Yahoo Forum Archive
This is an archive of the MEFA Yahoo Group, which was shut down by Yahoo in 2019. The archive can be sorted by month and by topic ID. You can use your browser to search by keyword within the month or topic you have open.
Jan | Feb | Mar | Apr | May | Jun | Jul | Aug | Sep | Oct | Nov | Dec | |
---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
2004 | - | - | - | 182 | 1042 | 655 | 89 | 25 | 263 | 362 | 316 | 285 |
2005 | 189 | 56 | 107 | 538 | 347 | 446 | 97 | 276 | 194 | 358 | 565 | 136 |
2006 | 231 | 66 | 27 | 76 | 117 | 139 | 127 | 56 | 67 | 66 | 159 | 79 |
2007 | 20 | 25 | 7 | - | 29 | 72 | 99 | 143 | 3 | 185 | 83 | 103 |
2008 | 56 | 13 | 3 | 54 | 240 | 141 | 274 | 77 | 51 | 60 | 90 | 106 |
2009 | 28 | 3 | - | 39 | 194 | 101 | 72 | 27 | 22 | 15 | 36 | 24 |
2010 | 67 | - | 1 | 4 | 103 | 138 | 129 | 32 | 13 | 16 | 3 | 30 |
2011 | 1 | - | 17 | 2 | 6 | 25 | 90 | 61 | 32 | 7 | 5 | 8 |
2012 | 30 | - | - | - | 8 | 122 | 76 | - | - | - | - | - |
2013 | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - |
2014 | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | 1 | - | 2 |
2015 | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - |
2016 | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - |
2017 | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - |
2018 | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - |
2019 | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | - | 1 | - | - |
Msg# 8348
MEFA Reviews for October 26, 2007 (Part 2) Posted by Ann October 26, 2007 - 4:01:13 Topic ID# 8348Title: Beneath a Gibbous Moon · Author: Bodkin · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 4
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:21:22
Well-written and very well thought-out. Each chapter can stand on its
own, but the shared parallels are striking and highlight the
continuities between these two great lines of descendants, making the
sum greater than its very considerable parts.
The settings are carefully chosen for maximum impact, and the
characterizations are each distinct even as certain similarities are
drawn. (Of them all, I think I love Thranduil the intemperate Wood-elf
and Elros the wise half-elf the most.) The interactions are are
handled extremely well, and have a nice blend of humor and deep
philosophy.
And I have to say, I adore this quote: ["like eagles trying to raise
squirrel kits"]. I don't think I've seen a more entertaining
description of Ainur/Eruhini relations...
Title: Property Rights · Author: Salsify · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 74
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:22:09
This is a gem among gap-fillers which will be in the back of my mind
every time I read "The Hobbit". Salsify has taken a brief mention of
Fram and Scatha from Tolkien's history of the Rohirrim, and shows how
it could be of immense importance during a tense moment between
different cultures. She manages this with clarity and supreme
believability.
The characterizations of Bard and Thorin are true to the book, and yet
their exchange after Smaug's death is given a new depth. Both Man and
Dwarf are shown to be products of their racial (and racist) beliefs,
and while both have reasonable intentions and expectations, these are
lost in the misunderstandings and preconceived notions that they bring
to the table.
Title: Rock and Hawk · Author: Adaneth · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 221
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:24:35
Adaneth's stories came highly recommended to me this year, and I am
very thankful that I have had the opportunity to immerse myself in her
world. Her writing style and technique are wonderful, making the land
and people flawlessly come alive in my mind, and would leave a great
many published authors envious.
Her characters, all OCs, are marvellously rendered and handily claimed
their places in my heart almost immediately. The beautiful and wild
scenery is the perfect backdrop for her people, the descriptions full
without being overwhelming. I especially appreciated how she deftly
appropriated Scots/Gaelic terminology and language to help set the
tone, as I agree with her that ["words have their own unique flavors,
which contribute to character and setting in subtle yet powerful ways."]
The tension between Saelon and her people and their expectations of
her; between races, with their artfully explored cultural differences;
between the defenders and their unknown, preying horror - all is
handled and interwoven beautifully. The development of the various
threads is done with a keen eye to appropriate pacing, the dialogues
are marvellous, and the attention to detail simply amazing. Finally, I
am in awe of the level of research and knowledge that has been brought
to bear in the creation of this work, and am thrilled that the author
is continuing the saga.
Title: Fair Folk and Foul · Author: Adaneth · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 222
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:27:01
Everything that I loved from Rock and Hawk applies to this sequel in
abundance. Once again, excellent writing and characterizations,
descriptions both beautiful and horrific, well-conceived
world-building and compelling plot - all of it bound together into a
fantastic whole. Adaneth additionally proves herself capable of
enthralling action scenes as we get into the battle against the fiends.
I think the Dwarven characterizations and PoVs alone make this story
worth reading. Adaneth takes the little bit of Dwarven culture
developed by Tolkien and seamlessly extrapolates from it, so
believably that it *all* feels as though it must have come from
Tolkien's own mind.
I enjoyed how some common conceptions are twisted a bit via Saelon's
sympathetic, but unusual (for the times) personality: normally the
Rangers and Elrond's sons are unequivocally the "good guys", and here
I found myself disgruntled and fed up with them on Saelon's behalf.
One of the most wrenching moments is at the end, when all the
incorrect and preconceived notions that surround Veylin and Saelon's
friendship force them into a more distant relationship. They must veer
away from a wonderful easy familiarity and stumble their way into
something more formal for both their sakes, and I am left eager for
the next installment to learn how successfully they manage it...
Title: Diversion · Author: Mar'isu · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: General Drabble · ID: 708
Reviewer: Ellie · 2007-10-07 04:28:06
This is a very interesting take on why Glorfindel did not go with the
fellowship. I like the way you have Galdor of the Grey Havens being
the same Galdor of the Tree from Gondolin. Having two powerful lords
of Gondolin supposedly accompanying the Ring to the Grey Havens and
then supposedly take ship to Valinor would have been a very
interesting deception indeed. Well done!
Title: The Most Beautiful · Author: Meril · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 508
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:28:13
I love the lyrical and flowing prose, and how the musical theme is
woven throughout. The description of the Great Music makes this story
worth reading all on its own, with how real and textured and
*constant* it is to an Ainu. And then there is more...
Melian's perspective is exquisitely captured. The items chosen to
illustrate why she stays and the description of each are perfect. Of
course, Elu and Luthien - but also the Green Elves. Her love and
wonder at Luthien are highlights for me, and excellently capture the
miracle of children: That her daughter even exists at all; that
Luthien learns, and grows, and is her own being separate from those
that created her, even as Melian sees some of her essence within her
child. The characterization of Elu is very well done and slightly
unusual for me. My heart aches with the sweet, quiet knowledge that
all she loves are but minor parts of the Great Music, and she will not
relinquish them.
The story arc is well laid out, showing us Melian's personal growth
from simple cares to more complicated loves. We end with her apt
compromise: Singing up not a forest, but one flower, and she is
content with her choice.
More, this view of Melian as one torn between two worlds goes far in
explaining her actions in the Silm. I have always found it difficult
to understand why she readily abandons Doriath after sheltering her
husband's people for so long. But with this powerful constant pull,
and all her beautiful strains ended - truly, why would she stay? A
magnificent and well-conceived story.
Title: The Beginning of a Wonderful Friendship · Author: Imhiriel ·
Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 629
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:33:32
The characterizations and interactions in this vignette simply shine
from start to finish. There must have been many conflicts between the
newly-arrived Noldorin Elves and their distant Moriquendi kin, and
Imhiriel uses one of these to show us when a famous couple initially
meets.
First, what is not to like about this Celeborn? Passionate and proud,
he is quick to defend his heritage against the well-meaning but rather
patronizing interloper. The fact that Nerwen is actually able to
deflect him from his fierce and justified confrontation shows us the
depth of his dazed entrancement with her. The ending is a definite
squeeable moment for me, every time.
Celeborn's excellence doesn't overshadow all of the other wonderful
characterizations, however. I love humorous, wicked Nerwen; physically
dazzling, friendly but slightly clueless Finrod; and young, blushing
Luthien. Luthien in particular makes me laugh, with her pique aimed at
Celeborn being transformed into enchantment over Finrod, who barely
seems to notice her. (Unlike several other males later in the Silm
storyline.) I enjoy the contrast to her usual, more mature portrayal
of being unruffled and utterly entrancing.
Nerwen's very sisterly poke at Finrod was well handled, and I adore
the lovely description of her laugh. ["a surprisingly deep, mellow
sound, smooth as honey."] It fits her perfectly, and there is a
beautiful and apt contrast between the laughter of the two women: the
golden voice from Valinor and the silvery one from Beleriand's forests.
I must repeat: This story *begs* for a continuation.
Title: All that is gold... · Author: Perelleth · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 42
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-07 04:37:43
A good story that could have jumped out of the last chapters of THE
HOBBIT; wherein two restless souls come together in the kitchen of
Imladris and begin a lasting friendship. Excellent characterisation of
young Estel in particular, though Bilbo is also written well.
Title: Thengling Mighty · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 420
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-07 04:46:59
There is not enough attention paid to Theoden in fanfiction, at least
compared to his flashy nephew, frosty niece, and the presumably
handsome prematurely slain son who is sometimes paired with Boromir.
So I was quite intrigued when I heard of Linda's giving the dear old
Lord of the Mark a drabble. And I was not disappointed.
There's lovely dark-and-light symmetry here; as the drabble moves from
Theoden's nadir to his zenith. I find the last line to be really,
really beautiful, with an appealing Viking glory in it that is also
very Rohirric and very appropriate for Theoden King.
Title: In Aragorn's Safekeeping: Life in the King's House · Author:
Radbooks · Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 416
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-07 05:21:04
An enjoyable sequel in which thomas and Rebecca adjust to live in
Gondor,Rebecca slipping into her role as Aragorn's foster daughter far
more easily than Thomas.
I especially enjoyed the characterisations of Aragorn and Arwen and
Rebecca is a lovable OC.
Title: Daybreak · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 705
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-07 05:26:24
What must it have been like on the first morning after Sauron's defeat
to wake up to a new and hopeful world? This drabble expertly explores
Faramir's emotions on that eventful day.Faramir awakes with a
hangover,something I'm sure that would be a rarity for such a good and
wise man and then realises there was truly something to celebrate.
Who would not rejoice on such a day?
Title: The Exile · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 537
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-07 05:32:05
It is somewhat ambigious whether Aragorn intended Beregond's exile to
mean he could never see Minas tirith again or whether it merely meant
he was to move to Ithilien with Faramir and either interpretation is
valid. This moving piece takes the view that he could never return and
explores aspects of his exile I had not thought of before,such as
never seeing the New White Tree.
I especially liked the way Faramir's sympathy was portrayed.
Title: In Shadow Realm · Author: Legolass · Genres: Adventure · ID: 266
Reviewer: Michelle · 2007-10-07 12:18:22
Strictly speaking, "In Shadow Realm", a 180,000 word fic, is a
gapfiller, because Legolass take a passing moment in Tolkien's writing
(the skeleton lying by the door in the Mountain of the Dead) and
weaves a tale around said skeleton that is engaging, exciting, a
tear-jerker from time to time - and well-executed. There is angst,
drama, h/c, action and some mystery - but what makes this story so
enjoyable is the fact the story veers off into unexpected territory
without ever losing the credibility that this could very well happen
in Tolkien's world. It's always hardest to come up with an original
plot, write something totally different and still stay true to the
canon source. Legolass managed to keep that balance with ease, weaving
the story around the frame Tolkien provides with the trilogy.
First and foremost, it is an Aragorn/Legolas friendship fic and
Legolass excels in describing the love, trust and understanding
between them. If for nothing else, read the story for the friendship.
But it is also a fellowship-fic: The story starts ten years after
Sauron has been defeated and the remaining members of the fellowship
are gathering in Minas Tirith to celebrate and reminisce about old
times. Add to that a few assorted canon characters (the twins,
Celeborn) and some OCs (Hamille *needs* to be mentioned here, because
it's refreshing to see that Legolas is actually able to befriend
people before Aragorn came along - authors who allow the poor elf
friends aside from Aragorn are few and far between) and you have quite
a large and diverse cast to keep track of. Yet, things never get
confusing and no character is redudant. They all play their part in
the context of the story and they all get the chance to shine at one
point at least.
"In Shadow Realm" is definitely a story where you can fall in love
with the minor characters (that aren't minor to begin with), my
personal favourites were Celeborn and Gimli for whom I usually don't
even spare a passing thought. Gimli is boisterous but true of heart,
but he is never over the top or destroying the feel of a scene by a
superflous comment. And Celeborn - let's say Legolass managed to bring
him to life for me. He was deeply loyal to both Legolas (to whom he
feels a connection because they both stayed on in Middle Earth for
pretty much the same reasons) and Aragorn and it was exciting to see
him play such a vital part in the course of the story. He actually is
the one who saves everybody's behind when things get dire and it was
so good to see him as something else but the mindless puppy tagging
along with Galadriel.
The one thing you don't have in the story is orcs and wolves. Way too
often both are used if no other villains comes in handy. It gets
boring and repetitive. But Legolass took the pain to create a villain
(for lack of a better word) that is original and three-dimensional.
"In Shadow Realm" is a ghost story, and Aragorn is burdened with the
quest to put those ghosts to rest. They are not just there to move the
story to the next angsty plot point, they're an integral part of the
story and a lot of space is used to explain their history and
motivation. That pays off, as I have rarely seen an adversary for
Aragorn who was so fascinating all on its own.
Lastly, it should be said that Legolass is a masterful storyteller.
"In Shadow Realm" is a complicated story and there are a lot of
characters, twists and settings to keep track of. She never gets lost,
obviously enjoying to keep readers hanging in their seats waiting for
the next scene, the next important revelation. It seems it is her
hobby to withhold information until the point when it is absolutely
necessary for the story and that keeps readers guessing and on their
toes. She's also borrowing from film techniques a lot - cutting scenes
against each other and through that adding tension. Chapter 24 is a
perfect example of her executing that technique to full effect.
In short: A gripping story and a truly engaging epic - there should be
more of those around!
Title: Waters of Life · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 423
Reviewer: Michelle · 2007-10-07 12:20:47
I admit, I rarely read het, but Linda's stories are the ones for which
I gladly make an exception. At the bottom of her universe, though
there is angst, action, drama and h/c, are love, friendship, trust,
brotherhood. Therefore, reading her fics does not exactly make me feel
fluffy (that's too airy a word anyway). It's more content that is
projected to the reader. "Waters of Life" is a perfect example for
that feeling.
It's a little gapfiller, a short story depicting Arwen's and Aragorn
wedding anniversary. There is a trip to a lake, there is beautiful
nature. But the peaceful surroundings only point back at the love
Arwen and Aragorn share. They realize (probably not for the first or
the last time) how blessed they truly are.
In addition, Arwen seems somehow ethereal in this story - dancing and
singing, enjoying nature. And in contrast you have Aragorn's awe, his
self-perceived clumsiness. They are not so much contradicting each
other but complementing each other and I think, at heart, that's what
makes Linda's version of A/A so readable and enjoyable for me. They
balance each other, each makes the other a "better" person. And I
simply love following that journey!
Title: On Starless Waters Far Astray · Author: Empy · Genres:
Crossover · ID: 557
Reviewer: Michelle · 2007-10-07 12:22:06
It is not so easy to come by LOTR-crossovers, because authors tend to
bemoan the fact that the universe somehow doesn't lend itself to be
crossed. I admit, it can pose problems, but when you look at a story
like "On Starless Waters Far Astray" then you will notice that there
are certain other fandoms that just beg to be crossed with LOTR.
POTC is such a fandom. First of all, everything seems possible in that
universe. And second, who is to say that the world isn't flat and
that, if you sail too far you will drop off - to land in Middle Earth.
The combination of those two characteristics are a perfect mix for a
POTC/LOTR crossover.
And so we have James Norrington, shipwrecked in Middle Earth. There is
the barest hint of a backstory (him finding a ship and crew to follow
Jack Sparrow), but it's just a means to an end. So again, he is
shipwrecked and found by Imrahil's men. That nobody speaks the other's
language is obvious from the start and that doesn't exactly causes
trust between the two parties. Imrahil doesn't really know what to
make of the strange man - he doesn't seem to by a spy or someone sent
by the Nameless One, but since no one knows who exactly the man is,
it's easier to keep him under wraps.
And of course Norrington cannot explain himself. He gets exceedingly
frustrated by this lack of communication. It's rather nice to see that
the differing languages (and the difficulties that causes) play such a
large part here. It's always easier for an author to brush past this
fact and not take it into consideration too much because it holds the
possibility of slowing the story down. But here, in contrast, it is
the crux of the story.
If Imrahil and Norrington were able to speak with each other the
mystery would be solved, there would be no reason to hold Norrington
any longer. And for Imrahil, the appeal would probably be gone too.
But this way, he keeps coming back to Norrington until "it" happens.
"It" is just a clash between bodies, something that appears to be at
least partially an accident. The lack of romance is intriguing -
especially since their little encounter still shows if not exactly
tenderness, then at least respect. It's a very fine balance which was
fun to read.
Last but not least, the ending is fantastic, a real punch in the gut -
for Norrington as much as for the reader!
Title: Wherever the Surge May Sweep · Author: sparkofire · Genres:
Alternate Universe · ID: 579
Reviewer: Michelle · 2007-10-07 12:23:18
Sparkofire has written a thoroughly convincing AU evolving around
Aragorn's upbringing and the role Legolas might have played in it. I'm
always partial when it comes to AUs, because in my opinion AU is the
ultimate you can do with fanfiction. You stretch canon as far as you
can, but with a good AU the author will never actually stretch it so
much that the story becomes unbelievable. For that to work, the author
must know all important canon facts. It's not about writing things
different because you don't know when and how stuff happened. It's
about writing things different because you know exactly how they
happened. That makes the genre fascinating for me, and sparkofire's
attempt at stretching and twisting canon was one of the best I've ever
read.
We start off with Legolas killing Arathorn, whom he has befriended.
But the man succumbs to darkness and Legolas has no other choice than
to kill his friend. Gilraen is already pregnant then and the elves (in
this case Elrond) believe that the child will be no better than his
father. Legolas thinks differently, and basically steals baby Aragorn
to raise him as his own. Normally it is Aragorn who worms his way into
Legolas' heart, but here there is already a very strong bond between
Arathorn and Legolas, which causes Legolas to feel friendship and even
fatherly love for Aragorn.
Legolas, in contrast to Elrond, believes that Aragorn will be stronger
than darkness, and will be the one who will bring about Sauron's end.
He has seen it in his dreams - just as Elrond has seen quite the
opposite in his visions. Legolas believes that his "dreams" have been
sent by the Valar and that this alone justifies all means - leaving
behind the other elves, his own people and killing everone who stands
in his way. Knowing that those visions cannot be trusted entirely (as
proved by Saruman) opens up a whole list of moral questions that are
difficult to answer. Of course the reader feels with Legolas and
supports his decisions. But then the reader has to ask him/herself
whether he is not stepping into the same trap as the characters -
feeling that you have been "chosen" by a greater being to do God's
will, therefore putting yourself over all other humans/elves. It's a
dangerous thought.
Be that as it may, the reader is likely to follow Legolas' reasoning,
because he is the one the reader most indentifies with. And he's a
very convincing character. Mostly in A/L friendship fic he is the one
who has been sheltered all his life, the one who must be convinced by
Aragorn that befriending a human is not as terrible as he might think.
Aragorn usually is the one who offers Legolas a shoulder, who is the
one to save the day. Legolas is portrayed as the "weaker" of the two.
Here it is the other way round. Legolas is very worldly, very
determined. He knows what he wants to achieve and he does not stray
from his path. He's a very strong character, because he realizes what
his part in the great puzzle is. And he realizes that he is expendable
- I like that insight on Legolas' part. While he is strong for
Aragorn, he is not strong for himself. He has been set with a task and
he lives for that task only. Nothing beyond that matters, not his own
well-being and not his own life. For him there is nothing except
Estel, keeping the boy alive. That singlemindedness is pretty
admirable. It's a bit scary, too.
It's not only Legolas who's excellently written. We meet a lot of
characters we know from the books: Elrond, Galadriel, Halbarad,
Gandalf, Bilbo, Arwen - and they are all a wonderful addition to the
story. The same goes for the number of original characters, mostly for
Estel's surrogate family in Archet. Quite a number of characters is
inhabiting this story and I like it, because to me it seems realistic
(especially for a story with such an epic scope) and it takes away a
bit of pressure from Aragorn and Legolas - they don't have to carry
the plot all the time.
One things I found very interesting is that a lot happens much earlier
than it would in canon. Darkness descends upon ME earlier than we
would assume from the books. The ring is "active" a lot earlier as
well, which causes Bilbo the be one who has to carry this burden to
Rivendell instead of Frodo. It is never explained why this might be
so. It could be it's coincidence or the fact that sparkofire's version
of things needs certain events to speed up. Or, if one does not want
to apply the necessities of a writer but prefers to stay within the
logic of a story, it could very well be the fact that the elves seem
to have given up on mankind. If you look at Tolkien, you'll find that
the elves are a fading culture, but they seem determined to see this
last battle through to leave a world fit for men to live in. In
sparkofire's version, though, the elves seem undecided whether they
should not simply abandon ship (or in their special case, board a ship
and leave). It's a thought worth pursuing, and maybe in the sequel to
this story the question will be investigated further.
It might be good to add a short comment on the action scenes. They're
amazing, it's as simple as that. They are never just technical - A
hits B, B hits back. They focus on emotions, on the hopelessness of
the situation and that carries over to the reader at once. You
pratically feel Legolas' desperation and how the situation flows
between his fingers without him being able to do anything. It almost
bodily hurts.
Lastly, sparkofire assumes an intelligent reader and (of course) I
always like that. Things are not necessarily spelled out to the last
and the reader is invited to draw his/her own conclusions. It makes
the reading more fun and it leaves a lot of space for interpretation.
What more could you ask of a story?
Title: Not Fade Away · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later
Ages · ID: 127
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-07 14:32:19
I read this a while back, staying up late to do so. So much
well-written wish fulfillment! Don't we all hope/pray/wish that
Tolkien's elves are still here? If they were, they would definitely be
the ecologically and socially conscious folks depicted here. I love
the description of the Rivers Building and the work environment-more
wish fulfilment for those of us who work for others and wish we could
find enlightened employers.
I think my favorite moment in the whole piece is Thranduil in the
janitor's uniform with the bucket! Not to mention Radagast's wonderful
cameo! And the FBI/IRS agents who continue to turn up like bad pennies
are so typical of our government, which talks compassion but cannot
believe that others would actually possess it and regards them with
suspicion.
Mariposa is not a Mary-Sue-she's just a special woman who thinks she
is ordinary and finds out otherwise, after some all-too-depressing
life experiences which many of us can sympathize with.
The Mortal/Elven romance is explained here simply and with
understanding. You find it plausible that these immortal beings could
marry mortals and love them and find them beautiful even in their old
ages.
I really hope Jael will write a sequel some day-I'd like to read more
of the Firstborns' adventures in mortal lands.
Title: First Among Equals · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 564
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 15:23:37
A very realistic glimpse of young Faramir as he proves himself a
warrior of Gondor. It was really interesting to see Faramir as
youthful and untried and I enjoyed the glimpse of him with his own
Captain, a foreshadowing of the role he would one day take on himself.
Title: Some Dark Place · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 226
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 15:44:47
This was excellent! The author has taken a brief description from LoTR
and crafted it into a marvellously thrilling piece. In relatively few
words she manages to capture the utter terror the Nazgul are capable
of inflicting upon even those who are battle-hardened and steadfast.
Aragorn's reaction to the proximity of the Nazgul in this story brings
into a sharper focus the bravery of other characters later in LoTR
when they are also brought into close contact with the wraiths. And
Aragorn's defense of the hobbits on Weathertop becomes even more
heroic as he selflessly comes to their aid, overcoming the great fear
that he had already faced once before.
Aragorn is written in a very humanistic way, his character is drawn
with understanding and skill and I enjoyed the foreshadowing. I also
enjoyed the way that the close relationship between Aragorn and
Halbarad is so well defined - this adds another layer to the reader's
understanding of Aragorn's deep sorrow at Halbarad's death upon the
Pelennor. Very well done!
Title: Sarn Gebir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 398
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 15:52:33
What I like best about this piece is that Boromir, even though he was
under constant assault from the Ring, overrode It's compulsive voice
and managed to do what needed to be done.
The strength of Boromir's character is very evident here. He is
decisive, protective, strong of will and of limb, and the author's
understanding of the character is unmistakable.
Title: Fell and Fair · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 526
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:00:47
Excellent use of language here! A very compelling series done
elegantly and without a wasted word. I really enjoyed the changing pov's!
Title: All in a Day's Work · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 421
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:06:17
I really liked the way that the story unfolds from one drabble to the
next, each one building upon the one that went before. The character
sketches are vivid and well done despite the need for brevity and I
really enjoyed seeing Imrahil in his element.
Title: Calm after the Storm · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 350
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:14:18
Stunning imagery here! I was able to see Imrahil in a new light, here
in what must have been his element. I could easily imagine him just
this way, turning to the sea that he loved to cool his blood from the
heat and battle as a way of returning to himself, almost as if it were
home in a way or the woman that he loved best. Very vivid.
Title: Butterfly Wings · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 486
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:25:51
A very sweet story about tiny Legolas spending the day with his
parents. I enjoyed that his mother was alive in this as so many
authors prefer the more tragic scenario that she is either dead or has
passed over the Sea. The love between these family members in this
little tale is very easy to see!
My favourite part of the story was when Legolas learned that just
because one does not seek to possess a thing means that it is lost
forever.
Title: Exploring the Wild · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 30
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:31:20
I really enjoyed this tale of Faramir and Boromir's adventure! All of
the characters are well drawn and realistic and the plot is
believable. I appreciated that the children are written appropriate to
their age and that Denethor was still a good father at this point in time.
· ID: 4
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:21:22
Well-written and very well thought-out. Each chapter can stand on its
own, but the shared parallels are striking and highlight the
continuities between these two great lines of descendants, making the
sum greater than its very considerable parts.
The settings are carefully chosen for maximum impact, and the
characterizations are each distinct even as certain similarities are
drawn. (Of them all, I think I love Thranduil the intemperate Wood-elf
and Elros the wise half-elf the most.) The interactions are are
handled extremely well, and have a nice blend of humor and deep
philosophy.
And I have to say, I adore this quote: ["like eagles trying to raise
squirrel kits"]. I don't think I've seen a more entertaining
description of Ainur/Eruhini relations...
Title: Property Rights · Author: Salsify · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 74
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:22:09
This is a gem among gap-fillers which will be in the back of my mind
every time I read "The Hobbit". Salsify has taken a brief mention of
Fram and Scatha from Tolkien's history of the Rohirrim, and shows how
it could be of immense importance during a tense moment between
different cultures. She manages this with clarity and supreme
believability.
The characterizations of Bard and Thorin are true to the book, and yet
their exchange after Smaug's death is given a new depth. Both Man and
Dwarf are shown to be products of their racial (and racist) beliefs,
and while both have reasonable intentions and expectations, these are
lost in the misunderstandings and preconceived notions that they bring
to the table.
Title: Rock and Hawk · Author: Adaneth · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 221
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:24:35
Adaneth's stories came highly recommended to me this year, and I am
very thankful that I have had the opportunity to immerse myself in her
world. Her writing style and technique are wonderful, making the land
and people flawlessly come alive in my mind, and would leave a great
many published authors envious.
Her characters, all OCs, are marvellously rendered and handily claimed
their places in my heart almost immediately. The beautiful and wild
scenery is the perfect backdrop for her people, the descriptions full
without being overwhelming. I especially appreciated how she deftly
appropriated Scots/Gaelic terminology and language to help set the
tone, as I agree with her that ["words have their own unique flavors,
which contribute to character and setting in subtle yet powerful ways."]
The tension between Saelon and her people and their expectations of
her; between races, with their artfully explored cultural differences;
between the defenders and their unknown, preying horror - all is
handled and interwoven beautifully. The development of the various
threads is done with a keen eye to appropriate pacing, the dialogues
are marvellous, and the attention to detail simply amazing. Finally, I
am in awe of the level of research and knowledge that has been brought
to bear in the creation of this work, and am thrilled that the author
is continuing the saga.
Title: Fair Folk and Foul · Author: Adaneth · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 222
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:27:01
Everything that I loved from Rock and Hawk applies to this sequel in
abundance. Once again, excellent writing and characterizations,
descriptions both beautiful and horrific, well-conceived
world-building and compelling plot - all of it bound together into a
fantastic whole. Adaneth additionally proves herself capable of
enthralling action scenes as we get into the battle against the fiends.
I think the Dwarven characterizations and PoVs alone make this story
worth reading. Adaneth takes the little bit of Dwarven culture
developed by Tolkien and seamlessly extrapolates from it, so
believably that it *all* feels as though it must have come from
Tolkien's own mind.
I enjoyed how some common conceptions are twisted a bit via Saelon's
sympathetic, but unusual (for the times) personality: normally the
Rangers and Elrond's sons are unequivocally the "good guys", and here
I found myself disgruntled and fed up with them on Saelon's behalf.
One of the most wrenching moments is at the end, when all the
incorrect and preconceived notions that surround Veylin and Saelon's
friendship force them into a more distant relationship. They must veer
away from a wonderful easy familiarity and stumble their way into
something more formal for both their sakes, and I am left eager for
the next installment to learn how successfully they manage it...
Title: Diversion · Author: Mar'isu · Times: Late Third Age: 3018-3022
TA: General Drabble · ID: 708
Reviewer: Ellie · 2007-10-07 04:28:06
This is a very interesting take on why Glorfindel did not go with the
fellowship. I like the way you have Galdor of the Grey Havens being
the same Galdor of the Tree from Gondolin. Having two powerful lords
of Gondolin supposedly accompanying the Ring to the Grey Havens and
then supposedly take ship to Valinor would have been a very
interesting deception indeed. Well done!
Title: The Most Beautiful · Author: Meril · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 508
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:28:13
I love the lyrical and flowing prose, and how the musical theme is
woven throughout. The description of the Great Music makes this story
worth reading all on its own, with how real and textured and
*constant* it is to an Ainu. And then there is more...
Melian's perspective is exquisitely captured. The items chosen to
illustrate why she stays and the description of each are perfect. Of
course, Elu and Luthien - but also the Green Elves. Her love and
wonder at Luthien are highlights for me, and excellently capture the
miracle of children: That her daughter even exists at all; that
Luthien learns, and grows, and is her own being separate from those
that created her, even as Melian sees some of her essence within her
child. The characterization of Elu is very well done and slightly
unusual for me. My heart aches with the sweet, quiet knowledge that
all she loves are but minor parts of the Great Music, and she will not
relinquish them.
The story arc is well laid out, showing us Melian's personal growth
from simple cares to more complicated loves. We end with her apt
compromise: Singing up not a forest, but one flower, and she is
content with her choice.
More, this view of Melian as one torn between two worlds goes far in
explaining her actions in the Silm. I have always found it difficult
to understand why she readily abandons Doriath after sheltering her
husband's people for so long. But with this powerful constant pull,
and all her beautiful strains ended - truly, why would she stay? A
magnificent and well-conceived story.
Title: The Beginning of a Wonderful Friendship · Author: Imhiriel ·
Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 629
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2007-10-07 04:33:32
The characterizations and interactions in this vignette simply shine
from start to finish. There must have been many conflicts between the
newly-arrived Noldorin Elves and their distant Moriquendi kin, and
Imhiriel uses one of these to show us when a famous couple initially
meets.
First, what is not to like about this Celeborn? Passionate and proud,
he is quick to defend his heritage against the well-meaning but rather
patronizing interloper. The fact that Nerwen is actually able to
deflect him from his fierce and justified confrontation shows us the
depth of his dazed entrancement with her. The ending is a definite
squeeable moment for me, every time.
Celeborn's excellence doesn't overshadow all of the other wonderful
characterizations, however. I love humorous, wicked Nerwen; physically
dazzling, friendly but slightly clueless Finrod; and young, blushing
Luthien. Luthien in particular makes me laugh, with her pique aimed at
Celeborn being transformed into enchantment over Finrod, who barely
seems to notice her. (Unlike several other males later in the Silm
storyline.) I enjoy the contrast to her usual, more mature portrayal
of being unruffled and utterly entrancing.
Nerwen's very sisterly poke at Finrod was well handled, and I adore
the lovely description of her laugh. ["a surprisingly deep, mellow
sound, smooth as honey."] It fits her perfectly, and there is a
beautiful and apt contrast between the laughter of the two women: the
golden voice from Valinor and the silvery one from Beleriand's forests.
I must repeat: This story *begs* for a continuation.
Title: All that is gold... · Author: Perelleth · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 42
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-07 04:37:43
A good story that could have jumped out of the last chapters of THE
HOBBIT; wherein two restless souls come together in the kitchen of
Imladris and begin a lasting friendship. Excellent characterisation of
young Estel in particular, though Bilbo is also written well.
Title: Thengling Mighty · Author: Linda hoyland · Times: Late Third
Age: 3018-3022 TA: General Drabble · ID: 420
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2007-10-07 04:46:59
There is not enough attention paid to Theoden in fanfiction, at least
compared to his flashy nephew, frosty niece, and the presumably
handsome prematurely slain son who is sometimes paired with Boromir.
So I was quite intrigued when I heard of Linda's giving the dear old
Lord of the Mark a drabble. And I was not disappointed.
There's lovely dark-and-light symmetry here; as the drabble moves from
Theoden's nadir to his zenith. I find the last line to be really,
really beautiful, with an appealing Viking glory in it that is also
very Rohirric and very appropriate for Theoden King.
Title: In Aragorn's Safekeeping: Life in the King's House · Author:
Radbooks · Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete · ID: 416
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-07 05:21:04
An enjoyable sequel in which thomas and Rebecca adjust to live in
Gondor,Rebecca slipping into her role as Aragorn's foster daughter far
more easily than Thomas.
I especially enjoyed the characterisations of Aragorn and Arwen and
Rebecca is a lovable OC.
Title: Daybreak · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third Age:
3018-3022 TA: Gondor Drabble · ID: 705
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-07 05:26:24
What must it have been like on the first morning after Sauron's defeat
to wake up to a new and hopeful world? This drabble expertly explores
Faramir's emotions on that eventful day.Faramir awakes with a
hangover,something I'm sure that would be a rarity for such a good and
wise man and then realises there was truly something to celebrate.
Who would not rejoice on such a day?
Title: The Exile · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 537
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2007-10-07 05:32:05
It is somewhat ambigious whether Aragorn intended Beregond's exile to
mean he could never see Minas tirith again or whether it merely meant
he was to move to Ithilien with Faramir and either interpretation is
valid. This moving piece takes the view that he could never return and
explores aspects of his exile I had not thought of before,such as
never seeing the New White Tree.
I especially liked the way Faramir's sympathy was portrayed.
Title: In Shadow Realm · Author: Legolass · Genres: Adventure · ID: 266
Reviewer: Michelle · 2007-10-07 12:18:22
Strictly speaking, "In Shadow Realm", a 180,000 word fic, is a
gapfiller, because Legolass take a passing moment in Tolkien's writing
(the skeleton lying by the door in the Mountain of the Dead) and
weaves a tale around said skeleton that is engaging, exciting, a
tear-jerker from time to time - and well-executed. There is angst,
drama, h/c, action and some mystery - but what makes this story so
enjoyable is the fact the story veers off into unexpected territory
without ever losing the credibility that this could very well happen
in Tolkien's world. It's always hardest to come up with an original
plot, write something totally different and still stay true to the
canon source. Legolass managed to keep that balance with ease, weaving
the story around the frame Tolkien provides with the trilogy.
First and foremost, it is an Aragorn/Legolas friendship fic and
Legolass excels in describing the love, trust and understanding
between them. If for nothing else, read the story for the friendship.
But it is also a fellowship-fic: The story starts ten years after
Sauron has been defeated and the remaining members of the fellowship
are gathering in Minas Tirith to celebrate and reminisce about old
times. Add to that a few assorted canon characters (the twins,
Celeborn) and some OCs (Hamille *needs* to be mentioned here, because
it's refreshing to see that Legolas is actually able to befriend
people before Aragorn came along - authors who allow the poor elf
friends aside from Aragorn are few and far between) and you have quite
a large and diverse cast to keep track of. Yet, things never get
confusing and no character is redudant. They all play their part in
the context of the story and they all get the chance to shine at one
point at least.
"In Shadow Realm" is definitely a story where you can fall in love
with the minor characters (that aren't minor to begin with), my
personal favourites were Celeborn and Gimli for whom I usually don't
even spare a passing thought. Gimli is boisterous but true of heart,
but he is never over the top or destroying the feel of a scene by a
superflous comment. And Celeborn - let's say Legolass managed to bring
him to life for me. He was deeply loyal to both Legolas (to whom he
feels a connection because they both stayed on in Middle Earth for
pretty much the same reasons) and Aragorn and it was exciting to see
him play such a vital part in the course of the story. He actually is
the one who saves everybody's behind when things get dire and it was
so good to see him as something else but the mindless puppy tagging
along with Galadriel.
The one thing you don't have in the story is orcs and wolves. Way too
often both are used if no other villains comes in handy. It gets
boring and repetitive. But Legolass took the pain to create a villain
(for lack of a better word) that is original and three-dimensional.
"In Shadow Realm" is a ghost story, and Aragorn is burdened with the
quest to put those ghosts to rest. They are not just there to move the
story to the next angsty plot point, they're an integral part of the
story and a lot of space is used to explain their history and
motivation. That pays off, as I have rarely seen an adversary for
Aragorn who was so fascinating all on its own.
Lastly, it should be said that Legolass is a masterful storyteller.
"In Shadow Realm" is a complicated story and there are a lot of
characters, twists and settings to keep track of. She never gets lost,
obviously enjoying to keep readers hanging in their seats waiting for
the next scene, the next important revelation. It seems it is her
hobby to withhold information until the point when it is absolutely
necessary for the story and that keeps readers guessing and on their
toes. She's also borrowing from film techniques a lot - cutting scenes
against each other and through that adding tension. Chapter 24 is a
perfect example of her executing that technique to full effect.
In short: A gripping story and a truly engaging epic - there should be
more of those around!
Title: Waters of Life · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 423
Reviewer: Michelle · 2007-10-07 12:20:47
I admit, I rarely read het, but Linda's stories are the ones for which
I gladly make an exception. At the bottom of her universe, though
there is angst, action, drama and h/c, are love, friendship, trust,
brotherhood. Therefore, reading her fics does not exactly make me feel
fluffy (that's too airy a word anyway). It's more content that is
projected to the reader. "Waters of Life" is a perfect example for
that feeling.
It's a little gapfiller, a short story depicting Arwen's and Aragorn
wedding anniversary. There is a trip to a lake, there is beautiful
nature. But the peaceful surroundings only point back at the love
Arwen and Aragorn share. They realize (probably not for the first or
the last time) how blessed they truly are.
In addition, Arwen seems somehow ethereal in this story - dancing and
singing, enjoying nature. And in contrast you have Aragorn's awe, his
self-perceived clumsiness. They are not so much contradicting each
other but complementing each other and I think, at heart, that's what
makes Linda's version of A/A so readable and enjoyable for me. They
balance each other, each makes the other a "better" person. And I
simply love following that journey!
Title: On Starless Waters Far Astray · Author: Empy · Genres:
Crossover · ID: 557
Reviewer: Michelle · 2007-10-07 12:22:06
It is not so easy to come by LOTR-crossovers, because authors tend to
bemoan the fact that the universe somehow doesn't lend itself to be
crossed. I admit, it can pose problems, but when you look at a story
like "On Starless Waters Far Astray" then you will notice that there
are certain other fandoms that just beg to be crossed with LOTR.
POTC is such a fandom. First of all, everything seems possible in that
universe. And second, who is to say that the world isn't flat and
that, if you sail too far you will drop off - to land in Middle Earth.
The combination of those two characteristics are a perfect mix for a
POTC/LOTR crossover.
And so we have James Norrington, shipwrecked in Middle Earth. There is
the barest hint of a backstory (him finding a ship and crew to follow
Jack Sparrow), but it's just a means to an end. So again, he is
shipwrecked and found by Imrahil's men. That nobody speaks the other's
language is obvious from the start and that doesn't exactly causes
trust between the two parties. Imrahil doesn't really know what to
make of the strange man - he doesn't seem to by a spy or someone sent
by the Nameless One, but since no one knows who exactly the man is,
it's easier to keep him under wraps.
And of course Norrington cannot explain himself. He gets exceedingly
frustrated by this lack of communication. It's rather nice to see that
the differing languages (and the difficulties that causes) play such a
large part here. It's always easier for an author to brush past this
fact and not take it into consideration too much because it holds the
possibility of slowing the story down. But here, in contrast, it is
the crux of the story.
If Imrahil and Norrington were able to speak with each other the
mystery would be solved, there would be no reason to hold Norrington
any longer. And for Imrahil, the appeal would probably be gone too.
But this way, he keeps coming back to Norrington until "it" happens.
"It" is just a clash between bodies, something that appears to be at
least partially an accident. The lack of romance is intriguing -
especially since their little encounter still shows if not exactly
tenderness, then at least respect. It's a very fine balance which was
fun to read.
Last but not least, the ending is fantastic, a real punch in the gut -
for Norrington as much as for the reader!
Title: Wherever the Surge May Sweep · Author: sparkofire · Genres:
Alternate Universe · ID: 579
Reviewer: Michelle · 2007-10-07 12:23:18
Sparkofire has written a thoroughly convincing AU evolving around
Aragorn's upbringing and the role Legolas might have played in it. I'm
always partial when it comes to AUs, because in my opinion AU is the
ultimate you can do with fanfiction. You stretch canon as far as you
can, but with a good AU the author will never actually stretch it so
much that the story becomes unbelievable. For that to work, the author
must know all important canon facts. It's not about writing things
different because you don't know when and how stuff happened. It's
about writing things different because you know exactly how they
happened. That makes the genre fascinating for me, and sparkofire's
attempt at stretching and twisting canon was one of the best I've ever
read.
We start off with Legolas killing Arathorn, whom he has befriended.
But the man succumbs to darkness and Legolas has no other choice than
to kill his friend. Gilraen is already pregnant then and the elves (in
this case Elrond) believe that the child will be no better than his
father. Legolas thinks differently, and basically steals baby Aragorn
to raise him as his own. Normally it is Aragorn who worms his way into
Legolas' heart, but here there is already a very strong bond between
Arathorn and Legolas, which causes Legolas to feel friendship and even
fatherly love for Aragorn.
Legolas, in contrast to Elrond, believes that Aragorn will be stronger
than darkness, and will be the one who will bring about Sauron's end.
He has seen it in his dreams - just as Elrond has seen quite the
opposite in his visions. Legolas believes that his "dreams" have been
sent by the Valar and that this alone justifies all means - leaving
behind the other elves, his own people and killing everone who stands
in his way. Knowing that those visions cannot be trusted entirely (as
proved by Saruman) opens up a whole list of moral questions that are
difficult to answer. Of course the reader feels with Legolas and
supports his decisions. But then the reader has to ask him/herself
whether he is not stepping into the same trap as the characters -
feeling that you have been "chosen" by a greater being to do God's
will, therefore putting yourself over all other humans/elves. It's a
dangerous thought.
Be that as it may, the reader is likely to follow Legolas' reasoning,
because he is the one the reader most indentifies with. And he's a
very convincing character. Mostly in A/L friendship fic he is the one
who has been sheltered all his life, the one who must be convinced by
Aragorn that befriending a human is not as terrible as he might think.
Aragorn usually is the one who offers Legolas a shoulder, who is the
one to save the day. Legolas is portrayed as the "weaker" of the two.
Here it is the other way round. Legolas is very worldly, very
determined. He knows what he wants to achieve and he does not stray
from his path. He's a very strong character, because he realizes what
his part in the great puzzle is. And he realizes that he is expendable
- I like that insight on Legolas' part. While he is strong for
Aragorn, he is not strong for himself. He has been set with a task and
he lives for that task only. Nothing beyond that matters, not his own
well-being and not his own life. For him there is nothing except
Estel, keeping the boy alive. That singlemindedness is pretty
admirable. It's a bit scary, too.
It's not only Legolas who's excellently written. We meet a lot of
characters we know from the books: Elrond, Galadriel, Halbarad,
Gandalf, Bilbo, Arwen - and they are all a wonderful addition to the
story. The same goes for the number of original characters, mostly for
Estel's surrogate family in Archet. Quite a number of characters is
inhabiting this story and I like it, because to me it seems realistic
(especially for a story with such an epic scope) and it takes away a
bit of pressure from Aragorn and Legolas - they don't have to carry
the plot all the time.
One things I found very interesting is that a lot happens much earlier
than it would in canon. Darkness descends upon ME earlier than we
would assume from the books. The ring is "active" a lot earlier as
well, which causes Bilbo the be one who has to carry this burden to
Rivendell instead of Frodo. It is never explained why this might be
so. It could be it's coincidence or the fact that sparkofire's version
of things needs certain events to speed up. Or, if one does not want
to apply the necessities of a writer but prefers to stay within the
logic of a story, it could very well be the fact that the elves seem
to have given up on mankind. If you look at Tolkien, you'll find that
the elves are a fading culture, but they seem determined to see this
last battle through to leave a world fit for men to live in. In
sparkofire's version, though, the elves seem undecided whether they
should not simply abandon ship (or in their special case, board a ship
and leave). It's a thought worth pursuing, and maybe in the sequel to
this story the question will be investigated further.
It might be good to add a short comment on the action scenes. They're
amazing, it's as simple as that. They are never just technical - A
hits B, B hits back. They focus on emotions, on the hopelessness of
the situation and that carries over to the reader at once. You
pratically feel Legolas' desperation and how the situation flows
between his fingers without him being able to do anything. It almost
bodily hurts.
Lastly, sparkofire assumes an intelligent reader and (of course) I
always like that. Things are not necessarily spelled out to the last
and the reader is invited to draw his/her own conclusions. It makes
the reading more fun and it leaves a lot of space for interpretation.
What more could you ask of a story?
Title: Not Fade Away · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later
Ages · ID: 127
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2007-10-07 14:32:19
I read this a while back, staying up late to do so. So much
well-written wish fulfillment! Don't we all hope/pray/wish that
Tolkien's elves are still here? If they were, they would definitely be
the ecologically and socially conscious folks depicted here. I love
the description of the Rivers Building and the work environment-more
wish fulfilment for those of us who work for others and wish we could
find enlightened employers.
I think my favorite moment in the whole piece is Thranduil in the
janitor's uniform with the bucket! Not to mention Radagast's wonderful
cameo! And the FBI/IRS agents who continue to turn up like bad pennies
are so typical of our government, which talks compassion but cannot
believe that others would actually possess it and regards them with
suspicion.
Mariposa is not a Mary-Sue-she's just a special woman who thinks she
is ordinary and finds out otherwise, after some all-too-depressing
life experiences which many of us can sympathize with.
The Mortal/Elven romance is explained here simply and with
understanding. You find it plausible that these immortal beings could
marry mortals and love them and find them beautiful even in their old
ages.
I really hope Jael will write a sequel some day-I'd like to read more
of the Firstborns' adventures in mortal lands.
Title: First Among Equals · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 564
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 15:23:37
A very realistic glimpse of young Faramir as he proves himself a
warrior of Gondor. It was really interesting to see Faramir as
youthful and untried and I enjoyed the glimpse of him with his own
Captain, a foreshadowing of the role he would one day take on himself.
Title: Some Dark Place · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 226
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 15:44:47
This was excellent! The author has taken a brief description from LoTR
and crafted it into a marvellously thrilling piece. In relatively few
words she manages to capture the utter terror the Nazgul are capable
of inflicting upon even those who are battle-hardened and steadfast.
Aragorn's reaction to the proximity of the Nazgul in this story brings
into a sharper focus the bravery of other characters later in LoTR
when they are also brought into close contact with the wraiths. And
Aragorn's defense of the hobbits on Weathertop becomes even more
heroic as he selflessly comes to their aid, overcoming the great fear
that he had already faced once before.
Aragorn is written in a very humanistic way, his character is drawn
with understanding and skill and I enjoyed the foreshadowing. I also
enjoyed the way that the close relationship between Aragorn and
Halbarad is so well defined - this adds another layer to the reader's
understanding of Aragorn's deep sorrow at Halbarad's death upon the
Pelennor. Very well done!
Title: Sarn Gebir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 398
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 15:52:33
What I like best about this piece is that Boromir, even though he was
under constant assault from the Ring, overrode It's compulsive voice
and managed to do what needed to be done.
The strength of Boromir's character is very evident here. He is
decisive, protective, strong of will and of limb, and the author's
understanding of the character is unmistakable.
Title: Fell and Fair · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 526
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:00:47
Excellent use of language here! A very compelling series done
elegantly and without a wasted word. I really enjoyed the changing pov's!
Title: All in a Day's Work · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 421
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:06:17
I really liked the way that the story unfolds from one drabble to the
next, each one building upon the one that went before. The character
sketches are vivid and well done despite the need for brevity and I
really enjoyed seeing Imrahil in his element.
Title: Calm after the Storm · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Adventure:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 350
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:14:18
Stunning imagery here! I was able to see Imrahil in a new light, here
in what must have been his element. I could easily imagine him just
this way, turning to the sea that he loved to cool his blood from the
heat and battle as a way of returning to himself, almost as if it were
home in a way or the woman that he loved best. Very vivid.
Title: Butterfly Wings · Author: White Wolf · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 486
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:25:51
A very sweet story about tiny Legolas spending the day with his
parents. I enjoyed that his mother was alive in this as so many
authors prefer the more tragic scenario that she is either dead or has
passed over the Sea. The love between these family members in this
little tale is very easy to see!
My favourite part of the story was when Legolas learned that just
because one does not seek to possess a thing means that it is lost
forever.
Title: Exploring the Wild · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Adventure:
Pre-Ring War · ID: 30
Reviewer: Marigold · 2007-10-07 16:31:20
I really enjoyed this tale of Faramir and Boromir's adventure! All of
the characters are well drawn and realistic and the plot is
believable. I appreciated that the children are written appropriate to
their age and that Denethor was still a good father at this point in time.
If you have any questions about the archive, or would like to report a technical problem, please contact Aranel (former MEFA Tech Support and current Keeper of the Archive) at araneltook@mefawards.org or at the MEFA Archive group..