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Msg# 9619
MEFA Reviews for Monday, December 1, 2008 (Morning Set, Part Two) Posted by annmarwalk December 01, 2008 - 4:02:45 Topic ID# 9619Title: Battle upon the Quays · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 376
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:35:24 Score: 2
Spoilers!
Oh, how shocked the captain must have been to be beaten in his own
home territory!
Well done!
Title: O Kheled-zâram fair and wonderful! · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 354
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:36:59 Score: 1
How romantic!
Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 152
Reviewer: foxrafer (csevans8) · 2008-11-30 19:37:05 Score: 7
Spoilers!
This is such an incredibly beautiful piece. The tone and language are
perfect. The opening scene gives a great introduction to Thorongil and
Aragorn's role during this time in his life. I particularly love and
appreciate this depiction of Denethor. It is a welcome change to the
many characterizations where he is practically demonized. This
Denethor not only is a sympathetic and likable character, he is also
portrayed with great depth and care.
I really enjoy how after reading this it puts Denethor and Aragorn's
future relationship into a very interesting light, if we assume that
Denethor knows they are the same person. I'm not sure whether I think
Ecthelion knows who Thorongil is or not, but I kind of like that at
least for me it's a bit ambiguous. At the end I decided he doesn't,
but there's something in how he watches them leave that makes we wonder.
A very powerful and thought-provoking story.
Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 19:38:12 Score: 10
I truly cannot describe how deeply this story touches me. I am amazed
at the insight the author Agape4gondor brings to the relationship
between the brothers Boromir and Faramir. Many tales have been written
about the parting between them, as Boromir sets out upon the quest
that was the end result of the dream Faramir and he shared. But this
particular tale of that parting ranks among the best of them! It is
poignant as a farewell between brothers should be, but it is also
stirring to the heart as Boromir speaks strongly of his intentions and
his purpose. I am very much impressed with Boromir here, for he is set
in his heart and his mind for the journey, and yet he can also still
look ahead to what his brother will be facing with Boromir gone. Even
as Boromir gives his brother counsel on how to face that which lies
ahead, he also prevents him from speaking those words that will lessen
his resolve in going, and also undermine Faramir's own confidence in
himself.
I love so much their last night together, and Boromir's tender parting
from Faramir. It is sad in a way, because one feels that Boromir
already has a sense of what is to come, and yet it is ultimately
loving and comforting – everything a farewell should be among kin who
know not when they will see one another again.
I weep every time I read this tale, because it is that beautiful!
Title: Forsaken · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 369
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:39:37 Score: 1
How heart-breaking!
Title: Maglor's Harp · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Horror · ID: 660
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-11-30 19:40:01 Score: 10
Spoilers!
The horror genre is quite a complex one, and a writer does not only
have to resort to events or objects beyond the character's control to
create such an effect. Uli writes a Maglor that in his own reasoning
commits a horrible crime in our eyes, but to him it seems like the
most normal thing to do at that moment. The musician needs an
instrument so for that he just pushes the boundaries as to how far he
can go a bit further every time taking the reader with him. The author
captures the madness and deepest horror of the human mind so immensely
well, a part of this genre I don't see often explored in this fandom.
Personally I like the build up in this story, the tension is so
palpable here that you in a way want to avert your eyes and yet you
simply cannot. The suspension and subtlety is so well done with not
too many details, the suggestion merely is enough to make your skin
crawl. To me it is so well written that over the years his mind also
forgot other things, not only the songs he once sang, the instruments
he played, but also his morality, respect and his own human limits.
One can only imagine how his public will react to his performance,
especially since they might be overwrought (or not) of the girl
missing and there he just sits to entertain. Masterfully written Uli!
Title: Moved to Pity · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 366
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:43:12 Score: 4
Spoilers!
Simple but beautiful, this drabble deals with the aftermath of
Luthien's choice and aptly depicts what Tolkien had in mind when he
said that the Fate of Men would in time become a cause for envy even
among the Firstborn and the Valar. Whether or not they understand it,
they cannot help being affected by it (especially in the
far-from-ordinary case of Luthien), even though in the end all serves
the will of the One. That and much more is wonderfully conveyed in
these hundred words.
Title: Silenced · Author: Illwynd · Genres: Horror · ID: 31
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:47:35 Score: 1
Spoilers!
Oh, my! This is indeed creepy!
Well done!
Title: Flame of Life · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 114
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:47:46 Score: 3
Poetic, touching and insightful, this double-drable records the
thoughts of the Flame Imperishable. It is a real asset to
Tolkien-fanfiction as a whole; while still completely immersed in
Tolkien's world, this is almost meta-fanfiction in a way, touching as
it does on all creation.
Title: The Sky Is Over · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 83
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:59:05 Score: 4
Spoilers!
Sad, poignant and brimming with symbolism from the first to last line,
this drabble sheds light on one of the sorrows of the Noldor in Exile:
Those left behind, and what consequences may arise from it. Finrod is
a good exemplary choice knowing that he had no wife and considered
himself free to participate in Beren's quest for the Silmaril, but
that does not make their prior separation any less painful, as is
easily shown here. Magnificent writing and a strong voice make me want
to read more by this author.
Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 20:01:50 Score: 2
Spoilers!
Not very romantic, but at least practical.... and much better than
starving.
Nicely done!
Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 20:07:13 Score: 2
Spoilers!
It's so hard to stop being responsible for the whole world, especially
when you see how vulnerable is your first child.
Faramir at his fatherly best.
Well done!
Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:08:55 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Kementari's perspective is not often used. Marta takes it up to good
effect here, revealing the bitterness of loss that plays naturally
into resentment over the way in which Yavanna' creations seemed doomed
to be forgotten or taken for granted. The Aftercomers will more easily
overlook her as well, than they will overlook other Valar.
If your greatest creations must be destroyed, one would wish at least
that everyone would remember them, or take all the more care of your
lesser creations, but that is not how the world goes.
Well done, Marta!
Title: Letters From Faramir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Boromir or Faramir · ID: 425
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 20:14:18 Score: 10
Spoilers!
These letters from Faramir, written to his brother, Boromir, while he
is away on his journey, are simply precious! What an extraordinary
look into Faramir's heart they give us. The letters also provide the
reader with much insight into what is going on in Gondor and
especially in Minas Tirith, as well, as war prepares, and as the
people wait for Boromir's return – hopefully with an army at his back!
I love how the series of missives begins with a letter from Boromir.
The reader learns much about Boromir's heart, as well, and even senses
some of his misgivings as to what is to come. This letter sets off a
series of replies from his loving brother, Faramir – replies that may
never reach Boromir, but still they are important and vital for
Faramir to write.
I always feel that being able to express his love and concern and his
sorrow at Boromir's absence in this way must have been very helpful to
Faramir, even therapeutic. Even though his brother Boromir is not
present with him, he is still able to tell him the things that are on
his heart and on his mind. Perhaps Faramir is able to express himself
even more clearly than he might have been able to if Boromir had
actually still been present with him! There is just something about
writing a letter to a dear loved one that allows one to open the heart
to him and to pour out one's soul in an uninhibited manner.
I really appreciate the way these letters follow the chronology of the
tale, so that we know what is happening in Gondor, as well as within
Faramir's heart and mind. This gives a sense of reality and urgency to
the series of letters.
I have always loved this tale, and for me, these letters from Faramir
are an indispensable part of my routine of reading Tolkien's history!
Title: Too Many Rangers · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits · ID: 116
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 20:14:57 Score: 4
Hilarious and clever conclusions drawn from the many stages it took
Tolkien to bring his magnum opus to its final form. The confusing
encounters in Bree had me laugh out loud more than once (to the point
that Laurelin the cat became so thoroughly annoyed she left the room),
and whatever that says about my laughter, it also says a lot about the
quality of this great piece of writing.
Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:15:42 Score: 10
Spoilers!
I think one reason (among many, many others) that I enjoy Altariel's
Faramir stories so much is that the author's writing is as subtle and
understated, and yet as deep, as the Steward and Prince himself. They
compliment each other perfectly, and this is a sublime example.
It is a rare thing we're shown, adult Faramir losing – Beren is as
surprised as the rest of us! (["The Queen," he explained, "has the
advantage of experience."] *snort!*) How he draws Beren into enjoying
his company highlights that his keen observational and interpersonal
skills have not suffered from the passage of time any more than his
dry humor has.
The many historical allusions that accompany the naming of the pieces
are wonderful, just wonderful. Even here, Faramir tucks in quiet
lessons that may resonate later – and do, as we see from Beren's
drawing. Such a beautiful reference to Faramir's White Lady, whom he
will see soon; not too bad a trade, for not living to see the Tower of
the Moon restored. (And that image – through Beren's drawing – was
indeed glorious.)
The interactions between Faramir and his great-grandson are a treasure
for the reader as much as for Faramir, and I love the thought that the
next owner of the chess set has been chosen. Quiet, thoughtful, sad
and hopeful all at once, this is a lovely addition to any
Faramir-lover's fanfic favorites.
Title: Reparation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men · ID: 296
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:16:23 Score: 10
It is always a pleasure to sink back into Isabeau's small corner of
Tolkien fanfic, and that is doubly true when her incredibly real and
finely-crafted OCs are front and center in the story. I admit,
["Reparation"] smoothed out some definite rough spots for me from
["Dol Amroth Yule"], where Andrahar often seemed out of sync with what
I had come to expect from him; there were several dramatic failings
from a character I frankly admire for his unbending sense of honor.
As always, part of the joy in reading this is simply due to gaining
another outside view of Hethlin. (And what a view it is! Hah!) But the
rather disparaging recounting of the new esquire's personal traits is
followed quickly by a reminder that Andrahar has not lost his sense of
duty: that he places such a high bar on his expectations for himself
as Hethlin's trainer is heartbreaking, given the caprices of
battle-luck that he has no control over.
Brand's involvement in Andrahar's realization of what he needed to do
to right those wrongs is just... inspired. The interaction between
these two as Andra reaches his internal moment of truth is uplifting
and feels completely, totally right, particularly given Boromir's
relationship to both of them. As always, the connections to other
stories are subtly and seamlessly part of the narrative, adding a
delicious richness to the whole.
Title: Portrait of a Queen · Author: Aruthir · Races: Men · ID: 338
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:17:45 Score: 8
The story of Aldarion and Erendis has enough bad blood and angst from
both sides to make a prize-winning soap opera. The product of this
unhappy marriage is Ancalime, who goes on from the poor example of her
parents to garner a very unhappy marriage for herself. And three
generations later, her great-granddaughter begins "seeing" her...
This is a fascinating and well-conceived look into the first two
Ruling Queens. The writing is engaging and brief; the story is amply
told by what we are given, but the layered hints that Aruthir slips in
had me scrambling for my copy of UT in order to fully appreciate them.
I thought the author was exceedingly inspired to see the potential
connections between these two individuals, but the similarities in
thoughts and attitudes are striking and believable.
Having it told in short snippets highlights the important aspects and
delivers an immense emotional punch, as well as leaving plenty of
questions about the intersections of fate and free will. Was this a
meeting of kindred spirits? What would Telperien have become without
the visits? Excellent!
Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Nath · Races: Other Beings · ID: 314
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 20:20:58 Score: 4
This is one of the most chilling tales I have ever read! Once read,
one cannot stop thinking about the possibilities! Even so, I must
admit I have read this story more than once, because I think it is
simply excellent.
The frightening thing about this story is that it is so very
plausible! The possibility that is suggested at the end is definitely
a logical conclusion, but it is so very chilling to contemplate. After
reading this story, I can never view Old Man Willow in the same way again!
Title: Flickers · Author: Meril · Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 390
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:27:25 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Meril writes with precision and poetry, as always. These drabbles and
half drabbles manage to reflect, in bits and pieces like an
appropriately broken mirror, the history of Feänor and Nerdanel, and
members of their family. [Gathering I] and [Gathering II] were of
interest to me insofar as they are parallel in length and form - the
shortest lines delineate the moment of their greatest distance from
each other, and as the drabbles in between spin out in lengthier
chunks, it's as if they're trying to bridge that gap and fill it.
I especially loved the way [Distinction] and [Strength to Save]
followed on each other and finish in [Reality], suggesting both a
certain triumph of fellowship, and also the irreducible ambiguity of
Feänor and Nerdanel.
Title: The Waker · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 287
Reviewer: Alassante · 2008-11-30 20:27:31 Score: 4
There is a reason why Nancy is known as the drabble queen on Open
Scrolls. She can pack more story and imagery into so few words than
most people can in a full chapter. This story was no different. I
loved the way she gave a voice to a creature who had no language.
Nancy also managed to give it characterization as well. Very original;
I would not have even thought twice about this character. This is a
simply delightful drabble.
Title: Renewal · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 208
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-30 20:27:34 Score: 2
Spoilers!
I loved this account of the renewing of Narsil and turning the sword
into Anduril. Phoenix like,the great sword arises again from flame and
ash.
Title: The Wrong Path · Author: Erviniae · Genres: Drama: Incomplete ·
ID: 538
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-30 20:29:12 Score: 4
Spoilers!
I have dipped into this story on livejournal, although I don't think
I've left much feedback - my bad, yes. I thought it was
well-conceived, and the intolerance of Turgon's Gondolin definitely
resonates for me. I suspect this story isn't typical MEFA fare, but
that's a shame because I've found it a plot-solid and at times thought
provoking read with characters whose fates and happiness I grew to
care very much about..
Title: Unwilling · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 64
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-30 20:31:00 Score: 2
Spoilers!
I loved this poignant account of the fading of the Elves from
M-E,especially the tear drop on the ancient tree.
Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:31:54 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Nancy bills this as [critically bookverse], which is an interesting
description. It's a lovely drabble, brilliantly worded to draw out the
danger into which Boromir rides, and which Denethor foresees. Why not
tell his son?
I get the sense that the drabble draws out Denethor's pride: this
almost sounds like a test that Denethor has been quietly training his
sons to withstand, terrified that the day might come when they'll fail it.
Precisely what failure would mean is not entirely clear: if Boromir
falls... to death? To love? To corruption? Any or all are possible.
Denethor gets a drabble as ambivalent and ambiguous as he deserves, in
my opinion. Well done!
Drabbles · ID: 376
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:35:24 Score: 2
Spoilers!
Oh, how shocked the captain must have been to be beaten in his own
home territory!
Well done!
Title: O Kheled-zâram fair and wonderful! · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 354
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:36:59 Score: 1
How romantic!
Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 152
Reviewer: foxrafer (csevans8) · 2008-11-30 19:37:05 Score: 7
Spoilers!
This is such an incredibly beautiful piece. The tone and language are
perfect. The opening scene gives a great introduction to Thorongil and
Aragorn's role during this time in his life. I particularly love and
appreciate this depiction of Denethor. It is a welcome change to the
many characterizations where he is practically demonized. This
Denethor not only is a sympathetic and likable character, he is also
portrayed with great depth and care.
I really enjoy how after reading this it puts Denethor and Aragorn's
future relationship into a very interesting light, if we assume that
Denethor knows they are the same person. I'm not sure whether I think
Ecthelion knows who Thorongil is or not, but I kind of like that at
least for me it's a bit ambiguous. At the end I decided he doesn't,
but there's something in how he watches them leave that makes we wonder.
A very powerful and thought-provoking story.
Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 19:38:12 Score: 10
I truly cannot describe how deeply this story touches me. I am amazed
at the insight the author Agape4gondor brings to the relationship
between the brothers Boromir and Faramir. Many tales have been written
about the parting between them, as Boromir sets out upon the quest
that was the end result of the dream Faramir and he shared. But this
particular tale of that parting ranks among the best of them! It is
poignant as a farewell between brothers should be, but it is also
stirring to the heart as Boromir speaks strongly of his intentions and
his purpose. I am very much impressed with Boromir here, for he is set
in his heart and his mind for the journey, and yet he can also still
look ahead to what his brother will be facing with Boromir gone. Even
as Boromir gives his brother counsel on how to face that which lies
ahead, he also prevents him from speaking those words that will lessen
his resolve in going, and also undermine Faramir's own confidence in
himself.
I love so much their last night together, and Boromir's tender parting
from Faramir. It is sad in a way, because one feels that Boromir
already has a sense of what is to come, and yet it is ultimately
loving and comforting – everything a farewell should be among kin who
know not when they will see one another again.
I weep every time I read this tale, because it is that beautiful!
Title: Forsaken · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 369
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:39:37 Score: 1
How heart-breaking!
Title: Maglor's Harp · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Horror · ID: 660
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-11-30 19:40:01 Score: 10
Spoilers!
The horror genre is quite a complex one, and a writer does not only
have to resort to events or objects beyond the character's control to
create such an effect. Uli writes a Maglor that in his own reasoning
commits a horrible crime in our eyes, but to him it seems like the
most normal thing to do at that moment. The musician needs an
instrument so for that he just pushes the boundaries as to how far he
can go a bit further every time taking the reader with him. The author
captures the madness and deepest horror of the human mind so immensely
well, a part of this genre I don't see often explored in this fandom.
Personally I like the build up in this story, the tension is so
palpable here that you in a way want to avert your eyes and yet you
simply cannot. The suspension and subtlety is so well done with not
too many details, the suggestion merely is enough to make your skin
crawl. To me it is so well written that over the years his mind also
forgot other things, not only the songs he once sang, the instruments
he played, but also his morality, respect and his own human limits.
One can only imagine how his public will react to his performance,
especially since they might be overwrought (or not) of the girl
missing and there he just sits to entertain. Masterfully written Uli!
Title: Moved to Pity · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 366
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:43:12 Score: 4
Spoilers!
Simple but beautiful, this drabble deals with the aftermath of
Luthien's choice and aptly depicts what Tolkien had in mind when he
said that the Fate of Men would in time become a cause for envy even
among the Firstborn and the Valar. Whether or not they understand it,
they cannot help being affected by it (especially in the
far-from-ordinary case of Luthien), even though in the end all serves
the will of the One. That and much more is wonderfully conveyed in
these hundred words.
Title: Silenced · Author: Illwynd · Genres: Horror · ID: 31
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:47:35 Score: 1
Spoilers!
Oh, my! This is indeed creepy!
Well done!
Title: Flame of Life · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 114
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:47:46 Score: 3
Poetic, touching and insightful, this double-drable records the
thoughts of the Flame Imperishable. It is a real asset to
Tolkien-fanfiction as a whole; while still completely immersed in
Tolkien's world, this is almost meta-fanfiction in a way, touching as
it does on all creation.
Title: The Sky Is Over · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 83
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:59:05 Score: 4
Spoilers!
Sad, poignant and brimming with symbolism from the first to last line,
this drabble sheds light on one of the sorrows of the Noldor in Exile:
Those left behind, and what consequences may arise from it. Finrod is
a good exemplary choice knowing that he had no wife and considered
himself free to participate in Beren's quest for the Silmaril, but
that does not make their prior separation any less painful, as is
easily shown here. Magnificent writing and a strong voice make me want
to read more by this author.
Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 20:01:50 Score: 2
Spoilers!
Not very romantic, but at least practical.... and much better than
starving.
Nicely done!
Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 20:07:13 Score: 2
Spoilers!
It's so hard to stop being responsible for the whole world, especially
when you see how vulnerable is your first child.
Faramir at his fatherly best.
Well done!
Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:08:55 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Kementari's perspective is not often used. Marta takes it up to good
effect here, revealing the bitterness of loss that plays naturally
into resentment over the way in which Yavanna' creations seemed doomed
to be forgotten or taken for granted. The Aftercomers will more easily
overlook her as well, than they will overlook other Valar.
If your greatest creations must be destroyed, one would wish at least
that everyone would remember them, or take all the more care of your
lesser creations, but that is not how the world goes.
Well done, Marta!
Title: Letters From Faramir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Boromir or Faramir · ID: 425
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 20:14:18 Score: 10
Spoilers!
These letters from Faramir, written to his brother, Boromir, while he
is away on his journey, are simply precious! What an extraordinary
look into Faramir's heart they give us. The letters also provide the
reader with much insight into what is going on in Gondor and
especially in Minas Tirith, as well, as war prepares, and as the
people wait for Boromir's return – hopefully with an army at his back!
I love how the series of missives begins with a letter from Boromir.
The reader learns much about Boromir's heart, as well, and even senses
some of his misgivings as to what is to come. This letter sets off a
series of replies from his loving brother, Faramir – replies that may
never reach Boromir, but still they are important and vital for
Faramir to write.
I always feel that being able to express his love and concern and his
sorrow at Boromir's absence in this way must have been very helpful to
Faramir, even therapeutic. Even though his brother Boromir is not
present with him, he is still able to tell him the things that are on
his heart and on his mind. Perhaps Faramir is able to express himself
even more clearly than he might have been able to if Boromir had
actually still been present with him! There is just something about
writing a letter to a dear loved one that allows one to open the heart
to him and to pour out one's soul in an uninhibited manner.
I really appreciate the way these letters follow the chronology of the
tale, so that we know what is happening in Gondor, as well as within
Faramir's heart and mind. This gives a sense of reality and urgency to
the series of letters.
I have always loved this tale, and for me, these letters from Faramir
are an indispensable part of my routine of reading Tolkien's history!
Title: Too Many Rangers · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits · ID: 116
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 20:14:57 Score: 4
Hilarious and clever conclusions drawn from the many stages it took
Tolkien to bring his magnum opus to its final form. The confusing
encounters in Bree had me laugh out loud more than once (to the point
that Laurelin the cat became so thoroughly annoyed she left the room),
and whatever that says about my laughter, it also says a lot about the
quality of this great piece of writing.
Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:15:42 Score: 10
Spoilers!
I think one reason (among many, many others) that I enjoy Altariel's
Faramir stories so much is that the author's writing is as subtle and
understated, and yet as deep, as the Steward and Prince himself. They
compliment each other perfectly, and this is a sublime example.
It is a rare thing we're shown, adult Faramir losing – Beren is as
surprised as the rest of us! (["The Queen," he explained, "has the
advantage of experience."] *snort!*) How he draws Beren into enjoying
his company highlights that his keen observational and interpersonal
skills have not suffered from the passage of time any more than his
dry humor has.
The many historical allusions that accompany the naming of the pieces
are wonderful, just wonderful. Even here, Faramir tucks in quiet
lessons that may resonate later – and do, as we see from Beren's
drawing. Such a beautiful reference to Faramir's White Lady, whom he
will see soon; not too bad a trade, for not living to see the Tower of
the Moon restored. (And that image – through Beren's drawing – was
indeed glorious.)
The interactions between Faramir and his great-grandson are a treasure
for the reader as much as for Faramir, and I love the thought that the
next owner of the chess set has been chosen. Quiet, thoughtful, sad
and hopeful all at once, this is a lovely addition to any
Faramir-lover's fanfic favorites.
Title: Reparation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men · ID: 296
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:16:23 Score: 10
It is always a pleasure to sink back into Isabeau's small corner of
Tolkien fanfic, and that is doubly true when her incredibly real and
finely-crafted OCs are front and center in the story. I admit,
["Reparation"] smoothed out some definite rough spots for me from
["Dol Amroth Yule"], where Andrahar often seemed out of sync with what
I had come to expect from him; there were several dramatic failings
from a character I frankly admire for his unbending sense of honor.
As always, part of the joy in reading this is simply due to gaining
another outside view of Hethlin. (And what a view it is! Hah!) But the
rather disparaging recounting of the new esquire's personal traits is
followed quickly by a reminder that Andrahar has not lost his sense of
duty: that he places such a high bar on his expectations for himself
as Hethlin's trainer is heartbreaking, given the caprices of
battle-luck that he has no control over.
Brand's involvement in Andrahar's realization of what he needed to do
to right those wrongs is just... inspired. The interaction between
these two as Andra reaches his internal moment of truth is uplifting
and feels completely, totally right, particularly given Boromir's
relationship to both of them. As always, the connections to other
stories are subtly and seamlessly part of the narrative, adding a
delicious richness to the whole.
Title: Portrait of a Queen · Author: Aruthir · Races: Men · ID: 338
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:17:45 Score: 8
The story of Aldarion and Erendis has enough bad blood and angst from
both sides to make a prize-winning soap opera. The product of this
unhappy marriage is Ancalime, who goes on from the poor example of her
parents to garner a very unhappy marriage for herself. And three
generations later, her great-granddaughter begins "seeing" her...
This is a fascinating and well-conceived look into the first two
Ruling Queens. The writing is engaging and brief; the story is amply
told by what we are given, but the layered hints that Aruthir slips in
had me scrambling for my copy of UT in order to fully appreciate them.
I thought the author was exceedingly inspired to see the potential
connections between these two individuals, but the similarities in
thoughts and attitudes are striking and believable.
Having it told in short snippets highlights the important aspects and
delivers an immense emotional punch, as well as leaving plenty of
questions about the intersections of fate and free will. Was this a
meeting of kindred spirits? What would Telperien have become without
the visits? Excellent!
Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Nath · Races: Other Beings · ID: 314
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 20:20:58 Score: 4
This is one of the most chilling tales I have ever read! Once read,
one cannot stop thinking about the possibilities! Even so, I must
admit I have read this story more than once, because I think it is
simply excellent.
The frightening thing about this story is that it is so very
plausible! The possibility that is suggested at the end is definitely
a logical conclusion, but it is so very chilling to contemplate. After
reading this story, I can never view Old Man Willow in the same way again!
Title: Flickers · Author: Meril · Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 390
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:27:25 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Meril writes with precision and poetry, as always. These drabbles and
half drabbles manage to reflect, in bits and pieces like an
appropriately broken mirror, the history of Feänor and Nerdanel, and
members of their family. [Gathering I] and [Gathering II] were of
interest to me insofar as they are parallel in length and form - the
shortest lines delineate the moment of their greatest distance from
each other, and as the drabbles in between spin out in lengthier
chunks, it's as if they're trying to bridge that gap and fill it.
I especially loved the way [Distinction] and [Strength to Save]
followed on each other and finish in [Reality], suggesting both a
certain triumph of fellowship, and also the irreducible ambiguity of
Feänor and Nerdanel.
Title: The Waker · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 287
Reviewer: Alassante · 2008-11-30 20:27:31 Score: 4
There is a reason why Nancy is known as the drabble queen on Open
Scrolls. She can pack more story and imagery into so few words than
most people can in a full chapter. This story was no different. I
loved the way she gave a voice to a creature who had no language.
Nancy also managed to give it characterization as well. Very original;
I would not have even thought twice about this character. This is a
simply delightful drabble.
Title: Renewal · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 208
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-30 20:27:34 Score: 2
Spoilers!
I loved this account of the renewing of Narsil and turning the sword
into Anduril. Phoenix like,the great sword arises again from flame and
ash.
Title: The Wrong Path · Author: Erviniae · Genres: Drama: Incomplete ·
ID: 538
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-30 20:29:12 Score: 4
Spoilers!
I have dipped into this story on livejournal, although I don't think
I've left much feedback - my bad, yes. I thought it was
well-conceived, and the intolerance of Turgon's Gondolin definitely
resonates for me. I suspect this story isn't typical MEFA fare, but
that's a shame because I've found it a plot-solid and at times thought
provoking read with characters whose fates and happiness I grew to
care very much about..
Title: Unwilling · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 64
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-30 20:31:00 Score: 2
Spoilers!
I loved this poignant account of the fading of the Elves from
M-E,especially the tear drop on the ancient tree.
Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:31:54 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Nancy bills this as [critically bookverse], which is an interesting
description. It's a lovely drabble, brilliantly worded to draw out the
danger into which Boromir rides, and which Denethor foresees. Why not
tell his son?
I get the sense that the drabble draws out Denethor's pride: this
almost sounds like a test that Denethor has been quietly training his
sons to withstand, terrified that the day might come when they'll fail it.
Precisely what failure would mean is not entirely clear: if Boromir
falls... to death? To love? To corruption? Any or all are possible.
Denethor gets a drabble as ambivalent and ambiguous as he deserves, in
my opinion. Well done!
Msg# 9622
MEFA Reviews for Monday, December 1, 2008 (Morning Set, Part Two) Posted by annmarwalk December 01, 2008 - 4:50:19 Topic ID# 9619Title: Battle upon the Quays · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 376
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:35:24 Score: 2
Spoilers!
Oh, how shocked the captain must have been to be beaten in his own
home territory!
Well done!
Title: O Kheled-zâram fair and wonderful! · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 354
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:36:59 Score: 1
How romantic!
Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 152
Reviewer: foxrafer (csevans8) · 2008-11-30 19:37:05 Score: 7
Spoilers!
This is such an incredibly beautiful piece. The tone and language are
perfect. The opening scene gives a great introduction to Thorongil and
Aragorn's role during this time in his life. I particularly love and
appreciate this depiction of Denethor. It is a welcome change to the
many characterizations where he is practically demonized. This
Denethor not only is a sympathetic and likable character, he is also
portrayed with great depth and care.
I really enjoy how after reading this it puts Denethor and Aragorn's
future relationship into a very interesting light, if we assume that
Denethor knows they are the same person. I'm not sure whether I think
Ecthelion knows who Thorongil is or not, but I kind of like that at
least for me it's a bit ambiguous. At the end I decided he doesn't,
but there's something in how he watches them leave that makes we wonder.
A very powerful and thought-provoking story.
Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 19:38:12 Score: 10
I truly cannot describe how deeply this story touches me. I am amazed
at the insight the author Agape4gondor brings to the relationship
between the brothers Boromir and Faramir. Many tales have been written
about the parting between them, as Boromir sets out upon the quest
that was the end result of the dream Faramir and he shared. But this
particular tale of that parting ranks among the best of them! It is
poignant as a farewell between brothers should be, but it is also
stirring to the heart as Boromir speaks strongly of his intentions and
his purpose. I am very much impressed with Boromir here, for he is set
in his heart and his mind for the journey, and yet he can also still
look ahead to what his brother will be facing with Boromir gone. Even
as Boromir gives his brother counsel on how to face that which lies
ahead, he also prevents him from speaking those words that will lessen
his resolve in going, and also undermine Faramir's own confidence in
himself.
I love so much their last night together, and Boromir's tender parting
from Faramir. It is sad in a way, because one feels that Boromir
already has a sense of what is to come, and yet it is ultimately
loving and comforting – everything a farewell should be among kin who
know not when they will see one another again.
I weep every time I read this tale, because it is that beautiful!
Title: Forsaken · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 369
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:39:37 Score: 1
How heart-breaking!
Title: Maglor's Harp · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Horror · ID: 660
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-11-30 19:40:01 Score: 10
Spoilers!
The horror genre is quite a complex one, and a writer does not only
have to resort to events or objects beyond the character's control to
create such an effect. Uli writes a Maglor that in his own reasoning
commits a horrible crime in our eyes, but to him it seems like the
most normal thing to do at that moment. The musician needs an
instrument so for that he just pushes the boundaries as to how far he
can go a bit further every time taking the reader with him. The author
captures the madness and deepest horror of the human mind so immensely
well, a part of this genre I don't see often explored in this fandom.
Personally I like the build up in this story, the tension is so
palpable here that you in a way want to avert your eyes and yet you
simply cannot. The suspension and subtlety is so well done with not
too many details, the suggestion merely is enough to make your skin
crawl. To me it is so well written that over the years his mind also
forgot other things, not only the songs he once sang, the instruments
he played, but also his morality, respect and his own human limits.
One can only imagine how his public will react to his performance,
especially since they might be overwrought (or not) of the girl
missing and there he just sits to entertain. Masterfully written Uli!
Title: Moved to Pity · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 366
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:43:12 Score: 4
Spoilers!
Simple but beautiful, this drabble deals with the aftermath of
Luthien's choice and aptly depicts what Tolkien had in mind when he
said that the Fate of Men would in time become a cause for envy even
among the Firstborn and the Valar. Whether or not they understand it,
they cannot help being affected by it (especially in the
far-from-ordinary case of Luthien), even though in the end all serves
the will of the One. That and much more is wonderfully conveyed in
these hundred words.
Title: Silenced · Author: Illwynd · Genres: Horror · ID: 31
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:47:35 Score: 1
Spoilers!
Oh, my! This is indeed creepy!
Well done!
Title: Flame of Life · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 114
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:47:46 Score: 3
Poetic, touching and insightful, this double-drable records the
thoughts of the Flame Imperishable. It is a real asset to
Tolkien-fanfiction as a whole; while still completely immersed in
Tolkien's world, this is almost meta-fanfiction in a way, touching as
it does on all creation.
Title: The Sky Is Over · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 83
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:59:05 Score: 4
Spoilers!
Sad, poignant and brimming with symbolism from the first to last line,
this drabble sheds light on one of the sorrows of the Noldor in Exile:
Those left behind, and what consequences may arise from it. Finrod is
a good exemplary choice knowing that he had no wife and considered
himself free to participate in Beren's quest for the Silmaril, but
that does not make their prior separation any less painful, as is
easily shown here. Magnificent writing and a strong voice make me want
to read more by this author.
Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 20:01:50 Score: 2
Spoilers!
Not very romantic, but at least practical.... and much better than
starving.
Nicely done!
Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 20:07:13 Score: 2
Spoilers!
It's so hard to stop being responsible for the whole world, especially
when you see how vulnerable is your first child.
Faramir at his fatherly best.
Well done!
Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:08:55 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Kementari's perspective is not often used. Marta takes it up to good
effect here, revealing the bitterness of loss that plays naturally
into resentment over the way in which Yavanna' creations seemed doomed
to be forgotten or taken for granted. The Aftercomers will more easily
overlook her as well, than they will overlook other Valar.
If your greatest creations must be destroyed, one would wish at least
that everyone would remember them, or take all the more care of your
lesser creations, but that is not how the world goes.
Well done, Marta!
Title: Letters From Faramir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Boromir or Faramir · ID: 425
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 20:14:18 Score: 10
Spoilers!
These letters from Faramir, written to his brother, Boromir, while he
is away on his journey, are simply precious! What an extraordinary
look into Faramir's heart they give us. The letters also provide the
reader with much insight into what is going on in Gondor and
especially in Minas Tirith, as well, as war prepares, and as the
people wait for Boromir's return – hopefully with an army at his back!
I love how the series of missives begins with a letter from Boromir.
The reader learns much about Boromir's heart, as well, and even senses
some of his misgivings as to what is to come. This letter sets off a
series of replies from his loving brother, Faramir – replies that may
never reach Boromir, but still they are important and vital for
Faramir to write.
I always feel that being able to express his love and concern and his
sorrow at Boromir's absence in this way must have been very helpful to
Faramir, even therapeutic. Even though his brother Boromir is not
present with him, he is still able to tell him the things that are on
his heart and on his mind. Perhaps Faramir is able to express himself
even more clearly than he might have been able to if Boromir had
actually still been present with him! There is just something about
writing a letter to a dear loved one that allows one to open the heart
to him and to pour out one's soul in an uninhibited manner.
I really appreciate the way these letters follow the chronology of the
tale, so that we know what is happening in Gondor, as well as within
Faramir's heart and mind. This gives a sense of reality and urgency to
the series of letters.
I have always loved this tale, and for me, these letters from Faramir
are an indispensable part of my routine of reading Tolkien's history!
Title: Too Many Rangers · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits · ID: 116
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 20:14:57 Score: 4
Hilarious and clever conclusions drawn from the many stages it took
Tolkien to bring his magnum opus to its final form. The confusing
encounters in Bree had me laugh out loud more than once (to the point
that Laurelin the cat became so thoroughly annoyed she left the room),
and whatever that says about my laughter, it also says a lot about the
quality of this great piece of writing.
Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:15:42 Score: 10
Spoilers!
I think one reason (among many, many others) that I enjoy Altariel's
Faramir stories so much is that the author's writing is as subtle and
understated, and yet as deep, as the Steward and Prince himself. They
compliment each other perfectly, and this is a sublime example.
It is a rare thing we're shown, adult Faramir losing – Beren is as
surprised as the rest of us! (["The Queen," he explained, "has the
advantage of experience."] *snort!*) How he draws Beren into enjoying
his company highlights that his keen observational and interpersonal
skills have not suffered from the passage of time any more than his
dry humor has.
The many historical allusions that accompany the naming of the pieces
are wonderful, just wonderful. Even here, Faramir tucks in quiet
lessons that may resonate later – and do, as we see from Beren's
drawing. Such a beautiful reference to Faramir's White Lady, whom he
will see soon; not too bad a trade, for not living to see the Tower of
the Moon restored. (And that image – through Beren's drawing – was
indeed glorious.)
The interactions between Faramir and his great-grandson are a treasure
for the reader as much as for Faramir, and I love the thought that the
next owner of the chess set has been chosen. Quiet, thoughtful, sad
and hopeful all at once, this is a lovely addition to any
Faramir-lover's fanfic favorites.
Title: Reparation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men · ID: 296
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:16:23 Score: 10
It is always a pleasure to sink back into Isabeau's small corner of
Tolkien fanfic, and that is doubly true when her incredibly real and
finely-crafted OCs are front and center in the story. I admit,
["Reparation"] smoothed out some definite rough spots for me from
["Dol Amroth Yule"], where Andrahar often seemed out of sync with what
I had come to expect from him; there were several dramatic failings
from a character I frankly admire for his unbending sense of honor.
As always, part of the joy in reading this is simply due to gaining
another outside view of Hethlin. (And what a view it is! Hah!) But the
rather disparaging recounting of the new esquire's personal traits is
followed quickly by a reminder that Andrahar has not lost his sense of
duty: that he places such a high bar on his expectations for himself
as Hethlin's trainer is heartbreaking, given the caprices of
battle-luck that he has no control over.
Brand's involvement in Andrahar's realization of what he needed to do
to right those wrongs is just... inspired. The interaction between
these two as Andra reaches his internal moment of truth is uplifting
and feels completely, totally right, particularly given Boromir's
relationship to both of them. As always, the connections to other
stories are subtly and seamlessly part of the narrative, adding a
delicious richness to the whole.
Title: Portrait of a Queen · Author: Aruthir · Races: Men · ID: 338
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:17:45 Score: 8
The story of Aldarion and Erendis has enough bad blood and angst from
both sides to make a prize-winning soap opera. The product of this
unhappy marriage is Ancalime, who goes on from the poor example of her
parents to garner a very unhappy marriage for herself. And three
generations later, her great-granddaughter begins "seeing" her...
This is a fascinating and well-conceived look into the first two
Ruling Queens. The writing is engaging and brief; the story is amply
told by what we are given, but the layered hints that Aruthir slips in
had me scrambling for my copy of UT in order to fully appreciate them.
I thought the author was exceedingly inspired to see the potential
connections between these two individuals, but the similarities in
thoughts and attitudes are striking and believable.
Having it told in short snippets highlights the important aspects and
delivers an immense emotional punch, as well as leaving plenty of
questions about the intersections of fate and free will. Was this a
meeting of kindred spirits? What would Telperien have become without
the visits? Excellent!
Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Nath · Races: Other Beings · ID: 314
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 20:20:58 Score: 4
This is one of the most chilling tales I have ever read! Once read,
one cannot stop thinking about the possibilities! Even so, I must
admit I have read this story more than once, because I think it is
simply excellent.
The frightening thing about this story is that it is so very
plausible! The possibility that is suggested at the end is definitely
a logical conclusion, but it is so very chilling to contemplate. After
reading this story, I can never view Old Man Willow in the same way again!
Title: Flickers · Author: Meril · Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 390
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:27:25 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Meril writes with precision and poetry, as always. These drabbles and
half drabbles manage to reflect, in bits and pieces like an
appropriately broken mirror, the history of Feänor and Nerdanel, and
members of their family. [Gathering I] and [Gathering II] were of
interest to me insofar as they are parallel in length and form - the
shortest lines delineate the moment of their greatest distance from
each other, and as the drabbles in between spin out in lengthier
chunks, it's as if they're trying to bridge that gap and fill it.
I especially loved the way [Distinction] and [Strength to Save]
followed on each other and finish in [Reality], suggesting both a
certain triumph of fellowship, and also the irreducible ambiguity of
Feänor and Nerdanel.
Title: The Waker · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 287
Reviewer: Alassante · 2008-11-30 20:27:31 Score: 4
There is a reason why Nancy is known as the drabble queen on Open
Scrolls. She can pack more story and imagery into so few words than
most people can in a full chapter. This story was no different. I
loved the way she gave a voice to a creature who had no language.
Nancy also managed to give it characterization as well. Very original;
I would not have even thought twice about this character. This is a
simply delightful drabble.
Title: Renewal · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 208
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-30 20:27:34 Score: 2
Spoilers!
I loved this account of the renewing of Narsil and turning the sword
into Anduril. Phoenix like,the great sword arises again from flame and
ash.
Title: The Wrong Path · Author: Erviniae · Genres: Drama: Incomplete ·
ID: 538
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-30 20:29:12 Score: 4
Spoilers!
I have dipped into this story on livejournal, although I don't think
I've left much feedback - my bad, yes. I thought it was
well-conceived, and the intolerance of Turgon's Gondolin definitely
resonates for me. I suspect this story isn't typical MEFA fare, but
that's a shame because I've found it a plot-solid and at times thought
provoking read with characters whose fates and happiness I grew to
care very much about..
Title: Unwilling · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 64
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-30 20:31:00 Score: 2
Spoilers!
I loved this poignant account of the fading of the Elves from
M-E,especially the tear drop on the ancient tree.
Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:31:54 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Nancy bills this as [critically bookverse], which is an interesting
description. It's a lovely drabble, brilliantly worded to draw out the
danger into which Boromir rides, and which Denethor foresees. Why not
tell his son?
I get the sense that the drabble draws out Denethor's pride: this
almost sounds like a test that Denethor has been quietly training his
sons to withstand, terrified that the day might come when they'll fail it.
Precisely what failure would mean is not entirely clear: if Boromir
falls... to death? To love? To corruption? Any or all are possible.
Denethor gets a drabble as ambivalent and ambiguous as he deserves, in
my opinion. Well done!
Drabbles · ID: 376
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:35:24 Score: 2
Spoilers!
Oh, how shocked the captain must have been to be beaten in his own
home territory!
Well done!
Title: O Kheled-zâram fair and wonderful! · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 354
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:36:59 Score: 1
How romantic!
Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 152
Reviewer: foxrafer (csevans8) · 2008-11-30 19:37:05 Score: 7
Spoilers!
This is such an incredibly beautiful piece. The tone and language are
perfect. The opening scene gives a great introduction to Thorongil and
Aragorn's role during this time in his life. I particularly love and
appreciate this depiction of Denethor. It is a welcome change to the
many characterizations where he is practically demonized. This
Denethor not only is a sympathetic and likable character, he is also
portrayed with great depth and care.
I really enjoy how after reading this it puts Denethor and Aragorn's
future relationship into a very interesting light, if we assume that
Denethor knows they are the same person. I'm not sure whether I think
Ecthelion knows who Thorongil is or not, but I kind of like that at
least for me it's a bit ambiguous. At the end I decided he doesn't,
but there's something in how he watches them leave that makes we wonder.
A very powerful and thought-provoking story.
Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 19:38:12 Score: 10
I truly cannot describe how deeply this story touches me. I am amazed
at the insight the author Agape4gondor brings to the relationship
between the brothers Boromir and Faramir. Many tales have been written
about the parting between them, as Boromir sets out upon the quest
that was the end result of the dream Faramir and he shared. But this
particular tale of that parting ranks among the best of them! It is
poignant as a farewell between brothers should be, but it is also
stirring to the heart as Boromir speaks strongly of his intentions and
his purpose. I am very much impressed with Boromir here, for he is set
in his heart and his mind for the journey, and yet he can also still
look ahead to what his brother will be facing with Boromir gone. Even
as Boromir gives his brother counsel on how to face that which lies
ahead, he also prevents him from speaking those words that will lessen
his resolve in going, and also undermine Faramir's own confidence in
himself.
I love so much their last night together, and Boromir's tender parting
from Faramir. It is sad in a way, because one feels that Boromir
already has a sense of what is to come, and yet it is ultimately
loving and comforting – everything a farewell should be among kin who
know not when they will see one another again.
I weep every time I read this tale, because it is that beautiful!
Title: Forsaken · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 369
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:39:37 Score: 1
How heart-breaking!
Title: Maglor's Harp · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Horror · ID: 660
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-11-30 19:40:01 Score: 10
Spoilers!
The horror genre is quite a complex one, and a writer does not only
have to resort to events or objects beyond the character's control to
create such an effect. Uli writes a Maglor that in his own reasoning
commits a horrible crime in our eyes, but to him it seems like the
most normal thing to do at that moment. The musician needs an
instrument so for that he just pushes the boundaries as to how far he
can go a bit further every time taking the reader with him. The author
captures the madness and deepest horror of the human mind so immensely
well, a part of this genre I don't see often explored in this fandom.
Personally I like the build up in this story, the tension is so
palpable here that you in a way want to avert your eyes and yet you
simply cannot. The suspension and subtlety is so well done with not
too many details, the suggestion merely is enough to make your skin
crawl. To me it is so well written that over the years his mind also
forgot other things, not only the songs he once sang, the instruments
he played, but also his morality, respect and his own human limits.
One can only imagine how his public will react to his performance,
especially since they might be overwrought (or not) of the girl
missing and there he just sits to entertain. Masterfully written Uli!
Title: Moved to Pity · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 366
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:43:12 Score: 4
Spoilers!
Simple but beautiful, this drabble deals with the aftermath of
Luthien's choice and aptly depicts what Tolkien had in mind when he
said that the Fate of Men would in time become a cause for envy even
among the Firstborn and the Valar. Whether or not they understand it,
they cannot help being affected by it (especially in the
far-from-ordinary case of Luthien), even though in the end all serves
the will of the One. That and much more is wonderfully conveyed in
these hundred words.
Title: Silenced · Author: Illwynd · Genres: Horror · ID: 31
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 19:47:35 Score: 1
Spoilers!
Oh, my! This is indeed creepy!
Well done!
Title: Flame of Life · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 114
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:47:46 Score: 3
Poetic, touching and insightful, this double-drable records the
thoughts of the Flame Imperishable. It is a real asset to
Tolkien-fanfiction as a whole; while still completely immersed in
Tolkien's world, this is almost meta-fanfiction in a way, touching as
it does on all creation.
Title: The Sky Is Over · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 83
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 19:59:05 Score: 4
Spoilers!
Sad, poignant and brimming with symbolism from the first to last line,
this drabble sheds light on one of the sorrows of the Noldor in Exile:
Those left behind, and what consequences may arise from it. Finrod is
a good exemplary choice knowing that he had no wife and considered
himself free to participate in Beren's quest for the Silmaril, but
that does not make their prior separation any less painful, as is
easily shown here. Magnificent writing and a strong voice make me want
to read more by this author.
Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 20:01:50 Score: 2
Spoilers!
Not very romantic, but at least practical.... and much better than
starving.
Nicely done!
Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-11-30 20:07:13 Score: 2
Spoilers!
It's so hard to stop being responsible for the whole world, especially
when you see how vulnerable is your first child.
Faramir at his fatherly best.
Well done!
Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:08:55 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Kementari's perspective is not often used. Marta takes it up to good
effect here, revealing the bitterness of loss that plays naturally
into resentment over the way in which Yavanna' creations seemed doomed
to be forgotten or taken for granted. The Aftercomers will more easily
overlook her as well, than they will overlook other Valar.
If your greatest creations must be destroyed, one would wish at least
that everyone would remember them, or take all the more care of your
lesser creations, but that is not how the world goes.
Well done, Marta!
Title: Letters From Faramir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Boromir or Faramir · ID: 425
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 20:14:18 Score: 10
Spoilers!
These letters from Faramir, written to his brother, Boromir, while he
is away on his journey, are simply precious! What an extraordinary
look into Faramir's heart they give us. The letters also provide the
reader with much insight into what is going on in Gondor and
especially in Minas Tirith, as well, as war prepares, and as the
people wait for Boromir's return – hopefully with an army at his back!
I love how the series of missives begins with a letter from Boromir.
The reader learns much about Boromir's heart, as well, and even senses
some of his misgivings as to what is to come. This letter sets off a
series of replies from his loving brother, Faramir – replies that may
never reach Boromir, but still they are important and vital for
Faramir to write.
I always feel that being able to express his love and concern and his
sorrow at Boromir's absence in this way must have been very helpful to
Faramir, even therapeutic. Even though his brother Boromir is not
present with him, he is still able to tell him the things that are on
his heart and on his mind. Perhaps Faramir is able to express himself
even more clearly than he might have been able to if Boromir had
actually still been present with him! There is just something about
writing a letter to a dear loved one that allows one to open the heart
to him and to pour out one's soul in an uninhibited manner.
I really appreciate the way these letters follow the chronology of the
tale, so that we know what is happening in Gondor, as well as within
Faramir's heart and mind. This gives a sense of reality and urgency to
the series of letters.
I have always loved this tale, and for me, these letters from Faramir
are an indispensable part of my routine of reading Tolkien's history!
Title: Too Many Rangers · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits · ID: 116
Reviewer: Elleth · 2008-11-30 20:14:57 Score: 4
Hilarious and clever conclusions drawn from the many stages it took
Tolkien to bring his magnum opus to its final form. The confusing
encounters in Bree had me laugh out loud more than once (to the point
that Laurelin the cat became so thoroughly annoyed she left the room),
and whatever that says about my laughter, it also says a lot about the
quality of this great piece of writing.
Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:15:42 Score: 10
Spoilers!
I think one reason (among many, many others) that I enjoy Altariel's
Faramir stories so much is that the author's writing is as subtle and
understated, and yet as deep, as the Steward and Prince himself. They
compliment each other perfectly, and this is a sublime example.
It is a rare thing we're shown, adult Faramir losing – Beren is as
surprised as the rest of us! (["The Queen," he explained, "has the
advantage of experience."] *snort!*) How he draws Beren into enjoying
his company highlights that his keen observational and interpersonal
skills have not suffered from the passage of time any more than his
dry humor has.
The many historical allusions that accompany the naming of the pieces
are wonderful, just wonderful. Even here, Faramir tucks in quiet
lessons that may resonate later – and do, as we see from Beren's
drawing. Such a beautiful reference to Faramir's White Lady, whom he
will see soon; not too bad a trade, for not living to see the Tower of
the Moon restored. (And that image – through Beren's drawing – was
indeed glorious.)
The interactions between Faramir and his great-grandson are a treasure
for the reader as much as for Faramir, and I love the thought that the
next owner of the chess set has been chosen. Quiet, thoughtful, sad
and hopeful all at once, this is a lovely addition to any
Faramir-lover's fanfic favorites.
Title: Reparation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men · ID: 296
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:16:23 Score: 10
It is always a pleasure to sink back into Isabeau's small corner of
Tolkien fanfic, and that is doubly true when her incredibly real and
finely-crafted OCs are front and center in the story. I admit,
["Reparation"] smoothed out some definite rough spots for me from
["Dol Amroth Yule"], where Andrahar often seemed out of sync with what
I had come to expect from him; there were several dramatic failings
from a character I frankly admire for his unbending sense of honor.
As always, part of the joy in reading this is simply due to gaining
another outside view of Hethlin. (And what a view it is! Hah!) But the
rather disparaging recounting of the new esquire's personal traits is
followed quickly by a reminder that Andrahar has not lost his sense of
duty: that he places such a high bar on his expectations for himself
as Hethlin's trainer is heartbreaking, given the caprices of
battle-luck that he has no control over.
Brand's involvement in Andrahar's realization of what he needed to do
to right those wrongs is just... inspired. The interaction between
these two as Andra reaches his internal moment of truth is uplifting
and feels completely, totally right, particularly given Boromir's
relationship to both of them. As always, the connections to other
stories are subtly and seamlessly part of the narrative, adding a
delicious richness to the whole.
Title: Portrait of a Queen · Author: Aruthir · Races: Men · ID: 338
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-30 20:17:45 Score: 8
The story of Aldarion and Erendis has enough bad blood and angst from
both sides to make a prize-winning soap opera. The product of this
unhappy marriage is Ancalime, who goes on from the poor example of her
parents to garner a very unhappy marriage for herself. And three
generations later, her great-granddaughter begins "seeing" her...
This is a fascinating and well-conceived look into the first two
Ruling Queens. The writing is engaging and brief; the story is amply
told by what we are given, but the layered hints that Aruthir slips in
had me scrambling for my copy of UT in order to fully appreciate them.
I thought the author was exceedingly inspired to see the potential
connections between these two individuals, but the similarities in
thoughts and attitudes are striking and believable.
Having it told in short snippets highlights the important aspects and
delivers an immense emotional punch, as well as leaving plenty of
questions about the intersections of fate and free will. Was this a
meeting of kindred spirits? What would Telperien have become without
the visits? Excellent!
Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Nath · Races: Other Beings · ID: 314
Reviewer: Linaewen · 2008-11-30 20:20:58 Score: 4
This is one of the most chilling tales I have ever read! Once read,
one cannot stop thinking about the possibilities! Even so, I must
admit I have read this story more than once, because I think it is
simply excellent.
The frightening thing about this story is that it is so very
plausible! The possibility that is suggested at the end is definitely
a logical conclusion, but it is so very chilling to contemplate. After
reading this story, I can never view Old Man Willow in the same way again!
Title: Flickers · Author: Meril · Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 390
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:27:25 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Meril writes with precision and poetry, as always. These drabbles and
half drabbles manage to reflect, in bits and pieces like an
appropriately broken mirror, the history of Feänor and Nerdanel, and
members of their family. [Gathering I] and [Gathering II] were of
interest to me insofar as they are parallel in length and form - the
shortest lines delineate the moment of their greatest distance from
each other, and as the drabbles in between spin out in lengthier
chunks, it's as if they're trying to bridge that gap and fill it.
I especially loved the way [Distinction] and [Strength to Save]
followed on each other and finish in [Reality], suggesting both a
certain triumph of fellowship, and also the irreducible ambiguity of
Feänor and Nerdanel.
Title: The Waker · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 287
Reviewer: Alassante · 2008-11-30 20:27:31 Score: 4
There is a reason why Nancy is known as the drabble queen on Open
Scrolls. She can pack more story and imagery into so few words than
most people can in a full chapter. This story was no different. I
loved the way she gave a voice to a creature who had no language.
Nancy also managed to give it characterization as well. Very original;
I would not have even thought twice about this character. This is a
simply delightful drabble.
Title: Renewal · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 208
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-30 20:27:34 Score: 2
Spoilers!
I loved this account of the renewing of Narsil and turning the sword
into Anduril. Phoenix like,the great sword arises again from flame and
ash.
Title: The Wrong Path · Author: Erviniae · Genres: Drama: Incomplete ·
ID: 538
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-30 20:29:12 Score: 4
Spoilers!
I have dipped into this story on livejournal, although I don't think
I've left much feedback - my bad, yes. I thought it was
well-conceived, and the intolerance of Turgon's Gondolin definitely
resonates for me. I suspect this story isn't typical MEFA fare, but
that's a shame because I've found it a plot-solid and at times thought
provoking read with characters whose fates and happiness I grew to
care very much about..
Title: Unwilling · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 64
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-30 20:31:00 Score: 2
Spoilers!
I loved this poignant account of the fading of the Elves from
M-E,especially the tear drop on the ancient tree.
Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-30 20:31:54 Score: 5
Spoilers!
Nancy bills this as [critically bookverse], which is an interesting
description. It's a lovely drabble, brilliantly worded to draw out the
danger into which Boromir rides, and which Denethor foresees. Why not
tell his son?
I get the sense that the drabble draws out Denethor's pride: this
almost sounds like a test that Denethor has been quietly training his
sons to withstand, terrified that the day might come when they'll fail it.
Precisely what failure would mean is not entirely clear: if Boromir
falls... to death? To love? To corruption? Any or all are possible.
Denethor gets a drabble as ambivalent and ambiguous as he deserves, in
my opinion. Well done!
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