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Title: Tall Tales · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 1153
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:45:05 Score: 4
This author does such a great job of connecting Pippin's quest
adventures to his experiences later on as a father. It is also funny
that the once adventurous Pippin who drove his older cousins crazy
with his daring is now worried about his son's mischief. I loved
Faramir in this tale and the ending with Pippin's silent thanks to
Frodo for saving the Shire so that he son could enjoy it was perfect!

Title: Small · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin ·
ID: 1033
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:47:31 Score: 3
This author always finds an interesting way to look at things in her
tales. I loved her story of a frustrated young Pippin who hasn't
grown as tall as he would like and is mistaken for younger than he is
and his realization that even though he is rather small he can still
do some things very well and make his voice heard. Lovely!

Title: More Than Cousins · Author: pearltook1 · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): The Shire · ID: 1034
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:50:24 Score: 4
This may have been the very first story that I read by this wonderful
author. I still go back and read it again from time to time. I love
Merry and Pippin's relationship in this story and the way that both
of them want to apologize to the other so desperately and are afraid
that they won't get the chance to do so. The ending is sweet and the
characters are so well written.

Title: While We Dwelt in Fear · Author: pearltook1 · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 632
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:54:35 Score: 6
So much good to say about this one. I loved all of the characters in
this one but for obvious reasons Esmeralda Brandybuck is the stand-
out for me. The author's use of the Took fairie blood forming a bond
between Pippin and Esmeralda while Pippin is off on the quest is so
well done. I also like the worry and frustration of Esmeralda who can
only experience her son's situation through Pippin. The rest of the
Shire is included in this tale as well while they struggle on against
the evil that holds the Shire in its grip while Frodo, Merry, Pippin
and Sam are away. This is very creative and very well done. I was
sorry when it was finished.

Title: As Good As You · Author: pearltook1 · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 854
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:56:20 Score: 2
A very heartwarming look at the relationship between Pippin and his
father. Sweet and inspiring. All children should be this close to
their parents.

Title: And the Halfling Forth Shall Stand · Author: Shirebound ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 511
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:57:20 Score: 3
No one writes Frodo's POV like Shirebound! I love her insight into
his character and her care with the other characters as well. This
story is a joy to read. Frodo's thoughts are very in keeping with his
own personality throughout the entire story.

Title: A Matter of Time · Author: Shirebound · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural · ID: 514
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:59:08 Score: 2
I enjoyed this interesting look at why Elrond made the decisions that
he did when selecting the Fellowship. This was very creative and a
great read.

Title: Fairer Than Most · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 69
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 05:01:11 Score: 1
Very funny and very hobbity on all counts. I love the banter in this
one.

Title: Stars and Sniffles · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 817
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 05:02:48 Score: 2
I love this. The stars actually become characters in this wonderful
tale. Pippin is delightful and Gandalf ever the wise protector of
small hobbits. This is a delight to read and so very imaginative!

Title: Eclipsed by the Moon · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Romance:
Vignette · ID: 989
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:25:52 Score: 2
Warned by the summary, I did guess the man in question before he was
named. Nevertheless, an entertaining change from the more
usual "pairs".

Title: Mantle of Stars · Author: marastar · Genres: Romance: Vignette
· ID: 987
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:26:27 Score: 3
A nice, reflective little piece. The last sentence seems to give the
whole of the fic, and feels very Faramir: "I give her the choice, lay
my heart in her hands. For at the end of all things, amid darkness
and doubt, there is only one thing certain.

Éowyn, love me."


Title: A Diamond In The Storm · Author: SilverMoonLady · Genres:
Romance · ID: 780
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:27:21 Score: 3
Good to see this one finished. It moves too quickly in places for my
taste, and feels a bit rushed, but the characters are well-defined,
and Diamond as the young spitfire works better than the blushing
Shire lass for this newly confident (and competent) Pippin.

Title: Discovery · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Romance ·
ID: 740
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:28:00 Score: 3
I've got my problems with this one, well-rehearsed in forums. But,
nevertheless, the general set-up is one I can buy. I think my
favorite parts in this story were the fullfillment of one of
Adrahil's visions (I assume) and Boromir and Andrahar saying
farewell. The curse at the end gives me shivers.

Title: Steel and Flame · Author: Flick · Genres: Romance: Poetry ·
ID: 736
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:28:28 Score: 2
Hm, my love-it-can't-believe-it relation to A/B makes this quite the
interesting poem. I quite like it, it's a lovely piece of work, but
it might be harder for non-A/B-shippers to get into it.

Title: Arwen, My Love · Author: Elvenesse · Genres: Romance: Vignette
· ID: 716
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:28:59 Score: 3
The woes of the struggling versifier have seldom been so humorously
recorded. What really made the fic, though, are the notes at the end
to various possible readers. They do rather contradict each other in
parts—if it doesn't matter, why should he be sorry? But that is the
point, after all. Quite amusing!

Title: The Terror Of Buckland · Author: Aratlithiel · Genres:
Romance: Vignette · ID: 698
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:29:26 Score: 6
This was really quite funny, and very well-written. Frodo as the
terror of the *daughters* of Buckland (or perhaps it's their fathers
who are terrorized by the thought of what their daughters are up to
with unknown debonair hobbits) is definitely not the gentlehobbit we
see in later years. Merry's part as the unwilling and just slightly
clueless messenger for ardent young women is well-played, as is
Bilbo's knowing complicity. Maybell stands up very well to scrutiny;
she knows what she wants and is willing to take some risks to get it,
and she's certainly no blushing virgin. Forthright and matter of
fact, with a certain wicked sense of humor, she strikes me as quite
the bold lass. One hopes she never hears about Lilac...

Title: The Clasp Undone · Author: DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan ·
ID: 691
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-21 09:29:51 Score: 2
A haunting tale of an ususually overlooked character in Tolkien's
writings. It could very well be true, and I am pretty sure that the
professor himself would like it. :)

Title: Unafraid · Author: Naresha · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 650
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:30:08 Score: 1
I appreciate the sentiment, but couldn't get inside this pairing
through the poem.

Title: The Lady's Gift · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Elves:
Lothlorien · ID: 979
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-21 09:45:02 Score: 1
Sweet and gentle, this story gave me warm feelings and a side of
Galadriel that is often overlooked. Good work.

Title: Diaspora · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble
· ID: 235
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-21 09:55:15 Score: 2
I am always delighted to read stories on the Dwarven culture, and
this drabble caught much of their essence, methinks. And, if I may
add, the title was a stroke of genious. Good work, Dwim!

Title: Good Memories, Like Good Stories · Author: Jeodo Brandybuck ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 906
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 10:28:35 Score: 2
A lovely look at Pippin learning the difference between stories and
real adventures - and finding the courage to do what he must.

Title: Now in silence, now in speech · Author: Tanaqui · Genres:
Romance: Drabble · ID: 1389
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 10:33:03 Score: 2
I like the idea that Faramir is able to bring to life for Éowyn
stories that are dead when she reads them alone. Either that, or he's
secretly writing poems for her! The end's a bit ambiguous, but I like
it that way.

Title: Fire and Ice · Author: Ruby Nye · Genres: Romance: Drabble ·
ID: 1132
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 10:33:43 Score: 2
Nice! I liked the way the fire and ice weren't made to represent the
cold-hearted versus intemperate passion of two lovers, but made to
fit with the memories that Merry and Pippin have and which define and
repell them... towards each other.

Title: Sand and Flame · Author: Tehta · Genres: Romance: Elves · ID:
1130
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 10:34:06 Score: 4
Tehta comes though again with an amusing courtship, cast in the mold
of the Cinderella story, although with several key reversals. Melkor
standing in as a sort of deficient and vaguely malevolent fairy
godfather was quite amusing, as was Nerdanel's quest to find the man
who knows about sand and who made her a glass slipper at the ball.
This is a great blend of an old fairy tale with Tolkien, on the order
of Altariel's "Spirits of the House", except far more funny. Well
done!

Title: Walls and Gates · Author: Adina ATL · Genres: Romance · ID:
1041
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 10:35:49 Score: 8
A worthy successur to "Opening Doors"! The glimpses of Elven life, of
the rifts between the Noldor and the Quendi, all get filtered through
a Dwarf's eyes, a Dwarf who has eyes for the stone she must shape but
not, at first, for the partnership she must form with Galadriel. This
is a very unusual sort of romance, since in fact, the romance as such
has already occurred in the previous story. The unusual nature of
this courtship, which is forgotten as soon as dreams fade, only to be
rediscovered at an inopportune moment, makes it hard to track, but
still satisfying as politics and affection and temptation are worked
out in a strange city, which itself seems hardly formed and as new as
this alliance between Galadriel and Narvi. Beyond that, Rohirriel the
elf captain was a lovely original character who gave us a look at
what would later seem to be quintessential elven ways. The first-
person narrative is well-handled, and by the end, one has a glimpse
of the defiant hope that the Last Alliance would raise against the
Shadow of the East.

Well done, Adina ATL, and thank you for a wonderful story.


Title: Memory of Ents · Author: Rabidsamfan · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Friendship · ID: 800
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 10:37:48 Score: 3
I love it that the hobbits have developed an understanding of the
aliveness of the trees, so that they explain why they are taking the
sapling and promise to care for them. And the green eyes at the
end . . . I hope there is some prospect of reunion for the Ents and
Entwives - all thanks to three hobbits. A lovely story.

Title: Sun on the Water · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Romance · ID: 971
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 10:56:36 Score: 1
What a delightful moment in the lives of Faramir and Eowyn. And I am
sure Eowyn preferred it to a swimming lesson!

Title: The Masters of Buckland Have Always Been Romantic · Author:
Saoirse · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 624
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 11:09:26 Score: 2
I loved this. The generations of Masters and their ladies - sending
messages of love and support down the generations. And in addition,
Merry and Estella are so beautifully drawn.

Title: Spirit of a Sword · Author: Erin's Daughter · Races/Places:
Dwarves · ID: 724
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-21 11:10:45 Score: 1
I am always happy to find good Dawrf stories, and this one was a
little jewel.

Title: Wagers In Rivendell · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Hobbits · ID: 1233
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-21 11:16:12 Score: 3
This is another of GW's delightful gigglers. Written for a challenge,
she manages to work the seven swans in unobtrusively, as she once
more displays her keen understanding of the relationships between the
cousins, and an unsuspecting Legolas is caught in the middle.

Title: Comes the Dawn · Author: Ithilwen · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 418
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 11:44:37 Score: 1
I am so pleased to see Maedhros purge his demons and learn to live
again - and to see him reunited with Maglor.

Title: A Quiet Love · Author: Erin's Daughter · Races/Places: Elves:
Post-Ring War · ID: 723
Reviewer: Ariel · 2005-08-21 11:47:49 Score: 6
I don't read may non-hobbit fics, but I dearly love this one. I read
it ages ago and had to re-read it just now - it's that good.

This story gives Arwen a much deserved better ending than Tolkien
described. It always puzzled me how an immensely aged elf lady could
be so much less 'wise' than her relatively youthful husband? Surely
she knew what would happen when Aragorn died and considered the joy
of her love worth her impending sacrifice? Tolkien's description
makes her almost surprised! This is a much more satisfying and in
character for a woman than the original work. An insightful and much
needed end for the lady. Thank you for giving her peace.

Title: Comfort Me Not With Cookies · Author: Raksha the Demon ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 290
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2005-08-21 11:55:55 Score: 5
Raksha the Demon fiendishly skewers her subject matter, leaving no
cliché unturned and no stereotype unhackneyed in this paean to bad-
fic. This story has it all—crazy, abusive Denethor; teary eyed
Faramir; overly solicitous Boromir; blond and beatiful Legolas; randy
rangers; and an OFC who is the mother of all Mary Sues. There is even
a guest appearance by the mysterious but strangely attractive Figwit.
Special moments include the revelation of the identity of Faramir's
long-lost father (no, it isn't Darth Vader) and Boromir's thoughtful
birthday presents for his little brother.

Title: A Took by Any Other Name · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 773
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 12:06:18 Score: 4
And poor Ferdi continues to suffer. . . But I do love this story -
and I do appreciate the way you dealt with Pippin's ignorance of the
effect his behaviour had on his cousin - even though poor Uncle
Badger has to go. His moments of foresight come in quite handy, too!

The orc story is really tense, but it is the fallout from Paladin and
Pippin's relationships that moves me most.

Title: Oath · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Races/Places: Hobbits: War
of the Ring · ID: 1181
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:08:31 Score: 3
I love how Pippin and Merry work decide that Elrond's words might
have been directed towards Boromir, Legolas and Gimli. It's such a
hobbity thought that they have, when they reason that if the other
members of the Company love Frodo too, then no one would leave. This
is a great gap-filler!

Title: Together In One Breath · Author: Pipspebble · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 816
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:10:37 Score: 2
I love how confident Merry is in Pippin, even when Pippin doubts
himself. And Pippin's determination is remarkable, I love how he
focuses on getting to Merry. It really shows the depth of their
relationship.

Title: All That Glisters · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 914
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 12:12:35 Score: 3
So many good parts - and so many great characters - it is hard to
know where to begin. I like Jack and his boys - and Denny - and the
twining together of humour and drama. I think this is one of my
favourite stories - but the same thing could be said of many of
Lindelea's other tales, too. Well crafted and entertaining.

Title: Away from the Window · Author: Pipspebble · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1082
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:13:54 Score: 2
I love how Merry and Frodo look after Pippin, and how Pip finally
gets well enough to go outside. Hopeful hurt/comfort at its best!

Title: The Trial of Frodo Baggins · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Genres:
Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 1273
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 12:15:21 Score: 2
I really enjoyed this careful analysis of Frodo's self-flagellation
and Aragorn's measured judgment of his actions. And he came to the
right conclusions!

Title: Warring Duties · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 806
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:17:16 Score: 3
I love how you show Gandalf's history with people other than hobbits,
that tends to get overlooked in many fics. Pippin's voice is so vivid
here, and I love how you show his concern and pride for Merry. This
really does seem like a missing book-scene.

Title: In the Company of Friends · Author: SlightlyTookish ·
Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 830
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-21 12:20:24 Score: 5
What a lovely story! Of course there would be need for a dentist
after the battles they saw!

You have captured my vision of Pippin so perfectly, well, actually
all the hobbits. So pure of heart, such good and dedicated, loyal
friends, yet concerned for others. And even Gimli, who softens up and
yet doesn't want to reveal it.

"You'll feel a bit of pressure," Belecthor warned, You MUST either
work for a dentist or have just been to a dentist when you wrote
this. WHY do they ALWAYS say 'pressure' ... It always feels like more
than just pressure to me!

Very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed your story!

Title: Nightly Noises · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Friendship · ID: 827
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:20:54 Score: 3
An excellent look at Merry and Pippin's life at Crickhollow, and
their recovery from their hurts. I love all the hurt/comfort here,
and Pippin's nightmare is so terrifyingly vivid. I especially like
how you stage the final conversation near the Hedge where their
adventure began, showing how they have come full circle.

Title: Echoes · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Mystery · ID: 969
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-21 12:23:13 Score: 3
I can't believe I found a GW story that I had not before read! This
was amazing, angsty, and suspenseful, yet completely shot through
with the patented GW brand of humor as well. I absolutely loved the
plot device, though I won't give it away here for any who might still
want to be surprised! Brilliant!

Title: Pitfalls of the Palantir · Author: Haleth · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 1296
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-21 12:23:18 Score: 2
"walrus-handled it" What a wonderful description!

I've often wondered this myself what would have happened if a
Palantir found its way onshore. I love the idea of the Odob -- who
better! What an interesting plot-bunny to watch hatch.

Title: Tall Tales · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 1153
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:25:19 Score: 2
I love your Farry! This is such a great father-son story. I love
seeing Pippin as a father here, and trying to be so brave for his
son, and it's no wonder why Faramir wants to be just like him.

Title: Wizard's Watch · Author: Pipspebble · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings · ID: 1227
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:26:36 Score: 2
I love how Gandalf emphasizes that the hobbits are his family, and
that he loves them and will look after them even when they anger him.
This is such a great moment of friendship between Gandalf and Pippin.

Title: Blood Ties · Author: Pipspebble · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship · ID: 834
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:27:03 Score: 2
This is a great moment between Merry and Pippin as they remember
Frodo. Esmeralda's presence here is great as she cares for her son
and nephew and yet keeps her distance, knowing that they have to work
through their pain alone.

Title: The trouble with Jam · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 882
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-21 12:27:46 Score: 2
This is adorable! Wee young Pippin sure can be logical when it comes
to getting his food. And I love how you ended it .. even once he gets
the jam, he still can't get 'to' it! A nicely told story.

Title: The Bow · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 161
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-21 12:30:57 Score: 4
"...glittered like the dappled sunlight falling through the leaves
onto the stream..."

What evocative description you have used throughout this story, and
then to realize what it was Thranduil watched, and how the tradition
continued -- and improved -- from father to son.

What a lovely concept -- and you have managed to capture the emotions
of Thranduil even while he tries not to show them. Well done!

Title: It Takes A Took · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Pippin · ID: 823
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:57:28 Score: 2
This is a lovely version of how Pippin and Diamond's relationship
started. The epilogue is especially wonderful, I love the Frodo's
presence was felt on their special day.

Title: A Question of Trolls · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 776
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 13:00:42 Score: 3
You don't see too many moments between Bilbo and Pippin, and this is
an especially wonderful one! I love how Bilbo explains how he altered
his stories to make them suitable for children, and how he never
expected his young cousins to face anything so terrible.

Title: Lamentation · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Post-Ring War · ID: 919
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 13:03:35 Score: 2
I love how musical your Pippin always is. This is such a great angsty
piece; I love how Merry panics for a bit, wondering where Pippin is,
and how he comforts him.

Title: A `Just Because' Gift · Author: grey_wonderer · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1187
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 13:09:05 Score: 2
This is so lovely. I adore their trip to the junk shop and all the
descriptions of what's in it, and most especially Bilbo's
conversation with Merry.

Title: The trouble with Jam · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 882
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 13:12:18 Score: 1
I love how determined Pippin is, even when he is constantly (and
unwittingly) thwarted in his quest.

Title: Payment Put Off · Author: pippinfan88 · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1038
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-21 13:31:35 Score: 6
This is such a sweet and touching story. I like the explanation given
for why Pippin must return and live, and the way that it was shown to
him.

The thought that Merry and Pippin were two halves of one whole at
that time in their lives is so believable. The thoughts that the
other was safe was so often the only thing that kept each of them
going. I have no doubt that Merry would have followed shortly if
Pippin had died.

The depiction of Pippin's innocense and cheek, even to the powers
that be of the Over-Heaven, is wonderful.

The scene at the end just made for a nice image of what eventual was
to come in its own rightful time.

Thanks.

Title: Sunshine and Laughter · Author: Anastasia · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1232
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-21 13:40:07 Score: 2
I could see Gandalf doing something like that for Pippin. The old
Wizard really did love that little hobbit, and it shows.

Thank you for sharing this sweet moment in their lives with us.

Title: Take the Little Ones · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Elves · ID: 163
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 13:52:37 Score: 8
Take the little ones is an impressive story. Spaceweavil approaches
this story in such a magnificent manner: it is breathtaking. Every
word is carefully balanced; the narrative is truly stunning. The way
he author describes Ost-in-Edhil, the pride and the downfall… for me
it fits canon perfectly. As a reader, I feel like if I am truly
there, witnessing the events through the main character's eyes. The
grief of Erestor is so tangible and yet he manages to keep himself
under control. Until the moment one of the children asks for nana,
which was truly heartbreaking. In Tolkien canon, not much is known
about Erestor, but the way his history is written in such a short
piece is masterfully done.

This story is an incredible story that gives us more insight of
Erestor, I like the manner the author approached it, weaving in the
flaws of elvenkind and yet leaving hope for the future to come. Well
written, carefully constructed in story building, the pacing is
excellent and the way the author keeps the tension in the story: this
story is a great piece of work written by Spaceweavil.


Title: Where Roses Grow · Author: pippinfan88 · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 589
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-21 13:53:04 Score: 8
When I read this story, I was so relieved that I wasn't the only one
that thought something like this could happen. I always suspected
that if any of the four hobbits were to make this mistake, it would
be Pippin. He's so impulsive.

The bitter feeling of both young people at the time of the wedding
are quite believable. The fact that they only slowly come to like and
then even love each other is very realistic, too.

I cried when I figured out that Pippin was going to lose both his
young wife and little girl. The emotional roller-coaster was almost
too much, but life is like that sometimes. The alternate ending was
sweet, but we all knew it couldn't really be that way. Pippin had to
move on and build a new life with the person he was meant to be with.

I found it clever that the timing of this story is such that it could
have fit within canon, if people could accept that hobbits have
moments of moral weekness just like we do, without messing up any
established relationships or timelines.

Well done. Just thinking about this story can make me misty-eyed.

Title: Seven for a Secret · Author: Kielle · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Elves · ID: 1090
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 13:59:52 Score: 3
I like this vignette written by Kielle because it is extremely
thought provoking. Her starting line immediately makes me wonder what
will follow next. Although her second son is much alike her, it makes
me wonder if Nerdanel gave more to him then she thought. A good
exploration of a character that deserves more attention.

Title: Foresight · Author: quirky_orthodox · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 1044
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 14:03:43 Score: 2
This is a story worth while telling. One can only wonder why Haldir
was the one showing up at Helms Deep. Quirky takes her time in
exploring Haldir and why he seemed so determined to march. Nicely
written: compact and effective.

Title: The Doom of Mandos · Author: quirky_orthodox · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 1043
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 14:07:03 Score: 3
I had the privilegde of reading more of this story then author has
online. I absolutely like the author's approach of this au-story, she
explores the what if to the maximum. It still needs a bit of
tweaking, but I am confident that she manages to do so. Tricky
Galadriel, the members of the Fellowship gets unique cameo's. Keep it
up Quirky!

Title: Weariness · Author: quirky_orthodox · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Vignette · ID: 375
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 14:08:30 Score: 2
This is such a sad story, but yet there is hope for redemption. While
the author explores the differences between Maglor and Celeborn, you
can see in the end that all elves are the same, despite their
background. Thoughtfully written.

Title: The Dare · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin
· ID: 778
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-21 14:53:40 Score: 4
I really enjoyed this tale because it takes a very dangerous
situation and teaches us all a lesson from it which starts with peer
pressure, takes us through the anguish of possible loss of life over
this pointless dare, and then we see how the bonds of love between
the best of friends are renewed, strengthened. We can all learn a
lesson or two from this wonderful story.

Title: Under The Lilac Bushes · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1168
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-21 15:00:18 Score: 2
What a sweet and lovely tale! Merry and Sam as wee children--and
little Marigold is a scene stealer! I had to laugh at Merry thinking
both Marigold and Pervinca being so bossy. Loved it!

Title: Artist's Appreciation · Author: sulriel · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 146
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-21 15:01:34 Score: 3
Now I would make a bet that a great many of your readers wished that
they were Lhende, because I certainly did. This is a lovely find both
because of its unusual take on Celeborn, who for once gets to be a
bit of a poster boy, and also because it isn't overdone or mushy. I
really did enjoy reading it on many different levels. Great job!

Title: The Bow · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 161
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 15:07:43 Score: 4
The bow is a beautiful story about a father and a son, but it is
written in such way that it covers more then one generation. I love
the insight in Thandruil's life his thoughts, emotions regarding his
father and his son and his role in Mirkwood. This is an excellent
character piece, written with so much care that I surely hope there
will be more. Space Weavil says she's considering it... one can only
hope.

Title: The Road to Edoras · Author: Dreamflower · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 872
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-21 15:18:06 Score: 6
This is proving to be a wonderful, imaginative story that I'm
thoroughly hooked on. I just finished the prequel, "A New Reckoning",
so I am ready to travel with Captain Freddy, Jolly, Poppy, and the
rest of the envoy all the way to Edoras--and hopefully to Gondor,
though its not clear yet how far the telling of this tale will go--as
for kingdoms, so to speak. Poor author--I keep badgering the poor
lass about one of the prisoners redeeming himself--as if I could
influence her! She is a fantastic author with a brilliant imagination
and a natural talent for writing. I am looking forward to more of
this tale in the coming days.

Title: Important Choices · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Hobbits · ID: 879
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-21 15:32:46 Score: 10
The author had me rolling on the floor laughing my guts out with this
story! She has this flair, this gift for writing my favorite hobbits
bantering back and forth to the point of exhaustion--on my part--from
too much laughter. Merry is so serious--and rightly so--about which
waistcoat to wear while proposing to Estella. Then he opens up this
huge walk-in closet full of neatly folded waistcoats of all colors
and designs. Frodo has absolutely no idea as how to proceed with
helping Merry decide with all the different types to choose from.
Pippin, who is amusing himself by pushing Merry's buttons during the
whole agonizing process. Merry ignores Pippin's choices while
entertaining Frodo's. It's all so hilarious! Finally, Pippin forces
his way in to offer Merry some sound advice regarding fashion
statements. Merry is so nervous that only after Frodo agrees with
their young cousin does Merry consider Pippin's choice as a good
one...or a fair one. Poor Merry! I loved this wee tale of Merry's
indecision.

The author has always captured me with her wild imagination, which
excels greatly at slapstick--and she's GOOD at it. Not many people
can get away with blending hobbits and that sort of comedic element.
I have enjoyed every single one of Grey Wonderer's tales--this is
just one of them. Thanks, G.W. for a fantastic read!

Title: The Creation of Horses · Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde ·
Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 275
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:23:41 Score: 3
Ah! a poem that is near and dear to my heart. I always love to read
about horses.

I especially love this line:
"Wild and wandering, the wind arose,
Blew its breath through bone and sinew,"

you capture their nuances so well - a very enjoyable read. Thank you.


Title: The Arial Object · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 972
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:36:14 Score: 2
very very cute, - the arial object indeed. - my sons play with such,
not in the house anymore due to the potential for damage *G*

Title: A Soldier's Tale · Author: grey_wonderer · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1134
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:38:02 Score: 2
So like the kids! I especially enjoyed how you transitioned between
real-life and fantasy, pulling the reader easily in both directions.

Title: Bedazzled · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 976
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:46:00 Score: 2
"Dancers dizzy themselves" - I love this line. we so often think only
of food and drink, but I'm sure that the Hobbits loved the dance as
well.

Title: House of Dust and Memory · Author: Itarille · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 523
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:54:28 Score: 2
A heart-rending yet healing picture of two under-written
characters... -two of the strongest women of Middle-earth, supporting
each other in their pain of loss. I would love to read more about
them.

Title: A Missing Piece of History. · Author: jillian baade ·
Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 646
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 19:01:53 Score: 2
Oh Jillian, what a wonderful terrible twist to LaCE - so well done,
woven in and through canon the way you know I love to do, playing
with the loopholes.

Title: The Song of the Rock · Author: Joan Milligan · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 1084
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 19:04:05 Score: 2
I especially enjoy the depth of imagery in this, the irony, the pride
and the pain.

"Now, what were those tidings you have said you bring me?"

terribly chilling...

Title: Eärendil's Tale · Author: Bodkin · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion · ID: 1331
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 19:15:37 Score: 5
I do believe Earendil to be the single greatest hero of JRRTolkien's
entire epic and I especially enjoyed your tale of him.

" ... And you came out of the West, blazing with white flame, the
host of Eagles accompanying you ..."

This one line, from early in your first chapter summarizes for me who
and what he is - a son of kings and queens and heroes, the father of
the same, he gave -all- even his family- for the chance to bring help
to them, and to this day sails the night skies with the bright
Silmaril on his brow.

Title: As Good As You · Author: pearltook1 · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 854
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-21 19:52:26 Score: 5
This is such an honest look at Paladin and his Thainship. I don't
think I've read any other story that has him so accurately assess his
strengths and weaknesses as a leader.

Pippin's lack of confidence is so believable, too. The fear of losing
himself seems truly like something he would deal with.

This is so sad and yet so hopeful, all at once. It made me want to
know what they did in the few remaining days they had together, and
how Pippin handled his first few days as Took and Thain. I'm sure his
do would have been proud.

Thanks.

Title: Offerings · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races/Places: Gondor:
Boromir and Faramir · ID: 322
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2005-08-21 20:47:49 Score: 8
This is a beautiful piece of writing. The two sections are written in
close parallel to show the contrast between the characters of Faramir
and his father.

Denethor has great respect for tradition so he brings the customary
garland of flowers as a funerary offering for his father. His actions
have the feel of ancestor worship, which is appropriate since
Denethor is highly suspicious of change and venerates the past.
Though he goes through these acts of filial love and duty, they are
empty motions since his thoughts dwell on the bitterness of the past.
His assertion that "We inherit our fathers' shadows" is ominous and
sad.

When Faramir visits Denethor's tomb, he puts aside tradition and,
instead of flowers, he brings the new heir to their house. His
thoughts and actions look to the future. I love how the birth of his
son gives him a new perspective on his own father; now he can
understand how Denethor had been driven mad by the loss of a child.

The piece is written in a spare and formal style that perfectly fits
the subject matter. Well done!


Title: Where the Stars Are Strange · Author: Dwimordene ·
Races/Places: Men · ID: 255
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-21 23:14:44 Score: 7
Dwim claims in her summary that this is "the existential Aragorn".
I'm not sure I necessarily agree with that statement. At least so far
as I understand existentialism, it means that we determine our
essential qualities, rather than having those essential qualities
determined by some other before we come into existence. Throughout
this story Aragorn struggles with his identity and which of his many
names capture the true essence of him -- but who he is seems to be
something of which he does not have control. Not to say this piece
doesn't have existential moments, like Aragorn's injunction to
Indirkan to "Turn your questions inward! Ask yourself: why did you
not slit my throat when you could easily have done so?" All in all,
it's a nice blend of philosophy, angst, and action, somehow universal
but also well-situated in Middle-earth.

Title: For Eyes to See as Can · Author: Larner · Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 176
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-21 23:17:52 Score: 6
Someone asked me once if I was trying to rewrite the entire story
from Sam's point of view, and I laughed, but the truth is, Larner got
there ahead of me. This is a masterpiece, one which not only tells
the story again, but adds layers and layers to it. Here is Sam,
choosing Frodo as his own master at the age of ten, observing Bilbo
and Frodo together through the years, and learning still more once
the quest has begun.

I love the details in this story, the things which weave through it
from beginning to end, like the little writing desk which Bilbo gave
to Frodo, and the cloak and watch which are symbols of the mastery of
Bag End. It is a tale touched with sorrow, but which still holds joy.

Excellent.

Title: Out of All Knowledge · Author: Budgielover · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 178
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-21 23:18:24 Score: 5
Rereading this, I am overwhelmed again by the detail and the care
that goes into it. There are so many elements which enrich this that
it's hard to call it a gap-filler. I love Bilbo's meeting with Sam,
and the hobbits' reaction to Elrond's search for the Morgul shard. I
love too poor Aragorn realizing that he's sadly miscalculated hobbit
capacity, and the reaction of the Cook and other Elves to having such
hearty appetites among them. The resolution of the story is still
frightening, but all to the good. Thank you!

Title: A Lesson on Hobbits · Author: Budgielover · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 177
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-21 23:19:02 Score: 4
I do love this tale, and I'll admit to being both curious and excited
to find it in the "Incomplete" section. Does that mean there will be
more? I certainly hope so!

Boromir's chapter is a delight, of course, and so is Legolas', but my
favorite is Gimli's. There's something which is so delightful about
the image of our favorite dwarf bundled up with two hobbits on either
side like a broody hen!

Thank you!

Title: Thicker Than Blood · Author: Ariel · Races/Places: Hobbits:
War of the Ring · ID: 669
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-21 23:26:08 Score: 3
There can never be too many tales telling us about those dark days
when Frodo lay injured at Rivendell for me, and this one always
leaves me weeping. It has some of the best insights into Sam's part
of it, and Bilbo's too, as well as a great sense of tension -- I know
perfectly well how it will all turn out and yet I sit and read,
losing fingernails as I go.

Thank you.

Title: Before the Call to Muster · Author: Lindelea · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 461
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-21 23:28:49 Score: 5
I think my favourite line is this was Pippin's observation that
he "was almost used to Merry falling into silence, this new and
strange Merry, called back to life by the hands of the King" --
called back to life struck me, because it means that, at least to
some degree, Merry was dead. That seems a good way of describing the
black breath. Although I also really liked Merry's thoughts "When did
you grow so wise? When did your eyes grow old?" The perfect way of
getting to the heart of the sobering effect trauma can have on
people. And the ending of just saying thank-you was perfectly hobbity.

Title: When the King Returned · Author: Ninquelosse · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 497
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-22 00:04:06 Score: 5
A while ago I suggested a challenge over at HASA about characters who
disagreed with their leaders' chosen course of action. While I think
this story was written before I suggested that challenge (and I
certainly have no cause to think it was written in response to it),
this seems to be a good embodiment of that challenge's spirit. Here
we have an "everyman", a bit like Beregond though his political
ambitions differ. He is perfectly situated in Gondor's politics so
much as they effect him, but he also is his own man (or boy, more
like), and his fears felt real.

Title: Before the Doors of the Houses of Healing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 529
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-22 00:30:47 Score: 7
This is another one of those gapfillers that takes on a moment I
never imagined happening before I read the piece, but which I am glad
were written because they enrich Middle-earth so well. It makes sense
that Imrahil would be livid at the fact that Gandalf didn't share his
knowledge of what was happening in the hallows. Of course Imrahil
being Imrahil would be pretty restrained about his feelings and not
let them rule him.

That's the other thing that I like so much about this piece: the
choice of point-of-view. I think anything other than first would have
been too distanced for the emotional impact this story relies on, and
the choice of Imrahil as narrator was perfect. He's not an impetuous
youth, which I think would have taken the story too close to
maudlin.Yet he was just close enough to the people involved that it
really tugged on the strings of your heart. Well done, Liz.

Title: Bedazzled · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 976
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:22:44 Score: 1
A joyous jangle of words, description at it's best. Thank you!

Title: What Should Not Be Forgotten · Author: Budgielover ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 179
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:23:13 Score: 3
As much as I love this story for the main part of it, I also love it
for the small details about Merry and Pippin doing as much to take
care of Sam as they are doing to take care of Frodo. And I love it
for the wisdom too, of knowing that some scars are worth everything
that was paid.

Title: Elves and Potatoes · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Hobbits · ID: 185
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:23:35 Score: 2
This story is rich in marvelous details, particularly the details
about gardening and the kind of plants and flowers which might be in
the gardens of Bag End. It's a wonderful, gentle story, and I thank
you for it.

Title: Changes · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-
Ring War Drabble · ID: 231
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:24:01 Score: 1
Nicely done. I like the contrast between Bilbo's party and this one.

Title: A Gift · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:26:18 Score: 2
Excellent! This one made me smile at the thought of Pippin getting
well-worn mathoms as presents most of his life until Bilbo gives him
something new, and then laugh out loud at the end when his
imagination takes over.

Title: Flowers in Disguise · Author: Holdur · Races/Places: Hobbits ·
ID: 377
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:29:05 Score: 2
The Gaffer doesn't always come off well in fanfic, but in this
lovely, gentle piece he teaches Sam a lesson which resonates
strongly. Very nice!

Title: Spoons · Author: LKK · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 644
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:31:16 Score: 2
*snort* I love this glimpse of Lobelia's thoughts, and the
consequences! That umbrella was probably bulging like a piglet...

Title: Marigold · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 784
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:32:34 Score: 2
Nice. This series about Marigold provides a good look at the "make it
while you can" opportunistic necessity of being from a poor family,
and of the satisfactions of earning your own money too. Very hobbity!

Title: Elements of the Resistance · Author: Marta · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 939
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:35:55 Score: 2
Fascinating and dark, this drabble series gives us a quick, chilling
sense of Fatty's experiences during that terrible year. I loved
Shadow, especially, and the way that the story brought in Estella and
Farmer Maggot.

Title: My Sons of Gondor · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 911
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:40:16 Score: 2
The scene where Faramir and the Rangers ride out in the film is
terribly bitter, and that bitterness is caught here in a glimpse of
the thoughts of one family member watching. Excellent.

Title: Cormallen · Author: Frodo Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) ·
Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 799
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:47:31 Score: 6
This loving piece has each of the members of the Fellowship looking
at Frodo at the Feast of Cormallen. Aragorn and Gandalf are caught up
in memories, Pippin and Sam are trying to console Frodo and heal him
with food and drink, and Merry is caught between, with his own hurts
giving him a horrible understanding of what Frodo's injuries mean,
and the heart of his fascination with herbs giving him some
consolation.
And then, the piece expands its view, with Gimli looking at all the
hobbits, and Legolas able to step back and look at the entire
Fellowship, with an understanding that has grown and changed.


Title: The Bone That He Boned From Its Owner · Author: lilybaggins ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 1237
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:52:40 Score: 3
As Frodo rests near the stone trolls after Weathertop he sees more
than he had considered before, and he can't help but consider it now!

This is one of those stories that leaves your eyebrows nested
somewhere in your hair even while you find yourself giggling
helplessly. What great fun!

Title: While the Ring Went South... · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 33
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:46:32 Score: 4
There's a reason this story is a classic in LotR fanfic, and that
reason is good characterization. Each member of the fellowship is
recognizable here -- acting from motivations which fit well into
canon. The additional details of the journey south fit well too,
which only adds to the delight.

This story is one of my all time favorites and will probably stay
near the top of the list for a long long time.

Title: At the Sammath Naur · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 126
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:47:36 Score: 3
I've read this before, but it's stunning every time. I particularly
like the way that the words wind Frodo deeper and deeper into the
thrall of the Ring, and how the new perception he gains with claiming
it does not completely bury the hobbit who would have tried anyway...

Title: To Water the Dust · Author: Eruanna · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 77
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:48:03 Score: 2
Excellent. This is an ingenious story that weaves what we know of
Ulmo into Sam and Frodo's tale seamlessly and makes me think of
Gandalf telling Frodo that Sauron is not the only power in the world.

Title: Foolish Hobbit · Author: Tialys · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 120
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:48:37 Score: 2
Angry Frodo! And imperious too, when he's giving Gandalf what for! I
like Gandalf's calm way of taking it. He knows Sam pretty well for an
old wizard, doesn't he?

Title: A Merry Meeting at Bree · Author: maranya14 · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War · ID: 211
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:49:58 Score: 3
This is such a fun story! I like the characterization of Nob, and of
Barliman too, as well as the way the hobbits and Big People interact.
Thanks for sneaking in the line about a "proper fourteen twenty" too -
- it's the grounding in what we know of the Fourth Age that makes
this story work so well. (And bringing along Bergil helped, at least
for me.)

Title: Lesson Learned: Spring Flood, 1433 · Author: Dreamflower ·
Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 1112
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:50:54 Score: 1
There are things beyond anyone's power to change and this drabble
lets us see Merry learning that.

Title: Fire and Ice · Author: Ruby Nye · Genres: Romance: Drabble ·
ID: 1132
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:51:59 Score: 3
I remember loving this the moment I first read it, and I love it all
the more now. This story ties in Merry's experiences with cold, and
Pippin's experiences with fire in such a way that the echoes are
almost painful. But the end is lovely and soothing.

Title: Climbing · Author: Ancalime8301 · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 88
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:52:55 Score: 2
A neat bit of storytelling, this. It makes me ache just reading it,
and catches the dilemma of whether to trust or not trust Smeagol very
well indeed.

Title: Entitlement · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID:
537
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:57:59 Score: 3
*snicker* When Aragorn decides to take on the fanfic writers over
certain... inaccuracies... and ends up with a small entourage at a
convention, delight ensues -- at least for the readers of this
ficlet! I think my favorite part must be Pippin preparing to defend
Legolas from the ladies...

Title: The Mark of a... Warrior? · Author: Ariel · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 133
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:58:54 Score: 4
Omg, help! *falls off chair howling*

I loved this the first time I read it, although you hadn't dealt with
Gandalf then, and I love it now all the more. I thought I'd break
something when I read that last line and considered the implications!

*takes a deep puff on her asthma inhaler* This is still one of the
most brilliant, hilarious, bang-on-target vignettes about the travels
of the Fellowship that has ever hit the internet and I hope you get
lots of points for it!

Title: Fairer Than Most · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 69
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:07:04 Score: 3
"No, sir," Sam replied, shaking his head. "Sometimes they're even
worse."

This story is a delight! I love Frodo's description of his cousins,
and Sam's brave attempts to keep out of the discussion at all. And
the explanations at the end as the cousins clear the air are just
right.

Title: And the Halfling Forth Shall Stand · Author: Shirebound ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 511
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:07:28 Score: 2
I've always thought this was a neat summation of the answer to the
question about who else might have done the task if Frodo hadn't
survived Weathertop. Very well done.

Title: 110 · Author: Aeneid · Races/Places: Men · ID: 59
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:07:54 Score: 3
If I hadn't been messing around trying to see how to put stories into
order I might not have read this, and it would have been a loss. I
enjoyed it very much, and finished thinking, "No wonder he was cranky
at the Council!" But I was smiling. Thank you!

Title: And Now to Bed · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 783
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:09:49 Score: 2
I like the way the four drabbles are split into eight notions, before
and after for each of the hobbits or even more if you count Sam's
forward knowledge of Frodo across the sea. I can see them all quite
clearly.

Title: Small · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin ·
ID: 1033
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:10:21 Score: 2
I rather enjoyed this. I liked the comparison of the hawk and the
wren, and I certainly felt Pippin's pain at being passed over for
someone younger on the basis of size!

Title: Chasing and Burg'ling · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 580
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:11:40 Score: 2
Ah, the Gaffer! He does have his own way of seeing things, doesn't
he? And in this small story Frodo can listen in and find a bit of the
truth in the old hobbits grumbling.

Title: The Lady's Gift · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Elves:
Lothlorien · ID: 979
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:12:17 Score: 2
Aw, I love this. I love the details, the way that she had made
Frodo's gift the night before but waited til dawn for Sam, and the
much longer list of "G"s than we had before. But the end nearly had
me in tears... Marvelous! Thank you!

Title: A Proper Course of Action · Author: Aliana · Genres: Humor ·
ID: 78
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:12:48 Score: 3
*snorgle*

This is fun. It's just serious enough to be logical and just silly
enough to have me grinning by the time I'd read three paragraphs.
Each suggestion only makes it funnier. I love Eowyn's solution -- and
the Elvish translation at the very end left me howling.

Thank you!

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Hobbit:
Drabble · ID: 1359
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:15:17 Score: 2
This drabble is a very nice summary of the chapter of the same name
from The Hobbit, with a soupcon of fresh insight. I particularly like
Bilbo's conflicting thoughts in the last line.

Title: Upon a Field of Gold · Author: Dana · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 277
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:19:47 Score: 3
An excellent example of what a drabble series can do. This tale is
told in short swift breaths, some of them painful and some of them
sighs of relief. A beautiful look at the time that Merry spent when
he was the only hobbit standing at Cormallen. (And a nice bit of
hurt/comfort for Pippin as well!)

Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 702
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-22 09:28:18 Score: 3
Gosh, now that was a wonderful read. I really felt drawn into the
narrative by the brilliantly evocative descriptions. A stunning
little gem of a fic which intertwines several aspects of canon into
one seamless whole and produces something special. Lovely!

Title: Renewal · Author: Bodkin · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-
Filler · ID: 883
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-22 09:50:10 Score: 4
Absolutely perfect! This story has everything I ever want to read in
a fanfic. It is emotional without going overboard, honest without
being soppy and to top it all off it is also downright hilarious in
places. I think if ever someone were to nominate a best fanfiction
paragraph it would have to be the one describing the 'fights' between
Celeborn and Galadriel. I really do love reading Bodkin's work and,
although I may not often say so, I think she's brilliant.

Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 702
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 09:59:45 Score: 5
WOW, Do you describe pain well or WHAT! Laughter causing pain
reminded me of my very painful first cescarian. My husband would try
to cheer me, only to have my own laughter bring me to tears.
FanTAstic job with all that, and the muddled insights going through
his mind! Nothing seemed unlikely or out of place to me. And oh dear
the nightengale! What happened to it? I should probably reread so as
to understand, dang it. It is probably another one of those "I would
understand if i had read the Sil" things. Still, such beautiful
imagry! Nice job interweaving the two tales as well. congrats and
good luck!

Title: Ties That Bind · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 457
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 10:09:31 Score: 2
A lovely look into the sadness felt by Legolas. Very touching! "my
heart too heavy. . " is a great line! A prelude to the feelings he
expresses in lothlorien. Very tolkienish. i Loved it.

Title: Life in the Angle · Author: Leaward · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 181
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-22 10:11:02 Score: 10
When I first started reading this story, I was amazed at how much
Leaward could channel in her feelings to the reader and yet
intricately describe everything around her hero Tarkil. Soon enough
it became clear that it was not just the opening scene, but an entire
story that borders on being an original fic. The emotions are not
only shining brightly across each page and paragraph, they are clear,
penetrating and diverse. Ranging from moments of witty humour to
thrilling, breath stopping suspense, the events flowed in a light
rhythm that left the reader wanting more. Though the ambience is not
heavily stressed, one feels that it comes quite naturally. The words
simply stimulate the imagination and you find yourself smiling at
Haldon's antics, sympathising with Poppi and cheering Tarkil on.
This, I believe, gave the story a human feel, rarely found in fanfic,
particularly ones that deal with such ambiguous characters as the
rangers, not to mention their everyday lives and worries. The
vividness of every character breathes life into the story so much
that the readers' interaction only becomes natural. Even though the
style is simple, the ideas are not.
Some of the ideas, Leaward tackled not only hit home with every
reader, they are at the very heart of human life. "Tired of being
patient" Yes, it seems like we keep willing ourselves to be patient
and endure but we always lose control at some point. We all have a
boss figure in our lives, who drives us up the wall but we can make
up excuses for him when we are in our finer mood. The plot is quite
original. Yet, it weaves itself intimately into Tolkien's bigger one…
In short, a brilliant work in its complex simplicity! If this just
the beginning of the series, I'ld definitely love to see what comes
next.


Title: Hand in Hand · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Hobbits · ID: 888
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 10:49:09 Score: 7
Oh dear! I exaggerate not. You had me in tears. I have felt, as frodo
felt, empty, must stay empty, must keep that wall in place or all
will crumble. and Oh, the inanities of what people say when they are
trying to comfort those who have lost more than their heart can
handle loosing. You captured bilbo's thoughts SO well to me. That
spark of life that drew Frodo to him above all Bagginses, put out
like a quenched candle. How wonderful that it was bilbo himself to
help spark that light. That wall will keep trying to raise itself,
but Frodo has Bilbo so that is good.

I loved that it was from Bilbo's pov. I love how B handled the
situation. And Oh! A foreshadowing of Frodo "saving" B from the ring?
when he puts his small hand into the one which wanted to reach for
the ring!

Fabulous fabulous. I do LOVE a story that makes me cry!

Title: In Plain Sight · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gap-Filler · ID: 885
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 11:00:56 Score: 8
Fantastic. Utterly wonderful. Not the feeling of Tolkien, but that is
all for the better. You still managed to capture the personalities of
your cast. Not a moment of the story went by when I didn't at least
have a smile on my face. Much of the time I was litteraly laughing
out loud. What a refreshing story. How wonderful of you to realize,
that yes, frodo went through some tough times; later leading to his
leaving middle earth, but even those in the midst of such times can
appreciate good food and good times. (i speak somewhat from
experience) I know quoting is frowned upon for this voting process,
and anyway, I would end up quoting a great deal of the story back to
you. And well, having written it, I'm sure you've already read it.
Just know that i found it to be utterly perfect. Especially the scene
with gandalf and frodo at the end. I do hope you have another story
out there where the wizard takes part in the fun? I look forward to
reading more of your works. Great job!! congrats!

Title: Object Lessons · Author: Aliana · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 586
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 11:02:49 Score: 10
That was FANTASTIC. I almost didn't read it, wary to read another
badly done frodo story. But this was NOT one of those. The insites
into Frodo's feelings about his part in the quest and the state of
the world were perfectly done. Not overly stated, nor under. Almost
poetic. Quite beautiful really! I'm gushing I know.

"That burden. . " This part so clearly spoke of his feelings of
failure. He succumbed to the ring's call and was not truly the one
who threw it in. We know of course that this fact does not lessen his
accomplishment. Your Eowyn knows this as well, when she speaks of it
holding so many in its thrall.

The fact that you made this encounter the only Eowyn and Frodo have
just adds to the perfection of it. Makes it all the more beautiful
and precious, if i may use that word (wink). I love the way she
hordes the memory to herself, afraid to cheapen it by the retelling.

A paragraph that truly made my jaw drop with it's fantastic poetry is
the one that includes "Look long and well, he seems to say to her, "
So sad and wonderful. How many in the excitement of of the winning of
the war saw the cost of that win so truly as your frodo has. The
elves I"m sure, but what of Men? Do they know that with the worst,
they have also lost the best?

I just can't seem to gush enough over this wonderful piece. You were
SO right to nominate yourself for it. It deserves it's chance in the
sun.
Oh and WOW, the "receding" imagry at the very end! Perfect! I will be
recommending this story to others and I look forward to reading more
of your works.

Title: Enmities · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs ·
ID: 561
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-22 12:11:19 Score: 1
What must it have been like, for the last few pitiful remnants of
orcs left after the War? An orc's POV.

Title: This Too Shall Pass · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea ·
Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 742
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-22 12:21:09 Score: 1
A very dark and very funny bit of AU movie-verse humor!

Title: The Cornfield · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Villains · ID:
530
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-22 12:25:57 Score: 2
A very good explanation for the otherwise inexplicable movie-verse
moment. Of course Sam *would* notice a previously unknown plant,
wouldn't he?

Title: Well Favored · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 417
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-22 12:33:26 Score: 2
I really love this! An engaging OFC, not at all a Mary Sue, and a
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