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Title: The Paths of the Dead Author: alex_cat_45 Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Grey Company ID: 999
Reviewer: nerwen_calaelen 2005-09-25 01:37:06
An interesting point of view and a nice ending. Some of the telling seemed
to be trying to be poetic without quite succeeding.
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Title: The Full Tragedy of the Kinslaying Author: Cirdan Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons ID: 1268
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 04:23:20
What an impressive vignette written by Cirdan. Actually, while reading this,
the meaning of the title really stood out for me. I know Eonwe said that the
Silmarils rejected the sons of Fanor, but did the Valar ever consider that
the Silmarils, just like Arda and the Elves could be marred and corrupted as
well? This is a very good point that Cirdan brings up in this story,
challenging the reader to think outside the box for a moment, keeping a firm
grip on canon and Tolkiens ideas behind the Silmarillion. In the end, even
after the War of Wrath, Morgoths influence is still there.

I like the set-up of this vignette overall, by choosing to write Elrond &
Elros first, Cirdan gives you, as the reader, the feeling that Maglor is
worth listening too. Can you see the bard as mad? Or was he truly clear
headed at that moment when Maglor told what happened and sang the Noldolante
for the first time outside his family? Is this not true when Cirdan writes:
The dark clouds of Morgoth have ever hung over Middle-earth, and much that
is known to the Elves of Aman are lies of the Dark Lord. The full scope hits
you like a brick and Cirdan grandly writes it in an engaging tone that makes
you want to read more. The author balances every word and tells his story in
a well-balanced pacing. The characters are well constructed and thoroughly
researched to me. A very enjoyable read Cirdan!

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Title: Wreath of Steel and Silver Author: Kielle Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons ID: 454
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 04:43:19
What did the mirror in the end do? That is what Kielle asks at the end of
the story. With this question alone, it makes you re-read the story again to
discover more in what she cleverly hid in this vignette. Ah, but the mirror
only reflects on what turmoil rages inside the person who looks into the
mirror. Galadriel knows this. Kielle writes how Galadriel still hasnt
forgiven herself for taking part in the bloodshed of Alqualond. If the
mirror even shows it now, then it cannot be gone at the end of the session.
The mirror cannot grand forgiveness, only the person themselves can forgive
themselves: that will be mirrored. Since Kielle ends her vignette with the
mirror reflecting blood, it is clear to me that Galadriel is far from
redemption, even though she passed the test.

I love the way Kielle portrays Galadriels feeling of horror and shame of
joining the kinslaying with her own dagger. And not only that, Kielle
addresses how Galadriel might redeem herself by claiming self-defence. But
who, in this incredible tragedy of Alqualond, was defending themselves? Who
indeed started this? Were the Teleri blinded by lies and resisted thusly?
The comparison with her brother Orodreth is incredibly powerful and shows
the reader that not every Noldo followed Fanor that blindly into the
kinslaying. It makes me wonder why Galadriel followed the blind passion and
her brother, of the same blood, did not.

This is a vignette that even after you read it a couple of times, makes you
think and wonder about Galadriels nature. She disliked Fanor a lot, but
indeed, thought differently about his sons. Galadriel, just like Fanor,
wanted to discover the world across the pond with the same drive and this
made her follow her family into war. Her brother does not share this
fascination and remains at her side out of loyalty to family: he doesnt feel
the fierceness invoked that strongly. Anyhow, there is so much more about
this vignette: Kielles writing amazes me every time. This vignette was a
thrilling read and she challenges the reader to think further then what was
initially written. A gem of a vignette!
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Title: House of Dust and Memory Author: Itarille Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons ID: 523
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 05:36:52
The vignette House of Dust and Memory reminds me, in some way, of the novel
House of the spirits, written by Isabel Allende. The manner how Itarille
describes how Indis walks through her own house gives me the same feeling
when I read Allendes novel. It is chilling and haunting. Itarille gives us
insight in one of Tolkiens female characters we do not see that often. Indis
really chooses to live in the past; somehow, this comforts her, trying to
reclaim something long forgotten. Then Nerdanel enters the story: a strong
woman, steeling herself, but Indis, by remaining herself, manages to bring
out the long restrained grief of Fanors wife. Choices have been made, and
Itarille tells in very beautifully prose how both characters realise that
tomorrow brings a new life and new possibilities. I appreciate the manner
how Itarille brings the two together: facing each other, facing the facts if
what their children who they raised themselves, are responsible for their
own deeds. But where does motherhood end?

Itarille masterfully writes the setting, timing, and explorations of these
two characters. The story is well structured and written with a well
balanced pacing. This is a very powerful vignette with a hunting atmosphere,
where at the end of it the healing of the hurts for her two characters
start. It moves the reader deeply and it surely made a wonderful read to me!

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Title: In Defense of the Elvenking Author: Karri Genres: Non-Fiction:
Elves ID: 447
Reviewer: Tanaqui 2005-09-25 06:10:42
In this essay, Karri has put together a strong rebuttal of the notion that
Evil!Thranduil has any basis in canon and demonstrated that he is mostly a
fanon invention. Through effective use of the Socratic method, she examines
the charges laid against Thranduils character in many fanfics and uses the
portrayal of Thranduil in Tolkiens works to show how the allegations cannot
be supported by canon. The essay is slightly marred by minor errors in
grammar and vocabulary, but is still written in a highly readable style and
provides incisive analysis of the source material. While I very much doubt
it will end fanfic portrayals of Thranduil as an abusive father, since these
have complex roots, it does provide an excellent resource for those of us
who wish to dispute that portrayal. A good addition to the fandom!
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Title: That Tall Fellow Next to Galadriel: a Short Essay About Celeborn
Author: Marnie Genres: Non-Fiction: Elves ID: 479
Reviewer: Tanaqui 2005-09-25 06:11:01
This is a well-written and highly entertaining personal essay arguing
against fandom perceptions of Celeborn as dull or weak. Ill admit I always
found him rather boring, but then I always found most other elves,
especially Legolas, to be boring (along with a fair number of other
characters, as well). Im very grateful to fandom acquaintances such as
Marnie for making me think harder about certain characters, and giving me
new insights, understanding and appreciation of characters who bored or
puzzled me. In this essay, Marnie not only uses her excellent scholarship
lightly to rebut the charges often levelled against Celeborn but shows us
clearly what a fascinating character Celeborn really is. Reading her words
has made me keen to seek out more stories focused around Celeborn: if Marnie
can convert even someone as elf-indifferent as me to being interested in
Celeborn, that suggests she has succeeded admirably in her goal of writing a
persuasive essay that will not only defend but also popularise the Lord of
Lothlorien. Well done!
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Title: Father-Names Author: Finch Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and
Sons ID: 345
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 06:27:41
With father-names Finch gives us a well-balanced story where the author
dares to explore the darker, and often, ignored side of Maglor. But Maglor
is weary after the kinslaying at Sirion and Finch captures this very well.
But as Maglor, I wondered while I read this story: has Elwing gone mad by
naming the twins after her own brothers? I have to admit I felt appalled as
well. Why would a mother abandon her children, possibly knowing that her own
children would face the same fate as her brothers? Did she name them with
that doom so present in her head? Did she doom them already? The very
thought of this puts Elwing in a different perspective. Even though it is
Ulmo who interferes, the Valar set things right by guiding Maglor to the
boys and give him a chance to redeem himself (of which he badly wants
himself). Finch Maedhros in this story feels enigmatic to me; it feels like
he has given up already, especially now that his youngest are dead.

The twin Elros and Elrond are written carefully and the slight differences
between them come across very well. Weary Maglor does not realise he carries
the unsheathed bloodied sword and Elros reaction to it is exactly I would
expect coming from a child of his age, who has seen too much bloodshed.
Elros dragging of the sword into the cage made me smile; it makes me wonder
how Finch would write an adult Elros. Ah and Elrond. I am awestruck by the
child sharp questions, but also the childlike responses in wanting to go
home. Finch found a good balance in this and the writing of this story.
Despite the strange formatting (punctuation is very weird): this was a
wonderful read!

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Title: Master Gamgee of Bag End Author: Marta Races/Places: Hobbits:
Fourth Age ID: 952
Reviewer: Tanaqui 2005-09-25 06:45:51
In this story, Marta has taken Tolkiens brief comments about the Shire in
the early years after the War and expanded on them effectively. She shows
how completely she understands the Hobbit mindset and culture, especially
their parochialism. The exchanges in the Green Dragon at the start of the
story are both humorous and heartbreaking in their narrow self-interest.
Sams resentment -- and yet desire not to be resentful, which is so in
keeping with his character -- is convincingly drawn, while the comfort he
takes from Rosie and Elanor is touchingly done, yet never
overly-sentimental. I also enjoyed the strong Tolkienesque flavour imparted
by the songs. The story would benefit from correction of a few grammatical
errors and spelling mistakes, but nevertheless provides a charming
interlude.
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Title: High Flight Author: Jay of Lasgalen Books/Time: The Hobbit:
Vignette ID: 419
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 09:36:58
What an unusual perspective. High flight starts with a beautiful poem, but
what follows next is just as stunning and beautifully written. It is so nice
to see a story about the Eagles, who are just like elves and men,
inhabitants of Arda. I am in awe how Jay writes from the Eagles perspective
only and pictures how battles and fights can mar the Eagles. Just the
thought of not being able to spread their wings: what a horrible thought.
And Jay catches that in well-chosen prose. Through the eyes of this veteran
Eagle, we learn more on how they experienced the events written in the
Hobbit. What a beautiful vignette Jay, it was simply breathtaking!
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Title: Important Business Author: Jay of Lasgalen Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: Rivendell ID: 1323
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 09:47:36
Jay writes the following summary to this story: An uninvited observer of the
Council of Elrond... This surely made me wonder who this uninvited observer
was and I was pleasantly surprised. I dont think this cat felt uninvited,
but maybe thought that the rest of the boring people pleasant and who
disturbed her delightful afternoon nap this way. I had to chuckle when Jay
wrote: her elf. How often is it not said that cats have personnel? Jay
catches this assumption perfectly. Something else that was written so well
was how cats do react, like if they have a sixth sense to unseen things:
like the presence of the malice captured in the One Ring. Although Jay
doesnt say who this elf is, I think it is Erestor somehow, he feels like a
cat person to me. A very enjoyable ficlet Jay!
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Title: Weapons Against The Enemy Author: Nancy Brooke Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings: Rivendell ID: 631
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 10:06:48
Oh Nancy, what a beautiful story. Your image of Glorfindel is very vivid and
the manner how he talks with the hobbits: that was extremely enjoyable. The
way you wrote Bilbo, grown accustomed to living in Rivendell and knowing
Glorfindel so well. There is so much meaning in his words directed at the
valiant Noldo lord. Anyway, I find it intriguing how you show the reader how
Glorfindel walks through the halls and what his thoughts are of those who
are present. Nancy writes this in an active style and lets you feel as if
you are truly looking over Glorfindels shoulder. And then Sam, it would be
exactly like him that he would speak up his mind about this. I think you
have pictured Samwise very well here Nancy, his doubts, mingled with his
promise to protect Mr Frodo where ever he can he surely must have felt that
he failed there. I am so happy to see both agree to some kind of peace
between them, respecting both the way they are. A very well told story
Nancy, very enjoyable!
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Title: Letter From Elladan Author: Jay of Lasgalen Races/Places: Elves:
Imladris ID: 1080
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 10:27:06
You dont need many words to express your love, but also fears of events that
will come. The Letter from Elladan is very to the point, but the weight of
it mirrors what was exactly at stake for the Sons of Elrond. In the second
chapter, Jay writes the impact it has on Elrond, who already has to let go f
his daughter, reads about the sacrifices Elladan was willing to take on
behalf of Rivendell and Middle Earth. Through Elronds eyes, we experience
the gratefulness and pride the father experiences. Jay writes an elegant
short story with a good pacing and wording. A very poignant story Jay, very
beautiful!
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Title: Mariner's Son Author: Adina ATL Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings:
Rivendell ID: 326
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 10:45:10
I often wondered how Elrond must have felt to be abandoned first by his
father for the sea, then his mother who rather sought her demise with the
Silmaril then to remain with her sons, and in the end Elros, who chooses a
different fate. In this light, it is also sad to consider that his daughter
will choose a different fate as well. These thoughts swirled through my mind
when I read Mariner's Son written by Adina ATL. Especially when Bilbo
mentions the Dunedan. Elronds response to that is very understandable.

The way in which Elrond touches upon his childhood so briefly, the reader
can read between the lines how much this affected him. I adore the
conversation between Bilbo and Elrond. Bilbo, curious as ever wants to find
out more about Elven Lore. The statement that he feels a bit ashamed of
singing about a subject this serious is very touching. The half spoken
apology about Bilbo having caring parents moved me deeply. Maybe Middle
Earth was better off if it was inhabited by hobbits only. Adina beautifully
writes the manner how Elrond responds to this: it reflects the deep
friendship that has grown between them over time. With great skill and care
for her characters, Adina gives us a gem of vignette that not only makes it
a pleasurable read, but also leaves the reader behind with many thoughts and
ideas (maybe even a plot bunny) to ponder on. Great writing Adina!

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Title: And the Stars Will Sing Your Name Author: Shirebound Books/Time:
The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell ID: 881
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 10:58:05
And the Stars Will Sing Your Name by shirebound is one of those stories that
are small shining gems hidden in archives. Once you read them, the beauty of
the story told to you and it leaves you wondering how you could have missed
this one. Shirebound lets Frodo reflect on a year in which he endured a lot
and leaves him wondering if all that they had to go through will be
remembered. In this, I agree with Elrond. Maybe the hobbits remained
sheltered for so long on Middle Earth, after these valiant deeds, they
placed themselves firmly on the map.

This particular line gave me the chills:
'You are woven into the Great Music, Frodo Baggins,

I love how Shirebound weaves in an important part of the Silmarillion and
makes it work for her story. Because in its very essence, what the author
point out to the reader: it is true. To me it feels very right and well
timed that Elrond tells Frodo this. Even though this is just a vignette,
Shirebound tells so much in this short piece of work. Her lines are
carefully worded, her pacing and balance makes it a very enjoyable read. A
grand vignette Shirebound, I enjoyed it a lot!

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Title: The Sacred Warp of Tolkien's Tapestry Author: Wordweaver Genres:
Non-Fiction ID: 609
Reviewer: Tanaqui 2005-09-25 11:35:03
Wordweaver has put together a well-written article that shows how Tolkiens
own religious beliefs might have provided the warp on which he wove the
structure of the mythology of Middle-earth. As someone with only minimal
acquaintance with Bible Studies, I welcomed the exploration of the parallels
between specific Christian texts and The Lord of the Rings.

I think it is an extremely astute observation by Wordweaver that these
beliefs form a warp that is not necessarily visible in the final pattern: as
Tolkien himself said in the Foreward to The Lord of the Rings, he preferred
applicability to allegory. I have always felt that Tolkien promulgated his
worldview in a far more subtle and compelling fashion than many others, and
thereby successfully spreads his gospel of values to a much wider audience.

Overall, this essay was immensely readable and I salute Wordweaver for
achieving a well-balanced tone which was never didactic or evangelical. As
with all the essays I have enjoyed reading for the MEFAs, this one made me
think more deeply on many subjects, not just Tolkien, and I appreciate that
Wordweaver has shared these thoughts with us.
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Title: Keeping the Watch Author: ErinRua Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Pre-War of the Ring ID: 333
Reviewer: Marta 2005-09-25 13:01:32
This is a really nice story, I think one of my favourites exploring the
relationships between hobbits and the Dunedain. There were nice hobbity
touches throughout, from the simple bravery to the open-hearted compassion
even at danger to themselves, and the ending felt very appropriate,
encouraging the reader to hope for a good future.
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Title: One of The Lads Author: Dreamflower Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Vignette ID: 980
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan 2005-09-25 13:16:02
This is a delightful peek into Aragorn's thoughts as he observes the
hobbits. I particularly enjoyed the thought of Merry telling scandalous
stories to Gimli!
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Title: Turnabout Author: Ariel Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War ID:
686
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan 2005-09-25 13:22:25
A very satisfying hurt/comfort story, in post-Quest Minas Tirith, with a
nice use of Gimli and Legolas in the rescue as well as the hobbits, and with
delightful glints of humor shot throughout.
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Title: Glossing the Hobbit Heroes' Homecoming Author: Douglas Charles
Rapier Genres: Non-Fiction ID: 1141
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan 2005-09-25 13:23:55
Although the last line is ironic now, this is the essay which I've enjoyed
the most of the three probably because I agree with it! But you've managed
to draw out some points which I failed to add to my arguments, particularly
in your discussion of the things which hobbits like Fatty did during the
occupation of the Shire before Frodo and the others got home. I particularly
liked your insight into the strengths of Frodo's decision to allow Sharkey
and Wormtongue to depart. Although it seemed like weakness, in some sense,
you're quite correct in noting that it establishes a great deal of authority
for Frodo among the witnesses to the event.
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Title: Mother-less Heroes Author: Douglas Charles Rapier Genres:
Non-Fiction ID: 1140
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan 2005-09-25 13:24:32

This brief essay is a good starting point for a discussion of how Tolkien's
writing matches up to the heroic tales of folklore. But you missed Sam!

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Title: Under-dogs of Middle-earth Author: Douglas Charles Rapier Genres:
Non-Fiction ID: 1142
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan 2005-09-25 13:24:56

This is another erudite essay, pulling in the traditions of Nordic and
European folkore to examine Tolkien, but I think the title and summary are a
bit misleading. (Which isn't to say I didn't enjoy reading it, it just
started one place and ended somewhere else.)

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Title: The Comfort of Good Friends Author: SilverMoonLady Books/Time:
Gap-Filler: Hobbits ID: 626
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan 2005-09-25 13:26:17
This is a pleasant snippet, showing us Merry's memory of the one night in
Crickhollow. I particularly enjoyed Sam's practicality here, and Pippin
pointing out that Fatty was going to regret staying before any of the rest
of them had a chance to regret going. (Although Old Man Willow might have
made that statement less than perfectly true!)
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Title: A Long, Unexpected Drabble Author: Elena Tiriel Genres: Humor:
Metafic ID: 193
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 14:12:13
The ingredients are there, the challenge to cook it with: and now off to
drabble! Elena writes a stunningly portrait of every drabbler faced with
this challenge. Especially getting the word count sounds very familiar.
*Ahem* A great ficlet Elena!
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Title: Blood and Warm Blankets Author: Kielle Genres: Humor: Metafic ID:
451
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 14:52:40
Too bad Kielle doesnt include a remedy where the reader can get rid of the
cramps of laughter after reading this excellent story. Oh my, Kielle does
manage to cover every clich and pairing possible in this vignette. With
sharp and witty dialogue, the two valiant warriors fill each other in of
court gossip. Faramirs reaction is hilarious, maybe he should indeed stop
reading that much * grin * The best line? For me it was when Eomer spoke of
how he possibly could not have gained Aragorns attention: Perhaps if I'd
wrapped myself in a map of Gondor and sprawled out across the strategy desk
in his tent. This visual only, oh my goodness! Now there is an idea! The
ending is classic and typically something for males: while were trapped in
this clich, wed better find out what it is all about. What a fun read!
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Title: The Byrdings Author: pippinfan88 Races/Places: Hobbits: Children
ID: 1040
Reviewer: pearltook1 2005-09-25 14:54:31
This is a charming story making good use of Tolkien's descriptions of what
hobbit children give to their parents as gifts upon turning 3 years old.
Pippin is a cute three year old learning the proper way to dig up the
flowers for his mother and recieving help with painting a rock to give to
his father. I love her description of how a mother feels as she sees her
youngest growing up and knowing there will be no more babies until she has
grandchildren. She handles well her version of Merry's family situation in
Pippin wanting to include him as a child in his own family. As usual her
story is warm and loving. A good extension of hobbit customs.
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Title: High Places Author: Kielle Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves
ID: 1086
Reviewer: Rhapsody 2005-09-25 15:06:47
High places starts with a high pace, seen through a childs perspective. As
the story unfolds, Kielle reveals who the main characters are in this story.
Not only that, in a captivating manner she also tells the tale how Gondolin
fell. Maeglin is often written as a bad character, but still, this child
trusts him completely and for me it works very well. He cares for little
Erendil, but not without the little pangs of jealousy that this child could
have been his. Gondolin is being destroyed and the only two things big on
his mind are Idril and Erendil. Then Tuor appears and little is left to the
imagination of the reader how that will end. The ending is bittersweet,
reunited after both Erendil and Elwing have been through and forever
sundered from their sons: their love is all that matters. A very poignant
and well-written story Kielle, it is simply breathtaking.
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Title: Religion Author: Dwimordene Genres: Drama (includes Angst) ID: 248
Reviewer: Marta 2005-09-25 16:08:25
Very nice insight into the possible relationship between Halbarad and
Aragorn, and how said relationship might have changed by the revelation that
Estel was Isildur's heir. You captured the terror of the wights quite well
(so much so that I almost wish you had developed that further), and I don't
think the verse was so bad. ;-) Though I do think Aragorn will have to get
used to this uneasiness if he's going to go around collecting names like he
seems to do. All in all a nice fic developing two of my favourite
characters.
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Title: Here sits, in secret, blest Theology Author: annmarwalk
Races/Places: Gondor ID: 388
Reviewer: Branwyn 2005-09-25 17:50:43
This must be the first trout-fishing and nature conservation drabble ever!
The old ranger teaches Faramir an important lesson about stewardship of
natural resources. Though Tolkien said that Faramir would never willingly
slay man nor beast unless at great need, hunting would be a necessary skill
for a ranger who was often far from any source of resupply.

The image of the trout is lovely--

"It was a brown trout, good sized, the dove color of its back speckling to
silver and black along its underside."

Your notes about trout-tickling are very interesting. I had heard of the
practice but had assumed that it was a rural legend. Beautiful, evocative
drabble--I can almost see the sunlight reflected on the water.

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Title: A City of Scarlet Flowers Author: annmarwalk Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gondor ID: 390
Reviewer: Branwyn 2005-09-25 18:30:34
This writer's dialogue sounds natural and in character, and the spoken lines
are deftly woven into the narrative. The wordpainting is beautiful, with the
contrast between the white stone City and the flowers in their various
shades of red---ruby, crimson, scarlet. Reading this woke my eyes up! I was
not the only reader who thought immediately of the poem that begins "In
Flanders fields, the poppies grow, between the crosses, row on row..." I
loved how the set designers in the "Return of the King" placed pots of herbs
and flowers in the white stone City--how natural for people anywhere to add
greenery to their surroundings. The writer took that small detail one step
further in this lovely drabble.

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Title: Firelight Author: annmarwalk Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings:
Drabble ID: 393
Reviewer: Branwyn 2005-09-25 19:20:42
This drabble evokes such a strong feeling of uneasy truce. The bond of
companionship is able to "...hold the wintry dark at bay, <i>for a little
while."</i> [reviewer's italics]

The elements of the struggle, though almost hidden, are all present--the
allure of the Ring, Boromir's struggle with temptation, and his redemption
through a heroic death ("like mortal lives, they blaze dazzlingly for a
moment"). How does this writer say so much in only a hundred words?
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Title: Mourning Cloak Author: annmarwalk Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Gondor ID: 394
Reviewer: Branwyn 2005-09-25 20:11:11
The writer, through the unlikely device of the lord steward's wardrobe,
explores his grief at his wife's death. I liked that, under Finduilas'
influence, he had begun to wear brighter colors--but not too bright as this
is still Denethor! But after her death, he dresses only in black. He can
bear no reminder of her or the softness and color that she had brought into
his life. The writer shows how Denethor reacts to grief with anger and tries
to stifle his own emotions (he tosses the soft fur aside instead of letting
himself weep). In "Return of the King," his grief for Boromir (and, later,
Faramir) is mixed with a great deal of anger and denial, so this short piece
is an very apt character study.
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Title: It Happens Author: Ezra's Persian Kitty Genres: Romance: Rivendell
ID: 615
Reviewer: mirasaui 2005-09-25 20:30:17
Ezra writes wonderful stories and has a very distinctive and original
writing style. Of all of hers I have read, this one is my hands down
favourite.

On the surface, it is a simple tale of love and romance between Rivendell
elves: Glorfindel and Lindir, Erestor and Elrond. Add Haldir to the mix and
you have the twos company, threes a crowd type of situation. Yet, it is much
more than a simple tale of matchmaking and discovery. Throughout, there is a
delightful blend of humour and angst, with a tugboat of angst at the end.

In most of Ezra's stories, her characters have a touch of sadness and just a
tad bit of faery. They are just a bit too much one way or another to be
entirely believable. This story is no exception. But, that is what makes the
tale/tales so unique and readable. This one is not fluff and yet it is. It
has a hint of mystery added in to boot.

I don't wish to spoil the plot but can say that this one makes me laugh and
it makes me cry. There is Elrond, who cant see love in front of his nose,
and Erestor - methodical and efficient - following the same schedule day in
and day out, year after year, century after century, one of unending,
selfless care for his one and only friend. That is, with the exception of
Glorfindel. Everyone in Imladris knows Erestors feelings for Elrond go much
deeper, everyone but the elf-lord himself. How he finds out is quite funny.
Glorfindel and Lindir are just as blind and need Haldir to jump start their
romance. Yet, as light and airy as it starts, this one ends bittersweet. A
delightful tale that made me laugh and cry buckets. One I wish to read over
and over. A keeper!
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Title: The Lover's Melancholy Author: Ezra's Persian Kitty Genres:
Romance: Rivendell ID: 616
Reviewer: mirasaui 2005-09-25 20:43:14
Another favourite of mine from Ezra, along with many more she has written.
Here is the tale of Haldir and Erestor, both lonely in love unrequited.
Ezra's descriptions make Imladris blossom in front of my eyes and her
characterization is also wonderful. How many of us have watched and waited
for love that we knew would never happen? Such is the fate of these two, who
spend their days immersed in themselves. Yet, they are able to have this one
moment and that moment gives comfort, not just for a while, but for a
lifetime, even though they never come together in that special way again. A
poignant tale with a bittersweet ending, a fitting tribute to any who have
loved and lost.
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Title: Stability Author: kharessa_bloodroses Races/Places: Elves:
Lothlorien ID: 617
Reviewer: mirasaui 2005-09-25 21:14:46

This story, "Stability", is the prequel to another which I would have
nominated but for the rating. Haldir, with the untimely death of his
parents, takes on the task of raising his brothers in order to keep his
family together. Kharessa writes of the day to day drugery and love that
goes into such a job in a way we all can recognize. Her characters are not
perfect, but have ordinary, everyday faults. The actions between Haldir, as
mother/father/brother, and his siblings are touching, tender and poignant.
No grand marchwarden in this story, Haldir has taken a lesser position to be
closer to his brothers. That another warden takes advantage of his rank and
expertise is an oh so familiar tale. Haldir is late returning home and finds
that Rumil, wondering when Haldir will return or if, has taken Orophin's
care unto himself, cooking a meal that should have been Haldir's
responsibility. A daunting and dangerous task for one so young, Rumil
manages but leaves a disaster of a mess in his wake. This feeds Haldir's
guilt that he is not giving the care that he should, that other young ones
with two parents receive. Yet one can hear his sigh at the extra work of
cleanup. We know that one can only do so much. Rumil taking on the
responsibility for his brother is evidence of the quality of Haldir's
guidance. So, is Haldir's reaction, when he praises his brother instead of
scolding. Kharessa writes elves that are real, believable. Perhaps, not the
ideal that Tolkien envisioned, but elves that get under our skin and into
our hearts. ale with a bittersweet ending, a fitting tribute to any who have
loved and lost.
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Title: While We Dwelt in Fear Author: pearltook1 Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: The Shire ID: 632
Reviewer: pippinfan88 2005-09-25 22:06:05
This is a huge undertaking--an endeavor that has not been dealt with by any
other author that I know of. The author tenderly portrays what happens to
each family that is left behind and directly affected by the occupation of
ruffians. And she takes off the kid gloves. The author shows the anguish
felt by Pippin's parents, Merry's parents, and Sam's Gaffer. Her
characterizations of Lotho and his mother, Lobelia, are spot on! They both
gave me the creeps when I read about their part in the sharing and
gathering. The author goes as far as depicting what happened to old
Butterbur and the inhabitants of Bree. It is truly a dire picture on how
war--or occupations effect a society at large, and each member of a family.
Oh, and the Took Sight is wonderful! I love how the author took a small
comment in the prologue of JRR Tolkien's Fellowship of the Ring and ran with
it! She weaved it so cleverly between Pippin, Esme, and the mysterious faery
wife that a Took married long ago. Wonderful!! She also is mindful to give
us a bittersweet glimpse of our stellar lads, Merry and Pippin as they go on
thier journey south with Frodo and the Ring of Power, just to let us see
where in time we are in the Shire. This was a most wonderful story, ivnented
by a most excellent author. Thanks for all your blood, sweat, and tears over
this project, Pearl! A marvelous tale.
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Title: Mind to Mind Author: Shirebound Genres: Alternate Universe:
Post-LOTR ID: 894
Reviewer: pippinfan88 2005-09-25 22:12:28
This story was a complete delight to read! Shirebound knows no bounds when
writing hobbits--and I say that in a good way. She keeps the reader on the
edge of his/her seat the entire way through the story. I love how she
depicts the reading of thoughts between the elves and the hobbits--the
"reading" is all right there in the books as JRRT wrote it, yet it is so
fascinating to watch it all happen in this tale. A very creative take on the
author's part, if I may say so myself. A marvelous story to read!
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Title: Out of Stone Author: LadyAranel Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Post-War of the Ring ID: 315
Reviewer: Marta 2005-09-25 22:31:16
The really great thing about this piece is its symmetry. It does such a good
job of bringing us full circle, from Gloin's understandable anger over his
son's choice in friend to his eventual reconciliation to that fact. It was a
tad confusing when the flashback was ending, but besides that little quibble
it really is a must read for anyone interested in the fiendship of Legolas
and Gimli.
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Title: Diaspora Author: Dwimordene Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble ID: 235
Reviewer: Marta 2005-09-25 22:32:56
This drabble touches on something that I don't think I've never seen
commented on before, certainly something I've never thought about in any
depth: the fact that the east-door to Moria is left open. It's such a little
thing, but given that the dwarves escaped that way it shows a certain hope
of returning. (Though I wager the Lothlorien elves didn't think too highly
of that particular decision!) The other thing that caught my attention about
this drabble is the opening lines about how of course they were ordered,
they were dwarves. Craftsmen aqnd traders to the very end, even with a
balrog on their tails! very interesting piece, Dwim.
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Title: The Prince of Golden Flowers Author: Avon Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Drabble ID: 18
Reviewer: Marta 2005-09-25 22:36:06
Oh! This was a very fitting commemoration of Glorfindel of Gondolin's
sacrifice, even if it did seem a tad macabre for a child. Ah, well,, I
suppose First Age elflings had to grow up quickly.
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Title: "They are courteous, if they break their silence." Author: Gwynnyd
Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor ID: 575
Reviewer: Marta 2005-09-25 22:37:35
*snork* The play on language here seemed very Tolkienesque. Well done,
Gwynnyd.
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Title: Nine Riders Author: Rabidsamfan Races/Places: Villains: Drabble
ID: 791
Reviewer: Inkling 2005-09-26 02:40:54
Who knew that the Ringwraiths had personalities? Why, some of them are even
what you might almost call...charming! Not quite as charming, perhaps, as
the "Nine Little Wraiths of Doom" in Sara Quill's G&S spoof, but I digress

Rabidsamfan has done a wonderful job in bringing the wraiths to life, so to
speak. The sixth was, to me, the saddest...voicing a sorrow akin to that of
the Elves in mortal lands, only his is mixed with shame. The third was
delightful...now we know what those shrieks meant! And casting the Witch
King's fateful moment of doubt as a grammatical problembrilliant!


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Title: A Lesson on Hobbits Author: Budgielover Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Incomplete ID: 177
Reviewer: Inkling 2005-09-26 04:19:19
Very nice use of movie verse (including one of my favorite invented scenes
in the film) and excellent insights into hobbit character and values.
"Security, safety...plentitude and peace"...readers can learn a lot about
hobbits from this story, right along with Boromir and the other Big Folk.


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Title: Whispers of the Dark Author: MysteriousWays Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): War of the Ring ID: 974
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th 2005-09-26 08:28:44
What is real and what is dream.

At first the reader is unsure which is which or is it a dream within a
dream, the reader turns. .
And oh yes, that must be it, now I know, but, the reader turns. .
And your theory is wrong, or is it? the reader turns. . .

This story is an ever so insightful look into a much misunderstood
character. Frodo Baggins, the ringbearer; and what the ring did to his mind.
The inner battle fought to maintain some small bit of sanity and complete
his task. Just what happened to finally cause him to claim the ring as his
own? In claiming the ring, did he fail? or was he fulfilling some needed
step in the distruction of the ring.

It is shown repeatedly in the books that the races of elves and men were not
up to the challenge of bearing the ring. But the Hobbits, and their cousins
the riverfolk (Smeagol) are apparently made of sterner stuff. Here, we get a
peak into that. Could anyone else have withstood the barrage of evil so long
as frodo did?

Mysterious ways has obviously put great thought into this very subject and
it's variations. In the forward she suggests perhaps writing a
"on-fiction"work on ths subject. I do hope she does so someday. Frodo has
found his spokes person.

I liked this story so much I had to nominate it. The darkness of it is
wonderfully creapy. The repeated theme of "frodo turns" keeps the story in a
dreamlike feel, where ANYthing can happen in a dream when you turn. . .

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Title: Artist's Appreciation Author: sulriel Genres: Romance: Incomplete
ID: 146
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th 2005-09-26 08:54:55
Um. . . drool. . Wow, Are you sure that this is PG? or is that just me
filling in the blanks in my mind! That Was Fantastic!! You have definately
shown me a side of Celeborn i had not previously thought of. I may need to
go take a cold shower now! Can I be a student stone mason too? I'm a sucker
for details and MAN did you come through. you have sketched SUCH a detailed
picture for us; rippling muscles and corded legs. YUM One cannot HELP but
become a Celeborn fan after reading this! I'll DEFINATELY be telling others
to run, not walk, over to read this.
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Title: Flowers in Disguise Author: Holdur Races/Places: Hobbits ID: 377
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:14:16
Sam is a very sweet lad here, and I particularly like his relationship with
the Gaffer! Sam is eager to please, not because he fears hard words from his
father if he isn't perfect, but because he looks up to his father and
clearly adores him. The Gaffer also clearly loves little Sam. The
relationship here is a far cry from the typical fanon portrayal of their
relationship, where the Gaffer is gruff and cold and calls Sam hard names.
The Gaffer is patient here, and also clearly loves his work, and that Sam
will be following in his footsteps. I loved his caring attitude about the
plants, transplanting the flowering weed as he had done for years. It is
easy to see from this story where Sam's skill and attitude came from.
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Title: Watch Every Shadow Author: Anso the Hobbit Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): War of the Ring ID: 920
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:14:48
I like the way that Merry thinks in this story. In my opinion everything he
does here is wonderfully in character. He doesnt go to the Common Room in
the Pony because he understands that someone needs to think about what they
are facing and what steps they need to take because Gandalf is not in Bree.
When he goes outside it is to memorise the lay of the village, and to survey
the Road they will need to take so that he can have as much information as
possible, to keep Frodo safe. I see Merry as someone that likes to be in
control of a situation, and who appoints himself largely responsible for the
safety and well being of those around him, attributes that have no doubt
been encouraged all of his life, as he is to be Master someday, and Anso is
very good at writing him in this way.

It is really interesting what the author has done with Tolkiens mention of
Merrys saying that he had fallen into deep water as I think that Merry has a
fear of drowning, look at his dream at Tom Bombadils. Yes, some of the
Brandybucks are comfortable with bodies of water and can swim, and Merry can
certainly handle a boat, but by the same token living by the Brandywine
might have exposed Merry to witnessing the aftermath of actual drownings
from an early age and he would of course find that to be a terrifying death.
I think that a Nazgl would probably be sensitive to the fears of its
victims, in order to better control and terrify them. Merry feels drawn to
follow the black shape, to learn what he can, and I wonder if the Nazgl had
something to do with that, planting that thought in Merrys head to draw him
on, when Merry, who has a lot of common-sense, might have resisted.

The dream itself is frighteningly vivid, and the way the imagined drowning
is described is very dramatic and realistic! I love how Merry resists giving
up any information about Frodo. This is not quite the same as Sauron trying
to rip information from Pippins mind, but it is a close second, and Merry
stands the interrogation steadfastly despite the terror that he is forced to
endure.

A very exciting story, completely in canon, and Merry is in wonderful
character!

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Title: Meetings Author: Elendiari22 Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring
ID: 798
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:15:19
This is such a clever and unique story! I love that Frodo was able to meet
Pippins son. It is so sad that Frodo is not around to be Uncle to his
cousins and Sams children, as Bilbo was to Frodo and the others. Perhaps he
can see what happens in the Shire from the Undying Lands, and certainly he
had a glimpse of some of Sams children, but a glimpse is not the same as
actually being in the physical presence of a loved ones child. I enjoyed
Frodos matter of factness about the whole thing, and that he tells Pippin
about it. And Pippins acceptance when the event happens in the future is so
very Tookish! The event itself is very intriguing, like a hiccough in time.
I wonder if the faerie blood of the Tooks has anything to do with this
happening, if Faramir somehow caused it, or perhaps Frodo. Or perhaps it was
a gift of the Valar. Elendiari has a wonderful imagination. She is a really
enjoyable storyteller.
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Title: Smoke And Fire Author: Anso the Hobbit Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): War of the Ring ID: 805
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:15:55
This story is skilfully written from an interesting pov and it is written so
that the scene unfolds at a fast pace, as battle, by necessity, truly is.
The descriptions are great and so is Merrys characterisation. There is such
imperativeness - Merry is borne from kill to kill while at the same time
just barely avoiding death himself and we can see it all playing out
perfectly.

I love that what motivates Merry in the first part of the story is a
desperation to help Pippin. He doesnt seek glory, his valour is all in hopes
of contributing to Pippins deliverance. Then we see Merrys realisation that
Pippin might be able to cope on his own, without Merry, that Pippin could
manage if he must. This understanding releases Merry in a way, freeing him
to do his part to slay the Witch-King. The filmverse ending is perfect for
this story, as it comes full circle from Merry taking responsibility for
Pippins safety and rescue, to Merry knowing that he will be cared for and
kept safe by Pippin. Well written, and in a difficult to pull off style.
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Title: A Chance Conversation Author: Songspinner Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Vignette ID: 804
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:16:59
Merry is perfectly characterised here, concerned for the others and wanting
to do whatever he can, even if all that he can do is sit with them, whether
it is good for himself or not. It was very clever of Aragorn to use Merrys
sense of responsibility to get him out of the tent for a rest, and naturally
Aragorn had to add many reassurances. Merry picking up the pretty pebble for
Pippin out of habit was lovely.

I thought that Merry immediately bowing when the eagle landed was wonderful,
and probably stemmed both from his good upbringing and from his close
association with Bilbo. Most hobbits would probably have needed at least a
few moments to collect themselves from the shock, but not Merry, and I loved
that!

The conversation that Merry and Landroval have is great, and I love the
topics, Landrovals reactions to find that he is in tales, the reason the
Landroval is still there, the bit about hobbit and eagle fledglings being
similar, and of course the whole discussion of Pippins name and personality.
It was a lovely end to the story to have Merry go back and begin to tell
Pippin the tale, going back to his self-assigned job as carer, and I would
love to read about Pippins reaction to someday finding out what the eagle
said about him.

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Title: Captain of Gondor Author: Sandy K Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Humor ID: 809
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:17:46
There are many things that I like about this story, among them the fact that
Merry is looking at maps with Gandalf and Lord Elrond, and Pippin and Sam
are exploring together. Boromirs courtly behaviour while meeting Sam and
Pippin is very nice, I like that he is so respectful of them. Pippins
introduction is very Pippinish, and I loved that he included Merry in his
introduction even though Merry is not with them! The way that Merry and
Pippin befriended Boromir was lovely, and I enjoyed all of their
interaction, in particular the meal in which Pippin gives his lecture on the
family genealogy. I love stories where the hobbits befuddle their listeners
with their tangled family trees. Boromir is very noble in this story, though
he doesnt think much of Frodos chances. This story has a very Tolkienesque
feel about it, and Sandy should write more stories!


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Title: Creatures of Habit Author: pipkinsweetgrass Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural ID: 811
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:20:10
This is a lovely story! Pippin and Boromir are so natural here, two
relatively new friends that are growing ever closer through shared
experiences and adversity. The conversation between them is written in a
very Tolkienesque style and I really appreciate the fact that although the
author is American she uses British spellings as much as she can. It makes a
story that much more *real* - what we fans really want after all are more
stories written by Tolkien, but as that is not an option we read and write
fanfiction, and for a story to be as satisfying as possible a writer needs
to try to capture Tolkiens voice, and that means his rules of spelling as
well. Pipkin has made that effort here. The characterisations of both
Boromir and Pippin are very well done, and their dialogue stays true
throughout the story. I loved the little details, that Pippin is the
smallest and slightest and so is more easily chilled, the game that Boromir
has taught Merry and Pippin, that Boromir spun on Pippin with his blade and
Pippins cheeky reply, and the fact that Pippin is so interested in Boromir
as a person, and in the traditions of his country. Pippin has grown up
hearing Bilbo and Frodo tell tales of far off places, and now Pippin has the
opportunity to hear about a strange land first hand. I like how the story
switches to post-Quest at the end, and shows us that Pippin never forgot his
good friend Boromir.

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Title: Because Youre With Me Author: Lady of Ithilien Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children ID: 1236
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:21:01

This is such a wonderful look at young Merry and little Pippin. Both are
written just right. Pippin is so very much a child here, playing his
inappropriate joke on his older cousin, not quite understanding why Merry is
so upset, worried that Merry is really angry with him, and then summing up
his love for Merry with his simple statement, "Because you were with me."
His utter confidence that when he is with Merry all will be well and nothing
can harm him is wonderful. His simple trust and love is so true to how I see
their relationship, and how I see Pippin at that age, full of fun and
mischief but so very sweet, loving and innocent. Merry shines here too,
first worried and frightened for Pip, and I could almost see the wheels
spinning in his head about what to do to help Pippin, then changing rapidly
to relief, then worry, scolding, exasperation, long suffering acceptance,
curiosity, and then overwhelming love for his little cousin, one emotion
after the other in perfect sequence, each conveyed with few words. And that
Pippin frequently climbs trees, while it seems implied that Merry stays
safely on the ground, is a lovely glimpse into their different
personalities. So much was said about the characters and the wonderful bond
between them in this short story!

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Title: There And Back Again Author: Azalais Books/Time: The Hobbit:
Drabble ID: 51
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:22:15


A lovely drabble about Bilbo's homecoming after his Adventure. This is spot
on! Bilbo is written just right - he isn't pleased at all, yet there is
still a hint of humour in his reaction to the proceedings. Bilbo's voice is
wonderful and I think that it actually manages to subtly reflect how his
personality changed while on his journey. I really enjoyed the glimpse of
young Hamfast; his youthful excitement and pleasure at Bilbo's return made
me think of Samwise, and I wonder if in later years he might not be secretly
just a little pleased that Sam had an adventure, even though he couldn't
have one himself. This is an excellent drabble!



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Title: A Letter Home Author: Llinos Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin ID: 761
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:23:44
LOL! I have loved this letter home ever since I first read it! It is very
hobbity in its understated chattiness, a perfect example of the light manner
in which hobbits speak of dark and difficult things. It is also very much in
Pippin's character.

I love the casual way he refers to the events of the past months - that
there were bad bits, and exciting bits, and grand bits, and then swiches to
homey chatter about the Shire, wondering what has been going on.

I also really like the way that he is so nonchalant about where he has been
and what he has done. He mentions Isengard, but not the part he played in
defeating it, he mentions Minas Tirith, but not the heroic things that he
did there. Yet he does mention Merry's bravery, and that Frodo and Sam are
held in honour - and the mention of the feast was just right, and certainly
would have been included in any hobbity letter!

The only thing that he really says that is in any way specific about his own
deeds is "Except of course when I nearly got killed, but Gimli found me, so
I didn't." If this letter HAD actually been delivered I wonder what his
parents would have thought!

And the post-script is just priceless - not to mention very much like a
hobbit, to whom a knighthood would be rather unimportant in the scheme of
things, but it was a lovely gesture of recognition and it made the Kings
happy!

I would dearly love to see what the other hobbits might have written to
their own respective families.
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Title: Memory of Ents Author: Rabidsamfan Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship ID: 800
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:25:01
This is a really enjoyable read! The characterisations of Pippin, Merry, and
Sam, are very well written and distinctive and their dialogue is very well
thought out. I also liked all of the little plot points that when put
together make an nicely crafted story.

Some of the things I liked especially were the references to Treebeard and
the three different reactions the hobbits had to him, the fact that Merry
and Pippin were helping Sam with his forestry work, Merry and Sam humouring
Pippin's skivving off work, that the trees and possibly an entwife were
listening to the song. And I adored the singing of Treebeard's song - it was
perfect to have Merry sing the ents part, and Pippin the entwives part, and
Sam's reaction on hearing it was great. I loved that he had the feeling that
it had a more personal, hidden meaning for himself.

Really nice story!

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Title: The Protector Author: Holdur Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War
of the Ring ID: 1223
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:25:54
This is such a sweet story! I do love Gandalf and Pippin stories, especially
wee little Pippin, and this one has some lovely moments, and some great
visuals, especially Pippin hiding behind Gandalf's beard! The author has a
way with hobbit children, and understands the characters. Holdur should
write more often!
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Title: The Hall of Standards Author: Forodwaith Races/Places: Dwarves ID:
373
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:26:51
I liked this very much, particularly Balin's anticipation of his own future
greatness as a ruler, entitled to his own standard. Balin has always seemed
to me to be rather level headed as dwarves go, his head not as easily turned
by wealth as those of many dwarves might be, but this shows that he does in
fact have a covetous nature. I think for him the stakes have to be at a
higher level than they would for most dwarves.

I do think that Bor would have known about the tradition of the standards as
it seems a very important point of dwarven honour, but that is a small
quibble.

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Title: Spirit of a Sword Author: Erin's Daughter Races/Places: Dwarves
ID: 724
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:27:26
Wow. This is so amazing that I am actually speechless, which I know isn't
very constructive in Awards like this, lol. I don't know where to start, so
I will start at the beginning.

This is a wonderfully written story. I savoured every word, and felt as
though each chapter progressed in intensity to a most satisfying ending. Two
different scenarios, different settings, different races, different
circumstances, and yet both were perfectly bound together.

I loved how Telchar, the dwarf smith, had known for a long time that this
particular weapon would come to be born of his hand when the time was right,
and only when his skill was developed enough to be equal to the task of
creating perfection. He knows that he is bringing to life a weapon
pre-destined for legendary greatness, and I loved that. The whole
description of the forging took my breath away, and the metaphors were
exquisitely written. I felt that I was witnessing the actual birth of a
living, breathing creature of steel and fire, a prince of weapons if you
will, destined from before its conception to greatness, with no choice in
the matter, but equal to the task and willing and eager to bear the burden
of its destiny.

The chapter with the re-forging was just as wonderful. My favourite part of
this chapter was the elf smith sensing the intense emotions embedded in the
blade, as well as those of the blade itself. It was so fitting that Aragorn
be the one to bear the shards to the smith, and when he takes up the
re-forged blade I know without a doubt that they are destined to be
together, to win the throne together, if that makes any sense. I loved the
elven smiths thoughts about the dwarven smith and wonder just how much of
the destiny of his masterpiece Telchar foresaw.

Wonderful work, you should be very proud of this!

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Title: Prelude Author: Mercat Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette ID:
109
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:27:55
This was a really nice story. I liked Frodos interaction with Legolas very
much and their dialogue and thoughts seemed very much in character. As one
who walks through the wood communing with, and touching trees myself, I
could really relate to Legolas suggestion, and had no doubt that it would
work. I very much liked it when Frodo discovered his tree, and am not
surprised at all that within its branches he found a measure of serenity,
and came to understand that he could enjoy the moment without being
overwhelmed by dark thoughts. I liked that it was a willow tree, as willows
are very beautiful, and I would hate for Frodo to have held a grudge against
all willows because of the encounter with Old Man Willow.

I really enjoyed poor Legolas nearly falling out of the tree, and Frodos
reaction!

There was one thing that seemed a bit inconsistent: the Council was deciding
what route and baggage to take, and upon Frodos return to the other hobbits,
Merry says just wait until you see what they've cooked up for our
send-off... Frodo also mentions that he can now set out with a lighter
heart. This indicated to me that they are leaving this night, and I think
that the route and baggage would have been decided well before the last day.
That is a small quibble though.

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Title: To Water the Dust Author: Eruanna Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits
ID: 77
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:28:28
Oh, this is beautiful! I have often wondered about that life saving trickle
of water, and this is a lovely explanation. There is not much that the
powers that be are permitted to do to help Frodo and Sam achieve their
Quest, but that Ulmo manages this small, but desperately needed thing is
heartbreakingly perfect - the best kind of help is that which strengthens
us, and enables us to go forward. In this case, Ulmo managed to strengthen
both their bodies, and their minds. That Frodo dreamt of the sea after this
was so very fitting.

It is nice to think that Frodo and Sam are being watched by the powers that
are good, that they are being cheered on toward their goal. That must have
helped to give them heart even though they did not know.

Lovely descriptions, and an inventive plot. Well done!

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Title: The Comfort of Good Friends Author: SilverMoonLady Books/Time:
Gap-Filler: Hobbits ID: 626
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:29:11
There are several things about this story that I really like. I enjoy the
change from present to past, back to present. The present frames the past
nicely revealing Merrys pre-Quest thoughts and assumptions about what might
happen to them all, and because we know the tale of the Quest, we also know
how Merry has been changed by his adventure, and what evils hinted at, but
not imagined, have come to pass.

I like how Merry, in the past, though fearful of the Black Riders, was nave
of what the full consequences could be it took Pippin to point out the
danger that Fatty would be in so that Merry could see it. And I loved Merry
and Pippins altercation here; the author has written them so realistically.
Sometimes friends will disagree, misunderstand, presume, and shout at one
another, and I think that both of them would react just this way in this
situation. It is a life-changing task that they are taking on, and both of
them know it.

The other hobbits in the story appeared just enough. I liked Sam here, the
thought that he had watched Pippin grow up, and I thought that Sam was an
excellent sounding board for Merry. It was very fitting to end the tale with
all five hobbits that had been present at the start of the Quest!

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Title: Good Memories, Like Good Stories Author: Jeodo Brandybuck
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits ID: 906
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:29:43
This is a wonderful expansion of a scene from the book! It fits so
seamlessly into the book text. I have always really enjoyed this particular
bit of the book, where the hobbits come upon Bilbos trolls, because it is
indeed a story come to life for them, and must have had some impact on their
feelings and how they were coping with their own adventure. It is really
nice to see this expanded upon.

There are some bits in here that I particularly enjoy Pippin taking Frodos
foot for comfort, Pippin startling and spilling the mushrooms, the fact that
Merry made much of Pippins mushrooms, the way that Merry is trying to keep
upbeat and unafraid and then his reaction upon stumbling upon the stone
trolls, not forgetting in his sudden fear to grab Pippin to remove him from
the danger too.

All of the flashbacks to Bilbos story telling are great too, and it is no
wonder that he was so popular with his younger cousins! Pippin was wonderful
here, asking his questions to divert Bilbo from the scary bits, and I liked
how Merry understood what Pippin was doing, and that Pippin, though he didnt
want anyone else to know it, admitted his fear to Merry. Merry was
wonderfully protective in this, both during the flashbacks, and in the
present, and there is no doubt that he knows Pippin well and loves him
dearly. And as the flashbacks are really from Pippins pov, it is wonderful
to see the memories he has of Merry, of seeking comfort and courage from
him, knowing that Merry is to be trusted, that Merry will keep him safe.

Pippin continues to learn from Merry here in the present, for it is looking
upon his beloved older cousin, and reading his wariness and resolve, that
makes Pippin understand how he can himself cope with his fear, and how he
can help Frodo. Well written, with lovely detail and descriptions, and
wonderfully in character!

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Title: Lightness Author: Dana Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits ID: 1230
Reviewer: Marigold 2005-09-26 09:31:01
This is a lovely story, written in Dana's wonderful style of saying just
enough to tell the story. There is a dreamy sort of quality that makes the
story seem a bit blurred, but I mean that in a very good way, and am
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