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Msg# 9330
MEFA Reviews for Tuesday, July 29, 2008 (Part One) Posted by Ann July 29, 2008 - 20:29:39 Topic ID# 9330Title: Best Three Falls, No Gouging · Author: Brigantine · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 587
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:23:43
Spoilers!
*gigglesnorts beer all over keyboard*
Ok, apart from the outrageous humor of the whole situation (Poor
Faramir! Bet that was a shock), and apart from the
nearly-side-splitting dialogue between Merry and Pippin (compared very
accurately by one reader to professional sports play-by-play) the
delightful descriptions and sly wit here are intoxicatingly glee-inducing:
[Three sparrows, a flustered lark and a half dozen finches bolted
suddenly from a tattered border of seeding coneflowers and took refuge
on a nearby roof.
"Got a wooden splint and about twenty-seven layers o' linen wrapped
around that arm. It's like an Orc club, that is."
...in a move worthy of an especially ruthless eel, Lady Éowyn
exploited a momentary opening in her brother's defences.]
And the reason for this vivid demonstration of sibling rivalry?
["Just pick a preference," Pippin suggested helpfully. "Male or female?"
"I beg your pardon," Faramir spluttered. "My preferences are none of
your business! And stop winking at me, you nosey little blighters!"]
*still chortling* Oh, I've never even imagined sedate Faramir is such
a situation, but I'm wicked enough to easily picture how smugly
pleased with himself he'll be, once he gets to think over the whole
situation at his leisure. Ha! Great job!
Title: Surprise Inspection · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 207
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:24:54
A very enjoyable story, particularly since I'm experiencing the same
weather described in the story today * g * AmandaK is justly famed for
her extraordinary descriptive skills, words that flow seamlessly
together to build mood and setting. Those skills are very well
demonstrated here, in phrases like ["strands of sweat-darkened hair
plastered against dirt-streaked foreheads"] and ["the bright hot glare
of the sun reflecting off the river in the distance"].
In addition to her marvelous descriptions (and some very enjoyable
visuals they are, too), Amanda is also highly skilled at character
portraits, and the many years she's devoted to the study of Boromir
really shine through here. Rather than just an amusing summery
anecdote, this story also focuses on Boromir's exemplary leadership
skills, his attention to detail and ability to swiftly study and
appraise the situation at hand. Amanda's also shown us, though, the
side that explains why all those who serve under his command are so
devoted to him – his understanding and empathy, his pragmatism, and
his recognition of the human potential of his troops. What could have
been a very difficult day for a young lieutenant becomes an
unforgettable opportunity and a story he'll share with his
grandchildren; one which we can enjoy over and over as well. Very well
done, and a lovely surprise gift! Thanks, Amanda!
Title: Tower of the Moon · Author: Nath · Times: Multi-Age · ID: 577
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:25:36
The language here is exquisite, conveying the loveliness of moonlight
along with a slightly ominous undertone, for we know the fate of the
Tower of the Moon (or at least part of it.) I like the idea of the
King Elessar having grandiose, and somewhat hopeful, plans to rebuild
Minas Ithil, while at the same time recognizing that nothing lasts
forever and one day this glorious city, symbol of his triumph, would
also decline. A very unusual story!
Title: Moon Over Water · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 518
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:26:41
[It had been strange to see Boromir, the practical one, the warrior,
so entranced by something so mystical. Indeed, by the next day Boromir
had shrugged off his attempts to talk about it and had instead
vanished for a day's hunting in the woods with his new bow.]
Oh, I love this - that in his grief practical Boromir was reaching out
toward ancient legend, almost using Faramir (the dreamy one) as a
cloak so that, in his own mind, he could say "I did it for Faramir's
sake!" and therefore save face for himself.
And Faramir - as he grows up, and continues the ritual, sensing the
decline in the fortunes and strenght of his people:
[ The boats were different from those he remembered – flatter bottomed
and less ornamented. The faces that looked out were subtly different
too. They bore more signs of age and while there was strength in them,
it was a worn and finely edged strength. Their clothes were made of as
fine and costly material but seemed darker and sterner.]
Your final image of Boromir is heartbreaking and beautiful:
[ a soldier at guard… rich velvet cloak …raven haired…fair of
face….standing in watchful pose as Faramir has seen him do a hundred
times as a Guard of the Tower. His horn hangs once more from his
baldric, restored and whole]
Very fitting, I think, that Faramir would remember him in his beauty
and dignity, while treasuring to himself the laughing memories of
their boyhood. Very beautifully done! I'm so glad to have you writing
with us again.
Title: Generations · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn
· ID: 508
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:32:21
What a delightful story! I haven't read many Eldarion stories, and the
ones I have encountered seemed to have focused more on his Elvishness,
the ethereal heritage of his mother. This story has none of that; but
the Prince of Gondor and Arnor pictured here is not one to be expected
as a scion of Elessar, either. This Eldarion is a bit of a dandy,
spoiled and overprotected; but the most endearing element of his
personality is his recognition of these flaws in himself. He imagines
himself a disappointment to his parents (and he could be right), he's
intimidated by the weight of both the future and the past, and he
feels powerless to change. How surprised Eldarion would be the
discover that his father shares many of his fears, for this is all new
territory to him, as well. A heartwarming tale and one with which any
parent can empathize.
Title: Moon Over Water · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 518
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-19 17:50:26
Spoilers!
A lovely, haunting tale about the power of magic, night, the moon on
the water, and the greatness of Gondor's past. Beautiful language, and
elegant transitions between past and present. And the ending is beautiful.
Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-19 18:07:36
Spoilers!
A tribute to brotherly love, as the sons of Denethor prepare for the
parting that will be forever. Boromir's attempt to protect his brother
by giving him good advice will surely please fans of Denethor's
firstborn. The ending is gently poignant. A nice addition to stories
about the Brothers Mir...
Title: Denial · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of Finwe · ID: 80
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-07-19 19:56:39
Spoilers!
[Denial] is a vividly written ficlet set in Oshun's [Maitimo and
Findekáno] universe. Having recently re-read the first story in that
series, I could easily see why Maedhros would react in such an evasive
manner to Maglor's astute observations, furthermore this little ficlet
feels like an enrichment to Oshun's Maedhros' in that universe. While
I read it, more was added to the background she created for him and
his reasons for not pursuing a love he deems unreachable. Besides
that, underneath Maglor's laid-back communication with his brother
lies the encouragement a brother gives to another and it is
beautifully portrayed here. As the story rolls along, slowly all
layers are stripped away, leaving the one who is questioned to a
graceful exit. This makes this ficlet reads like a character piece,
where the two different characters are easily to distinguish from
another: Maglor's no holds barred attitude vs. Maedhros more shy and
diplomatic attitude sets both apart so well. The light tone of this
piece (although it has a more serious undercurrent) has me chuckling
often, especially Maglor's trying to get that song out of his head and
onto paper is a treat and well, haven't we all had such a creative
bunny that would not let you do anything else? Besides great
characterisation, the writing is elegant and rich in detail, where the
dialogue rolls smoothly along and it leaves the reader with a smile.
This is a fabulous little piece!
Title: Leather · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 297
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 22:15:56
This is a very nice use of the drabble series; the progression from
boyhood to adulthood is conveyed very smoothly. In the first and third
drabbles, I like the contrasts between their memories of their
boyhoods: Théodred remembering the last time his nanny could treat him
as a child; Boromir recalling his last sight of his mother in such
powerful, focused detail. They really are coming-of-age moments,
aren't they? Theodred moving from childhood to early manhood, as
symbolized by the warrrior's plait he'll begin wearing in his tenth
year; Boromir's childhood essentially ending with the death of his mother.
The sunnier moments you've recalled here are delicious:
["I'll rebraid it," he promises as his fingers loosen the knot
securing the thong.]
You know, of course, you've hit my Number One Hot Button, somebody's
hair being tied back with/untied from a leather thong? Such a treat to
come across it here!
And OH OH OH look at this:
[Théodred would swear Boromir's knees are in danger of buckling, if
such a thing was possible.]
These two are such fun together. Certainly there's heat and passion
and oh, the underlying angst, but also laughter and the joy of their
being together, seizing their delight when they can, and you've
conveyed that wonderfully well.
Title: Horse Sense · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 22
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 22:17:14
*claps hands with glee*
I'm not generally a big fan of anthropomor_fic, and much of what I've
read purporting to be Bill the Pony's take on the Fellowship has been
somewhat heavy-handed and selfconscious. This tale is a refreshing
change! This Bill the Pony couldn't be anything but a pony, and his
thoughts are ponyish concerns - a full belly, a scratched back, apples
and raisins, but also history and legends whispered late at night in
the barn.
There certainly are similarities between Bill and Gimli: each are
proud, suspicious, conscious of their stature as compared to their
elegant, taller companions - but they are also tirelessly, ceaselessly
loyal and committed to the tasks at hand. It's endearing to see them
beginning to sense those qualities in each other. A very unusual,
well-written tale!
Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 22:17:47
A perfectly lovely, and perfectly realistic story! I can easily
imagine how difficult it would be for Faramir to get the hang of
peace, or to retrain himself after so many years of alertness to
anything that seems "wrong". And now, the poor dear, he has a whole
new world of worry and fear to deal with. It's quite fun to be able to
empathize with our stalwart captain of Rangers and prince of Ithiilien
in this matter. Well done!
Title: Dol Amroth Yule · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 295
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 22:18:55
I adore the Andrahar stories, and this is wonderful addition, a
roistering adventure tale full of color and dash. I particularly
enjoyed the behind-the-scenes details of the preparation for the Yule
feast (my Mag, of course, always has a professional interest). The
simmering antagonism between Hethlin and Andrahar was perceptively and
realistically drawn, though I'm embarrased at myself that it's taken
me so long to remember why. A very enjoyable addition to an rich universe!
Title: Beggar's Night · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor: Shire · ID: 15
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-20 01:22:22
Spoilers!
Here is a thoroughly amusing and refreshingly different vignette of a
Fourth Age Shire holiday observed in a way we would all approve. I had
never before heard of the holiday, but Branwyn brings it to vivid
life, with half the Fellowship participating, gathering, in costume,
to go beg treats from various Shire households.
It is worth a much higher price of admission to visualize Gimli in his
costume; or the rather surprise, or late-coming guests, in theirs. And
Branwyn writes Gandalf brilliantly and naturally.
I could just see Legolas disguised as an Ent, covered with
meticulously sewn leaves, complete with Entish sound effects. And
Faramir and Eowyn turn up for the fun as well, with, well, innovative
costumes and other things than begging for cakes in mind.
Though the premise is odd and slightly-off-the-mark in terms of canon,
this ficlet is so gently amusing and well-written that it works
completely.
Title: Playing with Fire · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 21
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-20 01:31:02
Spoilers!
This is an interesting spin on stories told of Aragorn and Arwen
raising little Eldarion in happy domesticity. While the King and Queen
are happy, danger stalks their child. The salient feature of this
story is that the danger is one that many children would face; and all
the power of the King and Queen of the Reunited Kingdom cannot stop it.
Linda tells an entrancing tale that explores the heartache of parental
responsibility and the hard choices that parents, even kings and
queens, must make to protect their children. Aragorn plays a dangerous
game; risking Arwen's wrath as well as pain and injury to his small
son; but his strategy has merit. And Linda skilfully raises the
tension level by holding off the explanation for Aragorn's course of
action until the latter part of the story. And of course, the reader
cannot help feel for Aragorn and the dilemma that he faced.
Good use of just enough details to establish a credible atmosphere,
such as the perfection of Arwen's embroidered rose, and little
Eldarion's playing with a toy horse. Aragorn's recollection is
haunting; and the last line very appropriate as well as one that
sticks in the reader's memory, like the rest of this outstanding story.
Title: Promise and Sorrow · Author: Virtuella · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 607
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-20 01:57:58
A series of ficlets concerning the effects of the Ring War on various
original characters. Virtuella's narrative blends sharpness with
poignancy, and the stories are both heart-wrenching and haunting;
especially the first one, that of the mother in Rohan, her thoughts
and memories of her warrior son all jumbled together with her worries
for the future.
I really hope to see more from this talented writer.
Title: Courage · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 41
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 04:29:08
Spoilers!
It always takes courage to try something new, and Gimli finds
inspiration in two who ought to have been even more fastidious than he
himself.
The reactions are spot on, having seen others having this particular
first try and finding they like it. (I myself can't stand the things,
unfortunately.) And love Gimli's evaluations of Merry and Pippin here
and whether or not they might be putting him on. As for the reaction
to their host--Heh!
A marvelous little tale, and well, well worth the read, as Ann's
stories usually are!
Title: Wonderful Tonight · Author: Violin Ghost · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 320
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 04:32:20
I greatly enjoyed this look at Faramir finding increasingly over the
space of an evening more and more reasons for how it is he was able to
have found the most wonderful wife ever. The story is light-hearted
and delightful, and has a lyrical quality to it.
Title: Feet That Wander · Author: Linaewen · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 576
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-20 05:27:17
A nifty encounter between two very different beings - I'd like to see
an expanded version of the meeting.
Excellent characterisation of the weary traveler and dear old Tom
Bombadillo.
Title: Best Three Falls, No Gouging · Author: Brigantine · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 587
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 05:55:59
Spoilers!
Okay, okay--this is hilarious. And to have the Brandybuck and the Took
sitting there taking bets on which one will win the right to kiss the
object of their affections first! Egads! As for their play by play
descriptions on what's happening and the private
commentary--Hehehehehehehe! Nice to get such a wonderful laugh!
Title: Sunset Gates · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
· ID: 342
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-20 06:47:03
Spoilers!
What a delightfully amusing twist in this drabble!I was certain it was
about Galadriel!Very well written.
Title: My Shining Stars · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of
Elrond · ID: 371
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-20 06:59:39
Spoilers!
This story was quite unique I felt in the interpretation of Elrond.It
made me think of just how much he had lost during his very long
lifetimeOne always thinks of Elrond as so wise and calm that it comes
as quite a shock that he has no feeling for his parents.It is hardly
surprising,though.On his way to Valinor, ELrond yearns to see again
the sons of Feanor who took pity on him.We,alas ,know he is doomed to
disappointment. A thought provoking and poingant story, which is very
well told.
Title: The Fire of Hope · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 625
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 15:44:57
Long he'd been known as "Hope," and now it is his own hope he nurses
as he keeps his guard.
Love this look at our favorite Ranger of the North as he watches over
the quiet lands of the north. The images he conjured in his own mind
both of those he cares for and as he shall care for his own are
lovely, the writing most engaging. And he yet has a long road to
follow ere he comes to that hope. And love the one detail that he has
already decided on that does eventually come to pass!
Yes, this is one of my favorite of your short fics, think.
Title: Whatever Harm Encroached · Author: Nieriel Raina · Times:
Second and Early Third Age · ID: 708
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 15:53:20
Spoilers!
I enjoyed the way in which the hunter went about his business, fully
prepared for what he must do; then giving thanks for this sacrifice
made. And it is plain he is loved by all within his sphere.
This look at how the Fell Winter played out on the east side of the
Misty Mountains is a warming one. Characterizations are good, details
full of fascinating imagery of the landscape through which the hunter
moves.
Title: Yule at Great Smials · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 566
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 16:27:10
Somehow I managed to miss reading this when it was first posted, and I
am sorry this was so, but glad to have such good reason to read it now!
"When the cat's away, the mice will play," and so it proves as Lalia
absents herself from Yule at the Great Smials, for this is the perfect
situation for all the Tooks and their many relatives of other names
who wish to enjoy the festivities together.
The challenge set was met well, and we see Gandalf meeting Pippin for
the first time in Dreamflower's universe. Here's our Took lad in all
his exuberance, and all rejoicing to see him survive to face another
year. Characterizations are delightful as always, we get a wonderful
glimpse at Gandalf's unusual smokerings, and we even get glimpses of a
side of Gandalf seldom shown.
As warming as a Yule bonfire!
Title: Home · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn ·
ID: 647
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 16:58:31
Spoilers!
Ah, my first love is well presented here, even if he speaks not a word!
Was it grief at the loss of his sister that led Theoden to leave his
son to greet his orphaned nephew and niece to Edoras and Meduseld?
Whatever it was, this story conveys that arrival well, complete with
Ranger escort. And the recognition of Thorongil by some who've
remained in the Hall is marvelously done.
Humor: Gondor · ID: 587
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:23:43
Spoilers!
*gigglesnorts beer all over keyboard*
Ok, apart from the outrageous humor of the whole situation (Poor
Faramir! Bet that was a shock), and apart from the
nearly-side-splitting dialogue between Merry and Pippin (compared very
accurately by one reader to professional sports play-by-play) the
delightful descriptions and sly wit here are intoxicatingly glee-inducing:
[Three sparrows, a flustered lark and a half dozen finches bolted
suddenly from a tattered border of seeding coneflowers and took refuge
on a nearby roof.
"Got a wooden splint and about twenty-seven layers o' linen wrapped
around that arm. It's like an Orc club, that is."
...in a move worthy of an especially ruthless eel, Lady Éowyn
exploited a momentary opening in her brother's defences.]
And the reason for this vivid demonstration of sibling rivalry?
["Just pick a preference," Pippin suggested helpfully. "Male or female?"
"I beg your pardon," Faramir spluttered. "My preferences are none of
your business! And stop winking at me, you nosey little blighters!"]
*still chortling* Oh, I've never even imagined sedate Faramir is such
a situation, but I'm wicked enough to easily picture how smugly
pleased with himself he'll be, once he gets to think over the whole
situation at his leisure. Ha! Great job!
Title: Surprise Inspection · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 207
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:24:54
A very enjoyable story, particularly since I'm experiencing the same
weather described in the story today * g * AmandaK is justly famed for
her extraordinary descriptive skills, words that flow seamlessly
together to build mood and setting. Those skills are very well
demonstrated here, in phrases like ["strands of sweat-darkened hair
plastered against dirt-streaked foreheads"] and ["the bright hot glare
of the sun reflecting off the river in the distance"].
In addition to her marvelous descriptions (and some very enjoyable
visuals they are, too), Amanda is also highly skilled at character
portraits, and the many years she's devoted to the study of Boromir
really shine through here. Rather than just an amusing summery
anecdote, this story also focuses on Boromir's exemplary leadership
skills, his attention to detail and ability to swiftly study and
appraise the situation at hand. Amanda's also shown us, though, the
side that explains why all those who serve under his command are so
devoted to him – his understanding and empathy, his pragmatism, and
his recognition of the human potential of his troops. What could have
been a very difficult day for a young lieutenant becomes an
unforgettable opportunity and a story he'll share with his
grandchildren; one which we can enjoy over and over as well. Very well
done, and a lovely surprise gift! Thanks, Amanda!
Title: Tower of the Moon · Author: Nath · Times: Multi-Age · ID: 577
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:25:36
The language here is exquisite, conveying the loveliness of moonlight
along with a slightly ominous undertone, for we know the fate of the
Tower of the Moon (or at least part of it.) I like the idea of the
King Elessar having grandiose, and somewhat hopeful, plans to rebuild
Minas Ithil, while at the same time recognizing that nothing lasts
forever and one day this glorious city, symbol of his triumph, would
also decline. A very unusual story!
Title: Moon Over Water · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 518
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:26:41
[It had been strange to see Boromir, the practical one, the warrior,
so entranced by something so mystical. Indeed, by the next day Boromir
had shrugged off his attempts to talk about it and had instead
vanished for a day's hunting in the woods with his new bow.]
Oh, I love this - that in his grief practical Boromir was reaching out
toward ancient legend, almost using Faramir (the dreamy one) as a
cloak so that, in his own mind, he could say "I did it for Faramir's
sake!" and therefore save face for himself.
And Faramir - as he grows up, and continues the ritual, sensing the
decline in the fortunes and strenght of his people:
[ The boats were different from those he remembered – flatter bottomed
and less ornamented. The faces that looked out were subtly different
too. They bore more signs of age and while there was strength in them,
it was a worn and finely edged strength. Their clothes were made of as
fine and costly material but seemed darker and sterner.]
Your final image of Boromir is heartbreaking and beautiful:
[ a soldier at guard… rich velvet cloak …raven haired…fair of
face….standing in watchful pose as Faramir has seen him do a hundred
times as a Guard of the Tower. His horn hangs once more from his
baldric, restored and whole]
Very fitting, I think, that Faramir would remember him in his beauty
and dignity, while treasuring to himself the laughing memories of
their boyhood. Very beautifully done! I'm so glad to have you writing
with us again.
Title: Generations · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn
· ID: 508
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 17:32:21
What a delightful story! I haven't read many Eldarion stories, and the
ones I have encountered seemed to have focused more on his Elvishness,
the ethereal heritage of his mother. This story has none of that; but
the Prince of Gondor and Arnor pictured here is not one to be expected
as a scion of Elessar, either. This Eldarion is a bit of a dandy,
spoiled and overprotected; but the most endearing element of his
personality is his recognition of these flaws in himself. He imagines
himself a disappointment to his parents (and he could be right), he's
intimidated by the weight of both the future and the past, and he
feels powerless to change. How surprised Eldarion would be the
discover that his father shares many of his fears, for this is all new
territory to him, as well. A heartwarming tale and one with which any
parent can empathize.
Title: Moon Over Water · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 518
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-19 17:50:26
Spoilers!
A lovely, haunting tale about the power of magic, night, the moon on
the water, and the greatness of Gondor's past. Beautiful language, and
elegant transitions between past and present. And the ending is beautiful.
Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-19 18:07:36
Spoilers!
A tribute to brotherly love, as the sons of Denethor prepare for the
parting that will be forever. Boromir's attempt to protect his brother
by giving him good advice will surely please fans of Denethor's
firstborn. The ending is gently poignant. A nice addition to stories
about the Brothers Mir...
Title: Denial · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of Finwe · ID: 80
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-07-19 19:56:39
Spoilers!
[Denial] is a vividly written ficlet set in Oshun's [Maitimo and
Findekáno] universe. Having recently re-read the first story in that
series, I could easily see why Maedhros would react in such an evasive
manner to Maglor's astute observations, furthermore this little ficlet
feels like an enrichment to Oshun's Maedhros' in that universe. While
I read it, more was added to the background she created for him and
his reasons for not pursuing a love he deems unreachable. Besides
that, underneath Maglor's laid-back communication with his brother
lies the encouragement a brother gives to another and it is
beautifully portrayed here. As the story rolls along, slowly all
layers are stripped away, leaving the one who is questioned to a
graceful exit. This makes this ficlet reads like a character piece,
where the two different characters are easily to distinguish from
another: Maglor's no holds barred attitude vs. Maedhros more shy and
diplomatic attitude sets both apart so well. The light tone of this
piece (although it has a more serious undercurrent) has me chuckling
often, especially Maglor's trying to get that song out of his head and
onto paper is a treat and well, haven't we all had such a creative
bunny that would not let you do anything else? Besides great
characterisation, the writing is elegant and rich in detail, where the
dialogue rolls smoothly along and it leaves the reader with a smile.
This is a fabulous little piece!
Title: Leather · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 297
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 22:15:56
This is a very nice use of the drabble series; the progression from
boyhood to adulthood is conveyed very smoothly. In the first and third
drabbles, I like the contrasts between their memories of their
boyhoods: Théodred remembering the last time his nanny could treat him
as a child; Boromir recalling his last sight of his mother in such
powerful, focused detail. They really are coming-of-age moments,
aren't they? Theodred moving from childhood to early manhood, as
symbolized by the warrrior's plait he'll begin wearing in his tenth
year; Boromir's childhood essentially ending with the death of his mother.
The sunnier moments you've recalled here are delicious:
["I'll rebraid it," he promises as his fingers loosen the knot
securing the thong.]
You know, of course, you've hit my Number One Hot Button, somebody's
hair being tied back with/untied from a leather thong? Such a treat to
come across it here!
And OH OH OH look at this:
[Théodred would swear Boromir's knees are in danger of buckling, if
such a thing was possible.]
These two are such fun together. Certainly there's heat and passion
and oh, the underlying angst, but also laughter and the joy of their
being together, seizing their delight when they can, and you've
conveyed that wonderfully well.
Title: Horse Sense · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 22
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 22:17:14
*claps hands with glee*
I'm not generally a big fan of anthropomor_fic, and much of what I've
read purporting to be Bill the Pony's take on the Fellowship has been
somewhat heavy-handed and selfconscious. This tale is a refreshing
change! This Bill the Pony couldn't be anything but a pony, and his
thoughts are ponyish concerns - a full belly, a scratched back, apples
and raisins, but also history and legends whispered late at night in
the barn.
There certainly are similarities between Bill and Gimli: each are
proud, suspicious, conscious of their stature as compared to their
elegant, taller companions - but they are also tirelessly, ceaselessly
loyal and committed to the tasks at hand. It's endearing to see them
beginning to sense those qualities in each other. A very unusual,
well-written tale!
Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 22:17:47
A perfectly lovely, and perfectly realistic story! I can easily
imagine how difficult it would be for Faramir to get the hang of
peace, or to retrain himself after so many years of alertness to
anything that seems "wrong". And now, the poor dear, he has a whole
new world of worry and fear to deal with. It's quite fun to be able to
empathize with our stalwart captain of Rangers and prince of Ithiilien
in this matter. Well done!
Title: Dol Amroth Yule · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 295
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-19 22:18:55
I adore the Andrahar stories, and this is wonderful addition, a
roistering adventure tale full of color and dash. I particularly
enjoyed the behind-the-scenes details of the preparation for the Yule
feast (my Mag, of course, always has a professional interest). The
simmering antagonism between Hethlin and Andrahar was perceptively and
realistically drawn, though I'm embarrased at myself that it's taken
me so long to remember why. A very enjoyable addition to an rich universe!
Title: Beggar's Night · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor: Shire · ID: 15
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-20 01:22:22
Spoilers!
Here is a thoroughly amusing and refreshingly different vignette of a
Fourth Age Shire holiday observed in a way we would all approve. I had
never before heard of the holiday, but Branwyn brings it to vivid
life, with half the Fellowship participating, gathering, in costume,
to go beg treats from various Shire households.
It is worth a much higher price of admission to visualize Gimli in his
costume; or the rather surprise, or late-coming guests, in theirs. And
Branwyn writes Gandalf brilliantly and naturally.
I could just see Legolas disguised as an Ent, covered with
meticulously sewn leaves, complete with Entish sound effects. And
Faramir and Eowyn turn up for the fun as well, with, well, innovative
costumes and other things than begging for cakes in mind.
Though the premise is odd and slightly-off-the-mark in terms of canon,
this ficlet is so gently amusing and well-written that it works
completely.
Title: Playing with Fire · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 21
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-20 01:31:02
Spoilers!
This is an interesting spin on stories told of Aragorn and Arwen
raising little Eldarion in happy domesticity. While the King and Queen
are happy, danger stalks their child. The salient feature of this
story is that the danger is one that many children would face; and all
the power of the King and Queen of the Reunited Kingdom cannot stop it.
Linda tells an entrancing tale that explores the heartache of parental
responsibility and the hard choices that parents, even kings and
queens, must make to protect their children. Aragorn plays a dangerous
game; risking Arwen's wrath as well as pain and injury to his small
son; but his strategy has merit. And Linda skilfully raises the
tension level by holding off the explanation for Aragorn's course of
action until the latter part of the story. And of course, the reader
cannot help feel for Aragorn and the dilemma that he faced.
Good use of just enough details to establish a credible atmosphere,
such as the perfection of Arwen's embroidered rose, and little
Eldarion's playing with a toy horse. Aragorn's recollection is
haunting; and the last line very appropriate as well as one that
sticks in the reader's memory, like the rest of this outstanding story.
Title: Promise and Sorrow · Author: Virtuella · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 607
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-20 01:57:58
A series of ficlets concerning the effects of the Ring War on various
original characters. Virtuella's narrative blends sharpness with
poignancy, and the stories are both heart-wrenching and haunting;
especially the first one, that of the mother in Rohan, her thoughts
and memories of her warrior son all jumbled together with her worries
for the future.
I really hope to see more from this talented writer.
Title: Courage · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 41
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 04:29:08
Spoilers!
It always takes courage to try something new, and Gimli finds
inspiration in two who ought to have been even more fastidious than he
himself.
The reactions are spot on, having seen others having this particular
first try and finding they like it. (I myself can't stand the things,
unfortunately.) And love Gimli's evaluations of Merry and Pippin here
and whether or not they might be putting him on. As for the reaction
to their host--Heh!
A marvelous little tale, and well, well worth the read, as Ann's
stories usually are!
Title: Wonderful Tonight · Author: Violin Ghost · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 320
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 04:32:20
I greatly enjoyed this look at Faramir finding increasingly over the
space of an evening more and more reasons for how it is he was able to
have found the most wonderful wife ever. The story is light-hearted
and delightful, and has a lyrical quality to it.
Title: Feet That Wander · Author: Linaewen · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 576
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-20 05:27:17
A nifty encounter between two very different beings - I'd like to see
an expanded version of the meeting.
Excellent characterisation of the weary traveler and dear old Tom
Bombadillo.
Title: Best Three Falls, No Gouging · Author: Brigantine · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 587
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 05:55:59
Spoilers!
Okay, okay--this is hilarious. And to have the Brandybuck and the Took
sitting there taking bets on which one will win the right to kiss the
object of their affections first! Egads! As for their play by play
descriptions on what's happening and the private
commentary--Hehehehehehehe! Nice to get such a wonderful laugh!
Title: Sunset Gates · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
· ID: 342
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-20 06:47:03
Spoilers!
What a delightfully amusing twist in this drabble!I was certain it was
about Galadriel!Very well written.
Title: My Shining Stars · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of
Elrond · ID: 371
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-20 06:59:39
Spoilers!
This story was quite unique I felt in the interpretation of Elrond.It
made me think of just how much he had lost during his very long
lifetimeOne always thinks of Elrond as so wise and calm that it comes
as quite a shock that he has no feeling for his parents.It is hardly
surprising,though.On his way to Valinor, ELrond yearns to see again
the sons of Feanor who took pity on him.We,alas ,know he is doomed to
disappointment. A thought provoking and poingant story, which is very
well told.
Title: The Fire of Hope · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 625
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 15:44:57
Long he'd been known as "Hope," and now it is his own hope he nurses
as he keeps his guard.
Love this look at our favorite Ranger of the North as he watches over
the quiet lands of the north. The images he conjured in his own mind
both of those he cares for and as he shall care for his own are
lovely, the writing most engaging. And he yet has a long road to
follow ere he comes to that hope. And love the one detail that he has
already decided on that does eventually come to pass!
Yes, this is one of my favorite of your short fics, think.
Title: Whatever Harm Encroached · Author: Nieriel Raina · Times:
Second and Early Third Age · ID: 708
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 15:53:20
Spoilers!
I enjoyed the way in which the hunter went about his business, fully
prepared for what he must do; then giving thanks for this sacrifice
made. And it is plain he is loved by all within his sphere.
This look at how the Fell Winter played out on the east side of the
Misty Mountains is a warming one. Characterizations are good, details
full of fascinating imagery of the landscape through which the hunter
moves.
Title: Yule at Great Smials · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 566
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 16:27:10
Somehow I managed to miss reading this when it was first posted, and I
am sorry this was so, but glad to have such good reason to read it now!
"When the cat's away, the mice will play," and so it proves as Lalia
absents herself from Yule at the Great Smials, for this is the perfect
situation for all the Tooks and their many relatives of other names
who wish to enjoy the festivities together.
The challenge set was met well, and we see Gandalf meeting Pippin for
the first time in Dreamflower's universe. Here's our Took lad in all
his exuberance, and all rejoicing to see him survive to face another
year. Characterizations are delightful as always, we get a wonderful
glimpse at Gandalf's unusual smokerings, and we even get glimpses of a
side of Gandalf seldom shown.
As warming as a Yule bonfire!
Title: Home · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn ·
ID: 647
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-20 16:58:31
Spoilers!
Ah, my first love is well presented here, even if he speaks not a word!
Was it grief at the loss of his sister that led Theoden to leave his
son to greet his orphaned nephew and niece to Edoras and Meduseld?
Whatever it was, this story conveys that arrival well, complete with
Ranger escort. And the recognition of Thorongil by some who've
remained in the Hall is marvelously done.
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