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Hey guys,

I will be out of touch this weekend starting in just over an hour. I
am moving to a different state for grad school. I may be able to check
email later tonight but probably not after that until Monday
afternoon. I also will probably have less time to devote to answering
emails as I get settled in.

Password requests, questions, etc. may take longer to get answered but
I will get to them. Just please be patient. If there is a technical
problem with the web site you can continue to post them here. Please
put "Attn: Anthony" at the beginning of the subject line to help
Anthony spot them.

The reviews should be available this weekend - I think at midnight
tonight GMT if I understand correctly. I was planning to begin posting
them to this group at a rate of twenty-five reviews a day until I post
around the first of September. But you guys are doing such a
first-rate job of reviewing that I don't think I'd get them all
posted. So I will probably start doing that as soon as I get internet
restored next week.

Happy reviewing,
Marta

I was logged into the voting site and was going to go read some
stories, when I got booted. Apparently there's some sort of connection
failure. I've tried a few other pages, including the basic login page,
and I get the same message.

Dwim

dwimmer_laik wrote:

> I was logged into the voting site and was going to go read some
> stories, when I got booted. Apparently there's some sort of connection
> failure. I've tried a few other pages, including the basic login page,
> and I get the same message.

It's a problem at the host, there isn't much we can do right now, unless
Anthony contacts them directly by e-mail or phone. At their site I
can't discover if they have maintenance planned or are undergoing that
as we speak.. so yeah.

Rhapsody

> It's a problem at the host, there isn't much we can do right now,

unless

> Anthony contacts them directly by e-mail or phone. At their site I
> can't discover if they have maintenance planned or are undergoing

that

> as we speak.. so yeah.
>
> Rhapsody
>

Phooey! Ah well, thanks for establishing it's not just my connection
that is misbehaving.

Dwim

dwimmer_laik wrote:

>>It's a problem at the host, there isn't much we can do right now,
>>unless Anthony contacts them directly by e-mail or phone. At their

site I

>>can't discover if they have maintenance planned or are undergoing that
>>as we speak.. so yeah.
>
> Phooey! Ah well, thanks for establishing it's not just my connection
> that is misbehaving.

Even more: it's back online again. :) Happy reading & reviewing.

Rhapsody

I'm trying to connect to the Mefa site and I can't connect. I get site
not found.

Chris

obsidianjj wrote:

>
>
> I'm trying to connect to the Mefa site and I can't connect. I get site
> not found.
>
> Chris
>

Hi Chris,

I timed out earlier this morning but was able to connect just now. Are
you still having a problem?

Marta

Never mind. The site is accessible again.

Chris

Hey guys,

I'm pleased to announce that Dreamflower's story "Consequences of a
Fall" is now complete. As such I've moved it out of the "Hobbits:
Incomplete" subcategory and into "Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort".

We have several other incomplete stories. If you know that any of
these have been completed please have the author contact me at
mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com. We'll move it to a group of completed
stories within the same main category.

Let me emphasize - if the author is still adding chapters or editing
the story, they don't have to do anything. The author only needs to
get in touch if they complete the story before voting ends in early
November.

The incomplete stories are:

"Redemption of Meriadoc" by aelfgifuemma
"Tales of Life" by Ainu Laire
"Paradox of the Fourth Age" by Alassante
"Feanorian Fates Drabble Series" by Alassante
"On Frozen Shores" by ann_arien
"Crickhollow March 1420" by Anso the Hobbit
"To Tell a Tale" by Anso the Hobbit, Beruthiel, Bodkin, Dreamflower,
Elendiari22, Jay of Lasgalen, Lindelea, Pearl Took, pipkinsweetgrass,
Rabidsamfan, and Shirebound
"Sweet Woodbine" by Bodkin
"Okay, NOW Panic!" by Boz4PM
"Book Learning" by Branwyn
"Shadows of a Nameless Fear" by Budgielover
"Great Auntie Pringle Took" by Cathleen
"Rivendell 9 to 5" by Claudio
"Mirrors of Numenor" by Dostoevsky's Mouse
"A Secret Gate" by Elanor
"In the Stillness Between Moments" by Elariel Erestorion
"Green and Golden" by Elentari2
"Dawn of a New Age: First Age" by elliska
"Interrupted Journeys: Journeys of Discovery" by elliska
"To Follow an Elf" by etharei
"In a Mind's Eye" by Garnet Took
"House of Finwe" by Ghettoelleth
"The River" by Indigo Bunting
"The First Age of the Sun" by Inglor
"To the King!" by Ithil-Valon
"Exiled" by Jaffee Leeds
"The Return of the Shadow" by juno_magic
"Untold Tales of the Mark: The Banishment of Eomer" by Katzilla
"The Golden Mask" by kwannom
"The Salt Rose" by Lady Aranel
"The Lesson" by Lady Aranel
"Champions: Out of the Past" by LadyDeb1970
"Hard to Forgive, Hard to Forget" by laiquendi
"When Winter Fell" by Lindelea
"The Tenth Walker" by Lindelea
"Man of Gondor" by LittleHobbitGal
"The Painting" by LuthienTinuviel
"The Golden Bell of Greenleaf" by lwarren
"Laws of Them Hills" by Make It Stop and Princess Faz
"Bad Step" by Mariole
"Threshold" by Mechtild
"A Matter of Honor" by meckinock
"The Princess and the Horse Lord" by Oshun
"A Bargain At Any Price" by quizzabella
"Brothers At Heart" by Radbooks
"Fire and Flowering" by Raksha the Demon
"Celebrian, Sell i Nos Galadhad" by Redheredh
"Requiem" by Rhapsody
"Written in the Starlight" by Rhapsody and Robinka
"The Prince and the Librarian" by Sazziel
"Heralded By Storms" by SilverMoonLady
"Welcome to Rivendell Mr. Anderson" by Snodgrass and Winkle
"Avoidance" by stefaniab
"The King's Surgeon" by SurgicalSteel
"Strange Fortunes" by Tehta
"Invasion of the 'Sues" by The Last Temptation of Homer
"Untrodden Path" by Timmy2222
"Eternal" by Trekqueen
"Metamorphosis" by wenont
"Incubus" by Werecat
"Reconciliation" by Willow_41z

Thanks for your help,
Marta

aure_enteluva wrote:

>
>
> Hey guys,
>
> I'm pleased to announce that Dreamflower's story "Consequences of a
> Fall" is now complete. As such I've moved it out of the "Hobbits:
> Incomplete" subcategory and into "Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort".
>

<snippage>

> "Sweet Woodbine" by Bodkin

Bodkin has emailed me to say this piece is now complete. I have moved it
from "Fourth Age: Incomplete" into "Fourth Age: General". So you can now
find that story there.

Hey guys,

I promised that once I was somewhat settled after my move I would start
posting reviews to this listserv. All of the final reviews submitted
before the latest Friday noon will be visible by logging in to
http://www.mefawards.net/MEFA2006/ (or clicking the "login as guest"
link) and then clicking the "Reviews" or "Author Reviews" link in the
blue bar at the top of the page. In the past they have also been posted
to this list.

I had initially planned to post them in groupings of twenty-five reviews
a day. However, looking at it... you guys have written a lot of reviews!
And that's great, exactly what you should be doing. However, there are
1,254 final reviews. That's enough for fifty-one days at twenty-five
reviews a day, without adding any more reviews. And the end of the
awards will be here before we know it.

So I think I'm going to post fifty a day for a while at least. If we get
caught up I may cut it back to twenty-five reviews a day. But to keep
the emails at a somewhat manageable size I'm going to make two emails of
twenty-five each. I can split these reviews up into any groupings of
ten, twenty-five, or fifty reviews each. So if five emails of ten each
would work better I could do that, or if you'd prefer one long email of
fifty reviews I could do that too. Let me know.

Anyway, without further adieu...

Title: The Roots of the Ivy · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 118
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-05-03 11:50:46 Score: 10

The Roots of the Ivy is an epic Alternative Universe novel.
The story is based on a premise that seems almost inconceivable at first
glance: on the evening before the Battle on the Fields of the Pelennor,
Merry and Éowyn comfort each other in the secrecy of their shared
tent, with the result that Éowyn conceives Merry's child.
The Roots of the Ivy follows the life of this child, Ivy Brandybuck,
half-Hobbit, half-human.
The story begins with Ivy's conception and the awkward circumstances of
her birth. Then it moves on to relate how she grows up in the Shire and
in Gondor, and never seems to fit in either culture. In the Shire Ivy is
too tall and matures too quickly, in Gondor she is too small and too
young for her age. When she finally falls in love, it's at the wrong
time and with the wrong person. At first it seems that there will be no
chance for her love... and I'm not going to give away more at this
point. But how Ivy finally manages to find her place in life, to hold on
to her love, and finally to have the family she has always dreamed of,
is a touching, exciting story that can be read and enjoyed again and again.
As unbelievable as the premise of the story may seem, as realistically
the story is developed. What's more, the spirit of Tolkien's
Middle-earth is more present in this story than in many canon stories
that I have read over the years.
The plot is carefully structured and moves along at an exciting pace in
relatively short chapters that make online reading very easy.
The characters, no matter if canon or original, are rounded and
believable. Even minor characters become real and have a background and
a voice of their own. The cultures of Middle-earth are well-researched,
down to details of marriage customs or the question of inheritance.
Middle-earth really feels real in this story, and soon the idea of Merry
and Éowyn having a child together feels more like a detail that Tolkien
left out in his telling of LOTR, because well, the story is a little
awkward and less than proper.
A highlight of the story is the excellent use of dialogue. Without doubt
that's one of the strongest points of the authors. Every character has a
distinct voice, and when we read their arguments or their romantic
whisperings, every word sounds true.
The story also contains adult scenes. Hobbits are not cute, childish,
inane figures in The Roots of the Ivy. They are real persons, some
good, some bad. Tensions and problems are not glossed over, but
dramatically developed and in the end very satisfyingly resolved.
And yes, Hobbits do have sex! Tasteful, stirring and realistic love
scenes are another talent of Aranel Took. A pleasure to read for any
adult reader who doesn't want the usual tedious smut. Here's heartache
mingled with laughter and real hunger.
That is another point I would like elaborate on: The Roots of the Ivy
is a story that evokes real emotions. Reading it, I have smiled, laughed
and cried, the story had me jumping up and down and squeeing. The Roots
of the Ivy has real emotional impact.
All in all, The Roots of the Ivy are one of the best epic fan fiction
novels I have ever read, and certainly one of the best Hobbit stories I
have ever seen.
I recommend the story to everyone who is interested in realistic romance
novels and Hobbits.
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Title: The Three Towers · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 113
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2006-05-03 20:26:59 Score: 9

Shirebound is (and has always been) a storyteller of comfort and silent
joy, and wherever her plot gets too angsty, she is quick to add enough
lightheartedness to ease the nerves of her readers. This tale is no
exception. It is set Post-Quest in Minas Tirith, where Frodo suffers
from a lack of memory of certain parts of his journey. What happened in
the Tower of Cirith Ungol - and would regaining his remembrance help him
to overcome the loss of the ring and and the haunting old pain? This
time he has not to make the journey alone... the King of Gondor
accompanies him, Legolas and Gimli, his cousins, his gardener (of
course!) and some gondorean soldiers who see this journey as a chance to
serve the Ringbearer.

Shirebound's heart belongs to the hobbits (again: of course!), but she
has a good hand with the other characters, too. Her portrays of Aragorn,
Legolas and especially Gimli are truly remarkable. Her idea to give
Frodo Baggins the chance to reconcile with his nightmare-ish experiences
in Cirith Ungol is heartwarming, and even her original characters are
fully-fleshed, vivid men with caring souls that stay in your mind long
afterwards. A wonderfully enjoyable read!
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Title: Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Author: Lialathuveril · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 97
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2006-05-05 09:47:02 Score: 9

In "Of Falcons and Mûmakil" the author Lialathuveril tells the tale how
Éomer King of Rohan and Princess Lothiriel of Dol Amroth fell in love.
Good het romances in LOTR fanfiction are getting increasingly rare, and
this is one of the best and most adventurous love stories I've ever
read, full of wonderful details, humor and marvelous dialogues.

Lothiriel is a heroine I'm able to love and adore, not a shy maiden
constantly to be rescued from some dreadful danger, but a woman with
great intelligence and strength of will, absolutely believable and
delightful. And Éomer is just - wow. He's yummy and strong and humorous
and the perfect, old-fashioned hero (who at the same time finds the idea
to lock a noblewoman away in a golden cage completely ridiculous). Who
could wish for a better man? Ah yes... and I have never never never seen
someone who is able to build up erotic tension as Lia does, without
giving her lovers more than an embrace or a kiss (and giving the reader
the distinct feeling that more would simply be wrong). She is a mistress
of romance, she has achieved with her very first (!!) fanfiction what I
needed to learn in years, and I bow to her. Go and enjoy!
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Title: All Those Who Wander · Author: daw the minstrel · Races: Elves:
Featuring Mirkwood Elves · ID: 209
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-05-06 06:29:52 Score: 10

This is just another of those enchanting episodes in a family that has
become totally real to me. Eilian's struggles with developing a - shall
we say - more mature attitude to life and overcome his gremlins,
Ithilden's correct and occasionally rather sanctimonious attitude that
conceals an elf just as hurt as his younger brother, Legolas's pure need
for his family - and Thranduil, struggling to hold it all together and
attempting to mend his sons' hurts, run a kingdom and deal with his own
devastating pain make me happy to follow these characters through
anything. The visit Legolas pays to Maltanaur at the end is a lovely
touch - of course he would wish to express his disapproval at his
brother's keeper's getting hurt to the point where he cannot look after
Eilian properly! Legolas is just such a delightful combination of his
parents here - Thranduil's authority and his mother's charm - that I'm
not surprised Maltanaur responded as he did - with the intention of
using Eilian's affection for his little brother.

The characters are all so multi-dimensional: I think that is one of the
things that makes this family such a pleasure to read about. And the
minor characters are as much so as the central ones. Maltanaur is
Maltanaur - protective of wild Eilian and not above using events to
manipulate him - and he is also a husband, father and friend. He does
not cease to have a life simply because he is not centre stage. Same
with Beliond - and Siondel and Elowen and Annael. And the terror Turgon.
Anyway, this is just another excellent, readable and re-readable episode
in the lives of your characters - and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Title: Evensong · Author: aranda_nz · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 191
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-05-06 08:49:59 Score: 10

This is a gorgeous story. I just love the fact it is Gimli-centric  the
Dwarf doesnt get enough attention and spends too much time being comic
relief for the Elf and the Dúnadan. I really enjoyed his point of view
on advancing age and decrepitude  and the quest that was set on his
shoulders. A quest, moreover, that answers some questions in a most
fascinating way.

The Legolas you portray has an edge to him, too. He has an inhuman power
that is normally concealed beneath an aura of amiability, but it is
there. The power of the non-human elements of Middle-earth is shown in him.

I love the relationship of Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli. Aragorn is aware
of the passage of time far more than the other two and is prepared to
make a few more concessions to it  probably due to having to rule a
bunch of humans  but they are still like a group of boys on an outing.
Until it gets serious, at least.

Favourite minor character has to be Stone-Water-Worn-Smooth  although
Earnulf runs him close. And then theres Radagast  and Treebeard.

In addition to enjoying the story, you also produce some of the most
beautiful descriptive turns of phrase. Never to excess, just sentences
that leave the reader breathless. The juxtaposition of words is so
cleverly done, too, to make unexpected and evocative effects. Your prose
is certainly not mundane!

Im still hoping for the next episode in this adventure.

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Title: The Prince and the Pea · Author: Karri · Genres: Humor: Children
· ID: 158
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-05-06 11:37:18 Score: 10

This is such a funny story - so beautifully written and so clever. I
love the sneaky way the elves all gang up to provide Estel with an . . .
interesting experience. And I cannot help wondering just how many heirs
of Isildur they have worked this scam on before. They are all far too
slick and professional to be trialling this one for the first time!

And I enjoyed seeing Celeborn joining in the play! Wonderful. He usually
seems to be portrayed as far too dignified to involve himself in this
sort of malarkey. The haughty Vanyar comment made me laugh. And I loved
the bit about mattress stacking being listed among the many renowned
skills of this hero of the First Age. It probably came in the job
description right after Balrog slayer.

I adore the slightly world-weary reaction from Legolas - the sideways
look and the long-suffering sigh that seem to say not again and ask if
the sons of Elrond are ever going to outgrow this particular gag. Mind
you - why would they, since even their father and grandfather are happy
to involve themselves in pulling this trick on Estel.

Estels reaction the following morning is hilarious  he is all askew
and twitching. And Legolas's words are just right. I cannot imagine how
they all kept a straight face. I couldn't  I suppose theyve had plenty
of practice, though.

And such a complicated elven joke - with everybody in on it except
Gilraen and Estel. I wonder if anybody ever let Aragorn know that it was
a set up. That would make a delightful scene in itself  as would
pulling the same jest on Eldarion in the future.

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Title: Necessity and Desire · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: The Great Years ·
ID: 173
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-05-06 11:55:50 Score: 10

This story is a lovely complex weaving of so many different elements.
Arwen putting Aragorn in mail seems an odd act  if according to the
facts - but I'm glad to see he is putty in her hands.

There are just so many delights - Boromir and his first meeting with the
twins  poor man, he dealt well with the arrival of a haughty elf; Arwen
and her involvement with the practicalities of running a large house 
not just a pretty face; her and Aragorn together, the wooden Arathorn
figure, the detail of Aragorn's elven/human room, Elrohir tidying up
behind him - the discussion. I loved the way Elrohir reflected on his
foster-brother as they worked together on their plan and recalled the
numerous times they had put him through planning exercises. Even now, it
must catch at them sometimes, that he has grown so swiftly to be the man
he is at this point.

Arwen and Aragorn's closeness - and willingness to let her brothers see
it  is delightful. They are a family at home. Arwen looking at Aragorn
and responding just before he gets to the amusing parts shows their
affectionate intimacy so perfectly.

Their discussion about the importance of what they had worked out and
the need to reforge Narsil so that Aragorn could go with Boromir to
Gondor is vital. For this, it would seem acceptable for Aragorn to miss
Frodo's feast. Time, after all, is running distressingly short.

Mind you, Elrond is unlikely to be delighted by an absence that might
seem, as Elrohir suggested, rude and unforgivable. (This son of Elrond
seems to have a knack for finding the right word.)

But Elrond might be slightly more manageable than his daughter - who had
invested a lot of effort into making that awkward feast go off smoothly.

And Aragorn thinks that Arwen will not be best pleased by their absence,
does he? The man is a master of understatement.

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Title: Mathom · Author: Perelleth · Genres: Humor · ID: 192
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-05-06 12:09:00 Score: 10

If this story details a peaceful interlude in Imladris, I wouldn't want
to be around when things are going seriously haywire! I loved Elrond
getting concerned about his wine cellar and Erestor provoking him about
it - and speculating about the future disappearance of the key! And the
Erestor and Elladan moments were priceless. I loved Elrohir sitting
there in his filthy clothes - spewing wine down himself - and wondering
how to avoid a paternal ear-bashing!

Keeping Estel hidden is a great stalking-horse  and then there is poor
Glorfindel, who is powerless to resist Gilraen's wiles. (I adore a
Glorfindel who can defeat Balrogs and keep the Elrondionnath in line,
but melts before a winsome smile!) Estel is seriously delightful - and
in full command of the childhood dripping tap technique of persuasion.

I took great pleasure in Elrohir being sent off with Bilbo to spend long
hours talking about the presence of hobbits at Fornost - not to mention
Elrohir resorting to twin-confusion to pass the hobbit over to Elladan.
Nowhere near as subtly as he might have intended.

I like the view of the kitchen as a microcosm of the whole - ruling the
world but on a smaller scale. Erestor's training in breaking into
kitchens might well stand Estel in good stead when he is king, too. And
I've never heard a better explanation of why Rivendell appeared to be
the home of dotty ditties.

This is just the most delightful story. Glorfindel's reaction to his
entry into the midst of what they are trying to hide is so well
presented. And then for him to swoo... become contemplative when all
their precautions came to nothing. So contemplative that he failed to
notice the rest of the night - not to mention dropping Estel. And not
appearing to observe the slips of the tongue that suggest there is more
than one sword to consider. I love the silvery bells of Valmar, too -
and the promise that the day will come. Glorfindel needed that.

This is a delightful tale, Perelleth. Just delicious on so many levels.
I loved it - and I hope there will be more tales of life in Imladris to
follow.

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Title: In The Pits Of Utumno · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves ·
ID: 164
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-05-06 14:29:46 Score: 10

I find this such a delightful story! It started out so ominously with
brave Elatan risking death and worse to creep into the darkest pits of
Utumno to try to rescue his friend. The tension is great  and the
reader can really see the fortress through Elatans eyes. Then Elendur 
naked and tortured  is rescued at last and&

Lovely twist. It's just so typical of children to play out the tales
they are told - and Glorfindel must certainly have an enormous store of
amazing stories to fire their imaginations. I love the way Elladan
sneaked across the Hall of Fire to find Elrohir artistically arranged on
a pile of rags in foul captivity. (Rags? That I question. I wonder who
will find the dishevelled pile of clean laundry. Very sensible of
Elrohir to ensure a bit of comfort for the unhappy prisoner.) And that
he kept his smalls on! Naked is as naked does - and elflings don't do
naked! Well. Not unless hot summer days and cool water is involved  and
even then it might depend on who was around!

The performance was beautifully done - right up to the moment Erestor
inconsiderately got in the twins' way and broke the mood. Didn't he
enjoy it, though. I'm sure he'll get a great deal of fun out of this
over a very long period of time - and I wonder how long it will take to
get back to Glorfindel... and Melkor! A certain pair of twins might grow
tired of hearing this story before too many centuries have elapsed.

Very enjoyable story, Jay. I'm left with a big smile.

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Title: The Gift · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: Featuring Mirkwood Elves ·
ID: 160
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-05-06 16:37:45 Score: 10

I love the relationship here between Thranduil and Legolas. There is a
warmth and easy understanding between them that is very touching. Seeing
Legolas prepare himself for what he will experience as he approaches the
damaged land puts a twist on his decision to dwell in Ithilien. This is
a land that desperately needs what the elves can offer. And, having seen
the torment of the land, it isn't in Thranduil to leave it without
trying to bring relief to the suffering of the remaining trees. I can
see why his son might be concerned about his father spending so much of
himself in the aftermath of beginning the healing of Lasgalen  although
there must be a particular joy to dismissing the corruption left by
Sauron. Legolas working to augment his fathers power is an awesome
indication of the power of the elves. Elrond is right when he describes
Thranduil as a powerful healer  and I enjoyed Thranduils dry response
to the reported comment!

I loved the humming of the earth and the whispering of the trees  but
absolutely best the part is when he raised his hand and there was green
grass sprouting in his hand print and spreading from his touch. The
comparison to the exhaustion of battle was very apt  and what a battle
this one was for them to win!

And I reckon that Thranduil only had to see Ithilien to know why Legolas
could not resist the land's need. Regardless of Aragorn, regardless of
the sea-longing, this is something that would call to a Wood Elf  and
it is the best possible use of Legolass energies.

This is a delightful story, Dot and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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Title: Once · Author: Noldo · · ID: 239
Reviewer: Meril · 2006-05-07 00:53:05 Score: 9

This story was so unique in Faramir's comparison between himself and
Turin (I've never seen anyone desire to be Turin!), and that is what
made it stick in my mind.

Noldo's writing has this lovely lyrical quality that I do not see
anywhere else: her prose is long and meandering, beautifully
descriptive, and the endings leave me surprised and thoughtful.

This piece is very nicely organized. It is divided into sections that
are like little snapshot memories, and just fit together so beautifully
in the end. At the end of each section there is Faramir's wish to be
Turin, and that rationale in itself is always surprising.

It is the ending that always takes my breath away. Of course there has
been all this buildup with Faramir thinking how Turin (of all people!)
had his tragedies right: Turin had a mother that died but he could
remember, Turin had a Finduilas who didn't die slow and lingering, and
Turin had escaped by suicide after all the terrible things in his life.
It's a heart-stopping turnaround when Faramir realizes that ["Túrin had
never had Éowyn, lovely golden-haired fierce injured Éowyn in blue with
silver stars on top of the City"] and that there is much to rejoice in.

And then there are the final lines:

[(He had never really wanted to be Túrin.)

<i>Túrin had only had a mother who sent him away and a Finduilas who
loved him and who he did not love, a Finduilas who died, and Túrin had
lived out a doom, and Túrin had killed himself.

Túrin had never really loved.

He did not want to be Túrin. He wanted only this.

Sing now ye people.</i>]

It is that last line, with such quiet hope and joy that directly
contrasts with the bleakness of the previous sections, that brings a
smile to my face every time.
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Title: Gandalf's No Good, Rotten, Really Bad Day · Author: Gandalfs
apprentice · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 146
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-05-08 05:02:29 Score: 9

This story is hysterical and consummately well-written. It is certainly
AU, but uses hard-core canon knowledge in the most effective way
imaginable to make its points. There are layers and layers to the humor,
digging out weaknesses of the logic of the original, as well as taking
its pokes at movie verse. There were many points in this where I was
laughing until my sides hurtI cannot tell you why Arwens snuffling at
the thought of poor dead Aragorn is so funny, but it is. Manwë gets the
last lineas, of course, he shouldand it is a winner! This is no
lightly tossed off piece of slapstick or simple comedic relief at the
end of a long day of writers block, but an erudite, witty and carefully
crafted work and oh so funny. It compiles a long list of errors,
mistakes of judgment, negligence and just plain stupidities committed by
the oh-so-well-meaning Gandalf, until all of Middle Earth is crumbling
under the collective weight of them and poor Gandalf is left trying to
explain to a less than pleased Manwë what he might have been thinking! I
have a secret file on my computer of lines of fanfic that I wish I had
written and a good number of them come from this piece.

Oshun
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Title: The White Tree · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 94
Reviewer: Timmy2222 · 2006-05-08 15:16:42 Score: 6

This is such a refreshing and nice story and the words which sum it up
are compassion and friendship. The relationship between Aragorn and his
Steward tends to be neglected as Tolkien wrote about it only shortly. So
this gives the reader a view into both hearts and minds: Aragorn seeks
Faramir's friendship and the Steward is too afraid to let it happen, but
envies the Hobbits for their easy-going with the King.
And there's more to this story: the fine humor that gives the character
a heart and that warm and fuzzy feeling, i.e. that Aragorn quitted
smoking pipeweed for Arwen. Now if that isn't love I don't know what
would be! (g)
Like the other stories by Linda, this is a heart-warming episode about a
king and his way of dealing with the small problems of day-to-day life.

Timmy

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Title: Hair · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 321
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-05-10 23:41:15 Score: 7

This one contains really funny interspecies reflections. (Have you ever
dealt with "culture shock"--nothing to compare with what poor Legolas
has to adjust to here.) If you might think that you are only going to
have to listen to another one of those stories written from the
perspective of one of those arrogant, oh-so-superior elves complaining
about lesser beings, then you will be very wrong. The author quite
deftly develops the character of Legolas without ever leaving his point
of view. The writing is clear, compelling, well-crafted and polished.
The humor is layered. If you read this drabble a couple of times, there
are lines that get an extra laugh the second or third times around. The
writer never lets you gets what is coming in the next couple of lines
and ends with a wicked flourish.
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Title: Fond Memory · Author: Isil Elensar · Genres: Drama: The Steward's
Family · ID: 331
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-05-11 10:00:31 Score: 8

The short story is a gapfiller of canon, set several years before "The
Lord of the Rings".

This ficlet shows an encounter of Boromir and Faramir in the library of
Minas Tirith. Faramir is 15 years old, Boromir is 20. After sword
practice - the Faramir of this story is true to fanon in preferring
reading to fighting - Faramir holes up in the library. Boromir comes to
find his brother, and they talk about just why Faramir has hidden in the
library that day.

Delicately written, the tale offers insights in the relationship of the
brothers and in how their different personalities were shaped. What is
especially striking about this story is how carefully and unobtrusively
the setting is devleoped, and how a deeply emotional scene evolves in a
very natural, realistic way. Tying together their everyday life with
their dreams and troubles, the story illuminates the affection between
the brothers and provides an interesting missing scene of the pre-LOTR
years.

A delightful read that leaves the reader with a warm feeling of contentment.
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Title: The Walk · Author: Kelllie · Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo or
Sam · ID: 618
Reviewer: Budgielover · 2006-05-15 04:39:16 Score: 6

This story reads like a balm to the Frodo-loving heart. Skillfully
written with lovingly-drawn characterizations, the reader experiences
with Frodo his slow healing in Minas Tirith, and the last task he
performs for his friend and King. The story has a sense of cycle,
beginnings and endings, seen in two time periods - the past through
young Frodo's time with his wise Uncle Bilbo and the present won through
pain and suffering and bravery. The author provides us great
hurt/comfort, angst, humor, and joy, and above all, celebrates with
great respect the gift the Ring-bearer gave to the world ... a future.
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Title: On the Anduin · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 619
Reviewer: Budgielover · 2006-05-15 04:57:16 Score: 6

"On the Anduin" is a tightly witten and well-thought out alternative
universe story, in which Frodo is wounded by an orc arrow on the River,
and does not have his mithril vest. The characterizations of the
Fellowship are outstanding, especially the interaction between Aragorn
and Boromir. The hobbits are written with love and understanding, and
the relationship between a very frightened Pippin and a wonderfully
brave Frodo is beautifully drawn. The hurt/comfort and angst strike just
the right note, and the medical detail is both fascinating and
realistic. Shining through, however, is the concern and care shown an
injured Ring-bearer, and the renewal of life.
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Title: Desires Of The Hroa · Author: The Last Temptation of Homer ·
Genres: Drama: First Age Elves · ID: 623
Reviewer: Failivrin of The Rondothlim · 2006-05-15 18:44:44 Score: 1

A very well written, emotionally charged vignette starring an unnamed
elven character. Fits the canon perfectly.
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Title: LifeWatch · Author: Lindelea · · ID: 653
Reviewer: Budgielover · 2006-05-18 03:40:44 Score: 6

"LifeWatch" is an emotionally satisfying story, written from Meriadoc
Brandybuck's point of view of his time in Cormallen, after the
destruction of the Ring. The author's 'voice' is perfect, and you find
yourself nodding your head through the story, thinking, 'yes, that's
what Merry would say and that's how Merry would act.' Merry's
relationship with Pippin is wonderfully drawn, slightly overbearing as
an elder cousin can be at times, but so full of love that you feel
included in the tightly knit circle of hobbits. The other members of the
Fellowship make appearances and contribute to the story, but the hobbits
shine. If you aren't particularly a Merry fan, you will be by the end of
this story.
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Title: The Gift of Gold · Author: pippinfan88 · · ID: 654
Reviewer: Budgielover · 2006-05-18 03:50:04 Score: 6

"The Gift of Gold" is a gentle, emotionally moving story that celebrates
the continuance of life and the passing of traditions from one
generation to the next. Written entirely as a 'hobbity' story, it
nevertheless resonates with all of us, and would with the other races of
Middle-earth. The author cleverly uses something dear to hobbit-hearts
to show how new memories can brighten old, and sorrow can be turned to
joy. Of especial note is her handling of Gaffer Gamgee - his grief at
his wife's death is so immediate and wretching the reader grieves with
him. The story ends by circling back to the happy event opening it,
reminding us of the undying power of love.
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Title: Dear Diary · Author: Lily · · ID: 655
Reviewer: Budgielover · 2006-05-18 04:01:05 Score: 6

I told the author of "Dear Diary" that this story will stand as one of
the best in the genre, and I believe that now more than ever. Told from
Primula Baggins' viewpoint, each diary entry details some event in the
carrying and birth and growth of Primula's long-awaited child Frodo. Joy
and pride shines through in each entry, hope and happiness, even during
the less-happy events. Tying all the entries together is a sweet, joyful
humor that makes you long to have known Primula. To see through her
eyes, to feel her fears and hopes and fierce love, is to be drawn into
her family. Outstandingly thought-out and written, this story will
capture the heart of anyone who reads it.
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Title: The Early Adventures of Fwo and Unga Bee · Author: cpsings4him ·
· ID: 656
Reviewer: Budgielover · 2006-05-18 04:10:55 Score: 6

The author describes this story as 'fluff' - to which I reply, 'yes, and
what wonderful, heart-warming, joyful, endearing' fluff it is. There are
times when we NEED happy, loving stories, when our tired hearts need to
be reminded of the sweetness of babies and doting uncles. The
relationship the author draws between Bilbo and Frodo is darling without
being cloying, and the visual imagery is so strong and enveloping that
the reader feels as if she is standing there watching. Little Frodo's
earnest babytalk would melt the sternest heart, and the shifting of
viewpoint between Bilbo and Frodo lets us in our their thoughts and
growing love for each other. This is the story to pick up at the end of
a long day and read again and again, enjoying it more each time.
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Title: Passing Regrets · Author: Ariel · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest · ID: 657
Reviewer: Budgielover · 2006-05-18 04:24:41 Score: 6

In fanfiction, we are blessed with so many alternative events - but
"Passing Regrets" has to be the definitive version of Bilbo and Frodo's
first meeting. Written from Bilbo's point of view, we are first charmed
and intrigued by Bilbo, then are treated to his thoughts as he meets the
newest little Baggins. Bilbo's observations of little Frodo give the
reader the feeling of rare confidence, of being privileged to share in
something momentous. Through Bilbo's eyes, the author shows us what a
special child Frodo is, and how his birth continues something greater
than the achievements of a single lifetime. More charming yet is Frodo's
reaction to Bilbo. Infused with humor, love, and affection, this story
would draw praise from Professor Tolkien himself.
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Title: Serious Business (or, Talk About Dreams) · Author: Dana · Races:
Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 661
Reviewer: Cathleen · 2006-05-18 14:29:52 Score: 6

This is a wonderful tale defining the relationship between Pippin and
Frodo. The remnants of the Quest will stay with all the Fellowship for
the rest of their lives and affect each one of them in a unique way.
Pippin is the youngest and that adds a bit more vulnerability to his
situation, but he clearly demonstrates the ability to bear his burden of
memories as well as the rest. He displays an unselfish wish to protect
his beloved cousin from knowing the full extent of what he suffered
after he and Merry were captured by the orcs. This tale explores the
very close and endearing relationship of these two cousins. Frodo also
wants to protect Pippin. The love and sharing of the hobbit culture as a
whole shines through in this story!
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Title: Welcome to Rivendell Mr. Anderson · Author: Snodgrass and Winkle
· Races: Cross-Cultural: Incomplete · ID: 662
Reviewer: Jaffee Leeds · 2006-05-18 18:08:42 Score: 6

Snodgrass and Winkle have taken the worn out storyline of a girl falls
into ME and turned it into a master piece. The first story by the
authors, the story is true to the books while taking liecense to include
two of the most real FOC's in LOTR fan fiction history.

I started reading the story one night and couldn't stop til I had read
all forty chapters while begging for an up date as soon as they could
write it. Action, humor, sorrow and honor fill every chapter and they
bring each of Tolkien's characters to real vivid life. If any story ever
deserved an award for exllence this one does. The huge fan base of the
story would no doubt agree with me. Read it and you will never be sorry.
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Title: Strange meeting · Author: Nesta · Races: Men: Post-Sauron's Fall
· ID: 93
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-05-20 20:35:23 Score: 2

A very enjoyable short story and an interesting idea to have Faramir and
Aragorn meet before the coronation to discuss the whole idea of Aragorn
taking over Gondor. Nicely done!
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Title: Hearth and Home · Author: Molly Littlefoot · Races: Hobbits · ID: 730
Reviewer: Vistula the Dunadan · 2006-05-27 03:06:47 Score: 7

I LOVE this story, and not so much for what it says but for what it
shows the reader. It captures the essence of Hobbit life and indeed the
life of any society that has known a lifetime of peace and freedom from
strife. The author does a splendid job of illustrating every day Hobbit
life and this image only heightens the fact that we as omniscient
readers know that very shortly this peaceful existence will be shattered
by the machines of war. Molly, the Hobbit goodwife, caught up in the
hustle and bustle of her preparations for winter, is only barely aware
that something more is coming. Like her kindred, she can't even fathom
what a year will bring to her home and family.

I enjoy the interaction between Molly and both her husband and children,
as well as her family's relationship with their Dunadan friend.

Kudos to you, for writing such a wonderfully engaging tale!!
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Title: Metamorphosis · Author: wenont · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Incomplete · ID: 672
Reviewer: Elentari2 · 2006-05-30 15:07:42 Score: 5

I am following this story (and the author) for quite a bit, and am still
to tire of it. I know few people who can weave so masterfully two
completely alien atmospheres such as the quietly dignified (with epic
savage fury underneath) of Tolkien's Elves and Middle-earth to a
post-apocaliptic cyberpunk cyborg warrior. Add in war techniques,
hi-tech gadgets, philosophy and the age-old interpersonal relationships
dynamic and you have a very interesting mix. Wenont's a word witch, and
I love her for it. Hell of a storytelling, love.
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Title: Ignorance Is Bliss · Author: Eggo Waffles · Genres: Humor: Parody
· ID: 754
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-06-04 03:24:16 Score: 4

This is a hilarious story about Faramir's hair colour and what the film
and fan fiction writers have done to him.Faramir tries to find out what
he truly looks like only to be faced with thousands of stories in the
Minas Tirith library.Helped by Boromir, he goes though them all until he
finds the only genuine scroll.This is one of the funniest stories I have
read in a long time from a very gifted and talented young writer,who
specialises in humour and parody.
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Title: Beleg and Túrin · Author: Raihon · Genres: Romance · ID: 755
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-06-04 06:10:02 Score: 10

The style of writing in this piece is simple and fits perfectly with
this story, which is lovely, sad, but not without hope. The tale itself
is a believable rendering, from Beleg's point of view, of the story
Beleg and Túrin. The author has been able to take a familiar story, add
new elements to it and to simultaneously stay extremely close to the
versions in Unfinished Tales and The Silmarillion. The addition of a
whole subplot adds new and fresh detail and subsequently raises it a
whole new level of pathos, without making it at all grim. Not an easy
task to take on, but it succeeds in this instance. Talk about filling
gaps: this is definitely an imaginative and natural way to do that,
while adding whole new reality and futher emotional layers in the
development of the tale. The characters, as developed here, are canon
consistent. The author characterizes ths story, in the
summary/introduction which she has written, as perhaps the closest
Tolkien ever came to telling of a love story between two men. Talk about
the whole rolling around in his grave questionbut this time around,
after reading this version, I would have tell the professor that I am
sorry but he put all the openings there himself in the originals. While
I had never read the tale of Beleg and Túrin in quite this way, I will
never again be able to read it without thinking of how perfectly this
rendition fits within the confines of it. The heartbreaking, bittersweet
love story and its tragic denouement does, however, not leave one
wanting to run off and shoot oneself in the head, but actually is
satisfying and emotionally fulfilling.
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Title: Strange meeting · Author: Nesta · Races: Men: Post-Sauron's Fall
· ID: 93
Reviewer: Oshun · 2006-06-08 16:25:44 Score: 10

Great story. I first read Nestas prequel Black Hour and then a
discriminating reader tipped me that this one existed as well. There are
so many things I liked about it. I have not read a better description of
the aftermath of the Battle of the Pelennor Fields (detailed and grim,
without being disgustingly graphic). Also loved the careful exposition
of what Faramir would have been doing between March and May. The
characterizations of Faramir and Aragorn are on point. In particular,
the character of Faramir is not static in this piece. The author
presents him in such a way that the reader is able to see his thought
processes, sense his openness and finally completely understand the
development in how he looks at everything that has happened in those
dramatic days and what the return of king can mean in the person of this
stranger--subtle, but detailed. His progress from suspicion and
skepticism to relief and admiration fits perfectly with the character of
Faramir. One reads and is completely drawn into the relationship that
will build between the two of them. The authors ability to tell such a
serious story with just the right touches of light humor drives me mad
with envy! Did I say the dialogue is priceless? The dialogue is real,
humorous and fits the characters she has drawn. This is an awesome
accomplishment
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Title: Arwen's Heart · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Romance · ID: 139
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-06-09 00:05:33 Score: 6

A thought provoking and deeply moving insight into Arwen's relationship
with Aragorn and how she gradually came to love him.The final chapters
are some of the most moving I have ever read anywhere including
published literature.
Arwen has gradually grown on me from something of a cypher to a
remarkable,strong and amazing person, a fitting Quuen indeed for the
King of Gondor and Arnor.
I defy anyone to read Faramir's thoughts on death and Arwen's eventual
acceptance without a tear in their eye.
I was also deeply impressed by the insights into Elrond and Galadriel
and the reasons why they had to leave Middle earth.
This story truly brings Arwen to life and gives an insight into matters
that Tolkien only hints at.
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Title: The Rose in the Fisted Glove · Author: Jael · · ID: 805
Reviewer: Elentari2 · 2006-06-09 00:06:07 Score: 3

Oh, dear, but you managed to make it credible and very real. I adore
Galion, he is so pragmatic and loyal. That line about him crying for
Thranduil was pure gold. Thranduil, too, was extremely spot on. 'my
memory is very long' was absolutely priceless. Thank you, thank you for
sharing. I was completely blown away.

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Title: First Impressions · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 806
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-06-09 00:14:27 Score: 6

A delightful little story which shows young Aragorn's reactions to the
Rangers when he first goes to live with them. After his upbringing in
the luxery and shelter of Rivendell,life with his own people is
something of a shock to him.He is cold,wet and miserable after falling
in a puddle, finds the accomodation very basic and hates the food.
Halbarad attempts to cheer him and makes him eat,as a pretty girl has
promised him the time of day if her stew is accepted.
As Aragorn talks to Halbarad, he gradually comes to accept that this
will be his life in future and these are his people.
A nice mixture of quiet humour and more serious themes.
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Title: The gift · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later Ages ·
ID: 807
Reviewer: Elentari2 · 2006-06-09 00:25:12 Score: 7

You made the old "immortal doomed love for mortal" plot more than
somewhat convincingly - you made a piece of art. I do so love the things
that happen between the lines, barely hinted at, whilst on the surface
perfectly ordinary things are happening. It seems plausible to me that
with so many strong, wise and noble people about, these affairs should
be private. I also loved Legolas' intimate connection with his father,
and the echoes of Elond's spech at Gilraen's deathbed that would come at
Aragorn's foreseen death in the movie (forgot if it appears in the books
also). Neither of the lovers had it easy, but i side with Gilraen in
thinking he may yet recover. Surely not EVERY elf died at breaking his
heart, or pined away for eternity? Both his mentally chanting his
lineage at a difficult time and his lone singing at her future tomb was
precious. Thanks so much for sharing!

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Title: In Aragorn's Safekeeping · Author: Radbooks · Genres: Drama · ID: 141
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-06-09 00:44:29 Score: 8

This is a genre of story, I usually avoid like the plague,yet this one
bowled me over as it was so well written. I actually came to truly like
and care about the two young people flung into Middle earth.
The main strength of this story, though, is the writers use of language
and her wonderful portrayal of Aragorn and his struggles to do the right
thing and become the leader he is born to be,even when it means making
tough decisions.
Apart from the two modern characters, whom Aragorn comes to look on as
his children, the story stays close to canon,apart from a character
surving whom Tolkien kills off.
All the characters are vividly portrayed and I especially liked how
Elladan and Elrohir are seen as grave Elven lords and not silly pranksters.
Other highlights are the vivid depiction of how the teenage girl OC has
to deal with being surrounded by men and be cared for when injured, and
her discomfort and isolation.
I also liked the way Faramir is portrayed in his gradual acceptance of
Aragorn and his charges.
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Title: After The Storm · Author: chibi_kaz · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 773
Reviewer: Ellethill · 2006-06-09 09:38:21 Score: 8

This story fills wonderfully the great gaps left in the movies, rounding
up the changes made there to herd them as much as possible towards book
canon. The initial motivations of the characters are well set up,
emphasizing the previously mentioned changes, and the first exchange of
lines between the characters is wonderful - the gist of the canonical
conversation from the Houses of Healing, yet still new and original.
Actually, their entire interaction is wonderful, and seems to flow
freely and naturally. Such images like Eowyn and Faramir aiding each
other in breaking bread and cutting meat at meals, and him twirling her
about when the sign came that the Ring had been destroyed (an impulsive
and refreshing gesture) were very sweet; him speaking to her of
defensive plans and asking for her aid in making ready the House of the
King was a strike of genius that would bring them closer. Their
interactions with the other people of the City were easy as well, as was
their coming together in the end (with just the right amount of anxious
worry). I very much enjoyed reading it!
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Title: Finding the Right Words · Author: Nienor Niniel · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 785
Reviewer: Ellethill · 2006-06-09 09:39:14 Score: 8

This gap filler was wonderfully written. Until I came across it I had
never thought about how Faramir decided what he would say to his King
before all his people, nor that finding the right words to say could
have been a problem. But, by reading this, the importance and delicate
nature of those first words became clear to me, and I was surprised by
the logic of it  his arguments for discarding the greetings he
considered were well thought of. I really liked the mood you managed to
convey, the hustle and bustle of the workers and the giddiness of the
people of the City as opposed to Faramirs calmness; the reason for that
calm, how he had indeed waited for the coming of the King his entire
life, and how his part of the waiting was over when he woke in the
Houses of Healing. I also liked the way you handled his vision, how it
took some time before Faramir even realized he was experiencing one, how
even that was calm and reassuring; the moment when he thought to catch a
glance of his mother and brother was very sweet, and made better by the
fact that he only descried some of their physical traits. Good job!
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Title: Reconciliation · Author: Willow_41z · Genres: Romance: Incomplete
· ID: 802
Reviewer: Ellethill · 2006-06-09 09:42:27 Score: 9

First of all, I like your idea of beginning with the definition for the
word reconcile  it basically sets up the layout of your story,
because Lothiriel has to struggle with all four of these meanings by the
end of it. Secondly, I am very impressed with the way in which you
relayed the court atmosphere, the way the noble women relate to each
other and to the queen, their duties, the attitude of the people towards
their new queen (implied here and there in little realistic tid-bits),
and especially the way Lothirel feels about all things: the people, her
new station, her homesickness, her lord husband (their relationship is
wonderfully constructed - careful, tentative, awkward, but moving on
towards friendship and easiness, perhaps getting there in the end). I
like the fact that she isnt so much resentful, but lost, in a way, that
she has accepted the changes in her life even if she isnt fond of them.
I think you perfectly captured her mood, and the subtle way her attitude
towards her new home alters, beginning with her drive to make herself
useful and then even get involved in the life of a lady of the court
seeking to help her. All in all, a wonderful read!
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Title: The Acceptable Sacrifice · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 775
Reviewer: Ellethill · 2006-06-09 10:25:50 Score: 9

I very much loved all the attention to detail I found in this story, in
all the traditions and formalities mentioned, the symptoms of Frodos
ailments and his slow recovery, both physical and emotional. When I read
this, each chapter implied at least one discovery  I have to admit I
had thought of the journey to Mordor and Mount Doom and all of Sams and
Frodos privations and physical difficulties in only general lines, only
now coming to see the real consequences of those many weeks; your story
takes away every single doubt anyone might have ever had about Frodos
sailing West (or at least it definitely should). I think you portrayed
the characters very true to book canon, their interactions were
beautiful and touching, and all the original characters introduced were
well-built and rang true to the age and their stations. There was this
logic in all their actions and their thoughts that grounded everything
in reality, their feelings had incredible depth, and were very moving.
The language and the style were beautiful, the entire story was
beautiful, and heartbreaking, and intense, and just lovely. Saying
thank you very much for writing this' doesnt even cover it! (and it
probably sounds silly) Again, a fantastic story, incredibly written!
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Title: Castle · Author: Timmy2222 · Races: Men: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 256
Reviewer: viggomaniac · 2006-06-09 23:19:38 Score: 3

Top-notch story with an incredible plot. The troubles Aragorn encounters
are realistically portrayed and the original characters, especially
Vlohiri, are well thought out. Compelling reading, and a story I still
occasionally re-read.
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Title: Concerning Hobbit's Feet · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
The Shire · ID: 828
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-06-10 03:24:36 Score: 4

GW truly is a wizard when it comes to getting the hobbits into
embarrassing, yet humorous, situations and this story proves no
different. The story is made all the more humorous because the hobbits'
personalities are so perfectly portrayed: Pippin is persistent yet
evasive, Merry is pompous and indignant, and Frodo is subtly devious.
But none of that compares to Fatty, who makes the ultimate cameo
appearance. A hilarious, and surprisingly revealing, story.
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Title: Fire and Flowering · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 58
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-12 14:10:34 Score: 2

I don't usually go for erotic fiction of any kind, but if any of it in
the Tolkien fanfic world is worth reading this has to be at the head of
the list. It's tastefully done, with a lot of tenderness and meaning
mixed in with the sex.
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Title: The Falcon and the Star · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: The
Great Years: Gondor · ID: 57
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-12 14:12:02 Score: 3

This has to be the best story yet by one of the best Tolkien fanfic
authors around. It's very original while being entirely faithful to the
spirit of the book, and it gives a riveting account of Faramir's
spiritual journey.

Anke Eissmann has chosen to illustrate this story. I don't think there
can be a stronger recommendation than that.
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Title: Lord of Werewolves · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Parody · ID: 255
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-12 14:22:14 Score: 3

This has to be the funniest Tolkien fanfic ever! All the more brilliant
because Sauron, not to mention Morgoth, are the last people one would
normally think of as funny.

I laughed till I cried. I laughed till I almost literally Rolled on the
Floor.
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Title: The Hours of Waiting · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor · ID: 909
Reviewer: Ellethill · 2006-06-12 22:23:23 Score: 10

I am amazed at how well you described Eowyns state of mind and flight
of feeling! It is perfectly in tune with what I had always imagined she
would feel, exactly how I understood the days she spent in the Houses of
Healing. Its wonderful to read the suddenness of her thoughts, her
determination to feel miserable and despairing while all the while
fighting whatever light and easy thoughts come to her while in the
presence of Faramir; her surprise and even anger when realizing that,
yes, there is some good in the world, some reason to smile and to
remember the good times; the ever present contradictions in her.

The mood of the story was just right as well - the feel of the warm sun
that felt altogether useless to her, the cries of birds, the flowering
of trees, all the normal signs of Spring that only served to make the
coming end clearer to her  the things that Faramir chose to cling to
and remember instead, a conscious choice, for he had his troubles also,
but fought to put them aside  and you showed that so wonderfully! You
have got all the characters perfectly, even the Warden, whom I rarely
feel is portrayed like I imagined him  you got him perfectly, his
attitude, his words, what Eowyn thinks of him; and you wonderfully
captured Faramirs little hints, his efforts to come closer to the White
Lady and even to turn her mind away from the dreadful things outside the
healers realm.

I love the fact that you referred to the smallest things in the talks
between Faramir and Eowyn, while all the while giving them so much
meaning  robins, larks and swifts, remaking the City through the tongue
of Rohan, it was beautiful! And this is the first ever story I read
where Faramirs decision to leave the Houses comes from before the
destruction of the Ring, and not as a consequence of it  I loved this
idea, and also the words that came after, and Eowyns answer to them.
The ending was beautiful, the metaphor spoke of many things  how life
goes on, how the past was gone but the future was soon to come, how yet
another couple would take flight.

This was phenomenally written! I take my hat off to you!
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Title: The White Tree · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 94
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-13 09:17:10 Score: 5

I have mixed feelings about this one, mainly because I belong to the
tough-Faramir school of thought. Here he's a bit of a softie, though
with a lot of convincing touches like his grief for Boromir, and his
outrage at seeing the old White Tree dug up. Aragorn's doubts are well
portrayed, though, and the characterisation of Gandalf is excellent. I
much prefer the old gruff, quick-tempered Gandalf to the rather stately
and formal one we get towards the end of FoTR.

I love some of the background details, like the huge bed (the mind
boggles!) and Denethor's uncomfortable chair.
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Title: Rest and Recreation · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 700
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-16 22:37:34 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
Boromir experiences unexpected cross-cultural "enlightenment" while in
engaging in what he considers "rest and recreation" before setting out
with the members of the Fellowship of the Ring. Raksha's depiction of
the Captain General of Gondor is written in the first person, with all
the appropriate arrogance and naivety that you'd expect from Book
Boromir. It's a great character study and has a wonderful "twist" at
the end, where the doughty protagnist has an "aha" moment that I'm not
about to divulge. I also think readers will enjoy the brief look that
Raksha gives us at a minor, but well-loved character who did not
receive much attention from Tolkien. To say any more would tell you
too much about this tale.
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Title: The Dancing Master · Author: Flick · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 323
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-16 22:38:53 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
A poignant tale with good characterization and a nice twist at the
end. I especially liked Faramir's final words to Eowyn in the closing
sentence.
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Title: Gaiety in Gondor · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 563
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-19 11:25:31 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
I simply loathe slash and would normally run a mile from anything with
this title, but with Raksha it's different. It's very good-humoured,
deliciously funny and leaves Faramir and Aragorn with their dignity
intact (though their coronets may be a little askew). As for Pongohil
- Pongohil for president. say I!


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Title: Call To Arms · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 857
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-19 11:31:22 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
How I laughed!!!

Thanks for enlivening a dull morning, SpaceWeavil. Now, every time I
watch the Horsemen storming out of the gates in the movie, I shall
wonder how Khamul's infection is getting on, and is it giving him hell...
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Title: The Will · Author: LydiaB · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 770
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-06-22 06:17:38 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
An unusual and unique drable suggesting how Tolkien may have been
inspired to write his masterpiece.What if it truly were history and
not an invention of his mind?
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Title: Roots and Branches · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 611
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-23 13:18:18 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
I don't quite go along with the picture of Faramir in this drabble
because I don't personally think he has anything to apologise for.
However, this is a neatly constructed little story, and the way Sam
demonstrates his point of view is right for him, and very memorable.
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Title: Seeker of Shadow · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 63
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-23 13:23:46 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
A fascinating glimpse of two of JRRT's most fascinating characters.
(Moral: never ride out alone without telling your family where you're
going, and don't forget to take your mobile.)

I like the poetry, except for the white-hot stars ... well, they are
white-hot, I know, but they don't look it from M.E. (Symbolic, maybe).
Only a quibble.
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Title: The Tracks of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 60
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-23 13:30:40 Score: 4
Admin Edit Review
This is beautifully written and very moving. It touches on that old,
old theme of the immortal who is brought agonisingly up against the
fact of others' mortality, and finds that 'the loss and the silence'
aren't all on the mortal side.

It makes me wonder if that isn't one reason why Elves and Men in the
Third Age tend to avoid one another, perhaps rightly. When mortal
meets immortal the result is always going to be heartbreak for somebody.

On the everyday level, it's a little like what dog-lovers feel: why do
their lives have to be so short?
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Title: Legend · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor · ID: 933
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-23 13:35:16 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
This is one of the most touching and convincing portrayals of Eowyn
I've ever read. Much more than an Amazon, this is a real woman. The
ending is very true and touching.

As for young, impudent Barahir maybe not being like her .. well, it's
always hard to see yourself as others see you!
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Title: The Household Accounts · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 50
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-24 00:37:01 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
Good mood piece that was nicely written. However, I thought it ended
abruptly. I expected a different end.
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Title: Show his quality · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 875
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-25 10:39:43 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
It's neat, but it smells of movie Faramir to me. There's nothing ITB
to consider he was anything other than a highly competent military
man! I can't speak to his cooking skills though.
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Title: A Change In The Weather · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 692
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-26 08:30:47 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
This is a beautiful quarter that perfectly captures the character of
each of the hobbits, in a way that JRRT would surely have approved.
The difference between the safe, homely Shire and the dangerousness of
the world outside is encapsulated in just a few words.
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Title: Childhood Dreams · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 523
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-26 08:33:12 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
An unusual and fascinating line on the two brothers.

Is the corollary that Boromir is like a river? Interesting idea. I'd
have thought he was more like a horse - proud, noble, willing, but not
too bright and needing guidance from a wiser hand...
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Title: Fair Trade · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 900
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-27 09:56:54 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
That's a nice way to show how someone like Faramir could capture men's
devotion, but I'm not 100% sure he'd go for it. In TT he is clearly
treated with distinction, and I think the men would expect this in
such a hierarchical society. They seem to love Faramir for what he is,
not what he does.
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Title: Jewels · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 790
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-27 09:58:35 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
Yum yum, I bet it was a night and a half.

One thing though - I reckong riding barefoot would be highly
uncomfortable, even if you didn't use stirrups!
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Title: Divinity · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 824
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2006-06-27 11:51:50 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
This is one of the most remarkable tales I've ever seen. Illyria takes
scenes from the Ringbearer's quest and shows them in a completely new
light - through the eyes of the Valar. What we get so see are
exquisite miniatures of divine intervention... or not, even if the
Valar would most likely try to interfere. As Manwë does, who turns to
Ilúvatar, questioning the righteousness of seemingly detached waiting
and watching:

"How will they fend themselves against so terrible a foe? Are we to
keep apart from their suffering and do nothing to spare them the
malice and deceit of the Enemy?"

This is moving, it is stunningly beautiful and written with a
excellent use of words and imagery... and with a deep understanding of
Tolkien's thoughts and beliefs that touch the reader's heart. Illyria
has written many great tales, but this is outstanding among her
oeuvre, and worthy of praise.
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Title: The Price of Power · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great
Years: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 989
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2006-06-27 21:36:21 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
This surprising drabble was written by someone I call the "Mistress of
Drabbles", and righteously so. To draw the reader into a plot, to get
the whole idea going and to bring it to a satisfying end with nothing
more than 100 words is a special, difficult art, and Rabidsamfan is
brilliant. In "The Price of Power" we are granted an astonishing
insight into Saruman's thoughts. He gives the order to tear the trees
around Osgiliath down, and he has known their voices and now hears
their screams as they are dying. To know that he has been "the
greatest and wisest member of our order" (as Gandalf put it), and that
his enormous greed for power overcomes and horribly corrupts the
wisdom of ages, is painfully to read and incredibly clever. Absolutely
wonderful. MORE!
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Title: Memorabilia and Other Useful Things · Author: Illwynd · Times:
The Great Years: The Fellowship · ID: 714
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-06-28 14:54:04 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
This is very sweet. It's nice to think of Pippin as being so
sentimental, and stopping to think about where he is in the middle of
the journey and about it looking back when any journey is through.
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Title: Flotsam · Author: Salsify · Times: The Great Years: Vignette ·
ID: 85
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-06-28 15:00:33 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
Very good. It's wonderful to see the thoughtful and reflective Merry,
talking himself around his troubled heart. I particularly like that he
doesnt' resolve his conflict, there is no neat and tidy ending here,
because the fact and his feelings remain, as they should do.
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Title: The Remains of Power · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 228
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-06-28 15:06:10 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
This has some wonderfully insightful moments - that time is Saruman's
greatest weapon, that idea of his having no colour and therefore being
adaptable and easily hidden, not to mention the indifference of ducks!
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Title: Birnam Wood · Author: Inkling · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 917
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-06-29 07:52:17 Score: 4
Admin Edit Review
Oho! Birname Wood really did come to Dunsinane, and it came hungry and
angry. With Treebeard!

Excellent crossover with Macbeth; and wonderful characterisation of
the old Ent. The remembered encounter of boy and Ent, with references
to the long-gone Merry and Pippin, was poignant and very believable.

Let's hope Treebeard is still out there in the Wood, having a good snooze.
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Title: Make It One For Paladin · Author: Marta · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 48
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-06-29 07:54:18 Score: 5
Admin Edit Review
A sad, sobering look at the life of Robin Smallburrow, the hobbit who
supported Lotho, and then Saruman's, takeover of the Shire.

What's particularly noteworthy (aside from the excellent use of song)
is the characterisation of Robin as a collaborator - he is not evil or
monstrous, just caught up in a sinister force that he was too weak to
flee or resist. He regrets what he did, when he's not blaming others
for it. The admiration of others for the brave hobbits who did resist,
some of whom Robin stood by and watched die without protest, only
exacerbates his guilt.

A well-written vignette on a character that I doubt has seen much use
in fanfiction except in a minor role.
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Title: The Shield-maid's Dance of Death · Author: Marta · Times: The
Great Years: Poetry · ID: 694
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-06-29 08:14:37 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
I don't know much about poetry, lays, battle-rhymes, etc., but this
piece really sounds like a rousing Rohirric war-chant to me. There's a
fire and passion in it, even on the brink of death, or maybe because
Eowyn stands on that very brink of death. Tolkien mentions that she
laughed, so I think she did feel a rush of adrenalin, of sudden nervy
courage to sustain her and take her suddenly beyond all fear when she
needed most to be strong. I also see an appealing sense of purpose, of
destiny in the song; Eowyn knows she is challenging a deathless demon
to perform this dance of death.

A very stirring Tolkien poem with a compelling rhythm. My only quibble
is that I wish the print were darker and larger on the page where
you've archived the song.


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Title: 17 Cunning Corsairs · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 244
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-29 09:33:50 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
Bravo! I like to think that Lothiriel was a girl with a lively
imagination. (Reminds me of the maid in 'Beau Sabreur' who was always
sighing 'Sheiks'! and was eventually carried off by one, only he
turned out to be a solid American citizen in disguise.)
Was the Queen of the Corsairs pleased with her King of Rohan, or did
she always wish he'd been a hairy pirate?
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Title: Web of Friendship · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 932
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-29 09:36:05 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
That's really sweet. I love the idea of little Elanor showing the
other maidens what to do. It must be hard to get an artistic result by
this whipcord method, until you're really good at it!
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Title: Stewardship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 920
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-13 12:44:46 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
Another of Raksha's delightful drabbles. Gandalf, already thinking of
leaving Middle Earth, reflects that he can entrust his
responsibilities to worthy inheritors. Vivid, economical and
convincing. Bookverse.
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Title: The One · Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors · ·
ID: 921
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-13 12:48:28 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
Crisply written short fic about Aragorn's kingship and the Faramir's
validation as Steward. Original idea but well in the spirit of the
book. Also a treat for Faramir lovers.
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Title: A Little Thing · Author: Acacea · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 75
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-14 08:55:38 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
A very nice little drabble. The idea of all the river creatures
steering clear of the Ring is great. I imagine a shoal of fish
approaching it, and then EECH! Scattering in panic.
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Title: Gandalf's No Good, Rotten, Really Bad Day · Author: Gandalfs
apprentice · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 146
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-14 09:01:35 Score: 5
Admin Edit Review
Very funny, though hair-raisingly irreverent! I always did wonder why
Aragorn insisted on trolling around with a broken sword, unless he
kept a spare handy. In point of fact, ITB he never does actually try
to use the broken sword, nor is he put in a position to need it. One
of the many things which creak a wee bit in the plot, but which you
don't begin to notice until your 10th-plus reading. (And do they
matter even then?) You point them up with absolutely lethal accuracy!
A most enjoyable read.

Poor old Arwen, howling in the corner!
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Title: Of Herbs and Stewed Rabbit · Author: Altariel · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 91
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-14 17:39:25 Score: 1
Admin Edit Review
Jawdrop! Watership Down meets Lord of the Rings...

Altariel, you are brilliant, may I join your warren?
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Title: Rest and Recreation · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 700
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-14 17:43:34 Score: 4
Admin Edit Review
This captures Boromir's voice very well indeed. I always wondered what
he did during those idle weeks in Rivendell, and thought he'd have
been bored out of his skull. Trust him to get involved in some fighting.

Imladris is really wasted on Boromir. Faramir would have profited so
much from all that lore, both written and from living elves. He really
ought to have been the one to go!
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Title: Luck from the Ashes · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 142
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-14 17:50:36 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
Aaaaw! Permission to be a pussycat please and live with Faramir for
ever. I'd even catch the occasional mouse if it would please him.
Purrrrrr!

This story beautifully explores the still tentative relationship
between the Steward and the King, with Faramir still that bit on edge.
Aragorn appreciates all the qualities in Faramir that probably
'displeased' his father: a good augury for the future.

Just one thing: would Faramir not be a bit hesitant about walking in
the ruins of the family vault? He may not remember Denethor's attempt
to burn him alive, but it is the ashes of his ancestors that he's
trampling on. Including those of his father and, presumably, mother.
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Title: Lesser Ring · Author: Larner · Genres: Adventure · ID: 184
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-06-15 03:45:21 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
This story is one of my favorite of all of Larner's stories. I loved
the world that she created in Harad since Tolkien did not describe it
in any detail. But this story makes it an Egyptian type culture and
then within that setting, Larner tells a wonderful tale that starts
when Aragorn is a young man and then continues almost fifty years
later after he becomes king. The original characters are truly
original and the action is gripping at times... in all the right
places. Of course, all of my favorite characters are also there,
Aragorn, Arwen, Eomer, Faramir, Eowyn, Legolas, etc. It is a
wonderfully, imaginative tale that is masterfully written and I highly
recommend it.
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Title: Curious Mind, Noble Heart · Author: Nilmandra · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 270
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-06-15 04:05:29 Score: 5
Admin Edit Review
This is a wonderful tale. The mistakes that Estel makes are
heart-wrenching and could have been fatal and the emotion when he
thinks he killed Elrohir makes me want to cry each time I read it. But
the gentle wisdom of Elrond and Gilraen as they speak with Estel and
guide him and help him see his errors is so touching. I also want to
laugh when Estel says that he thinks that Elrond has probably never
had to discipline any boys before. It is just a wonderfully told
story, as are all of Nilmandra's stories.
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Title: Of All the Pretty Little Horses · Author: Oshun · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 736
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-15 09:15:26 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
A very neat, if somewhat saucy, little drabble. If anyone got confused
as to what they were talking about, I've a feeling it was Eomer, not
Faramir...
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Title: To Become A Queen · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 157
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-06-15 10:23:34 Score: 10
Admin Edit Review
This relationship is just the best!

I love the sexual tension between Éomer and Lothiriel. You portray it
so beautifully – from the moment they are relieved to find it is just
as strong as they remember all the way through to the wedding.

I appreciated Lothiriel's sheer physical discomfort - it is so likely
that she would suffer from such a journey, even if her brothers have
been forcing her to ride more. And her concerns - a few brief meetings
followed by a nine month betrothal are going to have her wondering
what she has let herself in for. At least until that really sizzling
meeting with Eomer - where she did nothing more exciting than remove
her glove!

And I love her brothers. I really want to know more about Elphir - he
was such a good older brother and he has turned into such a prissy
man. He seems quite different from the rest of his family and it would
seem to be more than a frosty wife - after all, that change can only
be relatively recent. Was he perhaps more upset by his mother's
illness and death than anyone realised? And wanted stability and an
unchanging world to bolster him against it? H'mm. Don't know. But he
is very tiresome. Erchirion and Amrothos are much more open.

Eomer's declaration that as his wife she would be her own woman must
have been reassuring to a very individual Lothiriel - since he was
clearly not saying that he was too indifferent to her to care what she
did! The whole wedding was splendid - even if Eomer's declaration
seemed to have been designed to disconcert his bride at a key moment.

These characters just get more and more delightful as your story arc
develops. I cannot get enough of them and hope you never run out of
stories to tell!

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Title: Just Desserts · Author: Lindelea · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond
· ID: 161
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-06-15 10:39:52 Score: 10
Admin Edit Review
I loved the final outcomes to this story. Very public restitution and
the rewards that Jack and his boys deserved. Not just get out of jail
free, but gloriously decorated horses, king's cloaks, King and Steward
walking at your side, and a very loud announcement of inestimable
honour. Yep. I think the population of Annuminas will have got the
message. And Jack - if he is well enough - will be able to visit the
place he considers above all others to be his home.

But boy did the reader torture pile on along the way! There were some
painfully stressful moments here when my heart bled for those who were
caught up in mindless application of rules. From the guards to the
families, from the hobbits and poor damaged Haldoron to Jack and his
boys – it is all so painful! Nobody is being actively malicious – but
the ending could have been tragic.

And the end result of the episode will actually serve to strengthen
the power of the king in the north. He has been seen to be someone who
will make every effort to be fair and generous in the way he deals
with people in his care. Someone who cares more for the spirit of the
law than its letter.

I must admit that the epilogue was very tantalising, too. I rather
hanker to discover just what went on when Ferdi and the unfortunate
Haldoron got the job of escorting young Faramir Took to Gondor.

This was an excellent and very moving story – and I was very relieved
to get to the very satisfactory ending!

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Title: The Circle · Author: Karenator · Races: Men · ID: 778
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-06-15 10:55:42 Score: 10
Admin Edit Review
Tomorrow? Now that is a very tantalising ending and stirs up a whole
new level of speculation! And leaves the reader longing to find out more.

I found this such an enjoyable story. I just love the combination of
characters - Halbarad and a young fluffy-chinned Hurin, Brandol,
Elrohir ... what more could you want? A bit of orc-slaying, the
inclusion of innocently-giggly child ghosts in white, and mud and
badly-fed rangers contemplating their lot in life. Combined with some
really delightful and evocative turns of phrase.

Halbarad is such a delightfully practical ranger – but one who can
appreciate the dreamer in his son. More, I suspect from his words,
than his own father would have done. It is great to see him as a
father – reluctant to see his young son endure this rite of passage,
desiring to protect him, yet knowing he cannot, and then supporting
him through the aftermath with understanding. And Hurin is so young!
Dunedain childhood was such a short part of a long life.

I enjoyed Elrohir taking Halbarad on the ghost chase. It was
interesting to see him on his own with the rangers. And Brandol – what
a great character! I love his clumsiness and Halbarad's slight
surprise that he didn't end up in the water.

I loved it, Karen. I had begun to forget how much I missed your
writing, but this has reminded me. I hope inspiration is visiting you
and compelling you to put finger to keyboard!

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Title: A Web of Treason · Author: Linda Hoyland · · ID: 951
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-15 12:01:43 Score: 6
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There's some fine writing here, plenty of action and a strong story
line, but I keep finding myself baulking at the rather sentimental (to
me) treatment of the Aragorn/Faramir relationship. To me, these are
two strong men who would co-operate on a far more businesslike basis,
though with a strong underlying trust and affection. However, this
isn't a condemnation of the story - rather of my own narrow views!

Boromir having a wife (or something) and offspring is also something
of a shock, though I must admit that dedicated warrior as he is, there
is something about Boromir ITB that suggests to me that he might have
had an eye for a pretty girl. And the girls would like him - he's
obviously God's gift physically and has a 'pleasant' and 'kindly'
nature into the bargain. Ah well...
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Title: Come When You Are Ready · Author: EdorasLass · Genres:
Alternate Universe · ID: 795
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-06-15 14:14:09 Score: 10
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This is very powerful - and quite horrific.

Denethor is – despite his appalling injuries and his suffering – more
like the Denethor of Under my Wing. I can see him as the slightly
bemused, but proud and loving father he was before responsibility,
grief and a palantir drove him over the edge. I feel that this
Denethor, were he able to be aware of anything much, would be
absolutely horrified by his attempt to take Faramir with him into death.

I am glad that he wished to be reassured that all was well with
Faramir before he was willing to follow Finduilas and Boromir. And
that he chose to leave before the healers had to start removing parts
of his anatomy. I am sure that they will be waiting for Faramir when
he arrives - a long time from now.

Although that room is really no place for the faint-hearted, it seems
a good thing in the long run that Faramir was able to see his father
and speak with him. The detail of Denethor's undamaged feet, feet that
Faramir had never before seen, was touching – the sort of thing that
sticks in the memory, but what I think will be most reassuring for him
is his father's concern. I think he always felt abandoned by the
reality that has Denethor's death over and done with by the time
Faramir awakes.

Denethor is walking the edge between life and death and half-aware of
both sides – and it is good to know that his loved ones are waiting
for him with love and understanding.

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Title: A Bride for a King · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 777
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-06-15 14:37:55 Score: 10
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I do ask myself why Imrahil couldn't manage to pen a brief note to his
daughter along with the letter to Erchirion. She's remarkably
reasonable most of the time and it might have helped. Really, telling
her big brother to do his dirty work isn't very tactful – and
Lothiriel took it better than I would have expected. Possibly better
than her brothers expected, too.

And Eomer didn't do a bad job with that proposal, though. Considering.
Simple, direct, honest - and designed by a man with a strong-willed
sister. Perhaps a bit impersonal, but still not bad. And he did give
her the option of refusal – which is more than anyone else has done!

I don't know if the information obtained from Amrothos after rather
too much wine was all that useful to her - he does have a rather
skewed vision of life. And endless curiosity. But I am glad that she
didn't turn down the proposal on principle – I'm not sure that Éomer
would have come back for another and rather more tactful go. She was
sensible not to cut off her nose to spite her face!

I do love your Imrahil. He is such a very civilised and intelligent
man. The sort of man who can be irritatingly right! And all with his
children's best interests at heart. Lothiriel can't complain too much
- being betrothed to Eomer suits her down to the ground. He's much
better than Elphir's brother-in-law, who sounds a totally self-centred
loser.

This is another completely delightful story, Madeleine. There is such
great sexual tension between two people who aren't even in the same
country. And one of whom we don't even see! I love it.

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Title: Reaping · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits: Post-Sauron's
Fall · ID: 169
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-06-15 15:02:53 Score: 10
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I never thought I would end up feeling sorry for Ted Sandyman. He is a
nasty piece of work – in hobbit terms – but even he did not really
deserve what happened to him here!

He doubtless thought he was so clever, pre-empting the banishment he
knew was inevitable! But he was never very bright – a bully, who
thought hanging onto the coattails of those who were bigger bullies
would bring him some kind of power. He deserved his miserable flight
from the Shire – but once he fell in the hands of the hands of
Sharkey's men, he found out more about evil than even he should.

(Personally, I feel sorry for Clover. Ruffo and Mallo – and Ted – at
least chose their own path. But still none of them deserved the fate
they found. Frodo would have been absolutely horrified to discover
what happened to those banished from the Shire.)

And Ted's fate – gruesome. I love the way that he dreams of sweet
Folco offering sympathy to the tortured hobbit until finally the orcs
and orcish men finish him off – and then Folco comes to lead him home,
while his body is dumped in a shallow grave and abandoned.

Poor Ted. Nasty, but naive. He didn't really have much of a grasp of
what the world was like outside the Shire. But his learning curve was
steep and he suffered a far worse punishment than any hobbit would
have chosen to inflict on him.

I think he learned that there are worse things than the pity of a
noble heart. To paraphrase the words of a certain Gondorian. This is
quite unlike most of your writing, but I found it made a great impact
on me. Good story.

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Title: The Golden Mask · Author: kwannom · Races: Men: Incomplete ·
ID: 670
Reviewer: wenont · 2006-06-15 15:45:05 Score: 8
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This story takes place in the Year 3429 of the Second Age, one year
before the Last Alliance. It is a mix of movie and book verse and very
skillfully woven together. It follows several warriors, Haldir and an
OC called Golden Mask, among them. As Me is suffering at the hands of
Sauron, the races of elves and men decide to create an alliance
against Him, and begin a search for great warriors from both races to
lead their armies.

Though to some, the story may appear to begin slowly, I found that
there is a very valid reason for this, as it builds the foundation for
plot development in the first few chapters. There is a great deal that
needs to be said at the onset of this piece and is well worth the read
through.

I have found that the author has done a magnificent job of researching
ancient battle strategies that fit perfectly into Tolkien's supposed
timeline and era. This is a very intricate piece of writing that
deserves the attention of the author's peers, and those interested in
well portrayed battle scenes and character development..
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Title: If I had a Hammer · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 162
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2006-06-15 18:47:05 Score: 10
Admin Edit Review
Poor Frodo. Having to deal with woodworking Pippin, modest Sam and
crotchety Merry. Demands beyond the call of duty for a bachelor
cousin. Still at least he knows Pippin's trials from experience – that
was a great sidelight on Frodo's talents.

Pippin must be so sick of not being able to do the things that his big
cousins find so easy – and slightly less willing to accept the
magnificence of Merry. Sam is a star – he does a brilliant job of
encouraging and teaching Pippin. And boosting his confidence after the
dreadful Tobias Tunnely did his best to demolish it. And letting him
explain his very Pippish train of thought – and then giving him the
opportunity to try out his ideas.

Pippin may well come out of this having learnt a huge amount. And not
just about carpentry. (Measure twice, cut once, Pippin.) But I reckon
his cousins will have learnt a good deal, too. And maybe even Sam will
have come to believe in himself a bit more.

Merry is much more pleasant company as a hobbit with a mission – well,
unless you are Tobias Tunnely. (I love the moment he lets the old
carpenter know that the Heir to the Master of Buckland is Displeased.)

The competition itself was a delight – full of characters – and the
party afterwards just confirmed Pippin's charm. Hamfast makes an
excellent recipient for the wheelbarrow – and I'm fairly sure the
design will spread rapidly throughout the Shire!

I am glad Tobias Tunnely very wisely decided in the end to be gracious
about his loss. Although I suspect he is extremely relieved that Sam
has no plan to set up as a carpentry teacher!

I really enjoyed this story - great stuff.

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Title: About Legends or Whisperings of a Ghost · Author: juno_magic ·
Races: Men · ID: 699
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-16 04:43:43 Score: 7
Admin Edit Review
This remarkable story is one of the most powerful pieces of Middle
Earth fan fiction that I have ever read. It is very dark and very
moving. Juno's prose tugs at your heart while she subtly makes her
case for exposing the truth behind legends. This tale of abuse and
cruelty shows that Sauron and his minions don't hold the exclusive
copyright on evil in the Third Age. Beruthial is revealed as a victim
whose story had been erased from Middle Earth history.

As a cat lover and humble servant of a black cat, I was moved to tears
by some of the events in the story. MEFA readers will be moved, too,
but should exercise caution, because this tale is not for the
squeamish. Thank you, Juno, for redeeming the honor of cats,
especially black cats, in Middle Earth. This story stayed with me for
days after I read it.
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Title: Respite · Author: Nesta · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 750
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-16 04:45:46 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
A sweet story and very realistic, too. Too often we fanfic writers put
Faramir and Eowyn in such maelstrom of angst. Nesta's story allows
them to have a happy, peaceful time, like any real life couple.
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Title: The Still Point · Author: stultiloquentia · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 87
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-16 04:46:56 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
Stultiloquentia opens the door to Aragorn and Arwen's bridal chamber
and presents us with a bit of PG erotica before getting down to the
true theme of the story--the meaning of mortality. The language in
this story is exquisite. But what I like best is the proposition that
the last vestiges of Arwen's immortality were lost when she lost her
virginity.
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Title: Psychodiagnostic Evaluation - Subject: The Lady of Rohan ·
Author: Anoriath · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 753
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-16 04:52:06 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
What a creative take on Eowyn's state in the Houses of Healing. I've
often wondered what a modern psychologist would have to say about the
mental states of both Eowyn and Faramir after Aragorn brings them back.
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Title: Of Stone and Fire · Author: Werecat · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 124
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-16 20:08:14 Score: 4
Admin Edit Review
An interesting drabble that raises some interesting questions, in
particular, how far do spirits in the Halls of Mandos follow events in
the world they have left? And could Feanor have done anything to
Gimli? Presumably not!

I must say that Gimli deserved his three hairs. He has a generous
heart - for a dwarf - whereas Feanor is dead selfish and won't give
anything of his own away.
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Title: Gandalf's No Good, Rotten, Really Bad Day · Author: Gandalfs
apprentice · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 146
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-16 22:12:57 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
Wow, this was an unexpected, AU giggle. It was fun to see Gandalf,
that marvel of planning, cringe as everything goes awry. But he did
get rid of Sauron, as the original plan mandated. This was a fun romp.
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Hey guys,

You all have been great about posting story reviews, and some authors
will be getting some wonderfully rich feedback. Good job! But so far I
have not seen any final author reviews. If you have decided to focus
on story reviews or just are saving author reviews for last or haven't
made them final yet, that's absolutely fine. The MEFAs are glad to
have any reviews you choose to submit. However, I want to make sure
everyone understands just how to make author reviews.

When you review a story you are making comments about that particular
piece. Author reviews are more general. I tend to think of my MEFA
reviews like recommending something to a friend. If someone approaches
me and asks me if I know of any good stories, for example, with an
outstanding interpretation of Thranduil, I would maybe come up with
2-3 titles and explain just why Thranduil is so spectacular in those
pieces. And I'd probably say whatever else I really liked about the
story. That would be something like what I do in a story review.

An author review, like I said, is more general. If that same friend
asked me for recommendations for authors who write the Mirkwood elves
I would not be commenting on what a particular author did right in a
particular story. I might say that author A does a good job of
capturing the sense of sustained trauma you get when Dol Guldur is at
your back door, while author B has some fascinating ideas about the
political relations between Mirkwood, Erebor, and Dale/Laketown, while
author C has a real knack for writing children and her young Legolas
was always a fun read without being so sugar-sweet it seemed like too
much. In other words, the things I liked about the author's "world",
or the common strengths in all the stories I'd read by that author.
Author reviews should be something along those same lines.

So, here's the GROUND RULES for author reviews:

1. When an author has a story nominated they are also entered as an
author in the author subcategories for whatever main category their
story ends up in. There are three author subcategories for each main
category. All the authors in the fixed-length ficlet categories are
entered in the "Fixed-Length Ficlet Authors" subcat; poetry authors
are entered in "Poetry Authors", and everyone else in "General
Authors". If you have both a poem and a drabble you get entered in both.

2. Voting is done along the same lines as story votes. You enter a
review of the author, and the website assigns it a point value based
on length. The author with the most points wins.

3. There is no maximum size on author categories like there are for
story categories. If there are seventeen authors who wrote full-length
stories in "The Great Years", they will all go in "The Great Years:
General Authors".

4. An author is entered in a sub-category for each main category where
her stories are placed. For someone with lots of stories in the awards
this could be quite a few. In this case you can either write a unique
review for every subcategory (or as many as you want to vote in) that
the author is entered in, or you can write one general review and copy
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write a unique review for each subcategory - but in the interests of
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UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES can you copy a review or any significant part
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UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES can you copy from one story review to another
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6. There are two ways to review. You can review by clicking the link
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listed more than once - for example, in "Men" Acacea is listed twice,
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author review in the subcategory that is listed in the "Author Review
SubCategory" column.

For more information, see the FAQ on author reviews at

http://mefawards.net/faq/viewtopic.php?p=124

and be sure to read the replies, where I give even some examples. I
explain best by example, but in the interest of space I've kept them
out of this post.

Oh, and one last thing: there haven't been any author reviews this
year, but there have been in previous years. If you're looking for
examples to guide you, you can look at last year's. To do this, go to
http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/ and click "Log in as guest".
(Note, your password won't work if you weren't registered in 2005 or
have changed your password since then.) Once you're in click the
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And I think that's enough information for one sitting. If you are at
all confused PLEASE ask. You may not be the only one, and I'm happy to
answer any questions. If you'd rather do it privately, you can also
email me at mefasupport(at)gmail(dot)com.

So... go ye forth and review. Either stories or authors, both are good.

Marta

Hey guys,

One last message from me, and then I'm heading out for a bit. :-)

I've noticed that some people are spamming our FAQ boards. As you may
know, I post all of the FAQs using a message board at
http://www.mefawards.net/FAQ/ . Up until recently I hadn't bothered to
restrict access to it. But some people not affiliated with groups were
making posts of just links to other, commercial sites. What I read of
these was not offensive but it was certainly bothersome. And not what
those boards were set up for.

So, from now on, only members of those boards will be able to start a
new topic. You can still reply to any existing thread as a guest if a
FAQ isn't clear. But hopefully this will discourage the spammers.

Signing up as a member of these messageboards is completely optional.
Doing so lets new posts be labelled as such, and some people find that
helpful. If you do sign up, this bulletin board is completely
different from what you use to log in to the voting website at
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same if you like, but changing it at one won't affect the other.

I will continue to delete spam as I see it over there.

Marta

Title: History Becomes Legend · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men:
Steward's Sons Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 737
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 18:02:48 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
I'm a bit puzzled by this. None of the Rohirrim would have a problem
speaking Westron, it's just the Common Speech.

If this takes place some years after the War, I fancy that Faramir would
have learned a fair amount of Rohirric from Eowyn, so the Rider wouldn't
need to use another language anyway.

Apart from that, nice idea.
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Title: Pity · Author: Elana · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 152
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-04 10:46:17 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
An interesting approach. I'd have to take it as AU; Tolkien's Ring is
too powerful and evil to work this way, I think.
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Title: Summoned · Author: Agape4Gondor · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 840
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-04 10:49:04 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
Nice to see a happy Faramir, for once! I find him a bit passive here,
though, and a bit over-grateful to Aragorn for giving him back what
belonged to him in the first place. That's only my view, though, and I'm
prejudiced.
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Title: Lobelia's List · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 201
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-04 10:50:53 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
A delicious glimpse of this delicious character! Fits in very well with
the Lobelia who 'had brought a complete inventory with her and went
right through it'.
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Title: Great Heart · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: First Age and
Prior: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 64
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-04 10:56:10 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
Wonderful! Allows Huan to be rally doggy, and yet tremendously
impressive - superdog in the making! I notice he has the correct Celtic
livery of white hide and red ears.
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Title: Mine · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 66
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-04 11:36:54 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
(Wipes tears from laughing)

You know, you have completely spoiled me for reading anybody elses
versions of young Boromir and Faramir  no one else seems to write with
such wit, and affection, and absolute truth about the behavior of young
children. Every single element of the story is perfect  teething
Faramir chewing on anything within reach; Boromirs anguish over his
beloved toy companion covered with baby slobber, even the way Faramir
becomes that baby when his older brother is angry with him. Even the
tiniest detail  washing Clover in lavender soap and setting her to dry
in the sun  is exquisitely crafted. I adore these bitty stories, and
always greet the arrival of a new one with a whoop of delight. Thank you
for giving us such joyful recollections of our favorite brothers childhood.
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Title: Legacy · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 299
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-04 13:11:44 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
What a lovely idea that M and P remembered Boromir, and with gratitude!
This really cheered me up!
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Title: Birthday Kisses · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 59
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-04 13:15:24 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
A bit on the sentimental side, perhaps, but very sweet. Certainly no
hero who's not a dog-lover would find a place in my swooning file!
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Title: Shadows of a Nameless Fear · Author: Budgielover · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 640
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-04 14:04:31 Score: 5
Admin Edit Review
The description and detail in this story are amazing and put the reader
directly into the story. Seeing Frodo's fraility juxtaposed with his
determination and strength shows how special this hobbit really is, and
the descriptions of his self-doubt and shame are spot on. Seeing the
fierce protectiveness of the rest of the Fellowship for the hobbits and
the Gondorians anger that one of them should be assualted is enough to
make one smile with pride. The action and suspense are dealt with a deft
hand and leave the reader coming back for more.
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Title: Demand and You Shall Receive · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres:
Humor: Children · ID: 159
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-04 14:33:09 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
Seeing wee Pippin in a hissy fit is always a delight, especially when
you don't have to be there to deal with him. Even though he can barely
talk, he knows just enough words (and just how to wind his Aunt
Esmeralda around his little finger) to always get what he wants. Merry
is perfectly bratty and unhelpful, as any teen or tween would be, and
Frodo's frazzled nerves are a wonderful contrast to his usually cool and
calm demeanor, and his reluctant relinquishment of his coin purse to the
Took is so true to life. The best part is the flashforward to post-War
Shire, when Merry reflects on everything Pippin has used that coin purse
for over the years, and then proceeds to embarrass Pippin in front of
Diamond, recounting the story of how he acquired it - a suiting, if
late, consequence.
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Title: Cloves and Kisses · Author: Bill The Pony · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 912
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-04 14:45:40 Score: 4
Admin Edit Review
An unusual family tradition gets Sam in over his head with the lasses of
Hobbiton and Bywater. Marigold is delightfully diabolical, luring her
unsuspecting brother to his fate, which Sam finds both embarrassing and
titillating at once. Written from Sam's point of view, the reader is
kept as in the dark as he is and feel his ire, frustration, and desire
as he does. A true delight from beginning to end, that leaves the reader
wanting more but perfectly satisified with the conclusion.
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Title: Relief · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama: Pre-Fellowship · ID: 518
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-04 23:32:04 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
Please accept my apologies! I know that youre a wonderful writer of
description and introspection; few writers do such a great job of
getting inside Faramirs head. But Id forgotten what a outstanding
action writer you are  the first paragraph here is absolutely
magnificent. Youve evoked all the sight and sound of battle, the
necessity for quick wits and reflexes, and all with the tang of the
Professors own way with words. Well done!

Speaking of way with words, the way youve interwoven the two meanings
of the word relief is masterful  Boromirs almost breathless,
tangible relief and joy at his brothers arrival, and the relief of the
Stewards servants, even as they must take on faith the word that all
will be well at the battle front, that the Relief will arrive in good time.
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Title: Shadow of Himself · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 853
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-04 23:33:51 Score: 6
Admin Edit Review
What a unique take on the Boromir!Lives genre, moving and painful but
oh, so very plausible. This man is no ones son, and has created a life
for himself entirely by his own skill, wit, and hard work, a life filled
with love and contentment, laughing children and the earned respect of
his peers. The appearance of Legolas and Gimli, after twenty years,
threatens the stability of Erandirs family; I love the way youve taken
the road less traveled and chosen to have the Man of Gondor choose his
new life, meaningful and familiar, over the uncertainty of a return to
the old. For his new family has so much more to lose than his former
family would gain.

That teasing last line is masterful  how much does Erandir remember,
despite what he has said? Tender and bittersweet as well. Wonderfully done.
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Title: Up From The Ashes · Author: Elanor Gardner · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 645
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-04 23:35:22 Score: 8
Admin Edit Review
First of all, your descriptive skills are extraordinary  I felt as
though I were right there with Frodo and Pippin, feeling the warm sun on
my back, tasting the baklava-like pastries, laughing at the girl chasing
her hen down the cobbled lane. Children playing noisily, laundry hanging
from upper stories of narrow houses, the scent of delicious, spicy food
wafting out open windows  what a feast for the senses!

In a way, your wonderful story is like the story itself  just as Frodo
and Pip wander the city, seeing beauty at every turn, at each twist in
your tale theres another gorgeous detail. The old woman sweeping the
floor with herbs and salt, to both banish evil and ensure a beautiful
scent, and the image of the ashes being carefully collected and used to
enrich the gardens of the city were particularly vivid. Your depiction
of the heartwarming ceremony of the re-opening of the bookshop,
symbolizing to Frodo and Pip the rebirth of the city, made me laugh with
delight. Thank you so much for such a lovely, uplifting story.
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Title: [untitled] He: Gimli fic prompt #84 · Author: Thevina Finduilas ·
Races: Dwarves · ID: 718
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-04 23:36:52 Score: 6
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Your use of language is extraordinary  that whole first paragraph just
comes perfectly to life, with Gimlis hesitation to smoke in front of
the fastidious elves, his ruminations on the perceived difference
between Old Toby and Longbottom Leaf, the comforting, familiar scent.
Lovely!

Its also quite lovely the way you describe another comforting familiar
scent, leading us seamlessly to Gimlis loneliness and longing for his
companion. Who could have imagined that a subtle description of dwarvish
sex could be so unexpectedly erotic and tender? [fingers with jeweled
bands; deep, warm laughter; a long, plaited beard that trailed down his
abdomen to Gimli's most hidden parts.]

You are the only woman on this earth who could write this, and make it
so wondrously believable. Youve given us a new, vivid image of Gimli,
completely unlike what weve seen anywhere before.
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Title: The Summons · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 254
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-05 08:29:27 Score: 5
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This is an interesting angle on two questions: what Boromir thought
about Aragorn on their journey, and what might have happened if they'd
turned up at MT together.

Of course Boromir would admire Aragorn's prowess, but whether he'd so
readily accept his claim to be top dog in Gondor is another question.
Boromir may respect Aragorn to an extent, but he never seems to be
particularly friendly to him ITB, either before or after the visit to
Lórien. Boromir has been raised as the heir to the Ruling Stewardship
and I don't think he'd relinquish that prospect at all easily. I think
it was very lucky for Aragorn that Boromir was killed off when he was.

Also, what part does the Ring pay in all this, I wonder?
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Title: The Importance of Being a Hobbit · Author: Lamiel · Races:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 961
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-06 06:32:28 Score: 3
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A delightful story about the Fellowship and how each member is needed if
the Quest is to succeed.I especially enjoyed the scene where Merry talks
to Aragorn and reflects how such a fearsome warrior can be so kindly to
him and feels somewhat inadequate.
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Title: Evenstar · Author: Mar'isu · Times: The Great Years · ID: 856
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-06 13:27:48 Score: 2
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I think that's beautiful and captures the spirit of the book very well
indeed. I was fascinated by the idea of Elrond seeing Elros in Aragorn.
Talk about skipping a generation!
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Title: The Falcon and the Star · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: The
Great Years: Gondor · ID: 57
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-08 04:12:04 Score: 10
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I have read many stories set in the Houses of Healing when Faramir is
healed by Aragorn, but this one is far the best, the cream of the crop
by a long margin.

The writer sticks close to Tolkien's version and yet creates her own
unique and highly original version of the events.I love her use of
poetic and Tolkien like language.

It is told almost entirely in the first person from Aragorn's point of
view as he fights to overcome his extreme tiredness and heal the injured
Faramir and the others who need him.

We also catch a glimpse of Faramir's tortured mind as,assailed by
visions sent by the Dark Lord, he struggles through a barren rocky
landscape.

There are some stunning and touching scenes in this story, especially
when Aragorn finally clasps the injured Faramir in the dream world and
realises he has found a priceless jewel, the best Gondor has to offer.

The would be king is impressed and amazed by Faramir's
courage,intelligence and determination. This writer does not see Faramir
as a passive victim, but one who struggles, and with Aragorn's
help,survives against overwhelming odds.

Through saving Faramir, Aragorn also finds himself, the King he is meant
to be and he gains confidence that he will fulfil his destiny as the
heir of Elendil.

The story is full of lovely touches, such as the phantom Denethor trying
to confuse Faramir and Faramir's cleverness in overcoming him, the power
of the Elessar stone, and Aragorn's recognition of a kidred spirit, he
will need beside him in the future.
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Title: Mellyn · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama · ID: 322
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-08 05:49:11 Score: 4
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A sweet and touching little Estel story about how the boy wins the heart
of Legolas and they become friends. I like the fact that Estel is an
active character here,as in so many stories he is a passive victim
needing help.Here, Legolas is the one in need of aid and the child
Aragorn rises to the occasion and gains a new friend,for Legolas was
wary before of befriending humans.
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Title: Strike While the Iron is Hot · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres:
Humor: The Shire · ID: 234
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-10 13:39:44 Score: 5
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It's a war of pranks and no alliance can be trusted. Pippin gets to
shine here, in all his nonsensical wonder, and Freddy, after a summer of
playing one hobbit against another, finally gets what's coming to him.
The final prank is classic and is bound to go down in the books of
pranks past. Not everyone is fooled; Frodo uses his rascally skills to
see through the charade, and Saradoc guesses who the real culprit is.
The introduction to the story is timeless, almost like a documentary,
and the brief list of the various pranks played toward the end had me in
fits.
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Title: Of Squirrels and Stolen Pies · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres:
Humor: Children · ID: 305
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-10 13:55:38 Score: 6
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Pippin's enjoying a lovely day watching squirrels when Merry and the
older lads of Brandy Hall run past him and gift him with a pie. The only
thing is, the pie is stolen! Pippin's conversation with the pursuing
hobbits attempting to catch the culprits is the most hilarious thing.
While the other lads are hiding, worrying that Pippin might give them up
(except Merry, who knows Pippin well enough to know he won't say a
word), Pippin commences to confuse the daylights out of the pie theft
victims simply by being Pippin. He even manages to make the victims feel
guilty for trying to get their pie back! Merry steps in a just the right
moment to make sure that everyone gets away scot free, but Pippin is the
real hero here - and he doesn't even know it!
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Title: The Falcon and the Star · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: The
Great Years: Gondor · ID: 57
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-10 23:42:00 Score: 6
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I've read this through three times now because there was so much
beautiful stuff. Your Aragorn is so very strong. You certainly know your
appendices, but you've not just given us dry facts, you've used them to
weave a very three-dimensional Aragorn that is very canonical but also
leaps off the pages. His fears, his own ghosts from his past - very well
done. I also love your "dark vale".As someone who has struggled with
grief and depression and emotional exhaustion, I can tell you that the
metaphor of an endless wasteland was a very apt one and worked very well.

And the imagery here! The use of song especially, and the power of the
name, it all felt very, very Tolkienesque. All in all, very well done.
You've moved me, and that's not often done.
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Title: Mine · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 66
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-11 13:46:15 Score: 2
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This is a sweet story, but it could concern any pair of little kids. I
don't see anything Midle-Earthy about it.
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Title: Second Son · Author: Nesta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor
· ID: 843
Reviewer: Raihon · 2006-07-11 15:58:01 Score: 2
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Great plot moment: Faramir's recognition and poignant memories of the
dead man hits like a punch to the gut. The "breaking the cycle" part
reflects Faramir's personality well.
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Title: Gondor Needs No King · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 207
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-30 13:31:11 Score: 3
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Chilling!

I presume this is movieverse. I can't imagine the bookverse characters
sinking quite this low .. and yet JRRT does paint a grim picture of what
happens to people when they take the Ring.

How come wearing the Ring didn't make Boromir invisible?
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Title: The Will · Author: LydiaB · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 770
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-30 13:35:36 Score: 3
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Brilliant! Just the sort of thing that would happen in the Tolkien
universe - or if it didn't, it jolly well ought to have.

I'm so glad that the young man didn't stop a bullet in the trenches.
This is true in the real world as well. I wonder how many literary
masterpieces were actually buried in Flanders Fields - a good many,
without a doubt.
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Title: About Legends or Whisperings of a Ghost · Author: juno_magic ·
Races: Men · ID: 699
Reviewer: LuthienTinuviel · 2006-06-30 16:41:25 Score: 3
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Wow. This isn't the type that scares you to jitters, but the whole tone
of the story really gets to you in a sense that it portrays sadness and
suffering, and how the queen endured it. It's lovely. =)
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Title: Fair Trade · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 900
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-01 03:53:12 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
An effective reminder that life in Henneth Annun was no picnic for
either Faramir or his men. The drabble skillfully shows how hardship
brings out the best in Faramir, and the men's appreciation of both their
service and their Captain.
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Title: If I had a Hammer · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 162
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-01 14:04:59 Score: 10
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This is a truly delightful story from beginning to end. The idea is
simple enough - Pippin has to learn carpentry and enter his creation in
a fair - yet GW's deft hand turns this into a life lesson for each
hobbit concerned. Pippin is at that fragile age of adolescence where
he's comparing himself to his idolistic older cousins and always
measuring himself short. His difficulty with carpentry doesn't help, and
Merry and Frodo's attempts to get to the heart of the matter come to
nil. Sam is the unspoken hero of the piece, and his patience and
perseverance as he teaches Pippin his craft is not only a delight to
behold but is exactly what Pippin needs. By the end of the story, Pippin
learns not only the secrets and skill of craftsmanship, but also that he
is talented in many respects, and that his seemingly perfect cousins
have more than a few flaws of their own. Merry learns how to be a true
friend and that the meaning of 'help' isn't just doing something for
someone else, but offering encouragment. Frodo learns that he doesn't
always have the answer to everything and that Merry can be as sensitive
to Pippin's needs as himself. Sam learns to accept praise for his work
and that he's appreciated for far more than his gardening skills.
Throughout the story is interweaved a most intriguing mystery. When it
is finally solved and how each cousin reacts to it further proves this
story to be one of the author's best.
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Title: The Three Towers · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 113
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-01 14:14:28 Score: 3
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When Frodo decides that he wants to revisit Cirith Ungol after the war,
his friends are not so sure it's a good idea. They rally around him all
the same and the journey proves to be both revealing to his friends, and
healing for him and Sam. A unique idea that is handled with the perfect
balance of angst and comfort.
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Title: A Sight to Remember · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 703
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-01 14:31:20 Score: 7
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This story brings every hobbit's worst nightmare to life - with
hilarious results. Rusty is a delightful OC that grabs the imagination,
which is not necessarily a good thing when she and Pippin get together.
An attempt to sabotage Lotho's bathing soap gets them far more than they
ever bargained for. The result is not only something that will keep
hobbits talking for 99 days, but it accomplished a miracle that no one
would have anticipated - it got the SBs out of Tookland for good! Rusty
and Pippin's scramble to get away from the crime scene undetected was
both comical and dramatic, and Frodo's reaction to news of the prank had
me in stitches. The best part though is when Pippin is assumed to be
innocent because everyone has seen Merry outside while the prank was
taking place, and they assumed that Pippin would always be where Merry
is. Merry is able to protect his cousin from suspicion simply by the
strong bond of friendship that they share.
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Title: Hidden Wonders · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 420
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-02 13:37:25 Score: 1
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Nice. But whatever was Eowyn doing poking about among Grima's books?
Most inadvisable.
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Title: And all in evil ended be · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 122
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-02 13:39:04 Score: 1
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I hope the lore of revived Numenor included a recipe for insecticide.
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Title: Cousin Calla · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest ·
ID: 767
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-02 18:38:13 Score: 8
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Centered around the deaths of Merry's grandparents is this most unusual
and fascinating tale of Cousin Calla. There are many strange connections
between Frodo and Calla, of which both characters are aware of yet do
not speak of. The strange visions that Calla receives and draws are of
ancient and mythic times, or even glimpses of the future. Frodo
recognizes some of the drawings, though he has yet to find out why. The
mysterious debilitating disease that Calla has is also a precursor to
Frodo's condition after the War, in the way that Calla keeps herself
locked away, ashamed of her state, and allows only a very few select
family members to visit her, opting to spend her days drawing in her
sketchbook. She is wasting, in body as well as spirit. The most
delightful part of this sad tale was when she allowed Merry to visit
her, in lieu of his grandparents, and she gives Merry paintings of his
grandparents from their younger days, as well as when she later gives
Frodo a drawing of his parents looking over him from the beyond.
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Title: A Rabbits Tale · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: The Shire · ID: 982
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-02 18:47:39 Score: 8
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Errol is the favorite and much beloved stuffed bunny of Pippin. In this
adorable story, we get to see things from Errol's point of view and even
to recount some of the tales that Errol has featured in in previous
works. Errol is a very practical and insightful bunny, giving support
and comfort whenever its needed, even though he now has to be hidden
away in Pippin's wardrobe. Errol understands that Pippin is growing up
now, and that Merry disapproves of him, yet his continuing concern and
protectiveness of his Pippin is heart-warming and makes you smile the
whole way through, even when Errol is commenting on the strange changes
in his master since his return from his long absence. Errol doesn't
understand everything that is going on, but as long as he is able to
offer comfort when needed, he doesn't mind. The way Pippin talks to him
is adoring, reminding the reader of a much younger Pippin even while we
can see the changes in him from the War. Merry finally warming up to
Errol and accepting him into the family, unbeknownst to Pippin, is the
clencher.
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Title: Consequences of a Fall · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 221
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-02 18:55:33 Score: 5
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This story has everything. Suspense, angst, comfort, and humor are
weaved around the legendary death of the even more legendary, if not
loved, Lalia the Great. With Pearl under suspicion, the Whitwell Tooks
have enough to deal with, but then Pippin becomes ill as well. This
opens up an unexpected advantage for the villian, who proves herself to
be far more manipulative and vindictive than anyone ever suspected
before. We also see Merry and Frodo's protectiveness of each other and
Pippin, and Frodo's level-headedness in the face of family tragedy.
Though he's only newly head of the Baggins family, he carries the
responsibility with seasoned grace, proving why he is destined to be the
Ring-bearer.
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Title: You Never Know · Author: MysteriousWays · Genres: Humor: The
Shire · ID: 701
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-02 19:06:05 Score: 4
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This is a hilariously delightful tale from beginning to end. Frodo wakes
up and finds that every single hobbit in Hobbiton has apparently lost
all common sense over night. It's wonderful to see Frodo in a pickle and
how he constantly tries to talk himself through it while simultaneously
trying to maintain some sense of composure. The ending is just priceless.
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Title: The Household Accounts · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 50
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 12:10:38 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
That's a marvellous evocation of Eowyn's world, very economically and
effectively written. I'm sorry she didn't find something to her liking,
though - for a wedding gown, or for a baby perhaps?
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Title: Bad Step · Author: Mariole · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 786
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-03 14:57:24 Score: 6
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There's not a lot of Sam h/c stories out there, and this fills that hole
beautifully. A horrible miscommunication and some rather bad judgment on
Sam's part results in four excurtiating days for Sam. Seeing Sam's
practicality and determination in the face of a hopeless situation is
insipiring. You can see why this hobbit will be so perfectly suited to
help Frodo complete the Quest in years to come. It's wonderfully angsty
from the very start and all the characters, both canon and OC, are
richly drawn and come to life on the screen. The close bond between
Marigold and Sam, the Gaffer's worry and tenderness with his son,
Frodo's conflicting emotions and cool-handed dealings with the healers
and the Gamgees, and the bits of comedy sprinkled throughout make this
story a true gem.
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Title: Reaping · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits: Post-Sauron's
Fall · ID: 169
Reviewer: GamgeeFest · 2006-07-03 15:04:53 Score: 4
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I didn't think I could ever feel sorry for Ted Sandyman, but this story
proved me wrong. Ted's dealings with the ruffians during the occupation
of the Shire comes back to him, ten fold. The descriptions of his
torment are cringe-worthy and his dreams of Folco, who he had wronged
terribly, leading the Folco's death, are enough to make you weep. The
ending, as Ted realizes fully what he had done and seeks forgiveness
from the one he wronged, leaves you with the hope that perhaps he was
redeemed in the end after all.
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Title: On the Fair Hill · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 946
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:24:56 Score: 1
Admin Edit Review
This is delightful - and very much in the Tolkien spirit.
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Title: Drift · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 203
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:27:28 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
That is just beautiful.

The finny things that lived near Rauros must have had a particularly
skilful touch...
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Title: Tharbad Crossing · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Men:
Steward's Sons Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 253
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:30:26 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
I always thought there was a story lurking behind Boromir's quest. He
gets very little credit for it in FoTR, with Aragorn swanking about all
the travelling he's done.

I'm not sure Boromir would do it just for Faramir's sake, though. His
own pride would prevent him from giving up something he'd undertaken to do.
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Title: Forlorn Hope · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 301
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:36:48 Score: 3
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Just the sort of thoughts Moviemir would have. Not the thoughts of a man
who would inspire anyone to a gallant defence.

Book Faramir, on the other hand ... but that's another story. And how.
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Title: A Lesser and Alien Race · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 683
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:39:38 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
Thought provoking! The Faramir-Eowyn marriage could indeed be seen as
echoing the Eldacar-Vidumavi one, though not closely because Faramir
isn't a king. If Aragorn had married Eowyn the upheaval would presumably
have been much greater.
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Title: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship · Author: Elana · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 150
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:43:47 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
Neat!

Do hobbits have elven ears? I hope not. Those ears look so silly in the
movie. I never imagined even JRRT's elves with pointy ears. It would be
such a nuisance to have to darn holes in one's hat all the time.

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Title: The Steward's Dream · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Fixed-Length
Ficlets With Children · ID: 647
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:47:21 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
I think the first part of this rings true, but not the second. I just
can't see Boromir or Denethor accepting second place. That's only my
view, though.
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Title: An Exchange of Views · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 931
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:53:59 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
I'd swallow this as movieverse but not bookverse. I don't think Faramir
would be constantly worrying about criticism. ITB Denethor accuses him
of going his own way, rather than being too anxious to please.
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Title: Stronger Songs · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 688
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-03 17:58:11 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
Treebeard and Tom Bombadil slogging it out is a gorgeous idea.

Personally I back Treebeard. His poetry's better.

On the other hand, Tom has one trump card: he's married, even if his
wife is on the damp side. I wonder if the Entwives ever turned up.
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How I laughed!!!

Thanks for enlivening a dull morning, SpaceWeavil. Now, every time I
watch the Horsemen storming out of the gates in the movie, I shall
wonder how Khamul's infection is getting on, and is it giving him hell...
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Title: The Will · Author: LydiaB · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 770
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-06-22 06:17:38 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
An unusual and unique drable suggesting how Tolkien may have been
inspired to write his masterpiece.What if it truly were history and not
an invention of his mind?
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Title: Roots and Branches · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 611
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-23 13:18:18 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
I don't quite go along with the picture of Faramir in this drabble
because I don't personally think he has anything to apologise for.
However, this is a neatly constructed little story, and the way Sam
demonstrates his point of view is right for him, and very memorable.
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Title: Seeker of Shadow · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 63
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-23 13:23:46 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
A fascinating glimpse of two of JRRT's most fascinating characters.
(Moral: never ride out alone without telling your family where you're
going, and don't forget to take your mobile.)

I like the poetry, except for the white-hot stars ... well, they are
white-hot, I know, but they don't look it from M.E. (Symbolic, maybe).
Only a quibble.
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Title: The Tracks of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 60
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-23 13:30:40 Score: 4
Admin Edit Review
This is beautifully written and very moving. It touches on that old, old
theme of the immortal who is brought agonisingly up against the fact of
others' mortality, and finds that 'the loss and the silence' aren't all
on the mortal side.

It makes me wonder if that isn't one reason why Elves and Men in the
Third Age tend to avoid one another, perhaps rightly. When mortal meets
immortal the result is always going to be heartbreak for somebody.

On the everyday level, it's a little like what dog-lovers feel: why do
their lives have to be so short?
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Title: Legend · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 933
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-23 13:35:16 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
This is one of the most touching and convincing portrayals of Eowyn I've
ever read. Much more than an Amazon, this is a real woman. The ending is
very true and touching.

As for young, impudent Barahir maybe not being like her .. well, it's
always hard to see yourself as others see you!
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Title: The Household Accounts · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 50
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-06-24 00:37:01 Score: 2
Admin Edit Review
Good mood piece that was nicely written. However, I thought it ended
abruptly. I expected a different end.
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Title: Show his quality · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 875
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-25 10:39:43 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
It's neat, but it smells of movie Faramir to me. There's nothing ITB to
consider he was anything other than a highly competent military man! I
can't speak to his cooking skills though.
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Title: A Change In The Weather · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 692
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-26 08:30:47 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
This is a beautiful quarter that perfectly captures the character of
each of the hobbits, in a way that JRRT would surely have approved. The
difference between the safe, homely Shire and the dangerousness of the
world outside is encapsulated in just a few words.
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Title: Childhood Dreams · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 523
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-26 08:33:12 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
An unusual and fascinating line on the two brothers.

Is the corollary that Boromir is like a river? Interesting idea. I'd
have thought he was more like a horse - proud, noble, willing, but not
too bright and needing guidance from a wiser hand...
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Title: Fair Trade · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 900
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-27 09:56:54 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
That's a nice way to show how someone like Faramir could capture men's
devotion, but I'm not 100% sure he'd go for it. In TT he is clearly
treated with distinction, and I think the men would expect this in such
a hierarchical society. They seem to love Faramir for what he is, not
what he does.
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Title: Jewels · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 790
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-27 09:58:35 Score: 2
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Yum yum, I bet it was a night and a half.

One thing though - I reckong riding barefoot would be highly
uncomfortable, even if you didn't use stirrups!
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Title: Divinity · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races: Hobbits · ID: 824
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2006-06-27 11:51:50 Score: 6
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This is one of the most remarkable tales I've ever seen. Illyria takes
scenes from the Ringbearer's quest and shows them in a completely new
light - through the eyes of the Valar. What we get so see are exquisite
miniatures of divine intervention... or not, even if the Valar would
most likely try to interfere. As Manwë does, who turns to Ilúvatar,
questioning the righteousness of seemingly detached waiting and watching:

"How will they fend themselves against so terrible a foe? Are we to keep
apart from their suffering and do nothing to spare them the malice and
deceit of the Enemy?"

This is moving, it is stunningly beautiful and written with a excellent
use of words and imagery... and with a deep understanding of Tolkien's
thoughts and beliefs that touch the reader's heart. Illyria has written
many great tales, but this is outstanding among her oeuvre, and worthy
of praise.
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Title: The Price of Power · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great
Years: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 989
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2006-06-27 21:36:21 Score: 6
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This surprising drabble was written by someone I call the "Mistress of
Drabbles", and righteously so. To draw the reader into a plot, to get
the whole idea going and to bring it to a satisfying end with nothing
more than 100 words is a special, difficult art, and Rabidsamfan is
brilliant. In "The Price of Power" we are granted an astonishing insight
into Saruman's thoughts. He gives the order to tear the trees around
Osgiliath down, and he has known their voices and now hears their
screams as they are dying. To know that he has been "the greatest and
wisest member of our order" (as Gandalf put it), and that his enormous
greed for power overcomes and horribly corrupts the wisdom of ages, is
painfully to read and incredibly clever. Absolutely wonderful. MORE!
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Title: Memorabilia and Other Useful Things · Author: Illwynd · Times:
The Great Years: The Fellowship · ID: 714
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-06-28 14:54:04 Score: 3
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This is very sweet. It's nice to think of Pippin as being so
sentimental, and stopping to think about where he is in the middle of
the journey and about it looking back when any journey is through.
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Title: Flotsam · Author: Salsify · Times: The Great Years: Vignette · ID: 85
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-06-28 15:00:33 Score: 3
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Very good. It's wonderful to see the thoughtful and reflective Merry,
talking himself around his troubled heart. I particularly like that he
doesnt' resolve his conflict, there is no neat and tidy ending here,
because the fact and his feelings remain, as they should do.
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Title: The Remains of Power · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 228
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-06-28 15:06:10 Score: 3
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This has some wonderfully insightful moments - that time is Saruman's
greatest weapon, that idea of his having no colour and therefore being
adaptable and easily hidden, not to mention the indifference of ducks!
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Title: Birnam Wood · Author: Inkling · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 917
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-06-29 07:52:17 Score: 4
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Oho! Birname Wood really did come to Dunsinane, and it came hungry and
angry. With Treebeard!

Excellent crossover with Macbeth; and wonderful characterisation of the
old Ent. The remembered encounter of boy and Ent, with references to the
long-gone Merry and Pippin, was poignant and very believable.

Let's hope Treebeard is still out there in the Wood, having a good snooze.
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Title: Make It One For Paladin · Author: Marta · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 48
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-06-29 07:54:18 Score: 5
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A sad, sobering look at the life of Robin Smallburrow, the hobbit who
supported Lotho, and then Saruman's, takeover of the Shire.

What's particularly noteworthy (aside from the excellent use of song) is
the characterisation of Robin as a collaborator - he is not evil or
monstrous, just caught up in a sinister force that he was too weak to
flee or resist. He regrets what he did, when he's not blaming others for
it. The admiration of others for the brave hobbits who did resist, some
of whom Robin stood by and watched die without protest, only exacerbates
his guilt.

A well-written vignette on a character that I doubt has seen much use in
fanfiction except in a minor role.
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Title: The Shield-maid's Dance of Death · Author: Marta · Times: The
Great Years: Poetry · ID: 694
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-06-29 08:14:37 Score: 6
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I don't know much about poetry, lays, battle-rhymes, etc., but this
piece really sounds like a rousing Rohirric war-chant to me. There's a
fire and passion in it, even on the brink of death, or maybe because
Eowyn stands on that very brink of death. Tolkien mentions that she
laughed, so I think she did feel a rush of adrenalin, of sudden nervy
courage to sustain her and take her suddenly beyond all fear when she
needed most to be strong. I also see an appealing sense of purpose, of
destiny in the song; Eowyn knows she is challenging a deathless demon to
perform this dance of death.

A very stirring Tolkien poem with a compelling rhythm. My only quibble
is that I wish the print were darker and larger on the page where you've
archived the song.


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Title: 17 Cunning Corsairs · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 244
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-29 09:33:50 Score: 3
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Bravo! I like to think that Lothiriel was a girl with a lively
imagination. (Reminds me of the maid in 'Beau Sabreur' who was always
sighing 'Sheiks'! and was eventually carried off by one, only he turned
out to be a solid American citizen in disguise.)
Was the Queen of the Corsairs pleased with her King of Rohan, or did she
always wish he'd been a hairy pirate?
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Title: Web of Friendship · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 932
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-06-29 09:36:05 Score: 3
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That's really sweet. I love the idea of little Elanor showing the other
maidens what to do. It must be hard to get an artistic result by this
whipcord method, until you're really good at it!
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Title: Legend · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 933
Reviewer: Raihon · 2006-07-11 16:02:43 Score: 3
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Tightly written yet very expressive; an interesting reflection on the
differences between "then" and "now" in Eowyn's life. Though it is very
short, it really piles on a lot of layers in a way that works very well.
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Title: Red River · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 82
Reviewer: Raihon · 2006-07-11 16:16:19 Score: 4
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This is a gem of a short story with rich characterizations, tight
writing, and an interesting point. It's remarkable to be able to reveal
so much about the politics of Gondor, and to give a whole outsider
perspective on the events on the Pelennor, in so few words. I wonder why
it's in first person, though, since the author doesn't really use
Aragorn's inner voice to let us in on what he's thinking, except that
the Haradrim is so young. I really want to know what Aragorn is thinking
as he's being told this story!
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Title: Last Rites · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Drama · ID: 80
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-13 00:45:12 Score: 7
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An intriguing setting, in time and place; it makes for a very intense
mood and helps to underscore the poignancy of the moment. The characters
and their relationships are as ever extremely well drawn, no matter if
they be canon or original characters; the dialogues are superb.

You deftly weave allusions and well-established facts from your other
stories (and others from the "Unabeauverse") into this one, so it
becomes even more layered, although you give enough information so it
could stand alone.

I particularly like how you describe Andrahar's mood and its
consequences for himself and others in the course of the narrative. It
is intriguing that in his grief, he should so firmly believe in the
Valar or the Sacred Fire when most of the time, he seems to be of such a
practical bent.

I believe my favourite parts were Andrahar's talk with Pippin and
Imrahil in the last chapter. I was continually blinking back tears. And
at the lines ["Yes. He was my lad."] and ["I should have liked to have
seen his sons."], they were falling in earnest.
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Title: Rest and Recreation · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 700
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-13 00:47:33 Score: 3
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Nice gapfiller, with good characterisations. Vivid description of the
fight. The humour of Boromir's (mis-)perceptions is used to great
effect. Wonderfully apt, ironic title.
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Title: Man of the North · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 684
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-13 00:48:38 Score: 3
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I like how Thengel thinks about the parallels between him and this
stranger, and how he has the heart and graciousness to give, too, what
he received in his turn. The comparisons and contrast are woven subtly
in to the narrative, without feeling forced.
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Title: Aglarond · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Dwarves: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 68
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-13 00:49:17 Score: 2
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I like how you used the vocabulary of poetry to describe another thing
of beauty: something done with artistry and love.
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Title: The Last Yule in Halabor · Author: Soledad · Races: Men: Vignette
· ID: 166
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-13 00:50:51 Score: 6
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Lovely detailed vignettes, each one full of life and depth and feeling.
I love how different they all are, and how exactly you describe the life
and work of those people. I'm impressed by the amount of research you
must have made, and which you so deftly wove into the story.

I admit I became sadder and sadder as the tales went on - just when I
got to know the people and began to care for quite a few of them, it
ended with those short sentences telling of death and grief and loss for
most of them. Perhaps it made the reality of the moments you described
all the more poignant and meaningful.

And I really appreciated that you didn't pull your punches when it came
to showing the bad moments of a life, the evil, petty, uncaring people;
as well as good moments and generous, affectionate, loving people.
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Title: Sixteen Singing Eagles · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 678
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-13 00:52:42 Score: 2
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You give each of the Eagles a distinct personality, yet despite their
ability to speak they always keep the typical behaviour and mannerisms
of birds of prey. Good use of humour.
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Title: Revenge is a dish best served cold · Author: Lialathuveril ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 297
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-13 08:31:48 Score: 4
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I really laughed out loud at this, especially about Eomer finding the
sea creature in his bath, and about Imrahil not eating the octopus
himself. I always thought this octopus-in-its-own-ink was a disgusting
dish, but it's just the sort of thing that Dol Amroth, which must be in
a more or less Mediterranean latitude, would go for. I wonder if it was
served at Eomer and Lothiriel's wedding feast? And if so, who ate it?
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Title: Fellowship of the Conkers · Author: Llinos · Genres: Humor · ID: 880
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-13 08:32:33 Score: 4
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A hilarious idea. The thought of Boromir and Aragorn solemnly facing up
to each other with conkers is absolutely delicious. Also the way the
hobbits use this humble game to cut Boromir down to size.

Only criticism - it goes on rather too long. Once the joke's been made,
it doesn't gain all that much by repetition.

Sadly, conkers doesn't seem to be much played in our part of the world
any more. The Health and Safety executive, that enemy of everything that
makes life worth living, has put the freezers on it.
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Title: Sums, Showers, and Scones · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 890
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-14 13:55:15 Score: 3
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This was a pretty little vignette. Each character took on his assigned
role very well - Frodo always patient, Sam class-conscious and
weather-wise, Merry jolly and practical, Pippin enthusiastic and
mercurial - but showed us no more than their caricaturistic selves.
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Title: A Taste of Diplomacy · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 939
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-14 14:09:45 Score: 2
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The author accomplishes a very insightful balancing act in this story,
portraying Denethor on the cusp between boy- and manhood and showing both.
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Title: Midwinter Rites · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 868
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-14 14:13:33 Score: 3
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This is a lovely story, but ultimately disapointing, I'm sorry to say.
In each instance of remembrance, Tanaqui invents wonderfully unique and
appropriate rituals and adds a terrific note of Aragorn's practice of
them, but in the last resorts to fun but cliche activites that speak
more to snow than winter and the coming of a new year.
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Title: Swan Dance · Author: Rhapsody · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 797
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-14 14:18:56 Score: 3
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The detached voice of the narrator creates a truly compelling work,
here. I found it both intriguing and frightening that he would
contemplate the grace of his motions, the sound of his sword, that his
victim is sliced or carved not simply killed, and that on his sword the
blood of the dead is mingling as he fought.
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Title: Man of Gondor · Author: LittleHobbitGal · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 682
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-14 14:38:52 Score: 3
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These are very interesting images - the rows upon rows of sleeping
souls, arranged so that those one knows are near, and Boromir still so
attached to life and to his brother that he cannot rest. But the kicker
is the ending - Mandos is so perfectly aloof and yet comforting, and
then he gives exactly the comfort that is needed. Very nice.
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Title: A Hallowed Place of Both Peoples · Author: Imhiriel · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 944
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-14 14:41:22 Score: 3

I always appreciate a drabble that sounds unrushed, not crammed into
form, and this is a lovely example. The language is formal, and
economical, but full, and brings this wonderfully regal character to life.
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Title: A Letter Home · Author: Frodo Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) ·
Times: The Great Years: Gondor · ID: 978
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-14 14:44:14 Score: 1

I found this much too long and self-conscious.
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Title: Ring Thoughts · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years · ID: 190
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-14 17:41:44 Score: 1

This was an interesting idea, but written too informally for me.
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Title: The Consequences of Curiosity · Author: A L Milton · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 153
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-15 11:18:56 Score: 4

Oh, how I laughed out loud at this. Poor Aragorn, trying to be a good
friend without meaning to pry; Faramir, practically dying to gloat over
the delights of married life. I dont suppose Aragorn will look at many
things in the same way again. The Lady Corsair and the Captured
Emissary, indeed! I dont think I could look Faramir and Eowyn in the
eye again, either. Well done!
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Title: Evenstar · Author: Mar'isu · Times: The Great Years · ID: 856
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-15 21:08:17 Score: 4

I found this a bit confusing, but then Elves have never been my forte. I
was intrigued by the premise, what a great subject, and interested in
the connection between Elros and Aragorn but confused by Arwen's bravado
in the face of death: "For we will all die, in time. Long or short, our
lives end." It was my understanding that she needn't die, actually, and
that most of her kin don't.
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Title: The Stone's Lament · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 53
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-15 21:17:42 Score: 5

This is a wonderful story - I particularly like those works that tease
open a little crack in the tale for us all to take a better look at and
this is a great example. The writer really catches Gimli's voice - not
the slightly clownish voice on film but the noble tones of the text,
with a couple of particularly notable examples - "light as leather" and
"I was silver ..." Only one moment clanked where it should have rung
"His words turned my world upside down." This is a pivotal moment,
depicted too jargonistically to my reading. Everything else was perfect.
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Title: Strength of a River · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 513
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-16 10:41:53 Score: 5

A wistful tale, full of longing and nostalgia. I love the imagery of the
Rangers of Ithilien, taking their wary leisure by the river, recalling
the grace and beauty of Ithilien of days past. They speak of happy
memories of their own youth, or stories told to them as children, and
recent moments of fleeting enjoyment in the White City; but they do not
speak of the Shadow, and how they have pledged their lives in the
defense of their land Faramirs bittersweet memory of childhood
conversation with his mother and brother is a lovely element, reminding
us of she who was the source of Faramirs quiet strength.
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Title: Threshold · Author: Mechtild · Genres: Romance: Incomplete · ID: 823
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-16 10:50:57 Score: 10

More, so much more, than a lush romance, this rich and satisfying tale
is full of color and scent, sight and sound, exquisite descriptions and
warm, unexpected characterizations.

Your descriptions of Frodo and Rosamundas amorous encounters are rich
and languourous. This is erotica at its very finest: full of tenderness
and passion, vividly idealized yet also honest and realistic. Well done!

It probably would not surprise you to find that my very favorite chapter
was actually The Hay-Cut. I have long wanted to write a story around
hay-cutting time; the luscious scent of new-mown hay; sunkissed,
muscular bodies, gleaming with sweat, all in rhythm; but what you have
here is more lively and vivid than anything I could have done. This
gorgeous description made me stop and gasp: [Step and swing, step and
swing, they advanced, keeping a steady rhythm, muscle sliding under
summer shirting. They moved across a field like a line of country
dancers, but their partner was the grass. It bent before their blades
and fell with a sigh like lasses. And lasses watched. And sighed, too.].
Thank you so much for writing a scene thats simmered and shimmered in
my imagination for so long!

Lastly, thank you for such an original and ingenious characterization of
Bilbo. You really made us feel his wistful envy of Frodo, his
recollections of his youth when he, too, had 'a way with the lasses',
and pangs of regret as he realizes that Frodo is now grown. Bilbos
recollection of giving Frodo his evening massage, and the sudden
realization that he would no longer have that pleasure, brought tears to
my eyes.
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Title: The Falcon and the Star · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: The
Great Years: Gondor · ID: 57
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-16 10:52:47 Score: 10

On the very day that I had finally voiced out loud my fears that our
fandom was in decline, in terms of story quality, originality, and
attention to detail, I discovered this tale; and now my faith in the
fandom, its incredibly gifted and generous writers, has been restored.

The Falcon and the Star is a perfect example of a gap-filler: youve
taken a scene that Professor Tolkien chose to dismiss in few words, and
brought it to life with both extraordinary tenderness and vivid detail.
I could smell the reek, the acrid mist, of that dark land where Faramir
wandered alone. The imagery of Faramirs being continually attacked by
demons out of legend and finally being tempted by his greatest desire is
extraordinary.

The familiar quotations youve used to open each chapter are very well
chosen; I couldnt help imagining a vision of Faramir, being borne up
as on wings of eagles, by Aragorn's tireless loving care for a man he
had not yet met, but recognized instinctively and immediately by faith.

Thank you for all the care and love youve lavished on this tale. Im so
glad that you did not ever lose faith in it; and Im very grateful that
the fruits of your vision appeared as a blessing to me just at the
moment when I most needed it.
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Title: Last Rites · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Drama · ID: 80
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-16 19:21:05 Score: 3

This is a very interesting and thoughtful exploration of an event - in
this case Boromir's death - the events and feelings that lead up to it,
and the inevitable reexamination of those things after. Very well and
thoughtfully played out.
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Title: Fellowship of the Conkers · Author: Llinos · Genres: Humor · ID: 880
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-16 19:24:37 Score: 3

This is a wonderful exploration of the growing group dynamic developing
in the Companions. Each character is clearly drawn, and seemingly with
little or no effort. I do get tired of seeing Boromir the butt of the
jokes all the time, however.
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Title: The Hobbit and the Man: "All That Is Gold Does Not Glitter" ·
Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 351
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-07-16 19:33:42 Score: 3

This was an intriguing little vignette. I enjoyed, in retrospect, both
the foreshadowing of Bilbo's later encounter with Aragorn as related in
"The Fellowship ... " and his apparent rejection of that idea. When it
was over, however, I wanted more.
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Title: The Healer and the Warrior · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 140
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-16 21:06:41 Score: 7

There are so many feisty-Lothiriel-meets- masterful-Eomer stories out
there! What makes this one different from the rest is the depth of
maturity youve given Lothiriel. No flighty, spoiled marriage-fodder
princess, your Lothiriel, but an experienced and insightful healer. She
thinks shes quite used to dealing with mens bodies in a professional
and dispassionate manner, until one particularly splendid Rohir falls
asleep in her bathtub. I love the way you showed her becoming
increasingly rattled as she continued to, ah, examine him as he slept.
Hubba hubba! Seriously, though, the quicksilver change in their moods,
from lighthearted flirtation to a sharing their views of war and its
effects, was quite moving. Its quite understandable that they ended up
in each others arms, even for a moment; and quite a pity that they ever
had to move.

I know that youve written more in this series; its been recommended
very enthusiastically but I havent had time to read it yet. I will most
definitely make the time!
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Title: The Oathbreakers · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 42
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-17 02:37:19 Score: 8

What an extraordinary image  the oathbreakers, the [faithless dead]
watching silently as the flag of the sovereign whom they had betrayed
and abandoned is finally raised. Though the man for whom they waited,
foresworn, is long deceased, his heir and Isildurs finally came with
strength of will to call them forth and demand their fealty and service.

One, though, bears particular guilt for his sin of despair; his king
would grant him mercy, concealing the humiliation of his pity, but
Boromir would not have it so; lonely, anguished, he stands silently with
his fellow oathbreakers. too heartbroken to risk a special farewell, he
drifts away with the others. Alas for Boromir! That his own sense of
guilt caused him to number himself among the faithless. And poor
Aragorn, noticing his presence too late to offer forgiveness and
reconciliation.

What a fabulously intense depiction of a brief, frequently-overlooked
scene. Youve given the scene itself such desperate, fleeting life; your
addition of Boromir adds such poignant, emotional intensity.
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Title: Was It For This? · Author: aervir · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 204
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-17 02:41:09 Score: 4

What an extraordinarily cool and lovely elegy, with a well-concealed
sharp edge. All the pain and despair over the loss of the twin heroes,
Boromir and Théodred, is perfectly contained. No graphic description of
blood, battle, and fear, no romantic salute to patriotism or heroism,
just the carefully restrained bitterness of the question.
Thought-provoking and timeless; perfectly appropriate for the Late
Fourth Age as well as the Third.
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Title: Both Beholden · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 180
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-17 04:16:30 Score: 3

An interesting and unique what if story in which Boromir meets Halabarad
on his way to Rivendell and tries to gain some answers from the
suspicious ranger.The author conveys the mutual unease of the two men
well as well as their mutual fear of the Wraiths.A vivid portrayal of
the sounds and scents of a dark night in the woods.
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Title: Hidden Wonders · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 420
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-17 04:20:08 Score: 3

A sweet little glimpse of Faramir and Eowyn's life together.I love the
way that Eowyn shows an interest in Faramir's books and the way he
surprises her with his ranger stealth.This was a vivid image conveyed in
a few words.
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Title: Gondor Needs No King · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 207
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-17 04:22:22 Score: 2

A very chilling ficlet exploring what if Boromir had brought daddy the
ring and most likely disposed of Aragorn in so doing.This truly made my
flesh creep !
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Title: Music Lessons · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 55
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-17 04:30:04 Score: 4

A very sweet and sharming ficlet about Faramir and Gandalf.One often
wonders what their early encounters would have been like and this
provides a valid answer to the question. I like the way that Faramir is
eager to be musical and imitate the birds and so proud and loyal to his
elder brother.I like the image of Boromir charming birds too,as it is
not what one usually thinks about Boromir.
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Title: Castle · Author: Timmy2222 · Races: Men: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 256
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-17 05:03:56 Score: 10

This story has become a classic of fanfiction and is considered maybe
the ultimate Aragorn angst story,as the poor king suffersa great deal
when he is kidnaaped by a former mistress of Denethor's and her son, who
she is aiming to replace Aragorn as ruler with,once he and Faramir are
dispposed of.

Poor Aragorn is beaten, chained in a dungeon and made to work in the
mines, his only friend a delightful eight year old boy called Vhiori,
one of the most endearing original characters, I have ever encountered,
who together with the mysterious healer, Lomac,aid our hero.Lomac seems
able to ultilise athelas which makes the reader wonder just exactly who
he might be.

Faramir and Eomer also play quite a large part in this story as both
face danger and possible death in their bid to find Aragorn.

I especially enjoyed the scene where awounded and exhausted Aragorn
insists on tending Eomer's wounds himself and refuses to leave him.Other
memorable scenes were Vlhori's growiung friendship with Aragorn which
progresses from fear to affection and the little boy's desparate efforts
to help his badly injured friend.

This is a gripping and moving story,all the more remarkable as English
is not the writers first language and I believe this was her first fanfic.
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Title: First Night · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: War of the
Ring · ID: 400
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 07:30:16 Score: 5

Interesting story. The contrast between the sort of life Pippin was used
to, and the reality of his first night in Minas Tirith, is very well
written here. I liked the attention paid to the lack of soft, round,
cozy things in Pippin's surroundings; Minas Tirith is indeed as unused
to hobbits as he is unused to the White City. And Pippin's observation
that Merry is his cheerful heart is wonderful.

We also see Pippin growing and stretching his mind and adaptive powers;
the effect that his journey has had on him.

Pippin has always been my favorite hobbit, and this story does well by him.
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Title: Antiphon to Light · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 155
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 07:31:57 Score: 6

A moving short story focussing on Gimli's reaction to Galadriel, and the
feelings she stirs within him, and his recognition of change.

Dwarves seem to me to be the most difficult humanoid race in
Middle-earth to get to know, but this story elucidates Gimli's mind
honestly and credibly. He is not a coarse or greedy being caring only
for gold or delving, but a complex individual, caught in the forces of
tremendous change as are all the members of the Fellowship. Gimli's
simultaneous recognition of the changes in himself, and resistance,
seems quite real.

The dialogue between Gimli and Pippin is well-done.

My one quibble is Gimli's use of the word [internalise], which seems a
bit too modern for a Tolkien fanfic story set in Middle-earth.

This sentence is particularly beautiful:
[She knew his kind, the determined naugrim that made the stones sing]


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Title: The White Tree · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 94
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 07:44:01 Score: 10

This story enlarges upon Aragorn's discovery of the new White Tree.
Here, Aragorn is feeling rather lost and lonely after his coronation,
overwhelmed by the change in his life, as he transitions from wanderer
and warrior to King. Faramir is also learning his new role as Steward,
but is unsure of how to deal with a King returned out of legend. The
White Tree serves as a catalyst to bring them closer together.

The writer spins a warm, sympathetic tale of two lonely men coping with
tremendous change in both their lives and the world they knew. Aragorn's
physical isolation is well described, as is his discomfort in dealing
with a life of luxury.

Canon purists may find fault with the characterization of Faramir, who
appears somewhat more vulnerable and nervous of authority than Tolkien
depicted him. The writer does have an explanation, though it may or may
not satisfy all readers. The characterizations work within the context
of the story, and attention is paid to Faramir's visionary abilities.

Best of all is the scene that Tolkien did not, but should have, written
- Faramir's passionate reaction to the removal of the old, dead Tree,
before he knows of the finding of its young and healthy successor.
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Title: Those Who Challenge the Dead · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 858
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 07:46:43 Score: 3

A very original subject for a drabble! Alas, poor Earnur, you wrote him
well - not exactly a man of subtle mind or even common sense. (what was
he - crazy?!)

The drabble captures Earnur's pride (not to mention impatience), which,
as we all know, is just begging for a big fall.
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Title: The Long Road Home · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 743
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 07:47:52 Score: 4

An engrossing BoromirLives! AU tale, taking its time and taking us on a
dramatic, action-filled journey from Rauros to Gondor and back to
Eriador where it all began.

Of course, my favorite part was Boromir's adoption of the young dog he
finds.

Minor quibble in that I didn't find Boromir's hesitation to show himself
to Denethor as the 26th Steward rants on the pyre quite as convincing as
it could have been.

Boromir is very credible in the role of orc-slaying vigilante that he
embraces in his quest for penance.
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Title: The Recall · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor · ID: 738
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 07:53:17 Score: 6

An intriguing, skillfully written political parable with lessons for our
own and all ages.

The story, taking place some 25 years after ROTK ends, concerns the
efforts of Aragorn, Faramir, and Imrahil to mitigate unreasonably high
tariffs against the Haradrim.

Attention is paid to the dangers of self-importance and desire for
revenge at the expense of the right of other lands to survive above the
subsistence level. Faramir's wonderful speech to Frodo about Gondor not
being a mistress of even williing slaves comes well into play here.

The story might suffer if the reader does not first read Altariel's 'Red
River', to which this is the sequel. There are also many references to
earlier stories by the author.

Nice to see that Imrahil still knows how to make a dramatic entrance!


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Title: The Usurper · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 834
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 07:56:07 Score: 3

Ouch! Poor Ornendil, not to mention the people of Osgiliath. You've
captured Castamir's haughtiness and utter lack of mercy to the fallen
very well. Excellent work of turning a thrilling, complex story, into a
haunting drabble.
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Title: The Road Not Taken · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 104
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 08:00:40 Score: 6

J.R.R. Tolkien, meet Robert Frost. Well, sort of. Frost's lovely lines
about taking the road less travelled by, and that choice making all the
difference, weaves seamlessly into this vignette.

Boromir's final leaving of the lands he knows, as he faces the road that
will take him from Rohan and the young Rider who has escorted him there,
is both splendid and sad. The use of the swan, ancestral sigil of
Boromir's mother's line, as herald and harbinger, is a lovely touch.
Indeed, the connection between the trumpeter swan, Boromir's own
horn-call and his eventual fate, is almost magical, the writer's use of
the Old English word for swan is just perfect.

Good and evocative descriptions heighten the power of this quiet but
significant moment in the life of Denethor's heir.
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Title: Beleg and Túrin · Author: Raihon · Genres: Romance · ID: 755
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 10:00:21 Score: 4

Yikes, poor Beleg. All things considered, he would have done far better
off befriending someone less doomed and less self-absorbed.

I am generally not a fan of Tolkien slash stories, but this one reads
well, is not overly graphic, and conveys Beleg's tragedy with a mixture
of fire and grace. The ending is powerful; and sad, and very typical Turin.

Good use of Nellas, too.
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Title: A Hallowed Place of Both Peoples · Author: Imhiriel · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 944
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 10:19:34 Score: 3

A worthy spotlight on the lesser aftermath of a Great Moment in Gondor
History. Good characterisation of Eorl, one can sense his strength,
pride, and generosity of spirit through the author's well-chosen words.
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Title: Shadow of Himself · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 853
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 10:31:20 Score: 4

One of the best stories of this type. I love the twist that the author
employs, which I don't remember seeing in other stories with the same
premise.

The female original character is well and credibly written.

A haunting story, with no easy solutions to a discovery that perhaps it
would have had been better not to make.

Good characterisations all around, particularly Legolas and Gimli.
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Title: Earth, Water, Fire and Air · Author: Fileg · Genres: Drama:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Series · ID: 469
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 10:45:37 Score: 5

Don't miss this one!

A marvelous collection of four vignettes, each incarnating a different
character as one of the Aces of the four Tarot suits - Eowyn for
Shields, Arwen for Cups, Aragorn for Swords, and Faramir for Wands (Staffs).

Arwen's piece and Faramir's are particularly striking, though all the
vignettes are good. Arwen has an interesting and very appropriate twist
on the Grail theme; and Faramir's chapter is haunting and poignant, with
a particularly lovely last line.

An unusual and original set of thematically linked vignettes, simply but
beautifully written. They're a joy to read, and I can't recommend the
four pieces highly enough.
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Title: Letters in the sand · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Feanorians
· ID: 176
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 10:51:50 Score: 3

Though I do not understand the differences in, or the subtleties of,
Tolkien's writing systems for Middle-earth, this is an elegant vignette
that expresses Maglor's turmoil in vivid fashion.

One slight quibble - toward the end, I could not tell whether Maglor
pinpointed the Silmaril in the sky or the sea.
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Title: History Becomes Legend · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men:
Steward's Sons Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 737
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 10:53:36 Score: 4

Boromir was just the sort of man to inspire legends, wasn't he! And the
similarity between him and the Rohirrim was noted by Tolkien (through
Eomer, I think), so this drabble works perfectly, as some anonymous
Riders honor the man they viewed as a brother warrior and possibly a
soulmate. The difficulty of communication between the Rohir boy and
Faramir gives way to the universal power of song, a beautiful and
well-expressed idea.

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Title: Alas, for the dying of the trees · Author: Gandalfs apprentice ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 788
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 10:55:05 Score: 2

Cute and funny, in a grumpy dwarvish way. Good and believable stories
about Gimli are few and far between, but this is one of them. Nicely done.
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Hey guys,

I have posted over at the [mefa-discussions] group a series of
observations about the first half of this year's nomination form. I am
looking for comments about where the nomination form could be improved.

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Hey guys,

I have just moved two incomplete stories.

First, Nilmandra's "History Lessons: The Third Age" had been incorrectly
categorized with completed stories. I apologize for the mistake; it has
now been moved from "Elves: General" to "Multi-Age: Incomplete".

Also, Timmy2222's "Untrodden Paths" is now complete. It has been moved
from "Men: Incomplete" to "Men: Featuring Aragorn".

I know that I have several MEFA emails that need to be answered. And I
am working my way through them; unfortunately several came in at once so
it will take me time. I hope to get them all answered by tonight but
that depends on how much time I can make for email this afternoon.

If you have emailed me and I have not answered, I am not ignoring you.
Thank you for your patience.

Marta

Title: The Household Accounts · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 50
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 09:04:53
A cleverly written, subtly haunting vignette where Eowyn faces the
influence of her husband's family's past on their new lives. Unlike some
more heavy-handed stories, the influence comes not in the form of
nightmares, but in the account books kept by the housekeeper of the
Steward's residence in Minas Tirith. Eowyn feels the fabric worn bought
for various garments made for Faramir's father, mother and brother; a
unique way of furthering her knowledge of those who are gone forever.

The writer is obviously quite knowledgeable about textiles and ancient
weaving techniques, the vocabulary used in the story, while intelligible
to readers, adds to the feel of authenticity.

I liked Eowyn's implied resolution to turn the scraps of the material
used to make Finduilas' gown into a dress for a baby girl of her own - a
nifty way of tying together Faramir's lost mother with the daughter
Eowyn hopes to give Faramir. And the detail of Finduilas' material being
a [sea-green] is appropriate and moving.


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Title: The Tide · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 77
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 09:15:47
Yee-HAH! We don't see Angry Imrahil often enough; and the Valar Know, he
has cause at this point. Though Imrahil's confrontation with Denethor
here, sadly, seems like that of the Irresistible Force colliding with
the Immovable Object; with Imrahil storming in like an angry wave, and
Denethor as obdurate as a rocky seaside promontory.

The author delivers a fine portrayal of Imrahil's frustration at this
shattering moment in his and Denethor's lives. The piece is all the more
effective in that Imrahil doesn't see the emotions behind Denethor's
mask; we can guess that Imrahil's righteous anger on his apparently
mortally wounded nephew's behalf is salting some very raw wounds in the
Steward's already stressed mind.


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Title: The Oathbreakers · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 42
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 09:42:31
Scary good. Aragorn's regret for the loss of Boromir is obvious, and
infuses this other-worldly drabble with human warmth.

The ending is sad but rather beautiful.

My only quibble, and it is a minor one, is that I would have also liked
to see a somewhat longer version of this story. But then one wouldn't
have had this one searing moment of recognition and, for a second time,
loss.
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Title: Benison · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 67
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 09:55:57
A rather bewitching vignette of the newly married Eowyn encountering her
husband's long-dead mother; not via an actual ghost, but through the
gift of Finduilas' sewing basket and daybook. Eowyn is able to meet
Finduilas, through the memories stored in the book.

The reference to Eowyn and Faramir's both losing their mothers at a
young age is quite apt, and lends texture to the story. The sense of
Finduilas' life and love for her family, lingers gracefully through the
writer's evocative prose.
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Title: A Lasting Peace · Author: SueB · Genres: Drama · ID: 711
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 11:42:53
[A Lasting Peace] is an ambitious story of post-Ring War politics,
prejudice, war, and the peace that its hero nearly sacrifices his life
to assure.

It was a bit difficult to believe that Faramir would achieve such such
near-mystical calmness while being tortured. Although he is an
intelligent, thoughtful man, I have never thought he was saintly.

The characterisation of Legolas is good. Most of the villains - orcs and
torturers - inspire the proper fear and loathing.

The most important original character, Henvain, is actually more
convincing than Faramir, an unassuming 'grunt' who rises to the occasion
with heroic determination.

The scenes where the OC's discuss Gondor-Harad relations are quite
convincing, and a good way to show, rather than tell, the difficulties
in overcoming pre-conceived attitudes.

The last chapter is possibly the best, and most affecting, in the entire
story.
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Title: Black Hour · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years: Gondor · ID: 92
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 14:31:14
There is something quite touching and compelling about this author\'s
version of Faramir. He has his father\'s sharp mind and his political
cunning, but enough humility to know when he is beat. The political
aspects like how he viewed Pelendur's argument were also very well
thought-through and technically it was a well-written piece. It makes me
want to read more of what this author wrote.
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Title: Relief · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama: Pre-Fellowship · ID: 518
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 14:31:28
This short little piece is just so chock-full of surprises. At the
beginning I thought that it would be a simple portrayal of Boromir
loves: paint a bad situation for Boromir, and have Faramir rescue him.
I've read my share of those stories, and I usually like them. But it's
the last scene that really makes this one stand out for me: the relief
that Denethor's use of the palantir buys for Boromir and by extension
all Gondor, is not a relief for those of us who knows what will come of
this increased use of the palantir. It lends a bittersweet tone to the
entire piece that makes this story truly original. Good job!
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Title: The gift · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later Ages ·
ID: 807
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 14:35:20
I've read a lot of stories about the pre-WOTR relationship of Aragorn
and Legolas, but this was certainly a unique explanation of that
relationship. Legolas was well-drawn here, and I especially like
Gilraen's wisdom.
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Title: In the Woods · Author: Werecat · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 119
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 14:40:43
What an original story! I like the idea that Radagast might still be
hanging around, and painting it through the eyes of a culture skeptical
of fantasy made it work even better for me.
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Title: The Secret of Dog Lake · Author: Karenator · Races: Elves · ID: 819
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 14:41:03
I really like this piece, both the frame story and the tale that Haldir
weaves. Everyone's reactions, especially Elrond's at certain points,
were hysterical, and Elladan and Elrohir were very believable for
elflings of their age. Though I wondered - is the frame story based on
something from the Silm? It seemed vaguely familiar, but I couldn't
place it.
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Title: The question of being fair · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 796
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-18 14:51:28
This is an amusing story and you painted a lovely picture. This is also
a clever idea of using one of the often debated points in your story.
Tolkien's often vague choices of words may confuse or amaze the readers
(I remember my own struggle to remember all those difficult names for
example), but you used the question of Celegorm's hair color in a very
playful and well-written way. Very well done!
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Title: Red River · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 82
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:04:09
This was definitely a potent read, with a lot to speak to our modern
age. Yet I think it would have to be a concern for Gondor in the Fourth
Age and is in a very true sense the "burden of victory". If the leading
Gondorians gave thought only to their own interest they would lose what
was pure in them, and like any post-war clean-up there would simply not
be enough resources to go around.

Beyond that, there were some old favourites in this piece. Aragorn and
Faramir playing a game of chess always gives me a warm and fuzzy
nostalgic feeling; it has played such a strong role in so many of your
pieces. Here it takes on a nice metaphorical twist, and you delightfully
give us an OC who trumps our canon heroes without forcing any of them
out-of-character. Brava.
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Title: The Consequences of Curiosity · Author: A L Milton · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 153
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:04:37
Well-written story. You handle the hint of eroticism well, and I can
very easily see Aragorns discomfort! Diligent steward, indeed. And the
particular roles mentioned, especially the last, seemed very
in-character for F&E.
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Title: First Impressions · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 806
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:11:02
What I like most about this is the descriptions, and how you've made me
both hate and love the Angle. I could see what Aragorn must have been
feeling very well. Well done.
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Title: Earth's Daughter · Author: Aramel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 170
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:13:01
I have not read "The Last Ship" so I have a vague feeling that I am
missing a lot of this piece's depth. So the fact that it moved me so
deeply should be high recommendation. It's a touching tale of the mortal
girl who was offered the chance to sail West but didn't. Aramel captures
the longing of mortals to meet Elves, and I see in her OC Silmarien
shades of Sam. More than that, the older Firiel has a wisdom about the
gift of Men that many of her peoples' kings would have done well to
learn. I'm not sure I am really meant to "enjoy" a piece this weighty,
but it certainly did affect me.
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Title: How Grima Lost His Eyebrows · Author: NeumeIndil · Times: Late
Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 800
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-18 15:13:31
I found this story utterly hilarious. Not only because you set up a
somewhat sleepy mood at the beginning, giving the readers a glimpse into
Grima's daydreaming and expectations, but also because it seemed to be
like a missing scene in the movie. The last line was priceless, and I
felt really sorry for Grima, but he should have knocked first. None the
less, I would have liked to see his face at that moment. Great job!
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Title: A Shirt for Legolas · Author: Lady Aranel · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 285
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:13:41
How sweet! I know that you based this on the weave of a movie prop, and
it's a very neat explanation of it. I really liked the sense of
character you've infused into a little sister for Legolas. I wouldn't
mind reading more about her one of these days.
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Title: Along the Morgai · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great Years:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 849
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:13:52
This drabble about breaks your heart. So many strong images - Sam in the
Shire 'battling dragons' before he even knew what they were, Sam's
battle with a real ally of Morgoth, Frodo smiling at the memory of Sam's
deeds. But what really gets me is the image of the Gaffer puzzling
through the letter and then its meaning hitting him, and Frodo's
fatalism throughout. You really packed a lot into this drabble, but it
works really well - powerful, not overburdened.
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Title: Aglarond · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Dwarves: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 68
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:14:02
Here, you have taken the essential character of dwarves and distilled it
into just one hundred words. They are not elves who craft pretty words,
but neither are they orcs who eschew all beauty. I found it touching
that Gimli did not try to carve Galadriel's likeness in stone but
settled for her name. That's a step toward the other, elven reality he
has been exposed to, but still is very dwarven. Nice job catching this
enigmatic culture.
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Title: Such an Hour · Author: SlightlyTookish · Times: The Great Years:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 237
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:14:20
Interesting perspective on the hobbits and the part they played in the
War of the Ring. You captured them nicely.
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Title: Remembrance · Author: Acacea · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 73
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:14:32
How wonderful! This story is so well-told. When I read "Legacy" this was
the one part that I had a hard time accepting: that Faramir and Boromir
could get away with something. Denethor seems all-seeing at times, and
even in his grief I don't think his sons could outmanoeuvre him on
something this important. But the fact that he might have known about it
and chosen to ignore it.

Again, the ending is what really won me over to this story. Without
giving something away to future readers, it is not at all what you would
expect. And that surprise just drives home the utter truth of the
author's characterization of Denethor. He is kindler and gentler but
loses none of his cunning nor of his complete control over himself --
even at this desperate pass. Well worth the read.
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Title: Do Not Think Me A Dream · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor
· ID: 40
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:14:50
There is something powerful in the melancholy of this piece. Many drama
stories can be so heavy that one cannot imagine anyone bearing up under
that kind of stress for any length of time. But Finduilas's ennui here
is palpable and just mild enough that it could wear on for years quite
easily, wearing her down with it. She looks on her children and envies
their nanny the time to give to them -- but then she does not take the
easy road of looking only at the external stresses that keep her away
from her children, but also examines her perceived internal failings.
That to me is at the heart of this honest and frank portrayal of
Finduilas. A well-written snapshot of an underexplored character.
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Title: The Dancing Master · Author: Flick · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 323
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:15:00
What a neat little gapfiller! Very sweet, but also very melancholy - as
it should be, after all that these two lost. I particularly liked how
you made Boromir out to be the better dancer. I hadn't thought he would,
but the way you portrayed him seemed very in-character.
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Title: The Lost · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 181
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:15:14
This story was great fun. Brand is an original character who has always
captured my imagination and here he is in full force. He is responsible
and diligent but also moody and more than a little unsure of himself
around all these great lords -- as you would expect of a teenaged
whoreson thrust into a world he had never imagined would accept him. But
what I really like is a tangential matter here: Faramir and Eowyn, why
Faramir loves her and the wisdom that we see in her. Even though Eowyn
only inhabits the shadows just beyond this piece, her presence is fully
felt. I think she and Brand would get along quite well one of these days.
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Title: Mine · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 66
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:15:28
I like what you've done with Nanny's longsuffering patience here. It all
seemed so natural, and quietly humorous.
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Title: The Princess and the Horse Lord · Author: Oshun · Genres:
Romance: Incomplete · ID: 425
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 11:06:41 Score: 3
Admin Edit Review
A sweet, deftly written Eomer/Lothiriel romance.

Good description of Faramir as a handsome man with a hint of Elven
beauty. And Imrahil had very intriguing memories of the relationship of
Denethor and Finduilas.

I'm unsure that Elladan's interest in Lothiriel is thoroughly
believable, but I loved the use of the song "After the Ball Is Over".

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Title: Wizardry · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 179
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 11:10:33
A fascinating peek into a day in the life of MIddle-earth's most dogged
and determined hunters. Unfortunately, the Grey Pilgrim and Isildur's
Heir are stymied by scrawny little Gollum - the irony is deftly
sketched, and attention is well-paid to Gandalf and Aragorn's shared
sense of humor.

The ficlet's beginning and ending with the same word is a very nice touch.
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Title: The Grey at the End of the World · Author: jodancingtree · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond: The Shire · ID: 288
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 11:20:34
Very few Tolkien fanfiction writers can hold my attention with such a
long and complex tale featuring almost all OC's. But this one does.

I was intrigued by the character of Canohando the redeemed Orc back in
the predecessor to this story, and this story, which tells of his
ultimate fate, does not disappoint. There is a great sense of poignancy
in the brutal passage of time and the loss of the things we loved in
LOTR - the fading of Elessar's kingdom, and finally the loss of the
Shire, though the hobbits survive - but it is realistic to expect that
they would not last forever, since this story takes place so long after
LOTR.

The tale of Logi and Haldar and Freiga is darkly, painfully brilliant -
I would suspect that the names were deliberately chosen to reflect Loki,
Baldur and Freya (or Frigga) in Norse myth.

And, as always, Radagast's appearance is welcome. His role in the story
is not to work a total miracle, but to save that which can be saved, and
help the hobbits find a place, however diminished, in a rougher and more
brutal world.
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Title: Home At Last · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 883
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 11:24:40
Excellent vignette in which Bilbo, returned from his adventure, finds
that in leaving the Shire, he may have gained wisdom, but he has lost a
certain reputation among his more sensible and hidebound friends and
relations. One can see Bilbo start to realize that nothing, even travel
and great deeds, come without a price; and that he will not ever be
treated quite the same way again by his peers. But there are
compensations, as Bilbo discovers...

Quietly effective. I especially liked the characterisation of young
Drogo, who may have had no Took in him, but reminded me very much of Frodo.
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Title: Unfolded · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Fixed-Length Ficlets
With Children · ID: 906
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 11:26:47
A perfect little snapshot of Faramir and Aragorn rejoicing in the
sunlight by the new White Tree, as seen through Bergil's eyes. The use
of the verb 'bloom' is particularly apt.

An excellent drabble that paints a complete picture in only a few words.
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Title: Trivial Matters · Author: Thundera Tiger · Genres: Humor: Gondor
· ID: 839
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 11:28:00
Amusing vignette! Faramir shows his sense of humor as well as his
cleverness; and gets the better not only of Legolas, but Aragorn too. I
loved it that Faramir also seems to get the last laugh.

Well written, with a dry wit appropriate to the story.
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Title: For a cause, a friend, a loved one · Author: Werecat · Genres:
Humor · ID: 120
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 13:33:02
A fascinating perspective on the tension building in Rohan, and then the
final decision to ride to Gondor's aid, from the point of view of
barnyard critters. I loved it that the horse, Thunderclap, was regarded
by the others as their protector - definitely appropriate for the
four-legged hierarchy in the Mark.
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Title: Of Stone and Fire · Author: Werecat · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 124
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 13:38:04
Outstandingly original, this drabble is short, powerful, and has
unexpected depth - just like Gimli. His quiet strength against Feanor's
bombast makes for a fascinating conflict.

And Feanor's rage is somehow very funny - after all this time in Mandos,
he's still the spoiled Noldor prince fixated on (among other things)
Galadriel's hair.

I would have liked to see a real face-to-face meeting between Gimli and
dear ol' Spirit-of-Fire, but considering how long Feanor's been really,
truly dead, and how it's uncertain where Gimli's soul will go after his
death, this is possibly the closest we'll get.

Well done.
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Title: To The King! · Author: Ithil-Valon · Times: Multi-Age: Incomplete
· ID: 848
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-17 13:39:36
An engrossing and well-plotted story. Well-paced also, with emotion,
romance, drama, and then a spurt of escalating action.

Good characterisation of Eomer. Some funny moments with Faramir - though
he is much softer than Tolkien's character, it is to be expected of the
movie version.


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Title: Legend · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 933
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 01:22:45
I like how you have changed Eowyn's priorities - from personal glory and
a touch of despair, to a fierce protectiveness of her family. I think
that really captures her growth, and I like what it says about her.
Beyond that, you have drawn a charming family tableau with lots of
interesting details. Good job with this little scenelet.
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Title: Necessity and Desire · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: The Great Years ·
ID: 173
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 01:44:10
This is a lovely story which fills in some gaps in the book and shows
several facets of Aragorn,from his grim determination to his desire to
please his beloved Arwen. I just love the image the author conveys of
the KIng in waiting in an ill fitting suit of armour.I also enjoy the
characterisation of Arwen.
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Title: The Oathbreakers · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 42
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:19:49
A chilling and thought provoking piece. I could just imagine Boromir's
spirit still wanting to join in the fight against Sauron.
Aragorn must have found it heartbreaking not to be able to speak some
word to his dead comrade.It is frightening just what power he has, but
we know he would never abuse it.
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Title: Imrahil's Daughter · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 183
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:28:11
This was a delightful story,a sequel to the Healer and The Warrior in
which Eomer, having no wish to marry yet, tries to fight his growing
attraction to Imrahil's daughter, but the harder he tries, the more he
is drawn towards Lothiriel.

Aragorn, who is very much a mentor to Eomer feels his young friend is
badly in need of a wife

Unlike its predecessor, this story is told mainly from Eomer's point of
view.There is a scene both hilarious and touching, I especoially
enjoyed,where he discusses the situation in Rohan with Aragorn,Faramir
and Imrahil, while they are all drinking hot tea.

Sparks fly whenever these two are together and attempts to apologise
only lead to increasingly complex and comprimising situations.

As well as being a delightful romance the story has two important
subplots, the shortage of food in Rohan and Aragorn's kindness towards
hiis friend and brother in arms,and the recuperation of the Rohirrim
wounded in the war.Lothiriel has been treating them and she is
determined that Eomer is going to pay his injured comrades a visit and
when lothriel is determined she is a force to be reckoned with.

A gem of a story,brimming with wonderful character moments.I defy anyone
to read this without laughing out loud as well as feeling for the
characters.
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Title: Ring Thoughts · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years · ID: 190
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:29:02
This is a most unusual story told from the point of view of the One
Ring. It studies all the members of the Fellowship in turn, looking to
see which of them is the most likely to be corrupted by its influence.It
is especially contemptous of such asAragorn who cannot be tempted and
Hobbits that it sees as of little worth.However, when it studies Boromir
and senses his desparation to save Gondor whatever the cost,the Ring
knows it has found its victim.
Amusing, enteraining and ulimately chilling,the writer makes the reader
believe in the Ring's mefistofilan personality.
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Title: Elfwine · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Fixed-Length Ficlet
· ID: 70
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 03:30:04
Ann, this is a really nice drabble. You cram so many cultural details
into the little bit of space we have (like the fact that Eomer wouldn't
leave the birthchamber, and that that was unusual, and the custom of
wetting the prince's head), but what I really like about this is what
you've done with Eomer's personality. It's too easy to make him a bit
mushy, but here he is so enthusiastic - in a different time I can
imagine him as a frat boy, very easily. And that raucous character is
right on. But even before that, he is sensitive and telling, which makes
for a very well-rounded personality.
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Title: Lord of Werewolves · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Parody · ID: 255
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:31:30
This is truly hilarious. I enjoyed it the first time I read it,but after
having read the original story it now seems funnier than ever.

Sauron is given the task of training a fearsome werewolf for Morgoth but
instead calls it a silly pet name and mollycoddles it.

Despite its fearsome size and form, the werewolf is like all other
puppies and given to leaving puddles on the floor.

Morgoth here is represented a fearsome dark lord while Sauron comes
across as somewhat of a lazy fop with a Vampire for a mistress, yet to
develop the fearsome persona which will terrify later generations.

There are some clever and amusing references to other characters and
stories included in this very funny story.
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Title: Roots and Branches · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 611
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:31:51
A charming glimpse of post war Minas Tirith as the Hobbits cluster round
the White tree, the symbol of hope and renewal,not only for Elendil's
line but for the whole of Gondor.

Frodo and Sam are curious about what happened to Denethor and ask Pippin
who was witness to the dreadful events of his last hours on Middle-earth.

Faramir overhears the conversation and is naturally distressed, fearing
that he too may be tainted like his father. In a stroke of sheer genius
by the author,Sam unwittingly starts to explain how a tree is more than
its roots, the best of branches may be blighted but that in the right
soil and under the right conditions a young tree will thrive and flourish.

These words could well apply to Faramir as well as to the tree, who can
now breath clean air free of the poison's of Mordor and bask in the
sunlight of Aragorn's reign.He is free of the blight that destoyed his
father.

Reassured, the young Steward goes to join his Hobbit friends.

This ficlet crams some profound ideas into a few words and is a true
treasure.
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Title: Respite · Author: Nesta · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 750
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:32:06
A charming little story about Faramir and Eowyn enjoying a private
moment in their marriage.The writer avoids the usual fanfiction cliches
by having Eowyn the more reserved and concerned about what people think
of the two.
I am never as convinced by Faramir and Eowyn as a couple as I am by
Aragorn and Arwen and Rosie and Sam, but this writer makes me feel
optomistic about their prospects together for the future.
My favourite moment in the story was when Faramir rescues a spider,which
I think captures the essence of this decent,merciful man. Eowyn is a
lucky woman indeed !
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Title: Summoned · Author: Agape4Gondor · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 840
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:32:37
THis is a haunting and moving story about what Faramir might feel if
summoned to Cormallen by the King.Everyone is rejoicing but Faramir is
haunted by the losses he has suffered and knows he will need time to
heal. A brighter future however is beckoning for the new Steward of
Gondor, now he has met Aragorn and Eowyn.
The writer beautifully evokes images of nature to fit with Faramir's
moods and showshis passionate love for Gondor and most especially
Ithilien where he will dwell with his bride.
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Title: Spring Rites · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 842
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:33:04
A delightful,evocative and atmospheric ficlet which makes me almost feel
I am witnessing this ritual together with Lothiriel.
The dance is lively an exhuberant with maybe a hint of hidden menace ,as
approriate to ancient rites,which no doubt in ancient days were linked
to fertility and even sacrifice.
Lothiriel feels this ambiguity, i believe and the ending shows that it
is indeed a fertily rite,she has just taken part in.
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Title: Whispers of the Dragon · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 916
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-18 03:33:54
This is a somewhat darker story than usual from this talented writer but
none the less enjoyable.It contains all the elements that make her
stories so delightful, lovable Hobbits and kindly Aragorn,but a darker
brooding presence pervades the story, that of the one Ring.
The author brilliantly shows how it gradually unsettles the fellowship
and works its evil magic upon poor Boromir.
The story was full of lovely touches such as the different reactions to
the statues.I wonder if any of them came that way again once Aragorn was
King ?If this were a book,I'd say it was unputdownable !
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Title: Gandalf returned · Author: Rabidsamfan · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 990
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 08:25:53
Isn't this lovely! Beautiful, elegant prose conveying both mood and action.

I love the notion of Gandalf's returned soul's awareness of his new body
as it grows mature and then old. And the end, with Narya's familiar
gleam, is excellent.
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Title: Pink Oliphaunts · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Post-Sauron's
Fall · ID: 49
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 08:33:12
Absolutely delightful vignette! A bubbly, happy story of a pleasant day
with angst-free Faramir savoring the joys of fatherhood. The notion of
little Elboron drawing a smiling pink Oliphaunt is inspired and
irresistible; a horror of the Ring War transformed into a child's chalk
drawing. And there's attention paid to Faramir's essential kindness and
capacity for compassion even for war-beasts, in his discussion of the
oliphaunts' fate.

Beregond's dialogue is spot-on; it's obvious that he's experienced at
child-rearing, and his fondness for his Prince's son is subtly but
expertly detailed.


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Title: The Oathbreakers · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 42
Reviewer: Nesta · 2006-07-18 08:33:12
I think this is most unfair, certainly in bookverse terms! Boromir
didn't break his oath to fight against Sauron, or any other oath. And
none of the wise characters in the book - Gandalf, Galadriel, Argorn,
Faramir (though admittedly the latter might be seen as prejudiced) has a
word to say against Boromir after his redeeming death.

If this is AU, it predicates a very different Boromir from the Boromir I
know. But then anything's possible in an AU.
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Title: Soldier's Luck · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 309
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 08:35:46
Well-written drabble that paints a credible, accurate picture of Faramir
as a soldier so capably prepared that his luck is almost assured. The
writer knows well this milieu of pre-technological arms and the man, and
the description of Faramir's care of his bow seems spot-on in its
integrity. Good nod to Faramir's skill as a strategy, and his attitude
towards his men - as much as is in his power, he tries to guard their
lives from needless waste, as well as assure their success in dangerous
missions. And all that comes across in a mere 100 words!
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Title: Last Defence of the City · Author: Branwyn · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 96
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:16:16
I like "happy-ever-after" AUs, but this is one I'd really like built
upon. What does Pippin (or whomever) do to get Denethor to change his
mind? It's certainly got my mind going. What I like most about this is
how you've kept Denethor stern, which I have a hard time imagine him
being in-character without. Not insane, but not cheery or light either.
All in all very well done.
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Title: With Bow and Blade · Author: Lady Aranel · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 282
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:16:29
Nice glimpse into the War of the Ring and how it might have manifested
in Mirkwood. This connection between Thranduil and Legolas is one that
deserves to be fleshed out, and your portrayal was convincing.
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Title: Lembas, Shmembas · Author: Rabidsamfan · Genres: Non-Fiction ·
ID: 850
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:16:46
This has some really interesting speculation. There were a few points
where what you're suggesting disagreed with what I had thought up over
the years, but what I love about this is it's all so canonical. Which is
much more fun than reading something where I agree on every point. It
leads me to explore new possibilities beyond what I personally had
considered. On the consistency, you might be interested in what
etymonline.com has to say about that word. Specifically ["a flat, round
loaf of bread."] is supposed to be its original meaning, from circa
1420. Tolkien as an etymologist would have known this.

Oh, and on how lembas affected men, are you aware of the note in the
Unfinished Tales passage dealing with Isildur's death? There's a
reference to each of the men with him carrying a pouch designed to hold
both lembas (or possibly a lembas-like bread) and miruvor. Something
like that. Anyway, given how men of the Last ALliance were fighting
side-by-side with elves, your Elf might have some firsthand or at least
anecdotal evidence of those men eating lembas. Food for thought. ;-)
(And no, no pun intended.)

Anyway - very nice essay. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Title: Of Herbs and Stewed Rabbit · Author: Altariel · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 91
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:16:55
Mmm, very nice. I don't think I've ever seen a drabble incorporate so
many non-canonical details, and still make sense, but this weaves them
in seamlessly. I imagine the author has spent a lot of time working out
Haradri culture, and it really shows here. But I think what I like most
is the subtlety Altariel infuses into the soldiers of Harad. They really
aren't that different from the Gondorian rangers, when it comes right
down to it.
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Title: Counterpoint, Interfolio - Scherzo · Author: Daffodil Bolger ·
Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest · ID: 617
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:17:08
I think what I love most about this is the way you have captured
Pippin's childish way of approaching a problem. It really fleshes out
Merry's statement in the Houses of Healing that hobbits can be at a loss
when faced with weighty things like this. This one-shot was well worth
the read.
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Title: Elves Do Skate · Author: Caporal · Genres: Humor · ID: 135
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:17:28
This is a neat little piece, with light and warmth and wonderfully
descriptive writing. I felt like I was there, and it was nice thinking
of the Feanorians having a light moment before so much dark came.
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Title: A Darkened Heart · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 774
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:17:39
Nice examination of just how the Ring might have affected Boromir.
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Title: Tolkien's Use of Expletives · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Non-Fiction · ID: 147
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:17:56
What a neat little resource! There are times when I want to come up with
something shocking or even funny, but other times when I just want a
little bit of mild swearing that own't jump out unduly at the reader.
This article gives me some of the Professor's own, and I know I'll be
using it in the future. Thanks for all the time you put into this.
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Title: Legacy · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 299
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:18:08
Ooh, very nice moment! Nice to see both of them remember Boromir so well.
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Title: Following Orders · Author: EdorasLass · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:18:29
Poor Faramir indeed. I had never thought about this side of thing? The
"just following orders" felt ever-so-slightly modern, but even with that
this piece was really well done. So tied to Tolkien's world, but with so
much to say to our own age, too.
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Title: Pride Before The Fall · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 742
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:19:35
I think what I like most about this story is the way that the violence
and the perverseness of Boromir's thoughts evolves throughout the story.
First he takes the Ring from Frodo, an action which is just one step
removed from self-defence: defence of his community. It's not excusable,
but it's certainly understandable. Killing his horse in his urge to get
home -- well, that's just an animal. On through the frightening of the
guards, the killing of the doorwarden, up to the very graphic murder of
his family? It was all so disturbing, but no one step seems that much
worse than anything else. That makes me wonder about Boromir's last act,
whether seizing the crown is the worst of all. That's what really got me
about this story, the fact that the plot seemed so natural. Thanks, Amanda!
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Title: The Recall · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Gondor · ID: 738
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:25:03
This is a rather interesting follow-up, and all of the categories are
really neatly drawn. The tie-in with Andrahar's backstory really filled
out Altariel's piece; I can see all of this happening very nicely, and
Imrahil's actions seemed a convincing way to achieve the desired result.
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Title: Heirlooms · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 72
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:25:17
This is really neat, Ann. Here you give us how women out of their native
cultures might perceive their sons' Rohirric heritage, but it doesn't
come across at all staid. The child's tool was an interesting way of
getting itno the backstories of the two families, and it was a touching
glimpse into all the characters involved.
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Title: A Precious Gift · Author: Isil Elensar · Genres: Drama: First Age
Elves · ID: 250
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-18 15:25:28
This was told really sweetly - it's nice to see them have some happiness
before everything gets so dark.
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Title: Just a Little Shove · Author: Inglor · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 798
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-18 15:38:06
Yes, you've got the point here. What might have been if Elrond had given
Isildur that little shove? This plot hole could be a beginning of an
excellent "what if" story.

I love this little tale. It is witty, funny, thought provoking and well
written. I love your portrayal of Glorfindel. Being a strategist and the
practical one here, he posed an exact statement having already many
probable consequences listed. But Elrond and he could ask this same
question countless times, still wondering, why...

Splendid work!
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Title: Immortality · Author: LydiaB · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 494
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-18 16:03:38
Your story is a gem of a drabble. This little tale is sweet, emotional,
romantic and touching, it also flows nicely and is very beautifully
written. This is also a tale of the love that is immortal and able to
cross all boundaries, despite obvious obstacles.

I really love your choice of characters; they are often
underrepresented, but their relationship is perfectly portrayed, which
is in my opinion a great thing to achieve in so few words. Brava!
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Title: My Eyes! My Eyes! · Author: Alassante · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 358
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-18 17:12:48
I couldn't stop laughing after reading this drabble for the first time
and I can say that I'm still giggling now, after I read it again. What a
way to present Glorfindel's masculinity and Arwen's curiosity and
confusion. This story was utterly funny. I really marveled at your
portrayal of Glorfindel; it was very sensuous and beautifully
descriptive. Wonderful imagery!

But the last line! I love it. It was delightfully impish and very
meaningful. A great read!
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Title: A Bad Day Gone Good · Author: MysteriousWays · Genres: Humor: The
Shire · ID: 229
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2006-07-18 17:43:56
Amazingly enough, this is a story of yours which I had not yet read !
Although I knew it was a Nibs had been pecking at you for some time. His
day to shine however seems rather bleak. I think we can all empathize
with the wee little guy and remember a day when all we touched went
wrong. Of course, none of MY rotten days never ended with being awarded
a gynormous sapphire, but hey. I was kinda hoping that he would give
Nibs a wee knife now that Nibs was not going to be able to buy one owing
to paying for the dishes.

As you know, I"m a huge fan of detail. This has got to be one of my fave
in this story. ["The pinecone didnt appear to mind . . . "] heehee!! I
picture a goofy pinecone face on it humming a little song as it bounces
along the lane.! Giggle snort!

Looking back now at the story, I am reminded what your assignment was.
And am now even more so impressed! What an Odd bunch of things to
include! And all very cleverly done. The casket of jewels would
definately be a tough one. But what more likely sourse to have it than a
Dwarf! I don't remember a deer in the story though. . Ah yes, there it
is escaping the coming storm. Do you think Nibs and Tawlin will meet
again? Perhaps Tawlin will offer to make nibs a dagger, setting the
sapphire in its pommel? (sp?) What will become of our unlucky Nibs as an
adult? Plot Chickens abound, and I do HATE to write a review without
throwing one in. Lovely job. Keep those stories coming.
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Title: Ships Passing · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 302
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 21:07:12
An interesting encounter probably never before seen in fanfiction -
Faramir speaks to the dead Halbarad. While I'm not completely sure that
Faramir would bare his soul in front of guards and attendants, the
monologue works well as a literary device. And of course, the notion of
Faramir addressing the most notable of the Northerners killed in the
battle to save his own city is too good not to address. This story
addresses it well.

Faramir's thoughts of his own father are particularly compelling, as is
the kinship he believes he has found with the slain Dunedain. And if
[Halbarad uin-Dunedain] isn't proper Sindarin, it should be.
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Title: A Lesser and Alien Race · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 683
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 21:08:59
An interesting reminder that Faramir was not the only high lord of
Gondor who chose a Northwoman as his wife - and that he and Eowyn could
face some of the same mutterings and prejudices as did Valacar and Vidumavi.
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Title: Do Not Think Me A Dream · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor
· ID: 40
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 21:11:57
A haunting portrait of a woman fighting a losing battle with internal
and external stresses - the homesickness, the desire to spend more time
with her sons, and the overwhelming awareness of Sauron's oppressive
presence.

Finduilas' predicament is well-sketched; she can't get escape Sauron's
influence, and though it may not drive her mad, since she is depicted
here as a strong woman fighting to remain with the family she loves, it
is exhausting her.

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Title: Heirlooms · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 72
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 21:12:56
A lovely vignette showing the passage of love through three generations
in the small and homely form of two stuffed animal toys.

Wonderful synchronicity here in the giving of the toys, as well as the
new mothers' joy in their perfect little boys.


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Title: Hunting Orcs · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 723
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 21:16:07
An evilly funny drabble, from the viewpoint of a luckless Orc,
chronicling an attack on him and his fellows by the sons of Elrond. The
Orc's attempt at self-justification [we wuz only havin' a bit o' fun] is
credible as well as amusing. The author catches the power of the
Elf-twins, the almost supernatural fear they inspire in their prey.
Interesting that the Orc indignantly claimed that the two Peredhel acted
as if these particular Orcs had merely [insulted] the Elves' mother -
well, we all know what drives the Elf-twins to track and kill Orcs,
don't we?!

Sly, nasty and well-written.
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Title: Music Lessons · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 55
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 21:23:03
A lovely story of the start of the friendship between Gandalf and
Faramir. The child Faramir is well-written; somewhat shy but more
intrigued than intimidated by the old wizard, especially when Gandalf
mentions oliphaunts, which of course draws Faramir's excited curiosity.
They connect easily and naturally.

The story's only flaw is its format; the print is rather small and light
and I had to strain to read it on the light background of the LJ.
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Title: History Lessons: The Third Age · Author: Nilmandra · Times:
Multi-Age: Incomplete · ID: 167
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-18 21:24:32
Dramatic, yet realistic retrospective from Elrond's POV of various
events in the Third Age, and the culmination of Aragorn and Arwen's long
waiting.

Good characterisations all round, and excellent work on the relationship
of Elrond and Aragorn, and Elrond and Arwen.
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Title: Imrahil's Daughter · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 183
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-19 00:58:30
A very enjoyable sequel to The Healer and the Warrior. I dont know if
its something you mentioned in one of your stories, or if its
something I read elsewhere: the fact that all of Eomers happiness is
built on the loss of the two men he most loved and admired. In this
story I was particularly impressed by your depiction of Eomer learning
how to be a king  unsure as to how to ask Gondors aid for his
devastated country; how to comfort and encourage his severely wounded
men; how to organize the rebuilding of the kingdom of Rohan. Theoden and
Theodred would have been so proud, but certainly not surprised, of his
growing confidence and leadership skill.

I also like the way youve portrayed him as particularly clueless, in an
endearing way, about the obvious fact that Lothiriel *is* the woman for
him, from both a coolly political, and feverishly personal standpoint.
She's hit him like a ton of bricks, and he doesn't even realize it, poor
dear.

As for Lothiriel herself, I howled out loud with laughter over this:
[She didnt take any notice of his interjection but went on as if giving
a lecture on salve cooking. It never added up. If you really think
about it then it is rather unappetizing. I was always curious why people
should find something like it worth striving for. Now I know it can be
pleasant.] Shades of Hermione Grainger!
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Title: Necessity and Desire · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: The Great Years ·
ID: 173
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-19 01:33:40
Excellent gap filler weaving together plot elements straight from
Tolkien and explaining how it all MUST have happened. Well written, and
carefully thought through.

I enjoyed Boromir's first sight of Elves. Surely he must have wondered
if they even existed at all.

I particularly liked the interplay between Elladan and Elrohir and their
foster brother, and your portrait of Arwen. The description of the
intimacy between her and Aragorn was very well done.

Gandalfs apprentice
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Title: The Still Point · Author: stultiloquentia · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 87
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-19 01:34:50
Evocative language, powerful emotions carry this tale of Aragorn and
Arwen's wedding night. You capture both the joy and sorrow of their
marriage. I don't myself see Arwen's becoming mortal as some sudden
thing that comes with the loss of virginity, but it is a valid
interpretation. Nice job.
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Title: The Consequences of Curiosity · Author: A L Milton · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 153
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-19 01:37:11
A delightful take on "my hands are ungentle." I got a big chuckle out of it.

And frankly it's nice to see some of the kink being attributed to het
relationships! Why should slash have all the fun? Both Eowyn (off stage)
and Faramir are totally in character here.

Just one complaint: I really don't think Aragorn was as slow on the
uptake as all that.

Gandalfs apprentice
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Title: Spring Rites · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 842
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-19 02:05:36
What fabulous imagery! The throbbing, primal music; the garishly painted
and oiled bodies of the dancers, the ancient rite to determine the
master of the pack  how thrilling and barbaric it must have seemed to
the gently reared princess. I cant remember many ficlets that have
packed such a sensory extravaganza into so few words. Wow.
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Title: Gaiety in Gondor · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 563
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-19 02:20:02
*wipes eyes from laughing*

I remember getting such a kick out of this back at Yule, when you first
posted it, and it certainly hasnt lost any of its punch. I love the
fact that the normally staid Faramir is the one who has misinterpreted
his lieges request, with such startling (and entertaining) results.

[I could find only twenty suitably gay Gondorians; after the sad losses
of the War&]

Yes indeed, Boromirs loss was keenly felt throughout all corners of the
White City... *ducks*
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Title: Stolen · Author: Meril · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 46
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-19 04:02:57
This story is not for the faint-hearted, but it is true to JRRT's
vision, and a fine piece of writing.

This is a terrifying might-have-been that describes the slow and ghastly
conquest of Galadriel and all she loved by the victorious Sauron.

Somebody go kiss Sam and Frodo, for the horrors they prevented by
getting that Ring to Orodruin. And even poor damned little Gollum played
a crucial part, if only to stop something like this.

Fearfully good story, with magnificent, searing descriptions. And very
good characterisation of Galadriel herself, holding on to her pride and
courage long after she should have broken.
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Title: That Which Remains Us · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama:
Remembering · ID: 749
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-19 04:37:09
A superb, elegantly and intricately written tale of Faramir's last,
bittersweet encounter with his father, a few weeks after the coronation
of their successor in Gondor's rule.

There are so many threads in this tapestry that it's hard to summarize
how it works, but the author is a mistress of the multi-faceted,
understated, drama, so most of it does work, and quite brilliantly. (the
Denethor/Thorongil relationship is also touched upon, and delivers a
surprise at the end)

The plot device of Faramir's finding Denethor's trunk, and its contents,
is employed quite well here. When Faramir discovers those contents, he
learns that he and his father were more alike than even he realized, and
finds the root of his father's disappointment in him.

The line [rue the day that he was born] is particularly haunting, but,
as is shown, Faramir is no weakling and can bear its implications. The
curious peace he makes with his father is moving, and credible.

A must for Faramirists, and a good, thoughtful story for any LOTR fan.


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Title: Last Defence of the City · Author: Branwyn · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 96
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-19 04:43:50
This Alternate Universe road is one most readers, and people of Gondor,
would wish Denethor had taken. The writer has shown Denethor as the man
he could have been, and should have been, but for the fatal combination
of his overweening pride and Sauron's palantir-borne influence, a man
strong and proud, but still graced with the humility of his office and
responsibility, a man who places his duty above his personal sorrow.

Denethor's treatment of Pippin is particularly well-written here, the
mutual interest and kindness they felt toward each other bears fruit in
Denethor's disposition - by allowing Pippin to keep his own pride in his
service as a Guard, while sending him to a place of at least temporary
safety.

And there's an implication of Denethor's ferocity in the use of the
adjective [snarling] in his orders to the servants bearing his
unconscious son, a subtle and effective touch.

The last line is particularly moving - and very appropriate.
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Title: An Exaltation of Larks · Author: Ibilover · Times: The Great
Years · ID: 178
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-19 12:18:03
I love books, words and "The Lord of the Rings," and this tale gives me
the opportunity to enjoy all three. So beautifully in character, too,
for all the members of the Fellowship. I particularly appreciate the
making of a story out of wordplay, leading up to the Hobbitpile.

Just one complaint: the "aught" etc. in Aragorn's and Boromir's speech
sounds stilted.

Gandalfs apprentice
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Title: Home Again · Author: Súlriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 863
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-19 12:23:08
I discovered cats and The Lord of the Rings at about the same time in my
life, and it's a delight to be able to appreciate them together. A
perfect portrait of a feline, and a beautifully wrought drabble--every
word just what it should be.

Gandalfs apprentice
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Title: Fear and Loathing in Middle Earth · Author: vladazhael · Genres:
Humor: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 407
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-19 12:26:46
Hilarious! It's a challenge, telling Tolkien's tale of heroic romance
mixed with Hobbit plainness in the style of the gonzo journalist. But
you did it.

Gandalfs apprentice
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Title: Gondor Needs No King · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 207
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-19 12:31:44
A remarkable drabble that sets up an entirely AU tale in 100 words. The
best chosen words are "wolfish and predatory." Your backstory is
suggested also--and the reader has to expect Boromir to soon do away
with his father, as well, with that Ring winking on his finger. Well done!

Gandalfs apprentice
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Title: A Matter of Honor · Author: meckinock · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 208
Reviewer: Nienor Niniel · 2006-07-19 19:54:49
I find this fic very enjoyable. At first glance, I wondered why it was
in the "Cross-Cultural" section. But then I realised that this is
actually something which plays a huge part in the story. Different
characters, humans and a hobbit, are exposed to Rivendell and the Elvish
culture, and we see how it affects them. We see that Rivendell, although
it is a beautiful place, is just a part of the world in which much is
preserved, but events outside still happen. I have rarely seen this
aspect of the book being portrayed so beautifully and true to the book
in fanfic. In the latest chapter, we also see the Dunédain interacting
with Dunlendings, and there are cultural differences that will
doubtlessly cause troubles in later chapters. I am looking forward to
seeing this fic develop!

Halbarad is a character about whom Tolkien does not tell us much, so
writers have a certain amount of freedom in portraying him. The Halbarad
whom Meckinock created is a strong character: he shows great loyalty for
Aragorn, yet chooses to ignore his orders if Aragorn endangers himself.
The portrayal of Gandalf is spot-on, too: he has the humour and
snarkyness we know from Tolkien, mixed with a great understanding for
others. The OC Dudo, a hobbit, is well-developed in his reaction to
experiencing very "un-hobbitlike" things.
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Title: Come When You Are Ready · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 795
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-19 21:20:48
The build-up of tension is handled deftly, letting the reader wonder
what is going on along with Denethor. Faramir's thoughts about his
father's feet are particularly affecting and haunting, as well as
Denethor's last thoughts.

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Title: That Immortal Sea · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 265
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-19 21:24:07
Evocative and chilling. The contrast between such peaceful pictures like
sheep or summer flowers and their destruction by the unstoppable waters
is particularly effective.
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Title: Respite · Author: Nesta · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 750
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-19 22:44:20
A lovely snapshot of newlyweds Faramir and Eowyn in a quiet moment of
happiness.

I've read a few fanfics where Eowyn is written as chafing at the
restraints of over-proper and prim Gondorian society; so it was a
delight to read this story, where Eowyn is shown to be more concerned
with propriety than her passionate husband. It makes sense; for
Tolkien's Eowyn kept herself on a very tight rein, emotionally, until
overwhelmed by pain and longing. And Tolkien wrote her as saddened by
the physical decline of the House of Eorl, of appearances as well as
reality.

Eowyn's love for Faramir is also written as well as his more obvious
passion; she loves him completely. Her emotional hoarding of the moment
of pure joy is extremely poignant; this is a woman who is new to
happiness, and on some level seems to expect it to be taken from her.
The line about her feeling pain when separated from Faramir reinforces
the fragility and fierceness of Eowyn's love - the writer does not
forget that Eowyn is a complex character.


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Title: Ring Thoughts · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years · ID: 190
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-19 22:47:56
Here's a storyline I haven't seen before in Tolkien fanfic - part of the
LOTR saga from the POV of the Ring of Power itself.

The writer spins a very entertaining tale. The Ring's voice is captured
well, sly and wickedly funny but utterly, ruthlessly, evil. It evaluates
the Fellowship, and picks a prospect to stalk and bedevil and finally
capture. Later, in Ithilien, it happily sets its sights on Faramir, but
finds [kid brother] less easy to ensnare than poor Boromir.

There are a few anachronisms, but they don't really affect the reader's
enjoyment of this unusual story.
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Title: 17 Cunning Corsairs · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 244
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-19 22:54:32
This is a charming ficlet which presents an endearing portrait of young
Lothiriel, a child who daydreams about Corsairs as romantic adventurers
coming to set her free from parental restraints. The story, while
cleverly incorporating the prerequisite subject matter [Seventeen
Cunning Corsairs] demanded by the challenge, highlights the child's
unusual imagination and high-spirited personality, both of which will
one day make her a fitting queen for a Horse Lord and his people.

Good descriptions; particularly of the contrast between the storied
Elven ships and the dreaded Corsair fleet. And a good ending, though not
the one for which Lothiriel had wished.

I really enjoyed this story; it's a rarity among Lord of the Rings
fanfiction and the growing subsection of Lothiriel stories.
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Title: Mine · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 66
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-20 06:39:43
A wonderful little story of sibling rivalry in its most basic form,
between the sons of Denethor. Only they're not grown men competing for
their father's love, but a baby who has unwittingly stolen his big
brother's favorite toy and the distressed older brother who wants his
toy back.

Luckily, the children have a sensible nanny, from whose gentle but firm
viewpoint the tale is told.

Boromir is well-written here, he is outraged, but good-hearted and
well-taught enough not to physically harm the baby brother who is
maltreating the precious toy. His desire to cherish the toy is a
charming reflection of the nanny's own care of himself.

And of course, the way Boromir refers to his younger brother as "that
baby" when he's angry at him, seems very real as well as quite funny.


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Title: The Tenth Walker · Author: Lindelea · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 198
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-20 06:50:48
This is a fine story, one I really hope will be updated and eventually
finished - the tale of the Fellowship, as seen through the eyes of Bill
The Pony. Or at least part of FOTR; though after reading what the writer
has done so far, I want to find out what happens to Bill after he and
the Fellowship part ways.

The writer seems to have a thorough understanding of ponies and their
needs and desires. The affectionate rapport that develops between Bill
and Sam is believable, especially after details of Bill's prior life
with the unpleasant Ferny emerge.

A cleverly written, engrossing story. I want more.
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Title: Trust · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama · ID: 216
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-20 07:03:24
I don't think this story works quite as well as many of the writer's
other pieces; but not because of any lack of skill in the writing, but
because it is somewhat dependant on other stories for its full impact.
The story is part of a long and complicated series centering on Boromir
and the people who he loves and those he leaves behind.

The writing is excellent, the story as convoluted as that of any
real-life family, only the stakes are higher than most.

To my mind, this is a variant Tolkien universe, and one of the most
richly drawn I've seen in fanfiction. Boromir and some of the other
characters wrestle with the issue of trust, and are ensnared in the
suspicions carried and caused through and by the past.

The most poignant, sharply painful moment for me, as a reader was
Boromir's realization that he cannot tell his lover of the sorrow that
is oppressing him - the knowledge he gained (in an earlier story in the
series, not fully reiterated here) about the true cause of Finduilas'
death, not without causing death as well as sorrow.

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Title: The Tracks of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 60
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-20 07:23:37
I am not a Legolas fan,but this story truly made me feel for the Elf as
he watches those around him gradually age.I think anyone past the first
flush of youth with epathise with the Silvan Elf here, babies seem to
turn overnight into teenagers,once hale and hearty adults grow frail and
old.Legolas has the problem of a child born to elderly parents or raised
by grandparents,the tragedy of seeing those he loves gradually fade and die.
It must be a bittersweet fate to be immortal and watch all around you
change and decay while you remain forever young.
Time stops in its tracks for no man ,and it says a great of Legolas'
devotion to Aragorn,Faramir, Gimli ,the Hobbits and Eowyn that he will
stay and watch them die,as all mortals must, rather than escaping to
Valinor now,while they yet live and being spared the pain of parting.
I found myself humming the song "Sunrise,Sunset" from "Fiddler on the
Roof" while reading this with its theme of swiftly flying years."Swiftly
fly the days,seedlings turn overnight to sunflowers, blossoming even as
we gaze"
As it says in the Bible"All flesh is as grass" When we see others
growing older we wonder where the years went and this ficlet captures
the feeling beautifully.
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Title: Gaiety in Gondor · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 563
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-20 07:51:18
I have to say I hate slash and never read it, but this was so funny and
did not involve any of Tolkien's named canon characters,(one hopes that
Legolas and GImli) are "gay" here in the old fashioned sense) that I
could not help but like it and laughed out loud in several places.
Poor Aragorn,he is using the word "gay" in the way I remember in my
youth while Faramir took it in the modern sense.
Poor Aragorn having to evade the flirtatious glances of a Swan Knight !I
can just see his eyebrows being raised,while even the devoted Faramir
will not dance with any save his wife to divert Pongohil's attentions.
I could just see the dangers in my mind's eye and the characters' reactions.
Poor Faramir tries so hard to please but on this occasion he has
misunderstood Aragorn completely in adding some gaitety to the Court.
Poor Faramir,immediately thinking of his father at the mildest rebuke
from Aragorn.At least Aragorn can see the funny side !
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Title: Theme and Variations · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 784
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-20 07:59:32
A delightful story as the good citizens of Minas Tirith speculate about
their new King's ways and past history.though I do not personally
believe that Aragorn ever had any other lady friends . I love the
relationship between Aragorn and Faramir ,the way Aragorn's ranger ways
scandalise the servants and the Hobbits reactions to Arwen.A most
enjoyable read.
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It might be a mistake on my end, but I am quite sure that I wrote a
lengthy review for Boz4PM's "Don't Panic" a while ago. However, it
seems to have gone missing. I realise that reviews are posted in
bunches and don't show up until later, that's not what I mean. I just
can't locate this review at all with any of the filters on the
Nominations page that show the reviews I have written.

It might be a mistake on my part, but I really think I reviewed. Could
someone look into this?

Thanks, Eva

Eva,

The system shows that story on your wish list, but doesn't have any
record of you saving a review. I'm not sure what happened, if you wrote
the review, but if you did it didn't get saved. I don't think there's
anything wrong with the system, maybe you forgot to save your validated
review.

I know that there's a 'preview' button at the bottom of the page, and
the 'save validated review' is in the middle of the page. There's been
a time or two during testing when I've tried to hit the 'preview'
button instead of the 'save' button.

After you save a review, you should get a green note at the top of the
next page showing that it saved and what the score is. Once you see
that, it's in the system.

Anthony

On Aug 27, 2006, at 8:43 AM, nienor_niniel1 wrote:

> It might be a mistake on my end, but I am quite sure that I wrote a
> lengthy review for Boz4PM's "Don't Panic" a while ago. However, it
> seems to have gone missing. I realise that reviews are posted in
> bunches and don't show up until later, that's not what I mean. I just
> can't locate this review at all with any of the filters on the
> Nominations page that show the reviews I have written.
>
> It might be a mistake on my part, but I really think I reviewed. Could
> someone look into this?
>
> Thanks, Eva

I'd made a 3rd Place Award Banner for Second Age, Times banner back
earlier in the summer and this morning just made a lovely one for
First Place, Second Age, only to go to the banner site and see... that
category didn't have enough entries. :sigh: Oh well. Oh no- my other
banner is gone! Any chance of it being housed anywhere else? I didn't
save it.

Thanks,
Thev

(who obviously needs to encourage people to get out their copies of
"Unfinished Tales" and write more Second Age fic!!)

My poor pukel-men banner is also gone. :more sighing: Perhaps next
year I'll wait until I know which categories will actually be in
competition before making banners. ;)

-Thevina

thevina_finduilas wrote:

> I'd made a 3rd Place Award Banner for Second Age, Times banner back
> earlier in the summer and this morning just made a lovely one for
> First Place, Second Age, only to go to the banner site and see... that
> category didn't have enough entries. :sigh: Oh well. Oh no- my other
> banner is gone! Any chance of it being housed anywhere else? I didn't
> save it.

They are still there, but yes, unfortunately Second age is a main
category that didn't run this year. I still have the banners and I will
see what I can do for you!!

Thank you so much for your wonderful banner submissions! They are all
very great!

Rhapsody

Title: Dark Appetites · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 833
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-20 17:37:39
Brrr... I wouldn't say I'm arachnophobic normally, but this drabble
might make me reconsider ;). Bravo! Your very well-chosen vocabulary
paints a realistic, repulsive picture of Shelob, a truly dark creature
outside as well as inside.
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Title: A Lesser and Alien Race · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 683
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-20 17:54:21
Neat twist to have the drabble fit into both periods of time. It shows
how history repeats itself, or, at least, how long-lasting prejudices
are. I like how you portrayed the narrator - even in so short a space,
she appears as a very perceptive woman with a mind and a quiet strength
of her own.
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Title: Of All the Pretty Little Horses · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor:
Gondor · ID: 736
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-20 18:33:12
A fun little piece, building up erotic suspense by the most innocent of
misunderstandings. Hard to tell which man is the most confused. The
scene is well painted, the characters clearly having fun and comfortable
enough with each other to enjoy the joke!
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Title: Tolkien's Use of Expletives · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Non-Fiction · ID: 147
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 03:06:39
An excellent examination of the usage of expletives in "The Hobbit" and
"Lord of the Rings", as a reaction towards the over-usage of swearing
by/in the name of the Valar and other modern uses of expletives in
Tolkien fanfiction. The writer carefully examines both works for
specific examples of expletives as a guide to the careful fanficker.

An invaluable reference tool for Tolkien fanfiction writers, and an
interesting essay.
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Title: Planning Ahead · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men · ID: 84
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 03:08:10
Not the usual Guy Meets Girl story - in this case, Arathorn is a cranky
39-year-old injured warrior, and his future wife is a little, and very
persistant, girl. I loved the bit where five-year-old Gilraen thinks
Arathorn is plainly older than the hills.

Good slant on the first meeting of this fabled pair, and the oddness of
foresight.
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Title: Making the Legends of Our Times · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 860
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 03:18:05
Interesting twist on the legend of Eowyn. As usual, a lot of emotional
punch packed into a mere hundred words. And excellent delivery of the
punchline at the end.

History becomes legend, indeed.




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Title: By The Light of Earendil's Star · Author: Branwyn · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 83
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 03:26:29
I've loved this story ever since I first read it, long before it was
finished. It's probably my all-time favorite Tolkien fanfiction
action/adventure story; and the author also writes one of the best
versions of Faramir. Not to mention Boromir. And especially Denethor.

[By The Light of Earendil's Star] presents a gripping adventure, with
plenty of well-realized and exciting action, and marvelous
characterization of not only Denethor and his sons, but three very
memorable Original Characters - something I rarely see in Tolkien
fanfic. And the Orcs, though ghastly, evil in their intent and actions,
are credibly written, as intelligent beings rather than totally stupid
brutes.

The military action is extremely well-written; from Orc encounters and
forays to Ranger battles and Boromir's desperate, and inspired, gambits.

But it's more than a simple action/adventure story.

The medicine and herblore is convincing. And the description of terrain
and structures is particularly elegant.

There's an understated quality to the expression of emotions that makes
that expression all the more effective. When I read the quieter parts of
the tale, (and there are many) I am reminded of Ursula K. LeGuin's style
in the Earthsea trilogy.

And there are so many good bits in the story: Denethor's memories of his
sons in their childhood while he knows they are both in terrible danger
and possibly dead, and, later, Boromir's surprise at his father's
physical strength, Faramir's brave attempts to preserve his men's lives,
the scary scene when an Orc stalks a defenseless and wounded Ranger in
the night, and the lovely epilogue. The usage of the myth of Beren as a
sort of archetypal and thematic reference is wonderfully done, and very apt.

Not to be missed.

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Title: Brothers at Heart · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Incomplete ·
ID: 451
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 05:25:09
Radbooks' story of the young Aragorn returning to the Dunedain to
reclaim his leadership and heritage offers a few hours of reading
pleasure. The story is long, and a huge cast of major and minor
characters including Aragorn's Dunedain relatives, Elladan and Elrohir,
various Dunedain villagers and Rangers, bandits, etc., and most
important, Halbarad, is handled quite effectively.

Halbarad's relationship with Aragorn is written convincingly, as is
Estel's uneasiness in returning to a people, and a culture, he does not
remember, as their Chieftain.

The details of daily life among the Dunedain are also well-written.
Battle scenes and medical activity are right on target, as is essential
in a story of this nature.

There are at least a couple of modern terms I thought need not have
appeared. But as faults, they are almost too small to notice, and do not
really lessen the story's impact.

I look forward to seeing the eventual conclusion.


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Title: The Tide · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 77
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-07-21 05:31:30
Talk about economy of prose! This ficlet pulls no punches in showing
Imrahil's opinion of his brother-in-law.
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Title: Home Again · Author: Súlriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 863
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-07-21 05:32:21
Bravo. Thank you for portraying cats as loyal creatures who always
return to their homes. The preference for a warm comfortable home over
passion and adventure is so true of the real feline nature. I'm sure my
skittish old cat would agree.
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Title: Red River · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 82
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-07-21 05:33:35
This is a fine examination of the War of the Ring from the point of view
of the humans who allied themselves with the Dark Lord. Rakshandar's
story of this father's experience at the hands of Aragorn and the Dead
was quite an eye-opener to Gondor's king, and to the readers. We are
accustomed to thinking of Tolkien's heroes as all good. Yet Altariel's
story shows us that "goodness" can be relative.
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Title: In the Service of the King · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: The
Great Years: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 138
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-07-21 05:34:38
I enjoyed how this story dealt with two underlying, very grave issues
for the people of Gondor: how well they felt they will be served by this
new king and how the end of the war affected the youth of Minas Tirith,
who are running about with little supervision. Aragorn's punishment for
Pippin is really clever. I also appreciated what for me is the message
of this story: that mischievousness can have good results
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Title: A Taste of Diplomacy · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 939
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-07-21 05:35:21
I enjoyed this story for its portrayal of Denethor as a normal, growing
teen, not a tyrant or a villian as he is sometimes depicted. Thevina
Finduilas held my interest particularly with her descriptions of
Denethor's surroundings and by embellishing her minor characters beyond
a generic prince of Rohan or woman of Dol Amroth, for example.
Especially effective was her portrayal of the dwarf Vrain, as seen
through Denethor's eyes.
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Title: Drift · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 203
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-07-21 05:37:26
What a beautiful, poignant drabble. Thanks.
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Title: First Impressions · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 806
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 05:47:45
Credible and smoothly written vignette.

Aragorn's culture shock, as a boy raised in a life of ease by the
beautiful Elves, when he sees the hardship of those he must live among
and lead, is well delineated.

Halbarad is portrayed excellently, as a likeable and proud young man
whose untutored eloquence helps Aragorn see the strength of his own people.
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Title: Work Detail · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Romance:
Fixed-length ficlet · ID: 789
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 05:54:13
A clever, sexy drabble that immediately engages the reader.

Arwen is written particularly well here, as a quite resolute, and
physical female, though the difference between her and other mortals is
alluded to in a skillful fashion.
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Title: And all in evil ended be · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 122
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2006-07-21 05:55:55
Could Morgoth's minions possibly live among us to this day? The answers
to this question are in "And All in Evil Ended Be," a very clever drabble.
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Title: Finding the Right Words · Author: Nienor Niniel · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 785
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-21 06:19:47
This was a truly delightful story about poor Faramir wondering whatever
can he say as he surrenders the White Rod to Aragorn. What an awesome
responsibility to be the Steward who welcomes back and surrenders his
office to the King,after almost a thousand years of Gondor having waited
for this moment !
Faramir is so troubled that he falls aleep and has a vision of his
father,finally smiling at him and showing him approval.He also sees his
mother and Boromir.
Knowing at last he is truly worthy of the task that has fallen to him,
Faramir awakens ,knowing what to say.
This was just lovely and how I imagine Faramir might have felt.I loved
his vision and that Aragorn's return was a dream come true for him.You
are a talented writer and I hope you will write more.You captured the
preparations and air of extectancty brilliantly.I hope the vision also
helps Faramir come to terms with his father's death.

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Title: Come When You Are Ready · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 795
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 08:16:55
Brutal in its honesty, but ultimately rather beautiful.

This is a tragic "Denethor Lives" AU, where the Steward's mind is
wandering, unaware of the Pyre, even as his burned body is losing the
fight for life.

Denethor's voice is well-written, the atmosphere of his dream filled
with foreboding, fell omens, and yet with beloved voices. His obsession
with Faramir's safety, with seeing his younger son to ascertain that he
is well, is quite moving.

The other part of the narrative shows Faramir's reaction to his father's
physical state, his attempt to give his father the only help he can, one
last conversation. Faramir is written as well as Denethor, braving
horror and sorrow to speak with his father and offer his love.

A tragic, horrific, and quite touching story.
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Title: Thus Are Legends Born · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men:
Fixed-Length Ficlets With Children · ID: 732
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 08:20:25
Interesting and original drabble, with the child Faramir creating a new
twist in the lore of dragons.

I loved the air of solemnity and mystery in the piece, with little
Faramir very sure of his knowledge. I supposed he eventually realized he
had much to learn, but his certainty is charming rather than arrogant.

Well done.
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Title: King's Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 197
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 08:27:15
A sparely drawn but very evocative vignette about the Grey Company, and
Halbarad's reunion with Aragorn.

The writer manages to present a spectrum from epic wonder, as Aragorn
begins to take on the mantle of the future King in the greatest and most
harrowing quest of his storied life, to the quiet and intimate talk of
two long-sundered friends who know they will soon draw swords together
and may not both survive. And it all works well; the mood of epic glory
transforming easily into the weary camaraderie over a campfire after a
hard and long day's ride.

Aragorn and Halbarad's relationship of comrades and friends is simply
and beautifully drawn here.

And the last line is simply beautiful.

This is one of the best Aragorn/Halbarad stories I've read.
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Title: The Steward and the Wizard · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 522
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 08:29:35
There aren't enough Mithrandir-and-Faramir stories for my taste; and
this one is only a brief slice of the daily lives of Gondor's first, and
possibly most dysfunctional family. But the drabble works, conveying, in
a mere hundred words, the distance already existing in the relationship
of child-Faramir and his father, and the trust that the boy already has
in Mithrandir. And of course, Denethor already resents that friendship;
while not realizing that his own disapproval of Faramir only strengthens
the bond between child and wizard.
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Title: Consolation · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 47
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 08:32:29
EdorasLass knows how to elicit the warm 'n' fuzzies, as well as
heartache, from, her readers, and this vignette is no exception, and
deserves a definite "Awwwww."

Wonderful characterisation of the young sons of Denethor, just a few
months after their mother's death, still trying to cope with her loss.
Boromir is definitely the magnanimous older brother to sad little
Faramir, every bit the "protector" that Tolkien described. Faramir's
offer of the use of his own stuffed toy to nobly repay his brother is a
nice touch.


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Title: Last Rites · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Drama · ID: 80
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 08:33:45
One of my favorite stories in the complex series Isabeau has written
about Prince Imrahil and his sworn brother Andrahar, her most
interesting original character.

The story concerns Imrahil and Andrahar's learning, from Aragorn and
Pippin, on the eve of the battle at the Black Gate, of Boromir's tragic
fall and redemption. Since, in the timeline into which this story fits,
Andrahar and Boromir were lovers, there is more at stake than kindred
and friends seeking news of Boromir's last days, which lends the story a
useful urgency.

I'm not sure I believe Andrahar's contention that Faramir would have
been corrupted by the Ring had he gone in Boromir's place, but it makes
sense that Andrahar, who abhors the concept of treachery, seeks to
believe that Boromir is not the only son of Denethor who could have fallen.

The interaction between the characters is beautifully written. Pippin's
part in the story had the strongest impact for me, his telling of
Boromir's last moments is quietly heartbreaking, and his conversation
with Andrahar especially well-done.


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Title: Lossarnach Yule · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Gondor · ID: 677
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 08:50:43
One of the more innovative fanfiction stories from a very talented
writer: three of Faramir's Rangers visit the family of a slain member of
their company, and end up staying longer, and exerting a far greater
influence, than they had planned.

The story is told from the viewpoint of young Idren, the slain Ranger's
son, struggling with the rest of his bereft family to hold onto their
home, threatened by a greedy creditor.

This is a well-paced 'Save the farm' story set for the most part quite
credibly in MIddle-earth. Worth reading alone for the small appearance
of good old Forlong of Lossarnach.
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Title: The Gift of Time · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 812
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 08:56:36
A brief but brilliant portrait of Arathorn bringing the news of a
Ranger's death to the dead man's young son. We see Arathorn's kindness
in not telling the boy the complete truth of how the man was painfully
slain by orcs, and his wisdom in the way he treats the boy not as a
child but as a boy who will one day come to fight in his father's place.

It strikes the reader all the harder when Arathorn thinks of his own
infant son, and that son growing up to be a warrior, and that the two of
them will have time to know each other, despite the perils that can
befall a Chieftain of the Dunedain.

Good story.
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Title: The Lost · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 181
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 11:15:45


The story is part of a series about the House of the Stewards and the
House of Dol Amroth, to which several authors have contributed. And it's
one of my favorites.

Isabeau of Greenlea's "Noble Jewel" introduced Brandmir, the 11-year-old
son Boromir never knew he had. Here, in its sequel, Faramir meets his
nephew, who has been adopted by Boromir's erstwhile lover Andrahar,
Arms-master of the Swan Knights and sworn brother to Imrahil.

The story is beautifully written, unfolding like a dark, then bright
flower, with excellent characterisation of Faramir. The boy is the
unwitting catalyst for reflection not just on Boromir's death, but on
the cycle of sorrow and love, from Denethor and Finduilas to their sons,
as the echoes of tragedy that have scarred Faramir now shadow his
nascent relationship with his beloved brother's only child.

The tale of how Faramir copes with the discovery of the boy and the
memories that Brand evokes is a suspenseful family drama and a showcase
of Faramir's own quality.


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Title: A Message and a Bottle · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Pippin or Merry · ID: 89
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 11:28:24
Lovely story that expresses a wish probably dear to most readers' hearts
- that there be a message sent to Frodo in Aman from the friends and kin
he left behind in Middle-earth. The story is well written and not as
sentimental as it could have been in lesser hands; the hobbits deftly
characterized. I loved the description of the progress of the bottle
down the River to the Sea and West. The ending is particularly good, the
narration, tone, the weaving of the hobbits' joy with the dialogue
between Yavanna and Ulmo an inspired and excellent touch.
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Title: Iridescence · Author: Larner · Times: The Great Years: Vignette ·
ID: 121
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 11:35:58
This is a delightful vignette of the four hobbits finding something
unexpectedly strange and beautiful in a stranger's home in Minas Tirith.

The excited, reverent attitude of the Gondorians towards the four famous
halflings is very well written here, as is the hobbit's courteous but
unassuming response.

The writer captures the details of every day life, and the significance
of legends and the legendary as both brighten the routine of daily life,
quite well.
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Title: Fair, Strong and Cold · Author: Ellethill · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 751
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 11:43:09
Faramir and Eowyn's fabled romance takes an AU turn here: they do not
fall in love in the Houses of Healing; but rather are brought together
in an arranged marriage.

The writer shows the gradual thawing of the Steward and the White Lady,
from their meeting, haunted by tragedy, in the Houses, to their eventual
awakening to liking, friendship and finally, love. In lesser hands, the
story would have taken a leap into action, with some great danger to
force the couple's feelings to ignite. But the writer's path, where the
changes in Faramir and Eowyn's hearts are visible but subtle, and happen
in increments rather than all at once, is true and makes the final
payoff all the more convincing and joyful.

The author makes a worthy effort to write in a style reminiscent of
Tolkien's, which enhances the story and is all the more remarkable
considering that English is not the writer's native language.

Fans of Faramir and Eowyn, and of Romance in Middle-earth, should enjoy
this story.
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Title: Fond Memory · Author: Isil Elensar · Genres: Drama: The Steward's
Family · ID: 331
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-21 14:53:55
I always love it when Isil writes a Faramir who he remembers his mother
with so much love. There is a certain tenderness the author appeals on
and it is well explored herel. To me their grief has slowly grown into
missing their mother and pain is replaced by warm thoughts and feelings,
even towards their father. Gently written and the end of it came too soon!
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Title: Father and Daughter · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 943
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-21 16:06:24
There aren't enough good Galadriel stories, and this is one of them.
Though, obviously, it is also a Finarfin story. Quietly intense,
conveying the sorrow of Finarfin's position, as he prepares to leave his
only surviving child behind in Middle-earth and go back and tell his
wife of the fates of their children.


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Title: The Fords of Isen · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Adventure · ID: 41
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-22 03:12:19
I really like this story. Usually ghosts in Tolkien fanfic don't work
for me because what Tolkien told us about the ghosts not normally
lingering in Middle-earth. But I can see Rohirrim, especially rural ones
like the old couple in this story, having less than full knowledge of
those truths. More to the point, the action and horror and sense of
desperation is palpable. I love what you've done with Boromir's
battle-lust in particular. That was a nice connection to use, and it was
really effective.
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Title: A Little Thing · Author: Acacea · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 75
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-07-22 03:55:54
This piece was written for "The Life Aquatic" challenge on the
Tolkien_weekly community, and what an amazing response to that prompt!
It is a tiny gapfiller about the years when the Ring was lost in the
Anduin. The writing is beautifully spare, written from the point of view
of the water creatures. When I read this, I can almost see the silent,
underwater world of the river bed.

The Ring comes to rest beside a water fern. The Ring gives power to each
according to their stature; so the water fern, without mind or will, is
given long life but nothing else. I like that the wild creatures
instinctively know to stay away from the golden ring; among the many
hazards in their short lives, they sense that this glinting object is
the most perilous.

This intriguing piece is one of my favorite drabbles.

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Title: A Letter Home · Author: Frodo Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) ·
Times: The Great Years: Gondor · ID: 978
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-07-22 04:25:55
Hobbits do seem to take a healthy interest in each other's doings, so I
laughed when Samwise asks the Gaffer to make certain that someone
discreet (and *not* Bessie Puddifoot) reads the letter to him.

Samwise's edits to his letter are amusing and believable. No, I don't
suppose he would be very good at spelling, and his slips into familiar
forms of address ("Strider") also make sense. It was a nice touch to
have him scratch out the unfamiliar "orc" and replace it with "goblin,"
a term with which the Gaffer is more likely familiar.

It is very much in character for Samwise to ask the healers of Gondor
for some ointment for the Gaffer's arthritis. His love and concern for
his old father are evident throughout the books; and after the War, he
would want to send a letter with news of his safety as soon as possible.

(By the way, the "cambrick" tea made me smile. My mother used to make it
for me. :-)
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Title: Promise · Author: Vana Tuivana · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 643
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-07-22 05:04:00
I had never read anything by Vana Tuivana before, so this poem was a
lovely surprise. The unexpected line breaks and free use of punctuation
make the poem feel slightly off-balance and uneasy, which is appropriate
for a poem about Nerdanel and the tempermental Feanor.

[On a day
in spring (such
spring as there can be
in a place which knows no
winter)...]

The rise and fall of the action (Feanor's approach to Nerdanel, his
promises, and her acceptance of his promises) are reflected in the form
of the poem on the page. The lines lengthen, reach a peak, then dwindle
down to the final line, which consists of a single word --"sorrow."

The gift of a flower seems to be a metaphor for Feanor's passion (the
flower is pink and white, and his skin is both pale and flushed from his
strong emotions). The poem is tightly constructed so that the flower and
Feanor's promises are repeated in lines in the first, second and final
stanzas.

A beautiful piece of writing.





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Title: Swan Dance · Author: Rhapsody · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 797
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 05:37:57
This is a very insightful and thought provoking drabble. You portrayed a
son of Feanor in a way fitting for each of them. This is also
beautifully written. I marveled at the elegant language of this tale.

Excellently done!
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Title: A Gift of Tears · Author: vladazhael · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 615
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 05:50:35
I find this story very powerful, full of sadness and determination. You
explored the tragedy of an elven family with gentleness, yet you gave a
reader a vivid picture, if I may say so, of emotions and the influence
of death, which is always difficult to achieve in my opinion. You did
Haldir justice bringing a portrayal of a warrior and a friend, who had
this terrible task to accomplish. Combined with a heart-wrenching
portrayal of a mourning sister, you doubled the range of emotions in
your story making it very emotive. Great job!
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Title: The Fading of a Star · Author: Minuialeth · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 219
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 06:01:56
The voice you gave Erestor is like a helpless weeping. This story
described the difficulty of a relationship between an elf and a human
with all tragedy hidden behind it, not to mention that it presented the
theme in a very evocative and beautiful way. This is very poignant and
wonderfully done.
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Title: Son of Finwë · Author: Minuialeth · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 193
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 06:10:23
He knew that he would not survive, yet he faced his certain death,
setting his royal blood, valor and courage on the scale. A true son of
Finwe, and you presented his thoughts in a way that brought tears to my
eyes. Splendidly done! The usage of words was elegant and very powerful.
Brava!
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Title: To The Abyss · Author: Minuialeth · Times: The Great Years:
Poetry · ID: 403
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 06:21:31
This is a very interesting, atmospheric piece of poetry and it captured
the moment very well. It flows very nicely and I'm really amazed at its
lyrical quality, knowing that English is not your first language. Very
good work!
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Title: Birthday Kisses · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 59
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-22 06:51:53
This is a bittersweet little story about Faramir's sixth birthday told
from Prince Imrahil's pont of view.

Faramir's birthday celebrations are muted because of the recent death of
his mother and one can only imagine how sad and lonely the little boy
must have felt without her,as well as missing the usual festivities a
son of the Ruling Steward could expect on his birthday.

Poor Faramir has even been deprived of his mother's dog which he was
fond of as Denethor had sent her away with Prince Imrahil,unable to bear
the sight of her.I suppose we should be thankful,poor Finduilas didn't
come from a culture where pets were buried with their owners.
Denethor has however relented sufficeiently to allow Faramir a puppy
from his mother's dog's litter.

The little dog immediately licks Faramir's face, foreshadowing how he
will become a tamer of both man and beast.

Sweet though it is that boy and puppy should bond, Imrahil notes sadly
that Denethor does not show poor Faramir the affection a young child
badly needs.

It is his Father's love that Faramir requires to help him to come to
terms with the loss of Finduilas.

Sadly,we know that later events prove this is one gift Denethor remains
unwilling or unable to offer.Faramir must be content with a puppy.
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Title: Letters in the sand · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Feanorians
· ID: 176
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 08:49:57
This is an amazing and original story, from the first line to the last.
It's also a very lyrical piece of prose, so fitting for Maglor. You gave
an insightful portrayal of him, describing the scars his soul possessed
and his darker side, along with the backdrop of the Valar's involvement
in his fate.

Letters can be drawn not only with a gentle stroke of a quill, or by
trailing one's fingertip in the sand, but also with a sharp draw of a
chisel, and those engraved in Maglor's soul were such cruelly written ones.

Remarkable read!
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Title: Lightly Sings the Wind · Author: Ellie · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 799
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 09:44:32
This is an excellent description of despair. It's full of sadness and
yet hope, it's very emotional and heartwarming at the same time.

Earwen's pain was palpable. She couldn't see anything, besides her loss,
even though those around her tried to convince her she was not alone in
her suffering. I love how you portrayed Finarfin. He was brave,
honorable, caring and loyal, even if he had to face the same, or maybe
even worse, tragedy and loss of his relatives and friends. His
compassion and love were compelling, and in the end fruited in such a
life changing decision.

Outstandingly done!
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Title: Shin to Toe to Thigh to Mind · Author: Talasi · Genres: Romance ·
ID: 369
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 09:59:54
The very air in this story seemed thick with tension and anticipation.
Wonderful imagery! It's so sensual and not overdone, it flowed
beautifully, and the song you've chosen was perfect for the description
of Haldir. Now I have an image of him I will never forget.

Your words invoke very strong emotions. Brava!
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Title: The Will · Author: LydiaB · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 770
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 10:40:04
Very clever, awesome and original idea! Just to think how Tolkien might
get the Red Book and how he let himself be pulled into the mysteries of
Middle Earth seemed thrilling. You created a subtle picture of how he
might come across the book, beautifully written and very thought
provoking. Brilliant!
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Title: Elves Do Skate · Author: Caporal · Genres: Humor · ID: 135
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-22 11:17:09
Oh Gosh! I love the dialogue between Amrod and Amras and their obvious
disbelief about what Caranthir was doing. These lines made me chuckle:
["We must," says Amrod gravely, "be thinking of different Carnistirs."

"Same one. You know. Brother of ours, about so high..." Amras raises a
hand a few inches above his own head "...no sense of humour, blushes a
lot. You must know him."

"Not," says Amrod, incredulous, "our brother Carnistir? Not
black-like-my-soul Morifinwë?"

"The very same."]

Just the visual alone, excellent! I love the dialogue in this piece and
the descriptions are equally wonderful. As the summary says: a brotherly
and fluffy ficlet. A wonderful read and I am surely on the lookout for
more stories written by Caporal.
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Title: The Gift of Time · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 812
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-22 12:48:41
This is such a touching story. I find your portrayal of Arathorn very
complex and believable. He was a ranger, accustomed to seeing death,
pain and fear. But he was also a father, and his love for his son made
him speechless and uncertain when he had to deliver the worst, grievous
news about his fellow ranger's death.

I love the details you subtly pointed, for example the friend's sword
strapped to Arathorn's saddle and the star that burned in his pocket.
They couldn't be a comforting gift, but nonetheless, I think, they would
be the most precious legacy for the young boy, who lost his father.

Very emotive and well done in so few words. Bravo!
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Title: At the Rising of the Moon · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 846
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-22 13:15:35
A very warm and happy holiday story, permeated by hints of gentle humor,
and culminating in a rollicking ending.

The premise of Aragorn and Faramir's search for mistletoe to satisfy
Eowyn's desire for a Yule celebration in Minas Tirith is a suitable plot
device, and the writer has done her homework as far as researching
customs of Yule celebration, which makes the tale all the more credible.

There's a well-drawn original female character who soon has the King and
Steward at her mercy; and a good impression given of life among the less
exalted of Gondor.

I enjoyed the depiction of a very close friendship between King and
Steward, there's a warm sense of quasi-familial love between Aragorn and
Faramir, which works well in the scenes where they happily race horses,
and later, when Aragorn shows Faramir the proper way to cook chestnuts.

The existence of a child who is evidently Faramir's niece seems to be a
carry-over from other stories by the writer, but an author's note
explains the child's origin, and since she does not play a huge role in
the story, a reader may easily enjoy the tale on its own.

The last chapter is quite funny, with a downright brilliant title, and
should be read all the way to the end.
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Title: Theme and Variations · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 784
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-22 13:49:32
In this lively tale, Faramir deals with the impact of the returned King
on high Gondorian society, most particularly in the King's aspect as an
eligible bachelor (betrothal unknown) and as the former Thorongil, an
even more eligible bachelor, especially when Faramir's pushy and
acid-tongued aunt (the older sister who Denethor couldn't stand) gets
wind of the King's unmarried status.

There are many fine moments here - such as Faramir's struggle to keep a
straight face when the fussy Chamberlain details his exasperation with a
King who insists on dressing himself and lighting the fire in the hearth
without the aid of servants, the wild rumors about the mysterious King
that flew through Minas Tirith before the Coronation, and Faramir's
P.O.V. of Arwen's arrival.

An elegant and entertaining story.


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Title: A Mud Summer Night's Dream · Author: SueB · Genres: Humor: Gondor
· ID: 712
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-22 14:12:09
An enjoyable movieverse romp. Aragorn, Eomer and Faramir scout out a
particularly muddy region of Gondor, and, in the finest traditions of
fanfic, have an adventure that includes getting filthy, getting naked
(for bathing purposes), battles with orcs, and a meeting with a
long-missed friend.

Faramir and Eowyn's interaction is sweet and occasionally sassy, just
the type of fond byplay one might expect from a newly married couple.

I could have done without the swearing by Eru, as they do at least
twice, since no one swears by him in either book or movie (or by any
deity other than Elbereth), but that's a very minor flaw.

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Title: And all in evil ended be · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 122
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-22 14:47:17
Cute! I definitely can see the possibilities here. After all, if
Ungoliant got her brood, why shouldn't Morgoth have something even ookier?
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Title: Of All the Pretty Little Horses · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor:
Gondor · ID: 736
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-22 14:53:24
I saw the joke coming (only because I've dreamed up a very similar idea
myself!) but this was still really funny. I could see the look of dismay
on both of their faces as Eomer and Faramir realize what the other is
talking about - somehow I doubt very much that Faramir ever thought
Eomer would see Lothiriel like *that*.
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Title: Hair · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 321
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-07-22 15:57:52
This was a fun read. It seems just like Legolas to be curious and amused
at the anatomical differences of his companions, and this was well
played-out.
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Title: Chivalry · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 374
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-22 16:55:39
What a wonderful subject for a short story, or even a drabble! And in
this case, the brevity of the drabble format suits the tale perfectly.
Lovely imagery of Shadowfax as a dancing, arrogant creature who must be
courted and wooed. And of course, this drabble shows us that Gandalf is
the only one who could.

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Title: Water and Stone · Author: Erynhith · Races: Elves · ID: 673
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-07-22 18:14:14
I love this story. You draw such a powerful picture of the magic that is
Lothlorien, especially, of course, Galadriel. You make her a little more
familiar, but she remains majestic and awe-inspiring, because of her
great powers. You do an excellent job of giving substance to those
powers, which Tolkien himself leaves rather unknown (being viewed from
the POV of Hobbits, of course). Your OCs are well drawn and fit in
seamlessly with the canon characters.

But I must confess I am not an Elf chick. Therefore the reason I first
read this story is because Aragorn is in it as a main character. And I
am afraid that your story did not change my allegiance: I think he is
the best character in the tale. He undertakes the most, he grows the
most, he begins and ends the story. I don't think you will mind my
confession (I hope not).

I thought your sex scenes were an exemplary combination of emotion and
eroticism. All of them succeed. But my favorite is the scene where
Aragorn loses his virginity. This is not because I am so backward that I
don't enjoy M/M slash (far from it! TWO beautiful men getting it on!),
but because I so loathe the Aragorn as virgin till age 88 scenario. It
just makes me laugh, and I have made enemies throughout fanfic on this
point. In my own AU tale of his life, he undergoes quite a bit of
"education" in Rivendell, where some of the sauciest ladies enjoy
initiating young men, especially ones with beards (a novel experience
for an Elven lady).

For similar reasons, I really liked the scene between Gwirith and
Elrond. You show sex as a bond between friends; it doesn't have to be
eternal love forever a la Catholic-inspired LACE.

I liked the dog. Too often animals are used in fanfic only to be "cute."
You gave some meaning to the hound as "Man's best friend." I use the
capital M deliberately.

Now for some criticism: Your Elves whine too much. I got the point after
the first, second or third time. I think your story would be better if
you cut it some.
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Title: Following Orders · Author: EdorasLass · Times: The Great Years:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-07-22 23:07:17
Sigh! This is the age old excuse people use when they are too afraid or
don't want to think. Faramir is right to be angered by this excuse.
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Title: The Burdens of Office · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 865
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-23 01:42:55
Excellent tale of a matter of state concerning the King, the Steward,
and the Prince of Ithilien, and the differing arguments made by Steward
and Prince.

The story emphasizes Aragorn's fairness and good-humored rationality,
and Faramir's thoughtfulness. The idea of Faramir's two roles coming
into conflict is inspired.


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Title: Too Many Names · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 866
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-23 01:52:54
An ingenious set of twelve demi-drabbles, each devoted to one of the
returned King's many names.

The demi-drabbles run the gamut from hope, surprise, sorrow and gentle
introspection through sensuality and dry humor and utter joy. Different
facets of Aragorn's long life are explored from varying viewpoints.

An inspired notion, carried cleverly and convincingly through its
conclusion.
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Title: A new tradition · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Dwarves: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 869
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-23 02:06:23
Brilliant, unusual little vignette about Gimli and Yule traditions, as
observed by Legolas. It's funny but fitting that Gimli ends up as a sort
of prototype of one of Santa's Elves.

Excellent usage of Norse traditions, through the names used. The
invention of the name [Eald Faeder Snaw] is an inspired bit of Old
English And the ending is perfect, and fits well into the Legolas/Gimli
canonical relationship.
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Title: The Steward's Dream · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Fixed-Length
Ficlets With Children · ID: 647
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-23 02:18:04
Interesting ficlet from Boromir's point of view. In it, he listens to
Faramir's dreams, which include the return of the King, and feels doubt
as to the place of the House of the Stewards under a King's rule.

Good exploration of Boromir's worldview in the necessarily brief text.
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Title: Homecomings · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 225
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-23 02:28:26
What a great idea for a ficlet series - a drabble for each welcome that
seven Fellowship members receive from their fathers (or, in Aragorn's
case, foster-fathers) after Sauron's fall.

All the prodigal sons' returns are written well, but two drabbles stand
out - Legolas and Gimli. I loved Gloin's horrified resignation that his
son has not only befriended an Elf, but an Elf who is the son of Gloin's
former captor. And Thranduil's memories of his own father, lost in
Mordor, and observation that his son will eventually have to leave
Middle-earth, are keenly poignant.
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Title: Homecomings · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 225
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-07-23 04:29:05
A charming glipse of the homehomings of the surviving Fellowship
members. I love the way you portray the very different reactions of the
various families and make each homecoming truly believable.
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Title: Autumn Hunter · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 353
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-23 06:26:22
This is a most entertaining read. I love the sensuality of Celegorm's
portrayal. I love the imagery and your choice of words. The picture you
created is vivid; it flows wonderfully and of course it gives a reader a
clear hint as to what is going to happen next, when the curtain falls.
Excellent!
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Title: Shattered Twilight · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: First Age
Elves · ID: 247
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-23 06:43:36
This is a haunting, creepy and very adequade presentation of Maeglin's
feelings and a very interesting insight into his thoughts at the hour of
his death. It presents his darker and brighter side at the same time. I
really love how you conveyed Maeglin's love for Idril and his obsession
that made him think of her when he faced his finality. You portrayed the
destructive power of his love in the most evocative way. Very well done!
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Title: Lonely Night · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama: Remembering ·
ID: 295
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-23 07:04:16
This story is a realistic and cleverly written, believable and utterly
convincing portrayal of a woman who still has to deal with her past and
the pain she suffered. I always marvel at how well developed and
believable your OFC is and this short story adds a special note to the
presentation of Morwen. This is also smoothly written and insightful way
to show the range of a woman's emotions. I admire the style of your
writing and always look forward to reading more of your stories.
Wonderful work!
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Title: Gandalf's No Good, Rotten, Really Bad Day · Author: Gandalfs
apprentice · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 146
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-23 07:52:02
A funny and unusual AU vignette, where Gandalf is called on the carpet
by Manwe himself, after the War of the Ring, which, owing to the Grey
Wanderer's somewhat dubious decision to leave a very informative letter
to Frodo in the hands of Barliman Butterbur, turned out rather
differently from what Gandalf had hoped.

Elrond and Arwen appear as well, and are used superbly to heighten the
comedy.

The writer has a good grasp of dialogue, pacing and comedy, and of
course, of the structure of LOTR itself.

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Title: Remembrance · Author: Acacea · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 73
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-07-23 12:09:35
Quietly beautiful story, where Denethor remembers his meeting with,
courtship of, and married life with Finduilas, when he happens upon the
starry mantle he gave her. The description of their relationship is
excellent, shown, not told, in an understated way that I would think
could be typical of Denethor remembering a better time in his life.

The last two paragraphs absolutely floor me; as the writer brings the
reader from Denethor's memory of a better time to the realization of the
time in which he now lives, and of all he has lost and not regained, and
what lies ahead of him.

Very well done.
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Title: Lobelia's List · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 201
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-23 12:38:40
Very funny; and you captured Lobelia's character very well.
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Title: More Lembas Thoughts · Author: Rabidsamfan · Genres: Non-Fiction
· ID: 851
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-23 12:54:20
Persuasive, well-reasoned arguments, underpinned with apt references to
canon. Clear and lively style.
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Title: Such a Little Thing · Author: Ribby · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 206
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-23 12:56:28
Oh. My... Absolutely creepy and chilling, especially as the narrative
voice is so very detached. And eerily plausible. I do think the
beginning is a little undecided, but it gets better the longer it goes,
and the last paragraph is disturbing, perfect and perfectly disturbing.

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Title: The One · Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors ·
Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn · ID: 852
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-23 12:58:16
Lovely story that gives brief but fitting insights into the relation
Aragorn had with the representatives of the House of Húrin. I especially
like the fact that, once again, Aragorn does honour to his childhood
name and never gives up the hope that his vision will one day come true.
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Title: Truly Exposed · Author: Marta · Races: Elves: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 689
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2006-07-23 12:59:31
Elegant, evocative, sensuous. I like the comparison Celeborn vs. Nenya
and how, in the end, it is Celeborn who has the tigher hold on
Galadriel's heart.
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Title: The Household Accounts · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 50
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 13:51:08
Oh, this is such a somber tale, heartbreaking in its simplicity!

The housekeeper is an understated, yet fascinating character. Her duty,
no less that Faramirs, or Beregonds, was the protection of the
property entrusted to her care; she has accepted and performed that duty
without flinching for so many years. We cant tell if she is happy to be
going over the household accounts with Éowyn, relieved that she will be
able to finally lay down her burden and responsibility; or proud to
demonstrate that she has performed her appointed tasks with loyalty and
care for so many years. She is cool, almost too cool and businesslike,
yet it seems as though we are able to discern just a whisper of her pain
and devotion as she describes her tally of the household's loss by the
fabric left behind. Denethor; Boromir (the imagery of his surcotte
swirling as he paces is so vivid, what a wondrous detail! Youve really
captured his restless energy in just that tiny bit!); most heartrending
of all, the unborn daughter Finduilas longed for in vain.

The line about Eowyns rough finger catching on the fabric is such an
exquisite detail that really seems to symbolize the difference between
the two women: The domestic, staying by her post, guarding hearth and
home; the frustrated warrior who abandoned her responsibilities to
follow what she saw as her own path. In the end, Eowyn has ended up in
the same place she sought to escape. Perhaps she is ready, now, to
accept these homely duties?
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Title: Music Lessons · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 55
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 13:52:16
I really enjoy stories highlighting the affection between Faramir and
Gandalf, and this is one of the best Ive found. Youve wonderfully
depicted gangly young Faramir, caught between boyish high spirits and
his responsibility as a representative of his father. His excitement and
exuberance at the idea of learning about oliphaunts, or all the wonders
Gandalf has seen, is both realistic and endearing.

Your portrayal of Gandalf, too, as finding Faramir a more satisfying
friend (and audience) than even the hobbits of the Shire is a delight as
well. I also enjoyed your depiction of Faramirs loyalty to Boromir, and
Gandalfs sly recognition that Faramir would never speak ill of his
brother, no matter what.
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Title: The Long Road Home · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 743
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 13:53:07
[Boromir had never had to deal with personal failure, real or perceived
and when at last he found himself not up to the task, he simply was not
equipped to handle it.]

Thats pretty much the story in a nutshell, isnt it? How the finest
man of Gondor learned to deal with his guilt and self-loathing, finally
conquering his demons.

To me, what distinguishes The Long Road Home from other Boromir!Lives
fic is the intricacy of the plot. Action, adventure, political intrigue,
drama, and humor all play significant parts in the telling.

Another outstanding feature of this tale is the incredible attention to
detail  the tale could easily have be illustrated by Bruegel, with
everyday life, celebrations, market places and towns described in loving
detail.

I particularly enjoyed the variety of characters within the tale. Each
of the original characters, whether human, canine, equine, or orcish,
are well-drawn, realistic, and distinctive. The story-within-a-story, of
the She-orc and her litter, is vivid and startlingly original, as well
as a bit heartrending. Who would have imagined wed ever feel sympathy
for the orcs?
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Title: Kissing is Different · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 280
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 13:54:14
What a happy, funfilled tale! I can imagine Queen Lothiriel telling it
to her daughters, how she and their father met accidently-on-purpose in
a Minas Tirith stable on a warm summers day. The repartee between
between Lothiriel and Eomer is very amusing  I can easily imagine the
two of them acting this way.
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Title: The Tracks of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 60
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 13:54:51
I love the references to trees, fruits here  its almost as though
Legolas, after his years in Emyn Arnen, has become embued with a
pastoral life. But the comparisons are so apt: the elves like mighty,
slow-growing trees while human, hobbit ,and dwarven lives burst into
frenzied bloom, then gradually fade and disappear.

This line struck me as particularly lovely: [He will wither while the
cypress trees we planted grow slowly skyward.] Such a wistful analogy to
Faramir and Legolass labors together to restore Ithilien. The land, the
trees will endure when Faramir has long returned to dust, and Legolas
has gone beyond the Sea.
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Title: Hidden Wonders · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 420
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 13:56:36
(claps hands with delight) How did I miss this treasure?

Although we have come to consider the Rohirric culture as having a
predominantly oral tradition, reading and writing would have been
necessary skills for the royal family, at the very least. Certainly
their Gondorian grandmother, Morwen, would have insisted upon such
skills. Thank you also for describing the books Eowyn remembers as
belonging to Theodred  that adds such another valuable dimension to the
background we as a fandom are creating for him.

I love the imagery of Faramir sneaking up on Eowyn and watching with
secret delight as, awestruck, she studies his collection. What an
endearing glimpse into their life together!
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Title: The Road Not Taken · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 104
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 13:57:39
Very lovely and unexpected! I like the way you set the autumn-y scene
immediately, and used that theme to convey the feelings of change and
sadness that so often go along with that time of year, melding them with
the pain and sadness and indecision of his quest.

The first year we lived in Alaska, I remember being stunned at the sound
of thousands of wild geese headed south together - I could not imagine
what that sound was, and ran outside with my baby in my arms. It's still
a very powerful memory, of forces of nature quite beyond my
understanding. What a lovely and bittersweet note for Boromir, to be bid
farewell by one of the sigils of his mother's house, as he begins this
journey that will bring him to his doom.
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Title: The Cloak · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 177
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 13:58:30
Theres a fabulous depth, a richness of color and detail to Kortirions
tales that few can match. This tale winds its way through the leisured
paths of the storytellers memory, encompassing Corsair raids, a
Rohirric boy-whore, and the intricacies of northern trade routes before
reaching its heart: a retired amah stitching her love and care into a
valued gift for her charge, now grown. But she is far more than just a
pensioner: this amah is a trader, spy, beloved mentor and advisor, and
the relationship between Boromir and his amah is portrayed with realism,
affection, humor, and trust.

The imagery is marvelous in its detail  all about that cloak, that
fabulous cloak. [He turned and I stretched up to drape it over his
shoulders. When he turned back it made my heart catch to see him  as
fine as any lord ever was. He twisted his shoulders, taking pleasure in
the swirl of the fabric.] Rich velvet, acquired through the Amahs
craftiness and trickery; exquisite sable, the seasons finest, the
results of her skill and business savvy. An unforgettable character, and
a vivid history to a memorable artifact.
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Title: The Dancing Master · Author: Flick · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 323
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 14:09:07
This story hits every single one of my happiness buttons: Beautiful
Bride Éowyn and Handsome King Éomer, their faces aglow with affection
and pride; Faramirs quite understandable interlude of sadness and loss
amid the joy of the occasion; and the wonderful vision of Boromir as the
ever-devoted and supportive older brother, teaching his gangly young
brother the courtiers arts, as well as the warriors. Your description
of their dancing lesson is just beyond wonderful  I choked with
laughter over the image of Boromir as the bride!

I just love the vision of teenage Éowyn developing a mad crush on
Boromir - who wouldnt swoon for the elegant Heir of Gondor youve
described so magnificently? And what a marvelous spark of intuition for
him to know just how to interest her in dancing, by couching it as a
martial art. Perhaps he did read hearts as keenly as his father, after all.

Lastly, the very special gift that Éowyn gave to Faramir: an
extraordinary vision of his brother, a wondrous shared memory to begin
their lives together. Thank you again for one of the loveliest, most
joyful stories Ive read in a long time.
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Title: Drift · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 203
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 14:09:40
Weve all read, and seen, the funeral boat as it drifts down the Anduin,
carrying its burden of heartbreaking truth to Faramir. There are a
multitude of interpretations of the scene, but Ribbys vision is utterly
unique! For of course all living creatures would be affected by the
actions of the dominant species of Middle-earth (just as all creatures,
in our age, are affected by ours.) And how very moving that even the
wild creatures of Ithilien know and trust Faramir.

The language is simple, as befits fishy brains, but there is poetry even
here. An extraordinarily original and creative retelling of a sad,
familiar event.
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Title: Kindly Winter's Gift · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Genres:
Romance: Rohan · ID: 717
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 14:10:59
I love the way youve focused on the sensory details leading up to the
encounter in the barn: the overheated, noisy hall; full of visitors and
celebration; the cold, bracing night air as Théodred hurries to meet his
companion in the stable; his concern for the men on guard duty while at
the same time realizing that it is their duty, and duties must be
fulfilled, no matter what.

The gentleness and affection with which Théodred and his lover greet
each other is heartwarming. Im so glad you chose to be understated with
this (though, Béma knows, Im not one to shy away from explicitness).
Theres a sweet, boyish quality in Theodreds eagerness which is matched
by his companion  he doesnt come across as an older, more
sophisticated seducer at all, but more like someone who has been waiting
for Theodred to be ready for this night, and hoping that he himself
would be found worthy of Theodreds love.

Youve gotten some exquisite lines here [&an unnatural desire to be the
leather next to your skin has never left me] which have inspired me in
my own writing: [I want to be the ink of that tattoo, lying just under
his skin, gleaming with his sweat]. Your facility with language, the way
you make the words dance together, dazzles me.

The conclusion of the tale, with glowing, aching Theodred wishing not to
sleep, but relive in his imagination the glorious activities and
exertions of the previous night, is sweet and warm without being sappy
or out of character for a young warrior-Prince. It meshes perfectly with
the way Ive always imagined my Theos earliest romantic encounters.
Thank you again for such a lovely gift!
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Title: Mirrors of Numenor · Author: Dostoevsky's Mouse · Races: Men:
Incomplete · ID: 242
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 14:11:50
Your descriptions are extraordinary! The Battle of the Poros, the
eruption of Mount Doom, Ecthelion taking his sons hand in
poorly-disguised shock and fear. Denethors cool appraisal of Thorongil,
upon their first meeting, is particularly memorable: [this young
wanderer, in his tarnished mail and muddied boots, was no stranger to
the halls of great men&]

I really like the way youve shown Denethor as almost-but-not-quite
recognizing who Thorongil must be. Is the truth just beyond his reach,
or is he in denial because of his own too-human desire to be his
fathers favorite, despite the conflicts between them?

Your language is like poetry ( I was delighted to see, on your website,
that you do also write poetry.) I found this line particularly
enchanting [He had about him a bold but graceful strength that called to
mind old songs of Elven warrior-kings, and tales of lost Númenor.]

I dont usually read works-in-progress: Im all about instant
gratification! but Im looking forward with great anticipation to the
continuation of this unusual tale.
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Title: Memorabilia and Other Useful Things · Author: Illwynd · Times:
The Great Years: The Fellowship · ID: 714
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 14:12:49
(laughs out loud) All Pippins youthful joy is represented here, in the
carved blue stone and the scrap of his ladyloves dress [& my first and
only. Someday I think I will marry her.] and even the reminder of his
first overindulgence in ale. But there are symbols of his growing
maturity and wisdom, too, souvenirs of many lands, and last but not
least, a token, a relic of the hero who saved his life. The punch line
of the tale, though, is simply marvelous, and perfectly in character for
that most winsome and irrepressible of hobbits.
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Title: Of Stone and Fire · Author: Werecat · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 124
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-07-23 15:11:21
Once again, Werecat gives us an original insight into a canon
commonplace--Galadriel's gift of three strands of hair to Gimli.

Feanor's rage to learn that he is considered less worthy than one of the
dwarves is described as [a breath of fierce temperament] and [the wrath
of fire], as befits his name ("Spirit of Fire") and personality. The
fiery smith is contrasted with the stolid dwarve who is a stoneworker as
well as a metalsmith. Gimli stands quietly on the shore of Valinor,
rejoicing in the beauty of the Undying lands even though his face is
stonelike in its lack of expression. The final line

[Stone fears not the fire.]

ties together the two halves of the drabble.

An intriguing pair of scenes is conveyed in a few words skillfully
chosen. (I am a little ashamed to admit that I laughed at Feanor's
umbrage; this slight would gall him so.) Well done!
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Title: The Will · Author: LydiaB · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 770
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 17:20:49
This drabble is subtle and most fitting for the challenge it was written
for. Also, when you notice the date it was posted on... this is a gem
and a true encore for the professor himself. I think he would love it
and would appraise the author for this magnificent style. But even so,
once a reader and Tolkien fan reads this, goosebumbs are there on your
skin and many thoughts cross your mind with the visual the author leaves
you with. Was the Red Book of Westmarch an anchor for Tolkien to survive
the First World War, in the trenches? Thought provoking and a stunning
drabble. What a gem!
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Title: Immortality · Author: LydiaB · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 494
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 17:31:39
Here is such a moving drabble in which every words tells you so much
about the love Amroth feels for Nimrodel. His determination to find her,
surviving through so many ages. This is such a beautiful and touching
drabble in a unique and evocating style. Even though it are 100 words we
get to read here, this drabble speaks volumes and tickles your
imagination to wonder what happened, what will happen and if he indeed
finds the woman he so deeply loves. Very touching and well written,
thanks for giving us such great insight in this character Lydia!
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Title: First Anarchist · Author: Robinka · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 316
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 17:54:02
This is an excellent and very haunting drabble written by Robinka. In
this short piece, she captures Melkor's malice so extremely well: his
malice, his ambition, and his chaotic and rebellious nature. But Robinka
also this drabble shows us how Melkor was created by Eru. To me it feels
like this Valar was forced into the darkness, forced to create and
listen to Eru himself. Who would not feel provocated by such actions and
meekly listen? Something was unleashed and this is the very moment
captured in Robinka's words. Cleverly written, this short insight in
Melkor's mind is creepy, but also disturbing and sad at the same time. I
admire that Robinka wrote Melkor and gave us an outstanding peek into
his thoughts. To me this drabble is very thought provoking and
stimulating to fetch the Silmarillion and read the Ainulindale anew.
Thank you for writing and sharing it with us!
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Title: Fear and Loathing in Middle Earth · Author: vladazhael · Genres:
Humor: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 407
Reviewer: Robinka · 2006-07-23 18:08:35
Ah, comic genius! This drabble is clever and utterly funny. I couldn't
stop giggling. What a hilarious situation you pictured here. I still
have this image in my mind. Wonderfully done!
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Title: Stigmas · Author: Robinka · Genres: Drama: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Series · ID: 105
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 18:10:54
All seven are so beautiful Robinka; I have a hard time deciding which
drabble appeals to me the most. Every time when I think: ah this is the
best, I either read the next or the previous one and... I just cannot
make up my mind. But you have a gift of portraying Turin in a way I
never read before. Also, I am impressed in how you can take a deadly sin
and apply that on Turins character or events in his life.

[Shall I pass you another glass? No...? Why, pray tell?

I told you to be careful.]

Oi this part for gluttony, it carries so much... malice and
foreshadowing of what is to come...

[Yes, you heard me correctly. Do not treat me as if I were a stubborn boy.]

A great line that mirror's Turin's pride perfectly. It almost makes me
want to pull him out of this drabble and give him a lecture.

[Death shall become my dearest friend, for naught but forgiveness
comforts, and there is, in the whole world, no greater hate than mine!]

This line is magnificent, it makes you wonder if he truly forgives
himself or is still wrapped up in his wrath. Or if he ever manages to
let go.

[Yet I know that every breath adds to his suffering since he has
realized he will never be a tear drop on your face.]

Oh the pain and sorrow, so tangible here... I love how you wrote this scene.

[Where are you? Why are you running from me? Did I not tell you, have no
fear for you can trust me? I am no danger. Please, stop for a moment so
I can reach you. Do not run away.]

This is giving me the shivers, I can see the whole scene from the book
happening, how both want to find each other, but the dragon does not
allow them... how bittersweet.

[You are a riddle I desire to discover, tenderly revealing all your
secrets.]

I often wondered what drove Túrin to make his, unknown to him, sister
his lover. What drove him to do so? I think the cited line above says it
all.

[I am no longer a man worthy of forgiveness. Those who could have
granted me their compassion died at my hand or by my fateful deeds.]

What a great final drabble to make it full circle with the previous
ones. His greed to die... so powerful Robinka. All seven are incredibly
well written and as a whole they fit so well together! Your energy and
time you spend researching the background of every drabble within this
drabble is simply astonishing. Combine this with clear and engaging
prose, a true gem!
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Title: House of Finwë · Author: Ghettoelleth · Times: First Age and
Prior: Incomplete · ID: 100
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 18:24:21
These drabble series leave me in awe every time I read it. Every single
one leaves me in awe, I drink in every word that is said, and the
setting set is so evocative that it gives me the shivers. The Fëanor
drabble mirrors, to me, his is thoughts Fëanor had during his demise. In
300 words, Ghettoelleth gives us insight on what passed through Fëanor's
mind: his determination, loyalty (especially to his father and his house
and his urging to pass it on to his sons) What a piece of well-written
work. This part chills me to the bone and somehow reads more gratifying
than what you can read in the Silmarillion. Chapter four is one of my
favourites, the author's perspective on Maglor's fate. I can go on and
on about that one: the choosing of wording, Maglor's pride and yet,
despair...

The drabble from Maedhros' perspective mirrors how the Silmaril of fire
drove him insane that much to jump into the abyss. I remember reading in
the Silmarillion that Maedhros, after finally recovering one of the
Silmaril's, cast himself into a chasm. Tolkien never elaborated on that
as far as I can remember, but when I read this double drabble, I feel
like it is finally shown to me. I use the word show here on purpose
because with this writing, Ghettoelleth creates the image of the red
haired jubilant Noldo standing at the edge of that said chasm. His
thoughts, regrets, pride (the way he shows the Silmaril feels to me that
Fëanor's pride shows through in Maedhros) are all mirrored in here and
the conclusion is just as chilling and thrilling at the same time. The
drabble of Caranthir, in this one his train of thoughts is as dark as
himself; the way in which he views the death of his two other brothers
is just superb. I never came across a story title so haunting and
fitting for the content that will follow it. A mighty warrior being
slain, his struggle with his demise. This part illustrates that
perfectly:[Unprepared to meet my fate, for much remains undone in my
life; I shifted my focus toward evading the high arc of steel, missing
the soft ring of blade unsheathing.] What a visual!

Finwë's lament is very thought provoking. The first unbegotten gets
slain, the first killing of an elf on Aman. The way he slips away, the
moment he hears Miriel's voice, the woman he loved so deeply, just gives
me the absolute shivers. The authors words mirror his regrets, the
could and should have's, the deep love this once so mighty High King
feels for his sons and wives. But that is just layer one of this
drabble: the events, the social mechanisms and the emotions regarding
it. When I read it again, I noticed a different layer as well, with
subtlety you convey the impact death has on an elf, when the hroa of it
is damaged beyond repair. The innocence and at some degree the
foolishness if thinking to remain living until the end of time is
captured so impressively, to me it feels as if Finwë thinks it is not
happening. Ghettoelleth writes him in this splendid manner, thank you
for that! More than ever, these drabble series feels very complete with
him in it, especially since you have Finwë realising he should have set
order in his House long before. Because the fate of the Noldor could
have been so drastically different if he did.

Amrod's double drabble is a piece that no matter how often I read it, I
discover something new that surprises me and more questions keep on
surfacing. These drabble series are such a treat to read, they are
fluently written, Ghettoelleth crawls under the characters skin and she
shows us their thoughts, raw emotions. Not only that, they show the
reader a different side of every member of the house of Finwë that you
dont see very often. Just magnificent and I am looking forward to the
coming drabbles!
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Title: Legend · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 933
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-07-23 18:29:25
When a craft guild sends the gift of a tapestry depicting her fight with
the Witch-King, Eowyn reflects on her memories of that day. Her thoughts
are reminiscent of the hobbits' reaction to their fame after returning
to the Shire -- the people who were not present during the great events
of that time can never understand what happened or what was at risk.
With the passage of time, the story will become simplified and (to some
degree) trivialized. The stylized, cartoonish depiction in the tapestry
is a wonderful metaphor for this simplification of history.

Even though Eowyn is an old woman in this piece, she clearly remembers
the details of her fight, which is to be expected. There is a strong
sensory component to memory, and Raksha cleverly incorporates these
sensory memories in the narrative -- the foul smell of the winged beast,
the unnatural sound of the Witch-King's voice. The idea that Eowyn, like
Frodo, might still feel pain from the wound dealt by the Witch-King is
an interesting concept. I also like the idea that the shared experience
of rescue from the Shadow is yet another bond between Eowyn and Faramir.
It is amusing and realistic that her little grandson seems impudent to
this old woman; her failing health would leave her with little patience.

A fine job with a very thoughtful piece of writing.

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Title: The Fords of Isen · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Adventure · ID: 41
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2006-07-23 18:41:47
This is such a wonderful tale! Im awed by how skillfully youve woven
the setting and the story-within-the-story together. The opening scene
is cozy and unassuming: aged grandparents, caring for the grandson for a
few days; the grandmother occupied with her weaving and handiwork,
listening and commenting a bit cynically over what she thinks is one
more war story until she finally realizes this is a tale she has never
heard from her husband before. We join her and the young grandson,
spellbound by the fire. The grandfathers storytelling skills are
impeccable: simple, droll, without additional embroidery; it is the
vividness of his recollection that makes it extraordinary.

As always, your attention to detail is fabulous: Théodreds careful
cleaning of his sword, to protect it from rust; the squelching sound of
Boromirs boots; his continual dripping of cold water everywhere he
goes. Their banter is a delight, their affectionate companionship (and
obvious chagrin at the methods of their demise) shining throughout their
conversation. Théodreds play-by-play narrative of his final battle,
complete with diagrams, would have fascinated the Captain-General.
Obviously the passion of old campaigners for war stories doesnt end
even after they are dead!. Youve written Boromir and Théodred both so
perfectly here that Im speechless with delight each time I reread this.
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Title: Another Man's Cage · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Drama · ID: 136
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 18:49:19
This is one of my favourite epic stories featuring the house of Finwe.
Over a year Dawn Fegalund kept her readers glued to the screen by
posting a weekly chapter  received a lot of mutterings when she missed
a week and hugs when she posted an extra chapter. This story covers a
full year within the household of Fëanor. It starts with a character
most Tolkien fans will dislike, but I can completely imagine that when
you read the epilogue, like me you will embrace this character fully.
Well, that happened to me!

In this story you witness the growth of the characters closely, but what
is also amazing is how you see a  fairly unknown fandom writer  grows
into writing as well. I know the author planned re-writes, but as a
reader you are simply swept away by her magnificent storytelling. So
what can happen in one year in this family? What do you learn about the
members of the house of Finwe? What is it like to be a son of Feanor, to
be part of such a big family where every member has their unique
talents? What is life in Tirion or Formenos like? What can one year do
to a Fëanor and his family? I can wholeheartedly advise you to put up
your feet and become a fellow reader who will be swept away the first
paragraph you read. I am glad I discovered this author and this writer.
Since I started to read this, I wanted to read more of this author. This
story is a journey full of discoveries about a time period in Tolkiens
universe, his characters, and the world they live in. Vivid
descriptions, excellent characterisations, flowing dialogue and loads of
moments where you will sit on the edge of your seat wanting to know what
will happen next& its all there for you.
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Title: Paradox of the Fourth Age · Author: Alassante · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 106
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 19:37:11
Paradox of the Fourth age is an engaging story, which sometimes gives
you the idea you are reading two stories. But soon after I continued
reading it, it became clear to me that the author tells a story in a
story in such a powerful manner that you cannot help yourself to care
deeply for the characters. The first time I read the prologue, I was
blown away by the premise, my thoughts immediately ran off into
different directions, leaving me as a reader thinking what will happen.
I was thirsty to find out what would happen next and was very happy to
know more chapters were waiting for me. I experience this feeling every
time I finish a new chapter, hoping that all does end well, but
Alassante shows us in her storytelling that little does have to happen
to go astray.

Now that I am completely up-to-date with the story, I cannot wait to
read what will happen next, especially now that the story is completely
tied to the Ring War, giving me as a reader, a different perspective on
the events.

Alassantes prose is elegant and engaging, the way she structured the
story, with two life stories being told at the same time was something I
never encountered before and gives me a deeper meaning. So actually,
whenever she shares a new chapter with us, I feel all excited to find
out what will happen next to the characters that came to life to me in
this tale.
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Title: Never Let Go · Author: ann_arien · Genres: Drama: First Age Elves
· ID: 621
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 19:52:51
What a beautiful and heartwrenching vignette. For a moment I hope that
there will be a chapter two, written from Maedhros perspective, but I
love the way Ann Arien crawled into Fingon's heart & head.
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Title: In This Silence I Am Sinking · Author: Ghettoelleth · Genres:
Drama: General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 222
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 19:53:54
Ghettoelleths voice and approach gives me the absolute chills. The
reasoning of Mandos and Tulkas' confusion about this maddnes perfectly
pictures that Eru's Ainur only could comprehend a part of Erus will (or
deliberately does not show everything to them), but together they do not
united properly to prevent the utter marring Melkor will do to Aman, the
elves and Middle Earth. Tulkas alone can see the concequences of the
unchaining  since he was not one of the Ainur in the beginning, but
later on joined - where Mandos cannot foresee that. I just can see
Tulkas standing there, his lips pursed together, fist clenched because
its going to happen anyway and he can clean up the mess. And all of
this, Ghettoelleth writes in a true drabble. The reader gets a great
visual presented about one of the most important events in the history
of Middle Earth. And that just 100 words! Simply amazing and thanks for
sharing. A masterpiece.
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Title: Hidden Wonders · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 420
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 19:54:58
This drabble gives me a fuzzy and happy feeling! It feels so good to
read a happy and content Eowyn! And Marta, what a lovely image you give
us at the end. I can pictured them sitting on the couch together,
although I wonder if they get around to do any reading. Yes, this
drabble is one of my favourite drabbles I discovered so thanks for sharing!
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Title: How Grima Lost His Eyebrows · Author: NeumeIndil · Times: Late
Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 800
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-07-23 19:55:17
Oh my goodness, I need tissues to dry my eyes from laughter. What a
delightful drabble with a magnificent story hidden in it. I love the
interaction between those two with an excellent characterisation. And
yes, as the icing on the cake, Neumeindil explains to us why Grima in
the movies has no eyebrows. Excellent writing in a great style in which
the author errupts into laughter while reading it!
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Title: The White Tree · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 94
Reviewer: Madeleine · 2006-07-23 20:00:31
Although I have a quite different perception of the characters of
Aragorn and Faramir and their relationship, I have thoroughly enjoyed
every single story LH has written so far. You simply have to get hooked
by her mature style and the depth of her storylines.

This short story is a true gem, giving account of the beginning of the
relationship of the two men. Both in a way still wary of each other, a
simple misconception on Faramirs part and his fierce reaction to
Aragorns apparently secretive removal of the old tree of Gondor and
its replacement by the sapling, causes a first trial in the relationship
of those two, who will have to work together in the future for the good
of Gondor.

The authors describes the early dealings of the returned King and his
newly appointed Steward in a convincing way and with a unique plot,
which blends very well into Tolkiens universe.

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Title: Elfwine · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Fixed-Length Ficlet
· ID: 70
Reviewer: Madeleine · 2006-07-23 20:25:30
Éomers enthusiasm over the birth of his son and heir virtually bubbles
out of this drabble. I hope its going to last when the babe causes his
parents a few sleepless nights. Notabene, the parents and not just the
mother.
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Title: Lobelia's List · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 201
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:32:17
I found this to be a delightful use of 100 words and wonderfully
in-character. It's always fun to find something like this, where the
strength of characterization (in Lobelia's case: Attitude!) comes so
clearly from the under-currents through the specific word choices. Well
done!
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Title: Frodo: The Next Generation · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races:
Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 272
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:34:48
I enjoyed this rare crossover treat between my favorite two universes. I
claim quite a few fandoms, but Trek is my oldest and dearest love, and a
close second in my heart to Tolkien.

I especially appreciate the 'voices' of the characters being true to
character.
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Title: Tending · Author: Elemmire · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey Havens ·
ID: 769
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:35:08
This is very touching. I have to admit it isn't something that I've
wondered about and you make me feel the lack. I think it's admirable the
way you use this story, this topic, to bring out the background life,
the real life that continues on around the grand epic. Well done.
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Title: Hair · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 321
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:35:28
HAHAHA! Very funny. I can just imagine what the clean and neat Legolas
must have thought among the very-hairy Hobbits - not the mention the Men
and even the beard Istari. Gimli must have really pushed his limits of
tolerance and/or amazement.
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Title: Pity · Author: Elana · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 152
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:36:16
how incredibly insightful. That the ring would use Frodo's kindness
against home. I have always wondered how our dear sweet, strong Frodo
could have fallen to temptation, even to the One Ring, and this drabble
answers that very well. very well done.
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Title: The Last Thing He Said · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama · ID: 294
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:36:34
I especially enjoy alternate points of view such as you have here and I
find these to be well done. The reader is dropped smoothly into the
character and never jostled away from them. I like the steadfast loyalty
the emotional, simple questions.


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Title: Wizardry · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 179
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:37:26
I found this to be delightful. I've always remembered reading the
descriptions both of Gandalf and Aragorn and thought that Tolkien
intended both of them to have a good humor, and I like the way you have
portrayed that quality in this double drabble.
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Title: Horse Thief · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 365
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:37:50
Well, you know this was certain to catch my attention with the title,
and the note that it contains most of my favorite characters - and I
found it very enjoyable. I can't blame little Aragorn for picking the
horse he did, it seems like a most excellent choice, and I pity poor
Elladan for making such a mistake and having to apologize. Stubborn boy
indeed! I love your descriptions of Aragorns eyes and expressions. Very
well done.
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Title: Suspicion · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 791
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:38:05
I like the suprise and contrast of the suspicion of how right and how
wrong Sam was with Strider and later Gollum. Of course, he's right,
Aragorn can be quite dangerous if you're not on his side.
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Title: Legacy · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 299
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:38:25
Well done. I like how you pulled from the history to show the future. I
agree that Pippin would think of Boromir at a time like this.
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Title: The Remains of Power · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 228
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:38:42
What a fun way to pay a bet! A flock of ducks - very good. :) You've
done a wonderful job with this, I especially liked how you seamlessly
worked the fun elements in this otherwise frightful glimpse into
Sauruman's mind just after his downfall. I love the terms you use,
'wood-demons' and Gandalf's dangles.
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Title: Tinúviel, Tinúviel · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance: Rohan ·
ID: 103
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:39:01
I am always amazed at your ability and word-smithing, the choicest, most
visual, most powerful words, none wandering, none wasted. This is
another fine work, deep and insightful, not just a bit of a story, but
fully immersed in the minds and emotions of the characters. Well done.
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Title: Master of Shadows · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama · ID: 245
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:39:16
I know I've reviewed this before, but I can't help commenting again to
give you points here. :) As is all your writing each of these chapters
are powerfully emotional, visceral and emotional. I especially enjoy
your insights into the mind and motives of the Witch King.
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Title: The King's Surgeon · Author: SurgicalSteel · Races: Men:
Incomplete · ID: 845
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:39:34
One thing I especially enjoy about the MEFAs is finding new authors
whose work I haven't read before and I was delighted to find you and
this unique story. I especially enjoy this type of gap-filler, the
filling in of the lives of others behind the main stage of the main
saga. Well done, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Title: A Darkened Heart · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 774
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:39:50
B7, you know how much I enjoy this particular drabble. I find it to be
especially insightful and touching emotionally. I am a Boromir fan and
always have a difficult time reconciling with his betrayal and fall in
spite of his sacrifice. This helps to me see him, I think, as Tolkien
meant for him to be seen as the Darkness entered his heart. Thank you
for making this available.
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Title: Elemental Spirits · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 693
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:40:11
Marigold, I truely enjoyed these insightful descriptions of the
fellowship. I found them to be especially touching and well-done - each
keyed tightly into the character as I imagine that Tolkien himself meant
them to be. This is the kind of fanfiction that I most deeply appreciate
- that which reflects the depth of the characters and their ties to Arda
which is so much a part of all of us.
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Title: Spirit of Fire · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 196
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:40:39
Hi Marta, I like this a lot. So often, Feanor's madness is portrayed,
people seem to forget, or maybe it isn't as dramatic to write of his
greatness rather than his insanity. We're told that he was the greatest
in many ways and it was lovely to read this drabble about him from
Nerdanel's viewpoint, speaking of her love for him.
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Title: Claws · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 835
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:41:06
LOL! Bad!Raven

The thing that strikes me about your writing is the strength, both
visual and emotional, or what you *don't* say. Your writing is so tight,
your words choices so precise, that you are able to pack an incredible
amount of impact into a (much too quick) 100 words. I honestly can't
think of anyone else who could use both corvine and hidey-hole in the
point of view of one character and make it a consistant voice!

I find this particular drabble to be as fine an example of it's kind as
I can ever remember seeing - focusing in to look at the technical
elements of setup, conflict and resolution, even an entirely belivable
POV switch with such strong and distinctive voices - then pulling back
to re-read the amazingly smooth narrative is a double delight. Thank
you! Becky
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Title: The Oathbreakers · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 42
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:41:27
Oh, this is tear-wrenching, to consider Boromir amoung those, but also
fitting, for what he did and to grant him release from that. This is the
kind of drabble that I especially love, one that will settle the reader
in and then throw them out for a loop and leave them gasping for breath
at the end.
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Title: Distant Lands · Author: Acacea · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 76
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:41:47
*giggle* I like this a lot, sweet Faramir obsessing on Eowyn, seeing her
homeland as so much more exciting than other, exotic, far-distant lands.
Well done.
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Title: Call To Arms · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Humor: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 857
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:42:05
HAHAHAHA!! Love the twist at the end - it took me totally by surprise
and I laughed out loud.
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Title: Midwinter in Mordor · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 872
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:42:25
*shudder* - very gruesome. I loved it!
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Title: Inheritance · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 524
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:42:43
I liked this a lot. We tend not to think of the ways in which Faramir
was like Denethor, but I liked how you used the comparison as well as
the contrast.
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Title: A Length of Haradric Silk · Author: annmarwalk · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 69
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:43:07
I really enjoyed this, both your tone and your style. Your Hobbits are
wonderfully Hobbity and well in character. I especially loved your
description of the Haradric Silk, I can well imagine it. I am glad that
Sam didn't resist the purchase and how happy it will make Rosie.
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Title: With Bow and Blade · Author: Lady Aranel · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 282
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:44:06
as I've said before, I'm amazed at this incredible blending and merging
of two chapters, each with a different character in a similar but
different situation, the layers and their reflections on/off each other.
- and all this on top of the personal emotion you always manage to weave
through your work.

I do believe that Elves would feel or know that kind of connection, and
be able to share strength and support, especially as they both were
fighting, and I can easily believe, as in your story, that father and
son would indeed be fighting side by side although they were so many
miles away.

Above all - it was all very Elvish! ~ Very well done!
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Title: Preparing The Way · Author: Lady Aranel · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 284
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:45:51
I can't read this without the tears rolling, the emotions in your
writing pull too much personal pain to the surface, but like Legolas,
with that pain comes the love and the depth of the relationship - better
to have had and lost than never to have had. How can it be that the
richer and more meaningful the bond, the deeper the pain, but how could
it be any different. All of us suffer this, in one way or another, when
we lose loved ones.

I've pulled this screen up a hundred times to try to express how this
story touches me, I'll simply have to trust that you know. I feel that
you do, you and I each have stood beside each other as we've both
suffered these kinds of losses and I thank you for that - not just for
being there for me, but also for allowing me to comfort you in what
small ways the distance allows.
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Title: After the End · Author: Ottis413 · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 781
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:46:09
Ottis, I especially appreciate your writing for a couple of reasons. I
love that you write canon outside the normal boundries - it's just
almost original Middle-earthian fiction, if there were such a thing.

I like that you don't pull punches on difficult subject matters and that
your writing is not only canonical but historical as well. It's
difficult to do, but you make it seem natural.

I also enjoy your characterization, I like that your good people do
'bad', and that we have glimpses of goodness in the baddies. That's a
staple of realistic and engaging characters. It's what helps the reader
identify with the characters and makes them care what happens to them.

Very good job with this one.
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Title: The Parting Gift · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 948
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:46:29
This is beautiful and touching. I love the thought that the silver harp
he carries is a gift from Maglor. It is Tolkienesque in the way it ties
the ages together and brings threads from the first age into the third.
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Title: Soldier's Luck · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 309
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:46:46
'Luck' indeed. I especially love this oh-so-very-much in-character view
of Faramir. Thoughtful, careful and precise - I can easily visualize him
in my mind as I read the things you write him doing.
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Title: Last Defence of the City · Author: Branwyn · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 96
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:47:07
I have to admit, not something I've ever read before. One of the most
difficult bits of realism in Tolkien's world is the hard truth about
men, that they fail and I truely enjoyed this alternate view of
Denethor. Thank you for writing and sharing this.
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Title: Tales of Life · Author: Ainu Laire · Times: Multi-Age: Incomplete
· ID: 235
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:47:26
Ainu, I haven't read much of your work before, but found this here and
very much enjoyed the snippets and episodes of life you present. I
especially like your characterization of Aragorn, human and kingly at
the same time.
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Title: Unchanged · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 926
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:47:42
I'm sure the rumors were flying, and more as the years passed. it's
interesting to see this particular thought, and I have to agree with
Rory - age has many advantages.
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Title: The Groomsman · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Dwarves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:47:58
I find this to be a lovely view of Gimli and quite in character in
showing the strength of Dwarves, strong and steady as Arda itself - in
all things..
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Title: A Lesser and Alien Race · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 683
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:48:16
Ah! and so history strives to repeat it'self? I love this wonderful
reminder of how the threads are tied throughout Tolkien's histories -
Lesser? some will say so, some will have compassion and some will see
the truth. Well done. I enjoyed this glimpse of the past.
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Title: Dark Appetites · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 833
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:48:31
Like Mother, Like Daughter - again I'm reminded of one of the reasons I
love Tolkien's body of works as a whole, the strength and consistancy -
the completeness that runs through it all. - the differences and the
similarities of Ungoliant and Shelob, that to write about Shelob's
brooding malice and hunger reflects back on Ungoliant herself.

It's hard not to repeat myself when I've leaving reviews for you, I
start stumbling over the words of praise and get them tangled. :) - at
any rate, another one well done.
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Title: Forlorn Hope · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 301
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:48:47
Nancy, this is heart-rending. You touch at the heart of Faramir and his
men as they ride. There could be no looking back in a ride like that.
While reading this, the movie scene of them riding out came back strong
in my mind - the strength of their resolution and dispair. Very well done.
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Title: Just a Little Shove · Author: Inglor · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 798
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:49:11
LOL! The everlasting question. Should he or shouldn't he have ... ?
Maybe Elrond hears The Music .... maybe he's just an old softie.

As humorous as this is, it also speaks with an underlying depth and
strength of truth - it reflects the difference of how Smeagol stole the
ring with murder while Bilbo's actions were of pity. Should Elrond have
killed his nephew? He could have I'm sure, I'm just as sure that he had
sound reasons not to - love of his house, his family, or some distance
foreknowledge? Imagine all the suffering that could have been avoided -
but what good also? Certainly it's possible that his daughter wouldn't
have married Aragorn, and it's through them that Luthien's blood is
still seen in the world today. It's a difficult thing to weigh - the
price of keeping evil in the world in order to have the good that's
highlighted by it's presence.
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Title: Making the Legends of Our Times · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 860
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:49:27
I don't usually care too much for 'cute', but this was very sweet, and I
liked the twist at the end - ambiguous as too how many generations.
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Title: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship · Author: Elana · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 150
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:49:43
hehehe. Delightful! I can't imagine Gandalf not smoking, the pipe seems
so much a part of him, but what a lovely imagine of him learning it from
the Hobbits.
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Title: Elfstone · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 252
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:49:59
This is especially visual and emotional. I don't believe I've ever read
this scene before in fanfiction and i think these days, that's difficult
to do. Well done!
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Title: Midsummer's Day · Author: MysteriousWays · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 980
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:50:17
This is a beautiful moment, emotional and well-written. I like the
thought of Frodo in the sun and the warmth, even though I know he did
sail West, I like the thought of him having some peace at Bag End in the
meantime.
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Title: Drift · Author: Ribby · Times: The Great Years: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 203
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:50:38
oh, this was very well done. I especially love odd and unusual
perspectives and this certainly fits the bill. You gave enough question
as to 'who' and answered just in time to hook then reward the reader. I
love the thought of the boat being nudged in that way.
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Title: The Painting · Author: LuthienTinuviel · Times: Multi-Age:
Incomplete · ID: 771
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:50:56
I enjoyed this, in part because it seems especially Tolkienesque to me
with the weaving in of your modern cultural beliefs and legends as he
did with the ancient Elvish legends and other tales (as well as creating
many of his own, woven in). I feel that it's both fun and respectful in
keeping to his ideals.

I liked your original character and felt she is well-fleshed out and
believeable and I felt your foreshadowing and suspense was especially
well-done.
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Title: Thirsty · Author: Elfhild · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 319
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:51:16
This is a shining example of what I like to see in a drabble, powerful,
emotional, evocative - all in such a few words. Elfhild gives us a
chilling close-up, maybe too close, view of Thuringwethil, who, IMO, is
one of Tolkien's most under-used characters. I love how this highlights
her thirst, her casual mistake in drinking too much and her cold
acceptance of the death of her lover.
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Title: Homecomings · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 225
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:51:33
Marta, I like this series a lot. I especially enjoy the insight of the
various perspectives. I think Gloin facing Gimli and Legolas was my
favorite, with Thranduil a close second - it's hard to pick, but they
certainly work well as a set.
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Title: A stranger Among us, or, Here and Back Again. · Author: Ottis413
· Times: Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 296
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:51:49
Ottis, I think this was the first fic of yours that I read and I liked
it so much that I've been following you around ever since ...not
*exactly* like a stalker-fan :) ... I like this a lot, very enjoyable
and I especially appreciate your description and characterization of
Elrond. He's been my first favorite for as long as I can remember, my
First Love, so to speak and it touches me to see him so very well done
in a modern setting. It gives me hope that I may find him one day. :)
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Title: Revenge is a dish best served cold · Author: Lialathuveril ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 297
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-07-23 21:52:05
oh gosh, what to say about this one. delightful! I love the interplay
between the guys, the groomsman and the in-laws - wonderfully in
character, the royal 'gentleman' (ahem!) 'treating' each other in such
meaningful fashion.

it's a tribute to this story, that the bones of it are set well enough,
that the reader easily imagines the continuation of such games and
pranks throughout the lives of these families.

Well done.!
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