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Title: For Every Evil 2 <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3477152/1/> ý Author:
Mirrordance<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=757>ý
ý ID:
119<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=119>
Reviewer: juno_magic<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=358>ý
2007-06-01 13:16:45
This modern day AU story is original, refreshing and unique.

Plot and especially pacing are superb. In some ways the action-packed story
can be compared to the best aspects of thrillers written by authors like
Grisham, Clancy or Dan Brown. Just like these stories "For Every Evil 2" is
impossible to put down. The flow and the rush of the story are simply
perfect. A definite page turner!

If anything, the chapters and scenes are a bit on the short side. However,
they are still well within the limit of what can be considere an average
chapter length for fanfiction.

Description and setting are generally sparse in the style of modern novels,
with a few glorious exceptions (such as the chaos in Legolas' apartment -
that was hilarious, very well done). A bit more description, a bit more
setting might make the story an even more pleasant read, but it is already
very balanced, so that this is no detriment to the quality of the story in
general.

The characterization of the story relies heavily on the general vision of
the characters of the Fellowship as generated by the movies. But while it
sometimes seems that the LOTR characters are used like easy "labels" -
because it's simply clear how readers will react when "Gimli" or "Boromir"
act in a certain way - this is done adroitly and skillfully, always
achieving the best possible effect.

And there are - sometimes very tiny - scenes that really let the LOTR
connection of the characters shine dramatically and highlight stories that
run deep into the past of Middle-earth. That way the story always stays
close to LOTR in spite of its modern setting and plot.

Additionally, the characters of this story are extraordinary and compelling,
namely Chandra, YinYang, Julianna and Montes. They are fleshed out and feel
very real.

Although details concerning style and language (especially the use of
tenses) can still be improved, there is nothing that keeps the reader from
enjoying the story.

All in all, "For Every Evil 2" is definitely one of the best and most
original modern Tolkien fan fiction stories available.
Title: Strange
Stars<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=6954>ý
Author:
Jael<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=685>ý
Races: Cross-Cultural ý ID:
120<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=120>
Reviewer: juno_magic<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=358>ý
2007-06-01 14:01:07
This is one of the most unusual Tolkien fan fiction stories I have ever
read. Most of all, it proves that even the most extravagant "Alternative
Universe" ideas can be written well.

The author finds a way to create an absolutely believable background for
Legolas' unusual mission of travelling to the court of the Haradric emperor
in the guise of a courtesan. The reader quickly suspends her disbelief and
readly accompanies Legolas on this chancy diplomatic errand.

Jael's Haradric "býthnaru" is not a prostitute. The "býthnaru" is a figure
with the same cultural depth as a geisha. Indeed, in some ways the story
reminds of "Memoirs of a Geisha" in its compelling, bittersweet strangeness.

The plot moves along easily, alternating tense and more languid chapters,
following a winding path between political and sexual intrigue. Every
chapter has its own plot within the plot and highlights an aspect of the
Haradric culture, of Legolas' mission and of Legolas' character.

What is most remarkable about this story is how the author uses sexual
situations as a stylistic device. These situtations show cultural
differences, drive the plot of the story, and give insight in the various
characters in a masterful way.

Some scenes will make some readers very uncomfortable, although they do not
cross the verge to NC-17. But this effect is obviously intended, and very
successful: no scene will leave the reader unmoved!

The setting of the story is rich and deep, the descriptive passages allow
the reader to taste the sweet wine of a far away country and to hear the
lament of peacocks. The country and the culture of the Haradrim really come
to life in this novella. Alien, sometimes strange, but absolutely authentic.

In addition to the unusual, intriguing plot this story has truly unique and
impressive characters.

Most of all, Legolas always remains true to the Elf we know from "Lord of
the Rings", in spite of certain changes due to the "alternative universe"
approach of the story. He remains a steadfast, loyal friend, and in spite of
the sexual situations into which he is drawn (almost) never loses that air
of Elvish aloofness. The author imbues Legolas with a sweetness of character
that gives an amazing warmth to the story and helps the reader to stick with
the story even through unpleasant, tense scenes.

Last but not least, the original characters are amazing. Tolkien once said
something along the lines of how the mountains glimpsed in the distance are
what makes a story a really great read. Concerning the orignal characters in
"Strange Stars" this is definitely true. Every character has a life, a
history, a story of his or her own, sometimes only hinted at, and always
compelling.

It is to be hoped that many readers and reviewers will be willing to give
this story a chance in spite of its unusual premise. If they don't, they
miss an intriguing and memorable story.


Title: Not Fade
Away<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=6416>ý
Author:
Jael<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=685>ý
Genres: Drama: Elves in Later Ages ý ID:
127<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=127>
Reviewer: juno_magic<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=358>ý
2007-06-01 14:28:45
This is a wonderful, lighthearted modern day Tolkien fanfic story. But in
spite of its humourous touch, it connects to canon in a believable way, thus
creating an outstanding AU.

By showing how Elves might have come back to Middle-earth, and how they
might have endured even today without fading away certainly alleviates the
keen disappointment felt at the end of LOTR.

Concerning the main characters of the story, it's very satisfying to get
such a unique and sane glimpse at the family dynamics of Legolas' family.
The protagonists, their stories and their behaviour feel real and
believable. One charm of the story is how unnamed or less well-known elves
get their say in this story, granting the reader delightful new
perspectives.

The protagonist is really well done. She's neither too good nor too bad to
be true, and spectacularly real, which makes her very easy to relate to and
to root for.

One of the highlights of the story is definitely that it doesn't go
mainstream concerning the romance sub-plots. Here we have definitely unusual
relationships - very believable, and funn.

Many stories that belong to the genre "humor" end up not being very funny at
all, but rather silly. This story is different. Well-handled emotions and a
fast-paced plot make it difficult to put the story down.

Little details delight the reader - the occupation of Elves in the modern
world, the dangers of the modern world for Elves ... always original,
refreshing, and a lot of fun.

Last but not least the style of writing is thoroughly enjoyable. Clear,
engagine prose, an eye for the hilarious without overdoing it, and dialogue
that perfectly fits characters and scenes make for a great read.

Fluffy and funny, this is not filling, but makes the reader long for more!

Title: The Course of
Love<http://aranel-took.fancrone.net/stories/col_contents.php>ý
Author: Aranel
Took<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=600>ý
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ý ID:
179<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=179>
Reviewer: juno_magic<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=358>ý
2007-06-02 10:10:46
"The Course of Love" is a wonderful sequel to "The Roots of the Ivy",
Aranel Took's story about the half-hobbit Ivy, daughter of Merry and ýowyn.
This story follows Ivy's children as they grow up, come of age and find
love. It is a entertaining, epic story that presents the culture of Hobbits
and Rohirrim in a very realistic, loving way.

But although "The Course of Love" is generally a lighthearted, romantic
comedy, there are also darker moments that show clearly that Hobbits are not
happy fluffy children, but real people. The plot and perspective of the
story are unique, original and refreshing, because the author dares to move
beyond canon characters to many strong original characters. That is what
makes Aranel Took's stories so very enjoyable: no matter if she writes about
Hobbits, dwarves, or even Legolas, her characters are never flat, cardboard
characters, but always real, full of life.

While the story is epic enough to satisfy readers who prefer novels, the
pacing never lags, and the individual chapters are crisp and clear-cut.

The story's forte is undeniably brilliant dialogue. Witty and funny, it is
also used as a stylistic device to give depth to the various characters.

Last but not least it's a very moving, touching story that will elicit many
"Awww's". But it's also wise to keep the door closed, because other scenes
will have the reader roar with laughter!

All in all: perfect summer reading for everyone who loves Hobbits and
original stories!

Title: Stirrings of
Shadow<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=5257>ý
Author:
Fiondil<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=743>ý
Genres: Adventure: Incomplete ý ID:
233<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=233>
Reviewer: dancingkatz<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=770>ý
2007-06-03 16:48:29
This is a wonderful story in both plot, writing style, and
characterization, particularly of the younger Aragorn and King Thengel. I
have always wondered what my favourite Ranger had gotten up to during his
years in Rohan that would give him such a shining reference from Thengel to
Ecthelion when he went to Minas Tirith. I was very pleased to find that the
Aragorn in this story, while eventually warranting that excellent reference
is still young, making mistakes and learning from them at the same time he
is clever, brave and honourable. So many stories make him out to be more
perfect than can be believed regardless of his age or experience (or lack
thereof) that he can't possibly be the same character in Tolkien's books. I
can very easily see that the Aragorn in this gap-filler story will
eventually be the man who becomes the King of the Reunited Kingdoms.

The depiction of the Rohirrim as a race, culture and as individuals sets
this story apart from many others concerning Gondor's allies. It is very
clear that the author has a good knowledge of the Anglo-Saxons on which
Tolkien based this culture. The naming conventions and use of Old English as
well as the smoothly integrated descriptions of people, places, horses and
so forth make the Rohirrim real, not flat stereotypes. Thengel and the other
inhabitants of the Riddermearc are real, interesting and not just names in a
longfather tree.

The mysteries and intrigues, the interactions of Aragorn and the Rohirrim,
the intrigues and humor amidst everything else make this an unforgettable
story to be read again and again,
Title: Fruition<http://community.livejournal.com/sons_of_gondor/371588.html>ý
Author:
EdorasLass<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=299>ý
Genres: Alternate Universe: Gondor or Rohan ý ID:
7<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=7>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177>ý
2007-06-03 17:10:20
We know that EdorasLass, well known as the author of the charming
Nanny-and-bitty-'Mir stories, can also do drama, suspense, and creepiness ý
we've read ["Come When You Are Ready" and "Love Me And Despair"]. So it
shouldn't come as any kind of a surprise at all that, in this startling AU,
she can twist favorite characters up and down and inside out, to give us a
whole new and slightly horrifying world to consider.


With her skillful pen, she' s turned Middle-Earth's favorite Madonna figure,
Finduilas, into a two-faced witch, lecherous and demanding, with language
[more suited to a dockside whore]. She's given us the the swoonworthy
Imrahil as a Machiavellian prince, a corrupt and devious tool in his
family's long-standing plan to achieve control of Gondor. It's almost enough
to make you pity poor, besotted Denethor, willing to sacrifice his life in
defense of his wife's honor. And bewildered, unfortunate Thorongil ý locked
in his chamber, his world turned upside down within a matter of hours. His
moment of realization comes almost a split-second too late, and it is his
reflexes and training that save him. But even he is unable to thwart these
long-standing plans.

What I particularly love about AU's is that we * can * stop imagining when
we want to. It's a good thing ý I'm not sure what would have become of young
Boromir in this newly-imagined world, one where Faramir doesn't exist at
all! Ouch.
Title: Celebration <http://tanaquilotr.livejournal.com/29416.html> ý
Author: Tanaqui<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40>ý
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Drabble ý ID:
139<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=139>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177>ý
2007-06-03 20:04:58
I first read this drabble on a warm summer's day, hay-cutting time where I
live, and was enchanted by the warm, pastoral feel. It must have been
tremendously satisfying to Faramir and Eowyn, and to all the goodfolk of
Ithilien, to take a day to rest and celebrate the good life they are working
so hard to provide for themselves and their children. There's a festive,
Brueghel-esque feel to the tale ý I can almost hear the shouts of the
children, the good-natured taunts and laughter of the archers, and the
breathless hush of the crowd as Faramir begins to tell his tale.


Title: Remembering
Anew<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=5094>ý
Author: Pearl
Took <http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=72>ý
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ý ID:
88<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=88>
Reviewer: Cuthalion<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=407>ý
2007-06-03 20:21:14
I discovered "Remembering Anew" a few months ago... plus the fact that it
originally had been meant as a longer sequel to three small stories posted
before. Those three little tales ("Remembering", "Remembering More" and
"Remembering Aright") tell the story of Jebbin and Other Brandybuck,
descendants of Merry Brandybuck and Pippin Took 400 years after the Ring
War; during a "Hide and Seek"-game in Brandy Hall the two little boys
discover a messy mathom room - and two ghosts. They have no idea that this
is the beginning of a thrilling adventure...

Though the three little vignettes are beautifully written and a delight to
read, the longer sequel "Remembering Anew" was what really captured my
heart. Jebbin and Other have grown up meanwhile... in a Shire that has
entirely forgotten about the truth of the Quest. Frodo Baggins is only
remembered as an addle-brained old fool, Samwise Gamgee's glory has faded
during the centuries and the "true" heroes are Meriadoc and Peregrin. Their
- ridiculously exaggerated - adventures are common "knowledge" in every
hobbit school. But Jebbin and Other know the truth (because they actually
know the "true" heroes), and when Jebbin discovers the original tale of the
Ring War and dares to write an own book about his new revelations, a
dangerous avalanche of slander and deceit breaks down on him.

The style is wonderful, the author has a palpable, deep love for hobbits and
their society (including all strenghts and weaknesses). The idea that
historians might mess up with the true story of the Ringbearer and his brave
deeds (with the evil "assistance" of a very unexpected villain) is more than
original, and the twists and tribulations of the intricate plot keep the
reader hooked from the first word up to the last. This is one of the most
amazing and interesting tales I've read for years. Well done!

Title: Brothers at
Heart<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=4512>ý
Author:
Radbooks<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=428>ý
Times: Mid Third Age: 2851 - 3017 TA ý ID:
330<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=330>
Reviewer: runnerbeast<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=712>ý
2007-06-06 04:08:51
I really loved this story. I was quickly pulled into Aragorn's journey
from Rivendell and away from his elvish family as he takes up residence with
his dunedain family. I thought it was fun reading about all the struggles he
had, big and small, to over come as he grew accustom to living with humans,
and discovered this new and capable side of himself. It was amazing how the
author, slowly took him and us from seeing him as Estel, and from his roots
with the elves, and emerged him as Aragorn the Chieftain to the Dunedain. It
was so creatively and smoothly done amidst all the daily life, relationships
and heartaches going on in the main part of the story.

Every turn in this story left me waiting for the next part to see what would
happen and to see how and if Aragorn could handle the situation, which made
the story very exciting and fun to read. I wondered if the dunedain men that
had never met him before would follow him as their leader. The author made
the situations in the wilderness believable and realistic as darkness
started to cover Middle Earth. She brought out things that I had never
thought of before and it was very interesting and fascinating.

I think the way this adventure brings together the close friendship of
Aragorn and Halbarad is my very favorite part of this story. The major
crisis in the story brings them ultimately to a better understanding of
themselves, the trust they know they can have in each other, and the start
of their deep life long friendship. They truly become brothers at heart.
Title: Relaxation
Techniques<http://edoraslass.livejournal.com/95033.html>ý Author:
EdorasLass<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=299>ý
Genres: Romance: Pre-Ring War ý ID:
283<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=283>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177>ý
2007-06-07 00:50:58
It's a very simple story, really: Thýodred is angry and overwrought from a
difficult encounter with Grima and the King's Council; Boromir helps him to
unwind. The result, from the skilled and loving hands of EdorasLass, is
neither smut nor schmoop but a heartening tale of honesty, affection, and
trust.

What I've always loved about EdorasLass's writing of these characters is how
she vividly portrays them as perfectly matched in power and strength, and
the affection and regard of their people. But they are also in complete
understanding of each other's burdens and insecurities, more so than anyone
else in the world. Their rare meetings provide opportunities to relax and be
themselves without self-consciousness, allowing them to set aside for a time
the Alpha-male personas they must continually present to the world. Although
physical intimacy, past and future, is implicit in the story, the focal
point is the emotional intimacy that exists between Boromir and Thýodred,
which draws and binds them far more firmly than simple passion.

I would certainly be remiss in my comments if I did not dwell a bit on the
imagery here: Theodred pacing the room like a restless lion; the bemused
Boromir ordering him to sit down; the moment when it seems their whole
relationship hangs in the balance. [ý"Sit. Down." Boromir repeated
forcefully, crossing his arms over his chest and facing Thýodred squarely.
"You need to calm yourself, and you cannot do that when you are stalking
around the room in such a manner."

Thýodred's eyes narrowed dangerously at the unmistakable note of authority
in Boromir's voice. A heavy tension suddenly hung between them, but Boromir
ignored it and only continued to stare at the other man as he might a new,
impertinent recruit. He hoped that he had not pushed Thýodred too far ý
Boromir was aware that he stood a chance of having that anger turned on
him.]

And certainly any Boromir fan will appreciate the loving detail with which
EdorasLass describes of the skillful use to which our hero puts those hands!
A very satisfying addition to the chronicles of Boromir and Thýodred's
relationship.


Title: Miss Dora Baggins' Book of
Manners<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=4819&cid=19283>ý
Author:
Dreamflower<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=115>ý
Genres: Humor: The Shire or Buckland ý ID:
239<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=239>
Reviewer: Marta<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16>ý
2007-06-07 01:25:56
This piece is neat, not just for it's insightful world-building about
hobbit society but also becasue of the voice. It sounds like the perfect
hobbit goodwife. I enjoyed the read.
Title: No Man's
Child<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=4835>ý
Author:
Anoriath<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=354>ý
Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete ý ID:
198<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=198>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177>ý
2007-06-08 00:49:54
In this richly detailed story, a gravely wounded Aragorn is recovering "at
home" in the Angle, the northern lands traditionally occupied by the
Dunedain. The seriousness of his injury reiterates to companions and
counselors a burdensome fact: the line of Elendil will fail unless Aragorn
can produce an heir. Amid the burdens of constant warfare in the North, the
fate of Gondor seems a far-off dream, and so Aragorn consents to take a
woman of the Dunedain to wife. Nienelen, his bride, soon realizes that
another holds his heart, but her duty to her Dunedain heritage is no less
than his, and she accepts her responsibility to bear his children, order his
household, and protect and lead the folk of the Angle in his absence.

Anoriath is an artist, no less than Brueghel the Elder, and her pen brings
the extraordinary tapestry of the Angle to life just as vividly as his
brush. No detail is too small for her meticulous and loving examination:
cooking, dyeing, and herblore; animal husbandry; Dwarvish visitors;
agricultural economics of the mid-Third Age. She has created a world rich
beyond even the Professor's imagining.

When her view moves inside though Aragorn's house, though, Anoriath's
wordcraft takes on the cool northern light of a Vermeer painting. Voices are
muted to the barest whisper, and words are of the coolest courtesy, for the
anguish that underlies this tale is the desolation of Nienelen and Aragorn's
relationship. It's a heartbreaking tale to read, yet we cannot help but be
transfixed by the exquisite telling of that tale.


Title: Flame Rekindled <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3048804/1/> ý Author:
Istarnie<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=816>ý
Races: Elves: Incomplete ý ID:
370<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=370>
Reviewer: Ellie<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=768>ý
2007-06-08 16:41:40
You have so wonderfully captured the tortured soul of Feanor and I am in
awe of your take on what a spirit must go through in order to heal. You have
done fantastic job of portraying Feanor and how torn he is between hatred,
jealousy, pride, and love. I really like the way Mandos shows up every now
and then and prods along the healing process. I love the way you have built
this up with the early jealous thoughts on the arena and then the way you
tie it all together at the end.

I also loved the part where Feanor is realising how he and Fingolfin should
have been there together to face Morgoth, fighting shoulder to shoulder as
the proud sons of Finwe and in that way they would have overcome MOrgoth
instead of Fingo0lfin having to face him alone and Feanor never facing him
at all.

I had never before considered the two of them standing together to face
anything. They truly would have been a united front difficult to overcome.
It is so very sad that this realization never came until too late for either
of them.

Your Nerdanel with her soothing words and her ability to calm his agitated
fea is absolutely wonderful. WOW!

This truly is powerful writing and I ma enjoying this sotry very much. Keep
up the most excellent work!

Title: The Waves' Song <http://lady-branwyn.livejournal.com/40828.html> ý
Author: Branwyn<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=240>ý
Genres: Drama: General Drabble ý ID:
6<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=6>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177>ý
2007-06-09 15:26:39
So very beautiful and sad. I love the way you've used seafarer's terms:
[waves, mast, sail] to deftly evoke Arwen's melancholy, the sea-longing of
her people superimposed upon her anguish over the loss of her beloved spouse
and companion. Your imagery, as always, is extraordinary: the lone
elf-woman, the streaming hair, the skittering leaves. There's such an
aching, autumnal feeling of loss and desolation. What a heartrending figure
she must have presented to any of those who chanced to see her thus. I
wonder what stories were told about her by those who watched from the
village below.
Title: The Lesson <http://lady-branwyn.livejournal.com/60087.html> ý
Author: Branwyn<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=240>ý
Genres: Drama: Gondor Drabble ý ID:
29<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=29>
Reviewer: annmarwalk<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=177>ý
2007-06-09 15:38:59
[How gently men are schooled in war, so gently that they see not the
lesson.]

Another thoughtful tale from the pen of Lady Branwyn. Faramir ponders how
effortlessly, yet efficiently, men are taught to kill. For the most noble of
reasons, of course: to feed themselves and their families, to protect their
wealth, for the survival of their homeland. All quite necessary purposes,
yet to the insightful Faramir, there's a melancholy undertone to the lesson.
I wonder what he would think of our age, where killing is glorified as
recreation and entertainment; yet we cry out in dismay when madmen take that
fateful step from fantasy to reality.


Title: Romance<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?stid=6648&SPOrdinal=7>ý
Author:
Greywing<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=739>ý
Genres: Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet ý ID:
375<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=375>
Reviewer: Oshun<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=589>ý
2007-06-09 21:02:02
I'm an idiot that somebody else actually nominated this story and I did
not, since I feel at least in some small part responsible for forcing you to
write it (as part of the coterie of writers who made you endure those
endless Eomer/Lothiriel romances!). Anyway, the best revenge is a good
offense--I'm sure I got that wrong. Nevermind, this is an awesome romance.
One of the best ever, and, as a dear friend often tells me, the most
exciting eroticism is that which leaves EVERYTHING to the imagination. Loves
those lines: ["]They kissed in the darkness, and did a great many things
besides. Imrahil found them.["] You are a naughty girl, Greywing, and people
think you are so innocent. I know better! Congratulations on a great small
piece.
Title: Perchance To
Dream<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=5295&cid=21890>ý
Author:
Cathleen<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=579>ý
Genres: Drama: The Fellowship ý ID:
386<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=386>
Reviewer: tracyboo<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=819>ý
2007-06-10 01:34:54
Cathleen,
Oh yeah, I'd say this winter has proven inspirational to somebody! LOL! This
is definitely written by somebody who is less than enamored with the cold!
LOL!

I enjoyed the interaction amongst the Fellowship and the thing with the
frozen frog was both sort of creepy and kind of sad. Poor critter! I loved
the dream sequence. It felt very powerful and prophetic and I think that it
helped give Pip what he needed to go on. Wonderfully creative story hon!

Tracy
Title: "A Cat Of A Different
Color"<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=5229&cid=21662>ý
Author:
Cathleen<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=579>ý
Genres: Mystery ý ID:
385<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=385>
Reviewer: tracyboo<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=819>ý
2007-06-10 01:37:07
Cathleen,
This story was not only great fun, but I felt it was very much in keeping
with Tolkien's style of story telling!
Tracy
Title: A Million Little Stars To Light Their
Way<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=5193&cid=21457>ý
Author:
Cathleen<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=579>ý
Genres: Drama: The Shire ý ID:
387<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=387>
Reviewer: tracyboo<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=819>ý
2007-06-10 01:39:20
Cathleen,
Oh, but that was heartbreaking to read! Merry and Pippin will always
remember Boromir with nothing less than love and respect. What a loss!
Tracy
Title: May It Be a Light to You in Dark
Places<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=5134&cid=21167>ý
Author:
Cathleen<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=579>ý
Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor or Rohan ý ID:
388<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=388>
Reviewer: tracyboo<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=819>ý
2007-06-10 01:41:06
Cathleen,
Loved this story hon! Of course you know that already! LOL!
Tracy
Title: Youngest
Son<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=5207>ý
Author:
Bodkin<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=411>ý
Genres: Romance: Second Age or Earlier ý ID:
406<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=406>
Reviewer: Ellie<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=768>ý
2007-06-11 19:35:10
I love this interaction between Finarfin and Earwen. The way Finarfin
admires Earwen from afar and the way she looks upon him from the distance,
egged on by her amused and highly amusing girlfriends is so cute! I liked it
when her friends points out that Finarfin is much more muscular than he
first looked after he takes off his shirt and his saving of Earwen's little
brother from his unpleasant encounter in the waves was charming. Finarfin
handles the annoying little brother very well and tries to be a gentleman
toward Earwen especially after the pleasant distraction of her clingy wet
dress. The dark foreboding at the end was a nice touch and a reminder of
what is to come for them both. I always enjoy your stories and your deep,
often clever insight into the characters you portray in them. The settings
are so well described that I feel as if I am really present with the
characters as they interact. Good work and well done!
Title: Decorum<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=6291>ý
Author:
Larner<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=242>ý
Genres: Humor: The Shire or Buckland ý ID:
59<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=59>
Reviewer: Dwimordene<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>ý
2007-06-15 19:08:40
Dora Baggins and her reams of good advice ý I had vague memories of this
very minor character from Bilbo's eleventy-first birthday preparations.
Having had an excellent fic experience when somebody retrieved Angelic
Baggins and her mirror, I decided to give this a try. I was not
disappointed!

The story turns on the outward and the inward, or the appearance and the
absolute heart of the thing: what is decorum? Dora Baggins thinks she knows,
and her precise, proud, critical, and primly pompous observations of her
book-binding relatives' manners are priceless. They are as precise as they
need to be in order to convey that slightly petty, anal-retentive character,
even as we know from Frodo's thoughts that his good manners are a show. Of
course, one might think that that's exactly what manners are for ý for other
people, not to be idolized in themselves.

Dora's shock to find her relatives a little later on indulging in terribly
non-decorous ways is the repayment on a virtue that has perhaps begun to
ossify.

But perhaps even that was a good thing, or else her appreciation of decorum
went deeper than was apparent. When it matters most, she recognizes true
gentility and decorum and honors it. She may not be one of those
revolutionary characters ý she doesn't have enough of the fire in her for
that, I think ý but she's good people in the end.

And of course, a model of decorum.
Title: Passages<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=723>ý
Author: Isabeau
of Greenlea<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=182>ý
Genres: Drama: Incomplete ý ID:
60<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=no&form_story_filter=60>
Reviewer: Dwimordene<http://mefawards.net/MEFA2007/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>ý
2007-06-15 19:08:55
There is something about that awkward stage between being a child and
becoming a (young) adult that rarely fails to pique interest. Perhaps it is
because we have all been there before (or will be there eventually). The
process of disillusionment with parents, of finding out they, too, have
their secrets and their regrets, and that we do not always understand these
or agree with them is certainly universal.

Isabeau's fanfic universe continues to grow more elaborate, and this story
focuses on the OC bastard son of Boromir, as he starts that passage from
childhood to adulthood and begins to discover some content for long-sensed
secrets about his late father. What he does not expect is that gaining
insight into those secrets will place him at odds with his adoptive father,
another of Isabeau's OCs, Andrahar.

From there on out, there's intrigue, slave-trade, rescues, and relationships
to be mended. While the story reads best and make most sense to those who
know the backstories, I think it is still possible to enjoy it without
having these things.


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