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Title: Trinity · Author: pandemonium_213 · Times: Modern Times · ID: 51
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-01 07:20:49
Spoilers!
Gold Ring, sparkling jewels of light, the Gadget atop its tower in the
New Mexico desert--and their creators, all together about a table,
talking about taking responsibility and the punishment given to those
who have created things of such power. Quite a remarkable scenario,
and superbly narrated. One of the most fascinating mixtures of Arda
and real world I've read yet.

Indeed, well worth the read.

Title: Sing My Worth Immortal · Author: Perelleth · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 168
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-01 07:42:29
When a dwarf envoy tries to explain the history of brewing to
Galadriel, her daughter and her granddaughter, he learns a thing or
two--or perhaps three--in return. For elves had been awake and in the
world before men or dwarves, and know a thing or two about beer and
its brewing as well--more than dwarves do, certainly!

The humor is delightful and Glorfindel's song one to enjoy fully.

Title: Long Memories · Author: Bodkin · Times: Second and Early Third
Age · ID: 310
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-01 08:55:33
Spoilers!
Bodkin's stories of life for those who came to Aman from the Mortal
Lands after the end of the War of the Ring are very satisfying. In
them we watch Elrond and Elladan and Legolas and their families find
healing, a place and purpose, and in the end love and delight and the
joy of children. But for Legolas the love of his life also brought
into it her father, and Taryatur does not appear to be willing to ever
embrace his daughter's new husband. Why not is the question of the day.

Here we find out the truth of the matter, how Oropher and Taryatur,
after the end of the War of Wrath, as they awaited the departure of
those brought to Ennor from Aman back to their own lands once more,
came to see in one another the unutterable arrogance each was certain
was the primary feature of the other people. In seeking to hide from
the memories of unbearable horror and innumerable deaths, each focused
his own dreads on the other, turning the internal misery of each into
loathing of the other individual. Hatred can be preferable to
prolonged memories of terror and grief, after all.

A marvelous examination of the two characters and how their mutual
antipathy came to be visited on an unsuspecting Legolas.

There is perhaps less humorous wit in this story than many of her
others, but the characters are beautifully drawn and the psychology
perfectly conveyed; and the insights drawn are spot on and thought
provoking.

I'm sorry I missed reading this when it was originally posted; but
that made it even more of a delight to read now. Yes, a worthy, worthy
read.

Title: The Five Rules of Cooking · Author: GamgeeFest · Races:
Hobbits: Childhood · ID: 523
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-01 10:06:33
A sweet tale in which we see young Merry and little Pippin entering a
children's cooking contest at the Free Fair, a contest in which Pippin
gets his first instructions in how to cook. Competative Brandybucks
and exuberant Tooks, and a slightly concerned older Baggins to keep an
eye on things.

The cooking is fun, and the recipe excellent. Read and enjoy.

Title: The Prisoner of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 313
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-01 10:19:09
Spoilers!
A sad might-have-been as Denethor does all he can to avoid facing the
return of the former rival who has indeed proved to be the King
Returned. He would not allow the one he'd known as Thorongil to enter
the city or lay hands on his son; he had no means of calming the
sister to the new King of Rohan or interest in restraining her when
she sought to follow the Army of the West eastward to the Black Gate.
And now he has been removed from the Steward's Seat by his own Council.

The title is aptly given, considering the grim determination to ignore
what cannot be ignored going on outside the walls of the house in
which he now dwells. The story, written for Dwimordene's birthday, was
a marvelous response to the challenge to write a story in which time
plays a distinct part. Time for renewal, but time in which Denethor
slips ignominously from public view. Robbed by his own jealousy of the
last of his joys, he now knows too much time for bitterness.

Title: A Moment Away · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 474
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-01 10:26:38
She's been greeted by her grandmother and is telling her the tale, but
is called back and must go. In ways disappointing, but in
others--well, there's more to life, she'll find, than just killing the
worst of enemies.

A drabble to ponder.

Title: A Day in Time · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Multi-Age · ID: 230
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2008-09-01 15:35:02
Spoilers!
I really enjoyed this lovely tale about Merry finding himself sharing
in various situations that his grandparents experienced. The one of
him being pregnant it reminded me of a favourite television show from
years back. Merry is my favourite character only behind Pippin, so I
thoroughly enjoyed the bit of Merry hurt/comfort, too. This
wonderfully talented author, in my opinion, has a remarkable gift for
plots and twists, and this one was no exception. Thoroughly enjoyed
the story!

Title: Dirty Jobs · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 232
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2008-09-01 15:38:15
I absolutely enjoyed everything about this story. It's true; no one
likes to dig their hands in muck -- and leave it to Pippin to be so
resourceful as to run off with that idea. And with a heart of gold,
too, as his reasons for doing so are quite unselfish. I, too, like to
imagine that Pippin grew up with a good ethic, and a lovely family to
teach him that. Very well written; I got lost in the characters as the
story unfolded. Well done!

Title: Where Shadows Lay No More · Author: Cathleen · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 358
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2008-09-01 15:59:17
Spoilers!
A beautiful story that I am still in awe of. I am in awe of this
wonderful, talented author, who has come into her own, so to speak.
It's difficult to describe this wonderful tale without giving away
some tidbits, but I shall keep them to few.

One always comes to wonder if a loved one, who has passed on, sees the
good we've accomplished or the goals we've achieved. Here, in this
tale, Cathleen endeavours to portray our beloved twosome, Merry and
Pippin, experiencing that very sensation with a beloved comrade who
has fallen. This fallen comrade is able to convey his utmost approval
to his young friends in a very unmistakenable fashion, which makes
this story all the more endearing. This entire story had me enraptured
from the first paragraph. Excellent writing, excellent storytelling!

Title: Birthday Double Drabble · Author: PipMer · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 526
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2008-09-01 16:07:11
I had never read a Double-drabble before, but this one was just
beautiful! Well characterized, brilliantly written. I was taken by the
stark differences of Merry and Pippin's portrayal in each drabble.
Very lovely story!

Title: Regarding Ents · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 525
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2008-09-01 16:15:06
I got a nice laugh out of this lovely tale! I like how the author has
Pippin trailing off when he attempts to describe Treebeard's eyes.
Very true to the Professor. I also was amused by Sam's reactions to
talking trees -- very Samlike! Very well done!

Title: Deliverance · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 285
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-09-01 16:23:22
"Deliverance" is one of those drabbles that you want to go on and on.
Imhiriel captures the immediacy of her original character's situation,
his utter despair, and a glimmer of hope. The gap in Tolkien verse
that "Deliverance" covers is one I've seldom seen in fan fiction--the
search for Numenor by Third Age sailors. By itself, "Deliverance" is a
perfect drabble, capturing the moment and leaving you wanting more.
Now I'd love to read more on sunken Numenor from Imhiriel.

Title: A Warm Sun Shining · Author: shirebound · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 727
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2008-09-01 16:36:33
I just loved Frodo's remark about the food! I thoroughly enjoyed
reading this portrayal of Sam and Frodo waking up and finding they are
alive after all. Sam is always so attentive to Frodo's needs, and here
was no exception. I simply adored this lovely story.

Title: A Meeting in the Tower Hills · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 374
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-09-01 17:03:56
Spoilers!
This drabble brings to life a really obscure bit in Second Age history
in a compelling manner. Tolkien's late, unfinished story "Aldarion and
Erendis," published in Unfinished Tales, left tons of gaps that I wish
the professor would have filled. "Meeting in the Tower Hills" tackles
one of the gaps, the first meeting of sailors from Numenor and men of
Middle Earth after the destruction of Beleriand. The two groups seem
to have little in common, until they discover one uniting factor,
their shared folk tales.

Imhiriel's text is so succinct that it covers many topics and opens up
a range of emotions in so few words.

Title: Eight Weeks · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 273
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-01 20:02:28
Very entertaining, and nicely carried through.

Title: Star of Hope · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times: Mid Third Age:
Eriador · ID: 34
Reviewer: elea24 · 2008-09-01 21:45:23
I found this story to be beautiful and tender. It was so nice to read
about a youthful Gilraen -one not yet wearied by grief and heartbreak.
I think it can be sometimes so tempting to focus on the grief but this
story looked instead at the love that Arathorn and Gilraen had and the
hope that they shared and brought into the world.
It was also, in my opinion, very subtly done. The relationship itself
was soft and tender, full of mutual respect and, in that way, very
beautiful. I also liked the way Gilraen's grief was handled. It was
subtle, even underplayed, but that actually made it all the more
emotional for me. I actually felt Gilraen's loss a lot more keenly
then I ever have, without it really being a key focus in this piece.
Perhaps, it was exactly because it was the joy in her marriage that
was the focus that made the loss of it seem all the more heartbreaking.
Nevertheless, despite the sadness I felt for Gilraen in this story, I
ended with a smile on my face at the obvious joy and comfort that her
son brought her.
I truly hope that was the case.

Title: The Last Summer · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits · ID: 143
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-09-01 22:04:36
Old couples in love are such a sweet sight. Throw in one charming Took
lad and you have the makings of a lovely story. The hints of saddness
are there, but the love shines through it all.

I find the basis in reality that this story has makes all the sweeter
and all the sadder. A hug for you, Golden.

Title: Regarding Ents · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 525
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-09-01 22:17:49
Merry and Pippin must have had their work cut out for them when it
came to describing the ents to everyone who hadn't seen them first-hand.

Sam, of course, would be the most sceptical person. Something makes me
think he never did believe Merry and Pippin till he saw the ents for
himself.

PipMer does a great job captuing the voices of the hobbits in this story.

Title: Fulfilling Oaths · Author: Nieriel Raina · Times: Multi-Age ·
ID: 332
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-02 00:12:20
Full circle--the token of a vow made has finally come home, as the vow
was fulfilled and the one who destroyed the one who'd made the oath is
now himself destroyed.

A most marvelous tale, following the fate of a token until at last it
comes home again, and the one who once thought himself a failure knows
that through his example others have triumphed.

Title: Upon the Pebbled Shore · Author: aranelgoldenflower · Genres:
Drama: Final Partings · ID: 171
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-02 00:18:49
A rather eerie tale, and with a definite poetic sound to it with its
repetition of the title phrase thoughout, as two who'd never thought
to be parted do, now unto the remaking of Arda. Subtle, poignant, sad,
and yet right, somehow.

Again, well worth the read.

Title: Tangled Webs · Author: Ribby · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 100
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-02 00:25:06
Spoilers!
A most interesting story, and one in which the story is as etherial as
the medium by which Aragorn would see his life reflected.

Poignant.

Title: Fatherhood · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 547
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-02 15:24:18
This is a wonderful portrait, all the more so for its brevity. The use
of this very intriguing moment, particularly since you choose to place
it so early in the story and before fanon convention, you give your
Imrahil a chance to be posessive and loving father, sensible
statesman, and forward-thinking strategist. Where many writers are
hampered by limits, you make this drabble bring out the best in your
story.

Title: Fit for a King · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 217
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-02 15:26:50
What a lovely little vignette this is! I really enjoyed the image of
the three men leaning on the fence, sucking straw like everyday
cowhands, but more than this you give us their comeraderie, and a bit
of mearas culture to boot. Very nice.

Title: Seven Stones and Seven Stars and One White Tree · Author:
shirebound · Races: Other Beings · ID: 121
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-02 16:12:12
This series of vignettes gives a refreshingly original portrait of
some of the canonical scenes. The POV was well-established and
affectively utilized, and added some depth to canon scenes I thought I
knew everything about that there was to know. Writing from the POV of
non-sentient characters is always a challenge, and I had my breath
taken away by just how natural it seemed in these three pieces.

Title: Dirty Jobs · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 232
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 18:42:08
i found this to be an absolute genuis idea. yes i can imagine an
entrepenuear going out and using this idea to make a million dollar
business of selling people the concept and then waiting to see how
long it takes them to realize that only so many people can get rich
selling the idea, some of them will only get rich practicing the
idea.and of course if you are busy eight to fourteen hours a day
practicing then you really would not need the tweve million dollar
mansion, and twenty four carat gold flatware and the mithril serving
dishes. let alone the trips to milan and paris to pick out the latest
haute couttier. yes this is something i can see pippin wrapping his
astute little brain around and making a dead run at his goal. the fact
that he surpasses his mark is not even out of the question. here is a
leader that leads from the front of the pack, he isn't going to sit
back and make someone else carry his load. i think you do a marvelous
job with the back biting and snickers. when paladin hears them he
knows but one way to deal with them, go to the source. you give father
and son a wonderful platform on which to perform and you write a
wonderful, thoughtful, provoking story about them growing and shaping
each other. once more you are the master of your craft.

Title: I Ain't Got Nobody · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 568
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 19:02:15
[ain't no body got me] my best line and technically it doesn't count.
i'm not real fond of the style of write a songline write a chunk of
story, another line, next chunk. but this is one of those little
stories that you find yourself humming even days after you read it. i
always knew that the fantasy graceful, enduring, and everlasting elf
was FANTASY but i think i've met thet klutz somewhere recently. oh
yeah moved the curtain in the bathroom this morning. must talk to my
namo it may be time for some refresher art courses if this is what i
get after owwies. i want what your namo shares. well....maybe not all
five courses, if thats what it takes to be drop dead gorgegous i may
have to pass on some of the wonders, not build for that kind of thing
and way out of shape to try. i do wonder is there a backstory of the
machine somewhere, sometime. ps you hurried down to the patent office
and sheltered the ride, didn't you? if not you could lose a bundle
when they start building them at the amusement parks. there are people
who could use a good jolt in the nose/ but thats a whole nother
storyline / i really think if people would read it straight through
and suspend judgements until the end, you could have a big <b>big</b>,
BIG hit on your hands this is too cute for words .....hmm know any
good artist?

Title: The Blessing · Author: Golden/Pearl Took CoAuthors · Genres:
Longer Works · ID: 511
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 19:27:09
here is a wonderfully complex story, that deals with "real lfe" after
being troll smashed.this is not the first piece that i have read about
what injuries would realistically happen from a squishing. it is far
and away the most thorough though. golden and pearl took explore the
issuses one by one and explain them to outsiders and suffers alike. i
think that they may have given themselves to much time to deal with
one before another one crops up but it is a pleasure read not a
medical guide. the issues that they let come to light are more
truthful maybe then if they let their healers tell everyone every
horror that they might have to deal with. its like the disclaimer
before surgery, is it really reasonable to expect your doctor to
detail all the potential outcomes; not once have i heard the doctor
say and i could drop dead of a heart attack or stroke, leaving you on
the table wide open and half finished. and yes if you tell some one
there may be mice in the kitchen you can bet that they'll see movement
out of the corners of their eyes. golden and pearl took take a much
more hobbity step in giving the story time to develop and move and
twist and turn, they realize that long term care of chronic
conditions, lead to troubles of its own and i appaud them for their
handling of the subject. like serinde and phantom pain i think that
this maybe something you have to live with to truly understand. good
luck, ladies.(geussing, if i'm wrong; sorry sir)

Title: The Six-Fingered Glove Mystery · Author: shirebound · Genres:
Mystery · ID: 522
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 19:50:25
the first time i read this i laughed and laughed and laughed. how many
b movies and tv series, let alone the great "one-armed man hunt" have
you just ruined; they will never be haunting again cause now i know
the horrible truth. how shocking, revolting ( but not disgusting) and
down right bizarre your mind's lint trap must be. you find the cutest
ways to keep the little hobbits active and entertained out of momma's
way for the afternoon. i don't believe you have ever posted anything
that i haven't enjoyed and i hope that the trend will continue for
many seasons of the sun. without giving the plot away, i believe its
safe to say that they could have spend many years, checking out every
crowd and searched the length and breath (wrong word but it sounds
likre this one) of middle earth to find the mysterious stranger. what
an epic thriller you could have filmed. WHO was that gloved one? WHAT
was the gloved ones intentions, good or evil? to what lengths will he
go to get his glove back? i don't imagine that tolkien would have much
to add to this but how about peter max the eighties artist could you
not envision artwork with a six fingered glove and psuecodelic swirls
leading out to potential solutions, went back to check something else
out and was reminded you do make a point of fingered glove, that does
ratchet it up a bit more; is there a reason you do not specify which
sided it was. i mean left handed compliment and all aside that if you
are being politically correct and not poking at left handed people i
may want to cut back on some rheotiric? sorry got a little into this one.

Title: One Step More - The Heroism of Frodo Baggins · Author:
ConnieMarie · Genres: Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 395
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 20:11:43
i hope you understand the fact that you made it here to be voted on
says something about your work (even more if you are not self
nominated). this is a caterogy that i have little or no contact with.
i worried that i would be out of my depths. while some of your
competeters were more aloof and nearly unreadable your work shows that
not only do you walk the walk you talk the talk. perhaps we should
start calling this a new genre of hero. you have action heroes, you
have anti-heros, why don't we call frodo the anthem hero. he doesn't
need to fight the fight, he needs to avoid the fight, it isn't that he
doesn't care about what happens to the world (my view of anti-), its
that he cares too much about too many. he wants every note, every
syllable to be perfect and clear so that everyone gets to live a
simple life, without land disputes and turf wars. sure occasionally
you need to clarify a boundary but mostly we just see hobbits farming
the land and tending their flocks. you write a detailed and logical
paper that while not every earning you millions should make you
friends of billions. you give your opinion and you never say this is
the only way it should be just that its the way you see it. realizing
that noone else ever stands in your shoes the way you do may help you
to become rich and famous in what ever course you plot for your life.
good luck and keep looking through your glasses the rose colored ones
are over rated.

Title: Yrch Song · Author: Phyncke · Genres: Poetry · ID: 564
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 20:32:20
when i started this project, i made a couple of rules for myself: read
outside the box, keep an open mind, only write reviews of ten points.

well after this one and maybe a few others, we're going to rewirte the
rules of nancy: except tor wips, read everything- you just never know.
try to find a mind eraser on the next trip to the store, and go back
later and give a few small shots of applause.

i am fussy about what i think is poetry, there i said it outloud. now
will you find something to take this image out of my head.

there is this BIG, ugly, not too hairy yrch in a cheerleading skirt,
jumping up and down waving his/her popmpoms and singing your song as
in the background the troupe of yrchs practice building pyramids and
knocking them down. of course they are building the pyramids with
pretty elves and using giant dwarf axes to bring them down.

now i ask you is this a nice thing to do to your reading public? where
am i to tuck the glee club in at night, the balrogs are under the bed,
the water thing-y took over the john. there's screaming hobbits in the
closets afraid somenone is going to out them. i just don't know where
else to turn for imaginary advise, how could you do this to me? i want
your mothers e mail address im going to tell her what you did.

Title: Spiced Wine On A Snowy Day · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Elves: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 558
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-02 20:46:50
This is a nice moment of peace. I like the way the conversation flows
so naturally, instead of sticking to one subject.

Title: Birthday Present · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 441
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-02 20:50:23
Spoilers!
This is a lovely idea, that what Pippin would want most from his
Cousin Bilbo would not be a clock work toy from Dale, or even a
trinket of dragon gold, but a story of adventure. Nicely done.

Title: 25 Rethe, S.R. 1422: The Three Travellers Remember · Author:
Dreamflower · Genres: Poetry: Drama · ID: 679
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 20:53:07
up until i got invited to play here, i thought drabbles and hiaku were
the biggest challenge to face, OMG!! this is poetry as art as true
art. i can see this type of poetry written in frodo's best hand,
stretched and mounted as a wedding or anniversary present. the visual
appeal the texture of the writing the symetery and presentation. all
just jump off the page and beg to be given a voice. this is something
that if you held readings like i'm hearing about where people all
gather up live and using the mystery of computers read the lotr
outloud to each other. (need to refind that post and check into the
possiblites) you would have standing room ony. dreamflower i don't
know how you do it, you are so prolific as a writer and yet you seem
to find the time to keep track of all the important dates in middle
earth time and give each one a small salute as they pass. i have to
believe that you have a really thick detail oriented dayplanner placed
somewhere in your brain and that its open and accessable constantly.
you must have a first class education also because you have so much
knowledge and never come off as high-faluting either. if you weren't a
rhodes scholar maybe you were or are a rogue scholar, scooping up
little facts and tucking them securely away for later disposal.

Title: Reflections in the Smoke · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 294
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-02 20:53:28
Spoilers!
What an interesting idea, to examine a moment when Galdalf/Olorin
would first feel his task was done, and that the future was open.

I like that the wind, the natural world of Eru, seems to speak to him
and call him home.

Title: Your Father Loves You · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 424
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-02 20:58:36
This is an incisive portrait, encompassing Denethor's tendency to
regret, fear, and despair measured in eventualities even as he loves
and is grateful.

Title: The Captain's New Clothes · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 421
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 21:08:47
i wrote this really great wickedly witty review marked it final,
pushed the save button and my carrier went off line for the long
weekend.LOST, ITS LOST FOREVER. so to tryand recap. this is the story
with that wonderful pitcure in the beginning. and i got to tell you
that was the sell i bought that pitcure and could hardly wait to hear
how it happened. even though the next entry had a pitcure where i
could almost see aragorn's wzzzzzy this one was the clencher. i did
find your choice of donor questionable, she is a woman of taste and
discernment and i think has seen enough warriors to know that what is
classy on the parade ground isn't necessarily practical in the field.
but i did notice something while writing the first review(sob)
(sniffle) that i wonder if you noticed. the guy in the background is
in the same type of leggings, ps and look at his face not a thrilled
camper. i understand his troops position on helping him out, you
shouldn't upset rich older woman who give you goodies and especially
if you aren't the one paying the piper. i think based on the beauty of
this story you owe it to the world to go back to that calender and see
if there are any more stories hidding out there, its a tough job but
you have proven yourself more than capable of delivering the goodies.
not as good as the first one but you get the idea: i liked your story!!!!

Title: The Gardener Speaks · Author: Armariel · Genres: Poetry:
Hobbits · ID: 428
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 21:24:14
as i admitted to the other poetry author and the essay writer that i
reviewed, this is maybe not my comfort zone. so if this sounds a
little stilted its me not your work. pardons, please. in order to grow
people need to reach out and try something different once in a while
and once in those whiles you find something that makes you want to
reach out even further. you have touched a chord in my emotions that i
would like to explore more, thank you for presenting an idea that i
like in a way that i might not have tried to use. this is a moving
piece that explores the underpinings of frodo and sam, and let's it be
just frodo and sam not egos and sex and competing and all those
things. this is sam relating to this person who is currently the only
person in his world (look around folks they are all alone out here) in
a way that is completely and solely his. not his fathers not the
shires not even the worldly view. this is a private moment that i feel
priveledged to get to view. i can now think a little more samlike when
i view the world, i have seen things from apoint of view that matters
in ways that maybe mine doesn't because i am a selfish clod not a
loving caring hobbit, but i can reach for it thanks to you giving me a
road map. i hope ou find this as enlighting and experience as i have
and i'm referring to the grand pitcure of mefa not eh medicore ravings
of a nutcase. good luck.

Title: Rebirth · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Poetry: Late Third Age
· ID: 471
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 21:42:16
boy, i thought drabbles were hard to vote for; do you realize that to
give you the fullest vote i can i need about thirty three and a third
characters for every sylable you wrote? be prepared to be buried. i
guess the first thing to say is if you relocated you could have had
sam's help in the task you choose to highlight,(oh yeah, ps and all
that i don't like the spoilers button either.) as it is you better be
an elf cause other wise you may run out ot time. the rest of us have
limited numbers of years to wait for these things to occur. of course
where you are you maybe able to get an ent or two interested every
little bit, but i understand that their actual attention span is not
all that long just their speech patterns make it seem like it's going
to take forever. (but catty thought,)

truth: what you have written, in the way you have written it is so
clear and pretty that i wish half of the world could take lessons, say
what you mean say it quietly and soft spoken and see how many people
end up hearing the echos of the thoughts bouncing around the universe.
beautifully done. good luck and pleasant dreams for more inspiration.
i will try to keep an eye on your site and learn more wonders of the
world as the years progress, if you don't mind a lurker. promise no
stalking.

Title: Midnight · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Romance · ID: 18
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 22:00:18
i have an issue with you slash is male an male sexual connations. this
is not slash if you had not specifically said theodred, no one could
have assumed that. there is nothing that is thoughtspoken that is
inherintly male. this could be a quite moment with some unkown shield
maiden. (yeah right) okay so i buy the whole boromir wasn't dedicated
to wooing the girls thing but i think to often people see the word
slash and automatically cringe. this is a peice that should could and
i think does call for main stream acceptance and reward. you have
writen a moment in time that captures two people at their most joined
outside of a sexual stimulation. i don't think theodred is thinking
okay now wake him up and bang away i think that you show him wanting
to give this moment of peace and rest to a frind that has been badly
used and abused by the world lately. he is not thinking of himself or
rewards or future glory, in fact in many ways he is not even thinking
h is just easedropping on memories that happen to have visual cues
that he is looking at, kind of like picking up a scrapbook while you
sit on the couch waiting for the OTHER to finish dressing for the
night on the town, you may not really be thinking at all its just busy
hand and mind syndrome caatching up with you. and notice thoe's
practicing no hands style right now. try that at sword practice!!!!

Title: Call of the Wild · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance:
Drabbles · ID: 94
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-02 23:28:43
Spoilers!
well here i go again, babbling on a drabble, trying to give you a ten
when you gave less than one hundred and one. see already i have gotten
better, write everything out no abbreviations and no symbols whan i
can make them words. i think your narrator is vastly overlooked in the
writing communities and you make me eager to get to know more about
her, maybe not as much as princess di but when she died i promised not
to encourage papparazi by supporting their work. now i've found fanfic
if it aint already written, write it as you go.

your work is a treat to the eyes, this is very like i see theoden, a
wild thing standing in full majesty and displayng his natural charm
and abilites without apology or artifice. he needs to be idolized and
deserves a queen of his own kind. not some civilized playmate. i can
see him as that legendary twelve point buck. nothing anyone expects to
see but if you do everyone thinks you maybe helping further the
legend. in the least words do some people create the brightest pitcure
i hate clicking that button but i have given your story away i fear. i
had some quandries over your choice of animals to use but this is a
specialized crowd and should be able to brush up on older names for
species that appear fairly frequnetly in our masterpiece.

Title: In Dreams · Author: Phyncke · Genres: Romance: Elven Lands ·
ID: 609
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 20:32:05
too many kings in one place truthfully. but thats still to be written,
what you have written here is simply delightful. yes, simply sensual
does spend a lot of time sniping drop dead gorgeous. and drop dead may
spend a bit more time primping, but look at the results. hunka hunka's
all around. i adored your introduction, the placement and use of
nature's bounty give you nice little shadows to dance across the
landscape of your fiction. as we stand in the silly banquet hall and
do the necessary business of enjoying our companions (please valar
there's enough drinks) you allude to the spring vision you open with
and keep a breeze moving in our minds so that the story never gets
stuffy or stale. you prolong the moment of re-introduction until some
of us are squirming in our seats, pushing at the chess pieces to work
them across the board. then just when we think its time for
gratiatious satisfaction, you fine tune that other camera lens and we
are blindsided by the depth and drama of long denied desire. oh i want
to find that story next, please vala get it ready. you end this story
with two compelling couples who are begging for more and more tales of
life in a place where the biggest arguement maybe which king is your
king. can you imagine when poor leggers gats here, loyality to his
father who hasn't come yet, or fideliety to a grandsire he doesn't
know as a living breathing being. you have opened a door with that
aside about kings i hope, given the talent you have displayed here
that you will step through the door and give such works that you will
always be on the nomination list for years and years to come.

Title: Summer's Lease · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 650
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 20:54:00
it has gotten to the point that when i see your name on a story i am
about to read i know that if not sexual teased i am about to be
sensually pleased out of all bounds. you write so deeply pleasing a
tale that it would be hard to imagine these three have not formed a
truly lasting bond of friendship. here are three very much adult
beings, who lost all chance at childhood as their friend the hobbits
had because of accidents of birth. born in a time when war was
knocking at the door of civilazation, grown and trained to dedication
to duty and service, polished by their own personal losses and honored
for their wins. who expects to find them barefoot in the middle of a
fountain? i'm so glad you found and captured the memory so that we
could see the joy and gladness that has rewarded these three mighty
warriors in their great retirement years. ahh yes the stodgy
statesman, the haughty courtier, and the ice princess; mmay we never
view them as so simply one sided ever again. and aren't you the sly
bugger, wet slick salasious men and cut to black before the x-rating
of dripping feminine charm. yes even linen leaves little to the
imagination of a writer as profound as yourself and this is a family
rated program. you paint such a pretty pitcure of hot sweaty muscles
in action that when you slow us to that long lingering look of
comparision, who can lose; both of them are such fine specimens of
their kind,,, and did i mention dripping wet (siggggh, oh yeah) thank
you thank you thank you.(wiping drool from lips) good night.... what
do you mean it's not bed time?

Title: The Wedding Gift · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 40
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 21:11:10
the description says gloin and his bride so i will not need the
spoiler button or so i think. you have just described the best kind of
gift i think people can exchange, and i have a pretty firm idea what
her side was, thank you for leaving some mysteries in life. you know
in some cultures it is necessary to display all your wealth so that
everyone knows how to treat you if you have four gold chains and the
other guy has ten.. you lose. the harad supposedly carried their
wealth with them to war so that if they died they would not arrive in
paradise broke, wonder if anyone ever explained that looting was a two
way custom. or maybe their spirit only needed the spirit of the gold
so that when he was burned without it he never missed it. i think i
prefer those cultures were wealth is underplayed and woman and
children are the greatest rewards the male ever wishes for ( too bad
it's becoming more and more a story book tale) but if we could get
this tale out and widely read there could be a resergence of male
dedication to family. i'm glad to find someone so talented at writing
giving us this view of family life within the dwarfen world. i hope
they have many years and several children to share these kinds of
moments with. we of course know there's at least one.

Title: Sing My Worth Immortal · Author: Perelleth · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 168
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 21:39:30
if you ever wondered why some people say they were just born that way,
this story will prevent you ever maintaining a straight face again.
yes, it must have seeped into their blood, back in the dark recesses
of time.if a reader has any funny bone at all they are going to be
laughing too hard to try logic on this. you take the concept of
cultural differences and the inevetiable differences of opinions that
arise and make one of the most entertaining and enlightening events in
what ever time\place this is. but then of course the
gender-discrimination would never be funny to anyone. unless of course
they have common sense. and as it is so common, i'd be willing to cut
any detractors a deal and sell them (some common sense) at fifty
dollars a gram. real bargain here folks, but first you have to admit
you have none by dislikng this story.

i find myself voting for the story just simply because it appeals to
my sense of mirth. there are several factors that i just can't get my
logic to settle on: where are they in this story? not lothlorien, you
refer to the cellars and dashing about great hallways. not shangralai
(brain refuses to share elven haven name), you have arwen and some
dwarf other than gimli present. speaking of, dwarf, it must be before
the big elf-dwarf fiasco. just how old are these grandsons and should
they be drinking? where's haldir and gang? as i said a couple of small
hangups.

well the good news is so far i've had no takers on my offer. good luck.

Title: Celevon a Mallen · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 279
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-09-03 21:49:52
Spoilers!
A lovely, lovely drabble series. Celeborn is always a bit of an enigma
in Tolkien's world-quiet, seemingly second-fiddle to his powerful
sorceress wife. But he is surnamed the Wise and his counsel is valued
among his people. This series provides brief snapshots of his and
Galadriel's life together-their meeting, the birth of their child, her
marriage, their parting and the promise of an eventual reunion beyond
the sea. Though these are true drabbles, the enduring love between the
two of them comes through clearly.

Title: A Little Misunderstanding · Author: Radbooks · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 275
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 21:55:37
the first time i read this i felt such compassion for halabarad, to
have this much happen so quickly and so mysteriously. it had to leave
some very big and threatening images in his brain. life as he knew it
was turned every which way and people were missing and mom and dad
were upset. now when things are settling down and he is finding a new
center in his life, THEY come back. if he had been a little older and
maybe just a hair more reckless, this could have ended up being a
tragedy, explaining to elrond why his boys were not coming home. i can
see halabarad avenging his clan and making his very special spot in
history, if only.... as it is you show talent and tact in dealing with
a young grieving human who is mildly terrified. i have enjoyed
watching so many people remind us that the first step should be level
the field. in your case you must also even the field so that he
doesn't feel surrounded. i have not as of yet found many of your works
but i hope there are a great many more of them as it is ten months
from the begining of the next round of mefa reading and i need lots
and lots of choices. you display great skills and i look forward to
reading anything i can find with your name on it.good luck and
hopefully you have brought halabarad back his friend by now.

Title: A Large Bold Hand · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 10
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 22:13:55
drabbles are a constant amazement to me, to limit yourself to one
hundred words and paint such a wonderful pitcure. of course in this
case you have chosen such a small line in such an action packed time
that many of us had overlooked the implications of the words and every
bit of light just makes it glow all the more. you found a time and a
method that leaves no feeling of manipulation on anyone'e part. it
fits, a craftsman wonders into a scene of everyday life and sees not
the mundane ordinariness but the delicate artistic wonder of the view.
and of course, modest and unprepossing little one that he is known to
be (was that delicate enough, did i keep you from snorting?) the
viewee acts in a way that is a recommendation to his upbringing. both
of your characters have such reputations for pranks its nice to see
their serious and studious side handled with such class and finese. to
say nothing for the reasons that qualifies you in the sub categoty of
coss-cultural, you show that when beings exchange ideas and admiration
it does not have to be 'not bad for a(n),,,' these two simple respond
to each other without any implication that either one is viewing the
other as anthing other then a peer. kudos on a job well done and enjoy
your moments of glory, they should be plentiful based on the evidence
in front of us.

Title: Jewels of Light · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Friendship · ID: 394
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 22:43:28
larner, this is one of those gems that you should put in a slightly
less well lighted areas because it generates such pure and gentle
light that there can be no shadows around it. it radiates with love
and kindness on so many levels that we must begin to see it is those
cuts that seem so senseless are actually leaving more and more
surfaces to reflect back anything we send its direction. gee that
would mean that we are seeing a reflection of you and what you have
put into the shaping and forming of this gem. i hope that is true
because it reflects the image of a person who has taken the little
tumbles that life has put out there and managed to turn them into a
polishing process that has added value and appeal to the everyday and
oh so practical person that you must have been and makes you a
priceless and rare addition to the lives of those around you. you make
the petty bickering and the instant sarcasm that these two have fallen
into so easy to leave behind because they are starting to realize that
the view they see is really not all that different, yes there are
differences but from this point on you can bet that they are going to
look beyond the fence and actually see the vista that lays behind it.
great writing bonnie keep up the great work and i'll see more at lotr
community gfic, right?

Title: Of First Impressions and Old Friends · Author: Dreamflower ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Frodo and Faramir · ID: 146
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 23:32:16
i'm breaking my own rules and writing this review differently then any
of my others. pardon me Dreamflower if this upsets you.

[Finally Mithrandir had spoken. "Good morning, eh? What do you mean?
Do you wish me a good morning, or mean that it is a good morning
whether I want it or not; or that you feel good this morning; or that
it is a morning to be good on?"]

how many of us would be better served to try this method of greeting
people, you enlighten us on many ways and outcomes from this scenario.
this greeting method seems to be a way in which gandalf can gauge the
content of a beings soul. and it makes me wonder who do you think
failed if and how did they answer. this is not the main plot line of
this story but its the one that has made me remember and return to it
time and time again. of course frodo probably never faced the question
as an introduction but i imagine that gandalf challenged him more than
once while visiting bilbo, if for no other reason, it would show
frodo's growth and expanding realization of the world as a whole.

your overall story is a wonderful tennis match of view points, and
tenses. we move back and forth and around the robin. and never do you
lose the thread of how the impressions formed early in a meeting form
and shape the way we react to the next and all future challenges. in
the words of one famous hobbit it probably [shows what kind of quality
you have]. you find a flash back point to bring most of the players a
moment in the spotlight and then you bring us back to the 'present' of
the tale and end the story with a bit of tantalizing cliffie. we can
not know if it leads to more wonderful dreamflower universe or of you
are releasing us into the tender care of the master of all things
middle earth. thank you for this short cruise on the river of memory
and recall.[Finest kind] [Finest kind.]

Title: Parting Gifts · Author: Fiondil · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Post-Ring War · ID: 452
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-03 23:58:46
Spoilers!
do you know that mistletoe prefers to grow on oak trees. do you know
that spanish moss, that beautifull wispy curtain that is so often used
to create romantic scenes in movies, is actually another parasitic
growth. but both examples here are long standing and in most cases not
harmful to either organism. i fear that gimli is feeling a little
uncertain as to how people precieve him after he's gone. legalos of
course is the oak tree, and i wonder if gimli has a preference to
which growth he would be?

it has been said so many ways and never better; it is easier to leave
then to be left. that is why so many people walk away from others
rather then risk investing time and effort into afriendship let alone
a relationship. and in every way legalos and gimli are in a
relationship. they song left friendship as too small a vessel to
contain all the levels and baggage that such a long involved knowing
would generate. here are two beings that have spend so long being
paired and now have had an untimed frame of space together without
relief they are so intertwined that gimli is having very real concerns
that once the trellis is removed the much beloved flower bush will
collapse in on itself and drown in it own unsupported weight, even
though he knows there are many waiting to slip small timbers of love
into the vacancy that occurs. can anyone still doubt these two love
each other and have left all the rigamarole to narrowminded critics.
wonderful story and i hope you don't think i gave it all away.

Title: Tonight We Are Alive · Author: Eyborg · Races: Dwarves · ID: 504
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 00:17:44
the one side of me feels cheated, i didn't cry over this one. the
other side of me prays that he left behind more than he knows. i would
agree with your opener there are not enough dwarf stories out there. i
read some of these bios and wonder just what kind of stories do people
expect of dwarfs. you portray a group af beings who have wants and
feelings that seem very much like my own. the dwarfs that are on your
page seem to be good beings and as worthy of love and respect as any
other race i've read about. you give us a story that if not designated
dwarf leaving for moria could be just about any young committed male
leaving for a long diffucult journey, a young scots man sailing for
america. a young jet-eye leaving for another galaxy. even a soldier
leaving for the battlefield. none of them beleive that they will never
return, they believe that they will win thru their struggles and come
back and reclaim their love and in most cased their livestyles. they
may move away to the site of their victory, but they refuse to damn
themselves and their companions by even hinting that failure may
happen. this is the way of courage and honor. this is the best of the
best in any society. and with true wisdom, you realize if this must be
done best it be done quickly. very well done, dignity and honor are
yours and your families for long and longer.

Title: Hammer · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 468
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 00:37:53
ahh, my famous babble about drabble act: i'm going to apply for the
copyright one of these days.

with this as a pickup line the world needs to be thankful that some
women are adventurers. of course he may end up with only a necklace to
show for this night. wouldn't that hurt the ego?

aranel, some people spend twice as many words (at a guess) in setting
up their work and twice as much again explaining how and where from\to
they were going; you have exactly one hundred words that you set the
scene, lured the victim, and sprung the trap. no wasting time dibbling
and dabbling around the edges, you went right in and caught us by our
short fuzzy foot hairs (where were you thinking those hairs were
again) and dragged us to the end. now in a politically correct manner
you are letting our imaginations take us to the finish line. wonder
who else is betting on a necklace? (people who know me think that the
pod people have visited, it was actually the stepford husbands that
dropped by for a visit. now i have all these pretty pastel sweater
sets and a really classy pearl choker. oh i'm so lucky.) have you
considered writing her side of the little drama as a follow up act. or
maybe give us a view of her plot to get him to utter his best speech?

Title: Healing · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves · ID: 419
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 01:07:36
Spoilers!
how many thousands of people can relate to the basics of this story.
he loves his wife and child, he really really does. but this is his
world, here not over there and he wants to help to reclaim all that
can be salvaged from the wreckage....but time and reality settle in.
he must choose to go or risk losing them forever. you tell us the tale
of how he strove and what he thinks he accomplished, you let him
express things that are hard to explain and harder to live. you paint
a pitcure of the difference between a physical relationship and an
intimate one. by staying when she left, you give this ancient married
couple a chance to rekindle and re-explore the glory of their lives,
both together and apart and give them the oppurtunity to restart a
possible dormaint relationship (seems to me there sould {now was the
thought should or could, think i'll leave it up to you} be siblings in
celebrains future.) you write of moments of recovery and moments of
loss irretrieviable, you don't try to sugar coat or white wash the
aftereffects that he saw.you write with a light feather touch that
keeps the story on track and lets the wheels roll and the best
possible speed for the track conditions. this was a pleasure to read
and i hope to read much more of yours in the future. he could not cure
middle earth but he definitely left it a better place then it was.
thank you.

Title: Blood and Iron · Author: Ribby · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 122
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 01:27:27
well before i begin the babble for drabbles, let me say this was a
first for me i would not have thought to cast elrond as. i can say
that visions of the twins as smiths have worked for me, the idea that
glorfindel was a maker as well as a weilder had occurred, i've read
stories where erestor is a smith. BUT elrond never entered my mind. of
course looking at some of the stills again with this story is the
front of my brain i can see that elf standing in the front of the line
of waiting elven swordmen as the sweating figure weilding the hammer
in the movies short glimpse of the reforging. i find that most elfish
writers feel that undr those smooth sleek looking robes there are more
adonis' then flabby statesmen. heck even tolkien tries to use the
robes to hide phyisical strenght when he has denethor throw off his
robe and reveal his armour; as if wearing and sleeping in armour is
enough to keep you fit. i like the way you work the custom of blooding
a sword into consideration. but to work **** into the story like that
is truly very slick. it took me typing a question about the identity
of the gondorian to remember the scene from the movie. slick as
whistle spit. you're really really good with so few words to cover so
much ground. and i really never got to bable mode. great work, good luck.

Here is your weekly admin post. This week we're focusing on Non-Fiction
pieces.

We often write and read fanfic because we enjoy a good story  but
sometimes it's about exploring the characters or aspects of the
fictional world. If you enjoy stories that psychoanalyse characters,
indulge in world-building or extrapolate from canon, then you'll
probably enjoy reading and being stimulated by the pieces in our
Non-fiction categories. This list will help you find essays and articles
you might like to review.

For the list of pieces in this announcement I've used an author's main
category selection. Each author selects three category choices, only one
of which it can be placed in; but the author has still described it as
being suitable for three category choices, even if it isn't placed
there. So if an author selected the "genre" category Non-fiction it will
be on this list.

Finding stories that selected a certain main category is pretty
straightforward. To do this

1. Log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/
2. Click the "Stories" link at the top of the page.
3. Click the "Show Filter" link.
4. Click the "Clear All Filters" button if you've used the filter before
this session.
5. Select the genre, race, or time period you would like from the
"Genre, Race, Time" filter (sixth from the bottom).
6. Click the "Display selected nominations" button.

This will pull up all of the nominated pieces that selected your main
category as a first-, second-, or third-choice category, even if they
didn't end up categorized in that main category.

******************************

Here are the stories competing in this year's competition whose author
selected Non-fiction to describe their piece.

Angelica
--- (322) Name Calling: Group Identity and the Other among First Age Elves
Aratlithiel
--- (457) On Hobbits
ConnieMarie
--- (395) One Step More - The Heroism of Frodo Baggins
Dawn Felagund
--- (107) A Woman in Few Words: The Character of Nerdanel and Her
Treatment in Canon and Fandom
Dreamflower
--- (532) The Myth of the One Ring's Power
--- (686) The Importance of Being Bilbo
Marta
--- (123) On Canon and Fanfic
--- (475) Galdor: An Elf By Any Other Name....
--- (624) Pride and Despair: A Defense of Ecthelion's Son
Oshun
--- (530) Aulë the Smith
pandemonium_213
--- (50) Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus
Roh Wyn
--- (277) Arvedui v. Pelendur
Steuard Jensen
--- (91) Tolkien's Parish: The Canonical Middle-earth

To find more information about any of these pieces, just do the following

1. Log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/
2. Click the "Stories" link at the top of the web page.
3. Type the Story ID followed by the "#" sign into the search bar, and
click the "Search" button.

For instance, searching for "457#" will bring up story #457, On Hobbits
by Aratlithiel.

Non-fiction pieces are competing in the following subcategories:

Genres: Non-Fiction: General
Genres: Non-Fiction: Character Studies
Genres: Poetry: General

Remember: The list of stories and sub-categories listed above are based
on the main categories chosen by the author.

Happy reading!

Tanaqui
(MEFA Tech Support)

P.S. - If you noticed a mistake in this post, please email about it so I
can check whether a mistake has been made and, if necessary, correct my
announcement. You can reach me privately at
techsupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net. Thanks!

Title: The Librarian · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 700
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 01:47:14
Jay, i've already babbled at you once today you must be really good at
this stuff. or else everyone else just sucks.... no you're really good
at this stuff.

readers, if you are fond of the story of beren, then you owe yourself
this read just to see what some people have to put up with as darkness
encroaches.

readers, if you like stories about thranduil raising legalos with the
help of the palace, this is the one you need to read next.

readers, fond of lit'l one stories,,,this is it.

readers, you like that eyebrow raising thing that people in charge
like to do to make you think they know more then they do?

this story cover so many minor issues and just keeps finding one more
way to send that eyebrow twitching. elrond may need to contact a
plastic surgeon to recover from this but i hope that most of the
stitches will fall out on their own once you can quit laughing about
the antics of our hero.

i can not imagine where some of you authors leave your imaginations to
graze but i do know that i hope its been a good year there and that
there is plenty more for you fertile minded people to gather up and
process so that we lesser endowed may continue to feed of the output
of your brains.

and then you find the one way to get thranduil back? who supplies you
with the bunny feed? these are humongous little critters.

Title: Spaces in the Heart · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of
Elrond · ID: 251
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 02:14:52
i began this category sure that i was going to struggle and fight to
find something i would enjoy, thank you for breaking that mold. i can
honestly tell you after reading your competeters and your contribution
i have put the silmarion on my list of things to pick up over the
weekend. i read it some time ago and was not all that thrilled with
it. now after so many snippets of long, long ago i think its worth
trying again.you paint a lovely scenario for what the grey havens
might be in these part of the second age. you keep ciridan the stodgy
old crust that he has been in so much of my reading. stodgy, crusty,
and white bread soft in the center. still opening his heart and home
to strays. still nursing the war wounded bacdk to battle readiness.
yes you paint a mosaic of elven culture and life.i was under the
impression that glorfindel swore to the valar to protect elrond's
house; must say i like your take on the story better. to awaken so
lost and have to find yourself, then meet such a dynamic young ( who's
truly older here) person that feels you are so wonderful must be quite
a jolt to the systems. anyway it happens, i'm looking forward to
seeing more of this pair in future works by yourself. you are a
pleasant and appealing read with very little humor but i wonder if it
is not just waiting for a more appropriate moment to appear.

Title: My Oaths I Will Keep · Author: Encaitariel · Races: Elves:
House of Finwe · ID: 298
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 04:01:58
this review puts me in a strange place, i don't agree with your basic
story line, it's wrong, he was wrong and should have made better
choices. that being said i think it is the best written piece of work
in this subcategory and i planned on giving my votes the full ten
point value. so let's start with gildor, you explain much of what has
been hazy to be about some of the portrayals i have read of the
mysterious lord of the roaming elves, i had always thought that there
was a gyspy-ish feel for this group, not understood equals easy to
write up as trouble on the hoof. given the background that you write
about here it is easier to understand why gildor sometimes seems to be
sneering at man's never too realistic attempts to overthrow sauron. he
has seen what one idealistic person can do to an entire kingdom. given
the ideals that he seems to embrace and possible embody it becomes
clearer why he does not set up his clan and simply stay in the same
spot for a while, staying means building ties and building ties mean
risking incredible hurt. by not staying in his haven he didn't have to
decide who to allow access to and who to deny. if they got there under
their own power and could build a spot for themselves in the existing
society then they must be destined to stay. he doesn't have to protect
the area, sauron does not have him on the radar. by staying in plain
sight he has kept his people out of site. thank you for enlightening
me. good luck.

Title: Out, Damn'd Spot! Out, I Say! · Author: Alassante · Races:
Elves: Noldor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 260
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 05:23:43
Spoilers!
as a lord of the rings fan, i had no great insight into celebrimbor
until i started reading fanfic and now, after this haunting moment is
his history i find myself wandering how he managed to put it all
behind him well enough to create the rings and now as i sit here
writing this i wonder if maybe he thought that the rings would do
great good and counter balance the scale a little in his favor. i like
the fact that you don't spend much on background, you choose to
concentrate on the action in the foreground and keep people from
slipping away from the horrific activities that have lead up to this
snapshot from his life.i think that i prefer reading to movies and
television because i like to start each scene as a blank slate and let
the details or lack there of build the stage set of each. sometimes
authors try to fill in a blank spot that should be left and the story
begins to have babbling when it needs absolute shocking silence. as
rites of passage go i would list bloodletting as one that i should
like to into history, but in the warrior state that middle earth is in
there is no foreseeable end to youth losing its innocence by killing.
if theres any chance you will take request how about exploring how
this reaction ties into the creation of the rings and his discovery of
the betrayal of his trust?

Title: King Stag · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Mirkwood Elves · ID: 86
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 05:26:59
Jael, this is the most wonderful telling of some very ancient and
revered lores of a sub-culture that often only gets small stabs taken
at them. in an all too infrequent look at thranduil's love and losses,
you give us a full and glorious ELF not a statesman, definitely not a
king, but an earth bound individual who is bound to the earth by
ancient and nearly ignored customs. you take us from a what have i
done to a universally accepted and anticapated action, and then to a
masculine challenge of i'm tougher than you are. that is in reality a
testing of worth to be offered the adulation that will make thranduil
the legend that he becomes. i enjoy the way you weave the feminine in
and out of the mix to keep it from being a rite of passage, its more a
coming home to the forest. you paint in the backdrop with gentle
strokes that encourage the forest to embrace us and let us easedrop on
moments that have remained private and solitary for yens and yens. you
wrap up the main section of the story leaving us hoping that they will
have a long and prosperous life.and then take that hope and run like a
rabbit but i am still hoping that thranduil will find a way to forfill
his oath and still get to spend some of eternity with his family.

Title: Spiced Wine On A Snowy Day · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Elves: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 558
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 05:53:24
Nieriel Raina, i have decided to tell the world on your platform, that
I, ME, all by myself have decided that these two need a new identity;
we're (all of us) going to call them the snipes. I HAVE DECIDED. now
that i have that off my chest. loved it the first time i read it loved
it the third time. archived it off site so i could read it when i
could not get on line (bad nancy) when reading through the list to
decide who to vote for geuss who got it hands down and i did read your
competeters and i think i fairly judged them some of them were good
but none of them was the snipes. oh these two just keep me snickering
and chuckling, i can't figure out why with all the belly laughing i do
i do not have the flatest abs in the world. wait let me gather up my
chocalate wrappers and go weigh myself again. just don't understand
they say laughing is great abs work out and these two preform so well
at your fingertips. you wind them up and let them go for it with such
grace and dignity its hard to see all the little hit marks where they
nip and each other. i must admit i side with blondie on the flavor of
our next beverage i never was big on designer taste. goes to support
my theory that potpourri is poisonous and should be banned from
existence (on a side note i thought potpourri was the swill you stuff
in sachets and leave lying around to stink people out? are you sure he
should be drinking that?) well to end this you have used the snipes
goodly and its time to let them go back to the book.. thank you for
sharing.

Title: Harmony · Author: Elwen · Races: Hobbits · ID: 195
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 06:28:43
Elwen, your story is nothing short af magnificent, but who ever helped
you write your blurp so shortchanged you that i fear for your totals.
taking part in a rather extensive discussion on how to pick what to
read and what to vote on in the most general of terms there are a lot
of people who use that blurp to decide if they are going to open a
story by an author they aren't aware of. and your blurp leaves the
first two thirds of your story unheralded. your title comes much
closer to the storyline. the idea that you present is very
creationistic in tolkien world the idea that each of us is an
individual song in the greater song of the world/ universe.... so off
to the west and even more competent healers than elrond (in his
opinion). there, i needed to tread carefully because i was walking
that thin line next the the spoiler button. your prose is not overly
wordy and you paint vey pretty word pitcures with nice clear colors
and textures. you weave the story carefully and try not to leave any
knotty problems in your wake. there's a flow and rhtym that you allow
to build and then ebb and flow as you move from descriptions to
dialoug. your story seems at times to be walking along and taking the
time to enjoy the scene and let a wounded hobbit get himself there
when he can and other times you skip and jump over the mundane issues
that would just sock the story in the clouds. thank you for sharing
such a novel expression of song.

Title: A Promise · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Childhood · ID: 149
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 06:45:47
i really wish you people would quit making me cry. horrible way to
know that this is the best of the ones in your subcategory, you made
me believe and i felt the loss as if i was there. very mean of you.
but it is what makes your story the one getting points, you do the job
so well. there is nothing harder than the first loss of each and every
part of life. i say that because people might lynch me if i saythe
loss of a pet as a child is more tramatic then the loss of a family
member as a teen. each is devastang and even more so when you have
never felt that seperation before. don't get me wrong here either the
loss of the fourteenth cat was hard but one i'm older and i knew more
about the whys and wherefores, did i cry less,no. but i understood
that the afterlife is a very real possiblity. i wish you had mentioned
the story you used as a legend in the blurp because it makes
explaining things so much easier but i do not want to use the spoiler
button. i'm also glad you brought in outside help for his grief
counseling, of course i don't know if either one of them would agree
with me, (he's family after all and they are not into psychology). i
think your ending shows a deep an d profound knowledge of the healing
process. i would warn people that each healing happens at it own pace,
but pippin is generally in fast acting mode.

Title: The Best Sword Ever · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age ·
ID: 290
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-04 07:00:37
Spoilers!
Once a child in Minas Tirith discussed swords and indicated the wish
to see "the best sword ever," and the man with him promised to show
him one day, should the time to reforge a particular broken sword
should come. Now that day has come, and the man who once was that
child can barely remember it, does not yet acknowledge he knows the
man....

Poignant. One can feel Aragorn's pain at the lack of recognition. Well
told.

Title: The Vault of the Dead · Author: Soledad · Genres: Mystery · ID: 103
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-04 07:12:37
Spoilers!
A fascinating tale in which a group of the Avari whose city lies
hidden in the White Mountain sends the request for certain of those
now dwelling within Minas Tirith to come to them. For it appears
certain from among the dead wish to communicate while it is still
possible.

A strange request; a strange journey to a strangely hidden community,
some triumphant last counsel between living and dead....

A fascinating tale, well told.

Title: A Treasured Piece of Cloth · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 600
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 07:13:19
Golden, two back to back you must realize that in most of my reviews i
have to worry that i will not have enough to say to get the full
credit. not a problem with yours there is so much to rave about that
the problem maybe come the two hour cutoff. i read this and thought he
was so lucky to have these freinds and family members. mine was a
second hand stuffed cow. i was told it was "gifted" to me because i
refused to let go of the leg i was eating. my only 'slightly older
aunt' (she insist that shes really not that much older then me)
decided she didn't want baby drool-led animals on her bed. besides the
steady that had gifted it to her was about to bite the dust. she'd
spotted him TALKING to another girl at school. it went away to college
with me. i know exactly what his cousin is afraid of and it does
happen. once again we have to give credit to the storyteller for
making a legend and making it believable enough that one distraught
child can see the wisdom and find it in his heart to grow and mature
for his bestest friends (especially those related to him).noted that
even without being there gandalf provided the flash in the finale. i
do wonder though if they have enough pints in minas tirith, will
anyone have the nerve to tell the story and get leggers take on the
situation? i thank you for yet another adventure in the mysterious and
wonderous world of life in translation. i often have thought that to
read you in your native language must be like sipping extra fine brandy.

Title: Legacy · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 500
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-09-04 19:43:17
Spoilers!
"Legacy," written for the US Memorial Day, is a reflection for adult
Elboron on the service of his late uncle Boromir. On the anniversary
of Boromir's death, Elboron joins his father Faramir and King Elessar
to celebrate Boromir's bravery and contributions in the War of the
Ring. Elboron compares them to his own experiences as a
soldier--terrible to be sure, but nothing in comparison to the perils
faced by those of his dad's generation.

"Legacy", to me had another, unspoken, parallel--the feelings a 21st
century young American, possibly a soldier, might have when reflecting
on his/her parents or grand parents' service in the Vietnam War or,
especially, in World War II. "Legacy" is another illustration of what
I think Raksha does so well--telling stories that have multiple levels
and making us think.


Title: Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus · Author:
pandemonium_213 · Genres: Poetry · ID: 50
Reviewer: Jael · 2008-09-04 20:17:26
Forgive the fact that this review will be so short, but words
sometimes fail me when asked to explain my reaction to art.

Poetry in fanfiction is rare, and even rarer still is it actually
good. Yours is, and I'm in awe.

Your rhyme and meter are perfect, your metaphors and imagery sublime.
And your defense of the poetic soul in scientific knowledge moves even
this Elven primitive.

Thank you!

Title: A Taste of Home · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 138
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 20:34:48
if you ever felt that merry pandered to pippin just a touch too much,
you need to meet this side of merry.

on behalf of sir pip i challenge you to kitchen knives at two oclock.
oh wait it's a quarter of four if they hurry they have time to get to
the citadel and tea with faramir. he gets much better service and
bigger cuts of the pie, he's made some long time friends in the
kitchen. you know that thanks to this prank they are going to be
offered some very unusual treats in the coming weeks as all those
people pip spoke with try and make merry what he wanted. i think they
need to plan to spend a lot of afternoons visiting the schools and
taking them 'treats'. that way they can keep the ones that come
closest and let someone else enjoy those near missed. does not every
head cook have a candied fruit recipe? how can they call themselves
master of the art if they can not make basic food like that? it just
goes to show that sam understood it years ago when he said they made
ceremonial food not regular meals. oh but the things poor pip did to
make merry happy. are you proud of all the ways you made him miss the
mark? if it hadn't been so entertaining i might have to sharpen my
wit. but it was entertaining and its one i look forward to rereading
on depressing day so thet i can get that silly grin that no one else
understands. thank you.

Title: Of Cake and Crumbs and Distant Dreams · Author: Lindelea ·
Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 688
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 20:55:36
lindelea, this was my first glimpse at this story and i commend you
for not overdoing the lesson on what is minor and what is major. you
have frodo take pippins concerns in hand and let him know that frodo's
major concern is, was, and shall always be his pippers. no matter what
the issue it is better to find someone to share it with who can give
you physical support if not emotional support, and frodo being the
hero from pip's earliest memories once more is just there. right time,
right place. no questions, no editorial comments, just pure love.

at least thats what i read in your writing, and never so clearly as
this one. i have it up in the window next to this one so i can refer
to it as i go along and never do you (frodo) cast doubts that what
ever is troubling pippin is major but you give him (me) comfort and
santucuary in the loving embrace of family, hearth and home.

and such a cute tale with in a tale. i think we need to check the
re-born list and see if they have released hans christian yet cause i
think i know his new address.

this so differs from your long works and proves that no matter the
size you have mastery of your craft and control of your keyboard.
looking forward to many many more tales in a tale. thank you.

Title: The Flute · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 21:15:25
Golden, seem like just o little while ago i was burnishing you ego, is
there no end to your abilities. this is one very nice volley of view
points and plays so well with the musical theme that is so inter woven
thru tolkiens works. the appeal of long distance communication seems
to be a multi-versial idea, and you give it a unique note.

i truly was enraptured by your beginning, the old fellow was so
concerned and caring and you carried that theme so beautifully through
out the piece. you paint a softly melancoly scene and let love and
care move us gently from locale to locale, each setting have the soft
(started to say night air, and realized you didn't specify time in the
second locale only placement) sentimental, soul-searching clime that
adds depth to the pitcure but not sadness.

you use your words to paint such great canvas' of middle earth that i
wish sometimes i could set my vision in front of other people and say
why doesn't reading give you these pitcures we read the same words but
you see nothing and i get techno-color---just one reason i prefer
words to film; i pity my younger relatives because they think jackson
got the whole thing. even he says (said) that the picking and
selecting was hard. so many gorgeous scenes and only so many hours of
viewing.

please continue to write so that the pitcures keep growing. thank you.

Title: Reparation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men · ID: 296
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 21:40:13
Isabeau, i have said it so many times in choosing the one per
subcategory that i am allowing my self to give a ten vote. when i
began reading lort fics off a seach engine hunt; big time novice; i
found your work and feel in love. fortunately there are only about six
of you that it occured with, and luckily there's about twenty of them
i can vote for. your heth sublines have been wonderful, i loved the
blurpy beginnings of andrahar and boromir and really crave more of it,
your dol amroth set is great, and i think this attempt to merge them
into a meeting place is one immense challenge. the addition to brand
to the mix has opened avenues that scream for exploration and your use
of this moment is so embedded in the integrity and honor that you have
placed in all of your players. you expect your characters to have
characer and you make them toe that line, embarrassed--you won't do
that again will you? i am becoming more and more aware as i work
through the list here at mefa just how many morals and life lessons
are covered with a slim coating of fiction and sent out to find those
of us in need of the reminders. thank you for caring about the
character of your characters, it is a worth while endeavor. good luck
and please write faster.

Title: Relief · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General Drabbles · ID: 446
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 22:01:08
now i feel really stupid and very silly, i read and enjoyed the lead
in to this drabble so i hit the link and read this one, moved down and
made a couple of comments. now i pull up the number read the blurp and
think this needs posted with the other nekkid gondorians. not
competing with by closer together. so i hit this link and what's the
first thing i notice, BIG button says nominee; how did i miss that sucker?

so color my little yellow kitty a bit redder, ignore the catty remarks
as posted ( i use a kitty for more then one reason).

you are such a brilliant and talented writer that before next february
i am going to be spending time with my thesarus. there must be better
words for the awe and wonder that is generated at this list of
nominated works.i do not believe any of the writers are getting tired
of the same wonderfuls and fantastics and such but i begin to wonder
if there are not so superlatives that will give me more punch for some
of you, just getting to the list should be an indication that you are
top tier but how can i say this story is less fantastic than that one,
how can i take an olympic gold medal performance and say but 1968's
was better? i'm so glad that there are so many others adding to the
scores and i hope the majority of them agree with my choices.
so many wonders i feel like a kid locked in a toy store over christmas
holidays.

look, but don't touch-- ARE YOU CRAZY i'm going to snuggle as many as
i can before they kick me out of here.

good luck and great life.

Title: Oathbreakers · Author: Thundera Tiger · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 470
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-09-04 22:15:57
This is a very insightful story with sound psychology and an
interpretation of canon which is sensitive as well as original. The
prose is immaculate and though it is heavily based on dialogue, the
story never falters. In the conversation between the brothers, this
one concrete point in time and space opens up to the wider scenario of
the struggles of the peoples of Middle-earth and skillfully places the
encounter between Aragorn and Eowyn in the context of several major
themes of the Tolkienverse. Elladan and Elrohir are eminently suited
to convey such a story line. I like this story very much indeed.

Title: Of Dreams... · Author: Avon · Races: Men: General Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 7
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 22:24:10
babbling about drabbles has been one of the truly fun things i've been
doing lately but this one should be alot easier one its a double
drabble, two it's an aragorn i believe in. this is the character i
want to see win thru, this is the character that has class and couth
and should be the king....not that sometimes thing that people seem to
think was the personification of generations of breeding and battling.
i thank you for taking the time to give us this small introspective
moment that gives such depth and character to one of the most written
about member of the fellowship. it is interesting how your site page
even adds that light touch of class that light gray gives to a
gentleman's stationary. it seems i may have to do some babbling
because if i do not want to give your story away i can not say much
more about your writing style, i can not marvel over you brevity
because it is not a single. if i comment on the way he dreams i will
need that spoiler button, and i think everyone should get to read this
with a clear, clean slate so that the vast and wonderful fullness of
the piece can inspire them. you present a theory that has long been my
interpretation of aragorn and his methods of getting where he's going,
i wish more of the players that we read so often could have so
delicate a hand as yours exposing their "humanity" it's so hard to do
with elves and dwarfs but there is no politacally corrected word that
i have been exposed to yet.

Title: Scholarship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 43
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-09-04 22:26:20
This is an amusing little tale that shows Faramir as a gifted father.
It is charming to imagine that his young son would confide in him on
such a delicate topic, and Faramir handles it very tactfully. The
Karmasutra reference at the end is a nice wee joke.

Title: Autumn · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 489
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 23:09:58
hi Linda i forget does your aragorn have a good singing voice cause i
foresee a rousing rendetion of "let it snow" coming in the near future.
nice, comforting images. you have once again taken one hundred or less
words and made a warm fuzzy feeling blossom in the crisp fall air.

you make the warm fuzzy even warmer by adding his favorite gal and a
little cottage ( boy what an understatement). but really if i was not
assured that he is most likely in one of his homes i could see a
little cottage some where between rivendell and the shire so they
could make little jaunts to visit family in both places. now where did
we leave the fuzzy friends that were so missing from his childhood and
ranger-days. i have often thought that once he settled down he was one
of those people who could not help adopting every stray he meets. he
is such a champion of the underdog. ( i do not see him as a cat
person, too independent for his needs.) so let's see where you can
trim five words so we can tag on.... with his dog lying near.

aren't you glad i don't ask for much? tell you what don't mess with
this perfection, i'll settle for another stand alone story with
aragorn and arwen visiting faramir and eowyn and finding a litter of
puppies for them to raise and share between the four of them. think of
the many little my pups better then yours you could play on.

thank you for giving so much pleasure to so many besides myself, i
know cause i've read the comments under other stories. you are loved.

Title: Engineering · Author: SurgicalSteel · Races: Men: Minas Tirith
· ID: 696
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-04 23:41:51
surgical, note name and date please. this is such a great stand alone
story that adds just a nice little history to a story that i adored
reading. learning more about serinde is one of the joys of reading the
works of an author who is as talented and prolific as you are. the
idea that you took a small aside in a larger tale an posted it off to
the side in more exquisite detail makes following your story easier.
you alluded to the fact that serinde had oppurtunity to doctor a young
fari before she was driven out of gondor and it is a humble little
piece that should be taking bows to a standing ovation if the support
i have seen off this list find the time and leisure to come out and
vote. given the amount of education it takes to achieve the level of
professional height, i would expect you to be able to express
yourself; given your profession i would hope you are able to translate
tech to an average intellegence; what blows me away is the artistry
and delicacy of the ballet you perform moving us from the heights of
human emotion and the depths of human despair. you make readers cry
over the losses and soar with each wind current as fate takes us on
that rollercoaster ride that is lotr. you give us a strong and
wonderful embracable woman who i would be overjoyed to have over for
dinner.

Title: The Chieftain of the Dunedain · Author: Avon · Races: Men:
Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 623
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 00:08:19
Spoilers!
Avon, you were a total unknown to me before mefa and i hope that after
mefa's i will find many more of your works they are such intense
little snippets and seem to reflect much light on some of the
characters that i like. it is so much easier to be word-y about the
characters that i enjoy. your use of a more mature halabarad makes
this moment mean just that much more. i think one of the numbers i've
seen thrown around would say the aragorn is one-sixty-fourth elf, but
never have i seen him as so elf-ish. i geuss so much of what we see of
aragorn is his expression of himself, he seems to be able to dress the
mood he wants to portray on each occasion as he approaches them but i
had never thought about it untill reading your post. i would geuss
that early in his time with the rangers it was comforting and not
deliberate flaunting that kept so many of the elven parts and pieces
close to the surface, also as halabarad spends more time with aragorn
he will become more and more an independent idea rather then an ideal.
but it may never be easy to loss that giggly little guy that was so
dear and cherished. my aragorn and from the looks of it yours too is
one of those souls who collects various relations and friends and
makes them FAMILY. he has such a giant heart that the more rooms he
fills up the more room he makes for more people. thank you for sharing
a tender ranger moment.

Title: Leaving Home · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 39
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 00:42:03
if everything i read had to have deeper meanings, this story would be
in so much trouble with the pscho analizers. but since i read to enjoy
myself this story was pure mother-lode, pun not intended but not too
bad either. eowyn is grown and has found her place in life and now we
can all just follow along and wait for the laughs, she has had it with
dark and dreary, and having a child has given her new purpose in life.
jealousy is a hard thing to wrestle with and you have found a method
of grappling that let's the rest of us sit on the side lines and call
out advice to the particapate of our choice. and young elboron seems
to want to test all the choices. by giving the solution you do, you
move the oppenent into position to be a major ally and then you give
him a unexpected oppenent that he won't want to challenge (at least
not right now). i'm not sure if the authors write the blurps or not
but i think next year i may start reading them earlier. several of the
blurps i've read today just don't seem to be beneficial to attractong
readers. i know my note to self when reading and evaluating choices
seems so much more succent and i think if this is not long enough now
i may hit the button and give it to you free of charge. as luck would
have it by the time i wish you luck and long life our thousand
characters will be spend and i won't have to be the spoiler/

Title: Dispelling the Fog · Author: fantasyfan · Races: Other Beings ·
ID: 642
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 00:59:40
if i hadn't promised myself that my picks as best in each offering was
going to get a ten review i'd be tempted to quit with a good job.

of all the mean things to do. i started this story hoping for so musch
and i got even then that. you lead us through a very pretty garden and
you show us many wonders of his home and his domain. there are miles
and miles of gorgeous scenery. there are small little details and
snippets of ideas.

this may be one of those cases where a lingust is better employed than
a lawyer. you let the character answer the question. but i have a
feeling that he would be a front running politician if he lived in
this world, except that his anti-establishment attitude would prevent
him from accepting the nomination. and i'm not sure any vetting
commity would give him the nod. he is much too much the maverick that
none can second guess because none are on his brainlink. if we were to
allow the three remaining at tolkiens ending to go back and spend time
i bet you pippin could crack the code of silence with talking that
this character seems to prefect. even better than hiding in plain
sight talk unendingly with no information being exchange,

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU KNOW HOW THEY FEEL? just for that your last line
was killer. keep up the hard work and i look foreward to reading you
for years.

Title: The War of Wrath · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Elves: Drabbles ·
ID: 120
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 01:13:38
Now, this has to be one of the most fantastic drabbles I've ever read,
particularly as it is also a fantastic poem! All hail Ingwion, who led
the forces of the Eldar who came from Aman with the Valar and their
Maiar to array themselves against Morgoth!

The story is superbly told, the images bright and shining as Ingwion's
shield, the rhyming perfect, the scanning properly done.

I think this has just gone to the top of my list of favorite Tanaqui
drabbles! Wonderful!

Title: The Game of Kings · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor · ID: 28
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 01:21:32
Spoilers!
Ah, but there is a lot that Barliman Butterbur doesn't know about
certain recurring guests. He doesn't understand the games of Kings
played by two of the Rangers who often come in together? Others seem
interested enough. But to refer to it as [the Game of Kings]--well!

The irony is well worked into the tale, and the manner in which other
guests express their own interest or apply their own names and moves
is well done as well. A nice, different look at how time might well
have been spent by Strider and his companions when in Bree.

Title: Dark Light · Author: Makamu · Races: Villains · ID: 585
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 01:21:43
this was a category that i almost gave a pass, unlike poetry i can not
say i was pleasantly surprised by enjoying the works i read. but your
writing style and talent deserve applause also. your subject matter in
my opinion needs sanitizing not because of the slash give me a good
groping session between glorfindel and erestor for example. evil is
bad and in order for good to triumph then evil needs to end, you keep
it alive in a non-remorseful sauron and i hate that idea. i would
never have imagined that i had so much more of frodo in me than sam.
smeagel needs to prevail over gollum and i want sauron to have at
least some hope of finding glorious moments away from that lover of
his. but as i have had to tell 'friends' you called me to give you
shelter when he hurt you, i testified in court that he hurt you, you
go back to him now wipe me out of your address book i don't want an
invite to your funereal. only the abuse-ee can leave the abuser and no
matter how he sugar coats the past melkor had no redeeming values by
the time he got to sauron. maybe namo knows a good shrink and i'm not
talking freud and jung. maybe during the reliving of the experience he
will acknowledge the wrongness and repent,can i keep that little hope?
ps your prose is very pretty please write more on other subjects.

Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 01:30:22
Spoilers!
She has other names besides Yavanna, and is as capable of grief as is
any other who knows life within Arda.

This glimpse of her grief after the destruction of the two Trees is
superbly done, with a delicacy that we must appreciate as we stand
beside the Lady of Fecundity and share in her mourning.

A sad tale, but in the end gently hopeful. We can rejoice, knowing
that already the gifts of Sun and Moon are being readied....

Title: Regarding Ents · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 525
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 01:37:42
Spoilers!
How can Merry and Pippin truly explain what happened to them and the
nature of Ents to their cousins, there on the Field of Cormallen?
There is so much to try to understand, now that Pippin is definitely
healing and Frodo and Sam are finally awake once more!

This attempt is well described, and we can empathize with our beloved
Sam as he tries--vainly, so far--to take it all in. A nice response to
Shirebound's challenge.

Title: A Hobbity Wizard · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Childhood ·
ID: 596
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 01:49:25
Spoilers!
Gandalf probably should not have agreed to watch Pippin that day, and
he definitely ought not to have told him that particular story. Now on
a quest to save an enchanted princess, he follows a young Took
throughout the Marish and Buckland, and finds himself looked at
askance by Hobbits, suspected of having flung plums, sharing is stolen
goodies, and seeking the mystical Golden Chalice in order to break the
spell.

No, he shouldn't have done several things, but I doubt he's sorry he
did, once the adventure is over.

A wonderful, delightful tale of our Pippin as a child at his Pippinish
best.

Title: Stabat Mater · Author: iorhael · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 666
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 01:54:54
If indeed those we've loved who've left this life are able to watch
our accomplishments, how must they feel when we are at our lowest?

Here we find ourselves weeping with Primula Brandybuck Baggins. How
much is accomplished, but at what a cost!

Grievous to read; well written.

Title: The Quest for the Hairless Cat · Author: GamgeeFest · Races:
Hobbits: Childhood · ID: 524
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 01:58:05
Spoilers!
Young Pippin was terribly gullible, and it was difficult to refrain
from filling his head with a great deal of nonsense. So, when he was
advised of the story of the hairless cats, he set off with the full
intent of finding one----

----only to truly find one, many years distant, many miles distant,
turning the table neatly on Merry.

Humorous and delightful!

Title: Frogdom · Author: Neilia · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands · ID: 192
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 02:07:31
Spoilers!
Now, just how many times must Gandalf threaten to transform certain
people into something else before he is goaded into doing so? Pippin
finds out, to everyone's horror and his chagrin. Poor little
Hobbit--but perhaps he deserves it for some of what he's said and
done! And as much as they love him, all agree he won't be the worse
for wear if he has to suffer with it for a day....

Well, all except for Pippin, of course.

Humorous AU--quite a read for the chuckles.

Title: The Waker · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 287
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 02:07:42
Spoilers!
villians was not a category i looked forward to and i must admit my
first read of your work almost ended your shot for my ten points.
dyslexic reaction the title was WALker, kept waiting for the walking
to occur. was of course not please that the story was so confusing, so
put it on the back burner and went on to other things. came back open
the file and lo and behold it made much more sense that it woke up.
now i can tell you that you are truly an amazing plotter. who else has
thought of making this a sentinent being. it woke up and it heard
voices, have you contacted freud. there must be sinister meanings and
twisted plots in the offing. i think that one of the reasons i want to
give you my ten points is that i am sold on the idea that we need to
know more about the creature, do you think you can find ten or tweve
little snippets, we can get a nice graphic artist interested and maybe
put out a 2010 calender. "and after the WAR OF THE RING....."

oh wait you don't own it i don't own it , artist won't own it. one
more way i won't make my fortune. it could have been worth billions in
residual earnings, action figures, paper plates for kiddy parties.
greeting cards. oh the losses. find i haven't babbled quite enough so
let me wish you well on our writing career and say that i will double
check my titles more frequently. looking forward to reading you in the
future. luck.

Title: Fatherhood · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 547
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 02:14:12
Spoilers!
Ah, it appears it is never to early to prepare for the future, and in
Lothiriel's case there is possibly excellent reason to present her
with a pony and teach her to ride now, even as the six-year-old is
sweetening her morning bread.

A foretaste of the future, but intent and eventual reality differed
far more than one might have thought at the time.

And once again Ann displays her mastery at saying so very much with
such economy of words.

Title: Choices · Author: brindlemom2 · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 184
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 02:36:51
personally i never thought he was the sharpest knife in the drawer,
but this.....stupidity.

you write with a flair for the dramatic, you keep your secrets as long
as possible and you do it smashingly well. in thirty six words i can
tell you i like your style but not your story now i have to find words
to say why with telling the plot line or i have to hit the spoiler button.

the fact that i like to let an author give me as little or as much as
they think a scene deserves plays well with this piece. you give very
little background either to your characters or your scene. you have
these beings walking on a barely furnished set, delivering stark
unforgiving lines of dialog to abrupt news in devasting fashion and
some how avoid being bitter or hateful, the mood never descends into
sorrow or hopelessness and you leave the remaining standing there
looking out on a future that will ever be not what is hoped and always
more than is dreamed.

the past paragraph is a work of art and you should frame it somewhere
important.

the next to the last paragraph: has he been experimenting with a pipe
somewhere\when that we missed. how deluded can he be in his internal
vision, yes i can believe he loves him beyond all bounds but should
not he have at least a little more realistic view point here?

Title: Like Roses over a Fence · Author: Ellie · Times: First Age and
Prior: House of Finwe · ID: 110
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 02:58:45
Ellie,i am becoming more and more convinced that while i am not a
tolkien fan, i am a bit more than a lord of the rings fan. i had
qualms abour several sub categories and thos was one of them.
finwe-ism seemed very academic to me. you need a finely chaarted guide
to work through who's who and who was with who and who was married to
who and then there's the fact that most of that should have probably
been whom. but all that aside i decided to vote for your story because
if i just took what you wrote and left all the other stuff fall from
mind you are writing about three "war-widows" who fill those roles in
varying degrees and with very different end resolve. you give us three
different and dramatic roles and you let each of the characters
interact with the emotions and thoughts that the others uncover in
very believable ways, it seems that with very little change in your
dialog we could have a modern family disaster being talked about.
mother, daughter, and granddaughter discussing iraq. a career military
man delaying his retirement for one more shot at glory. a dutiful son
who enlisted thinking twenty years and great retirement and a gung-ho
youngster who rushed in after 9-11 and it could very well play out
here. of course we may have to switch whos married to who so that the
questions about reasonings would match the spouses not on stage.
technology will get it sorted out.

that's the basic reason i picked your story it seemed easy to believe.

Title: NIGHT and FOREST: A Glimpse of Beauty · Author: Fiondil ·
Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 554
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-05 03:08:46
Spoilers!
Beren strikes me as a character who could be mined for some awesome
fanfiction by the right writer. Fiondil is definitely right for this
larger-than-life hero, for he brings him to vivid and real life in the
reader's eyes, without lessening his unstinting heroism.

What I liked most in the story was the conveyance that the years of
Beren's wandering and fighting the monsters of shadowed lands had
scarred his soul as well as his body, taking even the ability, so
important in Tolkien's heroes, to appreciate the beauty of the stars.
And then, of course, after months of aimless wandering in Doriath,
Beren beholds his destiny in the form of the fairest woman ever to
walk in Middle-earth.

The last line brings tears of joy to my eyes; it is that good.

Title: Tales from Tol Eressëa · Author: shirebound · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 214
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 03:19:05
shirebound, this is the next to last of my full ten point reviews and
i find in looking over the "story" i have a question. what prompted
you to leave them as one story instead of seperate ficlets? as you
have heard a few times i really like your writings. these three are so
adorable that i must admit that i'm glad i don't have to choose
between them. the first one made me laugh that even leaving his domain
does not relieve an elf lord of his plotting to organize everyone's
time and energy into useful and forfill pastimes. hope to find out
what he plots next. the second one was so very sam-y. i could hear
every objection he was planning to make and you took lessons from that
elf didn't you? number threes part one i remember that taste sensation
with near climax-y feelings. ohhhh! i can also remember an occasion
when things went south fast, who knew she would prove to be allergic.
she also can't deal with coconut oil internally or externally. and
then of course the second half of three-- wonderfully plotted and
executed you have kept the title of master of the craft and i'm proud
to say that the valar took a vote and decided to let lots of others
take their titles this year so that you won't be so lonely at the top
of the heap. just keep throwing scraps over the edge and i promise the
wargs will not come to get you.

Title: Unwilling · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 64
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-05 03:31:36
Spoilers!
This drabble really makes me resent the frenetic pace of modern life,
not to mention traffic jams and noise; even though I'm happily
high-tech; it's just so sad. Tolkien would approve of the piece, and
it reminds me of his attitude and themes.

Title: Old Friends · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 651
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-05 03:39:39
Spoilers!
Marta. i told you i read it first on the mefas what i didn't say was i
saved it to be the last of my ten point votes. my first went to the
zany thing pulled off by pip healers and my last goes to my bestest
role model,gimli ... oh i'm sorry you probably thought this was about
you, hmm i think i've heard that sentence some where before. sorry but
this one is spoil-able. you have given my thoughts direct access to
the surface an eternity with all these oh so perfect beings, give me
relief. a pimple. and elf with two left feet ( ps i'm writing that
one) a whoopie cushion, for the love of eru. the only bone of
contention i would raise is that if gandalf is not happy in those
bones why is he still carting them around he can go back to mr. even
more and better than an elf, he is after all a maia and they only need
bodies to interact with lesser beings, in fact he better practice
cause you know gimmers only got so much he can give here. ah no that
brings sad thoughts and we don't want sadness near this little gem it
has so much sparkling to do it needs the shadows kept away. maybe we
should get you in the club that lets gandalf vist the others on the
other side of that . oh wait they were only hanging out there waiting
for aragorn to come....oh that's right gimli has yet another different
dimension to go to. someone get ahold of tolkien we need to cut a
better deal for afterlifes.

Title: Circle of Silver · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of
Finwe · ID: 717
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 04:13:04
Spoilers!
The news came unexpectedly, and accompanied by a traumatized child.
That Gil-galad began his reign as High King of the Noldor East of the
Sea by seeking to ease the state of the child speaks volumes about the
type of king he would prove.

Well crafted.

Title: Tulip Takes a Tumble · Author: Cathleen · Genres: Humor · ID: 616
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 04:40:57
Spoilers!
Well, Tulip TOLD him not to jump out of the rafters of the barn onto
the haystack, but Pippin would do so anyway, landing badly at that and
injuring the two of them. When Paladin drove the moral home with the
story of the loss of his Sammy Lambie, Eglantine found herself shaking
her head. Just how many "little" lads were there really in her family?

Pippin and Tulip at their best.

Title: A Fair Trial · Author: Maeve Riannon · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 403
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 05:05:57
Yes, hilarious! Excellent use of humor. Never thought I'd ever say,
"Poor Sauron," but had he stayed for THIS trial that would be what
he'd come to! I think he and Melian made the right choice....

Title: Parting Gifts · Author: Fiondil · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Post-Ring War · ID: 452
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 05:22:31
He actually found dying the easy part; but he could not help worrying
for his closest friend.

The passing of the strangest of Elvelloniath as told from his own
perspective, told in Fiondil's inimitable style. Sad and eminently
joyful at the same time. Full worthy of its subject!

Title: Elanor of Westmarch: The Return · Author: Baranduin · Races:
Hobbits: Family · ID: 78
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 05:58:17
Spoilers!
She'd always hoped she would see them again, and when she did it was
at the beginning of her own great adventure.

A very sweet, poignant tale of seeking and finding the way at last,
and finding that memories can be sustaining.

Title: Of Dreams... · Author: Avon · Races: Men: General Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 7
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 06:04:25
Spoilers!
Of what does the lonely Ranger dream as he walks the roads and sits in
dark corners of inns? Not power, although it is offered him.

A wonderful characterization of movie-Aragorn, and I like to think of
book-Aragorn as well.

Title: --and it was done · Author: Neoinean · Genres: Adventure · ID: 527
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-09-05 08:14:53
I'm not usually a fan of the Aragorn or Legolas is in peril and one
rescues the other kind of story,but this excellent tale is an
exception to the rule as it adds a different and thought provoking
angle to a familiar plot.
This time Legolas is in prison and Aragorn and his Rangers go to
rescue him.We are used to reading this kind of story and forgetting
that to accomplishing such a mission usually demands a price paid in
blood.
I love Neoinean's thoughtful Aragorn, who is all too well aware that
his friend's rescue comes at a price.Despite having to kill or be
killed,Aragorn does not lose his humanity and is careful to only stun
a boy on guard and wish he did not have to do it.

We learn Legolas is badly injured and has been cruelly treated by his
captors,but till the questions remain.

Killing is killing,whatever the reason and how can a man kill and
remain a good man?

This excellent story will leave the reader with plenty of food for
thought.

Title: My Brother. My Captain. My King. · Author: Amarok · Times: Late
Third Age · ID: 602
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-09-05 08:30:09
Spoilers!
I've never been a big Boromir fan,unlike some, but this story made me
feel for him.The author skilfully conveys Boromir's initial suspicion
and dislike of Aragorn and how it is eventually overcome.

I especially liked the moment in which Boromir overcomes the
temptation to let Aragorn fall to his death by thinking of his brother.

The ending of this fine film verse story,should bring a tear to any
reader's eye.

Title: Hope comes for Estel · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 622
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-09-05 08:48:54
Spoilers!
This story describes a scene I often wish that Tolkien had written,but
did not.Faramir comes secretly to see Aragorn at Cormallen and find
out how the land lies.

I enjoyed this story,although my personal views differ somewhat,as I
think an instant bond formed between Aragorn and Faramir and that
Aragorn also had far sight.

I especially enjoyed Aragorn's musings about the problems facing him
as King,something that many writers tend to gloss over.

Another delight in this well written story was Aragorn's and Faramir's
thoughts about Gandalf.

Title: To Give Hope · Author: peredhil lover · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 456
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 14:26:14
Overwhelmed at the sudden loss of her husband and the equally sudden
change of her fortunes and habitation, Gilraen tries to come to terms
with all that is new in her life as she finds herself and her son now
part of the household of Elrond of Rivendell. The tale of how small
Aragorn son of Arathorn became the Hope not only for Men but for all
the Free Peoples of Middle Earth.

The conflicts between Gilraen's grief and feelings of duty are well
conveyed.

Title: The Captain's Mare · Author: The Lauderdale · Races: Villains ·
ID: 575
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 14:47:59
Spoilers!
This has to be one of the strangest stories on offer, and yet is
fascinating, humorous, and yet filled with a pathos one doesn't
usually expect to see in stories about orcs, and from a goblin's point
of view. The unnamed protagonist actually likes horses--loves them,
even; and there's one he finds he truly wants to please and see
calmed, although this mare will have nothing to do with him. Was she
Theodred's mare? We have no proof; but it's plain she will have no
truck with orcs.

For all the awfulness of the orc's actions, we still find ourselves
empathizing with him as one of Sauron's mannish allies finally wins
the mare's compliance. And we can certainly appreciate why the little
goblin grieves as she is lead away by someone else.

Worth the read no matter what you think of the subject matter.

Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 14:54:36
Spoilers!
Perhaps it was merely an evil dream, a recall from the final days of
the Third Age, that woke him; but once awake the terror focused on his
son, and on whether or not the child slept comfortably.

The rational fears we often hold over the safety of our babes are well
expressed, as are the descriptions of father and son's behavior.

Nicely done.

Title: Feelings of Superiority · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 362
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 15:04:15
Spoilers!
We all tend to wish to feel superior to others at times, and in each
of these six drabbles we see this narcissism at work as none of the
speakers truly wishes to understand the others each pities.

Human nature is well conveyed indeed. And the one I grieve for most is
the youth left behind in Numenor. How he and his father have been cozened!

Title: Tonight We Are Alive · Author: Eyborg · Races: Dwarves · ID: 504
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-05 15:09:40
Spoilers!
This was written, she says, because there are not enough dwarf
romances out there.

May there be more--many, many more! With this among them as one of the
most beautiful stones, may we have a dwarf's necklace of such jewels
as this!

Lovely!

Title: Parth Galen · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 705
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-05 16:18:20
Spoilers!
As I was about half way through this short AU, I found myself
wondering just how different things would be because it looked like
Frodo would be going off to Mordor completely alone (which would have
probably had been disastrous). So when Sam showed up before the end I
was duly surprised, yet also felt that I should not have been
surprised. Up to that point "Parth Galen" had been thoroughly
canonical except for its explicitly AU element, going so far as to use
Tolkien's dialogue. It felt very much like a gapfiller, which is a
quality I especially admire in AU stories

This canon-compliance allows Isabeau to examine some fascinating
issues surrounding Boromir's temptation through the Ring, using both
her personal universe and Tolkien's themes of honor and duty. I found
myself really connecting with this Boromir, and found this
interpretation of his character to fit very well both with the family
in which he grew up and his canonical deeds (such as his drive to
redeem himself.) Nicely done, Isa!

Title: Courage · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 41
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-05 22:00:42
Spoilers!
Good build-up to the punchline - with a "coda" that adds a more
serious after-note, which I found was a very intrepid touch.

I early on had the suspicion that Gimli's concern had to do with some
sea-food (it seems a favourite theme with many writers of humour
dealing with Dol Amroth), but Annmarwalk kept me guessing, discarding
theories and narrowing down choices with each line - which kept me
nicely engaged in this little ficlet.

The characterisations were spot on - and I especially liked imagining
Gimli's suspicious scowl and Legolas' ambiguous feeling at memories of
the Sea.

Title: Giving Gifts · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 426
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-05 22:38:15
Spoilers!
Despite the canon-inconsistencies, I found this story amusing and
engaging. The wry humour of the narrative itself and of the
protagonists - whether direct like Imrahil or indirect as Denethor via
his letter - has just the right balance between light-hearted and
acerbic, and I like to imagine that the relationship between the two
brothers-in-law could encompass this lighter note.

The repetition of the ["Fthweet"] cracked me up, as well as the
picture of the usually graceful Finduilas having two left feet (and
Denethor apparently knowing it, although all his preparation proved in
vain after all.)

Oh, and the last line - revenge is sweet! The mind boggles what
Boromir would come up with after reading this book!

Title: The King's Time · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama: Final
Partings · ID: 333
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 00:48:55
poignant, so many ways we measure time.

Title: Pippin and Tulip's Excellent Adventure · Author: Cathleen ·
Times: Mid Third Age: Eriador · ID: 595
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:02:27
great, wonderful view of a day in the life....

Title: The Quest for the Hairless Cat · Author: GamgeeFest · Races:
Hobbits: Childhood · ID: 524
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:06:11
and no matter how well you write they are the ugliest critters.

Title: A Problem Shared · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: Mirkwood Elves ·
ID: 169
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:11:54
sometimes what you see is whaat you get other times its a whole nother
conversation.

Title: Messengers from the West · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Genres:
Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 98
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:13:39
brothers!!

don't want to live without mine.

Title: The Other · Author: Dana/Lindelea CoAuthors · Genres: Horror ·
ID: 27
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:15:40
scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Five Hair Care Tips for Rohirrim · Author: EdorasLass · Genres:
Humor · ID: 71
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:17:29
you left out the value of hot and cold blow drying
hot-summer
cold-winter

Title: A Friend's Hug · Author: Golden · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Friendship · ID: 142
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:22:19
love fling therapy myself nothing like a few good phlopps to ed anger
yourself.

Title: Return of the King · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 355
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:31:37
and once again it comes down to an oath, well written.

Title: Giving Gifts · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 426
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:37:30
[he who laughs last....] cute

Title: Shall We Dance? · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Steward's Family · ID: 93
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:42:53
was so movedby denethor as you show him here

Title: There shall be Mirth at our Meeting · Author: Imhiriel ·
Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 377
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:47:26
short to the point and funny

Title: Orc Dreams · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 448
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:49:28
bizarre

Title: Sam's Crosswise Verse · Author: Elanor Gardner · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 519
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 01:57:12
such pitcures you paint

Title: I Married for Love · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Poetry ·
ID: 661
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 02:00:52
love doesn''t ask for that it wants it ask what they want. well written.

Title: Hope comes for Estel · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 622
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 02:30:25
with as full a plate as you give aragorn, he really needed this shot
in the arm.

Title: The Kindly Airs · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 480
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 02:32:44
how could so vital a point of view be so overlooked, thank you for
going outside the box set.

Title: A Great Evil Unmade · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 267
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 02:40:53
great stuff must find your other works.

Title: Loss · Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort ·
ID: 196
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 02:42:01
damn, girl; you are good.

Title: Gone Amiss · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 44
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 02:46:29
you capture that feeling with pizazz

Title: The Heart of a Home · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 257
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 02:50:32
many times he has come home to the abode,
now he returns to home.

Title: Wild Swan · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 328
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 02:58:42
beautiful sword play
thrust
counter
recover
advance
heated volley
reposition
recointre
recover
salute a winner
salute the field
retire from the ranks


Title: The Prisoner of Dol Guldur · Author: Soledad · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 102
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 03:12:01
your thranduil makes me weep, so much he survives.

Title: Primum Non Nocere (First, Do No Harm) · Author: febobe ·
Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 628
Reviewer: mbumpus_99 · 2008-09-06 03:51:02
This story is very well-written, and veers from the accepted theory
that Eowyn was incompetent as a healer. The way she comforts Frodo is
so simple and yet so profound as to make me wonder why nobody else -
including the so-wise Elves - ever thought of it. Writing the story
from two points of view was genius as well.

Very nicely done!

Title: Utúlie'n Aurë · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 163
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-06 04:12:56
This draws a touching connection between the bloody First Age wars and
the Ring War. Nice job capturing the greater sacrifice, in few words.

Title: A Maid Waiting · Author: Larner · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 691
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-06 05:30:27
Spoilers!
Larner gives us a fascinating look at life 'below stairs' in the
Citadel after the Ring War's end, through the eyes of a chambermaid,
who learns that service can be more than a means to an end. Excellent
characterisations of the OC's; and I loved the ending.

Title: Star-songs of the Eorlingas · Author: Tanaqui · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 291
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-06 05:37:23
Spoilers!
A lovely series of drabbles, each one focussing on a different star
myth of the Rohirrim, as Eowyn teaches Faramir the Eorlings'
interpretations of the constellations. Beautifully written and
inventive, there is a wonderful Norse/Anglo-Saxon feel to Eowyn's
speech and the legends themselves that fits in well with all we know
of Tolkien's Rohirrim.

Title: Parting Gifts · Author: Fiondil · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Post-Ring War · ID: 452
Reviewer: mbumpus_99 · 2008-09-06 07:30:22
This is a lovely piece, detailing the last moments of a monumental
friendship. The characters are drawn carefully and well, from Legolas
and Gimli to the various others who float into and out of focus. We
even get a glimpse of some of Fiondil's beloved Valar, exquisitely
portrayed, as always.

Talent turns this story from bittersweet to hopeful, leaving one
nodding in satisfaction rather than sniffing with sadness. Although I
have to admit I did sniff - the banter between Legolas and Gimli was
so poignant that one couldn't help but feel for them both as they
exchanged their last gifts.

Nicely done, Fiondil - and thank you.


Title: Hold To Hope · Author: Nieriel Raina · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 709
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-06 07:39:48
Spoilers!
The party sent to Imladris returns without the one whose presence
Thranduil most strongly desires. How to deal with the concern?'

A very realistic reaction to the concern he must have felt on learning
his son was now one of the Nine Walkers.

Title: Battle upon the Quays · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 376
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-06 07:44:49
Spoilers!
With feints and supposed retreats the attackers lead the defenders
away. One of those commanding the assault offers himself as bait,
while another presses the attack.

In spite of (or possibly due to) its brevity, this drabble managed to
convey the anxiety and confusion felt by the Umbari defender as he
loses sight of the prince whom he'd thought their prize to find
himself face to face with....

Wonderfully done!

Title: Candles · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 460
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-06 07:50:49
Spoilers!
A most gentle, poignant Yule story. The idea of Frodo being seen by
Sam as a jewel in a setting of light is uplifting and so in keeping
with my own view of both of these Hobbits....

Very sweet, and will be part of my Yule traditions to read from now on.

Title: Flame of Life · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 114
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-06 07:56:07
Spoilers!
This declaration by the Imperishable Flame is remarkable and
uplifting, and full worthy to be read and reread. And may we ever
seek--and find--it, as to accomplish that we must look into the face
of the Creator himself.

Inspirational!

Title: Maglor's Song · Author: Robinka · Genres: Poetry: Drama · ID: 398
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-06 08:00:20
Spoilers!
A rather sad poem for one of the great tragic heroes of the
Silmarillion. So much lost; so long he must wander, having at the end
given over his claim for the the Silmaril captured to the keeping of
the Sea.

Title: Good King Elessar · Author: Dreamflower · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 2
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:16:39
you remind us to sometimes look into the shadows because good can hide
as well as evil.

Title: Invisible Ink · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Boromir or Faramir · ID: 4
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:18:26
there are reasons its called body art and you are a different kind of
artist. thank you.

Title: Chance Encounter · Author: przed · Races: Men: Steward's Family
· ID: 5
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:21:18
at two or twenty, the words i do it myself may strike fear in the
adults around us.

Title: The Last Messenger: A Tale of Numenor · Author: Fiondil ·
Times: Second and Early Third Age · ID: 8
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:23:02
... and your cover story is.....

Title: Hearts of Stone · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 12
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:28:48
very moving

Title: The Onion Riddle · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 13
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:32:14
he lectures them about rumors and then not knowing more rumors
embarrasses himself; where the fairness of life?

Title: Thoughtful Company · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Humor: Gondor
· ID: 16
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:35:22
best way to expand intellect

Title: Beggar's Night · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor: Shire · ID: 15
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:38:22
if you have hobbits, there is food in the offing, but who know about
the other five....ohh.....ahhh

Title: Restoration · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Races: Men:
Minas Tirith · ID: 19
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:41:01
a bond is made now we await the outcome...well scored.

Title: In Good Company · Author: foxrafer (csevans8) · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 20
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:43:46
some of us needs freinds for just these moments.

Title: Playing with Fire · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 21
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:45:47
somethings can be taught others have to be experienced and only a
loving parent could do it so well.

Title: Horse Sense · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 22
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:47:54
just plain hobbity thinking... see he's been converted already.

Title: I Can't · Author: Antane · Races: Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 24
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:51:17
glowing, glittering gems of story

Title: The Shadow · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 25
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:54:37
to paraphrase gandalf: he loved him and he hated him as he loved and
hated himself, he is engraved in the new pattern of frodos life.

Title: The North Delving Incident · Author: Dana · Genres: Drama · ID: 26
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:56:07
this might have fared better in the horrors category, well written but
horrifying

Title: The Game of Kings · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor · ID: 28
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-06 18:57:16
never got the game, but nice illusions

Title: All That Remained · Author: Allee · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 155
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-09-06 21:22:07
Spoilers!
This is a beautifully written and very moving story.Poor Aragorn and
poor Gilraen.Grief does indeed make people add oddly.It is brave to
draw on your own experiences,but in so doing,makes your work richer
and maybe you will help others who read this excellent story.
The depiction of Poor Gilraen, is heartrending, but all too true to
life.and well writtenYou portray the different personalities of the
Elladan and Elrohir well here. They remind me a little of the brothers
in "Supernatural"!Thank Goodness they found Gilraen before she could
harm herself.I liked the way that Gilraen and Elladan helped each other.
The ending is both beautiful and uplifting.

Title: There shall be Mirth at our Meeting · Author: Imhiriel ·
Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 377
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-07 00:32:13
Spoilers!
This is indeed an unusual perspective, and a very welcome one. You
imagined the East wind very much within the boundaries the Professor
established, even while giving it a voice of its own. Well done.

Title: Five Turnings of the Year · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 685
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-09-07 00:35:15
Spoilers!
Five very poignant vignettes about the Yules before, during and after
the Ring War. Merry and Pippin and their concern for their cousin
Frodo are the common thread between them all, and how following their
cousin on his quest changed them. For the most part the cast consists
of hobbits doing what hobbits do best-eating, drinking and
celebrating, but members of the Fellowship also make an appearance in
one of the parts. I particularly like Dana's Boromir. Though the
individual stories are brief, they nonetheless convey the author's
message that throughout life's changes, friends are what help you through.

Title: Comfort · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves: House of Elrond · ID: 161
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-09-07 00:46:40
Spoilers!
I've often wondered why Elladan and Elrohir were considered
Half-Elven, when they were in fact mostly Elven and Maia and a bit
human. Nonetheless, Tolkien always depicts them, both in LOTR and
other works, as straddling both worlds, moving among both Elves and
Men. Like their father, they too succor the Dunedain, albeit in a more
active fashion, often riding with the Northern Rangers. In this story
Bodkin deftly shows that they do in fact feel kinship with their
distant mortal cousins, and warmly depicts the loving relationship
between two brothers who are closer than most, as Elladan tries to
comfort his brother after a patrol gone wrong. The humorous chaffing
common to some siblings helps to hide his deeper concern. Though
brief, the differences in personality between the two twins are marked
in the story, despite their similar appearances.

Title: Primum Non Nocere (First, Do No Harm) · Author: febobe ·
Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 628
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-09-07 02:06:43
Aiyeee! What a great story!

First of all, Sam's voice is just perfect. In some stories I've read
his dialect is overdone, too much of aw-shucks hokiness, but this
voice is just perfectly balanced between what Sam says, and how he
says it. There's so much simple hobbity wisdom, as well as his own
honesty and forthrightness and always, always his constant devotion to
Frodo. I would highlight some of my favorite bits but honestly, there
are so many; every bit of Sam's speech is just spot on perfect.

So let me move on to the small details that make this story so
wondrously vivid: Faramir moving poor sick Frodo to the [big bedroom
that was his nursery when he was a boy (Mr. Frodo gets awful tired out
with Big Folk-sized everything, though Mr. Merry and Mr. Pippin are so
fair pleased with their new-grown height that they prefer it)]; the
good folk of the Steward's household gawking at the White Lady; Frodo
and Sam thinking of Eowyn, for all that she was the Wraithsbane,
because she was a woman [all the more magic to us, for she was somehow
more like us in some way]. Most marvelous of all, because I'm such a
sucker for a great description: ["she smells of. . .of new-mown hay,
not like some lady of the court at all. Fresh grass and sweet clover
and hops, and a hint of carrots and apples and sugar. Outdoors. Her
hands look fine and clean, though, but not hands that haven't never
known a day's work"] Perfect. PERFECT!

And she how cares for Frodo, in a way no one else could:
[ Her approach I find practical, for she has done nothing more than to
hold me in warm quilts, rocking me at night to help me sleep without
nightmares, and to feed me herself, whispering to me of night after
night when she wept into her pillow, despairing and not wanting to
eat, for it would only keep her alive longer, prolonging her torment. . .]

Well, here I go again, quoting practically the whole story back at
you. But this Eowyn is so strong and nurturing (as, of course, she had
to have been, all those years); finally finding, in her sharing with
Frodo the painful details of their horrific experience, the way to
transition from warrior woman to a woman whose fondest wish, now, is
to go build a healing garden in a torn land.



Title: Sun · Author: Claudia · Races: Cross-Cultural: Frodo and
Faramir · ID: 223
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2008-09-07 02:07:05
[It was no longer something so small, that the sun could shine,
offering light and warmth after a long, dark night.]

A deceptively simple but ultimately very uplifting story. It's quite
fitting that Faramir and Frodo, the two who have looked long and
deeply in darkness and despair, should find comfort in warmth,
sunlight, the cleansing breeze; harbingers of hope for the future.

Title: Star's End · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of Elrond ·
ID: 283
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-07 02:08:30
Spoilers!
She didn't mind the fact she would die--it was the loneliness and loss
she knew, with her love gone ahead of her and no end to it that she
could see that tore at her heart.

Into this grief steps the one Elf who might truly understand the true
nature of isolation, and he does his best to--ease her way.

Delicately told, yet in its way shocking, Most thought-provoking!

Title: A Moment in the Morning in Bree · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 731
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-07 02:55:27
Spoilers!
The last line of this story really did me. It reminded me of when
Gandalf took Pippin to Minas Tirith and became exasperated with the
number of questions that Pippin managed to put forth. And of course
the shrewd Ranger would be clever enough to recognize the danger signs
early on. Another part that I really liked was Merry's surprised
["Bree?"] in response to Aragorn's talk of civilized people. Little
moments like that kept the story fun, while the culture clash itself
was highly enjoyable.

Title: Sing My Worth Immortal · Author: Perelleth · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 168
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-07 02:56:18
Spoilers!
They say that necessity is the mother of invention, but I wonder if
accident isn't equally involved. This story seems to think so, and
like Elladan, I'm not sure the world could handle the truth about
wine. But it was nice to see a mischievous side to Galadriel, who
seems to know just what boundaries to push and just how much she can
get away with.

Title: Dorwinion Wine · Author: Lindelea · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 663
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-07 02:57:13
Spoilers!
Very fun little story! A young Bilbo is vividly portrayed, as is the
poor elf that Bilbo besets. Sounds like someone had a bit too much to
drink the night before. So that's the explanation for
["tril-lil-lil-lolly"]! I might have guessed. I also love the idea
that Bilbo has become immune to withering glares thanks to a long
association with Gandalf. That just made my day. But the best part of
this story is the fact that just spending a moment (albeit a
bewildered moment) in Bilbo's company is enough to brighten the elf's
day. Hobbits seem to have that effect on people.

Title: Yule Tails · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 303
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-07 02:57:56
Spoilers!
What a unique and creative little story! I love the way that the theme
of horses and/or ponies is woven to create a connection between
Faramir and Pippin. It's a brilliant way of bringing out similarities
that the two share, and it's an equally brilliant way of showcasing
all the differences between them. The militaristic culture of Gondor
comes through while the Shire emphasizes a more pastoral life. The
final scene with two of them sitting down beside the horse that saved
them both is wonderfully heartwarming. A very fitting Yule tale!

Title: Feet That Wander · Author: Linaewen · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 576
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-07 02:58:44
Spoilers!
I have to admit that I guessed the traveler's identity before he
revealed it himself, but even without the benefit of surprise, I
thoroughly enjoyed this story. People who can write Tom Bombadil
always amaze me. He's such a unique character, and it feels as though
he can only truly be written if one takes several steps back from him.
Somehow, Linaewen does this and still manages to keep us firmly in his
POV. And what an intriguing perspective he has! Bombadil's outlook on
life may seem simple, but it's within this simplicity that power lies.
He knows exactly who he is, and he knows exactly where his boundaries
are. And within them, he is the master. And through knowing what goes
on beyond his borders, he continues to be the master of what lies within.

As for this story's other participant, I've often wondered just where
his travels may have taken him before he finally found his way into
Rivendell. And just how far astray he may have wandered, too. This is
a nice little glimpse into his long journey, and a very plausible
glimpse, too.

Title: Silver Blossoms Blown · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 646
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-07 02:59:23
Spoilers!
I love the way this story seems to capture the other-worldliness of
the Valar. Varda's thoughts, particularly in the first part of this
story, seem to be immersed in song, which is very appropriate
considering who she is. There's a lovely ethereal quality to all of
this, and I like how Varda first perceives the elves. It ties in
nicely with the sobering closing lines of this little ficlet, in which
the children are children no more. Varda's thoughts on that seem very
reflective of the rest of the Valar, and this perception of the elves
explains a lot as the First Age really gets underway.

Title: On Far Fields · Author: Dwimordene · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 106
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-07 02:59:59
Spoilers!
This is one of my favorite Dwimordene stories, which is saying
something considering the fact that I love all of Dwimordene's
stories. But this one, in particular, always seems to get to me. I
think a part of it is the way that she manages to create a rich,
foreign culture with its own priorities and values that never once
feels inferior to the Gondor culture that infuses the POV. Alien,
perhaps, and Imrahil does think that their code of honor might be a
bit harsh, but at the same time, there's also a sense of respect for
these men. I think a large part of that might come from Imrahil's
respect for Andrahar, who is brilliantly depicted here. I love how
conflicting obligations come to play on him. The full scope of these
obligations is revealed by the end of the story, but the tension they
create is present throughout.

But perhaps my favorite moment in this story is the song. It's a
haunting, keening song that certainly doesn't come from Gondor, and
the foreign feeling heightens the sense of loss and mourning that the
song conveys. I love the cries raised to various family members and
how that hearkens back to the fallen warrior that Samwise sees in
Ithilien. These men aren't just faceless enemies drummed up by Sauron.
They have honor and families and homes to defend. Brilliant story that
gives the Battle of the Pelennor some much needed perspective.

Title: This crown of stars · Author: Fawsley · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 586
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-09-07 04:57:48
A touching drabble .One can imagine that Aragorn must sometimes have
felt like this.The reader is lucky to know more than poor Strider!

Title: One Equal Temper of Heroic Hearts · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres:
Romance: Gondor · ID: 334
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-09-07 05:04:59
Spoilers!
I don't usually enjoy stories with erotic content, but this one was
tasteful and beautifully written.What I liked most was that the reason
nature instilled passionate feelings is touched upon, a truth sadly
lacking in most romantic/erotic stories, to enable the human race to
continue.I'm sure Tolkien as a devout Catholic would have been
pleased.I also liked the reference to Aragorn missing the sadly now
deceased Faramir.
A beautifully written glimpse of the sensual side of Aragorn and
Arwen's marriage and the joys and problems of not ageing like ordinary
mortals.

Title: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream · Author: Ariel/Auntie
Meesh/Budgielover/Cathleen/Dreamflower/Gryffinjack/kellyfrankenfield/Lindelea/Pearl
Took/Rosie Took/SlightlyTookish CoAuthors · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor · ID: 496
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-07 05:16:21
Spoilers!
Ah--hurt/comfort! The Piphealer's Group's RoundRobin entry is a lovely
one.

All four Hobbits are having problems with nightmares disturbing their
sleep, and for young Pippin it's proving particularly debilitating.
When Targon suggests he try a marvelous sleeping powder shared with
him by Guardsman Eldil, at last he decides to chance it, mixing a good
handful into a glass of brandy. But when it proves to be Haradric
poppy it would appear his life is at risk.

Plots against the Crown of Gondor as well as against the still-fragile
peace being worked out between the western lands and the king of Far
Harad have been set in motion, and it appears that the four Halflings
are caught in the eye of the storm.

For a tale with so many authors, it is delightfully cohesive, and
filled with plots and counterplots as well as obscure medical
procedures....

A must-read.

Title: Of Old It Was Not Darksome · Author: EdorasLass · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-07 05:26:23
Spoilers!
Perhaps in past times it was not particularly darksome, but now it has
become a focus for the grief of Dwarves in general, as Gimli brings a
number of his folk to Moria to lay their fallen comrades properly to rest.

But one alien element has been found, one that has a more direct
meaning to the Lord of Aglarond. And he will take it and see it
properly bestowed, with the honor due the one who left it....

The solemnity of the telling well fits the subject matter. I am glad
it was written.

Title: Moon Over Water · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 518
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-07 05:39:40
Spoilers!
It was Boromir who introduced his younger brother to the practice of
watching the river on the first full moon after yaviere to see the
gallants sail down the river. It's been some years since Faramir has
seen a ship on the river on this night; will he be granted such a
vision this year, and will he bring his son here some day, perhaps?
And whose forms are they that are seen?

A mystical telling of a mystical tale. Etherial.

Title: Moonset over Gondor · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 652
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-09-07 05:44:55
Spoilers!
What shines in this vignette is Raksha's ability to evoke the wild
beauty of the land of Ithilien, as Faramir contemplates its present,
peaceful beauty. He can not help but remember the same scene in
desperate times six years in the past, with Frodo in the camp, about
to head into Mordor. In the quiet scene, Eowyn joins her husband to
reflect on Frodo's journey and wonder if Frodo, too, looks on the moon
from the undying lands.

While reading this story, my mind could not help but think of the
beautiful painted backdrop from the film "The Two Towers" that is also
called "Moonset Over Gondor." How healing for Faramir to stop in the
place of turmoil years ago to view it this time in peace with the one
that he loves.

Title: Elrond's Farewell · Author: Armariel · Genres: Poetry · ID: 269
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-07 05:48:13
Spoilers!
Armariel's free-verse is always evocative, always moving, always
filled with a poignancy that draws the reader into the mood of the one
whose voice is reflected in her carefully chosen images and reflected
feelings.

This farewell to his daughter by Elrond is a sparkling gem caught in
shining links of words, and a poem that is as ever a joy to read and
ponder. The image of her dancing barefoot on the shards of his heart,
and his recognition that one day it will be her heart that lies there
splintered while those who follow after do similarly is achingly
beautiful.

I hope others will read and delight in this offering as much as do I
as we consider just how painful as well as fulfilling such love as
these have known can be.

Title: The Mariner's Son · Author: cairistiona · Genres: Adventure ·
ID: 329
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-09-07 06:52:04
Spoilers!
This story is gripping and unique.I found myself reading it in one
sitting which I rarely do for a multi chaptered story.
Aragorn's plight at the beginning was chilling, but the it was the
tragic tale of the Mariner and his son that truly caught my attention.
I would have liked to know exactly how Aragorn avoided drowning and I
think he ended up as Thorongil in Gondor, because he did want to be
King and needed to learn about his future subjects.
The final chapter was my favourite in which Aragorn gently persuades
the simple minded boy to return his belongings.
A very enjoyable read.A friend told me I would enjoy this a while
ago,but I never got round to reading it,so I'm glad I did now!

Title: Legolas in Mandos · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 317
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-09-07 06:58:13
Spoilers!
A haunting and beautiful story.I\\\'m not a Legolas fan, but I loved
Aragorn\\\'s loyalty and devotion here.For the King to be willing to
take on the Valar in a bid to save his friend at great risk to himself
is awe inspiring. A very well written and unusual tale.

Title: The Weight of Power · Author: Nefhiriel · Times: Mid Third Age
· ID: 325
Reviewer: Michelle · 2008-09-07 11:46:48
Nefhiriel`s „The Weight of Power" covers a timeframe that has only
been hinted at by Tolkien in his appendices, but which is perfect for
a fanfiction author: the years of Aragorn`s travels to Rohan and
Gondor. Choosing such a topic gives you a lot of freedom and Nefhiriel
takes that freedom and goes with in, in the end creating an epic tale
with canon and original characters, an engaging plot and of course a
fascinating undercover Aragorn (alias Thorongil).

What I liked best about this story (apart from the obvious
on-the-edge-of-my-seat-action) was the blend of canon characters and
original additions. The canon characters are sometimes nothing more
than a name given my Tolkien, but Nefhiriel manages to create
characters you like, giving them emotions, passions and quirky
characters traits. A showcase is young Theoden, who could have easily
turned into an obnoxious kid character, but who is actually very
likable. Nefhiriel can be just as convincing when writing original
characters, especially Aragorn`s subordinate (and friend) Araedhelm.

So, as a not-so-secret admirer of Thorongil-stories, this was simply
perfect in my humble opinion. Nefhiriel decided to go for a plot that
covers 40 chapters – more than 180,000 words – and never does the plot
overwhelm the author. As a reader you can always lean back with the
assurance that Nefhiriel has things well in hand. A great story!

Title: The Lost Restored · Author: Larner · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor · ID: 59
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-07 11:51:33
Spoilers!
Beautiful story, and I love especially the part about Smeagol. I
always thought that he was the most tragic figure in the whole tale of
the Ring, and to see him restored and find peace, at last, is a
wonderful thing. I also loved the way his loved ones reacted. A
powerful, intense tale that made me think. Thank you for writing and
sharing!

Title: DISGUISE: Emissaries · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 56
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-07 19:29:22
Spoilers!
Myself, I had a rather different vision of how the Istari were chosen
and how they came to the decision of how they might appear within the
mortal lands; but this one, particularly Olorin's choice as to why
they must be able to anticipate possible physical death, is a logical
and thoughtful one.

Very well written and thoughtfully planned, and with just the right
touches of humor.

Title: Answering the Call · Author: docmon · Genres: Drama · ID: 340
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-07 19:33:02
Twice before I have read and loved this series; it is an honor to
review it here.

A most thoughtful series of AU stories in which we see the various
members of the Fellowship responding to the powerful call of the One
Ring. Most end badly; most, but not all. For even in hearing the call
of the Ring there dwells Hope.

Very thoughtfully written, and with a marked degree of thought as to
how each of the various characters might have been expected to respond.

Title: A Moment in the Morning in Bree · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 731
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-07 19:48:59
Hilarious, delightful, full of Hobbity humor--this was a joy to reread
once more! I'd love to see the series this began coninued, actually!
Do continue it when you can! Aragorn coming to know the four Hobbits
better and trying to help them become more comfortable with Men and
himself in particular is priceless!

Title: I Ain't Got Nobody · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 568
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-07 22:34:41
Absolutely ridiculous; I couldn't help laughing (while I kept shaking
my head at the absurd, slap-stick situations presented in the story).

Title: Out of the Blue · Author: Jael · Races: Elves · ID: 205
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-07 23:52:45
Spoilers!
Stories about Elves in modern times are tricky - tzhey can be
delightful and compelling and completely believable, or corny and
unlikely as heel. But rarely they come across as naturally and
believable, and as likely, as Jael's story does, here.

The long waited-for sequel to [Not Fade Away], this tale gives us
another glimpse at "Aaron Rivers" and his family and crew of surviving
Elves, now living in our time and society. The approach of the tale to
let us see that glimpse out of the eyes of a public service servant
and social worker makes both for maximum culture clash and great
humor, that derives directly from the fact that, of course, in this
case we, the readers, know more of the characters than the poor,
clueless observer.

At the same time, the personality of the OFC comes over as wry and
naturally as possible, without any cliché or Sueness in sight. And
still, we get to see a plethora of delightful details, and a story
that makes hungry for more. This is one of the great things of Jael's
NFA series: giving the possibility of many more stories around the
experiences of our most favorite Elves in modern times, that story arc
can cause real addiction.

All in all, a wonderful story and a delightful read, and I am waiting
already for the next possible installment of this story arc. Highly
recommended!

Title: Shadow King · Author: Claudia · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Angst/Tragedy · ID: 227
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-08 00:25:00
Spoilers!
A truly chilling story, with a dark vision of an Aragorn at far beyond
the way we know him from canon - and yet, chillingly and disquietingly
possible and close to canon itself. It is Legolas who says at one
point in LOTR that he looked at Aragorn and saw what a terrible ruler
Elessar couild have become, if he had taken the Ring.

In this tale, we see what Aragorn might have become in that case. It
is as chilling as clever a move to let us see that dark alternative
out of the eyes of Frodo. Yet the most chilling image, for me, I
believe, was the dead branch of the White tree, at the end. Hope is
truly gone, from this version of Middle Earth.

An AU at it's best, and as an AU should be: firmly grounded on the
base of canon, and very believable, but fearlessly exploring even the
worst possible development. Great stuff! Thank you for writing and
sharing!

Title: DISGUISE: Emissaries · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 56
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-08 02:24:14
Considering the doubts and objections from some of the emissaries
straight from the beginning, it's a wonder the Valar put their trust
into *all* of them nonetheless!

I was greatly amused by Olórin's irreverence, and his teasing of
Curumo. And the part about the various possibilities of appearance put
very funny "what-if-ideas" into my head.

The story is good at managing the ensemble of Valar and Maiar, giving
each of them some unique and/or recognisable trait.

Title: Fennas Haradren · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Adventure · ID: 280
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-08 03:30:57
Spoilers!
A fine story that carries the mystery of a haunted house and the
urgency of a battle, along with the presence of a monster, not to
mention Boromir and assorted men of Gondor. The air of shadow over the
old land of Gondor is conveyed through the nearness of Mordor and Mt.
Doom, the silence of the company at the outpost, and then the terrible
revelations in Part II. Nicely done.

Title: Giving Gifts · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 426
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-08 05:21:17
Spoilers!
A cleverly crafted quadrabble concerning Denethor's subtly snarky
response to Imrahil's gift to Faramir. The ironic one-upmanship
between the two fathers is very amusing.

Title: Baker's Dozen · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 372
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-08 06:26:06
Spoilers!
Ah, but these were a fun set of drabbles to read. On the surface, they
do a very good job of capturing the variety of occupations that would
have filled Middle-earth and through several different races, giving a
nice cross-section of daily life, especially in Fourth Age Gondor. And
as I've come to expect from Tanaqui's drabbles, each one is well
thought-out and shows a depth beyond their 100 words.

Beyond that, several of them shine on their own. I loved the fact that
Faramir was wise enough to send out spies to make sure his policies
were carried out fairly. (That's an element that alone is enough to
commend the series to Gondor-lovers... Gondor is very well
administered throughout.) Then there's the Orc's callous treatment of
the Nurnen slaves. However, I think the one that most shines is the
last one. That line....

[Trouble, like always, called in the shape of a dame. And a mighty
fine shape too. ]

Still has me giggling! This series was a delightful smorgasboard of
moments, and I heartily enjoyed it.

Title: Wave-Singer · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Drabbles · ID: 33
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-08 06:45:47
Spoilers!
Well, he took ship, but did not end up on Tol Eressea.

A momentary glimpse of Tolkien's most tragic of heroes, singing [as if
he'd lost everything] in a land he'd perhaps never thought to see,
apparently haunting an eastern rather than a western shore now.

A beautiful blending of Tolkien and Amerindian legends. A worthy tale.

Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-08 07:11:34
Spoilers!
It's been a long and fulfilling life, and here, so close to the end of
it, there is another treasure to rejoice over, one whose attention is
caught in images. To tell his life's story--briefly--in terms of the
pieces on his beloved chessboard--it is something he can share on a
rainy morning; and the child returns the gift in his pictures.

A perfect telling of the quiet at the end of a well played game.
Imagery is perfect for the subject!

Title: Answering the Call · Author: docmon · Genres: Drama · ID: 340
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-08 10:31:38
Awesome collection of AU's. The two I found most chilling and
compelling were the two concerning Gandalf (what a great vision! And
how sneaky the change of thinking comes about) and the one concerning
Legolas. Very well done!

Title: A Moment in the Morning in Bree · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 731
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-08 10:46:01
Spoilers!
I do not normally read many Hobbit-centered stories, but this one was
a delightful read, and very humorous, indeed. The way the questions
unnerved Aragorn was delightful, and I especially loved the reaction
of the Hobbits to his remark of not drawing attention to himself under
civilized people. Very funny, and very well done. Thank you for
writing and sharing!

Title: Here's To The King! · Author: Jael · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands
· ID: 204
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-08 10:59:32
Spoilers!
This is a delightful story, and shows great humor - and a wonderful
lack of respect to our normally so well-revered Elves. The picture of
a worn-out, tired Legolas, forced to deal with silly insubordination -
as it first seems - is very well drawn, as is Legolas' changing
reaction to the disrespectful song. Which full lyrics, after they are
explained, are great fun in themselves.

I have to say, the revelation of the identity of the prisoner came as
no great surprise to me - I began laughing pretty soon through the
entire story. Still, it was handled in a wonderful way. And the
outcome of the tale - Naruthir's ongoing disquiet towards Legolas',
regarding the disappearance of the prisoner, as well as Legolas'
reaction whenever he heard that song in further times - had me
grinning all over. As had the gift to his father. Here's to the king,
indeed!

I love the explanation of the origins of the song, though; it keeps
the whole story from getting too fluffy, and gtransforms the whole,
funny tale in a well-balanced dish. Very well done! :)

Title: The Roses of Imloth Melui · Author: Aervir · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 435
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-08 11:07:04
A beautiful view at Ioreth, and very delicately written. I love the
imagery of the roses, and how they follow her through all her life.
Very well done.

Title: A Cat in King Elessar's Court · Author: agape4gondor · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 66
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-08 11:16:27
Spoilers!
What an unique kind of story, and what an unique perspective. I have
always loved stories from the perspective of cats set in Middle Earth,
ever since I first read the great pieces of Werecat about Beruthiel
and her cats; so I really, really liked this one.

And what a great idea to see the last days of Denethor as well as
Aragorn's beginning rein through the cat's eyes. Lovely story, and
wonderfully executed. Thank you for writing and sharing!

Title: Out of the Blue · Author: Jael · Races: Elves · ID: 205
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-09-08 17:34:31
Spoilers!
I loved Not Fade Away, to which this story is sequel. The social
worker protagonist is a sympathetic and believable character, who is
able to trust her heart when she makes a home visit to some very rich
and unusual "cultists". It was absolutely delightful to see Thranduil
in a bathrobe and jammy bottoms watching Bob the Builder videos with
his grandson, and to revisit other loved characters from the first
story. My only objection is that this work is too short. It seems a
bit truncated, because I am greedy and want to know if Jane ever
really got anything going with Haldir.

Title: Star of Hope · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times: Mid Third Age:
Eriador · ID: 34
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 19:44:52
goes to show there's something for spontaneous-ness.

Title: Now the Green Blade Riseth · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 37
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 19:49:14
and think of oll the wonderful parties that little mubbins going to bless.

Title: Confidence · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men: Minas Tirith · ID: 38
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 19:52:57
we each make our own choice and some parents even let us learn to live
with them. wise parent.

Title: Courage · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 41
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 19:58:25
i shall never be that courageous!!!!!!!!!

Title: Scholarship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 43
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:03:06
Spoilers!
i know that reading to your children helps them learn faster
throughout their lives but this may be a step above and beyond the
call of duty.

Title: Before the Black Gate · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late
Third Age · ID: 45
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:05:08
you give pippin an excellent game plan for the day.

Title: Undivided · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 46
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:08:27
once a split egg twin always a split egg twin? best in tight, close
contact.

Title: Wind of Change · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 47
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:11:50
so much hope so small a vessel. (aside: could this be one mare reason
she was drawn towards aragorn--such destinies so early in life?)

Title: Wedding Nerves · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor · ID: 48
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:14:37
little brothers are made for picking on and some times for loving out
of a pickle.

Title: Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus · Author:
pandemonium_213 · Genres: Poetry · ID: 50
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:18:48
or is this advanced studies: gimli/legolas 421 in the college course
schedule?

Title: Trinity · Author: pandemonium_213 · Times: Modern Times · ID: 51
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:31:55
wow, deep, and so many levels of me have such different feelings about
all the little insights; disgust, fear, terror and strangely NO
HAPPINESS. wow,deep!

Title: For What I Wait · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 125
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-09-08 20:47:14
Spoilers!
This story hits the reader into the gut and will pierce your heart. To
some who read this, it might hit very close to home. It is so hard to
really let go of someone you love or find understanding as to why
someone would chose for such an end (but who is waiting fro what, the
release or having a son returned?). Mix that with the love of a parent
who tries to find out or mayhap does not want to see the truth until
it is too late. When reading Fëanor's narrative, Dawn carefully
portrays how hard it is to find acceptance when you loose someone
close, even if you know deep down inside you cannot hold them in this
life forever. It just felt that he just hung on to that last shred of
hope, the deeply rooted pain, and fear of loosing someone, ultimately
the pain softens a bit, but the profound missing is there. Feänor just
goes about it, knows where he fails, but he is so far from accepting
the naked truth which I think is the most difficult one to face. Well
the end as he stands there, I think it slowly gets there for him. This
realisation is buried deep inside of Feänor, but when reading it once
more I think it might take a long time when he finally is able to, I
am glad Maglor found his peace, very glad indeed.

The underlying themes of this piece is yet again the folly and
destruction of the oath and there is also the bit of giving life and
letting it go, I think it is something many can identify with. This is
a marvellous piece of writing and a daring AU, simply outstanding
prose that stands out in its intimacy and simplicity.


Title: DISGUISE: Emissaries · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 56
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:54:34
it's always so heartbreaking to see such a good friendship dissolve.

Title: WOUNDS: Invisible Scars · Author: Fiondil · Races: Elves: House
of Finwe · ID: 57
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:58:03
a form of bonding that i think we would all prefer to avoid.
delicately exposed, thank you.

Title: Cat's Paws · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains · ID: 58
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 20:59:15
o the things we can believe we freely chose.

Title: The Lost Restored · Author: Larner · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor · ID: 59
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:03:48
had i read this one first i would have had many second thoughts about
healing waters; this is so good.

Title: The Blessing of the Waters · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 61
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:07:27
okay so some of them is not so nice but it is none the less sensual
teases and good reading.

Title: I Stand No Longer Alone · Author: Larner · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 62
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:08:54
oh look daddy's home. and i can't jump up and lick his face or bring
him his slippers or nothing. woe.

Title: Loudwater · Author: Adaneth · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 63
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:12:16
silly of course it's had a voice; we just generally don't get to hear
a solo, only in the background chorus. thank you for the premier.

Title: Unwilling · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 64
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:14:52
and all the earth should weep uncontrollably. loss, such loss.

Title: The Vault of the Dead · Author: Soledad · Genres: Mystery · ID: 103
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:17:22
the first time it was awe-inspiring, the second time it was awesome,
this time: AWE.

Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:19:47
and in a few short years, what a memory for the child.

Title: Faithful · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Second and Early Third
Age · ID: 105
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:22:01
but until expressed directly, the question is loyal to the person or
loyal to the persona.

Title: On Far Fields · Author: Dwimordene · Races: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 106
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:27:41
thank you, isabeau and soledad for letting dwimordene dabble in your
ink pots the three of you have made this fabric all the richer by
sharing your threads so graciously.

dwimordene, please spread a little more ink, this is great.

Title: Wizards' Pupils · Author: Altariel · Races: Men: Minas Tirith ·
ID: 108
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:29:37
choose your wizard carefully, alliegency can be fatal.

Title: Concerning Walls · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Frodo and Faramir · ID: 112
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:31:05
far sight or wishful thinking just glad you give them this moment.

Title: Boromir and Teddy · Author: Ithil-valon · Genres: Drama: Final
Partings · ID: 113
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:36:43
i believe that one of the recurring themes that tolkien fandom has
developed is the "my brother of a different mother" in this case even
closer than brother--twin. and i think it is well played in all the
many shades it offers, thanks for your hue.

Title: Too Many Rangers · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits · ID: 116
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:39:53
Spoilers!
i so get this plot. too many people choosing what tolkien meant to say
not just living the tale.

Title: Hope Remains · Author: Baggins Babe · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 118
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:41:57
possibly the au-i-est thing ever written and oh so wonderful.

Title: Spoiled · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Drabbles · ID: 119
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:43:52
possible...maybe; but breeding will out.

Title: Seven Stones and Seven Stars and One White Tree · Author:
shirebound · Races: Other Beings · ID: 121
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 21:48:14
so much insight, so much knowledge, and then a sense of humor to find
the play on words; just caught the joke as i looked at the chapter
listings in order to remind myself which story this was. and i even
liked it before i caught the train.

Title: On Canon and Fanfic · Author: Marta · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 123
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 22:15:06
marta it's all au because we exercise free choice instead of accepting
destiny, unless of course you choose to accept your fate and then it's
au because they were counting on your being your own person. "canon"
is only as accurate as assuming that others taste what you taste when
they peel and eat their orange. same fruit, even the same tree, and
can i be sure that what they experience is what i expereince?

Title: The Haradric Whore and Her Son · Author: annmarwalk/EdorasLass
CoAuthors · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 124
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 22:50:08
as much as i don't like boromir, i enjoy when people can make me
believe he was a better person than i give him credit for, thank you
for helping him be his best.

Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 22:58:29
Spoilers!
how can you say i believe in what you see, but am afraid if i step
aside fate will be worse for you? just exactly this way.

Title: Symbols of Love · Author: Larner · Genres: Adventure · ID: 130
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 23:06:42
showoff. both you and him!!!!

Title: Surprise · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 131
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 23:08:24
won't think it could happen to elves.

Title: Healing the Long Cleeve · Author: TopazTook · Genres: Longer
Works · ID: 133
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 23:12:59
Spoilers!
the truth of politics makes strange bedfellows. but strange bedfellows
may make better stronger bonds.

Title: Grandmum's Button Box · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 135
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 23:14:40
in our family my nieces will be tha last to know this tradition.
unfortunately some of my class mates already had lost the chance.

Title: Out of Memory and Time · Author: Shireling · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 136
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 23:17:25
this seemed so dark and then i realized some of it was the outlook and
some was the plot, but there was always a shimmer in the fabric of the
story.

Title: Meant to Be · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Other Beings · ID: 137
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-08 23:19:12
some projects have their destiny in their stitches and refuse to
compromise themselves.

Title: Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus · Author:
pandemonium_213 · Genres: Poetry · ID: 50
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-08 23:37:08
An incisive, thought-provoking, uplifting answer to Tolkien's premise.
Pandemonium contends that myth and science don't cancel each other
out, that each has much to give, much to rejoice and wonder at, that
both are a celebration of the world.

And as her answer herself, her poem proves it with imagery taken out
of both realms - out of myth like Shiva, and out of science like the
cells we can study under a microscope. These two realms are happily,
seamlessly united, and together they form a poem that is all the
stronger, more important, and more resonating for this union.

Title: And Then There Was Cake, or Begetting Day Horrors · Author:
Klose · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 540
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 02:45:11
This story has a suspicious voice-of-experience ring to it. And while
reading it, I was drawn back to a few of my own birthday horrors.
There's probably some karmic balance that insists on leveling the
celebratory score with some truly remarkable disasters. In this story,
I particularly liked the thought of embarrassing relatives, and I can
easily imagine Feanor being among the worst of the bunch.

Title: The Water's Song · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 707
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 02:45:45
Spoilers!
This is a lovely bit of foreboding. The way NiRi goes about describing
the Sea's song is truly enchanting. I like the idea that Thranduil
might not understand the song itself, but he does understand his son.
As for the song, I was quite taken with the description given by
Legolas's mother. It seemed to be a gradual thing, starting with the
brooks and streams, working toward the rivers, and ultimately going
out to the gulls and the Sea. And it's a ["merry tune"] in the forest,
which is an interesting way of looking at it especially when one
considers just how much heartache it has rendered and will render.
Excellent foundational work for one of my favorite LotR characters!

Title: A Cat in King Elessar's Court · Author: agape4gondor · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 66
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 02:45:45
i am a cat lover but this on stretched me just a little to fine.
better luck and keep taping those keys. please?

Title: The Ritual Disturbed · Author: Larner · Genres: Horror · ID: 68
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 02:46:25
spooky

Title: Essecarmë · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 247
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 02:47:03
Spoilers!
For as dramatic and gut-wrenching an impact as the conclusion of this
story has, I think my favorite part was the wry humor in the first
part of the story. In particular, I loved Maglor's running commentary
on the inventiveness (or lack thereof) of his father when it came to
giving his sons names. In particular, I liked his opinions on
Maedhros's father name: ['"third Finwë," proof that Atar can count and
little else.'] It's a great way to set a wry tone that contrasts
perfectly with the more sobering second half of the story, and it also
gives some fantastic characterization to a young Maglor. I can easily
see him taking a cynical approach to all this. As a bonus, the naming
traditions provide an insightful characterization for Caranthir, who
calls the unnamed Curufin ["it"] just to annoy Feanor. That was a
stroke of brilliance.

But the brilliance doesn't end there, because Feanor still has to give
a name to little Curufin, and when he does, even the readers have to
hold their breath. Maglor's observational skills give the narrative
exactly what it needs to really drive home both the images and the
emotions of a stricken Maedhros and a resolute Feanor. Nothing is ever
easy in this family, and this story makes the most of it for some
amazing humor and some equally amazing drama.

Title: The Librarian · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 700
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 02:47:45
Spoilers!
I love the idea for this story. The thought that Legolas has an ally
in the library who seems to be encouraging (albeit inadvertently) most
of his adventures is brilliant. Poor Thranduil. He really came alive
in this piece, and his exasperation was easy to feel. I have to give
him kudos for a lot of patience, because I'm not sure I would have
been that understanding with a wolf in the house. Of course, knowing
that Thranduil had tried something similar explains a lot. Legolas is
characterized nicely, too, filled with a child's innocence and
curiosity that can lead to lots and lots of trouble. None of his acts
are done out of malice but rather out of mimicry and a mischievous
sense of fun. I wonder what will happen when/if Thranduil learns about
Tionel's role in all this. I imagine Tionel might find himself
permanently glued to the side of stuffy old Lanatus, an elf who never
enters the story but whose character is very clearly defined. Well
done, Jay!

Title: Shadows · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 698
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 02:49:13
Spoilers!
The power of Bodkin's story is that it leaves you guessing. There's a
hint of myth and legend buried beneath the ash and soot of the burned
forest, and Legolas's attempts to understand it seem to be constantly
rebuffed. He truly does not know what he feels in the forest, and that
lack of knowledge translates into a haunting journey for the reader.
The backstory is effectively told, interspersed through Legolas's
segments of mourning and doubt, but what really makes this story shine
is Legolas himself. His characterization is layered and complex,
depicted by halting words and flashes of memory. He begins as a strong
but grieving figure, hale enough to convince the patrol leader that he
doesn't need a minder but burdened by enough weight that the patrol
leader is reluctant to leave him alone. Then the downward spiral
beings, and we see Legolas unravel an inner torment. The narrative is
subtle and profound, letting us feel everything he feels without ever
overplaying the situation. Thranduil's appearance by the end of the
story was both expected and welcomed. He's a stabilizing force that
helps wrap the story up, and though there's still a haunting air in
the end, there's just enough resolution to satisfy. Fantastic tale!

Title: Elflings · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 348
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 02:50:48
Spoilers!
This story seemed to start innocently enough as a tale of a young
Thranduil and a young Galion, and then it quickly proved just how
wrong that impression was with a hilarious and frank discussion about
what the word ["huitho"] meant. I was laughing helplessly by the time
Galion finished his explanation. There were so many little quirks and
quips tied up in his seemingly innocent speech, and afterwards, there
was no going back. Oropher's discovery of the frog was a thing of
beauty, and I must say that he handled it much better than I ever
would have. Prestawen was a fiesty addition to the cast, contrasting
nicely with Oropher, and Amdir's background antics provided a
hilarious subplot. I completely lost it when Oropher asked Galion to
["to identify the contents of a chamber pot"]. I can just imagine the
look on poor Galion's face. After that, though, there were was a
definite settling of the mood, and which made for a nice contrast to
the hilarity of the previous night. Oropher's words to Thranduil about
leadership and duty were insightful, and his handling of the entire
affair (pun only partially intended) was sheer genius. It appears as
though the lesson was learned, too. Great story!

Title: Of Old It Was Not Darksome · Author: EdorasLass · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 02:51:02
a duty done with love and compassion is rewarded with a surprise
rememberance. beautiful

Title: A White Coverlet to Cool a Hobbit's Toes · Author: Claudia ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 73
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 02:53:38
no matter how close the friendship there are times you go seperate
ways for a time. how well you handle them tells much about how
smother-ed (or -ing) you are. fun read

Title: Frogdom · Author: Neilia · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands · ID: 192
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-09-09 03:11:31
Spoilers!
I love Pippin-frog! I love his and Elrond's first look at each other
and especially that Sam showed him so much concern and tried to
comfort the terrified lad/frog/whatever :) And Merry's care for him
and Sam's concern for his master's aching head. This is what hobbits
are best at - taking care of each other.

Title: Footsteps in Time · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves · ID: 76
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 03:21:23
a bit to rich in academia for me but a very informative look at
celeborn and the ellon who becomes galadriel.

Title: Elanor of Westmarch: The Return · Author: Baranduin · Races:
Hobbits: Family · ID: 78
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 03:26:09
the idea of sam dying with frodo a year after lossing rosie has been
well engrained in first place. but if it wasn't so this how it should
be. good work.

Title: Duty, Honour, Country · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 81
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 03:32:39
my personal goal was to write a tenpoint review on one story in most
every category and this came incredible close to being the drabble i
need to babble about. it wasn't in the end but i feel that the
subjects you chose and the skill you used covering them deserved at
least an ovation. bravo, maestro!

Title: There and Back · Author: Dana · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 89
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 03:40:11
in so many ways we can only be a poor reflection of how great a heart
is in so small a wrapper

Title: Tolkien's Parish: The Canonical Middle-earth · Author: Steuard
Jensen · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 91
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 03:41:59
or how about the simple truth no two witnesses tell the exact same
story and no story teller tells it exactly the same to different
audiences.

Title: Pulling the Wool · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 95
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 03:45:06
wonderfully thought out and presented to give us new details while
echos ring in our ears.

Title: A Sea Visit · Author: Elen Kortirion · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 96
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 03:46:57
that's one way to tell the man to lighten up

Title: Child of Hope · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 97
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 03:51:49
Spoilers!
for not having his fathers farsight, out of the mouths (minds) of
youth, truth.

Title: DISGUISE: Emissaries · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 56
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-09 09:28:21
Great story, which gives much more flesh to the spare notes we have
from HoME about the choosing of the Istari. I liked the way how the
appearance and actions of the future Istari got foreshadowed by their
appearances and actions. I especially liked the different forms
pondered by them.

Only part of nitpick: Namo, the grim lord of Mandos, smiling? Wasn't
he supposed to be always stern? But all in all, this is a great little
story. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Title: BRIDGE: Pá Valaraucar ar Námier · Author: Fiondil · Races:
Other Beings · ID: 415
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-09 09:46:24
An interesting look at Gandalf's time in Mandos before he was sent
back. I especially like the confusion of one who was never meant to
truly being an incarnate at suddenly experiencing what the incarnates
do, and the question Namo gave him to ponder. Intriguing!
Thank you for writing and sharing!

Title: For What I Wait · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 125
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-09 10:19:52
Spoilers!
Oh, Dawn, this is such a powerful story, intense, sad, and
gut-wrenching in its despair. And yet, even through that despair comes
the beauty of it. Watching a loved one fade away without the
possibility to halt it, is something very hard to do, and you capture
it perfectly. However, the effect of Macalaure's song on his father,
and the way said father reflect about his sons, is also powerful,
indeed. And then the end!

This story will stay for me for quite some time.

Title: Out of the Blue · Author: Jael · Races: Elves · ID: 205
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-09 17:01:40
Spoilers!
Having thoroughly enjoyed "Not Fade Away", I really enjoyed seeing
this story set in the same universe. I hope that Jael will write more
of thees stories about modern day Elves.

I think what was the most fun, was watching all of the clues which of
course, the viewpoint character was not in any position to catch. She
was highly observant, but all her interpretations were based on her
own pre-conceptions. It was nearly as fun to see all the wrong
conclusions she would come to, and how each one was discarded as new
observations came to light.

I'd definitely like to see more of Ms. Jankowski!


Title: Battle upon the Quays · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 376
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-09 17:02:32
What a skillful drabble! It is quite easy to see and imagine just such
an event at the harbor of Umbar, and to believe in such a strategy
hatched by the invading Gondorians. And by the masterful stroke of
just one word, Imhiriel manages to completely describe the unnamed
narrator! That was brilliant and not at all inconceivable.

Title: Twentynine White Horses · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 557
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-09 17:03:15
Very amusing, and very likely! You know, I'm sure that JRRT never gave
a second thought to some of the things that are burning questions to
those of us who read and love his world. Now, I'd never thought of
this particular one before--but I instantly recognized it as something
that I really needed an answer to!

I loved Thranduil's reactions, as well. To the end of time, indeed.

Title: Seven Stones and Seven Stars and One White Tree · Author:
shirebound · Races: Other Beings · ID: 121
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-09 17:03:53
Those who are more used to Shirebound's lighter fare may find
themselves surprised at this much different set of vignettes. No fluff
here, but a solid appreciation of the kind of world that Middle-earth
is, and what it means that stones and plants and trees all have their
own voices. Yet it should not be a surprise, because even with her
lighter stories, Shirebound is like her name--bound to the world we
all love, and carefully rooted in canon.

Title: Balm · Author: Armariel · Genres: Adventure · ID: 459
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-09 17:04:26
This memory of Frodo's is so movingly accounted, Frodo remembering his
misery in Cirith Ungol, and Sam's rescue of him. The sensory details
are acute, and yet there is also something decidedly surreal about it
as well. The ending lends it all a sharp poignancy.

Title: Dragons In The Trollshaws · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Adventure
· ID: 170
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-09 17:05:26
This is such a fun story-- a bit adventurous and suspenseful, but what
drives it is the witty dialogue that Bodkin excels in. Her Elladan and
Elrohir especially, have a talent for sharp banter that never slips
over the top. I really enjoy this story--it's a very good read!

Title: Wars of the Valar · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Longer Works · ID: 3
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-09 17:19:12
This story gives a nice glimpse into a period of the history of Ea
that I never gave any thought to. I particularly liked the way that
the Valar were portrayed as fallible, because they're certainly not
perfect even in the fullness of time; I could see these characters
developing into the ones we see in the Silmarillion.

Title: I Ain't Got Nobody · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 568
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-09 17:44:09
Spoilers!
*Snort* The idea of Glorfindel the Hazardous, who seems unable to keep
his Hroa for more than a few days in a row, is hilarious - and as
delightful as the idea of what Namo uses to do with all these fine,
well-crafted bodies. Gives a whole lot of a new meaning to these
re-embodiment powers the Valar possessed. A wonderfully cheeky and
funny approach at the most-reveled Valar, and I also like the slashy
elements. Very well done! :)

Title: Out, Damn'd Spot! Out, I Say! · Author: Alassante · Races:
Elves: Noldor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 260
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-09 18:03:19
Spoilers!
What a compelling short piece, and what a great reflection about the
impact the kin-slaying must have had on those who first committed it.
In the horror about the deed itself, we too often forget that those
who were the killers were as new at this heinous act as those to whom
it first happened. Assalante's choice to show this psychological
impact by the reaction of one of the youngest of the kinslayers,
drives the point home even more. A great piece, and very well written,
too. Very well done!

Title: A Great Cause for Concern · Author: Alassante · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 682
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-09 18:15:41
Spoilers!
Interesting approach on the complications Gimli's entering of the
Undying lands might have caused. I liked Aule's curiosity and Gimli's
noble spirit. Only Legolas came over as a bit naive and somewhat too
unconcerned for my taste, since he would probably have known very well
what reason the Valar might have had to summon only days after he
entered the Undying Lands - with a Dwarf in tow.

Anyway, I liked the story very much. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Title: Somewhere I Have Never Traveled · Author: Fiondil · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 578
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:29:10
Spoilers!
I was quite taken with this characterization of Namo. Long-suffering
indeed! Thankfully, he's easily amused, which has to offset the picky
mortals who just refuse to leave. But even more than Namo, I loved how
Arwen was gently taken down a peg. Eowyn set the tone beautifully
there. I also love the joke that she and Namo are playing on Faramir,
and it made me want to see the conversation they had once they were
reunited.

Title: Cat's Paws · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains · ID: 58
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-09-09 18:30:00
Spoilers!
This story was my first venture into the world of Pandemonium 213, and
I am most impressed. "Cat's Paws" highlights a pivotal moment in
Second Age history, where Sauron in the form of the metal worker
Aulendil seals a pact of friendship with elven craftsman Celebrimbor.
In Pandemonium's "verse," Aulendil has the knowledge of a modern
scientist. Moreover, Pandemonium has him engaging in experiments that
reminded me of mad scientists in twentieth century horror flicks, like
"The Island of Dr. Moreau" or "O Lucky Man."

For me, the highlight of the story is the characterization of
Celebrimbor. The arrogant, self-absorbed elf thirsts for the knowledge
Aulendil dangles before him, yet some part of him nevertheless
realizes that there is something wrong and dangerous in Aulendil's
promises.

I highly recommend this story. I do caution that I was uncomfortable
about the experiment done on the cat. I've certainly read creepier
stuff, but some might be very troubled by the climax of "Cat's Paws."

Title: Rekindling · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 255
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:30:21
Spoilers!
Brilliant and imaginative use of canon to make for a very compelling
story! The plot drew me in, and strange as it may sound, I enjoyed
watching the end of the world. But as compelling as the plot was, it
was the characters that made the story for me. For starters, I
thoroughly enjoyed Feanor's characterization. He was as clever, proud,
and bold as he was in the Silmarillion, and the lack of fear (well,
the lack of all except one fear) seemed a subtle addition at first but
quickly proved to be one of the main pivot points for the end of the
world. I was also very fond of Namo's characterization. I can only
imagine the head-butting that went on between him and Feanor. But the
one who really caught my interest was Nerdanel. I've seen her in a
variety of characterizations, but this may be my favorite. She's a
willful and independent character, but she's also willing to give way
before another authority. She's strong in her own right, but her
strength doesn't necessarily have to clash with Feanor's, which makes
for a unique and nuanced woman. She's definitely someone I could see
Feanor falling for.

Title: Faeries · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 304
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:31:24
Spoilers!
Something I really wish I saw more of would be the stories that
reached out and pulled in the faerie myths. Tolkien's works, for all
that they draw from folklore and old tales, have the feel of an epic
legend to them rather than the feel of a mysterious fireside story. So
it's always a treat to get a hint of the myth in a Tolkien setting and
also to have it pulled off believably.

It's also very nice to get a mature characterization of Pippin. He's
definitely grown into fatherhood, but even more importantly, you can
see echoes of a younger Pippin in him as he considers how to approach
Faramir. This is a developed characterization rather than a contrived
one, and it makes the story feel very natural and very integral with
Tolkien's world. Beautifully done!

Title: Seeing Stars · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 360
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:33:30
Spoilers!
I was completely sold on this story after the first paragraph.
Actually, I was laughing a little too hard to continue for a while,
but once I calmed down, I thoroughly buried myself in the rest of the
story and found my efforts greatly rewarded. Raksha has crafted a
masterpiece, and what makes it all the more amazing is that it's been
crafted from the perspective of a thoroughly inebriated Faramir.

There are only a few characters in Tolkien's world that I would trust
to carry off an insightful perspective while completely intoxicated,
and Faramir is one of these characters. Despite his weaving steps, he
is prone to profound insights. And in the midst of his somewhat
rambling excitement, he covers a wealth of fascinating topics. His
encounter with the White Tree was probably my favorite, and I love how
much hope he found in that symbol: hope for both himself and his new heir.

The capstone on the story, though, was Aragorn's appearance. He was
like the catalyst that set off the rest of Faramir's thoughts, and his
gentle and amused guidance kept me smiling as he coaxes Faramir to
bed. I also loved the quiet cameos of characters like Arwen and
Legolas, which gave this story a feeling of being broad and
encompassing without ever moving it away from its true focus. The
final moments of the story sealed the deal as Faramir makes promises
to himself, his son, and his absent brother. Both heartwarming and
humorous, which is quite the trick. If only we could all be so gifted!

Title: Riding the Waves · Author: Claudia · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 211
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:34:27
Spoilers!
It always boggles my mind when such short stories carry such an
impact, and this is a very good example of that kind of talent. To
begin with, the descriptions are vivid and engrossing. They
immediately pull the reader into the waves with Frodo, and soon the
reader is body surfing along with him. Along with the descriptions,
the emotions are also well portrayed. You can feel both the fear and
the daring that accompanies each wave, and you can feel the excitement
of getting the timing right and being able to ride higher and higher.
But the true power of this story lies in its conclusion, as it reveals
just when all this excitement is taking place. The significance of the
date hammers home the power of the healing that Frodo has undergone,
and the final notes of the story are those of relief as the reader
leaves the waves behind so that Frodo can splash and play free without
fear that the pain of his memories might interrupt.

Title: Hope Remains · Author: Baggins Babe · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 118
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:36:56
Spoilers!
Great story that does a good job of reaching beyond Aragorn's death to
create a tale that still feels as though involves the Fellowship. The
descriptions were particularly vivid, and I love how Aragorn's
presence was enough to deter some would-be-robbers. But really, the
thing that got to me in this story was a single line of someone
referring to Samwise as Gaffer Sam. For all his fame and all his
accomplishments, Sam would be remembered as a simple hobbit. And that
is perhaps the most fitting tribute that I can think of for Sam.

Title: Where Shadows Lay No More · Author: Cathleen · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 358
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:37:36
Spoilers!
Ha! I knew it! ALL the Fellowship was there for the coronation. I love
this glimpse through Boromir's eyes. He can definitely appreciate the
significance of what's happening, and the different POVs offered here
provide the contrast needed to show what home really meant to Boromir.
But as high and lofty as the coronation is, it's also down-to-earth
thanks to the hobbits. Nice blend of perspectives.

Title: Tales from Tol Eressëa · Author: shirebound · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 214
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:37:58
This is a series of very gentle and peaceful tales, each one managing
to make me smile. My favorites were those in which the hobbits were
able to interact with elves, possibly because I'm a sucker for
anything that plays with mismatches. Frodo and Sam are vivid
characters, and they both compliment and contrast the elves they run
across. I love the similarities they find as well as the differences.

Title: When the King Came Back · Author: Cathleen · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 514
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:38:40
Spoilers!
Homecomings are definitely not easy. That's partially why I love the
fact that Tolkien didn't just end with the destruction of the Ring.
That's only part of the tale. The rest of the tale is getting the
heroes back where they belong, and Cathleen tackles this beautifully
by expanding Pippin's homecoming. I love the characterization of
Paladin, who is portrayed as a good father with a fierce love for his
son. That just makes the homecoming more complicated, because his fear
for his son transformed into anger along the way, and getting past
that anger is difficult for Pippin, especially when he first arrives
and is only prepared to meet his father's anger with the loss of his
own temper. Excellent family dynamics and wonderful little story woven
neatly around and after the scouring of the Shire.

Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:40:56
Spoilers!
The mood of this story is something of a small masterpiece. With some
very clever narrative, Gwynnyd presents a complete and nuanced
original character who is proud, stubborn, and looking down the long
road to ruin. Through this character's observations, a second original
character is presented, who is stalwart, brave, and seems to be coming
back from the long road to ruin. The both awkward and matter-of-fact
way that the housing contract between the two is arranged is amusing
and heart-warming. I love the way that Calendes tests Borion by asking
him if he would still buy the house even if she did not agree to wed
him. This story is proof that there is always hope, even though some
might not know where to look in order to see it.

Title: Look Not With Longing · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 479
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-09 18:42:55
Spoilers!
The first word that came to mind while reading this story was the word
"bittersweet." Which is actually my favorite kind of ending for a long
story, and it's the kind of ending that Dwimordene's story is all
about. Faramir, of course, would be among those able to comprehend and
understand these kinds of feelings, and he makes for a great conduit
to help the readers understand, also. I loved his musings on how this
was what they fought for but how in achieving this, something was
lost. In particular, the idea that the world was ["dimmer"] after
victory really caught my attention. Without the contrast of Sauron,
there's nothing to force the opposing forces to be that much better or
to look that much brighter. It goes back to the idea that the shining
ages of chivalry are just that in societal memory: shining. And
despite the darkness of Sauron, there's something about the past that
Faramir misses. Because in losing it, he lost the part of himself that
was trained to contend with it.

But Faramir, being Faramir, is also able to see the good. And even as
he mourns his lost self, he's ready to embrace the new. And his
ability to find that readiness in the faces of others is a wonderful
note on which to conclude. Powerful story!

Title: Between Childhood and Coming of Age · Author: Dreamflower ·
Races: Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 141
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 19:37:36
as i began to re-read to review, one thing kept coming to mind "and
then he met tree beard 'and the sap began to rise' "! that first dance
back in Shire may be very enlightening.

Title: The Last Summer · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits · ID: 143
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 19:41:57
review: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwww.
condolences on loss congrats on memories.

Title: Promises Broken and Kept · Author: periantari · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 144
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 20:10:27
i fear my diagnosiiie is life long love sickness. would like to make
arrangements for follow-up visits.

Title: The Making of a Ringbearer I: Adrift · Author: obelia medusa ·
Races: Hobbits: Childhood · ID: 145
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 20:13:10
if no man is an island than no hobbit should be adrift in a sea of
family, impresive take on the situation.

Title: Lily Took · Author: Cathleen · Races: Hobbits: Childhood · ID: 147
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 20:19:46
picking a hobbit to adopt must be easir than picking a human, they
seems so much more tactile and eager to serve.

Title: The Warmth of Morning · Author: Spindle Berry · Times: Late
Third Age: Gondor · ID: 148
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 20:25:28
beautifully moving and the use of touch as the tenderest, tightest
bond to hod a person to life-- magnificent. a true expression of love
in its most intense and private meanings. good luck.

Title: And Whisper You to This Earth · Author: Lady Elina · Genres:
Romance · ID: 151
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 20:36:34
you fulfilled your requested elements well and you gave the land and
the beings wonderful depth. conversations were between two males not
known to be verbose and it showed; short poignant and altogether
pleasing. of course it was the near perfect pair: erestor (lungs empty
slowly) and halabarad (heart beats faster). great start great finish
more please?????

Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 152
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 20:41:14
your opener____ penultimate skruffy ranger material.
your middle____ strong men need to relax and let others control, too
your ending_____much desired thankyou

Title: Trajectory · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 153
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 20:46:53
good story...but....why did you feel the need to re-enforce their
status? was there a literary relavance in typing their connection? i
don't see that it added to the story and i wonder if you just wanted
to tweak a few noses?

Title: Only Water in Your Veins · Author: Michelle · Races: Men · ID: 154
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 20:51:12
again proof that if nations must war it should be one on one combat
starting at the top of the chain of command.

Title: All That Remained · Author: Allee · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 155
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 21:06:16
good description of how sometimes people bounce when they hit the
bottom of the barrell and you need to wait until they come to a 'rest'
and be there with a pro-offered hand. healing elves and humans and not
a lesson to his name yet.

Title: Cuts Gone Wrong · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Mid Third Age:
Eriador · ID: 156
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 21:09:32
can we make this recommended reading for all chilhood care advocates:
if you never enforce the little rules, they never learn to take in the
long pitcure and keep looking for more and more chort cuts to the
gooies in life.

bet you hadn't got to that morale of the story yet?

Title: Call of the Dream · Author: Queen Galadriel · Genres: Poetry:
Drama · ID: 402
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-09 21:10:36
Spoilers!
For the most part, the rhyme scheme is filled well - there are some
irregularities, but they don't disrupt the rhythm overmuch.

Beautiful metaphors evoke a magical mood and a magical tale. What I
found especially impressive was how smooth the mood shifts - from
expectation to enoyment to loneliness - were acomplished; it was a
"weaving" that felt entirely natural and appropriate within the poem.

And despite the somber, gloomy mood at the end, there resides still a
spark of hope that things will turn better again, or that the more
positive vision could be attained.

Title: Galadriel Remembers · Author: Savageseraph · Genres: Poetry:
Drama · ID: 583
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-09 21:24:57
Although the poem is set after Galadriel's return to Valinor, I think
it captures well her initial reasons for going to Middle-earth in the
first place: her longing for excitement, adventure, exploration,
independence and power... It's as if now she has tasted all this, the
calm of the Undying Lands are all the more constricting to her.

Title: Merry on the Pelennor Fields · Author: Primsong · Genres:
Poetry: Drama · ID: 720
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-09 21:36:03
A painful poem full of grief and heart-ache. The images it evokes are
so visceral and stirring, they almost *demand* pity and compassion at
the same time as rejecting it in their starkness.

And when you think about that these terrible sights and thoughts come
from Merry's perspective - from the perspective of an innocent Hobbit
who must feel all the more overwhelmed by it all - their effect is all
the greater.

The uneven rhythm fits perfectly with the disturbed mind of Merry as
the narrator, the confusion in his mind and heart, that can't really
encompass it all and therefore flits from a detail to his feelings to
distraught questions and back.

The play with sensory details - sound, colour, dullness, coldness,
reek - is very effective, and gives the readers a three-dimensional
experience of the scene.

Title: Waterloo · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 158
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-09 22:06:42
i have always seen lothiriel as a sensable, intellegent woman of very
young age, i'm so glad you used this to make such an impressive
message about the various levels of healing based on the degrees you
are exposed to life threatening incidents. IMPRESSIVE!!!

Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-09 23:09:17
Spoilers!
A nice, sweet character study of an aged Faramir, using the means of a
chess board. Very nicely done.

Title: Name Calling: Group Identity and the Other among First Age
Elves · Author: Angelica · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 322
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-09 23:24:33
A very interesting and informative essay, exploring the subject in a
way that makes it much easier to comprehend and follow. Thank you for
writing and sharing.

Title: A New Day · Author: Oshun · Genres: Longer Works · ID: 35
Reviewer: Jael · 2008-09-09 23:34:44
Spoilers!
What? You mean to tell me Fingon/Maedhros isn't canon? Let's just say,
you would never guess that from reading Oshun's storyverse. In Oshun's
tales, those two are perfect -- made for each other, and no other
reality is possible.

Oshun loves the Feanorians, the Finweans, and the Noldor, in that
order, and by the time you have finished reading, you will too. This
story is the jewel in the crown of her Fingon/Maedhros works.

Oshun's strengths are her deep understanding of family, emotional, and
political interplay -- of which there is much in this aftermath of
Maedhros's rescue from Thangorodrim. As one would expect from this
author, the detail of costume and setting are rich. I could almost
feel the breeze on my face off of Lake Mithrim and see the sparkle of
a chess set.

And yet, in a departure for this author, it is not all witty
conversation, gorgeous robes and smoldering erotica. This time, Oshun
takes us inside the pits of Thangorodrim to visit the heart of darkness.

I recommend this story highly to lovers of the Simarillion. And for
those who are not -- it will make you one.

Title: Maglor's Song · Author: Robinka · Genres: Poetry: Drama · ID: 398
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-10 03:32:26
Spoilers!
This poem does a very nice job of capturing the torture of being an
artist unable to create. I found the imagery to be very evocative and
very fitting for Maglor's character. Nicely done, Robinka.

Title: Shire · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Poetry: Hobbits · ID: 469
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-10 04:59:34
This tanka does a very good job capturing the simple sensuality of the
Shire - exactly what a tanka should do, with its focus on nature. I
could imagine the scene very easily through the evocative language,
and it felt like a welcome, homey place, just as the Shire should be.

Title: And Then There Was Cake, or Begetting Day Horrors · Author:
Klose · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 540
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-10 08:40:56
Spoilers!
*Snort* Ouch, poor Maitimo! The various indignities suffered by him
through this family party seem all too familiar to some of us.
Relatives are those lovely people you have to endure even when they
are acting rather embarrassing, and this tale shows us that not even
the highest of the Noldor are immune to that particular truth. Maybe
even less immune than others... Very funny tale, very well done. Thank
you for writing and sharing!

Title: The Librarian · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 700
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-09-10 08:58:22
This is a beautifully humorous tale, and I especially liked the end
pointe. Ah, the troubles of bringing up an imaginative, intelligent
and curious child! It is refreshing to see Elves having these troubles
as well! Very funny, and a completely delightful read.

Thank you for writing and sharing!

Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-10 17:36:28
Spoilers!
What a lovely story. I thought at first it was to be a Faramir passing
away story, but now I see it is a Faramir passing things on story.
Your allegory with the chess pieces was inspired, delicate and never
forced. I particularly liked that you did not choose sides: the black
knights and the White Lady were all on the side of good. You touched
on so much without giving us a lesson, either.

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Title: Surprise Inspection · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 207
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-11 04:26:12
This was a delicious romp, very enjoyable. I could feel the heat, and
found myself chuckling at the right points. Irreverent to good affect
- thanks for this read, it was really a lot of fun.

Title: The Search · Author: rhyselle · Genres: Poetry: Late Third Age
· ID: 501
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-11 04:28:08
This poem does a great job capturing Gollum's voice while still giving
him a measure of dignity, a forlorn quality rather than being all
grasping. Nicely done!

Title: Creation Myths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 300
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-11 04:28:46
Spoilers!
This drabble does a fantastic job of contrasting the two modes of
creation that drive Feanor and Iluvatar. I am not sure I completely
agree with Tolkien's idea that beauty would come out of disharmony in
the Music, but this is more a theological/philosophical difference I
have with Tolkien; Tanaqui uses this idea to good affect, giving us a
glimpse into the mind of Iluvatar that felt thoroughly canonical.

On the other hand, it seems that Feanor's (and by extension the
Noldor's) drive to be perfect is in turn their great flaw. I mean
perfect more in the sense of complete so that any change can only be
an imperfection, more than in the sense of lacking faults. This sheds
an interesting light on his oath, binding his sons to the past until
it destroys them.

All of that in 100 words... nicely done indeed.

Title: In the Van · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres: Humor ·
ID: 72
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-11 07:52:32
Spoilers!
Ah, yes--let's all crawl into Gandalf's van and head for the Morannen!
Heh!

A wonderful read as we compare who can best read maps with the one who
refuses to ask for directions. Not that he needs it, being [trained in
orienteering], not that such skills appear to have helped him much in
the past!

As filled with giggles as a good chocolate chip cookie is of walnut
pieces and chunks of mint chocolate!

Title: When the King Came Back · Author: Cathleen · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 514
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-11 13:16:05
I was very flattered and honored when Cathleen chose the very first
story I ever wrote for a remix challenge! She used only some of it for
a jumping off point to create a story all her own--there is a very
different dynamic between her Paladin and her Pippin, and mine, and it
was fascinating to see how she could use the same elements to create a
completely different story.

I especially love the interactions between Paladin and Eglantine. They
are a strong couple, and very loving parents.

Title: Parting Gifts · Author: Fiondil · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Post-Ring War · ID: 452
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-11 13:17:07
Spoilers!
Such a touching story, it made me both grin and tear up at the same
time. I've often thought of how it must have been for Legolas,
bestowing his heart and friendship so firmly among mortals, he knew
all along the grief it would bring him, yet still he loved them freely
still. I really like the forethought that Gimli put into his Gift--for
it would indeed have been hard for him to part at last.

And I also loved all of those who gathered there to honor him as well.
*sniff*grin*

Title: Here's To The King! · Author: Jael · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands
· ID: 204
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-11 13:21:13
Well, when one is immortal, I suppose that scurrilous songs have a
really long shelf-life! Good heavens! I'm sure that's an earworm that
is going to make the rounds of Mirkwood now.

Poor Legolas--his father really gives him a hard time, LOL!

Title: A Summer Night's Peace · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 694
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-11 13:21:53
Larner's interpretations of the relationship between Aragorn and
Frodo, especially post-Quest, is filled with a good deal of rich
symbolism. She uses the White Tree effectively here, in this
conversation between the two of them. Rarely, for her, this is written
in Aragorn's first person POV, and she manages to keep his dignified
voice throughout. A very soothing and gentle story.

Title: Music hath Charms · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 361
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-11 13:22:23
This was fun. I got quite a chuckle out of Aragorn's and Faramir's
solution to their problems with their wives.

Title: The Best Sword Ever · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age ·
ID: 290
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-11 13:30:58
I like stories that bring in unexpected connections between the
characters, and that explore their relationships. It is easy to
imagine this small connection between Thorongil and young Boromir, and
how it reverberates later on.

Title: Twentynine White Horses · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 557
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-11 14:26:26
Cute. Adar will always be adar--to the consernation--and relief--of
his ion.

Title: Healing · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves · ID: 419
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-11 16:52:32
Spoilers!
I never thought of myself particularly as one who loved Elves, but
Bodkin has the capacity to bring them alive as almost no one else can
or does. I have so come to love Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas, and their
families as she depicts them--their wit, their foibles, their greatness.

And this story in which Celeborn, finally reunited with he beloved
wife, describes what was experienced in the Mortal Lands and
specifically how those Elves who remained faded--it is poignant and
beautiful. A land gone deaf and dumb; Elves who cannot remain fully
without the relationship they've ever known to land and trees--no
wonder they were drawn and weak when at last they arrived within Aman!

Beautiful and grievous at one and the same time.

Title: A Sleep Over · Author: Phyncke · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Finwe · ID: 160
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 06:24:01
geuss we know how she got so impressively detatched.

Title: Comfort · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves: House of Elrond · ID: 161
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 06:27:30
warrior to warrior, magnificent

Title: A Dream Come True · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 162
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 06:32:12
Spoilers!
after fighting to preserve family and becoming used to a certain level
of behaviour, he seems to have compromised himself if not her.
ahh,mumak juice!!!

Title: An Autumn Fair in Halabor · Author: Soledad · Times: Mid Third
Age · ID: 165
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 06:33:34
wonderful read and good luck

Title: Into the Woods · Author: Gloria Mundi · Times: Modern Times ·
ID: 593
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 06:39:59
not fond of the genre, but beautifully written.

Title: Shire · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Poetry: Hobbits · ID: 469
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-12 07:08:38
Spoilers!
I know I have difficulties with really appreciating tankas, so I tried
to read this one with a very conscious, aware mind, slowly letting
each single word sink in and then contemplating the "aftertaste" of
the poem as a whole in its expression and impression (and I think I've
totally muddled my metaphors now *g*).

Anyway, I really liked this poem and the images and feelings it
evokes: Buccolic charm, hominess, a rootedness to the land, to family
and custom. Calm, and peacefulness. The appreciation for what one has,
and yes, for the ["simple life"] and all it entails of joys and
contentments (and I liked the subtle reference to Bilbo's prologue
from the film).

Despite its severe limitation of length, the words chosen give a
surprisingly detailed picture, in delicate yet colourful brushstrokes.

A perfect encapsulation of what the Shire and its inhabitants stand
for in Tolkien's work. And, as far as my lay opinion can tell, a
wonderful example also of the technique and intent of a tanka.

Title: The Return · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Drama · ID: 167
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 07:16:33
gentle, subtle and handled with love, well,well done

Title: Dragons In The Trollshaws · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Adventure
· ID: 170
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 07:20:43
when does glorfy learn not to play with fire?

Title: The Visitor · Author: Rowan · Genres: Drama · ID: 174
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 07:30:45
a chance, just a chance to know him.

Title: The Legend of the Grey Riders · Author: Jay of Lasgalen ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 176
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 07:32:47
talk about feeding one's ego...cute

Title: The Gardener Speaks · Author: Armariel · Genres: Poetry:
Hobbits · ID: 428
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-12 07:34:48
A moving, gentle tribute to friendship. I especially liked how Sam
recalled the gradual change the friendship between him and Frodo
underwent from the time they were both children - with Sam still very
small - to the time of the Quest and the present dire plight in dismal
horror of Mordor.

The poem touches on many very small moments that nevertheless have
much meaning for the two friends and for their lives; those bright,
joyful memories manage to pierce through and banish the ["ashy
dreams"] of the moment for a time.

Title: Care to Ride My Hot-Rod Fell Beast? · Author: viv · Genres:
Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 180
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 07:38:14
swmarmy acheived

Title: The Ring That Sauron Forged · Author: Larner · Genres: Poetry:
Hobbits · ID: 645
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-12 07:53:08
This poem reminds me of a game in German, where one player begins with
"I pack my suitcase and take with me...", names one item, the next
player repeats this and adds another item and so forth (and I suppose
similar games are played all over the world).

The poem is inventive and intricate despite it appearing simplistic on
the first look. There is a very tight, focussed plot thread in this
counting rhyme (or however you may call this form), that - while
telling the history of the Ring backwards - gradually tells the story
"in the right order" and inevitably builds to a meaningful climax.

Th poem is best read aloud, to enjoy the catching rhythm and
especially the *sounds* of the chosen rhymes.

Title: Frogdom · Author: Neilia · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands · ID: 192
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 07:58:35
cheeky little tale

Title: The Language of Waves · Author: Claudia · Races: Hobbits · ID: 193
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 08:00:59
peaceful little adventure you give him

Title: Some Seasons · Author: sophinisba solis · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 199
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 08:04:42
theirs was a course that needed careful steering, you did it good

Title: The Westering Fire · Author: Aprilkat · Races: Hobbits · ID: 200
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 08:06:19
our hero----deeeep sighhhhhhhhhhhhh

Title: My Shining Stars · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of
Elrond · ID: 371
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-12 16:04:45
Spoilers!
I can easily see Elrond feeling just this way toward his father, and
the fact that he still hopes to see the star of Earendil speaks highly
of his characters. A very nice piece of character writing.

Title: No Man's Land · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Drabbles · ID: 726
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-12 16:05:13
*shivers* Given how many of his close friends died in that war and his
Germanic name, this seems all too likely. A not-so-pleasant
possibility, but a fine look at what might have been.

Title: The Healers from the Sea · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 202
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 19:53:48
wonderful story, should have been cross-cultural as smart as they are

Title: Men of the Twilight · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Romance:
Drabbles · ID: 209
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:06:16
pretty posey

Title: A Matter of Ill Reputation · Author: Lily · Races: Hobbits:
Childhood · ID: 210
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:07:30
the travails of youth

Title: Riding the Waves · Author: Claudia · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 211
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:09:19
Spoilers!
not sure i like surferboy image for frodo

Title: Sharing Good News · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 216
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:11:17
knew they were old friends, but really?????

Title: Fit for a King · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 217
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:13:15
boys will be boys, add horses and expect more

Title: Sun · Author: Claudia · Races: Cross-Cultural: Frodo and
Faramir · ID: 223
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:20:47
being--perfect fit

Title: Lost · Author: Claudia · Genres: Adventure · ID: 226
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:22:48
tricksey, tricksey he is

Title: Secrets · Author: Aprilkat · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 229
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:26:52
thank the valar for little girls

Title: A Day in Time · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Multi-Age · ID: 230
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:28:53
no mare bubble and squek at bedtime.

Title: In the Hands of the King · Author: fantasyfan · Times: Late
Third Age: Gondor · ID: 231
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:31:36
personally two favorite blankets; a warm fuzzy and a satin smooth snuggly.

Title: Coming Home · Author: brindlemom2 · Genres: Romance: Elven
Lands · ID: 233
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:33:36
pateince is a learned skill and i think you learned it good.

Title: Journey's End · Author: Ignoble Bard · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 234
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:36:03
smitten-ed me you have

Title: Worlds Within Worlds · Author: Rubynye · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 237
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 20:43:18
au-y kink-y yumm-y

Title: Pippin and the Incredible Shrinking Piglet · Author: Cathleen ·
Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 241
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 23:36:35
such a literal lad , at times!

Title: Incarnation · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor:
Drabbles · ID: 242
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 23:38:04
pippin as healer---scary

Title: Nine Companions · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 259
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 23:50:31
fine tradition to mark his reign

Title: Brotherhood · Author: Violin Ghost · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 261
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-12 23:55:50
brotherhood begins in so many places

Title: Cinnamon and Chocolate · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Romance ·
ID: 264
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 00:16:16
we need to bury this title; my family thinks its my special combo!

Title: The Portrait · Author: agape4gondor · Races: Men: Pre-Ring War
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 288
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 00:26:08
awfully thoughtful gift from young warriors

Title: Enticements · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Boromir or Faramir · ID: 266
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 00:29:16
wonder which half made him realize it wasn't real?

Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 00:31:49
where partnership may lead is always a question.

Title: In The Midst Of Summer · Author: Cuthalion · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 270
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 00:39:22
such sweet sorrow

Title: Shelter From the Storm · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 315
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 00:45:52
nifty glimpse into gondor life to help the fellows bond.

Title: Wonderful Tonight · Author: Violin Ghost · Genres: Romance:
Gondor · ID: 320
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 00:53:40
not generally fond of song based fictions but this is a gentle classic
20's or 30's based movie with the same melody playing all through the
film. embraceable.

Title: One Equal Temper of Heroic Hearts · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres:
Romance: Gondor · ID: 334
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:02:56
reading your position on a curve is always misleading.

Title: The Search · Author: rhyselle · Genres: Poetry: Late Third Age
· ID: 501
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-13 01:03:36
From a technical standpoint, I find the poem rather uneven, but it
captures well the relentlessness and intensity of Gollum's obsession
and manages to evoke pity for him.

Title: The Ribbon · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 336
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:05:44
on going therapy; must not be on a government run medical program.

Title: Acquittance · Author: Aprilkat · Genres: Drama · ID: 337
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:10:20
very nice use of someone elses oc; wonderful birthday gift,{best form
of admiration is imitation, or something like that}

Title: Trading Pledges · Author: Adaneth · Races: Dwarves · ID: 339
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:21:00
a lovely peek beyond the curtain of secrecy

Title: Weathertop · Author: Primsong · Genres: Poetry: Late Third Age
· ID: 597
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-13 01:22:59
Wonderfully rich, precise prose with excellently chosen, evocative
metaphors and descriptions. Captures the moody, haunted, shifting
atmosphere of what is being described in each respective part. I
particularly liked how the pace, the length of the lines adapted to
express closely the content of each different part.

There is a quiet yet compelling rhythm in the word order and it feels
like even the sound of words was considered before chosing them and
placing them where they are.

I think my favourite part may be ["The Glory of Shadows"], because it
conveys so very well exactly what the title says.

Title: Consolation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Steward's Family · ID: 341
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:34:03
this is probably your greatest quartet and you deploy them well.

Title: Sunset Gates · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
· ID: 342
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:35:34
whoops! i think i fell off the map.

Title: The Nag · Author: celticbard · Races: Men: Steward's Family ·
ID: 347
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:38:27
wish you had taken the story a little further

Title: Elflings · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 348
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:40:57
ahh single parenthood

Title: Three Songs · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Poetry: Late Third Age
· ID: 301
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-13 01:41:50
These three very diverse poems reflect in form and content the
character of the respective protagonist.

Lotho's poem (although moving) I find rather self-pitying, without any
acknowledgement that he might have been culpable in any way.

Grima's is maliciously gleeful and contemptuous.

Frodo shows his thoughtfulness and compassion even against those who
did him (and others) harm. His very generous wish shows his greatness
of spirit (although I personally wouldn't want Lotho anywhere *near*
the Mallorn!).

Title: Seaworthy · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 349
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:42:53
she is one mistress you must not piss off, you she may like today.

Title: Estel I Was Called · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 351
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:44:27
and the name game begins again

Title: Of Old It Was Not Darksome · Author: EdorasLass · Races:
Dwarves · ID: 70
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-13 01:45:56
Spoilers!
In retrospect it seems perfectly obvious that this moment would have
occurred, though I don't think I'd imagined it before. I particularly
liked the touches of realism (like that Balin's tomb wasn't big
enough), and the hint of deep friendship between Boromir and Gimli. A
very original and moving piece.

Title: Second Best · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 384
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:47:47
where will we break the cycle, get kicked by the man, kick your
secratary, she goes out and kickes the guard dog....where does it end?
your live journal perhaps?

Title: Birthday Outing · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 386
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:49:36
youth... impatience... snippy.... and out performed.

Title: Possessing the greatest powers · Author: Tanaqui · Times:
Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 387
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:53:02
the cleaving of the world they knew, but not the end they feared; nice
save

Title: Seven Sisters · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Other Beings · ID: 388
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:54:09
this one seems a little dark for you. not bad just dark.

Title: Ed'ledhron · Author: Elanor Silmarien · Races: Hobbits · ID: 392
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 01:57:59
a tough sale but i think you may be onto something.

Title: Things as they were in all the days of my life · Author:
Tanaqui · Races: Men: Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 393
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 02:01:54
you make him seem all too human (at least to his best friend)

Title: Bearer of the Ring · Author: ConnieMarie · Genres: Poetry:
Hobbits · ID: 396
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 02:06:02
poetry, not mt style
poetry, yours at least was readable
poetry, good luck and may you try again next year.

Title: Arvedui v. Pelendur · Author: Roh Wyn · Genres: Non-Fiction ·
ID: 277
Reviewer: Illwynd · 2008-09-13 02:09:48
Spoilers!
Can two decisions that come to apparently opposite conclusions both be
right? That is the dilemma that Roh Wyn tackles in this essay, in
regard to a difficult point that many fans have likely wondered about,
and she untangles the issues with superb analytical skill. The
question is whether Faramir's recognition of Aragorn as king of Gondor
was legally correct (in addition to being, quite clearly, morally
right), after previous legal decisions denying the throne to the heirs
of Isildur. She uses the arguments of Pelendur and Arvedui as well as
other canon evidence to come to a strong conclusion--that Pelendur was
legally right to deny the throne to Arvedui, but that Faramir was
right also, and did not actually go against that judgment when he
asserted that Aragorn was the legal heir. The essay also goes beyond
this aim, and illuminates a lot about the characters involved and the
applicable laws in Gondor, Arnor, and Numenor.

The language of the essay and the reasoning she uses to reach her
conclusions are cogent, clear, and understandable, even to those
unused to sorting through the fine points of legal issues. A
fascinating and convincing essay, and a joy for those who like digging
into the details of Middle-earth!

Title: The Last Dance · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits: Family ·
ID: 397
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 02:22:18
proof the old saying it's not who gets your first meaningful kiss it's
who gets your last that matters

Title: Steward's Trumpets · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times:
Late Third Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 400
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 02:24:42
healing and not maudilin at all, peace be unto him

Title: Forfeit · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 401
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 02:27:38
i'm not sure that you should call them friends they don't believe in
his defense. but then again they are used to black and white justice
no grey allowed so maybe they really thought to be helping. tough
call, but well written.

Title: One Summer Day · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 535
Reviewer: Illwynd · 2008-09-13 02:48:22
This set of four tales, carefully and seamlessly woven together, shows
Annmarwalk's inimitable style to great advantage. Her wonderful OC
Mag, together with everyone's favorite Gondorian brothers as well as
the Prince of Dol Amroth, all add their part and their perspectives on
a perfect, beautiful day. The rich descriptions flow together with the
emotional resonance of the characters, and here and there touches of
humor and marvelous insight, into a fun, sweet story will make you
smile and sigh happily and wish you were there yourself.

And as for Boromir's question in the first part--I think I will be
wondering that myself for quite some time!

Title: The Road Trip · Author: Garnet Took · Times: Modern Times · ID: 410
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 02:50:14
not quite "in the van" but....

Title: The Vase that was Broken · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 417
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 03:01:04
un observant but we need them.

Title: Lingering Shadow · Author: Shireling · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Boromir or Faramir · ID: 412
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 03:05:48
this is one of those well written stories that i never plan to read
again, others of yours i look forward to reading over and over through
the seasons on life.

Title: BRIDGE: Pá Valaraucar ar Námier · Author: Fiondil · Races:
Other Beings · ID: 415
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 03:12:34
i lkie your sense of justice.

Title: Many Branches · Author: Baranduin · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Frodo and Faramir · ID: 420
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 03:21:53
neat tidy story, messy drinkers!

Title: A Midsummer Day's Dream · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 422
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 03:25:22
i'm glad he went quickly; and torn if it was good or bad that he
doesn't die in aragorn's arm--too cliche?

Title: Your Father Loves You · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 424
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 03:28:37
onion peeling at its best. reasons upon reasons upon excuses.

Title: And all was made ready · Author: Dreamflower · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 427
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 03:31:55
you make that morning breath, and live and explode with possibilities.

Title: The Houseless · Author: Jael · Genres: Horror · ID: 178
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-13 03:52:07
This one-shot has a truly eery feel, seeming both authentically
Middle-earth and at the same time incorporating the ghost story Jael
references at the end. Fans of the Mirkwood elves will probably want
to give this one a read.

Title: First Name Terms · Author: Marchwriter (The Lady of Light) ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 311
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-13 04:17:46
Spoilers!
Ooo, this story has some really great tension to infuse the first
meeting between Aragorn and Galadhrim. This isn't under the best of
circumstances, and Lothlorien seems to be xenophobic anyway, so the
wariness on both parts felt very natural. Wonderful tone, all around.

Title: To Give Hope · Author: peredhil lover · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 456
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-13 04:18:27
Spoilers!
I really enjoyed this examination of Gilraen's conflicting emotions.
There is duty but there is also grief, and with grief comes a sense of
betrayal, anger, fear, and a host of other emotions all jumbled
together. Watching her overcome her grief revealed the strength of the
Dunedain within her, and I have no doubt but what she contributed
greatly to Aragorn's strength.

Title: A Little Misunderstanding · Author: Radbooks · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 275
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-13 04:19:30
Spoilers!
I'm really quite taken with this little story. It encompasses a wide
variety of problems, emotions, and characters. First, there is a very
young Halbarad and the Rangers. Halbarad's response upon seeing
Elladan and Elrohir would have been comical were it not for what had
happened to inspire that fear. It's a grim reminder of Arathorn's fate
and the dangers faced by all the Rangers and their kin. Halbarad's
hazy memory of Aragorn's departure links up to a hazy memory of
Elladan and Elrohir to make for a terrifying prospect in Halbarad's
mind, and I have to applaud him for taking the better part of valor. I
think I would have done the same.

Then there's Elladan and Elrohir, who give us some great background
information on Arathorn's death without it ever feeling like a
flashback. We get their perspective and along with their emotions,
which are still very fresh. Their mentions of Gilraen speak volumes of
her character, too. I liked the touch about her having wanted to send
a letter, and I can only imagine at the restrictions under which she
chafes. Brilliant story all around!

Title: The Legend of the Grey Riders · Author: Jay of Lasgalen ·
Races: Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 176
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-13 04:20:17
Spoilers!
What a fascinating examination of an occurrence that Tolkien hinted at
but never fully explored. Myths and legends about ancient days are
going to naturally spring up, and within the books, the Rohirrim get a
first-hand glimpse of these myths when they encounter Merry and
Pippin. But Merry and Pippin didn't live back in the days when the
ancestors of the Rohirrim knew hobbits. Elladan and Elrohir did, and I
loved the discussion about a myth that the twins helped create. But
half the fun in having a myth is the mystery behind it, and I fully
respect the decision not to disclose the identity of the riders. That
said, I do like the idea that Faramir knows. If anyone could figure it
out, it would be him. Lovely story!

Title: The Ghost in the Garden · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races: Elves
· ID: 272
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 04:21:41
confusing, baffling

Title: Eight Weeks · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 273
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 04:25:28
next time can we tie him up and wax him?

Title: Arvedui v. Pelendur · Author: Roh Wyn · Genres: Non-Fiction ·
ID: 277
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 04:40:59
and this adds to my enjoyment how? glad you won the debate. yeah,
team. rah, rah, rah.

Title: The Clear Ringing Of Silver Trumpets · Author: Lithilien
Quicksilver · Genres: Drama: Featuring Boromir or Faramir · ID: 278
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 04:46:21
well written, smooth paced, carefully crafted, makes the sounds of
trumpets once again a symbol of triumph and victory with a fell cost
to some families.

Title: Celevon a Mallen · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 279
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 04:51:45
touching, moving us through seasons of love and leaving us hoping for
spring.

Title: And so our friendship began... · Author: Amarok · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 281
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 05:12:18
they say there are only so many plot lines and yet this is the first
time i have found this approach, very nice touch.

Title: Dark Dreams · Author: Avon · Races: Men: Steward's Family · ID: 282
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 05:19:33
we borrow from so many when we write and sometimes we even know who
they are, congrats of naming them.

Title: Star's End · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of Elrond ·
ID: 283
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 05:36:11
but was it fair of him to interfere, she was supposed to give back the
gift.

Title: Cold Be Hand and Heart and Bone · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Villains: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 286
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 05:39:09
eerie, this is how he starts?

Title: The Best Sword Ever · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age ·
ID: 290
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 05:49:07
but how to merge childlike adoration and adult desperation?

Title: Star-songs of the Eorlingas · Author: Tanaqui · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 291
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 05:52:50
my first time reading this i thought "newly weds learning each other
through the stars and legends of their people".

can't see faramir enjoying book learning on the subject!

Title: Epiphany · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 293
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 05:54:42
yes, how did that pass them by and didn't he do it well?

Title: Reflections in the Smoke · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 294
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 05:57:27
do you suppose they give him a new name, something like faithful unto
death?

Title: My Oaths I Will Keep · Author: Encaitariel · Races: Elves:
House of Finwe · ID: 298
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-13 06:39:08
The coming of Beren son of Barahir was as the footsteps of doom to the
people of Finrod Fegalund, much as the coming of Frodo Baggins
heralded much the same to the denizens of the Golden Wood. This story,
told mostly through the eyes of Gildor Inglorion, is solemn and sad;
but one can see why it was that of all those who'd lost their lives in
the Mortal Lands, Finarfin's son was one of the first to be rehoused.
His nobility and faithfulness would make him one anyone of honor would
be pleased to serve.

Beautifully, poignantly told.

Title: Dol Amroth Yule · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 295
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 06:45:50
probably the only time i have wanted to take andrahar out to the wood
shed. naughty boy!

Title: Leather · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 297
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 06:48:38
smell may be the primary sense, but touch is so much more!

Title: On Amon Sûl · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Frodo or Sam · ID: 299
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 06:53:10
found your use of letter size very useful and inventive. good luck.

Title: Yule Tails · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 303
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 06:55:15
the similarities and the vast differences in life lessons.

Title: Faeries · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 304
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 07:00:00
but you ended it too soon.

Title: Lock Out · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits · ID: 307
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 07:03:06
he still has attention problems,huh?

Title: Long Memories · Author: Bodkin · Times: Second and Early Third
Age · ID: 310
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 07:05:38
Spoilers!
the problem with living forever-- somebodies grandchild will marry
yours? and you'll have family dinners forever after!!!!!

Title: Hearts Like the Sea · Author: Ignoble Bard · Times: First Age
and Prior · ID: 36
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-13 08:36:08
Spoilers!
For Nowe and Elwe there was a shared love of the sea and its ways; and
that brought them together to explore the ways of traveling abroad
upon its surface. But for the younger Elf there was another desire as
well--to meet the Hunter who was said to take those Elves who left the
safety of the community.

Well told, in spite of the slash component.

Title: Clear Conscience (The Clear Shot Remix) · Author: Dreamflower ·
Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 680
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-13 12:19:18
Spoilers!
A lot of AUs seem to concentrate on tiny shifts that create huge
changes, but Dreamflower takes a slightly different approach with this
story. The tiny shift has certainly created change, but crux of the
story remains intact. There really are many roads leading to Rome. Or,
in this case, Minas Tirith. And by taking a different route, a few
people arrive at the end of the road that might not have otherwise
made it. Sometimes small changes can make big differences, but
sometimes they can leave well enough alone and just tweak the ending
to make it that much brighter.

Title: Shadow King · Author: Claudia · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Angst/Tragedy · ID: 227
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-13 12:20:44
Spoilers!
Ooo, very dark and very tragic. I love how this works in parallel with
canon. There are similar lines and similar actions, but it's horribly
tainted. Faramir's question to the people of Minas Tirith regarding
Aragorn's kingship was especially grim. Just a few well-placed words
really knock home the horror of what's happening. I love the subtle
narration of how the people ["managed"] to say yes. That was a
wonderfully grim touch. Now Faramir's joyful shout of ["Behold the
King!"] has such ominous tones to it.

And really, that's where the story gets its power. Extremes are best
exemplified by using contrast, and the contrast to such a dark tragedy
is hope. Which could have presented something of a problem, because
there is no hope to be found in this story. That much is abundantly
clear right from the start, and Frodo's fractured remembrances of the
road to Minas Tirith only serve to strengthen the feeling of utter
despair. But Claudia proves to be both a skilled and a shrewd author,
because even without hope in this story, there is definitely contrast,
and that contrast lies in Tolkien's canon. By picking the most
celebratory moments from the books for imitation, Claudia provides
instant contrast that makes an already dark AU even darker. And the
result is a chilling, bleak look at a terrible future. Fantastic story!

Title: Five things that never happened to Nerdanel · Author: Meril ·
Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 389
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-13 12:21:36
Spoilers!
Powerful and intriguing. I was especially taken with the last two
possibilities. They make for nice opposites! The fourth scenario has
such a drive to it. Even Nerdanel no longer knows what to make of her
feelings except that they're strong and they don't allow for anything
other than Feanor. It's a beautiful build on Feanor already had going
for him, and together, I shudder to think of what they've done. The
last possibility is very quiet and very still by contrast. There's
almost a static feel to it, and the compelling drama of the
Silmarillion fades away. Fascinating little AUs!

Title: For What I Wait · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 125
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2008-09-13 12:22:57
Spoilers!
If Feanor had survived, I can well imagine that this would be his
fate. It was easy to see him curled around Maglor, struggling to give
him life again. The story easily reminds one of Feanor's own fiery
spirit and the drive the possessed him to follow the Silmarils. But a
very long life has changed him, and there are moments in this story
that touch on the very depths of those changes. The idea that Feanor
refuses to weep again out of fear that he will never stop weeping is
heart-wrenching, but even more grievous are his memories of Maedhros.
Feanor remembers Maedhros's suicide as a rejection of his father's
gift of life rather than the more probable explanation that it was an
escape from the horrors that plagued their family. And even though it
seems he may have forgiven Maedhros, there's still a twinge of
bitterness. His desperation to keep at least Maglor with him also
seemed bitter, and it was clear he fought a losing battle. Very dark
and very despairing. I'm not Feanor's biggest fan, but even I felt
sorry for him in the end. And of course I ached for poor Maglor. The
thought that his sorrow had taken even his voice was a sobering
realization. Beautifully nuanced tale with a great eye for the
characterization of one of Tolkien's most complicated families.

Title: Maglor's Harp · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Horror · ID: 660
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-13 15:25:19
Ah--horror indeed. How he has lost himself!

Very--interesting, if horrifying, tale. Alas for what he has become.
Well told.

Title: My Brother. My Captain. My King. · Author: Amarok · Times: Late
Third Age · ID: 602
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-13 15:49:08
Spoilers!
A wonderful look at how movie-verse Boromir's relationship with
Aragorn grew until he at last offered his fealty. Sad, as is only
right; and the (original) temptation within the caves is a marvelous,
delightful surprise as Boromir does what he can for Aragorn, although
tempted to do otherwise.

Title: Five things that never happened to Nerdanel · Author: Meril ·
Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 389
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-13 15:59:03
Spoilers!
Four tragic choices, and one hopeful, peaceful one. It is too bad that
the last choice was not made; but considering her husband and his
nature it is probable it would never have been made to begin with. But
the thought of Dwarves remaining within Aman is delightful!

As for the fourth choice--even more tragic and bloody than what did
happen? It does not bear thinking of.

I am not a Sil reader or writer save on rare occasion; this could
perhaps bring me to read and write more.

Title: And Then There Was Cake, or Begetting Day Horrors · Author:
Klose · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 540
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-13 16:06:51
Spoilers!
Poor Maedhros, being the birthday boy of his large, truly troubled
family! It is not an honor to be envied! And Findekano WOULD do that! Heh!

A delightful chuckle of a read.

Title: A Great Cause for Concern · Author: Alassante · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 682
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-13 16:12:00
Spoilers!
A delight to read again as we watch Aule examine the friendship
between Gimli and Legolas. Legolas, a troublemaker? Not really! Heh!

A wonderful tribute to this unusual friendship and the loyalty between
dwarf and elf. Beautifully written.

Title: Home · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 533
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-13 19:11:18
Spoilers!
[Yes, even that elf.]

*snerks*

That line was brilliant, not just for its humor but because it keeps
the piece from getting a tad maudlin, as is so easy with post-quest
drabbles. It may be okay for an elf or even a man or hobbit to
pontificate about feelings, but for a dwarf --especially *this*
dwarf-- it is crucial to his character that he snap out of it. I can
very easily see this happening.

On a more practical note, I loved the details of how the dwarves are
building Aglarond. That gave the drabble a nice use of realism and
also struck me as very dwarvish (to be so absorbed in the
artisanship). It's details like these that make drabbles such a joy to
read, and this drabble does a nice job of working those details in
seamlessly.

Title: Pirates Ye Be Warned · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: Gondor
Drabbles · ID: 353
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 20:18:39
plays very cleanly.

Title: O Kheled-zâram fair and wonderful! · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 354
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 20:20:57
simply dwarfen

Title: Where Shadows Lay No More · Author: Cathleen · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 358
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 20:33:39
so ub-boromir and yet perfectly him, big brother,guide, mentor, protector.

Title: Seeing Stars · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 360
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 20:40:59
a sweet soppy faramir and still loveable (why must he be so faithful
to his wife and so out of bounds to us?)

Title: Music hath Charms · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 361
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 20:44:26
this should answer the debate is the quote about music "the savage
beast" or is it the "savage breast"? by the way happy b-day.

Title: Feelings of Superiority · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 362
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 20:50:42
are you sure this isn't a cross over to modern idiots, i mean men?

Title: The King's Colors · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 482
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-09-13 21:09:02
The trickiest part of AUs for me is whether the author can balance the
shift(s) to canon while maintaining accurate characterizations. I am
very much a character-driven reader; I can handle a slight bending of
Tolkien's beloved crew, but there usually has to be good reason behind
a change to how an individual would "normally" act or I most often end
up disengaging from the entire story.

Well, there are no concerns with ["The King's Colors"]. Dwimordene
alters quite a bit of the LotR story that leads up to this point in
the timeline, but the interaction depicted here feels as authentic as
something right from the Master's pen. Aragorn and Boromir *are* the
original Aragorn and Boromir, and the author handles this uncanonical
meeting superbly.

And as usual, there is never cause for complaint concerning the
technical aspects of writing with this author. The first few words
draw me in immediately, the stage is quickly but thoroughly set out,
and the initial promise is followed through to the end of a tight,
well-paced scene. The tense atmosphere is palpable, Boromir's inner
thoughts and the dialogue excellently handled. We are given very few
details of how this AU moment came about, but I did not find myself
dwelling on it; the concept is entirely plausible and a reader's
imagination easily fills in the gaps. The author's focus remains right
where it should be: a reader is no more distracted by extraneous
information than the two protagonists.

Despite the rough beginnings to this relationship, there is a clear,
definite feeling of hope in the end: Boromir, like his brother in
canon, will prove to be not wholly his father's son. A must-read for
any fan of Aragorn or the Brothers Mir!

Title: Shadow King · Author: Claudia · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Angst/Tragedy · ID: 227
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-13 21:18:33
Very chilling, but in a good way! You showed the depths of depravity
that the Ring could drive someone to (even Aragorn!) very well.

Title: Moved to Pity · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 366
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 22:51:29
Spoilers!
a good parent raises a child to make coices and then the parent must
live with them. wonderfully written.

Title: Taking Roots · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 367
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 22:53:10
immigrants seem to like other transplants

Title: Mournful Fords · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 368
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 22:54:51
sad to no longer be the hero of your child.

Title: Bibliophile · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 22:58:07
in my experience there is always something to be liked in the library.

Title: My Shining Stars · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of
Elrond · ID: 371
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 23:03:20
a child's love may be covered over but it always finds ways to expose
itself. thank you for showing us a path.

Title: Healing the Long Cleeve · Author: TopazTook · Genres: Longer
Works · ID: 133
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-09-13 23:12:18
I have read this story a couple of times and find it quite
interesting. It is not the tipical take on the relationship of Pippin
and Diamond.

I find Diamond to be a very simpathetic character in this story. She
has been given very little information on marriage and what it
involves, and most of what she has been told it either wrong or based
on her mother's sad experiences.

Diamonds brother needs an attitude adjustment and so does Pippin's
sister. (That's all I'll say about them)

The romance that develops between Pippin and Diamond is sweet, and
everything seems to work out for them.

All in all, a nice story of a growing love that survives despite their
families.

Title: Baker's Dozen · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 372
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 23:12:48
delightful tangle of ideals and ideas.

Title: Battle upon the Quays · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 376
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-13 23:17:14
Spoilers!
easy to forget hame field is only an advantage not a victory.

Title: The Flute · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-09-13 23:35:21
This is a sweet, hopeful story. The idea of Pippin having a connection
to all those he loves through the flute is a touching one. I do
wonder, though, what people thought when someone like Aragorn or
Faramir got a distant look on his face at an unexpected moment.

Golden did a wonderful job taking a story and a concept that came from
another genre and addapting them to the LOTR universe. Well done.

Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-13 23:51:13
Spoilers!
Sigh. This is such a lovely story, graceful and melancholy-elegiac
with touches of history and poetry and legend; very appropriate for
Faramir's old age. I just adore the flow here, as the soul-searing
Great Events in Gondor 3018-3019 pass from memory into a game of
strategy into history and a picture drawn by a child descended from
those who lived through it. And it ends with a vision, one shared by
Faramir and his great-grandson, of Minas Tirith and the rebuilt Minas
Ithil to be; that Faramir will not live to see but that the boy will.
I can't help but thinking that Faramir has had a lot to do with
assuring that young Beren, and others, will see that vision come true.

Well done!

Title: There shall be Mirth at our Meeting · Author: Imhiriel ·
Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 377
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-09-14 00:03:54
Spoilers!
With this, Imhiriel has written a drabble which Aragorn fangirls
everywhere can completely and totally relate to!

It takes some very particular skills to drabble effectively. An author
has to choose both the scene, and the words used to construct it, very
carefully. Trying to depict too much is as much of a mistake as not
giving the reader enough to work with. Imhiriel has proven herself
masterful at the genre, and this is no exception.

We get one brief scene, between two *original* characters, no less.
(No automatic background is conjured by the reader's imagination on
which the drabbler can build.) Yet we immediately identify with the
two women, know the exact setting and location, and even get a good
grasp of their personalities. There's not only an entire conversation
but action worked into the drabble as well; the whole scene plays out
in my head so clearly, like an excerpt from a film.

And what a conversation... *g* How many Aragorn fans have not let out
a ["dreamy sigh"] and wished for even such a brief encounter?

The canon quotes are put to very good use and are fulfilled
excellently here, as is the title: taken from a different source
altogether, and yet perfectly fitting.

I find the heart of this drabble goes far beyond two women reflecting
on an enjoyable meeting. Even more, I'm glad to get this peek into a
moment when a would-be King's heavy burdens are lightened, and his
laughter rings out. Truly delightful!

Title: The Misty Month · Author: Le Rouret · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Post-Ring War · ID: 454
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 00:22:19
before lord of the rings it was all king arthur, so the green knight
is one of the best theories i have followed in fanfic. terriffic.

Title: Answers · Author: Armariel · Genres: Poetry: Drama · ID: 458
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 00:27:19
but why make answers when you can't post them on to their recievers?

Title: Balm · Author: Armariel · Genres: Adventure · ID: 459
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 00:31:54
balm of and for the soul, thank you for rubbing it in nicely.

Title: Candles · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 460
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 00:34:43
you show one of sams talents, words might elude him but he knows about
setting the stage.

Title: Shire · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Poetry: Hobbits · ID: 469
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 00:51:17
small, not dainty; yet pleasing to the eye and ear.

Title: With Many "Fond" Acknowledgments · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 472
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 00:56:02
this is why equal never works.

Title: Choosing · Author: docmon · Genres: Drama · ID: 473
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:01:30
neat theory well presented good work.

Title: A Moment Away · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 474
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:03:03
sometimes a girl just needs these moments.

Title: The Otters of Imladris · Author: chaotic_binky · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 491
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:06:05
love the thought of these two raising young; one by the book and one
by the seat of the pants. monumental story and wonderful cast of
characters.

Title: Look Not With Longing · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 479
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:10:55
[Things had a weight to them then that he misses now—the world swept
clean of gods and demons is an open, airy space, yet dimmer—thinned.]

we forget one without the other is --yes--somehow lesser. wonderful
reminder.


Title: Labour Pains · Author: Aratlithiel · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 483
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:24:23
and the truth will out; but did you have to make us laugh so hard?

Title: Hide the Knives · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Humor: Gondor
· ID: 485
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:29:14
Spoilers!
i have often thought that fathers to be need a documantary movie about
their wives plans for future birth control methods before the delivery
should begin; it would save lots of terrorified men running screaming
from the delivery room, they would already be in another state.

Title: Seas of Fate · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 487
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:31:04
this is the man for this situation, he best knows the sea and her moods.

Title: Seeking the Sun · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men · ID: 488
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:35:09
you let the king and queen practice their parenting skills on their
subjects without making them insincere in their love and concern,
thank you.

Title: No Regrets · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 490
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 01:37:35
more important, how can aragorn not envy this; he never had it so he
can't miss it, and we know from other stories he chafes at the
restrictions of kingly confines.

Title: Starcrossed · Author: weepingnaiad · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 493
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 02:14:00
you stop just shy of making us all weeping sods, thank you.

Title: Pip-napped! · Author: Dreamflower/Lindelea CoAuthors · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 669
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-09-14 02:30:44
This is great action story: with just the right amount of romance
thrown in.

Pippin and Diamond are such a sweet couple.

There are so many great things in this story. It's a love story, an
adventure, a comedy all rolled into one.

The two pumbling bad guys reminded me a bit of the crooks in "Home
Alone". And Pippin gets to show his resourcefullness again. Yay!

This was a truly exciting read. I'm glad Dana wanted a Pip-napping story.

Title: A Moment in the Morning in Bree · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 731
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 02:59:59
Spoilers!
never shave to an audience they never appreciate the blood letting.

Title: Labour of Love · Author: Aprilkat · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Frodo and Faramir · ID: 733
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 03:13:31
i have chuckled often over the way women offer to alter their lovers
inseams for pregnancies but this... funny isn't the half of it; of
course some of that may be the angle from which he views said inseam.

Title: The Last Throw · Author: nau_tika · Genres: Drama · ID: 556
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 03:13:56
I liked how this story interwove the canonical elements almost
seamlessly, making the whole thing feel very much like Tolkien's
story. The dialect, too, was nicely done: the main character was
obviously working-class, yet he still had a nobility of dialect about
him that made him feel different from (say) a Gamgee or an Orc – he's
still Gondorian. Nicely done.

Title: Loudwater · Author: Adaneth · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 63
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 03:22:14
This was a really well-told piece of POV writing. I've seen pieces
that have taken on the Fords scene from nearly every perspective that
I could think of, but this was a new one, and you really gave that
character life - not easy to do in this case, I imagine. Well done.

Title: My Shining Stars · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of
Elrond · ID: 371
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 03:30:22
Spoilers!
Elrond has the wish to be reunited with those he loves as parents as
the grey ship carrying the Ringbearers approaches Tol Eressea. Rather
sad considering his attitude toward certain others....

Definitely thought-provoking.

Title: Blue · Author: red lasbelin · Races: Elves · ID: 563
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 03:40:10
Interesting as we see Glorfindel preparing to take on the lordship of
his house, as he ponders how he came to this point. Thoughtfully written.

Title: ...and the sound of a battered heart, beating · Author:
Lindelea · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 690
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 03:43:23
A touching lesson. I'm sure those that lived through the Scouring
would have needed to learn it. Good that Merry's there to remind Estella.

Title: Parth Galen · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 705
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 03:53:22
Spoilers!
Perhaps the most positive might-have-been for Parth Galen I've yet
read, as Boromir remembers words about honor spoken to him by
Andrahar. The outcome is not changed, perhaps, save that at no time
does Boromir question his own honor.

Warming to read.

Title: Primum Non Nocere (First, Do No Harm) · Author: febobe ·
Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 628
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 04:07:36
Spoilers!
And no harm does she do, not the Shieldmaiden; simple treatment,
warmth, and truly understanding companionship. And together
Shieldmaiden and Ringbearer find surcease from nightmares and pain and
chill.

A warm, comforting tale as Frodo at last finds some measure of peace
and rest, and shelter against certain memories from one who has faced
the same foe.

Hurt/comfort at its simplest and warmest, and well worth the read.

Title: In Good Company · Author: foxrafer (csevans8) · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 20
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 04:13:11
I really enjoyed this romp in Ithilien, it is so full of rich writing.
It was nice to see Faramir relax and enjoy a bit of well-earned peace
in the Fourth Age.

Title: U elyë, Ar-Pharazôn · Author: Elitihien · Times: Second and
Early Third Age · ID: 486
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 04:15:55
Miriel has every reason to curse the thought of her husband as she
struggles up the sides of Meneltarma as Numenor founders.

Some problems with language usage, but the feelings of frustration and
righteous anger and regret are fully conveyed.

Title: A Summer Night's Peace · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 694
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 04:21:29
Spoilers!
A sensitive vignette wherein Aragorn confronts both Frodo and the sad
fact of Frodo's mortality, after the victory over Sauron and Aragorn's
coronation. The greatness of Aragorn's position, all he has achieved
and all he has to anticipate, is a sad contrast with Frodo, whose
peace of mind, indeed his health, is compromised beyond any power in
Middle-earth to heal. The setting of the White Tree is a nice touch.

Title: Spoiled · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Drabbles · ID: 119
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 04:27:27
Spoilers!
It always seemed a bit cruel to me that Aragorn should grow up not
even knowing his true identity, but this other possibility makes that
temporary sacrifice seem well worth it, safety issues aside. I'm glad
that Aragorn learned humility, for that of all virtues seems crucial
to his success. Nice use of imagery and detail to drive this point
home, and with a commendable economy of words - just what a drabble
should do.

Title: The Healers from the Sea · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 202
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 04:36:52
A smoothly written encounter between a disconsolate, spiritually
exhausted Frodo and some unlikely healers during his journey to
Valinor. Sweet but not cloying, and a nice awakening of Frodo's
ability to feel curiosity and joy again. This seemed very like
Tolkien's Frodo to me, world-weary but still a determined individual.

Title: Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus · Author:
pandemonium_213 · Genres: Poetry · ID: 50
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 04:38:19
I could imagine a Noldorin craftsman or perhaps this author's beloved
Aulendil himself ;-) speaking this poem. And speaking as someone
trained in mathematics, it is very true that knowledge of the details
often increases rather than decreases our wonder of the thing. (To
paraphrase one of my professors: the more you know, the more you know
how little you know.) Pandemonium does a fine job of capturing this
distinction in poem form; scientist-types drawn to Middle-earth won't
want to miss this.

Title: The Healers from the Sea · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 202
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 04:55:46
Spoilers!
Not all who offer Frodo healing are two-legged, as he finds as Elrond
arranges a pause in their journey to Aman so he can learn more of the
dolphins who play in the ship's bow wave.

A gentle story, well told, of interactions with one of the Creator's
more joyful creatures.

Title: Burden · Author: Ancalime8301 · Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo
or Sam · ID: 734
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 04:57:52
because your chapters don't advance nicely this is all the review you get!

Title: Surprise · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 131
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 05:21:30
Spoilers!
Ah, Dawn, what a wonderful introduction of Mahtan, Istarnie, and their
most famous daughter, their surprise, as you have put it, Nerdanel. It
appears she is indeed her father's daughter. A wonderfully told story,
and love the insertion of the tale of stars coming from Aule's forge
as Varda capitalizes on a chance experience and takes it further.

How delightful!

Title: Last Stroke · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Drabbles · ID: 465
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 05:39:19
Spoilers!
When the wind blows out the banners and the device is not what one
would wish to see, how does one respond? For this lord of havens, it
is the sign of the end, perhaps.

A terrible might-have-been, and grievous, although well written,
powerful in its brevity.

Title: Bitter Sweet · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Steward's Family · ID: 536
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 05:51:12
Spoilers!
Indeed a perfectly named tale, as we see two lovers parted over the
matter of a marriage, until at last death does part husband and wife,
at which time one lover at last returns to the comfort of the other.

A nice might-have-been that follow's Ann's preferred Boromir/Theodred
arc. I find myself wondering what happened with Eomer in this possible
future, of course.

Very thoughtfully and tastefully presented as well as enacted by the
two main protagonists.

Title: The Kindly Airs · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 480
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-09-14 06:01:09
Spoilers!
Of all the many inhabitants of Middle-earth who were freed by Sauron's
destruction, I admit that I had never even thought of this "individual".

Dwimordene works a very effective personification, imbuing the East
Wind with a heart-felt and powerful release when she feels the
evilness lifted that had long been laid upon her. I was absolutely
able to sympathize with her frustration in bearing a burden that is
not her fault, but is a byproduct of who she is and where she comes from.

The descriptive language employed here is just wonderful, sketching
out an entire map of Middle-earth in a few quick strokes. I also love
the quick but appropriate nod to her Master: far from M-e, but ever
vigilant for what news his servants can bring.

But the drabble really soars with the East Wind's newly-gained
freedom: after so long a wait, her first reward is to loft the
Ringbearers to safety. And we know the next: to bear the unlooked-for
great tidings, speeding the wings of the Great Eagles on their way to
announce Sauron's fall. Her joy at finally being able to ["come sweet
off their tongues"] rings out beautifully.

The obscurity of the chosen PoV certainly highlighted one thing for
me: the wide-reaching impact of the Ring's destruction. Among all the
peoples discussed in LotR, I should never forget that there are many,
many more who were affected by the efforts of the Fellowship. It truly
was a world-wide event.

Title: No Man's Land · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Drabbles · ID: 726
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-14 06:04:41
Spoilers!
Of all the might-have-beens I have ever read, in ways this is the most
chilling of all, considering the climate in which the victim of this
story found himself. Where would WE as fanfiction writers be had this
happened? Who else might have stepped into the gap to give us the raw
materials on which we thrive?

Definitely heart-stopping, as well as poignant as we appreciate the
device this young soldier had inscribed onto his notebook (a bit of a
difference from the backs of sheets of orders truly put to use) while
those who deal with the casualty aren't even certain he's one of theirs.

What a world of thought is conveyed in these hundred words.

Title: Shadows · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 698
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 06:32:54
sometimes even the old must grow up someday.

Title: Free To Live · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 701
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 06:34:59
our first reactions are sometimes the hardest to wxplain, they aren't
necessarily bad but they hurt; us and others.

Title: Hidden Watcher · Author: kitt_otter · Genres: Drama · ID: 702
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 06:37:16
it was said that they hunted long and hard for him; guess they needed
better bait.

Title: Orc Talk! · Author: kitt_otter · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands ·
ID: 703
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 06:38:42
sounds so cute until an adult hears it, ohh boy....cute real cute and
even a little snicker-y

Title: In Search of Stillness · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves:
Mirkwood Elves · ID: 704
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 06:53:18
now if you can only multiply the good feelings this leaves we could
all bask in friendship forever

Title: The Water's Song · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 707
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 06:56:36
another sorrow thrandriul could only live with, very poignant

Title: Whatever Harm Encroached · Author: Nieriel Raina · Times:
Second and Early Third Age · ID: 708
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 06:58:22
taing care of ada, so sweet.

Title: Hold To Hope · Author: Nieriel Raina · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 709
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:00:52
if you raise them up with good moral character, why does it hurt to
set back and let them use that character? guess it's "only human".
nice story line.

Title: Tying Notes · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age: Gondor
Drabbles · ID: 378
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-09-14 07:16:14
It's rather difficult to imagine that a true drabble, with its
significant wordcount limit, could boast a lushly descriptive
atmosphere. However, Imhiriel not only manages a deeply evocative
multisensory scene-setting, but we get a superb and spot-on
characterization of a dearly-loved character as well.

The contrast of the heart-pounding music and the [languorous] dancing
is very well done; Faramir's intent study is not on swaying hips but
graceful fingers crafting the magnificent sounds. And the time he
devotes afterwards to teasing out the expertise - absolutely time
well-spent!

I think what I love most, actually, is that while I imagine this is
probably soon after the end of the War, I can also see it happening at
just about any point during Faramir's years as Steward. (I have to say
post-Denethor, since that Steward would probably be hostile to any
Haradric overtures.) But truly, the particular facet of his
personality highlighted in this drabble is something I can definitely
believe resonates throughout his life.

A close second in the "what I love most" list is the title itself, and
the lovely, lovely connotation that connects it to this drabble:
["played or sung as one"], indeed. Music links hearts and minds like
few things can, and the implication that two formerly warring
countries can come closer to unity is just *beautiful*. Marvelous
work, Imhiriel.

Title: Dreams or Reality · Author: Eleon Gamgee · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 716
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:24:14
powerful.

Title: Circle of Silver · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of
Finwe · ID: 717
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:32:22
sadly the best part for me was erestor, wonderful introduction.

Title: The World Is Changing · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Late Third
Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 719
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:34:33
Spoilers!
you just can't let up on the scruffy ranger can you?

Title: Merry on the Pelennor Fields · Author: Primsong · Genres:
Poetry: Drama · ID: 720
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:37:18
may we each have such a friend at the end.

Title: Loving a Book Lover · Author: Avon · Genres: Romance: Drabbles
· ID: 721
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:39:16
Spoilers!
someone else earned a review saying i find that there is always
something else to enjoy in a library, and it wasn't THAT!

Title: A Dainty Dish · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Friendship · ID: 722
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:40:20
trust hobbits to find a dainty dish to set before their kings.

Title: A Warm Sun Shining · Author: shirebound · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 727
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:46:30
kittens, puppies, piglets just give us babies to cuddle and nurture we
loves them all.

Title: Trouble at Bag End · Author: Angiet · Races: Hobbits: Childhood
· ID: 728
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 07:52:41
thats a story of friendship i want to follow.

Title: Frodo's Pointed Ears · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 729
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 08:03:54
so much self denial, let's have one were he wallows in letting faramir
care for him,,,,pretty please?

Title: At Cormallen · Author: Mews1945 · Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort ·
ID: 730
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 08:22:27
such a lovely look at the cousins and their bond. wonderful, touching
and very enjoyable.

Title: The Skills That Keep You Alive · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Mid
Third Age · ID: 434
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 16:25:06
Spoilers!
Tolkien presented Aragorn as one of the most skilled men ever to walk
Middle-earth. Here, Gwynnyd delves into the training that enabled
Aragorn to not only survive, but carry out his purposes in many
different lands.

Gwynnyd cleverly shows, not tells, of a strong-willed child chafing
under what he considers the enforcement of a meaningless task, then
understanding, through his Elven mentors' tutelage, the necessity of
learning diverse skills. In the second part of the story, Gwynnydd
shows Aragorn putting his mentors' lessons into a surprising but
realistic (and brilliantly written) action.

The story is a wonderful response to a very difficult challenge prompt.

Title: The Best Sword Ever · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age ·
ID: 290
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 16:47:18
Spoilers!
A lovely character piece centered upon two interactions between
Aragorn and Boromir and their discussions of a certain legendary
broken sword. Linaewen writes a delightful meeting between the
two-year-old Boromir and Thorongil; with good characterisation of
Boromir as a fearless and confident child who loves the outlander
captain. Then they meet again, in the Council of Elrond, and though
Boromir fails to remember either Aragorn or the trust he once had in
him, Aragorn recalls the conversation, and the child, very well. It is
a beautiful and bittersweet moment that shows the essence of Aragorn -
he will keep faith even when that faith is not remembered or returned.

Title: Dance of the Deer and Mûmak · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 559
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 17:42:22
In an odd way, this story is similar to the character of dwarves in
general. It starts out a bit gruff and prideful (but, as is the case
of Durin's folk, in a good and entirely appropriate way); but when
friendship with another race opens Gimli up, we outsiders are able to
see the grace and nimble spirits possessed of these people. That
seemed entirely fitting for this story, and I heartily enjoyed it.
It's a fun romp giving a rare glimpse of dwarves that seemed both
in-character and was understandable for this non-dwarf.

Title: Wind of Change · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 47
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 17:47:54
Spoilers!
Nice job of capturing how the birth of Eowyn might be experienced in
different lands - it does a good job of capturing her destiny without
seeming too heavy-handed.

Title: Recognition · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor Drabbles · ID: 481
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-09-14 18:16:12
Spoilers!
The prejudices and idiosyncrasies of the male-dominated society
receive an airing in ["Recognition"], where it's plain that lack of
understanding and cruel judgements prevail when a woman doesn't fit
within the established roles. (Although Ioreth notes differently, I've
always found it ridiculous that some of the worst behaviour can come
from other *women*, irrational as it is.)

I agree that Eowyn must have seen this: not only a stranger to Gondor,
but one of the Twilight People and... and... a *warrior*? What
femininity is inherent in a destroyer of Nazgul? (Good heavens! She's
not going to give Gondorian women any fanciful ideas, is she?) It
takes someone older and wiser, someone who doesn't get a particularly
favorable portrayal in LotR but whom Dwimordene has always handled
masterfully and to great effect: Ioreth can see beyond Eowyn's
coldness to know that it springs from a wounded soul, and that a
woman's strength manifests in many ways.

The structure and language of this drabble is just awesome - so much
emotion and tone conveyed in so few words - but I think one of my
favorite parts is what is barely, briefly mentioned: what Faramir's
character must have been, he who could see into the hearts of Men. He
looked within Eowyn's heart and saw ["every beat a woman's"], and
loved woman and warrior both. Few, I think, could have made Eowyn feel
as whole as Faramir evidently did.

Title: Flickers · Author: Meril · Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 390
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 19:01:47
Spoilers!
A collection of outstanding ficlets on various aspects of the lives of
Feanor and Nerdanel. Meril brings the relationship of this passionate
pair vividly to life; and shows us both the power of their love and
the depth of their bitterness when one took a course that the other
could neither sanction nor follow.

And the vignette where Sam meets the long-widowed Nerdanel, the moment
of communion between them, is original (for fanfiction), sharp and
poignant at once.

A must for not only Silmarillion aficionados, but all those who savor
quality Tolkien fanfiction.

Title: Nightfall · Author: Jael · Times: Second and Early Third Age ·
ID: 87
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-09-14 19:04:29
I was first introduced to Jael's expansive and wondrous vision of the
King of Eryn Galen last year when I read [Not Fade Away] and [Rose in
the Fisted Glove], both of which pulled me into gravity of Jael's
green sun and never let me go. [Nightfall] adds yet more gravitational
pull through the force of nature that is Jael's Thranduil.

In [Nightfall], Jael writes of a period in Middle-earth's history that
is of particular interest to me: the Last Alliance. We know from the
Disaster of the Gladden Fields in Unfinished Tales that the Silvan
forces lost a horrifically large number of men. JRRTnotes that this
was due to an ill-timed charge on Oropher's part. Jael greatly expands
on this and casts into stark relief the cultural and political divides
of the Silvans, the Sindar and the Noldor. Through Jael's storytelling
and from her Thranduil's perspective, Oropher's decision, even if it
is not the primary focus of this story becomes understandable. We then
sympathize with him and his people.

Thranduil, the newly minted king of the woodland realm, is a shrewd
survivor and strategist. He redeems the losses of the Silvans and then
some the leader of in a risky maneuveur which turns the tide for the
Alliance. Jael describes Thranduil's strategy masterfully, and not
just through action, but also by the relationship among the characters
involved.

The complex relationship of Thranduil and Galion is wonderfully
executed here: cradle brothers, master and servant, comrades in arms
and close friends. The haughty pride of the Noldor is equally well
drawn, and I especially relished Erestor's comeuppance from Thranduil.

A fabulous story, and one that appealed to me so much that I extend a
form of fan ficcish flattery: this story and its events have become a
part of the Pan!verse mythos.

Title: Footsteps in Time · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves · ID: 76
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-09-14 19:05:56
My first introduction to Galadriel occurred back in the Years of the
Trees when I was about 14 years old. At that time, I viewed her as a
remote and almost saintly being although not above the temptation of
the Ring. That Galadriel left me a bit cold, and even as an
adolescent, I was disappointed by the lack of well-realized women in
Tolkien's work.

Many years later -- and I do mean *many* years -- the kind of
Galadriel I seek in fan fiction is a woman-in-full. I first found that
complex portrait in Keiliss' vision of Galadriel in [Even Quicker Than
Doubt] -- also highly recommended. In [Footsteps in Time] Keiliss
takes her interpretation of Galadriel and explores the character further
The author's characterization melted any frost I might have once felt
for the Lady of the Wood. It must be emphasized that the Galadriel of
The Silmarillion and Unfinished Tales is a headstrong, intellectually
keen, and driven individual, and less the cool remote queen of the
Golden Wood that we see in the LotR. Keiliss takes JRRT's vision of
First & Second Age Galadriel and runs with it.

Galadriel's woodland visits to the children of Men, her concern and
care for her adopted people, her love for her mate, and her profound
connections to her brothers all contribute to a woman of rich emotion
and intellect.

Keiliss also writes Melian in a most satisfying way: incarnated as a
human yet still very much The Other, even to the Elves. In fact, the
overall feel in Doriath is that of a strange otherworldliness due to
Melian. I get the impression that even Thingol finds her scary! The
author also addresses cultural variants among the Elven tribes,
something that always intrigues me. And Celeborn! I have always had a
soft spot of this fellow, and he get his due here as well-realized
man: smart, sexy and confident.

Overall, a well-written, enchanting story about Galadriel: gifted,
headstrong, empathetic and vulnerable, and a surprisingly modern woman.

Title: The Weight of Power · Author: Nefhiriel · Times: Mid Third Age
· ID: 325
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 19:07:36
Spoilers!
A thrill ride of a novel - Aragorn fights enemies and treachery in the
service of Thengel of Rohan, facing torture and other dangers. I
thought the original character Araedhelm very well written. Nefhiriel
writes a well-paced, entertaining story, which is enhanced by the
credible use of Eorling original names and Elvish phrasing.

Title: Dirt and Gold · Author: Empy · Times: Mid Third Age · ID: 590
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 19:16:13
Spoilers!
Although I disagree with the implication of a sexual relationship
between Eowyn and Eomer; I found the characterisation of Grima to be
otherwise very well-written; the depth of his obsession with Eowyn and
his frustration that he could not turn it into reality come alive here.

Title: Legacy · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 500
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-09-14 19:23:31
The very first sentence sets the stage so well for the remainder of
the vignette. In lovely, poetic prose, we learn immediately that the
lost kinsman is well-loved and much-missed, and that the narrator is
steeped in family lore concerning this long-dead individual.

The introduction of who is being mourned is achieved very effectively,
with a listing of titles that emphasizes the legendary character of
the man over his humanity. In fact, we don't even know if the musing
young man has been told of his kinsman's greatest failure. But this
feels completely appropriate, given how we all prefer to remember our
dead: at his best, with his worst not "swept under the rug", per se,
but reduced to insignificance against the myriad - and here, legendary
- accomplishments of his life.

It would be easy, I'd think, for the narrator to turn to resentment at
having a family hero lauded at every turn, even to being named after
the man. But I don't get the slightest hint of that - only profound
respect and honor for both the dead and the terrible times that
defined life back then. The only nod to the possible difficulty of
bearing a version of a hero's name is when the narrator, thinking of
his own soon-to-arrive firstborn, decides that he will break from the
naming tradition into something new, something for the New Age vs. the
past.

Although the author used a "tribble" format that limits the wordcount,
this does not feel either constrained or fluffed out unnecessarily -
just using the perfect amount of words to express this brief but deep
reflection by one of Gondor's Fourth Age sons.

There are many layers and allusions richly woven into a beautiful
tapestry of love, remembrance and regret that has direct links to our
own day. I was left somber but also with joy, and much respect for the
fallen heroes of today. Most excellent work, Raksha.

Title: Another Country · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 438
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 20:10:04
Spoilers!
A thought-provoking set of two drabbles, wherein Boromir, after death,
encounters his father in the Halls of Mandos. I particularly liked
Boromir's seeing the tapestries, his realization that the history of
Gondor was part of a greater tapestry - this reflects the learning
process undergone by many LOTR characters, and would have probably
been hardest of all for Boromir.

Title: The Road Trip · Author: Garnet Took · Times: Modern Times · ID: 410
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-09-14 20:19:32
Spoilers!
A cute bit of whimsy; the four hobbits doing a modern road trip. Good
juxtaposition with the hobbits' movieverse personalities and the
realities of real life long distance journeys by car. I loved the bit
about Merry obsessing on his duties as the Navigator - that is very
true to life, at least in terms of the hazards of allowing any male
access to a map during a road trip. And movie-Pippin being the fidgety
'child' of the group is perfect...

Title: Seven Sisters · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Other Beings · ID: 388
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-09-14 20:55:56
Pearl has woven a lot into this short story.

The myth of the Pleiades and the American Indian lore of the Seven
Sisters is cleverly mixed with the constelations of Arda.

Plus, poor Pippin get a lesson in both being careful what you wish for
and not over-indulging in strong drink.

Nicely done.

Title: Dirty Jobs · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 232
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-14 21:02:13
I found this to be a very fun read; it speaks well of Pippin's
character that he'd take on those less-than-pleasant jobs, and it
seemed so hobbity to joke about it. Nice use of the challenge
requirements to build a tale that is a nice read completely on its own
- not always easy to do, I know!

Title: I Give You a Rainbow · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 571
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-09-14 21:23:30
The first time I read this story I got tears in my eyes.

Golden captures the emotions of both the blind child who can't quite
do everything the sighted children can and the seeing child who wants
to open the world to his blind friend.

This story brought back memories of my own childhood and trying to
explain colors to my friends or describe a variant of a primary color
to my mother who had lost her vision. I know just what Pippin was
going through in this story and I admire his creativity.

Title: Tying Notes · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age: Gondor
Drabbles · ID: 378
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 21:46:55
aww, our precious little nerd.

Title: Summer's End · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War · ID: 380
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2008-09-14 22:19:32
I'd love to go to a Halloween party like this one.

Frodo is a great story teller and still has a great sense of humor
desptie everything he's gone through.

Title: Summer's End · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War · ID: 380
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 22:24:43
you show a finese that bilbo and frodo would envy in story telling.

Title: The Last Stand · Author: Rhapsody · Times: First Age and Prior
· ID: 82
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-09-14 22:27:01
Spoilers!
As a dedicated Silm-geek, I tore through Rhapsody's [The Last Stand]
when she first published it and have since re-read it several times.
This is an excellent gap-filler for a battle of great import in First
Age Beleriand: the Battle of Nírnaeth Arnoediad, translated as
"Unnumbered Tears," an appropriate name for an agonizing defeat.

The Noldor, encouraged to believe that victory against Morgoth is
possible, attempt to unite a disparate group of allies: Elves of
fractious tribes, Dwarves and mortal Men. However, only Mablung and
Beleg came forth from Doriath since their king, Thingol, rejected any
alliance with the sons of Fëanor.

In [The Last Stand], Rhapsody drops the reader right into the fray
from the viewpoint of three warriors: Ecthelion of Gondolin, and Beleg
and Mablung of Doriath. Ecthelion, Turgon's reknowned captain, who
Rhapsody writes with an excellent balance of compassion, bravery and
Noldorin hauteur, surveys the battle churning around him, knowing who
has fallen, and sensing that the tide is turning but not in the
alliance's favor. He sees Beleg and Mablung and recognizes them as
wood-elves. He sends his men to rescue them from their embattled
state, and then Rhapsody lets us become "a fly on the wall" looking
and listening in on the interaction of these three Tolkienian icons.
Then she takes us into Beleg's thoughts and his perception of the
Noldor. I'm a big fan of Rhapsy's Beleg (well, Beleg in general --
he's an intriguing character save for that inexplicable soft spot of
Túrin) so I enjoyed reading his thoughts here. Lastly, we hear
Mablung's voice in the final melancholy paragraphs of the story, who
salutes his Noldorin comrades in a manner that no doubt would make
Thingol apoplectic.

[The Last Stand] is classic Silm-fic and garners my strongest
recommendation.


Title: Writer's Bloke · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor: Drabbles ·
ID: 431
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 22:30:18
sighhhhhhh! lucky you! ssiiiiiiiiiiiiigggggggh!

Title: Love at First Sight · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 432
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 22:33:06
Spoilers!
and now we know how it began.

Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 22:43:34
Spoilers!
this is a faramir we could worship, dedicated father who is first and
formost the slave of his child.

Title: The Skills That Keep You Alive · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Mid
Third Age · ID: 434
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 22:47:29
have you considered a training video, you would have the most views in
a short time?

Title: Duty, Honour, Country · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 81
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-09-14 22:48:47
In [Duty, Honour, Country], Rhapsody uses consciously repeated phrases
to great effect, like stanzas of a march or a drumbeat. She links
Maglor's perspective into the modern words of General Douglas
MacArthur. As someone who relishes connections made from the icons of
The Silmarillion to those of our contemporary world, I really liked
this series of drabbles.

In [Duty], Rhapsody captures Maglor's strong sense of duty to his
father, his brothers and to himself. I particularly appreciate this
perspective since my interpretation of the sons of Fëanor's allegiance
to their father was never one of coercion, but through love, loyalty
and familial duty. [Honour] evokes the battles which Maglor
experiences as an exile in Beleriand, and finally, [Country] evokes
the price of war and offers a reason for why Maglor remained in
Middle-earth which was not to wallow in self-loathing and regret, but
rather for vigilance. With these words ["These green lands and long
beaches, this is what I inherited: an inevitable end after all that
has passed."], I can't help but imagine that Maglor had foresight of
Dunkirk and Normandy

[None will/shall understand] is a fitting chorus for the bard turned
warrior who does understand duty, honour and country.





Title: The Roses of Imloth Melui · Author: Aervir · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 435
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 22:53:35
an over due look at stoic preserverance, beautiful

Title: Supporting Acts · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 436
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 22:57:30
the price of truth, the rewards of justice. great shorts.

Title: Handy With A Sword · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 437
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 23:03:53
nice touch, betting her bridegroom, so close to the wedding. if anyone
wonders who wears the pants in the family, i think their concerned
about the wrong part of the partnership. his resume is longer, hers is
much more precise. can't wait to see the rematch for their twenty-fifth.

Title: And Whisper You to This Earth · Author: Lady Elina · Genres:
Romance · ID: 151
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-09-14 23:22:47
I loved how the story is set up with the tale of the
["Whisper-stone"], branching out from its meaning - real and imaginery
- to the importance of listening and of awareness of history, which
then sets up an important quality of Erestor's character and of one
thrust of the story.

The metaphors and actual physical descriptions are interwoven
wonderfully, to make the story a rich, multi-dimensional experience
from the text itself to the meta-level (e.g. ["The man is tall, his
body is that of a warrior and his words barren and few as the
weather-beaten paths of the North."]). I especially liked how the
landscape was slowly formed in my mind's eye, barren, wind-swept,
still, but somehow still beautiful in its mysteriousness.

The sensuous aspects are not only to be found in the intimate moments,
but also in the rest of the rich descriptions and evocation of atmosphere.

The growing intimacy is described very convincingly; steady yet
somehow inexorable, born of understanding and gentle compassion. And I
liked the understatedness of it, and of the so-unobtrusive,
un-demanding parting at the end.

Title: Saruman of Many Colours · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 439
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 23:32:03
you are one scary writer... lovely stories, funny stories, short and
sweet, and this mish-mash of terror just waiting to strike; is there
anything you can't write?

Title: Songs of Innocence and Experience · Author: Tanaqui · Races:
Men: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 440
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 23:35:44
yes some of us are more believing than we should be but better naive
then bitter. and you give him the opportunity to correct that in the
future; bet you she never gets that chance again.

Title: Dreamscape · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 442
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 23:37:39
and he remembers them well and frequently.

Title: No Mercy · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General Drabbles ·
ID: 443
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 23:39:42
hellish imagery, you just have such talent.

Title: Charge! · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles ·
ID: 444
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-14 23:42:36
and yet it could be any battlefield in any war where calvary was used.
my english teachers would be so impressed with your mastery of
universal writing.

Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Nath · Races: Other Beings · ID: 314
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-09-15 00:21:01
Spoilers!
What a sinister take on the "what if someone else took the Ring" AU
gap filling theme. The "someone else" in Nath's story is, indeed, "Old
Man Willow," and what a terrifying scenario she weaves. Sauron,
Galadriel, Bombadil--they are ultimately helpless against the Willow's
ring-induced meglomania. Read this chilling story and you'll never hug
a tree again. So original and highly recommended.

Title: A Great Cause for Concern · Author: Alassante · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 682
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-15 00:29:33
A very touching story; I don't think I'd thought of Legolas facing the
*Valar's* ire, but the reasons (both for why they were angry and why
they allowed him to stay) were very fitting.

Title: Call of the Wild · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance:
Drabbles · ID: 94
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-15 00:33:17
Spoilers!
Morwen and Thengel are perhaps one of my favorite couples, I think
because their romance would have become almost a legacy for so many of
their descendants. Ann captures everything about Thengel that I love
so much, in a drabble as strong and smooth as Thengel himself. I also
like that in a lovely inversion of the Faramir/Eowyn romance, it is
the woman who goes after the man - that makes for an interesting
romance. I do wish the author would write more about them (*wink
wink*), but that doesn't diminish how much I enjoy treasure-troves
like this.

Title: Another Country · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 438
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 00:36:09
i thought i had reviewed this one. nice pairing they need each other
so much and you let us exercise our compassion with this story.

Title: Expert Treasure Hunter · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 447
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 00:45:52
such prowess you display.

Title: The Lowest Circle · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Elves: Drabbles ·
ID: 449
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 00:47:11
frighten-ing is what this talent is.

Title: MAGIC: The Password · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Elven
Lands · ID: 451
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 00:51:28
finally a cross-over i like. i understand the references!!!!
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: A Perfect Impression · Author: weepingnaiad · Times: Second and
Early Third Age · ID: 494
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 00:55:06
nice touch, softly loving and very parental.

Title: Legacy · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 500
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 00:59:20
the paradox, they fight to keep their children safe but by being safe
do the children lose the value of the lessons? thank you for answering no.

Title: The Search · Author: rhyselle · Genres: Poetry: Late Third Age
· ID: 501
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 01:01:25
you bring to light a layer most miss, thank you.

Title: Mournful Fords · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 368
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-15 01:02:07
Definitely a new perspective on Theoden's remorse. It felt very "in
the moment" since Theoden didn't know the Rohirrim would overcome. A
nice father-son moment for these two.

Title: Home is where the heart is · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Romance: Drabbles · ID: 505
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 01:04:33
inhale deeply, sniff firmly, not gonna cry, not gonna... give me a
minute i need a new hankie! please give me more more more. ps happy b-day.

Title: A Little Misunderstanding · Author: Radbooks · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 275
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-15 01:07:08
Spoilers!
Of all the stories I've read about Arathorn (admittedly not all of
them!), the vast majority seem to focus around three events: his
courtship of Gilraen, the birth of Aragorn, or the affect of his death
on the Twins.

This is perhaps not surprising given the dearth of Arathorn canon, but
this concentration on those events made this story feel like even more
of a breath of fresh air than it would have for a character who gets
better fanfic "coverage." Radbooks tells us about Elladan's and
Elrohir's first trip to visit Aragorn's kin after Aragorn goes to
Rivendell. The Twins are still struggling over their grief and guilt
at not having prevented that, and if that was all that Radbooks had
given us, her handling of those scenes would have been a fine addition
to the "Arathorn deathfic" subgenre.

However, this story also features a young Halbarad who is scared that
the elves have come to take *him* to Rivendell as well. This is a
twist I don't think I've seen anywhere, even in general (the affect of
Aragorn's leaving on Halbarad), and through the interweaving of these
two plot elements Radbooks does a very nice job of showing how the
events surrounding Arathorn's death have affected everyone. It was a
nice read, both creative and compelling.

Title: Sour Milk · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 521
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 01:08:45
such a cheesy pitcure for an opener. (please ask the photographer to
reposition just a little bit) love the tabby, great boss image. so so
story but what an uplook. happy b-day.

Title: Drawing the Eye · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 569
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 01:13:11
so macho, so pedictably aragorn. and yet so humbling in recognizing
that by drawing sauron even at the cost of his own life, victory must
have every chance. wonderfully told. happy b-day

Title: The Queen's Gift · Author: Queen Galadriel · Races: Elves:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 697
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 01:18:37
arwen is a wise and protective woman, you write her well.

Title: Meddling · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Mid Third Age: Eriador ·
ID: 695
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 01:25:25
always fun to find someone with a bit of brass between his front pockets.

Title: A Summer Night's Peace · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 694
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 01:48:00
forgive me larner, my nit-pick has kicked in, you have frodo hurt
'neath amon sul not upon, and you have strider referring to the blade
that he carries SINCE last winter as fractured (not before) i like
your analogy about children-minders-and-fathers, very spot on. truly
an enjoyable read. hope to get a few more out tonight.

Title: Oathbreakers · Author: Thundera Tiger · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 470
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-15 01:49:40
One of the things I love about Thunder Tiger's work is the way she
uses fic to examine the deeper themes and elements of canon. This
story is a particularly moving and yet also particularly philosophical
conversation.

The conversatiosn that the sons of Elrond have concerning their
foster-brother and Eowyn is only too realistic and plausible; the
nature of the threat that looms makes it all to easy to consider what
they would never consider otherwise.

I really like the way this fic makes me think, without failing to make
me *feel* as well.

Title: Dorwinion Wine · Author: Lindelea · Races: Cross-Cultural · ID: 663
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-09-15 01:49:58
Somehow, I think asking such a vaulted minstrel to sing the
"[tra-la-la-lally]" song would be a bit like asking a mariachi band
for (yet another rendering of) "Tequilla". I loved the way you
captured the elf's annoyance and weariness - it felt very real, and
contrasted nicely with Bilbo's chipperness.

Title: Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices · Author: Lady Bluejay ·
Genres: Drama: Incomplete · ID: 159
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-15 01:51:22
This is the kind of gapfiller I love to find! It's very long, firmly
rooted in book-canon, solid and realistic characterizations of minor
canon characters, as well as of the major ones.

I love how carefully the suathor dovetailed events which she invented
into the events of the books--the timing is impeccable.

Furthermore, she manages multiple POV shifts very well. I'm a fan of
multiple POV. Here she alternates the POV of Eomer and Lothiriel, with
occasional rare glimpses of those of their family members.

The story has come to a place in the timeline that is just perfect for
a break, but i find myself looking forward to seeing more of this WIP.

If I could ask for anything more, it would be more hobbits, but I
confess that so far there's not really been much call for them--I saw
only a couple of places where I'd have liked to see just a little more
mention of them. But, of course, that's just the hobbit-fancier in me!

A very exciting and readable Eomer/Lothiriel!

Title: Rude Awakening · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 692
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 01:51:36
Spoilers!
once a troll fighter, always a troll fighter; you know that ugly
fellow down the lane, mole on his nose always rude to his wife---he's
next, hopefully.

Title: The Heart of a Knight · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 335
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-09-15 01:53:01
I am thoroughly enjoying this. Among the Men in LotR, Beregond and his
son Bergil are favorites of mine. This is a very plausible look at
what his life must have been like in the days following the very wise
judgement of King Elessar.

As of this review, there are only three chapters. The second one so
far is my very favorite. Such a beautiful and solidly Tookish
characterization of Pippin is unusual among authors who do not
normally concentrate on hobbits. I really am looking forward to seeing
Beregond and his son eventually interact with the other three hobbits.

I look forward to reading more of this story after the MEFAs!

Title: Rivendell International Airport · Author: Primsong · Genres:
Humor: Elven Lands · ID: 345
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-09-15 05:05:00
Spoilers!
I admit that I am a fool for humorous stories, and Primsong has
written an especially hilarious comedy for "Rivendell International
Airport." This tale fits into the "the fellowship in a modern setting"
genre. After putting the unsuspecting nine walkers in the terminus of
the title, Primsong commences to skewer Frodo and his companions by
forcing them to endure the modern aggravation of going through airport
security.

One hilarious incedent follows another. Bill the Pony is shipped as
baggage. The heavily armed warriors keep setting off the alarms at the
security gate, despite their best efforts to divest themselves of
every bit of metal. The hobbits are stripped of food and pipeweed. Sam
gives up his box of salt because it is, after all, a powdery
substance. Frodo is forced to make an ingenious move to keep a certain
piece of jewelry from winding up in the bin of confiscated metals.

I highly recommend this wonderful satire, especially to anyone who is
a frequent flyer!

Title: Charge! · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles ·
ID: 444
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-09-15 06:06:06
Spoilers!
Tanaqui is a mistress of misdirection, and this drabble is a brilliant
example.

It starts as a relatively standard, though very well-executed,
retelling of the triumphant charge of the Riders of the Mark at the
Battle of the Pelennor. The descriptions of horns and the other noises
from the battlefield, and the effects the sounds have on both friends
and foes is pitch-perfect, as is the mention of the Rider's steed as
it reacts appropriately to the Rider's directions.

The language really evokes the throes of battle-fury; phrases like
[clash of harness], [press of foes], and [chaos and trampling
destruction] give the reader a clear mental image.

But at the very end Tanaqui pulls away our blinders, and we see that
the Rider and the steed are not who we expected... and it is a total
shock!

Very well done!


Title: No Mercy · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General Drabbles ·
ID: 443
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-09-15 06:26:51
Spoilers!
Ah, another excellent example of misdirection!

Tanaqui's description of the massive battle front reminds me of the
descriptions of the charge of the Rohirrim at the Battle of the
Pelennor, loud roar and terrified combatants and all.

The words are horrifying; for some reason I reacted most strongly to
[Horses screamed in fear]; that phrase somehow really brought home the
stark terror of the battle.

Most especially poignant was the vain attempts of those fighting as
rear-guard; how devastating it must have been to sacrifice their
lives, but not gain the lives of their comrades who were retreating.

And then, in the final sentence, we find out who the combatants were,
and the horror is gut-clenching. I never had such an overwhelming
reaction to Tolkien's rather detached description of this event.

Brilliant, emotionally-wrenching work!

Title: The North Delving Incident · Author: Dana · Genres: Drama · ID: 26
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 06:34:31
Spoilers!
It appears that not quite all the ruffians were run out of the Shire
at the time the Travellers led the Battle of Bywater; five found their
way to North-delving where they took hostages and settled in. A year
later Peregrin Took found himself caught in the midst of this
situation, and tries--almost singlehandedly--to rectify matter.

An interesting tale that examines courage and motivations from the
points of view of three different characters going through much the
same situation. Loved Merry's POV here.

Title: Scholarship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 43
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 06:46:52
Spoilers!
Elboron is now fifteen, and beginning to be curious about--well, what
fifteen-year-old boys everywhere tend to be curious about. As his
father notes, it is better he seek further enlightenment on the
subject as he does rather than through more personal experience, for
although his interest is engaged perhaps he is physically and
emotionally still a bit young....

But the interest leads to a desire to understand perhaps more as the
creator of this particular text intended to describe, and the father
is led to translate.

Very sensitive and indeed pleasant look at Faramir's son growing up
and the trust between father and son. I wish it were this easy and
open for all entering this portion of adolescence.

Title: Dreamscape · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 442
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-09-15 06:53:09
Spoilers!
This is a beautiful example of Tanaqui's exquisite word-pictures. I
can almost hear the Dwarrowdelf music from the "Fellowship of the
Ring" movie swell as Gimli [floods the hall with light]... just that
phrase alone makes one expect great things.

Love the implicit references to "The Hobbit" -- Gimli joining Gloin,
one of Thorin's company, there... a [set of double doors] preventing
the dragon from sullying this particular hall... sometimes Tanaqui's
drabbles are almost too rich in references and imagery to wrap my mind
around!

And the subtle differences between the two realms: in Ered Luin, the
Mountains of Moria are etched large on gray stone walls, or tiny in
[gold filigree] jewelry, which, though exquisite in craftsmanship,
conserves what little gold they have available.

In contrast, one of the halls under the Lonely Mountain has huge and
life-like pictures, mosaics that are made of precious gems! It must
have been breathtaking in more than one way....

Beautifully and evocatively written, Tanaqui!


Title: Slings and Arrows · Author: Ancalime8301 · Genres: Drama:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 185
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 06:56:30
Not badly written, but the point is obscure. Feels unfinished.

Title: Old Friends · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 651
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 07:02:19
Spoilers!
For one who knew nearly two thousand years in the guise of an elderly
Man, to live in the perfection of Aman must indeed at times lead to a
state of ennui (even if the Master didn't particularly approve of
things--and particularly words--French).

A wonderful look at a pleasantly surprised Olorin reacting to a recent
arrival to Tol Eressea. Delightful!

Title: Only Water in Your Veins · Author: Michelle · Races: Men · ID: 154
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 07:28:17
Spoilers!
Definitely a well, well written tale. Love seeing Aragorn here
learning first-hand of the desert, and found myself thinking both of
"Lawrence of Arabia" and "Hidalgo" as we see to what the desert
reduced him. But the hospitality he finds and the succor when he is
perhaps only inches from death is marvelous.

Excellent feel for time and place and the nature of his condition; and
the paean spoken of the desert by Rajal is perfect for such a one.

A must-read--that is certain.

Title: Waterloo · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 158
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 07:32:32
Ah, but when he accepted the hospitality of Prince Imrahil's city
house, Eomer could not have expected to have found himself sleeping in
the bed of one who would eventually join him in his own....

A lovely and different Eomer-meets-Lothiriel story that takes place
largely in the Houses of Healing. Definitely recommended!

Title: A Maid Waiting · Author: Larner · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 691
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 07:34:14
one of the things i enjoyed about this one is the way you take two
immature self centered individuals and shove them out of center and
make them find their own balance of power.

Title: Where the Sky Kisses the Horizon, There My Dreams Lie · Author:
Lindelea · Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 689
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 07:42:24
is that another hit on the scruffy ranger? well planned and worded
softly reassuring and comforting all over. thanks.

Title: The Birthday Blessing · Author: Larner · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 687
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 07:44:48
better timing then cherry blossoms huh? i like those stories where
people pass messages to each other via those talented trees.

Title: Things as they were in all the days of my life · Author:
Tanaqui · Races: Men: Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 393
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2008-09-15 07:51:26
Spoilers!
This is a powerful sequence of drabbles that follows much of Denethor
II's life. Many of the drabbles use the canon character Hurin of the
Keys as a kinsman, friend, and supporter of Denethor.

The different aspects of Denethor's personality displayed here are
interesting. He is a prankster when young (though the pranks become
meaner later on with Thorongil); he goes to great lengths to win
Finduilas' hand, and later shows a tender devotion to her during an
illness; and he shows a wry sense of humor in "A Politic Lesson".

Then, at the end, Hurin looks back on Denethor's descent into madness
and tries to understand how it could have happened in front of him.
And we feel all the poignancy of the decline of such an intelligent
and honorable man, and it makes us sad.


Title: Five Turnings of the Year · Author: Dana · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 685
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 07:56:26
isn;t it strange how hard we will work to keep a holiday the same way
we have for years untold?

Title: What Goes Up · Author: Dana · Times: Late Third Age: Gondor
Drabbles · ID: 683
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 07:58:27
you give pippin a great story line and then you expect him not to get
side tracked? goose.

Title: A Great Cause for Concern · Author: Alassante · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 682
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 08:02:13
nicely turned out. beautiful finished product.

Title: For the Want of ... · Author: Larner · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor · ID: 681
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 08:07:43
my english teachers raved about the necessity of finding universal
meaning in our readings and you make their raves so easy to live with.

Title: Bombur's Diet · Author: Primsong · Races: Dwarves · ID: 677
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 08:10:02
my kind of dieter. pass the rolls this way please.

Title: Dreamscape · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 442
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 08:20:07
A fantastically crafted drabble, as brightly polished as any dwarven
filigree, describing the memorial to their roots the Dwarves of Erebor
raised in their halls. Each word is as carefully chosen as the most
precious jewel, and places as marvelously as the finely crafted link
in a sparkling chain of finest gold.

Oh, but well, well worth the read!

Title: Pip-napped! · Author: Dreamflower/Lindelea CoAuthors · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 669
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 08:21:02
you know i'm not enjoying it as much the fifth time through, a little
to much crime drama to keep re-hashing so often. but both of you are
so good at writing i know that there will be more soon. good luck.

Title: Secrets · Author: Aprilkat · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 229
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 08:27:55
Spoilers!
Rosie is willing to keep Frodo's secret from Sam--IF he will accept a
secret she's not yet shared with another. And it appears that this
secret will help him hold on--at least for a time.

Sweet and gentle as Rosie herself, this is a nice gem of a tale.

Title: Another Country · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 438
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 08:34:26
A marvelous pair of drabbles as Boromir and Denethor share experiences
of pride and betrayal by the arts of the Enemy. Well crafted and
delicately written.

Title: Hearts of Stone · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 12
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-09-15 08:39:48
A delicately crafted trio of drabbles.

Title: The Kindly Airs · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 480
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-15 15:56:46
Spoilers!
This is indeed an unusual perspective, and a very welcome one. You
imagined the East wind very much within the boundaries the Professor
established, even while giving it a voice of its own. Well done.


Title: Handy With A Sword · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 437
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-15 16:14:44
This was witty, and fun, but lost something by being constrained into
drabbles. In the first it was a bit hard to keep the speakers
straight, and I was disappointed the sparring match wasn't a bit more
even.

Title: Deliverance · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 285
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-15 16:17:24
Spoilers!
This was very evocative and gracefully told. It fit nicely within the
drabble's limits, reading neither too short nor too long.

Title: Call of the Wild · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance:
Drabbles · ID: 94
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-15 16:28:10
Spoilers!
This is an interesting double portrait, and I liked how you referenced
Eowyn here (and Faramir) giving the shieldmaiden an ancestor and an
antecedant.

Title: Tying Notes · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age: Gondor
Drabbles · ID: 378
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-15 16:37:37
Spoilers!
This is what's fun about a drabble or any story, really - this isn't
so much about what happened to Faramir visiting the Haradric
ambassador, so much as creating a portrait of a man and a culture that
prize art above sensuality. Nicely done.

Title: Steward's Trumpets · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times:
Late Third Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 400
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-15 16:46:42
Spoilers!
What is a weed, but a plant whose virtue has been forgotten? How nice,
and appropriate, that Faramir might find solace in the natural world's
endurance, and clever writing to take something ordinary in our world,
and translate it into something special in Tolkien's.

Title: Men of the Twilight · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Romance:
Drabbles · ID: 209
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-15 16:49:04
It's always nice to see a character change perspective as Faramir does
here, and his quiet revelation and resolve are woven with perfect
pacing into the drabble so that nothing feels rushed or given short
shrift.

Title: Sunset Gates · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
· ID: 342
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-09-15 16:51:49
Clever and amusing!

Title: Before You Go · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Minas Tirith
· ID: 506
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 21:07:09
so, not what i expected and so much the sweeter for it. thank you.

Title: Generations · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn
· ID: 508
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 21:16:10
so glad you found this delightfulf wise soul to help ground aragorn.
he needed that. lovely plot.

Title: Eldarion · Author: Sivan Shemesh · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 510
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 21:20:40
goes to the old saying that would give the plot away. great execution:
wonderful story telling and fun to be had by all eventually.

Title: One Summer Day · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 535
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 21:36:41
maybe boromir would have married if he came back? just think how much
more appreciative he would have been about these comforts offered so
lovingly.

Title: When the King Came Back · Author: Cathleen · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 514
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 22:32:42
so perfect...again.
thank you for sharing these gems.

Title: Diamonds For Forever I, II & III · Author: Elen Kortirion ·
Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 515
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 22:37:20
and i always thoght once they were cut diamonds couldn't grow.
surprise and wonderment all over the place, thanks your work is
fan-tastic.

Title: Collecting Hearts I, II, III & VI · Author: Elen Kortirion ·
Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 516
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 22:39:08
the circles of life well presented.

Title: The Turning Wheel · Author: Elen Kortirion · Genres: Romance:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 517
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 22:44:21
comfort, a favored theme to many.

Title: Frodo's Crosswise Verse · Author: Elanor Gardner · Genres:
Drama: Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 520
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 22:50:00
a little too dark maybe but soul searching tends to that. thought
provoking and rewarding. thank you.

Title: The Five Rules of Cooking · Author: GamgeeFest · Races:
Hobbits: Childhood · ID: 523
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 22:53:41
i want to be there. they are having too much fun.

Title: Regarding Ents · Author: PipMer · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 525
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 22:57:52
how do you explain the un-explainable? in your case, very well.

Title: Birthday Double Drabble · Author: PipMer · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 526
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 23:01:06
OHHHH! out of tissues. must leave.

Title: Aulë the Smith · Author: Oshun · Genres: Non-Fiction: Character
Studies · ID: 530
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 23:07:59
couldn't we just cut it to: aule's the way to challenge authority,
melkor is the way to out of this world banishment?

Title: The Myth of the One Ring's Power · Author: Dreamflower ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 532
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 23:17:48
but, dreamflower, the biggest part of the threat was that as evil and
mean as he had proved himself to be when he says the ring makes him
even MORE we have terrifing images to magnify our fears. the threat of
soviet dominance couldn't have held water if our leaders had pointed
out everytime they talked about it that there was no way for them to
survive either; no our leaders had us practice air raids and bomb
scares.only sauron knew the rings potential and he wasn;t into sharing
things was he? it seems basic character makes or breaks a carrier.

Title: Home · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 533
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 23:19:25
challenge well met. congrads.

Title: Bitter Sweet · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Steward's Family · ID: 536
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 23:28:23
this makes me warm and fuzzy and i hope to find a universe of this one
day.

Title: Took Broth · Author: Pearl Took · Genres: Humor: Shire · ID: 543
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 23:33:54
a camp memory brought to world significance. wonderful.

Title: At the Last Minute · Author: rhyselle · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 544
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 23:36:21
this is a loving family in the extreme. choosen by a young man and
grown to perfections. thank you,much.

Title: FAULT: The Doctor Is In · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 545
Reviewer: nancylea · 2008-09-15 23:54:44
the danger of chit-chat with a shrink. and i went back and corrected
the fruedian typo.

Hey guys,

Here is your weekly admin post  this week focusing on stories about
those whose ultimate destiny is to "seek beyond the circles of the
world" but who are capable of both great and terrible deeds during their
time within it  Men.

Whether your preference is for Edain -- from the Three Houses of the
First Age through the Numenoreans to Dunedain of kingdoms North and
South -- or you prefer the the Men of Bree or Rohan, or the "bad Men" of
the Rhun and Harad, I hope this list helps you find stories you'd like
to review.

For the list of pieces in this announcement I've used an author's main
category selection. Each author selects three category choices, only one
of which it can be placed in; but the author has still described it as
being suitable for three category choices, even if it isn't placed
there. So if an author selected the "race" category Men it will be on
this list.

Finding stories that selected a certain main category is pretty
straightforward. To do this

1. Log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/
2. Click the "Stories" link at the top of the page.
3. Click the "Show Filter" link.
4. Click the "Clear All Filters" button if you've used the filter before
this session.
5. Select the genre, race, or time period you would like from the
"Genre, Race, Time" filter (sixth from the bottom).
6. Click the "Display selected nominations" button.

This will pull up all of the nominated pieces that selected your main
category as a first-, second-, or third-choice category, even if they
didn't end up categorized in that main category.

******************************

Here are the stories competing in this year's competition whose author
selected Races: Men to describe their piece.

Aervir
---(435) The Roses of Imloth Melui
agape4gondor
---(127) Farewell
---(288) The Portrait
---(425) Letters From Faramir
alex_quine
---(4) Invisible Ink
---(152) Eagle of the Star
---(647) Home
Altariel
---(104) In Passing
---(108) Wizards' Pupils
AmandaK
---(207) Surprise Inspection
Amarok
---(602) My Brother. My Captain. My King.
annmarwalk
---(38) Confidence
---(39) Leaving Home
---(94) Call of the Wild
---(266) Enticements
---(535) One Summer Day
---(547) Fatherhood
---(548) Rich and Fair
Aprilkat
---(337) Acquittance
Archet
---(606) Nothing Less
Aruthir
---(338) Portrait of a Queen
Avon
---(7) Of Dreams...
---(282) Dark Dreams
---(518) Moon Over Water
---(623) The Chieftain of the Dunedain
---(721) Loving a Book Lover
Bodkin
---(508) Generations
---(635) Celebrity
Branwyn (Lady Branwyn)
---(19) Restoration
---(23) Lost and Found
---(28) The Game of Kings
---(400) Steward's Trumpets
---(401) Forfeit
---(723) Terra Incognita
---(726) No Man's Land
Brigantine
---(587) Best Three Falls, No Gouging
celticbard
---(347) The Nag
Cinzia
---(591) Daybreak
---(592) Destiny
Claudia
---(223) Sun
Dwimordene
---(105) Faithful
---(273) Eight Weeks
---(479) Look Not With Longing
---(481) Recognition
---(695) Meddling
EdorasLass
---(16) Thoughtful Company
---(18) Midnight
---(71) Five Hair Care Tips for Rohirrim
Elen Kortirion
---(12) Hearts of Stone
---(95) Pulling the Wool
---(474) A Moment Away
---(517) The Turning Wheel
Elena Tiriel
---(209) Men of the Twilight
Elitihien
---(486) U elyë, Ar-Pharazôn
Empy
---(590) Dirt and Gold
Fawsley
---(586) This crown of stars
Fiondil
---(11) PROPHECY: Changing the Future
---(554) NIGHT and FOREST: A Glimpse of Beauty
Galadriel
---(97) Child of Hope
---(153) Trajectory
Gandalfs apprentice
---(243) Bears With Honey
Gloria Mundi
---(593) Into the Woods
Gwynnyd
---(268) Aftermaths and Consequences
---(334) One Equal Temper of Heroic Hearts
---(433) Night Terrors
---(434) The Skills That Keep You Alive
Illwynd
---(31) Silenced
Imhiriel
---(217) Fit for a King
Imhiriel ---(285) Deliverance
---(335) The Heart of a Knight
---(353) Pirates Ye Be Warned
---(355) Return of the King
---(368) Mournful Fords
---(374) A Meeting in the Tower Hills
---(376) Battle upon the Quays
---(377) There shall be Mirth at our Meeting
---(378) Tying Notes
Isabeau of Greenlea
---(92) Kin-Strife
---(93) Shall We Dance?
---(296) Reparation
---(341) Consolation
---(706) Homecoming
Isil Elensar
---(467) The Consuming Darkness
Ithil-valon
---(113) Boromir and Teddy
Jay of Lasgalen
---(48) Wedding Nerves
---(98) Messengers from the West
Lackwit
---(627) The Wanderer
Lady Bluejay
---(158) Waterloo
---(159) Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices
---(162) A Dream Come True
---(167) The Return
Lady Elina
---(151) And Whisper You to This Earth
Larner
---(62) I Stand No Longer Alone
---(333) The King's Time
---(691) A Maid Waiting
Linaewen
---(267) A Great Evil Unmade
---(280) Fennas Haradren
---(290) The Best Sword Ever
Linda Hoyland
---(21) Playing with Fire
---(34) Star of Hope
---(361) Music hath Charms
---(417) The Vase that was Broken
---(418) Comes the moment to decide
---(488) Seeking the Sun
---(489) Autumn
---(490) No Regrets
---(569) Drawing the Eye
Lord Branwyn
---(724) Two Prisoners
Marta
---(123) On Canon and Fanfic
---(319) Miquan Melave
---(344) Summer Nights
---(351) Estel I Was Called
---(405) Black is the Color of My True Love's Hair
---(426) Giving Gifts
---(624) Pride and Despair: A Defense of Ecthelion's Son
Mews1945
---(228) The Blessing
Michelle
---(154) Only Water in Your Veins
mistycracraft
---(248) A Perfect World
Nancy Brooke
---(172) Tree of Knowledge
---(506) Before You Go
Nath
---(577) Tower of the Moon
Nefhiriel
---(325) The Weight of Power
Neoinean
---(527) --and it was done
NeumeIndil
---(411) The Dark One
pandemonium_213
---(50) Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus
---(213) Moon of the Sea
przed
---(5) Chance Encounter
Radbooks
---(601) A Fitting Occupation
Raksha the Demon
---(43) Scholarship
---(44) Gone Amiss
---(360) Seeing Stars
---(422) A Midsummer Day's Dream
---(424) Your Father Loves You
---(500) Legacy
---(625) The Fire of Hope
---(649) The Conscience of the King
---(652) Moonset over Gondor
Ribby
---(100) Tangled Webs
Roh Wyn
---(277) Arvedui v. Pelendur
Rubynye
---(237) Worlds Within Worlds
Savageseraph
---(584) The Strength of Men
SheBit
---(14) My Precious
shirebound
---(643) Keep Him Secret, Keep Him Safe
Shireling
---(136) Out of Memory and Time
---(412) Lingering Shadow
Sivan Shemesh
---(672) First Time
Soledad
---(165) An Autumn Fair in Halabor
Soubrettina
---(30) Thawing Lily
stefaniab
---(431) Writer's Bloke
---(561) Fine Art for Future Generations
---(572) Dead Steward's Gift
---(622) Hope comes for Estel
SurgicalSteel
---(90) The King's Surgeon
---(196) Loss
---(197) The Stolen Child
---(222) Five Things that Never Happened to Serinde of Dol Amroth
---(696) Engineering
Tanaqui
---(119) Spoiled
---(291) Star-songs of the Eorlingas
---(292) Heavens' Embroidered Cloths
---(328) Wild Swan
---(384) Second Best
---(386) Birthday Outing
---(393) Things as they were in all the days of my life
---(436) Supporting Acts
---(437) Handy With A Sword
---(438) Another Country
---(440) Songs of Innocence and Experience
---(444) Charge!
---(446) Relief
Vana Tuivana
---(343) The Night's Eye
Violin Ghost
---(261) Brotherhood
---(320) Wonderful Tonight
Virtuella
---(607) Promise and Sorrow
Werecat
---(430) Homeward Bound
White Gull
---(632) Boromir at the Bat

To find more information about any of these pieces, just do the following

1. Log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/
2. Click the "Stories" link at the top of the web page.
3. Type the Story ID followed by the "#" sign into the search bar, and
click the "Search" button.

For instance, searching for "706#" will bring up story #706, Homecoming
by Isabeau of Greenlea

Stories about Men are competing in the following subcategories:

--- Genres: Adventure: General
--- Genres: Adventure: Gondor
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: Drabbles
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: General
--- Genres: Alternate Universe: Incomplete
--- Genres: Drama: Featuring Aragorn
--- Genres: Drama: Featuring Boromir or Faramir
--- Genres: Drama: Featuring Frodo or Sam
--- Genres: Drama: Featuring the Noldor
--- Genres: Drama: General
--- Genres: Drama: General Drabbles
--- Genres: Drama: General Fixed-Length Ficlets
--- Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort
--- Genres: Drama: Incomplete
--- Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles
--- Genres: Horror: General
--- Genres: Humor: Drabbles
--- Genres: Humor: General
--- Genres: Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets
--- Genres: Humor: Shire
--- Genres: Humor: Valar & Maiar
--- Genres: Longer Works: General
--- Genres: Mystery: General
--- Genres: Non-Fiction: Character Studies
--- Genres: Non-Fiction: General
--- Genres: Poetry: Drama
--- Genres: Poetry: General
--- Genres: Romance: Drabbles
--- Genres: Romance: Gondor
--- Races: Cross-Cultural: General
--- Races: Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War
--- Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
--- Races: Elves: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets
--- Races: Men: General
--- Races: Men: General Drabbles
--- Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles
--- Races: Men: Minas Tirith
--- Races: Men: Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets
--- Races: Men: Steward's Family
--- Races: Other Beings: General
--- Races: Villains: Fixed-Length Ficlets
--- Times: First Age and Prior: General
--- Times: First Age and Prior: Incomplete
--- Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: General
--- Times: Late Third Age: General
--- Times: Late Third Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets
--- Times: Late Third Age: Gondor
--- Times: Mid Third Age: General
--- Times: Modern Times: General
--- Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlets
--- Times: Multi-Age: General
--- Times: Second and Early Third Age: General

Remember: The list of stories and sub-categories listed above are based
on the main categories chosen by the author.

Happy reading!

Tanaqui
(MEFA Tech Support)

P.S. - If you noticed a mistake in this post, please email about it so I
can check whether a mistake has been made and, if necessary, correct my
announcement. You can reach me privately at
techsupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net. Thanks!