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Msg# 7530
Reviews for 28 October - part 2 Posted by Rhapsody October 28, 2006 - 15:55:30 Topic ID# 7530Title: Legacy · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 299
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 10:41:25
Boromir will never be forgotten. I loved Merry straightening Pippin's
collar and telling him he was proud of him.
-----------------------------------
Title: Web of Friendship · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 932
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 10:46:29
Much more fun than talking about boys! I am glad that Elanor found a way
to feel more at ease with the others.
-----------------------------------
Title: At Last · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 238
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 11:19:22
These are wonderful. I like the first one for its simplicity Merry is
so matter-of-fact here, so quietly calm despite his fear for Pippin. His
observation that Gandalf might have taken him as well had there been
more time is really thought provoking there are so many possibilities
and plot twists brought to my mind by that simple suggestion. I like the
way that Éowyn as Dernhelm listens so attentively, though not daring to
speak and reveal herself.
The use of the Took sight in the second one is excellent I like that
Pippin has something to hope for, that Merry will be back with him soon.
Gandalf speaks one of the best lines *ever* in this part: [Merry has a
big heart, and most of it belongs to you.] That observation just seems
to sum up so many things about Merry and Pippin. Pippin and Gandalf are
so comfortable together here, it is very evident that they are extremely
fond of each other.
My favourite part of the third one was that Merry felt hope when
confronted with the battle on the Pelennor, and not despair. He was
returning to Pippins side, and the battle was something to deal with so
that he could get there. Pippin needed Merry by his side to keep him
safe and that was Merrys concern.
Pippins determination to stand by Gandalf was my favourite part of the
final one: [Remembering Moria he withdrew his sword with a shaky hand.
Gandalf would not stand alone.] I cant but help add this time to that
line! Pippin, along with any other member of the Fellowship, would have
been right there with Gandalf on the Bridge in Moria if given the
chance, despite their fear. I liked the sudden reminder of home with the
cocks cry, even in that dreadful moment. And at the end when Pippin
realises that [Rohan had come at last.] I know that he is thinking of
being reunited with Merry.
-----------------------------------
Title: On the Anduin · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 619
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 17:35:17
I like best the way that Pippin is written, frightened but determined to
do what he can.
-----------------------------------
Title: Safe and Sound · Author: Anso the Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 664
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 17:46:30
I really like the way that Gimli is written in this story. He is a dwarf
through and through, but one that has been tempered by his long journey
with young hobbits. The mention that on their travels [He could remember
several occasions where a small body - usually Pippin followed by Merry
- would snuggle up beside him for warmth] and that Gimli had taken
notice of Merrys sleeping habits [The little head was almost buried
beneath the blanket as was Merrys wont] shows the deep friendship
existing between them.
-----------------------------------
Title: Consequences of a Fall · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 221
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 17:53:58
Hyacinth is shockingly evil. Thank goodness that in hobbit society such
individuals as these are extremely rare! Her thought that [mere sunburn
would not be fatal] is thoroughly malicious and reveals her complete
lack of empathy, seeing Pippin only as an obstacle to her own desires.
-----------------------------------
Title: Fields of Gold · Author: Anso the Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 966
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 18:01:16
My favourite aspect of this story is the care shown to Merry by his
Tookish relations. He is so obviously a beloved member of their little
family, and Eglantine and Paladin are as loving and caring to him as if
he were their own child. The love that Pippin has for Merry really
shines through here, and it is so sweet to see the little lad devotedly
caring for his older cousin.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Path · Author: AngieT · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 638
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 18:07:15
This story is wonderfully creepy! I like the way that it starts out as
if Merry has indeed simply found shelter from the weather, then
gradually things begin to indicate that all is not as they seem. The
ending, when Merry finds out just who Bella was, and learns her sad and
frightening fate, gave me shivers.
Whatever magick caused Merry to be in that place, at that time, I am so
relieved that it let him out again!
-----------------------------------
Title: Instinct · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort
· ID: 965
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 18:35:16
This is an exciting hurt/comfort tale. I like very much how Merry, upon
regaining consciousness, thinks first of Pippin and whether or not he is
safe, and then Pippins profound relief upon at last finding Merry awake
and aware.
The story of how Merry became injured is the exciting bit. It starts out
lightheartedly and I enjoyed reading about Pippins delight at startling
Merry. We know that hobbits are silent and stealthy and it is a delight
to see Pippin use his skills against his own cousin.
The way that things go from a happy time shared watching the fox cubs,
into dire peril at the blink of an eye, is a reminder to us that while
the Shire is a peaceful and gentle land, there are still dangers for the
very small and unwary. A fox would likely not attack a hobbit without
provocation, but I can definitely see one doing so in defence of her
cubs, and she would be a formidable foe to these youngsters.
I loved Merrys quick defence of Pippin, then Pippin of Merry despite
his great fear., and I have no doubt that Merry would have thrust his
arm in front of Pippin to willingly take the next attack. Then once
again Pippin comes to his rescuers rescue.
I really liked when Pippin was helping Merry [foot by foot] and the
backstory that was mentioned. The memory that Pippin has of Merry
[holding him by both hands and helping him to take a few small steps]
when he is a toddler is so very sweet. Pippin determinedly managing to
get unconscious Merry to the Hall is a glimpse of the resolute and
faithful young hobbit that will later go on the Quest.
The analogy that the fox and the lads both reacted on instinct, only
trying to protect the ones that they loved, was wonderful.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Stars Will Light Your Way · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races:
Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 705
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 19:31:06
I love this story, set in the authors Stars universe, in which
Gandalf has given Pippin two stars of his very own. And I love Cormallen
fics, so this story makes me doubly happy.
The idea that the Eagles would bear the gravely wounded to Ithilien is a
very logical one. And Gandalf is right; very Tookish Pippin would have
enjoyed the trip had he been awake. Even though he is not, in his
unconscious state he still has the sensations of flight, though he does
not know that is what is happening, and I thought this was very well
described. Gandalfs idea to send the stars to lead Pippins wandering
spirit back is just wonderful, and I love how they dance out of reach,
compelling him to follow.
Gandalfs interaction with both Merry and Pippin is perfect, and the
love and affection that the wizard bears for these hobbits is evident in
his care of them, whether he is gentle, brusque, or teasing. The rest of
the Fellowship too clearly love their hobbits. The healing and comfort
is well done, and it is not just Pippin that needs help, for Merry is
still suffering from the effects of the Shadow, worsened by the
emotional strain he has been bearing. Pippin has an inspired thought,
and with Gandalfs help Pippins stars come to Merrys aid.
The last part, with Gandalf telling Pippin that his stars will always be
there for him was lovely. A thoroughly enjoyable story!
-----------------------------------
Title: Great Auntie Pringle Took · Author: Cathleen · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 994
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 19:45:23
Great Auntie Pringle is one of the most original OC's I have seen! She
is wonderfully Tookish and eccentric and must provide a wealth of
shocked and delighted gossip for those around her.
I loved the serious side to this story as well; Pippin's uncertainty
about his Sight. And Merry's reassurance too of course!
-----------------------------------
Title: Crickhollow March 1420 · Author: Anso the Hobbit · Races:
Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 194
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 19:48:43
A very promising tale so far! Poor Merry! As always in your stories, I
am enjoying the relationship between Merry and Pippin and the rest of
the family.
-----------------------------------
Title: Bad Step · Author: Mariole · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 786
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 19:58:13
The conscientious Sam in this story is very much the Sam that
accompanied Frodo on the Quest. I really liked your portayal of both Sam
and Frodo in this story, and the descriptions and dialogue were well
written and believable. A very good read!
-----------------------------------
Title: In the Mind's Eye · Author: Garnet Took · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 144
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 20:04:43
A skilfully written story beginning with Pippin's birth and exploring
his gift of the Took sight. Very well thought out characterisations and
dialogue. One of the best fics that I have read that concerns the faerie
blood of the Tooks. I look forward to more of this!
-----------------------------------
Title: When Winter Fell · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete
· ID: 111
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 20:08:46
The dual stories here work very well together, and I like the way that
Lindelea has written Isengar. Little does Bilbo know just how much, deep
down, that they are alike.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Courtship of Peregrin Took · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres:
Romance · ID: 275
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-14 22:51:53
This is a very enjoyable story. The road to true love is never smooth,
and especially for Peregrin Took. I think I like this story because
Diamond is such a sweet but sensable person. In the end, love triumphs
over all despite the young lasses chasing him, and the gossips
nay-saying and condeceintion.
-----------------------------------
Title: The First Sip · Author: Glassadar · Races: Hobbits: Merry &
Pippin · ID: 985
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 22:57:27
Well done Glassadar! Keep writing!
-----------------------------------
Title: Psychodiagnostic Evaluation - Subject: The Lady of Rohan ·
Author: Anoriath · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 753
Reviewer: EdorasLass · 2006-10-14 23:05:49
This makes me so happy. I really like the idea of evaluating Eowyn's
mental health after she's come to the Houses of Healing - that poor
person actually performing the evaluation! Chamber pots and provocative
words thrown at him - I can't imagine that he's ever had a less
cooperative patient! (Unless he was called in to consult on Denethor or
Boromir, of course) And looking at Eowyn's family history laid out in
such a clinical manner, it's hardly surprising at all that the evaluator
came to the conclusion that [Pt exhibits symptoms consistent with the
exacerbation of a long-standing subclinical mood disorder], is it?
The interview with Faramir is priceless as well. Those two could keep a
therapist in business for years! Wonderful!
-----------------------------------
Title: Cierre, Min Heorte (Turn, My Heart) · Author: SilverMoonLady ·
Races: Hobbits: Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 108
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-14 23:11:40
There is not much known about Hobbit's, their history, and their
creation. The few titbits we do know about them, which makes it quite a
challenge to write about them. But when I read the story I was simply
stunned by the depth and beautiful prose it has. It is full of hobbit
history, and Sil portrays the events that had such impact on their
history (the plague, the founding of the Shire ect ect) with great
efficiency, but with an incredible personal touch as well. The format
feels unique to me; the poem Sil has written and has woven into this
story gives it a special vibe and frankly, would make a great poem to
stand on its own. This work within a work adds a lot to the family
history and it is amazing that it applies for every member of the Took
(and later Brandybuck) family in their own way. How do you do that Sil? Wow!
The manner how the story ánd the character evolve in Sils writing is
simply outstanding: I really do get the sense how the family tradition
is passed on. This all combined gives the story multiple layers, which
makes a re-read most certainly worth it. Everything fits and clicks; the
way in which the author brought the story full circle is just incredible
and moving. To me it feels exactly how the professor might have written
it if had the chance. My only wish is, after reading this is see the
wonderful characters a bit more in other stories since I really love
them. Well who knows!
-----------------------------------
Title: On Being the Youngest · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural:
With Hobbits · ID: 45
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-14 23:19:27
This is a type of story we see all too seldomly. One with Pippin and
Legolas enteracting as equals and friends. Pippin smart, if young, and
Legolas is not stuck up, as so many people portray him. I like that
Legolas is open to learning new thimgs and can admit to being less than
purfect. This story as a lot of good things going for it.
-----------------------------------
Title: At Crickhollow · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Merry & Pippin ·
ID: 896
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 23:20:20
This is an outstanding story. I loved the characterisations of Merry and
Pippin, their thoughts and fears about the Quest, and loss, and Frodo.
And each other. Beautifully told, one of Danas best.
-----------------------------------
Title: An Empty Saddle to Fill · Author: Anoriath · Races: Men: Vignette
· ID: 752
Reviewer: EdorasLass · 2006-10-14 23:24:32
Such a lovely peek into Theodred's mind. He sounds confident, regal, and
proud(as he should), yet his affection for and protectiveness of Eowyn
is obvious. I like very much that he's taught her how to handle a blade,
and that he takes a kind of pleasure in the fact that she's bested him
on this occasion.
I'm also a big fan of any time Theodred or Eomer take a moment to
consciously realize how frustrating it must be for Eowyn to be left
behind while they go ride off to protect king and country.
I really like how the nicely familial feel to the scene instantly turns
into something far more menacing when Grima appears. Now Theodred
bristles with anger, and the tension of both he and his cousin is nearly
palpable. There's the hint that they might both shatter at any moment,
and Theodred's protectiveness and anger are wonderfully in character.
Very nicely done, and a great look at the relationship between Theodred
and Eowyn.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Beauty of Memory · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 652
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-14 23:40:35
This is a lovely story, bittersweet, but mainly sweet. One of the first
steps to healing after losing someone dear is beginning to talk about
them and their life. Aragorn truly is a wise healer here.
Pippin loved Boromir dearly, and it shows. Faramir is wise to see the
mannerisms Pippin has picked up from Boromis as signs of admiration and
love. He is also wise in seeing that, while his brother is gone, a part
of him still lives on in Pippin, himself and others that Boromir's life
touched.
-----------------------------------
Title: All for the Best · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Merry & Pippin
· ID: 572
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 23:40:41
My favourite part of this was that Merry had known that the Shadow would
fall on him again. I am so glad that the two of them are there for each
other.
-----------------------------------
Title: Heirlooms · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 72
Reviewer: EdorasLass · 2006-10-14 23:53:39
The parallels here are wonderful: Theodred and Boromir, Eomer and
Faramir, Eowyn and Lothiriel, all connected by something as simple as a
child's stuffed pony. I really like how both of the ponies came to a
younger family member as a means of comfort for both Faramir and Eowyn
when they were suffering the grief of having their whole world turned
upside down by the loss of a mother.
This paints a lovely picture of two young families who have been through
all sorts of hardship and sorrow, yet have now found some peace, and are
ready to begin the next part of their lives, even while holding dear the
good memories of the past. And it's a lovely way to connect the boys to
the uncles that they'll never be able to meet. I think that both
Theodred and Boromir would be pleased to find out what has become of the
ponies, as would Morwen.
-----------------------------------
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 299
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 10:41:25
Boromir will never be forgotten. I loved Merry straightening Pippin's
collar and telling him he was proud of him.
-----------------------------------
Title: Web of Friendship · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 932
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 10:46:29
Much more fun than talking about boys! I am glad that Elanor found a way
to feel more at ease with the others.
-----------------------------------
Title: At Last · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 238
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 11:19:22
These are wonderful. I like the first one for its simplicity Merry is
so matter-of-fact here, so quietly calm despite his fear for Pippin. His
observation that Gandalf might have taken him as well had there been
more time is really thought provoking there are so many possibilities
and plot twists brought to my mind by that simple suggestion. I like the
way that Éowyn as Dernhelm listens so attentively, though not daring to
speak and reveal herself.
The use of the Took sight in the second one is excellent I like that
Pippin has something to hope for, that Merry will be back with him soon.
Gandalf speaks one of the best lines *ever* in this part: [Merry has a
big heart, and most of it belongs to you.] That observation just seems
to sum up so many things about Merry and Pippin. Pippin and Gandalf are
so comfortable together here, it is very evident that they are extremely
fond of each other.
My favourite part of the third one was that Merry felt hope when
confronted with the battle on the Pelennor, and not despair. He was
returning to Pippins side, and the battle was something to deal with so
that he could get there. Pippin needed Merry by his side to keep him
safe and that was Merrys concern.
Pippins determination to stand by Gandalf was my favourite part of the
final one: [Remembering Moria he withdrew his sword with a shaky hand.
Gandalf would not stand alone.] I cant but help add this time to that
line! Pippin, along with any other member of the Fellowship, would have
been right there with Gandalf on the Bridge in Moria if given the
chance, despite their fear. I liked the sudden reminder of home with the
cocks cry, even in that dreadful moment. And at the end when Pippin
realises that [Rohan had come at last.] I know that he is thinking of
being reunited with Merry.
-----------------------------------
Title: On the Anduin · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 619
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 17:35:17
I like best the way that Pippin is written, frightened but determined to
do what he can.
-----------------------------------
Title: Safe and Sound · Author: Anso the Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 664
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 17:46:30
I really like the way that Gimli is written in this story. He is a dwarf
through and through, but one that has been tempered by his long journey
with young hobbits. The mention that on their travels [He could remember
several occasions where a small body - usually Pippin followed by Merry
- would snuggle up beside him for warmth] and that Gimli had taken
notice of Merrys sleeping habits [The little head was almost buried
beneath the blanket as was Merrys wont] shows the deep friendship
existing between them.
-----------------------------------
Title: Consequences of a Fall · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 221
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 17:53:58
Hyacinth is shockingly evil. Thank goodness that in hobbit society such
individuals as these are extremely rare! Her thought that [mere sunburn
would not be fatal] is thoroughly malicious and reveals her complete
lack of empathy, seeing Pippin only as an obstacle to her own desires.
-----------------------------------
Title: Fields of Gold · Author: Anso the Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 966
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 18:01:16
My favourite aspect of this story is the care shown to Merry by his
Tookish relations. He is so obviously a beloved member of their little
family, and Eglantine and Paladin are as loving and caring to him as if
he were their own child. The love that Pippin has for Merry really
shines through here, and it is so sweet to see the little lad devotedly
caring for his older cousin.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Path · Author: AngieT · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 638
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 18:07:15
This story is wonderfully creepy! I like the way that it starts out as
if Merry has indeed simply found shelter from the weather, then
gradually things begin to indicate that all is not as they seem. The
ending, when Merry finds out just who Bella was, and learns her sad and
frightening fate, gave me shivers.
Whatever magick caused Merry to be in that place, at that time, I am so
relieved that it let him out again!
-----------------------------------
Title: Instinct · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort
· ID: 965
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 18:35:16
This is an exciting hurt/comfort tale. I like very much how Merry, upon
regaining consciousness, thinks first of Pippin and whether or not he is
safe, and then Pippins profound relief upon at last finding Merry awake
and aware.
The story of how Merry became injured is the exciting bit. It starts out
lightheartedly and I enjoyed reading about Pippins delight at startling
Merry. We know that hobbits are silent and stealthy and it is a delight
to see Pippin use his skills against his own cousin.
The way that things go from a happy time shared watching the fox cubs,
into dire peril at the blink of an eye, is a reminder to us that while
the Shire is a peaceful and gentle land, there are still dangers for the
very small and unwary. A fox would likely not attack a hobbit without
provocation, but I can definitely see one doing so in defence of her
cubs, and she would be a formidable foe to these youngsters.
I loved Merrys quick defence of Pippin, then Pippin of Merry despite
his great fear., and I have no doubt that Merry would have thrust his
arm in front of Pippin to willingly take the next attack. Then once
again Pippin comes to his rescuers rescue.
I really liked when Pippin was helping Merry [foot by foot] and the
backstory that was mentioned. The memory that Pippin has of Merry
[holding him by both hands and helping him to take a few small steps]
when he is a toddler is so very sweet. Pippin determinedly managing to
get unconscious Merry to the Hall is a glimpse of the resolute and
faithful young hobbit that will later go on the Quest.
The analogy that the fox and the lads both reacted on instinct, only
trying to protect the ones that they loved, was wonderful.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Stars Will Light Your Way · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races:
Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 705
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 19:31:06
I love this story, set in the authors Stars universe, in which
Gandalf has given Pippin two stars of his very own. And I love Cormallen
fics, so this story makes me doubly happy.
The idea that the Eagles would bear the gravely wounded to Ithilien is a
very logical one. And Gandalf is right; very Tookish Pippin would have
enjoyed the trip had he been awake. Even though he is not, in his
unconscious state he still has the sensations of flight, though he does
not know that is what is happening, and I thought this was very well
described. Gandalfs idea to send the stars to lead Pippins wandering
spirit back is just wonderful, and I love how they dance out of reach,
compelling him to follow.
Gandalfs interaction with both Merry and Pippin is perfect, and the
love and affection that the wizard bears for these hobbits is evident in
his care of them, whether he is gentle, brusque, or teasing. The rest of
the Fellowship too clearly love their hobbits. The healing and comfort
is well done, and it is not just Pippin that needs help, for Merry is
still suffering from the effects of the Shadow, worsened by the
emotional strain he has been bearing. Pippin has an inspired thought,
and with Gandalfs help Pippins stars come to Merrys aid.
The last part, with Gandalf telling Pippin that his stars will always be
there for him was lovely. A thoroughly enjoyable story!
-----------------------------------
Title: Great Auntie Pringle Took · Author: Cathleen · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 994
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 19:45:23
Great Auntie Pringle is one of the most original OC's I have seen! She
is wonderfully Tookish and eccentric and must provide a wealth of
shocked and delighted gossip for those around her.
I loved the serious side to this story as well; Pippin's uncertainty
about his Sight. And Merry's reassurance too of course!
-----------------------------------
Title: Crickhollow March 1420 · Author: Anso the Hobbit · Races:
Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 194
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 19:48:43
A very promising tale so far! Poor Merry! As always in your stories, I
am enjoying the relationship between Merry and Pippin and the rest of
the family.
-----------------------------------
Title: Bad Step · Author: Mariole · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 786
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 19:58:13
The conscientious Sam in this story is very much the Sam that
accompanied Frodo on the Quest. I really liked your portayal of both Sam
and Frodo in this story, and the descriptions and dialogue were well
written and believable. A very good read!
-----------------------------------
Title: In the Mind's Eye · Author: Garnet Took · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 144
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 20:04:43
A skilfully written story beginning with Pippin's birth and exploring
his gift of the Took sight. Very well thought out characterisations and
dialogue. One of the best fics that I have read that concerns the faerie
blood of the Tooks. I look forward to more of this!
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Title: When Winter Fell · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete
· ID: 111
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 20:08:46
The dual stories here work very well together, and I like the way that
Lindelea has written Isengar. Little does Bilbo know just how much, deep
down, that they are alike.
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Title: The Courtship of Peregrin Took · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres:
Romance · ID: 275
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-14 22:51:53
This is a very enjoyable story. The road to true love is never smooth,
and especially for Peregrin Took. I think I like this story because
Diamond is such a sweet but sensable person. In the end, love triumphs
over all despite the young lasses chasing him, and the gossips
nay-saying and condeceintion.
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Title: The First Sip · Author: Glassadar · Races: Hobbits: Merry &
Pippin · ID: 985
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 22:57:27
Well done Glassadar! Keep writing!
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Title: Psychodiagnostic Evaluation - Subject: The Lady of Rohan ·
Author: Anoriath · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 753
Reviewer: EdorasLass · 2006-10-14 23:05:49
This makes me so happy. I really like the idea of evaluating Eowyn's
mental health after she's come to the Houses of Healing - that poor
person actually performing the evaluation! Chamber pots and provocative
words thrown at him - I can't imagine that he's ever had a less
cooperative patient! (Unless he was called in to consult on Denethor or
Boromir, of course) And looking at Eowyn's family history laid out in
such a clinical manner, it's hardly surprising at all that the evaluator
came to the conclusion that [Pt exhibits symptoms consistent with the
exacerbation of a long-standing subclinical mood disorder], is it?
The interview with Faramir is priceless as well. Those two could keep a
therapist in business for years! Wonderful!
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Title: Cierre, Min Heorte (Turn, My Heart) · Author: SilverMoonLady ·
Races: Hobbits: Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 108
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-10-14 23:11:40
There is not much known about Hobbit's, their history, and their
creation. The few titbits we do know about them, which makes it quite a
challenge to write about them. But when I read the story I was simply
stunned by the depth and beautiful prose it has. It is full of hobbit
history, and Sil portrays the events that had such impact on their
history (the plague, the founding of the Shire ect ect) with great
efficiency, but with an incredible personal touch as well. The format
feels unique to me; the poem Sil has written and has woven into this
story gives it a special vibe and frankly, would make a great poem to
stand on its own. This work within a work adds a lot to the family
history and it is amazing that it applies for every member of the Took
(and later Brandybuck) family in their own way. How do you do that Sil? Wow!
The manner how the story ánd the character evolve in Sils writing is
simply outstanding: I really do get the sense how the family tradition
is passed on. This all combined gives the story multiple layers, which
makes a re-read most certainly worth it. Everything fits and clicks; the
way in which the author brought the story full circle is just incredible
and moving. To me it feels exactly how the professor might have written
it if had the chance. My only wish is, after reading this is see the
wonderful characters a bit more in other stories since I really love
them. Well who knows!
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Title: On Being the Youngest · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural:
With Hobbits · ID: 45
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-14 23:19:27
This is a type of story we see all too seldomly. One with Pippin and
Legolas enteracting as equals and friends. Pippin smart, if young, and
Legolas is not stuck up, as so many people portray him. I like that
Legolas is open to learning new thimgs and can admit to being less than
purfect. This story as a lot of good things going for it.
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Title: At Crickhollow · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Merry & Pippin ·
ID: 896
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 23:20:20
This is an outstanding story. I loved the characterisations of Merry and
Pippin, their thoughts and fears about the Quest, and loss, and Frodo.
And each other. Beautifully told, one of Danas best.
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Title: An Empty Saddle to Fill · Author: Anoriath · Races: Men: Vignette
· ID: 752
Reviewer: EdorasLass · 2006-10-14 23:24:32
Such a lovely peek into Theodred's mind. He sounds confident, regal, and
proud(as he should), yet his affection for and protectiveness of Eowyn
is obvious. I like very much that he's taught her how to handle a blade,
and that he takes a kind of pleasure in the fact that she's bested him
on this occasion.
I'm also a big fan of any time Theodred or Eomer take a moment to
consciously realize how frustrating it must be for Eowyn to be left
behind while they go ride off to protect king and country.
I really like how the nicely familial feel to the scene instantly turns
into something far more menacing when Grima appears. Now Theodred
bristles with anger, and the tension of both he and his cousin is nearly
palpable. There's the hint that they might both shatter at any moment,
and Theodred's protectiveness and anger are wonderfully in character.
Very nicely done, and a great look at the relationship between Theodred
and Eowyn.
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Title: The Beauty of Memory · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 652
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2006-10-14 23:40:35
This is a lovely story, bittersweet, but mainly sweet. One of the first
steps to healing after losing someone dear is beginning to talk about
them and their life. Aragorn truly is a wise healer here.
Pippin loved Boromir dearly, and it shows. Faramir is wise to see the
mannerisms Pippin has picked up from Boromis as signs of admiration and
love. He is also wise in seeing that, while his brother is gone, a part
of him still lives on in Pippin, himself and others that Boromir's life
touched.
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Title: All for the Best · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits: Merry & Pippin
· ID: 572
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-10-14 23:40:41
My favourite part of this was that Merry had known that the Shadow would
fall on him again. I am so glad that the two of them are there for each
other.
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Title: Heirlooms · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 72
Reviewer: EdorasLass · 2006-10-14 23:53:39
The parallels here are wonderful: Theodred and Boromir, Eomer and
Faramir, Eowyn and Lothiriel, all connected by something as simple as a
child's stuffed pony. I really like how both of the ponies came to a
younger family member as a means of comfort for both Faramir and Eowyn
when they were suffering the grief of having their whole world turned
upside down by the loss of a mother.
This paints a lovely picture of two young families who have been through
all sorts of hardship and sorrow, yet have now found some peace, and are
ready to begin the next part of their lives, even while holding dear the
good memories of the past. And it's a lovely way to connect the boys to
the uncles that they'll never be able to meet. I think that both
Theodred and Boromir would be pleased to find out what has become of the
ponies, as would Morwen.
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Msg# 7545
Book Learning complete Posted by Jane O. Abbott November 02, 2006 - 21:23:08 Topic ID# 7530Hi, Marta!
*waves*
My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is currently in
Romance: Incomplete.
Thanks!
Branwyn
*waves*
My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is currently in
Romance: Incomplete.
Thanks!
Branwyn
Msg# 7546
Re: Book Learning complete Posted by Marta Layton November 02, 2006 - 22:03:56 Topic ID# 7530> -----Original Message-----Congratulations!
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Jane O. Abbott
> Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:22 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
>
> Hi, Marta!
> *waves*
> My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is currently in
> Romance: Incomplete.
> Thanks!
> Branwyn
>
I will need to put it in a sub-category with completed stories. Do you have
a preference? The available sub-categories are:
Romance: General
Romance: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Incomplete
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Poetry
Romance: Rohan
Of those, Fixed-Length Ficlets, Incomplete, and Poetry are obviously wrong
because your story isn't any of those. That leaves
Romance: General
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Rohan
It's Faramir/Eowyn so doesn't really fit in Lothiriel & Eomer. And IIRC it's
set in Minas Tirith. So how do you feel about putting it in Romance: Gondor?
Let me know if that sounds good and I'll put it there.
Marta
Msg# 7547
Re: Book Learning complete Posted by Jane O. Abbott November 02, 2006 - 22:19:48 Topic ID# 7530Hello,
Romance: Gondor works for me.
Thanks!
Branwyn
_____
From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf
Of Marta Layton
Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:51 PM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
I will need to put it in a sub-category with completed stories. Do you have
a preference? The available sub-categories are:
Romance: General
Romance: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Incomplete
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Poetry
Romance: Rohan
Of those, Fixed-Length Ficlets, Incomplete, and Poetry are obviously wrong
because your story isn't any of those. That leaves
Romance: General
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Rohan
It's Faramir/Eowyn so doesn't really fit in Lothiriel & Eomer. And IIRC it's
set in Minas Tirith. So how do you feel about putting it in Romance: Gondor?
Let me know if that sounds good and I'll put it there.
Marta
[Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
Romance: Gondor works for me.
Thanks!
Branwyn
_____
From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf
Of Marta Layton
Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:51 PM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
> -----Original Message-----On Behalf Of Jane O. Abbott
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogrou <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ps.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogrou <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ps.com]
> Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:22 PMCongratulations!
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogrou <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ps.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
>
> Hi, Marta!
> *waves*
> My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is currently in
> Romance: Incomplete.
> Thanks!
> Branwyn
>
I will need to put it in a sub-category with completed stories. Do you have
a preference? The available sub-categories are:
Romance: General
Romance: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Incomplete
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Poetry
Romance: Rohan
Of those, Fixed-Length Ficlets, Incomplete, and Poetry are obviously wrong
because your story isn't any of those. That leaves
Romance: General
Romance: Gondor
Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
Romance: Rohan
It's Faramir/Eowyn so doesn't really fit in Lothiriel & Eomer. And IIRC it's
set in Minas Tirith. So how do you feel about putting it in Romance: Gondor?
Let me know if that sounds good and I'll put it there.
Marta
[Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
Msg# 7548
Re: Book Learning complete Posted by Marta Layton November 02, 2006 - 23:02:23 Topic ID# 7530Hi Branwyn,
Thanks for the quick reply - I've moved it for you.
Marta
Thanks for the quick reply - I've moved it for you.
Marta
> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Jane O. Abbott
> Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 11:09 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
>
> Hello,
>
> Romance: Gondor works for me.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Branwyn
>
> _____
>
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com>
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ] On Behalf Of Marta Layton
> Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:51 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com>
> Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: MEFAwards@yahoogrou
> <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ps.com
> > [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogrou <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com>
> > ps.com]
> On Behalf Of Jane O. Abbott
> > Sent: Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:22 PM
> > To: MEFAwards@yahoogrou <mailto:MEFAwards%40yahoogroups.com> ps.com
> > Subject: [MEFAwards] Book Learning complete
> >
> > Hi, Marta!
> > *waves*
> > My story "Book Learning" is now (finally) complete. It is
> currently in
> > Romance: Incomplete.
> > Thanks!
> > Branwyn
> >
>
> Congratulations!
>
> I will need to put it in a sub-category with completed
> stories. Do you have a preference? The available sub-categories are:
>
> Romance: General
> Romance: Fixed-Length Ficlet
> Romance: Gondor
> Romance: Incomplete
> Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
> Romance: Poetry
> Romance: Rohan
>
> Of those, Fixed-Length Ficlets, Incomplete, and Poetry are
> obviously wrong because your story isn't any of those. That leaves
>
> Romance: General
> Romance: Gondor
> Romance: Lothiriel & Eomer
> Romance: Rohan
>
> It's Faramir/Eowyn so doesn't really fit in Lothiriel &
> Eomer. And IIRC it's set in Minas Tirith. So how do you feel
> about putting it in Romance: Gondor?
> Let me know if that sounds good and I'll put it there.
>
> Marta
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>
>
>
>
>
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