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Title: Spontaneity
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4693> · Author:
just_sphinx
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> · Genres: Romance · ID: 1122

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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-09-29 01:08:15

This piece does a really good job of capturing the spirit of the elves: slow
in pace, but it has a quiet beauty to it. Sad, but still beautiful.
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Title: Walk No More
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4475> in Shadow ·
Author: Anoriath
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4> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 1004
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-09-29 01:53:51
Walk No More in the Shadows is a vignette I read a couple of times with much
pleasure. Not because it wasn’t clear to me what the story was about, but
actually more of what is captured in this vignette. The quote Anoriath gives
you doesn’t sink in immediately: it does afterwards and you appreciate it
even more. Actually what you at first think you are reading is a meeting
between two men who both care deeply about Éowyn. But then after a re-read,
you see the double layers in this story. Éomer’s talk isn’t just about a
courtly invitation or to test his brother in law, but it does much more then
that. Faramir can continue to bury himself into work and let the real life
pass by. Like Éowyn, Éomer makes Faramir aware that much more is there for
him. Walk no more in shadows indeed, but come to life: that is what this
vignette is telling me.

Anoriath writes these two fabulous men incredibly well, Faramir notices
small details and reads the body language. Éomer is just present and lives
by his own set of rules and morals. The dialogue between them is cleverly
written, there is a lot said and yet not. You can see the change of which
Faramir goes through mostly by the manner how he deals with his servant: it
is obvious to me Faramir is still looking for a way to be Steward his style.
Just as, actually, Éomer is looking for his way. At any rate, a great
vignette Anoriath. I marvel in how you can just take one part or one scene
and convey so much to me as a reader.

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Title: Downfall
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11548> · Author:
Forodwaith
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> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 354

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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-09-29 01:54:09
I am simply amazed by how much Forodwaith can convey in just 200 words.
Tolkien only told the ultimate doom of Numenor, but to get such a
bittersweet insight on the inhabitants: just amazing. While I am reading
this, my mind wanders off in different directions: who are these two
persons, why does he need to convince her? I like it when a writer
encourages their readers to fill in details for themselves. Besides this,
the manner how Forodwaith describes the evens, the storm that is coming, the
despair of the woman and the resignation of the man: very evocative and
chilling. The price of Numenorean pride is incredibly high and Forodwaith
catches that in a very subtle manner. In this respect, Forodwaith uses the
room that is given in the Akallabêth in a splendid manner. You know what
doom awaits them, like death, this is inevitable; the notion of the fate of
Men is touching and well interpreted. The man’s surrender to it is very
convincing. In clear and sharp words, Forodwaith conveys an incredible scene
to the readers. A beautiful ficlet/double drabble Forodwaith!
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Title: Green Seas
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3540> · Author:
Kielle
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7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 453
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-09-29 02:37:47
Now here is a concept I never actually have thought off before. I know that
Theoden lived a great deal of his life in Gondor, but to see him tied and
having close relations to the House of Dol Amroth: amazing. Actually, after
I read this piece: it made sense to me.

I love the interaction between the children and the manner how they talk
about their sibling’s. Theoden’s elder sister thinks that the world will end
once they move back to Rohan: the manner how Kielle writes this gives the
story a genuine feel. Every teenager would yell that at his or her parents:
indeed very seventeen. I can imagine why Theoden would like to drift on his
back in the water for calmness. Theoden himself has just become a teen and
the manner how Kielle writes his character feels very real to what Tolkien
has portrayed him. In this vignette, I appreciate the manner how Kielle
takes bits and pieces of the adult characters in Tolkien’s world: Theoden’s
sense of duty, becoming a military man, Finduilas’ not being able to handle
living that close to Mordor – incredibly haunting-, Imrahil’s longing to
become a knight. I also found the analogy between the sea and the grassy
plains of Rohan incredibly well written. But I digress, at the end of this
vignette, I am wondering what would have happened if Finduilas became
Theoden’s wife, or even so, what would have gone through Imrahil’s mind when
he learnt about Theoden’s death on the fields of Pelennor...

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Title: Not
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=944&SPOrdinal=3>
In Our Stars · Author: Dwimordene
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· Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 245
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-09-29 03:30:11
Not In Our Stars is a very silent tale in which Dwimordene addresses current
day issues. In a reflective manner, the author lets Halbarad speak of social
issues that are not spoken off in Eriador. Class differences, abuse,
jealousy, friendships that change over time, homosexuality: that is quite a
lot to address in one vignette, but every topic Dwimordene treats with
respect and passes no judgement. This overall makes it an impressive read
and the way it is written is a manner I can only agree with. Just not to
talk of these issues and ‘not to bring it home’ are two sided: by not
speaking of it: it will endure, but on the other hand addressing it will
hurt others. Where do you cross the line? When do you have to step up that
plate and do something about it? This is a lovely part that illustrates it:
“And so long as a man does not 'bring it home,' we look the other way when
it comes to lads. For who hears them?”

Halbarad chooses to give comfort in a private and moving manner.
Dwimordene’s characterisation is extremely well done and her original
character Modig is well explored. A gem of a vignette Dwimordene, very
thought provoking.

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Title: Cormallen
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/11000.html#cutid1> ·
Author: Frodo
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
4> Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 799
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Reviewer: Inkling
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3> · 2005-09-29 03:41:44
The Fellowship’s hopes and fears for Frodo at the feast of Cormallen are
sensitively imagined in this contemplative series of vignettes. The thoughts
that moved me most were Merry's; he seemed to have the best grasp of Frodo's
darkness and pain, and his own inability to help. And the reflections of
Legolas, as he listens to the fea-songs of his companions and perceives in
Frodo a sea-longing like his own, are lovely.



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Title: Weregild <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=121>
· Author: Kielle
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7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID: 1091
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-09-29 03:45:28
Ah, I agree with Kielle: we need more stories featuring Isildur. I explored
his character once and it sometimes is so easy to forget that Isildur was an
incredible noble and brave man… only to be blind sighted by the ring later
in his life. In this vignette, Kielle explores Isildur’s motivation and
inner drive to rule his men and lands. Slowly within the story, you can
start to feel the ring’s influence, it is very subtly and cleverly written.

What I also appreciate in this vignette is that Isildur does not reflect on
the war of the last alliance only, but also includes the very long strife
between Sauron and the Numenorean’s, something that can be easily
overlooked. These two parties go back in the history of Gondor (or even
Numenor) and that most certainly had a great effect on why Isildur claimed
the ring as a token for this utter defeat. This vignette is a very
insightful piece that explores the motivation of Isildur and his line. With
a good build up and an engaging manner of writing, Kielle gives us a gem of
a vignette.

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Title: A Letter Home <http://www.berryarts.com/lizallinos/letter.html> ·
Author: Llinos
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> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin · ID: 761

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Reviewer: Inkling
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3> · 2005-09-29 04:00:11
Food and battle get roughly equal billing in Pippin's chatty letter...he is
clearly a master of the hobbity art of understatement! Yet his casual words
mask a troubling story that is better left to be told in person. Nicely
done!
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Title: Heirs of <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=834>
Isildur · Author: Dwimordene
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· Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 243
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-09-29 06:47:24
Light-hearted and yet not: the Heirs of Isildur portrays both drama and
humour, besides that, Dwimordene gives the reader insight about the
friendship between Aragorn and Halbarad. What a burden for Aragorn to have,
loving Arwen there already, Halbarad tries to sell the Dunedain women to him
in a very humorous manner (I mean. How on earth can he remember all those
names!). How often did I not think: tell him Aragorn, tell him how much you
love Arwen. But I do understand why Aragorn doesn’t tell Halbarad, it makes
me wonder if an elven bride would be so easily accepted.

What I like about this story is how Dwimordene pictures the Dunedan society
with all it’s advantages and disadvantages. But the pressure on providing an
heir combined with the Dunedan ranger life style, the ‘marriage-market’
specifically… The manner how Halbarad keeps on insisting he’s been careful
is just brilliantly written. Also, what you can feel in this story is how
different Aragorn feels by being raised differently and has lived so long
amongst elves. His view on love and being bonded to a woman (this especially
compared to his parents and Elrond) is very touching. Dwimordene pictures
very successfully him as an outsider where Halbarad explains how it works in
the angle. This all in a very active style and good characterisation in a
well-balanced vignette. Very clever and subtle written, Dwimordene gives us
a lovely vignette. I enjoyed it a lot!

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Title: Refraction
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=628> · Author:
Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 750
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-09-29 07:04:41
Refraction by Kielle surely gives a spin to what always has been assumed to
have happened to Finduilas. But what Kielle writes in this heart wrenching
vignette completely overwhelmed me. You can read for example how Tolkien
writes that the Palantir ensnared Denethor, but this twist is beautifully
written. The author writes about a harmonious family, Denethor has his hands
full being the Steward, but wherever he can, he dotes completely on his wife
and children. Giving her access to the tower that compensates Finduilas
longing for the sea, but what was hidden there tears the family apart in the
end. First the loss of the third child, then Finduilas herself… For me all
of a sudden Faramir’s nightmares are explained or Finduilas sudden demise
after giving birth to two sons. Just brilliant. I have no other word for it
then that.

It feels very good not to read about an evil!Denethor, but a man who in the
end also had to yield for Sauron’s corruption. But not only him, but his
family as well. While reading, I felt very relieved that Boromir has been
kept out of it. This piece of work gives us insight in Denethor’s sad tale
is being voiced by Kielle in a very engaging manner. Her characterisation is
sharp and written in detail. I kept on scrolling down further, wanting to
know what happens next, Kielle knows how to keep the author glued to the
screen to the end. Great work Kielle!

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Title: Price of Delay <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1675> ·
Author: viv
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 782
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-09-29 09:57:02
What an amazing drabble Viv! The way you describe Elu Thingol's final
moments, the references to the betrayal of the dwarves, the light of Valinor
or maybe the Silmaril's ( he has seen both). His final plea is one of
foregiveness and regret, it is just amazing you manage to capture that in
100 words. An magnificent drabble Viv!
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Title: While We Dwelt in Fear <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1364027/1/> ·
Author: pearltook1
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> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 632

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Reviewer: Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th · 2005-09-29 10:43:21
Alas, for my hectic busy schedule that keeps me from reading all the stories
I would like to. Huge apologies are owed to this author as I have actually
not yet finished reading this epic story. However, This is NOT because it is
not a good story. On the contrary, it is perhaps too good, too detailed, and
WOH, I Never thought I would say that! My tender sensibilities cringe at the
realities portrayed in this accounting of what happened in the previously
peaceful shire, while those other 4 hobbits were off frolicing through
middle earth ignoring their good hobbit sense.

Ah, but those frolicing 4 were not left completely out by miss Pearl Took.
They do make their mystical appearances. Particularly the young Peregrin
Took.

So extremely close to canon, and imaginatively done that one can SO easiliy
forget that it has a few creative tweaks. This is one of those "story behind
the story"'s that we alway yearn for when we finish a particularly good
book. It also puts into a clearer light just how horrible things in the
shire had become. Twas no small battle our fab 4 came home to. They must
have fought not only men, but their own broken hearts at seeing their
beloved shire so destroyed. ESpecially if it looked ANYTHING like Pearl Took
portrays it.

A work long in the making, it certainly should earn the author some
crunchable birdses!

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Title: Happy Birthday <http://www.berryarts.com/lizallinos/professor.html>
Professor · Author: Llinos
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> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 762

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Reviewer: Marigold
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> · 2005-09-29 10:43:46

These two poems entered as one submission were written in honour of
Tolkien's eleventy-first birthday. They are wonderful, and each is
appropriate to the characters meant to have written them!

The first one, *written* and sung by Merry and Pippin, is wonderfully jolly
and, as might be expected, full of references to ale and wine, and dancing
on tables at the local tap-room. In fact, the author has set it up so that
they really *are* dancing on the table, mugs in hand, as they sing this for
the good Professor! The energy level is such that the reader feels pulled in
to the party and gets tired out! This is a song/poem that really could have
been written by these two fun-loving hobbits. My favourite lines, "Happy
birthday to the Master, There's wine as well - we must drink faster" is
especially Merry and Pippinish!.

The second was *written* and recited by Sam, standing solemnly upon the
table in his reciting stance. It is very much in Sam's voice, and the
sentiments he speaks are true for all of us fans of Tolkien's work. Sam
thanks the good and wise Professor for the creation of Middle-earth, and
most especially for hobbits. I agree with him 100%!

What really impresses me about Llinos' poems in general, and this piece in
particular, is the way she is able to vary her writing depending on the
character meant to be writing and speaking the particular work. The voices
of Merry, Pippin, and Sam here are as true as the voice of Legolas in the
author's Lay of Peregrin Took.

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Title: On
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/1989.html#cutid1> Pelennor
Fields · Author: Nickey
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4> · Genres: Movie-verse · ID: 824
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Reviewer: Llinos
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> · 2005-09-29 10:54:41

Really interesting and exciting to see this scene from Merry's point of
view, and the use of flashbacks was well done. There was an imperativeness
to the scenes on the Pelennor. This was rather different from Nickey’s usual
style but just as skilfully done.

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Title: The Life of a
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2760> Bard · Author:
Dreamflower
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5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 464
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Reviewer: Lindelea
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> · 2005-09-29 11:26:07

I first stumbled across this story when I was in the middle of one of my own
with a similar theme: a Man wandering the Shire, not because he was a
ruffian but because he made his life as a wanderer and performer. And so I
am afraid that I never read more than the first few chapters, not wanting to
distort my own vision until I finished my lengthy tale. But I loved the
story enough to nominate it for MEFA... and now, having finished my writing,
and thereafter the reading of this story, I find it to be all that was
promised, and more.

Dreamflower excels at painting scenes of hobbit life, casually inserting the
little details on hobbit customs and mores (such as the difference between
Tuckborough and Bywater in tweens' drinking) that make you think you are
actually sitting in the Shire, taking in the scene. The relationships
between hobbits are deftly drawn, and the contrasting view of the Shire from
hobbit POV and the man's is well done. The dialogue and inner thoughts are
realistic and believable.

And of course I must mention the wealth of folksong in the tale! I have met
some old "friends" and become acquainted with new ones that I hadn't heard
before.

A marvellous tale, which leaves me wanting more. (And what ever did happen
to Menelcar, anyhow? Here's hoping he found a good end.)


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Title: Light
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/L/LarianElensar/LightExtinguished.htm>
Extinguished · Author: Larian
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> Elensar · Genres: Romance: Elves · ID: 619

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Reviewer: mirasaui
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> · 2005-09-29 12:17:02

Larian does not write a lot of stories but those she does are always worth
reading. This one, Light Extinguished, portrays Elrond Peredhil as the
faithful lover of the high Elven King, Gil-galad, in the time preceding the
siege of Barad-dur in the Battle of the Last Alliance.

Gil-galad, concerned for the safety of his herald, devises an intricate plot
to keep Elrond from participating in the battle, recruiting the aid of
Glorfindel and others to complete the conspiracy. Elrond is sorely hurt and
embarrassed in the process until he discovers the real reason behind the
plot. He is publicly humiliated by Gil-galad on the practice field, accused
of incompetence as a swordsman and worse, is told he is no longer wanted as
mate and companion, sent back to his own quarters, no longer to share a bed
with the king. To reinforce the issue and play on Elrond’s insecurities,
Gil-galad arranges for Elrond to find him in the embrace of Glorfindel, whom
Elrond has always thought would eventually catch Gil’s eye.

One is caught up in the drama and the sadness of the tale, especially
knowing in advance what the outcome of the battle will be. The story of
Elrond’s life is rife with sorrow and loss. To see his happiness marred for
even a moment is tragic. Gil has a disturbing dream and unable to keep up
the pretence, confesses the whole scheme. Elrond is shocked and angry and
wishes to punish Gil. In an ironic turnabout, he is advised by Glorfindel to
cease and desist and count his blessings.

In what could be construed as a tragic comedy, Larian has written a
heart-rending and poignant story of love and betrayal, with a catch, both in
the middle and in the end. A beautiful rendering of a love affair turned
tragic with a sorrowful, yet hopeful end.

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Title: Promises Promises <http://www.berryarts.com/lizallinos/promises.html>
· Author: Llinos
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> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Children · ID: 786

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Reviewer: Marigold
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> · 2005-09-29 12:17:13

This is a really good young Merry and Pippin story, juxtaposed with a really
good grown Merry and Pippin in the hands of the orcs story. In the first
part, I love how the story starts with such a dramatic sentence, which
really pulls me into the story. The descriptions are so well done, I can
*see* the way the *armour* hangs over the range, the furtive way the lads
sneak into the kitchen, and arm themselves. I like the characterisations
too, that for enthusiastic young Pippin the adventure starts right away,
that Merry is a bit too old for this type of play but is good-natured enough
to throw himself into the game anyway. Their play is very realistic! A bit
too realistic when Merry is hurt. Pippin’s reactions are perfect, just the
way a lad his age would react. The promises that he makes to ensure Merry’s
recovery are so sweet and innocent, and I love that this childhood incident
is the reason behind Pippin always wearing his scarf .

There is nothing innocent about the next part, with the orcs. Everything
happening is so grim and far outside Pippin’s experience. For a while he
fears that Merry is dead and is being carried along merely to provide food
for the orcs. Pippin knows that there is no childish promise to be made now,
that any bargain made with the powers that be in exchange for Merry’s life
this time must be solemn and serious. He hits upon the idea that he will
somehow pay for Boromir’s life in exchange for Merry’s and this promise is
ultimately what motivates him to swear himself to Denethor. A really
enjoyable story, exciting, angsty, and sweet all at once!

-----------------------------------
Title: Who Watches
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3729> the
Watch-stones? · Author: jen_loves_elves
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52

> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 438

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Reviewer: obsidianj
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=53
5> · 2005-09-29 12:45:38
This is really an interesting encounter. The Druedain are a discerning folk.
This gives even more credence to why Aragorn gave them the whole forest to
themselves after the fall of Sauron. I love the line "Does he run to or
fro." Good question indeed.

-----------------------------------
Title: Tales
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=9202> of Old Wives
· Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27

> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 927

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Reviewer: Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98

> · 2005-09-29 13:18:36

This is a wonderful drabble series! They are bittersweet, but beautiful.
They are the thoughts of an aging Diamond, Estella, and Rosie as they watch
their sleeping husbands, and we know which drabble is about which hobbit
because of the perfect content – there is no need to actually name them.

The first is about Pippin, and his spirit is so clearly conveyed here, in
just 100 words. So is Diamond’s – we learn that she travels often to Gondor
with him. The last line packs a wallop, revealing that she knows that
someday Pippin will travel there and not return. It makes me wonder if this
is something that they have talked about, or something that she knows
because she knows him so well.

The second drabble is about Merry. It has a steady and merry quality to it,
and I get the sense that he has perfected the happy balance of both of those
qualities that he has had all of his life, and that Estella has that same
balance. They compliment each other perfectly and are soul mates. This one
makes me a bit sad, as I feel that Estella knows that they will soon be
parted. But I also feel that she knows that this new grief will not bring
Merry to his knees but will teach him even more wisdom.

Sam’s drabble is the last. There is a particularly poignant line in this
drabble: “In life I cling to him, for in the grave we’ll not lie so
entwined.” Rosie knows that when she dies she will be alone, but is glad
that her husband will sail and no longer be torn in two.

Wonderful, all three of them!

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Title: Seven for a
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3119> Secret ·
Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 1090
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=1090>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16

> · 2005-09-29 13:44:25

I remember when Dwim mentioned this piece over at [Henneth_Annun], as part
of our discussion about "Laws and Customs of the Eldar", and I thought at
the time that surely LACE couldn't be all that bad. But then I reread this,
and I saw exactly what Dwim was talking about. This is Tolkien taken to his
natural, ugly conclusion. One would be tempted to call him a "sexist pig",
if such things weren't frowned upon. I'm not going to debate the issue of
feminism in Middle-earth, but even if you grant that he has better moments
elsewhere, this is a pretty hefty counterbalance to overcome.

What a horrible thing for Nerdanel, to think that she was *guilty* for all
the "sins" of her children because she refused to shrivel up and die, to
give up part of herself. This piece made me want to offer her a cup of tea
and explain how none of this was her fault. Or at the very least cry beside
her for the unfair hand fate dealt her.
-----------------------------------
Title: Final <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3920>
Choice · Author: Meril
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
3> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 1098
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16

> · 2005-09-29 13:45:59

I have to admit that I'm only marginally familiar with the Silmarillion
story, not enough to even begin to do justice to this story. On a generic
level it is a very touching story of grief, despair, and regret. Not a happy
ending, of course, but Meril moves us through the different reactions sI
would imagine Nimloth to have. And the brothers' attempts to justify their
misdeeds here in Menegroth and elsewhere... they seemed almost like drug
junkies in a way, or alcoholics, anyone with an addiction so grabbing that
all the rest of reality twists around it. Very sad, but very well-told.
Thanks, Meril, for an eye-opening read.
-----------------------------------
Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3594&cid=13632> Protocol
of Princes · Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 26
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=26>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16

> · 2005-09-29 13:46:20

This was really cute. I can definitely see Eomer and Faramir interacting in
this way.
-----------------------------------
Title: In Defense of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1551> the Elvenking ·
Author: Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 447
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=447>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16

> · 2005-09-29 13:46:41

For someone who rarely reads Elves, and mirkwood elves less than most, I've
read a surprising number of essays defending Thranduil. But this one
definitely caught my interest, because of one point that it made at the
beginning that was completely new to me. It's where Karri points out that
the lords of Mirkwood would not have defended the elvenking (in the Battle
of the Five Armies) if he was such a tyrant. That's just one example of the
many nice points this essay makes. I especially like the organic approach it
takes, looking at THE HOBBIT and canon as a whole rather than giving proof
texts.
-----------------------------------
Title: Earth
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13576> and Sky ·
Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 201
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16

> · 2005-09-29 13:47:08

Hmm, interesting thought, that it would be grief that would cause that first
bond between Legolas and Gimli. This drabble reminded me a lot of grafting
-- how one might take a limb from one tree and put it in a cut in a new
tree, and the two would grow into something different. Of course, both have
to be open to change, and at least one must be sliced open. What better time
to do this when they're at their lowest point? The fact that through his own
sadness Legolas could see the especial hurt Gimli was going through, well
that says something. Quite loudly, as a matter of fact.
-----------------------------------
Title: There
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13575> and Back
Again · Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 202
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16

> · 2005-09-29 13:47:25

I think my favourite thing about this is that, on one level at least, it's
really not about dwarves. On my first few readings I thought it was about
the saga of the dwarves as perceived by the hobbits, but it's really Frodo's
growing up. Before he came of age (when Bilbo was still in the Shire) and
before he was found by adventure he's naive in that he thinks such things
are just tales to be entertained by. In a way it reminds me of Sam's comment
on the stairs to Cirith Ungol, how he (Sam) thought adventures just happened
to people who didn't have anything else to do. But by the end of the drabble
I can see Frodo moving into the realisation that (to borrow Aragorn's
phrase) "this is no hobbit's walking party". That's quite a way to bring us
for just one hundred words!
-----------------------------------
Title: Together
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2158&cid=8916> In One
Breath · Author: Pipspebble
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
4> · Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 816
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98

> · 2005-09-29 13:51:39

This story has always been a particular favourite of mine. It is a brief
moment in Cormallen, but so much is packed into this short story. It is told
from Pippin’s point of view, as he prepares to make the attempt to walk for
the first time after being crushed by the troll. He has a caring audience in
Aragorn, Legolas, and Gimli, but his rock here is Merry, as always. Merry
encourages him, chivvies him, and promises to catch him should he fall. But
it is not so much Merry’s words that finally spurs Pippin to make the
attempt to cross the six feet across the tent to where Merry waits. It is
his worry that if he does not get better that Merry will have to leave him
behind, that they will no longer be MerryandPippin.

I love the description of him gathering his courage, of fixing his eyes upon
Merry and making his way painfully across the tent, and that when he makes
it, and his leg finally buckles, Merry does indeed catch him, just as he had
promised. This is a lovely glimpse into Pippin’s thoughts, and both his
character and Merry’s are wonderfully drawn. The ending is really nice, with
Pippin knowing that now, since he has passed this hurdle, he will be all
right, and that they will remain MerryandPippin. A really good tale
Pipspebble!

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Title: Fathers' Day Card from
<http://www.berryarts.com/lizallinos/denethor.html> Faramir · Author: Llinos
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25

> · Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 788

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Reviewer: Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98

> · 2005-09-29 14:06:38

This is an amazingly clever poem. It is one of those truly funny works that
cause the reader (at least THIS reader) to snort tea through their noses
every time they read it. I think that it is brilliantly original, and I am
always impressed at this author’s imagination and skill in her execution.
There is not a wasted word, everything has a point, and every word
contributes to the overall humour of the piece. And not only are the lines
clever, they scan perfectly, and there is nothing forced about them. It is
just the right length as well, and maintains the humour throughout the
piece. I love the way the relationship between Faramir and Denethor and the
canonical events in the book are so perfectly paralleled here.

There are so many funny lines here, too many to even attempt to quote them
all, but my favourite has to be " So please don't chuck me on the fire! " So
irreverent! I can just imagine sour faced film Denethor reading this while
poor ever-hopeful Faramir stands watching him, shifting nervously from foot
to foot, praying that dad likes his card! Somehow though I think that
Denethor will be just as disapproving of this creative effort of Faramir's
as he is about everything else the boy does!

-----------------------------------
Title: It Takes A
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2893> Took · Author:
Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin · ID: 823
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98

> · 2005-09-29 16:31:06

I LOVE this story. This has become now, for me, the way that Pippin and
Diamond actually got together. I like the story of their courtship here, but
I especially like the way that Dreamflower writes Pippin and Merry’s
relationship in this story. Merry knows that something is wrong even before
word comes that Pippin has been injured, and when they arrive at the Smials
he knows just how to care for his cousin. The silent conversation they have
about Pippin’s crush on Diamond is just great and I love the healer’s
description of their close relationship as being “every bit as strong,
sometimes even stronger, than those formed with the parents”. Dreamflower’s
universe is one of my favourites, and this is one of my favourite stories by
her.
-----------------------------------
Title: Pipes After Supper <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=13>
· Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 134
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 17:26:10
This is a Frodo's Harem fic, yet it is one that can be appreciated for it's
own sake, for truly it is far more about the deep friendship of Frodo and
Sam. A touch I loved though, was the pipeweed Merry had developed, "Westward
Hope". How beautiful.
-----------------------------------
Title: Torn
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2495&cid=9826> In Two ·
Author: Mysterious
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
7> Jedi · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire · ID: 822
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=822>
Reviewer: Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98

> · 2005-09-29 17:39:52

A nice look into what Sam might have been thinking after the Quest. I think
it likely that Sam may indeed have had suspicions about whether or not Frodo
would be able to remain in the Shire, whether or not he could consciously
admit it.
-----------------------------------
Title: Before I Go To Sleep
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1418> · Author: Cuthalion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
7> · Genres: Romance · ID: 869
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=869>
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · 2005-09-29 17:42:59
Though I've not yet finished this beautiful story, I have no trouble
recommending it to those seeking a well told tale and an engaging romance!
There is a lovely mixture of detail and light that draws the reader in and
invites them to live through this history, and there have been many times
that, with a child on each arm tugging for attention, I've continued reading
just one more line, one more paragraph, before being able to put down that
heavy sheaf of paper, only to return to it as soon as may be. Lily is an
interesting hobbitess who, like many of us, has been faced with choices and
situations that had no clearly defined right answer; yet she presses on,
doing her best, as we all must, and her mistakes, as much as her triumphs,
endear her to the reader. I simply cannot wait to read the rest!
-----------------------------------
Title: Price of Delay <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1675> ·
Author: viv
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 782
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · 2005-09-29 17:43:21
This drabble quite proves both that every word counts in building context
and content in a scene and that the last line, final and lasting impression,
has all the power of a chapter, when handled correctly! Viv does this
beautifully here, and her last line, quite literally slayed me!
-----------------------------------
Title: In Which Frodo
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2106> Makes Tea ·
Author: MysteriousWays
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
2> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 821
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=821>
Reviewer: Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98

> · 2005-09-29 17:54:05

There is a great sense of loss and sadness in this story, set when Frodo is
preparing to leave the Shire with the Ring. The deliberate way he goes about
his tasks adds to the melancholy. What does make me feel better for Frodo is
that I know that he will return to his home, at least for a while. The plot
of this story is not at all formulaic, it is a very interesting angle and
very imaginative, and the author tells the story very well.

-----------------------------------
Title: Taur Ingem <http://www.nancybrooke.com/tauringem.htm> · Author:
Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 629
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · 2005-09-29 20:42:02
Ah, Nancy, this is a very evocative view of Théoden King's decline. I
especially like the phrase "face has become as paper, but thereon nothing is
writ." That paints a truly vivid picture... very nice writing!

-----------------------------------
Title: Entitlement
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1528> · Author:
Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40

> · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 537

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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 21:43:03
*snork* Now *that* was very funny! I could just see the fans gaping! But I'm
wondering--just four ways to start a fanfic? And what are they?
-----------------------------------
Title: Sight <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4380> ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 374
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Reviewer: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · 2005-09-29 21:46:00
This is a wonderfully written story! The words are woven together perfectly
and create a story that I can clearly see in my mind. A beautiful read!
-----------------------------------
Title: Morgoth's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4140> Notebook ·
Author: Arandil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
9> · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 123
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 21:47:34
Oh golly! This should come with a beverage warning! Morgoth as a frustrated
fanfic writer--a *bad* one! I love the Mary-sueishness of his stories.
(Sadly, I've seen actual fanfic that was worse.)
-----------------------------------
Title: Two Drabbles: Tar-Miriel and the
<http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1928291/1/> Waves · Author: Ainaechoiriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=2>
· Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 107
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · 2005-09-29 21:49:46
With these two drabbles I feel the emotion, the plight and the longing. Very
difficult to portray in 100 words, but these were wonderfully done!
-----------------------------------
Title: The Captain's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3210> Last Charge ·
Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
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Reviewer: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · 2005-09-29 21:52:10
When I read this story , I can clearly see and hear Faramir. It reads so
smoothly that I find myself thinking "Yes, that is exactly what happened."
To me, that's what a gapfiller is all about.
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Title: Cold <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3414>
Memories · Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 82
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Reviewer: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · 2005-09-29 21:55:29
How wonderful! A side of Denethor that we rarely get to see! And yet, with
the limited source material available on this side of Denethor, the person
painted in this story is completely in character. That is no small feat when
writing the Steward. Well done!
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Title: Starlight,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2785> Starbright ·
Author: Mariposa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
0> · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 309
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=309>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 21:58:31
This was so cute. I loved Pippin's calculated naughtiness, so very
adolescent, and the idea of the different interpretations of the
constellations. I also love Frodo's and Merry's vain attempts to shut him
up. Very funny!
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Title: Purple Prose <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/PurpleProse.html> ·
Author: Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 977
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o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=977>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 22:00:51
So, Frodo bowdlerized the entire story of the Quest, eh? *chuckle* Somehow
this author makes it entirely too plausible. Someone should have washed that
Baggins' mouth out with soap, LOL!
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Title: Pippin's Patent
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2596> Remedies ·
Author: Llinos/Melilot
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=45
9> Hill CoAuthors · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 1164
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 22:03:05
Poor Pip! All those female relatives have given him some entirely strange
home remedies to try out on unsuspecting victims. What's hilarious is that
he is entirely earnest about it all. I'd love to see a few more of these...
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Title: Ernil I
<http://www.berryarts.com/marigold/fic_ernilipheriannath.html> Pheriannath ·
Author: Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98

> · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 1174

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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 22:05:08
Pippin's embarassment at being called Prince of the Halflings is good for a
lot of teasing, but it takes Merry to point the obvious out to him! Poor
Pippin, he'll never get away from it! I love his agitation at Merry's
laughter, and Merry being so smug when he tells him what he should have
realized all along.
-----------------------------------
Title: The Shadow Within <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2289775/1/> · Author:
Arandil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
9> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 122
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Reviewer: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · 2005-09-29 22:06:36
This story grabbed me from the very beginning and held my attention until
the end. Legolas can be hard enough to write believably but so often I see
the character of Thranduil clumsily and unbelievably written. It is not the
case in this story. Bravo!
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Title: Under
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge14/802.html#cutid1> the
Umbrella · Author: Mysterious
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
7> Jedi · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 1194
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o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=1194>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 22:06:56
A very clever and hilarious response to a challenge! Lobelia was entirely
her rude and shrewish self in this, and poor put-upon Pippin is her victim.
And over mushrooms, of course!
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Title: Captain of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3665> Guard · Author:
Arandil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 119
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · 2005-09-29 22:10:18
A very believable story that makes you wonder exactly what happened that
day. This story does that wonder justice!
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Title: Hobbits: An
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2445> Owner's Guide
and Maintenance Manual · Author: Theresa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
6> Green · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 1158
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o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=1158>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-09-29 22:10:28
I howled all through this. I *want* a set! Especially with their ability to
remain cheerful in all circumstances--like "tax inspectors and
double-glazing salesmen."
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Title: Mering <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=787>
Market · Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 238
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Reviewer: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · 2005-09-29 22:19:02
What a clever story!! A side of Denethor I never expected to see, but find
myself completely believing! Wonderfully done!
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Title: A Mid-Year's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3170> Walking Trip ·
Author: GamgeeFest
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
9> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Children · ID: 1238
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=1238>
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-09-29 22:57:17
All four hobbits are given great opportunities to shine in this story. Frodo
is the wiser elder (as he should be!) and Pippin the skylarking tween, but
Merry and Sam, both just beginning adulthood, who benefit the most from this
pre-Quest excursion. Sam is himself, practical, and concerned about his
place as he needs to be, in spite of the others, and Merry is himself too,
wanting to be the one in charge, and baffled by a barrier he'd built between
himself and Sam long ago.

Definitely one to add to my list of favorites.
-----------------------------------
Title: A Gardener's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1980> Tale · Author:
Elentari
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
6> Greenwood · Races/Places: Hobbits: Fourth Age · ID: 642
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=642>
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-09-29 23:07:23
I must confess that it takes me a while to work up my nerve to read stories
set at the end of Sam's days, but I'm glad I read this one. It's beautifully
detailed, and the sorrow is shot through with gentle joys.

I absolutely loved the thought of the Elves all calling Sam "Ringbearer"
too. And Gandalf's greeting to him nearly had me in tears!

Thank you!
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Title: Yule in
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge11/5148.html#cutid1> Hollin ·
Author: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1143
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=1143>
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-09-29 23:11:52
Oh, I remembered this! And I still think that the handkerchiefs were a hoot,
too. The way that all the non-hobbit members of the Fellowship work to make
the most of the holiday once they know about it is one of the many delights
of this short tale. Thank you!
-----------------------------------
Title: Cruel
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13203> Caradhras
· Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40

> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1365

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Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-09-29 23:13:20
Now that's an interesting take on Legolas' reasons for staying as long as he
did. Marvelous!
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Title: Bringing
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13215> the Sun ·
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40

> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 1382

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Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-09-29 23:15:45
It's a good thing that Aragorn is used to Elves, isn't it? I like the way he
accepts Legolas' help with the snow drift in spite of the way that it must
have been irritating to watch someone else travelling with such ease after
he and Boromir had to struggle so hard through the drifts.
-----------------------------------
Title: Split <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=477>
Second · Author: Aralanthiriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
5> · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette · ID: 662
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o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=662>
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-09-29 23:18:33
There's something appropriately creepy about this piece, as Boromir
discovers the power of the Ring in a far too believable way! I shall never
watch that scene in the film again without shivering.
-----------------------------------
Title: Despair <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2004878/1/> · Author: Niphrandl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 1328
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=1328>
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-09-29 23:28:36
Poor Frodo takes the worst of it in this story set between Moria and
Lothlorien. The style is very spare, but I soon got used to it. There are
some strong plot elements and some good pieces of characterization to pull
the reader in, and the chapters are short, for all that there are sixteen of
them. I particularly liked the sequence called "Boromir's Discontent" -- his
growing worry that the Ring is being carried by the weakest member (or at
least the most accident-prone member) of the party is well-handled. You're
never quite sure how much of it is temptation from the Ring and how much of
it is the practical soldier.
-----------------------------------
Title: Not Without
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3879> Hope · Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 48
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · 2005-09-29 23:47:37
This story grabbed me by the heartstrings and held me to the very end. Such
a wonderful collection of original and canon characters, beautifully
portrayed and a story that brought me to tears. Masterfully written.
-----------------------------------
Title: Nothing in
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4436> Haste · Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 407
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o&navbar_page=8&navbar_perpage=500&lowbandwidth=1&form_story_filter=407>
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