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Title: Faithful Star · Author: Tiana Luthien · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gondor · ID: 593
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-30 20:55:48 Score: 5
Engaging dialogue and lovely descriptions raises this tale far above
the usual crop of Father-in-waiting tales. The humorous banter
between Faramir and Eomer, as they both impatiently await the birth
of the Steward's heir, is well written and shows the depth of
friendship between the two. Cameo appearances by Queen Arwen and
Ioreth the Midwife are pleasant surprises which add a nice touch of
realism to the birthing room. Faramir's delight in his newborn son is
touching and very lovely.

Title: Sight · Author: Aeneid · Races/Places: Gondor: Original
Characters · ID: 374
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-30 20:57:44 Score: 9
A mundane scene: a chilly evening, bedtime, an invalid and his
attendant.
That the invalid is our own beloved Boromir, and that his attendant
is a forthright young woman, quickly lift this tale far beyond
anything else we've encountered in the fandom.

This is most definitely an AU Boromir, (inspired by
PlasticChevy's "The Captain and the King") where he not only lives
but suffers blindness, helplessness, insecurity. Aeneid's marvelous
characterization skills (for Aeneid lives and breathes Boromir in any
and all possible moods) bring this unfamiliar Steward glowingly to
life. The writing is gorgeously atmospheric– every detail, every
phrase carefully crafted to create a hushed, expectant, mood . The
love scene – for that is the purpose of this tale, to fill in a
rather large gap left by the original author – is breathtakingly
beautiful, exquisitely understated, and so, satisfyingly erotic.
"He used his hands to see, running them over her, feeling every
curve, while she guided him, so that his kisses were slow and
meaningful and sometimes clumsy…"
Who wouldn't want to be Gilthaethil? And who, reading this, wouldn't
bless Aeneid for making it all so wonderfully real?


Title: Fear no more · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 970
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-30 20:58:32 Score: 6
There is a misty, dreamlike quality to the tale from beginning to
end. Faramir's remembrance of his last dream of his mother melds
seamlessly with the arrival of King Elessar and Queen Arwen, figures
from the long dreaming of Gondor's history finally brought to
fruition in the Fourth Age. All the details of the meeting – the
autumn garden, the crystal goblets, the waiting pavilion are
described lushly, a treat for the senses.

Faramir's recounting of his most recent dream, and Arwen's immediate
recognition of its meaning, is gently and tenderly described, much
like the actions within the dream itself. How very imaginative of
Cuthalion to envision such a scene, and to present it to us so
perfectly!


Title: Shield and Standard · Author: Dwimordene · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 695
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-30 20:59:09 Score: 3
Very ingenious! I'd not ever thought of what the first meeting
between these two would be like. Aragorn's nervousness adds a very
human dimension. The metaphors of shield and standard are very apt
for these two women and the manner in which each one served her king.

Title: The Clasp Undone · Author: DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan ·
ID: 691
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-30 21:16:48 Score: 2
The language was a bit modern at places in this piece, but I still
liked this one. It really fleshed out some emotionally powerful
material.

Title: Charity · Author: Dwimordene · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble
· ID: 234
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-30 21:34:53 Score: 3
This is a nice snapshot into the thoughts of Aragorn relating to his
kinsman and the one he didn't personally know well (at least not for
years), but who had served him in much the same way. Nice reflection
on the merits of fire, and on the value of limiting one's thoughts to
the here and now.

Title: Mae Govannen · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 148
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:37:38 Score: 2
Good emotion in this drabble. Aragorn's relief is easy to feel and is
conveyed well. I love that this drabble spans the course of several
days but doesn't make it feel forced. It's just one long spell of
relief. Nicely written.

Title: Boys to Men · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:39:12 Score: 4
Beregond learns a hard lesson about boys and the fact that they grow
up. I liked the idea that the transition to manhood is a change that
is never truly seen until after it happens, and then we see only the
results. Definitely a bittersweet moment, and I liked the fact that
this drabble couldn't seem to decide whether it was happy or sad.
Proud, definitely, but the rest still seemed to be up in the air.
Given the context, I found that to be very appropriate.

Title: The Test · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 385
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:39:32 Score: 4
I've always wondered who transferred the Ring from Frodo's pocket to
a necklace around his neck. This was a great answer to that, as well
as a wonderful way of showing that Boromir, Gandalf, and Galadriel
were not the only ones to be tempted by the Ring. The temptation
itself was handled very well, and Arwen's wisdom was certainly
evident in her refusal. Good characterization.

Title: Going to Rohan · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 401
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:40:08 Score: 4
For as dire as the circumstances surrounding this drabble were, the
drabble itself contains quite a bit of humor. I liked Roheryn's
teasing, and I liked his almost immediate compliance when it became
apparent that Aragorn needed him. Nice characterization of a horse. I
can see Aragorn riding a horse like this: one who has a bit of a
rebellious streak but will never fail in any duty he is given. Sounds
very much like a Ranger, actually.

Title: Ties That Bind · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 457
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:41:03 Score: 2
I very much appreciated the line "He was not supposed to fall." That
sounds like something an elf would say in response to Gandalf's
apparent demise. Good emotions and good pause in the action as the
Fellowship tries to get to Lothlorien.

Title: At the Witch King's Feet · Author: Lindelea · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 459
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:41:26 Score: 3
Sometimes the best way to express confused and disoriented thoughts
are to put them into drabble form. The short format is a very good
place for quick, abrupt, and even jarring narratives. Or streams of
consciousness, either one. And it works very well for Merry here as
he struggles to help Eowyn. Nice choice of form, and nice use of it,
too.

Title: Before the Call to Muster · Author: Lindelea · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 461
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:42:25 Score: 4
I felt something very bittersweet in this drabble, which is great
because I love bittersweet. I really liked Pippin's thoughts about a
new, strange Merry who kept falling silent, and I loved even more the
thoughts that Merry never shared. All he says is "thank you" but he's
feeling as though something is lost or being lost. How like a hobbit
to keep those things to himself, though. Even to hide them from
Pippin.

Title: No Rival · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble ·
ID: 544
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:43:09 Score: 4
What I liked most about this drabble series is how the different
perspectives were worded. Eowyn talks about politics and challenges
and epic dreams. Arwen, in sharp contrast, talks about long years and
makes observations using the imagery of plants and flowers. The two
personalities are very different, and I like how they see both
differences and similarities in the other.

Title: Devil of Kindness · Author: Nancy Brooke · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 685
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:44:05 Score: 4
The idea that Gandalf is not a student of light but of darkness is a
fairly profound one, and I like the way it was explored in this
drabble. There's not a lot of room in drabbles for exploration, but
this one made the most of it and pulled it off well. I like the
ending where Gandalf is lulled by Saruman's whispers, which seem to
come from the light, and I like the phrase in the beginning where he
claims to know the name of each shadow. Good stuff.

Title: A Step in The Dark · Author: SilverMoonLady · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 1221
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:44:39 Score: 4
Great missing moment from Moria. I've been in places that are so dark
you can't see your way, and that one moment of hesitation can make a
world of difference. I love the way it was described here, and I love
the very gentle way in which Merry was drawn back from it. Legolas
was wise not to startle him. But most of all, I love the descriptions
of dark chasms, and how the light ahead only seemed to make them
darker. That's a great way to describe Moria!

Title: Bed Time, Part 2 · Author: Blackbirdsong · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 1248
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:45:39 Score: 3
I enjoyed what all the different hobbits were dreaming off. It seemed
to be very indicative of their personalities. And I liked the fact
that they all seemed to be doing something that they felt to be more
important than bed. Well, most of them, anyway. It shows their
determination, something they'll all need later on. Good writing.

Title: In Bree · Author: Rabidsamfan · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 1345
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:46:27 Score: 4
I really liked this. Merry seemed to be the one with the clearest
memory of his time spent beneath the influence of the Wight (with the
exception of Frodo) and also the one who put the blade from the
Barrow to the best use. It's interesting to think that even that
early on, he might have been affected by a growing shadow. It
certainly caught hold of him later in the books. Perhaps it found its
roots here. Great idea, and great exploration of an intriguing
possibility.

Title: Master of the House · Author: Vistula the Dunadan ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 639
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:49:35 Score: 5
This was a great treat. Sam's devotion to Frodo is one of my favorite
things about the books, and I love the way that Sam is willing to
defy even Elrond as he insists upon waiting by Frodo's side.
Secretly, of course. Or so he thinks. But what I love most of all is
the fact that Elrond is standing in the corner and understands why
Sam has returned. There's a lot to be said about Sam in this little
drabble, but there's almost as much to be said about Elrond,
especially knowing his past and all that has happened to him. Well
written!

Title: Charity · Author: Dwimordene · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble
· ID: 234
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:54:39 Score: 5
There was one line from this drabble that really caught my
attention: "Men not yet corpses have their needs." I loved that. So
much of death seems to be about servicing or comforting the living,
and it's good to see Aragorn acknowledge that. But of course Aragorn
wouldn't be Aragorn if he didn't acknowledge everything else, and I
like his observations on stewardship. I also like the comparison to
the wind and dust, and the phrase "indifferent-generous" seemed very
appropriate.

Title: Second Watch · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 410
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 00:01:58 Score: 6
Wow. I'm often amazed at how much impact a well-written drabble can
have, and this one took me very much by surprise. I think it was the
timing more than anything. Pippin's little diatribe was expected, but
what wasn't quite as expected was Boromir's three-word response. It
made the words about a father's plea to stay seem that much more
profound. They have a completely different meaning and impact coming
from Boromir's direction than they do coming from Pippin's. And
turing Boromir's answer into the final words of the drabble was an
inspired move. They leave you hanging, which forces you to imagine
everything that Boromir could mean.

Title: Beyond the Door · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 283
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 00:09:04 Score: 5
I really liked Halbarad's description of Aragorn as "my comfort and
my doom." He's following Aragorn even though he knows it will lead to
his death, and I think that requires an unusual man who would be able
to entertain seemingly contradictory thoughts. There's a very quiet
feel to this drabble, almost one of resignation. But it's not a
despairing resignation, and therein lies a rather profound
characterization stroke in Halbarad's favor. He can see a bigger
picture beyond the door. Truly a remarkable man. Nice drabble.

Title: The Machine That Changed the World · Author: Altariel ·
Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 80
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-31 00:33:32 Score: 3
Ah, so that's what the machine was! I'd been wondering. And very
fitting it is. Is it not the Guttenburg press which changed our
world? And, more personally, in some ways, our lives as writers? A
well-written story capturing both the magical allure of this new
thing but also the inherent danger in it. One that is worth the good,
I think.


Title: Enmities · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs ·
ID: 561
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 00:47:37 Score: 4
Very well done! You have managed to turn this orc mother into a real
person for whom the reader feels sympathy - even going so far at to
hope for the survival of her and her cubs. Until, that is, you
remember the savagery of the orcs. I am glad that the warrior held
his hand - but cannot imagine that he either left the cubs to starve
or raised them, so suspect he must have culled them. A good twist.

Title: Cold Memories · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 82
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 00:53:53 Score: 4
I love big brother Boromir. Faramir's admiration must have been so
good for him, not to mention developing his huge sense of
responsibility. And it is so good to see Denethor acting as a father -
even if a slightly scary, we-do-have-to-be-careful-what-we-say
father. A jewel of a memory for Faramir - sparkling, clean and pure,
like the sun on the snow. Very effective.

Title: More like to the swift sons of Eorl · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1377
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-31 03:24:51 Score: 5
This is such a beautiful example of word-pictures, Liz! Expressions
like "sparks wheeled upwards" and "blade wrought skilful havoc" give
me such vivid mental pictures that I can hear the wood-sap snapping
in the fire, and see piles of decapitated orcs.

And, of course, sparks are vivid but not as long-lived as you would
wish them to be... a fitting description of both Boromir and
Théodred, which you play up in the phrase "brightest and best". This
is truly lovely, Liz! I like the fact that Éomer had a chance to see
these kindred spirits in action together.


Title: Sea lover · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 1378
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-31 03:40:08 Score: 4
You know, I never thought of why Eärendil was named that, when he was
born in Gondolin, far from the sea.... I guess mothers aren't the
only ones who can have insight in the naming of their children.

You capture Eärendil's excitement beautifully here, and Tuor's at-
homeness with the sea. I especially like the line "my great, golden-
haired love, hair bleached silver by salt spray"; that seems to
capture Tuor perfectly. Nice job, Liz!


Title: A Very Dark, Very Wet, and Very Miserable Morning · Author:
Thundera Tiger · Genres: Humor · ID: 592
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-31 04:18:26 Score: 3
This was such a joy to read! Being a HUGE fan of Mouth of Sauron, I
always enjoy reading stories on this minor character, regardless of
genre. And I found this to be a real treat, imaginative and witty.
Sea gulls as torture devices... I still laugh about that. Thank you,
Thundera, for this gem of a story.

Title: Meetings · Author: Elendiari22 · Races/Places: Hobbits: War of
the Ring · ID: 798
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 07:21:37 Score: 3
I do like twisted time-line meetings - and Frodo encountering Faramir
is a lovely example of two people who ought to get the chance to
meet. I love it that Faramir is so impressed by the apple - and that
Frodo is too sleepy to be disbelieving. That, and possibly his grasp
on reality is weakening. Good story.


Title: Chicken or the Egg? · Author: Gershwhen · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Humor · ID: 1220
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 07:27:43 Score: 3
Pippin would be wide-eyed over that, now, wouldn't he? And, unlike
most people with senses of self-preservation, wouldn't hesitate to
ask an elf just how it is that elven parents happen to know to the
very minute . . . But I suspect Pippin's curiosity was rather less
irritating to the elf than Gimli's amusement. A very entertaining
tale.

Title: Kali's Rory · Author: GTA Otaku · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): The Shire · ID: 1224
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 07:39:44 Score: 3
What a sad tale. The loss of a baby brother or sister affects a child
so profoundly. It's no wonder that Merry tended so carefully to his
baby cousin when he came to take up some of the space in Merry's
heart. And Frodo shows again his depth of understanding of loss and
sorrow. Very touching.

Title: The Shadow Within · Author: Arandil · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War · ID: 122
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-31 11:09:21 Score: 1
This is an interesting reversal of the curse of mortality. Why
shouldn't elves feel the other side of the coin?

Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 702
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:16:42 Score: 6
Oh, this was beautifully, masterfully told. I have a real thing for
gapfillers that enrich Tolkien's world, and for stories that use
unique devices (such as this one, which told the story without
resorting to sight. And since I wrote a drabble not too long ago
about Glorfindel searching for the hobbits, this corner of canon has
had a special part in my heart. You did it justice in every part of
the word. I had never thought how Frodo, with his sense of sight
deadened by slipping into the wraiths' world, would be more attuned
to hearing and so particularly affected by the arrival of Glorfindel
with all his bells. Thank you so much for a very illuminating read.

Title: The Test · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 385
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:18:01 Score: 6
Another lovely piece exploring a character being tempted by the Ring
besides the ones we see in canon. You know, someone wise once said
that character is how we behave when we think no one is watching us.
Forodwaith doesn't explicitly say that Arwen and Frodo are alone (who
has room, in just a hundred words), but when I read this one I
imagine that they were. If we assume Arwen was trained in the healing
arts (which this drabble implies) I think they might have had some
moments alone. And the fact that she passed on the opportunity to
take away HIS jewellery makes the giving of the Evenstar at the end
of Return of the King (book) even more poignant.

Title: Ties That Bind · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 457
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:18:22 Score: 4
"I feel my heart too heavy for my heart to bear it hence." That has
to be one of the most poignant turns of phrases I've come across in a
long time. Especially when said in the voice no longer lilting (as
Lady A. aptly describes it), it gets to the heart of grief. But the
fact that Legolas knew he had to go on, for others' sakes... very
like a warrior who would have to endure until the end of time. Well
done.

Title: No Rival · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble ·
ID: 544
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:18:50 Score: 10
I think my favourite thing about this pair of drabbles is that Arwen
sees something in Eowyn that Eowyn can't seem to see in herself.
Arwen sees those things that might have attracted Aragorn to her, and
I think her perceptions are keen: Eowyn does have a beauty and a
ferocity, though I think her qualities really are better suited to
Faramir. But it was touching that Arwen saw her as havving the
potential to rival the famed evenstar, not a lesser. I think in later
years this will translate into respect and hopefully form the
backdrop for a deep friendship as the two wild ladies from the north
tame their Gondorian counterparts. (Not that I'm trying to nuzgul you
on that idea, absolutely not...)

I do have to disagree with Eowyn,, though. She says she looked only
for an honourable way out of Rohan, but I don't think that's entirely
true. We don't really get into her head that much in canon, but if
her brother Eomer is any judge I think there would have been a
measure of love between them. The problem is of course that it's the
wrong kind of love, and I can't blame Eowyn for the mistake. She had
to keep herself pretty well locked off, hiding behind a wall of ice
as it were, when Grima was so obviously interested in her. As his
power grew I think Eowyn wouldn't have had very many other suitors,
and those she did have she probably would have suspected alterior
motives. So Aragorn comes in, respected by everyone from Hama to
Theoden himself, and pretty much wipes her off her feet without even
meaning to.

But I digress. I can see Eowyn as being embarrassed by her love of
Aragorn and wanting to write it off as that, perhaps even convincing
herself. Really, these were very insightful drabbles.

Title: Blossoms · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
General Drabble · ID: 287
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:19:08 Score: 3
Oh, what a lovely idea that Legolas would see it not just in Arwen's
eyes but also in Aragorn's. That speaks of an Aragorn very much in
love with Arwen (and involved in her life), which is a notion that I
really like. Such a beautiful drabble, Erin.

Title: Changes · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-
Ring War Drabble · ID: 231
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:19:31 Score: 2
This is an interesting glimpse at the things that are changing after
the Ring War, and the things that aren't. Without a little smidgen of
angst it wouldn't be Dwim, but there's a happy ending -- fitting,
really.

Title: The Mirror of Angelica · Author: Salsify · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 997
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:20:14 Score: 7
In "Angelica's Mirror", Salsify takes an almost off-hand statement
from "A Long-Expected Party", and explores its full implications in
the years to come. This is the story of a hobbit reformed in a way.
She still has the hints of the vain tweenager who received Bilbo's
gift and she's royally embarrassed of the thought that
Aldo's "infidelities" might cause more gossip to be attached to her
name, but the sparring she's received over her vanity has become a
sense of pride for her. She uses this first when Largo stops by the
sewing circle to hide her emotions and change the subject, and then
later when she must hide the real truth from the shirriffs and
Lotho's men. With all the richness I have come to expect from
Salsify's stories, this is a story that any lover of gap-fillers,
minor/original charactors, and/or hobbits won't want to mix.

Title: Namesake · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War Drabble · ID: 301
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:20:58 Score: 5
What a sad thought! I can imagine calling the name Frodo would be a
painful reminder, especially in those earlier days when memories of
the old outweighed memories of the new. But Sam's right: there really
wasn't any other name. And I think after Sam had made the decision to
call his firstgborn son Frodo (before Frodo Baggins sailed West), to
name his son anything else would have also hurt, because every time
Sam said the new name he'd think about why he *didn't* name him
Frodo. Interesting investigation of a topic I hadn't thought about
before.

Title: The Eagle Silmarillion · Author: Tehta · Genres: Humor:
Animals · ID: 554
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-31 13:46:20 Score: 4
I've often wondered why there aren't more stories told from the
Eagles' POV. And I love this humorous spin on the meeting between
Glorfindel and Thorondor -- oops, got there a little late, sorry
about that but gravity is a bit tricky now. And staying in character
to look at some of the other events of the Silm. Especially equating
Morgoth to a magpie in search of 'shiny things.' Well done.

Title: Ailurophobia · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor: Animals · ID:
115
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-31 14:05:45 Score: 5
This is a hilarious extrapolation of what might have happened to the
Prince of Cats that Tolkien mentions in the Lost Tales. And the
author must have cats to realize how they would bow to no one, not
even Melkor. I love the idea of a Valar having allergies, and his
absolute horror at the cats' manners. I was chuckling when he found
the cat on his pillow, and at the idea that they were eating the
dragon eggs. But I think the clincher was finding them enjoying
themselves on the throne. The true icing on the cake. As they say,
dogs drool but cats rule!

Title: Alterations · Author: Eledhwen · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 260
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-31 14:13:16 Score: 3
This is a delightful series of scenes in post-war Minas-Tirith. All
the scenes are true to character. The hobbits sound very like the
hobbits I came to love by reading the books. I like Imrahil
recognizing Aragorn and in turn Aragorn's talk with Faramir best.

Title: The Eagle Silmarillion · Author: Tehta · Genres: Humor:
Animals · ID: 554
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-31 14:14:24 Score: 3
The number of great lines and thoughts in this piece tempt me to
misuse the quoting rule, and since I can't pick just one, I'll give
an overall thumbs up for a fabulous job with the humorous mis-use of
a majestic character. Great job with the pacing and in working the
deep thoughts and profound truths in with and between the ironys.

Title: One Word · Author: Joan Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: First
Age · ID: 1081
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-31 14:27:31 Score: 3
Very powerful. In a world of verbal tradition, only things spoken are
remembered through the generations. I've heard a lot of people talk
about how silly and petty Thingol's decree was, but in truth, it
would eventually have killed the memory of the glory of the Noldor.

Title: Cursed Queen of Angmar · Author: khazar_khum · Races/Places:
Villains: Nazgul · ID: 450
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-31 14:33:01 Score: 6
This is an amazing story that makes you care about the Witch King --
Khazar-khum manages to instill her characters with qualities that
make you realize what must have happened to have ensnared a
Numenorean King into becoming Sauron's slave by the use of the ring.
It is a wonderfully written and interesting look into what went on in
Angmar, and his justifications for what he did, and how he lived. The
characterizations of the other realms of Cardolan and Rhudaur give an
interesting insight to how Arnor fell from the great land it was to a
wandering band of Dunedain. It's on my list of all-time favourites.
Well told, Khazar-khum!

Title: The Battle of Bywater · Author: Lulleny · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 1093
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 14:47:20 Score: 1
An interesting look into the thoughts and actions of the four habbits
before and during the Battle of Bywater.

Title: Olorin I Was, Olorin I Am · Author: Arquen · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 137
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:38:33 Score: 4
I love the way light and dark were used to herald each new stage in
this journey. And a fascinating journey it was, too. There was a very
timeless, mystical quality to Olorin's visit with the Valar, and
having once again been in their presence, I can easily imagine that
it would take time to readjust. Nice narration throughout, and I
loved the way that Manwe and Varda are portrayed, as well as all the
music.

Title: Long Leagues for Little Legs · Author: Fadagaski · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler · ID: 628
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:39:22 Score: 4
Samwise can be shrewd when he needs to be. And as the one looking out
for Mr. Frodo, I appreciate the fact that it was Sam who so
nonchalantly confronted Boromir about the matter one night. He's very
sensible about it, too, which is what I would expect from Sam. He
acknowledges that the hobbits might not be used to this, but he asks
for a little faith and patience in the meantime. Nice conversation to
set things right.

Title: Something to Do before the End · Author: Lindelea ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 753
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:40:34 Score: 4
This vignette took me by surprise. I have to admit that I didn't
predict the identity of the Captain until Pippin named him. And the
whole concept behind this is inspired. I really loved the idea of
Boromir sticking around to watch over the City while it was still
struggling. That's something he would definitely do, and I loved the
way he thanked Pippin and Beregond both for their role in helping
Faramir. Very imaginative moment, but I think it fits well into canon.

Title: Pippin the Troll Slayer · Author: Auntiemeesh · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler · ID: 832
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:41:58 Score: 6
This was a great fleshing out of the events that were hinted at in
the books. I loved the added details of Gimli skipping out on sleep
and rest to watch over Pippin, and then there was Legolas and Eomer
conferring over what his health might be. I also loved how naturally
Aragorn's healing abilities were described by simple statements. For
example, when he was telling Gandalf that the thoughts he could touch
were confused. It's said so matter-of-factly, but it's quite an
unusual gift. In fact, the whole story had this tone when dealing
with extraordinary things, and it made for a very fun read altogether.

Title: Fellowship · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama ·
ID: 396
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:45:05 Score: 4
Great ficlet. I love the fact that Aragorn was practicing his own
archery when he broached this topic with Legolas, and I can't help
but wonder if he was goading Legolas into agreeing by giving him an
archery display and then declaring that a true archer is needed. If
that was his design, kudos to him for deft maneuvering. Of course, I
would expect no less from Gondor's future king. Nicely done.

Title: Sam's Gift · Author: Marta · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 955
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:50:41 Score: 6
When he's written correctly, Samwise Gamgee always has a fascinating
perspective on life. And that's definitely apparent here. Things
seemed fresh and new through his eyes. The elves were very elven when
Sam was looking at them, and I loved the fact that he couldn't quite
remember what they fed him during their meal together. But most of
all, I loved the practicality he brought to everything. His refusal
to see himself as a hero or a giver of a great gift was very
touching, and I loved his conversation with Galadriel, which was like
but unlike the one she'd had with Frodo. Great gapfiller, and great
perspective from Sam.

Title: Warring Duties · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 806
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:51:31 Score: 6
I feel like beating myself over the head right now. I never stopped
to consider how Pippin knew that Merry was on the fields. I guess I
always assumed that Elfhelm filled everyone in, but that doesn't make
nearly as much sense as this story does. This is much better, and as
an added bonus, it addresses some of the other loose threads that
Tolkien left dangling, such as what Gandalf saw when he spoke of
grievous sights. Brilliant gap-filler that does exactly what a gap-
filler should do: donate theories to fill the holes and offer
insights to explain the actions. And it's all done in an evenly paced
narrative that catches readers quickly and holds them until the end.

Title: To keep you from harm · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 912
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:52:32 Score: 4
I must admit that I'm a bigger fan of the idea that Boromir shared
Faramir's dream, but this story does a good job of presenting an
alternative theory. It's very convincing, and I'm drawn to the idea
that Boromir claimed to have the dream as a way of persuading his
father to let at least one of them pursue the counsel given.
Interesting idea, and it gives Boromir a nice role as a protective
brother.

Title: In the Keeping of the King · Author: Shirebound · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1107
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:53:50 Score: 5
The closing lines of this story seemed to be the best message:
Hobbits don't need a king. Only each other. Very sweet tale with a
peaceful, mellow feel to it. Exactly what would be needed in Ithilien
during the aftermath of the Ring's desctruction. There were spices of
humor (I like Frodo's warning that he didn't want to see any lembas
around his meal) but by and large, this was a story of recovery. And
it held to that tone, moving quickly enough so that it was never
boring but always remembering that peace and rest are what weary
bodies need most.

Title: Walk Warily · Author: Anso the Hobbit/Marigold CoAuthors ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1175
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:54:24 Score: 4
This story vividly brought to mind some of my own ventures into mirky
lake waters, and I was constantly wincing with every step they took.
If you can't see what you're walking on and you're not sure as to
what exactly has been washing up on the shore, it's sometimes better
to stay put. But at least they have food to compensate their
adventure. That's more than most get.

Title: Gathering of the Grey Company · Author: Leaward · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler: Grey Company · ID: 171
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:55:38 Score: 6
This is an area I wish Tolkien had told us more about. But thankfully
there are stories like these out there to rectify the situation.
There was a wealth of information smashed into this little vignette,
but surprisingly, it all works. And because it's in such a tight
space, the feeling of haste comes across very clearly. I love
Halbarad's reaction to Elladan and Elrohir when they spring this news
on him, and I love even more the fact that he's willing to try and do
as they ask even though it's impossible to achieve as much as they're
hoping for. Great narrative pacing, and movement through time was
also handled well. Nicely done.

Title: To Water the Dust · Author: Eruanna · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 77
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:56:47 Score: 5
I love the way this brings so many layers and so much meaning to that
little stream that Frodo and Sam found while wandering across Mordor.
And later to Frodo's dream, too. Tolkien's world really doesn't leave
much room for coincidences, and this neatly ties up another one.
Gandalf and Elrond both seemed to hint that Frodo was meant to carry
the Ring, and the idea that a certain watery Vala involved himself
when times seemed most desperate lends support to that idea. As well
as giving a sense of hope to both Frodo and Sam. Wonderful tone in
the writing, and nice use of a quote to tie it all off.

Title: Envinyatar · Author: Starlight · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 520
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:57:57 Score: 4
I love perspectives from the unknown soldiers, and the Northern
Rangers always make for fascinating subjects. Their dread on going to
Gondor only to find it ruined feels very real, but I like the way
they keep their hope through all of it, realizing that now they can
be the men they were supposed to be. Nice tribute to these Rangers,
and great perspective on the long road up the Anduin.

Title: The Riders from Erech · Author: Acacea · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Grey Company · ID: 325
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:58:46 Score: 5
There's almost nothing in the fanfiction world about Angbor, despite
his bravery, so it's a welcome surprise to find him starring in a
vignette. And I love the way he's described. He's desperate and he
doesn't see any chance of victory, but he's going to stick this out
and stand against whatever's sent his way for as long as he can. This
is a man I would want in my army. And when he sees the other army
approaching and realizes who is leading them, hope can return. That
was brilliantly portrayed and made for a great capstone to a very
good vignette.

Title: The Paths of the Dead · Author: alex_cat_45 · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Grey Company · ID: 999
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:59:32 Score: 3
I love the feeling of reluctant anticipation in the first part of
this fic. It's almost as though he's afraid to hope that it will be
over. And that feeling is contrasted nicely by the peace in the end.
I love the little details that completed the scene of homecoming, and
I love the way a warm embrace seems to make everything disappear.

Title: Sunshine and Laughter · Author: Anastasia · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1232
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:02:15 Score: 3
This is a side of Gandalf that is seen in brief glimpses only
throughout LotR, and that idea is kept very well in this story
because Pippin never knows who or what it is that soothes his dreams.
It remains an unseen, unthanked, and unasked for act, which is like
most of what Gandalf did during his stay in Middle-earth. Very
touching, and very well written.

Title: One Who Ran · Author: thevina_finduilas · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1197
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:02:49 Score: 5
To be honest, I hadn't given much thought to the men that left
Aragorn on the road to the Morannon. I certainly never considered the
idea that either road would spell certain death for them. Then this
story came along. But as grim and depressing as it is, there's
something about the main character that keeps it from being a
complete wallow. I think it's his pride, which will not allow a
deserter to live. In any case, definitely a gloomy look at the men
Aragorn dismissed in an act of pity. I wonder if he ever knew.

Title: Prayer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 887
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:03:28 Score: 4
Intriguing little tale. The fact that it is Legolas who gives Merry
the idea of praying is an interesting one to me, but then, he is the
one who exclaimed "Elbereth" when the Nazgul soared above the banks
of the Anduin. Fate and guidance are both powerful ideas, and I think
they were expressed beautifully here. There was a very real sense of
desperation, and there was also a very real sense of hope in the end.
Nicely done.

Title: Good Memories, Like Good Stories · Author: Jeodo Brandybuck ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 906
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:04:08 Score: 6
Very nice gap-filler. I loved the flashes of memory from Pippin's
perspective as he remembers Bilbo telling them about trolls. He
didn't seem very much at ease during that time in the books, and I
wonder how much of the danger was beginning to sink in for the first
time. This story does a wonderful job of exploring what Pippin's
thinking and feeling. And it also adds some wonderful character
strokes to Merry's personality, who seems to be a bit braver than
Pippin and who also seems to be a bit wiser. The idea of "we do what
we can" sounds like a very hobbit thing to say, and it's more or less
how the Quest is completed, too. Good foundation work for the rest of
the series.

Title: For the Common Man · Author: Anoriath · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 661
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:04:38 Score: 5
There are only a handful of stories that can truly exploit or create
the wonderful "D'oh!" moments in Middle-earth, and this is one of
them. Gaflin seems to be an capable enough actor to convince Imrahil
that the chicken came from "over younder" even as he's struggling to
clean his teeth, so kudos to him for avoiding the full impacts of the
D'oh moment. But I was grinning the entire time, and I wonder if
Imrahil didn't suspect something after all but chose to let it slide
in view of the battle they'd all just survived. Brilliant story! I
always did wonder what happened to that bird..

Title: The Captain's Last Charge · Author: AmandaK · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:05:40 Score: 5
I very much enjoyed the road that Faramir's thoughts took throughout
this story. It was a very natural progression from dread and sorrow
to resignation and acceptance, but at no point did it lose its grim,
foreboding atmosphere. The mood was a constant for the entire story,
and it worked well to tie it all together. The first and last lines,
also, were a wonderful way to open and close the story, and almost it
became a plea to Denethor to at least witness his son's death. Very
powerful and very moving. Nicely done.

Title: Reunion at Isengard · Author: Shirebound · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Hobbits · ID: 515
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:06:38 Score: 4
A reunion story! These are always fun, and there really ought to be
more of them that focus on the moment when Pippin and Merry realize
that Gandalf is still alive. Their own accounting in the books is not
nearly enough for my tastes, and I like the shock and disbelief
contained within this story at the thought that the wizard is still
alive. And the imagery of a Balrog flapping around with an old grey
hat was priceless. Thank you very much for that mental picture!

Title: Lightness · Author: Dana · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits ·
ID: 1230
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:08:19 Score: 4
Sweet and simple. Well, not quite simple. Pippin has done some
growing up, and he proves it to Merry with some very good answers to
Merry's doubt and guilt. But this story definitely reads like a
hobbit story should: it's very simple while at the same time hinting
that greater things lie beneath the surface. A very light touch was
used in the tone and the mood, but the emotions are clearly there.
Excellent writing.

Title: Payment Put Off · Author: pippinfan88 · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1038
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:08:54 Score: 3
I've read quite a few stories of Pippin's recovery in Ithilien, but
this story manages to stand out from the rest. It's very different,
and I love the distance it manages to put between itself and Pippin.
He's always "the child," and it makes for a very other worldly feel.
Which, of course, is exactly what is needed. Very nice mood work.

Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 702
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:11:01 Score: 6
The perspective in this story is wonderfully tight. I really felt as
though I was seeing events through Frodo's eyes. Or rather, hearing
them through his ears. There wasn't much in the way of sight, but
there was plenty of sound. I love the way Frodo tracks it and how he
measures the status of his friends by the fact that they're now too
weary to even complain any more. And I like the way that the story of
Beren and Luthien wove in with the nightingale. That strikes me as
something that Frodo would cling to and find strength from. And then
Glorfindel's timely appearance at the end was like a ray of hope
after the nightingale's departure. Great missing scene/perspective
for the flight to Rivendell.

Title: The Days Now Are Short · Author: Anoriath · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Grey Company · ID: 1042
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:19:17 Score: 7
The narrative in this story is a thing of beauty. I love the clipped
pace it adopts at the beginning, mirroring the frantic race to find
Aragorn. The descriptions and imagery are great, and it paints a very
clear, very dark picture for us. We know the Grey Company will get to
Rohan, but for a moment, we're forced to doubt. And then comes the
moment when Aragorn answers Halbarad, and here the pace of the story
changes. I love the final line about the time for skulking in shadows
being finished. In fact, the ending feels almost like a beginning.
The story feels as though it's preparing to leap into something big
and climactic, but there's also enough closure to leave the remaining
adventure to the reader's imagination (or to canon). Great narrative
work, and great emotional work, too, especially when Halbarad and
Aragorn are reunited.

Title: At the Sammath Naur · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 126
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:28:18 Score: 10
Sharp, poignant, and gut-wrenching. I don't think I've ever found a
more encompassing and involving look at Frodo's moment of decision. I
love the way that it both begins and ends with a sobering expectation
of failure and death. The resignation in Frodo is chilling, but it
becomes even more so when we realize that Frodo has felt this way
ever since Cirith Ungol. That was a master stroke on the part of
Aratlithiel, and it was perfectly paced to strike a very grim tone in
the story. And it makes so much sense! Trapped in Cirith Ungol, Frodo
experiences exactly what it feels like to have the Ring ripped from
him and given to another. He will never willingly throw it into the
fires after that, and he knows it. But he still tries, and herein
lies one of this piece's greatest strengths: Frodo himself. This is a
brilliantly complete characterization of Frodo, showing his wisdom,
his acceptance, his courage, and his tenacity. The moment when Frodo
realizes that he was sent as a sacrifice is powerful, but even more
powerful is his response: he would have gone anyway. They didn't need
to keep their covert plots and plans from him. It's exactly what one
would expect of Frodo, and even as he claims the Ring, it's a mark of
his integrity that he can hold to this much of himself, especially in
the face of such stinging betrayal. Great story with brilliant
character introspection and a wonderful gauntlet of emotions. It's
been a long time since I read anything quite this good.

Title: Weeping Iron Tears · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Grey Company · ID: 338
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:35:33 Score: 8
The first paragraph in this story is one of the most fitting tributes
to Halbarad that I have ever found. The simple fact that Halbarad
even came to Rohan is shone to be the amazing act of faith that it
truly is, which of course makes his fall on the Pelennor that much
more depressing. But it doesn't stay depressing, because Aragorn
wanders off into some very pleasant memories of his friend. A
Ranger's life sounds very lonely, so to have someone you could meet
once in a while in the spring must have been a priceless treasure.
And it doesn't sound as if Aragorn ever took it for granted, either.
So having now established a great contrast with just two paragraphs,
Aragorn finds that he is also torn in two over Halbarad's fall. He
doesn't want to demean the sacrifice by mourning too much, but he's a
bit selfish, too. The balance between bitter and sweet struck within
this vignette is heartwrenching, and I love the way it lingers just
long enough to play with a reader's emotions. But the ending makes up
for all. Great way to conclude. It brings a brilliant sense of both
closure and peace to the entire story.

Title: Halbarad · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 341
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:37:03 Score: 6
Wow. This vignette floored me. I'm not sure what I was expecting, but
I was definitely taken by surprise. The notion that Halbarad is
practically one of the dead but a little warmer was sobering. And yet
it rang so true for Halbarad. His loyalty and faithfullness were
breathtaking, and I loved the way he found his strength through
Aragorn and how he rode at Aragorn's side as a brother alongside
Elrohir. This is a fantastic tribute to a man who knew his own end
was near, and I loved how he took that knowledge and used it to shake
away his fear. The final line about being somewhere between the
living and the dead was chilling at the same time that it contained a
strange sort of hope. But then, it was hard not to be hopeful with a
man like this following Aragorn. Great portrayal!

Title: Not Without Hope · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drama · ID: 48
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:39:34 Score: 7
Thank goodness for good Gilraen characterizations. More than good, in
fact. Great. Brilliant. Tenacious. That last was probably what
impressed me most, actually. This is one of the most tenacious,
stubborn, and ingenius versions of Gilraen that I've ever read, and I
loved her personality almost immediately. The arguments and
situations put forth in this story were very good, and the setup
surrounding them was thorough and convincing. The Rangers were
presented with quite a quandry, and by the end, it felt as though
everyone was completely at his or her wit's end. And now we see where
Aragorn gets his second winds. Gilraen's idea of hiding Aragorn
beneath the guise of an illegitimate son is nothing short of genius,
and it solves a variety of problems as well as preventing a slew of
new ones. Fantastic story, and thank you so much for letting Gilraen
shine. She sorely needs it.

Title: Hand in Hand · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Hobbits · ID: 888
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:40:41 Score: 7
I really enjoyed this story. Death fics have a habit of becoming
bogged down in their own grief, but this story took a slightly
different approach. Bilbo's perspective is always an interesting
journey, and his hesitancy and fear for Frodo, coupled with a
bumbling awkwardness, make for some beautiful scenes. Trust a hobbit
to start the grieving process with a request for food. Frodo, though,
is what really makes this story work, and his almost callous nature
in the beginning was a wonderful way of keeping this fic from
dissolving into an angst-fest. It added a new dimension to the
turmoil, and it was enhanced by all the unspoken thoughts that chimed
in while others were giving their condolences. Very well handled, and
good resolution as Frodo finally breaks down in the end and turns to
Bilbo.

Title: Cheery Letters From Bree · Author: Lulleny · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 1094
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:48:02 Score: 6
Without a doubt, my favorite hobbit of the foursome is Merry, and I
love the attention he gets in this story. He's a fascinating
creature, and he always seems to be drawn into situations with
Wrights or Nazgul. It makes sense that in order to endure his first
couple of encounters, he needs to speak with someone about it. And
Strider makes a surprisingly sympathetic companion, even if he has
adopted a grim and dour demeanor. Nice character work on Aragorn, by
the way. But for me, the highlight of this piece was Merry's letter.
He does reveal quite a bit, but he also confuses it with phrases
like "Bywater relation." It's a shrewd letter, and it's exactly what
I would expect from the hobbit who immediately focused on the key to
unraveling the Moria gates mystery. Brilliantly done.

Title: Just in Case · Author: Marnie · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID:
477
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:54:49 Score: 8
I think one of Sauron's big weaknesses was his tendency to dismiss or
underestimate certain people and races. Which is why Celeborn's
conversation with him is so much fun! Celeborn uses the misconception
that the Sindar are weak compared to the Noldor and comes up with an
answer that makes Sauron reevaluate a number of things. But the
conversation is a minor part of a wonderful vignette, and the rest is
equally intriguing. Tolkien gave us a detailed account of Galadriel's
encounter with the One Ring, but what about Celeborn? His refusal to
take the Ring grants a fate that feels more bitter than the one
Galadriel endures. And the safeguards he puts up (such as the
sentries) to bolster himself and protect against others is exactly
the kind of practical wisdom we should expect from Celeborn. I very
much appreciate the sentiment that the worst is usually what happens
when the Noldor get involved. That's the voice of experience
speaking, and it makes me respect Celeborn all the more!

Title: The Comfort of Good Friends · Author: SilverMoonLady ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 626
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 18:03:35 Score: 9
This is how flashback stories should be done. Of course, it doesn't
hurt that there is masterful characterization involved as well as
some excellent pacing and mood work. Every word rings true, every
action follows naturally, and a very real sense of danger pervades
the flashback, accompanied by a wonderful sense of relief in the
present, which frames the flashback on either side. But the flashback
itself has a perfect lead in. The surroundings are set up in just the
right way and with just the right touch so as to lead in naturally to
Merry's memories of what happened when the hobbits gathered at
Crickhollow.

And then there's the substance of the flashback, which is something I
now feel should have been a part of canon. What possessed Merry to
allow Pippin to come on this journey? Pippin answers that question in
this story as well as I've ever seen it answered. He HAS grown quite
a bit, and though none of the hobbits really appreciate what they are
getting into, they're certainly aware that things will get darker
before they get better. I like Sam's line about trusting the shivers.
It's something they all learn. Excellent writing as usual for
SilverMoonLady, and wonderful conclusion to a very satisfying gap-
filler.

Title: Making Verses · Author: Zimraphel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler ·
ID: 611
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 18:15:30 Score: 7
This scene from the Hall of Fire has now been completely turned on
its head for me. And I must confess that I prefer this new version.
Lindir is so...cynical. He's got a lovely sarcastic voice and his
inner monologue was hilarious. I've also decided that I really like
Saelbeth, who was indeed very cheeky. What really amazes me, though,
is how Aragorn, Elrond, Glorfindel, and Erestor were characterized by
their very absence. They had no part whatsoever into this story
(appart from the fact that Aragorn wanted the inclusion of the
Elfstone) and yet that by itself is very telling. Poor Bilbo. I
wonder how often this happened and whether he had any inkling
whatsoever about what the elves actually thought of him. Still, it's
gratifying to know that they appreciated the songs from the Shire.
Brilliant reinterpretation!

Title: Foolish Hobbit · Author: Tialys · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 120
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 18:16:28 Score: 8
This is a fantastic story, and I really think it ought to be in the
books. Tolkien never really tells us what Frodo thinks about bringing
Sam along. He has musings later down the road after speaking to the
elves, but at the moment of decision, when the full magnitude is just
sinking in, surely he would have had some kind of reaction. And I
can't think of a more canonical reaction than this one. Frodo is
wonderfully in character, and the gauntlet of emotions that he runs
is an absolute thrill. But perhaps my favorite thing about this story
is Gandalf. He's every bit the wily, rascally wizard that sent Bilbo
out the door at a run without a pocket handkerchief, and Gandalf's
amusement at Frodo's outrage had me chuckling and wincing in turns.
This is a wonderful picture of the wizard before Saruman's betrayal
is known and also before the tone of the story turns desperate, and I
loved every minute of it. Gandalf has a good point, too. It's
unlikely that Sam will even hear of being abandoned, and I certainly
wouldn't want to tell him that a trip to see the elves has been
cancelled. Wonderful story telling!

Title: Red Roses, Golden Arrows · Author: Regina · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 507
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 19:18:19 Score: 3
How sweet that, unlike the hobbits in Hobbiton, the Tooks really do
understand the sacrifice Pippin made. This whole story is infused
with rich detail and believable scenarios, and each of Pippin's
family members (mere names for the most part, canonically) takes on a
life of their own. This was a fun yarn.

Title: Beyond the Door · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 283
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 19:19:54 Score: 3
Oh! This is a beautiful drabble. I particularly like how Halbarad
sees to hope (no pun intended :^P ) beyond death, and the detail of
Aragorn's warm hand on his shoulder. This isn't a moment that I have
ever seen drabbled, but you wrote it very well.

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