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caught up.

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Title: Alas for the Wailing of the Gulls · Author: Jay of Lasgalen ·
Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1079
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 00:39:35 Score: 3
This piece did a good job of fleshing out the day that Legolas first
did the cry of the gulls. The battle scenes seemed realistic if a bit
distant for my tastes, and the interaction between Legolas and the
peredhil struck me as particularly good: light-hearted at times but
serious at need. My one complaint was that the language seemed
distanced at times.



Title: Alchemy · Author: Branwyn · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 168
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 00:49:03 Score: 1
This poem has an almsot sing-song quality about it that I found
particularly effective.

Title: All In a Hand · Author: Gaslight · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 389
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 01:14:41 Score: 6
I have often wondered how Eowyn's aging as one of the Rohirrim would
ahve been viewed both by herself and the Gondorians around her. Even
though her brandmother Morwen was from Gondor as well, I think
Tolkien suggests through her death-date that she aged much more
quickly than, say, Faramir. And that age is definitely there:
arthritic hands, silver hair, chill in her bones. But I had never
thought how an immortal like Legolas would have viewed her, and in
that sense Eowyn and Legolas are a perfect foil. The author uses that
comparison to characterise Eowyn well -- but also to get at something
very central to Legolas's character.

Title: Alqualonde · Author: Aramel · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 135
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 01:33:01 Score: 4
This poem has a nice rambling, almost melancholy feel. It's a
description of the geograhical wonders of the backdrop of Alqualonde,
and nothing hints at the kinslaying -- except for one line that
contains the slightest of hints: "scattered with stars that nothing
mars". And the form was complicated enough to make me think that this
might be written by elves who had an eternity to practice it. It
worked.

Title: Long Leagues for Little Legs · Author: Fadagaski · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler · ID: 628
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:55:55 Score: 6
I don't really remember coming across many tales that focus on
interactions between Boromir and Sam, so this was quite a pleasant
surprise. I like the realism of Boromir coming up on Sam from within
the camp, subtly reminding him to be alert for danger from all
directions, and I loved Sam's description of the hobbits as traveling
half as swiftly, but eating twice as much - too true! Most of all I
appreciated Sam's courage and honesty in speaking frankly to Boromir;
and Boromir's gracious apology and recognition of the hobbits as
sturdy, courageous companions, despite their size. A nicely thought-
provoking tale of honesty and respect.

Title: Boys to Men · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:56:19 Score: 2
What a lovely depiction of a father's realization that his son is
ready to be considered a man! We parents don't often have moments of
sharp clarity such as this; thank you for reminding me to seek and
snatch those moments.

Title: Second Watch · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 410
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:56:41 Score: 2
What a lovely moment of honesty and true fellowship between Boromir
and Pippin! A very simply told tale rings true with sparse, but
perfectly realistic dialogue.

Title: The Captain's Last Charge · Author: AmandaK · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:57:07 Score: 5
A movieverse gapfiller; and a painful and lovely imagining of the
scene in which Faramir assembles his troops for the doomed attempt to
reclaim Osgiliath. AmandaK has brought Faramir to vivid life here in
his terrible realization that even his death will not buy his
father's love, and his own determination to prove his love by paying
the requested price.

The scene in which he sends away volunteers who have families,
allowing only old, solitary campaigners to join him in the sortie,
was particularly heartrending and a thoughtful, imaginative detail.

Title: Sunshine and Laughter · Author: Anastasia · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1232
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:57:28 Score: 3
I really like the way Anastasia has shown the affection Gandalf feels
for Pippin, and the respect with which he holds him as a bright
light, and the hope of Middle-Earth. The concept of Pippin being
troubled by nightmares, and Gandalf able to restore his peaceful
sleep, is a very feasible one, and quite well described here.

Title: Offerings · Author: Lyllyn · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 27
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:57:52 Score: 3
A tender and painful vision as Eowyn ponders, in hindsight, the
decision she made to abandon her responsibity to her people. Though
bittersweet, the tale is not angsty or maudlin in the slightest, and
is filled with quite lovely imagery - "The sweet fierceness like a
hawk choosing her own timeand prey" - that suits Eowyn perfectly.

Title: Reconciliation · Author: Nrink · Books/Time: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 44
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:58:27 Score: 5
A gorgeous and heartbreaking depiction of Faramir's last duty to his
father.
Exquisite details, and a misty dreamlike quality perfectly convey the
painfully honest conversation Faramir was never quite able to have
with his father.

Horrific and painful images, such as Denethor striking his younger
son, or weeping on Finduilas's bier, are handled with grace and
compassion, contributing to the reader's feeling of being a helpless
observer to the painful disintegration of the relationship between
father and son.


Title: Dolor Meus · Author: Werecat · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID:
897
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:59:05 Score: 5
Though I'm not completely familiar with the personalities and events
of "The Silmarillion", I couldn't help but be enchanted by Werecat's
haunting tale of the last of the Eldar, lost and wandering through
the Fourth Age. Cast away on a Celtic shore, identified and rescued
by the last of the Istari, Maglor is granted redemption and allowed
to sail and rejoin his kin.

The cleverly wrought parallels between Radagast and Saint Francis of
Assisi, the imaginative setting in an Irish abbey, and the
exquisitely mournful singing, make this tale a rich and unique feast
for all the senses.


Title: Always Dancing · Author: Mariposa · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship · ID: 928
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:00:02 Score: 8
Tiny flashbacks, memories called forth as Merry and Pip supervise the
training of a hobbit defense force, bring Boromir back to vivid life.
Boromir would have been very experienced in training young soldiers,
so what he gave the hobbits was not exceptional in his view; but to
them these were precious gifts of respect, and self-confidence, and
combat skills that would save not only their own lives, but impact
upon the lives of so many others.

The bits of dialog between Boromir, Pip, and Merry are wonderfully
realistic - one priceless line had me gasping with laughter over a
custom shared by soldiers of all races, ages, and sizes. What a gift
of acceptance for Merry and Pip, to be spoken to in such an
outrageously soldierly manner! How we would have loved to see such a
scene!

What could have been a bittersweet tale is told deftly, with great
affection and humor, demonstrating how Boromir's influence was much
more far-reaching than he would ever have imagined.



Title: For Everything There Is A Season · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea
· Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 31
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:00:22 Score: 2

I adore Isabeau's characterization of the Imrahil's family.This is
loving and joyous, and totally timeless in its depiction of playful
family interactions. Thank you for bringing these young people to
glorious life!

Title: Greenery · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 14
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:01:22 Score: 6
A radiantly lovely tale of the new Queen of Gondor, feeling a bit
lonely in her new role, visiting the healer's gardens and finding a
kindred spirit in a young, artless apprentice.

The voice of the apprentice is quite realistic and natural, carrying
that slightly self-pitying tone common to teenager everywheres, I
think!
The elements of herbalism and healing arts are inserted deftly,
fitting perfectly without interrupting the flow of the tale. Some of
the descriptions are exquisite: "That smile… I cannot think of words
for it. It was a little like coming in to the kitchen on a wet day,
cold and tired, and smelling my mother's seedcakes baking." Just
wonderful, wonderful.


Title: Bare Feet and Beer · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gondor · ID: 571
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:01:57 Score: 4
Ever the overachiever, Faramir has a difficult time adjusting to a
less-stern taskmaster. Over mugs of ale and newly-invented savories,
Faramir and his king come to an understanding over exactly how the
Kingdom of Gondor and Arnor will be rebuilt. An affectionately
written, realistic portrait of two men who immediately recognize and
embrace their kinship.



Title: Good Stone · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 721
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:02:33 Score: 3
What a nice scene between these two, and a blessing for the City!
Legolas is glad for the beauty of birds, while practical Gimli senses
a problem - snork! Between the two of them, the engineer and the
artist, they reach a solution that will fill the city with beauty and
joy for years to come.

Title: Telling the Bees · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Shire · ID: 343
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:03:33 Score: 3
An absolutely enchanting tale, and a perfect use of the charming
Celtic custom. Everything here is lovely – the descriptions of the
scents in each place as Sam tries to find the perfect spot to tell
the bees; the garden and party field with each flower listed; Sam
himself in all his homey simplicity and boundless love. Such a joy to
read on this rainy day!

Title: His Last Words · Author: Amarie · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings · ID: 85
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:03:57 Score: 3
An amazingly original, shocking and powerful piece. The vision of
Boromir, consumed by the power of the ring, vividly describing his
plans for conquest and supremacy, is terrifyingly effective – it's
quite easy to imagine Boromir speaking or acting in this way as he
finally falls victim to the fearsome power he can no longer resist.

Title: Strength · Author: Songspinner · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings · ID: 829
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:04:35 Score: 6
I enjoy reading about quiet moments between members of the
Fellowship, and this brief interlude between Merry and Legolas was an
unexpected pleasure. Legolas's explaining to Merry the true
significance of Pip's battle with Sauron, within the palantir, was
very powerful - obviously Merry understood too little, and Legolas
too much! I also enjoyed the tenderness with which they exchanged
confidences about their loneliness for their home and families. The
small detail of Merry helping Legolas examine his arrows, and Merry
his sword, added a wonderful note of realism and immediacy to the
tale.

Title: Isildur's Inheritance · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings · ID: 1299
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:05:02 Score: 3
Quite a chilly vision of Aragorn's temptation on his very first day
with the Fellowship! In this depiction, Aragorn's patient demeanour
belies the anger he keeps buried. "seize what is rightfully his, the
crown of Gondor...."; "drag Arwen..." Very vivid images, skillfully
handled in a short, powerful tale.

Title: 'Peering in the water as the dark eve fell, I caught him,
Gollum.' · Author: Avon · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble
· ID: 19
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:05:26 Score: 2
An insightful study of Aragorn, his fate bound to that of Gollum, as
he ponders the consequences of possesion of the Ring, and receives an
unwelcome insight into his own possible future. Spare, powerful, as
perfect as a drabble can be.

Title: Olorin I was in my Youth In the West that is Forgotten ·
Author: Azalais · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 25
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:05:49 Score: 3
"once I was not bound in weary bone and chafed flesh, but made of
fire and air"
A lovely, fleeting glimpse of Gandalf remembering his youth. Or is
that his true form, veiled to protect mortals from his searing
beauty? Pippin's youthful innocence is the perfect counterpoint of
this unusual vision.

Title: Twilight · Author: Acacea · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and
Faramir · ID: 1022
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:07:51 Score: 6
Acacea's outstanding descriptive skills set the scene and mood
perfectly: the cloudness, stifling night, the dark, motionless waters
of the Anduin, the vague sense of disquiet, certainly not unusual for
soldiers during a brief respite. The songs of the frogs provide the
only illusion of normalcy, there by the river.

I applaud Acacea's creativity in the manner in which she has
skillfully woven the folktale of the frog in the well into the fabric
of the tale as an allegory for Gondor's continued battle against the
forces of the Shadow. The whole tale is lovely and bittersweet, just
as any tale of the Brothers `Mir must be.


Title: Taur Ingem · Author: Nancy Brooke · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Drabble · ID: 629
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-17 08:58:19 Score: 3
This is a very harsh and pointed view of what it means to be human,
to be young and prideful. - disturbing but truthful, what we all see
when we look at our elders, sometimes, not the respect that is due,
but instead - we're seeing in a mirror, seeing our own slow decay.

Title: Alterations · Author: Eledhwen · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 260
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 10:00:30 Score: 2
This has a great mix of gap-filling moments. Each of the characters
portrayed seems in-character, and I can thoroughly imagine the events
written about here actually happening.


Title: Ambush in Ithilien · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 204
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 10:02:38 Score: 4
Don't think for a moment, E.T., that your reference to Gondor
staggering but not falling slipped past me. Lovely way of working in
a book quote (and one of my favourite speeches in the books,
incidentally). I loved so much about this, but mostly the physcial
details. Red-clad and red-bannered for the Southrons coupled with the
crimson slaughter -- brilliant comparison. Really, all-around it is a
very good drabble.

Title: A Gift at Year's Turning · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 186
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 10:06:04 Score: 6
I remember when I was a kid how we had to wait for the adults to
finish eating Christmas eve dinner before we got to open one present
on Christmas eve (the rest waited until Christmas day). I swear they
dragged it out, coffee and desert and endless small talk, just to
torment us. And pity the one of us cousins who pestered if they were
done yet -- he or she had to hand out the presents to everyone else
and had to be the last to open his or hers. So I can completely
understand Boromir's torment. There are many things to like about
this story because it's such a charming series of anecdotes, but I
think that's my favourite part of it: how you've captured the
frustrations and excitement of the holiday time, at many places
through the eyes of a child.

Title: An Ode on Aragorn's Dimple · Author: Flick · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 735
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 10:34:51 Score: 2
This piece was laugh-out-loud funny. It was hilarious to see the way
the different fellowship members actually coveted Aragorn's dimples --
proof that even at the gravest of times the greatest of heroes can
still be quite petty. ;-)

Title: Alas, Poor Ufthak! · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:43:35 Score: 3
Now this drabble is just a confession of how sick and twisted your
sense of humour is. I love it! You do a great job with the voice of
the Orcs and their description of their fellow guard. And their
actions are disgustingly and perfectly in character for who they are.
Funny and sick and another depiction of characters not many authors
tackle. Great job!

Title: Triumph Incarnate · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 198
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:44:01 Score: 3
This is almost poetry--I love the paired lines and the images they
conjure and the significance of those images. It is so simply done
but so powerfully. You do a great job of conveying the evil that is
Sauron. And tackling that subject--Sauron--is something very few
authors do. You have a very unique, powerful and well written drabble
here.

Title: A Long Tradition of Ancient Lore · Author: Elena Tiriel ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 206
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:44:24 Score: 3
I am becoming more and more fond of Denethor and part of the reason
is that I am reading great drabbles about him. I really like seeing
Denethor here as auch a wonderful father. And of course I love seeing
how he is making history come alive for his son (since I do
historical reenactments myself). This is a wonderful piece.

Title: There and Back Again · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 202
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:44:48 Score: 4
Oh what a tragic moment this is. You start out reading this thinking
what a nice portrayal of Frodo it is--I like thinking of him as
fascinated by his uncle's stories and all that. And the drabble makes
you even hear Balin's voice \ it makes you feel like you are in his
presence with Frodo--it creates such atmosphere. And then you hit
that last line and are made to remember and realize what happened to
him. The reader can really feel as Frodo did the impact of this
tragic news.

Title: Silver and Gold · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 196
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:45:13 Score: 5
This is so emotional and provocative and poetic. It is one of my all
time favorite drabbles. I love how you show the many sides of
Celeborn--he was so much more than 'Galadriel's consort' as he came
across in the movies--and you do a wonderful job showing that here.
You also do an incredible job showing how their separation tore them
both up. But my favorite part is the parallel between the last lines
in each drabble--the reference to the gold band and how in the end
that finger begins the healing. This one literally brings tears to my
eyes. So well done!

Title: A Long, Unexpected Drabble · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres:
Humor: Metafic · ID: 193
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:45:33 Score: 3
This drabble is a riot. I recently wrote a drabble (my first one) so
now I can even better understand this drabble. I love the 'make it
Tolkienesque and make it canon' because that is what you do so well
but the frustration of the drabble writer is portrayed so well here.
And the end line! Perfect and hilarious! I laughed myself silly
reading it.

Title: Ambush in Ithilien · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 204
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:45:52 Score: 3
I love how you weave the past and the present moment together in this
to show how this area has been disputed for so many centuries. I can
really feel how Faramir is feelings. And I like this: Our longbows
creak under the strain. Such a simple but effective way to show the
action.

Title: Sam's Gift · Author: Marta · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 955
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:52:02 Score: 4
I think you did a very good job in this of capturing Sam's voice and
his reactions to his environment while in Lothlorien. Somehow I never
linked Galadriel's gift to Sam to what Sam saw in the mirror before
reading this and it seems so natural to me now. So I appreciated your
help in seeing that. But of course I loved 'Sam's gift.' That was
really well done. This is a great piece. Very emotional and very
canon.

Title: Mercy · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID:
583
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:54:00 Score: 2
Being a big Elf fan, I like this piece. You show Legolas and the
elves' surprise at finding the dwarves very well. And I do agree that
they would have showed them some mercy even as they arrested them.
Nice drabble.

Title: Anniversary · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble
· ID: 923
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:56:22 Score: 3
This one is really incredibly sad--full of images of what really is
not going to happen. They are happily sitting there imaging a bright
future but we know the dwarves will meet a bad end in Moria and
Bilbo's only remaining adventure will be to sail west. I thought this
was poetically done but very sad.

Title: The Great Years · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Drabble · ID: 1372
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 11:00:12 Score: 3
Okay, just wow! I love the eagles--they are some of my favorite
characters so I will be very partial to this drabble normally. But
this is really powerful, I think. I was enjoying thinking about all
the things they had seen in their lives from their mountain homes and
then you get to the last line--they will watch no more indeed. That
was great! I loved it!

Title: Swords Returned · Author: Leaward · Races/Places: Men: Eriador
· ID: 172
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-17 11:01:55 Score: 10
The woes of war are never as sharply seen, as they are in the eyes of
a child, especially one as observant as little `Kil. I believe it is
quite the smart approach to tackle such a tragic concept as death
through the innocent inquisitiveness of a child. It almost feels as
though the innocent questions he asks do not belong in the real world
where a sword might be returned everyday. I like how Leaward was able
to depict the little child that would soon become a man. I've read
the other stories where Tarkil becomes a man and I can clearly see
how the child here became that man. The relationship between Tarkil
and his older brother is real life but very refreshing considering
the seriousness of the topic. The nickname " runt" had me chuckling
every time. The simple style with which this piece was written not
only adds clarity to the thoughts the author is trying to reveal but
also purity to the emotions. I think that when dealing with topics
such as the loss of loved ones, a writer might be tempted to just run
loose, but with Leaward you can clearly see a well organized logical
thought pattern from the beginning to the end. The characters are all
very true to the age to which they belong: Edhelwen is the stern,
proud woman while Tarkil's father is the seasoned warrior coming home
for his wife's birthday. However, the characters retain depth and
leave you wondering whether they too have their own individual
stories. There are a lot of faces to this short piece other than the
explanation of the ritual of returning swords. I believe the
exploration of such notions as the making of men, the relationship
between fathers and sons, women during war…Are all very important
symbolically presented ideas. To sum up, it's a great job to write on
such an intensely human topic and come out with a piece that touches
each and everyone of us.

Title: The Last Hour · Author: Citrine · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 465
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:03:06 Score: 10
It's the little details, thrown casually into the writing, that bring
this story alive: Merry sitting on his "too-large bed", the buttons
of his "not-quite-the-right-size shirt" too hard to manage with his
right hand "still feeling chilled and half asleep" and then the
mention of his arm aching with the effort. I could go on, for the
first paragraph alone sets the scene so well. Details! I love
details! Especially when they are not set forth in a boring, pedantic
manner, but rather paint in the background to the scene so that the
reader is *there*.

The series of pictures of Pippin, "as solicitous as an old hobbit-
auntie" and then striking a princely pose in his uniform, then taking
off his helmet and climbing up on the bed to play draughts, all
hobbity again, (ah, the "rustle and click" of the pieces in the
silence of the room, more of those scene-painting details!)

The progression of Merry's thoughts, hinted at but not explicitly
stated until he speaks aloud. Lovely, subtle writing that pulls at
the heartstrings.

And the author has used a device I enjoy using, i.e. Pippin's
resemblance to Frodo. Though there is nothing I know of in canon to
support this, it is diverting to speculate on family resemblances.
And what a description of Pippin, his adult, unblinking assessment of
the situation at hand. Pippin makes *me* proud in this moment! And
shortly thereafter, his "Botheration!" and the thoroughly hobbity
speech that follows. And the moment of parting, deep feelings and
light words. Ah, but this is a grand little story for hobbit fans,
well-drawn, skillfully rendered.

Title: The Heirs of Isildur · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 24
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 11:03:19 Score: 3
This is humorous and sad at the same time. I can definitely see poor
Elrond with all his brother's heirs in his long life getting a little
confused. And the child's anger was well done. But at the same time,
how sad for him to see so many incarnations of the brother lost
forever--and maybe how hopeful too. Lot's of emotion here, I guess.

Title: While the Ring Went South... · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 33
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:06:41 Score: 10
It is with great anticipation that I opened this story for a re-
read. "It's all here" as the summary promises! (I tried to vote on
this story in last year's MEFA. I searched through the entire list of
stories, looking for this one. I would have nominated it this year if
someone hadn't beaten me to it!)

To start, I appreciated the thoughfulness in establishing the place
on the timeline for those of us who are interested in such things. (I
am.) And only halfway through the first paragraph the author's
trademark dry wit popped up, and continued to poke its head out just
when needed to relieve the tension. O yes, I enjoyed this re-read.

I love the way these hobbits "act their ages" and are not portrayed
as childish or even infantile, a temptation many writers seem unable
to resist. There are a few mis-steps early on, while the author is
finding her way, yet the dialogue is well done and care is taken to
keep the reader "in the picture". I never lose sight of where a
character is as the scenes are set up and written through.

And when the action starts to roll, midway, it grips the reader and
carries one through. No wonder this story sticks in my mind, even a
couple of years after I read it!

Note to Thundera: I know you are dissatisfied with the early chapters
and want to re-write, but this is still an amazing story, especially
for an early effort.

Title: Second Watch · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 410
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:07:24 Score: 2
Nicely done! There seem to be many parallels that could be drawn
between Pippin and Boromir, but this is one that I didn't anticipate.
And elegantly done, as well, with a wonderful economy of words.
Drabbles amaze me!

Title: Master of the House · Author: Vistula the Dunadan ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 639
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:07:52 Score: 3
O but this is wonderful! "He couldn't bid me different, were he King
of all elves" and Elrond's understanding smile, even though it is
unseen by Sam. This is a nice little picture of Sam's determination,
and makes it all the more believable that he will follow Frodo to the
end of Middle-earth.

Title: Devil of Kindness · Author: Nancy Brooke · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 685
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:08:27 Score: 3
It is amazing what can be accomplished in the space of 100 words. You
have said so much, painted such a picture, and covered so much of
Gandalf's wanderings in a short span of time. I admit I haven't read
your work, though your name is familiar. I shall have to seek out
more.

Title: Links · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
General Drabble · ID: 23
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:09:28 Score: 2
It is good to see this resolution of the tension between Frodo and
Boromir, with Frodo's understanding and forgiveness. Nice symbolism.

Title: Dandelion Clocks · Author: Alawa · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 17
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:09:58 Score: 1
Haunting. Nice use of imagery. Astonishing, how much can be said in
100 words.

Title: New Home · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Ithilien Drabble · ID: 20
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:10:28 Score: 2
Heart-tugging. I have a soft spot for Beregond and Bergil, and it is
lovely to see them settling in their new home in Ithilien, with a
chance to start anew.

Title: There And Back Again · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: The
Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 51
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:11:23 Score: 1
Quite funny, and quite true to Bilbo's character! Nicely done, and
all in 100 words.

Title: The Dress Code · Author: Auntiemeesh · Genres: Humor: Hobbits
· ID: 818
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:21:40 Score: 3
This is a very sweet story, of Sam dealing with the unaccustomed task
of trying to deal with "dress-up" clothes while in Minas Tirith. His
friend's teasing is gentle, yet helpful, and in the end he makes a
realization that will be one more step up for him, though he doesn't
know it yet.

Title: 'Peering in the water as the dark eve fell, I caught him,
Gollum.' · Author: Avon · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble
· ID: 19
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:23:30 Score: 1
A chilling and atmospheric stream-of-consciousness drabble. Powerful.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Azalais · Genres: Crossovers ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:31:11 Score: 2
Absolutely riveting, just the kind of thing you would wish *could*
indeed happen for the Professor; it made me grin and sniffle at the
same time.

Title: Caught Between a Hammer and an Anvil · Author: BookHobbit ·
Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 814
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:36:04 Score: 2
A very vivid bit of movie-verse: the battle in Moria, from Pippin's
POV--what was he thinking, as for the first time, he so desperately
battled for his life and the lives of his friends?

Title: Sulnur · Author: sulriel · Races/Places: Rohan: Original
Characters · ID: 145
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-17 11:36:29 Score: 8
It is an Arab tradition in old poetry to depict horses with a human
character. As a matter of fact a knight always, and I mean always
flaunts his mare and his courage in battle in old poems. So you can
understand how delighted I was to read Sulnur and discover that it
had all the elements of the old Arabic poems. It has generally been
thought that the horse is one of the most loyal animals out there. I
have heard stories about horses dying in mourning after their
masters. But to see the relationship from the side of the horse is
particularly captivating. I found myself cheering sulnur on when she
tried to help her master up and then getting all knotted up when she
started fighting for his. All the time I was chanting: don't kill the
horse! The scenes of the battle almost feel dream like, flashes into
the consciousness of some distant fighter---This in turn gave the
writing a sort of romantic feel. The element of surprise is not
shocking but pleasant leaving a stream like flow to the events. Very
lovely and original piece!

Title: Alchemy · Author: Branwyn · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 168
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:38:36 Score: 1
A very intense bit of verse about Feanor crafting the palantir. I
especially love the play on words at the end.

Title: Celeborn Unplugged · Author: Michael Martinez · Genres: Non-
Fiction: Elves · ID: 1207
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-17 11:56:39 Score: 10
Michael Martinez. I am supposed to be an author, but words fail me
when I try to express appropriate gratitude for the research
materials you have made available to JRRTolkien fan-fiction authors.
I know that it is all interesting and fun to debate for the kind of
people who like to read and talk (argue <G>) about such things, but I
find your articles especially useful in a working frame and refer
back to them as frequently as I do the Lord of the Rings, the
Silmarillion and even the Histories of Middle-earth themselves.

Celeborn is one of my favorites and you are one of the few authors
that I consider really does him justice. He handles so many issues
over so many years, - Ages - with strength and quiet dignity, which
are the real signs of a true leader. In my mind, he is the
ultimate "Strong, Silent Type" and that comes through especially well
in this article about him.

Your fairly done explanations of each of his recorded histories
allows authors to follow the threads that they like, or need for
their particular story. Your suppositions and extensions of logic, I
find to be unfailing, if sometimes entertaining. I see Celeborn as a
difficult fellow who is too often over-looked and under-estimated.
You have done a wonderful job with him in this article. It is one I
have bookmarked and often refer other readers and writers to your
link.


Title: Artist's Appreciation · Author: sulriel · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 146
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-17 12:07:19 Score: 9
Before reading this story, I had never thought of Celeborn as a "
saliva –inducing hunk" . What is more, the idea is tactfully
produced, it just sort of seeps into your system. I could almost
imagine myself sitting on a bench an watching the pair interact. It
is a very captivating first chapter…Where is the rest? I seriously
believe the chemistry between the young artist and the elven lord is
worth more chapters. Speaking of elven lords, I was happy to see a
representation of an elf that portrays him as neither maniacally
lustful nor frustratingly rigid. As for Lhende, she is one of my
favourite OFCs since she's a sort of an odd mixture, innocent yet
attractive, artistic yet clumsy in a sort of cute way… The dialogue
between the pair is charming and witty. However, what I loved most
was the description of Celeborn's dance. At the time I read it I was
listening to Lorenna McKennit - Marrakesh Night , and I just went
into a complete daze. I could almost see every muscle rippling, every
movement magnetically melting into the night, every swish of his hair
turning Lhende's throat( and mine) completely dry. A truly
magnificent start of what promises to be a legendary romance!

Title: Waiting for a King Like You · Author: Michael Martinez ·
Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 1139
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-17 12:20:57 Score: 10
Another critical and well thought-out article. No one who write about
the Northern Dunedain, the Rangers or the dark years of the Men of
the West should do so without studying this article. I especially
enjoyed your parallels and contrasts with our real-life histories,
and the fast-forward discussion and comparison on the reign of
Eldarion. I have not yet written any "Ranger" stories, although I
have brainstormed and beta'd some, and am currently working on a
Fourth Age Eldarion story. This article is another one that I have
saved the link in my favorites so I can easily find it when I need to
check back for details on the alliances and conflicts in their
histories and their relationships. The speculation on the Kings and
their peers, and on the possible reasons for the contrasts of the
differences of the cities. - everything from the libraries to the
entire frraming of the culture. I especially like the (dark)
speculation that the help of the Elves may have ultimately been the
downfall of the Northern Numenorians. - so like the helping (hiding)
of the Valar by bringing the Vanyar, Noldor, - and what others they
could - West in the days before the sun.

I appreciate how you can take such a complicated issue and walk us
through it step by slow step so that the issues become clear and
workable. Thank you again Michael, for this article and for the
others. You are greatly apprecaited in this fandom.

Title: Letters · Author: Breon Briarwood · Genres: Romance: Vignette
· ID: 1245
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:45:43 Score: 1
A love letter with a twist. Very chilling; very well done!

Title: Not Remembered · Author: Cadiliniel · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 992
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:48:50 Score: 1
A lovely drabble, a rather obscure last line--very evocative.

Title: The Sea Sings a Lullaby · Author: Camilla Sandman · Genres:
Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 87
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:52:43 Score: 1
A very sad and chilling AU vignette, a twist on Legolas and Gimli
going across the sea.

Title: Elves and Potatoes · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Hobbits · ID: 185
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:55:26 Score: 3
I really liked this account of how Bilbo came to teach Sam to read.
It's very plausible. I love the description of Bag End's gardens, and
the details of how the Gaffer and Sam care for it, and the account of
how Frodo came to discover that Sam could not read. All of it was
told in a gentle lyrical fashion. Very nice.

Title: Thain · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Incomplete · ID: 913
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-17 12:55:56 Score: 2
Interesting though Pippin's trials are, I really love the Bucca parts
of this story. And look forward to finding out more about him.

Title: Nothing in Haste · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 407
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-17 12:57:29 Score: 2
This is a wonderful insight into how Elrond discovered Arwen's choice
to marry Aragorn and how he coped. I have often thought of writing
the same scene but now feel I don't 'need' to since Gwynneth has
written such a lovely scene.

Title: Shadow · Author: Celebsul · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
First Age · ID: 775
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:59:12 Score: 1
An interesting and original perspective. Powerful prose. Bittersweet.

Title: Gimli Takes a Whack · Author: Celtic Bard · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 205
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 13:02:41 Score: 1
A very funny parody, well-done, and perfectly in canon.

Title: Here sits, in secret, blest Theology · Author: annmarwalk ·
Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 388
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-17 13:10:22 Score: 3
This was a wonderful birthday present at HASA. Not only is its title
the most haunting line ever (*green with envy*), but the story is
enchanting as well. A tale that could very well be true and Tolkien
himself would enjoy. Thanks for writing this, Ann.

Title: The Rooster Man of Gondor · Author: Chelsea Nolan ·
Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor · ID: 321
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 15:27:00 Score: 2
A very strange and original story. Was that really a cock's crow
heard before the Rohirrim arrived? Very thought provoking.

Title: Watcher on the Height · Author: Chris · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 1015
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 15:30:31 Score: 2
Another story of endurance beyond hope. What must it have been like
to watch the beacons year after year, seemingly to no purpose?

Title: Anessë · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places: Elves: First Age
· ID: 1021
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 17:53:36 Score: 1
A neat gapfiller. I think I liked most all the physical descriptions
of the hall near the beginning.

Title: And There Make a Garden · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1388
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 19:09:04 Score: 3
What I really liked about this one is how you blended the official
and the personal. Faramir is all business looking at maps and
planning beautification projects -- and then Legolas reveals that he
has something else entirely different in mind. I imagine Faramir is
smiling too, just at the mention of his promise to Eowyn.

Title: One Elf: Glorfindel in TTT · Author: Cirdan · Genres: Movie-
verse · ID: 1269
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 19:21:31 Score: 2
A very amusing movie-verse AU, in which Glorfindel gets to make up
for being slighted in the flight to the ford, by showing up, and
showing everyone up, at Helm's Deep.

Title: Cold Memories · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 82
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:24:08 Score: 6
I always enjoy stories about Boromir and Faramir as children, and
happy interactions with their father – I refuse to believe he could
always be grim! This is a light-hearted tale, enfolding some tender
memories of Finduilas, but using the unusual element of a rare
snowfall in Minas Tirith to allow Boromir and Denethor to share a
special memory with Faramir. The descriptive elements of the snow-
covered courtyard and the White Tree, and footsteps, are quite well
done, and the dialogue is realistic and natural. A happy scene which
I'm sure provided refreshing memories in the summer heat of the White
City.

Title: Fairer Than Most · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 69
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:24:57 Score: 4
A very sweetly written story with excellent characterizations of our
four hobbits. The teasing and joking is very much in character, and
the descriptions (of both physical, and personal traits) are quite
vividly done. The vision of a somewhat bemused Aragorn, having his
first experience of hobbits en masse certainly made me smile! Nicely
highlights the bonds of friendship and love between them all.

Title: 110 · Author: Aeneid · Races/Places: Men · ID: 59
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:25:41 Score: 5
A vivid feast of the eyes, the ears, and the imagination. Aeneid's
words sing mischievously, or tenderly, or with rolling humor or
drollery or exquisite, magical poetry. The concept of Boromir
counting the steps of his journey in terms of "sleeps" – like a child
might – also conveys the doggedness of his purpose. The various
aspects of Boromir as he journeys – a stranger in a strange land; a
lonely traveler at the mercy of the elements; sick or wounded or
despairingly ready to give up his spirit to the peace of death – are
all lovingly drawn, and perfect extrapolations of his character.

Title: Fall of Osgiliath · Author: Valedhelgwath · Races/Places: Men
· ID: 633
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:26:01 Score: 2
An incredibly vivid recounting of the fall of Osgilath. Amazing, step-
by-step descriptions of the advance of the orc army, and the valiant
defense and retreat by the Gondorian forces. Incredible detail! Well
done!

Title: Heirs of Isildur · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Men:
Eriador · ID: 243
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:26:38 Score: 5
I had never thought to consider the pressures placed on Aragorn, as
chieftain of the Dunedain and Heir of Isildur, to marry (or not) and
continue the line. Dwimodene's tale presents this conundrum in a
humorous manner, focusing subltley on the affection between Aragorn
and his kinsman Halbarad as they discuss this thorny issue. Aragorn
is perhaps not quite as forthright as his cousin, but the slight
evasiveness of his comments are quite in character for a man who is
used to keeping his own counsel. A very well done interpretation of
somewhat neglected aspect of Aragorn's life.

Title: The Creation of Horses · Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde ·
Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 275
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:27:11 Score: 5
Every time I began to fear that we've mined Tolkien's world too
thoroughly, a piece like this shows up to remind me that there is no
limit to what a uniquely gifted, creative mind can do to refresh our
hungry spirits.

What marvelous imagery! I can so imagine this being sung at Meduseld,
and can smell the woodsmoke, and the sweat, and the yeasty scent of
ale. I can't help but feel Professor Tolkien would be proud of work
and its author, and pleased that he inspired such vivid, musical
writing..




Title: The Clasp Undone · Author: DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan ·
ID: 691
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:27:50 Score: 5
A powerful and vivid depiction of Eomer's imprisonment, through to
the machinations of Grima, until Theoden is freed by Gandalf from
Saruman's spell. The Anglo-Saxon style poetry that opens each chapter
provides the perfect mood and setting, emphasizing Eomer's despair.
The Rohirrim, unlike the cool and collected Gondorians, wear their
emotions quite openly, so it is heartbreaking to share in Eomer's
mourning for his cousin, and his fears for Eowyn and Rohan's future.
A well-told tale.

Title: Marked · Author: simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 904
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:28:42 Score: 7
What an achingly lovely piece this is! Although Eowyn's age here is
not specified, I catch the vision of a young girl on the very edge of
adulthood, just beginning to understand about love and heartache. She
may have thought that she understood all, until the vision of Boromir
and Theodred causes her to cast aside all her preconceived notions.

The words used to describe Eowyn here: unmarked, unnoticed,
untouched, unseen - vividly illustrate her transition from girlhood
to adulthood. it's as though Eowyn has stepped through a portal
towards understanding of the world of passion and despair.

The many allusions to light and shadow also, to me, symbolize Eowyn's
loneliness: not only as a young girl wondering about her future, and
longing for love, but also wondering wistfully if she will ever
experience herself the dazzling, bittersweet passion shared by the
two lovers, now imprinted indelibly in her soul.


Title: A Question of Honour · Author: Honesty · Races/Places: Rohan:
Romance · ID: 413
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:29:15 Score: 3
Gah! The testosterone!
This is a pairing I would never have imagined in a million years, but
Honesty did, thank goodness, and wrote it with sly wit and humor.
Those descriptions – wow! And the epilogue was just too, too, funny.
Very original, very outrageous, very well done! Thanks for providing
yet another scenario for my Eomer fantasies.


Title: The End of Hope · Author: ErinRua · Races/Places: Rohan:
Vignette · ID: 289
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:29:53 Score: 6
I'm really enjoying the evolution I've been seeing in fanfiction over
the past year, from recreation (or rehashing) of familiar movie
scenes to very new, creative and original interpretation of the many
wide gaps Professor Tolkien left in scenes and characters.

The narrator here, an unnamed woman of Rohan, is well drawn and
realistic as she awaits her doom. She longs for her old life: her
hearth, her husband, her weaving, all lovingly described by ErinRua.
Her opinion of Eowyn, neither heroine nor deserter, but one who chose
to meet death rather than waiting, is well expressed and reasonable.
I would love to read more of this type of story, especially by this
skilled and sympathetic author.


Title: Bystander · Author: simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette
· ID: 903
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:30:33 Score: 7
How very imaginative of simblemyne to take two very minor canon
characters – Theodred and Elfhelm – combine them with a perfect dose
of Boromir, and toss lightly to produce such an unexpectedly
delicious, bittersweet tale.

The triple repetition of the words " It was not unusual to see them
together"– when we have in fact never seen Boromir and Theodred
together – adds a depth of untold history to the tale. I had never
considered a Boromir/Theodred pairing, but simblemyne's lovely
writing bring these two to glorious life, for a few brief moments of
happiness together before they each ride to their doom.

Elfhelm, too, is brought to life here in his devotion to his
commander, his dedication to Rohan, and his heartrending realization
that he is better off not to be leaving a loved one behind as he
rides to war.



Title: Tangled Web · Author: daw the minstrel · Books/Time: The
Hobbit · ID: 151
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 19:48:26 Score: 10
I can't tell you have much I enjoyed this whole tale. You did a
superior job of telling it from the Elves' perspective. Your battles
were so well done and realistically portrayed. I think war is a
horrible thing and much worse than I can even imagine. I knew we had
to expect deaths...that's the way of war...but I can't help but feel
bad for the OC's we lost. I think Galelas was the most sad for me.
He'd come so far personally and professionally under Eilian's kind
guidance. I even felt bad for Tinar. He was shocked back to reality
by his brother's death. I suppose even arrogant fools still love
their family and friends. I don't know how this will impact him in
the future, but at this moment, he's a grieving brother, and I can't
help but feel for him at such a time. The whole Woodland Realm will
be in mourning for those lost...even the unnamed ones that we simply
know died.

The main characters were wonderful. Thranduil is indeed the greatest
Elven-king. He's shrewd, but wise, nevering losing sight of what was
really important. He raised his sons well. Eilian and Legolas stepped
up when needed and proved themselves competent and mature. Adar saw
his sons in a new light. Sometimes parents can be the last to see
their child as no longer a child. All our energy goes into seeing
them to this point and are probably the most surprised when we find
they've reached it. If we do our jobs well as parents, we put
ourselves out of a job. Good for Thranduil for acknowledging this.

You did a great job of showing strong, competent Ithilden's weakness:
His family. I know Sinnarn was nearly a goner, but I'm glad you
didn't let him get killed. I would hate to think of that pain it
would have caused Ithilden and Alfirin. (That's the parent in me
suffering with them.)

There are so many little things about the story that I found just
wonderful that it would take me all day and most likely bore you to
tears if I were to list them all. Let me just say that you gave such
warmth and terror, political intrigue and mystery to Tolkien's tale.
Shoot! I think he would even be impressed with the thorough job you
did telling the story from the Elves' point of view. I don't think
I'll ever read the Hobbit again and not picture your story going on
behind the scenes.

Thanks, daw. You've given me much pleasure in reading this. This is
absolutely one of my favorite stories.

Title: The Tide of Times · Author: daw the minstrel · Books/Time: The
Hobbit · ID: 681
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 19:57:53 Score: 10
Thranduil going to Imladris was quite a surprise. You gave us a great
view of what his thoughts were. His ambivalence about Imladris is
certainly understandable, but he always maintains his proper kingly
composure. He guarded his words to Arwen in kindness for her feelings
and shuddered at the thought of Galadriel as a mother-in-law. While
these two scenes made me smile, for different reasons, it told us a
geat deal about the elf king.

The last chapter was a very nice wrap-up, daw. The symbolism of the
ceremony was well done, but it was Thranduil's remembrances that got
to me. Oh my. I was very glad to see Eilian and had wondered if it
was acceptable for someone of another gender to take on assigned
roles. I always thought that Eilian was the best choice to take his
naneth's role. The funny thing about Eilian feeling weighed down by
shadow..though I didn't know that was what it was at the time...was
how strongly I felt it. You did a terrific job of giving him that
heavy slow feeling of despair.

Sinnarn was a sweet note...sort of that circle of life thing. And
what Eilian said about him being grown in five minutes...well, it's
so true.
Legolas was certainly thrilled at the news of his posting...Eilian
was not. "At least we of the House of Oropher are all consistent, he
thought." I chuckled at this...very good. I hoped there for a minute
that Ithilden was going to post Eilian to the eastern border, too,
but I suppose that would defeat the purpose of giving Legolas
sometime without his family hovering.

This ended very nicely. I really enjoyed it...just as I do all your
stories. Thanks for sharing.




Title: A Question of Duty · Author: daw the minstrel · Books/Time:
The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 152
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 20:09:24 Score: 10
This is one of the first stories written by you that I read. It's as
delightful this time as it was the first. I love how you've taken
canon and woven it so seamlessly into a plausible gap-filler for what
went on before the Fellowship actually left Imladris on the Quest..

In our first introduction to Beliond, we get a wonderful glimpse of
how his and Legolas's relationship developed through the many years
that Beliond was Legolas's keeper. He's still a bit wary of letting
Thranduil's youngest son take off on his own, but in the end, he sees
the wisdom of Legolas going on the Quest. This is not just a young
elf's desire for adventure, but an undertaking that will affect all
the people of Middle-earth. That must have been a hard decision for
him to come to, but it was time. Legolas was ready to go. I
particularly loved the part where he tells Legolas that he can
withstand Thranduil's fury. Now that we all know Beliond better, we
know this to be a fact. Beliond is perfect for Legolas as a keeper
and perfect for a worried father to know his son is well looked after.

Your portrayal of Aragorn, Elrond, Mithrandir, the sons of Elrond,
the dwarves...well, the whole cast...was wonderful. I enjoyed seeing
the budding of the friendship of Aragorn and Legolas that will only
strengthen and last until Aragorn's death. And beyond, I suppose.

Beautifully done, daw. And such a pleasure to read again.

Title: Spring Awakenings · Author: daw the minstrel · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 153
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 20:16:13 Score: 10
Oh, Daw! What a wonderful sotry.

I was so proud of Thranduil. He recognized the source of his fear for
his son, narrowed down exactly what it was that frightened him and
admitted it! It seems to me that he never meant to hurt Eilian, he
simply wanted to protect himself from the kind of pain he felt when
he lost Lorellin, and if possible, push Eilian into being different
from his naneth so he could protect them both from this horrible
outcome. I think that by explaining how he had come to set up his
reaction and relationship to Eilian, it helped Eilian finally
understand where his adar was coming from. I can't help but think
that while it might not change who Eilian is, it will make Eilian
more aware of how his behavior affects those who love him. Gee, it
only took them around 350 years to figure this out. What can I say?
They're males! :>) Still, it was a wonderfully written scene. It was
a difficult but poignant moment for Thranduil, and such a sweet
moment when father and son came to an understanding. Utmost in that
understanding was that above all else, they love each other. And for
Thranduil, the realization that Lorellin is still with him in the
form of their son was a real tugger on the heartstrings. Eilian is
the living legacy of two of the people Thranduil loved most: His
wife, Lorellin and his father, Oropher. Oh my goodness. Just
wonderful, daw.

Solith is a slow learner, but he seems to be catching on. Thranduil
was the king and adar through and through at that moment when he
asked if the old goat would dare to insult 'our son'. And the best
blessing the old coot could come up with was one involving the
political advantages of the union of one of the settlers and the
king's son...and a sort of backhanded acknowledgement to his
daughter's happiness! Bless his heart. He has a long way to go.

There were so many nice little details that I loved. The extra food
the people brought out of love for Eilian. The ring that Thranduil
had given Lorellin at Eilian's conception. Legolas searching the
crowd. Thranduil's sense of loss while watching Eilian and Celuwen
dancing. Maltanaur riding all night to be present at the celebration.
And of course, Beliond.

The ending was also well done. How strange it must have felt for
Eilian for Legolas to be riding back south while he stayed home. Of
course, Beliond will not let the whelp out of his sight. Thranduil
seemed to be in a different place with his sons, and it was doubly
hard for him to see Legolas leave again. As difficult as it was, he
let his son go. A very touching moment.

Such a good story, daw. This was a real triumph of personal
examination for your characters. Way to go!



Title: A Spring of Joy · Author: daw the minstrel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1320
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 20:21:17 Score: 10
First off, I think this is one of your best. As each chapter
progressed, the tension just wound tighter and tighter. By the time
we got to the last chapter, the coil was wound so tightly that the
tension was almost unbearable.

Of course, Tolkien's world is fiction, but I think the plot of the
story is so appealing to readers because it's so relevant to the
world in his time and in ours now. He created characters who rose
above the terror and trials of battling evil by choosing to do the
right thing. We have characters who are loyal, brave, self-
sacrificing and determined despite overwhelming odds that they will
most likely perish.

Your story captures the essence of these qualities in your
characters. Mirkwood was unique in that it was the only known Elven
realm of that time without the protection of a ring of power, and
it's people were constantly under assault. In one of your earlier
stories you said that Eilian thought that his father kept the shadow
from their door simply by his strength of will. In this story, we see
that not only was Thranduil's strength of will the barrier that kept
his people safe, but the woodland people themselves were possessed of
the same kind of determination as their king. We can easily see why
Thranduil was considered the greatest of all Elven kings, but we also
see that he was supported by people who helped him reach that height.
When Legolas realized how much strength Ithilden drew from Alfirin,
Ithilden and Alfirin seemed to parallel the relationship of Thranduil
and his people. Both relationships are closely bound in mutual
support. The loss of peace and the loss of life go hand in hand.

My favorite line: There before Legolas stood the king of the Woodland
Realm, one who would fight the Shadow for every inch of soil, every
rock, and every tree, and if by some mischance, an enemy overcame
him, he would grasp it by the neck to drag it down with him and spit
in its face as he did so. This is a beautiful description of the
unmovable determination of the king in the face of such a personal
loss. Sinnarn's loss was felt by everyone, and each in their own way
held up someone else. Everyone seemed to know that Sinnarn's and
Tynd's deaths were symbolic for all the losses that the woodland
people had known and would know again in the future. They were
markers for the death of peace. Dol Guldur was occupied again, but
the people stood firm with resolve. Emmelin and Elowen's leaving
didn't seem to be an escape from evil, but a symbolic step toward
healing the hurts done to the realm.

However, I can't tell you enough how wonderful I thought this story
was. You outdid yourself.



Title: Glorious Summer · Author: daw the minstrel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 154
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 20:38:01 Score: 10
What a wonderful job you did with stirring up sit-on-the-edge-of-your-
seat suspense! .

This Zalan guy proved to be quite a challenge. He was reckless and
unafraid to cause harm. Not exactly the kind of guy you can reason
with. I was glad to see that the creep was taken out.

I couldn't help it, but I got all hot under the collar that the men
dismissed Celuwen and Isiwen as inferior. This prejudice might have
serve our hero in the end, but still... Jerks. You did a very nice
job of making the villains believable.

What a heart-stopper during the part where it finally dawned on
Legolas that where goes Maltanaur, there goes Eilian. Or the other
way around. At any rate, he has quite an incentive to see this
operation come off smoothly. He would have done his best anyway, but
knowing your brother is most likely in the clutches of the enemy kind
of adds another dose of stress.

Poor Maltanaur. At least he got in some good licks before he went
down. One of my first thoughts was for his wife. She's probably back
at the ranch pacing the floor and telling herself to be calm; it's
not the first time she sensed danger where her mate is concerned. As
I read this, I envision Maltanaur waking to find Eilian (Maltanaur's
wife just stepped out for a moment) at this bedside, his feet propped
on the bed, and a look of mischief in his eyes. Just think how much
delight Eilian will get out of telling his keeper how he and Legolas
saved his hide. So who's the keeper now? As I said, poor Maltanaur.

Loved the settlers not being intimidated by the danger. After all,
they've lived in these woods and had to know how to protect
themselves to some degree. I imagine they're pretty doggone good with
those bows. They just lack the formal training of warriors. .

I'm loved how you maneuvered Legolas and Eilian freeing the hostages.
In the end Celuwen came through as smart and brave, and she did what
she had to do, just like Legolas and Eilian.

I truly got a kick out of Ithilden and Eilian having a
little 'discussion' on who was going to tell Celuwen that she
couldn't dismiss the guards. No one really wanted to tackle that.

This was an exciting ride and one that I thoroughly enjoyed

Title: Flowers in Disguise · Author: Holdur · Races/Places: Hobbits ·
ID: 377
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 22:03:01 Score: 1
A beautiful and tender moment for Sam and his father, as Sam learns
an important lesson.

Title: Moving Mountains · Author: SilverMoonLady · Races/Places:
Hobbits · ID: 627
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 22:03:18 Score: 3
This is such a dark and different look at the circumstances of
Pippin's birth, telling it from Esmeralda's POV, as she struggles to
help her sister-in-law overcome her depression. The author's way of
describing the friendship and pain is very moving.

Title: The Black Ribbon · Author: Rhapsody · Races/Places: Hobbits ·
ID: 767
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 22:03:51 Score: 3
This is the story of a very young Merry and his first encounter with
the Brandywine in flood. The imagery of the floodwaters at night is
so vivid (and accurate--I've been flooded enough to know.) and
Merry's determination to be of help, as young as he is, shows the
seeds of his character are already in place. Very well done!

Title: Sweet Dreams · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races/Places:
Hobbits · ID: 1003
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 22:04:31 Score: 5
This story combines post-Quest angst with pre-Quest reminiscence, as
we get to see just why it is that Pippin so adores his big cousin
Frodo. Frodo is portrayed as loving and understanding to a little lad
who had an accident, and then we get to see his wicked sense of humor
as well. It's so easy to understand why Pippin would have followed
Frodo across Middle-earth. The intertwinings of flashback and present
are skillfully done, and you just find yourself blee<br/><br/>(Message over 64 KB, truncated)