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Title: Truth Be Told · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 852
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-09-10 00:52:51 Score: 3
Some grammatical concernes but they do not detract from the story being
told. Which is a needful one, a gap left by Tolkien. At some point, they
would have told Faramir the story, but he left that telling for us
fanwriters. And this is perhaps one of the best tellings of it I have heard.
Well done.
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Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID:
702
Reviewer: Inkling · 2005-09-10 01:56:59
The very quality that I love most about "Dusk-singer"--its sense of beauty
and mystery--almost makes me reluctant to review it. Some things are best
experienced on a purely aesthetic or visceral level, and some things are
best left unanalyzed and unexplained. What exactly is the nightingale…a
figment of Frodo's delirious imagination? An expression of his indomitable
spirit? A manifestation of Luthien herself, come to bring him comfort and
hope? I don't know, and in fact I think I prefer not to. But I do know that
this is splendid fan fiction...breathtakingly lyrical, deeply moving, and
completely consistent with canon.


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Title: Adraefan · Author: Aeneid · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 448
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-09-10 02:11:42
I swore I wasn't going to attempt this monster at this late date in the
awards, but... gah, I am weak of will and so started it anyway after some
intense staring at the URL. Now, ususally, I'm not so much into the "Boromir
lives!" AU scenario; I love him, but he's slated to die, and his death, to
me is integral to the meaning of his character. However, occasionally, the
whim will take me and I will pick up such a story based on reactions from
others in the fandom, if the AU elements are said to be very well handled.
"Adraefan" has been getting some rave reviews for quite some time, and I've
enjoyed reading other works by Aeneid, so I finally broke down.

And lo, the other readers (and the pointer works) were right! The heavenly
chorus that makes the characters playthings of the gods is an excellent way
of playing with that sense of there being a multitude of options, only some
of which are realized—the contingency of events takes on the character of
the whim of the chorus, that can't bear to see Boromir die, but which will
put him through chapters of excruciating moral and physical agony with three
bizarre Elves who feel more elven to me than most elves, strangely enough.
Properly enigmatic and emblematic, I should say. In any case, Aeneid puts
the question of what sort of powers are they that govern so many fates, and
who have surely condemned others to fates as bad as Boromir's, if not worse.
It's one of those unanswerable questions, but it makes for great drama, as
Aeneid proceeds to demonstrate.

In terms of characterization, Boromir is magnificent, Radagast is a joy to
read, and Pippin-! Pippin. I don't usually find Pippin terribly interesting,
particularly in fanfic where he seems so often cast in a childish light, but
here he is successfully both the youngest mischief maker but also the
consummate and wise, and courageous forgiver--it's a thing of beauty.
Speaking of Pippin, the Fellowship members are hard to read because we see
their friendship repeatedly tested, found wanting at times, rejoined, and
then cast down again. We see, in the end, love that does not always require
liking; and liking (or rather, dislike) that painfully betrays what love
demands (sometimes subtley, sometimes obviously), only for friendship to be
reknit again. This is an endurance match: can they outlast Boromir's crisis,
or will they be overthrown by it? Anyone who has had to deal with a relative
or friend who has been incapacitated by grief or dementia will recognize
him- or herself in one of the Fellowship members at some point in this
story. It's agonizing, but it rings true.

Both comic and serious, heart-rending and maddening, "Adraefan" has its own
unique style to it, and a wonderful way with words and poetry. If you've
read Aeneid's "110" or
"Imladris Interpreted", you'll have a sense of what the poetry is like; now
imagine it cleverly integrated into a story as commentary from on high (or
at least, from outside the original story and outside the particular
struggles of Boromir) and you'll have an idea of the style. It gives a
unique form to this story, helping to break us out of the timeframe and
world of the books and displace us into a convincingly alternate universe.

Have I raved enough? Probably so. In closing, do not read this story if you
value your sleep patterns. I was on chapter 28 yesterday, and I made it to
chapter 48 in a feverish reading spree that started sometime around 10:30 at
night yesterday, I'd say. It's 2 in the morning my time as I write this.
Yeah. I thought several times of stopping when I found a break, only to
discover that I couldn't put the thing down because Boromir was breaking my
heart along with everyone else's who ever loved him.

However, if you're less enamored of a good night's sleep or have patience
that I lack, click on the link. I think you'll find you won't regret the
ride.
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Title: Letters · Author: Breon Briarwood · Genres: Romance: Vignette · ID:
1245
Reviewer: Inkling · 2005-09-10 02:56:27
I love how this clever fic starts out as a sappy, cliché-ridden love letter,
then gradually devolves into haunting Frodo-angst. Wonderful closing lines!
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Title: In the Style of Ogden Nash · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 917
Reviewer: Inkling · 2005-09-10 03:12:15
Very charming and clever! I especially liked "Lothlorien"; "Time flies when
you're having fun" is an apt way to describe the strange passage of time
there. And "Go on the lam. But don't forget Sam" is priceless! I'm still
hoping Dreamflower will write a sequel featuring Smaug and Custard the
Dragon!


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Title: A Circlet of Orange Flowers · Author: LKK · Genres: Humor: Elves ·
ID: 1027
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-09-10 05:10:00
Very amusing. Very, very amusing. And each voice is so clearly identifiable
- it is remarkably well done. Loved it.
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Title: Flowers in His hair · Author: LKK · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 1028
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-09-10 05:12:42
It is hardly wise to call the King 'feminine' in his hearing. Revenge must
be expected. And Aragorn will look very pretty in a circlet of flowers. This
must have been difficult to do - since each character is so clear without
the benefit of any extra words. Very entertaining. Very clever.
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Title: Elf Slash Sarcasm · Author: tyellas · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 596
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-10 13:50:47
Every writer of slash involving Elves, Men or indeed just about any species
should run each piece past Tyellas's Sarcasm-O-Meter, and hang their heads
in shame for every phrase they find coinciding - just about every cliche in
the slash book, be it plot (what plot?), OOC-ness, dialogue or excruciating
euphemisms, is mercilessly brought into play here. I've never yet attempted
to write slash, and I like good slash, but I've injured my eyes and brain on
enough of the bad stuff that every time I read this piece I find myself
continually wincing "Ow! Yes, I've read that - and that - and owwww, boy,
have I seen a lot of *those*!..."

The endless descriptions of everyone's clothing, particularly Elrond's
"silken elvish robes of surpassing gorgeousness," (and what the hell are
trapunto trenellations - no, on second thoughts don't tell me, I don't want
to know... ) are spot-on, as are the strings of overdone adjectives, and
particularly the evocation of the myriad Bad!Slashfic massacres of poor old
Legolas - how many "alabaster"s was that? As for "spire of your elfhood",
I'm sorry, the first time I read this piece that very nearly did me serious
physical injury.

The character assassinations are on the button too - how many times have we
all winced through horrifically cliched innocent-yet-saucy Legolas, the
grubby Ranger and the bewildered Boromir? This isn't just fanfic, it's a
public service and should be compulsorily read to all writers of appallingly
cliched slashfic till every one of those tired old phrases is burnt right
out of their lexicon. Oh, and it makes me giggle every time.
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Title: Weakness of Men · Author: shadow975 · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette ·
ID: 1014
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-10 14:45:37
This is a powerful and moving portrayal of Aragorn and Boromir's
relationship, which manages to mesh various movie moments with the
book!characters' traits well enough to reconcile some of the OOCness of the
movies' portrayals. I like the idea of Aragorn seeing himself reflected when
he looked at Boromir, seeing both their similarities and differences; all
the imagery around Narsil/Anduril was particularly effective. Beautiful and
very sad.
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Title: Links · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General
Drabble · ID: 23
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 16:17:12
This is a fantastic drabble. It's movieverse, which I generally don't like,
but it uses that universe to good effect, invoking my memory of the scene
where Boromir is tempted by the Ring at Caradhras in only a few words. I
also liked the many uses to which it put the concept of a chain; first
something that imprisons, then something that binds together. The idea that
the chain that had carried the Ring (symbolising Frodo's sacrifice I
presumed, now with the Ring gone) is what holds the cloven horn together --
by way of symbolism, what has made Gondor whole again. This was a really
perceptive and well-told moment.
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Title: Departing · Author: Celandine Brandybuck · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Final Partings · ID: 183
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 16:59:55
This is an interesting story, giving us a glimpse of some key elves (and
Gimli) as they prepare to go to the undying lands. I really liked it because
these aren't the usual suspects whose thoughts we see fanfic investigate.
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Title: The Last Time · Author: SoundOfHorns · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Final Partings · ID: 1118
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:00:15
This is a scarily accurate portrayal of grief. you ahve captured not just
the sadness but the numbing despair very well, looking at how Merry would be
affected by it -- and the kinds of thing people offer as hope that might
ring empty. His fierce protection of Pippin made sense to me.

If this story had a fault, it's that Aragorn seemed too pleading toward the
beginning. It would have had more impact, I think, if Aragorn had been more
commanding at the beginning and later fell into pleading. Still, it's a very
powerful look at Merry's last days, and the impact the hobbits' death might
have had on Aragorn.
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Title: Clasps and Links · Author: Songspinner · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship · ID: 1222
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:00:34
This is a nice moment, illuminating the differences and similarities between
the Shire and Rohan. Good job giving the last two remnants of the house of
Eorl a moment in the sun.
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Title: Farewell · Author: Elana · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID:
302
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:00:53
Lots of stories out there explain Legolas's stay in Middle-earth after
hearing the sea's call through the relationships Legolas had with mortals
still living, most notably Aragorn. This takes it a step further by
considering the call of Middle-earth itself, which I think would also have
been a key struggle. And the thought that the waves sang of a new creation
at the end was very neat. Because a new thing was happening, and using Ulmo
(as the vala most involved in Middle-earth) to announce that was very
fitting.
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Title: Deific Flame · Author: Bejai · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Incomplete · ID: 672
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:01:13
This is a very well-told story where the author has taken the tantalizing
fragments Tolkien gives us (largely in secondary sources like "Unfinished
Tales"), and has woven this into a full picture. Nay, not just a picture --
a tapestry, woven with bright colours and yet dulled by the passing years,
its edges perhaps a little frayed but its glory still in tact. Elrond and
Valandil are understated as lords on less-than-friendly terms might be (and
you never forget that they are lords, no matter how personal their
interactions), but this does not undercut the emotional impact of Valandil's
continued searching for Isildur's remains. There is a bitterness to
Valandil's wish to take Narsil's shards to Annuminas; it reminds me of the
slight bitterness I always imagine in Denethor's answer that "in Gondor, ten
thousand years would not suffice (to make a steward a king)." It is the only
politic answer, but you can just feel that it is not what the speaker really
wishes. At least I can.

Regardless, this is a touching story, and all the more beautiful for its
obscurity.

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Title: Making of Boys · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of
Healing · ID: 237
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:01:38
I think what I love most about this piece is Ioreth's voice. She is
definitely the chatty comic relief we see in the books, but there's more to
her somehow. More weight. She has a wquiet wisdom that fit a woman of her
station and class. She's also extremely protective of the girls, and has a
maternal connection that I was surprised by how well it worked. Given that
she seems old but still works outside the house suggests to me that she was
never married or is widowed (and if widowed has no living children). The
fact that she is respected says a lot for Gondorian society, that it has
some place (albeit fairly limited) for professional women. And of course I
loved the philosophising, Dwim... but you knew I would like that already.
Nice job on this one.
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Title: Fever Dreams · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of
Healing · ID: 397
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:02:00
This is an interesting idea: what did Faramir think the *second* time he
woke? Because of course he was ill, and physically exhausted, and feverish,
and posssibly suffering from poison, not to mention the black breath. He'd
be in a very confused state. Faramir's dreams for what a future with the
king on Gondor's throne seemed very fitting for his character. Well done,
Gwynnyd.
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Title: Strange Meeting · Author: JeannieMac · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses
of Healing · ID: 743
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:02:19
This is a really moving tale. In the first part, the pace really met the
quick, almost panicky pace of a nightmare. And Faramir's despair is
tangible, but also very fitting to one suffering from the Black Breath. But
what I think I like most is Aragorn's treatment of Faramir. This is tough
love, but a gentle sort of tough love (if such a thing is possible): we the
reader can tell that Aragorn cares for Faramir, but he doesn't coddle him.
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Title: Discretion · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 416
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:02:46
A powerful look at Boromir comign to terms with his sexuality, and desires
that are all the more troublesome because Godnor looks to him for an heir.
The character of Andrahar was also well drawn. This did a good job of
presenting a pliausible homoerotic scenario within Middle-earth.
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Title: The Ballad of Isildur and Elendil · Author: Lindelea · Races/Places:
Gondor: Poetry · ID: 460
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:03:13
Cute! You've captured a grave moment in history in a matter suitable for
babes.
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Title: Inheritance · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID:
1087
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 17:13:26
I have to admit to not being the best-read member of this fandom. I get the
impression that there's more going on below the surface than I am able to
comprehend. But even what I perceive on the surface, is powerful. Nice job
of taking the dry appendices and introducing family dynamics into them.
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Title: Seasong · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General
Drabble · ID: 149
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 18:20:33
Oh, great moment. It's so nice to think of Legolas in love and finding
contentment beyond the seas -- but even nicer that it's Gimli who goads him
on. It reminded me of the moments at Helm's Deep where they counted their
kills. But it's nice that that competitiveness is finding an outlet in
peacetime.
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Title: The Seeing Stone · Author: Finch · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical ·
ID: 346
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 20:14:40
This vignette does a good job of giving a birds-eye view of some of several
key moments in Middle-earth. From the sons of Feanor to the kinslaying...
the impersonal nature of this piece really brought out the tragedy of all
the events it commented on.
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Title: Replacements · Author: Meril · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General
Drabble · ID: 486
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 20:22:55
This drabble does something very interesting by categorising the difference
between elves and men by their clothes. I never would have thought to do
that! I especially liked the comment about "embroidery vs flowing lines" --
it seems so spot on, that men try to elaborate and make things complicated,
whereas elves embrace the simple, natural beauty found in the world.
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Title: Not Remembered · Author: Cadiliniel · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble ·
ID: 992
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 20:27:34
It makes sense that some Gondorians would remember the steward and not be so
quick to accept Aragorn. This drabble does a good job of showing that.
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Title: The Greater Gift · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
General Drabble · ID: 540
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 20:38:25
How neat to think of what Galadriel might have thought about her temptation
by the Ring, after she has been "healed" and is free of the concerns of
being a Ring-bearer. This drabble is full of little hints from canon: the
elanor and the niphredil, the grey rain-curtain, and so on.

It's also neat the different reactions that you have given to Galadriel and
Frodo. Galadriel is anticipating what she has seen before, but she is also
touched by Frodo: no longer worn down by the Ring so much that he can't
appreciate the new adventure.
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Title: Foreign Customs · Author: Elvenesse · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 329
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 21:00:30
I can *so* see the bewildered looks on the faces of the midwives and so on
when Aragorn asks to stay in the room. Not only is their queen of a foreign
race but their king also is from a completely different culture.
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Title: Elements of Ithilien · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 536
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 21:39:49
It's hard to pick which of these five drabbles I like the most because
they're each so vivid. From the pseudo-dance Faramir performs when he's
fighting to the beetle climbing a grass stem to the sparks from the campfire
joinign the fire overhead. But if I was pressed to choose, I think I'd have
to say that my absolute favourite one is "Water". The symbolism is so
powerful: the dream of Numenor that was and the waves, compared to the quiet
song of Henneth Annun's waterfall creates a natural stage to look at the
fall Faramir avoided. And of course "spirit" was a lovely read, very gentle
and pastoral, exactly as I imagine Faramir's dream of the future -- and the
placement just completely earned it. Beautiful, beautiful drabbles, Liz.
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Title: Seeing · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble
· ID: 1356
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 21:46:46
I loved this drabble. It reminds me so strongly of Sam's talk with Frodo on
the stairs of Cirith Ungol, where Sam wishes for a good meal, and bed, and
hale work in the morning. Imrahil seems to embrace the fact that he has
that. Very wise indeed of him.
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Title: The Naming · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble ·
ID: 518
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 21:53:02
Interesting ruminations on the struggle Aragorn might have faced when trying
to choose a name history would use to remember him.
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Title: New Home · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien
Drabble · ID: 20
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 22:10:39
Beregond and Bergil in drabble: what more could I have asked for? But
there's more, as Tanaqui gives us a touching picture of how Ithilien is
being settled. I'm not convinced that anyone would have expected a market be
built so close to Minas Tirith, where I'm sure there would be a much bigger
market, and if it's only a day or so's ride away, I think people would have
just sold their produce there. But I definitely agree with Beregond's
closing sentiment that "At last [Bergil] has a chance to be a boy!" What a
nice idea, that Bergil will be able to recapture some of what the war has
stolen from him.
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Title: Duty · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 240
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 22:24:03
Hobbits understand a great deal about temptation, Boromir, and the fact that
you think Frodo doesn't is proof that you don't understand how much the two
of you have in common. But I think we can all sympathise with Boromir: the
desire not to entangle others, the uncertainty of whom one can trust, the
truth that we need to settle our inner affairs before turning outward. Great
thoughts on his part, and great way to start it all: that phrase "the stony
gazes of kings" was gold. Quite a lot to pack into just 100 words!
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Title: Garden · Author: Cheryl · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble
· ID: 220
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 22:37:47
Lots of little things I liked about this drabble. Faramir's use of an elvish
greeting shows a nice bit of racial sensitivity. Legolas's invocation to the
tree to "grow well" seemed very suitable for an elf. Lots of little things
like that really make this drabble work.
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Title: The Steward and the Brother · Author: Cheryl · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 224
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 22:39:12
You tell a lot about Gondor in the fourth age through the change of the
oaths. If Boromir had lived, I like to think this is how he might have
related to Aragorn.
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Title: Refraction · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and
Finduilas · ID: 750
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 23:45:07
This story had shades (at least for me) of Poe's "The Tell-Tale Heart"
throughout, but especially in Denethor's refrain "I am not a cruel nor a
heartless man". I am never really sure whether he is trying to convince us
the reader or himself that this is the truth; I suspect that it is either or
both at different points in the story. I'm not sure I entirely accept what
this story claims as reconcilable with the appendices and what UT tells us
about the palantiri, but it is a very interesting, if frightening, series of
events.
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Title: The Return · Author: Elana · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien
Drabble · ID: 295
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-10 23:49:23
Elana has some really interesting things going on here, such as the
dichotomy of the blindfold being needed before/not needed now (though I'd
argue that it perhaps was needed for most people, it's just that Faramir
trusts Eowyn enough), and the idea that the beauty the new age now affords
him was brought about by the ugliness of Gollum. A very nice scene.
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Title: Repose Earned, Words Unspoken · Author: maranya14 · Races/Places:
Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 482
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-11 00:34:49
There is a quiet logic to Denethor's madness and you show it well here. And
in case any of us are afraid that it really is Denethor speaking, the
language could hardly be anyone but his. Very effective. You used the poems
throughout to good effect, too.
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Title: The Voice of Experience · Author: Ijemanja · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 415
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-11 00:36:26
Eowyn seems to have acquired a measure of wisdom. I liked the fact that she
now realises that perhaps being raised to defend one's home was not the best
upbringing for a young lady. It makes me wonder what she thought of her own
deeds on the Pelennor, at this point in her life.
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Title: Garden Secrets · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Ithilien Drabble · ID: 573
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-11 00:40:02
Ah, Faramir is a wise man to realise that if one marries a Shield-maiden,
one had best not try to squash her spirit! It's nice to see that he lets
Eowyn keep her little secret, but that he also lets her know that she
doesn't have to be ashamed of this part of her personality as well.
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Title: Seven Scattered Scrolls · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 323
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2005-09-11 18:40:12
I. Taking the Journey

This short piece describes Boromir’s departure from the White City. It is a
sunlit moment full of uncertain hope. Boromir proudly winds the horn as he
sets out, just as he does when departs from Imladris in LOTR. The writing
captures his restless, optimistic spirit very well. I love it when his
younger brother rears his horse in a jaunty farewell salute, just as Boromir
had taught him. This is one of my very favorite drabbles!

II. Boromir’s Return

It seemed very much in character that Denethor would see his own display of
emotion as a lapse and would turn away from further contact with Faramir.

III. Showing Quality

The writer skillfully recreates Faramir’s manner of speech, both his diction
and phrasing. This drabble explores the possibility that Faramir was
momentarily tempted to take the Ring. As always, the Ring’s temptation is
tailored to the personality of the potential victim. I especially like when
Faramir tells himself that he should spare the small, weary hobbits from
carrying “this woeful burden.” I am not sure that JRRT would have agreed
that Faramir was ever tempted by the Ring, but it interesting to consider
what form that temptation would have taken.

IV. Tell Me Why

I am sure that young Faramir is tugging at Gandalf’s sleeve as he pesters
him with a hundred questions! After such a cheerful beginning, the dark
ending to this drabble is a surprise, and the last line--

“…the heart and mind can hold greater mysteries than all the lore of fallen
Numenor.”

is both beautiful and sad.

V. The Deep Breath Before the Plunge

Another perceptive ficlet from the viewpoint of Faramir, this time set
during his wedding ceremony. As his mood changes, there is a skillful shift
from feelings of uncertainty and images of darkness to feelings of
confidence and images of light. The quote from the movie is a very apt title
for this piece and is worked into the final line.

VI. The Bower

This scene of Eowyn’s relief after her wedding night is well-written and
very believable. Grima’s ogling and leering have darkened her view of sexual
relationships, and she also approaches the marriage bed with the
understandable anxiety of a virgin. The title and the last line hark back to
Aragorn’s remark in LOTR that Eowyn must have seen her bower as a cage, a
place to trammel a wild creature. But my favorite part of the piece is the
image of gorgeous, naked Faramir waking up in the morning!

VII. Water Sports

This progression of ficlets comes to a conclusion with a scene of Faramir
and Eowyn’s life in Ithilien. Swimming at the lake in the days before the
invention of the bathing suit. The mood is erotic yet also relaxed and
peaceful.
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Title: Come to Harm · Author: Clairon · Genres: Adventure: Long Form · ID:
597
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2005-09-11 19:00:13

This tale of sorcery and intrigue has much to recommend it. Clairon’s
writing style is fresh and vivid, and the action is well-paced. In her
alternate universe, both Wormtongue and Saruman survive the War of the Ring,
and her characterization of these two often steals the show. I loved hearing
Saruman complain about how difficult it is to find good minions these days!
The scene with Grima's inept marksmanship also made me laugh. Though Grima
does not earn the reader’s sympathy in this story (in fact, readers will be
chanting “Kill Wormie! Kill Wormie!” by the end of the first chapter), the
writer does give an unusual backstory for his obsession with Eowyn and you
are left wondering about the man he might have become if he had not become
Wormtongue. The writer draws all of the characters with a deft hand
(including very nice cameo appearances by Gimli and Legolas). Her portrayal
of the steward’s interaction with his wife and family is touching without
being maudlin. I like her view of the friendship between Faramir and
Aragorn. She makes it clear that--while there is great love between
them--due to Aragorn's greater age and rank, this is not a simple friendship
between peers. Angst and suffering abound in this tale but are handled with
restraint. I especially liked Faramir’s reflections on his brother and
father’s madness.

Well-crafted and engaging, this is a great read.

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Title: Dolor Meus · Author: Werecat · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 897
Reviewer: Inkling · 2005-09-11 20:02:20
This lovely, deeply moving story is a seamless blend of Middle-earth
history, Christianity, and Celtic mythology. I've read more than one fanfic
in which the portrayal of Radagast was strongly suggestive of Saint Francis
of Assisi, and it's nice to see that connection made explicit here. Like the
animals, I too mourned "the passing of magic, of song, and music" when the
last of the Firstborn departed. But it's some comfort to think of Radagast
tarrying in these mortal lands a while longer...
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Title: Sun on the Water · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Romance · ID: 971
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-11 22:31:34
Nice use of description and suggestion to create a very sensual moment here.
Very sweet.
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Title: Hardiness · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire ·
ID: 372
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-11 23:08:18
It's always nice to read a story that shows that the author knows more about
what they're writing than canon. "Hardiness" is no exception: Forodwaith
obviously knows a thing or two about gardening. So would Sam, and that's
what makes this feel so real. And the little joke about the lobelia was very
cute.
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Title: On the West Slopes of Mindolluin · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places:
Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 576
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-11 23:22:05
Interesting moment with the two youngest heirs of the house of Hurin being
boys -- while both remaining consistent with the men they will become.
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Title: In Thranduil's Halls · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Vignette · ID: 1304
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-11 23:40:38
This has some really interesting musings on the different types of rocks --
the rocks of his father's halls, the rough rock worn away by his fingers,
the rock of Gimli. That bit reminded me of his statement in Hollin that the
stones cry out to him (which I have always taken literally.) So many other
nice moments here: the song of the bird in now-free southern Mirkwood not
comparing to the cry of the gulls, for example, or the fact that he uses
Fangorn's song, something he would have learned on the quest. I'm not sure
it feels quite complete, but it does have some simply beautiful symbolism
and language.
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Title: Language Lessons · Author: Celandine Brandybuck · Races/Places:
Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 190
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-12 00:07:28
I had two favourite moments in this one (though it's hard even to narrow it
down to those, because this has some great interactions throughout). The
first is one Boromir is struggling through his Sindarin and Faramir belts
out "O menel aglar elenath" -- without meaning to, he is definitely
one-upping Boromir. I can truthfully commiscerate with Boromir: as an oldest
sibling myself, I know just how annoying cheeky younger brothers and sisters
can be. The other thing I really liked about this was all the Gondorian
bedtime stories. It seemed fitting that the Silmarillion would form the
basis for at least somje of the more popular ones out there, and I can
easily see Boromir liking Tuor best -- though I agree with Finduilas, parts
of Turin really aren't meant for young ears. Thanks for a nice peak into the
private lives of the steward's family, Cel.
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Title: Sheathing Sting · Author: Celandine Brandybuck · Books/Time: The
Hobbit · ID: 203
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-12 00:29:20
Cel, I have to admit, I was laughing out loud at the beginning -- all of the
bothersome busy-bodies reminded me too much of some of the old ladies in my
church. You know them, or do they just make the same variety in your neck of
the woods? Because you've nailed them perfectly. To think that they think
it's less rude to talk audibly about someone than to ask him properly --
well, that fits the character, I think.

Beyond that, Balan was a real treat. He's probably one of the best original
characters I've ever read. He has a sense of realism about him. It's little
touches, I think, like the haggling and the way he was touched by Bilbo's
courtesy during the quest for Erebor. And his annoyance at not being able to
make the design perfect by using mithril was very well thought-out, too. All
in all a very enjoyable read.
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Title: The Mantle of Stone · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places: Gondor ·
ID: 116
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-12 00:57:08
Very powerful meeting between strangers. I particularly liked the fact that
the current king could not measure up to the Argonath; that seemed to
reflect Aragorn's words at the Council of Elrond that he did not resemble
what the Gondorians thought their king should look like.
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Title: Ashes and the Flame · Author: Ariel · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Fourth Age · ID: 677
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady · 2005-09-12 08:41:33
To say that this piece is beautiful or moving is to short-change this
wonderful work of heart - and yes, I do mean a work of 'heart', because the
depth of feeling evident in every line, from the author to the characters
and the characters to each other, shines past expressing. It is an
exquisitely painful thing to look on the memory of what is gone, even if the
remembrance is better than forgetfulness, and Ariel brings forth that
disquiet in Aragorn's heart and soul at missing Frodo and deploring his
absence in a world renewed by his sacrifice. And his comfort in the thought
that some part, however distant and diluted, of that light lives yet in
Middle-Earth is likewise made so beautifully real as to lighten a weight of
tears one had not quite felt build up.
A deft and loving touch in relaying mundane detail and heart-deep sentiment
marks this as a truly fine piece that I am delighted to have read, and read,
and read, with equal pleasure every time.
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Title: Turnabout · Author: Ariel · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 686
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady · 2005-09-12 08:43:28
Beautifully written, as I've come to expect from this author, with neither
the oversweet sap that chokes, nor the overwrought wretchedness that makes
one giggle or click off! All of the emotions and actions of the characters
are given their just measure and consequence; the worry and fear are
palpable, but countered with realistic calm and care; the love and sadness
that envelop each relevant beat are beyond doubt genuine and given the
proper expression for each, and take graceful account of the time and place,
as well as the changing personalities and ties of those involved; the soft
comfort, the glowing hope offered to the characters, and to the reader, by
this story and its conclusion, is a delicate and beautiful gift, and a
hallmark of this author's works.
Altogether lovely!
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Title: Marriage of Souls · Author: ErinRua · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 334
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-12 14:31:26
This is fabulous - so wickedly clever. Was I fooled? Well, not on this
occasion, because I know ErinRua's work and her preoccupation with the
four-footed - but I easily could have been, and it was a delight to see how
carefully every word had been chosen to keep the potential double meaning
going all the way to the end. And the conceit actually makes it a perfect
character-portrait of Eomer, because who else but one of the Rohirrim could
be thinking of selecting a mare with exactly the care and attention that
another man would give to choosing a wife? As always with Erin's beautifully
realised writing, every word is exactly the right word in the right place.
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Title: Among the Fields of Green · Author: ErinRua · Races/Places: Rohan:
Vignette · ID: 280
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-12 14:58:02
One of the hallmarks of ErinRua's writing for me is her ability to evoke
intense emotion and yet keep it perfectly controlled, not allowing it to
spill over into sentimentality or schmaltz, and this story displays that to
perfection. The courage, desperation and hope of those who fought the Fords
- a battle which in LoTR is merely "Noises Off" - is powerfully brought to
life here; I particularly like the contrast between the remembered clamour
and chaos of battle and the peace of the green fields of remembrance. The
final paragraph brings Erin's genius for writing horses and riders, which
makes her such a great writer of the Rohirrim, to the fore - the sentence
which starts "Forward we surge in growing speed as if falling into the
wind..." is one of the best evocations of riding at the gallop I think I've
read. Lovely, lovely piece.
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Title: Weeping Iron Tears · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 338
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-12 15:05:12
Poignant memorial to Halbarad, and a well-considered little character study
of Aragorn too. "He came simply because I had need of him... And in the
south he died." Poor Halbarad. Strangely, this little fic also reminded me
of how and why Aragorn is such good friends with Bilbo and Gandalf - all
lovers of a quiet pipe; and how Aragorn, just like Gandalf, is himself in a
sense a steward: "it is not my peace. I am but its caretaker and
guardian..." Lovely; a fitting companion piece to "Fields of Green".
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Title: When pigs do Fly · Author: Elendiari22 · Genres: Humor: Animals · ID:
975
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-09-12 15:33:05
Very funny! There were several chuckles in the story where I actually did
laugh aloud. Some clever plays on words, too. I appreciated the "AU" warning
up front, for that turned off my "canon radar" and allowed me to enjoy the
story without something in the back of my brain sputtering, "But... but..."
My middle dd says to tell you she enjoyed the story too.
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Title: Flame of the West · Author: Altariel · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette
· ID: 1
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady · 2005-09-12 16:07:47
This was a very beautiful and heartfelt piece, full of all the love, sadness
and hope that a man in Faramir's position might indeed feel. The dialogue
was carefully crafted, very true to each character and distinct; there is no
doubt as to the speaker, whether it is Faramir or Aragorn, and the full load
of their emotions and their past is carried forth in each action and each
word. The desire to love and trust again that Faramir places squarely upon
this new King breathes out of each line, as does his ache for those that
have gone before; Aragorn's regard for Faramir, both as an individual and as
a representative of this family, with whom he has had such a long and
complicated relationship, is evident as well. What a potent phrase to end
his part with as well,

“Not all of you,” he murmured, his eyes becoming distant. “I would not lose
all of you.”

All in all, a truly touching vignette, well deserving of notice for its
wonderful flow and technical perfection.

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Title: Fairer Than Most · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places: Hobbits:
War of the Ring · ID: 69
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady · 2005-09-12 16:08:04
What a delightful look at these dear cousins, fair and foul alike! I can
certainly well imagine that Frodo would take a bit of ribbing from those
lads, and that he would find a clever way to take them down a peg as well.
It was a wonderful touch to have Sam and Aragorn as 'outside' points of
view, as well as to make the final thought one of fond interplay amongst
them, given the hardships they are about to engage in.
Very lovely! Thanks!
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Title: The Arial Object · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 972
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady · 2005-09-12 16:08:26
What an interesting little moment... You left me wondering exactly what it
was until the end!
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Title: Lessons in Adventuring · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1188
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady · 2005-09-12 16:08:40
Lovely:) A very nice portrayal of the characters and relationships; this
story well accounts for the age differences among them as well, which
doesn't always happen in wee!hobbit fics. Good job!
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Title: Devil of Kindness · Author: Nancy Brooke · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 685
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady · 2005-09-12 16:08:55
The care of years comes through these short phrases, and the regret that
knowledge should be blinded by light and reasoned words as he found himself
quite literally blind-sided by an ally once so sure. For all his trust into
the Higher Power that sent them both, the uncertainty and fear engendered by
this betrayal must have marked him, and all that finds itself beautifully
expressed in this drabble. As always, Nancy makes each and every word count,
carefully laying the one beside the other to offer up a complete image; a
superb example of that most exacting form, the drabble!
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Title: The Wedding Table · Author: grey_wonderer · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Pippin · ID: 790
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady · 2005-09-12 16:09:22
A wonderful predicament, the likes of which this author both delights and
excels at putting our dear lads into, and with a most mischievous and
satisfying ending. One in a series of these clever stories that is offered
up by GreyWonderer, this one made me chortle and grin, all the while
blessing the inventiveness of Merry's revenge for its happy and unexpected
result. There is much care and love for the character of Pippin behind the
seemingly light plotline and tone. I am very very glad to have happened on
this particular story!
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Title: Dance of Terrible Grace · Author: Adina ATL · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 57
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-09-12 16:24:32
Wow, Very descriptive. A darker side of the lovely Legolas, but not out of
line. I loved "he was mine!" hinted at the future rivalry. I'm not sure i
would have used beautiful in the last line, but that's just me. A well done
piece nonetheless.
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Title: The Sand Circle · Author: A L Milton · Races/Places: Villains · ID:
49
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-09-12 16:27:11
What Wonderful detail. Obviously well researched, which has paid off and
added wonderful depth to the story. And so original!! I have not yet seen
any other LOTR story based on this subject. Of all the plot bunnies that
have popped in my head while reading the books, Not once did the bunnies
speak of oliphants. So BIG kudos from me for originality alone. But also for
your wonderfully written story. I’m a sucker for well done details and they
abounded in this story. The different colored sashes earned adds to the
picture drawn in the mind AND just makes sense. Helps designate levels among
the people. Oh, and your teaser for the story REALLY drew me in. I knew I
HAD to read a story with foot scraping in it.
All the different languages and cultures you have blended!! Fantastic.
I truly loved Kuon. Such a goddess personality. Bravo!
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Title: Words Unsaid · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Gapfiller · ID: 55
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-09-12 16:28:20
Quite insightful. I was a little confused as to whether or not Denethor
thought Faramir was already dead? Or still dying. But still, It certainly
explained the madness of his final thoughts and deeds beautifully. I adore
the tradition described of sending people off with well wishes. Good advice
for all to take I think.
Oh, another bit I liked, Where “D” is listening to hear what F is saying.
Frantic for words of forgiveness maybe? Only to be dashed.
D was played so wonderfully twisted in the movie. One can hope he had this
moment of somewhat lucidity in the end, even if it was combined with more
madness. Too little too late for him perhaps, but for you. . a plot bunny
was born.
Nicely done indeed.

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Title: Travellers' Tales · Author: Alawa · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 75
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-09-12 16:29:02
Wonderful depiction of a boring foul weather day. Where nothing abounds but
a bad case of writer's block.

In sweeps aragorn, a breath of fresh air in so many ways. I loved your
description of Aragorn, the "enticing air" and his more careworn appearance.
Lovely!

And bilbo is perked up! a Wonderful peak into the relationship only hinted
at by tolkien.
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Title: Enmities · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 561
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-09-12 16:30:23
A cliff hanger! by the end i thought they might survive. Maybe the warrior
would bring them food? I guess the babes died too?? Possibly The beginning
of a new race of orc that wasn't so evil could have been formed, brought
back to elvish ways? Perhaps i'm naive. sigh. Nicely done though. Well
thought out.
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Title: Fading Leaves · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID:
356
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-12 17:02:21
Ahha - I always knew Elrond needed a librarian! And good to see old
Parmandil as well. This is sweet and sad, full of the melancholy of Fading,
but at the same time reassuring; Tolkien himself, after all, liked to think
of himself as a chronicler rather than a creator of Middle-earth, and I
suspect he would be delighted to know of Tasariel's existence and all her
good work.
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Title: Hope · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Elves: Drabble · ID: 946
Reviewer: LOTR_lover · 2005-09-12 18:26:54
Oh, nice switch in perspective! Glorfindel dejected, and even Asfaloth's
bells out of harmony--then Aragorn's voice, and everything changes. I like
this very much, including the play on Hope--Estel in the title.
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Title: Back to the Valley · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places: Elves ·
ID: 590
Reviewer: LOTR_lover · 2005-09-12 18:38:56
I cried. This is a sadly beautiful piece. You know, I never thought about
how that triumph at the Fords of Bruinen could have such terrible
consequences for a nameless captive back in Barad-dur.

Such a simple song (called mindless by some, but what do they know) used to
such complex effect. Poor elf--I hope someone manages to rescue him somehow,
or that someone will honor his suffering after he returns from Mandos.
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Title: Bread of the Mírdain · Author: tyellas · Races/Places: Elves · ID:
595
Reviewer: LOTR_lover · 2005-09-12 19:00:25
It's amazing how much information, innuendo, and indulgent parenting you
packed into a story of less than 2200 words! I was sorry when it ended. All
the characters came alive for me, and our glimpse of Annatar through
Celeborn's eyes was fascinating. Wise Celeborn, to be obscurely pleased by
Annatar's manners, but careful nonetheless.

The descriptions of the foods on the table, the solitary smiths cooking at
their forges, and the sweets offered in Celebrimbor's office were inspired.
Of course this is how Elves eat--now that I've read this, I'll never believe
otherwise.
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Title: Uninvited · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places: Elves · ID: 1020
Reviewer: LOTR_lover · 2005-09-12 19:19:01
Maedhros and Feanor are both so self-contained and self-absorbed that the
reader wonders if either of them will ever come to realize just what they
wreaked on others to achieve their goals. Elven psychopaths. Chilling, and
yet I felt sorry for them both.

"The soldiers said that they buried him. Maedhros killed the soldier who
told him that. Later on, he was oddly thankful for not having had to do it
himself."

I doubt he'll ever leave.
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Title: Made to Suffer · Author: Clairon/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors · Genres:
Adventure: Long Form · ID: 599
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2005-09-12 21:02:37
The tale is continued that was begun in “Come to Harm.” With Grima’s less
than enthusiastic help, Saruman plots against the White Throne.

Though Wormtongue is truly loathsome, the writers are careful to give him
moments of insight and rational behavior that keep him from becoming a
cartoonish villain. Dialogue is well-paced, in character, and often witty.
Aragorn describes Legolas and Gimli as a pair of quarrelsome but “very
strong and deadly children”! The fight scenes are very well-written; the
action is easy to visualize and seems realistic. There is a wonderful brawl
in a stairwell. The writers add a touch of world-weariness to Aragorn’s
wisdom, and Faramir’s personality is grittier than in some fanfics. I like
how Eowyn, a middle-aged wife and mother, eventually decides that she cannot
rely on the experts (her King and his soldiery) to save the day. Even the
bit players—Anborn, Beregond, an innkeeper—are drawn with a deft hand. The
dialogue and actions of the children are very realistic and often funny--no
doubt at least one of the writers has spent a great deal of time around
youngsters! The characters of Faramir’s teen-aged sons and Aragorn’s son are
very believable as they sometimes behave like grown men and sometimes behave
like children. I love Eldarion’s hero-worship of Faramir.

These two writers have conspired to produce an exciting tale of intrigue and
betrayal.

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Title: The Far-Reaching Hand · Author: Joan Milligan · Races/Places: Elves:
Post-Ring War · ID: 745
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-12 23:11:52
This piece had a slow, easy pace to it -- almost lazy -- that seemed very
fitting given the subject matter: Feanor. Finarfin and Finrod long after the
Third Age, in Valinor, contemplate their half-brother, and they raise some
very interesting questions. Does the simple act of thinking something
worthwhile lend it worth? I'm not sure I agree with Fingolfin here, but it's
an interesting question to ask nonetheless. More fruitful for me was the
question of whether we can find something to envy in people who we might
consider ultimate evil. Usually we can, and that look for something to envy
is very fruitful, both in how we view the character and in what we
understand of ourselves. Interesting piece, Joan; you've got the old neurons
firing.
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Title: Father to Son · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble ·
ID: 139
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-12 23:46:03
This piece always amazes me with how well it sets the mood in such a short
space. The madness, the despair, the misery of it all... I can almost
imagine something out of "Schindler's List", which I guess might not be far
off, only this is much more urgent. Very well done, Az.
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Title: Fighting the Long Defeat · Author: Elvenesse · Races/Places: Elves:
Poetry · ID: 328
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-13 00:10:10
I like villanelles because they're so intricate, but this one takes it a
step further: it weaves Elrond's very life into the poem, with the line
"long years I have fought against evil's blight" being as much a refrain in
his own experience as in the poem itself. Very well done.
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Title: There And Back Again · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: The Hobbit:
Drabble · ID: 51
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-13 00:12:16
*snork* This drabble had some great interaction between Lobelia and Bilbo,
though I would have loved to ahve seen her reaction. It left me wondering:
does Bilbo consider himself or Lobelia to be the dragon? And what did
LOBELIA think he meant? Thought-provoking, but most importantly funny.
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