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Title: The Archives Incident · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Adventure: Minas Tirith · ID: 38
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2007-10-11 15:59:25
Poor Frodo - trapped in a library. He must feel halfway between horror
and euphoria. Although being without food and with rats might make the
experience rather less pleasurable. Yes, it's a good job they were
rescued when they were!

Get Menelcar to put that ... charming poem ... to music! Although it
might be best if he premiered it at a private gathering. I don't think
Aragorn would much appreciate a public rendition. (And Frodo is
kind-hearted enough to wish to keep the humiliation private.)

This is a most entertaining story, Dreamflower.




Title: Tea and Seedcake and the Influence of Hobbits · Author: Baggins
Babe · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 492
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-11 16:25:00
This is a delightful story, making use of an OC named Merlindor. He is
a merchant who is arriving in Minas Tirith for the first time since
the end of the War, and he notices several things happening in the
city that are the result of the influence of hobbits. His first time
attending a hobbit-style 'tea' is wonderfully warm, funny and
heartfelt. This story really brings home the fact that Tolkien
considered hobbits to be central to his story; not just Frodo and Sam,
but the other hobbits as well.

Well done.

Title: Some Dark Place · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 226
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-11 20:27:52
A thoughtful and beautifully constructed story which answers a
question in the text which has always intrigued this reader. I am not
a fan of the horror genre, but do like the relationship of Aragorn and
Halbarad, having been intrigued by particularly by Halbarad as he is
protrayed in the RotK segment of LotR. This is one friendship that I
would like to pursue myself some day. You do it so well with sparse,
simple dialogue and the "thank you" that Aragorn gives him amounting
to a single grasp of the shoulder of a true and trusted friend.
Aragorn's fear is papable, but you manage to convey the concept that
these wraiths are not capable of being outwitted and vanquished
despite the terror they induce.

Title: The Accidental King: Five Reasons Why Finarfin Deserves an
Appreciation Month · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 5
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-11 21:05:46
Dawn's exploration of the role of Finarfin in the context of the
Silmarillion and in comparison to other members of his illustrious
family is an interesting read. As she notes it is far too easy to
dismiss Finarfin as a dull and/or underchieving member of a family
filled with rash and intense overachievers. The other side of the
coin, the even less appealing one for me, is Finarfin as a
mild-mannered saint among a crowd of much more attractive sinners. I
am glad that she tries to put to rest to the concept that the only
motivation Finarfin could possibly have for returning to Aman is
either fear or subservient respect for the Valar. I presume, as she
does, that if either of those were the case he would not have traveled
as far as he did.

I still find it hard to accept Finarfin as the wisest of Finwë's sons.
The most pragmatic or sycophantic? I would not go so far as to say
that either. Perhaps he is neither, but rather, unlike most of his
close kinsman, does not have an ego the size of Arda and is able to
step back and make decisions regarding where he could most readily
serve his people. Who would have taken charge of the Noldor in his
absence? Or was anyone really needed to fill this role? Dawn asserts
that someone was needed and that Finarfin knew that and took upon
himself that responsibility. Whether or not one agrees with her
position, she raises an interesting discussion in this article and
provides her own logical and thoughtful considerations. I would
definitely agree with Dawn on one question. Finarfin is interesting.
Also, he produced children who were driven, brilliant and bold. A dull
non-entity is unlikely to do that.

Title: Second Mum · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama: The Shire · ID: 82
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-12 02:07:05
A gentle tapestry of hobbit life and traditions; spotlighting the
connection between Frodo and the one who helped raise him, Esmerelda
Brandybuck, from Frodo's birth to Esme's passing. Larner invests the
story with her usual rich detail.

Title: Glimpses from Cormallen · Author: Marigold · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 614
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-12 02:24:35
These are a heartwarming and delightful series of drabbles detailing
Pippin's recovery at Cormallen.
Pippin is occasionally fretful, but his brave spirit always shines
through as does Merry's devotion to him.
I especially enjoyed the drabble featuring Aragorn where the Hobbit
makes light of the King's warning that his injury might never
completely heal.I also enjoyed the hints that Merry might make a
future Healer.

Title: The Lesson · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 29
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 08:18:57
Ah, how Branwyn has managed to show how those intended to be men of
war are led into their profession, and how insidious our beloved
Faramir finds that process. Exquisitely done.

Title: Hazardous Going · Author: Auntiemeesh · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 788
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 08:33:14
A winter trip between Crickhollow and the Great Smials goes wrong when
Pippin's pony puts her foot through the ice on a puddle and the young
Took gets thrown. Merry has good reason to be grateful to Elrond,
Aragorn, and the other healers he met on the quest for the lessons in
healing and herblore he's absorbed.

A marvelous vignette of Hobbit practicality and caring.

Title: Beauty · Author: Marta · Races: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 646
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 08:42:44
We know that Samwise Gamgee had a special love, quite different from
what he felt for his Rosie, for Frodo Baggins, and here it's
eloquently expressed.

Title: Three Arrows · Author: HikoMokushi · Genres: Drama: With Merry
· ID: 717
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 08:43:55
Boromir's sacrifice for Merry and Pippin as recounted by Merry, this
is gently and poignantly expressed.

Title: Glimpse of Glory · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 575
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 08:45:51
Ah, what Galadriel thought as she looked on Frodo after he offered her
the Ring. Good reason indeed to gasp, I think, and wonderful response
to the challenge prompt.

Title: Aftershocks · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Second Age: Drabble ·
ID: 504
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 08:50:05
If Elendil had made landfall in southern Gondor, it would be probable
he would indeed have contacted his kinsman who was considered Lord of
Cobas, later to be Dol Amroth.

Love seeing this lord's love for his land and people.

Title: Behold the King · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 433
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 08:59:23
The King has returned, and we have two vignettes, as the new Steward
Faramir prepares for the coronation on the morrow, and as the new King
accepts the burden for which he has been prepared all these long years.

One of Linda Hoyland's best works.

Title: More Than Just Years · Author: Llinos · Genres: Adventure:
Minas Tirith · ID: 362
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 09:03:10
As a tiny Hobbit child, Pippin was given a silver ear of wheat as a
charm against fear by Gandalf; and as (movie-verse) Pippin climbs the
stack to the beacon of Minas Tirith he loses it, only to learn that
the courage he'd always felt when he held and looked on it was within
himself the whole time.

A wonderful look at child-life within the Shire.

Title: Pippin's Little Experiment · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 291
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 09:14:22
Visiting an inn for Men as well as Hobbits, perhaps Pippin could be
forgiven for his desire to see just how springy a bed for Men might
be--until he managed to bounce out the window and avoid a great fall
only at the expense of embarrassment and a few splinters. And after
that Frodo still wanted his other tobacco pouch!

Marvelous fun. (And beware tobacco bargains offered by the S-Bs.)

Title: Great Books · Author: Lady Aranel · Genres: Humor · ID: 149
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 09:26:54
It is Legolas's first visit to Imladris, and the twins are set on
convincing him to avoid seeking to seduce their sister.

Humorous, although I doubt Arwen was in much danger, even if she had
been reading the tale of Beren and Luthien.

Title: Fruition · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 7
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 09:36:14
A marvelous and chilling Might-Have-Been had Adrahil, Imrahil, and
Finduilas conspired to take the rule of Gondor by manipulating and
betraying Denethor and Thorongil into a duel to the death. Well, well
written.

Title: The Gates · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 09:48:27
Gimli had hoped to have a hand in the forging of the new gates for his
friend Aragorn's new city, but learns that dealing with the folk of
Gondor to see the project through is perhaps more important in the end
is more important than the forgework needed.

Beautiful characterizations.

Title: Thoughts About The Old Forest · Author: pippinfan88 · Races:
Hobbits: Gapfiller · ID: 141
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 09:57:37
As they spend their one night in the Crickhollow house before daring
the Old Forest, the conspirators and Frodo each has his own thoughts
on what this adventure might mean.

A marvelous look at anxiety and anticipation.

Title: Duty Bound · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 212
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 10:08:01
There must be progeny of the House of Hurin to see to it the
Stewardship does not fail, and for Boromir--once--there was a
marriage. It did not last long, and he was only just beginning to
appreciate his young bride when he lost her and their infant son to
death. Now Pippin's question brings that time back to him--the
unexpected pleasure of finding she had merit and skills and her own
tenderness. But he's unwilling to speak openly of that lost chance for
happiness....

Very poignant, and well written as Bodkin's works always are.

Title: Relaxation Techniques · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Romance:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 283
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 10:14:14
A bad day at the office has nothing on an afternoon spent listening to
the oily talk of Grima Wormtongue. At least Boromir is there to help
Theoden relax....

Title: Those Darned Socks! · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 188
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-12 10:14:21
Okay, the title of this story baited me. At first I thought, that's an
alluring title, but in the end, my curiosity got the better of me. Set
within the allusive sock!verse and the long road home!verse, I love
the opening sequence and Amanda establishes a vivid & homely scene.
The ficlet is simple of nature, yet it is a treat to get this insight
in Boromir's mind where he realises that in his pride he could have
learnt to master a simple skill as mending his socks when he had the
chance. The author wove the memories of the quest and Boromir's youth
into this little story very effectively, making sure that those who
are not familiar with both verses still can find their bearings when
reading this. Lovely written and now I just need to read the other
piece in the sock!verse.

Title: Friendship of Their Kind · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Early
Third Age: 1-2850 TA · ID: 425
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 10:27:04
Aragost has reason to be upset with two of his men as they alert the
dragon they've been hunting before their fellows are quite ready. So
they are sent within the dragon's cave to see if the female they've
slain left young, and they find bodies of men taken as prey and a
cache of eggs.

Now to learn the difference between the honor of the Dunedain and the
ways of the Enemy.

Very thought provoking.

Title: Time · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 414
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-12 10:36:38
Legolas' investigation into the fate of one family in Ithilien that
didn't leave quickly enough was very touching to me. His folk have
endured such horrors as well, but of course Elves die and then get
better. His horror that folk could live and die and be forgotten is
both an interesting look at the way Elves regard memory and an
exploration of their respect for life. Faramir's assistance in the
matter-giving him access to the archives, hunting down witnesses that
might be able to tell him what he wants to know, is in keeping with
the young Steward who loves knowledge so much. Loved the scene with
Mablung as well! A beautiful yet somber story, that shows a Legolas
who is a caring prince as well as a warrior.

Title: Responsibility · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 720
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-12 10:40:58
A chilling look at the sort of choices Denethor's decree causes
Faramir. It is very like him to spare his men the guilt of such an
action and do what is necessary himself.

Title: In This These Days of Glory: From Autumn to Spring · Author:
Dana · Races: Hobbits: Gapfiller · ID: 567
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 10:55:19
And we see the evil of the Time of Troubles begin to grow, as Lotho
and Lobelia realise that the possession of Bag End fails to give them
the respect they felt they deserved. And things build until the day
Rosie knows that Sam WILL come home once more.

Shivery.

Title: Dragonfire · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Adventure · ID: 482
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 10:58:42
So often does White Wolf send Aragorn and Legolas in to dangerous
situations, and this one is worse than many, for between an
enchantress with magic gems to enslave others and enrich herself at
the expense of their life force and a dragon--even one in debt to
themselves, they are in for quite a time. But if anyone can prevail,
it is this pair.

Ingenious and fascinating.

Title: Triolet: The Weaver's Song · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Poetry · ID: 553
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 11:01:51
A marvelous poem-charm to add warmth and richness and protection to
the cloth from which Boromir's cloak is made.

The rhyme scheme and scanning are perfect, as are the images the poem
evokes. As always, Ann says so much in so few words, yet does so
richly and with great beauty.

Title: Shadows of a Nameless Fear · Author: Budgielover · Genres:
Adventure: Minas Tirith · ID: 766
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 11:04:38
The war is over, perhaps, but not the danger to Frodo and his friends
and companions. For men and orcs desire to take the Ringbearer and
enrich themselves--and avenge themselves--through him. But his friends
will not allow him to know all the danger....

A fascinating tale of adventure within and without the walls of Minas
Tirith.

Title: A Useful Skill · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children ·
ID: 46
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-12 11:06:18
Oh, this was very touching and I am glad that I followed the link from
AmandaK's story [Darn those socks] to this one. I love Denethor's
close involvement in his son's upbringing, his concerns and worries
that Faramir learns the right skills is so understandable here.
Faramir's eagerness to show what he's doing (aww, so cute!) and
Denethor's reaction to it shows me a Denethor of who I think he is: a
complicated man but a good and devoted dad. What I specifically liked
about this short story was how Denethor stood still and tried to
remember who taught him to darn those socks, making him very human to
me. The author mingles memories of the past with the present in a very
effective manner. In addition, please stop flinging with those
nuzguls: no wonder that they bite our ankles so hard, they must be
preparing for the slinging around like you girls do! ;)

Title: Rauros, golden Rauros-falls · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor:
Drabble · ID: 624
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 11:07:34
Oh, Imhiriel--what you've done to poor Boromir! I think he needs
Granny Weatherwax's sign--the one that reads I HAIN'T DEAD YET! Oh,
but I know I shouldn't laugh, not with him going over----

Title: Lamentable Tidings · Author: rhyselle · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 742
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-12 11:15:42
Whew! Darkfic indeed, at least for poor Faramir! But to counter that
darkness we have a Boromir who is still alive and a Denethor who is
roused by his younger son's fate to defiance rather than despair. Good
characterizations throughout, though of course I would love to see
some of the back-stories hinted at here-Boromir at Amon Hen and at
Helm's Deep. The latter would be particularly interesting, since no
one I know of has covered it. The relationships between characters are
also well-done-Boromir's now-easy cooperation with Aragorn (I
particularly love the scene where Aragorn has him watch while he looks
in the palantir), his connection with his younger brother, which has
him full of fear and trepidation, and Pippin's new but sympathetic
service to Denethor.

I do hope that you will finish this-I want to know how it all ends!

Title: A Kingly Discussion · Author: GamgeeFest · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 780
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 11:17:37
The evening at the inn waxes interesting as they discuss the thank-you
letter the Gaffer received from the King. Odd folks, Men are--needing
to be reminded who their fathers are and wearin' shoes and all, and
wanderin' about through the wild. What a way to pick a
leader--choosin' one as needed to be brought up by Elves! But he's
right polite!

Brings a nice smile to one's face, this one does.

Title: Too Many Adverbs · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble ·
ID: 660
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 11:20:02
A frustrated tutor tries to deal with a recalictrant student who
doesn't wish to study grammar. So, the orcs may be armed with parts of
speech? Heh!

Title: Fun with Farm'n · Author: Súlriel · Races: Villains: Drabble ·
ID: 269
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 11:23:22
Ooh--it's time to fertilize the field, but it appears the farmer ain't
dead yet. Orcs have an ODD and disgusting way of farming!

Definitely took me by surprise! Have some fun, will they? (Shivers!)

Title: The Last Temptation · Author: Maeve Riannon · Genres: Drama:
Second Age or Earlier · ID: 264
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 13:29:59
Intimately sad, the fate of Melian and her grandchildren. Yes, Morgoth
had been fair once, but was now brought to ugliness; will it be the
same with this Maia? But to watch the children die....

Title: A Thankless Task · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Drama: Youth ·
ID: 49
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-12 13:40:43
Oh, this was another gem of Edoraslass set in the sock!universe: it
almost picks up after [A Useful Skill] where Denethor decides that
Boromir needs to learn how to mend his clothes. This time the story is
told from the nanny's perspective who is not blind for the weaknesses
and strengths of both boys. When reading these short stories in this
universe, we eventually will know that Boromir will regret not having
mastered these skills in [Darn those socks!]. The author brings in a
great deal of foreshadowing too and I love her interpretation of this
young Faramir who is so thirsty of knowledge and wants to learn new
skills. I don't find it easy to like Boromir as a canon character, but
this little story showed me as a reader how he could have become so
haughty and well yet I feel for this teen. It seems like he managed to
convince his father extremely well that he doesn't need it. After all,
an heir will not stray far from the city he vowed to protect.
Faramir's glimpses of foresight just gave me the shivers. I really
loved reading the stories in this !verse, so thanks to both authors
for writing this!

Title: Transformation · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General Drabble
· ID: 185
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-12 13:51:35
Oh yum! I think Imhiriel has a wonderful feel to portray Imrahil in a
delightful manner. This drabble is not exception! The author presents
a proud and yet carefree Prince who is just working amongst his crew.
His observations of the ships around him, the capturing of the ship
and the banner unfurled all add to this atmospheric description of a
summer day where every citizen of Dol Amroth must have felt just as
proud as Imrahil at that moment. He must have been a very popular
prince in the eyes of his own people. Wonderfully drabbled with a
vivid scene with good word usage!

Title: In Body and Mind · Author: Nessime · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 759
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:43:11
Lovely weaving from footnoted hints.

Title: Rekindling · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General Drabble ·
ID: 688
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:43:23
Beautifully done, reflecting sensitivity and knowledge of tradition,
custom and relationships.

Title: Dragon Lore · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains: Drabble · ID: 404
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:43:36
Drenched in irony ["Fight fire with fire"], darkly fascinating, and
chilling.

Title: Waste Not, Want Not · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Drabble · ID: 722
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:43:47
Chilling, as intended - barbaric acts rendered commonplace by mention
of dinner.

Title: Never Lack · Author: Ruby Nye · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 453
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:44:01
Powerful use of imagery; you tell a man's life-story in a mere hundred
words.

Title: Point, Counterpoint · Author: Marta · Races: Villains: Drabble
· ID: 573
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:44:17
Gorgeous! Imagery, word-choice, archaic language, rhythm of religious
writings; very well done.

Title: Fun with Farm'n · Author: Súlriel · Races: Villains: Drabble ·
ID: 269
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:44:29
Dark, grim, hideous in its conception, and yet possessing an awful logic.

Title: Rauros, golden Rauros-falls · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor:
Drabble · ID: 624
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:44:40
Absolutely wicked. I shouldn't chuckle, but for some reason, I do.
(perhaps choking would be more appropriate?)

Title: Stranger in a strange land · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men:
General Drabble · ID: 695
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:44:53
Well done, indeed! Vivid imagery, clever wording. ["The blare of giant
horns, curved round the trumpeters' bodies, added grace notes to a
headache gifted by the remorseless sun. Still to come: interminable
speeches, too many over-spiced dishes, dancing girls, acrobats...."]
Nice conclusion, very likely.

Title: More Than Just Years · Author: Llinos · Genres: Adventure:
Minas Tirith · ID: 362
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-12 14:45:05
This is a delightful story centering around the relationship between
Pippin and Gandalf, something that I always love to read about. It
starts out when Pippin is just a wee faunt, and meets Gandalf for the
first time. Merry plays a small part as well as Pippin's 'protector'.
The story takes up again in Minas Tirith, with more interaction
between Pippin and Gandalf as Pippin prepares to light the beacons.
The portrayal of Gandalf as grandfatherly and protective is very well
done, and Pippin is drawn to perfection as he moves from childhood to
adulthood.

Well done!

Title: Crossing · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 693
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:45:07
Wonderful use of imagery. ["caught the gleam of the ferryman's eyes as
he glanced over his shoulder to sight their landing and correct their
course"]

Title: Aftershocks · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Second Age: Drabble ·
ID: 504
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:45:18
So much is told (and hinted at) in this review. The Fall of Numenor,
as seen from a distance, and hints as to why and how it fell.

Hey guys,

A few weeks ago I mentioned that I was going to try to post once a
week about various issues that some people have a hard time with. I've
been a bit scattered so I kept forgetting to do it.

I'll try to do this semi-regularly from now until the end of the
awards (just two more months!) so if you have any topics you think it
would be useful for me to post about in the future, just let me know.

So, without further adieu....

One of the most common question I hear about these awards is how to
find a story to vote for. Sometimes people have heard a specific story
was nominated and want to vote for it. Other times they want to see
all the stories of a certain subgenre, or involving a certain
character, or competing in a certain subcategory. Whatever the case,
you can find this information from our list of nominated stories.

First, go to http://www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/ and log in. Then click
the "Browse Nominated Stories" list. This will show you all of the
stories nominated, twenty-five stories at a time, except for the ones
that you have previously told the site to skip. (More on that below.)

If you are looking for a specific story, you can do a search for the
title name. Scroll down to just above where the first story is
displayed, and you'll see a search bar. Type in a phrase, and the
website will search for those words in the title, authors' name, and
summary. So while you may get more stories than just the one you're
looking for, searching for the title *will* bring up the one you're
looking for.

Even better: if you know the story ID number, do a search for that
number, followed by the pound sign. For instance, "318#" will bring up
story #318, "Fire and Ice" by NeumeIndil.

Next, let's say you want to show a group of stories. To do this you
need filters.

First display the filters if they aren't already showing. To do this,
click the Show Filter" link. (If you don't see it, it means the
filters are already showing.)

Now, before you do anything else: if you've already searched for a
story (like entering 318#), you need to clear the prior search out.
Otherwise the website will look for things that match what you
searched for before and what you're currently searching. To clear out
the old search click the "Clear All Filters" button.

Now you're ready to do your new search. Look at the list of filters.
There are several options that you can choose from.

* STORY TYPE lets you display all the entries of a certain type
(fixed-length ficlet, poetry, full-length finished story,
work-in-progress, or non-fiction).

* AUTHOR lets you select an author's name and display all of the
stories by that author. For co-authored stories, you'll need to select
that particular co-author group to see the story.

* MAIN CATEGORY and SUBCATEGORY let you see all of the stories in a
specific main category or in a specific subcategory.

* REVIEW STATUS lets you see all of the stories you have entered a
certain type of review for, have not reviewed, have put on your skip
or wish list (see below), or where no one has yet reviewed those stories.

* LENGTH lets you display the stories that have a certain length (True
Drabble, Other FLF, FLF Series, Other Ficlet, Short Story, Medium
Length, Novel)

* GENRE, RACE, TIME CHOICE lets you display all of the stories whose
authors selected a certain main category as their first, second, or
third choice. So selecting Hobbits will pick up the story with Races:
Hobbits as its second-choice category, that ended up in Late Third Age.

* CHARACTER, SETTING, SUB-GENRE, and CANONICAL EVENT list several
characters, etc., that authors could choose from. Selecting one of
these options shows all the stories where the author selected that
item on the form about their stories – so you can find just stories
set in the Shire, or just stories featuring Haldir.

Filters are a little tricky, because if you decide to use more than
one filter, it only displays stories meeting *all* of the filters. So
let's say you select the length novels and character Merry and
Genre/Race/Time Fourth Age, thinking these are all things you enjoy
and would be happy to read. But if you do this, you'll only see
stories that meet all three requirements. Which may be what you want,
but if you'd be happy to read a novel about Merry that's not
necessarily set in the Fourth Age, you'd miss it. If you want to see
the stories that meet any of your filter choices you should select the
first one, look at those stories, click the "Clear All Filters"
button, and repeat the process for the second group of stories you'd
like to look at.

Now, before I end this note, let me explain something about skip and
wish lists. I mentioned them above. Over on the right side of the
screen you'll see links to "Skip" or "Wish" a story. These are lists
that help you tell the website what stories to show you by default. I
probably need to do a whole post just on these two features, since
some people do seem to struggle with them.

But for now I'll just mention that if you've told the site to skip a
certain story it won't show up if you do any of the above searches.
You can display it by selecting "Skip" from the "Review Status" filter
– if you do this, it will show all of the Skip stories. If you select
this review status plus some other filter (or if you select Skip and
do a keyword search), it will show skipped stories that also meet the
other criteria you select.

And so now you have a group of stories to look at. Click the title and
it will open the story in another window. Then you can read it, close
that window and come back and vote for a story. When you're ready to
vote, just click the "Enter New Vote" link to the right of the story -
again, this will open a new window into which you can enter your vote,
and when you've previewed and submitted it you can close that window
and come back to the list of stories.

I think that's enough information for one go! If you have any
questions about this (or anything else) please ask. And if you have
something you'd like to see me do a post on in the future, let me know
so I can do a future post on it.

Marta
(MEFA Admin)

One thing I'd like to be able to do is to choose a particular page.
I'm not skipping many stories this year, so have done a pageful of
reviews and then go "next" for the next page. However, as I'm now on
page 16 I'm having to go to 3, 5, 7.... That takes time and is rather
frustrating when I'm on the desktop rather than the laptop as the
desktop has a slower processor and less memory. Anyway to allow us to
choose a particular page to go to?
Bonnie L. Sherrell
Teacher at Large

"Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR

"Don't go where I can't follow."

I mourn for this nation.

Hi Bonnie,

I can't offer an "official" site feature, but I've noticed that you can
manipulate the link to get to pages near the middle. The page for any
page after the first page is something like

http://www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=storiesBrowse&navbar_page=[#]

(if you filter, there will be other stuff but you'll still see the
navbar_page part of the URL)

Anyway, I noticed that after the first page it displays the number of
pages after the first page. So if you want to go to your sixteenth page,
you could change the [#] to 15. In general take one away from the page
you're trying to get to and change the [#] to it.

I'm pretty sure this will work. Play around with it.

Marta

Bonnie L. Sherrell wrote:

>
>
> One thing I'd like to be able to do is to choose a particular page.
> I'm not skipping many stories this year, so have done a pageful of
> reviews and then go "next" for the next page. However, as I'm now on
> page 16 I'm having to go to 3, 5, 7.... That takes time and is rather
> frustrating when I'm on the desktop rather than the laptop as the
> desktop has a slower processor and less memory. Anyway to allow us to
> choose a particular page to go to?
> Bonnie L. Sherrell
> Teacher at Large
>

Now that is very helpful, Marta. I will do that, then. On the desktop
last night I just went to the last page to begin working backwards, as
it were, as that was easy to get to. But this will help a good deal.
Bonnie L. Sherrell
Teacher at Large

"Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR

"Don't go where I can't follow."

I mourn for this nation.

Hi Bonnie

A couple of other things you can do:

* In the filter, under "Review Status", select "Have Not Reviewed". That
will "hide" all the stories you have reviewed so far, meaning the ones
you haven't reviewed will appear on earlier pages.

* In the drop down box on the right hand side just under the filter, you
can change how many stories are displayed on each page. The default is
25, but you can show 50, 100, 250, 500 or "all" stories on the one page.
(Obviously it will take a little longer for the page to appear if you
display more stories.)

We'll look into a "go to page #" link for next year (I've seen it done
on other sites, so I certainly know it's possible!).

HTH

Tanaqui

Bonnie L. Sherrell wrote:

>
>
> Now that is very helpful, Marta. I will do that, then. On the desktop
> last night I just went to the last page to begin working backwards, as
> it were, as that was easy to get to. But this will help a good deal.
> Bonnie L. Sherrell
> Teacher at Large
>
> "Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the
> very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR
>
> "Don't go where I can't follow."
>
> I mourn for this nation.
>
>
>
>
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Title: Glimpse of Glory · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 575
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:45:33
Beautifully done; a nice expansion on the original scene.

Title: I'm Your Pain When You Can't Feel · Author: Robinka · Genres:
Drama: General Drabble · ID: 103
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:45:48
Very moving, even heartbreaking. A clear picture of friendship to the end.

Title: The Lesson · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 29
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:46:06
Masterful in its irony and contemplation of a dreadful truth. ["How
gently men are schooled in war, so gently that they see not the lesson."]

Title: Tillecking Night in Bree · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men:
General Drabble · ID: 455
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:46:19
(applauding) Nicely done! The final line made me catch my breath.
Later, I want to read the "long" version.

Title: Responsibility · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 720
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:46:32
Grim and telling, revealing much about Faramir's character and
discernment in a few carefully chosen words.

Title: With No Pity · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Villains:
Drabble · ID: 391
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:46:54
Excellent use of imagery, complete with surprise ending.

Title: Halls Beyond · Author: Elen Kortirion · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 454
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:47:07
Left me chuckling, even though I'm more book-verse than otherwise.

Title: The Lining of the World · Author: Ruby Nye · Races: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 734
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:47:17
Beautiful, sad, ultimately hopeful - this tells so much in so few words.

Title: Just Deserts · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 505
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:47:28
O very well done! Hobbity and humorous - a nice gap-filler.

Title: Dragons! · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 327
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:47:42
Nicely leaves one chuckling, and so very true to life. Little ones
love stories over and over again.

Title: Sure as Shire Talk · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Hobbits: Drabble
· ID: 753
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:47:54
Good rhythm, sounded just like gossip, and perfect timing in the telling.

Title: Stone of the King · Author: Rowan · Races: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 309
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:48:07
Whoa. Grim and startling, nice expansion on the original scene.

Title: Keep your secrets · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 751
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:48:23
Wise Merry! He knows Pippin so well, and takes every precaution...
["Cousin Everard's 'surprise' coming of age party? Boasting about that
raid on the orchard where Mother could hear you? Blabbing about
Estella…."]

Title: Surprises · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 690
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:48:34
Nice weaving of canon and originality, with a little coincidence
thrown in.

Title: Helping Hands · Author: Llinos · Races: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 615
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-12 14:48:50
How well our hobbits know each other! No words need to be said, and
you use words with such skill to show us it is so.

Title: Tillecking Night in Bree · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men:
General Drabble · ID: 455
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-12 15:28:52
Having read this, I now wish to know more about Tillecking Night and
what it means, and why the Hobbit children sing on that night. A
fascinating tale.

Title: Adrift · Author: fantasyfan · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: Gondor · ID: 313
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-12 15:29:44
This story is filled with beautiful, evocative language that explores
each of the senses of a person coming into full awareness from some
kind of deep sleep or unconsciousness. The way each sense prods the
person into some kind of memory is explored in depth and detail, and
the language used is exquisite. I'm glad I found this piece; I
stumbled across it totally by accident. The writer certainly knows her
way around a paragraph, and she does a beautiful job of making the
reader care about the person she's writing about.

Beautiful job!

Title: Miss Dora Baggins' Book of Manners · Author: Dreamflower ·
Races: Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 239
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 16:14:34
While this story is entered in the humor category, it is clear that
Dreamflower did a great deal of research and put a great deal of
thought into this story. She covers most, if not all, of the hobbit
customs mentioned in the books as well as adding a few that she has
created for her other stories.

Title: The Big Green Bottle · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
The Shire or Buckland · ID: 208
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 16:41:58
Pippin's present to Merry isn't quiet what they expected, and looks
can be deceptive.

This story is one of the best drunken hobbit stories I have read, and
the ending is just too funny.

Title: A Passing Troll · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Humor: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 210
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 16:49:05
This is so funny, in a sick sort of way. All I can say is what goes
around comes around. I almost feel sorry for the troll.

Title: A Dragon in Buckland · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Mystery ·
ID: 206
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 17:13:26
This is one of the sweetest mysteries I've ever read. I just love it.
Pippin is so grown-up and caring, and Merry is his practical and wise
self. Just a wonderful story all around.

Title: He Came To Meet Me · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Romance
· ID: 33
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 17:34:46
This is a very nice story of true love found. Hopeful, but with a
touch of sadness. It is also diffentent in many ways from the usual
hobbit romances. Very nice.

Title: Moira · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 676
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2007-10-12 17:46:13
A moving, lyrical story of Illuvatar introducing Manwe to the hobbits.
How hobbits are hidden in the Song and because they don't have
anything the Enemy desires. Their very weakness is their strength.

I loved the images of Illuvatar dancing among the hobbits as they went
about their lives - singing, cooking, digging out their holes, etc.

The whole story is infused with both the joy and the sorrows that is
life. There will be hard times ahead for the hobbits, but there will
also be wonderful times ahead and those cannot easily be separated.
This is a very wonderful story and I highly recommend it.

Title: Diversion · Author: Mar'isu · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: General Drabble · ID: 708
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2007-10-12 17:50:38
Interesting idea here. I like the thought that Glorfindel might have
been a diversion for the Fellowship, to keep Sauron's eyes fixed
somewhere else.

Title: February Bride · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance · ID: 678
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 17:55:21
I love this story. I have read it many times and still enjoy it. Yes
there is the romance and the sex, but there is so much more than that
here. There is the open honesty between a husband and a wife and the
heartfelt sharing of one's darkest secrets. Pippin is truly one
blessed hobbit. He has found his jewel above price.

Title: Dreams the Way We Planned Them · Author: SlightlyTookish ·
Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 297
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 18:26:07
Stories set just before and at Carmallen are just about my favorite
kind. This one definitely makes me happy. This is a sweet tale, even
if slash is not you cup of tea. Yes, the slash is there, but it can be
overlooked to a grat extent. When you boil this story down to it's
core elements it is a story of hurts comforted and joy restored.

Title: Sea Food · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 53
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:08:14
A charming, delightful story, told in warm, light-hearted tone that
fits very well. The description of the tidal pools and their
inhabitants in the moonlight is lovely and enchanting, and it really
is no wonder that Faramir and Boromir are so entranced by it.

When Imrahil reveals why they have caught all those crabs, it must
have come as a real shock, the prosaic purpose so much in contrast
with the delight of before.

["That was different. Those crabs were supper. These crabs are
creatures."] Of course! Oh, the innocence of children!

And the ending just had me laughing with the irony. I wonder what
Boromir would have wanted for breakfast if they had not caught crabs,
but fish...

Title: Knave of Hearts · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 252
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:08:37
That was a fun little story. The behaviour of the characters seemed so
very typical for those kinds of situations. Frodo was really to be
pitied, and I don't know who was worse, Pippin who was actually the
one he had to babysit, or an unhelpful, unruly Merry.

I was especially amused by Pippin clambering all over the sleeping
Saradoc and the other two desperately trying to get him away before he
wakes him up.


Title: All that is gold... · Author: Perelleth · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 42
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:09:01
Endearing characterisations. And despite the light-hearted tone of the
story, the Ring's sinister shadow and the memory of Celebrían's loss
looms in the background, and tinges the narrative with shade and
darker colours.

It was a wonderful idea that the brooch which gave Thorongil his name
was actually a gift from Bilbo!

Title: The Steward's New Clothes · Author: GypsieRose · Genres: Humor:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 511
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:09:47
Completely over-the-top, but full of funny details and clever lines.
One could almost feel the tailor's disappointment at Denethor's
unimaginative choice for his own wardrobe. My favourite line was his
reason for choosing colours for Faramir's clothing.

Title: Rohan's Future · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Humor: Gondor or
Rohan · ID: 79
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:10:32
As its prequels, this story sparkles with irony and wit; it has
wonderfully engaging and vibrant characterisations, and clear
descriptions. There were a few figures of speech I found rather
inappropriate in a Middle-earth context, but mostly the language
flowed smoothly, and the details of life in Edoras were integrated
well into the plot.

Amrothos' permanent (but insufficient, as it turned out) suspicion as
he is trying to ride herd on his nephews was quite understandable. I
liked the children a lot, with their bright intelligence and blithe
single-mindedness. The other characters were equally well done, and
Éomer and Lothíriel's appearance was short but memorable.

I do wonder how Amrothos could have imagined for one moment that
building a catapult would be a good idea... It was a catastrophe (or
several?) waiting to happen, and the narrative still was compelling
and suspenseful, stringing the readers along with the question when it
will happen and how it might manifest itself.

Title: The Promise in her Eyes · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 100
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:11:19
Marvellous use of point-of-view and language. The voice of the
minstrel was so very vivid and immediate, it drew me right into the
story. The way he starts and stops sentences, as if he is addressing a
real audience, the way one can almost see his gestures and facial
expressions, or hear how his voice varies depending on which moment he
is describing. The way he slowly constructs his story, increasing the
tension and building up the surprising twists and revelations; I had
the feeling I was wincing and laughing right along with his other
listeners.

I loved the great amount of detail that is shown through his eyes: the
faire and its visitors, Éowyn's doings, the music and dancing. I
especially liked how the mere sight of her ["shapely ankles"] affects
him so much - details like this really bring the culture to life.

Somehow the fact that Éomer - to the evident surprise of the minstrel
- was relatively "mild" in retaliation tells me that Éowyn might have
done similar things before...

Title: Mistaken Identities · Author: Greywing · Races: Elves · ID: 201
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2007-10-12 19:12:26
A fun, amusing, and yet a melancholy tale of some of my favorite elves
who have lingered long past the time when most elves have gone to
Valinor. I loved the image of Glorfindel as Apollo especially because
it fit him so perfectly. I giggled when Haldir was made into a goddess!

Very enjoyable and well told story.

Title: Respite · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017
TA · ID: 389
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:13:44
Atmospheric, quietly tense story.

Somehow, throughout the story, one gets the feeling that Finduilas
already is too much afflicted with whatever it was that led to her
death: her refuge is not truly one, it is no real respite for her to
come there, as she can't seem to be able to forget the Shadow of
Mordor and her worries about her husband and the looming threat in the
East.

She tries to tell herself to enjoy the moment, but it sounds not
entirely convinced. She comes back again and again to her fears and
doubts, without, it seems, being able to rest her thoughts. Even the
peaceful slumber of her children is to her only cause for concern as
she sees this peace destroyed as they grow older and take up their
duty with the sword.

Title: Welcome · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Elves: Fixed-Length Ficlet ·
ID: 694
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:15:39
This drabble is structured very effectively, contrasting Glorfindel's
memories of his first live with the new life he is about to begin in
Middle-earth.

Looking closer, the readers can see not only these two stages, but one
more: set side by side is Glorfindel's past in Valinor, then his life
in Gondolin, and now new features to discover in Imladris. All are so
different from each other, and yet they have qualities in common: the
Misty Mountains are as encompassing and sheltering, the Bruinen as
melodic, and nature as lovely as what he knew before.

And Elrond's warm welcome feels indeed like a homecoming, perfectly
demonstrating why his refuge was called "The Last Homely Home".

Also: Brownie points for using my favourite quote about Elrond!

Title: The White Tower · Author: Anna Wing · Races: Elves · ID: 528
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:16:32
Evocative, graceful and elegant descriptions that bring the landscape
and the lively community that has sprung up around Elwing's Tower
immediately to life. I have always found it odd and regrettable that
Elwing should live so alone and remote in a far-off Tower, and you
have "remedied" this situation very nicely. I liked the "reunion" of
Teleri and Sindar in this community, and also the different customs of
the Elves, depending on race and age, and the little references to
known Elves that have been reborn in the meantime.

The choice before Elwing and Eärendil, and the questions that come
with it are explored in compelling, thought-provoking ways. And the
way you resolved the dilemma had me holding my breath.

It was fascinating to see how this part of Valinor had developed since
the First Age, and the Elves' progress in science and technology. I
especially enjoyed how you have incorporated things like submarines
and airplanes, and as contrast to that, prehistoric creatures, in ways
that feel creative, yet canon-compliant.

The Silmarils as ["merciless light"] and possessing ["terrible
sanctity"] is an extraordinarily profound and appropriate description.

Title: The Smile That Wins · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 258
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-12 19:18:12
Faramir's thoughts and feelings are conveyed very clearly and
movingly. I like how this drabble is construed about the changing
stanges of his perception of Éowyn. How the question about her
capability to smile is answered at the end.

First, his eagerness to know everything about his beloved, from every
source available. His uncertainty and fear as the metaphors he finds
for her get tangled with his memories about his father's end and his
own near fate. It's interesting to see that the well-known picture of
Éowyn as frozen and cool is something Faramir disagrees with and
instead comes up with the exact opposite.

Then, his doubts about his own perceived unworthiness as her puts her
on a pedestal. And finally, the realisation that she is human,
fallible and approachable.

All these apparently contradictory characteristics also remind me of
what Sam says to Faramir about Galadriel: ["Warm as sunlight, cold as
frost in the stars. Proud and far-off as a snow-mountain, and as merry
as any lass I ever saw with daisies in her hair in springtime"], and
it adds another interesting layer to Faramir's assessment.

Title: A Truth Universally Acknowledged · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Humor: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 556
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2007-10-12 19:21:46
An enjoyable little tale that is very well told. It sounds exactly
like Boromir and yet I can definitely hear Mr. Darcy in it as well!
Pride and Prejudice is my favorite Austen book and so to see it in
this setting was fun. That would make a fun cross-over story... I mean
a full length one. :) Very well done.

Title: An Alphabet for Middle-earth · Author: Dreamflower · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 231
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 20:01:29
The prompts for these short stories were quite challenging.
Dreamflower handled each one with great creativity. I especially liked
the one for the letter "T". That once was very clever indeed.

Title: A New Reckoning · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 308
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 20:11:14
If I remember correctly, this was the first story of Dreamflower's I
ever read, and it still remains one of my favorite stories. Period.

This is a tail with so much happening that you find yourself totally
wraped up in what is happening, and not just to the familiar
characters. The original characters she creates a quite compelling.
From respectful Rohirrim and gallant Gondorians to a few horrid
Hobbits, the reader can't help but love, or hate, them as much as
Tolkien's own creations.

A fantastic story of new bonds formed in the Reunited Kingdom.

Title: Tea and Seedcake and the Influence of Hobbits · Author: Baggins
Babe · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 492
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 20:53:48
This is such a nice story of a kinder, gentler Gondor under the rule
of Aragorn. The influence that Frodo, Sam, Pippin and Merry have had
on their king and his city is clear to see.

After reading this, I'm hungry.

Title: Respite · Author: Lindelea · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 303
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-12 21:19:30
This was an enjoyable and well written drabble which captures
Faramir's character perfectly.I can just imagine him enjoying
snatching some precious moments with books as a temporary respite from
the horrors of war.

Title: Falling Into Shadow · Author: Marigold · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 205
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-12 21:22:25
This is an interesting story. Marigold looks at something that very
few have. Merry's encounter with the Witch-King was not his first
exposure to the Black Breath. How had it affected him on those earlier
contacts?

I really hope Marigold continues this story at some point. It is a
nice look at Merry and Pippin's relationship and how a friend's love
can heal a lot of wounds.

Title: What Was That Job Description? · Author: Larner · Genres:
Crossover · ID: 523
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-12 21:24:51
I don't usually read crossover stories but this one was pure delight
from start to finish. What if Lockheart from Harry Potter applied for
a job at Aragorn's court? His opinion of Elves was hilarious and
naturally did not go down very well. Lockhearts cowadice and Aragorn's
sense of honour are brilliantly contrasted.I would love to read more
about these two!

Title: Never Speak Nor Sing · Author: Claudio · Times: First Age and
Prior: House of Fingolfin · ID: 130
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-12 21:48:30
This is the beginning of an epic story cycle that has me completely
hooked, despite the fact that it takes some of my favorite characters
and relieves them of all of the most obvious of their admirable
characteristics and puts them in a series of circumstances that are
definitely not likely to result in heroics. But that is all
surface—underneath the indignities to which the author subjects
Glorfindel and Fingon in particular, although no actor in this piece
is really safe from his razor-sharp wit, a warmth and humanity
pervades the entire series. I guess backed into a corner and forced to
pick what I consider the absolute best single story in Tolkien
fanfiction (or best introductory story to a story cycle, as I would
not want to discount the stories that follow this one), I would be
hard-pressed not to pick this one. The conception of plot and
character is ambitious and promises much and so far the subsequent
parts of this story arc have lived up to its initial promise. The
backstory for the entire related group of stories is enormous and
wickedly creative, not revealed at once, but little-by-little as
stories are added. The standard cliffhanger is a trite trick compared
to the manner in which this writer draws one into his world.

On a totally different point, if there were awards for "best author's
notes ever" these would be my nomination. I have quoted them
extensively in private correspondence. My favorite lines are: [the
characters are grumpy, quarrelsome, spiteful, cruel, arrogant, and a
variety of other unpleasant adjectives besides.... But the Elves of
the Silmarillion did lie, steal, fight, discriminate, kidnap, covet,
attempt rape, betray, murder, and so on. And in Tolkien's early
drafts, they were far worse.] If that description wouldn't make
someone want to read this story I don't know what would.

Oh, yes, beautifully written, and the knowledge of canon reflected and
use of Tolkien's languages are great fun.




Title: The Beginning of a Wonderful Friendship · Author: Imhiriel ·
Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 629
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-12 22:01:46
This is a great ficlet. I loved the characterization of all of the
major players: insistent, single-minded Luthien, angry, passionate
Celeborn, and even the charming, if clueless, Finrod. The description
by Galadriel of her brothers error and his virtues was too funny.
(Finrod is often made such a saint, I want to take a little poke at
him myself now and then, but he so admirable, it doesn't work to poke
too hard--this is just right.) The beginning of a wonderful friendship
indeed. Well, it will certainly be an interesting
relationship--Galadriel, for all her adaptations remains a Noldor, and
Celeborn, well he remains Celeborn.

Title: Mastering Men · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 623
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-12 22:07:43
I read this is one some time ago and liked it very much. Faramir is
one of my favorite characters (and being a bookish sort myself, love
his loremaster side), but it is important to me that readers remember
he was among the foremost warriors and leaders of men in Gondor,
second only to his brother (and in my opinion that might be arguable,
we only have Denethor's word for that).

Title: In Shadow Realm · Author: Legolass · Genres: Adventure · ID: 266
Reviewer: White Wolf · 2007-10-12 22:48:46
To say this story is original, visually descriptive and well-written
is to understate the obvious, as soon as the reader begins.

From the first word to the las, the reader can't help but be
mesmerized along every step of this amazing journey. I certainly was.
Even after the climax of the story, you want to keep reading to find
out exactly how it all winds up.

Each of the characters we all recognize were done to perfection, and
the original ones, good and bad, were richly textured.

The scene at the Glass Pool was wonderful. I love what Aragorn tells
Legolas: [I escaped a fate worse than death only because you were
there, and you knocked at the door of my soul till I answered, even as
you promised you would. Ever shall that door be unlocked for you,
Legolas.] They demonstrate the heart of this story, as well as their
deep friendship.

The last paragraph was so perfect for an ending and so beautifully
expressed, it made me sigh, knowing all would be well with our elf and
our king.

This is an adventure not to be missed!




Title: The Ground Portends · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 638
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-13 00:23:23
A wonderful look at Gimli's thoughts as he rides with Eomer from
Meduseld to Helm's Deep. Good additions to the Dwarvish language as well.

Title: Stranger in a strange land · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men:
General Drabble · ID: 695
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-13 00:26:12
Oh, how well I can see this reaction by Aragorn to a meeting with
Haradri dignitaries in the desert. As for his final wish--that I fully
appreciate.

Title: Returning the Favor · Author: cpsings4him · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 340
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-13 00:42:50
This look by Pippin at Frodo sleeping is very comforting for both us
and the two Hobbits. Well written and thoughtful.

Title: Fell and Fair · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 526
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2007-10-13 01:54:54

[...two great horseman... unlike all the others] *sigh*. You know
these are my favorite guys!

[2] [perverse sunshine] is such a wonderful, viscerally emotional
phrase. I think there are very few phrase that say as much with so few
words. With the tone so well set, it would be expected that the
following text might fall short, but it does not. It brings tears and
chills with it's portrayal of stark emotion and a dark future.

[They are warriors. They do what they must.]
What a perfect line for these two.

This is such a hard review to write, I find myself totally engrossed
in your snippets and unwilling to stop between chapters to make notes
here.

- flashes of life and love and pain. War, and dread of the
consequences of war. Your drabbles focus these things with hard
punches and incredible intensity. And it seems to me that your talent
lies not so much in what is said, but in what is not said and I think
that's the magic in a drabble. The hints, the shadows, the
implications. It's the ability to use three words to convey fifty.

[Stout-hearted, my people consider me; surely I can withstand one
raised Elven eyebrow?] PRICELESS!! Poor Poor Eorl to face the mirth of
the Twins. A brave man indeed.

[tark-pets] *snicker* I love your Orc's voices and attitudes. Very
well done.

[a loyal steed]. Elena Tiriel. This one is extraordinary. the grief,
the heartfelt pain of loss and the twist. I won't give a spoiler, due
to the recent on-list discussion, - and this is hard because every
drabble in this series is extraordinary - but this one has that extra
something special. Of really being in the head and heart of the point
of view character.


in your notes you say [I hope to view the historical events (canon or
imagined) described in this series through very intimate, personal
lenses, to make them more understandable on a human scale.] I will
say, that in my opinion, you do that and more. I can't imagine that
anyone can read this series and not be moved.

You know how much I love these two guys and I thank you from the
bottom of my heart for these glimpse of them, both through others eyes
and through their own thoughts. I know this has been in progress for a
long time, but, at least in my opinion, it's been well worth it the
wait. This remains one of my favorite re-reads.

Title: Despair · Author: Silivren Tinu · Genres: Drama: The Fellowship
· ID: 171
Reviewer: White Wolf · 2007-10-13 01:58:27
The scene from the movie played in my head, as I read the argument
between Aragorn and Boromir. I really felt sorry for Boromir (here and
in the movie), because he just couldn't see that the Ring was
corrupting him little by little so that he ended up truly believing
having it would save Gondor. And as we all know all too well, that was
the same thing that corrupted Isildur.

Bless Legolas for recognizing that something needed to be done and for
taking the initiative by trying to reason with Boromir. I like the way
he This lets the man see into the depths of himself through his eyes
and share his burden of living under shadow. I think that as much as
anything would have effected Boromir. Too bad it didn't change his
mind. Of course, the Ring saw to that.

I like that Legolas was able to tell Aragorn that the Ring was trying
to influence him, too. Even though it caused Aragorn some worry, it
had to be comforting to the elf to have someone like that to share
with. We tend to think of elves as being impervious to the same
temptations as mortals, but that is not always the case. I'm sure
Aragorn feels good knowing that Legolas can come to him with his troubles.

This is is definitely a good read.


Title: The End of Dark Days · Author: annmarwalk/EdorasLass CoAuthors
· Genres: Drama: Minas Tirith · ID: 56
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-13 02:59:55
Together Annmarwalk and Edoraslass have crafted another story
containing both Mags the cook and Nanny, who cared for Faramir and
Boromir as children. Coming to Minas Tirith in the wake of the battles
to see her wounded husband and son, Nanny learns more about what
happened, and sees for herself the devastation left in the wake of the
war.

Alas for Denethor's loss; but now Nanny looks forward to following her
lamb's strengthening health and love life herself.

Very enjoyable, and the vivid descriptions of the city in the wake of
the war mirror reality very well.

Title: At the Sign of the Prancing Pony · Author: Marta · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 163
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-13 03:02:47
Ah! So THIS was how Nob came to work at the Prancing Pony! And a
wonderful response to an interesting challenge, putting disparate
elements together here.

Title: Measures of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 50
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-13 03:09:16
It must have been hard for Eowyn that despite being much younger than
Faramir, she would age more quickly. I think even without the blood of
Numenor, many women might idenify with the pangs of sadness for lost
youth that Eoyn experiences while watching Faramir dancing with their
daughter.
Faramir,though is an understanding husband and knows how to make Eoyn
feel better. I also liked the impled closesness of the King's and
Steward's familes here.
A bittersweet, touching ficlet which strikes a chord in any aging woman.

Title: Candles · Author: Eretria · Genres: Drama: With Merry · ID: 305
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-13 03:11:32
This story speaks of fear, and comfort, fear of loss and comfort of
seeing, and the final fear as to what's happening--out there.

Story is Movie-verse, I think; the love between the cousins is timeless.

Title: The Tenant from Staddle · Author: Larner · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Incomplete · ID: 408
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-13 03:12:18
An interesting and well written story which shows the great deeds of
Frodo and Sam through the eyes of ordinary Hobbits. There are some
delightful OCs in this story.

Title: Journey's End · Author: Altariel · Genres: Drama: Ithilien ·
ID: 442
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-13 06:14:13
A truly outstanding story concerning two former Rangers,who I am sure,
I'm not alone in hoping they had the comfortable friendship depicted
in this very enjoyable story,which also features a vividly depicted OC.

Title: A Collection of Sindarin Tanka · Author: juno_magic · Genres:
Poetry · ID: 224
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-13 06:19:42
The writer here shows her considerable skills as a linguist in this
collection of beautiful poems.The illustrations add a further
dimension of beauty to this lovely collection.

Title: Summer Daze · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 471
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-13 11:41:22
A very perceptive character study of Faramir, wrapped in a sensuous
description of his first sexual encounter. After an embarrassing
encounter with a prostitute in Dol Amroth, Faramir ponders his
concepts of "right and wrong" versus what is also normal and natural.
I really like the fact that it's neither a tale of impulsively
overactive hormones, or of a smug older relative deciding "now's the
time". With the cool logic and decision making skills we've come to
associate with him, Faramir takes complete control of his choice to
take this specific step from boyhood to manhood.

The details of Faramir's sexual encounter (and the act of
self-satisfaction that impels him to take this step) are tastefully
described, with just enough detail to add piquancy. We can almost
smell the scent of the sea, taste the ripe strawberries, feel the
brush of silken sheets or warm breath on heated skin. It's a very
lovely addition to the genre of First-Time stories, and one that will
please many an Faramir fan.

Title: Ten Thousand Years · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA · ID: 565
Reviewer: Doc Bushwell · 2007-10-13 12:32:43
This short story says so much in only two scenes. Marta's account of a
conversation between between Boromir and Arwen speaks to themes that
extend well beyond the venue of fan fiction: self-doubt when one
cannot control the events of life and then acceptance of - rather than
struggle against - life's circumstances and the choice to engage in
them fully or eschew them altogether

Marta lends insight into the humanity of two icons of the Lord of the
Rings. Boromir, a man of nobility who is accustomed to command, is
unsettled by the inheritance of Aragorn, the heir of Isildur. Marta
writes his character such that this reader is empathetic to his pride
and doubts. Marta's depiction of Boromir's rumination of what he fears
most (lesser of two evils, perhaps) emphasizes his turmoil in just a
few powerful sentences. Arwen's response likewise resonates with
Boromir's doubts.

Marta is a skilled writer and effectively practices the "show, don't
tell" adage. Her detailing is excellent, but never slows the pace of
the narrative. She describes Imladris vividly and its confusing
architectural intricacies in an economy of words. The intimate setting
of the conversation is easy to visualize: I could feel the warmth of
the hearth and the chill damp from the late autumn rain near the
window. Through the story, she captures Boromir's restiveness to his
thoughtful contemplation through Arwen's words and presence.

Not only are the characters consistent with those described in JRRT's
history, but far more fleshed out in my opinion. When I first read
Lord of the Rings as a young teenager almost forty (!) years ago, I
developed a serious crush on Boromir (I guess I was – how do you say –
a fangurl), so I am gratified with Marta's vision of this noble,
flawed and very human fellow in this and her other works. JRRT's Arwen
left me cold, but Marta's Arwen is far more appealing: warm, wise,
funny, and pensive.

[Ten Thousand Years] is a fine story and highly recommended.


Title: Swan Song · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 637
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-13 17:29:20
I am also extremely interested in the history of Dol Amroth
(admittedly, on my part, largely due to my obsession with elves, but
the sea plays a large part also). The mood and ambience of the story
is lovely and the level of development of character in such a short
piece is hard to do. It is a pleasure to read a story that takes
infrequently referenced canon and uses it so well.

Title: I Will Comfort Thee · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 458
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-13 17:36:03
I haven't encountered this idea before, but it makes sense for Aragorn
to take Faramir to the place where Boromir died. I thought it a nice
touch that all the members of the Fellowship who were involved with
Boromir's death went with them. I liked it that it was not only
healing for Faramir, but that Aragorn also could release his grief for
Boromir.

Title: Not an Ordinary Day · Author: nau_tika · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 737
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-13 17:38:03
I'm sure nobody involved will forget this day, especially not Pippin
and Legolas. Pippin and Legolas are out practicing archery and somehow
Legolas got hurt. I love the humor in this piece and the developing
relationship between Pippin and Boromir.

Title: Are You Going to Leave Me? · Author: Llinos · Genres: Drama:
With Merry · ID: 142
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-13 17:39:11
This is a lovely gapfiller from the movies. How did Pippin manage to
get Merry to the houses of healing and how did Merry manage to
convince Aragorn to let him join them at the Battle at the Black Gate.
The solution to the last problem is unique and I don't think to
Aragorn's liking, but he was overruled. The characters ring true and
Eomer, who we know not much about from the books, matches his persona
from the movies.

Title: Changing the Past · Author: mistycracraft · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 639
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-13 17:52:15
This is an intriguing AU, where Elrohir and Elladan in one timeline
and Aragorn in another can have their fondest wish of changing the
past. The twins can prevent Celebrian from falling into the hands of
the orcs and Argorn gets the chance to save his father. Since this
story is still ongoing, I don't know how it will all end. Changing
these two events, changes the known timeline considerably as anyone
can guess.

I love the well thought out consequences of these changes. The main
characters are now stuck in these new timelines and nothing is as they
are used to. They have to guard their secret that they are from the
future which makes for a very lonely existence. At least the twins
have each other, but Aragorn is another story. I love the
characterizations and the emotional tension which stems from
concealing their knowledge of the future. Aragorn additionally has to
hide who he really is in his new persona. I hope the story will be
updated again soon.

Title: The Days of the King · Author: Randomrattle · Genres: Drama:
With Aragorn · ID: 399
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-13 17:55:43
This tale about the first years after the Return of the King follows
more the movies than the books. Minas Tirith is much more damaged than
it looked at first glance and had to be evacuated until the dwarves
can fix the damage.The first part of this tale concentrates on the
dwarves and their tireless efforts to save the city. What blew me away
was the description of the Dwarves as a race different from men. They
are not just short men. They have their own distinct customs and
culture. The reader gets glimpses into that culture but just like in
Tolkien the things the reader sees in this story lets you guess that
there is much more to know and discover. The bridge between dwarves
and men and elves are Aragorn, Gimli and Legolas with their deep
friendship.

The second part of the story concentrates more on the friendship
between Arwen, Aragorn, and Legolas. Here again there is a distinct
difference between elves and men and the differences are not just
immortality and pointy ears. Theirs is a longstanding friendship, but
there is still much to discover and to grow on all sides.

Title: Strange Stars · Author: Jael · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 120
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-13 17:59:02
I got a huge kick out of this story for its sheer imaginative scope.
It's a long way from Mirkwood to Harad. Of course, being a fan of her
entire carefully crafted world of Thranduil and Legolas, I got a kick
out of references to elements of that background that are thrown into
the story. (They provide spice for those who, like me, follow the
development of Jael's canon with interest, but in no way interfere
with the enjoyment of the story by readers who are less knowledgeable
of her entire body of work relating to these characters.)

As usual, Jael made me green with envy for her attentiveness to small
details and meticulous plotting. (I am waiting for the day when I stop
simply being jealous and decide to take a bit more care of this nature
in my own work.)

The creation of an entire cultural ambience for the location is such
fun to read. Although it is worlds away from Gondor (so much farther
than the mere physical distance) and more foreign still for our elf,
the writer does not take the cheap and easy path of turning its
inhabitants into incomprehensible villains, but makes them human and
sympathetic, with their own virtues and flaws. Someone else said in
another review that the details reminded her of the book, Memoirs of a
Geisha. I can see that comparison. I also thought of Mary Renault's
Bagoas in The Persian Boy, although, of course, our hero is merely a
talented amateur acting to a bigger purpose. It's a thoroughly
entertaining story with suspense, intrigue, and a healthy subplot of
young love.

Legolas is so attractive, smart and charming too--just an extra bonus
for this reader. I particularly like that you use the events and
experiences to allow your character to learn and grown. The Legolas
who returns is different from the one who left for this
adventure/assignment. The wicked little secret of the author is to
take the subject matter and demonstrate that she is able to tell such
a story without turning her protagonist into a victim. Excellent
story. Great read.


Title: Cophetua · Author: Jael · Genres: Romance · ID: 242
Reviewer: mbumpus_99 · 2007-10-13 18:08:00
I was lucky enough to stumble over this delightful work as one of the
first serialized pieces I was to read in the LoTR fanfic world when it
was still a WIP.

Jael's OFC Sigrid is delightfully well-rounded, as are the other canon
characters she encounters over the course of the story. Sigrid never
forgets her true place in the hierarchy of Thranduil's court, much to
her lover's consternation. Her integration as a mortal into the Elven
society is well-constructed and described, and Jael brings the reader
along to understand all of the emotions Sigrid feels. The twist at the
end was completely unexpected - and yet clearly hinted at in the very
first paragraph of the first chapter.

All in all, I love reading stories where the OCs are as complicated
and imperfect as any canon character - and Jael's Sigrid is an example
of one of the best OCs I've ever read. Thranduil, Galion and even
Legolas stay completely in character. This is a story that I can read
again and again and get almost the same measure of entertainment in
knowing what comes next as I did in that first read of discovery.

Title: At The Foot of the Sarn Gebir · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA · ID: 787
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-13 18:25:37
Excellent vignette that showcases Sam's resourcefulness and
resilience. I really liked the details of his preparations for the
cooking, and the unfolding of his quiet contentment at being useful in
ways that the other Fellowship members might not think of. And there's
a lovely bit of Sam and Legolas interaction that shows Legolas
understanding and appreciating hobbit priorities.

Well-written, this really says "Sam" to me; and every detail is credible.


Title: Turned Earth · Author: Dana · Genres: Alternate Universe: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 26
Reviewer: Jael · 2007-10-13 19:43:15
I'm not usually a big fan of Hobbit stories, but I ran across this one
while browsing reviews, and the premise intrigued me. I am so glad I
gave it a try! I read it through in one sitting, even though I had
some pressing chores awaiting me, and I bookmarked it for later
enjoyment -- that's how engaging it is.

This is a very different type of story, no doubt about it. The author
manages to capture the claustrophobic terror of Night of the Living
Dead and the warm feeling of the Shire sections of Lord of the Rings,
and produce a gripping reading experience for Halloween and other
times of the year as well.

The characters, especially Rosie Cotton Gamgee, are very well-written,
and the odd and terrifiying happenings in the Shire, post-Ring War,
are logically explained by BookVerse. You don't see that too often!

If you're tired of the same old-same old, I recommend this story highly.

Title: A Boy and His Lob · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor · ID: 162
Reviewer: Jael · 2007-10-13 20:15:57
A Boy and His Lob is yet another giggle-worthy effort from the pen,
er, keyboard of the master humorist.

In this tale, Legolas's adolescent infatuation for a certain visiting
Marchwarden collides with his humanitarian (does this word even apply
to an Elf?) impulse to take in an orphaned spider with an unusual
talent. As you might expect, the results are hilarious -- and very
embarrassing for Mirkwood's young Prince.

I got a kick out of Emo-Legolas resenting the fact that as ["prince"]
he ["must sit at the king's table"] when he would far rather be
chatting up Haldir. Life can be so very cruel sometimes! I found
Thranduil's pragmatic desire for wine and money, even at the price of
his son's dignity, especially amusing. Fortunately, Haldir seems to
share Legolas's tastes in interior decoration -- among other things.

What a great little story!

Title: Concerning the Curious Healing Properties of Soup · Author:
pipkinsweetgrass · Races: Cross-Cultural: The Fellowship · ID: 571
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-13 20:44:19
This is a nice story of the fellowship bonding and learning about each
other through the challenges they faced. It also made me real hungry
for a bowl of thick, creamy, chicken soup.

Title: Steward and Thain · Author: agape4gondor · Races:
Cross-Cultural: The Fellowship · ID: 87
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-13 21:46:12
Friendship can be built on the smallest commonality sometimes, and
this story proves it. Boromis and Pippin truly are good for each
other. It's said that they only had a short time to be friends.

The epilogue nearly had me in tears.

Title: A Life Between - No Secrets · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races:
Men: General Drabble · ID: 446
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-13 22:30:00
Boromir and Theodred always seem to me to be a very plausible slash
pairing. Boromir is openly described as being disinterested in
marriage, no wife or children are given Theodred in canon, despite his
being Theoden's only son.

This is a lovely, sensual drabble, describing in few words the
intimacy, knowledge and fear that can only occur in a long-term
relationship.


Title: Bliss and Beauty · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabble
· ID: 20
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-13 22:35:37
[Two feet, fleeting, dancing; two graceful hands weaving music into
motion; two bright eyes laughing at him, laughing for him.]

A lovely description of Idril, and a concise, poetic description of
one of the most important relationships in Tolkien. My only complaint
is that I'd be most interested in a longer treatment of the subject!



Title: Swan Song · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 637
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-13 22:40:36
I am pleased if I provided the inspiration for this lovely drabble,
which delicately delineates a melancholy moment in the life of one of
Imrahil's ancestors, who also possesses my Imrahil's dreaming "gift".
Which is a two-edge sword here…


Title: Gifts · Author: Acacea · Genres: Humor: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 500
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-13 23:31:03
Heh! I was expecting the usual sort of by-play between the Steward and
an adolescent or adult Faramir, not Denethor dealing with toddler
Faramir so that Finduilas could take a nap! Very sweet and very funny
at the end.

Title: A Kingly Discussion · Author: GamgeeFest · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 780
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-14 00:24:55
For me, very few LOTR fanfiction stories come close to capturing the
unique character of Tolkien's hobbits. This is one of them.

GamgeeFest writes an outstanding hobbit vignette; set several years
after the Ring War, with Gaffer Gamgee getting a letter from King
Elessar and sharing it with some friends. The dialogue and speech
patterns sounded very hobbitish. I loved the attention paid by the
hobbits to Aragorn, and all Men's, knowledge of their lineage,
ancestry seems even more important to hobbits than to Heirs of Isildur
and GamgeeFest, and the Gaffer, remember this. The pity shown by the
hobbits towards Men, whose fragile feet blister so easily, is amusing
and credible.

The Gaffer is well-written; I can see his likeness to his son, even if
he is somewhat more provincial; he respects courtesy and kindness.

Very enjoyable!

Title: In the Bleak, Cold Winter · Author: GamgeeFest · Races:
Hobbits: Pre-Quest · ID: 493
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-14 01:14:08
This was a sweet story, centering on the relationships between Sam,
Frodo and Merry. The backstory for this, told in "Under the Harvest
Moon", is that Sam and Merry had a falling out after one of Merry's
pranks put Sam into trouble with his Gaffer; their relationship was
never the same after that. This story takes place several years later;
their relationship is still strained, but Merry is doing his utmost to
win back Sam's trust.

The interaction between the three hobbits takes place as Sam is
healing from a badly sprained ankle. Sam, of course, is hesitant to
rely on the masters to take care of him, and part of the story deals
with how Sam comes to terms with receiving help from his 'betters.'
Another sweet aspect to the story is a developing relationship between
Merry and the healer, Miss Willow.

A capital tale!

Title: The White Tower · Author: Anna Wing · Races: Elves · ID: 528
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-14 01:51:05
Definitely one of the best post-Silmarillion Valinor stories I can
remember reading, and one of Anna Wing's best tales as well.

Elwing is written excellently; as woman and elf; she is not sitting
idly by pining for Earendil to come home from his star-bearing
routine. She rules a domain, and rules it well. The embassy of the
reborn Feanorian twins troubles the peace of her domain and her own
peace of mind; and thereby hangs the tale.

I loved the details about the Valinorean Elven technological progress;
the sky-ships and submarine. Earendil is also characterised very well;
and the resolution was quite moving and believable.

Title: The Broideress Arc · Author: Maeve Riannon · Times: First Age
and Prior · ID: 745
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-14 03:01:44
A vivid and unusual portrait of the ill-fated Miriel Serinde. The
first chapter is not my favorite, but sets up the rest; and the rest
is haunting. The ending is unexpected and packs a punch; but works.
Special kudos to the Indis-Miriel confrontation; which does justice to
both ladies.

Title: The Land of Gift · Author: Maeve Riannon · Times: First Age and
Prior: House of Fingolfin · ID: 108
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-14 03:11:15
Intriguing foray into a possible fate of Tuor and Idril - there's an
element of Greek mythology here that works well; and the ending is
quite appropriate and beautiful in a bittersweet way.

Title: The Horses of Eorl · Author: Branwyn · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 477
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-14 04:55:45
I hadn't thought of the horses... but surely they suffered and needed
healing too. Radagast was a masterful choice.

Title: Blackest Fate · Author: Branwyn · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 476
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-14 04:56:16
Oooooh. This was heartbreaking, even as it left me reeling. There is
poetry in the carefully chosen words and images: [They spoke of simple
things--of galloping through the grass as it bowed before the wind, of
resting where clear water washed the flat stones. Of the first glimpse
of home above a distant ridge.] And perfect in its timing and
delivery. Very well done! I'd love to see more on this subject
(complete with liberation, and healing).

Title: Gold Rings and Sam · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Poetry · ID: 501
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-14 04:56:26
LOL! Extremely clever mimicking of the genre, a perfect parody.
*applauding* Won't quote or give details, wouldn't want to give away
the delight.

Title: Calm after the Storm · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 350
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-14 04:56:42
So much is told in this small space, so much hinted at, layers within
layers, a much deeper story, of which we see only a glimpse here.
Nicely done.

Title: All in a Day's Work · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 421
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-14 04:57:15
*applauding* O very well done, indeed. Masterful storytelling,
advancing the plot with each varying viewpoint (and for some reason it
was a relief that all POVs were on the side of good, even the
reluctant merchant, drawing a clearer distinction between good and
evil). I found myself cheering the farmer on, in his decisive action,
nodding at the preparations and strategy, hushing when the story
hushed, and leaping forward eagerly to the finish as the action swirled.

While this could as easily been a much longer work, it stands very
well as it is. (More impressive, maybe, considering the constraints of
the drabble form.)

Title: A Need To Know · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War · ID: 776
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-14 04:57:40
Ah, Pearl, this was so very hobbity. I love your shrewd Farmer Cotton,
and his methods worked very well, didn't they? He knew just what
buttons to push, to find his answer. MEWD.

Title: A Mother's Touch · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-14 04:59:50
Very original thought here: mundane subject plus Tolkien character
combined into a diverting read. The footnotes show a depth of research
comprising as many words as the story.

Title: Dangerous Place · Author: Ushmushmeifa · Genres: Drama: Minas
Tirith · ID: 590
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-14 05:00:12
Sadly wrenching, tragic in its detail. A plausible reason for a
decision made. Nice sketch, too, of the brothers' relationship.

Title: Time · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 414
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-14 05:01:00
Unusual and sensitively written story about Legolas' interest in a
mortal tragedy. The Elven archer, while exploring Ithilien with
Faramir, comes across an old and ruined house, and wonders as to the
fate of those who lived there.

Legolas' resolve to find the names of the unknown family and its
members makes for good juxtaposition of human and Elven attitudes
towards mortality and the value of individual life. Faramir is also
well-written; as is an OFC.

Title: Stirrings of Shadow · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Adventure:
Incomplete · ID: 233
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-14 05:08:50
One of the most believably written, and interesting, Rohan stories I
have yet read in Tolkien fanfiction - all the more laudable, since
Fiondil throws Thorongil and some Elves into the mix as well as
Thengel, Morwen and many other characters into the mix.

Aragorn-a.k.a.-Thorongil is quite honest about being raised in
Imladris, which is an interesting and refreshing development; thus
facilitating Elven/Rohirrim interaction.

There's a serio-comic arc in the beginning of the story that is
particularly readable; when Thorongil makes a very minor mistake in
speaking the Eorling language, and ends up in a dungeon, and then
faces Thengel-King's justice and punishment.

I am awestruck by the depth of Fiondil's language skills, not only in
the construction of words and sentences, but in the understanding of
the nuances and minutiae. The linguistic details don't clog the story,
but advance it. Fiondil's skill extends to the politics and customs of
the Mark; the reader feels that he/she is actually there in the realm
of the horse-lords.

I look forward to the continuance and end of the story.



Title: Tillecking Night in Bree · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men:
General Drabble · ID: 455
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-14 05:13:16
The hobbit youngsters remind me of future Christmas Carolers; perhaps
this is the genesis of the custom in later Middle-earth. There's an
appropriate air of mystery surrounding the two Rangers; and the
drabble as a whole has a Dickensian flair.



Title: Clothes Make the Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Humor: Drabble · ID: 625
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-14 08:06:23
So many things are being shown in this drabble, which is as smooth and
subtle and refreshing as Celeborn himself.

The characterizations are marvelous - all four of them, whether
speaking or non-speaking roles - and play out against each other
perfectly in this well-chosen setting, a "missing scene" from the
Appendices in RotK. First, there is a wonderful description of
Galadriel, which captures her overtly powerful presence and uses a
wholly apt metaphor to do so. Then, we receive a deft and insightful
look into Celeborn and Galadriel's relationship: Celeborn quietly
tolerating [Noldorin obsessions]; his gentle reassurance and
encouragement of Aragorn upon Galadriel's departure; and his oblique
support of his mate's plans, achieved in his own more subtle fashion.

["Humor her."] The concept of anyone humoring Galadriel still makes me
laugh aloud.

Aragorn's discomfort with the extravagant clothing pressed upon him is
well shown, and would be exactly my expectation of a wandering Ranger
with his sensibilities; and his reaction to the comment about Arwen
(who is indeed deep enough to look beyond mere fancy dress, title
notwithstanding) is simply priceless.

This is lovely, delightful, touching and humorous, all at once; a
highly nuanced and very enjoyable gift for any reader.

Title: A Queen Among Farmers' Wives · Author: Imhiriel · Genres:
Humor: Drabble · ID: 635
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-14 08:09:06
As a long-time married person myself, I always enjoy an inside look at
the various couples of Middle-earth. As she often does, Imhiriel draws
on the unusual and little-visited corners of Arda for her examination
of a humorous inter-marital spat (and make-up), by focusing on a
husband and wife team that gets even less attention in fanfiction, I
think, than it does in Tolkien's books.

It starts with an oblique tie-in to the enigmatic Tom Bombadil and the
hinted friendship between him and Farmer Maggot, who must have been
drunk indeed to wander back singing *that* song - a friendship that I
seldom recalled, actually, until Imhiriel's drabble gave me this
indelible image to imprint on my memory.

The title is a perfect play on Frodo's quote, with the twist of Mrs.
Maggot's promised greeting for her returning wayward husband. The
unexpected resolution always leaves me laughing and reflecting on the
resiliency of hobbits. In fact, the entire drabble gives me a definite
"hobbity" feeling, perhaps because of the irrepressible joy. And the
love, certainly the love.

This drabble is very charming, and well-written and so structured as
to paint a clear picture, with wonderful touches like the [off-key
singing] and [tapping his nose]. It never fails to leave me with a
delighted grin.

Title: Rauros, golden Rauros-falls · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor:
Drabble · ID: 624
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-14 08:26:01
As many times as I've read this, I'm still guiltily snickering and
chuckling by the end of it... Poor Boromir. It's cruel enough that
Tolkien killed him off as a plot device to send Frodo and Sam off to
Mordor alone, thus robbing him of ever seeing his beloved Gondor
redeemed after a lifetime spent in fighting for it; and also
oh-so-conveniently removed one possible obstacle to Aragorn's ascension.

Fortunately, fanfiction has given readers the opportunity to see that
scenario revised, with varying degrees of success. Imhiriel plays on
that desire that so many possess, of having Boromir somehow live past
Parth Galen, and hands us a very funny twist on the premise. It would
not be nearly so successful if the writing did not call up so clearly
the vision of the funeral boat and Boromir's condition, and the
approaching "code red" situation.

Ah, if only Aragorn and Legolas's lament had lasted just a little bit
longer...

Title: Bathing Boromir · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 645
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-14 08:30:19
I really enjoy Ioreth's characterization here. In a bit of an
about-face from her somewhat silly portrayal in RotK, she is shown as
a strong individual dealing with simpering, dallying fools along with
her serious work of healing. I like her protective stance over the
beloved son of the Steward.

Title: To Represent the Elves · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Humor
· ID: 810
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2007-10-14 12:48:59
This is a lovely glimpse at the attempts of some of the members of the
Fellowship in getting acquainted. Pippin (the youngest of the
Fellowship) and Legolas (the oldest, if one doesn't count Gandalf)
have a delightful conversation about playing games and whether one is
too old for them. I loved that Legolas, while the consummate Elf with
all the inherent poise of his race, can be tripped up by one Hobbit.

["Master Legolas, Pip!" Merry piped up from in front of them, and
Legolas nearly stumbled at the term. He preferred to dispense with
formalities.]

And Pippin's mendacious explanation of why he knows Legolas is an elf
is so typically hobbitish and hysterically funny.

Legolas' character is aptly delineated by such terse phrases
as:[...Legolas scouted ahead, watched and listened, counseled with
Aragorn and Gandalf, and avoided the dwarf and Man of Gondor. Silence
was his mantle, caution his guide.] Yet, he's not above a little
teasing, as he actually answers Pippin's question about his age just
so he can see the Hobbit's reaction. His response to Aragorn's teasing
was also funny.

Legolas may indeed be one of the youngest elves in all of
Middle-earth, yet he is quite capable of representing his race with
all the necessary grace required. I am sure Pippin and the other
Hobbits will make sure of that.

Title: Gentlemen's Night Out · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor: Gondor
or Rohan · ID: 181
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2007-10-14 13:22:50
In a letter to his son, Erchirion of Dol Amroth describes one certain
night after the Ring War in which he, Legolas, Elladan and Elrohir
discuss the merits of LACE and just how true it's description of
elvish sexuality really is. A rather humorous, fast-paced discussion
that had me laughing out loud in some parts ensues. Legolas describing
how young elves in Mirkwood were "initiated" into elvish sexuality was
quite the funniest part of the whole story and the Elrondion's
disgusted reaction to just who Legolas had enjoyed himself while on
the Quest was also hysterical. An interesting take on whether LACE
actually is a credible piece of literature or pure bunk.

Title: Maitimo and Findekáno · Author: Oshun · Genres: Romance: Second
Age or Earlier · ID: 57
Reviewer: Ignoble Bard · 2007-10-14 14:45:38
Those familiar with the Silmarillion know the histories of Findekáno
the Valiant and Maitimo, eldest son of Fëanor. What they might not
know is that their epic, and ultimately tragic, love story began in
the days of their youth on Tirion and Formenos. A lifelong friendship
becomes something deeper when, forced to spend a summer apart,
Findekáno finally has the courage to tell Maitimo what he has wanted
to tell him all along - that he loves him.

What follows is a timeless story, freshly realized, of the yearnings
of youth and the courageousness of love. The sense of innocence and
promise is beautifully captured in Oshun's story. The descriptions are
lush, the characters, especially Maitimo's large, boisterous family,
are recognizable and as varied as a group of siblings are inevitably
bound to be. It is also a nice touch that Fëanor sees his son's
relationship as a way to subtly dig his half brother, lending credence
to his acceptance of their, shall we say, unusual situation.

In the first blush of their relationship, Maitimo and Findekáno become
the metaphor for an idyllic world that will, all too soon, be
shattered by war and loss. The progress of their relationship though
this story and its sequel mirrors and deepens Tolkien's rendition of
friendship tested and victorious through catastrophic circumstances.

And besides, how many stories inspire one to put their feelings into
verse?

Raven hair, and eyes of blue,
The loyalty of a friend so true
Is a gift the Vala cannot equal
My breath is bated awaiting the sequel
For how can love so fair, divine
A love to stand all tests of time
Fail to spark within a reader
The poignant yearning of souls so tender
Fingon, Maedhros, from the start
Through all the ages, heart to heart





Title: He Came To Meet Me · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Romance
· ID: 33
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:02:57
Elegant and understated writing which seems very apt for the setting
of the story.

The land itself helping in repelling and hindering the invasion of the
Ruffians was a fascinating topic and it was described very vividly,
creating a real landscape in the North of the Shire that seems to fit
with what little we actually know canonically, and which clearly also
shaped its inhabitants.

You created an interesting background for Diamond, and I like it how
Pippin and she find together by walking through the wilderness, with
nothing said between them, but the undercurrent noticeable, until
Diamond's sudden but somehow inevitable ["please"].

Title: Fourth Age, Year 13 · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 628
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:04:31
A fast-paced story that captures well the concern and rush parents
might often feel seeing their children grow up, a time that seems in
hindsight to fly by so fast. The wistful tone of the narrative is
particularly apt.

The moments chosen to highlight each stage of growing up are
meaningful and vivid, at once universal and at the same time highly
personal and individual for Aragorn and his daughter.

And then - oh horror! - puberty has come, and everything that worked
wonderful until now between parents and child is suddenly wrong and
stupid.

I also like the brief allusions to events in the wider world, showing
that nobody grows up in a vacuum, and that in this New Age, children
are far more likely to be *allowed* to grow up in peace (in all senses
of the word), rather than be forced into adulthood and adult concerns
all too soon.

Title: Renewal · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017
TA: Drabble · ID: 692
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:06:19
This is an absolutely beautiful word-picture that you paint in this
drabble!

Nature restored, with an abudance of plants and flowers in a multitude
of colours, like a tapestry. The colours of the rocks complement those
of the flowers, and even the buildings the people have erected are
interwoven smoothly into this natural landscape.

Everything seems to live in harmony, a concept strenghtened by the way
the different noises seem to blend to a melody, regardless of whether
they come from nature, from artificial sources like bells, from
animals or the people who tend them.

Framing this impression as something that Bilbo experiences with
surprise and, I imagine, delight, was a graceful touch at the end.

The accompanying photo fits perfectly - what a breath-taking view!

Title: Journey Home · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood Elves
· ID: 102
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:07:05
The point of view of the young warrior is used very effectively, it
lets the readers experience what he experiences and feels very
directly, especially at the beginning when his circumstances gradually
reveal themselves.

The tight, narrow focus which widens to take in more of his
surroundings as he begins to heal fits very well with what someone in
his situation would actually register, I think, and so supports the
narrative wonderfully.

Nendir is an engaging original character I felt immediate sympathy
for, in his desire to prove himself a worthy warrior, but feeling just
so inexperienced and helpless.

It was interesting to see Legolas as a good, caring leader of the men
under his command, comforting and bracing, taking their minds from
their injuries.

Title: Who The Sword Devours · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men · ID: 364
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:08:56
Resonant, compelling prose, employing evocative imagery that seems to
give life even to inanimate things and concepts.

The descriptions are at once very visceral and immediate, down to the
most gritty and base details, and at the same time, the language is
tantalisingly elusive.

Boromir's pride, his "masterfulness", his confidence almost bordering
on vanity, his fierce possessiveness where Gondor is concerned,
communicate themselves from the very first lines onward, but also his
supreme skills as a commander and leader of men, who knows his
soldiers and knows how to handle them.

The story of David, Uriah and Bathsheba is transposed smoothly into a
Middle-earth context; I could really see how the Boromir you were
drawing might be led to such a dark path by this searing temptation.

The description of the terror the Nazgûl evoke was one of the most
spine-chilling, scary and affective depiction I have read.

Title: The Love of Lore · Author: Oshun · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 271
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:10:37
Two sweet little interlinked pieces, showcasing in a touching and
engaging way Faramir as the scholar requested in the prompt for the
story, in two different stages of his life. The story exemplify well
the ["love of lore"] of the title.

The descriptions are evocative, conveying individual appearance and
actions vividly.

First, we are shown Faramir, already a curious and bookish person when
very young. Later in life, he bequeathes these characteristics to his
own son Elboron.

The short but memorable cameo by an obviously already failing
Finduilas, added much to the poignancy of the tender scene between the
two brothers.

I like how the persons he interacts with clearly support and
appreciate this side of Faramir, first Boromir, and later Aragorn.

Title: The Case of the Purloined Mushrooms · Author: Inkling · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 298
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:13:05
A really delightful, witty story; well-paced, and well-plotted; with
lively dialogues.

The narrator is a marvellous original character, in all senses of the
word "original". He is a complex, engaging character, opinionated,
entertaining, fond of his leisurely job and the news, recipes and food
it provides him with on his rounds, and rather accidentally takes on
the role of sleuth.

The other characters are equally wonderful, regardless of whether they
are orignal or canonical ones. The portrayals of the known Hobbits,
like Bilbo, Frodo and Sam were spot-on, and Dora Baggins's character
was credibly extrapolated from what little there is written of her in
the books.

The customs and pecularities you built around the Hobbits' known
fondness for mushrooms and show in actual detail or just in brief
allusions or references were a constant highlight of the tale,
especially in showing to just which extremes Hobbits will go in this
regard, and interwoven smoothly into a believable picture of Hobbit
society in general.

And a tasty-sounding recipe as an extra service - yumm!

Title: A Game of Chess · Author: Altariel · Genres: Romance: Gondor ·
ID: 609
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:17:01
Formal but flowing language, very realistic, complex characterisations
and relationships.

I like the way this story is set up, with the three narrators taking
turns in telling a chapter: it makes it easy to see how their
different experiences and attitudes contribute to misconceptions and
misperceptions and thus to the problems in the marriage.

The story depicts in realistic stages how a relationship can (nearly)
founder due to too little communication or miscommunication. It also
shows how much patience, tolerance and will is needed to repair the
damage.

It is also a very good portrayal of PTSD (and I thought
["war-fettered"] was a clever description), not only of the symptons
themselves and how they influence those that suffer them, but also
what a strain it can be on their environment.

I personally don't see Denethor as physically abusive, and Faramir
less shaped by his disapproval, and also by his war experiences, but I
can accept the way it is laid out consistently here and in other
stories of the "Unabeauverse".

Title: A Hobbit's Tale · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Poetry: With
Hobbits · ID: 253
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:18:00
Engagingly told. I like how the story of TH was "summarised" in the
poem and framed by the story of Bilbo as the old story-teller. The
flashbacks and on the other hand foreshadowing to events of LotR that
are alluded to give the poem an ominous tone, in particular the last line.

The first stanza, with direct speech by Bilbo, is like an invitation
to the readers themselves. The narration then goes on to describe the
actual story-telling, seguing more and more into the tale itself. And
towards the end, the foreshadowings enable a look to the future,
before it ends again, in full circle, with Bilbo.

Title: Better Days Ahead · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 51
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-14 15:19:05
Marvellous use of language! The character of Shagrat comes truly alive
here, and it really really reads like a pep talk for his fellows. You
used what little Orcish expressions and slang can be found in the
books, and expanded on it logically.

This unusual point of view on how the West vanquished Sauron seems
perfectly understandable - hey, Sauron himself *did* use the proper
forms of engagement, for example when he sent the Mouth of Sauron to
parlay! Frodo's and Sam's task must, of course, look like an
underhanded sneak attack to Shagrat and his ilk.

His plans for the future sound very ominous, and if through Arwen's
descendants something of the Elves still lives on in Mankind, then it
seems reasonable to assume (if horrific to contemplate) that also some
Orcish traits might have been passed on.

As one who likes black humour, my favourite passage was the one near
the end beginning with ["Nah,"].

Title: Temptation · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851
- 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 419
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-14 15:44:34
A very nicely written drabble, in which Thorongil's compassion leads
him, seemingly, towards temptation. It's good to see Aragorn in a
moment of human weakness (almost), though Aragorn/Arwen purists need
not fear for his honor.The descriptive details, though they deal with
scenes of a "less than savory nature" are well written – the young
courtesan's hair smelling of jasmine was a very nice touch.

Title: A Rohan Tapestry · Author: shirebound · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 96
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-14 15:49:33
I'm not sure that I've encountered many stories involving the hobbits
during their stay in Rohan, on the way back to the Shire, so I found
this an unusual and enjoyable read. I particularly liked Eomer's
interactions with the hobbits, and the observation that the new king
of Rohan was younger than Pippin! My heart ached for Merry as he
suffered recurrences of the Black Breath due to his emotional
fragility over King Theoden's death;it was good to see that
relationship drawn out a bit.

A unique touch was the vivid description of the visit to the caves of
Aglarond - it sounded exactly like the caverns I've visited here in
Virginia. A nice, additional surprise in a deftly written story.

Title: The Green Hill · Author: Baranduin · Races: Cross-Cultural: The
Fellowship · ID: 562
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-14 15:50:50
Even for no other reason, I would have loved this story just for the
line [It was not a laugh he'd heard from Aragorn before—young and
carefree and barely tinged with sorrow.] which absolutely stopped me
in my tracks. When have we ever seen Aragorn laughing and playful, so
bewitched and besotted from falling in love that he can't remember a
word that was said?

[It wasn't a smile on Aragorn's face now; it was a grin, a big toothy,
goofy grin. And young, oh his face was so young now.] I was deeply
touched by this vision of slightly-lovesick Aragorn recalling joyful
past days on the hill of Cerin Amroth. And Frodo, dear Frodo, sounding
both wistful and wise as he confides his vision of the future. At the
time in which they are speaking they have no idea what the future
holds, save desperation and sorrow and pain, but the gift of hope that
Frodo holds out to his friend is precious and heartwarming to both
Aragorn, and us as well.

Title: Soap · Author: Aliana · Genres: Alternate Universe: Gondor or
Rohan · ID: 552
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-14 15:52:53
This startling and imaginative post-modern gapfiller to 2006 MEFA
Award Winner "Fallen" showcases Aliana's droll humor and sense of the
ridiculous. It's actually like a M*A*S*H/ Return of the King
crossover, featuring one of the unnamed nurses we see running in the
opening credits, and an ambulatory (and semi-talkative) young patient.
Professor Tolkien would be scratching his head down to the scalp if he
read this, but Larry Gelbart, et al, would be standing and applauding.
The description of Crazy Lou's Fast Food and Sushi Bar is priceless –
we've all been there, and we recognized it instantly, whether it was
called Santeremo's (in Alamosa, Colorado), or More Than Coffee (in
Blacksburg. Virginia), or just plain Cheers in Boston. It's the place
where everybody goes.

Aside from the perfectly realized absurdity, though, there's a beauty
and lyricism to Aliana's writing that is unmatched anywhere in our
fandom. Beren's analogy of his pain to a soap bubble [beautiful soap
bubble of denial, little rainbow patches swimming around on the
glycerine surface] is heartaching, as is that climactic moment when
his carefully constructed facade all comes apart: [Outside, he falls
to pieces. It's like being cut with a very sharp blade; for a second
you know it's happened but there's no pain, and then… The bubble's
popped, the rainbow swirls are gone, and the inside of his mouth
tastes like nothing but salt and bitterness.] Nobody, NOBODY, writes
like Aliana, and we are fortunate to have the opportunity to watch her
develop her writing gifts and talents, to take risks, to discover and
nurture her unique voice.

Title: Charms of Wisdom and Grace · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ithilien · ID: 460
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-14 18:07:27
A lovely Faramir and Eowyn ficlet with a delight image of Faramir at
the loom weaving a coverlet for his son in the hope it will protect
him when he becomes a soldier.

How appropriate a man like Faramir should want to share the weaving
with his wife.

This story conveys the depth of Faramir's love for his wife and family
and Eowyn's too in a few words.

Title: Freddy and the Thain's Rabbit · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits · ID: 251
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2007-10-14 22:24:32
This brilliant artist and author has once again out done herself with
this most lovely story. Grey Wonderer has created the world of one
stuffed toy rabbit, an original character named Errol, and has
chronicled his own adventures through several stories with a
well-known hobbit that we all know and love - Pippin. However, this
curious story takes a different turn where Pippin is not directly
involved with Errol this time, however, another child is and the
reader grows to love this child throughout the story.

Without going too deep into the details of this wonderful story, Errol
once again expains where he is, why is there, and does not hesitate to
speak his mind on a particular subject or of a particular person,
whether they be good, bad, or beloved. Whenever Errol is involved in a
story, I can be guarranteed that I will be using a handkerchief at the
end! As with all of her stories that are Errol-centric, Grey Wonderer
can make a reader laugh and then cry within the same paragraph. Her
character, Errol, can take his readers on a virtual emotional
rolercoaster throughout the story.

This talented author's stories are always well written and well
crafted, enrapturing the reader from the first word to the last. And I
especially love her Errol series.

Title: First Flight · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 513
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-15 00:54:27
Oh, this is a lot of fun! It was nice to see Radagast in a "normal"
interaction with his birds, and nice fleshing out of Gwaihir's name as
well.

Title: An Expansion of the Family Influence · Author: Auntiemeesh ·
Times: Early Third Age: 1-2850 TA · ID: 819
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-15 00:54:38
This a nice fleshing out of an important chapter of hobbit history. I
particularly liked the attention paid to the economic situation that
would have led to the expansion; it made the events seem plausible and
hilighted hobbity perseverance and generosity quite nicely.

Title: Inroads · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 45
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-15 00:56:42
[Warning: This review has spoilers for some plot details.]

It's really nice to think that at least some Gondorians recognized the
good that Eowyn did at Pelennor. Though the image of the girl's mother
being surprised that Eowyn could speak Sindarin was priceless, too.
Excellent writing all around.

Title: No Escape · Author: Aranel Took · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 324
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-15 00:56:59
I'm a sucker for original characters. And dwarves. And especially
dwarven characters. So obviously there's a lot about this drabble that
appealed to me, and when I realized what exactly the author was doing
I definitely smiled. Yet, I'm not sure that my personal tastes fully
account for how much I liked this drabble. It's a nice gapfiller, and
really gets at the dwarven spirit well. But there is also something
more fundamental going on here: at a base level, it's about a mother
protecting her children, and that seems to transcend every culture.
It's very affective both at telling a uniquely dwarven story and a
moment that could have been many different characters at different
points in Middle-earth's history. Brava, Aranel!

Title: The Far Corner of the Garden · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ithilien · ID: 554
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-15 00:58:07
[Warning: This review contains spoilers for some plot details.]

Oh, this was gorgeous, Ann! There is a lot of healing going on here:
first for Ithilien, but also for Eowyn, that she would plan this kind
of thing rather than thinking of grand plans to save her whole
country. It takes a lot of psychological healing to be able to take
such joy in the small every-day things. And I found it a glorious
touch that she could think of grave-flowers as not *just*
grave-flowers. All and all, a lovely slice of life for Ithilien's
first couple.

Title: A Song of Silence · Author: Nessime · Races: Men · ID: 156
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-15 00:58:58
This story has so much of what I always love about Nessime's stories.
There are only peripheral mentions (and one brief scene) with canon
characters, and the people that populate this story are for the most
part her own invention - yet they are every inch Rohirrim, in Eohere's
ability to handle horses, the warrior's ethic, and the importance of
weaving tapestries. This piece really captures the pathos of the women
of Rohan, and it made me identify with the sacrifices of Tolkien's
characters as well.

Title: The Rose in the Fisted Glove · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama:
Second Age or Earlier · ID: 240
Reviewer: Ignoble Bard · 2007-10-15 02:30:49
This was one of the first of this author's stories I read and I was
immediately impressed with her command of language and the profundity
of her plotting and characterization. Since then I have come to expect
stories that not only entertain but are thought provoking as well.

In "The Rose in the Fisted Glove" what might have been a simple pwp in
the hands of a lesser author - Thranduil's servant and squire offers
him "warrior's comfort" on the eve of battle during the Last Alliance
- becomes a tale of wisdom attained and nobility affirmed in the face
of unexpected tragedy. Along the way Thranduil learns some unforeseen
lessons about himself and his squire, and a bitter life lesson as
well, all on his way to becoming the king who ruled Mirkwood during
its darkest days without the benefit of a ring of power. Mirkwood and
its history does not have much canon background outside of "The
Hobbit", yet it comes wholeheartedly alive in this and the author's
many other tales.

The universe Jael has created, centered around Thranduil and the Elves
of Mirkwood, rivals, and in most cases, surpasses that of the some of
the best fanfiction authors and even, dare I say it, Tolkien himself,
in its scope and depth. A feat made all the more amazing when one
considers the comparatively short time she has been crafting her
tales. This is a pivotal moment in that universe and one well worth
adding to your wish or favorites list.

Title: Not an Ordinary Day · Author: nau_tika · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 737
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-15 02:34:03
This was a truly delightful story which lifted my heart to read.On the
surface,it concerns Pippin causing an unfortunate accident to
Legolas,but the heart of the story is friendship and mutual support,
something we all need and can identify with.

Pippin is mortified in having hurt Legolas, but everyone tries to make
him feel better,especially Boromir and Aragorn. I found Pippin's scene
with Aragorn,especially touching and the reminder that we all mistakes
and should not judge harshly is a very good point on which to conclude.

I had forgotten just how much I'd enjoyed this story on my first
reading and it was a pleasure to return to it.

Title: Black Eyes · Author: Lialathuveril · Genres: Romance: With
Rohirrim · ID: 177
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-15 03:15:35
This second of Lialathuveril's charming Eomer/Lothiriel romances is
one of the best of the genre - crackling with wit, tension, and good
dialogue. The plot is fine too; with a genuine crisis that is
particularly believable. I like Lothiriel being, as the daughter of a
great military captain, conversant in both military strategy and the
practical aspects of provisioning.

Title: The Tragedye of Leaflet, Prince of Mirkwood · Author: Jael ·
Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 243
Reviewer: Ignoble Bard · 2007-10-15 03:26:15
Odds bodkins, what a tale rests herein! Hark and I shall list its many
japes and jests as they fall just so, trippingly from my fingers. 'Tis
a tale full of sound and fury, signifying laughter, as Leaflet and his
trusty companion, Aragorn (Now tell me, who deservest to be the hero
and who the sidekick in these tales?) return to Mirkwood to find an
unfortunate elleth being laid to rest by two ribald gravediggers. But
the tale endeth not there as it is discovered the elleth hath died of
boredome waiting for her attentions to be returned by Prince Leaflet,
who only has eyes for… anyone of the male persuasion as it wouldst seem.

Much skullduggery ensueth as Leaflet and Aragorn chat up the
gravediggers until the guest of honor arrives, along with King
Thranduil and his retinue. Yet something remaineth rotten in the woods
of mirk as the Elves canst resist engaging in a bit of gamesmanship
over the corpse as to who loveth the fair Orofiriel more.

A great little ficlet for lovers of Shakespeare and humor alike, this
is a great send up of both the Immortal Bard and the conventions of
LOTR. Tryeth it, and thou shallst regreteth it not.

Title: Mardil Goes A-Courting · Author: Le Rouret · Genres: Humor:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 366
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-15 04:28:20
This amusing story is a delightful read.The characters are somewhat
more informal than my personal view of them, but the writer makes them
very likeable and the tale is enjoyable.

Title: Romancing the Smut · Author: Llinos · Genres: Poetry: With
Hobbits · ID: 797
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-15 04:33:57
This was very funny!

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 16
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-15 04:36:37
This was both clever and hilarious as the very talented author manages
to skillfully combine Tolkien's Dwarfs with Disneys!

Title: The Tragedye of Leaflet, Prince of Mirkwood · Author: Jael ·
Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 243
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-15 04:45:11
What a wonderful, well-crafted story. It raises the bar for the genre
of comedy/parody. I particularly love how it takes on Hamlet and wins!
Oh, dear, I cannot even write this review about it without laughing.
The lady knows her Shakespeare and also is not afraid to give him a
poke or two, mild ones in comparison to what she does to Tolkien
fanfic slash, however! Ouch! It helps to be familiar with some of the
worst clichés of the genre, but certainly is not necessary to
appreciate this story.

That poor girl--the dead one I mean. She gets even more sympathy from
me than the real Ophelia did (is histrionic the word I want?). Love
the gravediggers and their songs. The mix-ups and misunderstandings
are handled just right. Legolas and Aragorn are adorable.

I don't necessarily agree or intend to defend the scholars who claim
that Shakespeare's comedies are better than his tragedies, but
something of the overworked student still lives in me I think, for me
to get such a thrill out of Hamlet-the-Comedy. (He did go on and on,
didn't he? Took himself a bit seriously, I would say.) Now Jael will
probably hunt me down and beat me with a stick, because she clearly
knows and loves her Shakespeare.


Title: Coda · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Second Age: Drabble · ID: 627
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-15 05:02:37
This is one of the absolute best drabbles that I have ever read. It is
heartbreaking for me to think of the book being lost (I know, I'm
probably missing the main point here, but haven't we all dreamed of
how wonderful it would be to get our hands on am actual text of the
Noldolantë). I also like to think about Maglor's relationship to Elros
and Elrond and this drabble is satisfying in that it leads me to think
about another possible aspect of that. My opinion that the drabble is
a much misused format is only reinforced by reading one like this,
which take the convention and uses it as it should be used--Taking not
one but two intriguing subjects (the story of Maglor, Elros and Elrond
as well as the destruction of Númenor) and exploring them in so few words.

Title: Rage · Author: Deandra · Genres: Drama: Minas Tirith · ID: 353
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-15 05:03:37
A new and rather different spin on the romance of Eomer and Lothiriel
- in this tale; Eomer is not the appealing studly horse-lord we've
come to know and love; but a man who bears his own scars from the Ring
War.

Interesting and appealing story, with good chemistry between Eomer and
Lothiriel; the latter being gentle and well-mannered but no pushover.

Title: To Represent the Elves · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Humor
· ID: 810
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-15 05:07:51
An amusing and delightful story in which Pippin asks Legolas a lot of
questions and is amazed by the Elf's great age.I personally,would find
so many questions annoying but then, though I consider myself quite
ancient,in the eyes of the Elves, I'm hardly more than an infant!
I loved the way the writer depicts the growing friendship betwen Elf
and Hobbit here, a friendship not often explored in fanfic.

Title: Bonfires of Trust, Flashfloods of Pain · Author: Klose ·
Genres: Drama: Second Age or Earlier · ID: 413
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-15 05:25:38
This is a moving and intriguing account of some of the reasons why
Fingolfin chose to follow Fëanor from Aman. Canon, of course, sums it
up rather tersely as his desire not to leave the leadership of his
people in the hands of Fëanor. Klose explores in detail other personal
aspects of that story.

Her look at the family relationships, at Fingolfin's love for his
children, Fingon, in particular, and on the other hand for his wife,
are convincing and psychologically authentic. The part where Fingolfin
describes his memories of Fingon injuring himself as a young child and
looking to his parents to make it better is heart-wrenching.

The small details and large considerations of the motivation for the
separation of Fingolfin and Anairë is devastating. As Klose writes
it,.its inevitability makes it no less painful. Many of us writing
fanfiction are very partisan in holding onto to motivations for
characters, created with the little bits and pieces we have cobbled
together from canon to develop our own stories, or the back stories
that support them. This story impresses me because, despite the fact
that I hold somewhat different opinions of how or why Fingolfin might
have made his choices, Klose has caused me, at very least for the
course of her short story, to suspend all of those and accept her
telling of it.

Title: Calm after the Storm · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 350
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-15 06:39:53
I really enjoyed this one, being of the firm opinion that there can
never, ever be enough Nekkid!Imrahil. Or Almost Nekkid!Imrahil.
Beautiful images-the sense of heat and weariness come through, as well
as the refreshment of the plunge.


Title: Maiden Voyage · Author: Fawsley · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 654
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-10-15 16:33:55
This wonderfully captures that moment when intention becomes reality,
as the voyagers realize they have finally left home behind.

Title: Through Shadows · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 620
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-10-15 16:39:41
This is such an interesting drabble. Gimli is caught here at a moment
of transition in a voyage filled with transition. He rejects his
people's traditions ["No true dwarf would take an Outsider to
Kheled-zâram"], allies himself with the outside world. However, in
putting his faith in Frodo, he is rewarded, as the Hobbit is shown to
be worthy of the trust of all Dwarves. By defying his own customs,
Gimli places the fate, and faith, of his people into the Ringbearer's
hands.

Title: Another Doom · Author: mrkinch · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 663
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-10-15 16:41:39
This is an interesting portrait of Boromir, motivated by and seeking
salvation in what may very well be his own doom.

Title: Duty and Devotion · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 411
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-15 23:57:29
We know Beregond left his post indeed to seek to protect his beloved
Captain Faramir, but in this ficlet we see the precise thinking that
led to the decision. What devotion the younger son of Denethor
inspired in the men who sought to protect Gondor!

Title: Missing · Author: conniemarie · Races: Hobbits: Vignette · ID: 731
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-16 00:20:25
These four vignettes--Merry and Pippin worried for what has occurred
with Frodo and Sam, Marigold and Rosie seeking to scry for where Sam
might be, Esmeralda demanding of her brother that Paladin tell her
what might have happened to their sons, and Sam watching over Frodo as
the Ring takes Its toll of him as they struggle along the road into
and through Mordor--are heartbreaking. Based on movie-verse, they yet
show the characters from book-verse.

Excellent images, and well communicated mood.

Title: The Yuletide Festival Feast Song · Author: Llinos · Genres:
Poetry: With Hobbits · ID: 802
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-16 00:26:04
With such a list of viands, the Yule feast cannot be anything but
filling! A good deal of fun to read.

Title: Late Start, Early Finish · Author: Lily Baggins · Genres:
Humor: Parody · ID: 602
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-16 00:32:43
Too old?

Title: Sunshine and Roses · Author: shirelinghpc · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 531
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-16 00:51:57
Merry and Pippin have one another, while Frodo recovers on his own--or
perhaps not. But when he sees that Sam is growing increasingly
isolated as no one appears to notice his pain, Faramir grows
increasingly concerned, until his taking the gardener apart and
speaking with him causes a crisis. Now the therapy prescribed by the
King allows Sam to find his own way.

I wish I could see Sam's final gift to Faramir myself!

Title: Charms of Wisdom and Grace · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ithilien · ID: 460
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-16 00:55:17
Signs of love can take so many forms; and in this companion to Ann's
weaving song we see it taking an unusual shape under Faramir's hands.

Love and easing expressed, as always with Annmarwalk, so eloquently,

Title: Debbie Does The Two Towers · Author: GypsieRose · Genres:
Alternate Universe · ID: 747
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-16 01:22:57
A rousing AU parody epic, starring the irrepressible self-insert Mary
Sue to beat all Mary Sues, Debbie. Debbie of course conquers all, via
sex or psychoanalysis or common sense, with pepper spray and karate to
subdue those pesky Uruk-hai.

Nothing is to be taken seriously here; and the sex, which, considering
that Debbie is well-built and accomodating, is not graphic, more
usually cleverly mentioned rather than vividly described. The girl
goes through practically every male participant in both book and
movie, from Elrond to Aragorn to the hobbits and some Ents; and
rallies the troops at Helm's Deep.

The narrative and the dialogue are quite brisk; and the plot,
improbable as it is, makes a kind of zany, tongue-in-cheek sense. Not
for the kiddies, but not unsafe for older teens either...

I've always loved a good parody, and this one fits the bill. Highly
recommended; as are the other installments in the series.

Title: In the Waiting · Author: Altariel · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 392
Reviewer: Ignoble Bard · 2007-10-16 01:34:58
Another excellent piece from Altariel of Faramir's musings after
letting Frodo and Sam continue their journey to Mordor..This is an
amazing little vignette featuring Faramir. Faramir is a difficult
character to write well, at least in my opinion, because he has such
emotional depth, and no one brings that out like Altariel. She is a
consummate observer of the human condition and her stories are always
a treat to read.

Faramir's moment of introspection is both a great character piece and
an insightful look into the family dynamic that makes the ring leave
him cold where his brother was driven to desperation. The final lines
are chilling and gave me a whole new appreciation of the risks Faramir
took by following the path he chose.


Title: Reunion · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama · ID: 727
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-16 01:54:10
Poignant and touching story of the last days of Sam, as he makes the
decision to journey to the Undying Lands, his reunion with Frodo, and
their ultimate fate. Larner is a sensitive storyteller with an
affinity for hobbits.

Interesting connections between Aragorn and the two hobbits; and the
White Trees (one in Minas Tirith, the other in the West).

Title: The Departure of Boromir · Author: Narnian Sprite · Genres:
Drama · ID: 622
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-16 02:06:17
A stirring, rather majestic account of Boromir's death and passage
beyond it. I like the way Boromir's spirit opens up to the world
beyond Middle-earth, and eternity

Title: Letter to Frodo · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 540
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-16 12:31:57
[This review contains spoilers]

This is an interesting tale. If Boromir did survive Amon Hen, I can
very easily see him grappling with what he did to Frodo, and I found
the writing and subsequent burning of the letter to be a very apt
device to get to the heart of the matter. Boromir fans won't want to
miss this one.

Title: Are You Going to Leave Me? · Author: Llinos · Genres: Drama:
With Merry · ID: 142
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:36:46
I think I never before noticed how in the film Merry's place beneath
his foes, with only his foot sticking out, mirrors Pippin's position
in the book.

This is indeed a nice gap-filler for the scene in the film. It makes
judicious choice of both movie and book characterisations. What a
clever answer to the question of how to get Merry up to the Houses of
Healing, and how it came to be that later he rode with Éomer to the
Black Gate!

Title: In the Hours of Joy · Author: Spindle Berry · Genres: Drama:
With Merry · ID: 289
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:37:46
Merry's emotions are palpable, even through the indirect way of
showing them through Gimli's eyes. I thought this choice of PoV was a
good move, as it could set what the Hobbit felt more into perspective,
bring it into sharper relief against the backdrop of everything else
that is happening.

Gimli's steadfast, unobtrusive companionship to Merry was wonderful,
as was Legolas' friendship in his turn for Gimli.

I admit when Merry left the tent and Gimli remarked that something had
changed, I was at the edge of my seat, could only draw breath when
Merry told him that Pippin had awoken - even though I knew Pippin
would recover!

Title: A Mother's Touch · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:40:25
The incongruity of juxtaposing the tenderness of the scene between
mother and offspring with the *nature* of said protagonists creates a
hilarious picture, while still the readers can enjoy the interaction.
It seems mothers face the same problems where their children are
concerned, regardless of race or time...

Each word is carefully chosen for the greatest effect in this
"double-layered" narrative, whether to conceal the unexpected twist
for a long time, or spring it on the unsuspecting readers (I remember
I did a double take on my first read of this story; as I hadn't read
the summary, I had really been taken in).

The characterisations are very appropriate, and despite the "everyday"
subject of the story, the disctinctive natures are still recognisable.
Especially the mother really is a very fascinating character - I wish
we would see more of her! The dialogue flows very naturally, even the
archaic form Readfah uses to address her son fits perfectly, and gives
the scene an even more loving, intimate feeling.

I also very much enjoyed the author's notes, which added even more
layers to this delightful double-drabble.

Title: A Texas Gay Boy in King Thranduil's Court · Author: Ignoble
Bard · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 182
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:40:54
An outrageously irreverent romp, plundering all sorts of fandom
conventions (mostly those prone to turn out bad!fics) and poking fun
at them at the same time. I especially enjoyed the way lines from the
films were twisted, Mike's impersonation of Wilhelm Tell, and the
arrow-procuring methods.

Title: Poking The Badger · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 209
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:42:40
The interaction between the characters was well-written, the deep
affection both cousins feel for each other was conveyed clearly. The
dialogue in particular was really well-done, everything Pippin did or
did not say was exactly wrong, a perfect example of "talking at
cross-purpose". I also liked their reminiscences about the things
before and after their "growth spurt".

Title: A Passing Troll · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Humor: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 210
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:43:56
I really love how this story is structured - it contributes much to
the effectiveness of the dark, dark humour (especially on a re-read):
Everything about what actually happened is merely implied and
presented *after* the fact, and yet the readers can easily piece
together the events.

I can't help feeling pity for both Hyacinth and the troll both.
Hyacinth, because as awful and even downright evil as she had shown
herself to be (particularly for a Hobbit), this was neverthelesee a
gruesome end. And the Troll, because he was driven by hunger to bit
off more than he could chew (pun very much intended *g*).

Title: More than Meets the Eye · Author: Dadgad · Genres: Humor: The
Shire or Buckland · ID: 128
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:44:59
Effective use of the PoV of outsiders to shed light on the Battle of
Greenfields. Good balance between telling the seriousness of battle
and some light-hearted or downright comical touches.

The viewpoint of the twins helped to set the Hobbits' battle into a
larger historical context. It also helped to better visualise the
battle strategies in an "overview" manner, rather than being caught in
the confusion in the midst of it.

I like how the Elves - and obviously the Orcs - like so many after
them (and I'm sure before them) underestimated the peaceable Hobbits
and were shown just how resourceful and determined they were in a pinch.

Title: The Stone of Erebor · Author: Primsong · Genres: Mystery · ID: 401
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:46:52
This may be the first story I have read about Bilbo's second journey
to the Lonely Mountain, and it was a gripping adventure, packed with
drama, suspense, mystery and humour, good characterisations and a
fascinating look into the reconstructed Dwarf-Kingdom.

The story shows a believable picture of a society so much focused on
secrecy, artistic skills, and the material side of things (not merely
regarding the price of things, but also their aesthetic worth).

The behaviour of the Dwarves was often such a puzzle to Bilbo (and to
the readers), but it really helped to establish them as a completely
different culture, based on completely different values, attitudes and
temperaments.

The tension between Dáin and Thórin's Company was interesting, and I
was really indignant on Bilbo's behalf at the King's discourtesy and
suspicion.

The portrayal of Bilbo was marvellous and completely in character;
quite a few lines of dialogue or introspection had the "flavour" of
TH; I enjoyed his craftiness and resourcefulness in particular.

There were many delightful passages, but I think Bilbo's boasting to a
rather rude Dwarfish jewel-smith was my favourite:
["I am the Mathom-Wielder, the Poet Scribe of the Hill! I have spoken
to the Gaffer himself many times, and have driven the Motley
Treasure-Seekers from my land singlehanded! Those of great strength
have stood in my presence silent, as if turned to stone."]

Title: "A Cat Of A Different Color" · Author: Cathleen · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 385
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:47:12
The beginning of the story sets the scene very evocatively. Merry, as
someone who likes to have the overview and organise things, strikes me
as a good viewpoint character: through his eyes we get insightful
descriptions of the other characters.

The narrative flows smoothly, even if the dialogue is a little stilted
from time to time.


Title: A Dragon in Buckland · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Mystery ·
ID: 206
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 15:47:57
Well-plotted story - building the suspense for the mystery was done
excellenty. The way the "dragon" is used for repaired items, for toys
and gifts (and against bullies), is charming. It seems perfect for
mischievous but great-hearted Pippin (I especially liked his note to
Saradoc about being ["a good son"] for his ailing father).

The ideas for Merry's upbringing as future Master of Buckland were
very interesting, and I can readily imagine him as the ["hands on"
sort of lad] he is described as in the story, as well as the
similarities and differences to Pippin's upbringing in Whitwell.

I liked the "magic" in the end: even though Pippin was prepared to do
his part, he had help from a "real" dragon (and I liked the tale that
sparked the idea for the little circle). But I was very sorry that
Pippin himself hadn't seen it.

Title: Drawn With Love · Author: MerryK · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 569
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-16 16:22:15
Oh goodness,MerryK, this story had an 'awww' factor of 7+. Great tale.
Of course, I absolutely adore your Boromir and could well see him
creating such a thing. My hubby was an engineer and knew how to draw
very well, usually blueprints, but other things as well, when he put
his mind to it.

I loved the opening quote - and am going to save it. I loved the map -
I want one - does Boromir have ANY idea how many 'fans' would love to
have such a map??? Frustrating trying to find a really good one. Even
using Karen's Atlas isnt' quite the same as this one appears to be. I
always thought his father would have been a good cartographer. Seems
it runs in the family. Dearest Faramir will learn this art too!

You painted such a sad picture of Faramir, broken hearted at his loss,
that I almost cried here at work. Not good! And the gentleness of
Boromir with his little brother is beautiful to behold. I loved the
confidence that Boromir took into the project! Yes! I loved Faramir's
confidence in his brother. I loved Boromir's trying to be a 'man' and
not cry. His thinking he had 'recovered' from the grief of his
mother's death was so sad to read. Poor boy! I'm sure neither of them
had much chance to recover. I sobbed at the description of Finduilas -
all the pieces/parts. Beautiful writing on those... And Faramir's
certainty - once he received the gift, that his mother watched over
him as he slept. Another one of the big 'Aw's' - as for Denethor...
well, I happen to love the guy and I adored the ending... I will say
farewell now myself and thank you for sharing this exquisite little tale.



Title: The Turn of the Tide · Author: Altariel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 72
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-16 16:59:01
[Spoiler]
Excellent 'Boromir lives' tale - and Denethor too. Very pleasant for a
heart that loves the men of Gondor.

I wondered what was happening at first, but really enjoyed the story,
after I figured it out. My favorite lines were - [mockery of an old
man at the defiance of the young.] And Denethor's [that is how they
destroyed themselves] part.

It did my heart good to see the 'banners' of the Steward's sons. Eowyn
was well written.

Title: The River of Stars · Author: Marta · Races: Men: General
Drabble · ID: 412
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-16 17:05:25
I loved the constellations in the river... though it was a hideous
thought - knowing the planetarium was destroyed. But well written way
of putting it. I'm not a big 'kin-strife- follower. This, however, was
worth the read.

Title: Conjuror · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: General Drabble · ID: 432
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-16 17:07:45
This was chilling and profound at the same time. I really liked your
Denethor... wise, yes! I loved what Gandalf does to the poor stone -
though I think if a Hobbit had been present - there would have been
much sobbing at the mushroom's fate! Nice job!

Title: True Silver · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 612
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-16 17:13:33
Excellent. I loved both Celeborn and Galadriel. She really knows how
to 'win' a man over. Perhaps that's why she enjoyed Gimli so much.
Perhaps the Dwarf reminded her of herself, asking for Celeborn's hair!
Celeborn was no slouch either!

Nice job!

Title: A Special Kind of Lore · Author: Astara · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 748
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-16 17:18:04
This was absolutely delightful. I so loved the fact that Finduilas is
looking in the library. Great way to pass the day. And glad to know
she might have had some nights that were 'interesting!'

The worn shape that the book is in is telling in and of itself. And
who needs language when there are skillful drawings. LOL

I loved Denethor's sigh. I'm still laughing as I think of it. Score
one for Finduilas.

Title: At Long Last · Author: Astara · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 746
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:32:29
Good, vivid characterisations, evocative descriptions.

Denethor's portrayal was spot-on, always thinking, analysing
situations and people, searching for hidden motives.

I found the comparison between the Steward's and the Prince's family,
regarding the relationships of the different members towards each
other, quite apt (it also resembles my own take on this issue).

I liked how the romance developed quite unconsciously between them:
Denethor was for a long time unaware just what it was he felt towards
Finduilas, he only knew he had found someone he liked, and this fact
alone was unusual enough. It was amusing to see just how much she was
able to dispell his reserved attitude.

Title: The Tolkienian War on Science · Author: Doc Bushwell · Genres:
Non-Fiction · ID: 444
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:36:26
An entertaining exploration of Tolkien's concepts of science vs.
nature. Apart from the rather long and rambling introductory passages,
it is pleasantly fast-paced, which might not often be a criterium for
non-fiction, but fit well with the snarky, colloquial language, which
casts Tolkien's creations into contemporary concepts we are familiar
with today.

I found the conclusions rather extreme and too much black-and-white,
but thought the general premise a plausible and interesting
interpretation of the subject matter.

Title: Tolkien's Usage of "Thou" and "Thee" · Author: DrummerWench ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 443
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:37:50
A useful essay on the proper context and use of the archaic
grammatical forms "thou" and "thee" and related issues, providing
relevant examples not only from LotR, but also the King James Bible
and Shakespeare.

Presenting this subject matter could have resulted in a dry
instruction manual, but the essay is enlivened and made interesting by
its clear, engaging style; and made more vivid and comprehensible by
using and demonstrating incorrect and correct use on concrete examples.

Provided with this knowledge, it enhances the readers's ability to
detect additional layers of meaning in certain dialogues in the
trilogy (notably between Aragorn & Éowyn and Gandalf & Denethor), that
would either go undetected or falsely interpreted otherwise.

As a foreign-language speaker, I also appreciated the brief
information on the ["Quaker thee"] which I had encountered several
times in books, and - wrongly - took for errors by the authors.

Title: Who is this Gil-galad, of Whom You Speak? · Author: Erunyauve ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 250
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:38:55
This essay about Gil-galad is structured very well, it is written in a
clear language that makes the best out of brevity and yet conveys a
full picture of what is described.

It presents and analyses thoroughly what - surprisingly little - there
is written in canonical and semi-canonical sources about Gil-galad and
goes from there to speculation about the great gaps that are missing
in the wider history, but also in the personal biography of this
long-reigning Noldor King who must have decisively influenced events
in the Second Age. The speculation is sound, underpinned with
convincing arguments, or making relevant comparisons to other times or
people.

From this essay emerges the picture of a strong, active king, skilled
in diplomacy and sustaining good relations with various cultures and
races, as well as a capable, decisive strategist and leader of armies.

This essay also acknowledges Gil-galad's faults, notably his secrecy
concerning the Rings, and his inability to form a united front before
the Black Gate.

I found it an interesting detail that he (unlike so many of his
ancestors and other relations) had a much more favourable view of the
Valar.

Title: The Anglo-Saxons and the Rohírrim · Author: willow_41z ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 585
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:40:21
A intriguing and provocative essay exploring the question just how
much knowledge about Anglo-Saxon history and culture can be used as a
model for the depiction of the Rohirrim.

The essay uses thorough side-by-side comparison of several different
sources and aspects to come to the mostly convincing conclusion that
the differences outweigh the similarities so much that Anglo-Saxon are
hardly useful as the basis for constructing a Rohirric Culture.

One argument I didn't find convincing was the presentation of the
great differences in themes of "Beowulf" and similar texts compared to
those in LotR, when it is expressly stated beforehand that these poems
don't really reflect Anglo-Saxon realities.

Title: Triolet: The Weaver's Song · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Poetry · ID: 553
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:40:59
Intriguing idea, and the rhyme scheme is used to good effect.

I love the idea that Boromir's cloak was made with love and the weaver
hoped it might protect him not only from the cold, but would also
["shield him from all harm"]. The way the richness of it - ["dark
velvet and black sable"] is emphasised gives it meaning on an
immediate and a symbolical level.

Title: Good Rest Ye Merry · Author: Llinos · Genres: Poetry · ID: 798
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:41:20
Irreverent and funny. I like the modernisms that have sneaked into it,
it makes the poem even more surreal, and takes the edge of any lines
that might be construed as insult, or that remind of the pain and toil
and loss the Fellowship had to endure.

Title: Burning Your Bridges · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Poetry · ID: 125
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:41:44
Very descriptive and "real" in its minute details, and yet there are
touches of graceful imagery here and there (like the reminder of the
craft of Númenor) and a sense of detachment, giving the poem a good
balance (even if I can't recognise a specific rhyme scheme). Every
sense is employed - sight, sound, smell, taste, touch - which makes
the poem very vivid and three-dimensional.

Title: Harvest Bonfire · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance · ID: 667
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:42:34
The story is told very vividly and appealing. The original character
is exactly that - original; she is also engaging, and her interactions
with the canon characters seamless. The dialogue is flowing very
naturally.

Rosie is so very frazzled, quite understandable with so so many
children (and fortunately she doesn't know that there will be 13 of
them at the end!). Sam and Roise following Lilly's sage advice was
told very tenderly, the love evident between them.

Title: Come Back to Me · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance · ID: 67
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-16 17:43:38
Very descriptive narrative. The story is told convincingly from the
set of mind of an Entwife. It was interesting to see the things
Treebeard had talked about from her perspective, it gave the subject a
new balance. The idea of the Hobbits as ["younger guardians"] seems
very apt.

The discussions between the protagonists touch on a wide range of
topics, which give some canonical facts intriguing twists and also
show that the protagonists concern themselves with Middle-earth beyond
their little corner of it.

I have trouble believing in the premise, but it was an interesting and
imaginative experiment and the story itself "sold" the premise well
for its duration.

Title: Geometry · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble · ID: 80
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-16 19:15:15
Death absolutely sucks and you have definitely portrayed how a family
could react to such an event. As much as it pains me, I can see the
imagery of the triangle. And especially the fact that the family
still, while the triangle was intact, considered themselves 'whole.' I
think many families are made into such an object. I know when my
brother was turned into a vegetable after a serious car accident, the
whole family died. Incredibly sad, but very well written and catches
what must have been the most pain-filled moment of both their lives.
*sobs*

Title: Fun with Farm'n · Author: Súlriel · Races: Villains: Drabble ·
ID: 269
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-16 20:25:15
Oh, dear lord! Those naughty, naughty orcs. I can't believe I had not
read this before. You have quite the sense of humor, girl--not for the
squeamish as they say in the fanfic world! (I've always thought I was
squeamish myself, but you surely managed to get me to laugh out loud.)
Great use of the drabble format. I guess my favorite line was:
["Farmers are a tough lot."] People always said that where I come from
too, but not in exactly the same sense. What am I saying! Not in
anything remotely resembling that sense of the expression in this
vignette. Good work

Title: The Eagle's Gift · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
Minas Tirith · ID: 591
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-10-17 00:43:40
"The Eagle's Gift" is a lovely vignette set on the night of Denethor's
marriage to Finduilas. As nervous bridegroom Denethor prepares to go
to his marriage bed, his alternatively joyful and fearful reverie is
interrupted by just the person he least wanted to see--Thorongil.
Using Denethor's point of view, Raksha deftly ratchets up the tension
between the Steward's son and the mysterious Dunadan of the North,
including some humorous avian allusions from Denethor's overwrought
subconscious mind. Yet over and over, Raksha points out the similarity
between the two rivals.

Raksha's Denethor is a decent man despite his deep resentment of the
"outlander." He is depicted as a loving, considerate bridegroom.
Moreover, he even has a moment of sympathy for Thorongil, who must
wait, perhaps forever to marry the woman he loves. We are left with a
hint that the true reason behind the rivalry between Denethor and
Thorongil is old man Ecthelion himself, who made the Eagle deliver the
gift.

This is one of Raksha's best stories. I'm glad to see her delving into
Aragorn and Denethor territory.

Title: Flowers of Nimloth · Author: geek_chick · Genres: Drama: Second
Age or Earlier · ID: 507
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-17 02:03:11
This tale about Isildur and his future wife starts when Lienilde, a
young apprentice healer, gets called with her master to care for an
injured man, Isildur. Over the course of a winter Lienilde cares for
Isildur and gets to know him and his family. When Isildur is finally,
miraculously healed, they discover that they are more than patient and
healer. I loved the glimpses into every day life we get throughout the
story of life in Numenor or more precisely in Romenna. At the
beginning Lienilde is a young woman with a leaning toward the
Faithful, but politics don't play a role in her life and she never
thought much about Sauron and his doings. Sauron is a distant threat,
but it doesn't really affect her, until she meets Isildur's family.
Learning of his deed lets her question her beliefs, and I like the way
she has to decide what is right or wrong and how to deal with her
knowledge in the face of the indifference or outright support for
Sauron around her.

Title: Cool Sunlight and Green Grass · Author: SlightlyTookish ·
Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 211
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-17 02:04:24
I think this ficlet captures Pippin's essence. It feels very Pippin to
me. He is still very weak and barely able to walk, but the fresh air
and the sunshine buoy his spirit after the long days spent recovering
in his bed.

Title: Black Mountain · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Adventure · ID: 487
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-17 02:05:50
This story is a page turner. Aragorn and Legolas joined by the
Rivendell twins go off to Black Mountain to investigate mysterious
rumors and stories, at least that is the rationalized reason. I love
the start of the story which to me gives a more accurate reason for
Aragorn to want to investigate, although he jests. ["Why?" the blond
elf, standing with his hands on his hips and his head cocked slightly
to the left, asked his human companion. "Because it's there?" the man
answered with a teasing question.] And off they go, encountering
adventures they, and I, didn't expect.

Sometimes I wish the author would explain less of the emotional impact
of the actions of others and leave more to the imagination of the
reader. I think that would enhance the tension even more. I like the
characterization of the four friends, their good-natured banter, how
they work together, speaking out their thoughts aloud, so that the
others can help to sort through the facts to find a solution to the
problems they face.

Title: Many Guises and Many Names · Author: Gandalfs apprentice ·
Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 380
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-17 02:06:44
In a few short words Gandalfs Apprentice brings Aragorn to life.
Sometimes by describing his actions, sometimes by watching him through
the actions of others. I especially like the first and the last in
this series of short ficlets.

When young Aragorn insists to Gilraen that his name is now Estel and
Elrond his ada, I felt for Gilraen. It must have broken her heart.

In the last ficlet, Aragorn comes to life as Strider, not loved by the
Breelanders, but a friend of Gandalf. I like the close understanding
between these two friends.

Title: A Tale of Elrond And Celebrían · Author: Nemis · Genres:
Romance · ID: 608
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2007-10-17 02:12:07
This is the story of Elrond and Celebrian. Their marriage, the
separation after Celebrian sails West and their bittersweet reunion,
since their children are staying in Middle-earth. Intertwined with
their lives are some of the most important events of the third age and
we get to see the impact of these on their lives. I love the
description of their love for each other and that Elrond is only half
a man after she left. I love it that Celebrian manages to help him
from time to time from Aman, and it seems to me she has a better
understanding of their children as he has. The reunion is everything I
had wished for in this tale.

Title: Holding onto Hope · Author: Alassante · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 368
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-17 03:01:17
There aren't enough fanfiction stories featuring the mysterious
Celebrimbor. I enjoyed the confrontation between Celebrimbor and his
damaged uncle; it's a rather novel treatment of Maedhros' recovery
after Thangodorim.

Title: The Wink of an Eye · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 664
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-10-17 05:55:46
What a great, quirky drabble. Now we know how Sauron drove Denethor
crazy. As in all good drabbles, the best part is in the last sentence.

Title: Letting Go · Author: Ellie · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 790
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-10-17 06:18:24
Ellie's tale provides insight into the thoughts of Ingwe, High King of
the Elves that dwell in Aman. The Silmarillion tells us little about
Ingwe, leaving a gap which Ellie fills nicely. Ingwe contemplates the
departure of his Vanyaran kinsmen to Middle Earth to fight alongside
the Valar in the War of Wrath. In an extended monologue, the king
expresses his love of his people and dismay that he has been denied
the honor of leading them into the battle where many might fall.

Though certainly canonical, Ingwe's feelings clearly resemble that of
a parent "letting go" of an adult child that has moved from the family
home.

Title: Fire and Ice · Author: NeumeIndil · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA · ID: 318
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 10:02:44
Herself forced into prostitution at a young age after she and her
mother were left with nothing, Morwen had drifted from land to land,
eventually ending up in Edoras in the Inn of the Dragon's Hoard, where
she served drinks and other appetites. But she's caught the heart of
Theoden's man Gamling, and her own heart is caught as well. Will she
take a chance at a time when Wormtongue is in the ascendancy to accept
what he offers her?

Wonderful to see Movie-verse Gamling given a life--and love--of his
own. I now wish to read the story that precedes this one.

Title: Mettarë · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men · ID: 34
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 10:20:52
It's no simple thing to feel like celebrating the year's end, there in
Imladris, and even the attempts of Merry and Pippin are a bit forced.
But somehow, in spite of it all, Boromir and Aragorn find themselves
sharing special feelings for this turning of the year.

Sad, and yet the writing manages to capture that small spark of hope
needed.

Title: Leaf Subsides to Leaf · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Drama:
Elves in Later Ages · ID: 105
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 10:22:53
When Legolas comes to bid his father goodbye before succumbing to the
Sea Longing at last, neither finds it easy to bid farewell. Of course
we don't know Thranduil never followed his son to Aman; but this is
plausible.

Title: The Arachnid's Appeal · Author: TrekQueen · Genres: Humor · ID: 114
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 10:29:58
Shelob has written to her boss regarding some problems she's knowing,
there on the job of watching in the high passes over Minas Morgul. Too
bad things haven't been going too well--the Witch-king refusing to
share a Southron or two; food with an offensive odor, and more with
nasty, poky things. So, she has some requests.

Brought a grin.

Title: Transformation · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General Drabble
· ID: 185
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 10:33:13
Imhiriel and Annmarwalk have to be my two favorite drabble-writers.
And this look at Prince Imrahil, free and delighted as he enjoys the
gift given him by the new King, is wonderful. A marvelously effective
drabble at depicting place and mood. I can feel the sea wind!

Title: Dragons! · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 327
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 10:36:38
It's time for a story, and Pippin KNOWS what he wants it to be about.

Very true to small chldren everywhere.

Title: Sarn Gebir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 398
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 10:39:52
Ah, there in the Sarn Gebir Boromir proved the hero. Yes, he's sworn
to protect the Hobbits, and he will do his best; but there is yet one
problem he faces....

Communicates the mood well.

Title: Letter to Frodo · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 540
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 10:49:38
If Boromir had indeed survived his ordeal and returned, what would he
have wished to say to Frodo Baggins; and then how would he seek to
communicate those thoughts and desires for forgiveness with Frodo gone
from Middle Earth?

A lovely moment of atonement, and mutual love between Boromir and his
brother.

Title: Marking Fours · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 1
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-17 10:58:38
This series is beautifully linked with many themes and impressions. It
feels as if Faramir looks back and it doesn't matter much when he
reflects back upon it: with every drabble in this series it can happen
the day after or just after the fact. Rashka beautifully shows here
that remembering life changing events that are inevitably tied to the
nature of life. Grief is interlinked with memories, but so is love or
friendship. From darkness, Faramir steps into the light and won't
forget. I love how the author put the numbers here to good use.
Tolkien himself had a thing with numbers, so it feels at place here,
but it is not overused. This is a great character piece, very
emotional and well written!

Title: Waste Not, Want Not · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Drabble · ID: 722
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 11:12:51
Ah, Tanaqui--perhaps an all-too-likely event as the heads of the folks
of Gondor were prepared to be thrown over the walls! Shuddery, and
well written.

Title: Sure as Shire Talk · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Hobbits: Drabble
· ID: 753
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 11:14:42
And just how did Rosie learn her Sam had disappeared with Mr. Frodo
and his cousins? Perhaps it was in this manner.

Wonderful characterizations for such a short work.

Title: Respite · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017
TA · ID: 389
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 11:19:02
Inspired by a painting, this is the thoughts of Finduilas as she
spends a quiet day with her sons seeking tranquility, although the
growing dread of Sauron's intentions seeks to overwhelm her.

Marvelously conveys the feelings she might well have known before she
began to fade, and to describe her now-circumscribed world.

Got to the halfway point on my MEFA Junkie score ... how is everyone
else doing?

It certainly is a motivator for me; thanks MEFA Admins!

Nancy Brooke wrote:

>
>
> Got to the halfway point on my MEFA Junkie score ... how is everyone
> else doing?
>
> It certainly is a motivator for me; thanks MEFA Admins!
>

Go you!

I actually made my official goal, but am hoping to do about seventy more
reviews in the next six weeks, if I can make it. Setting goals is good.

Congrats on being on track to reach yours. And thanks for all your work.

Marta

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Nancy Brooke" <graceomyheart@...>
wrote:

>
> Got to the halfway point on my MEFA Junkie score ... how is everyone
> else doing?

I only have 30 more stories to go, but when I look at what I then will
still have left in time and stories, I am certainly not going to stop
there.

> It certainly is a motivator for me; thanks MEFA Admins!

I second this!

Imhiriel

Title: A Mother's Touch · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-17 11:21:08
What I so like about this piece is how Raksha gives the dragon and her
wee!dragon both such a wonderful and unique voice. Little we know that
this will turn out to be the big and hoarding lover Smaug! The
mother's voice carries so much pride and care, just like all moms are,
reciting from the past and their well wishes for their own kids. The
touches upon their creator and what every dragon should be pride off
feels so utterly in character in this piece. Smaug on the other hand
is still much like a small [chick] who just loves to indulges himself
with playing all day (with friends? Maybe :) ) I love how the author
used the works of Tolkien to drabble such a nice little ficlet, and
yet at the same time the author achieves to tell so much! Then there
is the use of language in this piece: its very archaic, but also so
fitting for a dragon that would prefer to remain in her hoard only to
occasionally to go hunting, after all there weren't many dragons left
after the War of Wrath. Greatly drabbled Raksha, I hope [Readfah]
returns again in your work.

Title: The haunting of Minas Tirith · Author: Fawsley · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 651
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 11:33:18
I think that perhaps Boromir might have regretted his attempt to see
if the dead did indeed walk the streets of the city on the day of the
dead--particularly after Bergil mistook a mixture of singing and a dog
howling as the agony of the spirits.

What does one do when stuck in a tomb with an upset hound?

An excellent laugh, and certainly a wonderful Halloween story! Heh!

Title: Stay With Me · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 518
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 11:57:01
When a storm strands Esmeralda in the Crickhollow house with Merry and
Pippin, she finds herself seeking to help Pippin deal with a night
plagued with memories of a terrible fire in the House of the Stewards.

Warm tale of comfort given and received, and fighting bad memories
with good ones.

Title: The Great Hobbiton Race 1435 · Author: Llinos · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 83
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 12:01:31
Enamored of complicated gadgets and get-rich-quick-schemes, Merry has
ordered a huge engine capable of cutting grass or hay. But when he
accepts a bet from Sam as to whether the machine or Sam and Frodo-lad
could mow the Party Field faster, things don't go as easily as Merry
and Pippin would prefer.

Enormous laughs, and hope it's finished soon.

Title: Aragorn's Moment · Author: docmon · Races: Men: Eriador or
Rivendell · ID: 509
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 12:06:54
The thoughts of Aragorn as he prepares for the departure from
Rivendell with the Fellowship. He does this not for Arwen, although
she is there on his mind.

A wonderful depiction of Aragorn's choices and perceptions and loyalties.

Title: Senses · Author: mistycracraft · Genres: Drama: With Aragorn ·
ID: 367
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 12:10:57
After an accident robs Aragorn (temporarily) of vision and hearing, he
must learn to deal with the situation as all await signs as to whether
the situation is permanent. Patience and the love of Elrond and his
children strengthen him to begin doing things for himself and to
accept what comes to him as it does.

Mostly realistic look at how sudden disability can affect a person
taken unawares.

Title: The Essence of Fire · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 278
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-17 12:15:07
For Curufin, fire has been a long companion, marking transitions in
his life. Now it marks the leaving of the Noldor from Aman....

Very solemn.

Title: The Burning of the Year · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 2
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-17 12:31:08
This story is one of my absolute favourites when it comes down to
traditions and celebrations. The details of the Mettare tradition is
woven into this piece in a great way: very symbolic with a refined
touch. It feels and reads as a rite of passage befitting the Celtic
tradition (every anology regarding that resounds incredibly well),
just as the year starts anew. And this all in a manner of storytelling
I think Tolkien most likely would have liked himself. No matter how
often I read this particular piece it feels as if I discover something
new: every time it moves me or it just puts the spotlight on something
else, just as if you can look at a diamond from several angles. The
pacing is sublime, as the march continues it feels as if Faramir opens
up to you as a reader more, his concerns, and worries... yet pride and
looking for approval.This also gives this story that poignant touch,
knowing as a reader of the books what will await him that year. This
piece also gives us an insight in the complicated relationship between
Denethor and his sons: Faramir is present and Boromir being the
important diplomat is absent. Raksha captured Denethor's missing of
his eldest in a poignant matter and I applaud that Faramir rises above
all expectations. What a marvellous piece!

Title: Don't Be Deceived · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 351
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-17 12:52:19
[this review contains spoilers]

This is such a lovely little piece and a great answer to the
challenge: the timing is perfect in this one which gives this piece
that perfect & humorous touch. The last lines are just perfect and
sheds a different light on where Aragorn might have found inspiration
in for his own shaggy & mysterious appearance when the hobbits see
Strider for the first time. Moreover, who else could be involved than
Gandalf! He seemingly interfered with every little detail by
introducing people to the other. I am now wondering how Aragorn might
have remembered later on how Bard chose to be amongst his own people,
still mixing with them in tavern: being truly a King adored by his own
people. Hmmm, food for thought (and more plotbunnies that pop up
suddenly).

Title: Love Story · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 273
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-17 13:02:49
[this review contains spoilers]

This is a cleverly written piece that wholly sticks to Bilbo's
perspective: every thing adds up in the tiniest details and GA shows
us how the inspiring playwright Merry tries to get the tale of
Tinuviel right. Something inside me makes me go like aww and the
responses of the hobbits are so well, hobbity and fitting for their
age. I mean, this is just so great:
[Clutching his chubby cheek and waving a pointed, silver-painted
stick, Beren yelled, "Woe! I'm hungry! Will I ever get out of this mess?"]

Such wishful thinking and spot on when it comes down to things
important for hobbits! But I had to laugh so hard when Rosie made a
run for it, to get away from Fatty `Beren' Bolger probably thinking
that Tinuviel did the same. Simply fabulous! And aw, how all these
kids look up to Bilbo to get his opinion, how cute! I just can picture
that scene so well. I really loved this one GA, what a gem!


Title: Drawing Straight With Crooked Lines · Author: Fiondil · Genres:
Drama · ID: 76
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-17 13:16:31
[this review contains spoilers]

This is an interesting take on the short stay mortals normally have in
Mandos. Knowing that Beren was quite an exception, I can see why the
author made an exception for Boromir as well before he passes on (and
time is relative). What I specifically like about this piece is the
use of dialogue to further and enhance the story, without forcing it
too much. I am glad to read that Boromir found the redemption he
sought for at the end, bringing this short story full circle.

Title: Under the Eyes of the Evenstar · Author: Raksha the Demon ·
Genres: Drama: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 680
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-17 13:45:16
[this review contains spoilers]

Oh, this is a brilliantly written vignette and it was a delight to
read it from Arwen's perspective. For some reason it felt as if I
could hear Arwen talk, seeing the room through her eyes and observing
a man with that pinch of Noldorin pride, mixed with practicality and a
light touch of sensuality. She is so different from Galadriel in that
respect, yet that scene carries the same tension when Galadriel is
offered the ring. For a moment, I wondered: what shall she do, Arwen
is on a crossroad to act on behalf of her love. After all she could
have sent the maidens away and drown him if he appeared to be that
tired… The gift of foresight is there and she pauses, re-collect
herself. This is great gapfiller material and Raksha's take on how
they could have met makes perfectly sense to me since Arwen would have
acted as the lady of the house. Her internal conflict its well
explored and the portrayal of Boromir is so eerily close to the books,
yet I could see the actor Sean Bean lounging in that bath (and
probably the maidens as well). A superb piece!

Title: Tom Cotton · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey
Havens · ID: 774
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:21:32
Dreamflower has crafted a thoughtful, sensitive portrait of Tom Cotton
here, ruminating over the changes wrought in his relationship with Sam
Gamgee by the fortunes of War. His humble working-hobbit's voice,
beautifully composed by a writer with an excellent ear for such
things, sadly considers the loss of his "best friend" to the memory of
Frodo Baggins and the sons of Tooks and Brandybucks, and ponders the
bleakness of the fact that a lifetime of friendship can be so
summarily swept away by the crucibles of War. Tom remains, in his
heart, devoted; Sam is still his best friend, even if destiny has
taken Sam in another direction. One senses the enormous strength and
sympathy in this eminently decent hobbit, who understands the
psychological brutality of war more than most--having held down the
fort while the commanders were away--and who is brother-in-law to Sam
through two marriages, and wonders if the hole in his heart will ever
be perceived and beyond that if it will ever heal. This is a fine
little work, deftly constructed, gently pursued, and hauntingly
memorable. I found it sweetly touching, and wished there was more!

Title: Go Out in Joy · Author: Larner · Genres: Alternate Universe:
The Shire or Buckland · ID: 145
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:22:30
A gripping AU story that speaks to the question: What if Frodo had
chosen to remain in the Shire instead of sailing with the other
Ring-bearers? And what if the members of his family had divined he was
fading, and gathered to fare him well?

The author has a considerable talent for fleshing out background
hobbits who have heretofore been only names for most of us. The family
that gathers here are far-flung relations, every individual with his
own story and his own personal grief. Readers will want to read back
in Larner's portfolio to get the backstories on some of these people,
but even if they don't, the Shire folk will leave a lasting impression.

The dying Frodo is achingly drawn, his sufferings rendered almost
beautiful through the incandescence of his character, and his nearest
and dearest are captured doing what hobbits do at the most trying and
telling times of their lives. Several surprises attend this
leavetaking, and one very near the end will take your breath away!

This is the work of a dedicated writer, sensitive, knowledgable and
constant. I was both moved and dazzled by the talent showcased here.

Title: Sweet Memories · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits · ID: 272
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:23:24
Here is a gentle portrait of the hero-to-be: a tender story in which a
young Frodo marks the anniversary of his parents' shocking deaths with
a solitary picnic by the river and loses himself in poignant memories
of days that will not come again. A brief Afterword moves us forward
to the perilous days of the Quest, where Frodo's early loss, absorbed
by now into the very essence of his character, helps him to make a
friend of an aloof companion. Sensitively written, with lovely images
and insightful observations, this story reveals an author who is
thoughtful, respectful and discerning, and worthy of both attention
and applause.

Title: Youngest Son · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Second Age or
Earlier · ID: 406
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:24:10
I really like this story of Finarfin and Earwen, set in the time of
the Trees. This is not a time period, or a people, I am at all
familiar with, but I was very taken with this presentation of these
two, who eventually became the parents of Galadriel. They are very
well-drawn: the serious young prince, determined but unsure of his
reception, and the silvery elf-maiden waiting to be dazzled and spoken
for. A sunny summer incandescence lights this romantic occasion, and
the gently lyrical ending, finely crafted, foreshadows the inevitable
end of summer for the Elves. Nicely written, with descriptive skill
and witty dialogue, and leaves a lasting impression of an exotic time
and place where the shadows are beginning to lengthen.

Title: Merry's Grandmother · Author: grey_wonderer · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 137
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:24:36
This story is so skillfully written that you don't realize right away
what treasures are waiting to be found at its core, or suspect what an
interesting circle is coming around. Grandmother Took looks to be the
origin of much that is special in her grandsons, being as seriously
insightful as Merry and as sweetly impulsive as Pippin, and her story
is both touching and magical. I especially loved the reference to
["poor, sensible Paladin"]. Out of his mother's mouth, it has special
poignancy. GW always serves up joy, but in this case she also tugs our
heartstrings and makes us come away feeling very thoughtful.
Grandmother Took is a wonderful character, Pippin is endearing as
always, and Merry is much enriched by his closeness to both. A lovely
story!

Title: The Dwarf Dagger · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: The
Shire · ID: 85
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:24:53
I remain fascinated by this story, which I first read last year, in
which we meet an earlier generation of Tooks and Brandybucks, focusing
on Adalgrim and Periwinkle Took, parents of Paladin and Esmeralda. A
young Bilbo Baggins and Rory and Primula Brandybuck make appearances,
along with an infant Paladin, and the dreadful Lalia Took perpetrates
a senseless tragedy on Paladin's older sister Pearl--which, one is
satisfied to note, will come full circle a generation later when
another Pearl, Paladin's daughter, is present at the old lady's
long-in-coming death.

The author has a command of canon and character here that makes this
work as a history as much as it does a story: well-written,
authoritative and poignant, it opens a window on the Shire in the days
before the heroes of The Lord of the Rings were born. There is a
strong sense of family, of community, and of social order, and we are
treated to the earlier manifestations of family traits that come to be
so important later.

I think this is a significant work, well within the bounds of canon,
thoughtfully conceived and constructed and written with confidence and
subdued passion. Very well done indeed; Bilbo would be proud!

Title: A Million Little Stars To Light Their Way · Author: Cathleen ·
Genres: Drama: The Shire · ID: 387
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:25:41
This is a sweet, gentle story with some lovely images, not the least
of which is the ["take him and cut him out in little stars"] quote
from Shakespeare at the end, put to perfect use here. I liked the
ideas expressed with regard to mortality and the juxtaposition of
flashbacks to the real-time narrative. Pippin's pain and longing and
Merry's lingering anguish are drawn with a sure hand, and their
memories of Boromir are what they should be: memories of a Hero who
was good in every way. The device of the constellation is inspired; I
rather think the skies of Middle-earth will forever be a tad more
crowded after this than they were before!

Title: If You Should Die Before I Wake · Author: PipMer · Genres:
Drama: With Merry · ID: 277
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:26:22
This story is a page-turner! Here the author conducts us on a gripping
emotional journey with Merry and Pippin on the Field of Cormallen and
through alternating moments of joy and sadness, hope and despair,
sickness and health, and life and death. The relationship between
Merry and Pippin is one of great interdependence and is drawn with
considerable sensitivity, and there are several other character
profiles--notably those of Gandalf and Gimli--that are so spot-on that
they make you smile. Passions run high in the aftermath of War and
here they are expressed with love and care. Very nicely done, with
several heart-stopping cliffhangers! Good work, Deb!

Title: A Kingly Discussion · Author: GamgeeFest · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 780
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:27:26
This is a delightful story, with wonderful, witty dialogue
(brilliantly laid down) in which The Gaffer and assorted other hobbits
read a letter from the King and discuss the peculiarities of Men. A
wry humor helps to bring the hobbit audience into focus and there are
several references that speak to the author's considerable knowledge
of All Things Tolkien, including a very sly reference to The Children
of Hurin, which sparks some interesting conversation among the
discreetly scandalized hobbits. But the best line, to my mind, is the
one where it is observed that while Men might make strange choices for
leaders, the Shire would most certainly not ever elect a Mayor who had
["lived with Elves and wandered about in the Blue"]. Beautifully
written, with a sure hand and a great sense of humor. I liked this a lot!

Title: Comforting Silence · Author: Radbooks · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 157
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:27:47
This sweet little portrait of Faramir and Aragorn gives us a
tantalizing glimpse of them in Faramir's later years, when their long
friendship draws them together at the time of Eowyn's death. The
author deftly handles the widowed Faramir, exhausted in grief and
years, but it is the sparsely written, keenly insightful picture of
Aragorn that wins the day here: tender, thoughtful, and sure of his
remedies. This was a great King, and here we see why. Very nicely done!

Title: In Fangorn Forest · Author: Garnet Took · Races: Hobbits: Merry
and Pippin · ID: 260
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:28:08
A welcome reminder that Pippin too has moments of grace, intelligence
and resourcefulness is this little ficlet in which the youngest hobbit
explains to his cousin that they really are in this together and
should share, as equal partners, responsibility for looking after each
other. This is a idea all too often forsaken in our fanfiction,
wherein Pippin is frequently required to be infantile so that others
can show their comforting skills. A fine statement of emancipation and
one I heartily endorse! Characters are quickly but successfully drawn
and the dialogue smoothly serves Pippin's revelation. Amen!

Title: Freddy and the Thain's Rabbit · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits · ID: 251
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:28:54
The wonderful thing about the stories of Errol, Pippin's stuffed
rabbit, is that while they are absolutely delightful they are also
capable of putting a lump in your throat.This charming entry into the
Annals of Errol does both with joyous efficiency, and some lovely
surprises. Errol's origins (so far as we know) are brought to light as
one of his former child companions is revealed for the first time, and
in addition to Merry's son Freddy, who took him away to Buckland for a
tender time, we meet the sweet little fellow who gets him following
Pippin's passing: young Peregrin II! As always, Errol is helped in
writing his adventures by his faithful scribe GW, who sneaks in a
little humor when Errol isn't looking, and also manages to record all
the proceedings in the voice we know is Errol's. She is a very
talented scribe. It is my personal opinion that The Annals of Errol
should be required reading for any child who thinks about journeying
to Middle-earth. It is necessary to know that such good things as
Errol are there when you are about to meet wargs and orcs!

Splendid, as always, GW. You always call it fluff, but it really
isn't. Sheep are fluffy; Errol is serious business!

Title: Making Acquaintance · Author: Bodkin · Times: Mid Third Age:
2851 - 3017 TA · ID: 216
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:29:34
I quite enjoyed this warm, witty story of Merry and Pippin meeting
Gandalf for the first time. The very young hobbits are skillfully
drawn. Flashes of their older selves are visible now and again, and
their defining characteristics are already in place--Merry's serious
sense of responsibility and Pippin's gleeful impulsivity. Gandalf is a
splendid figure, and the whole business comes across as quite
authentic. Excellent dialogue and a fine writing style; this is a
story to be proud of!

Title: In Silence Remembered · Author: fantasyfan · Genres: Drama: The
Shire · ID: 598
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:29:56
This is a stunning piece of work, beautifully written in a haunting
voice: subtle, sad and inexpressibly touching. The simple hobbit
narrator, recounting the death of his best friend in the Battle of
Bywater and, in casual asides, the horrors of Occupation in the Shire,
both plumbs and transcends his plain-speaking origins to become in the
telling of his story a bard of piercing perception and skill. The
author, who has gentle, if total command of the language, and an ear
that is always finely tuned to the tremulous sweetness of humanity,
endows her protagonist with heart and humility, and though he remains
nameless throughout, we know somehow his voice will speak for the ages.

I am a huge fan of this author's work. There are few among us who
command this level of technical skill with such discipline and
artistry, and few who are so in tune with the artless beauty of human
nature that lies at the heart of The Lord of the Rings. Simple,
thoughtful, and compelling, this is writing at its most careful,
considerate best. Bravo!

Title: If You Could See What I Hear · Author: Cathleen · Races:
Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 488
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:32:54
I have been following this captivating story for some time now, and I
have to say I find Tulip the Knitted Piglet as charming and as
integral to Pippin as that other famous suffed toy, Erroll, The
Thain's Rabbit! Truly, Pippin's childhood has been blessed with wise
and wonderful friends.

Tulip serves as a sort of pre-integrated conscience and common sense
for the very young Pippin here, and she is droll and grumbly and Mary
Poppinsish. She is a marvelous character, cleverly conceived and
written with flourish; it takes very little time to realize that Tulip
is the grownup here, and I often look to her for reassurance as little
Pippin wanders through his enchanted wood. A very interesting byplay
takes place between Pippin and Tulip, a skillful and sophisticated
conversation that suggests the brilliance of Pippin's imagination and
an internal dialectic belied by his youth. Very nicely done! And the
appearance of the fairy Rhoswen creates enough uncertainty to give the
story just a kiss of danger--a magical read, well-written and guided
by a very accomplished hand!

Title: Three Things About Pippin · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres:
Humor: Children · ID: 133
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:33:11
No one can paint a picture of wee Pippin like GW can, or put funnier
words in his mouth. The GW signature is plain to see here, in this
sweet story of an absolutely charming whirlwind of destruction and the
folk who can't help but love him, even when they want to ["send him
back!"] Pippin's mother and sisters (in particular the fiery Vince)
are well drawn here, and Frodo Baggins, who happens innocently upon
the scene, is alternately wise and wily. But Pippin steals the show in
a tour de force of sparkling dialogue and heart-warming contrition.
Gentle and touching, well-paced and written with considerable skill
and great heart, this is a hot-cocoa-and-marshmallows bedtime story
that teaches a tender lesson--even Vince comes around in the end! Well
done, as always; this is a particularly wonderful writer.

Title: Field of Dreams · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama · ID: 374
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-17 14:34:33
An anguished tale of war's aftermath in the countryside around Minas
Tirith, this little story also reflects some admirable research into
farming in the Middle Ages! This keen insight drives the touching
story of a war widow bringing in the crop not only for what's left of
her family, but for the needs of the suffering community at large. An
interesting idea and a perspective that tends to be forgotten as we so
often consider the lives of the Great in the after-stories, this
gently paced and deeply-realized piece fills in the tapestry of Men in
Middle-earth with many tough and shimmering strands of emotion and
endeavor. There is no escaping suffering and sacrifice here; the
author brings home the war in ways the grand Tower of Ecthelion is
helpless to portray. Very nice work; unforgettable!

Title: The Arachnid's Appeal · Author: TrekQueen · Genres: Humor · ID: 114
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2007-10-17 15:53:42
[this review contains spoilers]

Oh my goodness, it was great to read this letter again. The author
leaves the reader with this brilliant visual of a Shelob sitting there
as a supporter, probably with a hat, a Sauron shawl supporting her
troops. At the same time I can see her missing one eye, still feeling
a bit sore after the encounter with Sam and Frodo [The nasty run-in
with those two dastardly creatures, one of whom was the one who
stabbed me, also had an annoyingly bright, white-glowing bottle of
light.] At the same time Trekqueen gives us insight in the relations
between the fractions within Sauron's army and Shelob's description of
the Witchking is just fabulous:
[Mr. I-am-the-former-king-of-Angmar-hear-me-roar] That sentence alone
is good for a fit of laughter, it makes sense though that Sauron's
creatures – including Shelob – would have a some sort of resistance
against the WiKi's cry. This whole letter is just full of details and
what makes it so great is that it just reads so reasonable seen from
her perspective – an isolated creature, yet serving the current evil
in ME. The tie in to her predecessor Ungoliant and her offspring in
Mirkwood was a good one, making it all fit so perfectly.

I love this piece: it is fast paced and the so-called punches appear
at the right time, and all the ingredients of a humour piece are here:
this all poured into the form of a letter. Darn and now I am stuck
with this visual of Shelob cheering for her boss while probably eating
popcorn, could you pass on the bucket?

Title: Requiem · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 280
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-17 17:52:26
A thoughtful, extremely well-researched account of the latter days of
Celegorm, his bond with Huan, and the roles they play in the Last
Battle alluded to in HoME/The Lost Road/The Book of Lost Tales. Good
usage of Orome and Vana, among others. And the quotes from the Requiem
material are quite lovely and appropriate.

Title: Aragorn's Moment · Author: docmon · Races: Men: Eriador or
Rivendell · ID: 509
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-17 19:37:18
I love fanfic not just for its ability to speculate on the large
spaces in time or between events that populate Tolkien's vision, but
for these more subtle gapfillers, where an author sometimes takes but
a single line - often one that I have unthinkingly breezed over a
dozen times in my reading - and expands it such that the potential
import of the words comes thundering down on me. Docmon has done that
here, in a vignette both beautiful and heartbreaking.

She has turned her personal vision into an excellent exploration of
Aragorn's thoughts in that moment just before the Quest sets out. The
full weight and burden of his doom is laid out convincingly, plainly
and painfully, but this is not an Aragorn that I feel pity for. He is
much too strong, too noble for simple sentiment. When he stands up at
the end, ready to accept whatever the results of the Quest may be,
prepared to walk this horrible road not for any gain to himself but
for the good of Arda, my chest does ache with sorrow for him. But
more, it burns with pride and triumph, for it is this commitment to
individual self-sacrifice and the determination to do one's best which
has always conquered evil.

Wonderful writing, believable speculation, and the Aragorn I love and
admire! Thank you for giving me such a vision to hold, docmon, during
every future reading of that FotR passage.

Title: Signs · Author: permilea · Races: Hobbits: Children · ID: 384
Reviewer: Inkling · 2007-10-17 19:38:06
The aftermath of an outrageous tea-time prank provides a quirky,
delightful glimpse of two young cousins and their relationship. The
event is all the funnier for being seen in retrospective, through the
lens of Pippin's cockeyed logic and childish superstitions, and
Frodo's barely suppressed hilarity.

With the wonderful economy of words I admire in all of her stories,
Permilea paints a vivid word-picture for us: Frodo braced in the
window seat, a profusion of flowers spilling over the sill, and
Pippins' knees jabbing him in the ribs.

The danger in writing stories about children, and perhaps
hobbit-children in particular, is in letting them become overly cute
and cloying. Permilea avoids that trap skillfully. Her Frodo and
Pippin are funny and charming, and their affection for one another
shines through, but there's just the right touch of tartness in their
interactions that makes them believable youngsters: Pippin pokes
Frodo; Frodo shoves the "bony Took" off his lap.

I love Frodo's canny grasp of child psychology. He dutifully runs
through all the "grown-up" reasons why Pippin's act was wrong, but
then plays his trump card: they didn't get any apple-cherry crumble!

"Signs" was the first piece published by this talented author under
the pen-name Permilea (following terrific stories written under a
different alias), and I dearly hope that it won't be the last by her
that I have the pleasure of reviewing.


Title: Shadowfax, Lord of all Horses · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 597
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-17 19:39:16
The name of a tavern in Minas Tirith, and the sign outside it, gives
rise to an amusing tale about Shadowfax taking Pippin for, well, if
not necessarily a ride, then a good lesson. Very good characterisation
of Gandalf.

Title: At the Sign of the Hungry Hobbit · Author: Mews1945 · Genres:
Humor: Parody · ID: 475
Reviewer: Inkling · 2007-10-17 19:45:37
Ever wondered about the meaning of life, the universe, and everything?
Let Samwise Gamgee--hobbit philosopher, barkeep and much, much
more--explain it all for you (and no, the answer's not 42).

No one is off-limits in this wickedly funny, irreverent piece, from
Creationists to atheists, gods to men. Sam has the latter pegged
pretty well: ["Men would rather argue than eat, if you give 'em their
druthers..."].

Even the good Professor comes in for his share of skewering. One of my
favorite things about this story is that, unlike all the gentle,
affectionate fanfic encounters between hobbits and their creator that
I've read, this one has an irate Tolkien throwing them out of his
house for their ["heathen claptrap"].
.
I don't want to reveal too much, but suffice it to say that the Valar
and Maiar are not all they're cracked up to be in Sam's universe. Nor
are Aragorn and Legolas...er, make that Legless. And don't be
surprised if the Earth Mark 3 turns out to be mushroom-shaped...


Title: The City and Star Island Line · Author: lipstick · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 524
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-17 19:46:33
[The City and Star Island Line] is an unusual take on one of the most
popular couples in LotR fanfic. The style is smart and unique:
humorous with dashes of horror and grief, off-beat with just the right
amount of twisted, such that I came away from it with a renewed and
fresh appreciation for the tale of Faramir and Eowyn. Lipstick somehow
manages this while capturing the essence of the book
characterizations; these are the people we love, just shown through a
different filter.

There is wonderful, witty dialogue throughout the story, spectacular
descriptions and sometimes startling character moments. I love the
story-within-a-story effect, and Faramir's "Halloween" tale is
fabulous in its own right: the perfect mix of hair-raising and
ridiculous, with dabs of modern references to tweak recognition and an
entertaining and subtle portrayal of Denethor.

There are so many favorite bits in here... I love the off-kilter but
accurate view of Numenorean history; the scent of paraffin and the
comment on breaking down; and ["My family were very against that kind
of thing."

There was a silence that went on for longer than it should have.

"Yes," he said, "really."]

Followed by the marvelous description of Arwen and her "tactful"
wedding gift; and that superb, evocative section on what loving
Faramir has brought to Eowyn. Threaded within it all is Faramir's
efforts to cope with his father's legacy - none of the poignancy is
lost here, and it often has an extra sharpness due to the unexpected
way it is presented.

Title: Miss Dora Baggins' Book of Manners · Author: Dreamflower ·
Races: Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 239
Reviewer: Inkling · 2007-10-17 19:55:11
It's a shame that Tolkien didn't do more with Dora Baggins...she
always struck me as a character with great potential, comic and
otherwise. Fortunately, Dreamflower has stepped into the breach and
given us an entire book of etiquette penned by the formidable Miss Dora.

I like the foreword's canonical basis, drawing on Bilbo's character in
"The Hobbit" for the chief Principles of Respectability: kindness,
hospitality, and (pre-Adventure, at least) predictability. And I
appreciate the amount of research and knowledge behind this tome, from
the invaluable Letter # 214 in "The Letters of J.R.R. Tolkien" to the
conventions of classic etiquette guides generally, supplemented and
embellished by Dreamflower's own prolific imagination--providing the
reader with reams of Useful Information on hobbit customs and manners.

But make no mistake, what I love most about this piece is Miss Dora
herself.

Tolkien likened the Shire to Victorian England, and Dora is a prim and
proper Victorian through and through, with quite a flair for
euphemisms like ["Goings On"] and ["Putting the Dessert Before the
Main Course"]. She is nonetheless full of shrewd insight and dry
humor, even on subjects that, as a spinster, she might reasonably be
expected to take a pass on. Consider this observation about older
children looking after their younger siblings:

["It steadies a child to have to set a Good Example, and even if their
Natural Affection and Protectiveness does not serve as a deterrent,
the knowledge that Little Brother or Sister is a witness often will."]

Yes indeed, this is one spinster who knows how children think! Some of
Miss Dora's finest moments, in fact, come in the sections on the
rearing of children--topped only, perhaps, by the chapters on
mealtimes and manners, in which she extols ["the importance of
Respecting Food."] I can just picture her penning those last two words
with a flourish!

Despite the occasional dig (properly veiled, of course) at her
scandalous cousin Bilbo, Dora is never mean-spirited, and in her
tireless zeal to anticipate and provide instructions for any
eventuality, she clearly has her readers' best interests at heart.

We should all be so lucky as to have an Aunt Dora!
.



Title: Looking Awfully Hard · Author: Gryffinjack · Races: Hobbits:
Merry and Pippin · ID: 779
Reviewer: Elanor · 2007-10-18 00:27:58
It is not often that we consider the trauma that Pippin's experiences
with Denethor must have engendered. The Steward was a hard and bitter
man, beside himself with grief and beset with madness. His hall was
tense and his relationship with his only living son shockingly
insensitive. What must an innocent, sheltered hobbit of the Shire have
felt in the darkly erratic company of such a Man, and how might the
Steward's horrifying death by fire become Pippin's own experience?

Gryffinjack explores these interesting ideas in a gap story of
admirable insight and sensitivity. Here is a writer who brings a
deeply thoughtful perspective to a moment that passes without incident
in the Original; readers will be glad to know that Pippin's staggered
soul is redeemed here. Nicely done!

Title: Tales of the Innkeeper · Author: Allee · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 237
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-18 01:47:21
[This review includes spoilers of some plot details]


Nice series of vignettes from the point of view of an OMC, a busy
innkeeper who finds himself hosting a weary King Elessar and his men.
Interesting contrasts between the down-to-earth innkeeper and the
King; the crusty innkeeper finds common ground with and respect for
his royal guest.

Title: Tales From The Garden · Author: Elemmire · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 793
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 03:19:05
Alas that we have but one chapter of this as yet, as we see the
normally predicable but now love-struck Bungo Baggins planning his
grand smial, to be dug within the Hill on the edge of Hobbiton.
Orchards, vinyard, children, they're all planned for. Love will do
that to a Hobbit, you see.

Beautiful imagery and descriptions,

Title: Steward and Thain · Author: agape4gondor · Races:
Cross-Cultural: The Fellowship · ID: 87
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 03:23:37
As wonderful a series of exchanges between the heir to the Thain of
the Shire and the heir to the Steward of Gondor as one could hope to
find. Each is expanding the understanding of the other and learning
the ways of leadership with humor, pathos, and grace. A warm telling
of a special friendship.

Title: Outmatched · Author: Tiana Luthien · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 132
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 03:30:58
When Faramir offers for the hand of Eowyn, her brother seeks to assure
himself his prospective sister's husband will be worthy of the
Shieldmaiden from Rohan. A worthy protector does he find.

Title: Of Echoes of Bruinen · Author: Berzerker Prime · Races: Elves ·
ID: 345
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 03:36:29
The challenge was to "correct" a scene from the movies, and it has
been accomplished here with grace.

Title: The Beginning of a Wonderful Friendship · Author: Imhiriel ·
Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 629
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 03:46:03
Finrod's comments on the compositional skills of dark Elves were taken
badly, but his sister's support of the Elf who'd overheard them won an
unexpected devotion.

Wonderful look at the first meeting of these two.

Title: A Very Good Teacher · Author: Cathleen · Races: Hobbits: Merry
and Pippin · ID: 700
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 03:49:28
A humorous slightly AU take on the Movie-verse identification of a
pint at the Prancing Pony, as Merry and Pippin find themselves in the
midst of a free-for-all. And who really taught Pippin all he knows?

Title: Before the Gate · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 704
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 03:51:46
Two of those fighting before the Black Gate accept that whatever
happens now, they will remain side by side.

A lovely look at two we KNOW were there but rarely see mentioned by
the Master himself.

Title: The Green Hill · Author: Baranduin · Races: Cross-Cultural: The
Fellowship · ID: 562
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 04:00:35
Not quite canon, perhaps, but desirable as Aragorn admits the
trothplighting of himself with Arwen to Frodo.

Title: A Moment Lost · Author: Fawsley · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 491
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 04:03:30
A good question--at precisely what moment did Aragorn truly embrace
his destiny as King? A movie-Aragorn moment, perhaps, and well told.

Title: Thengling Mighty · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 420
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 04:09:35
Although her first loves are Aragorn and Faramir, Linda here proves
herself one fully capable of picturing Theoden, going from the shadows
of Saruman's spells and Grima's dark counsels to the brilliance of his
renewal by Gandalf. In so few words she packs quite the wallop!

Marvelous!

Title: The Rose in the Fisted Glove · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama:
Second Age or Earlier · ID: 240
Reviewer: Oshun · 2007-10-18 04:48:47
I had read nothing, or practically nothing, of Jael's work when I read
this and fell completely in love with the story and particularly with
her subtle but well-developed characterizations of Thranduil and
Galion and their relationship with one another. I adore Galion's voice
in particular and Thranduil's understanding of him. One of my all time
favorite lines is: ["You have marks in your shoulder from the straps,"
said Galion, in a tone that managed to mix concern with irritation…]
This story is so smart, tender, funny, and sad-- totally satisfying,
beautifully thought through and executed in the unique style that I
have come to expect from this author. Loved the references to those
laws and expectations in regard to the expression of sexuality as ["a
pile of pious Lachenn cant"] and the further observation that perhaps
Elves are less ["a chaste and virtuous people"] than ["a very discreet
people"]. The ["no man is a hero to his own valet"] point is well
proven in the first chapter, but also that friendship and shared
experiences can cross the boundaries of ethnicity and station. I
really loved Thranduil's little squeak and also the revelation on the
part of Thranduil of how he would characterize their shared experience
that gives near the chapter's end.

The second chapter is at least as moving as the first in a totally
different manner. It gave me a subtly altered insight into Oropher's
disastrous charge and his subsequent death along with two-thirds of
his army in the Battle of Dagorlad. Prince Thranduil of the first
chapter has significantly grown and changed to become King Thranduil
of the second.

Made my unofficial goal early. Have fallen off horse ever since!

Dwim

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Nancy Brooke" <graceomyheart@...>
wrote:

>
> Got to the halfway point on my MEFA Junkie score ... how is everyone
> else doing?
>
> It certainly is a motivator for me; thanks MEFA Admins!
>

Nearly 80 per cent of the way to my target, and yes I'm finding it very
motivating and encouraging to see the total of reviews to be done
increase and the total to meet the target go down.

Glad to know people are enjoying the feature!

Tanaqui

Nancy Brooke wrote:

>
>
> Got to the halfway point on my MEFA Junkie score ... how is everyone
> else doing?
>
> It certainly is a motivator for me; thanks MEFA Admins!

Well, I surpassed mine a few weeks ago, and have managed to triple it
so far. Am trying to review MOST of the nominees this year.
Bonnie L. Sherrell
Teacher at Large

"Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR

"Don't go where I can't follow."

I mourn for this nation.

"Am trying to review MOST of the nominees this year."


Wow! That is ambitious. My goal was to be happy if I could review even all
of the stories I really loved. (Of course, I am an addictive reader.) I got
off to reasonably good start, but need to kick into higher gear to make my
personal goal.







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Whoo hoo from me, too. I passed the half way point last night. That's
an accomplishment for me, since I gravitate to the longer fics. Don't
know if I can make my goal but I'm sure trying. Thing is, I love
reading other peoples reviews quite as much as writing my own. I've
read some terrific reviews for this year's MEFAs.

- Stefania



-- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Nancy Brooke" <graceomyheart@...> wrote:

>
> Got to the halfway point on my MEFA Junkie score ... how is everyone
> else doing?
>
> It certainly is a motivator for me; thanks MEFA Admins!
>

I made my official goal a few weeks ago, but I discovered that it was more
hindering. It kind of kept me from reading more, since I 'only' have to read
so many more stories. Now that I'm past my goal I find that I'm much more
motivated. Setting the goal higher would not have worked either, because
then I would probably have given up to reach it. But I already know that I
will probably not make my whole wish list, since I will be on vacation with
no Internet access to speak of next week and I have discovered that I at
least need another week to get back into the swing of things.

Chris

> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com]On
> Behalf Of Liz Warren
> Sent: Tuesday, November 06, 2007 10:12 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: Re: [MEFAwards] Whooo hoo!
>
>
> Nearly 80 per cent of the way to my target, and yes I'm finding it very
> motivating and encouraging to see the total of reviews to be done
> increase and the total to meet the target go down.
>
> Glad to know people are enjoying the feature!
>
> Tanaqui
>
> Nancy Brooke wrote:
> >
> >
> > Got to the halfway point on my MEFA Junkie score ... how is everyone
> > else doing?
> >
> > It certainly is a motivator for me; thanks MEFA Admins!

Stefania wrote:

> Thing is, I love
> reading other peoples reviews quite as much as writing my own. I've
> read some terrific reviews for this year's MEFAs.

I stopped reading the reviews or I would not get to the stories. But there
were some great reviews among those I managed to read.

Chris

Title: Bilbo's Gifts · Author: Llinos/Marigold CoAuthors · Races:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 207
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 05:52:52
Bilbo managed to make the third birthday for each of our favorite four
very special indeed--a gift of understanding for a father, a gift of
communication, peronal instruction and explanation for the one who is
far too literal--and generous--for his own good, the help of the Elves
when a visit to the greenhouse turns potentially deadly. We certainly
see why Frodo, Sam, Merry, and Pippin came to love the old Hobbit.

Poignant, funny, thoughtful, and alarming by turn, and well done
altogether.

Title: Through the Eyes of Another · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits: Merry and Pippin · ID: 136
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-18 06:02:47
Indeed not the simple Hobbit walking party it at first appeared! But
it appears even Knights of Gondor need to feel protected while those
of the Mark appreciate being needed. But what a thing to remember, and
THERE, of all places!

As usual, amusing and touching by turns.

Title: Taking Leave · Author: Soubrettina · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 326
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-18 06:21:12
Soubrettina has a style that's unique among Tolkien fanfiction readers
- not very Tolkienish, but quite fresh and vivid. This is an unusual
take on the death of a LOTR character.

Title: The Most Beautiful · Author: Meril · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 508
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-18 07:07:40
A touching ficlet, beautifully illustrated exploring Melian's dual
state of being.I found the Maiar's love for her little daughter very
moving.

Title: The Wrong Path · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Adventure · ID: 481
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-18 07:15:07
A roller coasterride of angst and adventure.There are a great many
angst stories around about Aragorn and Legolas getting into incredible
and alarming adventures, prior to LOTR, for which there is no canon
evidence, but this one is well told and had me on the edge of my
seat.White Wolf is a gifted storyteller.

Title: Mastering Men · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 623
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-18 07:17:52
A vivid depiction of the fall of the bridge at Osgiliath.I liked the
detail of shedding the armour as a man would surely drown in a river
with such a weight. Faramir is indeed a great commander.

Title: Transformation · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General Drabble
· ID: 185
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-18 07:23:09
A vivid and compelling glimpse of Imrahil during the Ring War, showing
him as a vigourous and attractive man and fierce warrior

Title: The Arachnid's Appeal · Author: TrekQueen · Genres: Humor · ID: 114
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-18 07:27:01
This is both clever and amusing.We know what Frodo and Sam think of
Shelob,but what does she think of them amongst other beings she has
encountered? I actually quite liked the wicked and surprisingly vain
old spider by the end of this!

Title: The Waves' Song · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 6
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-18 07:29:01
A heartrending account of Arwen's desolation and grief as she laments
her beloved Aragorn and gazes at the sea she will never now cross.

Title: Beauty · Author: Marta · Races: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 646
Reviewer: Inkling · 2007-10-18 08:31:22
The precise nature of the relationship between Frodo and Sam has been
the subject of much speculation in the fandom, ranking right up there
with "What is Tom Bombadil?" and "Do balrogs have wings?" In this
drabble Marta has addressed the question as well as any discussion
I've seen, and much more succinctly than most.

Sam may think he hasn't words to describe Frodo, but in fact he does
very well...the middle passage, with its analogy of moonlight on the
Water, is lovely and poetic, but in a completely believable, Sam-like way.

In the end, the fic leaves the question ambiguous, as the larger
discussion ultimately must be. For although I'm quite sure that
Tolkien never intended for the bond between these two to be construed
as sexual in nature, there's no denying that something is going on
between them that transcends simple friendship or brotherly love. The
fact that it can't be pinned down definitively is part of the beauty
of LOTR--and of "Beauty."


Title: Taters and Thyme · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance · ID: 499
Reviewer: Inkling · 2007-10-18 08:40:33
In fanfic it's tempting, and all too easy, to approach hobbits' love
of food in a cliched, stereotypical way--the cheap shot about
mushrooms, the easy gag of a "light snack" that takes a paragraph to
describe. Heck, I've done it myself! But in this lovely little piece,
Cuthalion has given us something much more complex and satisfying. Her
hobbits demonstrate a truth found in all the best stories and films
about food ("Babette's Feast" and "Tampopo" come to mind): that when
prepared as a labor of love, it gives sustenance to soul as well as body.

There are so many wonderful details to be savored here: the delightful
scents of sizzling lamb, aromatic herbs, and sun-warmed soil; the
capable yet tender midwife brushing flour off Sam's brow, the easy way
the hobbits take over each other's cooking, or place by the bedside.
My favorite passage is the scene in the herb garden...the sensations
and Sam's emotions are so vivid!

The story concludes in a comforting blur of warmth, love, new life,
food and sleep, all mingling to form a picture of domestic bliss that
filled me with a powerful urge to immediately cook something or plant
an herb garden. The feeling passed and the herbs will have to wait
until next summer now, but I'm still dreaming about it, thanks to
Cuthalion.


Title: Still Round the Corner · Author: lbilover · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 515
Reviewer: Inkling · 2007-10-18 08:47:13
In this beautifully written story lbilover imagines the final parting
between Sam and Frodo--not, for a change, Frodo Baggins, but his
namesake, Sam's son. Inspired by Tolkien's epilogues to LOTR
(unpublished in his lifetime but appearing in "Sauron Defeated"),
"Still Round the Corner" is distinguished by a spare, elegant style,
lyrical descriptions, convincing dialogue and insightful
characterizations.

The story abounds with small details that bring the narrative to life:
the stable lad with ["one hand cupped over the pony's nostrils to
prevent him from whinnying at the sight of his master"]; Sam's fingers
["gnarled as the roots of the trees he'd planted in the long-ago days
after the Troubles."]

My favorite moment is when Sam comes riding out of the morning mist in
a halo of light ["like some legend stepping out of one of the great
tales"] before dwindling again to an elderly hobbit. Not only is it a
stunning image, but it neatly sums up what surely was Frodo-lad's
experience growing up with such a father, at once a living legend and
a simple, earthy gardener.

While knowledge of the epilogues is not necessary to the enjoyment of
this tale, those who have read them will appreciate this as a worthy
extension of their themes.



Title: Gentlemen's Night Out · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor: Gondor
or Rohan · ID: 181
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-18 14:03:58
In my mind, this was a definite 10+ from the very beginning. I
absolutely adored this tale. I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes.
Of course, my favorite baseball team (Cleveland Indians) were winning
by a huge margin, so I was extremely happy as I began to read this,
but nothing diminished the humor in this tale. Absolutely excellent!

The irreverent look at LACE was a scream. I have never held with those
principles. It is my understand that they were 'guidelines' - ROTFL. I
loved Elladan's response to poor Ercherion's earnest studying of such
tomes.

What the author did to the poor young Elves was very sad and cruel
indeed. LOL - having them read this and believe it! Still laughing as
I write this, though I read this tale two days ago!

Oh - and the fact that [the book fell right open to those pages], and
the words used! Frantic, thumbing, futiley, hope.... readily describe
an Elf close to the throes of despair! *Howls with laughter*

I loved Legolas' wondering over what his punishment might be before he
[ransacked the entire place] looking for hope that he was not doomed!
ROTFL

I underlined so many places in the piece that just tickled me. I'll go
to the author's website to comment some more. But the ones above, as I
said, had me in tears. Thanks for a great read. I will treasure this
little treasure!

Title: At Long Last · Author: Astara · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 746
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-18 14:27:36
The author has a nice way with words. I enjoyed this tale of the first
encounter. Denethor's slight perturbance at helping to strengthen Dol
Amroth's pride was interesting at the very beginning of this tale.

I was thoroughly taken by this description of the Steward's Heir -
[The tone was as neutral as the mask he wore] - told everything about
Denethor - at least the future Denethor. Profound description. I still
shudder at it.

I liked the strained relations between Angelimir and Ecthelion. Very
believable. But it was so sad to read of Denethor's surprise over the
Swan's family dynamics... very sad in light of what you describe for
the Steward's family. And your impression of Ecthelion and Thorongil's
relationship was spot on. I never have given much credence to those
who think Denethor's envy of Thorongil was not well-earned. Very, very
difficult for a son. And yet, later on, does not Denethor do the same
to Faramir? Sad family.

I enjoyed the snowball fight, the kiss, and the strained relationship
after it. Very glad it all ended well.

Title: Summer Daze · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 471
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-18 14:40:35
What a delightful tale of Faramir's growing into one aspect of his
manhood!

I have to go back and read 'Summer Nights' after the quote you use in
your author's notes. [I would sooner find release...]

Your descriptions are well written. Some of my favorites are: [he
could slip the gown off her shoulders] - Faramir definitely has a
vivid imagination; [he would gladly feed her fruit] - yes, he does
have a good imagination!; [stroking himself...behind the screen] - I
just love his thoughts, poor lad; [if he could not control his other
blade] - this made me ROTFL; [the man's gate excited him] - control
yourself, Faramir! Again, made me ROTFL.

I enjoyed his actions, unknown to him until he became aware, and in
such an awkward place. I had to laugh. The fact that his studies did
nothing to ease his physical stress...

I found it sad that he could only dream or imagine someone else in the
spot of pleasure - perhaps it comes from Denethor's ill-regard for
Faramir.... I'm glad he was able to overcome that hurdle. LOL

I found the 'inkeeper's' distress interesting. To have a Lord of
Gondor be misused would not be good for business, nor, perhaps, her life.

Isilwen herself is a great character. I very much liked how she
handled the Steward's son. It must have been exciting for her to
'have' a virgin. Probably - they do not come along very often.

I liked the ending with Faramir realising that, without the mistake,
he would have been home [eating stew with his cousins!]

Absolutely delightful little tale. I look forward to more Iselwen???

Title: The Blessing · Author: Golden/Pearl Took CoAuthors · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 235
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-18 14:51:02
A most delightful tale. I very much like the premise. It would seem
that all of the 'heroes' in Tolkien's tale - those that lived
(grumble, grumble), came out of the battle physically unscathed
(except, of course, dear Frodo). This puts that thought to short shrift.

Pip's injury, subsequent diagnosis (long in coming), and his fighting
it and all those around him, is well written. The fact that his
friends do not, in the course of their own healing of inner wounds,
recognize the depths of Pip's injury is profoundly sad.

Pip's struggles to survive and eventually live as whole as he possibly
can are well documented. His friends coming to terms with the extent
of Pip's injury and the repercussions for the rest of their lives, as
well as his, are sad. But it is great to find that they all are 'up to
the task' of helping their friend. And that Pip is stalwart, brave,
and wondrous in 'tackling' what his life now is, and not giving in to
despair.

Wonderful tale.

Title: Rauros, golden Rauros-falls · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor:
Drabble · ID: 624
Reviewer: Aranel Took · 2007-10-18 18:50:16
Oh god, that killed me (not quite in the same way as poor Boromir,
however)! I suppose Aragorn needs to improve his basic medical skills
before dumping people into rivers. ;-) Great job on the humorous
elements--everything clicks right into place leading up to the finale.
*still giggling* Poor Boromir!

Title: Stay With Me · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 518
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-18 18:58:46
What a wonderful story about Pippin and Esmeralda. Pippin and Merry
are living at Crickhollow, and Esmeralda happens to be visiting when
she notices Pippin having a waking nightmare. The two talk on into the
night, Esmeralda keeping Pippin company and distracting him from his
dreams.

Wonderful!

Title: A Suitable Tribute · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Drama · ID: 474
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-18 19:46:25
This lovely ficlet is the middle scene of the tale which began with
Ribby's "Gifts of the People". Here we find the young woman, Marrin,
examining her possessions and resources with a highly critical eye in
search of the perfect in-kind gift to offer as her tithe to the king.
She considers her artistic and culinary skills to be modest at best,
and her lilacs and roses, alas, have not yet recovered from the
trepidations of war (a very nice touch.) She feels that she has only
two items of value from which to choose. Too charmingly modest to
offer a dance (though she does take a moment to daydream about that
possibility), she instead decides to offer her hair.

Marrin's choice to sacrifice her richest possession is heartaching in
its simplicity and nobility. Her gift is not given painlessly, for
what would be the value in that? I particularly love her betrothed's
participation, as the one who actually cuts off her braid, acting as
the priest to her sacrifice. His obvious love and pride help to soothe
her pain, and shock, when the deed is done.

What is particularly noteworthy about is tale (other than its supreme
loveliness) is how seamlessly EdorasLass is able to pick up another
other's character, add a perfect layer to the characterization, and
then pass her on. I know there was no design to this arc, just the
marvelous synergy of two great authors working together to produce
this exquisite gift to us all.

Title: Bitter Springs · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Mid Third Age:
2851 - 3017 TA · ID: 634
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-18 19:47:59
A carefully researched and thoughtfully written vignette featuring
Théodred and Boromir. AU to my AU, they are not lovers here, nor do
they seem particularly good friends, but more like junior colleagues
respectful of each others' professional qualifications and managerial
potential. They are both chafing at the bit, frustrated at being
forced to watch poor leadership, corruption, and ill luck take its
toll. There is little they can do at this point other than meet
unobtrusively to share honest, if discouraging, appraisals of the
situation in their respective countries.

What is particularly impressive to me in this tale are the what-if's:
What if Théodred had been able to overcome Grima's machinations, and
lead Rohan under his father's blessings? What if Théodred had
rebelled, and led a renegade band (much like Film!Eomer), fomenting
civil war in Rohan? These questions are for far more skilled writers
than I to explore. Perhaps these whispers will lodge in Dwimodene's
subconcious, rooting stealthily until they take simultaneous control
of her brain and her fingers. I can only hope; or at least hope for,
and welcome, more such insightful tales as this featuring Théodred and
Boromir.


Title: The Void · Author: SheBit · Races: Villains: Drabble · ID: 452
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-18 19:48:41
This is chilling, but very realistic in the contrast between the
half-truths we tell our children, and harsh reality we must share with
them eventually. When the child first asks, ["what lies outside the
world?"] the answer is the type of fairy tale parents have always told
their children in an attempt to sooth and minimize their fears. It is
only when we as parents are able to accept that our little ones are
now adults, and able to take on adult concerns and responsibilities,
that we can share the this harsh reality with them – an expression of
growing up on our part, as well as theirs.

It's very sobering to think that parenting hasn't changed very much
through the thousands of years from the First Age to our own. There is
still a Void, full of nameless fears, and little that we can do,
really, to protect our loved ones. A very somber and thought-provoking
drabble.



Title: Conversion · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama: With Aragorn ·
ID: 169
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-18 19:49:38
What a rich and satisfying story. In contrast to Ribby's ["Gifts of
the People"], the folk of this village do not offer their tithes
joyously to the king, but with bitterness and despair. One returned
soldier, feeling he has nothing left to lose, speaks his mind to
Aragorn as he passes by in royal procession; the resulting
conversation is eye-opening to both king and subject.

The main character, Talion, is skillfully and realistically drawn. He
reminds me of war-weary veterans, even in our own age, who have given
so much in defense of their country, but find the lands to which they
return are a far cry from the homes they left. Talion could have borne
grinding the grinding poverty of a wheelwright in [a village with one
horse and three oxen]; the pillaging of the surrounding fields by both
orcs and soldiers, the not-unexpected deaths caused by starvation or
illness, but the loss of his only son to "friendly fire" [a black
arrow with gull's wing fletching] is more than he can bear.

But the king that he confronts angrily with a list of true, not
imagined, grievances is not what he expects to meet: the king Elessar
is generous, compassionate, full of sympathy and empathy, well aware
of the tribulations suffered by his people. [The king pulled away from
me and placed his hand upon my heart. And I swear, and will swear
until the stars burn out, that my grief flowed from me into his
fingertips, that I saw my pain in his eyes. The tearing anguish that
had been my companion for so long gentled into a deep longing sadness
that was nevertheless much easier to bear.]
[Elessar is a fine name—a name steeped in history and portent—but they
should have named him Hope.]Talion's own transformation, from
desperation to hope as the newly-appointed leader of his village, is a
pleasure to read.


Title: Adolescence · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor ·
ID: 143
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-18 19:50:25
The unusual choice of characters makes this an unique and memorable
story. I particularly liked that the mischievous adolescents were
girls, not boys, for a change, and the characterization of willful
adolescent girls was spot-on. The description of the market itself was
rich and full, just the way I like it. I can just imagine that lovely
jewely, green-gold glass or [opaline blue with salmon pink] – I wish I
had a string of each. And the description of the hand-carved toys, and
Rosie's skill at haggling, were just perfect; the Shire-money being
suspect in Minas Tirith was a nice touch. The market guard's insight
in recognizing the anomalies in the girls' behavior was very
perceptive – I hope he's commended for his alertness. A very colorful
and enjoyable tale!


Title: Stone of the King · Author: Rowan · Races: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 309
Reviewer: Inkling · 2007-10-18 21:14:19
This drabble is worth the price of admission for the first line alone,
with its wonderful alliteration: ["A sentinel now you are, standing in
ceaseless stony vigil while the birds make nests in your eyelids."]
The evocative language recalls, for me, indelible images from two of
my favorite poems, "Ozymandias" and "The Second Coming."

I also love the image of Isildur ["dumb and unmoving"]--helpless--as
his bane approaches once more. I can imagine the Ring here as a
malicious, sentient presence, enjoying the moment.

Frodo's thoughts are very plausible, and a nice alternative to his awe
and fear in this scene in Tolkien's book. And I can well believe his
envy of Isildur, viewing death as a release even this early in the quest.

A most impressive first drabble!




Title: Risen From Flame · Author: Ribby · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 761
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 21:48:42
Excellent use of imagery and comparison/contrast. I love Faramir's
outcome likened to that of the city he served, and the legendary sunbird.

Title: Coda · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Second Age: Drabble · ID: 627
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 21:52:30
Such elegant use of imagery and metaphor to personalize tragedy.
Somehow I am reminded of all those papers flying from the WTC
before/during/after their fall.

Title: Could Will Have Its Way · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:01:47
O my. Powerful writing, fantastic construction with the repetition of
the question(s) [How could I not...?] giving structure to the piece.
There are logical reasons put forth to personalize Denethor's action,
making him more of a tragic figure and less of a caricature than the
film would have one think. What struck me on re-reading was the
progression of emotion from grief to resolve to hopeless despair.
Excellent, one of the best stand-alone drabbles I've seen yet.

Title: Where There's Life, There's Hope (and in need of vittles) ·
Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble · ID: 463
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:06:27
O yes, very cleverly done! You begin with an image from the book and
segue into something new, but eminently believable. Nice play on the
senses and emotions.

Title: Another Doom · Author: mrkinch · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 663
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:09:03
Nice explanation of why Boromir took on the task from his brother.
Reads like poetry.

Title: Darkness Visible · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 725
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:11:20
Nice. Engages all the senses, reaches out to the emotions, calls on
the reader's memory of similar experience. Reminds me of the eruption
of Mt. St. Helens, actually.

Title: Maiden Voyage · Author: Fawsley · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 654
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:13:01
Breathtaking in its imagery and progression, from tangible to
intangible. Left me breathless and amazed.

Title: Gifts of the People · Author: Ribby · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 472
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:14:18
This left me grinning in delight. Such a wise King - but was there
ever any doubt? (Perhaps among the Gondorians, but certainly not in my
mind.)

Title: Night Terrors · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 752
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:16:02
Sweet. But it took me awhile to "get" the title!

Title: Mistaken · Author: Fawsley · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 490
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:17:35
LOL! Well done, and nice surprise at the end. (If only...)

Title: Through Shadows · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 620
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:23:23
Oooo. This one left me with shivers. Very nicely done.

Title: Cultural Exchanges In Gondor · Author: Llinos/Marigold
CoAuthors · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 94
Reviewer: White Wolf · 2007-10-18 22:28:06
What a charming collection of tiny vignettes, neatly woven together.
It was a delight to move through each in turn, never knowing what
those curious and amazing hobbits were going to find next. It was fun
to guess just what each discovery was going to be, as the clues were
revealed.

Definitely a fun read.


Title: Observations · Author: grey_wonderer · Races: Hobbits: Children
· ID: 204
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:28:36
O yes, I remember this story. This is an absolute delight, and so very
true to life in its observation of the literalness of children, and
the exploration of a special father-son relationship (you just know
Merry had to be well-brought-up, in order to be the person he was on
the Quest, and accomplish what he did). As always, GW's dialogue rings
true, the settings are so well described as to make the reader feel
like being there, and the timing perfect. I love the conclusion, where
the father learns as important a lesson as his son! As an added bonus,
a clever Prologue precedes the main course.

Title: One Frodo Too Many · Author: Baranduin · Genres: Humor: Parody
· ID: 683
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:30:45
As you may know, I prefer het and gen, but I took a chance on this one
and found it very cleverly done. This bit in particular had me
rolling: ["even the Master himself said that others would come after
him to expand the tale in music and painting and drama, though …"
cough "… it seems unlikely that he had quite these kinds of stories in
mind."

The Frodos preened again; even triangle!Frodo sat up a little
straighter and wiped away his tears.

Book!Frodo shuddered. "Descended from me you are, yes … but otnay
ootay rightbay," he said. At their quizzical glances, he waved a hand.
"A very ancient form of Elvish, accessible only in very old scrolls in
Rivendell."]

Title: Behind Every Great Man... · Author: annmarwalk · Times: Mid
Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 52
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:31:05
Very funny! I am quite fond of extremely competent personal servants.
(Need one, actually.)

Title: A Game of Chess · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble
· ID: 605
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:31:16
Started out skeptical - surely it was no new game to him. But your
clever explanation answered that nicely.

Title: Spring after Winter · Author: annmarwalk · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 462
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:31:31
Excellent. Excellent. (I seem to be repeating myself.) The dream
imagery, so winsome and wooing, so true to the senses; the reluctance
to wake, the joy and laughter awaiting... This is one of the best
"takes" I've seen on this scene. Very well done.

Title: The Waves' Song · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 6
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:32:01
The tragedy of this piece grabs my throat and leaves me shaken. Once
again I'm astounded at the power of words to be woven, turning prose
into poetry, and that it falls within the scope of a drabble makes it
even more of a wonder. [Winter swept from the north on grey gull
wings. Chill waves furrowed the grass, while the branches above surged
and heaved in a golden tempest of leaves.]

Title: Geometry · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble · ID: 80
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:32:14
Very nice use of symbolism and imagery. Well done, especially within
the confines of the drabble form.

Title: Stopping by Woods · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 19
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2007-10-18 22:34:19
O very nice fusion. One would almost think the poem a part of the
story rather than an external source of inspiration. You do a nice job
of weaving images, involving all the senses; and often your prose
makes itself into poetry. [Night fell early at the turning of the
year, and the birch trees gleamed like bleached bones in the twilight.
Snow swept across the western highway, stirring the yellow leaves that
lay heaped around the milestone.] and [The only sound was the sweep of
snow among the bare branches.] and [Feathers of snow soon brushed away
their tracks] were among my favourite passages.

I do wish Faramir might one day be able to trace his brother's
journey. I could see him doing that. (I have Pippin's son Faramir
doing much the same thing, in draft form at present.)

Title: Through Shadows · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 620
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-18 23:28:03
Marta has captured Dwarven culture very effectively here with her use
of language and proper names. I particularly liked Gimli's reaction to
Frodo having seen the vision Gimli was hoping to share.


Title: Shadows of the Past · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 331
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-18 23:30:03
This is a very effective look at Smeagol's corruption into Gollum – at
first still with enough humanity (Hobbitity?) to bury Deagol with some
ceremony and to feel remorse, even if only in dreams. Only for those
feelings to slip away as Smeagol's true nature is consumed and
corrupted by the ring. The imagery of the ring of golden sunflowers
mirroring the gold of the One Ring is very striking. Well done!


Title: Diversion · Author: Mar'isu · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: General Drabble · ID: 708
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-18 23:34:38
This is an extremely plausible extrapolation from canon of what
Glorfindel might have done in lieu of going with the Fellowship. I
love the characterisation of Glorfindel as a stern and uncompromising
warrior - giving real depth to a character who in canon is mostly
present in rather impersonal accounts of heroism - and I am impressed
by the deft use of his first age backstory to illuminate his present
actions. Very nicely done.

Title: Mettare Duties · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 647
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-18 23:36:30
This is a vivid and entertaining picture (and undeniably erotic in an
understated way) of personal moments amidst the tedium of court
politics. I'm not sure which part I like most: the depth of
characterisation in small details such as the reference to Eowyn's
[restless hands]; the intimacy in the exchanges between Faramir and
Eowyn, such as Faramir's thought that [Dernhelm lurked beneath her
surface, and he loved both shieldmaiden and hearth-warmer]; or your
effective use of Michael Longcor's song. Very nicely done!


Title: Woven in Friendship · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 290
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-19 00:57:42
For a short ficlet this story says a lot. There are hints of things to
come, and even a hint of Pippin's Tookish Sight. There are memories
also, memories of war and rescue. There is also the love of friends
and family.

This story also has something not found a lot in fan fiction; the
friendship and understanding between Pippin and Eowyn. It would be
nice to see more of this relationship.

Title: Last Light · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Drama · ID: 194
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-19 00:58:19
Very poignant and unusual ficlet, complete with a splendid photo
illustration; from a POV I haven't seen before in Tolkien fanfiction.
This story is sad and dark, but fits well into Tolkien's MIddle-earth.

Title: Alone, Yourself and Nameless · Author: Pearl Took · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 434
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2007-10-19 01:18:42
This is one of those stories with a lot of meaning in it. It is a deep
and thought-pervoking story.

Pippin sees with clear Sight just who Tom Bombidil is, and what his
own life might have been like had not thing happened the way they had.

There is so much here for eyes to see that will.

Title: Good Rest Ye Merry · Author: Llinos · Genres: Poetry · ID: 798
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-19 01:41:17
Rather fiendishly jolly; and quite good in the fit of words to melody
- some of the verses had me singing along.



Title: Bitter · Author: vladazhael · Genres: Drama: General Drabble ·
ID: 173
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2007-10-19 01:57:48
I found this drabble to be very powerful. Emotional and punchy with
the build-up of love and loyalty despite all odds and the final, very
final, betrayal that severed all ties. Well done.

Title: Subdivisions · Author: Aliana · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 551
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-10-19 02:14:47
Another fine addition to Aliana's collection of Houses of Healing
stories, postmodern and otherwise.

What I love about these stories, and about Aliana's writing in
general, is the way she manages to capture the sense of time moving
on, of everyone being perpetually out of step with time. Whether it's
not having enough of it, because facing a sort of end of time within
time (end of the world, end times), or whether it is the phenomenon of
a sort of lost time, a being out of time and not being able to quite
fit in to the new world that is first and foremost a new Age, her
characters stumble through their lives, missing moments and sanity,
but at certain crucial sticking points, they manage to stand up
straight and say the truth of their situation. Then they tumble free
and who knows what will happen to them?

Nostalgia and idealism, engagement and disillusionment, and the irony
of getting exactly what you thought you always wanted and discovering
that that was never quite it - all of these things play in so strongly
to Aliana's work. It may be funny, it may be tragic, but it captures
something that feels very real - a way of being that we recognize from
our own time and see reflected in a work that is oriented by a book
already dated, reflecting an image of a past that never was. It's great!

Long live postmodern Gondor - and I hope to see more of Fallen one day
soon...

Title: Divided · Author: Pen52 · Genres: Drama: The Fellowship · ID: 223
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2007-10-19 02:19:21

Pen gives us an amazing, heart-wrenching glimpse into the heart of the
man who will be king, contrasted painfully with another one who had
been raised to rule, through the eyes of a simple Hobbit.

In this single scene we see, and feel, the pains and heatbreaks of the
ages, of how many lives lost, how many families broken.

I believe that Pen reaches deep into the heart of Tolkien's
mythologies with her portrayal of these two men, again, in contrast
with the Hobbit. - She shows us, through their lives, how wrong it can
be to try to hold what's right, and yet, how can they be any
different? How can Boromir imagine forgiveness for a people who have
killed so many of his own over the year. How can Aragorn not? The
clash and the conflict of them both being 'right' reaches all the way
back through the histories, giving this short LoTR story a wonderful,
deep Silmfic-ish feel.

Title: Five Things That Never Happened to Theodred and Boromir ·
Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 545
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2007-10-19 02:23:33
EdorasLass has given us some great Alternate Universe fics in the
past, and here are five short gems to add to the lot. Boromir and
Theodred, of course, and EdorasLass ranges freely over the
possibilities: we see how easily things could have ended before ever
they began, and how well they might have ended if only fortune had
been kinder.

But I think the two that hit hardest were the ones dealing with
Boromir's journey north to Imladris, and his stop in at Edoras. One of
these drabbles is absolutely chilling - understated power politics
that are entirely, *entirely* too plausible, all wrapped up in just a
hundred or so words. It is simply too easy to imagine now that she's
put the possibility in front of us. And angstbunny that I am, if
EdorasLass were to pursue such a dark AU, I'd probably be there
drooling all the way. *ahem*

The other, while less likely, I think, nevertheless has such a
beautiful, tragic end to it that it is hard to resist the idea. In the
line of tenth walkers, this would be a very interesting tale as well,
though I still wonder about the command situation. Ah well. It's
suggestive and, as noted, beautiful - well done!

Those who love Boromir and Theodred should enjoy these drabbles!

Title: Calm after the Storm · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 350
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-19 03:46:38
Well-written ficlet blending a sense of post-battle accomplishment and
weariness. Excellent descriptions; and there's a lot of story packed
into 200 words. Very appropriate title, too.

And of course, a nekkid Imrahil is ALWAYS a plus!

Title: My Dear Bandobras · Author: Le Rouret · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 818
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2007-10-19 11:08:31
This is a most entertaining story - one that infuriates the reader
along the way and leaves a definite urge to tell Legolas to snap out
of it and dispose of the brain-dead bimbo who seems to love nothing
more than her own reflection in the mirror. Really! I had rather hoped
that elves were more or less immune to Paris Hiltonitis - but the girl
seems a prime example of the breed.

Bandobras is delightful - and if anyone can reassure Legolas that he
has had a very, very lucky escape, the hobbit should be the one.

You depict a very interesting world ... very mannered and three
dimensional. A most enjoyable story. With a most aggravating 'heroine'.

Title: A Pirate's Life for Me! · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races:
Men: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 438
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 11:30:58
Ah, Faramir playing at pirates, first as a child with Uncle Imrahil,
and then as an adult with his children, seeing both their awfulness
and their attractions! A wonderful cross-generational look at Faramir
and his perceptions of the folk of Umbar.

A marvelous pair of vignettes!

Title: Healing Lessons · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Cross-Cultural:
With Pippin · ID: 296
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 11:43:42
When it comes to healing, Dwarves also have their methods and useful
tools. When Pippin finds he can't sleep due to the extent of his
injuries and the headache he's enduring, healer Parsow starts off to
get advice from the King but instead gets assistance from Gimli.

A most appropriate means of helping the body heal using ideas that I
know have been a part of alternative medicine for centuries (in my
mind I can hear Caspar singing, ["This is my box, this is my box, I
never travel without my box!)]. And the story is told well and
effectively. Parsow is another OC I've come to admire.

Title: Justice · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ·
ID: 633
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 11:48:21
Ah, yes, our beloved newly acknowledged of still uncrowned King
offering hope to the former slaves of Mordor, giving them the lands
they'd worked for Sauron now for their own, offering them also hope
for the future.

As always, a magnificent theme well written and executed, with the
representative slave brilliantly and convincingly portrayed in spite
of the limitations of the drabble form.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 16
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 11:50:26
One of my very favorite short crossovers, as Thorin contemplates the
seven very odd Dwarves recruited by Gandalf for the trip to Erebor. If
you don't recognize them, you must have had a VERY protected
childhood! Heh!

Title: Riders to the Sea · Author: claudia6032000 · Genres: Alternate
Universe: The Shire or Buckland · ID: 158
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:01:41
A wonderful AU here of a possible first meeting between Frodo and
Aragorn. How wonderful, with images we already know are part of the
story of Frodo's future. And the description of the small camp the two
share for the night and Frodo's demand of his new acquaintance is
marvelous!

Title: Fate and Destiny · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 300
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:10:10
The family of Paladin Took has become closely attached to young orphan
Degger Greenholm; but when a sledding accident breaks the one heirloom
the lad carries, a watch very similar to that carried by Paladin and
other heirs to the sons of the Old Took, the mystery of Degger's
forebears becomes irresistable to Pippin and his closest kin. And we
learn why it is that in the case of Isembold Took, the family tree
states only "Many descendants."

A fascinating look at Hobbit life and life within the Great Smial for
the descendants of old Gerontius, no matter which side of the beize
door they tend to dwell on.

Title: Journey's End · Author: Altariel · Genres: Drama: Ithilien ·
ID: 442
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:21:55
Ah, to have read this once more! Two Rangers, younger and older, have
come to Bey and Eilen's inn, far down in Ithilien. The older one puffs
at his pipe, both seem glad to sleep in the barn when the inn proves
full, and the song sung about leaving a brother behind in the war
brings tears to the eyes of the younger one. She gives them a good
meal for supper and again for breakfast....

A lovely look at two traveling incognito, getting back to their roots.
And the moods are superbly conveyed.

Title: First Flight · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 513
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:26:15
A joy to read again, as we see Radagast checking on the progress of a
former patient and seeing him live up to his name indeed. Of all the
sentient races of Arda, the Great Eagles are among my favorite, and
this story is a wonderful one!

Title: For all the Gold in Harad · Author: Elendiari22 · Genres:
Drama: Incomplete · ID: 584
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:30:06
Eldarion's tutor has left, and it looks as if he will have a summer of
leisure with no studies. But then he meets a Haradri princess who
teaches him and his sister without the two children being truly aware
of how they are learning. But the story of this lady and her losses
touch the heart of the Prince of Gondor, until he finds a lost
treasure and sees it restored.

Lovely use of reality and fantasy brought together to make a
satisfying tale.

Title: Seasons · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Fixed-Length Ficlet ·
ID: 655
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:38:47
Alas that Celegorm could not accept that Luthien failed to find him as
desirable as he found her. The tragedy of unrequited love leading to
unbearable sorrow told in four powerfully told short segments, each
associated with a season.

Title: Endings and Beginnings · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Second Age:
Drabble · ID: 726
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:41:47
A unique manner of bringing together the worlds of Star Gate Atlantis
and Middle Earth in this unusual changing of the story of the Founding
of Gondor and Arnor.

Title: Romancing the Smut · Author: Llinos · Genres: Poetry: With
Hobbits · ID: 797
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:46:40
A piece of advice, when trying to write a delightful love sonnet, it's
best to first muzzle younger cousins and lock them in the closet!
Charmingly funny.

Title: It Is Custom · Author: Mar'isu · Races: Cross-Cultural: The
Fellowship · ID: 820
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 12:53:42
It appears that only Boromir is moved to find solace in a way common
to Men after the loss of Gandalf in Moria.

Rather a sad story, really, and not a flattering look at Boromir, I
fear; but all, all too human.

Title: Future Imperfect · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851
- 3017 TA · ID: 749
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 13:02:20
A thoughtful and painful vignette of Faramir overhearing a debate
between his father and his grandfather Adrahil as to his future. How
does the ruler of a great nation such as Gondor deal with the
possibility of losing sons in the service of the land, and yet not
appear to be granting them special privilege if he follows the
dictates of his own heart.

It is wonderful to see Denethor showing how deeply he cares for both
his sons.

Title: Freddy and the Thain's Rabbit · Author: grey_wonderer · Races:
Hobbits · ID: 251
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 13:06:25
Errol the stuffed rabbit has been a feature of many of Grey Wonderer's
tales of Pippin; now as a new generation of little Hobbits grow up
within the Great Smial we learn his origin and watch his interactions
with little Freddy.

A wonderful tale of finding and coming to terms with life while
growing in love and imagination, complete with a revelation from the
Queen that doesn't quite surprise Pippin as much as it might the rest
who learn it.

As usual, a wonderful, thoughtful, humorous tale by GW.

Title: The Archives Incident · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Adventure: Minas Tirith · ID: 38
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 13:12:53
To their surprise and horror, Pippin and Frodo learn that there are
some places within the White City that are not completely safe, as a
search of the Archives ends with them locked in a disused corner,
Pippin injured, and endangered by rats.

So likely a piece, with Pippin's finding of a sappy poem written in
honor of Thorongil that has them chortling to the attempts to stave
off those rats drawn by the scent of the injury. Dreamflower brings
the less commonly visited corners of the archive to life.

Title: Fell Wisdom · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: General Drabble · ID: 323
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 13:17:13
A marvelous examination of the second thoughts Theoden might have
known as they rode for Helm's Deep, with language so reminiscent of
the speech he gave his men later before the charge of the Pelennor.

Beautiful word usage!

Title: And We Will Travel North · Author: bewize · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 39
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 13:20:53
Aha! At last the thoughts of Elladan and Elrohir that led them to join
those of the Dunedain that could be gathered in haste and sent south
to Aragorn's aid. The title is a bit misleading, but the drabble is
well done.

Title: The Company of Heroes · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 393
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 13:40:55
Little Bilbo Gamgee-Gardner could name eight of the Nine Walkers. Why
is it so difficult to remember Boromir?

Sam confronts his own reluctance to think about the tall Gondorian,
and accepts that in the end he played a crucial part in the quest in
spite of his fall.

It is wonderful when Ann turns her creativity to Hobbits after so much
time spent in Gondor and Rohan, and this story is most thoughtfully done.

Title: Under the Eyes of the Evenstar · Author: Raksha the Demon ·
Genres: Drama: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 680
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-10-19 14:09:28
I really like this character of Arwen. Here she is shown as proud as
Boromir usually is - a fresh and true way of seeing her, to my eyes.
But her pride, umbrage and ambition are believable transformed to
compassion by the end of the piece - an difficult accomplishment in
short works. Well done: a short piece with action, arc, and growth in
characterization.

Title: Fate and Destiny · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 300
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-19 17:45:47
This tale takes place after the author's work 'Merry's Graduation'. It
centers around a wonderful, loveable OC named Degger Greenhill. He is
an orphan that has been taken in by the Tooks, and he is very good
friends with both Pippin and Merry. This follows his journey from
servant to member of the family, and it is delightful. Pippinfan does
a wonderful job of fleshing out her characters, especially Degger,
Pippin, and Paladin.

Nice job!

Title: Father and Son · Author: Istarnie · Genres: Drama: Second Age
or Earlier · ID: 718
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-19 18:43:15
Istarnie is one of the most Tolkienesque fanfic writers I've seen in
Silmarillion fanfic; and I love the way she characterises Feanor and
his firstborn in this intense vignette. I could really feel Feanor's
mingled anger and grief and bitterness.

Title: Coda · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Second Age: Drabble · ID: 627
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-19 20:05:45
I have long admired Imhiriel's incredible drabbling ability, and I
think this particular example showcases many of her strengths to their
fullest. From title to ending, this touches on subjects that go far
deeper than the surface layer.

The tone is set from the first line, with an utter sense of loss and
grief that echoes right through to the end, where it redoubles when we
find out just what book is being destroyed. The imagery is excellent,
with the beauty of the book (embellished and treasured and obviously
valuable even before author and subject are revealed) representing the
lost beauty of Numenor, also drowned; and such a chilling line
concerning the disappearing words: ["Like blood and ashes."] Without
ever touching directly on what else is floating in the water, Imhiriel
has painted a complete picture for me.

This would be powerful enough in itself, but then we receive the
ultimate points of the drabble: the relationship between Elros and
Maglor, wherein the first King of the Dunedain is granted a precious
and poignant gift from his foster father; and the heartbreaking and
pointed link between events over two Ages apart - Andor is a terrible
["coda"] indeed, and connected by a strain of Feanorians to the first
theme.

The entire structure of this piece brings us along steadily until the
full impact breaks on you at the finish. The message and its subtle
undercurrents, the family backstories that are only hinted at here:
they and all the speculation they engender stay with me long after
I've finished the drabble.

Title: Prince of Winter · Author: jastaelf · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 93
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2007-10-19 23:00:11
I find Jastaelf to be one of those amazing authors that manages to
pull out all the stops emotionally. I found her through her Dark Leaf
Saga and have followed along for years and was delighted to find this
one story through the MEFAs that I had missed in my casual reading.

It's still so soon after his rescue and so painful to live these days
with him,but I love to see her little prince growing and starting to
find himself in spite of all he has been through

I also love her characterizations. Usually, no matter how much I like
an author, there will be some tidbit I can pick at or disagree with in
spite of liking the story overall. but not Jasta. Her characters are
deeply layered and real. One thing I especially like is her balance
and contrast of the various cultures. I especially love her original
characters, [Saeros] and the others. She so perfectly portrays the
dark and dangerous elements that I love because they seem to truly be
wild woodland creatures. Not animalistic at all, but truly part of
Arda as Tolkien intended of the Firstborn.

Title: February Bride · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance · ID: 678
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 23:48:03
Ah--Diamond and Pippin's wedding! They put the dessert before the meal
a bit, perhaps, although to no harm to any or to their reputations;
but now they are fully man and wife, and she is learning to deal with
the memories, hearing for the first time the (movie-verse) memories of
the death of Boromir, the song for Denethor, and the growing madness
of the last ruling Steward of Gondor. And she's finding that Peregrin
Took, Soldier of Gondor, is all she ever wanted and moreso.

Title: Clothes Make the Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Humor: Drabble · ID: 625
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-19 23:49:45
The theme of the drabble is about appearances and the substance
beneath, and the drabble itself delivers on both counts. Gandalf's
Apprentice has clothed her vivid character sketches of Celeborn,
Aragorn and Galadriel in some gorgeous phrases. I particularly loved
the description of Galadriel as [straight and commanding as a
mallorn]. Well done!


Title: Temptation · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851
- 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 419
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-19 23:54:39
I greatly enjoyed this vignette exploring a slice of Aragorn's life
during his journeys in the South. Linda hoyland presents us with an
Aragorn who is both noble and very human, quickly engaging our
sympathies. The other characters also ring true to their situations.
The bittersweet final few lines are more bitter than sweet – only
tempered by the knowledge we have (which Aragorn does not) that his
story ultimately has a happy ending. Overall the writing is crisp and
economical, with well-chosen descriptions that bring the scene vividly
to life with a minimum of words, and it has a plainness and clarity
that perfectly suits the rather harsh nature of the subject matter. In
short, this is exactly the sort of gem I love unearthing during the
MEFAs, while kicking myself that I didn't come across it earlier. Well
done!

Title: Mistaken · Author: Fawsley · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 490
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-19 23:55:46
A very cute what-if story, nicely put together. The commonplace nature
of Gandalf's final words after the earlier dramatic build up rounds
the piece off nicely.

Title: The Boatbuilder · Author: DrummerWench · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 536
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-19 23:56:58
Exquisite, Drummerwench--truly exquisite. The idea of Cirdan building
boats today and naming this one Elanor and them keeping that name as
they set out on the Road Home--absolutely wonderful! I am in awe.

Thank you!

Title: Knave of Hearts · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 252
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-20 00:13:01
Another hilarious tale of that thief of tarts and hearts, Peregrin
Took, three years old and all too devilishly Tookish. I think Merry
has the right of it--this baby is delightfully wicked and devious, and
Merry is a bit too shrewd for his own good. And poor Frodo and Saradoc
find themselves right in the middle, equally manipulated by little
Pippin and his older cousin Merry.

Delightful!

Title: Where Once My Enemy Stood · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Elves: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 109
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-20 00:16:57
Ah, how wonderful to see stubborn Thranduil come to embrace Gimli, at
last giving over his prejudices in the face of the love Gimli has
shown his son.

Marvelously written.

Title: A Crown of Woodland Flowers · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races:
Elves: With Mirkwood Elves · ID: 180
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-20 00:26:17
Thranduil and his wife share a most wonderful begetting day, and we
learn how it was that Thranduil came to wear ever a crown of flowers
and leaves.

Marvelous moment of peace for one who will know much of threat and war
in the future.

Title: Gone Fishin' · Author: Aranel Took · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 322
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-20 00:28:20
Yes, in fishing Aragorn can recapture the freedom of being Strider
once more, a needed gift.

Lovely images of stolen moments of peace and oneness with nature.

Title: Family Jewels · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 464
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-20 00:33:30
Faramir has chosen a different way for himself and his children, and
looking on them he no longer is stirred by the oath of Feanor as he
once was. And he has learned the importance of one act Feanor bound
himself and his sons against--Faramir knows the restorative powers of
forgiveness.

Lovely images of peace after the war, and seeing that the fruits of
what went before are well worth the labor and dangers he survived.

Title: Morocet's return · Author: Fawsley · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 650
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-10-20 05:04:15
The King of Gondor has been kidnapped by the evil pirate Morocet and
Faramir must ransom him with gold from the King's private stash. This
brief AU tale hints at a darker, slashier side, if that's how you want
to interpret it. The ending does have a literally sweet twist.

Title: The Northmen · Author: SheBit · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 451
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-10-20 05:41:38
Not everyone wants to live where the climate is warm and no frost ever
touches the ground. Shebit's Northmen are such a lot, reminding their
Gondorian cousins that cold climes breed hot blooded men and
full-bodied beer. Just ask the hardy New Englanders, whose tough and
sturdy life style Shebit's Northmen made me recall with some nostalgia.

Title: Gentlemen's Night Out · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor: Gondor
or Rohan · ID: 181
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-10-20 08:53:28
Oh, "Gentlemen's Night Out" is naughty, not only in its subject matter
but also the way it skewers both Tolkien's LACE and the many notions
of sexuality in Arda that pervade fanon. Oshun portrays Legolas as
quite the randy dandy. He's is quite, ahem, catholic, in his hearty
tastes. Friends Elladan and Elrohir seem to have the same appetites
but much less of a penchant to talk about them. Young Echirion of
Gondor, narrator of the story, is quite naive by comparison.

As someone who has been criticized for writing brothels into her
landscapes of Minas Tirith, I heartily cheer Oshun's choice of
supplying the weary soldiers on the Field of Cormallen with their very
own camp followers. However, this detail and some of the sexual
bantering might not be to every reader's taste. However, "Gentlemen's
Night Out" certainly was to my taste.

Title: Conversion · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama: With Aragorn ·
ID: 169
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-20 14:30:09
Excellent tale! Though I absolutely adore Denethor and had to swallow
a couple times over the inuendos of a harsh ruler... still I had to
read on, for I immediately grew to love your main character.

His courage and humility in the face of such devastation - not only to
those he cherished, but in the end to his village... well, this is a
sad and wondrous tale and well worth the read.

Title: Waiting By the Water · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Drama: With
Aragorn · ID: 395
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-20 14:42:50
Oh my goodness! *sits back and sighs heavily* You have such a way with
words. Your descriptions are appropriate and just enough to give
flavor to the tale, but not bog your reader down in too many details.
Your sense of peace in this tale is beautiful - especially since the
beginning is taut with unexplained waiting. Aragorn is perfect! I
could see the man, waiting by the river, perhaps with Gimli and
Legolas standing just far enough away to protect him, yet far enough
away to give him his privacy.

Aragorn's memory of that last day with Boromir is well written. Enough
detail is given to 'know' the moment he remembers, but not too much
that the reader thinks it is a 'word for word' reprise of the book. It
is not. I loved the fact that the boat seems to 'sense' Aragorn and
goes willingly to him. I loved Aragorn's greeting. It is spontaneous,
joy-filled, and perfect.

My favorite part is Aragorn's speculations as to why it has taken
Boromir so long to reach him. That he might have stopped, as a living
being, to see Minas Tirith once again, That he might have stopped to
farewell kin (dear Faramir)... and that he stopped now to farewell his
liege lord one more time before going to his destiny.

Absolutely gorgeous vignette. Again, I sit back and sigh at the beauty
and the peace of the death and farewells of this glorious
Captain-General of Gondor.

Bravo!

Title: Kindred Spirits · Author: Cathleen · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 377
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-20 16:56:11
What a heart-breaking and angsty little tale. My heart went out to
Boromir and Faramir in this, especially little Faramir, who so needed
to be protected from his abusive father. The portrayal of Denethor was
very eerie; movie-Denethor could easily have been this person. It
broke my heart to see the difference between Pippin's upbringing and
Boromir's. Boromir deserved so much more.

Well done, Cathleen.

Title: Not an Ordinary Day · Author: nau_tika · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 737
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-20 17:13:34
This was both tender, and funny at the same time! I enjoy stories
where Pippin's cheerfulness is tempered with seriousness, even though
he regains his cheerfulness at the end.

Well done.

Title: Testaments of the Past · Author: Dreamflower/Gryffinjack
CoAuthors · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 549
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-21 14:43:21
Thoughfully written and beautifully realized, this is a treasure-box
of a story in every respect.

After Frodo's departure over the Sea, his friends find a strongbox in
Bag End containing momentoes of his life; and remember various
experiences connected to some of the items. The authors also include
photos of the items; and further explanations in their author's notes.

The detail in the documents of Primula and Drogo's marriage and
Bilbo's adoption of Frodo is particularly exquisite and makes the
story even more believable.

A lovely effort that reminds us all of the significance of memories
great and small from a pivotal life in Middle-earth. Highly
recommended to all hobbit-fans!

Due to instability on the TORn server, the URL for Curious' essay
Bilbo's Dark Psyche (number 519) no longer works. There is a new URL
that accesses the essay:
http://archives.theonering.net/rumour_mill/rpg/viewer/readingroom/405C3A
D60001A00C.html

Can someone change it on the site?

Hello fantasyfanoftorn,

I have changed the link. Please check it at our site to make sure I
have done this correctly.

Thanks,
Marta

On Nov 8, 2007 10:12 AM, fantasyfanoftorn <persimmontook@yahoo.com> wrote:
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itle: The Most Beautiful · Author: Meril · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 508
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-21 14:44:31
Excellent vignette exploring the duality of Melian's existence as
ethereal Maia and flesh-and-blood wife and mother. Beautiful language;
and all in all quite believable. The piece's only flaw (which is not
really a flaw) is that I was left wanting more.

Title: Seven Deadly Sins - Theodred · Author: EdorasLass · Genres:
Drama: Vignette · ID: 754
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-21 17:27:55
Karl Urban, in one of his interviews for "The Two Towers", described
his character Éomer as an orc-killing machine. Though in some ways
that description would probably be quite accurate for Théodred as
well, in these seven glimpses (which could hardly be considered
"sins') EdorasLass has fleshed out and developed his character much
more fully without straying too far from the foundations that Tolkien
provided us in "Unfinished Tales." Her Théodred is fierce in his
devotion to his homeland and his pride in the warriors who defend her;
singleminded and ferocious in battle; farsighted and thoughtful as he
considers Eomer's future, and bitter in his frustration and despair
over his father's decline and the bleak long-term outlook for the
survival of Middle-Earth. This is the Théodred Tolkien *should* have
written, the thoughtful, courageous, and charismatic leader. No wonder
Saruman quailed at the possibility of his kingship!

Theodred's one indulgence, though, is his deep and abiding love for
Boromir. Though their meetings are rare and brief, it's clear that
this is the luxury that grants him, and his lover as well, their
sparse moments of peace and and joy. Rare delights to be savored and
treasured, and a well-earned respite from the doom they already know
they cannot escape.


Title: Three Cups of Kindness · Author: Elen Kortirion · Times:
Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 448
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-21 17:28:21
A very moving three-drabble series, in which Estel/Aragorn/Elessar, at
various stages of his life,is offered a cup to ease shock or pain.

The first drabble, which focuses on young Estel's first blooding, is
particularly vivid. Somehow we've glossed over the nuts-and-bolts of
what rangers do – kill to protect the innocent – and so a description
of the result of a fight, butchery and [bloody horror of hacked flesh
] is shocking, just as the experience itself has left Estel sickened.
The empathy of an older, more experienced ranger does not comfort him,
though; he is still young enough to imagine that he should be above
such weakness if he is to be a leader. I'm sure the lesson, that every
battle can be as frightening as the first, was hard-learned.

In the second drabble, Legolas offers an elven-draught to strengthen
Aragorn in the immediate aftermath of Boromir's death. There is no
time for mourning; grief and regret must be set aside for more
leisurely times, and Kortirion has well expressed the pain of that
moment of decision.

The final drabble brings us to Elessar's last hours, where the rich,
heady vintage brings not only comforting warmth but also memories of
those loved ones who have gone before. Through Kortirion's graceful
words we share the hope and joy of his final moments, as he envisions
the long-awaited reunion with his most beloved companion.

Title: The Spear of the Lily · Author: The Bookbinder's Daughter ·
Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 11
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-21 17:28:56
An exquisitely lush and sensuous ficlet. There's no plot, as such, but
a rich discourse of Faramir's adoration of his wife" how the soft
flush of dawn gilds her skin, her hair, her eyes; how in every hour of
the day he finds the warmth of sunlight or flowers a pale reflection
of the loveliness of his bride, [long after the wedding veil has been
put away and the need for wooing passed]. Faramir's musings are a form
of poetry,subtle and barely whispered music in themselves; a work of
art no less than a painter's gift.

Title: Go Out in Joy · Author: Larner · Genres: Alternate Universe:
The Shire or Buckland · ID: 145
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-21 18:54:51
This is a beautiful portrayal of what might have happened had Frodo
remained in the Shire instead of sailing West. His body failing him,
his friends and family from all over the Shire gather around to offer
him comfort and healing.

Well done.

Title: If You Could See What I Hear · Author: Cathleen · Races:
Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 488
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-21 20:33:13
This captivating story had me hooked since I first read the
introduction for one of Marigold's challenges. The author sure knows
how to draw Pippin's personality, and it is spot-on. We all know that
Pippin as a little lad of ten would be getting into trouble all of the
time. This is one time when he disappears, and has a little adventure
in the woods surrounding his home, accompanied by his knitted piglet
Tulip. It is delightful!

Title: South · Author: Aliana · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor
or Rohan · ID: 8
Reviewer: PipMer · 2007-10-21 20:58:26
This is just wonderful! A haunting glimpse into the relationship
between Merry and Eowyn: a loving one, without delving into a sexual
aspect. The two would have a special bond, not only after riding with
the Rohirrim, but also because the two of them faced the Witch King
together... and vanguished him.

I love how the difference between his love for Estella and his love
for Eowyn is portrayed; with much sensitivity, and beautiful language.

Thank you for this story.

Title: Mighty among both Elves and Men · Author: Tanaqui · Times:
Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 606
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-21 23:33:54
A marvelous history told in drabbles of Elrond, from the sundering
from his twin to his look at Dale in the Devastation of the Dragon.

Excellent choice of subjects as well as imagery.

Title: The spaces between two silences · Author: illyria-pffyffin ·
Genres: Drama: With Aragorn · ID: 677
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-21 23:53:19
The significant moments between Arwen and Aragorn, told in the words
and images and songs of the moment. Beautifully done indeed, complete
to the realisation that the land of Lothlorien yet held the memory of
her Estel for her to seek and find.

Title: A Special Kind of Lore · Author: Astara · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 748
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-21 23:57:43
A nice giggle to think that Denethor might have been embarrassed to
find his wife reading an ancient manual of certain--activities! Wonderful!

Title: An Expansion of the Family Influence · Author: Auntiemeesh ·
Times: Early Third Age: 1-2850 TA · ID: 819
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-22 00:15:21
Ah, Auntie Meesh, this is so delightful, particularly as I hope soon
to be looking at this part of the Shire's history in my own history of
Gandalf. So, this is how Brandy Hall came to be? And much as I myself
had pictured it.

A fine home for Gor'n and his Arabella.

Title: Property Rights · Author: Salsify · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 74
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-22 00:25:09
This vignette spotlights the history behind the animosity between Bard
and Thorin after Smaug's fall in THE HOBBIT; and does so quite well.
Each of them bears the burden of history and cultural bias; and that
burden is stopping them from communication and understanding, or at
least making the effort to find common ground.

Thoughtful and very credible.

Title: Good Rest Ye Merry · Author: Llinos · Genres: Poetry · ID: 798
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-22 00:32:41
Only Llinos could have come up with THIS! A big grin for a cheerfully
pessimistic look at the possible futures for our remaining eight
Walkers as of the breaking of the Fellowship! Hilariously done.

Title: Celeborn's Trees · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 514
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-22 00:49:01
The perfect defense against the insufferable ones who brag about
having seen the Light of the Trees of the Valar--knowing the one who
bears witness to both as evidenced in her beautiful hair.

Lovely moment between two long given to the love of one another.

Title: The Captain and the King · Author: plasticChevy · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 738
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-22 01:24:46
One of the earliest (I believe) Boromir Lives alternate universe
tales; and one of the most angsty and adventurous. In this AU, Boromir
and Aragorn are captured at Amon Hen instead of Merry and Pippin, and
things proceed very differently from there.

The story is generally exciting and angsty. I liked Faramir's role,
and choice, in the final chapters.

Fans of Movie-Boromir should especially enjoy the story.

Title: Crossing · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Gondor Drabble · ID: 693
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-22 01:42:52
Very descriptive drabble with an excellent last line that smoothly
summarizes and drives home the change in Faramir's life.

Title: Renewal · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017
TA: Drabble · ID: 692
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-22 05:17:34
When I reviewed this story at your blog, I think I commented that the
imagery was so beautifully vivid. And I stand by that comment, because
I can so easily see just what I think Bilbo must have seen on this
return trip to Erebor. Having just gone for a drive with agape4gondor
this afternoon to see the foliage outside of town, I can identify with
his being overwhelmed by the natural world. But what struck me most
this read through was the last paragraph, as Bilbo [turned his head
from side to side, round-eyed with wonder]. The whole valley seems in
bloom, in whatever direction Bilbo looks, and somehow that makes the
renewal all the more overwhelming. Good job capturing that!

Title: First Among Equals · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 564
Reviewer: Marta · 2007-10-22 05:17:44
I really like this drabble series. The sensory details in the first
one made the scene palpable and were surprisingly effective at
capturing Faramir's sense of humor. Then the gravity of the
post-battle scene captured a different side of Faramir's character.
Less visceral, perhaps, but no less poignant. Nice work!

Title: Pippin's Little Experiment · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Pippin · ID: 291
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-22 17:39:47
Pippin manages to turn even the ordinary into a dangerous adventure by
indulging tween-aged curiosity in The Prancing Pony in Bree.

Understated and well-written; with excellent characterisation of Frodo
and Pippin.

Makes me wonder why they didn't put Pippin on a leash for most of the
journey from the Shire to Amon Hen, though, LOL.

Title: All in a Day's Work · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 421
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-10-22 17:49:31
This is very nicely imagined, each vivid piece coming together to make
a very convincing whole.

Title: The Treasure Hunt · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves ·
ID: 320
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-22 18:12:13
A lively story featuring the Trouble Twins of Imladris; who, for once,
do not get themselves into life-threatening peril. Short and sweet,
but not saccharine; and good use of riddles.

Title: No Harm Will Come of It · Author: Marigold · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 456
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-10-22 18:22:33
This is nicely conceived. I particularly enjoy fics where something
that was included all along in the Professor's story is brought out
and given a new light for us all to look at.

Title: Five Things That Never Happened to Theodred and Boromir ·
Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 545
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-22 18:27:11
Sad, sympathetic, sensitively written, sorrowful, shamelessly angsty -
those are five things I could say about these elegant What-If's; and
still not come anywhere near to conveying their high quality.

I was especially glad that the fourth possibility didn't come to pass
- that was so horribly plausible that I would bet that Wormtongue
thought of it in the 'real' Middle-earth but never had the opportunity
(or the guts) to have it done.

Title: The Steward's Archives · Author: dancingkatz · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 337
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-10-22 18:45:47
Three, ["Stone"] was my favorite. What a perfect metaphor, not only
for a lover, not only for a ruler ("L'etat, c'est moi"), but for a
Steward of Gondor, ruler of the city of stone. Well done.

Title: A Mother's Wish · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: General
Drabble · ID: 429
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-22 18:57:41
A wonderful concept, masterfully and beautifully translated into
words. It is sad that the only communication between Nerdanel and her
last living child is reduced to wind-borne songs; but it is also good
that at least the Sea-sundered mother and son can still hear each other.

Title: Making the best of a bad situation · Author: Hai Took · Races:
Hobbits: Gapfiller · ID: 535
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-22 21:22:36
Concerned that Pippin is taking an inordinate amount of time fetching
firewood, Merry goes in search of him, only to realize Pippin is
taking advantage of being out of camp to deal with the growing tension
he feels that he not adversely affect Frodo, who is struggling with
the recently endured Morgul Wound.

A most effective tale in which we see the compassion and empathy I,
too, believe Pippin hid behind a lighter manner than he intended,
expressed most effectively.

Title: Letting Go · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 230
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-22 21:37:59
Most of us who write Hobbit-centered stories have looked at the
question of how much the Travelers would have told their families of
their experiences and under what circumstances--and how much their
parents and siblings might have been willing to accept. This is well
and thoughtfully written as Paladin Took does his best to understand
what it is Pippin has been through and as he gives Pippin permission
to seek healing as he sees best.

Thought-provoking.

Title: The Taming of the Badger · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama:
With Aragorn · ID: 234
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-23 00:39:53
A fine tale of friendship as well as a character study. Aragorn,
recently come of age, meets a Dunedain healer who was a close friend
of Arathorn, and a conflict results.

I really liked that the writer did not take the route I thought would
appear in this story, but accomplished a less flashy solution to the
conflict. The OCs were very well-written, and fit seamlessly into what
Tolkien wrote about the Dunedain, particularly Kenuric.



Title: Time to Let Go · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey
Havens · ID: 261
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2007-10-23 01:39:06
This story is a wonderful journey into the heart of Elanor as she
awaited her father's arrival...for the last time. How sad she must
have been, proud, and perhaps even at ease, knowing that Sam-dad was
finally going to his "rest" from his labours. Her thoughts take her to
places she can only imagine, and perhaps to places she had actually
been, long after the Quest. It was wonderful accompanying her on her
own "journey" through her mind's eye, and heart.

The author immediately captures the attention of the Reader from the
first word and doesn't let go until the last. Not a word out of place,
well written, and the pace smooth. Excellent writing on the part of
PipMer.

Title: The Long Winter · Author: Baranduin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 159
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 04:44:09
Hero Baggins and Sam Greenhand volunteered to go off in search of help
and missing Tooks in this Ardaish adaptation of a Scandinavian folk
tale, written to meet a challenge. A tale of the Long Winter, this is
marvelous as our intrepid searchers seek out news as to why Spring
doesn't appear able to make an appearance and help save--well, not the
day but the season.

Wonderfully done!

Title: Remembering Anew · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 88
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 04:55:09
Ah--Jebbin and Other Brandybuck and their discovery of an ancient book
that puts the lie to the tale of the Quest as "known" within the Shire
some four hundred years after the fact. Complete with a spell/curse on
Lotho and his progeny by Saruman before his demise that needs to be
lifted, the intervention of the Faerie Wife, and ghostly visitations,
this look at how lies even to apparently enhance the original story
serve in the end to degrade those who embrace them is marvelously and
memorably done. Now, if only the Master of the Hall hadn't been moved
to burn the texts on which Other and Jebbin based their research,
including the original Red Book----

Title: Comes Now The Plaintiff, Frodo Baggins · Author: EdorasLass ·
Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 17
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 04:56:23
Humorous, and yet tragically indicative of the litiginous attitudes of
today's society.

Title: Elements: Dreams of the Dead, Visions of the Living · Author:
pipkinsweetgrass · Genres: Alternate Universe: The Shire or Buckland ·
ID: 202
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 05:01:18
As Pippin carves small figures of each member of the Fellowship and he
and Merry examine them, the two find that the memories they evoke
assist them to find healing and closure for the wounds suffered and
the losses known--and the triumphs so dearly won.

Well, well done.

Title: Love Story · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 273
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 05:03:19
Bilbo watches his youngest cousins seeking to put on a play of a
romantic tale he's told them, and finds humor and pleasure in the
performance.

Sweetly told.

Title: The Use of a Good Bit of Chain · Author: bodldops · Races:
Hobbits: Vignette · ID: 344
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 05:12:21
Young Daisy Boffin sees that the chain through Frodo's Ring is broken,
and substitutes her own. Did she help manage to save Middle Earth in
her own sweet way?

A lovely tale, and one I appear to have missed the first time through.

Title: Butterfly Wings · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 486
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 05:32:12
A sweet moment between Legolas and his mother, and well written at
that. Lovely by one of my favorite Legolas/Aragorn writers.

Title: Fourth Age, Year 13 · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 628
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 05:42:12
Ah, the joys of watching our children grow and reach adolescence....
So true of girls of that age, having been one myself and watched my
classmates and sister through it and dealt with students that age....

A wonderful examination from Aragorn's POV of his first daughter's life.

Title: A Need To Know · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War · ID: 776
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 06:14:34
It was quite a test Tom Cotton sprung on Sam, seeking to learn if Sam
had enough gumption to stick up for himself and his family. But he did
wish to know if Sam was worthy....

So marvelous a tale, and so well written!

Title: Daybreak · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 705
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 07:01:38
A superb tribute to the joy of seeing the world anew without the
shadow of Mordor and Sauron. So well written, and with a profound
power to the imagery.

Title: Tea and Seedcake and the Influence of Hobbits · Author: Baggins
Babe · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 492
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 07:23:20
To say the world has changed is a gross understatement as a merchant
from Lebennin faces Dwarves, Elves, Hobbits, and a King he remembers
from his childhood!

Wonderful story, complete with a delightful Thorongil moment!

Title: Calm after the Storm · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 350
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 07:27:22
After conquering a Corsair ship Imrahil seeks a moment of peace and
cleansing, wishing the wind to pick up so they can return home, but
taking advanage of the momentary peace for a quick, cleasing bathe in
the sea.

Lovely double drabble, expressing the distaste felt in the aftermath
of battle.

Title: The Big Green Bottle · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
The Shire or Buckland · ID: 208
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 07:39:46
Ah, it's been a while since I first read this. The biggest bottle in
the Brandy Hall cellar, and Pippin's nicked it to give to Merry as a
birthday mathom, forcing Merry to fulfill his promise to share the
liquor Pippin was able to obtain for him. They don't know what it is,
but Frodo does.

A nice look at Hobbit inebriation, and an anticipation of a painful
day after. Heh!

Title: Merry's Grandmother · Author: grey_wonderer · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 137
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 07:52:04
One of Grey Wonderer's more sober tales as Merry for the first time
has the chance to truly speak with Grandmother Took, realizing that
she has had her own youth and delight. When he believes her tale of an
encounter with an Elf, she and he bond in a way he'd never thought to
know.

Poignant and thoughtful.

Title: The Spear of the Lily · Author: The Bookbinder's Daughter ·
Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 11
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 07:57:17
In this Bookbinder's Daughter has managed to capture Faramir's
continuing and maturing love for his wife and express it in terms of
the light and colors of the day as it passes.

Lovely and lyrical.

Title: A Collection of Sindarin Tanka · Author: juno_magic · Genres:
Poetry · ID: 224
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 08:10:52
A marvelous, creative series of Tanka poems looking at the pleasures
and pains of life as experienced by Elves, in Sindarin with
translations, and each wonderfully illustrated.

Very evocative and emotionally stimulating.

One of the best poetry cycles I've seen touching on the lives of the
Children of Iluvatar.

Title: The Right Choice · Author: Linda hoyland · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 437
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 08:14:20
Linda's stories capture my imagination, but she shows remarkable
strength in the construction of her drabbles. This one looking at
Arwen's choice to stay in Middle Earth at Aragorn's side is
particularly touching. Imagery and message are both masterfully presented.

Title: The Most Beautiful · Author: Meril · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 508
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 08:20:04
For a Maia to have entered into the world of Arda, clothing herself
with the Hroa of an Elven Child of Iluvatar so as to spend a life as
Elu Thingol's wife and Luthien's mother--perhaps she's not as far from
dancing in the Light, Breath, and Song as she thinks herself.

Lyrical.

Title: Morocet's return · Author: Fawsley · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 650
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 08:26:10
Very cute, and eminently amusing. What a find--an odd sort of gold
coin Aragorn had hidden in his desk!

Title: Great and Terrible · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General
Drabble · ID: 721
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 08:28:12
A most dread Might-Have-Been, and one I rejoice didn't come to be.

Title: One Frodo Too Many · Author: Baranduin · Genres: Humor: Parody
· ID: 683
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 08:43:24
I've had Frodo meet with Deagol and the Little Match Girl, Dumbledore
and Ptolemy; but this meeting with his own splinter creations as they
reflect the pairings we've written for them--Hilarious!

As for the last Frodo to come to book-Frodo's meeting! So PRECIOUSSSSS!

Hey guys,

It's been about a week since I made my informative post on how to use
filters to find stories to review, so I thought it would be helpful to
talk about a new topic. So, without further adieu….

Skip lists and Wish lists

Many people participating in the MEFAs go their entire participation
without ever using a wish or skip list. They can be a little confusing
at first, but they are also very helpful. They let you tell the
website just what stories you want to see when you look for a new
story to read.

To use these lists, log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2007/ and click
the "Browse Nominated Stories" link. Scroll down to where the actual
stories are displayed and look on the right side of the screen. You
will see "Skip" and "Wish" reviews. Clicking on these links will add
your story to the list you selected.

Stories on the skip list are not displayed by default when you go to
the "Browse Nominated Stories" page. You can see stories on your skip
list by selecting "Skip" from the "Review Status" filter. Stories on
your wish list *are* still displayed by default, but you can also see
just these stories by selecting "Wish" from the "Review Status" filter.

Reviewing a story automatically removes it from your skip and wish
list. So if you review a story it will show up on the "Browse
Nominated Stories" page without you having to filter to display the
skipped stories. Of course you can still choose not to show it (along
with all of the other already-reviewed stories) by selecting the
option to show only those stories you haven't reviewed from the
"review status" filter.

When you add a story to your wish or skip list the website will open
up a new tab or window telling you the story has been added to the
appropriate list. If you close this window you'll come back to the
page you were viewing before you clicked the "skip" or "wish" list.
You'll need to reload the page or go to another one before the change
shows up on your screen.

I think that's the most important stuff about wish and skip lists. Any
questions about this feature?

Also, what would you like to see discussed next week?

Marta
(MEFA Admin.)

I'm putting the longer stories I hope to read when done with the
shorter fare I'm commenting on now on my wish list so I can find them
more easily when done with what I'm doing--I hope. Heh!
Bonnie L. Sherrell
Teacher at Large

"Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." LOTR

"Don't go where I can't follow."

I mourn for this nation.

Bonnie L. Sherrell wrote:

>
>
> I'm putting the longer stories I hope to read when done with the
> shorter fare I'm commenting on now on my wish list so I can find them
> more easily when done with what I'm doing--I hope. Heh!
> Bonnie L. Sherrell
> Teacher at Large
>

Hi Bonnie,

That is a fantastic use of the wish list. I think a lot of people use
that, and I think it's a good thing to do if you have stories you want
to make sure you get to.

Marta

Title: The Love of Lore · Author: Oshun · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 271
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2007-10-23 10:52:52
For me this story lives in the last paragraph. I love Boromir's quick
change of mood spurred by pride in his brother's ability, but that he
doesn't forget the lesson in comportment!

Title: The Stone of Erebor · Author: Primsong · Genres: Mystery · ID: 401
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2007-10-23 13:16:44
This was a story I very much wanted to nominate myself, and it was on
my list. But once more, I was too late, and someone else beat me to
the punch!

There are so many reasons I love this story. For one thing, it is a
BILBO story, something that there simply are not enough of out there!
Not only that, but it is a Bilbo story concentrating *on* Bilbo
himself, not Bilbo as Frodo's guardian. And I do believe that it is
the *only* story I have ever seen that actually dealt in any detailed
way with Bilbo's second journey to the Lonely Mountain.

Primsong has created an interesting, mysterious culture for her
Dwarves, using many of the hints JRRT gave us in canon: their love for
the treasures they made, their secretiveness, their mistrust of
non-Dwarves, the strange lack of females--and made a rather amazing
and coherent society. And she gives each Dwarf an individual character
as well--they are not simply interchangeable.

In addition to that, she has given us a mystery to solve: what has
happened to the Arkenstone? Bilbo, in danger of finding himself
accused of theft, must try to solve the mystery, which he goes about
doing in a thoroughly hobbity manner. And we see that even without a
magic ring of invisibility, he remains clever, brave, honest and loyal
to his friends--and he still has that amazing luck that brought him
through his first Adventure.

She writes Bilbo with a firm grip on his canon "voice", and I love the
moments when he must occasionally try and make sense of some Dwarven
custom that seems completely unnecessary to a hobbit. And I must say,
the ruse he used when his investigations needed to take him outside
the mountain was both funny and touching and very much in character.

And the solution he came up with in the end also displayed his
compassion and wisdom--just what one would expect of the hobbit who
could give up the Arkenstone to stop a battle and give away the Ring.

Title: Descent · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Early Third Age: 1-2850
TA · ID: 632
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-23 13:19:31
The Kin-strife is not often addressed in fanfiction, but has a wealth
of open territory to explore as an awful and complex period in
Gondor's history. Here we get an insightful "ground-level" view of the
forces closing around the common man in the impending war.

I have always loved the way that Dwimordene writes political
situations and this is no exception. The story revolves around two
wonderful, believable OC's, and the use of such young protagonists
allows a unique viewpoint of mixed innocence and experience. They know
what is coming, and although they lack a full understanding of the
politics, both boys recognize how it might impact their lives. Their
dialects and interactions, and all the lovely touches of
authentic-feeling culture, are very well done; as is the distasteful
and revealing interlude between the bigoted guards at the end.

The setting is delightfully rendered: the docks, the descriptions of
the hustling and multi-racial Row. I am left with a very a clear
picture in my mind, and love the image of Pelargir as the mercantile
crossroads of southern Arda.

We finish with a beautifully descriptive and heart-chilling ending
that points to the looming "first great evil": the rebellion against
the rightful king, the siege and breaking of Osgiliath, and the
terrible and pointless loss of many of the best men of the southern
kingdom.

Title: City of Trees · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 641
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-23 18:05:58


A charming vignette wherein Celeborn gets one heckuva peace offering
from his wife after a prolonged separation. Excellent extrapolation of
the rather muddled pre-Ring War canon concerning the couple.

Title: Blackest Fate · Author: Branwyn · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 476
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-23 18:47:01
[spoiler warning]
When I first began to write, I was taught this definition of a
drabble: "A complete story, told in exactly 100 words, with a twist or
kick at the end." By that standard (or just about any other
imaginable), [Blackest Fate] is as perfect a drabble as can be.

We are immediately pulled into the story of the two prisoners and
their torment. But who are they? Who are their captors? The words
[black-haired men] are troubling: surely neither elves nor dark-haired
men of Numenorean descent would treat their captives so. Would they?

The mood changes fleetingly in the second paragraph, as the prisoners
seek consolation in shared memories of happier times. If there is
anywhere a lovelier phrase than [resting where clear water washed the
flat stones], I don't think I've encountered it. [galloping through
the grass as it bowed before the wind] finally gives us a surprising
hint as to the identity of the prisoners and the dark forces who have
captured them.

[Reaching through the bars, each gently searched for the other's
face…] There's achingly lovely imagery here, as the mysterious
prisoners exchange compassion and encouragement,[ until the black
muzzles brushed together.] then pow! as the identity of the prisoners
is finally revealed. I had to stop, catch my breath, then read it all
again.

[Dead to their Riders and kindred, at least they two could share this
evil doom.] Honorable, courageous, and loyal, Branwyn's Rohirric
steeds are just as heroic and unforgettable as their Riders. An
amazing piece of writing. *stands and applauds the wondrous Branwyn*


Title: Passages · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 60
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-23 18:53:11
This is a very satisfying story on so many different levels. There
seems to be have been a dearth of good action-adventure stories
lately, at least that I've been exposed to; I'm very pleased to have
found both this and Dwimordene's most recent contribution to the
'verse, "Reconciliation." "The Plucky Youngster Proves His Worth,
Rescues His Friends, And Learns Something About Himself In The
Process" trope is an age-old one, and Isabeau writes it very well.
Brandemir is an engaging character, and it's a pleasure to see aspects
of his personality we can very easily imagine as being inherited from
his father – quick wit, leadership, imagination – coming into play as
Brand engineers his rescue and that of his young companions.

The Cinderella aspects of the tale, explored in the original tale
"Noble Jewel", are more fully developed here. Brand is aware of the
truth about his origins, and is becoming comfortable with both his
new-found family, and the expectations and opportunities now available
to him. That he is able to conduct himself so well in a crisis
situation is a salute to both heredity and environment.

The most touching elements of the story, though, deal with Brand's
realization of the truth about Andra and Boromir, the two men whom he
has learned to respect and admire more than anyone else in the world.
His shock and confusion is both painful and realistic as he is forced
to examine a lifetime of prejudice. What he experiences is not all
that different from what a young person of the late Fourth Age would,
in a similar situation, another vivid example of the universality of
experience that we find so moving.


Title: The man in the woods · Author: Dot · Races: Men: Eriador or
Rivendell · ID: 13
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-23 18:54:18
What a gorgeous, gorgeous story, with wondrous use of language, and
absolutely perfect characterization.

I've read a number of Halbarad stories, and never really seemed to be
particularly moved by them, until I read this – I think it is the
imagery of Halbarad as a loving husband and father that must have been
moved me so. Though Halbarad appears only briefly, at the beginning
and the end, it is his influence on his young daughter Falathren that
defines her personality and her actions in the story. [Though unaware
yet that my birthright as a Dúnedain woman was not to fight for our
future but to sacrifice my loved ones to it with a resolute heart, I
nevertheless did not mind that Ada never told me I'd be a good Ranger.]

Falathren and her older brother Alagos have slipped away while their
mother is sleeping to play in the woods. Their games are based on the
stories (and other useful skills) they've learned at their father's
knee [far away places that made my father's voice warm and soft as
fresh baked bread when he spoke of them, though he knew them only from
his own Ada's stories and the faith that thrummed in Dúnedain
blood...], so that when they find a body in the woods, they are not
unduly shocked or startled
but know exactly what action is called for: [He surveyed me for a
moment and then with a decisiveness no doubt born of life in a
Dúnedain household he announced, "We need to go for help."] Falathren,
though, chooses to stay with the body, her fear overcome by compassion
she is yet too young to recognize.

What I found particularly touching in this story was Falathren's
honest voice as she describes her early resentfulness of Aragorn: [I
knew I was supposed to like Aragorn because my parents did – almost
everyone did – but he always took my father away from me] which is
transformed into comfort and reassurance when it is Aragorn who
retrieves her from the dead man's side [He rose and carried me away,
hugged close to his chest so that I could listen to the hum of life
within him].

The final lines [I looked away from the reflection of my future in the
knowing gazes of the women and leaned into him, grasping at the scent
of him, that scent of smoke and sweat and self-assurance, of the
achingly familiar in a strange new world.] are almost heartbreaking,
symbolizing to me the world of Dunedain women, into which this child
has been thrust all too soon.

Title: Dissonance · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Cross-Cultural: Gondor
· ID: 450
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-23 18:55:52
This subtle yet powerful tale speaks so much to things that have
happened in our own Age, not just the final days of the Third. This
reminded me of the people right here in our country who attacked
mosques and abused Middle Eastern people right after 9/11. Do you
remember? Such blind rage and xenophobia.

In the Narrator's case this shock and anger is quite understandable,
as he was an enemy combatant, mortally wounded in the very act of
seeking to destroy her city. [Part of me is repulsed by him, by
everything I know his countrymen have done to mine, and I want to
scream and rage at him.] A very realistic reaction on her part, yet
her immediate and unthinking compassion for a dying man, even her
enemy, does her great credit.

It's not easy to take up someone else's original characters and write
them as smoothly and seamlessly as you've done here. Every nuance of
the Narrator's character is spot-on: her nervousness at being
discovered by Valacar where she's not supposed to be, the tiny detail
of her noticing the strange scent on her fingers from touching the
Southron's hair. For those of us who have been following Aliana's
story, this additional episode, somber as it is, is a welcome treat.

The imagery you've provided, of the man singing his own death-song, is
extraordinary. I think I can imagine his voice, that high wailing
chant rising and falling. What despair, to use the last of his
strength for this. A fiercely beautiful, unique and memorable story.



Title: The Burning of the Year · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: 3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 2
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-23 18:57:07
Raksha's [The Burning of the Year] is at the same time disturbing and
satisfying, which makes for a very memorable experience. The idea of
the people of Gondor perpetuating a custom which has its roots in
blood-sacrifice, a remnant of a barbaric phase in Numenorean history,
is quite intriguing; however, the way in which the custom has been
modified throughout the ages, and the beauty of the ritual itself, is
very well written. Poor Faramir! The usual star of the celebration is
absent, so he must perform in his brother's place. Certainly it's very
easy for him to draw the parallels between the ancient ritual
offering, and the sacrifice that all Gondor will have to share in
order to survive. This knowledge gives an overwhelming sense of, not
futility exactly, but resignation, to his participation. But it's also
perfectly in character for Faramir to set aside his own feelings, and
take upon the mantle of his duty as upholder of the spirits of the
City in Boromir's absence. ["It breaks my heart to nod and smile; for
I believe the new year shall bring death, not light; but I will not
quench their hope when hope is all they have."]

I'm pleased that Faramir is able to set aside his misgivings for the
moment to drink and dance and participate as fully as his people wish.
["Yestarë's first hour goes by in song and good cheer. I am
decorously, though far from fully, drunk. It eases the business of
giving cheerful greeting, when I fear what will befall the children
and their parents, the wise old folk and the lads and maids, before
the next year-fire is lit."] The description of the celebration brings
to mind both Cretan and Celtic revelry, an intriguing mix; yet
Denethor's final words provide a grim foreshadowing. An unusual
gap-filler,and a very well-told tale.



Title: True Silver · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 612
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 19:04:14
Now this is a wonderful manner in which to express ones interest in
someone else! This look at Galadriel through Celeborn's eyes is marvelous!

Title: Standards · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: General Drabble · ID: 541
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 19:06:57
Ah, Marta--again a short one that manages to express the hope of Arwen
and Halbarad together so well and with such an economy of words! And
glad the staff to the standard itself is well wrought!

Title: All in a Day's Work · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 421
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-23 19:07:06
What a wonderful story, and just a perfect use of a drabble series.
The writing overall is crisp and vivid; each drabble performs its
purpose perfectly, moving the action along with a wonderful sense of
immediacy. Each of the seven characters are described in loving and
lively detail, and their dialogue, where used, is spot-on, with never
an extraneous word or gesture. This is short-form writing at its very
finest.

Title: Safe In My Arms · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Drama · ID: 470
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 19:47:15
A wonderful tale of finding healing within the Halls of Mandos first
for Denethor's sons and then for Denethor himself. Fiondil's gift at
writing the Lord of Mandos is marvelous!

Title: Truly Tested · Author: Súlriel · Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 -
3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 257
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 20:02:30
Definitely Aragorn is no longer a green youth, but a warrior trained,
no matter how much he might regret it.

Title: Sons of Hador · Author: TrekQueen · Races: Men · ID: 115
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 20:05:15
Love this glimpse at Hador's sons finding their way amidst ease the
likes of which they've been unknowing.

Title: A Mother's Touch · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 20:07:41
A wonderful response to the "Dirty Dragon" challenge, and love Readh's
love and care for her son. Yes, even dragons must know the delight of
loving mothers! Heh!

A delight!

Title: He Came To Meet Me · Author: sophinisba solis · Genres: Romance
· ID: 33
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 20:17:57
The Pippin-meets-Diamond stories are almost always delightful. Am glad
I met this one.

Title: All Lies and Jest · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 104
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 20:33:02
And how Thranduil must have grieved indeed to realize he had doomed
two to die who might have lived, loved, and borne children to the
renewal of the great forest of their home.

Poignant and thought-provoking.

Title: Ribbons · Author: Lily · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest · ID: 246
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 20:36:21
And who was it that Merimac Brandybuck married, and how did she manage
to truly capture the heart of this most fickle of Brandybucks? A
wonderful tale of love east of the Brandywine! Yes, a delightful tale
amd marvelously told, as well as well worth the reading. Well recommended.

Title: Bound by Duty · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance: With
Rohirrim · ID: 175
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 20:40:50
This marriage may have been arranged, but now Lothiriel reviews it
from start to this time, seeing how it was she went from accepting
Eomer as her bridegroom to loving him, and thinking on the reasons why
last night he slept on the cot in his study rather than with her in
what had been their bed.

Marvelously done and intimately told as Lothiriel makes the
transformation from Princess of Dol Amroth to Queen of Rohan in spirit
as well as name.

Title: May It Be a Light to You in Dark Places · Author: Cathleen ·
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 388
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-23 20:52:04
Movie-verse--Eowyn and Faramir remember past Yules while looking at
the decorations for this one, interrupted by rampaging Hobbits and
irate wizards. But love abides here, and tales and gifts help to
confirm that past loves and future loves are yet entwined together.

Title: Warriors' Scars · Author: Marta · Times: Early Third Age:
1-2850 TA · ID: 648
Reviewer: Ellie · 2007-10-23 21:07:32
this is a very subtly poignant look at the twins and what their grief
over the assault upon their mother has cost them. One can see that the
twins still respect Glorfindel and wish to please him as depicted by
Elladan's fear of telling Glorfindel the truth about his reasoning for
going after the orcs out of revenge. I pity Elrond and Glorfindel for
their powerlessness in this situation and for their grief at the anger
and sorrow the twins so obviously still feel and their inability to
help them through it. We know the twins eventually do find healing,
and you have made the ache their loved ones endure palpable. Nicely done!

Title: Hiraeth · Author: Llinos · Genres: Poetry · ID: 803
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-24 01:39:55
A wonderful look at the effects of the Sea Longing.

Title: Mettare · Author: rhyselle · Races: Cross-Cultural: The
Fellowship · ID: 732
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-24 01:43:16
Pippin and Merry learn a Gondorian custom from Boromir, common at the
turning of the year. A sweet story, and a lovely custom that is not
unknown in the Real World.

Writing is excellent, and imagery pleasing.

Title: Dangerous Place · Author: Ushmushmeifa · Genres: Drama: Minas
Tirith · ID: 590
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-24 01:51:29
A marvelous, sad and poignant story on the specific situation that led
Boromir to claim the quest for Imladris as his own. Imagery is sharp
as a sword blade, and the telling sweet. The use of a poem to break
each small segment is exceptionally well done and adds to its poignancy.

Title: Three Cups of Kindness · Author: Elen Kortirion · Times:
Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 448
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-24 01:57:27
Three instances in the life of Aragorn son of Arathorn when an offered
drink helped him deal with the realities of death.

Title: The Blessing · Author: Golden/Pearl Took CoAuthors · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 235
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-24 02:03:50
The challenge was to write a story somehow utilizing a quotation from
someone else's book--in this case the works of E. Nesbit, and Golden
and Pearl Took have done well at meeting that challenge.

Someone did not recover completely from the injuries he suffered in
his private fight against Mordor, and in this case it was NOT Frodo
but Pippin, who's been left epileptic. For a people among whom the
fits of the Falling Sickness are usually enough to cause families to
lock away family members that they not be seen in public, this is
horrible.

The presence of a guardian spirit and the work of Elrond, Aragorn, and
healer Parsow, however, help to assure that Pippin does know indeed
the positive effects of the blessing uttered over him in Cormallen.

Poignant and well researched.

Title: The Unbearable Smugness of Being Feanor · Author: Ignoble Bard
· Genres: Humor · ID: 164
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-24 02:10:22
So, now we know HOW our modern universe came to be--through the
collision of two of the greatest, most self-absorbed personalities in
all of Ea! A wonderful laugh.

Title: Kindred Spirits · Author: Cathleen · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 377
Reviewer: Larner · 2007-10-24 02:35:38
Pippin and Boromir are realizing they have a good deal in
common--except for fathers, with Pippin having a problem understanding
how Denethor could be as he was toward his sons.

But they both find Gandalf's care for them reminds them of....

Sad and yet heartening at the same time.

Title: The Witch-king's Cloak · Author: Radbooks · Genres: Humor:
Parody · ID: 106
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2007-10-24 05:47:26
That scruffy man set his good cloak on fire and now the poor Wiki must
wear the short, tattered replacement cloak squished into his pack.
How's he supposed to strike that trademark terrifying pose in a not
quite black enough cloak with less than adequate volume?

Who would have thought old Angmar was as image conscious as Wilhemina
Slater, the evil genius of the American television version of "Ugly
Betty?" Radbooks did, and made me grin at the Witch King from a
different perspective.

Title: City of Trees · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Elves: With Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 641
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-24 06:33:09
This story is a rather different and very enjoyable interpretation of
the origins of Lorien, with some lovely, humorous and not-often-seen
character interaction to boot.

One of my favorite parts of this vignette is the introduction, where a
gorgeous scene is splendidly laid out before us; it allows us to
personally connect with Celeborn's ardent love of the forest. His
breach with Galadriel is nicely and believably laid out, giving reason
behind their long separation that jives with two such strong
personalities who are very different in their aesthetic appreciations.

I love the back-and-forth between Celeborn and Thranduil, who would
indeed seem to have much in common. I can see a friendship there, one
that perhaps deteriorates after they become neighbors and have to
"share the trees". I also love that Celeborn has kept count of the
days, and that it is Galadriel who makes the first peace offering
through Thranduil - the wonderful compromise that is Lorien.

Although the author has noted that this can be considered AU, I also
see no evidence that it cannot be canon. It comes from a
"glossed-over" period in Tolkien's works, and concerns a relationship
that the master himself changed his mind about frequently.

Title: All in a Day's Work · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 421
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-24 10:30:24
Aaaaargh, matey! I love tricksy, piratey Imrahil stories. All the
different viewpoints here gave a vividly drawn picture of a Prince
concerned for his people and doing his job to protect them. The swift,
professional efficiency with which he and his men accomplish the task
seems very much in character.

Title: Outmatched · Author: Tiana Luthien · Genres: Drama: Vignette ·
ID: 132
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-24 10:35:53
I can just see Eomer using the device of a sparring match to decide
whether or not a certain grave Gondorian is worthy of his sister. Good
images of both men here, despite the brevity of the piece.

Title: Summer Daze · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ·
ID: 471
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-24 11:03:16
Whew! <fans self> I have absolutely no problem reading about a young
Faramir in the throes of adolescent sexual urges, and Marta conveys
his aching frustration and embarassment very well. His earlier
confrontation at a Dol Amroth inn that turns out to be something else
entirely has left him wondering and imagining what he might have done
had he stayed. He takes these fantasies in hand, as it were, and
eventually returns to the inn to make them real. Very sensual
descriptions, of the surroundings, the food and the act itself. I was
amused when he thought about telling Boromir about the evening-it
seemed such a typical young man's response.

Title: Inroads · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 45
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-24 11:07:49
A nice depiction of the difficulties Eowyn must have faced, wedding
the Steward of Gondor. Sniping society matrons must indeed have been a
trial, and one she was not by disposition and temperment inclined to
deal with well. But she overcomes these difficulties with grace, and
by the end of this piece, you can imagine her integrating herself
eventually into the very heart of Gondor. Well done, Raksha!

Title: Charms of Wisdom and Grace · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ithilien · ID: 460
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-24 11:12:49
Having done a small bit of weaving myself, I was intrigued by this
story, which gave Faramir a hitherto unthought-of skill. But it made
sense the way annmarwalk depicted it. And Eowyn, after years of
marriage, has no problem with her husband showing a gift for what
might be considered womens' work. It would be very like Faramir to
make a gift for his son or his brother that would guard them from the
elements. A beautiful, haunting piece.

Title: Sunshine and Roses · Author: shirelinghpc · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Gondor · ID: 531
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-24 11:24:39
Awwww, this was a sweet piece! Tolkien made much ado about Frodo's
trials and what they had done to him, but never mentioned the fact
that poor Sam might have been damaged as well. Trust Faramir, with his
keen perception, to notice this when the hobbits are oblivious due to
the difference in their social station between themselves and the
gardener. If he is not complaining, he must be all right, right?
Faramir has just the right medicine for Sam, and he and Aragorn bring
the other hobbits to an awareness of the fact that Sam too has his
demons to slay. A very touching story, the characterizations were
right on target.

Title: The Turn of the Tide · Author: Altariel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Gondor or Rohan · ID: 72
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-24 11:35:16
Spoiler Alert! As AUs go, this one is more hopeful and much more
perceptive than most. It's not just the fact that both Boromir and
Denethor live, it's that Faramir went on the Quest and Eowyn met him
in Rohan and loves him and not Aragorn. This gives Eowyn's own quest
to Minas Tirith a validity, at least to me, that is lacking in canon.
Her responses to Boromir, and later to his father, are very
interesting because of this, particularly her growing relationship
with Denethor, in whom she sees a kindred spirit. The despair, tension
and fear that hang over Minas Tirith after the Armies of the West
depart for the Black Gate are the same as they are in LOTR, Eowyn
still has her nightmares to deal with, but the final outcome is ever
so much happier!

Title: Jewel · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 325
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:20:41
The idea for this Dwarven tradition sounds very plausible for their
culture, especially as I imagine the fact that there were so few
Dwarven women gave them some advantages when it came to choosing their
future husbands. In addition, skill in the suitors' respective crafts
is surely something the women would take into account when making
their choice.

A nice, engaging touch is that this drabble has Gloin and his future
wife as the protagonists: it's fun to imagine that this might indeed
have happened when Gimli's parents were courting, and to think of the
stout Dwarf we know from TH and LotR as an endearingingly nervous and
smitten suitor awaiting judgement from his love.

Title: A Life Between II · Author: Elen Kortirion · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 445
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:21:24
A drabble that focusses on the smallest details of Boromir's hand,
with its own personal history of scars and healed wounds - Théodred
wants to memorise everything about it when his lover is absent and
takes his time to explore everything very slowly and thoroughly. No
direct feelings are described, yet the mood seems wistful because of
the looming parting - maybe even somewhat foreboding?

The ending is particularly poignant, and seems to creep up quite
unexpectedly, to great effect.

I like how the drabble skirts the edge between subtle and overt erotic
touches, and the languorous pace of it, which also contributes to the
punch of the ending.

Title: Dreams the Way We Planned Them · Author: SlightlyTookish ·
Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 297
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:21:48
A moving, descriptive narrative, told in a calm, gentle tone, with
enough details of setting and characters to bring them to life in the
readers' mind. Engaging characterisations.

Title: Four Voices - Autumn, 3018 · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 756
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:22:21
Beautiful language, the images and metaphors paint a wistful but
shining and moving picture of deep love and affection. I especially
loved Éowyn's musings, and the very last line of Éomer's contribution.

Title: Seeking to Please · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring
War · ID: 193
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:23:15
This story fills a gap in the development of the Aragorn/Arwen
romance: between Arwen almost dismissing Aragorn when he professed his
love to her, to their encounter in Lothlórien almost thirty years
later when she seemed to instantly fall in love with him.

It is written entertainingly, and the characterisations are spot-on,
yet given an extra slant that is all fresh and new.

Elrohir's special perspective as, on the one hand, Arwen's brother who
is not in awe with her beauty or high station, and on the other,
Aragorn's brother and friend who has watched him grow up and mature
among his folk, abroad and in the wilderness, lends a particularly
interesting insight into the relationship.

I loved the way she was so taken aback at the realisation that indeed,
this is no longer Estel, the little child, but Aragorn, a grown and
confident (and thoroughly charming) man.

I can well imagine that Elrohir later had times when he regretted
having arranged this meeting, I doubt he would have wanted it to go
quite this far.

Title: The Beginning · Author: Oshun · Genres: Romance: Second Age or
Earlier · ID: 339
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:24:08
Gil-galad muses on Elrond who he has come to love. There is desire in
his thoughts, expressed by the loving descriptions of Elrond's looks,
but also clear insight into and appreciation of the other's inner
qualities.

I liked the calm, leisurely tone of the story, with the restrained
passion lurking just beneath the surface, giving the narrative a
slightly simmering quality that felt quite appropriate for ["the
beginning"] of their love.

The hesitation of as yet undeclared love, of the doubt whether the
other reciprocrates the feeling, and whether one dares speak one's
heart, is conveyed very realistically and movingly. It must have come
as such a relief (and a surprise) to Ereinion, when the normally
reticent Elrond dared the first step in such a forward manner.

Title: Youngest Son · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance: Second Age or
Earlier · ID: 406
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:24:38
Wonderful setting of scene; the description of the seashore was very
lovely.

And then to contrast this, and Finarfin's surreptitious admiration of
Eärwen, with the ellith, including her, mocking the oblivious
Finarfin, and simultaneously admiring his features like fangirls - too
funny!

I like the obvious yet innocent sensuality the characters notice about
each other: it's a fine balance to keep, and you managed it very well.

The characterisations and character interactions were believable and
engaging.

The brief foreboding gave the light-hearted story a feeling of
transience that made it all the more precious perhaps.

Title: Yours to command · Author: Lialathuveril · Genres: Romance:
With Rohirrim · ID: 129
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:25:36
There is so much in this story: adventure and action, intrigue and
suspense, romance and drama - all well-shaken (not stirred *g*!), and
served as completely enthralling plot seasoned with good
characterisations, humour, and creative twists and turns.

The romance in particular is well-played against the intrigue of the
plot with a remarkable and believable villain, and the solution to
both satisfied, and felt well-earned by the way the plot was structured.

I like this Éomer very much: you have achieved a fine balance between
showing the fierce, temperamental warrior, and the caring king and
leader with a great sense of duty and responsibility.

And your portrayal of Lothíriel is pure delight: her bravery and firm
will, coupled with a sweet nature, is very engaging, and all the more
impressive for her disability with she faces with so much courage and
forthrightness and lets neither it nor her family who almost smother
her with over-protectiveness hinder her in anything.

Title: Black Eyes · Author: Lialathuveril · Genres: Romance: With
Rohirrim · ID: 177
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:28:19
A well-plotted, visually descriptive, and engaging story.

The characterisations, the interaction between the characters, and the
dialogues were well-written. I especially liked Lothíriel's daring,
perceptiveness and resourcefulness.

Framing the story with quotes from "The Art of War" (transferred to
M-e), and using martial terms throughout was inspired, and fit well
with the "sparring" going on between the protagonists.

It was entertaining to witness Lothíriel's (quite creative) attempts
to thwart the plans to "marry her off", even for the cost of acting
foolish or downright appalling, only to discover that those attempts
mostly backfired.

I also liked how you interwove political/mercantile concerns into this
generally light-hearted and not quite serious story to give it more
depth (and to offset somewhat the unbelievable, *outrageous* rudeness
of Aunt Ivriniel).

Title: Winds of Change · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance: With
Rohirrim · ID: 228
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2007-10-24 15:28:52
Lively, descriptive style, very pleasing to read (apart from some
minor issues like modernisms or errors); vivid, flowing character
interaction. The expressions, gestures and dialogues felt very real
and immediate, as did the settings, street life, furnishings etc. in
Minas Tirith. I also liked the fact that you took your time to develop
the romance, that you took into account that there were so many other
important things and changes going on in Gondor and Rohan at the time
that would mean as much to Éomer and the people he interacts with.

Éomer is portrayed very much in-character, and it was very interesting
to follow his thoughts and feelings over the course of the story. I
very much liked him in his role as brother to Éowyn, and I *loved* his
interactions with Faramir (who was characterised equally well).

Title: The Promise in her Eyes · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 100
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-24 16:36:40
I remember this as one of the first stories of yours, EL, that I ever
read, and as such it's fun to go back and note the very beginnings of
characteristics of your writings that we know and love so much now.
First off, of course, is the attention to detail and description: the
embroidery trim on Eowyn's dress, the swirling of her skirt and the
reckless flash of her ankles, the fact that the young hero is a
bodhran player – a bodhran player! You've put all that time spent at
Renfaires to joyful use, which is what great writers do, of course –
store up every experience until the story that will require it is
ready to be told.

The second engaging characteristic is the vividness of your OC. Your
original characters are always extraordinary – it's like they've
always existed somewhere, with rich and full and rambunctious and
playful lives of their own; you merely whisper you magic over them to
bring them to life for us. I don't know that you've ever written your
bodhran player again, and I wish you would: perhaps a bit older and
wiser – he couldn't be a carefree musician forever – but yet, not
beaten down by what he's seen and experienced since his meeting with
Eowyn. I'd love to see him at the festivities surrounding Eowyn's
wedding or Elfwine's birth or the harvest festival in Ithilien.

The third characteristic is the sense of absolute joie-de-vivre you
bring to all your writings. Even the sad or somber or creepy or goofy
ones convey the total delight you take in creating these worlds and
people and places and sharing them with us. You are a creator-goddess,
and you bless us with your gifts.

Title: The Gates · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-24 16:37:16
What a lovely read. At first I felt terribly sorry for Gimli – stuck
with the managerial bureaucracy while others had the satisfying
opportunity to do the actual craftsmanship. But the points that Snorri
makes are very valid and thought-provoking, about the importance of a
proper support staff in allowing the artisans to concentrate without
distraction. It made me think about my own support staff position, and
the contributions I can make to the effective and smooth operation of
our department. On a day like today (frantically busy), this story was
a particularly meaningful gift. Thank you!

Title: The Northmen · Author: SheBit · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Drabble · ID: 451
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-24 16:37:50
An engaging bit of banter between the soldiers of sunkissed Gondor and
their visitors from cooler, greyer climes. The language is gorgeous:
[Will you stay here, the soldiers ask, where the days are long and
warm and sun-riped grapes make rich and crimson wines?] sounds like a
love song to the land, almost like something from one of the Entish
ballads. The Northmen's reply [We belong to the north, where the
weather is reassuringly inclement and grey, and damp days make barley
plump for the brewers' trade] is somewhat stolid, less passionate and
vivid, though wonderfully descriptive in its own way. The last word,
though, comes from the Northmen in a bit of neat turnabout, claiming
hot-blooded virility for their own folk. Ha!


Title: Blooded · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Youth · ID: 3
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-24 16:38:42
A very thoughtful tale of Faramir's first blooding, his first
experience in battle. His contemporaries are very realistically drawn,
alternately boastful and gleeful as they regale each other with tales
of their own derring-do; they don't seem very different from young men
of the Fourth Age in similar situations. Only Faramir sits alone and
pensive as he recalls the physical sensations of the battle, the
actual sounds and sights of death.

Poor Faramir – rather than settling down for a period of reflection
about his own reactions, whether or not he met his own expectations of
behavior in this situation, he must now deal with a new fear, that he
will not be able to bring himself to kill again. It's not really an
unexpected view of Faramir, but in Raksha's loving hands, Faramir's
fear and self-doubt is treated with compassion and delicacy.

Title: The Wink of an Eye · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Mid Third
Age: 2851 - 3017 TA: Drabble · ID: 664
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-24 16:39:13
[Oh what joy to jest with Gondor's solemn Steward! He would drive him
to madness yet.]

Though meant as a humorous drabble (and it does work wonderfully as
such) this also made me think for a moment of the utter plausibility
of Sauron taking foul glee in his manipulation of Denethor, the poor
guy. So it's humor with a bitter undertaste. Well done!

Title: Ten Thousand Years · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA · ID: 565
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-24 16:41:28
There's a lovely sense of vulnerability in Boromir here that we don't
often get to see. You hint at it in the very beginning, showing his
restless frustration with the weather, and how he longs to be out of
doors, to use the natural world, a soldier's world, as his lodestone
to ground him again. I can easily imagine Faramir as much more at home
indoors at Rivendell, wandering the galleries and libraries, wishing
the rain would continue. I also particularly liked the way you noted
Elrond's respect for the history of his brother's kin ["though Elrond
was an elf-lord, his brother had been a king of men. Why should
Boromir wonder that he would collect relics of Númenor's sons?"]. It's
not an element that I've considered much in the past, but find myself
pondering more often lately, thanks to you and also Bewize, in her
drabble "Men of the North".


The theme of vulnerability continues with Boromir's heart-to-heart
with Arwen. Surely his prior diplomatic training would have taught him
to be cautious, to hold back, especially to someone whom he knows
would be a close ally to his rival! Yet he finds himself freely
confessing his greatest fears, as though speaking them aloud enables
him to confront and examine them.

Arwen, in her turn, is also surprisingly open with him, confiding some
of the deepest concerns of her heart to this stranger (as well as a
glimpse of a precious, secret gift - how did she know he wouldn't
speak of it?) It's a lovely scene, and something I've never imagined.
Thank you, as always, for presenting us with the unexpected in such a
graceful, memorable way.


Title: Fell Memories · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 191
Reviewer: Llinos · 2007-10-24 21:47:43
Very visceral and dark and with nothing held back. The violence
certainly draws the reader along, making one gasp at the rawness, but
still without being overly gratuitous.

Graphically drawn, it is at times hard to read, but impossible to stop!

Impressive work!

Title: First Among Equals · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 564
Reviewer: Llinos · 2007-10-24 21:48:34
What struck me about these two drabbles were the references to two
very different types of killing - one for sustenance and one to
protect his people. Not at all the same and yet they are, as both are
necessary for survival.

Faramir's thought about Denethor was very appropriate and at last he
has a chance to find approval, though it still will not be from his
father.

Title: Oliphaunts and String · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 658
Reviewer: Llinos · 2007-10-24 21:50:32
The grandmother's sweet and simple character throws what Smeagol has
become into sharp relief. One can imagine that he too was once sweet
and innocent and yet there must have been *something* in him to make
the Ring take hold so quickly. The author gives us a hint of this
underlying oddness that I really like. Very sad, that he was destined
for such an evil path when without the Ring he might just have been
considered rather simple and eccentric amongst his own folk..

Title: A Life Between II · Author: Elen Kortirion · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 445
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-24 22:20:05
Kortirion is marvelously skilled in conveying lush sensuality even in
the most economical of genres. This delicious drabble focuses solely
on Théodred's caressing of Boromir's hand. There's that lovely element
of shared history in that Théodred is already familiar with each
callous and scar and knotted bone; he knows and loves Boromir's body
as well as he does his own. And while it's clear that Théodred's
exploration with fingertips, lips, and tongue is a precursor to a more
thorough and detailed examination, for the discerning reader these 100
words, like a perfect chocolate, provide complete satisfaction.

Just under the surface of this richness, though, lies a bleak
undercurrent [the too-short life-line that matched his own]. Théodred
and Boromir both sense that they are not destined for long life, and
so must make the most of each rare and precious moment they have
together. This melancholy adds a slightly bitter tang to the the tale,
lifting it far beyond the ordinary.


Title: Subdivisions · Author: Aliana · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Gondor or Rohan · ID: 551
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2007-10-24 22:21:17
Another witty and sardonic postmodern tale from Aliana. It is now
twenty years after the siege of Minas Tirith, and the city has
rebounded emotionally, socially, and economically beyond anyone's
wildest dreams. A university, a thriving Haradric quarter with
take-out curry shops, Starbucks and Mickey D's and KFC, and a postwar
baby-boomer generation threatening to burst the White City at its
seams. The only place to grow is outward; so a central theme of the
story is the debate over the proposal to allow affordable housing to
be built out on the Pelennor. Though on the surface the concept seems
a bizarre twist on Tolkien's work, perhaps this is the very future he
foresaw, and chose not the write. How would the good folk of
Middle-earth deal with "normalcy"?

Aliana's dialog is alternately hilarious and thought-provoking, and
her characters, even those making quick walk-on appearances, are vivid
and realistic. Haven't we all known relentlessly perky students like
Piri, hardworking and ambitious entrepreneurs like Mrs Ishrani, or
even class clowns like Firendir: ["Ooow!" Firendir wails. My husband
sighs, walks over to him, and smacks him on the side of his crew-cut
head. Look, if you're going to be a soldier, you're going to have to
learn to DEAL WITH A LITTLE PAIN."].

Yet as wacky and entertaining as the story is, there is a bittersweet
side to it, in the underlying debate as to whether or not the City's
past should be respected or enshrined.
["Don't you care? They're calling it `Pelennor Fields Quality Homes'
or something insipid like that. Don't you think the Pelennor should be
preserved as it is? You fought on those fields, your friends fought on
those fields."] The Narrator is nearly screaming with frustration, but
she's nonplussed by her husband's reply: ["Well, maybe I'd like to see
houses and kids there for a change, instead of seeing piles of the
dead in my mind. Have you thought about that?"]

It's a debate that's continuing even to our Age. Too bad that ours is
driven more by greed than the urge toward rebirth and renewal.


Title: Some Dark Place · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 226
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-24 23:17:35
This is a strongly-written short take on a first encounter between
Aragorn and the Ringwraiths. Raksha's descriptions create a vivid
sense of the fear the Ringwraiths induce, and its effect on Aragorn.
Nicely done.

Title: Here We Go Round The Mulberry Bush · Author: Isabeau of
Greenlea · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 512
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-24 23:18:19
This is a cute and amusing ficlet about Pippin's courtship. Isabeau
provides a lively and strong characterisation for Diamond of Long
Cleeve, showing how Pippin has truly met his match. The writing is
crisp, clear and brisk. An enjoyable read.


Title: Maiden Voyage · Author: Fawsley · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 654
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-24 23:22:36
This drabble is a beautiful and atmospheric rendering of Legolas and
Gimli's sailing. In it, Fawsley provides some extremely memorable
phrasing, captivating me from the first line with the wonderful use of
["puzzling streams"] to describe the delta of the Great River.

The gentle rhythms of the piece convey a sense of slowness,
tranquility and yet inevitability in Legolas and Gimli's departure. On
top of that, Fawsley shows a masterly control of the drabble form by
using a structure within the constraints of the hundred word drabble
limit that leads the reader through the story and provides a
satisfying resolution.

Although this subject is often written about, I've rarely felt so
moved by any of the versions I've read as this one. Truly excellent.

Title: The Third Eagle · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 630
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2007-10-24 23:25:05
Imhiriel has pulled off the by-no-means-easy feat of creating a
drabble that conveys a bittersweet mix of joy and sorrow. The last
line of the drabble is heartrending, reminding us as it does of the
whole tale of Gollum, and his redemption, fall and ultimate unwitting
contribution to the victory over Sauron celebrated in the drabble's
first line. I am particularly impressed with the way Imhiriel has used
the rhythms of phrases and paragraphs within the drabble to strengthen
the impact of the words, leaving us with a tangible sense of the
eagle's regret in the brevity of his last thoughts. Overall, the
drabble also does a fine job of capturing the nature of the Eagles,
both fierce and gentle. In short, an extremely satisfying hundred
words to read. Bravo!


Title: A Very Rain of Sparrows · Author: Dwimordene · Races: Men · ID: 440
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-25 01:21:39
A very sad look at the life of a child as he nears manhood. The
characters were very well written and 'life-like.' The story itself
was unbearably filled with despair. It almost seemed like a tale about
Elves.

Title: Sons of Hador · Author: TrekQueen · Races: Men · ID: 115
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-25 01:27:55
*heavy sigh* I do so love the tales of Men - whether in the First or
the Third Age - this is a poignant little look at a moment of peace.
So few and far between for these brothers.

Title: Sorgbyrðen · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Men · ID: 275
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-25 01:31:13
Life in Middle-earth, much as we would like to think differently, was
not easy, was filled with pain and sorrow, and was difficult, to say
the least. This author really brought out the pain and horror of
living during the time immediately before the War of the Rings. Her
Eowyn speaks volumes. The Eowyn we meet in The Two Towers is begun in
this tale.

Title: Stone from Above · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Men · ID: 284
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-25 01:43:20
A beautiful telling of Hama's last moments. It could have been; the
man was definitely wise and faithful. I can see him sacrificing
himself, if not for his own king, for their ally's king. A very
poignant piece of work.

Title: Charcoal, Stone and Cloud · Author: shadow975 · Races: Men ·
ID: 610
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-25 01:59:41
I give this five stars. A very good and telling tale of the growth of
friendship, loyalty, and affection between two 'good' men! SPOILERS

I found it quite plausible that Aragorn would finally tell Boromir who
Thorongil 'happened' to be. I loved his remembrances of that time -
especially of Boromir as a babe. I loved Boromir's discomfiture at the
realization that Aragorn had seen a little more of him than he would
have wished; the ease with which, after a moment, Boromir accepted
Aragorn's claims; Aragorn's regard for Denethor and Ecthelion;
Boromir's forthrightness and Aragorn's willing acceptance of it;
Boromir's realization that there must be 'something' to this man who
would be his king if Ecthelion held him in esteem.

I liked the unfolding of these two characters: Aragorn is tight-lipped
when secrets need to be kept; Boromir's love for his brother; his
concern for his father and his City; Boromir's pride (as evidenced by
his statement [I am not one to beg, even of my brother.]; Boromir's
quick-wittedness in realizing that Aragorn (as Thorongil) would not
have wished his lineage known; Aragorn's ease at 'reading' Boromir;

My favorite line is [I have always been grateful that Faramir has not
let the same happen between the two of us, for my stubbornness and
Denethor's regard.] A great response to Aragorn's own admissin of why
there was disagreement between Denethor and Thorongil.

There are so many parts to this tale that just touched my heart...
Boromir's asking Aragorn to have faith and trust 'his' people, the
worthiness that each saw in the other, and the fact that Boromir was
reminded of his brother and his father (their strengths) in this heir
of Elendil.

This tale was filled with warmth and laughter. Though the ending
'foresight' was difficult, it was still a great tale and ending with
hope, at least for a word of love for a brother.

Title: Mushrooms · Author: claudia6032000 · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 561
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-25 02:13:55
This is a well thought out and plausible tale of a 'could have
happened' moment on the road to Mordor.

Poor Frodo - and he barely recovered from the Morgul-blade. Being a
Boromir fan, I'm grateful the man was able to lend his support - by
the use of his great cloak - to the cause of helping give Frodo
comfort. Though I could imagine him wondering aloud - and trying to
keep it at a whisper - what their next course of action might be IF
the worst were to happen.

Title: Not an Ordinary Day · Author: nau_tika · Genres: Drama: The
Fellowship · ID: 737
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-25 02:32:18
This was a delightful little moment that very likely 'could' have
happened. The characters were all perfect. And Pippin learned and
taught a lesson. What more could one ask for?

It made me laugh and that is always a good thing!

Title: Dear · Author: Febobe (Frodo Baggins of Bag End) · Genres:
Drama: The Fellowship · ID: 811
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2007-10-25 02:40:03
I thoroughly enjoyed this bit about Sam and his love for Frodo, food,
and life. Delightful tale. I especially had to giggle over Gondorian
food! Still laughing.

Title: Vocabulary Lessons · Author: Larner · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor · ID: 521
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-25 03:47:15
A spoiled and untested young Gondorian lordling finds himself a fish
out of water when he comes to the court of Elessar shortly after the
end of the Ring War.

Excellent display of Larner's writing talents - good descriptions and
rich details; and a certain wry humor in the way the visitor keeps
digging himself deeper into trouble. However, Larner is a subtle
enough writer that the lordling is not a one-dimensional character;
and there is hope that he might benefit from exposure to the precepts
of the new King.

Title: Not Fade Away · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later
Ages · ID: 127
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2007-10-25 05:02:19
This is one of those Cinderella-type stories that makes you feel good
all over when you finish reading it. In a world where apparently
Tolkien's stories were never published the Elves of Eryn Lasgalen set
out to tell the world the story of "The Hobbit" and the War of the
Ring via computer games and hire a mortal woman to help create the
background paintings for the games. Mariposa is a very real and
brutally honest woman, and it was fun to recognize what scenes she was
painting from the Legendarium, even if she did not. The elves are
delightful, and I loved how their Sindarin names were transformed into
modern names such as Randy, Leif, and Wendell. (I won't spoil the
surprise for others by revealing who is who). The bar scenes were
funny, especially Leif singing "O lachrymosa, dies illa" from Mozart's
"Requiem" as counterpoint to Metallica's "Nothing Else Matters", which
is playing on the jukebox or having one of the elves sport a tee-shirt
with tengwar writing saying, "Moriquendi and Proud of It!". But I
think the thing that will stay with me the most from this story is the
haunting scene of the elves' riding described in the Prologue:

[At the head of the train rode a pale haired elf. His face was grim,
and he wore no outward sign of rank upon his brow, yet any who saw
them would have recognized his lordship over the company.....

....and on the face of the Elven-lord was a somber look as if he were
riding to his doom. And yet, at the same time it was a hopeful
expression, a strange, resigned joy in whatever was to come. The look
said, Home."]

I hope there is a sequel to this. I, for one, would gladly read it.

Title: First Among Equals · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 564
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-25 05:27:59
I particularly like the first half of this double-drabble. [Blooded]
is a fine snapshot of a young warrior's first kill; taut as the
bowstring with which he makes it.

Title: To This My Love Hath Come At Last · Author: Roh_wyn · Genres:
Romance: Incomplete · ID: 699
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-25 06:11:01
Intriguing story of Boromir's relationship with a young noblewoman,
some eight years before the Ring War. I don't think I have ever seen a
story where Boromir was immediately infatuated with an attractive
young lady; and it works quite well here that even Boromir the
super-soldier can be prey to tender feelings. I look forward to seeing
what Roh Wyn does with the tale.