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Title: Ho, Ho! My Lads · Author: Dreamflower/Marigold CoAuthors ·
Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 1170
Reviewer: Inkling · 2005-09-23 03:15:55
A funny, charming portrait of a young Pippin...loved the image of him
jumping up and down, sending up puffs of flour. The bond between the three
young cousins is nicely portrayed. And "tupper" is a clever addition to the
hobbit repertoire of mealtimes. Reminds me of the Eskimos, with 100
different words for snow...

Just what *did* Pip leave under Merry’s bed, anyway?

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Title: Life in the Angle · Author: Leaward · Genres: Romance · ID: 181
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-09-23 06:55:17
THIS is the kind of author I search and search for and when i find them, i
MUST own a copy of everything they write so that i can read the books again
and again over the years. Much like David Eddings to me. This story has it
all. Humor, drama, excitement, action and adventure, ANgst! And handsome
men! It has a compelling storyline that drags you along and does NOT let you
go! You MUST keep turning the page to find out WHAT will happen next. She
keeps us guessing the whole time! If I were to find this after completion,
tis likely I would lose a couple days of my life doing nothing but reading.
I do the same with the latest Harry potter books, so this author is in GREAT
company!
A reader can tell that every detail of this and the authors other stories
have been WELL thought out and researched! right down to the Diapers vs.
Nappies question! Set in tolkiens world after the destruction of the ring,
this story takes us further, exploring the lives of the dunadain after one
of their own has finally been made king. This is a "what happens in 'happily
ever after' story." One never wants the truly great stories to end, and this
story answers the call. She takes us on and deeper into tolkiens world. in a
little before mentioned place, the Angle.

Poppi is not your simpering heroine, but one of determination and spirit.
Put into a world that is completely unfamiliar, she tries her very hardest
to fit in, even learning the language. And Tarkil, the hero, a man who makes
mistakes, but one whom you can't help but love. "Life in the Angle" is
filled with wonderfully believable and diverse characters. Nothing froofroo
and sickening sweet here. A truely fantastic story. by and Author I can't
WAIT to read more from!!
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Title: Musings by Torchlight · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 1316
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2005-09-23 07:15:57
A gripping story of adventure and friendship. Legolas' relationship with
Gimli is very well delineated.

""And you will still make my life an unpredictable adventure," Legolas added
quietly with a smile. "And for that, Gimli, son of Glóin, I thank you."
- wonderful lines here! And a marker of how these very different companions
have enriched each other's lives.
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Title: Garden · Author: Cheryl · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble
· ID: 220
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2005-09-23 07:27:12
What lovely scenery - postWar Ithilien, posies and plants growing, and two
of Middle-earth's most attractive males in the garden. I'm packing up my
spade and watering can and heading out to Emyn Arnen as soon as possible!

Seriously, a skillfully written and evocative drabble. Nice use of Sindarin,
too!
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Title: Where the Stars Are Strange · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Men
· ID: 255
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-09-23 09:26:48
The summary says "existential Aragorn" and describes what I thought the
first time I read this story.

But it is not only Aragorn's characterization alone. It is the tension
arising between him and the OC Indirkan and the questions about trust and
belief they ponder in the hot desert which makes this story so remarkable to
me.

The description of the desert is so vivid that I could see the landscape in
my minds eye. It is the perfect foil to the encounter of the two
protagonists of the story. Nothing distracts from the questions they have to
answer. In the harsh lights of the desert the truth is the only way.
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Title: Coming Home · Author: SilverMoonLady · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Romance · ID: 1071
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-09-23 11:33:16
What a delightful story to read. I kept on turning the pages, eager to read
more and more, my eyes firmly fixed on this enfolding hobbit tale where two
of our brave heroes deal with the Shire after the War of the Ring. Coming
Home is much more then a romance. With her excellent storytelling,
SilverMoonLady tells a tale full with drama, angst, fear and hobbits who
have suffered too much. "More happened here than you could know, Merry"
Estella confides to Merry and chapter-by-chapter we read that all is not
well. Paladin’s grief and frustration is written so brilliantly. As a father
he so desperately wants to see everything restored to normal, grappling for
control, in doing so he holds his lands and people under firm control. The
manner Pippin deals with this is cleverly written and underneath you can
feel how this young hobbit struggles with it. Ah and there is romance, very
sweet but not that innocent. Tengo is a well-written villain, what he did
precisely: SilverMoonLady leaves plenty of room to speculate on that for the
reader: but it isn’t that pretty. Another thing that stood out for me is how
SilverMoonLady captured Frodo’s pain and life, especially that compared to
the nightmares Merry still has. The author doesn’t put one above the other,
but equals it gracefully: you both feel for them.

At the end of the story, you can sense that the Shire starts healing again,
but it leaves me wanting to read more about their lives. With a confident
style of writing, good characterisation and a good display of canon
knowledge, Coming Home is a thrilling and exciting read. Great work
SilverMoonLady!

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Title: Tolkien and the Problem of Characterisation: Eowyn and Arwen ·
Author: Fionnabhair Nic Aillil · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 351
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-09-23 16:18:57
In this essay. Fionnabhair Nic Ailil presents some good insights into why
many of today’s critics and cultural commentators regard Tolkien’s works
with contempt, despite Tolkien’s significant popular following. The essay
examines the way in which his works -- the Lord of the Rings in particular
-- are judged by these critics against a yardstick that may not be an
appropriate measure, and proposes that those readers who do not enjoy his
works may be looking for things that these books can never provide, nor
should be expected to provide.

The essay is written in a clear style that presents some complex ideas from
literary theory in a very accessible fashion, although I occasionally found
the essay didn’t lead the reader through the argument in a well-structured
way, and therefore appeared to leap to conclusions as if they were
“obvious”. (For instance, I found the section on the relative number of
fanfic stories written about different works to be a little muddled in its
exposition of a very valid point.) However, these were minor flaws in an
otherwise excellent presentation.

I was also interested to see how fans apparently take quite different things
at a personal level from the books. I believe (if I have understood
correctly) that I differ from Fionnabhair Nic Ailil in my response to
Tolkien’s works: their universality and humanity speak strongly to me of the
human condition, and I see it as more than just a “rattling good yarn”.
Perhaps my reaction comes from the same source as my tendency in my own
fanfic to write very character-driven pieces extrapolated from the little
characterisation that Tolkien does give us.

In short, this was an essay that made me reflect more deeply on my own
reading, writing, and enjoyment of Tolkien -- and, as such, I feel this
essay succeeded admirably in its goals.
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Title: In Defense of Denethor: A Closer Look at Peter Jackson’s
Misrepresentation · Author: Cadiliniel · Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 991
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-09-23 16:19:01
In this essay, Cadiliniel has provided a very personal and yet considered
response to the characterisation of Denethor in the movies. The essay does a
good job of comparing and contrasting how the same specific material is used
in book and movies. It works hard to acknowledge the limitations of film as
a medium and discusses the impact of those limitations on portraying
characters such as Denethor. I also feel it makes a valiant effort to
examine fairly the choices of the directing-producing-writing triumvirate.

While the style of this essay is less polished than some of the other pieces
in this category, creating a more intimate and personal feel, I very much
enjoyed reading Cadiliniel’s thoughts. Throughout, I had moments of
recognition and agreement with the analysis. I too hate how the movies
demeaned a complex character with many admirable qualities as well as
dislikable ones, and I can only explain the strange choices in presenting
most of the Gondor material by concluding that the moviemakers just didn’t
“get” Gondor. And I found Cadiliniel’s suggestions for how the moviemakiers
might have handled things more effectively to be intelligent and perceptive.
Good work!
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Title: Blood and Warm Blankets · Author: Kielle · Genres: Humor: Metafic ·
ID: 451
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-23 16:48:32
Cracking dialogue, character insight, and an affectionate but painfully
incisive analysis of some of the LoTR slashdom's favourite preoccupations
and their canonical (and practical) unlikelihood - Kielle did it again.

The intercultural digs between Faramir and Eomer about literacy are nicely
observed as is their joint fear of incurring Eowyn's wrath. It's difficult
to point to the "best lines" as the piece is one long run of hilarious
one-liners - the first time I read this it took me a long, long time to
unpeel the mental image of Eomer "wrapped.. in a map of Gondor and sprawled
out across the strategy desk in [Aragorn's] tent" from the inside of my
eyelids. And the comic timing on the Gimli-Legolas revelation is perfect.

I'm so sad, now, to think she'll never make us laugh with a new piece again.
But this one will be often re-read, and treasured.
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Title: Smiting Ruin · Author: Thundera Tiger · Genres: Movie-verse · ID: 195
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-23 17:03:59
Hee. Yes, that particular bit of movie-verse mangling annoyed me too, and
this was a nifty little bit of humour playing with it. The interplay between
the characters is what brings it to life - Legolas and Gimli needling each
other, Aragorn's musing (poor old Glorfindel!) and Gandalf's eventual
exasperation with the lot of them.
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Title: The Day After · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 197
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-23 17:04:22
Here's an interesting spin on the effects - on both Elf and Dwarf - of Gimli
and Legolas's long friendship. I wasn't sure initially whether the focus on
time could be made to work, but the use of the battle metaphor to illustrate
the difference between living-in-the-moment and the long dragging out of the
"day after" brought it off. As always with Thundera, there are deft, funny
one-liners that bring out so much character - "Legolas was born into a
family that could crumble Erebor with a dark look" - but also poignancy, as
Gimli reflects on how his friendship with the Elf has separated both of them
from "self and kin".
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Title: Back to the Valley · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places: Elves ·
ID: 590
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-23 17:04:40
This is such a clever use of what I'd always thought of as a just downright
annoying bit of fluff from The Hobbit; I shall never look on the song in
quite the same way again. It makes sense that Elves would be particularly
good at the time-honoured prisoner's technique of "going to another place"
mentally to avoid cracking under torture. This one's use of the song to hold
on to the only fragments of his shattered self he has left, and to protect
them and those he knows he must have loved from the brutal assaults of the
Forces of Darkness (TM) is powerfully evoked and very moving.
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Title: Beyond This World · Author: Thundera Tiger · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Final Partings · ID: 32
Reviewer: Azalais · 2005-09-23 17:06:55
This poses, and in the end powerfully answers, the usually unspoken
question: Gimli followed Legolas to the Undying Lands, but what would happen
when Gimli in turn went where Legolas couldn't follow? I've seen various
fics dealing with the grieving Legolas and how he recovers his hope, but
this is an original and fittingly symmetrical answer to the question. Good
use of the Ringbearers, and evocative descriptions of Valinor, as well as
carefully-handled emotion which manages not to slip over into self-indulgent
angst.
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Title: Pitfalls of the Palantir · Author: Haleth · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 1296
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-23 19:37:24
"Pitfalls of the Palantir" is an absolutely delightful, creative, unique,
and humorous story, one that I go back to and re-read whenever I need a dose
of good cheer.

The story line is that two original characters are traveling together in the
early Fourth Age, an Elf (male), and a Man (female)... They are on a quest
to find a palantír that has resurfaced and return it to its proper owner
(King Elessar) -- but they really do not understand each other due to many
cultural and personality differences. That sounds so dry, but Haleth puts
them together in such unique situations with such humorous overtones, that I
often laugh out loud. The underlying unresolved sexual tension is
extraordinary - Haleth writes it with such a deft hand, that I want to shake
her characters and yell: "Wake up! You both love each other!"

And the situations are, well, unique. The story begins with a walrus in the
Bay of Forochel finding what it believes to be a very big, hard-shelled
clam... one of the palantíri lost when Arvedui, the last king of
Arthedain/Arnor, died in a shipwreck. That is a good example of how Haleth
takes canon and skillfully weaves in her own individual creativity in a
fascinating, and compelling blend.

One of my favorite scenes is where the woman entertains the Elf with some
slightly disreputable songs tainting the reputations of some long-lost lords
of Númenor; the Elf, suffering from the ennui of immortality, is thrilled --
apparently Elves don't often sing songs skewering petty lords.... so he
learns from her, to his joy, that there truly is something new under the
sun.

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Title: Dolor Meus · Author: Werecat · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 897
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-23 19:42:18
I really enjoyed this plausible alternate-universe story. The author's take
on Radagast and Maglor is both fascinating and creative. I especially enjoy
the Tolkien canon that is interwoven so skillfully into the fabric of the
story; the author seems to be very respectful of Tolkien's works.

Recasting Radagast as St. Francis of Assisi is a brilliant idea. And the
magic of Maglor's singing is so clearly shown -- by the hush of the animals,
and Father Connor's worry that his heart would stop so that "crude sound
will not offend the silver of his voice."

The story pulled me in emotionally -- I was profoundly saddened by Maglor's
grief, and felt a tremendous surge of hope when Radagast said that Círdan
was there to sail him home.

The characterization of Father Francis as humble, modest, and full of mercy
for all of Ilúvatar's creations seems just right to me, and I enjoyed the
glimpse of the thoughts of the animals, rejoicing at his blessing. Maglor
does indeed seem broken by his failed attempt to sail, but the description
of his singing warms my spirit. And Friar Connor's protectiveness of the
person who sought refuge in his abbey is satisfying, as well as his awe at
Maglor's singing.

I have just now truly enjoyed the privilege of re-reading this beautiful
story for this review. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, Werecat!

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Title: Trust to Hope · Author: Novedhelion · Genres: Romance · ID: 1294
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-23 19:43:59
This story follows Lothíriel and Éomer as they meet and fall in love,
overcoming much adversity in the process. Lothíriel is a wild, untamed
princess, who escapes Dol Amroth and travels Rohan, where she meets
Éomer....

The situation is somewhat improbable, in the sense of the unexpected
behavior of a daughter of a Prince, but I so very much enjoyed the
characterizations of Lothíriel and Éomer, and a whole host of other
characters, canon and not, villain and saint. I read this story as it was
being posted, and really looked forward to finding out how -- or whether --
each problem situation was going to be solved. The intricacies of the story
line kept me involved and fascinated and anticipating the next chapter
throughout, which is the mark of a skillful storyteller. Nice work!

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Title: Trust to Hope, Book Two · Author: Novedhelion · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Incomplete · ID: 1295
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-23 19:45:08
The adventures of Lothíriel and Éomer, after marriage. But, the wicked
author teased us for several chapters before the wedding night! LOL!

I enjoy reading about their interactions, and how they approach adversity --
for there is apparently a skeleton in Éomer's closet (though he can't
remember it... which is telling) that might threaten the position of their
future heir. But the story hasn't been updated for a while; I'd really like
to see it continue.

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Title: Toy Story · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette
· ID: 411
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-23 21:08:55
I must have read this story a dozen times, all told -- firs tin beta, then
when it was first put up on the members-only side of HASA, then in HASA
public, and finally from these awards. It's one of those stories that I read
every time I see its title somewhere, it's just that good. And the truly
amazing thing is, it's a bit like Tolkien in that every time I read it
something else jumps out at me.

What I noticed this time were the last few paragraphs, after Aragorn leaves.
The symbolism of the repairing of the Arathorn toy soldier really had a
really strong layer of symbolism to it. For those who have read some of
Gwynnyd's other stories you'll know that in Gwynnyd!verse Aragorn is raised
to believe he is the bastard son of Arathorn. Which is a definite hit to
Aragorn's legacy, but because of the way that everyone especially Gilraen
apparently talked about Aragorn's unnamed father with such respect, that
legacy will be able to be repaired at least in the eyes of those people that
need to know. And that counts. Also in this paragraph there's some really
nice foreshadowing, such as the idea that of course Aragorn will have a son
soon who will be fostered in Imladris.

Oh, and the way Aragorn goes around introeducing himself to the household
staff... that made me laugh out loud. Of course, the way he rattles that off
to Arwen in the appendices' version of what happens the next day, he *would*
have been practising!
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Title: Master Gamgee of Bag End · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Fourth Age · ID: 952
Reviewer: Inkling · 2005-09-23 23:09:36
Voices from the past and somber lullabies are used to good effect in this
gentle meditation on post-Quest remembrance and recovery. Sam's pain and
Rosie's response are sensitively portrayed.
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Title: Reflections in the Dark · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 1315
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-24 04:45:11
First of all, let's establish one important fact that might, er, color my
impression of this story: I am claustrophobic. Very claustrophobic, in fact.
And I'm not entirely sure what achluophobia is, but I suspect I have it. Not
that I'm a hypochondriac, necessarily, but if it has anything to do with
enclosed spaces....

Okay, now that the standard disclosures are dispensed with: this story
scared the heck out of me. My heart was pounding throughout the first half,
and my palms became sweaty. The story is obviously far too well-written for
the good of my health. ;-)

I think it's truly telling -- and a very sympathetic portrayal of the Dwarf
-- that Gimli's thoughts are mostly about Legolas, and his concern that
Legolas might have been injured or killed. This while Gimli himself lies
critically injured, losing blood, trapped, and alone. I really enjoyed his
revelations to himself about how he just might be ever-so-slightly
influenced by his flighty friend, just as Glóin had warned. And, that he
isn't repelled by that thought, but reflects with satisfaction how he has
influenced his friend.

I also enjoyed the glimpses of Gimli's dwarven inventiveness, like his plan
to heat parts of Aglarond. So quintessentially dwarvish!

Gimli's realization, after he finally awakes, of just how terribly Legolas
was worried about him, is very well-written. I also enjoyed the humorous bit
with Beregond blunting Legolas's intensity a bit, and winking at Gimli.

But I think the part of this story that touched my heart the most was
Gimli's revelation that, of all the things he would miss, it was his
friend's singing that was most important to him; and his gift to Legolas at
the end: asking him to sing, to help Legolas find something to do and to let
him know how much his presence meant to Gimli.

This story left me with heartwarming tears in my eyes; it is one that I
treasure and re-read often.

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Title: Musings by Torchlight · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 1316
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-24 04:47:08
So Legolas, when he is truly, truly, frightened, redirects his energy to
becoming angry instead? LOL! And, in the interminable time it took to find
Gimli, he decided that caves were obviously the fault of the dwarves...
despite having been raised in one! Panic does strange things to your thought
processes...

That was an interesting observation, that Legolas' perception of time was
changing, because of the awareness of his best friend's finite length of
life.

It must be a very helpless feeling indeed for Legolas, a strong warrior with
many centuries of experience, to surrender responsibility for his safety to
the dwarf when they are underground. I enjoyed Legolas' reflections on how
the dwarf had subtly taken good care of him when he visited him at Aglarond
-- making sure he was never alone, escorting him to his quarters.

I thought it especially telling that Legolas wished to tend to the dwarf by
himself and in privacy; both because he respected his friend's wish not to
appear weak, but also because of a certain innate possessiveness on Legolas'
part. No matter how distasteful the task, or how frightened (and thus angry)
Legolas was, he wanted to see to Gimli's injuries by himself.

This story, like its companion, "Reflections in the Dark", left me with
tears in my eyes for the profound friendship shared between these two. The
two stories together are ones that I re-read at times -- something that I do
with less than a handful of stories.

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Title: A Very Dark, Very Wet, and Very Miserable Morning · Author: Thundera
Tiger · Genres: Humor · ID: 592
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-24 04:56:05
Oh,Thundera, this is just too funny. The Black Númenóreans simply can't get
good help nowadays.... I have images of Orcs running around with buckets and
mops instead of scimitars and axes....

It puts real-life bosses I have had into perspective.

And how embarrassing it must be for any self-respecting torture-master to be
caught with seagulls in his dungeon -- not to mention, captive Elves
laughing at you.

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Title: Lifeless · Author: Oakenshield · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Drabble · ID: 653
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-24 05:20:10
Interesting use of parallel structures.
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Title: Sin · Author: Oakenshield · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 652
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-09-24 05:22:22
Interesting view of obsession
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Title: Rohirrim Grey · Author: sulriel · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 143
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-09-24 08:24:02
This is ABSOLUTELY amazing!! a Fantastic wonderful resourse for writers
whether they be writing in the fan fiction genre or "gasp" original fiction.
The author OBVIOUSLY knows what she is talking about. First hand knowledge,
not just "book learning" A wealth of information in this authors head that I
will certainly pluck if a horse ever wander's into one of my stories. A
"MUST BOOKMARK" article for ANY writer!
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Title: Coming Home · Author: SilverMoonLady · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Romance · ID: 1071
Reviewer: Space Weavil · 2005-09-24 08:29:58
I would never have believed that I could be converted to liking Hobbit fic,
but this story has most certainly done that. Although I know nothing about
hobbit canon, Silver Moon Lady has crafted her characters and settings so
wonderfully that I can empathise fully with every situation. I can truly
imagine how hard it would have been for the hobbits to return to the Shire
after going through so much, and my heart simply breaks for Merry in this
story. Absolutely wonderful.
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Title: Travel Times in Middle-earth · Author: sulriel · Genres: Non-Fiction
· ID: 144
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-09-24 08:40:20
Once again I'm utterly amazed. The work that must have been put into
compiling all of this information is staggering. And to think that she is
sharing all of this wonderful information with us for FREE!! Holy cow! A
generous type person who obviously LOVES her horses. I have definately book
marked this article for future use, and I suggest every one who writes the
silly genre we all love to do the same. You never know when your characters
will go "a-traveling" Bravo! Sulriel!! Another job VEry well done.

I'm not sure if I brough my towel though. . Oh dear. (poor Eirien, so
clueless at times)
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Title: Ghost Fires · Author: mir_noldoris · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Feanor and Sons · ID: 34
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-09-24 11:07:06
What an incredible story to read. Ëarmírë/Mir-noldoris paints a beautiful
picture of Fëanor’s son, every one gets a mention when Fingon pours out his
soul to a letter meant for Maedhros. The prose is delicate, and the author
writes the emotions with care. There is pride, defeat, and love for a
kinsman, acknowledgement, and regret in there. I love the manner how Ëarmírë
lifts out events, characters. It is emotional and yet soldierly, manly even,
but it leaves me wondering why Maedhros would burn the letter, does he not
want to see the truth in Fingon’s words, or is he afraid that the letter
falls in the wrong hands. As a reader, we cannot find out what Maedhros
exactly thinks of it, which fits the chosen style perfectly, or as a
strategic elf as Maedhros might reason: the letter might fall in the wrong
hands. A beautiful story Ëarmírë, it was an engaging read.
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Title: Alqualonde · Author: Joan Milligan · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Feanor and Sons · ID: 36
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-09-24 11:13:52
A bard speaks. And he uses Joan Milligan for it. For me the pointer was not
important and I ignored it. Why? Because Maglor speaks for himself. Through
the eyes of the bard you will hear what once was, how things might have been
and what will be. When I read the author’s notes, it makes me smile to read
that the story turned out different then the author expected. But the story
wants to tell itself, show the reader, through Maglor’s perspective that
even in chaos there is beauty and that the Teleri of Alqualonde will not be
forgotten because of their fearless defenders. A great story Joan, I enjoyed
this gem a lot!
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Title: The Journey · Author: Batsojopo · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Incomplete · ID: 1346
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-24 13:22:09
This is one of those stories that I never thought I would like. If I didn't
know the author already I might not have given it a second read. It's a
novel-length WIP about Haldir that only intersects with canon events well
after it has started. Movieverse canon at that. Oh, yes, and it has an OFC.
Yet for some reason I read, and I liked.

First it has some interesting exploration about prejudices between the
different types of Elves. The OFC Arianel is the daughter of some very
prideful Noldorin elves, and her father won't even let her pass through
Rivendell because Elrond is a half-elf. Because of this Arianel is wounded,
her party massacred, and she ends up in Rivendell anyway. Where we meet lots
of fascinating original and canon characters, the most impressive probably
being Estel on the canon side and Tiniwen on the original side. Tiniwen
especially was like a breath of fresh air. Eventually Arianel passes into
Lothlorien, where we get more interesting views, this time of an elven realm
in decline.

I think my favourite part of this story is how I've seen the author grow in
the course of writing it. I first started betaing for Batsojopo's Star Wars
stories over a year ago, and it's amazing how well her writing skills have
developed. Her plots are always imaginative, but in the later chapters of
this one we see how her writing style has grown by leaps and bounds.

All in all a good tale. Can't wait to see it finished.
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Title: To Brave Ulmo, in Aman · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 962
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:45:01
It strikes me as very appropriate that the mariners of Beleriand and Dol
Amroth would choose these two Maiar as a subject for their drinking songs.
This might be a bit solemn for a drinking song, but I can definitely see
them using it to start out the night.
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Title: Lindë Nerdanelo · Author: Nerdanel · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 424
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:45:30
I like the progression and the almost rambling tone of these sonnets.
There's clearly a line of remembrance here and an order to it, but Nerdanel
keeps coming back to herself in the end. It's a very dark picture of someone
who feels as though she has lost everything, and it's told very well.
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Title: The Tale of Isildur · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 550
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:45:54
Brilliant style mimicry! I would have been completely lost attempting
something like this, especially anything out of the Canterbury Tales. But
Tanaqui manages to do it and also to make it accessible. Good job in keeping
the rhythm consistent throughout, especially with some odd words to work
with. Very nice.
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Title: Alqualonde · Author: Aramel · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry ·
ID: 135
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:46:49
Great poem! The rhyme scheme gave the rhythm greater flow, and it took on an
almost sing-song quality. The imagery contributed to this, and I love the
continual references to the sea. It makes the waters a very clear and
defining characteristic of Alqualonde.
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Title: The Dead City · Author: Wild Iris · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 606
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:47:30
I like the idea that the citadel believes there is still something
remaining. That perhaps not all is lost, though the city now belongs to the
wilds with the ivy and the snow. After all, what does a city care for gold
and fine tapestries? It's still robed and covered, and it is waiting for a
master because none now walk its streets. Very interesting little poem.
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Title: The Mariner and His Wife · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 543
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:48:11
I like the idea that Faramir would sing of explorers who were often away
from home. And of course they would be Numenorean king-type explorers
because that's just the kind of guy that Faramir was. Very nice ballad here
with a good lyrical feel that cuts off exactly when it should.
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Title: The City of Stone · Author: Elvenesse · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 717
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:48:42
Nice contrast between the two poems. There's definitely a change in Aredhel,
but some things remain the same. I like her ability to live in what seems to
be a contradiction. First it was light and dark, and now it is hate and
love. But the latter is much more pronounced in the second poem, and it
keeps the themes of light and dark, too.
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Title: Alchemy · Author: Branwyn · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry ·
ID: 168
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:49:30
Would that all chemistry lessons could be so lyrical! Seriously, though, I
liked the way you started out with the basic elements and then worked them
back into fire. The idea of Feanor being a spirit of fire and fire being so
essential to his work in the forge makes for some interesting connections.
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Title: Fëanor · Author: Joan Milligan · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry
· ID: 439
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:50:45
It's always fascinating to wiggle into Feanor's thoughts, and this poem was
no exception. I found his lack of expectations interesting. He's going to
Middle-earth for one reason and one reason alone. He doesn't think to find
hope or light there, only death. It's a profound statement on just how
earnestly he took his oath and how powerfully it bound him.
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Title: Seeking West · Author: Elvenesse · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 718
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:51:41
I really like the feeling of despeartion in this poem. Earendil talks about
the evil behind him and then he talks about how the way is barred before
him. No going back and no going forward. It's hopeless, and there's a real
sense of that in the imagery of fire and blight.
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Title: The Death of Glaurung · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 533
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:54:42
You know, there is such a thing as a morbid drunk and I think that's what we
might have here. Faramir impresses me as a man who could become moody when
served with a bit too much alcohol, so why not have him sing a moody song
about Turin? Nice rhythm and very concise, which is what is needed in a
drinking song. The key elements of the story were there, but they were
broken down and shortened to fit the song.
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Title: Sirion · Author: Wild Iris · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry ·
ID: 607
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 13:59:51
There's such a feeling of weariness about this poem. I like the repeated
lines about giving the dead to the sea. It almost feels as though the only
thing simple anymore are the dead. Life has become too burdensome to truly
contemplate, and the narrators keep coming back to the fact that it was so
easy to give the dead to the sea. Easy and mind-numbing . One of those
instances in which you can't think. You can only act. And the images of
water as spear points seem to emphasize this. These simple waters are not
for the living. They can't go there yet, and so they wander elsewhere to
seek their water. Beautiful imagery and great layers with only a few words.
Very evocative.
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Title: Haudh-en-Elleth · Author: Ellisande · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 712
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:00:42
The ending lines of this poem were the real clincher for me, but it was
supported by the way the poem built to it. Turin starts out remembering
Finduilas and gradually begins to join his memories of her with grief until
finally at the end it's all about the shadows blacks. Very steady
progression that goes almost unnoticed by the reader due to a very lyrical
rhythm and rhyme. Nicely done.
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Title: Melyanna · Author: Finch · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID:
729
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:01:19
The sense of loss comes across very clearly by the end of this poem, and
it's not just the fact that Melian has lost Thingol. She's lost her reason
for remaining in Doriath. Thingol was her tie to the world of the elves, and
when he turned toward another light, that tie was broken. The reasons for
Melian's departure are very evident in this poem and it makes it easy to see
just how devastating the Silmarils were to all who had anything to do with
them.
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Title: Two Drabbles: Tar-Miriel and the Waves · Author: Ainaechoiriel ·
Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 107
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:07:02
Even thought Tar-Miriel watched the waves too long, I suspect it was
satisfying to see her husband's defeat. At least she had that much. I really
liked the words about Meneltarma, too. Once they prayed and then they
burned. Good stuff.
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Title: Good welcome they found · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 1371
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:07:30
Interesting thoughts from Cirdan. I'm not sure Numenor's problems can be
attributed to him, but it's definitely an intriguing What If scenario. What
if the Numenoreans hadn't been so good at sailing? Great question, and great
musings from Cirdan.
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Title: Faithful · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble ·
ID: 1374
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:07:56
Isildur lives! I liked this drabble for its focus on hope and on Anarion,
who must have been worried out of his mind waiting for some sign that
Isildur would live and that his venture would not have been a vain one. Good
gap-filler for Isildur's waking.
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Title: Beyond Reach · Author: Elvenesse · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Drabble · ID: 327
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:08:36
Elwing's reasoning becomes a bit clearer with this drabble. She's giving up
her sons to save them because she knows that the Feanorians will come
regardless. Good gap-filler and explanation for why Elwing chose to fling
herself into the Sea.
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Title: What can be saved · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Drabble · ID: 1360
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:09:21
I really liked the way the rocking and crashing of the waves affected the
ships in this drabble. You can visualize the sea throwing the boats of the
Faithful this way and that. But I love how in the end, it came down to the
cargo that Isildur was carrying and how it represented a new beginning for
them all. The message of hope was very clear.
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Title: Grace · Author: Dwimordene · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble ·
ID: 242
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:11:11
I liked this very much. The story of Thingol and Melian has always been
fascinating for me, and I loved seeing how Melian became connected to her
form through motherhood. I really liked the idea that she had shaped many
things but only now begins to understand the weight of those things beyond
her will to shape them. Fascinating thing, motherhood, and fascinating
exploration of it through a drabble.
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Title: Long Live the King · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 420
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:11:43
I've often wondered if Elrond was with Elros when he died. He is in this
drabble, and it's a very quiet, touching moment between the two. I like the
fact that it's told from the perspective of an outside observer, because I'm
not sure that writing would be able to do justice to all of Elrond's
thoughts had it been told from his perspective. Good choice of POV and good
writing.
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Title: High King and Halfling · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 581
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:12:15
I can definitely see this happening. Theoden of Rohan was almost subjected
to it when he asked Merry and Pippin about pipe-weed. It's a brilliant idea,
and a hilarious one, too: the hobbits got the Shire by pestering Argeleb II.
That strikes me as very funny and also very possible. I can just see Marcho
and Blanco calmly explaining their request over and over while Argeleb keeps
wishing he could dismiss the lot of them and go do something else. Great
drabble!
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Title: Defiance · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble ·
ID: 1355
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:23:15
This drabble was almost painful to read. I loved Hurin's valiance and I
loved his relentless hope that day would come and that his wife and children
would be safe. His hopes for his son and his wife were almost devastating,
though, because we know what became of Turin and Nienor. In many ways, Hurin
is right. His son will be powerful and will do great things. but there's so
much tragedy wrapped up in the tale, too, that it hurts to see Hurin's hopes
and know what will happen in the end. Great drabble.
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Title: Forsaken Kin · Author: Meril · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble
· ID: 483
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:25:04
Finarfin is among my favorite characters in the Silmarillion, even though
little is said of him. And I loved this drabble, which explored a part of
his reason for turning back. I love the grief and how he's trying to put it
aside as he makes his way home, and I love the distance that he sees in his
wife's eyes and how he knows she would have followed for vengeance's sake.
Definitely a tumultuous time, and thank goodness that Finarfin kept his head
enough to see where it was all going to lead if he didn't turn around.
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Title: Not Wholly Unwilling · Author: picara · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Drabble · ID: 1336
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:29:41
Dark and definitely unnerving. The phrase "not wholly unwilling" is such an
interesting expression when used to describe Eol and Aredhel. There's so
much more to that relationship than is expressed in the Silmarillion, and I
love the way it's explored here. She finds him and submits out of confused
vulnerability, and from that comes a union that is not exactly voluntary,
but neither is it forced. I love the almost bewildered tone of the drabble
as it relates just how lost Aredhel feels, and then it becomes more certain
toward the end when Eol takes control. Very good drabble. It gave me
shivers.
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Title: Ashes and the Flame · Author: Ariel · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Fourth Age · ID: 677
Reviewer: Inkling · 2005-09-24 14:30:46
Heartfelt emotions, graceful prose, and intriguing meditations on mortality
combine to make this a truly exceptional story. Aragorn's love for his wife
and his friend, his wrenching grief and sense of loss, his relentless guilt,
are rendered with such a powerful immediacy as to seem painfully real...I
challenge anyone to maintain a sense of detachment while reading it!

The idea of mortality as a flame representing the Secondborn's legacy to the
world is beautifully expressed, as is the idea that with the passing of
Frodo's flame the world had lost something precious and irreplaceable. For
all those who mourn this passing, the story's resolution provides a lovely,
wistful note of comfort.

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Title: Captive of Fate · Author: Ithilwen · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Feanor and Sons · ID: 1076
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:34:52
Of everyone in Tolkien's writing, Maedhros probably has the best claim to
long periods of introspection. Really, what else was there to do when he was
hanging by his wrist? So this story feels very natural and very appropriate.
I like the direction his thoughts take, and I enjoyed seeing his perspective
on the first kinslaying. It put me in mind of my title, and I had to wonder
just how much control over his own fate Maedhros had in the beginning. And
how did this later shape him? Good musings, and I enjoyed the directions his
thoughts wandered. They were guided but also rambling, and for an elf like
Maedhros, that strikes me as exactly right. Well written!
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Title: House of Dust and Memory · Author: Itarille · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 523
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:35:33
I love the force of the setting in this story. The house practically drives
the characters as well as the pace, the mood, and the action. It becomes a
character in its own right, and I think that's perhaps one of the best ways
to describe Indis's decline. It's difficult to see it in her because she's
got the perspective, but it's easy to see it in the house. It's probably
easier to visualize that way, too. And Nerdanel's entrance is powerful.
She's sharp and brisk, like the slap of cold air. It brings an immediate
change to the house, even if she does break down, and the change is felt
throughout the rest of the story. Nice, tight writing and brilliant
narrative description.
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Title: He Who Laughs · Author: Altariel · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
First Age · ID: 398
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:35:55
Turin's confusion and frustration are portrayed so well in this story. No
matter what he does, it comes to ruin, but he really can't choose to do
nothing. I like the way that laughter and mourning are drawn together, and
when he finally laughs in the end, a real laugh, it brings a very satisfying
sense of closure. And then it's time to wait. Great use of conflicting
emotions and themes.
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Title: Voices in the Wilderness · Author: Ithilwen · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 1018
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:36:54
Probably one of the most balanced views on Feanor's banishment. I love the
fact that we got voices from all angles, and each one was told convincingly
and persuasively. I don't usually find myself sympathizing with Feanor, but
I could here. Not completely, but I could understand better what had
happened to him and how it might have affected him. And I think part of that
has to do with the fact that almost all sides of the story were told:
Finwe's, Fingolfin's, Feanor's, Maedhros's, etc. Because it was such a
balanced look and because it made no effort to simplify a very complicated
situation, I could believe Feanor's thoughts and I could take them
seriously.
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Title: Shards of Memory · Author: Ellisande · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Gondolin · ID: 1007
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:38:11
I sometimes shy away from Túrin stories because there is so much angst
caught up in them that once in a while, that’s all they become. But then I
come across stories like this that remind me of how angst is supposed to be
done. There’s a lyrical flow to the narrative, and I love the snapshot
progression of Finduilas’s thoughts. That’s another thing that really helped
this story. It’s told from a perspective we don’t normally see, and the
snapshot idea makes her decline very visible to the point where captivity
with orcs doesn’t seem to be a great burden. Great mood work and brilliant
prose. Almost poetic.
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Title: The Riders from Erech · Author: Acacea · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 325
Reviewer: nerwen_calaelen · 2005-09-24 14:39:16
A good gapfiller. It takes a scene recounted second hand in the book and
looks at it from a different perspecitive.
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Title: Legacy · Author: Acacea · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 282
Reviewer: nerwen_calaelen · 2005-09-24 14:40:06
A lovely tale. I like the contrasts between Faramir's memories and his
current interactions with his famly. The differences show very well, the
differences in the two families. You have characterised everyone well and it
is a cleverly told tale. It is nice to see scenes of Faramir being happy.
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Title: A Choice Once Made · Author: Celandine Brandybuck · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 182
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:40:18
I loved the way Tar-Miriel was characterized in this story, and I love even
more the fact that she acknowledged her own part in Numenor's downfall. She
was indeed proud, and by the end, she was wise enough to see where this
pride had led her. Her resolve to start again and to cnotest Ar-Pharazon's
rule was bittersweet, because we all know what will happen in the end.
There's no chance to see if she succeeds or not. But be that as it may, it
was good to see her regain some of her fire and her confidence from before.
That helped. And it was good to see her helping Elendil as he readied the
Faithful. Good closure for Tar-Miriel, and good summary on how her life led
her to this.
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Title: Shadow · Author: Celebsul · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age ·
ID: 775
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:41:13
Powerful vignette! For me, one of the most interesting concepts in Tolkien's
work is the idea that victory is never absolute and it always comes with a
price. The closing words of this story seemed to invoke that as the elf
realizes that Morgoth's taint remains and will never truly be overcome. The
idea that mercy can exist even without victory is a great one, and I love
that such clarity of thought can be brought about by a small boy on the edge
of ruin. Sometimes it's the little things that draw attention rather than
the giant mezmerizing Valar bringing down Morgoth.
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Title: Foreshadowing · Author: Zimraphel · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Second Age · ID: 610
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:44:40
The story is aptly named, because there's a wealth of foreshadowing going
on. Inziladun hints at quite a few things, but I think he might be holding
back on many more. It sounded to me as though he was denying what he had
seen when he talked about Ar-Pharazon's wife. Foresight would probably be a
very bittersweet gift, especially at this point in Numenor's history. I like
the way Ar-Pharazon was characterized as a child, and I like the contrast he
makes with his cousin. They're very different, and I like how their
differences feed into the foreshadowing that Inziladun is even now trying to
avoid.
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Title: The Song of the Rock · Author: Joan Milligan · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 1084
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:45:47
Ouch! Okay, I’ll admit that I had ample warning about the ending. The
summary all but spelled it out. But even so, I wasn’t quite prepared for it.
I even sensed it coming. Turgon’s words about the city lasting, about
immortality, and about how it had become a memory of Tirion set it up
perfectly. And still I had to wince and turn away, just as promised, with
that last line. The foreshadowing and the irony were powerful! Poor Tuor.
Poor Turgon, too, but my sympathies are more firmly with Tuor, especially
after that speech. His news isn’t going to be received gladly.
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Title: Alqualonde · Author: Joan Milligan · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Feanor and Sons · ID: 36
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:46:54
Perhaps one of the most unique takes on the first kinslaying I've ever seen.
Maglor does have a very interesting point: Alqualonde will now be remembered
as the city that rose against the kinslayers. It might not have been
remembered otherwise. And amidst all the horror, there's
something...intriguing about that. I'm not sure I would go so far as to call
it beauty, but it's a perspective that's definitely worth investigating.
Truly a fascinating view of the entire thing, and as a bard, I can see
Maglor finding beauty in the horror. Very appropriate, and very ingenius.
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Title: Wreath of Steel and Silver · Author: Kielle · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 454
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:47:20
Fantastic take on Galadriel's mirror. I like the idea of the reflection
reaching back to you, and I love the idea that a reflection cannot lie. Very
powerful imagery there, and very powerful imagery in what Galadriel
remembers. The focus on blood was especially good, and I love the open-ended
conclusion. So does Galadriel forgive herself? Or will this haunt her still?
For my part, I'm inclined toward the latter. She's the kind of person to
hold onto things, whether they be grudges, Rings, or guilt.
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Title: Banners in the Wind · Author: Starlight · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 519
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:49:06
There's so much emotion crammed into such a short story. I love the imagery
of all the banners and how they remind Elrond of his father and of older
days. The memories are only referenced briefly, but they're vivid, and with
the impact they had on history, they've a very solid presence in this story.
And they lead to Elrond himself, who is glad to see this particular day.
Great ideas on fate and key moments in life.
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Title: To Look Upon It Once · Author: Noldo · Books/Time: The Silmarillion ·
ID: 1023
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:49:28
Definitely intriguing. If a mortal were to find the Straight Paths, what
would he see? I'm not sure mortal eyes would be ready for something like
Taniquetil, but perhaps to look upon as a last sight... Fascinating concept,
and very good narrative voice with which to explore it. Nice and subdued.
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Title: Nimloth's Grace · Author: Rhapsody · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Second Age · ID: 434
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:49:50
Isildur is a sneaky one. I like this little tale of how he took Nimloth's
fruit. My favorite moment was when Amandil and Elendur stormed into the
court demanding to know why they hadn't been notified of the sentencing.
There was a wonderful amount of flourish in that, and I think it was a very
succesful way of diverting attention from the couple who helped Isildur make
off with the fruit. Definitely a fun moment.
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Title: Cunning Gold · Author: Lyllyn · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Gondolin · ID: 28
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:50:21
Very, very dark. For as short as this vignette was, it packed a grim punch.
The idea that Glorfindel is deliberately allowing his warriors to laugh
because he cannot offer them victory is a sobering notion, and the final
lines in which he speaks of his smile and his life not lasting the day
really capped it off well. The remembered moments from the Battle of
Unnumbered Tears were also a nice framework to setup the feeling of futility
and hopelessness echoed in the end. Good mood work and nice power in the
end.
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Title: History Lessons · Author: Nilmandra · Books/Time: The Silmarillion ·
ID: 1056
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:51:51
The History Lessons series are some of the most remarkable and comprehensive
works on the Silmarillion available. Nilmandra starts off with a strong
framing story (the difficulty in getting Elladan and Elrohir to pay
attention to their heritage) and then the story is launched into the past
with those who know it best, such as Glorfindel, eventually Elrond, and
others. And not only does this make the First Age easy and accessible for
Elladan and Elrohir, but it makes it easy and accessible for the readers,
too. And Nilmandra does a wonderful job of balancing the actions in the
framing story with the actions of the "history lessons," which become fully
realized stories in their own right complete with separate
characterizations, developments, plot, etc. Truly a remarkable series
invested with hours of care and research and told beautifully in both the
past and the present.
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Title: What his Heart Spoke · Author: LKK · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Second Age · ID: 1026
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:52:24
I loved the way Thranduil was portrayed in this story, but even more than
that, I loved the portrayal of his mother. This was such a great moment
between mother and son, and at times, it felt like Oropher was also there.
The ending of the Second Age was such an uncertain end, especially since the
Ring was not destroyed, so it feels good to find a story that carries more
closure. This is a far more satisfying end to an Age, with Nethwen going off
to the West to wait for Oropher.
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Title: The Barrenness of Stone · Author: Lyllyn · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 468
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:53:14
Perhaps one of the best things about this story is that I became completely
taken in by this litle girl and never found out her name. The funny thing
was, I didn't feel that I needed her name. Her personality was very clear
through her actions, her thoughts, and her words with Thorondor. Thorondor
himself was fantastic, and I love the gravity and the depth he was given. He
truly comes across as a servant of Manwe. The quick glimpses of the
keen-eyed golden captain (go Glorfindel) were also very much appreciated.
The little things that tied into this story anchored it to canon events very
nicely and gave it additional depth. Well done.
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Title: By Light Beguiled · Author: AfterEver · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
First Age · ID: 445
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:55:35
I don't think I've ever seen the Silmaril used so well in a story. It was
subtle, creeping in slowly until it was there and all but impossible to
remove. Earendil's distress over it was brilliant, and I loved Cirdan's
suspicions. The characterization for those two was strong and believable.
Elwing was also well characterized, and the relationship between the three
was amazing. In particular, I loved the initial banter between Earendil and
Cirdan, and I love how it changed as the story progressed. It diminished as
events became more dire and it was as much a measure of the severity of
their situation as any threats from Maedhros or warnings from the Silmaril.
The invasion was done extremely well, and I like that it was told through a
blurred flashback from Elwing's perspective. It felt that much more rushed
and uncertain. Great moods and great characterizations all around.
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Title: Ernil i Duremmen · Author: Marnie · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
First Age · ID: 1095
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 14:56:41
The language of the narrative portions was what first caught my attention in
this story. It feels like it could fit smoothly in with the Silmarillion and
the Unfinished Tales. And it really ought to. Even as a child, Celeborn was
wise. Of course, children have a tendency to be wiser than we give them
credit for, and I love Orome's frustration when Celeborn starts voicing the
same things that Orome has been wondering. And only Celeborn would have the
cheek to wait for Orome so that he could give Nahar an apple. Even though
nothing ever came of this meeting as far as great involvement from the
Valar, I'd like to believe that both Orome and Celeborn learned something.
The ending seems to imply that they did, anyway. And with that thought, it
doesn't feel as though it was all in vain. Very satisfying story.
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Title: Magnetic Force · Author: Marnie · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 1097
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-09-24 15:05:45
In many ways this story reminds me of a Mary Sue: modern girl drops into
Middle-earth, modern wgirl met by elves and taken to Rivendell. It doesn't
follow the standard mode, however. Jasmine does not join the Fellowship (who
have all long since died), nor does she fall in love with Glorfindel -- it's
just her, Celeborn, and the Twins. But this story does a first-rate job of
the difficulties in fears someone might have who falls into middle-earth,
and the stresses and torture she might face on returning. I almost wish she
would have extended it more, or someone would write a longer
modern-girl-in-Middle-earth story that was this well done.
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Title: Insomnia · Author: AfterEver · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second
Age · ID: 62
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 15:12:11
This certainly raises questions! Thousands of little questions. A single
night of insomnia, and Gil-galad's unwillingness to accept what Cirdan would
have. Amazing consequences. It seems that Cirdan and Glorfindel both have
grave misgivings about what is going to happen, and I think that's very
likely, given their respective backgrounds. Elrond's shock upon receiving
the crown is frightening, and even more frightening is how readily all the
other elves bow to it. This is definitely not meant to be, and though I'm
sure some good will come of it, this feels to me like it's the first step in
the wrong direction. It can only get worse. There was so much foreboding in
the final moments, and so much reluctance on Cirdan's part. Wow. My head is
now spinning with all the possibilities this presents. It changes
everything, and it came from something so small and so simple... Well done!
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Title: Once in a Fair Green Country · Author: Space Weavil · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion · ID: 157
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 15:17:54
It never would have occurred to me to write a Gandalf romance. I would have
been stymied from the beginning, having no idea how to go about it or where
to even begin. Space Weavil, on the other hand, knew exactly where to begin
and where to go from there. This is one of the most touching, timeless tales
I've read involving a romance, and it's framed beautifully by another
romance: the love between Elrond and Celebrian. Between the two of them,
alike and yet not alike, a bittersweet tale is born. I loved the fact that
Gandalf was very strictly Olorin in the flashbacks. Never once did he cease
to be a Maia, though he tried. But wisdom will out, and in the end, he
remained, though reluctantly so, to my mind. Very deft writing and very good
style to bring what may have seemed an unlikely romance to light.
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Title: Eärendil’s Tale · Author: Bodkin · Books/Time: The Silmarillion · ID:
1331
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 15:23:42
I've read several stories about the reunion between Elrond and Earendil, but
never have I come across anything quite this comprehensive. Everything is
there, the flashbacks, the uncertainty, the changing emotions, the
misunderstanding, everything! I very much enjoyed watching the final events
of the First Age play out through Earendil's memory, and I love the thought
that he tried to defy Ulmo when he learned of the third kinslaying. It
sounds as though that was something Elrond needed to hear. And the final
chapters, bittersweet at the thought that Elros and now Arwen are lost to
them, held some wonderful resolution. Great tale!
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Title: History Lessons: The Second Age · Author: Nilmandra · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 1057
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-09-24 15:35:35
What amazes me most about this story is how statements made toward the
beginning wind themselves into the history that is being told toward the
end. Everything comes together. I loved the first History Lessons, and these
are equally good. I enjoyed a look at an older version of Elladan and
Elrohir, and Arwen was a welcome addition to the family. I think my favorite
moments involved Galadriel and Celeborn telling of Annatar and Celebrimbor.
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