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Title: Friends in Small Spaces · Author: Varda's Servant · Genres:
Humor: Aragorn · ID: 102
Reviewer: LadyAranel · 2005-08-24 21:03:17 Score: 2
This was charming, amusing and slightly irreverent. Prissy elf? LOL.
It was interesting in that, while there was only dialoug, I found
that I could picture the entire scene quite well. Made me smile.

Title: Weregild · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical ·
ID: 1091
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-24 21:07:51 Score: 3
This short piece is spookily convincing. There's an internal logic to
Isildur's argument, but it's slightly unhinged, almost gollumish --
and that only serves to show how desperate the situation was, much
better than any direct exposition could have.

Title: A Father's Choice · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 298
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-24 21:37:54 Score: 2
As a mother of a pre-teen, and a young teen, son and the state of the
world today, the emotion in this drabble touches me in a fearful way.

Title: Kindred Spirits · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 299
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-24 21:39:43 Score: 2
This is an insightfull look at an unusual pairing. - but what a
connection, to see how much these two really had in common. well done.

Title: Wait for me - Eowyn · Author: elanor_of_aquitania ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 127
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-24 21:46:19 Score: 3
oh gosh, I've broken so many of my old 'rules of reading' during this
year's MEFAs. - poetry was one of them, and I find yet another poem
that touches me. I like the unusual style and meter of this one. -
and the pain Faramir must know with his Numenorian gift of long life.

Title: Best Laid Plans · Author: Lamiel · Genres: Humor · ID: 455
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 22:08:21 Score: 4
Oh my word! This was such a funny story! I love it when a story can
combine slapstick hilarity with an undertone of seriousness. Gimli's
affection for Legolas, Legolas' protectiveness of Aragorn, his
reaction to seeing Merry and Pippin--all underscore the deep love and
friendship of the Fellowship--one that not even encounters with
unexpected cakes can dim! Yet with all that, I was still chuckling
the whole way through.

Title: On His Stewardship · Author: Alawa · Races/Places: Gondor:
Poetry · ID: 73
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:32:05 Score: 3
There was something very noble and honorable about this poem. I like
the comparison of the white virgin banner to loyalty toward an absent
King. It takes a great man to be truly humble, and this poem
represents a lot of that. It's a good contrast for some of the things
Denethor said to Gandalf ere the end.

Title: On the Death of His Wife · Author: Alawa · Races/Places:
Gondor: Poetry · ID: 74
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:33:00 Score: 5
Oh, I liked this poem very much. I hadn't really considered the
problems for Denethor as he attempted to serve both Gondor and
Finduilas, but the way they clashed in this poem was beautiful. I
especially loved the sea imagery associated with Finduilas and how
the stone of Minas Tirith was used when illustrating her decline,
essentially trading one for the other. But perhaps my favorite part
was the idea that Finduilas was a steward, too. I can easily see that
about her, and it's portrayed very well here.

Title: East Wind · Author: Ellisande · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry ·
ID: 264
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:33:43 Score: 5
Good gap-filler. There have been a couple attempts at filling in for
the East Wind, but this one seems to pay special attention to
completing the song as crafted by Aragorn and Legolas. It fits the
style very well, and it has a note of finality to it, as though the
East Wind was the last wind contemplated and the last one listened
to. Or not listened to, as the case is here. Which is probably for
the best. I like the line about the wind spreading lies in silent
lands. Those would be lands most receptive to such things.

Title: The Ballad of Isildur and Elendil · Author: Lindelea ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 460
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:34:16 Score: 3
Training Gondor's future soldiers does indeed begin at an early age.
I liked this lullaby, though it felt a bit dark at times. But given
the times during which this lullaby was sung, that seems all too
appropriate. The repetition was good, and I enjoyed the fact that the
line most repeated was that of men holding to their duty. Let the
training begin.

Title: Denethor Limericks · Author: Llinos · Races/Places: Gondor:
Poetry · ID: 787
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:34:52 Score: 4
Mmm, yes, these limericks are very irreverent, but fun, too. My
favorite has to be the second one. I was reading along quietly when I
got to the line about having sons to squandor, and for some reason,
that forced a loud guffaw out of me. Very nice delivery. The limerick
is leading to that kind of a finish, but it's so blunt that it still
surprises you. Which makes it that much more enjoyable.

Title: The Girl I Kissed at the Rammas · Author: Marta ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 942
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:35:46 Score: 5
For some reason, as I was reading this, I kept remembering the song
from the 50s about a traveling man who has a girl in every country he
visits. Which struck me as appropriate, because some of the soldiers
of Gondor would probably have a similar setup. But of course there
would be one special girl in a soldier's drinking song, and why not
the girl at the Rammas? The rhythm and style of this poem definitely
fit its purpose, and I can see this being sung after a few too many
drinks in smokey taverns. Good work.

Title: Wait for me - Eowyn · Author: elanor_of_aquitania ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 127
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:38:30 Score: 7
When I first stumbled upon this poem, I was completely blown away.
It's a brilliant use of the form seen in Tolkien's poem "The Lay of
the Children of Hurin," and it might just be done even better. By
virtue of its structure, you can read at least three different poems
out of it, and I'm sure there's more to be found if I had more
experience dissecting poetry. The lines on the right remind me most
of Gondor as Faramir contrasts light and dark and talks of shadows
and high-mindedness. The lines on the left remind me of Rohan, where
it speaks of reaching and flying unfettered. The two sides together
seem to form a more complete poem, much like the union between
Faramir and Eowyn. And though this poem is dark, there seems to be a
hopefulness about it as Faramir tells Eowyn to wait. Very moving and
very layered. Quite possibly the best way to depict the relationship
between this unusual couple.

Title: Beregond's Prayer standing on watch · Author:
elanor_of_aquitania · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 258
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:39:39 Score: 6
Fascinating poem. I very much enjoyed the three divisions of men into
fickle, mortal, and frail. And I like the order in which they come.
Beregond's concern for Bergil should obviously be first, then he is
concerned with mortality and other individuals involved in the fight,
and then he seems to be concerned with those still fighting as they
try to keep Gondor safe. It starts narrow and then broadens until
it's a prayer for all of them. The structure is very fun, too, as
snippets of smaller poems emerge thanks to the break in the lines.
And these smaller poems seem to be very telling of Beregond's
emotions.

Title: Forlorn Hope · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races/Places: Gondor:
Poetry · ID: 210
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:46:03 Score: 6
I love the way this poem uses contrasts. The most obvious ones are
those involving the men themselves as they are turned from creatures
of soft feelings into bared steel. But I like the way sound is also
used. So much of poetry is based on sight and touch, but this uses
hearing as well. I like the idea of silence leaching everything away
and how they rode in that silence toward "coming thunder." Nice,
ominous overtones and it's a good contrast to the silence that has
made them what they are. Maybe the thunder will find a way to unmake
them. The imagery of men as blades that will be sheathed in the
ground was particularly moving, too, as was the idea of "moon-
drenched Ithilien." Powerful stuff.

Title: Beyond Imagination · Author: annmarwalk · Races/Places:
Gondor: Drabble · ID: 103
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:54:58 Score: 2
Very touching. I like the good!Denethor moments. There aren't nearly
enough of them, and this is something that most people can relate to.
Very simple, and yet still beyond what we understand.

Title: Echo · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble ·
ID: 684
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:55:58 Score: 3
The title of this story was actually what affected me most,
especially how it seems to put all of Boromir's things into the realm
of metaphor. This is just an echo of his life, and no one's going to
come in and tell Pippin to get out of it because it's just an echo.
Good introspection on Pippin's part, too.

Title: So Other Men May Fight · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 958
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:56:51 Score: 3
I love the weapons Bergil turns on his father to get him to stay:
defiance and loyalty. Both are sorely needed, and I like the fact
that they appeal to Beregond now. He knows how much these traits will
help Gondor in the coming days, and he can't turn them down in his
son. Good drabble.

Title: Goldfinch and Nightingale · Author: Nrink · Races/Places:
Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 504
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:59:39 Score: 2
Definitely ominous given the man that Finduilas will end up marrying.
I like the way this shows Minas Tirith in different perspectives and
how some can see its beauty but others only want what they were
brought up with.

Title: Dragon of the North · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Gondor:
Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 395
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:00:01 Score: 3
I enjoyed Denethor's attitude in this story. Gondor is everything to
him, both now and up until his death. And he wants only the best for
Gondor. I can see how this want would affect his perceptions of an
unknown Northerner. Good characterization.

Title: Patrimony · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-
Quest Drabbles · ID: 247
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:01:59 Score: 4
There really need to be more stories in which Denethor and Faramir
are on more than just speaking terms. I liked the way that Faramir's
thirst for knowledge was portrayed, and I loved Denethor's reaciton
when this thirst extended into darker subject matter. Faramir's brave
vow was wonderful, but even better was the fact that Denethor seemed
to believe him. I just wish his confidence in his second son could
have lasted. Great drabble.

Title: A Warrior's Skills · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Gondor:
Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 551
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:04:30 Score: 4
Faramir is truly fortunate to have men like this in his patrol. I
love the idea that they would not only understand his knowledge
beyond the art of war but also want and appreciate it. Faramir's
words about not loving the sword but rather what the sword protects
have weighed in as some of my favorite Tolkien quotes, and I can see
those words being put into action in this drabble. Warriors do need
more than just skill with the sword, and I'm glad that Faramir's men
recognize this.

Title: Hide and Seek · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Races/Places:
Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 637
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:06:39 Score: 4
The fandom needs more drabbles like these. I love the stories that
focus on a good relationship between Denethor and Faramir. It's
definitely bittersweet, because we see what could have been and know
how far astray it went, but at the same time, it's heartwarming to
think that Faramir had his father's love and approval as a child. And
it also feeds nicely into Denethor's grief at the end of his life
when he thinks Faramir is dying.

Title: Sand-castles when the tide is flowing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 549
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:07:42 Score: 4
More than anything else, this drabble reminded me of what Boromir's
and Faramir's names meant. Boromir is certainly the faithful jewell,
who creates high and lofty places that his father can be proud of.
But Faramir is sufficient, and his tower is the one still standing
after the tide retreats. Nice use of sand-castles as a metaphor, and
great foreshadowing of what will ultimately become of these two
brothers.

Title: Elements of Ithilien · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 536
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:11:28 Score: 4
Very thorough characterization of Faramir! I think I liked the first
drabble best, actually. He seemed to be lying in ambush, but even
then, he was still very observant and was even making note of the
minor things in life. It's so very Faramir. I also liked the water
drabble quite a bit and how he resisted the temptation of the Ring by
remembering Numenor. I can see Faramir falling back on history as a
shield against the Ring.

Title: A Long Tradition of Ancient Lore · Author: Elena Tiriel ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 206
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:18:01 Score: 4
Denethor's a sly one. I love the way he sparked Faramir's interest by
expanding history to include more than just rote memorization. I
wonder if he'll regret it later when Faramir decides to expand his
understanding where Gandalf is concerned. Or the Ring. But for the
moment, this was a wonderfully touching little drabble between father
and son before the relationship soured. Loved it.

Title: Interment · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-
Quest Drabbles · ID: 379
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:18:29 Score: 4
Denethor's grief was very well portrayed in this drabble, but I
actually enjoyed the characterization of Finduilas more. Which is odd
since she isn't really in the drabble. But I love the idea of quiet
stubbornness that extends even beyond death to a grave that Denethor
considers foolish. That's a very strong-willed lady, and I suspect
that she was a good match for Denethor.

Title: Duty · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble ·
ID: 240
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:20:03 Score: 5
I was as chilled as Boromir after reading this drabble. I liked the
way that the sight of the Argonath drew out his thoughts, and I liked
the way that he suddenly felt very alone, abandoned by the kings, by
perhaps even Rohan, and (had he gone further) I'm sure he could have
distanced himself from his father. Which left only Boromir and his
duty, which was to protect Gondor using what he had at hand.
Definitely ominous, and it doesn't look good for Frodo. Great insight
into Boromir's mind.

Title: Shipwright · Author: Berzerker Prime · Races/Places: Elves ·
ID: 1053
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:24:25 Score: 4
I really thought this was very well written. It's just the kind of
thing I would write and therefore it is nice that someone has got
there first and done such a good job. I do like how you played off
the geographical opposition with the opposition in Cirdan's mind. I
also admired the way in which you captured your characters. I have a
bit of a soft spot for Gandalf and it was lovely to see him done well.

Title: Voices of the Forgotten · Author: jen_loves_elves ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 435
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:27:03 Score: 6
What amazed me most about this drabble series was how individual each
drabble was. Every characterization of each queen and also each king
was unique. They all received a different place in the spotlight, and
they call came with their own failings and strengths. I could picture
each one, and I was actually sorry to move on to the next drabble
because I wanted to get to know them better. The emotions tied into
these drabbles were also fascinating. There was humor, sorrow,
desperation, fear, arrogance, and just about every other emotion
imaginable. Fascinating journey through Gondor's royal family!

Title: Gathering the Pieces · Author: Tehta · Races/Places: Elves:
First Age · ID: 13
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:32:03 Score: 3
This was a very clever piece of writing. I loved the juxtaposition
between the metaphor of the game and the events in Maedhros' life. I
think it enabled the reader to see his sheer detachment without
having to sidetrack us from the narrative - something I felt was
quite brilliant. Excellent canon knowledge, skillfully employed.

Title: Marriage Counseling · Author: annmarwalk · Races/Places:
Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 111
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:32:32 Score: 4
There's something unnerving about the fact that Finduilas never
directly answers Imrahil's question. She appears happy enough, but
I'm not entirely satisfied with her remarks that marriage is
affection and respect. Clearly, Imrahil is not either, but Finduilas
seems content right now. It's probably enough to satisfy her brother
for the moment, but I can't help shivering. Something about this
feels slightly ominous.

Title: A Father's Choice · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 298
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:32:56 Score: 4
Kudos to Beregond for being such an understanding parent. And there's
definitely wisdom here, too, though perhaps a different kind than
what one might normally expect. Bergil would definitely be safer
somewhere else, but Beregond can see deeper than that, and he can see
that this is something Bergil needs to do. Great portrayal of a very
bittersweet moment.

Title: The Last Fruit · Author: Finch · Races/Places: Elves: First
Age · ID: 728
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:41:09 Score: 3
How wonderful to finally find someone who thinks about the people who
were abandoned as well as the ones who abandoned them. I really did
enjoy this, I thought it was realistic, well written and powerful in
the extreme. I find myself longing for a sequel in which the second
daughter to house of Finarfin meets the first. If one exists then let
me know.

Title: One Word · Author: Joan Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: First
Age · ID: 1081
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:44:06 Score: 2
A very poignant look at the power language holds over our very
selves. I think the story works better for it not focussing on one of
the 'great and powerful' - bans like that have an effect on everyone.
Very enjoyable read indeed.

Title: Wisdom Long Obscured · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places:
Elves: Lothlorien · ID: 1012
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:56:16 Score: 6
Wonderful, lovely, fantastic, brilliant - right I'd better stop or I
will use up all my vocabulary before I've even started. Suffice it to
say I really liked that. Celeborn is, as I am sure you know, a very
neglected and maligned character and it is great to see him finally
given the respect he deserves. More importantly, not only do you
recognise his existence, you separate him out from Galadriel both in
history and temperament. I believe you really have a handle on him.

Aragorn too was written excellently and realistically. You homed in
on exactly the recriminations and guilt that he would be feeling
after such a painful loss and did so without making him overly
emotionally weepy.

Loved it!

Title: Here sits, in secret, blest Theology · Author: annmarwalk ·
Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 388
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:13:09 Score: 3
Interesting. I like the idea of a grizzled old Ranger passing
something like this on to Faramir, and I like the idea of his using
this in a time of need. Stewardship has many demands, and Faramir is
the type of person who might chance a hunch or a vague memory to meet
those demands.

Title: Finduilas' Dance · Author: jen_loves_elves · Races/Places:
Gondor · ID: 431
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:14:18 Score: 4
There's almost an eerie feel to this story. Something surreal and
mystical, particularly the moment when Mithrellas appears. Finduilas
herself, though, was a very solid character. She's clearly of an
independent mind, which might explain how she survived in Gondor for
as long as she did. And the differences already appearing between
Boromir and Faramir were very telling. Good characterization work on
all involved, and good tone.

Title: Written on Cloth · Author: shadow975 · Races/Places: Gondor ·
ID: 527
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:14:50 Score: 4
Something I liked best about Aragorn's coronation was his decision
that the office of the Steward should not end, and this story seems
to reinforce that idea. The Steward is still Steward, and his banner
can still be found in Minas Tirith. I think Faramir also feels a bit
more at ease, now, and hearing his father's words repeated by Aragorn
probably did a lot to assure his fealty.

Title: Truth Be Told · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Gondor ·
ID: 852
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:16:13 Score: 5
I've always wondered when and how Faramir was told of his father's
death. This was an excellent recounting of the event. I liked how
Faramir made certain that both Pippin and Beregond were around to
share the story. It was probably easier with both of them there, and
they would have been able to fill in any gaps that the other might
have had. Faramir's persistence in wanting to know what happened made
my heart ache, and I can only imagine what he went through when all
that he knew was that his father was dead and no one would tell him
how or why. Good characterization work.

Title: Language Lessons · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 190
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:17:17 Score: 5
I really liked this early look into the Steward's family, and I liked
the way that Denethor let Boromir know that some things were not to
be taken lightly. Denethor's characterization was wonderfully
complex, from his disciplinary measures with Boromir to his talk with
Finduilas about Dol Amroth. I can see quite a bit of his father in
Boromir, and I think it very appropriate that Finduilas would find it
difficult to understand her oldest son. I lalso iked the comparison
to her kinsmen in Dol Amroth. It helped explain where Faramir comes
from and what things shaped him. Nicely written.

Title: Offerings · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races/Places: Gondor:
Boromir and Faramir · ID: 322
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:18:23 Score: 5
At the end of Return of the King, Faramir was in desperate need of
some closure as far as matters with his father were concerned. Sadly,
though, Tolkien never really gave us any, so I'm glad we can revert
to fanfics like this one. I loved the way he was trying to forgive in
the first ficlet but was still mired in the shadows. The second
ficlet was much brighter, and Faramir seemed to have reached an
understanding of sorts. He still acknowledged the shadows, but he was
finally able to step out of them. Beautifully written. Loved the
parallels between the two.

Title: On the West Slopes of Mindolluin · Author: Gwynnyd ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 576
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:19:32 Score: 5
I liked the idea that Boromir was a willing conspirator to Faramir's
truancy. It gave both men some interesting characterization. But I
was even more intrigued with Boromir's choice of hunting grounds. It
was an interesting extrapolation of Faramir's statement that Boromir
didn't take well to the fact that their father wasn't king. I liked
the fact that Faramir ias uneasy, but despite that, he did what was
needed. And he did it in a way that didn't necessarily mesh with the
military manner. Lovely bit of foreshadowing.

Title: Leavetakings · Author: Celandine Brandybuck · Races/Places:
Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 188
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:20:45 Score: 4
I really like the way that Finduilas was such a large part of
Denethor's life. Her death seems to have served as a catalyst for a
sterner, grimmer man, which paves the way for a man who was willing
to risk the palantir later on. I also really liked Adrahil and
Imrahil in this story, and I liked Imrahil's attempt to persuade
Denethor that Faramir and Boromir should come to Dol Amroth. He's a
tricky one, appealing to duty in that way. Very tender and moving
story!

Title: A Gift at Year's Turning · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 186
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:21:25 Score: 5
Brilliant moment with the Steward's family. I loved how well defined
all the characters were, and I enjoyed the tidbits of culture and
history that were thrown in, such as the rules dictating the custom
of gift exchanging. Little things like that made this a very
enriching story. And of course I loved Faramir's introduction to the
world. Interesting take on it, and it explains quite a bit. Loved the
foreshadowing toward the end, too, with Finduilas's head on the
pillow. That was chilling.

Title: The Sky Wept Diamonds · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races/Places:
Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 710
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:26:32 Score: 6
Great imagery! I loved the descriptions of light and shadows. The
omens surrounding Boromir's birth were definitely foreboding, but I
loved the fact that Finduilas wouldn't shrink from them. Her
characterization was brilliant. She was strong and hopeful, but she
was also wise. Definitely a good match for Denethor. As for Denethor
himself, he didn't have much time in this story, but he certainly
made the most of what he had. He was stern and relentless, but as the
serving woman observed, he was completely devoted to Finduilas. I
loved the descriptions of the lengths he went to just to please her.
And like Finduilas, he was also strong when he needed to be. I see a
lot of what both Boromir and Faramir will inherit.

Title: The Men Who Would Be Steward · Author: Michael Martinez ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID: 1137
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:26:56 Score: 6
I really enjoyed this look at the stewards, and particularly the look
at Boromir. It drew firmly from canon, constructed logical
extrapolations, and then used those extrapolations to create other
theories. The end result was a far more complete picture of Boromir,
Faramir, and Denethor than what is given on the surface of LotR. I
loved the idea of Boromir thinking on his own terms and assessing
things based on opportunity, not on risk. I had not thought of
his "so be it" answer as a diplomatic side step, but the more I think
about it, the more sense it makes. And it gives Boromir a few more
qualities that weren't quite as obvious in LotR.

Title: The Best Gift of All · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 739
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:27:37 Score: 6
This story was definitely enjoyable, but it didn't really hit me
until the end. The moment where Imrahil takes Faramir out into the
hall only to discover that Boromir has come along for the ride was
wonderfully portrayed. I loved Boromir's method of greeting his
brother with a book that Boromir "can't make head or tails of." That
was a wonderful bit of insight into the relationship between the two.
Good characterization. I also enjoyed the characterization of the
Prince's family, and I loved the fact that Elphir is already in love
with dragons and adventures while Enchirion is concentrating on
boats. Nice touches all around.

Title: A Mantle of Silver Stars · Author: Nrink · Races/Places:
Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 214
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:28:31 Score: 6
There really are too few of these kinds of stories. Denethor is in
desperate need of better press, and moments like these (where he and
Faramir are behaving as a father and son ought to behave) are very
welcome. Especially when they're done as tenderly as in this story.
Finduilas was in fine form, too, and I loved her moments of
foresight, even the somewhat foreboding ones. Boromir's mention was
classic, and I can easily envision him causing all sorts of problems
for his caretakers. But the moments between Faramir and Denethor were
far and away my favorites. Great depictions and wonderful
characterizations.

Title: In the Forest, Singing Sorrowless · Author: Nrink ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 318
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:29:15 Score: 5
There was almost a mystical quality to this story, and I think that
might have been due to some excellent descriptive work as well as the
use of the Lay of Leithian, which was a great addition to the tale.
It felt like something out of dreams, and maybe this is one of the
few times that Denethor has let that happen. I really liked the
description of Dol Amroth, and I also liked fiery Imrahil and his
threat. Even more than that, I liked Denthor's response to it, and
it's all such a promising beginning for both Denethor and Finduilas.
A shame it couldn't continue.

Title: Repose Earned, Words Unspoken · Author: maranya14 ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 482
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:31:01 Score: 6
The thing I liked most about this story was the way Denethor likened
Faramir to Ecthelion. That's a comparison I hadn't seen before.
Faramir and Finduilas are often compared, and Denethor's grief is
frequently turned to anger because Faramir reminds him of his wife.
But to have Faramir compared with Ecthelion is a brilliant stroke,
especially considering Ecthelion's friendliness with Thorongil and
Gandalf.

Another thing I liked about this story was how the narrative changed
over the months as events take their toll, and I loved the defiance
in the very end as Denethor decides to burn hot enough for both
himself and Faramir. Very powerful ending passage.

Title: Pride and Despair · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Gondor:
Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 579
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:32:27 Score: 6
I love how Denethor progressed through the flashbacks to the man that
he became. He changed quite a bit over the years, and yet some things
remained the same. His defiance, for example, and his yearning to
serve Gondor to the best of his ability. That's something that can be
seen in all the flashbacks, and the defiance was certainly something
that fueled his decision to create a pyre for himself and for
Faramir. Very nice character development on Denethor's part, and
great characterization of Faramir and Boromir in the two flashbacks
that they share. Within the boys were hints of the men they would
become.

Title: Refraction · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor
and Finduilas · ID: 750
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:34:59 Score: 5
Very chilling tale! I loved this new version of Finduilas's death,
and I loved how so often in the course of the telling, Denethor
seemed to be trying to convince himself more than anyone else. The
prospect of a third child and the palantir made for a very dark
combination, and I have to wonder exactly what Finduilas saw when she
confronted it. Or why Denethor decided to overcome it. Or what
haunted Faramir before his mother took the brunt of the visions upon
herself. Fascinating tale, and I think it made Finduilas a stronger
character than what exists in canon. I can never say no to that.

Title: Inheritance · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor:
Historical · ID: 1087
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:36:30 Score: 6
I loved the way this story took the little bits known about Narmacil,
Calmacil, and Minalcar and expanded them until it could be seen
exactly why Minalcar made such a good regent and - afterwards - such
a good king. Hyarmendacil is right. If his sons and grandsons
can't "see," then no amount of words on his part is going to do any
good. But Minalcar does see, and I loved the way that this brought
hope to Hyarmendacil. I also liked the line about usurpers and
kinslayers. Sadly, I actually understood that joke. And here I was
thinking I had stayed out of the geek crowd. Ah well. Brilliant
story, and brilliant expansion upon the little that canon gives us.

Title: Weregild · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical ·
ID: 1091
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:38:23 Score: 7
I've got something of a soft spot for Isildur, too, though I can't
really say that I approve of his choice. But he was certainly valiant
back in Numenor, and he proved it again in this story. I really liked
the part where Isildur said that their fight was meant to give hope
to enslaved descendents. That was a very sobering statement and spoke
volumes about the odds they'd gone up against and the desperation
they had felt. It certainly shed new light onto Isildur's feelings
regarding their victory. And I liked the way his own fight with
Sauron (striking off the Ring) paralleled the rest of the battle. It
wasn't meant as a victory stroke. Rather, it was meant to buy time
and set an example. Fascinating perspective, and I loved the
justification given for keeping the Ring. There was certainly a taint
there in the reasoning, but it was slight enough that Isildur would
never have been aware of it.

Title: The Seeing Stone · Author: Finch · Races/Places: Gondor:
Historical · ID: 346
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:39:33 Score: 5
This is definitely the first time that I've seen a palantir used as a
viewpoint, and I'm amazed with the results. The stone was
clearly...well, a stone. He saw things and noted that such was the
way of the world even if he couldn't understand the reasons. It felt
very much like what a stone would think, and I loved the idea that
the faces of all who looked into him/her/it were still there but
could no longer be seen. And while stones may not weep, it seemed as
though he wanted to. Moving little piece.

Title: A mother's duty · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 1384
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:42:20 Score: 4
I was quite moved by this little vignette. Finduilas is such a
strong, shrewd character here who seems to see something unsettling
in the future. She is combining a mother's duty with her duty to
Gondor, and there seem to be compromises made all around. Definitely
sobering, but it says volumes about the strength of Finduilas's
personality. I also love the hesitation on Ioreth's part and how it's
pity that moves her in the end. Great characterization for both women.

Title: Green Seas · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette ·
ID: 453
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:42:51 Score: 4
I love the little touches of humor in this story, such as the fact
that nobody can remember the name of a child who was crushed between
the docks and the ships. The humor stays throughout, too, which
prevents this story of parting from becoming an angst-fest. It stays
light, though not too light, and the dialogue between the three
participants feels very appropriate for their ages. Interesting look
at an interesting turning point for Theoden.

Title: Finduilas' Song · Author: Ellisande · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 265
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:43:46 Score: 5
Very sobering song and beautifully written. Great imagery, and I love
how the metaphors were carried over to the point where they became
action-oriented. The repeated use of waters and dream says a lot
about Finduilas's background as well as how much the stone walls of
Minas Tirith are hurting her spirit. Great diagnosis of some of her
problems, and great characterization, particularly with her
willingness to keep trying. That seems very fitting in the woman that
Denethor chose to marry.

Title: Cold Memories · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 82
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:44:38 Score: 4
I would have paid money to see Faramir hit Denethor with a snowball.
I loved the Steward's reaction to that little incident, too. And the
idea of Denethor helping Faramir and Boromir build a snowman was
brilliant. Definitely light-hearted, but the idea of Faramir keeping
this cold-yet-warm memory close to his heart gives it a depth it
might not otherwise have had. Good story!

Title: Watcher on the Height · Author: Chris · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 1015
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:45:09 Score: 3
I like the stories focusing on those characters who were seldom seen
or severely unappreciated, so of course I liked this story. I enjoyed
the details given to each of the characters and the little quirks and
traits that came out over the course of the day. It made them seem
very real, which made the emotions easier to realize in the end.

Title: The Healing Touch · Author: Werecat · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 1312
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:45:29 Score: 3
I really enjoyed the twist in this story when the healer realized
that the cat might be doing far more good than harm. And I can easily
envision a purring cat soothing a troubled boy. I've had a cat fall
asleep mid-purr against my side before, and it's a remarkable
experience. This brings back very good memories, so many thanks for
that.

Title: The Laughing Oliphaunt · Author: Aeneid · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 998
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:46:38 Score: 6
Great series of vignettes! I loved how it was all tied in with the
fateful night when the last bridge was cast down, and how the ending
brought it even closer to canon events as Faramir recited his dream.
But as for the vignettes themselves, there was such a wide assortment
of different characters coming from different backgrounds. It was
truly amazing. Each had his own story to tell, and each had something
different to offer, from grizzled older captains to trembling young
soldiers to the Steward's sons themselves. Brilliant
characterizations on each of them. The canon characters were firmly
rooted in what Tolkien gave us, and the original characters were
solid enough to stand beside them. Great writing.

Title: Call of the Druedain · Author: thevina_finduilas ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 565
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:49:04 Score: 5
Fun story. I really enjoyed the rambling nature of the narrative. It
felt very much like he was sitting there relating all of this to me.
I think I learned something about drum making, and I learned even
more about his character. I liked how went on about what kind of wood
was right, particularly the part about fickle musicians whom he would
lead into the woods and who would then pay more money. But most of
all, I liked the thought that he might find the Druadan and be happy.
That was a wonderfully wistful note of hope to conclude on.

Title: Old Wives' Tales · Author: Werecat · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 350
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:52:45 Score: 4
Interesting tale. I enjoyed the initial encounter between Eowyn and
the cat, and I liked how her superstitions were rebuffed by Luthwen.
She seemed to be a very competent lady, and her story was told very
well. It's interesting that Eowyn's distaste for cats would be shared
by some of Gondor, but for those who escaped the plague, the old
superstitions would be replaced by new ones.

Title: Strange Meeting · Author: JeannieMac · Races/Places: Gondor:
Houses of Healing · ID: 743
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:54:00 Score: 6
I loved the myriad of emotions and roles that both Aragorn and
Faramir went through during the course of this story. Aragorn, in
particular, was fascinating to watch. He was commanding and regal,
but he could also be quiet and watchful. Initially, it was almost as
though he was sorting through to see which one Faramir would respond
to, which is an intriguing concept. And in the end, he seemed to
settle on friendship between lords. Faramir himself was
heartbreaking. His despair was tangible, and his reluctance to return
hurt. He came around by degrees, and it felt as though he fought for
every step he took in the right direction. Definitely a strange
meeting between these two, and very well told in this story.

Title: On the Flood · Author: Acacea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original
Characters · ID: 284
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:01:20 Score: 5
Very nice descriptive work in this vignette. The scene is set well,
and through it, we come to know the original character. I like the
way his personality is shown through his thoughts on his surroundings
and his grief for his brother. It felt as though his character was
being reflected back at us through the setting, and that tied the
story together nicely. But I think the part I liked best was the idea
of the mud sliding out from under him when he realizes what the river
has brought and how bittersweet a giver it can be.

Title: Before the Doors of the Houses of Healing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 529
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:02:55 Score: 6
I must defer to Gandalf's wisdom in this story. And Eomer's, too.
There were many rash deeds that day, and Imrahil certainly didn't
need to add to the tally. I like the emphasis given to his role as a
leader in Gondor and the possibility that he might have turned back
with Gandalf if he'd learned that the Steward and his son were both
near death. I think Imrahil would have been wise enough to see
Gondor's need, but I think it might have also distracted him just
enough to be costly. I loved Imrahil's anger when he learned what
happened and also learned that others knew but did not tell him.
Emotions were running high, and his played very well into the mix.

Title: Making of Boys · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor:
Houses of Healing · ID: 237
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:03:40 Score: 6
Ioreth always struck me as a very maternal presence in the Houses of
Healing, and I get the same impression from her here, too. And given
all the boys wandering around, I think that's not an unfounded
feeling. I loved her thoughts on them and the idea that for now they
should be lambs instead of lions. There was a lot of great
introspection, but it never went so deep that it stopped sounding
like Ioreth. It seemed to brush greater things and then move on to
more practical matters. And I really enjoyed the bits of humor, too,
such as the missing broom she spies in someone's hand. Very well-
rounded story, and great character voice for Ioreth. She sounds just
as I'd imagined her.

Title: Below the Balcony · Author: Ninamazing · Races/Places: Gondor:
Houses of Healing · ID: 496
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:04:22 Score: 4
So now we know what everybody was thinking when Faramir kissed Eowyn
in full view of the city. I enjoyed seeing hope come in different
ways to different people, and how they associated this hope with
Faramir and Eowyn. Times were changing quickly by then, and I can see
the people of Minas Tirith looking to their Steward and to the White
Lady for a sign that these changes were for the best.

Title: Fever Dreams · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses
of Healing · ID: 397
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:04:50 Score: 4
This is definitely an interesting take on Faramir's experience in the
Houses of Healing. He was certainly weak when Aragorn first called
him back, but the idea that he might not remember that experience on
his second waking intrigues me. He has to go through it all again,
and the fact that his dreams have been disturbing isn't going to
help. It feels as though he's mixed dreams and reality, and that can
be a very confusing experience. I don't envy him.

Title: To Labor and To Wait · Author: Aliana · Races/Places: Gondor:
Houses of Healing · ID: 79
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:07:50 Score: 4
This was a very interesting series of vignettes showcasing different
people, and I enjoyed seeing how they prepared for the task ahead in
different ways. From the very old to the very young, they sensed what
was coming. Sense was also an interesting part of these vignettes,
because so many aspects of sense were utilized. Smell, sound, sight,
and touch were all present in one form or another, and by using such
a variety, this became a very complete picture.

Title: Twilight · Author: Acacea · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and
Faramir · ID: 1022
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:13:28 Score: 7
The frog had me smiling all the way through the story. Poor little
amphibian. I suspect that Boromir was an even greater help to Faramir
as the frog climbed higher, and I loved the idea that they felt
compelled to name the frog and find a place for the well. It's a very
light-hearted moment, but true to the Steward's family, they find a
way to make it apply to what they've been talking about. And also
true to the Steward's family, they never come right out and say that
this could be a metaphor for Ithilien. They walk around the issue,
each knowing what the other is thinking but also knowing that to say
as much would ruin the moment and bring the darkness back. Best to
leave it as a simple problem of a frog climbing out of a well. And I
think that's what I liked best about this story: the depth of
understanding between the two brothers. They are definitely a good
team, whether it's commanding the men or bolstering each other. Great
story.

Title: Flame of the West · Author: Altariel · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 1
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:16:04 Score: 7
It's a shame that Tolkien never wrote more about Aragorn and Faramir
after the War of the Ring, because if stories like these are any
indication, they made an incredible team. The give and take of the
dialogue, turning phrases around to meet other phrases which were
also turned, was beautiful. These two men foiled against one another
well, bringing out strengths and weaknesses both. I loved the moment
when Faramir made his oath, and I loved Aragorn's pause, ensuring
that he had Faramir's undivided attention for the last part. And
framing the exchange between the two men was some amazing narrative
and descriptive work. The contrast between the beginning and the end
played well into the discussion between Steward and King, and the
last line about Earendil seaeds the story nicely. Great job with
setting, symbolism, and characterization.

Title: Ad Sum · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor: Original
Characters · ID: 693
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:26:40 Score: 8
Easily one of the best alternative viewpoints I've read, and perhaps
one of the most thought-provoking. Given the author, that's really
not a surprise, but even so, I was still caught off guard by this
woman's perspective on battle. It's so very different from most of
what's out there, but it rings true and there's a very simple kind of
logic behind it all. It was so easy to see where she was coming from
and how her life had been boiled down into her chosen profession to
the point where she could no longer escape it. Or wanted to escape
it. She'd found beauty and she was content. To be honest, I'm still
not sure how to react to this story. I want to pity her for her lot
in life, but she seemed to have no qualms about it, which makes pity
feel wasted. In any case, it was definitely a fascinating read, and I
like to think that the clasp she found toward the end belonged to
Halbarad. Somehow, it feels right that someone so devoted to her own
way of life should see to his final remains.

Title: Well Favored · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 417
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:31:55 Score: 5
I really enjoyed this story. I had a few suspicions about the
identity of the man Luthien spoke to, but Imrahil was a long-shot
until he started describing Dol Amroth. I should have known it from
the horse, but I think I was too preoccupied with Luthien, who made a
charming character with a wonderful blend of childish curiosity and
shyness. I liked seeing the description of war from her eyes, and I
absolutely loved her reasoning in the end when she decided that
Imrahil was better off keeping her favor. He was a fantastic
character, too, and I loved all the moments that he was fighting back
a smile.

Title: The Mantle of Stone · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places:
Gondor · ID: 116
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:33:44 Score: 6
This is among the best characterizations of Aragorn that I have ever
read. Both Strider and Elessar can be seen in this story, and I love
the way that the story teller describes Aragorn upon meeting him. My
favorite moment from the story is actually a later elaboration on the
description. Aragorn turns to leave the storyteller and then stops in
response to a question, standing with the Pillars of the Argonath on
either side of him in the distance. Beautiful imagery work went into
this, and I can imagine how he might have looked, bordered by his
ancestors. This particular moment concludes with the answer to the
question of what is this man. Aragorn's response is simple
brilliance: "He is King." Enough said. Wonderful story.

Title: Cat's Cradle · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor:
Historical · ID: 452
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:45:27 Score: 8
Brilliant story! So that's what happened to the line of kings. It's
an intriguing theory, and it fits very well with canon, particularly
considering Beruthiel's thought that "blood will tell." As for
Beruthiel herself, I loved her portrayal here. I enjoyed seeing her
from Earnil's side as a somewhat distant and peculiar relation, and I
enjoyed even more seeing things from her perspective as she conferred
with Taron. It felt as though she had a much sharper vision than
Earnil and was more willing to look at the bigger picture. The cats
were also a good addition as a tie-in with the legend surrounding
Beruthiel, but I can't help wondering if some of the other aspects of
the legend were also true. Maybe not the part about being a
sorcereress, but she certainly seems to see into the heart of both
her nephew and her own son. And while the cats might not have had
anything to do with that, such an ability could have certainly made
her suspicious in the eyes of her subjects, especially if she was as
shrewd as their queen as she seems to be while watching Earnil. Great
story.

Title: When the King Returned · Author: Ninquelosse · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 497
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:46:41 Score: 6
The alternate viewpoint can be a tricky and dangerous thing, but it's
pulled off brilliantly here. The focus of this vignette is absolutely
right. Aragorn and Gandalf more or less admit it themselves during
the Last Debate, and Elrond certainly said it during the Council. A
host of men will not ensure victory but rather earn Mordor's
attention. And the leaders certainly aren't going to explain all the
Ring-lore as well as their desperate gamble to those serving beneath
them, which leaves them to draw their own conclusions. And this was a
fabulous example of what those conclusions might be. The practically
minded people have to wonder what in the world the captains are
thinking. Great story! I don't think I've seen something quite like
this before, and I love it.

Title: Cup of Bitterness: First Meeting · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 531
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:54:01 Score: 8
I had always wondered how Faramir came to be called Faramir. It's not
the most flattering of names if used with Boromir, even if it has
been used that way before before, and it struck me as unlikely that
Denethor would have taken an immediate disliking to his second son.
He was too deliberate and calculating for that. Thankfully, there are
stories like this one around to explain things, and I love the
explanation that Finduilas named him on the strength of a dream.
Denethor's reaction to the dream, and also to the prophecies that
Ecthelion mentions, felt very natural and carried some ominous
foreshadowing of the day when Boromir and Faramir would come to their
father with a dream. I liked Finduilas's words about Boromir being
faithful and Faramir being sufficient, and I liked how those two
complimented each other. But the thing I liked most of all in this
story was Denethor's characterization from beginning to end. He was a
loving husband and father, ambitious leader, a cunning politician, a
practical analyst, and a servant to his country. Very good and very
comprehensive analysis of his character throughout the story.

Title: Saying Farewell · Author: Finch · Books/Time: The Silmarillion
· ID: 730
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-25 05:15:44 Score: 2
Beautiful. Love it. I intend to go immediately and look for more.
Finrod and Amarie are an under-represented couple, whose devotion in
the face of their long separation is admirable. (Shame he didn't
stay!)

Title: House of Dust and Memory · Author: Itarille · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 523
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-25 05:21:49 Score: 2
Overlooked victims of the mess created by the desires and demands of
Finwe and Feanor. Abandoned to bear the scorn and pity of those who
remain in Valinor. Moving.

Title: The Letter · Author: Isil Elensar · Races/Places: Elves:
Mirkwood · ID: 1201
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 07:15:44 Score: 3
I liked how this story gave Thranduil a 'real' and fleshed out
personality instead of the 2D baddie that he so often is
misrepresented as being. What is more you gave him good family
dynamics to play with and a real concern for his son came across
clearly. Keep on ficcing.

Title: Butterbur and the King · Author: Eledhwen · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Vignette · ID: 261
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 09:12:26 Score: 5
This is a wonderful story told from a character we rarely hear from --
Barliman Butterbur. Eledhwen has captured Butterbur's speech
patterns wonderful, as well as offering his unique perspective of
seeing the people of Bree welcoming their new King. Little details
like Butterbur wondering where Arnor was and that they drank three
barrels dry allowed the reader to crawl inside the innkeeper's head
and remember that while the war went on south, life went on as usual
for our beloved Bree Barkeep.

Title: The Sweetest Harvest · Author: alex_cat_45 · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 1001
Reviewer: erin_riwen · 2005-08-25 09:14:15 Score: 5
What a sweet and beautiful piece. So often, writers fail to find joy
with Elrond, seeing only anger or sadness - all there as well, but
with no balance, you don't see the entire character. I started out
loving slash Elrond and it is only recently that I have begun to
think on him and Celebrian to any degree and my thoughts are changing
from most slash writers and your story captures that. Love is indeed
like ripples and Elrond, I think, must have caused a lot of them, for
in my mind, he loved a lot. Well done, Alex.

Title: Touche · Author: DragonLady7 · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Vignette · ID: 229
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 09:29:12 Score: 4
A very enjoyable vignette that captures both Faramir and Eomer
totally in character. I would still like to know what it was they
were fighting for -- a bet, a matter of honour? Or just play? but
that's the joy of these stories because the reader can fill in their
own backstory. I find action sequences the hardest to write, yet this
author has written them so the movement is clear. Well done!

Title: Memory of Ents · Author: Rabidsamfan · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Friendship · ID: 800
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 09:36:02 Score: 4
Rabidsamfan has wonderfully captured the hobbits as they venture back
to the edges of the Old Forest. Little gems that talk about the trees
bending over to listen to the tale, and how they would understand the
hobbits weren't hurting the saplings but taking them to somewhere
they could grow tall and strong really give this story a depth and
layers that I love within a story.

Title: Weeping Iron Tears · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Grey Company · ID: 338
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 09:37:20 Score: 3
This scene has a nice soothing quality to it. Aragorn mourns for
Halbarad, but he remembers more the good than the last moments of his
life. I like the way Aragorn looks forward to the future Halbarad's
and so many others deaths has enabled instead of lingering in the
past. I like the last paragraph where he gets the feeling his friend
is still with him.

Title: Halbarad · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 341
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 09:43:01 Score: 4
This story has a creepy feeling to it. I don't know if it comes from
my knowledge that Halbarad will die or if it comes from the way the
reader gets the impression Halbarad knows he will die. He is so sure
for himself that he belongs to the dead although he still lives.

I like the difference in vision between the living and the dead.
Halbarad seems to stand between them. Seeing what the living see and
knowing what the dead would see.

Title: Reconciliation · Author: Nrink · Books/Time: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 44
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 09:45:45 Score: 3
This is a sad story but satisfying. Faramir comes to terms with his
father and lays his family to rest to be able to go on to the future.
I like the symbolism of throwing away the key to his parents grave.
He closes the door to his past and locks all past hurts away.

Title: The Swan Feather · Author: Starlight · Genres: Romance:
Vignette · ID: 50
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 09:46:11 Score: 3
This is a delightful little vignette. Who would have thought that
Denethor pays heed to superstition. No match in the drawer because it
brings ill luck, indeed. I love the tender touch of him fastening the
feather to the pillow to accommodate his brides customs.

Title: Insomnia · Author: AfterEver · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Second Age · ID: 62
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 10:43:24 Score: 3
This is an AU I have thought of while reading other stories about
this time. But I agree with Cirdan and Glorfindel, it feels not
right. Although this is a short piece the images and characters come
to life and I can vividly see the characters on the eve of battle.

Title: Always Dancing · Author: Mariposa · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship · ID: 928
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 10:48:03 Score: 4
This is a very interesting layered story -- on the surface Pippin
preparing young hobbits to defend the Shire, but there is so much
more. From the relationship between Merry and Pippin and the
adventures and horrors they have shared, to the memories of Boromir
teaching them how to defend themselves and the comparison of
swordplay to an intimate dance. Very well told, and very in-
character. Lovely.

Title: Fear no more · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 970
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 11:05:49 Score: 3
This is one of those hidden gems that you hope to find while reading
the volume of stories in the MEFA's. This is a beautifully written,
evocative glimpse and the author has managed to capture the emotion
of each character. And each character stays totally within Tolkien's
character. Faramir and his dreams, Arwen realizing their import.
Beautifully done!

Title: Fear no more · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 970
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-25 11:41:43 Score: 5

I'm delighted to find this incredible work, full of emotion and
imagery - both of pain and love. I'm awe-struck at the level of
technical skill of this piece that completely disappears under the
layers to form a beautiful work of art. I'm especially impressed with
how the description is perfectly balanced, deep and flavorful without
being overdone. The canon is well-woven and extended from the ancient
past into the Fourth Age. Very well done. I look forward to reading
more of your work.


Title: Binding · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 353
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-25 12:03:23 Score: 6
This story reminded me of the orthodox Jewish practice of a married
woman not exposing her hair in front of males outside her immediate
family or her husband. According to my suitemate (a Modern Orthodox
Jew, not married but she was talking about her parents) having
something that's private except to two people can provide a very
strong bond. I see a very similar thing playing out in this story:
whether there's any supernatural truth to Arwen's invocation to keep
Aragorn safe as she binds her hair, he has cleaved to her, and that
must have an amazing psychological power, to will him to "take care
of himself". Very evocative story.

Title: The Cornfield · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Villains · ID:
530
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 12:11:03 Score: 1
A good idea of what Sam might have been doing to lose sight of Frodo
and a good way to bridge that gaffe in the movie.

Title: Binding · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 353
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 12:36:48 Score: 3
An interesting idea and one I think could very well be elven even if
it's not canon, it definitely deserves a place. Forodwaith has
captured two very intimate times between Aragorn and Arwen and put a
wonderfully romantic spin upon a simple ritual. Well written and
another 'hidden gem' well worth finding.

Title: Weapons Against The Enemy · Author: Nancy Brooke · Books/Time:
The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 631
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-25 12:41:15 Score: 1
This is a cute story. Lots of unusual interactions!

Title: The Seeing Stone · Author: Finch · Races/Places: Gondor:
Historical · ID: 346
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 13:53:40 Score: 2
An interesting voice to hear in a story and a hard one to write with
well, yet well done it was. Good use of repetition about stones not
weeping. Perhaps this stone is mistaken in th end. It certain sounded
like weeping.

Title: Forgotten Casualty · Author: Thundera Tiger · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 591
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 14:06:54 Score: 3
I guess I should have guessed the ending from the title, but it was
still sad to see this curious little fox go. Good personification
here, drawing from what Tolkien wrote and expanding on the thoughts
of a wild animal. I liked this little fox and knew what he sensed and
hoped that he would get away.

Title: The Captain's Last Charge · Author: AmandaK · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 15:46:59 Score: 2
A well-captured dark moment in Faramir's life just before he thought
it would end. And so did we. It broke my heart when I first read
those lines by his father, and I felt it again in this story.

Title: Wreath of Steel and Silver · Author: Kielle · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 454
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 16:22:14 Score: 3
Ah, another who still chafes under the Kinslaying and Galadriel's
part in it. And is not willing to worship her beauty and let her off
the hook. But it does her some justice to show that she herself has
not forgiven, not earned forgiveness, not rationalized away her part.
Good work.

Title: Death Doth Come · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Villains:
Poetry · ID: 936
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 16:23:17 Score: 1
Good use of rhythm and rhyme here and quite a spooky look into the
thoughts of the barrow-wight.


Title: Alas, Poor Ufthak! · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 16:23:32 Score: 1
No loyalty among orcs, huh? Good use of a drabble here.

Title: Sweet Meat · Author: Ijemanja · Races/Places: Villains · ID:
1073
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