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Title: The Hands that Heal · Author: Jeodo Brandybuck · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Merry & Pippin · ID: 797
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:12:10 Score: 3
In this story of Merry and Pippin in the painful months after Frodo
left, we find the two of them fighting their own griefs by attempting
to help and console one another. The sweet love and care they show
one another, and Pippin's cleverness in disguising his intent are
both funny and touching.

Title: Butterfly · Author: Melilot Hill · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 828
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:12:31 Score: 1
Very sweet bit of childhood fluff. An adorable little vignette.

Title: Whispers In The Night · Author: pippinfan88 · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Merry & Pippin · ID: 838
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:13:01 Score: 3
A thoroughly believable gap-filler, that touches on the roots of
Merry's and Pippin's close friendship, and the worry they both feel
for Frodo on the eve of embarking on the Quest. I especially enjoy
the way the author shows Merry's own dependence on Pippin as well as
the other way round.

Title: Believe Me · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Hobbits: Merry
& Pippin · ID: 878
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:14:02 Score: 4
This story, in which a falsely accused and misunderstood, Pippin runs
away is very absorbing. The author paints a young Pip who is
determined to make it on his own, away from those whom he thinks no
longer care about him. There are a couple of absolutely lovely OCs,
who take him in, and eventually help him realize that just because
they didn't believe him doesn't mean his family didn't love him. And
there is another minor canon character as well who also begins to
learn a lesson.

Title: Cradling · Author: Nickey · Races/Places: Hobbits: Merry &
Pippin · ID: 1100
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:14:29 Score: 2
Merry finds himself helping Pippin through another milestone in his
life. Very subtle hints of slashiness, but even more, the true
affection of life-long friends.

Title: Realisation · Author: Ginger Hobbit · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 1165
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:14:52 Score: 1
Very mildly slashy, but sweet all the same.

Title: A Birthday Party · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 1171
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:15:28 Score: 2
This just makes me smile. Usually it's Merry looking out for Pippin,
but in this one, it's Pippin looking out for his Merry, in his breezy
and Tookish fashion. A very sweet and funny little ficlet, with
undertones of seriousness.

Title: The Best Laid Plans · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Merry & Pippin · ID: 1184
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:15:55 Score: 1
Very funny! Merry learns an important lesson--never forget about
Pippin.

Title: When it Rains · Author: Hai Took · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 1251
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:16:21 Score: 2
This is an adorable bit of young hobbit fluff, with just a touch of
foreshadowing. I especially like the easy way between Merry and
Pippin here, and the give and take between their imaginations.

Title: A Letter Home · Author: Llinos · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin
· ID: 761
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:17:17 Score: 3
This is cute. Such a sweet and naive little missive, glossing over
important details, and hitting just enough of the highlights to turn
his parents grey--if they aren't already from raising him--and
leaving a lot to the imagination. I love the lack of punctuation and
run on sentences--Pippin's mind clearly runs far faster than his pen
can write.

Title: Small · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin ·
ID: 1033
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:17:48 Score: 3
A very nice little vignette, in which Pippin comes to realize that
size is not all that matters. I love the way he is persistent in
searching for the little singer, and his realization of how this
applies to himself. I always love a story which has Pippin singing.

Title: Happy Birthday Professor · Author: Llinos · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 762
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:18:29 Score: 3
These are funny little birthday mathoms in honor of JRR Tolkien's one
hundred and eleventh birthday, and they do indeed, sound as though
they were written by hobbits! I could imagine Merry and Pippin table
dancing to the first, and I could just see Sam with his hands behind
his back, seriously reciting the second.

Title: Arise · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 933
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:18:59 Score: 1
A very well done poem. I can imagine this being proclaimed in the
Hall of Meduseld by a bard.

Title: Hope Everlasting · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Poetry · ID: 948
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:19:20 Score: 1
A rather nice filk, summing up Pippin's feelings before the last
battle.

Title: The Same Story · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits: Poetry
· ID: 956
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:19:42 Score: 1
A very interesting filk, comparing the tale of Beren and Luthien to
the efforts of Frodo and Sam.

Title: What Should Not Be Forgotten · Author: Budgielover ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 179
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:20:29 Score: 3
A very touching a beautiful account of Frodo's realization of all
that his cousins accomplished and endured. I love the way the story
moves from humor and banter to seriousness, without missing a beat or
seeming strained. Gandalf's intervention and praise was just right.

Title: Red Roses, Golden Arrows · Author: Regina · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 507
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:33:39 Score: 3
A banner for Pippin to have for the Battle of Bywater--it makes me
think of the banner that Arwen made for Aragorn. I am sure that
Pippin felt a fierce pride in the faith his family had in his ability
to lead the hobbits in their attempt to throw the ruffians out. I
also enjoyed Pimmie being one of the archers.

Title: First Flower · Author: SilverWolf · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 657
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:33:58 Score: 1
Very sweet! The author captures Sam's nervousness very well.

Title: October Quickenings · Author: Budgielover · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 676
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:34:26 Score: 2
Very nicely done hurt/comfort; Sam's fear, worry and guilt over not
being there is well done. But I really like Frodo's reflections at
the end.

Title: Turnabout · Author: Ariel · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War · ID: 686
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:35:11 Score: 4
Although the author says this is pure hurt/comfort, for it's own
sake, this story is more about the love and loyalty between Merry and
Frodo. The two are trapped in an accident in Minas Tirith after the
Quest, and Merry is injured. The rest of the story is an exploration
of how Frodo tends Merry, and why Merry was the one injured. There is
a beautiful bit of foreshadowing at the end.

Title: Midnight at Bag End · Author: jodancingtree · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 749
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:35:46 Score: 3
Such sad and bitter reflections from Frodo, yet shot through with the
love that he still holds for Sam, Merry, Pippin, Rose and little
Elanor. She shows so clearly how he can still feel pride and joy for
others, though he will accept none for himself. A very moody and
pensive piece.

Title: Growing Pains · Author: Eekfrenzy · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 1068
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:36:18 Score: 2
Poor Merry can't win for losing when he comes back taller than
everyone else except Pippin. It's a very funny look at the long term
effects of the Ent draught, and a very nice Estella, as well.

Title: The Battle of Bywater · Author: Lulleny · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 1093
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:37:10 Score: 3
An incredibly moving piece, full of vivid detail, and the anguish
Frodo felt over the necessity of blood spilling in the Shire. It is
so real: one can see all the details of the battle and its aftermath,
smell the blood, hear the cries. And the bit of foreshadowing at the
end is like a hammerblow.

Title: Beauty · Author: Nickey · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 1099
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:37:34 Score: 2
Sam's sad efforts to persuade Frodo to stay in the Shire on the road
to the Grey Havens are doomed to failure. Frodo's last thoughts in
this are so sad.

Title: The Smell of Mint · Author: Regina · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 1105
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:38:04 Score: 3
This is the dark side of Merry's fierce protectiveness to those he
loves; his hatred for Wormtongue because of his persecution of Eowyn
still festers in him. This is done so well, the description of
Merry's feelings and the details of burying the slain Ruffians stand
out.

Title: Return to Rivendell · Author: Shirebound · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 1115
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:38:59 Score: 6
This is an absolutely beautiful story, a gap-filler of the time spent
in Rivendell by the Travellers on their way home. In The Hobbit, JRRT
indicates that pleasant things don't make much of a story, but this
is one author who can make pleasant and happy things just as
interesting and fun to read as unpleasant ones. The love of the
hobbits for one another and the respect of the Elves for all they
accomplished is so clearly delineated. Remarkably, for this author is
a favorite of mine, I had not read this one before, and am so
grateful to the awards for giving me the opportunity to find this
particular story.

Title: Changes · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-
Ring War Drabble · ID: 231
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:39:25 Score: 1
Wonderful concise piece, making the point that some changes are to
the good!

Title: Namesake · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War Drabble · ID: 301
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:39:48 Score: 1
Yes. I can see such a conversation between Sam and Rose, as they
think what that name will come to mean.

Title: Chasing and Burg'ling · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 580
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:40:11 Score: 1
I just love Frodo's exasperated fond amusement in the face of the
Gaffer's complaints.

Title: A Lesson In Mercy · Author: Vistula the Dunadan ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 638
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:40:32 Score: 1
AAaaawww! That's sweet!

Title: My Hero · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 640
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:40:52 Score: 1
That's so funny!

Title: Earth · Author: Jeodo Brandybuck · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-
War of the Ring · ID: 320
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:41:28 Score: 3
This story is a lovely long read, and so lovingly portrays the pre-
Quest friendships of the four main hobbits, as well as a few others.
Set against a very plausible Shire society, and using a summer fair
as a backdrop, it shows the depth of love and loyalty that came to be
between them all. The plot is intriguing, and there is a good deal of
humor as well.

Title: A conspiracy forged · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 585
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:41:58 Score: 2
This was so sweet! I love Merry looking out for Pip by getting the
pipe back for him--and without having to give up his marvelous dwarf-
horn as well. Great foreshadowing of the Quest.

Title: The Terror of Buckland · Author: Inkling · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 687
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:42:37 Score: 4
In spite of the light-hearted summary for this story, it is not
funny, though it has its funny moments. Instead, it is a finely drawn
account of Frodo's troubled childhood and youth after his parents'
deaths and before he was taken in by Bilbo, and for the reasons
behind his constant thrill-seeking and courting of danger. It is a
very thought-provoking story, and the characterization of the canon
characters is consisitent throughout.

Title: Tall Tales · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 1153
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:54:12 Score: 2
Funny, serious, and sweet by turns, Pippin is a wonderful father and
Faramir a delightful child. And the ending brings tears to my eyes.

Title: Truth and Consequences · Author: Mariposa · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Shire · ID: 837
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 05:10:18 Score: 3
This story covers so many things: the wrong-headedness of ideas that
can ensue when books are written after the fact by those were not
there, the meaning of success and failure, the connections between
the friends and kin, the sorrow for old hurts. But it does so with
real humor and insight.

Title: The Horn-Cry of Buckland · Author: Lulleny · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Shire · ID: 467
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 05:19:02 Score: 2
Like other stories by this author, there is depth to the
characterizations, depth in layers. There is sorrow and pain and
regret, but there is also love, laughter and pride. It's just
beautiful.

Title: Simple Comfort · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 636
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 05:23:24 Score: 1
Very nice. I love the image of Sam; tea is so hobbity, and Aragorn's
musings so fond.

Title: Here sits, in secret, blest Theology · Author: annmarwalk ·
Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 388
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 05:40:21 Score: 3
This is a delightful piece of lore, and a beautifully envisaged scene
of passing on a half-forgotten skill - and then seeing it put to good
use. Tellingly, Faramir uses it for the good of his men as much as
himself - as every good Captain should. Beautifully encapsulted in an
elegantly pared down manner.

Title: Mourning Cloak · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gondor · ID: 394
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 05:47:13 Score: 2
Very touching - Denethor would never be a man to wear his heart on
his sleeve, but to disguise his emotions in black? Aah, that's
another matter - you've caught his character very nicely I think.

Title: Winter Solstice · Author: Fileg · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 727
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 05:59:57 Score: 3
This is tellingly delicate in its precise evocation of honour and,
for Elrond, an undying love. The weariness of command is defined
without resort to extraneous hyperbole, just the stripping away of
outer clothing to reveal the fea laid bare - a lovely metaphor
beautifully executed.

Title: Anglachel · Author: Fileg · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 339
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 06:06:03 Score: 3
I always admire the construction of formal poetry, but often without
feeling drawn in by the piece, but this has emotion - and too spare!
One can almost feel the heat and pressure made palpable in this
exploration of the power and foreboding bitterness of what love will
and does mean to this pairing.

Title: Halbarad · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 341
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 06:11:49 Score: 4
A fantastically powerful evocation of the terror and the dread, in
this case made so human by this voice. If only Peter Jackson could
have read this version - he would have seen it worth spending the
extra half million on bringing the Rangers forward to ride at
Aragorn's side - and the Paths of the Dead would have become the true
spectacle they were meant to be. 'the spectral banners like winding
sheets' will be an image that stays with me - how I wish I had seen
it on screen!

Title: Waiting for a King Like You · Author: Michael Martinez ·
Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 1139
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 07:09:08 Score: 6
This essay examines the decline and fall of the northern empire
compared to the strength and growth of Gondor. To accomplish this,
Michael Martinez draws comparisons to the Roman empires, Egypt and
our own history and the models Professor Tolkien may have used to
create his story. He also goes into great detail about what caused
Arnor to break into three, and why it did not recover after the
second age the way Gondor did using sources both from the Professor
and real peoples. It answers questions I have had about the
differences between the two Numenorean cultures, as well as the
inevitable question of 'what happened to the Dunedain of the north,
why did they fail?'

And I think it shall now be a source for endless new story ideas. And
that alone makes it worth the read.

Title: The Elladan and Elrohir Factsheet · Author: tyellas · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 598
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 07:27:48 Score: 4
Tyellas' Factsheet is on my favourites' list so that I can make sure
I can stay 'in canon' when writing the twins. Are they Peredhil or
Elrondionnath, this factsheet answers the basic questions, provides a
timeline and a sources that back up her statements. An excellent
source that often saves me from having to look it up in the plethora
of books, or at least gives me the right place to look for myself.

Title: Giving Gifts · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Villains ·
ID: 241
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-18 08:41:16 Score: 10

I've been looking for this one and couldn't remember the name, so I
am glad to find it here. I'll say first that I mean no offense to the
rest of the list in my praise of this one outstanding work, so please
take this in the spirit in which it is given. - In my mind, this is a
shining example of what JRRTolkien meant when he spoke of building a
legend for other hands and other works - the dreaded, very nearly
forbidden, all original cast. Dwimordene builds a world within the
world, carefully, oh so carefully using the Middle-earth base, but
creating something entirely her own. It fits - but it's more.
Carefully matching the edges of the puzzle, she adds to the world
with her own art.

In addition to following the first rule of writing - "tell a good
story" - I especially enjoy that study and work clearly shows in this
short story. It is 'active' and 'engaging', as any good writer's
manual will ask you to do, a balanced mix of narrative with the
dialogue, both spoken and internal, it opens with a hook and the
reader's heart is immediately drawn to little Nharadh as he ritually
braids his father's hair for battle. These simple rules and
guidelines that are so often missed in our excitement to share our
work with others pull together in this piece as a shining example of
a piece of original work set firmly in Middle-earth. Great job!

Title: Telling the Bees · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Shire · ID: 343
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 09:00:16 Score: 2
Very sweet, making use of a real folk tradition, and adapting it to
hobbits. I can see Sam doing this, helping to make it real in his own
heart, as well.

Title: Hardiness · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Shire · ID: 372
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 09:03:22 Score: 1
Sam's in his element in this one, as a gardener. He knows, none
better, how resilient nature is. I adore the ending.

Title: The Black Ribbon · Author: Rhapsody · Races/Places: Hobbits ·
ID: 767
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-18 09:51:11 Score: 8
When I usually think of hobbits I think of cakes, tea and cosiness.
Until I read the Black Ribbon, I had not once stopped once to
consider what their lives might actually be like. To be able to get
such a glimpse into their lives is probably one of the more neglected
aspects of the fanfic world. What's more is that we got to see what
Merry, the youngster was like. Merry being one of my favourite
characters, I had already formed an image of what he must have been
like and I was exceptionally happy to see that what I read did not
jar with that picture. Merry was not only cuddly but inquisitive and
smart. I also liked how the families got together when the flood hit.
It shows a lot of understanding ( in my opinion ) of the hobbit
community. It is a great testimony to your writing talent how you
managed to link between the black ribbon on Esme's hair and the black
ribbon as the flood from Merry's perspective. Furthermore, I was glad
it had a happy ending and it left me with a feeling of contentment
and ease much like those I feel when I imagine myself in the shire
with a warm cup of tea and the beautiful sunshine after a long tiring
day!


Title: Real Men Wear Jewelry · Author: Mouse · Genres: Humor · ID: 488
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 09:58:13 Score: 4
Absolutively hilarious. The idea of all these male elves gathering
around in the weight room comparing experiences, and affairs, is so
well done. From the 'poncy Half-Elf' to the 'faintly glowing halo'
that drops on Beleg's head, 'been there-done that' Glorfindel, Gil-
galad of questionable parentage. What an hilarious insight. This is
what a humorous tale should be!

Title: Hobbits: An Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 1158
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:51:22 Score: 6
Given how many Owner's Guide stories have been spawned, it's amazing
how fresh Theresa Green keeps them. I've read other Owner's Guide
manuals by other authors, but they just don't quite measure up.
Tackling all four hobbits as a matched set, Theresa Green gives
pointers on how to tell your hobbits apart ("Huge blue eyes, flawless
porcelain complexion, scar on left shoulder, tendency to get sums
wrong if counting on fingers = FRODO."—the mathematical problem was
brilliant), discovering the contents of Sam's backpack ("short sword
that sings 'Every Breath You Take'" among numerous other things), and
problematic interactions with Boromir models. Another fine addition
to the series!

Title: GimlI: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Humor · ID: 1157
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:51:43 Score: 5
Another hilarious owner's guide to make us appreciate the merits of
the Gimli model. Theresa Greene does not hesitate to stoop to the
level of the bad pun "Glóin-in-the-Dark Enterprises"), to trade
ruthlessly on the three modes of Gimli-Legolas interaction (hostile,
friendly, slash), nor to make certain all three settings of certain
interactions are also taken care of (PG-13 slash, R slash, NC-17
slash). Classic line: "Q: What does dwarven foreplay consist of? A:
The words: "Brace yourself!" Who could resist such a charmer?

Title: The Gift · Author: Theresa Green · Genres: Humor · ID: 1156
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:52:05 Score: 3
Mithril chamber pot. As grateful as Aragorn undoubtedly is after
Legolas' and Gimli's assist with his own love life, I have a feeling
he'll be regretting not having had them offed for the offense to the
throne of Gondor once they bring Eldarion his birthday gift. Catty,
slashy humor abounds, among other amusing banter. Well done, Ms.
Green.

Title: Aragorn: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 1154
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:52:43 Score: 5
The first of the "Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual" series that I
read, I do believe, and for obvious reasons. I'd be hard pressed to
pick a single section to highlight as particularly funny, but
the "unpacking" procedure, complete with footnote, that sets up a bit
of a running gag about Aragorn units and cleanliness, is always
entertaining. Would that other technical writers had the sense of
humor of a Theresa Green, but then I suppose their products are a bit
lacking in the care and maintenance area...

Title: The Last Elf Standing · Author: Suzene Campos · Genres: Humor:
Elves · ID: 1124
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:53:11 Score: 6
It may be OOC, but it's entirely too funny. Elrond, however, does
admittedly get his butt kicked in this bit of extended verbal
warfare. From the first letter's priceless analysis of Elrond's and
Cirdan's failure to convince Isildur to destroy the Ring ("I have a
longsword, a bone to pick, and I'm quite ready to take up your
counseling duties if you and that barnacle-faced old salt are having
difficulties bringing yourselves to use more than harsh language in
correcting this problem") to some of the worst musical "hits" to be
imagined (Tom Bombadil's Greatest Disco Hits), to the Middle-earth
Sierra Club, this fic comes through with some memorable zingers.

Title: Flowers in His hair · Author: LKK · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID:
1028
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:53:41 Score: 1
Took a second to get oriented as to who the speakers are. Cute and
quick.

Title: Anticipation · Author: LOTR_lover · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID:
1092
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:55:08 Score: 2
Well written, this is a classic gag. Coitus interruptus gets a new
meaning as Glorfindel finds that well laid plans still fail when
unwanted others continual come barging in on private moments.

Title: When pigs do Fly · Author: Elendiari22 · Genres: Humor:
Animals · ID: 975
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:59:02 Score: 3
An amusing story. The Emyn Arnen menagerie ought to be one of the
wonders of the Fourth Age world. Still, I rather liked the "frog
incident" in all its mystery. Rather like the "noodle incident" of
Calvin and Hobbes fame, it has its power in being mysterious in
itself but in getting reactions out of those who hear of it.

Title: All I Want for Yuletide · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 932
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:59:31 Score: 1
In the fine tradition of Legolusting parodies; I particularly liked
the "Dwarves delve deep" line...

Title: In the Style of Ogden Nash · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Humor: Poetry · ID: 917
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:59:58 Score: 2
This is doggerel, and I mean that in the best possible way. I
particularly loved the summary of "The Council of Elrond", and that
long parenthetical note!

Title: Important Choices · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Hobbits · ID: 879
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 11:00:28 Score: 1
Cute! I liked Pippin's fashion coup and his parting line.

Title: Ode to the Absent · Author: thevina_finduilas · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 849
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 11:00:51 Score: 4
Definitely a piece of humor with a bite! And yet so very true—the
absolute dearth of motherly presences shows up. Sam, Merry and Pippin
are the only members of the Fellowship whose mothers we know with
certainty didn't die young or leave Middle-earth. One wonders what's
worse: the deaths of Frodo's, Sam's, and Boromir's mothers, or the
total anonymity of Legolas' and Gimli's. Good job, Thevina, to
highlight the sad fate of the Middle-earth mothers.

Title: Fathers' Day Card from Faramir · Author: Llinos · Genres:
Humor: Poetry · ID: 788
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 11:01:17 Score: 4
So glad to see this again. Llinos captures the animosity of father
and son, and manages to make it hysterical. Faramir, the perpetually
overshadowed, would of course write a card for dear old Dad, but that
it starts off reminding Denethor of his existence ("Remember me? The
other one?") is immediately funny, and the rest just sort of flows
from there. Well done!

Title: A Foolish Thing · Author: Dana · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1031
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-18 11:11:30 Score: 3
Skilfully woven, passing between Merry's self-recriminations
(excellent use of repetition with the phrase "he should have seen it
coming") and Pippin's experience with the Palantir. Dana has a clear
grasp of her characters, and leaves the reader with a bittersweet
tang after the story's close.

Title: Hoped, At Least · Author: Dana · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1131
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-18 11:12:38 Score: 3
This has got to be my favourite "Dana" story to date. (Of course,
Beregond is my favourite Mannish character, and that might have
something to do with it.) She weaves thought and action, dialogue and
description into a wondeful wholeness that leaves the reader somehow
wanting more.

Title: Lightness · Author: Dana · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits ·
ID: 1230
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-18 11:13:42 Score: 3
"Lightness" is a very nice picture of Merry waiting hopeful-
hopelessly for Pippin to awaken at Cormallen. The words going through
his head ring true; he is caught in regret and memory and even
futility... and it is fitting that Pippin wakens, just at the right
moment, to lead him out of his dark thoughts.


Title: Dragons or Ribbons · Author: Joanna · Genres: Humor: Children
· ID: 443
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-18 11:47:54 Score: 6
I remember reading this a long time ago and I was so pleased to find
it here and read it again. I thought this was absolutely wonderful.
The characterization of Legolas was perfect and Aragorn's little
daughter was absolutely adorable. I thought I would die laughing when
she granted Legolas permission to come let her play with his hair.
Needless to say I almost died when Gimli and Aragorn came in on the
scene--that was priceless!

I also loved the touching little parts of this, like the fact that
Legolas had painted her room and her repsonse: "Ada's dearest friend,
and one who loves me very much," she answered automatically, as if
she'd been well-versed in the tale. when Legolas asks if she knew who
painted it.

This is a really great story!

Title: The Warrior · Author: daw the minstrel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 155
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 12:16:48 Score: 10
You wrapped this one up with your usual skill of insight into your
characters and balanced it with an old fashioned good read.

I'm glad you have insight, because poor Tinar is blind as a bat.
Foril's song was a hoot and it was one that everyone 'got' but the
victim. Tinar is so much fun to hate.

Certainly, it was good to see Legolas get a chance to go home. I had
wondered if Thranduil sensed something was amiss with his youngest
when Legolas was wounded. Ithilden handled himself well when faced
with the injury of his 'baby brother' and even gained some insight
into his own mistakes with Eilian.

BUT, my favorite scene was with Thranduil and Beliond....and that
says a lot since Eilian did drop his clothes all over his chamber on
the way to his bath. The more I see of the Beliond, the more I like
him. He's not just a good babysitter, he's a wise elf who was not
afraid to be honest with his king about his task. I loved the line
where he said Legolas reminded him of Thranduil at his age, but was
more biddable. Well, that was a good reminder to the king that he had
once been a handful, too....and still is in his own way. Fortunately,
Thranduil was able to put aside his fatherly fear and see the wisdom
of Beliond's words. I stood up and cheered!

You've done such a good job with peeling away the layers of Eilian's
personality. He's young and he makes mistakes, but I can't help but
want to tell him he should know better. And he does learn better, but
at the moment and in this story, you did a wonderful job of setting
up all the interferences he and Celuwen have that come from not only
their personality differences, but also from outside influence.
Solith has also contributed to the problems. I'm sure he loves his
daughter, but he has not acted wisely as a leader..and, maybe, not
even as a father. I love how you've made these people so real and
complicated.

A bright point was certainly the news of Annael's betrothal.

Wonderful as always, Daw.

Title: Passwords · Author: White Gull · Genres: Humor · ID: 1210
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 14:23:34 Score: 2
*snork!* An interesting interweaving with canon. The innuendo (and
outright admissions) fly pretty thick in this one, but all in good
fun.

Title: Legolas: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 1193
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 14:24:01 Score: 2
I think the most amusing section in this is the Q&A part, wherein we
learn how to deal with the million fangirls who mysteriously appear
upon the front lawn as soon as your Legolas unit has been activated.
Hysterical!

Title: Magnetic Force · Author: Marnie · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 1097
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 15:05:43 Score: 4
This is the first fanfic I ever read and got me hooked. It is written
so believably that you start wondering if it could be real -- is that
how Tolkien came up with the idea of Middle Earth? Do Elves exist,
was Aragorn real? This is a wonderful modern day tale of 'the girl
who falls into Middle-earth' but it is written with such detail, and
taking into account the various strange phenomena that exist that it
makes the idea of discovering Rivendell in this day in age totally
believable.

Title: Back to the Valley · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Elves · ID: 590
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-18 15:26:02 Score: 5
I think the strength of this story shows itself in the simple fact
that only a glance at the title meant I recalled almost all the
poignancy and power of the narrative.

The author employs an amazingly subtle and effective use of
interchanging light and dark imagery in order to show how memories
can carry us through our darkest times and that personhood is
impossible to destroy. The elf in the story still retains something
of himself despite all his years of abuse and mistreatment.

I really do applaud an author who can deliver such a powerful
emotional punch in so few words.

Title: The Very Model of a Warden of Lothlorien · Author: Kenaz ·
Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 614
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-18 15:41:19 Score: 3
This is the most brilliant parody I have ever read. The author
obviously knows Tolkien inside out. This knowledge has been welded to
a fantastic sense of rhythm and meter and has produced a hilarious
poem which fans of Gilbert and Sullivan will find compulsively
hummable.

Title: Back to the Valley · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Elves · ID: 590
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 15:52:55 Score: 4
This is a very moving story of an elf at the end of the third age,
held captive in Barad-dur as the dark forces attempt to extract
information from him and how he copes. Thundera Tiger has written a
brilliantly dark story infused with slivers of light as the elf
retreats into his memories to avoid the pain. The reader can only
pray that the Elf finds his release one way or another once the walls
of Barad-dur come down.

Title: Beyond This World · Author: Thundera Tiger · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 32
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 16:32:46 Score: 6
"The whispered words seemed to be torn from the very fabric of his
languishing soul"

That set the stage for me in reading this poignant story of Legolas
facing Gimli's death. I found myself in tears by the end of the first
chapter, both for the beautiful way Thundera wrote Gimli's death, and
for the anguish that Legolas felt.

Thunera reached such depth of emotion - grief, anguish, denial - in
this story and reflects the feelings we have all felt in having to
deal with the loss of someone we love and the rage that is felt, the
questions that are asked.

A wonderfully indepth story, questions asked and answered in two
chapters. This is one to be read, and re-read many times over.

Title: Enigmas- The Life and Love of Linwe and Frodo · Author:
MysteriousWays · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 868
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 16:56:02 Score: 1
An unusual AU Romance for Frodo. The OFC is unique, and the story is
very sweet. A few modernisms, but an absorbing plot.

Title: Aragorn Himself Waits for a Sign · Author: Gwynnyd ·
Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 392
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 16:58:57 Score: 1
Very telling, indicating Aragorn's state of mind after the War was
ended.

Title: Replacements · Author: Meril · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
General Drabble · ID: 486
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 17:00:51 Score: 1
Nice drabble from an unusual POV.

Title: The Greater Gift · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: General Drabble · ID: 540
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 17:02:04 Score: 1
Beautiful and powerful. The last line has impact.

Title: Where Roses Grow · Author: pippinfan88 · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 589
Reviewer: MysteriousWays · 2005-08-18 17:21:13 Score: 10
I have to be honest I am a bit biased when it comes to this story.
You see, I happened to be a consultant to the author through the
early stages of the story. Pippinfan and I developed a friendship
thanks to this story and for that reason I love it but there not for
that reason alone.

A little over a year ago PearlTook asked me if her friend Pippinfan88
could ask me some questions about becoming pregnent without benefit
of marriage. (I have experience there). I agreed and soon became
quite caught up in the project of writing this story. I think the
reason for this is because it is so very different from any Pippin
story I have ever read. In fact is quite different from any fan
fiction I have ever read.

Pippinfan88 did with this what I have notice she does with much of
her fan fiction. She pulled an issue from our modern world and
applied it to The Shire and wove a story around it. The issue of
unplanned pregnency between two underaged people is most aggreeably a
highly sensative one. Pippinfan88 handles it with exquisite delicacy
and sensativity.

The characters for our belove "The Lord of the Rings" have truly
reached mythic proportions. For me, as a reader, I like to seek out
those fanfictions that look at our heros as common folk dealing with
the more common issues of life.

In stories dealing with Post Quest Pippin I feel that all too often
he is made out to be too immature for a person of his experience in
life or he is portrayed as too old. In putting Pippin in the
situation this story does I think it portrays what I feel Pippin
likely was at that point a young hobbit teetering on the edge of
child and adulthood. Wise beyond his years yet still young and
innocent as well.

I found the character of Lilas to be much like Pippin. She too
possessed much wisdom and understanding of life yet at the same time
she also had these great gaps in her understanding. Lilas was a
perfect compliment to Pippin.

I once read an annonymous review of this story where the reviewer
harshly criticised this writer for glamourizing the plight of
underaged parenthood. The writer was accused of over symplifying the
issue. I do not believe that particular writer actually read the
entire story as it was posted at that time. "Where Roses Grow"
accurately and tenderly portrays the trials this subject. The
characters find no easy solutions if infact any true "solution" is to
be had, but rather do what we all must in the face of adversity, and
that is the best we can. Sometimes their efforts do not turn out as
they had hoped at other times they are surprised with moments that
have them feeling unexpected joy and wonder. Perhaps most
importantly, throughout the story Pippin finds that his moment of
indiscretion with Lilas has resulted in him being haunted by
insecurity as to the true depths of his feelings for her. He lives
with a continual sense of guilt that perhaps this young hobbitess
that he found so deserving of deep meaningful love did not get that
from him as he felt she ought.

This story is filled with touching moments both happy and
heartbreaking. The emotions of the characters were so finely
illustrated that I truely feel I was able to share in their feelings.
This is a story that this is a story that will never be easily
forgotten by me.

Thank you, T, for inviting me to assist you in bringing this story to
life. I will always be honored by the experience. -Myst


Title: Sacrifice Under Shadow · Author: daw the minstrel · Genres:
Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1319
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:09:49 Score: 10
I loved in this story how you showed Legolas coming into his own.
He's proven himself to Eilian and to the keepers. Not that Beliond
will take his eyes of him, but he must feel proud that his charge
reacted so proficiently in such horrible circumstances.

It was a testament to how shaken Maltanaur was that he was snapping
at everyone. Fortunately, he made peace with Legolas by praising
him...after he had gotten himself under control. Control came a
little harder to Legolas. But who can blame him? He had put his heart
and soul into seeing his brother safe. I suppose one doesn't just
turn that kind of concern off like a light switch. Like Maltanaur
said: "He could not imagine what would separate the sons of Thranduil
from one another unless true disaster had befallen them." Knowing
what love and devotion there is between these two, Maltanaur's
thought was truly a frightening one. And he loves Eilian like his own
son. This is another example of how well you do characterizations.
Each personality is distinct.

I got such a kick out of Beliond expanding Legolas's vocabulary.
Well, that's a good thing. When the time comes for Legolas to hang
out with mangy rangers, gruff dwarves and rough-riding Rohirrim,
he'll be educated.

The scene with Eilian and Ithilden in the garden was so well done.
Poor Ithilden. He's so strong and competent and for the shadow to be
returning must feel like a personal failure to him. He had already
seen what horrors the shadow brings and to be faced with it again was
just heartbreaking. It was certainly an eye-opener for Eilian.

I loved Thranduil at the end. For as tough and solid a ruler as he
is, he's such a good adar. While he and Eilian may be at odds from
time to time, his love for Eilian is no less strong than it is for
his other two sons. I think Eilian needs to know that, too. I imagine
he may feel oftentimes that he doesn't live up to his adar's
expectations. It's good for them to have these downtimes when both of
their defenses are lowered and they can just love each other. Too bad
it has to be when Eilian has nearly been killed! They have really had
to grope in the dark for each other without Naneth to be their
guiding light.

Your writing is always strong and your characters so real that the
reader feels they each one personally. As always, just a delightful
tale.


Title: Time's Turnings · Author: daw the minstrel · Races/Places:
Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 156
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:15:13 Score: 10
I watched with great interest to see how Ithilden handled his
encounter with his wayward son. Ithilden did well. He didn't scold,
kept his composure and put the ball in Sinnarn's court. Good tactics
when dealing with hormonally-driven teenagers. And Sinnarn does have
a lot to juggle. I loved how you showed Sinnarn trying to learn to be
himself while following in the footsteps of some powerful
personalities. Fortunately, he wants to be a warrior and that's a
load off his father's mind. Though, I know Ithilden would allow him
to do something else if he wasn't suited to the warrior life. But it
would still be tough.

Eilian shrugged. "Surely you do not want his spirit to be destroyed
by life in the palace?" He shot Thranduil a provocative grin. LOL!
That Eilian. He's always such fun.

"What I want is for him to survive to adulthood," Ithilden said
emphatically. Thranduil could only sympathize. At times, he had been
reduced to wanting the same thing for each of his own sons. As the
parent of teenage males, I can say that I identify. All you can hope
for sometimes is survival until they can gain some sense. And
Eilian's right; sometimes all we have are the basics.

I also love how Thranduil was wise with the distance of not
interfering in Ithilden's parenting of Sinnarn, but the worm turned
when the commander said he was going to reassign Legolas. The father-
role was sliding all over the place in that scene. Very well done.

And poor Galelas. You have taken Galenas through his own journey in
your stories. He needs someone like Eilian. Not only is Eilian his
captain, but he's a good friend. Eilian has always been perceptive
about people and this is one example of how Eilian has put his gifts
to use. Galelas is a sad figure. He's trying. And of course, knowing
his fate, makes the kindnesses shown by Eilian even more poignant.

I was glad to see Beliond teaching Legolas to pick locks. I think
that speaks of his acceptance of Legolas's ongoing maturity. And I
was pleased that he spoke some about his son. They are beginning to
understand each other better. Beliond might be a grouch, but I think
he's a kind, caring grouch underneath the rough exterior.

I love this story, Daw. So much subtle growth and understanding in
every paragraph! As always, I hate to see your stories end.

Title: Creature of Fire · Author: daw the minstrel · Races/Places:
Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1218
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:20:54 Score: 10
This is a wonderful examination of grief and the rebuilding of
shattered lives, daw. The pain is still there for Legolas, but he's
slowly taking steps back toward coping and going on.

I really liked the scene where Legolas vaguely recalls returning
home. I could see and feel how exhausted he was from the shock and
grief. He had managed to hang on until Thranduil arrived and then he
could give control over to his adar and he could just sleep. Maybe
even simply escape for a while into sleep. You've created such
wonderfully strong and complex characters. I like the way you let us
ride along on the roller coaster of Legolas's swinging emotions.


He was still having a hard time seeing happy couples and accepting
comfort from his family. He did allow Thranduil to comfort him in his
chambers, but he quickly wanted to get away.
The scene where he went to see Galelas was also nicely done. These
two hardheaded elves are making small steps toward understanding one
another. Legolas also got a glimpse into Galelas's family. Nothing
like seeing how bad some other people have it to appreciate how good
you have it.

Have I mentioned how much I love Beliond lately? He's straight to the
point, isn't he? "Get your gear. We are going camping." No hello, no
kiss my foot, just get moving. But he was right that what Legolas
needed was some quiet time. And he gave it to him. He's a softy for a
tough old bird. And he's quite wise. From personal experience. He's
such a well drawn character.

I was also glad to see Annael. He's a good friend and his mother
certainly did have a good understanding of what Legolas was suffering
at this point. Sweet Elowen. It was good for Legolas to see people
who had experienced what he was going through and see that they had
survived.

Of course, the best example was Adar. The talk in the garden was
perfect. Not too long and full of spoken and unspoken wisdom.
Legolas's sudden memory of his mother was comforting. I'm sure if
Lorellin has any 'Elven magic' at her disposal, she's doing all she
can from wherever she is. The scene was a lovely exchange between a
father and his 'adult' son. I liked the way Thranduil related so
honestly with Legolas during this talk.

I know you nearly went nuts writing so much angst and from writing
only from Legolas's perspective, but I have to say that you did an
amazing job. This is such a good story. Full of everything that makes
a story good. You have much to be proud of in this one.

Great, great story, daw.


Title: May the Valar Protect Them · Author: Nilmandra · Books/Time:
The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 1055
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:37:47 Score: 10
I read this story quite a while ago and to go back and review it
again was such a delight. In this story, you've woven a complex and
heart wrenching tale to create a gap filler in Legolas's life. The
family you created for him is extraordinarily good. Each character
has a unique personality and each one is important to the story.
There were no wasted words or wasted scenes in telling this story.
Everything fit together like a large jigsaw puzzle and the final
picture was a glorious scene of Legolas's beginning.

Tathiel was such a strong female character. Her struggles to keep the
children safe and alive were almost more than any one person could
survive, but she did what she had to do. And during all the terrible
trials of trying to keep the children safe and get them back home,
she never ran out of love for the little ones. I can't tell you how
much I liked her. It's so nice to see a female character who is
strong, realistic and admirable. Her strength was understated in such
a way that she simply was doing what was right and what came from her
heart and this made her entirely believable. Tathiel is a brilliantly
written character.

Thranduil's grief was difficult to read at times, but then, that's
what grief is...difficult to bear. His strength of character is what
kept him and his family together in the face of such loss. And all
the while, he still ran a kingdom well enough that he was remembered
as the greatest elvenking. Your characterization of him was perfect
for someone to be remembered in such a way.

I could go on and on, but instead of boring you with a blow by blow
of all the things I found outstanding in this story, let me just say
that the story was absolutely wonderful. You wrote a complex piece
about complex people in a complex and difficult situation. And you
pulled it off without a hitch.

Well done, Nilmandra.

Title: History Lessons · Author: Nilmandra · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion · ID: 1056
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:43:17 Score: 10
Nilmandra,
What a wonderful story. It seems Elrond still has trouble with
revealing his emotions to others, but he has found some closure to
the pain of losing his brother through the stories and in talking to
his wife. When he talked about feeling the emptiness when Elros died
and how it would never go away, but new threads had woven around that
space...well...it was just such a indication of his strength and
perseverance. While Elros seemed to be more emotionally open than he
did, Elrond was still able to love.

Elladan and Elrohir were absolutely delightful as little bundles of
joy, compassion and youthful questions. They and, of course,
Celebrian, were the balm that soothed and opened Elrond's heart. He
was right when he thought of all the wonderful support he had been
gifted with throughout his life. It's obvious Elrond was well loved
and his past experiences had helped him become such an elf that was
worthy of this devotion. You painted this trail with vibrant strokes,
minute detail and rich colors. The portrait of Elrond!

My favorite line was what Celeborn said of our golden balrog
slayer: "Who knew that a mighty Balrog slayer would make such a fine
nanny?" mused Celeborn. I loved this. It was a simple statement meant
in jest, but revealed the quality of those who surrounded Elrond and
his family.

The entire story was such a wonderful gift to your readers. You wove
a very interesting and informative story. We got a view that even
Tolkien could not offer in such understandable, yet, beautiful
language.

We got to know Elros. I found him likeable, loving and full of a
bright energy that seeded the best of what man would become. However
as the ages passed and the further man drifted from the light that
led them, they fell into darkness. As testament to the strength of
Elros' blood, the light did not go out completely as we found when
his descendent, Aragorn, brought that seed back to Middle Earth.
Elrond's cost was high in this, as well.

Again, this was such a wonderful piece of work. I can't tell you how
impressed I am with the completeness of it and the detail of
character you expounded on and created. This is one of the most
beautiful writings I've encountered in the fanfiction genre and in
the traditional publishing world.

Title: History Lessons: The Second Age · Author: Nilmandra ·
Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 1057
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:50:38 Score: 10
You covered a lot of ground in this story, but you did it with such
skill. You created a wonderful story to make the Second Age
accessible to the reader in a way that was entertaining and
enlightening.

The death of Gil-galad was heartbreaking. Of course, I wasn't exactly
surprised, but your descriptions made it so real and personal as we
viewed it for the first time with Elrond. Such a horrible death too.

I've enjoyed seeing how you brought the rings to life and the
physical connection the rings make to their bearer. Very impressive.
And didn't Elrond find some nice little side effects? No wonder
Sauron wanted the One Ring back at all costs. He'd go from Pee Wee
Herman to the Brad Pitt of Middle-earth. Explains why those kings
wanted those rings so badly too. Handy little gadgets. :>)

Seriously, this was a great touch. Elrond became hyper-aware, his
sense sharpened and his healing skills heightened. With such power at
one's disposal, it's easy to see how seductive the rings were.

The ending was nice with Glorfindel standing watch over the love of
two of the people he loved most.

Again you've written a story where all the characters are vibrant and
real to the reader. Obviously, you've put a lot of thought and work
into this. It shows. Reading this has been such a treat for me.
Understanding the Silmarillion is a chore at best, but when you
explain it, I could simply get caught up in the story and go along
for the ride. Absolutely wonderful. I loved every word.



Title: Hunting · Author: Nilmandra · Genres: Adventure: Long Form ·
ID: 1307
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:57:00 Score: 10
Nilmandra,

What a delightful story. If Legolas were any cuter, he could stop the
shadow with his infectious giggle.

The scene where he was 'the clue' was great. What a trusting little
fellow to jump out of the tree right into Elladan's arms. Good thing
Elladan was paying attention. The relationship that developed between
the little princeling and the big twins was such fun. Since we know
that the elves loved their children dearly, it was nice to see the
adult non-adas taking such an interest in the little one. This child
was truly cherished.

I'm glad the twins are back to normal. That's nice to see..not that I
was too worried. I don't think there's anything that could separate
them for long. I love how you allow the twins to have different
personalities and the clashes of ordinary siblings. That's the real
world, but it doesn't diminish the love between brothers to have a
few differences now and then.

The games were wonderful. What a good imagination you have. I
wouldn't have been able to come up with much more than pin-the-tail-
on-the-donkey. It was such fun to read. Well...and Sadron got a face
full of dirt and grass. Payback can be dirty. :>)

The ending with Thranduil was nicely done. This was my favorite
line: "Thranduil set him on a stool near the table almost
reluctantly, for he enjoyed having an elfling to hold as he moved
among his people." Ah...such a good ada. It brought such a good
visual to me as I read it.

Another wonderful story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.



Title: Blizzard! · Author: Nilmandra · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1308
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 21:00:16 Score: 9
What a sweet story. There was excitement, and I admit that I got
teary eyed a few times. This is one of those stories where you need
to put a tissue warning on it. Little Legolas's hurt feelings were so
realistic. My heart ached for the little guy. He simply couldn't
understand why anyone would be so cruel, especially when all he had
wanted was to be friends. Oh my...just broke my heart! Actually, I
was glad in the end when Abronwë turned out to be good kid at heart.
His sadness was understandable and he dealt with it inappropriately,
but in a childlike manner. The scene between Thranduil and the kids'
families was nice. Thranduil handled it well when I'm sure he wanted
to jerk a knot in the tail of anyone who had hurt his child.

Mirthrandir was a pleasant surprise. I'd like him and his 40 watt
staff to show up if I were stuck out in a blizzard and covered over
with snow.

I love how you weave so many little subplots into your stories.
Like...there might some love brewing in the palace for Lathron? This
would be nice to see. I like the old boy and would like to see him
have a little excitement in his life. He's too calm. He needs a nice
feisty elleth to shake his world up a little.

I really enjoyed this, Nilmandra.


Title: Interrupted Journeys: Part One - New Journeys · Author:
elliska · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1309
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 21:16:55 Score: 10
All of your Mirkwood stories have been wonderful to read, but as I
went back to review this story, I found that I enjoyed it even more
this time.

Your characters are so rich and full. Each one has a distinct
personality and some of those traits are occasionally...less than
desirable. Oh, my...so real. And still a great deal of fun to read.

The politics of any age are nearly beyond me, and I stand in awe of
how well you write intrigue. Thranduil has found himself as a new
king and with all the problems of ruling...many that he didn't
create, but inherited. It's very believable the way you've set up the
relationships between the different elven realms and their leaders.

The courtship of Thranduil and Lindomiel was a delight. Her father is
certainly not one to be trifled with. But what makes him so good is
that he's not just an ordinary ada protecting his little elleth; he's
got real history with Oropher that has colored the way he views
Thranduil. And Thranduil, being Oropher's son, is not one to back
down. You taken two strong personalities and put them head to head.
Of course, Lindomiel isn't a shrinking violet. She might be young,
but she's shaping up to be a woman of strength and character. I love
a good strong female character who is capable and realistic.

The Marty subplot should prove to be quite interesting. Again you've
created a fascinating character that is realistic and not just an
ordinary cardboard cutout. Even though we didn't get to see much of
her, the little we saw was handled so well that she came to life.

This is a terrific story and one that I've followed from the
beginning. It's an impressive story of depth and complexity, but most
of all, it's fun. I love this series.

Title: Interrupted Journeys: Part Two - Journeys Perforce · Author:
elliska · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1310
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 21:34:49 Score: 10
Elliska,

I really enjoyed your explanation of why and when Thranduil moved his
people north. Tolkien tells us little about the moves the wood-elves
made and leaves us to speculate about most of the details. I'm not
entirely certain, but I don't he was ever clear about when the people
moved to the stronghold in the northeastern corner of Mirkwood. This
isn't an entirely bad thing since it give the imaginative writer a
lot of wiggle room. And you're certainly an imaginative writer. Your
set up is completely plausible. Once again, I'm awed by how well you
writer political entanglements.

One of the points of your characterizations I liked is that everyone
is struggling to come to grips with the changes. The move wasn't just
a simple 'let's move' and nearly an entire kingdom just up and moved
without any trouble. Elves might have been easier going in some
aspects than men, but they were intelligent and strong willed and
bound to the Greenwood. Having a few glitches in the moving machinery
is to be expected and you did a wonderful job of rounding out all the
problems that can arise when changing the lives of a group of people.
No matter how well they get along normally...or how much they
disagree...there's bound to be trouble.

Your characterizations are outstanding and your battle scenes are
quite well done! Battle scenes are especially tough, I think, and you
seem to catch a natural flow and just let the battle unfold for the
reader. Just wonderful.

I've enjoyed this tale very much and look forward to following the
next part. Like your other stories in this series, this one is just a
delight to read.

Title: Interrupted Journeys: Part Three - Journeys Begin · Author:
elliska · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1311
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 21:42:08 Score: 10
Another terrific read. I've become really invested in your
characters.

You tackled some difficult, but interesting topics in this one.
Thranduil handled the interrogation of Tulus well. What to do with an
immortal being in terms of punishment is certainly a tough one. And
since the elves were supposedly wise...in most instances...wisdom
should cut both ways. Still, just living begets mistakes. Then...it
turns into a big old mess. Not only have Tulus and his cohorts been
involved in sedition, but they've tried to capture/assassinate the
queen and the commander's wife. Not to mention that in the process,
the children were endangered. Thranduil's in a tough place. You did a
nice job of showing how miscommunication/misinterpretation of actions
can result in bad feelings. Tulus has obviously matured and
reconsidered his anger, but he's in so deep now that he'll be lucky
to survive the wrath of She-Who-Can-Carry-a-Grudge. And boy, oh boy,
this grudge has become her life's work.

I have to say though, I'm disappointed in Glílavan. Really, I wanted
to give him the benefit of the doubt. However, it looks like he has
his own agenda...or is still mixed up in SWCCAG's. The bad news is
that he's young and apparently a chip off the old block. I hope his
adar can pound some sense into his head before he ends up as fish
food. Thranduil is wise to not trust either of these fellows.

Such intrigue! What in all of Arda did Oropher do to the elleth and
her family? If nothing else, it demonstrates a frightening level of
determination." I love this line. Determined, indeed. Crazy as a bat
without a belfry! I can't wait to hear what Galadriel and Celeborn
have to say. Surely, the Lady of Light remembers Marti. Surely...

The growth and development of your characters is a delight to watch.
I've really liked the way Amglaur's and Thranduil's relationship has
changed over the years. It's taken a while, but finally Amglaur has
had to admit that Thranduil is devoted to his daughter. Amglaur even
called Thranduil 'ion-nin'. Minor little slip there, but very
telling.

I also liked what Thranduil had to say about how Evil had shaped his
life and how he wanted to focus Legolas on the beauty of Arda rather
than the darkness. And Amglaur is so impressed that he's going to
stay until Legolas is grown. Oh joy! Still, the relationship is
better and there's a chance that it might be civil. A chance....

Marti isn't going to give up, is she? The fact that she believes that
she still has allies...now even closer to the king...is rather
chilling.

This story was wonderful. I really think the stories just get better
and better. There's never a disappointing moment. The story is full
of action, excitement and wonderful characters. A true adventure.

Title: Life in the Angle · Author: Leaward · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 181
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 22:01:09 Score: 10
This story has been such a fun adventure to read. The complex plot
has kept the readers on pins and needles as to what Titheniel will do
next. All the characters have been fun to get to know. It's the sweet
love story of a young couple and the trials and tribulations of two
cultures clashing on an unexpected battlefield with the young couple
caught in the middle. Innocent young couple, I might add. But not
everyone is innocent and corruption has a way of infiltrating into
the lives of those who do nothing to deserve it. Poor Poppi.

Oh my! Titheniel really did it this time. She pushed the limits of
everyone's kindness and did it with grand style. She's made Poppi's
life miserable since the poor Bree lass arrived. But in the end,
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