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According to Myspace, the last time I tried to review it was still the
29th, but according to MEFA it was too late, and it was 11:00 pm EST.
HELP! I had one more review to post...

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "aure_enteluva" <melayton@...> wrote:
>
> Hey guys,
>
> I made a mistake back in the spring that unfortunately is going to
> affect how some author reviews are counted. This affects Humor: FLF
> Authors and Elves: Poetry Authors. Let me run through what happened
> and how this will affect the awards.
>
> THE WAY THINGS SHOULD WORK
>
> When an author has a story assigned to a story main category, they
> are also assigned to a sub-category for author reviews. If I have a
> drabble in the humor category, then the author Marta will also be
> entered into the "Genres: Humor: Fixed-Length Ficlets Authors" sub-
> category. Any author reviews I get in that sub-category will be
> counted against other authors of FLF's in the humor category.
>
> Each main category has up to three author sub-categories in it. One
> for authors of Fixed-length Ficlets, one for poetry, and one for
> everyone else. In large categories where there are many sub-
> categories, there are several story sub-categories that feed into
> the same author sub-category. If there's more than one story subcat
> for, say, fixed-length ficlets, the authors in any of those story
> subcats will be placed in the same author subcat.
>
> WHAT I DID
>
> When the volunteers set up the story categories and sub-categories,
> we have to mark which ones are for Fixed-Length Ficlets, which are
> for Poetry, and which are for other stories. The site uses this
> information to set up the author categories. Unfortunately, for two
> story subcats I didn't mark them correctly. For both "Genres: Humor:
> Fixed-Length Ficlets" and "Races: Elves: Poetry", I told the site
> that these were subcategories for full-length stories (that is, not
> poetry and not FLFs).
>
> WHAT THIS MEANS
>
> The website had no way to know that the authors in those subcats
> wrote FLFs and poetry instead of full-length stories. So from the
> website's perspective these authors should have been placed in the
> author subcats for full-length pieces. And they were. That means
> that when you put in an author review for one of these authors, it
> was scored in "Genres: Humor: General Authors" or "Races: Elves:
> General Authors".
>
> WHAT WILL HAPPEN
>
> This mistake was only discovered a few days ago. There's really no
> time to fix the mistake before the end of the awards. The reviews
> that you made for these authors will count, but instead of scoring
> the reviews in a special subcat for FLF or Poetry Authors, they will
> be scored along with the other authors of full-length pieces in
> their subcat.
>
> I'm very sorry for all of this. I apologize especially to the
> authors who were affected by my mistake and will be competing
> against authors of full-length stories. Best of luck to all of you.
>
> Marta
>

Hello. I hope this is okay, but I would just like to thank everyone
who took the time to read and review my short fic - Shin to Toe to
Thigh to Mind. It was the first story I've written and the only one
I've posted so far at an archive. I'm definitely a newbie and
appreciate the encouragement from veteran authors.

It was an incredible honor to be nominated and I was very touched by
the comments. Thanks so much to all who reviewed!!

Talasi
*Newbie author*

Hi all,

Voting for stories and authors are over. Go you! We had an incredible
number of people voting, both in terms of votes submitted and people
participating. A group of volunteers including myself are busy getting
the results ready to post and hope to do that in a few days. In the
meantime, there's one more thing you can vote on: award banners.

Over the past months we have received eighty-four banners created by
Nienor Niniel, Rhapsody, and Thevina Finduilas. This is enough to give
us a banner in every category. For eighteen of those awards more than
one banner was submitted, so we have polls decide which one will be used.

This year the polls to decide this are hosted at our website instead
of at our Yahoo group. This is a big change from last year, but we
hope it will be much more convenient.

To vote, please go here:
http://www.mefawards.net/poll/polls2006/index.htm

If you are curious which banners will be given to the winners where
only one was submitted, feel free to visit

http://www.mefawards.net/fanart/categories.php?cat_id=2

to see which banners have been created.

If you run into any problems, please contact the fanart admin at:
banners@mefawards.net

Happy voting!

Hey guys,

I am very sorry to make two special notices so close to each other.
However, I forgot to include one very important thing in my last
announcement.

The banner voting will go through the end of December 4. That's 23:59
on December 4, GMT. The current official time right now is 2006-12-01
14:46:50 GMT.

Marta

> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of pipkinsweetgrass
> Sent: Friday, December 01, 2006 1:01 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Goof-up Regarding Author Reviews for
> Humor FLF Authors, Elves Poetry Authors
>
> According to Myspace, the last time I tried to review it was
> still the 29th, but according to MEFA it was too late, and it
> was 11:00 pm EST.
> HELP! I had one more review to post...
>

Hi pipkin,

I'm sorry you weren't able to enter that last review. Our day ends on GMT.
The "official" time for our site is in the bottom-left corner of the site.

Because of this, I can't allow you to enter your vote. We really have to
draw the line somewhere.

Thank you for all the votes you did enter, though! I'm sure the authors
appreciate them.

Marta

> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Talasi
> Sent: Friday, December 01, 2006 1:23 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Thank you!
>
> Hello. I hope this is okay, but I would just like to thank
> everyone who took the time to read and review my short fic -
> Shin to Toe to Thigh to Mind. It was the first story I've
> written and the only one I've posted so far at an archive.
> I'm definitely a newbie and appreciate the encouragement from
> veteran authors.
>
> It was an incredible honor to be nominated and I was very
> touched by the comments. Thanks so much to all who reviewed!!
>
> Talasi
> *Newbie author*
>
>

Hi Talasi,

I am glad that the MEFA's were an encouraging experience for you. I hope the
feedback helps you in your future writing, and thank you for dropping in to
let us know the awards meant something to you.

Marta

Thanks, Marta. I went back later and saw that particular review had been finalized, so I guess it worked out, unless it was something you did to work it out, in which case I thank you!

________________________________________________________________________

2b. Re: I know it's a bit late, but... (error message report)
Posted by: "Marta Layton" melayton@gmail.com aure_enteluva
Date: Thu Nov 30, 2006 11:02 am ((PST))

Hi Jean,

I really have no clue why this happened. I have not encountered a
similar problem, but I also have not used many hidden reviews.
Unfortunately, I know that Anthony will not see this until tonight,
probably after voting closes in about five hours.

If the review was hidden, then what you had before this last change
will be counted. Given that we probably won't be able to figure out
what caused this error until voting closes, why don't you email me
what you want the review to say? Send it to mefasupport@gmail.com. I
don't know whether it's technically possible for me to edit your
review after voting, but if it is I'll do it for you.

However, I'll only do this if it's emailed to mefasupport@gmail.com
before the end of voting. And only if it's technically possible to do
so; I honestly don't know if it is. I'm willing to try to do this
because you're making a good-faith effort to vote before the deadline,
but can't because of the website. However, if it turns out I *can't*
edit your vote the review will have to go through as it is right now.

Marta
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of BLJean@aol.com
> Sent: Friday, December 01, 2006 11:57 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Error message while voting (Marta)
>
> Thanks, Marta. I went back later and saw that particular
> review had been finalized, so I guess it worked out, unless
> it was something you did to work it out, in which case I thank you!
>

Nope, I didn't do a thing. Guess everything worked out okay, though. I'm
glad. :-)

Marta

Hi all!

All the votes are in and there are about 690 reviews left to post, so
the check ballots will be longer than normal (from 25 reviews to 50
reviews per post).

Title: Elven Braids · Author: viggomaniac · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 808
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 04:14:00 Score: 4
The beginning of this fic really packs a punch and draws the reader in.
And the rest of the story is equally good, very angsty, but the relief
comes in time for it not to be overwhelming. The orcs were very well
written here, from their speech, to their actions, and they were
wonderfully alien. I had never thought before about Aragorn having
fallen into the hands of orcs, but it is a very real possibility!
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Title: First Impressions · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 806
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 04:27:44 Score: 3
This was definitely culture shock for Aragorn. I liked his eventual
acceptance and understanding, especially since we know that this is only
another of the places that he will learn to call home in his long
wanderings. It is a new experience for him at this time, just the
beginning of his becoming adaptable no matter his surroundings.
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Title: A Sight to Remember · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 703
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-11-28 04:44:43 Score: 3
A funny, well-developed plot, skillful dialogue and dialects, and a
charming OFC make this an enjoyable read. I especially liked Pippin's
ingenuity in figuring out how to escape from the bathing room. Very clever!
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Title: The White Tree · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 94
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 04:45:10 Score: 1
A very interesting character study of these two.
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Title: Until the Stars Are All Alight · Author: Kenaz · Races: Men:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 148
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 05:03:12 Score: 3
This is a wonderful story, realistically told. Halbarad is depicted as
an exceptional mentor, giving Aragorn real guidance in his transition to
manhood. The close knit bond between the Rangers is very well done.
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Title: A Night in the Woods · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 511
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 06:04:19 Score: 5
This story is just wonderful! It leaves no doubt that such interludes
between Boromir and Faramir were few and far between and were to be
cherished. I loved their quiet banter in this, and the humour, quips
like: ["I thought they might have been elves," Boromir repeated, leaning
forward and enunciating each word carefully, clearly having mistaken a
sudden loss of speech for a sudden loss of hearing.] But there is an
underlying seriousness here too, that is just superb.

Both characters are very well written here, their personalities so
clear, as are the little details revealed about their lives. So much is
conveyed without the actual use of words and the words that are used
easily enable the reader to extrapolate more detail.

This is an utter gem of a story, and it's for stories like this that I
am so grateful to the MEFA's for I never would have found it otherwise!
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Title: Consolation · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 47
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 06:14:54 Score: 5
Oh! This was so sweet, but not at all cloying. Just a heartfelt glimpse
at two young boys who need to come to terms with the loss of their
mother. Boromir is fantastic here, and I loved that he was letting
Faramir at least hold his beloved Clover now and then, even if he didn't
understand why himself. A lovely glimpse of the compassion that will
stay with Boromir all of his life. That he actually gives Clover to
Faramir is so completely generous and lovely. Faramir's brave offer of
lending Boromir his rabbit and Boromir's diplomatic answer was just
perfect! I am so glad that the MEFA's introduced me to the PonyVerse!
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Title: The Remains of Power · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 228
Reviewer: pipkinsweetgrass · 2006-11-28 06:19:08 Score: 10
It's chilling, this rancid bon mot, and I devoured every word of it!
This deliciously cold-blooded inner dialogue was written magnificently.
Horrific missing scenes like this one are a rare find, and are to be
thought over and savored, exploring the bitter dregs of a would-be
megalomaniacal Istari the way the tip of the tongue probes a cavity.
Soft, cute and fuzzy this is not, and I loved it for its chilling
explorations. I've often wondered what might have gone on in Saruman's
mind during his time locked away in Orthanc, and this is as good an
exploration into that unwritten tale as any one might wish to come
across. As usual the use of language was fine, as this author is a
stickler for good language skills, thank heavens! Often I will overlook
such weaknesses if plot and dialogue are good enough, but it's the rare
treasure to find an author who can do it all with all the style and
skill Pearl Took weilds. Not everyone can write good evil characters,
but Pearl has done so with this one. Saruman is suitably arrogant and
egotisticle, bitter and resentful, and his lying about killing Pippin
sounds suspiciously like a wish to me, the rat! The author has a real
grasp of Saruman's mean spiritedness with this story. She had her
toolbox handy with this one, folks, and with her evil-writing tools
firmly in hand, she has wrought a little tale as cold and hard and black
as the stone walls of Orthanc, itself.
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Title: Young Master Merry · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: Poetry
· ID: 666
Reviewer: pipkinsweetgrass · 2006-11-28 06:19:39 Score: 9
This might very well have been a humorous missing scene. I loved the
rhyme scheme, and the subject matter hit me right where I live. This is
a bit different from her usual writing form and I thought it meritous
enough for a nomination, from the first line to the last. Pearl Took's
love for source material is apparent in each and every work, no less so
in this wonderfully sweet little rhyme. The lines describing Merry
divesting himself of clothing hit me right where I live. I had a very
similar experience, and actually did exactly what Merry did, so Merry's
actions, while humorous, are completely believable. This is something
that can be shared with any child, and throughout the entire rhyme, the
poem is entirely wholesome, palatable and very funny. I can easily
imagine this being told to little hobbits throuout the Shire and would
have no problem reading it to my own little ones, meaning that I wish
there was more stuff like this out there which a small child could enjoy
as much as the adult reading it. It may be simple, yet there is beauty
to be found in the simplest things, and I've read this through enough to
say it is as satisfying as any time-tested nursery rhyme I grew up with.
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Title: Pippin's Hands · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: The Shire · ID: 130
Reviewer: pipkinsweetgrass · 2006-11-28 06:20:24 Score: 7
A story does not have to be a long one to be a good one, and that rule
is underlined with this fine little vignette. It captures the thoughts
of its subject with precision and a compact beauty, so that the stream
of consiousness runs on smoothly with nary a ripple, sparkling with the
reflective moment when Pippin first holds his instrument after returning
home. This is a story with a soul. Although lean and small as a fox, it
has a nonetheless powerful thread of memory stitching scenic flashback
after scenic flashback together. It is redolent with reflection, sad and
sweet at the same time, and ending with an actual denoument not usually
possible to craft in so short a work. This writer knows her Pippin and
knows him well. Her characterization is truely rounded and filled with a
gravity which anchors it firmly to the earth. The story is told with
great clarity of vision and worked like a fine tapestry.
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Title: Strength of a River · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 513
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 06:31:59 Score: 2
Very lyrical and reflective story. I liked the shifting through time,
and Faramir and Boromir's scene with their mother was lovely. It is easy
to see that Faramir is much like her.
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Title: Do Not Think Me A Dream · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor
· ID: 40
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 06:39:33 Score: 3
This is so bittersweet! Poor Finduilas; she is obviously in the grips of
depression though she may not realise exactly what is wrong with her.
Her matter-of-fact thoughts that someday the Shadow would take both of
her sons was just so sad. I hope that Boromir remembers this moment.
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Title: Music Lessons · Author: Acacea · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 55
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-28 07:06:52 Score: 3
A very nice first meeting between Mithrandir and Faramir! Faramir was
captured so wonderfully here, with his childish curiosity and loyalty to
his brother's awful music making ability. I loved Mithrandir here too,
and that he was the one who started Faramir in his training to become a
Ranger, no matter in a roundabout way!
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Title: The Still Point · Author: stultiloquentia · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor · ID: 87
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-28 13:44:09 Score: 5
I love this little story. I think it nailed the transition from Arwen
the elf to Arwen the mortal. I love it that Aragorn pledges his love
again for her alone. I remember to a similar feeling when I married. The
official ceremonies are for everyone else, but the couple has their own
ceremony just for them. I love the way Arwen examines her changes and
that she grieves together with her husband. The statement of just being
a chain link in the line of mortals toward immortality felt right. I
haven't seen any story so far that brought this point home like this one.
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Title: Castle · Author: Timmy2222 · Races: Men: Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 256
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-28 13:44:57 Score: 5
This is an awesome story. It drew me in and held my interest from the
first chapter on. The tension reaches new heights with every new
chapter, and the end is very satisfying. The characters are very well
drawn. My favorite is the boy Vlohiri. You created a very likeable
character here and I like it that the story is told mostly from his
point of view. The villain is also very believable in her malice and
greed. Poor Aragorn! That was hard on him. I like at the end that you
hint at him having to deal with the repercussions from his imprisonment
for some time to come. That he can't just go on like nothing has happened.
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Title: Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Author: Lialathuveril · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 97
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-28 13:45:58 Score: 5
This is one of the more adventurous tales of Eomer's and Lothiriel's
courtship. They have a long or (according to Gondorian custom) not so
long way to go until they can marry. I like it that Lothiriel has some
more unexpected sides which endear her to Eomer. She is not only a well
bred Gondorian princess, but at the same time some kind of a hoyden in a
very endearing way. I loved her way of dealing with her attacker. The
trick of luring him into the lake was new to me. The motif of the falcon
and the mumakil running through the story was very well chosen.
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Title: About Legends or Whisperings of a Ghost · Author: juno_magic ·
Races: Men · ID: 699
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-28 13:47:20 Score: 3
<Shudder>This is a chilling tale about legends and truth and how the
truth can be twisted into legends. This tale is not for the
faint-hearted. I love the style in this piece, the chopped sentences at
crucial points in the narrative which make the events all the more chilling.
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Title: To Ride, To Will, To Fear · Author: Ellethill · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 841
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-28 13:47:46 Score: 3
This story has an epic feel to it. The language flows in an old
fashioned way, which gives it a similar feel to Tolkien's writing. I
like the way Faramir gains the respect of Aragorn and especially Eomer
who really underestimates his sisters betrothed. But I think he can be
excused since he barely knows Faramir.
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Title: In Aragorn's Safekeeping · Author: Radbooks · Genres: Drama · ID: 141
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-28 13:49:17 Score: 10
This is a great story with a unique twist on the on the boy/girl falls
into ME theme. The heroes come from a time where Tolkien hadnt written
his books, so this story avoids the How-much-do-or-don't-we-tell'
theme. Instead it concentrates on the culture shock and the difficulties
of adapting to the medieval times of ME. I love it that your main focus
of the original characters is on Aragorn. He comes to life in this story
and I learned much about his motives and struggle to become king. All
the original characters ring true and your OCs are their own personalities.

Through Thomas' and Rebecca's eyes I got a much better feeling of the
hardship of the journey of the fellowship. Tolkien skips over a lot of
the misery of the journey to Caradhras and Moria. I got a much better
feeling for how long this journey really was.

I love the way you show the growing relationship between Aragorn and his
2 young charges and how they gradually become a family, he seeing them
as his son and daughter and they accepting him as a father. Later the
process is repeated with Arwen which is especially important for
Rebecca. Since as the only female under all the male members of the
fellowship she is sorely lacking some female guidance on the dos and
dont dos of ME.

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Title: The Smallest Hands · Author: Dreamflower · Times: The Great
Years: Poetry · ID: 884
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-28 15:38:47 Score: 2
This is a wonderful lay, with the cadence and flow of an old historical
poem. Marvelously done!
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Title: Web of Friendship · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 932
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:32:17 Score: 2
Cute little moment. I'm sure Elanor would have felt isolated like this,
and it's good that she's clever enough to use her difference to make
friends.
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Title: Cousin Calla · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits: Pre-Quest ·
ID: 767
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-28 16:57:26 Score: 6
I just re-read this wonderful story, though I didn't really need to. It
is a story one remembers.

Death is not an easy topic, but this story handles it gracefully.
Rorimac Brandybuck is dying and word has raced through the Shire. Merry,
who was visiting at Bag End is whisked home by Paladin, along with Frodo
and Pippin. They arrive in time to say goodbye, with the feeling of the
story being that Rory had waited for this special grandson to arrive. He
also has a special farewell for Frodo.

Frodo and Pippin help Merry hold up as the mourners arrive, with Frodo
eventually taking Merry off for a very special visit. They go to see
Cousin Calla who has been a reclusive invalid for many years.

It is a rich, beautiful story of love, friendship and strength. Thank
you Dreamflower!
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Title: Consequences of a Fall · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 221
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-28 17:09:54 Score: 5
I nearly forgot to review this story, and that would be nearly criminal!

A murderous heart in the midst of the Shire. A hobbitess with a hunger
for power and nearly the will to do anything to get that power.
Fortunately, she's married to a very sensible hobbit and the troubles
that would have befallen the Tookland are avoided because he won't give
into her powermad scheming. That and she doesn't quite have the guts to
do it. She ends up in shame with none of the glory she sought to have.

This is wonderfully handled with the perspective shifting from present
time to rememberances of past events. An excellent read!
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Title: Those Also Serve Who Stand and Wait · Author: Haleth · Times:
First Age and Prior · ID: 293
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:15:53 Score: 2
This is a really unique look at the problem of the exiles, and captures
the empty sorrow they would have to endure. Well done.
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Title: Fellowship of the Conkers · Author: Llinos · Genres: Humor · ID: 880
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-28 18:08:32 Score: 3
Bravo, Llinos! This was both a wonderful introduction to the world of
Conkers and a delightful story. Not often the hobbits get to best an Elf!

I really can't figure it . . . why *did* Boromir take the firewood
fetching duty? LOL
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Title: Bilbo's Nursery Rhyme for Merry and Pippin · Author: Llinos ·
Races: Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 882
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-28 18:13:49 Score: 2
Totally adorable! This has perfect nursery rhyme rhythm and I love the
addition of the accented words that wee Pippin would shout. Most
wonderfully clever!
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Title: Shoot the Moon · Author: mistycracraft · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 233
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-28 18:58:36 Score: 3
I enjoyed the interaction between Elrond and a young Estel. The
excitement of an adventure on the roof was quickly turned into
fascination as he learned about the stars. Misty did a wonderful job of
incorporating Tolkien's world with what she knows of our world and
making it all seem real. Nicely done.
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Title: The Healer and the Warrior · Author: Madeleine · Genres: Romance:
Lothíriel & Éomer · ID: 140
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-28 19:05:35 Score: 4
This was such a wonderful and well written story. I enjoyed each part of
it - from the moment Eomer steps into the treatment room until the time
he leaves, the story is a joy to read. Lothiriel is single-minded in her
pursuit of getting this warrior treated for his injuries and he is just
as determined in escaping from her clutches. The tension and dialog
between them is perfect. The part where he almost kills her and she is
able to shrug it off is, how shall I say it, priceless.

A most enjoyable story and a wonderful start to the series.
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Title: History Lessons: The Third Age · Author: Nilmandra · Genres:
Drama · ID: 167
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-28 19:14:14 Score: 4
A truly wonderful and enjoyable story. It is a story that is full of so
many emotions - grief, joy, anger, compassion, sadness, and so many
others. There were times that it was so difficult to read and it brought
tears to my eyes, but fortunately I knew the final outcome and that made
it easier to read on. This story, like each of the other History Lesson
stories, brings the characters and the events to life in a way that few
other stories do. For that, I am truly grateful.
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Title: Luck from the Ashes · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 142
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-28 19:18:46 Score: 6
A wonderful story featuring two of my favorite characters.

I enjoyed seeing Faramir spring into action to defend his king from
whatever was lurking in the shadows, it probably made it easier for him
to go into that area - even though I'm sure he never would have admitted
it. Faramir had to be uneasy about returning there.

The conversation between the king and steward was perfect - still a few
rough spots where they aren't quite sure of each other yet as new
acquaintances would be. But then working through it and getting to a
level where they can tease each other a bit. I especially loved the
teasing about the 'biggest, strongest kitten - very clever.

A nice glimpse at the beginning of Aragorn and Faramir's relationship.
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Title: The White Tree · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 94
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-28 19:39:48 Score: 4
I really enjoyed this story. It was nice to see Aragorn and Gandalf
going up and getting the tree together and seeing Aragorn finally having
that sense of hope coming to life inside himself.

Faramir getting angry at his king was interesting since he very seldom
does that! But he was justified in that situation, I think. It ended up
being a good time for them to talk some things out and, hopefully, gave
them a chance to start building their future relationship.

Nicely done!
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Title: The Gift of Time · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 812
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2006-11-28 19:42:29 Score: 10
Time is usually a topic that is overdrawn in Tolkien Literature but
nowhere is it so clearly human and so realistically touching than in
this piece. The harshness of the rangers lives, their sufferings and
sorrows are all captured in one single moment: When Arathorn tries to
explain the passing of a warrior to the warriors young son. This is
very influencing for two reasons: 1- The man died for a reason that
might seem petty, but to imagine it, I think is horrifying. This death
is not glorious, it is real and it is painful. 2- The young man is at
the age when war really scars and history has proved this. So to see his
courage and his resoluteness moves one to both rebellion against the
injustice of having to fight and endure loss at such a young age, and
sorrow because the boy only wanted to know if his father had a painful
death, as though death is a constant in their lives.
In the end, Rhapsody skilfully captures the essence of what it is to
fight: Fighting for those you love and praying you have the time to
enjoy them even if it is just for a breath of short lived peace in the
midst of all the loss.

This is a piece so rich in its human themes and tones, that one can not
but feel that Rhapsody turned the fictional world of Tolkien into
reality with both simplicity and passion. She has touched upon a theme
that epics are made of, yet she gave us the heart and used the words so
skilfully to wrap it that you feel you have been gifted with a rare
insight. Rhapsody, youve elegantly pulled off one heck of a difficult
topic and made it the stuff of memories!

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Title: Both Beholden · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 180
Reviewer: Raihon · 2006-11-28 20:09:04 Score: 6
This is a gripping, terse portrayal of both Halbarad and Boromir, which
vividly highlights the characters of each man. I especially appreciate
the use of Halbarad as a mediator between Aragorn and Boromir, since
he's an intriguing character who doesn't get written about enough, or
well enough, in fandom (and he were get to see Dwimordene's version of
Halbarad in a new context, which is a thrill).

This story does both of the men justice and revives in our minds some of
the core tensions over politics, birthright, and earned loyalty that
threaten to topple Aragorn before he can even claim the throne. I like
feeling that uncertainty of the outcome again, and having all the quite
legitimate questions raised about Aragorn's right to do what he does.
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Title: Relief · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama: Pre-Fellowship · ID: 518
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-28 20:18:56 Score: 5
This is a very action packed story and it feels almost as if there is no
time to breathe. Boromirs thoughts about the situation at hand, the
fate of his men, Gondor. But most of all: where is the relief? I love
the way in which Acacea wove this theme into the story, the surprise of
Boromir to see his brother, in the well-needed guise of relief. But at
the end, it is revealed who actually was the true messenger of it in the
story. Denethors reaction, feeling his own relief that his favoured son
will see the next day is well written. It leaves me wondering how
Denethor managed to control the Palantir for so long in order to save
his sons& the cost must have been greatly, more than we ever could have
imagined.
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Title: Pride Goeth... · Author: Marigold · Races: Cross-Cultural: With
Hobbits · ID: 936
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-28 20:37:29 Score: 3
Ah, what a magnificent short story! I love the way in which the Hobbits
point out to Boromir what he has been doing all along, in a very gentle
and forgiving manner. This piece showed me Boromir from a complete
different perspective and yes, Hobbits do know more than they let on! I
like how Marigold tells this story at a gentle pace with a good build up.
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Title: Prison · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 794
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-28 20:43:05 Score: 2
A very well written glimpse od Eomer's arrest at Grima's command.
Everything seems hopeless,until the young soon to be king remembers that
hope has arrived in the land.
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Title: The Beauty of Memory · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 652
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-28 20:44:28 Score: 2
A touching story when Pippin recalls Boromir to the grieving Faramir at
Aragorn's behest.
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Title: Sums, Showers, and Scones · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 890
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-28 20:49:59 Score: 4
Oh a recipe fic! I was hoping for that as I was reading the story. I
love this short interlude where the halflings have their homework to do
and ah I felt for Pippin, struggling with math and his own handwriting.
What really stands out in this fic is the easy friendship between the
hobbits and just like them, I was so curious how Bilbo would react to
such a generous meal. I bookmarked the story for the recipe too, so
maybe on a rainy afternoon&. A great vignette Dreamflower!
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Title: Discretion · Author: Bodkin · Genres: Humor · ID: 286
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-28 20:51:32 Score: 2
An enjoyable and entertaing story.It is always handy to know a few oaths
in a foreign tongue !
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Title: Dance on the Way Down · Author: Aliana · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 734
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 20:59:56 Score: 3
A beautiful, song-inspired short story about life during and after the
Ring War. Sparse, elegant prose offers insights in the lives and hearts
of everyday people, the unnamed heroes of Tolkien's Middle-earth.
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Title: First Impressions · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 806
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-28 21:19:55 Score: 8
I really like the impressions Aragorn has of his own people and how he
is forced to faced his future: whether he likes it or not. I never
expected this to happen, but while I was reading this, I wondered: what
is he complaining about and refusing meals the Dunedain, themselves
hardly can spare. But as this story unfolds, the reader sees the change
in Aragorn and that he indeed realise that he should not take this for
granted. The author brings this in a very well written manner: the pros
and cons are well described and I loved Halbarads reasoning towards
Aragorn:

[Because its what you are  youd make a mighty poor elf, Aragorn,
however much youve learned from Elronds sons.]

I think this was the first eye-opener that Aragorn received combined
with Halbarads passionate speech about who the Dunedain truly are: hard
working but silent heros who indeed have every right to be proud of
their heritage. This is an excellent character piece where Aragorn
learns a lot about himself and who he truly is. This story is greatly
written with great narrative, especially the opening paragraph places
the reader immediately in the story and from there it simply flows.
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Title: A New Age · Author: Marta · Races: Elves: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 685
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-28 22:00:02 Score: 6
This is a really insightful drabble which is just more than a momentum
that a new age has started. Thrandruil (and his father for that matter)
never wanted anything to do with Celeborn and Galadriel, so I really
like how Marta showed here how Thrandruil overcame that resentment by
reminding Celeborn that there is more than just politics and the Second
Born taking over. Thrandruil brings Celeborn back to the love of nature
and forest in this oh so straightforward written drabble and I smiled
when I read Thrandruils reasoning for doing so. I think you gave us a
wonderful insight in this event Marta, it felt as if the reader is
simply witnessing this. A new age has started, but in many ways! This
was a well-drabbled multi-layered ficlet.
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Title: Pride Before The Fall · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 742
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 22:00:08 Score: 3
This dark AU story explores one of the classical "what if" story lines
in LOTR. Strongly in character, brutal in its consequences it shows how
things could have turned out if only one small scene had ended
differently. Chilling, well-paced, well written.
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Title: Sam's Voice · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 964
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-28 22:14:22 Score: 6
Sam and Frodo& after the Ring War. The author describes in a very
effective and moving way the burden Frodos still carries and how Sam
voices managed get him through the darkest moments: during the quest
and after it. I like how the author presented two characters in this
piece: Earthy and optimistic Sam, looking forward and concentrated on
the future. Then there is Frodo: Fragile and depressed and cannot let go
of the past, no matter how he tries. I always wondered why Frodo would
ask Sam to move in with him, but this piece has a great build up to that
moment. It doesnt feel forced that you halfway think: oh, this is what
this piece is leading to. On the contrary even: the story telling feels
very natural and the way how we perceive the new Shire through Frodos
eyes is brilliantly written. This is a wonderful story!
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Title: That Immortal Sea · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 265
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-28 22:23:56 Score: 5
Oh this is a very intriguing drabble. I recall that Faramir told Eowyn
that he sometimes dreamed of Numenor, but when I read this piece I felt
a chill running down my spine and it left me wondering: how many times
did this happen, what made it occur more often? The chilling imagery
Faramir experiences shortly before he awakens is very effectively
drabbled and the shame he felt while he was still caught up in the
dream& it makes you wondering if men re-incarnate instead of going
beyond Arda. This is very thought provoking Marta! This is a very
compact drabble with great imagery evoked by well-chosen words, I at
least found it hard to shake it off, even days after I read it.
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Title: At the Rising of the Moon · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 846
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 22:38:33 Score: 3
A delightful, humourous post-war story about daily life and holidays in
Minas Tirith. When wives decide to have a feast, husbands have to obey
... the story is funny, warm-hearted and strongly in character. Viking
and Celtic traditions that have been incorporated smoothly into the tale
add cultural depth and a sense of authenticity. Fun!
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Title: Another Man's Cage · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Drama · ID: 136
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 22:40:18 Score: 5
This is an epic that details the early years of the House of Feanor.
The prose is voluptuous, the metaphors, similes and figures of speech
sometimes daring, often brilliant. The stylistic technique of dramatic
present tense is demanding, but usually handled adroitly. The charaters
are perceived in astonishing depth. The setting in Aman remains always
Elvish, never loses that special touch of otherworldliness, yet at the
same time always remains utterly believable and realistic.

Definitely one of the classical masterpieces of Tolkien fanfiction.
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Title: Necessity and Desire · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: The Great Years ·
ID: 173
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 22:40:51 Score: 3
This is an amazing gapfiller that answers many questions surrounding the
Council of Elrond in a way that feels it ought to be canon, or at the
very least fanon. All actors are strongly in character and the
underlying spirit of hopefulness and humour make this a very pleasurable
read indeed.
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Title: Earth, Water, Fire and Air · Author: Fileg · Genres: Drama:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Series · ID: 469
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 22:41:05 Score: 3
This is an amazing series of ficlets that highlights four of the most
important characters of LOTR, Éowyn, Arwen, Aragorn and Faramir.
Concise, precise and sparse in prose, the tiny stories are rich in
symbolism and illuminate each character with daring and great clarity.
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Title: THE DAWNING · Author: digdigil · Genres: Drama: First Age Elves ·
ID: 938
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 22:41:21 Score: 3
A poignant, hopeful glimpse at the first waking moments of Maedhros
after he was rescued from Thangorodrim. This ficlet is brief, but well
paced. Through an atmosphere that is both sinister and lush glimmer
sparkles of eroticism as well as of unexpected humour. A pleasure to read.
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Title: Stolen · Author: Meril · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 46
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 22:47:01 Score: 3
A dark AU that delineates the demise of Galadriel. With only a few
well-placed words Galadriel's world, her life and finally the lady
herself are ripped apart and broken. This is a chilling, horrifying tale
and very effectively written. And I'm very glad that it is only a dark
AU, and not how the story really went!
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Title: Hearth and Home · Author: Molly Littlefoot · Races: Hobbits · ID: 730
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:01:53 Score: 4
A perfect Hobbit story.

The protagonist is a Hobbit wife with a happy, prosperous family. But
the darkness of the outer world is reaching for the Shire and friendship
with a ranger may be a dangerous thing in these days ...

The style is delicious. Descriptive, detailed, well-paced. We get a real
sense of the heroine, her life and her worries. And keep hoping with
her, all through the long, lonely, dark night.

I'd love to see a sequel!
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Title: Too Many Names · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 866
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-28 23:06:30 Score: 2
An insightful and enjoyable look at Aragorns many names and what they
mean to him and others.
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Title: Last Goodbyes Series · Author: Perelleth · Genres: Drama:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Series · ID: 814
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:16:30 Score: 4
This series of drabbles highlights the many different ways in which
goodbyes could have been said throughout the history of Arda and
Middle-earth. These ficlets are true treasures: clear, poignant prose
stirs the heart and illuminates Tolkien's world as well as the many
meanings of "goodbye". A series that can be read countless times, and
will always remain fresh and touching.
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Title: Lost · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 260
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:23:44 Score: 3
A surprising gapfiller about one of the minor characters of "The
Fellowship" and a strongly "in-character", friendly Aragorn. The main
strength of this little piece lies in the questions it poses for the
reader. What happened before that small scene? And what are its
implications for the future? Very interesting!
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Title: Dust On My Saddle · Author: Rous · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 630
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:29:25 Score: 3
This is an AU drabble that crosses worlds the way few authors dare to
cross them. In a few well-chosen, poignant words it brings the scene
alive down to dusty details. Great sense of dark humour. Amusing and
surprising. Very unusual.
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Title: I Yessë En Mentë · Author: Rous · Genres: Drama: Poetry · ID: 739
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:34:44 Score: 4
This is a long, heroic poem that feels as if it was written by a
Rohirric minstrel, or at the very least, by an Old English bard.

The traditional form of alliterative verse has been kept scrupulously as
far as I can tell. The rhythm is clear and carries the reader throughout
the poem without fail and unforced, which is a rare thing. The tale
itself is descriptive and touching, truly heroic, but never over the top.

This is a true gem among Tolkien fan fiction poetry.
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Title: The Circle · Author: Karenator · Races: Men · ID: 778
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:37:08 Score: 2
Very nice father and son tale as Halbarad trains his son for a grim
life, albeit a necessary one. I loved the eerie glimpses of the children
in the wood and the haunting promise!
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Title: Second Son · Author: Nesta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor
· ID: 843
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:37:52 Score: 4
A very original premise! Turin is a fascinating child and is clearly the
son of both his parents; he has qualities found in each of them. But it
is the way that these qualities manifest themselves that makes him such
an interesting character. It is not easy to be first in a field that
goes against convention and propriety. I wonder where this interest will
lead him and can just imagine him in later years teaching this skill of
observation and deduction to others.
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Title: The Remains of Power · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 228
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:39:16 Score: 2
Pearl has done a good job here capturing Saruman's humiliation. That he
considers it only to be a temporary setback adds nice foreshadowing to
what we know will occur later.
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Title: Pennies for a Sunny Day · Author: Cathleen · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 728
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:40:53 Score: 2
My favourite part of this tale is when Merry is off playing alone in the
woods. We don't often see this side of him in fanfic and I thought that
Cathleen captured his personality well.
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Title: A Little Thing · Author: Acacea · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 75
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:41:42 Score: 3
An excellent drabble, very evocative. I found it quite believable that
the Ring would extend long life to the fern in order to aid Its
concealment and that the water creatures would have the instinct to stay
far away.
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Title: Board Games (Cinquain) · Author: Rous · Genres: Drama: Poetry ·
ID: 741
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:41:44 Score: 4
It never ceases to amaze me how much a truly gifted poet can say within
the strict confines of a form like the cinquain. This is a perfect
example. Concise, precise, with utter clarity of language this little
poem illuminates the situation of the kingdom of Rohan on the eve of the
Ring War. The few lines are honed to an incredibly sharp edge and leave
the reader with a sense of tension ready to snap. Truly admirable.
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Title: Sword Play · Author: Lindelea · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: The
Shire · ID: 782
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:42:48 Score: 2
Nice interaction between Faramir and Goldilocks. They are well matched,
even as children, though neither one knows it or would admit it if they did!
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Title: King's Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 197
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:44:39 Score: 2
This piece is a wonderful character study of Halbarad and shows a
closeness between him and Aragorn very well.
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Title: Inheritance · Author: Primsong · Times: Late Third Age: The Shire
· ID: 310
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:45:52 Score: 2
This is a chilling premise! Happy times with Merry and his family that
Frodo might anticipate after his forced move back to Buckland will be
very shortlived!
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Title: Of Stone and Fire · Author: Werecat · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 124
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:47:12 Score: 3
This is a poignant drabble that builds a bridge between the First and
the Third Age. With just a few subtle lines the author illuminates the
characters of three heroes of Tolkien's writings - and shows a great
sense of humour at the same time. Not an easy feat! And the last line I
would like to call utterly brilliant. Five words that really say it all!
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Title: Stronger Songs · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 688
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:48:05 Score: 2
An excellent drabble! It is conceivable that Treebeard might once have
dwelt in such a northerly part of the forest as we do know that at one
time Fangorn and the old Forest were one.
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Title: The Way of a King · Author: Katzilla · Races: Men · ID: 847
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:48:25 Score: 1
Young Eomer is captured very well here.
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Title: On the Fair Hill · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 946
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:48:48 Score: 3
The descriptions used to set up the last line are lovely. It gives even
the long years leading up to this moment a sense of timelessness and a
feeling that, to the ancient wood, even this is transitory.
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Title: That Which Cannot Be Put Into Words · Author: Pearl Took · Times:
The Great Years: Vignette · ID: 230
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:49:12 Score: 2
The common ground that Pippin finds with this young elf is beautiful. I
found myself wondering if they ever met again after the Ring was destroyed.
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Title: Incubus · Author: Werecat · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Incomplete · ID: 127
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:50:51 Score: 4
This is one of the very few AU-Crossover stories that really, really
work for me. The dark and deep places of Middle-earth have room for many
dark and deep secrets. This is not a story to be read when you are alone
at home and it is dark outside! Plotting and pacing are faultless, the
prose is clear and imaginative. Without doubt one of the most
imaginative pieces I have read.
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Title: If I had a Hammer · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 162
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:51:23 Score: 4
Merry, Pippin, Frodo and Sam are in wonderful character here. This story
does a very good job of bringing out their distinct personalities. I
liked the premise very much and the believable way that the author
builds upon events to the very satisfactory conclusion. All of the
hobbits in this story are excellent, the descriptions are good and the
dialogue spot-on. The humour of the story is nicely balanced with the
drama. Very enjoyable!
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Title: Call yourself Thorongil · Author: Nilmandra · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 731
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:51:59 Score: 3
An excellent description of the first meeting between Aragorn and
Gandalf. I found myself wondering if Gandalf set all of his many plans
into motion based on a schedule of sorts that he had set himself, in
just the way that he knows it is now time for Aragorn to go to Gondor.
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Title: Shadow and flame · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 876
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:52:27 Score: 1
Beautiful and vivid language and a most interesting perspective.
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Title: Planning Ahead · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men · ID: 84
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:52:51 Score: 2
What a position for Arathorn to find himself in, not just now, but in
the years to come! Little Gilraen is written exactly right, innocent and
charming.
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Title: A Tisket, A Tasket · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 570
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:53:21 Score: 4
This is a very sweet story! Poor Errol! I really enjoyed the
characterisations here; Merry in particular is just right. The most
vocal against Pippin's little plan, he is of course the one that goes
out of his way to see that Pippin's experiment has a satisfying conclusion.

This is a very enjoyable tale, written with humour and very evident love
for the characters.
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Title: Unchanged · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 926
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:53:57 Score: 3
Rory's hobbit nature and his acceptance of the way things are meant to
be are captured wonderfully here. He knows in his bones that Bilbo's
lack of ageing is something he shouldn't envy.
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Title: The Worst of All Evils · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years:
Vignette · ID: 697
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:55:29 Score: 2
It is a credit to Éowyn's great deed that Éomer is not more angry here.
Still, I would not want to be Elfhelm!
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Title: Shoot the Moon · Author: mistycracraft · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 233
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:55:56 Score: 3
This is a beautiful moment between Elrond and young Estel. I liked this
glimpse of him as a child, full of questions. A nice contrast to the
taciturn and often lonely man that he will become.
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Title: In the Woods · Author: Werecat · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 119
Reviewer: juno_magic · 2006-11-28 23:55:58 Score: 4
Effortlessly this story blends a vision of the far future of
Middle-earth with the myths and legends of our past. Elves or Sidhe, who
knows which creatures meet in the woods in the witching hour? The idea
that Radagast stays, is definitely credible. A very original idea,
beautifully written with a certain sense of wistfulness. We will always
long for mystical and mysterious moments in our lives, and as long as
this author writes her stories, we will not want for those moments.
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Title: Merrys Present · Author: Mariole · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 639
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:57:21 Score: 2
This story is a nice example of why Frodo and Merry were so close, they
both respect one another.
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Title: Home At Last · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 883
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:58:25 Score: 3
How sad for Bilbo that he was unable to find his place in the Shire
again. Interesting that in a way, the Bilbo that we know later must have
evolved largely from his treatment by the Shirefolk, rather than only by
the changes in himself.
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Title: Fugitive · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Drama · ID: 366
Reviewer: DrummerWench · 2006-11-28 23:59:09 Score: 4
This is a wholly believable story of the oldest daughter of the greatest
traveller and huntsman of this age of the world. It's a tale that works
on different levels, with the eleven-year-old girl growing up a little
now, but also a sub-text of adult knowledge to come. Look elsewhere for
saccharine - this story mixes the bitter with the sweet. It's also a
nice portrait of Aragorn as father, husband and king.

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Title: Wizardry · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 179
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-28 23:59:36 Score: 3
I really liked this! The characterisations were spot-on, as always with
Dwim, and both Gandalf and Aragorn were captured wonderfully.

Knowing that someday Frodo and Sam will be wandering this same path,
only then with Gollum pursuing them, added another layer of enjoyment.
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Title: Just Us Lads · Author: pippinfan88 · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 291
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:02:39 Score: 2
This story leaves the reader with a very comfortable and snug feeling.
What a joy it must have been for Paladin and Pippin to share times like
this together.
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Title: Birthday Kisses · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 59
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:03:36 Score: 3
I felt sorry for Denethor here; clearly he loves Faramir and wants only
his happiness, but he can't find it within himself to give the child the
affection that he craves. Perhaps he hopes that the puppy will give his
son what he cannot.
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Title: Legend · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 933
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:04:37 Score: 2
Very descriptive. Éowyn has changed in many ways but in other ways she
has remained the same. Nice mention that Merry's first blow gave Éowyn
the heart to strike.
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Title: Iridescence · Author: Larner · Times: The Great Years: Vignette ·
ID: 121
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:05:45 Score: 2
A lovely story that captures the innocence and wonder of the hobbits,
even after all they had endured. What a lovely treasure for them to
bring home!
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Title: How Grima Lost His Eyebrows · Author: NeumeIndil · Times: Late
Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 800
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:07:34 Score: 2
A very funny drabble and it makes perfect sense! Saruman should remember
to put a "Danger!" sign on his door!
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Title: Blood Brothers · Author: Elana · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 149
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:08:15 Score: 3
The author manages to paint a very clear picture of an entire culture,
as well as the more intimate memories of an entire lifetime of one of
its people and his mumak - all in 100 words. Splendid!
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Title: One Summer's Day · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men · ID: 765
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:10:55 Score: 4
This wonderful glimpse of newly bereaved Éowyn as a child is a haunting
one. Her fear and actions are understandable. I felt so very sorry for
Éomer; he is but a child himself, yet he is the one upon which the
burden of Éowyn's grief-stricken behaviour has been placed.

Fortunately Theodred comes to the rescue of both. I can see in these
depictions of the two as children how they grew into the adults they did.
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Title: The Lost · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 181
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:11:18 Score: 2
It is nice to think that Boromir might have had a son. The story fits
very well into this universe.
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Title: Dark Appetites · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 833
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:11:53 Score: 2
Dark and creepy and filled with brooding evil; those words sum up both
this drabble and its subject. I find myself wondering about Shelob's
eventual fate. Very nice!
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Title: Merry's Graduation · Author: pippinfan88 · Times: Late Third Age:
The Shire · ID: 125
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:12:30 Score: 2
Merry's characterisation is especially good in this tale. The loyalty of
the young hobbits is well written.
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Title: Home Again · Author: Súlriel · Times: Early Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 863
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:12:53 Score: 1
Interesting perspective, and well executed.
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Title: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship · Author: Elana · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 150
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:13:07 Score: 2
The smoking of pipeweed is certainly not the last thing that Gandalf
will learn from hobbits! Nicely done!
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Title: Claws · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 835
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:13:24 Score: 2
I liked the way that the crow's pov builds in excitement and then ends
so suddenly. Smaug's boredom with the whole thing is a very good
counterpart to that.
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Title: If I Had It All Again To Do · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond: The Shire · ID: 226
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:17:17 Score: 2
It is very sad to think of the dwindling of the hobbits and the changes
transforming the Shire.

Progress is not always a good thing.
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Title: All Is Well · Author: Gryffinjack · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 969
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:18:58 Score: 3
I really enjoyed the strong bond of family in this tale, taking simple
pleasure in being with each other, in food and in a good tale. The
foreshadowing was a nice contrast but even that fades easily back into a
comfortable sense of the present; it is something to be forgotten at
once and Pippin's mind turned back to more important things.
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Author: Llinos · ID: 25 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:24:28 Score: 2
Llinoss subtle and witty style is evident in both her poetry and prose.
Shes an author I consistently enjoy reading.
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Author: Make It Stop · ID: 634 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:27:15 Score: 3
Make It Stop is one of those authors who never fails to bring a smile to
my face, even on those days when I most need one. Her humour is so
outlandish, but I just dare anyone to point out how it is uncanonical.
It really touches on a light part of human nature that Im sure our
favourite heroes would have shared in. Always a fun read!
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:27:41 Score: 9
Marigold has such a special way of writing hobbits. Somehow ordinary
moments of life leap off the page when she writes about them. She writes
the major characters well and I'm sure a lot of readers have enjoyed her
for that, but what has really captivated me about her writing is the way
she handles the mothers and sisters of the major characters.

What stands out among this year's writing is the way she presents
Pippin's mother worrying over him. That piece not only reflected her
missing Pippin but the situation in Tookland with the resistance of
Sharkey's men. And that's another of Marigold's talents. She definitely
knows the canon about hobbits better than anyone else I know, but she
doesn't allow it to overwhelm the piece. Then she adds her own
invention, the idea of Gandalf giving Pippin two special stars, and the
result is a situation that almost feels like something Tolkien would
have written. At a minimum I'm sure he approved.

Mari is an author who never fails to satisfy, and whose pieces have just
the right balance of light and dark to portray hobbits as Tolkien meant
them. Not frivolous children, but curiously resistant to despair.


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Author: Oshun · ID: 589 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:30:04 Score: 3
The one piece that Ive read by this author is much shorter than her
usual fare, so its hard to judge based on that. But if Of All the
Pretty Horses is an indication, shes a clever author who can keep the
author guessing. I did not decipher this comedy of errors until the very
end, and that takes a skill I think would be very useful in a larger piece.
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Author: Perelleth · ID: 465 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:30:54 Score: 4
Something about the way Perelleth writes makes her story have a lot of
emotional weight. I've thought about it and can't quite identify it,
except that her own writing tends to be pretty similar to my own.
Whatever it is, I found myself smiling, giggling, and even snorting at
different points in "Mathom", and tearing up a little at "Last Goodbye
Series". Her writing is powerful and I look forward to reading more by her.
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Author: pippinfan88 · ID: 331 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:32:49 Score: 5
Pippinfan88 really nails the way that Merry and Pippin and everyone they
knew were impacted by their ties with Gondor and Rohan. Nowhere is this
more obvious than in "The Falcon's Watch", which is about their children
reacting to news of their death. It's also one of the most effective
stories I've ever read dealing with the topic of grief, it handles that
difficult topic really sensitively but at the same time without pulling
any punches. I look forward to reading the stories I didn't get around
to yet, because this is an author I definitely want to read more of.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:37:09 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Rhapsody · ID: 279 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:45:55 Score: 6
It amazes me that Rhapsody, as an author who writes English as a second
language, should write it so affectively in short forms like drabbles. I
don't think that I've read a multi-chaptered piece by her because I tend
to more or less stick to Third Age stuff, and I'm sure she can write
longer pieces just as convincingly. But when you're writing drabbles or
pieces that aren't that longer, then every word has to count. And
Rhapsody is one of the best drabblists I know; her pieces always pack a
punch in their short length and never feel rushed.

More than that, she is one of those authors that has made the Third Age
come to life for me. Her characterizations are vivid and fallible in
ways that fit the elves she's writing about. I had a hard time
remembering which son of Feanor was which before I read stuff by authors
like Rhapsody. She has definitely enhanced Tolkien's world for me.

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Author: Thundera Tiger · ID: 86 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:54:44 Score: 4
Even in Thunderas more serious writing she seems to see the natural
humor in some of the situations Tolkien set up. Im sure that the people
involved in them were too frightened to see the natural humor, but how
can we as readers not softly chuckle at Gloins and Thranduils sons
ending up together? Or, as she shows us this year, Legolas dealing with
mortals and mortals as clever as Faramir knowing just how to annoy him.
She has a real head for seeing this humor intrinsic in the canon, and
exploits it beautifully.
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Author: Dreamflower · ID: 115 · Genres: Non-Fiction [5]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 16:59:40 Score: 2
Dreamflower writes hobbits well, keeping them light and cute but still
giving them depth. Her writing develops relationships that seem to fit
into the canon nicely.
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Author: Rabidsamfan · ID: 380 · Genres: Non-Fiction [5]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:00:44 Score: 3
As always, RSF writes hobbits in a way that makes them feel real. In
both her stories and her essays she extrapolates from what Tolkien wrote
to create a tale or essay that feels genuine.
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Author: Súlriel · ID: 7 · Genres: Non-Fiction [5]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:10:03 Score: 3
Sulriel joins her knowledge of the first age with her feel for writing
villains in many of her works, to give us a portrait of what life would
have been like for elves in the Elder Days. Its just different enough
to be really interesting. This year she shows us that she can write
non-fiction well, too, and provides a useful resource for other writers.
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Author: Dreamflower · ID: 115 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-28 17:12:46 Score: 3
Dreamflower is a master author. She knows Middle Earth and it's hobbity
residents extremely well. Her stories have wonderful flow and pacing.
You feel like you're there. Plus, she is a great encourager of other
writers. Thank you, Dreamflower!
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:23:59 Score: 10
It's a little hard to know how to describe Ann as a writer, because if I
*just* talked about what she writes then I would be ignoring the
encouraging affect she has had on so many authors, myself included,
because she is a world-class beta and reviewer. It's a truly rare
combination to find someone who can do all three effectively, but Ann
definitely qualifies. If I had to choose which of the three she's best
at I would probably choose betareading because she has it down to an
art, and I have never felt like I was losing control of my story.

Anyway, back to her writing, I do not want to underemphasize that
aspect. Her writing is always crisp as one would expect from a fine beta
reader. The mechanics are all there and her word economy i such that her
pieces never feel rushed (even in her non-drabbles, though this really
stands out in her drabbles). But what I love most about Ann's writing is
the quiet humor that seems to invade her writing, will she or no. If
there's anything I hope Ann never writes it's angst. Her stories just
all have this very natural feel to them of everyday life. From the hawt
quality of new love to the comfort of a long-stranding relationship to
the gentle jostlings of siblings to the tenderness of new parenthood --
it all feels so like real. And that makes for a very three-dimensional
world she writes.


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Author: annmarwalk/EdorasLass CoAuthors · ID: 611 · Genres: Romance
[51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:25:11 Score: 3
Both annmarwalk and EdorasLass are brilliant by themselves. But what's
really remarkable is that together their styles complement each other.
That doesn't always turn out to be the case, but they write well
together as well as apart.
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Author: Bodkin · ID: 411 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:30:46 Score: 2
Bodkin does a good job of capturing the elves in the Undying Lands. I
always thought paradise would be boring, but not her version!
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Author: Branwyn · ID: 240 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:31:34 Score: 10
Branwyn is one of those authors that has really captured my heart, and I
mean that in both senses. Her stories always captivate me and affect me
in one way or another (I like to think in the way that was intended!),
but they also seem to have captured my own heart and experiences in the
events she has happen to her characters. I often find myself reading her
work and thinking to myself "Gee, that has happened to me!" That takes
an insight into human character that not everyone possesses, and I don't
think her writing would be so affective without it.

Anyone who has read her in the past should not be surprised to find that
she writes Boromir and Faramir in a three-dimensional and faceted way.
Her shorter pieces only hint at a depth that seems to underrun all of
her stories, yet they do not rely on each other so much that knowledge
of all is necessary to understand one.

But what did surprise me about this year's readings from her is just how
many different genres she can write. I knew she wrote drama and
reminiscing in a way I thoroughly enjoyed, and "Pink Oliphaunts" and
"The Household Accounts" did not disappoint on this grounds, but the
pacing and horror that kept me on the edge of my seat through "The Fords
of Isen"... just wow. And the sensuous detail, penchant for historical
accuracy, and compelling (and in-character) erotica in "Book
Learning"... shall not go too far into that for a PG review, but suffice
it to say that romance is not beyond the scope of her talent. This is an
author that continues to surprise me in pleasant ways.

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Author: Gwynnyd · ID: 186 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:34:01 Score: 10
I'll admit that before I first read Gwynnyd's fiction I did not feel
that deeply for Aragorn. He always seemed a bit boring, I guess because
we never see him going through any sort of growth in the corpus of Lord
of the Rings. The material's there, but it's buried. However, through
discussions with Gwynnyd and through reading her stories, I have begun
to see more of the gaps that ferment into story nuzguls for her.

Gwynnyd's stories range from the events surrounding Arathorn's death and
Aragorn's moving to Rivendell, through his reign as king of Gondor. In
all of these different situations she is very aware of the real-world
historical precedents that faced similar situations and uses these
models to good use. Of course Aragorn and Gilraen both living in
Rivendell would be a tip-off to Aragorn's identity. But I did not even
think that this was a difficulty that needs to be explained until I
started reading Gwynnyd's fiction.

The best thing about her plots is that they do not *add* to Tolkien in a
way that feels artificial. Instead, reading one of her stories is like
going on an archaeological dig and discovering what was already there,
just waiting to be unearthed. Reading one of her pieces is always a treat.
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Author: Lady Aranel · ID: 151 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:38:36 Score: 5
Lady Aranel gives Legolas a really distinct voice. Somehow he is both
youthful and wise at the same time. In this year's selection you can see
him being an understanding brother, a warrior with the heart of a leader
paralleled to his father, and a person just like any other grieving the
lost of a friend. I had always thought of Lady Aranel as a distinguished
writer of romance (which she undoubtedly is), but the pieces by her I
read for this year's MEFA's show that she has many other talents as
well. Her ability to communicate powerful emotions quietly in a
dignified way is especially noteworthy.
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Author: Llinos · ID: 25 · Genres: Romance [51]: Poetry
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:43:07 Score: 2
Llinoss subtle and witty style is evident in both her poetry and prose.
Shes an author I consistently enjoy reading.
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Author: Madeleine · ID: 606 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:52:48 Score: 7
Madeleine has a unique gift for capturing a Lothiriel who is at once
modern and perfectly content in a Middle-earth created by a
nineteenth-century Briton. She is in some way a working woman -- she
lives in Minas Tirith away from her family and works as a healer in the
Houses of Healing -- but that does not change the fact that she accepts
her fate as a noble's daughter that she will be married in a political
alliance. Her Eomer is engaging as well, and seems like a very natural
outgrowth of the canonical character Tolkien presents us with.

Her stories involve all of the hallmarks of an engaging story: a
realistic world, intriguing plot, pace that moves the story forward,
freedom from distracting mechanical mistakes, good use of detail. Yet it
is the characters that really make her stories so compelling for me, and
anyone interested in these characters or the Fourth Age in Rohan and
Gondor in general will find them a satisfying read.

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Author: Oshun · ID: 589 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:56:49 Score: 3
The one piece that Ive read by this author is much shorter than her
usual fare, so its hard to judge based on that. But if Of All the
Pretty Horses is an indication, shes a clever author who can keep the
author guessing. I did not decipher this comedy of errors until the very
end, and that takes a skill I think would be very useful in a larger piece.
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Author: pippinfan88 · ID: 331 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:57:41 Score: 5
Pippinfan88 really nails the way that Merry and Pippin and everyone they
knew were impacted by their ties with Gondor and Rohan. Nowhere is this
more obvious than in "The Falcon's Watch", which is about their children
reacting to news of their death. It's also one of the most effective
stories I've ever read dealing with the topic of grief, it handles that
difficult topic really sensitively but at the same time without pulling
any punches. I look forward to reading the stories I didn't get around
to yet, because this is an author I definitely want to read more of.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-28 17:59:11 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Raihon · ID: 675 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:10:45 Score: 2
Raihon writes slash convincingly here, giving us a relationship that
defines the characters involved not just through their desires but the
consequences of those desires.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Genres: Romance [51]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:15:46 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Talasi · ID: 642 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:16:20 Score: 2
Talasi effectively weaves a tale around a popular song, without it
feeling modern. That's a challenging task.
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Author: Thevina Finduilas · ID: 87 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:24:12 Score: 6
Thevina does such interesting work with those less-explored corners of
canon. In most of the entries in this year's awards this is most evident
in her handling of dwarves. There is a quiet gruffness to them that
seems very in keeping with the other races of the north and what Tolkien
told us of them, yet through Thevina's writings I see a vulnerability
underneath that needs to be exposed. And Thevina does expose it, through
Gimli's wonderings about how he is changing over the course of the
Quest, but this does not make him seem week or effeminate. She also
develops a tantalizing glimpse into the sexuality of the Rohirrim that
once again build where there just isn't canon, but feel very in-keeping
with the spirit of what Tolkien wrote. Reading her stories always leaves
me thinking, something I really enjoy.
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Author: Bodkin · ID: 411 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:29:30 Score: 2
Bodkin does a good job of capturing the elves in the Undying Lands. I
always thought paradise would be boring, but not her version!
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Author: Dawn Felagund · ID: 602 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:30:10 Score: 4
Dawn really brings the First Age-elves to life. She takes these
characters that to readers like me who have only read the Silm once or
twice are little more than names, and really forms them into characters
that I can feel the emotional weight of the situation. Her characters
always jump off the page and seem very, very real to me, and more
importantly make sense without an excessive amount of knowledge of the
backstory.
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Author: Gandalfs apprentice · ID: 175 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:31:08 Score: 4
Gandalfs Apprentice can always make me lap with the matter-of-fact
streak she brings to her humor. I can just see her characters with a
very deadpan expression on their faces as they deliver the lines she
gives them. Even in her more serious works, the slightly funny quality
is still under the surface. You just know that her characters thoroughly
enjoy life, and that makes for a fun read.
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Author: Gandalfs apprentice · ID: 175 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:31:18 Score: 4
Gandalfs Apprentice can always make me lap with the matter-of-fact
streak she brings to her humor. I can just see her characters with a
very deadpan expression on their faces as they deliver the lines she
gives them. Even in her more serious works, the slightly funny quality
is still under the surface. You just know that her characters thoroughly
enjoy life, and that makes for a fun read.
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Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · ID: 182 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:32:03 Score: 4
Isabeau was probably the first writer I read who wrote convincing slash.
Andrahar's relationship with Boromir is of course extra-canonical but it
really comments on his character as portrayed by Tolkien and in other
writers in the same universe. It explores all of the implications of
homosexuality within the culture, and makes for a really interesting way
to look at the values of Gondorians.
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Author: Lindelea · ID: 27 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:32:37 Score: 2
Lindelea is good at keeping a long tale interesting over several
chapters. Her hobbits are relaxing and fun, and I enjoy what I've read
of hers.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:33:08 Score: 9
Marigold has such a special way of writing hobbits. Somehow ordinary
moments of life leap off the page when she writes about them. She writes
the major characters well and I'm sure a lot of readers have enjoyed her
for that, but what has really captivated me about her writing is the way
she handles the mothers and sisters of the major characters.

What stands out among this year's writing is the way she presents
Pippin's mother worrying over him. That piece not only reflected her
missing Pippin but the situation in Tookland with the resistance of
Sharkey's men. And that's another of Marigold's talents. She definitely
knows the canon about hobbits better than anyone else I know, but she
doesn't allow it to overwhelm the piece. Then she adds her own
invention, the idea of Gandalf giving Pippin two special stars, and the
result is a situation that almost feels like something Tolkien would
have written. At a minimum I'm sure he approved.

Mari is an author who never fails to satisfy, and whose pieces have just
the right balance of light and dark to portray hobbits as Tolkien meant
them. Not frivolous children, but curiously resistant to despair.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:33:55 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:33:57 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Rhapsody · ID: 279 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:34:33 Score: 6
It amazes me that Rhapsody, as an author who writes English as a second
language, should write it so affectively in short forms like drabbles. I
don't think that I've read a multi-chaptered piece by her because I tend
to more or less stick to Third Age stuff, and I'm sure she can write
longer pieces just as convincingly. But when you're writing drabbles or
pieces that aren't that longer, then every word has to count. And
Rhapsody is one of the best drabblists I know; her pieces always pack a
punch in their short length and never feel rushed.

More than that, she is one of those authors that has made the Third Age
come to life for me. Her characterizations are vivid and fallible in
ways that fit the elves she's writing about. I had a hard time
remembering which son of Feanor was which before I read stuff by authors
like Rhapsody. She has definitely enhanced Tolkien's world for me.
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Author: Thevina Finduilas · ID: 87 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:35:20 Score: 6
Thevina does such interesting work with those less-explored corners of
canon. In most of the entries in this year's awards this is most evident
in her handling of dwarves. There's a quiet gruffness to them that seems
very in keeping with the other races of the north and what Tolkien told
us of them, yet through Thevina's writings I see a vulnerability
underneath that needs to be exposed. And Thevina does expose it, through
Gimli's wonderings about how he is changing over the course of the
Quest, but this does not make him seem week or effeminate. She also
develops a tantalizing glimpse into Rohirric sexual values that once
again build where there just isn't canon, but feel very in-keeping with
the spirit of what Tolkien wrote. Reading her stories always leaves me
thinking, something I really enjoy.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:37:23 Score: 10
Tanaqui is a long-time friend and beta reader, so it feels a bit odd to
be reviewing not something that she wrote but how she functions as an
author. I hold her writing abilities in the highest regard and always
like to read what she has written in the Tolkien fandom because she has
a knowledge of canon that transcends individual facts. Of course, once
you try to jump from facts that Tolkien explicitly wrote to broader
worldviews about how a culture would have operated you enter the realm
of interpretation. And I have not agreed with every assertion Tanaqui
has made, but I have been able to accept her inventions as something
Tolkien would have approved of; they are very much in the spirit and
letter of his Middle-earth.

Tanaqui uses an exquisite amount of physical detail in her works,
without her pieces feeling like an infodump. That's what I remember when
I think about her, how rich the world she creates is. She once joked
that in a drabble we are allowed seven words for a title, one hundred
for the body of the text -- and three thousand for the requisite
footnotes and forenotes documenting the historical precedents, canon
sources, and the thoughts that led up to the drabble. That really
summarizes her approach to writing in general: not that she uses too
many footnotes(!) but that for every bit she puts in, there's much more
going on below the surface. I'm not sure how much she'll appreciate a
comparison to movieverse, but her writing really does remind me of
WETA's dedication to crafting props that were works of art, even if they
barely made it on to screen or not at all. It creates a very rich
backdrop for her stories, and this reader loves it.
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Races: Dwarves [12]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:38:47 Score: 10
It's a little hard to know how to describe Ann as a writer, because if I
*just* talked about what she writes then I would be ignoring the
encouraging affect she has had on so many authors, myself included,
because she is a world-class beta and reviewer. It's a truly rare
combination to find someone who can do all three effectively, but Ann
definitely qualifies. If I had to choose which of the three she's best
at I would probably choose betareading because she has it down to an
art, and I have never felt like I was losing control of my story.

Anyway, back to her writing, I do not want to underemphasize that
aspect. Her writing is always crisp as one would expect from a fine beta
reader. The mechanics are all there and her word economy i such that her
pieces never feel rushed (even in her non-drabbles, though this really
stands out in her drabbles). But what I love most about Ann's writing is
the quiet humor that seems to invade her writing, will she or no. If
there's anything I hope Ann never writes it's angst. Her stories just
all have this very natural feel to them of everyday life. From the hawt
quality of new love to the comfort of a long-stranding relationship to
the gentle jostlings of siblings to the tenderness of new parenthood --
it all feels so like real. And that makes for a very three-dimensional
world she writes.
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Author: Elen Kortirion · ID: 251 · Races: Dwarves [12]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 01:44:24 Score: 4
What I like most about Elen Kortirion is the way she writes original
characters. They enhance what Tolkien wrote and provide new perspectives
on oft-told events, yet because they are from different walks of life
than the canon characters those different perspectives feel like valid
re-interpretation of canon rather than departures from it. Through these
OC's she gives us a very different view of Gondorian society and the
political situation that has really challenged my pre-held conceptions.
Which is of course half the fun. ;-)
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Author: Salsify · ID: 314 · Races: Dwarves [12]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:15:27 Score: 7
With most of the authors I have reviewed, on reflecting on just what it
is I like about their writing, I am able to identify one or two traits
that really shine in all of their piece. Yet with Salsify, it's not like
that somehow. Her writing has her strengths, but each piece I read seems
to shine in a different way.

"Gundabad" shows her ability to take an obscure canon factoid or quote
and spin it into a full story. I'm not talking about just writing a good
gap-filler, but instead following something Tolkien wrote to its full
conclusion. It's a remarkable skill and really develops the idea that
the Red Book and Bilbo's Translations from the Elvish were supposed to
be historical remnants of our past. "Flotsam" is remarkable for a
different reason, the emotional impact it brings in such a minimalist
ways -- it actually left me physically shaking.

These different strengths just hint at a very dynamic writer. Salsify's
tales always affect me strongly and each is a gem in its own way.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Dwarves [12]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:18:52 Score: 10
Tanaqui is a long-time friend and beta reader, so it feels a bit odd to
be reviewing not something that she wrote but how she functions as an
author. I hold her writing abilities in the highest regard and always
like to read what she has written in the Tolkien fandom because she has
a knowledge of canon that transcends individual facts. Of course, once
you try to jump from facts that Tolkien explicitly wrote to broader
worldviews about how a culture would have operated you enter the realm
of interpretation. And I have not agreed with every assertion Tanaqui
has made, but I have been able to accept her inventions as something
Tolkien would have approved of; they are very much in the spirit and
letter of his Middle-earth.

Tanaqui uses an exquisite amount of physical detail in her works,
without her pieces feeling like an infodump. That's what I remember when
I think about her, how rich the world she creates is. She once joked
that in a drabble we are allowed seven words for a title, one hundred
for the body of the text -- and three thousand for the requisite
footnotes and forenotes documenting the historical precedents, canon
sources, and the thoughts that led up to the drabble. That really
summarizes her approach to writing in general: not that she uses too
many footnotes(!) but that for every bit she puts in, there's much more
going on below the surface. I'm not sure how much she'll appreciate a
comparison to movieverse, but her writing really does remind me of
WETA's dedication to crafting props that were works of art, even if they
barely made it on to screen or not at all. It creates a very rich
backdrop for her stories, and this reader loves it.
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Author: Thevina Finduilas · ID: 87 · Races: Dwarves [12]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:19:56 Score: 6
Thevina does such interesting work with those less-explored corners of
canon. In most of the entries in this year's awards this is most evident
in her handling of dwarves. There's a quiet gruffness to them that seems
very in keeping with the other races of the north and what Tolkien told
us of them, yet through Thevina's writings I see a vulnerability
underneath that needs to be exposed. And Thevina does expose it, through
Gimli's wonderings about how he is changing over the course of the
Quest, but this does not make him seem week or effeminate. She also
develops a tantalizing glimpse into Rohirric sexual values that once
again build where there just isn't canon, but feel very in-keeping with
the spirit of what Tolkien wrote. Reading her stories always leaves me
thinking, something I really enjoy.
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Author: daw the minstrel · ID: 176 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:20:44 Score: 3
Usually elflings irritate me but not daw's. Young Legolas resonates
emotionally and Mirkwood is convincingly connected to what Tolkien tells
us in "The Hobbit". It's a world I find myself accepting, and her
stories always sweep me up in what's happening.
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Author: Dawn Felagund · ID: 602 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:21:07 Score: 4
Dawn really brings the First Age-elves to life. She takes these
characters that to readers like me who have only read the Silm once or
twice are little more than names, and really forms them into characters
that I can feel the emotional weight of the situation. Her characters
always jump off the page and seem very, very real to me, and more
importantly make sense without an excessive amount of knowledge of the
backstory.
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Author: elliska · ID: 143 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:23:31 Score: 10
Elliska is an author that I have really discovered since the 2005 MEFAs.
I did not have the time to read her stories like I should, but I found
the time over the winter. Thereby breaking several of my own rules,
against reading epic, elf-centred series. I have nothing against any of
these types of pieces on principles, but I don't tend to have the
patience for long works, and elves tend to bore me no matter how well
they are written.

Elliska changed all that. I suppose those rules ["is more what you'd
call "guidelines" than actual rules"], but elliska's pieces still
overcame all of my doubts about whether I would enjoy the "Interrupted
Journeys" series. I think it was her avatar at Open Scrolls that
convinced me to look at them
[(http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/authors/profile.php?no=650)], because
her complaints about fanons regarding Thranduil are so similar to my own
about Denethor. The fact that she saw a need to fight such similar
mischaracterizations is actually what made me give Thranduil a second look.

And what a look! Her pieces give us a convincing picture of a realm in
upheaval after the death of Oropher in the Last Alliance. There are
politics and personal drama and all in all an extremely convincing world
that manages not to toe-step on Tolkien but at the same time not
over-dwell on those areas "The Hobbit" led him to develop. I really look
forward to seeing how she continues to develop this saga.
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Author: Gandalfs apprentice · ID: 175 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:24:04 Score: 4
Gandalfs Apprentice can always make me lap with the matter-of-fact
streak she brings to her humor. I can just see her characters with a
very deadpan expression on their faces as they deliver the lines she
gives them. Even in her more serious works, the slightly funny quality
is still under the surface. You just know that her characters thoroughly
enjoy life, and that makes for a fun read.
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Author: Haleth · ID: 495 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:24:41 Score: 2
Haleth has a minimalist style that is surprisingly effective and lets
the reader feel the full brunt of what she's portraying.
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Author: Jael · ID: 685 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:30:26 Score: 2
Jael really gets the way Legolas would have been affected by Legolas.
She writes this emotionally poignant material well, without becoming
maudlin.
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Author: Jay of Lasgalen · ID: 134 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:31:49 Score: 3
Jay of Lasgalen really nails the family relationship of Rivendell's
first family, and captures their foibles all too well with a light touch
but also without masking the darker undertones, when they figure in.
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Author: Jay of Lasgalen · ID: 134 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:36:57 Score: 3
Jay of Lasgalen really nails the family relationship of Rivendell's
first family, and captures their foibles all too well with a light touch
but also without masking the darker undertones, when they figure in.
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Author: Karenator · ID: 10 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:38:08 Score: 3
Karenator has this skill for writing children in a way that makes them
distinct to the culture they are from and the canon character they will
become, but while still making them seem like children. It's hard to do,
a skill I admire.
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Author: Lady Aranel · ID: 151 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:46:59 Score: 5
Lady Aranel gives Legolas a really distinct voice. Somehow he is both
youthful and wise at the same time. In this year's selection you can see
him being an understanding brother, a warrior with the heart of a leader
paralleled to his father, and a person just like any other grieving the
lost of a friend. I had always thought of Lady Aranel as a distinguished
writer of romance (which she undoubtedly is), but the pieces by her I
read for this year's MEFA's show that she has many other talents as
well. Her ability to communicate powerful emotions quietly in a
dignified way is especially noteworthy.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:48:12 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Rhapsody · ID: 279 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:51:02 Score: 6
It amazes me that Rhapsody, as an author who writes English as a second
language, should write it so affectively in short forms like drabbles. I
don't think that I've read a multi-chaptered piece by her because I tend
to more or less stick to Third Age stuff, and I'm sure she can write
longer pieces just as convincingly. But when you're writing drabbles or
pieces that aren't that longer, then every word has to count. And
Rhapsody is one of the best drabblists I know; her pieces always pack a
punch in their short length and never feel rushed.

More than that, she is one of those authors that has made the Third Age
come to life for me. Her characterizations are vivid and fallible in
ways that fit the elves she's writing about. I had a hard time
remembering which son of Feanor was which before I read stuff by authors
like Rhapsody. She has definitely enhanced Tolkien's world for me.
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 03:23:29 Score: 10
It's a little hard to know how to describe Ann as a writer, because if I
*just* talked about what she writes then I would be ignoring the
encouraging affect she has had on so many authors, myself included,
because she is a world-class beta and reviewer. It's a truly rare
combination to find someone who can do all three effectively, but Ann
definitely qualifies. If I had to choose which of the three she's best
at I would probably choose betareading because she has it down to an
art, and I have never felt like I was losing control of my story.

Anyway, back to her writing, I do not want to underemphasize that
aspect. Her writing is always crisp as one would expect from a fine beta
reader. The mechanics are all there and her word economy i such that her
pieces never feel rushed (even in her non-drabbles, though this really
stands out in her drabbles). But what I love most about Ann's writing is
the quiet humor that seems to invade her writing, will she or no. If
there's anything I hope Ann never writes it's angst. Her stories just
all have this very natural feel to them of everyday life. From the hawt
quality of new love to the comfort of a long-stranding relationship to
the gentle jostlings of siblings to the tenderness of new parenthood --
it all feels so like real. And that makes for a very three-dimensional
world she writes.
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Author: Ariel · ID: 162 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 03:30:11 Score: 5
Ariel is well known for her ability to write Frodo and Sam's close
friendship achingly well, and that is plain here. She still makes us
feel that it is a friendship closer even than a romantic love would have
been -- friendship in the tradition of Plato, two bodies with one soul.
Yet what caught me offguard about this year's nominations was how
clearly she sees *Rosie*. Here is a woman who perceives all too well and
has the quiet commonsensical strength one would expect of a hobbit who
does not go on adventures but instead weathers the storm. As always, her
characterizations are what win my heart and make me feel emotionally
drained after the story -- they're that realistic.
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Author: Dreamflower · ID: 115 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 03:30:56 Score: 2
Dreamflower writes hobbits well, keeping them light and cute but still
giving them depth. Her writing develops relationships that seem to fit
into the canon nicely.
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Author: grey_wonderer · ID: 62 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 03:40:30 Score: 4
Grey Wonderer has a way of writing Pippin especially but all the hobbits
that is simply hilarious. Pippin is so honest and forthright in the
questions he asks, but those questions are more than a bit embarrassing.
He takes his time getting to the point but keeps pushing. Really, it's
brilliantly true to life and laugh-out-loud hilarious throughout. I've
only found the time to read a few of the stories but I'm going to try to
read more after the awards are over.
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Author: Gwynnyd · ID: 186 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 03:41:19 Score: 10
I'll admit that before I first read Gwynnyd's fiction I did not feel
that deeply for Aragorn. He always seemed a bit boring, I guess because
we never see him going through any sort of growth in the corpus of Lord
of the Rings. The material's there, but it's buried. However, through
discussions with Gwynnyd and through reading her stories, I have begun
to see more of the gaps that ferment into story nuzguls for her.

Gwynnyd's stories range from the events surrounding Arathorn's death and
Aragorn's moving to Rivendell, through his reign as king of Gondor. In
all of these different situations she is very aware of the real-world
historical precedents that faced similar situations and uses these
models to good use. Of course Aragorn and Gilraen both living in
Rivendell would be a tip-off to Aragorn's identity. But I did not even
think that this was a difficulty that needs to be explained until I
started reading Gwynnyd's fiction.

The best thing about her plots is that they do not *add* to Tolkien in a
way that feels artificial. Instead, reading one of her stories is like
going on an archaeological dig and discovering what was already there,
just waiting to be unearthed. Reading one of her pieces is always a treat.
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Author: illyria-pffyffin · ID: 363 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 03:56:25 Score: 2
Illyria brings a spiritual touch to hobbits that is powerful. It gives
their efforts in the Ring War a broader significance.
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Author: Lindelea · ID: 27 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Poetry
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:29:57 Score: 2
Lindelea is good at keeping a long tale interesting over several
chapters. Her hobbits are relaxing and fun, and I enjoy what I've read
of hers.
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Author: Lindelea · ID: 27 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:29:59 Score: 2
Lindelea is good at keeping a long tale interesting over several
chapters. Her hobbits are relaxing and fun, and I enjoy what I've read
of hers.
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Author: Llinos · ID: 25 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:31:04 Score: 2
Llinoss subtle and witty style is evident in both her poetry and prose.
Shes an author I consistently enjoy reading.
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Author: Llinos · ID: 25 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:31:06 Score: 2
Llinoss subtle and witty style is evident in both her poetry and prose.
Shes an author I consistently enjoy reading.
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Author: Llinos · ID: 25 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Poetry
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:31:09 Score: 2
Llinoss subtle and witty style is evident in both her poetry and prose.
Shes an author I consistently enjoy reading.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:31:49 Score: 9
Marigold has such a special way of writing hobbits. Somehow ordinary
moments of life leap off the page when she writes about them. She writes
the major characters well and I'm sure a lot of readers have enjoyed her
for that, but what has really captivated me about her writing is the way
she handles the mothers and sisters of the major characters.

What stands out among this year's writing is the way she presents
Pippin's mother worrying over him. That piece not only reflected her
missing Pippin but the situation in Tookland with the resistance of
Sharkey's men. And that's another of Marigold's talents. She definitely
knows the canon about hobbits better than anyone else I know, but she
doesn't allow it to overwhelm the piece. Then she adds her own
invention, the idea of Gandalf giving Pippin two special stars, and the
result is a situation that almost feels like something Tolkien would
have written. At a minimum I'm sure he approved.

Mari is an author who never fails to satisfy, and whose pieces have just
the right balance of light and dark to portray hobbits as Tolkien meant
them. Not frivolous children, but curiously resistant to despair.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:31:52 Score: 9
Marigold has such a special way of writing hobbits. Somehow ordinary
moments of life leap off the page when she writes about them. She writes
the major characters well and I'm sure a lot of readers have enjoyed her
for that, but what has really captivated me about her writing is the way
she handles the mothers and sisters of the major characters.

What stands out among this year's writing is the way she presents
Pippin's mother worrying over him. That piece not only reflected her
missing Pippin but the situation in Tookland with the resistance of
Sharkey's men. And that's another of Marigold's talents. She definitely
knows the canon about hobbits better than anyone else I know, but she
doesn't allow it to overwhelm the piece. Then she adds her own
invention, the idea of Gandalf giving Pippin two special stars, and the
result is a situation that almost feels like something Tolkien would
have written. At a minimum I'm sure he approved.

Mari is an author who never fails to satisfy, and whose pieces have just
the right balance of light and dark to portray hobbits as Tolkien meant
them. Not frivolous children, but curiously resistant to despair.
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Author: Molly Littlefoot · ID: 403 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:36:23 Score: 3
Molly Littlefoot does a good job at capturing the conditions that would
exist in an occupied Shire. That kind of separation sure would have been
painful on all involved, and this author does a good job of bringing
that point home to the author.
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Author: Nancy Brooke · ID: 105 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:45:41 Score: 3
Nancy writes all aspects of Boromir's life in a way that is fun to read
and emotioanlly meaningful. Whether it is an AU drabble after his death
or as a child in Dol Amroth or others remembering him, Boromir's
personality is strongly felt in Nancy's writing.
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Author: pippinfan88 · ID: 331 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:46:05 Score: 5
Pippinfan88 really nails the way that Merry and Pippin and everyone they
knew were impacted by their ties with Gondor and Rohan. Nowhere is this
more obvious than in "The Falcon's Watch", which is about their children
reacting to news of their death. It's also one of the most effective
stories I've ever read dealing with the topic of grief, it handles that
difficult topic really sensitively but at the same time without pulling
any punches. I look forward to reading the stories I didn't get around
to yet, because this is an author I definitely want to read more of.
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Author: SlightlyTookish · ID: 205 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:46:59 Score: 2
This author really "gets" hobbits -- the same homey qualities informs
them in the Shire and the sense of loyalty the adventurers show abroad.
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Author: SlightlyTookish · ID: 205 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:47:01 Score: 2
This author really "gets" hobbits -- the same homey qualities informs
them in the Shire and the sense of loyalty the adventurers show abroad.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:47:44 Score: 10
Tanaqui is a long-time friend and beta reader, so it feels a bit odd to
be reviewing not something that she wrote but how she functions as an
author. I hold her writing abilities in the highest regard and always
like to read what she has written in the Tolkien fandom because she has
a knowledge of canon that transcends individual facts. Of course, once
you try to jump from facts that Tolkien explicitly wrote to broader
worldviews about how a culture would have operated you enter the realm
of interpretation. And I have not agreed with every assertion Tanaqui
has made, but I have been able to accept her inventions as something
Tolkien would have approved of; they are very much in the spirit and
letter of his Middle-earth.

Tanaqui uses an exquisite amount of physical detail in her works,
without her pieces feeling like an infodump. That's what I remember when
I think about her, how rich the world she creates is. She once joked
that in a drabble we are allowed seven words for a title, one hundred
for the body of the text -- and three thousand for the requisite
footnotes and forenotes documenting the historical precedents, canon
sources, and the thoughts that led up to the drabble. That really
summarizes her approach to writing in general: not that she uses too
many footnotes(!) but that for every bit she puts in, there's much more
going on below the surface. I'm not sure how much she'll appreciate a
comparison to movieverse, but her writing really does remind me of
WETA's dedication to crafting props that were works of art, even if they
barely made it on to screen or not at all. It creates a very rich
backdrop for her stories, and this reader loves it.
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Author: Acacea · ID: 196 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:49:12 Score: 4
When I think of Acacea's writing the word "Gondor" comes to mind very
quickly, because she can write the brothers 'Mir so affectively. She has
done angst from time to time, but mostly she writes the normal everyday
moments of family life, and it really has a nice relaxed quality to it.
There are some fine explorations of Gondorians among this year's
writings, but she also shows her depth as a writer by writing varied
races and time frames. A truly versatile author indeed, and all with a
light touch that makes it feel very natural.
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Author: Aliana · ID: 208 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:56:44 Score: 8
Aliana's stories develop a complete sub-culture for the healers in the
Houses of Healing. Their world is touched by the larger events of the
War of the Ring but in a very non-personal way. What I mean is that the
war brings with it hard choices on how to best handle those who are
injured beyond healing, but for the healers themselves life seems to go
on more or less as it always has. Aliana's story competing in this
year's MEFAs continues that tradition by giving us a glimpse at how life
proceeds for her original characters in peacetime. It is a beautiful
tale and seems to fit the characters as they're presented in her larger
works very well, but it also has an almost mythic quality.

This shows the full breadth of Aliana's skill as an author. I knew she
could handle medical detail, humour (oily!Faramir, anyone?), cultural
details, pacing, and other aspects of good writing. This shows that she
can spin a good yarn that transcends the day-to-day. This is another
author who I look forward to updates and often find myself rereading.
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:58:03 Score: 10
It's a little hard to know how to describe Ann as a writer, because if I
*just* talked about what she writes then I would be ignoring the
encouraging affect she has had on so many authors, myself included,
because she is a world-class beta and reviewer. It's a truly rare
combination to find someone who can do all three effectively, but Ann
definitely qualifies. If I had to choose which of the three she's best
at I would probably choose betareading because she has it down to an
art, and I have never felt like I was losing control of my story.

Anyway, back to her writing, I do not want to underemphasize that
aspect. Her writing is always crisp as one would expect from a fine beta
reader. The mechanics are all there and her word economy i such that her
pieces never feel rushed (even in her non-drabbles, though this really
stands out in her drabbles). But what I love most about Ann's writing is
the quiet humor that seems to invade her writing, will she or no. If
there's anything I hope Ann never writes it's angst. Her stories just
all have this very natural feel to them of everyday life. From the hawt
quality of new love to the comfort of a long-stranding relationship to
the gentle jostlings of siblings to the tenderness of new parenthood --
it all feels so like real. And that makes for a very three-dimensional
world she writes.
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Author: Bodkin · ID: 411 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:58:27 Score: 2
Bodkin does a good job of capturing the elves in the Undying Lands. I
always thought paradise would be boring, but not her version!
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Author: Branwyn · ID: 240 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:58:56 Score: 10
Branwyn is one of those authors that has really captured my heart, and I
mean that in both senses. Her stories always captivate me and affect me
in one way or another (I like to think in the way that was intended!),
but they also seem to have captured my own heart and experiences in the
events she has happen to her characters. I often find myself reading her
work and thinking to myself "Gee, that has happened to me!" That takes
an insight into human character that not everyone possesses, and I don't
think her writing would be so affective without it.

Anyone who has read her in the past should not be surprised to find that
she writes Boromir and Faramir in a three-dimensional and faceted way.
Her shorter pieces only hint at a depth that seems to underrun all of
her stories, yet they do not rely on each other so much that knowledge
of all is necessary to understand one.

But what did surprise me about this year's readings from her is just how
many different genres she can write. I knew she wrote drama and
reminiscing in a way I thoroughly enjoyed, and "Pink Oliphaunts" and
"The Household Accounts" did not disappoint on this grounds, but the
pacing and horror that kept me on the edge of my seat through "The Fords
of Isen"... just wow. And the sensuous detail, penchant for historical
accuracy, and compelling (and in-character) erotica in "Book
Learning"... shall not go too far into that for a PG review, but suffice
it to say that romance is not beyond the scope of her talent. This is an
author that continues to surprise me in pleasant ways.
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Author: Branwyn · ID: 240 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:58:58 Score: 10
Branwyn is one of those authors that has really captured my heart, and I
mean that in both senses. Her stories always captivate me and affect me
in one way or another (I like to think in the way that was intended!),
but they also seem to have captured my own heart and experiences in the
events she has happen to her characters. I often find myself reading her
work and thinking to myself "Gee, that has happened to me!" That takes
an insight into human character that not everyone possesses, and I don't
think her writing would be so affective without it.

Anyone who has read her in the past should not be surprised to find that
she writes Boromir and Faramir in a three-dimensional and faceted way.
Her shorter pieces only hint at a depth that seems to underrun all of
her stories, yet they do not rely on each other so much that knowledge
of all is necessary to understand one.

But what did surprise me about this year's readings from her is just how
many different genres she can write. I knew she wrote drama and
reminiscing in a way I thoroughly enjoyed, and "Pink Oliphaunts" and
"The Household Accounts" did not disappoint on this grounds, but the
pacing and horror that kept me on the edge of my seat through "The Fords
of Isen"... just wow. And the sensuous detail, penchant for historical
accuracy, and compelling (and in-character) erotica in "Book
Learning"... shall not go too far into that for a PG review, but suffice
it to say that romance is not beyond the scope of her talent. This is an
author that continues to surprise me in pleasant ways.
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Author: EdorasLass · ID: 299 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 04:59:40 Score: 10
Edoras Lass is another one of those authors that has developed a
compelling subworld around the canonical facts we know about Gondor and
Rohan. There are customs and cultural expectations that seem reasonable
even though Tolkien never specified them, and they enrich the
characters' lives and the corners of canon that Tolkien never filled in.
Her original character Nanny is a good example. In "Mine" we see her
patience and unfaltering commonsensical wisdom when it comes to dealing
with a child as difficult as Boromir must have been. And in "Quality
Time" there's a glimpse of her dealing with the equally difficult man
Denethor. She's a compelling character and provides a unique window into
Denethor's world.

But then there are the canonical characters. Her characterizations are
always convincing but feel fresh. She adds to and builds on what Tolkien
told us, but in a way that feels true to Middle-earth. Nowhere is this
better illustrated than in the way Faramir reacts to his father's
infirmity in "Come When You Are Ready". The nauseating physical details
are only too clearly told, but the way Faramir deals with them is so
in-character! He does not flinch, does not shy away, but he is not
untouched by the gore. And Denethor as well is touchingly portrayed:
bound by duty to his family and to Gondor, cunning in the way he tries
to piece together the mystery.

EL is a great author if you like one-shots and shorts that develop the
canon in a convincing way but aren't afraid to add on. Her stories are
refreshingly fresh yet still feel Tolkienesque.
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Author: Elen Kortirion · ID: 251 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 05:01:24 Score: 4
What I like most about Elen Kortirion is the way she writes original
characters. They enhance what Tolkien wrote and provide new perspectives
on oft-told events, yet because they are from different walks of life
than the canon characters those different perspectives feel like valid
re-interpretation of canon rather than departures from it. Through these
OC's she gives us a very different view of Gondorian society and the
political situation that has really challenged my pre-held conceptions.
Which is of course half the fun. ;-)
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Author: Imhiriel · ID: 702 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 06:44:15 Score: 2
To tell a tale convincingly so succinctly as can Imhiriel is a true
gift. Her words are well chosen and her images vivid. It is a pleasure
to read her works.
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Author: Imhiriel · ID: 702 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 06:55:57 Score: 3
How wonderful the gift that allows so much to be said in so short a time
and number of words! Imhiriel truly has the gift of moving us by means
of small vignettes, in drabble or short story form.
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Author: Imhiriel · ID: 702 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 07:05:55 Score: 1
I've read this drabble so often in the past year. Imhiriel's writing is
always moving.
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Author: Lady Galadriel · ID: 638 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 07:12:43 Score: 3
Lady Galadriel is a young writer and already showing great promise. It's
an honor to be the one who first nominated her work for a MEFA, and I
look forward to the day when I see her work available commercially.
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Author: lwarren · ID: 608 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 07:47:15 Score: 3
Lwarren's story of Legolas fighting the sea longing and finding a new
steed once Arod was too old to carry him on all his journeys is
fascinating, well written, and full of wonderful characters and
descriptions of places and relationships. She has particularly added to
my feel for Rohan as a country.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:48:24 Score: 2
Ah, Marigold, how many of us you have challenged and inspired. Thank you
ever for your own example.
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Author: Radbooks · ID: 428 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:55:40 Score: 3
Ah, Radbooks, how much your stories inspire my own. Am grateful for your
writing skill and your ability to help me see our beloved Aragorn know
the joy of brotherhood with Halbarad and find his place both with his
own people and within Middle Earth.

Thank you for your friendship and the expressions of your imagination.
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Author: Pearl Took · ID: 72 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 09:34:41 Score: 3
Ah, Pearl Took's storis of the descendants of the Faerie bride to the
ancestor of the Tooks are all wonderful and imaginitive. And to see the
protection Cullassuliel has given to her children pass on to another
generation in the person of Faramir Took is wonderful. Such a joy to
read, and such a wonderful addition to the peoples of Middle Earth.
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Author: Alassante · ID: 322 · Genres: Drama [107]: Poetry
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 09:49:02 Score: 10
A while ago, someone asked on the OSA board if there were any stories
out there, which focussed on Arwen specifically. For some reason unknown
to me, I never got far since I recced about four works, but I
immediately had to think of Alassantes works. Her poem Here you cannot
leave me feels like a strongly written work featuring this character
and her drabble My eyes! My Eyes! only confirmed that she is one of
the best Arwen drabble/writers. In the last work, it was delightfully
cheeky!

Besides this, Alassante is a great poet. She really knocked me off my
feet with Erus Lament (incorporated in the Feänorian drabble series),
which besides keeping to a specific drabble length it is just
brilliantly created in free verse and fits this fandom seamlessly. Here
you cannot leave me is so powerfully written that it leaves me in tears
and simply shows how well Alassante can put so much feeling and emotion
in a poem. She does the same in her original poems where she does not
shy away to get raw emotions on paper, something you see often with
poets. Not everyone is comfortable with that, but Alassante takes on
that challenge. This combined with crawling under her characters skin,
gives me the impression that Alassante is a very gifted poet and I hope
she will create more of these beautiful gems.
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Author: Alassante · ID: 322 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 10:08:45 Score: 10
Alassante has this delightfully tongue-in-cheek sense of humour. A while
ago, someone asked on the OSA board if there were any stories out there,
which focussed on Arwen specifically. For some reason unknown to me, I
never got far since I recced about four works, but I immediately had to
think of Alassantes works. Her drabble series Mischief in Imladris is
a great work, but not mainly featuring this character, but her drabble
My eyes! My Eyes! is. This only was a confirmation that she is one of
the best Arwen drabble/writers that I know of. Although I do not think
the person in question was looking for that. But Alassante has written
more drabbles that are like that, Smaug or her Mischief in Imladris bear
all that same trademark which is unique to Alassantes voice and it was
great to see that captured. Her MEFA nominated piece is delightfully cheeky!

Drabbling is not very easy, as Alassante and I, both often said to each
other: we can work on it for hours finding the right balance, flow and
pacing. To write a drabble that is also incredibly funny& Alassante can
pull that off without any effort. With short works like this, the punch
line has to fall at the right moment and she does that greatly whether
it is a stand-alone work or a series.
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Author: Minuialeth · ID: 427 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Poetry
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 11:09:59 Score: 10
Minuialeth is an amazing poet. Even though I have read more original
poems written by her, her version of Gandalfs flight and fight showed
her incredibly talent with poetry. Her voice in her works, poetry or
stories, is strong and are very convincingly delivered. Minuialeth can
handle different technical writing point of views without any visible
effort. No matter what she writes, you as a reader feel a part of the
piece as if you can observe closely what is going on. This is happening
in her poem that is competing in this year MEFAs, but it applies to any
work she shares with us.

Minuialeth has a natural way of writing that is truly captivating and
she writes her characters thusly that you can easily identify yourself
with them and you feel for them as the work progresses. Besides that,
she has a firm grasp on the canon characters and shows the readers
aspect of that character which makes them feel very tangible. Taking her
time with writing her tales, she weaves many story layers that truly
baffle you and give you just that different perspective you did not
think of before. Combine this with a natural gift for pacing in her
works, there isnt so much a beta can correct in her works, besides
leaning back and enjoy the fruits of her creativity. Remaining true to
her own writing style, reading Minuialeths work stand out for me and
are always amazing to read.
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Author: Robinka · ID: 598 · Genres: Drama [107]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 11:25:06 Score: 9
I often wondered what Robinka would do if she would meet Tolkien. I know
her as a very avid Beleg fangirl, so I think that meeting will be very
interesting. With Stigmas Robinka writes the person who killed Beleg
and she works out the seven sins in that piece brilliantly. But I have
seen other works written by her in which Belegs demise is explored or
if not corrected in an AU version. The last leaf to fall is a work for
example, in which she grandly explores how a wife of Beleg would be
affected if he died. With this story, but more of her works, I am always
moved deeply in how she so greatly writes stories that have a
drama-perspective by using story techniques to bring across her story in
a great and touching way. Her writing feels very natural and it simply
captivates you from the first to the last word. I often told her that
her story last leaf to fall would do great on its own as an original
story, so who knows. English isnt Robinkas native tongue, so I know
personally how hard it can be to write a story in English, but her
talent simply shines through in every challenge or bunny she choses to
write, despite this hurdle.
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Author: Robinka · ID: 598 · Genres: Romance [51]: Poetry
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 11:30:44 Score: 4
Poetry and erotica, a combination that I dont see often in Tolkien
fanfic, but Robinka combines both in this poem competing for the MEFAs.
I have read quite a lot of stories from this author with the nc-17
rating and I have to say she is very gifted in this genre, but to see it
back in the form of poetry in a specific form: it says a lot about her
talents as a poet. In her writings, she prefers to write about the
Sindar elves and this work is another great example of that!
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Author: Aearwen · ID: 617 · Races: Elves [38]: Poetry
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 11:42:45 Score: 6
Aearwen and Maeglin& I have read so much of her works featuring this elf
that they became inseparable in my thoughts. Aearwen is an author who
excels in many things, from her incredibly well written humouristic
stories to writing drama: she has it all in her pen, making her an
all-round author. Her parodies are stories I read often if a need a good
laugh. In this poem, but also in every other work she writes about
Maeglin, she provides us with a different insight of this character. The
tragedy of him and his mother is well explored her in poignant prose,
but also with great skill in poetry. Most often, it is easy to think of
him as a betrayer of a city, but like many other black/white characters
Tolkien has given to us, there are more sides to Maeglin than that.
Aearwen shows us that in her works which are all story gems in their own
way.
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Author: Súlriel · ID: 7 · Times: Early Third Age [7]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 11:56:57 Score: 4
Last night I was reading Sulnur again and suddenly I realised that
Sulriel has this talent to portray the thoughts and actions of animals
in Tolkiens world. From briskly and loyal horses in Sulnur and
Wicked Water to the cattish Home Again, she takes upon their point
of view, pour them into a drabble and yet it feels so incredibly true to
their nature. Now if you stop re-writing your story Sinde Envinyanta&
then I can finally read that one! ;)
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Author: Súlriel · ID: 7 · Genres: Non-Fiction [5]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 12:09:40 Score: 4
I always get pleasantly distracted when I am browsing around on
Sulriels site that I have to remind myself for what I was visiting it
for. If you have the time, click on stories and you will find a lot
more! Anyway, with A maera for me, Sulriel gives us another great and
insightful essay that we can use while writing. Who doesnt have the
Travel times in ME or Rohirrim Grey bookmarked for example? Her
essays are concise, well structured and to the point, but most of all
very handy when writing horses!
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Title: Banished · Author: shirelinghpc · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 993
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:19:33 Score: 3
What I liked best about this enjoyable tale is that Aragorn is in on the
scheme with Merry and Pippin. It clearly shows the depth of their
friendship post-Quest. The scenario was very funny, and Legolas'
irritation was well done.
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Title: Little Brothers · Author: DinaLori · Races: Men · ID: 686
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:20:06 Score: 3
Lovely banter between Merry and Pippin here, very in character. I liked
how their closeness reminded Boromir of himself and Faramir when they
were younger and awakened his protective instincts. A very enjoyable story!
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Title: Pippin's Hands · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: The Shire · ID: 130
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:22:10 Score: 2
I am glad that Pippin still has the joy of his music after the Quest.
His travels and all that he had experienced would add an even greater
emotion to his performing.
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Title: Of Birds and Bees · Author: Cathleen · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 727
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:22:49 Score: 1
An amusing story! I enjoyed these tales within a tale.
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Title: Midwinter in Mordor · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 872
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 00:23:36 Score: 2
Grisly and with a very realistic feel! This is an excellent look at an
Orcish festival. I liked this very much, especially as I am so fond of orcs!
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Title: We Were Young Once ~ I · Author: CorielConquistadora · Races:
Elves: Featuring Mirkwood Elves · ID: 614
Reviewer: sindarlover · 2006-11-29 00:39:30 Score: 3
I love Thranduil and I found this reading the MEFAs. He is great in this
story--so powerful and regal! Exactly as I imagine him. And I really
like how the canon is mixed into this story. This was a really great
read! I will go look for other things you wrote.
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Title: A New Age · Author: Marta · Races: Elves: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 685
Reviewer: sindarlover · 2006-11-29 00:42:22 Score: 2
As you can guess from my screen name, I love Thranduil and Celeborn. So
I loved this drabble. It really shows Thranduil exactly like I picture
him--so woodelfy. This is a great read!
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Title: Starlight on Leaves · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves:
Featuring Mirkwood Elves · ID: 813
Reviewer: sindarlover · 2006-11-29 00:44:24 Score: 3
I love Thranduil, so I loved this story. He was great in this. I think
you did a great job showing how hard the losses from the war were and I
liked that he had something good to come home to. This was a great read!
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Title: The Hobbit and the Man: "All That Is Gold Does Not Glitter" ·
Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races: Cross-Cultural: With Hobbits · ID: 351
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 00:47:11 Score: 2
Nice twist on Gandalf's recommendation. I especially love your
characterization of Aragorn here, through Bilbo's eyes, with his
questioning. Well done.
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Title: Until Light Returns · Author: elliska · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 707
Reviewer: sindarlover · 2006-11-29 00:50:05 Score: 5
Gosh, this drabble is so great! I never really got into drabbles that
much until reading some of the ones for the MEFAs. I found some nice
ones here. But I really like this one particularly. I love that
Thranduil is portrayed as fighting for the survival of Mirkwood. I love
to see him as a strong character and I think that really comes across
here. I also really like the comparison of the forest when he first saw
it to the Two Trees. It really makes the reader see how magnificent the
forest was in his eyes to see it compared to those to great symbols. And
the comparison itself is so lyrical. This was a really great read.
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Title: Interrupted Journeys: Journeys of Discovery · Author: elliska ·
Genres: Drama: Incomplete · ID: 163
Reviewer: sindarlover · 2006-11-29 00:57:07 Score: 5
I usually do not like young character/children stories. That sort of
thing does not interest me much. But this story is part of a bigger
series that I have been reading so I gave it a chance. I ended up liking
it pretty well because it tells a lot of mini-stories within the
chapters, many of which hint at canon moments. Those stories are very
interesting. And, like the rest of the stories in this series, the
characters are really well developed. Very individual. And I'm
interested to see where the intrigue with the 'bad guys' is going to
lead in this story since it seems to have spread to the children's
generation. That can't be good. I hope the author continues it.
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Title: Ring Thoughts · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years · ID: 190
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 00:57:38 Score: 3
fun and intresting ... very intriquing to see the story from that unique
point of view. I especially like how the ring characterized each
individual according to how useful they were to it.
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Title: 'Til we meet again · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: Featuring
Mirkwood Elves · ID: 817
Reviewer: sindarlover · 2006-11-29 00:59:39 Score: 3
This is a really tender moment between two of my favorite characters. It
really shows the type of relationship I think they had (not the terrible
father Thranduil that you see in so many stories). This was a great read!
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Title: The Gift · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: Featuring Mirkwood Elves ·
ID: 160
Reviewer: sindarlover · 2006-11-29 01:01:58 Score: 3
Like the other story here by the same author, this shows really great
moment between two of my favorite characters. And it shows a little wood
elf magic, which I absolutely love seeing, especially when it's
Thranduil healing a forest. This was a great read!
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Title: Boats To Build · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 300
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 01:02:49 Score: 4
Nancy, I am sure I reviewed this last week and so I got a jolt to see it
still on my wish list. I wonder if the review got pasted into some other
story ...? someone will be confused.

At any rate, I'll say again how much I love this. I remember seeing it
in the archive last year and commenting, but this is one that I'll be
able to re-read indefinitely. it touches a chord with me.
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Title: Dawn of a New Age: First Age · Author: elliska · Times: First Age
and Prior: Incomplete · ID: 406
Reviewer: sindarlover · 2006-11-29 01:10:24 Score: 7
Even though there is only one chapter of it, this has the potential to
be my favorite story of all time. As my screen name gives away, I love
the Sindarin Elves and this story promises to flesh out the canon
surrounding them in the Silmarillion. I love that idea. And so far, this
is so well written. The battle was really tense without being just
description of bloody violence, which bores me. And the appearance of
the Moon was very magical, just as one would expect it to be. I also
liked how Melian sings the Girdle into place. That seems to make sense
given that Luthien uses song to put a spell on Morgoth later in canon.
Plus, this story has as 'other characters' some of the characters that
are featured in this author's other story series. I like those
characters' older selves, so I am interested to see how this author
developes those characters here. I am leaving this review partly to beg
the author to continue this story. It has great potential and I would
really like to see the rest of it.
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Title: Until the King Returns · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette ·
ID: 540
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 01:15:47 Score: 2
I really enjoyed this Marta, not just as a story, but as an in-depth
character study of both men. As always, your careful attention to detail
shines through.
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Title: Frodo's Exciting Day Out · Author: Llinos · Genres: Humor: Parody
· ID: 829
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-29 02:03:54 Score: 3
I really don't see how your mind does these parodies, Llinos, but I'm
glad it does! This is too perfectly hilarious. Just the right mix of
fact and fiction, sense and nonsense. Everyone is oddly true to
character, just in this story that is more than slightly askew.

Reminiscent of Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure!

Wonderful, just wonderful!
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Title: Seam of Stone · Author: hossgal · Times: The Great Years · ID: 129
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 02:36:19 Score: 4
This story draws a really powerful parallel between the loves of Aragorn
and Arwen, and Legolas and Gimli. In both there is a sense of falling
and being raised up, and an almost mythic quality. I'd never thought of
Legolas/Gimli in quite these terms, but it's affective. A nice little
interlude while the characters are waiting for great events to find
them. Well done.
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Title: Treasures And Momentos · Author: Marigold · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Pippin or Merry · ID: 220
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 03:47:39 Score: 3
This was a very moving story in which Aragorn sorts out Mery and
Pippin's belongings after they die.How he must have loved them to for a
King to take on such a humble task !It is a comfort to the reader to
learn that the Hobbits were able to enjoy life to the end and died
almost at the same time.Very nicely written.
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Title: About Legends or Whisperings of a Ghost · Author: juno_magic ·
Races: Men · ID: 699
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 03:55:36 Score: 4
I only chanced on this story when browsing MEFA at the last moment and I
am so glad I did as it is one of the most,chilling,moving and powerful
stories I have read in a long time.
The writer suggests that far from Queen Beruiel and her cats being
evil,it was her husband who was the monster. The things he did to
her(and the poor cats) made me shudder to read,
I shall never think of Queen Beruiel in the same light again.She was
after all,a fellow cat lover !
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Title: Butterflies and Caterpillars · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late
Third Age · ID: 258
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 03:59:13 Score: 3
I don't usually care much for little Estel stories, but this was an
exception.It is both sweet and moving and very well written. Glorfindel
teaches young Estel about the transformation that occurs to create a
butterfly. I feel this story has a deeper meaning, which shines through
without preaching and brings a tear to the tear.
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Title: Birnam Wood · Author: Inkling · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 917
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 04:01:48 Score: 4
A delightful and truly unique story.I believe Tolkien when young saw
Macbeth and was disapointed that the trees did not move.When he came to
write his great works, he tried to remedy this by the creation of
Treebeard and the Ents.This story cleverly combines both Macbeth and the
Two Towers, to make Treebeard part of Macbeth.He and his Ents now live
in Birnham wood and advance upon Macbeth's castle.
The story is seen through the eyes of a yoiung boy who has seen the
shepherds of the forest before.
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Title: Lesser Ring · Author: Larner · Genres: Adventure · ID: 184
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 04:02:12 Score: 10
[This was a fascinating tale spanning both Aragorn's years of wandering
when he visits Harad and a second visit,made years laterwhen he is King.

Validated Review:]

This is a story i greatly enjoyed reading as it explores events in
Aragorn's years of travelling when he goes to Harad and saves a man's
life who eventually becomes the ruler.
Years later,as King, Aragorn is invited to pay a state visit only for
the ruler's rivals to plot against him and their lord. I admit I had
some reservations about this part of the story,as it seemed unwise to
take all the notables of Gondor and Rohan to a pontentially hostile
country,including Aragorn's, Faramir's and Eomer's young families.I was
taken aback at Aragorn humiliating and torturing the captured would be
assasins, for Tolkien said in some of his supplementary writing that the
Wise would not even torture an Orc,even if lives were at stake,and it
seemed out of character for the noble king.
Apart from that, I loved this story
The story shows Aragorn's greatness and nobility and how he uses it to
build bridges between different cultures.

There were some very interesting other characters,the ruler of Harad and
a slave whom Arwen rescues from the slave market who turns out to have a
connection with the King,

I especially enjoyed the relationships between the characters,Aragorn's
thoughtfulness for his friends and their care for him when he is wounded.
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Title: The Last Thing He Said · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Drama · ID: 294
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 04:38:00 Score: 4
An outstanding story that I would never had encountered were it not for
MEFA. What an unual idea to tell the main events of the War of the Ring
through the eyes of animals whose owners never came back.

Sometimes,it is a little hard to determine what species is speaking, but
I loved this story and intend to return to it in the future.

The writer also tells us a great deal about Tolkien's heroes through the
eyes of their animals.
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Title: Psychodiagnostic Evaluation - Subject: The Lady of Rohan ·
Author: Anoriath · Genres: Humor: Parody · ID: 753
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-29 04:46:15 Score: 3
Very clever look at the attraction of Faramir to Eowyn from a modern
psychiatric viewpoint. I loved the use of medical jargon, which adds an
extra touch of authenticity. All in all, it's wickedly funny.
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Title: A Letter Home · Author: Frodo Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) ·
Times: The Great Years: Gondor · ID: 978
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-29 04:51:01 Score: 5
Letters are a time-honored literary device, and this one, from the least
erudite of the four Fellowship hobbits, does not disappoint.

Sam's letter home to his father tells a small part of his and Frodo's
trials, and tries to put it all in terms that the Gaffer would
understand, including Sauron's motivations, so that there is a great
deal of discussion of food and vegetables that one wouldn't necessarily
see in letters by his companions. But I could see Sam thinking of how
best to tell of such drastic things to an old gardener who has never
left the Shire, and the letter rings true.


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Title: Was It For This? · Author: Alawa · Genres: Drama: Remembering ·
ID: 88
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 04:55:55 Score: 1
A moving little story. It is nice to think that Aragorn honours the
memory of his father.
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Title: A Memorial in Four Parts · Author: Illwynd · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 702
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 05:00:39 Score: 2
I touching memorial to Boromir as seen through the eyes of Faramir and
members of the Fellowship. I especially enjoyed the conversation between
Aragorn and Faramir.
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Title: Whispers of the Dragon · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 916
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 06:34:22 Score: 3
The journey down the Anduin is complicated when Saruman seeks to stop
the journey and insinuate his way into the Ringbearer's mind. Together
the Fellowship face the injuries wrought by his sabotage and the twisted
truth and lies of Saruman's attempts to suborn them.

Slightly AU, and consistently fascinating throughout.
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Title: On the Fair Hill · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 946
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 06:51:27 Score: 3
Although written of Aragorn and Arwen, this might have described other
pairs of lovers. Poignant and sweet, a couple seen from a distance in
the pleasure and grief of the brief moment allowed together.
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Title: Father and Daughter · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 943
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 06:53:52 Score: 3
At the end of the War of Wrath Finarfin takes leave of his daughter
Artanis, glad she has chosen the husband she has taken. In her he sees
the loving child she'd been and the woman and wife and lady she's
become, accepting her choice that will keep them sundered for two more
ages of Middle Earth.

A wonderful look at this leavetaking.
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Title: Hidden on the Mountain · Author: Imhiriel · Times: The Great
Years: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 945
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 07:01:50 Score: 3
It's been a time since I last read this, but it is still well worth it.
The new White Tree vaguely remembers its fruit being planted in the
Hallow, and finds itself rejoicing to be held in the hands of the new King.

The waiting has not been in vain for any party to the beginning of the
new age.
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Title: A Hallowed Place of Both Peoples · Author: Imhiriel · Times:
Early Third Age: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 944
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 07:04:07 Score: 3
I never understood why it was that Elendil's tomb had to be moved after
Eorl saw it; that Eorl chose to remain true in spite of the apparent
distrust and the imputation of unworthiness on the part of the folk of
Gondor says much of just how much more honorable he was than Cirion
realized.
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Title: What Better Companion? · Author: Space Weavil · Races: Elves ·
ID: 175
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 07:21:25 Score: 3
This was just fascinating! I loved this glimpse of Olorin; he seemed so
very new and childlike and yet ageless, which is exactly right at this
point in time. His comments about the things that he loves put me in
mind instantly of hobbits and explained his delight in them in his
persona as Gandalf.
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Title: House of Reeds · Author: The Bookbinder's Daughter · Races: Elves
· ID: 660
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 07:35:57 Score: 5
This is an exceptional story, and I loved and believed every word. The
descriptions and dialogue are just right; brief yet perfect and lyrical.
I had no difficulty accepting the unusual pairing either. The masterful
way this fic is written shows them to be a good match. It was a real
shame that Glorfindel waited so long to speak.

I wonder how things would have played out differently if he had done so
sooner, and I wonder if Goldberry still thinks of him, for it is
difficult to think of two characters more dissimilar in physical form
and personality than Glorfindel and Tom Bombadil.

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Title: The Heads of One Thousand Goblins: A Love Story · Author:
SickleYield · Races: Dwarves · ID: 644
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 07:40:20 Score: 4
Now, this story of Wiri Shorinsdotter wooing Gimli by presenting him
with a thousand goblin heads and one troll's head is remarkable. I'd
never thought of him marrying, and enjoyed Annmarwalk's tale of the
Dwarf woman who refused to accompany him from Erador to Minas Tirith,
using her cat as a reason.

And the idea that he would know one love before accompanying Legolas out
of Middle Earth is wonderful. Well done, friend.
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Title: The One · Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors ·
Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn · ID: 852
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-29 07:44:53 Score: 3
I enjoyed this vignette and found it plausible in light of Aragorn's
gift of foresight. I liked the sense of hope that it gave him, that some
day there would be a steward that would welcome him to Minas Tirith,
even as he was wondering how it could ever happen. It was well done.
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Title: The Gift · Author: Dot · Races: Elves: Featuring Mirkwood Elves ·
ID: 160
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 07:46:28 Score: 3
This is a wonderful story! I really enjoyed the interaction between
Legolas and Thranduil, both in the present and in the flashbacks. The
magick was just stunning, and that Legolas augmented his father in the
healing was perfect! The descriptions of the land and trees being called
back was absolutely fascinating and felt so real.
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Title: The gift · Author: Jael · Genres: Drama: Elves in Later Ages ·
ID: 807
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:02:57 Score: 3
As the author indicates, this is a movieverse story, as Legolas is
summoned to Imladris to attend on Gilraen as she sets herself to find
again the love she lost long ago, refusing the love offered her in this
world.

A beautiful, moving story and well worth the read.
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Title: Object Lessons · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 668
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:05:20 Score: 2
Oh, a delightful look at the younger of Denethor's sons serving as
teacher to the older regarding the lesson of temperance. Wonderful short
here!
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Title: The Groomsman · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Dwarves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 44
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 08:07:17 Score: 3
This caught me completely by surprise. Just stunning! Gimli is in
wonderful character here, and the emotion behind his gruff facade and
the way that he shows how much he truly cares in his meticulous care for
his fallen comrade is touching.
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Title: Aglarond · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Dwarves: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 68
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 08:10:46 Score: 3
It was wonderful to see Gimli as a crafter here, rather than a warrior.
I know that he must judge all beautiful things now by she who is most
fair so it is fitting that she is his inspiration.
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Title: Ring Thoughts · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years · ID: 190
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:19:04 Score: 4
Ah, how the Ring works to destroy integrity, first looking through the
Fellowship for Its best victim, focusing on Boromir, taking a quick
swipe at Galadriel before returning Its attention back on the Gondorian,
then finding Itself blocked with Faramir.

THEY and HE help balk Its ambitions at ever turn; and the Woolyfoot is
far too capable of withstanding it for the moment.

A fascinating look at the Ring's own thoughts and machinations.
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Title: [untitled] He: Gimli fic prompt #84 · Author: Thevina Finduilas ·
Races: Dwarves · ID: 718
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 08:21:08 Score: 4
Every tale that I read by this author featuring Gimli seems to be even
better than the one before. She is into his head in an almost telepathic
way, and always relates what she finds there with the perfect choice of
words. This is a stunning story, that reveals in just this short chapter
more than I ever knew about Gimli before, and I find that I like him
very much and am anxious to get to know him better. Her hints about
Dwarven culture are fascinating as well.
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Title: Fairy Tales of Middle-Earth · Author: DrummerWench · Genres:
Drama · ID: 261
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:22:12 Score: 3
Oh, such a wonderful collection of stories from across the free lands of
Middle Earth, so fit to entertain small Hobbits, young children of Men,
curious Elflings, and even bright-eyed Dwarves and Beornings. Each story
is complete in itself, is reminiscent of our traditional fairy tales,
and is delightful.

Everyone needs to enjoy this one, I think!
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Title: Drabbles for Lord of the Rings · Author: Llinos · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 758
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:27:34 Score: 2
I love the poetry forms used to express the heart of each of the chosen
vignettes. Well done, and marvelous use of wording and rhyme schemes.
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Title: A Taste of Diplomacy · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 939
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 08:33:31 Score: 3
This is an interesting look at young Denethor, before he becomes
enamoured with his own perception of his faultless perfection. It was
nice to see him so fascinated by another race, long years before he
would simply hold those not of his own kind in contempt.
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Title: To Climb a Tree · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits: Children ·
ID: 646
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:37:22 Score: 4
Merry learned how to climb trees at Ferdibrand's insistence so as to
prepare for the day when he must perhaps save Pippin; but when it's
needed it's Pippin who reminds him how to climb trees, reminding Merry
of Frodo's natural authority, preparing him for the day when he will be
Thain.

It's a marvelous story, to see Pippin keeping his cool in the face of
danger to save his cousin.
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Title: Just Us Lads · Author: pippinfan88 · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 291
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:41:18 Score: 3
How wonderful it is when father and son are able to spend time together,
just the two of them on the farm near Whitwell. One of a charming
collection of short looks at our favorite lads.
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Title: Treasures And Momentos · Author: Marigold · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Pippin or Merry · ID: 220
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:47:20 Score: 3
Merry and Pippin came to spend their last years by their friend and
King's side, but when they left Middle Earth they did so together.

A sad yet hopeful Yule for the last of the Fellowship, seeing Merry and
Pippin go ahead of them.
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Title: In Aragorn's Safekeeping · Author: Radbooks · Genres: Drama · ID: 141
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 08:53:41 Score: 6
Two teenagers found themselves in a strange place after the bus to
Washington state suddenly left the road. Finding themselves in a land
distant in time and space from their own place was a shock, especially
as they find themselves part of the Fellowship of the Ring.

But Thomas and Rebecca have a great deal to learn about one another and
their new guardian, the Man known variously as Strider, Aragorn, Estel,
Elessar, and Ada.

I cannot find this truly a Mary Sue in spite of the premise, for this is
not one of us or some foolish soul tagging along, but two well developed
characters finding their way in an extraordinary twist of fate, having
to accept that if they returned to their own time and place they would
be orphaned, but as they are can know fulfilment.

AU, but wonderfully so and in keeping with the characters we know and
love so well.
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Title: The Path · Author: AngieT · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 638
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 09:03:39 Score: 3
A most fascinating Hobbit ghost story, and occurring to our own Merry.
The Fell Winter left a number of tales told about the Shire, and one
mystery as Merry meets a lass from that time and sees her open the door
to the death of her family and friends.

Eerie, and well written.
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Title: Peace Comes Dropping Slow · Author: Songspinner · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Grey Havens · ID: 224
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-11-29 09:14:48 Score: 4
The title of this piece, from one of my favorite Yeats poems, fits the
story's quiet, gentle mood perfectly. In just a few words, Songspinner
captures Pippin's devotion for his wife, and hers for him. I love that
Diamond's illness has not interfered with their complete understanding
of each other, so that the meaning behind the single word "city" is
instantly grasped by Pippin, while she can finish his thoughts equally
well. A lovely read!
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Title: The Singer · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits · ID: 979
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 09:31:32 Score: 4
A maia who'd remained in Middle Earth and put herself at Sauron's
service cannot that the magic held by the Hobbits who carried the Ring
to Its destruction was made of the emotions she has always seen as
weakness. So she seeks to trap Pippin, hoping to join his magic with hers.

But Cullassuliel as always watches over her own descendants, and makes
certain Faramir Took is ready to aid his King to find and rescue his father.

A lovely addition to the line of stories about the descendants of the
Took's faerie bride.
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Title: The River · Author: Indigo Bunting · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 51
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 09:38:41 Score: 6
Wow, this is an *exciting* story! I absolutely LOVE the way that the
Fellowship interacts in this. The use of a different character as the
narrative voice for various chapters allows a much more in depth look at
all of the members of the Company. This story just pelts along at full
speed scarely allowing the reader to take a breath. All of the
characters have their chance to shine but I was just speechless when
Merry's big moment came. Pippin does't fare badly either and it is such
a pleasure to read a story in which they play such valued and necessary
parts. The dialogue and reactions are realistic, the descriptions good,
and every moment is more compelling than the one before.

I can hardly wait for the next chapter of this awesome tale!
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Title: Awake · Author: Rabidsamfan · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 837
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 09:42:17 Score: 2
A wonderful movieverse moment here, with Sam just coming awake. No
explanation of where the nightshirt he was wearing when he entered the
room came from, though.
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Title: Of Flustering and Blustering · Author: Rhapsody · Races:
Cross-Cultural: With Hobbits · ID: 811
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 09:43:25 Score: 3
This was a fun story, but with hints of seriousness. It was really
interesting to see Gimli here, pre-Quest. I don't think I have read any
other fics about Gimli set during that time. Once again, Bilbo plays the
perfect hobbit host!
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Title: Boromir's Song · Author: Rhiannon Merdon · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 695
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 09:50:56 Score: 1
The time of healing has come between Frodo and Boromir.
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Title: At the Rising of the Moon · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 846
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 09:57:27 Score: 2
I loved the warmth of this story, and the fact that Aragorn and Faramir
were able to be just friends here, with nothing dire occuring!
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Title: Strike While the Iron is Hot · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres:
Humor: The Shire · ID: 234
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 10:03:22 Score: 3
Oh, the delight of prank wars in Brandy Hall, the latest one involving a
herd of goats and a gullible Bolger. But it appears Saradoc isn't taken
completely in, as he has all tweens in the Hall sign a certain document
and threatens all with cutlery.

Again, Grey Wonderer has managed to give me a true laugh for my money.
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Title: Antiphon to Light · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 155
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 10:17:58 Score: 2
You have done a wonderful job here, esepcially in the first passage, of
capturing the essence of what happened between Gimli and Galadriel. Very
emotional and visual.
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Title: Lightly Sings the Wind · Author: Ellie · Genres: Drama: Elves in
Later Ages · ID: 799
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 10:28:02 Score: 3
This is a very emotional and heartbreaking work, you convey those
elements very well. I like how you showed the progression of their grief
and I was glad to see their decision at the end.
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Title: Sword Play · Author: Lindelea · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: The
Shire · ID: 782
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 10:36:53 Score: 5
This is delightful. I love the spot-on characterizations of the
children. My own youngest has a fascination with blades that borders on
obsessive and I can very well see him taking a weapon such as Sting in
hand, irregardless of any possible consequences. Continuing on, with the
flowers, and then the 'practice weapons', the interplay between the
children is priceless, the one-upmanship - I see it everyday.

I especially love the ending, I think it's fitting that Sam teach Goldie
to wield a sword, after all, you never know where your paths may lead.
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Title: A Lasting Peace · Author: SueB · Genres: Drama · ID: 711
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 10:45:27 Score: 4
The summary drew me in, I have found myself fascinated with Harad and
the east lately and I find your plotline fascinating.

I will admit that I didn't have time to finish this epic before the end
of voting season, but I did want to let you know that I'm thoroughly
hooked and very much looking forward to finishing this engaging plot at
a more leisurely pace over the next few weeks. I apologize that it was
so far down my list that I couldn't give a more complete review.
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Title: King's Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 197
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 10:54:02 Score: 2
I'm glad that Aragorn had this memory to look back on. I'm sure he has
many of Halbarad, but I'm sure this farewell evening was special to him
in view of later events.
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Title: The Age of Men · Author: Marta · Races: Cross-Cultural: With
Hobbits · ID: 401
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 10:59:58 Score: 2
it is always good to see another Ent-fic. They are not done often
enough. I especially like Treebeards view of Aragorn. Very insightful
and well done from an Ent's point of view.
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Title: Birnam Wood · Author: Inkling · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 917
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 11:11:28 Score: 4
Absolutely delightful. I can't believe I've never stumbled on this
before. As always, your writing is crisp, emotional and visual - that is
no surprise, but I especially love this rendition. It seems so very
Tolkienish in it's adaptation, it's weaving in of various elements,
other old stories of the English and the countryside - and all of it so
very well and smoothly done.
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Title: The Road Not Taken · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 104
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 11:25:56 Score: 2
I found this to be a lovely visual adaptation of one of my favorite
poems, and was delighted with how seamlessly you wove the two together.
Well Done.
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Title: The Worst of All Evils · Author: Marta · Times: The Great Years:
Vignette · ID: 697
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 11:39:58 Score: 4
This is one of my favorites of all your works. As always, your attention
to detail astounds me. I like seeing the correct terms used, infusion,
and the correct selection of herbs. It gives the story a strong
undercurrent of realism that I appreciate.

I feel that Eomer is especially well done here, I like how you show his
restrained temper as he's trying to work through his questions.
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Title: The Gift of Time · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 812
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 11:46:55 Score: 3
What a pleasant surprise. I have somehow missed seeing this one of
yours. It's especially well done I think. I appreciate how tension
builds throughout, for the reader, with the undercurrents of Arathorn's
thoughts reflecting his own future.
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Title: Fugitive · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Drama · ID: 366
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 11:57:57 Score: 4
I have to admit that I *snickered* in the middle of this wonderful short
story when little Gilraen realized who had followed her ... How like
Aragorn himself to track his errant daughter, and how shortsighted of
her not to think who would be on her trail.

I like the undercurrents of political tension and the subtle canon woven
throughout. I've always thought that Aragorn and Arwen didn't have many
children because of the drain on her.
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Title: Elements · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great Years · ID: 667
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 12:06:28 Score: 2
I found this to be very emotional and insightful. It well reflected the
thoughts behind the faraway look in Gandalf's eyes before he spoke to
Pippen.
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Title: Home At Last · Author: Dreamflower · Times: Late Third Age: The
Shire · ID: 883
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 12:11:20 Score: 3
A fun picture of Bilbo 'home again'. It reminds me of the adage, the
more things change, the more things stay the same. - and I think, in a
lot of ways, that's at the heart of what we write about. My heart was
breaking for poor Bilbo as your story went along and I was glad he got
to tell his tale.
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Title: Ddraigspelt  An Orc Love Poem · Author: Llinos · Genres:
Romance: Poetry · ID: 879
Reviewer: Súlriel · 2006-11-29 12:27:04 Score: 3
I'm always delighted to find a rare bit of Orcish poetry. It's so 'at
odds' with who and what they are and yet poetry and song are so deeply
entrenched in all living beings - it seems they must have composed a few
lines.

Your Ddraigspelt is wonderfully, horribly, in character, both in thought
and in detail.
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Title: Ddraigspelt  An Orc Love Poem · Author: Llinos · Genres:
Romance: Poetry · ID: 879
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-29 12:50:16 Score: 3
Definitely an original piece! The violence that pervades the Uruk-hai is
used effectively here; the orc poet cannot lay it aside; he can know
passion but not love, and passion is entwined with that violence.

Skillfully written, with insight into one of Tolkien's more sinister
creations.
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Title: Inheritance · Author: Primsong · Times: Late Third Age: The Shire
· ID: 310
Reviewer: DrummerWench · 2006-11-29 15:45:57 Score: 3
Primsong's put together a compelling story about what might have been if
Bilbo's adoption of Frodo hadn't held up in court. This tale is
amazingly chilling and in-character (however AU it may be). The thought
of Otho and Lobelia with the Ring makes my back crawl.
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Title: The Road Not Taken · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 104
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 15:59:24 Score: 2
The title is an interesting play on words. It was not what I expected.
Knowing what befells Boromir, that call was really a bad omen.
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Title: Of All the Pretty Little Horses · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor:
Gondor · ID: 736
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 15:59:55 Score: 2
This ficlet made me laugh. The conversation makes sense after a fashion
even if the two protagonists talk at cross purposes. For once it is not
Eomer who talks about horses ;-).
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Title: Night Rain · Author: permilea · Races: Cross-Cultural: With
Hobbits · ID: 792
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:00:28 Score: 2
This is a very moving little scene. I can understand Frodo so well.
After all the barren and dry land in Mordor, he rejoices in rain.
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Title: Fugitive · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Drama · ID: 366
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:00:52 Score: 3
This is a nice glimpse into Aragorn as a father from his little
daughter's pov. Gilraen in typical children's fashion thinks her father
is way too old (and she may be right, she has really old parents) to
understand her. I love Aragorn's repartee to that thought.
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Title: The Consequences of Curiosity · Author: A L Milton · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 153
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:01:26 Score: 3
LOL! I got a good chuckle out of this. Poor Aragorn. That was way more
than he ever wanted to know about the private conduct of the Steward and
his wife. I love Faramir here, as usual very persistant and when he
starts something he sees it through, no matter the consequences ;-).
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Title: Red River · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 82
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:01:53 Score: 3
I like the metaphor of the chess game in this little story. The game on
the board and the game between the protagonists. My favorite line was
Aragorn's answer: [Yes, I agreed. He beats me playing white, and then
he beats me playing black.] I like Raksandhar and his earnest desire to
be a good Lord to his people, although he has not much luck here.
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Title: Both Beholden · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 180
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:03:02 Score: 5
I never thought that Halbarad and Boromir might have met. This story
brings them both together, and I love the way they both dance around the
burning questions they have. They both learn a lot just by watching each
other and when they finally talk, I was surprised by how much they have
in common. Even that they both would not see Aragorn become King :-(. I
love the way the political implications of Aragorn's claim to the
kingship in Gondor is handled, and Halbarad's absolute conviction that
Boromir would follow and support Aragorn even if Boromir is not so
convinced himself.
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Title: Black Hour · Author: Nesta · Times: The Great Years: Gondor · ID: 92
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:03:56 Score: 6
I always tried to imagine Faramir's thoughts in the days after his
recovery until the coronation. From the books I got the impression that
Faramir had no or very little doubts as to Aragorn's claim, but your
story shows that there might very well be doubt and uncertainty in
Faramir. I think the fear of change in a lot of people is very
compelling to cling to the old. Faramir especially is touched by the
change in rulership. When he doesn't acknowledge the claim, he is ruler.
When he acknowledges the claim he is...that is for the new king to say.
But it will most likely turn Faramir's life again upside down.

I like the way you characterize Faramir here. The way he thinks things
through and looks at all the possibilities and his responsibilities and
then comes to the conclusion he will welcome the king, although a lot of
people are opposed to his decision.
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Title: The Acceptable Sacrifice · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 775
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:07:37 Score: 7
This is a great story which follows Frodo from the moment he wakes at
Cormallen until he takes ship to Aman. The story explores the effect the
quest and the battles had on all four hobbits, but especially on Frodo.
I have to admit my favorite character is Aragorn, not the hobbits, and I
love the way Aragorn comes to life in this story. He becomes a human
being and not just the icon and remote leader/king as he is in most
stories. By the time Aragorn fades to the background, I was so enamoured
by the description of Frodo, Sam, Merry and Pippin that I followed them
home and to the end. A great tale which reconciled me with the ending of
LOTR where I never liked that Frodo couldn't come back to normal and
live out his life in the Shire. This story made me see the reasons why.

While reading, I could sense the great amount of research you put into
this story and see all the loving details added to the tale, which make
it a great read.
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Title: Call yourself Thorongil · Author: Nilmandra · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 731
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:08:33 Score: 4
In this little gapfiller, Gandalf knows exactly how to play Aragorn.
They meet for the first time and Aragorn is a bit weary of this stranger
until he realizes who he is. Gandalf knows exactly what to say to get
Aragorn to trust him. And in true wizard manner he just says enough to
get Aragorn to do what he thinks the young man should do. I love the way
that the author in just a few words characterizes the wizard.
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Title: Lossarnach Yule · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Gondor · ID: 677
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2006-11-29 16:09:13 Score: 4
This is such a heartwarming tale. I loved to hear more about Lorend and
having Hethlin and Mablung along for the ride is a bonus. I loved the
analogy of Hethlin as the hunter and Lorend as the trickster. Mablung as
the Lord? Hmm, that's more of a stretch, but I think it still works ;-).
Lorend's family was great especially his mother. I like it that the
women in this more rural setting are a force of their own and not so
subservient as the noblewomen in Gondor are depicted in many stories.
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Title: Inheritances · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: The Steward's
Family · ID: 651
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-11-29 16:52:31 Score: 4
This is a charming, intelligent stream-of-consciousness, a type of story
I don't usually like in fanfic as a one-shot. But Marta does it
beautifully in a tale of Boromir's naming, capturing all at once the
steadfast, acute character of Aragorn, the tense situation at court in
Minas Tirith, and a great deal of Middle-Earth history from Castamir the
usurper on.

Marta writes beautifully, and has a range to be envied.
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Title: Spirit of Fire · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 196
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-11-29 17:00:55 Score: 2
A lovely, poetic, erotic drabble. Feanor's power is intensely conjured
through the eyes of his wife. Marta has a true writer's appreciation of
the power of each word.
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Title: A New Age · Author: Marta · Races: Elves: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 685
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-11-29 17:03:41 Score: 2
This is Thranduil as I see him, in spirit a true Elf of Middle-Earth.
Surely he is still around someplace....
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Title: The Shield-maid's Dance of Death · Author: Marta · Times: The
Great Years: Poetry · ID: 694
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-11-29 17:09:03 Score: 2
This is a truly evocative poem: I see Eowyn in all her bravery before
the Witch-King. As well, Marta has given us the pleasure of an
introduction to a talented singer. Thanks!
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Title: Frodo's Exciting Day Out · Author: Llinos · Genres: Humor: Parody
· ID: 829
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-29 17:39:15 Score: 10
This whole story is so wonderfully and incredibly hysterically funny
that I scarcely know where to begin! First of all, the premise is just
wonderful! It answers a question that fans have asked for years; why
didnt Gandalf simply have the Eagles fly Frodo and the Ring to Mount
Doom? Well, it would have made for a much shorter story, and probably
Tolkien couldnt have written the idea as well as Llinos has. This is a
story not to be missed by an author that writes like no one else!

Everything about this story is just superb! All of the dialogue is
amazingly funny (Aragorns query to Pippin [You liked the dead people -
now didnt you?] still sets me to laughing whenever I hear or read
it!), and the cast of characters, though this is a parody, are still
written in perfect voice. Even Tom Bombadil, who can be very difficult
to capture. Tom spouts a rhyme that could have been written by Tolkien
himself though for anyone who knows Llinos fantastic poetry that fact
should not be surprising!

The situations that the characters find themselves in as they travel
along on this momentous day are uproariously funny. Every single event,
major or minor, that took place during the long days of the Quest is
very skilfully included, every detail written in a marvellously
satirical way that had me laughing out loud through the entire story. It
is hard to pick favourite bits but I especially loved the encounter with
the Witch King and Grima Wormtongue and his new aliases! And Freddy has
an incredibly funny cameo!

Llinos doesnt write nearly as much as I wish that she would, but I love
everything that she turns her hand to. She is without a doubt an awesome
writer, and this brilliantly conceived and written story is proof
positive of that!

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Title: King's Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 197
Reviewer: Raihon · 2006-11-29 17:49:18 Score: 3
Stories that portray the more ordinary, human side of Aragorn are always
welcome, and I'm on a Halbarad kick right now, so I especially enjoyed
seeing them together here. I wanted more, but I suppose there wouldn't
be more, not with these laconic Rangers.
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Title: About Legends or Whisperings of a Ghost · Author: juno_magic ·
Races: Men · ID: 699
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2006-11-29 18:12:36 Score: 10
JunoMagic is one of the best storytellers that I have had the pleasure
of knowing, and "About Legends or Whisperings of a Ghost" serves as a
further example of that. Juno's writing simply compels me in a way that
few others can, with a natural skill and grace that makes her stories
effortless and truly a joy to read.

I started the story sitting away from my computer, eating lunch. In
short time, I'd slid my chair over to the computer, willing to risk
splashing soup on the keyboard--the story simply riveted me and demanded
my attention. Others have called this story dark, and they are not
wrong. It is not always the most pleasant text to read, but Juno handles
the horror elements well and judiciously. I am a horror writer myself,
and it is not easy to create a character who truly exudes evil, who is
suitably terrifying, but Juno has done it, without falling back on the
caricatures and gimmicks common to the genre.

This story takes a small detail in the history of Gondor and develops
and explores possibilities that take readers beyond the black and white
words on the page. Juno handles the idea of historical bias and
misrepresentation with her usual skill and encourages us to look at this
detail--and all of Tolkien's works--from the perspective of historians
and skeptics.

Once I began reading this tale, I could not stop, and by the end, I
found myself wondering, "6000 words are gone? Already??" It is a
fantastic example of the talents of one of the fandom's most talented
writers and comes most highly recommended for anyone looking for a dark
and unusual story that--once begun--is impossible to put down.
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Title: The Remains of Power · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 228
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 18:16:01 Score: 6
Now this is a story, which I havent seen that often. Pear Took writes
about the defeated Saruman while he remains in his tower after his ranks
and honour has been stripped away. The story kicks off when the
remaining members of the Fellowship are long gone and the war is being
fought in Gondor. So what is indeed left for him: lots of water, a
[flock of ducks] and [wood-demons] outside the door. Then suddenly the
Nazgul turn up, sneakily as always and where Saruman first appeared to
be so passive, the Nazgul seem to wake him up. What I so like about this
story is that Pearl paces this story so well. From a moping Saruman, the
Nazgul rekindle the flame of Saruman, which in all his bitterness he
decides to claim the Shire as his own sandbox. I like how she wrote
Sarumans reasoning, mirroring his resentment against everyone greatly.
This is a real nice gap filler!
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Title: Stones · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 571
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-29 19:17:14 Score: 3
This is a wonderful small story, and so very true to life, at least for
some of us. I have a good many stones sitting about my house bringing
back certain places and faces everytime I look at them.
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Title: If I had a Hammer · Author: grey_wonderer · Times: Late Third
Age: The Shire · ID: 162
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 19:18:23 Score: 5
I hereby accuse Grey Wonderer of being a corrupting influence, for this
story was one of the inspirations for one of my own.

Young Peregrin Took needs to take lessons in carpentry, but the teacher
hired by Paladin despairs of teaching the lad anything and has declared
him a menace. So it falls to Frodo to find a new tutor, and young
Samwise Gamgee begins to fill in the void. But will he and Pippin
survive the tutelage, and will Merry be able to get over his jealousy
that here is a part of Pippin's life he can't fully aid in?

As for Pippin's project and how well it will do at the Fair--well,
that's still another subject!

Superbly and humorously done, as always.
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Title: A Change In The Weather · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits:
Fixed-Length Ficlet series · ID: 692
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2006-11-29 19:22:35 Score: 1
Well Done! I'm amazed at drabbles and these are wonderfully written.
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Title: Curious Mind, Noble Heart · Author: Nilmandra · Genres: Adventure
· ID: 270
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 19:47:48 Score: 4
When one of the Noldor smiths of Imladris crafts a popgun and metal
spheres to shoot from it as missiles, young Estel is tempted to try it
himself so as to make himself a better warrior sooner to protect his
home the sooner from trolls. But in an accident he injures his brother
and learns precisely why Glorfindel had forbade him to touch the weapon.

Well done imagery, and an excellent depiction of the precocious child
who would grow up to become Aragorn son of Arathorn.
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Author: Elena Tiriel · ID: 247 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 13:00:15 Score: 7
I think Elena Tiriel is one of the best drabblists in the fandom. She
certainly knows the canon well enough to include details just as Tolkien
wrote them. She also has an ability to get a lot of details in a very
few words, without it feeling rushed. Equally important, it never feels
like a single word is there as a "filler" -- hitting exactly one hundred
words can be a real skill, and Elena Tiriel makes every word worthwhile,
just like it seems like every necessary skill is there. But what I
probably love most about her drabbles is the way they are self-contained
scenes, imaginatively chosen to hint at the larger story. This is a
style of plotting that is not always easy. By choosing small enough
moments the drabbles can be very effective, but they are also large
enough to feel like she's said something of note. I always like her
drabbles and appreciate the amount of work she has obviously put into them.
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Author: Gandalfs apprentice · ID: 175 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 13:03:07 Score: 4
Gandalfs Apprentice can always make me lap with the matter-of-fact
streak she brings to her humor. I can just see her characters with a
very deadpan expression on their faces as they deliver the lines she
gives them. Even in her more serious works, the slightly funny quality
is still under the surface. You just know that her characters thoroughly
enjoy life, and that makes for a fun read.
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Author: Gwynnyd · ID: 186 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 13:03:32 Score: 10
I'll admit that before I first read Gwynnyd's fiction I did not feel
that deeply for Aragorn. He always seemed a bit boring, I guess because
we never see him going through any sort of growth in the corpus of Lord
of the Rings. The material's there, but it's buried. However, through
discussions with Gwynnyd and through reading her stories, I have begun
to see more of the gaps that ferment into story nuzguls for her.

Gwynnyd's stories range from the events surrounding Arathorn's death and
Aragorn's moving to Rivendell, through his reign as king of Gondor. In
all of these different situations she is very aware of the real-world
historical precedents that faced similar situations and uses these
models to good use. Of course Aragorn and Gilraen both living in
Rivendell would be a tip-off to Aragorn's identity. But I did not even
think that this was a difficulty that needs to be explained until I
started reading Gwynnyd's fiction.

The best thing about her plots is that they do not *add* to Tolkien in a
way that feels artificial. Instead, reading one of her stories is like
going on an archaeological dig and discovering what was already there,
just waiting to be unearthed. Reading one of her pieces is always a treat.
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Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · ID: 182 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 13:08:17 Score: 4
Isabeau was probably the first writer I read who wrote convincing slash.
Andrahar's relationship with Boromir is of course extra-canonical but it
really comments on his character as portrayed by Tolkien and in other
writers in the same universe. It explores all of the implications of
homosexuality within the culture, and makes for a really interesting way
to look at the values of Gondorians.
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Author: juno_magic · ID: 358 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:15:02 Score: 8
Juno is not an author that I have read much of simply because her work
is usually longer than I like to read. Imagine my joy at finding that a
friend had written some shorter pieces on topics I enjoyed. And these
are very *deep* pieces. I think that's what gets me so much. "I Will
Lift Up Mine Eyes" not only develops a religion of Gondor and regional
differences, but it gives us a hero who dares to go against the norm.
That evoked a *squee* from me, but of a somber and academic sort (so
much as a *squee* can be) -- she has taken many of my favourite ideas
and built them into a fascinating story that hints at a whole world in a
piece that didn't take a great effort to read. But thinking effort was
another question. I found I couldn't get it out of my head for days.
"About Legends or Whisperings of Ghosts" stands out similarly, but this
time the question isn't rebelling against the religious norm, but about
the trustworthiness of history. Both of these take a situation or
premise that is far from common and turn it on its head, but never do so
unconvincingly. That's not an easy feat, and I admire Juno for her success.
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Author: Karenator · ID: 10 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:16:20 Score: 3
Karenator has this skill for writing children in a way that makes them
distinct to the culture they are from and the canon character they will
become, but while still making them seem like children. It's hard to do,
a skill I admire.
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Author: Kenaz · ID: 244 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:17:01 Score: 5
What strikes me most about Kenaz's writing is the way that she uses
pacing. "Until the Stars Are All Alight" involves a sword fight and so
the pacing there is crucial. I was sitting on the edge of my seat all
through that. "Where the Shadows Are" relies on a different type of
tension, where the two characters face their own edooms and the
impending battle and the fact that their love is not destined to endure.
But it's a tension that still requires almost frantic action of its
sort, and Kenaz handles it well. This author communicates the necessary
meaning without the story slowing down.
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Author: Katzilla · ID: 631 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:17:35 Score: 2
Katzilla really captures the spirit of the Rohirrim. Eomer and Eowyn
seem to fit so well with what Tolkien wrote of them.
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Author: Nancy Brooke · ID: 105 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:18:47 Score: 3
Nancy writes all aspects of Boromir's life in a way that is fun to read
and emotioanlly meaningful. Whether it is an AU drabble after his death
or as a child in Dol Amroth or others remembering him, Boromir's
personality is strongly felt in Nancy's writing.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:19:23 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:20:06 Score: 10
Tanaqui is a long-time friend and beta reader, so it feels a bit odd to
be reviewing not something that she wrote but how she functions as an
author. I hold her writing abilities in the highest regard and always
like to read what she has written in the Tolkien fandom because she has
a knowledge of canon that transcends individual facts. Of course, once
you try to jump from facts that Tolkien explicitly wrote to broader
worldviews about how a culture would have operated you enter the realm
of interpretation. And I have not agreed with every assertion Tanaqui
has made, but I have been able to accept her inventions as something
Tolkien would have approved of; they are very much in the spirit and
letter of his Middle-earth.

Tanaqui uses an exquisite amount of physical detail in her works,
without her pieces feeling like an infodump. That's what I remember when
I think about her, how rich the world she creates is. She once joked
that in a drabble we are allowed seven words for a title, one hundred
for the body of the text -- and three thousand for the requisite
footnotes and forenotes documenting the historical precedents, canon
sources, and the thoughts that led up to the drabble. That really
summarizes her approach to writing in general: not that she uses too
many footnotes(!) but that for every bit she puts in, there's much more
going on below the surface. I'm not sure how much she'll appreciate a
comparison to movieverse, but her writing really does remind me of
WETA's dedication to crafting props that were works of art, even if they
barely made it on to screen or not at all. It creates a very rich
backdrop for her stories, and this reader loves it.

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Author: Thevina Finduilas · ID: 87 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:20:33 Score: 6
Thevina does such interesting work with those less-explored corners of
canon. In most of the entries in this year's awards this is most evident
in her handling of dwarves. There's a quiet gruffness to them that seems
very in keeping with the other races of the north and what Tolkien told
us of them, yet through Thevina's writings I see a vulnerability
underneath that needs to be exposed. And Thevina does expose it, through
Gimli's wonderings about how he is changing over the course of the
Quest, but this does not make him seem week or effeminate. She also
develops a tantalizing glimpse into Rohirric sexual values that once
again build where there just isn't canon, but feel very in-keeping with
the spirit of what Tolkien wrote. Reading her stories always leaves me
thinking, something I really enjoy.
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Author: Elena Tiriel · ID: 247 · Races: Villains [6]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:21:23 Score: 7
I think Elena Tiriel is one of the best drabblists in the fandom. She
certainly knows the canon well enough to include details just as Tolkien
wrote them. She also has an ability to get a lot of details in a very
few words, without it feeling rushed. Equally important, it never feels
like a single word is there as a "filler" -- hitting exactly one hundred
words can be a real skill, and Elena Tiriel makes every word worthwhile,
just like it seems like every necessary skill is there. But what I
probably love most about her drabbles is the way they are self-contained
scenes, imaginatively chosen to hint at the larger story. This is a
style of plotting that is not always easy. By choosing small enough
moments the drabbles can be very effective, but they are also large
enough to feel like she's said something of note. I always like her
drabbles and appreciate the amount of work she has obviously put into them.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Villains [6]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:22:19 Score: 10
Tanaqui is a long-time friend and beta reader, so it feels a bit odd to
be reviewing not something that she wrote but how she functions as an
author. I hold her writing abilities in the highest regard and always
like to read what she has written in the Tolkien fandom because she has
a knowledge of canon that transcends individual facts. Of course, once
you try to jump from facts that Tolkien explicitly wrote to broader
worldviews about how a culture would have operated you enter the realm
of interpretation. And I have not agreed with every assertion Tanaqui
has made, but I have been able to accept her inventions as something
Tolkien would have approved of; they are very much in the spirit and
letter of his Middle-earth.

Tanaqui uses an exquisite amount of physical detail in her works,
without her pieces feeling like an infodump. That's what I remember when
I think about her, how rich the world she creates is. She once joked
that in a drabble we are allowed seven words for a title, one hundred
for the body of the text -- and three thousand for the requisite
footnotes and forenotes documenting the historical precedents, canon
sources, and the thoughts that led up to the drabble. That really
summarizes her approach to writing in general: not that she uses too
many footnotes(!) but that for every bit she puts in, there's much more
going on below the surface. I'm not sure how much she'll appreciate a
comparison to movieverse, but her writing really does remind me of
WETA's dedication to crafting props that were works of art, even if they
barely made it on to screen or not at all. It creates a very rich
backdrop for her stories, and this reader loves it.

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Author: Acacea · ID: 196 · Times: Early Third Age [7]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:23:04 Score: 4
When I think of Acacea's writing the word "Gondor" comes to mind very
quickly, because she can write the brothers 'Mir so affectively. She has
done angst from time to time, but mostly she writes the normal everyday
moments of family life, and it really has a nice relaxed quality to it.
There are some fine explorations of Gondorians among this year's
writings, but she also shows her depth as a writer by writing varied
races and time frames. A truly versatile author indeed, and all with a
light touch that makes it feel very natural.
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Author: Elena Tiriel · ID: 247 · Times: Early Third Age [7]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:23:36 Score: 7
I think Elena Tiriel is one of the best drabblists in the fandom. She
certainly knows the canon well enough to include details just as Tolkien
wrote them. She also has an ability to get a lot of details in a very
few words, without it feeling rushed. Equally important, it never feels
like a single word is there as a "filler" -- hitting exactly one hundred
words can be a real skill, and Elena Tiriel makes every word worthwhile,
just like it seems like every necessary skill is there. But what I
probably love most about her drabbles is the way they are self-contained
scenes, imaginatively chosen to hint at the larger story. This is a
style of plotting that is not always easy. By choosing small enough
moments the drabbles can be very effective, but they are also large
enough to feel like she's said something of note. I always like her
drabbles and appreciate the amount of work she has obviously put into them.
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Author: Súlriel · ID: 7 · Times: Early Third Age [7]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:28:20 Score: 3
Sulriel joins her knowledge of the first age with her feel for writing
villains in many of her works, to give us a portrait of what life would
have been like for elves in the Elder Days. Its just different enough
to be really interesting. This year she shows us that she can write
non-fiction well, too, and provides a useful resource for other writers.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Times: Early Third Age [7]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:29:18 Score: 10
Tanaqui is a long-time friend and beta reader, so it feels a bit odd to
be reviewing not something that she wrote but how she functions as an
author. I hold her writing abilities in the highest regard and always
like to read what she has written in the Tolkien fandom because she has
a knowledge of canon that transcends individual facts. Of course, once
you try to jump from facts that Tolkien explicitly wrote to broader
worldviews about how a culture would have operated you enter the realm
of interpretation. And I have not agreed with every assertion Tanaqui
has made, but I have been able to accept her inventions as something
Tolkien would have approved of; they are very much in the spirit and
letter of his Middle-earth.

Tanaqui uses an exquisite amount of physical detail in her works,
without her pieces feeling like an infodump. That's what I remember when
I think about her, how rich the world she creates is. She once joked
that in a drabble we are allowed seven words for a title, one hundred
for the body of the text -- and three thousand for the requisite
footnotes and forenotes documenting the historical precedents, canon
sources, and the thoughts that led up to the drabble. That really
summarizes her approach to writing in general: not that she uses too
many footnotes(!) but that for every bit she puts in, there's much more
going on below the surface. I'm not sure how much she'll appreciate a
comparison to movieverse, but her writing really does remind me of
WETA's dedication to crafting props that were works of art, even if they
barely made it on to screen or not at all. It creates a very rich
backdrop for her stories, and this reader loves it.

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Author: ann_arien · ID: 645 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:30:06 Score: 3
I have only read one story by this author ("On Frozen Shores"), but if
it is an indication she has a knack for coming up with new plot lines
and making them feel natural. I'd like to read more by her.
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Author: Dawn Felagund · ID: 602 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:30:34 Score: 4
Dawn really brings the First Age-elves to life. She takes these
characters that to readers like me who have only read the Silm once or
twice are little more than names, and really forms them into characters
that I can feel the emotional weight of the situation. Her characters
always jump off the page and seem very, very real to me, and more
importantly make sense without an excessive amount of knowledge of the
backstory.
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Author: elliska · ID: 143 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:31:11 Score: 10
Elliska is an author that I have really discovered since the 2005 MEFAs.
I did not have the time to read her stories like I should, but I found
the time over the winter. Thereby breaking several of my own rules,
against reading epic, elf-centred series. I have nothing against any of
these types of pieces on principles, but I don't tend to have the
patience for long works, and elves tend to bore me no matter how well
they are written.

Elliska changed all that. I suppose those rules ["is more what you'd
call "guidelines" than actual rules"], but elliska's pieces still
overcame all of my doubts about whether I would enjoy the "Interrupted
Journeys" series. I think it was her avatar at Open Scrolls that
convinced me to look at them
[(http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/authors/profile.php?no=650)], because
her complaints about fanons regarding Thranduil are so similar to my own
about Denethor. The fact that she saw a need to fight such similar
mischaracterizations is actually what made me give Thranduil a second look.

And what a look! Her pieces give us a convincing picture of a realm in
upheaval after the death of Oropher in the Last Alliance. There are
politics and personal drama and all in all an extremely convincing world
that manages not to toe-step on Tolkien but at the same time not
over-dwell on those areas "The Hobbit" led him to develop. I really look
forward to seeing how she continues to develop this saga.

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Author: Haleth · ID: 495 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:31:52 Score: 2
Haleth has a minimalist style that is surprisingly effective and lets
the reader feel the full brunt of what she's portraying.
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Author: Imhiriel · ID: 702 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:32:30 Score: 4
Imhiriel brings such a sense of humanity to the earlier ages. (Not in
making the elves mortal, but in making the drama and the angst
approachable for this modern reader). And her prose is always beautiful
and displays a passion for finding just the right word to communicate an
emotion that I think Tolkien would approve of. This is especially
important in shorter pieces like drabbles, and it makes for a read that
really appeals to my inner language geek.
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Author: Imhiriel · ID: 702 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:33:09 Score: 4
Imhiriel brings such a sense of humanity to the earlier ages. (Not in
making the elves mortal, but in making the drama and the angst
approachable for this modern reader). And her prose is always beautiful
and displays a passion for finding just the right word to communicate an
emotion that I think Tolkien would approve of. This is especially
important in shorter pieces like drabbles, and it makes for a read that
really appeals to my inner language geek.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:34:04 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Rhapsody · ID: 279 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:35:00 Score: 6
It amazes me that Rhapsody, as an author who writes English as a second
language, should write it so affectively in short forms like drabbles. I
don't think that I've read a multi-chaptered piece by her because I tend
to more or less stick to Third Age stuff, and I'm sure she can write
longer pieces just as convincingly. But when you're writing drabbles or
pieces that aren't that longer, then every word has to count. And
Rhapsody is one of the best drabblists I know; her pieces always pack a
punch in their short length and never feel rushed.

More than that, she is one of those authors that has made the Third Age
come to life for me. Her characterizations are vivid and fallible in
ways that fit the elves she's writing about. I had a hard time
remembering which son of Feanor was which before I read stuff by authors
like Rhapsody. She has definitely enhanced Tolkien's world for me.

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Author: Tehta · ID: 185 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:38:01 Score: 5
Tehta has taken the few hints Tolkien gives us about life of Gondolin in
the canon, and woven it into a complete world. And what a hilarious
world it is. These elves are not so old and tired they have forgotten
what it means to fall short of the mark. Still very much elves, but
misunderstandings do arise. They bring a sense of humor to these days
before the fall that I found worthy of an out-loud laugh or two. Pity
Turgon, for having such subjects. Its a great set of scenarios that are
told well, resulting in some upbeat stories that keep you reading and
smiling.
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Author: Altariel · ID: 181 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:38:52 Score: 4
Altariel shows here that she can build effectively on the writings of
other fanfic authors and make them distinctly her own. The Brand stories
are some of my favourites in her shared universe, and the story of
Faramir meeting Brand is really convincingly drawn. And her story "Red
River" has a similar touch of politics that makes the events feel robust
and realistic. That's what I really love about Altariel's world, that it
is impossible to forget that these folks are nobles and so their actions
always have larger implications.
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Author: Aramel · ID: 227 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:39:18 Score: 3
Aramel's stories always feel fresh to me. They take a commonly
misunderstood part of canon, or one that people haven't thought to
explore at all, and turn it around. Her pieces stay with me for a while
after I've read them, and I find myself turning them over in my head
wondering how her interpretation would affect other parts of the canon.
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Author: Bodkin · ID: 411 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:39:49 Score: 2
Bodkin does a good job of capturing the elves in the Undying Lands. I
always thought paradise would be boring, but not her version!
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Author: Claudio · ID: 508 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:45:40 Score: 5
Elladan playing Nintendo with an iguana on his head really should be so
out-of-character that it would annoy me at the very least, right? Yet
somehow this authors pieces really tickle my funny bone. I think its
the fact that, under all the modernization there are still hints of the
tensions between different groups of elves that underlie the canon. So
it feels somehow connected to what Tolkien wrote, but not in a
straightforward way or even as a parody of it. At the same time, the
situations poor Elrohir has to face are so like my own life, its a
scary commentary. However it works, it always makes me laugh, and Im
glad to read this authors latest additions. Well done, Claudio.
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Author: grey_wonderer · ID: 62 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:46:08 Score: 4
Grey Wonderer has a way of writing Pippin especially but all the hobbits
that is simply hilarious. Pippin is so honest and forthright in the
questions he asks, but those questions are more than a bit embarrassing.
He takes his time getting to the point but keeps pushing. Really, it's
brilliantly true to life and laugh-out-loud hilarious throughout. I've
only found the time to read a few of the stories but I'm going to try to
read more after the awards are over.
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Author: Gwynnyd · ID: 186 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:46:47 Score: 10
I'll admit that before I first read Gwynnyd's fiction I did not feel
that deeply for Aragorn. He always seemed a bit boring, I guess because
we never see him going through any sort of growth in the corpus of Lord
of the Rings. The material's there, but it's buried. However, through
discussions with Gwynnyd and through reading her stories, I have begun
to see more of the gaps that ferment into story nuzguls for her.

Gwynnyd's stories range from the events surrounding Arathorn's death and
Aragorn's moving to Rivendell, through his reign as king of Gondor. In
all of these different situations she is very aware of the real-world
historical precedents that faced similar situations and uses these
models to good use. Of course Aragorn and Gilraen both living in
Rivendell would be a tip-off to Aragorn's identity. But I did not even
think that this was a difficulty that needs to be explained until I
started reading Gwynnyd's fiction.

The best thing about her plots is that they do not *add* to Tolkien in a
way that feels artificial. Instead, reading one of her stories is like
going on an archaeological dig and discovering what was already there,
just waiting to be unearthed. Reading one of her pieces is always a treat.

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Author: Inkling · ID: 283 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:47:52 Score: 6
The twos tories Inkling has entered in this year's MEFAs both excel, but
in very different ways. "Birnam Wood" is for me one of the best examples
of what a crossover should be. It does not just take elements of
Tolkien's word and elements of another world but really delves inbto how
they would have played out. The fact that the "other world" is not a
popular fandom but a classical work of drama ("Hamlet") only makes it
more suitable to crossing over with something like Tolkien. The tones
just match.

But then in "Better Than Frodo Baggins" Inkling shows that she can write
the dark side of hobbits without crossing so far into angst that it
feels unhobbity. That piece was just vaguely unsettling, with some dark
forecasting of events to come. The varied skills hint at a real
versatility in this author, and I'd like to read more by her.

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Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · ID: 182 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond
[31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 14:48:19 Score: 4
Isabeau was probably the first writer I read who wrote convincing slash.
Andrahar's relationship with Boromir is of course extra-canonical but it
really comments on his character as portrayed by Tolkien and in other
writers in the same universe. It explores all of the implications of
homosexuality within the culture, and makes for a really interesting way
to look at the values of Gondorians.
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Author: Minuialeth · ID: 427 · Genres: Drama [107]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 14:54:33 Score: 10
Minuialeth is an amazing writer and to see here drabbling for a change
is a treat! Erestor is her favourite canon character to write about and
in every story, she writes about him, I get this distinctive feel that a
minor character is being lifted out of a setting and calls upon the
readers attention with great skill. Minu does this actually with every
canon character that she writes about, she puts them in a different
light and shows the reader a different angle.

Whether it is Romance, for example her story the World Within, or in
this case Drama, Minu has the talent to write splendid stories for many
categories. Her voice in her works, poetry or stories, is strong and are
very convincingly delivered. Minuialeth can handle different technical
writing point of views without any visible effort. No matter what she
writes, you as a reader feel a part of the piece as if you can observe
closely what is going on. This is happening in her drabble as well, but
it applies to any work she shares with us.

Minuialeth has a natural way of writing that is truly captivating and it
is really hard to put the work down for a moment because you do want to
know what happens next. Taking her time with writing her tales, she
weaves many story layers that truly baffle you and give you just that
different perspective you did not think of before. Combine this with a
natural gift for pacing in her works, there isnt so much a beta can
correct in her works, besides leaning back and enjoy the fruits of her
creativity. Remaining true to her own writing style, reading
Minuialeths work stand out for me and are always amazing to read.
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Author: Minuialeth · ID: 427 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-29 15:06:28 Score: 10
I was pleasantly surprised to see Minuialeth drabble about a First Age
Elf. I know she most often likes to write in different eras, but she
combines this with a great drabbling technique to make sure her story
comes across. Maybe she shushed Erestor for a while to drabble this, who
knows. A major character or not, Minu lift out the elves out of their
normal stories and manages to drabble about an event we all know, but
gives it a very distinct feeling. With great writing skills, she
commands the attention to her work and keeps the attention of the reader
with an effective style and prose fitting for Elves.

Minu has the talent to write splendid stories for many categories, she
picks her character, and she studies canon and every time she presents
something truly amazing. Her voice in her works, poetry or stories, is
strong and are very convincingly delivered. Minuialeth can handle
different technical writing point of views without any visible effort.
No matter what she writes, you as a reader feel a part of the piece as
if you can observe closely what is going on. This is happening in her
drabble as well, but it applies to any work she shares with us.

Minuialeth has a natural way of writing that is truly captivating and it
is really hard to put the work down for a moment because you do want to
know what happens next. Taking her time with writing her tales, she
weaves many story layers that truly baffle you and give you just that
different perspective you did not think of before. Combine this with a
natural gift for pacing in her works, there isnt so much a beta can
correct in her works, besides leaning back and enjoy the fruits of her
creativity. Remaining true to her own writing style, Minuialeths work
stand out for me and are always amazing to read.
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Author: jodancingtree · ID: 296 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:14:17 Score: 3
jodancingtree does a good job at keeping the reader's attention over a
long tale. She has built an entire world around the AU premise that
Frodo does not sail west, and even her epics based on her OC Canohando
are an intriguing commentary on Middle-earth.
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Author: Lady Aranel · ID: 151 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:15:12 Score: 5
Lady Aranel gives Legolas a really distinct voice. Somehow he is both
youthful and wise at the same time. In this year's selection you can see
him being an understanding brother, a warrior with the heart of a leader
paralleled to his father, and a person just like any other grieving the
lost of a friend. I had always thought of Lady Aranel as a distinguished
writer of romance (which she undoubtedly is), but the pieces by her I
read for this year's MEFA's show that she has many other talents as
well. Her ability to communicate powerful emotions quietly in a
dignified way is especially noteworthy.
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Author: Lindelea · ID: 27 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:15:51 Score: 2
Lindelea is good at keeping a long tale interesting over several
chapters. Her hobbits are relaxing and fun, and I enjoy what I've read
of hers.
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Author: Ottis413 · ID: 635 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:17:13 Score: 4
Ottis writes dark really well -- so well that I started but found I
could not finish the one piece in this category (for personal reasons).
It sent shivers all down my spine, and the events progressed so
naturally that it was all too easy to see how Bree could have ended up
like this. It's a great skill needed in an AU. Because AU isn't an
excuse to throw canon out the window, but to change one specific fact
and let the story unfold from there. Ottis has clearly mastered that
art, and I wouldn't mind seeing more AU's from this author in the future.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]:
General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:17:35 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:18:02 Score: 10
Tanaqui is a long-time friend and beta reader, so it feels a bit odd to
be reviewing not something that she wrote but how she functions as an
author. I hold her writing abilities in the highest regard and always
like to read what she has written in the Tolkien fandom because she has
a knowledge of canon that transcends individual facts. Of course, once
you try to jump from facts that Tolkien explicitly wrote to broader
worldviews about how a culture would have operated you enter the realm
of interpretation. And I have not agreed with every assertion Tanaqui
has made, but I have been able to accept her inventions as something
Tolkien would have approved of; they are very much in the spirit and
letter of his Middle-earth.

Tanaqui uses an exquisite amount of physical detail in her works,
without her pieces feeling like an infodump. That's what I remember when
I think about her, how rich the world she creates is. She once joked
that in a drabble we are allowed seven words for a title, one hundred
for the body of the text -- and three thousand for the requisite
footnotes and forenotes documenting the historical precedents, canon
sources, and the thoughts that led up to the drabble. That really
summarizes her approach to writing in general: not that she uses too
many footnotes(!) but that for every bit she puts in, there's much more
going on below the surface. I'm not sure how much she'll appreciate a
comparison to movieverse, but her writing really does remind me of
WETA's dedication to crafting props that were works of art, even if they
barely made it on to screen or not at all. It creates a very rich
backdrop for her stories, and this reader loves it.

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Author: Dreamflower · ID: 115 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:19:20 Score: 2
Dreamflower writes hobbits well, keeping them light and cute but still
giving them depth. Her writing develops relationships that seem to fit
into the canon nicely.
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Author: Imhiriel · ID: 702 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:21:12 Score: 4
Imhiriel brings such a sense of humanity to the earlier ages. (Not in
making the elves mortal, but in making the drama and the angst
approachable for this modern reader). And her prose is always beautiful
and displays a passion for finding just the right word to communicate an
emotion that I think Tolkien would approve of. This is especially
important in shorter pieces like drabbles, and it makes for a read that
really appeals to my inner language geek.
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Author: Nancy Brooke · ID: 105 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:21:56 Score: 3
Nancy writes all aspects of Boromir's life in a way that is fun to read
and emotioanlly meaningful. Whether it is an AU drabble after his death
or as a child in Dol Amroth or others remembering him, Boromir's
personality is strongly felt in Nancy's writing.
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Author: Nilmandra · ID: 444 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:22:35 Score: 2
Nilmandra does a good job of writing Aragorn throughout his life. His
reactions are age-appropriate in all her stories, but connected to one
character.
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Author: pippinfan88 · ID: 331 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:23:24 Score: 5
Pippinfan88 really nails the way that Merry and Pippin and everyone they
knew were impacted by their ties with Gondor and Rohan. Nowhere is this
more obvious than in "The Falcon's Watch", which is about their children
reacting to news of their death. It's also one of the most effective
stories I've ever read dealing with the topic of grief, it handles that
difficult topic really sensitively but at the same time without pulling
any punches. I look forward to reading the stories I didn't get around
to yet, because this is an author I definitely want to read more of.
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:24:54 Score: 10
It's a little hard to know how to describe Ann as a writer, because if I
*just* talked about what she writes then I would be ignoring the
encouraging affect she has had on so many authors, myself included,
because she is a world-class beta and reviewer. It's a truly rare
combination to find someone who can do all three effectively, but Ann
definitely qualifies. If I had to choose which of the three she's best
at I would probably choose betareading because she has it down to an
art, and I have never felt like I was losing control of my story.

Anyway, back to her writing, I do not want to underemphasize that
aspect. Her writing is always crisp as one would expect from a fine beta
reader. The mechanics are all there and her word economy i such that her
pieces never feel rushed (even in her non-drabbles, though this really
stands out in her drabbles). But what I love most about Ann's writing is
the quiet humor that seems to invade her writing, will she or no. If
there's anything I hope Ann never writes it's angst. Her stories just
all have this very natural feel to them of everyday life. From the hawt
quality of new love to the comfort of a long-stranding relationship to
the gentle jostlings of siblings to the tenderness of new parenthood --
it all feels so like real. And that makes for a very three-dimensional
world she writes.

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> This year the polls to decide this are hosted at our website instead
> of at our Yahoo group. This is a big change from last year, but we
> hope it will be much more convenient.
>
> To vote, please go here:
> http://www.mefawards.net/poll/polls2006/index.htm
>

This was wonderful!! Very easy compared to previous years. it's
always been a struggle for me to download and vote on the banners and
this went very quickly.

Thanks!

Author: Aramel · ID: 227 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:25:25 Score: 3
Aramel's stories always feel fresh to me. They take a commonly
misunderstood part of canon, or one that people haven't thought to
explore at all, and turn it around. Her pieces stay with me for a while
after I've read them, and I find myself turning them over in my head
wondering how her interpretation would affect other parts of the canon.
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Author: Branwyn · ID: 240 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:26:12 Score: 10
Branwyn is one of those authors that has really captured my heart, and I
mean that in both senses. Her stories always captivate me and affect me
in one way or another (I like to think in the way that was intended!),
but they also seem to have captured my own heart and experiences in the
events she has happen to her characters. I often find myself reading her
work and thinking to myself "Gee, that has happened to me!" That takes
an insight into human character that not everyone possesses, and I don't
think her writing would be so affective without it.

Anyone who has read her in the past should not be surprised to find that
she writes Boromir and Faramir in a three-dimensional and faceted way.
Her shorter pieces only hint at a depth that seems to underrun all of
her stories, yet they do not rely on each other so much that knowledge
of all is necessary to understand one.

But what did surprise me about this year's readings from her is just how
many different genres she can write. I knew she wrote drama and
reminiscing in a way I thoroughly enjoyed, and "Pink Oliphaunts" and
"The Household Accounts" did not disappoint on this grounds, but the
pacing and horror that kept me on the edge of my seat through "The Fords
of Isen"... just wow. And the sensuous detail, penchant for historical
accuracy, and compelling (and in-character) erotica in "Book
Learning"... shall not go too far into that for a PG review, but suffice
it to say that romance is not beyond the scope of her talent. This is an
author that continues to surprise me in pleasant ways.

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Author: Dreamflower · ID: 115 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:26:36 Score: 2
Dreamflower writes hobbits well, keeping them light and cute but still
giving them depth. Her writing develops relationships that seem to fit
into the canon nicely.
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Author: Dreamflower · ID: 115 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Poetry
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:26:57 Score: 2
Dreamflower writes hobbits well, keeping them light and cute but still
giving them depth. Her writing develops relationships that seem to fit
into the canon nicely.
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Author: EdorasLass · ID: 299 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:28:48 Score: 10
Edoras Lass is another one of those authors that has developed a
compelling subworld around the canonical facts we know about Gondor and
Rohan. There are customs and cultural expectations that seem reasonable
even though Tolkien never specified them, and they enrich the
characters' lives and the corners of canon that Tolkien never filled in.
Her original character Nanny is a good example. In "Mine" we see her
patience and unfaltering commonsensical wisdom when it comes to dealing
with a child as difficult as Boromir must have been. And in "Quality
Time" there's a glimpse of her dealing with the equally difficult man
Denethor. She's a compelling character and provides a unique window into
Denethor's world.

But then there are the canonical characters. Her characterizations are
always convincing but feel fresh. She adds to and builds on what Tolkien
told us, but in a way that feels true to Middle-earth. Nowhere is this
better illustrated than in the way Faramir reacts to his father's
infirmity in "Come When You Are Ready". The nauseating physical details
are only too clearly told, but the way Faramir deals with them is so
in-character! He does not flinch, does not shy away, but he is not
untouched by the gore. And Denethor as well is touchingly portrayed:
bound by duty to his family and to Gondor, cunning in the way he tries
to piece together the mystery.

EL is a great author if you like one-shots and shorts that develop the
canon in a convincing way but aren't afraid to add on. Her stories are
refreshingly fresh yet still feel Tolkienesque.

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Author: Forodwaith · ID: 50 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:42:13 Score: 3
Forodwaith seems to have really gotten into Arwen's mindset. In all of
her stories about that character Arwen comes off exactly as I imagine
her: wise but not completely above doubt. It's a hard mindset to write
but I think Forodwaith pulls it off. She's certainly enhanced my
appreciation of what was always a somewhat enigmatic character.
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Author: Gandalfs apprentice · ID: 175 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:42:47 Score: 4
Gandalfs Apprentice can always make me lap with the matter-of-fact
streak she brings to her humor. I can just see her characters with a
very deadpan expression on their faces as they deliver the lines she
gives them. Even in her more serious works, the slightly funny quality
is still under the surface. You just know that her characters thoroughly
enjoy life, and that makes for a fun read.
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Author: grey_wonderer · ID: 62 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:43:21 Score: 4
Grey Wonderer has a way of writing Pippin especially but all the hobbits
that is simply hilarious. Pippin is so honest and forthright in the
questions he asks, but those questions are more than a bit embarrassing.
He takes his time getting to the point but keeps pushing. Really, it's
brilliantly true to life and laugh-out-loud hilarious throughout. I've
only found the time to read a few of the stories but I'm going to try to
read more after the awards are over.
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Author: Gwynnyd · ID: 186 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:44:07 Score: 10
I'll admit that before I first read Gwynnyd's fiction I did not feel
that deeply for Aragorn. He always seemed a bit boring, I guess because
we never see him going through any sort of growth in the corpus of Lord
of the Rings. The material's there, but it's buried. However, through
discussions with Gwynnyd and through reading her stories, I have begun
to see more of the gaps that ferment into story nuzguls for her.

Gwynnyd's stories range from the events surrounding Arathorn's death and
Aragorn's moving to Rivendell, through his reign as king of Gondor. In
all of these different situations she is very aware of the real-world
historical precedents that faced similar situations and uses these
models to good use. Of course Aragorn and Gilraen both living in
Rivendell would be a tip-off to Aragorn's identity. But I did not even
think that this was a difficulty that needs to be explained until I
started reading Gwynnyd's fiction.

The best thing about her plots is that they do not *add* to Tolkien in a
way that feels artificial. Instead, reading one of her stories is like
going on an archaeological dig and discovering what was already there,
just waiting to be unearthed. Reading one of her pieces is always a treat.

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Author: Imhiriel · ID: 702 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:44:45 Score: 4
Imhiriel brings such a sense of humanity to the earlier ages. (Not in
making the elves mortal, but in making the drama and the angst
approachable for this modern reader). And her prose is always beautiful
and displays a passion for finding just the right word to communicate an
emotion that I think Tolkien would approve of. This is especially
important in shorter pieces like drabbles, and it makes for a read that
really appeals to my inner language geek.
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Author: Lindelea · ID: 27 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:45:29 Score: 2
Lindelea is good at keeping a long tale interesting over several
chapters. Her hobbits are relaxing and fun, and I enjoy what I've read
of hers.
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Author: Llinos · ID: 25 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Poetry
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:46:36 Score: 2
Llinoss subtle and witty style is evident in both her poetry and prose.
Shes an author I consistently enjoy reading.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:47:05 Score: 9
Marigold has such a special way of writing hobbits. Somehow ordinary
moments of life leap off the page when she writes about them. She writes
the major characters well and I'm sure a lot of readers have enjoyed her
for that, but what has really captivated me about her writing is the way
she handles the mothers and sisters of the major characters.

What stands out among this year's writing is the way she presents
Pippin's mother worrying over him. That piece not only reflected her
missing Pippin but the situation in Tookland with the resistance of
Sharkey's men. And that's another of Marigold's talents. She definitely
knows the canon about hobbits better than anyone else I know, but she
doesn't allow it to overwhelm the piece. Then she adds her own
invention, the idea of Gandalf giving Pippin two special stars, and the
result is a situation that almost feels like something Tolkien would
have written. At a minimum I'm sure he approved.

Mari is an author who never fails to satisfy, and whose pieces have just
the right balance of light and dark to portray hobbits as Tolkien meant
them. Not frivolous children, but curiously resistant to despair.

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Author: Rabidsamfan · ID: 380 · Times: The Great Years [56]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:47:47 Score: 3
As always, RSF writes hobbits in a way that makes them feel real. In
both her stories and her essays she extrapolates from what Tolkien wrote
to create a tale or essay that feels genuine.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:48:20 Score: 10
Tanaqui is a long-time friend and beta reader, so it feels a bit odd to
be reviewing not something that she wrote but how she functions as an
author. I hold her writing abilities in the highest regard and always
like to read what she has written in the Tolkien fandom because she has
a knowledge of canon that transcends individual facts. Of course, once
you try to jump from facts that Tolkien explicitly wrote to broader
worldviews about how a culture would have operated you enter the realm
of interpretation. And I have not agreed with every assertion Tanaqui
has made, but I have been able to accept her inventions as something
Tolkien would have approved of; they are very much in the spirit and
letter of his Middle-earth.

Tanaqui uses an exquisite amount of physical detail in her works,
without her pieces feeling like an infodump. That's what I remember when
I think about her, how rich the world she creates is. She once joked
that in a drabble we are allowed seven words for a title, one hundred
for the body of the text -- and three thousand for the requisite
footnotes and forenotes documenting the historical precedents, canon
sources, and the thoughts that led up to the drabble. That really
summarizes her approach to writing in general: not that she uses too
many footnotes(!) but that for every bit she puts in, there's much more
going on below the surface. I'm not sure how much she'll appreciate a
comparison to movieverse, but her writing really does remind me of
WETA's dedication to crafting props that were works of art, even if they
barely made it on to screen or not at all. It creates a very rich
backdrop for her stories, and this reader loves it.

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Author: Rabidsamfan · ID: 380 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-29 15:51:35 Score: 3
As always, RSF writes hobbits in a way that makes them feel real. In
both her stories and her essays she extrapolates from what Tolkien wrote
to create a tale or essay that feels genuine.
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-11-29 16:58:01 Score: 5
Marta writes beautifully, and has a range to be envied in terms of
characters and genre. Her short story of Boromir's naming is a good
example: she writes sympathetically and well of both Aragorn and
Denethor, a real challenge. Her knowledge of canon shines.

I would also note that she has made a remarkable contribution to
fanfiction not only as a writer, but as a commentator and critic of the
work of others. I always pay special attention to Marta's comments on my
own and others' work, because she is so perceptive. Her critical
intelligence infuses her own work as well.


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Author: Shirebound · ID: 315 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 22:09:27 Score: 3
Shirebound was one of the first Tolkien fanfiction authors I ever read.I
am so glad that I did,as her stories are always inspiring,heartwarming
and uplifting and always leave the reader with a comfortable glow.
Shirebound's first love is the Hobbitts but she also writes a wonderful
Aragorn,depicting my favourite chararter as I imagine him.
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Author: Vistula the Dunadan · ID: 193 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 23:06:09 Score: 5
Vistula writes very dramatic stories, and ones that capture imagination
and emotions. She is one of the few who write occasional slash stories I
will read because they are either tastefully and considerately done, or
they are intentionally satirical and well-wrought. Her pacing is
excellent, her images intense, her characterizations not only consistent
with canon but also imaginative.

She is capable of effectively writing drama as well as humor, vignettes
and slightly longer tales. And her true depth of love for Samwise Gamgee
is marvelous.
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Author: Agape4Gondor · ID: 688 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 23:36:46 Score: 3
Agape writes marvelous fiction about the House of Hurin and its
denizens. I find her work sometimes AU, but consistent with the
characters we know; and her OCs are well presented and sympathetic.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 00:34:36 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt been lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.


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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 00:40:01 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt been lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]:
General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 00:41:03 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt been lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 00:42:33 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt been lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Genres: Romance [51]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 00:43:00 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt been lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 00:43:20 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt been lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 00:45:13 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt been lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 00:46:05 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt been lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 01:29:18 Score: 4
Marta usually employs a somber approach to Tolkien fanfiction, so it is
a delightful surprise, as well as an indication of her range as an
author, to see her flavor a tale with a bit of light, romantic mischief;
as in "Hidden Wonders", or the artistic sensuality of "Spirit of Fire".
She is also one of the most skilled drabblists in the ranks of Tolkien
fanfictioneers; able to pack a powerful emotional punch or capture a
Tolkien Moment in a snapshot, all in 100 words. And her longer pieces
are sophisticated and perceptive.

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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 01:31:18 Score: 3
Though Marta devotes a good portion of her writing time to the men of
Gondor; she branches out to the other beings of Middle-earth with equal
skill, painting pictures of Tolkien's varied characters, often in a
minimum of words, with subtlety and grace.
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 01:31:49 Score: 4
Marta usually employs a somber approach to Tolkien fanfiction, so it is
a delightful surprise, as well as an indication of her range as an
author, to see her flavor a tale with a bit of light, romantic mischief;
as in "Hidden Wonders", or the artistic sensuality of "Spirit of Fire".
She is also one of the most skilled drabblists in the ranks of Tolkien
fanfictioneers; able to pack a powerful emotional punch or capture a
Tolkien Moment in a snapshot, all in 100 words. And her longer pieces
are sophisticated and perceptive.

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Author: Branwyn · ID: 240 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 01:44:10 Score: 10
Branwyn is a multi-talented author, one of a select few who can convey
the commonplace details of life in Gondor and Rohan in a fashion that is
not pedantic, but part of the flow of her narrative. Yet she also
presents snapshots of various times and places that touch the heart, in
varying levels of intensity. She delivers the poignancy of a fatally ill
mother's interaction with her two young sons (the younger of whom does
not realize that his mother is ill) and the meeting of a young bride
with the spirit of her husband's long-dead mother through the discovery
and examination of the latter's household items and accounts - with
sweeping emotions presented through the little details, and words, of
everyday life.

Branwyn also can deliver the dramatic wallop of Imrahil's seething anger
as he bears his wounded nephew to the father who so coldly cast him into
battle, or the situation of one of Denethor's servants, after the Ring
War, isolated and marked by his obedience to madness.

Branwyn's minimalist prose reminds me uncannily of that of famed
fantasy/SF author Ursula K. LeGuin - the mingling of the elegant, spare
prose, with the sure knowledge of the detail in the times and places she
chronicles, to present the effect she desires in each work.

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Author: Llinos · ID: 25 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Poetry
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2006-11-30 02:13:53 Score: 5
There are a handful of authors that when I read their name beside a
title, I know it's going to be a good story (or poem), and of good
quality. Llinos is one of those authors. As I have said in another
review, Llinos makes it all look so easy, although I'm sure there was
some practice that got her to where she is today. But I think
ninety-nine percent of it is just pure, natural talent. She weaves her
stories and her poems with brilliant humour, riveting drama, and
nail-biting suspense. She has written a couple of stories that will
always be part of my list of all-time favourites. Looking forward to
more this coming year.
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Author: pipkinsweetgrass · ID: 157 · Genres: Romance [51]: Poetry
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2006-11-30 02:38:22 Score: 5
Poetry is yet another brilliant facet of the wonderfully talented
Pipkinsweetgrass. In all of her tales, she has a lovely way of making
Boromir come to life for me. Before I met this author, Boromir was just
another character who bit the dust, to me. Not any more. Pipkin has done
a remarkable job with bringing him to life, allowing me to see inside
his heart and soul--and whom better to write about his heart and soul
than someone who revels in his persona? Her love for the character
Boromir is displayed in all of her tales. Her stories contain just the
right measure of humour, drama, and angst. Nothing is over the top or
out of place. I always enjoy reading stories written by Pipkin!
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Author: Lindelea · ID: 27 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2006-11-30 02:52:06 Score: 3
Impeccable. To me, that word is synonymous with Lindelea. Her narrative
and diction are perfect, She uses humour as deftly as Aragorn wields his
sword. Someday when "real life" lets up, I would love nothing better
than to just browse through this author's library of stories.
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Author: Linda Hoyland · ID: 527 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 05:09:08 Score: 3
Linda Hoyland's stories of Aragorn and Faramir are full of a great deal
of love between the two Men as well as angst. She often adds in touches
from British royal traditions, additions which enhance the feelings of
reality in her tales. It's always a pleasure reading a new tale she's
written.
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Author: Linda Hoyland · ID: 527 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 05:09:35 Score: 3
Linda Hoyland's stories of Aragorn and Faramir are full of a great deal
of love between the two Men as well as angst. She often adds in touches
from British royal traditions, additions which enhance the feelings of
reality in her tales. It's always a pleasure reading a new tale she's
written.
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Author: EdorasLass · ID: 299 · Genres: Alternate Universe [22]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:30:43 Score: 3
EdorasLass has a real talent for writing engaging stories. I have only
recently discovered her PonyVerse and am just enchanted with the way she
has captured young Boromir and Faramir.
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Author: Bodkin · ID: 411 · Genres: Drama [107]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:35:12 Score: 2
Bodkin has a way of infusing everything that she writes with an amazing
amount of detail, whether it be a drabble or an epic. Her stories and
characters draw the reader in every time.
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Author: EdorasLass · ID: 299 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:38:18 Score: 3
EdorasLass has a real talent for writing engaging stories. I have only
recently discovered her PonyVerse and am just enchanted with the way she
has captured young Boromir and Faramir.
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Author: EdorasLass · ID: 299 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:39:55 Score: 3
EdorasLass has a real talent for writing engaging stories. I have only
recently discovered her PonyVerse and am just enchanted with the way she
has captured young Boromir and Faramir.
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Author: EdorasLass · ID: 299 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:40:40 Score: 2
EdorasLass has a real talent for writing engaging stories. I have only
recently discovered her PonyVerse and am just enchanted with the way she
has captured Boromir and Faramir.
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Author: EdorasLass · ID: 299 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:42:02 Score: 1
EdorasLass has a real talent for writing engaging stories no matter the
length.
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Author: iorhael · ID: 641 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:46:36 Score: 2
Iorhael always writes with such rich language and her stories are
stunningly haunting and beautiful.
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Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · ID: 182 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:49:11 Score: 2
Isabeau writes with realism and believabilty. Her characters are always
well written and her plotting engaging.
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Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · ID: 182 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:50:16 Score: 2
Isabeau writes with realism and believabilty. Her characters are always
well written and her plotting engaging.
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Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · ID: 182 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond
[31]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:50:41 Score: 2
Isabeau writes with realism and believabilty. Her characters are always
well written and her plotting engaging.
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Author: Inkling · ID: 283 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 06:52:14 Score: 2
Inkling is a skilful writer. She has a very enjoyable style and is
especially adept at capturing the emotions of her characters.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:00:55 Score: 2
Raksha is a dab hand at writing stories that never fail to satisfy,
whatever the genre or style.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]:
General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:01:55 Score: 2
Raksha is a dab hand at writing stories that never fail to satisfy,
whatever the genre or style.
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Title: House and Home · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 637
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 19:50:28 Score: 3
Ah, how I've loved this tale of how Pippin and Merry carefully steered
Frodo to the house at Crickhollow, devious Hobbits that they are. Nice
blend of humor and thought, as well as out and out manipulation of our
favorite Ringbearer.
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Title: Gundabad · Author: Salsify · Races: Dwarves · ID: 79
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 19:58:55 Score: 3
What a disappointment to find that the birthplace of Durin the Deathless
has not only been desecrated by Orcs, but its very Heart stolen and sent
to Sauron. A moment of triumph turns to grief and horror at the
knowledge that even the plinth on which it had rested has been boobytrapped.

Well written and full of exquisite imagery.
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Title: Instinct · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort
· ID: 965
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 20:08:44 Score: 3
They were only watching the fox kits with amusement and interest, but
the vixen had no way of knowing that. When Merry is bitten and goes into
shock, Pippin finds a way to return the love and caring lavished on
himself all these years.

A sweet story of the love between the cousins being reciprocated.
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Title: The Three Towers · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 113
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 20:16:41 Score: 3
Ah, a marvelous tale in which Frodo and Sam find themselves facing the
fear they knew in the tower of Cirith Ungol and moving through it.
Shirebound here gives us a marvelous tale of letting go the fear and bad
memories, and the rest of the Fellowship understand better what befell here.

So great a story.
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Title: Paradox of the Fourth Age · Author: Alassante · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Incomplete · ID: 106
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 20:20:52 Score: 5
This is one story I wish to see finished, for it's taking far too long
to get caught up with it.

What if Iluvatar and the Valar were able to stop Sauron's advances only
by recruiting Elrohir's wife to go back and guide Aragorn through the
Paths of the Dead instead of him going straight to Gondor from Rohan?
But if she does so, does she so manage to destroy her own existence? For
she is the daughter of Glorfindel, born in Aman....

A fascinating story of love recognized in spite of time travel and the
paradox of a future elleth returning to the time of the Fellowship, a
move that may lead to herself not being born.
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Title: Antiphon to Light · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Dwarves ·
ID: 155
Reviewer: Cuthalion · 2006-11-29 20:31:20 Score: 4
This is one of the most amazing tales I've ever read, and certainly the
best Gimli-story I know (and there are a handful of very good stories
out there). Not only does the author manage to give the readers a deep,
astonishing insight to Gimli's thoughts but also a decidedly "dwarvish"
perspective.Thevina gives "her" Gimli a wonderful voice:

[" "Vrâlsfire," Gimli repeated. "Diamond. Galadriel," he said, smoothing
over the syllables as if polishing the very gem." ]

I don't know what Tolkien had in mind when he created the dwarves, but
whatever it was, I have the distinct feeling that this particular Gimli
comes very, very close.

Beautiful and stunning. BRAVA!
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Title: The Letter · Author: Gryffinjack · Races: Hobbits: Post-Sauron's
Fall · ID: 955
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 20:59:11 Score: 3
I liked this very much. The four hobbits considering the letter,
especially Pippin's breathless recitation, was my favourite part. The
letter that he actually does write is perfect and I loved his parents'
reactions.
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Title: On The Road Home · Author: Ruby Nye · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey
Havens · ID: 889
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 20:59:34 Score: 1
This is a stunning story. The absence of dialogue works well to heighten
the emotion.
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Title: Cakes and Apples · Author: Ruby Nye · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 891
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:00:18 Score: 2
This was very sweet and very in character. I have no doubt that Merry
would have searched high and low until he found the means to grant
Pippin's wish. A lovely story!
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Title: How the Eorlings Ride · Author: NeumeIndil · Genres: Humor · ID: 213
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:01:19 Score: 3
Height isn't everything, as Merry proves in this story and he doesn't
even need any dialogue to do it! I enjoyed this very much and
appreciated seeing Merry portrayed as an adult. Well done!
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Title: Two Snippets · Author: Glassadar · Genres: Humor · ID: 983
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:01:45 Score: 1
Very well done Glassadar!
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Title: The River · Author: Indigo Bunting · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Incomplete · ID: 51
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:02:24 Score: 2
This is one of those rare stories that has the reader on the edge of
their seats. The Fellowship really work together here and I enjoyed all
of the characterisations.
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Title: A Whisper From Across the Sea · Author: Gryffinjack · Races:
Hobbits: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 223
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:03:05 Score: 2
What a wonderful possibility! It is perfect that Pippin instigates it;
he and Frodo have a connection I think and the scheme is bound to work
because of that.
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Title: Last Rites · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Drama · ID: 80
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:03:20 Score: 2
An excellent story, full of fascinating detail. Pippin's appearance was
wonderfully written; the dialogue was spot on and he was every inch a
hobbit.
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Title: Reaping · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits: Post-Sauron's
Fall · ID: 169
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:03:45 Score: 2
Very dark! A gruesome death even for Sandyman, but the hope at the end
was just the right finish.
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Title: The Unexpected Guest · Author: pippinfan88 · Genres: Humor: The
Shire · ID: 635
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:04:01 Score: 2
I loved that Pippin was of the opinion that the saucer wasn't big
enough. Poor Pip! The afternoon isn't turning out at all as he had hoped
it would.
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Title: Changes and Constancy · Author: Lily · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 263
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:04:24 Score: 1
Poor Frodo! It happens to the best of us though and he got off longer
than most!
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Title: Relics · Author: Nickey · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 620
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:04:57 Score: 3
Nickey is very good at writing tales set in ordinary everyday places and
turning them into something frightening. This is a chilling little tale,
made all the more so that it is innocent little Hammy that finds what
might have better remained hidden. It works well that it is Frodo's
memory that helps Sam to do the right thing.
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Title: First Night · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits: War of the
Ring · ID: 400
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-29 21:06:48 Score: 2
This is a very well written glimpse into Pippin's thoughts. His stream
of consciousness flows so naturally one could feel his loneliness in
this unfamiliar place.
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Title: The Three Towers · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 113
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 22:12:55 Score: 3
This is a darker story than Shirebound's usual work, but still
ultimately uplifting and heart warming. Frodo decides to revisit the
scene of his ordeal in the hope of coming to terms with it,accompanied
by his friends and an OC.The love and care these friends have for each
other gives the reader hope for the future of our heroes.
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Title: Swan Dance · Author: Rhapsody · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 797
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-11-29 22:13:45 Score: 4
I like Rhapsody's sense of drama and poetry. This drabble captures an
excruciating moment in the Kinslaying.

Rhapsody's sense of poetry is remarkable considering that she is not
writing in her native language. There are a few grammatical mistakes,
e.g., ["we are not bounded by blood"] should be ["we are not bound by
blood."] You should find someone to help you with these small problems,
which interfere with the reader's immersion in your created moment. I
mean this with all admiration, and I hope you take it that way!
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Title: Shelter · Author: Shirebound · Times: The Great Years:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 217
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 22:14:13 Score: 2
A heartwarming and delightful story about the Hobbits recovery after the
destruction of the ring and how everyone wants to help these unlikely
heroes.
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Title: The One · Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors ·
Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn · ID: 852
Reviewer: Inkling · 2006-11-29 22:38:14 Score: 4
For Aragorn to have beheld Faramir with the foresight of the Dúnedain,
long before his birth, is a lovely thought. As imagined by Linda and
Raksha, this recurring dream reflects all the hopes and fears of
Aragorn's quest to fulfill his destiny of kingship. The mutual
recognition of king and steward at the moment of Faramir's awakening is
a wonderful variation on a dramatic canon scene.
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Title: Earth, Water, Fire and Air · Author: Fileg · Genres: Drama:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Series · ID: 469
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 22:52:01 Score: 2
A beautiful and profound quartet of drabbles, using the sybolism of the
tarot and Tolkien's use of archetypes
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Title: Heart of the Horselord · Author: rynogeny · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 986
Reviewer: merbrat · 2006-11-29 22:56:16 Score: 5
I nominated this story because I have never enjoyed Major OC-AU epics,
but this one got me. It is Movie!Eomer, as are the others characters we
have already met. She has their "voices" ring true.
The OC characters (all of them) are written so well, you don't mind
their OC-ness. Most of her stories are set in Rohan, and are very worthy.
I think what makes these people so "real" are the small moments. Their
fears and doubts. The moments of humor in the face of challenge, to keep
sanity. I cared what happened to these peope.
She has been working on little sequel chapters, and they are still
wonderful!
-Merbrat aka mersigs2u
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Title: Hearth and Home · Author: Molly Littlefoot · Races: Hobbits · ID: 730
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 23:09:58 Score: 4
She waits for her husband to come home, worrying for him in the climate
imposed on the Shire by the surrounding Time of Troubles. She thinks of
how all are being impacted by the disappearance of her distant cousin
Frodo Baggins and his companions, wonders about the stories told by that
Bolger lad, yet finds herself at the end with the hope all will work out
well in spite of appearances.

A lovely, very Hobbity story with excellent characterizations.
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Title: The Standard-Bearer · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Men:
Vignette · ID: 716
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 23:16:38 Score: 3
This touching story explores the possibility that Halbarad had the
certain knowledge that he would die,that Tolkien hints at. His love and
loyalty towards Aragorn is deeply moving.This standard bearer will
follow his King to the very end.
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Title: Concerning Hobbit's Feet · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
The Shire · ID: 828
Reviewer: merbrat · 2006-11-29 23:19:52 Score: 2
That was just too cute! Don't let the "shortness" of this late review be
your guide whether or not to read this one! You will just have to "peek"
for yourself! Hee!
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Title: Roots and Branches · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 611
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 23:20:10 Score: 3
Faramir is uncomfortable as he hears Frodo and Sam enqure of Pippin what
happened to Lord Denethor; but finds that they appreciate Denethor was
not limited to his end, and he is not defined by his father's final madness.

A wonderful look at accepting the past by putting it into perspective.
-----------------------------------
Title: A bit of garden · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Hobbits: General
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 901
Reviewer: merbrat · 2006-11-29 23:24:34 Score: 1
Very sweet, and very easy to picture the moment.
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Title: Rest and Recreation · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 700
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 23:25:02 Score: 5
During his enforced idleness after the Council of Elrond Boromir finds
himself challenging a young Elven warrior no one else seeks to engage
during weapons practice. Then, after accepting repeated bouts and being
consistently beaten, if barely a time or two, he learns the identity of
his opponent, who compliments him on his own skill and expertise.

A wonderfully uplifting story. I found myself truly amused to see
Boromir's reaction to the truth. And, of course, the idea of battling
Boromir and legendary Elf lord is always a titillating one! Heh!
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Title: Lord of the Rings Limericks, Chapters One and Two · Author:
Llinos · Times: The Great Years: Poetry · ID: 759
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 23:25:33 Score: 2
These hilarious and well written limericks were just delightful. I
especially enjoyed the ones about Faramir and Eowyn.
-----------------------------------
Title: Gaiety in Gondor · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Humor:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 563
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 23:26:21 Score: 2
Oh, but how I loved this one! Yes, our friend Raksha can evoke a good
belly laugh! Thanks, Raksha.
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Title: Luck from the Ashes · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 142
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-29 23:34:19 Score: 3
The odd noise in the ruins of the House of the Stewards was NOT orcs or
ghosts, but a stray mother cat and her three kittens. Aragorn is
reassured as he sees the mastery over the fear of others for which
Faramir is famous extends to these four creatures, and the two Men learn
more about one another, their mutual trust reinforced.
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Title: Elements · Author: Pearl Took · Times: The Great Years · ID: 667
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2006-11-29 23:34:44 Score: 6
When I first read this lovely gem I was floored. I knew Pearl's talent
lay in storytelling and in telling them extremely well. But to me, this
story is more like poetry in the way it is almost a chant. Each stanza
steadily begins with the same phrases and in the same rhythmn, which
really makes it the beautiful piece of artwork that it is. Should I be
surprised? Pearl is an artist. She enthralls her readers by letting us
see through Gandalf's own eyes the beauty, or treachery of the elements
he has experienced first-hand. We even get a glimpse of that steadfast
and patient heart when we watch him respond to Pippin's innocence and
youth, giving the young hobbit hope when all else seems bleak. I would
have a hard time pinning down any of my favourites of Pearls, but this
is one of the top ten--it is different than any tale I had read before.
Very well done, Pearl!
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Title: Roots and Branches · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 611
Reviewer: merbrat · 2006-11-29 23:39:40 Score: 3
That was lovely. I love it when Samwise comes up with simple home-spun
common sense. Sometimes it is just a simple observation, that "happens"
to apply. Then there is this perfect analogy. You do wonder if Samwise
knew Faramir was approching. It was certainly what Faramir needed.
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Title: Pippin's Hands · Author: Pearl Took · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: The Shire · ID: 130
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2006-11-29 23:50:01 Score: 6
Yet another of Pearl Took's beautiful gems that make up that
ever-growing "necklace" of hers at SOA. Here we see Pippin reflecting
upon the journey that not only he made, but the journey his hands
travelled as well. And as most of us see this talented young hobbit
playing just about every musical instrument under the Sun, his hands and
their well-being are extremely important. His music is a reflection of
his soul, and so, again, it is necessary for Pippin assess if his hands
are still capable of the same skills pre-Quest; that his Journey and
horrific experiences would not hinder this vital form of expression. And
it's like he never left. His hands pick up his violin--his "old
friend"--where the youth left off before he disappeared from the Shire
with his friends. And all is now well with his soul. Excellent story, Pearl!
-----------------------------------
Title: Boats To Build · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 300
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-29 23:57:38 Score: 2
A touching glimpse of young Boromir and his maternal grandfather. One
can almost hear the gulls and smell the sea in this vivid encounter.
-----------------------------------
Title: Pride Goeth... · Author: Marigold · Races: Cross-Cultural: With
Hobbits · ID: 936
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-30 00:02:41 Score: 3
A truly delightful story in which Boromir is very patronising towards
the Hobbits soon after they depart from Rivendell. When he tries to
lecture them,he is swiftly but in his place, for we all know who blew
their horn when setting out on what was suposed to be a secret mission !
-----------------------------------
Title: Brothers at Heart · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Incomplete ·
ID: 451
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-30 00:08:45 Score: 3
This story provides a very vivid insight into Aragorn's early days as
captain of the Rangers. We learn how he meets his human family,overcomes
his grandmother's reservations and melts her sad heart,and befriends
Halbarad.
The writer shows a series of events which teach young Aragorn valuable
lessons and foreshadow the great king he will one day become.
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Title: Lord of the Rings Limericks, Chapters One and Two · Author:
Llinos · Times: The Great Years: Poetry · ID: 759
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 01:12:45 Score: 2
Excellently crafted and Laugh-out-Loud funny limericks. My favorites
were those of Faramir, Denethor and Galadriel, but all are worth
reading. Well Done, Llinos!
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Title: Ddraigspelt  An Orc Love Poem · Author: Llinos · Genres:
Romance: Poetry · ID: 879
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2006-11-30 01:23:24 Score: 4
Here is a lovely bit of poetry reminding us that beauty (or lust!) is in
the eyes of the beholder, whether Man, Elf, Dwarf, Hobbit...or Orc. The
author's uninhibited and lovely sense of humour is woven into this
absolutely original piece of art--I could tell she had fun writing it
because I had fun reading it! Llinos possesses an amazing gift for
poetry, an unlimited well of magical words to amuse, to make us smile,
and to laugh. I certainly did.
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Title: Lord of the Rings Limericks, Chapters One and Two · Author:
Llinos · Times: The Great Years: Poetry · ID: 759
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2006-11-30 01:46:28 Score: 4
I know I've said time and again, but I am really amazed by this
enormously talented author. I'm sure it all comes with practice, but she
makes it all look so effortless. Of chapter one, my most favourite was
Frodo's limerick, and in chapter two, I loved the one about the Old
Bloke--that was too funny! Llinos has a witty rhyme for just about every
character in the book, and it's all in good fun.
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Title: The Summons · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: The Fellowship · ID: 254
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2006-11-30 02:16:34 Score: 3
This was a beautifully written and moving story about Aragorn and
Boromir's uneasy relationship,though it also has moments of humour.
I think the Valar always intented Faramir to be Aragorn's Steward,somehow.
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Title: The Eyes of Boromir · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Genres: Romance:
Poetry · ID: 632
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2006-11-30 02:33:46 Score: 9
When I first read this, my heart went out to the poor greiving serving
wench who personifies so many broken young hearts over modern day
celebrities. Boromir was no everyday celebrity, though. The very lives
of the people of Gondor rested on the broad shoulders of one man:
Boromir. His fate, however, and though more a sacrifice, was to truly to
guard the precious lives of two small warriors who valiantly tried to
fend off foes more than twice their height. I loved this beautiful poem
because it personalizes her pain, although there was probably more
hearts broken than her own. This poem serves as the backdrop of how this
lass mourned his death.

This is yet another brilliant facet of the wonderfully talented
Pipkinsweetgrass. She has a lovely way of making Boromir come to life
for me. Before I met this author, Boromir was just another character who
bit the dust, to me. No more. Pipkin has done a remarkable job with
bringing him to life, allowing me to see inside his heart and soul--and
whom better to write about his heart and soul than someone who revels in
his persona? Her love for the character Boromir is displayed in all of
her fics, and this beautiful poem is just one lovely example.
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Title: A Precious Gift · Author: Isil Elensar · Genres: Drama: First Age
Elves · ID: 250
Reviewer: Alassante · 2006-11-30 02:46:06 Score: 7
Isil has written a beautiful little story here of the birth of Fingolfin
to Finwe and Indis. Its often talked about the hardship between Feanor
and his stepmother and half brothers but rarely does someone show Indis
and Finwe in such a pleasing intimate glimpse of a happy time between
them. I really liked this. I am always fond of the little side stories
about normal every day lives that don't involve the wars and battles but
show the people of Tolkien's world in a very realistic way - the birth
of a child is a perfect example of this. A very sweet story and I liked
the little touches she added, like both mother and father counting the
fingers and toes and an Elven king worrying about a tiny baby and his
wife after losing his first wife (fading away after the birth of
Feanor). A beautiful and touching story from Isil who despite the fact
she hasn't experienced childbirth personally - really got inside the
head of the mother.
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Title: Cloves and Kisses · Author: Bill The Pony · Races: Hobbits:
Pre-Quest · ID: 912
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2006-11-30 02:47:48 Score: 3
Sam, just turned twenty, discovers some of the advantages of being a
tween. Like kissing girls... and Frodo! Bill the Pony manages to
incorporate details about the Shire that feel as if they've always been
there, traditions and expectations that fit in beautifully. She also
manages to capture the mixed feelings of adolescence.
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Title: Spirit of Fire · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Fixed-length
ficlet · ID: 196
Reviewer: Alassante · 2006-11-30 02:52:49 Score: 5
Wow - this was a great little drabble and the first thing I have read by
Marta. So much conveyed in just one hundred words. The view of Feanor is
erotic and powerful and everyone knows I have a slight, okay extremely
big, Feanorian obsession so I like to see my favorite elves in a sexy
light. Its always wonderful to see ANY fiction with Nerdanel - poor
dear. Seeing her in this intimate encounter with her husband without
thinking about the insanity that would soon occur is wonderful. I'd love
to see a full length fiction about relationship from the beginning with
Nerdanel and Feanor. I guess I better find out if Marta already has one
written first though but if not - HINT HINT!
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Title: Son of Finwë · Author: Minuialeth · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 193
Reviewer: Alassante · 2006-11-30 03:04:19 Score: 10
I love anything about Fingolfin and I also love Minuialeth's poetic
writing so you put the two of them together and you cannot lose. The
infamous last ride of Fingolfin is a true story of bravery, madness,
sorrow, loss, tragedy and just gut wrenching angst. I think Minuialeth
captured every aspect of it and so much more. Her vivid description puts
you right there - inside his head as he is overcome with madness and
even HE knows he is mad. The visions of death and torment he has seen
playing over and over again in his mind until he is almost seduced by
death. Her writing is so fluid, even her non-poetry reads as beautifully
as one. Minuialeth has shown a side of his decision to ride out and meet
Morgoth head on that fits perfectly with his background. He was never
one to avoid a face to face confrontation and even though his action was
unbelievably stupid and ended so tragically for him, you cannot help but
think of him as such a heroic and powerful elf to stand up to Morgoth.
Very few did it. Even fewer did it and lived to tell about it.
Unfortunately Fingolfin was one that did not survive it but his death
was befitting a Noldo High King - fighting for his people and
Minuialeth's drabble showed that in a way that makes tears well up in my
eyes even now after having read it a few times before.
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Title: The Acceptable Sacrifice · Author: Larner · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Frodo or Sam · ID: 775
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 03:09:40 Score: 4
An ambitious and meticulously detailed story chronicling Frodo's life
from his awakening in Ithilien after Sauron's Fall to his eventual
recovery in the Blessed Realm.

Hobbit aficionados should enjoy the excellent depiction of postWar life
in the Shire, and Frodo's family relationships.

Aragorn's assumption of the Kingship is also well-written and one of my
favorite parts of the story.
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Title: Fos' Almir · Author: Bill The Pony · Races: Hobbits: Post-Grey
Havens · ID: 913
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2006-11-30 03:13:37 Score: 4
Bill the Pony can write internal conflict better than most people, and
in this story, she outdoes herself. Sam comes to Valinor, at long last,
hoping for many things, including a resolution the love he still bears
Frodo, and finds uncertain of himself despite all that he has done.
Frodo is changed and unchanged, still young -- and Sam is old, and like
to stay that way. Fos Almir is a story of choices, of wounds healed and
unhealed, and in the end, a story which will stay with you for a long time.
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Title: Under the Ympe Tree · Author: Bill The Pony · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Sauron's Fall · ID: 914
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2006-11-30 03:14:00 Score: 3
Bill the Pony tackles Gaffer Gamgee's point of view in this story, and
does it with a sure hand. You can hear the old hobbit speaking, not only
about what's happening in the Shire with Sam and Frodo gone, but also
about his choices and regrets over the love that he sees Sam giving
Frodo. Yet, in some ways, this is still hope.
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Title: House with the Cedar Shingles: Ramson Spring · Author: Cuthalion
· Times: Fourth Age and Beyond: Gondor · ID: 987
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2006-11-30 03:14:32 Score: 4
Confessions first -- this one was written for me, so I'm bound to like
it -- but I'll take any excuse to visit Belegcuthalion's "Winter Fire"
universe. Noerwen remains one of my favorie original characters in all
LotR fanfic. In this story Sam, Rosie, and Elanor meet Noerwen in
Ithilien during their visit south when Elanor is coming to be one of
Arwen's retinue. The one thing I missed in "Winter Fire" was Sam having
a chance to tell his story, and here, at last, we are rewarded for our
patience.
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Title: Shattered Twilight · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: First Age
Elves · ID: 247
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 03:17:04 Score: 3
A vivid last look at Maeglin's obsessive love for his cousin - a 'sharp
glance' at his feelings from the time he first saw the she-elf, to this
moment at the very end of his life. Sad and poignant, with just the
right tone of unrepentent passion.
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Title: Dawn of a New Age: First Age · Author: elliska · Times: First Age
and Prior: Incomplete · ID: 406
Reviewer: Alassante · 2006-11-30 03:18:06 Score: 10
What can I possibly say about Elliska's writing that I haven't gushed
about to her personally. Thanks to 2005 MEFA I was exposed to her
writing and her Thranduil became the one I compared all others to. In
her Interrupted Journey's series she explored the Thranduil/Legolas
lifetimes but there were little hints of the Oropher tale in it. Dawn of
a New Age is the tale of the Sindar and Oropher that she hinted at. Now
even though I know this will portray my favorite elves badly (the Noldo)
I will read every word she writes. Unfortunately the Noldo could do the
first series of Middle Earth's Elves Behaving Badly and unless she
rewrites history - she cannot fix that. Not that she would - Elliska has
ALWAYS been firmly in the Sindar/Silvan camp and her love for them
really shines through in everything she writes. Her battle scenes are
probably the best I have ever read in fanfiction. I personally cannot
write a battle scene so I always read hers in awe. She writes them so
well without being all ewww about the gore as some writers do. Hell
she's a better battle planner than I bet some of the actual elves were.
I hope she continues to write this story very soon. I love the first
chapter and have waited patiently for the next one. Who knows - maybe
she'll convince me to like the Sindar more. She convinced me that
Thranduil was a kick ass elf!

[Oh and excuse any spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc errors in this
review - she's also my beta so I cannot write without her. See Elliska -
I even put this is brackets so you wouldn't have to.]
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Title: Ships Passing · Author: Marta · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 302
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:55:13 Score: 4
I always felt like Halbarad got a short shrift in LOTR and stories like
this give me a certain sense of satisfaction. At least there are others
who value a good man who stands steadfast behind those who take the
light of the foreground. The parallel between Halbarad and Faramir is
nicely drawn, particularly as you've framed it in the ways in which they
are different. I think that that use of "white space" or "silence"
around those things they have in common is a device well-used to
strengthen the power of your piece.
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Title: Benison · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 67
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:55:27 Score: 8
Stories like this always make me wonder about what Tolkien missed, being
the orphaned child that he was. That continuity that living memory
provides, someone who knows what you were like when you were first born,
what your first words were, in what ways you reflected those who went
before you, all the myriad little things that flesh out your
understanding of your history. I wonder what kind of hole it left in his
thinking and if this is why he left so many gaps like this one to be
filled. But at the tenderness evident in your piece, I am not left to
wonder at the loving attitude that shines through in Tolkiens letters
to his sons.

I love that you chose to bring that continuity to life through simple
womanly things. Its those everyday things whose power that we
underestimate. In a day when there are no pictures or videos, it would
be those little things that ground a person in the context of family.
How lovely that your insight led you to perceiving the need for the
things that hold the memories of Finduilas touch and bring her and her
memories to life for Eowyn.
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Title: Do Not Think Me A Dream · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor
· ID: 40
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:55:42 Score: 8
Such bittersweetness and heart-yearning to this piece. It feels as if
Finduilas has made peace with the sacrifice being the Steward's wife
will ask of her. In a sense, she is just as much of a warrior as her
sons, though in her own way, fighting a battle of overwhelming odds
until it has asked all of her. Such are the things that tie the mother
to her sons. We know so much about Denethor's influence on Faramir and
Denethor, but here you've given us a tantalizing glimpse of what their
mother added to their personalities. Instead of a retiring hot-house
flower, you portray her as having the patience of a stone tower that
stands upon the top of the and though worn, weathers all turbulence to
provide shelter for those within. Was it not just Denethor that gave
Boromir and Faramir the will to persevere though the cost to them was
dear? Or did they learn deep and old lessons about love and what we do
for those to whom we are bound?

I think this piece asks just as many questions as it answers, which
makes it a lovely doorway into a world possibilities and so the best
kind of experience for a reader.
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Title: Respite · Author: Nesta · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 750
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:55:56 Score: 4
I always get the sense of a restrained tenderness in Faramir in his
dealings with Eowyn, as if he wanted to do much more but out of respect
for Eowyns unreadiness held himself back. We get to see very little of
what became of that tenderness as it was allowed to bloom, so I think it
makes this piece all the more satisfying. Faramirs silliness is mild
and at ease, free to be whatever his heart desires. Eowyns response is
ever pragmatic but deeply loving. You draw a very lovely picture in such
few words.
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Title: Planning Ahead · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men · ID: 84
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:56:16 Score: 10
OH! It's *this* one!

Well, I am sorely tempted to NOT leave a review. Seriously. Where is the
sequel? Hmm? Okay, so maybe it was a vague, kind of, "well, perhaps if
the muse strikes and I can get Gilraen to talk to me to stave off a
virtual uprising on the YahooHA list" kind of promise. STILL, vows under
extreme duress notwithstanding, poor Gilraen has remained a precociously
sparkling 5 year old little lady and Arathorn a muzzle-headed heir to
the Chieftainship for the past 11 months, 24 days, and 5 hours. Okay, so
the 5 hours is an estimate. Math is not my strong suit and I'm never
quite confident of my attempts to compensate for time differences.

*pout*

*sigh*

Shall I be content? Indeed, I have a loving portrayal of the brilliant
confidence that is a 5 year old (excuse me, 5 and 1/2 year old, my
pardon) who believes herself in every way to be equal to the grown son
of the Lord of the Dunedain. And, surprisingly, she may just be right.
And, too, I have been given a grumpy and befuddled heir who I know shall
find himself more, not less, besotted by the end of it, though not by
wine. By what creative spark would anyone have thought to put them
together? Not I. Such a shot out of the dark so that the reader's joy of
it, caught all unawares, is the sharper.
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Title: Prison · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 794
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:56:32 Score: 3
So many strong characters that Tolkien developed and yet left so much
about their experience unexplored. Youve got Eomers intensity,
powerful physical presence, and irrepressible determination capture in a
nice, tight package, here. Mmmm.mmm. Id hate to be that guard once
Eomer gets out of there.
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Title: Shadow of Himself · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Post-Grey Havens · ID: 853
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:56:55 Score: 10
Hee! I get to read this *again*.

I think I read this first before having gotten to know you more as a
person. Reading it again, it strikes me just how effortlessly you are
able to create a vivid and complex portrayal of characters and
interactions. Sean Bean as Boromir just absolutely LEAPS off the page.
He is noble and human and feels things intensely. Gimli is not just
gruff, but loyal and determined and feels his attachments deeply.
Legolas is as strong as a coil of steel, nothing soft and
overly-feminized about him, but incredibly smooth and elegant. And there
you are.

When first I had encountered this piece, I thought, Wow, what a
carefully crafted work of love. And surely it is, because I have since
come to know more of your fondness for Boromir, but what I didnt know
upon my first reading is that you do this all the time. ALL the time,
each one is a carefully crafted piece of work that is turned out in such
a way as to look as effortless as a rose coming into bloom. I am sharply
reminded of Baryshnikovs address to Fred Astaire at the Lifetime
Achievement Awards. To quote him, [I have been invited to say something
about how dancers feel about Fred Astaire," Baryshnikov said. "It's no
secret. We hate him. The problem with Astaire is that he's everywhere --
moving. You know, you give your own performance and receive applause and
you think maybe, just maybe, it was successful, and you go home ... and
turn on the television to relax and there he is. Making you feel nervous
all over again. ] And so, I pour my heart out in a story, refine and
tweak until it wont bear any more, and then I read pieces like this and
think, to paraphrase Baryshnikov, [I cant read stories like this and
not know that I should have been in another business." ]
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Title: Heirlooms · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Remembering · ID: 72
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:57:08 Score: 10
There you go, again, tugging on the heartstrings. I really love the
parallels in this piece. There are so many that are available to the
reader on the surface, the two mothers, both indulging in the sensual
pleasure that is loving their children, and husbands that give a small
thing of comfort from their past to their children. It ties them all
together.

But, at the same time, beneath all of this lies deeper parallels,
threads which come together in a theme of loss. Both mothers have left
home and family behind and the gifts of the toy horses were given by a
queen who knows that state intimately as well. Both horses were carried
by children who then passed them on to younger family members when they
had need of comfort, and, sadly, were then lost themselves when grown.
What do we do when we lose home and family, those things that ground and
complete us? What do we do when our parents die, our siblings die, and
the world changes around us? Does it stop there? And the answer you give
us is no. You dont stop loving, you dont give up and lock yourself
away. The way you cope with loss is to rework it, take a small part of
it and make it into something beautiful, whether it is something as
grand as a piece of art, or a smile and feeling of comfort to a small child.
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Title: To Labour and to Wait · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 838
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:57:22 Score: 10
I have a vague memory of Tolkien lamenting his inability to bring to
life the internal workings of his characters. (I know Im remembering it
badly but, no, not even for you, Gwynnyd, am I plowing through the
Letters to find the reference.) In a sense, I think it is an accurate
assessment of his strengths and limits. So much of what we know about
the characters from LOTR is divined through accumulated experience with
their actions. Participating in their journey evokes strong emotional
reactions from the reader, but it takes time and thought to articulate
just why this do so. As a modern reader, this often leaves me hungry for
a peek into the thoughts, emotions and memories of Tolkiens characters.
I find it terribly intimidating to attempt it as a fanfic writer but I
think youve captured the internal workings of Aragorn and Legolas very
nicely here.

Here youve given us a series of fragments of a mans life that
illustrate his emotional growth: from a young mans over-confidence in
his self-worth and resentment that others do not share the same
perception fully, to a determination to grow and become something more
than what he is, to the wisdom of experience that has taught him his
limits. And all accomplished without beating us readers over the head
with it. Its a wonderful chance to peek inside Aragorns head and see
the many layers that make up what is actually a very complex man.

And then, I come upon this...

[Grandsire, how do you bear it? Aragorn sent the thought up towards the
distant star. By the grace of Manwë, are you content to do what you
must, or do you curse in the long dark between the stars the sundering
from Elwing and all that you held dear?]

... and any eloquence I can summon comes to a complete and uttter halt.
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Title: The Standard-Bearer · Author: Thevina Finduilas · Races: Men:
Vignette · ID: 716
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:57:35 Score: 5
Oh, good! A fic about Halbarad. We have so few hints about just what the
Northern Dunedain are all about in LOTR that Im not sure if I feel
regret at Tolkiens neglect or doubly intrigued by the sense of a world
seen only in glimpses. I think youve captured just that quiet and
unassuming courage, steadfastness and loyalty that I find so compelling
about the northern kingdom. How could they have tolerated Aragorns
absence? How could they have sacrificed so much in a cause greater than
themselves? And I think I find it very nicely answered in this:

["I am with you, and would be nowhere else."]
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Title: King's Man · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Times: The Great
Years: Vignette · ID: 197
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:57:49 Score: 5
Now *that* is a gap that just begs to be filled. Here we have Aragorn,
so often stern of voice and grim of face, and then, suddenly, upon the
plains of Rohan he is running toward this man and shouting for joy. Who
*is* this man, this Halbarad, that the usually solemn heir of Isildur
grabs him up in a powerful embrace?

Perhaps this is why I find fics such as you've written here so
satisfying. I love how you fill in the unknown with just little hints
and glimpses of a long and deeply attached friendship. I get the sense
that, though Aragorn may have no physical home, he definitely has a
place in this man's heart where he can feel at home. And that's a lovely
gift both for Aragorn and for your readers.
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Title: The Road Not Taken · Author: Branwyn · Races: Men: Vignette · ID: 104
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:58:19 Score: 6
Boromirs journey to Rivendell is a gap that seems to beg to be filled.
It can only have been full of mystery, discovery, and danger, and yet a
challenge to portray in words because of the lone nature of his journey.
I think youve captured that tension between mystery, hope and an
underlying current of danger very nicely here. On the surface you give
us a shimmering late fall day and two men in high spirits. But lurking
below the surface the uneasiness of the animals and the magic of a road
seldom trod that splits the forest in two. And what a wonderful twist,
and well-used, that the call of the swan is ill fate and Boromir
answers it with such clearly felt bravado. No matter what the end, he
would go and go facing his fate with a pride and courage few other men
could match.
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Title: When The Days Are Warm · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Drama: The
Steward's Family · ID: 145
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:58:33 Score: 3
Oh my. Such heartbreak beneath this small moment. Faramir trying his
best, as a young child will, to cheer his mother, but with just too high
of a pitch to his effort. And the Boromir, afraid of something he cannot
clearly name and masking it with irritation. Nicely captured.
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Title: Red River · Author: Altariel · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Gondor · ID: 82
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:58:45 Score: 10
I have to admit that I have loved this piece since you first posted it.
Sadly, I have never told you so, knowing what a treasure it is to see
your work through others' eyes.

We are introduced to so many Aragorns, Aragorn the healer, the lover,
the warrior, the friend., but seldom do we get to see Aragorn the
politician. Ever more seldom do we get to see him take defeat. Yet, it
these moments, more than any success, that reveal the quality of a
person. From Faramir's actions, I get the clear message that he expects
no prevaricating, no spin, but for his king to face a hard truth about
what he has allowed to happen. The story Raksandhar tells is a pointed
one and I hear echoes of Faramir's declaration of his hopes for Minas
Tirith to be ['not even a kind mistress of willing slaves." ]

And even more than the above, I am very pleased that you leave the
confrontation open-ended. There are no easy answers. It is all about how
you face the struggle. In his letters, Tolkien once said that he created
Aragorn as a model of a leader worth following. Here I think you have
expanded very nicely on what he started. It's not that I want those who
lead to not make mistakes, but I want them to struggle with their
mistakes and failings and doubts, so as to keep themselves true. So your
piece creates this yearning in me for leaders like Aragorn, who surround
themselves with counselors like Faramir and allow themselves to be
challenged, and comforted that perhaps I am not the only one who thinks
so, too.
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Title: First Impressions · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 806
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:59:11 Score: 3
Hmm. Yes, it must have been a bit of a shock for Aragorn when he first
came among the Dunedain. He was just young enough to have difficulty
seeing below the surface, at least at first. Nicely captured. And LOL! I
love your Halbarad. A man of the earth with all its attendant desires
and limitations.
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Title: Consolation · Author: EdorasLass · Races: Men: Gondor · ID: 47
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:59:34 Score: 10
This is just tooo cute.

How Tolkien could have give us so many hints as to the quality of the
brothers relationship and yet never shown the two of them together is
one of those enduring mysteries of the writing process. Intellectually,
I know why, because Faramir only popped into existence later, after
Boromirs departure on Amon Hen and Tolkien was not a man given to
anything other than straight forward timelines, forging ahead tireless
across the march of the story arc. But, still, emotions are wayward
things and reason a poor substitute for satisfaction.

Perhaps that is one source of the deep pleasure I take in the bittys
stories. So many small things must have played out in the brothers
relationship to give it the deep, complex, and steadfast relationship
they had as adults. It is a difficult thing to translate an adult
personality down the developmental course and yet give the
child-characters a vibrancy of their own, and yet you consistently
achieve that. And here, you give the reader a glimpse into the
development of Boromirs role as protector and buffer from the outside
world. He translates the adult expectations into something that the
young Faramir can understand and then gives him the tools to meet those
expectations. Such a loving relationship so subtly portrayed. Though the
context of their loss is deeply sorrowful, its the tension between this
grief and the beauty of their love and care for each other that is the
power of this piece and you play it out well.

And this: [But it hurts right now, was Faramirs choked reply.] of
course, gets me everytime.
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Title: Lost · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 260
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 03:59:49 Score: 3
Ahhhh, man! What a lost opportunity! It reminds me a bit of the lost
opportunity for Gollum's redemption and makes me wonder just what
happened to Bill later that soured him so deeply. Very nice reveal at
the end.
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Title: Call yourself Thorongil · Author: Nilmandra · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 731
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 04:00:04 Score: 4
LOL! I love how business-like Gandalf is in your piece. "Alright, young
man, go first to Rohan, I have an introduction ready for you. And, don't
forget, you'll need a pass from Thengel to get into Gondor, because
Yavanna knows, you'd really have problems with Ecthelion's son if I
introduced you there. By the way, you'll need an alias. How does
Thorongil sound?" Then gives Aragorn and boot to wake him up and off he
goes. He's never one to mince words, is he?
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Title: Oasis · Author: Radbooks · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 259
Reviewer: Anoriath · 2006-11-30 04:00:19 Score: 2
Hmm. It makes me wonder just how many times Aragorn's life hung balanced
upon the end of such a tenuous thread as this.
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Title: The Parting Gift · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age and Prior:
Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 948
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 04:37:42 Score: 4
The thought that the silver harp carried and played by Elrond when Frodo
and Sam joined the party headed for the Grey Havens was given him by
Maglor as Maglor's parting gift is such a wonderful one. And, although
Maglor may not return to Aman, yet his gift will go there, bearing the
memory of the great Elven bard back to his birthplace.

A wonderful drabble. Imhiriel's ability to set a scene so delicately in
so few words is so admirable.
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Title: Farewell Lullaby · Author: Armariel · Races: Hobbits: Poetry ·
ID: 719
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 04:59:03 Score: 4
Armariel has a wonderful command of language. Each of her poems is like
a marvelously intricate building, constructed by different words and
lines. The words almost sing on the page.

This poem is sad, poignant and lovely, conveying Frodo's love for both
the infant Elanor and her father. His willing the baby to be his
messenger to Sam in terms of love and happiness is appropriate, and
beautifully expressed.
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Title: At the Rising of the Moon · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 846
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 05:00:14 Score: 5
When Eowyn insists that the Mettare celebration won't be complete
without the inclusion of mistletoe, Aragorn and Faramir find themselves
seeking the herb and then getting permission to gather it. But the lady
who has mistletoe growing in her orchard is herself from Rohan, and
insists the mistletoe be harvested at the rising of the moon, using the
proper rituals. This involves Aragorn taking the role of the Sacred
King, needing to use a special blade and sacrificing part of his dignity....

A humorous and yet at the same time somewhat disturbing tale. A
wonderful tale for the coming season, of course.
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Title: Theme and Variations · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 784
Reviewer: DrummerWench · 2006-11-30 05:01:42 Score: 5
If you like Jane Austen and love Fantasy of Manners, then this delicious
tale is for you. Gandalfs Apprentice's story follows Faramir from just
after the close of the war to the arrival of Arwen as he negotiates his
way between the perils posed by an officious aunt, a royal chamberlain
troubled by his wayward new sire, and the rather scruffy intimates of
the king. It gives a believable and funny account of the upper crust
during the earliest days of the restored kingdom.

Besides Faramir, his aunts and uncle Imrahil, we see most of the
fellowship, a passel of dubious Northern vagabonds, and Aragorn's foster
brothers. Do yourself a favor and add this to your must-read list.

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Title: The One · Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors ·
Races: Men: Featuring Aragorn · ID: 852
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 05:02:51 Score: 3
Aragorn foresaw the appearance of his future Steward for the South
Kingdom several times over the years; but it took a great long time for
him to actually find the young Man.

A lovely look at foresight and destiny.
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Title: The White Tree · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 94
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 05:05:23 Score: 3
In the excitement of finally finding the new sapling of the White Tree,
Aragorn doesn't think to advise Faramir. For Faramir, the shock of
seeing the dead Tree removed was an affront. But in the end the Tree is
renewed, as is the relationship between the two of them.
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Title: Ada Knows Best · Author: mistycracraft · Genres: Adventure · ID: 290
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-30 05:19:04 Score: 4
I enjoyed the action and the adventure in this story and the fact that
Estel disobeyed Elrond and followed his brothers. Sometimes he is
portrayed as a perfect child and it's nice to see him as a normal young
man at times. Of course, the cost of his disobedience had both good
things and bad things that went with it. He was able to help his
brothers, but he did learn the realities of what fighting and,
especially killing, a living being, even an orc was all about. It was
not an easy thing. It was well written.
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Title: Call To Arms · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Humor: Fixed-Length
Ficlet · ID: 857
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2006-11-30 05:19:30 Score: 3
Call to Arms is a curious drabble... it starts out seriously, with the
usual, everyday sort of stirring speech intended to rouse the bad-guy
troops... and then turns our expectations upside-down into a
mind-bendingly unexpected situation, which is more common among
schoolchildren than Nazgûl...

I got a good, hearty laugh out of it... well done!
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Title: Thief of Hearts: How Pippin Stole Merrys Heart · Author:
pipkinsweetgrass · Races: Hobbits: Children · ID: 918
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 05:21:14 Score: 4
For those who write Pippin-and-Merry stories, the tale of how Merry was
first introduced to his infant cousin is almost obligatory. This one is
very sweet, and certainly Merry's heart has been stolen from the moment
he first encounters the baby lying in his cradle at the
naming/presentation day ceremony. One can easily see how the two will
become so very close in the end.

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Title: The Hardest Lesson · Author: mistycracraft · Genres: Drama:
Pre-Fellowship · ID: 231
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-30 05:24:46 Score: 4
This was a well written, moving story about the most difficult things a
healer has to face - the death of a patient. When you are young, as
Estel is in this story, it is even more difficult. I'm sure that being
raised by elves would not help either. I thought this story captured
both Estel's internal struggles and Elrond's wisdom as he help him work
through his pain very well. I would highly recommend it.
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Title: Rest and Recreation · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 700
Reviewer: Radbooks · 2006-11-30 05:30:37 Score: 4
I thoroughly enjoyed this glimpse of Boromir and his time in Imladris as
he waited for the Fellowship to leave for the quest. I'm sure that it
was a difficult time for him as he would have been the only man there
after Aragorn left to scout for the Nazgul. The sparring with Glorfindel
was wonderfully done and something that fit his personality very well -
the fact that he never gave up. Very well written, as are all of your
stories.
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Title: Those Who Challenge the Dead · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 858
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2006-11-30 05:36:46 Score: 5
Eärnur's brashness and Baldor's regret are illustrated so clearly and
memorably in this excellent pair of drabbles. There are so many things I
like about them:

They illuminate a common thread; I enjoy seeing different events or
different POVs tied together with a common theme.

They display a true respect for the language - each of the words is
precise and evocative, necessary when only 100 words are available.

They explore lesser-known canon events, and are even accompanied by
canon quotes...

I *thoroughly* enjoyed reading these... Very nicely done!
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Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races: Elves:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Featuring Legolas or Thranduil · ID: 859
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2006-11-30 05:49:11 Score: 4
Ah, I really liked this drabble when I first saw it, and even reading it
again it evokes an emotional response. When I read the Old Forest part
of FoTR, Old Man Willow seemed like such a creepy creature.... and
scary, and dangerous (who'd want to be buried inside a tree?).

But Legolas was not scared, and his magic overcame the rotten karma of
an ancient tree... what could be more satisfying?

The language in this double-drabble is evocative, and the result is
heart-warming... well done!


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Title: Assume, Confuse, Consume, Amuse · Author: pipkinsweetgrass ·
Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 648
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 06:10:39 Score: 4
Ahh, when the muse visits Pipkin and her husband, it tends to do so as a
trio of Pippin, Merry, and her Boromir. And so enjoyable a trio they are.

Athletic cups, Denethor's jealousy of Thorongil, Pippin's feelings of
guilt over Gandalf's death...all are covered here. And the Hobbits learn
about computer girlie sites, raccoons, and Chinese take out, including
deep fried mushrooms, of course.

Sweet; but her Boromir definitely AIN'T Book Boromir!
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Title: Fair Trade · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 900
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:54:05 Score: 2
This was gorgeous, and tells us so much about Faramir's character and
why he was so beloved.
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Title: Show his quality · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 875
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 08:05:09 Score: 3
Faramir's excellent leadership qualities really shine through here. He
does what he must for the good of all his men, not just this ill-suited
recruit, and tries to lessen the boy's disappointment by showing him a
task within his capabilities. This mirrors Aragorn's actions on the ride
to the Black Gate and I enjoyed this similarity between them.
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Title: Sweet Woodbine · Author: Bodkin · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond ·
ID: 864
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:18:17 Score: 5
The desires of a wood elf prince seem to be thwarted as the father of
his beloved bears no love for him, and all expect him to hold the same
prejudices against her for her relationship to Feanor's wife as those
who have dwelt in Aman for all their lives tend to know.

But Legolas is already accustomed to thwarting Elven conventions. After
all, his brothers of the heart have included Men and a pestilential
Dwarf, after all. And in the end he will win his fair lady in spite of
all else, and will do well by the scattered Sindar across Aman and Tol
Eressea.

Beautiful writing and very real character sketches, as is always true of
Bodkin's work.
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Title: The Beauty of Memory · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 652
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:31:48 Score: 3
To think that Boromir had so much of an influence on Pippin that the
Hobbit would unconsciously mimic his mannerisms is delightful, and
certainly eased the heart of the new Steward of the realm of Gondor as
he spent some hours hearing tales of his brother from his new King and
the smallest and newest Guardsman.

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Title: The Unbidden Stranger · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Aragorn
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 886
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:41:22 Score: 3
How would Thorongil have struck those among whom he rode in Rohan? Here
we have a brief and oh, so human, glimpse of the curiosity and suspicion
that his presence might well have raised.
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Title: The Last Age of Elves: A Precious Find · Author: fael_bain ·
Genres: Drama: Elves in Later Ages · ID: 744
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:46:10 Score: 4
The sons of Elrond went a bit mad with grief, intent on personally
destroying all the orcs in the Misty Mountain to avenge their mother's
wounding and loss to Tol Eressea, and to protect all else from the
depredations of the servants of the Shadowed ones.

But the finding of an unnamed Elfling in the wilds helped to bring
Elrohir back in tune with life.

An interesting look at how young Legolas might indeed have been when he
first became a subject of interest for the Elves of Imladris.
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Title: Shattered Twilight · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: First Age
Elves · ID: 247
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:49:35 Score: 3
Maeglin loved the maiden Idril; but she chose to cleave to a mortal Man
instead of choosing one of her own kindred.

The grief of Maeglin is fully rendered in this short and intense lament.
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Title: Merry Yules · Author: Marigold · Races: Hobbits: Fixed-Length
Ficlet series · ID: 114
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:51:00 Score: 2
Ah, yes, the Yule season as experienced by our favorite duo. Humorous
and touching by turn.
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Title: Earth, Water, Fire and Air · Author: Fileg · Genres: Drama:
Fixed-Length Ficlet Series · ID: 469
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:55:43 Score: 3
True sacrifices are not consumed or lost, but fulfilled, and often given
back again more than they were before. So it is in these four short
examinations of the hearts of Eowyn, Arwen, Aragorn, and Faramir.
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Title: Little Lad Lost · Author: Citrine · Races: Hobbits: Children ·
ID: 895
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 09:06:54 Score: 2
What else can be said? Even Lobelia Sackville-Baggins finds herself
enchanted by a small Took found in her garden.
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Title: Making the Legends of Our Times · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlet · ID: 860
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2006-11-30 09:11:58 Score: 5
Ah, this is so satisfying, exactly what a drabble should be! A plain,
tiny vignette, that has a whole world of history behind it...

It is told from a child's perspective, so the language is simple, but
evocative. We get a vivid mental picture of the what the princess's skin
and hands look like, and how extremely aged physically, but mentally
sharp, she seems in the child's eyes.

And the conversation starts out childlike, but it gave me a chill at the
end... I started out believing that the child was the future Lady of the
Shield Arm, but the roles are reversed by the end... and the drabble
left me flooded with memories about all the pain behind the death of the
Witch King....

Very well done.


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Title: Forlorn Hope · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Steward's Sons
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 301
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:16:13 Score: 2
This is a stunning drabble. Faramir's sense of hopelessness is chilling
in its matter-of-factness.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:02:17 Score: 2
Raksha is a dab hand at writing stories that never fail to satisfy,
whatever the genre or style.
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:16:50 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:17:48 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:18:49 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:19:16 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:20:32 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:20:56 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:21:30 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:21:52 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Thevina Finduilas · ID: 87 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:35:30 Score: 4
Thevina is a very engaging author, exceptionally skilled at writing
Gimli, and dwarves in general. She has an almost intuitive grasp of
Dwarven culture that is fascinating. But she also writes spot-on
characterisations of her other characters as well and I particularly
like her depictions of Pippin. Her plots are intriguing and
thought-provoking. I discovered this talented author through the MEFA's
and I am so glad that I did!
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Genres: Drama [107]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:39:34 Score: 2
Tanaqui has an ability to capture a readers attention and draw them
into whatever genre and style she turns her hand to.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:49:15 Score: 2
Tanaqui has an ability to capture a readers attention and draw them
into whatever genre and style she turns her hand to.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Dwarves [12]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:49:54 Score: 2
Tanaqui has an ability to capture a readers attention and draw them
into whatever genre and style she turns her hand to.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 07:50:26 Score: 2
Tanaqui has an ability to capture a readers attention and draw them
into whatever genre and style she turns her hand to.
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Author: Bodkin · ID: 411 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:21:34 Score: 5
Bodkin can, through the conversations of Legolas, Elladan, and Elrohir,
do so much to inspire and entertain as well as to provoke thought. There
are few I can think of who can reach such depth while appearing merely
lighthearted at first.

In the story of the new year one sees a full range of emotions--boredom,
frustration, planning and determination, concern, and honor, all very
well portrayed. As for the ending and Gandalf's final firework in honor
of Frodo Baggins....

As for Sweet Woodbine--to celebrate the growing love for Elerrina and
the great responsibility Legolas handles is a joy.

Truly a delight to read Bodkin's work at any time; and in these stories
it's even more true.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Larner · 2006-11-30 08:42:33 Score: 2
Tanaqui's drabbles are masterful, as we look and Men and Elves and the
world they inhabited together.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Races: Villains [6]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 08:49:24 Score: 2
Tanaqui has the ability to write even the most gruesome subject matter
in such a matter-of-fact way that it is even more chilling!
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 08:50:48 Score: 2
Tanaqui has an ability to capture a readers attention and draw them
into whatever genre and style she turns her hand to.
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Author: Tanaqui · ID: 40 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 08:51:27 Score: 2
Tanaqui has an ability to capture a readers attention and draw them
into whatever genre and style she turns her hand to.
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Author: Salsify · ID: 314 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 08:55:09 Score: 2
Salsify has a gift for coming up with inventive plots, and the ability
to really get into the heads of her characters.
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Author: The Bookbinder's Daughter · ID: 658 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:07:44 Score: 3
The Bookbinder's Daughter is a very creative and skilful author. Her use
of language is just stunning and she has a real gift of detail. She is
able to paint a picture with her words that defies their intentional
brevity.
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Author: Lily · ID: 629 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:10:44 Score: 1
Lily knows her hobbits very well and her stories are a joy to read.
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:12:05 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Nancy Brooke · ID: 105 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:17:52 Score: 2
Nancy Brooke is always able to use just the right words to get her point
across, never overwriting.
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Author: SlightlyTookish · ID: 205 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:21:56 Score: 3
What makes Slightly Tookish's stories so enjoyable for me is the
strength of the relationships. Her Merry and Pippin, and Pippin and
Gandalf especially. The love between these characters, between their
families, and between the Fellowship, is always depicted very clearly
and is present in every story no matter the genre!

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Author: SlightlyTookish · ID: 205 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:22:20 Score: 3
What makes Slightly Tookish's stories so enjoyable for me is the
strength of the relationships. Her Merry and Pippin, and Pippin and
Gandalf especially. The love between these characters, between their
families, and between the Fellowship, is always depicted very clearly
and is present in every story no matter the genre!

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Author: SlightlyTookish · ID: 205 · Times: The Great Years [56]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:22:48 Score: 3
What makes Slightly Tookish's stories so enjoyable for me is the
strength of the relationships. Her Merry and Pippin, and Pippin and
Gandalf especially. The love between these characters, between their
families, and between the Fellowship, is always depicted very clearly
and is present in every story no matter the genre!

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Author: Linda Hoyland/Raksha the Demon CoAuthors · ID: 691 · Races: Men
[73]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:25:08 Score: 2
This team writes very well together. There is no hint of where one
author ends and the other begins.
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Author: Linda Hoyland · ID: 527 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:26:56 Score: 2
Linda Hoyland really knows how to tell an enjoyable story! She has
Aragorn and Faramir down pat, and all of her other characters come to life.
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Author: Linda Hoyland · ID: 527 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:28:32 Score: 1
Linda Hoyland fills her characters with a compassion that makes them
come to life.
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Author: Nesta · ID: 595 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:31:56 Score: 2
Nesta has a knack for making her characters come to life and excellent
talent for description.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:41:13 Score: 2
Raksha is a dab hand at writing stories that never fail to satisfy,
whatever the genre or style.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:44:25 Score: 2
Raksha is a dab hand at writing stories that never fail to satisfy,
whatever the genre or style.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 09:49:21 Score: 3
Raksha is a dab hand at writing stories that never fail to satisfy,
whatever the genre or style. Her greatest strength in my opinion is the
exceptional depth that she is able to bring to her characters.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:11:50 Score: 3
Raksha is a dab hand at writing stories that never fail to satisfy,
whatever the genre or style. Her greatest strength in my opinion is the
exceptional depth that she is able to bring to her characters.
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Author: SurgicalSteel · ID: 616 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:15:11 Score: 3
SurgicalSteel is a wonderfully descriptive author whose first hand
knowledge of healing brings an incredible depth to her stories. She is
also generous with her time in assisting other fanfic authors who wish
for medical accuracy in their own tales.
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Times: Early Third Age [7]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:28:07 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Bodkin · ID: 411 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:29:50 Score: 2
Bodkin has a way of infusing everything that she writes with an amazing
amount of detail, whether it be a drabble or an epic. Her stories and
characters draw the reader in every time.
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Author: grey_wonderer · ID: 62 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:39:07 Score: 4
Grey Wonderer writes some of the most enjoyable hobbit fanfiction that I
have had the pleasure to read. She writes the hobbits wonderfully,
especially little hobbits, and her Merry and Pippin are a delight! Her
take on their relationship is spot-on and their voices are perfect in
every tale. GW also has a knack for unusual plots that she writes in
such a way as to make them perfectly plausible. Her talent for writing
humour is just terrific and everything that she writes is a gem!
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Author: Lindelea · ID: 27 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:40:05 Score: 2
Lindelea is skilled at writting OC's and canon characters, no matter
what their race or species! I always enjoy the detail and dialogue in
her stories.


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Author: Werecat · ID: 83 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:40:50 Score: 2
Werecat never fails to please, whether it be a drabble or a long story.
Her work always holds the reader's attention and is descriptive and
skilfully written.
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Author: Dwimordene · ID: 8 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:41:52 Score: 1
I always enjoy the detail and craftsmanship that goes into one of
Dwimordene's stories.
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Author: Cathleen · ID: 579 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:45:59 Score: 2
Cathleen's stories move along at a fast pace that is quite suited to her
material. Her hobbits are imbued with a sense of fun and mischief and
her plots are enjoyable.
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Author: grey_wonderer · ID: 62 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:46:57 Score: 4
Grey Wonderer writes some of the most enjoyable hobbit fanfiction that I
have had the pleasure to read. She writes the hobbits wonderfully,
especially little hobbits, and her Merry and Pippin are a delight! Her
take on their relationship is spot-on and their voices are perfect in
every tale. GW also has a knack for unusual plots that she writes in
such a way as to make them perfectly plausible. Her talent for writing
humour is just terrific and everything that she writes is a gem!
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Author: Dreamflower · ID: 115 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:57:05 Score: 4
Dreamflower has created a complex and enjoyable society for her hobbits.
I love the way that each tale fits in with the others, giving the reader
the pleasure of immersing themselves in her wonderful and familiar
universe that never fails to please. Her hobbits are fantastic, the
characterisations of Merry and Pippin and their bond especially. She
writes the non-hobbit members of the Fellowship and her OC's skilfully,
and her plots are involved and believable. Dreamflower also gives a
great deal of her time helping other authors.
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Author: Gryffinjack · ID: 621 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 10:59:26 Score: 2
Gryffinjack writes with a lovely attention to detail and an obvious love
of her subject matter. I have never read a story of hers that I did not
enjoy immensely!
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Author: Mariole · ID: 492 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:01:59 Score: 2
Mariole writes in a sophisticated style that gives her readers real
insight into her characters. Her descriptions are well done; natural and
realistic.
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Author: pippinfan88 · ID: 331 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:03:13 Score: 3
Pippinfan's stories can be guaranteed to bring pleasure to the reader
that loves hobbity tales. She is never afraid to write realistically and
doesn't avoid topics that might be angsty, yet her stories are not ever
too heavy or too sombre, she always balances them just right with a mix
of genres to suit the individual tale.
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Author: Marta · ID: 16 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:04:37 Score: 3
I am always impressed at how lush and lyrical Marta's stories and
drabbles can be, or how stark and angsty. The language is always
beautiful. She also unfailingly chooses thoughtful topics and writes her
characters in perfect voice!
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Author: Pearl Took · ID: 72 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:15:51 Score: 3
Pearl has a way of adding a touch of the fantastical to her tales while
keeping them completely believable. She is very good at writing the
relationships between characters, especially Merry and Pippin. Her plots
are always original and enjoyable, and she is adept at varying the style
of her writing as appropriate to the speaker or circumstances.
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Author: Pearl Took · ID: 72 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:16:46 Score: 3
Pearl has a way of adding a touch of the fantastical to her tales while
keeping them completely believable. She is very good at writing the
relationships between characters, especially Merry and Pippin. Her plots
are always original and enjoyable, and she is adept at varying the style
of her writing as appropriate to the speaker or circumstances.
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Author: Rabidsamfan · ID: 380 · Times: The Great Years [56]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:34:03 Score: 2
Rabidsamfan is especially skilled at revealing characters thoughts and
emotions and turning them into excellent stories!
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Author: Rabidsamfan · ID: 380 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:34:33 Score: 2
Rabidsamfan is especially skilled at revealing characters thoughts and
emotions and turning them into excellent stories!
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Author: Rabidsamfan · ID: 380 · Genres: Drama [107]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:35:07 Score: 2
Rabidsamfan is especially skilled at revealing characters thoughts and
emotions and turning them into excellent stories!
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 11:37:57 Score: 3
Marigold not only writes hobbits with credibility, she manages to depict
their interactions with friends of other races with equal grace and
sensitivity. She has a particular talent for conveying hobbits'
enjoyment of simple pleasures, without making them seem either foolish
or childlike.
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Author: Larner · ID: 242 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 11:38:45 Score: 2
Larner's plots are always imaginative, and she writes every genre
believably. Her characterisations of the hobbits are always well done.

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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 11:38:55 Score: 3
Marigold not only writes hobbits with credibility, she manages to depict
their interactions with friends of other races with equal grace and
sensitivity. She has a particular talent for conveying hobbits'
enjoyment of simple pleasures, without making them seem either foolish
or childlike.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Races: Cross-Cultural [28]: General
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 11:39:16 Score: 3
Marigold not only writes hobbits with credibility, she manages to depict
their interactions with friends of other races with equal grace and
sensitivity. She has a particular talent for conveying hobbits'
enjoyment of simple pleasures, without making them seem either foolish
or childlike.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 11:40:09 Score: 3
Marigold not only writes hobbits with credibility, she manages to depict
their interactions with friends of other races with equal grace and
sensitivity. She has a particular talent for conveying hobbits'
enjoyment of simple pleasures, without making them seem either foolish
or childlike.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2006-11-30 11:41:35 Score: 3
Marigold not only writes hobbits with credibility, she manages to depict
their interactions with friends of other races with equal grace and
sensitivity. She has a particular talent for conveying hobbits'
enjoyment of simple pleasures, without making them seem either foolish
or childlike.
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Author: SilverMoonLady · ID: 343 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2006-11-30 12:02:39 Score: 4
I always love Silvermoonlady's Hobbit fics because they bring life in
the Shire off the page with such depth and fullness, even while seeming
effortlessly and gently rendered. She takes Hobbits and Hobbit life
seriously, without ever being ponderous, pedantic or self-important, but
merely (!) by seeing the everyday with a clear and appreciative eye. She
crafts complicated stories, which always measure life at its fullest.
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Author: Llinos · ID: 25 · Times: The Great Years [56]: Poetry
Reviewer: Marigold · 2006-11-30 13:19:40 Score: 10
I absolutely love Llinos' writing! Her ability to bring life to songs
and poems is a rare gift indeed! She not only writes the songs or poems
themselves technically perfect, she crafts each one with spot-on
characterisations and descriptions. Every detail is just right, and
never feels forced. Her work is always appropriate to the character and
subject matter.

She skilfully varies her style as is appropriate, depending upon what
she is writing and whose *voice* she is writing it in. Whatever the
style, type of piece, plot or subject matter, her work never fails to be
just marvellous! The way that she is able to take requests from her
readers and come up with the perfect piece of writing is just simply
amazing!

Llinos has an extensive knowledge of canon, and she grew up in the Shire
at the time that Tolkien was writing LoTR. This adds an exceptional
realism to her work; she has the real Shire all around her, knows the
flora, fauna, and food that Tolkien would have been familiar with,
understands the class differences. Details and nuances like this really
enhance her work. She also has the film characterisations down pat, as
is evident in her limericks. To be able to write, on request, a spot-on
limerick about the old guy at Helm's Deep is a mark of her great talent.

I look forward to everything that Llinos writes!
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Author: Werecat · ID: 83 · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond [31]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 13:56:49 Score: 3
Werecat really has a knack for writing less popular characters and
races. And her treatments of them would feel fresh even if hundres wrote
about dwarves, orcs, and her other subjects the way they do about elves
or Gondorians. She sees the world toward a very earthy point of view,
and it makes for a unique vantage-point.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 13:57:16 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Werecat · ID: 83 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 13:57:59 Score: 3
Werecat really has a knack for writing less popular characters and
races. And her treatments of them would feel fresh even if hundres wrote
about dwarves, orcs, and her other subjects the way they do about elves
or Gondorians. She sees the world toward a very earthy point of view,
and it makes for a unique vantage-point.
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Races: Dwarves [12]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 13:58:48 Score: 10
It's a little hard to know how to describe Ann as a writer, because if I
*just* talked about what she writes then I would be ignoring the
encouraging affect she has had on so many authors, myself included,
because she is a world-class beta and reviewer. It's a truly rare
combination to find someone who can do all three effectively, but Ann
definitely qualifies. If I had to choose which of the three she's best
at I would probably choose betareading because she has it down to an
art, and I have never felt like I was losing control of my story.

Anyway, back to her writing, I do not want to underemphasize that
aspect. Her writing is always crisp as one would expect from a fine beta
reader. The mechanics are all there and her word economy i such that her
pieces never feel rushed (even in her non-drabbles, though this really
stands out in her drabbles). But what I love most about Ann's writing is
the quiet humor that seems to invade her writing, will she or no. If
there's anything I hope Ann never writes it's angst. Her stories just
all have this very natural feel to them of everyday life. From the hawt
quality of new love to the comfort of a long-stranding relationship to
the gentle jostlings of siblings to the tenderness of new parenthood --
it all feels so like real. And that makes for a very three-dimensional
world she writes.

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Author: Gandalfs apprentice · ID: 175 · Genres: Romance [51]:
Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 13:59:18 Score: 4
Gandalfs Apprentice can always make me lap with the matter-of-fact
streak she brings to her humor. I can just see her characters with a
very deadpan expression on their faces as they deliver the lines she
gives them. Even in her more serious works, the slightly funny quality
is still under the surface. You just know that her characters thoroughly
enjoy life, and that makes for a fun read.
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Author: Dwimordene · ID: 8 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 13:59:56 Score: 10
A lot of what I have described about why I like Dwimordene's writing so
much, I have already said in other story reviews. The quality that
perhaps I have not touched on, that seems to inform almost every piece
of hers that I have ever read (and that's quite a lot), is how *deep*
her writing is. The four of her five pieces that are in this year's
MEFAs that I have read are all about very different issues, as divergent
as spousal domestic abuse to survivors' guilt. Yet in none of these
stories are we offered a pat answer. Instead, we have to face the
situation in all its' complexity, which can be disconcerting but is in
the end more satisfying.

In her piece "That Which Remains Us" Dwimordene shows us a side of her
writing that I don't think I've seen so clearly in the other pieces of
hers that I've read: the raw technical skill of her writing. It really
evokes the scenes and the characters involved. There's just something
about the way Dwim describes the room, the volume of poems  I can
almost see the single elegant line where Denethor crosses out a word.
The poetry, both the verses that work and those that Denethor feels
uneven, just describe his character so perfectly. It's not plotting or
pacing or even the thoughts of Denethor or Faramir, it's the words they
both use.

The one piece of Dwim's nominated this year that I haven't read,
"Wizardry", is only a ficlet and I could probably read it in time to
vote on it this year. But I like saving all of Dwim's stuff for when I'm
in the right mood and have the time to let it seep in. Her stories
deserve to be read, "aired" in the mind, and read again. There are just
so many layers to unpack, this is an author whose stories have some real
meat that needs to be digested.

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Author: Agape4Gondor · ID: 688 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 14:04:32 Score: 3
I have not read that much of Agape's stuff beyond what was in this
year's MEFAs, but that's something I'd like to change. She has a real
gift for getting emotional depth into a piece without making it feel too
heavy.
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Author: Dreamflower · ID: 115 · Genres: Drama [107]: Poetry
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 14:17:56 Score: 2
Dreamflower writes hobbits well, keeping them light and cute but still
giving them depth. Her writing develops relationships that seem to fit
into the canon nicely.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 14:21:49 Score: 4
Raksha is one of the few authors who have made Aragorn approachable for
me. As I mentioned in another review I found him too perfect before
fanfic, but through her stories I have seen him warts and all, presented
in a way that makes him seem to have more in common with me without
becoming less than the king Tolkien wrote. Its a very thin line to
walk, but Raksha does it well, providing us with a character who
resonates emotionally but still feels tied to the canon character.
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Author: Linda Hoyland · ID: 527 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Marta · 2006-11-30 14:22:19 Score: 2
Linda describes Fourth Age Gondor in a really light way. It's really
nice to imagine Aragorn, Arwen, Faramir, and Eowyn getting on in
peacetime like this, after the war.
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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Men [73]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 14:49:19 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 14:50:01 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: Raksha the Demon · ID: 178 · Races: Elves [38]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 14:50:34 Score: 10
Raksha is equally at home in a number of genres--writing drama that is
moving without being maudlin, romance that is sexy and sophisticated,
and humor that is beverage-snorting funny. Her work always shows a
painstaking attention to craft. Though her diction and structure vary by
piece, they are always perfectly suited to the subject matter. Details
of canon are carefully researched, down to the choice of a particular word.

Though she will swear up and down that she cant write poetry, her short
piece Seeker of Shadow reads like a poem. The language is rhythmic,
beautiful, and more than a little disturbing, which is very appropriate
for the tale of Eol and Aredhel.

Anyone who reads Rakshas work will quickly notice a certain *fondness*
for Faramir, but she writes with great insight about a wide range of
characters. Her characterization of Boromir in Rest and Recreation is
affectionate but also realistic. His flaws are evident along with his
more admirable traits. In her fics about Eol and Huan the Hound, she
skillfully takes the viewpoints of obscure characters. She writes Eowyn
very believably, showing a woman who is contented with her married life
but hasnt lost her sharp edges. Rakshas respect for Tolkiens
characters, as he wrote them, is combined with an understanding of human
nature; the result is very credible characterization that does not
violate Tolkiens worldview. She also catches the feel of his writing,
which is often poetic in style and is ultimately optimistic.

All of her strengths come together in The Falcon and the Star, a
gapfiller about Aragorns healing of Faramir in the Houses of Healing,
and the piece is in agreement with Tolkiens own work in style, theme,
and tenor. Not only is this story beautifully written, but it has a
great deal of heart. I do not think Tolkien would be displeased if he
read it.

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Author: NeumeIndil · ID: 618 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 15:28:28 Score: 6
Neumeindil loves her Rohirrim and has a warm heart for Gamling and her
OFC Morwen. Neume mainly writes her series Rohirrim Nights which are a
delight to read, but I know she can her extend her talents to other
areas as well. Her stories always have a vivid and evocative feel over
them, pulling you into the story and it is heard to break out of it
because you cannot stop reading. Neumes skills have a wide range: from
romance, drama to humour: she can write it all in various length and
style, giving us characters who we all start to love, one way or
another. Besides all of this Neume is a great beta with a knack for
helping ESL-writers finding their way (thank you so much for helping me
out on occasion), providing sanity checks once a while or shaking pom
poms where it is needed.
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Author: NeumeIndil · ID: 618 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 15:30:33 Score: 7
Neumeindil loves her Rohirrim and has a warm heart for Gamling and her
OFC Morwen. Neume mainly writes her series Rohirrim Nights which are a
delight to read, but I know she can her extend her talents to other
areas as well. In her story 'How the Eorlings Ride' she shows how she
can also branch out to other races than her stouthearted Rohirrim and
Gondorian's alone. Her stories always have a vivid and evocative feel
over them, pulling you into the story and it is heard to break out of it
because you cannot stop reading. Neumes skills have a wide range: from
romance, drama to humour: she can write it all in various length and
style, giving us characters who we all start to love, one way or
another. Besides all of this Neume is a great beta with a knack for
helping ESL-writers finding their way (thank you so much for helping me
out on occasion), providing sanity checks once a while or shaking pom
poms where it is needed.
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Author: NeumeIndil · ID: 618 · Times: Late Third Age [26]: Fixed-Length
Ficlet
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 15:34:12 Score: 8
Neumeindil loves her Rohirrim and has a warm heart for Gamling and her
OFC Morwen. Neume mainly writes her series Rohirrim Nights which are a
delight to read, but I know she can her extend her talents to other
areas as well. In her story 'How the Eorlings Ride' she shows how she
can also branch out to other races than her stouthearted Rohirrim and
Gondorian's alone. Alothough her splendid drabble How Grima Lost His
Eyebrows on Gríma and Saruman& it is simply amazing how she wrote that
moment with so much skill! Her stories always have a vivid and evocative
feel over them, pulling you into the story and it is heard to break out
of it because you cannot stop reading. Neumes skills have a wide range:
from romance, drama to humour: she can write it all in various length
and style, giving us characters who we all start to love, one way or
another. Besides all of this Neume is a great beta with a knack for
helping ESL-writers finding their way (thank you so much for helping me
out on occasion), providing sanity checks once a while or shaking pom
poms where it is needed.
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Author: SilverMoonLady · ID: 343 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 15:46:57 Score: 10
Silvermoonladys stories have a warm place in my heart. Not only because
they have filled many pleasant rainy afternoons on the couch with a mug
filled with something nice, but her work always touches me deeply. There
is something so amazing and down to earth about her stories, in a way
she always reminds me to celebrate life and yet again, she does not
hesitate to show the tragic sides of life as well, which brings forth
many memories, but also healing where that is needed (I do think you
know what I mean and the tissues are here).

Her material simply shines in the evocative power: whether it is a
stunning visual, the impact of emotions by means of narrative or
dialogue. I do know she can manage characters from other races or
fandoms easily, which makes her writing range quite impressive. Sil
knows a lot about the hobbits and is always around to answer every
question you might have. She simply has an amazing talent with whatever
story she embarks on, mostly accompanied by cakes or other beverages.
Silvermoonlady always says that she is a true hobbit at heart, but this
comes also with a naughty side, which always makes me & others laugh.
Thank you so much Sil, with everything you so generously share or
creating a place where fellow writers always feel at home.
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Author: SilverMoonLady · ID: 343 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 15:50:15 Score: 10
Silvermoonladys stories have a warm place in my heart. Not only because
they have filled many pleasant rainy afternoons on the couch with a mug
filled with something nice, but her work always touches me deeply. There
is something so amazing and down to earth about her stories, in a way
she always reminds me to celebrate life and yet again, she does not
hesitate to show the tragic sides of life as well, which brings forth
many memories, but also healing where that is needed (I do think you
know what I mean and the tissues are here).

Her material simply shines in the evocative power: whether it is a
stunning visual, the impact of emotions by means of narrative or
dialogue. I do know she can manage characters from other races or
fandoms easily, which makes her writing range quite impressive. Sil
knows a lot about the hobbits and is always around to answer every
question you might have. She simply has an amazing talent with whatever
story she embarks on, mostly accompanied by cakes or other beverages.
Silvermoonlady always says that she is a true hobbites at heart, but
this comes also with a naughty side, which always makes me & others
laugh. Thank you so much Sil, with everything you so generously share or
creating a place where fellow writers always feel at home.
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Author: DrummerWench · ID: 626 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Gandalfs apprentice · 2006-11-30 16:01:34 Score: 7
I know when I get an alert from DrummerWench that I am in for a quality
read--a unique blend of the otherworldly and the everyday.

In "Fairy Tales," the author keeps to a remarkably simple, clear
language, and conveys such a wide variety of mood and feeling, from
deeply sad (as in the King's son who mourned forever the loss of both
his family and the Wood) to joyful, to scary (the Dwarf in Moria). Each
is at once unique while clearly part of a whole--the sum of the whole is
more than the parts. The prologue, setting the context of a book created
by Sam to read to his children, works perfectly.

"The Green Flash" evokes the sea in a way at once Elvish and reminiscent
of sand castles. The tale of the Elf-maiden turned dolphin brings to
mind John Sayles' lovely movie "The Secret of Roan Inish," about the
Selkies of Irish legend.

DrummerWench has at least one tale in the works that I know of, and it
brings the same enchanting blend of magic and every day--to our century.
Read Cirdan "The Boatbuilder."
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Author: Space Weavil · ID: 235 · Races: Elves [38]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 16:43:19 Score: 10
Wow Space, what to say about your incredibly wide range of writing
talents? Or your unique voice? Or your very unique elves? Or your very
incredibly take on the Witchking? Or how you simple write any character,
genre or plot you embark upon? Space Weavils stories set in the Second
Age always have an unique perspective that she so generously share with
us. For some reason, the way Space writes Gil-Galad for example, is how
I envision him or see written in Tolkiens works. The same goes for
Cirdan, Elrond, and Glorfindel. But then there Space also has an
impressive background story featuring the Witchking of which Master of
Shadows deals with small discarded fragments of it. If you liked that
work, then And in the Darkness Bind Them is a great work to read.

Space simply comes up with an ideas (sometimes very crazy or naughty
ones), she selects her characters, and with her skills, she always can
weave an excellent story for us. Spaces material most often have
intriguing plotlines, and she mingles them and does not shy to separate
them when she deems its necessary for the story. But when you as a
reader reach the end of a story, you connect everything with such an
excellent craft, that I most often go back and read the story again.
Space Weavil is an incredible all-round author writing in more fandoms
than Tolkien alone and I always look forward to new works of her.
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Races: Dwarves [12]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 16:44:48 Score: 10
Anns pieces are so true to life and fresh that it seems as if she is
there in Gondor or Rohan, scribbling in a notebook, recording events as
they unfold. She often draws her subjects from the fleeting, everyday
moment, revealing beauty and meaning in what might otherwise seem
commonplace. A workbasket, a salamander, an artists unsigned sketch, a
toy ponyall become touchstones. Servants, children, and women, the
unheard or rarely heard characters of Tolkien's world, are given a
voice. Her work shows deep insight into human nature, and she seems to
take an unflinching but kindly view, realistic but not unsympathetic.

As a person interested in history, I love how her pieces incorporate the
details of material culture, details which are carefully researched and
deftly woven into the narrative. In her writing, the natural world is
sensitively portrayed with a naturalists keen eye. Her command of
sensory imagery amazes me. Visuals are drawn with a sure and graceful
hand, and light and color are used to great effect. Sounds, tastes, and
touch are vividly described.

Many of her pieces have the concentrated force of a poem, and not a word
is wasted. Her love of Tolkiens characters (and one in particular
*grin*) infuses all of her work and makes it shimmer with joy.
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Author: Space Weavil · ID: 235 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 16:45:15 Score: 10
Wow Space, what to say about your incredibly wide range of writing
talents? Or your unique voice? Or your very unique elves? Or your very
incredibly take on the Witchking? Or how you simple write any character,
genre or plot you embark upon? Spaceweavils stories set in the Second
Age always have an unique perspective that she so generously share with
us. For some reason, the way Space writes Gil-Galad for example, is how
I envision him or see written in Tolkiens works. The same goes for
Cirdan, Elrond, and Glorfindel. But then there Space also has an
impressive background story featuring the Witchking of which Master of
Shadows deals with small discarded fragments of it. If you liked that
work, then And in the Darkness Bind Them is a great work to read.

Space simply comes up with an ideas (sometimes very crazy or naughty
ones), she selects her characters, and with her skills, she always can
weave an excellent story for us. Spaces material most often have
intriguing plotlines, and she mingles them and does not shy to separate
them when she deems its necessary for the story. But when you as a
reader reach the end of a story, Space connects everything with such an
excellent craft, that I most often go back and read the story again.
Space is an incredible all-round author writing in more fandoms than
Tolkien alone and I always look forward to new works of her.
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Races: Men [73]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 16:45:49 Score: 10
Anns pieces are so true to life and fresh that it seems as if she is
there in Gondor or Rohan, scribbling in a notebook, recording events as
they unfold. She often draws her subjects from the fleeting, everyday
moment, revealing beauty and meaning in what might otherwise seem
commonplace. A workbasket, a salamander, an artists unsigned sketch, a
toy ponyall become touchstones. Servants, children, and women, the
unheard or rarely heard characters of Tolkien's world, are given a
voice. Her work shows deep insight into human nature, and she seems to
take an unflinching but kindly view, realistic but not unsympathetic.

As a person interested in history, I love how her pieces incorporate the
details of material culture, details which are carefully researched and
deftly woven into the narrative. In her writing, the natural world is
sensitively portrayed with a naturalists keen eye. Her command of
sensory imagery amazes me. Visuals are drawn with a sure and graceful
hand, and light and color are used to great effect. Sounds, tastes, and
touch are vividly described.

Many of her pieces have the concentrated force of a poem, and not a word
is wasted. Her love of Tolkiens characters (and one in particular
*grin*) infuses all of her work and makes it shimmer with joy.

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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 16:46:10 Score: 10
Anns pieces are so true to life and fresh that it seems as if she is
there in Gondor or Rohan, scribbling in a notebook, recording events as
they unfold. She often draws her subjects from the fleeting, everyday
moment, revealing beauty and meaning in what might otherwise seem
commonplace. A workbasket, a salamander, an artists unsigned sketch, a
toy ponyall become touchstones. Servants, children, and women, the
unheard or rarely heard characters of Tolkien's world, are given a
voice. Her work shows deep insight into human nature, and she seems to
take an unflinching but kindly view, realistic but not unsympathetic.

As a person interested in history, I love how her pieces incorporate the
details of material culture, details which are carefully researched and
deftly woven into the narrative. In her writing, the natural world is
sensitively portrayed with a naturalists keen eye. Her command of
sensory imagery amazes me. Visuals are drawn with a sure and graceful
hand, and light and color are used to great effect. Sounds, tastes, and
touch are vividly described.

Many of her pieces have the concentrated force of a poem, and not a word
is wasted. Her love of Tolkiens characters (and one in particular
*grin*) infuses all of her work and makes it shimmer with joy.

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Author: Space Weavil · ID: 235 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 16:47:26 Score: 10
Wow Space, what to say about your incredibly wide range of writing
talents? Or your unique voice? Or your very unique elves? Or your very
incredibly take on the Witchking? Or how you simple write any character,
genre or plot you embark upon? Spaceweavils stories set in the Second
Age always have an unique perspective that she so generously share with
us. For some reason, the way Space writes Gil-Galad for example, is how
I envision him or see written in Tolkiens works. The same goes for
Cirdan, Elrond, and Glorfindel. But then there Space also has an
impressive background story featuring the Witchking of which Master of
Shadows deals with small discarded fragments of it. If you liked that
work, then And in the Darkness Bind Them is a great work to read.

Space simply comes up with an ideas (sometimes very crazy or naughty
ones), she selects her characters, and with her skills, she always can
weave an excellent story for us. Spaces material most often have
intriguing plotlines, and she mingles them and does not shy to separate
them when she deems its necessary for the story. But when you as a
reader reach the end of a story, Space connects everything with such an
excellent craft, that I most often go back and read the story again.
Space is an incredible all-round author writing in more fandoms than
Tolkien alone and I always look forward to new works of her.
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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Races: Dwarves [12]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 16:48:03 Score: 10
Anns pieces are so true to life and fresh that it seems as if she is
there in Gondor or Rohan, scribbling in a notebook, recording events as
they unfold. She often draws her subjects from the fleeting, everyday
moment, revealing beauty and meaning in what might otherwise seem
commonplace. A workbasket, a salamander, an artists unsigned sketch, a
toy ponyall become touchstones. Servants, children, and women, the
unheard or rarely heard characters of Tolkien's world, are given a
voice. Her work shows deep insight into human nature, and she seems to
take an unflinching but kindly view, realistic but not unsympathetic.

As a person interested in history, I love how her pieces incorporate the
details of material culture, details which are carefully researched and
deftly woven into the narrative. In her writing, the natural world is
sensitively portrayed with a naturalists keen eye. Her command of
sensory imagery amazes me. Visuals are drawn with a sure and graceful
hand, and light and color are used to great effect. Sounds, tastes, and
touch are vividly described.

Many of her pieces have the concentrated force of a poem, and not a word
is wasted. Her love of Tolkiens universe and his characters (and one in
particular *grin*) infuses all of her work and makes it shimmer with joy.

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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 16:49:10 Score: 10
Anns pieces are so true to life and fresh that it seems as if she is
there in Gondor or Rohan, scribbling in a notebook, recording events as
they unfold. She often draws her subjects from the fleeting, everyday
moment, revealing beauty and meaning in what might otherwise seem
commonplace. A workbasket, a salamander, an artists unsigned sketch, a
toy ponyall become touchstones. Servants, children, and women, the
unheard or rarely heard characters of Tolkien's world, are given a
voice. Her work shows deep insight into human nature, and she seems to
take an unflinching but kindly view, realistic but not unsympathetic.

As a person interested in history, I love how her pieces incorporate the
details of material culture, details which are carefully researched and
deftly woven into the narrative. In her writing, the natural world is
sensitively portrayed with a naturalists keen eye. Her command of
sensory imagery amazes me. Visuals are drawn with a sure and graceful
hand, and light and color are used to great effect. Sounds, tastes, and
touch are vividly described.

Many of her pieces have the concentrated force of a poem, and not a word
is wasted. Her love of Tolkiens universe and his characters (and one in
particular *grin*) infuses all of her work and makes it shimmer with joy.

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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Times: The Great Years [56]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 16:49:51 Score: 10
Anns pieces are so true to life and fresh that it seems as if she is
there in Gondor or Rohan, scribbling in a notebook, recording events as
they unfold. She often draws her subjects from the fleeting, everyday
moment, revealing beauty and meaning in what might otherwise seem
commonplace. A workbasket, a salamander, an artists unsigned sketch, a
toy ponyall become touchstones. Servants, children, and women, the
unheard or rarely heard characters of Tolkien's world, are given a
voice. Her work shows deep insight into human nature, and she seems to
take an unflinching but kindly view, realistic but not unsympathetic.

As a person interested in history, I love how her pieces incorporate the
details of material culture, details which are carefully researched and
deftly woven into the narrative. In her writing, the natural world is
sensitively portrayed with a naturalists keen eye. Her command of
sensory imagery amazes me. Visuals are drawn with a sure and graceful
hand, and light and color are used to great effect. Sounds, tastes, and
touch are vividly described.

Many of her pieces have the concentrated force of a poem, and not a word
is wasted. Her love of Tolkiens universe and his characters (and one in
particular *grin*) infuses all of her work and makes it shimmer with joy.

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Author: annmarwalk · ID: 177 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2006-11-30 16:50:18 Score: 10
Anns pieces are so true to life and fresh that it seems as if she is
there in Gondor or Rohan, scribbling in a notebook, recording events as
they unfold. She often draws her subjects from the fleeting, everyday
moment, revealing beauty and meaning in what might otherwise seem
commonplace. A workbasket, a salamander, an artists unsigned sketch, a
toy ponyall become touchstones. Servants, children, and women, the
unheard or rarely heard characters of Tolkien's world, are given a
voice. Her work shows deep insight into human nature, and she seems to
take an unflinching but kindly view, realistic but not unsympathetic.

As a person interested in history, I love how her pieces incorporate the
details of material culture, details which are carefully researched and
deftly woven into the narrative. In her writing, the natural world is
sensitively portrayed with a naturalists keen eye. Her command of
sensory imagery amazes me. Visuals are drawn with a sure and graceful
hand, and light and color are used to great effect. Sounds, tastes, and
touch are vividly described.

Many of her pieces have the concentrated force of a poem, and not a word
is wasted. Her love of Tolkiens universe and his characters (and one in
particular *grin*) infuses all of her work and makes it shimmer with joy.

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Author: Trekqueen · ID: 671 · Genres: Romance [51]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 17:08:21 Score: 10
Trekqueens story was the first story that showed me, besides Tolkiens
books, how Turgon and his family went through so much pain and effort to
end up in Gondolin. Soon after that, I discovered so much more works
written by her, her story Eternal is part of her he Laurëlumenyárë
Tales and I have read many excellent pieces that belong to these
series. Besides that, if I have any question about the Gondolin culture,
shes the first I ask.

Trekqueen has a very captivating way of telling her story, she takes her
time building her characters and setting up relationships between
characters whether they are friendships or not. Her characters, whether
original or canon, are multi-dimensional and you can connect to them
quite quickly. I cannot find another way to describe her voice of
storytelling than to say it is mesmerizing. I often found myself reading
deep into the night, turning pages after another, wanting to know what
would happen next. Whenever I talk to her or when she answers her
reviews with her warm enthusiasm, there is a deep love shining through
for her characters and Tolkiens works, but also for Star Trek as well.
With her romance-wip Sons of the Stars, but also with Drunken Hobbits
and an Irishman or Pointy-Eared Mischief she shows an amazing talent
in combining two fandoms with an incredible ease but with outstanding
comprehension of the characters.

Besides being such an unique author, Trekqueen is also an invaluable
help as a beta reader for many she so spontaneously volunteers for:
thank you so much for this!
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-30 17:15:12 Score: 10
Marigold took to writing drabbles like they had been made just for her!
She denies that she is any kind of a poet, but reading her work in this
area would make anyone disagree.

She certainly brings a lyrical style to her drabbles that are
reminiscent to me of some of the best, unstructured verse I have ever
read, which is no easy task. I admire her skill in this area enormously
as I know how very difficult, for me anyway, writing unstructured verse
is. In fact I can't do it! My sad drabbles always come out in verse, no
matter how hard I try not to let them.

Marigold's drabbles always sum up the situation or character to
perfection. Not only that but she manages to find original and unique
perspectives all the time, which I think is largely due to her love of
all aspects of Tolkien's works  in particular the hobbits and more
specifically, Merry and especially Pippin. Her enthusiasm for the genre
shines through, not just in her own work, but in her unrelenting
encouragement of many, many other writers in the fandom.

In addition, it shows clearly to the reader that once she is on a roll
with a particular drabble she teases and pokes at it with a tenacity
that ensures the finished product will be as close to perfection as is
possible. I know it is a common compliment to drabble writers to say
"not a word wasted" but in Marigold's case this is as true as it could
possibly be.

Marigold's drabbles are coherent, persuasive, informative and a delight
to read.
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Author: Dana · ID: 264 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2006-11-30 17:51:56 Score: 2
Dana has a lyrical style, an economy of words, a master's touch at
establishing mood and getting under the reader's skin, both satisfying
and leaving you wanting more.
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Races: Hobbits [106]: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2006-11-30 17:58:03 Score: 2
Marigold has an amazing way with words, not surprising, considering her
deft beta-work. She packs so much meaning into so few words!
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Author: Ellie · ID: 609 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 18:00:44 Score: 5
Ellie has a few of her finest works competing in the MEFAs this year,
but she has written so many incredibly stories featuring Finarfin and
his family. Whispers on the Wind is another beautiful story written by
her which so grandly explores the concequences of the events &
sacrifices brought during the First Age. All of her stories are unique
gems, giving us as a reader a magnificent insight in the other two sons
of Finwe & their wives and the sacrifices that they bring. With that,
Ellie dares to dive deep into the character traits and simply gives us
the full scope in an in-depth characterisation. I highly recommend her
work to every other Finarfinatics out there!
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Author: Ellie · ID: 609 · Times: First Age and Prior [23]: General
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2006-11-30 18:01:45 Score: 5
Ellie has a few of her finest works competing in the MEFAs this year,
but she has written so many incredibly stories featuring Finarfin and
his family. Whispers on the Wind is another beautiful story written by
her which so grandly explores the concequences of the events &
sacrifices brought during the First Age. All of her stories are unique
gems, giving us as a reader a magnificent insight in the other two sons
of Finwe & their wives and the sacrifices that they bring. With that,
Ellie dares to dive deep into the character traits and simply gives us
the full scope in an in-depth characterisation. I highly recommend her
work to every other Finarfinatics out there!
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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Genres: Humor [50]: General
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-30 20:12:21 Score: 10
Marigold has grown considerably in stature as an author over the last
year or two. Renowned for her tenacious encouragement of others in the
LoTR genre, through challenges, recommendations and tireless betaing of
others work, it is good to see her establish herself as a fine and
skilful writer who can turn her hand to many different styles.

Her drabbles impressed me from the start and now she is proving to be an
adroit writer of short stories too. Certainly her love of hobbits, in
particular of Merry and especially Pippin, shines through in all she
does and that is no bad thing.

Not only that, Marigold has now proved her skill in writing dialogue, an
area she seems a trifle timid of in the beginning. Any doubts about her
ability in this area must surely have been resolved with the sparkling
wit, humour as well as heartfelt feeling she is able to produce. Her
hobbit voices, in particular, always ring true to character and
demonstrate her deep understanding of their personalities.

All these factors link well with her comprehensive knowledge of canon,
which for a long time she has put to good and effective use for the
benefit of others through her betaing and now can call upon to good
effect in her own work.

I, and I imagine the rest of the fandom, trust and hope that she will
continue to write more stories in the future as they are always a breath
of fresh air, as her love of the subject continues, unabated.

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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Races: Hobbits [106]: General
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-30 20:13:05 Score: 10
Marigold has grown considerably in stature as an author over the last
year or two. Renowned for her tenacious encouragement of others in the
LoTR genre, through challenges, recommendations and tireless betaing of
others work, it is good to see her establish herself as a fine and
skilful writer who can turn her hand to many different styles.

Her drabbles impressed me from the start and now she is proving to be an
adroit writer of short stories too. Certainly her love of hobbits, in
particular of Merry and especially Pippin, shines through in all she
does and that is no bad thing.

Not only that, Marigold has now proved her skill in writing dialogue, an
area she seems a trifle timid of in the beginning. Any doubts about her
ability in this area must surely have been resolved with the sparkling
wit, humour as well as heartfelt feeling she is able to produce. Her
hobbit voices, in particular, always ring true to character and
demonstrate her deep understanding of their personalities.

All these factors link well with her comprehensive knowledge of canon,
which for a long time she has put to good and effective use for the
benefit of others through her betaing and now can call upon to good
effect in her own work.

I, and I imagine the rest of the fandom, trust and hope that she will
continue to write more stories in the future as they are always a breath
of fresh air, as her love of the subject continues, unabated.

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Author: Marigold · ID: 98 · Genres: Drama [107]: General
Reviewer: Llinos · 2006-11-30 20:13:40 Score: 10
Marigold has grown considerably in stature as an author over the last
year or two. Renowned for her tenacious encouragement of others in the
LoTR genre, through challenges, recommendations and tireless betaing of
others work, it is good to see her establish herself as a fine and
skilful writer who can turn her hand to many different styles.

Her drabbles impressed me from the start and now she is proving to be an
adroit writer of short stories too. Certainly her love of hobbits, in
particular of Merry and especially Pippin, shines through in all she
does and that is no bad thing.

Not only that, Marigold has now proved her skill in writing dialogue, an
area she seems a trifle timid of in the beginning. Any doubts about her
ability in this area must surely have been resolved with the sparkling
wit, humour as well as heartfelt feeling she is able to produce. Her
hobbit voices, in particular, always ring true to character and
demonstrate her deep understanding of their personalities.

All these factors link well with her comprehensive knowledge of canon,
which for a long time she has put to good and effective use for the
benefit of others through her betaing and now can call upon to good
effect in her own work.

I, and I imagine the rest of the fandom, trust and hope that she will
continue to write more stories in the future as they are always a breath
of fresh air, as her love of the subject continues, unabated.

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