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Hor2: Coavalta by Zimraphel
URL:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1491150/1/
Arrrggh, this is just so incredibly chilling, Zimraphel! "Come closer!"
*Shudder* The voice seems so distant, disembodied (er, I meant that in an
abstract wayý LOL!), distracted, forgetful of even the simplest pleasure in
life and living; but at the same time, sharp and intelligent -- the being
remembers about mortals, remembers that he doesn't like them very much, that
they are frail, that they don't hear the voice of Mandos; remembers his
prejudices quite well, I would say. I thought it was especially interesting
that the being doesn't remember how he was killed or why he didn't respond
to Mandos' summons -- we living folk consider those events to be rather
important, as it were! But you really conveyed well how "other-worldly"
this being is, how very different from us. And how sinister it has become
after the long eons of waiting. Like I said before, **shudder**!
Hor6: The Lure of the Darkness by Ainaechoiriel
URL:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1489653/1/
So scary, Ainaechoiriel! The spider is so very seductive, and the elfling
so very vulnerableý Your details about the way that spiders feed are
extremely creepy and unfortunately, far too accurate -- and horrifyingly
graphic. The trees being so involved in the darkness that they taunt the
Elves is a nasty touch, as is the fact that the loss of the child reminds
Legolas of his mother (with the kicker being that trees saved him!). (BTW,
"desert" s/b "dessert")
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