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Title: The Otters of Imladris · Author: chaotic_binky · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 491
Reviewer: Oshun · 2008-11-01 02:58:42
Binky's stories are usually layered and subversive and this is no
exception. What you expect to see is not always what you will get.
There is a lot more going on there than is immediately evident. In
this case, the title, and the categorization of humor, might lead one
to believe that this is short, fluffy throw-away piece that will bring
a smile and perhaps a laugh. But actually it has a great deal to say
about the characters involved, their individual and often conflicting
ways of considering and approaching a problem. It is very much a story
of a relationship, as well as a story about respect and lack of
respect for nature and the necessity of merging of practicality and
sentiment to arrive at the best result for how to care for a
vulnerable creature. And it has a happy ending.

Title: Another Prometheus · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 85
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-01 08:14:15
A very interesting interpretation of one of the most fascinating and
complicated characters in the Tolkien universe -- Feanor, cleverly
associated with Greek mythology. Well crafted!

Title: Of Cake and Crumbs and Distant Dreams · Author: Lindelea ·
Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 688
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-01 09:29:52
Spoilers!
For those who have been forced to grow up too quickly as happened with
Peregrin Took, sometimes they just need the reassurance that they are
indeed young and deserve to enjoy innocence. So it is with Pippin this
day as he sits in a tower in the Citadel of Minas Tirith and wishes he
was at home

Here Frodo is at his best as he seeks to recall the feeling of
stability and comfort Pippin needs at the moment, and I think the
story told is excellent therapy for both him and Pippin. For a moment
they aren't heroes in the King's City who've somehow managed to do
things too large to understand, but just the Hobbits of the Shire they
were born to be.

Oh, Lindelea, how I love this story, one I appear to have missed when
it was posted--but then I was rather young in the craft myself. It is
the kind of tale within a tale that we all have told our children--or
nieces and nephews or younger cousins--at one time or another. It's a
tale of home and the simple desires of children with just enough
prosaic stuff to be comfortable and fantasy to be interesting. I feel
I'm sitting on the stair with the two Hobbits considering the
appetites of Hobbits of various sizes myself!

Thank you indeed for this one, one I'll possibly read to small
children one day.

Title: BRIDGE: Pá Valaraucar ar Námier · Author: Fiondil · Races:
Other Beings · ID: 415
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-01 09:38:20
Spoilers!
In Fiondil's-verse, it was the suggestion of Olorin that those sent to
Middle Earth be invested in Hroa similar to that of Men, able to know
pain, injury, exhaustion, even death. Or maybe that last experience
was more than Olorin truly wanted, for after throwing down the Balrog,
therefore, Gandalf found himself within the Halls of Mandos as would
any slain Elf. And as happens with many slain Elves and Men who enters
Namo's halls, he is convinced he HAS to return--that somehow only if
he is present can all things work out properly for those, particularly
within the Fellowship, who struggle to see Sauron properly opposed and
the Ring destroyed.

["What part of being dead do you not understand?"] has to be one of
the funniest yet most profound lines in the whole story. And when
Gandalf finds he WILL be sent back after all....

Very thought-provoking and poignant as well as humorous. It appears
that Olorin, as happens with most folks, had lost the ability to
accept that death could happen to him as easily as to any other. That
the Creator as well as the Valar in this case agree he's needed back
in Middle Earth comes almost as a surprise to him; and he does help
the various members of the Fellowship to do what is necessary, after
all, and does manage to find and rescue Frodo and Sam.

A good, satisfying read.

Title: The Farmer's Son · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits:
Incomplete · ID: 509
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-01 09:45:49
Spoilers!
This is a marked divergence from Lindelea's usual story arc; Paladin
Took is not critical of his son, but instead is calm and aware. Plus
even though he is Thain, Paladin and his family continue to live in
the Farm at Whitwell rather than within the Great Smials. And Pippin,
as he prepares to leave to help Frodo move to Crickhollow--and for the
journey out into the wilds he knows will follow--hesitates to leave
his home and his family.

In it we see the Time of Troubles beginning, as well as the awareness
hit the Thain's family that their youngest has disappeared with Frodo
and Merry and Sam out into the unknown outer world. Why is Lotho after
particular property within the Tooklands, and is he doing similarly
elsewhere within the Shire? Where have their four gone and why, and
who are the black riders reported by the Bounders? And what is the
meaning of the recent influx of Big Men into the Shire? Why are they
congregating about Bag End in Hobbiton?

This look at the Time of Troubles as seen through the eyes of the
Thain's family promises to be fascinating, and I hope it is added to
soon. It is wonderful to see Lindelea breaking with her usual story
arc to experiment with quite a different Paladin Took, one she has
often regretted she hadn't written. I say, Go, girl!

Title: An Autumn Fair in Halabor · Author: Soledad · Times: Mid Third
Age · ID: 165
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-01 09:52:36
Spoilers!
Many stories are told of the kings and queens of the lands of Middle
Earth--stories of royalty amongst Men, Elves, and Dwarves; but not
enough stories are told of simple villagers and those who visit them.
This about the visit of Elves to the Gondorian town of Halabor is
fascinating particularly because it's not about Denethor or Aragorn as
Lord of Gondor, but primarily about the traders and craftsmen among
Halabor's citizens and their counterparts who visit from the Elven lands.

Wonderful look at day-to-day life for Men and Elves. Highly recommended!

Title: Answers · Author: Armariel · Genres: Poetry: Drama · ID: 458
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-01 10:01:24
Spoilers!
Frodo heals, and as he heals he seeks to reassure Sam as to how much
he loves him, and how much what Sam was able to do has contributed to
the healing he knows.

As is always true of Armariel\\\'s poetry, this is poignant and speaks
as much to us as it does Tolkien\\\'s characters. How much we depend
on one another as we find our wounds healed and our lives fulfilled!

Beautiful and filled with an aching brilliance.

Title: Utúlie'n Aurë · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 163
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-01 14:54:41
Spoilers!
A great, poignant view at the impact the final downfall of Sauron and
of evil in the Third Age must have had on one who was there to see the
bitter defeats of the First Age. Also, I like the unobtrusive way you
bring those things that matter fighting for, and for which evil needed
to be defeated, into this. Friendship and caring, raising toddlers,
all those things life matters for - effectively brought in here with a
few, small strokes. Elegant and lovely. I like!

Title: The Stranger · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 560
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-01 15:36:24
Spoilers!
What a powerful short story, hinting at so much more. There are very
different ideas about Macalaure's final fate, and this one is a good
take. I lI feel sad for your choice of the only way for him to find
home, in this tale, especially since there is still that oath looming
in the background. However, the way you bring his fate to our
attention, and confront it with the friendly curiosity of the boy,
here, is very effective. Very well done. Love it.

Oh, and now I really want to read the poem the intro lines are taken from!



Title: Fulfilling Oaths · Author: Nieriel Raina · Times: Multi-Age ·
ID: 332
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-01 16:09:52
Spoilers!
This is a powerful and compelling tale about the history and the
meaning of the Ring of Barahir, and what inmpact it may have had to be
passed along. The short vignettes along the stations of the ring are
very poignant, and work very well. I loved the end, too. Full circle,
indeed! And the title of the story is fitting, too.

Very well done! Thank you for writing and sharing.

Title: Silver Blossoms Blown · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 646
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-01 16:25:29
Spoilers!
This is a beautiful short piece bringing across the perception of one
of the Valar of the new Children of Illuvatar, and their coming into
their maturity. I love the poetic language, and also the very distant
and different perspective. There are few tales giving us the possible
look of events out of the perspective of the Valar, and even less
which take into accountv that this perspective is bound to be very
different from that of mere incarnates. This one brings across this
fact, in spades.

Very well done, and well worth reading. Thank you for writing and sharing!

Title: The Making of Werewolves · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races:
Villains · ID: 42
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-01 16:31:11
As I have said elsewhere, already, I love the powerful language of
this short vignette, and also the deeper view it gives us at a part of
the backstory of the Silmarillion that is mentioned there with only a
few words. The style is very much like the Sil itself, more history
recounting than direct tale, but the tale is still very compelling.
Enhancing indeed! I like, and very much so!

Thank you for writing and sharing. :)

Title: On Canon and Fanfic · Author: Marta · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 123
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-01 16:54:34
Very good essay on what constitutes an AU and what is canon, and why
even a complete AU should at least make sense and be related to the
canon in the original universe. I like the author's stance, although I
do not agree with every part of it. Still, kudos for writing such a
good and clearly stated defense to that most beloved of my reading and
writings genres: the alternative universe. :)

Very well done!

Title: They Also Serve · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 365
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-01 17:03:50
Spoilers!
An usual approach, giving a small insight in to what had to go on in
Rivendell behind the scenes to keep the whole valley going. The view
into Arwen's longing and worries about her betrothed work also. Nice idea!

Title: Creation Myths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 300
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-01 17:28:10
A powerful comparison of two very different ways to handle one's own
creations, and poignantly showing the difference between the
generosity given by love, and the jealousy and pettiness generated by
pride. Gripping despite its shortness!

Title: A Taste of Home · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 138
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-01 18:02:56
Moving story, told with a light and humorous touch. Pearl Took shows
Merry and Pippin convincingly as old, but still retaining their
personalities.

The dialogue was especially engaging and lively. And the climax of the
story was hilarious - and thanks for that yummy recipe!

Title: Rude Awakening · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 692
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-01 18:06:42
Strangely unsettling; I didn't quite know whether to be creeped out or
to laugh at the odd situation Pippin found himself in - which goes to
show how well-written the story is to be so ambiguous and effective.

Title: Dark Dreams · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 550
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-01 18:11:13
Very evocative and atmospheric descriptions. I could feel Pippin's
panic building and building. Merry's sleepwalking and -talking was
eerie, and I can very well imagine that he suffered from such and
similar nightmares after his experiences - and that Pippin can
sympathise because he suffered those or similar ones, too.

Well-paced; the tension keeps mounting up and then slowly eases out at
the end.

Title: O Merry Mine · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort ·
ID: 636
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-01 18:27:13
Touching insights into the relationship between Frodo and Merry
throughout their lives. I liked how the basic premise of each vignette
changed and adapted itself to the various circumstances, sometimes
showing some random event, sometimes pivotal events in LotR.

Title: Denial · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of Finwe · ID: 80
Reviewer: Angelica · 2008-11-01 18:50:51
This ficlet is another great character study by Oshun where nothing
very dramatic seems to be happening and yet by the end of the story
much has been said about the characters.
Here the contrast is between bohemian Makalaure and [picture perfect]
Maitimo. Makalaure's shrewd -and sarcastic- observations and Maitimo's
vulnerability despite his apparent strength tell a lot about these
characters beyond the quick scene that we are given to witness. The
author also makes the depth of affection between the two of them
unmistakably clear (how else could they have reached the end of the
First Age together?).

Title: King Stag · Author: Jael · Races: Elves: Mirkwood Elves · ID: 86
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-11-01 21:58:07
Spoilers!
In [King Stag], Jael takes the reader deep into the wild and perilous
realm of Faerie through the eyes of Thranduil as he strives to prove
his worth to his new wife's parents and their tribe. Although solidly
set in Tolkien's Middle-earth, Jael's Avorren truly echo the ancient
forest-spirits of Northern Europe, the deep mythology from which
Tolkien derived his legendarium. This gifted writer, with her solid
knowledge of literature and history, takes shamanism (the ritual of
fly agaric - delightful to this reader/reviewer who had entertained
the notion of becoming an ethnobotanist at one time) and primeval
symbolism (running with the stags) and interweaves them seamlessly
into Tolkien's world, thereby enriching it.

Jael bolsters the different elven cultures by the use of Primitive
Elvish sprinkled throughout the story. The use of Primitive Elvish and
Sindarin phrases is not ever gratuitous, but adds a level of detail
that further enhances the story. The culture of the Avari is
beautifully realized in [King Stag] and delves into Tolkien's brief
writings of the Sindar who moved into the Greenwood, wishing to return
to a simpler life.

Then there is the characterization. Jael's Thranduil is such a
well-crafted protagonist that he practically leaps off the page.
Lalaithiel, his wife, is a very satisfying character, again one of
Tolkien's sub-textual women we know had to have existed and who Jael
brings to full and passionate life here and most fortunately for this
reader, in other works of the Jael-verse, too. Likewise, Tûron, her
father and Thranduil's guide in the ceremony, is nicely realized: the
"noble savage."

The story is bracketed by bittersweet bookends in the form of the
prologue and the epilogue, especially the epilogue. Heartwrenching
without stooping to the maudlin, this is a sad coda for the King of
the Greenwood, but there is hope and endurance, too, for the son of
the tall beech.

Thanks to this story, whenever I walk in the local woods (which harbor
black squirrels - really!) and see the tall beeches or scare up a
deer, I think of [King Stag] and let my imagination conjure up Avorren
among the trees.

Title: Early Winter at Himring Hill · Author: Oshun · Genres: Romance:
Elven Lands · ID: 79
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-11-01 22:33:57
[Early Winter at Himring Hill] is welcome ray of light amidst the
sturm und drang of The Silmarillion. Here Oshun uses my favorite
descriptor of her version of Fingon: irrepressible. Throughout her
story arc of Maedhros and Fingon, that is how I see Fingon, who often
seizes the day and seeks joy in his life, even in the face of
darkness. In this vignette, Fingon's devil-may-care exuberance shines
through Oshun's description of his approach to the fortress on Himring
Hill: banners flying and hooves thundering. The setting is cold --
even grim -- but Fingon's joie-de-vivre (as Raksha so aptly put it)
and Maedhros' warmth melt the frost of this chilly scene of winter.
One would like to think these two fellows returned to the keep of the
fortress and drank wine by a roaring fire in the hearth.

I find Oshun's style to be fresh and therefore immensely appealing,
and I'm in awe of her knack for dialog. Through Maedhros and Fingon's
expressions and conversation, their personalities are distinctive and
fully reflect their natures in her larger works. I also greatly
appreciate the humanity that she imbues in her Firstborn, and this
also shows in [Early Winter] with the fierce embrace and ear-to-ear grins.

This story, set in the grey cold of winter, always warms my heart.

Title: Denial · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of Finwe · ID: 80
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-11-02 01:08:34
Spoilers!
Upon reading this ficlet, I am fervently hoping that Oshun will expand
on Maitimo (Maedhros) and Macalaurë's (Maglor) relationship with her
trademark gifts for writing excellent dialogue and finely wrought
emotion. She has drawn the affection between the brothers so well here.

Oshun uses her keen eye for detail to illustrate the differences
between Maefollowing is a fabulous example of the "show, don't tell"
approach with a keen eye to detail. For example, contrast this...
[Idly scratching at a dried spot of egg yolk that had dribbled onto
the front of his threadbare tunic at breakfast the day before...]

with Nelyafinwë's studied aesthetic:

[Nelyafinwë's bright copper-hued hair cascaded past his shoulders in
an apparent state of attractive disarray, which Macalaurë knew with
certainty had required considerable effort to achieve.]

This vivid writing casts the contrast of the two men into high relief:
scholarly Maitimo and artistic, BoHo Macalaurë. Likewise, Nelyo's
blushing, characteristic of a redhead, and Macalaurë's cackling add
wonderful humane touches to these characters and reinforce their
distinctive personalities.

Macalaurë's elusive composition crytallizes into a most satisfying
conclusion for both the character and this reader. Although [Denial]
has humor and light, there is an undercurrent of the somber, too.

Looking forward to reading more of Maitimo and Macalaurë in your WIP
and other nascent works, Oshun!




Title: The Last Messenger: A Tale of Numenor · Author: Fiondil ·
Times: Second and Early Third Age · ID: 8
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-02 01:39:42
In this fascinating adventure, the Valar ask Laurendil, a character
from the story Elf Interrupted, to bring one last message to Numenor,
to the Faithful. Laurendil is not sure why he should be the messenger,
but long ingrained obedience to the Valar makes him go.

During his time in Numenor, he becomes embroiled in the fates of the
Faithful and finally realizes, being the messenger was just an excuse
to get him to Numenor. Since Isildur's attempt to steal a fruit of
Nimlos a young man of the Faithful is missing, and Laurendil helps
with the rescue mission.

The story reels you in and you read on and on to find out what happens
next. Do they make it? What are the consequences. I thoroughly enjoyed
this tale, which helped me to understand some of the older history of
Middle-earth.

The story features a whole cast of strong original characters, but you
forget that they are not originated with Tolkien. So well do they fit
into this world.

Title: Not Yet · Author: erobey · Genres: Romance: Elven Lands · ID: 712
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-02 01:41:19
This is a very enjoyable story about Glorfindel pining for his former
lover and trying desperately to find Legolas of Gondolin in Legolas
Thranduilion. I like the characterization of the characters and how
Legolas Thranduilion stands up to Glorfindel's strange behavior.

Title: Worlds Within Worlds · Author: Rubynye · Races: Cross-Cultural
· ID: 237
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-02 01:42:21
I like the way the contrast between the Shire and the outside world is
described. The Shire is all soft and round edges, the outside world is
tall, harsh and edgy.

Title: Parth Galen · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 705
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-02 01:45:00
For whatever reason, I hadn't seen this before. This is a beautiful AU
gapfiller and I think, for my part, much more worthy of Boromir.
Although, if this would be canon, then the death scene would lose most
of its poignancy. I love it that you brought bits and pieces from your
other stories into it. Come to think of it, Boromir, in your universe,
has a lot of people to show him the right way. The ring's insinuations
are really playing on Boromir's fears and wishes. In this version it
just doesn't encounter a Boromir with no support.

Title: To Be A King · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves · ID: 252
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-02 01:45:51
As Gil-Galad discovers, it is not easy to be King. Seeing his timid
beginning here and knowing what legend he will become, gives the story
an added depth. I like Cirdan's teaching style. He must drive
Gil-Galad nuts at times.

Title: A Woman in Few Words: The Character of Nerdanel and Her
Treatment in Canon and Fandom · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 107
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-11-02 01:49:40
Nerdanel, even with sparse text-time in The Silmarillion, is a
character who resonates with many fan fiction writers in the
Tolkienian milieu. Dawn, with her characteristically thorough approach
to Tolkienian lore, examines this attraction and fleshes out a canon
character who has captured the attention of fandom. Through her
careful perusal of Tolkien's writings beyond The Silmarillion, Dawn
has collected textual data which reveal Nerdanel to be an
exceptionally intelligent and strong woman. In addition to being a
well researched essay, Dawn's exercise highlights the benefits of
delving deep into the expansive writings of Tolkien for the fan
fiction writer who ventures beyond The Lord of the Rings or even those
who write solely within the realm of the trilogy. Sometimes the
knowledge unearthed is challenging, even discomfiting, e.g., the fates
of the Ambarussa and Nerdanel's foresight concerning them.

The analysis of Nerdanel's hair color via the Vinyar Tengwar was
especially noteworthy. All sorts of tidbits about characters and
culture can be gleaned from study of Tolkien's languages as published
in Vinyar Tengwar or Parma Eldalamberon.

As a writer of technical documentation, I found the appendix to be a
most satisfying back-up to the essay, particularly the table. I'm with
Moreth...a graph with a correlation coefficient would have sent me
into spasms of squeeing.

Overall, an excellent resource for those who write this remarkable
woman into their fiction.



Title: Bears With Honey · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 243
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-02 12:33:05
Very nice view at the implications of being wedded to a skin-changer;
and a very wise woman who knows how to attract her husband in such
circumstances. I like! :)

Title: Child of Hope · Author: Galadriel · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 97
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-02 12:51:03
This is very beautiful, and a nice view at Boromir and Faramir as kids
in much nicer circumstances. I loved the image of the two brothers at
Denethor's court, and the way thy compare to each other. Loved the
surprise ending, too.

Nicely done! :)

Title: Into the Woods · Author: Gloria Mundi · Times: Modern Times ·
ID: 593
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-02 12:59:37
Dropping characters from another world into Middle Earth rarely works
well, but this take on the topic was surprisingly to the point and
indeed worked. Lovely crossover with very lovely characterizations.
And I thoroughly enjoyed the image those two characters together gave
me. The interaction was spot-on, too. And the slashy part just worked
as the icing of the cake. Very nicely done!

Thank you for writing and sharing! :)

Title: Gifts · Author: Gloria Mundi · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 594
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-02 13:03:32
A striking reinterpretation of the relationship between these three,
and the way Smeagol's thoughts are presented, here. I loved Smeagol's
take on how to show his affection, and I loved the whole idea. Very
unusual, and very intriguing!

Thank you for writing and sharing!

Title: Don't Explain · Author: gwidhiel · Races: Elves: Incomplete ·
ID: 289
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-02 13:43:14
I rarely read stories about the House of Finwe; I am more hooked to
the Elves of the Third Age, as a rule. However, this story has me
hooked and keeps me enthralled with the drma that lies buried behind
the apparently happy opening. Also, it is a wonderful take to see this
enfold from the view of Indis. And so we learn a lot more of the story
that ledt to the fall-out between the parts of the family...

Very compelling tale, very well written, with deep emotions. A very
good read. Thank You for writing and sharing!

Title: Feelings of Superiority · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 362
Reviewer: crowdaughter · 2008-11-02 13:50:53
This compelling series of drabbles shows very effectively that bias
and prejudices were alive and well in Middle Earth, and not restricted
to any one race, as well. The poignant way in which Gwynnyd brings
those feelings to the point for each race is sharp and clear as a
surgical blade, but very, very fitting for each of these races. Very
well written, and very well done. [Feelings of Superiority], indeed.
Kudos!

Thank you for writing and sharing.


Title: Journeys of Vása · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races: Elves:
Incomplete · ID: 140
Reviewer: Moreth · 2008-11-02 14:47:54
Spoilers!
In these vignettes, Dawn has presented the Rising of the Sun from a
series of unusual perspectives.

The first is a heartbreaking look at Tilion's memories of his
unrequited love for Arien, and her catastrophic encounter with Melkor.
The writing is dark and haunting, and does not leave me with the
impression that there will be a happy ending - which suits the flavour
this particular theme in Tolkien's writing.

The second is less epic in scope, but captures the uncertainty of a
world that has changed and in which 'light' will never quite be the
same again. Mahtan's fears and concerns are convincingly expressed.

The final vignette is much lighter in mood, and looks at just what it
takes to succeed in crossing the Helcaraxë and surviving to watch the
new Sun rise. The answer is, of course, 'good organisation'!

Interesting and entertaining studies - I would certainly read further
vignettes in this series.

Title: The Littlest Warrior · Author: RavensWing14337 · Races: Elves:
Incomplete · ID: 552
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2008-11-02 14:57:43
A creature of evil is brought forth which sucks the life-force from
other beings. Elves of Lorien encounter it first and one of the party
is injured. Only Elrond might be able to save the young Elf's life and
so Haldir and his brothers make the perilous journey to Rivendell with
the injured Elf, unaware that the creature follows.

Meanwhile, three-year-old Estel rules the hearts of the Elves of
Rivendell with his winning ways and ingenuous outlook on life. The
episodes describing Estel's relationship with Elrond, his brothers and
all the other Elves of Rivendell are hilarious and very true to the
way most toddlers act and react. The scene of Elrond chasing after a
wet and naked Estel who has determined how best to bring a smile to
his ada's face is so funny I was laughing out loud.

The contrast between the idyllic nature of Rivendell and the horror
that approaches unsuspectingly is nicely drawn and RavensWing does an
excellent job of keeping up the suspense without losing the humor of
millennia-old Elves attempting to raise a rambunctious mortal with his
own ideas. As Gilraen is already dead in this story, this is
definitely AU, but very believable in its telling.

Title: The King's Surgeon · Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Longer
Works · ID: 90
Reviewer: pandemonium_213 · 2008-11-02 15:45:09
I stumbled across this extraordinary novel while wandering around
those Tolkienian fan fiction sites that I visit less often than my
usual haunt, and what a treasure [The King's Surgeon] is!

I stand up and applaud SurgicalSteel's creation of Serindë. I'll speak
frankly here: Tolkien gave us a paucity of strong female characters or
at least not nearly enough for my tastes. Yes, I know there are
exceptions, those notables like Galadriel and Eowyn, but my life's
experience makes me yearn for more. (Full disclosure: I'm a cranky old
woman who worked in a field long dominated by men although more women
work in the discipline now.)

Make no mistake: I love Tolkien's mythology, but there's no denying
that in *certain* respects, his *canonical* work does not fully engage
me. That is to say, his "green sun" is sometimes unconvincing. In part
that is due to the many unnamed women in his works -- as Dwimmordene
aptly calls them, textual ghosts. Unfortunately, there is a reluctance
on many fan fic authors' parts to write OFCs due to the "Mary Sue"
pejorative. However, SurgicalSteel, true to her nom de plume, has
steel in her spine and shows no fear. She gives us Serindë, an
incredible -- and *authentic* -- woman-in-full.

I love Serinde's personality and attitude: irascible, stubborn, warm,
brilliant, sardonic...enough so that I wish I could sit down with her
and listen to the tales of her life's work. SurgicalSteel's fabulous
detailing of medicine and surgery, Middle-earth-style, is tremendously
appealing to me although I will note that it occasionally veers into
the pedantic; I say this with a knowing wink because I (ahem) have a
tendency to do the same thing.

SurgicalSteel's characterizations are excellent. Her characters come
to life as real human beings with strengths and flaws, from the
canonical "headliners" like Aragorn and Frodo to her carefully crafted
OCs. I read Serindë's history with fascination. That back story
provides the foundation of this exceptional woman.

With [The King's Surgeon] now under my belt, I look forward to
exploring more of the Steel!verse.

Title: Tolkien's Parish: The Canonical Middle-earth · Author: Steuard
Jensen · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 91
Reviewer: Moreth · 2008-11-02 16:20:33
An entertaining and thoroughly enjoyable essay that presents an
approach to determining which parts of Tolkien's writing may be
considered 'canon'.

Some wider reading of Tolkien is probably required for the essay to
make sense, 'Leaf by Niggle' in particular. Jensen uses the imagery
from this short story to explore the 'unfinished' nature of Tolkien's
writing.

I'm not, personally speaking, convinced of the necessity of deriving a
'canon of work' but I am happy to share with this author a common [joy
of exploring a true Secondary World]. And that, after all, is the fun
of reading Tolkien's work!

Title: If You Could See What I Hear · Author: Cathleen · Times: Mid
Third Age: Eriador · ID: 614
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-02 19:50:46
Spoilers!
This charming and beautifully written story delivers an unexpectedly
dark and stunningly ethereal realm in the peaceful, pre-Ring War
Shire. "If You Could See What I Hear" is a perfect example of why I
like the MEFAs. The wee hobbit genre is not a place where I normally
venture, but I am very glad to have spent time in Cathleen's world of
Pippin's youth.

Cathleen is building up a body of work based on Pippin-lad's
adventures with his knitted piglet/imaginary companion Tulip. In this
extened story, they have a somewhat perilous adventure into the world
of Faerie, a land populated by creatures from pre-Christian mythology
that has little to do with Tolkien's elves. Tulip becomes the
protective voice of Pippin's mother Eglantine, guarding the overly
curious child as he becomes lost in this deceptive realm.

My favorite moments involve the inhabitants of the Faerie world and
their encounter with Pippin's anxious father Paladin. He inadvertently
wanders into the Faerie world while searching for his son. Through
Paladin's eyes, Cathleen explores the largely fanon theme of the Took
who took a faerie wife. As the story evolves you fear for the father
and son, knowing all the while that the faerie folk will return them
safely to the Shire, considerably wiser for their encounter.

I heartily recommend this story to all who enjoy being enchanted.


Title: Where the Sky Kisses the Horizon, There My Dreams Lie · Author:
Lindelea · Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 689
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 00:29:15
A sweet little piece of the love for Frodo that the Ring-bearer
inspired in others. I love the last sentence the most.



Title: ...and the sound of a battered heart, beating · Author:
Lindelea · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 690
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 00:34:18
This is one of the greatest things that Frodo did. He had indeed
"grown very much". Forgiveness is essential to the one who does the
forgiving even if the one forgiven does not accept it or others do not
understand why. Frodo is a wonderful role model for us all and this
little story shows one of the reasons why. Bravo!



Title: The Language of Waves · Author: Claudia · Races: Hobbits · ID: 193
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 00:38:28
A gentle, happy adventure for Frodo in the West.

Title: In the Hands of the King · Author: fantasyfan · Times: Late
Third Age: Gondor · ID: 231
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 00:42:47
Not only in the hands of the king, but the queen as well. A loving
gift to Frodo from Arwen and we all thought the gem was her first
gift! I love the idea that she would have seen that this other gift
would be needed as well. Bless her.

Title: Elanor of Westmarch: The Return · Author: Baranduin · Races:
Hobbits: Family · ID: 78
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 00:52:53
[she who had had so many conversations in her heart and mind with both
Frodo and Sam. As she grew older, sometimes she thought she lived more
with them in her head than she did with her family] - Ah, a lass after
my own heart! I loved that part because it's so me. I talk to Frodo a
lot myself, sometimes out loud.

Title: Blood and Iron · Author: Ribby · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 122
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 00:54:49
I love the idea of Elrond pouring [hope and faith] into the reforged
sword. Very good imagery there.

Title: Utúlie'n Aurë · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 163
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 00:57:43
The celebration of the victory at the Fire is felt far and wide - I
love that the Elves felt that.

Title: Temptation · Author: Princess Artemis · Genres: Poetry · ID: 416
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 01:07:15
Spoilers!
A very interesting long poem from the POV of the Ring, working on
those who come into its range. You get a good idea of its terrible
voice as it spoke to the heart and soul of those who it wished to
corrupt and kill and its outrage when the attempted seduction failed.
Heartache for its promise to slay Frodo slowly. Love the ending.

Title: A Cat in King Elessar's Court · Author: agape4gondor · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 66
Reviewer: PipMer · 2008-11-03 01:10:05
Spoilers!
I thoroughly enjoyed this smartly told tale told from the perspective
of Lord Denethor's Cat. I especially appreciated the postive light in
which Denethor portrayed, unlike some movie-verse stories. I also very
much enjoyed the Cat's relationship with Pippin, and how he feels like
he needs to be the Hobbit's protector, even all the way to the Black Gate.

Well-told!

Title: A Hobbity Wizard · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Childhood ·
ID: 596
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 01:13:13
A sweet, loving tale. Gandalf certainly had his hands full but likely
he loved just about every moment of it, Pippin certainly did! Love the
whole adventure the two had. Everyone should spend such days like this.

Title: The Ribbon · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 336
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-03 01:17:18
Spoilers!
I'm glad Frodo found healing and can talk more easily about his
missing finger and the pain he sometimes feels. That healer worked did
not just work on his physical pain, but his spiritual agony and for
that I thank her and bless her for helping such a dear heart.

Title: The Least of Rings · Author: Marta · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Drabbles · ID: 621
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-11-03 01:40:32
Well, this drabble was certainly a surprise! A totally different and
unexpected take on my favorite character's last moments with the
Ringbearer.

Title: Eight Weeks · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 273
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-03 01:47:20
Spoilers!
I'm not exactly sure how I should review Dwimordene's humorous drabble
cycle concerning manly fashion in late-third age Gondor. I personally
like a man with a well-tended beard. However, it is clear that
Denethor and Faramir think Boromir has made a mistake when he decides
to grow a chin full of whiskers. In whimsical chunks, drabbles show
the attempts by his brother and father to get Boromir to shave. A
light-hearted look at the Steward's family.

Title: MAGIC: The Password · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Elven
Lands · ID: 451
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-11-03 01:50:52
This story was cute (though you may not appreciate me saying so). I
especially enjoyed the queen cautioning him on his language. I was
sure I knew what the password would be, but I was wrong. I'll remember
it now, though. Grin.

Title: Diamonds For Forever I, II & III · Author: Elen Kortirion ·
Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 515
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-03 02:03:15
Spoilers!
Elen Kortirion's drabble triplet follows the history of the jeweled
necklace that the first Steward named Ecthelion gives as a bridal gift
to his wife, through to Denethor II, and finally to Arwen Evenstar.
Each drabble gives us a bit of insight into the artistic sensibilities
of the three main characters as each gives their opinion of the bridal
jewels.

Title: Bears With Honey · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 243
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-03 02:13:29
Spoilers!
This ficlet gives us a glimpse into what I suspect is largely
uncharted territory--what it must have been like to be married to
Beorn. As Gandalf's Apprentice would have it, the missus is quite used
to her husband's skin changing episodes. Very clever.

Title: Moonset over Gondor · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 652
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-11-03 02:19:07
I love the way this story begins with a wonderful decsription, before
moving on to a poignant conversation and concluding with the couple
looking to the future. Well done!

Title: Oathbreakers · Author: Thundera Tiger · Times: Late Third Age ·
ID: 470
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-11-03 02:32:41
I've re-read this story several times, trying to rreview it properly.
There is no doubt that the story is well written, but it has a
deepness to it that challenges me. I appreciate the points of view of
each of the twins in the way they see their brother and in their
opinion of Eowyn. I'm sorry I cant do it justice.

Title: O Merry Mine · Author: Larner · Races: Hobbits: Hurt/Comfort ·
ID: 636
Reviewer: nau_tika · 2008-11-03 02:58:53
Spoilers!
This is a wonderful story following Frodo and Merry from just after
Frodo's parents died throughout the rest of their days. The overall
story taught me things I didnt know, and the ending brought tears to
my eyes. Thank you and well done!

Title: The Flute · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-03 06:39:07
Beautiful prose, particularly in the beginning paragraphs. It sets the
mood very well in its melancholy tone, and also somehow captures what
Gandalf says the flute expresses in its music.

I very much like that parts of the story are told from the perspective
of some wild animals, it gives the story a special insight, at once
more removed yet also in some ways more observant. The shift between
places and times was used to good effect: At first, it showed the
distance between Pippin & Merry, and Frodo & Gandalf; and at the end,
it all came together in one moment.

The deep emotions of all the protagonists are conveyed very vividly.

Title: No Man's Land · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Drabbles · ID: 726
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-03 09:37:11
A very skilfully crafted AU drabble. I am even scared to think what
might have been if... this scenario had come to pass. This little
story gives me chills. Very well done, in so few words. Bravo!

Title: Writer's Bloke · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor: Drabbles ·
ID: 431
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-03 09:45:44
Very amusing and very true. This made me giggle. Well done!

Title: Autumn · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 489
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-03 10:01:50
A very nice and warm drabble that presents the differences between
Aragorn's life as a ranger and then as the king of Gondor. What he
might miss, and what he might actually enjoy? Here, Linda gives us a
glipse at the possible answers to these questions. Very gentle and
well written!

Title: A Moment Away · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 474
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-03 15:09:37
Moving and very unexpected. I was very pleasantly surprised to see
that Éowyn did not have to suffer some horrible vision or other, like
I would have thought. I found this a wonderful idea, as my expectation
only hightened the effect of the touching scene between Éowyn and Morwen.

It shows a more vulnerable and softer side to Éowyn that seems to fit
with her immediate mood before and after this moment. But though there
is the touch of despair in it that she displays then, here she shows
more resilience, and is given new courage that perhaps she can't
immediately tap into once she awakens, but that nevertheless is there.

It's a convincing take on where Éowyn might have inherited her
strength - Morwen "Steelsheen" seems like a better fit than her mother
Théodwyn. A moment for a strong queen to give good advice to her
granddaughter the shieldmaiden, yet coupled with a deeply loving and
caring feeling.

Title: Relief · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General Drabbles · ID: 446
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-03 15:10:33
Woo-hoo! Erm... *clears throat* A delightfully picturesque scene is
conjured up here!

But aside from painting this lovely scene for (suscepticble) readers
to swoon over, what I like most about this drabble is how it captures
the feeling of a person immersing themselves in cool water on a hot
day - how the freshness gradually creeps up and envelops the body, how
one can really feel as if one can breathe freely again etc.

And another lovely feature is how Tanaqui presents the water as almost
a living being, with awareness and motion, as if it actually interacts
with Boromir. My favourite of these moments is this: ["rivulets ...
meandering around old scars"], because it not only captures this
notion, but also because it "individualises" the scene, gives Boromir
a distinct personality.

Title: If You Could See What I Hear · Author: Cathleen · Times: Mid
Third Age: Eriador · ID: 614
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2008-11-03 15:30:09
Spoilers!
This wonderful story takes us on quite a ride. First, you have the
terrifying situation of a lost child with all the family and friends
becoming frantic, but then, Cathleen adds to it all the wonder and
mystery of the Took faerie heritage.

Pippin is usually portrayed as an overly curious lad, so it isn't
surprising that he wanders off into the woods with his knitted piglet,
Tulip. Tulip is up for the adventure with her lad, that is until he
starts following a strange voice. He begins to catch glimpses of a
small person that makes it even harder for him to resist the urge to
follow. He is lost in woods he is not supposed to have gone into to
begin with and Tulip can't do anything about it.

Back home, everyone is in an uproar as search parties are formed.
Paladin goes with the group who head towards the woods.

The story has twists and turns. moments that make you hold your breath
and moments that make you laugh. There is danger mixed with beauty and
lessons to be learned by two special Tooks. Cathleen has blended
poems, and myths about the realm of faerie into Tolkien's Middle-earth
with great skill. There is an amazing amount of research in this story
that gives it wonderful depth.

Most Excellently Well Done, Cathleen!

Title: A Promise · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Childhood · ID: 149
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2008-11-03 17:52:57
Spoilers!
A beautiful, heartbreaking, yet hopeful story dealing with the death
of a loved pet. Golden has captured the sorrow so many of us know at
the loss of a dear pet, a pet that is more a dear friend. The hope
here is that we will meet our furry friends again someday where we
will never more have to part.

Pippin loses his dog, Jule when she does not recover from a difficult
birthing. The next night he ends up sneaking out to sleep on her grave
and he has a vision of her alive and healthy in a beautiful place.
There, she asks him to care for her puppy as he has loved and cared
for her. The next morning, his mother places the now out of danger
puppy and Pippin promises to care for her as he told her mother he would.

A truly moving story.

Title: Promise and Sorrow · Author: Virtuella · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 607
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-03 22:05:35
Spoilers!
What a stunner "Promise and Sorrow" is. Virtuella goes where Tolkien
feared to tread: the affect of the Ring War's end on the lives of
every day humans. (Of course, Tolkien does show us the affect of the
War's aftermath on hobbits in "The Scouring of the Shire.") This story
is guaranteed to move you in a realistic, non angsty fashion, and it
is but a few pages long.

Here Virtuella weaves into a cohesive whole six points of view from
men and women in different physical locations of Middle Earth They are
young and old, soldiers, farmers, healers, humble folk, and city folk
of reasonable means. I particularly applaud Virtuella's inclusion of a
farmer's wife from Rhun as one of her characters. All suffer loss, but
in many cases the heartbreak is tempered with a glimpse of optimism,
delivering the promise that the story's title eludes to. Even the
Rhunish farmer who has lost her husband remarks on how clean and blue
the sky looks, as it has never been in her lifetime. The closing
vignette lends a sense of peace as an old healer contemplates her new
life in Ithilien.

"Promise and Sorrow" is a very worthy read and recommended to all

Title: Trinity · Author: pandemonium_213 · Times: Modern Times · ID: 51
Reviewer: Moreth · 2008-11-04 10:18:26
Spoilers!
Hmmm - I find it hard to write a review for this story because it hits
home on so many levels!

Everything from the description of the desert storm to the clothes the
characters wear is excellently written. The touches of humour are
superb: ["The hair stays. We're rather vain about it, I'm afraid,"
said Fionn.] and the dialogue about refractive proteins makes me grin
every time I read it!

However, the themes of invention and responsibility are what make this
story really stand out. Pandemonium has used an unconventional
interpretation of Middle-Earth to consider some of the moral dilemmas
posed by technology. The pride in intellectual achievement, the joy of
creating something novel and the regret of all three characters is
convincingly portrayed. There is a nice touch of ambiguity regarding
the 'dream' that closes the piece in a very satisfying manner.

Thought-provoking and entertaining, this really is a 'cross-over'
story like no other! I thoroughly recommend a look...




Title: Old Friends · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 651
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-04 10:30:58
A very nice drabble with a touch of nostalgia to it. Olórin found
himself in a melancholic mood and recalled his time spent with his
friends, the friends that he dearly missed, in Middle Earth.

I particularly loved the last line. Moving and well done!

Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-04 10:55:23
This is another gem of a drabble by Nancy -- another excellent example
of her marvellous skills as a drabble writer. A hundred-word piece
that shows not only Denethor's disturbed thoughts -- his
Palantir-infused state of mind as he ponders his son's fate, but also
presents his rebellious, firm and yet poetic voice. Splendidly
written, powerful and chilling!

Title: Sing My Worth Immortal · Author: Perelleth · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 168
Reviewer: Moreth · 2008-11-04 11:03:33
A cast of (slightly tipsy) elves, a dwarf, Glorfindel's idea of
['cultural exchange'] and of course 'the drink of heroes'... and the
story of how it was discovered.

(And I'm sure Celeborn really should know better then to mention a
lady's age!)

It really is all delightfully silly! Nicely done, and my thanks to the
random story generator for pointing me to it.

Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: Moreth · 2008-11-04 11:31:46
Spoilers!
How evocative and sad! There is feeling of a grief so deep that
everything around seems stagnant and meaningless. Yavanna's inability
to create is heartbreaking... as is her melancholy view of the future.

This really is beautifully crafted. Very well done!

Title: Somewhere I Have Never Traveled · Author: Fiondil · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 578
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-04 21:39:38
How beautifully written! What I particularly like is what Eowyn has to
say: That Arwen's choice isn't so spectacularly special, just because
she is immortal, and that the choices made by humans are just as valid.

Somehow I would have thought that the afterlife would be a bit more
... otherworldly. It seems a bit too physical. Still, a very good story.

Title: Orc Talk! · Author: kitt_otter · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands ·
ID: 703
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-04 21:50:44
I haven't a clue what the word means, unless it's supposed to be troll
turd? A very amusing story and written with wit and elegance. I don't
noramlly care three straws for Legolas, but I liked this.

Title: Legacy · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 500
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-04 22:00:10
This is a touching piece in well-chosen, polished words. In a very
short story you have given the impression of width and depth of time
and space, of past and future related in this one person. I like it
very much indeed.

Title: The Game of Kings · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor · ID: 28
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-04 22:04:48
What a clever little ficlet this is, and every word fits just so! A
game of kings indeed. Well done.

Title: Wedding Nerves · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor · ID: 48
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-04 22:10:48
Oh, this was a very amusing story, in a light-hearted, witty sort of
way, skillfully written. I particularly chuckled about Elladan saying
that Aragorn washed up quite well. Well done.

Title: Not Quite Any Other Day · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 631
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-04 22:33:04
Oooh, this is an absolutely charming story! As usual, your prose is
just spot on. The wedding of a sibling can be tough indeed - I
remember my brother wasn't too happy on my wedding day, what with me
moving to another country and all that. Did you know, BTW, that the
greatest witch in all of Discworld is one Esmerelda "Esme" Weatherwax?
I just realize I will have to make this a bit longer to score more
points - I LOVED the bit when the water came to his groin, very funny,
and at the same time that whole scene was very, very romantic.
Brilliant! The last sentence is both amusing and touching.

Title: The Myth of the One Ring's Power · Author: Dreamflower ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 532
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-04 23:12:06
Spoilers!
Wow, Barbara, this was one facinating essay! I'm glad I came across
it. What a very astute examination of the exact nature of the ring. I
was particularly interested in the concept of the ring's "blind spot".
You are right, it could only overwhelm people who were already much in
the same "mould" as Sauron. Likewise, it is very conceivable that its
lures failed because they were so over the top. Especially in Sam's
case that is very evident.

I would like to add to this a more formal thought: The talk of the
absolutely irresisteble power of the ring is a hyperbole that is
necessary to perpetuate the plot. The epic story of LOTR could not
have been based on a ring that was merely said to be *rather* powerful
and dangerous - just like in a fairy tale you would never talk of a
princess being merely "quite a nice looking lass". On the other hand,
the ring *had* to be flawed and limited, because otherwise it *would*
have overwhelemed everybody and then there would have been no story.
The tension betwen the perception of the ring as being all-powerful
and the reality of it not quite getting a hold of people is the
catalyst by which the story is developed. Mind you, I would never have
thought of it in this way, had I not read your clever essay!

Title: Tower of the Moon · Author: Nath · Times: Multi-Age · ID: 577
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-05 00:23:10
Spoilers!
This short tale is a reflection on the city of Minas Ithil, once the
delight of Isildur's eye. The city was eventually captured by Sauron's
forces and corrupted into a place of horror. First, Nath gives us
Isildur's perspective as he views the new construction. Then we are
given Aragorn's perspective, three thousand years later, after Minas
Ithil has become, in modern terms, a "toxic waste site." This is an
unusual and thought provoking story.

Title: Scholarship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 43
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-05 01:37:08
Spoilers!
This is an interesting glimpse into Faramir's parental life, and
public life as one can only imagine that it is the thoughtfulness with
which he meets this delicate situation that would make him a good
leader and politician.

Title: Heavens' Embroidered Cloths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 292
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-05 01:48:00
Spoilers!
This is a lovely series, but more than anything what stood out from it
for me was that the memory Eowyn returned to Faramir was one primarily
of his father, not his mother, and that from that came a happy vision
of a future family united.

Title: Supporting Acts · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 436
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-05 01:52:24
An interesting look at the bit players in the big drama with an eye
toward how many small details can combine to create enormous change,
for ill and for good.

Title: The Roses of Imloth Melui · Author: Aervir · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 435
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-05 01:59:26
Spoilers!
I am always interested in seeing minor characters brought to the fore,
and this is a welcome portrait of an often overlooked character. I
especially liked the earlier drabbles, which hinted at Ioreth's
reasons for becoming a healer.

Title: Reparation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men · ID: 296
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-05 02:03:09
Spoilers!
An intrighing vignette which focuses on the complex relationships of
three of Isabeau's original characters. Isabeau has a knack for
creating some of the most interesting and credible Middle-earth
originals; and none is more charismatic, in his dour way, than
Imrahil's armsmaster and sworn brother, Andrahar. Here, Andrahar's
only battle is an internal one; in which he considers a rash action.
It's the kind of compelling drama that I've come to expect from this
very talented writer.


Title: Songs of Innocence and Experience · Author: Tanaqui · Races:
Men: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 440
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-05 02:10:14
Spoilers!
I almost find this trio of drabbles misleading; in the first two
Faramir is intentionally manipulated to serve many, while in the third
he clearly sees the lie intended only to harm the liar.

Title: Messengers from the West · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Genres:
Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 98
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-05 02:14:07
This is a cute little vignette.

Title: Dispelling the Fog · Author: fantasyfan · Races: Other Beings ·
ID: 642
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-05 02:50:49
Spoilers!
Interesting exploration of the true identity of one of the most
mysterious denizens of Middle-earth. Good characterisation of Frodo, too.

Title: Seas of Fate · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 487
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-05 03:34:26
Spoilers!
An elegantly written, quite interesting character piece focussing on
two characters rarely written together - Imrahil and Legolas. Thundera
Tiger focusses on the significance that the sea holds for the
Numenorean prince and the atypical wood-elf, and explores the
influence the sea has on each of them.

Title: Thawing Lily · Author: Soubrettina · Genres: Humor: Gondor · ID: 30
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-05 06:51:22
Spoilers!
Soubrettina's version of the courtship of Eowyn and Faramir takes a
tempting "what if" twist on their relationship and gives it an
alternately humorous, alternately disturbing spin. One of my stories
dares to have F and E consummate their marriage before the marriage,
so I was curious to see how someone else tackles this plot line.

"Thawing Lily" defies fanon in a riotous consummation scene, (not
terribly explicit, if you care about this). The succeeding chapters
turn the humor on its head by serving up bouts of stream-of-conscious
angst on Eowyn's part. What started out as a sly romp becomes a window
onto the disturbed mind of a woman who believes herself seduced and
abandoned, though indeed she's only trying to adandon joy for herself.

This is a very unusual story, worth checking out for its unique
perspective.

Title: Moved to Pity · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 366
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-05 10:05:02
A very beautiful and poignant drabble that explores Luthien's choice
from the perspective of the Valar. Excellent writing!

Title: Return · Author: Elleth · Genres: Alternate Universe: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 399
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-05 10:17:32
A very powerful set of two drabbles, each told from a different PoV,
that presents a truly interesting, and moving to the point of tears if
I may add, take on the fate of one of the Feanorian twins. Very
emotive writing!

Title: Midwinter Thoughts · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Noldor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 570
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-05 10:32:04
An elegant and insightful piece that shows a more emotional,
melancholic even, side of Maedhros as he pondered the purpose of his
life and his feelings. Beautiful, symbolic imagery, and an excellently
drawn portrayal. Bravo!

Title: Cat's Paws · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains · ID: 58
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-11-05 14:44:45
Spoilers!
[Cat's Paws] is an immensely intriguing story set at the time where
Sauron tried to woo the Noldorin elven smiths for his cause. After
reading [the Apprentice] this story shows how even the mighty and
intelligent Celebrimbor is being lured into this deception, however
Doc B manages to do it in such a manner that as a reader you fully
understand how this came to be. It is too easy to say that the
Fëanorian pride and lust for power caused Celebrimbor's downfall. No,
that is not the tack Doc B chose with this story, she simply shows the
thirst for knowledge and the camaraderie between two scientists and
how both interact where one has discovered something the other is
curious about. The symbolism (and therefore a superb chosen story
title) used to convey this is just excellent, cunning as a cat can be
to lure its prey, Sauron patiently awaits until Celebrimbor steps into
the trap he has sat by using the thirst to understand Sauron's skills
more. It's fascinating to read how this elf struggles with both
fascination and the feeling of so being perturbed, giving this fallen
Maiar the benefit of the doubt in the end. Aren't cat lovers just as
easily swayed when their sweet Tom goes out hunting? The caws of a pat
can be soft and vicious and the nature of a cat isn't always sweet, or
vicious. This story is a fascinating tale of seduction and
characterisation, with a feeling where I think: `and so it begins,
Eregion's downfall'.

Title: The Revenge of Curufin's Horse · Author: Moreth · Genres: Humor
· ID: 139
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-11-05 15:00:43
Spoilers!
I remember this story reading for the first time and desperately had
to search for some tissues to clean up my desk and monitor. Moreth has
a delightful sense of humour and stays true to form with these two
Fëanorians. I mean she really pictures Celegorm's priority: not a
raving rant, nay first tend to a filthy horse who has been mistreated.
Also is planning and scheming nature – picturing Curufin as the one as
impatient and a bruised ego is just fab! His love for animals and the
understanding of their language is put to such good use here. That
part alone had me grinning madly and nodding. It is often too easy to
have him around like a raving elf and to see him laughing so hard and
in tears regarding Mannish bad poetry once the mare fills him in:
simply hilarious! Curufin's reaction to those two is just worth being
a witness off (and Moreth makes you feel as you stand next to him).As
easy as these Fëanorians can be roused to revenge and action, just as
much can they are in stitches about attempts at poetry, no wonder
Thingol made Beren work for it. This is brilliantly written with a
great description of scene and atmosphere, Moreth puts her sense of
humour and writing skills to great use here. I am looking forward (and
I know she has more like this) to more of these great satirical – and
yet not – pieces.

Title: Seeking the Sun · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men · ID: 488
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-05 17:48:11
Spoilers!
On the morning after our US Presidential election, when surely some
pockets of prejudice nurse their hurts even while most of the nation
rejoices I find this a particarly moving portrait, but not only
because of the coincidence of timing. The author does a first-rate job
bringing the main character's disappoinment, hate, and loss to life,
yielding actions - though difficult - with which the reader can only
sympathise.

Title: Broken Star · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2008-11-05 19:42:22
Spoilers!
[Broken Star] is an immensely well written ficlet that stirs up many
emotions and equally as many thoughts. Knowing what is to come for
Celebrimbor, this short and private insight gives me the chills. In
Doc B's verse, she set those two up as colleagues and friends and many
of her works illustrate that. That is why the intimacy between those
two work so well, the experiences that ties both or a somewhat shared
past where both have killed – even those close to them. It even brings
up ethical questions to the table in the sense that can a villain
redeem himself? Can he or will another villain always manage to
connect to such a trait that makes them a [brother-of-my-heart]?
Sauron does feel at some level still something for his victim, the
stunning opening paragraph shows such love in his heart. In a way it
feels twisted that he has such tender emotions and at the same time… I
would have felt a bit awkward if the writer didn't bring it in,
knowing her works. This tenderness feels corrupted since at the end he
just as easily reaches for the poke to torture his victim, to get the
job done. This leaves me to wonder about executioners and their chosen
line of profession, how much they will have to set aside of their
humanity to get the job done. So many thoughts and ponderings, all
evoked by a stunning written double drabble. Great job!

Title: The Apprentice · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains · ID: 52
Reviewer: Angelica · 2008-11-05 21:36:37
Spoilers!
The Second Age is a period sadly underwritten, especially considering
all the events of cosmic consequence that take place then. This story
and its sequel more than start making up for this lack.
The author constructs a whole society of guilds and cities where Elves
and Men interact in a totally natural and realistic way and she does
it out a few canonical indications. The main characters, both the
canonical and the original, are amazingly vivid. Samaril, the original
character shares all the distictive traits of a full Noldor: skilled,
intelligent, passionate about his work and totally blind to its
ulterior implications. And, of course, Sauron: so far from the [Lord
of the Rings] ultimate villain. Here he is shown as a being immensely
complicated who has to deal with his multiple aspects and he does not
have an easy time doing it. He is Evil with capital E but he is so
much more and it does make sense that Celebrimbor and all the other
Elves of Eregion should fall into his trap. The background is a rich
canvas where even apparently minor characters add to the wealth of the
whole picture: for example, Samaril's parents who survived the horrors
of the First Age from Helcaraxe to Gondolin and bear the scars of all
they lived through.
The beautiful pictures that illustrate each chapter are another
element that add to the overall effect of this great story.

Title: No Mercy · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General Drabbles ·
ID: 443
Reviewer: Angelica · 2008-11-05 21:37:01
Spoilers!
Great description of the Dagor Bragollach where Morgoth's armies are
not the only enemy or even the most dangerous. The speed of the
movement of the flames is wonderfully conveyed as is the despair and
helplessness of the Elves, Men and beasts trapped by the fire.

Title: And Then There Was Cake, or Begetting Day Horrors · Author:
Klose · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 540
Reviewer: Angelica · 2008-11-05 21:37:25
Spoilers!
This is a thoroughly enjoyable and really very funny description of
what a birthday party must have been like in the golden days of
Valinor. It is full of delightful details that enrich the overall
scene: I choose - among many others - the presents Maitimo feels his
cousins would have liked to receive [ridiculous objects depicting
certain parts of the female anatomy] instead of the carefully chosen
books and jewelry he presents them with.
All the characters play their expected role: from Makalaure singing
bawdy songs to Aredhel and Tyelkormo getting a bit too close, to the
twins spilling the punch bowl. And of course, the drunken brawl
between Feanaro and Nolofinwe.
I can't help thinking that this story strikes a chord with mostly
everybody because not too many of us can claim not to have an
outrageous relative around at birthday parties.

Title: Star's End · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of Elrond ·
ID: 283
Reviewer: Angelica · 2008-11-05 21:37:45
The author has provided one of the most original, most melancholic
answers to what happened to Arwen after Aragorn died. She brings into
the story a very unexpected character but probably the only one at
that day and age who could really understand her predicament. It adds
to the story's power how Maglor and Arwen, though set ages apart,
interact so credibly and seamlessly.
Both characters are powerfully portrayed: on the one hand Arwen who
only then seems to realize what her life and death will be like
[Nothing in my life was ever that easy] and Maglor who is a true Son
of Feanor, no madness, no fading but full of pity and understanding.
He takes care of the practicalities of life in the wild and sounds
very much in control of the situation -quite reasonably so if one is
to consider that he survived for seven thousand years - and he seems
to have become reconciled to the fact that he is still an outcast for
most of the other elves despite all the time that has passed.
And then, he comes to the terrible, totally unexpected -at least for
me- decision at the end.
Another outstanding aspect of this story is the marvelous language
used to describe this beautiful world that is disappearing, becoming
something different after the departure of the Elves, where Arwen
can't find a place and where Maglor will struggle on.

Title: Trinity · Author: pandemonium_213 · Times: Modern Times · ID: 51
Reviewer: Angelica · 2008-11-05 21:38:13
Spoilers!
I've always thought that elves-in-modern-times stories at their best
are a kind of theoretical exercise (within the bigger theoretical
exercise that is Middle-earth) that serves to illuminate both Primary
and Secondary universes. Well, this put-together of the Silmarils and
the One Ring and the atomic bomb goes far beyond that as a powerful
reflection on ethics, power and scientific responsibility. The
original idea, strong characterization, wonderful details (the
shackles, the eyes, the hair), great use of quotations from very
powerful texts all make this story a real must.

Title: A Moment in the Morning in Bree · Author: Budgielover · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 731
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-06 02:32:46
Spoilers!
Oh, I loved this. Talk about strange customs. Poor Aragorn, being
watched that closely while shaving has to be disconcerting. I had to
laugh at some of the comparisons his shaving drew. It never occurred
to me to compare Aragorn's appearance with Frodo's. I loved Pippin's
questions. His friends might seem him too forward, but I bet they
wanted to know the answers too.

Title: Dead Steward's Gift · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Mystery · ID: 572
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-06 02:34:05
Spoilers!
This entertaining story takes you on a twisting and turning ride.
Faramir makes some discoveries, I think, he would have preferred not
to make. I like the characterization of Faramir as a capable man, sure
of himself, and willing to brave his memories and all kinds of ghosts.
But Cirrion, the cat, steals the show in some chapters. I loved the
epilogue from Cirrion's pov.

Title: Gently Held · Author: viv · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 6
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-06 02:34:36
Arwen's answer is not the typical answer to the question of why she
loves Aragorn. It's not the obvious, but something most people don't
think about. I love the poetic language of this little ficlet. I think
it fit the character of Arwen as elvish Queen as I envision her.

Title: Five Things that Never Happened to Serinde of Dol Amroth ·
Author: SurgicalSteel · Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy ·
ID: 222
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-06 02:35:23
Whew, am I glad that these are scenes that never happened to Serinde.
The first four scenes are a bit depressing. I never liked her
stepfather, but this here is gruesome. I liked the last scene the
best, so typically Serinde. When she wants to convince someone, she
doesn't care who is watching. I can believe that that demonstration
put all rumors to rest.

Title: One Equal Temper of Heroic Hearts · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres:
Romance: Gondor · ID: 334
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-06 02:36:10
Well matched, indeed. That is a lovely discussion between Aragorn and
Arwen. I had to giggle at Arwen's comment about this being [not an
academic discussion]. Poor Aragorn, he worked so hard on hiding the
evidence, and it was all in vain. Luckily, Arwen is smart and caught
on to Aragorn's doubt and insecurities fast. You could feel the trust
and familiarity between them during their discussion. I loved the
mentioning of Faramir in here. It had to be hard on Aragorn to see all
his friends die before him.

Title: The Birthday Blessing · Author: Larner · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 687
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-06 05:31:30
Spoilers!
A lovely trio of vignettes to remind us of the connection between the
Tree of the Kings, the mallorn tree that Sam nurtured in the Shire,
and the sacred trees and land of Valinor. Tolkien's love of trees is
well served here; and the image of Frodo and the elf-children
welcoming a flowering of the Tree of Tol Eressea is delightful.

Title: I Stand No Longer Alone · Author: Larner · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 62
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-06 05:42:44
A rather original look at Aragorn's claiming the throne of Gondor. In
lesser hands, the POV might seem a bit odd, but Larner hits just the
right notes, and language, to make the narrator and narration seem
plausible in this time of hope renewed.

Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-06 08:24:55
What I loved most about this short story was how meticulously and
vividly the scene was set - in describing the surroundings as well as
the characters and their moods - with fine brushstrokes that were as
unobtrusive as they were clear.

The interactions between the characters were very natural; I
especially liked the mixture of obvious affection between the two on
one side, and the restraint of showing it on the other - it felt very
real to me and just how I would imagine from Faramir, especially in
the mood as described.

It is such a pleasure to track the many creative ways in which
Altariel weaves her trademark chess metaphors into so many of her
stories, always fresh and meaningful for each individual story and
perfectly fitted to the symbolism as well as the actual point of the
plot she wants to convey. Here, it was lovely to see an additional
layer as Faramir himself uses the chess pieces as symbols to tell a story.

Title: Reparation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men · ID: 296
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-06 08:26:38
Wonderful characterisations: the characters are fully-realised, their
interaction realistic and convincing, and the dialogue vivid and
fitted individually to each character.

I like how this story draws from a variety of other stories in
Isabeau's canon and gives cohesion and new insight to the
over-reaching arc, as well as stands on its own, building its own plot
arc and resolution and character/plot development.

I have to say I found this story very important because it allowed for
Andrahar's actions in DAY to be seen in a wider context, with
self-awareness and the strength to acknowledge his mistakes to himself
and others, and make ["reparation"] - not only to Hethlin tp whom he
had done an injustice, but also to those to whom he is to be a role
model and a teacher, especially Brandmir.

The mixture of light-hearted moments and serious reflection and
conversation was exactly right. I liked the philosophical discussion
about Andrahar's actions and its implications and how it should be
remedied, and how both Andrahar and Brandmir learned from talking it
through; in particular in how open Andrahar was - and showed himself
to be to a shy Brandmir - to justified criticism.

Title: Autumn · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 489
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-06 08:33:42
A heart-warming story, radiating comfort and content. I especially
liked the contrast between describing beauty of the wild, and the
beauty of being inside in peace and calm - it made it clear that
Aragorn despite having a family and home to call his own now is still
able to appreciate both these things for what they mean to him.

Title: And Then There Was Cake, or Begetting Day Horrors · Author:
Klose · Races: Elves: Family · ID: 540
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-06 09:25:09
A truly hilarious vignette featuring Maitimo, who is about to
celebrate his begetting day, and yet, as it may happen in such a
faimly -- the celebration somehow falls out of control. Ah, gotta love
those relatives ;-) and their crazy ideas! Wonderful, absolutely
amusing read!

Title: Recognition · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Late Third Age:
Gondor Drabbles · ID: 481
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-06 09:41:25
This is a very interesting glimpse at Eowyn, during the time of her
recovery in the Houses of Healing, from Ioreth's viewpoint. It offers
a deep insight into the mind of a very observant, wise woman who sees
way more than other people. Great job!

Title: The Myth of the One Ring's Power · Author: Dreamflower ·
Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 532
Reviewer: Moreth · 2008-11-06 14:52:31
This is an excellently researched and well written critique of The
Ring as 'an irresistible shiny'.

Aside from the carefully presented argument (well backed up by
references!), I especially like the way in which Dreamflower links The
Ring's abilities to those of its maker, particularly with the
observation that both The Ring and it's master have a 'blind-spot'
that limits their prediction of other's behaviour.

Dreamflower leaves the reader with a Ring which, while it may not
possess absolute and irresistable power, is nevertheless (like it's
maker) obsessed by absolute power. It may be less potent then its
myth, but it is seen to be darker and more malicious for that...

An excellent analysis! I thoroughly enjoyed it.




Title: Wind and Fire · Author: elfscribe · Times: First Age and Prior
· ID: 539
Reviewer: Moreth · 2008-11-06 17:55:49
Spoilers!
I must applaud Elfscribe's rendition of Fëanor and the reason behind
the creation of Silmarils.

Not often does someone write a Fëanor who is not either simply an
arrogant idiot, or glowing hero. Elfscribe's Fëanor is hurt and
desperate (Oh yeah, and arrogant ;P). In this story his desperation to
recover the jewels has a very sound basis.

The sex scene (let's be blunt, the story contains a sex scene!) is
interestingly written. The uncertainty of a Vala in an incarnate form
is explored, but what I am most impressed by is the way that Manwë's
emotional response is rendered through music. Now that is very
appropriate.

I personally have no issues with 'ArchaicSpeek' provided it is
grammatically correct - and here Elfscribe delivers! Very well done
indeed.

Although I'm not certain about the canonical value of Melkor helping
to define the Silmarils, who's going to let that stand in the way of a
good story?

Title: Between Childhood and Coming of Age · Author: Dreamflower ·
Races: Hobbits: Friendship · ID: 141
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-06 18:17:47
As always, Dreamflower's hobbit characterizations are spot on, while
her details of Hobbit life expand Tolkien's vision without disrupting it.

Title: Rude Awakening · Author: Lindelea · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 692
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-06 18:21:23
Spoilers!
It is sobering indeed to contemplate the difficulties this happy pair
might have had returning to ordinary life.

Well done.

Title: Some Seasons · Author: sophinisba solis · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 199
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-06 18:24:55
A lovely, simple story with heartfelt and profound underpinnings. Well
done.

Title: The Ribbon · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 336
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-06 19:05:12
Spoilers!
This is a nice vision of a healed Frodo. There are so many things
Tolkien dealt with and so many he didn't ...

Title: The Ring That Sauron Forged · Author: Larner · Genres: Poetry:
Hobbits · ID: 645
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-06 19:09:28
Hehehe, that was rather amusing!

Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-06 19:09:48
Spoilers!
It's nice to see this moment examined. I have always thought that
Boromir must felt the quest for Rivendell vital considering all the
concerns he left behind.

Title: Bibliophile · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-06 19:14:04
Ah, yes. That must be worse than being called Viola and having people
giving you violets... Very sweet.

Title: Elanor of Westmarch: The Return · Author: Baranduin · Races:
Hobbits: Family · ID: 78
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-06 19:33:26
Spoilers!
I very much enjoyed this story. It is beautifully written with every
word just so. The sentiments are gentle and believable and the hint of
humour makes the story all the more touching. There were some very
sweet moments, like the idea that the tower had it's own life and
wanted Elanor to look west.

The appearance of Sam and Frodo is so skillfully handled that it seems
completely natural and that the reader isn't bothered with undue
questions. They come, because that's just the right thing to happen here.

I was reminded of my husband's grandad Charlie, who even in his
eighties would escape his wife and go off into the hills for a little
walk. I guess to keep a bit of independence is very precious to older
people. Thank you for this delightful portrayal of old age and
memories and above all of family love.

Title: Thicker Than Water · Author: Noliel · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 541
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-06 22:40:03
Spoilers!
This is an emotionally intense story that concentrates on a span of
time no greater than a few minutes, but Noliel's use of flashback from
moments across the course of Celebrimbor's life--particularly moments
spent with his father, Curufin--add weight to what is already a sad
moment. Far from pointlessly angsty, "Thicker Than Water" is
heartrending and a well-crafted story showing the human emotions that
even Tolkien's most maligned characters continue to feel for each
other. Curufin is often neglected in Silmfic, but Noliel brings him to
life here in relatively few words, showing his human side without
flinching from the darker aspects of his character that earned him his
reputation. Of course, in the eyes of his son--no matter the evil he
has done--he is never nonredeemable.

Title: Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus · Author:
pandemonium_213 · Genres: Poetry · ID: 50
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-06 22:47:03
Spoilers!
Only Pandemonium could conduct a scientific argument with Tolkien in
verse, and this poem is a commendable work showing how the maligned
scientists of Tolkien's stories--Feanor, Celebrimbor, Aule, and (of
course!) Sauron--likely saw magic in the world around them. At the
same time, I think that those of Pandemonium's readers who disagree
with Gandalf's assessment of breaking white to make a rainbow will
find themselves nodding along heartily about how she sees
Middle-earth--at least, this reader did! And extra props for using an
extra-canonical work often neglected by Tolkien fans and authors alike
that nonetheless reveals much about how he viewed his art.

Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-06 22:53:29
Spoilers!
"Kementari" is a thought-provoking look at how Yavanna saw the
Darkening of Valinor. A point Marta makes that I had never considered,
regarding the lives of Yavanna's trees and their preservation by the Ents:

[Yet somehow, deep in her bones, Yavanna knows that the tree-herders
cannot protect their charges.

How could they? For the tree-herders are but created things, for all
their strength, and Laurelin and Telperion fell while all the Valar
stood not so far away.]

And her assessment of Yavanna's envy of the other Valar for their
followers while she remains bereft is at once surprising but also the
sort of honest approach to the Valar that sometimes lacks in stories
about them.

Title: Alqualondë · Author: Moreth · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 220
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-06 23:00:48
Spoilers!
"Alqualonde" is, without a doubt, one of my favorite ficlets of the
past year. The kinslaying at Alqualonde is one of those topics that
nearly every Silmarillion writer writes about, and the drabble is a
popular form, but neither is easy to master, and Moreth does a truly
commendable job with both in this piece. Showing the kinslaying,
briefly, from the PoV of both a Teler and a Noldo, she uses brilliant
word choice in place of lengthy passages that could easily be applied
to this topic. The choppy sentence fragments of the first drabble
convey the speaker's confusion and the chaos in which he suddenly
finds himself. And, though I have read this piece numerous times and
know that it is coming, the last line still feels like a punch to the
gut every time.

The second drabble makes good use of repetition to represent the
methodical nature of the kinslaying from the Noldorin PoV, but, again,
in the final sentence, Moreth hits hard as her speaker contemplates
his deeds in totality.

Title: Name Calling: Group Identity and the Other among First Age
Elves · Author: Angelica · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 322
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-06 23:17:59
Spoilers!
"Quendi and Eldar," the source that this essay discusses, is one of
the more challenging of Tolkien's works. As Angelica herself states in
the essay, [The essay "Quendi and Eldar" seems to be on a first
reading mainly concerned with linguistic matters: a discussion of
different roots in Elvish languages and how these roots evolved into
different denominations for Elves and other beings]. However, hidden
within this very long linguistic discourse are numerous insights about
the cultures and histories of the different Elven clans. Angelica has
gone through the effort of finding and summarizing this information
for people interested in learning and writing about Tolkien's works
with a greater understanding of how Elves interacted with each other
and other races, beyond what we know from "fanon."

That, for me, is my favorite part about this essay. Numerous authors
have created believable Elven cultures without delving too much into
the canon that Angelica discusses, yet most writers' work is
remarkably agreeable to what Tolkien himself wrote. Angelica ties
Elven culture into Tzvetan Todorov's work on the concept of "Self" and
"Other" in the Spanish conquest, demonstrating what Tolkien himself
often affirmed: that fantasy often acts best as a mirror for observing
the realities of the world in which we live.

For anyone with an interest in Elven culture but intimidated by
in-depth linguistic discussion, I recommend Angelica's essay as a
primer on Tolkien's ideas about how his Elves and other races interacted.

Title: Midwinter Thoughts · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Noldor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 570
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-06 23:30:56
Spoilers!
The gentle, almost whimsical tone of this piece fits well with
Maedhros's musings on love. The use of the traditional
flower--substituted for mistletoe at the story's end (fitting for its
association with the winter season and also a slightly darker
symbol--mistletoe is poisonous!--appropriate for Maedhros)--adds a
nice touch to the story and highlights the different seasons that
Rhapsody threads through the story. Finally, despite its musing tone
and seemingly light subject matter, Rhapsody nonetheless manages to
touch briefly on the weightier topics that would have been on
Maedhros's mind, no matter his amorous thoughts: his mutilation
([Maitimo is something I am no more]), the constant battle the Noldor
are waging, and his ever-present and colorful cast of brothers that at
once enrich and complicate his life.

Title: Five Fires · Author: Elleth · Races: Elves: House of Finwe ·
ID: 736
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-06 23:39:29
Elleth's writing is always poetic with a slightly mysterious edge to
it and "Five Fires" is no exception. Following the lives of Amrod and
Amras from childhood till death, she touches on seemingly random
moments using the motifs of fire and water to tie them together and
show an emerging psychology for Ambarussa that eclipses what many
other writers cannot manage with many more words. Her imagery is
perceptive and keen, the sort of writing I want to savor for much
longer than the story I'm given. As always, I recommend Elleth's
writing highly for its haunting feel and her skill as an author, which
few in the Tolkien fandom can match.

Title: Another Prometheus · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 85
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-06 23:42:25
Spoilers!
"Another Prometheus" sums up what I and many other writers see in the
character of Feanor, which often gets lost in the darker deeds of his
later days. The drabble's assertion that he deserves praise as one who
sought to better the society in which he lived is one with which I
agree ... though I'm not sure that

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Title: A Sleep Over · Author: Phyncke · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Finwe · ID: 160
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 03:11:44
Spoilers!
A very impressive story which I began reading with a smile and
concluded with a shudder! Foresight must be a difficult gift to have
and it must be even worst to be told your future is dark.
A very well written story which i enjoyed despite not really being
into "Simarillion" stories.

Title: Hidden Watcher · Author: kitt_otter · Genres: Drama · ID: 702
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 03:14:17
The writer captures the horror of Moria well here.Not a place I would
want to visit!

Title: The Best Sword Ever · Author: Linaewen · Times: Mid Third Age ·
ID: 290
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 03:21:35
Spoilers!
I loved this story as it uses the idea that Boromir might vaguely have
remembered Aragorn without making the reader gasp in disbelief at the
implausibility of such vivid memories as some stories on this theme do.
I loved the idea of Thorongil having time for young Boromir and
Denethor's reaction was spot on.

Aragorn's reaction to the adult Boromir was very moving and the faint
glimmer of memory realistic given Boromir's very young age when they
last met.

A moving,poignant and well written story.

Title: Nine Companions · Author: Aranel Took · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 259
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 03:30:02
A delightfully amusing drabble.

Title: Flame of Life · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 114
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 03:35:35
Spoilers!
This lovely ficlet contains a great deal to think about and is as true
for us today as in Tolkien's Middle-earth.

The Flame made me think of Shiva's dance of fire in Hinduism as it can
both create and destroy.

I think one could read this many times and still find something new.

Title: Lost and Found · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Mid
Third Age · ID: 23
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 03:43:17
Spoilers!
This was just lovely,a most enjoyable story !I love to imagine what
Gandalf and Faramir's early friendship was like.How fitting that
Faramir should help find the needed scroll.

Title: Celebrity · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Minas Tirith · ID: 635
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 03:47:45
Spoilers!
I just loved this very enjoyable story.You made me feel as if I were
there.I love the way you write Aragorn and I am certain he must have
missed his freedom to go and have a mug of ale on impulse with an old
friend.The reader is left with a sense that Aragorn is almost the
prisoner of his guards and at times feels nostalgic for his Strider
days.A beautifully written story.

Title: Not One of Us · Author: StarLight9 · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 542
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 04:00:08
Spoilers!
I often wonder if young Ester was looked down upon by some Elves and
this story answers my question.I loved the warm and close relationship
between Aragorn and his son.

Title: The Stranger · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 560
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 04:05:49
A lovely and very atmospheric story in which a young boy on the beach
meets a mysterious stranger. I loved the boy's compassion for the
stranger.I don't usually like stories that mix Tolkien's world with
our own,but this one could convert me to the genre!A beautifully
written story which haunted me long after I had read it..

Title: Fidelis · Author: Pentangle · Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 612
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 04:16:00
Spoilers!
This deeply moving story had me on the edge of my seat when I read
it.The gifted writer brings up many deep and often topical themes. Is
the risk of losing someone too high a price to pay for loving them,or
is the fact of having loved consolation enough?
Does someone unable to bear the pain of living have the right to die?
These questions and others are thoughtfully explored here and both
sides of the argument carefully balanced.
I loved a chance to reacquaint myself with the crusty "Badger", an
example of the kind of healer who means well,but sometimes overlooks
the patient's emotional and spiritual needs.
The bond between the doomed Elves was deeply moving and much as I love
Aragorn, I liked this chance to see him as less than perfect.
I'm not a fan usually of Aragorn and Legolas stories,but this proved
the exception to the rule. I just loved it and thank Pentangle for
such a good read.

Title: The Wanderer · Author: Lackwit · Genres: Adventure: Incomplete
· ID: 627
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-07 04:22:59
Spoilers!
This WIP has a very interesting beginning.I recognise elements of
Homer's great epic story here cleverly transferred to M-e. I wonder
why Aragorn is not protecting Eowyn if that is the case? You have
caught my attention and I hope you will finish this fascinating story.

Title: Wild Swan · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 328
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-07 06:03:49
Spoilers!
In this drabble set, Tanaqui presents succinct glimpses into Imrahil's
life like memories in a photo album. We are treated to everyday
occurances, such as Imrahil enjoying the company of his young nephews,
to brief epsidoes during life-changing moments, such as Imrahil's
reflection on his wife before he leads his men off to battle on the
Pelennor Fields. A delightful feast, especially if you are a Gondor fan.

Title: Old Friends · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 651
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-07 06:21:00
Spoilers!
Marta beautifully captures Gandalf's life post Grey Havens in this
drabble. How fitting that old Olorin would develop a sense of ennui as
every day begins and ends undifferentiated from the next until...So
much said in just 100 words.

Title: Out, Damn'd Spot! Out, I Say! · Author: Alassante · Races:
Elves: Noldor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 260
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-07 09:19:43
I think it is impossible to call any of the Feanorians innocent as far
as their deeds are concerned, but one should not forget that the
kinslayings, and especially the first one, must have had a gigantic
and traumatic impact on any of them, regardless of their potential
willingness to admit that. Here, in this excellently written tripple
drabble Alassante shows how deep the psychical wounds could go and
what effect -- disastrous and unforgettable -- the blood and the death
of the Teleri had on Celebrimbor. Splendid writing!

Title: Only Water in Your Veins · Author: Michelle · Races: Men · ID: 154
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-07 15:02:52
Very evocative descriptions, precise and clear without getting too
much into gory details.

Deft use of perspective and plot arc, as the readers learn what has
happened together with Aragorn. The descriptions of his treck through
desert, the heat and thirst and weariness, the longing for shade and
water, the growing exhaustion and detachment from reality, are
especially good, and paint a very detailed and multi-dimensional
picture of his state of mind. The tension builds steadily, without it
seeming forced or used for mere effect.

The visions or hallucinations (and I liked that this was left
ambiguous) were introduced and handled very adeptly - it was as if the
readers could accept them as readily and unquestioningly as Aragorn.

I found the encounter with the Haradrim wonderful; the way Michelle
showed their culture and principles, and their love of the life they
lead in the desert.

Title: Of Dreams... · Author: Avon · Races: Men: General Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 7
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-07 15:30:05
Lush, lyrical prose, providing descriptions which give the drabble a
very rich, densely-imagined backdrop. Aragorn's dreams become almost
reality, so that the readers can smell the green, the freshness of the
water, feel the wind, hear the roar of the waterfalls.

I thought the premise of the drabble fit very well with Aragorn's
character, especially of course with movie!Aragorn. It shows a
self-effacement and humility, coupled with the awareness that he has
shoulder heavy responsibility to attain his desires so they will be
sustainable and lasting.

The contrast between his peaceful and gentle longings, and his
willingness to accept strife and power as is his responsibility and
destiny is played up very well.

Title: Hearts of Stone · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 12
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-07 15:30:20
Spoilers!
The premise of the drabble series is a wonderful idea, and
well-executed. I love the idea of Aragorn fashioning mementos for
Arwen of all the many places he travels through, so to give her
insight into his travails and show that she is always with him in his
heart.

I also liked that Aragorn has various reasons for collecting the
stones, ranging from curiosity about their properties and uses to
simple aesthetic pleasure.

The language is elegant, poetic in places, and has a lyrical candence
that brings the readers right into the story.

The series shows in a very nifty way the extent and magnitude of
Aragorn's many travels, criss-crossing Middle-earth from the furthest
north to the deepest south, from west to east, a perfect illustration
of the reason he is described as the ["greatest traveller ... of this
age of the world"]. I especially liked the notion of Aragorn's
["belovéd Arda"].

Title: Coming Home to Crickhollow · Author: calanthe11 · Genres:
Romance · ID: 445
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-07 16:19:32
Spoilers!
This is a beautiful story, which has a very gentle feel to it. It is
written from Merry's pov, who tries to discover who this new and
mature Pippin is. They have to find the old friendship under all the
changes the year away has brought, which is not easy. They are back in
the Shire, but they have changed so much that the familiar feels
suddenly strange. I like the way the friendship between Merry and
Pippin is depicted.

Title: Arwen in the Afternoon · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres:
Romance: Elven Lands · ID: 244
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-07 16:23:45
Spoilers!
Halbarad, growing up with the strict morales of the Dunedain, is a bit
uncomfortable with the free love approach in form of festivals of the
elves of Rivendell. Although, he took advantage of Aragorn's
upbringing in Rivendell which allowed them a secret love affair long
ago. He is now married, and on a visit to the secret valley he
discovers Aragorn's betrothal to Arwen.

Halbarad's conflicting emotions, loyalty to his wife and at the same
time a yearning for Aragorn are beautifully described in a meeting
with Aragorn where all kinds of inappropriate thoughts run through his
mind interspersed with the dialogue. I love naughty!Arwen together
with a friend taking advantage of Aragorn and Halbarad in the
enchanted environs of the valley. Poor Halbarad doesn't stand a chance.

Title: Good King Elessar · Author: Dreamflower · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Friendship · ID: 2
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2008-11-07 16:32:47
Spoilers!
This is a charming little Yule story which gave me a fuzzy warm
feeling. Strider and Frodo-lad on a mission to bring gifts to a lonely
man in the woods. I loved the moments when Frodo had the feeling his
king looked like Pippin or one of his siblings just before they do
some mischief.

Title: Primum Non Nocere (First, Do No Harm) · Author: febobe ·
Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 628
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-07 17:59:38
Spoilers!
I had trouble accessing this story but I kept trying and I'm glad I
did. This is a captivating piece, founded on a very simple but
profound observation of Tolkien's works - that Eowyn and Frodo would
have a great deal in common. It was lovely how the author drew out
these resonant similarities, and drew a new portrait (for me anyway)
of Eowyn which was perhaps all the more true for being fresh. Well done.

Each individual voice of the three main characters was also perfectly
caught, a real hallmark of the writer's ability.

Title: Estel I Was Called · Author: Marta · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Aragorn · ID: 351
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-07 18:06:01
Spoilers!
I am always impressed by Marta's ability to raise a question - what
would it be like for Aragorn to return to the angle - and answer it
with more wondering arising like steam from the heat of her very rich
characters. This story is a prime example.

Title: Star-songs of the Eorlingas · Author: Tanaqui · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 291
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-07 18:56:28
Spoilers!
Typically, I find it very difficult to write more than a 100 word
review for drabble. However, this drabble set (more than 100 words, of
course) has inspired me to maximum enthusiasm.

"Star Songs" is exquisite. Here, Eowyn describes the cosmology of the
heavens from the perspective of the children of Eorl. Each star and
constellation is given its own, stunningly written drabble, with the
occasional drabble of Eowyn and Faramir to anchor the set. Truth be
told, "Star-songs" is such a cohesive whole that it reads like a short
story.

What I like best is how Tanaqui uses each star myth as a window on
Rohirric culture. Each drabble reveals the heroes, enemies, and the
huge importance of horses to the Eorlingas. Though this culture is
quite young in comparison to Faramir's Gondorian and Numenorean
background, Faramir finds similarities in Eowyn's stories to the
mythology that he knows (and Tolkien wrote about, mostly in the
published Silmarillion).

Tanaqui is a great drabblist, one whom I often wish would expand some
of her short fic. She does that with the elegant and powerful
"Star-songs," certainly a must read for everyone, and especially for
those who count themselves fans of the Rohirrim and Tolkien's human
cultures in general.

Title: I Ain't Got Nobody · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 568
Reviewer: elfscribe · 2008-11-07 20:55:14
Spoilers!
This was hilarious! I loved the idea of the accident-prone Glorfindel
making repeated trips to Namo's handy-dandy fea-infusing machine.
[Lights flashed, buzzers sounded, the door hissed open, and
Glorfindel, in a fog of dry ice, walked out in his brand new body.] I
love the snarky comments. ["I don't know," Glorfindel said, shifting
from foot to foot and hiking up his hips. "It's a little tight in the
crotch."] The sense of exasperation on both Namo and Glorfindel's
part. ["This isn't fun for me either," Glorfindel said crossly.] And
Ignoblebard's amusing use of language: ["Not on your newly minted
behind."]
Very enjoyable. I'm still grinning.




Title: A Midsummer Day's Dream · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 422
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-07 21:20:51
The atmosphere is set up so very well in this drabble that I feel the
same peace and contentment ease over me that the main character
lyrically expresses. The prose is lovely, descriptive and magical, not
only transporting me in place but easily collecting all my emotions in
hand, too. The transition from beginning to ending is about as
perfectly done as I could imagine, from dreamy drowse to waking dream
to the next great adventure for a truly incredible prince. I'm left
with that peculiar mix of grief and a soaring heart that seems to
accompany the recognition of a life well-lived.

I loved the tracing of the accomplishments of the past leading into
the present fruits of that labor, and again into the beloved ones
already gone ahead. Magnificent language all around, and beautiful use
of the twist with the title! The ending particularly appealed to me,
with that last tenuous connection slowly being severed...

It's hard to believe this is in the fixed-length ficlet category,
because once again Raksha's work leaves me with the impression that
there was neither stretching nor compacting of words to meet a set
number: every expression and phrase is fitting, nothing is abrupt or
drawn-out - in short, perfect.

Title: Heavens' Embroidered Cloths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 292
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-07 21:21:58
Spoilers!
I really am in awe of this drabble series (and its partner). Tanaqui
set out to construct a set of astronomically-inspired legends
incorporating Middle-earth history, and each drabble hangs as
perfectly with the others as those tapestries must have in Eowyn and
Faramir's hall. The pure creativity in coming up with so many
different explanations for the different star formations, both in
Tolkien's universe and our own, is matched impeccably by Tanaqui's
awesome drabbling ability and perfectly-managed language.

The storytelling drabbles are bookended by touching interactions
between Faramir and Eowyn (and Eowyn's moving determination to provide
a wonderful Mettare for her new husband). But what most strongly
appeals to me are the brief remembered moments between young Faramir
and his now-lost family. Finduilas and Boromir are delightful, but
Denethor truly shines here: A devoted and loving father, untrammeled
yet by loss and the burdens of fighting the long defeat against
Sauron. These glimpses are short, but deep, and paint a picture far
more complete than you'd think possible via the limited wordcount.

An excellent addition to the invented lore of Tolkien's world - well
done, Tanaqui!

Title: Night Terrors · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 433
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-07 21:22:44
Spoilers!
"Fearful Faramir", indeed!

Gwynnyd rather effortlessly transported me right back to the weeks
after my firstborn arrived: that same sudden fear (they always seem so
fragile!), the trembling check (he's breathing!), the relief followed
by the sense of being more than a little silly to get worked up over
nothing. Such a normal new-parent reaction, and I really enjoyed the
connection I felt to Faramir in this piece.

I loved his "if that nurse did so-and-so" and "if she's sleeping"
litany on his way to check on his son - absolutely realistic, even for
so fair and just a man as Faramir. The writing captures his emotions
and actions very well through truly wonderful descriptions, bringing
me right along to the delightful and entertaining ending where he ends
up waking the very babe he was trying to protect. Nicely done!

Title: The Blessing of the Waters · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 61
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-08 00:04:14
Sniff, what a beautiful and sad ficlet. Raksha sends us for a brief
time into a well-known gap, that of Elrond and his wife Celebrian.
Raksha's choice of tone and language is poetic and sad, as is
appropriate for the Master of Rivendell as he shares with us memories
of Celebrian. A tear formed in the corner of my eye as I concluded
this one.

Title: What Goes Up · Author: Dana · Times: Late Third Age: Gondor
Drabbles · ID: 683
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 01:18:32
That last line gave me a great big smile! A very nice look at that
scene from the movie trilogy, and an equally entertaining glimpse into
Pippin's thoughts at the time.

Title: The Chieftain of the Dunedain · Author: Avon · Races: Men:
Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 623
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 01:24:19
Spoilers!
Elegantly and entertainingly written, this drabble paints a delightful
portrait of Aragorn as a young man at his ease at the campfire with
his companions. But its chief charm is the notion that Halbarad was an
older man, one who had dandled baby Estel at his knee - a novel idea,
since I for one always think of them as being the same age - yet in
the realms of fanon this thought works very well too.

Title: Renewal · Author: Elena Tiriel · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 208
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 01:34:31
Spoilers!
A really thought provoking example of animism that gives voice to the
great sword of Telcontar. The prose is lyrical and eloquent, and the
well chosen phrases leap off the page like the best poetry, to form
fascinating images that stay in the mind.

Title: The Captain's New Clothes · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 421
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 01:48:09
Spoilers!
A delightful story to explain the awfulness of the clothing in that
picture. For something that is so horrendously au, and not in a good
way! Raksha brings it back into canon in the nicest way possible, with
slight indignity for the wearer, and great good humour.

Title: Wave-Singer · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Drabbles · ID: 33
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 01:53:44
Spoilers!
Aaah, I think I remember this from a previous Hallowe'en - and I loved
the concept then that the last of the Feanorians still walked beside
the sea singing of all he had lost. Your last line is particularly
plaintive and wonderfully expressive in so very few words.

Title: Handy With A Sword · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 437
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 02:03:49
Spoilers!
I loved the lead up to that verse, with which I was not familiar, but
yes, it is the perfect ballad to equate with Faramir. It certainly
made me smile when I read it!

Title: Spiced Wine On A Snowy Day · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Elves: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 558
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 02:26:13
Spoilers!
This is a very thoughtful and well considered picture of friendship -
apart from putting potpourri in wine, that I can't imagine *g* Apart
from my reaction being much the same as Glorfindal's. The descriptions
convey a great sense of peace and restfulness, but my chief reason for
commenting is the final line - a sentance that brings the whole text
alive with meaning, and puts the conversation into a poignant context.

Title: Pippin (Paladin) Had a Little Lamb · Author: Cathleen · Genres:
Humor · ID: 629
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-08 02:28:46
Spoilers!
Cathleen has created a lovely world for little Pippin and his family,
and the chief OC is Pippin's knitted piggy, Tulip. But in this story
we learn of another Person of the Fabric Persuasion, as Sammy-Lamby
comes to join the family.

I think the most delightful part of this is how clearly the saying
["like father, like son"] applies to Paladin and Pippin, and how
Eglantine loves to indulge both her lads!

Title: Galdor: An Elf By Any Other Name.... · Author: Marta · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 475
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-08 02:29:04
I love the way Marta shows the process she used in coming up with her
conclusions about Galdor's back-story. I think that extrapolating from
canon is the best way to devise a strong "fanon" assumption. She uses
the very few hints JRRT gives us to extrapolate a plausible, if not
necessarily probable, story-internal explanation for who and what
Galdor was! A very good job, and a classic use of scholarship. It's a
very good way for a fanfic writer to approach a minor canon character
that they wish to use.

Title: Candles · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 460
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-08 02:29:26
A warm story of caring and giving between Frodo and Sam, I love the
imagery of light, and how very important it must have been to both of
them after their terrible encounters with darkness. Tender and
slightly melancholy and touching.

Title: Bibliophile · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-08 02:29:44
Spoilers!
I enjoy this little scene on a couple of levels--the hints of the
story Eowyn is reading and its connection to Faramir's mother is one
level, and the other is Faramir distracting her from her reading--a
turnabout from what would normally be expected, as we are told
*Faramir* is the scholar. That makes it even more amusing. And
husbands will do that.

Title: Things as they were in all the days of my life · Author:
Tanaqui · Races: Men: Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 393
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 02:33:27
I very much like the contrasts you've woven into this drabble series,
showing aspects of Denethor's character previously undiscovered by
many authors.

Title: Care to Ride My Hot-Rod Fell Beast? · Author: viv · Genres:
Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 180
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 02:40:47
Luuurvalley! Beautifully focussing on the absurd, the author writes
both with pen in hand and tongue firmly in cheek! A very droll and
amusing take on that famous seen of derring-do, here given a wonderful
twist one might even say was a case of 'derring-don't'! Great fun,
seemingly so simple, but a little parody like this needs real skill to
pull it off successfully - kudos!

Title: Broken Star · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2008-11-08 03:00:11
This story is achingly painful to read, but gives glimpses of a past
relationship, formed from friendship, that makes the present
circumstances even more gut-wrenchingly awful. The author creates the
mood with spare, stripped down prose that conveys evrything the reader
needs to know - even if they are only vaguely familiar with the canon
story refered to by the text. I for one enjoy the discipline of the
drabble form and cherish it for making an author really think about
every word they put on the page, or the screen, rather than take the
sometimes easier course of letting mind and vocabulary run riot - when
what is so often needed is a large red pencil.
Strictly speaking - I'm only going into that arguement in order to
increase the word count and therefore score for this story. My own
inclination is to be short and to the point, so please forgive me
rambling in an effort to give the story the score I think it merits.

Title: Second Best · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 384
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-08 06:30:29
A very clever drabble which reveals, through a nifty twist at the end,
an ironic and frankly tragic reality in the House of Húrin.

Tanaqui crafts what could have been a monotone list of admirable
qualities bordering on bragging, into a very sympathetic appeal for
recognition, justice and love.

The ambiguity in identifying the protagonist was, to me, actually more
effective on my second read, when I was more conscious of the "punch"
of the drabble and could appreciate in just how many ways the
descriptions *did* fit for both potential characters, because it
brought it to a very succinct and telling impact.

What I also found interesting was that almost to the end of the
drabble, it was not completely clear from if the PoV was that of an
observer or of that of the protagonist himself - meaning that it was
left an open question for the readers to decide how much bias they had
to "adjust" for in judging the claims made.

Title: Before You Go · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Minas Tirith
· ID: 506
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-08 07:00:11
Elegant prose, and very clear descriptions of the surroundings that I
thought reflected Boromir's personality very well.

I have to admit that Denethor's observations of Boromir crept me out a
bit because they seemed over-the-top and almost like adoration - so I
found this a very effective way to show that Denethor's state of mind
may at that time already be not quite clear anymore.

But it was very moving to watch how this relationship between father
and son was shown, with obvious love but also an awkwardness that was
painful to witness, as well as the grudging crumbs of thought Denethor
spares for Faramir. What I found especially fascinating was just how
vulnerable Denethor seems and how powerful a hold Boromir holds over
him. A thought-provoking take of a man who normaly is seen as cold and
hard and unbending - once strong emotions are involved, the impact on
him seems all the harder.

Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-08 07:01:23
Spoilers!
The aftermath of a war can, in many cases, bring worthwhile
opportunities to those who willing to leave behind the conventions of
the past. Gwynnyd takes that scenario and runs with it in this
excellently textured story of people of different backgrounds uniting
in mutual respect and taking a gamble to obtain a better life. I
really liked the two OC's and would like to know more about their
lives. And I liked the reference to the actions of the King and
Steward that are encouraging new ideas and new social mobility.

Title: Feelings of Superiority · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 362
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-08 07:12:30
Spoilers!
Six drabbles illustrating the irony and folly of arrogance in the
characters' feelings of superiority. Gwynnyd skillfully evokes
different places and times in the Arda-verse, from Taniquetil to the
shores of Middle-earth in the Second Age, and the camps of the
horse-trader lords of Rhovanion.

Title: Miquan Melave · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance · ID: 319
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-08 16:29:07
Spoilers!
A short, but profoundly powerful story, touching upon grief, the
difference between love and lust, and cultural differences. Marta's
Boromir and Theodred are among my favorite "slash" couples in that
their relationship is fully drawn and not merely for the sake of the
physical release. In this story, however, Theodred has his doubts
about that. Having ridden all the way to Dol Amroth to comfort Boromir
in a time of mourning, he has questions about their developing
relationship and desires reassurance from Boromir that it is not
simply one of physical release.

Riders of Rohan are permitted the sort of release the two young heirs
indulge in as a matter of course. Gondor is not so understanding,
though there are outlets for such things in the shadows, as it were.
Boromir does not fear parental retribution or scorn in this story, but
he does seem to be genuinely wondering about where they are going, and
in his desire to reassure Theodred finds himself verbally expressing
his feelings on the matter for the first time.

The ensuing discussion between the two men ranges through a number of
subjects besides the obvious one, but by the time they are done it is
obvious that what they have between them is not merely lust. Beautiful
characterizations and lots of sensory detail make this a wonderful read.

Title: Wayward Sons · Author: Jael · Races: Elves · ID: 408
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-08 16:55:01
Spoilers!
One of the greatest pleasures of this year's MEFAs for me was getting
to read the rest of Jael's beautiful stories about Thranduil and his
family. Like I have done with Imrahil and Dol Amroth, Jael has devoted
her attention to a character who has but a minimal canon presence, and
given him a family and friends, including some very well drawn OCs. In
the process, she has given Thranduil a much more vivid existence than
the Professor ever did.

This story is sort of the crux to her Thranduil stories, for it
depicts his moment of utmost despair. Rivendell and Lorien are long
gone, the Elves departed, except for the holdouts who have come to him
in the forest, the last stronghold of Elvenkind. Despite his efforts
to hold everything together, Thranduil wakes one morning to find that
he is fading. His reaction to this is one of the most interesting
things about the story. Fading is the ultimate end of being for Elves
and he regards it as a human might a diagnosis of incurable cancer.
Horrified, he is contemplating his ultimate doom when the forest
brings him a message of hope.

The other thing I like about Jael's stories is that the Valar, upon at
least one occasion have a bit of mercy and compassion to them. The
results of their decision arrive at the forest and these new arrivals
give Thranduil new strength and life, for being a true king, he is at
his best when he has someone to protect.

A lovely, lovely story. Highly recommended.

Title: Look Not With Longing · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 479
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-08 17:02:50
Spoilers!
One of the greatest members of Gondor's Greatest Generation reflects
upon what has been won and lost in this beautiful story. Faramir, ever
thoughtful, can appreciate the peace that has been won for his
children while acknowledging that desperate times are the forge upon
which great men are made. With both Sauron and the Elves gone, the
World of Men is a lesser, paler place, and he feels that lack while
acknowledging that it is best that things have turned out as they
have. A lovely, lyrical story. There were several beautiful passages I
started to quote in this review, until I realized that I'd pretty much
be putting the whole thing into square brackets! Just go read it!

Title: Dark Dreams · Author: Avon · Races: Men: Steward's Family · ID: 282
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 17:22:49
Spoilers!
The dream of Numenor's drowning provides fertile ground for
explorations of the Steward's family. Avon picks up on the tension
between Faramir and Denethor later in life and interpolates it back
into the past, suggesting a certain elven influence over his two boys
as rubbing Denethor the wrong way. Boromir already has assumed the
role of surrogate father, at least where matters of care and comfort
are concerned in Faramir's life, and Imrahil finds himself wondering
why it must be so. That tension makes for a great atmosphere and draws
the reader in quickly and decisively.

But the family tension is not the heart of the story: Imrahil's own
prescience comes into play on the back of Faramir's dream, casting
doubt on his promise to two frightened boys that the doom of Numenor
will never happen again. This opening out onto what will be some of
the most memorable and tragic events of the Ring War is a fantastic
close that leaves you with a sense of anxiety and foreboding, despite
(or perhaps because) we know precisely what will happen.

Well done!

Title: A Sleep Over · Author: Phyncke · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Finwe · ID: 160
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-08 17:23:06
Spoilers!
This tale is both humorous and ominous. Youthful Galadriel "sleeps
over" Uncle Fingolfin's house and, in playing a predict the future
game, reveals to her insistent cousin Aredhel the terrible future that
awaits her. This story has a very contemporary feel. Fingolfin's home
seems more 21st century than FA 50. Galadriel and Aredhel amusingly
behave like modern tweens, Fingolfin a peeved parent. But you believe
Phyncke's story, especially because Galadriel unknowingly is telling
Aredhel the truth.

Title: Summer Heat · Author: chaotic_binky · Times: Modern Times · ID: 363
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-08 17:32:37
Spoilers!
This is certainly one of the more unique premises I've seen in a
Tolkien story! The flashbacks provide a very welcome glimpse of the
characters' lives in Middle-earth while the modern-day chapters are
fast-paced, suspenseful, and, at times, wickedly funny.

Chaotic Binky manages to nail the tone of a crime thriller spot on. I
loved the greasy diner scene, as well as lines like, ["It was still
raining and the drops of water mixed with the blood as if to wash away
his sins"] for capturing this genre so well. At the same time, the
characters' Elvishness shines through--the love of nature and the
sensitivity to life and death--that keeps this story from being an
unexpected plotline filled in with the names of Tolkien characters.

Erestor is an intriguing character that--even more than wanting to
know the outcome to the who-dunnit? storyline--I was in suspense
about, wondering how he would turn out, whether Glorfindel's
re-emerging love for him would transform Erestor or turn him to evil,
as it had in the past. This was definitely a fun and entertaining
story to read!

Title: Only Water in Your Veins · Author: Michelle · Races: Men · ID: 154
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 17:49:08
Spoilers!
Aragorn and Harad are an unbeatable combination - politics make for
tension, personal encounter for a chance to overcome the political.

The in media res beginning is effectively written - one feels for and
with Aragorn from the start, as he goes through the painful process of
waking up, and then moves on to the even more painful process of
surviving the desert's trials. Michelle depicts slow death by thirst,
heat, and dehydration very well, and the ambiguous hallucinations and
dreams refer back very well both to Aragorn as foresighted, but also
to Arwen who would [watch over him in thought] while he was away on
his journeys.

The arrival of Rajal gives us a glimpse into the hearts and minds of
the Haradrim, and their love for their harsh land. He functions as a
savior on two levels: rescuing Aragorn from the desert, but also
providing a human face and concern that are needed in the face of the
impersonal 'malice' of the desert.

Title: Reparation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men · ID: 296
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 17:59:27
Spoilers!
The difficulty with unforeseen plot developments and new characters is
the trouble it makes for older stories that didn't include them, even
though they occupy the same timeline. How to integrate (or whether to
integrate) the old and the new is always a challenge.

Isabeau handles it well, however, using Brand to show another side to
the story of [Dol Amroth Yule], in which Andrahar and Hethlin suffer
probably one of their worst (if not the worst) failures of their early
student-teacher relationship, and then in a whiplash reversal, find
that same, rocky relationship bearing fruit when Heth saves Dol
Amroth's royal family from an assassin using Andrahar's training.

There is already the beginning of a shift in the Heth-Andra
relationship in that story, but [Reparation] enables Isabeau to use
Brand to handle another side to amending that relationship. Brand's
sensitivity to unjust, even abusive family relationships puts him wise
to an unhealthy and unworthy side of Andrahar's motivations in
treating Heth as he has. It's a necessary revelation if a just
resolution and a real chance to move forward is to come through and
it's good to see that Andrahar needs people in his life to keep an
even moral keel.

Great fun, Isabeau!



Title: Tangled Webs · Author: Ribby · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 100
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 18:07:39
Spoilers!
The use of lace or of weaving to symbolize human relationships is not
new, but it is used to great effect here. That Aragorn understands,
and that he is not afraid to hold onto and to depend on that broken
thread in his life is a great testimony to his character.

Thanks, Ribby!

Title: Second Best · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 384
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 18:10:23
Spoilers!
Nice reversal of expectations, and a terrific paralleling of
Denethor's relationship with his father and his own relationship with
Faramir in later years. What a pity that Denethor wasn't gifted with
the kind of insight that Faramir was, so as to learn pity and
generosity rather than to recapitulate that relationship. Well done!

Title: Pulling the Wool · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 95
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 18:15:41
Spoilers!
An interesting set of drabbles around blinding and deception. Classic
comedy in that first drabble - well done, Boromir, avoiding the
pitfall that is Pippin's innocent eyes.

The turn to far more somber moments makes a sharp contrast, as it
seems Boromir goes all too gently down the way to confidence in his
own ability to discern and to 'enjoy', perhaps, being blinded.

The ending fits nicely, therefore, as a sort of final judgment on his
own judgment: Boromir dies eyes wide open to the truth, desire for it
once more untainted.

Title: Celebrity · Author: Bodkin · Races: Men: Minas Tirith · ID: 635
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 18:28:17
Spoilers!
I love how Bodkin has managed to stitch together Aragorn's Rangering
past and his present lofty position as King of the Reunited Realms
together through a pair of chance encounters. It's true that the valet
and the maid probably have a very different view of the man they serve
than most others who live at more of a distance from him. Given
Aragorn's past, someone who, as a young lad on the road, shared a
wagon, the road, and stories with Aragorn and an injured Halbarad
would undoubtedly also have a very different view of the king of
Gondor - enough to know that you can always bait this king with curiosity!

I love the fact that Aragorn doesn't back down from the challenge, and
watching him run through all the possible ways of narrowing down when
in Middle-earth (and where) he might have met the man confronting him
was very entertaining. And while thumbing one's nose at pretension
with some well-applied elvish as cover is one way of taking a distance
from circumstance, it can be cynical; it can also be self-deceptive -
that he responds to Pelion as he does, however, shows that the Ranger
who remembers life on the road remains and is valued still in true.
There is a real difference between Aragorn and the image of the king
that so many have.

Nicely done, Bodkin!

Title: Before You Go · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Men: Minas Tirith
· ID: 506
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 18:47:57
Spoilers!
Elegant and pointed, yet also filled with the anxiety of a father
hoisted on his own petard. I love the way that Denethor in defeat
nevertheless, underneath the apparently genteel nonchalance of this
conversation, is basically forcing Boromir to taste his victory as a
kind of loss by refusing to give a blessing to this venture, even if
he accepts that it must go forth. Win the argument, lose the
father-councilor: win independence, taste its bitter loneliness. Love,
undoubtedly, is the motivation, but also pain and fear, and likely
also the action of a man who has made a habit of victory where
argument is concerned.

The last three lines are perfect: there's always the temptation, if
one writes Denethor in a combative mood, to try to pull a very
traditional, clear expression of affection out of Denethor in the end,
as proof of his affections; it never works well. That his affection
for Boromir should be expressed in the last twist of the 'argument',
in a final 'distancing' that doesn't push Boromir back so much as time
itself, followed by, I imagine, a quick exit before Boromir can
respond, is just terrific. Great job, Nancy!

Title: In Passing · Author: Altariel · Races: Men · ID: 104
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 19:01:26
Spoilers!
Altariel's Faramir is always splendid - wise, witty, passionate when
needed, and shrewd out of habit and heritage. He also spontaneously
alliterates when the story calls for it, as does the author herself.
The language is evocative, but also crisp - Altariel has the gift of
precision.

The idea of passing in its several meanings plays itself out in this
story: in passing - a chance encounter of great-grandfather and
great-grandson, and the history of chance encounters (the White Queen
who sweeps in from nowhere to change everything); the passing of time
in an irreversible direction, and the passing of stories and histories
in various forms; the passing on and bequeathing of wishes and dreams.
The passing of gifts unlooked for. Faramir and Beren negotiate all of
these passages and passings beautifully, in an interesting
demonstration that history, though inescapable, can give birth to
happy chances and newness just because of the relation to the past. I
loved the genealogy, and the fact that Faramir chooses to write back
to life his own father, and his grandfather, back to Turin in a long
line of wishes and hopes bequeathed to future (now present) generations.

Beautiful as always, Altariel - anyone who loves Gondor and especially
Faramir will enjoy this brief tale.

Title: Things as they were in all the days of my life · Author:
Tanaqui · Races: Men: Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 393
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 19:22:44
Spoilers!
I think I love best Hurin's view of Denethor, and the steady descent
into Denethor's more mischievous youth. These cast a new light on him
and give him a wit and a liveliness that could rival Thorongil's.
Interesting to see that this sort of fire, when met with Thorongil's
perfectly [sanguine] temperament, is frustrated. That fits with a
certain kind of mischievous temperament, that likes to push people for
a reaction, and can't fathom or bear getting none.

Entertaining, witty, tragic in places - thanks, Tanaqui!

Title: A Fitting Occupation · Author: Radbooks · Races: Men: Pre-Ring
War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 601
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-08 20:47:21
A charming story, with very likeable characters and a good set-up. I
thought that Radbooks sketched a very credible picture of Bard and his
family, extrapolating from the few widely-scattered hints we have in
canon to show them as an unconvential royal family.

The story flows smoothly from drabble to drabble, making a cohesive
whole. I liked the alternating PoVs.

Title: There and Back · Author: Dana · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 89
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 21:55:50
Spoilers!
Nice paired drabble, and using a pair of friends who don't get as much
attention as they deserve. Pippin and Beregond aren't paralleled, here
- rather, Beregond's view of Pippin's hardiness on the way back from
the Black Gate contrasts interestingly with Pippin's worried
perspective on the way to the Gate. One comes out of the pair of
drabbles wondering whose view is more in tune with reality at any
given moment, but glad of both.

As always, Dana gives her characters a wonderful immediacy - the prose
is streamlined and the present tense puts you right up close to the
characters so that we can feel their emotions, yet they remain
tactfully understated.

Thanks, Dana!

Title: A Little Misunderstanding · Author: Radbooks · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Elves and Men · ID: 275
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 22:14:43
Spoilers!
Anything with Halbarad in it is usually enough to get my attention.
Writing the character at this age makes for an interesting change when
it comes to dealing with Elladan and Elrohir: the close relationship
between Aragorn and Halbarad is already in place, though of course, it
is a child's relationship, viewed through a child's eyes. And when one
little boy suddenly disappears with some Elves, Halbarad's reaction to
those same Elves is all too believable.

It's a sweet story, between grief and relief - well done!

Title: A Meeting in the Tower Hills · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 374
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 22:18:43
Spoilers!
There's something delicious in the idea that the first real
breakthrough in communication between the Numenoreans and the Men of
Middle-earth should be halting renditions of spooky stories that,
instead of terrifying the listeners, make them laugh this time with
wonder instead!



Title: Parting Gifts · Author: Fiondil · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Post-Ring War · ID: 452
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 22:30:49
Spoilers!
[Parting Gifts] brings elven-mortal friendships right to their most
poignant point: the death of one, while the other lives on. Gimli's
matter-of-factness and grace in the face of death, and his sense of
humor set him clearly apart from Legolas, who for once is at a loss -
Gimli's parting gift to him is clearly needed.

Balancing grief with humor, pain with joy is difficult, but Fiondil
manages the feat. The afterlife scenes are amusing, but also
reassuring for readers that friendships do not end in death. Not in
Middle-earth, at least.



Title: Seas of Fate · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 487
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 22:40:34
Spoilers!
Thundera Tiger has always had her eye on elven sea-longing, and it has
played and continues to play a role in her development of Legolas's
character during the Fourth Age. Usually, however, she writes him with
Gimli or Aragorn or one of the Fellowship, any of whom have good
reason to try to steer him away from the sea. Imrahil is just
disinterested enough, and just akin enough for a mortal Man, to be
able to recognize necessity when he sees it and to respond when it
asks a favor of him, and trust that Legolas can learn to [ride the
waves] of his life.

In a way, that's really the heart of the story for me: the sea-fate
analogy provides the problem, but the solution in some sense is trust
and discernment. That Legolas turns to Imrahil says a lot about his
friendships elsewhere, and that Imrahil can do what perhaps those
other friends cannot, says much of him as well, and his ability to
respond to needs both like and unlike his own.

Fans of Elves and Men, and especially of Legolas and Imrahil, should
enjoy this.

Title: Fit for a King · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 217
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 22:49:35
Spoilers!
Oh dear! Aragorn, meet Indiana Jones: [You are named after the dog?!]
Granted, it's not quite the same, but the fact that Shadowfax's
last-sired son should have decided on this particular name over all
others...?

Short, sweet, and packs a good chortle at Aragorn's expense!

Title: Old Friends · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 651
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 22:54:40
Spoilers!
Whenever Gimli arrives in Valinor, it's always an event - canonically
and fanonically. Marta gives us a view that takes up that event as a
sort of rejuvenation: that sprint at the end is so very telling, and
it says more than perhaps anything else could have that the long years
of labor in Middle-earth, subject to death and the whim of time, have
had an effect on Gandalf.

Thanks, Marta!

Title: Forfeit · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 401
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 23:05:18
Spoilers!
I can't resist something that screams [Crito] this loudly. We see so
few children in Middle-earth - really, only one, and that one is
hardly in a position any child should be in. He would, of course, be
the one child whose father had to go and fall afoul of the law in such
a way as to earn the death penalty.

Beregond's position is absolutely unenviable: caught between the law
and what he believes is right, he cannot make a choice that will not
hugely impact his son. In some sense, he is between Bergil and
Faramir, and he has to choose Faramir.

Here we see him with another choice: and while on the one hand, it may
seem as though Beregond is acting to preserve his honor, there's also
a sense, thanks to that last line, that he is also thinking of Bergil
when he makes his decision. Is it the case that Bergil's opinion is
one of those rarest of things: a good opinion worth preserving, rather
than one of the many that can be set aside?

Those who like side-views into characters' heads, and who find
themselves wishing that Tolkien had written more about Beregond and
Bergil will want to give this drabble a reading.

Title: What Goes Up · Author: Dana · Times: Late Third Age: Gondor
Drabbles · ID: 683
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 23:11:29
I love the juxtaposition of lofty aspirations (literally) and high
questions about the direction of life and fate, and the feeling of
distance, with the very simple solution. Great comic timing in just
one hundred words, and even funnier when one has the image of Pippin's
double-take from the film firmly in mind.

Title: Horse Sense · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 22
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 23:19:23
Spoilers!
An unusual 'cross-cultural' interaction: it appears that ponies at
least are within the scope of Gimli's affections and trust! Bill's
reactions to his new companions are amusing and horsey, and his
eye-roll is perfectly timed to get a laugh from the reader.

Well done!

Title: The Game of Kings · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Humor · ID: 28
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 23:25:05
Spoilers!
Branwyn's depiction of the intense chess matches at the Pony opens a
whole world - one that even Barliman Butterbur isn't sure he quite
understands.

I love the way the Ranger chess games bring all Barliman's guests
together, despite different rules for the game and different names for
the pieces. Each of these variations reveals something about the
different cultures, all of them brought together in an isolated
townstead over a game held in common.

The off-and-on again matches, taken up again just as abruptly as they
are set aside by their vagabond players, take on a nicely ironic twist
when it comes to the Rangers' name for chess: [the game of kings],
which yields the priceless last line.

Ranger fans and those who like seeing an underused character get the
observer POV should definitely give this one a read!

Title: Loudwater · Author: Adaneth · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 63
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-08 23:35:38
Imhiriel's request for unusual perspectives certainly brought some
fantastic drabbles to light! Adaneth writes the long winding journey
of a river from its own perspective, which is stretched out from the
first drift to the last bend around the Fords.

I love the mention of Bruinen's Master, and of the river's sensing the
concern of Ulmo, which [clots and clogs my current] in a lovely fit of
stuttering alliteration that perfectly fits the idea being conveyed.

Adaneth in her other fics has always shown herself to be a master at
capturing the landscape and infusing it with atmosphere: here, she
does it in just a hundred words that put us in the perspective of
Bruinen itself. Thanks for a great drabble!

Title: The Fire of Hope · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men:
Pre-Ring War Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 625
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-09 18:32:24
Spoilers!
Lovely take on Aragorn as a young Ranger, freshly in love. You can
feel his longing for Arwen, in some ways still innocent but also with
hints of sexual passion. I very much like it that his desire for Arwen
is bound up within a greater context, that of a desire for peace and
home and family, and the expectation and acceptance that he can only
reach these goals by shouldering his duty, with perseverance and
responsibility and determination.

I like it that Aragorn isn't in the least discouraged, neither by the
daunting tasks ahead nor by the fact that Arwen ["had looked upon him
as if he were a clever child when he spoke his admiration"],
particularly as his faith somehow doesn't feel like braggadoccio, but
in faith in himself and in fate.

The descriptions of the surroundings are brief but clear, and the
contrasts between his damp, cheerless, camp, the bustling, innocuous
warmth of the Prancing Pony and its denizens in Aragorn's memories,
and his dreams for the future, play well against each other and with
each other.

Title: Lessons from the Mountain · Author: MithLuin · Races: Elves:
Incomplete · ID: 221
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2008-11-09 18:37:54
The Halls of Mandos... for some a place of rest and refreshment of the
spirit before being re-embodied, for others... for others it is a
prison from which they will never leave while Arda remains. That is
what it is for Maedhros. Yet, the story is less about his imprisonment
and more about his eventual healing as he comes to terms with his
choices during his life and learns the terrible (in the theological
sense of the word) truth about the Oath and its consequences.

With a deft hand, MithLuin creates an intriguing glimpse of a side of
Mandos one rarely sees in other tales of the elven afterlife, one that
is darker and grimmer, yet this is apropos to the entire theme of the
story. Still, the interaction of Maedhros with his brothers as well as
with Namo, Vaire and their Maiar are not devoid of humor either. The
characters are both believable and sympathetic in spite of the fact
that these are kinslayers who committed atrocities against their
fellow elves all for an Oath that should never have been uttered. Namo
and Vaire are also portrayed as three dimensional characters with
depths to them that are only hinted at, making them even more
intriguing as they interact with Maedhros and the other elves under
their care. MithLuin literally keeps you on the edge of your seat
wondering what will happen to Maedhros and the others next and I for
one am looking forward to reading the rest of the story some day.

Title: Tales of the Eldandili · Author: Alassiel · Genres: Drama:
Incomplete · ID: 502
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2008-11-09 18:57:31
Faery... we've all heard of it... read about it... dreamt it... and
how many of us would consider ourselves blessed to find our way to it?
Well, not everyone, as we learn from this wonderful tale about the
coming together after long ages of separation of the Firstborn and the
Secondborn of Iluvatar as they seek to combat the powers of darkness
that continue to plague Middle-earth even into our own times. Alassiel
has begun (and hopefully will continue) a wonderful series of
interwoven stories about humans who discover that they are Eldandili,
elf-friends, and are recruited to help bring the knowledge of the
Valar to an unsuspecting world in preparation for the end-time war
that all know is coming. For all who love tales about the interaction
between humans and their elder kin, this is a worthy series to read.

Title: Vodka · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Finwe · ID: 714
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 19:06:09
Spoilers!
"Vodka" considers not Maedhros's recovery after Thangorodrim but
Maglor's, as the principal bearer of blame for his house's failure to
attempt rescue. An insightful story that pits Maedhros's practicality
against Maglor's emotions, it connects Maedhros's captivity and his
brothers' (lack of) response with another major Noldorin event in that
age: the Noldolante. This is the first that I've seen these two events
so strongly connected--and beautifully done at that! A skillfully
written and insightful story, it is well worth the read.

Title: The Skills That Keep You Alive · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Mid
Third Age · ID: 434
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-09 20:02:00
Spoilers!
I remember getting this prompt for the Alphabet Challenge and drawing
a complete blank. "J" was one of the harder prompts, I think, but
Gwynnyd fortunately found inspiration in it.

Glorfindel's demonstration of juggling with sharp pointy objects as a
way of teaching an impatient young boy a lesson is classic, although
also mixed with some pretty gruesome ideas. Aragorn's youthful
rebellion, and his willingness to use his [helplessness] to play to
the prejudices of age and (probably) being Elvish is just right for a
child his age.

Clearly, the lesson given long ago sinks in, and we get treated to the
opening of a bit of sideshow camp acting one usually doesn't think of
in the same context as the name 'Aragorn.' Great fun, inspired use of
"Fëanor's jewels"!

Title: Lost and Found · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Mid
Third Age · ID: 23
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-09 20:10:30
Spoilers!
Branwyn takes what would be a sweetly amusing study of the
relationship of two characters and turns a few allusions that give it
a much more weighty significance in light of the larger story.

A very young Faramir and Gandalf make for great interaction: Faramir's
precociousness and Gandalf's ability to see the worth in whatever
confronts him and be grateful to them for their surprises and lessons
are both at the forefront of the story. I loved this exchange:

[The boy pointed down the aisle. "We must go through Poetry and
Ballistics to get to the lower archive."

"That sounds like a highly dangerous course, but I have great faith in
my guide," the wizard said as he hurried after him.]

Great humor, that is jarred slightly by the uneasy presence of
Denethor, another scholar but one whose interest, though unguessed by
the characters at this time, is far more sinister than a boy's, as
well the reader knows. I liked the paralleling of Denethor and Faramir
that Branwyn creates, making both of them frustrated scholars forced
to fight a war rather than do the more humane work that their talents
best suit them to.

Great fun, Gondor fans and Gandalf fans will certainly enjoy this!


Title: House of Ransom · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles ·
ID: 657
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 20:23:06
Oh, Turin ... I can imagine poor Beleg's frustration! As always,
Robinka gets Beleg spot-on in this drabble.

Title: The War of Wrath · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Elves: Drabbles ·
ID: 120
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 20:26:20
Spoilers!
Tanaqui, I am impressed: not only fitting such a scene into 100 words
but doing so in metered, rhymed poetry! Amidst all of this, you also
fit in some lovely imagery (["His shield a field of mirrored gold, /
His sword a stabbing point ablaze"]) in a form that feels very true to
the Vanyar.

Title: I Ain't Got Nobody · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 568
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 20:34:44
Spoilers!
This is a tremendously funny story in which Glorfindel continues
meeting ridiculous ends, only to require re-embodiment *again* by
Namo. But the premise alone is not what makes this story such a hoot
but the addition of certain charming details, such as ["Námo tossed
the tea towel under him just before his butt hit the naugahyde"] or
Namo's near asphyxiation on a strand of dental floss after being
surprised yet again by dead!Glorfindel. And the nonchalant tone
throughout the whole piece adds to its effectiveness ... as well as
serving as a nice contrast to the usual introspective and ponderous
tone of stories about Mandos and re-embodiment (many of which this
reviewer has authored). This story is one that makes me laugh again
and again, no matter how many times I read it and has definitely
earned its place as one of my favorite Silmarillion humor pieces.

Title: I Married for Love · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Genres: Poetry ·
ID: 661
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 20:40:58
Spoilers!
This is a lovely and poignant poem that looks at Indis's marriage to
Finwe from her point of view. As the title says, she married for love,
but as the poem progresses, the tone grows sadder and the reader sees
how she comes to regard that love as largely unrequited; the
repetition shows how Indis's love for husband doesn't change, even as
her understanding of his love for her does. Stanzas like, ["I married
for love / And I cried in silence and hurt and shame / When her son
lifted / His sword against a brother and the father / Left with the
one who wronged"], show a perspective not often seen in Silmfic, where
many writers tend to favor the Feanorians and Indis receives either
disregard or animosity. This poem is not only well crafted but strikes
that emotional chord that good poetry does; it is highly recommended!

Title: The Lowest Circle · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Elves: Drabbles ·
ID: 449
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 20:44:16
Spoilers!
Far from the usual physical torments of stories concerned with the
makings of Orcs, this drabble looks at the psychological shifts,
especially as they relate to darkness and light. This is a very nicely
done and insightful--and chilling!--look at one of Tolkien's more
horrific ideas.

Title: The Pillar Perished Is · Author: Imhiriel · Times: First Age
and Prior: House of Finwe · ID: 356
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 20:53:49
Spoilers!
In this story, Imhiriel takes the interpretation that Feanor was
primarily motivated in his actions by his love for Finwe--not for the
Silmarils--and builds a moving story around this idea, as Feanor sails
for Middle-earth. Her use of repetition and introspection show very
well the internal anguish Feanor feels, and the sporadic use of lines
from a poem by Sir Thomas Wyatt only intensify what is already a
heart-breaking story.

Title: Pride and Despair: A Defense of Ecthelion's Son · Author: Marta
· Genres: Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 624
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-09 20:58:16
You get the Geek Medal of Obsessiveness for this one, Marta!

Marta's Denethor is to me enigmatic - I remember some early postings
on Denethor that she'd made at HA, and disagreeing with them (but then
there was Homework, and I never got a chance to respond), but I've
never tried to sit down with her work, put all the fics with Denethor
in them on my screen, and figure out how she perceives him, how she
reads what Tolkien gives us. And now, I am spared the task, because
she's given us her analysis of Denethor and that gives me a fairly
comprehensive view of how she reads him, and what she thinks are the
strengths and weaknesses of her own reading. Honesty and insight -
what more can you ask for in an essay?

Overall, I find that Marta's reading of Denethor is plausible, if not
totally convincing to me on every point. But the care and the number
of connections and extrapolations she's able to make based on a close
reading of what Tolkien gave us, is impressive and thoughtful. The
family dynamics imputed to him in the [Early Years] section, and how
they might have played into his reaction to Thorongil are excellent
and give me a reason to think it might be worth it to play with the
option of Denethor as not an only child (my default readings of him).
She goes straight into the thicket of misery that is the infamous ["Do
you wish, then, that our places had been exchanged?"] exchange and I
can see her point, especially when she pulls from the annotated drafts
Tolkien left us. I'm still not totally convinced there's not room to
play more on that ["our"] in the above line, but she makes a good case
for drawing back from the horrible notion that Denethor might wish
Faramir dead.

So in the end, this is a good, well-planned, reasonably argued essay.
I don't agree with all of it - there are portions where I'd want to
nitpick some words and see what comes out of them - but it is
insightful and can only help us to get a better idea of who Denethor
was and what our own relationships with him are. Thank you, Marta! A+!

Title: Celevon a Mallen · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 279
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:01:08
Spoilers!
Across the totality of Galadriel and Celeborn's relationship in
Middle-earth, Tanaqui gives glimpses of important moments in their
lives. More important than her wisdom in selecting these moments is
the skill with which she brings them alive and makes each drabble a
lovely, moving depiction of one of Middle-earth's greatest loves.

Title: Baker's Dozen · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 372
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:07:53
A very clever series--I am a sucker for stories that don't flinch at
looking at how life on Arda *really* was. Some of these drabbles are
funny, others thought-provoking, but well worth the read!

Title: No Mercy · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General Drabbles ·
ID: 443
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:10:23
Spoilers!
Working with just 100 words, Tanaqui does an admirable job of bringing
this scene to life, contrasting the green fields with the fires
wrought by the Enemy. Nicely done!

Title: Love at First Sight · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 432
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:13:17
Spoilers!
Although a sweet ficlet (and spot-on with regards to Feanor's
fascination with the light, I think!), this tribble carries with it
darker undertones of what is yet to come to the House of Finwe. The
last line, though, keeps me firmly in this moment of joy.

Title: Miquan Melave · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance · ID: 319
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-09 21:28:09
Spoilers!
I hadn't had a chance to read this fic until MEFAs - let me
congratulate you for managing to get 'fuck' into the first line of a
story... and in true geek style, fucking with us by forcing us to get
to the actual fucking through its symbolizing of a cultural-linguistic
difference that stirs intellectual curiosity at least as much as
passion in Boromir. Bonus kudos for having the Rohirric verb signify a
connotation the English word tends to lack.

That connotative layering of [fukken] is what gets us into the
ambiguous space of a relationship that Gondor thinks should not exist
- or if it exists, it has to exist without the significance that it
proudly has in Rohan. Sex is ambiguous - is it lust or is it something
more? Boromir seems quite torn between wanting to believe Théodred and
a fascinating retelling of the Mithrellas-Imrazor story, and being
crushed by a culture and a war that reflects back to him no sign of
his own desire, which is rendered opaque on the one hand and on the
other, inadequate to the emotional need of the day, at least as far as
Boromir can [see]. What he feels, however, what he seems nevertheless
to be committed meaningfully to at the end of the day, may be quite
different, as the last line nicely suggests.

Thanks for an interesting read, Marta!

Title: Burdens · Author: Meril · Genres: Drama: General Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 219
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:33:28
Spoilers!
There is a rather famous piece of original fiction called "The Things
They Carried" that reminds me of Allie's "Burdens." Both stories are
equally successful in showing everything from the characters' pasts to
their hopes and expectations communicated via the items the characters
carry. Allie has done a great job of selecting items that show these
multiple meanings and convey the weight of deeds behind and the hopes
of the future before the Noldor; in fact, she does better with this in
this series than many stories do in more explicit narratives. Also,
Allie doesn't just show the Noldorin perspective but hints at the
Telerin point-of-view as well, giving this series an appreciable
depth. "A Necklace" will always be my favorite: It has that punch that
make ficlets really work for me as a reader. A wonderful series, this
comes most highly recommended!

Title: The Sky Is Over · Author: Robinka · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 83
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:36:27
Spoilers!
I love the concept of this drabble: showing Finrod's reaction to the
doom-filled words he has himself spoken regarding his future and what
will remain for his heirs. His surprise at the solidity of his fate is
sad to contemplate but very believable. And the last line is simply
gorgeous!

Title: Taking Roots · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 367
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:38:52
Spoilers!
This drabble is so full of hope ... and it reminds me of my husband's
and my first forays in planting! Galadriel's unease feels entirely
right to me and Celeborn's reassurance is just lovely.

Title: There shall be Mirth at our Meeting · Author: Imhiriel ·
Genres: Humor: Drabbles · ID: 377
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-09 21:40:20
I am quite in agreement with Bronwen - what's not to like? And either
he's cunning or he's got a good sense of humor - definitely likable!

Good fun, Imhiriel - thanks for getting that lovely smile and laugh to
a well-deserved center stage.

Title: Old Friends · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 651
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:42:08
Spoilers!
There is such warmth in this drabble: On the shores of the sea, the
sight of old friends nonetheless revitalizes one who is both old and
contemplating his purposes. The drabble is written with Marta's usual
skill and eloquent style. Well done!

Title: Wave-Singer · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Drabbles · ID: 33
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:45:48
This is a simply wonderful drabble that shows what a skilled writer
can do with just a limited form. Branwyn immediately creates a sense
of character and place using just the dialogue of her narrator. The
structure of the piece allows for implied dialogue that lets her use
the drabble to its fullest form. But what works the best for me is
that final line: I love drabbles that carry a punch in their final
moments, and this one does just that incredibly well. I am glad to
have discovered this and give it my highest recommendation!

Title: Five things that never happened to Nerdanel · Author: Meril ·
Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 389
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:49:48
Spoilers!
Allie frequently writes incredibly insightful pieces by using rather
experimental forms, and in showing five things that *did not* happen
to Nerdanel, she shows much about the character and the events that
did. Her passion for Feanor, her strength, her loyalty to what she
believed was right--her fate?--are all underscored by Allie's exercise
in what might have been ... and wasn't. Very nicely done!

Title: Moved to Pity · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 366
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-09 21:52:07
Spoilers!
This is a moment in The Silmarillion that is hard to put into words,
and I give Imhiriel kudos for doing such a wonderful job of it! I
furthermore enjoy how Vaire perceives that even the death of Luthien
will bring much good into the world, despite its tragedy.

Title: Sharing Good News · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 216
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-09 23:55:37
Spoilers!
Unexpectedly joyful; this drabble gave me as big a grin as Aragorn's.
A delightful study in contrasts - the miserable weather with Aragorn's
happiness, Aragorn's urge to disclose his news with Bilbo's concern
for secrecy. If it didn't really happen this way in the real
Middle-earth, it should have...

Title: Return of the King · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 355
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-09 23:59:04
Spoilers!
A wonderful snapshot of an outcast king's making a very difficult
decision - Tolkien set out so many outlines of great stories in his
Appendices; it's great to see Eldacar's life explored in this way.

Title: Old Friends · Author: Marta · Times: Fourth Age and Beyond:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 651
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-10 00:30:45
Spoilers!
A well-framed snapshot of how the arrival of Gimli and Legolas in
Valinor stirs up things in the utmost West - I love the way
Gandalf-a.k.a.-Olorin is excited to see his old friends.

Title: Letters From Faramir · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Boromir or Faramir · ID: 425
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-10 00:47:17
Spoilers!
A tender ode to the brotherly love of Faramir and Boromir, through the
letters that Faramir writes his brother, both before and after he
learns of Boromir's death. Interesting commentary by Pippin as well.
An exercise in catharsis that Boromir fans should appreciate.

Title: Many Branches · Author: Baranduin · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Frodo and Faramir · ID: 420
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:44:23
Spoilers!
This story has a wonderful levity to it, a perfect fulfillment of
Faramir's promise that he and Frodo would talk more after the war. I
love the author's portrayal of peace, where Faramir's
(all-too-believable!) struggle grasping the hobbit family trees is the
biggest problem either hobbit or man has for a moment. The more somber
ending, though, brought the story back home and I remembered all too
well that, for Frodo at least (and I expect for Faramir as well),
there is a real sense of "[you can never go home again]." I do think
that Fourth Age Ithilien will be perfect for Faramir to find a real
lasting peace, and this is a lovely promise of deeper peace still to come.

In short: a very enjoyable glimpse of two of my favorite characters.
Nice work, Baranduin.

Title: Tolkien's Parish: The Canonical Middle-earth · Author: Steuard
Jensen · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 91
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:44:45
I was really impressed with the methodical and nuanced way that this
essay answered that age-old question in Tolkien fanfic, what exactly
counts as a (or the) canonical source. This is indeed a difficult
issue and you approached it in a way that considered both the general
creative process and the specifics of the situation at JRRT's death,
yet you did not dictate your own view to the author. The next time
someone tries to say some canonical fact doesn't apply to them, I
think I will point them to your work as it is a fine way to structure
a person's thoughts on this issue.

Title: Seeing Stars · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 360
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:45:09
This is a delightful glance into Faramir's thoughts on this occasion;
I found them most convincing, even if (or perhaps because) he isn't
quite as control of himself. A lovely picture of peace.

Title: An Ordinary Woman · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age
and Prior: House of Finwe · ID: 32
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:45:46
Spoilers!
This was an intriguing gapfiller, answering just how Beren found his
way past Melian's enchantments, but of course does a lot more than
that. I particularly liked the way Luthien was presented as not quite
as Sue-ish as a lot of fandom members complain, and how that
ordinariness was transformed into something meaningful for the talk.
Nice work, Dawn!

Title: Horse Sense · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres: Humor:
Elven Lands · ID: 22
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:46:15
A nice interlude with Bill the Pony. I love the fact that Bill is
given a choice, a will as it were, and that he has likes and dislikes
just like any other characters.

I also have to say, this ficlet shows that the authors knows her
horses! I'm no expert, by a far stretch, but this piece felt "right",
like someone who knew to watch out for a horse's kick and also the
things that would soothe them. I quite liked that.

Title: Relief · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Men: General Drabbles · ID: 446
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:47:20
Spoilers!
One of the commenters over at Tanaqui's LJ observed that Boromir is
probably the only one who's nice and cool after this scene, and I
quite agreed. This drabble is wonderfully evocative even without
reading AmandaK's longer story that it is a coda to; Tanaqui really
sets the scene in a laid back way that makes this all very fun. Highly
recommended for fans of all those hawt Gondorians.

Title: Broken Star · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:48:29
Spoilers!
I read this double drabble in the midst of the author's longer work,
"The Apprentice," when I felt I needed a break from the longer
narrative. (My brain likes to bounce around.) Read in the context of
that piece this ficlet is all the more heart-rending, though I think
that it could certainly be read alone. We know canonically that
Celebrimbor and Sauron worked to craft the three, and I can very
easily see a sense of betrayal from Celebrimbor when he learns the
truth about the Istyar's truest identity.

I find myself wondering a "what-if": What if Celebrimbor had
surrendered the identity of the rings, or had agreed to destroy the
Three if Sauron had destroyed the One, or in some way had maintained
some sense of brotherhood and trust with Sauron? Would Numenor have
fallen? Would war have followed? Perhaps --I sense that those things
were in a way unavoidable after Sauron refused to sail West at the end
of the First Age-- but I also sense that *how* they came about could
have been radically different.

In any event, Pande, nice job capturing this moment and the unique
relationship between these two characters.

Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: alex_quine · Genres: Drama:
Featuring Aragorn · ID: 152
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:49:08
Spoilers!
There is much to recommend this story, so that I hardly know where to
start. The strong description of the Haradric guard's relieving
himself, the almost messianic quality of Ecthelion, the political
machinations in the years before the Corsair raid... nicely done all
around, I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Title: A Race, To Be Like Me · Author: Imhiriel · Races: Elves:
Drabbles · ID: 375
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:50:16
A very nice spin on the Oath! Even if one disagrees with the
interpretation (because Feanor is nothing if not controversial) and
chooses to see Feanor as twisted at his core, his thoughts here
*still* make sense. I quite liked this glimpse into his thoughts.

Title: Now the Green Blade Riseth · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 37
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 01:50:56
Spoilers!
I tend to be a bit weary of fics written in the first person because
it is so hard to do well; never more so than when that point of view
is the Gaffer, because it is a thin line to walk between making him
sound like a hick and gentrifying him. Annmarwalk walks that line with
grace here, and the use of the mallorn seed as the element around
which to center this drabble was inspired. It seems so like how I view
the Gaffer, that he would be at first dismissive but eventually won
over. I really enjoyed this drabble.

Title: Consolation · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Steward's Family · ID: 341
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-10 02:14:49
I found this a very convincing gap-filler, which fleshes out a
possible reality of this only briefly-mentioned canon event with a
credible backdrop and descriptions. The dialogue is brisk and
realistic, and the plot arc is constructed well, weaving major and
minor plot points smoothly together.

A surprisingly comforting story considering the circumstances. The
mood of the camp and of Faramir in particular is conveyed very well,
as well as the firm bond between him and his men (and woman *g*). And
Boromir shows himself not only as a good brother, but also as a very
skilled Captain-General concerned for the morale of the people under
his command. I also liked the references to the intracicies in the
relationships between the House of Húrin and the house of Dol Amroth.

I have to say I also enjoyed this story because it showed us the
relationship between Hethlin and Faramir at such an early, still
tentative stage.

Title: Dark Dreams · Author: Avon · Races: Men: Steward's Family · ID: 282
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-10 02:14:59
The characterisations are excellent and very engaging; the emotions
conveyed are clear and moving. It was particularly easy to identify
with Imrahil as the PoV-character, to feel the two boys' emotions tug
on the heart-strings and to feel grieved and indignant like him on
their behalf at the way they shy away from people they should trust
the most.

Introspection, dialogue and descriptions are well-balanced. Faramir's
vision of the chaos of drowning Númenor is very effective - especially
because of the juxtaposition of his childish innocence and
matter-of-factness and the horrible and chilly scenes he describes. I
also like the way Avon managed to craft the tale so that it is
appropriate for Imrahil to tell the children.

Title: Scholarship · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 43
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 02:28:22
Spoilers!
I love the idea of books about sexuality - not pornography, but more
semi-scholarly looks - in Gondor's archives and how this would have
played out with our favorite characters. I always enjoyed Branwyn's
Eldahil stories, and "Scholarship" is in a similar vein, but
different, because Faramir is now the parent.This was an amusing and
realistic read, not too accommodating of our modern sensibilities but
at the same time not in the least prudish. Nice work, Raksha!

Title: Star's End · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of Elrond ·
ID: 283
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 02:36:11
Spoilers!
This story has a lovely melancholy feel to it, as Arwen and Maglor
meet on the road to Cerin Amroth at the end of the former's life. It
all ffelt extremely fitting not only to Arwen's place in her history,
but also to Maglor's. The ending came as a bit of a surprise but in
the end felt perfectly appropriate. A lovely piece of mood writing
that really did this moment justice.

Title: I Ain't Got Nobody · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 568
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 02:39:08
*snork* Oh, now THAT was funny! I can see Namo getting irritated at
this, and Glorfindel's excuses were very sharp. Not that I didn't
expect it coming from an author as sharp as Ignoble Bard, but still,
this story gave me a much-needed laugh.

Title: Hammer · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 468
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 02:43:35
Spoilers!
Oh, this was cute! As a lover of puns and limericks, obviously the
word play was fun, but I loved even more the way that the dwarves were
portrayed. Particularly the original character of Gloin's lady-love;
she has a quality about her that is more forward than one would expect
of a Gondorian or elf or even a hobbit, yet there is still a
playfulness to her, a coyness that acknowledges the risque-ness of
their meeting without making it an entirely shameful thing. A very
enjoyable moment, and very dwarven through and through.

Oh, and as a P.S. - gotta love her beard. *g* That was pure gold.

Title: For What I Wait · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 125
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 02:48:37
Spoilers!
Reading this story, I can feel Feanor's anguish at the full depth of
what he has done. He is great - perhaps great and terrible, but great
nonetheless - and I cannot imagine that he would not feel the full
weight of his "sins" once his madness had passed. In an odd way this
isn't unlike my conception of hell (exposure without end to the full
weight of our actions, without hope of redemption), and that makes the
angst all the more potent.

I think for an artist like Feanor, to have to watch his artist-son
lose the ability to sing would be exquisite torture; all the moreso
when you consider that it was his refusal to give up the end of his
art (his silmarils) that led to Maglor's loss of the ability to
produce his art. This is angst at its highest, and any fan of the
Feanorians won't want to miss it.

Title: Fine Art for Future Generations · Author: stefaniab · Genres:
Humor: Gondor · ID: 561
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 02:52:25
Spoilers!
*giggles* Of _course_ young boys would like this painting, though I'm
not quite sure who else would. Arwen is truly wise here. And nice job,
stefaniab, on looking at this "art" within Middle-earth's context.

Title: The Ghost in the Garden · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races: Elves
· ID: 272
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 02:55:06
Spoilers!
This is really a fabulous story, enjoyable on many levels. One thing
that really makes it shine is its characterization, especially of
Celeborn. He is passionate in his way, certainly sensual (and talk
about luscious writing....), but he is also practical and
matter-of-fact. And through him Dawn has developed a really nice look
at Sindarin society. I especially liked the way that the Sindarin
elves were described as having a court society, and that Celeborn was
kept in the proper place someone as young as he would be expected to
fill. He might be the king's kinsman, but he is not the star of
Doriath. It all felt very natural.

That feeling of things progressing naturally also extends to the
story's sensuality. Celeborn and Galadriel are engaged, not yet
married, and that's important. In this story Dawn has Thingol forbid
the two characters to marry for several years, and so Celeborn's and
Galadriel's sexuality is informed by obedience to their king. All of
which creates a lovely sense of love not defined by eroticism that is
not only very enjoyable to a reader, but also allows her to make some
very interesting statements about the characters. It's not UST
precisely, but something along those lines, and Dawn uses it very
affectively.

Without spoiling the ending, there is a lovely parallel between the
two parts of the story, one focusing on physical intimacy and the
other on emotional intimacy. Both Celeborn and Galadriel are very well
presented, as young elves with their flaws and strengths and
struggles. I highly recommend it.

Title: Possessing the greatest powers · Author: Tanaqui · Times:
Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 387
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 03:12:58
Spoilers!
These are all lovely, and anyone who likes elf-centric drabbles would
most certainly enjoy them; of the last three I think I enjoyed
Galadriel's the most because there is such a depth of meaning in how
Tanaqui uses the idea of Iluvatar's music being in the water; yet it
was certainly hard to choose just one, and I liked all of them in
their own separate way.

Standing in stark contrast is the first drabble, about Celebrimbor's
forging of the three rings. This one was wonderfully exhilarating with
the adrenaline of discovery, and the cost of said invention. I was
reminded of the Tolkien letter in the introduction to my Silmarillion
that talks about creation and sub-creation versus the corrupting
craftsmanship of Melkor. It seemed a fitting final beat of the curse
of the Noldor, and I think that Tolkien himself would have approved
(of the theme, not necessarily of the action).

Very nicely done, all of them.

Title: Wizards' Pupils · Author: Altariel · Races: Men: Minas Tirith ·
ID: 108
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 03:20:33
Spoilers!
We know from the Lord of the Rings appendices that in the days of
Denethor Gandalf was less welcome in Minas Tirith than was Saruman;
and we also know that Faramir was described as the wizard's pupil -
specifically, Gandalf's pupil. All of this raises the interesting
question of what Faramir would have thought of Saruman, and how he
would have reacted to such a character, had they met in the years
before the war.

I did quibble a little over whether Denethohr would be quite as
accepting of obviously "dark arts" (to borrow a Harry Potter term)
than he is portrayed here, so long before the war. I'm still not sure;
yet that isn't the crucial point. What *is* crucial --and perfectly
clear to my mind-- is that Faramir would whole-heartedly reject such
techniques. We know from his statement to Frodo that he would not
[ensnare an orc with a lie], that he isn't an ends-justify-the-means
kind of guy. Such conviction doesn't just pop up in extreme
situations, and it was nice to see a commitment to that principle in
his young life as well. I can also see how this might seem naive to
his father, providing a very nice explanation for some of their later
dynamic.

This question of how far we may go to combat evil threatening our
survival is an oh-so-pertinent one for our own times as well as
seeming native to Middle-earth. (The current debate in the U.S. over
"enhanced interrogation techniques" comes to mind, though it need not
be restricted to that issue or country...) It's always nice to see a
fanfic author use Tolkien's world as a springboard into contemporary
or universal issues because it is often easier to consider such issues
in a fantasy environment; and Altariel does it with her usual aplomb.
A must-read for anyone who likes thought-provoking fanfic, especially
of the Faramir-centric variety.

Title: The Last Words · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 409
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 03:27:33
There seems to be a theme in Tolkien that the created things derived
its power from the creator; the idea that the silmaril could be
something truly independent of Feanor is a novel one, at least so far
as I've read. I found this to be a most probing examination of
Nerdanel's relationship with Feanor, and will definitely have me
thinking for a bit.

Title: Five Hair Care Tips for Rohirrim · Author: EdorasLass · Genres:
Humor · ID: 71
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 03:31:42
Spoilers!
There is something about this "five things" list that makes me laugh
like a COMPLETE lune, every time I read it. It simply shouldn't be
this hilarious, but just as simply, it *is*.

Anyone who has seen "The Two Towers" knows that Rohirric hairstyles
are, ah, somewhat lacking. Never mind that Tolkien tells us that
["their hair, flaxen-pale, flowed under their light helms, and
streamed in long braids behind them"]; if that's not a prescription
for sexy and well-groomed hair I don't know what is. Here EdorasLass
gives some much-needed grooming tip, filled with asides that feel like
inside jokes but I think will translate well to a larger audience.

Quite aside from answering the movieverse issue, we get EdorasLass's
typical crack!ish sense of humor in places you'd never expect to find
it. Honestly, sparkly-clips? With decapitated orcs, Dunlendings, and
wargs mixed in with bunny rabbits and mead steins? That should just be
off-the-wall, but like so much in this piece, it simply works. The
concept of Lothiriel and Eowyn "fixing" Eomer's hair as was suggested
in the comments will have me smiling for a while yet.

What totally amazes me about this piece, after so many reads, is your
ability to steer off-course and yet end up back on target. A good
example of this is the [" He's not gettin' all that action just on
account of his charming smile, you know."] passage. You blaze a trail
through some delightfully slashy humor (at least in my mind, because
you're not at all explicit and leave it all to your readers' dirty
little minds), but then end up exactly where you need to be going.
It's like watching the Colbert Report or something, srsly.

I think I'm going to go read it again. If anyone is in need of a good
laugh, I highly recommend it.

Title: The Dooming of Small Hands · Author: Thundera Tiger · Times:
Late Third Age · ID: 639
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 03:36:16
Spoilers!
As with so many of Thundera Tiger's stories, I think what makes "The
Dooming of Small Hands" is the light but simultaneously deep approach
she brings to her characterizations. This story features a
conversation between Gandalf and Elrond in the hours before Frodo
wakes up in Rivendell, and she brings this unique approach to both of
these characters. Gandalf especially is refreshingly conflicted and
imperfect, in a way that is all too fitting given how some of his
choices turn out in Lord of the Rings, but isn't something I see that
often in fanfic. He really knows all the races of Middle-earth, and
one can see him as the personification of the good steward.

Elrond, too, shines here. In a way he is the wise old elf, both great
and weary, yet one can see the influences of his particular history. I
was particularly moved by his foresight that Frodo would not return.
His experience with Celebrian and to a lesser extent Elrohir and
Elladan would have shown him the true price of the walking wounded,
and it speaks highly of him that he'd want to spare someone he'd only
known briefly that same torment.

"Dooming" also makes sense of something that had always puzzled me: I
never could buy someone as wise as Elrond being swayed by a single
conversation (no matter how long) that the Ring ought to be destroyed.
This story fills that gap nicely, and also provides a very natural
moment that lets both characters shine. Nice work!

Title: Eagle of the Star · Author: Neoinean · Genres: Adventure:
Incomplete · ID: 327
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 03:41:10
Spoilers!
A nicely plausible--and original--look at why Aragorn might have
chosen as he did to go south to become Thorongil. That he might have
taken comments by his foster father amiss and so was convinced to go
south, and that his first true adventure was to assist in the birth of
a child presented sideways is an unusual but likely means of
introducing him to the Rohirrim.

Very interesting look at a young and slightly naive Aragorn filled
with good characterizations.

Title: Look Not With Longing · Author: Dwimordene · Times: Fourth Age
and Beyond · ID: 479
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 03:41:45
Spoilers!
I can see Faramir and others like him having these thoughts all too
easily. It's very true that we often do not fathom the full cost of
our dreams and wishes until it's too late, and this is just as true of
Faramir's dream of Ithilien as a garden, as it was of Denethor's for
["things as they were in all the days of my life"]. Dwimordene does a
very nice job of writing this character with depth and subtlety, a
real treat for all Faramir fans - I recommend it.

Title: Writer's Bloke · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Humor: Drabbles ·
ID: 431
Reviewer: Marta · 2008-11-10 03:49:55
*giggles* Ai, this was cute. Every writer has faced similar moments in
their mind, and stefaniab brings this writer's block to life. Very
deftly told, it made me smile.

Title: The Houseless · Author: Jael · Genres: Horror · ID: 178
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-10 10:05:18
A very atmospheric and wonderfully written one shot, perfectly set in
the universe of Middle Earth, touching and mysterious. I especially
like the characterization of Legolas. Well done!

Title: Moon of the Sea · Author: pandemonium_213 · Times: Second and
Early Third Age · ID: 213
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-10 10:41:25
Ah, Elendil's wife gets a voice of her own, thanks to Pandemonium!

It is always nice to see a story about an under-represented or even
neglected character, and this set of drabbles and vignettes present a
series of glimpses at the life of Isildur's and Anarion's mother,
spanning from her childhood. And this is an brilliant set, in which in
relatively short chapters Pandemonium introduces the readers to a
fully developed, strong and compelling character -- Isilme is no
longer is an unnamed woman that, of course, exists in canon, but there
is little to nothing told about her. Pandemonium's heroine comes to
life in a way that makes me think, "Oh yes! Perfect. This is truly the
queen of Numenor. This is Elendil's wife!"

This set also is a excellently drawn combination of Tolkien's universe
and European mythology, with a touch of mystery and magic. The
language is elegant and beautiful, the imagery -- rich and faboulous.
This is a story that invites the readers to embark upon a fascinating
voyage. Splendidly written, Pandemonium! Thank you!

Title: As the Tide by the Moon · Author: EdorasLass · Genres:
Alternate Universe · ID: 9
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 10:45:19
Spoilers!
Last year it was particularly Dwimordene's writing that moved me; this
year I find it is that of Edoraslass. I rarely read extensively on the
boards where these post, after all, although I post on at least one
where both do. Nor do I regularly read stories of Gondor and Rohan,
although I write stories of Gondor myself.

But this slightly AU story in which Theodred survives and has fathered
a child is superbly done, from the aching longing of the chambermaid
who was smitten by Grima Wormtongue--at least until she meets him and
comes to know him better--to her growth as a mother and one who has
agreed to the solution offered her. Characterizations are superbly
done, as are the intrigues of those who must deal with Grima within
Meduseld, not to mention his own machinations both toward those among
whom he lives and toward his fallen master.

Definitely a story to read and ponder, and so true to the cultures
amongst whom Eledher moves. Highly recommended.

Title: Chance Encounter · Author: przed · Races: Men: Steward's Family
· ID: 5
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 10:56:08
An interesting encounter between the Steward's son and the Steward's
rival. Nicely written.

Title: Possessing the greatest powers · Author: Tanaqui · Times:
Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 387
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 11:03:05
Spoilers!
As always, Tanaqui's drabbles manage to capture complex themes so
beautifully, particularly here as we look on the Three Rings of the
Elves and how their bearers found themselves relieved when their power
failed.

The scant words of these four drabbles are still powerful and
evocative, and we feel the shock as each bearer feels the demise of
the One, and the loss of what had added to their own power for so very
long.

Marvelous.

Title: The Night's Eye · Author: Vana Tuivana · Races: Men · ID: 343
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 11:12:27
Spoilers!
The tale of why those women of hidden Dunedain warriors lit the
Night's Eye candle and its effects within the home of Halbarad,
kinsman to Aragorn, is delicately and beautifully told. Imagery is
beautiful, and the end achingly poignant. A lovely tale.

Title: Wizards' Pupils · Author: Altariel · Races: Men: Minas Tirith ·
ID: 108
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-10 16:34:33
Spoilers!
This is an interesting story with many lovely details - very rich and
raises many questions. A gift that keeps on giving, so to speak. I
liked the multi-generational element, and that while Saruman's
strength is in his voice, Gandalf's is in silence. It is also quite a
provocative idea that in encouraging Denethor's use of the Palantir,
Saruman might have been furthering Sauron's ultimate plan even so
early. This story leaves the reader with a lot to think about, and I
can imagine no higher compliment.

Title: Name Calling: Group Identity and the Other among First Age
Elves · Author: Angelica · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 322
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 16:51:17
Prejudice is alive and well among the Elves, as is evidenced by the
names each uses for his own clan compared to those used for others.

An instructive discussion, if a bit dry. It does take what Tolkien
himself spread out throughout his works and personal notes and brings
it into a relatively brief essay that can be useful for purposes of
reference.

Title: Sun · Author: Claudia · Races: Cross-Cultural: Frodo and
Faramir · ID: 223
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-10 16:59:45
Spoilers!
I think this story comes as close as possible to imagining what it
would be like to see small, ordinary things as momentous for those of
us who have not experienced catastrophic loss.

Title: Boromir and Teddy · Author: Ithil-valon · Genres: Drama: Final
Partings · ID: 113
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 17:02:34
A most gentle memorial for the pair of warriors who had represented
the future leadership of Gondor and Rohan, neither of whom came to the
seat intended for him and who died at much the same time. We do not
know for certain that Theodred and Boromir were as close as many
prefer to think, much less that they were indeed shield-brothers; but
they would undoubtedly have known one and respected one another.

But the image of Faramir and Eomer kneeling together by Theodred's
burial mound, remembering the two of them together, is satisfying.

Nice use of imagery to convey mood.

Title: Arvedui v. Pelendur · Author: Roh Wyn · Genres: Non-Fiction ·
ID: 277
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 17:27:54
Spoilers!
A fascinating examination of the leading factors used by Pelendur to
reject the claim of Arvedui for the throne of Gondor while accepting
that of Earnil in his stead following the death of Ondoher and his two
sons. It manages to invalidate Arvedui's claim pretty successfully,
while as a result of the fact Earnil and Earnur's dynasty was so
limited in scope it indicates precisely how Faramir is nevertheless
able to legitimize Aragorn's own claim to the Winged Crown (while
there is no question as to his legal right to the Sceptre of Arnor).
Although it continues to be likely that had Pelendur not refused
Arvedui and Firiel's claim (I like to think they would have sought to
be co-rulers, myself) it would have avoided a good deal of trouble in
the long run as well as avoiding a millenium of regency by the
Stewards in Gondor and probably have aided Arnor to survive by
offering the northern realm martial assistance in a far more timely
manner. And I love the comment that obviously Arvedui is no lawyer, or
perhaps he might have worded his claim far differently.

This is a subject that has been of interest to me in my own writing,
and it is nice to have spelled out as succinctly as Roh-wyn has
managed to do. Definitely something to think about! Thank you, my
dear, for this summary, as I have definitely bookmarked it for future
reference.

Title: Seeing Stars · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 360
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-10 17:37:23
Spoilers!
This is a lovely story, dealt out with Raksha's usual equanimity -
sweet, but not overy so; humourous, but not teasing; joyful, and
thoughtful. Like Faramir, the writer here does a good balancing act,
never letting the details overwhelm, rush or crawl. It's a small story
with a large scope, catching a fleeting moment resonating with past
and future. Well done.

Title: Jewels of Light · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Friendship · ID: 394
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-10 17:41:11
This is a charming vision, if a bit overworked. I found the last line
is a great payoff, however.

Title: Promise and Sorrow · Author: Virtuella · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 607
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-10 18:00:15
Each one of these pieces has so much to it it seems almost unfair to
have to review them all together. But they are of a piece, telling the
same story again and again from disparate angles. They are wonderful
and rich, heart breaking and heart-mending. Quite a feat.

Title: Free To Live · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races: Elves: Mirkwood
Elves · ID: 701
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 18:14:08
Spoilers!
The challenge to illustrate one of the lines from Ecclesiastes'
reminder that to all things there is a purpose has been perfectly
realized by Nieriel Raina in this story. Thranduil at first resented
Galadriel's actions in leveling the fortress of Dol Guldur; but then
realizes it doesn't matter as he finally accepts that this great evil,
which has dominated life in the forest realm he's ruled for the past
how many centuries, has finally been brought down and it's up to him
to lead the healing and rebuilding.

Very emotionally satisfying as well as a marvelous choice of images.

Title: The Ghost in the Garden · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races: Elves
· ID: 272
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 18:39:14
Spoilers!
A most interesting foreshadowing of the eventual separation between
Galadriel and Celeborn, as he, the Sinda, chose to remain within
Middle Earth when she accepted her ability to return to the land of
her birth, her task set here finally met. Is that separation similar
to that chosen by the ghost she met in the garden who for a moment
appeared to have taken her for the love he'd lost to Morgoth's
enslavement, perhaps ruined into becoming an orc?

The descriptions are vivid, and Galadriel's discomfort palpable.

Very compelling story.

Title: An Ordinary Woman · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age
and Prior: House of Finwe · ID: 32
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-10 19:27:46
Spoilers!
What a delightful look at a Luthien who was nowhere as radiant as
legend insists and how Finrod might have somehow aided both his
stubborn female cousin as well as a lost human youth to meet.

A lovely example of how the romantic ideal of Luthien might have
exceeded reality and have led in the end to the tragedy of the Silmarils.

Title: Promise and Sorrow · Author: Virtuella · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 607
Reviewer: Marigold · 2008-11-10 19:28:10
Spoilers!
This is a stunningly poignant series of vignettes and I wish that they
were able to be judged seperately as they each deserve recognition.

The first one is wonderfully disjointed, the mother focussing on the
trivial subject of shoes rather than the sad reality of her son's
injuries, something that she is unable to deal with. I thought that
her constant thoughts back to when her son was six years old were
particularly poignant; a time when he was whole and happy and didn't
know about war, and she herself was full of hope for her family's
future. Now she isn't so sure, despite her relief that her son is home
at least.

Another that really touched me was the woman in her sister's wedding
party, trying to hold onto the possibility of hope for her own
happiness, yet doubting it, and though she wants her sister to be
happy, jealous nonetheless and feeling guilty about it. I thought the
complexity of her emotions were very well described and the happy
ending was just perfect. It highlighted that while so many personal
outcomes from the war were less than perfect, for some things did work
out, and hope is not misplaced. Sort of sums up one of the main themes
of Lord of The Rings for me.

The story about the childhood lovers was another that really touched
me and the twist at the end was a powerful and unexpected surprise.
Really brings home the point that it isn't only soldiers that perish
during war, and it's not just women and children that are left
grieving for their menfolk.

I also liked the vignette from the healer's perspective and the
mention of the gift sent by the soldier of Rohan's mother, the
character featured in the first vignette. I have read the story where
this gift is created and love that one as well. I'd love to see
follow-up stories about all of these characters!

To sum it up, I thought that all of the vignettes making up this story
were very well done, including the ones that I haven't singled out
here. I thought that all of the characterisations were excellent and
all were original and written as individuals.

Sad and poignant, yes, but nicely balanced with hope for the future. A
stunning tale and well worth reading!

Title: Leaving Home · Author: annmarwalk · Races: Men: Steward's
Family · ID: 39
Reviewer: Marigold · 2008-11-10 19:52:32
Spoilers!
This is a very sweet tale and I really enjoyed it. The author has
captured Merry and Pippin teasing but loving relationship, seen
through Elboron's eyes, very well. I particularly liked Faramir's
relationship with Elboron, the way he taught him through stories
especially.

That trip must have been a fantastic adventure for a six-year-old!

Title: Last Stroke · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Drabbles · ID: 465
Reviewer: Marigold · 2008-11-10 20:18:28
Chilling AU drabble and the imagery is powerful. I liked this
portrayal of Cirdan, grim and mighty, noble and commanding; even
though this is most probably the final ending and a terrible loss of
everything good that might remain in Middle-earth, he still stands
tall and ready to do what must be done.

Title: The Journey · Author: foxrafer (csevans8) · Times: Late Third
Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 604
Reviewer: Marigold · 2008-11-10 20:29:16
I think that Pippin's feelings about how big and frightening the world
outside the Shire truly is, is just exactly how a hobbit would feel.
Most authors don't manage to capture that sense of just how out of
place the hobbits must have felt when they first left the safety of
home but foxrafer certainly does.

Pippin's characterisation is very realistically written in this, both
as an individual and as a hobbit in general, and I enjoyed this
drabble very much.

Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Nath · Races: Other Beings · ID: 314
Reviewer: Marigold · 2008-11-10 20:35:16
Spoilers!
Wonderfully creepy and written in a matter-of-fact way that suits the
character perfectly. Old Man Willow is evil and malicious, but at the
same time bereft of real emotion and Nath captures that very well.

A very original 'what if'!

Title: ...and the sound of a battered heart, beating · Author:
Lindelea · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 690
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-10 22:21:28
Spoilers!
In this drabble, Lindelea has cleverly woven a beautiful portrait of
the tensions and issues facing the inhabitants of the Shire following
the War of the Ring, as well as an insight into the grace of spirit
showed by Frodo's during the Scouring. The familiarity of the
relationship between Estella and Frodo and her puzzled questioning are
beautifully written, and the final sentiment provides a satisfying
response to both Estella and the reader. This is an inspirational and
resonant work – very well done!

Title: Some Seasons · Author: sophinisba solis · Races: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 199
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-10 22:21:29
I love this brief series of vignettes, set in post-Quest Bag End,
where Frodo, Sam and Rose are all set on taking good care of one
another. Each little vignette is connected to the others by the very
hobbity element of food and drink. It's lovely to not only see Rose
and Sam taking care of Frodo, but to see Frodo taking care of them as
well. This is a heartfelt and touching piece, and made me feel warm
all over.

Title: The Portrait · Author: agape4gondor · Races: Men: Pre-Ring War
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 288
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-10 22:21:33
Spoilers!
In this drabble, Agape has created a crisply characterised snapshot of
the Steward's sons, especially Boromir, whose restless energy,
impatience, wit and kindliness shine through. A charming insight into
one of the more functional moments of a somewhat dysfunctional family.
(And my own reaction – perhaps I'm mistaken! - is that that the
titular picture, a gift for their father, is of their mother Finduilas.)


Title: Fit for a King · Author: Imhiriel · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 217
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-10 22:21:37
Spoilers!
I love the quiet intimacy of friendship that Imhiriel creates here
between her three protagonists -- Aragorn, Eomer and Faramir -- which
makes Eomer's teasing in the punchline to the drabble seem very
credible. An amusing and well-drawn moment. Bravo!


Title: Pulling the Wool · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 95
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-10 22:21:41
Spoilers!
In these three linked drabbles, Elen Kortirion provides different
interpretations of the titular phrase in a clever interplay that moves
from light-hearted jest to tragic ending. Each individual drabble is
complete and effective in itself, but the final line is made all the
more powerful by what has gone before. Well done!


Title: Sour Milk · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 521
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-10 22:21:45
Spoilers!
This is an absolutely hilarious ficlet clearly written by a true
cat-lover (as I know the author to be). I love the way Linda Hoyland
has extrapolated from the dreadful picture that was the prompt (what
was the artist thinking?!?) to create a laugh-out-loud story. I
especially like the form of action taken by the cats and Aragorn's
initial response, as well as the cameo role given to one of the
author's wise cats. Simply delightful!


Title: Forfeit · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 401
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-10 22:21:49
Spoilers!
I love the nobility with which Branwyn invests Beregond in this
drabble, evidenced not just in the big events of the drabble but
through small gestures such as the care for his gear which she
describes. Beregond's response to the opportunity to escape justice is
convincingly of a piece with his actions in deserting his post to save
Faramir: a man who takes the right course, and accepts the
consequences unflinchingly. And his love for his son and desire to not
shame him further shines through. I note this was penned for a
[Characters You Have Never Written] challenge, and I hope this will
not be the last time Branwyn writes about Beregond. Bravo!


Title: The Roses of Imloth Melui · Author: Aervir · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 435
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-10 22:21:56
Spoilers!
Aervir has cleverly woven the motif of roses through each of the
drabbles in this series of ten. The trick is pulled off admirably,
never feeling forced in any of the individual drabbles as Aervir uses
these snapshots to tell the long and eventful life of Ioreth. Very
nicely done -- bravo!


Title: Epiphany · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 293
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-10 22:21:59
Spoilers!
I love the glimpse that Larner has given us here of the great changes
wrought by the Ring War, as seen by Elladan and Elrohir. The sense of
the familiar become unfamiliar, and of the sudden awareness of the
passing of time for those who are immortal is tangibly expressed. Very
nice work!


Title: Dead Steward's Gift · Author: stefaniab · Genres: Mystery · ID: 572
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-10 22:22:55
This AU is an intriguing blend of movie-verse and book-verse,
something that often does not turn out well. However, in this case,
the author has created a fascinating and suspenseful mystery and
explains some of the things that were neglected in the screenplay,
such as Denethor's use of the palantir.

I really like Faramir in this--I think he would make a fine detective,
the way he digs into this particular mystery! And the ending was very
logical.

And I got a chuckle out of the Epilogue in Cirri's POV!

Title: The Flute · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-10 22:23:42
Spoilers!
This is a beautiful little story, in which a special flute enables
Pippin to communicate with Frodo, far across the Sundering Sea. The
whole story has a sweetness to it, which is only enhanced if the
reader listens to it on the link provided by the author. That is the
way I first encountered this story, and the dreamlike soft voice of
Golden, in her gently accented words really will transport the
listener into a special place.

Title: The Elanor Bloom · Author: Claudia · Genres: Drama: Incomplete
· ID: 194
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-10 22:25:50
I really enjoy cross-cultural "getting acquainted" stories. This one,
detailing the journey from Bree to Rivendell, as the hobbits get
acquainted with the mysterious Strider, is very good indeed. I love
the portrayal of Strider's instant feelings of loyalty to Frodo, and
the show of determination and devotion from Frodo's friends. Although
there are only two chapters, I do hope that Claudia will update this
again. It's a very promising beginning.

Title: Where Shadows Lay No More · Author: Cathleen · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 358
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-10 22:26:26
Spoilers!
I love stories in which Boromir watches over his friends from beyond
the circles of Arda. This story is very touching, as the Steward's son
is a ghostly witness to Aragorn's coronation. I love the fact that
each member of the Fellowship is aware to one extent or another of his
presence, and most especially, I love the reactions of Merry and Pippin.

Cathleen did a very good job with this story.

Title: Wind of Change · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 47
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-10 22:27:05
I love the idea that storms would announce the various stages of this
particular prophecy's fulfillment--especially the birth of Eowyn!
Beautifully evocative language, and a skillful use of atmosphere!

Title: Not Quite Any Other Day · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 631
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-10 22:28:39
It's always fun to read a story that takes me back to those earlier
names on the Family Trees of Appendix C. Pearl's description of
Esmeralda's pensiveness at her brother's marriage and her subsequent
re-introduction to Saradoc Brandybuck, heir to the Master of Buckland,
is delightful. I love the easy and fond banter of brother and sister,
and her own taunting flirtation with Saradoc. A delightful look at the
beginning of the courtship of Merry's parents.

Title: Saruman of Many Colours · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 439
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2008-11-10 22:41:09
Seven well-crafted drabbles explore the evolution of Saruman from the
Istari who thought too highly of himself to the traitor who created
his own doom because of his hubris. A chilling examination of a true
waste of potential.

Title: I Ain't Got Nobody · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 568
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-11 01:54:04
Spoilers!
Elves are so often either exaggeratedly joyous or else exceptionally
solemn. In fanfic, this translates into pranksterism or moroseness
often enough. Ignoble Bard manages to take on that most serious of
matters, death (and reincarnation), and explode all expectations.
Glorfindel could be the victim of pranksters, but it's not as if he's
trying to be funny (or to get himself killed - it just happens).
Namo's magic reincarnation chamber has me imagining Woody Allen's
[Sleeper] and a very warped Dr. McCoy for some reason - it's a
combination I never thought I'd have to imagine, but it works
surprisingly well for this story.

I love Namo's impeccable reasoning against sending Glorfindel back out
to the perils of an ordinary (or extraordinary) day in Middle-earth
(or Valinor) using Glorfindel's own amazing list of ways to
accidentally die. Rationalization achieves a new high, here.

The soul-up-the-nose solution to the problem that death separates a
perfectly beautiful body from a fëa that needs it was wonderfully
irreverent. If anyone needs a good laugh, this story should do the trick!

Title: Bad Idea · Author: StarLight9 · Genres: Humor: Elven Lands ·
ID: 610
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-11 02:16:23
Spoilers!
[Perhaps Elves and Dwarves were not so different after all.] Along
with [bad idea], Starlight9's story twists and turns but always
returns to the refrain: maybe those Elves and Dwarves are far too
similar for their own good!

Legolas's sincere belief that Thranduil and Glóin can not only
reconcile but even become friends has everyone, including one prince,
a king, and an entire settlement of Elves, running scared and looking
for somewhere, anywhere to hide until Armageddon passes over. Gimli,
of course, gets a front row seat, despite his misgivings and the
reader spends much of the time cringing and laughing at what he has to
put up with.

Thranduil and Glóin end up paralleling each other perfectly - alike,
indeed, and as sons, so fathers. Quite amusing!

Title: Rivendell International Airport · Author: Primsong · Genres:
Humor: Elven Lands · ID: 345
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2008-11-11 02:38:38
Spoilers!
Dear Lord, I think I've been through Rivendell International - it
sounds like O'Hare!

Other readers have commented on it, but the fact that Primsong plays
this one straight, just inserts the Fellowship into an airport without
having anyone bat an eye, and let airport regulations take their
course, makes for grand entertainment. Everything from the loudspeaker
announcements ([This is a nonsmoking terminal. If smoking is an
integral part of your being, please follow the signs to the smoking
area to await your flight] and the all too appropriate [Flight # 3019
with service to Gondor has been delayed due to inclement weather]) to
adventures with metal-detectors, and the joys of arguing what
constitutes one item of checked baggage contributes to the harried
hilarity of the Fellowship having to make it through check-in.

The background flights and other little refer-backs to Middle-earth,
several of them transformed into commercialized slogans, are
priceless. [Lembas-on-a-stick] is particularly memorable.

All in all, a thoroughly enjoyable juxtaposition of modern day and
Middle-earth that gives a new meaning to the tale of the "epic" flight
home. If you need a laugh, give this a read.



Title: Autumn · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 489
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-11 06:46:43
Spoilers!
Reading this drabble reminded me of how the cowboys and Indians in the
westerns of my youth reacted to the encroaching niceties of
civilization on their former way of life. This precisely written
drabble depicts a swift moment during which Aragorn contemplates how
his life has changed since becoming king and husband. Which life is
better? Linda lets the reader decide.

Title: Stabat Mater · Author: iorhael · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 666
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-11 09:30:58
A very moving drabble. I'm sure Primula wound indeed weep if was able
to see how her son suffered.

Title: Shall We Dance? · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Steward's Family · ID: 93
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-11 14:36:52
Nuanced and insightful characterisations. I like how the inner
reflections of the characters is manifested outwardly (or no)t; how
they are mirrored in little details that often can only be seen by
shrewd observers; to see the contrast between inner/private individual
and public persona. The handling of the cast is done very well,
particularly the transitions between PoV-characters, or generally the
way the focus keeps shifting without making the plot arc lose cohesion.

Isabeau managed to imbue her self-described "fluffy" story with enough
depth that I'm not certain the label actually implies: She skilfully
explored some thought-provoking issues juxtaposed against the maybe
frivolous backdrop of a ball and therefore all the more effective.

As ever, it is lovely to see the close relationship between Imrahil
and his family (including his nephews); Lothíriel was not only lovely
but also insightful, compassionate and wise. But what I loved best was
the take on Denethor, which showed him as stern, yes, and stubborn,
but also as very human, strangely vulnerable in his loneliness; and it
was very moving how Lothíriel managed to make him reach out to her
almost against his will.

Title: Old Man Willow · Author: Nath · Races: Other Beings · ID: 314
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-11 14:55:07
A very unusual but strangely compelling premise. Very good handling of
PoV - the motive of the "protagonist" is conveyed clearly.
Particularly effective was the balance between a certain greed or
obsession with conquering everything, and the utter matter-of-factness
and lack of emotion of the narrative voice.

It was creepy to think about just how reasonable Old Man Willow's
strategies and plans were, and to contemplate the question who might
be more powerful, he as represention of nature, or Sauron, as
representation of something beyond the natural order of things.

The story also is a very good represention of the ambiguity of the
"nature of nature" (pun only half-intended), especially the nature of
forests in Tolkien's work - they can be good or bad or neutral, imbued
with self-awareness or not, actively intervening in the story or only
exude a certain presence etc.

Title: Black Memory · Author: mrkinch · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 603
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-11 15:11:15
Fascinating premise, executed very well, with excellent use of
language and grammar and density of prose. The build-up to the
unexpected climax of the drabble is very effective.

The point of the drabble is compelling and very insightful. The very
effect of negating all the points enumerated before the last line
naturally evoke them all the stronger, of course, and yet, they serve
equally well as intended in juxtaposing and therefore exposing the
final contrast.

The drabble has a driving rhythm (particularly in the repetition of
["black as..."]) that sucks in the readers immediately, together with
the curiosity in wondering what could be more memorable (and
potentially horrific) than the things Lúthien first begins listing.

Title: The Waker · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 287
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-11 15:25:25
Spoilers!
Uuuuh, that was chilling! And utterly fascinating. An excellent,
excellent drabble which fulfils the difficult challenge perfectly. The
language - sometimes even approximating poetry - is used with utmost
care and precision, doubly important here where the point of the
drabble was about lack of language.

Despite the vagueness and ambiguity in the descriptions, and the
open-endedness of the drabble - which I thought were very important to
preserve the mystery of this character - Nancy Brooke gave it enough
reality and character and awareness for the readers to see it taking
shape in what the words evoke, sometimes in the very sounds of the words.

Words like ["plop"], ["plunk"] and ["slish"] seem here not only as
background fillers and noise, but meaningful factors in evoking and
giving shape to a very unusual, amorphous figure.

Title: The Dark of Night · Author: Ellie · Genres: Horror · ID: 484
Reviewer: Fiondil · 2008-11-11 16:14:51
Something is attacking the elves of Imladris, swooping out of the
midnight sky, leaving them drained of blood and spirit. No one knows
what the creatures are and even the trees can only speak of the `dark
of night' to describe the attackers. To make matters worse, it seems
the attackers are very selective in their victims, a fact that may
spell both doom and salvation for the elves as they battle against an
enemy not seen in two ages. Ellie weaves a masterful plot of darkness
and terror as Elrond seeks answers to combatting the encroaching
menace, unaware that the attacks are motivated by revenge for a deed
done by his own father, Earendil.

For anyone who enjoys reading stories that keep you on the edge of
your seat wondering what will happen next, this is definitely a must-read.

Title: Seeking the Sun · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men · ID: 488
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-11 17:38:35
Spoilers!
This story packs a wallop, particularly in the first few paragraphs.
"Seeking the Sun" presents Aragorn's Coronation from the point of view
of a woman left destitute and homeless during the Siege of MInas
Tirith. It's mostly a character piece, as the woman has an
understandable axe to grind with the incoming administration.
Aragorn's reaction is immediate, personal, and well in keeping with
Tolkien canon and Linda's sizeable array of Aragorn stories.

That the king might involve himself in the plight of a single
individual might seem remote from our day. However, in the Middle Ages
in Western Europe, such an incident was hardly extraordinary. This
vignette gives us a glimpse of the type of monarch we want Aragorn to be.


Title: Messengers from the West · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Genres:
Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 98
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-11 19:01:18
This is a very fun interlude that left me grinning in delight. It's
wonderful to think that during his long wandering, Aragorn might have
gotten the occasional touch of home. A clever premise, and I could
feel Aragorn's elation.

Title: Apart · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 551
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-11 19:03:24
Very nice: I liked the parallel thoughts in the beginning, the avid
determination that they would each take responsibility for their own
actions and seek redress. It seemed very fitting for their characters.

The idea that these two have areas of their friendship that cannot
(yet) bear full disclosure is realistic, and I thought it
well-explored here. I have long-lasting friendships like that too,
where you love and respect one another, but also realize that there
are certain subjects best left at "agreeing to disagree".

Title: Moonset over Gondor · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 652
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-11 19:04:21
This is a lovely concept that Raksha explores: Faramir reflecting upon
past and present, and (characteristically) thinking of those who
cannot enjoy the freedom and beauty and hope that he can. I liked the
quiet way that his companion is gradually introduced, and the gentle
but certain reassurance that is offered. Faramir's response to this -
realignment from subtle mourning to looking forward to the future -
underscores the deep bond between these two, and felt wholly
appropriate to me.

I thought the author employed a very nice use of more formal language,
too; natural and not stilted, and fitting for the serious subject.

Title: The Roses of Imloth Melui · Author: Aervir · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 435
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-11 19:04:38
This series is a fascinating take on a one-dimensional minor character
in the Houses of Healing. I enjoyed it all the more, I think, because
Aervir takes Ioreth on a circuitous route to her scenes in LotR (which
are not even directly mentioned), and gives her some alternate touches
of characterization than what many might have done.

The result is a three-dimensional portrait of a hard-working woman,
with ups and downs and many struggles, and more than a passing
acquaintance with death even from her childhood - in short, a
realistic and interesting individual. I enjoyed how unobtrusively the
rose theme was worked into each drabble, and how well each flowed to
the next even when large gaps in time occurred.

Title: Vengeance's Folly · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Noldor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 718
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-11 19:48:07
Spoilers!
An evocative portrait of the sons of Feanor at a low point in their
fortunes. Excellent descriptions and good use of that lovely line by
Tolkien, here spoken by Maglor.

Title: Feelings of Superiority · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 362
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-11 21:49:13
This series shines for showing perspectives not often seen in
Tolkienfic. In particular--being partial to Elves myself--I really
enjoyed those from the Vanyarin and Avarin perspectives. Especially
the former are often mocked by fans for their seeming frivolity when
compared to the Noldor and Teleri; Gwynnyd does well in showing how
they find meaning in their existence.

Title: Silver Blossoms Blown · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 646
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-11 22:07:00
Spoilers!
This short piece does a wonderful job of capturing Varda's voice, her
wonder in her first encounter with the Elves, and has touches of
Valarin mysticism that make it a delight--I would love to see this
expanded to find out more about Varda's sensing of aspect and
foresight. But my favorite thing about this story is how Ignoble Bard
shows Varda's almost giddy enthusiasm. In Monday-morning
quarterbacking the mistakes the Valar made where the Elves were
concerned, it is easy to forget this most basic love that underlay
most of their decisions.

Title: Incarnation · Author: Gandalfs apprentice · Genres: Humor:
Drabbles · ID: 242
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-11 22:16:07
Oh dear, this was terribly funny! Gandalfs apprentice shows both a
mastery of humor and the drabble form with this piece ... and it
certainly answered some questions I had always had about incarnation
and its effects on Ainur! Very nicely done and highly recommended!

Title: Creation Myths · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: General
Drabbles · ID: 300
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-11 22:22:22
Spoilers!
The premise of this drabble is itself insightful: a comparison of Ea
and the Silmarils. While my interpretation of Feanor and the Silmarils
is not in complete agreement with Tanaqui's, I really enjoyed the way
that this pair of drabbles underscored the very important role of
creation in Tolkien's works. Nicely done!

Title: An Elf-lord Revealed · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 406
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-11 22:49:56
Spoilers!
Glorfindel is a fascinating character, and this series deftly explores
many aspects of what makes him so. First Age fan that I am, my
favorite was the first, but the myriad ways that someone so "minor" as
Glorfindel (minor enough to be written out of PJ's movies, at least!)
touched so many lives across the history of Middle-earth is skillfully
presented in this series.

Title: Maglor's Song · Author: Robinka · Genres: Poetry: Drama · ID: 398
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-11 22:54:21
Spoilers!
My favorite ideas in Robinka's poem are that Maglor's might is
incapable of what is most desired: to bring peace. I also like the
idea that Maglor's voice can still be heard but only by those who
listen for it and that it pleas to remember his mistakes. Nicely done!

Title: Wild Swan · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 328
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-11 23:01:37
I suppose I can be forgiven for blathering on and breaking into
high-pitched squees when trying to review this particular drabble
series: Tanaqui has managed to smoothly link together over a thousand
words on my favorite LotR character.

Nonetheless, I'll attempt some sort of dignified commentary...

Tanaqui's series flows so naturally and magnificently, too; one would
think that each drabble was created with a set story arc and ending in
mind, instead of scattered over most of a year's time and growing out
of a variety of prompts. Through it all, Imrahil's character remains
true to his core being but is still allowed to develop with maturity,
into the beloved warrior and prince from the books.

The snapshots encompass clear and well-defined moments, every one of
them telling a delightful (or moving, or chilling, or uplifting, etc.)
story complete with excellently chosen "chapter" titles. The
descriptions envelop me, bringing the scenes to shimmering life.
Somehow, the author's careful and precise word choices also leave room
for wonderful bits of dialogue and secondary character development,
all in lovely and appropriate language. The overall title complements
the entire series and fits my image of the Prince of Dol Amroth perfectly.

I admit, I think my favorite is the final installment: the description
of Imrahil breaking into that joyful smile is etched indelibly in my
mind, but I fall in love with it again with every rereading...

*squee!*

Title: Journeys of Vása · Author: Dawn Felagund · Races: Elves:
Incomplete · ID: 140
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-12 00:08:29
Spoilers!
How wonderful it is to look at the first rising of the Sun over Arda
from such divergent points of view, including this last one by a
survivor of Fingolfin. Myth, artificer, self-professed
bureaucrat--each has a different tale to tell, all of them equally
valid in the end.

The quality of the telling, particularly in the original, is
marvelously lyrical and poetic, truly in keeping with the mythical
nature of that particular telling. Alas for Tilion, who saw the object
of his devotion raped by Melkor and who could not protect her--or the
world afterwards--from that evil.

Marvelous series.

Title: The Stranger · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 560
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-12 06:30:38
Spoilers!
A melancholy, fittingly haunting account of Maglor's last moments this
side of the Sundering Sea, and his homecoming. The use of the
viewpoint of the mortal child is a master-stroke, with effective
contrast of the boy's youthful innocence and the lost Elf's
unimaginable age and weariness.

Title: Dance of the Deer and Mûmak · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 559
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-12 06:53:47
Spoilers!
One of the best Legolas/Gimli friendship stories I have read; with an
original and delightful framework for showing off the differences
between them - how they dance. Dancing is hard to write; but Nieriel
Raina does it very well; enabling me to see the Elves leaping
gracefully and barefoot. Gimli's dance is a revelation; and entirely
credible, as he embodies the power and strength of his people and
himself, graceful in a more earthbound fashion than his Elven hosts,
but no less entrancing.

Title: If I Had One Wish · Author: Ellie · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Finwe · ID: 658
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-12 10:01:17
Reality confronted with the wish that Indis of the Vanyar reveals in
this short, poignant and well written story. Great writing!

Title: Chance Encounter · Author: Telcontar Rulz · Times: Late Third
Age · ID: 203
Reviewer: Larner · 2008-11-12 11:02:45
Spoilers!
An interesting crossover in which there is not only a Tenth Walker,
but an eleventh as well!

The initial chapters particularly are well done as we welcome Banial
to the Fellowship and he and Frodo end up captured by orcs on
Caradhras. After a time a good part of it feels a bit rushed, and some
elements seem odd, such as Legolas seeing Sauron in the Palantir after
he's been cast down; but it manages to keep the attention.

Title: Kementari · Author: Marta · Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 99
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-12 17:21:18
Very evocative writing; the melancholy mood is reflected well in the
descriptions and in Yavanna's somewhat languid musings and motions. I
liked the way Yavanna's sadness expressed itself in her creations. The
juxtaposition between her memories of splendour and lushness
contrasted with the present dreary reality was very effective.

The idea that she might have been jealous of the other Valar because
their creations are still alive and they are praised for them struck
me as a fascinating and believable concept.

Title: GOBLINS: The Herald's Summons · Author: Fiondil · Times: First
Age and Prior · ID: 53
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-12 17:21:31
Very good scene-setting; I was intrigued by the mundane details that
bring a day during the War of Wrath really to life in the complexity
that is sometimes hard to imagine from the little that is written in
canon.

I found Arafinwë's thoughts and feelings about his daughter and his
son-in-law amusing, but also understandable and touching.

I liked that the philosophical and moral questions are touched upon
only lightly, which I thought gave them resonance beyond the shortness
of the story.

Title: The Last Stand · Author: Rhapsody · Times: First Age and Prior
· ID: 82
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-12 17:21:42
The battle and its various thrusts, strategies, pauses etc. is evoked
very clearly, the details of various scenes are well-chosen. I like
the balance the narrators show between necessary detachment in the
heat of battle, and the emotions and distracted musings that come
through regardless.

Title: Surprise · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age and Prior ·
ID: 131
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-12 17:21:51
A fascinating gap-filler. Great characterisations, especially in the
PoV-character. Aulë's workshop and the diverse duties and workings of
Mahtan it are presented very clearly.

I liked how the story is infused with the ambiguity Mahtan felt
regarding the joys and duties of fatherhood versus his ambitions
regarding his chosen profession.

The forebodings and visions Mahtan experiences are woven very well
into the narrative; in fact, they come up so seamlessly that it is
slightly unsettling, which I found very effective considering their
content.

Title: The Queen's Gift · Author: Queen Galadriel · Races: Elves:
Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 697
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-12 22:53:40
Spoilers!
In this piece, Queen Galadriel has created a lovely, lyrical triple
drabble in which Arwen contemplates he Ringbearer and his eventual
fate and, master weaver that she is, draws together the threads of
many lives to reach understanding. A well-written and convincing look
at what Arwen might have been thinking as she handed over that white
jewel to Frodo. Well done!


Title: A Meeting in the Tower Hills · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 374
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-12 22:53:56
Spoilers!
Imhiriel has a real gift for picking little-explored corners of canon
which were sketched only briefly by Tolkien and imbuing them with life
and wit. This drabble provides a highly amusing snapshot of the
reunion of two-long sundered tribes that nevertheless has a ring of
realism in the awkwardness and suspicion that is the basis for the
humour that culminates in a final line raises a chuckle. Nicely done!

Title: Sunset Gates · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles
· ID: 342
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-12 22:54:06
Spoilers!
Ignoble Bard has created a drabble with an amusing and clever twist in
the final line that makes the reader re-read and reconsider what has
been said earlier and chuckle in amusement. Although set in the modern
world, the opening lines have all the lyricism of Tolkien's world,
making the final reveal all the more surprising. Witty and charming –
well done!

Title: Loudwater · Author: Adaneth · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 63
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-12 22:54:15
Spoilers!
Adaneth has given voice to the wordless in this drabble about the
Bruinen. The word picture that has been drawn in this prose poem,
using alliteration, onomatopoeia and poetic metre evokes the river in
all its stages and moods. The author's love of words, and her
undoubted skill with them, dazzles the reader as clearly as sunlight
flashing off the ripples of the Loudwater she describes. Beautifully
done – bravissima!

Title: Autumn · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 489
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-12 22:54:23
Spoilers!
Linda Hoyland has created a charming piece in which Aragorn reflects
on his change in circumstances following the War of the Ring – on what
he misses and what he doesn't, what he has lost and what he has
gained. The contrasts are beautifully expressed in vivid language .
Very nicely done – bravo!

Title: My Precious · Author: SheBit · Genres: Romance: Drabbles · ID: 14
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-12 22:54:31
Spoilers!
This is a chilling, creepy and yet completely psychologically
convincing drabble about lust, obsession and contempt. SheBit
certainly achieves her goal of taking us right inside the head of
Grima Wormtongue and shows us what a dark and nasty place it is. Quite
brilliantly unpleasant and unnerving – well done!


Title: A New Day · Author: Oshun · Genres: Longer Works · ID: 35
Reviewer: Ignoble Bard · 2008-11-13 00:21:05
The continuation of the Findekano/Maitimo relationship finds our
heroes picking up the pieces after Maitimo's imprisonment and torture
at the hands of Morgoth. Despite their angry parting and the events
following, Maitimo awakes to find Findekano by his side, their bond as
strong as ever. Though both characters have been changed profoundly by
their experience and are having to adjust to a new world of sun and
moon, a world where Sindarin and Noldor are each learning the ways of
the other, the bond between the two lovers is as strong as ever. Not
that there aren't still obstacles to be overcome, big ones, but that
we know that Maitimo and Findekano will face them together.

Oshun has created one of the great fandom romances with her stories of
these two Silmarillion heroes. She pulls off the difficult task of
framing their relationship within the known events, balancing her
exquisite characterizations with the social and political machinations
that surround the characters. In the course of the story, Maitimo must
come to a decision concerning the leadership role that has been thrust
upon him with his father's death, deal with his emotionally wounded
siblings, and come to grips with his memories of Angband and his own
physical and emotional scars. Through it all, Findekano is there to
encourage, cajole, and prod him as needed, proving that love can
conquer all. Fleshing out Tolkien's portrayal of these two is Oshun's
gift, and compelling those of us who still look askance at the
Silmarillion to embrace these characters and take them into our hearts
is her talent.

Findekano is one of the truly great characters of fanfiction, gallant,
loyal, intelligent, perceptive, and madly in love with his beautiful
cousin. So inspiring is his character that I was moved last year to
write a poem about him. I will not make the author or other reviewers
suffer from my feeble attempts this year but I will say that each of
Oshun's stories pulls me further into the world of Findekano and
Maitimo. From their first kiss to their reunion upon the shores of
Lake Mithrim, from their earliest confessions of love to feeling their
way through the "new day" of an unfamiliar new world, I have enjoyed
seeing how far they have come and will be journeying with them on
their destiny-filled trek into the future.


Title: Trouble at Bag End · Author: Angiet · Races: Hobbits: Childhood
· ID: 728
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-13 00:22:45
What a lovely, sweet, loving story! I love the playing peek a boo, the
care given throughout and the ending! I wonder if Aragorn would
remember this, fifty years later, at the Prancing Pony. :) What a
great gift for them both to share this time together.

Title: The Tower Hills · Author: DrummerWench · Genres: Drama: Final
Partings · ID: 608
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-13 00:30:41
A sweet story of friendship and care given for almost the last time in
Middle-earth and this time Frodo being the care-giver and Sam the one
comforted by his beloved master's touch and presence. There is not
much time for them to be together on Middle-earth, but each new memory
would be a treasure for them both. Thank you for adding another.

Title: Harmony · Author: Elwen · Races: Hobbits · ID: 195
Reviewer: Antane · 2008-11-13 02:29:40
Spoilers!
An interesting story. I love that Elrond was able to hear Frodo's song
and love that he was able to weave it into the gem Arwen gifted the
troubled Ring-bearer with. I've wondered whether the Vala, Nienna and
Este, in particular would be involved in Frodo's healing and this
brings it out. He would be in need of both. I thought it was
interesting that he was asked if he wished for healing and he said
yes. Interesting also that pride was what he needed to let go in able
to heal and forgiveness of self.

Hey guys,

Here is your weekly admin post  this week we're focusing on the poems
that have been entered in this year's awards. If one of the things you
love about Tolkien is the poems and songs, then our 22 entries in four
poetry categories are for you. While the number of poems may be small,
the works themselves can, like beautifully-crafted and polished jewels,
have a huge impact. So if you have a poetic bent, this list will help
you find the kind of stories you'd like to review.

For the list of pieces in this announcement I've used the story type
"Poetry". Finding the list of poems is pretty straightforward. To do this

1. Log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/
2. Click the "Stories" link at the top of the page.
3. Click the "Show Filter" link.
4. Click the "Clear All Filters" button if you've used the filter before
this session.
5. Select "Poetry" from the "Story Type" filter (at the top) OR "Genres:
Poetry" from the "Main Category" filter (the third filter down).
6. Click the "Display selected nominations" button.

This will pull up all of the nominated pieces that are poems.

******************************

Here are the poems competing in this year's competition .

Aranel Took
---(469) Shire
---(471) Rebirth
Armariel
---(269) Elrond's Farewell
---(428) The Gardener Speaks
---(429) The Bridge
---(458) Answers
ConnieMarie
---(396) Bearer of the Ring
Dreamflower
---(679) 25 Rethe, S.R. 1422: The Three Travellers Remember
Ford of Bruinen
---(661) I Married for Love
Larner
---(618) By Ship or Grave
---(645) The Ring That Sauron Forged
Lindelea
---(301) Three Songs
pandemonium_213
---(50) Philosophia to Philomythus and Misomythus
Phyncke
---(564) Yrch Song
Primsong
---(597) Weathertop
---(720) Merry on the Pelennor Fields
Princess Artemis
---(416) Temptation
Queen Galadriel
---(402) Call of the Dream
rhyselle
---(501) The Search
Robinka
---(398) Maglor's Song
Savageseraph
---(583) Galadriel Remembers
White Gull
---(632) Boromir at the Bat

To find more information about any of these pieces, just do the following

1. Log in to www.mefawards.net/MEFA2008/
2. Click the "Stories" link at the top of the web page.
3. Type the Story ID followed by the "#" sign into the search bar, and
click the "Search" button.

For instance, searching for "597#" will bring up story #597, Weathertop
by Primsong.

Also, although we have just four poetry categories  General, Hobbits,
Drama and Late Third Age  this year the authors of these poems thought
their works could compete in a wider range of categories. These were:

---Genres: Drama
---Genres: Horror
---Genres: Humor
---Genres: Mystery
---Genres: Non-Fiction
---Genres: Romance
---Races: Cross-Cultural
---Races: Elves
---Races: Hobbits
---Races: Men
---Races: Other Beings
---Races: Villains
---Times: First Age and Prior
---Times: Fourth Age and Beyond
---Times: Late Third Age
---Times: Modern Times
---Times: Multi-Age
---Times: Second Age

Happy reading!

Tanaqui
(MEFA Tech Support)

P.S. - If you noticed a mistake in this post, please email about it so I
can check whether a mistake has been made and, if necessary, correct my
announcement. You can reach me privately at
techsupport(.at.)mefawards(.dot.)net. Thanks!

Title: Supporting Acts · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 436
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-13 05:05:51
Spoilers!
Poor Faramir!It seems that dealing with tradesmen was as frustrating
then as now! Trust our Steward to find a wise solution! An enjoyable
set of drabbles.

Title: Where Shadows Lay No More · Author: Cathleen · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 358
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-13 06:22:05
Spoilers!
a moving story which seems very plausible that Boromir would find a
way to say farewell and see the coronation in which his brother was
honoured and the Hobbits were seen as safe and well. A
Delightful,touching story.

Title: Duty, Honour, Country · Author: Rhapsody · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 81
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-13 06:25:31
Spoilers!
A moving and interesting take on Maglor's dreadful oath that ruined
all his family. Sometimes dreadful deeds can spring from good motives
which is always frightening even today.Very thought provoking.

Title: Five Hair Care Tips for Rohirrim · Author: EdorasLass · Genres:
Humor · ID: 71
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-13 08:24:58
Spoilers!
Just too, too funny. Do NOT read this while trying to snack or drink;
things will just get messy. Edoras Lass knows how to bring the humor
in the Rohirrim's care of the flaxen tresses that JRRT described so
accurately. I personally reread this gem frequently; and I always lose
it when I get to the paragraph describing the many different types of
sparkly clips - [decapitated orc] and [bunny rabbits] indeed!

Title: Steward's Trumpets · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times:
Late Third Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 400
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-13 08:58:34
Beautifully and very effectively written. The drabble begins with the
picture of ruins and lifelessness, and you almost feel a pall of dust
and silence and sadness descending over Faramir as you read.

And then the melancholy is lifted with the unexpected discovery of
green freshness and defiant life reclaiming its place. The symbolism
of the plants, their shapes and their names are particularly poignant:
they represent both a new beginning while at the same time embracing -
literally - the old memories. And it is as if the last words leave a
lingering echo - as you are reminded of the glory and pride of the
line (in both film and book): ["the clear ringing of silver trumpets"].

I like it that it seems as if Faramir was drawn to the place without
conscious volition, as if he was *meant* to come and see these signs
of renewal. And judging from the first half of the drabble, it seems
he very much needed them, as he seems adrift and strangely bereft,
detached from the renewal that is going on around him.

Title: Forfeit · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 401
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-13 09:04:44
Interesting take on Beregond's long time awaiting judgement. I can
well imagine well-meaning friends being tempted to help him in this
way, and if so, that Beregond would react just in the way he did.

The way the drabble is written at the beginning - with short lines of
brisk, matter-of-fact dialogue which gives nothing away of how
Beregond might feel inwardly, nor how tempted he might actually be
considering some of the understandable arguments - contributes much to
the emotional punch of the last line: While it still contains no inner
insight, it is nevertheless all too revealing of his inner turmoil.

Title: Playing with Fire · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 21
Reviewer: Sivan Shemesh · 2008-11-13 15:50:21
Spoilers!
Good to know that Eldarion wouldn't play with the fire, and i believed
that the tough lesson did him good, even if it hurts him. Though Poor
Aragorn, and yet, i'm glad that he told Arwen about his own lesson.

I love the last line.

Jael is the premier writer of Thranduil fanfiction and this
continuance of [The Rose in the Fisted Glove] is one of the best in
this writer’s oeuvre. In this previous story we found Thranduil
preparing for the Battle of the Last Alliance with his trusty valet
Galion offering him comfort on the eve of combat. While Thranduil’s
concerns at that time were more for the new bride he had left behind
than the looming battle, he nevertheless bravely leads his troops into
the fray as their prince but emerges as their king.

With two thirds of his men killed and the kingship thrust upon him in
the most traumatic way possible, through the death of his father
Oropher, Thranduil finds Galion and his men looking to him for answers
he is not certain he has.

[Nightfall] opens at this most significant turning point, with
Thranduil having to suppress his grief for the sake of his people,
while at the same time demonstrating to the Noldor the mettle of the
Wood Elves, who are now held in low esteem by them due to Oropher’s
ill-fated charge.
With two thirds of the Mirkwood troops killed and the morale of his
remaining men severely depleted, Thranduil marshals his wounded spirit
and hatches a plan that will result in either victory or suicide.
Determined, proud, brave, and perhaps a bit mad, Thranduil leads a
small band of Wood Elves behind enemy lines for one final, desperate
gambit.

The beauty of Jael’s writing is that Thranduil becomes a living,
breathing, flawed yet fascinating character who leaps off the screen
the way the best characters do from classic books. With each story we
watch as another chapter of his life unfolds, giving us insight into
the character Tolkien began but did not flesh out as elegantly, or as
satisfyingly, as Jael is able to achieve.


Title: No Regrets · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 490
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 08:03:58
this is a very, very nice ficlet. I do not think Faramir would have
been all that happy being Steward. He probably didn't feel like he
could do it justice. I do not think it would really have been in his
nature. He now has a wonderful wife, and I think he loves being
steward to his king, his good friend, and his brother. That beautiful
field of flowers represents to me the fact that the evil, fearful
times they had experienced with the war of the ring was now completely
past, well hopefully, signifying a beautiful new beginning for them
all. Yes, I think Faramir was very happy where he was at in life,the
friend and steward of the king. There is nothing like a beuatiful
field of flowers to cheer one's moods, heart and it's very relaxing. I
liked this story very very much.

Title: An Elf-lord Revealed · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 406
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-14 09:40:19
What I liked most about the series is that the various drabbles
highlighted Glorfindel's unstinting courage and yet there is never a
hint of recklessness or arrogance in it. Instead there is focus,
wisdom, humility, and compassion. He is not only the warrior, but also
a leader, and an advisor in public and private matters alike.

The interactions with the many different characters that touched his
life are well-written and poignant.

My favourite drabble was ["Comparing Notes"] - I liked the dry humour,
and the picture of Glorfindel observing the golden flowers that are an
emblem of his house.

Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-14 09:41:20
Spoilers!
Beautiful, elegiac prose; I particularly appreciated the very
effective use of word order to give the drabble a special tone. The
metaphor of the tree which is used so consistently and in such a rich,
creative manner is particularly poignant and meaningful, considering
Gondor's own White Tree. I especially loved the idea of the demanding
environment of the "tree" due to its proximity to Mordor, in contrast,
according to Denethor, to the safe shelter in Rivendell's garden: the
complaint mixed with the pride at overcoming such odds, and the
foreboding that in the end, it will not be enough to stave of failure.

The last line gives rise to speculation about how much exactly
Denethor knew - or has learned by now - about the heirs of Isildur, if
he knows about "Thorongil" in particular, what his motives might be to
still keep his silence etc.

Denethor's character comes through clearly in a very indirect way,
which seems to fit with his difficult, complex personality.

Title: Supporting Acts · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 436
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-14 09:42:07
Very engaging slice-of-life drabble series. The original characters
come fully alive; each individual and three-dimensional.

The technical aspects are conveyed very knowledgeably, and I
particularly liked that they were woven into the narrative subtly,
avoiding an infodump. Good use of the drabble format in judiciously
choosing gaps and trusting the reader's ability to read between the lines.

Title: Home is where the heart is · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Romance: Drabbles · ID: 505
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 10:57:31
Arwen had changed one life for another. Not just becoming mortal to
live her life with the one she loved, but also leaving the comfort and
love she had always had living in Lothlorien. That place was ethereal,
beautiful, serene and had a magical charm to it, as did her home in
Imladlris. There she had had her father and brothers. She had loved
and adored her Elven family, but Aragorn had captured her heart and
her love. He led her to another place of love and beauty, himself.
Exchanging one life for another cannot be easy, but I am sure Aragorn
tried to make it as easy a one as he could. He also was making another
beginning which was huge for him, too. They were each other's rock. To
Arwen, Aragorn was her home. Nothing else really mattered. Have you
ever heard the song The Dance by Garth Brooks? This makes me think of
that. The song was about taking chances in love and life so as not to
regret that possibility of losing that and never getting that chance,
again. The lady in the song had died, but he was basically saying that
it was better to have lived with her and loved her, even if he lost
her, than not to have ever been with his love at all. It's one of my
very favorite country songs. This was a wonderful drabble, Linda
You're the greatest!

Title: Hide the Knives · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Humor: Gondor
· ID: 485
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 12:07:56
Oh, NiRi, I just can\\\'t imagine Arwen being so angry, even in
childbirth , to threaten to get rid of his manhood, shall we say? I
think that would have been so funny to see! Of, course we all have
heard of things like that before, but Arwen? I could just see Aragorn
running from her in terror, and protecting himself. The look on his
face would have been priceless! What have you done to me, it is all
your fault! she probably was screaming. Having all the knives from
their quarters removed, huh? He really was scared!! But he knew she
would calm down eventually, just not when. She knew it wasn\\\'t
anyone\\\'s fault, just a sweet baby that came out of their love. That
was a sweet, touching moment they had with the baby, there. This was
very, very good. I liked it very much! NiRi

Title: The Water's Song · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 707
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 13:46:11
Hey NiRi, this story is very good. I think it is great. I really hate
the whole idea of sea-longing, though. I makes me very sad and a
little angry. It must have been hard on Elves in general; leaving and
leaving those you love behind. Legolas was so small and innocent when
he first heard the song of the waters. To be able to foresee the
future must have been both a gift and a curse to her. A gift such as
that would always be a blessing simply because it was an Elven gift.
And a curse if the outcome of your foresight is painful and hurtful.
But to know you will lose your son to the sea one day and that you
yourself will die long before that time has got to be exceptionally
hard. It was averry touching that when Thranduil found out about
Legolas' future, he told his never-ending love for him. And the fact
that no matter what he did or went he would always be loved
unconditionally. I think that really helped Legolas down the road
remembering that talk and realizing that he would alway be love by his
father and friends. But I think his love for his friends was a little
stronger than his sea-longing. He fought alongside them during the War
of the Ring and wouldn't leave until his good friend and brother was
gone. He was a very honorable being. It sas interesting that when
first heard the song as a child it was in a small stream and when he
actually felt the longing so strongly, he was near the ocean.
Interesting. This story was really great, NiRi. I like it Pam

Title: A Large Bold Hand · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 10
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 16:17:47
This is really a nice little drabble. So, Ori the Dwarf could write
well in Elvish, and could write the Elvish characters very quickly,
and often did in later life. That is an interesting idea; to have had
Elrohir be his teacher in writing the Elvish language. (Or at least I
am assuming that is what you mean). Obviously it would have taken a
great deal of time to learn it, so he must have been there quite a
while, or often, at least. You would not think a Dwarf would be that
interested in something like that. You might say he was even a bit
romantic talking about the writing as beautiful and flowing, like
rippling water. Ori obivously never did say where he had learned it
from or who taught him. And it also seemed he had an interest in his
people's history. He was a very interesting Dwarf. This was a very
nice Drabble, Jay. I like it! Pam

Title: This crown of stars · Author: Fawsley · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 586
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-14 23:35:43
Spoilers!
Talk about Aragorn angst, Fawsley captures a lonely Strider,
contemplating his past and future. The language is so arresting I had
to make sure that this wasn't a poem. I recommend this to all who
believe that Strider did have his moments of doubt and pain.

Title: Nightfall · Author: Jael · Times: Second and Early Third Age ·
ID: 87
Reviewer: Ignoble Bard · 2008-11-14 02:01:01
Jael is the premier writer of Thranduil fanfiction and this
continuance of [The Rose in the Fisted Glove] is one of the best in
this writer’s oeuvre. In this previous story we found Thranduil
preparing for the Battle of the Last Alliance with his trusty valet
Galion offering him comfort on the eve of combat. While Thranduil’s
concerns at that time were more for the new bride he had left behind
than the looming battle, he nevertheless bravely leads his troops into
the fray as their prince but emerges as their king.

With two thirds of his men killed and the kingship thrust upon him in
the most traumatic way possible, through the death of his father
Oropher, Thranduil finds Galion and his men looking to him for answers
he is not certain he has.

[Nightfall] opens at this most significant turning point, with
Thranduil having to suppress his grief for the sake of his people,
while at the same time demonstrating to the Noldor the mettle of the
Wood Elves, who are now held in low esteem by them due to Oropher’s
ill-fated charge.
With two thirds of the Mirkwood troops killed and the morale of his
remaining men severely depleted, Thranduil marshals his wounded spirit
and hatches a plan that will result in either victory or suicide.
Determined, proud, brave, and perhaps a bit mad, Thranduil leads a
small band of Wood Elves behind enemy lines for one final, desperate
gambit.

The beauty of Jael’s writing is that Thranduil becomes a living,
breathing, flawed yet fascinating character who leaps off the screen
the way the best characters do from classic books. With each story we
watch as another chapter of his life unfolds, giving us insight into
the character Tolkien began but did not flesh out as elegantly, or as
satisfyingly, as Jael is able to achieve.


Title: No Regrets · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 490
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 08:03:58
this is a very, very nice ficlet. I do not think Faramir would have
been all that happy being Steward. He probably didn't feel like he
could do it justice. I do not think it would really have been in his
nature. He now has a wonderful wife, and I think he loves being
steward to his king, his good friend, and his brother. That beautiful
field of flowers represents to me the fact that the evil, fearful
times they had experienced with the war of the ring was now completely
past, well hopefully, signifying a beautiful new beginning for them
all. Yes, I think Faramir was very happy where he was at in life,the
friend and steward of the king. There is nothing like a beuatiful
field of flowers to cheer one's moods, heart and it's very relaxing. I
liked this story very very much.

Title: An Elf-lord Revealed · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 406
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-14 09:40:19
What I liked most about the series is that the various drabbles
highlighted Glorfindel's unstinting courage and yet there is never a
hint of recklessness or arrogance in it. Instead there is focus,
wisdom, humility, and compassion. He is not only the warrior, but also
a leader, and an advisor in public and private matters alike.

The interactions with the many different characters that touched his
life are well-written and poignant.

My favourite drabble was ["Comparing Notes"] - I liked the dry humour,
and the picture of Glorfindel observing the golden flowers that are an
emblem of his house.

Title: Tree of Knowledge · Author: Nancy Brooke · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 172
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-14 09:41:20
Spoilers!
Beautiful, elegiac prose; I particularly appreciated the very
effective use of word order to give the drabble a special tone. The
metaphor of the tree which is used so consistently and in such a rich,
creative manner is particularly poignant and meaningful, considering
Gondor's own White Tree. I especially loved the idea of the demanding
environment of the "tree" due to its proximity to Mordor, in contrast,
according to Denethor, to the safe shelter in Rivendell's garden: the
complaint mixed with the pride at overcoming such odds, and the
foreboding that in the end, it will not be enough to stave of failure.

The last line gives rise to speculation about how much exactly
Denethor knew - or has learned by now - about the heirs of Isildur, if
he knows about "Thorongil" in particular, what his motives might be to
still keep his silence etc.

Denethor's character comes through clearly in a very indirect way,
which seems to fit with his difficult, complex personality.

Title: Supporting Acts · Author: Tanaqui · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 436
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-14 09:42:07
Very engaging slice-of-life drabble series. The original characters
come fully alive; each individual and three-dimensional.

The technical aspects are conveyed very knowledgeably, and I
particularly liked that they were woven into the narrative subtly,
avoiding an infodump. Good use of the drabble format in judiciously
choosing gaps and trusting the reader's ability to read between the lines.

Title: Home is where the heart is · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Romance: Drabbles · ID: 505
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 10:57:31
Arwen had changed one life for another. Not just becoming mortal to
live her life with the one she loved, but also leaving the comfort and
love she had always had living in Lothlorien. That place was ethereal,
beautiful, serene and had a magical charm to it, as did her home in
Imladlris. There she had had her father and brothers. She had loved
and adored her Elven family, but Aragorn had captured her heart and
her love. He led her to another place of love and beauty, himself.
Exchanging one life for another cannot be easy, but I am sure Aragorn
tried to make it as easy a one as he could. He also was making another
beginning which was huge for him, too. They were each other's rock. To
Arwen, Aragorn was her home. Nothing else really mattered. Have you
ever heard the song The Dance by Garth Brooks? This makes me think of
that. The song was about taking chances in love and life so as not to
regret that possibility of losing that and never getting that chance,
again. The lady in the song had died, but he was basically saying that
it was better to have lived with her and loved her, even if he lost
her, than not to have ever been with his love at all. It's one of my
very favorite country songs. This was a wonderful drabble, Linda
You're the greatest!

Title: Hide the Knives · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Humor: Gondor
· ID: 485
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 12:07:56
Oh, NiRi, I just can\\\'t imagine Arwen being so angry, even in
childbirth , to threaten to get rid of his manhood, shall we say? I
think that would have been so funny to see! Of, course we all have
heard of things like that before, but Arwen? I could just see Aragorn
running from her in terror, and protecting himself. The look on his
face would have been priceless! What have you done to me, it is all
your fault! she probably was screaming. Having all the knives from
their quarters removed, huh? He really was scared!! But he knew she
would calm down eventually, just not when. She knew it wasn\\\'t
anyone\\\'s fault, just a sweet baby that came out of their love. That
was a sweet, touching moment they had with the baby, there. This was
very, very good. I liked it very much! NiRi

Title: The Water's Song · Author: Nieriel Raina · Races: Elves: Family
· ID: 707
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 13:46:11
Hey NiRi, this story is very good. I think it is great. I really hate
the whole idea of sea-longing, though. I makes me very sad and a
little angry. It must have been hard on Elves in general; leaving and
leaving those you love behind. Legolas was so small and innocent when
he first heard the song of the waters. To be able to foresee the
future must have been both a gift and a curse to her. A gift such as
that would always be a blessing simply because it was an Elven gift.
And a curse if the outcome of your foresight is painful and hurtful.
But to know you will lose your son to the sea one day and that you
yourself will die long before that time has got to be exceptionally
hard. It was averry touching that when Thranduil found out about
Legolas' future, he told his never-ending love for him. And the fact
that no matter what he did or went he would always be loved
unconditionally. I think that really helped Legolas down the road
remembering that talk and realizing that he would alway be love by his
father and friends. But I think his love for his friends was a little
stronger than his sea-longing. He fought alongside them during the War
of the Ring and wouldn't leave until his good friend and brother was
gone. He was a very honorable being. It sas interesting that when
first heard the song as a child it was in a small stream and when he
actually felt the longing so strongly, he was near the ocean.
Interesting. This story was really great, NiRi. I like it Pam

Title: A Large Bold Hand · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 10
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-14 16:17:47
This is really a nice little drabble. So, Ori the Dwarf could write
well in Elvish, and could write the Elvish characters very quickly,
and often did in later life. That is an interesting idea; to have had
Elrohir be his teacher in writing the Elvish language. (Or at least I
am assuming that is what you mean). Obviously it would have taken a
great deal of time to learn it, so he must have been there quite a
while, or often, at least. You would not think a Dwarf would be that
interested in something like that. You might say he was even a bit
romantic talking about the writing as beautiful and flowing, like
rippling water. Ori obivously never did say where he had learned it
from or who taught him. And it also seemed he had an interest in his
people's history. He was a very interesting Dwarf. This was a very
nice Drabble, Jay. I like it! Pam

Title: This crown of stars · Author: Fawsley · Races: Men: General
Drabbles · ID: 586
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-14 23:35:43
Spoilers!
Talk about Aragorn angst, Fawsley captures a lonely Strider,
contemplating his past and future. The language is so arresting I had
to make sure that this wasn't a poem. I recommend this to all who
believe that Strider did have his moments of doubt and pain.

Title: Shall We Dance? · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races: Men:
Steward's Family · ID: 93
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-15 02:58:29
Spoilers!
A confection of a story, blending promise and memory, as Lothiriel is
presented at the Steward's midsummer court; and, in receiving a
special honor from Denethor, bestows a special grace upon him. And the
metaphor of Denethor and Lothiriel as winter and spring was absolutely
lovely.

Title: Wind of Change · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 47
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 03:15:22
Spoilers!
A fittingly stormy entrance into the world of a woman who scorns only
a woman's place. I particularly enjoyed the brief glimpse of Rohan and
its royal house, and the other two inclusions, of Glorfindel and the
Witch-King himself were both foreshadowing and fulfillment of a prophecy.

Title: Legacy · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Men: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 500
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 03:19:12
Spoilers!
A beautiful tribute to all veterans, as Boromir's nephew reflects upon
his unknown kinsman. It is also a tribute to what his sacrifice
achieved, as Elboron admits that though he too has fought battles, the
most fell foes are gone, due to Boromir's valor and that of the other
warriors of the Ring War.

Title: Last Stroke · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Drabbles · ID: 465
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 03:23:18
Spoilers!
Eomer's stand on the hill on the Pelennor, tossing up his sword when
he saw the standard of Elendil, always seemed to me to be the ultimate
cinematic moment, and I never understood why Peter Jackson didn't use
it. Elena takes that scene and deftly twists it to show another place
and a darker fate. Powerful, despite its brevity.

Title: A Midsummer Day's Dream · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Drama: Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 422
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 03:27:15
Spoilers!
Awwwwww. A fitting end for a prince who sacrificed his own inner peace
to win a peace for everyone, only to find himself again afterwards.
All of Faramir's family, living and dead are present on the beautiful
summer day that is the last day of his life. No sentimentality, but a
very peaceful and hopeful story.

Title: The Prisoner of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 313
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 03:31:47
Spoilers!
A very dark alternative vision. Surely it would have been a good
thing, had Denethor not killed himself? Raksha shows this not to be
the case, depicting a broken man who no longer has a place in the City
he served his entire life, merely suffered in the glorious new age
begun by the enthronement of his old rival Thorongil. Council, family,
king and people have all cast him aside, and he lives in bitterness. A
truly chilling depiction of a Gondor that no longer has a Steward
because Gondor no longer needs a Steward.

Title: Eight Weeks · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 273
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 03:37:15
Spoilers!
Dwimordene has spent a storied career depicting the Steward's
dysfunctional family at its absolute worst moments. So it's kind of
nice to see them all getting along, and to see Faramir and Denethor
actual allies in a mutual campaign to get Boromir to shave his beard.
Needless to say, two men with the intelligence and acumen of the
Steward and his second son are not likely to fail, and their
machinations are depicted with understated humor that is all the more
funny for its subtlety.

Title: Moon Over Water · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 518
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 03:44:13
Spoilers!
An intriguing story, where the usually practical to a fault Boromir
starts a tradition for his dreamer brother, telling him of a night
when Gondor's fallen greatest sail once more upon the Anduin. The
folktale/tradition is a plausible one and the depictions of this
mystical event are well done, seeming as they do to reflect Gondor's
deepening peril. Faramir is faithful in his watch, but his final
vision is a disturbing one. Boromir is true to character in this brief
vignette, his devotion to his younger brother and his innate
pragmatism are well drawn.

Title: Star's End · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves: House of Elrond ·
ID: 283
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 03:59:51
Spoilers!
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. Arwen's end in the Appendices is one
of my least favorite parts of the trilogy. She is so certain that her
decision is the correct one, yet in the end she wavers in a way I have
always found OOC. Keiliss' story of her end almost reconciles me to
it, or at least makes me understand why she might have felt the way
she did. The presence of Maglor, who was there for the very beginning
of her story back in the depths of time is absolute genius. I love
Maglor the Wanderer stories and in this one he is remarkably
well-adjusted, seemingly enjoying his life among mortals as a
wandering bard, while still being aware of what he has lost.

He is an undemanding, understanding companion in Arwen's last days,
knowing better than anyone what it is to be divorced from all that you
love. She is his distant kin, of course, and in the end, when she is
weary of her existence but unable to die, he grants her the only gift
that he can.

This is gapfilling at its very finest.

Title: The Prisoner of Dol Guldur · Author: Soledad · Genres: Drama:
Final Partings · ID: 102
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 04:10:37
Spoilers!
Tolkien waffles a bit upon the creation of orcs, one theory being that
Morgoth took Elves and tortured and corrupted them. This is a horrific
fate, but an equally horrific one for a being who is one with nature
is to be imprisoned for countless eons in a dark dungeon. After
Galadriel casts down Dol Guldur, the Elves of Lorien and Mirkwood are
appalled to find that there is an Elf in the deepest pits, an Elf
believed dead for many years, Legolas' older brother Enadar.

Soledad has an extensive cast of original Elven characters, all of
whom have well-developed backstories, and they all have their parts to
play in Enadar's rescue and recuperation. As might be imagined, such a
trauma is not to be lightly put behind one-for a long time, the former
prisoner's life is feared for. Soledad's descriptions of Enadar's
medical difficulties are enough to elicit sympathy without being
excessively gory, and her depiction of his recovery is plausible.
Despite the fact that he will never be what he once was, he has
achieved his own hard-won wisdom and serenity by the end of the story,
as he watches the unfolding of the Fourth Age.

Title: Enticements · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama: Featuring
Boromir or Faramir · ID: 266
Reviewer: Isabeau of Greenlea · 2008-11-15 04:24:39
People speculate endlessly about what Galadriel offered the various
members of the Fellowship when she entered their minds in Lothlorien.
This is Annmarwalk's take upon the temptation of Boromir. Some folks
even speculate that she actually set him up to succumb to the
blandishments of the Ring. That is not the case here, but certainly
Galadriel offers him the things he most greatly desires-a chance to
save Gondor, his father and brother reconciled, and his beloved
Theodred in Gondor, ready to fight by his side. Strangely enough, this
last proves to be the overplayed hand that enables him to win free of
Galadriel's sorcery, for a Theodred who would abandon his people to
fight and love with Boromir is not the prince Boromir knows and loves.
Galadriel seems almost sinister here, and Boromir's victory seems to
make this a good set-up for a Boromir Lives! AU. I love the
Boromir/Theodred pairing, and particularly enjoy Annmarwalk's ongoing
treatment of it. This is a worthy addition to her stories.

Title: The Shadow · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 25
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-15 06:30:57
Hi, Linda. This was a really good drabble. The other members of the
fellowship - The War of the Ring - could eventually get past the
mental and physical anguish of Sauron\\\'s evil, but for Frodo it was
different. The ring caught him up in it\\\'s desire, ruthlessness and
desire. He hated and loved Gollum, and probably felt the same way
about himself, as I\\\'m sure they both felt about the ring. So they
really were akin in this manner. The whole episode was not something
Frodo could get over easily, Perhap he never would. The ring took a
part of him he could never regain. A part of his very soul and being,
his shadow. He and Gollum both shared the power and secrets of that
ring. They both lost a part of themselves on that mountain. Gollum
long before Frodo, though. They wanted it with a passion beyond reason
and both would have kept it if they could. Frodo felt he couldn\\\'t
cross the sea and go to Valinor if he couldn\\\'t be whole again,
without this shadow over his head. Perhaps he felt tainted in a way.
But this journey to Mount Doom would never have been in vain, He saved
Middle Earth. This was really a wonderful tale, Linda. Pam

Title: The Night's Eye · Author: Vana Tuivana · Races: Men · ID: 343
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-15 09:25:04
This is a very good story; I really liked it. It's the kind that you
remember. This actually gave me goosebumps. A story has to be really
good to do that to me. This story says so very much. The idea of the
window-candle is very touching. It was tradition and honorable for the
wives to leave a candle for their men who were far away and to just
let them how terribly much they were missed and loved . It was like a
symbol of love. The woman who started this tradition, Eirien, never
gave up on Belegund, even though she really knew he was gone. So the
candle, I think. to her was a constant reminder that her love for him
would never die. And to always keep his spirit alive.

It was interesting that when the spirit of Halbered returned home and
visited with his son, it was like the candle had finally led him home.
Even if only temporarily to say goodbye to his family, And when the
candle fluttered as he left, it was kind of like he and the candle
were somehow connected and it signalled his finale goodbye. At that
moment, it also proved to his son that he really had been there. This
was a wonderful story, Vana

Title: In the Van · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres: Humor ·
ID: 72
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-15 10:49:42
Hey! This is a really funny story!I I can just see everyone in the
fellowship fighting and bickering in the van. Ok, there are seven of
them, so it could have been a mini-van; they would all have fit, do
you not think? So, they are on their way to the Black Gate, getting
lost even with a map. Well, Aragorn is more of an ear to the ground
sort of guy. Most guys do not seem to like maps, anyway. At least in
my world. They have a television to amuse themselves on the way there.
What fun! And it is not surprising that Gimli is interested in the
World Wrestling Federation, no surprise at all. How about the dead
guy, Boromir? Him too? And they are on on their way to the enemy
fortress with road signs leading the way. I am surprised they are not
permanently lost! That makes me think of a manipulation photograph
that I have seen on another site. It is a picture of a highway with a
sign at the side of the road. It shows Gandalf stating You Shall Not
Pass at a no-passing zone. I thought it was hilarious. So is this
story of yours It is very, very good, Branwyn

Title: Care to Ride My Hot-Rod Fell Beast? · Author: viv · Genres:
Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 180
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-15 11:55:57
Rowr!! This is really a hilarious story, Viv. Very seductive and
wicked. In Angmar's mind at least, anyway. A kind of hot in an ew!
fellbeast sort of way. Angmar really had the hots for Eowyn here, huh?
It was her little girl determination, yeah right, and death as her
battlecry that really turned him on. Weaknesses? Yes, never try to
seduce or make eyes at a lady with a sword in a battle. Especially
when she is on the other side of the playing field. Men, or in this
case, a Nazgul, just cannot seem to resist the sweet charms of a
little woman. Eowyn? Yeah, right! Well, it was Angmar's undoing in the
end. I love the lines you have at the end of the story. ["Now die!"
his cleverest euphemism for 'take off the tin, sistah, and let's get
rowdy!'] I really love that line, it is cool! It is priceless, like
this story. I love parodies. You did a great job! I love it, Viv! Pam

Title: Gently Held · Author: viv · Genres: Romance: Other Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 6
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-15 13:11:34
Oh, this is such a lovely and beautiful story! To me it expresses the
deep love Arwen holds for Aragorn perfectly, Trying to explain exactly
why she love him so. I believe it is in part all of the things she
mentioned; but those things probably just endeared him to her more. I
believe his hands represented to her tne gentleness and patient love
he has for her. He would do anything for her and does. But it all
comes down to their unconditional love for each other. Those hands
could also represent the man Aragorn was and who he is and what he has
gone through. A very warm, gentle and patient person. Rough, gentle,
patient loving hands. Plus also the love-at-first-sight ; being
thrilled by another's touch. She adored him so! A wonderful story,
Viv! Pam

Title: Some Confusion in Accounts · Author: viv · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 276
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-15 14:06:07
This is really, you have a great sense of humor! Galadriel would be
intimidating to anyone, but that look she gave to Susan the Reporter
was scary. Probably almost enough to make you want to run off
screaming. And what a question to ask Galadriel, of all Elves! Ouch!
Susan should be afraid, very afraid. But Galadriel took it stride and
answered at her leisure. Susan\\\'s assessment of her, the Old Goat!,
was funny. It was naughty of Galadriel, but she does have a point. Why
would you want to wait 4000 years for for someone who you love and who
turns you on, and you want right now? That would be torture,
wouldn\\\'t it? I probably wouldn\\\'t want to wait, either. That is a
long, long time. But Galadriel is cool and patient; even with Susan
the Reporter. Galadriel could have been a real witch, but she was not.
She is more like a Glinda! And the description of Mr. Wise lolling
about in all his beauty, or something like that, that was funny. Thi
story was really good and that last line really catches you off guard.
Really great, Viv Pam

Title: NIGHT and FOREST: A Glimpse of Beauty · Author: Fiondil ·
Times: First Age and Prior · ID: 554
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-15 14:21:40
The descriptions of the horrors of Nan Dungortheb and its inhabitants
were evocative and very haunting - in fact, this might be the first
story I've read that really gave me a sense of its menace and what
Beren felt while traversing it.

Very convincing take on Beren, who for me often was a very shadowy
figure when trying to imagine him prior to his fateful meeting with
Luthíen.

What I appreciated most was how Fiondil described how Beren's anxiety
actually grew once he was in (relative) safety, which struck me as
very realistic.

The last line is truly lovely in its understatedness.

Title: Aftermaths and Consequences · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Fourth
Age and Beyond · ID: 268
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-15 14:34:25
Plausible and refreshingly unsentimental story about what two "common
people" might have had to fend with after so much destruction in the
War of the Ring - and which is so easy to forget in the celebration of
victory and all the good things that come with it.

The original characters are very well-drawn, and I like that despite
the almost mercenary nature of their bargain, there are still hints a
more personal bond might lie in the future. And especially that both
protagonists take pains to respect the other's choice and their pride
and dignity.

Title: An Ordinary Woman · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: First Age
and Prior: House of Finwe · ID: 32
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-15 16:18:00
I can honestly say that this story is my favorite among those written
by Dawn. Every time I read it, a somewhat funny thing occurs to me:
regardless of the fact that I am, and have always been, a devoted fan
of the Sindar of Doriath, I have never liked Lúthien. Not have I
really liked the story of Beren and Lúthien, even though I realize,
and I will be the first to admit, its importance and the fact that it
is one of the most poignant stories in canon.

That's why I really love "An Ordinary Woman" -- an unusual and a bit
controversial take on the beginning of the story of Beren and Luthien,
told by Finrod as he visited Menegroth and realized that the tales and
songs exaggerated, and the princess of Doriath was not exactly what
they depicted -- or rather what they wanted their readers or listeners
to believe in. Finrod is by the way my favorite character of this
piece. This story always has me laugh, and also marvel at how an
excellent and very talented writer, such as Dawn, can re-forge
something that has never been my favorite part of the Tolkien universe
into a most likable story that explains a lot in a most amusing,
thought-provoking, and also believable – if one wants to accept that –
way.

Great, truly great job!

Title: Seeing Stars · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 360
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-15 16:24:06
Engaging dialogue that very much fits the different characters and
their respective "situations". Lovely descriptions which are
interwoven smoothly into the narrative, and wonderful character
interaction.

Telling the story from the perspective of a more-than-slightly
inebriated Faramir was an inspired touch, and very effectively
executed. I've never been quite *this* drunk, but I recall being in
Faramir's shoes where you say to yourself that your head is still
clear, it's just your body saying and doing its own things, and where
all emotions, thoughts and sensations are very much hightened... I
also like how the plot thread weaves and swerves with Faramir's
somewhat loose grip on coherency at the moment.

To witness the normally restrained Faramir being so exuberant and
silly was at once hilarious and touching, all the more so because his
joy went beyond the birth of his son to also encompass the love for
his land and the joy at the New Age, as symbolised by the young White
Tree.

Title: Vodka · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Times: First Age and Prior:
House of Finwe · ID: 714
Reviewer: Oshun · 2008-11-15 17:11:18
Spoilers!
This is so brilliantly wicked. It is provocative and biting and makes
writers like me who could have a tendency to fall into a kind of
smarmy hero worship of Maglor and Maedhros take a second look and
examine their conscience. It definitely should be considered a
classic. Everyone should read this who has waxed sentimental about
poor little Maglor, who couldn't hurt a fly, the good brother.

Despite my differences with you on interpretation, I want to give you
the top points for consistency and logic. Maglor's voice is simply
amazing here, as is that of Maedhros. It is just so, wicked and
original and such a departure from the fanfic clichés and standard
interpretation. I love it. It reminded me a lot in tone of Tehta's
masterpiece about Maedhros, ["Gathering the Pieces"], which is not to
say that it is in any way derivative or echoing the logic that led her
to her conclusions. Yours is totally unique. Meanwhile, it contains
enough subtlety and ambiguity to drive me back to read over it several
times.

I must indulge myself by mentioning a few of my favorite lines:

[" You, of all of us, still have that thin thread of honour. The rest
of us shook that off at Losgar."]

Or, or how about summarizing that transcendent bond of love and
friendship between Fingon and Maedhros to this:

["You know the boy only saved you because he fancies himself in love?"]"

Or, reducing the Noldolantë to:

["A pretence of regret."]

Oh. Ouch.

I still can't believe you did this in only 500 and some words.
Congratulations on a great short story.


Title: Don't Explain · Author: gwidhiel · Races: Elves: Incomplete ·
ID: 289
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-15 17:30:47
Spoilers!
"Don't Explain" takes the point-of-view of Indis, which is too often
ignored in Silmfic, to portray a complex realization of the events
that tore apart the House of Finwe after Galadriel's return at the end
of the Third Age. Indeed, few are truly "innocent" in this tale, which
takes a very fair approach to Finwe's marriage to Indis and the events
that come after and also approaches topics such as the Noldorin drive
to settle new lands and Galadriel's contemplation of her at times
contradictory impulses as a member of all three Eldarin peoples. In
particular, I find the friendship between Feanor and Findis and
Indis's conversation with Miriel to be compelling in a story that is,
as a whole, extremely thought-provoking. The gentle and reflective
tone perfectly suits the time period and characters that Gwidhiel
writes. I recommend this story, particularly to readers who enjoy
thoughtful stories about Tolkien's female characters.

Title: A Harmony In Autumn · Author: Oshun · Genres: Romance: Elven
Lands · ID: 49
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-15 18:42:57
Spoilers!
"A Harmony in Autumn" has a lot of what I have come to expect from
Oshun's stories, namely the Eldarin politics underlying the plot of
the story and giving it its shape, the lively dialogue, and the upbeat
outlook that lacks in many Silmfic stories. I particularly enjoyed the
idea of beloved friends at last discovering and acknowledging their
unrequited love for each other. The eroticism in the story is as
always a lovely addition to the story but not its sole reason for
existence: Oshun balances this very well.

The autumn setting--and, particularly, its metaphoric connection to
Noldorin history at this point--really enhances the story quite well.
A lovely, enjoyable read!

Title: The Nightingale · Author: Maeve Riannon · Times: First Age and
Prior · ID: 404
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-15 18:59:40
Maeve certainly has a talent for exploring the characters of Tolkien's
more mysterious women, first with her series about Miriel Serinde and
now with this piece about Melian the Maia. Her portrayal of Melian is
somewhat unexpected yet really worked for me, and she does a really
wonderful job of working Melian's foresight and otherworldliness into
the story in such a way that is chilling and sorrowful.

Title: Galdor: An Elf By Any Other Name.... · Author: Marta · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 475
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-15 19:30:37
Once one gets beyond the most obvious "facts" JRRT presents in his
writings, defining canon becomes largely speculative, based on notes
and information scattered between many (and sometimes obscure) sources
that must then be connected in such a way to create a character. I can
attest that this is a daunting task.

Marta's essay on Galdor is a fascinating case study about how an
author can take scattered and seemingly random facts and present a
coherent and canonically justifiable presentation of a character on
whom JRRT did not expound much. More interesting to me even than the
conclusions about Galdor himself is the insight Marta gives into her
thought processes and methodology in generating these conclusions. As
a Silmarillion author writing about characters who are mostly "minor"
compared to the dominating heroes of LotR, it is intriguing to see how
other authors approach problems such as scarce and ambiguous information.

Title: Starcrossed · Author: weepingnaiad · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 493
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-15 20:09:41
Spoilers!
This is one of those stories that I started reading and found myself
unable to stop till the end. Weeping Naiad has a very fluid and easy
style that makes this story quite the joy to read. The story follows
the life of Gil-galad from being sent to Cirdan in the Havens until
his death at the Last Alliance but, most importantly, traces his
blossoming from an awkward child into a capable king who gave his life
for his people, touching on his relationships (romantic and otherwise)
with Elves like Cirdan, Elrond, Fingon, and Galdor and how each shaped
the last king of the Noldor. The story is fast-paced and the
characters presented with insight and tenderness. Very nicely done!

Title: Reflections in the Smoke · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 294
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-15 20:31:23
I never seem to find many stories focussing on Gandalf, who was ever
my favourite character in the tale. You caputure with a gentle and
sensitive touch this moment of change for the wizard. In the trilogy
he appears so strongly bound to Middle-earth that it's easy to forget
he is a Maia, and you've brought that aspect out beautifully, without
distorting him.

Title: Yule at Great Smials · Author: Dreamflower · Races: Hobbits:
Family · ID: 566
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-15 21:05:55
I can only take Pippin-fluff in very small doses, but hey, this one
went down like a spoonful of sugar! Very funny how Pippin always gets
into trouble even at that age.

One has to feel sorry for the couple that are getting married - all
the unpleasant people are off to attend their wedding!

I was very amused at Merry's inspired definition of fireworks! And he
gives Estella his carrots! I bet that's how it all started... ;-)

And the last sentences was causing me a giggle-fit!

I don't quite understand how the weather could be "cold, but mild",
and I have an inkling that you meant to say "Cold, but dry".

Title: Waterloo · Author: Lady Bluejay · Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 158
Reviewer: Virtuella · 2008-11-15 22:14:53
Spoilers!
Oh, wow. I'm glad I've found this.
Tolkien makes so easy of so many things, probably just because they do
not belong in an epic tale, but the rational reader does wonder.
Indeed, how many healers did they have, and how many wounded? Where
did the victorious Rohirrim sleep and where did they keep their
horses? You take care of all these things and at the same time give a
breathtakingly intense image of the city under siege. And yet, after
all that terror, you finish up with naked Eomer in the princess' bed,
and it neither jars nor irritates - admirable! And then in the second
chapter, what a masterful portrayal of flirtation and awakening love,
finishing with a delightful and mischievous scene of married
affection. Your rendition of Lothiriel is very convincing and you show
us a very vibrant Eomer. I enjoyed this story very, very much indeed!

BTW, I will just imagine that the blonde soldier whose hand Lothiriel
holds is my Deoric. ;-) And I can't really think of anything else to
say, so I just type this pointless sentence so that you can get some
more points from this review. Which actually makes it not pointless.
Oh, well, language is a wonderful thing. Thanks for a great story!

Title: Crumbling Walls · Author: Ford of Bruinen · Races: Elves:
Incomplete · ID: 662
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 00:29:40
Spoilers!
This seems an appropriate story for a night such as the one during
which I read it: with cold mist and rain outside the window, on the
cusp of winter, in the chill and the dark. As I read "Crumbling Walls"
and formulated some points in my mind that I wished to address in my
review, I found that the first word to come to mind to describe this
story--as much of Uli's writing--is "sensual." The story teems with
imagery that appeals to all of the senses, humble observances that
bring the story to life for me:

["The door behind her opened the sound of worn slippers sliding over
the marble floor made her smile."]

"Crumbling Walls" so far addresses the building of Gondolin and the
varying perceptions of it by those who would inhabit and lead it.
Glorfindel is interestingly portrayed as a scholar-turned-warrior,
convinced to devote his talents to the "important" pursuit of leading
an army; Ecthelion's enthusiasm for the new-built city seconds only
Turgon's. Uli defies many of the common characterizations of the
Gondolin lords to create a setting that feels fresh and new, no matter
the number of Gondolin stories I have read.

Pervading this story is a sense of melancholy. Despite the fact that
Gondolin is the pearl of Noldorin civilization in Beleriand, it is
nonetheless of replica of what has been forsaken, and time touches
Gondolin as it would not have Tirion, bringing the realization that
what joy can be found there is doomed to be fleeting.

I look forward to seeing the superbly written series completed.

Title: Flickers · Author: Meril · Times: Multi-Age: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 390
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-16 00:40:27
Spoilers!
In this drabble series, Meril presents us with fascinating snapshots
into the lives of Nerdanel and Feanor, and their blossoming and
withering love and marriage. The courtship drabbles subtly expose what
brings this couple together together and how, even at the start, what
eventually drives them apart is present. From the middle section, I
particularly loved the paired drabbles of ["Gatherers"] and
["Gatherers II"], in which each reflects on the disintegrating
relationship – the items each has left behind are brilliantly chosen
and beautifully described. And of the ending drabbles, where we see
what becomes of Nerdanel in the end, my favourite is her encounter
with Sam in ["Strength To Save"], which provides a new twist and new
insight on both of them. In short, this is a wonderful series, filled
with beautifully shaped treasures whose craftsmanship would surely
meet the approval of the two protagonists. Very well done!


Title: Burdens · Author: Meril · Genres: Drama: General Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 219
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-16 00:40:51
Spoilers!
Meril has drawn together a thought-provoking series of drabbles about
the tangible and intangible items that the Exiles carried with them on
their journey from Valinor. The brief pen-portraits of the original
characters whose thoughts are presented are each deftly, clearly and
effectively drawn, giving us a strong sense of their personalities and
concerns.

I found the most powerful of the drabbles to be the first, in which
the thoughts of her unnamed protagonist show clearly that is is the
unseen that weighs more heavily than the material goods they bear.
Other drabbles explore the loads imposed by the mixed allegiances, the
griefs and the confusion of the departure from Valinor, the kinslaying
at Alqualonde and the betrayal of the burning of the ships at Losgar.
Taken together, they paint a compelling and fascinating picture of the
Noldor. Bravissima!


Title: The Craft of the Elven Smith · Author: Larner · Times:
Multi-Age · ID: 1
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 00:48:43
Spoilers!
This story is so full of hope and promise of healing for so many
harmed by Melkor's acts in Arda Marred. I really liked the connections
Larner made between Nerdanel's crafts and the deeds in the Third Age.
It was fun to see history take shape, all touched by Nerdanel's hand.

Title: Five things that never happened to Nerdanel · Author: Meril ·
Genres: Alternate Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 389
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2008-11-16 00:49:48
Spoilers!
Meril has crafted a clever series of drabbles postulating what might
have happened if events had taken a different turn and how Nerdanel
might have regarded them. Perhaps the most chilling is the one in
which she shares her husband's fare in exile, and the one that
provokes the reader to cry "if only!" is the final one in which the
Noldorin rebellion never happened and they remained in Valinor. A
simply fascinating series – well done!

Title: Blue · Author: red lasbelin · Races: Elves · ID: 563
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 00:56:09
An intriguing look at how Glorfindel ascended from a late-born son and
painter to a warrior and lord of his people, "Blue" gives a special
meaning to his lordship. A touching story ... nicely done!

Title: Lost Love · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 271
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 01:02:54
Spoilers!
Elven-mortal marriages are an understandable fascination in this
fandom, and Tanaqui, in this pair of drabbles, captures the
bittersweetness beautifully. The first one, especially, is lovely with
its classic motif of pursuit in the hunt only to find the "quarry" is
one of the fey; the language here is lovely and evocative. The second
drabble brings home the point that, despite the love that might grow
between them, Elves and Men were very different at this point in their
history. Beautiful and highly recommended!

Title: Cat's Paws · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains · ID: 58
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 01:33:01
Spoilers!
Pandemonium's stories set in Ost-in-Edhil are brilliant, and "Cat's
Paws" is a fitting--and strange!--addition to the series. What
continually strikes me about these stories and again here is the
convincing job that Pandemonium does of showing how many of the
Noldor--and Celebrimbor in particular--craved what Annatar had to
offer them, in particular his friendship and regard. Aulendil is
brilliant here as always, with his mix of condescension and derision
(and occasional scary outburst) tempered by a tenderness that makes
even me as a reader, who knows well how the story ends in canon, want
to believe in his goodness and that he will overcome his fate to be
all that he promises to be.

Pandemonium further uses her knowledge of biochemistry to depict Elven
"magic" as it has never been done before, constructing plausible
science-fiction explanations for what most of us dismiss as mere
magic. This can be delightful, as in the transformation of the
rose--["Citrine streaks began to snake through the red petals"]--or
disturbing, as with the cat's paws. It is always fun to read,
particularly for someone who, in another life, was a biopsychology
student.

And I must say that I love the commentary on the statue!

Title: Denial · Author: Oshun · Races: Elves: House of Finwe · ID: 80
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 01:46:55
Spoilers!
This is a charming story set before passion, betrayal, and the fate of
the Noldor had darkened the puppy love of Maedhros and Fingon. Even in
a single relatively short scene, the dynamics between Maedhros and
Maglor move the story at a lively pace. Maedhros (deliciously
described) and his horror at learning the transparency of his feelings
for his half-cousin calls to mind the high-school nightmare of having
a crush on my future husband and realizing that everyone knew it ...
and then the excitement of first love in hoping it might be realized.

The touches of humor in the story are a delight. In particular, the
last line did make me literally laugh out loud.

Title: Autumn · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Gondor Drabbles ·
ID: 489
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-16 01:50:52
This is a very nice and warm feeling ficlet you have written here,
Linda. Yes, I think Aragorn was a little caught emotionally between
his love of the great outloors and its' pleasantries of freedom to
come and go as he pleased, and the love and warmth he shared with his
family. The autumn could represent his sadness and depression for not
having a place to belong or call home. As you said, he weighed the
advantages of both his previous life and his present one and was
happiest in the long run to just be with his family where he felt
warm, safe, happy and loved. He no longer had to run from who he was
and what he was.. Hiding in the shadows obscurely, with his cunning,
his ragged clothes and a name to hide behind. That also came with his
freedom. Now he had a loving family to be with. What could make him
feel safer and more loved than that? It is a wonderful story, Linda Pam

Title: The Flute · Author: Golden · Races: Hobbits: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: Pearl Took · 2008-11-16 02:01:49
This is a touching story, beautifully written by Golden. There is a
need for the Travellers who had to stay behind in Middle-earth to stay
connected with the Ringbearer after he departs into the West. Gandalf,
ever wise and sensitive to the needs of his small friends has provided
a means for this to happen.

A lovely bit of alternative universe wishful thinking. Thank you
Golden for the charming story!

Title: Rekindling · Author: Dawn Felagund · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 255
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-16 04:10:32
Spoilers!
An intriguing look at a possible reunion of Feanor and Nerdanel Ages
after their separation. The passion and renewed love is effectively
counterpointed by the tragic circumstances that have allowed it to
happen. Excellent characterisation of Nerdanel in particular.

Title: Saruman of Many Colours · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 439
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2008-11-16 04:22:53
Excellent drabble series! Tanaqui captures Saruman's pride,
intelligence, ruthlessness, petty greed, and the ignominy of his last,
desperate attempt at vengeance.

Title: No Man's Land · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Drabbles · ID: 726
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-16 06:56:16
Spoilers!
Thank Goodness this did not happen!What a chilling prospect for we
would have no Middle-Earth to enjoy.

Title: Dark Dreams · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races: Hobbits:
Hurt/Comfort · ID: 550
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-16 06:59:54
Spoilers!
A warm hearted and comforting ficlet in which Pippin takes care of
Merry. I think it plausible that Merry,like Frodo could have suffered
on the anniversary of his wounding.The two Hobbits are lucky to have
one another.

Title: The Nag · Author: celticbard · Races: Men: Steward's Family ·
ID: 347
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-16 07:01:07
A touching story and well written story.I loved the way your portrayed
the brothers and the horses.

Title: Playing with Fire · Author: Linda Hoyland · Races: Men: Minas
Tirith · ID: 21
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-16 11:00:15
This is a very good story, Linda. It is very true that the only way
that we can learn anything is by experience. The good as well as the
bad. Aragorn knew that very well, and that the only way Eldarion was
ever going to get over his fascination with fire (the fireplace) was
to find out what it was and how it felt to the touch. It was a little
cruel, but a lesson Aragorn knew was a very important one for his son.
I think it tore him up inside watching and letting his son get burned,
while he just stood by and let it happen. He was really frightened for
Eldarion; waiting to pounce on his son the moment it happened to
comfort him. Eldarion learned this lesson because of Aragorn's past
experiences; having experienced first hand what could and does happen
to an innocent young child who is so unaware of the dangers around
him. He actually saw a child die from playing with fire. Something
like that will stay with you. He had to hurt him to protect him. That
really would wrench you heart, would it not? Everyone has to be taught
these lessons for their own safety. Like the old saying, sometimes you
have to be cruel to be kind. That is the way Aragorn himself learned
to experience the potential dangers of fire, and you know that Aragorn
would rather die than let anything happen to his son. Yes, I do
believe that he had also played with fire that night. He was
experiencing the pain for himself through his son, knowing what his
son would be experiencing, and feeling horribly guilty about the
incident; but in his heart knowing he was doing the right thing for
his son. But why not a candle instead? It might not be quite as bad.
But unfortunately it was the fire and embers in the fireplace that he
was the most fascinated with. I expect he'll respect all fire after
that. Getting burned never helped me, though. I was little, I'd say
ow!, then do it again. I never did learn that lesson. I loved fire
then and I still do. I have hundreds of candles, lighters for incense,
I love campfires, fireplaces, the smell of woodsmoke, running my
fingers through flames. I guess that makes me a little fire fanatic,
huh? I love fire. Fortunately Aragorn does not! This is an absolutely
wonderful story, Linda! I loved it!

Title: The Pirate · Author: Sivan Shemesh · Genres: Alternate Universe
· ID: 674
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-16 11:41:37
Sivan, this is really a cute tale. I like the idea of Arwen telling
little Estel stories to their son. Like she says, he is very like his
father. Estel and the twins must have played pirates a lot if Aragorn
remembered it that well and played it with his son. I am sure that
playing with the wooden sword of his father was very special to
Eldarion and meant serious business. How sweet. Elledan and Elrohir
would probably do almost anything to amuse their little brother and
keep him out of trouble. And once again, Eldarion is like his father
and wants to play with the boats. I love little Estel (and Eldarion)
stories, they are so sweet. This is a really nice ficlet, Sivan!

Title: To Give Hope · Author: peredhil lover · Races: Cross-Cultural:
Elves and Men · ID: 456
Reviewer: Michelle · 2008-11-16 13:31:52
The events described in "To Give Hope" are one of those gaps Tolkien
left in his writing that I find most intriguing, but also very
difficult to portray in fanfiction. How would this have worked? How
did Gilraen end up in Rivendell? How, when and why was decided to
change Aragorn`s name? How would this transition happen? Peredhil
Lover gives a version of things, one that I found I could follow.
Gilraen`s plight is portrayed very vividly – she`s suddenly dependable
on these foreign beings she does not know. She tries to be polite, but
at the same time she desperately hopes this ordeal will be over soon
so that she can go home. When Elrond proposes to her she has to stay
in Rivendell throughout Aragorn`s entire childhood, her shock and
horror are very real because she realizes the life she`s led so far is
over and things will never be the same. While Elrond also plays a big
part in this story, it was Elladan who interested me the most –
especially with peredhil lover`s story "Day and Night" in mind.

Title: The Dwarves Treasure · Author: eiranae · Races: Dwarves · ID: 312
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-16 14:59:07
A very interesting premise and a nice cross-cultural concept,
wonderfully thought out and skilfully delivered. Here, an orphaned
elven child is found by dwarves, who take care of her, and in the
process she quickly finds the way into the heart of especially one of
them. Very good characterizations, I love the portrayals of both
Mireth and her dwarven foster father. A touching and very well written
story, Eiranae! Thank you!

Title: The Consuming Darkness · Author: Isil Elensar · Genres: Drama ·
ID: 467
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-16 18:28:42
An interesting and heart-rending take on what might have been
Tar--Miriel's last hours before she met her ultimate end in the waves
that swallowed Numenor. An excellent portrayal of the Queen, and a
very good piece of writing, Isil.

Title: To Be A King · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves · ID: 252
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 18:42:10
Spoilers!
I adore this story for the ideason Elven politics that it provokes.
Keiliss considers what the young High King Gil-galad would have faced
in uniting motley races and cultures under his standard at the end of
the First Age. Like many of his predecessors, he recognizes that unity
is the key to success against Morgoth, but achieving that unity is the
challenge.

In particular, I find fascinating the discussion of how the High
Kingship has changed over the years in Beleriand. Gil-galad recognizes
that it is something of an artifact better suited to life in Valinor,
as well as the fact that Turgon's reign rendered it meaningless. I
think that this is a thoughtful and logical assessment of the canon
such as is rarely seen in Silmfic.

Finally, Keiliss always writes with such a delightful style: never
overwrought yet graceful, very fitting to the works on which she is
commenting. Her style is such that the story does not suffer for the
rather abstract (versus plot-based) nature of its subject matter. Both
the author and the story come with my highest recommendations.

Title: Young Fëanáro Makes A Stone · Author: Oshun · Genres: Humor:
Valar & Maiar · ID: 77
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 18:52:33
Spoilers!
I am still, at times, amazed at the connectivity between Tolkien's
multiple works. "Young Feanaro Makes a Stone" explores one possible
connection between the infamous Elven smith Feanor and the Elessar of
the Third Age. A playful and fun story, it considers how Feanor
crafted this gemstone in his youth in Valinor as his first project in
gemcraft that we would see reach greater fruition with the invention
of Feanorian lamps and, of course, the Silmarils. Though touched with
foreboding moments--like Feanor's assertion, ["Steady, now, don't let
yourself care overly much for a Vala; you are naught but a petty piece
in their games"]--it remains largely a charming and funny story that
(if I were to take a humor piece too seriously) is an apt illustration
of how the earliest ages nonetheless connect to and influence the
more-familiar events of LotR.

Title: WAR: A Promise Before Dying · Author: Fiondil · Times:
Multi-Age · ID: 55
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 19:06:32
Spoilers!
As I finish reading this story, I can't help but think of the line in
the Ainulindale where Eru reminds Melkor that, no matter what happens,
Eru's intentions will be done. Likewise, at the crux of this story is
a promise left unfinished across the ages and then fulfilled in
perhaps the most roundabout way ... but still fulfilled. It is a
charming story that uses both sadness and humor to show the strength
of the bonds of friendship and loyalty.

Title: The Last Stand · Author: Rhapsody · Times: First Age and Prior
· ID: 82
Reviewer: Dawn Felagund · 2008-11-16 19:22:22
It's hard to imagine a story about the Nirnaeth Arnoediad that could
be hopeful and uplifting, but "The Last Stand" is such a story. Amidst
the well-known tragedy of the Fifth Battle, Rhapsody also shows the
bravery and loyalty of all involved: Eldar, Sindar, Edain. I found
myself marveling at the bravery it must have taken for Beleg and
Mablung to march alone to war when they had the convenience of their
King's refusal to stay in safety at home. I come away from this story
with a renewed appreciation of some of the lesser-written First Age
heroes.

Title: As Close As · Author: Dana · Genres: Romance · ID: 88
Reviewer: PipMer · 2008-11-16 20:44:18
This was written by Dana in response to my request during a Yule fic
exchange. She met my criteria exactly; noone else could have done it
better!

She perfectly interwove the feelings of tentativeness and shyness with
attraction and love. The subtle nuances of emotion that Estella is
feeling is very well done. I especially liked her handling of the
situation between Merry and Pippin; I am actually fond of the slash
pairing of Merry/Pippin when it is done properly, and I've liked
Dana's other writings pertaining to this pairing.

I also appreciated how she wove in some references to Frodo, and how
Merry is affected by his absence. Estella is portrayed as very warm
and sensitive to Merry's feelings in this regard.

I thoroughly enjoyed this tale that was written especially for me....
and thank you once again, a year later! :)

Title: Lock Out · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits · ID: 307
Reviewer: PipMer · 2008-11-16 20:55:43
This is a very charming little story, written in response to one of
Marigold's challenges. Her use of the idiom in this story was very
original and clever, I thought. This story made me laugh outloud both
times that I read it!

Title: A Taste of Home · Author: Pearl Took · Races: Hobbits:
Friendship · ID: 138
Reviewer: PipMer · 2008-11-16 21:19:52
Spoilers!
This is a delightul look at the lives of two of our favourite hobbits
during Yule in Gondor in their twilight years. I ADORE stories about
Merry and Pippin when they are older, and this one took the 'cake'. It
had just the right amount of humour in it for a light-hearted tale.

I love how Merry makes Pippin run around looking for fruitcake, when
the cake was ready to be sent to them the whole time! Merry is quite
the prankster. Sort of reminds me of his younger cousin :)

Title: For What I Wait · Author: Dawn Felagund · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Angst/Tragedy · ID: 125
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 21:59:32
This is just gorgeous, a heart-wrenching what-if positing that Feanor
survived his sons to endure the loss of each, and Maglor (unlike the
Feanor in the story, I'm just too used to the "new tongue") last of
all, crazed and grief-stricken on that beach. Dawn, is the song your
own original composition? It begs to be set to music. I thought
something especially interesting about this story was that Feanor,
seemingly humbled by sorrow, sidestepped the discussion of regret
(saying simply that he had some regrets, but then not wanting to talk
about it anymore), and didn't appear to accept the blame for what
happened to his sons, which he probably ought to do, all things
considered. That is exactly as I imagine Feanor would be, had he
lived. Also, his extraordinary hubris continues to astonish me: twice
he speaks of having given animus -- all by himself, mind -- to his
sons. Methinks Nerdanel and Eru both might take issue with that, but
it is so in-character for Feanor to think it. Even in grief, he's
completely full of himself. :) Excellent character portrait here, Dawn
Felagund.

Title: A Great Evil Unmade · Author: Linaewen · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 267
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:00:06
Hooray! The redemption of Boromir. Thank you for writing this AU. This
is the Boromir I would have expected and hoped for. That Tolkien
disagreed just made *his* work more complicated and tragic. *This* is
how the story should have gone.

Title: Portrait of a Queen · Author: Aruthir · Races: Men · ID: 338
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:00:30
Oooh, I like this. You have given us the progression, the reasons
*why* she was as she was. Incredible, in such a short space of words,
to give the whole life and motivations of a complicated woman, and yet
you've done a good job at it. I especially liked the voice of the new
king at the end, discussing her burgeoning madness in old age. Ha! If
only he'd known: she'd been seeing things and hearing voices for a
long long time. And I loved Ancalime having "terrible eyes." Gave me
the creeps in the best possible way.

Title: The Last Words · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 409
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:01:26
I really like how you've personified the Silmarils, as ["mistresses"]
and ["temptresses,"] because that's just what they were in the
marriage of Feanor and Nerdanel. Excellent insight, there. And how
nice to give the Ambarussa a special role in relation to their mother,
as well. They're often overlooked among the sons of Feanor, I think,
and I appreciate this little spotlight on them. The ending was
satisfying too, to have Mahtan come to take his little girl home.

Title: Apart · Author: Nieriel Raina · Genres: Drama: Gondor
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 551
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:01:55
Awww. Their relationship is sort of at the core of Tolkien's world,
isn't it? I love how they both take responsbility for the fracture in
their friendship; they both imagine that it's all their fault. I've
seen a similar pattern in real-life friendships resolving issues; that
is, to get to the kiss-and-make-up stage, each person has to admit his
or her mistakes, at least privately. Apology is very wise. I almost
want to know what caused their temporary rift, but after reading it
again, I find that I really don't care. The important thing is that
they've made up.

Title: Footsteps in Time · Author: Keiliss · Races: Elves · ID: 76
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:03:02
Your description of Melian could be the best I've ever read. I can
absolutely see her head tilting ["bird curious"] and her voice thin
and ["silvery."] And Elu with his bling! Ha! But what I really liked
most was that opening scene, between Galadriel and Celeborn: so tender
and intimate. But what was she waiting for in that scene? Argh.

Title: They Also Serve · Author: Marta · Times: Late Third Age · ID: 365
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:04:20
Homespun wisdom, indeed! That seems to be the pervading theme of this
piece. I love Arwen's voice here, so down-to-earth and *normal*. As
alarmingly lovely as she must have been, she was also a person, and
that comes through alive and warm here. This was also a tribute to
women throughout the ages, and considering that Tolkien completely
lost sight of this nuance, you've given commendation to the lesser
known heroes (heroines!) here. Thank you.

Title: DISGUISE: Emissaries · Author: Fiondil · Genres: Humor: Valar &
Maiar · ID: 56
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:05:30
Oh, I loved this! So often stories concerning the Valar and Maiar are
so ponderous they're pretty much unreadable. But I liked the ease of
this conversation, the clear characterizations of the Maiar as sort of
junior to the upper-ups, the Valar. But most especially enjoyed your
characterization of Radagast. Have you written other stories with him?
If not, I hope you will. You captured his innate joy vividly, and with
just a few words.

Title: Feelings of Superiority · Author: Gwynnyd · Times: Multi-Age:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 362
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:06:14
Spoilers!
I felt like taking a shovel to that Numenorean daddy in the first
drabble. What a pompous, condescending, doof! Easy to see how the
Numenorean civilization fell, with folks like that infesting it. (I
suppose I'm not the first fan to ponder Numenor vis a vis Rome, eh?
Your drabble here recalled that comparison as well. Clearly.) And
drabble number three ... Annatar's light! *sperfle* Oh, nooooooes.
Poor little hoodwinked Men. And Elves likewise, eventually. Although
your elves seem much *nicer* than your Men. Very Tolkienesque. And I
really enjoyed the twist in the last drabble. I can see how one of the
Avari might perceive his choice in just such a way. Most of all, I
enjoyed the parallel theme running through all these drabbles: the
passing of wisdom, and misinformation and bigotry, from father to son.
Ain't it just like that. What excellent work you've done here.

Title: Loudwater · Author: Adaneth · Times: Late Third Age: General
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 63
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:07:14
Nice poetic rhythm here. I would have been tempted to format it as
poetry, because it certainly lends itself to that kind of reading. But
even as prose it works well enough. I especially liked how the river
considers Rivendell ["the haven of the Mariner's son."] Water making a
water connection, and all that. Lovely writing, all in all.

Title: The Captain's Mare · Author: The Lauderdale · Races: Villains ·
ID: 575
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:10:19
Not sure if I've ever read more appropriate use of expletives. This
orc narrative voice is beyond excellent. Feels like I'm sitting on
somebody's revolting grandpap orc's knee and he's telling me a story
of the wars and mud. And horses. I've read a bit about horses in
Tolkien fic, but this is extraordinary. This is complicated, this
relationship between the horse and the goblin. Complicated and filthy
and ... somehow not as horrible as it ought to be. This bit, though,
this is horrible: ["and her with her head down. It had been getting
lower as the days went on."] The darkest line of the story, and it
slides in at the end of a paragraph. In fact, this whole story is a
study in understatement. It rolls on in with all its filth and mess,
and by the end, you end up not minding the orc. Pitying him, even. ...
I wrote this review months ago, but even now as I re-read it, I can
visualize the story. I read so much in fic that such recall is rare.
Truly, this is a remarkable story with a visceral pull that lingers
with a reader.

Title: Love at First Sight · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 432
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:13:08
Though still subtle, each of their destinies shine through this piece.
Heartbreakingly so. At one moment, I see the splendor of Feanor, yet
uncorrupted by his pride; the pride of Finwe in his son, to exclusion
of all else; and the marginalization of Miriel, scooted to the shadows
even for this, Feanor's first glance at the Light. What a stark
tableau you've shown in such few words.

Title: The Ritual Disturbed · Author: Larner · Genres: Horror · ID: 68
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:13:28
Fascinating: a side of Tom Bombadil that doesn't get much play in
Tolkien's work. But Tolkien did hint at such hidden depths, and it's
interesting to see your interpretation here. Plus, of course, I just
love it when folks write about Old Tom. :)

Title: As Close As · Author: Dana · Genres: Romance · ID: 88
Reviewer: viv · 2008-11-16 22:15:03
Spoilers!
A nice twist on the whole newlywed honeymoon theme. I like how they
don't rail on how the decision to marry was made for them rather than
by them. Fighting it seems a cliche in fic, and in novels for that
matter. How refreshing it is to see characters who make the best with
what they're given. I think it says a lot for them. And this was a
nice simile: [gentle as a wing]. As much as I enjoy good R-rated het
romps, this particular fade-to-black was very satisfying. Finally, I'm
impressed with how subtly you paint the relationship among the hobbit
Walkers: neither slashy nor completely platonic, but somehow deeper
than either. Even more brilliant is that Estella *gets it*.

Title: Some Confusion in Accounts · Author: viv · Genres: Humor: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 276
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-17 00:47:04
Spoilers!
Modern reporter on the "star" beat gets to interview a former--very
former--A lister and her spouse, and ask a few tough questions. In the
process, the reporter discovers the secret for the longevity of the
couple's relationship. Snort!

Title: Drawing the Eye · Author: Linda Hoyland · Times: Late Third Age
· ID: 569
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-17 01:17:21
Concise descriptions that serve well to not only set the scene, but -
in the reference to Théodred - to create the appropriate somber mood.

The dialogue seems stilted at times, but the sincerity of Halbarad's
concern for Aragorn is conveyed clearly, as well as the depth of the
bond the two men share.

The story is a convincing take on a scene that Tolkien left mostly off
the page, while still preserving the mystery of the very private
struggle between Aragorn and Sauron.

Title: The Dooming of Small Hands · Author: Thundera Tiger · Times:
Late Third Age · ID: 639
Reviewer: Imhiriel · 2008-11-17 01:19:07
The scene setting was lovely and evokes very well the peaceful shelter
Rivendell usually is, before it segued effectively into the
contrasting mood that opens up the actual story.

The interaction between the characters was described excellently. The
dialogue flows smoothly, and I found the strategic discussion between
Gandalf and Elrond very effective in summarising the state of things
in various parts of Middle-earth. It was interesting to see them hash
out their disagreement about Gandalf's suggestion prior to the actual
Council (particularly fascinating was Gandalf's observation in the
passage beginning with ["It seems to be the way of things..."]).

The severity of Gandalf's responsibility in his decision to encourage
Frodo in accepting the task is brought home very poignantly, and I was
moved by the obvious doubt, guilt and sorrow he felt for not being
able to be quite open with him.

Title: The Roses of Imloth Melui · Author: Aervir · Genres: Drama:
Gondor Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 435
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 02:53:09
Spoilers!
A moving behind the scenes look at those who worked in the Houses of
Healing during the Ring War.How horrific to imagine so much blood that
crimson roses lose their charm!

Title: Put Aside Your Doubt · Author: sophinisba solis · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Frodo and Faramir · ID: 187
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 03:39:45
A beautifully written look at Frodo and and Faramir's encounter and
the disturbing dreams Frodo has while within the caves.I like the way
the brothers are compared and contrasted. I think Faramir and Aragorn
are much alike.They may not seem all that friendly,but are men of
honour. A well written story.

Title: Forfeit · Author: Branwyn (Lady Branwyn) · Times: Late Third
Age: Gondor Drabbles · ID: 401
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 03:43:26
I loved this moving drabble. You capture the essence of Beregond
perfectly,a man of honour who only killed out of his love for his
Captain.It must have been a sore temptation for Beregond to
flee.Luckily,he is rewarded for doing the right thing in the end.

Title: Farewell · Author: agape4gondor · Genres: Drama: Final Partings
· ID: 127
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 03:49:00
A heartrending farewell for Boromir and Faramir .The two brothers are
prepared to argue over Boromir taking the quest, but as foresight
tells them he will never return they savour their last moments
together.This story should carry a tissue warning. I liked it very much.

Title: Somewhere I Have Never Traveled · Author: Fiondil · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 578
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 03:57:36
Spoilers!
A unique and refreshing view of Arwen's departure.I liked the idea
that Eowyn would stay to meet her.Poor Arwen,though, this is not quite
the reception she hoped for.One wonders what did she expect in the
afterlife as Elves have a different destination to humans? I'm glad
her sacfrice was appreciated and she was reunited with
Aragorn.Beautifully written as one would expect from this talented writer.

Title: Dispelling the Fog · Author: fantasyfan · Races: Other Beings ·
ID: 642
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 04:05:48
I enjoyed this story very much as it discusses the oft debated
question about who exactly was Tom Bombadil? I like it that here Frod
is every bit as curious as the average reader! Not that the Hobbit
gets a proper answer,though!

Title: Call of the Wild · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Romance:
Drabbles · ID: 94
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-17 05:36:34
Spoilers!
This powerful drabble nicely characterizes Morwen Steelsheen as she
views Thengel, the current king of Rohan, for the first time. So vivid
is the author's portrayal of Morwen's emotions that we feel as
attracted to Thengel as Morwen is.

Title: The Prisoner of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 313
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-17 05:52:28
Spoilers!
In "The Prisoner of Time" Raksha tackles a popular AU theme, what if
Denethor had survived the siege of Minas Tirith and lived to surrender
his stewardship to the man who had been the rival of his youth. The
result is an extremely bleak short fic, with excellently done Denethor
angst to make fans of the genre happy. Denethor appears more bitter
than mad, more ruminating than calculating. In the end, the former
Steward's misery is chilling, but you feel sorry for himself despite
it all.



Title: Surprise Inspection · Author: AmandaK · Genres: Humor: Gondor ·
ID: 207
Reviewer: stefaniab · 2008-11-17 06:22:01
Spoilers!
A sassy, yet very realistic bit of fun, in which Captain General
Boromir decides to spring a surprise inspection on the garrison
protecting the ruins of Osgiliath--and catches the whole crew skinny
dipping on the bristling hot day. Although "Surprise Inspection" has
perfectly fluffy intentions, what works best for me in this story is
its depiction of life in a Medieval army base. Boromir comes across as
a business-like and capable commander, sympathetic to and
understanding of the soldiers that he leads.

Title: Lost · Author: Claudia · Genres: Adventure · ID: 226
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 06:22:20
A fascinating "what if "?story that explores how Frodo might feel if
he lost the Ring.Most interesting to me were the reactions of his
companions. I enjoyed this skilfully told tale very much.

Title: Loving a Book Lover · Author: Avon · Genres: Romance: Drabbles
· ID: 721
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-17 07:55:49
Very nice. Subtle, amusing and suggestive. Well done!

Title: My Precious · Author: SheBit · Genres: Romance: Drabbles · ID: 14
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-17 08:03:37
The author certainly met her goal: we get into the head of the PoV
character with a completeness that leaves me feeling slimed. I need to
read a light, fluffy drabble as a palate-cleanser, quick!

His obsessiveness towards the object of his desire is drawn out well,
shedding light on his horrible betrayal. The contrast between his
countrymen and his "shiny" is a nice touch, adding some depth and
meaning to how he could have become so twistedly in love. Wonderful
choice of title! That all by itself throws added layers into this drabble.

Title: Home is where the heart is · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Romance: Drabbles · ID: 505
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-17 08:04:05
A sweet and beautiful drabble! Her longing for what she knew is
palpable, and the author brings out some familiar and likely images
that give us a connection to what Arwen is missing. No doubt it will
not be the last time she experiences these feelings.

Then (like all Aragorn fans *g*) she's swept away and reminded of why
she is giving up so much, both tangible things and deeper, more
personal ones. ["Home is where the heart is"], indeed. Lovely language
makes this work feel very intimate and brings Arwen close to the reader.

Title: Loving a Book Lover · Author: Avon · Genres: Romance: Drabbles
· ID: 721
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-17 08:04:26
I had to laugh out loud at the beginning of this drabble. Oh, yes, I
can certainly completely empathize with Faramir; I think that
connection we voracious book-lovers immediately feel is one of this
work's most powerful attractions for me.

The other attraction, of course, is Eowyn's eventual success. Never
spelled out, every individual with an imagination can immediately call
up the tactic *they'd* like to see tried as a distraction! Delightful
and funny, this is a wonderful glimpse into Faramir and Eowyn's
relationship.

Title: Expert Treasure Hunter · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 447
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-17 08:06:00
Tanaqui really nails Smaug's perspective in this drabble. It's a bit
of a different take from the usual view of dragons; here we see just
how their well-known discrimination between fine and poor-quality
treasure is accomplished. It's both humorous and plausible; and since
it is Smaug talking, the accompanying destruction and desolation is
oh-so-matter-of-factly mentioned - just another day of rearranging the
furniture. :)

The author's wonderfully descriptive writing conveys Smaug's
characteristics, methodology and power very clearly. His inner
thoughts are particularly delightful.

Title: Orc Dreams · Author: Tanaqui · Races: Villains: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 448
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-17 08:06:23
I'm not sure if it's a compliment or not, but Tanaqui does capture the
orc PoV quite well. I'd never even noticed the referenced quote
before, yet the author spins it into a clever take on orc astrology! I
love the names she's come up with for the old familiar constellations,
and the ending: no matter what little prescience may be dancing
around, orcs will be orcs. Somehow, it's reassuring to know that the
enemy also has nightmares...

Title: ...and the sound of a battered heart, beating · Author:
Lindelea · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 690
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-17 08:06:48
I think this is almost a special art form, that nearly an entire
drabbled scene can be dialogue - and very excellent dialogue it is,
too. The speech patterns capture not just Hobbity characteristics but
the emotions of the characters as well, with nary a facial or voice
description in sight.

Brilliant last line; yes, that's the wisdom of this particular Hobbit
and that particular wizard. And something all of us can carry off and
keep for ourselves.

Title: Now the Green Blade Riseth · Author: annmarwalk · Genres:
Drama: Ring War Drabbles · ID: 37
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-17 08:07:31
The dialect and phrasing are exceptionally well done; I can see this
being the Gaffer exactly. His view of his son comes through clearly,
too, in one brief reference. But my favorite is how this old, cranky
and suspicious plant-lover ends up viewing the new Party Tree. I can
see it being the same reaction among all those stout-hearted Hobbits
of the Shire: a resurrection of hope for an entire community. Sam's
lovely, lovely, deep and homespun wisdom...

Title: Primum Non Nocere (First, Do No Harm) · Author: febobe ·
Genres: Drama: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 628
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 09:12:31
A charming take on what might happen should Eowyn be called upon to
tend Frodo.Sam's reactions are very realistic.I personally don't see
Eowyn as a 'cuddly' type but still an enjoyable story.

Title: Even Legends Fade · Author: Star In Ruin · Races: Elves · ID: 555
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-17 09:25:19
Spoilers!
A touching and unusual story on a well known theme,the death of
Aragorn, but from the viewpoint of an ordinary guard. Although,I'm not
certain Legolas was Aragorn's very best friend,his grief ,together
with Arwen's is movingly portrayed.I'm pleased I found this story
through the MEFA awards as the writer is very talented.

Title: The Last Words · Author: Rhapsody · Genres: Drama: Featuring
the Noldor · ID: 409
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-17 09:31:23
A wonderfully written, compelling and heart-breaking portrayal of
Nerdanel. Rhapsody conveyed the pain of Nerdanel's lost love and the
power that the Silmarils had over her husband. This is a very poignant
take on the thoughts, and words, of the woman who felt robbed of her
husband's love, which he seemed have turned to his own creations, and
yet she still loved him – and that made the estrangement of Fëanor and
Nerdanel more tragic.

Brilliantly done!

Title: Aulë the Smith · Author: Oshun · Genres: Non-Fiction: Character
Studies · ID: 530
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-17 11:38:17
A well constructed, informative and very interesting essay that
presents the Smith of the Valar – Aule. I enjoyed reading this
portrayal not only because Oshun provides a lot of information and
gives us a deep insight into the character she writes about, but also
because the essay is far from falling into a short, dry note such as
those we can find in encyclopedias. Her knowledge and attachment to
the subject matter can be clearly seen in the writing, and that is
what I like the most. But that does not come as a surprise – Oshun's
knowledge and devotion for the Tolkien universe shine through all her
stories.

It is also worth pointing out that each and every essay that she
monthly writes for the Silmarillion Writers' Guild archive is a treat
to read, and worth my sincere recommendation. Thanks, Oshun! Great job!

Title: The Least of Rings · Author: Marta · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Drabbles · ID: 621
Reviewer: rosethorn59 · 2008-11-17 16:04:03
Marta, this is very good. I love both drabbles and angst. I was a
little confused about a couple of things, though. Boromir had stolen
the Ring. Was Frodo fighting with him to try and get it back? Did
Boromir kill Frodo or just decide not to go with him? Or not take him
along? It is late, I am tired. Perhaps what happened here did not
matter. Boromir did have the Ring and would have planned on taking it
to Gondor to try and use it to save Gondor from Sauron and the hordes
from Morder. But it never would have worked that way, like he had
wanted it to, because the Ring had already taken him. For how else
could he exchange his marriage ring for the One Ring and convince
himself that that would be all right with his late wife? No, she would
not have understood. So who knows what would happen? We would have
Boromir as evil ruler of Middle Earth? Well that could be interesting,
do you not think? I have never read a story like that. But there
probably are a few out there. A new plot bunny? You say quite a lot in
just a few sentences. I like that! I really liked this !

Title: Fait Accompli · Author: Ignoble Bard · Genres: Mystery · ID: 381
Reviewer: Oshun · 2008-11-17 17:53:54
I don't exactly know where to start with this review. This is a
well-crafted, dark and fascinating story. It has a mystery, which is
only gradually revealed to be a mystery (for me at least—I though I
knew what was going on and it turned out that I had not a clue). The
ending is one I absolutely did not see coming, although I have been
privy to a lot of discussions of writing with the writer and know
something about his taste. I also think that one could discuss what
the ending means and argue about it. IgnobleBard loves to explore the
character of Legolas. In this case, he takes off in a totally, new for
him, direction. It is a serious psychological study in that it
examines one's desire to do the right thing and yet still make
decisions that may have disastrous effects. It is also about the quest
for self-knowledge and the difficulty of overcoming pride to
understand one's own motivations.

I am not one to usually be attracted to stories which deal with lack
of consent in any detail, much less torture, but my choices in reading
are based upon the premise of never-say-never. This story is an
excellent one, where overcoming by usual taste and taking a look was
worth it. It is not written in a titillating or over-the-top manner,
but is nonetheless convincing and disturbing. It also is one of the
longer stories IgnobleBard has written and causes me to want to urge
him that he should do that more often (he actually has in the past
period and I hope he will continue to do so).


Title: Home is where the heart is · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres:
Romance: Drabbles · ID: 505
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-17 18:34:38
A beautiful and utterly romantic (in the best way possible) drabble. I
love the imagery -- it is a vivid scene, and a very nice insight into
Arwen's thoughts. She realizes -- with a hint of bitterness -- that
her home is no longer Imladris, but the White City, where her love for
Aragorn has led her to.

Lovely drabble, Linda. I think it is safe to say that every fan of
Aragorn smiles warmly while reading it.

Title: Black is the Color of My True Love's Hair · Author: Marta ·
Genres: Romance: Gondor · ID: 405
Reviewer: Oshun · 2008-11-17 18:41:24
Spoilers!
This story, standing on its own, is probably my absolute favorite of
all of your stories. I have always found Denethor a fascinating and
complex character. I have also been drawn to examine him in the
context of comparing him to Aragorn. The way he is written in canon
impels me to do so. The manner in which you described his attraction,
more obsession, with Aragorn, is psychologically convincing, dark, and
utterly mesmerizing, and can be made to fit within my conception of
both of them. The language and imagery is fantastic. This is a
gorgeous story. I'm scoring you here for a fabulous story. I have read
it several times and recommended it widely (although with reservations
and one piece of advice—please read the story text all the way through
before reading the notes on every page and getting discouraged).

On that last point, I seriously thought about not mentioning it,
especially since this is a subject that is controversial: the question
of the author's notes at the top of the individual chapters and the
footnotes within each chapter really detracted from the work for me. I
found them distracting in the extreme.

I cut and pasted the body of the story on my harddrive, deleting
those, and found the story to be perfect, a classic in the genre, with
them so-so. You had already created an author's notes' chapter,
longish for a story of that length. I would have appreciated it, if
you felt you absolutely had to make those further points upon each
chapter that you had posted them within that author's notes' chapter.
I would have read them there and probably appreciated them.
Personally, I do read author's notes chapters—virtually always—and
don't even mind lengthy notes at the beginning of an initial chapter.
I cannot think of a case where I have skipped them. I almost always
write author's notes myself, but I try to place them so the reader can
read them or not as a choice. I wrote one humor story myself, which
began with author's notes almost as long as the story, in fact. I also
noticed on this story, that some reader's commented that they
appreciated your notes. Like everyone else, I can read less than
amazing fanfic stories about my favorite characters and enjoy them.
But, I tend to judge excellent stories like this by my standards for
original fiction. That in and of itself is controversial, but I think
it should be flattering.


Title: Epiphany · Author: Larner · Races: Cross-Cultural: Fixed-Length
Ficlets · ID: 293
Reviewer: Robinka · 2008-11-17 19:06:42
A very poignant drabble. It must have been a somewhat odd feeling for
an immortal being to realize that time indeed passed swiftly. Larner
conveyed Elladan's and Elrohir's realization, as they watched their
foster brother -- no longer a boy, but the King of Gondor -- in a very
gentle and thought-provoking way. Well crafted!

Title: The Prisoner of Time · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Steward's Family · ID: 313
Reviewer: The Little Dwarf · 2008-11-17 21:19:28
This was a very well-written and dramatic piece of fanfiction. I loved
to read it as an AU and a psychological exploration of what could have
been, but I'm very, very glad it's still an AU. I wouldn't have minded
Denethor surviving the war (he would have been of course affected by
his long time in contact with the Palantir...) but I can't stand the
idea of Faramir dying because of his father's pride.

Your characterization was, as always, extremely good. Even in an AU,
Denethor is very much the character we know from the book. I think
that book!Denethor would have been able to hold the defences of the
City, that's why I absolutely loved your description: ["He had led the
defenses on the south wall, fighting in the front until the
Morgul-spawn retreated, caught between the hammer of the captains of
the West who scoured the Pelennor and the anvil of Minas Tirith itself."]

I also loved your indirect description of the celebrations in the city
- ["The City (...) now throws open her broken gates to Isildur's
upstart heir like a giddy strumpet opening perfumed knees."] - a very
expressive simile and feminine personification of Minas Tirith... and
again, this belongs to your excellent writing! :)

All in all, beautifully-written fic, but thank God it's just an AU!

Title: Undivided · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 46
Reviewer: The Little Dwarf · 2008-11-17 21:24:20
Actually, this was the first fic I read where the twins are not just
part of the background or a couple of mindless, imature Elves who do
nothing but play pranks on others... Your story was so different from
those, that I start to think more about these two...

First of all, I loved your characterization of the two - of course,
they're not individuals, but they have at least some individual
identity - their reactios are very similar, but not identical. It's
great that you kept this balance. The description of pain was very
vivid as well, and your writing skills helped you create some palpably
dramatic scenes... great drabble!

Title: Healing · Author: Bodkin · Races: Elves · ID: 419
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 21:27:54
Spoilers!
It's so seldom that anyone takes a clear-eyed look at the world after
the War and its effect on the elves who remained behind for a season.
The reasons given here for their choice make absolute sense, as does
the final retreat into the West. I have always wondered at Arwen's
decision to travel to Lorien after Aragorn passed, and the explanation
here makes a good deal of sense. It certainly answers my own questions
on that score.

I loved Glorfindel's part in this, his voice was very true, his love
of life and sense of responsibility shine clearly. The sense of the
few remaining elves being almost under siege by a silent world that no
longer has a connection to them is well-captured and achingly sad. I
liked the final brief conversation between Elladan and Elrohir, I
think it might well have happened like this in the end. And Galadriel
was right; Celeborn needed to know how it would be, he needed to have
no doubts or longing to return to cloud their reunion.

Lovely, lovely work.


Title: Unwilling · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races: Elves: Drabbles · ID: 64
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 21:30:13
Very evocative and haunting. Paradise lost indeed. I like the way it
starts off slowly and then speeds up, intensifies, when Men become
part of the world. Lovely last line, too.

Title: The Blessing of the Waters · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Romance: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 61
Reviewer: The Little Dwarf · 2008-11-17 21:31:34
So sad and so beautiful in the same time... You managed to capture
Elrond's voice very well, and the dynamics between him and his wife
Cerlebrian is very well portrayed.

The change in tone that comes with the last paragraph has a great
twist, even if I could somehow anticipate it from the undertones of
melancholy that were also present in the first part...

I also loved the "water" motif... Yes, Elrond was very wise and the
symbolism around him wouldn't have escaped him...

And, as always, beautiful writing! :)

Title: National Treasure · Author: Baranduin · Times: Modern Times ·
ID: 201
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 21:36:19
I was only about four or five paragraphs into this when I started
thinking it would make a really stunning book. I have always loved
stories where archeological digs have turned up strange, unknown
civilizations, and the reference to the Templars is something always
likely to catch my attention. I loved the little nods to descriptions
in [Lord of the Rings], which were just obvious enough to make me
smile without being overdone. The description of the location and how
they reached it was very atmospheric, too. The setting of the Scottish
highlands felt absolutely right, as well.

The couple come across as really likeable people, and I am left
wondering if they will ever make the association between their current
bedside book and the runes they found at the site or might discover in
the recoverable contents of the book. And the quote at the end from
said book was perfectly chosen.

Great idea, well executed. My only complaint with this story is that
it wasn't long enough.


Title: Hammer · Author: Aranel Took · Races: Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 468
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 21:38:00
Ha! Nothing to choose between any of them, Men, Elves, Dwarves (and
probably Orcs, Ents, Trolls…) The male of the species always comes
along with an utterly cringeworthy pick up line, and the female thinks
about it, smiles, and decides that, yes, he's cute, may as well let
him get away with it.

Nice touch, the mention of her beard.

Title: The Captain's New Clothes · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Humor: Other Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 421
Reviewer: The Little Dwarf · 2008-11-17 21:40:09
This story is an example of how a bad hint can trigger a very good
story... The drawing that inspired you is... well, let's call it "not
the best of Tolkien-inspired artwork", but you managed to build quite
lovely around it...

I've seen the picture before and thought it ridiculous: not only are
the poor Hobbits horribly painted, but Robin-Hood!Faramir is so
outlandish as well!

But your story was a very amusing (and surprisingly realistic!)
explanation to that... :) The well-meaning aunt was a good addition,
and of course a good idea of the reason behind Faramir's bizarre attire...

I also loved the glimpse in Faramir's life as a Captain of Rangers! :)
Characterization was great, and wrting, as always, impeccable! :)

Title: Gone Amiss · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 44
Reviewer: The Little Dwarf · 2008-11-17 21:43:34
This in indeed one of the saddest moments for the Fellowship of the
ring, and you've captured it very well - dramatic and powerful and sad.

Great writing (I'll keep repeating that because I trully appreciate
the style of a piece of literature, even if it's "just" fanfiction!)
and I loved your conciseness!

Title: The Making of Werewolves · Author: Ignoble Bard · Races:
Villains · ID: 42
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 21:48:09
Spoilers!
For me, this is the perfect gapfiller, because not only does it flesh
out the details of Sauron's rule on the Isle of Werewolves and explain
how his servants were created, but it does so in a way that fits
seamlessly into canon, adding an extra dimension to an already dark
story. The language feels Silm-accurate, and the concepts seem
absolutely authentic. The atmosphere of casual cruelty paints a
wonderful picture, and tells us more about Sauron himself than the
title would suggest.

.

Title: Seeing Stars · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times: Fourth Age and
Beyond · ID: 360
Reviewer: The Little Dwarf · 2008-11-17 21:48:31
Fabulous!!! And even if he drank a little too much, Farramir is shtill
the wonderful Shteward we all wove!! :))

I loved every bit of it, it seems so... beliavable, first of all.
Everything: from the joyful customs to Faramir getting drunk to
Aragorn's fatherly affection! I really appreciate the historical
references - I'm sure by now you're aware I'm a fan of scholar!Faramir
above all... :) The devotion to Gondor and the King, and the
bittersweet memory of Boromir fit very well in this story. And I went
"awwww" again when I read this line: ["Eowyn thinks already of his
first sword, but I would fain see those hands open a book, or hold a
quill."]

I'm sure Faramir was an amazing father - being deprived of affection
himself, I know he would have strived to make time for his family...
And already in this early stage of his fatherhood he is such a dear!

But it was not nice of you to have Aragorn take him home before seeing
Eowyn and the baby again... He would have loved to, and I doubt Eowyn
would have minded - she would be the first to laugh at his state of
alcoholic merriment.. :)

In conclusion, a great fic about a great character... Atmosphere,
characterization, writting, they all make this a wonderful story!


Title: The Conscience of the King · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres:
Humor · ID: 649
Reviewer: The Little Dwarf · 2008-11-17 22:00:04
Wow, what a great little story!

I admit I hadn't read this before coming here, and it was a pleasant
surprize for me indeed. I rarely make more than a small smile while
reading fanfiction (even humor), but your story literally made me
laugh out loud!

First of all, I loved your original technique. The overlapping of the
inner world of Eomer's feelings and the exterior one was well done,
and I admire how well you managed to capture Eomer's voice. An A+ from
me for subtle characterization and for being able to show all his
sometimes contradictory feelings: his love and caring for Eowyn
(almost overprotecting sometimes), his slight mistrust in Faramir (I'm
sure that disappeared after a while) and finally his conclusion that
this is the way it shoul be and that being Faramir's wife would not
mean that Eowyn will cease to be his dear little sister...

Very, very good psychological analysis and great use of the
"Conscience" voice... And a plus for creating atmosphere as well... :)

Title: Reflections in the Smoke · Author: Raksha the Demon · Times:
Late Third Age: General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 294
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 22:07:08
Spoilers!
I suppose that must have been a strange feeling, having nothing left
to do, nowhere left that he absolutely had to be, the war over, the
task completed. Nice sense of him sitting a little apart from all the
noise and revelry of a victorious army, smoking his pipe and thinking
his thoughts. I wonder though if he won't find life in the West just a
little – tame after all this urgency and responsibility?

It also reminded me of what a really bad error in judgment Sauron had
made in placing so much of his personal power into the One. He might
well have termed himself [Sauron the Fool] in his last moments, too.

Nice little window on Gandalf/Olórin's thoughts.


Title: Possessing the greatest powers · Author: Tanaqui · Times:
Multi-Age: Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 387
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 22:11:33
The beginning with Celebrimbor was nicely explained. Of the
Ringbearers' tales, I think I liked Galadriel's with the Ring of Water
best myself, although Elrond's response at the lifting of the burden
and his realization of what that sense of lightness meant made me
smile with him. Very nice look at the response of each Ringbearer to
both their situation and the passing of the One. Unusual and
well-conceived.

Title: Lock Out · Author: pippinfan88 · Races: Hobbits · ID: 307
Reviewer: Nancy Brooke · 2008-11-17 22:14:29
A very amusing comedy of errors!

Title: Broken Star · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 22:27:34
Spoilers!
I had to check back at the top when I had finished reading this, but
yes, it is a double drabble. I felt as though I had read a far longer
piece, which I suppose is proof of what a very good double drabble
this is. I am very glad your brain did not explode/implode/crawl into
a dark corner and whimper.

There is such an air of inevitability about this scene, especially
once the name 'Sauron' is uttered, proving that words do indeed have
power. Celebrimbor does what he has to do, Sauron also has no other
real choices open to him beyond the primitively effective [glowing hot
iron rod]. I suspect you could have reduced this down to a true
drabble had the need been there, but it would not have been half as
evocative and I doubt I would now have this very clear picture in my
head of a courtyard filled with dark invaders, of the nearby brazier,
and the bound captive. So much detail contained and implied in so few
words.



Title: Wind of Change · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Drama:
General Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 47
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 22:36:41
Spoilers!
I liked this very much. Particularly enjoyed the way the author uses
the device of the wind to carry the omen of Eowyn's birth to both the
Lord of the Nazgul and to Glorfindel, united as they are by a prophecy
that has just drawn breath. I like the part about her father finding
that he can [only see the snapping of banners in the wind and hear
only the clatter of swords] when he tries to picture his newborn
daughter as a grown woman. That line seems to me the heart of this
short piece, and sums up her future fame in very few words.

Title: A Sea Visit · Author: Elen Kortirion · Genres: Humor: Drabbles
· ID: 96
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 22:44:10
Having lived most of my life close to the sea, the title promised I
would enjoy this - and sure enough I did. It left me with a broad
smile on my face. I could smell the sea, almost feel the water, and
was grinning along with the elves even before I knew the joke. I'm
sure Aragorn had a great time getting to know his new friend.

Title: A Great Cause for Concern · Author: Alassante · Races:
Cross-Cultural: Post-Ring War · ID: 682
Reviewer: Sivan Shemesh · 2008-11-17 22:54:28
I enjoy it... poor Legolas.

Title: Galdor: An Elf By Any Other Name.... · Author: Marta · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Character Studies · ID: 475
Reviewer: Keiliss · 2008-11-17 22:56:06
Spoilers!
That was really very interesting. Unlike the writer my first love is
for the Elves, so this was very much aimed at my sphere of interest.
There were a couple of points I would have found interesting to debate
a little perhaps, but all in all this was a very well-considered
examination of what were in some cases very tiny clues and hints that
lead to surprisingly clear and logical conclusions. I rather like the
idea of Galdor of the Havens being the same as Galdor of Gondolin. It
would certainly explain Cirdan's trust in him, both as an emissary
able to take decisions on his account, and as someone who would
survive a rather long journey in perilous times.

Thought provoking.


Title: Somewhere I Have Never Traveled · Author: Fiondil · Times:
Fourth Age and Beyond · ID: 578
Reviewer: MithLuin · 2008-11-18 00:13:56
This story has so many different facets to it - grief and solemnity,
jokes and lightheartedness, hobbits and Valar, the sisterhood of
queens. I love how Arwen seems so sure of her choice, but is easily
thrown for a moment when things do not go quite as she expected.
Having her brothers there, and having even Sam Gamgee comment on it
really makes this one, brief, story a lovely epilogue to The Lord of
the Rings. Thank you so much for writing it!

Title: Bibliophile · Author: Imhiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabbles ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-18 00:31:22
Spoilers!
There are so many facets to touch on with this drabble; I'll just set
to working through them in the order that they occur to me when
reading (and rereading)...

The first is simply the lovely image of an intelligent and literate
Eowyn, sitting and reading. I have to wonder why she chose the book
she did, too. Was it simply that the Rohirrim didn't have knowledge of
that House of Hurin's ancient tragedy? (I note that Imhiriel's brief
commentary on Tolkien's most messed-up family's dynamics, ["It's...
interesting."], impeccably brings the whole screwy ordeal to my mind.)
Was it that this House shared its title with another, that had its own
share of more recent (and close to the heart) tragic history? Or was
she trying to learn more about the mother that Faramir loved and
hardly knew, and whose mantle Eowyn now wore?

Possibly a bit of it all; at any rate, Eowyn is embarrassed when
Faramir asks her about the book. It's a sign of his respect for her
when he asks her opinion; I think it's a sign of their closeness that
she felt at ease borrowing a likely-treasured remembrance of his mother.

What ends the discussion is a particular sign of closeness *g*,
particularly when Faramir-the-scholar doesn't even notice that the
book plunks down to the floor...

This is a charming and I think deeper-than-it-looks drabble,
encompassing a lot of territory in a brief span of words.

Title: Broken Star · Author: pandemonium_213 · Races: Villains:
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 54
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-18 00:32:09
This is really an excellent double-drabble that packs a huge punch for
its size. It's only a glimpse, one quick scene; nonetheless,
pandemonium deftly sets forth not only the current event, but brings
out the history between the two protagonists and leaves the future
playing out in our imaginations.

I think I like best that Sauron is given his full potential as a
multi-dimensional character here; the ["...vestige of myself..."] line
is all we need to realize it. Celebrimbor's bravery is on full
display, too. Though nothing is graphic, the author's careful
descriptions leave me with no doubt of the level of horrors he has and
will endure.

Sort of an aside: Reading the title, I had first a flashback of
Feanor's heraldic device being in a fire/sun/star style, and second
that there was a "Star of Feanor" symbol carved into the west gate of
Moria. I don't know if there was any intentional connection, but that
combined with the terrible line in UT, that Sauron went forth
["bearing as a banner Celebrimbor's body hung upon a pole"], somehow
made all this even more deeply painful and poignant - the symbolic
final shattering of Feanor's House linked to the use of his grandson's
broken body as Sauron's device. At any rate, even if my rambling
doesn't make sense: great title. :)

Title: The Shadow · Author: Linda Hoyland · Genres: Drama: Ring War
Drabbles · ID: 25
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-18 00:32:40
Spoilers!
["The Shadow"] is wonderfully powerful and very moving. I can feel
Frodo's pain and despair fresh and clear again, as from the books. The
idea of Smeagol still haunting him - shadowing him like he did during
the long, hard toil to Mt. Doom - is insightful and unique for me.

I'm reminded of the conversations between Smeagol and his alter-ego
Gollum, and think it's not far-fetched that, although Frodo carried
the Ring for a shorter time, the intensity of its pressure on him
could have created a similar "fracture" in his mind - almost a split
personality like Smeagol had. That the "other" would have Smeagol's
face in the mirror speaks volumes to the strange connection that bound
him and Frodo together.

The language and tone seem perfectly fitting, with the first sentence
grabbing me right away. It all underscores Frodo's inability to stay
in the Shire and his almost desperate desire to escape this ghost.

It's a terrible brotherhood, and I commend Linda Hoyland for exploring
it so well in so short a piece. Very nice!

Title: Charge! · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Drama: Ring War Drabbles ·
ID: 444
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-18 00:33:30
Spoilers!
Tanaqui has a way with tossing out twists to the story, guiding you
blithely along to the "expected" outcome, and then - whoops! What
constantly amazes me is that she carries it out in a drabble format
over and over again. It doesn't seem like there should be enough space
to do a 180, but there you have it.

The descriptions are marvelous, rich and thrilling. The reader gains
an immediate connection with the PoV character - a startling one at
the conclusion, when realization dawns. Word choice and phrasing is
sublime, and the pace feels very much like a battle-charge; I tense up
in anticipation as the drabble builds momentum.

Beyond being sneaky and clever, of course, the misdirection also
serves the purpose of pointing out that the other side often believes
just as deeply, is just as committed, as the side that you are on:
we're gifted with a pertinent vision from the other half of the field.

Title: O Kheled-zâram fair and wonderful! · Author: Imhiriel · Races:
Dwarves: Drabbles · ID: 354
Reviewer: dkpalaska · 2008-11-18 00:34:35
This drabble is beautiful when read simply as a straight-up romantic
encounter: sparkling stars, a shimmering lakeside tryst, entranced
lovers, a longing to find that one particular partner for life.
Imhiriel abundantly enhances this basic richness by making these two a
specific pair of Dwarven lovers, and by employing superb language to
evoke the setting and characters.

The descriptions are all harmoniously chosen to reflect the fact that
these are Dwarves, who see the world in a certain way. Their hearts
may soar as high and gloriously as any other being's, but Imhiriel
carefully selects metaphors, similes and phrases to bring home their
unique and abiding connection to the earth and its hidden glories. All
of it is blended smoothly and naturally together, until I feel I
really am looking through Dwarven eyes.

Then the enjoyable surface story is greatly deepened when it's
revealed just who these two individuals are. The setting the author
chooses is incredibly apt, a reminder of past history and the special
role that the man holds. There is a great weight to the moment indeed,
and true love here, to accept joy and burden both of a joined
leadership. Particularly a leadership of people so stubborn as
Dwarves... *g*

Title: Love at First Sight · Author: Gwynnyd · Races: Elves: Other
Fixed-Length Ficlets · ID: 432
Reviewer: Linda Hoyland · 2008-11-18 01:17:46
I don't usually read stories set in this era,but I loved this poignant
ficlet knowing as we do that Miriel will soon fade.Finwe's instant
paternal love is deeply moving and again sad as we know the full story
of this tragic family. A beautiful and very well written story.