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Msg# 7389

Reviews for 29 Aug - Part 1 Posted by Rhapsody August 29, 2006 - 12:31:46 Topic ID# 7389
Title: How Grima Lost His Eyebrows · Author: NeumeIndil · Times: Late
Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 800
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 19:55:17
Oh my goodness, I need tissues to dry my eyes from laughter. What a
delightful drabble with a magnificent story hidden in it. I love the
interaction between those two with an excellent characterisation. And
yes, as the icing on the cake, Neumeindil explains to us why Grima in
the movies has no eyebrows. Excellent writing in a great style in which
the author errupts into laughter while reading it!
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Title: The White Tree · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 94
Reviewer: Madeleine · 2006-07-23 20:00:31
Although I have a quite different perception of the characters of
Aragorn and Faramir and their relationship, I have thoroughly enjoyed
every single story LH has written so far. You simply have to get hooked
by her mature style and the depth of her storylines.

This short story is a true gem, giving account of the beginning of the
relationship of the two men. Both in a way still wary of each other, a
simple misconception on Faramirs part and his fierce reaction to
Aragorns apparently secretive removal of the old tree of Gondor and
its replacement by the sapling, causes a first trial in the relationship
of those two, who will have to work together in the future for the good
of Gondor.

The authors describes the early dealings of the returned King and his
newly appointed Steward in a convincing way and with a unique plot,
which blends very well into Tolkiens universe.

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Title: Elfwine · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Fixed-Length Ficlet
· ID: 70
Reviewer: Madeleine · 2006-07-23 20:25:30
Éomers enthusiasm over the birth of his son and heir virtually bubbles
out of this drabble. I hope its going to last when the babe causes his
parents a few sleepless nights. Notabene, the parents and not just the
mother.
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Title: Lobelia's List · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 201
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:32:17
I found this to be a delightful use of 100 words and wonderfully
in-character. It's always fun to find something like this, where the
strength of characterization (in Lobelia's case: Attitude!) comes so
clearly from the under-currents through the specific word choices. Well
done!
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Title: Frodo: The Next Generation · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races:
Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 272
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:34:48
I enjoyed this rare crossover treat between my favorite two universes. I
claim quite a few fandoms, but Trek is my oldest and dearest love, and a
close second in my heart to Tolkien.

I especially appreciate the 'voices' of the characters being true to
character.
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Title: Tending · Author: Elemmire · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey Havens ·
ID: 769
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:35:08
This is very touching. I have to admit it isn't something that I've
wondered about and you make me feel the lack. I think it's admirable the
way you use this story, this topic, to bring out the background life,
the real life that continues on around the grand epic. Well done.
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Title: Hair · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 321
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:35:28
HAHAHA! Very funny. I can just imagine what the clean and neat Legolas
must have thought among the very-hairy Hobbits - not the mention the Men
and even the beard Istari. Gimli must have really pushed his limits of
tolerance and/or amazement.
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Title: Pity · Author: Elana · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 152
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:36:16
how incredibly insightful. That the ring would use Frodo's kindness
against home. I have always wondered how our dear sweet, strong Frodo
could have fallen to temptation, even to the One Ring, and this drabble
answers that very well. very well done.
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Title: The Last Thing He Said · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama · ID: 294
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:36:34
I especially enjoy alternate points of view such as you have here and I
find these to be well done. The reader is dropped smoothly into the
character and never jostled away from them. I like the steadfast loyalty
the emotional, simple questions.


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Title: Wizardry · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 179
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:37:26
I found this to be delightful. I've always remembered reading the
descriptions both of Gandalf and Aragorn and thought that Tolkien
intended both of them to have a good humor, and I like the way you have
portrayed that quality in this double drabble.
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Title: Horse Thief · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 365
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:37:50
Well, you know this was certain to catch my attention with the title,
and the note that it contains most of my favorite characters - and I
found it very enjoyable. I can't blame little Aragorn for picking the
horse he did, it seems like a most excellent choice, and I pity poor
Elladan for making such a mistake and having to apologize. Stubborn boy
indeed! I love your descriptions of Aragorns eyes and expressions. Very
well done.
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Title: Suspicion · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 791
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:38:05
I like the suprise and contrast of the suspicion of how right and how
wrong Sam was with Strider and later Gollum. Of course, he's right,
Aragorn can be quite dangerous if you're not on his side.
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Title: Legacy · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 299
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:38:25
Well done. I like how you pulled from the history to show the future. I
agree that Pippin would think of Boromir at a time like this.
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Title: The Remains of Power · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 228
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:38:42
What a fun way to pay a bet! A flock of ducks - very good. :) You've
done a wonderful job with this, I especially liked how you seamlessly
worked the fun elements in this otherwise frightful glimpse into
Sauruman's mind just after his downfall. I love the terms you use,
'wood-demons' and Gandalf's dangles.
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Title: Tinúviel, Tinúviel · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance: Rohan ·
ID: 103
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:39:01
I am always amazed at your ability and word-smithing, the choicest, most
visual, most powerful words, none wandering, none wasted. This is
another fine work, deep and insightful, not just a bit of a story, but
fully immersed in the minds and emotions of the characters. Well done.
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Title: Master of Shadows · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama · ID: 245
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:39:16
I know I've reviewed this before, but I can't help commenting again to
give you points here. :) As is all your writing each of these chapters
are powerfully emotional, visceral and emotional. I especially enjoy
your insights into the mind and motives of the Witch King.
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Title: The King's Surgeon · Author: SurgicalSteel · Races: Men:
Incomplete · ID: 845
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:39:34
One thing I especially enjoy about the MEFAs is finding new authors
whose work I haven't read before and I was delighted to find you and
this unique story. I especially enjoy this type of gap-filler, the
filling in of the lives of others behind the main stage of the main
saga. Well done, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Title: A Darkened Heart · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 774
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:39:50
B7, you know how much I enjoy this particular drabble. I find it to be
especially insightful and touching emotionally. I am a Boromir fan and
always have a difficult time reconciling with his betrayal and fall in
spite of his sacrifice. This helps to me see him, I think, as Tolkien
meant for him to be seen as the Darkness entered his heart. Thank you
for making this available.
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Title: Elemental Spirits · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 693
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:40:11
Marigold, I truely enjoyed these insightful descriptions of the
fellowship. I found them to be especially touching and well-done - each
keyed tightly into the character as I imagine that Tolkien himself meant
them to be. This is the kind of fanfiction that I most deeply appreciate
- that which reflects the depth of the characters and their ties to Arda
which is so much a part of all of us.
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Title: Spirit of Fire · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 196
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:40:39
Hi Marta, I like this a lot. So often, Feanor's madness is portrayed,
people seem to forget, or maybe it isn't as dramatic to write of his
greatness rather than his insanity. We're told that he was the greatest
in many ways and it was lovely to read this drabble about him from
Nerdanel's viewpoint, speaking of her love for him.
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Title: Claws · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 835
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:41:06
LOL! Bad!Raven

The thing that strikes me about your writing is the strength, both
visual and emotional, or what you *don't* say. Your writing is so tight,
your words choices so precise, that you are able to pack an incredible
amount of impact into a (much too quick) 100 words. I honestly can't
think of anyone else who could use both corvine and hidey-hole in the
point of view of one character and make it a consistant voice!

I find this particular drabble to be as fine an example of it's kind as
I can ever remember seeing - focusing in to look at the technical
elements of setup, conflict and resolution, even an entirely belivable
POV switch with such strong and distinctive voices - then pulling back
to re-read the amazingly smooth narrative is a double delight. Thank
you! Becky
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Title: The Oathbreakers · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 42
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:41:27
Oh, this is tear-wrenching, to consider Boromir amoung those, but also
fitting, for what he did and to grant him release from that. This is the
kind of drabble that I especially love, one that will settle the reader
in and then throw them out for a loop and leave them gasping for breath
at the end.
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Title: Distant Lands · Author: Acacea · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 76
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:41:47
*giggle* I like this a lot, sweet Faramir obsessing on Eowyn, seeing her
homeland as so much more exciting than other, exotic, far-distant lands.
Well done.
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Title: Call To Arms · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Humor: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 857
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:42:05
HAHAHAHA!! Love the twist at the end - it took me totally by surprise
and I laughed out loud.
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Title: Midwinter in Mordor · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 872
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:42:25
*shudder* - very gruesome. I loved it!
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