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Title: Elanor of Westmarch: Still There · Author: Baranduin · Genres:
Drama: Final Partings · ID: 183
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-23 12:52:19
Spoilers!
There are so many little things that tie us to the lives we have
chosen; and for Elanor it is a quilt, one that had once covered the
bed of Frodo Baggins. After taking leave of her father one last time
she finds comfort in it.

A sweet tale, filled with the longing such partings bring and the
tearing ache as we think of the choice between loves departed and
loves remaining.

Title: Fidelis · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 612
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-07-23 13:18:14
This is a beautifully written story. The OC character death brought me
to tears, but it fits the story. The conflict in this story is set up
gradually and the tension is heightened from chapter to chapter with
just the right pacing.

The story is well-balanced between narrative and dialogue. The
backstory of the characters is thrown in in just the right-sized bites.

Aragorn is torn between his oath as a healer and what he thinks is
best for his patient. The two sides of the conflict are embodied by
Kenuric, an OC character, and Legolas, who both have strong arguments
for their desired cause of action, with Aragorn caught in the middle.
After the conversation Aragorn had with Kenuric, I thought he had the
right of it, only to be swayed by Legolas' reasoning.

Making the whole situation even more difficult is an underlying issue
between Aragorn and Legolas, which was never acknowledged, but now
comes to a head.

The characters, canon and original, are deftly drawn. They all have
their own personalities with their quirks and faults. My favorite
character is Kenuric, who has grown a lot from the time of [The Taming
of the Badger] to this story.

I love the burial rites Legolas and Aragorn carry out at the end of
the story. It is a fitting ritual.

Title: Seas of Fate · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 487
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-07-23 13:18:48
Spoilers!
In this story Legolas seeks advice from Imrahil about the sea. I like
Imrahil's correction of Legolas' ideas about the sea. The story has a
melancholy feel to it which stems from the description of Legolas'
sealonging, which Imrahil, at least on a basic level, can understand
courtesy of the distant elven blood in his line.

Title: Symbols of Love · Author: Larner · Genres: Adventure · ID: 130
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-07-23 13:19:23
This is an exciting step for the two boys, going on their first patrol
with their fathers.

I love the way in which you show how much they love being counted
among the members of the patrol, but at the same time showing that
they are not quite grown up in Elboron's impulsive deed.

I loved the story of the quilt, although I'm not sure it is quite
practical to drag along on patrols.

Title: Wars of the Valar · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Longer Works · ID: 3
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-07-23 13:20:08
This story concentrates on the Valar. Each of the Valar and some of
their chief Maia gets their own distinctive voice and personality.
Since there is little known aside from their general occupation about
the Valar, it is fascinating to watch how the author incorporates
their primary functions into their personalities and characteristics.

My personal favorite is Namo, who we see grow and come into his own
throughout the story. I love the sense of time going by in eons during
this story, since these are immortals and time naturally has another
meaning for them than for us.

The story is grim and dark in places, but there is always a good dose
of humor to lighten the mood. I love the banter between Orome and Namo
in the last chapters published and can't wait for more updates.

Title: All That Remained · Author: Allee · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 155
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-07-23 13:25:10
Spoilers!
I love this story because Gilraen's grief about Arathorn's death is
portrayed here so different than in the few other stories I have read
about this topic. The story is very dark in places and as a reader
with a clear rational mind you ask yourself how can she not see what
is right in front of her? But grief is a strange thing and can take on
many faces.

Gilraen's grief brings to the surface another grief in Elrond's
household which has not been dealt with in a long time. I love it how
Gilraen and the twins help each other in their different ways of
coping with grief one breath at a time.

Gilraen in this story becomes a person in her own right with flaws and
strengths she has to discover in herself. She is allowed to grieve or
she just does it, no matter what anyone else expects from her. Elrond
seems to be the only one able to understand her. I like the
description of the reaction of the visitors to her behavior, since I
think this is typical for people not really close to the person grieving.

I like it that the twins are each their own person, too. They might
look alike, but their personality is very different from each other
and therefore their ways of coping with grief.

The pain will not go away immediately, but at the end of the story
there is a ray of hope on the horizon.

Title: And so our friendship began... · Author: Amarok · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 281
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-07-23 13:26:35
Spoilers!
This is another of those Aragorn meets Legolas for the first time
stories. And while the premise is not new, the execution is unique. In
this story Legolas meets Aragorn for the first time as prisoner of a
band of humans, Aragorn among them. The meeting starts out bad and
gets worse from there.

Legolas' impression of these humans is not the best and when he
realizes who Aragorn is, old prejudices and stories from his father
about the treacherous Isildur and humans fighting on Sauron's side
during the Last Alliance raise their ugly head.

I was fascinated by the way Legolas interprets any of Aragorn's
actions through the filter of his prejudice and comes to conclusions,
the reader doesn't expect in a story about the beginning of the
friendship between the two. Through the filter of Legolas' logic all
his actions make a twisted sense, but the reader, at least this
reader, wants to shake him and tell him to really look at this human.

Aragorn is still very young in this story. His reaction to Legolas'
seeming irrationality when this is an elf and so should be an ally to
him, is touching to read.

I love the way both characters are drawn, although Legolas is the more
unusual characterization.

There are some heart stopping moments in this story until finally the
two see eye to eye.

I can only recommend this story to every Legolas/Aragorn fan.

Title: The Haradric Whore and Her Son · Author: annmarwalk/EdorasLass
CoAuthors · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 124
Reviewer: Oshun · 2008-07-23 18:37:24
I truly enjoyed this story on so many levels. The underlying
relationship with Boromir and Theodred is beautifully portrayed if
largely implicit. The poignancy of the interpretation of loyalty in
the context of lengthy separation is handled in a human and sensitive
manner: not all high-flown, angsty, and unlikely, which is more the
norm for stories of this sort.

The descriptions of the OMC Gaersum (OMG, isn't he gorgeous) and his
mother are beautifully detailed. He was fascinating to me, because at
first I couldn't really follow where you were taking him (almost had a
moment there where I wondered he is fell somewhere on the autistic
spectrum, but you cleared that up and gave him a plausible explanation
for his social reservations and inward-looking personality).

His mother's story is sad and beautiful in its own right. I was
entranced by the level of Boromir's consideration of the boy, his
sensitivity to the cultural elements involved, and his growing
admiration for the mother. Instead of feeling that Boromir had some
how been selfish, I was left feeling that, in the end, he made both of
their lives a whole better by his choices and how he sought to handle
them.

This is a beautifully written, complex, without being either rigid and
preachy or blithely ammoral, and a fundamentally human story.


Title: The Apprentice · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains · ID: 52
Reviewer: whitewave · 2008-07-23 20:06:19
Spoilers!
Chapter One. The first few paragraphs drew me in, even if initially, I
found the scientific terms a bit "unusual" for a Tolkien fanfic. I'm
glad I pressed on. The character's cunning and extreme attention to
details seemed to me most promising, to me, that was what clinched the
deal. The way you ended the chapter left me wanting to read more,
which is just what I did and I was definitely not disappointed.

Chapter Two. The title character had me intrigued from the very
start--what will become of him? Will he turn to evil? He's managed to
keep my attention even if he is an OMC. The introduction of
Tyelperinquar and seeing how Aulendil was doing in Eregion, knowing
what he was really up to and what will eventually happen made for an
excellent start of the chapter. By this time I've managed to lose my
initial reservations about the "scientific" words and have started to
feel that they really belong to the story. Eventhough the Feanorians
are not really the focus of the story, I must say I enjoy reading all
the "side stories" you wrote about them. I loved the curve ball
question on athelas in this chapter.

Chapter Three. I shared in Samaril's surprise about his initial
"minor" tasks. It was a "huh???" moment for me. Reminded me of the
"wax on wax off" bit in Karate Kid--just kidding. Seriously, I tried
to "forget" that I know how things will end for Eregion and Aulendil.
I was torn between thinking that maybe he's not as evil as Melkor
after all. Or maybe NOT, especially seeing that he could possibly read
the thoughts of his apprentice and most likely everyone else's.

Chapter Four. I smiled at Aulendil's honesty in his line: ["I don't
bite, or at least I don't these days..."]
His admission of snoring is a nice touch, but later on I had
goodsebumps when I read about his moodiness and coldness. The mention
of Aulendil's "loved ones" and his line: [I would have been sent
summarily to the parlor to sleep had I done that at home,] had me
intrigued. Is he married or living with someone?


Chapter Five. I loved the anecdotes about Curumo very much plus it is
similar to my impression of Saruman (?). My favorite line here was:
"[...He was so stiff and humorless that he made himself
an easy target for us. The braggart yammered on and on about his
precision at drawing out a particular alloy. So one day, we oiled the
handle of his hammer...Curumo had to sweet soot for weeks
afterwards..."] And also that part about Nessa's dance slippers.

Aulendil's remark about the beauty of the countryside struck me as so
bittersweet. It seemed to me that he may or may not be "reconsidering"
his plans? His brotherly interaction with Tyelpo in this chapter was
heartbreaking since we know what's going to happen.

Chapter Six. Very interesting take on how the rings of power were
crafted. Liked the side comment about Feanaro.

Chapter Eight. I liked the line: "[...yet Elven men will not deign to
have much to do with these women. Great Yavanna, and you're the same
damn species."] Most of the pairings are between elven women and
mortal men so Aulendil's "concept" in this chapter was refreshing.


Chapter Nine. This chapter has the most chilling glimpse of the dark
side of Aulendil and his struggle with it. It reminded me of a
character I read once who had multiple personality disorder. I felt
afraid for Samaril here, I think that he has somehow reached the point
where he notices that something is amiss but just turns a blind eye to it.


Chapter Ten. This is my favorite chapter in that Samaril has come a
long way both in his talent and in his interaction with his master. If
only Samaril knew just what it was that he made. It's just so perfect
how it blends with what was written by Tolkien and how you fleshed it out.
My favorite line is: ["You are hopeless, Samaril. You just don't know
how hopeless yet."]


Chapter Eleven. Here I found myself thinking what could have
happenened had Aulendil submitted to the Valar, it's something I've
never thought I'd ever feel for a character like him. I think it was
touching that he actually misses the elves, it just adds to his
"charm" somehow.
This line gave me goosebumps: ["...Melkor, the heart of darkness,
worthy of worship and of sacrifices made on his behalf. Such worship
and sacrifice are among many things that I will bring about when
I cast the One."] It convinced me that Aulendil had lost to Gorthaur
by his own choice.

Chapter Twelve.
The last encounter of Aulendil/Gorthaur with Samaril was simply
unforgettable. Needless to say, I enjoyed this story immensely and
even if you modified the characters' names and the setting and
"de-Tolkienized" it I'd still enjoy it. It has all the right stuff
that I enjoy reading about--drama, comedy, tragedy and hope. There are
points where I am torn between analyzing just what it was that drew me
in and just sitting back and enjoying the story as it unfolds. I am
satisfied with how you tied the loose ends but could not help but wish
for more so it was great that you wrote a sequel. Thanks very much for
sharing this.




Title: Wormtongue · Author: Mariole · Races: Villains · ID: 240
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-23 20:45:13
Spoilers!
Ah--two of our favorite villains together--Lotho Sackville-Baggins and
Grima Wormtongue. Lotho cannot openly name himself the prisoner he
knows himself to be; cannot allow himself to imagine his mother isn't
just off visiting relatives in Hardbottle but instead has been dragged
to the Lockholes; cannot allow himself to accept openly that when
Sharkey has no further use for him he will be killed, although he
knows all of these--and more--are true.

And tonight as Wormtongue brings him a poorly prepared meal, the two
share fantasies--in an odd, distorted way, but completely in keeping
with their relationship--before Wormtongue follows Sharkey's final
commands regarding the Hobbit.

Well told, and satisfyingly horrible. Very much worth the read.

Title: A Problem Shared · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: Mirkwood Elves ·
ID: 169
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-23 21:25:04
Ah, Wizards--those of the late Third Age find it difficult to live
with them, and yet for all their mysterious nature they also manage to
impart knowledge through riddles and deliberately vague hints,
heartening at the same time they frustrate! I feel so for Thranduil's
frustration as well as his delight once he sees the message in the
Wizard's apparent rambling discourse.

A wonderful tale!

Title: Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus · Author:
pandemonium_213 · Genres: Poetry · ID: 50
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-23 21:29:57
Spoilers!
Oh, how wonderful as mythologist and scientist confront one another,
the scientist seeing the same beauty as the mythologist, but from a
different point of view! A wonderful poem of delight as we watch the
rebuttal made!

Title: Maglor's Harp · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Horror · ID: 660
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-23 21:46:13
Spoilers!
Lush prose, eerie in its imagery and its only hinted-at implications,
and thus well-suited for this story, as is the leisurely pace. It
lulls the readers into a false sense of security, and as the narrative
goes on, there is such a slow, gradual increase of horror that it is
paradoxically difficult to really take in the reality of what is told.

Maglor's insanity is conveyed very hauntingly in its gradual
unfolding. The view through his eyes made me shudder, this seemingly
so natural, reasonable rationalisation of needing to prepare for an
audience, of imagining an audience to which to sing to, finding the
perfect harp. His ["single-minded obsession"] to detail in his "quest"
to the exlusion of all reflection is conveyed very vividly, and I like
how this is used to describe his surroundings, to paint a picture of
the scenery at the beach.

In his search for perfection without regard to natural feelings or
conscience, without any moral compass, Maglor reminds me sharply of
Grenouille, the protagonist in Patrick Süskind's ["Das Parfum"].

Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: viv · 2008-07-23 21:50:24
The Denethor voice here is pure poetry, and in it you can hear both
his noble history and his current (as of the setting of the drabble)
palantir-induced fugue. There is a tendency when writing Denethor
circa the ring war to portray him as unthinkingly vile, as Peter
Jackson did in the movie. But Nancy Brooke hasn't gone that route
here, and in fact she never does. Even though Denethor is obviously
paranoid and distressed and under a certain thrall of Darkness, in
this short piece you can still see a spark -- small yet, but there --
of the noble Steward and attentive father he is at his core, the
character as Tolkien wrote him before the long spiral downward. Plus,
the wording itself is economical, and did I mention poetic?

Title: The Houseless · Author: Jael · Genres: Horror · ID: 178
Reviewer: viv · 2008-07-23 21:56:28
I enjoy a spooky ghost story just as much as the next former girl
scout. This one conjures nights spent around camp fires, spinning
yarns, edging closer to the fire and away from the darkness, and
generally trying to creep out my friends. However, this story
accomplishes all that ambiance and atmosphere with a Tolkienesque
twist thrown! I shivered happily through the forshadowing, the ghosty
details, and the poignant, downright *sad* ending. Throughout the
whole, I thought Jael's characterizations were very strong, and her
sense of pacing, to get the ghosty moment *just right* left me in awe.
What a great mood piece!

Title: Out, Damn'd Spot! Out, I Say! · Author: Alassante · Races:
Elves: Noldor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 260
Reviewer: viv · 2008-07-23 21:58:38
Several things stand out in this short piece (which is pretty amazing,
considering Alassante only had 100 words to work with, but she still
managed to fit all these thematic and character Issues into a bitty
little drabble). One is Maedhros's clear leadership ability, which
makes his later denial of his kingship even more tragic, even though
it was the diplomatic thing to do. Already, in this story, you can see
that he is better than Feanor at gaining the confidence and trust of
the people he's leading. Also, you can see here the intense *feeling*
of Celebrimbor. All that he did later on when he was hanging out with
the Gwaith-i-Mírdain is foreshadowed in this piece by his guilt and
obsessive compulsion (so evident, and even clinical). Finally,
Alassante depicts Feanor as a punk (here; not in all her writings,
alas), which is exactly how I've always seen him, so I totally dig it.
Great job at conveying all these subtexts, and especially in such a
cramped word-count, Alassante. This is what drabbles are all about, as
far as I'm concerned.

Title: The Last Throw · Author: nau_tika · Genres: Drama · ID: 556
Reviewer: viv · 2008-07-23 22:16:21
The authorial decisions in this piece are just brilliant. I love the
voice, how it feels that the narrator is speaking directly to me, the
intimacy of the piece. My grandfather fought in a vicious war and
never spoke of it. I can only imagine the horrors he saw. So it
resonates that this man, this unnamed soldier of Gondor, feels that he
must tell the story while it's fresh in his mind, so that his children
(and, later, his children's children) will know why he fought, and
what it was like. It is, as he says, [important for them to
understand]. As a listener, er reader, I can almost feel his family
sitting beside me, listening with rapt attention to his tale. And
since they, who are also audience, are literally *part* of the tale,
then so am I, to some extent. Almost magically, you've transported me
smack into Tolkien's tale. Thank you so much for the journey, this
time through humble -- and personal -- eyes.

Title: Hide the Knives · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Humor: Gondor
· ID: 485
Reviewer: viv · 2008-07-23 22:27:27
I am a big fan of Aragorn/Arwen fourth-age fics, but most of that
subgenre tend to be kind of serious. So I was very happy to see this
one threaded with humour. And being a mama myself, I can relate to
Arwen's, er, peculiar mental state. hee. Not for nuthin were the elf
princesses of old regarded with awe and terror! Aragorn had better
watch out for himself! When he started to laugh after her apology, I
could almost hear it: kind of thin and nervous, eh? What a fun read
this was!

Title: Kin-Strife · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 92
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-23 22:47:54
Spoilers!
Given that this story was responsible for attaching a monstrous,
novel-sized nuzgul to my ankle, my feelings for it are mixed. One can
read it as the unfolding of a friendship through a time of trial,
which it is. But the trial that organizes the first half of the story
is no ordinary one, but one born of racism and a failure of feudal
responsibility that just happens to cut through a friendship between
lord and servant, who are also Dunadan and Southron. This sets up a
struggle for redemption that colors the story up through chapter
six-ish, and one that affects more than just Imrahli and Andrahar - it
also sets up horrifically fanged nuzgul for unwary fanfic authors.

After the legal resolution, however, there remains the question of how
friendship will unfold, and it passes through a number of issues that
would litter the path of young noblemen trying to find their place in
a feudal world that they have not yet inherited. The confusion of
different kinds of love and loyalty, leading to a botched experiment
in sexual love enjoins negotiating a recovery from that mismatch of
brotherly and romantic love. The effects of poor choices return to
haunt Imrahil in other ways as well, and provide a catalyst for a
relationship with ["the mysterious Captain Eagle of the Star"] that
provides both a reciprocal testing of Imrahil's friendship with
Andrahar and questions of Imrahil's place in the world. All of this
together I think fits well with the characters' age and relative
inexperience, making this not quite a coming-of-age story, but
certainly a story of about beginning to grow up.

Throughout, and despite trials and tribulations, the Imrahil-Andrahar
friendship remains strong, and an example of true love, if not
romantic love: both Imri and Andra discover that there are limits to
their friendship that need to be respected, lest the friendship itself
lose its capacity for honesty and fall into a kind of sad infatuation
that lingers past the point when dignity and liking part ways. With
Imrahil, that's an especially important discovery, given his youthful
dissolution and high rank.

I'd be happy to get another chapter soon (hint hint)...

Title: Elanor of Westmarch: Still There · Author: Baranduin · Genres:
Drama: Final Partings · ID: 183
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-23 22:48:03
Spoilers!
This is a lovely, quiet piece of familial drama, and uses Elanor's
perspective beautifully. The tenderness of the father-daughter
relationship, the details of Sam's arrival at Elanor's home - after
midnight, keeping the moment of meeting and parting between him and
his beloved daughter - the discussion of the hat, and the sense of
Sam's steady paring away of the things that tie him to Middle-earth
are well-portrayed.

Elanor's relationship with the three towers was also fantastic, one of
my favorite moments of the book. The watchtowers become persons in
their own right, and sisters to Elanor, sisters whose personification
draws out a whimsical aspect of Elanor's nature that suggests a
certain prolonging of the magical in her mind. Very well done!

The moment of temptation, to follow her father, and the sense of her
hanging there in the balance, fits well: she is a hobbit born in later
times, the daughter of legends, with an unearthly flower name - she
straddles the division between the legendary and the mundane from the
side of mundane time. Like her father and Frodo, she, too, is torn,
but where Sam and Frodo, and in a way, Merry, Pippin, and Aragorn,
must seek a final healing beyond Middle-earth, Elanor's healing has to
come within it, through her family. That fits the theme of the Fourth
Age beautifully in my opinion. Well done!

Title: A Cat in King Elessar's Court · Author: agape4gondor · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 66
Reviewer: mbumpus_99 · 2008-07-24 01:40:47
It is always interesting to read canon events from unusual
perspectives, and this tale certainly is one of the most creative uses
of that plot device I've ever read. Agape4gondor takes us on an inside
track in Minas Tirith, courtesy of one of Beruthiel's cat's progeny.
We meet all of our canon characters and watch as the Ring War comes to
an end through feline eyes. Our little hero even has a few surprises
for our canon characters as time goes alone.

This is a delightful read, and one that I will probably revisit over
and over again as time goes on. I appreciated the author's note,
originally posted in the midst of posting the piece and still valid
and interesting when read as a footnote. Time and care went into the
writing of this tale - and I would recommend it highly to everyone who
hasn't seen the story from the mouth of the Cat In King Elessar's Court.

Well done, agape4gondor. Well done.

Title: Wind and Fire · Author: elfscribe · Times: First Age and Prior
· ID: 539
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-07-24 02:29:09
Spoilers!
With one of the first lines of "Wind and Fire"--["Thou, Feanor!"]--I
wanted to dislike the archaic style that is too often overused and
abused in Tolkien fanfic. It did not take Elfscribe long in this
story, however, to convince me to do otherwise, and this story has
since become a favorite of mine.

"Wind and Fire" is an elegant and gracefully written piece about the
most unlikely of pairings. While the unconventional pairing might
dissuade some, I encourage those with an open mind to take a chance on
this story. Aside from a beautifully wrought and effortless style,
Elfscribe uses canon to excellent effect to explore several important
concepts in this piece.

First is the idea of what it might be like for a being of spirit, like
a Vala, to be clothed in flesh. Does such an individual feel the same
longings and desires as the Children of Eru? How does he learn to
command it ... or does he not? These questions form the basis for the
story's pairing, as Manwe comes to terms with what it means to be a
creature of flesh with desires of the flesh.

Secondly is the enigma of the Silmarils. Why does Feanor remark that
their unmaking shall be the death of him? Elfscribe takes him at his
word in this piece and puts forth an entirely plausible scenario of
how the Silmarils gained not only their exceptional beauty but also
their hold over their maker.

Beautifully written, thought-provoking, and erotically charged, "Wind
and Fire" is a must-read First Age story.

Title: Gently Held · Author: viv · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 6
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:41:09
A beautiful reflection by Arwen of her love for Aragorn. I really
appreciated her counting up the reasons she did *not* fall in love
with him--it made her revelation of the reason she *did* even more
resonant.


Title: Recognition · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor Drabbles · ID: 481
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:43:17
A very nice exploration of the theme of Eowyn's femininity. To have
the POV be that of Ioreth was a masterful stroke: Ioreth speaks with
the authority of the Wise Woman, and sees more than most.

Title: A Fitting Occupation · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Pre-Ring
War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 601
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:43:52
A very nice drabble set! I could just see the long-suffering father
and the restless youngster. What a creative solution Bard had--most
kings would think it a comedown for a prince to become an apprentice.
But it makes sense that Bard, who was just an ordinary citizen of
Laketown before he slew Bard would not have such an attitude, but
would see the value in his son learning a craft.

Title: That Fate Them Bore · Author: Cara Loup · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 476
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:44:44

I love Conspiracy stories. This begins as a Conspiracy story. A
beautiful and terrible and lyrical Conspiracy story, firmly and
solidly rooted in canon, tracing the path of the decisions that the
four hobbits had to make as the time came to leave the Shire. It
continues as well into the early stages of the Quest and the journey
to Rivendell.

The author has a firm grip on the characters and their deep devotion
to one another, and to the Shire. She has a deft way of digging deeply
into their inner thoughts and emotions, without being over the top or
overwrought. Frodo's inner turmoil, Sam's determination, Merry's
loyalty, and Pippin's adventurous heart are all there. And Gandalf is
wonderfully portrayed: his wisdom and mystery as well as his gruff humor.

She fills in some gaps we are not given in canon: how did Frodo and
Sam react to one another the day after the revelations by Gandalf? Did
Frodo try to get Sam to change his mind about going? How did Merry and
Pippin learn from him the news?

In fact the chapter in which they *do* learn what he has to say is so
very much in character with all three of the hobbits that I found it
breathtaking.

And the Shire itself is very much a character here, the setting
described in achingly lyrical language. I really look forward to
seeing more in this universe.


Title: Sunset Gates · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
· ID: 342
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:47:37
What a twist! I can't say too much more without having to check the
spoiler box--but this is quite neatly done, and makes one curious to
know more!

Title: Lost Love · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 271
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:48:10
The little snippet in canon about Imrahil's ancestor has always
intrigued me. I like this little look at one possible explanation!

Title: Cat's Paws · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains · ID: 58
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:48:55
Only during the MEFAs do I find myself reading Silm fic! This little
tale of Sauron's deceit is both fascinating and chilling. You can
easily see how Celebrimbor's hubris makes him fair game, but you also
feel sad at realizing that he on his part was offering true friendship
to one totally unworthy. I also loved the sort of sci-fi explanations
for what was going on. A very interesting read.

Title: The Lost Restored · Author: Larner · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor · ID: 59
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:49:25
Spoilers!
This wonderful story gives us a look at the three who were at the
Mountain when the Ring went into the fire--and their ultimate fates.

And how wonderful to tell much of this from Gandalf's POV. We just
don't get enough of that--I loved his tender care for Pippin. Lovely,
just lovely!

What a true Eucatastrophe this ending was!

Title: Turning Points · Author: Cathleen · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete
· ID: 357
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-07-24 02:50:25
Spoilers!
As beta, I was fortunate enough to get a look at this story ahead of
time. Cathleen has put a lot of work and thought into this tale of
Pippin's putting childhood behind.

Pippin is approaching puberty, and in addition to the all-too-normal
turmoil of adolescence, he must also deal with the awakening of his
"Tookish sight". This is a fanon explored by a number of writers to
more or less effect, and I find it very interesting to see how it
plays out in Cathleen's universe.

I hope she continues it soon.

Title: Nerdanel's Sons · Author: Istarnie · Races: Elves: Incomplete ·
ID: 659
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-24 04:20:25
Spoilers!
I love the way Istarnie writes Nerdanel; this influential and
unconventional elf comes to vivid life as an artisan, mother and wife
here. The birth of Curufin is a particularly harrowing and fascinating
chapter; with Nerdanel worn out but holding onto life as her sons and
husband remind her of their love for her. And I found Nerdanel's vain
yearning for a daughter sad and haunting: [My lord wanted to create
Jewels in which he could combine the light of Telperion and of
Laurelin. I wanted us to create a daughter, in which we could combine
our love and skills.]

Istarnie has done her pre-First Age homework; and her research and
notes enrich each chapter.

I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

Title: Seven Stones and Seven Stars and One White Tree · Author:
shirebound · Races: Other Beings · ID: 121
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-24 04:31:14
We know that the Free Peoples of Middle Earth found Aragorn, Frodo
Baggins, and Sam to be Hope embodied, each in a different manner; but
what of the land, the stones scattered from cities long destroyed, the
flowers of the earth, the trees of the forests? As the Fellowship
comes to various locales, some of these find a different hope than
they'd known before as they realize that the times are changing, and
there will be as much renewal for them as for the sentient creatures
that inhabit Arda.

A truly marvelous trio of short stories, each filled with estel.

Title: Feeling Safe · Author: shirebound · Races: Hobbits · ID: 633
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-24 04:38:47
Spoilers!
I'd never thought before that Frodo might be subject to sleepwalking,
but it is certainly possible. To find he had come to trust Aragorn
sufficiently to seek to sleep with him while the Man was on watch must
have been the greatest of honors.

Nice concept, well rendered.

Title: Pippin's Secret · Author: shirebound · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 599
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-24 04:45:27
An almost fluffy tale in which Gandalf and Pippin discuss a secret
Pippin's hidden since the Party. A gentle reassurance that Pippin has
done the right thing. Nicely done.

Title: Summer Nights · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 344
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-24 06:28:08
Spoilers!
An excellent, anticipatory drabble as the Men of Gondor await the
coming of Mordor's armies to Osgiliath, just before the bridge was
destroyed. One can feel the anxiety, and the near-relief when the
expected assault begins at last. Well done.

Title: The Houseless · Author: Jael · Genres: Horror · ID: 178
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-24 06:52:52
Spoilers!
Atmospheric writing. You can really sense the stillness of the forest
in winter.

I loved how the story incorporated the customs of Halloween and
similar days of remembrance to the dead into a Middle-earth setting.
The Houseless Spirits provide indeed an excellent basis for such
customs to develop.

The contrast between Legolas' memories of the joyful, bright
festivities and the present quiet, monochrome surroundings is played
out well.

While it is apparent from the context of this story that something
must be wrong with Muiniel, the narration stays close in Legolas' PoV
and so reveals its mystery only indirectly.

I also liked Legolas' characterisation, his instant protectiveness and
shy flirting.

I just have to quote this: ["Eight hundred and forty-three years ago
this past midsummer, and no matter how many years pass, I've not lost
the count."], which I found a devastating statement on the endurance
of grief, particular when taking into account Elvish immortality and
perfect memory.

Title: Silenced · Author: Illwynd · Genres: Horror · ID: 31
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-24 12:24:53
Spoilers!
An outstanding vignette, among the most subtly and richly nuanced of
the X-takes-the-Ring AU pieces I've read. The horror builds slowly,
from a faint sense of unease to the certainty of the tragic and scary
finale. The sad thing here is that a faint part of the original
Boromir still lingers, knowing that something is terribly wrong, and
it is only at the end that this part is destroyed - Illwynd skillfully
suggests, and then leaves it to our charged imaginations to follow the
signposts she has lain for Boromir's corruption and the fate of Minas
Tirith...

Title: DISGUISE: Emissaries · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 56
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-24 12:26:01
Spoilers!
Fiondil writes nifty stories about the Valar; and does it very well.
Here, the story focusses on the Valar's decision to send special
emissaries to Middle-earth in the Third Age.

This is a wonderful close-up on the choosing of the Istari, and their
own choices of form. The characterisations of Curumo and Olorin stand
out the most; I could swear that Olorin found the idea of roughing it
in Middle-earth to be a great adventure as well as a mission to help
the Sauron-beset mortals.

There's a nifty bit about Isildur's having a dream showing him that he
was not the one to destroy the Ring, that three small figures would
bear the Ring to Orodruin; and what's even more intriguing; none of
the Valar can figure out to which race the three small ones would
belong, or the dream's origin.

I wish this story had been expanded; but it works fine in the current
form.

Title: Return · Author: Elleth · Genres: Alternate Universe: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 399
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-24 14:22:51
A powerful pair of Might-Have-Been drabbles aptly showing how quickly
fear and grief can be relieved, and the transforming nature of having
been caught in such a battle not of one's own making. Moving and in
their way almost as grievous as the original.

Title: Music hath Charms · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 361
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 16:41:35
A light, entertaining, fluffy vignette involving husbands seeking
forgiveness from their wives.

Title: Young Fëanáro Makes A Stone · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 77
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 16:45:56
I liked this very much - young Feanor seems very much in line with
what he'll become once he's older, and I liked his interactions with
Aule. A fun read!

Title: The Visitor · Author: Rowan · Genres: Drama · ID: 174
Reviewer: Jules14 · 2008-07-24 16:46:10
Spoilers!
A fascinating one-shot told from Elanor Gamgee's point of view. I
found it especially interesting because Tolkien himself did not tell
much from her point of view. The idea of the Gamgee family celebrating
Frodo's birthday and looking at him as the family hero is touching,
and it is lovely to know that Frodo is still remembered with kindness
after his departure. I am curious to know why Frodo and Elanor are
able to contact each other in dreams, though--is it because of the
jewelry that Arwen gave them? Whatever the reason, it was an
intriguing idea for a fanfic.

Title: Pippin and the Incredible Shrinking Piglet · Author: Cathleen ·
Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 241
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 16:50:00
Cathleen's young Pippin is just so incredibly endearing in this, as is
the rest of his family and his beloved 'friend,' Tulip. A totally fun,
fluffy read from start to finish!

Title: The Dwarves Treasure · Author: eiranae · Races: Dwarves · ID: 312
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 17:08:39
This is really an interesting cross-cultural look at what might happen
if an infant elf was found and raised by Dwarves. I hope to see more
of this, it's a good read!

Title: A Summer Night's Peace · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 694
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 17:14:53
This was nicely done - it felt very comforting, Aragorn and Frodo
sitting and talking late at night under the White Tree about Arwen's
new mortality and what might await Frodo. The title seems particularly
apt, as a sense of calm and peace pervades the story.

Title: Black is the Color of My True Love's Hair · Author: Marta ·
Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 405
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 17:19:07
I liked the structure of this, I liked that it made the slash pairing
believable without being explicit, I liked that Finduilas' actions in
one part surprised me - and it seemed a plausible reason for some of
Denethor's later personal animosity toward Aragorn.

Title: By Ship or Grave · Author: Larner · Genres: Poetry: Hobbits ·
ID: 618
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 17:21:30
I'm not much of a poetry reader, generally, but I enjoyed this one!

Title: A Fitting Occupation · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Pre-Ring
War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 601
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 17:25:20
My only complaint with this series of drabbles is that I'd absolutely
love to see it fleshed out as a longer story. Bard is a wonderful
father as well as a wonderful ruler and makes a wise decision for his
son's future. This really could be the start of a fantastic
cross-cultural tale with the men of Dale and the Dwarves of the Mountain.

Title: Old Friends · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 651
Reviewer: Jules14 · 2008-07-24 18:05:20
I am glad that somebody else pictured Gandalf as homesick for
Middle-earth and all his friends after his return to Aman. Judging
from his personality and his love for the earth, I can imagine that it
would have been more difficult for him to return to the Undying Lands
and become Olorin again than for certain others. An excellent drabble.

Hey guys,

As you know, the first of the 2008 MEFA reviews are visible on our
website and have been for the past several weeks. If you're like me,
you've probably been checking obsessively at least every few days to see
if you've had any new reviews. It can be great fun. :-)

However, there's an issue that unfortunately comes up every now and then
in connection with reviews, and I'd like to discuss that. How should
reviewers write a review when they want to do something more than just
praise the author; and how should authors react to such reviews?

The MEFAs are to some extent the feel-good award of the fandom. Points
are to a certain extent intangible; but feedback and praise can be very
encouraging indeed. Since a longer review means more points for the
author, being critical of an author means that you are giving that story
more points. Because of this set-up, the MEFAs have never been a place
where you should tell the world how much you hated a story. Besides
being hurtful, it's counter-productive; even a single one-point review
of "This stinks" can result in a story winning when it wouldn't have
otherwise.

Of course, we *do* allow constructive criticism, and as an author I love
reviews that have challenged me to how I will present the character in
future stories. The trick is presenting it in a way that will be helpful
to the author and still give the story the number of points that you
want to give it.

***************************************

REVIEWING WHEN YOU DISAGREE WITH AN AUTHOR

You may be wondering what's the difference between constructive
criticism and a completely negative review, since one is allowed and the
other isn't. This is actually a fairly subjective question, and the
answer will vary a bit depending on the context (private beta work,
archive reviewing, award FB like at the MEFAs). So the MEFA answer won't
necessarily hold at (say) Stories of Arda, or anywhere else for that matter.

The first question you want to ask yourself is your motive in offering
the feedback. If the concept of Fingon/Maedhros slash makes your skin
crawl, then it's not really fair to submit a review saying that such a
story was grossly OOC (and saying nothing more than that). After all,
you should have been warned beforehand that the story involved
Fingon/Maedhros because it would be listed in the romance partners in
the story information. A MEFA review is not the appropriate place to
vent about how much you dislike some genre, pairing, etc. For one thing,
it inflates an author's score. And for another, the MEFAs aren't really
a dialogue. For the first time this year authors can reply to reviewers,
but such replies aren't shown on the website; they're just forwarded to
the reviewer through private email.

(Btw, if you see something that should be added to the story
description, like a pairing or warning, we can look into that - just
email mefasupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net.)

On the other hand, it may be the case that you're open to
Fingon/Maedhros in general but think the author could have done a more
convincing job of it. Maybe you read a sweet Fingon/Maedhros vignette
where everyone accepts their tru luv without a second thought. You like
the writing style and the imagery, but that one aspect eeps you from
completely buying into the story. If you complimented the author on
those aspects you liked but also said that if such stories hinted at
possible political side affects of such an attraction you would have
found it a little more convincing, this would be constructive criticism.
You're not saying that the author is wrong to write this particular
subgenre (slash) or pairing (Fingon/Maedhros), but are instead
explaining how the author could do a better job of writing these things.

Also in this hypothetical review, you'll notice the reviewer did more
than just say what he or she didn't like; it also covered things the
reviewer thought the author did well. This is key. Constructive
criticism should include praise as well as criticism - and in balanced
measure; you shouldn't just give one perfunctory compliment and then
proceed into a laundry list of criticisms.

If you're in doubt, feel free to run your review by the admins at
mefasupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net. And don't forget, you don't have
to say everything in a review; it's okay for you to end a review saying
you'd love to discuss this in more detail by email, if the author's
interested; they can email you if they would like more feedback.

***************************************

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM - PRACTICAL SUGGESTIONS

If you decide to write a review with constructive criticism, it is
important to remember that whatever you have to say only represents your
opinion. From a writer's perspective, there is a world of difference
between "Faramir wouldn't act like a whiny baby, like you portray him
here" and "I don't think Faramir would act like a whiny baby, as I see
you portraying him here." Even better would be if you avoid
characterizing the author, for instance, "The way I read your story,
Faramir seems a little immature for his age. Did you intend this?
Personally, I have a hard time seeing him acting that way at that age."
This often will help keep the author from feeling attacked (because
you're expressing your opinion, not claiming to represent theirs).

On a similar note: understatement is often your friend. Authors may balk
at "whiny baby" who would accept "a little immature," and both will get
the author asking the question: does my character act in a way
consistent with what we know about Faramir, and for someone his age?
After all, authors can reply to your reviews, and so maybe you can get
across what you mean in private if they are interested in hearing more
of what they have to say.

When writing constructive criticism in a public group like the MEFAs, I
tend to follow a two-for-one rule: two things I like for every one I
didn't, preferably in at least as much detail as my criticism. Sometimes
in shorter reviews I have to only give one-for-one, but I try never to
give more criticism than praise outside of a beta environment -
certainly in a program like the MEFAs, where I often don't know the
author and many of the stories have been published for months if not years.

Finally, if your criticism involves canon in any way - timeline mistakes
but also characterization issues and physical descriptions - I try to
make sure I have my canon right by researching it if at all possible.
There are some great resources out there, like the Research Library of
HASA (http://www.henneth-annun.net/resources/index.cfm) and the Tolkien
Gateway project (http://tolkiengateway.net/wiki/Main_Page) that organize
the pertinent Tolkien facts into articles on events and characters. If
you're going to say that Faramir had raven-black hair, it might be
useful to both you and the author if you had the canon quotes at your
disposal. Not necessarily provided in the review (I know space is at a
premium there), but if the author should contact you and ask for why you
think a certain thing (you did present it as your opinion, right? rather
than incontrovertible fact? :-D) it's good to have your ducks in a row.
This also means you don't make invalid suggestions, which means that the
author is more likely to take your other criticisms seriously.

Hopefully these practical suggestions will help you say what you have to
say in a way that's most helpful to the author. If you struggle with
this, email mefasupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net for help; I can read
over your review before you post it if you'd like, and also know of some
good general resources on writing critical feedback that I can point you to.

***************************************

REMOVING FLAMES

If a reader or an author comes across a review that they feel is
unfairly negative, we do have a procedure for handling this. So if you
think you've found a review that is overwhelmingly negative rather than
just critical, please email mefasupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net so we
can look into it. Please do NOT make these requests publicly.

If the review is reported by the author, a group of volunteers will
examine it. This is most often Radbooks, Inkling, Elliska, and myself;
though if any one of us is the author or reviewer we will not
participate in the discussion. The volunteers will decide if the review
is really a flame, and if so it will be deleted. This means that it
won't contribute any points to the story but also won't be displayed.

If the review is spotted by someone not the author, the process is much
the same. However, if the review is decided to be a flame, the review
won't be deleted right away. Instead, we'll contact the author and ask
if they would like the review removed (and explain that they'd lose
points). Only if they say they want it removed will the review be deleted.

***************************************

Some helpful FAQs:
--- Can I be critical in my reviews?
http://www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/index.php?page=FAQvoting#vot_4
--- Can an offensive review be removed?
http://www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/index.php?page=FAQvoting#vot_8

Feel free to discuss this general issue here; if you'd like to discuss
any specific reviews please email mefasupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net.

Thanks,

Marta

I'm really enjoying these weekly posts. I know they're a lot of work
for you, but I think they're worthwhile.

Sulriel.

On Sat, Aug 2, 2008 at 3:12 PM, Marta <melayton@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hey guys,
>
> As you know, the first of the 2008 MEFA reviews are visible on our
> website and have been for the past several weeks. If you're like me,
> you've probably been checking obsessively at least every few days to see
> if you've had any new reviews. It can be great fun. :-)

Hi Sulriel,

I'm very glad that you are enjoying them. They are a little bit of work
to write, but it is actually easier to make announcements once where
they will be read by everyone rather than many times in individual
emails. Plus, if it helps avoid mistakes and misunderstanding, it's well
worth the fifteen minutes a week it takes me to write up an announcement
like this.

In many cases a lot of the work is already done, like when I can pull
heavily from the FAQ. And when I post lists of nominations on a certain
theme, Tanaqui gives me a lot of help. (This week I also had in mind an
SWG article that I read this week, for many of the practical suggestions
for writing con-crit.)

Thank *you* for taking the time to read them and think through the issues.

Marta

Súlriel of Menegroth wrote:

>
>
> I'm really enjoying these weekly posts. I know they're a lot of work
> for you, but I think they're worthwhile.
>
> Sulriel.
>
> On Sat, Aug 2, 2008 at 3:12 PM, Marta <melayton@gmail.com
> <mailto:melayton%40gmail.com>> wrote:
> > Hey guys,
> >
> > As you know, the first of the 2008 MEFA reviews are visible on our
> > website and have been for the past several weeks. If you're like me,
> > you've probably been checking obsessively at least every few days to see
> > if you've had any new reviews. It can be great fun. :-)

Maybe I have written too many reviews too fast (hence crankiness), but I
have found this year that I have a tendency to remark on what someone did that
made the story a hard sell for me and that I am writing the review because I
think it is better than most for other reasons. I usually do not insert a
negative point in a review purely out of constructive criticism (they have
friends and Betas for that who share their world view, odd canon interpretationm
right?), more self-defense (I must explain why I am giving this story points,
when it turns on its head everything I love about x, y, or z). I do not want
to give points to stories I dont like, but there are stories I like despite
themselves! LOL I never thought this would be a problem, because I would never
review a story I did not truly appreciate on a several different levels.



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Title: Alqualondë · Author: Moreth · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 220
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-24 18:30:03
Succinct and to the point in each case - the Kin-slayer's perspective
on the ease and dis-ease of war was well-played and wrapped the
sequence up nicely.

Title: The Scribe and the Heir · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres:
Drama: Featuring the Noldor · ID: 256
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-24 18:30:14
Spoilers!
I'm not familiar with the longer stories into which this vignette will
fit or perhaps does already fit, but it's a lovely depiction of the
cost to children when they become the fulcrum of their parents'
quarrels. Granted, Maedhros is not a child, but the weight of being a
father's beloved son, the one who bears the burden of being an
extension of his father's sense of self, is palpable.

The unconscious, undesired kinship of Feanor and Fingolfin in their
jealousy, in the way in which they reduce their sons' desires for
friendship to a reflection on themselves and their half-feared
failings and anger, is telling and well-portrayed.

Nicely done, Dawn!

Title: Enticements · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Boromir or Faramir · ID: 266
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-24 18:30:21
Spoilers!
In FOTR, the Fellowship's discussion of the temptation that Galadriel
appears to have offered everyone gets a rather vocal rebuff from
Boromir. Nevertheless, the reader is left with the notion that on some
level, the fantasy has sunk in - the desire for the power to save
Gondor has taken hold. In the absence of proof of the senses that he
can trust where the Ring's nature is concerned, Boromir has no real
ground for rejecting the Ring.

Ann's version of this fantasy scene of temptation is interesting
because although it draws Boromir's contempt and anger, such as we
seem him deploy in the book scenes, is here untroubled, it seems, by
the perhaps buried suspicion that [the lady doth protest too much].
It's precisely because he can't believe the fantasy, that it's too
perfect and so in fact spoils itself in the very image of his
Ann!verse lover, Theodred, that his anger is roused.

Interesting interpretation, as it seems to push Boromir towards taking
the Ring in despair, rather than out of that combination, brought out
so clearly in his father, of [pride and despair.]

Title: Terra Incognita · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor: Drabbles · ID: 723
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-24 18:33:50
Spoilers!
Branwyn offers up an unusual drabble here, in a hundred-word portrait
of a quiet moment in the War to End All Wars - not the Ring War, but
World War I, in the trenches, where two soldiers discuss the future
author of LOTR. This is Real Life with a pinch of fantasy, in the
acknowledgment of Tolkien's odd ideas and language usage.

The brief description of the trench, with constant rain and dirt and
only a bit of cheer from hot coffed, is a telling glimpse into the
daily routine of this sad time in world history.

Title: There Was A Hobbit · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Humor:
Drabbles · ID: 111
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-24 18:43:30
Spoilers!
Agape shows a delightfully wicked side. This drabble made me laugh
along with Haldir and Boromir. And it ties into HoME, which revealed
that JRRT had named his hobbit hero "Bingo" before choosing the
somewhat more dignified name of "Frodo".

Title: There shall be Mirth at our Meeting · Author: Imhiriel ·
Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 377
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-24 18:46:37
Spoilers!
An amusing nod to the foul-but-fair aspect of Aragorn as king
incognito and macho Ranger. The character of the piemaker's wife is
beautifully sketched here; a happily married young woman who can
nonetheless appreciate a tall, dark and charismatic stranger. And good
attention is paid to Strider's sense of humor.

Title: Writer's Bloke · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor: Drabbles ·
ID: 431
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-24 18:52:04
Spoilers!
Sigh. Wouldn't we writers all love to have our favorite heroes sit on
top of our desks looking [fetching and desirably grubby]?

Stefania captures the difficulty of dealing with fickle Muses, and the
delights of a fanfic writer's fertile imagination, perfectly expressed
in a hundred compelling words.

Title: And all was made ready · Author: Dreamflower · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 427
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 22:44:20
This was such a fun read! A lovely set of vignettes designed to give
the reader impressions of the preparations for Aragorn's coronation as
well as the event itself - from the hobbits' perspectives. I enjoyed
every bit of it!

Title: Summer's Lease · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 650
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 22:50:22
This is a lovely little romantic vignette which paints a wonderful
picture of a married woman's romantic love for her husband. A
wonderful read for a hot summer evening!

Title: Generations · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn
· ID: 508
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 23:15:37
Spoilers!
This was an entertaining look at Eldarion struggling with the fact
that he's not quite what his father wants him to be - and Aragorn
struggling with the fact that his son needs something he can't give
him: the equivalent of boot camp or military school. An enjoyable
premise and well-executed!

Title: Handy With A Sword · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 437
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 23:20:01
This was an enjoyable look at the romance between Faramir and Eowyn,
and had me laughing out loud.

Title: Amara · Author: Claudia · Genres: Mystery · ID: 236
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 23:25:22
This is a lovely, haunting, romantic ghost story. Claudia so often is
associated with the wild wild AU stories, and I think there's
sometimes a tendency to forget that she also writes wonderful
canon-mindful gapfillers. This is one of the latter types, and
gorgeously done.

Title: Lock Out · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits · ID: 307
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 23:28:47
Pippin and Diamond's discomfiture at being locked out of the house was
hilarious, as was the twist once they finally figure out a way to get
in. Made me laugh out loud.

Title: The Healers from the Sea · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 202
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 23:33:32
This is such a lovely, peaceful, gentle encounter for Frodo that I
find myself wishing that it really did transpire. Beautifully written
prose and a lovely premise.

Title: Cold · Author: febobe · Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo or Sam ·
ID: 239
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-07-24 23:37:27
On the surface, "Cold" is a gentle hurt/comfort tale told in five
parts, each part featuring either the point-of-view of the injured or
the healer. The internal dialogue for each point-of-view perfectly
illustrates the differences in the two character's cultures and life
experiences--a fearful hobbit who has fled from a hair-raising
confrontation with a human. Febobe contrasts this to the point of view
of the man, for whom halfings were only the stuff of frightening
nightmares. Based on this criteria alone, I would highly rate "Cold."

However, there is much more to say about the story.

"Cold" fills in a gap following one of the most controversial--for
some--moments in Jackson's film trilogy. It offers comfort and healing
for Frodo after his Nazgul encounter beside the walls of Osgiliath.
Frodo is gently nursed on a real bed warmed by hot stones. The man who
offers him healing, while deeply troubled by the Ring around Frodo's
neck, is Faramir. In the views of both, an alternately
worried/combative Sam filters in and out.

As a writer who tries to write movieverse within a canon context, I
hugely appreciate how beautifully Febobe injects the performances of
the three actors in this scene into her story. Interestingly, her
Frodo is the vaguest portrayal. But her Faramir perfectly captures
David Wenham's interpretation--far better than many who dare to write
him, including me. Best of all is her Sam Gamgee. I can truly hear
Sean Astin's voice as I read.

Some Tolkien fanficcers would never consider reading a movieverse
story, especially one that continues the Osgiliath scene. Especially
if you are one of these readers, I encourage you to give "Cold" a try.
You can't help but enjoy how Febobe has captured these characters,
within movie terms. I assure you that "Cold" doesn't bend canon any
more than the slash, AU, genre cross-overs, and modern stories all up
for review this year.

Title: Surprise · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 131
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 23:40:22
I don't believe I've ever read fic about Nerdanel's parents before,
but if this is any indication of what's out there, I'll be looking for
more. The emotions between Mahtan and Istarnie really felt true and
honest and as if this is the way it might really have happened.

Title: Too Many Rangers · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits · ID: 116
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 23:52:00
Well, Larner knows her HoME, that's for sure! This was a hilarious
little vignette in which all the many manifestations of the character
who eventually became Aragorn make appearances. This really made me
giggle.

Title: Put Aside Your Doubt · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Frodo and Faramir · ID: 187
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-24 23:59:23
The characterizations of both Boromir and Faramir are really nicely
done in this, and I liked the comfort that Frodo receives.

Title: A Little Misunderstanding · Author: Radbooks · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 275
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-25 00:25:56
This made me laugh - although from a young child's perspective, it
makes perfect sense for this very young Halbarad to be frightened of
the sons of Elrond. Nicely done!

Title: A Fair Trial · Author: Maeve Riannon · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 403
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-25 00:40:21
This should carry a beverage warning! I laughed until I choked reading
this. Absolutely hilarious!

Title: Keep Him Secret, Keep Him Safe · Author: shirebound · Races:
Hobbits: Incomplete · ID: 643
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-25 01:24:48
Shirebound's usual extremely gentle hurt/comfort comes through again
in this story in which Aragorn falls ill at Cormallen and requires the
care of his foster-brothers and the surviving members of the
fellowship. There's some lovely gentle humor as well. A fun read
alternating between very, very mild angst and comforting fluff.

Title: No Man's Land · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Drabbles · ID: 726
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-25 01:28:38
Spoilers!
A sad little tale; imagine if Tolkien's life had been one of the
millions cut down too soon in World War I. The quiet sorrow of the
discovery of another dead soldier is written well, and with the weary
nonchalance of wartime; only the reader knows what the world has lost
with this one more life.

Well done, a sobering look at what could have so easily happened, and
what doubtless happens in every war, poets and scholars and other
young men with seeds of greatness who are all taken from the world
before their time.

Title: Child of Hope · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 97
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-25 03:06:16
I love the desciptions in this story: the clothing as seen through the
eyes of a child, and especially the ones of the previous guest and
eating at table with him. What goes on in Boromir's mind when he is
forced into inactivity was very creative, I thought. The end was a
complete surprise, of course, but in some way it made me feel sad for
Denethor.

Title: Boromir and Teddy · Author: Ithil-valon · Genres: Drama: Final
Partings · ID: 113
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-25 03:06:41
This story was short, but sweet. There are never enough Theodred
stories, so I was grateful for this one. The description of the mist
near the mounds made me shiver. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Title: Surprise Inspection · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 207
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-25 03:07:40
Spoilers!
This is a perfect fiction to read in summer. I'm not sure I would have
thought of using a Lt. instead of a captain, but that certainly is the
making of the story. Poor man, I cant imagine how it would feel to
have the Captain General show up at a time like this! Great story!

Title: Brotherhood · Author: Violin Ghost · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 261
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-25 03:08:18
I love the stages of Faramir and Boromir's lives that this story takes
us through. I dont know if the warsong is yours or was written by
someone else, but it suits this fiction and our heroes very well. The
last flashback scene had me ready to cry when it was 'interrupted' and
seemed to be light-hearted for a minute before turning serious again.
The last line and the one before that were as close to perfect as you
could get. Great ending to a great short story.

Title: The Nag · Author: celticbard · Races: Men: Steward's Family ·
ID: 347
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-25 03:08:53
I was expecting a totally different story, but I wasnt disappointed in
what I found. This to me is more reminescent of what we see of the
people of Rohan than what we normally see in Gondor and I appreciated
your putting things in perspecitve. I also liked your original characters.

Title: A Great Cause for Concern · Author: Alassante · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 682
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-25 03:09:34
This was a sweet story, about a moment in time I hadnt considered in
great detail before. I can understand the entire experience must have
been more than a little disconcerting for Legolas, but at least he was
in good company. I would like to have seen the inital moments between
Gimli and his host to see if the greeting he used was similar to the
one with Eomer in the movie or if Gimli has mellowed, but perhaps that
is best left to the imagination. Great story!

Title: The Search · Author: rhyselle · Genres: Poetry: Late Third Age
· ID: 501
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-25 03:21:32
Poetry is not my first love, but the way you spoke of Gollum in your
summary intrigued me. I found the 7th and 10th lines especially
perfect for Gollum, but wont quote them here. Very welll done.

Title: Dance of the Deer and Mûmak · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 559
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 03:37:14
Ah, Nierial--what fitting comparisons for these two styles! I've
written scenes of Dwarves dancing in delight for Aragorn and Arwen's
daughter's birth, and have imagined such dancing as you described,
although I didn't describe it anywhere as fully as you have.

And to win over that particular lady! Ah--what a conquest for our Gimli!

Thank you for such a lovely, delightful tale of such a feast! And love
that those two conspired to get Gimli on his feet!

Title: Loving a Book Lover · Author: Avon · Genres: Romance: Drabbles
· ID: 721
Reviewer: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · 2008-07-25 03:37:45
Spoilers!
I can't be the only reader who found this drabble a little too close
to home for comfort. What can be more annoying than someone trying to
distract you from your book? We have all suffered through the attempts
of friends and family to interrupt our reading, but Faramir has long
ago learned to ignore such interruptions. I love how, in reply to
Eowyn's suggestion that they go for a ride, Faramir mutters "Later"
without even looking up from the page!

But Eowyn has the last word in this delightful drabble. I only wish
that Avon would write more LOTR stories for us.


Title: The Secret of the Wooden Wall · Author: Lily · Genres: Mystery
· ID: 630
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 03:59:55
Spoilers!
Ah, mysteries and hauntings in almost forgotten corridors of Brandy
Hall! Paladin Took has become certain someone wishes a particular
corridor opened up again; and after years of being aware there is a
haunting mystery here, he finds his cousin Merimac and Frodo as well
as Pippin also feel there is a need to find out what happened here.

The records for the Hall are consulted, and excavations are begun.

It is fascinating to think on the differences between Frodo's form of
prescience compared to that of the Tooks, and that his awareness of
the haunting is quite different from theirs. And the final breaking
through--the descriptions are delightful, conveying the joy of little
Daisy perfectly.

A wonderful ghost story, and perfect for the Shire!

Title: Orc Talk! · Author: kitt_otter · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands ·
ID: 703
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 04:03:56
Such a cute wee-Legolas story. And trust small children to pick up the
very expressions we wish weren't used at all!

Title: Home is where the heart is · Author: Linda hoyland · Genres:
Romance: Drabbles · ID: 505
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-25 04:08:16
Spoilers!
An exquisite and romantic drabble from Lindahoyland's versatile
virtual pen.

The nuances of love and marriage are difficult enough to capture in a
drabble, let alone the love of a newlywed mortal and half-Elf, even if
(particularly if) they reprise the affair of Beren and Luthien.

In this drabble, the reader is immediately treated to a beautiful
image of dancers resembling wind-swirled flowers, and then shown the
dichotomy between Arwen's wistful memories of her flower-bedecked past
surroundings and the barren, arid [desert of stone] in Minas Tirith,
the City where she has come as a bride. I like the reference to Arwen
going barefoot in her former home; it reprises her and Aragorn's
golden season in Lorien, especially when they walked barefoot on the
grass and flowers of Cerin Amroth in midsummer and plighted their troth.

What saves her from further sorrow, and perhaps a taste of Finduilas'
fate, is Arwen's connection with her husband. Tolkien has said that
Elven lovers bond entirely, soul and body; and the force of Arwen's
connection to her husband in this drabble reinforces that concept.

Good use of contrasts in the frost and heat metaphors.

This is one of Linda's best short pieces; a beautiful and haunting
vignette, with maximum pathos and romance evoked in a hundred words.





Title: The Importance of Being Bilbo · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 686
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-25 04:30:11
Spoilers!
An excellent essay about Bilbo Baggins, his story, his background, the
gaps that could be filled by fanfiction. Dreamflower's pointing out
the similarities in plot between The Hobbit and LOTR was a revelation
- I had remembered the Eagles' role in both, but the other parallels
never occurred to me.

Of course, Dreamflower is right - Bilbo is a fascinating character in
his own right. It is indeed a shame that there is not more
Bilbo-centric fanfiction!

Well-reasoned; and a delight to read.

Title: Loss · Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort ·
ID: 196
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-25 06:32:38
Spoilers!
A heartrending story about the dangers of childbirth in Middle-earth
and it seemed that not all the midwives were very well trained.I
remember being told a true story about a midwife in the 1940's who
saved a bleeding patient with ice and the baby lived too.Here, the
outcome was unfortunately sadder,but at least Halbarad manages to save
his wife and his love for her is well depicted.

Title: Of Dreams... · Author: Avon · Races: Men: General Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 7
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-25 06:44:36
Spoilers!
A very perceptive look into Aragorn's character. I agree with the
author that Aragorn does not dream of power,but rather the simple
things of life.His desire to be king is rooted in a wish to do good
and marry Arwen.

Aragorn,though does not shirk responsibilty and will take up The sword
of the King now that the time has come.

A very poetic drabble with clever use of language.

Title: Out of Memory and Time · Author: Shireling · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 136
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-25 06:58:12
Spoilers!
This story had me gripped from start to finish.The beginning intrigues
when a badly tortured man is rescued by a caring ship's crew. The
action then switches to familiar characters and a great tragedy for
Gondor before returning to the central story of the badly injured man.
I especially enjoyed the warm friendship between Faramir and Aragorn
in this story and only wish it had been Aragorn who was the main
comfort figure in this story, but suppose were that so,it would have
been less original.This was a real page turner and the writer is a
highly gifted storyteller, though my view of Faramir differs somewhat,
I was still enthralled by the story.

Title: Seven Stones and Seven Stars and One White Tree · Author:
shirebound · Races: Other Beings · ID: 121
Reviewer: Inkling · 2008-07-25 07:02:22
Lovely, lyrical, and highly original, this story uses the wonderful
line from Gandalf's Rhyme of Lore as a springboard for presenting the
unusual perspectives of three elements of Tolkien's living
Middle-earth, each expressing a sense of change that builds throughout
from possibility to certainty.

I especially like Shirebound's interpretation of "Seven Stars," which
in the original rhyme refers to the heavenly variety. But as that
wouldn't fit the theme of this story, how clever to give voice instead
to the earth-bound "sun-stars" of Lorien.

I love that we have an Other Beings category now to showcase stories
like this!



Title: The King's Surgeon · Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Longer
Works · ID: 90
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-25 08:15:15
Spoilers!
Oh my GAWD she's HILARIOUS! ["I'll kick your butt so high between your
shoulder blades you'll walk crooked for the rest of your natural
days."] I love the invective that she can come up with so quickly and
passionately and potently. I love even more that she'll use it on
whomever she sees fit, whenever she sees fit to do so. But, as though
this weren't enough, her letters to the Steward are just the sort of
move that only the boldest woman in her situation would make... and
her letters to everyone else define her as something far more than her
students would think.

While reading this story, I managed to soak 3 shirt sleeves with tears
and make uncounted laughter-induced emergency runs to the bathroom. So
very well done.

Title: The Sky Is Over · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 83
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-25 08:46:56
A truly chilling and very well written drabble .What must it have been
like to live through such dark days without hope?This drabble provides
a clue.

Title: My Sword Weeps · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Boromir or Faramir · ID: 316
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2008-07-25 08:52:56
This is the second in agape's AU "Sword" series and continues where
["My Sword Sings"] left off. Gondor is still reeling from the deaths
of Denethor and Boromir and little Faramir is catatonic, overcome by
grief and what appears to be a spell laid upon him by his enemies.
Indis, Faramir's aunt and regent, having heard of a legendary healer
somewhere in the north, devises a desperate plan to save her nephew in
spite of the misgivings of her friends and advisors.

Meanwhile, Aragorn, having been apprised of what has happened, rushes
towards Gondor in the hopes that he will be able to help save one whom
he greatly cares for, for Faramir is his Steward until such time as he
is ready to claim the throne as King.

In a race against time and the machinations of Gondor's enemies, two
people set out from opposite ends of Middle-earth for the sake of a
small child, a child who will someday play an important role in the
history of Middle-earth - if he survives.

This is a wonderful tale full of suspense and some surprises along the
way. If you enjoyed agape's first "Sword" story you will enjoy this
one and if you've never read the series before, you're in for a treat,
but make sure you read the first story or much of this one will make
no sense.

Title: Galdor: An Elf By Any Other Name.... · Author: Marta · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 475
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2008-07-25 08:55:42
Galdor of the Grey Havens has much in common with Glorfindel – little
is explicitly said about either in LOTR. Yet, further exploration of
Tolkien's works reveal the possibilty of something more, something
deeper about these characters than first meets the eye.

In this look at one of Tolkien's minor characters whom most readers
might dismiss as unimportant. Marta shows that a more careful look at
what Tolkien wrote about this particular Elf gives us a glimpse of
someone who might be more important (and therefore more interesting)
than we first thought. I know that when I first read "The Council of
Elrond" I wondered just who this Elf was and why he was there. Marta's
exploration of the character and his history has opened up a whole new
world for me, giving me a richer appreciation of Galdor and his role
in the long history of Middle-earth.

Title: In absentia · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: House of Finwe ·
ID: 84
Reviewer: Linda hoyland · 2008-07-25 08:58:15
I don't usually read Simarillion stories but I am glad I chose to
sample this as it is very dramatic,powerful and moving. I find it very
plausible that Maedhros could be brought to the edge of madness by his
ordeal. Fingon's anger,grief and devotion towards his cousin is deeply
moving.This is very well written.

Title: Out of Memory and Time · Author: Shireling · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 136
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2008-07-25 09:00:09
The crew of the Grey Swan, a trading ship under the patronage of the
Prince of Dol Amroth, pulls a body out of the Anduin only to discover
that the man is still alive. There is evidence of him having been put
to extreme torture and there is little hope that he will live, yet
against all odds he survives. The crew call him Min (short for
Minnow), not knowing what else to call him, for when he finally
recovers, it is to learn that he is deaf and has lost his memory.

Far away in Ithilien, Faramir, with a small troop of Rangers, rides in
pursuit of outlaws who have struck down Aragorn while the King happens
to be visiting the Prince in the field. What follows from that leads
to a devastating tragedy from which Gondor might never recover.

How these two events are connected and how the mystery of Min's
identity is resolved makes for a tautly written story of adventure and
suspense, of the seeming capriciousness of fate and the mysterious
workings of the Valar as Min travels from the Grey Swan to the Grey
Havens in search of peace, if not for answers, only in the end to find
that one cannot achieve the former without first reaching for the latter.

In spite of some flaws of a typographical nature - misspellings mostly
– this is a well-thought out tale that has you clicking "next" well
past one's bedtime.

Title: Twentynine White Horses · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 557
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2008-07-25 09:30:16
An amusing look at that age-old question - What happens to Elves who
lose a tooth? Legolas and Thranduil's relationship is nicely drawn
here and one can sense the love and respect they both have for one
another.I liked the little "gift" that Legolas discovers under his
pillow and the story behind it. A lovely father-and-son-bonding tale.

Title: Shadow King · Author: Claudia · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Angst/Tragedy · ID: 227
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-25 12:02:36
What a truly horrific version of "what if"!

It is particularly effective because it uses images and expectations
from the true canon events and twists them around, reminding us just
how narrow the edge was on which the Quest managed to succeed despite
all the odds against it.

I kept gritting my teeth as the story unfolded, it was so painful to
read the reversal of what "normally" was such a supreme moment of
triumph and hope and celebration. The fear and utter desolation was
palpable.

Aragorn's characterisation rings chillingly true, (ab)using his
strengths and virtues tainted under the influence of the evil of the
Ring. It perfectly embodies Legolas' assertion in RotK, The Last
Debate ["how great and terrible a Lord he might have become in the
strength of his will, had he taken the Ring to himself."].

And still Frodo in his despair longs for the Ring, another point for pity.

Given my interest in stories about the White Tree(s), I was intrigued
by how much even the canonical fact of the barren tree can be changed
that it seems not just a sad reflection of the slow decline of Gondor
through the millenia, but a specifically blatant example of the
desecration of all that is good.

Title: Eight Weeks · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 273
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-25 13:28:33
An amusing look at life in the Steward's household. I like this
exploration of the relationship among Denethor's family which shows a
lighter side than we so often see; and in particular a scenario in
which - unusually - Denethor sides with Faramir against his favourite
son. The ploys to get Boromir to get rid of that beard are sneaky and
inventive, appropriate for those two cunning men.

The drabble series is structured very well: each drabble standing on
its own, but building on each other in such a way that a continuing
plot arc is created and the humour accumulates until the final drabble .

The snappy, vivid dialogue helps to maintain the brisk pace. I like
the small but eloquent details that are tucked into the narrative,
painting a picture of the daily life and routine of the
Captain-General when he is not in the field, as well as life and
concerns of the reigning family of Gondor.

There are so many wonderful lines in this series, but one of my
favourites is this one: ["Look, Cirdan has a beard..."], because you
can almost hear Boromir's exasperation (and desperation?).

Title: Summer Nights · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 344
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-25 14:42:24
Spoilers!
The drabble very palpably evokes the feeling of the stillness of the
summer setting, the sultry air, the shimmering heat, the relief when
the arrival of evening brings the longed-for relief from the
relentlessly-burning sun, the long waiting for the long-awaited war to
begin in eanest.

It's an unusual way to realise the premise of the entry in the Tale of
Years, ["Sauron attacks Osgiliath"], because rather than concentrating
on the actual battle, it focusses on the preparation, and on the
events leading up to, widening the scope.

I like the way the battle begins so desultorily, with an element of
randomness.

Title: Gently Held · Author: viv · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 6
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-25 15:55:49
Short, but sweet. I haven't given much thought to this topic, but if I
had, I would not made the same choice you did, though I like it. The
wording was impressive, too. Well done.

Title: Look Not With Longing · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 479
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-25 15:56:06
I thought this short story captured well the nostalgia one can feel
even when they refer back to a time that was darker and more perilous
than the present. A feeling of being adrift in a time growing ever
more remote from one's own experiences, experiences that may well
leave a more indelible touch on one's soul than those in more peaceful
times, being more dangerous and therefore likely more intense. This
quote perfectly encapsulates this sentiment: ["Things had a weight to
them then that he misses now - the world swept clean of gods and
demons is an open, airy space, yet dimmer - thinned."]

It is particularly poignant that it is Faramir pondering these
feelings, who had yearned for a more peaceful time when he could cease
having to fight that was not to his natural inclination. But it feels
entirely in-character for him to be so self-aware and reflective.

There is so much a sense of what is left unsaid, or only hinted at,
that gives a wonderful richness and denseness to the story.

The contrast between the melancholic tone and subject matter, and the
imagery of light, of shining woven throughout the story is an
intriguing and very appealing touch.

Title: Took Broth · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 543
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 16:40:55
Spoilers!
Oh, how we often are so reluctant to tasting new dishes, and how
wonderful when we give into pressure and find they are delightful!

Love this one so, and Sam's reluctance to get caught up in this
foolishness and his resultant pleasure is so well done! I'm such a
sucker for a Sam story, almost as much as is RabidSamFan, I think! And
to see him being coaxed along by Merry and Pippin is delightful!

Wonderful, warm humor.

Title: If You Could See What I Hear · Author: Cathleen · Times: Mid
Third Age: Eriador · ID: 614
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 16:46:10
Spoilers!
I so love this tale of young Pippin wandering abroad, accompanied at
first only by his knitted pink piglet Tulip, and the inevitable
frantic search by his parents, relatives, and neighbors. I love the
thought of both Pippin receiving instruction at the hands of his
hosts, and Paladin's more cranky acceptance of instruction as he
searches impatiently for his son, and how this helps prepare both for
the crises surrounding his next great wandering abroad when as a tween
Pippin will accompany his cousins and Sam away from their safe haven
for a far more serious situation.

Imagery is wonderful, and the foreshadowing of what will come is
delicately done.

Title: With Many "Fond" Acknowledgments · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 472
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 16:49:01
A wonderfully charming spoof of how writers can find themselves
feeling pressured to acknowledge all who submitted information
allowing the author to put it together into a book. Poor Sam--so many
egos to stroke!

So funny!

Title: Forfeit · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 401
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 16:55:38
Spoilers!
Ah, our worthy Beregond and his decision to stay and face the
consequences of his actions. His courage and honor--and love for his
son--are so well expressed, and with such remarkable economy.

The images of him declaring his decision, then seeing his uniform
prepared for dress inspection, then standing over his sleeping son
will stay with me forever, I think. Beautiful, Lady Branwyn.

Title: Nine Companions · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 259
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 16:59:20
Now, that I NEVER saw coming! And of course Aragorn would have that
particular hand! This one is indeed a keeper! Thanks for the
laugh--had expected a touching moment, but not this particular KIND of
touching! Hehehehe!

Title: Undivided · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 46
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 17:10:20
Spoilers!
Their mother wounded to near the death of her spirit, Elrohir and
Elladan make their decision as to what they will do now, and offer one
another comfort as twins. It is an almost Hobbity image, the two of
them temporarily retreating to their childhood room to sleep, their
arms about one another; but out of that innocent seeming is born the
steel of their determination to avenge their mother's violation on the
persons of every orc they come across.

The emotions conveyed here--confusion, self-doubt, near-accusation,
concern, pain, aching love for the one hurt and the rest of the
family, indecision, determination--all are done so well! So many
emotions packed into such a short fic.

Title: The Mariner's Son · Author: cairistiona · Genres: Adventure ·
ID: 329
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-25 17:12:40
A remarkable tale with remarkable characters, from the unnamed
"mariner's son" to the one imprisoned by him. The story is haunting,
and it sparks our sympathies for all involved.

Highly recommended.

Title: The Edge of the Knife · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 274
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-25 17:16:06
Spoilers!
Fanfiction pieces about Numenor, and even the Second Age, are not as
numerous as those of the Ages before and after them, at least it seems
that way to me. Elendil the Tall and his mighty sons get comparatively
short shrift.

But here, an outstanding writer gives us a series of eight drabbles
painting pictures of alternate branchings of Tolkien's tree, all
involving Elendil and/or his sons.

What would have happened if Isildur had died while saving the fruit of
the tree? And what if Elendil and his sons had combined their forces
with Tar-Miriel to stop Ar-Pharazon before he caused Numenor's
destruction? And if Isildur and Anarion had been corrupted by
Annatar's evil?

Dwimordene brings these fascinating possibilities, and more, to vivid
life. The series is a great read for drabble aficionados as well as
people who appreciate quality fanfiction.

Title: Playing with Fire · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 21
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-07-25 21:32:00
This is yet another excellent vignette, Linda. I always enjoy your
elegant style of writing, and your take on the characters is just so
realistic. It is a fine line for parents to decide, what they let
their children learn from experience, and what they need to protect
them from absolutely. The last sentence in this story expresses this
dilemma perfectly.

Title: As Was Dwarven Tradition · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 553
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-25 21:48:20
Spoilers!
I could really feel Gimli's disappointment amidst the cheerful
celebration for this so important birthday. What joy at the arrival of
the surprise visitors!

I liked the titles the celebrants list to toast Gimli, they remind us
of his many accomplishments.

Title: The Bridge · Author: Armariel · Genres: Poetry: Drama · ID: 429
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-25 21:51:18
Spoilers!
Oh, lovely. Gorgeous imagery and sensitivity.

I think this poem captures Sam character very well, his being
down-to-earth at the same time he can exhibit a profound sense of awe
at the beauty and the wonders of the world.

His feelings are conveyed very well. You could sense his longing for
Frodo, his anticipation for his eventual reunion with him, his joy at
knowing and "seeing" Frodo is well and happy, and at being able to
talk with him about the most everyday things in both their lives, even
if only in dream. I think despite this, he accepts Frodo's admonition
to not hurry their reunion, to cherish and take delight in his life in
Middle-earth as long as it may last.

I find it very touching how he can describe the sublime sights in his
dream in such awe-filled tones (and with wonderful imagery, like ["the
air a spicy tent"], interspersed with very oddly - at first glance -
comparing the lingering touch of Frodo in his dream with something
so... hm, so mundane... like a hat, which nevertheless makes complete
sense.

Title: Trading Pledges · Author: Adaneth · Races: Dwarves · ID: 339
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-25 21:52:22
Spoilers!
This story is a prequel of Adaneth's Dûnhebaid Cycle. We meet familiar
characters in their younger days, and characters who have died
before/when the main series begins.

I very much enjoyed this slice of Auð's life, seen through her eyes
and not always fully explained, but giving depth and layers to her
story, together with the clear descriptions of the bustle of preparing
for war, and her work as a seamstress. A wonderfully complex piece of
"culture-building", plausible and vivid, told with obvious care for prose.

I like the obviously deep bond between brother and sister. The mother
was also a very interesting character.

And some things really seem to be universal: a man courting his his
best friend's sister always seeming to be somewhat awkward; the wish
for love and marriage, for a deep bond before setting out to war, so
as to have something hopeful and joyful to sustain the warriors in
grim times.

And, of course, the most important aspect: it was very, very romantic!
I'm glad Adaneth gave us this chance to see both halves of this couple
in happier times, alive and in love.

Title: On Amon Sûl · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Frodo or Sam · ID: 299
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-25 22:24:15
A nicely composed gap filler. Taking Frodo's perspective enables the
Ring and its threat to come through very clearly and in a very
personal form. Getting little snips of the discussions among the
hobbits and Strider, discussions which had to have happened even if
not given, gave a glimpse into the workings of this small and oddly
composed group in an emergency.

As always, Dreamflower's language recalls Tolkien's, helping to slot
her narrative into the main story seamlessly.

Title: In The Midst Of Summer · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 270
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-25 22:24:31
Spoilers!
Sweet and gentle look at Sam's relationship with his wife and family
after Rosie passes away. The opening sets the mood, and I like the
descriptions of the garden and their memories. Sam's sense of the
invasion of meaninglessnes under the guise of new meanings - now the
flowers remind him that Rose isn't here, that their bed has no
purpose, that children must adapt to loss - would be enough, in many
ways, to make us understand Sam's decision.

But the intervention of fear in his son that Sam interprets as the
need for him to act or do something to get everyone settled - to get
himself settled in the path he'll take - is makes for a more positive
look at his imminent departure. Not just a passive falling away, but
an active letting go for others.


Title: Estel I Was Called · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 351
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-25 22:24:40
Spoilers!
The problems associated with getting Aragorn back to the Angle after a
long time away and ignorant of his roots are manifold. Marta takes up
a few of them, particularly the need for continued secrecy, and pits
it against Aragorn's longing for memory, which is also a longing for self.

[For all the pride he took in knowing he came from such a high
lineage, his inheritance as his father's son seemed pitifully poor. He
longed for memories. A kiss on the brow, a steadying hand on his arm,
anything! But all that remained for him was cold metal. A silver star.
A ring he could not even wear openly without declaring his heritage. A
broken sword. And a name.]

Everything Aragorn possesses from his father, including his own name,
is in limbo - unusable, and so in a way, utterly intangible and
nothing he could stand on to feel his way into his new life.

Halbarad's pragmatism seems right in this instance, and ends up by
giving Aragorn what he'd wanted from Arathorn: a base, a relationship
he can build on and will, despite his rather reduced expectations at
the close of this story. But reduced or not, they are a beginning and
that's what the story seems to have been after: a place to start out
from. Nicely done, Marta!

Title: Moved to Pity · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 366
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-25 22:24:47
Spoilers!
Imhiriel displays her talent for squeezing significance out of very
few words. The Beren-Luthien story is epic and hard to capture for
just that reason. Yet Imhiriel fixes on its significance in later
times and is able to use that an anchor for this encounter between
Mandos and Vaire.

I love the spareness of the dialogue, and Vaire's simple ["I know"] to
her husband - she is perhaps the only one in Valinor who could
credibly say that to the Vala who more than the others is attuned to
fate and so not easily surprised or moved. Through this intimate
scene, the wonder of a surprised Mandos is emphasized to the reader,
who can appreciate it the more.

Well done, Imhiriel!

Title: Utúlie'n Aurë · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 163
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-25 22:24:56
Spoilers!
It's fitting to see how the passing of Sauron affected Glorfindel, who
has fought so hard and to such lengths to rid M-e of Morgoth's taint.
I liked the opening description of the effect the news had on him:
[The relief pushed the apprehension, fear and doubt from him like a
river shoves the last icy remainders of winter downstream, and in its
wake, left him almost boneless.]

After so long a labor, the end of it probably would leave one feeling
drained.

Title: The Apprentice · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains · ID: 52
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-25 23:45:18
This is an intriguing look at how life might have been among the
smiths of Eregion, living and working with 'Aulendil.' The main
character, Samaril, is engaging. I really enjoyed watching his
transition from apprentice to master. I have a sister who's a PhD
chemist and I felt like I could have dropped her into this group and
she'd have fit right in with the insane hours worked in the laboratory
and the odd trains of conversation while not at work. The betrayal at
the end feels particularly appalling and shocking, even though you
know it's coming. A really good read!

Title: Pippin's Secret · Author: shirebound · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 599
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-25 23:51:02
Spoilers!
I really liked the notion that Pippin learned Bilbo's secret at a very
young age - and that the fact he kept it is what convinced Gandalf
that Pippin was trustworthy. A fun read!

Title: In Search of Stillness · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves:
Mirkwood Elves · ID: 704
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-26 01:46:57
Spoilers!
Ah, yes, one of Bodkin's best--but then, all her works are remarkable.
What to do with a stubborn Elf who refuses to answer the call that
haunts him? Take him home, and after a few days of antagonism shared
with his father, a few weeks of peace, then returning arguments, look
for him to need to wander once more, back to his new lands and his
close friends from within the Fellowship--until the next time the Sea
Longing is in danger of taking him.

One can hear the two of them bicker as they wander into the renewed
woods around Dol Guldur; smell the rising scents of early spring; feel
the cool rain, taste the stew, see the rising steam and mist about
them, know the joy of the coming of Thranduil to find them. A story
for the senses!

Title: Pippin (Paladin) Had a Little Lamb · Author: Cathleen · Genres:
Humor · ID: 629
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-26 01:50:53
Spoilers!
Once upon a time little Paladin Took had a knitted lamb friend to
rival the friendship little Peregrin knows with his knitted piglet
Tulip. So now the story is told of the loss of Sammy Lambie, and
Eglantine, busy with knitting a new toy, finds herself wondering which
will appreciate it more, her son or the child that lingers within her
husband.

The love Eglantine has for her husband and son is marvelous, and one
can feel her amusement and exasperation at the two of these menfolk in
her family.

Very sweet story.

Title: The Blessing of the Waters · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 61
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-26 01:53:41
Ah, such a sensual story! Theirs is a love to indeed bless the waters
of any land; there within Imladris they make the valley a blessed
place indeed.

It is such a lovely tale, and one that makes me wish I could find that
land lying just below the mountains. I keep looking for it somewhere
near the feet of Mount Rainier....

Title: Rivendell International Airport · Author: Primsong · Genres:
Humor: Elven Lands · ID: 345
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-26 01:56:18
Ah, but THIS is such a delight. Only Legolas seems to appreciate how
to work the system, managing at the last to reclaim all that has been
confiscated by security. A marvelous laugh and a delight to read--and
so reflecting the frustrations we find when we must deal with such
officialdom! Excellent, Primsong!

Title: The Edge of the Knife · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 274
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-26 02:25:43
Isildur's fate might have been so very different, and his life, like
the fate of the world as dictated by the actions of the Fellowship
does indeed stand [on the edge of a knife]. Here is a marvelous series
of Might-Have-Beens had various things changed along the course of his
life, from his childhood to the taking of (or failure to take) the
Ring from Sauron. Well, well done series of drabbles taking one
through all emotions.

Title: FAULT: The Doctor Is In · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 545
Reviewer: mbumpus_99 · 2008-07-26 03:00:16
I started laughing at the end of the first paragraph and essentially
chortled the rest of the way through this positively delightful little
piece. I enjoy Fiondil's portrayal of the Valar in all of his works
anyway, but this is the first one that would have had me needing to
replace my keyboard had I not taken note of the warning at the very
top of the entry. The drama between the First Age characters here is
beyond any possible description - and the final twist is so outrageous
as to be stunning.

There is a touch of absolute manaical genius to the way this little
story was put together - I can just imagine Fiondil sitting at the
computer having to wipe the tears away just to make certain there were
no typos.

I think of all the humorous entries in this year's competition, this
is by far the best. I would heartily recommend this to anybody with
even a passing acquaintance with the Silmarillian - and even to those
who might just plain enjoy a very good laugh at Lord Námo's expense.

My hat's off to you, Fiondil. This is beyond priceless!




Title: Before You Go · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Minas Tirith
· ID: 506
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-26 03:11:25
Spoilers!
A well-written gapfiller with Denethor struggling to accept the
imminent leavetaking of his beloved heir. I like the way Nancy Brooke
writes the relationship between father and favored son; Boromir seems
to exert some conscious and unconscious control over his father; and
Denethor is torn between his fear for his son and his deep love for him.

Title: Now the Green Blade Riseth · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 37
Reviewer: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · 2008-07-26 03:12:20
Spoilers!
This joyous drabble was written for the Renewal challenge at
Tolkien_weekly, and the title refers to a church hymn of the
Resurrection--

"Now the green blade riseth from the buried grain,
Wheat that in the dark earth many days has lain."

After the destruction of the Party Tree and of so much else that was
good and beautiful, the Gaffer witnesses a small miracle. Ann captures
the personality and speech patterns of the old gardener perfectly. The
Gaffer uses diminutive words to describe the young tree, conveying his
own tender feelings for all that grows and his wonder at this special
plant, unlike any other he has ever seen. He calls the mallorn seed a
[silver nubbin], and he says that Samwise fusses over the seed like [a
hen with one chick.] Ann's touch with his dialect and homely sayings
is light and skillful, adding color without allowing the language to
become comical or a distraction. It is all too easy for him to be
reduced to comic relief.

This drabble is a lovely tribute to Samwise's father. Though less
educated and less sophisticated than his son, these two are one at
heart. It is clear where Samwise learned to cherish the green blade
that riseth. The Gaffer is often overlooked among the characters of
the Lord of the Rings, so thank you for sharing this glimpse into his
thoughts.


Title: Music hath Charms · Author: Linda hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 361
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-26 03:36:30
Spoilers!

The Ring War is over for at least a few years, the land seems at
peace, but discord rears its ugly head in the households of King and
Steward in this delightful short story.

Both Arwen and Eowyn take exception to their husbands having
frequently put statecraft before the fulfillment of their promises and
close ranks against Aragorn and Faramir.

How the King and the Steward manage to return to their wives' good
graces makes for an entertaining tale as well as a well-plotted one.
Angst queen Linda Hoyland employs a light touch with elegance, and
does it here. And her consonance with Tolkien, in the importance of
music and songs, is a welcome theme.

I enjoyed the plot twist of Aragorn and Faramir, rejected by their
angry wives, visiting a Minas Tirith tavern incognito. And of course,
who could resist the King of Arnor and Gondor and the Prince-Steward
singing their manly hearts out to their wives with songs of ardent love?

Linda employs her knowledge of opera to good purpose here; Wagner fans
will enjoy the tip of the hat to "Tannhauser".

And Faramir's allusion to the origins of Arda itself in the magic of
song makes for a perfect ending. I am always amazed by Lindahoyland's
facility in coming up with sparkling responses to challenge prompts,
and this one is no exception.



Title: The Weaving Cow · Author: cactuskim · Genres: Humor · ID: 675
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-26 03:45:24
Spoilers!
I read this fic long ago, but only remembered the pre-Fellowship part
of the story. It was wonderful to see Ranien and Trelan in a 'new'
story. The relationships among the Mirkwood elves, the twins and
Aragorn was perfect. I have a picture in my mind of our heroes with
callouts that say 'Not me'. One thing I would like to see more on is
the questions that came to Legolas' mind while traveling as a human
without Aragorn. Great fic!

Title: As Was Dwarven Tradition · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 553
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-26 04:02:12
This fic is one of my favorite stories that this author has written.
It has some wonderful lines and surprises in it, all are wonderfully
presented. The things that [lightened Gimli's heart] were surprising
and endearing! And the general acceptance from the group was very
impressive! This demonstrates how much people can change if they open
themselves to new experiences and new friendships. Thanks for the
great story!

Title: A Perfect World · Author: mistycracraft · Genres: Romance:
Elven Lands · ID: 248
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-26 04:12:49
This was a sweet piece, one that reminds us of the quote about every
great man having a great woman beside him. If every couple could [hold
to us], no doubt things would turn out better for them as well. I
especially liked the comparison of fireflies to stars. Well done!

Title: A Fitting Occupation · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Pre-Ring
War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 601
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-07-26 04:21:56
This story was both entertaining and educational. The relationship
between father and son was realistically presented, as well as Baird's
reaction to his father's words. Parents just cant always predict how
their children will interpert what they say to them, and this was well
handled. Well done!

Title: The Dance · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Romance: Elven
Lands · ID: 128
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:31:49
This is very sweet, and a little sad, both because of Nerdanel's
family's obvious feelings about the situation and because we know,
ultimately, what will happen to them both. I like the idea of her as
an "ugly duckling" in a way, which is counter to much of what I've
read about her within the fandom. Nicely done.

Title: Some Seasons · Author: sophinisba solis · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 199
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:32:02
Spoilers!
This is a very sweet look into what life in Bag End might have been
like in those early years after Sam and Frodo returned. I loved the
details of Rosie's cravings. Nicely done.

Title: In The Midst Of Summer · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 270
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:32:30
Oh, you've made me cry! I always love your Sam and how normal and down
to earth he is, though he never loses that touch of sadness earned
when his Mr. Frodo left, and it only makes sense that those old
feelings of loss would creep up now, even amid the comfort of his
garden. Having gone through my share of possessions and houses after
funerals, the way he saw the details of the place as though for the
first time, and in a way, truly for the first time as a new person,
rang very true. What makes this story, like your others, so poignant
is the sort of details you include, specifics of a type of cloth or
tangents of thought about someone's reactions; they read much more
like thinking than a story, and that's very much a good thing in my
estimation!

Title: Consolation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Steward's Family · ID: 341
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:32:49
Spoilers!
I very much like the relationship between the brothers in this piece,
and I think Boromir realizing his brother needed companionship after
the battle is exactly the sort of character Tolkien wrote him to be.
Also, BRAVO for a Female Ranger! It is a step that, I'm sure, few
would think of, and yet I would hope theirs was a world in which
talent meant somewhat more than the sex of the body. A very nice piece.

Title: Labour Pains · Author: Aratlithiel · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 483
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:33:02
This was *hilarious*, even though I've not had the dubious honor of
assisting in any way with a pregnancy.

Title: The Myth of the One Ring's Power · Author: Dreamflower ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 532
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:33:14
A well-reasoned argument. It could use a going through for typos, but
I think the author has won this point. The Ring does not seem to be
the all powerful thing so many people feared.

Title: Home · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn ·
ID: 647
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:33:32
Spoilers!
A touching and sweet product of the ever fruitful "what if",
particularly since the years of Aragorn's wandering are a big blank in
many ways. Your characterization of the children is excellent, and I
very much like that with the children and Theodred all, we can see the
hints of the adults they will become beneath the youngsters that they are.

Title: Vengeance's Folly · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Noldor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 718
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:33:43
I like that you started with him chafing under limitations, and ended
with him seeking leadership, which of course implies limitations.

Title: In absentia · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: House of Finwe ·
ID: 84
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:33:59
This is such a powerful dip into what his tortured body and mind could
have been like once he was released. You do a good job of walking the
knife edge between restoration and hopelessness with him.

Title: The Onion Riddle · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 13
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:34:13
Oh my goodness this is *hilarious*! The surprise twist at the end is
only trumped by the Gondorian's chagrin at his breech of etiquette.
I'm always so pleased to read something about dwarves, for it seems
few enough writers tackle the task, and you've done quite well here.
Thank you for it.

Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:34:29
Spoilers!
What a great metaphor, and even more interesting in that we get a less
than happy feeling about Estel, which is rare in fan fic in general.
You did it so well in 100 words.

Title: Dance of the Deer and Mûmak · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 559
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:34:39
It's nice to see more people writing about dwarves and how they fit in
after the War.

Title: Here's To The King! · Author: Jael · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands
· ID: 204
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:34:56
I think it says something about this story that I read it well over a
year ago and, once I read the description, the memory of it hit so
hard I laughed out loud yet again. The author's notes make the story,
of course, since curiosity drives us through the bulk of the reading.
Very nicely done.

Title: Bitter May · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Angst/Tragedy · ID: 265
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:35:22
Spoilers!
As always your Lily/Frodo stories tug at the heart, but never moreso
for me than this one at this time. The poor girl, and yet I find
myself glad that she knew what to do and how, and who to call that
would not betray her for her choice when the one who should have been
at her side was gone. It is such a hard thing, this choice Lily never
had to make, and handled with gentleness and grace, but also honesty.
You have a knack for that in your tales. Thank you for sharing them,
and in this, at least, in giving me a moment to reflect.

Title: Dawn Twilight · Author: viv · Times: Modern Times · ID: 182
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:36:14
Oh holy wow. I needed to sleep on this one to get coherence, and when
I woke, I'd dreamt of elves. That does *NOT* happen to me. You've done
such a great job of working the lingering elves into modern society
that I could almost see it happening in life. They have all, for the
most part at least, grown accustomed to the human way of things,
unlike humans that, as we age, reject newfangled things like debit
card machines and computers with wireless Internet connections for the
safe familiarity of a rotary dial telephone. Moira reminds me very
much of how I thought her nth great grandmother would be from reading
the books, and while by no means a perfect "Mary Sue", is still quite
the gutsy girl. Working Tolkien's history into Elvin history was
another stroke of brilliance, but what kept me reading most was the
humor, though to be honest, I'm so weak on the Silmarillion, I'm still
not sure who everyone is. I'll be going back to reread some soon.

Title: The Wedding Gift · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 40
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:36:29
Aww! How sweet. Thanks for this peek into the private lives of Dwarves.

Title: The Waker · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 287
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:36:47
This, exactly, was the sort of thing I had in mind when I thought of
using sound words in a story. The way you managed to convey
his/her/its desire for so much is of course entirely the author's
talent showing. :) It gave me the shivers and at the same time made me
feel sorry for the ignorant beast lurking in the water.

Hi Oshun,

Sorry it took me a few days to reply to this; I was not ignoring you but
instead taking care of some other stuff.

Anyway... I agree that this is often a fine line to walk, what is
constructive criticism and what is too negative. I think as long as you
are explaining what you actually liked about the story, then what you're
describing would be fine in most cases. A lot also depends on how well
you know the person - like when you talked about the infamous author's
notes (:-D) in your reviews of one of my stories. I didn't have any
problems with that, partly because you also told me what you liked about
the story and also because I knew you so could interpret it better. It
didn't bother me at all, and I suspect other authors (especially ones
who know you outside the MEFAs and so have a context to interpret your
comments) would interpret that kind of thing exactly the same way.

So you know, I haven't had any complaints about your reviews. Or anyone
else's this year, for that matter. This post was more... preventative,
than addressing a problem we're running into. It's been on my list of
things to discuss in weekly posts since the beginning of the year. If
there was an actual problem, I would have discussed it with the reviewer
before now.

Marrta

my heartofoshun@aol.com wrote:

>
>
> Maybe I have written too many reviews too fast (hence crankiness), but I
> have found this year that I have a tendency to remark on what someone
> did that
> made the story a hard sell for me and that I am writing the review
> because I
> think it is better than most for other reasons. I usually do not insert a
> negative point in a review purely out of constructive criticism (they have
> friends and Betas for that who share their world view, odd canon
> interpretationm
> right?), more self-defense (I must explain why I am giving this story
> points,
> when it turns on its head everything I love about x, y, or z). I do not
> want
> to give points to stories I dont like, but there are stories I like
> despite
> themselves! LOL I never thought this would be a problem, because I would
> never
> review a story I did not truly appreciate on a several different levels.
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I definitely think that I would be delicate with a complete stranger. Also,
like I said, I am reviewing stories that I love. I have raised discussion
points on canon also with people I know. Usually, in the case where it is not
entirely positive to say something along the line of: I never saw it that way,
but your story is convincing. (And I am also very conscious of points--I
won't spend 3-4 points on something along those lines unless I think it is a
great story.)



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Title: House of Ransom · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles ·
ID: 657
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:37:01
As always, you write Beleg from such a deep perspective. Of course, I
always admire those who can craft a drabble well since it's a skill I
find so difficult myself. Another good one, Binks.

Title: The Return · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Drama · ID: 167
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:37:26
And to think, that same scene was replayed over and over again
throughout Middle-earth. Very nicely portrayed. Your details are
excellent, and I very much appreciate how important the animals are in
your tale. They help set the mood and move the action as much as the
human characters. They add a bit of reality, in my mind. Nicely done.

Title: Small Strengths · Author: Elwen · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort
· ID: 238
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:37:44
You've managed to find sweetness from something that, to most people
at least, is quite repulsive. Seems poor Frodo always finds the bad
end of things though! A nice little piece.

Title: MAGIC: The Password · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Elven
Lands · ID: 451
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:38:10
Spoilers!
LMAO! A new time clock system was installed at my work place. I've
been hearing grumbles about "modern technology" for *days* now, though
I'd much rather hear them from your Thranduil than any of my
coworkers! Thanks also for the beverage warning. His pride at
remembering his wedding anniversary would have bathed my keyboard in
grape juice, and that gets expensive. :) The only question that
remains is, does he remember his wife's Begetting Day? You've given me
a good laugh on a sleepless night. Thanks!

Title: A Taste of Home · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 138
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:38:53
I *hate*, with a blinding passion, the Yule Treat in question... but I
love how passionate your hobbits are about it. Now, my grandmother's
krepfeul cookies are another matter. In this story, you have touched
on a universal love: traditional foods, especially those associated
with holidays, and that helps us as readers feel more a part of the
story. Very nicely done, with a great heaping spoonful of the humor I
so love to see when someone writes a hobbit.

Title: Wind of Change · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 47
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:39:09
Wow. Was not expecting that, but I love the wind imagery you've used,
and the way that breeze ties everything together. Limited word counts
usually trip me up when I write, so I am even more impressed that
you've done such a wonderful scene in so few words. Bravo.

Title: The Importance of Being Bilbo · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 686
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:39:38
Spoilers!
I never really noticed the similarities in plot arc between "The
Hobbit" and "The Lord of the Rings" before reading this, but now I
feel rather foolish for missing them. However, I would point out that
I don't think this narrative path is unique to Tolkien; if I remember
my legends properly, the now both famous and infamous "Beowulf" epic
follows a similar path. The feasting at the mead hall of Hrothgar (a
party) draws the wrath of the monster Grendel and causes the hero
Beowulf to embark on a dangerous quest to rid one part of the world of
a certain danger, part of which is dealt with in a set of caves and a
swamp. Tolkien being a professor of Olde English and Anglo Saxon, he
was of course familiar with the epic poem, and was apparently
influenced by it in some ways, at least.

I enjoyed this essay. Thanks for making me think.

Title: Yule at Great Smials · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 566
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:39:54
The last line makes this story, though I love what you've done with
Gandalf and the relationship between the 3 cousins between the
beginning and the end. Great fun to read, with some nice hints about
what is to come in a few more dozen years. Bravo.

Title: Lock Out · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits · ID: 307
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:40:31
I laughed out loud, being highly prone to leaving my keys at work or
some such and spending a lot of time on my front porch waiting for
rescue. How funny and delightfully fluffy.

Title: Lost and Found · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Mid
Third Age · ID: 23
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:40:49
A very sweet scene. I like the tendency within the fandom of
portraying Gandalf as quite grandfatherly and kind with youngsters.
You've done quite well with that here. I'm also taken with your
Faramir as a confident little lad with a will to please.

Title: Rekindling · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 255
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:41:07
I have very little to say except simply wow.

Title: One Equal Temper of Heroic Hearts · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres:
Romance: Gondor · ID: 334
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:41:20
Generally people don't like to think of the old enjoying intimacy. And
yet you've made me hopeful that I'll be as lucky as Arwen in my
advanced age. :) Well done.

Title: Elflings · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 348
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:41:42
I'm laughing out loud, if for no other reason than the language your
distinguished king has been forced to use. How delightfully clever,
and so out of the norm of what is seen of Thranduil.

Title: The Dwarves Treasure · Author: eiranae · Races: Dwarves · ID: 312
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:42:33
Spoilers!
Every time I see this story (and I see more of it than others) I'm
reminded of the Dr. Seuss Book "Oh the Places You'll Go". I remember
worrying about how to tell a writer who admitted a lack of confidence
in her first story that, with some hard work, it could be great.
Thankfully you took the suggestions and critique with enthusiasm and
grace, rolled up your sleeves, and a year [(Yes, Eira, a year! I
couldn't quite believe it either,)] later, look at what you've got. A
look into the mines and minds of Dwarves, and images of them as a
people and a culture, not as a plot device rearing up before the Star
Character comes back on set; a companion set to the Gimli/Legolas
canon relationship that, to my thinking at least, is canon plausible,
and adorable besides; a trip through the late Third Age before the War
of the Ring, from the perspectives of three of the most overlooked
rulers (Dain, Thranduil and Elrond) in the alliance that sees us to
the end of evil in Middle-earth; a fun to read, young reader friendly
gap filler that has reminded me, at least, of what fun it can be to be
a child, and how open the hearts of the young can truly be. ["Oh, oh
the places you'll go"] So, where are we off to next?

Title: Wizards' Pupils · Author: Altariel · Races: Men: Minas Tirith ·
ID: 108
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:42:51
A very nicely put together 'what if' that seems to work with the
characterizations as laid down by Tolkien himself. Well done.

Title: The Road Trip · Author: Garnet Took · Times: Modern Times · ID: 410
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:43:09
LMAO. Muses on the attack.

Title: Trading Pledges · Author: Adaneth · Races: Dwarves · ID: 339
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:43:27
Wow. A deep delving into the murky realm of dwarf women and how they
contribute to the fighting and working of their men. I really, really
liked it, though I think there are related pieces I should read before
I know the whole story.

Title: Symbols of Love · Author: Larner · Genres: Adventure · ID: 130
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:43:39
How sweet.

Title: They Also Serve · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 365
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:43:59
Finally! An Arwen that isn't entirely useless in a kitchen, though I
can't blame her for being a bit distracted. I like that you also
touched on her separation from her mother, and how family should help
one through difficult times. It must have been a difficult few hundred
years, to be the only woman in the family of Elrond Halfelvin. Well done.

Title: Somewhere I Have Never Traveled · Author: Fiondil · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 578
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:44:31
Spoilers!
I found the slight taking down a peg that the Queen experiences here
quite refreshing. Within the fandom itself, I see and dislike the
tendency to venerate Arwen because she gave up her immortality, though
I greatly respect the courage of those who love. You've highlighted
that difference very well here. Bravo. (And the roses joke was a nice
touch too. Mixing humor with sadness is a great move, and you do it so
well every time. I'm very impressed.)

Title: Primum Non Nocere (First, Do No Harm) · Author: febobe ·
Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 628
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:45:02
Spoilers!
Wow. Great detail on keeping Sam and Frodo in the former nursery. I've
never seen that in a fic before, but it's a "Hobbit sense" decision.
Sam's descriptions and impressions of Eowyn were touching too, and it
was an excellent choice on your part to include the scents and
comparisons to ["new mown hay"] and ["good taters and carrots and fine
tilled earth"]. They're just so... *Sam* ways of explaining things.
And then for Frodo's part: the food descriptions made me hungry, as
they tend to do in good Hobbit stories, but then to realize that I've
never read a story in which Frodo and the White Lady took comfort in
the other's experience with the Witch King was a pleasant shock. An
excellent idea that, in my experience at least, is rare. What a great
story! I'm so glad I found it.

Title: Twentynine White Horses · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 557
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:45:22
Spoilers!
At first I cringed *A LOT* because dentistry is an art with which I am
far less than friendly. And then I laughed because, to be entirely
honest, within the fandom Legolas is always so infernally pretty, it
was nice to see him mussed for a change, though of course I felt bad
that he was so darned uncomfortable. Then I read ["But Father, I'm one
hundred and eighty-three."] and lost it! You worked a very sweet
ending onto it to. I really enjoyed reading it.

Title: Care to Ride My Hot-Rod Fell Beast? · Author: viv · Genres:
Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 180
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:45:42
I just woke up my Taller Half with laughing. What ever happened to
handing a girl a bouquet and telling her what a flattering outfit
she's wearing? Honestly!

Title: Nightfall · Author: Jael · Times: Second and Early Third Age ·
ID: 87
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:46:04
The mental image of Thranduil on that hill with his helmet off,
screaming at the sky, is going to stay with me for quite a while. You
have a nice way with words. Well done.

Title: Five Hair Care Tips for Rohirrim · Author: EdorasLass · Genres:
Humor · ID: 71
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:46:18
All right, that was funny. I'm generally not fond of parody and the
like, but that was great.

Title: In The Darkness Of My Dreaming · Author: Cuthalion · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 284
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:46:38
Of all your Lily stories, I'm torn between this one and "Cinnamon and
Chocolate" as my favorite. This is a sweet ending, fitting for the
hobbit who spent her whole life a 'spinster' and an outcast because of
her devotion to one she knew better than even his closest friends.
Touching is too trite a word, and yet it's the best I can do. The
lyrics, too, add to the tale, though the device is often used with
less success, or worse, to distraction. Just marvelous.

Title: A Moment in the Morning in Bree · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 731
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:47:04
And now we know why Aragorn looked so scraggly and worn when they
camped on Weathertop! This was HILARIOUS! Your hobbits are far more
like those I saw in my head when I read the books that what I've read
in some stories. Such a nice little gap filler.

Title: Shall We Dance? · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Steward's Family · ID: 93
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 04:47:44
I opened this with some misgivings, not generally liking what people
do with the character of Denethor (post movie), and being likewise
hesitant to read anything about a character I am still struggling to
write on my own. That said, this was such a delightful read! Your
Denethor is not the madman of the Jackson films, and your Lothiriel is
neither an insufferably spoiled (though obviously doted on) princess
nor a veiled modern woman outside of her times. She's simply a
teenager on the verge of adulthood who still sees the good in a cranky
old man. I very much enjoyed it.

Title: Star's End · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of Elrond ·
ID: 283
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:04:33
He gave her the gift that he cannot have. As horrible as it is, I find
it admirable.

Title: Between Childhood and Coming of Age · Author: Dreamflower ·
Races: Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 141
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:04:53
There were many points in this tale that I chuckled, but ["And Pippin
was a Took."] made me laugh out loud. Funny how those words, or some
combination thereof, can say so much about such a small creature. He's
just delightful while he's trying to figure out the mysteries of
lasses. Nicely done.

Title: FAULT: The Doctor Is In · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 545
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:05:17
Spoilers!
I once said, just in passing, that Freud would have had a field day
with the Feanorions. Apparently I was not wrong. Nice.

Title: Dead Steward's Gift · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Mystery · ID: 572
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:05:33
I had to laugh in the last chapter. I was reminded of what my
chinchillas do every time I bring out a camera. :) I like this small
peek into your 'Verse, and I LOVE Cirion. This is a fitting gift for
your Zou Zou.

Title: Promise and Sorrow · Author: Virtuella · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 607
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:05:48
Wow. It reads so smoothly and ties one to the other to the next like
the links of a chain. Just marvelous, and that even moreso for it not
featuring a main Canon character. It seems in this fandom few are
willing to explore the unnamed people for whom the war was fought and
won, and you've done a fabulous job of it here. Bravo.

Title: The Librarian · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 700
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:06:04
Lol. If the mischief your young Legolas gets into is any indication of
what he'll be like as an adult, they're *all* going to be in trouble!

Title: The Prisoner of Dol Guldur · Author: Soledad · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 102
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:06:31
It's a shame to see this wonderful "what if" marred by spell check
errors. ["The threes and shrubs covering the hillside..." ... "her son
was beeing held"... "He was still pale and week and utterly
exhausted." ... "Fur curing the trees out of evils long and slow work,
and very hard."].

Title: The Sky Is Over · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 83
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:06:45
The more I learn about the Silmarillion, the more I think it was a
truly difficult time in which to be alive and trying to keep one's
spirit intact. You've summed up that hopelessness well here.

Title: The Legend of the Grey Riders · Author: Jay of Lasgalen ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 176
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:07:01
Being an only child myself, even I can see the logic in avoiding this
argument, at least from the point of view of the elvin twins. Very nice.

Title: Essecarmë · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 247
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:07:12
This reads very much like the sort of moment that would portend all
the chaos that would follow those children for the rest of their
lives. Very nicely done.

Title: The Dark of Night · Author: Ellie · Genres: Horror · ID: 484
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:07:21
Wow! You do so much with detail, you've given me the willies.

Title: The Westering Fire · Author: Aprilkat · Races: Hobbits · ID: 200
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:07:34
I like your version of this moment. It's very hobbity. I think this is
also the first time I've read Rosie using a vernacular similar to
Sam's, and I enjoy that too. A nice piece. Thanks.

Title: DISGUISE: Emissaries · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 56
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:07:48
Spoilers!
This "what if" works very well. You did an excellent job of capturing
Olorin's book and film personality even before he was made corporeal.
I laughed out loud.

Title: As Was Dwarven Tradition · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 553
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:08:08
Aww! Dwarf fluff is a decidedly under-explored part of the fandom, I
think. This was a very sweet read. :)

Title: Pride and Despair: A Defense of Ecthelion's Son · Author: Marta
· Genres: Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 624
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:08:37
I think you are right to attempt to defend Denethor son of Ecthelion.
Much of what I read regarding him in recent fic is... myopic, at best,
in regards to his function as a leader, and also his character
according to what we are given in canon. This is not to say he's a
character I particularly like for any reason, save perhaps that he did
his job well before grief and madness broke his will. It is hard,
particularly in fan fiction, to like "the bad guys" and harder still,
I think, to understand how they became the characters they are.
Hopefully this effort on your part helps.

Title: Meddling · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Mid Third Age: Eriador ·
ID: 695
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:08:49
I like the loyalty in Halbarad, and the courage it took to do what he
did. As for Gandalf, your portrayal of him is wonderful: grandfatherly
and wise, but not too stodgy. This was an enjoyable read.

Title: A Place for Gandalf · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Mid Third
Age: Eriador · ID: 391
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:09:10
Spoilers!
I like the concept of Gandalf being offered a home in the Shire,
though there was the odd moment where I felt the narrative sat on that
welcome a little heavily. The characterizations were splendid, and I
like how the group is coming together already, even at such young (or
younger, at least) ages. The conversation on the doorstep was, really,
a brilliant move to close the piece, bringing everyone's grievances
full circle. Just an excellent all-round tale.

Title: Wonderful Tonight · Author: Violin Ghost · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 320
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:09:20
Aww! This was a very sweet story to read, and I've always loved the
song you used.

Title: The Houseless · Author: Jael · Genres: Horror · ID: 178
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:09:32
I suspected how the story would go, having heard the parent story
growing up years ago. I like this version, though, with a noble
Legolas and a lonely but sweet lost girl.

Title: A Woman in Few Words: The Character of Nerdanel and Her
Treatment in Canon and Fandom · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 107
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:09:45
Well researched and well written. This is the first time I've heard
mention of her Mother Name, and you raise some interesting points
about why she is so popular among Time of the Trees/First Age fans and
writers. It's helped me with a challenge story I didn't know was going
to incorporate her too. So, my thanks go along with my congratulations.

Title: Elanor of Westmarch: The Return · Author: Baranduin · Races:
Hobbits: Family · ID: 78
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:09:56
Aw. What a peaceful end, bittersweet though it is. I like her spunk
even in her old age, and the desire to ruffle a few feathers even at
the end.

Title: Two Prisoners · Author: Lord Branwyn · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 724
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:10:05
An intriguing idea with a nice little twist at the end. Thanks for the
smile.

Title: The Right to Bear Arms · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 653
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:10:18
I very much like that your arrogant Boromir is knocked down a peg or
two. I didn't so much like the ending. It felt a bit heavy-handed
narratively, as though it were forced into an ending instead of
finishing itself. Still, a very enjoyable read.

Title: Cuts Gone Wrong · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Mid Third Age:
Eriador · ID: 156
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:10:28
I think this is the first piece I've read about young Aragorn as a
Ranger and liked. It comes off as comforting and homely rather than
fluffy or insipid. A very nice job.

Title: My Precious · Author: SheBit · Genres: Romance: Drabbles · ID: 14
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:10:37
You write a good, creepy but still almost sympathetic, Grima. Still, Ew.

Title: Hidden Watcher · Author: kitt_otter · Genres: Drama · ID: 702
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:10:51
Spoilers!
Ooh. This was nice. You made great use of the idea of keener than
human elvin senses and filled in a gap. I love that he smelled him
first. And this {"But… Too much thought finds the guard dead."} is an
awesome line.

Title: Not Quite Any Other Day · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 631
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:11:04
Spoilers!
This reminded me of a family story of my youngest aunt running after a
limo, yelling for her new sister-in-law to bring back her brother! How
very sweet, especially since we get to see Estella start to follow in
her brother's footsteps once again.

Title: The Nag · Author: celticbard · Races: Men: Steward's Family ·
ID: 347
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:11:13
We need a follow up to this of Denethor's reaction when he meets his
new mount.

Title: Out of the Blue · Author: Jael · Races: Elves · ID: 205
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:12:37
Spoilers!
Not sure if the Bonnie Rait song reference at the end of the prologue
is intentional or not, but having read and fallen in love with "Not
Fade Away" in last year's MEFA, I would almost expect it. That said, I
was hoping for another novel length journey into the inner workings of
the River's corporation as well as their family, and I was a little
sad that we didn't get it. But, I LOVE what's here. Hal deserves a
girl after all he's been through, and the idea of Orville and Rudy
enjoying Nascar made me crack up hard! I love that Mr. Rivers reads
"The Onion" and watches Bob the Builder on repeat. I love that Leif
pitches in with cleaning the litter box and breaks off in business
phone calls because he's home for the weekend with his kid, and the
name of that troublesome client made me snort Pepsi out of my nose.
(My monitor needed cleaning anyway.) But the implication of the towers
story was just a stroke of genius. If anything would make a CPS worker
take note, it's something like that, and yet, when you know the back
story... I really can't say enough about how stunning it is to see
this sort of creative thinking and playfulness in the fandom. It has
been growing thin, I think, in many places. Please keep giving us more.

Title: Trinity · Author: pandemonium_213 · Times: Modern Times · ID: 51
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:13:00
Spoilers!
["With that, Fionn and Saunders simultaneously tossed the jewels and
the ring high into the air where they swirled around each other until
they could no longer be seen. Then the sky exploded with the radiance
of a thousand suns."] Awesome moment. Great writing.

Title: Cinnamon and Chocolate · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance ·
ID: 264
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:13:34
This one always makes me hungry! In *at least* one sense of the word.
*giggle* I think the playfulness between the two of them, like over
the icing bowl, is what makes this so delightful. They never, even in
very heated or passionate moments, misplace that humor. And also, too,
you touch here on how love, or at least contentment, can be contagious
with the second batch of cinnamon rolls made in the Shire that day. I
don't think I've ever said this either, but thank you for not working
too hard at making it 'hobbity'. The subtle way you do it: focusing on
food, on simple joys, on surroundings, are far better story telling in
my mind than too many references to tantalizingly curly foot hair. :)
You invoke the spirit of simplicity that I like about Tolkien's
hobbits, even when they're doing things that Tolkien himself would
almost definitely *not* have written about!

Title: The Keys of the Realm · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 477
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:14:03
Spoilers!
Okay, I'll admit to being a little morbid in more than a few ways, so
the choice of words here struck me as sort of darkly-comic. ["They
assaulted the walls and--and sought to dishearten us by sending proof
of their hatred for the Men they caught abroad." Faramir paled. "I can
too easily imagine." "They made little *headway*, however, during the
night,"] The falcons on the window sill were also a nice touch,
bringing a bit of the wildness Elessar used to know into his new life
in the city. Gimli and Legolas working together on the circlets for
Frodo and Sam is a wonderful move as well; as if the relationship
between the two, and subsequently their peoples, needed more cementing
from those two, it was probably not since Celebrimbor and Narvi that
such a project was undertaken by such a pair.

As another small criticism, this phrase is also used *a lot* in
chapter 4: ["or so Master Meriadoc assured me"]. In that chapter,
though, the awe and respect with which Faramir speaks of the hobbits
is very powerful, and an idea I've never seen mentioned before in a
fiction. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it.

Title: Dirty Jobs · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 232
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:14:18
Spoilers!
Like most, I'm sure, my first reaction to these chores of his was
'ew'. I've smelled dirty chicken coops and mucky ponds and dirty dairy
barns and... well, Pippin must truly love his mother... or getting
messy. Thanks for making me smile.

Title: With Many "Fond" Acknowledgments · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 472
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:14:29
An excellent example of the truth behind the old adage "Too many cooks
spoil the broth."

Title: Took Broth · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 543
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-26 05:14:38
That's a neat idea, and illustrates how wonderful things happen when
differences are embraced.

Title: The Conscience of the King · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Humor · ID: 649
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-26 05:52:19
Spoilers!
This story is a light hearted look at a very difficult subject that
concerns most of us at some time or other, or at least it did until
most couples were sexually intimate with each other prior to the
wedding. We,or at least the older of us, have all been at a wedding as
friends and relatives of the bride, I should think and wondered if the
bride would enjoy the coming night and if the groom were worthy of her
and would treat her with kindness and respect.

Eomer is no different where his sister is concerned and at her wedding
is both happy that she has found joy and uneasy at the thought of her
as a married woman.

As a Faramir fan, I'm sure Eowyn's bridegroom will treat her very
kindly,be patient with her if needful and make her a happy wife.He
will hardly act on his wedding night like a bull in a china shop. I
think deep down Eomer knows this, but he finds it hard to imagine his
little sister as a wife and no longer under his protection,but that of
another man.

Eomer is wise enough to let his sister go and wish her joy in her
marriage but cannot help still feeling protective of her as this inner
conversation he has with himself proves.

This is a very well written story, much better than the usual
fanfiction fare of eomer does not like Faramir and makes his life a
misery,fights with him ect.

Wisely, Eomer decides to stop fretting and have some more ale!



Title: Reflections in the Smoke · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 294
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-26 06:23:40
Spoilers!
It took me a while when I first discovered Tolkien's Masterpiece to
realise that Sauron was of the same race of powerful beings as
Gandalf. I did not know,though until I read this excellent ficlet just
how many names Sauron had. I suppose it is not surprising as Sauron,
like the Christian Devil, who also has many names,is a fallen angelic
being.

Tolkien never tells us what Gandalf feels when the Ring is
destroyed.Raksha makes an excellent job of filling in the gaps here.

It must feel very strange for Gandalf no longer to have the weight of
Middle-earth's future upon his shoulders and no longer bear a Ring of
Power,but simply an ordinary ring.

It shows Gandalf's greatness that he can feel a moment's sorrow for
Sauron while at the same time seeing him for exactly what he was.

I especially loved the comparison between Sauron and a cat, the cat
being a far wiser creature!

I envisage Gandalf as feeling rather 'flat" and drained at this point
in the story as well as happy that Sauron is gone,the Ring is
destroyed and he can finally go home. Until then, he can sit by the
fire and smoke his pipe,for not being mortal, smoking cannot damage
his health,and rejoice in the victory and that his friends are safe.
A well written and thought provoking story.

Title: The Rescue of Celebrian · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 382
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-26 06:47:15
Spoilers!
What a harrowing account of Celebrian's rescue, and the after-effects
of her ordeal! The reader is shown, not told, the trauma that she has
endured, in shadowy bits and pieces of her own recollection and the
misery she endures even after returning home. The injection of some of
the orcs involved, with individual personalities, and Celebrian's
familiarity - caused by her long captivity, is an excellent
storytelling touch.

I hope to see this story finished one day.

Title: Feeling Safe · Author: shirebound · Races: Hobbits · ID: 633
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-26 08:02:16
Spoilers!
A very sweet story in which Frodo is a sleepwalker.On the way to
Rivendell,one night FRodo sleepwalks then falls asleep again propped
against Aragorn. The King to be is touched by this unconcious
expression of trust. A heartwarming and likeable tale.

Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-26 08:18:52
Spoilers!
I'm not usually a fan of stories that don't have Tolkien's original
characters in them, but these two characters won me over completely to
the extent that I would love to read more about them. The war left
many victims,not all on the battle field.This moving and well written
ficlet shows how two survivors deal with peace and hope for a brighter
future.The reader is left feeling optimistic.

Title: Frogdom · Author: Neilia · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands · ID: 192
Reviewer: Inkling · 2008-07-26 08:40:10
Spoilers!
There's something I've always found irresistibly charming about tales
of people magically turned into beasts, beginning with A.A. Milne's
hapless Prince Udo in "Once on a Time." And "Frogdom" is no exception,
as Neilia imagines the delightfully droll consequences of Gandalf
making good on a threat.

Among my favorite moments: the Pippin-frog going eyeball to eyeball
with Lord Elrond, Merry emptying the distasteful contents of his
pocket to grudgingly accept custody of his enchanted cousin ["Give me
the little sod, then"] and Frodo's vague frog-care instructions:
["Just make sure he gets something to eat and drink and keep him warm,
cool, wet – whatever frogs like."]

A very nice first fanfic effort!


Title: Pippin-Frog For A Day · Author: Neilia · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 115
Reviewer: Inkling · 2008-07-26 08:54:06
Neilia's sequel to "Frogdom" is off to a promising start, especially
Pip-frog's hilarious encounter with the Elf maiden: ["Are you
comforted by my heart beat, little one?"] But in ditching Merry's
pocket to go exploring, the fool-of-a-frog may find more adventure
than he bargained for...



Title: The Craft of the Elven Smith · Author: Larner · Times:
Multi-Age · ID: 1
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-26 16:24:16
I really enjoyed this story. The premise that items made by Nerdanel
played a role in the healing of Middle Earth is a really appealing
one. I was drawn to the fact that most of what Nerdanel created were
really tools for others to use in their creative pursuits. It also
seemed fitting that she recieved a sort of healing for herself as a
result of her work. Very nicely done!

Title: Sunset Gates · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
· ID: 342
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-26 20:21:04
Oh, but this is TOO cute! We knew that Gimli went west, but to THIS
west? He sees the Lady standing tall--and then is greeted....

Thanks so for the laugh! Excellent use of misdirection.

Title: Wind of Change · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 47
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-26 21:19:40
Spoilers!
Raksha manages to draw in three perspectives that ordinarily wouldn't
be anywhere within dramatic proximity of each other at the same time.
The juxtaposition of Witch-king, Eomund, and Glorfindel has prophecy
at its center: the birth of a daughter is the realization of prophetic
utterance in history, and from this moment on, the future can develop
out of the present.

The storm that seems to cover all of Middle-earth is also used well as
a physical linking of the three perspectives, otherwise so far from
each other geographically. Ulmo is the Vala whose reach into
Middle-earth is greatest, other than Manwe's, if I recall correctly,
so the fact that it is a storm and the wind - water and air - that
herald the arrival of the future in the presence seems very
appropriate to me.

Evocative, spare, no extraneous words - well done, Raksha.

Title: Birthday Present · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 441
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-26 21:20:03
Spoilers!
This was very sweet, but not cloyingly so. I love the choice of gift
here - I am sure that those who have small children will instantly
identify with Bilbo before Pippin's demand. And of course, it is not
as if we ever truly outgrow the desire to relive our favorite stories,
or else we wouldn't be fanficcing, now would we?

Title: Mournful Fords · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 368
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-26 21:20:17
Spoilers!
Imhiriel notes that she wished that Tolkien had given some description
of Theoden's reception of the news that his son has died. I am sure
many fans share her regret that it never was shown, but this drabble
helps to make up for the lack.

Theoden's reaction seems very plausible, given the situation in Rohan.
His imaginative stepping into his son's shoes amply displays his own
regrets and sense of responsibility for the near-collapse of his
court. The pragmatic (and one likes to think, trusting) last words of
his son are transformed - by extracting them from their tactical
setting, Imhiriel transforms them into an accusation.

Very bleak and sad - just as one imagines it would be, Imhiriel!

Title: Burdens · Author: Meril · Genres: Drama: General Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 219
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-26 21:20:23
Meril gives an elegant set of drabbles that show us the way in which
objects become more than mere things and become instead the bearers of
unspoken memories, feelings, and identities. These are the true
burdens, not the weight of things themselves. The weight of the past
and of the loss of the relationships that have defined who we thought
we were is beautifully portrayed in each story.

What is most interesting to me is the inclusion of ["The Book"]. This
is undoubtedly the most hopeful drabble, the ones where objects bear a
hoped-for identity that does not take the past as a burden. Rather, it
signifies the possibility of birth into a new and meaningful life
without passing through the stain of guilt that the others include.
Yet this is still 'a burden.' It's an interesting choice and brings up
the etymological question of what kind of hope it is: amdir or estel?
Would that make a difference to understanding the burdensomeness of
this [thin book]?

Fun questions, Meril!

Title: The Prisoner of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 313
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-07-26 22:12:26
Spoilers!
This is a chilling tale of how things could have been very different.
If Denethor had been saved, much else would have been lost - not a
necessary, but a feasible assumption, and one that will stay in my mind.

Title: Took Broth · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 543
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-07-26 22:20:58
I think this is a very sweet story. It's lovely to see the hobbits
enjoying a life of normality after their ordeals, and it's funny to
imagine Sam not looking forward to a meal! I always enjoy your smooth
and warm style of writing.

Title: Labour Pains · Author: Aratlithiel · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 483
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-27 02:17:16
Spoilers!
This is a gem among hobbit-fics; also a gem for anyone who relishes
funny Tolkien fanfiction.

In this wonderful story, Sam goes to minister to various trees and
bushes in need in the post-Ring War Shire for a few weeks, leaving a
very pregnant Rosie alone with a nervous Frodo.

A more conventional writer would have Rosie go into labour and Frodo
end up heroically delivering baby Elanor; but Aratlithiel does not go
for cliches. Frodo does suffer, and heroically copes with the cravings
and mood swings of poor Rosie, and tries his bachelor best to ease her
situation. But navigating through Mordor seems to have been easier
than satisfying Rosie; Frodo is just plain out of his depth.

The ending is very funny and plausible.

I love Aratlithiel's interpretation of Frodo's thought processes; and
his dialogue with Sam and later Rosie is terrific. I particularly like
that Frodo and Sam are very much at ease with each other in the manner
of old friends who know each other quite well.

Unusual and well worth reading.

Title: The Right to Bear Arms · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 653
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 02:28:36
Spoilers!
This was a most enjoyable story in which Boromir learns Hobbits are
full of surprises. I always see Boromir as rather
arrogant,undertanderbly so, I suppose, so it was fun to see Pippin get
the better of him and learn you should not underestimate your opponent.
Pippin's chalenge heralds a beginning of new respect and friendship
for man and Hobbits. A well written and likeable story which was a
treat to discover here.

Title: The Kindly Airs · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 480
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 02:34:33
Spoilers!
This was a most refreshing drabble. I loved the idea of the East Wind
being liberated by Sauron's fall to be her pure,fresh self again.

Title: With Many "Fond" Acknowledgments · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 472
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 02:44:59
Poor Sam ! as he struggles to deal with the views of everyone who is
included in the Red Book and still alive to offer their thoughts on
how they are depicted and how the events happened I wonder what the
characters would say to us about how we depict them?A delightful story
with a deeper theme that history is always told through a biased
viewpoint.A most enjoyable read from this talented writer,highly
recommended.

Title: No Regrets · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 490
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-27 03:35:24
Spoilers!
A beautiful drabble that asks and answers a question that many Faramir
fans might want to know - does the son of Denethor regret that he is
not a Ruling Steward?

Linda reveals Faramir's extreme satisfaction with the way things
turned out - he has his beloved wife and the most bountiful domain in
Gondor to share with her.

Tolkien seems to have associated Faramir, to some degree, with
springtime, in the green garb that he wore as Captain of the Rangers,
to the spring evoked in the athelas that Aragorn used to help free
Faramir from the Shadow's grasp, to Faramir's enthusiasm for restoring
the garden of Gondor, voiced to Eowyn.

Linda uses some outstanding description to evoke the beauty of
postRingWar Ithilien in bloom - I really liked the line [fields once
battlegrounds were now covered by waving corn and scarlet poppies.]
She paints a picture with words of a land bursting with nature's
bounty and beauty.

A thoughtful and lyrical drabble that harmonizes on Tolkien's love of
and respect for nature.


Title: Midwinter Thoughts · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Noldor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 570
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-27 03:35:53
I'd take him up on that offer, this thoughtful and sad Maitimo of
yours. He somehow manages to be noble and proud while still uncertain
and melancholy. A lovely dance of emotions in a few words. Very nicely
done.

Title: Five Things that Never Happened to Serinde of Dol Amroth ·
Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy ·
ID: 222
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-27 04:22:19
Spoilers!
The "Five Things That Never Happened To" AU fanfiction series is a
fascinating way for writers to explore different possibilities for
various characters. In this series of vignettes, Surgical Steel
postulates five possible situations involving her original character,
Serinde, surgeon of Minas Tirith and Bree.

My favorite of these vignettes, harrowing as it is, is the tale of
Serinde's suicide, spurred by her rape by her step-father. It's
horribly real and told in an understated way that her tragedy.

Of course, the happy AU where Halbarad lives is a great read as well...

Title: Undivided · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 46
Reviewer: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · 2008-07-27 04:37:48
Spoilers!
Raksha rarely writes elves, but when she does, the results are well
worth reading. In this short piece, she explores the relationship
between Elladan and Elrohir.

The brothers mourn their mother's impending departure from
MiddleEarth, and they also feel guilt that they did not save her
sooner from torment at the hands of the orcs. This is not an uncommon
theme in fanfiction, but Raksha focuses on the nature of the
interaction between the brothers. She describes a bond that, while not
sexual, is animal-like in its intensity. Tolkien gives us few details
about these two, but he never mentions them apart. The brothers
verbalize their grief and rationalize their actions, but in the end
they seek the very basic reassurance of each other's presence and
touch. The one flinches when the other is hurt; together since
conception, they recoil at the very thought of separation.

The phrase [..they fall asleep, coupled chastely..] is so evocative of
their extraordinary closeness which is intimate without being sexual.
One hopes that, in the end, they were able to stay together, either in
MiddleEarth or over the sea (though that is one of the many things
that Tolkien doesn't tell us).


Title: Least Expected · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Drabbles · ID: 512
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-27 05:28:07
Spoilers!
Ouch! There goes the Grey Company, Halbarad and apparently Aragorn
too, not to mention the saving of Minas Tirith and other parts of
Gondor from Corsairs and others.

Excellent snapshot of a quietly cataclysmic AU episode. Darn that Grima!

Title: There and Back · Author: Dana · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 89
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 06:26:34
Spoilers!
A well written pair of drabbles which convey Pippin's character well.
I especially liked the injured Beregond's observations that Pippin
helped him bear his pain and his admiration for the Hobbit.

Title: Twentynine White Horses · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 557
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 06:32:52
Spoilers!
This was a very cute story about Legolas losing a tooth when
sparring.I'm not a Legolas fan but the image of his father leaving a
coin under his pillow even though he was an adult made me smile. I am
sure many of us would envy the Elves the powers of tooth regeneration
desribed here!

Title: A Moment Away · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 474
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 06:36:02
Spoilers!
This was a beautiful drabble answering the question where Eowyn went
when suffering from the Black Breath. I loved the idea that she might
have gone to see her grandmother in the afterlife.This was touching
and well written.

Title: By Ship or Grave · Author: Larner · Genres: Poetry: Hobbits ·
ID: 618
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 06:55:02
Spoilers!
A poignant and vivid look at Frodo's thoughts as he contemplates that
he has two choices before him,either to die of his wounds systained
when destroying the One Rng, or take Ship to the West in the hope of
finding healing and peace. Whatever he choses it will cause pain to
those he loves and he is all too aware of this. A beautifully written
poem about poor Frodo's dilemma which reminds me of a hymn.



Title: The Road Trip · Author: Garnet Took · Times: Modern Times · ID: 410
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2008-07-27 15:45:09
Based on a true experience by the author, this story depicts just
about every nightmare that most families put up with while travelling
long distances. This particular tale, though, had me laughing my butt
off -- and my favourite scene is at the end, with all four bedraggled
hobbits standing at Slightly Tookish's door. Hilarious!

Title: Seven Sisters · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Other Beings · ID: 388
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2008-07-27 16:02:35
A mysterious, lovely story that takes place in Pippin's tweenaged
years, and features his sister Pervinca. Obviously, and for good
reason, poor Pippin is having a bad day and decides that he's had
enough. As a result, he does something impulsive and ends up not
feeling very well. During this incident, he observes what had crossed
his mind not long before. Rather than let the charade go on, Pippin no
longer observes but suddenly takes action. To read what he does, one
must read the story.

The author does a splendid job of weaving ancient mythology with her
hobbits!

Title: Temptation · Author: Princess Artemis · Genres: Poetry · ID: 416
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-07-27 16:09:35
This is a very powerful fic, with an eerie feel to it, and very true
to canon. All the different perspectives were very insightful - I was
surprised that it never spoke to Aragorn, though?

Title: Blue · Author: red lasbelin · Races: Elves · ID: 563
Reviewer: Oshun · 2008-07-27 16:50:48

This is an interesting examination of Glorfindel's possible history. I
like the fact that you not only give him a developed personality and
backstory, but enable the reader to imagine his father and brother as
well. Made we wish it was the beginning of a story instead of a
one-shot vignette/character study.

I would love to know more about his mother's bio also. Wonder if she
was Vanyarin? If so, which I think is likely, poor thing to be stuck
there in Gondolin with all those crazy Noldor. (Well, I guess at least
some of the crazier ones were someplace else.) I've always been
interested in the fact that more than 90 percent of the Noldor (women
and children included) went to M-e. They had to have been a pretty
fed-up bunch. Sorry, I'm getting carried away with my own canon
speculations here.

This interesting story makes me want to expand and think about the
environment surrounding it.


Title: Moon of the Sea · Author: pandemonium_213 · Times: Second and
Early Third Age · ID: 213
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-27 17:27:52
Spoilers!
It is high time that some attention was paid to the woman who was
Elendil's wife and the mother of the famous Isildur and Anarion.
Pandemonium gives this mysterious lady her due in this imaginative
series of ficlets.

Pandemonium blends moon-lore and canon information about Numenor in
this series, chronicling the life of Isilme from birth to the birth of
her own firstborn, Isildlur. Through it all, the moon is present, in
Isilme's name, in the moon itself shining on the seas, and
illuminating the union of Isilme and Elendil. There is an intriguing
mix of myth and eroticism, the latter tastefully but powerfully written.

Title: Duty, Honour, Country · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 81
Reviewer: whitewave · 2008-07-27 19:30:47
Maglor has always been one of my favorites among the Feanorions partly
because he had the most intriguing fate. The title I think describes
him very well--the gentlest of Feanor's sons and yet someone who will
not shrink from his doing his duty, upholding his honor and fighting
for what he believes is right.

Title: An Ordinary Woman · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age
and Prior: House of Finwe · ID: 32
Reviewer: whitewave · 2008-07-27 19:45:37
I was never fond of Luthien from the very first, she sounded too
unrealistic and perfect so I dutifully avoided fanfics that featured
her. It was Finrod who drew me in, him being my second favorite blond
elf, I decided to give this one a shot. I liked your version of the
secret behind the Girdle of Melian and the last part just made me
smile--how a very simple gesture of Finrod would have far-reaching
effects in the future.

Title: Maglor's Harp · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Horror · ID: 660
Reviewer: whitewave · 2008-07-27 19:51:49
This is a very radical "other" view of Macalaure but still it was
worth a few minutes of time to read it. It made me wonder how out of
it all how the most gentle of the Feanorions was able to even think
and then do those things. Thanks for sharing this.

Title: Thicker Than Water · Author: Noliel · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 541
Reviewer: whitewave · 2008-07-27 20:13:13
This was so heartbreaking. Thanks for giving us a good glimpse of the
aftermath of Doriath. The Feanorions have always been my favorite and
I wish I had read this sooner. The last scene was the most
touching--felt very sorry for Celebrimbor and how he must wish he
could turn back time. A very touching story.

Title: Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices · Author: Lady Bluejay ·
Genres: Drama: Incomplete · ID: 159
Reviewer: whitewave · 2008-07-27 20:30:40
A masterful blending of canon and gap-filler, very entertaining and a
good way to spend a few minutes getting "lost" in Middle Earth. I
enjoy the way Lady Bluejay writes her romances, Eomer and Lothiriel
are so well-fleshed out and the plot so well constructed that I always
look forward to her updates. I find myself hanging on to every
word--all the tension, the drama, the details--they all work together
so well which makes this one of my favorite romance and adventure stories.

Title: Alqualondë · Author: Moreth · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 220
Reviewer: Oshun · 2008-07-27 20:34:29
You really knocked me out with these two drabbles. They are intense
and contain such a level of realism and emotion, yet are so spare and
utterly without cloying sentimentality. I am not fond of the subject
matter either (Alqualondë or any of the so-called kinslayings for that
matter—"so-called" for me, because in the world we live in they would
be called wars or military engagements, which doesn't make the moral
complexities less, but does could lead someone to consider if there
might be some). Additionally, the internet seems awash in stories of
Alqualondë that are purely and simply Fëanorian angst-fests.
Hand-wringing Fëanorians have never been something I could easily wrap
my mind around. They simply did too much and accomplished too much
before the end to have had the time to stand around being a bunch of
Middle-earth versions of Hamlet, with one hand on their forehead and
the other clutching their chest, chanting "Woe is me!"

By contrast, the insight of the author in taking a step back from all
that and viewing the scene from the point of view of two ordinary, not
legendary or bigger-than-life, participants effectively takes the
story right out of that whole genre and frees the author to write of
what it really might have been like. The first one really stands apart
for me, although the second is extremely well done and thoughtful
also. The surprise, lack of preparation or consideration, and the
protagonist's final words before he dies, are just perfect. What an
introductory piece—really outstanding—you have set the bar high for
yourself.


Title: The Ritual Disturbed · Author: Larner · Genres: Horror · ID: 68
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-27 21:25:13
An interesting glimpse at an under-appreciated book scene from an
unexpected point of view.

Title: The Revenge of Curufin's Horse · Author: Moreth · Genres: Humor
· ID: 139
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-27 21:28:37
Celegorm, whatever else one might think of him, is so gentle and
patient with the horse here. Good job to her, too, for getting back to
where she thinks she belongs.

Title: A Matter of Ill Reputation · Author: Lily · Races: Hobbits:
Childhood · ID: 210
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-27 21:36:13
Yes, some bullies need to be beaten at their own game. I can see this
mischievous streak you've written into Frodo ticking Tolkien's fancy
too. Thanks for the laugh.

Title: The Prisoner of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 313
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-27 21:47:17
Spoilers!
How bleak, not only for Denethor who may or may not have deserved his
fate, but also for the Rohirrim bereft of Theoden king and their
princess, and those of Gondor who loved the nobility and quiet
strength of Faramir. I think I'm glad he died.

Title: The Wedding Gift · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 40
Reviewer: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · 2008-07-27 21:55:24
Spoilers!
As others have said, not enough is written about the dwarves. It may
be partly Peter Jackson's fault for showing them as ugly buffoons, and
it may be partly Tolkien's fault for telling us so little about them.
In this tender piece, Ann portrays a moment in their unseen domestic
life. These little "still life" scenes, drawn in luminous colors and
filled with exquisite details, are one of Ann's specialties.

It is touching that Gloin offers the best materials he can find and
afford, yet he still feels they are an unworthy accompaniment to
Nandi's loveliness. I liked the parallel with Gimli who also uses his
art to celebrate the beauty of his beloved. Gloin's belief that [ever
was beauty sanctified by purpose] echoes one of the mantras of 20th
century industrial design—"form ever follows function." I think Gloin
would probably enjoy browsing in an IKEA store! [Strong as bird's
bones] is a nice turn of phrase; it sounds like an oxymoron, but of
course it is not—for their size and weight, birds' hollow bones are
relatively strong, a masterpiece of design, and Gloin is probably well
aware of it.

The hint of eroticism is convincing yet also slightly alien (he lifts
her beard, lol!). I liked how he noticed the curve of her neck—even at
this most personal moment, he sees with the eyes of a craftsman,
analyzing the visual elements that please him. This drabble offers a
fascinating glimpse into Gloin's mind.


Title: Five Things that Never Happened to Serinde of Dol Amroth ·
Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy ·
ID: 222
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-27 22:00:15
I think, of everything that *didn't* happen to Serinde, I rather like
the line from the second bit about biting her cheeks to keep some
control over her mouth. But the last section, of course, is my
favorite. Yes, I'm a soft-headed woman and a sloppy romantic, but the
nice thing about "5 Things that Never Happened" stories is that we get
to daydream. I enjoyed this almost as much as I enjoyed the original.

Title: Scholarship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 43
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 22:51:51
Spoilers!
I always imagine Faramir as a very good father in contrast to his own
and this well written story shows that he does indeed enjoy an
excellent relationship with his son.

I am not sure,given Tolkien's deep Roman Catholic faith if he would be
so liberal about Elboron reading a pornographic scroll or fail to warn
him about waiting for marriage.I think Faramir would confiscate it and
punish Elboron, but as Tolkien does not tell us anything of such
matters, we are all free to our own interpretations of how deeply
Tolkien's religion is reflected in his good characters.I'm also not
sure if Elboron would call his father [sir] in private, but again each
reader and writer can imagine what they choose.After all, Faramir is
the Steward of Gondor.

I liked it that Elboron felt able to talk to his father and that
Faramir would answer his questions about the birds and the bees and
warn the boy not to take advantage of women.

I think everyone who has had a child or even watched children grow up
with epathise with Faramir lamenting how swiftly his little boy is
growing up.

I especially enjoyed the vivid descriptions of the orchard and
Faramir's reflections onsearching for forbidden knowledge as a boy. At
least Elboron can talk to his father,unlike Faramir.

A thought provoking story about the difficulties encountered by
parents,which is very topical still.

Title: Undivided · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 46
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-27 23:32:13
I cannot say that I am a fan of Elladan and Elrohir,maybe because of
all the dreadful stories around showing them as silly pranksters,I
assume.This story,however,is quite different and shows the brothers as
I believe Tolkien envisaged them, twins almost like a single entity.

I have read many true life accounts of identical twins being like one
person in two bodies and even of unusual closeness between none
identicals,such as a twin brother who experienced stomach pains while
his sister was in labour,which happened to friends of mine.


These two brothers are consumed with grief and rage over what happened
to their mother.
This story is set just before Celebrian sails and the twins discuss
something I've always wondered about,why none of the family go with
her.The brothers are consumed with grief and guilt over not being able
to rescue their mother and can only find comfort in their closeness to
each other.

Elladan and Elrohir know that they still have work to do on
Middle-earth and must avenge what happened to their mother by killing
the vile orcs that defiled her and threaten others.

The final image of their intense brotherly embrace is both beautiful
and heartrending. This is a truly powerful and brilliantly written story.

Title: Pippin's Secret · Author: shirebound · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 599
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-27 23:46:34
This is a cute bit of AU. Of course nothing is mentioned of the
particulars of the party aside from Bilbo's surprising exit, but
knowing what we know of hobbits, this seems to fit. Very nice.

Title: Fatherhood · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 547
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-28 00:26:18
Spoilers!
This delightful drabble made me smile.I can well believe that
Lothiriel might have been seen as a suitable bride for Theodred. How
clever of her father to prepare her by getting her a pony when she is
small!

Title: Acquittance · Author: Aprilkat · Genres: Drama · ID: 337
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 00:53:38
Spoilers!
Having finally read "King's Surgeon" I thoroughly enjoyed this one. It
fits so well with the theme of common people doing uncommon things
that Surgical Steel worked into her stories. I love the voice of the
prostitute and the collective kindness of a group that, most likely,
aren't used to being treated as much like people as objects. What a
lovely gift!

Title: Fit for a King · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 217
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 01:25:50
Personally I'd take the remaining lord of all horses naming himself
after me to be quite the compliment. This was a nice one shot of a
calm, peaceful moment in the 4th age.

Title: Handy With A Sword · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 437
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 01:49:19
LMAO. While I don't necessarily think this sort of behavior would have
continued long into their marriage, I can see Eowyn still having some
Shield-maidenish tendencies early on. The question will always be,
though, whether or not he "let her win". :) The song lyrics at the end
were just the cherry on the sundae.

Title: Summer's Lease · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 650
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 02:06:39
Spoilers!
Ooh. There's a wet, half naked elf in Eowyn's garden and still, she is
stirred by the sight of her husband. I can only conclude that it is,
in fact, true love. :)

Title: Heavens' Embroidered Cloths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 292
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 02:34:39
I think what I like about this series (truthfully a bit more than the
matching tale) is the glimpse we get of family life before the death
of Findulias. Denethor is first and foremost here a father, as well as
lore-master and Steward, and we see Findulias as a mother, not an
invalid. It's a fresh point of view that incorporates an interesting
subject from canon.

Title: Seven Stones and Seven Stars and One White Tree · Author:
shirebound · Races: Other Beings · ID: 121
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 03:14:45
No wonder she was so scared for her trees and flowers on Arda. This is
a very melancholy piece, short as it is. You do a good job of packing
her loneliness and sense of, well *failure* in a way, into a short
space. Very nice.

Title: The Lost Restored · Author: Larner · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor · ID: 59
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 03:46:49
They stayed to look for Smeagol/Gollum, and the fact that his loss
pains Gandalf after the fact, I think, is the underlying difference
between the Enemy and the Men of the West. But I think the best part
of the tale is that Smeagol has a reward waiting for him too. It is
rare to see pity for Smeagol put across so well, even though Tolkien
apparently saw him as a pitiful creature, and you give us the joy of
watching Pippin and the rest wake up as well.

Title: Star's End · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of Elrond ·
ID: 283
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-28 03:53:55
Spoilers!
A haunting and beautifully written AU on Arwen's death. I have to say
I prefer Tolkien's version of events, but this story had a unique
twist and i was glad I came upon it.I was highly impressed by its
haunting melancholy.

Title: Gently Held · Author: viv · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 6
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-28 04:56:35
Spoilers!
Beautiful is the only word to describe this truly exquisite ficlet.
Why does Arwen love Aragorn? I'm sure every Aragorn devotee,including
myself ,can think of many many reasons. He is noble, brave,
compassionate,has a good sense of humour, humility,goodness:the list
is endless.



The answer here is surprising. Arwen loves Aragorn for his hands. Yet,
is it truly so surprising ,as those are the hands of a healer,of a
warrior and of a lover. Hands than can deal dearth with the sword or
life with their wondrous healing powers.My favourite scene from the
book is Aragorn using his hands for healing.

I always thought that Aragorn in the film had especially elegant
hands, despite them being marred by the scars of battle.I noticed
there were many closeups to underline this.

This ficlet makes me think of Durer's famous painting,which captures
the beauty of work worn hands.

Arwen reflects as those hands tenderly caress their baby son and in
his hands lies her fate.

I cannot recommend this gem highly enough.It vividly portrays the love
of a wife for her husband, a queen for her king and an immortal who is
prepared to choose mortality totake this remarkable man's hand in
marriage.

This is a beautifully written and told story.

Title: BRIDGE: Pá Valaraucar ar Námier · Author: Fiondil · Races:
Other Beings · ID: 415
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 05:36:46
I have to laugh at Gandalf being taken to task for over-estimating
himself. What a great idea. And here I always thought (in the film at
least) his mistake was in wording. "Your evil shall not pass" might
have kept that last coil of whip away from his ankle. Nicely done.

Title: Some Confusion in Accounts · Author: viv · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 276
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 05:43:46
Spoilers!
LMAO. Tongue in cheek works so well for you, Viv. I don't feel I could
manage the same sort of sarcastic humor half so well, though in this
case, at least, my mind would inevitably run parallel to Galadriel's.
LaCE be darned, and take a 'pass' on the small clothes!

Title: Writer's Bloke · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor: Drabbles ·
ID: 431
Reviewer: NeumeIndil · 2008-07-28 05:47:56
Spoilers!
I had to laugh, while reading this, not because Faramir has a tendency
to track me down randomly and demand my attention, but rather because
his brother-in-law does. I'm sure there are many who would call us
nuts, but at least one reader understands the undeniable *presence* of
what I at least call a Muse. Thanks for an enjoyable one-shot.

Title: Home · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 533
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-28 07:04:06
Spoilers!
To find that Aglarond had become his home must have felt both strange
and strangely right! And love the final thought--so Gimli!

Title: Deliverance · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 285
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-28 07:14:16
Spoilers!
It's been a time since I read this drabble, and I find I still
consider it one of the best Imhiriel has written. We seek the
ineffible--and this one through his perseverence--and faith--as well
as his personal sacrifice, has perhaps not seen the land after which
his ancestors sought, but still has received sufficient signs to
restore estel to his heart. We feel the signs of the Man's endurance
of trial, and delight at what he finds as he stands on the remains of
what had been one of the holiest of places in all lands granted to
Mortals.

Title: A Race, To Be Like Me · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Elves:
Drabbles · ID: 375
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-28 07:34:38
Spoilers!
Feanor stands at the center of the turmoil he has sparked, glad his
sons seek to follow him--not yet appreciating what he has wrought,
much less his own fate.

I see him in my mind's eye, a black sky, but the surrounding buildings
and ships and perhaps distant clouds mirroring the orange of the
flames as the Teleri ships burn, his partially lit and partially in
shadow, his sword raised in defiance. Alas such happened.

Title: Mournful Fords · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 368
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-28 07:39:31
This is a solemn drabble, and one in which the regret expressed is so
appropriate to the character displayed. A wonderful brief meditation
on how easily we can be lost.

Title: Unwilling · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 64
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2008-07-28 15:25:51
Spoilers!
Heart-rending, so much feeling, so many images sketched in so few
words. Masterful power of description.

[Men rushing by the solitary, gnarled yew overlooked the single
dewdrop that clung, trembling, to the tip of a twig.]

Title: Renewal · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 208
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2008-07-28 15:30:25
This is a drabble? It cannot be! There is so much here, surely it is a
longer work... But no. Hard to comprehend that it is a mere 100 words,
but written with skill and astonishing economy of keystroke, striking
the reader as more poetry than prose. The italicized words, all active
verbs, add an urgency and force of life to the voice of the speaker.
Unusual POV, very effective.

Title: There shall be Mirth at our Meeting · Author: Imhiriel ·
Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 377
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2008-07-28 15:35:32
This ficlet left me laughing in delight. In the space of 100 words you
sketch your characters so completely, I have the feeling of reading a
much longer work. I feel I almost know the two women in the scene, and
it is nice to hear a moment of laughter in a long span of ceaseless
labour. I love the title, poetic and descriptive in one! I was also
glad of the author notes; they bring added depth and appreciation to
the reading.

Title: Return of the King · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 355
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2008-07-28 15:37:30
I'm not very familiar with this time in M-e history, having read only
JRRT's descriptions but no fanfic set in this time, but you make me
want to read more.

Title: Taking Roots · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 367
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2008-07-28 15:41:07
Oh, I *like* this picture of Galadriel. In LOTR we see her so, um,
world-weary is not the word I want, but "experienced" is not quite
what I want either, and this is something new, and yet perfectly
imaginable. The emotion in the piece is well-suited to the idea of the
"very first".

Title: Last Stroke · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Drabbles · ID: 465
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2008-07-28 15:49:54
This gave me shivers. I am so glad it did not happen this way.

Title: Fennas Haradren · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Adventure · ID: 280
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-28 16:10:31
A very intriguing and plausible premise, executed to a story with an
engrossing mystery.

The history and background of this hidden outpost in Southern Ithilien
is woven so naturally into the narrative that it seems like
realisation of some canoncial fact that Tolkien just never had the
time to spell out.

The landscape is described extraordinarily well, so that you can
totally see in your mind's eye the lay of the land, geographical
features, and the nature that helps conceal the soldiers.

Linaewen has a knack for portraying Boromir pre-quest, extrapolating
from the hints Tolkien gave to present him as the caring, gifted and
competent Captain-General he must have been before he set out on his
search for the answers to a riddle which changed him so profoundly to
his ultimated downfall.

Title: Homecoming · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 706
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-28 16:15:28
Oh, if only...! This short AU gives us a glimpse of what might have
been if Boromir had lived to return to his beloved city, and to those
he loves.

It is as if this AU facet, as well as the original facts Isabeau has
created for her personal universe, are slipped in stealthily into the
canon scene, expanding it cleverly.

The emotions, understated as they were, were nevertheless powerful.
Boromir's distraught state comes through clearly, and his profound
relief and wonder at being able to embrace Andrahar.

What I liked best were the tiny details that make us see the
characters, and in particular let us see the deep love between Boromir
and Andra, that Boromir remembers the most intimate, personal quirks
of his lover.

Title: Of Old It Was Not Darksome · Author: EdorasLass · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-28 16:17:50
Spoilers!
A wonderful gapfiller and expansion of both book- and movie-verse. The
language and the mood it evokes is elegiac and reverent.

I admit I was really curious about what could this bundle of cloth
could be, having never before noticed that apparently Boromir lost his
cloak in Moria.

I remember some stories exploring the idea of Faramir having made
Boromir's magnificent cloak, which here adds sad poignancy when the
theme of the story is remembrance and the ties of kinship.

How appropriate and moving that on the day the Dwarves mourn their
fallen, Boromir, another hero, but from a different race, is honoured
likewise. And in this room, where - according to what we could see on
the screen - he in turn had comforted Gimli on the last foray into
Moria during the Quest.

Title: For What I Wait · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 125
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-28 16:42:54
Intense and sorrowful AU-look at Maglor after he has been left the
sole surviving son of Fëanor, and his deteriorating state of mind.

It's painful to watch Fëaor here actually witnessing what happens with
his last surviving son; and, as he tells in the story, Maedhros'
ending, as well. Maglor seems to have lost all moorings to life and
reality after Maedhro's end.

I loved this sentence, describing Maglor's weakening voice: ["It
trembled like moonlight on the water or stars beneath a haze or a body
spent in passion."]

Title: Seaworthy · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 349
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-28 18:07:10
Spoilers!
Evocative, lovingly-detailed description of the ship. The careful
attention that is paid to certain features of the ship, including
sound and movement, seem to make it a living presence in the story,
entirely appropriate for the importance it has for Legolas, and for
the subject matter in his discussion with Imrahil.

I loved the way Imrahil proves so insightful and wise about the ways
of the sea and Legolas' inner struggle between his sea-longing and his
desire to remain with his friends. He helps Legolas to acknowledge his
own ambiguity and the peril that might result from his indecisiveness.
And this, in turn, leads us to conclude, very plausibly, was the
canonical reason he tarried until after Aragorn - the most long-lived
of his mortal friends - had passed away until he left Middle-earth.

Title: Care to Ride My Hot-Rod Fell Beast? · Author: viv · Genres:
Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 180
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2008-07-28 18:47:50
Weird, strange, and yet oddly readable, even spawning a nod and smirk,
or two. But that's what you intended, wasn't it?

Title: Aulë the Smith · Author: Oshun · Genres: Non-Fiction: Character
Studies · ID: 530
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-28 21:07:33
Spoilers!
Oshun writes a comprehensive and illuminating essay about Aule, the
Smith of the Valar, and, it seems, one of the few intellectuals in the
bunch.

Tolkien sometimes seems to have a love-hate relationship with the
importance and value of knowledge - he respects characters who have a
love of learning in various forms - Feanor, Galadriel, Celeborn,
Elrond, some Numenoreans, Denethor, Faramir, and most definitely Bilbo
and Frodo - but lays out object lessons in the lives of Saruman,
Sauron, as well as Feanor and Denethor, all of whom were to some
extent lovers of lore. Oshun lays out the parameters of Aule's
function, role and

Aule seems to be the most skilled of the Valar, the most likely to try
new things, and the most successful (at least in terms of notable
pupils) teacher. Oshun lays out the parameters of the Smith's
personality, role, functions, and extensive influence, and the
fascinating differences and similarities between Aule and Melkor. I
never realized, until I read this essay, that Aule was a great
illustration of what Tolkien and I believe is the best and noblest
kind of scientist - one who has compassion, and who knows when to
encourage experimentation/discovery/craft and when to set limits.

An excellent essay on an often overlooked, but extremely influential
and powerful character.

Title: Arvedui v. Pelendur · Author: Roh Wyn · Genres: Non-Fiction ·
ID: 277
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-28 21:11:31
Spoilers!
This is an excellent essay on the legal arguments and justification
for Faramir's declaring that the Heir of Isildur should reclaim the
throne from which Aragorn's ancestor Arvedui was kept by the arguments
of Faramir's ancestor Pelendur.

Roh wyn, who is a marvelous legal scholar in both Middle-earth of the
Third Age and our own place and time, applies sound legal reasoning to
the problem. She might be the first fan writer to prove, at least to
me, that both Steward Pelendur and Steward Faramir made legally sound
decisions, but decisions that were consonant rather than dissonant.

A clear and cogent and downright fascinating essay!

Title: Summer Heat · Author: chaotic_binky · Times: Modern Times · ID: 363
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-07-28 21:35:43
What can I say about Summer Heat without giving away the entire story?
Well, it's Glorfindel and Erestor in modern times, as the summary
says, in a good old fashioned private eye yarn. Think 'Mickey
Spillane'. There's Glorfindel, been around a long time, older than
dirt in fact, earning a living by taking on the kind of cases sensible
people leave alone. And there's Erestor, beautiful, in big trouble,
desperately in need of help. Sound familiar? But of course it's not as
simple nor as predictable as that. The story follows a trail of mayhem
and destruction while at the same time introducing us to the events of
the past and explaining the finer nuances of the `relationship'
between the two main characters – and yes, I deliberately chose to
place `relationship' in inverted commas, because it really is a
dysfunctional thing at best… rather like Erestor, actually, who is –
quite a piece of work.

The flashbacks to the past and the unravelling of the present mess
wrap round the story of Erestor and why he is the way he is, his
prospects for any kind of a future, and the almost impossible
questions it all raises for Glorfindel who has to decide if he should
take a chance and trust the untrustable (is there such a word?) once
again.

Finally – having got this far without giving away anything much of
this really well-crafted and at times gripping story – a comment on
style. The writer's confidence in writing within the film noir genre
is absolute, and she manages to somehow blend modern day elves and a
past ages love story (love story?) flawlessly into it. An unlikely
tale as the summary implies, not for anyone who is unhappy with an AU
type of setting and approach, but other than that – the writer does
her job brilliantly, and her job as she sees it is to entertain.

Does something in all this suggest I love this story?


Title: Blue · Author: red lasbelin · Races: Elves · ID: 563
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-07-28 22:03:31
I think this is what fan fiction in its purest form should be – a look
around a corner, a window briefly opened into a heart, everything in
the place made for it in canon but brought warmly, poignantly alive.
This isn't quite a character study, because that suggests something
more formal and analytical, but it tells us exactly who Glorfindel is
in the hour before being invested as Lord of the House of the Golden
Flower. We watch him getting ready for the formal event arranged for
him, and we follow his thoughts, his memories, his uncertainties, and
see his responses to this honour which in reality is a very mixed
blessing.

Sometimes we forget that to inherit a title, someone has to die.
Amongst mortals, two sons in line for a title is a good thing – I'm
reminded of the late Princess Diana joking about the `heir and spare'.
Elves though are eternal beings, the need for an heir should be no
more than a nice reassurance in case a stand in is required now and
again. Glorfindel never thought he would get to this place. He comes
across as a young, warm, sweet-natured and rather serious elf, who
loved his father and adored his big brother. He never imagined a life
where they are not. On top of this grief, he has the ongoing sadness
of his lady mother, an elf woman who has buried husband and son, and
whose gentle spirit is possibly not long for this world either. Red's
Glorfindel seems very much his mother's son actually – she has the
same `feel' to her, the same goodness of heart.

I am hoping the writer will continue with the story behind the story
that we catch glimpses of here. I would love to meet Glorfindel's
father and brother, learn their stories, understand how Glorfindel
ended up dressing in these unfamiliar clothes in preparation for this
next stage in his life.


Title: In Dreams · Author: Phyncke · Genres: Romance: Elven Lands ·
ID: 609
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-07-28 22:13:28
I'm always very fond of stories about the elves finally crossing the
sea to return home – though in many cases `home' is more of a generic
term, not a reality to those born on this side of the divide. But
that's a story for another day, of course. An unusual pairing, one
that I admit would never have occurred to me, and some very nice
descriptions all round. I found Erestor and Elrond interesting in that
setting. Nicely done.

Title: The Otters of Imladris · Author: chaotic_binky · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 491
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-07-28 22:41:17
What on earth can I say about this story that will do it justice? When
I originally found it, I read the summary and decided to give it a try
purely because I know the writer loves trying a variety of styles and
a fic swap can produce some -- interesting results. What I found was
the ultimate feel-good story, one that I go back to whenever I am
feeling depressed and in need of a lift. And it never fails me, I
cannot read The Otters without a smile plastering itself on my face
and a warm feeling soaking away the tensions of the day.

It's a deceptively simple story – Erestor and Haldir are married, they
find a baby otter whose mother has almost certainly been killed, so
they take it back to the Last Homely House and raise it. And, as wild
animals do, the time comes when he feels the call of his kind. What
makes this absolutely irresistible are the characters and the
settings. Erestor is completely other than the normal fanon
representation. He is sweet and warm, deeply in love with his mate,
but can be both sensible and firm too. Haldir is just perfect for him
– funny and warm, practical and wise. How they go about raising their
unlikely charge while at the same time learning about one another is
gorgeous – you want them to go adopt a whole bunch of orphans after
reading this.

The writer is far too clever to hit her reader over the head with a
lecture on conservation, of course, and she lets the theme of her
story speak for itself, which it does – most eloquently. The horror of
man's lack of respect for the natural world is coldly underscored, and
the best approach to raising a wild creature and the pros and cons of
returning it to its natural habitat are here, but not in an
in-your-face way, which makes the underlying message all the more
effective..

If you're uncertain about the slash element, give it a chance anyway,
because it's such a gorgeously loving relationship. All round, a
magically feel good story.



Title: Painting a Golden Light · Author: chaotic_binky · Genres:
Drama: Featuring the Noldor · ID: 364
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-07-28 23:26:03
A fascinating and I suspect unique picture of elves in modern times.
The story starts off during the Battle of the Somme, with Erestor
serving as a military artist in the front line, the forerunner of the
official photographer. When his luck finally runs out and he is
wounded, Binky introduces us to the early twentieth century's view on
post traumatic stress disorder and the attitude to the sufferers,
mainly regarded as cowards and malingerers.

The story then moves to the little English village of St Michael's
Leap and the ladies who make up its gossipy, competitive social
circle. I loved every one of them, they were exactly like my aunty
Margaret and her friends - I could see and hear them. And of course,
having two celebrities in their little community – an explorer and a
war hero/artist - is a huge event. This part of the story explores
Erestor's mental disorder, Glorfindel's loving but determined efforts
to heal his soul mate's damaged psyche, and Erestor's attempts to take
refuge in his art, and to turn his skill to painting the perfect
golden light.

The descriptions of sleepy village life are masterful, as are the
simple but very telling reminders of the intense prejudice against
anything hinting at an `unhealthy interest' in a member of the same
gender back in a time when homosexuality was illegal. Erestor and
Glorfindel take great care to avoid any suspicion that their
relationship is anything other than that of familial fondness, even
alone in their cottage they're careful.

There are twists regarding Erestor's hallucinations and the very
nature of war itself, which I won't divulge. At the end, there is a
sea voyage on one of the great liners, complete with wonderful
descriptions based on meticulous research, and an ending that is
little short of perfect. Can't say more about it here though, except
that yes, they finally hear the call home. The final parts, the
newspaper obituary, the old photographs, and the utterly gorgeous
epilogue round it off masterfully. A wonderful story, truly painted in
a golden light.


Title: Solid Frodo: Hobbit Espionage Action · Author: Princess Artemis
· Times: Modern Times · ID: 413
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-07-28 23:36:45
I just happened to see a review of this story the other night and
thought it sounded very interesting, so I rushed right over to check
it out. It took me most of the weekend, but was it ever worth it. This
was great fun to read, and I really want to see it finished.

I have always liked AU stories and crossovers, and this fulfilled both
those delights. I was totally able to accept modernisms in speech and
other things because it works in the context of this tale.

I think my favorite thing, being a big Pippin fan, was that Pippin,
while inpulsive and cheeky, is portrayed as very bright and capable.
He is not just an extra hobbit there to round out the number. He's
very valuable to the plot and solves many of their problems. For some
reason the image of him as a sniper just makes me smile.

Yes this is a humorous story but there are darker moments as well and
the author handles them with great skill.

All the characters in this story are very well written. I can hear
their voices quite clearly.

I really hope the author decides to finish this one. It is a ripping
good read.

Title: Sunset Gates · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
· ID: 342
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-07-28 23:53:18

Heh. This is not an easy thing to review. Even with a spoiler warning,
it wold not be an easy thing to review. Gimli, finally, on that
journey over the sea to the next stage of his life. Very well
described, very evocative. Can see the ship, hear the gulls, the rush
of the waves. Gimli's future is one of my favourite potential side
threads that shines amongst the high drama of the Lord of the Rings
and its aftermath. I was so eager to see that final meeting.

And – yes, we do get to witness it. My first thought was how lovely it
was of her to be waiting to welcome him. *giggles*.



Title: The Dark One · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama · ID: 411
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-28 23:56:09
Wow, where to start? I really enjoyed this very much! The two original
characters: Morwen, the prostitute from Gondor, and Gamling, her
Rohirric lover - they're both incredibly engaging, well-rounded, and
feel like real people. The tenseness over Edoras as war is about to
break out is always in the background, an almost-palpable thing.
Really, really well done!

Hey guys,

Here is your weekly admin post  this week focusing on stories that are
either alternate universe or crossovers. Whether you particularly like
these stories or just find yourself in a general mood for them on some
given day, I hope this list helps you find stories you'd like to review.

For the list of pieces in this announcement I've used an author's main
category selection. Each author selects three category choices, only one
of which it can be placed in; but the author has still described it as
being suitable for three category choices, even if it isn't placed
there. So if an author selected one of the "genre" categories Alternate
Universe or Crossover it will be on this list.

Finding stories that selected a certain main category is pretty
straightforward. To do this

1. Log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/
2. Click the "Stories" link at the top of the page.
3. Click the "Show Filter" link.
4. Click the "Clear All Filters" button if you've used the filter before
this session.
5. Select the genre, race, or time period you would like from the
"Genre, Race, Time" filter (sixth from the bottom).
6. Click the "Display selected nominations" button.

This will pull up all of the nominated pieces that selected your main
category as a first-, second-, or third-choice category, even if they
didn't end up categorized in that main category.

******************************

Here are the stories competing in this year's competition whose author
selected one of the above categories to describe their piece.

+++ Crossover +++
Baranduin
--- (201) National Treasure
Gloria Mundi
--- (593) Into the Woods
Larner
--- (116) Too Many Rangers
Pandemonium_213
--- (51) Trinity
Princess Artemis
--- (413) Solid Frodo: Hobbit Espionage action
Soledad
--- (101) The Web of Darkness
Telcontar Rulz
--- (203) Chance Encounter

+++ Alternate Universe +++
Ancalime8301
--- (734) Burdens
Annmarwalk
--- (536) Bitter Sweet
Annmarwalk/EdorasLass CoAuthors
--- (124) The Haradric Whore and Her Son
Baggins babe
--- (118) Hope Remains
Branwyn (Lady Branwyn)
--- (33) Wave-Singer
--- (726) No Man's Land
Celticbard
--- (373) The Price of Pity
Chaotic_binky
--- (363) Summer Heat
--- (364) Painting a Golden Light
--- (491) The Otters of Imladris
Claudia
--- (227) Shadow King
--- (308) Land of the Moon
--- (725) Arranged Marriage
--- (732) The Citadel
Crowdaughter
--- (383) Murder the Dawn
Cuthalion
--- (265) Bitter May
--- (284) In the Darkness Of My Dreaming
Dana
--- (641) A Path of Wisdom
Dawn Felagund
--- (125) For What I Wait
Docmon
--- (466) With Hope and Without Hope
Dreamflower
--- (617) Eucatastrophe: The Return
--- (680) Clear Conscience (The Clear Shot Remix)
Dwimordene
--- (274) The Edge of the Knife
--- (482) The King's Colors
EdorasLass
--- (9) As the Tide by the Moon
Elena Tiriel
--- (465) Last Stroke
Elleth
--- (399) Return
Foxrafer (csevans8)
--- ((20) In Good Company
Gandalfs Apprentice
--- (244) Arwen in the Afternoon
Garnet Took
--- (410) The Road Trip
Golden
--- (150) The Flute
--- (571) I Give You a Rainbow
Ignoble Bard
--- (492) Above All Shadows
Illwynd
--- (31) Silenced
Imhiriel
--- (512) Least Expected
Isabeau of Greenlea
--- (705) Parth Galen
--- (706) Homecoming
Jael
--- (205) Out of the Blue
Juno_magic
--- (567) Lothiriel  The Tenth Walker, Book 2
Katzilla
--- (206) Untold Tales of the Mark: The Banishment of Eomer
Linaewen
--- (267) A Great Evil Unmade
Lord Branwyn
--- (724) Two Prisoners
Marta
--- (621) The Least of Rings
Meril
--- (389) Five things that never happened to Nerdanel
Nath
--- (314) Old Man Willow
Neilia
--- (115) Pippin-Frog for a Day
--- (192) Frogdom
Primsong
--- (345) Rivendell International Airport
Raksha the Demon
--- (313) The Prisoner of Time
--- (421) The Captain's New Clothes
Sivan Shemesh
--- (582) Adar & Ion
--- (672) I Can Feel It!
--- (674) The Pirate
--- (710) Wounds of a Friend
Spookystoy
--- (407) My Legacy
SurgicalSteel
--- (222) Five Things That Never Happened to Serinde of Dol Amroth
Tanaqui
--- (119) Spoiled
--- (478) Alter/native
Werecat
--- (430) Homeward Bound
Yavie Feels Pretty
--- (464) Tarnished Ivory

To find more information about any of these pieces, just do the following

1. Log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/
2. Click the "Stories" link at the top of the web page.
3. Type the Story ID followed by the "#" sign into the search bar, and
click the "Search" button.

For instance, searching for "593#" will bring up story #593, Into the
Woods by Gloria Mundi.

AUs and Crossovers are competing in the following subcategories:

--- Genres: Adventure: Incomplete
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: General
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: Drabbles
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: Steward's Family
--- Genres: Drama: Featuring Boromir or Faramir
--- Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo or Sam
--- Genres: Drama: Featuring the Noldor
--- Genres: Drama: General Drabbles
--- Genres: Horror: General
--- Genres: Humor: Elven Lands
--- Genres: Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlet
--- Genres: Mystery: General
--- Genres: Romance: Elven Lands
--- Races: Cross-Cultural: General
--- Races: Cross-Cultural: Friendship
--- Races: Elves: General
--- Races: Elves: Incomplete
--- Races: Hobbits: General
--- Races: Hobbits: Friendship
--- Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
--- Races: Other Beings: General
--- Times: Late Third Age: General
--- Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: General
--- Times: Modern Times: General

Remember: The list of stories and sub-categories listed above are based
on the main categories chosen by the author. If you selected one of the
above categories

Happy reading!

Marta
(MEFA Admin.)

P.S. - If you noticed a mistake in this post, please email about it so I
can check whether a mistake has been made and, if necessary, correct my
announcement. You can reach me privately at
mefasupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net. Thanks!

Title: The Rescue of Celebrian · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 382
Reviewer: SurgicalSteel · 2008-07-29 00:20:42
This is a really intriguing start to what looks as if it could be a
great story about the time between Celebrian's rescue from the Orcs
and her departure over the sea. Her near-madness during one combat
scene really feels genuine. I look forward to more of this!

Title: On Amon Sûl · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Frodo or Sam · ID: 299
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 01:11:26
Spoilers!
This is so much as I myself have envisioned the same scene, the bits
the Master left out. From the fading and resurgence of awareness and
sound to the wondering as to who might be dying--this is something
Tolkien himself might have written (or intended to write). A fantastic
gapfiller, and all too likely to have been true. Writing it from
Frodo's own point of view was brilliant; and I, too, have envisioned
him slamming down walls against the Ring and Its murmurings.

Excellent.

Title: Bibliophile · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 01:15:58
Ah, yes, people would very likely gift Faramir's mother with that
tale! Love what Eowyn likes better!

A wonderful expression of the love between the two of them.

Title: Birthday Present · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 441
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 01:19:24
Spoilers!
Ah, how I love how easily Bilbo's birthday presents to Pippin are to
take with him! And Pippin is right there to claim it, of course. And
he'll fit in Thain one day with that stance of his? Heh!

Title: Least Expected · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Drabbles · ID: 512
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 01:25:31
Imhiriel is such a master at the genre of drabble-writing. And in this
one she has surpassed herself. Of course, Dwimordene's request for AU
ficlets probably sparked more such tales than any other single
person's birthday wishes this year. But to see Halbarad find such a
welcome to Rohan--oh, how too likely it would have been had this one
been riding abroad with his own sycophants.

Quite a tale.

Title: A Race, To Be Like Me · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Elves:
Drabbles · ID: 375
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-29 03:57:39
Spoilers!
For my money, Feanor is one of the most difficult characters in the
Silmarillion to deal with as a reader. He is neither a hero nor a
villain, but something in between - a magnetic, charismatic and
totally self-willed artist. What he is not, in my opinion, is a worthy
King.

Feanor believes that he is doing the right and proper thing in calling
all his people to cross the Sea in pursuit of the pretty much
invincible Evil who has murdered Feanor's beloved father and stolen
Feanor's beloved Jewels. While both deeds cry for vengeance, I am not
sure that a good and thoughtful king would have bound all his sons and
people to the rather risky pursuit of so dire a course.

Imhiriel conveys the passion, the power, of Feanor's belief, his own
ferocity of desire infecting him even from the eye of the hurricane
that he has unleashed (which is a gorgeous metaphor). Feanor does not
foresee or even consider the horrific losses that will shatter the
Noldor who follow him, he is caught up in his own fire here.

To me, Feanor comes off here as both heroic, in terms of
warrior-ethic, and Hitlerian, in modern sensibility as a leader who
blindly and callously enflames his people to a course that will
destroy them (the difference from Hitler being that Feanor asks
nothing of his people that he will not personally do himself). And
yet, this course will prove the path that eventually defeats Morgoth
and saves Middle-earth, at the price of thousands of Noldor lives,
including those of Feanor's own spellbound sons. This drabble made me
wonder what Feanor would have thought of the fate to which he has
sacrificed his sons and people; especially since it is the Valar's
intervention, summoned by a Silmaril, which ultimately saves what is
left of the Noldor as well as the rest of suffering Middle-earth.

A wonderful and powerful drabble that shows, rather than tells, so
much about the Spirit of Fire and his effect upon the world.




Title: The Lowest Circle · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Elves: Drabbles ·
ID: 449
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-29 04:03:57
Spoilers!
One of the most sad and scary pieces in this year's MEFA competition;
this drabble addresses the horrific situation of an elf being slowly
transformed into an orc in Angband. Tanaqui does a wonderful job;
focussing on the prisoner's memory of stars, and how his ordeal has
caused him to hate, then forget it - surely a greater indication of
the being's fundamental change than any physiological transformation.

Not an easy read, but one that is hard to forget.

Title: The Prisoner of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 313
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-29 04:30:16
Spoilers!
Often, the question of "what if Denethor had turned back from the
pyre" follow a positive way: Denethor repents his ways, reconciles
with Aragorn etc.

But here, Raksha shows us a Denethor unchanged from his last demeanor
in canon, presenting his immense pride as an intrinsic character
fault, not merely caused by despair and false insinuations via
palantír. We see that just chosing to live does not automatically mean
changing his attitude in other ways.

The closed windows symbolise perfectly, I find, the closed mind and
heart of Denethor in this situation. He is sooo sure he knows best,
refuses any advice or help from outside; and so his son dies, and for
what? For his own damnable pride!

And the worst is, he never even entertains the idea that it may be him
that is at fault. No, all the other persons must be guilty of
something or another, they are ["faithless"], ["recreants"], ["seduced
by fancies or Elvish glamour"], etc.

Denethor's PoV is captured brillantly: his resentment and still-high
righteousness and arrogance almost saturates the story.

Title: The King's Colors · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 482
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-29 04:31:07
This short story explores the premise of Boromir and Faramir
exchanging places in the search for Imladris in terse, poignant
dialogue and evocative introspection. The exchange itself is not the
focus (not even the question of how Faramir, too, lost his life),
rather, it is the ramifications when the Fellowship reaches Minas
Tirith: how the House of Húrin might have handled Aragorn's claim for
Gondor when push came to shove, an issue Tolkien sidestepped by having
Denethor and Boromir die before - and Dwimordene fully acknowledges
and explores the complexities of this issue (and creates a good
companion piece to her story ["Both Beholden"]).

I love the serious tone of the narrative and the dialogues, it seems
very down-to-earth and direct, and at the same time a little remote
and cast in a slight mythological light (and I hope I'm making sense
here *g*).

It is coveyed clearly yet subtly that Boromir and Aragorn are wary of
each other, their dialogue circles around like fencers testing each
other's mettle.

Title: The Edge of the Knife · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 274
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-29 04:32:24
The title of this drabble series is perfect for what Dwimordene
presents us here of alternate scenarios. It reminds us of the
precarious balance, of the many lucky incidents and fateful chances
that had to come to pass to vanquish Sauron.

There is also a weight to the drabbles that force us to contemplate
ramifications and choices and free will, and juxtaposed or set
side-by-side with the above, makes for a very thought-provoking offering.

I appreciate that some version offer a (slightly more) positive
alternative, and also some show that other turns might have been as
dire as the canonical realities.

My favourite may be "Riven": Amandil successfully reaches Aman to
plead before the Valar, but what then?

Title: Parth Galen · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 705
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-29 04:33:07
Just a few degrees of shift, and we see the familiar scene at Parth
Galen in a slightly different light.

It's creepy how the external happenings, the calm discussion between
Boromir and Frodo, is juxtaposed with the increasingly insistent
demands of the Ring, who comes ever closer to hitting Boromir's
greatest desire. The one closest to his heart.

And it is an example, yet again, how utterly evil fails because it
doesn't understand good, and turns its greatest bet to its downfall.
And in addition, neatly inverting Denethor's maxime Boromir remembers
that ["those he loves the most can cause him the most harm"], by
having the memories of the people he loves the most become his
greatest strength in turning back temptation.

Title: Return · Author: Elleth · Genres: Alternate Universe: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 399
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-29 04:33:41
Stirring writing, like the breathless excitement that moves Nerdanel
and her son. I wish this scenario had been played out, for both of
them. And perhaps it would even have changed the course of those
Fëanorians who had gone on in Middle-earth.

Title: Galadriel Remembers · Author: Savageseraph · Genres: Poetry:
Drama · ID: 583
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 04:44:15
Spoilers!
A lovely poem; and wonderful to think that at least one Elf returned
to the Undying Lands finds herself wishing to be back in the mortal
lands, undiminished, taking fire from the spirits of mortal Men once
more. I've always pictured her as the one Elf who truly appreciates
the advantages to mortality.

Title: The Blessing · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Frodo or Sam · ID: 228
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 04:57:56
Spoilers!
I find Mews shares my own vision of Frodo as one who brings his own
share of healing to those who recover, there in the camp at Cormallen,
from their own hurts. A gentle story.

Title: For Our Friends · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Drama · ID: 654
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 05:04:48
Spoilers!
This expansion of the movie moment is one of the most stirring I've
yet read--Merry and Eowyn together realizing there is a job to be
done; and Merry's use of a farmer's metaphor in thinking of the battle
ahead is so proper to him as a Hobbit! Yes--Merry and Eowyn will do
their part as called upon by the restored King of Rohan!

Title: The Prisoner of Dol Guldur · Author: Soledad · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 102
Reviewer: pen_iaur · 2008-07-29 05:09:22
A very powerful story - The interplay between Elrond and Thranduil was
especially well written.

Title: The Tower Hills · Author: DrummerWench · Genres: Drama: Final
Partings · ID: 608
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 05:15:09
Sam accompanies Frodo up into another tower, and knows the peace of
it. A melancholy yet lovely piece.

Title: 25 Rethe, S.R. 1422: The Three Travellers Remember · Author:
Dreamflower · Genres: Poetry: Drama · ID: 679
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 05:19:11
It was Dreamflower who introduced me to "dribble" poetry, and I will
ever thank her for it. In this pair of inverted dribbles we see what
Merry, Pippin, and Sam think of the twenty-fifth of Rethe, and how
they regret it has no further meaning within the Shire. Sad, but
proud, even as was the one honored in the lines.

Title: The Last Words · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 409
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 06:48:08
Spoilers!
I found I needed to review this story again before commenting on it.
In many ways this is a hard story to read--the confrontation between
the abandoned wife and her husband's three mistresses. She is
strident, somewhat giddy, and yet it is plain she still loves him,
even as she begs them not to destroy him. So true to those friends
I've had who have found themselves in broken marriages. The first true
letting-go.

Title: There Was A Hobbit · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Humor:
Drabbles · ID: 111
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 06:54:02
Spoilers!
Agape has managed to slip a bit of our culture into Middle Earth, with
a wink and nod to Christopher Tolkien's examination of how his father
came to write LOTR as evidenced in "The Return of the Shadow." A nice
giggle.

Title: The Wedding Gift · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 40
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 06:57:06
Spoilers!
Ah, such a glorious act of love, to craft this love token for the one
who would be the mother of his children. That such romantic urges lie
in the hearts of Dwarves. Delightfully sensuous.

Title: A Great Evil Unmade · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 267
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-29 17:13:42
Spoilers!
Boromir as the Ring-bearer at the end... What seems an unlikely choice
is here presented very persuasively.

I prefer AUs like this here that skirt as close as possible to canon,
especially with regards to characterisation. The story reminds us of
Boromir's capabilities: his feeling of responsibility tenacity,
endurance (which he exhibited on his arduous way to Imladris, as well
as back east with the Fellowship). Even his pride is shown here from
its positive sight, boosting his will when physical and mental
strength threatens to falter.

I find it very intriguing to see how the Ring and its nearness to
Mount Doom works on Boromir, both for the differences and the
similarities to its working on Frodo.

The story's (maddeningly *g*) open end unsettles, but I think it
managed beforehand to convince the reader that Boromir will indeed
succeed (but will he survive...?).

Title: Hidden Watcher · Author: kitt_otter · Genres: Drama · ID: 702
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-29 17:49:28
Atmospheric writing, which makes us feel the hushed silence in the
darkness of the depth of Moria. Legolas' attentiveness as guard is
conveyed well. I like the description of how he concentrates on his
sense of smell.

Title: The Journey · Author: foxrafer (csevans8) · Times: Late Third
Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 604
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 20:26:58
For the Hobbits this journey outside their Shire was all a new,
remarkable experience--but it was also terrifying. To see this and the
continuation through a Hobbit's perspective is delightful.

Title: Frodo's Pointed Ears · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 729
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 20:28:31
Ookay--methinks poor Frodo has been deprived of sensual companionship
too long! Heh!

Title: Collecting Hearts I, II, III & VI · Author: Elen Kortirion ·
Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 516
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-29 20:36:15
A marvelous short series of drabbles that comes full circle from
pretending to teach the game to one to teaching a small child, all
centered about cards and their suits. Love the connections made
between the deck used by the Edain to play games and the tarot used to
foretell. A very powerful, angsty, and in the end hopeful series.

Title: Fennas Haradren · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Adventure · ID: 280
Reviewer: agape4gondor · 2008-07-29 21:19:55
Linaewen's tales have a tendency to make me feel like I am sitting on
a comfy settle with a glass of wine in my hand with Boromir listening
at my feet as I read. Ah - life is good!

This tale is no exception. The scenery/locations are done lovingly.
They neither distract nor overshadow the tale itself, yet are enough -
just enough - to make the reader know where Boromir is and revel in
the feel of Ithilien.

This mystery revolves around a secret garrison, deep in Southern
Ithilien. Boromir is sent to unravel a riddle... and in the midst of
it all, we are privileged to see what a doughty man he truly is, how
he commands those under him, his intelligence, and his compassion.

I loved the first line and from there just enjoyed phrases, incidents,
tender moments as I went from respect to shivers to laughter. There
were even a couple Yikes!

If you are a Boromir fan/lover/attendee, you will enjoy this. If you
are not, you will still enjoy the mystery, the scenery, the
sounds/smells/feel of men, unimagined horror, and the solving of the
riddle. I think you will thoroughly enjoy this tale.

My favorite part is the end - when Linaewen explains a certain moment
in a certain movie in a certain Dwarven cavern.

Delightful tale.



Title: Yrch Song · Author: Phyncke · Genres: Poetry · ID: 564
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-29 22:46:30
A very amusing interpretation of what the Orcs might use as a marching
song.

Title: Temptation · Author: Princess Artemis · Genres: Poetry · ID: 416
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-29 23:06:48
An entertaining look at the One Ring's thoughts abiut the various
people who own it or encounter it.Enjoyable and thought provoking.

Title: Wedding Nerves · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor · ID: 48
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-29 23:14:13
Spoilers!
We know how much Aragorn desired to wed Arwen,but what happened when
the big day finally came? It would not surprise me at all if Aragorn
felt a little apprehensive as he does in this delightful story,which I
had the honour of having written for me on my birthday.
Luckily for Aragorn ,his foster brothers are at hand to help just as
he wishes he could simply elpe with his bride.
It is bad enough for the average bridegroom wearing the standard top
hat and tails, but poor Aragorn has to contend with an army of
courtiers all offering conflicting advice what he should wear.
Elladan and Elrohin help to solve the problem and by clever use of
humour,calm the nervous bridegroom and have him clad in fit fashion to
wed their sister.
A most enjoyable story well worth reading.

Title: The Last Throw · Author: nau_tika · Genres: Drama · ID: 556
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-29 23:23:50
Spoilers!
This story uses the interesting idea to show the events leading to
Sauron's downfall in the film version through the eyes of a soldier as
he tells his wife and children about his adventures.
I found it fascinating to see these great events from another
viewpoint including the beheading of the Mouth of Sauron which made me
cringe as out of character for Aragorn when I watched the DVD.
I agree with the soldier that Aragorn's speech would have been
inspiring to listen to.It reminded me of Queen Elizabeth I at Tilbury
when I heard it.
The writer captures well the dread of the long march and the fear and
confusion at the destruction of the RIng,joy came later and poses
thought provoking questions about the narow escape the people of
Middle-earth experienced.

Title: A Great Cause for Concern · Author: Alassante · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 682
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-29 23:31:16
I often wondered what happened when Legolas turned up in the Undying
Lands with Gimli.This story answers the question in a most agreeable
fashion. I always asume that the ship would have foundered had Gimli
not been allowed.
I especially enjoyed the idea that Aule would have wanted to meet his
child and that Galadriel would speak on Gimli's behalf. I personally
believe it was she who begged the Valar that Gimli be allowed to come.
A most interesting and enjoyable story very well told.

Title: Gone Amiss · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 44
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-30 01:51:35
Spoilers!
One gets a clear sense of the shock of Parth Galen in this drabble,
where indeed, 'gone amiss' is almost the only thing to be said, and
that an understatement. This is captured well in the second line:

[ That so mighty a man had so quietly smiled, paled and died strained
Aragorn's belief.]

And filling up the margins of incomprehension, the question of what to
tell the father takes on an ominous cast with but the mention of
Denethor's name.

Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 152
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-30 01:51:46
Spoilers!
Denethor/Thorongil slash always strikes me as trying to hold together
two immensely powerful watch dogs that could be friends, but could
also turn to tear each other to shreds without much warning. Tolkien
very deliberately puts Denethor forward as comparable on a number of
levels to Aragorn - he would have to be, for there truly to be a
rivalry, even if a one-sided one. This can make the two of them hard
to control when it comes to writing them as lovers, because there's
this competitive, power element that doesn't let itself lodge in the
background. Then there's the Ecthelion factor, which has always to be
handled somehow. One way of handling all this is to jump right in and
go for the dark, unhappy rivalry - always a choice I can enjoy.

However, Alex Quine goes a different route, and does it very
convincingly in terms of retaining the essentially public character of
these three men - they all serve Gondor - while restraining the
rivalry between Thorongil and Denethor. She does this without making
Denethor into less than a sharp, strong man, but he and Thorongil are
both young, though Thorongil's experience belies his age and between
Ecthelion's protectiveness of his less experienced heir and his
reliance on Thorongil, Denethor is reaching a point where he's being
underused. He hasn't yet reached the point of being bitter about it,
but he is slightly jealous, and jealousy here plays out not in the
realm of policy (the opposition over Mithrandir and Umbar is
eliminated), but in the bedroom. There Denethor has such dominance as
will satisfy him at least for the time, and Thorongil submits out of a
sense of guilt over unintentionally usurping Denethor's place.

Ecthelion's role also shifts here to a very active one, that
reinterprets or recontextualizes Thorongil's departure after Umbar in
an inventive manner, and one that illumines the sense of his
stewardship. It also demosntrates a trust in Thorongil that can't but
make one wonder: just how much does he really know or suspect about
Thorongil, even if he doesn't admit it? The words don't reveal, but
the action is one of those acts that is either foolish or inspired,
and probably even a wizard couldn't tell the difference.

Beyond the excellent handling of three powerful men, the language is
lovely. I particularly liked this description of Thorongil after a
mission: [Just now he stood, patient in his dirt]. Perfect image of a
Ranger just home from the field!

Well done!




Title: Heavens' Embroidered Cloths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 292
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-30 01:51:58
Astronomy lovers, or anyone who loves to look up at the night sky
should not miss these little gems!

Tanaqui elegantly unfolds a whole mythos of Middle-earth's
constellations, and then weaves around these little legends, as
occasion and emotional center, the story of an unusual Mettarë gift
from Éowyn to Faramir on their first Yule together: she gives him back
the halls as they had once been decked in the Steward's house, but in
so doing, she gives him back the memory of family that had been in
danger of being lost.

Old ways and new traditions, all seamlessly combined in some hundreds
of eloquent words. Well done, Tanaqui!

Title: The Heart of a Knight · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 335
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-30 01:52:10
Beregond is kind of the rags-to-riches (by way of close brush with
disasters in the plural) story of LOTR: regular soldier, nothing
particularly distinctive about him, and then all of a sudden,
circumstance and character combine to put him in a position to save
the son of the Steward. From there, he shoots up to captain of
Faramir's White Guard rather than being punished for disobeying
orders. It's good to get a story from his perspective on the events
just after the Ring War.

I like that the story does try to focus attention on the fact that
Beregond didn't just disobey orders, he had to kill some of his own
comrades to defend Faramir, and that he admitted that he would regret
most his slaying of the porter in haste. Beregond has to deal with
that guilt in the midst of adjusting to his new station and trying to
settle in with his son and brother again.

Nice job, Imhiriel!

Title: Creation Myths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 300
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-30 01:56:46
Spoilers!
Static perfection versus respect for the chaotic 'imperfect' element -
the line of contrast between the creation of the Silmarils and Eä is
drawn early, but it doesn't end there. The generosity of Iluvatar's
deliverance of his creation to others, versus Fëanor's selfish
hoarding drives the point home.

Well done!

Title: No Mercy · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General Drabbles ·
ID: 443
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-07-30 02:00:19
Spoilers!
This drabble gives new life to the phenomenon that gave birth to the
name for this particular battle. The fire as army is absolutely
without mercy or conscience - something conscious beings, even those
ruined by Morgoth, can only aspire to.

Beautifully done!

Title: The Onion Riddle · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 13
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-30 02:22:22
Spoilers!
This was an unusual and thought provoking story which carries a
valuable moral lesson for the reader not to draw conclusions about
relationships without knowing all the facts.
I loved Beregond here trying so hard to be polite and not put his foot
in matters only to find out that he has done so inadvertently.
It was interesting to encounter a female Dwarf and a pregnant one
too.It seems that they do have some things in common with humans,while
in other ways they are very different to us.
A very well written and unique tale.

Title: One Step More - The Heroism of Frodo Baggins · Author:
ConnieMarie · Genres: Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 395
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-30 02:32:31
Spoilers!
I loved this essay as the points the writer makes about Frodo are the
reasons I love LOTR. Frodo is a hero we can identify with who suffers
and feels and does not engage in empty macho gestures.

I think the point about Hobbits not being afraid to show affection
towards friends could equally well apply to Aragorn, also a brave hero
of a different kind to Frodo.

I liked the author's conclusion that many were afriad to like Frodo as
he suffers in a realistic way and endures in the same way that many of
us do,just trying to do our best.

A very well written essay.

Title: The Myth of the One Ring's Power · Author: Dreamflower ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 532
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-30 02:42:29
Fascinating thoughts clearly expressed to make a most interesting and
enjoyable essay..
I personally think the fact the idea of the Ring is taken from Norse
myth causes some of the condradictions about it.Gollum is like Fafnir
the giant who turns into a dragon and does nothing but watch the Ring
for endless years.
I have often thought about both Tolkien's and Wagner's use of the same
myth of the magic Ring which promises supreme power but brings only
misery for whoever owns it.
I think the point of myths about magic objects is that it is the
owner's soul that counts,whether it be good or evil.
I enjoyed this essay very much and reccomend it to all thoughtful
readers of LOTR.




Title: A Dainty Dish · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Friendship · ID: 722
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-30 03:36:28
Spoilers!
One of Tolkien's major themes in both THE HOBBIT and LOTR is the union
of different races and cultures in positive endeavors, which entails
the breaking down of suspicion and greater knowledge and
understanding. The hobbits, at least the ones who leave the Shire and
go out into the wide world of Middle-earth, seem often to function
like walking icebreakers; forging new friendships and elucidating old
problems and feuds and knowledge as they travel.

In this post-RingWar story, Linda utililzes this hobbit capability to
advantage. Pippin and Merry's predilection for simpler food than that
which the King's table in Minas Tirith is accustomed to providing
opens up an interesting dialogue between Aragorn, the hobbits, and
Imrahil. The Prince of Dol Amroth, shown here as something of a
martinet, is surprised by the king and the hobbits' shared fondness
for mushrooms, a dish long scorned by the lords of Gondor.

Imrahil's attitude and the hobbits' refreshing counterpoint work as
metaphors for conflict between old traditions and foreign ideas, or
between the aristocratic and the common. It turns out that the reason
for the antipathy of Gondorian lords toward mushrooms is based on fear
and ignorance covered by layers of snobbery.

As written by Linda, Imrahil shows his essential wisdom and courtesy,
and helps bring about a happy ending.

A tasty little story, as homespun and yet colorful as Merry and Pippin
themselves.

Title: Generations · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn
· ID: 508
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-30 03:39:25
This story puts to good use many different juxtapositions: young
Eldarion and his older father, Gondor and Arnor, luxury and frugality,
wartime generation and generation born after Sauron's downfall...

There are carefully-chosen details of description to highlight those
differences, like the two youths primped up while Aragorn comfortably
slouches and smokes. The subject matter of the gap existing between
Eldarion and his father is explored thoughtfully and sensitively, and
it can be tied easily to real-world situations.

What I liked best was the nuanced characterisation of Eldarion:
although he is spoiled, supercilious and fastidiously disdainful
towards the rougher Northern environs/people, he is aware that this is
a flaw on his part, and he not really contemptuous or malicious -
which gives great hope he will mend his ways with time and experience
(and lots of dirt and mud *g*). Beyond that, it is clear that despite
their differences, he and his father have a close and loving relationship.

Title: The Return · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Drama · ID: 167
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-30 03:40:06
An interesting step in introducing the protagonist through the eyes of
a character not further involved in the story; it strenghtens the
contrast between the general celebrating over the victory and
Duinhir's heavy state of mind on returning home.

Duinhir's grief - as father of two fallen sons and as lord over his
decimated people - is palpable, you can sense his bleakness and the
effort it takes to present a collected face to the outside. You can
feel his dread at having to tell his family the news, interspersed
with concern for the future of the land and his folk.

I liked how the reactions of the families are described in an almost
detached, but nonetheless poignant way: the pause as they scan the
arrivals for their loved ones, then either a melting of anxiety, or
the numbness of the initial realisation that the waiting is in vain.

I also like the descriptions of the environment: they paint a picture
that really helps create an impression of living in the Blackroot Vale.

Title: For Our Friends · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Drama · ID: 654
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-30 03:40:42
An engaging gapfiller, bringing the grand, uplifting visual of the
Rohirrim appearing on the rise before Minas Tirith to a personal
level. Merry's mingled feelings of anxiety and anticipation is
conveyed well.

Title: A Woman in Few Words: The Character of Nerdanel and Her
Treatment in Canon and Fandom · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 107
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 05:04:32
I can certainly appreciate the attraction of Nerdanel, and have
written my own stories concerning her, which considering I write
primarily Fellowship fiction indicates she is one who captures the
imaginations of many of us.

Very thoughtful piece of research here.

Title: The Houseless · Author: Jael · Genres: Horror · ID: 178
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 05:37:26
A marvelous ghost story, and one perfect for Mirkwood. Poor
Legolas--frightened by ghost stories as a child, and now apparently
meeting such a houseless one as a young adult!

The atmosphere is perfect, as is Greywing's illustration.

Title: If I Had One Wish · Author: Ellie · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Finwe · ID: 658
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 05:43:50
Ah, but we are all haunted by "if-onlies," and the lady Indis is no
different as she imagines what ought to have been. Hauntingly, gently
lovely.

Title: Concerning Walls · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Frodo and Faramir · ID: 112
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-07-30 05:47:59
Spoilers!
A lovely thought provoking story which will answer the question many
readers have concerning what would would Frodo and Faramir have to say
to each other when they met again and what did they think.

Faramir most immediately notices that Frodo still wears his grey cloak
over the fine clothes Aragorn has ordered for him, which is typical of
his humility.I personally think the text is open to interpretation
whether Frodo throws all his Orc clothing away,or simply the armour.
Faramir can see how much Frodo has suffered,being a very perceptive man.

I like the way the link concerning how they both wish for a better
world is depicted, which led them to make great sacrifices during the
war. Faramir will see the lands blossom, anew,while FRodo's time on
Middle-earth is limited.

I loved the idea of Frodo and faramir sitting on a wall chatting about
their respective homelands and experiences.



Title: Legolas in Mandos · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 317
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-30 05:58:33
The story is carefully balanced between drama and humour. Considering
that the subject matter is death, the humour, in particular, is very
welcome and somehow poignant.

Námo's characterisation is wonderful (as ever in Fiondil's stories):
engaging, mischievous, compassionate, yet commanding and powerful.

Despite the fact that the readers "knew" how the outcome of the story
had to be (as this was no AU), Fiondil managed to build real tension.

Hi Marta et al,

While reading a multi-chapter fic at HASA today, I received the following
error message:

"You reached this page because the page you were trying to get to either no
longer exists or the URL has changed.

This page is mostly intended to capture spam attacks, old bookmarks and bad
URL links.

If you got here because of an old bookmark, please go to the HASA home page,
navigate correctly to the page, and change your bookmark."

I got this message by using the "next" link at the bottom of the previous
page, so I'm not sure if this means the latter 2 chapters of "As the Tide by
the Moon" weren't fixed after the last hack to that site, or if there's
something wrong on my end. In any case, I'm not a member of HASA and am not
sure how to contact their admins. But I thought someone with MEFA should
know too, as if it's happening to one person, it's likely happening to
others.

Shame, too. I was really getting into this one!

Hope you all have wonderful weekends,

Neume (the Other Becky)


[Non-text portions of this message have been removed]

Hello "Other Becky" :-)

Thanks for letting us know. I don't really know how to fix it or if
there are other technical problems at HASA that I don't know about.
However, I ahve not heard that there is anything going on over there and
so I'm sure that their technical volunteer would love to know about the
problem.

Would you mind contacting her directly? You can do this at

http://henneth-annun.net/about/contact.cfm

Just select "Tech Support" as the recipient and tell her what you just
told me. I could relay your message for you, but I think it would be
more efficient coming from you; that way I don't have to relay any
follow-up between the two of you. If you'd rather not report it yourself
let me know and I'll talk to Ang.

Thanks,

Marta

Neume Indil wrote:

>
>
> Hi Marta et al,
>
> While reading a multi-chapter fic at HASA today, I received the following
> error message:
>
> "You reached this page because the page you were trying to get to either no
> longer exists or the URL has changed.
>
> This page is mostly intended to capture spam attacks, old bookmarks and bad
> URL links.
>
> If you got here because of an old bookmark, please go to the HASA home page,
> navigate correctly to the page, and change your bookmark."
>
> I got this message by using the "next" link at the bottom of the previous
> page, so I'm not sure if this means the latter 2 chapters of "As the Tide by
> the Moon" weren't fixed after the last hack to that site, or if there's
> something wrong on my end. In any case, I'm not a member of HASA and am not
> sure how to contact their admins. But I thought someone with MEFA should
> know too, as if it's happening to one person, it's likely happening to
> others.
>
> Shame, too. I was really getting into this one!
>
> Hope you all have wonderful weekends,
>
> Neume (the Other Becky)
>

Ok. Will do. :)

On Fri, Aug 8, 2008 at 5:23 PM, Marta <melayton@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hello "Other Becky" :-)
>
> Thanks for letting us know. I don't really know how to fix it or if
> there are other technical problems at HASA that I don't know about.
> However, I ahve not heard that there is anything going on over there and
> so I'm sure that their technical volunteer would love to know about the
> problem.
>
> Would you mind contacting her directly? You can do this at
>
> http://henneth-annun.net/about/contact.cfm
>
> Just select "Tech Support" as the recipient and tell her what you just
> told me. I could relay your message for you, but I think it would be
> more efficient coming from you; that way I don't have to relay any
> follow-up between the two of you. If you'd rather not report it yourself
> let me know and I'll talk to Ang.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Marta
>
>
> Neume Indil wrote:
> >
> >
> > Hi Marta et al,
> >
> > While reading a multi-chapter fic at HASA today, I received the following
> > error message:
> >
> > "You reached this page because the page you were trying to get to either
> no
> > longer exists or the URL has changed.
> >
> > This page is mostly intended to capture spam attacks, old bookmarks and
> bad
> > URL links.
> >
> > If you got here because of an old bookmark, please go to the HASA home
> page,
> > navigate correctly to the page, and change your bookmark."
> >
> > I got this message by using the "next" link at the bottom of the previous
> > page, so I'm not sure if this means the latter 2 chapters of "As the Tide
> by
> > the Moon" weren't fixed after the last hack to that site, or if there's
> > something wrong on my end. In any case, I'm not a member of HASA and am
> not
> > sure how to contact their admins. But I thought someone with MEFA should
> > know too, as if it's happening to one person, it's likely happening to
> > others.
> >
> > Shame, too. I was really getting into this one!
> >
> > Hope you all have wonderful weekends,
> >
> > Neume (the Other Becky)
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Title: The Last Throw · Author: nau_tika · Genres: Drama · ID: 556
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-30 05:59:03
I like the way this story is framed as a tale one of the veterans
tells his family. The PoV is executed well; the voice is lively. You
can almost hear the contributions from others, even if it's not shown
on the page beyond the narrator's reaction to it. I particularly liked
the way he edited his tale for the sake of his children.

His recollections of and musings on the march provides an interesting
perspective, hinting at what the he and his fellow soldiers talked
about - even some critical voices - and how they saw their superiors
(and/or those peculiar strangers coming to their aid) and their actions.

Title: The Visitor · Author: Rowan · Genres: Drama · ID: 174
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-30 06:00:03
Spoilers!
A contemplatative story with a wonderfully calm, musing voice that
fits perfectly. The sometimes rambling narrative feels very authentic.

I really liked this characterisation of Elanor (which is near to my
own image of her). I'm sure she had the best traits of both her
parents, and I liked that Frodo implied that she even had some of
those "fey" qualities that were said he himself possessed.

Her conversation with Frodo is very touching; the emotions feel so
real, the initial awkwardness seguing into genuine warmth and lively
curiosity. I found it moving that they both derive comfort and ease
from this conversation.

I liked how the ending tied to the beginning and gives the reason for
her move to the White Towers.

Title: The Weaving Cow · Author: cactuskim · Genres: Humor · ID: 675
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 06:12:14
Laughing Elves and King, paddling Eldarion, and blushing Legolas--what
could be better. A nice chuckle at the expense of Aragorn and Legolas
and a cattle lot.

Title: A Meeting in the Tower Hills · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 374
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 06:15:02
How fascinating, to consider a meeting between those of the new world
with those of the old, and trying to communicate when their languages
had definitely drifted apart! And love the story built between the
bards of the two groups!

Title: Yule Tails · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 303
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 06:18:02
Spoilers!
Somehow boys and noble steeds seem to go together as we watch Pippin
and Faramir, at similar times in each one's life, receive a new mount
for the midwinter festivities.

The vignettes are charming and warming, and the love surrounding each
acquisition is well displayed.

Title: Dirty Jobs · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 232
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 06:20:56
Oh, Pippin has a good reason for doing what he's doing, and in the end
his father can only be proud of the perseverence and good temper that
serve his son so well.

Nice picture of Shire life and the place within it of Peregrin Took.
Our beloved Pippin does himself proud.

Title: The King's Surgeon · Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Longer
Works · ID: 90
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 06:27:32
Spoilers!
The tale of Serinde the surgeon is a long and difficult one, from the
accident that sent her to Minas Tirith and the Houses of Healing where
she became fascinated with medicine and surgery to the fall from a
library ladder in the Archives onto the heir to Ecthelion to the
growing distrust between healer and new Steward, leading to her
banishment from the realm.

Her finding of Halbarad and the establishment of their home and family
in Bree, and eventual return to serve once more in Gondor as surgeons
are needed desperately as the war with Mordor heats up....

A well-developed character, all bones and sharp angles and defensive
nature, one who is too honest, perhaps, for her own good. Well, well
worth the read, even if one learns perhaps more about prolapsed bowels
than one wished. Heh!

Title: Comfort · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves: House of Elrond · ID: 161
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 06:34:23
Spoilers!
Accepting that there was nothing to be done in averting the death of a
mortal companion--perhaps Arathorn himself, is not easy, Elrohir
finds. Yet Elladan will work at it, helping to ease the burden of
guilt his brother bears, perhaps remembering the feelings both had
when it was their mother they barely rescued.

Sad, melancholy, but necessary.

The love between the twins is well drawn.

Title: The Westering Fire · Author: Aprilkat · Races: Hobbits · ID: 200
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 06:42:59
Spoilers!
All keeps getting worse and worse, but is bearable for now. Marigold
is safe--for the moment at least, and there is wood for those brave
enough to fetch it. But then a horn blows, and a rider approaches!

Our beloved Rosie is well portrayed, as is her desire for her Sam. A
wonderful lead-up to the Scouring of the Shire from Rosie's point of view.

Title: Estel I Was Called · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 351
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-30 11:11:36
Spoilers!
It is a touching and resonanting aspect that Aragorn's musings about
his heritage as Chief of the Dúnedain are triggered by such an
commonplace thing as the bed and its bedding. You can feel him almost
desperately searching for a connection, a bond that might help him
"rediscover" his parents, in particular his father, trying to imagine
them in various everyday situations. His youth and uncertainty are
shown very well.

I wonder how much his thoughts about ["thinking he was some waif at
Elrond's table"] really are actual memories, or rather hindsight now
that he knows the truth and resents that it had been kept from him so
long.

I'm interested in stories that explore the question of how the secret
had been kept for all Aragorn's time in Imladris and even after he
came back among the Rangers (and what name he was called before the
Bree-landers chose "Strider"). This version makes good sense, and I
liked Marta sneaked in the reference to other Northern men serving in
Gondor.

Title: Sharing Good News · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 216
Reviewer: cairistiona · 2008-07-30 17:03:53
Spoilers!
This is a really amusing little drabble, very vivid and despite the
limited words, manages to express the setting, characters and emotions
quite well. The idea of Aragorn lit from within and bursting to share
his news with someone is very plausible, and the execution of how he
did so was very charming. Well worth the read even if, like me, you're
not a huge fan of drabbles because they tend to leave you wanting
more. This one does leave that feeling, as do all drabbles to me, but
at the same time it's completely satisfying in and of itself. Well
worth a read.

Title: The Game of Kings · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor · ID: 28
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-30 19:02:49
A deliciously atmospheric piece, full of vivid description - one call
almost smell the pipesmoke and hear the crackle of the fire.
Barliman's voice is wonderfully characterized - not so much a comic
buffoon as a man with too much already on his mind. Details like the
dwarves' [long discussions about which moves were lawfu] and the
hobbits' insistence on [using their own names for some of the
pieces—thain for king and archer for knight] add an intriguing tang,
almost a cosmopolitan touch to a backwater town. The foreshadowing
(I'm not sure if that's the right word, but it's the only one I can
think of at the moment) in the last few lines closes the tale with a
slightly moody, disturbing note which is an excellent foil to a
"homely" scene.

Title: Tying Notes · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age: Gondor
Drabbles · ID: 378
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-30 19:06:13
What a gorgeous story. It's so perfectly Faramir: his courtesy, love
of history and lore, his fascination with the world of artists and
crafters. I wonder if the Ambassador knew this about Faramir ahead of
time, carefully plotting this interlude, as wise and wily as the
Prince and Steward himself, or was he surprised at the turn of events
and quickly recovered his wit to take excellent advantage of events as
they unfolded in the course of the evening? Either way, this is
delightful - elegant, compact, self-contained, yet rich in detail - a
perfect example of the drabblist's art.

Title: Promise and Sorrow · Author: Virtuella · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 607
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-30 19:06:53
I'm very pleased to see so many writers exploring the worlds of
original characters, and so many of these stories nominated this year.
Original characters add such a depth of color and vibrancy to
Tolkien's world, "filling up the corners" that he merely hinted at,
even as they expand his world and our shared experience within it.

This is a heartbreakingly lovely set of stories. Each of the
characters has their own very distinct voice, so even thought the
themes are similar, the heartbreak, anguish, joy, and hope shine
through very distinctly. The vignette that spoke to me most clearly
was the first one, the mother obsessing over a small detail [what to
do about the shoes] and completely in denial over the larger issue.
The joyful story of the unexpected bridegroom made me smile, but then
I had to cry again over the lost bride. What treasures these stories
are! And how well they will be incorporated into Tolkien's world,
tales of unsung heroes and heroines who are real people like us.

Title: Answering the Call · Author: docmon · Genres: Drama · ID: 340
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-07-30 19:08:21
Spoilers!
This was a very intriguing and thought-provoking story. I had always
taken Gandalf at his word when he said he didn't want the Ring, so it
was quite interesting to ponder what he would have done with it (and
the confusion his having it would wreak on his friends as well as his
enemies.) There was more than enough pain, bitterness, and angst to go
around, as other members of the Fellowship were considered in their
turn, but I whooped with glee at the last vignette, so different from
anything I'd ever encountered before. Brava! to a story very well told.

Title: GOBLINS: The Herald's Summons · Author: Fiondil · Times: First
Age and Prior · ID: 53
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-30 22:13:38
Spoilers!
Fiondil's Valar and Maiar are very personable, and Eonwe within this
short tale of the beginning of the War of Wrath is that--as well as
being unsettling to those of the Eldar who come to hear his words
after the first day of fighting. Those among the Exiles will be
allowed to return, but not the daughter of Fingwe. Why not, he does
not say.

Disturbing or not, he accepts Celeborn's vow to protect his lady wife,
and dismisses them. The compassion is obvious if unspoken, as is the
respect he holds for the three he speaks with. I hope that Galadriel
is already aware she has a part to play in the distant future.

The scene is described beautifully, as is Celeborn's distinct unease
at what he finds and Fingwe's concerns about whether or not he is
taking part in a form of kinslaying. One finds oneself empathising
with the two ellyn.

Thought provoking.

Title: The Kindly Airs · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 480
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 04:05:24
As Dwimordene says, an unusual perspective, and well handled. A thing
that was previously reviled and cursed can now bring tidings of joy,
and is glad to do so.

Title: Renewal · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 208
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 04:09:03
A masterful drabble. I particularly appreciated the form of the piece,
and the way the sword refers to itself as a person. The analogy could
have seemed a bit far-fetched, but Elena carries it off nicely.

Title: Journey's End · Author: Ignoble Bard · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 234
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 04:19:16
Awwwww. I was always a bit miffed at the way Arwen was depicted in the
appendices-she had seemed much more forthright and enduring in her
brief appearances in LOTR. For her to waffle like she did during her
death felt like a repudiation of the Beren/Luthien love she and
Aragorn were supposed to echo. This beautiful drabble helps me feel
somewhat better about the whole situation, perhaps because it is from
Aragorn's point of view. A beautiful piece despite the brevity.

Title: Portrait of a Queen · Author: Aruthir · Races: Men · ID: 338
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2008-07-31 04:36:48
This is a lovely and unusual work. I love the repeated theme, how it
ties her life together from childhood to death. I love seeing the
child grow through womanhood to become a great queen, I love her
strength of resolve and how she is never bent or broken.

Title: The Making of Werewolves · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races:
Villains · ID: 42
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2008-07-31 04:46:42
As I have said elsewhere, I think you have outdone yourself with this
one. You have the style and tone down, but more than that, the heart
of it all. The mingling of 'self' that binds and strengthens at the
same time is a lot of the heart of the story of the Silmarillion and
all the Histories and you have captured the essence of that with this
short story amazingly well. – you grok.

Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 152
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-31 06:47:31
Evocative, lyrical prose; the scenes are set extremely well with
almost tangible details appealing to all senses.

The unusual characterisation of Denethor was handled well, but I
really liked the portrayal of Ecthelion, and how nuanced the tension
was explored between the three men.

The discussions on strategy against Umbar felt very real, very
plausible, and quite ingenious.

I would have appreciated an acknowledgement (at least in the author's
notes) that this was an AU regarding such canonical dates as
Denethor's marriage and Boromir's birth.

Title: Epiphany · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 293
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-31 08:09:22
Spoilers!
A bittersweet glance at the growth process - Aragorn's growth from
sheltered child to King of the West, as seen through the wistful eyes
of his foster-brothers. Very nicely written, and I like the sense of
occasion. Larner sets a good balance between remembrance, nostalgia
and a shining moment of culmination.

Title: Dead Steward's Gift · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Mystery · ID: 572
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-07-31 10:13:45
Spoilers!
Ah--a bit of a mystery here as Faramir finds himself plumbing the
depths of strange sounds and lights emanating from the top of the
Tower of Ecthelion. and receives the key to that room from a man once
associated with his father. Assisted by his cat, the Steward begins to
search out the cause of the strange doings as well as seeking out the
hiding place in which his father might have left the one object that
OUGHT to have been in that room.

A nice mixture of mystery, romance, angst, and kitty antics.

Title: Seven Sisters · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Other Beings · ID: 388
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-31 11:58:11
The tone of the story is very charming, and captures well Pippin's
mood: you can almost hear his aggrieved and exasperated tone at his
"plight", see the typical teenager having to deal with sisters and
other annoying girls *g*.

I admit the sudden shift in tone caught me by surprise (I should have
heeded the summary more), but in fact, that made it that much spookier
and creepier.

The contrast between the simple, young Hobbit, and the lofty,
ethereal, eerie creature he encounters is drawn out very well - each
has a distinct voice and bearing. Pippin is clearly out of depth,
cowed and upset, and the sprite (or whatever it is) seems a
dispassionate, remote observer despite its talk about compassion and
sorrow.

I liked that the story combined to very different mythologies to
create a tale of its own.

Title: Invisible Ink · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Boromir or Faramir · ID: 4
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-31 11:58:33
The scenes and characters are described very vividly, projecting a
three-dimensional world you can see and hear and smell, almost touch.

A version of Rohan's culture is extrapolated believably, especially
the worth of oral tradition (and its drawbacks). While I'm more on
Faramir's side, I liked the even-handedness of the argument about
["book and song"], and found the list of mnemonic tricks to aid memory
retention interesting and plausible.

Title: Seven Stones and Seven Stars and One White Tree · Author:
shirebound · Races: Other Beings · ID: 121
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-07-31 11:58:43
Wonderfully imagined perspectives. Shirebound digs deep for the
essences of three different parts of creation, examines them
carefully, and presents them credibly and poignantly. She employs an
inventive twist on the rhyme used (slightly altered) as the title.

I not only liked to read about those intriguing narrators, but also
how they reacted to their environment, and especially, of course, how
they viewed and judged the members of the Fellowship. They seemed keen
observers, so to speak, and I liked how they each mused about how
characteristics and/or background of the Nine Walkers related to
themselves.

The anticipation of the change sensed all around is conveyed well, and
it brought home the fact that the whole of Middle-earth, not only the
people, had a stake in the success of the Quest, and rejoiced when it
came to pass. It also showed the connection between the Valar to
living beings to plants to a humble stone.

It was interesting to "recapitulate" snapshots of history through the
narrators, which all added up to a rich examination on Middle-earth's
remote or more recent history.

The ending was perfect: lovely and lush and uplifting, pointing to a
bright future.

Title: In the Hands of the King · Author: fantasyfan · Times: Late
Third Age: Gondor · ID: 231
Reviewer: White Gull · 2008-07-31 13:57:52
This is a lovely, comforting and moving vignette of Frodo's healing. I
love the small interaction between Aragorn, Elladan and Elrohir, all
with such concern for the ringbearer. And I love Arwen's part. Just as
her gem will bring him comfort, the blanket brings him aid when he
needs it most. Very nice touch, fantasyfan.

Title: Forfeit · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 401
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-31 18:41:05
Spoilers!
Another one I wish I'd written! This is wonderfully evocative, and
packs a wallop of plot and emotion into a short piece, without
drowning the reader in sentiment. How does Branwyn do it, and do it so
well!

Beregond is the ultimate in Faithful, not necessarily to orders and
rules, but to those he loves, and what he prizes most. Here, Branwyn
shows, through the medium of conversation with an unnamed friend, that
Beregond prizes his honor, and that of his family, above his own life;
he has broken an oath to prevent an atrocity, but he refuses to run
like a coward. And, as importantly, Beregond refuses to leave his son.

Beregond's noble, strong character simply shines here. An excellent
drabble, which I highly recommend.

Title: Birthday Outing · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 386
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-07-31 18:54:32
Spoilers!
A delightful look at Aragorn at the age of 200, showing off his
Rangering skills and showing up two much younger princes. An inspired
concept well-delivered. I love it that Aragorn still has that wry
sense of humor; which his son seems to share.

Title: Faithful · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Second and Early Third
Age · ID: 105
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 22:16:19
Spoilers!
The Kin-Strife always seems to me to be a tragedy like unto our Civil
War, where everyone has to choose a side, and brothers can be found
facing brothers on the field of battle.

Whether Amrazar of Dol Amroth in Dwimordene's ficlet has a brother is
never said. But certainly he has conflicting loyalties, and in the
end, he makes his choice. A momentous occasion deftly described in
very few words.

Title: Fatherhood · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 547
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 22:20:09
A sweet drabble with a bit of a surprise twist to it. Annmarwalk
writes Imrahil the way I envisage him-as a loving father who is
nonetheless well aware of the realities of his exalted position and is
pragmatic about them. He is also pragmatic about his daughter's
destiny, as this drabble demonstrates.

Title: Rose, Rose, Rose · Author: White Gull · Genres: Romance · ID: 619
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 22:25:29
An absolutely gorgeous little piece, full of sensual and sensory
detail. I have sometimes wondered how Rosie felt towards Frodo, moving
into his house with Sam as she did. White Gull does a superlative job
of exploring one erotic possibility. Though Rosie undoubtedly loves
her Sam, she's married, not dead after all...

Title: Recognition · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor Drabbles · ID: 481
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 22:29:10
Spoilers!
Ioreth is insightful in this Dwimordene drabble. (Perhaps it's because
her mouth isn't running!) In any event, she sees the White Lady of
Rohan more truly than many accounted Wise. And she likes her well
enough to be happy for her, when it seems Eowyn has found a kindred
spirit at last.

Title: Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices · Author: Lady Bluejay ·
Genres: Drama: Incomplete · ID: 159
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 22:36:44
Spoilers!
An enjoyable story that alternates between Eomer and Lothiriel's POVs.
Eomer's is probably a little easier to handle, in that Rohan is
already battling the Enemy, but Lady Blujay does a good job of
depicting his culture and several OC friends whom he interacts with.
Eomer's progression from a callow young rider into a leader of men is
clearly delinieated.

As a woman, Lothiriel's story would seem upon first glance to be less
interesting. Lady Blujay has punched it up a bit by making her a bit
of a tomboy and giving her a gift of healing from her Elven forbears.
She also creates a plausible villain in the person of an Umbarian lord
who is courted by the lords of Gondor and who obsesses upon obtaining
Lothiriel as his wife.

I certainly have NO place complaining about a WIP that ends too soon,
that would be hypocrisy of the worst sort, so I'll just close by
saying that I hope she does finish this story in the near future.

Title: One Summer Day · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 535
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 22:39:37
Spoilers!
An enjoyable series of drabbles that are all interrelated with a
common theme of gardening and cooking. I must say, I never thought of
Boromir as having any interest in gardening, but Annmarwalk makes it
seem plausible. I can, however, see Imrahil learning to cook seafood
with expertise and panache! Her OC Mag is also included here, and as
always, is a pleasure.

Title: Battle upon the Quays · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 376
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-07-31 22:43:48
Spoilers!
Some days it just doesn't pay to get out of bed, as the Corsair
Captain in this piece finds out. Battle luck is a fickle thing, and in
the course of a hundred words he finds himself deprived of a princely
prize and with a deadly opponent to face.

Title: Moon Over Water · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 518
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-08-01 00:19:49
Spoilers!
Very well written! I have read many stories concerning Faramir
remembering his brother on the banks of the Anduin,but this one is
quite unique, in that long before Boromir's death, ghosts could be
seen on the river once a year and Boromir would take his little
brother to see them.It seems whether the ghosts appear is linked to
Gondor's fortunes.
I almost felt I was at the river with Faramir and sharing the
wonderous vision, which should comfort him through all the years ahead.

I think many have gained comfort through dreams of dreams of deceased
loved ones with all age,sorrow and sickness gone from them and this
story will strike a chord in anyone who has lost a loved one,as,alas
have most of us.
This story is just breathtaking! It is so mysterious,haunting and
beautiful.Very well written!


Title: Relief · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General Drabbles · ID: 446
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-08-01 00:23:32
A very enjoyable drabble, I could almost feel the cool water as I was
reading. I love watching Sharpe shirtless, as a feast for female
eyes,so have those images in my head when I think of Boromir, even
though I'm a book girl.A very vivid drabble.

Title: Tolkien's Parish: The Canonical Middle-earth · Author: Steuard
Jensen · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 91
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-08-01 00:33:19
Spoilers!
An interesting and thought provoking essay on how to approach
Tolkien's works as a consistent picture of the universe he created.The
author reaches the wise conclusion that despite some inconsistencies,
Tolkien's world feels 'real' to its readers.

Title: One Summer Day · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 535
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-01 01:08:39
Spoilers!
Ann's Mag is one of the most wonderful OCs I can think of, so devoted
to Boromir--and Faramir, also, of course. And when Boromir sets out to
do some clearing of his mother's garden Faramir, after a frustrating
interview with the Steward (I note it's NOT his father he refers
to--must have been VERY frustrating) chooses to join them, knowing Mag
will bring them a veritable feast when it's time. With the comments by
Imrahil and the thoughts on how the Prince of Dol Amroth has taught
her to cook seafood, Mag adds steamed crab to the basket.

Ranger lovers will love the images of the two soldiers turned gardener
as they work; food lovers have Mag's cooking to imagine; Minas Tirith
lovers have descriptions of how the gardens of the city came to be....

What's not to love?

Title: And so our friendship began... · Author: Amarok · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 281
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-01 08:02:35
A most interesting look at how Aragorn and Legolas might have met and
developed the friendship seen between them in the movie. The trust
Aragorn gives Legolas is moving and convincingly portrayed, as is the
initial distrust the Elf returns--and with good reason.

Excellent villains, and I love how Aragorn gets rid of them--and how
he convinces Legolas he does indeed know Elladan and Elrohir well.

Title: Restoration · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Races: Men:
Minas Tirith · ID: 19
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-01 13:43:23
Sleeping Faramir, exhausted Beregond who follows orders exactly,
watching King-to-be, all come together in a tableau of healing, all
finding rest and [restoration] in a brief moment in the aftermath of
the Battle of the Pelennor and the concommitant battle for Faramir's
life within the Hallows. This story in and of itself is restful and
restorative in spite of its brevity.

It is wonderful to find Hope returned to Gondor in this manner.

Title: Even Legends Fade · Author: Star In Ruin · Races: Elves · ID: 555
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-01 14:21:05
Spoilers!
This look at the grief of Arwen and Legolas through the unnamed eyes
of a citizen of Gondor is extraordinarily moving, particularly to see
how the two of them find at least momentary relief for their pain
through song and contemplation of the stars. And the citizen's feeling
that the realm is now being watched from above lifts my heart!

Title: The Heart of a Home · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 257
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-01 14:47:18
Sweet little story. The homey scene Bilbo returns charmed me as much
as it obivously did him. I could almost smell the delicious scents of
the cooking (makiny my mouth water *g*).

Title: On Amon Sûl · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Frodo or Sam · ID: 299
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-01 14:47:42
The narration felt very immediate, very close. Frodo's state of mind
was evoked cleverly by totally focussing on what he presently feels
and perceives. There are no thoughts beyond the here-and-now.

The ebb-and-flow of Frodo's awareness, how he comes closer to the
"surface" and then is being dragged down again by the Ring's whispers,
is presented well.

I liked how the others' love and protectiveness shines through, even
though Frodo is not always able to appreciate it.

Title: The Scribe and the Heir · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres:
Drama: Featuring the Noldor · ID: 256
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-01 19:47:51
Spoilers!
An interesting set-up: We see the main subject matter only indirectly:
once through Maedhros overhearing the conversation between his two
half-uncles, once through his recollection of his encounter with his
father and another overheard coversation between his parents. This
could have "dampened" the emotions by being "filtered", but in this
case, Maedhros' own emotions - frustration, defiance, pity,
exasperation - only add to the intensity, and emphasise the cost of
this quarrel.

The contrast between the two "sides" - Fëanor vs. Fingolfin, Formenos
vs. Tirion - are played out very well with telling details. Also the
irony, that as much as there are big differences, there is so much
that is alike. And the painful realisation that these similarities
will not lead to finding common ground, that everything that happens
will seen only through the respective personal lenses.

Title: If I Had One Wish · Author: Ellie · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Finwe · ID: 658
Reviewer: viv · 2008-08-01 19:59:26
Spoilers!
Oh, no. Oh, no, you did *not* write that ending. Take it back! I was
totally caught up in your happy golden fantasy, swallowing it whole it
as un unusually bright and glorious alternative-universe fiction. And
then you pulled *that* ending out of the ether. I am stunned. Haunted.
Horrified. Like Indis, I want that fantasy back, please, all bright
and beautiful and *real*. Not sure if I've ever hated Feanor more than
I do right now, for taking away all possibility of that simple
wish.(Although, I suppose this is much how the whole darkening of the
trees and First Murder in Valinor played out among the denizens there:
sudden and shocking and immutable. You know, even though this is a
very personal story about Indis, it is possible to expand the sorry
and suddenly empty feeling to everyone left behind in that typhoon
called Feanor. Interestingly, you named several of those left-behind
sorts there at the end, which leads me to believe you *meant* to show
how the story could be applied universally to everyone who had their
solid floors yanked away. How subtle and sneaky of you.) Ellie, this
was marvelous, simple, powerful writing.

Title: I Married for Love · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Poetry ·
ID: 661
Reviewer: viv · 2008-08-01 20:10:10
Indis feels so sweet in this, even her bitterness tempered by a gentle
soul. She's sad, deeply so, rather than vengeful. And maybe a little
bit blindsided by it all. I feel like wrapping her in a big warm
blanket and singing her a lullaby. What lovely characterization in
poetic form.

Title: The Wedding Gift · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 40
Reviewer: Avon · 2008-08-02 00:27:23
This story is beautiful and polished - just like the wedding gift. in
a very short space it uses words that make pictures and also tells a
very complete story. It is the little details that make it - the
description of both his tools and the materials he uses and the matter
of fact strangeness of sweeping aside her beard. I've always loved
this story.

Hey guys,

Agape4Rivendell has been in contact with Anglachel, who handles tech
support for the Henneth Annun Story Archive. The problem reported
earlier today by the "other" Becky (sorry, I'm forgetting the exact pen
name) has been fixed.

So you should be able to access stories posted at HASA now. Thanks to
Anglachel for getting this fixed quickly, and to Becky and Agape4Gondor
for working with HASA on this.

Marta

Title: The Web of Darkness · Author: Soledad · Genres: Adventure:
Incomplete · ID: 101
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-08-02 00:47:16
Soledad gives us a neat twist on the Marty Stu in "The Web of
Darkness." This time the guy who falls into Middle Earth is the
formidable Drizzt Do'Urden, dark elf anti-hero of R.A. Salvatore's
"Forgotten Realms" epics. Salvatore unabashedly uses Tolkien's
mythology as well as the Forgotten Realms RPG as the basis for his
stories.

Drizzt fits in well with his Middle Earth surroundings. For Soledad
takes him to the Long Lake of "The Hobbit" to participate in the
Battle of Dale that coincides with the siege of Minas Tirith. Like her
"Young Knights," this story was filled with a wealth of details that
add so much depth and excitement. In fact, most of the tale is viewed
through the eyes of her OCs, including a race of Easterlings, the Khimmer.

"Web" is still a work in progress and highly recommended for those who
love a good action tale.

Title: National Treasure · Author: Baranduin · Times: Modern Times ·
ID: 201
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-02 01:47:26
Spoilers!
An intriguing short story that I rather wish had been expanded. The
story tells of two modern archeologists who, looking for Templar ruins
in Scotland, find something else that is definitely much older.

Baranduin does a fine job conveying the excitement and mystery
surrounding the finding of the ruin and some of its contents.

Title: Thicker Than Water · Author: Noliel · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 541
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-02 01:52:19
Spoilers!
A fine gapfiller that focusses on the mysterious Celebrimbor, and his
equally mysterious relationship with his father Curufin. Good use of
Celebrimbor's interest in and bond with Galadriel. The interaction
between Celebrimbor and his father is excellently, quietly, and
effectively written here.

Title: Murder The Dawn · Author: crowdaughter · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 383
Reviewer: Jael · 2008-08-02 02:36:56
Spoilers!
What can I say about this story?

The parent story to this AU dark tale, Mael-gul, was one of the most
affecting stories I have ever read. It got into my mind and has stayed
there for two years.

Warning: This is not a feel-good story. However, it does make the
reader feel, and feel deeply. Something has gone terribly wrong, and
otherwise good and noble characters are pushed into actions that in
any other story would be horrible out of character. Here, they make
chillingly logical sense.

There are times in the parent story that the reader, affected horribly
by Legolas's dire situation, wants to scream, "Fight, Legolas -- fight
back. They have no right to do this to you!"

In Murder the Dawn, Legolas fights back, doing the unthinkable to
bring both salvation and doom upon his people. We know it cannot end
well, yet, despite all, we cheer Legolas on as he races to complete
his mission -- at a horrible cost to himself both physically and
spiritually.

In the most recent chapter of this work in progress,
Thranduil exacts his retribution upon the tormentors of himself, his
family, and his people. It is predictably harsh, yet, again, we
forgive him.

This story is the opposite of exploitive -- it tells us what people
will do when driven beyond the breaking point. As sad as the ending of
this story must inevitably be, I look forward to seeing how this
tragedy will play out.

Title: A Moment Away · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 474
Reviewer: Avon · 2008-08-02 03:19:22
A very sweet drabble. Its simplicity belies the depth of story it
tells. I'd never even thought of this moment and now I have a perfect
explanation given to me. It's a great portrait of Morwen, who I've
always had a fondness for.

Title: Five Things that Never Happened to Serinde of Dol Amroth ·
Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy ·
ID: 222
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-02 05:41:07
Spoilers!
This set of five AU ficlets is disturbing--and in the last one
reassuring. Serinde of Dol Amroth, with her bony figure, partial
amputation of her foot, acerbic nature, and highly competent and
driven nature, has become a favorite of many of us; to think she might
have died as she did in the first four is disturbing, while many of us
wish the last had happened!

All too possible, considering the natures of those involved. All too
desirable, the last one!

Fabulous series.

Title: Moon Over Water · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 518
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-02 06:11:45
Spoilers!
Dreamlike, quiet language and beautiful descriptions perfectly evoke
the atmosphere of the surroundings and Faramir's mood. The use of
present tense gives the piece an immediacy which draws the readers
directly into this mood - I actually felt soothed when reading.

The characterisations are very good, especially the shift in portrayal
between the young Faramir and the adult one. The deep love between the
brothers is elicited very well: Boromir as the protector and big
brother who shows his little brother the wonders of the world, Faramir
touchingly trusting.

There are so many lovely lines, but for some reason, the following
quote struck a chord with me: ["It had been strange to see Boromir,
the practical one, the warrior, so entranced by something so mystical.
Indeed, by the next day Boromir had shrugged off his attempts to talk
about it and had instead vanished for a day's hunting in the woods
with his new bow."] Boromir the pragmatic who still longs and hopes
for something beyond the mundane and went to search for it by
following a riddle out of a dream.

I couldn't help remembering another occasion when Faramir saw watching
a boat glide down the Anduin, and reading the final scene Avon
describes with this in mind added a particular poignancy.

Title: The Onion Riddle · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 13
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-08-02 06:42:11
Branwyn's mildly ribald tale frames an Anglo Saxon double entendre
riddle within a Middle Earth context of mistaken identity. Though it
certainly provides a good laugh, "The Onion Riddle" also combines
cultural attitudes towards homosexuality in Fourth Age Middle Earth
with certain myths about the Dwarven race. I guessed the malady of the
mysterious nephew before the reveal, but still took great delight at
the closing punchline. A fun story for the 18 and older set.

Title: Temptation · Author: Princess Artemis · Genres: Poetry · ID: 416
Reviewer: Inkling · 2008-08-02 06:54:18
Spoilers!
This is without a doubt one of the most unusual and thought-provoking
works of fan fiction I have read. Certainly there are other fics
featuring a sentient, malevolent One Ring, but I know of no others
written from the first-person POV of the Ring--and a fascinating,
chilling perspective it is!

In a few searing lines of prose poetry, Princess Artemis has deftly
captured the entire history of the Ring and its bearers (and
almost-bearers). Especially intriguing is her take on Sauron as merely
the first in a long line of fools to be ensnared by the Ring's siren
song (alternatively, this could be also be an egomaniacal conceit on
the part of the Ring).

But the author's most impressive accomplishment is investing the Ring
with an actual personality beyond pure and simple evilness. I don't
mean that it has any redeeming qualities, but rather that it is a
complicated, faceted portrait of evil. The Ring shows itself to be
arrogant and cunning, with clear favorites among its bearers. But it
also succumbs to the occasional frustrated temper tantrum, and has
blind spots a mile wide that ultimately prove its undoing.

Not surprisingly, the Ring's most complex--and sick--relationship is
with Gollum [the lesser me], who is treated as an ill-used lover: [i
want you back, precious...]. Sméagol, then, becomes the rival who must
be eliminated: [Then Gollum is my precious...and i slay thee swiftly...].

In the end, the reader is left to ponder the poem's implications: was
this Ring no more than an extension of Sauron's own will and spirit,
or was it truly a separate entity, as it seems to believe...a
Frankenstein's monster of a creation that quickly spun out of its
master's control, though their fates remained intertwined?


Title: Lingering Shadow · Author: Shireling · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Boromir or Faramir · ID: 412
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-02 12:47:54
A sad story as Faramir finds himself facing what appears a ghost from
his past, as one of the Rangers thought lost in the final assault on
Osgiliath threatens him. But why?

One feels for both Faramir and the one who has stalked him, and why
the man has become deranged.

Title: The Last Dance · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits: Family ·
ID: 397
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-02 12:54:27
Spoilers!
As new duties overwhelm them, the new Thain and his Lady learn that
it's hard to find time for the romance they need to keep their love
and happiness for and with one another active; but Peregrin proves
wise enough to deal with the situation.

A wonderful reminder that we need to be there for one another even as
we struggle with life's stresses. The love and caring is well
rendered, as is the relief that Peregrin also perceives the need for
mutual reassurance and confirmation of what has always been there.
But, then, what else would one expect from our favorite Took?

Title: Black Memory · Author: mrkinch · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 603
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-02 12:58:49
Spoilers!
Hmm. The idea that Morgoth's crown with its three Silmarils was so
heavy that he could not bear it easily is indeed an intriguing one.
Yes, I can see this! Fascinating image.

Title: Charge! · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles ·
ID: 444
Reviewer: kitt_otter · 2008-08-02 15:16:12
The very title sets the atmosphere and the rest lives up to it. I
could hear the sounds of battle and feel the excitement. Makes me want
to charge something... well done!

Title: O Kheled-zâram fair and wonderful! · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 354
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-02 17:16:39
Spoilers!
I like the image of the lake of Kheled-zaram as a dwarven lover's
lane. And the imagery of heat, metals and fiery hair, in the
dwarf-woman, is very appropriate to a dwarven romance. Skillfully done!





Title: Circle of Silver · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of
Finwe · ID: 717
Reviewer: Phyncke · 2008-08-02 22:21:53
Spoilers!
I really love this story about Gil Galad. It is one that fills in so
many blanks in his life, as fan fiction should do, as I like it to do.
In this story the reader feels the mantle of responsibility settling
squarely on this elf. In one moment he is relaxing and looking at the
sea. Admittedly he is thinking about some responsibilities but he is
able to relax there in his favorite nook (I love that he has a
favorite spot).

Then he gets the news and we know his life is changed. His thoughts of
those who died before him, make him very compassionate but that mantle
settles. He is now king.

This story does what you mean to. It tells this small moment and
expands it to the significance that it must have. The news is carried
and the succession is set. Gil Galad is king. I remember reading this
on the journals and doing so a few times, just to enjoy the
description of him and your way with words here.

I really enjoyed this tale.

Title: A Great Cause for Concern · Author: Alassante · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 682
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-03 00:22:31
Spoilers!
Yes, much explaining to do. I loved that Gandalf had been required to
account for Frodo and Bilbo, but perhaps what really made the story
for me was Gimli's attitude. He never seemed to doubt his place. You
could tell by his expectant looks toward Legolas, and when Gimli
himself spoke, it was with confidence and courage. Great characterization.

Title: The Misty Month · Author: Le Rouret · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Post-Ring War · ID: 454
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-03 00:24:08
Spoilers!
Whenever I sit down to read a story by Le Rouret, I end up associating
this amazing author with Sir Walter Scott because the story usually
reminds me of Ivanhoe (which I love). There's amazing attention to
detail insofar as nobility and royalty and propriety are concerned,
but in addition to that, Le Rouret surpasses Sir Walter Scott with
brilliant wordplay and and the best deadpan delivery I have ever seen
from Legolas. That's probably one of the things I like best about this
story. Legolas is so matter-of-fact about what needs to be done, which
was probably of great comfort to Eowyn though she didn't necessarily
recognize it at the time. But in the course of this practicality,
Legolas comes off with some absolutely priceless one-liners that
hammer home the inevitability of the situation to Eowyn.

As for Eowyn, she is also in rare form this story. Her courage is
obvious, but pain can cripple even the bravest warrior and Eowyn is no
exception. Watching her battle through her contractions (as well as
her mortification at Legolas's care) was a testament to me of the
fiery Rohirrim spirit that Le Rouret can craft so well. In fact, the
whole story was one seamless work of art from start to finish.
Excellent tension throughout and amazing dialog sequences. Thank you
very much for such a gem!

Title: Dance of the Deer and Mûmak · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 559
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-03 00:25:27
Spoilers!
One of the great travesties in the Tolkien fandom is that when many
writers get around to talking about dwarves (another travesty is how
few ever do), they invariably focus on what said dwarves can learn
from the elves. Only a handful talk about what the elves can learn
from the dwarves, which is why stories like this are so important.
Sure, there are the occasional vignettes that have Gimli showing
Legolas something neat, but very few do it in mass and have Gimli show
MANY elves something awe-inspiring. So I must thank NiRi from the
depths of my heart for such a wonderful tribute to all that the
dwarves have to offer. She really gets dwarves in a way that few
authors do. She understands their connection to earth, she
extrapolates a feel for rhythm, and when Gimli starts dancing, it's a
measured, intense, and independent thing of beauty. Which is exactly
how the dwarves should be portrayed.

Title: Parting Gifts · Author: Fiondil · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Post-Ring War · ID: 452
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-03 00:26:23
Spoilers!
The thing I loved most about this story was how Gimli was so direct. I
think it helped take the edge off. At least, it did for me as a
reader. Legolas seemed alternately exasperated and saddened by it, but
then, I'm not sure Gimli could have hoped for anything better. Anyway,
Gimli is rock solid in this story, which is how I like my dwarf: No
wavering. No wasted efforts. Just dwarven courage and dwarven strength
that not even his failing body can counter.

The hints we get of what Legolas has been up to since sailing paint a
sad picture of an elf who just won't let go of the past. I can only
hope that Gandalf can look after him. Lovely story that encompasses a
very broad picture without ever losing sight of its focus.

Title: The Onion Riddle · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 13
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-03 00:27:32
Spoilers!
It has been so long since I heard the Onion riddle that I'd actually
forgotten all about it, so thank you for reminding me! On to the story
itself, I guessed early on what the true nature of the relationship
between Bror and Nalin was, and from that, it wasn't hard to deduce
what was afflicting Bror. But even though the revelation at the end
came as no surprise to me, I still very much enjoyed getting to it. Or
rather, watching Beregond get to it, and that is the hallmark of a
good story. It doesn't need a surprise twist to make a good plot. The
characters take care of that. Excellent use of minor characters and
original characters, and kudos for such a good depiction of a culture
clash to which many in Beregond's company seemed completely oblivious.
I get the sense that this is not uncommon for the dwarves of Middle-earth.

Title: Rekindling · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 255
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-03 02:11:53
Spoilers!
It's been a while since I read the Silm, but Dawn's Feanor is
certainly his old intransigent self, not fearing to tell even the
Valar where to go. After countless centuries, it seems he will be
released from Mandos' halls at last...while in the intervening time
his wife Nerdanel has done her best to forget he has ever existed...

Tolkien describes Elven marriage as a union of two souls and that is
what is depicted here. Despite all that stands between them, in the
end Nerdanel and Feanor truly love each other. I found the end a bit
dismaying, for I had taken comfort in their reunion.

Title: Hammer · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 468
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-03 02:13:20
Spoilers!
Where do little dwarves come from? From illicit house parties when the
folks are away, apparently. A cute drabble with an all-too-predictable
dwarven pickup line.

Title: Your Father Loves You · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 424
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-03 02:16:49
Spoilers!
A contemplative moment from a Denethor not yet totally given over to
responsibility and not yet hardened by loss. An interesting premise,
that he might wish his second child a girl, that he be spared the
anguish of having to send another son to war. Raksha's Denethor is
only too human and sympathetic in this piece.

Title: Handy With A Sword · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 437
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-03 02:25:47
Spoilers!
Faramir ends up a loser at arms but a winner at love in Tanaqui's
series of drabbles. It was amusing to see Eowyn put her
soon-to-be-husband on his back, and Faramir's good nature about the
whole business. These pieces were of personal interest to me, since
they were inspired by a ballad written by a certain notorious SCA Duke
who actually was my opponent in my authorization battle long ago!

Title: Hammer · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 468
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 02:28:17
Spoilers!
So--even Dwarves have pick-up lines? Obviously she is willing! Hee!

Nice glimpse of Dwarvish courtship!

Title: Fait Accompli · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Mystery · ID: 381
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-03 02:33:00
Spoilers!
The identity of Legolas' tormentor truly came as a surprise to me, as
did the reason he was being punished. The scenes of punishment, which
could have become merely titillating or in-your-face to the extent
that they would have lost their impact, were deftly handled, and the
story was skillfully written.

Title: Choices · Author: brindlemom2 · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 184
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 02:34:53
What might it have been like for the twin sons of Earendil and Elwing
to part at last? A gently sad possibility, and sad that another's
heart also was disturbed.

Title: Some Seasons · Author: sophinisba solis · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 199
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 02:43:31
Spoilers!
A night of disturbed sleep manages to bring peace to Frodo, Sam, and
Rosie. The situation is true-to-life, and the caring expressed is lovely.

Title: WOUNDS: Invisible Scars · Author: Fiondil · Races: Elves: House
of Finwe · ID: 57
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 02:51:39
Spoilers!
Finrod is finding some things about being reembodied difficult to
appreciate, leaving him wondering if his life and sacrifices within
the Mortal Lands were worthwhile. Learning his father also has scars
that are not visible helps....

It would be so difficult to try to appreciate all that a renewed life
might mean, I think; and Fiondil communicates this well.

Title: In Good Company · Author: foxrafer (csevans8) · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 20
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 02:57:28
A nice, concise look at a day in the life of Faramir as Prince of
Ithilien. I would love to see it fleshed out even more! Love his
visitors and how they enjoyed the late afternoon.

Title: Faeries · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 304
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 03:25:58
Spoilers!
Children can be wonderful--and infuriating. And it's mean that the
Brandybuck lads are being today. Now it's time for Faramir to learn
perhaps some more of his family history, and Pippin's the Hobbit to
tell it....

So realistic to the way children behave, both the teasers and the
teased. Descriptions are vivid, and the tears are real.

Title: Relief · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General Drabbles · ID: 446
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 03:33:28
Spoilers!
Ah, a very sensual, sensuous glimpse of our favorite Captain General
of Gondor cooling off on a hot day. Most enticing images! Heh!

Title: Flickers · Author: Meril · Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 390
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 03:50:20
Spoilers!
Oh, Meril--this is one of the most perfect series of drabbles I've
seen. Images and flickering awareness of the relationship between
these two is--I can't say delightful, but what can I say? It is
RIGHT--and so appropriate.

I especially loved the encounter between Sam and Nerdanel, and the
recognition he has of the shared pain the two of them have known. I
would love how that visit came to pass, even though I personally think
it should have happened on Tol Eressea--but then this is perfect
nonetheless.

And I have yet another bunny hopping about the house now! Aack!

Title: Rivendell International Airport · Author: Primsong · Genres:
Humor: Elven Lands · ID: 345
Reviewer: Inkling · 2008-08-03 03:56:48
Spoilers!
This really made me grin! In this Middle-earth *everyone* flies, from
Wild Men to Orcs: ["Will passengers Ugluk and Shagrat please report to
the boarding desk. Mr. Luk and Mr. Rat, please report to the boarding
desk."]

The Fellowship's struggle to navigate the Rivendell Airport provides
some hilarious moments, as Bill is whisked off on the baggage conveyor
belt, Gimli is strip-searched, and Legolas bribes the security Elves
with lembas-on-a-stick.

There are sly canon references as well, as Gandalf forgets which
corridor to take and a security guard asks Frodo ["What do you have in
your pockets?"]

I'd love to see the security check at MOX!



Title: Temptation · Author: Princess Artemis · Genres: Poetry · ID: 416
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 05:45:17
Spoilers!
An unusual, deeply compelling poem voicing the essence of the
relationships the Ring developed over the millenia to each of its
bearers (or those it came close to tempt), from its creation to its
final demise.

The rhythm and repetition or slight variations of certain lines convey
a very unsettled and unsettling sensation. I love the fact that the
voice has a formality and this slight archaic touch in the unusual
word order.

The "personality" with which the Ring is vested here is complex and
fully-rounded, with flaws and strengths and obsession, not always
aware of them. Its arrogance and "feeling of superiority" comes
through clearly, and it seems that it has difficulties disguising its
scorn for its victims even while trying to tempt them.

I think my favourite part may be that about Curunir, because the Ring
uses the same tactics the Wizard employed, and there is a certain
schadenfreude in the fact that the Ring succeeded without even being
in direct contact with him. I also liked that the author used the
duality of Sméagol/Gollum.

Title: Rekindling · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 255
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 06:11:09
Feanor and the Trees rekindled--Feanor made perfect and consummated in
the rekindling. A great and blessed and terrible moment, all at the
same time. As for Nerdanel--

Slightly overpowering, and yet uplifting as well. Excellent
interpretation of the Master's thoughts on the subject.

Title: For the Want of ... · Author: Larner · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor · ID: 681
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-03 06:12:53
Spoilers!
An elegant vignette that chronicles various episodes in the lives of
Faramir and Pippin between the Battle of the Pelennor and Aragorn's
coronation. Larner has written conversations between all four of the
Fellowship hobbits and Faramir; and while I would enjoy seeing them
presented together, they each stand quite well on their own.


Larner writes the eager young hobbit and the somewhat older but
already seasoned veteran Captain-now-Steward of Gondor very well. She
shows that these are both the heirs of power in the King's name in
their lands; the hobbit is coming into his own and needs to prove
himself on the field of battle; while the Man has assumed his father's
mantle at least for the moment but is forced by injuries to stay
temporarily on the sidelines, after a long time seeing rather too much
of warfare and death. Faramir and Pippin's mutual respect and liking
shine through here.

The ending, with Aragorn's refreshingly friendly letter to Faramir, is
a nice capstone on the story.

Title: At Cormallen · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort ·
ID: 730
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-03 06:42:21
Yes, I think Frodo would rest more peacefully once his Merry was with him.

Such a beautiful look at the camp at Cormallen, as Merry is reunited
at last with his beloved cousins and Sam and sees them beginning to
recover from their privation and injuries. Particularly of interest to
those who love good Cormallen pieces.

Title: The Prisoner of Dol Guldur · Author: Soledad · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 102
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 08:44:22
Interesting premise, engagingly written. It's unfortunate that the
readers are repeatedly thrown out of the flow of the story by numerous
typos and some random head-hopping.

As ever, Soledad's uses extensive world-building to enrich her
stories. I'm not sure I'm convinced by everything, but I'm impressed
by the inventiveness and the depth of detail.

The process of slow and arduous recovery, whereby Enadar slowly pieces
together his memories and his life, is portrayed well.

Title: Elanor of Westmarch: Still There · Author: Baranduin · Genres:
Drama: Final Partings · ID: 183
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 09:07:05
The relationship between Elanor and her father was very well drawn,
there was always an underlying, subtle sense of the care they both
have for each other without the need to spell it out or speak much
about it.

The emotions, though subtle, were well-drawn, particularly the
wistfulness of Elanor.

The theme of cherishing mementos, inheriting them or passing them on
to others who would herish them, was woven resonantly throughout the
story.

Title: The Rescue of Celebrian · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 382
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-08-03 09:20:21
Spoilers!
With this story, Neume plunges into the dominion of the Elves and
takes on the heart-breaking moment in the life of Elrond's family –
the abduction and rescue of Celebrian. And this is a very intriguing
start to what I hope is going to be a multi-chapter story.

As usual, Neme approaches her characters with a knack for developing
them so that they become fully rounded people – and as always with
Neume's writing, I have an impression that I have known those people's
for years. I especially like the portrayals of Elladan and Elrohir
here: they are true lords, descendants of a noble house and fierce
warriors. Their characterizations come through the action – they set
out to rescue their mother and then have to watch her madness and
ponder how to hasten her recovery.

The writing style is smooth and engaging – Neume grips the reader with
the very first lines of each chapter, and leaves them in need for more
of the story.

Great work!

Title: The Tower Hills · Author: DrummerWench · Genres: Drama: Final
Partings · ID: 608
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 09:22:14
The language is wonderfully "Tolkien-ish", it really feels as if this
is an expansion of the chapter that just got left out of the book.

The descriptions are evocative, and I thought it particularly
well-done how the scene within Elostirion is infused with the slight
ambiguity, the unease Sam feels about the Tower.

I liked the determination of Sam in overcoming his fears with a view
to the future.

Title: In The Midst Of Summer · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 270
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 12:05:15
Oh, this is a lovely story. The description of the garden and the
various flowers painted a colourful picture in my mind and made me
long to stroll through and sniff here and there. It somehow mixed in
my mind with Sam's memories of how Rosie ["has always been the center
of the smial, the warmth and the hearth fire"], how ["the kitchen was
always filled with her singing voice, her infectious laughter, with
the clatter of pots and pans and the delicious smell of the food she
used to cook"], until I thought the garden, too, was a reflection of
her, despite Sam regarding it usually as his own domain.

I do wonder if Sam deludes himself when he things his going would be
easier for his family than bearing (and eventually overcoming) their
grief together.

Title: At Cormallen · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort ·
ID: 730
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 12:05:42
Merry's thoughts and feelings are conveyed vividly; the readers see
the bustling camp through his eyes, and his anxiety over his friends.

The characterisations are spot-on, and I liked the the silently
supporting presence of Legolas, and Aragorn's steady care as a healer.
It was wise of him to recognise that Merry still needed as much
healing as the other three.

I found Merry's deductions about how Frodo lost his finger intriguing
and wonder what he thought when he found out the truth.

The story is very descriptive, with a depth of detail that paints a
very clear picture.

Title: The King's Time · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama: Final
Partings · ID: 333
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 12:07:04
Spoilers!
I love how the concept of "time" was woven and emphasised throughout
the story, from the title onwards, to various devices people have
invented to measure time, to Aragorn's reflections on time and
timelessness.

Another, related theme, is also conveyed here, that of closure: ["He
thoughtfully pinched out the candles, turned down the oil lamp, and
quitted the room at last, closing the door one final time."] There is
a calmness and thoughtfulness about it that I found very soothing and
appealing.

The story shows the variety and culturual richness of the many
different people of Middle-earth Aragorn has touched in one way or
another throughout his whole life.

Aragorn's serenity with his life heretofore, as well as his decision
to lay it down now and partake of the Gift of Men in faith and, well
"estel", is very moving. It is a contented reflection back on his
life, the optimism that he leaves everything ordered and in the best
of hands, and the readiness for what lies beyond.

Title: Apart · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 551
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 12:07:23
Spoilers!
Engaging and brisk. I don't know if I'm making much sense, but somehow
I was reminded of a funnel into which are poured two liquids (which
unite but still don't mingle). The paralleling of Legolas' and Gimli's
thoughts, then the reunion and reconciliation, but with the
acknowledgement - now less acrimonious - of their still remaining
differences.

Title: No Mercy · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General Drabbles ·
ID: 443
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-03 13:37:00
Spoilers!
The quick pacing of the drabble works excellently to depict the
relentless, unstoppable, literally breath-taking advance of the fire.
A stark, exciting portrayal of the "Battle of Sudden Flame".

The true nature of the enemy is only slowly revealed, and named only
with the very last word.

This is a neat writing conceit, but it also serves to point out that
something like this is terrifying and annihilating even without having
been unleashed by a dark force (as Tanaqui alludes to in her author's
notes). At the same time, one could read it like there it is infused
with some evil intent the way the story is framed: the good forces are
- of course - seen to be destroyed, whereas the flames serve as a
vanguard, a distraction and a cover for Morgoth's forces.

Title: Terra Incognita · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor: Drabbles · ID: 723
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-08-03 14:05:19
I was charmed by this brief glimpse into a relatively young life that
was indelibly shaped by war. It took me a few moments to realise where
I was in the tale, something that in itself made me smile, as did the
final part of the last line. A lovely little imagining of a very
possible incident.

Title: Now the Green Blade Riseth · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 37
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-08-03 14:26:58
The use of accent to create an auditory image here is exemplary. The
Gaffer lives and breathes in this short piece and the reader can so
easily imagine him, trousers tied up with bailing string, shapeless
felt hat securely clamped to his head as he stands and nods sagely,
dispensing words of advice - be they wanted or not - to his returned
son, a son he is secretly so proud of even if he scarcely says so.
They might say it takes a gardner to know the heart of another
gardner, annmarwalk certainly does.

Title: The Wedding Gift · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 40
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-08-03 14:42:59
As deftly and delicately crafted as the gift itself, this ficlet
embodies concepts of dwarven culture so simply and naturally that it
may only be on a second or third reading that the viewer will think,
'yes, that would be so, that is just as it would be done'. The images
themselves are constructed with beautifully constrained language, not
florid and heavy but using exactly the right phrase [delicate of
design yet strong as bird's-bones] to convey a familiar idea - a groom
carefully choosing a wedding gift for his bride to be - but also the
subtle strangeness of the dwarven race in how that gift is delivered
and accepted.

Title: A Large Bold Hand · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 10
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-08-03 14:48:03
I love it when I come across an idea that has never occured to me
before, or when some new, shiny facet of Tolkien's writing is
unexpectedly brought into focus. This short piece of writing does the
job beautifully; it shows a meeting I had not considered and given
rhyme and reason to a statement of Tolkien's I had passed over without
considering. Bravo!

Title: This crown of stars · Author: Fawsley · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 586
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-08-03 15:05:20
It might be regarded as uncharacteristic for Aragorn to have moments
of doubt, and perhaps that is true of Tolkien's Aragorn, the consumate
hero. Yet oh how recognisable to the present day reader is Fawsley's
Aragorn, one who might be more akin to Peter Jackson's interpretation
of 'the hero', but an Aragorn that we can all connect with. Someone
who has doubts and misgivings in the small wee hours of a long dark
night, yet somebody who can also get up and keep going despite his
momentary loss of hope and self-belief. In humanising our hero,
Fawsley brings him closer to us, perhaps a little something we might
all be grateful for.

Title: Charge! · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles ·
ID: 444
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-08-03 15:12:20
I wasn't going to leave a review initially because the piece seemed a
simple straightforward description, competant but unremarkable. Then I
glanced at the existing reviews and realised my mistake... Of course!
And for that reason I'm trying to give you some very well-earned
points without tipping off the next reader so they can have the
delight of discovering for themselves the cleverness of your writing.
Well done you!

Title: The Best Sword Ever · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age ·
ID: 290
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-03 15:22:22
Spoilers!
A well-written story that spans the years, alternating two points of
view-Boromir's and Aragorn's (Thorongil's). The hero-worshipping
two-year-old who adored Captain Thorongil transmutes over the years
into the grown man who will regard him with mistrust. The way that
Linaewen constructs the story, and the common bond of Narsil between
the two men, almost makes me wonder why Boromir did not recognize
Aragorn as Thorongil when they met in Rivendell in canon.

Title: Trajectory · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 153
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-03 15:25:19
Spoilers!
A well-crafted drabble, referring to all the senses in its course.
Half personal nightmare (perhaps Aragorn has his own dreams of
Numenor?), half foreshadowing. Like Aragorn, the reader is relieved
when he awakes.

Title: Nothing Less · Author: Archet · Races: Men: General Drabbles ·
ID: 606
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-03 15:27:40
A delightful 100-word niblet of Aragorn/Boromir. An acknowledgement
that possessing the body isn't always enough, and that you can desire
something more encompassing.

Title: A Midsummer Day's Dream · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 422
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-08-03 15:28:07
Spoilers!
Such a sweet and melancholy moment for Faramir, and yet one that is
bouyed up with hope and anticipation for what may come. The style
flows effortlessly and the language is lyrical without being too
overly florid or sentimental while constructing this small vignette in
the life of Faramir, Prince of Ithilien.

Title: Regarding Ents · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 525
Reviewer: Elanor · 2008-08-03 15:31:41
A short scene that evokes the narratives of "Flotsam and Jetsam":
Merry and Pippin's voices combine to paint a portrait of ["talking
trees"] for a skeptical Sam and marveling Frodo as the four hobbits
catch up on the Field of Cormallen.

The strength of this piece is in the dialogue, which is crisp, clear
and efficient, and serves well the author's intent: to catch a glimpse
of the quiet talk that followed the joyous reunion of old friends who
had so much to explain that was unexplainable. This is an ordinary
moment in extraordinary lives.

Title: House of Ransom · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles ·
ID: 657
Reviewer: kitt_otter · 2008-08-03 17:49:02
You did very well at getting into Beleg's head, expressing his motives
in few words, how he questions himself and Turin. It makes me want to
reread those bits about him and Turin.

Title: Kin-Strife · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 92
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-08-03 18:42:49
Andrahar is one of my favorite original characters in the Tolkien
fandom, so I really like this glimpse into his beginnings with the
Swan Knights. I liked the author's original developments, like the
history of Andrahar's sword, and it was a fun read all around.
Consider this my plug, too, to WRITE MORE, ISA! Because a story like
this shouldn't remain untold.

Title: Birthday Double Drabble · Author: PipMer · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 526
Reviewer: Elanor · 2008-08-03 20:35:43
The life-long friendship of Merry and Pippin is encapsulated in a
double-drabble that neatly telescopes birth and death: the eager
anticipation of the first, as Pippin's birth enchants a small Merry,
adrift in life with too many lass cousins; and bitter anticipation of
the second, as Pippin lies grievously injured after the battle at the
Black Gate and Merry seeks to accept his death before the fact in a
despairing attempt to survive the shattering loss.

The author has an affinity for these two "least of my brothers", whose
innocence and emotional learning curves provide her a great deal of
material for such touching gap-fillers. She has a gentle way of
rounding out their experiences, and the best tools possible: a good
eye for closure and absolute confidence in the integrity of her subjects.

Title: Galdor: An Elf By Any Other Name.... · Author: Marta · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 475
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-04 03:02:06
Marta presents some fascinating speculations, and as much as is known
in canon, about Galdor, a mysterious Elf who plays a minor role in the
Council of Elrond. Elf-fans and diehard fans of Middle-earth in all
Ages should enjoy this well-written essay.

Title: A Woman in Few Words: The Character of Nerdanel and Her
Treatment in Canon and Fandom · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 107
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-04 03:16:42
An excellent character study of Nerdanel, from her physical appearance
to her influence on Feanor, and her popularity in fanfiction. The
essay makes me appreciate Nerdanel, a character I always liked, even
more as a wise and under-appreciated elf.

Title: My Oaths I Will Keep · Author: Encaitariel · Races: Elves:
House of Finwe · ID: 298
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-04 03:59:18
Spoilers!
Encaitariel writes some wonderful stories about Gildor Inglorion,
creating an fascinating back story for the character. Here, Gildor
meets Beren as the fated outlaw comes to plead for Finrod's help.

Excellent characterisation of proud, lonely and determined Beren; and
of Finrod, whose nobility shines here. The bond between Finrod and
Gildor is well-written. Encaitariel's use of Quenya is outstanding.

A thoughtful variation on canon themes.

Title: Bibliophile · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-04 04:41:24
Spoilers!
A rare depiction of Eowyn as a literate lady. Odds are good that she
was, for even if Rohan relied more on the oral tradition than the
written one, its aristocrats needed to be lettered. Fortunately, she
has her priorities in order and Faramir can woo her away from her
book! A sweet look at a gentle, loving moment between husband and wife.

Title: Out of the Blue · Author: Jael · Races: Elves · ID: 205
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-04 08:29:43
Spoilers!
Okay, I finally broke down and read this, and am delighted with it.
Jane has entered a world of enchantment hidden outside Chicago. A
child with what she believes are deformed ears is learning archery
with real arrows, and it appears all are a bit mad, perhaps. But there
is love her--a good deal of love, even if they speak of towers having
fallen down--two of them! But are they terrorists of some kind or other?

The modern plays on names are delightful, and the misunderstandings
are even moreso. As for her search for the reclusive Aaron....

Wonderful read.

Title: The Water's Song · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 707
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-04 08:50:37
Spoilers!
From a young age Legolas Thranduilion has heard a song in the water,
an echo of the song he will hear centuries later when he comes to
Pelargir.

A wonderful tale of loving and letting go when the time is right. One
Elven lord in grief left his daughter behind to seek the renewed love
of his wife once more; another lingered in Endore, allowing his son to
go ahead of him. Which would grieve the more in the end, I wonder?

Gently told, with pathos and humor interspersed, and with excellent
characterizations of Elf and Dwarf.

Title: Midwinter Thoughts · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Noldor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 570
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-04 09:00:05
What to do with the desire that fills his heart? That is the question
he seeks to answer as he considers his brothers and the changes
wrought in them as they build their lives anew within Endore and the
needs of their people.

The images are alluring, and the thoughts charmingly phrased.

Title: A Perfect Impression · Author: weepingnaiad · Times: Second and
Early Third Age · ID: 494
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-04 09:04:21
Spoilers!
Another lyrical Elven nativity story for the son of Thranduil. Tender
moments between father and mother, and delighted counting of fingers
and toes. Very nicely done.

Title: The Revenge of Curufin's Horse · Author: Moreth · Genres: Humor
· ID: 139
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-04 09:10:24
Spoilers!
Apparently taking the horse of a Noldor prince wasn't the wisest thing
Beren ever did, for she bore tales on him to her true masters. And she
managed to bring the relief of laughter to those who'd been feeling
disgruntled and wary after their last encounter with the Man....

Charming and well paced.

Title: Another Country · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 438
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-08-04 14:36:34
Spoilers!
A thoughtful and introspective Boromir is depicted here, waiting in
the Halls of Mandos. He uses the wait to good purpose and begins to
understand that deeds, even his own, are part of a larger picture. He
is even able to reach out to another, when that person arrives...I
would like to see this premise fleshed out into a longer story, it is
intriguing.

Title: Creation Myths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 300
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-08-04 15:28:15
Spoilers!
This answers the prompt to perfection. The language is exquisite and
poetic, just right to describe what is the subject matter in the
drabble, ["jewel-bright"] and sparkling.

The differing attitudes of the two creators are conveyed very poignantly:

Ilúvatar is generous with his creations, both in tolerating their
imperfections, and in his willingness to give them to others for
further enjoyment and use. He is wise to see that it's the
imperfections which enrich the beauty, and that further use and change
will let creation live.

Wheras the beauty Fëanor creates is static and distant. In his greed
and possessiveness, he reminds me of those people who buy the most
marvellous paintings, only to hoard them behind in dark vaults.

I can almost see them - Ilúvatar proudly smiling, with open hands,
whereas Fëanor hunches over his creations, peering about suspiciously.

The drabble ties together some of the philosophical underpinnings of
Tolkien's world: the importance of change, and free will for the
furtherance of good.

Title: Comes the moment to decide · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times:
Late Third Age: Gondor · ID: 418
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-08-04 15:45:05
Spoilers!
I like the way this story evolved, from Denethor demanding to know if
Faramir thought himself the Ruling Steward, to Faramir's declaration
at the end that he was the 27th Ruling Steward of Gondor. Great
symmetry there. I also appreciated the role his uncle played in your fic.

Title: When Trouble Came · Author: Lily · Races: Hobbits: Incomplete ·
ID: 109
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-08-04 16:45:15
This story is a remarkable achievement. It is hard, given the strength
of the Professor's own words, to see past them some times, but this
author does a terrific, insightful job. This story is both tender and
tough - full of tension and action, but only so much as give the depth
of feeling and personal interractions context. Extraordinary.

Title: A Cat in King Elessar's Court · Author: agape4gondor · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 66
Reviewer: Oshun · 2008-08-04 19:00:20


A cat story! Oh, really. I was not immediately drawn to read this (not
an animal-narrator story person myself or a cat person either, or even
a big Gondor reader, often finding a lot of repetition without a new
perspective), but I have enjoyed your work in the past, so I had to
give this story a try. It surely would have been my great loss if I
had not read it. I truly enjoyed the perspective. I was absolutely
delighted with your ability to combine catlike behavior and animal
instinct with the strange wisdom and magic of the cat you created
here. I love her loyalty to Denethor yet her ability to question his
judgment and really liked the parts where she first begins to feel an
affinity for Pippin (the food stuff cracked me up, but, in fact, is
very far from silly, but goes back again to the basic animal instinct
of this strange hybrid creature). Also, liked the subtle reminder that
Gandalf is so much more than just the wise old wizard, but the Maia of
Olórin, which is shown in his ability to so easily discern the
consciousness of the cat and communicate with her. Of course, I
utterly adored it when the cat speaks to Faramir and how quickly
Faramir accepts and understands. Great tale as you tell it. You
managed to take familiar canon text and give tell it from a unique
perspective. Nice work and a real surprise and a treat!

Title: A Dainty Dish · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Friendship · ID: 722
Reviewer: balrog · 2008-08-04 21:34:18
I LOVE MUSHROOMS! I use them everytime I can. This was delicous.

Title: Another Country · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 438
Reviewer: balrog · 2008-08-04 21:40:26
Blood is thicker than water. Nice that Boromir forgave his father.
Nicely done.

Title: Taking Roots · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 367
Reviewer: balrog · 2008-08-04 21:42:41
If you want a kingdon then you have to built it yourself. Great work.

Title: Things as they were in all the days of my life · Author:
Tanaqui · Races: Men: Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 393
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-08-04 21:54:26
Spoilers!
I greatly enjoyed the first six of these, each is a great example of a
drabble, showing a quick but lasting vision of a finite moment.
However, I was sorry when Hurin left the scene. I think his
perspective on Denethor's changes would have been really interesting
and potentially poignant.

Title: One Summer Day · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 535
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-08-05 00:03:23
This suite of fics was lovely. Each one is a pefect little vignette,
but then they flow so easily and yet unexpectedly from one another,
and then come full circle neatly and seemingly without effort. And,
being a Marylander, I have a soft spot for steamed crabs!

Title: Sun · Author: Claudia · Races: Cross-Cultural: Frodo and
Faramir · ID: 223
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-05 00:08:33
Spoilers!
It's amazing to me how so much hope can be packed into such a small
space. There are a wealth of emotions gathered together in this story,
and they all feel true and earned. First we find Frodo, perched
precariously on stone, which is so appropriate given the crossroads he
will face over the next few years as a Ring-bearer who doesn't really
belong in Middle-earth anymore. Then there's Faramir, who has eyes
only for the desolation and whose wounds are still near enough that
remembrance is painful. All of this is portrayed in vivid, vibrant
detail with only a few well-chosen words. But the real clencher is
Frodo's response, acknowledging that even though Minas Tirith might
never be the same again, at least [it will be]. Fantastic line that
wraps up all the hope and all the change and all the sorrow that
pervades the whole of Tolkien's work. The closing lines where Faramir
and Frodo can both laugh and smile in the sunlight strikes the perfect
tone on which to the end such a hopeful little story. Brilliant vignette!

Title: Put Aside Your Doubt · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Frodo and Faramir · ID: 187
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-05 00:09:10
Spoilers!
I'm a big fan of Faramir so it's always a treat to see him with Frodo
in these stories (who serves as a great foil), but my favorite
character in this particular instance was actually Boromir. I salute
any author who can portray both sides of the man in the same story and
in such a small stretch of time. We saw Boromir as he truly was in the
beginning: a brave captain of Gondor who wasn't too proud to make
friends of legends and myths. And through Frodo's dream, we saw how
the Ring had taken this good, honorable man and twisted him
practically beyond recognition. It made for a wonderfully complex
character, and although I very much enjoyed the rest of the story,
Boromir's appearance was what impacted me the most. Excellent
characterization work!

Title: Concerning Walls · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Frodo and Faramir · ID: 112
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-05 00:10:01
Spoilers!
This story feels very quiet to me. It's kind of like the hushed calm
after a storm, which is very appropriate given its timing. I love the
things that Frodo and Faramir found to talk about. The conversation
ranges all over, covering the construction of hobbit holes to the
confrontation between the Nazgul and Faramir and Boromir at Osgiliath.
The dialog never stays on one topic for very long but rather moves
quickly and fluidly, giving this piece a lighter feel that is
perfectly balanced by the end memories of the Black Riders, which is
the one thing that both Faramir and Frodo can remember together.
That's a sobering thought, actually, and though the piece is
heartwarming, realizations like that are what give it a touch of the
sadness and longing that pervades most of Tolkien's writings. Finally,
I have to compliment Larner on the style of this piece, which is very
reminiscent of Tolkien himself from both the Faramir's standpoint and
Frodo's. All in all, excellent story!

Title: Of First Impressions and Old Friends · Author: Dreamflower ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Frodo and Faramir · ID: 146
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-05 00:10:36
Spoilers!
I love this convergence of shared memories! It's great to see the same
situation from different angles as Faramir remembers and as Frodo
remembers Boromir remembering. It's a nice bit of light-heartedness in
the midst of the Ithilien tension, but the best part was seeing
Gandalf again, especially since both Faramir and Frodo thought him
dead at the time.

Title: Many Branches · Author: Baranduin · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Frodo and Faramir · ID: 420
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-08-05 00:11:16
Spoilers!
This is just what I might expect from a conversation between Faramir
and Frodo, especially after Pippin and Merry have had a chance to
educate the Steward regarding family history! Very light-hearted,
though it does touch on darker matters, and I can feel the summer of
Minas Tirith as Frodo and Faramir both stretch out against the wall.
Great descriptions!

Title: The World Is Changing · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Late Third
Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 719
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-05 04:08:28
Spoilers!
Oh, indeed, the world has changed, and nothing is as it was. Love this
look at the twin sons of Elrond and Celebrian looking out at the
entrance to the vale of Rivendell and knowing their brother will not
come home there any more. Sad and poignant, and a sign their mission
has been accomplished--for the moment at least.

Title: Generations · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn
· ID: 508
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2008-08-05 04:16:06
This story popped up as "why not review now?" and it sounded quite
interesting, so I clicked. So glad I did! The story glitters with
Bodkin's easy way with dialogue, capturing the characters through
speech and gesture. Eldarion and Aragorn, like fathers and sons
everywhere, are having some trouble understanding each other.

I particularly liked the image of the King of Gondor sprawled in his
chair, smoking a pipe, and looking much more at home than he did on
his throne. Very Aragorn-like!

Title: Tower of the Moon · Author: Nath · Times: Multi-Age · ID: 577
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-05 04:17:05
In four emotion-laden vignettes we see the construction, beauty,
corruption, and destruction of Isildur's own city, and the thoughts of
the two kings who ruled its beginning and ending. Descriptions are
necessarily brief yet still powerful; the images enduring. And indeed
what will come of the legacy left by this last King of the Eldar days?

Lovely, evocative tale.

Title: Before You Go · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Minas Tirith
· ID: 506
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-05 04:31:22
Spoilers!
An emotional encounter between Denethor and Boromir, told from the
father's point of view, ere Boromir begins the quest for Imladris,
seeking the truth behind the dream he's shared with his younger
brother. This is not movie-Denethor, but one who foresees he will lose
this son he so loves to what may prove a vain search. A tale as
shadowed as the board that hosts it, yet still with a ray of hope
lighting it.

Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-08-05 04:42:38
This ficlet is heartbreaking. Yavanna is probably my favorite Vala.
Marta beautifully illustrates her grief after the destruction of the
Two Trees and her conundrum? Should she obey her persistent urge to
create more beauty now that her greatest creations are gone. Or should
she stay by the waters in grief, knowing that the only "speaking
people" bidden to her are the slow tree-herders, whom she knows will
someday die of ennui? So sad.


Title: Dark Dreams · Author: Avon · Races: Men: Steward's Family · ID: 282
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-08-05 04:43:30
"Dark Dreams" centers upon youthful Faramir's very first drowning of
Numenor nightmare. This well known dream sequence serves author Avon
as a jumping off place to explore the affect of dreams to Imrahil and
his Southern Dunedain/Elven family. The result is an atmospheric
exploration of childhood and myth, from the viewpoint of the Prince of
Dol Amroth, one of my personal favorite Tolkien characters.

Title: Collecting Hearts I, II, III & VI · Author: Elen Kortirion ·
Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 516
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-05 05:45:41
Spoilers!
Elen Kortirion writes four drabbles on the theme of hearts, real and
in cards, used by the House of Elrond. Excellent writing here; I found
that the second, Celebrian's desperation and despair, tore at my own
heart the most, but they are all a must-read for drabblers and
connoisseurs of good Elf-fanfiction alike.

Title: A Sea Visit · Author: Elen Kortirion · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 96
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-05 05:54:01
Spoilers!
A lovely drabble, whimsical and slightly sexy (Aragorn wading in the
ocean, apparently not wearing much); I loved the surprise at the end.
I don't think I've ever seen an Aragorn piece quite like this, and
it's a great little read. Nice to see that some Elves have a sense of
humor, along with their mysterious friend.

Title: The Consuming Darkness · Author: Isil Elensar · Genres: Drama ·
ID: 467
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-05 06:03:31
Spoilers!
Sad and poignant account of the last hours of the last Queen of
Numenor - Isil Elensar knows how to wring the heartstrings of the reader.

Title: Painting a Golden Light · Author: chaotic_binky · Genres:
Drama: Featuring the Noldor · ID: 364
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-05 06:08:53
Spoilers!
First off--I don't like slash particularly and usually just skip such
works. I didn't bother looking at the intro to this one, so just read
it, and found myself intrigued in spite of the relationship between
Mr. Fin and Captain Erestor. The idea that Sauron was behind the shell
shock Erestor was suffering and that Glorfindel's Light could best it
was wonderful, and loved the identity of Dorothy Nerwen--and the
choice of name.

Interesting juxtaposition of ME and our history. And love how Tolkien
was inspired, and the last letter begun. That was so delightfully funny.

Title: Choosing · Author: docmon · Genres: Drama · ID: 473
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-05 06:14:48
Spoilers!
Three thoughtful vignettes; from the viewpoints of the lords of the
Lonely Mountain, Mirkwood, and Gondor, on who to send to the Council
of Elrond to represent their various lands. Well-written and poignant;
especially since we know that two of these lords and one of their
envoys will not survive the War of the Ring.

Title: Denial · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of Finwe · ID: 80
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-08-05 06:15:20
Interesting to see this family so early in their history, before the
madness took their father.

Title: For Our Friends · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Drama · ID: 654
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-05 06:21:49
Spoilers!
A fine and realistic interpretation of Merry's thoughts in the
movieverse moments before the Rohirrim's great charge across the
Pelennor. Excellent progression of Merry's state of mind here, from
physical weariness to fear to rip-roaring death-seeking martial
fervor. We can see how the hobbit untrained to arms is transformed,
while keeping the love he has for his friends.

Title: The Ring That Sauron Forged · Author: Larner · Genres: Poetry:
Hobbits · ID: 645
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-08-05 08:43:32
Spoilers!
A delightful verse replay of the history of the One Ring. Larner rolls
it along briskly, never losing the rhythym, gathering steam, and
words, even as she takes the Ring through the years. I love the
ingenious rhymes of cave/brave/grave!

Title: The Nightingale · Author: Maeve Riannon · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 404
Reviewer: hrymfaxe · 2008-08-05 08:49:26
Maeve tells an interesting story of how difficult it can be to be
different, and how wast the gulfs can be between our expectations and
the reality of things.

I love this image of Melian even if it makes me very sad for her. The
love she feels for Thingol must be strong indeed for her to have given
such a sacrifice as she has.

Beautiful story with a very interesting theory on Maian nature.