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Msg# 5136
Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 50 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:00:12 Topic ID# 5136Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2863> Falling
Out of Love · Author:
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5> Marnie · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID:
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Legolas regretting it, even for a moment. I think Celeborn was really wise
in telling Legolas to go before he started to fade, that would cause
Thranduil more pain than him leaving, I'm sure.
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2807&cid=10858>
Winter Encounters · Author:
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friends, since their sons were destined to be the same. I loved the line
from the letter about Legolas trying to get back home with as much of his
blood as possible (or at least that's close...) Well done.
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3240> Time's
Turnings · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> daw the minstrel · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=156> 156
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the spice shop to search...
"He hated the idea of leaving the young fool on his own to do anything that
popped into his head, but he solaced himself by vowing that he would beat
the snot out of Legolas if he violated orders."
As an ex-manager, and a present aunt, I can tell you, I have lived those
very moments myself. (And though our missions were not as dangerous, some
were covert!)
I also love the quieter moments between Sinnarn and Ithilden. It must drive
them both a little crazy to be on opposite ends of the duty vs personal
freedom line sometimes...
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2878> Partings
· Author:
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1> Bodkin · Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien · ID:
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bittersweet, because there would be reunions later on. The last little bit
killed me though, where Celeborn says the part about the Age of
Men....*sniffs*
Title:
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/KharessaBloodrose/Stability.htm>
Stability · Author:
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community leaving Haldir to work, and raise both brothers. I guess maybe
that's because I can see it happening in our mean little men's world, so I'd
like to see that the elves are better than us!
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2268> Far
Horizons · Author:
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1> Bodkin · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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for me at the beginning, but then the action starting getting a bit faster.
I have to admit that all the names and how they were connected was a bit
confusing, maybe a sort of key/legend would be good at the end of the whole
story, something to refer to. Overall, it was a very good mystery, action
story. Very enjoyable read.
Oh, and as soon as the strange elves in the wood mentioned a 'Lady' I just
*knew* it had to be the person it turned out to be :) And I'm glad I'm not
the only one with a thing for happy endings! Perfect!
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1252> Grey and
Pale Gold · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> Kielle · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=54> 54
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written a back story to this one? You know, maybe to discuss why Theoden
said he liked Eomund, at least when they were younger? Made me wonder if he
disliked him later, and if so, why...
Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2953>
Sapphire Aurae · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> Bejai · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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had for each other. And this is a great story showing how the rings worked.
I read it from ff.net, and there were a lot of formatting and typo errors,
it looked like. A few minor grammar things too. (Like no punctuation at the
end of a line of dialogue). Aside from those things being mildly
distracting, it is still a wonderful story--I've read it before, and was
looking forward to reading it again, and my expectations were met. And I
love the bittersweet ending, but I'm a mush at heart :)
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3077> The
King's Commission · Author:
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2> Larner · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:12:19 Score: 10
This is a wonderfully long story, well worth every minute of reading time. I
was very quickly caught up in the point of view of the main character,
Ruvemir, a sculptor who was commissioned by the King to make a memorial for
the four hobbits, especially for Frodo, who has already left for the West.
We see Ruvemir's quest to understand hobbits in general, and Frodo in
particular. There are several appearances of every remaining member of the
Fellowship, as he talks to them to get an idea of what he is working
towards. And there is also a visit to the Shire, where he gets a chance to
speak to Frodo's family and friends in person. I thoroughly enjoyed that
part of the story. And once the actual work on the statues begins, we have
even more going on. In addition to the underlying character study of Frodo,
which is the main part of the story and the underlying theme of it all,
there is also a character study of Aragorn, as well as some humor, some
hurt/comfort, some exciting adventure, some suspenseful intrigue, and some
sweet romance. There is a bit of darkness as well, but handled with
sensitivity and subtlety. The original character, Ruvemir, is wonderfully
realized, and by the end of the story, he seems like more of a canon
character than an original character, so thoroughly has he captured the
interest. It's a brilliant story!
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3480> Reunion
in Minas Tirith · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
5> Baggins Babe · Genres: Alternate Universe: Post-LOTR · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=218> 218
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:13:04 Score: 10
This is one of those very rare occurences, a happy alternate universe. In
this story, Frodo does not sail West, but chooses to remain in the Shire.
For several years, his health continues to deteriorate with each
anniversary, until he is nearly on the point of death. But a crisis, and a
miraculous intervention, enables him to finally heal of his wounds, and to
at last overcome all the guilt and psychological scars he has carried for so
long.
The story begins with a happy occasion: a visit by the Travellers to Gondor
at the invitation of the King, to celebrate the tenth anniversary of
Sauron's downfall. Frodo is among those visitors, and he is so obviously
happy and healthy that all who see him are amazed. We then see his illness
as a flashback, in a couple of very painful and angsty chapters. I like the
way the author used the flashback method, for without knowing in advance
that Frodo did indeed recover, it would be almost too painful. The author's
descriptions of his illness are harrowing. Afterwards, we are treated to a
loving and humorous account of his recovery, in the heart of his loving
family and friends, in the best comforting tradition of the hurt/comfort
genre. I truly loved this AU, and the author has made it very plausible and
appealing. A Frodo healed of his pain, grief and guilt is a marvelous thing,
and devoutly to be desired.
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=10847>
"The Story of Poor, Unfortunate, Toffin" · Author:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:20:30 Score: 9
This is one story in particular that never fails to make me laugh to the
point of hysterical tears, every single time I read it. It is very cleverly
told, a story of Merry's and Pippin's early childhood, framed within one
evening set in Minas Tirith after the Quest, as they tell it to a curious
Sam. The framing itself is cleverly and humorously done; and the
personalities of all four hobbits are also very well done. Each and every
one of them is perfectly in character. This author has a very deft way with
the relationships between them, most especially the cousins, and Merry and
Pippin in particular. This story, of an embarassing prank that a mischievous
and scheming young Merry once pulled on an unsuspecting little Pippin, and
how dear, sweet, little innocent Pippin unwittingly turns the tables on him,
is absolutely hysterical. I have no idea where she came up with the idea for
this story, but it is incredibly funny. Embarassment all around and to
spare. Yet with all of that, the story ends very tenderly and gently,
showing the love between the cousins, that not even ill-concieved pranks
could damage.
And the last sentence is a perfect punchline.
Title: <http://greywonderer.homestead.com/Hound.html> The Hound Of The
Bagginses · Author:
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=766> 766
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:22:50 Score: 10
This story, begun as an answer to a Live Journal challenge, is an amazing
piece of work. It is a crossover between the nineteenth century world of
Arthur Conan Doyle and J.R.R. Tolkien's Middle-earth. In this story, Merry
is Meriadoc Brandybuck, a sleuth after the mold of Sherlock Holmes; Pippin
is Dr. Peregrin Took, his clueless Dr. Watson. In this version of the Shire,
there is no Ring, for Bilbo refused point blank to go on the adventure with
the Dwarves, setting a whole other chain of events in motion. These hobbits
are not exactly what we are used to, and neither is the Shire; yet they do
not wholely lose their hobbitiness. The plot is convoluted and intriguing
with twists and turns at every point, and with a good deal of humorous
action. Even though it is funny, there is also a good deal of action and
suspense as well. The dialogue is absolutely delightful, and Peregrin is a
lovely character, so bumbling and prone to putting his foot in his mouth
that he drives everyone around him into a frenzy, which he does not
understand. Yet he remains brave and loyal in spite of it. I just adore him!
And Meriadoc makes a splendid Sherlock Holmes--very analytical and logical
in his deductions, and more than a little conceited. The parts that are from
his point of view are a scream. And Frodo is the potential victim of a
curse--he's not at all the Frodo we are used to. I loved this story!
Title: <http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=98>
The Prodigal Took · Author:
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2> Lulleny · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=1032> 1032
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:26:20 Score: 10
This story is seemingly so very simple on the face of it, an appealing
gapfiller, telling of how Peregrin Took came back to his home, and how he
found his family, and raised the Tooks to march back and help reclaim the
Shire. Yet there is so much more here, seen as hints, rather than being
fully stated: Pippin's strangeness to the other hobbits, coming back so
grown and grim, armed and armored; the idea that he had been declared dead
by his father; his relationship with his family, a warm one, yet there is
the hint of past trouble with his father; and the fears and sorrows of those
left behind--why could Paladin not maintain hope, when his wife and
daughters, sister and brother-in-law, could? We see Pippin facing changes
both sad--the premature aging of his parents, the death of a cousin--and
joyful--the marriage of his youngest sister and the birth of a new nephew.
And we see his own sorrows as he cannot seem to explain to his father why he
had to leave the Shire and the importance of what Frodo did, and the echoes
of Denethor and Faramir hover in the background of Pippin's heart, as he
fears for his own relationship with his father. The author has a sure grasp
of her characters' feelings and anxieties, and describes them well. This
lovely story, with its gracious author, is the one which turned me on to
writing fanfiction myself.
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3170> A
Mid-Year's Walking Trip · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
9> GamgeeFest · Races/Places: Hobbits: Children · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=1238> 1238
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:28:35 Score: 10
I really love this story, which takes place not too terribly long before the
Quest. Merry, Pippin and Sam, who were frightened by a close call Frodo had
the previous year while on a walking trip, refuse to let him out of their
sight, and he ends up taking them along to a camping trip. The story covers
a good deal of territory--not only Frodo learning that he can depend on the
younger hobbits for good company, but Merry and Sam learning that they can
be friends in spite of the differences in their social standing, as well as
Merry trying to mend a long-standing misunderstanding with Sam, and Pippin
learning that he can hold his own in an unfamiliar situation, and the
mystery of Sam's control over Pippin's appetite. It is a good rehearsal for
their later conspiracy, and there is some nice foreshadowing. The
relationships between the four hobbits are very much in character, yet more
complex than those found in many fics--there are definitely different layers
to each connection, and there is a certain amount of angst. But there is
also a lot of humor and hobbity sweetness as well. My favorite part is after
they have finally returned to Bag End, and Frodo tucks his weary cousins in
as if they were still youngsters. But the funniest part is the epilogue,
when a curious Merry and an observant Frodo finally figure out how Sam keeps
Pippin from eating Frodo out of hole and smial.
Title: <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1242159/1/> All That Was Beauitiful ·
Author:
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0> Citrine · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:47:27 Score: 3
An interesting foreshadowing of future developments. On the assumption that
Gríma is rather physically loathsome all his life, this does shed
interesting light on his personality, and the attraction Éowyn held for him
once. Well-written, and yes, just a touch creepy.
Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3539>
Rekindled · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> Kielle · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=1089> 1089
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:50:11 Score: 4
Sorry, Kielle, I'm using an old review once more. Fréalaf and Hanild finding
continuity amidst the wreckage in the preservation of the hearth fires was
very nicely done. They are both people who've endured a lot but are
determined to start anew, yet without losing their ties to the past,
represented in the hearthfire that has been carefully preserved throughout
their exile.
Title: <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/toshieldashieldmaide.htm> To Shield a
Shield-maiden · Author:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:51:20 Score: 4
"[Gríma] would have her, replace the one warrior’s death with a thousand
little ones." Great double entendre, and wholly suited to both its senses,
given what Gríma desires. And poor Théodred, unable to strike and so remove
the traitor at the court, because Gríma is too entwined there to be easily
removed in that manner. And so he's forced to hold back, for the sake of
others, and trust that Éowyn will be able to hold her own.
Title: <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/callonthewind.htm> Call on the Wind ·
Author:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:07:58 Score: 3
I think those last lines make the drabble. Studs Terkel's phrase, "hope dies
last", comes to mind, and even though we know that Boromir is dying and will
not return, it is in its way true that hope has not entirely died and will
resurface in other men when one light goes out.
Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/318.html#cutid1> Marked
· Author:
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5> simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:08:31 Score: 2
What I said about there being a third party to any intrigue, and how this is
usually Éowyn in Rohan? Well, there we go! This one is a bit more uplifting
at the end, I suppose, insofar as she finds something to cling to in the
darkness.
Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/1131.html#cutid1>
Bystander · Author:
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5> simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:08:58 Score: 4
There is always that third party who sees a little too much of other
people's secrets. Usually, this would be Éowyn in Rohan, but here we have
Elfhelm taking that part, the uninvited witness to Boromir and Théodred's
feelings for each other. He may think there is no one to mourn for him
should he die in war, and that therefore, he is safe in some sense, but I
think he will find eventually that he is mistaken.
Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/6882.html#cutid1>
Triptych · Author:
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5> simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:09:27 Score: 3
Aha, a Théodred/Boromir ficlet! They do seem to attract each other, and
certainly the fact that both of them are doomed makes them in one way suited
to each other. I like the sense of rush and knowledge that these brief
moments are all that can be between them, before they part to their separate
deaths.
Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3460> The
Clasp Undone · Author:
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9> DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=691> 691
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:10:23 Score: 6
This is probably the most complete filling of this particular gap that I've
read, and the confrontation that sent Éomer to the dungeons in the first
place is believably crafted. All the missing pieces are made to fit, and fit
very well together. The discussion between Éomer and Éowyn in the dungeons
is really the heart of the story, and it is a hard, painful discussion that
shows up just how desperate they were, and how determined. Éomer's little
ploy in wounding himself was very well-handled and gives him the kind of
cunning suited to someone who is not first a politician, but who for all
that is hardly stupid, and certainly isn't afraid to give a little (or even
all) of his blood to Rohan. A very satisfying story, and one that
Rohirrim-lovers will want to read.
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Night and Fog · Author:
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7> Azalais · Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:10:52 Score: 6
This is a great story to read late at night, preferably in October. The idea
of watching the Ringwraiths clothe themselves and acquire form, where before
there had been nothing, takes you back to the days of watching the closet
door for the monsters that would surely emerge from their invisibility once
the lights had been out long enough. The description of all the animals
fleeing for their lives, as if before a great fire, is very evocative; I've
heard that sort of story recounted before by my mother, who actually saw it
as one of the evacuees, and the image of the animals fleeing and sometimes
burning as they ran left a great impression on me that is brought back to
life, if in a more chill way, by this story.
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:11:26 Score: 6
Éomer shows himself wiser than his years in this story, and brings an
unusual sort of comfort to a disappointed boy. The point at which Éomer
demands to know why Ingild came to see him, getting around Ingild's rather
evasive answer and straight to the heart of the matter, is well played. I
like the idea that Éomer has suspected the answer and been dreading it, as
if he, too, perhaps had an unrealistic expectation of a boy Ingild's age—as
if Ingild reminds him a bit too much of himself, which Tiana also suggests.
If this is so, then Éomer shows too that he has come to terms with his
younger self quite nicely: he isn't harsh, he spares Ingild his dignity, but
his honesty leaves no room for the abstract and unreal heroism of the old
tales.
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:11:58 Score: 9
"She is a woman, and men’s codes of honor and duty make no place for us. If
a woman is to accomplish anything at all, it must be through guile and
sometimes a...certain lack of scruples. The rules are not made for women,
nor, I think, are women for the rules."
Salsify goes to the heart of the matter, and points out what is obvious to
anyone who has taken a look at power structures in just about any age. There
will always be some who are excluded from them, and expected to be grateful
or at least dutiful. And since that combination is antithetical to
everything human, it's inevitable that those in that position will either
self-destruct in various ways or learn to circumvent the rules in order not
to break with something greater than faith in someone else's law. The
deviousness of it is disgusting, but such are the choices laid out for
someone like Éowyn, who, as a woman, is not permitted to follow the codes
she was brought up to respect in men. That double standard is shown in this
fic in all its galling 'glory', and it's evident what must come of it, given
who and what Éowyn is. The fact that Gríma finds that double-standard useful
should be a clear hint that it is not of the light in this case. Bravo,
Salsify, for showing us the social context of Éowyn's choice and bringing
out just how untenable her position really was.
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5> Marnie · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:51:42 Score: 3How bittersweet. Celeborn trying to find out how to get the sea-longing,
Legolas regretting it, even for a moment. I think Celeborn was really wise
in telling Legolas to go before he started to fade, that would cause
Thranduil more pain than him leaving, I'm sure.
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Winter Encounters · Author:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:51:51 Score: 3I have to admit, I am glad that Thranduil and Gloin turned out to be
friends, since their sons were destined to be the same. I loved the line
from the letter about Legolas trying to get back home with as much of his
blood as possible (or at least that's close...) Well done.
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3240> Time's
Turnings · Author:
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6> daw the minstrel · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:52:06 Score: 6I laughed so hard every time I read the line right before Beliond goes into
the spice shop to search...
"He hated the idea of leaving the young fool on his own to do anything that
popped into his head, but he solaced himself by vowing that he would beat
the snot out of Legolas if he violated orders."
As an ex-manager, and a present aunt, I can tell you, I have lived those
very moments myself. (And though our missions were not as dangerous, some
were covert!)
I also love the quieter moments between Sinnarn and Ithilden. It must drive
them both a little crazy to be on opposite ends of the duty vs personal
freedom line sometimes...
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2878> Partings
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1> Bodkin · Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:52:21 Score: 2I knew this story would be sad, but I thought maybe it would be more
bittersweet, because there would be reunions later on. The last little bit
killed me though, where Celeborn says the part about the Age of
Men....*sniffs*
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Stability · Author:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:52:31 Score: 3In my own idealized view of Elven society, I just can't imagine the whole
community leaving Haldir to work, and raise both brothers. I guess maybe
that's because I can see it happening in our mean little men's world, so I'd
like to see that the elves are better than us!
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Horizons · Author:
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1> Bodkin · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 12:31:00 Score: 5I pretty much sat down and read this in one sitting. It moved a bit slowly
for me at the beginning, but then the action starting getting a bit faster.
I have to admit that all the names and how they were connected was a bit
confusing, maybe a sort of key/legend would be good at the end of the whole
story, something to refer to. Overall, it was a very good mystery, action
story. Very enjoyable read.
Oh, and as soon as the strange elves in the wood mentioned a 'Lady' I just
*knew* it had to be the person it turned out to be :) And I'm glad I'm not
the only one with a thing for happy endings! Perfect!
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Pale Gold · Author:
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7> Kielle · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 12:40:05 Score: 3You captured Eomer like I always saw him as a child. I don't suppose you've
written a back story to this one? You know, maybe to discuss why Theoden
said he liked Eomund, at least when they were younger? Made me wonder if he
disliked him later, and if so, why...
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Sapphire Aurae · Author:
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6> Bejai · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 12:41:11 Score: 5I do like a story that shows the great love Elrond and Celebrian must have
had for each other. And this is a great story showing how the rings worked.
I read it from ff.net, and there were a lot of formatting and typo errors,
it looked like. A few minor grammar things too. (Like no punctuation at the
end of a line of dialogue). Aside from those things being mildly
distracting, it is still a wonderful story--I've read it before, and was
looking forward to reading it again, and my expectations were met. And I
love the bittersweet ending, but I'm a mush at heart :)
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3077> The
King's Commission · Author:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:12:19 Score: 10
This is a wonderfully long story, well worth every minute of reading time. I
was very quickly caught up in the point of view of the main character,
Ruvemir, a sculptor who was commissioned by the King to make a memorial for
the four hobbits, especially for Frodo, who has already left for the West.
We see Ruvemir's quest to understand hobbits in general, and Frodo in
particular. There are several appearances of every remaining member of the
Fellowship, as he talks to them to get an idea of what he is working
towards. And there is also a visit to the Shire, where he gets a chance to
speak to Frodo's family and friends in person. I thoroughly enjoyed that
part of the story. And once the actual work on the statues begins, we have
even more going on. In addition to the underlying character study of Frodo,
which is the main part of the story and the underlying theme of it all,
there is also a character study of Aragorn, as well as some humor, some
hurt/comfort, some exciting adventure, some suspenseful intrigue, and some
sweet romance. There is a bit of darkness as well, but handled with
sensitivity and subtlety. The original character, Ruvemir, is wonderfully
realized, and by the end of the story, he seems like more of a canon
character than an original character, so thoroughly has he captured the
interest. It's a brilliant story!
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3480> Reunion
in Minas Tirith · Author:
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5> Baggins Babe · Genres: Alternate Universe: Post-LOTR · ID:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:13:04 Score: 10
This is one of those very rare occurences, a happy alternate universe. In
this story, Frodo does not sail West, but chooses to remain in the Shire.
For several years, his health continues to deteriorate with each
anniversary, until he is nearly on the point of death. But a crisis, and a
miraculous intervention, enables him to finally heal of his wounds, and to
at last overcome all the guilt and psychological scars he has carried for so
long.
The story begins with a happy occasion: a visit by the Travellers to Gondor
at the invitation of the King, to celebrate the tenth anniversary of
Sauron's downfall. Frodo is among those visitors, and he is so obviously
happy and healthy that all who see him are amazed. We then see his illness
as a flashback, in a couple of very painful and angsty chapters. I like the
way the author used the flashback method, for without knowing in advance
that Frodo did indeed recover, it would be almost too painful. The author's
descriptions of his illness are harrowing. Afterwards, we are treated to a
loving and humorous account of his recovery, in the heart of his loving
family and friends, in the best comforting tradition of the hurt/comfort
genre. I truly loved this AU, and the author has made it very plausible and
appealing. A Frodo healed of his pain, grief and guilt is a marvelous thing,
and devoutly to be desired.
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=10847>
"The Story of Poor, Unfortunate, Toffin" · Author:
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> grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor: Children · ID:<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:20:30 Score: 9
This is one story in particular that never fails to make me laugh to the
point of hysterical tears, every single time I read it. It is very cleverly
told, a story of Merry's and Pippin's early childhood, framed within one
evening set in Minas Tirith after the Quest, as they tell it to a curious
Sam. The framing itself is cleverly and humorously done; and the
personalities of all four hobbits are also very well done. Each and every
one of them is perfectly in character. This author has a very deft way with
the relationships between them, most especially the cousins, and Merry and
Pippin in particular. This story, of an embarassing prank that a mischievous
and scheming young Merry once pulled on an unsuspecting little Pippin, and
how dear, sweet, little innocent Pippin unwittingly turns the tables on him,
is absolutely hysterical. I have no idea where she came up with the idea for
this story, but it is incredibly funny. Embarassment all around and to
spare. Yet with all of that, the story ends very tenderly and gently,
showing the love between the cousins, that not even ill-concieved pranks
could damage.
And the last sentence is a perfect punchline.
Title: <http://greywonderer.homestead.com/Hound.html> The Hound Of The
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:22:50 Score: 10
This story, begun as an answer to a Live Journal challenge, is an amazing
piece of work. It is a crossover between the nineteenth century world of
Arthur Conan Doyle and J.R.R. Tolkien's Middle-earth. In this story, Merry
is Meriadoc Brandybuck, a sleuth after the mold of Sherlock Holmes; Pippin
is Dr. Peregrin Took, his clueless Dr. Watson. In this version of the Shire,
there is no Ring, for Bilbo refused point blank to go on the adventure with
the Dwarves, setting a whole other chain of events in motion. These hobbits
are not exactly what we are used to, and neither is the Shire; yet they do
not wholely lose their hobbitiness. The plot is convoluted and intriguing
with twists and turns at every point, and with a good deal of humorous
action. Even though it is funny, there is also a good deal of action and
suspense as well. The dialogue is absolutely delightful, and Peregrin is a
lovely character, so bumbling and prone to putting his foot in his mouth
that he drives everyone around him into a frenzy, which he does not
understand. Yet he remains brave and loyal in spite of it. I just adore him!
And Meriadoc makes a splendid Sherlock Holmes--very analytical and logical
in his deductions, and more than a little conceited. The parts that are from
his point of view are a scream. And Frodo is the potential victim of a
curse--he's not at all the Frodo we are used to. I loved this story!
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:26:20 Score: 10
This story is seemingly so very simple on the face of it, an appealing
gapfiller, telling of how Peregrin Took came back to his home, and how he
found his family, and raised the Tooks to march back and help reclaim the
Shire. Yet there is so much more here, seen as hints, rather than being
fully stated: Pippin's strangeness to the other hobbits, coming back so
grown and grim, armed and armored; the idea that he had been declared dead
by his father; his relationship with his family, a warm one, yet there is
the hint of past trouble with his father; and the fears and sorrows of those
left behind--why could Paladin not maintain hope, when his wife and
daughters, sister and brother-in-law, could? We see Pippin facing changes
both sad--the premature aging of his parents, the death of a cousin--and
joyful--the marriage of his youngest sister and the birth of a new nephew.
And we see his own sorrows as he cannot seem to explain to his father why he
had to leave the Shire and the importance of what Frodo did, and the echoes
of Denethor and Faramir hover in the background of Pippin's heart, as he
fears for his own relationship with his father. The author has a sure grasp
of her characters' feelings and anxieties, and describes them well. This
lovely story, with its gracious author, is the one which turned me on to
writing fanfiction myself.
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3170> A
Mid-Year's Walking Trip · Author:
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9> GamgeeFest · Races/Places: Hobbits: Children · ID:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:28:35 Score: 10
I really love this story, which takes place not too terribly long before the
Quest. Merry, Pippin and Sam, who were frightened by a close call Frodo had
the previous year while on a walking trip, refuse to let him out of their
sight, and he ends up taking them along to a camping trip. The story covers
a good deal of territory--not only Frodo learning that he can depend on the
younger hobbits for good company, but Merry and Sam learning that they can
be friends in spite of the differences in their social standing, as well as
Merry trying to mend a long-standing misunderstanding with Sam, and Pippin
learning that he can hold his own in an unfamiliar situation, and the
mystery of Sam's control over Pippin's appetite. It is a good rehearsal for
their later conspiracy, and there is some nice foreshadowing. The
relationships between the four hobbits are very much in character, yet more
complex than those found in many fics--there are definitely different layers
to each connection, and there is a certain amount of angst. But there is
also a lot of humor and hobbity sweetness as well. My favorite part is after
they have finally returned to Bag End, and Frodo tucks his weary cousins in
as if they were still youngsters. But the funniest part is the epilogue,
when a curious Merry and an observant Frodo finally figure out how Sam keeps
Pippin from eating Frodo out of hole and smial.
Title: <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1242159/1/> All That Was Beauitiful ·
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0> Citrine · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:47:27 Score: 3
An interesting foreshadowing of future developments. On the assumption that
Gríma is rather physically loathsome all his life, this does shed
interesting light on his personality, and the attraction Éowyn held for him
once. Well-written, and yes, just a touch creepy.
Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3539>
Rekindled · Author:
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7> Kielle · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:50:11 Score: 4
Sorry, Kielle, I'm using an old review once more. Fréalaf and Hanild finding
continuity amidst the wreckage in the preservation of the hearth fires was
very nicely done. They are both people who've endured a lot but are
determined to start anew, yet without losing their ties to the past,
represented in the hearthfire that has been carefully preserved throughout
their exile.
Title: <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/toshieldashieldmaide.htm> To Shield a
Shield-maiden · Author:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:51:20 Score: 4
"[Gríma] would have her, replace the one warrior’s death with a thousand
little ones." Great double entendre, and wholly suited to both its senses,
given what Gríma desires. And poor Théodred, unable to strike and so remove
the traitor at the court, because Gríma is too entwined there to be easily
removed in that manner. And so he's forced to hold back, for the sake of
others, and trust that Éowyn will be able to hold her own.
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:07:58 Score: 3
I think those last lines make the drabble. Studs Terkel's phrase, "hope dies
last", comes to mind, and even though we know that Boromir is dying and will
not return, it is in its way true that hope has not entirely died and will
resurface in other men when one light goes out.
Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/318.html#cutid1> Marked
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5> simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan · ID:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:08:31 Score: 2
What I said about there being a third party to any intrigue, and how this is
usually Éowyn in Rohan? Well, there we go! This one is a bit more uplifting
at the end, I suppose, insofar as she finds something to cling to in the
darkness.
Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/1131.html#cutid1>
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:08:58 Score: 4
There is always that third party who sees a little too much of other
people's secrets. Usually, this would be Éowyn in Rohan, but here we have
Elfhelm taking that part, the uninvited witness to Boromir and Théodred's
feelings for each other. He may think there is no one to mourn for him
should he die in war, and that therefore, he is safe in some sense, but I
think he will find eventually that he is mistaken.
Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/6882.html#cutid1>
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:09:27 Score: 3
Aha, a Théodred/Boromir ficlet! They do seem to attract each other, and
certainly the fact that both of them are doomed makes them in one way suited
to each other. I like the sense of rush and knowledge that these brief
moments are all that can be between them, before they part to their separate
deaths.
Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3460> The
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9> DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan · ID:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:10:23 Score: 6
This is probably the most complete filling of this particular gap that I've
read, and the confrontation that sent Éomer to the dungeons in the first
place is believably crafted. All the missing pieces are made to fit, and fit
very well together. The discussion between Éomer and Éowyn in the dungeons
is really the heart of the story, and it is a hard, painful discussion that
shows up just how desperate they were, and how determined. Éomer's little
ploy in wounding himself was very well-handled and gives him the kind of
cunning suited to someone who is not first a politician, but who for all
that is hardly stupid, and certainly isn't afraid to give a little (or even
all) of his blood to Rohan. A very satisfying story, and one that
Rohirrim-lovers will want to read.
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:10:52 Score: 6
This is a great story to read late at night, preferably in October. The idea
of watching the Ringwraiths clothe themselves and acquire form, where before
there had been nothing, takes you back to the days of watching the closet
door for the monsters that would surely emerge from their invisibility once
the lights had been out long enough. The description of all the animals
fleeing for their lives, as if before a great fire, is very evocative; I've
heard that sort of story recounted before by my mother, who actually saw it
as one of the evacuees, and the image of the animals fleeing and sometimes
burning as they ran left a great impression on me that is brought back to
life, if in a more chill way, by this story.
Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3567> Hero ·
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:11:26 Score: 6
Éomer shows himself wiser than his years in this story, and brings an
unusual sort of comfort to a disappointed boy. The point at which Éomer
demands to know why Ingild came to see him, getting around Ingild's rather
evasive answer and straight to the heart of the matter, is well played. I
like the idea that Éomer has suspected the answer and been dreading it, as
if he, too, perhaps had an unrealistic expectation of a boy Ingild's age—as
if Ingild reminds him a bit too much of himself, which Tiana also suggests.
If this is so, then Éomer shows too that he has come to terms with his
younger self quite nicely: he isn't harsh, he spares Ingild his dignity, but
his honesty leaves no room for the abstract and unreal heroism of the old
tales.
Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=974> Like a
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:11:58 Score: 9
"She is a woman, and men’s codes of honor and duty make no place for us. If
a woman is to accomplish anything at all, it must be through guile and
sometimes a...certain lack of scruples. The rules are not made for women,
nor, I think, are women for the rules."
Salsify goes to the heart of the matter, and points out what is obvious to
anyone who has taken a look at power structures in just about any age. There
will always be some who are excluded from them, and expected to be grateful
or at least dutiful. And since that combination is antithetical to
everything human, it's inevitable that those in that position will either
self-destruct in various ways or learn to circumvent the rules in order not
to break with something greater than faith in someone else's law. The
deviousness of it is disgusting, but such are the choices laid out for
someone like Éowyn, who, as a woman, is not permitted to follow the codes
she was brought up to respect in men. That double standard is shown in this
fic in all its galling 'glory', and it's evident what must come of it, given
who and what Éowyn is. The fact that Gríma finds that double-standard useful
should be a clear hint that it is not of the light in this case. Bravo,
Salsify, for showing us the social context of Éowyn's choice and bringing
out just how untenable her position really was.
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