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Title: Midsummer's Day · Author: MysteriousWays · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 980
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 18:22:46
Your drabble has just the right mood of gentle sadness mixed with a
quiet joy. It's nice to see a moment when Frodo can simply "be," and
enjoy his beloved Shire that he sacrificed so much in order to save.
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Title: How Grima Lost His Eyebrows · Author: NeumeIndil · Times: Late
Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 800
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 18:22:59
I'm so glad that someone finally explained that part of the movie to me!
Nice introduction with a day-dreamy feel, then the intensity comes on
well at the end.
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Title: Unchanged · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 926
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 18:31:18
This is a well-done look at Bilbo from the outside, by a longtime
friend. I thought Marta caught both a hobbit's voice and a realistic
perspective of Bilbo's non-aging. Hobbits may be gossipy, but they are
basically down to earth and very practical. I can see them having the
calm acceptance of their ailments that Rory portrays so well, even as
they hash over everyone else's signs of aging while seeking sympathy for
their own! I have wondered how Bilbo's seeming timelessness would have
been seen by those who knew him very well. Very telling comment at the
end, pointing to our growing modern obsession with long life at any cost.
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Title: Object Lessons · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 668
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 18:31:36
Very nice. The brothers felt in-character but with the right amount of
youthful rashness. Faramir in particular was captured well - teaching
lessons but also making sacrifices for those he loves.
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Title: Gondor Needs No King · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 207
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 19:54:10
Oh, I got chills at Boromir's ["wolfish and predatory"] smile, and that
Faramir - the one and only person who might have stood a chance to help
his brother - ended up in the pyre after all. A cold and unsettling
scene that highlights the Ring's utter power to corrupt.
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Title: Following Orders · Author: EdorasLass · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 19:54:36
Edoraslass manages to clearly show the mix of anger, pain, and
disappointment that Faramir must have felt when confronted with
Denethor's "faithful" servants. He has to forgive these men, as much as
he had to forgive his father, in order to move on into a new life of
happiness. Hopefully Pippin's gentle counsel and Eowyn's love will help
him in this.
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Title: Holding the Line · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 581
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 19:55:13
Marta did a very nice job of providing some sobering backstory for the
Mumak-killing scene. I thought that she caught the "movie-verse"
Legolas' voice perfectly, and I loved Aragorn's comeback to his friend's
astonished question about the corruptibility of men.
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Title: Last Defence of the City · Author: Branwyn · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 96
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-19 19:56:17
Oh, man - how I wish that this was the way it had happened. Denethor,
who gets such a magnificent description for his younger years before
despair and grimness took him, could have gone out in a blaze of glory
and honor on the battlefield. Good job with incorporating some canon
elements at the beginning; I was completely surprised when things went
topsy-turvy. Denethor's voice sounded just right, still accurately the
Denethor of the books even as his actions deviate from canon.
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Title: Board Games (Cinquain) · Author: Rous · Genres: Drama: Poetry ·
ID: 741
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-10-19 20:39:54
Now I must admit my embarassment at having to look up what a cinquain
was. *grins* However, you hold true to the form, and the piece is an
effective summary of the holding action which Rohan fought for so long.
(Actually, the title put me in mind of "the great game" of the 19th
century, when two powerful nations fought for control of central Asia.)
Nicely done!
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Title: Boromir's Journey Home Amon Hen to Minas Tirith · Author:
majorbee · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 690
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-19 21:08:24
This is a nice long read. While it is strictly movie-verse, that doesn't
matter, as it's already AU. I found Boromir's survival a bit improbable,
but once past that part, I was caught up in a logical and exciting
sequence of events. I liked the explanation for Denethor's madness,
something that PJ had neglected. And I found all the characters were
well done.
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Hi, Marta!
*waves*
My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is currently in
Romance: Incomplete.
Thanks!
Branwyn

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> Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:22 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
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>
> Hi, Marta!
> *waves*
> My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is currently in
> Romance: Incomplete.
> Thanks!
> Branwyn
>

Congratulations!

I will need to put it in a sub-category with completed stories. Do you have
a preference? The available sub-categories are:

Romance: General
Romance: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Incomplete
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Poetry
Romance: Rohan

Of those, Fixed-Length Ficlets, Incomplete, and Poetry are obviously wrong
because your story isn't any of those. That leaves

Romance: General
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Rohan

It's Faramir/Eowyn so doesn't really fit in Lothiriel & Eomer. And IIRC it's
set in Minas Tirith. So how do you feel about putting it in Romance: Gondor?
Let me know if that sounds good and I'll put it there.

Marta

Hello,

Romance: Gondor works for me.

Thanks!

Branwyn



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Of Marta Layton
Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:51 PM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
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> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogrou <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ps.com]

On Behalf Of Jane O. Abbott

> Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:22 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogrou <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ps.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
>
> Hi, Marta!
> *waves*
> My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is currently in
> Romance: Incomplete.
> Thanks!
> Branwyn
>

Congratulations!

I will need to put it in a sub-category with completed stories. Do you have
a preference? The available sub-categories are:

Romance: General
Romance: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Incomplete
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Poetry
Romance: Rohan

Of those, Fixed-Length Ficlets, Incomplete, and Poetry are obviously wrong
because your story isn't any of those. That leaves

Romance: General
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Rohan

It's Faramir/Eowyn so doesn't really fit in Lothiriel & Eomer. And IIRC it's
set in Minas Tirith. So how do you feel about putting it in Romance: Gondor?
Let me know if that sounds good and I'll put it there.

Marta





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Hi Branwyn,

Thanks for the quick reply - I've moved it for you.

Marta

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> Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 11:09 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
>
> Hello,
>
> Romance: Gondor works for me.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Branwyn
>
> _____
>
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> <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com>
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
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> > ps.com]
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> > To: MEFAwards@yahoogrou <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ps.com
> > Subject: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
> >
> > Hi, Marta!
> > *waves*
> > My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is
> currently in
> > Romance: Incomplete.
> > Thanks!
> > Branwyn
> >
>
> Congratulations!
>
> I will need to put it in a sub-category with completed
> stories. Do you have a preference? The available sub-categories are:
>
> Romance: General
> Romance: Fixed-Length Ficlet
> Romance: Gondor
> Romance: Incomplete
> Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
> Romance: Poetry
> Romance: Rohan
>
> Of those, Fixed-Length Ficlets, Incomplete, and Poetry are
> obviously wrong because your story isn't any of those. That leaves
>
> Romance: General
> Romance: Gondor
> Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
> Romance: Rohan
>
> It's Faramir/Eowyn so doesn't really fit in Lothiriel &
> Eomer. And IIRC it's set in Minas Tirith. So how do you feel
> about putting it in Romance: Gondor?
> Let me know if that sounds good and I'll put it there.
>
> Marta
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>
>
>
>
>

Title: Legacy · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 299
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2006-10-19 23:23:16
As a Boromir fan, I always like stories where the Fellowship acknowledge
his contribution, and this is a sweet little drabble about just that.
Nicely done!
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Title: At the Rising of the Moon · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 846
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-20 01:11:13
A very light and amusing Yuletide tale, as Aragorn and Faramir try to
please their wives by fetching mistletoe. The author came up with a nice
blend of RL Yule traditions to form something different. A warm and cozy
holiday tale!
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Title: The Gift · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: Featuring Mirkwood Elves ·
ID: 160
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-20 01:18:43
A very nice father-son story, as Legolas calls upon Thranduil's help in
healing the land in Ithilien. A very nice and judicious use of Elven
magic, and a warm story of familial love.
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Title: The gift · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later Ages ·
ID: 807
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-20 01:31:16
A very sad and interesting premise: that Legolas knew Aragorn's mother
Gilraen, that he had fallen in love with her, and that he attended her
in death. A bittersweet story, infused with gentle dignity.
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Title: Inheritance · Author: Primsong · Times: Late Third Age: The Shire
· ID: 310
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 07:35:14
Eee! What a frighteningly possible AU! And that would have been the end
of Middle-earth most likely!
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Title: A Tisket, A Tasket · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 570
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 08:04:42
This is classic Grey Wonderer fare, full of humorous situations and very
witty lines. While on a visit to Bag End young Pippin decides to build a
nest for Errol, his stuffed rabbit, so that he will have babies. Already
disapproving of Pippin's attachment to the toy, Merry soon grows
irritated with his cousin's determination to help Errol have a baby.

I won't give away the results of Pippin's little experiment but I will
say that this is a wonderful cousin story that displays each hobbit's
unique personality as well as the close relationship between Frodo,
Merry and Pippin, and Bilbo as well.

There are so many wonderful bits in this story - Pippin's whisper that
is louder than his normal tone, Merry waking up cuddling Errol, that
Merry himself isn't too sure exactly how babies are made, the story of
Merry and the squirrels and Frodo and the baths, and that the
Bracegirdles have far too many children. And I loved that the bed that
Pippin shares with Merry is safe for Errol and his one offspring, and
that no more little bunnies will result if he sleeps there, as Merry and
Pippin haven't had any babies! I would have loved to see Bilbo and
Frodo's faces when Pippin came up with that!

A really enjoyable story! Grey Wonderer is a wonderful writer of little
hobbits!
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Title: Home At Last · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 883
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 08:17:35
A very realistic look at what it must have been like for Bilbo after he
returned from his Adventure. I felt so sorry for him! But everything
comes at a price, and it is clear that Bilbo wouldn't have missed his
Adventure for anything. I am glad that Drogo was there! With Drogo as
his father and Bilbo as his guardian, it is no wonder that Frodo turned
out the way that he did.
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Title: If I had a Hammer · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 162
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 08:41:15
This is an all-around good story! The characterisations of the cousins
and Sam are spot on. Sam makes a wonderfully patient teacher, and I
loved that he let Pippin do all of the work himself, unlike expedient
Merrys wish to just do the project for Pippin himself. Pippin really
shone here with the cleverness of his invention, and I loved his choice
of the recipient.

Something that is a bit different here is that Merry and Pippin are both
at an age where they are not exactly getting along the way that we are
used to them doing, and that makes for a very realistic and enjoyable
change. It isn't just Pippin that learns something here, Merry learns an
important lesson himself, about friendship and encouragement.

The OCs in this story are also very well written and so is the dialogue
and all of the descriptions. Another story by Grey Wonderer that doesnt
disappoint!

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Title: Merry's Graduation · Author: pippinfan88 · Times: Late Third Age:
The Shire · ID: 125
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 08:48:29
Pippinfan writes lovely hobbits! Her characterisations in this story are
wonderful. Her Merry especially is written very well - strong and
intensely loyal, just the way that I imagine him. Degger is a marvellous
OC that I have met before in Pippinfans work, and I like him just as
much in this story. Even though he comes from a lower class background,
he is most certainly a hobbit of quality!

The plot is well thought-out, the situations and dialogue believable. I
highly recommend this tale!

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Title: Merrys Present · Author: Mariole · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 639
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 09:01:09
This is a very lovely young Merry and Frodo story with lots of wonderful
detail and description. Merry discovers a visiting Frodo alone on the
banks of the Brandywine, and they have a heart to heart talk about Frodo
and his feelings about having lost his parents. Merry grows up a lot
that day, and it is so nice that Frodo shares these thoughts with Merry.
The relationship between the two of them is written very well, and both
of them are beautifully in character.


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Title: All Is Well · Author: Gryffinjack · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 969
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 09:23:22
Its hard to believe, but this is the authors very first LoTR fanfic.
It is told wonderfully from five-year-old Pippins pov, and takes place
during a visit to Bag End where Pippins family is attending Bilbo and
Frodos Birthday Party. The dialogue is very good and the descriptions
are lovely, especially when little Pippin is sitting on Frodos lap,
listening to him read aloud about the battle against Sauron from ages
past. The image of him listening and trying hard not to fall asleep is
very sweet, and easily pictured.

But then the story becomes darker. Pippin dreams a true dream, though of
course he does not know it. Suddenly he is on the battlefield from the
story, surrounded by attacking orcs and fighting men. As well as an old
man in white that reminds him a bit of an older Gandalf, and an elf and
a dwarf. Terrified at being the only hobbit present, Pippin nonetheless
screws up his courage and lifts his blade against a troll, to protect
Frodo and Merry, wherever it is that they might be.

This is a fascinating usage of the Took sight, and very well done.

Gandalf is the one to ease the lad from his nightmare and I wonder if he
has any presentment that what Pippin was dreaming will someday come
true, even if he does not know the exact details of the dream? But then,
he *is* a wizard, so perhaps he does at least have a premonition.

A thoroughly enjoyable story!
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Title: Just Us Lads · Author: pippinfan88 · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 291
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 09:45:58
Having three sisters around must have made just-us-lads moments like
this between Pippin and his father extra special. I love their quiet
companionship here, sitting together and sharing a favourite book, and
can easily picture the rest of the evening; enjoying their supper of
stew together, maybe later on playing a game of marbles so that Pippin
can demonstrate the moves that won him his newest shooter. The thought
that till the day he died Pippin would remember his father when he
smelled the scent of Old Toby was lovely and speaks of a great love
between them.

Pippinfans Paladin is so very well written; loving and approachable and
clearly adoring his son. I cannot agree with the interpretation of some
fanfic writers, who write Paladin as cold and unloving, always
disapproving of Pippin. I think that Paladin must have been the way that
he is portrayed here, else Pippin would not have been so sweet-natured
and loving himself. He never would have gone on the Quest, in my
opinion, were his father not a fine person, who raised his son with a
sense of right and wrong, loyalty, and courage.

A beautiful little story, as I always expect from this author.

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Title: Of Birds and Bees · Author: Cathleen · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 727
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 10:12:41
This is a very funny story within a story  actually two very funny
stories within a story. Early in the Quest, the Fellowship listen with
delight as Pippin tells some tales of childhood, much to his cousins
and Sams chagrin. The comradeship here was very well done, especially
Boromir, who is already plainly quite fond of Pippin.

In the first little tale, young Pippin has seen rather too much of some
adult activity, and is annoyed when his cousins wont explain what it
was that he was seeing. Later, when he sees Merry weak at the knees over
Sams visiting cousin, Pippin at last figures out a little bit of what
he saw earlier, and proceeds to make Merrys life miserable by
embarrassing him at the dinner table in front of Bilbo and Gandalf. Like
a lot of children his age, Pippin just cant let it go and the lads
nearly come to blows.

In the second story, Pippin really gets himself into trouble! I wont
give it away here, but the object of Merrys affections gets to see
rather more of him than either would have liked, and it is all
mischievous Pippins fault!

The dialogue is fun and fast, and the situations very amusing!

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Title: Pennies for a Sunny Day · Author: Cathleen · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 728
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 11:00:13
A very hobbity tale of our favourite young hobbits having fun! This is
my absolute favourite story by Cathleen. Little Pippin comes to Bag End
for a whole week. Merry is also visiting, and at first is not pleased to
have to share his time with Frodo, but he quickly gets past his annoyance.

It is the middle of a heat wave, and all three cousins, together with
Sam, take a picnic down to the Water for the day. They have a wonderful
time, especially when Pippin produces a small bow and some arrows, a
gift from his father. All of them enjoy the toy, but Merry is especially
delighted, and when the others go off in the little boat, he stays
behind, ostensibly to swim.

This is my favourite part of the story. I absolutely love Merry here.
Once the others have disappeared, he takes up the bow and arrows and
*plays*. Really plays. It is such a delight to see Merry, who is usually
seen to be more staid and serious even at this age, really let go and
have a great time, even if he cant reveal this side of himself to his
friends without being self-conscious because he feels he is too old for
this sort of thing. He has a simply grand time stalking dragons through
the woods and playing at being an adventurer. I know that his loyalty
and love for Frodo was the main reason that he went on the Quest, but I
know that he had this spirit of adventure in him as well, compelling him
to go, and this part of his personality is brilliantly shown here.

The characterisations and dialogue are well-written, and so are the
descriptions. I could see the events playing out perfectly, particularly
this scene with Merry, and the scene early in the story where Pippin is
endeavouring to lay hands on his penny jar.

I love that the title of this story is a saying from the Shire, the
converse of our pennies for a rainy day. It is a much more optimistic
saying, and a very suitable one for hobbits!

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Title: Midsummer's Day · Author: MysteriousWays · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 980
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 11:06:05
This is lovely! For this moment, Frodo is able to forget his hurts and
savour being home. Really beautiful descriptions.
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Title: On the Fair Hill · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 946
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 11:09:30
Gorgeous imagery and exqusite detailed descriptions despite the 100 word
limit. Very well done!
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Title: Unchanged · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 926
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 11:10:53
Very insightful drabble! I enjoyed reading something from Rory's pov.
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Title: How Grima Lost His Eyebrows · Author: NeumeIndil · Times: Late
Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 800
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 11:17:47
A very good reason to always remember your manners and knock before
entering! Especially when you are paying a call on an evil wizard!

Very funny, and very clever. I like the way the mood goes from serious
to hilarious in a - flash! (Sorry, I just had to say that!)
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Title: Wizardry · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 179
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 11:21:13
I loved the way that this double drabble began and ended with the same
word. For all that they can laugh about it, they are still right back
where they started - stuck. You conveyed their great friendship
wonderfully here. Excellent!
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Title: Object Lessons · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 668
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-20 11:24:18
I had to laugh at this - there was a time when the ER knew me by my
first name! This was a nice brotherly moment between Boromir and Faramir.
-----------------------------------
Title: Unchanged · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 926
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-20 11:43:21
This is a wonderful perspective on the value of the longevity provided
to Bilbo by the Ring. From the perspective of Rory Brandybuck, we don't
see the negative psychological impact of the Ring (how Bilbo feels
[stretched thin]), but we do see how Bilbo has missed out on the
pleasures that come from an understanding that our lives are limited in
duration. Marta uses wonderful, subtle metaphors  the apparent
short-term indifference of the stonework of the Brandywine Bridge to the
effect of the river current, yet with a sense of constant buffeting that
would ultimately wear on the soul. An insightful meditation on mortality
and its worth in just 100 words!
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Title: Little Stars · Author: Space Weavil · Races: Elves: Feanorians ·
ID: 107
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 11:54:12
Nathriel's voice is clear and compelling to the end. She is a brave,
sympathetic character, and gives us an innocent's perspective of the
third Kinslaying. I grieved that she died, and that she did not know of
her effort's success - Elrond and Elros survive to fill great roles in
history.

Maglor and Maedhros plainly show how their oath has deadened their sense
of right and wrong, but not completely. Maedhros actively seeks to
distance himself from his conscience; and Maglor, in this case, actually
listens to his.
-----------------------------------
Title: Letters in the sand · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Feanorians
· ID: 176
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 11:58:42
Maglor's torment is moving and well-drawn. I struggled a bit with his
rage at Eonwe's refusal to turn over the jewels, as I thought Maglor was
more sorrowful at this point. Beautiful incorporation of the Tengwar.
Very interesting take, that the Silmarillion had a spirit of its own,
and Maglor felt its rejection as betrayal.
-----------------------------------
Title: Paper · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races: Elves: Feanorians · ID: 492
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 12:00:16
This story is marvelous on many levels. The characterizations are
brilliant. Each brother has his own voice (although Carnistir/Tyelkormo
are a bit lumped together), with subtle interplays between each other
and their parents - so much like a real family. I had never thought
about what Feanor naming his fifth child after himself would have meant
to his first four sons, but Dawn has believably portrayed possible
repercussions. The dialogues felt spot-on, and the descriptions of
family life were entertaining and always contributed to the story.

I had a very clear understanding of the tension between Curufinwe's
desire to please and emulate his father, and how overwhelming this would
have seemed, right from the first line. To be named after someone as
famous and talented as Feanor would have been more burden than blessing.
Faced with this, it is wholly believable that his son turns to fantasies
acted and drawn out on paper.

Loved the ending (how much of this was real, or another fantasy?), the
letter Feanor sent to his half-brother, the ruminations on writing and
the possibilities of a blank page... The story is packed with delightful
and insightful moments.
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Title: Finding the Right Words · Author: Nienor Niniel · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 785
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-20 12:08:04
What a lovely and introspective piece of work. Restless on the night
before the coronation, Faramir ponders the words he will speak when he
greets his new king. We are shown his honorableness, his wisdom and his
foresight. He is show truly worthy of both his Stewardship roles--as the
last of the ruling Stewards, and the first Steward of the renewed
Kingdom. Beautiful job, full of respect for the character!
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Title: Beneath the Hollow Hill · Author: Haleth · Races: Elves:
Feanorians · ID: 314
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 12:13:35
Beautiful, evocative descriptions; every scene is vividly portrayed. I
did not know any of the Celtic traditions incorporated, but felt
intimately familiar with them by the end of the story. The author
managed a seamless blending between Irish legend and Tolkien's tales.
The entire encounter with Nuada and the Tuatha de Danaan was very well
done. I especially enjoyed Maglor's playing for the court and their
wholehearted response to the music. And as always with these stories, I
ended by grieving for Maglor, and wishing that if he could not yet
return home that he could have had the pleasure of Nuada's company.
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Title: [untitled] He: Gimli fic prompt #84 · Author: Thevina Finduilas ·
Races: Dwarves · ID: 718
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-20 12:16:35
I'd never much thought about Dwarf slash. Still Gimli's letter and his
thoughts do not seem unreasonable in the face of where he will soon be
heading.
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Title: The Stone's Lament · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 53
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-20 12:21:59
Yes, I can easily see Gimli being both startled and envious at Legolas'
words about the stones' lamenting. It would unsettle Gimli's
preconceptions to realize the fact that an Elf--and a wood-Elf at
that--could hear the stone when he could not, as well as the fact that
the stones missed the Elves more than Dwarves. This could have been the
beginning of their friendship. Very insightful!
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Title: Web of Friendship · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 932
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-20 12:22:06
This is a very sweet drabble about Elanor's time as a lady-in-waiting to
Arwen. It showcases Arwen's kindness as much as Elanor's difficulty in
fitting in with life in the Royal Court. The interactions and reactions
of Arwen, Elanor, and the other ladies-in-waiting are handled with
Gwynnyd's usual perceptiveness. Gwynnyd also, as she so often does in
her stories, lightly weaves in her extensive knowledge of mediaeval
crafts in the form of references to authentic cord-making techniques.
Nicely done!
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Title: Beneath the Hollow Hill · Author: Haleth · Races: Elves:
Feanorians · ID: 314
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-20 12:24:34
A haunting melding of Middle-earth and "real life" mythology; very
interesting concept, and well-executed. I am impressed with this version
of Maglor, and his realization of what his experience means.
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Title: Cacophony · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 929
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-20 12:29:11
This is a hilarious alternative version of the Music of the Ainur, which
really should come with a beverage warning. Gwynnyd shows the Valar
romping through a myriad of musical and performance styles  each
perfectly suited to the Vala in question. My particular favourites are
her choices for Ulmo, Varda and Nienna. And the conclusion explains,
perfectly, why Eru created Arda and put the Valar in charge. This is a
laugh-out-loud view of the music of the spheres. Excellent!
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Title: Fire · Author: Aramel · Genres: Drama: Fixed-Length Ficlet Series
· ID: 172
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-20 12:29:13
An interesting concept, concerning the Three. I'd occasionally wondered
why no Ring of Earth, and this very convincingly answers that question.
I'm not up enough on the subtleties of the Silm to recognize any AU
elements, but I do like this very much. A plausible gap-filler.
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Title: Hope Eternal · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn ·
ID: 930
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-20 12:40:53
In her series of Yule Mathoms, Gwynnyd runs the full gamut of emotions,
and this is a dark and bitter piece (although not without touches of
black humour) exploring the difficulties of Post-War reconciliation and
integration. How do you handle defeated enemies bred for their
quarrelsome and warlike nature who simply don't want to become farmers?
Both Aragorn's initial optimisim and Faramir's pragmatism are
heart-wrenching. And for a drabble with a high level of disturbing
violence, Gwynnyd shows her usual facility with poetic language and
allusion, with a clever reference to the reversal of beating swords into
plowshares. An excellent reminder that not everything was as
straightforward for legendary kings after victory as the bards and
minstrels would have us believe.
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Title: Trivial Matters · Author: Thundera Tiger · Genres: Humor: Gondor
· ID: 839
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 13:08:14
This is a silly bit of humor, but one that is very well done. I really
enjoy it when an author can take a non-canon event and still keep the
characters true to the books. Thundera Tiger manages this flawlessly,
even with those only mentioned but not seen. The beginning is played out
perfectly - Legolas' interior dialogue grows ever more strident as he
attempts to control himself. The interaction that follows between the
ever-subtle and restrained Faramir and the boastful and outmaneuvered
king was very enjoyable. Perfect dialogue and reactions.

I loved the tiny reference to the quality of Gimli and Legolas'
relationship: only a dear friend would make so much effort to discover a
weakness and then ruthlessly exploit it!
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Title: Of All the Pretty Little Horses · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor:
Gondor · ID: 736
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 13:08:29
Very funny exploitation of a possible misunderstanding. And yes, I think
Faramir was leading poor Eomer on, at least by the end. A good quality
in a brother-in-law.
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Title: Bored · Author: Make It Stop · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 779
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 13:08:57
I laughed out loud throughout the entire story. The characters and their
reactions were so vividly and hilariously portrayed. Weblog was a
perfect framing device for the family dinner, and I (of course!) loved
the detailed description of Faramir that he slipped in there for us. The
guard's internal efforts to deal with his boredom were spot-on.

But truly, the "conversation" between Faramir and Denethor was
absolutely inspired. Wonderful back and forth repartees. I couldn't
decide if Boromir was oblivious, or so disgusted by their nightly
descent into mind-reading that the peas were an effort to jar them back
to their surroundings.
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Title: Legend · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 933
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2006-10-20 13:11:46
I have mixed feelings about Eowyn myself, but I'm always up for someone
else's view. I liked this vignette very much, particularly the image of
an elderly Eowyn still sleeping beside her Faramir, who was also, as she
observes, damaged by the war. Legends have little to do with flesh and
blood, and the flesh and blood progenitor of one is able to observe.
Time glosses over the fear and pain and blood, leaving only the glory
without reckoning the cost of that glory. Her last statement, about
still being willing to defend those she loves despite her advancing age,
is quintessential Eowyn, and I suspect that her grandson is, indeed,
very like her!
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Title: First Impressions · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 806
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2006-10-20 13:25:33
I have often wondered about how Aragorn adapted to life among his mortal
kin when he left the almost-paradise that was Rivendell. The Northern
Dunedain are so little written of that you can imagine almost anything
you like about them. In my mind, they're doing a little better than the
way Bodkin depicted them here (perhaps holing up in some of those stone
ruins the Numenoreans were so fond of building everywhere), but I can
buy into this vision as well. The comparison between Gilraen and her
serene, clean beauty and these hard-working, old before their time rural
folk brings to mind the hard, brutal and short lives of medieval
peasants versus their noble rulers.

For obvious reasons, I was rather charmed by this observation of
Aragorn's about the young Dunedain women-[There was not a single one he
would look at twice  gawky, ungainly, harsh-voiced, plain girls, the
lot of them.]. The comparisons with this existence that is his
birthright and the one he was brought up in give the idea that the poor
fellow is imagining himself in Hell! But underlying the comparisons is
also his realization that this is in fact his destiny, and he needs to
learn to cope with it. You can also sense something of the dismay with
which he realizes that he is the embodiment of all these peoples' hopes.

Halbarad is so excellent in this piece, the perfect guide into Aragorn's
new world. His voice comes through true and clear. He is matter-of-fact
and honest, and the way Bodkin depicts him, you can easily imagine him
becoming one of Aragorn's friends and a trusted confidant over time. A
most enjoyable story!
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Title: A bit of garden · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 901
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2006-10-20 13:27:57
Poor Sam! After the initial thrill of seeing Elves wore off, I can just
imagine him drifting through Rivendell a bit at loose ends. And
eventually, the lure of a neglected garden would be too much for a
gardner with time on his hands! Why do I suspect that his trespass gave
Elrond an excuse to get away from his own troubles for a while?
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Title: To The Abyss · Author: Minuialeth · Times: The Great Years:
Poetry · ID: 403
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-20 14:22:19
This poem has a nice rhythm to it, it almost sounds like a religious
chant evoking something that is buried deep within Gandalf. It works
well to begin a battle between two maiar.
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Title: Those Also Serve Who Stand and Wait · Author: Haleth · Times:
First Age and Prior · ID: 293
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 22:16:04
A pensive look at the roles of women in wartime. Being the keeper of the
hearth is indeed a critical position, but often minimized or overlooked.
Lalwen is sympathetic without being sentimental, and her relationship
with her older brother is particularly well-developed. I liked her very
much by the end of the story, and grieved that she seems locked in a
cage of loneliness that feels of her own making. This is a very good use
of a minor semi-canon character.
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Title: Voices on the Wind · Author: Phyncke · Times: First Age and Prior
· ID: 112
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 22:16:50
A very thought-provoking and moving story. I have always felt that
Fingolfin's solitary ride to challenge Morgoth was a beacon of bravery
and hope - a mere Eruhini against a Vala! And he wounded Morgoth seven
times. The passage describing Fingolfin's strikes against his enemy was
especially stirring (["The first wound was for my father..."] and so on).

The ending was a strong contrast: gentle and peaceful and full of hope.
This could have been a difficult transition, but the author manages it
very well, and I was left with a feeling of satisfaction despite the
sadness of Fingolfin's ending.
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Title: The Gift · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 131
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 22:19:31
I finished this story with tears in my eyes. Dawn tells it with seeming
simplicity, yet powerful familial depths are explored in her usual
intimate style. The characters are distinct individuals, with moving,
believable interactions and motivations. Dawn uses flashbacks
effectively to provide backstory for the sundering of a family and
Tyelkormo's reaction.

The sibling rivalry between Tyelkormo and Curufinwe is explored deftly
as the brothers struggle for their father's approval and a young woman's
love. Dawn lays out a compelling dual perspective of this time, here and
in ["Paper"]. Terentaulë and Tyelperinquar earned my greatest sympathy.
She for being the farmer's daughter, drawn into this famous, talented
and misguided family; he as the innocent impacted by it all.

Tyelperinquar brings the one bit of bittersweet joy into it, with his
child's ability to see laughter in the snowfall, which Tyelkormo is
finally able to share. Curufinwe's ring fulfills yet another role:
intended to win his father's love, used to clear the path to his future
wife's heart, now comforting his son. A bit of foreshadowing there, too,
to the Rings of Power that Tyelperinquar will one day create. A
beautiful, pensive story.
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Title: Raven Hair and Silver Eyes · Author: Ellie · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 174
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 22:20:53
A moving and bittersweet story from Anaire's perspective, one of the
strong "silent women" usually relegated to the background. Her PoV is
clearly and reasonably developed, although I was a bit shocked and very
saddened when she turned her back so coldly on her family after their
mistaken role in the Kinslaying. Her relationship with Nolofinwe was
beautifully elaborated, and his strong character was definitely one that
I could see challenging Morgoth to single combat.

I especially liked this lovely expression of childbearing: ["Four times
he filled me with life and four times I returned it to him in the forms
of three sons and a daughter."]
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Title: Quo Vadis? · Author: Tehta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 86
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-20 22:21:41
Tehta's writing is always filled with a wry wit and humorous phrasing,
and this is no exception. She has developed a marvelous, very funny
Salgent, and manages to give him a sympathetic twist despite his
imminently unlikeable character. The impact of his music on the orcs and
his interaction with the dragon were exceptionally well-portrayed. ["It
seemed rivalries were universal."]

His acceptance to play jester at Morgoth's court was inevitable and
well-deserved on many levels. I couldn't decide at the end if I felt
pity or happiness for him.
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Title: Tending · Author: Elemmire · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey Havens ·
ID: 769
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-20 22:58:47
This story shines. In part the is just because it is excellently
written, but in part because of the wonderful twist it has. Tender,
touching, full of love and care but not coming from the one you are sure
you are reading about as the story begins. A wonderful, wonderful piece!
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Title: Midsummer's Day · Author: MysteriousWays · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 980
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-20 23:02:29
I'm yet to write a drabble and I was totally impressed with this beauty
written by MysteriousWays. It is as warm as the day it describes and it
is so wonderful to see someone giving Frodo a break from his melancoly.
The beauty of the Shire, the comfort of Bag End and the resilance of
hobbits is all here in one hundred short words.
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Title: Today · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 199
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 00:20:21
Theodred/Boromir slash. I kind of skipped a lot, but I did like the last
line.
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Title: In the Woods · Author: Werecat · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 119
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 00:22:40
I like this idea: that Radagast lingered, to keep a bit of magic in the
world, to succor the beasts, and to help the few Elves who remained to
depart. Very nicely done, and I like the voice of the OC narrator.
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Title: In Sequent Toil · Author: IgnobleBard · Genres: Adventure · ID: 941
Reviewer: Jael · 2006-10-21 00:26:45
What intrigued me originally about this story was that it was something
different from all the Fellowship adventures and Legomances out there.
It was a real mystery thriller that seemed to understand the concept
that even in Middle-earth, time does not stand still. The inn at Bree,
now under a different inkeeper and grown shabby. Gimli, older, grown
hard of hearing. These are things one rarely sees addressed.

When I learned that this story was written for a challenge, I could see
the clever way you had taken a set of pedestrian requirements -- a map
of the USA, locked out of a hotel room, a cell phone that doesn't work
-- and translated it to Tolkien's world. Kudos for that!

In the end, I felt for Legolas. All that toil and terror he went
through, and Celeborn is just going to turn around and take the darn map
back to Aman. I enjoyed the story anyway.
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Title: Notes and Observations by Frodo of the Shire · Author: Lurea ·
Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 971
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 00:30:00
This is an intense and painful recounting of the latter days of the
Quest from Frodo's own POV, first person. The angst is palpable, yet
Frodo continues to hope he can lance his wounds in recounting what
happened in his journal. I think the part that profoundly affected me
most was this part:

["How could I continue to deny it? My strength was beginning to ebb and
I was afraid. I was afraid. I pushed away the fear, with a slow breath
returned to my counted sorrows, and another seven steps closer to the end.

One: I thirst.
Two: I cannot breathe.
Three: I am weary.
Four: the whip marks chafe.
Five: my side is cold.
Six: my neck aches.
Seven: the Ring burns."]

And as he counts, to keep going, the Ring begins to even pervert the
numbers...A wonderful piece of work!

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Title: Prison · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 794
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 00:32:36
A brief vignette of Eomer's imprisonment at the hands of Grima; I like
the way he suddenly has hope, when he remembers the three strangers he
met on the plains.
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Title: Until the King Returns · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette ·
ID: 540
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 00:47:27
A very tightly constructed bit of speculation on the motives and
intentions of the first Ruling Steward of Gondor, as he allows the last
of the kings to ride away to certain death. I find it very appropriate
that he begins the rule of the stewards in the same way Denethor ended
it--in the name of expediency. But unlike Denethor, Mardil proves to be
a man of conscience, and he does not try to deceive himself about what
he has done. I like the way canon is woven throughout this small peice.
Excellent job!
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Title: Safe? · Author: Ainu Laire · Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo or
Sam · ID: 271
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 00:52:46
Frodo has an important question for Aragorn: is Lothlorien safe enough
to lay aside his mithril coat. Aragorn's answer is influenced by a very
disturbing and evocative dream...a very nice gap-filler.
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Title: The Princess and the Horse Lord · Author: Oshun · Genres:
Romance: Incomplete · ID: 425
Reviewer: Jael · 2006-10-21 02:11:11
The more I read of this story, the more I like it. It is lively, funny,
touching, and erotic all in one. It is a generous-spirited tale about
well-rounded characters who are likeable and love one another. It is
refreshingly original while remaining true to canon.

I agree, a tipsy Legolas singing After The Ball was to die for! And my
Thranduil muse says thank you for the detail about the hot running water
in his cave. He is becoming very tired of being portrayed as the
stereotypical Sinda rustic.

Excellent story!
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Title: Inheritances · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: The Steward's
Family · ID: 651
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 02:39:19
Aragorn's interior monologue as he greets the infant heir of Denethor.
What a great deal he reads into the actions of an infant! Yet I can see
these thoughts occurring to him.
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Title: Second Son · Author: Nesta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor
· ID: 843
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 02:47:38
Fascinating, that Faramir sees his father and himself in his own
relationship to his second-born. But Faramir is wiser, and less proud,
and able to find compromise, where his own father would have been
unyielding. Young Turin is interesting as well--a budding healer,
perhaps, or a fledgling archeologist, LOL! Very nice!
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Title: The Silent Street · Author: Sophinisba Solis · Races: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 65
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-21 05:58:29
This is a really nice glimpse at the mental torture that Merry must have
felt in the days before the others left for the Black Gate. The language
is exquisite, the emotions are well-drawn, and it all uses some unique
events that I don't think I've ever seen written, certainly in a way I'd
never seen before. There were a few canon bits that made me wonder, like
the way the guard lets the hobbits through without apparently needing
explicit permission from the lord of the city. It's not insurmountable,
though, and certainly not enough to derail this story. Nice job telling
these touching scenes.
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Title: Making Merry · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits · ID: 663
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 11:27:13
Oh, I love this little ficlet, halfway reading it I caught myself
tapping my foot once I read about the dancing and whirling of Pippin and
the elves. This is so outstanding in this ficlet: you can feel and taste
the atmosphere of liberation and joy of the Mirkwood Elves while they
are celebrating it with the two Hobbits. In huge contrast brought as a
conclusion in Merrys thoughts, I am as a reader suddenly remembered of
Bilbos cruel treatment by the same elves in darker times. And yet,
there is a seed of hope in this realisation, when Merry reflects on
[Bilbo and his dwarves] separating past from the future. And as the
circle continues dancing, all dark thoughts and memories of old are
forgotten and like Merry, we are back into the circle of friends.

Besides the rich language and vivid descriptions of thoughts and
movements, this story indeed has a feeling of [Magick]. To me it almost
feels as if Marigold describes the elves to the image of Celtic myth
where the elves live in a complete different realm, where cups magically
are replenished, and it is dangerous to remain. Maybe that was the case
in Bilbos time, but this is the Fourth Age: time for renewal and joy.
This story is beautifully written and evocative from the first word to
the last. Thanks for sharing Marigold!
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Title: Not Fair · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Fixed-Length Ficlets
With Children · ID: 902
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2006-10-21 11:28:57
I have a friend who swears that Imrahil's surname the Fair means that
he's a blond. I go for the gorgeous option myself, and it's always been
one of my favorite footnotes to the Fourth Age that a dark-haired little
replica of Imrahil ends up ruling the blond Rohirrim. But I'd never seen
any one address the issue until now. Eomer is a good father here, wisely
pointing out that any situation has advantages as well as disadvantages.
A sweet drabble!
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Title: Kindly Winter's Gift · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Genres:
Romance: Rohan · ID: 717
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2006-10-21 11:40:30
A nice piece about a young man discovering passion for the first time.
Theodred is such a cipher that you can do almost anything you like with
him, and I like this picture of a young man well aware of his
responsibilities as heir to a ruler, but also fearless in seeking what
he needs for himself in terms of affection. His joining with Staenwine
(in a barn, with horses looking on-how appropriate for Rohirrim!) is
tastefully written, but nonetheless conveys well the fumbling heat of
the moment. And I do like that to both young men, this is not just some
easing of physical need, but also a solemn pledge of love.

Theoden makes a brief appearance as a fond father, pre-Grima, which only
saddens the reader when they think upon his ultimate dissolution. I
would like to see another Theodred story from Thevina, wherein she
addresses Staenwine's and Theodred's response to Theodred's inevitable
marriage, though I know nothing is said of his wife in canon.
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Title: Object Lessons · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 668
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2006-10-21 11:43:44
Faramir seems to be channeling his father here, not missing the chance
to give Boromir a bit of a lecture. He also rather acerbically comments
on his older brother's propensity for showing off. But his support of
Boromir is also very apparent, as is the love between the brothers.
Interestingly enough, Boromir is the silent one in this nice little drabble.
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Title: Kissing is Different · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 280
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 11:51:12
My only complaint regarding this short story is that I want more of
this! First the marvellous insight in Éomers mind finding his reprieve
from the usual female talons clawing at him, taking his opportunity to
see how tanned Lothíriels bosom or offering to help her to learn how to
kiss. How delightfully naughty! I surely would love to see this kind of
Éomer often. But as the story develops, I cannot help to wonder how the
other would react to a sentence or a gesture. Especially when you know
they will be formally introduced later that day. So while I as a reader
cannot stop chuckling at the prospective of what will come next, I am
treated to a magnificent twist at the end which makes me want to re-read
the story again, but then with a different set of eyes. I appreciate the
way how LBJ writes her characters with multiple layers and cleverly
constructs a story in which after you read it again you cannot help but
to laugh harder. What is nicely done too are the descriptions of the
separate court cultures and how much they are different. It leaves me
wondering how Lothíriel will thrive at the Rohirrim court, but something
tells me she will fit right in. The story flows nicely with a natural
pacing: nothing feels forced about it. A wonderful short story LBJ!
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Title: Paradox of the Fourth Age · Author: Alassante · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 106
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-21 12:38:59
Alassante's magnum opus! ;-) I loved the premise of this story when she
first told me about it. I have always enjoyed 'what if's' and this is a
wonderful one. Everything in Tolkien's world is so interconnected and
the final outcome did depend on all the pieces falling into place just
as they did, so that is what makes the premise of this story so
interesting and believable. Alassante has developed it very well with
really powerful emotions and characters. I particularly like the
flashbacks in each chapter because we really get to know the characters
through them. Great story that I hope she keeps working on.
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Title: My Eyes! My Eyes! · Author: Alassante · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 358
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-21 12:40:44
Hehehe! Hilarious look at why Arwen chose a man!
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Title: Peace Comes Dropping Slow · Author: Songspinner · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 224
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 13:24:20
This is such an exquisite short story. At first, I have no idea what
Pippin is up to but then Songspinner gently reveals an aged Pippin
taking care of his great love Diamond. I cannot help but to get goose
bumps while I feel a witness to their love they share and that even at
the end Diamond tells Pippin to travel east once more. Pippin's imagery
of Minas Tirith shows the reader that he has not forgotten his love for
the white city. As a reader you know this is to come, you know Pippin
and Merry will find their peace in Rohan and will leave the Shire
forever, but this little poignant insight in this married life is so
brilliantly captured that it leaves a deep impression on me. The gentle
and slow pacing of this piece is well chosen and it needs no further
elaboration because the language of this prose is incredibly strong.
Strongly in character and a beautiful portrayed moment in their later
lives. Thanks for sharing!
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Title: She Cries Your Name · Author: MysteriousWays · Genres: Romance ·
ID: 710
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-21 13:35:53
This is a tender and eventually very sensual story. A married couple,
very much in love, on a walking party in the Shire. The beauty of the
day and the beauty of the country side merge with how Frodo sees his
Linwe. Frodo slowly is overcome by the gentle forces of nature and joins
Linwe in her dance with the elements until the life and passion of the
world fills them both and they make love - crying out each other's names.
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Title: Of Squirrels and Stolen Pies · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres:
Humor: Children · ID: 305
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 13:36:39
Oh my goodness. What is there not to love about this story! I simply
cannot decide what I like the most. Is it Pippins stunned reaction to
get a pie just out of nowhere and that he forgets everything except for
that shortly before he was observing some squirrels? The dialogue
between Pippin and Sandhill is just to die for! Pippin feels rushed and
starts to ramble: yet he does not lie but manages to keep the intrepid
hobbit lads  who hide in the bushes dealing with their own things which
is how to enjoy a pie if you fell on it or how to keep Merry from
jumping out of the thicket  out of it. Pippin is just adorable and with
a big smile on my face, I read how he describes the [slow-witted] hobbit
lad who shoved it in his hands. Because following his logic: who would
possibly do that? All of this is written in the very enjoyable Merrys
point of view who in the end helps Pippin to escape his predicament
where he ended up in. The story end gives you a very satisfied feeling
and a clear image of a content Pippin walking off with his pie, Mr
Sandhill has to explain to his wife where the pies went and Berilac
hopefully learnt his lesson never to shove a pie into Pippins hands
while on the run. This story is delightfully hobbity with such great
humorous dialogue written by GW.
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Title: Such loveliness in living thing · Author: Tanaqui · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 904
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-21 13:51:55
Tanaqui's drabbles are masterful. Here she deftly captures yet again in
a few words the feelings of a number of characters about Arwen. A model
of the genre.
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Title: Sixteen Singing Eagles · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 678
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-21 13:54:05
I got a chuckle out of this. Nicely portrayed.
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Title: Stewardship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 920
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-21 13:56:34
My impression on reading this is that Gandalf is choosing Faramir,
Legolas and Sam over Aragorn, Frodo and Gimli. I don't think that is
what you meant, however. Clarification?
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Title: A Gift of Tears · Author: vladazhael · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 615
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 14:07:01
What news can one deliver when a loved one has fallen into battle and
the connection of the fëar already showed the grieving what happened?
Nienán is still wrapped in her anger of her brothers falling and takes
it out on Haldir who lost a friend, but accepted it. Nienán on the other
hand feels abandoned and left alone now that her brother is gone and her
state of mind does not realise that his body is utterly destroyed, his
soul will wait for her in the Halls. This is just such a stunning
portrayal written by you Vlad, how you convey the anger about loosing
someone from your life and how even Nienán in the ends breaks when
Haldir denies her to serve in her brothers stead.

Now that the anger is tamed and will subside, healing can start for her
and for Haldir as well. And as for Haldir, I feel for him when Nienán
thinks she can so easily replace one of his friends. His reaction is
quite understandable and I feel relived that even he can bring comfort
in the end. Besides the family tragedy, which is illustrated here, I
also love the tribute you bring in your own words to the Galadhrim of
which plenty perished while defending Galadriel lands. This is so
strongly written and yet so humanly brought so that the reader can
easily identify with the main characters, but also a great fit in
Tolkien canon. An excellent read!
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Title: The Stone's Lament · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 53
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-21 14:12:09
I found the author's note on this one very interesting because I have a
long-dormant nuzgul about another similarly "spiritual" moment from
Gimli, when he is describing the caves of Aglarond. I hadn't noticed it,
but the author's right, the uttering of so much Kudzul combined with his
description of Kheled-zaram really does have an almost mystical quality
to it.

Here Thevina uses this moment to develop a touching moment between the
dwarf and the elf as Gimli begins to see that maybe the two of them
aren't as different as he once thought. The idea that Legolas might hear
the stones' speech while Gimli could not is rightfully insulting to
Gimli, but I think that insult masks something that will form the basis
for a friendship. As much as I would have liked a conversation between
the two of them, I think this scene is more powerfully, and certain more
dwarven, with things left unsaid. All in all a nice look into the
beginning of this relationship.
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Title: A Bad Day Gone Good · Author: MysteriousWays · Genres: Humor: The
Shire · ID: 229
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-21 14:22:46
Poor Nibs, always just a nib of a hobbit. This story has a lot to say
about the importance of names and nick names and how a person can strive
to be the person he or she wants to be.

Nibs Cotton is still a young hobbit and he wants to shine and be praised
for what he knows are his good qualities. He works hard and always tries
to do his very best. But we all have days when such efforts go awry, and
this was one of those days for Nibs. But all ends well when he is able
to help a traveling Dwarf get his wagon's wheel out of a mud hole. Nibs
learns that Dwarves respect hobbits, have their own special underground
flowers, and that he is a special hobbit after all.

A wonderful story about a canon hobbit we don't hear much about. Well done!
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Title: On Frozen shores · Author: ann_arien · Times: First Age and
Prior: Incomplete · ID: 490
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 14:27:45
This is a very unique story set in the alternate universe which I love
since it starts out with such a clear and evocative setting.

[A gust of frozen air and the shuffling of fabric woke Nolofinwë from
his restless sleep. Sore and numb, he moved beneath the blankets that
had barely warmed him, the recollection of the dreadful place they were
in hitting him with the strength of a fist]

This is just such a lovely bit of narrative which leaves the reader
wondering if the first Kinslaying did happen, to me it feels like those
negotiations were successful, otherwise the author would have left more
clues on that. That is what I love about this piece: the author leaves
that up to the reader to decide. If this is the case, Fëanor feels
perfectly in character to me: being tired of negotiations, getting the
ships, getting the children & his sons on board. I mean what a busy night!

[Fëanáro added immediately, anticipating Nolofinwë's outburst before it
came. "But I would not waste any more time discussing matters with your
idle Council members. Nor would I wait and hear the futile debate on who
could go and who could stay."]

Yeps, that is Fëanor: very pragmatical and wanting to move on.

Ann Arien captures Fingolfin's feeling of being left out of it
incredibly well, but the scene at the end, the two brothers who stand
united and strengthen each other is brilliantly delivered. A great short
story which most certainly leaves the reader wanting more!
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Title: Conversational, of Cousins · Author: Vana Tuivana · Genres:
Drama: Poetry · ID: 642
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 14:53:18
This is a very unusual poem and yet very effective in almost Noldorin
style ;) Maedhros wishes to move on and not to be remembered by the loss
of his hand, yet Fingon (the one who actually cut the hand) remembers
the good things about it. I find it very interesting to see the roles
reversed (this compared to the events on the Thangorodrim) and the how
each character gets his own voice in his free verse. The ending feels
abrupt, but so appropriate. Very insightful!
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Title: Don't Panic! · Author: Boz4PM · Times: The Great Years · ID: 908
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-21 14:59:21
I remember when I first read this, I only clicked on it with mild
interest. Wow, did it suck me in and I read it all the way through in
one sitting. My husband thought I had lost my mind because I was
absolutely howling. You did such a good job depicting realistically how
a modern girl would react after 'falling' into Middle Earth. Indeed,
some of the 'realism' (bunny stew and latrines and other such basic
needs problems) are some of the funnies and most clever parts of the
story. I also especially remember Penny telling Elrond and crew what she
knew. Imagine doing that! This story is incredibly entertainly and
cleverly written. Definitely a classic of Lord of the Rings fanfic.
Loved it!
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Title: Okay, NOW Panic! · Author: Boz4PM · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 907
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-21 15:02:17
I was so happy when you started a sequel to your original Penny story. I
really wanted to know what happened to her after the War of the Ring and
to see how she ended up dealing with all the outcomes of that War. You
have continued to do a great job with this. The sequel is a bit more
serious in many places, which makes sense given that these people are
facing the aftermath of a terrible war, but the way you have dealt with
those topics has been really well done. Penny is such a great character.
I am really looking forward to seeing how she ends up.
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Title: We Were Young Once ~ I · Author: CorielConquistadora · Races:
Elves: Featuring Mirkwood Elves · ID: 614
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-21 15:11:07
Given that I am a huge fan of Thranduil, it is no surprise to anyone
that I would love this story. Seeing Thranduil and Oropher rebuild their
own house and their people after the end of the First Age and the War of
Wrath is a great topic and you handled it well. I really enjoyed all
aspects of this story--the personal (Thranduil's relationship with
Lindoriel--I still remember the 'Remove your hand lest I remove it for
you' line), the political (the relations between the Sindar and Noldor),
the familial (I love Oropher's extended house) and the various actions
that move it all along. And your writing style is so rich and powerful
that it really brings everything to life. Great story!
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Title: A Darkened Heart · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 774
Reviewer: MysteriousWays · 2006-10-21 15:18:58
Bravo to Beethoven's 7th and her work "A Darkened Heart".

How perfectly and elequintly she captures this fleeting moment of
deepest inner feeling.

A virbal snapshot. Blink and the moment is gone but for beeing captured
in image or print. The image here is not grainy. It is clear despite shadow.

Beethoven's 7th, "A Darkened Heart" is most certainly one of your finer
works. One to always be proud of.

Read it everyone! You do not want to miss this. Become better aquainted
with Boromir with this compelling work. Anyone who reads this will not
be sorry.
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Title: Lay of Lord and Lady · Author: Vana Tuivana · Genres: Drama:
Poetry · ID: 629
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 15:20:19
This poem displays the differences between dark and light, cold and
warmth, repulsion and passion while Vana tells us the tale of Eol and
Aradhel. But not everything has such huge contrasts, there was love and
loyalty which ties every aspect to each other.

[Fair was the Lord, though dark was his vale,
And the Lady he loved for her light;
And great were his woods, and wondrous his delves,
And he taught her the beauty of night.]

I love how the differences come together in this part. Another part
which stood out as well was:

[Then grief filled the day, and sorrow the night,
And the King his wrath was great;
And proud was the Lord, and silent his son,
And justice called down their fate.]

This is such a key moment in their tale. This poem has a great
characterisation of the main characters. This poem is beautifully crafted!
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Title: Sixteen Singing Eagles · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 678
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 15:40:31
Sadly I feel no connection to the OFC here so I feel that there is
something missing, but I had to chuckle when I read the responses of the
eagles to the question: can eagles sing. Especially this snippy line is
great:

["Do we look like larks to you?" snapped Thelagos, whereupon his
companions fell upon him with wing and beak.]

Just this visual comparison alone was simply great and I could picture
them singing their song to her.
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Title: Planning Ahead · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men · ID: 84
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 15:50:06
This is really a nice take on how Gilraen met Arathorn for the first
time. A halfly drugged Arathorn who is confined to his bed after a bad
fall encounters a clairvoyant Gilraen who is very assured they will be
married one day. With the simple reasoning of a child, Gilraen comes
across as a child, which grows up too fast with her gift and Arathorn
who feels as a rugged handsome ranger to me. This piece of prose has a
great characterisation and good hinting of what is to come. A very
enjoyable read!
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Title: Weaver · Author: Vana Tuivana · Genres: Drama: Poetry · ID: 627
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-21 16:20:42
Wow! There are two great things going on with this poem: the insight in
Arwens motivation and the manner in which this poem is crafted. The
balance of words and pacing feels as if it is woven itself, one and on
the spindle goes while Arwen questions her own troubled heart or is
someone else telling it? These thoughts deliver you directly to the
matter at hand: Arwen is weaving her own fate and that of men in her
banner. The surprise is in the final stanza where Vana reveals who has
been watching Arwen weaving and very poignantly addresses a fathers
grief. This is a gem of a poem.
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Title: The Hours of Waiting · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 909
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 16:39:29
This was beautiful and lyrical! An excellent account of how Faramir and
Eowyn might have fallen in love during those long and anxious days. I
liked the portrayal of her dismay at losing the edge of her anger and
bitterness and grief, and his careful and gentle courting of her, as
though she were the robin he was luring to his side. Very lovely!
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Title: The Burdens of Office · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 865
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-10-21 19:20:23
I never thought of Faramir having a conflict of interest as Prince of
Ithilien and being at the same time Steward of Gondor. I loved the way
he brought his problem to the King for judgement and the King turned it
over to Beregond for consideration. And in the final drabbles the roles
of Aragorn and Faramir change again. It must be hard to be King and
Steward and every other role. But they probably got used to it after a
while ;-).
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Title: The Beauty of Memory · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 652
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-10-21 19:20:52
That was a cute idea of Faramir discovering Boromir again through
Pippin. I love it that Aragorn just knew what Faramir needed.
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Title: Holding the Line · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 581
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-10-21 19:21:21
Interesting that Legolas' motivation for his stunt lies in Aragorn's
stories during the long night watches.
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Title: Tales of Life · Author: Ainu Laire · Times: Multi-Age: Incomplete
· ID: 235
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-21 20:40:54
A very nice set of ficlets which gradually add up to a picture of
Aragorn. The tales range all over the timeline, and some are humorous,
while others are angsty. A good anthology of stories.
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Title: Athelas · Author: Waltraute · Times: The Great Years: Gondor ·
ID: 243
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-10-22 00:53:00
Bergil's search for Athelas to save the lord Faramir lets the
destruction of Minas Tirith come to life. His frantic rush through the
city to the house of the old man gives the author the opportunity to
describe the changes to the city during the siege. I love the
description of the old soldier and his strange, to the boys
uncomprehensible, ways. Bergil was very brave to wrestle the chest out
from under the dead man. But in the end hope prevails expressed in the
words of the future king ["It will serve. The worst is now over."]
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Title: Work Detail · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 789
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-10-22 00:53:14
LOL! This was a lovely invitation. The title of this ficlet didn't give
me any idea where this was going. Work Detail, indeed. But I think
Aragorn will love this assignment.
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Title: A Healer's Tale · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits · ID: 861
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-22 01:55:39
This is a very interesting story. One thing that makes it different is
that it retells a story that Lindalea had posted some time ago, but from
a totally different point of view. It also fleshes out the back story
for one oh her original characters.

Even though I knew the end result, I found myself holding my breath each
time a new crises arose.

A must read for anyone who likes Lindalea and her characters.
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Title: Making Merry · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits · ID: 663
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-22 02:06:56
The imagery in this story is amazing. I could see it, taste it, feel it
and smell it. I could also completely understand Merry's sudden fear as
he stood for a moment outside the circle. Pippin has a spirit very akin
to the elves, but Merry is much more down to earth and could easily be
overlooked by partying elves. For that short moment of being on the
outside looking in, he must have been frightened. Thank goodness he was
swept back up into the revalry.
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Title: The Singer · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits · ID: 979
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-22 03:42:52
This story is great for the Halloween season. It also has one of things
I love most, the Took faery blood. Pearl has written several stories
that deal with this, but this one is one of the spookiest of them all.

Truly a chilling read, but with a nice ending befitting hobbits.
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Title: Tales of Life · Author: Ainu Laire · Times: Multi-Age: Incomplete
· ID: 235
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-10-22 03:49:19
Ambitious set of ficlets covering various aspects and times and moods of
Aragorn's life, all inspired by various prompts. My favorite pieces are
"[Thoughts of Home] where Aragorn thinks on the places he could call
home, the delightfully realist [Anywhere But Here], and [Old Habits Die
Hard], a gentle and credible vignette about the early days of Elessar's
kingship from Faramir's point of view.
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Title: Assume, Confuse, Consume, Amuse · Author: pipkinsweetgrass ·
Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 648
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-22 04:09:59
This is cute. These types of stories are a bit of a guilty pleasure for
me, and this is well-executed. Way to metaphorize our interactions with
muses, very entertaining read.
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Title: Earth's Daughter · Author: Aramel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 170
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-22 13:08:48
This is a very dream like re-telling of how Fíriel decided to decline an
invitation to sail into the West with three elven lords. It is very
atmospheric and it reads gently along. This is a real story that feels
as it should be told while people gather around the fire.
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Title: Inside Out · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor: The Shire ·
ID: 636
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-22 13:17:25
Things to do during a boring afternoon. This short story gives the
reader the feeling that they can predict where it is going. For example,
just like Merry I thought: this will not end well. Pippin will be stuck
in the box. So while you read along, like Merry you prepare for the
worst and with a small twist in the events, just like Merry, the reader
is tricked into believing this. But I cannot help to chuckle and yet to
be amazed how GW writes these two hobbits so incredibly well with the
delightful naughtiness of Pippin. I just hope that this faunt can run
really fast. *grin*
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Title: Kindly Winter's Gift · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Genres:
Romance: Rohan · ID: 717
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-22 13:25:34
This is a very nice, albeit short, insight in a young relationship
between Théodred and his lover. There is no hint of ranks and birthright
between the two and something tells me that with the passing of the
years it will play its role and drift them apart. Thevina does lightly
hint on that, but solely focuses on yet another milestone in Théodred's
life. I do think this story is explicit in some parts and might not be
to everyone's liking, but it reads easily along.
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Title: From the Journal of Frodo Baggins · Author: MysteriousWays ·
Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 61
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-22 13:38:22
Oh MW, what to say about this little vignette of yours? It is simply a
gem to read: not too dark and despairing, in your words you show the
reader the strength which makes Frodo *the* ringbearer. I love the way
how we can follow his musings in his life after the Quest and how he as
a hero is presented will several fine hobbit lasses and their hopeful
mothers. But Frodo has changed now that he got a taste of the world;
this shows so beautifully in your wording in how he describes the world
around him. There is discordance in his soul and where he once felt so
at home there, he knows he cannot go back to what once was. In his
words, you can feel his love for the Shire. It is in him so deeply; the
realisation that he cannot remain hits him and the reader like a punch
in the gut. I cannot help to hear Frodo talking to me when I read this
and yes, this makes his characterisation outstanding and so incredibly
natural.

I love the pacing of this piece; it feels as if we are reading along
with him as he writes in his journal. Nothing feels hurried and neither
do you linger too long at certain parts. When I read the end of the
piece, I am simply amazed how you could cover so much in such a short
piece. And yet, I do not need more of what you, or Frodo for that
matter, already gave us. Very poignant and a wonderful piece. Thanks for
sharing MW!
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Title: Return to Me · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Drama: First Age
Elves · ID: 266
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-22 16:03:48
This story connects three canon events in Tolkiens world in a touching
way. It starts with Finarfins journey to the Halls of Mandos to
retrieve his son and Dawns descriptions of it and the emotions that are
evoked in Finarfins soul are incredibly realistic. We meet Mandos and
we do learn how elves are reincarnated while Mandos repairs the body
which once has been utterly marred. Finarfin is foremost a father in
this piece and you can feel how much he is struggling with the harm done
to his first-born.

Then halfway the piece we are transferred to the cold plains of Araman
where Finarfin pleads his children to return home. But Finrod does not
hearken and the roles of leadership feel reversed and this is
magnificently captured in the following fragment:

[There he stood, letting the vicious wind whip him until he was numb
with the pain of it, whispering, You will return to me, until his lips
grew too cold to move any longer, and then it was only his thoughts,
carried on the icy wind that would wrap his sons ears, leagues to the
north, and make him shiver as though portended of death. You will return
to me.]

While I read this I immediately thought: well Finarfin, you never
expected that it would happen in this manner. Once awake and returned to
life, Father and Son discuss the morality and fire that still burns
within Finrod. In a way, both ill find healing of the hurts with each
other and the first seed starts to grow with this quote:

[Fathers who are willing to forsake their sons in service of a cause
he stopped, considered. Before I was a king, Findaráto, he said at
last, I was your father. And no price is too dear to save you.]

This surely is pressing motivation for Finarfin to go to war on
Beleriand during the War of Wrath. Besides the clever weaving and
connecting of these three main events in Finarfin's life, I simply
marvel at the rich language, which expresses itself in the narrative and
dialogue written by Dawn. I simply feel drawn into the story at instant
and once I finish the story, it gives me lots of topics to think about.
This is a great piece of writing Dawn!
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Title: Alas, for the dying of the trees · Author: Gandalfs apprentice ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 788
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-22 16:11:20
This drabble contains so many layers!
First, there is the gruff dwarf who can yet acknowledge and appreciate
Elven skills. Then, it shows his real troubles that come with age. And
underneath the brief but succinct picture of Legolas staring at the
trees, one can sense that in reality, it's not the trees he is most
concerned about, but his aging companion. And that Gimli senses it, and
uses his grumbling to lighten the mood.
A marvellous accomplishment for just 100 words.
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Title: Last Defence of the City · Author: Branwyn · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 96
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-22 16:12:31
Oh, if only...! This gives a very plausible scenario, skilfully using
canon events and extrapolating from there. Denethor's portrayal is
utterly believable: not twisted by grief, despair and the palantír, it's
easy to imagine him acting in just this way.
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Title: Ship and Shore · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 867
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-22 16:13:27
Some very unique perspectives, and beautifully written. The thoughts and
feelings of the respective narrator was evoked very vividly. I
especially liked the insight into the culture of the Lossoth; and the
very last line of the last drabble.
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Title: Trust · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama · ID: 216
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-22 23:25:09
I have to say up front that I have a hard time accepting the idea that
Denethor physically abused Finduilas. The boys, *maybe*, but I just
dont see a propensity toward that type of loss of control before the
stress of Finduilass death. But I only mention that because this is one
of those rare stories that really and truly makes me forget my qualms
about issues like this. And it is convincing.

The politics are fascinating and realistic (and comprehensible even
without having read the other stories in this series, which is in itself
a skill), but they arent what makes this story such a powerful read. It
takes a tragically real subject matter and tells it in a way that feels
true to real life. For me this touched way too lcose to reality to be a
comfortable read, and I never properly enjoy stuff like this, but it
still deserves attention because it shows the repercussions acts can
have. This is not like so many other stories Ive read where tragedy is
used for cheap angst -- the emotional content is complicated and nuanced
in a way you very rarely see in fanfic, or fiction period.

There is so much to recommend this story. Canon characters seem very
true to what Tolkien wrote while at the same time challenging the
readers preconceptions; OCs are delightfully believable outgrowths of
the world Tolkien created; laudably well-handled and
tastefully-described eroticism. A story that is definitely worth the
effort and deserves to be read by anyone with the slightest interest in
Middle-earth -- just make sure you do it when you have some time to
think over the backstories described.
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Title: The End of All Things · Author: Ariel · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Frodo or Sam · ID: 109
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-22 23:39:21
As I was reading this I was reminded of Sam's plea to Frodo outside of
Shelob's lair, ["Don't go where I can't follow".] This is a lovely
inversion - the younger Sam is the first to die. It truly is the end of
all things, and it's told with such a gentle touch that it almost feels
effortless. Well done, Ariel.
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Title: Don't Panic! · Author: Boz4PM · Times: The Great Years · ID: 908
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-22 23:58:52
This story took me totally by surprise. I'm a hobbit writer and reader,
I don't read MarySues. But the summary on this story just had to be
checked out - a story that had to be what it might *really* be like of a
21st century person went to the Middle Earth of LOTR and the mention
that the story was at SOA by invitation of the site managers.

This story is just plain awesome. Penny arrives in Middle Earth.
Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli show up and . . .
["The man, elf and dwarf exchanged a look. What do you think? asked Gimli.

Legolas shook his head. No doubt about it.

Aragorn nodded. My sentiments exactly. He drew his sword. Die, Oh
Mary- Sue, spawn of Morgoth! ] And then good ol' Strider lops her head off.

Penny awakes from her dream, to find she really *is* in Middle Earth and
from that point on we laugh and cry with Penny (Pen-ii to those she ends
up taken in by) as she tries to come to grips with a dirty, primative
world where she doesn't understand a word spoken by anyone.

And that is what makes this tale so enchanting, it *is* much like I
think circumstances would unfold for a madern person suddenly thrown
into cultures like the ones in LOTR. Even the Elves, though obviously
quite advanced, aren't what we would regard as "modern" and sometimes
the most that can be said is that they are MUCH cleaner than any other
culture. Boz's Elves are wonderful, they are real and humorous, her
Rangers rough and gentlemanly, her hobbits charming and warm.

A marvelous story!!
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Title: Okay, NOW Panic! · Author: Boz4PM · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 907
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-23 00:05:41
This follow-up story is as wonderful as the first installment of
Pen-ii's adventures. Boz deals beautifully with the issue of whether
Pen-ii will live with in the Kindom of Gondor or will she return to
Rivendell to live with the Elves. Or, will she find herself wisked back
to her "own" time as abruptly as she was wisked to Middle Earth?

As this is a WIP, we've yet to find out, but I know I'm very much
enjoying the ride!
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Title: Treasures And Momentos · Author: Marigold · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Pippin or Merry · ID: 220
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-23 00:09:16
This was really touching - it seemed like just the kind of gifts that
Merry and Pippin would leave behind.
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Title: Shattered Twilight · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: First Age
Elves · ID: 247
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-23 00:40:25
Ooh, shades of John Hinkley here - it's spooky how much of a
relationship Maeglin has here. I can definitely see the desperate evil
in him.
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Title: You Watch To Dissociate · Author: Ghettoelleth · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 195
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-23 00:46:39
This drabble is powerful - we as readers tend to forget that for every
consensual romance there's usually an admirer lurking in the shadows.
Here Daeron's perception of Beren is frighteningly on-target.
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Title: The King's Surgeon · Author: SurgicalSteel · Races: Men:
Incomplete · ID: 845
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-10-23 00:49:12
This story is one of the best I've ever read. I don't normally read
"Men" stories, but i just had to give a story entitled "The King's
Surgeon" by SurgicalSteel a try. This story shines.

Serinde is a child of Dol Amroth who is sent to Minas Tirith after her
foot is run over by a cart. She finds the world of the Houses of Healing
fascinating and ends up remainging there to apprentice as a healer. She
takes particularly well to surgery. Serinde becomes one of the finest
surgeons in Minas Tirith, but she is strong willed and assertive, two
things that don't sit well with the Steward and she is eventually
exiled. She heads north to find either Rivendell or the settlements she
has heard of that are inhabited by the Dunedin. She ends up in Bree.

(Hoorah! Hobbits!)

Life in Bree is simple and hard in many ways but "The Butcher of
Ithilien" soon becomes a well respected healer amongst both the Big and
Little Folk of the town.

I will leave my synopsis there so the readers of this review can go and
discover this marvelous story for themselves.

This story is filled with love and laughter, death and sorrow, but it
shines with it's reality. The medical facts are all accurate and
accurately described. There is passion that, while also well described,
is tastefully done. Due to this, several chapters are labled as for
adult readers.

A masterpiece!!
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Title: The Gift of Time · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 812
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-23 00:53:29
Nice glimpse of Arathorn doing an all-too-necessary duty of a captain.
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Title: How the Eorlings Ride · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Humor · ID: 213
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-23 03:13:39
Poor Eothain! He wasn't so bad, really, but he sure got taken advantage
of here. I felt for him -- but that didn't keep me from chuckling from
start to finish. Lily and the blonde and everyone else all wanting
Pippin... how cute.
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Title: Suspicion · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 791
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-23 03:19:20
Oh, I love it! This is such a funny moment; I especially love the phrase
["He's got more metal on him than the blacksmith"], that sounds exactly
like Sam would sound. It's in-character for him to get all protective
like this, but also hilarious to think of Aragorn really being put in
his place by the little gardener from the Shire. I wonder how he
(Aragorn) managed to keep a straight face, because you know as a Ranger
he overheard.
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Title: The Age of Men · Author: Marta · Races: Cross-Cultural: With
Hobbits · ID: 401
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-10-23 04:06:21
Interesting slice of Treebeard's life as he greets the hobbits on their
way home from the great quest. The hobbits have obviously grown and
changed in many ways, yet Treebeard remains mostly the same; and the
contrast heightens the charm of the piece. Still, the hobbits' visit
stirs old longings and a desire for action in the ancient Ent, a sign of
the young halflings' role as catalysts for all kinds of events and peoples.

Treebeard's voice is well-written and credible.
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Title: Until the King Returns · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette ·
ID: 540
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-10-23 04:34:39
An intriguing, if cynical look at Mardil the Steadfast's relationship
with the last King of Gondor, and focusses on the question of how Mardil
allowed Earnur to take his ill-fated last ride.

Earnur is well-written here, as seen through the crucible of Mardil's
thoughts; the portrait emerges of an over-proud and thoughtless King who
catered to his own desires rather than his duty to Gondor.
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Title: Bored · Author: Make It Stop · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 779
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-10-23 04:44:15
Do the MEFAs have a laugh-o-meter for judging comedy pieces? Then
"Bored" would be get my highest rating. What a bizarre, off-the-wall
sense of humor Make-it-Stop has, which she conveys wonderfully in this
piece.

In "Bored," Faramir and Denethor's dinner discussion becomes a situation
comedy that occurs only in the mind of the two participants. It's a
perfect father-son show down, with each person thinking about what he
would like to do to the other person...except that both participants
know what is being thought. For example:

["Faramir visualized chopping down the White Tree, turning it into an
ugly, uncomfortable futon, and selling it to Orcs at a yard sale."]

And Denethor's response:

["Denethor visualized a Fell Beast getting tangled in his sons hair"]

Add to the mix an ennui-ridden guardsman with possibly confused sexual
identity named Weblog (now where could Make-it-Stop have found such a
name?). The result: a great comic diversion from the more serious
business of reviewing stories for the MEFAs.

"Bored" was inspired by Movieverse and by a phrase from Tolkien in the
LOTR appendices. I found it fun to imagine David Wenham and John Noble
as their movie characters, sitting down to dinner and having this spat.
But those who prefer book verse need only imagine their favorite visions
of Faramir and Denethor to enjoy "Bored" immensely.
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Title: At the Rising of the Moon · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 846
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-23 14:59:30
This is a very atmospheric and cute insight in a Yule celebration of the
King's and the Steward family. The author spent a big deal on
researching Yule celebrations and it shines through in this work. Gudrun
is just a wonderful and well fleshed out OC in this work. A great story
Linda!
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Title: Where The Shadows Are · Author: Kenaz · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 776
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-23 16:20:08
Erotic and intense. Very sad. You have left an unresolved conflict:
Elrond and Celebrian. Of course, we know the result. But does he ever
place Celebrian first in his heart? Then he loses her, too. Poor Elrond.
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Title: Bored · Author: Make It Stop · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 779
Reviewer: Katzilla · 2006-10-23 18:51:20
This is wonderful! Thanks so much for a good laugh, I neeeded it today.
I especially loved the "Houses of Exercise!!" So Gondor even had a gym -
but I guess they needed it in order to wear that steel-can armour.
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Title: Beleg and Túrin · Author: Raihon · Genres: Romance · ID: 755
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-23 18:55:08
This is a fine retelling of the story of Beleg and Turin as slash. As
such, it is an excellent melding of Tolkien lore and language with the
slash genre. I felt very badly for Beleg, who falls in love with the
First Age equivalent of the toxic boyfriend. What a hard case! Both
characters come alive.

Raihon is a fine writer. I just wish there was more of her....
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Title: Rivendell 9 to 5 · Author: Claudio · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Incomplete · ID: 562
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-10-23 19:39:34
This is just too funny, I don't even know where to start, from the
mental image of Elrond pulling up his socks to the pool noodles, the
sprained jaw and the cafeteria cards, I'm laughing so hard I'm crying.
All I can think is Elladan must secretly be in charge of my life and I'm
afraid to look outside, because I think there might be a rubber catus on
my truck's antenna. and don't even 'go there' with the salary and taxes.

Thank you again for another addition to your wonderful Elladan and
Elrohir stories.
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Title: Hands of Healing · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance: Rohan ·
ID: 102
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-10-23 19:44:44
This is one of my favorites. I love the view of Aragorn through Eowyn's
eyes and thoughts and through her heart, and especially seeing him
through her as the horses see him.
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Title: Fairy Tales of Middle-Earth · Author: DrummerWench · Genres:
Drama · ID: 261
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-10-23 19:50:11
I haven't read this before, but saw them on the list here and was
intrigued. What a fun idea and you handle it in a wonderful way.

The tales themselves are good, but I especially like how you weave the
traditional tone and style of the fairy tales into something so totally
middle-earthian.
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Title: A Secret Gate · Author: Elanor · Genres: Drama: Incomplete · ID: 56
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:25:38
This is the most amazing fan fiction that I have EVER read. I can
honestly say that of all of the fiction on line that I have had the
pleasure of reading, this one is the most vivid and the most detailed.
The story is so very close in nature to Tolkien that it could easily be
thought of as an extention of his work. The characters are true to their
original personalities and I have enjoyed every word that this author
has written. I look forward to each new chapter. This is Merry and
Pippin in the later years of their lives long after the quest but this
is not a sad or morbid story. Merry is a fine, strong, proud hobbit who
still insists on doing for himself and Pippin still has his remarkable
cheer and bright spirit. Both are surrounded by loving families and are
still as close to one another as brothers. This story is filled with
lovely disciptions that transport the reader in a way that makes you
feel as if you are standing right next to the characters. She has
constructed a wonderful story, none of which I will mention here because
I think everyone should read this one and enjoy it for themselves. I
must mention that there are several original characters in this, one in
particular, that have captured my imagination and which I can completely
see as a part of Tolkien's world. If you don't read anything else that
is posted on line you should still make an effort to read this story.
This is something special and it enriches fanfiction and raises the bar
for everyone. This is the sort of story that I would kill to be able to
write. I am happy to settle in and read each new chapter of this one. My
thanks to the author for writing this and for sharing it with all of us.
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Title: The Stars Will Light Your Way · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races:
Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 705
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:29:20
I adore this and everything that this author writes. She writes Hobbits
so well and she always makes me smile. This is a beautiful story and it
is full of lovely discriptions and lots of love. I often re-read this
story and it never fails to entertain me.
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Title: Reaping · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits: Post-Sauron's
Fall · ID: 169
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:33:29
This one completely surprised me! I am used to lighter subjects from
this author but in this story she shows an amazing talent for tackling
dark subject matter. This is a wonderful story and I found it very
interesting and entertaining! Bravo!
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Title: Lord of the Rings Limericks, Chapters One and Two · Author:
Llinos · Times: The Great Years: Poetry · ID: 759
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:38:10
I loved all of these! The poems are so entertaining and so very amusing!
I love the way this author writes and her poetry is a joy that no one
should miss. Each character represented here is given a special poem all
his or her own and all are wonderfully done! I read these often and they
make me smile every time.
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Title: Ddraigspelt  An Orc Love Poem · Author: Llinos · Genres:
Romance: Poetry · ID: 879
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:41:35
A very fine tribute to a subject that seems to have been over-looked.
This manages to make Orcs look sympthetic and noble in some way. The
poetry is lovely and the subject is well treated. This just has to be
what Orc love poems are supposed to be like! After reading this one, I
can't imagine anything that would have worked better! More brilliant
writing from a fantastic poet!
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Title: Young Master Merry · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: Poetry
· ID: 666
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:43:56
This is simply darling! I enjoyed this very much. I have always loved
this author's fiction and now I am a big fan of her poetry as well.
Young Master Merry makes a lovely addition to her long list of
achievments. Bravo!
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Title: Healing the Healer · Author: SlightlyTookish · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 935
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:46:55
This story has some great interaction between Aragorn and the Hobbits. I
always enjoy it when the big folk or other races are at the mercy of the
actions of the Hobbits and this is absolutely adorable!
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Title: Elemental Spirits · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 693
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:50:52
These are all so lovely and so very in character. This author knows her
hobbits and it shows. I love reading her discriptions and her
characterizations are completely on target in each case. This is very
discriptive and very entertaining writing! It makes you see the
characters and it gives you insight into each of them from a very
talented writer! More, please?
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Title: The Letter · Author: Gryffinjack · Races: Hobbits: Post-Sauron's
Fall · ID: 955
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:54:01
This was so very Pippin! The letter is priceless and I adored every
word. This was delightful!
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Title: Treasures And Momentos · Author: Marigold · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Pippin or Merry · ID: 220
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 03:58:34
I admit it! This one made me cry. This is lovely and it is a very moving
story. I don't want to give away details but I will say that of all of
the stories that I've read on this subject I found this to be one of the
most likely. I could see this happening and the discriptions are
marvelous. When you read it have the tissues handy. You will be very
moved by it.
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Title: The River · Author: Indigo Bunting · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 51
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:04:10
Danger, excitement, adventure, mystery, loyality, friendship, humor,
self-sacrifice, team work, Elf, Hobbit, Dwarf, Wizard, Men, enemies,
friends, the elements, magic both dark and good, and most of all Sam and
Legolas! This has it all and it continues to be a real heart-stopper! I
can't recommend this one enough and it is a must read for anyone who
loves Sam Gamgee.
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Title: In the Mind's Eye · Author: Garnet Took · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 144
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:06:28
I have been enjoying this one since the first chapter. This is full of
insight into Pippin and into the Tooks as a family. The author does a
lovely job with the Hobbits and I look forward to reading more.
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Title: Such an Hour · Author: SlightlyTookish · Times: The Great Years:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 237
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:13:33
I always enjoy it when an author finds a unique way to tell a story and
this is very, very, very clever indeed! I love the way this comes from
Pippin's sword's point of view and I enjoyed the detail that the author
put into the story. But then, I always do enjoy this author's stories.
She never fails to entertain no matter what point of view she choses to
write from! Excellent and inventive story!
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Title: Making Merry · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits · ID: 663
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:17:11
This is a rare moment for Merry in which he is completely joyous without
worry for anyone else and completely in the moment. The author does this
beautifully and this one made me smile and it also has a bitter sweet
quality to it because you know while reading this that moments like this
one have been few and far between for Merry at this point in his life. I
love the characterization of Merry here. This is wonderful writing. I
always enjoy it when this author writes!
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Title: Whispers of the Dragon · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 916
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:19:45
I loved this one. This author puts so much love and friendship into this
story along with her very entertaining writing style and that this is
the sort of story any Hobbit lover would enjoy. This is delightful from
start to finish!
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Title: A Sight to Remember · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 703
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:22:02
I laughed and at one point in this one I wanted to wash my eyes out with
soap. LOL Seriously, this is a very amusing story and I love the way
that each new twist leads to another!
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Title: Love Me Now, Forever · Author: iorhael · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Frodo or Sam · ID: 419
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:24:35
This is a very different look at Bag End and at Frodo. I always enjoy
the way this author manages to come up with new view points. The
discriptions in this are lovely and I enjoyed the point of view. This
was very moving and it left me thinking after I'd read it through. I
have since read it several times and I highly recommend it to anyone who
thinks that there is nothing new in fan fiction. This is a very unique
story.
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Title: Healed · Author: Shirebound · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 117
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:26:29
Here is a beautiful 'what if' or 'if only' that makes you wish that
Tolkien had thought of this idea and included it. Lovely and hopeful!
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Title: Safe and Sound · Author: Anso the Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 664
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:34:41
This author always writes Merry with such insight and such care. In this
story I was very fond of her Gimli as well. This is lovely from start to
finish!
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Title: The Pippin · Author: GamgeeFest · Races: Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 937
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:36:58
Now this is a very amusing poem! I loved the fact that it is a take off
on Poe and I adore how very hobbity the subject is. Great! I wouldn't
mind seeing more poems from this author. Her fiction always entertains
me and now I look forward to her poetry! Entirely too talented for one
person!
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Title: Stones · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 571
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:38:33
This was such a Pippin thing to do! This story is so full of amusing
moments and is also so very sweet and endearing! I love the Pippin-logic
involved in this one! I have this one saved because I read it over again
from time to time.
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Title: Not In Vain · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Races: Hobbits: War of
the Ring · ID: 675
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:40:05
This was wonderful! I always enjoy it when Gandalf and Pippin have a
conversation and this author writes both of them beautifully!
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Title: A Spring Day At Cormallen · Author: Marigold · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Hobbits · ID: 746
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:42:24
This fills in a gap with a moment of joy. I love the discriptions in
this and the full meaning of it all rings so very true. Aragorn isn't
the only one who is surprised! This is a wonderful moment after the
battles are over that lets the Hobbits be Hobbits again! I adore it!
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Title: A Healer's Tale · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits · ID: 861
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:45:40
This story contains one of this author's finest original characters. I
adore her healer, Woodroof and it is lovely to have her story along with
a storyline that features Pippin. Very entertaining!
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Title: In Darkness Burried Deep · Author: GamgeeFest · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 954
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:49:03
This is an exciting adventure filled with some wonderful original
characters and lots of Frodo. I loved this author's discriptions and her
characterization of Frodo as a young lad. I was also very interested in
the stories that involved the original characters. They were so well
written that they seemed like canon characters. This is a very
entertaining story!
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Title: Shelter · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 217
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:51:20
I loved the idea behind this story and I completely enjoyed Aragorn and
Pippin in this one. This was very sweet and filled with lots of comfort
and healing.
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Title: Once Upon a Memory · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 665
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:55:21
After reading this one, I found myself wishing that this author's
original character, Hattie actually had her own series of adventures.
She is a marvelous character and she is such a darling! I love her
personal sense of style and her dialogue. The author makes her come
alive and that is very difficult to do with an original character. It's
just one of the reason that this author is so talented. I always enjoy
her Hobbits and this story is full of lovely hobbit dialogue! You gotta
read this one.
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Title: You Never Know · Author: MysteriousWays · Genres: Humor: The
Shire · ID: 701
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:56:42
This was entirely too funny! I enjoyed every word. Very entertaining!
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Title: The Courtship of Peregrin Took · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres:
Romance · ID: 275
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 04:59:15
I love Diamond in this story. She is truly the perfect match for Pippin
in every way. The author writes a lovely romance here with a few
interesting twists along the way. There is one moment with Pippin that
involves him getting hit on the head by some falling books that has me
laughing even now when I think about it. Great romance, wonderful humor,
and excellent Hobbits!
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Title: The Path · Author: AngieT · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 638
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 05:03:39
The discriptions in this one were wonderful and I loved all of the
little details that the author included in this story. I won't give it
away but this has a very entertaining surprise ending!
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Title: A Message and a Bottle · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Pippin or Merry · ID: 89
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 05:07:57
This is a plan that just begs to be tested and Pippin is just the Hobbit
to give it a try. I adore all of this author's stories and this is one
of my favorites. It is full of hope and I only wish that Tolkien had
allowed something of this sort to occur. It seems to be so right in
every respect. I also adored all of the characterizations in this story.
This has so much hope in it and it is such an imaginative idea! I adored it!
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Title: The Unexpected Guest · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres: Humor: The
Shire · ID: 635
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 05:18:35
i am completley like Miss Goldlocket, who appears in this story, I find
myself grinning just thinking about all of this! This is wonderful and
entirely too funny! I love the part of this story involving a certian
saucer and Pippin and Eglantine is splendid in this one. She almost
manages to steal the story from Pippin but not quite! What can I say
without spoiling it except this is very revealing in an amusing way!
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Title: Merry Yules · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits: Fixed-Length
Ficlet series · ID: 114
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 05:21:42
I adored every one of the Yule nights and the interaction between Merry
and Pippin was wonderfully written. You can see their friendship grow
over the years as they mature. Very entertaining!
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Title: Little Lad Lost · Author: Citrine · Races: Hobbits: Children ·
ID: 895
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 05:23:15
This was adorable and I enjoyed Lobelia in this! How often can you say a
thing like that? Seriously, Lobelia is wonderful in this story and the
author does a great job with her character.
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Title: On Being the Youngest · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural:
With Hobbits · ID: 45
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 05:28:05
I enjoyed the conversation in this story between Pippin and Legolas very
much. I loved seeing their friendship in this and the dialogue is
wonderful. I haven't read too many stories that allow Pippin to interact
with Legolas on his own and this is a welcome surprise. Legolas is so
entertaining in this story and I enjoyed the fact that even at his age
he is still young among elves.
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Title: The Acceptable Sacrifice · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 775
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 05:31:59
A wonderful story! I love this author's writing and I found this story
very insightful and very moving. So much of what Frodo went through on
the quest left its mark on him and in this story the author attempts to
explore exactly what that might have meant for Frodo and for those
closest to him. Aragorn is wonderfully written in this. There are
chapters that bring tears to your eyes and there are moments that will
surprise you as Frodo proves that in spite of all he has endured he
still has some fight and spirit left in him. A great story by an amazing
author!
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Title: Gimli's Tale · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Dwarves · ID: 934
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2006-10-24 05:38:02
I love Gimli in this and I also enjoyed hearing him talk about his love
of stone. Pippin was adorable here as well and I enjoyed this very
entertaining story a great deal.
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Title: Stones · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 571
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-10-24 06:23:58
A gentle story of healing, and the strength of love and memory. Pippin
and Merry are written sensitively, they are a little older but still
joyful, curious hobbits.

I especially liked the last lines, which are beautiful: [ Merry bent
down and selected a small greenish stone, almost a perfect flat oval,
and put it in his pocket. He would never forget this day, but it was
nice to be able to hold a memory in his hand&]
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Title: Of All the Pretty Little Horses · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor:
Gondor · ID: 736
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-10-24 08:36:37
What a fun little story, and a funny misunderstanding. I love the double
talk and how each phrase could be applied to the subject that either of
the men were talking about. I think it's especially funny that Eomer was
talking about the girl and Faramir talking about the mare. Well done!
-----------------------------------
Title: Of Squirrels and Stolen Pies · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres:
Humor: Children · ID: 305
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-10-24 08:42:15
Pippin, of course, is most unlikely not to be in the middle of any
trouble and so when I saw the summary on this one, I just had to read.

I absolutely love how Pippin ends up with the Pie. Great job!
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Title: House of Reeds · Author: The Bookbinder's Daughter · Races: Elves
· ID: 660
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-10-24 08:47:39
This is very nice, understated yet very visual. I especially enjoyed the
voice and the style. I liked this delightfully unusual view of
Glorfindel and his coming back to know Middle-earth again.
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Title: Memorabilia and Other Useful Things · Author: Illwynd · Times:
The Great Years: The Fellowship · ID: 714
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-10-24 08:52:51
What a lovely mix of humor and sadness in the memories attached to each
item. Good for Pippin for collecting those little things and keeping
them, but I imagine his pouch might get a bit heavy before he gets home.
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Title: Gandalf's No Good, Rotten, Really Bad Day · Author: Gandalfs
apprentice · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 146
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-10-24 08:58:04
I remember reading this one before and laughing so hard that by the end
I had nothing left. Poor, poor Gandalf and poor Barliman. Thanks
goodness it didn't really happen that way.
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Title: Black Hour · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years: Gondor · ID: 92
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-24 09:09:59
Normally I am not much for AU stories - and I do think that Faramir's
frame of mind is at least somewhat AU here - but this was a very
well-written piece. Tight and concise prose, very reasonable premises,
and Faramir's character itself (loyal, strong, noble) stays true to
canon. The historical perspective was smoothly worked in, and the author
convinced me that, yes, it *could* have happened this way.
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Title: The Still Point · Author: stultiloquentia · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 87
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-24 09:10:11
The author smoothly takes this story from playful lightheartedness
through dramatic changes within Arwen, into serious and painful
considerations undertaken in the light of a new day. The pacing never
falters, the language is beautiful, and the difficult discussions on the
morning after are handled very well. I liked the glimpses of humanity
that must be behind the perfect, iconic figures of Tolkien's world, and
thought the images used to portray Arwen's sundering from her
immortality were particularly insightful and creative.
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Title: Unmeant Bitterness · Author: Aramel · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 171
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-24 09:10:24
This very nicely gives a kinder twist to the harsh words and actions of
the book. Denethor's interior dialogue is well done and cleanly blended
into the quoted material, and that was a clever take on their parting
words. A good reminder that there are at least two sides to the story!
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Title: The Hours of Waiting · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 909
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-24 09:10:42
Nesta has written a lovely, charming gap-filler that gently flows along,
treating this difficult time with respect but never getting bogged down
with unrelenting angst. I liked how the quotes from the book are
reflectively woven into the narrative. The interactions between Faramir
and Eowyn were marvelous, with in-character dialogue and enlightening
interior monologues throughout.

I thought the way Faramir intensely appreciated the beauty around him
despite the seemingly inevitable end was an excellent method of showing
the wise, gentle side of the warrior; and how this subtly and inexorably
draws Eowyn out of her bitter despair. The caged bird allusions felt
fresh even though I have seen them used many times before, and I
especially liked how the robins were utilized at the end to show the
future to come. The discussion of Dernhelm/Eowyn led well into the final
compromise between the she and Faramir.
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Title: A Length of Haradric Silk · Author: annmarwalk · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 69
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-24 09:11:31
Beautiful and evocative description of the silk - I had such clear
images of the Shire in my mind that I almost missed it as much as Sam
obviously does. Very sweet and charming ending, and Sam's
characterization felt spot-on.
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Title: Earth's Daughter · Author: Aramel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 170
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-24 09:53:30
Gorgeous descriptions of the Elves; the entire scene has a soft, glowing
vision quality to it, and is framed well as a story told by an old
woman. The young girl's reasons for rejecting the Elven proposal put a
well-appreciated positive spin on the Gift of Men (as does Cirdan's
approving comment), as opposed to the rather bitter flavor of the
original poem.
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Title: Legend · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 933
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-24 09:53:51
I like how this story is framed as a reminiscence by an aged Eowyn, as
the wisdom she has gained over the years gives a powerful retrospective
of that day. Barahir gives a charming link to the future even as she
sifts through the past, and I love that she would do it all again to
protect her family - a good life has done nothing to temper her fierce
and courageous nature.
-----------------------------------

Title: You Watch To Dissociate · Author: Ghettoelleth · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 195
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-24 22:04:59
A very disturbing image, Beren, knowing that Daeron watches as he makes
love to Luthien. A good use of imagery in a few words.
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Title: That Immortal Sea · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 265
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-24 22:07:53
Faramir's dreams of Numenor are brought on by the roar of the waterfall
at Henneth Annun--a very powerful image, and an evocative mood.
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Title: Along the Morgai · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great Years:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 849
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-24 22:11:46
This author has a master hand at drabbles--it's a form she has very
nearly perfected. I like seeing Frodo's POV, as he thinks of how very
brave Sam has been, and wonders if anyone will ever think to tell the
Gaffer of their fate. It's so clear that at this point he does not
expect either of them to survive. Yet the memory of Sam as a lad can
still make him smile. Beautiful, just beautiful.
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Title: Maturity · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Fixed-Length Ficlets
With Children · ID: 899
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-24 22:20:39
I love parallel drabbles like this! What a huge difference a few years
make, when it comes to attitude regarding the opposite sex--very
cleverly done!
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Title: Too Many Names · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 866
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-24 22:27:52
A lovely little series of well-crafted vignettes, each exploring the POV
of someone who's known Aragorn by one of his many names. I liked all of
them, but I was tickled by ["Longshanks"] and ["Telcontar"], and was
charmed by ["Stick at Nought"]. Very nicely done!
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Title: Dance Lessons · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Fixed-Length
Ficlet Series · ID: 888
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-24 22:31:50
Poor Aragorn! Secret betrothals have distinct drawbacks, one of which is
that the young ladies will still consider him to be available! We watch
various forms of pursuit--until he is at last able to claim his bride.
Very cleverly done.
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Title: The Fading of a Star · Author: Minuialeth · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 219
Reviewer: Rose · 2006-10-25 01:25:38
This is a lovely drabble. It's the sort of warning which must be given,
but is rarely understood in time to do much good.
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Title: Little Stars · Author: Space Weavil · Races: Elves: Feanorians ·
ID: 107
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-25 09:42:12
Such a very sad and intense recounting of one of the more chilling
episodes in the Silmarillion. It is so very plausible that the
children's nursemaid would have done exactly that--run off with them and
tried to hide them. The implacability of Maedhros and Maglor here is so
chilling, and yet there is hope, as the reader knows the outcome.
-----------------------------------
Title: Nan Elmoth · Author: Robinka · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 249
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-25 09:44:00
A very nicely constructed and sensual sonnet on the romance of Melian
and Thingol.
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Title: History Lessons: The Third Age · Author: Nilmandra · Genres:
Drama · ID: 167
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-25 09:51:14
I followed this with a good deal of interest, as we are allowed to see
the Third Age unfold throught the eyes of Elrond Half-Elven. Alternating
the events at the end of the Age, as the hobbits first arrive in
Rivendell, with tightly constructed and moving flashbacks to the
beginning of the Age, we see Elrond's life with his family unfold.
Although this concerns the wide sweep of events which are taking place
over all of Middle-earth, the author shows us an intensely personal view
of things. We see the vain struggle to save Celebrian from fading, and
watch her depart over the Sundering Sea. And we watch with Elrond as his
sons and daughter deal with their own grief. As the "real-time" events
of the Quest unfold forward towards the end of the Age, Elrond's
memories range backwards towards the beginning of it. It is brilliantly
played out, and we are left with an understanding of the heart of Elrond
that is brreathtakingly beautiful and heart-brreaking. And yet, at the
end, we are also left with hope. A wonderfully done epic!
-----------------------------------
Title: Hands of Healing · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance: Rohan ·
ID: 102
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-25 09:58:32
I am always impressed when someone can take one of the more extraneous
movie-verse moments, and somehow bring the characters more in line with
their canon selves. In this exploration of the stable scene from the
tilm, the author manages to capture the book-verse personalities of
Aragorn and Eowyn. Very well done.
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Title: Oaths Foresworn · Author: Rhapsody · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 315
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-25 10:04:40
The Elves of the Silmarillion are sometimes so alien to those of us who
are more familiar with the more benign Elves of LotR. The dreadfulness
of the the Oath of Feanor and the Kin-slaying are not only tragic, but
repulsive. And yet some authors manage to take that, and show us the
tragedy not only of the slain, but of the slayers, who were driven and
compelled by their father's awful Oath. This glimpse gives us more
insight, and if not sympathy, then empathy for the ones so bound. A very
sad but beautiful story.
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Title: Necessity and Desire · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: The Great Years ·
ID: 173
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-25 10:09:15
A brilliant exploration of some of the more peculiar features of the
Council of Elrond, and of the feast held the preceding night. One by one
the author explores the odd elements: where were the twins? why was
Aragorn not at the feast? why did Boromir arrive just where and when he
did? why was there such a strange seating arrangement? One of the
touches I really loved was Arwen's management of the seating
arrangement--her idea was just the sort of detail that might have
occurred in RL history to a hostess of the Renaissance! A very pleasing
conceit! Both serious and humorous, I was impressed with this story!
-----------------------------------
Title: The Golden Bell of Greenleaf · Author: lwarren · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond: Incomplete · ID: 168
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-25 10:13:43
This is not the only story I've seen using Legolas' horse Arod, and his
inevitable aging as a plot device, but it is very well executed! The
story is intertwined with Legolas' sea-longing, and with his
anticipation of the grief he will someday know on another scale, as one
by one he will lose his mortal friends. The love and concern held for
Legolas by his good friends, by Aragorn, Gimli and Eomer, is also echoed
by the concerns of some interesting OCs--including his new horse, who
has quite a personality. Very nicely done!
-----------------------------------
Title: Pity · Author: Elana · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 152
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 13:56:50
An interesting take on why Frodo may have claimed the Ring at the last.
-----------------------------------
Title: A Letter Home · Author: Frodo Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) ·
Times: The Great Years: Gondor · ID: 978
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 13:57:30
Sam's voice in this is well thought out. If he could have sent a letter
I expect that it would have sounded much as this one.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Summons · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 254
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 13:57:50
An interesting look at the relationship between Aragorn and Boromir.
-----------------------------------
Title: Years After and a Sea Between · Author: Dana · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 39
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 14:00:06
This is a very beautiful story, with a hint of adventure as well. After
several years of retirement in Minas Tirith Pippin decides that he and
Merry should attempt to follow Frodo into the West, wishing to see him
once more. It is a mad idea and so of course Merry goes along with it.
With the help of their friends they build a little boat and sail away.
The good-byes are simple, yet with such sadness behind them, for it will
be the last time these remaining friends from the Fellowship are together.

That Merry and Pippin share a profound love in Dana's universe there is
no doubt. They know each other so well that deep and complex emotions
can be conveyed in but a few words and Dana does this very well. I find
their relationship completely believable even though they loved their
wives as well, in fact I find it very realistic.

Their voyage is fraught with peril, and the descriptions are excellent.
I loved the ending! It was exciting, and it was perfect.

Dana has a lovely style of writing. She never over-writes, but manages
to convey so much so concisely and with beautiful word choices.

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Title: After The Storm · Author: chibi_kaz · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 773
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 14:01:03
An excellent film-verse gapfiller.
-----------------------------------
Title: History Lessons: The Third Age · Author: Nilmandra · Genres:
Drama · ID: 167
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 14:02:16
A very impressive work, giving remarkable insight into the character of
Elrond and those around him.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Price of Power · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great
Years: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 989
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 14:03:14
A well done glimpse of what Saruman once was and what he has become. He
can still hear the trees, but they are no longer important to him unless
they die for his cause.
-----------------------------------
Title: Lost · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 260
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 14:04:51
Such an ironic encounter! While Bill's character doesn't exactly come
off as badly here, I still did get the feeling that he *could* become
what he does, which was very well done for such a short piece. I wonder
what happened later on to make him despise Aragorn so.
-----------------------------------
Title: Following Orders · Author: EdorasLass · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 14:05:21
How sad that people Faramir had known all of his life would have been so
blind! I would very much like to read about their next meeting with the
new Steward.
-----------------------------------
Title: Awake · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 837
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 14:05:49
An excellent film-verse gapfiller!
-----------------------------------
Title: Unmeant Bitterness · Author: Aramel · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 171
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-25 14:06:06
Very entertaining, filled with both humour and seriousness.
-----------------------------------

Title: Passing Regrets · Author: Ariel · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest · ID: 657
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-10-25 15:44:47
The charm of this story, the lovely characterizations, and sweet events
make it almost easy to overlook how perfectly wrought it is. Bilbo's
reluctance to disturb "the flow" of his accidentally established peace
and the sudden regret at an opportunity not wanted until lost are
wonderfullly perceptive, while the characters of Drogo, Primula, and
even Dora are very clearly and realistically drawn.
-----------------------------------
Title: Shoot the Moon · Author: mistycracraft · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 233
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-25 16:41:43
This is a wonderful father and son fic, made all the more special as
Elrond is the father and Estel the son. At no time in this story does
Elrond think of the child as anything other than his own son, which
really made it clear to me the level of dedication that Elrond has to
the boy, not just as the hidden heir to the throne, but as a small
person needing a father.

The lesson on Middle-earth astronomy is very interesting and I really
enjoyed the way that it was taught. Estel asks just the right questions
for a curious and intelligent child his age. It was really wonderful to
hear Elrond speak of the star that is his own father - how odd it must
have been to see that star every night, knowing *who* it was, and yet it
must have been comforting too. And his statement that he did not know if
other wandering stars might be other similar beings gives rise to some
interesting questions that I had not considered before.


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Title: Lord of the Rings Limericks, Chapters One and Two · Author:
Llinos · Times: The Great Years: Poetry · ID: 759
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-25 16:46:54
These limericks (one for each member of the Fellowship) are all just too
funny and clever for words! The story should be in the humor section,
though, where it would offer some sharp competition!
-----------------------------------
Title: A Merry Old Inn · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 881
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-25 16:47:08
Bilbo and his dwarves making a stop at The Prancing Pony at the start of
their adventure is an inspired idea! They almost certainly would have
stayed there, and I had never considered that before. I love it when
fics do that, really give me something to think about.

I enjoyed all of Bilbo's actions here, and the dwarves too. Having Bilbo
come up with the song that Frodo will someday actually sing in that very
place was very clever! The story fit in very much with the tone of The
Hobbit! This is a wonderful gap-filler!
-----------------------------------
Title: Oasis · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 259
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-25 16:50:01
I really enjoyed this glimpse of one of Aragorn's early adventures. The
desolation and heat of the desert were very well described.
-----------------------------------
Title: Birthday Kisses · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 59
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-25 16:54:08
This is a sad and happy story both at once. I actually felt sorry for
Denethor here, and wished for both his sake and Faramir's that he could
show his younger son the affection that he shows Boromir.
-----------------------------------
Title: Lost · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 260
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-25 16:56:43
This is an interesting glimpse of Bill Ferny as a boy. I wonder what
happened later on to make him so derisive of the Ranger that helped him
when he needed it.
-----------------------------------
Title: Butterflies and Caterpillars · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late
Third Age · ID: 258
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-25 17:00:47
I really saw a parallel here between Glorfindel's explanation of how a
butterfly comes to be, and Estel's own journey to become Elessar. A very
sweet story!
-----------------------------------
Title: More Lembas Thoughts · Author: Rabidsamfan · Genres: Non-Fiction
· ID: 851
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-25 17:16:29
Very interesting ruminations here. I'm not sure I accept everything 100%
but the ideas included here are novel and certainly have me thinking. I
believe the author *is* right to say that nothing comes from nothing and
that benefit from magic wil have to be paid for somehow. A very astute
observation!
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Title: Midwinter in Mordor · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 872
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-25 17:20:30
Oooh! Very dark and creepy! I love this. Interesting to see into the
mind of an orc during such a celebration, and the last line is just
perfect. I really liked the way the rest of the drabble led up to it,
and yet it still comes as a bit of a shock. Very nicely done.
-----------------------------------
Title: Claws · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 835
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-25 17:23:33
A dark look at two very different creatures coveting something that is
of no value to either.
-----------------------------------
Title: After The Storm · Author: chibi_kaz · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 773
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-25 18:34:40
Ah, now this was lovely! I don't normally care for movie-verse, but if
PJ had included this story arc in the EE, I would have been thrilled!
What would it matter if it had made it two or three hours longer?
Honestly, the author managed to capture the essence of the book-verse
Faramir and Eowyn and infuse it into the movie-verse versions. I was
impressed with how well she did this, and how well she blended the canon
elements in, while preserving the events as they unfolded in the EE. A
brilliant job of blending! And also an excellent and absorbing read--I
could only wish there had been a few more hobbity moments in it--but
that's just me.
-----------------------------------
Title: Tales of Life · Author: Ainu Laire · Times: Multi-Age: Incomplete
· ID: 235
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-25 23:17:42
These vignettes of Aragorn's life capture his character very well,
generally. I especially liked ["Alone in Death"], ["Soon"],
["Heirlooms"] but, being a tale with the new White Tree *g*, my
favourite was ["Blossom"].
-----------------------------------
Title: For Arda · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: Poetry · ID: 885
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-25 23:22:34
Captures in very moving images the joy of reading and writing about
Middle-earth. I didn't quite see a connection between form and content,
but thought it was a visually interesting experiment.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Smallest Hands · Author: Dreamflower · Times: The Great
Years: Poetry · ID: 884
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-25 23:23:51
The poem is executed flawlessly and structured well: Reminding the
readers first of all the mighty heroes of the past, the deeds of the
Hobbits become even more poignant.

I think the last two verses may be my favourites, especially this:

["and into malice Mercy cast,
and Love and Grace prevailed.
So Power and Pride did tremble then,
And thus the Darkness failed."]

The capitalization works very well to emphasize and give special
resonance to the inner qualities that triumphed when strength of arms
could not.

This has me in tears everytime I re-read it.
-----------------------------------
Title: Moon Friend: Tales of Isildur · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races:
Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 832
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-26 00:39:58
An excellently crafted drabble-set exploring the life of Isildur,
beginning with his theft of the fruit from Nimloth, and ending in
Saruman' scorn for his body, years after his betrayal by the Ring. Very
well done!
-----------------------------------
Title: The Parting Gift · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 948
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-26 00:44:29
I love fics which give explanations for tiny little obscure mentions of
things in canon. In this case we see the origin of the silver harp
Elrond carries. A wonderful bit of speculation, and extrapolation from
canon.
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Title: In This Silence I Am Sinking · Author: Ghettoelleth · Genres:
Drama: General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 222
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-26 00:47:20
Yes, I've always thought the mandate to free Melkor came from beyond the
Valar, for otherwise it would have been purely daft. Yet Manwe would not
necessarily feel obliged to reveal the source of his idea to everyone.
-----------------------------------
Title: Conversational, of Cousins · Author: Vana Tuivana · Genres:
Drama: Poetry · ID: 642
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-26 00:52:23
Very telling. I am less familiar than I should be with the events
surrounding this, but I very much get the gist of it. And the attitude
displayed is *very* Tolkienesque, even if the poetical form and language
is not.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Sea Calls Us Home · Author: laiquendi · Races: Elves: Poetry
· ID: 724
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-26 00:54:28
This lyrical poem makes an excellent counter-point to the song which
inspired it. Very evocative, and technically well done.
-----------------------------------
Title: For the Moon to Lead, and All the Stars to Follow · Author:
annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 200
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-26 01:13:14
What a sweet and delightful little vignette. I love the idea of Boromir
being so kind and thoughtful to the older woman. I don't know who she
is, but I'd like to.
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Title: An Exchange of Views · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 931
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-26 06:04:19
This is a nice view of Faramir doing his job and doing it well!
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Title: Roots and Branches · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 611
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-26 06:17:57
This is a really lovely little ficlet. Faramirs self doubts ring so
true, for I think that anyone who has close family members tainted by
madness would probably worry that such a thing might be in their own
blood. But Sams overheard words convince Faramir that this is not so in
his case, that he need not succumb as did his father and brother.

The metaphor that Sam uses is perfect for the situation, and also
perfect for him to deliver. He is very wise under his simple exterior,
something that Faramir knows from their encounter at Henneth Annun and
so his words are very reassuring.

I liked this very much!

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Title: The End of All Things · Author: Ariel · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Frodo or Sam · ID: 109
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-26 08:37:51
Oh Ariel, this is deeply moving. I placed this fic on my to read list
before it was placed into a category and while I read this piece, again
and again, I am amazed by the little hints you left in the lines, slowly
revealing to the reader who is speaking here and about whom. This surely
enriches a re-read because once you know who it is; you realize that the
characterisations are revealed in actions and words. Tenderly written,
this piece brings you comfort to know that Frodo shortly passed on after
Sam in a peaceful manner.

This line specifically summarizes the brotherly love Sam cherished for
Frodo:
[He has mourned me twice and that is enough for any life.]

Beautiful and spot on!
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Title: Little Brothers · Author: DinaLori · Races: Men · ID: 686
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-26 08:44:51
This is a wonderful ficlet and I enjoyed it very much! The way that
Merry and Pippin are portrayed and the way that Boromir thinks of them
is exactly the way that I see their characters myself; they are as close
as brothers rather than cousins.

I really liked their playful banter as Merry tried to groom his younger
cousin, doubtless something that Pippin could have handled himself, but
Merry likes looking after his Pippin, and Pippin knows that doing so
makes his Merry happy so he submits, though of course with an
appropriate stream of loud complaints about poor treatment.

The memory of his own brother that this interaction sparks in Boromir is
not nearly so light-hearted, but it is about being a caregiver. With
their mother dead and their father so aloof it has been up to Boromir to
shower Faramir with care and love. Faramirs true-dream at such a young
age must have been frightening to the child, faced with the loss of the
only person that truly, deeply showed love for him. I wonder if he was
surprised that it was Boromir that their father sent away, the treasured
heir, and not himself. His fear of his father over his unsanctioned
visits to the puppies speaks much of their relationship. He would
certainly have been frightened at the thought of not having Boromir
there to shield him somewhat from their father.

Boromirs thoughts about his brother being grown and his own man, no
longer needing him as he had in the past was a bit sad, but they are Men
and that is the way things are; their love for each other is certainly
no less. But Merry and Pippin are hobbits, and I see the dynamics of
their relationship changing and evolving over the years, yet still
staying basically the same. So this story, in addition to having
excellent dialogue and characterisations, also paints a very clear
picture of a major difference between the two cultures.

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Title: For the Moon to Lead, and All the Stars to Follow · Author:
annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 200
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-10-26 08:46:12
A sweet, wistful vignette with a poignant intersection of three lives in
a few words. I like it that the old woman, who has vainly loved Denethor
and apparently lost her own sons, is the only woman who moves Boromir
emotionally. His act of tenderness is convincing and moving. Lovely last
line, too!
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Title: A stranger Among us, or, Here and Back Again. · Author: Ottis413
· Times: Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 296
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-26 09:02:13
What a lovely and insightful story. There are many things to be praised
about this story written by OSA's couple Shelly and Ottis, but first of
all the very striking and fitting language that is so typical for a
linguistic professor at Cambridge. At first I thought, this is Tolkien,
but as the story slowly rolls on and I suppressed all associations to Dr
Who, I remembered who Peter Tennant was.

The manner how his thoughts on Elrond are described is just spot on. I
especially love the reason why Elrond decided to step into this world
with all those oh so curious Noldor elves on the island who will need
knowledge about the sciences to keep themselves occupied. After all, it
might take some time before the end of Arda is there.

Once Elrond reveals himself to Sir Tennant, I love the discussion (and
of course foreshadowing of the professor Tennants later life) in this work:

[Life is truly a wheel as some describe it even today. I see a time
approaching once more when the power to destroy all will again be in the
hands of a few men, who may or may not have the wisdom to understand the
consequences of their decisions.]

Or

[Tolkien's is somehow linked to a glorious past, and shines with a light
I thought gone from this world, and your mind is open to the future,
great deeds await you.]

This insight will be of his benefit when he plays his role as double
agent in WWII (and of course later on during other successful
negotiation of importancy). This story has spot on characterisation and
is written in elegant prose fitting for that time period. The last line
of the work is a fitting way to finish the work, when Professor Tennant
says: [I wish he would hurry up!]

This is such a great work!
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Title: One Summer's Day · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men · ID: 765
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-26 09:20:23
This is a terrific story! Éowyn is so well portrayed, a very realistic
depiction of a child that has suffered such terrible losses at such a
young age. The descriptions of her violent outbursts and silent rocking
are so vivid and well written!

The characterisation of Éomer, who steadfastly sticks to her and tries
to be her support, is equally well done. It cant have been easy for
him, just a child himself, to bear such a responsibility, but he does an
admirable job and we can clearly see in this boy what a great King that
the adult Éomer will become. It seemed perfectly plausible to me that
the main thing to get Éowyns attention at last was finally
understanding just a little of what she was doing to her beloved older
brother. I doubt that anyone had pointed that out to her before, instead
simply being relieved that the brother at least had some little control
over his sister. Never mind what that burden was doing to him.

Théodred is a good-hearted elder cousin, and wise too, to see that Éowyn
needed a constructive outlet for her great anger. Obviously she excelled
at her training, and I wish that Théodred had been alive to learn of her
great deeds and to finally see her happy with Faramir. I wonder if
grownup Éowyn ever mused upon just how much her cousin did for her that
day, and through her, for Middle-earth. Its a lovely example of how all
things are connected, how one event can affect things for good or ill
even many years in the future. If Théodred had simply fetched them both
back to the city what might have befallen in later years?

I am normally a reader of just hobbity fics, and yet this story has
really struck a chord with me. I would really like to read more fics
like this by this author!

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Title: The Unbidden Stranger · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 886
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-26 09:32:54
This is a great little scene; Aragorn as Thorongil labouring at the
inglorious mundane task of cleaning tack, being watched with suspicion
by young Théoden and Théodwyn, for I am certain that this must be them.
The author cleverly makes this clear by reference to their mothers own
dark hair, like that of Thorongil, and I like very much that we are able
to know who these children are by this simple reference and not by being
given their names outright.

The line about the children tailing him conjured up all sorts of
wonderful images of little Théoden and his sister skulking around about
the resigned Ranger.

A wonderful drabble!

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Title: Rejection · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 903
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-26 09:35:08
Poor Aragorn! Perhaps in lieu of references he should try having a bath...
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Title: Too Many Names · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 866
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-26 09:46:22
Oh, these are all great, every last one of them! Each one is perfect for
the name it was written for. I really enjoyed the appearances by the
various characters instrumental in bestowing all of those names upon
Aragorn, or making reference to them. I liked them all, but in
particular the ones with Gandalf, Bilbo, and Merry and Faramir. Even in
such small snippits of 100 words the characterisations are just right.
Bilbo doesnt even have any dialogue in his, and yet he was so clearly
Bilbo. And the one with Arwen was terrific  I really enjoyed the gentle
teasing here.

Really well done drabbles!

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Title: Treasures And Momentos · Author: Marigold · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Pippin or Merry · ID: 220
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-26 10:03:22
After reading [Merry Yules], I knew I simply had to read this story too
and I did not come out of it without using tissues or blinking away
tears. I love the manner how Marigold describes King Elessar filling the
crates with the final personal belongings of Merry and Pip and shows us
what is going through Strider's mind. Even though Legolas is not
speaking there, the author writes his grief so touching that his
appearance is simply not needed. The simple touch upon Merry and Pips
Yule tradition is just so fitting, dancing and celebrating life to the
last as I could have imagined doing so. The note to Gimli is just
priceless with the shades of Bilbo himself.

Marigold, this is just a gem of a story, deeply moving and you write
such an evocative setting where I can imagine how Aragorn takes care of
the final things for his friends. I have to say that I am looking
forward to your complete story regarding these two.
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Title: Man of the North · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 684
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-26 10:03:35
This is a marvellous portrayal of Thengel, someone who isnt written
about much in fanfiction. His wisdom and tolerance is clear to see, and
he reminds me very much of his son, the kindly King Théoden. It is easy
to see from this glimpse at Thengel where Théoden learned to be so
fair-spoken. I liked very much that Thengel has learned tolerance for
someone who is different to his own people because of his own years in
Gondor. That Thengel shares the thought that Frodo will later have 
[Yet he does not feel foul.] was very well done.

Excellent drabble Marta!
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Title: The Groomsman · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Dwarves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-26 10:18:56
This is a beautiful drabble in which Elen Kortirion makes us feel both
Gimli's appreciation of craftsmanship and his own skill and care. It
also involves some good subtle misdirection that gives the final line
added intensity and poignancy, and makes us re-evaluate Gimli's
irritation at the start. The language is vivid, and provides wonderful
echoes of the passage in the book. Excellent work!
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Title: The Tracks of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 60
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-26 10:35:14
There is a strong lyrical strain to this ficlet. Raksha has chosen some
powerful language and imagery to encapsulate Legolas's reflections on
the mortality of those he has come to love. I particularly love the line
[hurtle towards the winter of their lives]. A sobering and moving piece.
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Title: Elfwine · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Fixed-Length Ficlet
· ID: 70
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-26 10:45:55
annmarwalk has perfectly captured Eomer's character in this drabble
about his exuberance at the birth of his son. Well done!
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Title: It's the Thought · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men: Fixed-Length
Ficlets With Children · ID: 71
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-26 11:03:16
A sweet drabble about Theodred finding a way to comfort his bereaved
cousins, with a nice character moment for Eowyn.
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Title: Servant of the Tower · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 95
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-26 19:18:29
Branwyn gives us the justification of one of the Tower servants who
prepared the pyre  and draws a vivid picture of a man who is
unapologetic in tone, citing the notion of loyalty, oathbreaking and
service that are central in Tolkien's work. Yet Branwyn equally vividly
shows us, in a masterful last line, the uneasiness that lies behind the
servant's defiance. A perceptive drabble, extremely well executed.
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Title: A Tale of Feanor: A Light in the Darkness · Author: digdigil ·
Races: Elves: Feanorians · ID: 262
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-26 20:58:50
An interesting take on possible psychological reasons for Feanor's behavior.
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Title: The Painting · Author: LuthienTinuviel · Times: Multi-Age:
Incomplete · ID: 771
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-26 21:14:14
This is an interesting view into another culture. The author admits it's
a "Mary Sue", but it's rather a unique one.
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Title: Discretion · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Humor · ID: 286
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-26 23:11:19
This story, which I read as it was posted, gave me many moments of
delight. The inventiveness of the Dwarven--ahem--phrases is splendid,
and had me giggling every time. The first scene, with the description of
Legolas's reaction when first hearing the words in question, is
priceless. Thanks, Bodkin!
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Title: Shattered Twilight · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: First Age
Elves · ID: 247
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-10-27 03:05:46
A very angsty interior monologue by Maeglin. I am not so familiar with
his story as I should be, yet from what I *can* remember, this seems
very appropriate!
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Title: Crickhollow March 1420 · Author: Anso the Hobbit · Races:
Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 194
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-27 13:44:44
The first year after all the events regarding the Ringwar must have been
very hard on all involved. Everyone involved bears the scars and tries
to deal with the day when the event was merely a year ago. In this
story, we follow Merrys slow fall into darkness where he tries to hide
his own pain from others, but as events take an unexpected turn, he
tumbles down in to the dark with a crash. But how can Merry come out of
this and learn to deal with this grim anniversary?

What I like so much about this story is the way in which Anso writes the
minor hobbit characters of Tolkien. Merimac, Merimas, Merrys parents:
all get a chance to shine and she portrays them as fantastic characters
with strong voices. Pippin suddenly realises that it is time to share
the grim results of their adventures with their loved ones, and sounding
so grown up all of a sudden almost feels as a rites of passage.

Anso deals fantastically with the hurt/comfort she is writing here and
does not shy the darkness of the illness that her beloved Merry has to
suffer. The story has a very hobbity feel to it, the filling of corners
and second breakfast slowly meandering into elevenses. This story feels
like a testimony of true friendship and the love of family and
relatives: through thick and thin. I am looking forward to more future
chapters (especially with the line you are leaving us with Anso!!).
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Title: Strength of a River · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 513
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-27 13:54:34
A gentle and reflective story. I like the emphasis given to Finduilas,
especially in the brief epilogue where a twist is given to Faramir's
gaze upon Mithrandir's face.
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Title: Do Not Think Me A Dream · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor
· ID: 40
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-27 13:55:48
Finduilas' depression and sense of oppression from the evil to the east
are well-portrayed and believable as contributing to her slow decline.
The title and her reflections at the end point forward to her death; the
sadness I felt was eased a little, however, knowing how much of her
would go on to live in her sons.
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Title: Consolation · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 47
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-27 13:56:09
A very sweet, lovely story. The author has managed to capture so much of
Boromir's character that manifests during the war.
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Title: The Choices of Spirits · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 927
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-27 14:13:02
This story is a celebration of love, a love that did not pay heed to
races or cultural differences. Dawn pulls us into the world of Caranthir
who so falls for Haleth, the leader of the Haladin. Both feel the
constraint of their cultures and of what they might say of them once
they find out of their love. Caranthir: wanting to settle down, Haleth:
placing her how people first before her own happiness. Until death comes
and she waits, wills her spirit to wait for Caranthir. Caranthir in his
turn struggles not to fall into the claws of madness and grief brought
upon him the day Haleth dies. What I find so very striking in how this
follows the events of the Fëanorians, the separation of their parents
(Nerdanels reasoning lays the base for Caranthir to choose his own lot)
the utter loss of the Nirnaeth or the second kinslaying where he muses
about why they actually felt driven to reclaim the jewel.

[Mad&and vengeful. With nothing to lose. Much of our family gone, lost
to war, only we remained: seven brothers who were unworthy of a
dignified death in battle but must instead die fulfilling our heretics
oath.]

But at the end of all, love remains strongly standing and Caranthir
refuses the call to come to Mandos, just as Haleth did. Bound to the
lands they once walked upon, this is brought to you with a fantastic
written epilogue; they remain united until the end of Arda. This is a
stunning story which kept my eyes glued to the paper as I read along.
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Title: Drabbles for Lord of the Rings · Author: Llinos · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 758
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-27 14:27:13
The drabbles or poems almost feels to me like the LotR but then
condensed. Yet, they all serve their striking purpose on many levels.
One can see them as summaries of a chapter, but there is growth in the
style the author has used. From the gently pacing of the first chapter,
the slow build up in the next two, the third feels like a wild ride,
just as Merry and Pippin could have experienced it. Victory at last,
brought to you by the two heroes!

What I find so amazing is that drabbling alone is a hard task, but so is
writing poetry: to take on the challenge to combine both in this
flawless execution is simply stunning! This is a great work!
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Title: I'm Writing This With My Left Hand · Author: Vana Tuivana ·
Genres: Drama: Poetry · ID: 641
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-27 14:34:50
This poem is very unusual at the very least, but so incredibly well
crafted with a haunting touch and the feeling of modern day graffiti. It
somehow gives me the image that Maedhros slowly wrote this as every day
passed, clinging onto the sanity that still might be left in him but
obviously considering that he would die there. The last stanza is
chilling because it has so much foreshadowing in it for what will pass.
This piece is cleverly crafted, very evocative and feels somehow very
much in character!
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Title: Bilbo's Nursery Rhyme for Merry and Pippin · Author: Llinos ·
Races: Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 882
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-27 14:43:50
Oh Bilbo drafting a rhyme on his own and how very fitting for two little
faunts. This poem brings forth a cosy image where Bilbo sits there with
the two youngsters giving the little Pippin enough to do to feel that he
contributes a lot (which is very important to them). The stanzas in
itself are incredibly funny and comes across as a mixture of mischief
(Bilbo style) and a lesson to learn.

This poem is cute, fuzzy, very hobbity and for all ages  from parent to
a wee!one. I found it very enjoyable and inspiring. Technically this
poem is outstanding in its useful repetitions and the rhyming scheme is
well executed. This is a great work Llinos!
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Title: In the Shadow of Hope · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Men:
Vignette · ID: 715
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-27 14:58:07
Antsy Éowyn paces up and down feeling caged in what she has found her
biggest fear all along. While musing about the purpose of life, her mood
goes up and down while she moves around feeling so utterly restless.
This nice little gapfiller, shortly before one of my favourite moment in
the books gives me a great insight in Éowyns turmoil. She and Faramir
already met, she already realises that they have a lot in common. What I
so love about this piece is the evocative setting and the manner how
Thevina gives us that insight in Éowyns mind before she realises that
she indeed loves Faramir and consents to be his wife. Not out of duty
because as she already realised: her time as shieldmaiden is over.

["Insignificant. Wandering aimlessly and getting nowhere."] I just feel
so happy at the thought that she soon will find purpose here and that
the shadow soon will be gone. Éowyn is written here in strong and
evocative prose, I think this would have fit greatly in the work of the
professor itself. This is a great vignette Thevina, thanks for sharing.
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Title: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship · Author: Elana · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 150
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:34:59
And the friendship - Gandalf and the hobbits? Or Gandalf and his
relationship with the weed? Maybe two beginnings in one!
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Title: The Usurper · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 834
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:37:15
What a nasty piece of work Castamir is! And so much for the nobility of
Numenor - he is as cruel as any follower of Sauron. Seeing the incident
through his eyes gives an interesting perspective, too.
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Title: A Hallowed Place of Both Peoples · Author: Imhiriel · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 944
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:39:40
Friendship - but with caution and little trust. Still, I suppose they
were very different peoples and trust is built of experience rather than
hope.
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Title: We Shall Return · Author: Marta · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 650
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:42:50
Peace never lasts long - old grudges and bitter enmities hold apart
people who should share more important matters. But all power corrupts
as Acton said, and the sons of Castamir will resent losing it.
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Title: A Little Thing · Author: Acacea · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 75
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:46:23
Such a little thing and seemingly so innocent, but all the while looking
for someone corruptible to draw to it. And it found him in the end. Poor
Smeagol.
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Title: Home Again · Author: Súlriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 863
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:49:24
How very cat-like! I am glad the cat lived for her queen - Beruthiel
needed someone on her side, even if it was only her cats.
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Title: Tokens of Sorrow · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 874
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:51:49
Poor Minohtar. He is about at the end of his tether. I don't think those
were tokens he had any wish to see.
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Title: Hunting Orcs · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 723
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:55:03
What a twist on the usual presentation! Mind you, I am still with
Elrond's sons on the proper behaviour when it comes to dealing with orcs
- they really don't seem to be redeemable characters! Most entertaining.
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Title: Dark Appetites · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 833
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 15:57:38
Very dark and cold and evil! Yes, I cannot imagine that Sam was able to
polish her off - and she would watch and wait and take whatever came her
way.
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Title: Midwinter in Mordor · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 872
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 16:00:54
Well - I suppose such pleasures are universal - warmth, food and - er-
congress. But I think the sweetness of the meat is revealing of its
origins - and little though I would want to be a slave in Mordor,
becoming lunch is probably not much of an improvement.
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Title: Seeker of Shadow · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 63
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-27 16:01:21
A smugly Eol watches how Aredhel enters his woods thinking that his
power alone will keep her there forever. But Nan Elmoth magic does not
last forever. How bitter must have it been that she can and will leave
him behind. I wonder though how Eol can tie Aredhel's true nature (she's
not a kinslayer) to his foes: the Fëanorians, but this is a quibble though.
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Title: Claws · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 835
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 16:03:57
I suppose I should feel sorry for the crow - but being greedy for jewels
from a dragon's bed is hardly a sign of any great wisdom. Of course the
dragon is even greedier - but he will get his comeuppance in time.
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Title: Blood Brothers · Author: Elana · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 149
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 16:07:08
It cannot have been easy for his mother to suckle a baby mumak - but
this kind of life bond between them seems very likely. The mumak might
have been difficult to kill, but his rider must have made a battle
target - get rid of him and the mumak would be directionless.
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Title: Shadow and flame · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 876
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-27 16:10:37
I like it that he discovers a true understanding - and that the Balrog
had a role to play in tempering the steel in Iluvatar's children.
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Title: 17 Cunning Corsairs · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 244
Reviewer: Make It Stop · 2006-10-27 16:40:22
Very economical snapshot of the large gulf between Lothiriel's inner and
outer worlds. I love the way she transforms the threat of punishment
into a wild adventure of the imagination - shades of "Where The Wild
Things Are". You go, girl!!!

The descriptions have a nice, crisp alliterativeness ("father's fleet",
"sinuous ships", "brandish a broad knife", "good girl") which harmonizes
well with the Cunning Corsairs of the story title.

Suddenly, I have the urge to run off with pirates.
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Title: Cierre, Min Heorte (Turn, My Heart) · Author: SilverMoonLady ·
Races: Hobbits: Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 108
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:42:35
This is an absolutely stunning drabble series. I especially enjoyed the
friendship so clearly described between the Tuks and the Oldbucks, and
Gandalf's early interest.
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Title: Assume, Confuse, Consume, Amuse · Author: pipkinsweetgrass ·
Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 648
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:43:28
Tucked within a humorous modern day framework, in which Merry, Pippin,
and Boromir attempt to assist the author by plying her with plot bunnies
in exchange for mushrooms and shrimp fried rice, are three, or actually
four, lovely and interconnected stories about the members of the Fellowship.

The first story is a wonderful case of mistaken intent, in which Aragorn
overhears Boromir wheedling Pippin to do something, and gets the whole
thing terribly, terribly wrong. Pippin's justifiable anger over
Aragorn's assumption is wonderfully funny, if a bit impetuous. I love
Pippin's lines here  [I am not so young as to be stupid, and I am not
as innocent as you seem to think, if you think innocent is the same
thing as ignorant! If you are accusing Boromir of what I think you are
accusing him of I shall have to call you out!] The image of Pippin
calling Aragorn out in defence of Boromir is outstanding.

The next story is a pleasant talk while Boromir and Pippin are on watch,
discussing names. I like very much that Peregrin knows the meaning of
his name  [My name means traveler in strange countries. That is what I
meant when I said I used to think it a silly name. I never dreamed it
might foretell my leaving the Shire.] They are joined by the other
hobbits and discussion turns to stories, and then segues into a lovely
tale featuring Thorongil, that mentions a tiny wooden soldier in his
image that Denethor took from little Boromir and destroyed. Little do
any of them know that Thorongil is among them!

The last of the tales is told by Merry and takes place in Lórien. Pippin
and Boromir are both upset, Pippin thinking that he is responsible for
Gandalf's death and Boromir missing the White City. They talk together
and find comfort. The dialogue is wonderful here, lines like  [I am
glad you happened upon me, here, Pippin. I feel better, myself. And I
thank you for sharing my burden with me. You may be small, but you can
bear the weight of the worries of a friend, even a brother, if you dont
mind my naming you thus.]. Aragorn secretly gifting Boromir with a
replacement of his lost wooden soldier was a lovely end to the tale.

A thoroughly entertaining story, or rather stories!

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Title: The Three Towers · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 113
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:43:48
An interesting premise, well described.
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Title: Always a First · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Fixed-Length
Ficlet series · ID: 757
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:44:01
Lovely drabble set about very important first meetings. I especially
liked the first and last.
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Title: Come and Catch Me · Author: storyfish · Races: Hobbits: Merry &
Pippin · ID: 236
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:44:23
Poor Merry! The nightmares are vividly written and the story really
captures Merry's hopelessness and sense of loss.
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Title: Half a Sticky Mile · Author: SlightlyTookish · Genres: Adventure
· ID: 940
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:44:57
This story is a very good explanation of the possible activities of
Merry and Pippin while they were alone at Isengard, including the
dangers that they faced. It had to be a very frightening and lonely
night for them, with the water all about them and the Hurons rustling
around.

I find it very plausible that there were still a few men lurking about,
and we know that they were in danger from the floods. Their escapes from
these dangers are well written and exciting, particularly their escape
from the men. I have such a vivid image in my mind of Pippin rescuing
Merry, holding the fallen man at bay with the two swords! I can just see
Merry's stunned expression at his sudden rescue. Not to mention he must
have been extremely proud of his young cousin.

There were some more worrisome moments as the final flood threatened to
overwhelm them, but once again they persevered and won to safety.

I liked that here, and with the altercation with the men, that Merry was
the quick thinker to get them moving, and then that it was more
impulsive Pippin that took action to effect the actual rescue. A very
perceptive example of their characters.

The care that Merry and Pippin show for each other in this story is well
done. They look after themselves, and manage perfectly well on their
own, which is nice to read.

I enjoyed this story very much.

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Title: All The Moon Could See · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 756
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:45:25
Very vivid descriptions. Dana captures each scene so well. These are
lovely drabbles.
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Title: Shelter · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 217
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:45:41
A nice glimpse of the Fellowship at Cormallen and the attitudes of the
wounded Men towards the heroic hobbits.
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Title: Healing the Healer · Author: SlightlyTookish · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 935
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:45:55
I always enjoy stories that show hobbits really being hobbits and this
one definitely fits into that category. Their interaction with Aragorn
is wonderful here, and I like very much how all of the hobbits
different personalities shine through; Merry with his herbal remedies,
Sam with his nourishing cooking, Pippin explaining some of the first
hand experiences he has had of his own with this type of illness and
what might help Aragorn, and Frodo overseeing everything.

The rest of the Fellowship is also well written, especially their
reactions to the hobbits suddenly becoming healers.

Aragorns reluctance to submit to their helpful ministrations at first
is very believable, as healers are well known to be the worst patients!
But he is suitably impressed and thankful when it turns out that they
really did know what they were doing.

I liked the revelation that Aragorn has in regard to Pippins own
fanon-based bad health when he was younger and his resolve to keep an
eye on him in future, and I also enjoyed that Gandalf clearly knows so
much of the family history of the hobbits.

The humorous bit with Boromir was the perfect ending to this enjoyable tale.

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Title: House and Home · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 637
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:46:39
Merry's plot is wonderfully devious and I am not at all surprised that
he came up with it! Or that it worked! A most enjoyable story.
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Title: defining a circle shape through points · Author: Dana · Races:
Hobbits: Merry & Pippin · ID: 569
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:47:15
It is so clear in this story that Merry and Pippin draw strength and
comfort from each other. Lovely writing!
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Title: In the Service of the King · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: The
Great Years: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 138
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:50:33
This is a very enjoyable story by Grey Wonderer. I liked very much the
relationship between the hobbits and Aragorn, as well of the rest of the
Fellowship. The characterisations were very good as well, not just the
established characters but also the original characters. And, as is
usual with this author, the relationship and dialogue between the
hobbits is spot on. I particularly thought that Merry's inability to see
Pippin as an adult was very well done, as was his realisation later that
he needed to adjust that perception.

I very much liked the impression of Aragorn that Pippin gave the
suspicious citizens, that he would be a fair and great King who would
rule them wisely. It stands to reason that not everyone would welcome
such a change without some concern and I dont think that I have read
this elsewhere, at least not conveyed in such a personal way. A great
majority of fanfiction stories seem to have Aragorn accepted totally by
the people, which is not very realistic. Some people are very resistant
to change, even when that change is likely for the better.

I liked the young boys very much and the way that Pippin fit in with
them. How fitting that the youngest member of the Fellowship should
speak out for the children of Minas Tirith in what is to be Pippins new
second home.

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Title: Appearances Can Be Deceiving · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 760
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:52:13
This story is an entertaining example of how Bilbo and Aragorn may have
met. The elderly hobbit has lost none of his bravery, and I admired his
tenaciousness as he strives to reach Rivendell with his news. It turns
out that it is a good thing that he did so, but for another reason entirely.

A believable beginning to a long friendship!
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Title: To The Abyss · Author: Minuialeth · Times: The Great Years:
Poetry · ID: 403
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-27 16:52:49
Never before have I considered to try and capture a full-fledged action
part from the books in a poem. Minualeth brilliantly succeeds in this.
The poem starts out with a challenge, an invocation of power, the
defender of Manwe challenges the Balrog and how! In this poem we follow
Gandalfs thought while he battles the Balrog, his utter moment of
respite when he knows that he will plunge in the abyss, but knowing that
the others are shaped. In a high, but oh so fitting pace we dance the
battle to the death *with* Gandalf while he receives and hands out to
his foe. The fall feels as if you are truly tumbling down, it gives that
part of the poem a floating feeling. Just as we think we reached the
culmination, Minualeth summarizes his transformation so brilliantly,
with first the moment of calmness and rest:
[When once I was, Gandalf the grey.

White, I emerged, from the fray.]

Just stunning and so fitting for Tolkiens works. Besides the actual
content of this poem, the free verse construction of this poem is simply
outstanding. The pacing is never off, it truly feels as a work that a
bard would recite as inspiration to the troops to show that evil can be
overcome. The narrative is amazing and evocating: you simply feel as if
you are there. The words are carefully chosen and carry much importancy:
it feels very Gandalf like. This is just an awesome piece written by you
Minu, simply wow!
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Title: Such an Hour · Author: SlightlyTookish · Times: The Great Years:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 237
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:54:02
A very interesting perspective, explored wonderfully. The descriptions
are very well done. It is always nice to find a story that is cleverly
written from a rather different point of view, as this one is.
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Title: Hidden on the Mountain · Author: Imhiriel · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 945
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:54:38
An interesting idea, that Gandalf was the one to place the sapling there
against the day the King returned. Another example of his own long
Stewardship of Middle-earth.
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Title: All for the Best · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Merry & Pippin
· ID: 572
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:54:56
I liked the role reversal here, that Pippin has this chance to care for
Merry. Frodo and Pippin's parents were wonderfully understanding of the
situation.
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Title: But the Scent Still Lingers · Author: Imhiriel · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 947
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:55:13
A nice glimpse from the pov of a character that knew Thorongil, and will
come to know Elessar.
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Title: At Crickhollow · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits: Merry &
Pippin · ID: 241
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:55:33
A nice glimpse of Merry and Pippin as they settle into their bachelor life.
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Title: The Falcon and the Star · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: The
Great Years: Gondor · ID: 57
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:55:48
An exceptional story, very well told. Aragorn is depicted so well in this.
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Title: Holding the Line · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 581
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:56:04
It's good to see the thoughts behind Legolas' attack on the Mumak!
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Title: The Short Cut · Author: Garnet Took · Races: Hobbits: Friendship
· ID: 827
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:56:24
Merry can be very stubborn! Good thing he has Pippin along to set him
straight. I really enjoyed this story.
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Title: Athelas · Author: Waltraute · Times: The Great Years: Gondor ·
ID: 243
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:56:52
Excellent descriptions here and a good sense of imperativeness.
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Title: The Silent Street · Author: Sophinisba Solis · Races: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 65
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:57:35
This is a superb story. The characterisations of Merry and Pippin could
not be improved upon here and it is clear that this author knows her
hobbits. Merry's mental anguish was well done as was Pippin's desire to
help and his understandable reluctance to put Merry through something he
might not be able to handle. Excellent and thoroughly enjoyable!
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Title: Once Upon a Memory · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 665
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:58:17
The best part of this story for me was when Hattie mistook the cousins
for brothers. That was a truly touching moment. I'd like to see more of
this well written OC.
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Title: A Yule Visit · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 981
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:58:32
How poignant that this Yule visit has such a sad underlying purpose. The
cousins are wonderfully depicted here.
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Title: A Length of Haradric Silk · Author: annmarwalk · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 69
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 16:58:58
Lovely imagery here; the cloth especially is beautifully described. I
liked that Frodo urged Sam to buy this as Sam deserves some beautiful
reminders of the Quest.
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Title: Elements · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great Years · ID: 667
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:00:20
The first part of this is a superb glimpse of the otherworldliness of
Gandalf and yet also of the close ties he has to Middle-earth. The
language is stunning in its simplicity and richness all at the same
time, not something easy to pull off yet this author has done so.

Best of all is the ending, in which Gandalf uses his great wisdom to
bring comfort to the youngest hobbit. There is no hint that he wishes
that he had not been instrumental in bringing Pippin to this moment of
danger and death and he does not speak to Pippin as if his is a child 
these things would diminish Pippins heroism.

Instead Gandalf speaks to him as an equal who has had his own valiant
part to play. He speaks to him as one deserving to know, who is able to
fully comprehend Gandalfs words and take comfort in them. I very much
liked that acceptance that Gandalf has of Pippins fate, not having any
idea that they might soon be saved.

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Title: An Exaltation of Larks · Author: Ibilover · Times: The Great
Years · ID: 178
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:00:40
A charming gapfiller, very entertaining. A nice look at the Fellowship
getting to know one another.
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Title: Along the Morgai · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great Years:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 849
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:01:07
Frodo's thoughts are wonderfully captured here! I liked that he ended
with a memory of young Sam, years before they realised exactly what
having an adventure truly meant.
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Title: The First Sip · Author: Glassadar · Races: Hobbits: Merry &
Pippin · ID: 985
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:01:21
Merry and Pippin do like their beer! Good job!
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Title: Flotsam · Author: Salsify · Times: The Great Years: Vignette · ID: 85
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:03:23
A grim and chilling vignette. Thoughtful and contemplative Merry will
never forget what he saw in the waters of Isengard and it is sad that he
has to find justification for that horror, for if things had been any
different, what might the outcome have been? A perfect title too, adding
to the grim reality of exactly what flotsam might be considered in war.
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Title: Champions: Out of the Past · Author: LadyDeb1970 · Times:
Multi-Age: Incomplete · ID: 687
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:04:07
Enthusiastically written story, wonderfully imaginative. This author
obviously has a great love for Boromir and it comes across so well in
this tale.
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Title: Lesser Ring · Author: Larner · Genres: Adventure · ID: 184
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:05:06
An epic story, with lush descriptions, excellent original characters and
plenty of folks from the Fellowship. That the author depicts Harad as
being a society based on ancient Egypt is a very interesting idea.

The story is divided into two visits. The first one is set some years
before the Quest and features Aragorn in some of his most interesting
earlier wanderings. The second, taking place after he has become King,
is full of intrigue. It is very interesting to see all of these cultures
come together.

An excellent tale and a nice long read.
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Title: For the love of the Lord of the White Tree · Author: Tanaqui ·
Times: The Great Years: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 870
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:05:52
Nicely done and I have no doubt that it was his love for Aragorn that
kept Legolas anchored to Middle-earth for so long.
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Title: Preparing The Way · Author: Lady Aranel · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 284
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:06:46
This is a beautifully written story about the loss of a good friend.
Very well done. This author always has the power to keep my interest, no
matter the genre.
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Title: The Still Point · Author: stultiloquentia · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 87
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:07:08
An exquisite story, beautifully told. The amount of detail is exactly
right, not too much nor too little. Interesting glimpses into Arwen's
thoughts as well.
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Title: All Save One · Author: LadyDeb1970 · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 691
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:07:22
A lovely last farewell!
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Title: Chance Encounter · Author: Dreamflower · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 187
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:07:36
An enjoyable story, with good characterisations and plot twists.
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Title: A Merry Old Inn · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 881
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:08:46
A lovely story that fills in a gap in The Hobbit. It was wonderful to
see Bilbo's first experience in foreign parts, especially since this
takes place at The Prancing Pony, a place that will be quite important
to his family in the future. Lovely that the song he was inspired to
write while there is the same one that Frodo will later sing during his
own first visit. The dwarves were written very well, but Bilbo is
written exceptionally well!
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Title: At Crickhollow · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Merry & Pippin ·
ID: 896
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:10:23
A lovely story, with spot on characterisations. The story of Hildifons
and Marnoc was probably not the best story that Merry could have told
Pippin the night before setting out!
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Title: To See Justice Done · Author: Lindelea · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 306
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:10:54
Very angsty, as is so much of Lindelea's writing, with some excellent
thoughtful moments as well.
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Title: Four Conversations and A Dream · Author: Forodwaith · Times: The
Great Years: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 90
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:11:09
Arwen, newly mortal, is captured so very well here. A thoughtful and
poignant story.
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Title: What Goes Around Comes Around · Author: Cathleen · Times: The
Great Years: The Fellowship · ID: 726
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:11:50
I always enjoy stories where the Fellowship are bonding and this is
wonderfully depicted in Cathleen's story. I enjoyed the way that Boromir
egged irrepressible Pippin on and the reactions of the other hobbits. An
enjoyable and humorous story within a story.
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Title: Drift · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 203
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:13:29
A very imaginative explanation of how Boromir's funeral boat was found.
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Title: Serious Business (or, Talk About Dreams) · Author: Dana · Races:
Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 661
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:13:51
That these three cousins love each other very much is so clear in this
story, even though Merry is not present. Very thoughtfully written.
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Title: Last Defence of the City · Author: Branwyn · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 96
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:14:18
This AU drabble raises some interesting possibilities; how would the
subsequent events have changed, the events of that day especially. I
liked the image of Pippin holding the ruling rod, showing Denethor's
trust in him.
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Title: Hobbit Lessons · Author: Citrine · Races: Hobbits: Friendship ·
ID: 729
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:14:32
Excellent interaction between the hobbits and the rest of the
Fellowship. I enjoyed the mix of humour and drama.
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Title: Gondor Needs No King · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 207
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:14:48
Very dark drabble! It conveys a lot in just 100 words. I can't imagine
that Denethor will be around to gloat for too much longer!
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Title: The Hours of Waiting · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 909
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-10-27 17:15:01
Lovely descriptions and well done dialogue.
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Title: To Become A Queen · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 157
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-28 00:07:27
This story has a lot to commend it -- brothers at odds with each other
(Erchirion especially was well-drawn), just the right amount of politics
so that it anchors the story but doesn't overwhelm , and most especially
the anxieities Eomer and Lothiriel have about the upcoming wedding. The
pre-journey correspondence with Elfhelm's wife and what Lothiriel needed
to learn from Arwen were all fascinating, and the descriptions of the
clothes and furniture and situations Lothiriel had to endure were
wonderfully exquisite.

My one niggle with this story is the somewhat modern language. It is
nowhere near as bad as it is in some other stories I have read and it is
understandable (to an extent) given Lothiriel's medical training, but at
times it did jar just a little bit. Even with that, though, it was well
wortrh seeing this image of a "professional" woman having to take on the
mantle of noble marriage and rulership.
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Title: The Gift of Gold · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres: Drama:
Remembering · ID: 267
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 07:18:03
I do like this story! Poor Marigold - such a terrible time in her life,
but Lily Cotton showed such sensitivity in making her something to
treasure. The ribbon takes on so much character! And her mother would
have been so proud to see Goldilocks on her wedding day. The ribbon
makes a link between the generations here. While the ability to part
with her treasure suggests that Marigold has at long last been able to
come to terms with her mother's death. Very touching.
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Title: Of Herbs and Stewed Rabbit · Author: Altariel · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 91
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 07:21:49
A fascinating point of view! And I was always very impressed by the
rabbits on the Down - life must seem very dangerous to a bunny at best -
and the presence of orcs and rangers can't improve their prospects.
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Title: Fond Memory · Author: Isil Elensar · Genres: Drama: The Steward's
Family · ID: 331
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 07:26:47
What a pleasant way to remember their mother and mourn her absence.
Boromir makes such a caring big brother - his mother would be proud of
him - and he offers just the right kind of comfort to poor Faramir. And,
somehow, I love seeing Boromir giving in to the romantic, heroic side of
his character and enjoying tales of derring-do!
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Title: The Steward and the Wizard · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 522
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 07:29:27
Does he show himself anxious to hear his son's voice though? Or show any
signs of approving of the child speaking? Some outcomes are self-fulfilling.
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Title: Preparing The Way · Author: Lady Aranel · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 284
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 07:33:25
Poor Arod. There are horses - and then, there are horses. Arod shared a
very urgent time with Legolas. I'm not surprised he is closer to the
animal than to his previous mounts. And he's a symbol of other partings,
too. So I suppose the outcome is - poor Legolas! Obliged to continue
while all around him fades.
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Title: The Story of a Garden, by Frodo Baggins · Author: GamgeeFest ·
Genres: Drama: Pre-Fellowship · ID: 713
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 07:36:34
Very allegorical! One might almost think that Frodo was displaying a
remarkable amount of foresight here. What a delightful story for Sam to
enjoy.
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Title: Red River · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 82
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 08:27:06
Faramir and Aragorn both have such wisdom - and Rakhandsar is a very
worthy young man - but they have to work within the constraints of the
political system and managing that is more than even they can manage. I
love the fact that even Faramir and Aragorn cannot do whatever they want
and impose it on Gondor - it show a complex society that is often
overlooked when the king's decision is enough for the realm to follow
slavishly. But I agree with Faramir. Some things are worth fighting for
- and this is one of them.

I love your writing.
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Title: Last Rites · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Drama · ID: 80
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 08:59:20
There are so many things I love about this story. Imrahil's wisdom and
kindness (and I think your Imrahil is just gorgeous), Pippin's decision
to seek out Andrahar and tell him all that happened - and Andrahar's
pain and grief and resolution.

This must have been such a dreadful time - just waiting for the axe to
fall and with the end of everything only a breath away. The whole
atmosphere of barely-held-off despair is so well done. Elphir writing to
his son - the heightened awareness of minor matters and the appreciation
of what is left of normality - so touching. You are an excellent writer.
Tone, language, emotion, characterisation - you have it all!
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Title: Sixteen Singing Eagles · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 678
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:02:04
That sounds a festival of song well worth avoiding!

And at least one question is ruled off Hethlin's list.
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Title: Tales of Life · Author: Ainu Laire · Times: Multi-Age: Incomplete
· ID: 235
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:07:47
This is a most enjoyable collection of incidents in the life of a
certain ranger chieftain. I think the sixth one is my favourite - it
supports my feeling that Aragorn especially would have felt trapped
indoors after all his years in the field.
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Title: History Becomes Legend · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men:
Steward's Sons Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 737
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:14:02
What a moving tribute to Boromir from the Rohirrim. It's not surprising
that they ended up welcoming Faramir to the family!
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Title: It's the Thought · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men: Fixed-Length
Ficlets With Children · ID: 71
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:15:59
I loved this - Theodred is such a good big cousin and the stuffed pony
is close to my heart. But I can understand why Eowyn envied her brother
the sword.
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Title: Heirlooms · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 72
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:17:43
This is a gem. I love the image of little Elfwine with Theodred's horse
- and Elboron with Boromir's. A bond between the generations and
countries and a link with two much-loved and much-missed members of
their families. A very touching tale. Delightful.


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Title: Aglarond · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Dwarves: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 68
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:19:48
Gimli is such a great character - capable of tremendous strength and the
deepest devotion. I can see him displaying that in every work of his
hands and breath he takes. Lovely.
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Title: For the Moon to Lead, and All the Stars to Follow · Author:
annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 200
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:24:23
The decisions are all in the hands of men - until age and wealth and
position delivers to some women the power of choice.

Mind you, she seems to care for the son more than the father. Perhaps
she was just born out of time. I'm glad she danced with him.
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Title: Scattered Leaves · Author: Aratlithiel · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 110
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:28:24
Very poetic - and full of symbolism. Poor Frodo. He knows he will not be
able to endure - but the resemblance between him and the leaves is not
absolute. He is still the hobbit who was able to endure the storm until
the last - and he is a survivor. Even if he will have to sail.
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Title: Shadows of a Nameless Fear · Author: Budgielover · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 640
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:31:53
Such an exciting story! With one disaster leading inevitably to another.
I cannot wait to discover more - and hope that rescue manages to reach
Pippin, one way or another, before too much more time passes.
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Title: Consolation · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 47
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:38:04
This is so very touching. Poor Boromir, still suffering himself, is
doing his utmost to protect his little brother and provide him with
comfort. You would think that the adults would be willing to ignore
Faramir's visits to his brother for a bit longer - but Nanny has a
point. I am sure Denethor would be less understanding if he heard of
what was happening. Boromir's solution is brilliant. Particularly as
Boromir has withheld Clover until now. And his tact in accepting
Faramir's reciprocal offer shows that he could have a future in
diplomacy after all!

I just love these tales. Boromir, Faramir, Nanny and Clover. What could
be better?
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Title: Quality Time · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Drama: The Steward's
Family · ID: 205
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:43:07
Denethor is a good father - a bit remote and more than a bit scary - but
a good father of his young sons. And I reckon that Nanny's tendency to
say a little more than she intends probably recognises that, while
Denethor has the sense to realise that his sons could not be in better
hands. Gorgeous ending, just watching Denethor engaged in
Faramir-worship. Scary to reflect on what life brings to us all.
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Title: Moon Friend: Tales of Isildur · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races:
Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 832
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 09:55:02
Poor Isildur - remembered only for his foolhardiness in retaining the
ring, when there is so much more to him. But history is like that!

The later episodes are very haunting.
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Title: In the Woods · Author: Werecat · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 119
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 10:18:23
Worlds touching - and the eyes of a child. Very haunting story and
delightfully eerie. I love the way she recounts the story to her
grandchildren - the knowledge of what could be will not die, but become
legend.
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Title: Of Stone and Fire · Author: Werecat · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 124
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 10:20:41
Feanor was his own worst enemy - but why should Gimli care? His strength
and modesty earned him what Feanor's sky-rocket arrogance could not touch.
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Title: And all in evil ended be · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 122
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 10:23:14
Do you know - there is a horrific ring of truth in what you say here.
Where dragons cannot conquer, where Dark Lords fall - there is still the
cockroach. The creature that can survive nuclear winter. Morgoth might
succeed yet.
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Title: Incubus · Author: Werecat · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Incomplete · ID: 127
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 10:57:26
Not all that should not be stirred will have been scoured out of the
depths - and it is always foolishly reckless to poke what you do not
understand! I, too, doubt that Kili will be all right - but I'm sure the
cat will do his best to counter the dark.
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Title: Last Goodbyes Series · Author: Perelleth · Genres: Drama:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Series · ID: 814
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 11:17:53
I love the two that recount Elros's farewell to the world. Both because
he knew he had chosen right and regretted nothing - and because poor
Earendil has hope that they will meet again when the time is right for
them. And I think my other favourite is Fingolfin realising that - no
matter what he does - he will never be able to compete successfully with
Feanor for his father's love. (Which makes Finwe as responsible for
Feanor's failings as Feanor himself, if you ask me.) A delightful
series. Do you have plans to add to it at all?
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Title: House with the Cedar Shingles: Ramson Spring · Author: Cuthalion
· Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor · ID: 987
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 11:41:18
A most enjoyable story - and, much as I loved the very Sam-like Sam,
together with Rose and Elanor, and delightfuly as Elboron was - the
healer of Ithilien is the real star of the story. Noerwen and her love
for her husband - and his for her - and their delightful daughter are
very appealing.
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Title: A Lesser and Alien Race · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 683
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 11:42:58
H'mm. I'd like to see that Aldamir learn a painful lesson or two.
Arrogant little snot.
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Title: The Burdens of Office · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 865
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 11:47:06
And Faramir would be honest enough to admit to the clash of interests -
and take them to Aragorn to decide. I love the debate - and the final
decision. A wise and honourable trio.
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Title: The Dancing Master · Author: Flick · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 323
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:01:47
Faramir must have loved that story - big brother Boromir shows himself
in all his kindest, most protective and loving glory. And Eowyn is left
with an impression of him that will only enhance her relationship with
Faramir. And it is most entertaining - and endearing - to picture the
Captain-General of Gondor in his self-appointed role of dancing master
to two reluctant and skittish adolescents. It's no wonder he was such a
good leader! I love this story.

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Title: An Exchange of Views · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 931
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:10:50
Good for Aragorn - Faramir is doing his best to smooth matters and
deserves to get the credit for his flexibility. As well as for knowing
where not to bend!
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Title: Music Lessons · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 55
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:15:27
And that, Denethor son of Ecthelion, is how you win the devotion of a
young lad without even trying. I love Faramir here - and concur with
Mithrandir's assessment of his character. Even to the loyalty that
credits Boromir with musical skill!
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Title: A Night in the Woods · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 511
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:23:18
Such a lovely tale of two brothers - who love and trust one another
enough to say whatever they want and jump from one topic of conversation
to another. I think one of my favourite lines has to do with the
relative charms of elves and ladies of the night. Although the idea of
Boromir being paraded like a horse at the county fair is rather
delightful - although it is probably more the fillies who are being
displayed for his pleasure. And Faramir - never was a truer word spoken
- one day one of the Firstborn will indeed be Queen of Gondor.

Beautifully written and characterised.
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Title: Strength of a River · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 513
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:31:57
Oh yes - Faramir has the strength of a river - pliant but relentless and
powerful in spate. Quiet, too, and patient, but never giving in.

Finduilas's input is sad - she seems very fatalistic. But then I suppose
she is close to her own end. I hope she finds what she seeks as she flies.

I love the tone of this - it is very effective. Good stuff.


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Title: The Cloak · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 177
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:35:22
A most enjoyable story. I do like hearing about Melleth and her effect
on Boromir's life - she is a most remarkable character. I look forward
to finding out more about her!
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Title: Until the King Returns · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette ·
ID: 540
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-28 12:47:48
This story portrays Mardil's thoughts of Eärnur's final challenge when
he rode to meet the Witch King in a kind of analogy comparing Brutus'
thoughts as he takes a lead in the murder of Julius Caesar. An
intriguing analogy, which works almost, if it were not that Eänur's
personality and political greatness cannot be compared to that of Julius
Caesar who was a military mastermind and an excellent strategist, but
hot-headed? No.

What remains standing is Mardil's internal struggle who if he knew
Brutus would ever exist, could sit down next to and find a soul mate in
this decision both had to made for the good of an empire/kingdom. This
tale makes it a great read although I have the feeling hes keeping us
at bay as if we cannot touch the true motivations of Mardil and his
decisions. Marta writes about his political motives and maybe he is used
to keep people around him at bay like that. At a royal court this could
make a huge difference after all. Most definitely foreshadowing of
Denethor & his sons here. The only personal note we do get to see is the
mentioning of his sons, which makes it for a reader a bit frustrating to
connect with the main character. Why is he still haunted by the heritage
of Numenor for example? I would love to see a further expansion on this
to get to know the real Mardil. But who knows!
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Title: Unfolded · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Fixed-Length Ficlets
With Children · ID: 906
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:50:49
Oh, lovely. Bergil is a very perceptive youth. I love the idea of
Faramir unfurling and sprouting like the White Tree under the King's care.
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Title: Maturity · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Fixed-Length Ficlets
With Children · ID: 899
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:54:39
So charming! And I am glad to see that Boromir has developed an
understanding of the adult skill of delayed gratification - and that
Faramir has developed an appreciation of willing females. (Poor Boromir
- it can't have been easy to be hunted across the dance floors of Gondor!)
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Title: The Steward's Dream · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Fixed-Length
Ficlets With Children · ID: 647
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 12:58:19
Yes. The thing about attempting to return something a thousand year
defunct is that it must displace what is here and now. The romance of it
is great - the actuality ... probably not. It's a good thing it turned
out the way it did; King and Steward together. But I can understand
Boromir's doubts.
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Title: Keeping an eye on the enemy · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men:
Fixed-Length Ficlets With Children · ID: 871
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 13:06:17
Such a sweet tale! I can just see little Faramir hiding behind those
flowers to keep an eye on Mithrandir. I'll bet he was most indignant
that big brother had crept up on him! While Denethor will have wished
both of them miles away!
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Title: Lobelia's List · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 201
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 13:22:35
Mean-spirited besom! Shame she didn't last long enough to see Sam as the
Master of Bag End. How she would have hated that!
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Title: Last Defence of the City · Author: Branwyn · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 96
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-28 13:22:42
A well-executed AU story, that cleverly weaves moments and phrases from
the book to create a powerful alternative that almost makes me wish
Tolkien had chosen this route! Nicely done.
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Title: The Tenth Walker · Author: Lindelea · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 198
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-28 14:01:28
I am not doing well on reviewing this - I think this is my fourth
attempt. I am enjoying Bill's perspective on the members of this hobbit
walking party - especially his descriptions of the youngest. Pippin
comes over so well in his evocative language! And I like the
appreciation of Sam - Bill can certainly see the strength within that
rather modest member of the group.
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Title: A Bath-time Song · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 133
Reviewer: Aranel Took · 2006-10-28 17:11:53
This is a very fun story. It really captures the voices of the
hobbits--lighthearted and casual--and it sounds like how hobbits would
talk to each other. Bilbo's encouragement of Pippin having fun in the
bath seems very in character for him -- I imagine Bilbo was very popular
with the hobbit children! The worry about Pippin singing about beer to
his mother gave me a laugh. Little Pippin is sweet and the 'bubble
potion' is a nice detail. This is a very cute story about how Pippin
learned Bilbo's bath song.
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Title: Blood Brothers · Author: Elana · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 149
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-28 20:12:49
A wonderful drabble exploring the relationship between one of the
Haradrim and his mumak. Elana cleverly shows us the honour, value and
nobility in the culture of Harad; I'm strongly reminded of Sam's
thoughts about whether the Swerting who died in the Rangers' ambush in
Ithilien was truly evil. The use of language and sentence structure is
poetic and rich. Excellent writing!
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Title: Pearl of Great Price · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 804
Reviewer: Aranel Took · 2006-10-28 20:38:52
This is a wonderful story. I read it all in one sitting--the story kept
pulling me along. The characters are very well developed, with very
distinct personalities. They are very realistic and feel like real
people. The dialogue is very good--I can 'hear' it as something that
people would actually say. The details of life in the Shire are
excellent. The secondary story of Rosemary blends nicely into Pearl's
story. I love this peek at Pippin's family before his father became
Thain. A nice backstory to explain the hints that Tolkien gave of the
circumstances of Lalia's death and how Pearl fits into it.
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Title: Bilbo's Nursery Rhyme for Merry and Pippin · Author: Llinos ·
Races: Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 882
Reviewer: Aranel Took · 2006-10-28 20:49:59
The rhyme is adorable and sounds just like something Bilbo would make up
for little hobbits. I can clearly hear little Pippin shouting out the
words. Very cute!
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Title: Stones · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 571
Reviewer: Aranel Took · 2006-10-28 21:11:57
This is a fun story and very sweet, too. Picking up stones as memories
seems a very hobbity thing to do. I love the description of Boromir and
the trout. Hehe. I can just imagine the hobbits laughing over that!
Merry picking up the stone at the end was a nice ending.
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Title: Safe? · Author: Ainu Laire · Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo or
Sam · ID: 271
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-28 21:37:47
This was a chilling read. First, we follow Frodo's already slippery mind
when he wonders where he is truly safe. With grace, the story continues
into Aragorn's haunting nightmare, which leads to the sage advise at the
end of it. Besides that this is an excellent gap filler, this short
story has incredibly intense angst. Frodos almost paranoid state of
mind while he is worried about who will take the ring from him, but the
nightmare of Aragorn that was just scary. And yes, his doubts of failing
will follow him still: magnificently done. Just as Aragorn was relieved
that the nightmare ended, I felt the same pressing feeling slipping away
too. And this is just superb writing. The narrative is incredibly vivid
and evocative, with efficient word use the author shows you Lothlorien,
and the characters feel spot on. Specifically I love the different
perceptions of the Elven realms by both characters. The story flows and
the style is very engaging: it simply gains your attention immediately
and the end is well timed with a very fitting conclusion. This story is
a great read!
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Title: The Importance of Being a Hobbit · Author: Lamiel · Races:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 961
Reviewer: Aranel Took · 2006-10-28 21:44:20
A very enjoyable story. The characters are well written and the dialogue
is very good. Poor Merry, worrying about being a warrior. I liked how
Legolas explained the importance of the hobbits on the Quest to
him--that they provide a reminder of hope for the others. Legolas and
Gimli's insults--and Merry keeping score--was a nice detail.
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Title: The Standard-Bearer · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Men:
Vignette · ID: 716
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-28 21:47:01
Ah Halbarad& what a great vignette Thevina. I love the explorations of
Halbarads mind and I think you have captured him very well here.
Aragorn is summoning Halbarad and he simply does not question his
leader. This is a well-written gap filler, which explores loyalty and
friendship; I somehow feel that Aragorn will feel strengthened with his
captain next to him. I love your almost poetical prose in this piece
that makes this a pleasant and graceful read. I am very curious though
what exactly is drawn on the map he holds and I do feel a bit sad that
his son will be an orphan when the war is over. But I do think Aragorn
will take care of this boy and will undoubtly tell him that his father
was a pillar of strength to him during difficult times. This is a great
characterisation of Halbarad, which gives us also a peek into the life
of a ranger. A gem of a vignette Thevina, I enjoyed it immensely.
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Title: Ships Passing · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 302
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-28 21:54:54
Faramir holding a vigil at Halbarad's bier? I at first wondered... did
that happen? And yes, in this vignette I read how this would serve as an
excellent gap filler while the armies ride for the Black Gate, leaving
Faramir behind to heal which he, in a way also finds here. What I like
about this piece specifically is how Faramir deals with the information
he gathered about the leader of rangers, he wonders and ponders about
the differences and similarities. I have to say it really works nice in
this vignette to read how Halbarad lived his life and earned the loyalty
of his men and leader. The wee bit of insight in Faramirs life makes
you only wish that with the King back in Gondor, much happiness will
await him. This is a great character piece Marta: I enjoyed it a lot!
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Title: Shin to Toe to Thigh to Mind · Author: Talasi · Genres: Romance ·
ID: 369
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-28 22:00:52
Oh my goodness. This is a short story for ever Haldir fangirl out there
to read. Besides that this appeals to me, being a Haldir-fan, I love the
way this is written. Elegantly, with smooth descriptions of the
mentioned elf: this piece simply emenates the love this elf lady feels
for her brave Marchwarden.
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Title: To Become A Queen · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 157
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-10-28 22:01:15
Quite an entertaining installment in the writer's series of Eomer &
Lothiriel romance tales. The customs and physical locations and people
of the Mark are well-described, names are chosen with care, and
Lothiriel's coming is written nicely, the reader seeing with her eyes
how it is to be a competent young woman embarking on a new phase of life
that is tiring, confusing, and very exciting.


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Title: Flotsam · Author: Salsify · Times: The Great Years: Vignette · ID: 85
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-10-28 22:34:30
A taut and tragic comment on the cruelty, however necessary, of war.
There are always innocent victims, somewhere. The hobbits wouldn't be
hobbits if they didn't notice the least of the casualties and all that
the death of so small and so potentially dangerous a person implied.

Eloquently, but not sentimentally, written.
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Title: The Circle · Author: Karenator · Races: Men · ID: 778
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-28 22:38:50
This is a really cleverly-conceived story. I like the way you kept me
guessing at just what the circle that the title alluded to was. Is it
the endless march of time as Halbarad watches his own mature, the
contrast that the rangers experience between the times they camp where
Hurin first sees his "ghosts", or the clearing itself? This is a story
that really makes you think even after it's done, besides the
interesting glimpse of life among the Northern Rangers.
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Title: Rejection · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 903
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-28 22:43:37
Ouch. I can really relate to this, having been on the search for those
elusive entry-level jobs all too recently. Those non-answers that you
get as rejection can really sting. It's an area that I never expected to
see in Middle-earth, but seeing Aragorn going through the same thing
certainly made me feel for him. As another reviewer said, royal pedigree
only helps if you can broadcast it. Poor bloke!
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Title: Hope Eternal · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn ·
ID: 930
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-28 23:02:39
This reminded me of nothing so much as the trolls Hagrid describes in
"Order of the Phoenix". It's a hilariously described image of this
enclave of orcs, but at the same time very sad that they could not be
"saved". Yet I still find it more satisfying than stories that overlook
the banality of Mordor's inhabitants. Very nice use of the challenge prompt.
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Title: Not Fair · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Fixed-Length Ficlets
With Children · ID: 902
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-28 23:06:05
I have a special connection to this ficlet because I helped the author
brainstorm the concept a little. Not that I am taking credit for the
finished product -- I am distanced enough that I can still highly enjoy
it as a reader. It's a brilliant little father-son moment, and I can
just see Eomer's wicked smile when he tells that last line to his son.
Neat little exposition of the trials children who look "different' from
their peers (like the Rohirric son of Lothiriel) might have faced.
-----------------------------------

Title: A Letter Unwritten · Author: Bill The Pony · Races: Hobbits: War
of the Ring · ID: 855
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 00:01:12
This one definitely gave me the sniffles. It makes sense that Sam would
be that deferential in romantic matters like he is in other things, but
it still seems really sad.
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Title: Iridescence · Author: Larner · Times: The Great Years: Vignette ·
ID: 121
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-10-29 00:03:57
What a whimsical, original idea for a story! This encounter between
hobbits and peafowl at the home of a wealthy Minas Tirith merchant is
well described, with Larner's usual attention to detail. The peacock's
instant bonding with Frodo is quite touching, as is the youngest
daughter's wish that Frodo could remain ["forever and ever, here in the
garden with the peacocks about you, here where you could have beauty
always there for you."]


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Title: The Road Not Taken · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 104
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 00:26:47
I love the idea of Boromir encountering swans just before he leaves
Rohan. It's a nice connection with his homeland far to the south.
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Title: Another Man's Cage · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Drama · ID: 136
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-10-29 00:48:39
This is a hauntingly beautiful epic of a year in the life of Fëanor and
his growing family is a truly compelling work. It is a character-driven
novel, which with meticulous care and compassion draws a vibrant
portrait of Fëanor, Nerdanel, and each of their first four sons. It is
simultaneously wonderfully hilarious and warm, and yet always pendant
with tragic foreshadowing. Chapter by chapter the story is relentlessly
suspenseful despite the fact that we all know the end. The descriptions
of the boys, often pictured with wild hair, bare feet, and grubby work
clothes, spark with testosterone and their unique reflections of the
manic, unconventional genius of their father.

The complex characterization of Fëanor, excessive in his loves and
hates, manipulative and selfish, and yet ever passionate and heated in
his love and attachment to his wife and children, symbolizes nearly all
that is wrong and most of what is right about this family. One cannot
help but fall in love with the handsome, brilliant, Nelyo/Maitimo
(Maedhros), apparently the nearly perfect son and brother, who is
revealed to be both troubled and frustrated by the intensity of his
attachment to and love for his father and the knowledge that he can
never fully meet Fëanors expectations of him. The stunningly gifted
Macalaurë (Maglor) initially rendered as yearning and sensitive is, no
less than his brothers, a creature of contradictions. Just when one has
begun to believe he barely fits in this family, one realizes that
perhaps in his single-minded obsession with his music and gradually
defined steely core may even be the one who is most similar to his father.

The fights between Nerdanel and Fëanor, and the sons reaction to those,
are so authentic that they hurtle me right back into my own childhood.
Example from the POV of Carnistir (Caranthir): [Amil uses profanity
against Atar that Nelyo and Macalaurë would have been punished for
saying aloud. Atar calls her names lower than those given to creatures
that squirm in the mud. Obstinate bitch! he says. I feel Nelyo wince,
like he's been burned.] The scenes of Nerdanel and Fëanor making love
are equally genuine and convincing in their heated eroticism. One is
simultaneously envious of Nerdanels relationship with Fëanor and
alarmed by itoh, to be loved like thatbut at what a terrible cost. And
the same ambivalence overcomes one with a protective anxiety for these
boys who get [a thousand kind words and a hundred kisses a day] and
yet will never satisfy the perfectionism of their father.

Tirion, Formenos and Alqualondë are exquisitely depicted. The
descriptions of culture differences among Teleri, Vanyar, and Noldor are
priceless.

So many funny moments: The boys making up humorous curses against the
Varda, which horrify their mother and amuse their father; adorable,
little, mysterious, dark Carnistir biting instead of kissing in
affection and his atrocious table manners; the
tender/bittersweet/comical/sad accounts of adolescent Nelyos and
Macalaurës romantic encounters; the nervous jockeying between
big-for-his-age, roughneck, yet loveable, Tyelkormo (Celegorm) and his
smaller, insecure cousin Findekáno (Fingon) for the attention of Nelyo;
Macalaurës horrible kitchen disasters.

It will make you laugh, cry and shudder with foreboding, and finally
understand in heartbreaking sorrow how inevitable is their fate.

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Title: The Cloak · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 177
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 00:56:35
What an engaging original characcter you have given us here! She is one
of the few "professional women" who I have read in Tolkien fanfic who
seems to naturally fit within Middle-earth. It's hard to write without
imposing too much of our modern sensibilities. But something about your
style and the amah's crusty demeanor seem to justify what she does. I
think this is exactly the kind of woman who Boromir would feel most
comfortable around, and I'm glad to think of him having this kind of
support.
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Title: All for the Best · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Merry & Pippin
· ID: 572
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 01:19:52
First meetings between canon characters are one of the forms especially
suitable to being drabbled, and these are no exception. I personally
loved the last line: [And she thinks, one day, perhaps hell look
backor else shell kick.]
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Title: Thirsty · Author: Elfhild · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 319
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 01:39:46
*shiver* The narcissism this author gives Thuringwethil is chilling, and
completely in keeping for this character.
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Title: Both Beholden · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 180
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-10-29 03:52:18
This is an edgy, brooding story, its tone set in the opening paragraph
by the oppressive storm. Following the Council of Elrond, Boromir is on
patrol with a group of Rangers led by Halbarad--in search of the
unhorsed Ringwraiths, but more to the point, in search of answers about
the Heir of Isildur.

As Boromir and Halbarad test each other's mettle in a tense duel of
words, the turning point comes when Boromir realizes he has been
outmaneuvered, and wonders anxiously what he has revealed about himself.
But he needn't have worried, for Aragorn's loyal steward perceives that
the loyalties of this steward's son are first and foremost with Gondor,
and he that will support whatever is in his beloved country's best
interests. In this context, Boromir is able to objectively view his own
father as a potential threat to the stability of the realm. He does not
say as much aloud, of course. Yet Halbarad, reading between the lines,
tells him, ["You are not your father's son."]

A fascinating exploration of these two characters, their motivations,
and the politics of succession.


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Title: Suspicion · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 791
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-10-29 04:04:04
This drabble is a neat little character study. You just have to love Sam
Gamgee as you have portrayed him here. He is absolutely in-character and
determined not to let this grim-looking stranger with all the seemingly
superfluous hardware get anywhere near his Mr. Frodo if there is
anything that he is able to do about it. As for Frodo, he has the
advantage of knowing and trusting Gandalf. Afterall, he was the one who
had observed that if Stider had been the enemy he would have seemed
fairer and felt fouler.
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Title: Horse Thief · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 365
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-10-29 04:21:18
Well, you know that you have all of the elements here for getting my
attention: Elrond, Elladan, Elrohir, Glorfindel, Asfaloth, and Aragorn.
It is a funny moment. If I were Glorfindel I would not be nearly as
annoyed at an impressionable kid with hurt feelings stealing my horse as
I would be if it were Arwen. Poor Elrond. I certainly believe that he
would not be in the least bit happy to think he had gone to all the time
and trouble to protect and raise the heir to Elendil and ended up with a
horse thief.
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Title: Work Detail · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 789
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-10-29 04:33:25
Lovely little vignette about, as my kids refer to it, getting busy. The
question is for me, as was asked in other reviews, how much is Aragorn
putting her on and how much does he really know about what she has on
her mind? Well, he was asleep and she did just wake him up, so it might
have taken him a couple of minutes to get her point, but once the
situation was clear, he apparently didn't have any problem getting on
with the task at hand.
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Title: A Merry Old Inn · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 881
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 04:36:14
The writing style of this one had me chuckling all the way through. It
mimicked JRRT's in "The Hobbit" soc losely that this seemed like a
chapter that had somehow been lost from the Red Book corpus. But it is
so irreverently out there that it feels almost like farce -- but still
not quite that. It's just the right tone to handle a drunken hobbit.
Thanks for the laugh, Dreamflower!
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Title: Claws · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 835
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 04:49:03
Ah, so Smaug wasn't the only baddie taking up residence in Erebor! It
seems to be an ongoing theme in Tolkien canon that te underlings live
out their masters, and this is no exception. It certainlybroadened my
perception of "The Hobbit".
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Title: Evenstar · Author: Mar'isu · Times: The Great Years · ID: 856
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 05:01:40
Interesting musing on the nature of the evenstar - that it is a sign of
dawn, not just of darkness.
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Title: Midsummer's Day · Author: MysteriousWays · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 980
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 05:10:39
How touching, that Frodo should feel free from his own baggage from the
Quest, even just for a day. Truly it is a holiday of hope and
rejuvenation for him - you did a very nice job of capturing that here.
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Title: Lord of Werewolves · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Parody · ID: 255
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-10-29 05:48:51
This is just plain silly...and completely delightful, if such an
adjective can be applied to a ficlet about the Lord of Darkness and his
minions.

One wonders how differently things might have turned out had Morgoth not
shown his lieutenant the error of his ways...Beren and Luthien could
have pacified Carcharoth by tossing him a boot. And Barad-dûr might have
been a decadent pleasure palace!

As it is, I now have a whole new mental image of Tol Sirion as a
wildlife sanctuary for misunderstood werewolves.


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Title: Planning Ahead · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men · ID: 84
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 05:55:24
This story definitely earned a giggle or two. Gilraen is really complex
here for such a young child, precocious and funny without really
realizing she is being that way, and Arathorn's less-than-optimal mental
state (and his frustration with being that way) was really believable. I
speak as someone who has had to deal with the pain of concussions and
being doped up on pain killers -- Arathorn's frustration was entirely
too similar to my experience, and is exactly what I would expect from
someone the morning after an injury in an age before modern medicine.
But humour aside, this story is really clever in making Gilraen so
foresighted. Her prediction of that relationship is canonical, but
having it happen so early here casts a different shadow on her entire
life. Really interesting moment between the two of them.
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Title: A Change In The Weather · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 692
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-10-29 06:53:04
What a marvelous idea for a ficlet series! Marigold uses the framework
of the four seasons to create poignant portraits of Frodo, Sam, Merry,
and Pippin, as well as to show how the Quest has transformed weather
from friendly companion to bitter foe. I especially like Frodo's
resolute courage in the first drabble, and the parallel between Sam's
labours in the garden and [his greatest labour of all.]
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Title: Elemental Spirits · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 693
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-10-29 06:56:50
Making a worthy companion to A Change in the Weather, this ficlet series
presents the four hobbit companions as the four elements. It's hard to
single out any one of the drabbles for special praise, for all are
superb. Air is the perfect metaphor for Frodo's ethereal quality, while
Sam's [feet are firmly planted] in the earth he loves. And water is a
natural choice for bubbly, unquenchable Pippin. But if I had to pick a
favorite, it would have to be Merry's drabble, for the beautiful way
Marigold captures his fiery spirit: [The light of wisdom and love of
knowledge burns in his eyes and he devours books and teaching as a fire
devours dry wood, while the flicker of mischief is in his grin.]

And now I'm wondering what series of four Marigold will come up with next!


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Title: Trust · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama · ID: 216
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-29 08:24:38
This is part of a very powerful story arc. I admit to a great affection
for Andrahar and it is good to see him happy - even if he never seems to
achieves any content without attendant angst!
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Title: The Circle · Author: Karenator · Races: Men · ID: 778
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-29 11:29:27
I loved this piece. Hurin is a lovely boy, and he is such a fine
contrast to his father that it makes them both doubly endearing!
Halbarad with a poet, dreamer, ranger and cook of a son! I really liked
the pride that Halbarad takes in him as he sees the change he's going
through and admits that, different to him as Hurin may be, he'll be a
fine man and fit Ranger, with much needed talents. There is much hope
underlying this moment in time.

I loved so many things in this, but the opening paragraph almost stunned
me. It is short, precise and shocking. And, of course, colourful, even
in muted blues and dark shadows! Great couple of sentences! Halbarad's
mild annoyment and Elrohir's helpful, half teasing interest are a
delight to read, and the whole tale about vanished settlers is very
intriguing and unsettling.

A wonderful short piece with so much in it: ghost stories, Elves and
men's differences and father and son's love despite diffrences, great
imagery and fine, all pervading sense of humour. Halbarad's dry,
resigned humour makes a very comic point of view when confronted with
Elrohir's elven aloofness and his own child's innocence. Great.


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Title: Tolkien's Use of Expletives · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Non-Fiction · ID: 147
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-29 11:43:23
This is a most interesting, useful short essay. I do not usually read
this kind of things, but the title caught my attention and then I read
it with sheer delight. It made me consider a point I had never before
thought about, and it borught to mind the importance of wording and
style, as well as how the characters' voices have so much to do with
their upbringing and their environment, as well as the historical
moment. A real jewel, and a thought provoking essay, because the lack of
use of expletives means too a very different culture and a very
different approach to things than what we are used to in our modern
times, and what most of our writing tends to show. A great idea, and a
brilliant development, Dreamflower, I found it truly enlightening!
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Title: In The Pits Of Utumno · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves ·
ID: 164
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-29 11:43:40
Deliciosuly deceiving tale from title to last line. It is a wonderfully,
believable tale of darkness, danger, valour and consequences, which are
less painful when dealt with together. It left me with a big, great
smile first time I read it...as well as the second. The first part
offers a vivid description of what the title says. The pit, the dungeon,
the prisoner, the rescue mission...suspense is perfectly built up. The
second, the metaphor made clear, is also a vivid, realistic description
of waht is a very believable adventure. Not a moment of boredom in Imladris.
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Title: Prison · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 794
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 14:36:20
Nice play on the meaning of "hope" there at the end. I like the way you
have captured Eomer's despair -- very effective.
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Title: Spring Rites · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 842
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 15:32:24
How sweet! This is an endearing ritual, I can see it really easily, and
it provides a glimpse into all four characters involved but especially
Eomer and Lothiriel. I love that that trust is already growing between
them; it's a good portent for their future.
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Title: Father and Daughter · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 943
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 16:06:04
Too often when looking at the relationship between Celeborn and
Galadriel people think that Galadriel's famil back in Valinor, and
especially Finarfin, would not understand the love and RESPECT she had
for Celeborn. Not here. Finarfin is as intelligent and perceptive as one
would expect a king to be, but those Noldorin qualities are tempered by
empathy and the ability to accept what is beyond his control. He's a
very different type of elf than Feanor or Finwe ever were, and his
relationship with his daughter here reflects that. Thank you for having
a Noldo give a Sinda some well-earned respect.

Of course nothing happens in a vacuum, and the other pieces of news
Finarfin will have to deliver to Earwen weigh heavily on Finarfin in
this piece. They do not completely dominate Finarfin but they do have to
be counted in to the total sum of what Finarfin is dealing with at this
moment.

The result of which is: Finarfin comes shining through as an empathetic
but indomitable elf, someone who is more like Celeborn than either of
them would have ever thought. It's exactly the kind of character they
both have to have, and this piece gives us a nice portrait of
Galadriel's father.
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Title: Wishing On The Stars · Author: Marigold · Times: The Great Years:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 116
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 16:53:25
This piece reminds me of the quote by John Milton, ["They also serve,
who stand and wait."] When Arwen's warrior-princess moments in the movie
are discussed, or when people look at whether Eowyn was a heroine or a
deserter, they often discuss how hard it might be for women to watch the
people they love ride off to almost certain death. But I think that too
often we forget the characters who are just names in some appendix
precisely because they did not give in to the temptaiton to leave their
homes during the Ring War. Eglantine is just such a woman, and I'm glad
Marigold gave her a reason to hope.
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Title: The One · Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors ·
Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn · ID: 852
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 17:26:47
Definitely a neat little reversal here. It shed some light on Aragorn's
category and gives his character depth nicely.
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Title: Dark Appetites · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 833
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 17:30:30
This one really sent a shiver down my spine, Elena Tiriel. Obviously the
canon is that Shelob survives to trouble the new age, but you have given
this survival a malice and terror that really made me think. I can just
see her slinking off and nursing her wounds and remembering her past
glory, turning it all into bitterness. You got into her head scarily
well. Any lovers of the "bad guys" won't want to miss this one, as it is
truly, delightfully wicked. Well done.
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Title: Home Again · Author: Súlriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 863
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 17:45:47
I think that Sulriel is either a cat lover or lives in close proximity
to one; she has completely nailed the character of felines that well in
this drabble. It makes their alleged spying that much more believable
and adds depth to the legend of Beruthiel's cats.
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Title: Midwinter in Mordor · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 872
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 18:00:15
Not that I needed the proof, but this is yet another example of how this
author can reduce almost any culture to a hundred words. Tanaqui is one
of my favourite drabblists, and "Midwinter in Mordor" gives us a glimpse
into the orcs of Mordor and what kind of things they would be thankful
for as Sauron gains power. Grisly, but all too true to what Tolkien
wrote. It amazes me how much detail you can fit into a hundred words
without it feeling like you're *trying* to put too much in.
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Title: Oasis · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 259
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 18:12:32
This felt very plausible - the heat and the thirst would certainly be
things Aragorn would have had to struggle against in Harad, and the
racism and distrust. You captured it all very well here.
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Title: Shadow and flame · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 876
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 18:22:19
This drabble has a poetic quality in it as the balrog of Moria muses on
the different types of fire. It is true, fire was originally created by
Iluvatar alone and so it makes sense that it would have a creative,
constructive quality to it. But it can obviously also be very
destructive, and I felt sorry for the balrog that his love of [what he
did not have], darkness, would corrupt him so. He seemed an innocent at
the beginning, and I could very easily see this. This drabble does a
good job of taking a villain and giving him a little bit of complexity,
and an opportunity for redemption at the end.
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Title: Raven Hair and Silver Eyes · Author: Ellie · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 174
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 19:15:38
Very poetic look at what Nolofinwe's wife would have endured. You really
captured the pain the sundering of the Noldor would have caused for
everyone.
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Title: Those Who Challenge the Dead · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 858
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 19:23:32
What gets me about this pair of drabbles is the very different ways that
Earnur and Baldor approach death. The one quietly accepts its
inevitability while the other brashly denies the possibility. It's an
interesting reversal of how I usually see the two cultures.
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Title: The Stone's Lament · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 53
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-29 20:15:39
This is a wonderful little expansion of a moment that gets too few words
in LotR: the reminiscence of Elves and Dwarves in Hollin and Moria.
Typical of Tolkien teasing us with snippets of his mythology, but
leaving out the meaning. Here, Thevina has filled the gap from Gimli's
perspective, with a look ahead to the friendship between Legolas and
Gimli, the Celebrimbor/Narvi of the Fourth Age.
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Title: Dana's Annotated Tale of Years · Author: Dana · Genres:
Non-Fiction · ID: 274
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-29 20:19:01
A very useful compilation, an asset to the fandom.
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Title: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship · Author: Elana · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 150
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 22:40:50
Oh, I like this! The hobbits really are hgood at making you slow down,
and I love the connection between Gandalf's love of fire and
pipe-smoking. It's nice to see him being able to relax for a bit.
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Title: For the Dwarves · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Dwarves: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 894
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-29 22:54:25
This drabble makes me think that perhaps Gloin isn't too thrilled about
his son joining the quest. And that makes sense -- it's dangerous, and
even if he knows it has to be done, he'd still probably rather someone
else be the one to go. His acceptance of this and well wishes seemed
very dwarven - a nicely in-character father-and-son moment.
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Title: Dawn of a New Age: First Age · Author: elliska · Times: First Age
and Prior: Incomplete · ID: 406
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-10-29 23:20:45
Good writing style. Clear descriptions of the battle, well-balanced
between details of single fighting and a more general overview. The
known characters are incorporated smoothly into the story.
In what is there now of the story, your main protagonist Orohpher is
just one among many characters. It's difficult to see where _his_ story
will lead from there.
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Title: On Being the Youngest · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural:
With Hobbits · ID: 45
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2006-10-29 23:23:15
This story left me chuckling. Though Bodkin is better known for
Elf-centred stories, she has a deft hand with hobbits. Pippin is
certainly bright, inquisitive, thoughtful and devious! His conversation
with Legolas is an eye-opening delight. Here is not the simple-minded,
mischief-making hobbit so many make him out to be. (And here is not the
"pretty-boy" Wood-Elf, either!) I love the two of them commiserating...
I think the only thing left out was the statement "You'll understand
when you're older." Otherwise, all the cliches the youngest hears were
there. I like Pippin's reasoning that they are perfect for the Quest in
the very fact that they would be a little less, um, *obvious* in the
landscape than, say, Glorfindel. [Three hobbits and a Ranger have passed
beneath this tree...] *snork*
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Title: Reconciliation · Author: Willow_41z · Genres: Romance: Incomplete
· ID: 802
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-10-30 00:43:27
An unusual, and interesting variation on the theme of Eomer and
Lothiriel. Here, Lothiriel did not fall passionately in love with the
studly Horse-Lord soon after meeting him, or even at all, at least not
yet. The story begins with Lothiriel isolated as a new bride, pregnant
before she has had a chance to accustom herself to her new life and realm.

How Lothiriel does make a better life for herself in Rohan and become a
good Queen, is the substance of the story. It's well worth reading; and
hopefully will be finished soon..
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Title: Unmeant Bitterness · Author: Aramel · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 171
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-30 03:30:24
This is a really poignant story that offers a more sympathetic
interpretation of Denethor's comments in the council during the siege of
Minas Tirith, that he wished Faramir's and Boromir's places had been
exchanged: so that Boromir would have brought the Ring to Minas Tirith,
most emphatically *not* so that Faramir would actually be the one dead.
It's an explanation I've offered more than once in internet chatrooms
and have actually written an essay arguing just this point. I think it's
the one Tolkien intended, Jackson's wording notwithstanding.

However, this piece goes beyond that. It explains why Denethor, usually
so meticulous, would use such ambiguous wording at all, and looks at the
emotional impact this misunderstanding would have on Faramir, and at how
Denethor would react to the fact that his youngest son would think that
of him. I'm sure it would sting, certainly. Combined with the way that
Faramir kept looking at Mithrandir, I can very see how this scene very
well could have arisen in the book-verse.

The comment that always bothered me from the council scenes was not the
one about the brothers 'mir having their places reversed is not the one
that bothers me; as I said, it has always been so obvious to me just
what Denethor meant. But the ["Think better of me, if I should return"]
bit always sounded like the tantrum of a teenager not an adult captain,
and the answer you provided was satisfying there too. I'll leave that as
a surprise to the reader -- but clever job there! All in all a very nice
read.
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Title: Moon Friend: Tales of Isildur · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races:
Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 832
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-10-30 05:44:18
Isildur is one of those characters that I love -- he is complex that he
seems to just beg to be explored through fic. Each of these drabbles
takes on just such a complicated moment in his life. What makes these
special is that they focus on his relationship with the moon implied in
his name, which makes for both a novel and surprisingly effective way of
approaching his character. Well done, E.T.
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Title: Wizardry · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 179
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-10-30 08:10:24
Sometimes you just have to laugh - but there's a pretty grim edge to it.
Not a lot of frivolity about either of these. The laughter that knows
the dark side and laughs anyway.
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Title: Tolkien's Use of Expletives · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Non-Fiction · ID: 147
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-30 08:21:54
What a delightful piece to read! Especially the usage of buttons by
Bilbo made me wondering the same (so yes, I looked too and there is a
lot of mentioning of that word in [the Hobbit]). It is very useful for
writers who write a lot of the Lotr characters, but not so much for
Silmarillon writers.

Because there is a lot going on in the Silmarillion which could give a
writer a different insight. One could say that once Fëanor curses Melkor
(well there is a lot of cursing going on with the Fëanorians), you would
have most likely the most used expletive (Morgoth) there. So, it would
place this non-fictional work in a different spotlight especially when
the author wants to advise on style use. But Dreamflower, this is a very
useful work which will help a lot of writers with their writers. Great job!
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Title: Lembas, Shmembas · Author: Rabidsamfan · Genres: Non-Fiction ·
ID: 850
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-30 08:43:57
This is a very nice work! Especially the line [So, how much lembas does
it take to feed a hobbit?] got my interest piqued. The author put a
great deal of work in this piece, filled with relevant quotes and some
math. I also loved to read the discussion of others on the piece,
bringing up my questions and insight (especially regarding the elven
nature), but it remained an open and interesting discussions which gave
me a different insight on this matter as well (and yes I am hungry now).
Now I really want to read [More Lembas Thoughts]! Great job!
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Title: More Lembas Thoughts · Author: Rabidsamfan · Genres: Non-Fiction
· ID: 851
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-30 09:15:10
This is an excellent conclusion of the author's thoughts on Lembas. I
really have to admire that the author stuck to the Hobbit point of view,
explaining her view on the matter in a constructive and patient manner.
And in a way, my kudo's to exploring the effect of Lembas on Hobbits
backed up with well thought out conclusions. Really, this is just amazing!

Lembas has survived so many ages and might sustain the elves (my only
niggle is though that First age elves, who came up with it originally,
were not assured of rebirth which might be a discussion point in the
thought of cooking up the recipe - but this is solely a side note
because it is about Hobbits!). I had to laugh when I read this article
and the tone of the piece is just perfect. The comparison to an energy
bar was simply great! Or the quote: [But hobbits are small and hungry
beings.] is astute and yes, this is true. Their metabolism is simply
different and the quotes that are used gives the reader a great insight.

It really helps for readers who are not so into digging up the small
canon notations to keep the comparisons to our daily lives as simple as
possible. Often we might stick too long in Tolkien's world that we
somehow cannot explain it as much as we want to. The author did a superb
job in this! The piece is constructed logically and is written down to
earth manner and I most certainly feel sorry for the poor hobbits who
must have longed for long and extensive meals which fulfils their
hobbity needs!
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Title: Dana's Annotated Tale of Years · Author: Dana · Genres:
Non-Fiction · ID: 274
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-30 09:19:47
This is really a nice overview, but I am not always assured that the
ency of Arda has the correct information, so I rather stick to the
books. But you can see how much work the author has put into it
(especially regarding the dates about hobbit births and such), so I can
see the absolute value of this for Hobbit writers. A great job!
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Title: A Meara for Me! · Author: Súlriel · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 893
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-30 09:22:05
I think the title is very correct because after I read it (I think this
article has been re-written since the last time I saw it) because once I
finished reading it, I really want a Meara for myself too!!! This is a
great overview with beautiful pictures!
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Title: Home Again · Author: Súlriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 863
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-30 09:29:03
This is a treat for every cat-lover! I surely enjoyed the feline touch
of the piece, her majesty's haughtiness regarding Tom and her catty
needs - milk of course, and a luxurious pillow! Very nicely drabbled!
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Title: A Hallowed Place of Both Peoples · Author: Imhiriel · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 944
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-30 09:35:52
This drabble is a great work. I love the opening line: it immediately
gets the readers interest and wonders& what is going on here? The
author has done a superb job in capturing this moment which feels very
significant to me, once I read the authors notes I see that that
feeling is well founded. But when drabbling it is sometimes very
difficult to frame an historical moment in just hundred words, but the
author did very well regarding this! Great language and an effective
style which gives the reader a good insight in Eorls character.
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Title: To Labour and to Wait · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 838
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-30 09:44:02
I had not actually wondered about the moment which served as the
germination point for this back-history (Aragorn revealing himself to
Eomer), but this is one believable explanation and an intriguing concept
with which to explore the development of Aragorn's character. Detailed
descriptions of the travellers' actions, the surroundings, and the
various types of people that Aragorn encountered were realistic and
added a lot to my feeling of being a part of the story, without
distracting me from the unfolding of the tale itself. Gwynnyd handles
both shifting PoVs and shifting periods in time very cleanly, and the
story flows along smoothly without ever making me feel either hurried or
impatient.

I thought the characterizations were excellent and completely in line
with canon. Little things like the complicated fletching, the difficulty
in understanding his mortal companions, and the communion with wood all
help show Legolas' Elvishness and keep him from being too "humanized."
Aragorn embodies the strong, faithful and just king that he will one day
become, and felt exactly like my impressions from the books. His
revulsion at the destruction of Umbar (even knowing of its necessity)
and the dismay he felt at being considered the enemy were handled
particularly well. Even brief shots of the rest of the Fellowship,
little-knowns (Thengel) and OCs left each individual feeling distinct in
my mind.

Gwynnyd did a nice, tight job of interweaving her story with what little
is known from canon of Aragorn's long work and travels in the south. His
trials of starting out with the Rohirrim as an untested warrior were
well-portrayed; and his experiences in the small desert town were an
interesting plot device for him to absorb a lot of information about a
huge and diverse area and population, in what was really a short amount
of time. That in both situations he was offered a position of power
relatively quickly seemed testimony to his inner quality and ability to
be king over all one day. Arwen's reassurance and dreams of their future
were simply lovely, and a good lead-in to Aragorn's resolve to be what
he was meant to be, when he sets off for that future meeting with Eomer.
-----------------------------------
Title: Hope Eternal · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn ·
ID: 930
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-30 09:44:39
Aragorn's 4th Age policy towards orcs seemed quite believable to me: A
man of justice must extend it to all sentient beings, not just those he
feels kinship or liking towards. Several touches bring out the orcs'
barbarism and inability to be rehabilitated (at least, these orcs),
leaving the reader aware of the inevitability of their end. However,
Aragorn's willingness to keep trying inserts a sense of hope into a
bleak vignette. Nicely balanced and well done.
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Title: The One · Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors ·
Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn · ID: 852
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-30 09:49:38
Well-written and hope-filled story. Aragorn's progression through
knowing three generations of the House of Hurin was ably portrayed, and
Faramir's response to him in the Houses of Healing was nicely explained.
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Title: First Impressions · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 806
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-30 09:51:28
Bodkin does a very nice job of showing an unbalanced Aragorn newly
arrived among the Dunedain, through beautifully detailed descriptions of
both the setting and the people. There is no easy answer or quick
acceptance of his situation for Aragorn, but the dialogue between he and
Halbarad is well done and I could easily follow how he comes to see
things more from Hal's PoV. A nice use of humor and frankness to balance
what could have been a rather whiny Aragorn, and who instead comes
across as simply very young and very human.
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Title: Wishing On The Stars · Author: Marigold · Times: The Great Years:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 116
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-30 14:24:01
A moving exploration of a mother's fears and hopes. I loved the
resolution of the final drabble.
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Title: Heirs of the Oath · Author: Elana · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 151
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-30 14:46:33
Elana has matched the first and second parts of this pair of drabbles
well to provide a satisfying reflection on the shifting and intertwined
fortunes of Gondor and Rohan. The first drabble paints a vivid picture
of Boromir's expansive personality, Theodred's wisdom, and Eomer's
growing understanding of what it takes to be a king. In the second
drabble, Elana gives added depth to the renewal of the Oath between
Aragorn and Eomer in Eomer's reflections. Good work!
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Title: Pity · Author: Elana · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 152
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-30 14:57:41
Oh, what a wonderful notion Elana presents in this drabble for why Frodo
might have been persuaded to claim the Ring! She does a marvellous job
of showing the way the Ring works through different temptations until it
at last finds the one that will be effective. The reader is left with a
tremendous sense of malice, heightened by the way evil has exploited and
perverted a good impulse (perhaps the best). A terrific (and terrifying)
drabble.
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Title: Lobelia's List · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 201
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-30 18:15:02
This drabble perfectly captures Lobelia's character, both in its form as
a to-do list and the order and nature of the items (and notes). Very clever.
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Title: Was It For This? · Author: aervir · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 204
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-30 20:19:57
Aervir strikes an appropriately elegaic tone in this drabble about the
parallels between the deaths of Boromir and Theodred. The language is
well chosen: beautiful and lyrical, with a strong poetic rhythm. The
drabble wears the inspiration of both Owen's poetry and Tolkien's tales
lightly but recognisably. A lovely tribute to both sources, and a fine
piece of work by this author.
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Title: Drift · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 203
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-30 20:22:00
An unusual and powerful perspective on Faramir's encounter with
Boromir's funeral boat, which makes effective use of the relationship
between the sons of Gondor and the river of Gondor to give us new
insight into both. Excellent writing!
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Title: A Spring Day At Cormallen · Author: Marigold · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Hobbits · ID: 746
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-30 20:36:21
A nice tribute to the hopefulness of the New Age.
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Title: Do Not Think Me A Dream · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor
· ID: 40
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-10-30 20:39:13
A glimpse into Finduilas's life towards its end, bitter-sweet.
-----------------------------------
Title: Teatime in Rivendell · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 373
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-10-30 21:18:45
Very funny piece. That rascal Bilbo sure knows how to hold a grudge.
Poor Legolas--I doubt if he is even old enough to remember the events
that set him up to be the recipient of Bilbo's long-awaited revenge.
However, it probably is a nice little bit preparation for spending so
much time in the company of the Hobbits. Takes me back to my childhood
in a large family where everyone always remembered who got the one
remaining cookie last time around. At least now, when the Fellowship
sets out, Legolas will make very sure that he never inadvertently takes
the last cookie out of turn. (Did they have cookies on their quest?
Doubt it. But you get the drift.)
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Title: Necessity and Desire · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: The Great Years ·
ID: 173
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-10-30 21:45:20
A charming, sweet and funny storythat is a great combination. I love
seeing Aragorn and Arwen together here. The inclusion of Boromir,
Elladan, Elrohir, and Elrond were all just icing on the cake for me. I
like seeing Tolkiens character interact with real life humor and
intimacy. It just had to be part of life, especially given the hints one
can pick up here and there in canon. The stuff about Aragorn wearing
Elladans mail was very funny (especially the way that it came up again
and again). I never really questioned why Aragorn didnt show up at the
feast, but assumed it was something of high importance.
-----------------------------------
Title: Cacophony · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 929
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-10-30 22:03:52
This piece goes way beyond funny--it is utterly hilarious. I can't stop
thinking about how it is just so unfair the way some people dare to
whine and complain about how disrespectful Feanor was to the Valar.
Ouch! They clearly haven't read this piece. It is nearly impossible for
me to review this little fic without using a string of quotes, because
there are just too many great lines here. I always have wondered about
that "Music" and couldn't help but notice the fact that, despite all the
highfaluting theorizing, everything really did not turn out to be all
that perfect afterall did it? But then who was I to question it? Now I
know the answer.

I so loved Nienna singing a la Edith Piaf and wishing for the creation
of absinthe. That was just too perfect. All righty now, I do have to
quote at least one of my favorites: ["But the worst, the absolute worst,
was Melkor, whod been created with a strong voice but a limited
range."] You that nail right on the head there, honey!

Talk about atonality.

And, finally, the blessed sounds of silence. Amen.

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Title: Thirsty · Author: Elfhild · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 319
Reviewer: Angmar · 2006-10-30 22:26:54
Fanfiction drabbles are tiny little things, some no more than a hundred
words, while others are up five hundred. While some might have the
opinion that, because of the relatively few words, that writing drabbles
is a simple thing. Really, it is not all that easy. The author who
enters a drabble contest or simply enjoys writing drabbles must often
condense one of Tolkien's characters, a situation, a story fragment, or
even one of Tolkien's books into a few words. The talent and skill of
the author is dependent upon his or her skill in capturing a certain
mood or feeling that Tolkien was attempting to convey to his readers.

The author of this selection has taken a relatively unknown character,
about whom Tolkien gives very little information, and makes her become
real. Thuringwethil, one of Sauron's vampire colleagues on the Island of
Tol Sirion, was only a foil in a small section of the Lay of Luthien,
but in this drabble, she becomes a personality all her own, albeit a
wicked and murderous one. The piece is evocative of the vampire genre in
classic works. One cannot help but be sorry for the vampire's victims,
in this case a young man, and even for the vampire herself, who is
cursed by Eru and the Valar for her duplicity in following the dark
leadings of Sauron.

Thuringwethil can be compared to the literary prototype of the succubus,
ie, a female demon who prowls the night, looking for victims, finding
lonely people and either destroying them or leading them into ruin. The
succubus is a dark fantasy of males, and appeals to their sense of
dangerous love. The beautiful woman temptress who will break their
hearts, leaving them with a memory that will last them the rest of their
lives, is an appealing concept, primarily for those men who have secret
fantasies of a strong, controlling woman.

Is this dark creature, a maia, a creation of Eru, capable of feelings of
love and affection for her victim? While that is not explicitly stated
in the drabble, there is a hint she feels a deeper emotion that the mere
satisfaction of her physical hungers. Does she feel remorse for
murdering the poor, unfortunate victim? Some, she became a little
greedy, but still she justifies the deed in that she needed to satiate
her need for blood.

A deliciously spooky little drabble, fun for Halloween, or for any time.
I enjoyed it and I hope to see more things written in this vein. In
Tolkien fanfic, there are plenty of stories for the ladies, but few for
the men. Maybe that will change someday. I can hope.
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Title: Summer Call · Author: mitasova · Races: Men: Post-Sauron's Fall ·
ID: 772
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-30 23:54:54
I found this to be a beautiful and moving tribute to Faramir and his
family. His desire to leave the house and be outside in his fair
Ithilien felt completely right to me. Although I didn't feel that he
consciously knew his death was near (despite all the reflections on his
long-missed loved ones and the Gift of Men), I think sometimes our
subconscious guides us to where we most want to be when our bodies sense
death coming. This was something I personally witnessed in my
stepfather's death, anyway.

The dialogue between Barahir and his grandfather was excellent, allowing
us to learn of recent history and tidbits about the family in a smooth
and natural way. Faramir's voice was perfect for me, although one
quibble only: I would hope that he knew how critical his family was both
to preserving Gondor until the King could come again, and how helpful
they undoubtedly were to maintaining it after his arrival.

Boromir's horn calling and the vision of Eowyn beckoning Faramir home
was a poignant and tearful touch at the end, and so hopeful and full of
joy even in the sadness of a great man's death. I hope poor Barahir
comes to understand this!
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Title: Strange meeting · Author: Nesta · Races: Men: Post-Sauron's Fall
· ID: 93
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-30 23:55:04
Very interesting and unique take on the prelude to Aragorn's coronation.
Aragorn's remarks concerning the ultimate value of Faramir's desperate
effort to hold the fords were especially appreciated. Great dialogue and
interaction between the two men, and the introduction was very well
conceived - a part of war that is seldom explored, but it was done with
notable care and attention, and set the tone for what followed.
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Title: Finding the Right Words · Author: Nienor Niniel · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 785
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-10-30 23:55:18
This story is thoughtful and reflective. I liked the calm, introspective
Faramir here, and his voice seemed very consistent with the books. His
efforts to find the proper words were well conceived, and the visions -
especially the lingering one of his entire family at the end - were very
moving. It felt appropriate that this led to both healing and the
perfect speech for the next morning.
-----------------------------------
Title: Here You Cannot Leave Me · Author: Alassante · Genres: Drama:
Poetry · ID: 356
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 13:19:14
This is a very sad and touching poem of Arwen's thoughts and emotions as
she faces Aragorn's mortality and her own. I particularly liked the last
line--it is an image that captures the fading of an elf (even if she is
now mortal) very well.

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Title: Fëanorian Fates Drabble Series · Author: Alassante · Times: First
Age and Prior: Incomplete · ID: 214
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 13:20:14
The idea of writing the fates of the Feanorians is very clever, I think.
And you have some really powerful images in here. I think though my
favorite is Eru's Lament. I like the rhythm of it and the imagery.

-----------------------------------
Title: In a Pig's Eye · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Humor · ID: 747
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-10-31 14:30:46
To write Hobbits well, I think, you must have them firmly rooted in the
physical world and this story does that very well. It has a great
physicality to it - from the beds and pillows to the sun and mud.

I wish more had been made of Pippin's joy, however, or, rather, Merry's
understanding that it might be coming mostly from homesickness. I miss
Merry's true compassion here.
-----------------------------------
Title: Gondor Needs No King · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 207
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-31 15:45:58
This AU drabble does a fine job of hinting at the horrors that followed
from Boromir taking the Ring. Nice work.
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I just accidentally saved a review as "draft" (writing author reviews) and
when I went to edit it, because I'd *meant* to save it as a "hidden" review, it
came up blank.

Beg pardon if someone's already talked about this. I haven't been "around"
much the past month. Fighting the bronchitis battle early this year.

Exactly when is voting season over? (Something in me says it's today, which
is why I'm concentrating on author reviews rather than particular stories.
Please let me know if I'm mistaken.)

Thanks,
Lin


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If you went back before hitting "save review" but after hitting "preview" it will do that. I've had that happen several times.

And the voting's not over for another 10 days (ends the 20th).

Dreamflower

----- Original Message -----
From: BLJean@aol.com
To: mefawards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Friday, November 10, 2006 7:17 PM
Subject: [MEFAwards] Something odd...


I just accidentally saved a review as "draft" (writing author reviews) and
when I went to edit it, because I'd *meant* to save it as a "hidden" review, it
came up blank.

Beg pardon if someone's already talked about this. I haven't been "around"
much the past month. Fighting the bronchitis battle early this year.

Exactly when is voting season over? (Something in me says it's today, which
is why I'm concentrating on author reviews rather than particular stories.
Please let me know if I'm mistaken.)

Thanks,
Lin

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Oh, I'm so glad there's another 10 days of reviewing. (crossing
fingers that bronchitis is not relapsing. feel like [something]
warmed over tonight.)

Not sure if I went back before hitting "save review"... the second
one that it happened with, I was pretty sure I'd saved it. After I
finished for today I went back over the list of reviews I'd written,
and saw that one said "Edit draft review" or whatever that prompt is,
and I was surprised, for I'd saved everything else (after the first
spot of trouble) as "hidden" and then gone back later and started
finalising them all, one at a time.

But when I hit the "Edit draft review" it came up blank. And I was
all out of fancy, high-falutin' words by then. Re-created the review
to the best of my ability, meaning to save it as "hidden" and get
back to it later, if today wasn't the last voting day, but somehow
accidentally saved it as "final".

*sigh*
But at least I wrote a bunch of author reviews when I had the time
and energy. I still have a bunch of stories on my "wish" list that I
want to review.

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, <aelfwina@...> wrote:
>
> If you went back before hitting "save review" but after
hitting "preview" it will do that. I've had that happen several
times.
>
> And the voting's not over for another 10 days (ends the 20th).
>
> Dreamflower
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: BLJean@...
> To: mefawards@yahoogroups.com
> Sent: Friday, November 10, 2006 7:17 PM
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Something odd...
>
>
> I just accidentally saved a review as "draft" (writing author
reviews) and
> when I went to edit it, because I'd *meant* to save it as
a "hidden" review, it
> came up blank.
>
> Beg pardon if someone's already talked about this. I haven't
been "around"
> much the past month. Fighting the bronchitis battle early this
year.
>
> Exactly when is voting season over? (Something in me says it's
today, which
> is why I'm concentrating on author reviews rather than particular
stories.
> Please let me know if I'm mistaken.)
>
> Thanks,
> Lin
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>
>
>
>
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>

Lovely to see the thousands of reviews at the site. So much good
reading to look forward to (I mean the stories, of course, that I
haven't yet looked at, but the reviews I've seen have convinced me to
add them to my "want to read" list).

Just spent a couple of hours writing author reviews. Did you know there
are only 50 finalized author reviews so far? Seems as if there ought to
be more. Do people just prefer to write reviews about individual
stories and not record their cumulative impressions of the authors
they've been reading? Or am I misunderstanding something?

Thanks,
Lin

In a message dated 11/11/2006 12:57:08 A.M. Eastern Standard Time,
BLJean@aol.com writes:

Just spent a couple of hours writing author reviews. Did you know there
are only 50 finalized author reviews so far? Seems as if there ought to
be more.


If there are 50 now, then that's a lot more than when I looked the other
day. There were only 19 for the longest time. Maybe it's something people were
saving for last, after they'd read several of an author's story.

Isabeau


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Login as yourself at the review site. Go to "Read Author Reviews by
Reviewer"--this defaults to showing your own reviews first. But by
doing that, it gives you access to hidden review counts, too. YOur own
non-final reviews show (for you), but you get a total count of hidden
and finalized reviews. You will still only be able to see finalized
reviews by others and the author reviews you've written, whatever
their status, but that will give you a better idea of how many there
are in the system.

Keep in mind, of course, that a lot of them will be doubles or triples
or whatever, as people copy-paste their author reviews across genres.

I suspect that Isabeau is right, that a lot of people are saving the
author reviews for last. After all, it helps to have read all you're
going to read by a given author before writing a review about his or
her work!

Dwim

Title: Homecomings · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 225
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2006-10-31 16:04:01
This set of drabbles from the perspectives of the fathers or
foster-fathers of seven of the fellowship are a delight. Marta shows her
fine ear for dialogue and inner monologue in the way she has effectively
captured seven very different voices. The reader is left in no doubt who
is speaking. She has also cut to the heart of the fears and hopes, pride
and concern of these seven.

I'm particularly fond of the drabble about Gaffer Gamgee, covering his
feelings for Sam with a little gruffness. Gloin's effort to swallow his
dislike for Thranduil's family for Gimli's sake made me laugh. And Marta
has made an extremely convincing job with Paladin, almost completely
off-stage in Tolkien: I can see where Pippin gets his personality from!

Perhaps what I enjoyed most about these drabbles is the way they are
perfectly packaged. Marta has chosen her words, and shaped each drabble
to deliver a strong payoff in the last line. In short, they are
exemplars of the drabblists' art Any one of these drabbles would stand
on its own merits. As a series, they are magnificent.
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Title: Treasures And Momentos · Author: Marigold · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Pippin or Merry · ID: 220
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-10-31 18:56:28
This is very sweet, and, as with all of Marigold's stories, seamlessly
entwines so many lovely details - original and textual - of Hobbit way
of life. Nicely done.
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Title: Dark Appetites · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 833
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 19:02:05
Holy Cow! I don't think I have ever seen this drabble and what a perfect
day to read it on (Halloween). You are the master of drabbles, no doubt
about that and this one certainly takes the cake for spookiness. Shelob
is so scary and nasty waiting to heal enough to go feed again. Really
nasty imagery in this. Yuck! I love it!
-----------------------------------
Title: The Usurper · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 834
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 19:05:26
Wow! I love the little lines that Tolkien gives us in the
appendices--they're little teasers. And this drabble does an amazing job
of illustrating the one you quote. The method of execuation Castamir
chooses is sick enough but the way you show him relishing it and his
power is really disgusting. Well done!
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Title: Claws · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 835
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 19:08:41
Oh my gosh! I absolutely love birds and I have watched crows of various
types just clearly rejoicing in the little prizes that they find and
hide. So I thought you just did a fantastic job of capturing the crow
here--especially his fluttering heart. Great! But the end! The little
line, right out of the blue, describing the crow's fate! That was really
sickenly powerful. Don't mess with Smaug, indeed. Perfect!
-----------------------------------
Title: Moon Friend: Tales of Isildur · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races:
Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 832
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 19:16:17
I think this is an incredibly poetically written and powerful drabble
series. The imagery throughout this is wonderfully done--I especially
love the way you wove the image of the moon through the series. And the
picture this paints of Isildur is great. He was really such a noble
person, as you showed, who had done do many great deeds. And the end you
depicted for him--waiting for someone to lay his bones to rest only to
have them plundered and then burned by orcs! What an end. Very powerful!
-----------------------------------
Title: The First Age of the Sun: Triumph · Author: Inglor · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 215
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-31 20:29:56
This story inspired my co-writer and me to start a first age alternate
universe story on our own. Actually we both were discussing a new
chapter and from there a bunny latched on. I honestly think this is a
sign how great this story is and how much potential it has in its
continuation to which I look forward every time. Inglor explores the
possibility of a romance between Finrod and Lúthien and leaves us
hanging with how Luthien will react to the kinslayings of the Noldor.

I love the way that he writes the chemistry between the couple, but also
the family interactions and the way how we see the lands of Thingol
through Finrod's eyes. Every character from the realm and family members
get their cameo in the story while the author lays a solid foundation
for a good story which undoublty will, besides the romance, involve a
lot of political scheming as well. Inglor brings the story at a gentle
pace with beautiful written narrative, but I just wish he didnt wait so
long with updates (no pressure Inglor, just an reader hoping for a new
chapter soon). This is a very promising WIP!
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Title: Those Also Serve Who Stand and Wait · Author: Haleth · Times:
First Age and Prior · ID: 293
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-31 20:59:10
This is a very nice and very insightful work about Lalwen, a character
striped out by Tolkien & his son himself as the daughter of Finwe and
Indis in the main work the Silm. Yet, Haleth lifts out this HOME
character and creates a wonderful story around it. While reading it I do
have my questions about Lalwen's actions on her journey and her role in
the family, it is making me wonder how things might have gone if she
handled things differently. This is the feeling I do get at the end of
the story where Lalwen sits alone in her home:
[I remain here, seemingly too proud to ask for forgiveness. In truth I
am too weak to face the empty places where I once laughed. I will wait
here, an Exile, until the end.]

A powerful ending to an engaging gapfiller.
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Title: Beech Leaves · Author: Redheredh · Races: Elves: Featuring
Mirkwood Elves · ID: 165
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-31 21:24:39
This is a wonderful tale of a reborn Silvan elf in Valinor. It is also a
tale of how rebirth is managed in the Blessed Realm, and of a very well
developed structure that takes care of the reborn as they get used to
their new state. It is a tale of interesting characters who never left
Valinor and their relations with those returned, via the sea or via
Mandos halls.

The elf in question is a stubborn Silvan elf whose memories are not
fully returned. He wallows in quiet despair, anger, determination, but
also denied, latent fear of what those memories would be.

With a background of turbulent politics that indicates a less than
blessed realm, this stubborn Elf fights to regain his identity on his
own terms, refusing to be led, or forced, or even induced by the lady
Galadriel.

Another singular character, another elf who is also a reborn without
memories, but with a calmer disposition, will join the stubborn,
valiant, anguished Silvan Elf in a trip across the lands to Valinor to a
place where he can finally acknowledge, and be acknowledged as he
deserves. It is a beautiful tale of self search, and of a strong
character who fights to be fully himself, whatever his mistakes in his
previous life. A wonderful tribute written in a wonderful language.
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Title: Hewing Naught But Wood · Author: Thundera Tiger · Genres: Humor:
Parody · ID: 825
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-31 21:30:22
This is an hilarious vignette.The three huntes in pedantic, semantic
mood, discussing the different names for their strokes while the orcs
are attacking Helm's Deep. Legolas and Gimli's rivalry, and Aragorn
entering the contest, how could he not, when it was a discussion about
words? leave poor Eomer searching for a reason to return to battle as
soon as possible.
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Title: Quo Vadis? · Author: Tehta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 86
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-31 21:30:50
A fitting ending for Salgant, in the ruin of Gondolin, trying to sing
his way out of death before a dragon. It is an hilarious yet deep and
powerful peace.
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Title: By The Light of Earendil's Star · Author: Branwyn · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 83
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-31 21:31:20
Eldahil could surely enter the final short list of the most endearing
human original characters in fanfiction. The cheeky cousin of Denethor's
sons comes out as a archetypical shallow, shameless, carefree,
mischievous hero with a golden heart. He is a good counterpart to a very
deeply worried Boromir, in mad search for his younger brother, to the
point that he not only enlivens the story but completely steals the
show, and in what a manner!
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Title: Those Also Serve Who Stand and Wait · Author: Haleth · Times:
First Age and Prior · ID: 293
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-31 21:38:30
I really like this take on an obscure canon character, the sister who
would not leave her beloved elder brother go alone. Fingolfin's sister
tells her tale from Eressëa, showing how sad it is at times to survive,
when only ghosts can keep you company.

Her mother, sisters, other brother, her sister- in- law, her nephew,
most probably, all live in Tirion, yet she who survived the worst of
MAndos' Doom and saw all her loved ones go to their deaths one after the
other in Middle -Earth, she prefers to remain in Eressëa, a true
Purgatory to her, but more comforting than the empty places of her
youth, that would be too painful to remember. A superb characterization,
and a nice idea to tell her tale!
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Title: The Spy · Author: daw the minstrel · Races: Elves · ID: 268
Reviewer: Perelleth · 2006-10-31 21:49:14
This is an hilarious tale, and a wicked backstory for he who is about to
become LEgolas' keeper, aka "Nana" and who will be well known for
insisting on keping his charge well away from from trouble... And here
we see Beliond bored and seeking a bit of action in a town of Men!

This, and his supplanting the minstrel, and his noticing that the lord
was angry.. made me laugh until my head hurt..why, this is reckless
Beliond, mixing with foregin human affairs and with his deep knowledge
of human behaviour... NO surprise he mistrusts them so much. Legolas
would be torn between amusement and awe if he heard him tell stories
like this!. The pace is fast, like an old movie in which the hero goes
through all kind of trouble in an almost flippant way, yet we also get a
good glimpse of Beliond's particular self in his actions. ONe cannot
help pitying this quite mischievous, displicent, almost "sophisticated"
elf who is about to be turned into Nana to the king's youngest son. And
I would have paid to see THranduil's face as he issued the command.

This character is so full of life, contradictions, understandable ticks
that one cannot help but liking him so deeply, and seeing him as a
strong pillar in Thranduil's realm. Another wonderful piece.
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Title: To Follow an Elf · Author: etharei · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 816
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 23:07:27
I love this story. Stories about Legolas and Gimli's friendship always
attract my attention because I find that topic very interesting, and
this story is great example of that friendship. I truly enjoy the
writing style and Gimli's observations about elves and the forest. And I
love Gimli's interactions with Legolas, Thranduil and the other elves. I
think this story captures Gimli very well. I really hope to see it
continued and finished. Its wonderful so far!
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Title: Starlight on Leaves · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves:
Featuring Mirkwood Elves · ID: 813
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 23:17:30
A wonderful homecoming for Thranduil. I liked the solemn, serious tone
at the beginning, very appropriate to the fact that Thranduil came home
with so little of his army. And I loved his reuinion with his wife--both
the light parts, describing new and old traditions, and the steamy part.
That was very well done.
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Title: In The Pits Of Utumno · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves ·
ID: 164
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 23:21:35
This story absolutely cracks me up. When I first read it I was totally
taken in by the serious beginning and apparently desparate situation.
The writing there is so tense and scary. And then you get to the end! I
won't put s total spoiler in the review, but suffice to say that I
sincerely doubt Melkor would be amused with their actions or his new
persona. ;-) Erestor must have had a blast with that. Great story!
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Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 859
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-10-31 23:23:11
This drabble is just so touching. The willow has such great personality
here and it only utters one word. I love this!
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Title: A bit of garden · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 901
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-01 01:58:28
I would love to see Sam's face when he realizes that Elrond is not mad
at him, but instead sees a kinship of sorts between them. It's true,
Elrond would have to neglect those simpler pleasures -- and it would
take a hobbit (and a Gamgee at that) to remind him. Neat juxtaposition here.
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Title: Boats To Build · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 300
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-01 03:18:03
This is a really nice glimpse. Boromir and Adrahil are both well drawn,
and the issue of aging gracefully is dealt with in a way that makes it
not feel like the philosophizing that I suspect it is, but the bit that
really caught my eye was the way Adrahil looked on the craftsmen as
being [good men] and worthy of respect. I can see how Boromir might not
see that initially, and it's a mark of Adrahil's wisdom that he does.
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Title: How Grima Lost His Eyebrows · Author: NeumeIndil · Times: Late
Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 800
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-01 03:33:36
This was definitely laugh-out-loud funny! What a tribute to closet
chemists, and a great explanation for why Wormtongue didn't have
eyebrows in the movieverse. Always wondered about that...
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Title: Work Detail · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 789
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-01 11:49:57
LOL! I'm sure that Aragorn will be 'up' to the challenge of getting this
job done. This is an interesting thought though, if Elvish women would
have trouble delivering a man's child.
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Title: Stigmas · Author: Robinka · Genres: Drama: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Series · ID: 105
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-01 11:56:24
Well done. I especially enjoyed these, I think Turin is often underused
in our fandom. He is a strong, tragic, heroic figure and you portrayed
him well in this series.

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Title: Tharbad Crossing · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Men:
Steward's Sons Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 253
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-01 12:03:09
Ouch, that's a tough one. Too bad about the horse. I agree that not
enough is said about Borormir's journey north. it must have been a huge
undertaking - to find a hidden place that they weren't even sure really
existed.
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Title: Blood Brothers · Author: Elana · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 149
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-01 12:10:30
This is fantastic. I have to say, one of the best drabbles I've ever
read. I say that because of the amount of nuance and subtle backstory
that is so clear through the text. With a few simple words, you show us
not just an entire culture, but the stark emotion of two entwined lives
from birth to death. The visual of them bleeding out, together, I can
see them reaching for each other and taking comfort, even in the midst
of the horror, that they are going together.
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Title: And all in evil ended be · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 122
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-01 12:13:03
Argh! Yuck. I totally agree with you. They say that parts of him are
still in the world today and this would be proof.
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Title: The Prince and the Pea · Author: Karri · Genres: Humor: Children
· ID: 158
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-11-01 15:16:58
Hehehe! This is hilarious! Legolas is getting too old for the pea! I
about l laughed myself sick! Poor Estel. That is the sort of thing that
he would have trouble living down falling for. I'd love to see Legolas
bring that up casually on the way to Mordor (or perhaps Legolas would be
too embarassed to admit to being part of such a farce). Great story, Karri!
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Title: Whispers of the Dragon · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 916
Reviewer: lovethosehobbits · 2006-11-01 15:50:47
The depiction of the characters with Shirebound's usual wonderful love
to attention is wonderfully done. She weaves a story that has you
captivated with the first sentence. The loving attention to Frodo and
Pippin by the other members of the fellowship is heartwarming and easy
to believe. I loved this story for the slight angst and h/c themes.
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Title: The Three Towers · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 113
Reviewer: lovethosehobbits · 2006-11-01 15:56:50
A wonderful take on how it must have been for Frodo and his memories of
his captivity in the Tower of the Moon. Having him confront his fears in
order to find some semblance of healing was genius. I highly recommend
this fic as a "what if" story for any who have wondered about the state
of mind of the Ringbearer after the war of the ring.
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Title: An Elf · Author: laiquendi · Races: Elves: Poetry · ID: 725
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-11-01 15:57:32
I love this poem it itty-bitty pieces! Legolas, as you know, is one of
my favorite characters and I absolutely love seeing poems or drabbles
that focus on aspects of him/his personality/his role in life as this
poem does. I am really impressed how you conveyed so much about him as
an elf, son, prince, warrior and friend in such simple verse. And I love
how the poem starts and ends with him being an elf and all that that
means. I gives the poem a real sense of unity that it wouldn't have
without that last stanza. And as usual, you poetry flows so smoothly to
my ear and has such a fitting rhythm. And the imagery is lovely,
especially the first stanza. Such a melancholy progression in this poem,
from beauty to inevitable end. I really love this poem! Great job!
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Title: The Sea Calls Us Home · Author: laiquendi · Races: Elves: Poetry
· ID: 724
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-11-01 15:59:53
Like movieverse Sam, seeing the elves sail makes me sad, so I find this
poem moving. I guess it is the idea of Men ruling the lands after all
the elves have contributed to them. But this is a lovely poem with a
beautiful flow. Loved it!
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Title: Remember This Day Little Brother · Author: laiquendi · Genres:
Drama: Poetry · ID: 923
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-11-01 16:02:50
This is a very nice peom using that title line from the movie but
expanding on it to show how Boromir/Faramir feel. I enjoyed seeing their
closeness in this (I always enjoy seeing well portrayed
Boromir/Faramir). I like the longer/more formal verse and stanzas in
this poem--appropriate to the solem topic and the voice of the people
speaking. Great job!
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Title: Lothlorien · Author: laiquendi · Genres: Drama: Poetry · ID: 925
Reviewer: elliska · 2006-11-01 16:08:28
Oh wow! I've never read this poem of yours before reading for the MEFAs.
This totally gave me chills! The progression of the stanzas, beginning
with the imagery of young, Spring Lothlorien and ending with faded
winter Lothlorien is very powerful--emotionally evocative. But then you
hit that couplet! Very powerful and incredibly sad. Again, I like the
longer stanzas and verse here--it really contirbutes to the solemn tone.
In the beginning, it surprised me because the poem seemed so light, but
when I got to the end, I saw why you had chosen it. I really felt the
decline of the forest and the elves reading this. Very powerfully done!
I loved it! Great job!
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Title: Home At Last · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 883
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-11-01 18:01:56
An interesting question! thoroughly and believably answered.
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Title: Revenge is a dish best served cold · Author: Lialathuveril ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 297
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-01 18:13:53
Lol! Amrothos had that coming. It seems like he overstepped himself
quite thoroughly when Eomer got even Legolas and Gimli to help with his
revenge. I loved the description of the sea creature. The rubbery
feeling... the strange color...
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Title: Planning Ahead · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men · ID: 84
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-01 18:15:05
This is the delightful, quite funny tale of the first encounter of
Arathorn with Gilraen. Unfortunately, Arathorn is in no mood for riddles
-- he fell off a horse and is coping with the aftereffects of too much
pain medication in form of liquor -- and Gilraen is only a little girl.
I love the moment when she tells him matter-of-factly with all of her
wisdom of 5 years that he will give her a ring. Luckily, a decidedly
grumpy Arathorn is rescued from doing any damage by the arrival of a
more reasonable adult.
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Title: Oasis · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 259
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-01 18:16:59
A nice little glimpse into the travels of Thorongil and the dangers of
the desert of Harad. I like the vivid description of the desert with the
burning sun.
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Title: First Night · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: War of the
Ring · ID: 400
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-11-01 18:17:46
This was a good idea but I thought the writing too formal and stiff -
more like Tolkien than Pippin, or what I imagine goes on in his head.
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Title: The Return of the Shadow · Author: juno_magic · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 330
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-01 18:26:25
Juno said in her summary that this story is mainly based on her
Junoverse, but I don't think you need to know her other stories to enjoy
this one. Sure, if you don't know the other stories, you will miss some
of the clues as to who Elentar is early on, but all is explained in due
time.

The two main characters, Elentar and Mina, are very well drawn and
strong, distinct characters. From chapter to chapter you want to see
where they are going, and the story has some surprising twists. I did a
double take when Mozart showed up...

The story starts on a dreary November day in Berlin and I think the
description is spot on. I was on just such a day in Berlin in November.
This description very effectively sets the mood for the early chapters.
A melancholy is weaving through these chapters which in the latest
chapters playing in the modern time starts to brighten. It is spring and
everything looks better, outside and for the main characters. And then
they find the way to ME and everything is turned upside down again.

So far the story is firmly centered on OCs with mostly some names of
canon characters thrown in. Only in the latest published chapters the
first canon character, and of all people it is Celebrian, shows up. But
the story is written in the spirit of Tolkien's writings and I know from
Juno's other stories that when this story turns back to ME it will fit
in seamlessly with Tolkien's world. The first glimpse of is seen in the
last two chapters which show a surprising twist to what I expected.
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Title: Arwen's Heart · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance · ID: 139
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-01 18:27:29
This is a great story about Arwen. She gets real in a way I haven't seen
before. Although, I admit I haven't read that many stories about Arwen.
The elves in this story are more down-to-earth than I have seen in most
stories. They are missing a bit of the ethereal, but in a good way. They
and their motives are easier to understand, and I feel more connected to
them than in other stories. I was touched by Arwen's end. That in the
end it was something beautiful for her even if she experienced a lot of
pain before she could let go. It was harder for the elves she left
behind, since they cannot really understand the Gift of Men.
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Title: The Circle · Author: Karenator · Races: Men · ID: 778
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-01 18:28:11
This is a nice little story about the life of the Rangers. Halbarad
takes his young son on his first patrol. I love the way the relationship
between father and son is portrayed. Halbarad doesn't really know what
to make of this son who is so different from his other children. But in
the course of this patrol, he gets to know this child better and can see
the dreamer knows when it is time to be grounded in reality.
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Title: Respite · Author: Nesta · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 750
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-01 18:29:37
This was a beautiful little scene between Faramir and Eowyn. With a few
words you conjured up a lazy afternoon with perfect weather. It was nice
to see that Faramir and Eowyn were able to be so relaxed with each
other. I liked the hint to different customs they had to adjust to from
both sides. And that was a great extension to the typical fairytale
ending: [And they lived together through the years, and loved and
quarrelled and hurt and forgave each other and were as happy as they
well could be]

Well done.
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Title: Four Conversations and A Dream · Author: Forodwaith · Times: The
Great Years: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 90
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-01 18:30:30
This is a nice little story set after Arwen's wedding and before the
hobbits leave for the shire. Arwen gradually becomes aware of how her
choice affects her. She catalogues the changes in her she can feel, but
she still can't understand them.
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Title: [untitled] He: Gimli fic prompt #84 · Author: Thevina Finduilas ·
Races: Dwarves · ID: 718
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-11-01 18:36:26
I continue to to find joy and wonder in the hidden world of Dwarves you
create through your words. Gimli's interior monologue is nonetheless
inimitably Gimli, and his reasoning and self-reflexive arguing
will-thought out and true.
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Title: The Princess and the Horse Lord · Author: Oshun · Genres:
Romance: Incomplete · ID: 425
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-11-01 20:01:52
Oshun writes a highly enjoyable tale. She takes her canon very
seriously, does heavy research, and it shows. All the same, her story is
not in the least derivative. She does not make the mistake that plagues
many fanfic writers: trying to imitate Tolkien. Nor does she commit the
opposite sin: Middle-earth is there only in name. Instead, her story is
the best of fanfic: recognizably Middle-earth, and something wholly new.

She excels at showing imaginative, but canon-based, cultural differences
between north and south Gondor and the Belfalas coastal area and between
the different races--as well as between peredhil and true Elves;
Imladris compared to Mirkwood and the Silvan elven influence.

Lothiriel is a living, breathing young woman here: motivated, principled
and committed (particularly on her desire to help in the reconstruction
of Arda) but often low on judgment--which provides a lot of the fun of
the tale. Like real life, it is serious and funny all at once.

Characterization is oshun's strength. She especially likes to people her
tale with handsome and fascinating men. Faramir is gorgeous and has a
lighter side--young by Numenorean standards and in love--not all
angst-ridden and insecure. Legolas is "Elven" all the way--whimsical,
arty and dead-serious with his bow. Aragorn (always my favorite) is
in-character also, wise and funny.

Oshun has a lot of fun with her story, and the reader will too. It's
different and unexpected--a Middle-earth soap opera of sorts, but never
making light of the important things. And the sex is really, really fun,
and done with just the right touch of erotic but not raunchy.

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Title: The Summons · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 254
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-11-01 21:27:38
I thought this a very true and insightful portrait of Aragorn, but
perhaps what moved me most was the brief, yet tender portrait of
Denethor that appears at the end, as seen through Aragorn's eyes.
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Title: Until the King Returns · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette ·
ID: 540
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-11-01 23:49:49
This was a fascinating viewpoint that I would have never thought of on
my own. By the end I could see how the specter of the Kinstrife drove
Mardil to the choice he made. I think the fact that he does not rest
easy in his decision justifies the "Good Steward" designation he
received. In the end, he did it not for his own gain but for the good of
his beloved Gondor. His reflections comparing his actions to those of
Sauron's and the downfall of Numenor were especially telling.

I found the characterizations solid and consistent with the very little
we do know. Tidbits of canon are smoothly worked in and bring up both
past and future events. The political maneuverings were believable and
presented clearly.

I also appreciated the author's notes highlighting the references made
within the story itself - they were indeed appropriate and added even
more depth for me.
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Title: The Standard-Bearer · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Men:
Vignette · ID: 716
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-11-01 23:53:08
Very nice. I thought the language of the piece was formal without being
stilted, and Halbarad being mentored by Aragorn (as opposed to the other
way around) was a refreshing angle. Halbarad's internal reflections are
well done, and I especially liked, ["...he has experienced and seen so
much that he now appears to carry some of each race within himself. The
price paid for that wealth is that he now belongs utterly to none of
us."] I thought it was a perceptive and poignant observation.
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Title: Ships Passing · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 302
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-11-01 23:54:29
A unique encounter that should have occurred. The characterizations are
nicely handled, with Faramir filling in Halbarad's for us based on
overheard conversations. His internal reflections are at turns moving
and a bit chilling (as when he thinks on his father), and perceptive as
well (Halbarad as Steward of the North).
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Title: In the Shadow of Hope · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Men:
Vignette · ID: 715
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-11-01 23:55:22
I enjoyed this glimpse into Eowyn's mind so much because Thevina doesn't
just tell us about her feelings, but shows it through Eowyn's restless
actions and thoughts (listing herbs, watching insects, etc.). By melding
the two together, Eowyn's boredom and frustration are intimately understood.

Eowyn's inner voice and characterization are very close to what my inner
imaginings have held. Her reflections on Merry were wonderful -
insightful without being overly sentimental. And of course I loved that
in the midst of this, in answer to her "prayer," up steps Faramir in a
nice bit of foreshadowing.
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Title: Prison · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 794
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-11-01 23:56:06
Very good characterization of Eomer: his concerns, his reactions to
being trapped and unable to protect his sister and king - and especially
his hope, blooming at the end. Estel filling his heart, as love for his
friend and fellow king will one day.
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Title: An Empty Saddle to Fill · Author: Anoriath · Races: Men: Vignette
· ID: 752
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-11-01 23:56:21
Eowyn and Theodred exchange so few words, and yet I was left feeling
that I understood volumes about their relationship. The language of the
story was as rolling, poetic and melodious as we are always told the
language of Rohan is supposed to be. I was caught by surprise during the
feinted attack and defense, and the incident and its aftermath spoke
much of both the concern and esteem with which Theodred holds his cousin.

The characters are very well-developed here: Eowyn as strong, beautiful
and sharp as steel; Theodred perceptive, protective, doing what he can
to stem the evil taking root in his land - a true king's son. The dark
atmosphere pervading Edoras is captured perfectly, and the dialogue was
sharp and telling. I loved Theodred's connections with Eorl, and how
even if Eowyn is the last of that house, she will uphold its honor and
take revenge for its demise.
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Title: The Road Not Taken · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 104
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2006-11-01 23:56:41
Branwyn smoothly works in many layers of meaning into this short work.
The beautiful descriptions of the autumn woods and the unused road
perfectly complement the referenced poem, as well as setting a tone of
ending and farewells. The lonely and wild swan call brought to mind not
just Boromir's impending travels, but his heritage from his mother. It
also enabled introducing ["ilfete"], which led to Boromir's foreshadowed
misunderstanding. The ending left me thinking of the last line of the
poem, and what a difference indeed that this parting led to - for
Boromir, his family and the Fellowship.
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Title: The Parting Gift · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 948
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-11-02 00:13:15
A touching glimpse of a relationship that has always intrigued me for
the redemption it seemed to grant Maglor, and a lovely and logical
explanation for the source of Elrond's harp. Imhiriel has managed to
suggest a great deal given the constraints of the drabble format...just
the phrase [Despite everything.....] speaks volumes. And only Elrond
lingered...a hint of the different paths the brothers will choose?
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Title: Father and Daughter · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 943
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-11-02 00:16:03
While emphasizing the canonical reason for Galadriel's refusal to return
to Valinor at the end of the War of Wrath--her pride and ambition--this
deeply moving ficlet also presents a very convincing secondary reason
that I hadn't considered before: her love of Celeborn. While Finarfin
urges them both to return with him, and while Celeborn makes no direct
reply, we know well his ties to Middle-earth...ties that caused him to
linger even after his wife returned over Sea at last. The last image, of
gold and silver hair mingling in the breeze, is lovely, recalling
Faramir and Eowyn in ROTK.
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Title: Benison · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 67
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 00:19:14
This was beautiful. There are a number of things I like about it: the
idea that Eowyn is quite familiar with a sewing workbasket and its
accoutrements--in too many fics, she is shown as being ignorant of the
more "womanly arts", not something I would believe of a high-born woman
in that culture; the idea that she could find out things about her
long-dead mother-in-law from those items--very much something I believe
she would think of; and finally, the beautiful connection she feels, of
realizing they both love/loved Faramir, and her sense that she has
Finduilas' blessing! A lovely and touching fic.
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Title: Birthdays · Author: Rabidsamfan · Genres: Drama: Remembering ·
ID: 988
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 00:25:20
Rabidsamfan has such a wonderful grip on Samwise Gamgee and his family.
She shows here just how good a handle she has on little Elanor, who
makes it her mission to make sure her Sam-dad is cheered up on her
birthday, which also happens to be the anniversary of the day the Ring
went into the fire. This is so sweet and sad and touching, and I love
the hobbity ending.
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Title: The Hardest Lesson · Author: mistycracraft · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 231
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 00:29:31
Young Estel here must learn to deal with the most difficult task a
healer has--losing a patient. With Elrond's guidance, he manages to find
a way to cope. Very insightful and touching.
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Title: 17 Cunning Corsairs · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 244
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-11-02 00:41:00
Ah, the drudgery of being a "good girl"! This ficlet celebrates the
universal allure of pirates--even in Middle-earth. One can easily
imagine being sent to Umbar as a standard parental threat in the coastal
region of Dol Amroth. But Imrahil seems clueless that his adventurous
daughter regards this prospect as reward, not punishment.

Stefania cites the Brecht-Weill song "Pirate Jenny" as an inspiration.
For me, her ficlet also recalls the charming pirate orphans of Penzance
and some of A.A. Milne's knowing, witty poems of early childhood.
["Independence," "The Good Little Girl," etc.] Very nicely done!


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Title: An Exaltation of Larks · Author: Ibilover · Times: The Great
Years · ID: 178
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 00:42:25
I loved this story so much that I wanted to nominate it. However,
someone else beat me to it! There is just so much to love here--the
gentle friendship being developed by Aragorn and Boromir, and the
finding out of something they have in common. In addition is the
delightfulness of the words of various terms of venery ["a kindle of
kittens"] ["a gaggle of geese"] and the game they make of naming the
hobbits--I especially love ["a nestle of halflings"]. Even though the
hobbits themselves say not a single word in the story, they are very
much the heart of it. My favorite moment is Gandalf grumpily speaking up
and telling them of the ["hobbitpile"] which is delightful on so many
levels: from the nod to fanon to Gandalf's own quirky personality coming
to the fore. And I have to say, a close second is the moment when one of
the sleeping hobbits says ["pass the butter"]! LOL! That was *so*
perfect! An absolute gem of a story!
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Title: Hidden on the Mountain · Author: Imhiriel · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 945
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-11-02 00:44:19
Wow, what an original POV this drabble has! And what an interesting
idea, that it was Gandalf who originally plucked and planted the fruit
of the White Tree. I had always imagined this as the work of a king of
Gondor, but Imhiriel's version offers a logical explanation for how
Gandalf knew where to lead Aragorn.
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Title: Wizardry · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 179
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-11-02 00:47:18
Gandalf and Aragorn may not laugh often, but it's nice when it happens!
A well-imagined moment between these two hunters, and an interesting
parallel to Frodo's and Sam's later frustration in those same
labyrinthine hills.
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Title: Never Let Go · Author: ann_arien · Genres: Drama: First Age Elves
· ID: 621
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 00:52:11
A bit of angsty Elf-slash. I am afraid I am not conversant enough with
the Silm to follow it.
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Title: Night Phantoms · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 696
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 01:00:20
Faramir lovingly tends to Eowyn when dark memories of her time before
she met him bring on nightmares of Grima. I love his thoughts here, his
gentle concern, his care for her dignity--both in not taking physical
advantage of her neediness, and in not allowing her to be embarrassed by
waking her maids. It's so clear that at some point these roles will be
reversed, and Eowyn will tend *his* ill dreams. The union between these
two is one of the most interesting in canon, and I love the way the
author has captured their dynamic.
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Title: Trust · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama · ID: 216
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 01:44:00
This is another story featuring the OC Andrahar, whom the author shares
with a couple of other writers. While I have to admit to skipping some
slashier sections of this, I got the gist of it, and I found it very
intriguing in the intimations of the relationship of Denethor to both
his sons and to Finduilas. I also like the way Boromir is drawn as
politically astute, and I love the interpretation of Imrahil in this
universe.
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Title: Holding Moonlight · Author: Claudia · Genres: Romance · ID: 681
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 01:51:00
Frodo/Halbarad: even though I find interspecies slash improbable, this
was touchingly written.
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Title: The Last Thing He Said · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama · ID: 294
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 01:56:01
Various four-legged creatures, and their POV of Aragorn. All of these
little vignettes were sharp, and suited to the nature of each animal,
but I have to say, the first one was the most touching and memorable.
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Title: Dance on the Way Down · Author: Aliana · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 734
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2006-11-02 02:10:25
While I get the feeling that I might have missed something in the
backstory, I enjoyed the atmosphere of the story, the air of nostalgia
and memory. Very lyrical and bittersweet.
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Title: defining a circle shape through points · Author: Dana · Races:
Hobbits: Merry & Pippin · ID: 569
Reviewer: fantasyfanoftorn · 2006-11-02 14:26:40
This is a lovely, sensuous story. The descriptions are vivid and the
emotions are real. Bittersweet, of course, but you can really feel the
relationship between Merry and Pippin as it changes, yet remains the
same. Pippin helps Merry remember his cheer, and Merry helps Pippin sort
out his thinking. What comes through overwhelmingly is how grounded they
are in each other.
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Title: Come and Catch Me · Author: storyfish · Races: Hobbits: Merry &
Pippin · ID: 236
Reviewer: fantasyfanoftorn · 2006-11-02 14:38:32
Merry knows when he is dreaming, and that all his dreams are of Pippin
leaving him behind, but he doesn't know that what seems like reality to
him is also a dream of a sort. All the time they are separated, by
distance or illness or fear, nothing is quite real to him, and it isn't
until Pippin opens his eyes does he come back to himself (with help from
a pereptive Aragorn). I like the idea that Pippin is the Shire to him,
that he defineswhat it means to be a hobbit to Merry. I suspect to all
of them, really, and that is as good a reason for Gandalf to insist
Elrond send him along, as the real deeds that Pippin accomplished onthe
quest. Pippin is solid ground, indeed.
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Title: Pearl of Great Price · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 804
Reviewer: fantasyfanoftorn · 2006-11-02 15:00:06
This is another story by one of my favorite authors that features a
character that isn't much more than a name of the pages of the family
tree and a throwaway remark in one of Tolkien's letters. Pearl becomes
one of the strong ladies of the Shire in this story, moving from being a
farmer's daughter to the companion of the formidable Lalia with grace
and hobbitsense. Two other characters are brought to life as well -
Lalia the Fat, and Lindelea manages to make you both hate her and yet
feel a little bit of sympathy for her, and her son Ferumbras, a
character who moves beyond weak and contemptable to another who shows
the strength of the Tooks. Even the minor characters - Rosemary, Viola
and Bittersweet, Isum, are well drawn and interesting, adding more
layers to what has become a detailed and fascinating extended
examination of the Took clan. Every detail is considered,and has
implications for other stories. In this story especially, much is set up
that impacts on the future relationship of Paladin and Pippin, and the
early character of Ferdi.

But the focus here is on Pearl, and her movement through the intricate
and tricky political machinations of one of the great politicians of the
Tooks, Lalia. Pearl never stoops to Lalia's cruelty and avarice, but she
is Lalia's match none the less in cunning. The difference is that her
actions, including her plans to marry Ferumbas herself, are motivated by
a selfless love, for concern for her family, and a typical hobbity sense
of caring. In the end, the little bit of canon that there is for this
incident is satisfied, and pretty much everyone gets a happy ending
(except Ferumbras, possibly, and he makes the best of it that he can.)
Along the way, there's plenty of anticipation and intrigue and trademark
hobbity wit, which makes a story of 70,900 words and 37 chapters just
fly by.
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Title: An Army of Tooks · Author: Mariole · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 831
Reviewer: fantasyfanoftorn · 2006-11-02 15:27:04
This story is a gapfiller for the night that Pippin returned to the
Great Smials to raise an army of Tooks for the Battle of Bywater.

I was struck with Pippin's maturity here. The events of the quest have
changed him at a fundamental level, and he realizes his place as a
leader of his people. There is a lot of reflection about how strange it
is to come home again, whether home is the same or very changed (or both
at once) when you are not the same. Physically, in height and dress and
speech, or mentally and emotionally, in wisdom and experience and resolve.

I also was struck by the character of Paladin. Here is a worthy Thain of
the Shire - farsighted, courageous, and very frustrated by circumstance
that has not let him do what he feels he must - he has not been able to
save or protect the whole Shire, and until Pippin returns, he could see
no way out of his dilemma. A nice change from fics I've read where
Paladin is weak and insular.

A very satisfying story.
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Title: Changes and Constancy · Author: Lily · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 263
Reviewer: fantasyfanoftorn · 2006-11-02 15:41:13
This is a fun little story. Frodo's vanity is endearing, and Pippin's
teasing is hobbity. The tone is light and there is a clear fondness
between the cousins. But despite that, it is only a temporary moment of
care-less times. All post-quest Frodo stories are bittersweet after all,
and the fine lines and grey hairs are only the beginning of a decline
that ends much more sadly. Still, it's good to be reminded that laughter
and love prevailed for at least a little while!
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Title: First Night · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: War of the
Ring · ID: 400
Reviewer: fantasyfanoftorn · 2006-11-02 16:23:43
Poor Pippin alone in Minas Tirith. He feels lonely, but even more so
there is the sharp feeling that he doesn't fit there, in a cold dark
city of stone, and he's not sure if he's ever going to feel natural,
himself, and at home again. Even in his dreams, he can't quite reach the
loved ones he misses. A nice little mood piece and gapfiller.
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Title: A Healer's Tale · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits · ID: 861
Reviewer: fantasyfanoftorn · 2006-11-02 16:56:01
Of all the stories Lindelea has written, I think this is one of the most
powerful. It interweaves two connected tales: the story of Pippin's near
death from pneumonia after he becomes Thain, told from the point of view
of the healer who has taken care of him his entire life, and her own
story of coming to the Tooks, finding acceptance and love, and growing
in relationship to all the familiar characters of Pippin, Paladin and
Esmeralda, Merry and his family, and the tooks of the Smials including
Ferdinand, Reginard and Everard.

Lindelea is the master of telling a story from more than one point of
view, and this story elaborates on an incident from the epic "At the End
of His Rope." But what was one chapter in a 96-chapter adventure that
included a crippling accident, the births of children, a journey to
Gondor, famine and feast, a memorable appearance by Frodo, an invasion
of ruffians and another crisis for Pippin, now becomes a long, slow
examination in 51 chapters of just what it means to be a hobbit.

It has all manner of hobbity goodness in it. There at plenty of Tooks,
with their maddening, endearing ways, and enough Brandybucks and an
occasional Baggins to satisfy. There is little Pippin, and little Merry,
who are adorable beyond words, but besides that it is fascinating to
hear the stories of the adventures that went into making them the
hobbits that they needed to be, in later challenges. There are even
disagreeable hobbits, Bracegirdles and the like, to liven up the story
and make you appreciate the good hobbits all the more. There is wit, and
wisdom, and above all there is love. The sheer amount of love that is in
this story is just amazing.

The is the love between cousins, new and growing, tried and strong,
desperate and overwhelming. There is the easy love between family of
older generations, before cares and responsibilities weary them. There
is love of the admirable kind, of an apprentice to a master, several
times over, and the return of that love heaping measure full. There is
love, tender and shy, for a new beloved, and that same love, still
tender but sacrificing and supporting and unwavering, throughout many
years. These are hobbits at their absolute best.

The character of Woodruff is so beautifully realized in this story.
Lindelea has a marvelous talent in drawing characters from the back
pages of the story, and making them real and whole and so much someone I
would love to know in my own life. Woodruff isnt some idealized hobbit
 she has her blind spots and her indecision and her troubles, but she
makes a place for herself by pluck and luck and her own competence and
the fact that she really does care for every one of her patients,
maddening as they can be sometimes, being Tooks.

The amount of agony and Pippin goes though and the admiration for the
strong, honorable character he has become by the time of this story
brings tears to the eye. The original chapters in At the End of His
Rope are hard enough. Pippin is failing, losing the fight at last, but
a cure is found, and the celebration is long and joyous. In this story,
the pain goes on and on, told from the perfect point of view of the one
who had to count every single agonizing breath, and fight for him after
hed stopped fighting for himself, and bear the bitter burden of knowing
that no matter how hard she fought, the battle was bound to end in failure.

The interspersing of Woodruffs backstory with Pippins struggle for
breath is so perfectly done. It breaks up the unremitting agony, lets us
see their long history together and why she cares so much for him. I
kept noticing little parallels through the whole story, little clever
things that tie the whole tale together. that makes me appreciate all
over again just how good Lindelea's stories are, how well-crafted and
beautifully written and so resonant with the spirit of Middle-earth
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