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Msg# 2261
Rohan and Numenor Voting, 10/2/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 01, 2004 - 0:19:15 Topic ID# 2261
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Humor and Adventure Voting, 10/2/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 01, 2004 - 0:19:22 Topic ID# 2262
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Msg# 2263
Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 01, 2004 - 0:21:33 Topic ID# 2263Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2
lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and
then comment beneath them.
Alternate Universe
HuA1: Legolas and the Stanley Cup by Bubbles
URL: http://www.geocities.com/sotto-voce/stanleycup.html
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After helping to rid Middle-Earth of evil, Legolas, already
lead-singer of popular band, Elf-Head, decided to try a year in the NHL.
And what a year it was!
Alternate Universe
HuA2: No Living Man by Elana
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1672&cid=6920
Rating: PG mild violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In which the Witch King realizes, that for an inhabitant of Middle
Earth, the knowledge that no living man can harm you is no reason to get
cocky.
Alternate Universe
HuA3: Slightly Muddled by Lindelea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1305498/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Fondly dedicated to all those of us who've included American slang
in our efforts all unwitting..
Alternate Universe
HuA4: The Fanfic Lounge: The Lord of the Rings by CNell
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=339
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The members of the Fellowship (along with two special guest stars)
must find a way to keep the world of fanfiction from being overwhelmed by
LoTR stories.
Alternate Universe
HuA5: The Fanfic Lounge: The Two Towers by CNell
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1252035/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Mary Sue attacks, Angst!Frodo, gender switching, horse stampedes -
and this is just what happens before lunch.
Alternate Universe
HuA6: The Story of Legolas and Enoreth by CNell
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/906316/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Can Legolas get through this twisted fairy tale without losing his
sanity? This story will make heaps more sense if you've first read "The
Fanfic Lounge: The Lord of the Rings." Or you can just read this one and
revel in the confusion.
Alternate Universe
HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's Daughter
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2189
Rating: PG some violence; death scene; language
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The usual pre-shift meeting at the Barad-dur Interrogations
division includes a reflection on past successes (and the odd failure!), an
irrational dislike of a certain Ranger and a visit from an important
black-robed personage.... AU.
Parody
HuP1: A Maiden from a Distant World by CNell
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/802004/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A modern-day girl is dropped into Middle-earth. How will the
Fellowship react?
Parody
HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa Green
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2366
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Worried about the care and maintenance of your Man of Gondor? Then
look no further! This comprehensive handbook will answer all your questions,
plus a few others that you wouldn't have thought to ask!
Parody
HuP3: Debbie Does the Fellowship by Gypsie Rose
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=177
Rating: PG-13 sexual innuendo (lots)
Romance Partners: Debbie/everybody
Summary: An over-the-top Parody Sue story, where Debbie bags *all* the cute
guys.
Parody
HuP4: If Your Nightly News Covered the Silmarillion by erunyauve
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/845927/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In tonight's news: the Havens erupt in violence, Ivrin gets a
superboost, and Eeries move north. The MESI takes a dive, and we'll have
Olorin with sports and Cirdan with weather.'
Parody
HuP5: Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=85
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Mairisuewifieth is driving Aragorn bonkers, so he seeks the help of
the one creature who can resist her lures. Gimli, of course.
Parody
HuP6: Nine Men And A Little Lady by Kielle
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/536905/1/
Rating: PG violence
Romance Partners: Legolas/f (against his will)
Summary: Once upon a time a mysterious girl joined the Fellowship...damn
her! Sick of annoying Mary Sues? Actually READ Tolkien? This may cheer you
up.
Parody
HuP7: The Gondolin Guinness by Earonn and Bladorthin
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1625301/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A story about the finest Irish Pub in the Hidden City, featuring
Turgon, Maeglin, Gothmog, Idril the stroppy barmaid and others..
Parody
HuP8: The Return of the King by Cirdan
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1210165/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The King who returns is not the King you think.
Romance
HuR1: Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond by Claudi007
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1144968/1/
Rating: PG-13 adult humor
Romance Partners: Elladan/Erestor, among others
Summary: Having recovered from his summer, Elladan returns to Rivendell just
in time to meet up with the Fellowship of the Ring.
Romance
HuR2: How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Claudi007
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/966953/1/
Rating: PG-13 adult humor
Romance Partners: Elladan/Erestor, among others
Summary: Elladan's Summer in Rivendell. Legolas shows up, Glorfindel and
Erestor get all weird, and zaniness ensues.
Romance
HuR3: I'm WHAT? by Ellbee
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1282382/1/
Rating: PG-13 suggestiveness; references to mpreg
Romance Partners: Legolas/Aragorn
Summary: Nine months in the life of Legolas, Bridget-style. You COULD call
this a sort of homage to all those MPREG stories out there.
Romance
HuR4: Mother of the Year by Alexcat
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/I_P/M/MotherOfTheYear.htm
Rating: R sexual situations; mpreg
Romance Partners: Erestor/Glorfindel
Summary: Someone becomes a mommy...er daddy ... hmmm mommy.
Romance
HuR5: My Hairy Prisoner by BittenBuggy
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=611
Rating: PG-13 sexual references
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: Legolas finally discovers his fetish.
Romance
HuR6: Sunshine and Ivy by Alexcat
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/Q_Z/S/SunshineAndIvy.htm
Rating: R sexuality
Romance Partners: Celeborn/Haldir; Celeborn/Galadriel
Summary: Making love outdoors LOOKS like fun.
Romance
HuR7: The Conversation by sheraiah
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1404704/1/
Rating: PG-13 candid conversation about relationships
Romance Partners: Elrond/Celebrian; Thranduil/OFC
Summary: Thranduil and Elrond drink a lot and try to outdo each other in
tales of erotic adventure - unaware that their offspring are listening.
Hu1: Dance With Me by Jenolas
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1636973/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas is rescued from an unwanted situation by someone he least
expects.
Hu2: Experiment Gone.Right? by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=122
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Obsessed fangirl beams canon character to her bedroom... with
interesting results.
Hu3: Fashion Statements by Grey Wonderer
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1124
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sometimes what you wear says quite a bit about you. Frodo and
Pippin both wind up making a big splash at Tuckborough in very unique
outfits. Meanwhile, Pervincia Took tries to avoid a fashion disaster and
Merry meets the new lass in town!
Hu4: Frogs by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=322
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Homesick Halflings teach their Big Folk friends a pub-game from the
Shire.
Hu5: It Was A Dark and Stormy by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1855823/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Merry, Pippin, and eventually, Sam go on a holiday and find a new
friend.
Hu6: Joy on a Summer Morning by Ellbee
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1486085/1/
Rating: PG-13 suggestiveness
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas and Aragorn indulge themselves on a lazy summer day.
Hu7: Legolas' No Good Rotten Day by Siobhan with inspiration from Cassia
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1212624/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas has a very bad morning and drags his friend Aragorn into
it.
Hu8: Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars by Aratlithiel
URL: http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/ODAABS.html
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After the Ring War in Minas Tirith - Frodo steals a cask, and
Faramir tastes his first Dwarvish Ale - with unexpected consequences,
including some very... hrm... special limericks..
Hu9: Once in Royal Imladris' City by Orophins_Dottir
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1102
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Written for the Stories of Arda group's holiday challenge (2003).
Thought I'd get it posted while it's still seasonal. A bit of total nonsense
complete with miruvor eggnog and gilded spiders!
Hu10: Out of the Frying Pan and Into the Fire by bryn_bnw
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=676
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Prior to their journey, the Fellowship remained in Rivendell for
two months. Let them not be accused of "lounging around." Of
misunderstandings, embarrassingly botched scouting missions, and enemies at
home and abroad. Proof that when in doubt, things always can get worse.
Hu11: Secrets We Dare Not Tell by Coriel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1792&cid=7508
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: (A quick bit of off-the-wall humor, a whimsical gapfiller for I
Return. A dreadful "what-if.") Legolas is attending Gimli's personal effects
the evening they both arrived in Lasgalen, when the unthinkable happens..
Hu12: Stop That, You'll Only Hurt Yourselves by AlexCat and Larian Elensar
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/A_H/E/ElflordsOnAssignment/
1_StopThatYoullOnlyHurtYourselves.htm
Rating: R implied sex; slash
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The elflords find all sorts of trouble when they go in search of
another drink.
Hu13: The Eight Companions: A Battle for an Elf's Sanity by Ellipsis
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1075270/1/
Rating: PG innuendo (some slashy)
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas and seven companions: Tuor, Elrond's sons, Elves of
Nargothrond, & a Balrog-slayer - go on a quest against the Feanorians at the
social event of Valinor for the ultimate prize: an escape from bad fanfic.
Hu14: The Ents of Wrath by Bryn (aka bryn_bnw)
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=726
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Into the depths of Fanghorn we go! Merry and Pippin
meet...Treebeard. In which our favorite Elf, Ranger, Dwarf, and Wizard have
a time sorting THIS one out, and we discover why Ents are trees. A bit of
fun nonsense. (Cameos by Eomer, Theoden, Haldir, Rumil, Galadriel, and
Celeborn.)
Hu15: The Jewel in the Crown by Alawa
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/917100/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Crown of Earnur receives a final polish on the morning Aragorn
becomes King.
Hu16: The Lady's Gift by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1617
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: As a cure for his young cousin's boredom, Meriadoc dares Peregrin
to do something rather foolish. Unfortunately for both of them, Pippin
succeeds, and puts both of them in serious trouble.
Hu17: The One Ring Reforged by Cirdan
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1008033/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: This is a very mild humor story about the One Ring. Frodo bumps
into Feanor shortly after fleeing from Boromir. Feanor reforges the shoddily
made One Ring. You'll like Sting's origins.
Hu18: The Romance that Never Was by bryn_bnw
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/840137/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Some love stories are warm and fuzzy. Others are just plain
twisted. Short parody on a familiar theme.
Hu19: The Tale of A King by Arwen Imladviel
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=98
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A King we all know reminiscing about a loss of his.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
HuA1: Alawa
The Jewel in the Crown
HuA2: Alexcat
Mother of the Year, Sunshine and Ivy
HuA3: AlexCat and Larian Elensar
Stop That, You'll Only Hurt Yourselves
HuA4: Aratlithiel
Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars
HuA5: Arwen Imladviel
The Tale of A King
HuA6: BittenBuggy
My Hairy Prisoner
HuA7: Bryn (aka bryn_bnw)
The Ents of Wrath; Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire; The Romance that
Never Was
HuA8: Bubbles
Legolas and the Stanley Cup
HuA9: Cirdan
The Return of the King, The One Ring Reforged
HuA10: Claudi007
Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond, How I Spent My Summer
Vacation
HuA11: CNell
The Fanfic Lounge: The Lord of the Rings, The Fanfic Lounge: The Two Towers,
The Story of Legolas and Enoreth, A Maiden from a Distant World
HuA12: Coriel
Secrets We Dare Not Tell
HuA13: Earonn and Bladorthin
The Gondolin Guinness
HuA14: Elana
No Living Man
HuA15: Ellbee
I'm WHAT?, Joy on a Summer Morning
HuA16: Ellipsis
The Eight Companions: A Battle for an Elf's Sanity
HuA17: Erin's Daughter
T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep
HuA18: erunyauve
If Your Nightly News Covered the Silmarillion
HuA19: Grey Wonderer
Fashion Statements
HuA20: Gypsie Rose
Debbie Does the Fellowship
HuA21: Jenolas
Dance With Me
HuA22: Kielle
Nine Men And A Little Lady
HuA23: Lindelea
Slightly Muddled, Frogs
HuA24: Orophins_Dottir
Once in Royal Imladris' City
HuA25: Pearl Took
It Was A Dark and Stormy
HuA26: Pervinca
The Lady's Gift
HuA27: sheraiah
The Conversation
HuA28: Siobhan with inspiration from Cassia
Legolas' No Good Rotten Day
HuA29: Theresa Green
HuA30: Viv
Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith, Experiment Gone.Right?
This category ends on October 10th at 11:59pm Central US time
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Msg# 2264
Adventure--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 01, 2004 - 0:21:46 Topic ID# 2264Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2
lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and
then comment beneath them.
Pre-LOTR
AP1: Betrayal by Cassia and Sio
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1078024/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence; tense situations
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After a long absence, Legolas is finally returning home to
Mirkwood. But what will he and Aragorn find when they get there? Trouble
more severe than either of them could have ever guessed is stirring in the
Wood-elves realm and treachery beyond imagining. The resulting struggle may
be more than either the elf or the ranger can handle... and if they can't,
then not only they, but all of Mirkwood is doomed.
Pre-LOTR
AP2: Black Breath by Cassia and Sio
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/995542/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence; tense situations
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When tragedy strikes, the last thing Legolas wants to do is leave
Rivendell and his friends... but when he does, what will he encounter? And
will Aragorn be able to save him from it before the elf prince loses more
than just his life?
Pre-LOTR
AP3: Change of Heart, Change of Mind by Cassia and Sio
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/761260/1/
Rating: PG-13 minor violence; tense situations
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Aragorn and Legolas are beginning to become friends, but not
everyone in Mirkwood looks kindly on this, or upon they young human ranger.
When Legolas' life is threatened, Aragorn is the one person available who
knows how to save him, but will the others listen to him before it is too
late?
Pre-LOTR
AP4: Elflings by CC
URL: http://www.angelfire.com/wv/night/elflings.html
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Elladan and Elrohir try to prove that they are old enough to leave
the house by themselves.
Pre-LOTR
AP5: Exile by Cassia and Sio
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/773753/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence; tense situations
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Aragorn is accused of murder, he and Legolas risk everything,
including their lives, to discover the truth. But just how much will justice
end up costing?
Pre-LOTR
AP6: First Meetings by Siobhan
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/742784/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Aragorn and Legolas meet for the first time. Aragorn is in his
early twenties and nearly gets killed when he ignores his adopted father's
good advice. Legolas finds him, but must fight the demons of his past in
order to help the young human.
Pre-LOTR
AP7: Icicle Cream by Khylea
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/Khylea/IcicleCream.htm
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: First snowy day in Rivendell, the twins want icicle cream.
Pre-LOTR
AP8: Mistaken Identity by Cassia and Sio
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/916415/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence; tense situations
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A dark elf with a burning hatred for men is terrorizing the
countryside around Rivendell. Unfortunately, that elf bears a striking
resemblance to Prince Legolas. An innocent visit from Mirkwood to Rivendell
lands Legolas in more trouble than he bargained for, but he is not the only
one, because when the dark elf's deadly designs become focused on Aragorn,
everyone finds themselves in danger.
Pre-LOTR
AP9: Return by Cassia and Sio
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/810392/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence; tense situations
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas and Aragorn venture into the Mines of Moria to help Balin,
only to get more than they bargained for. Meanwhile, Mirkwood is falling
into darkness. Her only hope ends up resting in the hands of the two people
she has scorned, and Legolas & Aragorn will risk more than their lives to
save her.
Pre-LOTR
AP10: Vilya by Cassia and Sio
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/959866/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence; tense situations
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A devastating earthquake rocks Rivendell and the surrounding areas,
leaving chaos and heartbreak in its wake. With Elrond on the brink of death,
Aragorn runs away, convinced that he is responsible. Legolas must try to
find him before the disaster can claim his life as well. Angry townspeople,
a flooding river and the forces of nature conspire against them all, leaving
no one unscathed. The waters are rising, Rivendell is about to be washed
away, and the one person who could save her lies dying.
A1: Adventurers Together by Lasse-lanta
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/839285/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: Glorfindel/OFC
Summary: The adventures of Glorfindel and his companion from the Last
Alliance to the Fourth Age.
A2: Bitten by Legorfilinde
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1504859/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Aragorn must travel to distant Rhun and what he finds there is much
more than he could ever imagine. When he fails to return, it is left to
Legolas to search for him and bring him home. But is he too late?
A3: Braid by Khylea
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/Khylea/Braid.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: On the outskirts of Mordor, Aragorn reminisces while braiding an
injured Legolas' hair.
A4: Fireside Tales by Legorfilinde
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1446414/1/
Rating: PG-13 some violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas and Aragorn share little known tales of their lives with
one another in this series of fireside tales.
A5: Forgotten Allies by JMac
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=51
Rating: R graphic violence
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: Legolas, Gandalf, Elrond and his sons return during WW2 to aid
Aragorn's descendents against the coming darkness and to retrieve a source
of power long forgotten.
A6: Hope Rekindled by Marta
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=177&STID=3367&S
POrdinal=3
Rating: PG somewhat graphic violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Imrahil's experiences near the end of the Battle of the Pelennor
Fields.
A7: One Of Them by Khylea
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/Khylea/OneOfThem.htm
Rating: PG references to violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Before the battle at Helm's Deep, Legolas thinks about his "They
cannot win this fight" comment to Aragorn. Legolas' POV.
A8: She Gave Me Three by Khylea
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/Khylea/SheGaveMeThree.htm
Rating: PG implied violence; battles
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Legolas' bowstring is broken after the Battle of Helm's Deep,
Gimli gives him a very special gift.
A9: The Patient by Scribe
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=60
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Doctor Aaron Stone is asked to conduct a psychiatric
examination of a patient with severe schizophrenic delusions, he finds
himself becoming the key to unlocking a mystery that alters everything he
knows of the world and his own past.
A10: The Rebel by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=790
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The day after the battle Frodo rode to Michel Delving and released
the prisoners from the Lockholes. One of the first that they found was poor
Fredegar Bolger, Fatty no longer. He had been taken when the ruffians smoked
out a band of rebels that he led from their hidings up in the Brockenbores
by the hills of Scary.--"The Grey Havens"
A11: To Save a Hobbit by Khylea
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/Khylea/ToSaveAHobbit.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What exactly did Elrond do to save Frodo from the Witchking?
A12: Wind and Fire by Adi
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=177&STID=3367&S
POrdinal=5
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Shadowfax bears Gandalf through Minas Tirith.
A13: With Hope by Melina
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1799329/1/
Rating: PG somewhat graphic violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Halbarad faces his destiny on the Pelennor fields.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
AA1: Adi
Wind and Fire
AA2: Cassia and Sio
Betrayal, Black Breath, Change of Heart, Change of Mind, Exile, Mistaken
Identity, Return, Vilya
AA3: CC
Elflings
AA4: JMac
Forgotten Allies
AA5: Khylea
Icicle Cream, Braid, One Of Them, She Gave Me Three, To Save a Hobbit
AA6: Lasse-lanta
Adventurers Together
AA7: Legorfilinde
Bitten, Fireside Tales
AA8: Lindelea
The Rebel
AA9: Marta
Hope Rekindled
AA10: Melina
With Hope
AA11: Scribe
The Patient
AA12: Siobhan
First Meetings
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Msg# 2266
Re: Numenor--Official Voting Season vote by proxy Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 01, 2004 - 0:39:08 Topic ID# 2266From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Friday, October 01, 2004 12:35 AM
To: 'MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com'
Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Numenor--Official Voting Season vote by proxy
As I mentioned before, Anna had set up with me in advance to post her votes
by proxy. She has only four votes. This is the second:
-----Original Message-----
From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Sunday, September 26, 2004 12:01 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] Numenor--Official Voting Season
Numenor
Official Voting Ballot
N7: The Sinking of Numenor by Jen Littlebottom
Simply hilarious. Writing oddball humour that bends the canon to the
stretching point without exactly breaking it is not an easy task, but this
piece manages wonderfully. The deadpan style is a definite plus, along with
all the little details (such as the l33t-speaking faeries or Haldir & Co's
biodegradable lembas-paper), which add to the humour of the story. The
presentation of the Valar as the cosmic equivalent of people who think the
famous "three plaster ducks in flights" is the height of artistry was my
personal favourite, along with the recurring "cunning plan". This is what a
Blackadder sketch set in Middle-Earth would sound like.
This category ends on October 5th at 11:59pm Central US time
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Msg# 2267
Just in case you saw the first one.... Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 01, 2004 - 0:44:11 Topic ID# 2267the YahooSite and since it hadn't yet shown up in my inbox, figured that
might have killed it.
Just in case it didn't....It was a mistake. I sent a corrected ballot with
the same comment under the correct story:
N7: The Sinking of Numenor by Jen Littlebottom.
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder
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Msg# 2268
FW: Anna's vote--correction! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 01, 2004 - 0:47:18 Topic ID# 2268Darn it. Anyway, I have already posted a correction.
I should not do this stuff after midnight, huh?
--Ainaechoiriel
_____
From: Gabrielle Lawson [mailto:spisovatelka@earthlink.net]
Sent: Friday, October 01, 2004 12:38 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Cc: MEFAStaff@yahoogroups.com
Subject: Anna's vote--correction!
I put it on the wrong story. It should have been for The Sinking of Numenor
by Jen Littlebottom: N7
Not sure how I managed to put it on the wrong story.
Counters, please count it for N7. In fact, I'm going to try to delete it
and post it again!
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder
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Msg# 2269
Re: In other news.... Posted by Cats and Werecats October 01, 2004 - 2:45:55 Topic ID# 2166I had a cat that almost died due to fleas; not from an allergic
reaction, but because he was injured and they sucked him dry.
I'm pro holistic when it comes to cat care. However, with fleas
in a multi-cat household like mine, I say "nuke 'em" and use
Frontline (NCI). If you are interested, I have a few
herbal/holistic tips stored somewhere in my PC.
I used to take my cat Garfield on a leash. Fat, orange tabby,
with a cattitude, if you get the meaning. He's not named
Garfield without good reason.
He embarrassed me too many times...
Werecat
--- Ainaechoiriel <mefaadmin@earthlink.net> wrote:
> Flea collar don't work nearly as well as Advantage or__________________________________
> Frontline, but they
> get expensive. A cat with flea allergies is so sensitive that
> even one flea
> will cause him to scratch until he bleads, or lose fur in
> patches. One flea
> tracked in from outside can live in the carpet and breed. So
> none of my
> cats go outside at all.
>
> Which is all rather moot anyway. How many of you have ever
> tried to walk a
> cat on a leash, let along job with one? (Besides, I don't
> jog, though I can
> walk faster than 4mph.)
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Msg# 2270
Re: Adventure--Official Voting Ballot Posted by legorfilinde2 October 01, 2004 - 7:35:50 Topic ID# 2264> A3: Braid by KhyleaThis is a very touching story and very well written. I enjoy
>
> URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/Khylea/Braid.htm
Khylea's writing style very much. Her interaction between Aragorn
and Legolas is also very believable.
>This was one of the first fanfiction stories I read and I loved it.
> A9: The Patient by Scribe
>
> URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=60
The plot was very unique and the story extremely well written.
There was wonderful humor throughout as well as drama.
And the Authors:
> AA5: KhyleaHobbit
>
> Icicle Cream, Braid, One Of Them, She Gave Me Three, To Save a
I always enjoy any story writtten by Khylea. Her style is very
smooth, well versed and always interesting.
>still remains with me. The writing was very clear, humorous and
>>
> AA11: Scribe
>
> The Patient
> I wanted to vote for this author because this particular story
held the reader's interest.
Legorfilinde
about cats!)
-----Original Message-----
From: Cats and Werecats [mailto:tashenubaste@yahoo.com]
Sent: Friday, October 01, 2004 1:54 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Re: In other news....
*coming out of lurkdome since the subject of cats has arisen.*
>I had a cat that almost died due to fleas; not from an allergic reaction,but because he was injured and they sucked him dry.
My 1-year-old, Zmrzlina, nearly died at 7 weeks because the had nearly
sucked her dry. She had 4% red blood cells. She's a miracle baby. The vet
really was surprised she survived and I think that a lot of that has to do
with all the people who prayed for her. She got a middle name after that:
Raphaelle "healed by God".
I'm pro holistic when it comes to cat care. However, with fleas in a
multi-cat household like mine, I say "nuke 'em" and use Frontline (NCI). If
you are interested, I have a few herbal/holistic tips stored somewhere in my
PC.
>I used to take my cat Garfield on a leash. Fat, orange tabby, with acattitude, if you get the meaning. He's not named Garfield without good
reason.
>He embarrassed me too many times...;-) I think you'd have had to start pretty early with the leash training.
This particular cat of mine is 9 years old.
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder
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it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
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Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com
am just now getting caught up on MEFA goodness. I see I've missed a
few categories already, but I'll try to make those up on Amnesty Day
(unless that would be too much? I don't want to deluge the amnesty
counters...)
Anyway, my question is this: How are we going to distribute buttons
with respect to subcats? It wouldn't be fair, in my opinion, to give
the same button to the winning story overall in a category and to the
winner of a subcat in that category (usually a lot less competition
in the subcats). Will we note things like "Drabble" or "WIP" on the
button itself? Or just not give buttons to subcat winners?
If we need to provide specialized buttons for all subcats, those of
us who made/are-making buttons will probably want to get started on
that.
Sorry if this has been addressed elsewhere; my mind is a little
hectic right now. :)
Ciao,
viv
viv
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "viv" <spacellamaprincess@y...>
wrote:
> Anyway, my question is this: How are we going to distribute buttons
> with respect to subcats?
Msg# 2274
Re: Adventure--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 01, 2004 - 14:15:58 Topic ID# 2264Official Voting Ballot
Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
Pre-LOTR
AP4: Elflings by CC
Oh, Elladan is certainly a kid. "He said to wait for a moment." That sounds
exactly lika little boy! I do like the relationship between the twins, it
seems so right and natural. I guess maybe that's because they are twins. I
also liked Celebrian and even felt a bit sorry for her since she obviously
knows that Elrond cares for her, but will never love her totally. And the end,
I guess you can never dampen the mischievous spirits of the youngsters! I'm
sure they'll find more adventures and trouble in no time!
Pre-LOTR
AP7: Icicle Cream by Khylea
Oh yes! I think you've hit with the twins! They are charming and cute without
being overly saccharine. They also do not whine as a lot of authors make them
do, especially as youngsters. This is one of my favorite stories of yours.
A1: Adventurers Together by Lasse-lanta
At first, I thought maybe it was Gil-Galad's daughter, which really interested
me, and even though it wasn't, I still wanted to know what happened to her.
I'm fond of Celeborn, so I'm glad he left Arda with the twins to go to Valinor.
Oh, and every balrog-slayer needs a child to keep him humble!
A3: Braid by Khylea
Khylea, I do so like your light hearted style! It's nice to think that Aragorn
and Legolas could share a moment like that where they laugh and remember good
things, even at Mordor's front gate. Well done.
A7: One Of Them by Khylea
I thought that was a bit out of character for Legolas as well, to be that
negative, but your story explains it very well. Certainly makes sense to me,
anyway!
A8: She Gave Me Three by Khylea
I wondered, too, what happened after Helm's Deep and the ride back to Edoras.
Again, I think you filled in the gap nicely with this story. Well done.
A11: To Save a Hobbit by Khylea
Now this is a new thing for me. Imagining Elrond actually doing battle with
the Witch King for Frodo's and his own, souls. I like it. Talk about bedside
manner! *grin*
A12: Wind and Fire by Adi
Wise Shadowfax! Good vignette. Although now I'm wondering what happened to
Shadowfax after Gandalf left for the west. Have to go look it up!
A13: With Hope by Melina
Oh. That passage in the book almost always made me tear up...about Halbarad,
never coming again to the North. Well done.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the
story, here):
AA3: CC
I like CC's Elfling arcs, she doesn't rush things to hurry up and finish the
stories. It's nice to read a story where the author has the patience to let it
develop.
AA5: Khylea
I like all of Khylea's stories in this category. They're short, but really
show a lot of emotion and/or action. She shows us a bit of each character's
personality in each fiction.
This category ends October 10th at 11:59pm Central US.
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Msg# 2275
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 01, 2004 - 14:43:59 Topic ID# 2263Official Voting Ballot
Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
Alternate Universe
HuA2: No Living Man by Elana
Oh. Poor Witch King! He really should have gotten some additions to that
prophecy!
Alternate Universe
HuA3: Slightly Muddled by Lindelea
Oh! Who would have thought? I sure hope Sam was hunky-dory in the morning!
Alternate Universe
HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's Daughter
Hee! Yeah, I giggled most of the way throught it. Especially like the
references to Maedhros and G.Galad, author!
Parody
HuP4: If Your Nightly News Covered the Silmarillion by erunyauve
Very creative. I liked Celeborn's report best I think!
Parody
HuP5: Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith by Viv
Ooh, brave Gimli, sacrificing himself for the good of the fellowship! (I loved
her full name, by the way!)
Parody
HuP8: The Return of the King by Cirdan
Oh dear. Sarcastic Gildor. I was waiting for Gil-Galad (or someone) to trip and
fall. Really. *grin*
Romance
HuR1: Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond by Claudi007
I laughed all the way through this again, and definitely related to so much of
it, having lived in my share of weird places, and known quirky people. What
really appealed to me though, was how you took the whole fellowship and ring
quest and put it in modern terms. It all made sense, like the password through
Moria, emailing Rumil to have Haldir give them a bad time, and those things.
It's hard to translate Tolkien into modern times without going overboard and I
don't think you did. I know it's difficult because I've seen others try it and
they completely lose the whole flavor of Tolkien's characters, they're so busy
having them blow stuff up or act totally un-elf like. I've always thought
Elrond had to be a bit of geek once he gave up soldiering, and that's exactly
how you had him act as well.
Romance
HuR2: How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Claudi007
First off, I find this whole fic to be patently absurd! *grin* Seriously, I
can identify with so much of what is going on in Elladan's life, I just laugh
out loud. Yes, my cat stares at me when I do that. Gildor's 130 email
forwards are too funny, I have an uncle who does that. I just don't have the
heart to tell him that I just delete them for the sake of expediency. And the
running away! Perfect, especially as no one appreciates Elladan! That is SO
college student. Oh, and the part about Elrohir being too lazy to do anything
to facilitate his laziness! Yeah, that had me laughing, and thinking about
someone I know in real life! I totally love the part where Elladan is listing
the times, after they get the car in Rohan. ...open the diet dr. pepper, there
is diet dr. pepper all over the dash.... Oh yes, that's why I always had the
center console of my beat up car filled with napkins swiped from fast food
places. Someone always spilled something!
Romance
HuR4: Mother of the Year by Alexcat
Poor Glorfindel!! Craving radishes? Yikes! And Erestor, the silly thing! Well
at leaste he learned his lessson.
Romance
HuR6: Sunshine and Ivy by Alexcat
You know, I'd almost feel sorry for Celeborn if the thought of them sunburned
and itching wasn't so darn funny. Don't blame Orophin or Rumil for laughing.
And poor Galadriel! No wonder she sailed!!
Romance
HuR7: The Conversation by sheraiah
Oh yes! I can see this for sure. *snicker*
Hu4: Frogs by Lindelea
*hee* Wow, that was not even close to what I thought it would be. Some great
limericks in there, how creative! Well done.
Hu13: The Eight Companions: A Battle for an Elf's Sanity by Ellipsis
Oh dear! But what a great way to keep the poor elves from being transported
back to stories. Loved the whole ball scene, even though it's obvious that
Feanor lost his mind, thinking that disco ball was pretty! I think you should
write the Feanorians going on their mission...
Hu14: The Ents of Wrath by Bryn (aka bryn_bnw)
Oh...Yes, I definitely saw those poor little flowers smacking themselves
against the tower!
Hu15: The Jewel in the Crown by Alawa
Oh no! Funny in a...morbid sort of way. THough I do hope he doesn't get
caught!
Hu16: The Lady's Gift by Pervinca
Aww. Yeah, Pippin is more precious I guess!
Hu17: The One Ring Reforged by Cirdan
Oh! *hee* Feanor thought it was tacky?! *snicker* He would though, wouldn't
he? Funny.
Hu18: The Romance that Never Was by bryn_bnw
And another Mary..uh, bryn-sue bites the dust!
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the
story, here):
HuA2: Alexcat
Alexcat gives the elves a little of a vaudeville feeling. She brings them down
to earth a bit and makes them more solid and real, and still funny, and still
elves.
HuA10: Claudi007
I love claudi007's totally understated humor, and his ability to tap into real
life situations that we all experience at some time or another. We can all
relate to at least a couple of the things that Elladan goes through in his
Summer Vacation and Home for the Holidays series.
This category ends on October 10th at 11:59pm Central US time
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Msg# 2276
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by dwimmer\_laik October 01, 2004 - 22:32:56 Topic ID# 2263Dwim
*****
Alternate Universe
HuA1: Legolas and the Stanley Cup by Bubbles
This is one of those stories that seems like it shouldn't work.
Hockey? Lord of the Rings? Huh? And yet, and yet... Bubbles makes this
work. Written in article form, the sports journalism style, wit, and
playful irreverence combine for a good laugh. The author clearly loves
Lord of the Rings, and she loves hockey, and blends her interests
nicely. This is not slapstick, although, there is some high-sticking,
I suspect, behind the reports of elvish brawling. The series that
accompanies this gives me hope when hockey in real life lets me down.
Give it a try—if you're among the select LOTR fans with a hockey
interest, or vice versa, you should enjoy it and the rest of the
series. Go 'Bou!
Alternate Universe
HuA3: Slightly Muddled by Lindelea
Well, that was amusing. Cute commentary, if perhaps a bit much, on
some of the more egregious modernisms one might find in LOTR fanfiction.
Alternate Universe
HuA4: The Fanfic Lounge: The Lord of the Rings by CNell
This is probably as close to a comedy classic as we have in the
fandom, other than the original OFUM. This is a great example of a
metafic humor, and it mercilessly skewers the fanfictional trends—much
as a I love slash, yes, it needs to be skewered every once in awhile,
especially when it's so deftly done. But the major fanfic trend, the
incessant repetition of Mary Sue, gets thoroughly mocked in a creative
manner which identifies no one story and yet typifies them all. If
ever the characters of LOTR were to come to life and see what had been
done to them in fiction, you can imagine they might react rather like
this. The use of Elijah Woods and Orlando Bloom as modern day foils
was inspired and well done. The author's own creation, the Secretary,
servers her purpose admirably as the eternally perky maternal school
marm-turned-executive assistant. There are a couple of good gags, but
the humor is primarily centered on the habits of the fandom at large,
just after "Fellowship of the Ring" came out in theater—it's
intelligent self-mockery (insofar as we are all members of the
fandom), and something we can all benefit from reading. And of course,
laughing until your stomach hurts is probably also good for the
abdominal muscles, right? Hilarious.
Alternate Universe
HuA5: The Fanfic Lounge: The Two Towers by CNell
The fanfic lounge returns! Although not quite as good as the original,
this fic features some great scenes: the Mary Sue coup count between
Gimli and Legolas, the inexplicable popularity of Haldir,
gender-bending gone beyond wrong, overdone plotlines (how many times
shall we return to Helm's Deep?), more bad slash, and some deserved
skewering of fannish tendencies to wound characters for drama. The
characters act as you might expect them to act throughout, if ever
they became accustomed to the metafic realm, and there are even a few
entertaining cross-over moments that keep things lively.
Alternate Universe
HuA6: The Story of Legolas and Enoreth by CNell
Now this is entertaining: we've seen the fanfic lounge as such, but
now we're taken inside a Story with Legolas, who is forced to endure
the adventures (and unwanted attentions) of Mary Sue. If one has ever
wondered what a character, did characters have independent existence
and a sense of identity, might think of the stories they appear in,
this would be the fic to read. My personal favorite scene is the
aftermath of Mary Sue's introduction to the Fellowship—great ensemble
writing, even if it is brief. Intelligent humor that makes you think
about your own stories in a new light.
Alternate Universe
HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's Daughter
I had a lot of fun reading this one. It's a bit like Dilbert does
Middle-earth, in that Barad-dûr is now a bloated bureaucracy, with all
the cast of characters that implies... if said characters were orcs,
torturers, and Nazgûl. Good for a laugh.
Parody
HuP1: A Maiden from a Distant World by CNell
Another witty skewering of a fandom favorite plot device: the modern
girl falls into Middle-earth... and the laws of gravity have their
usual effect.
Parody
HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa Green
I only wish the technical manual to my VCR were so entertaining. On
the other hand, I could also wish my VCR in any way resembled Boromir.
Very cleverly done, with more than a wink and nod to the overwhelming
force of attraction that this fictional character exerts on otherwise
sane human females (and a few males). The little cautionary notes
throughout and the "trouble-shooting" section are priceless.
Parody
HuP4: If Your Nightly News Covered the Silmarillion by erunyauve
Cute!
Parody
HuP6: Nine Men And A Little Lady by Kielle
Another favorite comic gem. Rather than catty diaries, we have the
desperate thoughts of those caught under the spell of Mary Sue.
Boromir's complaints, and Gimli's, are priceless. Galadriel's entry in
particular made me laugh, and the ending is quite fitting for
everyone's least favorite characters: Gollum and Mary Sue deserve each
other, after all. Every major character in "Fellowship of the Ring",
including Bill the Pony, get a snarky but to the point word in
edgewise via these journals, something which they surely didn't manage
throughout their journey with the ultimate fanfic evil!
Hu2: Experiment Gone... Right? by Viv
Cute, although Gollum and Gloria Gaynor should never exist together in
the same dimension! Loved this line: "And he knew a thing or two about
compulsion."
Hu8: Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars by Aratlithiel
Drunken humor is not usually my cup of tea, but I did get some
chuckles from this one. The "very special poetry" was particularly...
stimulating. Rangers have a lot of time on their hands, indeed. It was
nice to see Frodo in a good mood, and fed up with being carefully
watched by well-meaning friends.
Hu13: The Eight Companions: A Battle for an Elf's Sanity by Ellipsis
Another great metafic comedy. For some reason, I really love these.
This time, fanfiction haunts Legolas even unto Valinor, and the sons
of Maedhros only wish they had to deal with all that wretched
self-reflection and family politics in the Halls of Mandos. Features
the disco-ball of doom, personally wrought by Fëanor and abhorred by
all with a modicum of taste (even if they haven't been subjected to
dancing with Mary Sue in modern disco clubs), fast-talking Elves, and
Fëanorians behaving badly, this should make everyone laugh.
Hu15: The Jewel in the Crown by Alawa
Black humor, in its way, and yet somehow fitting. The protagonist is
not a villain in the traditional sense, just thoroughly aware of his
own self-interest. This is one of those quirky tales that probably
would get passed down in the family for generations, and you can just
imagine every king of Gondor, starting with Aragorn, letting his son
in on the secret of the crown as a sort of coming of age confession.
Well done!
Hu16: The Lady's Gift by Pervinca
My computer screen nearly got sprayed with a mouthful of tomato and
barley soup when Gimli tried to think like Pippin, at Legolas'
instigation, and subsequently concluded: "And my father always taught
me that elves were stupid." This was just delightful—I loved the
unexpected end. I loved Gimli getting jibed at every turn about how
hobbits are great burglars, as Dwarves, and especially Gimli ought to
have cause to know.
Hu18: The Romance that Never Was by bryn_bnw
Oh dear! Those dratted creatures that fall from the sky cause no end
of trouble, do they? Who would think the Fellowship would just happen
to run into four of them in a week?
Hu19: The Tale of A King by Arwen Imladviel
This story is a great example of inversion of expectations. This
particular king isn't one who went down in pseudo-history with a good
reputation, and he's not the king you'd expect. I certainly didn't.
And I will never be able to look at Beren and Lúthien's adventure the
same way after this. Read this one when the angst of the Silmarillion
starts to get to you: this should enable you to get through at least
half of the Narn i hin Húrin.
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N1: Aglarrama by Zimraphel
I'm not a sailor. Closest I've ever gotten in real life is a few
hours on a speedboad in a manmade lake. But even I could smell the
sea brine and hear the nautical pipe laments when I read this story.
The seafaring culture was so richly depicted in this piece that I
completely forgot, for a time, that I wasn't part of it.
N5: The Eleventh Hour by Zimraphel
There is plot here, of course, but the characterizations are really
what set this piece apart. All the characters, even the loathsome
Karbû, are carefully etched, easily recognizable. Sauron chilled me,
from his slither of dialogue, to his play on names, to his veiled
insults. And I never would have thought an ingenue character would
hold my interest beyond a paragraph or two, but Zaira did. Of
course, I can't say enough about the nobility of Elendil, either.
However, despite all these stellar examples of characterization,
Miriel is the centerpiece in this story. Italicized inner thoughts
show her soul within the shell, her necessary facade, and her deep
and hopeless desire for a different life. If she became a little
bitter there at the end, I can't really blame her for it. In fact, I
can only admire her and thank Elendil for giving her that poetic end
in the telling. She deserved it.
N7: The Sinking of Numenor by Jen Littlebottom
Special lembas, eh? I'll bet! This was hilarious, from hauty Gil-G
to the fable-esque "and that is why there are ..." message (utterly
brilliant). I won't ruin it for those folks who haven't read, but
this is elven marketing at it's height! Or rather, "Operation
Oropher's Cunning Plan That Proves Once and For All The Sindar Are
Better Shut Up Gil-Galad You Prick What Did You Just Say About My
Mother." In conclusion, I just have one substantive thing to say
about this story: Baaa.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the
category, not the story, here):
NA1: Jen Littlebottom
Can a mere mortal fic writer turn something as tragic and high-drama-
esque as the sinking of an entire fnarking civilization into Comedy?
Oh, yes. This author can. And that takes skill. Of course, the
breadth of that skill can only be realized fully when you compare
the humour piece to her other work. Jen does it all.
NA4: Zimraphel
You know, when I think of Numenor, I see your kiss-stealing cutey
from a Ranga of Wool, your shipbuilder from Aglaramma, your thug
from The Eleventh Hour. These are the people who populate the
Numenor of my mind. What? Tolkien didn't write them? But, I was
certain... well, nevermind. I like your Numenor better, anyway.
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Rh1: Bitter Watches of the Night by Sharpeslass
Oh, so creepy, but also sort of sad. Score one for a not-usually-
done POV character. "'Six hours, maybe ten.' It was the time I was
to have with her, to convince her of my devotion, my love." ... the
sense of plaintive desperation is so clear here.
Rh2: Complicated Allies by Sun Queen
The image of Gimli as a ferocious warrior (thankfully *not* as comic
relief) was a big heck-yeah moment for all us dwarf fanciers, or at
least it was for this one. Thank you for it.
Rh4: For the Dark by Forodwaith
There is some fancy and impressive research going on here. It shows
in the immersive texture of your Rohan. Devil's in the details, they
say, and you certainly got those details right.
Rh8: Myth and Memory by Ainaechoiriel
The chatty, folksy narrative voice just sucked me in and propelled
me to continue reading. The piece was over almost before I knew it,
and I found myself wanting it to continue. I appreciated the sense
of suspicion about elves -- "We couldn't leave an Elf loose in the
line, Yonwin said. Who knew what such a creature might do if allowed
to go freely among us?" -- which was wholly believable, given the
context. Plus, that last line pretty much summed up Tolkien's entire
point, I think.
Rh9: Namesake by Ainaechoiriel
And finally, we know who the "you" in "Myth and Memory" is. Very
smooth way of tying those two stories together. His voice also
changes subtly; you can tell that he's older in this one. Some of
the folksy charm has muted into formality, but not so much that it
seems like a wholly different character. Did you mean to progress
him as a character? If this was intentional, it was very deftly done.
Rh10: Promises to Keep by Nessime
"Battle hardened warriors they had seemed," ... This sort of
inverted sentence structure is so Rohirric, the way Tolkien might
have written it. You plucked JRR's narrative voice right out of
those Rohan chapters and recreated it here in your own story. Very
impressive. Now, I won't ruin the POV twist for those who don't want
to know, but it was charming. And believable.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the
category, not the story, here):
RhA1: Ainaechoiriel
Myth and Memory, Namesake
I hadn't read your work before, but I will definitely do so after
reading these two stories. You ease a reader into the story so
smoothly, I never felt the resistant pull of boredom, as is so
common with fic. You set the stage, but didn't overdo it; you evoked
a certain tone, but didn't take it over the top. This is good
writing.
RhA6: Nessime
Promises to Keep
I said it in the story review, but I'll repeat the point here: You
have a skill for writing Rohan as Tolkien did it. I don't know if
you can just hear the cadence, or if you've done a lot of linguistic
research and pondering, but your narrative voice is right on.
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Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 02, 2004 - 3:05:02 Topic ID# 2263not nearly as long as some of them have been. Bad news: It's still not a
short ballot. Sorry to all who are forced to count it! Stories are first and
authors follow at the bottom.
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>>Alternate UniverseThereýs something wonderfully irreverent about this story. Perhaps itýs the
>>HuA1: Legolas and the Stanley Cup by Bubbles
fact that the tone is so dry and deadpan. Itýs all so serious, and the idea
that Legolas wants to make his hair feel safe cracked me up, though not
nearly as much as the line about Elrond taking out Keanu.
>>Alternate UniverseI absolutely loved this story. When Tolkien first mentions Glorfindelýs
>>HuA2: No Living Man by Elana
prophecy about ýno living man,ý this was actually something I thought about.
I mean, there are quite a few non-living non-men type things wandering
around the LotR universe, and itýs really only a matter of time before some
of them meet up with the Witch-king. Bringing all these characters in one at
a time was a great touch, and the last line about the eagles had me rolling
on the floor. Great wordplay.
>>Alternate UniverseAs one of those silly Americans who fights a losing battle against slang,
>>HuA3: Slightly Muddled by Lindelea
Iým very fond of this fic. Lindelea shows an amazing ability to hunt down
all those little less-than-Tolkien sayings that sneak into the stories. And
having caught quite a few (and missed even more) in my own stories, I found
it absolutely hilarious.
>>Alternate UniverseThis idea is sheer brilliance, and the combination of the startled
>>HuA4: The Fanfic Lounge: The Lord of the Rings by CNell
Fellowship plus a shirtless Orlando Bloom and a bewildered Elijah Wood is
fantastic. The opening scene alone nearly had me in tears of laughter as the
Fellowship wakes up hopping mad and the two actors do their very best not to
become pincushions. Later musings on dreams and psychological constructs
only made it worse, and by the end of the first act, with everyone STILL
confused, I was ready to die. The rest of the fic settles down a bit, but
not too much. The Fellowship is introduced to caffeine, after all, as well
as the concept of slash. A good point is raised, actually. Aragorn left
Arwen to wander around with not one but EIGHT other guys. Makes one think.
>>Alternate UniverseThis sequel to the first LotR Fanfic Lounge is even better than its
>>HuA5: The Fanfic Lounge: The Two Towers by CNell
predecessor, and the Secretary has become one of my favorite OCs. I award
her the gold medal for tittering. Sheýs quite good at it. But itýs clear
that sheýs also good at a number of other things, such as keeping order in
what occasionally feels like a zoo. I love the way characters pop in and
out, complaining about various fics, and how Legolas once wandered in as a
woman, which gave me hysterics when Aragorn bumped into him. The Mary Sue
killing contest between Legolas and Gimli was great, and Eowyn teaching Xena
how to fight in Middle-earth (getting rid of all those flips that made the
show fun but less than believable) was to die for. The outtakes deserve a
mention all their own, particularly, the idea of bringing Buffy and Spike
into Middle-earth and Legolas dusting Spike before he gets a chance to find
his story. Hilarious romp on all counts!
>>Alternate UniversePoor Legolas. Poor, poor Legolas. Oh, the things we writers subject our
>>HuA6: The Story of Legolas and Enoreth by CNell
characters to! The Fanfic Lounge stories were excellent. This story, in my
opinion, blows them out of the water. The trip with Legolas through a Mary
Sue story is something I will never forget. I must admit that Legolas was
far more accommodating than I would have ever been. But though he was more
or less genial on the outside, his inner protests and bruised pride kept
cracking me up. And he tried to hard to escape! The myriad of tittering and
occasionally distracted guides were a great addition to this piece, but the
crowning moment was really when Legolas used the authorýs vagueness against
her and broke the necklace he was supposed to use in his escape. I more or
less saw it coming, but I still cheered when it happened. And when Legolas
used his charm as a weapon, I cheered again. Well, cheered and winced,
especially with the kiss, but the whole romance scene is somehow bearable
because Legolas is just using it as a means to an end. Thankfully they
pulled him from the fic before things could get too intense, though. And
thankfully he survived to go back to Rohan and hunt Orcs. Spectacular tale
that had me laughing the entire way through.
>>Alternate UniverseThe idea of morale among the Orcs was not one that would have occurred to
>>HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's Daughter
me, but it makes sense here. Distorted and warped sense, but sense
nonetheless. The line that really got to me was the idea that the word
ýminioný was detrimental and had been dropped. And the idea that the
Witch-king has been taking eloquence lessons is a great one, too. Very
irreverent and very hilarious look at the Orcs in the Interrogation
Division.
>>ParodyCNell does it again. Or, I suppose I should say does it first, because this
>>HuP1: A Maiden from a Distant World by CNell
was one of CNell's first LotR fics if I remember correctly. In any case, the
irony surrounding the summary is probably the funniest thing about this
story. Weýre more or less kept in the dark as to whatýs going on until the
very end, though I had my suspicions. And I was right, but that didnýt make
it less hilarious. A great take on the ýgirl falls into Middle-earthý idea
and a wonderful use of wordplay.
>>ParodyI love all the fics in the Ownerýs Guide series, but this is one of my
>>HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa Green
favorites. I honestly donýt even know where to begin. I love the way book
references are worked into something so simple as an ownerýs manual. Like
the idea that Boromir would be good on a white water rafting trip because he
can in boats while going over falls. Things like that just make this
fic/manual/guide click. And the offhand remarks such as distracting a kelpto
Aragorn model with a partial unwrapped Arwen unit makes it impossible NOT to
fall over laughing. And Boromir can use my strawberry scented bubble bath
any time he wants, elf or not!
>>ParodyI would be highly interested in watching ýSeven Half-Elven Brides for Seven
>>HuP4: If Your Nightly News Covered the Silmarillion by erunyauve
Mirkwood Brothers,ý though if Mary Sue gets title credits, I may reconsider.
Loved the idea that Morgoth stole some of Turgonýs players to create the
Angband franchise. Very wry sense of humor going on here.
>>ParodyItýs a good thing Mary Sues donýt fall for Gimli. Otherwise, the other
>>HuP5: Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith by Viv
members of the Fellowship would have no protection. I very much enjoyed this
fic as it combined a ravishingly beautiful and capable Mary Sue with some
very practical-minded males. I love the fact that Aragorn is entirely fed up
with whatýs-her-name and that Eowyn rode into battle to protect Eomer from
her. Leave it to Gimli to put her in her place. Great closing lines from the
dwarf. My favorite part, though, is the idea that Lýthien could drink Manwý
under the table and make chocolate-lembas fondue. Iýd pay money to see that.
>>ParodyOne of the first Tolkien humor fics I ever read, and still one of my
>>HuP6: Nine Men And A Little Lady by Kielle
favorites. I love the diary form this fic takes and how the Fellowship isnýt
quite sure how to describe the ever-changing Mary Sue, whether itýs her hair
or her eyes or even something so basic as her name. The idea that Gandalf
fell on his own sword to get out of there had me in stitches, but my
absolute favorite part of the fic was when Galadriel drones on about how a
great evil has just left Lothlýrien and that her people are safe now and
then adds, almost as a footnote, that the One Ring is also leaving. It was a
great touch with a wonderful buildup to support it, and it almost cost me a
computer screen because I think I remember drinking something at the time.
The slow downward spiral of the Fellowship as they try to ward whoever she
is off is a hilarious ride. I love that Gimli is the only one who seems able
to keep his head, though the hobbits and Bill all do a remarkable job. Props
go out to Gollum for getting rid of her once and for all. For his sake, I
hope he gets over his indigestion soon.
>>Hu4: Frogs by LindeleaThe obvious humor within the limericks was fun, but my favorite part of this
fic is the humor found in the side commentary. For example, the argument
over the word ýsnork,ý during which Sam pointed out that Strider (who hasnýt
even been referred to yet in the fic) just barely snorked while choking on
his ale as they were finishing the rhyme. Or the idea that Beregond can
quell Pippin because Pippin is now obligated to look after him and that heýs
doing the same thing to Faramir, something Faramir is only now figuring out.
Itýs the little side conversations that really made this fic for me.
>>Hu10: Out of the Frying Pan and Into the Fire by bryn_bnwThis story is by far my favorite LotR humor piece. Bar none. It has
everything. It has parody, it has irony, it has tongue-in-cheek, itýs wry,
itýs dry, itýs deadpan, itýs inane, itýs ridiculous, itýs witty, itýs sharp,
itýs cynical, itýs sarcastic, and itýs perfectly balanced by the occasional
dark cloud so that when the humor comes back around, we appreciate it all
the more. It start innocuously enough with a simple scream on the part of
Glýin and then goes swiftly downhill from there until various members of the
Fellowship are all over Arda trying to deal with one another and with their
companions. I think those truly deserving of pity in this story are
Glorfindel (who must deal with Legolas and Gimli as well as Thranduil by the
end) and Malbeorn (who must put up with the antics of Aragorn, Boromir,
Halbarad, and Rowgond.) That said, consolation prizes should definitely be
awarded to Shadowfax and Erestor, though the horse did have it coming to
him. But this brings up another gem of this story: its seemingly minor
characters. Halbarad, Erestor, and Glorfindel, for example, are full-fledged
and believable characters by the end of the story, and theyýre hilarious
ones at that. The OCs do just as well, and I would not mind reading a fic
consisting solely of Rowgond and Malbeorn. And looking at more prominent
characters through the eyes of minor characters and OCs sheds a whole new
light on Tolkienýs world. Bryn has pushed as far as she can with this story,
and in some ways itýs very much like ýThe Hobbit.ý Willing to exaggerate a
bit to get the point across. This story is essentially the incarnation of
Murphyýs Law, and it is one of my favorites.
>>Hu11: Secrets We Dare Not Tell by CorielOff the wall and bizarre. I loved it. Kudos to Legolas for some very quick
thinking. Itýs a good thing that Thranduilýs hair is close enough to match
Galadrielýs. Otherwise, Mirkwood might have found itself short one prince.
>>Hu13: The Eight Companions: A Battle for an Elf's Sanity by EllipsisThe denizens of Mandos have completely lost it, and the disco ball is proof.
That said, this is a wonderfully ingenious tale, and I love how Legolas of
Gondolin was tied into Legolas of Mirkwood, complete with a seemingly random
reference to night vision. Iým not the biggest fan of Fýanor and his brood,
so it was great to see them outmaneuvered, and the various lengths everyone
was willing to go to on Legolasýs behalf made me laugh. Theyýre all so
genuinely concerned! Of course, given what heýs been through, theyýve got
good reason to be.
>>Hu14: The Ents of Wrath by Bryn (aka bryn_bnw)Superb story that sharply twists canon and then sits back to watch as the
consequences roll in. Yes, talking trees are indeed absurd. Iým not sure
that weýve found an improvement, though. The poor Ents. Daisies just arenýt
as fearsome as oak trees.
>>Hu15: The Jewel in the Crown by AlawaOh dear. Macabre humor is always somewhat risky because thereýs a chance the
audience will be too uneasy to enjoy it, but this was handled very well. By
the time I realized what was going on, I was laughing too hard to get
squeamish. Itýs an icky thought, but also a very funny one. Great story.
>>Hu18: The Romance that Never Was by bryn_bnwIým not entirely sure why, but this story reminds me of snipe hunting. For
those not familiar with that wonderful tradition, Iýll try not to spoil it,
but I will say that it provides hours of entertainment. Giant, rolling
buildups precede the actual hunt, the hunt itself is gripping and tense, and
then the end just seems toýdrop. But the very nature of the contrast between
beginning and end is half the fun, and afterwards, everyone can look back
and shake their heads in disbelief that such a thing ever took place. This
story reminds me very much of that. I mean that as a compliment, too, just
in case people arenýt sure. I like to take groups out snipe hunting.
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>>HuA7: Bryn (aka bryn_bnw)When stepping into one of Brynýs stories, you should be prepared to have
reality warp around you. And by reality, I mean your own as well as the
storyýs. Bryn has an ability to burrow into the cracks of a canon and then
start stretching. Every possible stretch is taken. Every possible flaw a
character might have is exploited. Nothing and no one is too sacred for fun,
and when Bryn gets her claws into something, she doesnýt let go. So what
does this mean for humorous stories? It means theyýre zanny, hilarious, and
on the top of my list for recommended parodies in the LotR world. My
favorite is easily ýOut of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire.ý Brynýs ability to
put every single character into the wildest juxtapositions possible astounds
me. You can see this ability for character expression and character foiling
in her other stories, but I really do think that ýFrying Paný does it best.
Bryn also has a marvelous gift for narrative, and her phrasing keeps the
reader interested, laughing, and completely unable to set the fic aside.
Finally, in the longer work of ýFrying Pan,ý Bryn demonstrates the
understanding that humor has to be balanced by a few darker moments,
otherwise humor just canýt be taken seriously. Which is an interesting
concept, and one that Bryn seems to know very well. Creative, imaginative
author who knows her characters, knows how to get the most out of them, and
isnýt afraid to stretch the outer boundaries of canon.
>>HuA11: CNellOne of the pitfalls in writing humor, and AU/parody humor in particular, is
that removing the characters from their normal situations sometimes destroys
characterization and the reader ends up with a story that has nothing to do
with the original version aside from the name. CNell shows us how to avoid
that and how to incorporate all the hilarity possible. The short but very
funny tale about a girl who falls (quite literally) into Middle-earth had me
smiling for hours, and the Fanfic Lounge stories are really something that
no Tolkien fanfiction reader should miss. My favorite by far is the story of
Legolas trying to worm his way through and out of a fic with as little
damage to his pride and honor as possible. The number of strange Mary
Sueisms (if thatýs a word) that CNell manages to draw from and incorporate
is staggering, and the fact that Legolas is more or less able to outwit the
author in the end (and rouse the ire of the Forces) was a brilliant touch.
CNell keeps the characters in-character (unless thereýs a compelling reason
otherwise, such as the fact that they just escaped a wildly out-of-character
fic) and because of this, CNell is able to draw heavily on the devices of
humor and desperation while portraying a very Middle-earth character in a
setting that has almost nothing to do with Tolkien. Brilliant writing, a
fine eye for detail and humorous situations, and one of the most original
minds in the business. CNell, I bow to your creativity.
>>HuA14: ElanaElana demonstrates some terrific wordplay and a great senses of timing in
pulling together all those non-men, non-living creatures who happened to be
in the vicinity. Or merely in the same world.
>>HuA22: KielleI will forever respect Kielle for ýNine Men and a Little Ladyý as it was one
of the first LotR parodies I read and it remains one of my favorites. The
timing of this piece is exceptional, and I love watching different
characters react to whatever-her-name-is in different ways, from Elrond to
the Fellowship to Bill to Galadriel and finally Gollum. Kielle takes the
best (or worst, I suppose) aspects of a Mary Sue and parodies them for all
theyýre worth. Gimliýs grumbling about the possibility that Mary Sue has
gotten herself dramatically injured yet again left me gasping for breath.
Wonderful sense of comedic timing and wording, and an exceptional Mary Sue
parody.
>>HuA29: Theresa GreenThe wildly original Ownerýs Guide series is easily one of my favorites. A
very sly use of both book and movie verse goes into these manuals, and
references pop out at you when you least expect it. Which adds to the humor,
along with the wacky way in which these references are used, such as giving
Boromir a New Yearýs blower so he doesnýt wake the neighbors up with the
Horn of Gondor. Very good use of dry, deadpan humor, and kudos for one of
the more original comedic ideas.
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Well, that's all from me. I'm off to play with the adventure ballot...
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Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Jillian Baade October 02, 2004 - 5:39:03 Topic ID# 2263>Hu17: The One Ring Reforged by Cirdan'This piece of crap, why would I want it?' Feanor then demonstrates the
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>Rating: PG-13
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>Mildly funny, I thought it was great! Stings origions are indeed great,
>made by Feanor for Glorfindel.
flaws in The Ring, and goes on about cheap spells and shoddy workmanship.
I love how he reforges The Ring and destroys Sauron by doing so, but the
best bit is the silmaril he gives Frodo, forged from the music of the world.
Fitting, considering his second son is a great singer and musician.
I laugh every time I read this, my favourite of your stories Cirdan!
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> A12: Wind and Fire by AdiOh, this was a nice story. I'm not normally a "horse" person, but this
is one of those that manages to make the horses into vibrant
characters without humanizing them. In fact, Adi makes the point
explicitly: these are not like Men. As she says, "We do not love
battle, my brothers and I, not as Men seem to". Throughout "Wind and
Fire" the point is made that horses, and particularly the Mearas, are
different from Men; they may serve Men but do so out of their own
sense of honour and what is right.
I also loved how you captured the relationship between the Mearas and
their riders: it is the Mearas who choose the human, not the other way
around. And the fact that Shadowfax chose Gandalf instead of, say,
Théoden really struck me. I also liked the horses' version of
something akin to pacifism:
"Will it [war] make the grass grow any greener, or the foals any
faster, or the wind any sweeter, or the fire any brighter?"
Perhaps not strict pacifism, but I thought it was a neat look at
someone questioning the value of war -- of all characters, a warhorse!
Very nice story.
Marta
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Drama and Romance, 10/6/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 05, 2004 - 1:55:28 Topic ID# 2297
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Romance
HuR1: Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond by Claudi007
One of my all-time favorites. I laughed until I cried. I often re-
read this one, as well as others in the series. Keep up the good work.
Romance
HuR2: How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Claudi007
One of my all-time favorites. I'm always delighted to re-read this
Romance
HuR7: The Conversation by sheraiah
cute and enjoyable.
Hu17: The One Ring Reforged by Cirdan
Very enjoyable. I loved your view of Feanor, and his attitude toward
Sauron and the work of other hands is right on target.
Official Voting Ballot
Rh1: Bitter Watches of the Night by Sharpeslass
Very creepy. You did a good job handling the sex so that it wasn't
at all sexy. Your Grima doesn't have many illusions about himself,
does he? I found the curse he flung at her at the end particularly
notable.
Rh2: Complicated Allies by Sun Queen
We as readers are so used to the idea of elves and dwarves that it's
interesting to view them through the eyes of one who doesn't know or
understand them. Very nice imagery.
Rh4: For the Dark by Forodwaith
You draw a sad but not sentimental picture of a man who can no
longer ride in a rider's world. Your character is so matter-of-fact
about everything, that I found I couldn't pity him, even at the end.
A very refreshing change in an angst-filled fandom.
Rh5: Gastings Night by Dwimordene
This gave me a shiver. Very imaginative and atmospheric.
Rh8: Myth and Memory by Ainaechoiriel
Interesting to see Legolas from the point of view of someone who had
never seen an elf before, and had no idea what to expect. I love the
voice you've given your young door warden, and the contemplative
mood of it all.
Rh10: Promises to Keep by Nessime
Oooh, very cool and original take on this scene. Excellent job.
Msg# 2300
MEFAwards Drama and Romance Official Ballot Posted by Jo Dancingtree October 05, 2004 - 15:21:18 Topic ID# 2297RmI10: Winter Fire by Cuthalion
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1699534
Rating: R Rape, Violence, sexual situations
Romance Partners: Damrod/f
Summary: If Middle Earth was real, and Tolkien recorded what he saw there, could another visitor be sent, and for what purpose?
I was intrigued when Cuthalion told me she intended to write a "serious mary sue" - but, considering the efforts in that genre I had already seen, I wasn't certain it could be done. I am enormously impressed that she succeeded, not only in making a serious story of it, but spinning a tale of depth and pathos that I will never forget.
The heroine is utterly human and believable, and the rationale for her arrival in Middle Earth is convincingly handled. The supporting characters come to life in all their varied strengths, vanities, foibles, and (in one case) villainy. Ioreth, the woman in the Houses of Healing who won fame for saying, "The hands of the King bring healing," is a delight, tart and sweet as a wildling apple. And the other half of the romance - Damrod, who was hardly more than named by Tolkien - becomes a man of fortitude and tenderness, and sexier than Brad Pitt. And Merry - oh my, I wouldn't have guessed that Merriadoc is such a devil with the ladies!
I'll never again read Tolkien's account of the siege of Minas Tirith without feeling that I know much more than he's telling me, because Cuthalion showed me "the rest of the story." Thanks for transporting me to Middle Earth, right along with Noerwen.
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Msg# 2301
AW: [MEFAwards] Numenor--Official Voting Season Posted by elanor of aquitania October 05, 2004 - 15:44:47 Topic ID# 2301Official Voting Ballot
N6: Every Good and Perfect Gift by Nessime
A very well researched story. I even have somewhat the feeling of an
encounter with Numenoreans though Tar-Elendil, Irimon and Silmarien seem
rather subdued people or should I write refined ? Well written with many
delightful details concentrating on the forging of the bond between the line
of Elros and the house of Andunie through Silmarien. Very well written. In
my mind there is not enough vigour. If one reads the story of Erendis in UT
one has the feeling of real and strong persons rubbing themselves raw with
the demands of real life. Here the protagonists seem to float in a private
world of their own apart from reality. Thus this was a predominantly nice
story as maybe behoves a wedding story (though not in my dark mind).
N4: Renuvammet by Zimraphel
Nice story. Elendil is very believable described. Elrond seems very aloof,
but this feeling I had also in LotR.
N5: The Eleventh Hour by Zimraphel
Machinations of Sauron as an explanation why Tar-Miriel did not leave with
Elendil. I could follow you. But for me this queen felt very human, there
was for me no feeling of Numenorean ancestry.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
NA2: Nessime
Every Good and Perfect Gift
A good and very dedicated writer. Her words were very well chosen. The
spoken language was written believable. I personally would like to feel a
bit less of well-intended detachedness from the real world and a bit more of
real person ambivalences. Nevertheless I get a feeling of Numenoreans in
this story.
NA4: Zimraphel
Aglarrama, Renuvammet, The Eleventh Hour
Interesting stories just about such pivotal points in Numenorean history
also I would like to know more about.
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Msg# 2302
Re: Rohan--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 05, 2004 - 15:44:52 Topic ID# 2160Rohan
Official Voting Ballot
Rh2: Complicated Allies by Sun Queen
Rh2: Complicated Allies by Sun Queen
This fiction is excellent! Itýs one of the best Iýve read about Helmýs deep, full in its description of how terrible it must have been. The description of Legolas and Gimli as terrifying killing machines is wonderful. I donýt think the soldier is sure that their allies are a lot better than their enemies. And it is also nice to read some bookverse Helms Deep though I love movie verse as well.
Rh10: Promises to Keep by Nessime
Rh10: Promises to Keep by Nessime
Bravo! Well met! This is a very well done story. As important as the horses were to the Rohirrim, why wouldnýt a horse know his mission? I was actually very glad that he saw the honor in Aragorn and that he was happy to carry him. I also liked the way Eomer talked to him as if he understood.
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Msg# 2303
Re: Adventure--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 05, 2004 - 17:58:15 Topic ID# 2264aren't that long!
Adventure
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>>Pre-LOTRFun little story of misadventure. I enjoyed Elrohirýs very pragmatic
>>AP4: Elflings by CC
approach to life, and his realization that if Elladan went back out again,
he would follow no matter how foolish it seemed. A somewhat mature attitude
for someone so young, but I think it worked.
>>A6: Hope Rekindled by MartaGreat vignette linking the moment Imrahil assumed command in Minas Tirith to
the moment he discovered that Eowyn was still alive. Itýs a short tale, but
it squeezes quite a bit in. There is hope in the beginning as Imrahil
realizes that Rohan has arrived, but Gandalfýs words about an enemy within
the Citadel cut that hope down. Hope is still there, but itýs flagging, and
it flags even more when Imrahil steps out onto the Pelennor. I love the idea
of empty words being replaced by action, and I like the thought that Imrahil
doesnýt count his kills. Itýs an interesting contrast to Legolas and Gimli
in Helmýs Deep. And then come the Rohirrim, bearing the king, and the title
earns its keep with Imrahilýs realization that Eowyn is breathing. It seems
a small thing in the midst of the battle, but it gives Imrahil hope, and
that was shown very well in this story.
>>A7: One Of Them by KhyleaGood expansion of a scene in the movie. Khylea doesnýt simply parrot what
was said and done but expands upon it, eventually leading us into a new
scene in which Legolas is alone with his thoughts and his memories. The
realization of tension and the eventual realization of hope are very well
portrayed.
>>A9: The Patient by ScribeýThe Patientý is easily one of my favorite LotR fics, and has been for quite
some time. Future fics that involve the modern world are difficult to pull
off well, but Scribe seems to thrive on the challenge that such stories
involve. Culture shocks and basic communication problems are all addressed,
things that are often overlooked in other fics. The idea that Legolas,
Elrohir, and Elladan canýt communicate with those around them is brilliant,
and it works very well to establish initial complications. I love the
character of Eve, who has taken the fire and rebellion of Arwen to the next
level, but my favorite reincarnation of an LotR character is probably Dr.
Aaron Stone. He has many of Aragornýs gentler traits, but he lacks the rough
edge that years as a Ranger created in his former self. Gandalf as was an
interesting character, too, and I loved the slow unraveling of what happened
to him and why he could remember some things with frightening clarity but
was completely at a loss when it came to other things. Well, for that
matter, the slow unraveling of who he really was served as a great plot
device. The elves were brilliant, and Legolasýs sudden love of soda made me
laugh. But perhaps the best part of this fic is the way the plot moves. It
speeds up when necessary, slows down to give the illusion of a breather, and
then roars back into action. And itýs the action that really makes this
story tick, because thereýs plenty of it and itýs told very, very, very
well. The combination of Middle-earth battle techniques and modern day
weaponry was exhilarating, and when used in the hands of one of LotRýs most
talented authors, it became an exciting,
impossible-to-set-aside-until-finished journey.
>>A10: The Rebel by LindeleaLindelea writes excellent hobbit stories, and I consider this to be one of
the best. I love the respect and admiration that other hobbits have come to
give Fredegar, and through the flashbacks, we see just how much Freddy has
changed in order to deserve that respect. There are many hints of his
courageous side in the flashbacks, but they come out in full force when the
ruffians start making trouble. I cheered when the other hobbits covered for
him, and I cheered even more at the bravery going on behind the scenes, such
as Rosie managing to give water to the prisoners. It would be easy for this
story to descend into a mindless slog across the Shire toward the Lockholes,
but it keeps its focus, it draws the reader in through vivid flashbacks, and
the small moments of courage from ordinary hobbits shine all the more in the
dreary situation. Last but not least, I love the fact that Frodo immediately
understands why Freddy wants to stay in the rain. Very nice touch, and a
reminder that Freddy wasnýt the only hobbit to suffer.
>>A12: Wind and Fire by AdiWow. I hadnýt read this story until the MEFAwards, and Iým very glad that it
was nominated. This is a very powerful look into the mind of Shadowfax, and
a very sophisticated look it is. Shadowfax values the simple things. He
values wind and rain and grass. And in these priorities, he is very much a
horse. But he is also one of the Mearas, and he understands that there are
things beyond the wind and the rain and the grass, and that somehow, his
actions will play into a much larger picture. He knows there are greater
things at work and he knows that Gandalf is working on behalf of these
greater things. I like his musings on the questions of the other horses when
they wonder what war will accomplish in the end. And though Shadowfax might
agree with them to an extent, he can also glimpse something bigger at work.
Very simple and yet profound observations from my favorite horse, and in the
end, his motivation encompasses what each of us desire at heart: the freedom
to run where we choose.
>>A13: With Hope by MelinaI love the character of Halbarad, and this story does him justice. Set in
the midst of action and the terrible battle of the Pelennor Fields, this is
a surprisingly quiet little vignette. It starts out in Halbaradýs head as he
tries to keep Aragorn in his sights, which is great way to begin any
Halbarad characterization, and then moves into the actual battle. The action
is quick and soon over, but the consequences are not. I very much appreciate
the storyýs assertion that Aragorn realizes he has other duties and cannot
keep Halbarad from death. He lets him go because for all that Halbarad is
worth to Aragorn, he is still only one man on a battlefield. Heartwrenching
tale, but one with a glimmer of hope and satisfaction in the end.
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AUTHORS
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>>AA11: ScribeI donýt think I can say enough about Scribe. As an action writer, I would go
so far as to say that she has no equal. Most of her stories include a
healthy dollop of action, but it never gets old and she always finds a new
way to portray battles. Sometimes she sticks with a single viewpoint and
other times she hops around from perspective to perspective, never losing
the thread of the narrative but giving us a glimpse as to all facets of
whatever battle sheýs describing. And battles arenýt the only action she
does well. She also excels at chase scenes, which sounds strange as chase
scenes usually only work on the big screen. But Scribeýs gift for words and
pacing brings them alive in her stories. She has a firm handle on her
characters, and in her modern stories, those characters who are
reincarnations of former individuals are a unique blend of new
characteristics and old tendencies. Scribe is one of the best ensemble
writers out there, able to give each character his or her due and still move
the story forward. Her ability to switch into an omniscient narrative during
key moments of action is an amazing talent that is used sparingly, but when
it does come into play, it fleshes out the action so well that readers are
left to wonder how action could be written any other way. Exciting, epic,
and creative stories are Scribeýs forte, and nobody does them better than
she does.
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Msg# 2304
AW: [MEFAwards] Rohan--Official Voting Ballot Posted by elanor of aquitania October 05, 2004 - 19:21:19 Topic ID# 2304Official Voting Ballot
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Rh8: Myth and Memory by Ainaechoiriel
A very lively story, well rendered, gripping. I felt the youthful curiosity
and the mischief, how they mutually spurred themselves on to spy on the Elf.
Delightful how they wait for an quarter of an hour for the wrath of the Elf
before they realize that Legolas sleeps though Yonwin made such a clamour
loud enough to wake all around. Though I do not like movie!verse here it is
well used (Aragon falling from the cliff, Elves in Helms Deep).
Rh9: Namesake by Ainaechoiriel
I liked the serenity with which the old man speaks to his grandchild
remembering his friend Yonwin fallen in the battle against the wargs a long
time ago. And how he sees in the boy his friend of old though most probably
the boy's mannerisms have already blotted out many of the old man's
remembrances. Yet he doesn't feels it, for him the boy enlivens the memory.
Moving.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
RhA1: Ainaechoiriel
Ainaechoiriel writes lively real person's feelings, believable renderings of
humans. I feel them not to be distinctively Rohirrim personalities, though
allusions to Rohirrim culture appear abundantly. In "Myth and Memory" the
protagonists are perhaps simply too young for having already developed full
fledged Rohirrim personalities. In "Namesake" the active warrior's time is
long left behind. I think my feeling originates from the word choices.
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Msg# 2305
Re: Rohan--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Tom and Anna Vandecar October 05, 2004 - 23:07:03 Topic ID# 2160----- Original Message -----
From: Ainaechoiriel
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Sunday, September 26, 2004 12:00 AM
Subject: [MEFAwards] Rohan--Official Voting Ballot
Rohan
Official Voting Ballot
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Rh10: Promises to Keep by Nessime
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1789
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Third Marshal of the Riddermark and the Ranger who would be
King meet for the first time on the plains of Rohan. Told from a slightly
different viewpoint.
Comments: The title of this piece was what first drew me to it, my being a great fan of Robert Frost and of that poem in particular, but the writing was what kept me reading. A short piece, but wonderful insight from an unexpected viewpoint, bringing to mind another line from Frost, 'the tale of earth's unhonored things'. I always enjoy seeing a well-known passage related from the viewpoint of a little-known character, giving a nod to the lesser players in the story. I found it as enjoyable as the larger story it stems from. Good work.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
RhA6: Nessime
Promises to Keep
Nessime's writing has a cadence and a rhythm that keeps the story flowing along and draws the reader in. I've yet to read a story by her that I didn't enjoy.
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Msg# 2306
Re: Rohan--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Tom and Anna Vandecar October 05, 2004 - 23:37:00 Topic ID# 2160Official Voting Ballot
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N2: Celestial Quartet by Thevina
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=407
Rating: R sexual scenes
Romance Partners: m/f
Summary: Four vignettes spanning three ages of Middle-earth, multiple geographies and races, and several points of view. What binds them together: the night sky above, whether starry or clouded, and a sparkling gem that resists disappearing into the mists of time.
Comments: This is an intriguing piece with many different layers and equally different players. From Numenor to Hobbiton to Rohan and back to Hobbiton, these assorted and unexpected characters are all woven together by a special jewel and shooting stars. A very intricate story which shows the author's knowledge of Tolkien and also her excellent writing skills.
N6: Every Good and Perfect Gift by Nessime
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1757
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Tar-Elendil shares a private moment with his daughter Silmarien on the eve of her wedding.
Comments: Yet another deftly woven creation. The gap-filling aspects were well thought out and the use of the Arabeth was also well thought out, both as a means to demonstrate the wisdom of Finrod and the faith of those who understand the Gift of Man, and also as a well-chosen segway for the presentation of the Ring of Barahir. The characterizations are excellent, even of the old nurse who has but a few lines.
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Humor and Adventure Voting, 10/6/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 06, 2004 - 1:16:28 Topic ID# 2296
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Drama and Romance, 10/6/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 06, 2004 - 1:16:32 Topic ID# 2297
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Drama and Romance, 10/7/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 06, 2004 - 2:44:37 Topic ID# 2309
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Humor and Adventure Voting, 10/7/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 06, 2004 - 2:44:58 Topic ID# 2310
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RmHob1: A Little Night Music by Ariel
I almost never read hobbits, but what a delightful surprise.
Beautiful, sexy, warm! It is what being in love is about, getting
all hot for each other even after that first flush of lust is gone.
Very sensual without being crude. I love that Sam would just stand
in the shadows and watch her bath. This is a couple that truely
enjoys each other, that knows how to make it last all night. They
know that making love is more than a simple physical reaction. It is
knowing each other, and part of making a life together. Very well
done.
not keep up with my e-mail as that was a lower priority than sight-seeing
and going to the LOTR exhibit in Boston!
I'm back now, but it will take me some time to get back to sorts. My friend
forgot to take care of my cats. All of them were hungry and thirsty and some
of the kittens were stuck and so covered with urine. It was awful.
Obviously, they are a higher priority than e-mail right now.
So, rest assured, I will get back here and soon at that. Just probably not
right away.
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Msg# 2313
Re: Was out of town.... Posted by Larian Elensar October 06, 2004 - 11:26:13 Topic ID# 2312--- Ainaechoiriel <mefaadmin@earthlink.net> wrote:
> I was out of town since Saturday and, though I had internet access, I did
> not keep up with my e-mail as that was a lower priority than sight-seeing
> and going to the LOTR exhibit in Boston!
>
> I'm back now, but it will take me some time to get back to sorts. My friend
> forgot to take care of my cats. All of them were hungry and thirsty and some
> of the kittens were stuck and so covered with urine. It was awful.
> Obviously, they are a higher priority than e-mail right now.
and years ago! How you can forget to feed a
living thing is beyond me! And I take it a cat
had kittens? That's even worse! Hope everything
is okay with them!
Naresha
--- Ainaechoiriel <mefaadmin@earthlink.net>
wrote:
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My friend forgot to take care of my cats. All of
them were hungry and thirsty and some of the
kittens were stuck and so covered with urine. It
was awful. Obviously, they are a higher priority
than e-mail right now.
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Re: Was out of town.... Posted by LizaLlinos@aol.com October 06, 2004 - 12:02:31 Topic ID# 2312mefaadmin@earthlink.net writes:
> My friend forgot to take care of my cats. All of them were hungry andthirsty and some
> of the kittens were stuck and so covered with urine. It was awful.Yikes!
> Obviously, they are a higher priority than e-mail right now.
You take care of the babies - would you like anyone to come round and take
care of the friend? What was s/he thinking!!
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Msg# 2316
Re: Was out of town.... Posted by beleg1cuthalion October 06, 2004 - 12:13:01 Topic ID# 2312mess with you poor cats! Take care of them first!
Cúthalion
Msg# 2317
Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 06, 2004 - 12:36:09 Topic ID# 2317Official Voting Ballot
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Drabble
DD1: Alone by Oakenshield
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/O/Oakenshield/Alone.htm
Rating: PG character death
Romance Partners: Aragorn/Arwen
Summary: Another death drabble, Arwen this time.
Drabble
DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1537
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Cadence sung by Eowyn on the long ride to the fields of Pelennor.
Drabble
DD3: Dragons by Lindorien
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1210&cid=4878
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir considers how tight memories can cling.
Drabble
DD4: Fealty and Service by Marta
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1501
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Denethor's thoughts as Faramir swears fealty to Gondor on coming of
age.
Drabble
DD5: Fear! Fire! Foes! by Marta
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1520
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A drabble about Fatty's escape from the Nazgul attack on
Crickhollow.
Drabble
DD6: Lament To Lorien by Naresha
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/N/Naresha/LamentToLorien.htm
Rating: R implied sexual situations
Romance Partners: Haldir/Aragorn
Summary: Reflections on Haldir's death by those who loved him - in drabble
form.
Drabble
DD7: Sundered by Oakenshield
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/O/Oakenshield/Sundered.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Elros' dying thoughts.
Drabble
DD8: The Call by Alexcat
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/A_H/C/TheCall.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: We all long for home.
Drabble
DD9: The Silent Street by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1535
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Beregond's thoughts as he fights for his Captain's life.
Drabble
DD10: The Steward and the King by Marta
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1717
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Thorongil observes a young Boromir playing.
Gap-filler
DG1: A Silence Covered in Stone by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1564870/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In the last days of the Ring War, Thranduil and Celeborn meet in
the ruins of Dol Guldur and reaffirm their friendship in the midst of the
Shadow's last, most terrifying secret.
Gap-filler
DG2: Cry of the Gull by Ithilien
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/617622/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas finds himself battling his own mind as well as evil forces
during the battle at Pelargir. Missing scenes from ROTK featuring Legolas,
Gimli, Argaorn, Elladan and Elrohir.
Gap-filler
DG3: Father and Sons by Dwimordene
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=6&SPOrdinal=1
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Insight into LoTR's most famous dysfunctional family that covers a
span of years, from Faramir's adolescence through Sam and Frodo's journey
through Ilthilien. The personal is political when you're the Steward and his
family.
Gap-filler
DG4: The Fire Sermon by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/578654/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Faramir/Eowyn
Summary: A gapfiller set during RoTK. Faramir and Eowyn in the Houses of
Healing. Companion piece to "What the Thunder Said."
Gap-filler
DG5: Theodred's Last Command by Adara\BoromirFan (Carol Kyser)
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1414101/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Short vignette about Prince Theodred's death. Fills in the gap left
by Tolkien about the death of the Prince of Rohan at the First Battle at the
Fords of the Isen.
Incomplete
DI1: A Diamond in the Storm by SilverMoon Lady
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=721
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: Pippin/Diamond
Summary: Something sinister is happening near the northwestern border of the
Shire and Pippin is determined to find out what is going on. Post LOTR.
Incomplete
DI2: Between Two Worlds by Marnie
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1773681/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Young Ereinion, sent away from his father to live in a Sindar
Haven, feels torn between two worlds. Features Cirdan, Celeborn and
Gil-galad.
Incomplete
DI3: Changing Perceptions by Nerwen Calaelen
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1279068/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The end of the Ring War and the changes that occur as a result of
it for the mysterious land of Khand.
Incomplete
DI4: Fear by Ariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1215350/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence; injury; child abuse
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A life threatening fall endangers young Frodo Baggins and his
brooding Brandybuck cousin knows he was to blame for it. Guilt can drive
you to many things, even the contemplation of murder.
Incomplete
DI5: Free Fall by Lindorien
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=722
Rating: PG-13 angst
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Why was Boromir sent to the Council instead of Faramir if Faramir
was the one who had the dreams? PJ gave you one answer; this fic gives a
better one.
Incomplete
DI6: Marinus Stiria by bryn_bnw
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=853
Rating: PG-13 violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Following a violent confrontation with Aragorn, Legolas sets out
with aid of Gimli to rid Gondor of the Sea Stone. Sensing certain disaster,
Aragorn is hard on their heels. Unfortunately, so too is the head Corsair of
Umbar….
Incomplete
DI7: Mirrors in the Mind by Etharei
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1283157/1/
Rating: R violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The dungeons of Barad-dur are vast and deep, and not all evils
departed with the destruction of Sauron. An ancient evil is no longer bound.
Incomplete
DI8: Not Fire, Not Ice by CinnamonGrrl
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1583198/1/
Rating: PG some violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sequel to The Fall of Night. Naure is orc-napped whilst on her way
to Lothlorien to regain her memories. Haldir sets out to rescue her, but
will he get more than he bargains for?
Incomplete
DI9: The Captain's Last Gift by Lady Aranel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1467
Rating: R adult themes
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: Lalaith is a courtesan in Minas Tirith who has always made her own
choices. As the war ends and the lords of the land begin to depart the city
for home, Lalaith wonders if she has overstayed her time in a profession
that is unforgiving. As she longs for a love that could never be, will a
visit from a stranger show her that her feelings are not in vain and that
beauty is in the eye of the beholder?
Incomplete
DI10: Theodred's Tale by Elana
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1414&cid=5934
Rating: R violence
Romance Partners: Theodred/f
Summary: Sequel to Elana's Tale, WIP. Stunned by news of Saruman's
treachery, Theodred must ready Rohan for war, while dealing with the
machinations of Grima Wormtongue and the decline of his father King Theoden.
Can he keep the secret of his love for Elana, mother of a half-orc child?
How can he stay true to all his varied loyalties, as the Battle of the Fords
of Isen grows ever closer? AU.
Incomplete
DI11: While We Dwelt in Fear by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1364027/1/
Rating: G some violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The story of the families of Merry, Pippin, Frodo and Sam as they
face the troubles of the Occupation of the Shire.
LOTR
DL1: Adaptation by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1175
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas tries to come to grips with the mortal gift of death after
the last battle and apparent loss of one of the Fellowship's most beloved
members.
LOTR
DL2: Ashes, East Wind, Hope that Rises by ErinRua
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=696
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: EOMER - as seen through his eyes - the peril of Rohan, the
duplicity of the Wormtongue, and the coming of hope to the Riddermark. Cast
includes Eomer, Aragorn, Theoden, Grima, Eowyn, Hama, Gimli, Legolas and
several good horses. Gap-filler. Drama, action, angst. Non-slash.
LOTR
DL3: Bitter as Blood by Shadow975
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1230229/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: On Caradhras, Boromir considers the difficulties he faces; years
after his companion's fall, Aragorn wonders what part he played in it.
LOTR
DL4: Doom of Man by Alexcat
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/A_H/D/DoomOfMan.htm
Rating: PG some violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What really happened at Mount Doom.
LOTR
DL5: Final Flight by Trinity Helix
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/T/TrinityHelix/FinalFlight.htm
Rating: PG-13 violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Leading the elves to Helm's Deep, Haldir finds what he is looking
for.
LOTR
DL6: For Gondor by Avon
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1256
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir's charge - a sound picture. Movie-verse. Marta discussed
the idea of people writing a scene using one sense only and this is where
that idea took me. Rather experimental.
LOTR
DL7: LifeWatch by Lindelea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1273828/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Cormallen story from Merry's viewpoint. Companion to poem "Too
Young."
LOTR
DL8: Pippin's Crucible by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1691156/1/
Rating: PG descriptions of carnage
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: This is a first person account of Pippin from his run through Minas
Tirith to find Gandalf in order to save Faramir through to his being with
Merry after Aragorn heals him.
LOTR
DL9: River Flowing by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=2&chapter=1
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: a very minor character gets a moment in the sun: one fine day in
Ithilien, while Sam and Frodo wait with Mablung and Damrod, a Haradrim troop
comes marching, marching.…
LOTR
DL10: Spartan Letters by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=8&chapter=1
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Some have questioned why Denethor's spirit was broken so swiftly
when Faramir was brought back wounded from the route of the Pelennor.
LOTR
DL11: The Mirror of Galadriel by Varia Lectio
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=807
Rating: PG implied violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: As Galadriel gazes into her Mirror, she sees different fates for
those in the Fellowship of the Ring.
LOTR
DL12: Thoughts by netkerosene
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1326060/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Eomer's thoughts about Eowyn riding to war with the Rohirrim.
LOTR
DL13: Veiling of the Sun by Maggie (M. N. Theis)
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=172
Rating: PG-13 graphic violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A twist of fate during the events at Parth Galen leaves Boromir
alive and desperately seeking the One Ring. Succombing to the dark seduction
of the Ring, Boromir joins league with Sauron's forces as Legolas is
captured by Saruman's Uruk-hai. The res tof the Fellowship struggle to
remain together, traveling across the Plains of Rohan in hopes of recovering
their lost members, and the quest to destory the Ring becomes a more trying
journey than any imagined.
LOTR
DL14: Wizard by M. Sebasky
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3499
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In a moment of quiet after the battle of Pelennor Fields, Gandalf
reflects upon those who have already departed and those who may yet be lost.
Poetry
DP1: Beth Gorthaur Aglar Beleth by Arwen Imladviel
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=841
Rating: PG strong imagery
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A scribe copying old manuscripts in Minas Anor found this: a poem
in Quenya, titled by a different hand in Sindarin: "The words of Sauron,
waning in glory." Probably not genuine.
Poetry
DP2: Boe Bedich Len, Haldir? by Chathol-linn
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=667
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Haldir's experience at Helm's Deep. Movie-verse.
Poetry
DP3: From Fangorn Forest to Helm's Deep, Canto I The Forest by Chathol-linn
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=561
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The trees experience a vision when the Three Hunters enter Fangorn
Forest. Inspired by brancher's "They Say of the Elves," mentioned with
permission.
Poetry
DP4: Rescue of the Rowan by Chathol-linn
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=778
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A dream. Two mortal children fall to Rivendell, where Elrond tests
their powers.
Poetry
DP5: So Close, Yet Forever Away by Naresha
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/N/Naresha/SoCloseYetForeverAway.htm
Rating: R implied sex
Romance Partners: Haldir/Aragorn
Summary: Aragorn remembers.
Poetry
DP6: The Day the Sun Didn't Rise by Tinni
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1836029/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A retelling of a Japenese myth in Tolkien's world.
Poetry
DP7: The Love Song of Tar-Meneldur Elentirmo by Thevina
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=450
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A short poem from the "Star-watcher" king of Numenor.
Poetry
DP8: The Vain Songs by Nol
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1486803/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: Maedhros/Fingon
Summary: Fingon and Maedhros in beauty, war, mad love and above all things,
vanity.
Post-WOTR
DPoW1: A Change of Seasons by runningscared
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1066
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A story of unending friendships, in which Legolas speculates upon
lost companions, his own existance, and The Sea... Set after Aragorn's
passing and stays true to JRRT's work (not AU).
Post-WOTR
DPoW2: Adamo Invenio Discovery of Love by Lasse-Lanta
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1255745/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sequel and finale to the "Chance Meeting" series.
Post-WOTR
DPoW3: As the Gentle Rain by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1599
Rating: PG-13 violence; graphic torture
Romance Partners: Diamond/Pippin; Faramir Took/Goldilocks;
Ferdibrand/Pimpernel
Summary: The Travellers return to Gondor for a visit, revisiting old haunts,
stirring old memories, encountering old wonders and old dangers, and new
ones.
Post-WOTR
DPoW4: Chance Meetings by Lasse-Lanta
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1176377/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Two strangers, a chance meeting - what will happen?
Post-WOTR
DPoW5: Closing the Book by Gonzai
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=309&SPOrdinal=1
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After Sam departs for the Grey Havens, Merry and Pippin set out on
their final journey to Edoras and Gondor. Based on the timeline in Appendix
B. Angst and sadness.
Post-WOTR
DPoW6: Dance With Desire by Lasse-Lanta
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1249699/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Part 4 in the "Chance Meetings" series.
Post-WOTR
DPoW7: Fate, Fatum Or Perhaps Fari by Lasse-Lanta
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1232961/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sequel to "Chance Meeting" & "Stolen Moment."
Post-WOTR
DPoW8: Immortal by Ainaechoiriel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/944263/1/
Rating: PG dying characters; no actual death portrayed
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Merry and Pippin, approaching the end of their lives, have a
request to make of Legolas.
Post-WOTR
DPoW9: Little Ones of Their Own by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1571927/1/
Rating: PG adult references to pregnancy
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Peregrin and Diamond Took are expecting their first child.
Post-WOTR
DPoW10: Paths We Trod, Wrongs We Bore by Coriel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=724
Rating: PG violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Thranduil at last makes up his mind to follow his family into the
West, but first he must confront again some of the slings and arrows of his
past.
Post-WOTR
DPoW11: Perchance to Dream by M. N. Theis
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1179178/1/
Rating: R graphic descriptions of wounds and such, violence, adult themes
and *much* angst
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After the War of the Ring, a bitter conflict with the Easterlings
leaves Legolas in terrible danger and all of Gondor on the brink of
destruction.
Post-WOTR
DPoW12: Shards of Time by AL Milton
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1045
Rating: PG adult themes
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Barahir, the writer grandson of Faramir and Eowyn, tries to find
out what truth shall he write about his legendary grandmother.
Post-WOTR
DPoW13: Sorrow Profound by Alexcat
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/Q_Z/S/SorrowProfound.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Elrond looks back on all he has lost.
Post-WOTR
DPoW14: Stolen Moment by Lasse-Lanta
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1206870/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sequel to "Chance Meetings."
Post-WOTR
DPoW15: Strawberries by Khylea
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/Khylea/Strawberries.htm
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Remembering what kept Mr. Frodo from letting go on the side of
Orodruin, Sam brings him some strawberries and cream. Um yeah....that's
about it….
Post-WOTR
DPoW16: Sunset by Khylea
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/Khylea/Sunset.htm
Rating: PG reference to character death
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After the War of the Ring is over, Legolas and Aragorn keep a
promise to Haldir.
Post-WOTR
DPoW17: The Hunting Trip by Ithilien
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/794871/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Needing a break from their busy lives, our heroes travel to the
wilds of Ithilien for a little relaxation, and perhaps some hunting. But
there is evil in those woods, and unbeknownst to them, a grim adventure is
about to occur.
Post-WOTR
DPoW18: The Last Grey Ship by ErinRua
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=277
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The voice of the Sea merely whispers, until the reasons to stay
pass on. Aragorn's days are ending, and Gimli faces more farewells as
Legolas looks to the West ... How the story may have ended. Book-derived per
ROTK Appendixes. Gap-filler. Drama, angst, friendship. Non-slash.
Post-WOTR
DPoW19: The Mantle Of Power by Marnie
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1504378/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After Elrond's departure, Glorfindel and Celeborn face off over the
rulership of Rivendell.
Post-WOTR
DPoW20: Trees of Remembrance by jenolas
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1485747/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Eldarion makes a final visit to a very special glade of trees
Legolas planted before he left Ithilien to sail to Valinor.
Post-WOTR
DPoW21: Where the Merlin Cries by Lindelea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1384933/1/
Rating: PG-12 violence
Romance Partners: Fastred/Elanor; Pippin/Diamond; Ferdibrand/Pimpernel
Summary: The story of Fastred and Elanor, and how the Westmarch came to be a
part of the Shire.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW1: A Family Trait by Marnie
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1682142/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Young Elladan and Elrohir make a present for their father, and a
career choice that disturbs their mother, Celebrian, and grandfather,
Celeborn.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW2: All These Wore Wings by fileg
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2505
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Random images from the siege of Gondolin haunt a small boy in
another white city. A snapshot, based on the painting "Brothers" by
Starlight.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW3: Canst Thou Forgive Me by Coriel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=952
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: "Upon Doriath a heavy charge had fallen. Melian sat long in silence
beside Thingol the King . . . and she knew that her parting from Thingol was
the forerunner of a greater parting, and that the doom of Doriath was
drawing nigh . . . The Nauglamir was retaken, and brought back in bitter
grief to Melian the Queen." (Involving Thranduil and Melian.)
Pre-WOTR
DPrW4: E cared haniant tîn mîl by PuterPatty
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1288673/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: During a late first snow of the year 3018 T.A., Thranduil remembers
a gift of love from Legolas to his mother.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW5: Games of Innocence by Cirdan
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1329678/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Young Elladan and Elrohir are playing games. Elrond watches them
and is shocked.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW6: Leaf and Branch by JastaElf
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=62
Rating: PG violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Elrond and his sons assist the Elves of Mirkwood in an attempt to
rescue a very young Prince who has been captured by Orcs.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW7: Promises to Keep by JastaElf
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=742
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Six months after the death of his Queen, King Thranduil tries to
celebrate the joys of Yuletide with his grieving sons & subjects. Mild angst
& much sweetness. May the Valar bless us, every one!
Pre-WOTR
DPrW8: Small Soldiers by Cori Lannam
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1498
Rating: PG mature themes (characters dealing with death)
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir wants to see his mother one last time.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW9: The Sacrifice of Soldiers by paranoidangel
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1603
Rating: PG mature themes
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Elrond babysits a young Aragorn, he takes the opportunity to
teach him of his father and the meaning of death.
Romance
DR1: Forbidden Fruit by Eresse
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/E/Eresse/7_ForbiddenFruit/ForbiddenFrui
t1-2.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Elrohir/Legolas
Summary: An old friend of Legolas' develops a forbidden passion and in the
process triggers confusion, heartbreak and tragedy.
Romance
DR2: Gwador: Sorrow's First Dawning by Eresse
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/E/Eresse/5_SorrowsDawning/SorrowsDawnin
g1-2.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Elrohir/Legolas
Summary: Legolas faces the first great tragedy in his life and is unable to
cope with its aftermath.
Romance
DR3: Heart's Brother by Eresse
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/E/Eresse/6_HeartsBrother/HeartsBrother.
htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Elrohir/Legolas
Summary: Gandalf hints that the conditions pertaining to the choice of the
Peredhil are not as implacable as Elrond's children think.
Romance
DR4: Heartsong by Trinity Helix
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/T/TrinityHelix/Heartsong.htm
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Glorfindel/Ecthelion
Summary: Glorfindel broods, Ecthelion shows him beauty.
Romance
DR5: His Precious by Marta
URL: http://www.parma-eruseen.net/stories/marta_precious.html
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Smeagol/f
Summary: Smeagol's old beloved sees him some years after he found the Ring,
and thinks back on what might have been.
Romance
DR6: In The Silence Of Our Hearts by Eresse
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/E/Eresse/11_InTheSilenceOfOurHearts/InT
heSilenceOfOurHearts1-2.htm
Rating: R
Romance Partners: Glorfindel/Erestor; Elrohir/Legolas
Summary: A jest inadvertently unearths an unsuspected past and sets the
stage for an unlikely future.
Romance
DR7: Into Temptation by Eresse
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/E/Eresse/8_IntoTemptation/IntoTemptatio
n.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Elrohir/Legolas
Summary: The thin line between friendship and desire isn't all that easy to
cross.
Romance
DR8: Ring of Loneliness by Alexcat
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/Q_Z/R/RingOfLoneliness.htm
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: Celeborn/Elrond
Summary: Celeborn offers comfort to his son-in-law.
Romance
DR9: Summer Nights by Marta
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1320
Rating: R adult themes; prostitution, masturbation, unplanned pregnancy
Romance Partners: Faramir/OFC; Boromir/OFC
Summary: The summer of 3000 was the hottest one Faramir ever remembered.
When he found himself lost in Dol Amroth and stopped at an inn to ask
directions, he was surprised to find the place was a haven from the heat. He
decided to stay for dinner and when the matron offered him a cool room to
lie down in while his meal was prepared, he gladly accepted, without
realising exactly what he was accepting.
Romance
DR10: The Paths of Lorien by CC
URL: http://www.angelfire.com/wv/night/paths.html
Rating: R sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Lindir/Haldir
Summary: The twins go to Lorien and Lindir finds love .
Romance
DR11: The Tale of the Laughing Maiden by Deborah Judge
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1201424/1/
Rating: R sexual themes; familial violence
Romance Partners: Curufin/Lalwen
Summary: A Curufin romance.
Romance
DR12: To Love and to Live by Lady Rheena
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=660
Rating: R violence; angst
Romance Partners: Legolas/OFC
Summary: The sequel to To Have and To Hold. Darkness falls over the Wood as
the Shadow gathers in the East. Legolas must undertake a journey from which
he may never return and Nessa faces the possibility of eternity alone in a
darkened, deathly world. A little darker than the first story, but then
these are darker times. Later guest appearances from a variety of canon
characters; not least Gollum, Gandalf, Arwen, Frodo and, of course, the
incomparable Aragorn.
D1: A Flood, A Fall, A Finale, A Fever by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1766693/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Merry, Pippin and Pervinca have some strange adventures. Rather
Stephen King like. From Marigold's Challenge 2 as "New Editions."
D2: Elana's Tale by Elana
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1409&cid=5874
Rating: R implied rape; graphic birth scenes; mature themes
Romance Partners: Theodred/f
Summary: Elana is a young woman of Rohan, kidnapped by orcs and forced to
endure unimaginable horrors. But even if by some miracle she should be
rescued, what will become of her and the half-orc child she bears?
D3: Following the Other Wizard by jodancingtree
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1286
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: It's an AU sotry: Frodo doesn't leave Middle-earth, but wanders
with Radagast the Wizard to Mordor, to heal the land and to be healed
himself. A sequel to "Another Way of Leaving."
D4: Into the West by Alexcat
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/I_P/I/IntoTheWest.htm
Rating: PG sexual situation
Romance Partners: Galadriel/Celeborn
Summary: Galadriel sails.
D5: Magpies and Rhymes by Acacea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=695
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Noisy birds in Minas Tirith trigger memories and raise hope for a
brief moment - Faramir, Denethor and a long forgotten rhyme.
D6: Motherless by Isabeau of Greenlea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1274353/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Prince Imrahil's family struggles to deal with the loss of their
mother.
D7: Quiet by Archet
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Archet/Quiet.htm
Rating: PG implied violence; character death
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir remembers.
D8: Standards by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2613
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A vignette about standards and adhering to the choices one makes.
D9: Suffering Unending by Zam Kenobi
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1694272/1/
Rating: R talk of suicide
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Tired of the constant ridicule of his father, Faramir has committed
suicide. These are Boromir's thoughts.
D10: The Ashes of Twilight by Tinuviel ylf Maegden
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1334&cid=5493
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A tale of the thoughts of Tinuviel, the quiet thoughtful whisps of
her soul and pain as she prepares to die.
D11: The Dragon's Egg by Shireling
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1225
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A Fairytale of Gondor, starring Faramir, Boromir, Eowyn, a Wizard
and a prophesy.
D12: The Fall of Night by CinnamonGrrl
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1397271/1/
Rating: PG some violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Elrond, Haldir, and an old friend make a wager... can the twins and
Rumil make a humourless young woman laugh?
D13: Thinking of You by Grey Wonderer
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1088
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What if someone you love has no idea who you are? Suddenly all of
the memories that the two of you share are yours alone. OR What if you wake
up and you are among strangers? Somehow everything has been lost and you
have no idea how to find it again. Who are these folks and how did you get
here?
D14: Time to Make a Change by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1343
Rating: G character death
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A series of vignettes in which our main hobbits face the pain of
losing their father (or parents in Frodo's case).
D15: To Sing of War by Avon
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1365813/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Thranduil's thoughts on war.
D16: Unrequited: Gilraen by CinnamonGrrl
URL: http://cinnamongrrl.popullus.net/files/gilraen.htm
Rating: PG reference to sex
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A young widow burns for what can never be hers.
D17: Whispers by Ellbee
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1271718/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Someone keeps hearing whispers in the dark…
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
Drabble
DDA1: Alexcat
The Call
Drabble
DDA2: Lindelea
The Silent Street, Dernhelm's Ride
Drabble
DDA3: Lindorien
Dragons
Drabble
DDA4: Marta
Fealty and Service, Fear! Fire! Foes!, The Steward and the King
Drabble
DDA5: Naresha
Lament To Lorien
Drabble
DDA6: Oakenshield
Sundered
Poetry
DPA1: Arwen Imladviel
Beth Gorthaur Aglar Beleth
Poetry
DPA2: Chathol-linn
Boe Bedich Len, Haldir?; From Fangorn Forest to Helm's Deep, Canto I The
Forest; Rescue of the Rowan
Poetry
DPA3: Naresha
So Close, Yet Forever Away
Poetry
DPA4: Nol
The Vain Songs
Poetry
DPA5: Thevina
The Love Song of Tar-Meneldur Elentirmo
Poetry
DPA6: Tinni
The Day the Sun Didn't Rise
DA1: Acacea
Magpies and Rhymes
DA2: Adara\BoromirFan (Carol Kyser)
Theodred's Last Command
DA3: Ainaechoiriel
Immortal
DA4: AL Milton
Shards of Time
DA5: Alexcat
Doom of Man, Sorrow Profound, Ring of Lonliness, Into the West
DA6: Altariel
The Fire Sermon
DA7: Archet
Quiet
DA8: Ariel
Fear
DA9: Avon
For Gondor, To Sing of War
DA10: bryn_bnw
Marinus Stiria
DA11: CC
The Paths of Lorien
DA12: CinnamonGrrl
Not Fire, Not Ice; The Fall of Night; Unrequited: Gilraen
DA13: Cirdan
Games of Innocence
DA14: Cori Lannam
Small Soldiers
DA15: Coriel
Paths We Trod, Wrongs We Bore; Canst Thou Forgive Me
DA16: Deborah Judge
The Tale of the Laughing Maiden
DA17: Dwimordene
Father and Sons, River Flowing, Standards, Spartan Letters
DA18: Elana
Elana's Tale, Theodred's Tale
DA19: Ellbee
Whispers
DA20: Eresse
Forbidden Fruit, Gwador: Sorrow's First Dawning, Heart's Brother, In The
Silence Of Our Hearts, Into Temptation
DA21: ErinRua
Ashes, East Wind, Hope that Rises; The Last Grey Ship
DA22: Etharei
Mirrors in the Mind
DA23: fileg
All These Wore Wings
DA24: Gonzai
Closing the Book
DA25: Grey Wonderer
Thinking of You
DA26: Isabeau of Greenlea
Motherless
DA27: Ithilien
Cry of the Gull, The Hunting Trip
DA28: JastaElf
Leaf and Branch, Promises to Keep
DA29: jenolas
Trees of Remembrance
DA30: jodancingtree
Following the Other Wizard
DA31: Khylea
Strawberries, Sunset
DA32: Lady Aranel
The Captain's Last Gift
DA33: Lady Rheena
To Love and to Live
DA34: Lasse-Lanta
Adamo Invenio Discovery of Love; Chance Meetings; Dance With Desire; Fate,
Fatum Or Perhaps Fari; Stolen Moment
DA35: Lindelea
Where the Merlin Cries, As the Gentle Rain
DA36: Lindorien
Free Fall
DA37: M. N. Theis
Perchance to Dream, Veiling of the Sun
DA38: M. Sebasky
Wizard
DA39: Marnie
Between Two Worlds, The Mantle Of Power, A Family Trait
DA40: Marta
His Precious, Summer Nights
DA41: Nerwen Calaelen
Changing Perceptions
DA42: netkerosene
Thoughts
DA43: paranoidangel
The Sacrifice of Soldiers
DA44: Pearl Took
The Sacrifice of Soldiers; While We Dwelt in Fear; Pippin's Crucible; Little
Ones of Their Own; A Flood, A Fall, A Finale, A Fever
DA45: Pervinca
Adaptation, Time to Make a Change
DA46: PuterPatty
E cared haniant tîn mîl
DA47: runningscared
A Change of Seasons
DA48: Shadow975
Bitter as Blood
DA49: Shireling
The Dragon's Egg
DA50: SilverMoon Lady
A Diamond in the Storm
DA51: Tinuviel ylf Maegden
The Ashes of Twilight
DA52: Trinity Helix
Final Flight, Heartsong
DA53: Varia Lectio
The Mirror of Galadriel
DA54: Zam Kenobi
Suffering Unending
DA55: Zimraphel
A Silence Covered in Stone
This category ends October 15th at 11:59pm Central US time.
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder
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Romance--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 06, 2004 - 12:36:52 Topic ID# 2318Official Voting Ballot
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Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE1: Cloaks and Memory by shireling
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1713006/1/
Rating: R Violence
Romance Partners: Faramir/Eowyn
Summary: Aragorn drew Faramir from the brink of death. Only 10 days later
Sauron was overthrown and Faramir took up the reins as Steward. Was he
healed enough for the task?
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE2: Knight's Service/Later by Tanaqui
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1901
Rating: R Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Faramir/Eowyn
Summary: In which Faramir gets wet, takes off all his clothes, and
experiences the consequences.
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE3: Snowdrops and Bluebells by Regina
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2161
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Faramir/Eowyn
Summary: As Eowyn's friendship with Merry deepens during their stay in the
Houses of Healing, other feelings are unthawed in her heart as well. A
detailing of Eowyn's courtship by Faramir from her point of view.
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE4: The Braided Heart by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2541
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Faramir/Eowyn
Summary: A story about Eowyn. Oftentimes it is the simplest gifts that are
the most profound.
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE5: The Influence of Kindred Desires by Tanaqui
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1674
Rating: R Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Faramir/Eowyn
Summary: The Steward of Gondor and the White Lady of Rohan are to be
married. The right ceremonies must be performed in the right way. But
Faramir and Eowyn have a few rituals of their own to conduct.
Featuring Haldir
RmH1: Amarie & Haldir: Paths of Destiny by Julie
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/J/Julie/AmarieHaldirPathsOfDestiny/Amar
ieHaldirPathsOfDestiny1.htm
Rating: R Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Haldir/f
Summary: A half-elf and the March Warden find their destinies are
intertwined.
Featuring Haldir
RmH2: Khila Amin by Julie and Fianna
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/J/Julie/KhilaAmin/KhilaAmin1.htm
Rating: R Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Haldir/f
Summary: Haldir travels to the White City for Aragorn's wedding, still
suffering from his injuries at the battle at Helm's Deep. Keara is a healer,
uncertain of her skills since the loss of her daughter. Can she do what the
elves could not?
Featuring Haldir
RmH3: Love by CC
URL: http://www.angelfire.com/wv/night/love.html
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Haldir/Lindir, Frodo/Sam
Summary: Lindir and Haldir watch the last Ring bearer's arrival to Aman.
Featuring Haldir
RmH4: Perfectly Happy by Alexcat
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/I_P/P/PerfectlyHappy.htm
Rating: R Sexual innuendo/Violence
Romance Partners: Glorfindel/Haldir
Summary: Haldir thinks Glorfindel is too happy.
Featuring Haldir
RmH5: Why? by RennWench
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/R/RennWench/Why.htm
Rating: PG-13 Implied death
Romance Partners: Haldir/f
Summary: POV piece about the aftermath of Haldir's death at Helms Deep.
Featuring Legolas
RmL1: Eternally by Jennifer Lee & Ellbee
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1216076/1/
Rating: R Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: When a human and an elf choose to bind themselves to one another,
what does it truly mean?
Featuring Legolas
RmL2: In the Midst of Adversity by Maram68
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=19
Rating: R Sexual situations, violence
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: When an exiled Amazon who has sworn fealty to the King of Rohan
rides to war, she finds that love can arise even in the midst of adversity.
Featuring Legolas
RmL3: Moriquendi by fan81981
URL: http://www.helical-library.net/lotr/moriquendi_toc.asp
Rating: PG-13 Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: After the War of the Ring, Thranduil seeks to safeguard his kingdom
by making an alliance with the Avari. Will Legolas agree to seal the
alliance by marrying their Lady?
Featuring Legolas
RmL4: Simply a Kiss by Alexcat
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/Q_Z/S/SimplyAKiss.htm
Rating: R
Romance Partners: Legolas/Gimli
Summary: Legolas loves Gimli.
Featuring Legolas
RmL5: Tender Musings by Eresse
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/E/Eresse/3_TenderMusings/TenderMusings.
htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Elrohir/Legolas
Summary: Is there a limit to how deeply one may feel about a friend?
Featuring Legolas
RmL6: The Elf Friend's Tale by Alexcat
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/A_H/E/Elf-FriendsTale.htm
Rating: PG-13 Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Legolas/Gimli
Summary: Gimli and Legolas become a little more than friends.
Featuring Legolas
RmL7: To Have and To Hold by Lady Rheena
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=551
Rating: R Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: Set in Greenwood the Great several decades before the LOTR trilogy
begins, this fic tells the tale of a sweetly annoying Elf prince and the
fiery lady he unfortunately chooses to bestow his affections upon one Spring
Festival. Certainly not the usual Legolas romance-type, mainly as it's told
from the point of view of the heroine, a deeply sarcastic and rather wicked
female Elf named Nessa. There are intersections with "The Hobbit" as well as
a guest appearance from everyone's favourite filthy ranger.
Gondor
RmG1: Love and Lust: A Dynasty Broken Part I by Adara\BoromirFan
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/662003/1/
Rating: R Rape
Romance Partners: Boromir/f
Summary: Based on Tolkien's original plan to give Theoden a daughter and
have Boromir marry her. A love story of what could have been. Suggests yet
another reason why Boromir undertook the journey to Imladris.
Gondor
RmG2: Paths of Peril: A Dynasty Broken Part 2 by Adara\BoromirFan
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/890349/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Boromir/f
Summary: Based on Tolkien's original plan to give Theoden a daughter and
have Boromir marry her. A love story of what could have been. Suggests yet
another reason why Boromir undertook the journey to Imladris.
Gondor
RmG3: Simple Gifts by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.libraryofmoria.com/unnamedcanon/simplegifts.txt
Rating: PG-13 Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Finduilas/f
Summary: While nursing her baby Faramir, Finduilas reflects on a
relationship from her past
Gondor
RmG4: Speaking of Love... by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1096
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Ioreth/f
Summary: Sometimes those who seem most ordinary have the most extraordinary
tales to tell. A brief history of Ioreth and her "cousin"--tragedy and
triumph that speaks its own language in front of the world, if only the
world could understand it. Slash.
Gondor
RmG5: The Power of Love: A Dynasty Broken Part 3 by Adara\BoromirFan
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1149109/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Boromir/f
Summary: Based on Tolkien's original plan to give Theoden a daughter and
have Boromir marry her. A love story of what could have been. Suggests yet
another reason why Boromir undertook the journey to Imladris.
Hobbits
RmHob1: A Little Night Music by Ariel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1710
Rating: R Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Sam/Rose
Summary: Samwise and Rose Gamgee spend a pleasant evening together.
Hobbits
RmHob2: Crown of Laurel by Lyta Padfoot
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1559
Rating: PG-13 Suggestion
Romance Partners: Pippin/Diamond
Summary: Peregrin Took and Diamond of Long Cleeve finally marry - but to
enjoy their life together they must first survive the wedding.
Hobbits
RmHob3: Falling Stars by SoundofHorns
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1557
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Faramir Took/Goldilocks Gamgee
Summary: Faramir Took, Goldilocks and Hamfast Gardener. A night sky, a
meteor shower, a love discovered.
Hobbits
RmHob4: Heed No Nightly Noises by Ariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1523274/1/
Rating: R Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Frodo/Goldberry
Summary: Not all of the dremes Frodo had in the house of Tom Bombadil were
recorded in the Red Book.
Hobbits
RmHob5: Just to be With You by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1178
Rating: PG Suggestion
Romance Partners: Merry/Estella
Summary: Meriadoc Brandybuck finds himself falling for the sister of one of
his close friends.
Hobbits
RmHob6: Peregrin and Diamond by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1204210/1/
Rating: PG Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Pippin/Diamond
Summary: The courtship and wedding of Peregrin Took and Diamond of Long
Cleeve.
Hobbits
RmHob7: Two Hands by powerwriter
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=965
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Sam/Rose
Summary: Follows Sam and Rosie from the moment they fell in love...will they
be able to finally tell each other how they feel?
Hobbits
RmHob8: Watch the Clouds Go Sailing By by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1177
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Faramir Took/Goldilocks Gamgee
Summary: As a Took, it would be impossible for Faramir, only son of Peregrin
I to do anything normally. And that includes declaring his love to
Goldilocks Gamgee.
Incomplete
RmI1: A Pearl of Unexpected Price by Regina
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=604
Rating: PG-13 Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Frodo/Pearl Took
Summary: Frodo is in love with Pippin's sister Pearl, but they discover that
toxic relatives and dangerous inheritances can make impossible to get your
heart's desire. A non-slash explanation of Frodo never marrying.
Incomplete
RmI2: At Last by Jennifer Lee & Ellbee
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1715796/1/
Rating: PG-13 Violence, suggested situations
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: A sequel to Eternally. Unwilling to remain in Rivendell to await
the inevitable, Isobel has traveled to Gondor to face the end there, bravely
or not.
Incomplete
RmI3: Elanor's Revenge by Julie & Fianna
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/J/Julie/ElanorsRevenge/ElanorsRevenge1.
htm
Rating: R Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Haldir/f
Summary: Determined to punish Haldir for toying with her sister's
affections, Elanor undertakes to teach him a lesson. Will she succeed? Or
will Haldir turn the tables on her?
Incomplete
RmI4: Enigmas: The Life and Love of Linwe and Frodo by Mysterious Ways1
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1532915/1/
Rating: PG-13 Adult situations; nothing graphic
Romance Partners: Frodo/f
Summary: Here is an alternate ending for Frodo where he is given the chance
at lasting romantic love. The story begins in a place that appears to be
unrelated but then appearances are often deceiving. Did the One Ring LOOK
evil? I don't think so.
Incomplete
RmI5: Mock My Innocence by Virvatuli
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/739471/1/
Rating: R Sexual situations
Romance Partners: m/m
Summary: A seriously demented love story between an Orc and an Elf.
Incomplete
RmI6: Stars May Collide by Rose Gamgee
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=611
Rating: PG-13 Angst
Romance Partners: Pippin/Diamond
Summary: Peregrin Took has finally found everything he ever wanted in a
soft-spoken girl named Diamond - but when it seems all else stands against
them, will their love survive the odds?
Incomplete
RmI7: The Cursed Queen of Angmar by KhazarKhum
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=302
Rating: R some sexual situations and adult themes
Romance Partners: Witch-king of Angmar, and wife
Summary: What if the Witch-King of Angmar had married a Rhudaurian princess?
Incomplete
RmI8: The Gift by Mirasaui
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1500073/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: Lindir/Glorfindel
Summary: Lindir must choose a gift for his secret love (Glorfindel).
Incomplete
RmI9: Ultimatums by Isabeau of Greenlea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1226911/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: Imrahil/f
Summary: Prince Imrahil's sometimes contentious courtship with the Lady
Nimrien.
Incomplete
RmI10: Winter Fire by Cuthalion
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1699534
Rating: R Rape, Violence, sexual situations
Romance Partners: Damrod/f
Summary: If Middle Earth was real, and Tolkien recorded what he saw there,
could another visitor be sent, and for what purpose?
Poetry
RmP1: A Hole Possessed by Marta
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1820
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Lobelia/?
Summary: Lobelia Sackville-Baggins pines over her unrequited love.
Poetry
RmP2: Courtship of the Evenstar by White Gull
URL:
http://www.freewebs.com/tornscreativetalents/Poetry/Poetry/courtship_of_even
star.htm
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Aragorn/Arwen
Summary: An allegorical look at Aragorn & Evenstar's courtship.
Poetry
RmP3: Forever My Heart by Naresha
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/N/Naresha/ForeverMyHeart.htm
Rating: R Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners:
Summary: Sweet little love poem that came to me standing in a line to buy
books!
Poetry
RmP4: In Arda Fast by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=672
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Sauron/f
Summary: A love song, told in alternating voices, from Sauron to his unnamed
love.
Poetry
RmP5: Love me, Urgren by Werecat
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3165
Rating: PG Implied Violence
Romance Partners: m/f
Summary: An Orcish love song.
Rivendell
RmR1: One Dark Night by Enros
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=102
Rating: R Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Elrond/Ugluk
Summary: Taking shelter from an unseasonal storm, Elrond finds the cave
already occupied - by the former Captain of Saruman's Uruk-hai.
Rivendell
RmR2: The Standard Bearer by Sorne
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/629451/1/
Rating: R Violence, character death
Romance Partners: Elrond/f
Summary: Epic adventure and romance against the backdrop of The Last
Alliance.
Rivendell
RmR3: To My Shining Light by Oakenshield
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/O/Oakenshield/ToMyShiningLight.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Erestor/Glorfindel
Summary: Erestor tries to put his feelings down on paper.
Rivendell
RmR4: Underestimated by Enismirdal
URL: http://www.libraryofmoria.com/rumilfigwit/underestimated.txt
Rating: PG-13 mainly Orc-bashing
Romance Partners: Rumil/m secondary: Glorfindel/Erestor
Summary: Rumil is in love with Faelon. Faelon thinks he is too good for
Rumil. Erestor decides to get involved.
Rivendell
RmR5: Vanilla Cream by Kharessa Bloodrose
URL:
http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/KharessaBloodrose/VanillaCream.htm
Rating: R Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Elrond/Erestor
Summary: One day Elrond and Erestor. Vanilla: simplicity and perfection, a
taste and texture that could never grow old.
Rivendell
RmR6: Warrior by Mirasaui
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1764839/1/
Rating: R Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Erestor/Lindir
Summary: An elfling searches for what is lost and Erestor finds there is
more to life than work.
Rm1: Ever Onward by Alexcat
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/A_H/E/EverOnward.htm
Rating: PG-13 Sexual situations
Romance Partners: Gandalf/Celeborn
Summary: Two old friends share a evening of comfort.
Rm2: Iunctum by Lasse-Lanta
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1683670/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: m/f
Summary: Epilogue to the "Chance Meeting" series.
Rm3: Jealous by Oakenshield
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/O/Oakenshield/Jealous.htm
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: Gimli/?
Summary: Gimli is forced out of his stubbornness when he sees his heart's
desire with another. In fact, two others..
Rm4: Lady Love an Outlaw by Chathol-Linn
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=908
Rating: PG-13, R at end graphic details of consensual affection, Supportive
of main plot
Romance Partners: Eomer/Lothiriel
Summary: Grima's machinations send Eomer on a dubious journey to
Erech-on-Morthond. There we see him falling in love and awakening to the
growing danger of Grima. The year is 3014 and Lothiriel is 15, yet this
story still complies with the scant canon that says they met afterwards.
Rm5: Quickening by Tyellas
URL: http://www.ansereg.com/quickening.htm
Rating: PG-13 Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Arod/F
Summary: Someone who is no longer fair, but wise, brave, and true, wins the
affections of a dashing young rake one Middle-Earth springtime. Okay,
they're horses...Written for a "Mary Sue" original female character
challenge. An original female horse character gets paired with Arod, making
this the horse equivalent of a Legomance. I wouldn't take this too
seriously. Tally ho!
Rm6: Ring of Water by Altariel
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=357
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Galadriel/Aredhel
Summary: Throughout the ages of her exile, Galadriel remembers her lost
love. Slash.
Rm7: Spring In Imladris by CC
URL: http://www.angelfire.com/wv/night/spring.html
Rating: R Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Orophin/Gildor, Haldir/Lindir
Summary: Orophin finds love in Imladris and Elladan learns about love and
choices.
Rm8: Swept Away by Larian Elensar
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/L/LarianElensar/SweptAway1.htm
Rating: R Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Rumil/Theodred
Summary: Haldir and Rumil are on a scouting mission and end up getting
separated. Rumil ends up in Rohan.
Rm9: The Match by Erunyauve
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1579129/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Orodreth/Meril
Summary: Fingon plays matchmaker to his cousin's shy son with unexpected
results.
Rm10: The Yellow Bird by CinnamonGrrl
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1786461/1/
Rating: PG Some adult themes
Romance Partners: Orophin/f
Summary: The only hint Orophin has of his secret admirer's identity is a
yellow bird, but with his meddling brothers involved, will he *ever* learn
who she is?
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
Poetry
RPA1: Marta
A Hole Possessed
Poetry
RPA2: Naresha
Forever My Heart
Poetry
RPA3: Viv
In Arda Fast
Poetry
RPA4: Werecat
Love me, Urgren
Poetry
RPA5: White Gull
Courtship of the Evenstar
RA1: Adara\BoromirFan
Love and Lust: A Dynasty Broken Part I, Paths of Peril: A Dynasty Broken
Part 2, The Power of Love: A Dynasty Broken Part 3
RA2: Alexcat
Perfectly Happy, Simply a Kiss, The Elf Friend's Tale, Ever Onward
RA3: Altariel
Ring of Water
RA4: Ariel
A Little Night Music, Heed No Nightly Noises
RA5: CC
Love, Spring In Imladris
RA6: Chathol-Linn
Lady Love an Outlaw
RA7: CinnamonGrrl
The Yellow Bird
RA8: Cuthalion
Winter Fire
RA9: Dwimordene
Speaking of Love...
RA10: Enismirdal
Underestimated
RA11: Enros
One Dark Night
RA12: Eresse
Tender Musings
RA13: Erunyauve
The Match
RA14: fan81981
Moriquendi
RA15: Isabeau of Greenlea
Ultimatums
RA16: Jennifer Lee & Ellbee
Eternally, At Last
RA17: Julie
Amarie & Haldir: Paths of Destiny, Khila Amin
RA18: Julie & Fianna
Elanor's Revenge
RA19: Kharessa Bloodrose
Vanilla Cream
RA20: KhazarKhum
The Cursed Queen of Angmar
RA21: Lady Rheena
To Have and To Hold
RA22: Larian Elensar
Swept Away
RA23: Lasse-Lanta
Iunctum
RA24: Lyta Padfoot
Crown of Laurel
RA25: Maram68
In the Midst of Adversity
RA26: Mirasaui
The Gift, Warrior
RA27: Mysterious Ways1
Enigmas: The Life and Love of Linwe and Frodo
RA28: Oakenshield
To My Shining Light, Jealous
RA29: Pearl Took
Peregrin and Diamond
RA30: Pervinca
Just to Be With You, Watch the Clouds Go Sailing By
RA31: powerwriter
Two Hands
RA32: Regina
Snowdrops and Bluebells, A Pearl of Unexpected Price
RA33: RennWench
Why?
RA34: Rose Gamgee
Stars May Collide
RA35: shireling
Cloaks and Memory
RA36: Sorne
The Standard Bearer
RA37: SoundofHorns
Falling Stars
RA38: Tanaqui
Knight's Service/Later, The Influence of Kindred
RA39: Thevina Finduilas
The Braided Heart, Simple Gifts
RA40: Tyellas
Quickening
RA41: Virvatuli
Mock My Innocence
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Msg# 2319
Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 06, 2004 - 12:46:44 Topic ID# 2317Official Voting Ballot
Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
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DD1: Alone by Oakenshield
Very powerful and sad, but also inspiring, to see that all that Arwen lost, she
got back--or got back other things, just as good.
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DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by Lindelea
Powerful. You got her desperation down in such few words. Well done.
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DD3: Dragons by Lindorien
Oh yes! I loved the line about the dragons following but not all being fierce.
Well done.
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DD6: Lament To Lorien by Naresha
This piece touches on a world-wide feeling. The way everyone remembers Haldir,
the things they say really did remind me of how we mourn in our own lives.
Drabble
DD7: Sundered by Oakenshield
Well, this piece came along at the right time for me, as it reinforced an idea
I had for a fic of my own. I do think Elros had to choose as he did, and he
knew it, and really, so did Elrond, there was a reason, though they might not
know what it was. Really brave of them both to follow those destinies though
they didn't know what they were.
Drabble
DD8: The Call by Alexcat
Such a simple piece, and yet, so intense. I love the line about 'men and elves
die, but power does not.'
Drabble
DD9: The Silent Street by Lindelea
Wow, this was very powerful. Gave me goosebumps.
Gap-filler
DG1: A Silence Covered in Stone by Zimraphel
Yikes. you hit a on a pretty deep seated fear, being buried alive. *Tries not
to have nightmares*
Gap-filler
DG2: Cry of the Gull by Ithilien
Wow, I read that what...one line in the book and really thought nothing of it,
just that Legolas was now drawn to the sea. I really liked your take on it,
how you fleshed it out by showing not only how Legolas reacted, but also Gimli,
the twins, and Aragorn responded. Aragorn feeling responsible seemed so in
character for him, too. Nicely done.
Gap-filler
DG5: Theodred's Last Command by Adara\BoromirFan (Carol Kyser)
Yes, I imagine Theodred making sure Rohan was safe--as safe as possible, even
after he was gone. I did wonder though, you said the orc army pulled back, did
they ever find out why? Was it to join in the hunt for the ring bearer?
Incomplete
DI2: Between Two Worlds by Marnie
I've read this story before (as with all of your stories!) Again, as with the
first time or two, I felt Ereinion's sort of desperation at being apart from
the world where he lived, and the one where he came from. I like to think that
he and Celeborn were of similar mind. They certainly both felt like kings to
me, at least that's how I always image them both. I think they would have
ruled the same way, due to similar connections to their people and land...
LOTR
DL1: Adaptation by Pervinca
It's interesting to me to see so many interpretations of how elves handle
death. Well done with this one!
LOTR
DL3: Bitter as Blood by Shadow975
This one gave me goosebumps. "He thinks I do not see. I see." Powerful
ending.
LOTR
DL4: Doom of Man by Alexcat
You captured Isildur's expression from the movie perfectly. All you could see
in his face was lust and pure evil. No wonder Elrond seemed so sad all the
time as he talked about the line of men being broken. He must have hated the
fact that at the time, Elros's choice must have seemed to be in vain.
LOTR
DL5: Final Flight by Trinity Helix
You captured Haldir's thoughts and feelings exactly the way I saw them when I
watched the movie. It is nice to think that his last thoughts were filled with
peace and hope instead of despair.
LOTR
DL8: Pippin's Crucible by Pearl Took
You could see and feel Pippin's terror and despair as he looked for Gandalf. I
think you captured it all very well. I also like the idea that Pippin knows he
will heal too, and not be weighed down by the evil things he saw forever.
LOTR
DL9: River Flowing by Dwimordene
You know when you go see the movies or read the books that those men, even
though they're fighting for Sauron are probably not totally evil, maybe just
mislead. I liked your lead character. His youth really showed when he talked
about the fact that dying didn't matter because he'd seen "your" rivers, but
"you" would never see "his."
LOTR
DL10: Spartan Letters by Dwimordene
Faramir and Denethor are one of the saddest themes in the book for me.You let
them show some of the regrets for 'what might have been.'
LOTR
DL11: The Mirror of Galadriel by Varia Lectio
Yes, I would imagine that is what Galadriel might see in the mirror. And of
course, Sauron thought he knew much more than he did. He probably couldn't
imagine them destroying it, instead of using it. Nicely done.
LOTR
DL12: Thoughts by netkerosene
Too bad Eomer and Theodred couldn't tell Eowyn how important she was to the
country. Too bad Theodred had to die anyway, I'm always a little irritated that
he died, as stupid as that sounds. It's true though. However, I can't believe
Eomer is that unsure, but it certainly gives a different perspective of him.
LOTR
DL13: Veiling of the Sun by Maggie (M. N. Theis)
Wow! I decided two pages in that I needed to read the whole fic. You tell an
excellent 'what if'! I'm totally impressed at how well you're keeping all
those separate threads and plots and sub-plots continuing without gaping holes.
I have an advantage too, since I'm reading it all at once instead of one
chapter at a time, and I'm still seeing continuity. I like how you've shown
all the characters, (though, so far, Frodo still annoys me, the whiny thing :)
I'm really enjoying all the little tweaks to the story too, all the elements
from Tolkien are basically there, just ...twisted. Very entertaining read,
can't wait to see how things turn out. (Though I'm assuming happily, just want
to see how they get there!)
Okay, had to laugh at the part where Glorfindel tells Arwen to take his
horse..*snicker* Wow, I thought the whole ring melting would be much later, but
I guess you have a lot to wrap up afterwards. I guess since I'm not quite 2/3
done, (did you know this is in the 500 page range in MS Word, 1 inch margins,
12 point font?), there is still a lot of things happening, really. I have to
admit, I'm not fond of the Mirkwood princes. I know Thranduil has a bad rep,
but I just can't see them hating their own family that much. I mean, I know
the Noldor killed other elves, but that's the Noldor...*grin* Of course, I
guess this sort of shows that even elves aren't perfect, and the ring and it's
evilness had consequences beyond corrupting men.
Ack. I'm torn between wanting Legolas made immortal again because I wanted a
happy ending, and agreeing that this way really was fitting, since not all
stories have perfectly happy ending. Tying Aragorn and Legolas together as
mortals though, did make it happier, seeing as how they were brothers of the
heart anyway. Good job tying up all the plots and not making it seem rushed
and like you just want to finish. After long stories, a lot of authors tend to
do that, good job.
LOTR
DL14: Wizard by M. Sebasky
Wow, this is pretty depressing. How helpless Gandalf must have felt when he
realized that Denethor was beyond saving.
Poetry
DP5: So Close, Yet Forever Away by Naresha
Bittersweet and emotional. I could almost see him reaching out for Haldir, only
to have the image taken away right within his grasp.
Post-WOTR
DPoW1: A Change of Seasons by runningscared
Lovely! I thnk you got the Gimli - Legolas relationship down the way I often
see it. Thanks. It was touching and not overly angsty, which is hard to do.
Post-WOTR
DPoW8: Immortal by Ainaechoiriel
I'm sure others have said it, but this one brought me to tears. There are lots
of stories about Legolas after Aragorn dies, but they seem to skip how he would
have had to deal with the deaths of all the other members of the Fellowship.
Post-WOTR
DPoW11: Perchance to Dream by M. N. Theis
Wow, I'm impressed, all the plotting and then the twists and turns involved in
the story. Really interesting premise, I knew the necklace had something to do
with it, but obviously, not exactly how it fit in. I was really glad a few
times that the story was complete, and I didn't have to wait for updates,
because I could easily see myself whining about it if I'd have had to wait to
find out what happened between chapters. This was another story that I wasn't
sure I would read, but after the first few paragraphs, I knew I had to finish
it. I'm glad I did. I can't even imagine all the prep work you did to get it
all plotted out, then made sure to tie up all the plot lines, and with so many
characters. Well done. Thanks.
Post-WOTR
DPoW13: Sorrow Profound by Alexcat
The title should have been warning enough. It was certainly proved that
immortality is a curse, maybe even bigger than being a blessing. Elrond was
definitely the poster child for long lives equalling some joy, but also great
pain.
Post-WOTR
DPoW15: Strawberries by Khylea
When I saw Return of the King on DVD, I though of this story near the end of
the movie, when Sam is talking about the shire right before they get to Mount
Doom to destroy the ring. Obviously, the story made an impression on me!
Post-WOTR
DPoW16: Sunset by Khylea
For all of Haldir's supposed arrogance, (I know, it's probably fanon), he
certainly did not seem to begrudge helping the Rohirrim at all. I don't think
he thought the price was too high, either. I think he, like many of the elves
were willing to pay it.
Post-WOTR
DPoW18: The Last Grey Ship by ErinRua
Lovely. Did you sniffle as you wrote this? I certainly did while I read it.
Great gap-filling story!
Post-WOTR
DPoW19: The Mantle Of Power by Marnie
I love that image of Glorfindel giving that heavy cloak 'mental strokes.' How
very like my image of Glorfindel and Celeborn both to behave the way they did.
I could definitely see it, both of them seemed in character to me.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW1: A Family Trait by Marnie
I guess Elladan and Elrohir will realize why Celebrian and Celeborn shared that
look between them after the twins learn more of the the family and Noldor
history. I liked the way you made Celebrian (despite the blacksmithing) more
normal instead of an evil witch or as too fragile to do anything but look
pretty.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW2: All These Wore Wings by fileg
This is so great! I've read about Gondolin, of course, and it's one of my
favorite 'old' stories, but I've never noticed the parallels between it and
Gondor. Figures Faramir would see those things!
Pre-WOTR
DPrW4: E cared haniant týn mýl by PuterPatty
I've read this several times before and it always makes me sniffle. Not only
Thranduil's memories of the thorns, and what he told Legolas, but also at the
way Legolas lived up to the words he's learned. Well done.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW5: Games of Innocence by Cirdan
At first, I was not too happy about this story. I kept thinking the twins would
know how 'improper' those games were, but then I realized that they're young,
and acting like normal kids. So often, since they're elves, we think they
don't do things like...play improper games. Nice to see that they might.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW6: Leaf and Branch by JastaElf
What an adventure (of the horrible kind). I really didn't know, the first time
I read this, if it would end happily. (That was before I knew about Dark Leaf).
Very fitting ending too, the braiding ceremony.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW7: Promises to Keep by JastaElf
One of my all time favorites. And Legolas is a great elfling in this one.
He's cute but not overly so. Well done.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW8: Small Soldiers by Cori Lannam
What a fine line Denethor asks his sons to tread. To feel and care, but not to
forget that they can't just be little boys, that they still have obligations.
Denethor is one of the characters in the books that I really disliked. I'm
glad I could forget that for a bit and that he was just a father, trying his
best.
Romance
DR1: Forbidden Fruit by Eresse
Oh! I'd forgotten how terribly sad I felt when I read this the first time.
Sirgon's death made me sniffle again, even though in the long run, it was
probably better, or he might have died of grief anyway. He had already come to
the conclusion that he would not be able to have the relationship with Legolas
that he really wanted. In fact, he'd damaged the one he did have, and there
was probably little chance that he'd have gotten that back, let alone more.
But still, what a waste for him to die too. I think Elladan and Elrohir did a
great job explaining things to Legolas, though it's becoming more obvious that
Elrohir has deep feelings for him.
Romance
DR2: Gwador: Sorrow's First Dawning by Eresse
I often wonder what fanfic writers would do if Tolkien had given Legolas a
mother! *grin* Seriously, this is a familiar scenario, but you wrote it very
well, and gave it some added depth by sending Legolas to Rivendell to heal.
Well done.
Romance
DR3: Heart's Brother by Eresse
Okay, now Elrond, Elladan, and Mithrandir see how much 'regard' Elrohir has for
Legolas. I guess Elrohir should try to figure it out soon. And it's good to
see that their may be some sort of dispensation for them too as far as not
having to leave right when Elrond does. Interesting.
Romance
DR4: Heartsong by Trinity Helix
I've always thought that Gondolin, and the way they all stayed was unusual,
that they probably wanted to be free, but really, it's not unusual for the
elves, I guess. Lothlorien, Greenwood, and Rivendell were certainly not open,
nor did the elves who lived there come and go much. Most of the ancient elven
realms were the same way. Great vignette.
Romance
DR6: In The Silence Of Our Hearts by Eresse
Great interlude in the series. I guess I'm too revengeful, because I really
didn't think there was any reason for Arwen to yell at Erestor for *not*
accepting Glorfindel's apology the first time. I guess it's a good thing I'm
not immortal, since I tend to hold grudges, I mean eternity is a long time to
be at odds with someone. I'm glad that Erestor and Glorfindel did work things
out, and now the rest of the family is aware of Elrohir's feelings for Legolas,
so turns the heat up on that situation too.
Romance
DR7: Into Temptation by Eresse
Finally Elrohir has to admit his feelings, to himself and to Elladan, though I
question where Elladan's head is, suggesting that Elrohir tell Legolas. I
mean, Sirgon tried that and it got him absolutely nothing, though maybe Legolas
would be better able to handle it now. I doubt it though. Nice clues at the
end there, about how this change of heart might change all of their lives.
Romance
DR8: Ring of Loneliness by Alexcat
I know Celeborn wants to comfort Elrond, but I still sort of worry about him
and his judgement, at least when it comes to himself. He already has
Galadriel, I think he should think twice about getting too involved with
another ring bearer.
Romance
DR10: The Paths of Lorien by CC
The twins are such boys! Proud of themselves for not riding with the adults,
and at the same time, planning future mischief. Of course, they can't even get
into Caras Galadhon without a crisis happening. Then Lindir and Haldir--they're
interesting. Both of them are quick to deny to themselves, and everyone else,
that intitial attraction they have for each other. I'm guessing that denial
will continue, and won't be good. Now they're trying to avoid each other. I'm
curious though, if Haldir is protecting Orophin or Lindir by vowing to watch
them?
I still think this is an interesting premise, that Lindir dreams and Haldir is
in them...there with him too. Of course, they're both still denying any
connection, I can't believe that something like that has happened to either of
them before, so why they don't acknowledge it is beyond me. Or maybe they are
just scared.
Now, the twins and their little spats, that's plausible. I think Elladan being
upset with Elrohir is completely natural. He doesn't want to lose his twin to
someone else.
Okay, now I understand more of Haldir's reluctance. It's only natural that he
should try to build a wall after that experience with Taron. I can see why
he's trying to deny the attraction. He's not only protecting himself, he thinks
he's protecting Lindir too. Ooh, Haldir, go ahead and make your pronouncements
about never loving anyone, since even Amroth found mostly pain in it. It's not
that easy *not* to love though, is it?
Elladan is pretty perceptive in figuring out that Lindir likes Haldir, and
that's why Lindir seem so reluctant to see him. And not to make Haldir sound
bad, but the stuff the twins do really doesn't seem that bad to me, but I'm
used to kids. *Grin*
And for Elladan and Elrohir to be a bit intimidated by Haldir, well, I guess
they could have gone the other way and try to annoy him, since youngsters seem
to know when they are able to get under an adult's skin, and Haldir makes no
secret that he sees the twins as a chore more than anything. I think he's
lucky that the twins don't get it into their heads to do things purposely!
And the whole theme shows up again--Lindir doesn't think Haldir could love him,
that he doesn't deserve it, and Haldir is afraid to love him, that he'll end up
hurting Lindir (or possibly even causing Lindir to die). Now, they just need
to work it out. (I have a feeling it will take time!!)
Oh, it's after the breakfast incident, and now Lindir is scared. I'm thinking
if he doesn't want to fade, he won't. Silly of the others to scare him so
badly though...silly of him not to tell someone what the real problem is.
Guess silly is really just him being young.
Well, too bad that Lindir had to get so sick, but now it's all starting to come
into the open. About time!
After lots of help, it seems that Haldir and Lindir are together, though there
are still secrets between them. Well, secrets from Lindir. And the twins,
they'll have to control their emotions and sharing them...oh, and deal with
jealousy. If one of them finds someone before the other, they're in for a
rough time.
D4: Into the West by Alexcat
As sad as Elrond/Celebrian/Arwen is, I still think Celeborn/Galadriel is
sadder. I mean, they loved each other despite the fact that they knew, maybe
from the beginning, that they'd have to leave each other. Not a lot of people
will set themselves up to be hurt like that. Well done.
D6: Motherless by Isabeau of Greenlea
Touching. You have a great story telling style. I love how you let me get to
know Imrahil and his family, though he's sometimes just a name in the books.
Boromir, what a soft heart. I loved it when he told Faramir and Imrahil that
they didn't give him enough credit.
D7: Quiet by Archet
You can feel Faramir's helplessness as he asks why Boromir did not return. I
often wonder how guilty Faramir might have felt after the war, he couldn't save
Boromir, or his father, but maybe he knew he couldn't have saved either one
anyway.
D8: Standards by Dwimordene
I loved finding new stories to read. I love the idea of the standards being
permanent, but re-made by each generation. I liked your Gilraen too, she seemed
so strong, but not cold.
D15: To Sing of War by Avon
You can taste the bitterness in Thranduil's words. Or perhaps it's despair.
Nicely done.
D16: Unrequited: Gilraen by CinnamonGrrl
Unrequited love is bad all around. Hard not to be bitter, and I did feel
pretty sorry for Gilraen. *sigh* I do have one question. It felt like it ended
rather abruptly, I was wondering if it all got copied to the page right?
D17: Whispers by Ellbee
Oh yes, I loved the parts in the movie where the ring whispered "Aragorn." I
don't know if you meant that with your story, but that's what I thought of.
Well done.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the
story, here):
Drabble
DDA1: Alexcat
Alexcat has a concise, to the point style anyway, but drabbles really bring
that forward in a good way.
Drabble
DDA5: Naresha
Naresha has a lovely smooth poetic style, even in very short pieces.
Drabble
DDA6: Oakenshield
Like other pieces of Oakenshield's, her shorter ones convey some strong
feelings and images without being too sappy.
Poetry
DPA3: Naresha
I like Naresha's story telling poetic style. It's easy to read.
DA5: Alexcat
Alexcat definitely has a distinct style of writing. She manages to get to the
point, entertain her readers and still allow them to get to know her characters
without over blown prose and a lot of extraneous words.
DA7: Archet
Archet gives voice to Faramir's grief in a way that we don't always get to see,
and does it with a simple, easy-to-read style.
DA11: CC
CC has an easy, readable style and never rushes things along just to get the
story finished. She explores each piece of the plot fully without dragging it
out too long.
DA20: Eresse
I'm still in awe that Eresse is able to tie all these plots and subplots
together, yet almost all of the stories can stand alone as well. She gives the
characters depth and bredth, and allows them to grow and change without losing
their basic personalities. Also, her stories are just a good read.
DA31: Khylea
Strawberries, Sunset
Khylea is another author whose style is probably what most would consider more
minimalist than anything. She tells the story, we get to know and like her
characters, and she does it without a lot of extra additions that take away
from the telling.
DA39: Marnie
Between Two Worlds, The Mantle Of Power, A Family Trait
These are some of Marnie's shorter stories, and she still gives us thorough
glimpses of her characters and the situations they are in. I trust her
implicitly to tell me a good story, and to get the facts right, and she hasn't
let me down yet.
DA52: Trinity Helix
Final Flight, Heartsong
Trinity Helix paints pictures with words as well as she can with pencils and
her art. She fills her stories with emotion and imagery that isn't easy to
forget. I thoroughly enjoy reading about her elves as much as I love looking at
them.
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Msg# 2320
Re: Romance--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 06, 2004 - 12:49:58 Topic ID# 2318Official Voting Ballot
Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE2: Knight's Service/Later by Tanaqui
Oh! Poor Eowyn and Faramir. Could almost taste their frustration. I loved the
scene with Eomer and the remark about furthering relations with Dol Amroth!!
Too cute. And Pippin being so smart at the end...*hee*
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE3: Snowdrops and Bluebells by Regina
How difficult was it to write this in first person POV? I find writing that
way very difficult, at least writing stories. It was, howerver, a really good
look into Eowyn's feelings and thoughts. I always wondered just how much time
there was between her killing the witch king and knowing that she loved
Faramir. Maybe it was a case of them being in an intense situation, so things
happened faster, but I always thought it felt too short of a time. This was a
good gap-filler for me because of that, to see that she did struggle. And I
loved that you gave Merry a big role. I read so much elf fiction that it's
nice to read about the roles the hobbits actually played. Well done.
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE4: The Braided Heart by Thevina Finduilas
What a great tradition, and it fits perfectly with the Rohirrim. I can just
see Eowyn making it. Nicely done.
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE5: The Influence of Kindred Desires by Tanaqui
Oh yes, at the end of a good book, I always want to ask, but what happened
after that? I was glad to read some of what 'after' was here. Faramir and Eowyn
are my favorite couple from the books. You did a great job showing them and
their love for one another. Well done!
Featuring Haldir
RmH1: Amarie & Haldir: Paths of Destiny by Julie
First, I must tell you that I don't read much het, but I do read yours. I know
I don't say it enough but I really like the light touch you have and the
minimal angst type romances you write. Your ladies are so likeable. I want
them to "win" at the end and get their elf. For me, fanfic is a way to escape
reality, and find some entertainment, so your stories, with the great
characters and well thought out storylines make for great reading.
As always, I love your Haldir. Even the brief meeting in the beginning chapters
of this story gives me a good idea of what I'm going to find later on. You give
him the right touch of arrogance, and mystery, and compassion so that he
doesn't just seem like a bully.
Now, the whole thing about her father coming to her in dreams, that's
interesting, I'm kind of curious as to why he still visits her in Lorien, I
guess. And it looks like things are quickly heating up between Amarie and
Haldir, I can't remember exactly what Galadriel said, but it was something
about a gold thread or something, so obviously, the two of them have some
connection. I have to confess, Amarie annoys me a bit, she told Haldir she
wouldn't lie, but she *is* lying by omission by not telling him that she
understands the elvish. I have feeling that will be a big issue soon.
Ah, I knew it would be a big issue. And I do think Haldir was a little harsh,
if he saw what was going on, he should have stopped it sooner, at least in my
opinion. Can hardly blame her for jumping the gun. And how is she supposed to
feel about the men? I mean, okay, she knows that they are scared of her and
call her names, but it's all she's known. She still can't trust the elves
totally, I think. However, I do like the way things are heating up between her
and Haldir...*grin*
Ooh, I wanted to cry for her after Haldir yelled at her, I'm glad Celeborn was
able to get her to do it. And though I've read much of this once, I *blush*
don't remember what happens and what Ennis's purpose is. Or how Amarie and
Haldir had a connection. *keeps reading*
Okay, I read the part about their connection. (Thank you for not having anyone
die and come back, that particular plot is a pet peeve of mine after having
read it too many times)! I liked the idea that Haldir and Amarie really had to
save each other. The whole Ennis plot line surprised me a bit. (I have to
ask, did you plan that or change it after you started getting feeback about
Ennis and Lonarie?)
I loved the epilogue (and yes, Galadhadric arrows are the best, though my
personal favorite has always been Rumil :) Have you done any side stories
about Ferodir? I can't remember if I've seen any archived anywhere. I'd be
interested to find out more about him :)
Nicely done, entertaining, light hearted, happy ending. Thank you!
Featuring Haldir
RmH2: Khila Amin by Julie and Fianna
I think it's odd that a human healer can heal an elf when the elven healers
can't, but I'm willing to see what happens. Who can resist an injured (and
probably way grumpy) Haldir? *grin* Okay, Keara has her own fears about being
able to help, I see and yes, Haldir was definitely pissed when he realized how
she heals. I guess he won't like to be obligated to her, but I have a feeling
he won't refuse either. That has the makings of a nice little conflict before
the final victory, won't it? *smiles*
I guess when you have a gift, and know how to use it, you have to, even if you
don't know why. Good that she'll soon find out, I bet. I don't mean to sound
trite here, but I do love a good romance and I've read enough that I know what
to expect, I think, though that doesn't mean I enjoy them any less!
Gah, I just noticed this is in first person, I'm a dork. That's hard to write
that and keep it consistent, but it's well done here. I'm at the archery
tournament right now, and anxious to see how things turn out. And I want to
know a little bit more about Keara, actually. I assume there is a lot more than
meets the eye.
Interesting turn of events for her, having the elves need her like that. Also
and interesting choice at the end, though I can't say I'd have trouble making
the decision...since one of the final results would be to get Haldir. *Grin* I
know she wanted to do her part and help, but I have to admit, I was getting a
bit frustrated at her stubbornness--to keep going when she was getting so weak
from helping all of them. However, it turned out welll in the end.
Interesting sort of tweak with her making the choice instead of finding out she
was half elvish or something.
Oh, also, it was a tiny bit uncomfortable reading in first person, because I'm
not used to it, but it was also part of what made the whole story work, I
think. It had very little dialogue, and of course, we never knew what anyone
else was really thinking or feeling, but you did a good job in making sure the
we, along with Keara, could interpret others' moods and emotions.
Featuring Haldir
RmH3: Love by CC
Awww! Sometimes being in love can be painful, but it's nice to see that Lindir
and Haldir trust each other enough to let each other go too.
Featuring Haldir
RmH4: Perfectly Happy by Alexcat
Oh yeah. "Even the damn horse glowed." Too funny. And so like the Haldir I've
come to know (and love) in fanfiction. I also love Glorfindel and his
attitude; it's very believable to me that he would feel that way.
Featuring Haldir
RmH5: Why? by RennWench
Ack! Yes I cried again, like I do every time I read it. I'm sad, I do feel
sorry for her, and her unrequited love, but I was also a bit angry with her for
not telling Haldir sooner. I mean, who knows what they have had before Haldir
died? Though...I guess it did end up for the best.
Featuring Legolas
RmL4: Simply a Kiss by Alexcat
Oh, I know! They got a box for Gimli to stand on!! *laughs*
Featuring Legolas
RmL5: Tender Musings by Eresse
Well, out of the mouths of babes. Legolas's little sister certainly called
this one correctly. And now, Elladan can see it too. Elrohir does have deep
feelings for Legolas, and he returns them. Too bad Legolas thinks it's just
friendship when Elrohir calls it love.
Featuring Legolas
RmL6: The Elf Friend's Tale by Alexcat
It's easy to see the progression of their friendship in the books; I'm glad
Peter Jackson was able to capture some of it too. (Though I think you're
taking it to it's logical conclusion--some thing that PJ and JRRT left out!)
Incomplete
RmI3: Elanor's Revenge by Julie & Fianna
I printed this out and read it all in one go for this. (Did you know it's 350
some pages long so far?) Anyway, it's my favorite of your stories. I like
Elanor. She's a good original character, likeable, but not so perky she
irritates. I really like your (both Julie's and Fianna's) views of Haldir and
his brothers. I can so see some of the stuff he says and does. I like the way
you're letting the story develop naturally and slowly, we get the chance to
know Elanor, Haldir and the other characters in the story before the romance
part really takes off.
Great touches too, I especially like the part where Elanor figures out she's
had an affect--a physical one--on Haldir and the plants in the talan bloom,
well the one does. That was cute. I guess what makes me like this story so
much, even though I really don't read much het, is that you both have such good
attention to detail, and the whole story is just that--a story. I know how
things will turn out, at least for Haldir and Elanor, and that's okay, mostly
because getting there is what's fun with it. All the little misunderstandings,
and the things they found out about each other and themselves, are so great.
We get to see Elanor grow up and realize how she used Lana and others to hide
behind. We get to see Haldir let down his walls and let Elanor in. We even
see changes in Rumil and Orophin, and their love lives.
Too often, when some authors attempt to write in Professor Tolkien's world,
they get so heavy and serious. What I really like about this story, is that
it's a good story, a good tale, and it's light and enjoyable and totally
readable. I don't know about others, but I tend to read fan fiction that isn't
dark, or too angsty, or too heavy. I'm probably offending others who read this
feedback, but there is some fanfic out there that reminds me of research
papers. The story is secondary to showing how much knowledge the author has.
On the other hand, I don't like fanfic where everyone is out of character or
something is said or done totally out of place, because I obviously like
Tolkien's world. What I'm not saying very well is that I like your view of
Lorien, elves, and Haldir and his family in particular. No, it's not totally
canon but it really captures the flavor and essence of Tolkien the way I see
it, without trying to duplicate him.
What I really want to say is that Elanor's Revenge is just a darn good story,
it has a good beat and is't easy to dance to. I'll give it a 90. (Okay, I'm
sorry, I couldn't resist, I hope I'm not dating myself too badly--that's from
American Bandstand, just in case you don't recognize it!:)
Incomplete
RmI8: The Gift by Mirasaui
I was caught up in this story in the first few paragraphs. I love the whole
plot, and each of your characters seem so right to me. (Well, okay, Elrond is
sometimes more of a jerk than I see him, but it's understandable to a point)
It was so realistic that Lindir would feel the way he did, that Glorfindel
didn't like him, and that he had no place where he really fit in. And Haldir
was such a dear, always ready to help. I'm interested to see what all the gift
exchanges turn out like.
Poetry
RmP2: Courtship of the Evenstar by White Gull
Made me smile. I loved the imagery!
Poetry
RmP3: Forever My Heart by Naresha
I don't generally read much poetry, but I like the almost haiku like feel of
this one. You know, you could have even left Celeborn's name out of it and it
would be nice to use for almost any pairing. Well done.
Rivendell
RmR3: To My Shining Light by Oakenshield
I'm torn bewtween wanting to shake Erestor and wanting to push GLorfindel into
his room to see him write the letters! I wonder if Glorfindel would give up on
his attachment to Elrond if he knew how Erestor felt?
Rivendell
RmR4: Underestimated by Enismirdal
Nice to see Rumil as something other than the younger, totally goofy brother.
Interesting ways Erestor used to get the two of them together. Good read.
Rivendell
RmR5: Vanilla Cream by Kharessa Bloodrose
I can seriously taste and smell and see Erestor, and the comforting and
seductive vanilla that surrounds him--that is him! Such a lovely descriptive
story.
Rivendell
RmR6: Warrior by Mirasaui
I've read this a couple of times now, and I have to admit, I think I try to
hard. I mean, I knew the second time that it was a doll they were looking for,
but having the elf show up on the ship to the havens makes me wonder if there
was a real person or at least, I don't know, their spirit attached to that
doll. And I still want to know, where did the doll go? *hee*
Rm1: Ever Onward by Alexcat
You know I'm not much of a Gandalf fan, but I really can see this. Celeborn and
Gandalf did have a lot of time together and knowledge of each other. I'm glad
they could be there for one another at the end.
Rm3: Jealous by Oakenshield
You wrote the twins as naughty and mischievous as I often picture them, and as
good-hearted! I'm glad the whole scheme didn't backfire either!
Rm5: Quickening by Tyellas
*hee* I can SOOOO see that happening! Very entertaining!
Rm7: Spring In Imladris by CC
The twins really do need to learn how to control how they share their emotions
and such. Hope they talk to Elrond soon. And Elladan, yes, it's hard to
ignore those arrogant elves, isn't it?
Oh dear, Lindir and this fainting thing...that's not good, I think whatever
they all know, they really ought to tell him, keeping it a secret is obviously
not doing one bit of good!
Oh, Yes, Gildor and Orophin! You do love those almost-unrequited love
relationships, don't you?! *grin* Or at least relationships where they're too
silly and blind to see how the other one really feels! Just like males though.
*grin*
Oh dear poor Elladan, torn between two crushes! Or maybe lucky! And Elrohir,
those visions and nightmares, he's not in very good shape either, I guess, like
Lindir.
Orophin! *laughs* Poor thing, the twins, Lalorn and knives, he has his work
cut out for him now! And I'm really liking the dream sequences with Haldir and
Lindir. If I were Haldir, I'd be confused too, I liked how he asked himself if
it was a dream or not at the beginning.
It must be difficult for anyone who falls in love with the twins, I'd think
they'd all feel a little left out. Or maybe a little overwhelmed at not only
getting one twin, but perhaps the second as well.
Oh, of course, now that Gildor and Orophin have found each other, Elladan is
confused. *grin* I liked the part Orophin said about not spending their time
left on Aman in pain and loneliness, he's very smart.
I'm not sure, but I think they all over-react sometimes. I mean, youngsters
will be youngsters and the adults sometimes add to it when they fuss and worry
so much.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the
story, here):
Poetry
RPA2: Naresha
Forever My Heart
I don't usually read poetry, but I read Naresha's because it's a story and she
tells it in a straightforward, easy-to-read way.
RA2: Alexcat
Perfectly Happy, Simply a Kiss, The Elf Friend's Tale, Ever Onward
More stories by Alexcat that paint a picture, not overly done, but with just
the right amount of color and feeling. Alexcat is always easy to read and
entertaining.
RA5: CC
Love, Spring In Imladris
CC shows us two different types of story here, one short and one longer, part
of a serial. She adapts well to write both without shortchanging either one.
RA12: Eresse
Tender Musings
Eresse is a consistently entertaining and enjoyable read with her series
starring Legolas and Elrohir. I know I'm never going to be disappointed with
the story.
RA17: Julie
Amarie & Haldir: Paths of Destiny, Khila Amin
Julie has a light touch and even though the stories themselves aren't always
happy or without angst, it's never cloying or heavy. It's very easy to sit
down and read her work in one sitting because you get drawn into the story so
well.
RA18: Julie & Fianna
Elanor's Revenge
Julie and Fianna have a great chemistry and partnership. I can't tell where
one of them starts and the other one ends. That's not always possible with
co-written fics, and their cooperation here is well worth it. They write a
lovely story, with great characters that you come to care about very much and I
always regret the end of a chapter.
RA19: Kharessa Bloodrose
Vanilla Cream
Kharessa is definitely the queen of teasing and understatement. She knows her
characters and lets them speak through her. Always a good read.
RA26: Mirasaui
The Gift, Warrior
Mirasaui is newer to the fandom, but has absorbed enough of it to make her
writing feel familiar and welcoming. Her stories have a good emotional style,
and I look forward to each chapter she posts.
RA28: Oakenshield
To My Shining Light, Jealous
More straightforward pieces from Oakenshield, where the characters and emotions
are strong, and the images are easy to visualize. Oaks makes her stories seem
very real and believable as well as entertaining.
RA33: RennWench
Why?
Rennwench has a very loose, easy sort of story telling style. I love the tempo
she sets with most of her pieces, though. She uses pacing so effectively to
indicate strong emotional build ups.
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Msg# 2321
Re: Romance--Official Voting Ballot Posted by M E October 06, 2004 - 13:02:43 Topic ID# 2318>This is a beautiful interlude in a romance fated to be both rich and
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>Hobbits
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>RmHob1: A Little Night Music by Ariel
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>URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1710
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>Rating: R Sexual situations
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>Romance Partners: Sam/Rose
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>Summary: Samwise and Rose Gamgee spend a pleasant evening together.
yearning. Sam has traded the master he loved for a mistress he desired, and
in the end must come to terms with his choice. Sam both enjoys the fruit of
his lust, and the angst of his grief. He truely does deserve this
happiness, but then, so did his master.
WG
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Msg# 2322
Re: MEFAwards Drama and Romance Official Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 06, 2004 - 23:07:48 Topic ID# 22976, 12:00 am Central US--check the "12am Central US is what where?" database
to see when it would be ontime in your time zone), it can't be counted.
But since Romance and Drama have now opened, all you really need do is
repost it. The repost will be counted as it will be official.
Remember, everyone, though I did say I would post the ballots in the Files
section, I said you have to wait to post the votes until the categories are
open (or on Amnesty Day). So remember not to post your votes early. Check
the "12am Central US is what where?" database to see when 12am Central US is
for your time zone so you'll know when it is too early. We go by the time
stamps on the e-mails to see what comes in time and what comes early or
late).
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From: Jo Dancingtree [mailto:jodancingtree@yahoo.com]
Sent: Tuesday, October 05, 2004 3:21 PM
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Subject: [MEFAwards] MEFAwards Drama and Romance Official Ballot
Incomplete
RmI10: Winter Fire by Cuthalion
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1699534
Rating: R Rape, Violence, sexual situations Romance Partners: Damrod/f
Summary: If Middle Earth was real, and Tolkien recorded what he saw there,
could another visitor be sent, and for what purpose?
I was intrigued when Cuthalion told me she intended to write a "serious mary
sue" - but, considering the efforts in that genre I had already seen, I
wasn't certain it could be done. I am enormously impressed that she
succeeded, not only in making a serious story of it, but spinning a tale of
depth and pathos that I will never forget.
The heroine is utterly human and believable, and the rationale for her
arrival in Middle Earth is convincingly handled. The supporting characters
come to life in all their varied strengths, vanities, foibles, and (in one
case) villainy. Ioreth, the woman in the Houses of Healing who won fame for
saying, "The hands of the King bring healing," is a delight, tart and sweet
as a wildling apple. And the other half of the romance - Damrod, who was
hardly more than named by Tolkien - becomes a man of fortitude and
tenderness, and sexier than Brad Pitt. And Merry - oh my, I wouldn't have
guessed that Merriadoc is such a devil with the ladies!
I'll never again read Tolkien's account of the siege of Minas Tirith without
feeling that I know much more than he's telling me, because Cuthalion showed
me "the rest of the story." Thanks for transporting me to Middle Earth,
right along with Noerwen.
jodancingtree
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Msg# 2323
Re: Drama and Romance, 10/6/2004, 12:00 am Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 06, 2004 - 23:08:31 Topic ID# 2297season opens or closes. So always check the time. All openings and closings
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Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 07, 2004 - 18:19:31 Topic ID# 2317long one here, so I hope you'll all bear with me. All the stories are first
and the author votes can be found toward the bottom. Here we go!
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Drama
Official Voting Ballot
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STORIES
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>>DrabbleVery succinct, encompassing summary of everything Aragorn was to Arwen, and
>>DD1: Alone by Oakenshield
a brilliant explanation for her own loss of heart.
>>DrabbleThis drabble reminds me of nothing so much as free from poetry, but it is
>>DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by Lindelea
still clearly a drabble. Tight writing and good repetition of phrases pack a
lot of emotion into a tiny space. Actually, this also reminds me of a
chiasmus, with a spark of life in the middle as Eowyn shouts ýha,ý and then
it dies away again. The final words are chilling.
>>DrabbleThis is one of the most powerful drabbles Iýve ever read. Beregondýs
>>DD9: The Silent Street by Lindelea
thoughts are sobering and dark. He is clearly at the edge of his limits, but
he keeps pushing out of love for his captain. The words of traitor and rebel
that the others throw at him hurt even more as we realize he knows exactly
what heýs doing and canýt turn away from it no matter how much it pains him.
Heýs saying those same words of rebel and traitor to himself, but he wonýt
back down. He canýt, and he knows it, though it seems he longs to die
himself. A great characterization of Beregondýs loyalty and the general
madness that took place at the end of Denethorýs reign.
>>DrabbleGreat look at what Gondor faced toward the end of the Third Age and just how
>>DD10: The Steward and the King by Marta
young the loss of innocence went. I like that Aragorn recognizes valor in
Boromir, even at such a tender age, and that Boromir is already looking out
for Gondorýs welfare.
>>Gap-fillerAn incredibly balanced view of Mirkwood, Lothlýrien, and its two rulers.
>>DG1: A Silence Covered in Stone by Zimraphel
Well, three if you count Galadriel, but Celeborn and Thranduil are the real
stars of this tale. And they are everything they should be. Thranduil is
shrewd, suspicious, canny, cunning, and resourceful. He loves his home
dearly, he loves his people even more, and he loves his family above all
that, though as a king, heýs rarely allowed to indulge in these priorities.
But theyýre reflected subtly in his thoughts. Celeborn is much the same, as
is to be expected given their backgrounds, but heýs a touch wiser, not quite
as quick to leap to judgement, and more interested in things beyond the
woods. The first chapter was a gory slog through battle and chaos, and it
was told very well. The tragedy that befell both Mirkwood and Lothlýrien is
somewhat overshadowed by the fact that the Ring was destroyed at the same
time, but that doesnýt mean the deaths are worth any less in the woods. The
second chapter, where Thranduil and Celeborn meet, is a wonderful chance to
study these two rulers in action. They are almost perfect foils to one
another, having many similarities and many fundamental differences. Great
telling of the struggle in Mirkwood and Lothlýrien.
>>Gap-fillerItýs pretty much a given that I will love anything Ithilien writes, but this
>>DG2: Cry of the Gull by Ithilien
story is beautiful in its pathos and its imagery. No one does sea-longing
quite like Ithilien, and her take on it is heart-wrenching, especially in
latter stories. But in this story, we see a different side of it,
particularly in the last chapter where it become a haunting song that echoes
the entire world. Itýs as though Legolas is more complete now. And thought
that will change in years to come, for the moment, he has found a part of
himself he never knew and he is willing to embrace that part, whatever may
come of it. The journey to reach this acceptance was a great retelling of
the Paths of the Dead, and I loved how Aragorn remained a background
character for much of it, which I think very appropriate given what they
were doing. Instead, it fell to Elladan, Elrohir, and Gimli to pull Legolas
through, and that unlikely trio came through in spades. Great
characterization all around and a wonderful look at the sea-longing as
experienced by Silvan elves.
>>Gap-fillerBoromir, Faramir, and Denethor fics are surprisingly common, and most of
>>DG3: Father and Sons by Dwimordene
them use the dysfunctional family angle to portray these three characters.
As a result, itýs something of an overdone subject, but Dwimordene makes it
seem fresh. I wish I knew how. Perhaps itýs her attention to detail. Perhaps
itýs her amazing grasp on characterization. Perhaps itýs the multiple layers
that go into everything she writes, or the subtle nuances that mark the
differences between the three principle characters in this fic. These are
shrewd, cunning men, all of them, and it requires a deft hand to work them
into the story. Dwimordene is more than up to the challenge, and as a bonus,
she brings in one of my favorite (and occasionally forgotten) characters:
Imrahil. Who is just as cunning and just as perceptive as the other three,
but is still very much a contrast in many respects. Great foils, great
narrative, biting discussions, and some of the best political maneuvering
Iýve ever seen in a fic.
>>Gap-fillerGreat use of fire and all its symbolic meanings. Faramir is indeed very
>>DG4: The Fire Sermon by Altariel
quick on the uptake, as Gandalf observes at one point in this story, and it
was a joy to watch his mind ferret through all that happened since he was
injured. The idea of fire consuming him as it consumed Denethor and Boromir
is somewhat chilling, and I never quite looked on his relationship with
Eowyn like that before. But he does have a point. Fire and passion run in
his family, and they took both his brother and his father. Itýs an
interesting idea that I would love to see explored more.
>>IncompleteI was surprised by Celebornýs unexpected patience in this story. He reacted
>>DI2: Between Two Worlds by Marnie
much more vigorously to the sons of Fýanor in the story ýOak and Willow.ý
But then, Gil-galad is very much a child here, and given that, I think weýre
just seeing another aspect of Celebornýs character, and itýs an aspect that
intrigues me very much. Celeborn shows his usual penchant for insight and
perception in seeing what Gil-galad might become, and Gil-galad shows some
surprising maturity and forthrightness, especially given the counsel of his
tutor. Cýrdan is a quieter presence in the story, but I think thatýs how he
should be. Much like the sea, actually. Heýs there, but you donýt really
notice him until he needs to be noticed. Good characterization work all
around.
>>IncompleteIýve decided that Silmarils make great fic material. Gems that can set elf
>>DI6: Marinus Stiria by bryn_bnw
against elf and form the history of nearly the entire First Age are
powerful, and if an author knows how to tap into that power, an author can
have quite a fic on his/her hands. Bryn knows how, and Bryn taps for all its
worth. And this fic isnýt even finished yet! But what little there is now is
enough to make me catch my breath. The characters are stunning, and the slow
devolution of Aragornýs mind was fascinating to watch. Arwen is very much at
the top of her game, especially when she turns to Legolas as a conspirator
and confidant. The confrontation between Legolas and Aragorn, complete with
raging thunderstorm and lightning, was fantastic, and just for a moment, I
thought I understood the madness that drove Fýanor to start the first
kinslaying. The fight was fast and furious, and the consequences for both
Aragorn and Legolas are fleshed out well. Enter Gimli, who is a solid,
stabilizing presence for as long as he stays out of the corsairsý hands, and
Bergilý Well, I wonýt say anything about Bergil in case someone reading this
has yet to read Marinus Stiria, which would be a great crime. The drama and
tension in this story is great, and the added bits of humor serve as a
beautiful contrast to the darker themes within the story. Morgoth gives me
shivers, the sea-longing makes me weep, and the somewhat bumbling attempts
of the heroes to right what has gone wrong leave me on the edge of my seat
wanting to jump in and shake somebody. Very believable and very real
dramatic fic.
>>IncompleteHere we have yet another of my favorite dramatic fics. And this one packs a
>>DI7: Mirrors in the Mind by Etharei
punch. The plot twists and turns at every opportunity, throwing clues left
and right but never fully revealing itself. You think you have a handle on
it, and then it swerves in a new direction, adding layers and layers to the
mystery until it is so complex you are forced to just sit back and enjoy the
ride. And what a ride it is. One of the strongest aspects of this fic is the
impeccable ensemble characterization. Etharei takes an enormous cast of
characters and manages to give each one a moment in the spotlight. And while
in the spotlight, they are beautifully characterized and enhanced. I think
my favorite characters in Ethareiýs capable hands would be Elladan, Elrohir,
Merry, the OC Derinsul, Gimli, Arwen, and Legolas. Thatýs only a small
portion of the cast, which might give you some idea as to just how complex
this story is. Another indication would be how Etharei has put these
characters together. Most fics team up Elladan and Elrohir, or Legolas and
Gimli, or Legolas, Gimli, and Aragorn. Etharei doesnýt follow most fics. The
twins are separated, Aragorn and Arwen are separated, the start of the fic
has all Three Hunters separated, and in place of these usual team ups, we
get to see more unusual interactions (such as some very insightful dialogue
between Elrohir and Merry). The result is that the story feels very fresh
and original, which it is, but the tension between characters who donýt
usually interact adds an entirely new and exciting dynamic.
>>IncompleteSuperb and very encompassing story. I love how various story lines are
>>DI11: While We Dwelt in Fear by Pearl Took
pulled out and put together. The fic seems to be told primarily in ýmomentsý
and I think that was an excellent choice, because this fic covers a lot of
ground. I very much enjoyed how Bree was pulled into it, especially with the
suddenly very active Rangers, and I also enjoyed how we occasionally
switched over to our wanderers in the wilderness. Great characterization all
around and great ývoiceý for all the characters.
>>LOTRThe emotions in this fic felt very real, and I love the explanation given
>>DL1: Adaptation by Pervinca
for the difference between Legolas and his companions at Gandalfýs apparent
death. Legolas feels he will see Gandalf again in the West, and so the loss
is not the same for him as it is for the others. Good eye for details and
good ability to dive into the emotions of the characters.
>>LOTRThis story is quite possibly the best and most complete characterization of
>>DL2: Ashes, East Wind, Hope that Rises by ErinRua
Eomer that I have ever found. This is the Third Marshall of the Riddermark
in all his glory: forthright, bold, honest, cagey, loyal, and fearless. I
love how the encounter with the Three Hunters is turned around to be shown
from Eomerýs viewpoint, and I love even better how haughty Gimli and Legolas
both seem to him. His instant respect for Aragorn and the explanation behind
that respect were excellent, which made Eomerýs trial before Theoden even
more dramatic. Wormtongue and an encumbered Theoden were excellent, but my
favorite minor character in this piece was Hýma, who warned Eomer that he
couldnýt lend him his support but who nevertheless released Eomer from
prison as soon as possible. The doorwarden is restored to his rightful place
as an honorable, perceptive character. Later apologies and conversations
with Eowyn and Theoden wrapped this piece up nicely, and off they ride to
war and glory.
>>LOTRAn excellent look at movie!verse and the relationship (or lack thereof)
>>DL3: Bitter as Blood by Shadow975
between Boromir and Aragorn. I tend to enjoy book based fics more than I
enjoy movie based fics, but this story completely won me over. Brooding
introspection can be a difficult challenge, but itýs pulled off well here. I
think I like Boromirýs chapter best and his lines of ýHe thinks I do not
see. I see.ý But Aragorn had some great moments in his chapter, especially
when he recalls missed opportunities and wonders if his aloofness might have
contributed to Boromirýs fall. Great angsty examination of both characters.
>>LOTRThe tone setter for this fic happened in the second chapter when Gimli
>>DL7: LifeWatch by Lindelea
greets Merry and eventually hastens to reassure him that his cousins will be
perfectly fine. Merryýs pause and then his quiet response of ýYou'll be
wanting more practice if you're going to tell a convincing lieý locked me in
for the rest of the fic. That one line shows a level of maturity and
perception in Merry that not a lot of fics really emphasize. This trend
continues throughout the fic, and I like the idea that Merry is still
shadowed from his bout with the Witch-king. Itýs opened up some interesting
doors in Merryýs personality, and Lindelea explores them well.
>>LOTRNow THIS is drama. And angst. Wow, that was a heart-wrenching race through
>>DL8: Pippin's Crucible by Pearl Took
the city. Words are failing me, actually. It was so very real. I love the
line ýI have to hurry. I have to find Gandalf.ý It starts this fic out so
well, giving Pippin a purpose and some haste. But then as he begins passing
those who are dying and those who are trying to claw their way out of the
rubble, it becomes much more than a simple purpose. It becomes his focus and
his driving force. Heýs tearing apart inside, and the only thing that keeps
him going is that eternal refrain that repeats in this fic over and over
until we feel like hurrying to find Gandalf, too. The first time Pippin sees
a hand trying to crawl out from under stone, the entire narrative crawls to
a halt, too, and the use of ellipses is quite possibly the best use of
punctuation Iýve ever seen. I actually held my breath when that happened. It
was horrible! And then the drops falling down accompanied by Pippinýs mind
reminding him that it isnýt rain. His insistence that the puddles are dark
because it is night, not for any other reason. The rambling, denying voice
of Pippinýs mind was a character within its own right, and then there were
other voices contesting it, and through it all, that pressing goal to reach
Gandalf. And then when he reaches Gandalf and finds the Witch-king, the
narrative gets choppy and abrupt, which is PERFECT because thatýs exactly
what Pippinýs mind starts doing. Absolutely stunning work of drama!
>>LOTRLayers upon layers, despite the fact that these letters are ýSpartan.ý Even
>>DL10: Spartan Letters by Dwimordene
the first one seemed devoid of any real substance, though there was plenty
to read between the lines. And though the second letter was much shorter, it
spoke much louder. The words themselves didnýt say much. The message, did,
though. And thatýs what makes this fic so impressive. Itýs not the words.
Itýs the meaning behind the words, and it takes a talented author to make
that message speak from behind the veil of what the characters are saying
(or writing, as is the case here). Great angst, and I really wouldnýt want
to be near Denethor when he opened the letter beside his dying son.
>>LOTRIýve been trying to think of a word that might adequately describe this fic.
>>DL13: Veiling of the Sun by Maggie (M. N. Theis)
The best thing Iýve been able to come up with is the word ýgritty.ý This is
a gritty journey, from beginning to end. The idea behind the AU is one
thatýs been done before, but Maggie takes it to the next level. Boromir gets
the Ring from Frodo at Amon Hen, but Boromir doesnýt keep the Ring. Legolas
gets it away and gives it to Sam. After that, things go downhill very fast.
And itýs amazing just how far downhill they get before they even begin to
think of looking up. Maggie doesnýt shy away from the gore. She doesnýt
overdo it, but neither does she spare her readers the horrific journey these
characters go through. This is an intense, dark AU with elements from the
book, the movie, and complete surprises that pop in and out as the story
veers further and further away from the direction that Tolkien took it. And
itýs very believable. The characters are real, their pain is real, their
struggle is real, the politics are real, and the interactions are real. I
love the journey that Boromir took, the OCs brought in from Legolasýs
family, the incredible stakes involved, and the final, bitter-sweet
resolution that reminds us you can never really go back.
>>LOTRThis fic reminds me of something Denethor said in RotK. In response to
>>DL14: Wizard by M. Sebasky
something Pippin said, he talked about how he sent his sons to battle but
did not go himself. Gandalfýs thoughts seem to be running along similar
lines, though he has also gone to war. But heýs thinking of everyone he
brought with him, particularly Frodo, and heýs wishing that there had been
another way. Itýs an interesting experience to watch Gandalf go through a
series of regrets, and itýs handled beautifully. Denethor, Frodo, Merry,
Pippiný The list goes on, and the fact that Merry is fading during this time
is a sobering though, especially in light of what Gandalf is already
pondering. Very nice and introspective look into the White Wizard.
>>Post-WOTRSimple and sweet. I donýt think I truly understood this fic the first time I
>>DPoW8: Immortal by Ainaechoiriel
read it, but reading it again for these awards, Iýve come to appreciate it
much more. This is a beautiful gesture on the part of a very perceptive
Pippin and Merry, and between the two of them, theyýve ensured that Legolas
will at least make it to the Undying Lands. The scene between the three of
them is terrific, but what moved me most was Arwenýs simple understanding
and compassion. She and Legolas say very little, but then, what are either
titles or words between them? Great story!
>>Post-WOTRSuperb retelling of Thranduilýs past. The attack on Doriath was fast and
>>DPoW10: Paths We Trod, Wrongs We Bore by Coriel
furious, and I love the despair and frustration he feels when he loses
Sirion, especially after having lost Doriath twice. Heýs never been able to
keep a home, and now heýs losing Greenwood, too. The weary acceptance at the
end was very well done. Great story.
>>Post-WOTRThis story pumps out the angst and drama in spades, but the thing I like
>>DPoW11: Perchance to Dream by M. N. Theis
best about it is the way it keeps the readers guessing. This story is
basically divided up in thirds, with the first third being Legolasýs, the
second Faramirýs, and the last Aragornýs. For that first third, I was
suspicious and wondered if something odd was going on, because the story was
told so very tightly from Legolasýs POV. I kept wondering if there was
something he was missing, but I didnýt guess the true ramifications until
halfway through Faramirýs third when itýs revealed just how limiting
Legolasýs POV really was. When the truth finally comes tumbling out of the
narrative, itýs accompanied by some intense revelations and a sudden surge
in the action and the drama. Itýs almost as though the story climaxes
halfway through, but as exciting and heart-wrenching as the middle is, itýs
nothing compared to the final moments of Aragornýs POV. The action and the
plot/counter-plot are gorgeous in this piece, and the characterizations are
great, particularly Arwen, who is a very grounded, practical, and
quick-thinking personality throughout the story. All in all, itýs an
intense, gripping ride from start to finish.
>>Post-WOTRBarahir shows some amazing insight in this tale, and Eowyn is brought to
>>DPoW12: Shards of Time by AL Milton
life in a completely new light for me. I very much enjoyed his attempts to
learn more about his ýshiftingý grandmother, and I enjoyed the use of the
word ýshiftingý as it kept coming into play. Even though Eowynýs story and
the characters in this fic are sundered by time, they manage to bridge the
gap quite well, and the journey is just as much fun as the end result.
>>Post-WOTRVery moody and very profound. I shivered the idea of Elrond begging for
>>DPoW13: Sorrow Profound by Alexcat
death when Gil-galad died, and I like how sorrow was turned inward by the
end of the story rather than outward at grief for others. Intriguing
introspection.
>>Post-WOTRDefinitely one of my all-time favorite works of fanfiction. This is a
>>DPoW17: The Hunting Trip by Ithilien
tightly-knit story that sends out no red herrings and weaves every single
minute detail into the final tapestry. Personal problems feed into the
larger problems, and solutions trickle their way down from a myriad of
different directions until they coalesce into a larger picture and readers
sit back, hit their heads, and wonder why we didnýt see it before. What I
like best about this fic is the characterization. There are six canon
characters and an encampment of OCs. None of them are overlooked. In fact,
the OCs could easily hold the story themselves. They are complete, vibrant,
believable personalities, and we are drawn into their world through details,
actions, and a very fluid narrative. The canon characters are expanded into
amazing personalities. Ithilien takes attributes and hints given in the
books and then expounds upon them for all theyýre worth, creating
well-rounded characters that shine each time they show up on a page. And
because the characters are so convincing, the drama and the action of the
story becomes that much more real and vivid. The pace takes its time getting
started, but the start is so enjoyable as our six heroes set out that I
sometimes wish it would continue to meander. But Ithilien knows what sheýs
doing, and when things get moving, the story gets very exciting very
quickly. By the end, itýs an amazing race to the finish, and I had to stop
myself from jumping ahead to find out how it all finishes. And Ithilien ties
up all the loose ends, putting a very satisfying conclusion on a very well
told story.
>>Pre-WOTRItýs a short little fic, but somehow it manages to give me chills. The idea
>>DPrW1: A Family Trait by Marnie
of Elladan and Elrohir growing up to become like Celebrimbor is an idea I
really donýt like, and the unease on the part of Celeborn and Celebrýan
seems to indicate that my view are shared. Somewhat unnerving piece of
fiction, despite its relatively innocent narrative. Nice contrast in moods.
>>Pre-WOTRThereýs one line in this story that I just have to share, and thatýs this
>>DPrW2: All These Wore Wings by fileg
one: ýstill a dreamer but never deceived by his dreams.ý Itýs what Boromir
glimpses of Faramirýs future, and I find it very moving and appropriate.
Faramir never was deceived, and it showed in his war within Ithilien, but he
still dreamed, making him a very unique character. The parallel between
Faramir and Tuor was not one I would have drawn, but I think it works, and
makes for a rather unnerving comparison.
>>Pre-WOTRThat was a surprisingly disturbing story, and I think the innocence of the
>>DPrW5: Games of Innocence by Cirdan
twins made it all the worse. They hunt Teleri while their parents assume
they hunt Orcs, and then that last game of Elrond and Elrosý I was
disturbed. Thereýs something fundamentally wrong in seeing the horrors of
the First Age and Second Age acted out by children. Very eerie tale.
>>Pre-WOTRIn terms of dramatic content, I think JastaElfýs alternate story Dark Leaf
>>DPrW6: Leaf and Branch by JastaElf
dwarfs this one, but this is still a great piece of fiction. It jumps
immediately into the action with Elrond searching frantically for a very
young Legolas, and I love the immediacy and urgency conveyed. Itýs a great
pace to start off the story. Legolasýs defiance of the Orcs at such a young
age spoke volumes on the elf he will eventually become. The introduction of
a Nazgýl is a chilling development, and the Nazgýl is portrayed very well.
Dark, ominous, and frighteningly intelligent. Still, he should know better
than to take Thranduil at face value. I absolutely love Thranduil in this
fic, portrayed as shrewd and stalwart with an overwhelming need to see his
son safe and sound. Great story with both action and drama, and I aware
bonus points for using the word ýrivený at one point in the tale. Thatýs a
great word and definitely needs to be used more.
>>Pre-WOTRThere ought to be more stories like this. I love glimpses of Thranduil and
>>DPrW7: Promises to Keep by JastaElf
young Legolas, especially in the hands of an author so gifted as JastaElf. I
love the long look at Thranduil that we get in the beginning of the story
before Legolas is added to the action, and later Brethilas. Heart-warming,
bittersweet tale, especially for Thranduilýs part, and I very much enjoyed
it.
>>Pre-WOTRI really liked this story, which is odd because I donýt normally like young
>>DPrW8: Small Soldiers by Cori Lannam
Boromir and young Faramir. But this story is different. You can see inklings
of their adult personalities in these younger versions, and stern Denethor
reveals that he does indeed have a softer side. Boromirýs need to be adult
and show authority was great, and his surrender to comfort in the end was
heart-warming, though his vow even as he did so sent chills down my spine. I
could see the Ring twisting that promise into a need to protect Gondor
regardless of Elrondýs council. Faramirýs recovery from his motherýs death
was much like his recovery from Denethorýs death in RotK. Great echoes of
the future in a story of the past.
>>D1: A Flood, A Fall, A Finale, A Fever by Pearl TookFascinating ride. Iýve never read a fic quite like this, and I very much
enjoyed it. And yes, it was eerily reminiscent of Stephen King, though I
consider this better written than anything King puts out. I kept looking to
see if the new sequence would be the one that explained the rest of them,
but it never really did, though there were many clues and hints dropped
along the way. The fact that each one started out with roughly the same line
gave an unnerving, surreal feel, and built the tension quite nicely. Very
unique and very different story.
>>D5: Magpies and Rhymes by AcaceaChilling and foreboding. I loved the use of a childrenýs rhyme, and I
enjoyed seeing Denethor and Faramir together and not at one anotherýs
throats. Itýs a moment when they can both agree on something. Unfortunately,
that something is not particularly pleasant. No matter what, it seems
theyýll always be marred.
>>D7: Quiet by ArchetBroody and moving little piece of introspection. I like the repetition of
the word ýquietý and how it seems to draw everything together. I imagine
that Faramirýs mind is a very quiet place, especially at times like this.
>>D8: Standards by DwimordeneI love character studies, especially when they get into culture and
politics. Arwen and Gilraen are both characters for whom culture and
politics play a large role, and placing these two together and having them
create a standard/shroud for Aragorn as a gift to a bride-groom was
inspired. I love Arwenýs almost clumsy attempts to embrace Dýnedain culture.
She doesnýt truly understand it yet, though by the end, sheýll probably
understand it all too well. Itýs something of a heart breaker, especially
given what we know will ultimately happen to Arwen. Gilraen makes the most
of her appearance by showing a keen mind but also a weary heart. Characters
only mentioned (such as Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, and Aragorn) are
surprisingly complete in this fic, despite their absence, which is the mark
of an extremely talented writer.
>>D15: To Sing of War by AvonThis story is written in prose, but it has a very poetic feel to it. I love
the way Thranduilýs view on war is expressed, and I love how his experiences
are brought forward to support this view. Thranduil has indeed lived war,
and Avon shows us that. I think the question from the trees of ýWhere are
the restý and the rejoinder of ýThere are no restý was what really got to me
in the end. Beautiful and tragic little tale.
>>D17: Whispers by EllbeeWhoa. Creepy. A wonderful look at seduction and temptation inching their way
into Aragornýs thoughts. I really appreciate how he had dismissed the Ring
initially but was too wise to do so now. Very chilling.
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>>DrabbleLindelea has some terrific long stories, but her drabbles are amazing, too.
>>DDA2: Lindelea
She knows exactly how to strike an emotional chord with the audience, and
she knows just what words will get the most from her readers. She brings
home whatever message is contained within the drabble through the use of
repetition. Sometimes itýs a literal repetition of words, and at other times
itýs a more subtle repetition of ideas and thoughts. Either way, it works.
Lindelea is an amazing drama drabble writer.
>>DA10: bryn_bnwMost people familiar with Bryn are familiar with her humorous works. And
those are good, there can be no doubt about that. But the dark story of
ýmarinus stiriaý is a world above and apart from the more light-hearted
fics. Certain chapters of ýOut of the Frying Paný hinted that Bryn could be
an excellent drama and angst writer, but I was completely blown away by this
story as it progressed. This is wonderful drama and angst, balanced by
careful insertions of humor that hark back to the lighter tales but never
overwhelm the sheer pathos in this story. One of the things that impresses
me most is Brynýs ability to create atmosphere and to use the environment to
enhance the story. The fact that Aragorn and Legolas come to blows during a
raging thunderstorm might seem clichý, but only to those who have not read
the scene. It fits perfectly, and there is no sense whatsoever that this
thunderstorm is in any way ýclichý.ý The quiet fields of Rohan outside
Aglarond where Gimli and Legolas sit and talk is another example of Brynýs
ability in this area. The meeting place becomes a place of compromise where
Legolas and Gimli both feel comfortable and where they can talk without fear
of interruption. Little touches like scenery and weather add volumes to this
story, and Brynýs drama is driven as much by the characters as it is by the
setting.
>>DA17: DwimordeneDwimordeneýs writing style is perfectly suited for drama. She has a talent
for getting into a characterýs psyche and examining situations from all
angles. When those situations turn problematic and multiple characters start
interacting, the drama takes on new dimensions. It becomes a political game,
a personal obstacle, and a family dispute. Character introspection seems to
play an important part in whatever situation Dwimordene has concocted for
her characters, and she is careful to make these moments of reflection
pertinent to the story and intriguing for readers. Itýs easy for some
writers to become bogged down by introspective details, but Dwimordene
neatly avoids that trap by transforming introspection into an extension of
dialogue. Her characters essentially speak to themselves. Not with thoughts
in italics or anything like that, but the structure of the narrative is such
that it feels as though the introspection is a long conversation. And as
Dwimordene excels at conversation (some of the most impressive dialogue can
be seen in her stories involving Faramir) the introspection becomes a thing
of great interest and plays very well into the dramatic atmosphere that
already characterizes her stories.
>>DA22: EthareiEtharei is able to take characters who donýt normally go together and give
them new life as they form new relationships. It adds an entirely different
level of complexity to a drama fic, and a very welcome one at that.
Ethareiýs story has its share of hurt/comfort, drama, angst, action, and
mystery, but the main conflict is augmented by the fact that characters
unused to working together are suddenly forced into situations where they
must rely upon each other. As if that wasnýt complex enough, Etharei also
enhances Tolkienýs characters, the most obvious example being her
characterization of Gimli who is suddenly beset with dreams. So the
characters are fighting themselves (which is not unusual in a drama fic, but
Etharie makes it count here), theyýre struggling to work with one another
(again, not entirely unusual, but it gets a lot of focus in this fic), and
theyýre also attempting to find out what is happening to those who have
disappeared. Even those who have disappeared are trying to figure out what
happened to themselves. All three levels receive focus, and all three play
into the storyýs greater picture, making for a very rich and very detailed
drama. My hat goes off to Etharei for pulling all this together and also for
keeping careful track of the various threads within the story. Those of you
who have read this amazing fic will know that keeping everything straight is
no simple task.
>>DA27: IthilienIthilien is one of my favorite authors in both the LotR fandom and other
fandoms around the Internet. She shows amazing abilities at ensemble
characterization in which the POV is shared by several different people, and
she is equally gifted when telling a story from a single viewpoint. She
firmly grounds readers in her characters, giving them a chance to get to
know the heroes and villains of the story, and then she swings the drama
into place. Itýs a very effective writing tool, and as readers, we become
completely embroiled in the story, unable to leave it. One of the things
that Ithilien does best are moments of disorientation. That sounds odd, but
itýs true. Not many authors can pull off a convincing and disorienting
dream-like sequence, but Ithilien excels at it. Itýs a difficult task,
especially since Ithilien so carefully stays within the bounds of her
characterýs POV. The narrative and story must move forward, but coherency
has to be sacrificed because the character is confused or adrift. Ithilien
strikes a delicate balance between the two and then walks a grueling
tightrope to the other side, guiding the reader through the disorientation
but letting us experience enough of it to feed into the storyýs drama. And
then there are Ithilienýs other and many talents, such as her ability for
heart-stopping action, cruel cliff hangers, humor, insightful romance, and a
host of other things that I could spend an entire day ticking off. A very
gifted and very well-rounded author.
>>DA28: JastaElfJastElf conveys a sense of movement within her stories. I really donýt know
if I can explain it any better than that because Iým not sure I understand
it myself. But whenever I read her stories, it feels as though things are
constantly moving. Even when the characters are just talking to one another
or sitting around reflectively, something always seems to be happening. I
suspect itýs the narrative that does this, because the words sweep the
reader along with a steady flow of images and ideas. And this flow never
stops, though it does ebb and swell from time to time, and that seems to be
JastaElfýs best way of increasing tension and drama. I donýt know of any
other author who operates in quite this way, which makes all of Jastaýs
stories unique, refreshing, and very enjoyable. Drama can be difficult to
write because it so often becomes stagnant if drawn out, but because
JastaElf has such a moving narrative, drama is always exciting and new in
her fics.
>>DA37: M. N. TheisI would actually say that M. N. Theis writes angst more than she writes
drama, but however you want to interpret it, the stories mentioned here are
dark, gripping, and incapable of being put aside once theyýre begun. Much of
the storiesý focus and drive comes from character introspection,
particularly the story ýPerchance to Dream.ý And as a huge fan of character
introspection myself, I love it. I love the depth this gives us and the
understanding of their ultimate decisions, actions, and motivations. Maggie
also does action very well, and by keeping it in the limited POV, battle
scenes become intense, focused, and bewildering. I can only imagine what
kind of planning and preparation go into these fics, because they are woven
as seamless arcs from beginning to end. Great narrative, great dialogue, and
great ability to incorporate both book and movie verse.
>>DA44: Pearl TookPearl Took is very gifted when it comes to hobbits, and even more gifted
when it comes to narratives. She posses an amazing ability to stop and start
the pace of a story at will, and when it happens, it feels completely
natural. Itýs a wonderful way to heighten tension and play with a readerýs
emotions, and itýs an even better to play up and draw out the drama of a
situation. She has a wonderful feel for what different characters sound
like, and when the narrative turns to introspection, the ambling paths of
the mind become a fascinating and occasionally frightening journey.
>>DA55: ZimraphelZimraphel has a unique ability to burrow into the characterýs minds, root
out their true thoughts, and then bring them to the surface. But itýs done
subtly enough that their outward personalities, occasionally a shield
against grief or pain, remain firmly in place. The result is a fantastic
characterization blend that incorporates nearly all the attributes of the
characters in question. Then Zimraphel adds in a touch of beautiful,
heart-wrenching angst and the end result is stunning. We come to know the
characters well enough that their drama is also our drama, and when they are
hurt, we are hurt right along with them.
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Ta-da! Um...yeah, I guess that was a little long. Sorry about that!
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Msg# 2329
Re: Adventure--Official Voting Ballot Posted by amebrindra October 07, 2004 - 19:34:41 Topic ID# 2264URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1504859/1/
I enjoyed this story thoroughly. It was creatively written and shows
great imagination. The friendship between Legolas and Aragorn was
wonderfully portrayed. It was so well done that it drew me in and I
was unable to stop reading until I found out what happened. I find
myself unable to adequately express how much I enjoyed reading this
story. Legorfilinde's style and clarity of writing are a delight. I
certainly look forward to reading anything else she may write.
Amebrindra
Msg# 2330
Re: Adventure--Official Voting Ballot Posted by amebrindra October 07, 2004 - 20:08:46 Topic ID# 2264Bitten, Fireside Tales
Legorfilinde has been my favorite author since I read Hidden which
was not her first story, but it was the first story I had read
authored by her. I was amazed, and remain amazed, at her ability to
transport me into her stories.
She has a scope of imagination which continually astounds me with
her ability to create incredibly believable, completely original
situations with well known, well loved characters. Her portrayal of
Legolas and Aragorn have redefined these characters for me in an
wonderfully positive way. In writing Bitten and Fireside Tales she
brought to life a wealth of past experiences for them which adds
depth and meaning to their friendship.
Every time I read one of her stories I am treated to a movie in my
mind. This is not something that happens often for me, but with her
wonderful style of writing...it happens every time.
Amebrindra
Msg# 2331
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Reviews and ballots and such Posted by bljean@aol.com October 08, 2004 - 10:47:23 Topic ID# 2335before the MEFA got started, and even though I didn't get to them during
"reading season" I have them earmarked for the long, cold days of winter when one
wants to snuggle up on the couch with a good read...
Thanks for taking the time to write all you did! (talking to TT and all the
others whose ballots I've looked through) You make me want to expand my reading
horizons, and perhaps, if life will just regain some semblance of sanity,
I'll be able to follow that wish.
Lindelea
In a message dated 10/8/2004 8:24:49 AM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
Mwahahaha! Fear me and my ballots! Erm...right. Anyway, I've got another
long one here, so I hope you'll all bear with me. All the stories are first
and the author votes can be found toward the bottom. Here we go!
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Official Voting Ballot
A2: Bitten by Legorfilinde
Plausible quest (to find the blue wizards), steady pacing, and
charming dialogue make this piece easy to read and enjoy. The baddies
were intriguing as well, and the sense of adventure and mystery was
palpable (maybe because you gave us the details like provisioning,
etc.).
A5: Forgotten Allies by JMac
This is not the first time I've read this story, of course, but every
time I re-read it, I'm struck overwhelmingly by the professionalism
and fluidity of the writing. Truly, this story could be printed and
sold. Setting, movement, plot, and characterisation are all right on.
I think the thing that sets this story apart from so much LoTRfic,
however, is the sleek dialogue. JMac has mastered that show-not-tell
writing proverb and woven a compelling tale that never gets bogged
down in overdescription or verbose language. So, on a stylistic basis
alone, the story shines. But then there's Elrohir. Wow, just wow. I
know some readers might be creeped by that piece of the plot, but I
found it incredibly touching and a true what-if exploration of what
it is to be an elf. Never in this story did I make the mistake of
believing that elves were simply very pretty humans. JMac has set
them apart, made them magical ... and made them tragic. I think
Tolkien would like that.
A6: Hope Rekindled by Marta
This piece is short but succulent. For a while after reading it, I
wished you'd rewritten the whole story from his point of view. His
narrative voice was that strong.
A9: The Patient by Scribe
I can't really say enough about this story. Usually, I avoid reading
lengthy multichapter fics because they tend to go on and on and have
no point. However, this one definitely has a point. It even has a
plot! And a story arc! Holy cow: it has a beginning, middle, and end!
It has humour and car chases and coca-cola abuse and target practice
with elves. It has the best characterisation of Gandalf I've ever
read outside of Tolkien, hands down. It has moments of gut-wrenching
romance that are neither trite nor overdone. It even has an Arwen
that is spunky and spirited and not in the least dull (as Tolkien's
original was, in my opinion). It's written in real English, the kind
of English that makes me want to to keep on reading instead of
falling asleep at two in the morning. In fact, despite the length of
the story, never once did my eyes glaze over, never once did I just
wish for a scene to be over. Even the seeminly insignificant details
had meaning (like marshmallows, for instance). And the twist at the
end was solid enough to support a film version. In fact, the whole
thing flowed so smoothly and cinematically, it would translate easily
to film, I think.
A10: The Rebel by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=790
The dialogue was stark and uncomfortable, several times making me
wince. The torment of imprisonment, contrasted so baldly with those
warm and inviting and hobbity flashbacks, evoked all the feelings I
think you were going for: horror, anger, emptiness, and furious hope.
Gorgeous writing.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the
category, not the story, here):
AA4: JMac
Forgotten Allies
JMac is one of the most consistently superb authors in ficdom. I just
wish I could convince her, once and for all, of her fantasticness.
AA8: Lindelea
The Rebel
I hadn't read Lindelea before the MEFAs (in fact, I'm fairly new to
reading hobbit-based fic). But if this piece is representative of her
storytelling talent overall, I'm anxious to read more of her work.
AA11: Scribe
The Patient
I've told Scribe this before: her talents are wasted on a free-
publishing market like fic. She ought to be getting paid for this
stuff. She's that good. When I'm introducing people who've never read
fanfic before and want to know what it's all about, Scribe is one of
the authors I point them to, an example of the representative best in
fic.
Msg# 2337
Re: Adventure--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 08, 2004 - 12:00:16 Topic ID# 2264Official Voting Ballot
Pre-LOTR
AP7: Icicle Cream by Khylea
Anything with the twins is good for me. I love this one. It reminds me of the excitement of a first snow for all kids and the snow cream that my mother used to make. It was sweet and nostalgic, a fiction that made me sit the smile on my face after I had finished.
A3: Braid by Khylea
This one had me crying like a baby. It was so sweet and yet so sad. Even the flashback brought a tear to my eye. I too think Elrond is such a tragic figure in LOTR. He loses so much and his called upon to sacrifice so much. This fiction shows it in such a lovely way. I really like the way Khylea made Aragorn his SON and not just another human.
A4: Fireside Tales by Legorfilinde
Oh, I enjoyed those. Each one was steeped in lore that we know with as added adventure that we donýt. Especially the last one! I can imagine little tiny Legolas with his toy dagger! Each tale is different and each one has its own tone. My favorite parts were the times that a melancholy Legolas smiled. The quiet friendship and trust between the two of them is lovely.
A6: Hope Rekindled by Marta
A moving depiction of the battle and its warriors. It reminded me of the children and old men who fought at Helmýs Deep. Imrahil did not have an enviable task yet he did itý and for a city not even his own. I especially liked the part at the end when he found the maiden lived yet. It seemed indeed to be hope rekindled.
A7: One Of Them by Khylea
This fiction is just beautiful, even if it is a first oneý it is a moving story told around movie verse. I loved the Helms Deep scenes and I have to say they are captured here with much feeling. To have Legolas admit much shame and despair that his people did not come to fight. My favorite part is the swell of hope when Legolas hears the elf horn.
A8: She Gave Me Three by Khylea
Ack! More tears. This story actually reminded me a bit of the gift of the magiý though only one side. Galadrielýs hair was Gimliýs most precious gift and he gave it to Legolas, surely signifying that he was indeed an elf friend. I loved the way he acted as if it didnýt matter to him at all. You know, I have wondered about the burial of the bodies at the Deepý because the customs of men did not seem to be burning any but orcs and I think a mass grave would have been the only answer.
A11: To Save a Hobbit by Khylea
I also always wondered what sort of elvish medicine that Elrond used to heal Frodo. This story is a wonderful and imaginative filling in of that gap. Again I love the way you weave a story around movie verse so beautifully.
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I don't know why I've been so technically inept as I've shown myself with the MEFAs - I'm not usually quite so bone-headed...
crawling back in my corner,
jo
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Jo, since this was posted early (Drama and Romance didn't start until Oct.
6, 12:00 am Central US--check the "12am Central US is what where?" database
to see when it would be ontime in your time zone), it can't be counted.
But since Romance and Drama have now opened, all you really need do is
repost it. The repost will be counted as it will be official.
Remember, everyone, though I did say I would post the ballots in the Files
section, I said you have to wait to post the votes until the categories are
open (or on Amnesty Day). So remember not to post your votes early. Check
the "12am Central US is what where?" database to see when 12am Central US is
for your time zone so you'll know when it is too early. We go by the time
stamps on the e-mails to see what comes in time and what comes early or
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Msg# 2339
Official Romance Ballot Posted by Jo Dancingtree October 08, 2004 - 13:15:42 Topic ID# 2339RmI10: Winter Fire by Cuthalion
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1699534
Rating: R Rape, Violence, sexual situations
Romance Partners: Damrod/f
Summary: If Middle Earth was real, and Tolkien recorded what he saw there, could another visitor be sent, and for what purpose?
I was intrigued when Cuthalion told me she intended to write a "serious mary sue" - but, considering the efforts in that genre I had already seen, I wasn't certain it could be done. I am enormously impressed that she succeeded, not only in making a serious story of it, but spinning a tale of depth and pathos that I will never forget.
The heroine is utterly human and believable, and the rationale for her arrival in Middle Earth is convincingly handled. The supporting characters come to life in all their varied strengths, vanities, foibles, and (in one case) villainy. Ioreth, the woman in the Houses of Healing who won fame for saying, "The hands of the King are the hands of a healer," is a delight, tart and sweet as a wildling apple. And the other half of the romance - Damrod, who was hardly more than named by Tolkien - becomes a man of fortitude and tenderness, and sexier than Brad Pitt. And Merry - oh my, I wouldn't have guessed that Merriadoc is such a devil with the ladies!
I'll never again read Tolkien's account of the siege of Minas Tirith without feeling that I know much more than he's telling me, because Cuthalion showed me "the rest of the story." Thanks for transporting me to Middle Earth, right along with Noerwen.
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Msg# 2340
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 08, 2004 - 15:05:51 Topic ID# 2263Official Voting Ballot
Humor-mefas
HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa Green
This one frankly made me laugh my butt off. Itýs just so cute and clever. I really enjoyed the part about bathing the Boromir.
HuR1: Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond by Claudi007
Elladanýs family makes us all happy that its HIS family and not ours. This is definitely not a story to be read in a library because unless you have no sense of humor at all, youýll be giggling helplessly. And do put your coffee down too.
HuR2: How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Claudi007
Poor Elladan! Such a life! Grandpa is my favorite in this one and that thing with Erestor. Always glad that theyýre not my family. Legolas and Elrohir are a hoot!
Hu1: Dance With Me by Jenolas
Gentle humor and sweetness! Who wouldnýt want to dance with Legolas?
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> DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by LindeleaOh, nice! I particularly liked the first (and last) line, "A dead
man's helm," etc. But the whole thing was very nice. I was on the
marching band drum line in high school, and I can just hear us crying
this out as we marched on the field. Very in character for Eowyn as well.
> DD9: The Silent Street by LindeleaWunderbar! The line "Whence cometh my aid" felt almost Biblical; in
fact, it's a quote from the 121st Psalm, I think? "I will lift up mine
eyes unto the hills, from whence cometh my help. My help cometh from
the LORD." But perhaps that's not intentional. Regardless, the piece
was very nice. The sword drinking blood called to mind Túrin Turambar
- excellent touch.
> DG3: Father and Sons by DwimordeneThis is quite possibly the most convincing accounting I've ever seen
of why Boromir and not Faramir was sent to Imladris and not Faramir.
The characterizations do not always agree with my own conceptions (one
wonders how the Denethor in the latter chapters could, nearly a year
later, be so civil when he welcomes Pippin and Gandalf), but they were
told skillfully nonetheless. Brava for such a thorough psychological
tale of despair.
> DL2: Ashes, East Wind, Hope that Rises by ErinRuaURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=696
A very nice gapfiller about Éomer. I was surprised when there was a
whole other chapter after Grima's expulsion, thinking the conflict
between Éomer and Grima was the true point of the story. But by the
end I realized it was a tale of Éomer losing and finding hope. To see
hope triumph in the dark days, and it not seem fake - well done.
> DL6: For Gondor by AvonURL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1256
Very nicely done. The repetition of sounds gives just enough prompts
that my overactive imagination can fill the details; I really saw this
scene playing out.
> DL9: River Flowing by DwimordeneURL: http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=2&chapter=1
Oh, nicely done! I love reading gap-fillers about minor characters,
and this brought to life a whole culture I hadn't really spent much
time thinking about. My only complaint is it's too short.
> DL14: Wizard by M. SebaskyURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3499
I've often thought about the parallel between Denethor and Frodo;
people don't often compare the two, but I think their stories have a
lot of similarities. Yours is the first story I've seen that addresses
the two of them together, and you do it very interestingly, through
Gandalf's eyes. It seemed very IC. My one complaint is the present
tense felt a bit odd in places.
> DP1: Beth Gorthaur Aglar Beleth by Arwen ImladvielURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=841
Oh, beautiful. I loved the cadence of the Quenya (or was that
Sindarin), the way it sounded in my ear. And then when I read the
meaning in English, it was chilling. A most unusual view as well.
> DpoW12: Shards of Time by AL MiltonURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1045
A nice evaluation of a troubling character. Before reading your story
I never had much sympathy for Éowyn (she was to me more deserter than
heroine), but through thinking about your story I've come to read some
of the canon in a different light. She really is a tragic character,
even if I don't approve of her actions, and this story shows her as
such. I also really liked your characterization of Barahir; he is a
historian, yes, but also the son of Faramir and Éowyn, and that means
a fair amount of passion, albeit of a restrained sort.
> DpoW18: The Last Grey Ship by ErinRuaURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=277
I cried the first time I read this story, and I cried when I reread it
a few weeks ago. Especially the line "the world was grown ever so much
larger and full of echoes" - this captures the very heart of grief, I
think. You also nailed all of the characterizations, especially
Gimli's! When he was talking about wanting a meal, a cup, and a bed, I
laughed out loud. To be honest, he and Legolas remind me of the Odd
Couple, which is a compliment in my book. Even your smaller parts,
like that of Eldarion, was nice. If you asked me to point out what was
wrong, I think I may have noticed one or two typos (the beta in me
will never rest!), but besides that it really was perfect. Brava!
> DPrW8: Small Soldiers by Cori LannamURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1498
Nice story. I particularly liked Denethor as
loving-if-somewhat-distant father.
> DPrW9: The Sacrifice of Soldiers by paranoidangelURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1603
Interesting. I had never considered how living among Elves would
affect Estel's view of death, but you present a compelling question
and a good answer.
> D8: Standards by DwimordeneURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2613
You wrote the interaction between Gilraen and Arwen well here. It's
nice to see women interacting as women (not as mother/wife/sister of
Man X).
Marta
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> Humorevil witch king surrounded by Peter Jackson's fellowship, minus the
>
> Official Voting Ballot
> >
> Alternate Universe
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> Alternate Universe
>
> HuA2: No Living Man by Elana
>
> An interesting thought and a definite chuckle, I can just see the
men of Gondor and cowering. Although it is an au ficlet it was quite
a fun read. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
>those who don't know Tolkien very well would benefit from this fic,
>
> Alternate Universe
>
> HuA3: Slightly Muddled by Lindelea
> : An interesting idea that was cute to read. I kept thinking that
especially in understanding that the characters just sound so silly
saying things like "cutting a rug". I did think that it was a cute
idea, the making them puke thing was a bit icky but all in all it
was well rounded and entertaining.
>that stare.", now that line did it for me, I starting giggling here
> Alternate Universe
>
> HuA4: The Fanfic Lounge: The Lord of the Rings by CNell
>
>> "ORLANDO: Yeah yeah yeah. Stop staring at me. Hell, I invented
and then it was all chuckles and giggles after that. Incredible idea
and quite amusing too, this author made me interested in the fic by
throwing in amusing statements and by adding bits of ideas like the
Mary Sue Room. I was hoping Orlando would go into that room, the
fangirls would go rabid, then Legolas could save him, and the
fangirls would be uberrabid. A very good and funny piece of work.
>ingenuity of the author has brought a few giggles and laughs out of
>
> HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's Daughter
>
>Hilariously written! The content was seriously inventive and the
me today. Seriously well done and worth reading more than once.
>Green
> Parody
>
> HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa
>completely hilarious. I absolutely love the "Trouble Shooting"
> Oh my goodness I never stopped laughing and found this guide
portion where details are given about what and why Boromir acts
certain ways. Goodness, I am still giggling.
>and quite enjoyable. I liked how it was not too explicit and yet it
>
> Parody
>
> HuP3: Debbie Does the Fellowship by Gypsie Rose
> A cute little story that was amusing and silly. It was a fun read
captured the imagination of the reader.
>Absolutely hilarious! I started off with a snicker and then ended up
> Parody
>
> HuP4: If Your Nightly News Covered the Silmarillion by erunyauve
>
laughing so hard. What an ingenious idea. This author is extremely
creative and I had a great time reading the nightly news regarding
the Silmarillion. Now I hope there will someday be Hobbit and Lord
of the Rings editions.
>The humor, tongue-in-cheek and silliness that make up this little
> Parody
>
> HuP5: Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith by Viv
ficlet are impressive and very funny. Gimli's speech at the end
where he is telling Mairisuviel, (sulieth, suewen what ever the
ending should be) the ground rules, made me laugh out loud. This was
a humorous concoction of silly Sue snarking and I thoroughly enjoyed
reading it. I was impressed with the writing style, the way the
author weaved the litmus test into the characteristics of the female
character was unique. I would recommend this story to anyone who is
in need of a laugh.
Parody
>What a cool story. It was enthralling and quite intriguing. And the
> HuP6: Nine Men And A Little Lady by Kielle
end was worth every moment of the reading of it. I never even
thought of that as a possible ending and I was surprised and thrown
off guard by the humorous ending. Well done.
>This story is hilarious and is written with a very interesting and
>
> Romance
>
> HuR5: My Hairy Prisoner by BittenBuggy
completely unique plot. The author writes situations that have you
laughing out loud and the twist at the end is worth reading the
whole thing. Her characterizations and interactions between her
characters is incredibly written. The silliness and playful
atmosphere was delightful to read. I enjoyed reading this the first
time and then found myself gigging and laughing at new places and
different lines when I read it again for this awards review. I
highly recommend it, it will bring a smile to anyone's lips.
>.
>
>were very amusing and unique. It was a nice read for a Sunday
>
> Hu4: Frogs by Lindelea
>
> This was a very cute story. Enjoyable and creative. The limericks
afternoon because it was light, silly, written well and all-in-all
sweet.
>Cassia
> Hu7: Legolas' No Good Rotten Day by Siobhan with inspiration from
>This was a short story that amassed a little raised eyebrow on my
part. I laughed a tad at Legolas's description of being disheveled.
The author tried to make it silly and in some parts it was.
>between Faramir and Frodo. The constant repeating of Frodo's words
>
> Hu8: Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars by Aratlithiel
>
> A very creative and silly fic. I enjoyed reading the interactions
by Faramir became amusing, especially when Frodo would chastise him
about it. The scar comparing was a bit unexpected for a humor fic
but then Faramir's injury from Boromir made it funny again. It was a
cute and silly little story.
>
>
>
>
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DD1: Alone by Oakenshield
Ooh, the bleakness! I really liked the point-counterpoint balance set
up in each line, itself finally upset by the imbalance of the final
line: "Now he was gone." As an Aragorn addict and one who likes to see
someone do something with Arwen, I'm glad to have read this.
Drabble
DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by Lindelea
Loved that first triad of lines. Lovely sense of repetition and
obsessive focus—very suited to Éowyn.
Drabble
DD5: Fear! Fire! Foes! by Marta
I liked this view of Fatty. Sort of like the "For want of a nail, the
kingdom was lost" line, except that the kingdom wasn't lost. The
"nail" was simply misunderstood by those on the receiving end of his
message. But we know Fatty will show his mettle later; this strikes me
as an appropriately humble yet telling beginning for the future rebel.
Drabble
DD7: Sundered by Oakenshield
I liked the sense of time in this—everything always happens too fast;
expectations are always negated by reality, and there's the play on
losing what one began with—the society one had built, the face one had
loved. I'm not convinced by the pairing as it's done here, but it
doesn't really upset much.
Drabble
DD8: The Call by Alexcat
A novel perspective. I enjoyed the view from the "watery prison."
Drabble
DD9: The Silent Street by Lindelea
I loved the line that Beregond had never drawn a disloyal breath in
his life. I can well imagine his distress in this scene. Some issues
of diction but overall, nicely done.
Drabble
DD10: The Steward and the King by Marta
There's just one characterization moment that I can't agree with, but
otherwise, I liked this little scene of Boromir and Aragorn. It is a
hard world when children as young as two know they must be ready to
face orcs.
Gap-filler
DG1: A Silence Covered in Stone by Zimraphel
Creepy—excellent take on what happened to Eärnur. A nice look, also,
at the beginnings of reconciliation among the Elves of Lórien and
those of Mirkwood.
Gap-filler
DG4: The Fire Sermon by Altariel
Tightly constructed, restrained, and yet utterly convincing
description of Faramir and Éowyn falling in love through the darkness.
Eliot is employed to wonderful atmospheric effect in each chapter,
although I am most fond of course of the final stanza quoted, which
fits so well with probably my favorite section of the work: chapter 4,
last subsection: "For I burn. She consumes my thoughts. And I am
afraid of the fire. I am afraid, for I know what desire has done to my
family." Passion does run pretty thick in everyone's blood in
Altariel's version of the Steward's family, in Faramir no less than
Denethor or Boromir, and we see it played out to its proper end only
in Faramir. Love is indeed a torment, no matter for whom or what. Well
done!
Incomplete
DI1: A Diamond in the Storm by SilverMoon Lady
I don't usually read stories focusing on hobbits, but this has been
great fun! It's clearly been a long way from the original conspiracy
to watch after Frodo, but time and experience have only given Merry,
Pippin, and Sam a better eye for both politics (I love Sam serving at
the Mayor's office as the effective seat of power!) and for dealing
with the turns of fate. They've grown, and although the Shire doesn't
quite know what to do with them, they've learned how to deal with that
without too much fuss and a dollop of good humor. Pippin at Angrim's
was a lovely thing to read, and I like his new confidence and the
sense that he's found a place at home that suits him, even if it is
difficult for his father and others to accept. I'm finding the
Jamestown-style mystery most engaging, and of course, I love anything
with a Ranger in it, so I'm glad to see how Pippin has been working
with the Rangers to help keep the Shire's borders. I'm also intrigued
by the wizard angle, and the discovery of more Huorn-like trees. I
hope you're inspired soon to finish the story so we can see how it all
turns out.
LOTR
DL2: Ashes, East Wind, Hope that Rises by ErinRua
I remember the arguments over whether Éomer could have known of
Théodred's death before riding out after the Orcs. Great fun they
were. I always have a bit of trouble reading fics that cover canonical
scenes so closely; it's always so hard to get away from the original.
My favorite "interlinear" scene, as it were, however, was Éomer
suddenly and irrevocably falling in love with Aragorn: "in that moment
my heart was lost to him. How could I not love a man such as this -
who strode unblinkingly into legend for no other cause than the love
of his friends and comrades?" That glossed the particular passage
perfectly, I thought, and mirrored nicely Eomer's other moment of
realization: the love he feels for his people, just as he realizes
that he may not live to return to them. Éomer's fundamental sunshine
is not marred by a certain mercurial temper that doesn't seem out of
place in him. Nicely done.
LOTR
DL3: Bitter as Blood by Shadow975
Well drawn portrait of the relationship of Boromir and Aragorn. I am
particularly grateful to have the second chapter of this fic, as I
always have trouble dealing with the DVD extended edition version of
their Rivendell encounter. This makes a kind of emotional sense of
that scene, which otherwise seems unbalanced, and then goes on to
trace the missteps in that relationship and its final resolution,
pinning its evolution on the problem of faith. Who has it? Who offers
it? How to fit the image that that faith demands, and what are the
consequences of trying? Of failing to do so? How does one go about
recovering from that initial failure to live up to the other's demand,
to have so visibly shrunk from the sum of all one's fears? There are
few movieverse fics out there that help move me to a new understanding
of the film version of the books, but this is one of them. Well, well
done!
LOTR
DL7: LifeWatch by Lindelea
Very enjoyable. Merry's and Pippin's voices felt very natural
throughout, and I loved the humor and vivacity they infused into an
otherwise rather dire situation. Naturally, I was also thrilled to see
Beregond get some time in the spotlight, and Targon as well, and
despite knowing Beregond's ultimate fate, I couldn't help but feel a
certain dread for him. I liked very much the fact that the telling of
stories had such a prominent place in this particular fic: from
Merry's reliving of the early misadventures of Pippin and Merry even
as he succumbs to exhaustion, to the actual telling of stories to the
sick and possibly dying, to the rumors about Beregond, to the young
healers overhearing tales and reading tales from the hands of their
patients—everything moves on the power of words, and given that
Cormallen was where the Ringbearer's tale was first sung, that seems
highly appropriate. Nice congruency, there.
LOTR
DL8: Pippin's Crucible by Pearl Took
The stuff of nightmares and worse than that are all written into this
fic. The pacing is dead on throughout, excuse the choice of words. The
sense of urgency and vertigo are relentless and constant, and every so
often, Pearl gives us these chillingly simple observations, questions
anyone would ask who hasn't lived in a war zone: "Don't your eyes just
close?" Pippin asks upon seeing the slaughtered dead "staring" at him.
Something about that questions instills the reader with a kind of
horror. I found the reversal of idiom—usually we talk of wishing to
wipe our hands clean, Pippin thinks of not wishing his feet attached
to his body, of them never being clean again—very well handled. This
was indeed a crucible. Well written!
LOTR
DL11: The Mirror of Galadriel by Varia Lectio
I loved the line that if Sauron won his ring, Galadriel's would become
a trap.
LOTR
DL14: Wizard by M. Sebasky
Great introspective piece. Gandalf is one of those characters whose
voice is nearly impossible, it seems, to capture from any framework
approaching the interior, or so it has always seemed to me. This fic
comes very close. There's an inhumanity to the character here that
comes with the recognition of just how long and how often Gandalf has
been the one to change lives, to set them willingly and knowingly in
the line of danger for the sake of a greater plan. This is the mental
chessboard of the strategist, where the pieces are real lives. But
despite that necessary inhuman or inhumane element, Gandalf has still
regrets. They don't quite overwhelm—and that is important as it keeps
this fic from spiraling into a sort of angstfest—and that, I think, is
a great achievement. The restraint is wonderful, as is the revelation
that even Gandalf does not have an answer to all things, much though
others find his every utterance a source of comfort. Beautiful!
Poetry
DP6: The Day the Sun Didn't Rise by Tinni
I liked the concept of this fic, using Tilion's chase of Arien to work
in the old Japanese legend.
Poetry
DP8: The Vain Songs by Nol
Although I'm no one to comment on poetry, particularly poetry of the
non-rhyming sort, these are a fascinating set of poems. Vanity,
indeed, as Elves obsess over the works of their hands, and
occasionally just hands, period (and hair, always the hair!), and
everything gets refracted through the looking glass. Plenty of irony,
dark humor, Attic salt, as it were, and probably the most unique
portrayal, in form and content, of Maedhros and Fingon I have ever
seen. The language might take some getting used to—we're all so very
accustomed to try to match style to Tolkien's, but once you've
adjusted, it's ruthlessly entertaining!
Post-WOTR
DPoW1: A Change of Seasons by runningscared
This was a nice vignette about Gimli and Legolas departing from
Middle-earth. Just a quick snapshot of the moment, and a lovely
teasing exchange between two very old, very dear friends—a sweet, if
brief, portrait.
Post-WOTR
DPoW5: Closing the Book by Gonzai
I've always liked the fact that Tolkien gave Sam that line: Ah, and
where will they live?, and that Tolkien then went on to tell of the
part that came "happily ever after", in one form or another, including
the inevitable fact that with the exception of Legolas and Gandalf and
a few other Elves, all the members of the Fellowship and those whom
they encounter are mortal. A happy ending to one tale does not mean
they are made immortal—death is a part of their cycle and tale.
Watching Merry and Pippin, and to a lesser extent Aragorn, deal with
age, death, and bereavement was very moving. I thought a bit more
could've been done with the closing the book motif, but nevertheless,
worth a read.
Post-WOTR
DPoW8: Immortal by Ainaechoiriel
And here's another on Merry and Pippin very near the end of their
days. This time, it is Legolas whom we follow through the process of
confronting the inevitable, which of course strikes him differently
being elvish and not subject to death by time alone. Arwen's brief and
"unqueenly" cameo at the end was very welcome, and very appropriate
and bittersweet, since with time, she will experience bereavement as
well that will strike her to the core. It's to be hoped that Legolas
will be there for her, even as she was there for him after that
conversation with Merry and Pippin.
Post-WOTR
DPoW12: Shards of Time by AL Milton
This is one of those fics that requires to be digested slowly. There's
something about the way Barahir goes about his effort to unearth The
Truth about his grandmother that just reeks of violence, and I have to
say, I love it. How to reduce someone to a page, when that person has
inconveniently managed to be both a hero and a deserter, both a saint
and a sinner? We see the unflattering side of the tale alongside the
heroic parts we all know, and it all comes through the sophisticated
mind of a man whose virtue is his vice: a desire for the truth, which
he can mock or manipulate or both, and who in the end has to confess
to being able to do only what he must. This story isn't really about
Éowyn in the end, it's about Barahir and mundane desire for truth in a
dishonest and complicated world, a desire which can neither be
satisfied ("there is no truth") nor dismissed.
Post-WOTR
DPoW15: Strawberries by Khylea
Ok, so I'm a sucker for the climbing Orodruin movie moments. This made
me smile.
Post-WOTR
DPoW18: The Last Grey Ship by ErinRua
Bittersweet, and yet hopeful, too. I loved Gimli's line, that he
wished he could stop looking. That was perfect! Gimli and Legolas
bantering is a staple of their friendship in fandom, and here we see
it put to good effect on the eve of a difficult decision, following a
most difficult loss. As for the tale of the Elessar, I found it quite
appropriate: this is the ending of an Age, and not just of an Age but
of an entire kind of history. Middle-earth's magic is fading, and the
artifacts of that era are out of time and place, and must either go to
dust or outside the dominion of the mundane world.
Post-WOTR
DPoW20: Trees of Remembrance by jenolas
The trees of Fangorn are certainly full of surprises, as Gimli might
say! This was an enjoyable vignette. A little bit sad, but with
humorous touches, and one thinks that perhaps Eldarion has found a
reason to stay on just a little bit longer.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW2: All These Wore Wings by fileg
Definitely one of my favorite stories about Boromir and Faramir as
children. The parallel between Gondor and Gondolin was one I had not
considered before reading this story. What intrigues me is Faramir's
early assertion that the point of the story of "those who wear wings"
is that no one knows, because it is the nature of boats (or anything
that journeys and leaves others behind) to go into the unknown.
Faramir may make himself Tuor in his story, but ultimately, it will be
he who has to stand and watch others turn towards the great unknown
(death) ahead of him. No one escapes war, not even those who wear
wings, as Faramir points out, and that lends a shivery feel of
foreboding to an otherwise delightful story far removed from the
violence of the coming apocalypse.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW8: Small Soldiers by Cori Lannam
This is an interesting reversal, in its way, from what one might
expect: that Boromir should flee, where Faramir would stay when
Finduilas died. Interesting, too, Denethor's approach to dealing with
the family's loss—it's a lesson, it's a necessity. It's a way of
coping and keeping control, all while doing something useful for these
two boys, his "small soldiers" who will one day be seeing all too much
of death. Poignant and unsettling.
Romance
DR11: The Tale of the Laughing Maiden by Deborah Judge
I'm not much of a Silm fan, so it's a rare Silmfic that moves me. This
one did, for the way in which the bitter pride of the Noldor is shown
played out by the curse, which amplifies the corruption of that
original pride. Well-written, as are all of Deborah Judge's stories,
edgy, and featuring that rarest of creatures: a female protagonist who
holds her own with dignity as she comes to painful self-comprehension.
D5: Magpies and Rhymes by Acacea
Lovely foreboding. I liked the use to which the rhyme was put; rarely
has a magpie been so threatening. This is a fictional space I don't
often see authors write in: the hearing of Boromir's horn in Gondor
gets received with appropriate gravity. Great mood writing!
D6: Motherless by Isabeau of Greenlea
Well-written vignette exploring death and mourning. Imrahil has taken
on a life he never had in the books in Isabeau's hands; we ache with
him, and with his children as they begin to come to terms with the
idea of life without Nimrien. The family dynamics among the four
children, Imrahil, and Faramir are well portrayed: even though, with
the exception of Faramir, these characters are basically names in the
Appendix or six-line characters, each has a distinct personality and
aspirations. Each deals differently with tragedy, and all strive to
support each other through the loss. Faramir and Boromir get a scene
together at the end, and are delightful, as always; I salute Boromir
for his adroit maneuvering and political savvy. He usually does take
second place to his brother in the field of politics and maneuvering,
but not in this case, and despite the sad occasion, he provides a
needed uplift with his humor. There's a certain fundamental sunniness
to Isabeau's writing, and it shines through here, even in mourning,
but in such a way that it's appropriate. Those who have enjoyed other
fics featuring Imrahil should enjoy this one.
D15: To Sing of War by Avon
The bitterness of the survivors of the Last Alliance finds a voice in
Thranduil. There's something numbing and also wrenching about his
recital of the horrors of war; he has seen too much to find anything
worth honoring in it, and thanks to one moment of weakness on
Isildur's part, all of the waste and horror seems to have been in
vain. There is no comfort to be had, for there was never a victory,
just a reprieve and the promise of more to come.
D17: Whispers by Ellbee
One would think it was Boromir. It could have been Boromir, but all
the better when one discovers that it is not. I like the idea that
Aragorn, too, would have been tempted by the Ring and forced to
struggle against it. It gives a little more meaning to his final
assurance to Boromir that no, Boromir has conquered, for according to
this fic, he really ought to know, oughtn't he?
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category,
not the story, here):
Poetry
DPA4: Nol
I have difficulty commenting on Nol as a poet, since I lack the
vocabulary or conceptual tools to do so with any amount of skill,
particularly given the free form style she uses for "Vain Songs." But
she writes intelligently, with a refreshing irreverence and
willingness to use anachronism to her advantage. That's difficult to
pull off, especially in a fandom where the formal turn of phrase is
often valued.
DA4: AL Milton
Another author with a certain refreshing interest in inverting the
usual interpretations of stories we think we know. AL Milton knows how
to build tension, and her cutting back and forth between past and
present, and between lines, even, of "confessions" successfully draws
the reader into a rather vertiginous world, where truth is difficult
to grasp and a rather fleeting and temporary thing. There are layers
here, and the reader feels the earth shifting, feels horizons shifting
as Barahir unfolds the paradox that is Éowyn, and also the gap between
the legendary and the mundane. In her hands, history becomes an
endeavor much more fraught with peril than one might ordinarily think.
And she makes managing it all look easy, too.
DA6: Altariel
Altariel writes with precision, as always, and with a deft and certain
hand at characterizing Faramir. First person is a difficult point of
view for me, but Altariel has mastered it, and to great effect—her
introspective narrative is amazing and never feels stale.
DA23: fileg
Powzie writes both poetry and prose, and in each case there's
something wonderfully fluid about her style. There's a sense of quiet,
too, that is most appealing particularly as a sort of counterpoint to
Faramir's canonical story arc.
DA26: Isabeau of Greenlea
This would be Isabeau doing what she does best: character study. Here
she demonstrates her skill in using five characters who are really bit
players at most in the books, and in creating believable, disctinct
personalities for each. All the characters are so well realized;
empathy with them comes naturally, as does sympathy.
DA38: M. Sebasky
This is an author to watch. Although the fic in question wasn't
nominated for MEFAs, M. Sebasky is the only author who has made me
buy, for even five seconds (and more than that), the possibility of
Éowyn/Aragorn as a couple. Her writing feels very crisp to me, very
clean and sharp—things comes into focus in ways I wouldn't necessarily
expect while reading her stories.
DA44: Pearl Took
From the few fics I've read by Pearl Took, she has a talent for
dramatic presentation. Her pacing is excellent and serves to heighten
the tension. Insightful characterization and the ability to bring out
the stark horror of a situation are two of her virtues.
DA48: Shadow975
Shadow975 can crack open a scene and make its contradictions into
virtues. She excels at putting two characters together through the use
of contrasting monologues. These monologues are a wealth of
psychological insight; her characterization, even when I disagree with
it, is very thorough and well-drawn.
DA50: SilverMoon Lady
This author leaves off at cliff-hangers. I should not complain of
this, as it is generally a virtue if one is writing a WiP, but dang
it! SilverMoon Lady brings a post-War Pippin to life with great skill,
and manages to give us hints of how the post-War political situation
in and around the Shire has unfolded; these hints and glimpses never
feel added on, and add up to an interesting if incomplete picture that
gives a lovely background for the characters to act against. I look
forward to the completion of this fic.
DG4: The Fire Sermon by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/578654/1/
This is a love story, wonderfully told, with a thoughtful use of
words and a deep, clever insight into Faramir, still recovering
from his wound and the traumatic loss of his father, and Éowyn,
a strong bitter character, not daring to give in and still in love with
someone she never will have as her husband… Utterly
believable, full of deep feelings and still one of my favorite
Faramir/Éowyn-stories.
D3: Following the Other Wizard by jodancingtree
URL:
http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1286
One of the most remarkable AU's I've ever read, meant to be a
short sequel to "Another way of leaving", but in the end grown to
a 35-chapter-tale strong enough to stand on its own. Instead of
passing into the West, Frodo wanders with Radagast
(wonderfully loving, believable portrait of an often forgotten
Istar!)to Mordor, learning to trust life again, healing a rotten,
cursed land and being healed himself at last.It is a lifelong
journey, leading through the land of the enemy, back to Minas
Tirith and finally to the Shire where Sam's wife Rosie has just
died, and the old friends have some precious remaining time to
spend together.
This story is a marvel… told with deep love and understanding
for Frodo, revealing his thoughts and making them
understandable and believable. The description of his travels
with Radagast, the winter in the wizard's home in Rhosgobel (I'd
die to have that house to live in!)and most of all his encounter
with three orcs who have survived the destruction of Sauron's
power, one of them Canohando (hero of the sequel "The
Queen's Orc")and the developing of a remarkable, unforgettable
friendship between "Ninefingers" and his orcish
"shieldbrother"… all this helps to create the perhaps best
Tolkien fanfiction tale I know.
RmHob1: A Little Night Music by Ariel
URL:
http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1710
Describing a night of love can be terribly boring when the author
stumbles into the trap of using the same terms and descriptions
as everyone else did before in a countless number of PWP's.
Ariel avoided this trap with glorious cleverness.
What we see is something seemingly very simple... a married
couple, ending a „normal" day, meeting and making love. But
everything is vivid and believable, erotic in a very clear, strong,
but always tasteful way, and both characters, Sam and Rosie,
are perfectly canon... a heartwarming proof that Rosie was
someone „special", the woman and wife Sam really loved – and
physically, too. Great story!
Msg# 2353
Official Ballot, Romance Posted by Jo Dancingtree October 10, 2004 - 12:20:52 Topic ID# 2353URL:
http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1710
This is a warm, loving glimpse of Sam and Rosie on an evening of shared joy. I loved the idea of "Frodo's bane" - the responsibility Sam feels to live his life to the very fullest, for his master's sake as well as his own. And Rosie's trusting acceptance of the things she can't quite understand about her husband is wonderful - you can see why Sam loves her and came home to her. A beautiful story.
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HuA6: The Story of Legolas and Enoreth by CNell
Enoreth is deliciously vile, as all good Sueparodies should be. Skin
the color of new milk. Singing her prohpecy/history thingy. Cerulean
eyes. Eeew. Just, eeeew. I'd spork her through and through if I
weren't laughing so hard.
Alternate Universe
HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's Daughter
What inspired use of parenthetical asides! And I loved the need to
acronmymize just everything (e.g., DFNIHAPT). And "Silmarilgate"...
hee! Translation of bloodthirsty orc culture into modern business
parlance works frighteningly well. I'm currently imagining
orcs "thinking outside the box". It ain't a pretty thought. And no,
I probably won't be attempting to call my boss "Grumpy-Britches" on
Monday. But I'll be thinking it.
Parody
HuP3: Debbie Does the Fellowship by Gypsie Rose
The absolute wrongest thing about this fic is that I just put in a
DVD of Fellowship, and every time I see a fellowship member pop up
on the screen, my initial thought is "Glad I could help. Wanna have
sex?" Happily,Debbie was an equal-opportunity, um, "provider"
(contest reviews are strictly PG, so shan't use more descriptive
terms for Debbie's, er, behavior). At any rate, yay for Debbie.
After all, Gimli deserves nookie too.
Romance
HuR1: Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond by Claudi007
You had me at "Elrohir has a bladder the size of a walnut." And it
was all downhill after that. Lessons to Elrond on proper usage of
prepositions. Ingredients on the peanut package ("may contain
peanuts or other nuts" indeed). Glorfindel's little oopsie with the
high-school girl and his adventures with car rentals and
accounting. "Eltendo's" iguana with a secret name and a tendency to
horf up banana bits. Big-eyed cactus aliens (in fact, I was laughing
so hard at the first Legolas e-mail that I, well, I snorted). And
Granny Galadriel's sex-toy fetish and that Nog Log are just...
wrong. Finally, even though this is fiction and humour fiction at
that, I have to say that Elladan has my full support in his efforts
to keep holidays from being celebrated far too soon. He seems a
thoughtful, earnest young elf (when he's sober; He might also be a
touch sarcastic, too). And he certainly deserves the best gifts from
the grandparents. (Sincerely, I couldn't stop reading this thing. I
tried to stop at chapter 3 and go to sleep because it was very late.
But I figured, just a couple more entries. Who would know? It's now
stupid early in the morning, and I just finished reading. Your story
is crack.)
Romance
HuR3: I'm WHAT? by Ellbee
Okay, I'll just say for the record that I'm not a big fan of Mpregs.
But this is such a hilarious send-up of the subgenre, it amuses even
a skeptic like me. *Digging its way out*?! Well, that certainly puts
a different spin on that crucial "Yes, but how does that *happen*?!"
question. Ick. Squick. And double eeew. And this line, well, it's
classic: "Burst into tears at the sight of baby bunny. Then shot it
for breakfast." That's my warrior mommy! You could give Helen
Fielding a run for her money; this style really fits your natural
sense of humour and I'd love to see you write more diary-style bits.
Romance
HuR5: My Hairy Prisoner by BittenBuggy
Okay, Lady BB, that cucaracha thing was low. That's a personal
nightmare of mine, and just the thought of creepy crawlies in Lego's
beautiful flaxen locks makes me shudder. Poor Leggsie, all alone
with no RAID. And why am I not surprised that a story of yours
revolves around suggestive dialogue and the use of restraints? I'm
shocked, I tell you. Just shocked! (Well, not really, but I *am*
very amused.) Oh, and your note at the end of chapter 5 implied an
add-on scene. Where is that thing?
Hu6: Joy on a Summer Morning by Ellbee
Bwahaha. How can I say anything about this story without giving it
away?! In fact, just implying that there might possibly be an
outside chance of this piece having a twist might spoil it for some
people. So, no twist. No surprise. Just lovely summery morningly
slashy goodness. Yeah. (Andareallyhilarioustwistattheend,too.)
Hu8: Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars by Aratlithiel
Love the naughty limericks!
Hu11: Secrets We Dare Not Tell by Coriel
Now that's a tricksy little secret, ain't it? Very politically
portentous, and also kind of nice, considering. It highlights the
idea that we're all very much the same, despite our need to note and
dwell on the differences. Yes, even elves.
Hu12: Stop That, You'll Only Hurt Yourselves by AlexCat and Larian
Elensar
First, this has to be one of the most suggestive and amusing fic
titles in the whole of ficdom. And the blinding nonsense of shouting
in all-caps a phrase like "AND BE QUIET!" is worth a chuckle in
itself. Other than that: wild romp of a story; most enjoyable.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the
category, not the story, here):
HuA10: Claudi007
Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond, How I Spent My
Summer Vacation
Well, what can I say about your writing style that you haven't heard
before? That it feels effortless and deliciously sarcastic and is
impossible to stop reading once one has started? But you've probably
heard that already. How about "You've such a talent for making the
mundane amusing that I would willingly read your grocery lists"?
Really, I could say a lot of nice things about your writing, but I
bet none of it would be new news. But at least my chattering on here
will give you some extra MEFA points. You deserve 'em.
HuA15: Ellbee
I'm WHAT?, Joy on a Summer Morning
I'm in a quandry. See, your humour pieces are, not surprisingly, gut-
bustingly hilarious, even on the second and third and fourth reads.
But I happen to know have inside knowledge that you just naturally
have a way of phrasing things to give them the most possible dry-
humour impact. Even things that *shouldn't* be funny. So, are you a
gifted, talented humour writer or just a naturally hilarious
person?? I think it may be a healthy dose of both. Either way, it's
good for me since I get to read the end result of it all.
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Msg# 2355
Re: Official Humor Ballot - vote Posted by mirasaui@aol.com October 10, 2004 - 13:24:33 Topic ID# 2355Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2
lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and
then comment beneath them.
Parody
HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa Green
Such a novel idea for a story, and quite hilarious! While I cackled over how
to clean and oil my Boromir, my favourite (since I am a married lady) was
the FAQ on battle scars!
Romance
HuR1: Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond by Claudi007
Hehhe, quite a family Elladan describes in this journal style comedic fic,
between Glorfindel and Erestors arguments over cars, to visiting hobbits in
the twins beds, what a hilarious look at fourth age elves.
Romance
HuR2: How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Claudi007
I liked this one even better than Home for the Holidays! Erestor goes label
crazy and Glorfindel robs the cradle. Elronds after Legolas in
short-shorts, and Elladan is addicted to his computer and email messages. The fun
continues in Lorien, with a riotous Celeborn and Galadriel, and Rumil and his
roommate whose intellectual activities land Elladan on the front page.
Romance
HuR4: Mother of the Year by Alexcat
Erestor and Glorfindel not only do the deed, but Glorfindel winds up
pregnant. After Erestor picks himself up from the floor, he spends most of the
ensuing months hunting radishes, the object of Glorfindels craving. Silly story,
but it kept me laughing.
Hu12: Stop That, You'll Only Hurt Yourselves by AlexCat and Larian Elensar
What can I say - the humour is corny, bawdy and the elf-lords drunk as
skunks and into trouble. From Celeborns famous flask to Thranduils sword and
hints of Oliphants, the company of four is rip-roaringly funny. Add sunburn,
poison ivy, scorched eyebrows, trees that look like Mithrandir (over and
over), a circular journey and a sly Haldir, and you get four crazy elflords will
never live their adventure down
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DI9: The Captain's Last Gift by Lady Aranel
Aranel-dearest. It it with deep regret that I gaze on the latest
chapter of this fic, time after time, and long for that bath and what
comes after. You have a gift of detail and nuance that is
extraordinary. It is a disservice to all who love Legolas that this
fic remains unfinished. In a world of Legomances and MarySues,
Lalaith shines as a wonderfully doubtful and insecure OFC, loving
someone else, but drawn to this stranger, always questioning her
motives, her feelings, her emotions. Your eroticism is exceptionally
well-handled, perfectly balanced in detail and imagination.
This is at the very top of my list of fics I'd love to see finished.
Post-WOTR
DPoW19: The Mantle Of Power by Marnie
So like Glorfindel to want to continue being a hero! So like Celeborn
to continue being strong where he is needed. So much has changed, it
is comforting to see the strength of what remains.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW1: A Family Trait by Marnie
This is one of my favorites. What a delightfully fresh view of
Celebrian from the cringing tortured helpless victim we normally see
in fanfic. I chuckle in agreement every time I read your author notes
on the irony of the twins decision to make weapons.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW6: Leaf and Branch by JastaElf
I enjoy this fic and have passed the link to several friends. it has
a wonderful balance of reality in the horror of the situation and the
rescue.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW7: Promises to Keep by JastaElf
A beautiful and heartwrenching tale. This is one of your that I
hadn't read before and I was delighted to find it on this list.
HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by
Theresa Green
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2366
Wonderful idea, and skillfully worked out (like the rest of the
„Guide"-series). And who ever isn't able to laugh when he reads
how to „handle" this gondorean warrior suffers from a complete
lack of humor (I'm still waiting for Theresa Green's permisssion
to translate the whole series into german – to make „my"
german speaking audience laugh as hearty as I always do when
I re-read it).
Parody
HuP6: Nine Men And A Little Lady by Kielle
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/536905/1/
This was the very first real „funny" LOTR-parody I ever read, and it
still makes me giggle. Every trap unexperienced FF-writers with
a fateful urge to write Mary-Sues usually step in is listed here in a
hilarious and merciless way, and I tend to applaud each time
when this particular Mary-Sue finds her well-deserved end in
Gollums stomach. Great, kielle! (You teached me how to write
OC's without making them Mary-Sue's, and I will ever be
thankful, my dear. *bows in admiration*)
Hu8: Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars by Aratlithiel
URL: http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/ODAABS.html
After having digested a good dozen of Frodo/angst-tales this
glorious story gave me a well-deserved relief... with a Frodo,
suffering from memory, but still able to commit deeds of truely
„hobbitish" mischief and a Captain of Gondor, drawn to an
extremely alcoholic adventure with a cask full of dwarvish ale.
The limericks the heroes produce in their drunken state, and
their „scar-contest" still make this wonderful humorous tale one
of the best funny LOTR-stories I know, and one of my
All-Time-Favorites.
Msg# 2358
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by fourth\_moon October 10, 2004 - 19:53:04 Topic ID# 2263Amnesty Day.
> HumorThe story starts a bit slow for my taste, but from the middle of the
>
> Official Voting Ballot
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> Alternate Universe
>
> HuA6: The Story of Legolas and Enoreth by CNell
second chapter on, when the Mary Sue parody Enoreth enters, it picks
up, since the main attraction of this story is definitely the
over-the-top MarySueishness of Enoreth and her absurd fate.
> Alternate UniverseThe "depicting the forces of evil as a large corporation" didn't catch
>
> HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's Daughter
on with me that well, probably because I've seen it done before. There
are some good laughs though, like the " Department For New,
Interesting, and Hopefully Agonizingly Painful Tortures". The charm of
this story is for me in the respectless, "good grief what a nuisance
that was" tone in which the overview on characters and events – that
is really delightful and has me chuckling happily.
> ParodyGreen
>
> HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa
The whole manual with it's matter of fact tone and innuendos is a joy
(I have a dirty mind, what can I say). The Frequently Asked Questions
and Trouble Shooting were probably most fun, and though this isn't my
favorite among the User's Manuels, it's light-hearted and fun to read
and re-read.
> ParodyI enjoyed the contrast between the typical Mary Sueish descriptions
>
> HuP3: Debbie Does the Fellowship by Gypsie Rose
and the bad-mouthed creature the poor fellowship members had to tag
around. Good descriptions of the characters and the modern-world
elements, but a bit too much description of clothing for a parody.
> ParodyThis is just the way I like my Mary Sue parodies: over the top, with
>
> HuP5: Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith by Viv
the canon characters somewhere between IC and uncommonly exasperated
about the Miss Uberperfect (complete with multi-syllable elvish
sounding name!) they are stranded with. I especially like the
shamelessly exaggerated way she has all the hallmarks of a MS: related
to canon characters, half-elf, beauty, magic, completely unrealistic
fighting skills and unlikely color scheme... as well as Eowyn's
reaction to her. Oh, and "Mairi"'s full name had me in stitches. Only
draw-back here: the story is too short. I would have loved to see
Mairi suffering a bit.
> ParodyTumbling the different variations of Mary Sues around in the minds of
>
> HuP6: Nine Men And A Little Lady by Kielle
the fellowship members is fun to read, but what I enjoy most are the
dry remarks that sneak in almost unnoticed – like Legolas musing
whether he could shoot "her" into the head by accident and the
Fellowship getting the latest version of "her" origin story every
night around the fire.). It's a wonderful touch that even Bill the
Pony is annoyed, but my favorite bit is probably the Little Miss "I'm
part Unicorn".
Msg# 2359
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Lady Aranel October 10, 2004 - 21:37:11 Topic ID# 2263HuA4: The Fanfic Lounge: The Lord of the Rings by CNell
Okay. I didn't think I would like this, but I did. It's format is surprising and different, maybe that's part of why it worked for me. The weirdes thing was that the LotR characters were remarkably IN character!
Alternate Universe
HuA6: The Story of Legolas and Enoreth by CNell
Truely inspired. Legolas is so very much himself in this completely off AU version of M-e. Which is what makes it worth reading. Am I the only one that wishes that this author would take a serious tone? I've not looked into any of her other works, but I darn sure will! I laughed. I laughed until I cried. Yes, it was that good! Well, done!
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HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa
Green
Another wonderful owner's manual, every bit as funny as the rest. I
laughed so much the kids asked me what was up.
Parody
HuP5: Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith by Viv
Ha! Good old Gimli, the unenticeable. He'll take care of her, I'm
sure. I think you've got every Mary Sue cliché ever invented in
there, from the purple eyes to the telepathic animal friend, no
small feat. Truly hilarious.
Romance
HuR2: How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Claudi007
One of my favorite stories ever. Though it's wildly over-the-top,
you still manage to make us care about the characters, even as we're
choking with laughter. And you really nail all our little vanities
and flaws through Elladan. Hysterical and wonderful.
HuR7: The Conversation by sheraiah
I love this story to pieces. I can hear every word of it, and I'm
snickering right along with the boys. Excellent fic.
Hu1: Dance With Me by Jenolas
Ah, it's such a nuisance to be fair of face beyond measure of men,
isn't it? Very sweet and cute.
Hu2: Experiment Gone.Right? by Viv
Hehehe. "And he knew a thing or two about compulsion." That should
have been the give-away, but I stayed blissfully ignorant until the
very end. Who knows, it could work. She certainly wouldn't be the
first girl with a greedy and self-absorbed boyfriend. Thanks for the
laugh.
Hu4: Frogs by Lindelea
This is too, too funny, and so delightfully hobbit-y. I love to see
them like this, lighthearted and relaxing with a pint.
Msg# 2361
Re: Adventure--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 10, 2004 - 22:43:40 Topic ID# 2264From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Friday, October 01, 2004 12:22 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] Adventure--Official Voting Ballot
Adventure
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AP1: Betrayal by Cassia and Sio
Cassia and Siobhan are a guilty pleasure. I have admitted to being a torture
fic fan, so yes, I do love to see my favorite characters beat up. And these
two come through in story after story! I was very glad to read this one
after Exile and Return as Legolas needed to return home, but even then,
there's danger waiting. Twists and turns and lots of angst. Good
entertainment for those of us who like this sort of thing!
AP2: Black Breath by Cassia and Sio
Another good story from Cassia and Siobhan! These two are the champs of
angst/humor/adventure all rolled into one. Black Breath is just as
entertaining as their whole series! What poor Legolas has to go through!
AP3: Change of Heart, Change of Mind by Cassia and Sio
Cassia and Sio deliver up yet another entertaining, angst-filled story. And
some of the angst this time comes right from Legolas's friends.
AP5: Exile by Cassia and Sio
I was very glad to be able to read Betrayal so soon after this one. This
one wounded me. No happy ending. Not even an "up". No, Legolas is exiled
along with Aragorn. No loopholes, no nothing. He's out. And Thranduil is
broken-hearted for having to do it. Nearly had me in tears!
AP6: First Meetings by Siobhan
Siobhan delivers up a nice story with this one. And I was glad to see that
Legolas's sufferings in Dorilyn hadn't gone away completely. I've lived
through trauma myself enough to know that it doesn't just go away. But it
does heal, and it's good to see him heal. And the teasing at the end was
funny.
AP8: Mistaken Identity by Cassia and Sio
Oh this one was quite a ride! Poor Legolas, getting mistaken for a
murderous Elf and tortured for it to boot, only to end up having his
torturers be on the good-guy side. And he, in the end, has to deal with his
dopple-ganger.
AP9: Return by Cassia and Sio
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and was very glad to see the heart-break
end. For now, anyway. ;-) I know with these two writers, there will always
be more! I look forward to these stories, even though I'm about 10 behind!
AP10: Vilya by Cassia and Sio
I liked that this time Legolas was not hurt too badly in this one. Though I
am a torture-fic fan, sometimes the characters just need a break! So it's
good you gave the prince one. Elrond took up the slack in this one, and
everyone else gets a lot of angsting, for which Cassia and Siobhan are
masters!
A5: Forgotten Allies by JMac
This was a well-written story bringing LOTR and WWII together without any
hocus-pocus. Instead, it was just the passage of time, which Elves and a
Wizard can weather. I didn't even mind the romance that slipped in toward
the end. And that's saying a lot, coming from me. The history in this one
is pretty good, too, something I care a lot about.
A13: With Hope by Melina
Good characterization of Halbarad there at the end. You got a few tears out
of me with that one.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
AA2: Cassia and Sio
Cassia and Siobhan are dangerous. Especially when writing together. These
two just keep coming up with story after story, danger after danger for our
intrepid duo, and then even having the levity to have the character's joke
about it. These guys are a fun read, entertaining thoughout. But don't
mistake that. They also show a knowledge of the lore, even if they write in
what one may consider AU. They do angst like nobody's business and always
mix it in with adventure and drama and a touch of humor.
AA4: JMac
Jmac did a good job of weaving the LOTR characters, the immortals anyway,
into the fabric of a plot set in WWII. She kept it humble, too, which is a
sign of maturity. No one tried to assassinate Hitler or anything. No, she
kept the plot relevent to both WWII and LOTR. Nice job.
AA10: Melina
Melina took on a challenge and gave a beloved but rather minor character a
fitting end.
AA12: Siobhan
Siobhan without Cassia is just as good as with, or as Cassia without
Siobhan. She seems the quieter of two, as Cassia does the postings and
such, but she's proven she can write solo, too, and write well. Adventurous,
tragic, and funny, all at once.
This category ends October 10th at 11:59pm Central US.
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A9: The Patient by Scribe
This is the sort of story that just sucks a reader in. I read it all
at one go, just because I had to find out what happened next. It's
so hard to do a modern story, but you have managed it in a truly
exciting and imaginative way.
A11: To Save a Hobbit by Khylea
Oooh, this was a story like none I have read before. A very
interesting idea, having Elrond literally fight to save Frodo, and
the battle scene was nicelt done.
A13: With Hope by Melina
I really like stories like this that take a minor character who is
little more than a name in the books and really bring him to life,
even when you show us his death. Very moving.
Msg# 2363
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Lady Aranel October 10, 2004 - 22:54:04 Topic ID# 2263HuP5: Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith by Viv
"And the even lesser-known tales describe her as extraordinarily... um, bendyAnd the even lesser-known tales describe her as extraordinarily... um, bendy." Indeed. Rolling on the floor laughing my butt off. yep. This is good fun. The only thing is well... I think it should have been longer!!! (unless of course Gimli took her and played Lizzie Borden with his axe!)
Hu1: Dance With Me by Jenolas
Short but very sweet! And hey, who could resist Legolas in that circlet? Yummy.
Hu2: Experiment Gone.Right? by Viv
Different. Very. Gollum sings Karoke? Scary!
Hu6: Joy on a Summer Morning by Ellbee
Whooo. Not at all what I expected in the end. Thank Eru! I was fightened I'd wandered into some unlabled slash. Gave me a start! Well done!
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Msg# 2364
Drama and Romance, 10/11/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 10, 2004 - 23:02:20 Topic ID# 2350
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Msg# 2365
Horror and Mystery Voting, 10/11/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 10, 2004 - 23:02:22 Topic ID# 2349
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Msg# 2366
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 10, 2004 - 23:29:46 Topic ID# 2263read, and I've been too busy. So don't think this is the end of my Humor
comments! Or my Adventure...or Men...or Elves....I didn't even get to Rohan
and Numenor, did I? Yep, Thank goodness for Amnesty Day.
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Sent: Friday, October 01, 2004 12:21 AM
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Subject: [MEFAwards] Humor--Official Voting Ballot
Humor
Official Voting Ballot
HuA1: Legolas and the Stanley Cup by Bubbles
Being a hockey fan, I couldn't resist this! Being a Hasek fan, I loved
this! Because Legolas and he both got to hoist the cup that year! I think
my favorite part though, is mention of the "geezer line" whose combined age
is 2008. Snerk!
HuA4: The Fanfic Lounge: The Lord of the Rings by CNell
I'm sooo glad she brought LOTR into the Fanfic Lounge, and what fun it was
to see Legolas nearly shoot Orlando. And the Mary Sues outside the
door.terrifying. A very nice sequal in that it definitely was part of the
same Fanfic Lounge as the first DS9 one, but also quite different, giving us
a new taste of that magical realm where the Secretary dwells.
HuA5: The Fanfic Lounge: The Two Towers by CNell
And she did it again! Ooh, I so need a ROTK Fanfic Lounge story! I love
this series. The Fanfic Lounge is not only hilarious but also just plain
imaginative: Another realm where the characters go to rest after we put them
through fanfic. How genius is that?!
HuA6: The Story of Legolas and Enoreth by CNell
Absolutely wonderful. Yet another hilarious story from the Fanfic Lounge,
and yet a departure from it. For Legolas is not resting from the fanfic her
but being put through it! I laughed out loud while reading this, honestly,
especially the part where he kissed her and then let her fall to the ground.
Brilliant. I expect no less from CNell. This is probably the best Mary Sue
story you'll ever read. Especially if you hate them.
HuP1: A Maiden from a Distant World by CNell
I nearly missed this one, and what a shame that would have been. CNell's
sense of humor conquers again. This is, hands down, my favorite "girl falls
into Middle-Earth" stories. No one can do it as well as CNell.
HuP4: If Your Nightly News Covered the Silmarillion by erunyauve
This was really quite funny. I love a good parody/satire like this. Very
entertaining. Thank you.
HuP6: Nine Men And A Little Lady by Kielle
I read this first somewhere else and loved it. It is histerical! And I'm
pretty sure I misspelled that. Dang, my spelling ability is decreasing. Oh
well. It was funny! Very, very funny! And it still is! I think my favorite
was Legolas complaining about the random orc attacks. And Gandalf having to
fall on his sword. And Pippin thinking that torture is better than being
with the Sue. And Galadriel's comments about the One Ring leaving, too.
This is a classic!
Hu1: Dance With Me by Jenolas
Galadriel to the rescue! That was cute and thank goodness she was there to
save him!
Hu7: Legolas' No Good Rotten Day by Siobhan with inspiration from Cassia
Poor Legolas! Quite funny! But it doesn't quite seem finished. This one
could be stretched this out and keep us laughing in sympathy for our poor
elf all day!
Hu10: Out of the Frying Pan and Into the Fire by bryn_bnw
This story was a whole lot of fun, even though I mostly only read the
Legolas and Gimli parts. I was fully able to suspend my disbelief and just
have fun with the story that was written.
Hu13: The Eight Companions: A Battle for an Elf's Sanity by Ellipsis
Very funny. I'm glad Ellipsis brought it to a fitting close. I enjoyed this
quite a bit. I especially liked the beginning when Legolas and his friends
hatch the plan, but the execution of it was fun as well. And the Feanorians
didn't stand a chance!
Hu15: The Jewel in the Crown by Alawa
A surprising look at Aragorn's new crown a very entertaining short story.
Whatever inspired Alawa to write this, I may never know.
Hu18: The Romance that Never Was by bryn_bnw
Oh, my! That was hilarious! Good balance between tension and farce! And what
a perfectly fitting end for Mary Sues and other gravitational anomalies!
Keep it up!
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
HuA1: Alawa
Alawa has quite an imagination. I would never have come up with such a
thought that a jewel in the crown was a .. Don't want to spoil.
HuA7: Bryn (aka bryn_bnw)
Bryn_bnw has a twisted sense of humor. And that's the way we like it! I had
a lot of fun reading her stories featuring Legolas, and most especially the
Romance that Never Was.
HuA8: Bubbles
Bubbles really is a very silly person. Or a monkey chained to a keyboard, as
her disclaimer states. Still, she made a 'Bou fan out of me! I crack up
every time I go to the site and read the latest games. And I love her for
using Hasek's Stanley Cup-winning year, as Legolas's NHL debut.
HuA11: CNell
CNell is brilliantly funny. I loved the Fanfic Lounge from its first (Star
Trek: Deep Space Nine) inseption and was so happy to see her tackle LOTR and
now I'm dying for a ROTK Fanfic Lounge from her. And then there is The
Story of Legolas and Enoreth, which was just fantastic. Legolas was never a
buffoon, and yet even he did very funny things.
HuA16: Ellipsis
The whole idea for her Eight Companions story was brilliant and I'm always
jealous of people who can carry humor past more than just a little bit of
dialogue.
HuA18: erunyauve
Erunyauve wrote the newscast very well. It suited the toopic and was also
quite funny, as it would be if the Silmarillion was like the nightly news.
HuA21: Jenolas
I like Jenolas's stories. She provides a great break from all the torture
fic. I just wish she'd learn to put THE END on so I'd know I wasn't getting
into a WIP.
HuA22: Kielle
Kielle is a pioneer! Her Nine Men.is a classic, often used for inspiration.
But none of them quite have the sparkle of the first. Kielle's the genius
that started it all. She balances humor and farcity without making it a
complete farce, and that's a delicate balance.
HuA28: Siobhan with inspiration from Cassia
Sio can write the angst, but she can also write the humor, and it's always
nice (and dangerous) when she gets together with Cassia.
This category ends on October 10th at 11:59pm Central US time
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30 minutes before Humor and Adventure closes! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 10, 2004 - 23:31:05 Topic ID# 2367--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2368
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot (tawmt/Andreth) Posted by Tom and Anna Vandecar October 10, 2004 - 23:49:55 Topic ID# 2368----- Original Message -----
From: Ainaechoiriel
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Friday, October 01, 2004 12:21 AM
Subject: [MEFAwards] Humor--Official Voting Ballot
Humor
Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2
lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and
then comment beneath them.
Parody
HuP5: Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=85
Comments: All hail the lady of the ever-changing moniker. Her name is like Richard Lewis's mole in Robin Hood: Men in Tights. The story takes hilariously successful digs at darn near every annoying Mary-sue trait I can think of. Thank goodness for Gimli is all I can say. Viv has a very conversational tone in her humor stories which puts the reader in an appropriately relaxed frame of mind and sets the mood for the zingers which follow. Yet another addition to Viv's long list of excellent humor stories.
Romance
HuR1: Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond by Claudi007
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1144968/1/
Comments: This gets more hilarious every time I read it. The adventures of the Underoo-wearing, diet Dr. Pepper-drinking, Orc-hunting twins and their avoidance of shin-kicking Dwarves and Elves obsessed with Boromir's pants. cough*Legolas*cough. Really though, this is a very imaginative and enjoyable piece of humor and is the perfect showcase for Claudio's wonderfully snarky and biting wit. I will never look at the twins the same way again.
Romance
HuR2: How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Claudi007
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/966953/1/
Comments: Any story that describes Legolas as a poncy wanker in short-shorts humming the theme song to Scooby Doo rates very high on my list. There are so many funny highlights that I don't even know where to begin. The main thing that stuck with me long after reading the story? Glorfindel drinking whiskey and Gatorade. Eew.
Hu2: Experiment Gone.Right? by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=122
This one had me going all the way through. This is one of the best surprise endings I've seen. That poor girl. I guess true love really is blind after all, isn't it?
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
HuA10: Claudi007
Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond, How I Spent My Summer
Vacation
Claudio's stories are as funny as they are well written. Every time I reread them I find some new little piece of snarkiness that I didn't notice before. He makes the stories so outrageous that they're almost believable. It's like reading about the Lifestyles of the Shallow and Shameless. He truly has a talent for writing entertaining stories.
HuA30: Viv
Mairisuweniel Does Minas Tirith, Experiment Gone.Right?
I have yet to read a story of Viv's that I don't absolutely love. She is an excellent writer with a remarkable ability for being able to turn any topic into an enjoyable story. Viv's intelligence, talent and wonderfully droll sense of humor comes through in everything she writes and I admire her greatly. Her stories flow seamlessly throughout with no hiccups and bumps and she makes it seem so easy, but I've no doubt of the thought and hard work that's put into each characterization and each facet of the plot. I could ramble on and on and probably still never fully convey what an incredible writer I think Viv is, but I'm sure going to continue repeating myself until she finally believes me.
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Msg# 2369
Drama and Romance, 10/12/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 11, 2004 - 0:00:37 Topic ID# 2369
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Msg# 2370
Horror and Mystery Voting, 10/12/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 11, 2004 - 0:00:47 Topic ID# 2370
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Msg# 2371
Horror--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 11, 2004 - 0:10:05 Topic ID# 2371Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2
lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and
then comment beneath them.
(No Subcategories)
Hor1: Captive of Darkness by Cassia
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/711907/1/
Rating: R violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When young Prince Legolas is sent as an envoy to a neighboring
kingdom, things go badly as treachery rears its ugly head. Cruelly enslaved
by an evil monarch, Legolas struggles to survive. Will the truth be
uncovered before it is too late?
Hor2: Coavalta by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1491150/1/
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A houseless Elf trapped in the Mere of the Dead Faces returns the
gaze of a curious mortal.
Hor3: Iadel by Tinni
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=369
Rating: PG-13 n/a
Romance Partners: Miriel/Finwe
Summary: A popular fairy-tale reworked to fit the world of JRR Tolkien.
Hor4: The Complexities of Power by Watcherchild
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1144503/1/
Rating: R violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The corruption of Sauron.
Hor5: The Dead Walk Tonight by MN Theis
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1576580/1/
Rating: R violence, character deaths
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas and Eomer discover the hard way that it is not wise to
accept candy from strangers.
Hor6: The Lure of the Darkness by Ainaechoiriel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1489653/1/
Rating: R Mirkwood spiders
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Pre-RW: In the time of the Necromancer, an Elf child goes missing.
Legolas and a patrol go looking for her.
Hor7: The Other by Dana Lindelea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1382984/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence, horror
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: An ancient curse haunts the Travellers upon their return to the
Shire.
Hor8: The Sorcerer's Apprentice by Erunyauve
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1557504/1/
Rating: R violence and dark themes
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The mortal life of the Witch-king, from his childhood in Numenor to
the first appearance of the Nazgul.
Hor9: The Truth of Ugliness by Watcherchild
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1100474/1/
Rating: R disturbing images, violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A psychological look into the twisted and cruel shaping of the
first Orc.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
HorA1: Ainaechoiriel
The Lure of the Darkness
HorA2: Cassia
Captive of Darkness
HorA3: Dana Lindelea
The Other
HorA4: Erunyauve
The Sorcerer's Apprentice
HorA5: MN Theis
The Dead Walk Tonight
HorA6: Tinni
Iadel
HorA7: Watcherchild
The Complexities of Power, The Truth of Ugliness
HorA8: Zimraphel
Coavalta
This category ends on October 20th at 11:59pm Central US time
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Msg# 2372
Mystery--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 11, 2004 - 0:10:16 Topic ID# 2372Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top
line of the header information (ex. code: Title by Author) and then comment
beneath them.
(No Subcategories)
My1: Adagio by Rose Sared
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1500960/1/
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Cultural clashes, a kidnap mystery, and where in Middle-Earth is
Gimli? Legolas to the rescue.
My2: Arda Unmarred by Casey Toh
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/833170/1/
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: One interpretation of the Last Battle that results the
shape-shifting of the world.
My3: From Riches to Rags by Pippinfan 1988
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1618247/1/
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Mysterious happenings befall Merry, Pippin, and Paladin on a
business trip to Michel Delving.
My4: In the Hands of the Enemy by meckinock
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=910
Rating: PG13 some violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Aragorn is waylaid by bandits while racing to answer an urgent
summons from Gandalf, he gains an unexpected ally whose loyalties are
suspect. With Gandalf and Halbarad in pursuit, can Aragorn discern friend
from foe and escape the hands of the Enemy before he is forced to reveal the
secret of the Shire?
My5: Shades of the Immortal by Levade
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1580296/1/
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The elves are long gone, but the land, the land remembers.
My6: That Way by Werecat
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3415
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The tale of the black cat that features in the film at the Prancing
Pony. Although this story is inspired from movieverse, it relies heavily on
Tolkien's writings and his poem "The Cat and the Fiddle."
My7: The Nature of Starlight by Watcherchild
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1001961/1/
Rating: R slash; rating is set by the author, though I think it is too high
for the content.
Romance Partners: ?/?
Summary: The coming of the sun and the moon signals changes for two lovers.
My8: The Next Step by Watcherchild
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/989380/1/
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: An Avari elf goes to the Halls of Mandos and recounts the tale of
the first Orcs - the lost Elves.
My9: The Seventh Stone by Cassia and Sio
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1036102/1/
Rating: PG13 violence; tense situations
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Aragorn and Legolas comes into the possession of an ancient
map that tell where one of the lost Palantiri is hidden they end up in more
trouble than they bargained for, as it seems that everyone wants to get
their hands on the stone, no matter the cost. But a more sinister force is
at work than even the elf and the ranger realize.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
MyA1: Casey Toh
Arda Unmarred
MyA2: Cassia and Sio
The Seventh Stone
MyA3: Levade
Shades of the Immortal
MyA4: meckinock
In the Hands of the Enemy
MyA5: Pippinfan 1988
From Riches to Rags
MyA6: Rose Sared
Adagio
MyA7: Watcherchild
The Nature of Starlight, The Next Step, That Way
MyA8: Werecat
That Way
This category ends on October 20th at 11:59pm Central US time
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Msg# 2373
Re: Horror-- Vote by Proxy Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 11, 2004 - 0:14:51 Topic ID# 2373-----Original Message-----
From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Monday, October 11, 2004 12:10 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] Horror--Official Voting Ballot
Horror
Official Voting Ballot
Hor9: The Truth of Ugliness by Watcherchild
An excellent example of well-crafted psychological horror. I've always found
the idea of the Orcs being made by Melkor from captured Elves to be one of
the most terrifying concepts in the whole of Tolkien's canon, and this story
explains why in vivid and terrible detail. The quasi-fragmentary style
portrayed Nellin's naivety and mental state effectively, and Melkor's
stratagems and psychological manipulation are believable and in character.
The story manages to create a deep sense of horror and unease by leaving the
reader's imagination fill most of the gaps, often a much better method than
resorting to lurid graphic descriptions. A good, frightening, and tragic
read.
--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2374
Re: Mystery-- Vote by Proxy Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 11, 2004 - 0:16:02 Topic ID# 2374-----Original Message-----
From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Monday, October 11, 2004 12:10 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] Mystery--Official Voting Ballot
Mystery
Official Voting Ballot
My6: That Way by Werecat
Deliciously and refreshingly original, this is probably one of the finest
fics I've ever read. The idea of Lord of the Nazgul confronting a cat at the
Prancing Pony is, on the surface, absurdly surreal, but a set-up that could
so easily turn into inanity is instead used to create a profoundly
believable tale, with a wealth of history, character and mythology woven
seamlessly into a short vignette that reads like a Gothic fairytale. The
language is lush and crisp, and the feline character is very accurately
portrayed, as anyone with any experience of cats will know. I particularly
loved the way in which our world's legends and cultural perceptions
regarding cats are intelligently transposed to Middle-Earth, with all sorts
of elements from Tolkien's canon incorporated into feline history. The
denouement of the confrontation between Ringwraith and cat is very ingenious
and makes it an episode that the reader can effortlessly integrate into the
actual events of the book. It's also not every day that one comes across a
brilliant character who happens to be furry, small and have four legs!
--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2375
Re: Mystery-- Vote by Proxy Posted by Cats and Werecats October 11, 2004 - 0:28:45 Topic ID# 2374I have no words to thank you for your kind words. This must be
the best review I've had recently; if ever.
Needless to say I'm typing and framing this.
Thanks again,
Werecat
--- Ainaechoiriel <mefaadmin@earthlink.net> wrote:
> Anna's last vote by proxy.__________________________________
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> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
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> Official Voting Ballot
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> My6: That Way by Werecat
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> Deliciously and refreshingly original, this is probably one of
> the finest
> fics I've ever read. The idea of Lord of the Nazgul
> confronting a cat at the
> Prancing Pony is, on the surface, absurdly surreal, but a
> set-up that could
> so easily turn into inanity is instead used to create a
> profoundly
> believable tale, with a wealth of history, character and
> mythology woven
> seamlessly into a short vignette that reads like a Gothic
> fairytale. The
> language is lush and crisp, and the feline character is very
> accurately
> portrayed, as anyone with any experience of cats will know. I
> particularly
> loved the way in which our world's legends and cultural
> perceptions
> regarding cats are intelligently transposed to Middle-Earth,
> with all sorts
> of elements from Tolkien's canon incorporated into feline
> history. The
> denouement of the confrontation between Ringwraith and cat is
> very ingenious
> and makes it an episode that the reader can effortlessly
> integrate into the
> actual events of the book. It's also not every day that one
> comes across a
> brilliant character who happens to be furry, small and have
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Re: Mystery--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 11, 2004 - 1:00:48 Topic ID# 2372Official Voting Ballot
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My5: Shades of the Immortal by Levade
Nice and spooky for Halloween for sure. Easy to believe that the land does
remember the elves. I know there are places where it remembers Native
Americans...
My6: That Way by Werecat
Oh yes! I don't know a cat in the world who wouldn't stand up to a Ringwraith.
After all, a wraith is just evil. A cat is...well, a CAT!
My8: The Next Step by Watcherchild
I'm impressed with the amount of research authors put into a story; and then
use that information to write their own version of missing lore. Very creative.
Also seems totally logical.
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Msg# 2377
Re: Horror--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 11, 2004 - 1:06:04 Topic ID# 2371Official Voting Ballot
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Hor1: Captive of Darkness by Cassia
I knew this one sounded familiar. I've read it before, but enjoyed seeing it
again. I really don't normally like things that are too AU, but I think you
walked that line nicely, keeping Elrond and Legolas very much elf-like and in
character, while giving them a new adventure to experience. Very interesting
reason for the evil king to want the Mirkwood royals dead, and the collar was a
neat touch! And great wrap-up, finished the story while leaving room for more
adventures--sign of a good sequel writer! Well done!
Hor5: The Dead Walk Tonight by MN Theis
Eww. Bleh. I know, it says horror. I read the summary and the first paragraph
or two and you had me hooked. I couldn't stop reading. Yeah, I know, just
like every Stephen King I've ever read, they scare me, but I absolutely have to
read it all. Very icky (and I mean that as a compliment)
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Msg# 2378
Re: Romance--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 11, 2004 - 2:09:05 Topic ID# 2318woodwork...
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>>Faramir/EowynWhat really makes this story tick are the sideline characters. And when I
>>RmFE3: Snowdrops and Bluebells by Regina
say that I think specifically of Lothýriel. We only see her in a few
chapters, and only briefly at that, but her words about healing being more
difficult than swordplay give Eowyn quite a lot to think about. Itýs more or
less the culmination of what she has been learning from Faramir and Merry
over the course of the story, and I think it caps off those final moments of
indecision nicely. It really all boils down to that last choice. And though
he is only mentioned by name, Grýma Wormtongue has a surprisingly strong
presence in the first few chapters as well. Itýs the little things and the
smaller characters that ultimately push Eowyn one way or the other. The
small, almost unspoken addition of Pippin, Legolas, and Gimli towards the
end rounds out the story nicely, and in the end, we get a courtship of Eowyn
that is really an ensemble production. Iýve never thought of it in that
light before, but I like the way itýs portrayed here.
>>Faramir/EowynJust as the summary says, it is the simplest gifts that say the most.
>>RmFE4: The Braided Heart by Thevina Finduilas
Aragorn wished Eowyn joy, and not only does she realize that now but she
also returns the favor. A great look at Rohirric culture, the somewhat
uncertain relationship between Eowyn and Faramir, and the relationship
between Aragorn and Eowyn.
>>HobbitsFun! So Pippin and Diamond donýt escape entirely unscathed, but they do
>>RmHob2: Crown of Laurel by Lyta Padfoot
escape their primary enemies. Although I have to agree with Diamond. Iým
donýt think the elves had this in mind when they made those cloaks. Still,
it made for an entertaining story!
>>HobbitsThereýs something very endearing about first encounters or first
>>RmHob3: Falling Stars by SoundofHorns
realizations, and I think that whatever makes these things so endearing is
caught up in this story. Bonus points are awarded for mentioning Týrin and
Nienor, which makes for an uneasy parallel but doesnýt overshadow the story.
>>HobbitsNice arcing romance that takes into account everything thatýs happening
>>RmHob5: Just to be With You by Pervinca
around Merry and Estella. Estella has quite a bit of spunk for a Bolger, and
this story illustrates why sheýs such a good match for Merry. The two of
them compliment each other nicely, and I think the story does a good job at
showing the changes and growth in these two characters, particularly after
Merry comes back from the Quest and finds Estella in the Lockholes. Itýs as
much a tale of the different characters as it is of the romance between
them, and I like that very much.
>>PoetryI believe this is the most unconventional romantic pairing out of all those
>>RmP1: A Hole Possessed by Marta
nominated here. For all that, itýs still very canon-based, which makes it
that much more fun. So now we all know how Lobelia REALLY feels about Bag
End. I can hardly say Iým surprised, but her fixation seems a little
unhealthy to me. Still, great poem and an intriguing glimpse into Lobeliaýs
mind.
>>PoetryI very much like the symbols chosen to represent Aragorn and Arwen in this
>>RmP2: Courtship of the Evenstar by White Gull
poem, and I like the ideas presented about how the waiting made the moment
sweeter in the end. It reminds me of something Aragorn said to Gandalf about
long years of waiting and preparation when Gandalf gave the palantýr into
his keeping. Very nice.
>>PoetryI agree. Orcs really are a very misunderstood race. Theyýre capable of
>>RmP5: Love me, Urgren by Werecat
tender emotions, too. Well, sort of. And thatýs what I really love about
this poem. It never takes the Orcs away from what they are at heart (namely
a rather dismal result of selective breeding on the part of Morgoth) but it
also allows them to be more than that. Weýve got drums of human hide and
elven pelts being used to seduce another Orc, and for that other Orc, I
suppose this would be very romantic. All that makes them Orcs is still
there, but these devices are being used to portray things other than the
basic ideas of loot and pillage. Great use of disturbing imagery to produce
a somewhat disturbing poem.
>>Rm5: Quickening by TyellasThereýs something wonderfully irreverent about this tale. I loved it
>>URL: http://www.ansereg.com/quickening.htm
immediately. Mary Sue indeed! She is that, but sheýs a Sue I can like. And
Arod was superb. The pairing between the horses was very akin to many of the
Legolas and Mary Sue pairings, and I found myself clutching my sides in
places. No, this is definitely not a ýseriousý tale but I found I liked it
much more than many of the ýseriousý tales out there in the romance genre.
Poor Elrohir and poor Elladan. I really want to listen in on whatever chat
they have with Legolas after this. Thank you for such original work!
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>>PoetryProps for originality, thatýs certain! Marta decides to take the romance
>>RPA1: Marta
genre wandering, and the end result is very refreshing. Great choice of
pairing.
>>PoetryWerecat manages to give Orcs a hint of romance, which sounds like a
>>RPA4: Werecat
difficult task but somehow comes across as effortless. Working with the
tools Orcs prefer most (the gore and the carnage and the disgusting side of
life in general) Werecat manages to produce a love song that rings very true
to the characters, conveys the idea of seduction and sentimentality, and
makes me cringe when I think about it too long. All of which I love.
>>RA24: Lyta PadfootLysta Padfoot puts the fun back into the romance. I liked how her story had
more to it than angst and lust. There was fun, too, and scheming plots
worthy of Merry and Pippin. Lysta brings out Pippinýs uncanny knack for
getting himself away from ýunfriendlyý situations and also highlights the
adventures of the other characters in the process.
>>RA32: ReginaRegina seems to write romance by bringing in characters one might not
normally associate with the couple doing the romancing. Itýs an ingenious
way to bring out aspects of the characters that one might not normally see
if they were to keep to themselves, and I very much enjoy the result. It
also makes these stories far more accessible to people like me who have
difficulty stomaching romance in any form. I found myself enjoying Reginaýs
stories, which is not my normal reaction to this genre.
>>RA40: TyellasWhile no entirely a parody, I think Tyellas did a good job of bringing the
humor into romance and also of poking fun at more serious pairings. The
horses were characterized extremely well, and I found myself very taken with
Forty-Three, for all that Tyellas claims she is the equestrian version of a
Mary Sue. She was just too much fun not to like, and Tyellas should get all
the credit for that.
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Msg# 2379
Re: Horror--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 11, 2004 - 16:22:05 Topic ID# 2371fewer horror entries. So you can all breath a sigh of relief.
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>>Hor2: Coavalta by ZimraphelThis story never fails to give me goosebumps. Iým usually not a fan of the
first person POV, but it fits so well in this story! So many things have
faded away, and the idea that this elf has even forgotten how he died is a
bit unsettling. Heýs so uncertain about many things, but what makes this
even more unsettling are the few things he IS certain about. Such as the
fact that he would really appreciate this mortal body that is peering down
at him. I love how other elements creep in, like the possibility of refusing
the summons to Mandos or how the waters keep churning the darkness, never
letting it settle. Finally, the last lines just make me shiver. Sometimes,
the abyss gazes back, and sometimes it doesnýt like what it sees.
>>Hor4: The Complexities of Power by WatcherchildInteresting look at Sauron. Iýll confess that I liked the first part best.
There was something both eerie and familiar in the fact that Melkor kept
returning and looking for his answer, and that Sauron kept avoiding the
question even as he slowly changed. But the second section between Sauron
and Gothmog was also good, especially when Sauron wonders about his own will
and his supposed freedom.
>>Hor5: The Dead Walk Tonight by MN TheisSpooky little thrill ride that reminds me very much of a story about a
boarding house I read when I was little. That story gave me nightmares for a
week, and this brings back those memories uncomfortably well. The scene was
set very well in the opening moments, an I like Eomerýs initial edginess
that gradually goes away. Itýs one of those moments where you scream at the
characters to leave but they never listen, and thatýs half the fun.
>>Hor6: The Lure of the Darkness by AinaechoirielIým a sucker for any fic that enhances the darkness of Mirkwood, and this
fic not only does that but also shows the contrast with Thranduilýs realm.
Together, it makes for a very dark setting at the end of the fic. I love the
idea that the elves most at risk in the dark were those who had never seen
light. And the fic seems to embody that idea, giving us the light first
before the warriors move into the dark. We know exactly what the shadows and
why they should be feared. Itýs an incredible parallel between message and
structure. I love also how Legolas is portrayed here: confident and bold but
also prudent. He knows where to push and where to turn back. We conclude on
the edge of the darkness, because Legolas and the other elves refuse to go
closer to Dol Guldur, and we are thankful that they do not. Great writing
and great atmosphere.
>>Hor7: The Other by Dana LindeleaInteresting addition to the Brandybuck family history. The idea that one
hobbit did indeed return from the campaign against Angmar is creepy in and
of itself, and Lindelea makes good use of contrasts to tell the whole story.
We start at the end, go back to the beginning, and gradually fill in the
gaps as we go. Good stuff.
>>Hor8: The Sorcerer's Apprentice by ErunyauveI always knew there was something seriously wrong with the Witch-king. Now I
know why. Wonderfully twisted tale about a boy who desperately needs
therapy, though I doubt that even the Nýmenýreans could do much for him. I
enjoyed the way this story was framed as a vital piece of intelligence
passed from Gandalf to Glorfindel and how Khamýlýs origins were partially
tied in with Sauronýs decision to settle in Dol Guldur. Nice foreboding all
around, and I like the idea that the Witch-king could trace his ancestry
back to Melian. Thatýs disconcerting, actually.
>>Hor9: The Truth of Ugliness by WatcherchildAt the heart of all temptation and all corruption lies a grain of truth.
Itýs what makes these things so dangerous. To see it play out here was
chilling, but I think what really chilled me most was the thought that
Nellin had no idea that Amle was dead. For some reason, that really got to
me.
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>>HorA1: AinaechoirielExtremes are best told in contrasts and comparisons, and Ainaechoiriel has
done just that in her fic. The difference between light and dark (as well as
why this difference needs to be recognized by those who live between the
two) is illustrated very well. Ainae keeps up a brisk pace that serves the
story well and gives us enough of a glimpse of light beyond the darkness
that we truly appreciate the horror of the situation. She expertly puts
Legolas and his company in the gray areas where neither light nor darkness
holds complete sway, and then she gives us the bright, innocent elven child
set against the darkness that surrounds Dol Guldur. Very effective
atmospheric technique.
>>HorA7: WatcherchildWatcherchild uses classic seduction and temptation techniques in these
stories, and they provide much of the horror all by themselves. The fact
that darkness will return again and again until an answer is given, and that
darkness will be unusually patient in the for that answer, is an unnerving
concept. You can reject it as often as you like, but you will never be
completely free of it.
>>HorA8: ZimraphelThe true power of Zimraphelýs writing is in leaving so much unspoken.
Zimraphel shows but never tells, leaving readers to infer and guess at the
details. For horror writing, this is remarkably effective. The mindýs
creativity is sometimes far more effective for creating a state of fear, and
Zimraphel takes advantage of that by painting a picture of forgotten worlds,
uncertainty, and shadows. But one thing is never left in doubt, and that is
the feelings of the elf involved in the tale. And out of those feelings, the
readerýs mind can create entirely new worlds of horror. Very effective
writing technique.
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Hor6: The Lure of the Darkness by Ainaechoiriel
I find this to be wonderfully realistic and horrible, a parent's
nightmare, regardless of if they are Elf or human or anything else.
Great job!
Hor8: The Sorcerer's Apprentice by Erunyauve
This is an interesting and unusual perspective of the making of the
Witchking. Well thought-out plot and enjoyable style of writing
Msg# 2381
Re: 30 minutes before Humor and Adventure closes! Posted by Regina October 11, 2004 - 21:14:25 Topic ID# 2367> So get you votes in while you can and save the rest for Amnesty Day!So when is Amnesty Day? I've been totally out of it for more than a
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month & have voted on nothing. I hate my life, really, truly. ;p
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Msg# 2382
Re: 30 minutes before Humor and Adventure closes! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 11, 2004 - 21:28:49 Topic ID# 2367You can check the Databases section of the Yahoo group to see what that time
might be equivalent to in your time zone.
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Msg# 2383
Mystery Official Voting Ballot Posted by sulriel October 11, 2004 - 21:35:50 Topic ID# 2383My2: Arda Unmarred by Casey Toh
This fic presents a very unique and interesting theory, the ending
did take me by surprise, but what a wondrous thought. Very well
done.!
My5: Shades of the Immortal by Levade
Wonderful. I love the way this was woven into modern times, giving
us the possibility of a glimpse of the Eldar.
Msg# 2384
Re: 30 minutes before Humor and Adventure closes! Posted by Regina October 11, 2004 - 21:40:21 Topic ID# 2367> It is October 31st from midnight central us to midnight central us.that time
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Msg# 2385
Re: Horror--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Lady Aranel October 11, 2004 - 21:41:13 Topic ID# 2371Scary? Yeah. Shudder. I don't think I'd be too curious about those faces in the marsh, and even less if I knew this elf was wandering around there somewhere looking for a 'house'. urk.
Hor6: The Lure of the Darkness by Ainaechoiriel
I found this particularly scary, possibly because of the creepy spider characterization. <shiver>. I also thought Legolas was very well done, valiant and in character. I would have liked to have seen his reaction to finding the body of the child however. The ending seemed pre-emptive. I would have liked to seen if they would have fled or if Legolas, angered, would have sought to slay the spider. Alas, I'll suppose I'll just have imagine what might have happened on my own.
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Msg# 2386
Romance - Official Voting Ballot Posted by arielphf October 11, 2004 - 22:03:26 Topic ID# 2386with the whole summer, there was no way!)
Incomplete
RmI7: The Cursed Queen of Angmar by KhazarKhum
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=302
Rating: R some sexual situations and adult themes
Romance Partners: Witch-king of Angmar, and wife
Summary: What if the Witch-King of Angmar had married a Rhudaurian
princess?
I read mostly hobbits, though I like reading the tales of men and
fics that don't cover the same old stuff. I came to this fic because
it had one of the most compelling first chapters I had ever read.
The grave, the loving care that it was tended with and the deadly
force that was wielded to keep her resting at peace pulled me in. I
was intrigued and have not been disappointed. It is a marvelous fic
that weaves a strong, original tale and well researched Tolkien
history together with an incredibly passionate and powerful love
story. The background and depth this author provides are rich enough
for her to have made an original character out of the story, but
built onto the Tolkien universe, it is even richer. I can count on
one hand the non-hobbit fics I await the updates of and this is one
of them.
Incomplete
RmI1: A Pearl of Unexpected Price by Regina
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=604
Rating: PG-13 Sexual innuendo
Romance Partners: Frodo/Pearl Took
Summary: Frodo is in love with Pippin's sister Pearl, but they
discover that toxic relatives and dangerous inheritances can make
impossible to get your heart's desire. A non-slash explanation of
Frodo never marrying.
This fic is taking longer to update than most but it is well done if
a bit sporadic. You feel for the characters and almost want to give
them a push towards each other but you also aren't sure where the
author is going with this.
Poetry
RmP2: Courtship of the Evenstar by White Gull
URL:
http://www.freewebs.com/tornscreativetalents/Poetry/Poetry/courtship_o
f_evenstar.htm
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Aragorn/Arwen
Summary: An allegorical look at Aragorn & Evenstar's courtship.
I have a weakness for White Gull's poetry. It is lyrically simple
and yet, because it is simple and straightforward, there is no
divisiveness, it merely IS exactly what it says and its power comes
from skill not some obscure symbolism that only a few would
understand. The Courtship of Evenstar really shows the honesty of
her work. It is a straightforward allegory without any pretense.
Her words flow effortlessly and, though I am by no means an expert at
reviewing poetry, her work seems the type that any reader could enjoy.
Msg# 2387
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Msg# 2391
Re: Mystery-- Vote by Proxy Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 12, 2004 - 1:26:37 Topic ID# 2374--Ainaechoiriel
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Hello, Ainaechoiriel.
I have no words to thank you for your kind words. This must be the best
review I've had recently; if ever.
Needless to say I'm typing and framing this.
Thanks again,
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> Deliciously and refreshingly original, this is probably one of the
> finest fics I've ever read. The idea of Lord of the Nazgul confronting
> a cat at the Prancing Pony is, on the surface, absurdly surreal, but a
> set-up that could so easily turn into inanity is instead used to
> create a profoundly believable tale, with a wealth of history,
> character and mythology woven seamlessly into a short vignette that
> reads like a Gothic fairytale. The language is lush and crisp, and the
> feline character is very accurately portrayed, as anyone with any
> experience of cats will know. I particularly loved the way in which
> our world's legends and cultural perceptions regarding cats are
> intelligently transposed to Middle-Earth, with all sorts of elements
> from Tolkien's canon incorporated into feline history. The denouement
> of the confrontation between Ringwraith and cat is very ingenious and
> makes it an episode that the reader can effortlessly integrate into
> the actual events of the book. It's also not every day that one comes
> across a brilliant character who happens to be furry, small and have
> four legs!
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Msg# 2392
Re: Romance--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Lady Aranel October 12, 2004 - 7:55:50 Topic ID# 2318RmFE2: Knight's Service/Later by Tanaqui
I love this piece, there is so much more than romance here! The humor in Faramir's dunking and Pippin's distress are perfect. There is a good mix of emotions here! Uncertainty and sadness, love and comfort. Wonderful characterizations throughout. The interaction with Eomer? Inspired! I could feel Faramir's discomfort at being discovered in a trysting place by his soon to be brother-in-law, not to mention catching him in the same mission with Faramir's own cousin! The actual lovemaking scene is not what one might expect. Tender and fraught with emotion and some uncertainty, yet once they begin it is sweet and sexy and HOT. The epilouge with Faramir actually being grateful for Pippin's faux pas and wanting to repeat it... I could see the looks that passed between all of them and Pippin's grin... wonderful!
RmFE5: The Influence of Kindred Desires by Tanaqui
Weddings. Pomp and circumstance and nobles and guests, oh my! Tanaqui has done it again, she's gone believably where few have gone before. These are the events surrounding Faramir and Eowyn's wedding and the full gambit of emotions that all of that implies. Aragorn's appearance here as councilor and trusted friend amazed me, as Tanaqui is more known for her writing of the younger Steward than the King. However, Aragorn was spot on. I could picture him perfectly. Faramir's uncertainty is endearing and makes me wish I was as lucky as Eowyn! Tanaqui fleshes out Elphir and Erchirion well as members of the wedding party and makes them believable. A cast of other lesser known characters make appearances as well, an undertaking that should daunt the most experienced writer, but Tanaqui has done it with confidence and aplomb. They are all as I would picture them and I'm never left to wonder if they really *would* say this or do that. The wedding scene was done well, a lesser gifter writer could have bored the reader to tears here, but Tanaqui keeps me interested and wanting to see how it will unfold. The forging of a sword by Gimli and a sheath by Legolas as Faramir's wedding gift from Eowyn was a touching and fitting tribute, and one that made my heart go, "yes!" :-) And then there is the wedding night itself... humor filled as Faramir's cousins tend to his undressing and then as Faramir and Eowyn discover each other in bed it is tender, touching and filled with desire and love.. as well as some not so perfect moments. Very realistic and yet still very erotic. Well done!
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Hor1: Captive of Darkness by Cassia
This was my first Cassia story, and they had me hooked from the first
chapter. Legolas is captured, true, but not without a lot of effort,
showing that even young, he is a strong warrior. And from there the angst
goes up and up and intrigue grows within the plot. Elrond arrived, but will
he rescue poor Legolas and blow his cover orregretably let the young Elf
suffer? It doesn't let up until the very end.
Hor2: Coavalta by Zimraphel
I've read this one before, but it deserved a second look. It's so
underplayed and yet so darn spooky. The ending is just perfect. Perfectly
evil or horrible, very fitting for the Horror category. It rings so true of
what it might be like for one of the Elves caught in the Dead Marshes, which
was perhaps the scariest part of the LOTR trilogy for me. Tolkien didn't
give the bodies voice, but Zimraphel does here. And it's all the scarier
for it.
Hor4: The Complexities of Power by Watcherchild
Whoa. Sick and twisted, as the subject warrants. And how interesting to
find some sympathy in Sauron and a Balrog but one that is brushed away and
leaves the cruelty behind.
Hor5: The Dead Walk Tonight by MN Theis
A nicely spooky story. And well-written, too and mostly error-free if I
remember rightly.. Not that I like the fact that Legolas died, but at least
he went down fighting. ;-) No happy ending on this one, but then, this is
the Horror category.
Hor7: The Other by Dana Lindelea
This being the Horror category, I was actually afraid that there wouldn't be
a happy ending here. Good suspense and build up to, in the end, the obvious
thing the Other was. I liked how the time jumped from the present thing
they were about to do to the past.
Hor8: The Sorcerer's Apprentice by Erunyauve
A realistic look at how the Witch King may have come to be, and a moral
lesson as well, as to what bullying can possibly lead to.
Hor9: The Truth of Ugliness by Watcherchild
A very good, but disturbing story, which fits this category nicely. I
particularly liked what happened with the femaleand how the story mirrored
the action in that it seems we forgot about the female only to realize hat
Nellin has forgotten about her. And even then, Melkor twists it, makes it a
new torture, telling Nellin the truth after having convinced him of a lie.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
HorA2: Cassia
Cassia was probably the author that got to me admit that I, yes, am a
torture-fic fan. And also a Aragorn-and-Legolas-friendship-fan. And then
she teamed up with Siobhan and wrote one of the most memorable series in
LOTR fanfic.
HorA3: Dana Lindelea
Dana and Lindelea did a good job keeping their story spooky suspenseful, and
weaving in and out of the present time was really a great idea.
HorA4: Erunyauve
Erunyauve managed to humanize the Witch King and show his downfall in a way
we can only hope George Lucus will do for Anakin Skywalker.
HorA5: MN Theis
Maggie has proven she can write incredibly long fics, and here she proves
she can write them short. And scary, and not save Legolas in the end. ;-)
HorA7: Watcherchild
Watcherchild did a superb job at imagining the torture that might turn an
Elf into an Orc. And I was impressed that someone could even imagine how it
was that Sauron was corrupted, but Watcherchild managed quite well and
actually made me understand in some small way.
HorA8: Zimraphel
It's no surprise to me that Zimraphel can write horror. I think she writes
everything well. She pulled off the spookiness in this so well, so
underplayed. As someone else said, it's what she leaves unsaid that makes
the difference. Zimraphel got into the head of the unhoused Elf and got
into the evil that crept into him. Yet he still sounds like an Elf.
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Horror and Mystery Voting, 10/14/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 13, 2004 - 0:02:09 Topic ID# 2400
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> RmFE2: Knight's Service/Later by TanaquiURL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1901
I really like this story. It's light but not fluffy. The image of
Pippin being so concerned for Faramir was very cute, and I can see
this kind of relationship developing between them in the months after
Pippin returned from Cormallen. And the hobbits' constant appetites
was very in-character. As Éowyn put it, "Do they never stop eating?" I
can see them causing a revolt among the kitchen staff very easily.
Then we get to the more adult scenes. This story maintains a good
balance of how much detail to reveal, making this quite possibly the
most tasteful (and therefore, in my opinion, best) erotica I've ever
read. But what really steals the show are the character moments. When
Éomer and Lothíriel showed up I nearly cracked up. Negotiating with
Dol Amroth indeed!
In short, the characterizations were well done, the plot interesting,
and the writing superb. It all combines for a very enjoyable piece
(though I do prefer it split into two parts).
> RmFE5: The Influence of Kindred Desires by TanaquiURL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1674
Here Tanaqui continues her arc of stories about Faramir's and Éowyn's
relationship, and one can see them growing together as they heal from
their psychological and physical wounds. We see that here: their
wounds are healing, but the hurt lingers. I cannot imagine that, if
Tanaqui had changed a few proper nouns, I can see this story as
involving any other lead couple: the characterizations are distinct
and oh-so-Tolkien.
As enjoyable as the private ceremonies were, for me the truly
fascinating part was the more public ones. (Though that image of
Faramir's "paying homage" is quite titillating.) Aragorn of course
stole the show, and his interaction with Faramir was spot on. And I
had to laugh at Faramir's embarrassment when discussing his "plight"
with Elphir - and at his increased confidence later, when Elphir
reminds him of the conversation. The many ceremonies were touching,
but they also rung true: the ceremonies had a touch of historical
realism, and the political implications of the match were clearly
felt, everything from the need for a marriage by proxy to Hild, to the
Rangers' not providing the honour guard, to the concession that the
Rohirric ceremony would be conducted in the common tongue.
I can very well see this as a story out of canon, if Tolkien had
recorded the Fourth Age (except of course, Tolkien being Tolkien, he
would have "faded to black" a lot sooner!) - the characterizations,
little details, and historical realism are just so thoroughly planned
out.
> RmG3: Simple Gifts by Thevina FinduilasURL: http://www.libraryofmoria.com/unnamedcanon/simplegifts.txt
Interesting story - very sensual, and a nice OC.
> RmHob1: A Little Night Music by ArielURL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1710
I especially liked seeing how Sam and Rosie were getting on several
years after the Ring War. Your characterization of Rosie was
convincing, sweet but not saccharine. She seemed like an adult who had
been through a lot and knew what she wanted, but she still remained a
hobbit. It was also nice to see a romance from the female POV,
something you don't often get even in het. But what really made this
piece were the little details, especially at the beginning. Well done.
> RmP5: Love me, Urgren by WerecatURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3165
I like this. Orcs are indeed a misunderstood race. Here you give them
depth, without glossing over what makes them so orcsy.
> Rm5: Quickening by TyellasURL: http://www.ansereg.com/quickening.htm
I'll give Tyellas props for originality here! This was funny and yet
very realistic - the horses stayed true to how I imagine them, as did
the elves and half-elves. I liked it.
Marta
Msg# 2402
Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 13, 2004 - 18:49:56 Topic ID# 2317Given the length of the category, and some of the stories in it, I had to
modify some of my ff.net reviews for the stories I'd read a long while ago.
Sorry, I couldn't be more original, folks. The memory is not what it used
to be.
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Drabble
DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by Lindelea
Interesting, and quit grim, as suits her at that time, I think.
Drabble
DD5: Fear! Fire! Foes! by Marta
Fatty is often forgotten for the unsung hero that he is. He held the fort,
allowing the others to get away. And he suffered for it in the end.
Drabble
DD7: Sundered by Oakenshield
Touching and poignant. His decision must have been a hard one. This set of
drabbles pulls that out and the remembrance of the brother at the end is a
very nice touch.
Drabble
DD8: The Call by Alexcat
Ooh, I don't think we hear from *that* POV very often. Very intriguing.
Drabble
DD9: The Silent Street by Lindelea
Ah, what a tough positioin Beregond was in. Truly he had to slay friends to
save Faramir. That is understated in LOTR, I think.
Drabble
DD10: The Steward and the King by Marta
A nice insight into a possible childhood moment for Boromir and a memory for
Aragorn.
Gap-filler
DG2: Cry of the Gull by Ithilien
This was one of the first LOTR fanfics I ever read. And it got me started
reading WIPs. Grr... But it was that good. It hooked me. I think these
"missing" scenes are my favorite type of LOTR fanfic. The characterizations
were really well. They felt like themselves. I liked Gimli's and Legolas's
interaction and I think Ithilien hit on Aragorn's weight (of duty) really
well. She wrote of the sea-longing beautifully and I really liked the end
where Legolas sang, and that way shared a bit of the music of with Aragorn.
Gap-filler
DG3: Father and Sons by Dwimordene
My memory doesn't do this justice, but there's not enough time to read it
again. This was, I believe the first completed story of Dwimordene's that I
read and I think it captured this family very well. There is dysfunction in
this family and that's something some people can't write without falling
into extremes, such as child abuse. Dwim doesn't go there, but she does
show the dysfunction, the weight Faramir must have lived with, and still the
love between the brothers. Using Gandalf for an external POV (I think I
remember she did) was also good, as sometimes it takes someone outside such
a family to see the truth without the filters dysfunction puts on our eyes
and ears. Denethor here was not a vile villain, but a lost father, too far
gone to shadow to see his errant ways.
Gap-filler
DG4: The Fire Sermon by Altariel
I really enjoyed this. Altariel covered the romance but didn't make it
heavy-handed, which I very much appreciate. Here characterization of Faramir
was great, and I felt his grief at learning that his father died (and thus
his whole family) and even more that his father only loved him there at the
end when he should have loved him his whole life. Faramir a wonderful tragic
character, Faramir, I mean. A hero with a heart broken so many times over
and yet it stays strong. This story really brought that out.
LOTR
DL3: Bitter as Blood by Shadow975
This is a wonderful, incredible vignette. Shadow975 captured that moment
when Boromir picked up the ring and gave us his thoughts and feelings so
well, and poetically. This is beautifully written.
Post-WOTR
DPoW11: Perchance to Dream by M. N. Theis
I am so glad I did not read this as a WIP. Seeing as I read the bulk of it
over three days, it was quite intense and compelling, as evidenced by my
doing something very dangerous to read it. Read and drive at the same time.
Be thankful for my very good peripheral vision. This was masterfully
crafted. A very complex plot, well-done combat scenes, believable OC's, no
thread ignored, the attention in three parts to only one character each.
And it was absolutely the best, most horrible long death scene(s) I've ever
read. And being only half-way through the story, I would have died of
vexation had I had to wait to find out that it wasn't as it seemed. As it
was I had to spoil ahead just to know I could put the story down for the
night and not be crying at work when I read it the next day. Oh, and
Pippin's song! So perfect! Bravo!
Post-WOTR
DPoW17: The Hunting Trip by Ithilien
Ithilien started me with WIPs, and she's one of the last WIPs I've been
readering. And this story is a good reason why. It's painful waiting for
the next chapter, wondering if, finally, the story will turn and give the
good guys a break. So many real human (and Elvish) emotions and situations
played out in this story, and even the more "paranormal" events were handled
with a sense of reality. All of the familiar characters felt right, but in a
more modern way of presenting them, close-in, emotional, thoughtful. And
angsty as all get out!
Post-WOTR
DPoW18: The Last Grey Ship by ErinRua
This is a wonderful story, beautifully written. What more can I say? The
heavier emotions are there, sadness and grief, but even the comedy is
brilliant. Laughter through tears is one of the best things a story can
bring out in a reader, I think.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW4: E cared haniant tîn mîl by PuterPatty
This is beautiful. I actually cried a few tears when I first read it and the
song at the end really sealed that deal. And then I cried the first time I
heard the song on the radio. The characterizations were very good and I
loved the relationship between Legolas and each of his parents, and of
course between Thranduil and his wife. Legolas's letter is just like him--as
I like to think of him. Light and yet not unaware of the darkness. A little
humorous, but noble and wise throughout.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW6: Leaf and Branch by JastaElf
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed this, more than I thought I would at the
start. This was my first of Jasta's stories and I ended up just adoring it.
I read the last three chapters on my PDA while shopping with my sister. I
waited in line behind her reading the Epilogue and refused to move over to
another line with no waiting just so I could finish it. A smile was
plastered on my face the whole time. This was a wonderful debut! And the
darker "what if..." fic to this is great, too, though I'm dying for another
chapter.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW8: Small Soldiers by Cori Lannam
An endearing little tale of Faramir and Boromir on the day their mother
dies.
D9: Suffering Unending by Zam Kenobi
Good story. Very good. And a wonderful, bittersweet message. Zam touched on
a lot in a very short amount of words.
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Re: Mystery--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 14, 2004 - 14:39:10 Topic ID# 2372these awards? They've forced me to read stories I might not have otherwise
and they've reminded me of stories that I always meant to read but never got
around to. Hooray! New favorites!
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Mystery
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>>My1: Adagio by Rose SaredI knew this summary sounded familiar, but I couldnýt figure out where I knew
this story from until I saw the title ýUnbinding the Boxý in the story
itself. Then it all came flooding back. This is a fun mystery in which most
of the story is known to the reader but not to the characters, which makes
for an interesting experience. But what I like best is the fact that Gimli
gets a starring (albeit largely unconscious) role. The dwarf definitely
needs more publicity.
>>My4: In the Hands of the Enemy by meckinockWow. Justýwow. Iýd heard of this story, but Iýd never gotten around to
actually reading it, though people kept telling me it was good. Iým so glad
I read it for these awards. First of all, Halbarad gets a starring role, and
thatýs going to win me over on sheer novelty alone. I love Halbarad and Iýve
always regretted the fact that there just arenýt enough fics out there about
him. But this story not only has a healthy dose of Halbarad, but it pairs
him up with Gandalf and characterizes both of them so well that I have a
hard time believing this was not a part of Tolkienýs canon. There are so
many little moments that say so much about the characters involved, insert
just a nice twist of humor, and then get right back on track. Such as
Halbaradýs blank stare at Gandalfýs request for a handkerchief, Aragornýs
comment about being too young to understand his own life, and a hilariously
frank discussion about good beheading strokes. Those are just a few; the
entire story is peppered with moments like that. And itýs a great mystery.
Youýre always guessing, always wondering, but youýve been told just enough
to realize that something very wrong is going on. Besides Halbarad and
Gandalf, Aragorn is characterized terrifically, and I love how the fact that
heýs been out hunting Gollum and the Ring has taken him away from the other
Rangers. To finish up, the OCs are stunning, and the plot is great. Very
moving, very fast, and very good at leaving you hanging around hoping that
just a bit more information is going to come your way. It tells you enough
to expect a twist, but when the full twist comes, itýs a thing of beauty!
>>My5: Shades of the Immortal by LevadeDeliciously creepy. This is one of those stories that can give you chills,
and I love the expansion upon the idea that the land never really forgets.
Itýs an idea you find throughout Tolkien, and I think itýs used well here.
>>My6: That Way by WerecatThis story reminds me very much of Tolkienýs fox who happened upon Frodo,
Pippin, and Sam their first night away from Hobbiton. Except that this story
is much darker. I liked the references to Tolkienýs Lost Tales, Queen
Berýthiel, and to the song itself. The cat seems like a formidable character
in his own right. If anyone could stand up to the Witch-king like that, it
would probably be him. Go kitty!
>>My8: The Next Step by WatcherchildThis story made me think, and I love it because of that. I also love it
because itýs about the Avari, and we so rarely get to hear their side of the
story. Theyýre even rare than Gimli and Halbarad in fics, and I think the
characterization of the Avari as a people was really well done. Finally, it
seemed to me that the crux of the fic was the idea that there was no good or
evil and that Ilývatar didnýt have sides, which is actually an idea that
Iýve been kicking around for a while. The opening pages of the Silmarillion
seem to support that view if interpreted a certain way, and I think the idea
was explored nicely in this fic.
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>>MyA3: LevadeLevade knows how to set moods, and the result is spectacular. I love how
several different moods are woven into the fics, and how Levade manages to
get the narrative and the dialogue to support them all.
>>MyA4: meckinockIf only professional mystery writers were this talented. Meckinock shows an
amazing ability to dangle just enough information that we leap to
conclusions only to find that the conclusions are just the tip of the
iceberg. With deft pacing and remarkable OCs, Meckinock portrays a
mystery/drama story that kept me glued to my screen for the duration of the
ride and still has me somewhat speechless. What a story! The plot itself is
superb, and Meckinock throws in ties to pre-LotR left and right, giving us a
rich foundation for the fic and tying it into events that will happen later.
Thereýs some great foreshadowing mixed in as well, but I think what I like
best is Meckinockýs ability to characterize. Characterization can take place
throughout the story as a continuing arc, or it can happen briefly with but
a few well-placed words. Either way, both canon characters and original
characters are full, complete individuals. Even those who never actually
appear in the fic (Elladan and Elrohir, in particular) are characterized
well. It makes the drama that much more vivid and real, and the reader
becomes just as obsessed about solving the mystery as Halbarad is.
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Foolish me. I didn't get it at first Posted by fourth\_moon October 14, 2004 - 16:13:16 Topic ID# 2408you look like is spam? Bit harsh.
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Re: Foolish me. I didn't get it at first Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 14, 2004 - 16:57:47 Topic ID# 2408anyone shows us a picture of themselves. So long as it's decent. But this
was spam and porn spam at that.
So yeah, harsh in this case is the way it's going to be.
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voting! There's only a little over a day left for Drama and Romance, and I
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Msg# 2410
Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 14, 2004 - 17:11:58 Topic ID# 2317Official Voting Ballot
Drama- mefas
Drabble
DD1: Alone by Oakenshield
Beautiful and sadý as the story of Arwen and Aragorn must be in the end.
Drabble
DD4: Fealty and Service by Marta
A look at the father and son that is surprising to say the least.
Drabble
DD6: Lament To Lorien by Naresha
A love sad series of drabbles that lament the death of Haldir. I found them haunting and well written.
Drabble
DD7: Sundered by Oakenshield
Another sad one by Oaksý one of the saddest tales in Tolkiený the sundering of Elrond and Elros. Very well done in a set of drabbles.
Drabble
DD10: The Steward and the King by Marta
Foreshadowing the future in a haunting little drabble.
LOTR
DL5: Final Flight by Trinity Helix
This is another of those that make me cry. Centering on the thoughts of Haldir as he comes to Helmýs Deep and dies there but it is not a hopeless story. Indeed, its theme seems to be hopeý hope for middle earth, hope for the future beyond.
Post-WOTR
DPoW15: Strawberries by Khylea
This was sweet and so Sam like in its telling. It was a loving and sweet tale of friendship and devotion. Made me want to taste a strawberry too.
Post-WOTR
DPoW16: Sunset by Khylea
Lovely story about the sacrifices of those who die for the freedom of others. A fitting story for a Memorial Day challenge.
Post-WOTR
DPoW19: The Mantle Of Power by Marnie
This one is sadý but not. The elves have gone but for Celeborn, Glorfindel and the twins. And Celeborn comes to Imladris. And interesting look at the aftermathý and yet we are left wondering.
Post-WOTR
DPoW20: Trees of Remembrance by jenolas
Another tearful story, it spans from Eldarionýs childhood to his old age and even though it seems to dwell on loss and sorrow, it really is about what the name suggestsý remembrance. A lovely story.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW1: A Family Trait by Marnie
I smiled when I read this one even before I read the endnotesý elves and metal and jewel work did not result in positive resultsý but the twins were pleased none the less. A sweet story with a little bite.
Romance
DR1: Forbidden Fruit by Eresse
Like all of Eresseýs work, this is well written though really sadý the tale of unrequited love. She has a real affection and feeling for the characters and establishes a wonderful relationship between them all.
Romance
DR2: Gwador: Sorrow's First Dawning by Eresse
Another lovely tale in the Greenleaf and Imladris series. Eresse deals with the death of Legolasý mother in a tension filled story that showcases the kindness of the elves of Rivendell in taking Legolas to help in his healing. We see tiny hints of things to come in Elladanýs concern for Elrohir. Well done and flows wellý you get drawn into this universe quickly.
Romance
DR3: Heart's Brother by Eresse
This little short piece is nice.. a picnic and Gandalf is very observant! Elrohir keeps his secret well so far.
Romance
DR4: Heartsong by Trinity Helix
Lovely lyrical little tale of friendship, perhaps more. I found it pleasant to readý but one always has the fate of Gondolin and Glorfindel and Ecthelion in the back of your mind when you read of that time.
Romance
DR6: In The Silence Of Our Hearts by Eresse
This is such a sweet interlude in the story of Legolas and Elrohir. I love the nosiness of the twins and the pride of the Erestor and Glorfindel. I love the fact that Erestor never made it easy for Glor even after he knew! More good reading!
Romance
DR7: Into Temptation by Eresse
I love this oneý Poor Elrohir is so cute in his fear and disgust with himself and being terribly afraid of storms myself, I surely understand poor Legolas!
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Msg# 2411
Re: Romance--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 14, 2004 - 17:15:46 Topic ID# 2318Official Voting Ballot
Romance- mefas
Featuring Haldir
RmH1: Amarie & Haldir: Paths of Destiny by Julie
This story was interesting to me mostly because of the characterization of Haldir. I seriously liked him and his stern and aggravating ways. This was written like the standard romance with the two protagonists in conflict but eventually coming to love one anotherý but Julie does it in a very well written way. It also gave us the term ýgaladhric arrowý. *smile*
Featuring Haldir
RmH5: Why? by RennWench
Sad, heartbreaking, poetic. I like this story for it lyrical flow and sparseness of words. It doesnýt need a lot of words to convey such strong emotion.
Featuring Legolas
RmL5: Tender Musings by Eresse
All that I have read of this series is lovelyý for Elladan to see what perfection his brother and Legolas yet not be able to tell them yet is touching.
Incomplete
RmI3: Elanor's Revenge by Julie & Fianna
I love the humor in this story and I love the awful tease of making us wait forever for the lovers to consummate their union. Written in the usual seamless style of Julie and Fianna.
Incomplete
RmI8: The Gift by Mirasaui
Every chapter of this story is a delight. The characters are so well drawn and the story suspsensful and dramatic. I always look forward another chapter.
Poetry
RmP3: Forever My Heart by Naresha
I pretty much love anything about Celeborn and Haldir and Nareshaýs poem has that sad edge to the eroticism.
Rivendell
RmR3: To My Shining Light by Oakenshield
This one is sad and heart wrenching, something that Oak is very good at. I can feel Erestorýs pain and sorrow. Tears welled in my eyes as I read it.
Rivendell
RmR5: Vanilla Cream by Kharessa Bloodrose
And I thought Vanilla was boring. I love the way your senses are draw into this sweet little love story. Though not graphic at all, it is extremely sensuous and erotic, as well as Romantic.
Rivendell
RmR6: Warrior by Mirasaui
When I first started this one, I wasnýt sure where it was going but as I got into it I was fascinated by it. The story of Elrohir and his lost toy was sad but at least Erestor did find something precious. There is much more to the story than thatý it is complex and wistful and very worth the read.
Rm3: Jealous by Oakenshield
This story is simply a delight. Jealous Gimli is a wonderful thing to behold. This tale is a bit more lighthearted than some of Oakýs but it is every bit as compelling and well written.
Rm5: Quickening by Tyellas
This one is a simple delight. We have met the horses before in Tyellasý work but this one is just purely wonderful.
Rm8: Swept Away by Larian Elensar
I have read this story several times and every time, I cry my eyes out. Both characters are so likable and so sweetý meeting and becoming friends. I love Rumilýs boldness and Theodredýs shyness and one has to love grumpy Haldir. There is not enough Theodred fic out there. The ending to this one will bring a tear to the hardest of hearts I think. I count it among my favorite stories!
Authors
RA22: Larian Elensar
Swept Away
Larian is a romantic and her story proves it. Even if she says sheýs not! This is a beautiful story that tears my heart out... every time i read it.
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Msg# 2417
Drama Ballot from Elena Tiriel Posted by Elena Tiriel October 15, 2004 - 2:11:48 Topic ID# 2417so I could only read a few drabbles and resurrect some comments from a
couple stories that I've reviewed in the past. (Hope that copying comments
from prior reviews, like at Stories of Arda, is acceptable -- I've mentioned
it within each relevant review in case it is not.)
- Barbara
Drama
Official Voting Ballot
Drabble
DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by Lindelea
Very nice, Lindelea! I liked the repetitive nature of your mentions of
death -- particularly effective in a drabble. Also, I liked the repeated
inclusions of canon quotes -- to death and the world's ending -- and -- the
dogs roll on the floor with the brats. The last line was very powerful, as
well.
Drabble
DD3: Dragons by Lindorien
(This drabble was, unfortunately, not available to comment on, and I
couldn't find it even using a Google search. I would have loved to read
it.)
Drabble
DD4: Fealty and Service by Marta
I like this, Marta! It's sometimes said by us old(er) people that our
parents never see us as true adults until we marry and have children. In
the case of a necessarily-martial society (stuck on the edge of Mordor),
this swearing-in ceremony must be Faramir's threshold of full manhood in
Denethor's eyes. I was especially struck by Denethor's musings on naming
Faramir "Sufficient Jewel"; I think he regrets selling his son short now.
"Kindred flesh, men of Gondor." A perfect summary of what they share, in so
few words. Bravo!
Drabble
DD5: Fear! Fire! Foes! by Marta
Nice view of Fatty's contribution to the safety of the Shire. In
retrospect, it does make sense that the family might have been paralyzed by
fear if they truly understood the threat of the Nazgýlý maybe it was good
that he was out of breath! I also like your understated mention of the
Black Breath.
Drabble
DD6: Lament To Lorien by Naresha
I love the idea of a cluster of related drabbles, all giving a very personal
view of Haldir. Very nice idea, and nicely written!
Drabble
DD8: The Call by Alexcat
Very good, Alexcat! I was able to guess the object quicklyý very sinister
and broodingý
Drabble
DD9: The Silent Street by Lindelea
Oh, dear, this pulls me into the action immediately and makes me feel that I
am right there. I hadn't read your summary, but I like the fact that you
established the character, the event and the locale immediately -- hard to
do in so few words! Good references to canon -- Denethor's words add to the
urgency of the situation. The fact that one of the men he slew was his
nephew really brings the pain home -- these are not just his peers, they are
kindred as well. Good use of repetition with "heart". I really get the
sense of outrage -- Beregond has never been disloyal, but he is called that
and worse because he is trying to save the life of his beloved Captain!
That's insanity!
Drabble
DD10: The Steward and the King by Marta
Lovely vignette, Aure-enteluva! I like the contrast of Thorongil's
nonchalance with Boromir's earnest concentration on the very serious matter.
A sad commentary that children should have to lose their innocence so
early -- he's a toddler, for heaven's sake! I liked that you ended on such
a hopeful note.
Gap-filler
DG1: A Silence Covered in Stone by Zimraphel
(Some of the following is from my review on Stories of Arda:) Wow,
Zimraphel, as usual this story is incredibly powerful. I barely made it
through the prologue because of my own claustrophobia - your words there
were just a little *too* evocative! The sensation of being absolutely
trapped was overwhelming. **Shudder!** Your Thranduil is such a powerful
presence, very ably drawn. Such incredible pain to see his people and realm
nearly destroyed, yet he still clung to his overwhelming distrust of other
elves! Thranduil could think of fewer deaths that were worse. That
statement made me turn cold, and now that I've read chapter 2, I understand
that it was the foreshadowing that gave me goose bumps. In chapter 2, I
really liked the fact that Thranduil seemed to warm to Celeborn a bit after
realizing that he was not going to abandon Arda soon. Perhaps he does learn
to trust a bit? Your Celeborn is such a wise and steady influence on his
people in Middle-earth. He is incredibly strong to have such a close and
trusting relationship with Galadriel and not be in the least subsumed by it.
He has also lived so long as to have seen nearly everything -- but still
has the heart to be saddened and outraged when some new variation of
Sauron's evil is uncovered. After reading this story (when you first
published it), I went and re-read about the fate of Eýrnur; I have to say,
absolutely nothing in Tolkien's tale came close to preparing me for the
level of evil your story describes! *Goosebumps and shivers!*
Post-WOTR
DPoW18: The Last Grey Ship by ErinRua
I've told you this before (in my review on Stories of Arda, part of which is
copied here), but this is one of my top favorite handful of stories -- and
I've probably read at least a thousand LoTR fanfics. The friendship between
Legolas and Gimli stirs my soul, after probably the dozenth time I've read
this story. Your words are magic. I go back to read your story again and
again when I want to be inspired by the richness of your language, that
paints such evocative word-pictures. And the interaction between Legolas
and Gimli (and Aragorn) is incredible -- these friends know each other so
well. (Like, you can't get an Elf to stir when he doesn't want to, and
can't get him to stop once he has decided to go -- badly paraphrased, I
know, but it seems like such a spot-on assessment of Legolas. Actually, it
reminds me of someone I know: me! LOL!) And Gimli's enormous sorrow when
he thinks his friend will leave, and he will miss him but doesn't want to
get in his way. (I always cry at the part where Legolas looses his last
arrow on Middle-earth; it just seems so final; of course, that's only after
I have finally dried my eyes from the first parts of the story... and then
start blubbering again at the end...) You can tug on my heart-strings any
day, ErinRua!
Pre-WOTR
DPrW1: A Family Trait by Marnie
Ah, I liked this very much, Marnie! The twins are so earnest and eager to
learn, and the atmosphere is so warm (literally and figuratively). Such a
short story, but it's interesting how you separated the twins' characters so
well, and showed some of their natural sibling rivalry. Celeborn was his
usual sensible self, and it was a pleasure to see that he had earlier tried
and failed to learn smithing, and it didn't seem to embarrass him in the
least. It was a pleasant surprise to find out who their tutor was, and a
pleasure to see the affection between the twins and their mother (as well as
their thoughtfulness about Elrond). The hidden interplay between Celebrýan
and Celeborn when they thought that the twins might want to follow the paths
of the Fýanorians was well-written, as was their relief when the twins
decided they wanted to create swords -- although that, in itself, is
something of a double-edged sword, so to speak. All in all, a lovely
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Msg# 2418
Re: Romance--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 15, 2004 - 11:56:16 Topic ID# 2318Official Voting Ballot
Authors:
Poetry
RPA2: Naresha
Forever My Heart
Naresha often writes poetry instead of stories and her poetry is storytelling and lyrical at the same time.
RA12: Eresse
Tender Musings
As I have said in precious votes, Eresseýs love for her subjects is really quite obvious and her writing style most pleasant to read.
RA17: Julie
Amarie & Haldir: Paths of Destiny, Khila Amin
Julie is a talented writer who can suck you right into her world and make you see her characters as vividly as if you were there.
RA18: Julie & Fianna
Elanor's Revenge
Julie and Fianna together give us heroines with grin and characters that are unforgettable.
RA19: Kharessa Bloodrose
Vanilla Cream
Kharessaýa work flows and winds its way around sensuously to make you be able to see, smell and taste what she talks about.
RA26: Mirasaui
The Gift, Warrior
Mira writes with loving and great detail but it is not distracting but rather enhances her work. Her characters are laid with the same loving detail and I tend to fall in love with them too.
RA28: Oakenshield
To My Shining Light, Jealous
Oak is also another marvelous writer. I can almost believe that she was thereý her style is that clear and thereýs always a bit of melancholy that I like.
RA33: RennWench
Why?
Rennýs stories are lyrical as her poetry and I like it. It is a refreshing difference.
RA40: Tyellas
Quickening
Tyellas can write anything, period, and make me believe it. She happens to be my favorite writer in the entire Fandom.
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Msg# 2419
Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 15, 2004 - 12:26:45 Topic ID# 2317Official Voting Ballot
Authors:
Drabble
DDA4: Marta
Fealty and Service, Fear! Fire! Foes!, The Steward and the King
Marta is in her element with drama and drabbles. They do seem to her specialty and she addresses them well.
Drabble
DDA5: Naresha
Lament To Lorien
Naresha does a wonderful sad drabble and this series is one of her best.
Drabble
DDA6: Oakenshield
Sundered
Oakýs dramatic style fits the drabble and category well. She writer serious fiction with a wistful sadness.
DA20: Eresse
Forbidden Fruit, Gwador: Sorrow's First Dawning, Heart's Brother, In The
Silence Of Our Hearts, Into Temptation
Eresseýs dramatic books in her Greenleaf and Imladris series are as always well done and sad without being over dramatic and maudlin.
DA29: jenolas
Trees of Remembrance
Jenolas has a wonderfully sad little dramatic piece with this one. A person would have to have a heart of stone not to be moved.
DA31: Khylea
Strawberries, Sunset
Khylea writes dramatic fiction as well as she does lighthearted romance. She finds a word or sentence and makes a story from and does an excellent job.
DA39: Marnie
Between Two Worlds, The Mantle Of Power, A Family Trait
Marnie has a flair for drama without becoming overly sentimental. I find all her work a joy to read.
DA52: Trinity Helix
Final Flight, Heartsong
Drmatic tearful events are portrayed well in these short little fics. Trinity has a nice style without a lot of extra wording too.
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Link should be:
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Re: Bad Link on Silm story Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 15, 2004 - 14:46:06 Topic ID# 2420--Ainaechoiriel
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Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot (Take 2 for Aine) Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 15, 2004 - 17:05:37 Topic ID# 2422-----Original Message-----
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Gap-filler
DG5: Theodred's Last Command by Adara\BoromirFan (Carol Kyser)
A sad and fitting story, true to the books. Theodred must have been a great
prince. We really only get to see him in his death, don't we? Thank you for
giving him this moment, Adara.
LOTR
DL1: Adaptation by Pervinca
Alas, but they didn't put it in the movies. I remember reading it the first
time thinking Pippin had died the way Tolkien ended that chapter. Nice
story depicting Legolas's adaptations to things of mortals.
LOTR
DL2: Ashes, East Wind, Hope that Rises by ErinRua
I originally set out to read this story only because Legolas was in it. ;-)
But I'm glad I read it. And then I didn't remember it, but I'm glad I read
it again. It was beautifully done and the writing style meshed well
Tolkien's story. The characterization of Eomer was wonderful! He remeinded
me very much of Book!Eomer. Movie!Eomer seems so much more serious. And I
loved the Legolas bits, too! Oh, and I love the title!
LOTR
DL6: For Gondor by Avon
Interesting format, just sound. I felt like a blind person reading, but
newly blind, trying to identify the sounds. A successful experiment, I
think.
LOTR
DL9: River Flowing by Dwimordene
Ah, Greg's story. Greg, the Haradrim. He and Bob, the Rohirrim should have
lunch sometime. This is a brilliant little story for a character who didn't
get any lnes in the books but made his mark nonetheless. Sam wondered what
he might have thought and why he might have fought and here Dwim tells us,
shows us before he dies. He wonders at a fish and his friend is amazed by
the rumor that men sometimes drown themselves, and you realize how rare and
precious water is to these people. Brilliantly told!
LOTR
DL10: Spartan Letters by Dwimordene
That was short enough for a second read, and I'm glad I took the time.
Faramir's first letter is heart-wrenching, as tragic as his part in LOTR as
Tolkien wrote it. And then when he throws it into the fire.! I know that
feeling. I've written my mother a letter. Though I never send it, I can't
bring myself to destroy it. Faramir does and I feel it's tragic he did so.
Only then we get the second letter, the one he didn't destory, and it is so
much more heart-wrenching for the fewer words. Beautifully done,
Dwimordene. Another symphony for your repertoire.
LOTR
DL14: Wizard by M. Sebasky
A poignant glimpse into Gandalf, a character I wouldn't normally be
interested in reading about. But this story, too, proved worthy of the
time. It digs deep into a quiet moment, getting into Gandalf's soul, his
hope, regrets, and the weight on his shoulders.
Poetry
DP2: Boe Bedich Len, Haldir? by Chathol-linn
I'm no poet afficianado, so I can't comment on style and form, and what not.
I can only say what I like, and I liked this. I liked the rhyme and rhythm
and the tribute to Haldir's life and death.
Poetry
DP3: From Fangorn Forest to Helm's Deep, Canto I The Forest by Chathol-linn
And oh, I liked this one, too! I'm so much better with rhyming poems (even
when my best don't rhyme). I liked the three Ents' different visions of the
three hunters and how they saw them. The syntax was beautiful. I think I
liked the first line of Gimli's best: "I laughed to see a stone that walks,
said Elm."
Poetry
DP4: Rescue of the Rowan by Chathol-linn
I thought it was Interesting that Chathol-linn should write a poem in prose
style. No stanzas, but it was still brilliant and lyrical. Kept me
interested throughout.
Poetry
DP6: The Day the Sun Didn't Rise by Tinni
I had not heard the Japanese Myth, but I think Tolkien's tale of the sun and
moon fit well with it.
Post-WOTR
DPoW1: A Change of Seasons by runningscared
I didn't recognize it at first, but I had read it before, and still it
brought a tear to my eye at the end. Beautiful and not belabored by length
or complication, this is a story about Legolas and Gimli's departure from
Middle-Earth. The witty banter fits them well, and also the brevity of it,
because it wasn't a time for wittiness. It was bittersweet, and the story
matched it. I felt the farewell Legolas offered, and it made me sad.
Post-WOTR
DPoW5: Closing the Book by Gonzai
This too suffers at the mercy of my memory for I am sacrificing a second
reading for time to read more stories. I have given it a second glance
though, to tray and remind me and I think that has done a good enough job
that I can write this comment. This is a fitting tale for the brief mention
of what happens to Merry and Pippin the timelines in the Appendices, and a
good explanation for why the younger Pippin would pass first. The
characterizations are wonderful, playful, even their old age, a good mix of
book and movie personalities. Good job!
Post-WOTR
DPoW10: Paths We Trod, Wrongs We Bore by Coriel
Wow, a short story and yet full of so much! Thank you, Coriel, for the
reminder of what Thranduil had lived through: 2 sacks of Doriath, then
Sirion. Coriel did not shy away from the savageness of those attacks, let
us feel the true hurt of the Kinslaying, and yet showed also that Thranduil
did not hate blindly, even coming to appreciate Gimli, "a prince among
dwarves". But where is the next story?
Post-WOTR
DPoW13: Sorrow Profound by Alexcat
Alexcat portrays Elrond's sorry very well. It truly is prfound, as Tolkien
told us that he'd face sorrow no matter how the tale ended. And that he
does. That is why mortality is a gift to Men. While immortality sounds all
well and good, you stay while those around you go.
D8: Standards by Dwimordene
Ah, this is one of Dwim's I don't think I had read before. How did I miss
it! Maybe because it was able Arwen, and my interests lie elsewhere. But
these awards have made me broaden those interests, and I've been glad for
it. This is a wonderful example of the worth. there are few Arwen stories
I ever read and then they may not feel really Arwen to me. This one does.
Adn the interaction with Gilraen feels right, the tension, the hope, the
tutoring. And that Dwim could find the symbolism, muliple layers of it, in
the standard she makes... Bravo again, Dwim. Bravo.
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Msg# 2423
Re: MEFA - Romance Ballot Posted by mirasaui@aol.com October 15, 2004 - 20:08:11 Topic ID# 2423Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the
stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2 lines of
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information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and then comment
beneath them.
Featuring Haldir
RmH3: Love by CC
A continuation of The Paths of Lorien, an all time favourite, this story
once again pairs Halidr
and Lindir; in fact, a Haldir who is jealous of anyone spending too much
time with his mate. But in the end, he is magnanimous enough to realize he must
let Lindir fly free. A sweet story that also shows the deep love between
Frodo and Sam, as the two meet again on the shores of Valinor. I thoroughly
enjoyed it.
Featuring Haldir
RmH4: Perfectly Happy by Alexcat
I have always admired Alexs writing, and she has so many good stories to
choose from, it is like visiting a library, but this one has always been one of
my favourites! Grumpy, stubborn Haldir, who cannot abide a happy
Glorfindel, learns a lesson the hard way. Chock full of one-liners and innuendo, I
find myself chuckling, if not laughing out loud each time I read it. Some
stories just stick in your mind, and for me, this is one of them. It leaves me
smiling and happy; a silly, funny, laughable, loveable story that I enjoy
reading over and over. Glorfindel has good reason for his happiness and even
Haldir cannot gainsay it - a whimsical, humorous Aesop-like fable pure delight.
Featuring Haldir
RmH5: Why? by RennWench
This was heart-wrenchingly sad, beautiful, poetic and oh so moving.
RennWench has a way with words that I can only envy. Her descriptions of grief and
the painful way our minds dwell on never again will I& is done so well.
The story is a sad lament of death, grief and love
unrequited. It could have ended dramatically after the ashes of the funeral
pyre had cooled, but it does not. Even though Haldir and his childhood
friend find happiness in the end, the paths they travel to reach that end are
heart-breaking. When RennWench says find Kleenex in the authors notes,
believe me, do not read this one without it!
Incomplete
RmI3: Elanor's Revenge by Julie & Fianna
I read very few het stories, but this one has been an exception since I read
the first chapter.
Julie and Fiannas Haldir is to die for, no wonder Elanor falls for him.
But, I find myself just
as intrigued, if not more, in the side stories behind that of the main
characters: Orophin and
Dalia, Rumil and Narwen, and above all, Tarwe and Lurien. Each chapter makes
me wish for more or holds a mystery that I cannot wait to see solved. These
two tell a wonderful, wonderful tale.
Rivendell
RmR3: To My Shining Light by Oakenshield
A story of unrequited love - Glorfindel for Elrond and poor Erestor for his
golden friend it is
sad, haunting, and beautifully written. Erestor struggles night after night
to come to terms
with his tragic past and to tell his friend of the love he holds for him.
If only he could
overcome his fear, the two might find happiness. There are two other stories
in this series, I
would love to see a third that would possibly bring the two together.
Rivendell
RmR4: Underestimated by Enismirdal
This is another story I could read over and over. Enismirdals writing is
rich in detail, poetic
and lyrical. Her characters come to life and are quite endearing. A blend
of classic romance
and mystery, the story follows Rumil in his witty, wonderful and engenious
courtship of Melpomaens younger brother Faelon, who at first will have nothing
to do with the Silvan elf.
With the help of Erestor, who has been through a similar experience with
Glorfindel, Rumil slowly changes Faelons mind. It is not just the wonderful
plot of the story that makes it so readable, but the way Enismirdal sets each
scene with stunning imagery and attention to detail. A lovely tale that I highly
recommend.
Rivendell
RmR5: Vanilla Cream by Kharessa Bloodrose
Kharessa is a weaver of words, and this tale of Elronds obsession with
Erestor is proof of that fact. Metaphors abound as Elrond compares his love with
the fine taste and texture of Vanilla. Tastefully done and very-well
written, this was sensous, sweet and mmm&good.
Rm2: Iunctum by Lasse-Lanta
The finale of the Chance Meeting series, a wonderfully, tasteful and sensual
love scene. I would still love to know whom Lasse-Lanta had in mind for the
mystery elf, sigh, but perhaps it is better to leave that to imagination.
Lovely story, lovely series.
Rm7: Spring In Imladris by CC
The Paths of Lorien is one of my all time favourite Lindir stories and I was
happy to read this,
the sequel. Orophin is often neglected in the fandom, and I am glad CC
found him a mate in
Gildor. It was also nice to read more of the exploits of the twins, as CC
writes them so well.
Rm8: Swept Away by Larian Elensar
Larian is another of my favourite writers, and this story, I believe, is one
of her best. Who
could not fall in love with Rumil and Theoden in this tale of a raging storm
that changes the
lives of two persons caught up in it. Rumil is swept down river and
separated from his brother
Haldir, only to be rescued by Theodred, prince and son of King Theoden. The
few days they spend together, alone, sees not only a blossoming friendship,
but a love that will last through the ages. The ending is sad and moving and
cannot be read without tears. A lovely story, romantic, bittersweet and
poignant; I highly recommend it.
Rm9: The Match by Erunyauve
Interesting story of Fingon, who arranges a match between Orodreth and
Miril, Noldo and Sinda. Miril is her own woman and has a delightful sense of
humour and Orodreths response to her at their meeting was comical, yet sweet. I
love how the tables were turned on Fingon when the pair truly fall for each
other. I enjoyed reading this, a nice surprise.
This category ends on October 15th at 11:59pm Central US time
RmH2: Khila Amin by Julie and Fianna
I found this fiction very well done. It was thought provoking,
intense, emotional and intriguing. I loved the interaction between
Haldir and the original female character. I felt like crying when he
called for her to "follow me". Ok, perhaps I did cry a little. And
that is what makes this story one of my all time favorites.
Featuring Legolas
RmL1: Eternally by Jennifer Lee & Ellbee
This was one of the very first Lord of the Rings Fan Fictions I ever
read. I think that was a lucky chance for me as I was able to see
excellent writing and a fantastic plot rather than the opposite.
From there I was astonished at the depth of the characters, the
emotional journey and the imagery that was wound through this
story. The creativity that these two authors displayed captured my
attention and I read through the whole fiction in one sitting. I was
enthralled. Not only do they portray Legolas as we all would like
him to be as a warrior, but they gave him realistic feelings of love
lost and then found.
Featuring Legolas
RmL7: To Have and To Hold by Lady Rheena
I started out reading this story with speculation and then became
addicted. The first person point of view makes the reader live
through all of Nessa's journeys and for me I felt it really made the
story more fun. I found this author had an amazing sense of humor
and was quite impressed that she could convey that humor throughout
her chapters. When she introduced the court ladies and then called
them the "Twitterers of Mordor," I laughed so hard I woke up my
youngest child. What I think I enjoyed the most about this story is
that the female character is on a journey and even though she won't
accept her fate, that Legolas loves her, the reader ends up hoping
that in the next chapter she will finally accept him. I recommend
this story to anyone who wants a fun and adventurous romance that is
not sappy or filled with angst.
Incomplete
RmI2: At Last by Jennifer Lee & Ellbee
This story has just begun and as its predecessor, Eternally,
captured my attention, this one has too. I think that the sadness of
battle has been written with extreme care to detail. I know that it
has to have time to build up to the climax yet I am so impatient for
the reunion of Legolas and the original female character. Begging
the author for updates might be the next step in my obsession with
this story.
Incomplete
RmI3: Elanor's Revenge by Julie & Fianna
This story intrigued me from the beginning. A friend told me about
it and so I followed her link and ended up reading until the wee
hours of the night. I became enthralled with Elanor and her plight.
I love the sexual tension they built up when they took so much time
creating the relationship between "Guardian" Haldir and his ward,
Elanor. I have sense followed all the updates, and was absolutely
thrilled when they finally became lovers. I am excited about where
they will take this story next. They have introduced new plot lines
and twists and now are featuring bits of Rumil, and this has caught
my attention. I can not wait for more.
Incomplete
RmI7: The Cursed Queen of Angmar by KhazarKhum
I was lucky I got to read this one when it was just posted and now I
have been reading it for so long. There are so many things that I
can say about this story. The writing is great. Simply put she
writes so well that there is never a moment where I think "wait
where did that come from". The characters are dynamic and vivid and
I am totally engrossed in their journey. The emotions are palatable;
the reader goes along with the characters never knowing which way
things will go from moment to moment. The plot is unique and
creative. A fresh approach to the Witch King and an original female
character is always a treat, and this author has taken incredible
steps to intrigue her readers. This story is highly recommendable. I
thoroughly enjoy reading it and can not wait for the next chapter.
Featuring Legolas
RmL2: In the Midst of Adversity by Maram68
This story is interesting and a definite new take on female
characters. I am impressed that the author is writing in her second-
language. The beginning captured my attention because it took place
in Rohan and also because the writing is so fluid. The pacing is
great and the adventurous atmosphere is very enjoyable.
Msg# 2425
Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by fourth\_moon October 15, 2004 - 21:02:00 Topic ID# 2317I read plenty and have some notes for reviews, but time to transform
them into something resembling actual sentences? Haha. Busy cleaning
apartment, see you around at Amnesty Day. I'll review the Drabbles
now to justify that I'm still on the member list.
One question: in the author sub-category, Oakenshield is only listed
as author of one drabble (could have been Sundered, I'm not sure),
but there are two: Alone and Sundered. Is that done on purpose or a
mistake?
Oh, and: Dragons, by Lindariel? I couldn't read it. Bad link.
> DramaThis drabble is all that I fear in Tolkien writing and fanfic: both
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> Official Voting Ballot
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> Drabble
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> DD1: Alone by Oakenshield
captivating and sad. Excellent writing. Every thing about it just
works for me: the way the sentence structure is repeated intensifies
it; it stresses in how many different ways Arwen made a sacrifice for
her love and needs Aragorn without appearing boring or too
repetitive. Some of the effects of Arwen's decision, like her being
alone and having lost her family, turn up in plenty of fanfics,
other's I haven't read or imagined like this before: the way the loss
of magic must have pained Arwen, or that loosing her immortality must
have brought to her the feeling of running out of time, something an
Elf hardly ever has to deal with. Both new and old aspects are made
so vivid and urgent.
The drabble also creates a sense of foreboding: While describing how
important Aragorn was to Arwen, the „he had" already indicates that
now he is gone, and with him all the protection against pain and fear
and dispair he could give to Arwen. The last sentence confirms this,
and that Arwen's reaction isn't described creates a kind of suction
to try and imagine what it must be like.
> DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by LindeleaI like the way the name "Dernhelm" is used instead of Eowyn: it gives
some kind of reality to the person she assumes, as if he was a real
person (and maybe he was, but I don't think so), given some substance
by Eowyn's longing to be somebody who can ride to war without being
sent back. That all of Dernhelm's equipment come from dead men
gives "him" a kind of creepy touch. This is enhanced by the way the
subject of being dead turns up in different ways: Aragorn on the
Paths of the Dead, and Eowyn feeling as if she was dead.
I also love Eowyn's disdain for the women's work she is expected to
do – this disdain seems to be the most alive thing about her at that
moment – and I think that line about the dogs playing with the brats
alludes to something Gandalf said about the way Eowyn watched the
dignity of the Edoras sink – wonderfully cleverly done!
> DD7: Sundered by OakenshieldAnother sad, yet beautiful drabble. The repetition of lines and
patterns as well as the way those patterns are changed make a
perfectly balanced mix of contrast and similarity. A similarly good
balance is in the way not only death but also Elrond's sacrifice are
stressed, and those sacrifices appear no less sad then death. The
last line about working for a world but never seeing it brings that
home.
> DD8: The Call by AlexcatLittle used characters are such a joy to read about, and I'm
impressed about how well the point of view of a semi-animate object
comes alive here. Interesting new twist, and I especially like the
eery line about metal and men and elves passing, in contrast to
power.
> DD9: The Silent Street by LindeleaThis drabble is fantastic in so many different ways: It centers on an
underused, but very deserving character, picks one of the most
drastic situations Beregond is going through, and manages to capture
it in the limitations of hundred word count.
I'm amazed about how perfect a job Lindelea did on showing the
torment it must have been for Beregond to fight against his comrades
and friends, wounding and even killing them, without making it feel
too soppy. Inventing a relative among his foes (at least I think that
this wasn't part of book-canon) stresses this even more, though it
wouldn't have been neccessary IMO – it's almost a bit too much for
me; the situation is tragic enough without it.
The way the different, clashing motivations and inputs are depicted
is cleverly done and works wondeful to me to make the situation come
to life: Denethor calling for Beregond to be killed, the death he
has to cause and his own horror at this, being called a traitor, and
fearing for the life of his captain. Another excellent element is the
repetition of the first line in the end: this works great to stress
how caught up in the situation Beregond is, how all his pain and
aversion neither help him out of it nor change his mind.
This is all that a drabble should be: it concentrates a situation, a
character and emotions into hundred words and makes me wish it was
much longer to read.
> DD10: The Steward and the King by MartaVery lovely, clever, expressive situation, though the tears were a
>
bit over the top for me. Both Bormorin and Thorongil/Aragorn are
sweet, and great way to show how very much Boromir grew up with the
threat of orcs and dark realms, how it has formed his life from the
beginning.
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Official Voting Ballot
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE2: Knight's Service/Later by Tanaqui
Sweet, touching, funny, and dear: this was exactly the way I always
imagined Faramir to be in private. You've also given Eowyn a
proactive role in lovemaking, which is entirely appropriate for her.
In all, a very fine setup for some very tender smut.
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE4: The Braided Heart by Thevina Finduilas
Those flashbacks with her mother knocked my socks off. What smooth
writing! This piece is more about aura than anything else. It lulls,
strokes, chuckles, and soothes. There's nothing dangerous here. And
in the Middle-earth that Eowyn has known, that in itself is pretty
magnificent
Featuring Haldir
RmH4: Perfectly Happy by Alexcat
"Lord Elrond would not spit on Thranduil if he were on fire" ... You
know, I've heard a variation of that line in deep East Texas
parlance, but it was hilarious imagining it from the mind of an elf.
In fact, Haldir's "voice" is very amusing overall. I love the dry
humour you've given him, and his progression. Very nice
characterization, which is a trick in such a short piece.
Featuring Haldir
RmH5: Why? by RennWench
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/R/RennWench/Why.htm
This line gave me the shivers: "The bedding kept your scent for
weeks." What a powerul image: simple but something anyone who has
ever had and lost can understand.
Featuring Legolas
RmL1: Eternally by Jennifer Lee & Ellbee
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1216076/1/
There are a few tropes that folks always warn against: soul-mates,
short-term amnesia, and arranged marriages are three. However, those
warnings should come with an out clause: all these things can become
magical if they're done correctly. And you two sold me completely.
Part of it is pacing: nothing in this piece felt rushed. Part of it,
of course, is characterization. Isobel is a strong character, easy
to believe and believe in. More than any of that, though, your plot
choices are impressive. You never took the easy way out, even at the
end. That's what made this story feel real and not-entirely-happy-
ending-ish.
Featuring Legolas
RmL2: In the Midst of Adversity by Maram68
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=19
It's been a long time since I read this story, but I wanted to re-
read it for this contest. Once again, as before, I'm impressed by
your adherence to Tolkien's vision, in terms of both language and
events. This whole story is so carefully a faithful retelling of the
professor's work, but with one crucial change: Cyrene. However, far
from compromising the story like so many original characters do,
Cyrene adds a new and intriguing dimension to the tale. She makes
the world larger, not smaller, and more identifiable as an alternate
history of our Earth. Amazons, after all, appeared in Homeric epics;
why, then, could they not have existed in earlier Ages? You've woven
the two mythologies together so securely that, at the end of the
story, the fabric is strong. Rather like the central romantic
relationship. Very nice work, Maram.
Featuring Legolas
RmL6: The Elf Friend's Tale by Alexcat
"Gimli felt exposed to the universe." ... How very in-character for
a dwarf. Never once in this piece did I forget the differences
between elves and dwarves, but in this piece, those differences
seemed only to complement each other. Very touching.
Featuring Legolas
RmL7: To Have and To Hold by Lady Rheena
See, the thing about this story that makes it so durned charming is
the POV character: "I wondered if kicking the prince in the shins
would count as treason." Her refreshing chatty personality had me
chuckling all the way through, making it impossible to become bored.
Plus, Malhon is adorable.
Gondor
RmG4: Speaking of Love... by Dwimordene
First the obvious thing: Yay for an original pairing. But there's
more to this piece than a pairing. The whole piece is like that
metaphorical ant and his honey: It starts sweet, winds outward on
the shell, wanders close to the edge of daylight, but comes back to
the secret honey in the end. Lovely.
Hobbits
RmHob1: A Little Night Music by Ariel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1710
Your shire is warm and wonderful and I could live a lifetime there.
In this story, you've merged sex with the Shire itself, bringing a
homey natural feeling to the encounter. And more than that, the
twist at the end is so inherently Samwise, it was nearly inevitable.
Incomplete
RmI2: At Last by Jennifer Lee & Ellbee
I sincerely hope ya'll finish this story. The beginning is already
even better than Eternally. You have a way of describing war that
makes me feel both horror and pride. Does that even make sense? I
want to cry, watching Isobel at work in the houses of healing, but I
also want to honor the heroes, of which she is one. Really gorgeous
so far, you two. Don't give up on Isobel just yet.
Incomplete
RmI7: The Cursed Queen of Angmar by KhazarKhum
Cursed Queen is one of my all-time favorite fics, which is bizarre
since it isn't even completed and I usually prefer stories that have
noticable beginnings, middles, and ends. Still, this story starts
out swinging and never lets up. From Ariashal's unfortunate marriage
history to her unpleasantly dysfunctional family, you've taken
cliches and made them into gems. Her dry acceptance of her "curse"
is almost a veiled send-up of Mary Sues, and it gives Ariashal a
clear voice right from the beginning. Throughout, characterizations
are rich and nuanced; action scenes grab the gut and pull; and then
there's the witch king himself. Wowza. Who'd've thought an invisible
dude could be so darned sexy? But he's more than that, of course.
He's magnigifent, and I'm right there with Ariashal, amazed and
impressed. The meeting and falling in love chapters were lovely, but
my favorite part so far has been the long arc in Rhudaur, with
conflict and adversity and a sweet, sweet justice. I can't tell you
how satisfying that mini-conclusion was. I'll just admit it now:
You've turned me into a witch-king fangirl. Believe me, I was the
last one expecting *that* to happen.
Poetry
RmP1: A Hole Possessed by Marta
Bizarre and oddly unsettling, but also appropriate for Lobelia. And,
yes, the sustained punny metaphor was highly amusing.
Poetry
RmP5: Love me, Urgren by Werecat
This poem is clear and uncomplicated, swimming in details and wholly
appropriate sentiment. It is, simply, and orc's voice. I can't
imagine a better representation of orcish love than the trophies the
speaker would lay at the feet of his Urgren: greased hair, pierced
flesh, elf hides, and music drummed on ghastly instruments. But it's
also sweet. In the end, orc boys aren't so different from human
boys: they all want to show their womenfolk the best of themselves,
to offer up the best gifts they can imagine, in the pursuit of love.
Were I Urgren, I'd surely be impressed.
Rivendell
RmR3: To My Shining Light by Oakenshield
To think Erestor was a tormented soul, but the depth of his agony
resonated here. The most impressive thing, though, wasn't his pain.
It was his love. I believed completely the depth of his love, mostly
because of this line: "He would have given as much for Elrond to
love Glorfindel as he would have for Glorfindel to love him." That
is not a selfish emotion. What's depicted here is something
beautiful.
Rm3: Jealous by Oakenshield
Gotta love them matchmaking twins. And Gimli was adorable.
Rm4: Lady Love an Outlaw by Chathol-Linn
Incredible. The way this adventure was paced, I just couldn't stop
reading it. The fight scenes were exquisite, the Onion Man and
healing scene so thick in the senses I swear I smelled onions. I
loved the characterisations of Lothiriel and Eomer both as poets,
and of her "elvish blood." I wasn't looking for plot holes, but I
certainly didn't find any: every action begat the next in such a
sensible way that events never felt forced or contrived. That is
masterful plotting; I am so envious of this ability. Overlying all
of the technical genius, though, were the details: how many miles
Eomer could travel in good conditions and in bad, the architecture
of Edoras, the split skirt that Lothiriel wore to ride. Those little
details made the setting come alive. This was masterful storytelling
from beginning to end. Thank you so much for the wild ride.
Rm10: The Yellow Bird by CinnamonGrrl
This story has a stately grace and sense of rules that reminds me
strongly of 19th c. romance. Mischief is soft and refined; love is
thick and sweet. It's the kind of story a girl curls up with alone
and reads with a sigh, savoring the happy ending like a dessert. I
enjoyed the interweaving romances and the distinct characters, and
the patience of Emmelin, letting her love appear in subtle gifts
year after year, struck me as particularly elvish.
Msg# 2429
Trouble with my computer... Posted by ainaechoiriel October 15, 2004 - 23:36:07 Topic ID# 2429mail (all the ones relevent to this group). I'm rebooting it.
Hopefully, it will be able to connect to the internet when it's
rebooted. Otherwise, I won't be able to get another Drama ballot in
on time. Yes, another one. And yet I still have so many more I want
to read.... Thank goodness for Amnesty Day! Though it will still be a
crunch. I know there are some I want to read that I just won't have
time to get to.
--Ainaechoiriel
trying hard to get back online.
Msg# 2430
Re: MEFA Ballot - Drama Posted by mirasaui@aol.com October 15, 2004 - 23:36:14 Topic ID# 2430Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting
on. For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep
the top 2 lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title
by Author) and then comment beneath them.
Gap-filler
DG1: A Silence Covered in Stone by Zimraphel
Zimraphel weaves a gruesome and horrid tale, from the burned corpses in
Mirkwood, to the terrible fate of Eanur. Her Thranduil and Celeborn
are written extremely well, and I found their conversation believable
and very much in character. One word describes this... Chilling.
LOTR
DL4: Doom of Man by Alexcat
Nicely written story of the grief Elrond endured and the folly of
Isildur. Alex can take any subject and make it interesting.
LOTR
DL5: Final Flight by Trinity Helix
Heart-rending story of Halidrs death at Helms Deep and the hope that
Estel brings to Middle-earth and Men.
Post-WOTR
DPoW2: Adamo Invenio Discovery of Love by Lasse-Lanta
The conclusion of the mystery tale and an end to lonliness for two
elven souls in a mortal world a very lovely and sweet series.
Post-WOTR
DPoW4: Chance Meetings by Lasse-Lanta
I loved the descriptions of the two mystery characters, an elf and a
mortal with enough elven blood to feel an unusual attraction to the
other. Lovely tale set in modern days, mystical and intriguing.
Post-WOTR
DPoW6: Dance With Desire by Lasse-Lanta
More of the mystery tale, complete with a promise.
Post-WOTR
DPoW7: Fate, Fatum Or Perhaps Fari by Lasse-Lanta
The elf, hurt and crumpled on the pavement, and the female, strangely
protective of him, knowing he is different but with no understanding
how or why. I love reading more of this highly intriguing series.
Post-WOTR
DPoW13: Sorrow Profound by Alexcat
Elrond faces such loss in LOTR and Alex writes him oh so well.
Celebrian, Arwen, Elladan and Elrohir, Gil-galad, Elessar, all he loved
gone from his life, and he left with just their memory. Alex makes
us feel his despair and sorrow in this sad and poignant tale.
Post-WOTR
DPoW14: Stolen Moment by Lasse-Lanta
Another chance meeting, a smile, the brush of a fingertip in long hair
what a wonderful mystery Lasse-Lanta weaves in this intriguing
series!
Post-WOTR
DPoW16: Sunset by Khylea
Sad and poignant tale of Legolas and Aragorns visit to Haldirs grave.
Helms Deep stories are always tearful and this one is no exception.
Khylea gives honour to Haldir, a warrior who put others freedom before
his own life, as his friends honour one of his his last requests.
Post-WOTR
DPoW19: The Mantle Of Power by Marnie
I do so love Glorfindel and Marnie portrays him so well. Elrond has
sailed, and Glorfindel, faced once again with grasping reigns of power,
battles his desire and cedes the battle of wills to Celeborn, allowing
him rule over Imladris. Irony comes in play when he learns Celeborn
had assure his position beforehand, obtaining permission from the
absent Lords Elladan and Elrohir. A lovely story, made all the more so
by Marnies eye for detail.
Post-WOTR
DPoW20: Trees of Remembrance by jenolas
A very tender story of the friendship formed between those of the
fellowship. How lovely it was represented by a glade of trees planted
by Legolas as a remembrance of such bond. And how fitting that
Eldarion finds the same solace and peace long after his friends and
parents have left Middle-earth. He learns that withdrawal is not
always the answer to sorrow. Lovely story.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW1: A Family Trait by Marnie
As a metal-smith, I truly liked this story of the twins lesson in
jewellery making. But what surprises were in store! First, the smith
is a lady, none other than Celebrian. Second, she and Celeborn worry
over the interest the twins take in the craft which was the bane of
their forefathers, Feanor and Celebrimbor. Luckily, the young ones
prefer the art of swordmaking, and all ends happily.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW2: All These Wore Wings by fileg
This was a truly delightful story of Boromir and Faramir. I loved the
imagery of the boats and the tales of valour, drawn from a young boys
perspective, also, the visions of the future that Farmir sees for him
and Boromir. Nicely written!
Pre-WOTR
DPrW4: E cared haniant tîn mîl by PuterPatty
I love Nickel Creek and the Hand Song, but loved this story by Puter
Patty even more. She can definitely write young ones, and her
characterization of young Legolas, Thranduil and his wife are
marvellous. Nothing is so sweet as a fathers memories of his child,
and Thranduil is portrayed as a doting and caring father. We feel his
sadness as he reads Legolas letter, also his pride in his son. A
beautiful story.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW5: Games of Innocence by Cirdan
Very unusual story with the twins play acting moments of history.
Cirdan writes the twins well, and the ending, with the boys playing
Elrond/Elros was shocking and intense.
Romance
DR6: In The Silence Of Our Hearts by Eresse
A lovely tale of romance between Glorfindel and Erestor, interrupted by
miscommunication and stubborn pride, and only resolved by the
persistence of Elronds children. As usual, Eresses care for detail
and wondrous characterization make this quite an enjoyable read.
Romance
DR10: The Paths of Lorien by CC
This story and Soledads Innocence were one of the first I read about
the elf, Lindir. Both made such an impression that Lindir has remained
one of my favourite elves. CC weaves a beautiful tale of romance
between Haldir and the minstrel, the marchwarden scarred from the
tragic death of an over zealous friend, and Lindir from the gruesome
deaths of his parents.
The story is one that cannot be put aside once started. The plot
builds as Haldir blatantly ignores the song of his soul mate, dooming
Lindir to suffer the grief and fading of a broken heart. It is almost
too late, when Haldir realizes his folly, but he does and the ending is
happy. This is a classic romance, a wonderful story, one of my all time
favourites.
D4: Into the West by Alexcat
A beautiful and poignant story based on the title song from the ROTK
movie. We see and feel Celeborns grief as he spends his last night
with Galadriel then watches her leave the shores of Middle-earth
forever. So sad, knowing that he will stay to see the ones they both
love fade and die. Keep the Kleenex by your side, as this one will make
you cry.
D5: Magpies and Rhymes by Acacea
A Lovely story of Faramir and his glimpse of magpies as they cry
outside the window, reminding him of a childhood rhyme that he and his
brother learned long ago. Interesting use of a Scottish folktale,
where the magpie is a symbol of foretelling, and how chilling, when a
single bird remains as he and Denethor hear the distant sound of
Boromirs horn.
D6: Motherless by Isabeau of Greenlea
The detail and characterization in the story is wonderful. Anyone who
has experienced the death of a loved one will recognize his or her self
in at least one of the characters, as they grieve for their fallen lady
mother/wife. The part I especially liked was the comparison of
Imrahils sons and nephews to black swans, also the way the boys
comfort their younger sister. The image of the shiny people place was
beautiful and so was the end, where Nimriens spirit gazes one last
time on those she loved.
D7: Quiet by Archet
Such a sad and moving story of Faramirs remembrances of his brother.
Archet asks the questions we all do when someone we love is taken from
us, the biggest one being why? I especially liked the two ending
lines, where Faramir states that he misses his brother. Very well
done.
D8: Standards by Dwimordene
Dwimordene has such a poetic, lyrical way with words. This story of
Arwens love for Aragorn and her uneasy relationship with Gilraen is
very moving. We see Arwens doubts, but also her strengths, as she
weaves the standard that will one day be her loves burial shroud. She
makes her choice to learn the ways of Aragorns people without
forgetting her heritage, despite the disapproval of those she loves.
Lovely story, I truly enjoyed it.
D9: Suffering Unending by Zam Kenobi
An unusual story, in thaht Faramir commits suicide and we see his
brothers pain and the pain of the people of Gondor over such a loss.
AU, most certainly, but nicely written.
D15: To Sing of War by Avon
A dark tale where Thranduil speaks of the horrors of the War of the
Last Alliance. I thought it beautifully written, and especially loved
the imagery of the trees as they whispered, Where are the others?
How could Thhranduil feel any less sorrowful and bitter as he returned
with so few from a battle that dod not accomplish all that it should.
D16: Unrequited: Gilraen by CinnamonGrrl
This was an unusual story with Gilraen falling for Lord Elrond shortly
after the death of her husband. I thought it well-written and could
feel the embarrassment and anguish of Gilraen as Elrond rejected her
advances. The characterization of Elrond was also excellent.
D17: Whispers by Ellbee
I truly enjoyed reading this story. Ellbee writes well the power and
seductiveness of the One Ring. But, I was extremely surprised by the
ending. All through the story I envisioned Boromir as the one tormented
by voices in his head. That it was Elessar, was shocking.
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Msg# 2431
Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 15, 2004 - 23:41:43 Topic ID# 2317From: fourth_moon [mailto:new_moon@gmx.net]
Sent: Friday, October 15, 2004 9:02 PM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot
>One question: in the author sub-category, Oakenshield is only listed asauthor of one drabble (could have been Sundered, I'm not sure), but there
are two: Alone and Sundered. Is that done on purpose or a mistake?
That's on purpose. Only one nomination per author per category. So if an
author wrote 5 stories and they're all in the same category/subcategory,
there's still only one nomination.
Oh, but if under Oakensheild's name has only one drabble listed, that is a
mistake. But it's just a little one. The titles are there just to job
memories so you can associate authors with stories you've read.
>Oh, and: Dragons, by Lindariel? I couldn't read it. Bad link.Lindoriel, I've heard, has removed her stories from the internet. They were
not taken out of the awards, however, because some members may already have
read them and are thus prepared to comment.
--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2432
Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 15, 2004 - 23:57:57 Topic ID# 2317this one, but one story.
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Subject: [MEFAwards] Drama--Official Voting Ballot
Drama
Official Voting Ballot
D15: To Sing of War by Avon
I had read this one before, but it is worthy of rereading. It captures
Thranduil very well, what he must have gone through. I, too, liked the
imagery of the trees asking where the others were, and the answer: "There
are no rest." Beautiful, tragic, bloody, poignant. War, indeed.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
Drabble
DDA1: Alexcat
Alexcat did a good job of capturing the Ring's POV. The drabble format
worked well for it, I think.
Drabble
DDA2: Lindelea
Lindelea can really do a lot in such a short format. She puts a feeling
into her drabbles, just one, and fills it out.
Drabble
DDA6: Oakenshield
Oakenshield picked up on a lesser-known character and in just 200 words,
helped us see why he made his choice and how it might have felt to do so.
Poetry
DPA2: Chathol-linn
Chathol-linn has a gift for poetry. I would envy here, but my first love is
in stories, though I have been inspired with poems now and then. I do like
the rhyming ones best, but am astounded at times how easy it seems she came
by those rhymes. Easy in reading, of course, they may have been hard in the
writing. The result doesn't show the struggle, just a nicely polished
result.
DA2: Adara\BoromirFan (Carol Kyser)
Adara took a character we barely got to see in the books and also the films
and gave him some life. Or death. Either way, she did a good job with that,
not letting it go so far as sappiness, but getting the feelings just right.
DA9: Avon
Avon tried something I don't think I'd be brave enough to try, though now it
intrigues me to may be give it a go: a story with only one sense. It
constricts the writer, but also the reader. I felt blind reading her story
and I wonder if I could make a reader feel deaf.... And To Sing of War?
Beautifully done, poetic and yet showing the horrors of war as one being
might have witnessed it. Thranduil. Well done.
DA14: Cori Lannam
Cori does a good job of characterization for Denethor before the palantir
drove him to madness. She portray's his sons well, too.
DA17: Dwimordene
Dwimordene has a wonderful grasp of the Steward's family characterizations,
and she really knows how to tell a tale well. Very well. I can't help but
think her philosophy education flavors her writing and syntax. And in a
good way. She can hold the drama throughout, make you laugh or cry when
necessary and let you really feel like you know those characters. She
brings us closer, in most cases, than Tolkien did, as he told his story from
more of a distance. Dwim brings us right it so that we can see the dust on
the fireplace mantle. And she's not limited to the Stewards's family. I
know from other stories she can write Legolas and Elves well, and here she
wrote Arwen better perhaps than I've ever seen her written before. Even for
Tolkien. He didn't write much of her. Dwim filled her out, put flesh on
her bones, gave her a soul, distinctly Elven yet mortal by decision.
DA21: ErinRua
ErinRua did a wonderful job with Ashes, East Winds, and Hope that Rises. And
just where did she get that title, I wonder. I love it. Her
characterizations were wonderful, she stuck very close to the book and moved
the plot along at a good pace, not to slow and not too fast. And
wonderfully Tolkienesque, too!
DA24: Gonzai
Gonzai is a wonderful artist and a great writer. She really has a grasp for
characters and really cares to get them right. She puts her passion into
her stories and her love for the Hobbits shows. I've known her since before
she wrote her first fanfic (I think) and she does a wonderful job. And
really, you should see her artwork!
DA27: Ithilien
Ithilien wrote the stories that got me hooked. On WIPs. You evil author,
you! Fortunately, or unfortunately--depends how you look at it--I am behind
enough in completed stories that I don't have to start reading anymore WIPs!
But she was definitely worth the anxiety waiting for her next chapter to be
posted. Evil, evil author!
DA28: JastaElf
Jasta is another of the authors that earned a metaphorical review from me.
She writes antique jewelry. Don't ask me how my mind comes up with these.
It just does. And to my mind, that's really the best way to describe her
writing. She's gripping, both in her lighter stories, and her very dark
ones. Very dark. She has a lovely style, very descriptive and it gets into
the hearts of the characters. And her original characters are some of the
most vividly drawn OC's in LOTR fanfic, I think. Saeros, is especially
wonderful.
DA37: M. N. Theis
Maggie has a masterful talent as a storyteller, and a story dreamer. It's
one thing to tell a tale and another to create it and tell it. I like to
think of myself as someone who has well-tortured her characters from time to
time, but Maggie goes to lengths I'm not sure I could even dream of. I
don't think I can think of any other author who can so lengthily drag out
the most torturous angst out of a story, and spread it around to all the
characters. I nearly complained that it should be illegal to carry a reader
on so, dragging out the torment. I mean, for heaven's sake, I was reading in
my car! While driving 60 mph! Then I remembered my own advice authors:
Don't be afraid to be evil. Maggie, my dear, you are truly, truly evil!
DA38: M. Sebasky
M. Sebesky portrayed Gandalf very well, not as a two-dimensional demi-god,
but as a person, wizard though he may be, with cares and worries and
regrets. Beautifully done.
DA45: Pervinca
Pervinca caught hold of Legolas's characterization very well, and how he
would perceive Gimli, too. And the Hobbits. She looked at mortality through
an immortal's eye and showed how he adapted. Good job!
DA46: PuterPatty
PuterPatty took a beautiful song and wrote a story to match. I'm not usually
one for songfic, but this one had the song at the end. Much better than
sprinkled throughout. She didn't let the song distract from the story.
Instead she wrote the story to fit the song.
DA47: runningscared
I do love a good novel, but sometimes it's the short stories that amaze me.
They are different animals, one no better than the other. A short story, in
the hands of a gifted author can touch the reader in so short a span of
pages. Runningscared is one such author. Well done!
DA48: Shadow975
I don't think I've read many stories by Shadow975, but every time I read one
of hers, I am touched or moved in some way. She writes low-key but poignant
and brings us into the characters in a wonderful way.
DA54: Zam Kenobi
Zam did a wonderful job portraying the sorrow that could lead to suicide and
the sorrow that follows it. It may be AU but it is still wonderfully
written.
This category ends October 15th at 11:59pm Central US time.
--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2433
Crossovers--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 16, 2004 - 0:00:34 Topic ID# 2433Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top
line of the header information (ex. code: Title by Author) and then comment
beneath them.
C1: A Rift in the Continuum by Aralanthiriel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/787762/1/
Rating: PG-13 violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Lord of the Rings/X-files Crossover. What happens when a simple
conjuring spell goes wrong, and Melkor is called up along with Legolas? Can
Mulder and Scully save the plot continuum, or is it already too late?
C2: Between the Shadow and the Soul: The Gift of Death by CinnamonGrrl
URL: http://cinnamongrrl.popullus.net/half-full/
Rating: PG-13 Violence, Softcore smut
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Yes, another
Buffy-jumps-into-the-portal-and-ends-up-in-Middle-Earth fic but give it a
shot, eh? This one's different.
C3: Between the Shadow and the Soul: Without (Complete) by CinnamonGrrl
URL: http://cinnamongrrl.popullus.net/half-full/
Rating: R Softcore smut
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sequel to TGoD. Epic. Magical love, mystical portals dropping
modern chicks into Middle-Earth. Haldir gets what's coming to him, but
there's always a catch.
C4: Kings of the Sea by Eledhwen
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1690803/1/
Rating: PG Mild Violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Black Pearl is caught by a strange storm; meanwhile, Aragorn is
pursuing the Corsairs of Umbar. Two worlds collide.
C5: Spirits of the House by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1623717/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The old year ends, Boromir has not returned, and Denethor
contemplates mortality. (LOTR/A Christmas Carole)
C6: Stars in the River by Murasaki99
URL: http://www.sugarquill.net/read.php?storyid=1121&chapno=1
Rating: PG-13 Violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What does an unemployed Nazgul want to do with his (un)life?
Severus Snape would really like to find out before Lord Voldemort can
recruit him.
C7: The Corsair Papers by Fileg & Flick
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?
STID=2999&NGID=98
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Fileg and Flick present a bit of Fourth Age Fantasy Froth for the
Pirate Challenge. If Gilbert and Sullivan had thought of Middle Earth..
C8: There and Back Again: The Fellowship Goes to Stalag 13 by San Antonio
Rose
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/596681/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A funny thing happened on the way through the mines, and WWII will
never be the same.... Hogan's Heroes/Lord of the Rings/Newsies crossover.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
CA1: Altariel
Spirits of the House
CA2: Aralanthiriel
A Rift in the Continuum
CA3: CinnamonGrrl
Between the Shadow and the Soul: The Gift of Death, Between the Shadow and
the Soul: Without (Complete)
CA4: Eledhwen
Kings of the Sea
CA5: Fileg & Flick
The Corsair Papers
CA6: Murasaki99
Stars in the River
CA8: San Antonio Rose
There and Back Again: The Fellowship Goes to Stalag 13
This category ends on October 25th at 11:59pm, Central US time.
--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2434
The Silmarillion--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 16, 2004 - 0:00:47 Topic ID# 2434Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2
lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and
then comment beneath them.
First Age
S1-1: A Brush with Destiny by Coriel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=690
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Two young Elves cross paths at Sirion who will later have much to
do with each other.
First Age
S1-2: As Little Might Be Thought by Deborah Judge
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/666649 /1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The development of the relationship between Maglor and his
foster-sons Elrond and Elros, from the sack of Sirion to the loss of the
Silmarils.
First Age
S1-3: Brucia la terra mia by Moralanqua
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=249
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Aegnor and Angrod during the last days as Dagor Bragollach erupts
into Ard Galen.
First Age
S1-4: Dark Forge by Ithilwen
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/724460/1/
Rating: PG-13 Disturbing Images
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Maeglin's life up to the Fall of Gondolin.
First Age
S1-5: Driven By Fire by Starlight10
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/939846/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In Valinor, at the feet of the Elven lord, the grief was too strong
to be put into words; but, whose fate was indeed doomed?
First Age
S1-6: Finrod's Oath by Jmac
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=52
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A short fic about the last hours of Finrod's life as he sits within
the dungeons of Tol-in-Gaurhoth with Beren.
First Age
S1-7: Naming the Stones by Deborah Judge
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/616249/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Elrond remembers the First Age, the Silmarils, and the guilt of his
people. Sequel to 'When I am Wise.'
First Age
S1-8: Pause by Sphinx
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1575&cid=6551
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: On the eve of his departure, Tuor reflects on what he must take
with him, and what he must leave behind.
First Age
S1-9: Red Dawn, Golden Flower by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=90
Rating: PG Character Death
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Glorfindel leads the refugees from a burning Gondolin and faces a
foe that he cannot overcome.
First Age
S1-10: Slouching Toward Gondolin by Fileg
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=260
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Riding to the siege of Gondolin in the belly of an iron beast - a
moment in the mind of a first-age orc.
First Age
S1-11: Steadfast by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1455502/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Cast up on the shores of Nevrast, Voronwe ponders his fate.
First Age
S1-12: When I Am Wise by Deborah Judge
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/609513/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: At the end of the First Age, Elrond and Elros must choose between
mortality and immortality.
First Age
S1-13: White Wing by Cirdan
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1386098/1/
Rating: PG13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Tuor tells his foster-father what he would call his house, if ever
he had one.
Incomplete
SI-1: A Veiled Light by Andreth
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=440
Rating: R some sex scenes
Romance Partners: Ilmare/Elrond/Sauron/Ereinion
Summary: A Maia is sent to Middle-earth in the Second Age and must learn to
deal with the shortcomings of a mortal body.
Incomplete
SI-2: Beneath the Light by Mouse
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=110
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Maeglin in Gondlin.
Incomplete
SI-3: Fated by Nimrodel Jen
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/N/NimrodelJen/Fated1.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Amroth/Nimrodel
Summary: One version of the story of Amroth and Nimrodel.
Incomplete
SI-4: The Silmarillion in Thirty Pages or Less by Bitten Buggy
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=530
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A summarization of Tolkien's The Silmarillion.
Incomplete
SI-5: We Were Young Once by Coriel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1750
Rating: PG some references to violence, but nothing too graphic
Romance Partners: Thranduil & Lindoriel (his future wife)
Summary: After the fall of both Doriath and Sirion, Thranduil and his father
Oropher set out to begin a new era of their lives.
Romance
SR1: Blood and Smoke by Dargelos
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=592
Rating: R Mature Sexuality
Romance Partners: Elrond/Isildur
Summary: How alike, Men and Elves. How different.'
Romance
SR2: Fell Fire by Finch
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/713372/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Aegnor and Andreth
Summary: The sad love story of Aegnor, brother of Finrod, and the mortal
woman Andreth.
Romance
SR3: Of Gold and Wood by Ladyperedhel
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=622
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: Finrod/Amarie
Summary: Finrod reveals his love to Amarie.
Romance
SR4: Taming the Wildflower by Sulriel
URL: http://www.theoriginalseries.com/wildflower.htm
Rating: PG-13 Non-Explicit Romance
Romance Partners: Maedhros/OFC
Summary: This story focuses on the relationship of Maedhros and a Lady of
the House of Elwe from when they meet until their deaths before the end of
the First Age.
Romance
SR5: The Lost Tale of Dimarion and Vanyul by Gwathrenethir Nirethir (Me-Elf)
URL: http://www.tolkienonline.com/docs/11182.html
Rating: PG Mild Violence, Some Kissing (HET)
Romance Partners: M/F
Summary: Vanyul has spent much of her life laughing and playing in a river
with her friend Ulmo. When he is absent and a captive of Morgoth named
Dimarion enters her life, she is captured. Now, Ulmo must determine how to
save them both.
Romance
SR6: The Unforgettable Fire by Ithilwen
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/871577/1/
Rating: R Sex Scenes
Romance Partners: Caranthir/Haleth
Summary: The ill-fated love story of Caranthir, and the mortal woman Haleth.
Second Age
S2-1: A Last Reckoning by Nol
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3661
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Ereinion Gil-galad remembers the lessons of his father, and
challenges the Enemy to a final combat above Dagorlad. Based on a verse by
Herbert Read.
Second Age
S2-2: It's In His Eyes by Larien Elensar
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/L/LarianElensar/ItsInHisEyes.htm
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Elros and Elrond have not made their choice yet. Elros chose
mortality. Maybe Celebrimbor was part of the reason.
Second Age
S2-3: Mortal Shores by Vorondis
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=259&SPOrdinal=1
Rating: PG-13 N/A
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Gil-galad gets some help from Numenor against Sauron. But what is
the price?
Second Age
S2-4: Oath Renewed by Inglor
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=906
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: How did Elendil acquire a 3000 year old sword? This may also
explain Galadriel's regard for Aragorn.
Second Age
S2-5: Seashell by Nol
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1880
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Elros, on the eve of his departure to Numenor, seeks out his foster
father on the eastern shore. Of the madness of Maglor. Gapfiller, possibly
AU
S1: Cuivie by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1813532/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In the twilight before the Sun and Moon, an Ent awakens to the
presence of two Elves.
S2: Eloquent Remembrance by Sphinx
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1308&cid=5970
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: On his return to Valinor, Celeborn faces his illustrious
father-in-law Finarfin, High King of the Noldor in Aman. Much conversation
ensues. Featuring Celeborn, Finarfin, and a cameo by a much loved Peredhil
lord and his lady.
S3: Gold Like Tears by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=408
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Spanning three Ages, the story of an ill-starred golden bead as it
passes from one hand to the next.
S4: If Women had Ruled Middle Earth by Mouse
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=39
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: From Nerdanel to Arwen, they're all there: the Halls of Mandos
Sewing Circle. And they've got a few opinions on the actions of their male
counterparts.
S5: In the Seventh Age by Deborah Judge
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/755564/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Epilogue to 'Naming the Stones' and 'As Little Might Be Thought'.
The final fate of Maglor son of Feanor.
S6: Not for Pride Alone by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=453
Rating: PG-13 Some Violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: At Fornost, Glorfindel and Earnur of Gondor face the Witch King of
Angmar.
S7: Song of the Waters by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1441393/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In the age of the Trees, the Teleri leave the shores of Cuivienen,
and a young Cirdan sees the Sea for the first time.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
SA1: Andreth
A Veiled Light
SA2: Bitten Buggy
The Silmarillion in Thirty Pages or Less
SA3: Cirdan
White Wing
SA4: Coriel
A Brush with Destiny, We Were Young Once
SA5: Dargelos
Blood and Smoke
SA6: Deborah Judge
As Little Might Be Thought, Naming the Stones, When I Am Wise, In the
Seventh Age
SA7: Fileg
Slouching Toward Gondolin
SA8: Finch
Fell Fire
SA9: Gwathrenethir Nirethir (Me-Elf)
The Lost Tale of Dimarion and Vanyul
SA10: Inglor
Oath Renewed
SA11: Ithilwen
Dark Forge, The Unforgettable Fire
SA12: Jmac
Finrod's Oath
SA13: Ladyperedhel
Of Gold and Wood
SA14: Larien Elensar
It's In His Eyes
SA15: Moralanqua
Brucia la terra mia
SA16: Mouse
Beneath the Light, If Women had Ruled Middle Earth
SA17: Nimrodel Jen
Fated
SA18: Nol
A Last Reckoning, Seashell,
SA19: Sphinx
Pause, Eloquent Remembrance
SA20: Starlight10
Driven By Fire
SA21: Sulriel
Taming the Wildflower
SA22: Viv
Red Dawn, Golden Flower
SA23: Vorondis
Mortal Shores
SA24: Zimraphel
Steadfast, Cuivie, Gold Like Tears, Not for Pride Alone, Song of the Waters
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Re: Crossovers--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 16, 2004 - 2:11:48 Topic ID# 2433Official Voting Ballot
Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
C4: Kings of the Sea by Eledhwen
Quite entertaining, too bad that Will Turner wasn't on board! That could have
added a whole new level of confusion!
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Msg# 2438
Re: The Silmarillion--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 16, 2004 - 2:12:43 Topic ID# 2434Official Voting Ballot
Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
First Age
S1-2: As Little Might Be Thought by Deborah Judge
Now this was a new view, usually it's Maedhros who's the royal bastard. The
few fics I've read usually have Maedhros as the driving force and Maglor sort
of being led along unwillingly. This was definitely different.
First Age
S1-3: Brucia la terra mia by Moralanqua
Nice view of the brothers, don't read much about Aegnor or Angrod and your
descriptions of their deaths was touching without being overly emotional. One
small note-a few typos and it's orcs, not orc's and Balrogs, not balrog's for
plurals.
First Age
S1-4: Dark Forge by Ithilwen
Such a doomed life, it's no wonder Maeglin turned out as he did, I don't think
he really had a chance not to be tainted.
First Age
S1-5: Driven By Fire by Starlight10
I can't even imagine how Finarfin...or any of his brothers or nephews felt,
having to make the horrible choices they made, or the sort of hopeless fates
they followed. Nice peek into his struggle.
First Age
S1-6: Finrod's Oath by Jmac
I'm not that familiar with Finrod, but through your eyes I saw his desperation
and regrets, I guess, the way I picture so many of the Noldor from the First
Age. Well done.
First Age
S1-7: Naming the Stones by Deborah Judge
I admit I had trouble wrapping my mind around Elrond and Elros not being twins,
and Elros having silver hair, it fit the story well. Interesting view of
Elrond, and the hate. I often wondered how he survived without pain and hate
eating him up inside. Well done.
First Age
S1-8: Pause by Sphinx
Lots of stories about Elrond and Elros being left behind, but not many on how
their parents and grandparents felt, having to leave them. Nice read.
First Age
S1-10: Slouching Toward Gondolin by Fileg
Nicely done. I especially liked the last lines about the orcs being forged in
fury. That explains a lot of their hate too.
First Age
S1-12: When I Am Wise by Deborah Judge
Yes, I love the thought that Elros asked Elrond to teach his children. Not that
Elrond would have done otherwise, I'm sure, but it's still a touching moment.
First Age
S1-13: White Wing by Cirdan
Batman! *hee* How wonderfully insightful of Tuor to choose White Wing. Well
done.
Incomplete
SI-2: Beneath the Light by Mouse
I confess, had I noticed that this had not been updated in over 2 years, I
never would have started it. I'm sorry now that I did read it, because I fear
that it will never be finished, and that's too bad, because it's very difficult
to stop reading once you start. I was totally involved from the first
paragraph and you never once lost my full attention. The Fall of Gondolin is
one of my favorites and this story really helps flesh it out and give Maeglin a
personality beyond being evil. Please, please, please consider finishing it?
Incomplete
SI-3: Fated by Nimrodel Jen
I don't know much about Nimrodel and Amroth, so thanks for telling this story.
However, my modern sensibilities tell me that Amroth, by following her, is
being rather silly. Of course, that's why we need stories like this; because
our real lives are not 'silly' enough!
Romance
SR1: Blood and Smoke by Dargelos
I've never pictured Elrond and Isildur together, but it does fit. And of
course, how easy to see the future...
Romance
SR2: Fell Fire by Finch
I loved the emotions and thoughts behind each of their stories. Aegnor's story
is so sad, it's too bad he couldn't have stayed with Andreth for a little
longer. Well done.
Romance
SR3: Of Gold and Wood by Ladyperedhel
Oh, this made Finrod seem more 'human' and comfortable. I usually see him as
someone cold and aloof. Nicely done.
Romance
SR6: The Unforgettable Fire by Ithilwen
Great perspective, showing us Caranthir's thoughts and feelings. The stories
of Feanor's sons are so sad it's good to read that for a little while at least,
there was some happiness for one of them. Well done.
Second Age
S2-1: A Last Reckoning by Nol
I really liked this line "But something--a little more space within the circle
of light against the darkness." Great image, you can feel Gil-Galad's
desperation. well done.
Second Age
S2-3: Mortal Shores by Vorondis
I was going to read the first five or so chapters and see if I wanted to
continue, and you had me in the first two paragraphs. I love the way you've
fleshed out this whole era. I was trying to write comments after every chapter,
but I got so caught up in what was going on, I gave up. I don't often sit down
and read fan fiction (especially the longer pieces) in one go, but that's
exactly what I'm doing now, I resent every little interruption that takes me
back out of the story! I've always loved Gil-Galad, thank you for making him
accessible, and more 'known.' And of course, Celebrian would love him! I'm
somewhat surprised I haven't seen more of that in the fandom. Tarion's desire
to use Narya, to heal himself has me somewhat concerned at this point, I can
only see that leading to disaster, I think. (But I'm barely 1/3 of the way
through too...) Nice little foreshadowing thing there where Tarion draws
Glorfindel, at about the same time he's being captured. I still have trouble
thinking of a young Gildor, every other story I've read has had an older, wiser
Gildor, but I guess he had to get that wisdom from somewhere.
Wow, never would have guessed Tarion's secret. And the fact that 'common'
people knew about the power of the Elven rings, that had to be scary to
Gil-galad and Galadriel when Glorfindel told them. I feel terrible that I'm
not writing more feedback, but I'm too busy reading! I can't put this story
down for any length of time, I'm trapped! *grin* Ooh, what is Gildor's game?
I never thought about it much but I wonder how it was for him, being
(supposedly) actually closer to the throne than Gil-Galad. I guess he might
want to needle him a bit to see how he reacts, though I can't see how creating
that type of divisive situation, even briefly, helps the elves.
Ah, okay, I needed to read through the whole thing to see what Gildor was up
to. Gildor wasn't even sure, was he? *grin* Lots of great story telling here.
I liked getting to know Beregar and Tarion. And this was a new Gildor for me
as well. And Celebrian, not a weakling who needed to be avenged, like you
usually see. You even made Galadriel powerful without castrating the men around
her. Excellent. I saw one little thing that threw me, very near the end.
Galadriel is talking about not giving up the ring of sapphire. I assume you
meant ring of adament?
All in all, a thoroughly captivating, well told story. It will be difficult to
think of this period without allowing your vision of it in...
Second Age
S2-4: Oath Renewed by Inglor
I have to admit, it grated to have Gildor called a coward, but I got over it
after finishing the story. Great way to connect the line of elves and men, and
of course, the sword that had the power to take the ring from Sauron, but was
still touched by the curse of the Noldor, in that Isildur didn't finish the
job.
Second Age
S2-5: Seashell by Nol
You know, you just have to wonder if Elrond and Elros had any happy memories to
overcome all the sad ones. It amazes me that either of them could go on and
keep striving. I don't know if I like the idea that Elros talked to Maglor
before he left...although I guess it would have given him some sort of closure,
which he'd been denied otherwise.
S2: Eloquent Remembrance by Sphinx
oh, I loved your Celeborn! Underestimated again by the light elves...and able
to hold his ground, and sort of win. Well done.
S4: If Women had Ruled Middle Earth by Mouse
Oh! I can so see that. And yes! Poor Goldberry! I always skip that part in
the book...*blush*
S5: In the Seventh Age by Deborah Judge
Oooh, yes! What a bittersweet ending for Maglor. I like the idea that maybe he
learned in the end, and was forgiven.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the
story, here):
SA17: Nimrodel Jen
Fated
Nimrodel Jen is a new name to me, but she obviously has a good grasp on Tolkien
and where he left gaps for fan fiction authors space to dabble. She has a nice,
easy to read style and I hope to see more from her soon.
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Msg# 2439
Crossovers--Official Voting Ballot Posted by sulriel October 16, 2004 - 15:59:41 Topic ID# 2433C8: There and Back Again: The Fellowship Goes to Stalag 13 by San
Antonio Rose
A fun and unusual crossover. It brings back fond memories of one of
my favorite old shows.
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Msg# 2448
Re: Crossovers--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 18, 2004 - 13:24:13 Topic ID# 2433quiet!
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Crossover
Official Voting Ballot
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STORIES
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>>C4: Kings of the Sea by EledhwenShort, fun crossover that stays light enough to avoid most of the
entanglements and problems that you find with other crossovers. If youýll
pardon the pun, I was reminded of the saying ýtwo ships passing in the
night,ý except that the two ships met briefly in this story and then
continued on. Quick encounter that is soon over, but is fun for the novelty
and the character interaction.
>>C5: Spirits of the House by AltarielLotR meets Dickens! I might have hesitated in reading this had the author
been anyone other than Altariel. But with Altariel, I can rest confident in
the knowledge that Denethor and Faramir are in good hands. And I was right.
I loved the characterizations in this, especially the characterization of
Denethor. Even in his despair and his gloom, he is so utterly rational and
calm. His reasoning about denying supplies to the Rangers in Ithilien makes
a hopeless, prudent kind of sense, though like Faramir, I wished he would
have said otherwise. Those chosen to visit Denethor on the eve of this Yule
were great, particularly the last figure of Finduilas. Faramirýs return and
confusion over Denethorýs change of heart was written well, and as for
Denethor himself, heýs still Denethor, but heýs a Denethor as he might have
been had the palantýr not convinced him of defeat. Itýs a great AU and I
find myself wishing it had been included in Tolkienýs writings.
>>C7: The Corsair Papers by Fileg & FlickAs a HUGE fan of Gilbert and Sullivan, I could not stop laughing at this
story. Alas, poor Aragorn. Those Leap Years can be tricky things.
Unfortunately, the Leap Years meant I could have a good laugh at his
expense, though perhaps my favorite moments was the part in which it was
indicated Gandalf should sing the Paradox Song while a ýFetching Young Ladý
named ýEdgarý and Merry ended up singing ýWith Entlike Tread.ý Iým not
entirely sure that Ents could be compared to cats, but then, they did manage
to get the drop on Saruman right outside Orthanc, so I suppose it works.
Even if it doesnýt, though, it makes for a great mental image. The love
triangle between Grýma, Legolas, and Gimli made me gag and laugh at the same
time, and Sauronýs potion songýwell, thatýs just one of those things you
really have to read to appreciate. But I will tell you that ýSauron-ificý
makes a great rhyme for ýterrific.ý
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AUTHORS
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>>CA1: AltarielAltarielýs command of the Minas Tirithýs Ruling Steward and his family is,
as always, impeccable. I love the way Denethor is portrayed, and as with all
Altarielýs fics, the focus is kept firmly on him, never straying far. The
other participants brought into the story are characterized swiftly and have
their moment, and then Altariel moves on, never losing sight of the final
goal. This is a great twisting of Dickensý famous story, and I think
Altariel has put in all the necessary adaptations to make it work in
Tolkienýs world. The narrative was smooth, and at no point did I feel as
though things were awkward or contrived. Crossovers in this fandom can be
tricky, but Altariel pulls this crossover off beautifully.
>>CA4: EledhwenEledhwen keeps the crossover short and light, almost bordering on cursory in
the narrative, but it works very well. Itýs a great way of avoiding all the
pesky problems of crossing Middle-earth with anything else, and the result
is a fun story about a brief encounter that can feed the imagination.
>>CA5: Fileg & FlickPerhaps one of the most hilarious crossovers Iýve ever seen. Instead of
taking something from another fandom into Middle-earth, Fileg and Flick take
Middle-earth into Gilbert and Sullivan, with amazing results. The blending
of the story and the alteration of the characters (Iým still feeling for
poor Aragorn and that Leap Year clause) was great, and they managed to keep
enough of the original characterization and story intact to have it come
across in a seriously disturbed version of ýPirates of Penzance.ý You can
see both ýPiratesý and LotR in this operetta, and the adaptations of the
songs still have me laughing.
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Msg# 2449
Missing info in Mystery ballot Posted by ainaechoiriel October 18, 2004 - 15:07:36 Topic ID# 2449-----Original Message-----
From: ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Monday, October 18, 2004 11:37 AM
To: MEFAStaff@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAStaff] Missing information on Mystery ballot
Arda Unmarred by Casey Toh is a nominee for the Mystery category.
In the nominations dastbase on the yahoo site, it notes that the
nomination is for the 1st chapter only. That information was left
out (sorry) of the website and the ballots.
But it is important information, since the other chapters were
written by different authors, some of whom did not want their stories
included in these awards. So, if you are planning on commenting on
Casey's story, please keep those comments to the first chapter only.
Thank you.
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Silmarillion --Official Voting Ballot Posted by viv October 19, 2004 - 0:13:06 Topic ID# 2454Official Voting Ballot
First Age
S1-3: Brucia la terra mia by Moralanqua
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=249
Right off, you set a scene of peace and beauty, and then you proceed
to utterly rip it apart. Nice. In this story, the Dagor Bragollach
seems more than merely an attack on elves; it seems an attack on
Arda herself. Still, the elves here mount a solid defense. I just
love this line: "I am ready. Let it come, let them all come." That
Aegnor, what an elf.
First Age
S1-4: Dark Forge by Ithilwen
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/724460/1/
I've read a lot of Maeglin-under-torture fic, but you've rendered
him so beautifully here. First, the technical stuff: your use of
words is exquisite. Your verbs are strong, your adverbs sparse and
powerful. Sentences roll on with an unstoppable rhythm. And then
there's the story itself: wending, winding, drawing painfully toward
the inevitable end. Maeglin is the victim in this self-told tale.
After all, he merely sought things we have all wanted: freedom,
light, acceptance, and love. None of that was too much to ask.
First Age
S1-6: Finrod's Oath by Jmac
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=52
The beauty of this piece is its subtlety, for there is more than one
oath of Finrod: his oath to Feanor, of course, but also his promises
to Amarie, Barahir, Andreth. This story is his contemplation of all
those oaths, of the devotion he gave so generously and of how that
giving spirit has brought him to this end, full of regret. It seems
that now, at last, he realizes that seeking happiness is not
entirely selfish: "Despite my best efforts all my good intentions
have come for naught and every decision I ever made appears to have
been wrong... In my long and weary life, I could not save any of
those I wished." What a tragedy that this realization should come
too late. However, noble to the end, Finrod does not accept his
failures resignedly. He fights. The ending of this fic is so
appropriate. This may be the most solidly put together interior
monologue piece in ficdom.
Incomplete
SI-1: A Veiled Light by Andreth
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=440
Argh! You've removed all but the first three chapters! I knew you
were rewriting, but, but, but... Cirdan! Gil-Galad! Elrond! All of
the aforementioned hot elves nekkid and bothered! I feel very much
like pouting, but I'll restrain myself. Yes, yes, the three chapters
you've left up are spectacular as far as introductions go. Your
desriptions of the limitations and encumberances a Maia would feel
in a human body were particularly believable. Of course she would
come up on deck without clothes, imagining her mortal form to be
clothing enough. Makes sense to me. How rude of those elves to
stare. And the dream sequence seemed a little more detailed than it
was before, now with a mention of the chest of goodies (was that in
there before, this early on? I don't remember it, but I did start
reading this story a long time ago). I hope you'll get the muse to
begin your rewriting in earnest: there's so much genius sitting
privately on your hard drive right now, and it deserves a really
bright spotlight.
Incomplete
SI-2: Beneath the Light by Mouse
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=110
The descriptions in this story are breathtaking, more so because
they filter through the point of view of a master craftsman,
Maeglin, so they necessarily contain a deep level of detail and
poetry. The sensory images are especially compelling: "pulpy
splitting of sword through flesh and blood." From chapter 1 to the
end, I felt keenly the dual between awe and yearning that was going
on in Maeglin's head. The symbolic end of part 3, with the
inadvertent, inescapable murder of the nightengale was a sleek bit
of foreshadowing, too. I really wish you would consider finishing
this piece. It is lovely.
Romance
SR2: Fell Fire by Finch
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/713372/1/
This was the first fic I read that clearly defined the differences
between elves and men. Most impressive was that you *showed* the
difference, you didn't merely declare that such a difference
existed. The notion of an elvish while is burned in my brain, a
prime example of the show-not-tell writing mantra and also an
example of the kind of polished writing in fanfic that I've always
hoped to emulate. Elegant turns of phrase and exquisite metaphors
pepper the piece: "The image curled up like burning parchment." But
the thing I have to confess about this story, the thing that stuck
with me long after I read it, was the idea of children being a
mortal person's way of achieving immortality. That idea fits so
beautifully with the canon facts that we know of the races, and it
ached horribly in this story that Andreth never could (or would)
make Aegnor or his brother understand. That idea inspired a fic I
wrote a couple of years ago, and it remains one of the central
truths in elf/human understanding, as far as I'm concerned.
Romance
SR3: Of Gold and Wood by Ladyperedhel
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=622
This story is so bright it's painful to read. The love between
Finrod and Amarie grows brilliant and perfect and unbearably sweet,
leaving only a tremendous question at the end: How could he possibly
leave her, after all that? Argh!
Second Age
S2-3: Mortal Shores by Vorondis
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?
STID=259&SPOrdinal=1
I think I've sent some of this feedback to you privately, but just
to reiterate some of the things that impressed me about this
story ... Thank you for writing Galadriel as I always imagined her.
From her dusky voice to her complicated relationship with
Celebrimbor, you've captured it all. And I chuckled out loud at this
description of Aman: "the Blessed but not Very Eventful Realm". In
chapter 6, the simile that compares hand-to-hand fighting
with "guilty lovemaking" is inspired. And then this from chapter
7: "The thought chilled her, for she realised what those means
were." You always find ways of bringing up those durned rings. How
very Tolkienesque of you. Of course, a highlights recap wouldn't be
complete without my very favorite line from the story: "'My lady,'
Glorfindel said, 'dying is not something I can recommend.'" Bwahaha
(Not to mention, that dry wit is perfectly in character for your
Glorfindel).
Second Age
S2-4: Oath Renewed by Inglor
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=906
How have I never read this story before? I feel like a complete
dork, but at least I'm reading it now. Wow, Inglor. This is good
stuff! As always, you've captured the spirit, fury, and nobility of
those first-age elves, and you've subtly threaded in your
Silmarillion knowledge without whacking me over the head with it.
Interesting in this piece, though, by the end, the sword has almost
become a character on its own. It is invested with such meaning and
emotion, and it reflects those feelings: "Gil-Galad grasped the hilt
and felt the need for vengeance emanate from the weapon." Creepy,
but very cool and very in-keeping with those cranky first-age
swords. And of course, as usual, your depiction of Galadriel is
utter smoothness. Here you've also added in some wonderful
characterizations of Finrod and Elendil, the former both commanding
and fated, the latter awed and resolute. If I had a suggestion it
would be to make the summary a little more vague... the ending was
powerful even knowing the spoiler, but I think it would have struck
me a little harder if I hadn't seen it coming.
Second Age
S2-5: Seashell by Nol
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1880
This is a hushed and soul-rending moment, including strong
characterizations of both Maglor and Elros. I could feel distinctly
the energy and optimism of Elros, and the utter pathos and
loneliness of Maglor. Beautiful short piece.
S3: Gold Like Tears by Zimraphel
"It was like embracing the moon." Gah. Nothing I can say in a review
will do this story justice, so I'll just ramble on here a while
until I can collect coherent thoughts. First, the physical doohickie
of the bead: thank you, thank you for choosing something so unique
and unassuming. Not a ring. Not a sword. Not a jewel. In fact, it's
such a simple yet representative thing, Tolkien would probably
approve. Like Tolkien's simple golden ring, this bit of gold grows
more sinister as the story progresses, and by the end, it seemed to
spell certain doom, even if it were given in love. Definitely both
unsettling and touching.
S4: If Women had Ruled Middle Earth by Mouse
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=39
I didn't even know that Silmfic humour existed before I read this
piece, and now I can hardly read the Silmarillion without having
sillymarillion thoughts. A wonderful romp, from beginning to end.
S6: Not for Pride Alone by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=453
This is my favorite Glorfindel fanfic. Period. I know that this
contest is based on word count, so it would behoove me to come up
with something flowery and verbose to say about this story that I
haven't said before. Alas. All I can say really is that it is about
as close to perfect as fic gets. I hope other voters read this
review and are inspired to go read the story. They won't be
disappointed.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the
category, not the story, here):
SA1: Andreth
A Veiled Light
The three chapters of A Veiled Light that are still out there for
public viewing don't even scratch the surface of displaying the
talent Andreth brings to this fandom. She reads like a real-life
paid-by-publishers bought-by-fans authoress. This kind of writing
takes not just skill with words -- anybody can compose a pretty
sentence -- but also refined a command of storytelling, pacing,
character development, dialogue, and astonishingly balanced action-
versus-interior-meandering.
SA8: Finch
Fell Fire
Finch was my first taste of beautiful writing in Tolkien fanfiction.
Without the inspiration I drew from her work, I would never have
written Tolkien fic. I'm not sure I ever confessed this debt, but
it's there. I still aspire to write like Finch, and I'm still
inspired by Finch's writing.
SA10: Inglor
Oath Renewed
I just started reading Inglor's work a few months ago, and it is
certainly impressive. The bits that couldn't be nominated for this
contest -- yes, bits that actually name and discuss intimate body
parts and the workings thereof -- are, if anything, even more
indicative of Inglor's skill. I especially appreciate his care and
attention to detail, even with (especially with) characters who
typically just don't get enough screen time, or fic time: Galadriel,
Amarie, Finrod, Celeborn.
SA12: Jmac
Finrod's Oath
JMac writes really funny stuff. She also writes really serious
stuff, really gross nasty stuff, and really romantic beautiful
stuff. I think JMac could write pretty much anything, given
sufficient will and time. In the end, though, I don't care what she
writes. I just want her to do more of it.
SA15: Moralanqua
Brucia la terra mia
Moralanqua writes compelling fanfiction. At some point the passion
of her work takes over, and I just cannot stop reading. Moreoever, I
can read her without second-guessing; I know that she has already
done the research, so I can *believe*. I never read Moralanqua's
stories with an editorial eye (and this is very weird for me). I
read them, and appreciate them, as a fan.
SA24: Zimraphel
Steadfast, Cuivie, Gold Like Tears, Not for Pride Alone, Song of the
Waters
Zimraphel is the gold standard for Silmarillion fic. Her work is
always top-notch, high-quality fiction. Certainly I have my
favourites among her stories, but I'm never disappointed by anything
she writes. It's all consistently good. I have no idea how she does
this, but as soon as I figure it out, I shall bottle the secret
superpower and sell it for millions.
This category ends on October 25th at 11:59pm Central US time
Msg# 2455
Re: Mystery--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 19, 2004 - 14:38:00 Topic ID# 2372Official Voting Ballot
Mystery-mefas
My6: That Way by Werecat
I have to love a cat story and I love the way this one is woven into the tale. I love the fact that the cat fooled the Nazgulý cats are tricksie creatures indeed.
Authors:
MyA8: Werecat
That Way
The author gives a small mystery and the why of itý a very nice tale for the category!
Official Keeper of Yorgi's Hard Drive, Nick Maitland's Hands
and the Soldier's Hat.
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Msg# 2456
Re: Horror--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 19, 2004 - 14:38:58 Topic ID# 2371Official Voting Ballot
Horror- mefas
Hor3: Iadel by Tinni
Interesting telling of Rumpelstiltskin I thinký rather chilling too. I do love a shivery story. Any story with Feanor is scary!
Hor4: The Complexities of Power by Watcherchild
Ewww! Such slimy oily evil is Melkor! This was a very good illustrationý reminded me of the serpent in the garden. Chilling is a good word for it.
AUTHORS
HorA6: Tinni
Iadel
The original fairy tale is a bit of a horror tale and this one fits the bill wellý using our knowledge of the future.
HorA7: Watcherchild
The Complexities of Power, The Truth of Ugliness
This authorýs work truly fits the categoryýI felt and seen the ugliness of Melkor.
Official Keeper of Yorgi's Hard Drive, Nick Maitland's Hands
and the Soldier's Hat.
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Re: Horror--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 19, 2004 - 16:12:09 Topic ID# 2371Official Voting Ballot
Hor5: The Dead Walk Tonight by MN Theis
Yay! This is true horror, a cold, remorseless tale of evil! I loved the whole thing, espeically the summary. This is the kind of story that makes me smile.
HorA5: MN Theis
The Dead Walk Tonight
This author has written a tale of horror that will stand up against horror in any fandom!
Official Keeper of Yorgi's Hard Drive, Nick Maitland's Hands
and the Soldier's Hat.
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Msg# 2462
Re: The Silmarillion--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 20, 2004 - 15:29:28 Topic ID# 2434these awards came along and reminded me. Behold yet another lengthy ballot!
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The Silmarillion
Official Voting Ballot
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STORIES
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>>First AgeI love stories about first impressions, and if it involves Thranduil and
>>S1-1: A Brush with Destiny by Coriel
Elrond, so much the better! I liked how we saw the beginnings of their
characters in this, such as Elrondýs curiosity and thirst for knowledge
contrasted by Thranduilýs memories and his duty to his people. It was a
rather inauspicious way to meet, but given these two, I donýt know that Iýd
expect anything else.
>>First AgeInteresting tale that seems as driven by its environment as it is by its
>>S1-3: Brucia la terra mia by Moralanqua
events. The descriptions of Dorthonion are very good, and I like how it
seems peaceful at first but the taint of darkness is never far away, even if
the elves try to ignore it. The descriptions keep pace with the actions, and
in the end, the land is as ruined as the elves who tried to defend it. Great
descriptive work!
>>First AgeDark, dark, dark. That was my first impression after reading this. Itýs
>>S1-4: Dark Forge by Ithilwen
soýgritty. Maeglinýs descriptions of himself are fascinating. He truly is a
product of both his mother and his father, yet he doesnýt belong to either
one entirely. And even after their deaths, he never truly belongs. I like
the quick comments about how his mind works, and how he can see the flaws in
both minds and metals. Morgothýs voice in the midst of all this shows that
he, too, can see the flaws in minds. The slow betrayal of Maeglinýs thoughts
was great, and I loved how he rationalized his somewhat illicit search for
metal as a way of fulfilling his kingýs commands, and how in the end his
betrayal was a favor to Idril. Spooky little fic that left me thinking.
>>First AgeFinarfin is one of my favorite characters, and I love it when people write
>>S1-5: Driven By Fire by Starlight10
from his viewpoint. He really doesnýt get enough notice. This fic, in
particular, is stunning, especially the way in which the kinslaying is
described. The death of the Teleri takes on new meaning when seen through
Finarfinýs eyes, and itýs easy to see why he turned back after that. The
effect on him was staggering, and Starlight brings it out perfectly.
>>First AgeFinrod is another of my favorite characters, and I like how Jmac brings out
>>S1-6: Finrod's Oath by Jmac
the irony of Finrod being imprisoned in a fortress of his own making. Itýs
such a great introduction to this fic, in which Finrod basically goes over
all the things he couldnýt save. Minas Tirith was just the start, and even
then, it was the beginning because thereýs that little matter of an elven
maid waiting for him back in Aman. He lost his brothers, he could not save
Beren, heýs a prisoner in a fortress he could not keep, and Jmac builds
wonderfully to the climax in which Finrod tries to do something good despite
the doom of Mandos. The final lines really got to me, and then the fic cuts
out with the words, ýso it begins.ý Terrific closing line, and I imagine
that Finrod tried to make a new beginning even as he met his end.
>>First AgeTuor is a fascinating character to me, and Sphinx does a good job with him
>>S1-8: Pause by Sphinx
here as he prepares to leave with Idril. The scene painted is very much a
pause of sorts as he thinks about what heýs gained and what heýs leaving
behind. Tuor seems to be grasping at the intangible in this fic, and given
what happens to him and what heýs done already, I think thatýs a perfect
note for his character.
>>First AgeThe pride of the elves Orc-style. This is a great piece that isnýt afraid to
>>S1-10: Slouching Toward Gondolin by Fileg
show the world through the eyes of an Orc, and I love the result. This Orcýs
opinion on the elves and their idiocy is beautiful, and from the Orcýs
standpoint, completely rational and well-founded. His own opinion of himself
echoes the reasoning of the elves that he scoffs, but then, they are from
the same roots, arenýt they? Wonderfully twisted look into the mind of an
Orc who is quite proud of what he is.
>>First AgeFirst of all, I enjoyed the title and the way the entire story reflects back
>>S1-11: Steadfast by Zimraphel
onto the meaning of Voronwýýs name. Every part of this story is about how he
was steadfast, both in his service to Turgon and his convictions about
himself and what has happened. Itýs something Ulmo recognizes, and I love
the idea that he uses this steadfastness to make Voronwý a guide for his
messenger. Tuor was also great in this tale, and though Maeglin doesnýt
appear, I couldnýt help but think of him as a contrast to this self-assured
but realistic mortal.
>>First AgeIntriguing look at Elrondýs decision to join with the elves and Elrosýs
>>S1-12: When I Am Wise by Deborah Judge
decision to join with men. I like the way their different desires are told,
and I really like what seems to be the motivating factor in Elrondýs choice:
Once he is wise, will he know if he could have done anything differently in
Sirion? Or if he had acted, would he have become like Maedhros and Maglor?
Itýs an intriguing question, but like Elrond, Iým not sure itýs the right
one. Fascinating story.
>>First AgeOh dear! I canýt tell you just how much I choked up laughing at first
>>S1-13: White Wing by Cirdan
Batman, then Robin, and ultimately Nightwing. Iým surprised Huntress and
Batgirl werenýt worked into this. Clever, clever. And fun!
>>Second AgeI was completely unprepared for the power of this little fic, and as a
>>S2-1: A Last Reckoning by Nol
result, it blew me away. Iým still reeling, which is going to make writing
this review difficult, so forgive me if I ramble more than usual. First of
all, I like how this fic sets itself up. It touches on those fighting beside
Gil-galad, it gives us a description of their surroundings (I love the small
touch about Gil-galadýs burning eyes in the midst of Mordor) and it even
places itself within time. Or outside of time, depending upon how it was
viewed, because Gil-galad is right. At this point, time is for other people
in places where there are beginnings and ends. And having set both the scene
and the stakes, the story dives right into Gil-galadýs mind. I loved the
imagery used in the narrative, and it became even more powerful as the story
went on and Gil-galad seemed to adopt his fatherýs philosophy that the
stronger force wins and that despair can sometimes be strong enough, which
is an idea that really struck me. I could definitely use most of this story
for profound quotes if I wanted to. Whether despair is strong enough to
triumph over darkness, over hope, or over both, I still havenýt decided, but
whatever the answer, this sets up perfectly for the final charge against
Sauron when the forces on both sides are weary and faltering. This is really
something you have to read for yourself. My meager words could never do it
justice.
>>Second AgeI hadnýt thought of this reason for Elrosýs decision to join with men, but
>>S2-2: It's In His Eyes by Larien Elensar
as inspiration behind it, Celebrimbor serves well. And I like that Elrond
finally understood when he gave Arwen to Aragorn. As individuals who bridge
the gap between elves and men, itýs very appropriate that Elrond and Elros
should try to look after both.
>>Second AgeI have this strange fascination with Maglor, and I think Nol nails his
>>S2-5: Seashell by Nol
character in this fic. Heýs become very child-like, which I can see madness
doing, but from time to time, he is still Maglor, the son of Fýanor. Itýs in
his voice, his bearing, and occasionally his words. Heýs very much like the
seashell that Elros thinks of. Simple to look at, but far more complex if
studied closely.
>>S1: Cuivie by ZimraphelMaybe itýs just me, but I found something absolutely hilarious in the fact
that the Entýs first word was ýHroom.ý Itýs probably just me, though. Still,
that line had me laughing like an idiot.
>>S2: Eloquent Remembrance by SphinxA brilliant conversation between two of my favorite elves: Celeborn and
Finarfin. Celeborn, especially, is at the top of his game here, and it
doesnýt take that long for Finarfin to join him. The wordplays in this fic
are amazing, and the
argument/debate/conversation/whatever-you-want-to-call-it between two of my
favorite characters is exactly what I hoped it would be. Celeborn shows us
why he earned the title ýCeleborn the Wiseý and adds a beautiful dash of
Sindar cynicism and common sense, which seems to throw Finarfin a bit until
he learns how to respond to it in the very end. Itýs a testament to
Finarfinýs own wisdom that he is able to give as good as he gets by the end
of the conversation and to put aside his fatherly feelings. The cameo by
Elrond and Celebrýan was hilarious in its simplicity. I love the fact that
these two are watching the confrontation, if not entirely eavesdropping, and
I love Galadrielýs comments about letting the fittest survive. I definitely
agree with both of them that Celeborn and Finarfin can be intimidating.
Excellent look into these characters.
>>S3: Gold Like Tears by ZimraphelWonderful and chilling little tale. Tolkien has made a few references to the
Morgoth element in various works, and while Iým not sure this is an example
of that phenomenon, it certainly brought it to mind along with all its
implications. And thatýs what really makes this story work, I think. One
little token (in this case, a bead) holds so much meaning and history and
grief. It shows up and the entire scene darkens. It becomes a character in
its own right, and it holds its own in scenes that include the likes of
Elrond, Elros, Glorfindel, Aragorn, and Arwen.
>>S4: If Women had Ruled Middle Earth by MouseHilarious! Poor Celebrýan. I never thought what not having another name
might mean to her! Still, Idril is right. Being named after oneýs feet is
probably not the greatest compliment. And alas poor Goldberry. I always knew
there was something off about that relationshipý
>>S5: In the Seventh Age by Deborah JudgeI rather enjoy the bittersweet idea that Maglor wandered endlessly, but this
fic has some nice closure to it even if it does mean that Maglor can go
home. I suppose I canýt begrudge him that, especially when he speaks so well
of what Elrosýs children have learned from him and when Galadriel tells him
that Elrond still sings his songs. Itýs still bittersweet enough for me!
>>S6: Not for Pride Alone by ZimraphelThis fic is a master of characterization. The events themselves are
stunning, and I loved the climax when Glorfindel rode out against the
Witch-king, but even better were the characters themselves. As the leading
character, Glorfindel himself was excellent, and I think his distance with
mortals very appropriate. But I especially enjoyed his views of other
characters. Thereýs a very subtle and wry approach in his way of looking at
things that really brought the characters to life, such as Erestor the
ýnoisy crow.ý In sharp contrast to Glorfindel was the rather unsavory
characterization of Eamur, but even though he was made out to be somewhat
blustering in the beginning of the fic, he had quite a few redeeming
qualities by the end, such as brilliant strategy. Zimraphel keeps an
excellent balance going so that no one is entirely good or bad. Well, except
the Witch-king. The twins were also well characterized, and it is clear that
they are Elrondýs sons. But the characters I loved best were the hobbits
(they were such hobbits!) and Imrazor. I donýt know if Imrazor is intended
to be the same Imrazor who founded Dol Amroth, but there are enough hints
that seemed to indicate this was so and I can very much seem him in that
role. He reminds me very much of Imrahil!
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>>SA6: Deborah JudgeDeborah Judge does a great job of getting into Elrondýs head and exploring
what has to be one of the most complicated relationships in all of Tolkienýs
work: the relationship between Elrond, Elros, and Maglor. And she gives it
its due in some fascinating stories that demonstrate the complexity of what
happened at Sirion and the aftermath of taking Elrond and Elros hostage.
>>SA12: JmacJmac makes wonderful use of irony and the idea of failure as Finrod sits in
the dark with Beren. The fic itself runs the risk of becoming a mindless
slog of self recrimination, but Jmac keeps it above that but carefully
pointing out that Finrod is justified in his feelings, and that in spite of
his despair and past failings, Finrod is still ready to make one last
attempt to do something right. Great tribute to a character that I believe
is among the more noble characters in the Silmarillion, and through some
great narrative setup on Jmacýs part, the end becomes the beginning.
>>SA18: NolNol has a gift for getting inside the heads of elves, which is no small feat
considering how different they are. The trick Nol seems to use is to foil
them against others, sometimes even against themselves. Gil-galad, for
instance, is foiled primarily against his younger self, though Elrond and
Elendil serve as small foils, too. And then Maglor and Elros are wonderful
contrasts for one another, and I love the hints of a relationship we get
from both of them. And thatýs another thing that Nol does well: hints. Hints
of conversations, of arguments, and of past decisions. Nol leaves the reader
to draw his/her own conclusions, but the reader is given enough direction
for the conclusions harmonize with the story. And thatýs something I wish I
could do very much. I have to say that Iým a very jealous!
>>SA19: SphinxWith the two stories here, Sphinx shows herself to be a master of many
forms. ýPauseý was a very detached, dream-like tale with an aging Tuor at
the end of his journeys, and it seems to glance over things quickly, which
is exactly what Tuorýs wandering mind was probably doing at that stage of
his life. In sharp contrast is the confrontation between Finarfin and
Celeborn, two of the wisest elves on Arda. Sphinx doesnýt glance over
anything in that goes but goes straight for the throat. Or rather, Finarfin
does, and Celeborn doesnýt shy away in the least. Both are very
well-written, and the contrast in style, mood, and content say quite a bit
about Sphinxýs abilities as an author.
>>SA20: Starlight10Starlight10 manages to bring across the sorrow that characterized much of
the First Age, but it hits Finarfin harder and faster than it hits his kin.
And given what little we know of his character, I find that very
appropriate. Great characterization of Finarfin and wonderful descriptive
work give this fic that longing and sweeping sadness that hounded the elves,
both those who went back and those who stayed in Aman.
>>SA24: ZimraphelZimraphel has a way of bringing legends to life and also of making legends
with a life of their own. What I find truly interesting is how Zimraphel
stays away from the heart of the legend, instead showing us bits of the
beginning or pieces of the end. The middle is left unspoken, and I really
like this approach because it lets us create our own images of what happened
in the great stories based on what Zimraphel gives as foundation or
conclusion. The story of Glorfindel, for instance, and the confrontation
with the Witch-king shows Glorfindel after the Balrog slaying and gives us
glimpses of what we might have seen had we been on that trail out of
Gondolin with him. The different tales of Cýrdan, Voronwý, and Tuor show
these heroes before they really became heroes, but the seeds of greatness
were obviously there and it adds depth to the moments that Tolkien lays out
in the Silmarillion. I donýt know of any author who so thoroughly explores
the area around the legend rather than the legend itself, and I find that
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Msg# 2463
The Silmarillion--Official Voting Ballot Posted by sulriel October 20, 2004 - 15:57:16 Topic ID# 2434First Age
S1-1: A Brush with Destiny by Coriel
I read this a long time ago and very much enjoyed it, but lost track
of it. I am especially pleased to have found it again in reading for
the MEFAs. It is a beautiful and heartbreaking view of Menegroth
before it's fall, ravaged not once but twice, and an insightful
portrayal of both Elrond and Thranduil.
Second Age
S2-5: Seashell by Nol
a wonderful and heartrending depiction of Elros and Maglor.
Msg# 2464
Re: Mystery--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 20, 2004 - 16:35:29 Topic ID# 2372From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
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My1: Adagio by Rose Sared
What I liked most about this story was the relationships between Aragorn,
Legolas, and Gimli. A genuine care for each other showed through, and the
characterizations were done well. I also liked the original characters,
particularly of Gleowyn. No Mary Sue here!
My2: Arda Unmarred by Casey Toh
I like this version. In fact, I wasn't sure at first where Tolkien left off
and Casey began, as I've not read the HOME. Good job.
My4: In the Hands of the Enemy by meckinock
I love the characterization of Halbarad! He's funny, rough, scary at times,
and so very three-dimensional. I feel like I've finally gotten to know the
guy. This is the most 3-D portrayal of him I've ever read. I love this
line: "Hell have all those complacent little Boffins and Bolgers in an
uproar within a week.", which brings us to Tillfield, anotehr well-rounded
character, though this time, an original one. And don't even get me started
on Rolly. Kept me guessing through it all: bad, good, liar, honest, bad,
liar.... And the whole angsty story ends with a good laugh or three.
Thanks!
My5: Shades of the Immortal by Levade
An interesting twist on that bit of text, and an interesting twist on the
subject of crop circles. So that's where they come from! Good
characterization. I'm guessing a Hobbit, definitely someone from the
country, not a city person.
My6: That Way by Werecat
I do love cats! (Anybody want a kitten? I have 3 ready for adoption!) And
I loved seeing a cat unafraid of the Nazgul and wily enough to lie to it.
Cats are proud creatures and this story shows that. I also liked the idea
that the older cats shared stories to their kittens so that the cat knew the
history of his kind. Lovely! My kitties would be proud.
My9: The Seventh Stone by Cassia and Sio
Cassia and Siobhan deliver again! Action, suspense, angst, and a bit of
blood here and there. The ending was the right decision. It wouldn't have
been right if they'd managed to keep the palantir. And a special note on the
bad guy's lackeys. Cassia and Siobhan kept them from being 2-D bad guys and
gave them some depth and humanity, and that is a mature thing for any writer
to do.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
MyA2: Cassia and Sio
Cassia and Siobhan know how to keep the suspense coming. You'd think they'd
be predictable by now, but no, you still don't know what's around the next
corner. If you are looking for a fun, entertaining roller coaster ride, any
story by these two will do just fine!
MyA3: Levade
Levade did a great job of evoking the spooky. The story left it vague as to
whether the Elves were ghosts. They behaved like ghosts, but the narrator
was not afraid and hoped his children could see them. Nice balance there.
MyA4: meckinock
I think In the Hands... was the first story by meckinock that I've ever
read. And not knowing his/her gender, I will have a hard time expounding on
his/her ability to write. Well, the ability was shown to be of high
callibre, with an intricate plot, few mistakes or typos, wonderful
characterizations and a flare for both supreme angst and laugh-out-loud
humor. Meckinock is a fine author and one to look out for. Even if he/she
didn't write about Legolas....
MyA8: Werecat
From the sound of the penname, and the main character of the story, I'd say
Werecat is a cat person like myself. This author knows cats, that's evident
in the writing of That Way. And good writing it was, giving catas a culture
and history far beyond what we'd normally think of for them.
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AW: [MEFAwards] Horror--Official Voting Ballot Posted by elanor of aquitania October 20, 2004 - 18:44:16 Topic ID# 2465______________________________
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Hor3: Iadel by Tinni
Iadel as Rumpelstiltskin fits into Tolkien's world. But why is this horror ?
Hor4: The Complexities of Power by Watcherchild
First part: interesting story about the seduction of Sauron. Second part:
for me it was sarcastic. Where is the horror ? I saw some superficial
sadism.
Hor6: The Lure of the Darkness by Ainaechoiriel
Aye, that is a horror story as I think a horror story has to be: suspense,
hope fanned and quenched. Good speech, good story line. The horrific
thoughts of the spider. I think my horror would have been even more intense
if I could have heard also some angst thoughts of the child. I am missing a
bit a philosophical background, but really only a little. Well crafted
story.
Hor9: The Truth of Ugliness by Watcherchild
A good story. I have the feeling the story should be extended. (Unbelievable
to me is that Nellin does not realize that Amle died.) The essence of the
story that truth is beauty and that pain could be experienced as truth is
believable to me. Yet I think Nellin should put up a longer struggle with
his conscience. IMO Melkor succeeds too fast. It is a very dark
psychological story IMO, better categorized as Silmarillion than as horror.
Yet, I always thought that Orcs are misshapen because Melkor did not succeed
in creating his own creatures but had to transform already existing living
beings and this transformation was influenced by his rebellious and evil
mind. Here the creation of Orcs feels more like a sado-masochistic
relationship. "The next step" is the companion to this piece IMO.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
HorA1: Ainaechoiriel
The Lure of the Darkness
Good writer who develops a well crafted story line. This was the only story
so far in this category were I experienced horror.
HorA6: Tinni
Iadel
Nicely written story. But where is the horror ?
HorA7: Watcherchild
The Complexities of Power, The Truth of Ugliness
Thoughtful stories both. But "The Truth of Ugliness" for me is the better
crafted. One should read "The next step" as a companion to this piece. Yet I
would not have categorized these stories as horror.
Msg# 2466
AW: [MEFAwards] Mystery--Official Voting Ballot Posted by elanor of aquitania October 20, 2004 - 19:11:58 Topic ID# 2466Official Voting Ballot
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My8: The Next Step by Watcherchild
Very thoughtful story, but not what I would call a mystery story. I like
this story most of the four stories of Watcherchild. For me it belongs to
Silmarillion. The partner of this story is "The Truth of Ugliness" telling
of the other side the transformed Orcs. I have no quibbles with this story.
Finding the former Orc as a redeemed Elvish brother feels a bit as a
Hollywood script though.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
MyA7: Watcherchild
The Nature of Starlight, The Next Step, That Way
Three of the four Watcherchild's stories were very thoughtful. But IMO these
stories belong into the category Silmarillion. "The next step" is for me the
best of the four I read.
This category ends on October 20th at 11:59pm Central US time
for a story, it does not imply that I didn't like it, but rather that I
didn't have the time to read it.
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My4: In the Hands of the Enemy by meckinock
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=910
Very interestingý I didn't expect the enemy to be who he is. Liked the
interplay between the characters -- e.g. Halbarad breaking open the box that
Gandalf had just said was sealed with a spellý LOL!
My5: Shades of the Immortal by Levade
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1580296/1/
Hauntingly beautiful, Levade! I love the voice of the narrator, so
matter-of-fact, seemingly uneducated, but wise in a folksy sort of way --
knowing full well that much hard work must be done to make the land
fruitful, very solid and rooted in reality, but still enjoying the mystery
of the land and the Elves -- and wanting to know that his children will
witness an Elven procession of their own. Your description of the Elves
touches my heart -- so beautiful yet ethereal, real yet not. Most Halloween
mysteries inspire some level of terror; yours inspires awe on the part of
your characters and your readers. Lovely writing! This is probably one of
the best Halloween-time stories I've ever read -- and I've ready many.
My6: That Way by Werecat
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3415
Oh, I like this, Werecat! You cleverly wove together several of Tolkien's
loose threads, and came up with a story that is interesting and unusual and
amusing all at the same time. Bravo! I especially liked how Luin was so
perceptive about the humans she met, especially the Ring-bearer and the
Witch-king; it's particularly telling that the WK invoked the name of a
Prince who was not favored among cats. Also, the oral transmission of all
the important (feline-centric) old tales from cat to kitten is a great idea!
My7: The Nature of Starlight by Watcherchild
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1001961/1/
Well, this is lovely; there is a warmth between the lovers that is pleasing,
but the sadness that they are parting for the last time casts a pall over
their meeting. I at first thought this was Aýle and Oromý, then thought
maybe the smith was a Fýanorian, then maybe ýol (because of the black sword)
and -- Celeborn? LOL! Needless to say, I haven't figured it out, but the
emotional interplay between the lovers really captured my interest.
My8: The Next Step by Watcherchild
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/989380/1/
Very interesting and thought-provoking! Rihansu seems to be in the kind of
unemotional, shock-like state that people go into after they have been
through great traumas; she seems so matter-of-fact and emotionless when
telling of horrific events in the life of her and her people -- the
sundering, and her brother's loss, and her meeting with him as an Orc. Your
ideas of the Avari having a more naturalistic and less courtly view of
marriage seem reasonable -- the constant state of danger they lived in comes
through very nicely. And I very much liked the surprise at the end -- what
a hopeful meeting!
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Hor2: Coavalta by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1491150/1/
Arrrggh, this is just so incredibly chilling, Zimraphel! "Come closer!"
*Shudder* The voice seems so distant, disembodied (er, I meant that in an
abstract wayý LOL!), distracted, forgetful of even the simplest pleasure in
life and living; but at the same time, sharp and intelligent -- the being
remembers about mortals, remembers that he doesn't like them very much, that
they are frail, that they don't hear the voice of Mandos; remembers his
prejudices quite well, I would say. I thought it was especially interesting
that the being doesn't remember how he was killed or why he didn't respond
to Mandos' summons -- we living folk consider those events to be rather
important, as it were! But you really conveyed well how "other-worldly"
this being is, how very different from us. And how sinister it has become
after the long eons of waiting. Like I said before, **shudder**!
Hor6: The Lure of the Darkness by Ainaechoiriel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1489653/1/
So scary, Ainaechoiriel! The spider is so very seductive, and the elfling
so very vulnerableý Your details about the way that spiders feed are
extremely creepy and unfortunately, far too accurate -- and horrifyingly
graphic. The trees being so involved in the darkness that they taunt the
Elves is a nasty touch, as is the fact that the loss of the child reminds
Legolas of his mother (with the kicker being that trees saved him!). (BTW,
"desert" s/b "dessert")
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Msg# 2469
Horror and Mystery closing soon: 1 1/2 hours or so Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 20, 2004 - 22:29:31 Topic ID# 2469Anyway, they're closing soon, so get those ballots out while you still can.
Save the rest for Amnesty Day!
And once those two close, the last two categories will open: The Hobbit and
The Lord of the Rings!
That also means we have just barely over 2 weeks to get any last-minute
banner submissions in. I'll make a post on which categories are the most
needy.
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These categories need your help! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 20, 2004 - 22:48:05 Topic ID# 2470least one of their award titles.
Hobbits:
The Mayor of Hobbiton Award
Orcs:
The Orthanc Award
Numenor:
The Elros Son of Earendil Award
The Tar-Palantir Award
The Tar-Miriel Award (only has 1!)
Humor:
The Tom Bombadil Award
The Barliman Butterbur Award
Drama:
The Turin Turambar Award
Romance:
The Luthien and Beren Award
The Tuor and Idril Award (only has 1!)
Mystery:
The Shadows of Cuivienen Award
Crossover:
The Pirates of the Caribbean Award (only has 1!)
The Hidalgo Award (only has 1!)
The Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade Award (only has 1!)
Lord of the Rings
The Return of the King Award
Deadline for submissions: the end of Amnesty Day. I'll be posting the polls
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Re: These categories need your help! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 20, 2004 - 23:56:57 Topic ID# 2470it in the Photos section on the Yahoo site, Yahoo will blow it up to where
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Subject: [MEFAwards] These categories need your help!
Actually, they need your banners! :-) They have less than 3 banners for at
least one of their award titles.
Hobbits:
The Mayor of Hobbiton Award
Orcs:
The Orthanc Award
Numenor:
The Elros Son of Earendil Award
The Tar-Palantir Award
The Tar-Miriel Award (only has 1!)
Humor:
The Tom Bombadil Award
The Barliman Butterbur Award
Drama:
The Turin Turambar Award
Romance:
The Luthien and Beren Award
The Tuor and Idril Award (only has 1!)
Mystery:
The Shadows of Cuivienen Award
Crossover:
The Pirates of the Caribbean Award (only has 1!) The Hidalgo Award (only has
1!) The Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade Award (only has 1!)
Lord of the Rings
The Return of the King Award
Deadline for submissions: the end of Amnesty Day. I'll be posting the polls
for voting on these on November 1st. Voting for banners is done by popular
vote, not comments. Winners will be announced when we announced the winners
of the awards, which will be November 15th. So, obviously, the voting for
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The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 21, 2004 - 0:00:56 Topic ID# 2474Official Voting Ballot
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Cross-cultural
LCC1: Folk of a Different Race by Lemur
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1102337/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After his death, Legolas and Gimli remember Gandalf's words.
Cross-cultural
LCC2: Horses and Verses by Altariel and Isabeau
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1263984/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After Theoden's funeral feast, Eomer and Faramir have a little
chat.
Cross-cultural
LCC3: I Return by Coriel
URL:
http://www.tolkienonline.com/reading_room/author.cfm?aid=25859&StartNum=41&P
ageNum=3&oby=datedesc
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The homeward journey for Legolas, from Gondor to Greenwood and
beyond. Some insight into what the War of the Ring must have meant to the
quietest and oft neglected member of the Fellowship, together with his and
Gimli's subsequent efforts to achieve acceptance in opposing worlds.
Cross-cultural
LCC4: Keeping Secrets by Deborah Judge
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1131858/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Gimli and Eowyn discover that they have something in common. TTT
movie-based.
Cross-cultural
LCC5: Knife Work by Thundera Tiger
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1110291/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Vignette set in the middle of Helm's Deep. A quick explanation for
something odd that happens in the middle of the Orc-killing game between
Legolas and Gimli. Aragorn and Eomer appear, too.
Cross-cultural
LCC6: River of Fallen Stars by Fileg
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1747
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir and Pippin see stars in the Anduin as they share some old
ghosts and a bottle of wine.
Cross-cultural
LCC7: Sara-Lisse by Erin's Daughter
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2487
Rating: R
Romance Partners: Aragorn/Arwen
Summary: Aragorn and Arwen are married and all they have fought for is
theirs -- but great love often comes at a great price. Contains explicit
het.
Cross-cultural
LCC8: Those Who Remain by Marnie
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233093/1/
Rating: G battle
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What can Sam Gamgee and Lord Celeborn of Lorien possibly have in
common?
Cross-cultural
LCC9: To the Bottle I go by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1214
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A group of friends spend an evening at Gondor's finest inn,
remembering the ladies they fought their battles for.
Drabble
LD1: "And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken." by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1532
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A quiet moment in the Houses of Healing.
Drabble
LD2: Fireside Chats by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1536
Rating: G tiny bit of violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Frodo, Fire and the Ring.
Drabble
LD3: I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1534
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Pippin sits with Merry in the Houses of Healing.
Drabble
LD4: My Elf by Alexcat
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/I_P/M/MyElf.htm
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Legolas/Gimli
Summary: Gimli stakes his claim.
Drabble
LD5: That Which is Fairest by Elana
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7780
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Gimli ponders his gift from Galadriel.
Drabble
LD6: The Moon Sees Somebody I'd Like to See by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=2568
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Merry sits with Pippin after the Black Gate.
Drabble
LD7: The Stone Tree by LKK
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1993&cid=8304
Rating: G Graphic imagery
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: During that restless third night of The Great Chase, Gimli ponders
his elven companion.
Gondor
LG1: All of Them Together by Fileg
URL: http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1791
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Boromir and Thorongil, singing and an honorable surrender.
Gondor
LG2: As Truly as the Arrow Flies by Fileg
URL: http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1912
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir recalls how his grandfather taught him about the stars.
Gondor
LG3: Breathe by Fileg
URL: http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1575
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Throughout their lives, Boromir and Faramir meeting at the Anduin.
Gondor
LG4: Failure by Liz
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1708
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: As events reach a climax in the War of the Ring, the son of the
Lord of Gondor returns to Minas Tirith, after great deeds.
Gondor
LG5: Queen's Gambit by A L Milton
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2768
Rating: PG adult implications
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir and Arwen play a game of chess in the summer of 3019 TA.
Politics, the Alekhine Defence by any other name and Faramir taking his
clothes off - a description that is as accurate as it is misleading.
Incomplete
LI1: An Aussie in King Aragorn's Court by Lady Coralie
URL:
http://www.tolkienonline.com/reading_room/author.cfm?aid=25859&oby=dateasc
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What happens when you put an Aussie in Middle Earth? Culture clash
is an understatement.
Incomplete
LI2: Lie Down in Darkness, Rise Up from the Ash by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=8
Rating: PG13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: This is a very dark AU for LOTR. The premise: without Gollum, how
does the Quest turn out? Angsty drama ensues as the storyline of the Lord of
the Rings unfolds differently as we attempt to take "the road less traveled
by."
Incomplete
LI3: Messages by Shakes
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/743200/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Battle in Osgiliath, prior to the Ring War.
Incomplete
LI4: Once More Into the Urple Depths of OFUM by Camilla Sandman
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/950294/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: unrequited, otherwise canonical, for the most part
Summary: New movie, new students, new lust objects, new mini-Balrogs and a
whole new curriculum. That's right, children. OFUM is back. But wait. It's
no longer the only University in town. MUSM? What the.?
Incomplete
LI5: Recaptured! by Llinos
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/970288/1/ and
HREF="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/969855/1/
Rating: R
Romance Partners: none, but Merry and Pippin have a close relationship. The
reader can decide how close.
Summary: An AU LotR story -- The Uruk-hai recapture Merry and Pippin and
because of this the story changes. The hobbits suffer many trials and
tribulations as a consequence and are led in a completely different
direction to the original story.
Incomplete
LI6: The Fellowship of the Mutants by Samus
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1628447/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What LOTR might have been like if the characters had the powers of
X-Men characters.
Poetry
LP1: All Ye Fellowship of Nine by Azalais
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=670&NGID=31
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: LoTR retold to a well-known festive Victorian tune.
Poetry
LP2: Finduilas by Fileg
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=2&STID=1419&SPO
rdinal=1
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: This is a love poem that was written too late -- a villanelle for
Finduilas..
Poetry
LP3: Goldberry's Song by Vulgarweed
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=809
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The smitten River-Daughter tries to get a rhyme in edgewise.
Poetry
LP4: Samwise Did See by Moralanqua
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=926
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sam laments the days of the Fellowship.
Poetry
LP5: Song Fight at the Swan and Cygnet Saloon by Chathol-Linn
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2299
Rating: R
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The story of how a couple of archers, Bard and Legolas, resolved a
gambling argument, mellowed out some Orcs, and named a new tavern drink in
the process.
Poetry
LP6: The Lion and the Swan by ErinRua
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1606&NGID=72
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Eomer/Lothiriel
Summary: A poem of Eomer of Rohan, from musings by his bride, Lothiriel of
Dol Amroth.
Poetry
LP7: Tickle the Ranger by Alawa
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1801
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A child's verse. Come tickle the Ranger... You know you want to!
Poetry
LP8: War Now Calls Us by Elvenesse
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2361
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A poem from the midst of the battle of the Pelennor Fields, after
Eomer sees the (assumed) dead Eowyn.
Poetry
LP9: Wishes of a King by White Gull
URL:
http://www.frodosharem.org/cgi-bin/stories/display.cgi?id=287&sort=date&stor
yview=toc&chapter=1&cat=7
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Aragorn remembers from whence his kingship came.
Vignette
LV1: A Gift for Pippin by Gwynnyd
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2971
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Poor Pippin. He is traumatized from being exposed to the Eye of
Sauron. Everyone thinks he's been really stupid *again* and no one gives him
any sympathy for being tortured by Sauron... except Legolas. Pippin really
didn't do so badly, when you get right down to it.
Vignette
LV2: A Way Opens by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2698
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: "Where will wants not, a way opens," Eowyn says in The Two Towers.
A series of vignettes about Merry and Eowyn, boots, the afterlife, and joy
in unlikely friendships.
Vignette
LV3: After Such Knowledge by Azalais
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1522
Rating: G N/A
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: While the battle rages on the Pelennor Field, the aged Keeper of
Minas Tirith's House of Lore remembers the last time Mithrandir came to the
White City and sought his help.
Vignette
LV4: For Pity's Sake by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1841411/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Mirkwood sentries assigned to guard Gollum take pity on him,
with horrific results.
Vignette
LV5: Goes A Courting by Chris
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=244&cid=908
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A dwarf and his pursuits.
Vignette
LV6: Repairs by Isabeau of Greenlea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/883019/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After the battle of Helm's Deep, Gimli fixes his axe.
Vignette
LV7: Sting by TreeHugger
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233315/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Bilbo learns of the origins of his little sword from Glorfindel.
Vignette
LV8: The Hours by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3118
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A set of vignettes which all take place during one particularly
challenging day during the War of the Ring, March 14, 3019. The vignettes
are based around the monastic services of the hours, seven in all, from 3:15
a.m. to 7:30 p.m; additionally, each vignette focuses on one of the senses-
taste, touch, etc. Some are well-known characters in well-known scenarios,
others are more obscure.
L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene Campos
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1043
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: "What is Gimli Thinking Each Time He Makes A Joke?" Set directly
after the battle for Helm's Deep, this movie-verse story contains spoilers,
angst, and Dwarf-stripping. You have been warned.
L2: A True Dwarf by PoweroftheBook
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=840
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Gimli and OFC
Summary: A bride has reservations about her husband-to-be, and he assuages
them in his own inimitable fashion. Written because Gimli needs someone to
come home to as much as any handsome Elf does.
L3: Aglarond by ErinRua
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1394
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A dwarf, a cave and a claustrophobic elf. Wherein Gimli and Legolas
venture into the Crystal Caves of Aglarond at the war's end, and Legolas is
lost for words. NO slash.
L4: Answering Machines of Middle Earth by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=409
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: If they had answering machines and voice mail in Middle-earth, what
would you hear?
L5: Estel by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=290
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A mortal boy living in Rivendell must have overheard things, must
have sensed his uniqueness. And his burden.
L6: For The Road by Alawa
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1022638/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: While preparing to depart for the Havens, Bilbo receives a final
letter from Aragorn.
L7: Gilraen's Memorial by Alawa
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1177897/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Before the Fellowship's departure from Rivendell, Aragorn thinks
about Arwen, Elrond and his duty while visiting Gilraen's grave.
L8: Leave Us Not In Darkness by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1405254/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Gandalf, Aragorn and Legolas enter the Tower of Orthanc for
the first time, they discover Saruman's most vile deed.
L9: Lord of the Rings: Kyshri's Story by Lady Shinigami
URL: http://www.geocities.com/reaper_nanashi/LOTR-Tale_1.html
Rating: PG-13 sex scenes
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: This is the battle at Amon Hen where Boromir is killed, and the
Fellowship is split. Part of a 10th Walker story.
L10: Moria's Revenge by Kookaburra, Llinos, and Marigold
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/972596/1/
Rating: R
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The orcs of Moria capture and torture Pippin. When he is finally
rescued he faces a long period of healing, in the hands of the Fellowship
and the elves of Lothlorien. And when Gollum attacks and injures Frodo, who
will then take the Ring to the fire?
L11: Only the Beginning by Cassia
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1644976/1/
Rating: G language
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Slightly extended and appended version of part of the Coronation
scene near the end of ROTK. Decidedly Aragorn & Legolas centric.
L12: Promises by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=546
Rating: PG N/A
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas never had a wife, but that doesn't mean he never had a
love. A short history of what was and what might have been, had the war not
interrupted.
L13: The Gift of Iluvatar by Ariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1267180/1/
Rating: G vile deeds of Saruman
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: From the hobbits' fall at Mt. Doom to Sam's waking in Ithilien...
the story Tolkien only hinted at. What really happened when all the healing
powers of wizards, elves and men were summoned to insure that this was not
the end of all things for the halflings? Sorrow, hope and healing in a
strictly canon gapfiller.
L14: To Dream by Iluvien
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1352163/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Elladan/F
Summary: Oloriel, an Elf maiden from Lothlorien has by some reason unknown
to either of them, been meeting Elladan in her dreams. They have both been
developing feelings for each other, and this is where they finally express
their feelings.
L15: Waiting, Wondering, Wandering, Wishing by Gonzai
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=308&SPOrdinal=1
Rating: PG Violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A series of four missing scenes from RotK.
L16: Whistling Past the Graveyard by Shunt
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2070
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Fellowship pass the defiled dwarven tombs in Moria.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
Drabble
LDA1: Alexcat
My Elf
Drabble
LDA2: Elana
That Which is Fairest
Drabble
LDA3: Lindelea
And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken., Fireside Chats, I See
the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me, The Moon Sees Somebody I'd Like to See
Drabble
LDA4: LKK
The Stone Tree
Poetry
LPA1: Alawa
Tickle the Ranger
Poetry
LPA2: Azalais
All Ye Fellowship of Nine
Poetry
LPA3: Chathol-Linn
Song Fight at the Swan and Cygnet Saloon
Poetry
LPA4: Elvenesse
War Now Calls Us
Poetry
LPA5: ErinRua
The Lion and the Swan
Poetry
LPA6: Fileg
Finduilas
Poetry
LPA7: Moralanqua
Samwise Did See
Poetry
LPA8: Vulgarweed
Goldberry's Song
Poetry
LPA9: White Gull
Wishes of a King
Vignette
LVA1: Azalais
After Such Knowledge
Vignette
LVA2: Chris
Goes A Courting
Vignette
LVA3: Gwynnyd
A Gift for Pippin
Vignette
LVA4: Isabeau of Greenlea
Repairs
Vignette
LVA5: Thevina Finduilas
A Way Opens, The Hours
Vignette
LVA6: TreeHugger
Sting
Vignette
LVA7: Zimraphel
For Pity's Sake
LA1: A L Milton
Queen's Gambit
LA2: Alawa
Gilraen's Memorial, For the Road
LA3: Altariel and Isabeau
Horses and Verses
LA4: Ariel
The Gift of Iluvatar
LA5: Camilla Sandman
Once More Into the Urple Depths of OFUM
LA6: Cassia
Only the Beginning
LA7: Coriel
I Return
LA8: Deborah Judge
Keeping Secrets
LA9: Dwimordene
Lie Down in Darkness, Rise Up from the Ash
LA10: ErinRua
Aglarond
LA11: Erin's Daughter
Sara-Lisse
LA12: Fileg
River of Fallen Stars., All of Them Together, As Truly as the Arrow Flies,
Breathe
LA13: Gonzai
Waiting, Wondering, Wandering, Wishing
LA14: Iluvien
To Dream
LA15: Kookaburra, Llinos, and Marigold
Moria's Revenge
LA16: Lady Coralie
An Aussie in King Aragorn's Court
LA17: Lady Shinigami
Lord of the Rings: Kyshri's Story
LA18: Lemur
Folk of a Different Race
LA19: Lindelea
Answering Machines of Middle Earth
LA20: Liz
Failure
LA21: Llinos
Recaptured!
LA22: Marnie
Those Who Remain
LA23: Pervinca
To the Bottle I go
LA24: PoweroftheBook
A True Dwarf
LA25: Samus
The Fellowship of the Mutants
LA26: Shakes
Messages
LA27: Shunt
Whistling Past the Graveyard
LA28: Suzene Campos
A Different Kind of Sacrifice
LA29: Thundera Tiger
Knife Work
LA30: Viv
Estel, Promises
LA31: Zimraphel
Leave Us Not In Darkness
This category ends on October 30th at 11:59pm Central US time
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Msg# 2477
The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 21, 2004 - 0:02:37 Topic ID# 2477Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top
line of the header information (ex. code: Title by Author) and then comment
beneath them.
(No Subcategories)
TH1: Another Mother's Son by Thevina
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=446
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: For all you stepmoms out there..
TH2: Chance Meeting at Rivendell by Aunt Dora Baggins
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3152
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Bilbo visited Rivendell in "The Hobbit", Aragorn was a child
of nine or ten and was living in Rivendell. This story supposes that they
met and became friends. The story is a simple account of their growing
friendship, and includes foreshadowing of events to come.
TH3: Estel and the Hobbit by Eledhwen
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=429
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Set during Bilbo's sojourn in Rivendell during 'The Hobbit',
book-canon; light-hearted but telling also of deeper events..
TH4: In the Hall of the Wood Elf King by TreeHugger
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/817411/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Hobbit AU. While the Dwarves are imprisoned in Thranduil's
dungeons, Bilbo meets Legolas quite by accident. We find out why Elves don't
smoke pipeweed.
TH5: Of Fire and Stars by Gecco
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1367103/1/
Rating: R Violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What was Gimli doing during The Hobbit? This is one possible
answer.
TH6: Sucking Eggses by Marta
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1379
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Gollum remembers a Yule of his youth.
TH7: The Emblem You Chose by Wild Iris
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1468915/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Thranduil, the Elvenking of Mirkwood, pays his respects at the tomb
of Thorin Oakenshield.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
THA1: Aunt Dora Baggins
Chance Meeting at Rivendell
THA2: Eledhwen
Estel and the Hobbit
THA3: Gecco
Of Fire and Stars
THA4: Marta
Sucking Eggses
THA5: Thevina
Another Mother's Son
THA6: TreeHugger
In the Hall of the Wood Elf King
THA7: Wild Iris
The Emblem You Chose
This category ends on October 30th at 11:59pm Central US time
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder
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Msg# 2478
Horror and Mystery are now closed! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 21, 2004 - 0:05:07 Topic ID# 2478--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2479
Re: The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 21, 2004 - 1:08:20 Topic ID# 2477Official Voting Ballot
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TH3: Estel and the Hobbit by Eledhwen
Oh, lovely story! I can just see this happening this way, since it's obvious
in the books that Aragorn knew Bilbo fairly well at the time of the council.
Well done.
TH4: In the Hall of the Wood Elf King by TreeHugger
So, did you ever think one little question would lead to something like this
story? Legolas the Sparkly Green..*hee* I almost felt quite sorry for
Thranduil by the end, since he didn't seem to have *any* control over his
family, let alone his kingdom! No wonder he later had a reputation for
drinking. *wink* Actually, he probably felt like he'd been drinking all the
time, so I'm sure he figured why not? There was so much happening all the time,
the story moved very fast, though at times I wondered if you'd get it all
wrapped up. But you did, and quite well, too. I liked meeting Tanglinna, it
was nice to see one of Thranduil's commanders know how far he could push.
*Grin* Great story!
TH7: The Emblem You Chose by Wild Iris
I just re-read The Hobbit so your piece was particularly poignant, showing
again how Thorin's people loved him, and how Thranduil respected him as well.
(And I still don't see where anyone gets that Thranduil is mean, I thought he
showed some great restraint, really)
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Msg# 2480
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Larian Elensar October 21, 2004 - 1:09:41 Topic ID# 2474Official Voting Ballot
Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
Cross-cultural
LCC1: Folk of a Different Race by Lemur
I loved celeborn and Aragorn speaking to Legolas and Gimli; separately, but
both saying the same thing. Start, even if you won't see the finish. And
their later conversations with themselves, I thought they actually progressed
quite naturally, the didn't just become friends, they worked towards it, which
made it a lot more...stable. Well done.
Cross-cultural
LCC2: Horses and Verses by Altariel and Isabeau
Nicely done, changing the POV and showing just how easily things can be
misunderstood! I had no worries though, that they wouldn't end up being good
friends, as well as family...
Cross-cultural
LCC4: Keeping Secrets by Deborah Judge
Oh! Totally excellent twist. Lovely!
Cross-cultural
LCC5: Knife Work by Thundera Tiger
I honestly never thought much about that quote before, but I will now, every
time I read the books. I guess it never occurred to me that it took that much
time to use his knife (knives?) instead of a bow. Duh to me! Well done.
Cross-cultural
LCC8: Those Who Remain by Marnie
I read this every couple of months (or maybe weeks), and it always cheers me
up. At the end of the book, I always want to ask 'what happened after?' Thank
you for telling part of what did happen! Sam and Celeborn having something in
common like that was new to me, I mean, I never thought much about it for sure.
So very believable. Well done!
LCC9: To the Bottle I go by Pervinca
Nice look into the fellowship after the fact, looking to their futures. (I have
a hard time seeing Eomer being the big lush of the group though..*Grin*)
Drabble
LD1: "And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't brokený" by Lindelea
Oh, I can see this. Smoke and Flame. *shiver*
Drabble
LD3: I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me by Lindelea
Oh. I'm thinking of poor scared Pippin watching over Merry. *sad*
Drabble
LD4: My Elf by Alexcat
Groan. The elf is mine. Indeed.
Drabble
LD5: That Which is Fairest by Elana
Oh, yes, Gimli would compare it all to metal, but he grew too, beyond that, and
opened his mind along with his heart.
Drabble
LD7: The Stone Tree by LKK
Another one where Gimli takes what he knows and sees the good in something
(someone) he doesn't know.
Vignette
LV1: A Gift for Pippin by Gwynnyd
Awww! Yes. You don't see it in the movies, but you do in the books, how Pippin
grows and changes. I'm glad Legolas acknowledges that, kind elf that he is!
Vignette
LV2: A Way Opens by Thevina Finduilas
Nice look at Merry and Eowyn's relationship. Definitely not something that
Tolkien was too specific about, though he hinted that they might be close.
Socks! *laughs* That's a pretty humorous way to tie their friendship
together.
Vignette
LV5: Goes A Courting by Chris
Yes, what a romance! Wonderful story!
Vignette
LV6: Repairs by Isabeau of Greenlea
Lovely. I enjoyed seeing this little scene. I wondered a lot where Legolas
got more arrows and if the others spent their free time sharpening their
blades, I'm glad Gimli had somewhere to fix his axe.
Vignette
LV7: Sting by TreeHugger
Oh! I loved this! Really, such a nice warm feeling, seeing Glorfindel and
Bilbo talking, and Glorfindel remembering. Well done.
L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene Campos
I thought of movie-Gimli and comic relief, that's true, but I wasn't as
horrified by it as some of my acquaintances in the fandom. I liked how you
showed him, not as a buffoon, but secure enough to be the clown at times. Well
done.
L3: Aglarond by ErinRua
Oh, that I could describe anything as well as you did the Glittering Caves. And
I loved the relationship between Gimli and Legolas as you showed it.
L5: Estel by Viv
Wow! You really got me with the last few lines--noble eagle, and hope, and
Elrond watching in pity and humility. *sniffs* Well done.
L6: For The Road by Alawa
Oh! I loved this! I can just see Bilbo making Aragorn sit there and taste
those apples too! Lovely heart-warming story.
L7: Gilraen's Memorial by Alawa
I want more! Maybe you've already written it, but I really want to know more
about Gilraen and Elrond and how their whole dynamic worked. Aragorn's
conversation with her memorial was wonderful, and really, it did make me
curious to find out more!
L8: Leave Us Not In Darkness by Zimraphel
*shudders* I can't think of anything else to say, such a sad sad story.
L12: Promises by Viv
Interesting format. I think you got the message across though. It was
emotional and had action. I wasn't too sure about reading it after I read the
note at the beginning, I think you should take it down, or put it at the end,
as it sort of made me look hard for whatever was 'wrong' when, really, I didn't
notice anything, I just enjoyed the story.
L13: The Gift of Iluvatar by Ariel
Lovely story. I especially liked Aragorn's insight that Frodo himself had
prepared for his quest to end with his own death. Sort of adds to the idea that
he'd saved the world, but not for himself.
L15: Waiting, Wondering, Wandering, Wishing by Gonzai
Nicely done. I liked the little scenes between each of the characters. It was
good to get to know Merry and Pippin, and the others better.
L16: Whistling Past the Graveyard by Shunt
ooh..yes, I think Gimli missed a step though! I knew exactly what you meant
about touching each stair! Well done!
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the
story, here):
Drabble
LDA1: Alexcat
My Elf
More proof that Alexcat gets to the point without coming up short in plot,
characterization, or emotions.
LA22: Marnie
Those Who Remain
Another great Celeborn story from Marnie, who has never yet let me down when it
comes to reading one of her stories. The fact is, Marnie plus elves equals a
great story.
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Msg# 2481
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Stephanie Howe October 21, 2004 - 9:57:22 Topic ID# 2474Just a little confused . . .
Coriel
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Cross-cultural
LCC1: Folk of a Different Race by Lemur
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1102337/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After his death, Legolas and Gimli remember Gandalf's words.
Cross-cultural
LCC2: Horses and Verses by Altariel and Isabeau
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1263984/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After Theoden's funeral feast, Eomer and Faramir have a little
chat.
Cross-cultural
LCC3: I Return by Coriel
URL:
http://www.tolkienonline.com/reading_room/author.cfm?aid=25859&StartNum=41&PageNum=3&oby=datedesc
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The homeward journey for Legolas, from Gondor to Greenwood and
beyond. Some insight into what the War of the Ring must have meant to the
quietest and oft neglected member of the Fellowship, together with his and
Gimli's subsequent efforts to achieve acceptance in opposing worlds.
Cross-cultural
LCC4: Keeping Secrets by Deborah Judge
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1131858/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Gimli and Eowyn discover that they have something in common. TTT
movie-based.
Cross-cultural
LCC5: Knife Work by Thundera Tiger
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1110291/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Vignette set in the middle of Helm's Deep. A quick explanation for
something odd that happens in the middle of the Orc-killing game between
Legolas and Gimli. Aragorn and Eomer appear, too.
Cross-cultural
LCC6: River of Fallen Stars by Fileg
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1747
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir and Pippin see stars in the Anduin as they share some old
ghosts and a bottle of wine.
Cross-cultural
LCC7: Sara-Lisse by Erin's Daughter
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2487
Rating: R
Romance Partners: Aragorn/Arwen
Summary: Aragorn and Arwen are married and all they have fought for is
theirs -- but great love often comes at a great price. Contains explicit
het.
Cross-cultural
LCC8: Those Who Remain by Marnie
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233093/1/
Rating: G battle
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What can Sam Gamgee and Lord Celeborn of Lorien possibly have in
common?
Cross-cultural
LCC9: To the Bottle I go by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1214
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A group of friends spend an evening at Gondor's finest inn,
remembering the ladies they fought their battles for.
Drabble
LD1: "And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken." by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1532
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A quiet moment in the Houses of Healing.
Drabble
LD2: Fireside Chats by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1536
Rating: G tiny bit of violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Frodo, Fire and the Ring.
Drabble
LD3: I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1534
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Pippin sits with Merry in the Houses of Healing.
Drabble
LD4: My Elf by Alexcat
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/I_P/M/MyElf.htm
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Legolas/Gimli
Summary: Gimli stakes his claim.
Drabble
LD5: That Which is Fairest by Elana
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7780
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Gimli ponders his gift from Galadriel.
Drabble
LD6: The Moon Sees Somebody I'd Like to See by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=2568
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Merry sits with Pippin after the Black Gate.
Drabble
LD7: The Stone Tree by LKK
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1993&cid=8304
Rating: G Graphic imagery
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: During that restless third night of The Great Chase, Gimli ponders
his elven companion.
Gondor
LG1: All of Them Together by Fileg
URL: http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1791
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Boromir and Thorongil, singing and an honorable surrender.
Gondor
LG2: As Truly as the Arrow Flies by Fileg
URL: http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1912
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir recalls how his grandfather taught him about the stars.
Gondor
LG3: Breathe by Fileg
URL: http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1575
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Throughout their lives, Boromir and Faramir meeting at the Anduin.
Gondor
LG4: Failure by Liz
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1708
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: As events reach a climax in the War of the Ring, the son of the
Lord of Gondor returns to Minas Tirith, after great deeds.
Gondor
LG5: Queen's Gambit by A L Milton
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2768
Rating: PG adult implications
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir and Arwen play a game of chess in the summer of 3019 TA.
Politics, the Alekhine Defence by any other name and Faramir taking his
clothes off - a description that is as accurate as it is misleading.
Incomplete
LI1: An Aussie in King Aragorn's Court by Lady Coralie
URL:
http://www.tolkienonline.com/reading_room/author.cfm?aid=25859&oby=dateasc
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What happens when you put an Aussie in Middle Earth? Culture clash
is an understatement.
Incomplete
LI2: Lie Down in Darkness, Rise Up from the Ash by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=8
Rating: PG13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: This is a very dark AU for LOTR. The premise: without Gollum, how
does the Quest turn out? Angsty drama ensues as the storyline of the Lord of
the Rings unfolds differently as we attempt to take "the road less traveled
by."
Incomplete
LI3: Messages by Shakes
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/743200/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Battle in Osgiliath, prior to the Ring War.
Incomplete
LI4: Once More Into the Urple Depths of OFUM by Camilla Sandman
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/950294/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: unrequited, otherwise canonical, for the most part
Summary: New movie, new students, new lust objects, new mini-Balrogs and a
whole new curriculum. That's right, children. OFUM is back. But wait. It's
no longer the only University in town. MUSM? What the.?
Incomplete
LI5: Recaptured! by Llinos
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/970288/1/ and
HREF="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/969855/1/
Rating: R
Romance Partners: none, but Merry and Pippin have a close relationship. The
reader can decide how close.
Summary: An AU LotR story -- The Uruk-hai recapture Merry and Pippin and
because of this the story changes. The hobbits suffer many trials and
tribulations as a consequence and are led in a completely different
direction to the original story.
Incomplete
LI6: The Fellowship of the Mutants by Samus
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1628447/1/
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What LOTR might have been like if the characters had the powers of
X-Men characters.
Poetry
LP1: All Ye Fellowship of Nine by Azalais
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=670&NGID=31
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: LoTR retold to a well-known festive Victorian tune.
Poetry
LP2: Finduilas by Fileg
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=2&STID=1419&SPO
rdinal=1
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: This is a love poem that was written too late -- a villanelle for
Finduilas..
Poetry
LP3: Goldberry's Song by Vulgarweed
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=809
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The smitten River-Daughter tries to get a rhyme in edgewise.
Poetry
LP4: Samwise Did See by Moralanqua
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=926
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sam laments the days of the Fellowship.
Poetry
LP5: Song Fight at the Swan and Cygnet Saloon by Chathol-Linn
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2299
Rating: R
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The story of how a couple of archers, Bard and Legolas, resolved a
gambling argument, mellowed out some Orcs, and named a new tavern drink in
the process.
Poetry
LP6: The Lion and the Swan by ErinRua
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1606&NGID=72
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Eomer/Lothiriel
Summary: A poem of Eomer of Rohan, from musings by his bride, Lothiriel of
Dol Amroth.
Poetry
LP7: Tickle the Ranger by Alawa
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1801
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A child's verse. Come tickle the Ranger... You know you want to!
Poetry
LP8: War Now Calls Us by Elvenesse
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2361
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A poem from the midst of the battle of the Pelennor Fields, after
Eomer sees the (assumed) dead Eowyn.
Poetry
LP9: Wishes of a King by White Gull
URL:
http://www.frodosharem.org/cgi-bin/stories/display.cgi?id=287&sort=date&stor
yview=toc&chapter=1&cat=7
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Aragorn remembers from whence his kingship came.
Vignette
LV1: A Gift for Pippin by Gwynnyd
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2971
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Poor Pippin. He is traumatized from being exposed to the Eye of
Sauron. Everyone thinks he's been really stupid *again* and no one gives him
any sympathy for being tortured by Sauron... except Legolas. Pippin really
didn't do so badly, when you get right down to it.
Vignette
LV2: A Way Opens by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2698
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: "Where will wants not, a way opens," Eowyn says in The Two Towers.
A series of vignettes about Merry and Eowyn, boots, the afterlife, and joy
in unlikely friendships.
Vignette
LV3: After Such Knowledge by Azalais
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1522
Rating: G N/A
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: While the battle rages on the Pelennor Field, the aged Keeper of
Minas Tirith's House of Lore remembers the last time Mithrandir came to the
White City and sought his help.
Vignette
LV4: For Pity's Sake by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1841411/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Mirkwood sentries assigned to guard Gollum take pity on him,
with horrific results.
Vignette
LV5: Goes A Courting by Chris
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=244&cid=908
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A dwarf and his pursuits.
Vignette
LV6: Repairs by Isabeau of Greenlea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/883019/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After the battle of Helm's Deep, Gimli fixes his axe.
Vignette
LV7: Sting by TreeHugger
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233315/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Bilbo learns of the origins of his little sword from Glorfindel.
Vignette
LV8: The Hours by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3118
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A set of vignettes which all take place during one particularly
challenging day during the War of the Ring, March 14, 3019. The vignettes
are based around the monastic services of the hours, seven in all, from 3:15
a.m. to 7:30 p.m; additionally, each vignette focuses on one of the senses-
taste, touch, etc. Some are well-known characters in well-known scenarios,
others are more obscure.
L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene Campos
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1043
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: "What is Gimli Thinking Each Time He Makes A Joke?" Set directly
after the battle for Helm's Deep, this movie-verse story contains spoilers,
angst, and Dwarf-stripping. You have been warned.
L2: A True Dwarf by PoweroftheBook
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=840
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Gimli and OFC
Summary: A bride has reservations about her husband-to-be, and he assuages
them in his own inimitable fashion. Written because Gimli needs someone to
come home to as much as any handsome Elf does.
L3: Aglarond by ErinRua
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1394
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A dwarf, a cave and a claustrophobic elf. Wherein Gimli and Legolas
venture into the Crystal Caves of Aglarond at the war's end, and Legolas is
lost for words. NO slash.
L4: Answering Machines of Middle Earth by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=409
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: If they had answering machines and voice mail in Middle-earth, what
would you hear?
L5: Estel by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=290
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A mortal boy living in Rivendell must have overheard things, must
have sensed his uniqueness. And his burden.
L6: For The Road by Alawa
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1022638/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: While preparing to depart for the Havens, Bilbo receives a final
letter from Aragorn.
L7: Gilraen's Memorial by Alawa
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1177897/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Before the Fellowship's departure from Rivendell, Aragorn thinks
about Arwen, Elrond and his duty while visiting Gilraen's grave.
L8: Leave Us Not In Darkness by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1405254/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Gandalf, Aragorn and Legolas enter the Tower of Orthanc for
the first time, they discover Saruman's most vile deed.
L9: Lord of the Rings: Kyshri's Story by Lady Shinigami
URL: http://www.geocities.com/reaper_nanashi/LOTR-Tale_1.html
Rating: PG-13 sex scenes
Romance Partners: Legolas/f
Summary: This is the battle at Amon Hen where Boromir is killed, and the
Fellowship is split. Part of a 10th Walker story.
L10: Moria's Revenge by Kookaburra, Llinos, and Marigold
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/972596/1/
Rating: R
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The orcs of Moria capture and torture Pippin. When he is finally
rescued he faces a long period of healing, in the hands of the Fellowship
and the elves of Lothlorien. And when Gollum attacks and injures Frodo, who
will then take the Ring to the fire?
L11: Only the Beginning by Cassia
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1644976/1/
Rating: G language
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Slightly extended and appended version of part of the Coronation
scene near the end of ROTK. Decidedly Aragorn & Legolas centric.
L12: Promises by Viv
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=546
Rating: PG N/A
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Legolas never had a wife, but that doesn't mean he never had a
love. A short history of what was and what might have been, had the war not
interrupted.
L13: The Gift of Iluvatar by Ariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1267180/1/
Rating: G vile deeds of Saruman
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: From the hobbits' fall at Mt. Doom to Sam's waking in Ithilien...
the story Tolkien only hinted at. What really happened when all the healing
powers of wizards, elves and men were summoned to insure that this was not
the end of all things for the halflings? Sorrow, hope and healing in a
strictly canon gapfiller.
L14: To Dream by Iluvien
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1352163/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: Elladan/F
Summary: Oloriel, an Elf maiden from Lothlorien has by some reason unknown
to either of them, been meeting Elladan in her dreams. They have both been
developing feelings for each other, and this is where they finally express
their feelings.
L15: Waiting, Wondering, Wandering, Wishing by Gonzai
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=308&SPOrdinal=1
Rating: PG Violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A series of four missing scenes from RotK.
L16: Whistling Past the Graveyard by Shunt
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2070
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Fellowship pass the defiled dwarven tombs in Moria.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
Drabble
LDA1: Alexcat
My Elf
Drabble
LDA2: Elana
That Which is Fairest
Drabble
LDA3: Lindelea
And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken., Fireside Chats, I See
the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me, The Moon Sees Somebody I'd Like to See
Drabble
LDA4: LKK
The Stone Tree
Poetry
LPA1: Alawa
Tickle the Ranger
Poetry
LPA2: Azalais
All Ye Fellowship of Nine
Poetry
LPA3: Chathol-Linn
Song Fight at the Swan and Cygnet Saloon
Poetry
LPA4: Elvenesse
War Now Calls Us
Poetry
LPA5: ErinRua
The Lion and the Swan
Poetry
LPA6: Fileg
Finduilas
Poetry
LPA7: Moralanqua
Samwise Did See
Poetry
LPA8: Vulgarweed
Goldberry's Song
Poetry
LPA9: White Gull
Wishes of a King
Vignette
LVA1: Azalais
After Such Knowledge
Vignette
LVA2: Chris
Goes A Courting
Vignette
LVA3: Gwynnyd
A Gift for Pippin
Vignette
LVA4: Isabeau of Greenlea
Repairs
Vignette
LVA5: Thevina Finduilas
A Way Opens, The Hours
Vignette
LVA6: TreeHugger
Sting
Vignette
LVA7: Zimraphel
For Pity's Sake
LA1: A L Milton
Queen's Gambit
LA2: Alawa
Gilraen's Memorial, For the Road
LA3: Altariel and Isabeau
Horses and Verses
LA4: Ariel
The Gift of Iluvatar
LA5: Camilla Sandman
Once More Into the Urple Depths of OFUM
LA6: Cassia
Only the Beginning
LA7: Coriel
I Return
LA8: Deborah Judge
Keeping Secrets
LA9: Dwimordene
Lie Down in Darkness, Rise Up from the Ash
LA10: ErinRua
Aglarond
LA11: Erin's Daughter
Sara-Lisse
LA12: Fileg
River of Fallen Stars., All of Them Together, As Truly as the Arrow Flies,
Breathe
LA13: Gonzai
Waiting, Wondering, Wandering, Wishing
LA14: Iluvien
To Dream
LA15: Kookaburra, Llinos, and Marigold
Moria's Revenge
LA16: Lady Coralie
An Aussie in King Aragorn's Court
LA17: Lady Shinigami
Lord of the Rings: Kyshri's Story
LA18: Lemur
Folk of a Different Race
LA19: Lindelea
Answering Machines of Middle Earth
LA20: Liz
Failure
LA21: Llinos
Recaptured!
LA22: Marnie
Those Who Remain
LA23: Pervinca
To the Bottle I go
LA24: PoweroftheBook
A True Dwarf
LA25: Samus
The Fellowship of the Mutants
LA26: Shakes
Messages
LA27: Shunt
Whistling Past the Graveyard
LA28: Suzene Campos
A Different Kind of Sacrifice
LA29: Thundera Tiger
Knife Work
LA30: Viv
Estel, Promises
LA31: Zimraphel
Leave Us Not In Darkness
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Msg# 2482
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 21, 2004 - 10:43:10 Topic ID# 2474From: Stephanie Howe [mailto:coriel_elfwyn@outdrs.net]
Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 9:57 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: Re: [MEFAwards] The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot
>Sorry, but after browsing the ballot I'm a bit concerned about the sitelisted for "I Return". To my knowledge it isn't at Tolkien Online, and when
I last checked the listing here it was a link to Stories of Arda, where it
was supposed to be. Is this a last minute glitch or have wires been crossed
somewhere for a while?
>Just a little confused . . .Me, too, Coriel. It's definitely the wrong URL. Maybe Tolkien Online
changed things around. I don't know. Anyway, can you give us a good link to
the story? It's one I want to try and read. I'll get it fixed ASAP.
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"I Return"
http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1162
--- Ainaechoiriel <mefaadmin@earthlink.net> wrote:
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Stephanie Howe [mailto:coriel_elfwyn@outdrs.net]
> Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 9:57 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: Re: [MEFAwards] The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot
>
>
> >Sorry, but after browsing the ballot I'm a bit concerned about the site
> listed for "I Return". To my knowledge it isn't at Tolkien Online, and when
> I last checked the listing here it was a link to Stories of Arda, where it
> was supposed to be. Is this a last minute glitch or have wires been crossed
> somewhere for a while?
>
> >Just a little confused . . .
>
> Me, too, Coriel. It's definitely the wrong URL. Maybe Tolkien Online
> changed things around. I don't know. Anyway, can you give us a good link to
> the story? It's one I want to try and read. I'll get it fixed ASAP.
>
> --Ainaechoiriel
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>
> "This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
> it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
>
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>
>
>
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LadyCoralie
Similar to Coriel, I guess. It's wrong on the web page too.
--- Larian Elensar <larian_elensar@yahoo.com> wrote:
> Here's the right link
>
> "I Return"
> http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1162
Thanks!
Coriel
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Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 12:21 PM
Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Link to I Return
Oh, I think I see the confusion...the link went to a
LadyCoralie
Similar to Coriel, I guess. It's wrong on the web page too.
--- Larian Elensar <larian_elensar@yahoo.com> wrote:
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>
> "I Return"
> http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1162
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-----Original Message-----
From: Larian Elensar [mailto:larian_elensar@yahoo.com]
Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 11:19 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: RE: [MEFAwards] Link to I Return
Here's the right link
"I Return"
http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1162
--- Ainaechoiriel <mefaadmin@earthlink.net> wrote:
>ASAP.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Stephanie Howe [mailto:coriel_elfwyn@outdrs.net]
> Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 9:57 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: Re: [MEFAwards] The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot
>
>
> >Sorry, but after browsing the ballot I'm a bit concerned about the
> >site
> listed for "I Return". To my knowledge it isn't at Tolkien Online,
> and when I last checked the listing here it was a link to Stories of
> Arda, where it was supposed to be. Is this a last minute glitch or
> have wires been crossed somewhere for a while?
>
> >Just a little confused . . .
>
> Me, too, Coriel. It's definitely the wrong URL. Maybe Tolkien Online
> changed things around. I don't know. Anyway, can you give us a good
> link to the story? It's one I want to try and read. I'll get it fixed
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>
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Msg# 2487
Re: Crossovers--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 21, 2004 - 16:27:14 Topic ID# 2433From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Saturday, October 16, 2004 12:01 AM
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Subject: [MEFAwards] Crossovers--Official Voting Ballot
Crossover
Official Voting Ballot
C1: A Rift in the Continuum by Aralanthiriel
Funny, though through the silliness lies some rather violent things. Dead
high school girls and bird watchers, and even worse: dreams of Legolas
hacking away with a sword at an ABBA-singing Morgoth! Fortunately, the
conspiracy behind Mulder's missing sister saved the day for all of us, and
Legolas will eventually learn English.
C4: Kings of the Sea by Eledhwen
The characters certainly felt right, even in unfamiliar waters. I would
have liked a mention of Jack's strange swaying and what Aragorn or Legolas
thought about it. It was funny in parts, though I could have used more
action.
C5: Spirits of the House by Altariel
Less of a crossover and more of a morphing, Altariel bring the plot of A
Christmas Carol to Minas Tirith in the Third Age. Denethor must meet the
three ghosts and live the consequences of it. A well done morphing, I must
say! The ghostly visits were so well done and the characterization of
Denethor was wonderful.
C7: The Corsair Papers by Fileg & Flick
Saruman's song was just brilliant, I could hear it, the tune and everything,
in my head as I read. This whole thing is hilarious. Except for the part
about Legolas and Gimli. Ahem!
C8: There and Back Again: The Fellowship Goes to Stalag 13 by San Antonio
Rose
While this story has some of the fun of Hogan's Heroes and mixes some of the
seriousness of LOTR, it also packs some truthful history in a fairly short
package. I was impressed with the tidbits of historical knowledge that
showed through the story, and also the development of the HH characters. Not
having seen Newsies, I can't comment on those much. I'm impressed that S.A.
Rose could keep the Fellowship in character in such a setting. I especially
liked Legolas, of course, and Merry. This is Book!Merry who impressed me
with his quick thinking and sharpness. Way to go!
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
CA1: Altariel
Altariel deftly brought A Christmas Carol into the LOTR world without making
it campy or too familiar. She has quite a talent.
CA2: Aralanthiriel
Aralanthiriel keeps things short and sweet, and still funny, and the
characters still feel right. Mulder's enthusiam, Scully's skepticm, CSM's
arrogance, etc.
CA5: Fileg & Flick
These two are dangerous together, I think. :-) In a good way. Gilbert and
Sullivan in disguise perhaps! Quite humorous.
CA8: San Antonio Rose
I was impressed by San Antonio Rose's attention to detail and history. And
her ability to look into each of her characters and find their motivations.
She carries a serious theme balanced inside a humorous story. Or vice versa.
And that takes talent.
This category ends on October 25th at 11:59pm, Central US time.
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Msg# 2488
Re: The Silmarillion--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Brett October 21, 2004 - 17:11:03 Topic ID# 2434>would make Stephen Hawking shudder without being contradictory. Her
> SA1: Andreth
>
> Where to start? Her cheracter's are multidimesional in a way that
plots twist in a way that would make Clancy smile yet you don't need
a crib sheet. In otherwords, her stories are as realistic as writing
in fanfiction can be. She doesn't try to emulate the Prof, just
builds multitiered, gated, liveable and rentable sandcastles in his
sandbox.
>Reading her stories is what got me hooked on Sil fanfiction
>
>
> SA8: Finch
>
> Somebody else wrote that Finch was their first inspiration, me too.
I have even followed her writing into HP fanfiction. Who else can
pull off a Sil/HP crossover? Some writers are so good they overpower
you with skill, Finch's writing is so good you think its canon.
>write. Reading her stuff makes my ego weep. I can't even get close.
>
>
>
> SA22: Viv
>
> Viv simultaneously inspired me to write and discouraged me to
In her stories, she writes just enough detail for your imagination to
connect the dots and yet leaves little doubt.
I have no other specifics except that her writing moved me.
>home runs. Most writers have a few good fics. All her fics are grand
>
>
> SA24: Zimraphel
>
> I can think of no other writer in the fandom who has hit so many
slams.
Some writers are as good (at most 5) but I can't think of any who are
as prolific with out a drop off in quality.
Inglor
Msg# 2489
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Msg# 2491
Re: The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot Posted by M E October 21, 2004 - 23:25:26 Topic ID# 2477>This is a lovely telling of a possible event! Very imaginative, and just
>
>TH2: Chance Meeting at Rivendell by Aunt Dora Baggins
>
>URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3152
>
>Rating: G
>
>Romance Partners: n/a
>
>Summary: When Bilbo visited Rivendell in "The Hobbit", Aragorn was a child
>of nine or ten and was living in Rivendell. This story supposes that they
>met and became friends. The story is a simple account of their growing
>friendship, and includes foreshadowing of events to come.
>
how I'd picture the young Aragorn. Bilbo is true to character as well, and
delightful. A good read.
>A very good read. Well written and beautiful. Both Aragorn and Bilbo are
>
>TH3: Estel and the Hobbit by Eledhwen
>
>URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=429
>
>Rating: G
>
>Romance Partners: n/a
>
>Summary: Set during Bilbo's sojourn in Rivendell during 'The Hobbit',
>book-canon; light-hearted but telling also of deeper events..
delightful, as well as the supporting characters.
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Msg# 2494
Re: The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 22, 2004 - 17:01:24 Topic ID# 2477---------------------------
The Hobbit
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STORIES
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>>TH1: Another Mother's Son by ThevinaEspecially after a victory, itýs so easy to forget that not everyone came
through the fight intact. This is a great reminder of what Lake-town lost
the night Smaug died. We really donýt see enough fics of this kind,
especially not ones so tenderly written.
>>TH2: Chance Meeting at Rivendell by Aunt Dora BagginsThis was an excellent look at a fairly young Estel. Heýs definitely a
nine-year-old in some respects, but in other ways, heýs unusually mature and
quick for his age. I love all the foreshadowing that went into this fic,
such as the dream Estel had about somehow becoming Beren and returning to
Lýthien, who dwelt in Rivendell. Very telling. Bilboýs characterization was
spot-on, I felt, and it seemed very appropriate to me that Estel taught him
a few basic tricks with his sword. Good friendship foundation story!
>>TH3: Estel and the Hobbit by EledhwenAnother good story of Estel meeting Bilbo, but actually, I like this story
best for the conversation between Gandalf and Elrond in which they talk
about interfering in other peopleýs affairs. For some reason, that really
amused me. Gilraen was another welcome surprise, and enjoyed her solemn
characterization. It makes a lot of sense to me.
>>TH4: In the Hall of the Wood Elf King by TreeHuggerAbsolutely hilarious! And written with that same devil-may-care humor that
landed thirteen dwarves in Bilboýs parlor one afternoon. The willingness to
take things to the extreme is part of what makes ýThe Hobbitý such a fun
read, and the light-heartedness of hobbits in general seems to have infected
most of Mirkwood. The Wood-elves are hilarious in this story, and the OCs
are remarkably complete, even the ones who appear only briefly. My favorite
is probably Tanglinna, whom I see as Glorfindelýs kindred spirit, actually,
but Brethil and Tavor are wonderful characters, too. The dwarves were
brilliant, particularly poor Bombur, and the continual desire to eat oak
leaves left me in stitches. Finally, poor Mr. Baggins is having such a
trying time, and yet such a fun one! I think the real victims in this story
are Thranduil and Legolas, though some of it they did have coming to them.
Brilliant story in which there really isnýt a clear villain (with the
possible exception of forgetful spiders and singing Orcs).
>>TH5: Of Fire and Stars by GeccoGo Gimli! The dwarf is more than restored to glory after his
ratherýinteresting stint as comic relief throughout much of the movies. He
had a few good moments in the movies, I suppose, but this ficýthis fic shows
Gimli for the warrior he really is. And also for the person he is. The
moments of battle were good, and Gimliýs anger as it developed throughout
the story was intense and believable. But my favorite moment was actually a
somewhat quiet scene in which Gimli is asked (after a rather gruesome
bloodbath during which he avenged his dead friends and their family) if he
found what he was looking for. Gimliýs response made the fic for me when he
said no, that he instead found something in himself that he wished heýd
never seen. This isnýt a bloodthirsty depiction of a monster in dwarfýs
clothing or a bumbling sidekick who makes witty remarks and tumbles down the
sides of hills. This is a balanced, thinking, fierce, and incredibly loyal
dwarf who clings to the hope that his father is still alive and wrestles
with ideas of rage and vengeance. Very well-rounded look at one of my
favorite Tolkien characters.
>>TH6: Sucking Eggses by MartaAmazingly convincing portrayal of Gollum. And this is a wonderful moment
caught out of time. I really can see this fitting neatly into canon as Bilbo
asks about eggs and Gollum tries desperately to remember. Itýs intriguing to
see just how much of Smýagol Bilbo was able to bring to the surface. I think
Slinkerýs memories are stronger than Stinker anticipates. Also interesting
is how his thoughts kept straying to the Ring in the beginning, but as
Gollum went further back, Smýagol became stronger and thoughts of the Ring
began to fade away. Very nice touch and an excellent job of showing just how
Gollum remembered the answer to the riddle about eggs.
>>TH7: The Emblem You Chose by Wild IrisBrilliant little vignette! I really wish Tolkien had included more details
about Thorinýs tomb and the fact that everyone paid tribute to the dwarf.
Elves and dwarves can come together, though it seemed to take extreme
circumstances to do it in this case. Nevertheless, there was a very
peaceful, somber feeling about this fic that gave me hope for future
friendship, however tentative it might be.
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AUTHORS
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>>THA1: Aunt Dora BagginsDora does an excellent job of telling a fic that can stand on its own but
that is also clearly connected to larger events. The brief glimpse weýre
given of Estel and Bilbo is great within its own right, and itýs also a
wonderful echo of things to come.
>>THA3: GeccoI love Gimli, and I love the way that Gecco has written him. Gecco takes the
time to let Gimliýs anger and hurt fester, and then Gimli is set loose only
to find that vengeance isnýt all itýs cracked up to be. Much of the story is
told in flashbacks, which can be difficult, but Gecco pulls it off well.
Beorn and Gandalf are somewhat minor characters, but their personalities are
laid out well, and as for Gimli himselfýlet me just say that I love this
version of him. Gecco pays homage to my favorite dwarf and does him justice,
and for that I offer up an endless stream of thanks. Gecco takes into
account situations, Gimliýs relative youth, and when the Battle of Fire
Armies starts up, we dive into Tolkienýs work seamlessly. Beautiful
blending, great characterization, and a wonderful ability to deal with
feelings and the fiery emotions of the dwarves.
>>THA4: MartaMarta does something in her fic that I wish with all my heart I could do.
Marta adopts Gollumýs voice. Both voices, actually, because thereýs a
difference between the voice of Gollum and the voice of Smýagol. Itýs
subtle, to be sure, but itýs there, and Iým sitting here in awe trying to
figure out how it was done. I think Smýagolýs sentences are simpler and
shorter. Almost as though heýs a child coming from a more innocent time.
Maybe Iým reading too much into this, but however Marta did it, the result
is fantastic. Gollum is Gollum, Smýagol is Smýagol, and Marta gives us a
terrific glimpse into his mind as he recalls teaching his grandmother to
suck eggs. Good stuff!
>>THA6: TreeHuggerTreeHugger can write serious fics. I know because Iýve read some of them.
The fic here is not serious in the least, and what I love about it is the
sheer contrast in styles that TreeHugger uses. Earlier fics were more solemn
and dramatic, and the narrative reflected that. But with ýIn the Hall of the
Wood Elf King,ý TreeHugger shows us that sheýs just as capable of writing
hilarious dialogue, narrative, and situations. This story actually reminds
me a bit of some Shakespearean comedies in which nothing seems to go right
no matter how hard people try to make it work, and everything is taken as
far as it can go and then some. It requires a brave author to take so many
liberties with the characters, and it requires a talented author to make it
work. TreeHugger is both.
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Dwim's Silmarillion ballot Posted by dwimmer\_laik October 22, 2004 - 23:54:08 Topic ID# 2498S1-2: As Little Might Be Thought by Deborah Judge
This line is one of my Silmarillion favorites, and Deborah Judge has
done well to put flesh onto the unique relationship of Elrond, Elros,
and their foster-father, Maglor. One can only imagine how hard it must
have been for Elrond to remember his own parents and know he was being
raised by "the enemy"; it must have been hard to feel something for
Maglor, despite that knowledge. I adored the appearance of Eärendil,
and the reaction of Elros and Elrond to it, as well as Maglor and
Maedhros—heartbreaking, and yet awe-struck. You can feel the
proverbial earth shifting. Well-told!
First Age
S1-4: Dark Forge by Ithilwen
One can't blame Maeglin for breaking under torture, particularly not
when a loved one was threatened. That was never the trouble with
Maeglin, I fear. One does feel for him in this moment of treason and
surrender, though it isn't enough to excuse his later deeds.
First Age
S1-5: Driven By Fire by Starlight10
One usually doesn't think of the courage it took to turn back from the
Kin-slaying, when one had been already a rebel at heart. A well-picked
moment of introspection!
First Age
S1-6: Finrod's Oath by Jmac
Beautifully written commentary on love and regret. Beren, Finrod, and
Aegnor form the points of the constellation that sketches out the
combinations of love, commitment, and remorse: Aegnor forecloses on
love, and realizes only too late his mistake; Finrod postpones it in
favor of either another love (familial love, a love that remains, if
you will, grounded in childhood rather than an adult love that can
speak truth to family in actions); Beren alone pursues the possibility
of love to its end, yet even he knows anxiety—the grief of knowing
that his own life is too short for Luthien's; yet he is honest enough
to admit it and admit equally that he has no real choice in the
matter. Love binds if one allows it in fully. Finrod at least has a
chance to repay Beren and his father; he may also, though he doesn't
realize it in the story, have a chance to repay Amarie's faith in him,
for in sacrificing himself for Beren, he throws his lot in at last
with those who will have no more of regrets about love, but act to
further it at every opportunity, and whatever the consequences.
Wonderfully drawn, Jmac!
First Age
S1-7: Naming the Stones by Deborah Judge
This is a very powerful story, and it particularly strikes me as
appropriate, given the wretched conditions of the present time. How
does one forgive an age of betrayal and bloodshed, inhumanity and
hatefulness? How does one learn to see those who have wounded us most
deeply in a clear light, so that forgiveness can come about? These are
important questions both for fiction and for real life, and it's
wonderful to see them addressed so beautifully here. To name the
stones—to be truthful, to understand desire, and to renounce it while
forgiving all that was wrought in their names, is indeed the hardest
lesson to crack. And it can't be directly addressed or pursued,
either; it isn't something that can be directly aimed at and striven
for, especially given the lineage—a veritable genealogy—of guilt
passed down through blood and association. It takes years of allowing
oneself to come to understand oneself and others, and to learn to be
truthful in naming them and oneself. Galadriel here functions as her
own mirror, reflecting to Elrond what he is and needs to accept in
himself before he can genuinely accept the "sins" of others, including
Galadriel's. Celeborn, too, has a part to play in living forgiveness
for Elrond to see and understand. This is the Elrond of the books,
"kind as summer" and yet great—here he is at the beginning, when he
first enters into the realm of wisdom. Wonderful writing—clear,
simple, and there's a serenity or a song-like sense to it all that
fits Lothlórien perfectly, even when tension surges up in the third
chapter. Marvelous work!
First Age
S1-8: Pause by Sphinx
Interesting glimpse into Tuor's mind. I particularly enjoyed his
reflection on what the difference is between Elves and Men, that Elves
so seldom pledge themselves to a cause not their own, whereas mortals
seem to do so more often.
First Age
S1-10: Slouching Toward Gondolin by Fileg
This is a great little vignette. I adore this orc, who would give a
lesson in existential aesthetics to the Elves, if only they could
grasp it. "You are pig-iron and we are steel"—perfect inversion! The
orcs do come off rather badly in the Silmarillion, especially around
Doriath, where it seems one screaming human waving a sword can get
them to run; this orc, however, is purpose itself, and very much
grounded in his world of metal and hatred, attuned to the awful beauty
of destruction and drivenness (is that a word?). Eloquent madness from
the belly of a beast—well done!
First Age
S1-11: Steadfast by Zimraphel
Another lovely tale of forgiveness. Tuor is not one of those
characters I ever managed to fall in love with, but you might convince
me yet! The depiction of the wreck, and of Ossë's fury, was very well
done—it had a very visceral effect on me, and I found myself thinking
I could feel the water and the wind and taste the salt. But I think
what I liked best were the echoes of "Lord, I am not worthy to receive
you"—and yet, Voronwë has been chosen, just as Tuor has, and they are
given the grace to accept the call and the mission set them.
First Age
S1-12: When I Am Wise by Deborah Judge
I think this was the first story of the choice of Elros and Elrond
that I had ever read. It remains a beautiful piece of work, and in
Elrond we see the tearing pressure of conflicting desires: the desire
to be free of Arda as Men are free, and as Elros will be free, and the
desire for the wisdom to be a teacher for all those left in
Middle-earth. Good set-up, too, for the sequel, where we learn that
Elrond does indeed learn to forgive himself and others. I loved the
image of Galadriel at the end, dancing for joy, but also the fact that
it was Elros who first learned to forgive, as we see here when he
chides Elrond for thinking he might have killed Maglor.
Romance
SR1: Blood and Smoke by Dargelos
In this short fic of under 700 words, every single one of them counts.
This story stands out among the Elrond/Isildur slashes out there for
the well-handled present tense narrative that brings us close to
Elrond. You can taste the ashes to which Isildur will shortly return
when reading this story; mortality and loss are everywhere evoked.
There's a sense of rush and fear, not just of death but possibly of a
mistake, too; and coupled with it, the comfort that even a mistake can
bring when everything is reduced to the present, and to one
cataclysmic moment looming before Elrond and Isildur beyond which
there is no future but that indicated in the last line: mourning.
Romance
SR2: Fell Fire by Finch
Andreth deserves to speak her piece without the interruption of
Finrod, who earned my dislike as never before in the Athrabeth. The
bitterness is there, but so also the understanding of one who is
honest with herself, and who still loves Aegnor deeply. Lines that
made her rather pathetic in the original get a new meaning here, and I
am glad to have read it. Interesting way of putting the elvish point
of view in contrast with the mortal one, through the reflection on
what children mean to the two races. Well done!
Romance
SR6: The Unforgettable Fire by Ithilwen
"Caranthir in love" is just not a sentence that wants to be
constructed, and yet there it is. Love and politics, sexism and
racism, and the necessity of surrendering that which one loves most
dearly. Quite engrossing; never had any sort of feeling for Caranthir,
but this story can change that.
Second Age
S2-1: A Last Reckoning by Nol
You know, the more I think about this, the more I find myself wanting
to slate this in with "Iliad or the Poem of Force"—a book the author
would doubtless enjoy, given her interests, if she hasn't already.
What is it that tips the scale in an endeavor, particularly the
desperate one of war? We open "A Last Reckoning" with the telling
lines: "There were elves in his army who had seen the War of Wrath,
and still came to fight again. It was out of sheer vengeance."
Vengeance, force, violence—nobility it is not, whatever it is that
lends these elves the will to fight another year and yet that isn't
the point, as it is in so many other stories. We see in the flashbacks
to the arguments with Fingon the fundamental tenet: it is the
strongest force which wins, whether base or noble. Despair can be
strong enough to yield victory, and so may paradoxically give birth to
hope—the relationship of hope and despair is unstable, undermines
itself logically, but it is not logic that counts: the sheer, numbing,
feeling of being possessed by despair, of being dispossessed of hope
is what matters. Force is brute; it is purely quantitative here; its
quality does not matter—it's whether it is enough to effect
transformation, to give Gil-galad mastery of himself and others for
the necessary moment. Let force claim him, and then claim its due from
him, even as it did with Achilles—submit to what is strongest, and his
end may be delivered, if for a price. And as we know from
pseudo-history, and borrowing from another character who ought to
know: "[it, strength, force, despair, pick one] was enough—barely."
Second Age
S2-4: Oath Renewed by Inglor
I had never seen a story written around this particular question.
Great answer! Galadriel's line, about bestowing Narsil when it was
most needed reminded me vaguely of Gandalf's line to Thorin, that he
had chosen his own time to surrender heirlooms into the heir's
keeping. A very satisfying gap-filler.
S1: Cuivie by Zimraphel
Treebeard waking for the first time was just wonderful! I loved the
line about the many heartbeats, and the sort of sluggish, tree-ish
sense of existence evoked in this story. And what an appropriate note
to end on—literally!
S4: If Women had Ruled Middle Earth by Mouse
This is one of my favorite comic pieces. Smart, witty, and merciless.
I am particularly fond of the lines '"You don't have much to say
today, Undomiel."/ Arwen, her face serene, continued her neat,
practised little stitches in a soft black material. "Of course not,"
she said. "Aragorn is perfect." /"So is Tuor," said Idril, and the two
shared a smug, conspiratorial look of Elves who wed with Edain." It's
probably the Edain-centric fangirl in me that can't resist the jab at
the Elves, but it is just one great set of lines in a fic that should
have any reader with a modicum of humor laughing fit to choke. Ending
on Goldberry's misfortunate to put matters into perspective was
brilliant. I salute you!
S5: In the Seventh Age by Deborah Judge
A fitting end for Maglor, and not a word wasted. So much history is
evoked in so few words—you can feel the aging of the earth, and feel
jarred by railroad tracks in Doriath, in a city built over the bones
of Sirion, and the idea of the abandonment of earth by both Elves and
Men opens an incredible gap and feeling of distance. It's shocking,
almost, and then into it all comes this quiet in the person of
Galadriel. And yet after all that tremendous sense of movement, it's
the simple question—"Will you come now?"—that effects the final, most
profound movement: Maglor is moved to accept, at long last. The
opening out of the story onto the stars was a perfect ending. Well done!
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
SA6: Deborah Judge
As Little Might Be Thought, Naming the Stones, When I Am Wise, In the
Seventh Age
Deborah Judge has captured that sense of otherworldliness that an Elf
should have, and yet also the depth of their emotions, the greatness
of their grief, and also that serenity that comes of hard-won wisdom
Ages in the making. Thematically, she holds close to the theme of
forgiveness, of coming to wisdom, which I think suits the Silmarillion
as the necessary antidote to its furies and cruelties. And she does it
all in relatively little space, which gift of brevity I envy.
SA7: Fileg
Slouching Toward Gondolin
Fileg outdoes herself in this fic—what a great way to write an orc!
And what a scathing review of the Elves, that takes their virtues and
turns them into vices, while transforming them into "pig-iron" that
precedes the perfection of orcish steel. The Silmarillion does well to
showcase the hubris of the Noldor and other elvish "mistakes", yet
fileg goes a step further and gives us an eloquent critique from the
mouth of corruption. A very fitting commentary indeed.
SA8: Finch
Fell Fire
Finch makes the most, I think, of the Athrabeth, reading it against
itself somewhat, and in doing so is able to lift Andreth right off the
page and breathe a new life into her while still commenting on the
mortal-immortal divide.
SA11: Ithilwen
Dark Forge, The Unforgettable Fire
As I've noted before, I'm not the hugest Silm fan, but Ithilwen can
make me forget that. The world of the Silmarillion is brought to life
in her stories; the politics, the prejudices, and the torment of
love—she brings them together in vivid detail and the introspective
aspects of her stories feel perfectly natural.
SA12: Jmac
Finrod's Oath
Jmac can write wonderfully about the nuances of motivation, and she
has an excellent way of drawing out the dynamic between love, hope,
and despair. As an added bonus, we have another lovely commentary on
the nature of mortal and immortal relations, whether friendly or
romantic, whether "consummated" or denied or held in abeyance. She can
take a scene in the Silmarillion which is relatively brief, actually,
though admittedly among the more moving moments of Beren's story, and
break it open for the reader, give it nuance and a desperation that it
lacked for me hitherto.
SA16: Mouse
Beneath the Light, If Women had Ruled Middle Earth
Mouse is a great humorist who has an excellent grasp on the foibles of
the men of Middle-earth, whatever the species.
SA18: Nol
A Last Reckoning, Seashell,
What can I say of Nol's writing that I have not said before? She has a
knack for highlighting just that portion of a scene that you need in
order for the story to progress, and yet doing so in such a way that
the reader never feels cheated. The Silmarillion is often a distant
text for me precisely because of its Biblical tone; this is not to say
it isn't attempting to rework some great themes, but Nol has a knack
for bringing certain elements into focus by way of commentary on those
themes, and sometimes she puts them into question. A thoughtful writer
who is not afraid to play with the text.
SA24: Zimraphel
Steadfast, Cuivie, Gold Like Tears, Not for Pride Alone, Song of the
Waters
Zimraphel has a very smooth style and a knack for getting inside of
her characters' heads. Elves feel like Elves; Ents feel like you'd
imagine a tree would feel if it could talk and think; and the Powers
That Be In Arda have that double aspect of humane inhumanity that one
would expect of an angel.
Msg# 2499
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Msg# 2501
Re: The Silmarillion--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 23, 2004 - 0:28:17 Topic ID# 2434From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Saturday, October 16, 2004 12:01 AM
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Subject: [MEFAwards] The Silmarillion--Official Voting Ballot
The Silmarillion
Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2
lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and
then comment beneath them.
First Age
S1-1: A Brush with Destiny by Coriel
I admit that before this and another Sirion!Thranduil story, I had forgotten
to even think that Thranduil was there, but I'm sure he was. And this was a
nice little story for it. The description of Doriath was especially
wonderful. And that is a favorite Enya song. Many of hers do fit Elves well,
don't they?
First Age
S1-2: As Little Might Be Thought by Deborah Judge
Excusing my memory again, I'll do the best I can to remember this one. I'm
not fond of the Feanorians, as everyone knows, and it pains me to think that
Elrond and Elros were raised by two of them, yet Deborah gives a good
account of what might have been and how the two boys softened Maglor's
heart.
First Age
S1-5: Driven By Fire by Starlight10
Oh, that is sad, and very poignant. Yes, Finarfin turned back, heeding the
call after the Kinslaying, but he lost his children to Feanor and his brood
and so he would be sad by both the Kinslaying and the ones leaving.
First Age
S1-6: Finrod's Oath by Jmac
Wow. That gave me shivers. And brought me closer to Finrod's character,
what he must have felt. And it comes round ot the Curse, doesn't it? All
they would do would fail. And so it did. Even to the good among them, who
still chose wrongly. Beautiful, sad, moving story.
First Age
S1-7: Naming the Stones by Deborah Judge
I was very glad to see someone acknowledge Galadriel's shame for the
Kinslaying. I was shocked when I read the Silm to learn that she'd be held
so highly after all that. I liked that Celeborn also had something against
her, though I am glad he could forgive her. This was wonderfully written,
poetically and very Elvish-feeling.
First Age
S1-9: Red Dawn, Golden Flower by Viv
That was beautiful and sad and horrible. The battle on the pass, I mean by
that last adjective. Of course, I knew Glorfindel would fall but still it
hit me hard. I can't come up with any other words. Wonderful story. Well
done, Viv.
First Age
S1-10: Slouching Toward Gondolin by Fileg
That last full paragraph is the most powerful. Elves, the raw material;
Orcs the finished product. *shiver*
First Age
S1-11: Steadfast by Zimraphel
I fell in love with Voronwe when reading the UT. I'm very glad to see he
inspired Zimraphel. I like the backstory she gave him and the emotion she
rendered in the story. It felt very real, very Elvish, and very fitting
with Tolkien's work.
First Age
S1-12: When I Am Wise by Deborah Judge
Sorry I can't do any better thanmy ff.net review, but my memory is shaky,
and the review said exactly what I wanted to say: Very good insight there.
The Silmarillion doesn't let us get close to the characters so Elrond and
Elros are left kind of distant. We don't get their thoughts and feelings,
but you let us have them here at the monumental choice they made. Thank you.
Second Age
S2-1: A Last Reckoning by Nol
A dark story and yet a good one. Seven years is a long time in Mordor, even
for Elves. You feel the weariness in this story, and yet, the compunction
to keep on fighting. And you feel the end is near.
Second Age
S2-2: It's In His Eyes by Larien Elensar
I like how that brought Elros's decision full circle to the Return of the
King. It's a much more positive reason for Elros choosing what he did than
I usually see.
Second Age
S2-5: Seashell by Nol
I still chafe at Elrond and Elros calling a Feanorean father. I know, I'm
biased and still carrying a grudge! But be that the case, this is still a
good story. Maglor did seem quite lost and mad, and Elros's reasons for
choosing to be Man worked well in this story.
S1: Cuivie by Zimraphel
A short but lovely story of the awakening of the first Ent, and I love that
at the end, we know the Ent's name: Treebeard. Well imagined and
well-written
S2: Eloquent Remembrance by Sphinx
I liked most the conflict in this story. The udnerlying one, the one where
it asks why the "high" Elves are so "high" and the moriquendi what they are.
It's about pride. And the truth sometimes hurts. For both parties.
S3: Gold Like Tears by Zimraphel
Oh what sad little beads. I didn't recognize Glorfindel in the first
chapter, though I suspected, and I was very glad to see Voronwe in the
second though sad to once again see Glorfindel dead. Ondello went with us to
the next chapter, passing the remaining bead to Elros, who carries it to the
next chapter and passes it to Elrond back to Glorfindel and then to Arminas,
unknowingly. And still unknowingly, Arminas recasts it into a brooch which
Aragorn delivers to Arwen. I like that not only the bead passes from one
chapter to the next, but a person does as well. Form follows plot. Very
cool. And perhaps Glorfindel was right. Sadness followed that little bead.
S4: If Women had Ruled Middle Earth by Mouse
Oh dear, and Elven quilting circle. I do like to think of the Elves as
being a bit, well, higher than that, but it does make for quite a humorous
story. Understated in it all are what each of the Elves is sewing, each fits
the one doing the sewing very well.
S5: In the Seventh Age by Deborah Judge
Maglor is finally forgiven after 7 ages of the world. Not sure if I'm ready
for it, but then, I hold a grudge against those Feanorians. Setting that
aside, this is a beautiful story about that forgiveness.
S6: Not for Pride Alone by Zimraphel
Glorfindel again, though in his later self and in a serious time of battle.
His characterization was brilliant, though I expected no less of Zimraphel.
Eanur also, was as prideful and rash as she should be. We see the seeds of
what later will come to pass. The light-hearted interacations between the
Elves though lightened the peace and made me smile here and there. I like
Glorfindel's humility, especially when he has such power.
S7: Song of the Waters by Zimraphel
Wow. Cirdan is a mystery, there but not fully known to us in the
Silmarillion and less so even in LOTR. But Zimraphel brings him to life
here, helps us understand his love for the Sea (and might I mention that
that's one of the things I love about Elves: how much they love nature. It
is one of the most different things about them in comparison to Men) and why
he stayed through so many Ages. Beautiful, as usual.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
SA6: Deborah Judge
Deborah does a wonderful job in the Silmarillion fanfiction. Especially with
Elrond. He is so deep in her stories, so full and 3-dimensional. And there
is wisdom as he learns, so there had to be wisdom in the writer.
SA7: Fileg
I think it might be hard to characterize an Orc and really show why they
hate all that is beautiful. Fileg did a good job and followed the old tenet
that beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
SA12: Jmac
Another Silm character fleshed out and brought to life. JMac did a great
job of showing the conflict Finrod might have had with himself and didn't
forget the Curse the Noldor lived under.
SA16: Mouse
Mouse took the drama (or melodrama) of the happenings of the Silm and LOTR
and sets the wives to complaining in one breath and defending in the next.
So much like a group of gossipy hens. And it never seemed over-the-top.
Just too funny. I wish I could write humor.
SA18: Nol
Nol writes darkness well, and grief and sadness, and many other emotions.
Elros is not a character I see often or even understand well, but Nol helped
a bit in that regard.
SA20: Starlight10
Starlight brought Finarfin's conflict to life. Go or stay, each was a
tormenting decision. In the end, I believe he chose rightly, but
thankfully, Starlight showed his pain in even that decision.
SA22: Viv
Viv did a beautiful job protraying Glorfindel and writing of his heroic
death and brought a 3-D-ness to Idril as well. The Silm leaves a lot of
room for that, and I like seeing good writers take up the challenge.
SA24: Zimraphel
Zimraphel writes with an authority. I can almost glimpse that she sees this
world as much as Tolkien did and then shares those visions of it with us.
She must visualize so much to write what she writes and it amazes me. She
is the stand-out author to me of these Awards. I have not once been let down
by one of her stories, never once turned away in disinterest. She draws me
in, even with unfamiliar characters or cultures I'm not really drawn to.
She can write the wonder, the spooky, the horrific, the beautiful all with
equal talent. Zimraphel really has a gift, and I'm very glad she shares it
with us.
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Msg# 2504
The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings Voting, 10/24/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 23, 2004 - 23:02:45 Topic ID# 2499
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The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings Voting, 10/26/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 25, 2004 - 0:01:43 Topic ID# 2510
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Msg# 2511
More Banners and Banner update! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 25, 2004 - 10:18:50 Topic ID# 2511one is an update. Well, three were meant to be updates, but I posted them
as separate banners as I think they are all worthy of being voted on, or I
couldn't be absolutely sure which one was to be replaced. So, anyway, we
have an update of Theoden #6, and new ones for Eomer, Eowyn, Turin, and
ROTK.
So here is an update on the Awards that have less than 3 banners:
Hobbits:
The Mayor of Hobbiton: 2
Orcs:
Orthanc: 2
Numenor:
Elros Son of Earendil: 2
Tar-Palantir: 2
Tar-Miriel: 1
Humor:
Tom Bombadil: 2
Barliman Butterbur: 2
Romance:
Luthien and Beren: 2
Tuor and Idril: 1
Crossover:
Pirates of the Caribbean: 2
Hidalgo: 2
Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade: 1
There is still time to submit some more banners! 7 days in fact! I'd love
to see each award have at least 3; I'd settle for each award having at least
2.
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S1-1: A Brush with Destiny by Coriel
This was a very nice and very well written moment in the life of
Elrond. I enjoyed reading the author' story because the writing was
fluid and imaginative and this kept my attention focused on the
story.
First Age
S1-3: Brucia la terra mia by Moralanqua
What I like about this author is her ability to make the story "come
alive". Her skills in creating a vivid and emotive scene are
intriguing. Not only does she take her reader through the oncoming
battle, but she individualizes how the characters respond to the
situation at hand. Throughout the fiction she has weaved lyrics that
echo what is befalling the characters. I felt the tension and the
suspense at their waiting for battle. I could see the shadow
encroaching on the land. In my opinion, this author allows her
readers to go on the journey with her characters and that keeps them
intrigued and wanting more. As the climax occurs the reader has
become so invested in the characters that it is hard to read what is
going to and eventually what does happen to them I highly recommend
this story.
First Age
S1-4: Dark Forge by Ithilwen
I have just recently become interested in Maeglin and so I read this
fiction with enthusiasm. It outlined some of the facts in his life
and weaved them into a very well written story. I was very impressed
on the author's interpretation of this elf.
First Age
S1-5: Driven By Fire by Starlight10
I think this author has great talent for allowing the readers
to "feel" this situation. I was quite saddened by the parting of the
elves like she portrays. She used the word "sundered", such a strong
and final word to match that of the separation between the kin of
the elves. Well done.
First Age
S1-6: Finrod's Oath by Jmac
Oh my goodness! This story captured my attention and I was
enthralled. I felt like I was sitting there in that dungeon. I could
see him pulling against his bonds, and I could feel his pain both
emotionally and physically. I wanted to tell him his choice to
fulfill his oath worked. I wanted to say "it will work out, Beren
may lose a hand eventually, but it will work out". I wanted to say
to him that "his ring will be worn by many more and that finally
evil will be overcome." But I was a silent witness to his angst.
Wow, I will be looking out for more writing from this author.
Impressive.
First Age
S1-8: Pause by Sphinx
An interesting take on Tuor and Idril. Since I am just beginning to
research these two, I read this fiction with interest. It was
written very well.
First Age
S1-9: Red Dawn, Golden Flower by Viv
Wow! Can I say that again? Wow! I felt like I was reading one of
those suspenseful, thriller novels. I was absolutely taken with this
story. What fantastic writing. I sat on the edge of my chair and
could not pull myself away from this fiction. I have now been
introduced to the most complete and awesome depiction of Glorfindel
and I am thoroughly impressed. I love him in this story. Viv writes
the fiction with incredible sense of detail. It is woven together
like a tapestry or art work, each piece fitting in just the right
place. I was sad when it was over, not only because Glorfindel met
his fate but because I was so enthralled I wanted more, more of
Idril and Tuor and their little boy.
First Age
S1-10: Slouching Toward Gondolin by Fileg
I think that is one of the best depictions of an orc I have ever
read. One who is both evil and brainwashed into the purpose of his
master. An incredible and frightening story. Those elves don't know
what they are going to wake up to.
First Age
S1-13: White Wing by Cirdan
How adorable. I have never read a "Tuor as a child" fiction and this
one was so cute. I love how the author added little things from our
modern time but it was so appropriate in the story it was a great
way to induce a smile from me.
Incomplete
SI-1: A Veiled Light by Andreth
I don't know where to start. I first had to choose which version I
wanted to review and then stick with that. But I could not. At first
though, I have to say that either version is unique, well written,
painstakingly thought-out by the author and absolutely incredible.
What else is there to say? Well aside from the fact that the new
edition is going to take the reader to the main plot more rapidly
then in the original, the reader is treated with an amazing array of
characters, plot devices, scenery and emotions. Either version is
intriguing and captures the reader's attention. I like the romance
and tension between Ilmare and her male friends in the first version
and I love the sharp and much more defined plot the author is
writing in the second version. This fiction is a definite must read
for those who want to be treated to fantastic writing and a
wonderful plot.
Incomplete
SI-4: The Silmarillion in Thirty Pages or Less by Bitten Buggy
What a great reference story. I think this author had a fantastic
idea in writing a brief version of the Silmarillion. It is nice to
be able to refer to the compressed story, or to check back and see
when and where something took place. The writing is fluid and well
done. I would recommend this story to anyone who wants a quick run
down of the events in the Silmarillion.
Second Age
S2-4: Oath Renewed by Inglor
This author writes with vivid imagery and I was captivated by this
story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the interaction between Finrod
and Gildor and was impressed with the overall language and emotions
weaved through this story. It was a great read and highly
recommendable.
Msg# 2513
Re: The Silmarillion--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 25, 2004 - 12:55:25 Topic ID# 2434Official Voting Ballot
Sil- Mefas
S1-4: Dark Forge by Ithilwen
Maeglin seems more sad than evil in this taleý well done.
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S1-10: Slouching Toward Gondolin by Fileg
Interesting look at the first age orcsýýformed and forged for furyý is a wonderful description.
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SI-3: Fated by Nimrodel Jen
A wonderful start to such a sad story and Iýd love to see more of it.
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S2-2: It's In His Eyes by Larian Elensar
This fiction was a beautiful haunting telling of the reasons that Elros chose as he did. I would like to think that Elros chose his path because he knew that men and all of ME would need his strength to win the fight that would come in the third age. There is much said in few words in this fic.
Authors:
SA14: Larian Elensar
It's In His Eyes
Larian chose a small bit of the Sil and told it wellý she provided a reason.
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Msg# 2514
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by whitegull1420 October 25, 2004 - 13:38:42 Topic ID# 2474wrote:
>Ithilien...
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> L13: The Gift of Iluvatar by Ariel
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> URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1267180/1/
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> Rating: G vile deeds of Saruman
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> Romance Partners: n/a
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> Summary: From the hobbits' fall at Mt. Doom to Sam's waking in
> the story Tolkien only hinted at. What really happened when allthe healing
> powers of wizards, elves and men were summoned to insure that thiswas not
> the end of all things for the halflings? Sorrow, hope and healingin a
> strictly canon gapfiller.by the eagles is well done. Beautiful meeting between Frodo and
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> This is one of my favorite Waking in Ithilien scenes. The rescue
Gandalf, and Aragorn as well. The characterizations are exact.
Aragorn in particular is well done. I can almost feel some of that
healing rubbing off on me! And, the character of Idril is sweet.
So very true that nearly all who meet Frodo, love him. Wonderful.
>many times by reading fics by someone I don't know, that I always
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> LA4: Ariel
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> The Gift of Iluvatar
> Ariel is definite one my favorite authors. I've been burned so
check to see if Ariel has anything new before I go on to other
things. Her "feel for Tolkien" is so close for my own, that I
rarely find any disagreement. Thank you, Ariel.
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C4: Kings of the Sea by Eledhwen
All I can say is thank God Will Turner wasn't there. But this was an
entertaining way of getting Jack and the Pearl into Middle-earth. I
enjoyed seeing Elphir get time as an actual character. Light-hearted fun.
C5: Spirits of the House by Altariel
Not so much a crossover as a retelling of "A Christmas Carol" in
Middle-earth. But very enjoyable—I loved the interlude in Ithilien
between Faramir and his lieutenants, and that Denethor witnessed it.
Faramir's reaction at the end of the story to Denethor's changed
attitude was priceless.
C7: The Corsair Papers by Fileg & Flick
(whispers) All I know of Gilbert & Sullivan I learned from "The
Mikado". But I still enjoyed this, even though the dread corsair
Boromir inevitably dredged up associations with "The Princess Bride".
Loved the interlinear notes! Legolas' song was hysterical, as was
Sullivan's Christmas note to Gilbert.
Msg# 2516
Crossover Ballot from Elena Tiriel Posted by Elena Tiriel October 25, 2004 - 21:06:02 Topic ID# 2516Official Voting Ballot
C4: Kings of the Sea by Eledhwen
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1690803/1/
I enjoyed this, Eledwhen! I think you've got Sparrow's dialect and
mannerisms down pat, and I enjoyed the glimpse of Elphir as captain.
Aragorn seemed a bit stiff, as he might well be compared to J.S.! Taking
his king role a bit seriouslyý
C5: Spirits of the House by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1623717/1/
This is a really upbeat version of A Christmas Carol (which I never liked
all that much). But seeing it with familiar LoTR characters makes it much
more compelling. I liked your choice of ghosts -- Adrahil makes so much
sense, given that many authors ascribe to Dol Amroth a greater cheer in
celebrating holidays, and that he is Finduilas' father. Mithrandir was a
pleasant surprise, and Finduilas was fitting. I thought that weaving in
Boromir's funeral boat was a nice touch. And I could certainly see why
Faramir was surprised and uncertain in his father's presence at the end!
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Msg# 2517
Silmarillion Ballot from Elena Tiriel Posted by Elena Tiriel October 25, 2004 - 21:06:47 Topic ID# 2517Official Voting Ballot
First Age
S1-6: Finrod's Oath by Jmac
Wow, this is breathtaking, Jmac! You turned this First Age hero -- whom I
never had feelings for before -- into a living, breathing, regretting being
for whom I hold much respect and empathy and sympathy. "My fault of
character is so great that I find myself wishing the exquisite loneliness
upon her that I have felt these long years." How unfathomably sad! Yet his
very introspection says much about his honorable character; as does his
honorable behavior at the end. Very nice story!
First Age
S1-10: Slouching Toward Gondolin by Fileg
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=260
What a chilling vignette! Your Orc is so incredibly sadistic, feeling
empowered by inflicting pain - wanting his sword to dull so his enemies will
feel the pain, using his sleeping fellow Orc to test its sharpness. Your
descriptions of the sounds and feelings of being within the belly of that
mechanical beast -- and the Orc's thoughts about it -- are superb! I
especially liked the way you ended: "You are pig-iron and we are steel. We
have been remade, refined, perfected - fashioned, formed and forged for
fury. Here we come." That is terrifying!
First Age
S1-13: White Wing by Cirdan
Cute vignette! I like the affection expressed between Annael and Tuor, and
A's realistic expectation of Tuor's childish understanding (eg knowing that
Tuor wouldn't understand that Men aren't bats until he experienced the
dizziness for himself). BTW, "foster son" is two words.
S3: Gold Like Tears by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=408
Ah, Zimraphel, I loved this story the first time I read it, and I still love
it. The golden bead is so full of portents and sadness, yet is such a thing
of beauty and craftsmanship (craftsElfship?) to delight all who see it. The
line of griefs that follows it throughout the years tug at my heart:
Glorfindel losing his brother, then his own life; the loyalty and devotion
of Ondollo, who comforts Glorfindel and later dies protecting Elrond and
Elros; and the separations of Elrond and Elros, Elrond and Celebrýan, Elrond
and Arwen and Estel. This tale, like the Silmarillion, is too fraught with
grief to read, yet too involving to stay away...
S4: If Women had Ruled Middle Earth by Mouse
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=39
Very funny! "Illuvatar knows we didn't need any more magical jewellery in
Arda." I got a good chuckle out of that, not to mention the fact that
Galadriel crocheted "yards" of white lace! LOL! Talking about
overachievers...
S5: In the Seventh Age by Deborah Judge
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/755564/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Epilogue to 'Naming the Stones' and 'As Little Might Be Thought'.
The final fate of Maglor son of Feanor.
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Msg# 2518
The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings Voting, 10/26/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 25, 2004 - 23:09:43 Topic ID# 2510
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Msg# 2519
Silm and Crossover ending soon! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 25, 2004 - 23:22:14 Topic ID# 2519there will also be Amnesty Day. So if you don't get them in now, you can get
them then.
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The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings Voting, 10/27/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 26, 2004 - 0:02:12 Topic ID# 2520
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Re: More Banners and Banner update! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 26, 2004 - 0:05:50 Topic ID# 2511So here is an update on the Awards that have less than 3 banners:
Hobbits:
The Mayor of Hobbiton: 2
Orcs:
Orthanc: 2
Numenor:
Elros Son of Earendil: 2
Tar-Palantir: 2
Tar-Miriel: 2
Humor:
Tom Bombadil: 2
Barliman Butterbur: 2
Romance:
Tuor and Idril: 2
Crossover:
Pirates of the Caribbean: 2
Hidalgo: 2
Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade: 1
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Msg# 2522
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Thundera Tiger October 26, 2004 - 13:36:11 Topic ID# 2474fist and many authors at the end.
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>>Cross-culturalA very balanced view of Legolas and Gimli as they begin to hammer out a
>>LCC1: Folk of a Different Race by Lemur
friendship in Lothlýrien. What I especially like about this is that elf and
dwarf are given equal time, equal strengths, and equal faults. Itýs not
one-sided, and I very much respect that. I also like the idea that Legolas
and Gimli had to be prompted into it by Celeborn and Aragorn. That strikes
me as appropriate.
>>Cross-culturalThis fic is laced with an incredibly wry sense of humor, and I enjoyed that
>>LCC2: Horses and Verses by Altariel and Isabeau
very much. Faramirýs opinion of himself and those around him reminds me
quite a bit of some statements Aragorn makes periodically, and I enjoy
seeing the similarity between the two. For Eomerýs part, he doesnýt seem to
realize that he does have moments of political brilliance and he focuses
more on his shortcomings in maneuvering men, which seems very fitting for
his character, too. Good characterizations.
>>Cross-culturalItýs my opinion that not nearly enough has been written about the journey
>>LCC3: I Return by Coriel
back to Greenwood and Erebor. Thankfully, Coriel fills in the blanks. Both
Legolas and Gimli are strong, imposing characters in this tale, but despite
the presence of my two favorite characters, I actually like the story best
for the minor characters of Glorfindel, Thranduil, and Kali. I donýt think
Iýve seen Glorfindel portrayed quite this way before. Heýs both familiar and
distantly noble, which is an interesting contrast. Thranduil is discerning,
shrewd, and practical. He and Gimli share a lot in common, which is
interesting because Legolas compares Gimli to his mother while Gimli
compares his mother to Thranduil. And finally, the OC Kali has become the
defining model of dwarven women. I loved her character, and I loved her
almost brazen independence.
>>Cross-culturalVery daring reinterpretation of Gimli, and even though I donýt necessarily
>>LCC4: Keeping Secrets by Deborah Judge
agree with it, I have to offer up a round of applause for Deborahýs courage
in writing such a fic. Eowyn was also very much in-character, and the fight
between Eowyn and Gimli was told very well. It fit neatly into a somewhat
anxious mood, and provided for some interesting insights.
>>Cross-culturalWe so rarely get to see Pippinýs more mature side in fics, and Iým very
>>LCC6: River of Fallen Stars by Fileg
grateful that Fileg writes the hobbit so well. Faramir is also excellent in
this story, and I enjoyed the references to stars and the comparing of
cultures and how they view the stars. Itýs a very quiet piece but a very
moving one for not only Pippin and Faramir but also for Boromir, who gets
some remarkable characterization despite the fact that heýs dead. Now thatýs
talent.
>>Cross-culturalNobody, and I mean nobody, writes Celeborn as well as Marnie does. Thatýs a
>>LCC8: Those Who Remain by Marnie
given and I expected no less. What I wasnýt expecting when I first read this
fic a year ago was how well Marnie could write Sam. Or Rosie. And the way
these three characters come together is nothing less than inspired. It never
would have occurred to me to put them together on the anniversary of Frodoýs
and Galadrielýs departure, but Marnie pulls it off with a flourish. The
highlight of the story for me was the conversation between Celeborn and Sam,
in particular the part where Celeborn relates what he told Galadriel about
taking off Nenya and being with him rather than being alone. I like the
thought that Celeborn was more willing to rely on archers as Thranduil did
than on the rings of the Noldor. There were also great insights into other
characters, such as Orophin and Elrond, the latter of whom did not even
appear in the story. And Celebornýs fear of the Ring in Lothlýrien was
related very convincingly. The last part of the story was brilliant with
Rosie tearing into Celeborn for delaying her husband and possibly asking
more of him than she was willing to let him give. I donýt know that I would
be willing to stand up to Celeborn, but I definitely admire Rosieýs spunk.
The close of this story was perfect, and the image of Celeborn singing
Treebeardýs song of the Entwives (which was one of my favorite songs in
LotR) could not have been better. Terrific look at the similarities between
Celeborn and Sam while never forgetting the differences.
>>DrabbleOnce again, the hobbits are robbed for words in a serious moment. I love how
>>LD1: "And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken." by Lindelea
both Merry and Pippin dance around their fears in this drabble.
>>DrabbleThis drabble harks back to when Frodo was first instructed to put a Ring in
>>LD2: Fireside Chats by Lindelea
the fire, and the parallels as well as the differences are eerie. Well done.
>>DrabblePippin seems eternally optimistic, and I love how the lighthearted flashback
>>LD3: I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me by Lindelea
feeds into the more serious moment as Pippin decides that Merry is just
ýhiding.ý
>>DrabbleSome surprisingly poetic turns of phrase coming from Gimli, but given his
>>LD5: That Which is Fairest by Elana
devotion to Galadriel, I think theyýre very appropriate. I like how he
initially compares her hair to the metals heýs familiar with, but at the end
of the drabble, heýs moved from metal to the Two Trees and how his view as
elves in general has changed. Great character growth, especially given the
confines of a drabble.
>>DrabbleOne of the best takes on Gimliýs view of Legolas during the early period of
>>LD7: The Stone Tree by LKK
their friendship. I love that Gimli compares his friend to things that the
dwarf can readily understand but how heýs also willing to make those initial
first compromises such as comparing the elf in general to a tree. A stone
tree, granted, but a tree nonetheless. And this blending of stone and tree
paves the way for greater understanding.
>>GondorI very much enjoyed this meeting of minds through the use of a song. I like
>>LG1: All of Them Together by Fileg
how the more tangible verse about sun and shadow was given to Boromir while
Aragorn remembered the verse about twilight, which reflects his elven
upbringing and the more uncertain road he walked. Great look at a very young
Boromir who seems to already have a remarkable grasp of military matters and
an equally good look at Thorongil, who already has echoes of what Aragorn
will ultimately become.
>>GondorIým a sucker for Faramir introspection, and the opening of this story
>>LG2: As Truly as the Arrow Flies by Fileg
immediately grabbed my attention. I love Faramir the Dreamer, especially
when coupled with the idea that the dreamer can be a wise and crafty
fighter, which is essentially what Fileg shows here. The flashback to stars
and Adrahil was done well, and I like the idea of the two warriors and how
theyýre equally useful though one is more obvious than the other.
>>GondorThe three chapters in this story compliment each other very well. My
>>LG3: Breathe by Fileg
favorite was probably the first one, because it showed Boromir and Faramir
interacting. And not only interacting but understanding. Theyýre very
different in many respects, but they seem to have realized that these
differences can work to make a better whole, such as Faramir teaching
Boromir to swim and Boromir deciding that it is a soldierýs skill.
>>GondorI love Faramir pieces, and this one is particularly good. Faramirýs first
>>LG4: Failure by Liz
feverish visitor was, of course, his father, and Denethor in his madness set
the tone for the rest of the story. Aragornýs arrival was like a breath of
fresh air, and I love the way he talks Faramir through his misgivings and
calls him back to life. Very good understanding of characters and especially
of the healing nature in Aragorn.
>>GondorArwen is absolutely fascinating in this story. Faramirýs characterization is
>>LG5: Queen's Gambit by A L Milton
equally well done, but Arwen isýwell, fascinating. Faramirýs scrutiny of his
opponent reveals almost as many questions as it does answers, though
considering Arwenýs background, that should not be surprising. Her initial
bearing is one of almost disinterest, but it is clear from the game and
Faramirýs perception of her strategies that she is very aware of what is
going on and enjoying herself. The predatory smiles that begin to come later
as the game moves on are as revealing as they are illusive, and Arwen
remains a curious paradox throughout the story. I find I like this version
of her very much. As for Faramir, his own strategies and thoughts reveal his
keen mind and his love of intellectual thinking even in regards to battles.
I also enjoy how he caught Arwenýs offering and seemed to challenge her on
it at the end. Excellent meeting of two similar and yet very different
minds.
>>IncompleteFirst of all, before writing anything else, I need to say that this is the
>>LI2: Lie Down in Darkness, Rise Up from the Ash by Dwimordene
story that got me into LotR fanfiction in the first place. This story
remains my absolute favorite tale in the LotR fandom, and it has never been
dethroned, despite some remarkable attempts from all the exceptional stories
I have read since then. Why do I love this story so much? I donýt think I
could list all the reasons, but Iýll go for my top few. First of all,
characterization. Dwimordene has a firm grasp on every single character
within the books, from minor characters like Arwen and Damrod to my favorite
characters, the Three Hunters. They are the characters that Tolkien made,
but they have been enhance and expounded upon. I think the character Iýve
grown to love most since Dwimordene got her hands on him is Eomer. He is so
defined in this story! Second of all, I love how Dwim keeps her story on
such a close parallel with Tolkienýs. It makes the differences between them
all the more stark and foreboding. Boromir still dies. Merry and Pippin are
still captured. Frodo and Sam still meet Faramir. But other things, such as
Legolas returning to Edoras with Eomer, Aragorn and Gimli passing up
Fangorn, and Frodoýs extreme methods to hide the Ring, are chilling in their
departure from Tolkienýs path. Third, the action sequences. Dwim is a master
of drama, introspection, and dialogue, and these are all expertly used, but
the action is some of the best Iýve ever seen, particularly the Battle of
Edoras. Fourth, tension. And in this, Iým thinking specifically of the
tension in Rohan when Legolas arrives and meets Theoden, Eowyn, Eomer, and
Grýma. The slow build of uncertainty and then ultimately disaster is
something that still floors me every time I go back to read this story. The
tension when Sam and Frodo run into Grishnýkh is of an entirely different
nature but just as compelling. I could go on and on, but Iýll end now and
save you from further rambles about my favorite story save for this: If you
read this, Dwim, thank you! Because of your story, I became involved an
entirely different world and I have loved every minute of it.
>>IncompleteExcellent characterization of an OC. Actually, several OCs. The Rangers
>>LI3: Messages by Shakes
beneath Faramirýs command and the soldiers beneath Boromir were fleshed out
well, and their various roles made for a very complete picture of Gondorýs
military. I like the growth that characters show over the course of the
story, both OCs and canon characters. The emotions, thoughts, and events are
all very realistically portrayed.
>>IncompleteHilarity and mayhem. This sequel to OFUM is a very enjoyable ride and
>>LI4: Once More Into the Urple Depths of OFUM by Camilla Sandman
branches out into territories that the first story never covered, such as
crossovers. That is actually my favorite part of the story so far, and I had
great fun playing ýName that fandomý as well as watching these various
characters interact. The idea of fluffy, cuddly creatures becoming the bane
of everyoneýs existence had me laughing hysterically. Imaginative, twisting
story that capitalizes on the success of the first and expands its borders
well. Really, how can anyone NOT love the stories that gave us mini-Balrogs?
>>PoetrySomething very endearing about this poem. I think itýs the almost asides
>>LP1: All Ye Fellowship of Nine by Azalais
that are cast in such as, ýStill, off you go,ý as Elrond sends the
Fellowship forth. They really made the poem for me.
>>PoetryIt might just be me, but I find villanelles insanely difficult to write. So
>>LP2: Finduilas by Fileg
Iým always amazed when someone else writes them so well. The ending couplet
in this villanelle was a good choice, and thereýs quite a bit of
foreshadowing going on here as far as embracing fire. But I can also see
Denethor becoming passionate about a person, though not necessarily
expressing that passion all the time. And when that person left, I could see
this as an event that changed him. Anyway, great adherence to the form.
>>PoetryIým going to openly admit now that Goldberry and Tom Bombadil always
>>LP3: Goldberry's Song by Vulgarweed
bothered me. But I gained new appreciation for them in this poem because it
seemed to me as though they formed a very balanced and very understanding
relationship. And I like the idea that Goldberry sees more to Tom than the
singing, capering guy in yellow boots.
>>PoetryFirst of all, I tend to veer away from anything that smacks of romance. Itýs
>>LP6: The Lion and the Swan by ErinRua
the cynic in me. But I loved this poem. I love the idea of two very
different worlds coming together in an alliance of sorts and finding out
that theyýre better off because of it.
>>PoetryIýll try tickling the Ranger any day, but I think I know who would win such
>>LP7: Tickle the Ranger by Alawa
a contest. Tickling Rangers aside, I loved the childlike question and answer
nature of this poem, and I like the sing-song almost carefree attitude. But
the subject matter is dark, making for a very interesting contrast, and for
that reason, I see hobbits being very fond of this poem. I think it would
fit their natures quite well, especially since theyýre always fishing for
words in those more serious moments. Perhaps this song could help them.
Brilliant writing.
>>PoetryIým so very jealous of people who can write villanelles. Or any of the more
>>LP8: War Now Calls Us by Elvenesse
structured forms of poetry. And Iým even more jealous of people who can
adhere to the villanelleýs form and make it mean something. Eomerýs fey mood
really comes across in this poem as well as his brashness and his
willingness to die. Because who really knows what heýll find when it
happens?
>>VignetteI love it when stories explore the minor characters, or the characters who
>>LV3: After Such Knowledge by Azalais
probably existed but that Tolkien never gave us a name for. Hereýs one of
them, and I very much enjoyed the flashback to Gandalf discovering what was
written upon the Ring. My absolutely favorite line came from one of
Gandalfýs mutterings as he wondered, ýWhere is the wisdom we have lost in
knowledge.ý Thatýs far too common a problem, actually, and it gains new
importance in this story.
>>VignetteVery chilling story. Zimraphel delivers as usual, giving us enough insights
>>LV4: For Pity's Sake by Zimraphel
into the OCs so that we can connect with them, and then the rug is pulled
out from under our feet. As usual. I knew what was going to happen, but
Gollumýs song still made me freeze, and itýs a testament to Zimraphelýs
writing that I was caught off guard. Good stuff.
>>VignetteI love this story! Itýs such a great look into the minds and hearts of
>>LV5: Goes A Courting by Chris
dwarves. I wonder if this is the kind of attitude that eventually led them
to a Balrog, but regardless, itýs a wonderful look at how dwarves view their
work in the mines. They court the minerals. They flirt with them, and the
stone seems to flirt back. I love how they all think of the lode as a ýsheý
and that when the mithril seems to run out, some bid farewell while others
decide to pursue. There are so many little tidbits caught up in such a small
story. And of course, anything that has to do with the dwarves is going to
draw my attention. They donýt receive nearly enough scrutiny or respect.
>>VignetteThis is one of my favorite stories, and Iým not even going to attempt to
>>LV6: Repairs by Isabeau of Greenlea
dive into all the hidden meanings within it. Iýve found enough to blow me
away already, and Iým certain thereýs more but it almost gives me a headache
to think of it. Gimli is in great form, and I love the little details he
gives out, such as his suspicions that the Orcýs collar hailed from Moria
even though he canýt prove it. The fact that he tries to recover it is a
telling point in its own right, but eventually, he settles for more
practical matters and moves past Moria. In fact, this story moves past quite
a bit. Legolasýs appearance toward the end is a welcome addition and allows
Gimli to say that very few ever see dwarves work. Legolas and Gimli have
moved past that as well, and once the repairs on the axe are finished, they
move past the Hornburg and prepare to face whatever comes next. Things can
be fixed, as Gimli shows us, even if the hurt came from the plunder of his
own people. Great story from just a surface perspective, and brilliant tale
when its depth is taken into account.
>>VignetteGreat history on the sword Sting, and good characterization of both Bilbo
>>LV7: Sting by TreeHugger
and Glorfindel. Bilbo is in every way a hobbit, and a weary one at that
whoýs still trying to come to terms with the fact that he went off and had
an adventure. Glorfindel plays the wise elven lord well as in addition to
the role of gracious host. Good allusions to future events, too.
>>VignetteWow. This is an amazing fic that looks at nearly the whole of Middle-earth
>>LV8: The Hours by Thevina Finduilas
on the day the Pelennor was overrun. If you read the appendices, you know
that quite a bit is happening on that day aside from the skirmish around
Minas Tirith, but Iýve never seen that fact condensed into fic form so well
before. And each individual scene was in every way a vignette. It was a
quick but thorough look at the characters involved, and I loved the idea of
playing off the senses for the individual scenes. Beautiful writing.
>>L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene CamposMmm. Dwarf stripping. Seriously, though, I really enjoyed the explanation
for why Gimli seemed so intent on playing comic sidekick for much of the
movies. Also very much enjoyed was the fact that Legolas and Gimli could so
easily team up against Aragorn in the first part of the story. It seems
Legolas is willing to exploit Gimliýs role as comic relief.
>>L2: A True Dwarf by PoweroftheBookGimli does indeed need a dwarf to come home to, and I very much liked the
one he chose. Seeing the rest of the Fellowship through her eyes was a
treat, particularly the hobbits with their many children and Legolas, who is
both a concern and a curiosity to the new bride. I loved the way Galadrielýs
gift was addressed, and how Gimli so easily walks the line between dwarven
customs and elven influence. It seems to come naturally to him now, and I
like the development of his character in this direction.
>>L3: Aglarond by ErinRuaErinRua has a clear handle on Legolas and Gimli both in this story. What I
find truly remarkable about it, actually, is that I never realized it was
told from the first person perspective until recently, and I only realized
it was told in present tense when I reread it for these awards. Iým normally
not a fan of either, and the fact that I didnýt even notice them until now
should say something about how well the narrative and the style fit the
story. This is a beautiful capstone to the friendship that has developed
between Legolas and Gimli, and itýs almost as though any lingering doubts or
misgivings are laid to rest in this story. Itýs a powerful piece that lets
us experience the majesty of the caves even as Legolas experiences it by
using a slow, wonderful build to the moment when Gimli finally lets the elf
open his eyes. Beautiful descriptive work and a very quiet, poignant take on
this moment in their friendship.
>>L4: Answering Machines of Middle Earth by LindeleaOh dear. I laughed far more than is healthy during this fic. I think one of
my favorite ýphone optionsý were the changed options for Orthanc,
particularly the one that instructs you to hang up and call 911 if you are
in a battle. Though the Ringwraith reporting transportation problems was
pretty good, tooý
>>L6: For The Road by AlawaThis is such a fun story! It begins with a touch of sadness as it dwells
quite a bit on partings, and the idea of everyone leaving at the end of LotR
is a very bittersweet one. But as the story progressed and Aragorn began to
relate his experience of apple testing in the Shire, it became much more
light-hearted, and by its end, I was grinning. I would dearly love to get my
hands on Bilboýs book as Iým curious about what he might have said
concerning his apple tester. In the end, though there is still a parting,
itýs not nearly as sad and thereýs a sense that the friendship (or at least
reminders of it) will continue. Great story!
>>L7: Gilraen's Memorial by AlawaI love this story as much for its characterization of Aragorn as for its
characterization of Gilraen, who is dead but still has a strong presence.
Aragorn is given quite a bit of depth in this tale, and through this depth
we get insight into his mother. Gilraen has a very no-nonsense tone in her
sonýs head, which I can see being very useful when growing up around elves.
Iým actually convinced that every elf should have a dwarf to keep himself
balanced, and I can see Gilraenýs down-to-earth practicality and knowledge
of men substituting for that very well.
>>L8: Leave Us Not In Darkness by ZimraphelWonderful expansion on a few words found in ýUnfinished Tales.ý Legolasýs
horror and shock were very real, and Aragornýs compassion and willingness to
do the deed himself made him every inch the king he would soon become.
Gandalf was Gandalf, and I very much enjoyed his second confrontation with
Saruman, who was wonderfully evil. What made it even better (or worse for
Gandalf) was that Saruman was so matter-of-fact about it. The full horror of
doing this to an elf was explained very well by Legolas, whose reluctance to
take action until it was requested was a wonderful statement about his
character and the memories that Sindar elves still carry of the kinslaying.
Excellent work.
>>L13: The Gift of Iluvatar by ArielUntil I read this, it never occurred to me that Aragorn might have
considered letting Frodo and Sam die as an act of mercy. That was only a
small point brought out by this story, but it was related very well and it
touched upon the idea of Frodo having to leave Middle-earth in order to find
healing. In the end, I think the choice was ultimately up to Frodo and Sam,
so Iým glad Aragorn gave them the chance to make that choice. But
interesting concept, nonetheless.
>>L15: Waiting, Wondering, Wandering, Wishing by GonzaiGood missing scenes from the hobbitsý side of the story. I particularly
enjoyed Pippinýs thoughts in the second chapter when he notes that not only
is he taller but now he is also flatter. Trust a hobbit to concern himself
with that.
>>L16: Whistling Past the Graveyard by ShuntWonderfully chilling look into dwarven superstitions. I like this quite a
bit. I generally like anything that expands on dwarven culture, but this was
especially well told. The descriptions, in particular, were amazing, and I
could picture each and every step the Fellowship took as they followed
Gandalf and Gimli upon the stairs. Nice insert into the journey through
Moria.
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>>DrabbleHobbits in serious moments are tricky creatures to write, and Lindelea does
>>LDA3: Lindelea
a great job with them in these drabbles. She paints them as hobbits, fairly
light-hearted, but she injects just a few sentences that reveal the gravity
of the situation, and it changes the entire tone of the drabble even though
the rest is purely hobbit.
>>DrabbleLKK does a good job of finding the balance and the compromise that
>>LDA4: LKK
characterize the friendship between Legolas and Gimli. That this balance and
compromise can be summed up in a drabble (and summed up so well!) amazes me
and Iým still shaking my head with jealousy. Good economy of words and good
understanding of the characters!
>>PoetryThis poem seems lighthearted, and the structure reminds me of other poems
>>LPA1: Alawa
that are indeed lighthearted, but hidden beneath that is a more serious
subject, and I really like the way Alawa keeps it in the background but
never lets us forget it. Thereýs something of a warning in this poem, but
Alawa never lets it get too solemn, making it accessible to simpler folk
though they might not appreciate all that the Rangers do.
>>PoetryAh, the villanelle. One of my favorite forms of poetry, and itýs done well
>>LPA4: Elvenesse
here. Elvenesse doesnýt keep the rhythm and meter as tight as some might,
but the looser structure feels very natural considering that Eomer is
somewhat upset and slightly fey. Great choice of lines and subject matter.
>>PoetryIým insanely jealous of Filegýs ability to pull off the more difficult and
>>LPA6: Fileg
structured forms of poetry, such as the villanelle. The rhythm and meter are
maintained throughout the poem (very appropriate, given Denethorýs formal
nature), the choice of line one and line three were very good, and the lines
woven in to support these ideas were equally good. Fileg makes a very
natural progression of thought and character from beginning to end, and
thatýs difficult to do, especially when your last two lines are identical to
your first and third line.
>>VignetteAzalais does a great job of characterizing the Keeper of the House of Lore
>>LVA1: Azalais
as well as Gandalf. The story is tightly written and no word is wasted,
which is definitely a credit to Azalais and the focus put into this story.
Even when so many other things could be going on, the narrative stays on
target and delivers.
>>VignetteNobody in Chrisýs story is listed by name (well, except for Aulý, but he
>>LVA2: Chris
doesnýt count) and there really isnýt a location given. But none of that
matters, because this is a vignette about dwarves as a race. Thereýs no time
to single out individuals, and one might wonder if there is time to even hit
the entire race, but Chris manages to do it. Using the familiar form of
dating and courtship, Chris sheds light on the more unfamiliar relationship
between dwarves and mines. Great writing technique and very effective,
especially when used in vignette form.
>>VignetteIsabeau is a phenomenal writer under any circumstance, but the vignette
>>LVA4: Isabeau of Greenlea
about Gimliýs axe is especially good. The story is focused and follows the
axeýs repair, but along the way, it picks up as many details as it can, such
as Moria plunder, dwarven customs, and dwarven respect for their weapons.
Isabeau allows none of these tidbits to slow the story, but theyýre
definitely present and make for a very enriching look at dwarves in general
and Gimli in particular. I love Isabeauýs repetition of the phrase ýMy axe
was notchedý and how these words mean so many different things to Gimli.
Excellent writing.
>>VignetteVignettes should be all about the characters, and Thevina Finduilas takes
>>LVA5: Thevina Finduilas
this to heart, particularly with the second story here. Each vignette was
short and to the point, like a series of expanded drabbles, and the focus on
various senses and sensations was brilliant. Thevina didnýt focus on any
sense to the exclusion of all others, but there were clearly moments were
one had more attention than the others, and it became a fascinating
balancing act that rotated between various senses. Tight writing and good
choice of style.
>>LA1: A L MiltonThere are so many different characterizations of Arwen floating around out
there, but I think I like Miltonýs best. Sheýs given Arwen a ruthless and
strategic mind, but sheýs also given her that ageless elven understanding
and she can temper her own competitiveness until such time as that
competitiveness can be unleashed. She also uses a very light touch to paint
Faramir. Weýre never overwhelmed with his mind or his strategies, but rather
we get to know him in smaller details, such as the fact that he managed to
get an extra eight moves out of Arwen on the second game. Thatýs a very
telling point, and itýs done extremely well.
>>LA2: AlawaAlawaýs stories here are fascinating because theyýre stories about other
people telling stories. The first has Aragorn recalling his adventure as an
apple tester with Bilbo and the second has Aragorn remembering his mother
and her influence on events in his life. The story that Alawa tells is not
about the stories that others remember, but their tales are used to enhance
and enrich Alawaýs tales. And Alawaýs skill in writing makes it seem as
though Aragorn is there telling us these things himself.
>>LA5: Camilla SandmanMiss Cam is well known name in the LotR fandom, and with good reason. She is
an incredibly talented writer who understands the LotR characters well, and
she is also the owner of an amazing imagination. Iým actually somewhat in
awe of her creativity. She also has a great sense of comedic timing that,
when coupled with her imagination, makes for very memorable moments and
absolutely hilarious situations. Miss Cam can do the one-liners, the
situational irony, the ridiculous, the wry, the tongue-in-cheek, and the
slapstick. Itýs an incredible blend, and you can find them all in her OFUM
stories.
>>LA7: CorielWhat I find very interesting about Coriel are the details put into various
stories. Special interest seems to be given to clothing, and what a
characters wears becomes far more than a simple nod to setting and scenery.
It becomes what a character is and what a character is attempting to say at
a certain moment. I donýt know that Iýve read another author who
characterizes someone through their clothes as well as Coriel does. Itýs an
intriguing technique and one I would like see more often.
>>LA9: DwimordeneNobody writes LotR like Dwimordene does. Very few approach her gift for
ensemble characterization. Even fewer approach her ability to deliver such a
complex plot that ties so well with the original story even as it leaves on
its own adventure. Dwim has kept me guessing throughout her epic, which is a
great treat for me, and she has brought to life in vivid detail my favorite
characters as well as characters I never really understood before. Dwim
writes this Au the way that AUs ought to be written. She keeps it so close
to Tolkienýs canon that itýs painful, especially when the breaks begin to
occur. I actually yelled at my computer when Aragorn and Gimli left Fangorn
to make for Edoras. But I think what really amazes me as far as Dwimýs
writing is concerned is how she shows everyoneýs perspective. Legolasýs
observations clearly come from an elf. Gimliýs views are very much the views
of a dwarf. Eomer sees the world as a frustrated rider of Rohan should see
the world. Samýs practical and very hobbitish look at his situation made me
both laugh and cry. Each character clearly has his/her own voice, and Dwim
plays to that characterýs strengths while also showing how these strengths
can be weaknesses, too. Itýs my opinion that Dwim has the best fanfiction on
her hands, and with that, Iýll be shamelessly add that I would love to see
this story updated soon!
>>LA10: ErinRuaWhat really blows me away in ErinRuaýs ýAglarondý is the way that the
perspective works. Weýre watching this through Gimliýs eyes, who has the
first person POV, but weýre also watching it through Legolasýs eyes. We
donýt see the grandeur and splendor of the caves until Legolas does, even
though Gimli himself is well aware of them. Weýre not privy to many of his
thoughts, but it never feels as though weýre detached from the character. I
can only imagine what a chore this was to write, but however it was done,
the result is stunning. At the end of the story, itýs as though we see
through the eyes of both Gimli and Legolas, and itýs a wonderful narrative
parallel to the fact that the ErinRua has laid the last foundation of
friendship for my two favorite characters. Incredible work!
>>LA12: FilegFileg has an amazing ability to write the very quiet moments. It takes a
very delicate and deft touch to make these moments both subtle and
meaningful, and Fileg has such a touch in spades. Fileg doesnýt focus just
on the character or characters but includes scenery, time, place, and other
elements in equal amounts. The result is a very balanced, refreshing take on
various issues that are shaped as much by the people as by the setting.
Everything feeds into the storiesý stillness, and it makes the tales dynamic
without losing the stillness that I have really come to enjoy.
>>LA22: MarnieMarnieýs ability to write Celeborn and to write him so well has always made
me both jealous grateful. I found the story ýThose who Remainý to be
especially interesting because Celeborn is given the chance to interact with
a hobbit. Marnieýs choice of Sam was great because she went on to draw out
similarities between Frodo and Galadriel, which in turn created similarities
for Sam and Celeborn. Itýs amazing to me how Marnie can draw parallels like
this. Marnie also shows us how to characterize quickly and efficiently, and
she can work in broad strokes (such as characterizing Sindar, Silvan, and
Avari) as well as small strokes (such as Orophinýs brief cameo or the casual
mention of Elrond and Vilya). And in between are the principle characters,
who get a full helping of Marnieýs talents and become unforgettable to the
readers.
>>LA27: ShuntI really respect the authors who choose to play with the dwarves, and Shunt
does a good job of bringing to life a dwarven superstition. What I
especially like is that the actions taken arenýt explained until the end,
and even then, theyýre only explained in passing. It makes far a much more
subtle story, which contrasts nicely with the fact that Gimli is banging
away on the steps with his axe. Good blend of styles.
>>LA31: ZimraphelThe ýUnfinished Talesý are full of wonderful little tidbits, and Zimraphel
expands on one of these very well, tying it in neatly during the brief stay
at Orthanc during which Gandalf breaks Sarumanýs staff. Zimraphel does a
good job of keeping the reader in the dark but of building the tension
through dark hints on Gandalfýs part. Switching the viewpoints around during
the course of the story was very well done, too. Itýs easy to have the story
come across as jerky or uneven when the POV keeps switching, but Zimraphel
makes it a smooth, even blend as all emotions eventually run together and
the power of the story takes over.
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Silmarillion
> SI-1: A Veiled Light by AndrethURL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=440
This is one of the few Works-in-Progress that I read, and I'm not
sorry. The plot (at least in the chapters that were still online when
I went to reread) is slow and meandering, and I feel like I'm
discovering the joys of a body with Ilmarë for the first time. But not
too slow. It's never dull. Just... exploratory, I guess.
I also had to laugh at the explanation of Cirdan's beard, and Ilmarë's
full bladder. Well done, and I look forward to more.
> S1: Cuivie by ZimraphelURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1813532/1/
Fascinating! A short but well-written look at a moment I've always
wanted to see in more details. There should be more Ent stories,
especially if they are like this.
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Just finished! And with only two stories, you'd think I could have managed
this sooner... Ainae, if I'm wrong and this category has already closed, let
me know and I'll repost on Amnesty Day.
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Silmarillion
> SI-1: A Veiled Light by AndrethURL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=440
This is one of the few Works-in-Progress that I read, and I'm not
sorry. The plot (at least in the chapters that were still online when
I went to reread) is slow and meandering, and I feel like I'm
discovering the joys of a body with Ilmarë for the first time. But not
too slow. It's never dull. Just... exploratory, I guess.
I also had to laugh at the explanation of Cirdan's beard, and Ilmarë's
full bladder. Well done, and I look forward to more.
> S1: Cuivie by ZimraphelURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1813532/1/
Fascinating! A short but well-written look at a moment I've always
wanted to see in more details. There should be more Ent stories,
especially if they are like this.
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Msg# 2528
Re: The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 27, 2004 - 23:07:44 Topic ID# 2477Official Voting Ballot
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TH3: Estel and the Hobbit by Eledhwen
I enjoyed this story. Estel was a sweet child and I liked the interchange with Bilbo. I really liked the epilogue tooý to see him all grown up and Bilbo pretty much the same.
TH7: The Emblem You Chose by Wild Iris
A thoughtful little tale and a good gap filler.
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Msg# 2529
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Alex Cat October 27, 2004 - 23:10:58 Topic ID# 2474Official Voting Ballot
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LCC5: Knife Work by Thundera Tiger
Well done gap filler and the characterizations are particularly good, each one being as true to real as possible. It also shows in a nice way how the oddly matched cultures managed to workl together.
LCC8: Those Who Remain by Marnie
I have to say that this is the first of Marnieýs fic that I ever read and it makes me cry still. I count it among my favorites. The tone is perfect. Sam IS the Sam we know and Celeborn the stern but loving elflord who suffered much in service of his people and devotion to his wife. Marnie has a rare gift for writing both of them.
LV7: Sting by TreeHugger
A beautiful history of the sword of Bilbo Baggins. I love it when such lovely tales fill the gaps. The characters in this one are well crafted and very much like Tolkien wrote them. Somehow I like to think that little Sting really was young Earendilýs sword.
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Msg# 2531
Amnesty Voting Question Posted by merrygoldgamgee October 28, 2004 - 8:08:26 Topic ID# 2531just wondering if the late ballots should still be submitted on the
individual ballots (I am pretty sure they should, or it will be
confusing) or all together on one ballot, with each of the categories
defined?
I am hoping to be done with the current categories today or tomorrow,
so I will get those in earlier! I do apologise for being so late but
there were just so many stories!
Marigold
Msg# 2532
Re: Amnesty Voting Question Posted by Larian Elensar October 28, 2004 - 9:49:06 Topic ID# 2531it's WAY easier to keep track and count that way :)
--- merrygoldgamgee <MarigoldCotton@aol.com> wrote:
>=====
> I am working away to get my ballots finished for Amnesty Day! I am
> just wondering if the late ballots should still be submitted on the
> individual ballots (I am pretty sure they should, or it will be
> confusing) or all together on one ballot, with each of the categories
> defined?
Larian
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wrote:
> Personally, as a counter, I would much prefer each ballot sent inseparately,
> it's WAY easier to keep track and count that way :)I prefer it as well, as an author. I usually read at least those
>
categories where I have stories entered (to find my own comments) and
so I'd really appreciate it if we could keep the categories split up.
That is, unless it will create problems. If so I'm flexible
Marta
Msg# 2534
Re: Amnesty Voting Question Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 28, 2004 - 16:41:25 Topic ID# 2531different categories.
Thanks
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From: Larian Elensar [mailto:larian_elensar@yahoo.com]
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Personally, as a counter, I would much prefer each ballot sent in
separately, it's WAY easier to keep track and count that way :)
--- merrygoldgamgee <MarigoldCotton@aol.com> wrote:
>=====
> I am working away to get my ballots finished for Amnesty Day! I am
> just wondering if the late ballots should still be submitted on the
> individual ballots (I am pretty sure they should, or it will be
> confusing) or all together on one ballot, with each of the categories
> defined?
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Msg# 2535
Re: The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot Posted by aelfwina October 28, 2004 - 16:44:58 Topic ID# 2477----- Original Message -----
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Subject: [MEFAwards] The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot
The Hobbit
Official Voting Ballot
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(No Subcategories)
TH1: Another Mother's Son by Thevina
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=446
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: For all you stepmoms out there..
A very touching and moving story, it is good to remember that even happy endings have their cost, and that helping others is often the best way to help oneself.
TH2: Chance Meeting at Rivendell by Aunt Dora Baggins
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3152
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When Bilbo visited Rivendell in "The Hobbit", Aragorn was a child
of nine or ten and was living in Rivendell. This story supposes that they
met and became friends. The story is a simple account of their growing
friendship, and includes foreshadowing of events to come.
A nice little story of how Estel and Bilbo might have met and interacted, I liked young Estel's enthusiasm, and the serious way he taught Bilbo things that might help him on his adventure. A good beginning to their friendship.
TH3: Estel and the Hobbit by Eledhwen
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=429
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Set during Bilbo's sojourn in Rivendell during 'The Hobbit',
book-canon; light-hearted but telling also of deeper events..
Another Estel and Bilbo story, this one does not show quite so much of the interaction between the two, but does show some of the interaction between Elrond and Gandalf as they, in their seperate ways, "meddle" in the llives of others. I very much liked the Epilogue, as it showed Bilbo writing the verse that was much like a prophecy, and which figured so much in later events.
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Msg# 2536
Re: The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 28, 2004 - 16:55:15 Topic ID# 2477From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 12:03 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] The Hobbit--Official Voting Ballot
The Hobbit
Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top
line of the header information (ex. code: Title by Author) and then comment
beneath them.
(No Subcategories)
TH1: Another Mother's Son by Thevina
That was a beautiful story of adoption, however formal or informal, and
what makes a family. Set in the destruction of Lake Town, we glimpse
something in this story that went mostly unnoticed, as Laketown was not the
focal point of The Hobbit. People were lost, children orphaned. And good
people who survived would adopt those children, rich or poor. As someone
who hopes to adopt someday, I love this story.
TH2: Chance Meeting at Rivendell by Aunt Dora Baggins
Another story of Aragorn and Bilbo meeting and I really liked this one.
Maybe because it mentioned Legolas. ;-) Really, it was well-written.
TH3: Estel and the Hobbit by Eledhwen
A nice little story of what might have been, and it does make logical sense
they Aragorn and Bilbo might have met then, and it would explain their
friendship.
TH4: In the Hall of the Wood Elf King by TreeHugger
This story is hilarious! And it makes the Egla Ash series all the much more
poignant as two of our favorites from here are reported dead. I won't spoil
their names though. They live on in these young Legolas stories. I love
these original characters, Legolas's friends and Tanglinna, and the
characterization of Thranduil is such a refresher from the usual spate of
Abusive!Thanduil's out there. And what a fun way to weave Legolas into The
Hobbit (even if we assume he's much younger than we though) story! Each
chapter just got funnier and funnier, from Legolas being forced to wear pink
to him being mistaken for a princess and then getting smashed on pipeweed
until he practically confirmed that he was a princess for Gloin! TreeHugger
just kept making it funnier and funnier, so it might be a good thing I read
it as a WIP or I might have hurt myself laughing for too long in one
sitting.
TH6: Sucking Eggses by Marta
That sounded just like Gollum, especially the many inserts of "Precious",
ana it fits nicely into the riddle contest in The Hobbit story.
TH7: The Emblem You Chose by Wild Iris
Touching story of the tribute paid by Thranduil to someone who was once his
prisoner and once an enemy and once an ally. Very describtive and detailed,
well-written and beautiful. Wild Iris pays Thranduil a tribute with her
story. This is not the brute too many fans think he is. No, this is as
Tolkien wrote him. Wild Iris just gave us another scene.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
THA4: Marta
Marta handled Gollum's inner dialogue very well, and also his cunningness.
THA5: Thevina
Thevina put her heart into her story, I think, as evidenced by her author's
note at the end. And she did it beautifully.
THA6: TreeHugger
TreeHugger is a precious commodity! She's hilarious! And she makes such
wonderfully enduring original characters. No Sues here. Just wonderful
depth and personalities so that they really feel alive. And she can make a
reader laugh and laugh and laugh. I'm still jealous of those who can write
humor and TreeHugger certainly fits into that category! She's brilliant.
THA7: Wild Iris
Wild Iris did a great job with her characterization of Thranduil. I think
she got him right on the mark. And it was a lovely story she wrote for him
paying tribute to Thorin.
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Msg# 2537
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by aelfwina October 28, 2004 - 17:20:29 Topic ID# 2474----- Original Message -----
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The Lord of the Rings
Official Voting Ballot
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LCC3: I Return by Coriel
URL:
http://www.tolkienonline.com/reading_room/author.cfm?aid=25859&StartNum=41&P
ageNum=3&oby=datedesc
Rating: G n/a
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The homeward journey for Legolas, from Gondor to Greenwood and
beyond. Some insight into what the War of the Ring must have meant to the
quietest and oft neglected member of the Fellowship, together with his and
Gimli's subsequent efforts to achieve acceptance in opposing worlds.
I found this story very absorbing. I do not normally read stories which do not feature hobbits; this one had the four in the first few chapters, but by the time Legolas and Gimli said farewell to them, I was thoroughly engrossed and did not miss them. What most impressed me was the very *Elvishness* of Legolas and the *Dwarvishness* of Gimli. Their differences were celebrated as being just as much a part of their friendship as the things they had in common. It was a realistic look at the friendship as well, showing that the efforts they made to forge new bonds between their peoples were not completely successful. This story, however, was. I enjoyed it greatly, and was sorry to see it come to an end.
Cross-cultural
LCC8: Those Who Remain by Marnie
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233093/1/
Rating: G battle
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: What can Sam Gamgee and Lord Celeborn of Lorien possibly have in
common?
A very nice examination of what it means to be left behind, and of sorrow and loss, and hope.
Incomplete
LI5: Recaptured! by Llinos
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/970288/1/ and
HREF="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/969855/1/
Rating: R
Romance Partners: none, but Merry and Pippin have a close relationship. The
reader can decide how close.
Summary: An AU LotR story -- The Uruk-hai recapture Merry and Pippin and
because of this the story changes. The hobbits suffer many trials and
tribulations as a consequence and are led in a completely different
direction to the original story.
This is one of the few AUs I've read that I have truly enjoyed. I was totally absorbed in reading it, and am very eager to see more of it.
Merry and Pippin are portrayed in a very unique way here, saddled with handicaps and difficulties at every turn, they prove themselves resourceful, loyal and ingenious. They never lose the thing that makes them hobbits through all their trials and tribulations.
I especially like the way the author has forged a special bond between them and Legolas, exploring unknown territory in mind-speech. Other elements that make this story keeping the reader guessing are the portrayal of Orcs, and the way she occasionally twines events back into the original LotR timeline.
I am very eager for more of this story.
Vignette
LV1: A Gift for Pippin by Gwynnyd
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2971
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Poor Pippin. He is traumatized from being exposed to the Eye of
Sauron. Everyone thinks he's been really stupid *again* and no one gives him
any sympathy for being tortured by Sauron... except Legolas. Pippin really
didn't do so badly, when you get right down to it.
This was a very sweet little story, in which Legolas gives comfort to Pippin after his fright with the palantir. There are just not enough fics out there with Legolas interacting with the hobbits, but this one stuck in my mind as very lovely, and true to the characters involved.
Vignette
LV2: A Way Opens by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2698
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: "Where will wants not, a way opens," Eowyn says in The Two Towers.
A series of vignettes about Merry and Eowyn, boots, the afterlife, and joy
in unlikely friendships.
Merry and Eowyn on the ride to battle--another area that is not explored enough. I liked the way they comforted one another, and the part with the boots was inspired.
LV4: For Pity's Sake by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1841411/1/
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Mirkwood sentries assigned to guard Gollum take pity on him,
with horrific results.
Very chilling little story, plausible explanation for how Gollum came to escape his captors, with the sub-text of how pity can have not only positive, but also dire, consequences.
Vignette
LV6: Repairs by Isabeau of Greenlea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/883019/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: After the battle of Helm's Deep, Gimli fixes his axe.
Gimli, being Gimli. Beautiful description of the way he lovingly and with great care fixes all the notches of battle, and finds in the work a release for the aftermath.
Vignette
LV7: Sting by TreeHugger
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233315/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Bilbo learns of the origins of his little sword from Glorfindel.
I really enjoyed this very plausible explanation of Sting's origins. The conversation between the mighty Elf and the humble little hobbit rang so true.
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Msg# 2540
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 29, 2004 - 0:40:53 Topic ID# 2474long one.
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The Lord of the Rings
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Cross-cultural
LCC1: Folk of a Different Race by Lemur
For me, this is the defining story to show how Legolas and Gimli became
friends. This was masterfully done, with each character's thoughts
paralleling the other's though, of course, neither know it. Their grief
over Gandalf's death is portrayed beautifully and their struggle to overcome
their preconceptions of each other's race. This is brilliant.
Cross-cultural
LCC5: Knife Work by Thundera Tiger
A good vignette and a very good explanation for the small increase in
Legolas's number in his contest with Gimli. This is another I can put in my
head as faux-canon. Legolas gets off so unscathed in the movies that we
sometimes forget he was the only Elf at Helm's Deep in the book. And Orcs
and Uruks do hate Elves, don't they? I'd recommend this one to anyone. It
plays well in the cinema of the mind. Well done.
Cross-cultural
LCC6: River of Fallen Stars by Fileg
I loved most the imagery in this story, the stones from the dome and the
stories they told, and the river rushing forward to meet the setting sun. It
shouldn't come as too big a surprise though, Fileg is also a poet.
Drabble
LD3: I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me by Lindelea
This was beautiful and I liked the optimism Pippin managed to hold onto when
looking at his stricken cousin.
Drabble
LD5: That Which is Fairest by Elana
How Gimli's eyes were opened by seeing Galadriel and now he can see the
beauty of Elves. If only everyone could learn to see beyond their
prejudices. Well done, Elana
Drabble
LD6: The Moon Sees Somebody I'd Like to See by Lindelea
And the other side of the coin: Merry remembering and worrying over Pippin.
Beautiful again.
Drabble
LD7: The Stone Tree by LKK
I didn't used to think much of drabbles but I've begun reading them since my
birthday cards on HASA. It takes a lot of talent, I think, to write
something so moving in so few words. This one captures a moment of Gimli
reflecting on his friend, an Elf. And he covers so much in those few
thoughts.
Gondor
LG1: All of Them Together by Fileg
Cute story of a relaxed time for Aragorn/Thorongil and a fun game with
Boromir. I like his willingness to play along and I loved the song!
Gondor
LG2: As Truly as the Arrow Flies by Fileg
I recognize the same imagery from Fileg's River of Fallen Stars, only here
they have yet to fall. I loved the relationship between Faramir and his
grandfather, and it makes me glad for him that he had that in his past
considering how his relationship would be with his father later.
Gondor
LG3: Breathe by Fileg
A beautiful trilogy of stories not originally meant to be together. But they
do go together perfectly and form a whole. I like the otherworldly feel of
the second chapter and the peaceful resolution of the third.
Gondor
LG4: Failure by Liz
Oh, I was hoping for just that ending. As all were laying blame on him and
burying him in self-loathing, I hoped it was his suffering under the Black
Breath and/or Morgul wound. Very powerful, indeed, are the weapons of the
enemy, but I like how this explains how Faramire knew Aragorn for his king
when he awoke.
Incomplete
LI2: Lie Down in Darkness, Rise Up from the Ash by Dwimordene
This was one of the first LOTR stories I read. And I'm still reading. It's
one of the tightest AU's I've ever read, where the author took just one
thing out of the original story and then tried to imagine how different it
would be. I admit one of my favorite parts is her italicized naration on
the music. It was that that made me know she wrote symphonies. She takes
some interesting diversions from Tolkien's path, such as brinign the Helm's
Deep fight to Edoras, and yet keeps so close that I find the same annoyances
I had with Tolkien's: Enough Frodo and Sam. I want to see more Legolas! (One
of my favorite scenes will always be when Eomer and Legolas are in prison
and Eomer is so freaked out by Legolas's eyes being open!)
Incomplete
Incomplete
LI4: Once More Into the Urple Depths of OFUM by Camilla Sandman
I like that the OFUM stories are long and episodic. It's a nice pick-me-up
now and then to see a new chapter posted and see badfic roasted so well.
It's all quite silly and the world needs a little silly now and then. And
if you look closely, you can catch my name as a student in Chapter 3, I
think.
Poetry
LP1: All Ye Fellowship of Nine by Azalais
I read this one a long time ago and enjoyed it quite a bit! I hadn't yet
ever tried to write a parody so I was quite impressed with this one. I
still am.
Poetry
LP5: Song Fight at the Swan and Cygnet Saloon by Chathol-Linn
Entertaining poem there! I'm absolutely certain Legolas's song was better,
and what a wonderful person he is, to give the prize to Bard.
Poetry
LP8: War Now Calls Us by Elvenesse
Chilling, especially with the passage noted below. I needed it as I haven't
read LOTR for awhile now. Well done.
Vignette
LV1: A Gift for Pippin by Gwynnyd
Lovely! Book!Legolas has his biting remarks now and then, but I think under
it all, he really is a gentle spirit (when not killing orcs or spiders, of
course). I am glad he recognized Pippin's torment and gave him some
comfort.
Vignette
LV3: After Such Knowledge by Azalais
Very nicely woven story of the keeper of the library, as it were. I liked
how he "listened" for the right scroll. And I like Gandalf's line about
knowledge and wisdom. How true is that?
Vignette
LV4: For Pity's Sake by Zimraphel
Oh dear! Did Gollum do what I think he was planning to do? Yikes. Poor
Bainion. And the others. A well-written story to tell of the Elves that
guarded Legolas and their demise. And seems to go the way of saying Gollum
knew the orcs were coming as he wasn't afraid of them when they came. (Zim,
you have a repeated sentence in there. Not sure if you meant it.)
Vignette
LV5: Goes A Courting by Chris
Until someone else's comment I had no idea that this would be about a Dwarf
and his lode. But it is, and it's a wonderful characterization of Dwarves
in general to show how they love the mining they do.
Vignette
LV6: Repairs by Isabeau of Greenlea
I loved most the character interaction, which was subdued but spoke a lot
about the friendship between Gimli and Legolas. Very interesting thing you
did with the repetition of "my axe is notched". Very well written little
story.
Vignette
LV7: Sting by TreeHugger
This is a lovely story, wistful where it needed to be, amusing at other
times. I, of course, liked the mentions of Legolas and his spiders, but i
recognize it was right not to play them up too highly as they aren't the
purpose of the story. The sprinkle of that information was just right. I
love that Glorfindel was the one to tell him of the story of the sword.
Vignette
LV8: The Hours by Thevina Finduilas
An evokative group of poignant vignettes, bookmarked by Denethor at the
beginning and end. I liked the idea of each focusing on a sense. The Rohan
woman burying her cousin was particularly chilling.
L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene Campos
I mostly like the friendship in this story. Tolkien told us they were
friends, but it often takes fanfic writers to show us that friendship.
Legolas comes across as very Elf-like in this one and Gimli very Drarvish,
and yet they still find themselves friends. I like Gimli's protective streak
for Legolas. But I would like to know why the children tittered.
L2: A True Dwarf by PoweroftheBook
Well, despite being a romance, I liked it. I liked the worries of the
bride-to-be, as they are logical for a Dwarf, especially her worry over his
friendship with an Elf. And Galadriel's hairs.
L3: Aglarond by ErinRua
Beautiful. Absolutely striking. ErinRua's desriptions were powerful, which
is something I am weak at myself. I could see these caves as I read. I'd
still love to see a companion story, from Legolas's point of view taking
Gimli to Fangorn.
L8: Leave Us Not In Darkness by Zimraphel
That story was incredible. The emotions are so strong and so realistic.
The portrayal of Legolas was beautiful and tragic and felt so right. Gandalf
sounded like Gandalf and Zimrpahel worked the plot of theory into canon, or
at least the UT, perfectly. I felt for Legolas, felt his grief and
revulsion. He wanted to end the Elf's suffering but couldn't bring himself
to be a kinslayer. Aragorn, a true friend, offered to help him. Really, an
incredible story.
L11: Only the Beginning by Cassia
Cassia writes another fine story even without her partner, Siobhan. I really
liked Legolas's insight in this one.
L12: Promises by Viv
Oh, that is sad. And the note at the end is sadder. They will never meet
again? So sad, but they deserve to be happy! Did he never again even visit
Eryn Lasgalen? It's a good story, don't mistake. Just a sad one.
L15: Waiting, Wondering, Wandering, Wishing by Gonzai
I read this one long ago, so it suffers from my lapse in memory. But I do
remember having liked it and thought it did well to fill those gaps. Merry
and Faramir staying behind while the others went to the Black Gate, Pippin
hoping he might be found under the troll, Merry going to find Pippin wounded
(a part too quickly skipped over in LOTR, I think) and finally Pippin waking
up and being reunited with Merry. Lovely scenes all of them, filling gaps
quite well.
L16: Whistling Past the Graveyard by Shunt
It took me awhile to realize who the narrator was and the last line came as
a bit of a surprise.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
Drabble
LDA1: Alexcat
My Elf
Drabble
LDA2: Elana
Elana is someone I know best from her drabbles. I got one for a birthday
challenge (also in these awards) and loved it. She really has a talent for
this short form.t
Drabble
LDA3: Lindelea
Lindelea is a wonderful drabbler! Drabbles are something I've only recently
felt brave enough to try. It may sound easy.only 100 words. But finding a
story to fit in so few words is the trick. It's a moment, so short that
it's hard to find a full one that only lasts 100 words. Lindelea does time
and again.
Drabble
LDA4: LKK
LKK too just a few words and showed us the friendship Gimli feels for
Legolas. I have come to love drabbles because of ones like LKK's.
Poetry
LPA1: Alawa
Tickle the Ranger
Poetry
LPA2: Azalais
All Ye Fellowship of Nine
Poetry
LPA3: Chathol-Linn
Song Fight at the Swan and Cygnet Saloon
Poetry
LPA4: Elvenesse
War Now Calls Us
Poetry
LPA5: ErinRua
The Lion and the Swan
Poetry
LPA6: Fileg
Finduilas
Poetry
LPA7: Moralanqua
Samwise Did See
Poetry
LPA8: Vulgarweed
Goldberry's Song
Poetry
LPA9: White Gull
Wishes of a King
Vignette
LVA1: Azalais
Azalais took a very minor character and made him into a full-blooded person.
Her characterization of Ganalf was great, too, showing his gruffness but
also his willingness to smile.
Vignette
LVA2: Chris
Goes A Courting
Vignette
LVA3: Gwynnyd
I'm glad Gwynnyd wrote A Gift for Pippin. It is a scene that needed
writing. Pippin did suffer at that time and I'm glad she saw it and wrote
some comfort for him. And she did a great job.
Vignette
LVA4: Isabeau of Greenlea
Isabeau writes impressively. Taking such a small thing like repairing an ax
and making it say so much. That takes a gift and Isabeau surely has it.
Vignette
LVA5: Thevina Finduilas
A Way Opens, The Hours
Vignette
LVA6: TreeHugger
Treehugger is one of my favorite writers for her humor, but she can also
write the poignant story as well. She knows her characters well and that
shows even in these two (Bilbo and Glorfindel) that she doesn't write as
often as certain others.
Vignette
LVA7: Zimraphel
Zimraphel can write anything. I'm convinced of it. Short, long, Men, Elves,
Gollum.. Her original characters are always so well-drawn and fleshed out,
as if effortlessly. Her plots are tight and she has a way with evoking
emotions in her readers.
LA1: A L Milton
Queen's Gambit
LA2: Alawa
Gilraen's Memorial, For the Road
LA3: Altariel and Isabeau
Horses and Verses
LA4: Ariel
The Gift of Iluvatar
LA5: Camilla Sandman
Camilla has a wonderful imagination and a knack for silliness.
LA6: Cassia
Only the Beginning
LA7: Coriel
I Return
LA8: Deborah Judge
Keeping Secrets
LA9: Dwimordene
Dwimordene writes symphonies! I have only come up with four writers with
metaphorical reviews. Dwim was the first. Just read the first paragraph of
chapter two of Lie Down in the Darkness and you'll see. I swear there is
music in it. Not just the theme. I mean the words. She builds a symhony
with those words. She has such beautiful syntax and phrasing. It's melodic
and complex. I think her background in philosophy really gets used to great
effect in her writing. I can see her stories as I read them, like a mini
cinema in my mind. She claims she favors Aragorn, but she writes Legolas
just as well! She can write drama and horror with the same ability. And
she can do comedy. I'm not sure there isn't anything she can't write! Dwim
will go down as one of the best LOTR fanfic writers in my opinion. She
doesn't just write stories, she writes masterpieces.
LA10: ErinRua
ErinRua did such a wonderful job with the imagery in Aglarond. It's a
weakness of mine. On it's own, my brain can't supply such visualizations,
but when given the right input, it certainly can and what I saw in my mind's
eye was breathtaking.
LA12: Fileg
Fileg is a poet, true, but he/she (gender questions again) can also write
stories and you can feel the poetry within them, even when they don't
contain a poem.
LA13: Gonzai
I've known Gonzai since before her first story (as a wonderful artist) and
am proud to say she was quite good at it from the start! LOTR is not her
first fandom and so we don't see any newbie mistakes with here. She has a
love for the Hobbits and it shows in her stories.
LA14: Iluvien
To Dream
LA16: Lady Coralie
An Aussie in King Aragorn's Court
LA18: Lemur
Lemur writes beautifully, artfully, and intelligently, bringing the
characters more depth while keeping them well in-character as we know them
from canon. Tolkien left the particulars of Gimli and Legolas's friendship
vague, but I think he would be proud of how well Lemur filled that gap.
LA20: Liz
Liz did such a wonderful job evoking again that heartbreak I felt for
Faramir when reading LOTR. And laying it on so much thicker only to have it
come out just like I hoped. Thanks, Liz.
LA24: PoweroftheBook
Powerofthebook actually made Dwarves attractive and romantic to me, quite a
feat as I'm not very mcuh of a Dwarf fan.
LA25: Samus
The Fellowship of the Mutants
LA26: Shakes
Messages
LA27: Shunt
Whistling Past the Graveyard
LA28: Suzene Campos
A Different Kind of Sacrifice
LA29: Thundera Tiger
Thundera Tiger did such a good job with Knife Work. She even managed
something I struggle with: combat. Especially hand-hand.or knife work. I
make a bad puppeteer when I try it but Thundera handled it beautifully.
LA30: Viv
Promises was beautiful, though sad. I really liked that you had Loridel and
Legolas communicate with each other across the distances.
LA31: Zimraphel
I have yet to read a klunker from Zimrpahel's pen. Her stories are powerful
and so-well crafted. You feel them, not just read them. She is an
incredibly talented writer. It was hard finding story NOT to nominate! I
nominated some of them without having read them first, just because I kenw
she was that good an author. I knew I'd read them during Reading Season and
be hard pressed not to vote on them. There is sometimes, for me, a breakout
author in every year's awards season, even on ASC. This year, it is
Zimraphel. I knew some of the others here were great writers. I hadn't yet
come to that realization with Zimraphel. But she convinced me for sure with
this Awards year. I look forward to finding more of her stories for next
year's awards. Truly, I would recommend her to anyone.
This category ends on October 30th at 11:59pm Central US time
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Msg# 2542
Re: Voting Season is Over!, 10/30/2004, 12:00 am Posted by Marta October 29, 2004 - 12:13:45 Topic ID# 2541>Ainae, just so I know - does this happen at midnight tonight your time
> Reminder from the Calendar of MEFAwards
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/MEFAwards/cal
>
> Voting Season is Over!
> Saturday October 30, 2004
> 12:00 am - 12:00 am
(1 AM mine, Eastern), or at midnight *tomorrow* your time (1 AM mine)?
I'm still reading madly, have much more to say, and... well, thank
goodness for amnesty day.
Marta
Msg# 2543
Re: Voting Season is Over!, 10/30/2004, 12:00 am Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 29, 2004 - 14:09:05 Topic ID# 2541Anyway, think of it as closing at 11:59pm Central US on Saturday, October
30th. Amnesty Day then begins at 12:01 am.
--Ainae
Who is working on chapter2 of a 40 chapter story herself!
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> Reminder from the Calendar of MEFAwards
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> Voting Season is Over!
> Saturday October 30, 2004
> 12:00 am - 12:00 am
Ainae, just so I know - does this happen at midnight tonight your time
(1 AM mine, Eastern), or at midnight *tomorrow* your time (1 AM mine)?
I'm still reading madly, have much more to say, and... well, thank goodness
for amnesty day.
Marta
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Msg# 2544
Re: Voting Season is Over!, 10/30/2004, 12:00 am Posted by Marta October 29, 2004 - 17:04:52 Topic ID# 2541wrote:
> That was just a 24 hour warning. And even that is a bit early,isn't it?
>October
> Anyway, think of it as closing at 11:59pm Central US on Saturday,
> 30th. Amnesty Day then begins at 12:01 am.Ah, all clear. Thank you.
>
> --AinaeWell, I just have three vignettes left, but I also have about a dozen
> Who is working on chapter2 of a 40 chapter story herself!
>
stories where I need to take the notes I made and write them into
actual reviews. Doable in two days, but one would have been pushing
it!
Marta
Msg# 2545
Re: The Lord of the Rings -- Official Voting Ballot Posted by elanor of aquitania October 29, 2004 - 19:47:45 Topic ID# 2545The Lord of the Rings
Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on.
For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2
lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and
then comment beneath them.
Cross-cultural
LCC2: Horses and Verses by Altariel and Isabeau
352 characters
This is a rather humorous piece. I like how Isabeau and Altariel
accomplished to portrait the rather different characters of Eomer and
Faramir. Two quibbles though I have: Faramir seems often at a loss of words
(though he is the most articulate man in the whole LotR) and I do not agree
with the view that Numenoreans could be ordered to marry as Faramir
suggests. Some words chosen are too modern: e.g. Romantic, schoolroom.
Cross-cultural
LCC6: River of Fallen Stars by Fileg
605 characters
Very nice story with the Gondorian constellations Archer who defends and who
hunts to support a family (representing in my mind Faramir) and the
Swordsman (aka Orion) who defends Arda from the dark (evocating in my mind
Boromir). Nicely done is Boromir's explanation why he and not Faramir came
to Rivendell, that he hoped to be as an broadsword a means to end the war
but that he wanted to ensure that Faramir as the healers knife would be
there to lead Gondor back to life. Very haunting is the last paragraph where
the Swordsman below the waterline reaches for the Archer who has a foot
below the water but who managed through the years to somehow keep his head
above water. This story has the precursor "As Truly as the Arrow Flies".
Gondor
LG1: All of Them Together by Fileg
141 characters
Very evocative piece. Poems haunting and beautiful. Nicely done story line
from a play of Boromir over ransom to pay by Thorongil to a song slowly
remembered by Aragorn.
Gondor
LG2: As Truly as the Arrow Flies by Fileg
347 characters
The story "River of fallen stars" has this precursor wherein Faramir recalls
how his grandfather taught him about the Gondorian constellations Archer who
defends and who hunts to support a family (representing in my mind Faramir)
and the Swordsman (aka Orion) who defends Arda from the dark (evocating in
my mind Boromir). Small Faramir still craves for battle glory while his
grandfather explains that fighting
Gondor
LG3: Breathe by Fileg
429 characters
Finely crafted series of pieces connected by the Anduin. Boromir learns to
swim (breathe before you dive) and uses his skills after the fall of the
Osgiliath bridge. The brothers help each other. Faramir sees his dead
brother in the Elven boat and has to get without support out of the water.
Faramir sends his experiences as drawings and words in a little paper boat
down the river accounting to his brother all what has changed. Minor
quibble: IMO paper boats are modern inventions. Evocative and beautiful
worded.
Gondor
LG5: Queen's Gambit by A L Milton
271 characters
An accomplished story. Though due to the rather cool and lacquered surface I
have more the feeling of an Japanese Middle-Ages story than of a
Middle-Earth story. One could ascribe this to Arwen's Elfishness. Yet I miss
the emotional background produced by Tolkien's words. Nevertheless well
written with a good story line.
LI3: Messages by Shakes
1170 characters
This is for me the best OC-story I read until now. Sadly Shakes has not
updated it for nearly a year now. Nevertheless, as it ends after the
destruction of the bridge of Osgiliath it achieves to give a feeling of
completeness. The rather well rendered original characters are the messenger
boy Anakil and his tutor the Poet. Very convincingly described are also the
brothers Boromir and Faramir and indirectly Denethor through the brothers
and the Poet. Very nicely done is the insecure boy who transgresses
boundaries as carefree youth and is educated through the story to become a
responsible rules-abiding messenger, while the Poet is a very well spoken
wise man turned grey with honour. Never have I read a better description of
the Gondorian military. One has really the feeling to live through the days
of suspense before the loss of Eastern Osgiliath and through the battle to
ensure the destruction of the bridge to secure the rest of Gondor. One has
the feeling to go through Osgiliath with Anakil, who knows every corner,
every ruin, every healers tent, and every stable because he first was an
errand boy. Very well done is the explanation why Faramir is in Osgiliath
together with Boromir. My only quibble is technically: there are many shifts
in the Point of View. Sometimes one is quite at a loss which persons POV has
just started. Kudos to Shakes for this accomplished story filling a small
book.
Poetry
LP7: Tickle the Ranger by Alawa
288 characters:
Nice poem. Really feels like a children's rhyme with a round-about-play
attached. The two sides of firstly the ranger outside moving around the
circle and secondly all the other children forming the circle of the normal
populace are well drawn. When the stanza of the ranger stops I expect the
ranger to tickle that child standing where he stops.
L2: A True Dwarf by PoweroftheBook
185 characters
Good, good, good. Gimli gets a dwarven bride inclusive facial fluffy hair.
Well rendered insecurities of the bride and convincingly done assurances by
Gimli who compares his love for Galadriel with the love for a mother.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
Poetry
LPA1: Alawa
Tickle the Ranger
121 characters
Nicely done poem which invokes the feeling of a children's play somewhere in
Gondor or Arnor. Has a humorous touch and agrees very well with LotR.
LA1: A L Milton
Queen's Gambit
203 Characters
Due to the rather cool and lacquered surface I have more the feeling of an
Japanese Middle-Ages story than of a Middle-Earth story. One could ascribe
this to Arwen's Elfishness. Yet I miss the emotional background produced by
Tolkien's words.
LA3: Altariel and Isabeau
Horses and Verses
422 characters
The authors wrote a rather humorous piece depicting the relationship of
Eomer and Faramir. I like how Isabeau and Altariel accomplished to portrait
those rather different characters. Two quibbles though I have: Faramir seems
often at a loss of words (though he is the most articulate man in the whole
LotR) and I do not agree with the view that Numenoreans could be ordered to
marry as Faramir suggests. Some words chosen are too modern: e.g. Romantic,
schoolroom. All in all the story agrees well with LotR.
LA12: Fileg
River of Fallen Stars., All of Them Together, As Truly as the Arrow Flies,
Breathe
818 characters
Evocative stories. Finely crafted in words and story lines. "As Truly as the
Arrow Flies" is the precursor of "River of fallen stars". Both stories use
the Gondorian constellations Archer who defends and who hunts to support a
family and the Swordsman (aka Orion) who defends Arda from the dark to evoke
Faramir (archer) and Boromir (swordsman). Very haunting is the last
paragraph in "River of fallen stars" where the picture of the Swordsman
below the waterline reaches for the Archer who has a foot below the water
but who managed through the years to somehow keep his head above water.
"Breathe" takes up the brothers' relation in connection with the Anduin,
while "All of Them Together" only hints at the very end on the yet unborn
brother Faramir. Very beautiful poem describing aspects of Boromir and
Thorongil. Both learned this special nursery rhyme from their father,
Boromir remembers it well and Thorongil only vaguely grasps this memory. All
stories complement LotR.
LA24: PoweroftheBook
A True Dwarf
172 characters
Good gap-filler concerning Gimli's bride. Well rendered insecurities of the
bride and convincingly done assurances by Gimli who compares his love for
Galadriel with the love for a mother. Fits into LotR.
LA26: Shakes
Messages
1271 characters
This is the last of my imaginary Appendix G stories. It fits so well in the
Tolkien universe that of all the stories in this section for me it is the
best. Sadly Shakes has not updated it for nearly a year now. Nevertheless,
as it ends after the destruction of the bridge of Osgiliath it achieves to
give a feeling of completeness. The author renders rather well the original
characters: the messenger boy Anakil and his tutor the Poet. Very
convincingly he described also the brothers Boromir and Faramir and
indirectly Denethor through eyes of the brothers and the Poet. Very nicely
done is the insecure boy who transgresses boundaries as carefree youth and
is educated through the story to become a responsible rules-abiding
messenger, while the Poet is a very well spoken wise man turned grey with
honour. Never have I read a better description of the Gondorian military.
One has really the feeling to live through the days of suspense before the
loss of Eastern Osgiliath and through the battle to ensure the destruction
of the bridge to secure the rest of Gondor. One has the feeling to go or run
through Osgiliath with Anakil, who knows every corner, every ruin, every
healers tent, and every stable because he first was an errand boy. Very well
done is the explanation why Faramir is in Osgiliath together with Boromir.
My only quibble is technically: there are many shifts in the Point of View.
Sometimes one is quite at a loss which person's POV has just started. Kudos
to Shakes for this accomplished story filling a small book.
This category ends on October 30th at 11:59pm Central US time
Msg# 2546
The Lord of the Rings Official voting ballot Posted by rosie732 October 29, 2004 - 21:44:20 Topic ID# 2546Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not
commenting on. For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make
sure to keep the top 2 lines of the header information (ex.
subcategory, code: Title by Author) and then comment beneath them.
Incomplete
LI1: An Aussie in King Aragorn's Court by Lady Coralie
Very funny! I've heard many of the aussie expressions before, but
hearing them in Middle Earth was great.
Vignette
LV2: A Way Opens by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2698
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: "Where will wants not, a way opens," Eowyn says in The Two
Towers. A series of vignettes about Merry and Eowyn, boots, the
afterlife, and joy in unlikely friendships.
You don't see that many good stories about Eowyn and Merry. I like
the way the relationship was fleshed out. Merry shows his
dedication, and still remains very hobbity with his promise to
Windfola.
L4: Answering Machines of Middle Earth by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=409
These were hysterical! Sauron's option for a ringwraith with
transportation problems was probably my favorite. Very funny.
L13: The Gift of Iluvatar by Ariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1267180/1/
Very well written story. My word, can you write angst! The
descriptions of Frodo and Sam are very good, and Aragorn's grief is
so real. Very sad and very touching.
Msg# 2547
The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings Voting, 10/30/2004, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com October 29, 2004 - 23:09:17 Topic ID# 2539
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*****
> LCC2: Horses and Verses by Altariel and IsabeauURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1263984/1/
Nice piece. The changing POVs were slightly offputting, but besides
that the story was well done.
(97 characters)
*****
> LCC7: Sara-Lisee by Erin's DaughterURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2487
This was incredibly well-written. Erotic and sensuous at those parts,
but also heart-rending sadness. Arwen's grief pervades the piece (as
does the grief of Legolas, Elrond, and Aragorn), and that grief was
not glossed over, for which I am very glad. Having Arwen call Aragorn
"Estel" (hope) was a nice touch, though I did wonder whether she
would, given that she had not met him until he was grown. Regardless,
the symbolism was nice. Well-done.
(446 characters)
*****
> LCC8: Those Who Remain by MarnieURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233093/1/
An interesting story. I think that, with Sam's love for the Elves, he
would get some measure of comfort from their presence. He had to get
solace from somewhere and, hobbits being hobbits, they probably
wouldn't understand the "big" events beyond the Scourging like Elves
and Men might. For Sam to last as long as he did, with the taint of
the Ring on his soul, support like this would have been very helpful.
I also liked how you looked at the differences between Elves and
Hobbits. There are certainly differences (for example, Rosie's
treatment of Celeborn and Celeborn's comment that, if a spouse was
late, the other would wait), but you also played up the similarities.
Also, well done on finding so many parallels between the two couples.
(774 characters)
*****
> LP1: All Ye Fellowship of Nine by AzalaisURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?
STID=670&NGID=31
Wonderful! This poem/filk had the high feeling of a Victorian carol,
yet it was still hilarious. I have to admit to laughing out loud at
the description of Legolas as a "smug git". And very well done on the
rhyme of Boromir/palantir/Faramir - that especially worked
particularly well.
(284 characters)
*****
> LP3: Goldberry's Song by VulgarweedURL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=809
Interesting - I had never thought much about Goldberry, but this poem
paints a nice picture of her.
(99 characters)
*****
> LP7: Tickle the Ranger by AlawaURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1801
Very cute. I can hear a Dunedain woman singing this as she tickles her
son's toes.
(82 characters)
*****
> LP8: War Now Calls Us by ElvenesseURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2361
Nicely done. The poem was technically nice, but I really liked seeing
this scene explored.
(90 characters)
*****
> LV1: A Gift for Pippin by GwynnydURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2971
Too often in fanfic Pippin is treated like a child, but not here. It
was refreshing to read this story where others recognize Pippin's
worth, even if he himself doubts it just at the moment (and who
wouldn't, after a direct confrontation with Sauron?). This event fits
well with canon and provides a possible positive memory Pippin could
draw on in the days to come. Also, well done on the characterization
of Legolas. I can very easily see him acting this way. You sure packed
a lot into this short piece, and it all works well.
(530 characters)
*****
> LV3: After Such Knowledge by AzalaisURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1522
Brilliant story. Recently I spent two days combing through half a
dozen computer science texts looking for a very specific piece of
code, and so I can sympathize with Gandalf and Parmandil in their
search - I can't imagine what it would be like, before indices and
knowledge being freely available! But this story definitely captures
the feel of an archive. I almost could taste the dust in the cathedral
archives where I've done genealogy research in Germany.
Beyond that, it was a thought-provoking story, and a well-told
gapfiller. And interlacing the archive scenes with those during the
Ring War gave the events of both times more poignancy and meaning.
(657 characters)
*****
> L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene CamposURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1043
Besides being a very nice friendship tale, I really liked how this
offered an explanation for why movie!Gimli is such a clown. Thanks for
the nice story.
(153 characters)
*****
> L3: Aglarond by ErinRuaURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1394
Oh, simply beautiful! I especially liked the line "How can enmities or
grievances remain, where beauty has been shared?" It was nice to see a
Legolas and Gimli friendship piece that was so rich, and that stayed
in character - but most of all, it was wonderful to see it from
Gimli's perspective! So many of these friendship pieces come from
Legolas's perspective. (Never could guess why ... ;-) ) And this is
certainly Gimli's voice.
But my favourite part of all was probably the descriptions of the
caverns. Beautiful! If I could write like that, I might just be able
to do my own Aglarond plot-bunny justice.
(610 characters)
*****
> L6: For the Road by AlawaURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1022638/1/
This is a lovely tale - it really shows the unique bond Aragorn and
Bilbo must have forged. Very amusing incident, as well!
(123 characters)
Hobbits. There are certainly differences (for example, Rosie's
treatment of Celeborn and Celeborn's comment that, if a spouse was
late, the other would wait), but you also played up the similarities.
Also, well done on finding so many parallels between the two couples.
> LP1: All Ye Fellowship of Nine by AzalaisURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?
STID=670&NGID=31
Wonderful! This poem/filk had the high feeling of a Victorian carol,
yet it was still hilarious. I have to admit to laughing out loud at
the description of Legolas as a "smug git". And very well done on the
rhyme of Boromir/palantir/Faramir - that especially worked
particularly well.
> LP3: Goldberry's Song by VulgarweedURL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=809
Interesting - I had never thought much about Goldberry, but this poem
paints a nice picture of her.
> LP7: Tickle the Ranger by AlawaURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1801
Very cute. I can hear a Dunedain woman singing this as she tickles her
son's toes.
> LP8: War Now Calls Us by ElvenesseURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2361
Nicely done. The poem was technically nice, but I really liked seeing
this scene explored.
> LV1: A Gift for Pippin by GwynnydURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2971
Too often in fanfic Pippin is treated like a child, but not here. It
was refreshing to read this story where others recognize Pippin's
worth, even if he himself doubts it just at the moment (and who
wouldn't, after a direct confrontation with Sauron?). This event fits
well with canon and provides a possible positive memory Pippin could
draw on in the days to come. Also, well done on the characterization
of Legolas. I can very easily see him acting this way. You sure packed
a lot into this short piece, and it all works well.
> LV3: After Such Knowledge by AzalaisURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1522
Brilliant story. Recently I spent two days combing through half a
dozen computer science texts looking for a very specific piece of
code, and so I can sympathize with Gandalf and Parmandil in their
search - I can't imagine what it would be like, before indices and
knowledge being freely available! But this story definitely captures
the feel of an archive. I almost could taste the dust in the cathedral
archives where I've done genealogy research in Germany.
Beyond that, it was a thought-provoking story, and a well-told
gapfiller. And interlacing the archive scenes with those during the
Ring War gave the events of both times more poignancy and meaning.
> L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene CamposURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1043
Besides being a very nice friendship tale, I really liked how this
offered an explanation for why movie!Gimli is such a clown. Thanks for
the nice story.
> L3: Aglarond by ErinRuaURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1394
Oh, simply beautiful! I especially liked the line "How can enmities or
grievances remain, where beauty has been shared?" It was nice to see a
Legolas and Gimli friendship piece that was so rich, and that stayed
in character - but most of all, it was wonderful to see it from
Gimli's perspective! So many of these friendship pieces come from
Legolas's perspective. (Never could guess why ... ;-) ) And this is
certainly Gimli's voice.
But my favourite part of all was probably the descriptions of the
caverns. Beautiful! If I could write like that, I might just be able
to do my own Aglarond plot-bunny justice.
> L6: For the Road by AlawaURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1022638/1/
This is a lovely tale - it really shows the unique bond Aragorn and
Bilbo must have forged. Very amusing incident, as well!
Msg# 2549
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Msg# 2550
Re: LotR Ballot - Marta has her say (revised) Posted by Marta October 30, 2004 - 8:16:25 Topic ID# 2548up my LotR ballot last night. I had copied-and-pasted the ballot, then
decided I would help you out by putting in character counts as I had
saw someone else do. Long story short, I think I forgot to delete the
first copy-and-paste I did, so it might be pretty confusing what
exactly I was trying to say.
To clear up any confusion, here's my ballot. Hope this is clearer.
*****
The Lord of the Rings
*****
> LCC2: Horses and Verses by Altariel and IsabeauURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1263984/1/
Nice piece. The changing POVs were slightly offputting, but besides
that the story was well done.
(97 characters)
*****
> LCC7: Sara-Lisee by Erin's DaughterURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2487
This was incredibly well-written. Erotic and sensuous at those parts,
but also heart-rending sadness. Arwen's grief pervades the piece (as
does the grief of Legolas, Elrond, and Aragorn), and that grief was
not glossed over, for which I am very glad. Having Arwen call Aragorn
"Estel" (hope) was a nice touch, though I did wonder whether she
would, given that she had not met him until he was grown. Regardless,
the symbolism was nice. Well-done.
(446 characters)
*****
> LCC8: Those Who Remain by MarnieURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233093/1/
An interesting story. I think that, with Sam's love for the Elves, he
would get some measure of comfort from their presence. He had to get
solace from somewhere and, hobbits being hobbits, they probably
wouldn't understand the "big" events beyond the Scourging like Elves
and Men might. For Sam to last as long as he did, with the taint of
the Ring on his soul, support like this would have been very helpful.
I also liked how you looked at the differences between Elves and
Hobbits. There are certainly differences (for example, Rosie's
treatment of Celeborn and Celeborn's comment that, if a spouse was
late, the other would wait), but you also played up the similarities.
Also, well done on finding so many parallels between the two couples.
(774 characters)
*****
> LP1: All Ye Fellowship of Nine by AzalaisURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?
STID=670&NGID=31
Wonderful! This poem/filk had the high feeling of a Victorian carol,
yet it was still hilarious. I have to admit to laughing out loud at
the description of Legolas as a "smug git". And very well done on the
rhyme of Boromir/palantir/Faramir - that especially worked
particularly well.
(284 characters)
*****
> LP3: Goldberry's Song by VulgarweedURL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=809
Interesting - I had never thought much about Goldberry, but this poem
paints a nice picture of her.
(99 characters)
*****
> LP7: Tickle the Ranger by AlawaURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1801
Very cute. I can hear a Dunedain woman singing this as she tickles her
son's toes.
(82 characters)
*****
> LP8: War Now Calls Us by ElvenesseURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2361
Nicely done. The poem was technically nice, but I really liked seeing
this scene explored.
(90 characters)
*****
> LV1: A Gift for Pippin by GwynnydURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2971
Too often in fanfic Pippin is treated like a child, but not here. It
was refreshing to read this story where others recognize Pippin's
worth, even if he himself doubts it just at the moment (and who
wouldn't, after a direct confrontation with Sauron?). This event fits
well with canon and provides a possible positive memory Pippin could
draw on in the days to come. Also, well done on the characterization
of Legolas. I can very easily see him acting this way. You sure packed
a lot into this short piece, and it all works well.
(530 characters)
*****
> LV3: After Such Knowledge by AzalaisURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1522
Brilliant story. Recently I spent two days combing through half a
dozen computer science texts looking for a very specific piece of
code, and so I can sympathize with Gandalf and Parmandil in their
search - I can't imagine what it would be like, before indices and
knowledge being freely available! But this story definitely captures
the feel of an archive. I almost could taste the dust in the cathedral
archives where I've done genealogy research in Germany.
Beyond that, it was a thought-provoking story, and a well-told
gapfiller. And interlacing the archive scenes with those during the
Ring War gave the events of both times more poignancy and meaning.
(657 characters)
*****
> L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene CamposURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1043
Besides being a very nice friendship tale, I really liked how this
offered an explanation for why movie!Gimli is such a clown. Thanks for
the nice story.
(153 characters)
*****
> L3: Aglarond by ErinRuaURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1394
Oh, simply beautiful! I especially liked the line "How can enmities or
grievances remain, where beauty has been shared?" It was nice to see a
Legolas and Gimli friendship piece that was so rich, and that stayed
in character - but most of all, it was wonderful to see it from
Gimli's perspective! So many of these friendship pieces come from
Legolas's perspective. (Never could guess why ... ;-) ) And this is
certainly Gimli's voice.
But my favourite part of all was probably the descriptions of the
caverns. Beautiful! If I could write like that, I might just be able
to do my own Aglarond plot-bunny justice.
(610 characters)
*****
> L6: For the Road by AlawaURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1022638/1/
This is a lovely tale - it really shows the unique bond Aragorn and
Bilbo must have forged. Very amusing incident, as well!
(123 characters)
Msg# 2551
Re: The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 30, 2004 - 15:06:08 Topic ID# 2474comment on in a day and a half?"
-----Original Message-----
From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 12:01 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] The Lord of the Rings--Official Voting Ballot
The Lord of the Rings
Official Voting Ballot
Cross-cultural
LCC3: I Return by Coriel
I really wanted to read this one, even though my time was short if I wanted
to get any other stories read for Amnesty Day. I'm very glad I took the
time. It is a masterful work, definitely long but never boring. It's a long
trip back from Isengard to Mirkwood (and then Erebor) after all. Coriel
dealt with the sea-longing and Legolas's inner conflict with it maturely and
realistically. I liked her characterization of Thranduil and that she
didn't make Gloin a softy. It would have been too easy if Legolas had
managed to win him over in just a few days. No, Coriel made the right
choice there. I also love the idea of a love for Legolas in the undying
lands. I, for one, hold out hope that she has not married another and will
be glad to receive his message from Galadriel. This story is well-written,
engrossing and encompassing. I laughed at times, I cringed at times and
actually got tears in my eyes at one particular time (Legolas and
Thranduil's talk about the sea-longing). It is not lacking in plot and does
not lag, and I think I have improved my vocabulary because of it as well. I
could see what Coriel described, very well, though at the same time I was
perplexed by how she might have seen it in her mind's eye and thus so
wonderfully translated it into words. And what about the one's she heard?
Legolas creating his own harmony with echoes in Aglarond. That was
incredible! Beautifully done, Coriel. I am impressed.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
LA7: Coriel
I Return
I honestly didn't know what to expect from Coriel, though I should have, as
looking back I can see I read quite a few of her stories. But I think they
were all fairly short. It takes something different to write a story 40
chapters long. And with, I Return, Coriel has proven she has that something.
Her characterizations were wonderful, right down to Scatha and Thranduil's
wolves. Her Elves where Elvish and her Dwarves Dwarvish. Her descriptions
were gorgeous, even when I didn't know some of what she was describing! She
never once bored me despite the length and the lack of gand adventurous
plot. Don't get me wrong, there was plot, but it's a subtler sort, the inner
conflicts and interpersonal ones. Hats off to you, Coriel. Heck, I didn't
even find many typos!
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder
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Msg# 2552
Re: LotR Ballot - Marta has her say (revised) Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 30, 2004 - 20:08:13 Topic ID# 2548From: Marta [mailto:MartaL0712@netscape.net]
Sent: Saturday, October 30, 2004 8:16 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: LotR Ballot - Marta has her say (revised)
>Vote counters, I'm really sorry. I saw this morning that I had messed up myLotR ballot last night. I had copied-and-pasted the ballot, then decided I
would help you out by putting in character counts as I had saw someone else
do. Long story short, I think I forgot to delete the first copy-and-paste I
did, so it might be pretty confusing what exactly I was trying to say.
I hadn't noticed anyone else putting in character counts, but then it might
be a category I'm not counting and just skimmed over. Anyway, there's no
need to put in character counts. We won't rely on your character counts for
our counting purposes. Each comment is counted by three people to assure
accuraces. And it appears that you may have counted spaces anyway, which we
do not.
So, which ballot should be we counting?
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder
"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
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Msg# 2553
LoTR - Official Voting Ballot Posted by MarigoldCotton@aol.com October 30, 2004 - 20:32:49 Topic ID# 2553Marigold
*****
The Lord of the Rings
Official Voting Ballot
Drabble
LD1: "And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken&" by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1532
This is a wonderful drabble, and says so much. The outwardly spoken words of Merry and Pippin are so calm and matter-of-fact, making their grim thoughts even more powerful and heart-wrenching.
Drabble
LD2: Fireside Chats by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1536
Poor Frodo! Very nice drabble!
Drabble
LD3: I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1534
This is a very sweet drabble in the beginning, and I love this line: This one was graced with endless patience, perhaps in preparation to be older cousin to this younger one. I love that Pippin remembers Merrys words from that long ago night, and that they bring him comfort when he needs it. I liked the thought that Pippin knew that Merry was still there, that the Shadow hadnt completely taken his cousin. The bit from their childhood ties into the closing line perfectly. Lindelea manages to clearly show each characters personality here. I could see from this just how they grew up to be where they are at the point of the ending line, so very well done, Lin!
Drabble
LD6: The Moon Sees Somebody I'd Like to See by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=2568
This drabble compliments I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me perfectly. Once again I liked the glimpse that we have of the two cousins when they are younger, and this drabble really gives us a nice glimpse of their personalities. Merry, a bit bookish, and thinking of adventure, Pippin thinking of nothing but Merry - because Merry is his world, Pippin would of course want his undivided attention when he was younger&and probably even when he was grown, lol. The thought that Merry has in Cormallen, wishing to hear Pippins carefree chatter once more was lovely.
Incomplete
LI5: Recaptured! Ch. 93-x by Llinos
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/970288/1/" TARGET=_new>Recaptured! Ch. 1-92</A>, <A HREF="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/969855/1/
This is my favourite fanfiction story of all! It has been going for two and a half years, and I hope that it will continue indefinitely! The author started writing this as very short chapters posted daily, which I think was exactly the right way to present it at the beginning, but I really appreciate that she has adapted to the demands of the story and made later chapters longer and longer. True, they are now updated only every couple of months, but the length and content more than makes up for the wait. I enjoy so many things about this story. Llinos took a simple idea, what events might transpire if something happened just a little bit differently on the Quest, and has created a truly wonderful story. She writes the characters of Merry and Pippin, the main characters, wonderfully, and in such a way that the reader just falls in love with them. Their trials and tribulations and heroic deeds are like the wonderful old serials at the cinema, and each chapter is satisfying and still leaves the reader wanting more. The ever-expanding plot is fascinating! One of the things that make this story so great is the way every genre and emotion is to be found here. Hurt/comfort, humour, angst, romance, battles, drama, love, innocence, horror, mysticism, danger, lightheartedness, and adventure it is all here, and in just the right amounts. The characters, of every race, hobbits, men, elf, orcs, dwarves, and even beasts, are written appropriately, and every character speaks with just the right *voice*, something that isnt easy to do. This is an incredibly enjoyable story, and I look forward to each and every chapter!
Vignette
LV1: A Gift for Pippin by Gwynnyd
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2971
Rating: G
There are some very nice moments in this story. I especially like that Legolas comforts Pippin about what happened in Moria, as so many authors do blame him for waking the balrog and Gandalfs death, and I dont agree with that. The talk about the elves writing a song for Pippin is very nice, and the joke about Legolas making a comb for Aragorn was good. I did think that it was a bit out of character for Merry to leave Pippins side at this time, and that felt a bit contrived, but overall an enjoyable story.
Vignette
LV7: Sting by TreeHugger
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1233315/1/
This has been one of my favourite stories from the very first time that I read it. It is a gem filled with many smaller gems. Bilbo and Glorfindel are both in character and the dialogue is very well written. The whole plot idea is a very good one, as if Thorin and Gandalfs swords were famous blades, why not Bilbos Sting? And the origin of the blade is just inspired. I like the idea that this sword went on to serve the Fellowship so well on the Quest. The story flows so nicely, starting out with a very comfortable feeling, and then becoming more and more fascinating. The story has some wonderful canon details, and the author really knows her stuff.
L4: Answering Machines of Middle Earth by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=409
Rating: G
Once again Lindelea uses her wit and has written a delightfully funny story! There are a few stories of this genre out there, but this is by far the best that I have ever read!
L13: The Gift of Iluvatar by Ariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1267180/1/
Rating: G
This story draws the reader in from the very start. It is written in such a style that I felt that I had an intimate view of what was happening. All of the details are wonderfully drawn, and I liked the attention to them. For example, the fact that Frodo and Sam were holding hands so tightly when found was a perfect touch. All of the characterisations were very good, and I especially enjoyed poor Peregrin having his bath!
L15: Waiting, Wondering, Wandering, Wishing by Gonzai
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=308&SPOrdinal=1
This is a nice picture of Merry and Pippin, and I enjoyed it very much!
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the story, here):
Drabble
LDA3: Lindelea
And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken&, Fireside Chats, I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me, The Moon Sees Somebody I'd Like to See
Drabbles are something that I really enjoy writing, and I know how hard they are to get just right. Lindelea manages to write drabbles that are multi-layered, and doesnt waste a word. I like the way that she often ties in past with present.
LA19: Lindelea
Answering Machines of Middle Earth
Always a sharp and witty author when writing humour!
LA21: Llinos
Recaptured!
Llinos took a simple idea, what would happen if something happened just a little bit differently on the Quest, and has created a wonderful story, my absolute favourite work of fanfiction. It is a labour of love for her, with a huge fan following, and I really appreciate the amount of work that she puts into it. I am very impressed by the way she has caused this, her main story, Recaptured, to evolve over the course of its writing. The chapters started as very short daily updates, and now are approaching 10,000 words, and are posted every couple of months, as she adapted her style to better encompass the scale of the story. It is like those wonderful old serials that they used to show at the cinema, and I admire the depth of enjoyment and reading satisfaction that she is able to put into her stories. In the course of this particular story she has come up with some wonderful and creative ideas, and come up with them when the fandom was just starting, and there was not much fanfiction out there. I love her imagination, and her skill in getting her ideas across, and in a way that entertains the reader. She is able to write hurt/comfort, angst, humour, horror, and drama equally well, and they are all present in just the right amounts in her work. She also knows her hobbits, and is able to write not only them incredibly well, but also Legolas, Gimli, Gandalf, Aragorn, Faramir, Eowyn and Gollum, and many others from the books not too many authors are able to capture so many characters voices so very well. And she is skilled in writing her original characters as well, not just orcs, but also several characters among men. I love the way that she has created unique voices for all the characters, and keeps their voices true. I have no doubt that she will keep this story fresh and wonderful to its conclusion, and then I hope she will consider a sequel!
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There, peeping among the cloud-wrack above a dark tor high up in the mountains, Sam saw a white star twinkle for awhile. The beauty of it smote his heart, as he looked up out of the forsaken land, and hope returned to him. For like a shaft, clear and cold, the thought pierced him that in the end the Shadow was only a small and passing thing: there was light and high beauty for ever beyond its reach.
Sam, in Mordor, RoTK
Msg# 2554
Re: LotR Ballot - Marta has her say (revised) Posted by Marta October 30, 2004 - 21:29:46 Topic ID# 2548> Anyway, there's nocounts for
> need to put in character counts. We won't rely on your character
> our counting purposes. Each comment is counted by three people toassure
> accuraces. And it appears that you may have counted spaces anyway,which we
> do not.Yes, I counted spaces. I forgot that you didn't count those My
mistake!
> So, which ballot should be we counting?http://groups.yahoo.com/group/MEFAwards/message/2550
>
Sorry for the confusion, and thanks for all your hard work.
Marta
Msg# 2555
Re: LotR Ballot - Marta has her say (revised) Posted by Marta October 30, 2004 - 21:31:01 Topic ID# 2548> Anyway, there's nocounts for
> need to put in character counts. We won't rely on your character
> our counting purposes. Each comment is counted by three people toassure
> accuraces. And it appears that you may have counted spaces anyway,which we
> do not.Yes, I counted spaces. I forgot that you didn't count those My
mistake!
> So, which ballot should be we counting?http://groups.yahoo.com/group/MEFAwards/message/2550
>
Sorry for the confusion, and thanks for all your hard work.
Marta
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Msg# 2558
Re: Hobbits -- Official Voting Ballot by proxy. Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 30, 2004 - 23:59:30 Topic ID# 2558However, as the time stamp shows it was just after midnight on Oct. 1st, it
couldn't be counted at that time. Since she was having trouble, I told her
I would post this for her on Amnesty Day.
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Post-WOTR
Hob4-1: A Crate of Lemons by ShireDweller
This is a great little story with amusing twist. The story line is unique
and engaging, yet simple. Still, it manages to communicate a lot about
Frodo state of mind, the pain he's feeling, and his ability to rise above it
to enjoy some of life's good moments. I love the way the author the handles
the relationship between Frodo and Sam, as well their dialog. Sam's actions
and voice are perfect!
Post-WOTR
Hob4-9: Garden Plot by ShireDweller
Delightful, engaging, and heartwarming are just a few of the adjectives that
this wonderful story brings to mind. However, they only begin to describe
this tender portrayal of the post-quest relationships among Frodo, Sam, and
Rosie. The story's charm, subtlety, and depth make it one of my most
favorite hobbit fan- fict's. There is no slash, gratuitous lust, or
anything else that would detract from the simple, but deep love that the
three have for each other. The garden setting, with its thorns, tools,
seeds, and every-day chores, provides an ideal backdrop for metaphors of
challenges, working things out, and emotional growth. It also allows the
author to highlighting key elements of their relationships, without over
doing it or losing the reader in complex story lines. The story contains
creative and sometimes humorous imagery that ties nicely in the hobbit
culture and environment.
Sam's and Frodo's characters felt refreshingly familiar. I didn't have to
reshape my mental image of either one. Sam voice's is especially well done!
It is very consistent with his background and upbringing.
HobA23: ShireDweller
ShireDweller is a fantastic hobbit fan-fict author who displays amazing
insight in the circumstances and attitudes of Frodo and Sam, as well as a
solid understanding of hobbit culture, history, and surroundings. She has a
beautiful, flowing style that is engaging and fun to read. I just hope that
she write more.
> HuA2: No Living Man by ElanaURL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1672&cid=6920
Very cute. I never had thought of how many people could have killed
old WiKi.
> HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's DaughterURL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2189
*Snork* "Several weeks later, at the front..." This was the funniest
thing I'd read in a long time. I particularly liked the bit about
Gollum as a water-rat. He *does* look a bit like that, at least in
movieverse.
> Hu15: The Jewel in the Crown by AlawaURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/917100/1/
Oh, this was nice! I really enjoyed reading it. The black humour
worked very well, and I loved how this story took us (the readers) on
a slow, meandering journey. The cast was, of course, almost entirely
original, but somehow they felt distinctly Gondorian and very
believable, which is a breath of fresh air when there are so many Mary
Sues floating around. (And yes, the Dol Amroth crew do seem the sort
to prefer blues and yellows.)
> SI-1: A Veiled Light by AndrethURL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=440
This is one of the few Works-in-Progress that I read, and I'm not
sorry. The plot (at least in the chapters that were still online when
I went to reread) is slow and meandering, and I feel like I'm
discovering the joys of a body with Ilmarë for the first time. But not
too slow. It's never dull. Just... exploratory, I guess.
I also had to laugh at the explanation of Cirdan's beard, and Ilmarë's
full bladder. Well done, and I look forward to more.
> S1: Cuivie by ZimraphelURL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1813532/1/
Fascinating! A short but well-written look at a moment I've always
wanted to see in more details. There should be more Ent stories,
especially if they are like this.
Marta
Msg# 2561
Amnesty Ballot - Hobbits Posted by Larian Elensar October 31, 2004 - 0:10:09 Topic ID# 2561Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
Post-WOTR
Hob4-13: Shining Through by Dana
I love the devotion between Merry and Pippin. Nice.
The Lord of the Rings
HobL1: Because it's my Birthday by Pervinca
And everyone thinks Pippin is the airhead. What a thoughtful hobbit he really
is. I hope Merry remembers on his birthday!
The Lord of the Rings
HobL2: Bedside Chatter by Silvermoon Lady
Yep. Those hobbits are full of surprises, even for seasoned warriors and kings.
Nice story.
Hob15: Weight of Stone by Chris
Oooh, how's that for precognition? Only a two skip and look what happened.
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Drabble
ED1: Hannon Le by Lady Aranel
Lady A proves that imagery is as good as, or better than being graphic. Well
done.
Drabble
ED4: Strange to Us by Elana
Poor Legolas, how his longing changes...
Drabble
ED5: Strange Vessels by Elvenesse
This makes me think of Stonehenge and the stories it could tell, if we could
hear it.
The Silmarillion
ES7: Hide and Seek by Ithilwen
Oh, I really enjoyed this view of young Feanorians. The whole thing showed
waves of pain and heartache, and I really felt for all of the boys, and their
parents. I even felt some sympathy for Feanor and that's unusual. Well done.
Vignette
EV2: Cold Comfort by Lady Aranel
I've always thought Legolas and Eowyn looked good together. They seemed to have
the same outlook. I liked this view of their relationship. Well done.
Vignette
EV5: Rose Riddle by Stultiloquentia
It sort of seems fitting that the hobbits get the care of the elves' land after
the elves leave. I noticed one typo 'chose another keeper' should be 'choose'
E9: Firimar by Ithilwen
What a surprise ending! I liked reading about an elf who liked and respected
the second born.
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Gondor
MeG3: Chance Meetings by Tanaqui
Interesting background for that law. Good thing Faramir knew when to defy it.
Gondor
MeG13: Lady of Silences by Altariel
Eww. Though I happen to agree that Denethor is corrupt and dark in ways we
don't know. Though I really think it was the growing darkness in Mordor that
pushed him over the edge, I guess he could have had the potential to be evil
before then too.
Gondor
MeG17: Reasons by Saralitazie
I liked the brothers conversation but the term prissy wuss sort of threw me out
of the moment. It sounded a bit too modern, but maybe that's just me. It was
nice to see that there was real affection between the boys though. Well done.
Gondor
MeG19: Singer by the shore by Beth Winter
Wow. I liked this. Of course, I'm an elf-aholic and any story with my favorite
Feanorian gets extra points. Well done.
Gondor
MeG24: Too Late for Misgivings by Shadow975
I always wondered what that conversation might be like. I think you got it.
Well done.
Post-WOTR
Me4-4: Light Lingering by Earmire/Nol
Oh! What an interesting perspective. I guess Faramir could really see
Eldarion's side of things. It must have been difficult to be Aragorn's oldest
son. Glad that Faramir could help him through it. Well done.
Post-WOTR
Me4-5: Missing by Firerose
I read this once a long time ago and it still disturbs me. But it was also
well-written and showed just how far mad Denethor had fallen.
Me2: Bindings of Gold by Lyllyn
Ooh, I didn't think I could ever feel sorry for the Witch King, but I guess
like all the others, he didn't start out evil, just gullible and a little
power-hungry.
Me4: Gift Horses by Jedishampoo
I always thought it was odd that Eowyn could fall in love with Faramir so soon
after being hurt, so I'm glad that you showed her approaching her relationship
with a little caution, though there's still that underlying hope too.
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Amnesty Day Ballot Larian Elensar larian_elensar@yahoo.com
Rh1: Bitter Watches of the Night by Sharpeslass
Ewww...showed just how desperate and insane Grima was. Poor Eowyn. I always
sort of felt sorry for Grima because I thought he was just sad, but you showed
a different side of him, one that was truly corrupt and evil, though still sad.
Rh6: Keepers of the Hearth by Alawa
Great picture of the people (women) who hold down the fort while the men are
off fighting. I'm glad that she liked Lothiriel. Lovely story.
Rh8: Myth and Memory by Ainaechoiriel
I read this a long time ago, and still enjoyed the richness of the story.
There was no rushing to get the door warden to start to like the elf, but a
slow enlightening that made it seem very real. Well done.
Rh9: Namesake by Ainaechoiriel
Loved seeing the door warden again, and wonderful to see his tribute to his
friend.
Rh11: Safe Journey, Brother by AngelsFall
Wah. I never imagined Eomer dying like that, so slowly. But I guess as king,
he was in less battles, so it was bound to be that way, if he didn't die of old
age.
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Authors:
Elves
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Authors:
EA18: Marnie
Oak and Willow, The Wisdom of Isildur, A Leaf on a Stream, Battle of the
Golden Wood
Marnie handles these storeis as she does all stories about Celeborn, with great love and detail. She does her homework and comes up with a wonderful Sindarin based view of Middle
Earth
EA8: Eresse
By Hook or By Crook, Meldir: At First Sight, With Friends Like These
Eresse is another author who loves her subject, in her case the twins and Legolas. She deals with them in a loving manner that is reflected in stories that read pleasantly and leave the reader glad they found her.
EA13: Larian Elensar
Keeper Of The Flame
Larian writes with the eye of a romantic at heart, which is how I always like to see Celeborn and Galadriel portrayed.
EA14: Larien Elengasse
The Kiss, Henen
Larien hits both of these stories wonderfully and briefly and just enough to bring a tear to your eyes.
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Poetry
MPA6: RennWench and Alstaria
I Ride
Renn and Alstaria wrote in a style that suited their subject and did it very effectively.
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Authors:
OA5: shadow975
The Eyes Of An Enemy
This author does a wonderful job of jumping into the heads of both Uruk and Maný her style is to the point but not simple.
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RhA6: Nessime
Promises to Keep
A very good job of writing and not revealing who her first person pov is at first. I enjoyed this persons style and choice of subject very much.
RhA9: Sun Queen
Complicated Allies
The POV that this author chose was what made her ficý she chose well and the result was a very effective fiction.
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Authors:
AA5: Khylea
Icicle Cream, Braid, One Of Them, She Gave Me Three, To Save a Hobbit
Khylea handles her subjects with love and care, making her stories both sweet and sad. She does a wonderful job of saying what if in a tiny plot hole and filling it in.
AA7: Legorfilinde
Bitten, Fireside Tales
The authorýs style is, as most of what I read, to the point. Not a lot of flowery words, but rather a good read.
AA9: Marta
Hope Rekindled
Marta is famous for her gap fillers and while this one is not quite that, she does convey her theme well.
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Romance
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Authors:
Poetry
RPA2: Naresha
Forever My Heart
Naresha often writes poetry instead of stories and her poetry is storytelling and lyrical at the same time.
RA12: Eresse
Tender Musings
As I have said in precious votes, Eresseýs love for her subjects is really quite obvious and her writing style most pleasant to read.
RA17: Julie
Amarie & Haldir: Paths of Destiny, Khila Amin
Julie is a talented writer who can suck you right into her world and make you see her characters as vividly as if you were there.
RA18: Julie & Fianna
Elanor's Revenge
Julie and Fianna together give us heroines with grin and characters that are unforgettable.
RA19: Kharessa Bloodrose
Vanilla Cream
Kharessaýa work flows and winds its way around sensuously to make you be able to see, smell and taste what she talks about.
RA26: Mirasaui
The Gift, Warrior
Mira writes with loving and great detail but it is not distracting but rather enhances her work. Her characters are laid with the same loving detail and I tend to fall in love with them too.
RA28: Oakenshield
To My Shining Light, Jealous
Oak is also another marvelous writer. I can almost believe that she was thereý her style is that clear and thereýs always a bit of melancholy that I like.
RA33: RennWench
Why?
Rennýs stories are lyrical as her poetry and I like it. It is a refreshing difference.
RA40: Tyellas
Quickening
Tyellas can write anything, period, and make me believe it. She happens to be my favorite writer in the entire Fandom.
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Drabble
DDA4: Marta
Fealty and Service, Fear! Fire! Foes!, The Steward and the King
Marta is in her element with drama and drabbles. They do seem to her specialty and she addresses them well.
Drabble
DDA5: Naresha
Lament To Lorien
Naresha does a wonderful sad drabble and this series is one of her best.
Drabble
DDA6: Oakenshield
Sundered
Oakýs dramatic style fits the drabble and category well. She writer serious fiction with a wistful sadness.
DA20: Eresse
Forbidden Fruit, Gwador: Sorrow's First Dawning, Heart's Brother, In The
Silence Of Our Hearts, Into Temptation
Eresseýs dramatic books in her Greenleaf and Imladris series are as always well done and sad without being over dramatic and maudlin.
DA29: jenolas
Trees of Remembrance
Jenolas has a wonderfully sad little dramatic piece with this one. A person would have to have a heart of stone not to be moved.
DA31: Khylea
Strawberries, Sunset
Khylea writes dramatic fiction as well as she does lighthearted romance. She finds a word or sentence and makes a story from and does an excellent job.
DA39: Marnie
Between Two Worlds, The Mantle Of Power, A Family Trait
Marnie has a flair for drama without becoming overly sentimental. I find all her work a joy to read.
DA52: Trinity Helix
Final Flight, Heartsong
Drmatic tearful events are portrayed well in these short little fics. Trinity has a nice style without a lot of extra wording too.
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Authors:
HuA10: Claudi007
Home for the Holidays by Elladan son of Elrond, How I Spent My Summer
Vacation
If Claudioýs aim was to make sure my monitor was splattered with whatever I was drinking, he succeeded with his often dry, very often tongue in cheek Elladan and his adventures with everyday life. He manages to make the mundane funny and the funny seem normal in the life of Elladan.
HuA21: Jenolas
Dance With Me
I like her sweet gentle tale of poor Legolasý she does a lovely job of making him seem such a poor thing in the face of having to dance.
HuA29: Theresa Green
Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa Green
I enjoy her humorous style and have in several things sheýs written and how she stayed to the ownerýs manual style and voice all the way through. Theresa always provides a nice giggle.
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Msg# 2573
Re: Rohan--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 31, 2004 - 0:29:28 Topic ID# 2160From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Sunday, September 26, 2004 12:01 AM
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Subject: [MEFAwards] Rohan--Official Voting Ballot
Rohan
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Rh2: Complicated Allies by Sun Queen
A chilling account of one man's observation of Legolas and Gimli at Helm's
Deep. The summary says "racism is still alive" and that shows, but I like
it for what it says about these two. They may be fair or strange to look
at, but they are both fearsome worriors, the likes of which Rohan has
probably never seen before.
Rh4: For the Dark by Forodwaith
That's a sad ending but it certainly explains why he never made another
song. Good story.
Rh5: Gastings Night by Dwimordene
Another comment that will suffer being written with only memory to guide it.
This was definitely a spooky story, but not so terrifying or scary. More
like a Twilight Zone episode. Well done.
Rh10: Promises to Keep by Nessime
Thoughtfully written perspective of a usually overlooked character: Hasufel!
I enjoyed this and really liked his loyalty and understanding of all that
was going on in Rohan and the battle.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
RhA4: Dwimordene
I'm running out of things to say about Dwimordene. Here she proves she can
write Men other than Aragorn. Just kidding; she's shown that elsewhere as
well. Anyway, she handles an adolescent viewpoint well, and does the
Twilight Zone bit quite well also.
RhA6: Nessime
Not everyone can write the point of view of a horse, but Nessime does it
very well.
RhA9: Sun Queen
Sun Queen wrote a simple, but well-written short story in the perspective of
a Rohirrim soldier who had never seen an Elf or Dwarf.
RhA10: Thevina Finduilas
Daughters of Orome
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Msg# 2574
Re: Drama--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 31, 2004 - 0:29:47 Topic ID# 2317From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
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Drama
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Gap-filler
DG1: A Silence Covered in Stone by Zimraphel
I have read this one before and my memory is, again, lacking. Suffice it to
say that this story offers a chilling view of what may have become of King
Eanur.
Incomplete
DI6: Marinus Stiria by bryn_bnw
A disturbing story of what might happen should a Silmaril wash up on shore,
setting friend against friend. Oh, and Morgoth's trying to get back into
Middle-Earth. I like that Legolas tries to do the right thing, but I'm
afraid that the story has left off at a bad point. Bergi! And Gimli's been
keel-hauled and Aragorn and Legolas seem to be captured. The really creepy
Corsair has the stone. Oh dear!
LOTR
DL13: Veiling of the Sun by Maggie (M. N. Theis)
For torture fic lovers, this is a wonderfully angst-filled story, in spite
of language flaws. It has a plot that catches one right from the beginning.
What if Boromir had help? I like that Legolas takes back the ring and
passes it to Sam. And from there on this plot will wring your heart over
and over and surprise it, too, as Boromir, in the end does more for Legolas
than his own brothers. It has an ambiguous ending, but one that let's you
interpret it in your own way. I chose to interpret it as a happy ending.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW2: All These Wore Wings by fileg
I don't think I'd ever thought of the similarities between Minas Tirith and
Gondolin, Idril and Eowyn. I didn't really get the part about the boats,
but I do thank Fileg for opening my mind to those similarities.
Pre-WOTR
DPrW7: Promises to Keep by JastaElf
Yet another review to fall prey to my Swiss Chese memory. I do have an
ff.net review to go by, so I know I liked this story, especially part where
Legolas is afraid all his words will fall out! JastaElf did well in
bringing out the magic in Mirkwood it as well as the danger. I like what
we've gotten to see of Brethilas, Legolas's brother from other stories.
Speaking of other stories....
D5: Magpies and Rhymes by Acacea
I honestly don't know what the magpies have to do with that rhyme. Is it
real? Or made up for this story? Anyway, I like the foreboding of the
magpies when put with the rhyme. Three for a letter, but one for sorrow.
And it was sorry in the end.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
DA6: Altariel
Altariel is another author whose review must suffer because of my memory. I
loved her series about Faramir, which The Fire Sermon is part of. Altariel
does a wonderful job, especially with his point of view. She's a wonderful
writer, as evidenced by her now getting paid for such work! I wish I could
say more.
DA55: Zimraphel
One more comment on Zimraphel as an author. Oh, haven't I said it all
already? I would go on and on as she deserves, but my post-MegaStress brain
hasn't been allowing me to make very well-written comments. In fact, I'm not
sure all my comments make sense. So if I was going to go on and on, I'd
want it to actually say something, something I hadn't already said. In
short, Zimraphel is a great writer, one I'm happy to have read and nominated
for these awards.
This category ends October 15th at 11:59pm Central US time.
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And we *might* get an extra hour for it. Why? Because supposedly Daylight
Savings Time is supposed to be ending soon. I'm just not sure when.
According to one website it was Oct. 31 at midnight, though these things
usually change at 1 or 2 am. But that's a problem. I can't stay up that
late! It's already after 1 and the World Time server doesn't show it being
midnight, so apparently, the clocks haven't switched back yet. I can't stay
up another hour to find out if they do then. I have church in the
morning....
But what if I show up an hour early?
Eek. I hate this time of year (and it's corresponding day in the spring). I
know I'm supposed to "spring forward, and fall back", but I just don't know
when I'm supposed to do it. Drat it. I want to enjoy my extra hour of
sleep!
--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2576
Re: Amnesty Day has begun! Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 31, 2004 - 1:23:43 Topic ID# 2575should be set back one hour at 2am on the last Sunday of October. So that
means we do get 25 hours of Amnesty Day.
Or I'll be late for church.
One of the two.
Off to get some sleep.
--Ainaechoiriel
Who thinks she did actually managed to read a lot of stories today for
Amnesty Day and hopes she will get some more read tomorrow!
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From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Sunday, October 31, 2004 1:14 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Cc: MEFAStaff@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] Amnesty Day has begun!
And many of you have already taken advantage of it!
And we *might* get an extra hour for it. Why? Because supposedly Daylight
Savings Time is supposed to be ending soon. I'm just not sure when.
According to one website it was Oct. 31 at midnight, though these things
usually change at 1 or 2 am. But that's a problem. I can't stay up that
late! It's already after 1 and the World Time server doesn't show it being
midnight, so apparently, the clocks haven't switched back yet. I can't stay
up another hour to find out if they do then. I have church in the
morning....
But what if I show up an hour early?
Eek. I hate this time of year (and it's corresponding day in the spring). I
know I'm supposed to "spring forward, and fall back", but I just don't know
when I'm supposed to do it. Drat it. I want to enjoy my extra hour of
sleep!
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder
"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
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Mirasaui and Thundera Tiger submitted some more banners for Crossovers so
that all of those have at least 2 banners now.
Well, Happy Halloween everyone. Try not to eat too much candy!
--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 2578
Silmarillion Official Ballot - Amnesty vot. Posted by jilba25au October 31, 2004 - 4:11:09 Topic ID# 2578Official Voting Ballot
First Age
S1-2: As Little Might Be Thought by Deborah Judge
The first Silm story I ever read, and I have never forgotten it! I
love how Maglor the dread Kinslayer slowly wins the love of the
terrified little boys. It's a great pity Deborah is not writing more
than she has for the last year or so.
First Age
S1-4: Dark Forge by Ithilwen
This magnificent story, and the rest in Ithilwen's series on The
Mole are what started my Maeglin fixation. This elf was not evil,
but misunderstood, and he had a difficult childhood. Yeah, right
Maeglin. But we love you just the same!
First Age
S1-13: White Wing by Cirdan
A sweet little piece, where Cirdan proves not only elves have
foresight.
Incomplete
SI-1: A Veiled Light by Andreth
What can I say? Having been `in' so to speak on much of the agony
this author has been through with this story, and seen it evolve
into a saga of sweeping granduor to rival Tolkien himself I can't
speak too highly. From poor Ilmare, battling the shortcomings and
strangness of her mortal body, to the beautiful word portraits of
Cirdan, Elrond and Gil-Galad as descended from Finarfine, this story
has everything, including the author's wicked sense of humour!
Romance
SR2: Fell Fire by Finch
I like to think Tolkien himself would approve of this sad fic. I
really really what to shake Aegnor and ask him `what were you
thinking!' I guess he thought Andreth would forget him, but she
didn't. Poor elf, he faced as much sorrow and regret at the end for
not marrying her as he would have if he had just without the happy
years in between. Finrod doesn't come off as blameless, yet he is
secure in the belief he acted (or didn't) for everyone's good. A
good elf who maybe meddled where he oughtn't to have, but I wonder
how much this story later influenced his going above and beyond his
oath to Barahir when Beren enlisted his aid. My very favourite Silm
story.
Romance
SR4: Taming the Wildflower by Sulriel
Nice to have Maedhros in a romance where Fingon is not the love
interest. The tension between Maedhros and his brothers over
Rhavloth is so Feanorian!
The ruin of Doriath is tragic, but the best part is the lovely
ending when Rhavloth waits with Feanor for Maedhros, and they
finally marry at last.
Romance
SR6: The Unforgettable Fire by Ithilwen
Well done for this lovely story Ithilwen. I do believe it's one of
your best. Caranthir the nasty tempered falls for the middle aged
Haleth. A tale of beauty and tragedy that the reader can feel
Caranthir's sorrow with him when he experiences the sadness of the
first elf/mortal marriage and how torn he is when he remarries to
carry on the family line, in vain, however.
Personally I think Morgoth ought to have been very glad Haleth was
too old to present Caranthir with a brood of kids, they'd have taken
Angband all by themselves!
Msg# 2579
Hobbits Official Voting Ballot Posted by rosie732 October 31, 2004 - 7:06:31 Topic ID# 2579Official Voting Ballot
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Post-WOTR
Hob4-1: A Crate of Lemons by ShireDweller
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1247016/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The morning after 'Garden Plot' is full of surprises, when
a special delivery from Gondor arrives at Bag End.
This is a cute story. Frodo is sore and cranky. Sam is over-
protective. Rosie tries her best to help, and discovers she doesn't
know the first thing about making lemonade. Funny.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-9: Garden Plot by ShireDweller
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/784544/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Frodo finds solace while doing some light gardening with
Sam at Bag End.
Very nice. I like Sam's reaction to Frodo attempting to help with
the gardening, and how the effort ultimately brings him a little bit
of peace. What a precious gift at that time for Frodo.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-10: Linden and Laurel by Ariel & Aralithiel
URL: http://www.bagendwest.net/LL.html
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sam knew his master had to leave the Shire, knew he could
never have found healing in middle earth, but did Frodo ever become
whole in the West? A tender and mystical tale of how Sam learned, in
the end, that he had.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-11: Reckoning by Aratlithiel
URL: http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/Reckoning.html
Rating: PG So much angst!!!!
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Sam helps Merry and Pippin to understand why Frodo had to
cross over the Sea.
I love this story. I love the way Sam helps Merry and Pippin
understand what Frodo had done, and I love that he DID it, rather
than keeping his mouth shut because of class differences. Go Sam!
Pre-WotR
HobPW1: A Mother's Day by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1309496/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Merry, Pippin, and Pervinca are full of mischief and
behaving a bit oddly-- driving poor Eglantine to the brink of
madness.
Very sweet. Almost too sweet but not quite over the edge. I like
when young Pippin is more than just the troublemaker or comic relief.
Pre-WotR
HobPW7: River Stones by Jeodo Brandybuck
URL: http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=45
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Frodo, Sam and Merry take Pippin on his first adventure
camping in the Shire and come across a few adventures that they
didn't expect.
In fanfic Frodo is always being beaten up by Lotho or Ted or some
other Shire bully. It's nice to see him give as good as he gets for
a change. And it's in defense of Pippin, not just for his own
sake. Very in character.
Pre-WotR
HobPW8: The Shaping of Samwise by Jodancingtree
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2010
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: When the time came that Frodo must carry the Ring, Sam
would not let him go alone. But loyalty that deep has to begin
somewhere….
Oh my, I love this story. Sam's dedication. Frodo's confidence in
him. Even Bilbo being the type to try new-fangled ideas. Sam's
character especially shines through. I can totally see him
continuing to do what's right, and then some, even after Bilbo
blamed him for the flooding.
The Lord of the Rings
HobL4: The Conspiracy of Hobbits by Dreamflower
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1707
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: How the famous conspiracy formed by Frodo's friends came
about.
I enjoy stories that give Fatty Bolger some characterization. You
don't see many of those. The stories of Merry and Pippin when they
were younger are priceless. A great gap-filler fic.
Hob10: Sam's Garden by Shireling
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1648
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Love expressed through the creation and nurturing of a
garden.
This ficlet goes into exquisite detail of a beautiful garden that
has been lovingly tended for years, `a labour of love to honour a
lifelong friend.' It has an unusual twist at the end, and it's not
who you expect it to be, which makes it all the more lovely.
Hob11: Sam's Rose by jodancingtree
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1179
Rating: PG adult themes
Romance Partners: Sam and Rose
Summary: The girl he left behind him -- and came home to. His
thoughts go back to her again and again, even in Mordor. But when
they return, can he make a life with her -- and Frodo?
This is the only fic I've seen this idea in, but it's a great one.
Frodo starting a school for the Hobbiton children so they can learn
to read is just so Frodo. He is able to give so much to the
community, more than they realize, but offering the school. As if
he hasn't done enough already. Sam and Rosie are well written as
well. Highly recommended.
category. But don't repost votes you've already done. The only one that
should be reposting is Marta with her Silm votes. And she has.
Everyone else (and Marta, too), post away! Just only post new votes!
Have fun!
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Msg# 2581
AW: [MEFAwards] Amnesty Day -- Crossover --Official Voting Ballot Posted by elanor of aquitania October 31, 2004 - 7:57:18 Topic ID# 2581I added to all votes the number of characters as counted by Word without
blanks.
If I counted correctly, do you want me to help counting to avoid that you
develop a carpal tunnel syndrome ? If yes, should I do a special category ?
I could help in the evening today.
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C5: Spirits of the House by Altariel
(618 characters)
When I read this the first time I did not realize this to be an adaptation
of Dickens's Christmas Carol. I thought "what a strange ending". Now having
reread it I recognize the similarities. Speech is very good as in all
stories by Altariel. The Characters of Denethor and Faramir are well done.
And the story line of "A Christmas Carol" is well adapted. But the end
(though it _is_ like that in the Original) still is unbelievable to me. For
me the description of Finduilas' ghost is unconvincing too, not so the
visions she reveals to Denethor. I think my problem is that I know that "A
Christmas Carol" is a fairy tale, at least I read it as such. But I cannot
reconcile myself with a Denethor-story rendered as a fairy tale. Apologies
for my dark mind.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
CA1: Altariel
Spirits of the House
(291 characters)
When I read this the first time I did not realize this to be an adaptation
of Dickens's Christmas Carol. I thought "what a strange ending". Now having
reread it I recognize the similarities. Speech is very good as in all
stories by Altariel. The Characters of Denethor and Faramir are well done.
And the story line of "A Christmas Carol" is well adapted.
Msg# 2582
AW: [MEFAwards] Amnesty Day -- Men -- Official Voting Ballot Posted by elanor of aquitania October 31, 2004 - 8:13:27 Topic ID# 2582[MEFAwards] Men -- Official Voting Ballot
I added to all votes the number of characters as counted by Word without
blanks.
If I counted correctly, do you want me to help counting to avoid that you
develop a carpal tunnel syndrome ? If yes, should I do a special category ?
Sorry, but for Altariel’s stories I have to quote. I can simply not restrain
myself to not showcasing a single line of her beautiful words. But I really
strained to keep it to a minimum not marring the outcome of character
counting without quoting.
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Gondor
MeG1: A Pale Light Lingering by Altariel
(999 characters - 247 quoting = 752 without quoting)
Whew, that is a very poetical story. Though the anachronism of the clock
chiming silvery really mars my vision. Nevertheless, due to the very concise
use of beautiful words for me this resembles poetry. I like the restrained
manner in which Faramir and Denethor work together for the realm, Faramir
never letting his suppressed anger colour any of his thought, Denethor
allowing his son to see his Rangers at Mettare. The very best in this story
is the climax after the very evocatively described lighting of the candles:
from “'This is where the light begins,' I said” to “... It goes on through
the whole of Gondor, to the Sea where it glitters on the water... And then
it passes further, on into the West, to Valinor, where it is brightest and
does not die. But this is where it begins. The light starts here, with us,
in Ithilien.'” This is simply beautiful. It creates a very beautiful picture
in my mind of the whole of Gondor lying under a glow of the rising sun, from
Ithilien to the coasts where the light twinkles on the waves. And on the
other hand in my mind it creates the vision of the men holding out against
the darkness looming from Mordor, saving the west by their struggle to hold
the darkness at bay.
Gondor
MeG6: Death by Water by Altariel
(1697 characters, 105 quoting)
Chapter One: Rendered in Faramir's own words we hear here the eloquent man
of LotR speaking many well formed sentences. Quite believable for me. I have
not found another Tolkien-fanfiction author who speaks as well to my mind as
Altariel. “and so pressing did it seem to me that the call be answered, that
I bore no ill will and felt only relief that the matter was in hand” is for
me good Tolkien-style and expresses my view that for Faramir it was more
important that someone went to Rivendell to solve the dream’s riddle than
that he went himself. Also very well done is the scene were Faramir tunes
his father to listen and recognize Boromir’s horn.
Chapter Two: The story chapters stand for themselves but are linked together
by the dream of the large wave smothering all beneath. Beautiful done is
also the Akallabeth as a vision of Faramir. And the downfall of Numenor is
used as a powerful introduction to Faramir’s vision of the dead Boromir
which itself is covered only by a few words. But by rendering the
Denethor-Faramir relationship as one between a stern father and a resigned
but nevertheless tirelessly trying son one understands Faramir’s leaving of
his post to tell his father of Boromir’s death. If Denethor were such an
ogre as he is often portrayed one could not understand that Faramir leaves
his men and his duty riding ventre-a-terre to his father
Chapter Three: and see Denethor berates Faramir for having left his duty.
This for me is not so much a cold father but ere a stern commander. But now
comes a sequence that is too sentimental for a captain-commander
relationship. Nevertheless it is written very well and renders views
generally held in fanfiction: Denethor strikes Faramir. And Faramir weeps
tears streaming. For my dark mind that is unbelievable. It agrees not with
my view of Faramir as a serene leader of men.
Chapter Four: Faramir and Boromir chatting after Boromir’s death. Nicely
done. And very well done is the parting scene between Denethor and Faramir
followed by Faramir’s insight in his father mind.
Gondor
MeG13: Lady of Silences by Altariel
(347 characters)
Beautifully written story. Very dark though. It renders a family situation
with Denethor an abusive husband and Finduilas a resigned wife. The violence
spills over the second son and mother and son carry their doom in silence.
Not what I envision from the Appendices but possible nevertheless. Presented
in a very restrained manner by Finduilas herself. Told in a very believable
manner which manages to haunt me.
Gondor
MeG15: Possessions by Altariel
(623 characters - 99 quoting = 524)
Written from the point of view of Mithrandir visiting Minas Tirith after
Finduilas’ death. Very beautifully crafted words and sentences. Good use of
the LotR account of Mithrandir’s various names. I enjoyed how Faramir is
described to resemble father and mother: “He gave me his father's stare, but
when I twitched my eyebrows at him, it turned quite suddenly into his
mother's smile.” And how, when Mithrandir hides as promised that Faramir
missed his way, and Faramir nevertheless confesses his slip to his father
the proud stern Denethor laughs and pulls his son closer to him. Very well
done in story line and sentence manufacture. This is a perfect example of
Altariel’s work. Side note: “The king’s shilling” is the companion of this
piece.
Gondor
MeG16: Proof by Altariel
(1535 characters, 129 quoting)
This is for me a very good adventure story: suspense and the
characterization of Faramir work together to create a dark story even though
these events occurs during very hot days.
We see Damrod start his life with the rangers by applying Faramir’s rules
still rejected by more experienced rangers. Newly appointed captain Faramir
has yet to win the respect of his men and he achieves it by solving the
problem of the spy in the pool. The story shows us how Faramir managed to
win friends and influence people during his early Captainship of the
Ithilien Rangers who were at that time very reserved concerning the
inexperienced son of the Steward. This is a very good gap-filler who
describes Faramir as I envision him from LotR.
Very well done is the description of the different reactions of the various
rangers to Faramir’s mannerisms and commands. Very enjoyable and partly
amusing are these reactions, for instance Mablung’s trials and tribulations
to get his work done according to Faramir’s commands while he inwardly
chafes about the highborn captain. And Faramir shows cold anger finding his
commands are set aside by all and sundry: “I did not realize, Mablung, that
I was here solely in an advisory capacity. Perhaps there is something I do
not fully understand about the chain of command?”. Naturally in the end all
see the wisdom behind Faramir’s commands.
As in “Fair Game” the speech is not as beautiful as I know Altariel to be
able to write. It seems for adventures Altariel uses a more modern speech
than in the introspective pieces. “Schoolroom” and “schoolboy” for me is not
quite rightly used in a LotR story. What I wonder here, why does Faramir not
use his Numenorean ability to pry into the mind of the spy as he did in LotR
with Gollum ? Maybe he is still learning to use this ability. Nevertheless,
I admire Altariel for this story.
Gondor
MeG21: The Burial of the Dead by Altariel
(1425 characters - (21+39+46+57+42+37=242 quoting) = 1183)
This piece where Denethor remembers his nearest family, all dead or dying is
the most poetical work in this category. And since poetry for me has my
highest esteem, this is the story I acclaim the most. The second paragraph
from “It was not hard to love him” over “but the unfaithful air meant you
heard it first” until “I would trade the earth to fill the land again with
hope.” is so haunting and so understandable of the grieving Denethor that I
only can bow to Altariel’s capability to pour the thoughts of fallible men
into beautiful poetical words. The part where Denethor weighs Faramir and
finds him deficient. Haunting and believable. How Denethor sees the
relationship of Boromir to Faramir with respect to himself is masterly
captured in words: “Lies, I fear, might flow from him like liquid - on the
other's account” How Denethor sees the pyre as a means to save himself and
Faramir from the dark fire of the Enemy through the purifying end in the
self-willed pyre. How in the end forces he himself to admit that he should
have tried even harder to cure Faramir from his admiration of the wizard.
Could anybody write it clearer and more sympathetic ? And last comes
Finduilas the ever present ghost of his life’s love. She accuses him for
squandering her sons, her only legacy: “Sons spent in sacrifice, surrendered
up to steel.” And then in the end of this piece the dejected words of a man
who spent his life to preserve Gondor sacrificing all to his duty: “All
comes to naught. All is consumed by fire.” Nay, I do not remember a
fanfiction-story which gives deeper insight into men’s fault to view all
around him only with respect to his own self while nevertheless presenting
us the believable picture of a great man.
Gondor
MeG22: The King is Dead by Altariel
(317 characters)
Precursor to “Black Captain”. Altariel at her best: Denethor educates
Faramir in strategy and tactics in war and political fencing by using the
game of chess as a foil. Denethor is described as a very able father and
tutor apprising his son correctly and furthering his education expertly. Not
as poetic as other stories but quite a nice gap-filler with respect to
family history.
Post-WOTR
Me4-2: Black Captain by Altariel
(279 characters)
Companion to “The King is Dead”, this story in my opinion comes a bit nearer
to LotR than “The Queen’s Gambit” of A.L. Milton. Well done inclusion of
politics. I like to see the working Steward. Very concise use of words only
hinting at hidden meanings revealed only by thinking about them. I like this
style, for me it has a touch of poetry.
Post-WOTR
Me4-3: Fair Game by Altariel
(1227 characters, 74 quoting)
This is one of the best Forth Age stories I know. I enjoy the fact that here
the “A Game of chess”-Faramir gets back his sword. Though I enjoyed also
Altariel’s much applauded story “A game of chess” very much I had large
problems with it as it renders Faramir as shell-shocked, which for me is
inconceivable. I spent many hours in the following days thinking on this
story and why it bothered me so much. No other fanfiction story had me
musing as much.
But now to “Fair Game”. Faramir’s personality now comes near again to that
personality I envision from LotR: serene, wise, eloquent, speaking
beautifully worded insights. In contrast to “A Game of chess” I find in this
story the Steward (reading his papers and analyzing political developments)
and the Ranger (pursuing enemies). Nicely done is also the OC Deor, who
fears height as much as Faramir fears to touch a sword; Faramir’s nephew
whose rescue induces Faramir to take up the sword again while Deor conquers
his fear of height when need arises. A good touch is to weave the Easterling
politics into the adventure.
In comparison to LotR and other stories of Altariel the speech is not as
beautiful as I know Altariel to be able to write. This is more a recounted
adventure. But the adventure is very well done. And includes many a thought
about insecurities and how to live with them, even how to overcome them. And
Faramir speaks well: “On your own, Déor? Where have my ill-bred children
slunk off to this afternoon, I wonder?”
Me10: Through A Glass by Altariel
(290 characters – 23 quoting = 267)
A nice gap-filler which for my taste feels a bit too modern in the chosen
words and recounted thoughts. But the story line is well crafted. And the
parts which invoke the picture of the mirror are really well done. Moreover,
the change of point of view from third person to first person after the
words “The world tilts into focus.” is masterly crafted.
Msg# 2583
Adventure Amnesty Ballot Posted by MarigoldCotton@aol.com October 31, 2004 - 10:46:13 Topic ID# 2583Official Voting Ballot
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A10: The Rebel by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=790
Rating: PG
Lindelea has created a wonderful Middle-earth universe. Even though I dont always agree completely with her hobbit society, I enjoy her stories very much and this is no exception. I really like the way this story is constructed; the flashbacks tied in with the present are very effective. There are some lovely nuggets that give the reader glimpses into Freddys character, for example the rich young tease, knowingly tweaking Farmer Cotton by his word play concerning Rosie and the quality of the apples, and then showing several different facets at once when he purchases their whole waggon of apples that he is rich and can afford to let money flow on a whim, his playfulness in having the apples delivered to Merry at Bag End as a jest, and his knowledge that Farmer Cotton needs the money for his roof and other things, and this is a way to help him out without offering charity. We see he is a good person, who likes to have fun, is comfortable with his wealth, and yet knows that he has a responsibility to the community and is a position to help less affluent hobbits.
From the way this character is drawn in his earlier days, I was left in no doubt that Freddy would risk himself for the good of the Shire. He seamlessly goes from a carefree hobbit to the leader of the rebels, and his ascension is completely natural, as is his willingness to help Merry, Pippin, Frodo and Sam.
The other characters are well done as well, and I loved the glimpses of the other hobbits. The way that they safeguard Freddys identity, the way that other hobbits tried to feed them, give them water, support them emotionally by singing in their hearing, that Tom Cotton planned to chop down the last tree standing in Bywater so that the ruffians couldnt hang any more rebel leaders, the up close glimpse of Lobelias behavior in the Lockholes all of these were written just as I believe hobbits would have responded in such situations. And the horrific descriptions of their treatment in the Lockholes was just chilling, and yet not over the top, made all the more horrible by the straightforward descriptions. I have to say that this is one of the few stories I have read in which I actually LIKE Freddy. He is hard to write sympathetically it seems, and after reading this story I find I like and admire him very much. Instead of being uninterested in this character as I usually am, I am rooting for him all the way, and feel that he deserves to have his story told. Lin has done a brilliant job.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the story, here):
AA8: Lindelea
The Rebel
Lindelea writes entertaining stories that are also part of the greater history of her personal Middle-earth universe, especially the Shire. All of the stories tie into each other to paint a marvelously detailed picture, each story being a piece of a larger tale, sometimes intimate, sometimes on a grander scale. She doesnt use flashbacks that much, and her decision to use them in this particular story was excellent, as this really enhanced the situations faced in the *present* and made me feel that I knew Freddy. She is a skillful writer, and it shows in particular here.
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There, peeping among the cloud-wrack above a dark tor high up in the mountains, Sam saw a white star twinkle for awhile. The beauty of it smote his heart, as he looked up out of the forsaken land, and hope returned to him. For like a shaft, clear and cold, the thought pierced him that in the end the Shadow was only a small and passing thing: there was light and high beauty for ever beyond its reach.
Sam, in Mordor, RoTK
Msg# 2584
Humour Amnesty Ballot Posted by MarigoldCotton@aol.com October 31, 2004 - 11:14:00 Topic ID# 2584Official Voting Ballot
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Alternate Universe
HuA2: No Living Man by Elana
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1672&cid=6920
This was a lovely idea. I had always wondered why Glorfindel hadnt gone after the Witch-king all those years ago when he was so handy as he wasnt a man. I really like the way the author uses so many characters to give the Witch-king his comeuppance.
Alternate Universe
HuA3: Slightly Muddled by Lindelea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1305498/1/
As a beta from America living now in Britain, this story made me laugh long and hard! I spend quite a lot of time trying to keep slang, anachronisms, and
inappropriate flora, fauna, and foods out of Middle-earth, and Lindelea hit my major peeves spot on with this! She has a marvelous sense of humour, and knows how to write a funny fic without going overboard.
Parody
HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa Green
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2366
Very funny story&erm, manual! This author has quite a knack for making folks laugh.
Hu4: Frogs by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=322
Rating: G
This is a very hobbity story, and the game is wonderful. This is one of those stories that one can imagine actually taking place and I love when that happens! The dialogue is especially enjoyable here, and beneath the humour I could sense the longings of the hobbits to go home. The interaction between all of the characters was very nice, and one can see the deep friendship between them, as well as getting a taste of life in the Shire.
Hu5: It Was A Dark and Stormy by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1855823/1/
Rating: G
I usually cringe at OCs but Pearl has done a fantastic job here. I loved her Half-Dwarven characters devotion and care of Pippin because he is wearing the livery of Gondor. I also thought that the way she first brought Merry and Pippin into the story, and then wrote them into a holiday to give them a bit of a break from the way she had been knocking them about in her fics was wonderful. Although they didnt exactly wind up with a trip to the beach, lol!
Hu8: Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars by Aratlithiel
URL: http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/ODAABS.html
Rating: PG-13
There arent that many stories taking place when the Fellowship are safe in Minas Tirith that depict Frodo to my taste, but this one certainly does. He is wonderful in this story, and acts like I think Frodo might actually behave. He is a hobbit after all, and he is allowed to be a hobbit here, and not a sickly, tragic, otherworldly figure. The banter is spot on, and the idea that Frodo took the ale to *protect* Pippin is very funny such a thoughtful and caring older cousin!
Hu16: The Lady's Gift by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1617
Rating: G
This was a lovely, hobbity idea. Everyone was in character, and I could imagine Pippin actually doing this, egged on by Frodo, and Merry of course, and then when Pippin was found out, Merry sticking with him while he hid and then tried to return Gimlis gift. And this line, when Gimli gives Pippin one of Galadriels hairs for his own: Aye, it was, said Gimli. But I have three, and I only have one Peregrin. What a nice line, and a lovely sentiment.
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HuA4: Aratlithiel
Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars
Excellent sense of what is funny, and very good at keeping the humour balanced. Her characterisations and dialogue are very appropriate to each character.
HuA23: Lindelea
Slightly Muddled, Frogs
Lindelea has a wonderful way of writing humour, and can write very sharp, tongue-in-cheek and witty humour as well as very sweet and gentle jesting. She also manages to always keep her characters *in* character even when they are being funny, something not everyone seems able to do, and can maintain it in long stories as well as shorter ones.
HuA25: Pearl Took
It Was A Dark and Stormy
Terrific and witty sense of humour, and a very clever and imaginative scenario. Good ability to balance dark and light.
HuA26: Pervinca
The Lady's Gift
Able to get into a characters head and write believable humourous dialogue.
HuA29: Theresa Green
Witty and funny in a dry way very good at writing tongue-in-cheek.
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There, peeping among the cloud-wrack above a dark tor high up in the mountains, Sam saw a white star twinkle for awhile. The beauty of it smote his heart, as he looked up out of the forsaken land, and hope returned to him. For like a shaft, clear and cold, the thought pierced him that in the end the Shadow was only a small and passing thing: there was light and high beauty for ever beyond its reach.
Sam, in Mordor, RoTK
Msg# 2585
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Msg# 2586
Drama Amnesty Ballot Posted by MarigoldCotton@aol.com October 31, 2004 - 12:00:50 Topic ID# 2586Official Voting Ballot
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Drabble
DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1537
Eowyns voice here is so hopeless and fell! It left me feeling that I saw into Eowyns heart and her despair was laid bare.
Drabble
DD4: Fealty and Service by Marta
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1501
Knowing how their relationship changes later makes this proud moment as seen by Denethor very bittersweet to the reader, as I am sure the author intended.
Drabble
DD9: The Silent Street by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=1535
This drabble really sums up the evil predicament that Beregond found himself in. Not only does he fight against his friends in an effort to protect Faramir. By having Beregond slay his own nephew though his own heart breaks in the process, Lindelea really shows up the depth of his nobility and sense of duty.
Incomplete
DI11: While We Dwelt in Fear by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1364027/1/
Rating: G some violence
What can I say about this story! I love so many things about it the very believable explanation of the Tooks faery blood and the way Esmeralda has always felt a link to Pippin (who also has this gift, and the idea that the reason Pippin knew Strider was following across Rohan was his Took sight is a nice touch), sometimes able to see out of his eyes, and sense his feelings is my favourite aspect of it. This idea might sound fantastical, but it is not it is so well written that I firmly believe it in the context of this story, and like to think that it might be an unspoken reality that Tolkien just failed to mention. I love all of the instances in this story about this bond.
Esmies dreams are wonderful too, foretellings and dreams of current happenings, and I liked her meeting her faery forebear. This description of Merry and Pippins relationship and their relationships with their mothers, by the faery that was ancestor to both hobbit lads, is just perfect: "Hearts bound together. Spirits entwined. Cousins brother-like. Nephews son-like. Love binding all together like the strands of a rope, each strengthens the others." Just wonderful, and just as I see them myself!
I especially liked the scene where Esmie lives through the battle in Moria through Pippin, and the one at Parth Galen, where Pippin acknowledges that she is with him. I dont know if Pearl intended it, but I see this ability of Esmies as a way for her to have her own adventure outside the Shire, as a hobbit lass never would be able to do in reality. Though Esmie is present in Pippins mind at some key times, Pearl does not do what many writers would in this situation, and turn Esmie into a Mary Sue that dictates Pippins actions for him. Esmies presence is a comfort to Pip at times, but he is left free to act on his own, something that I feel is very important.
The way that Lotho takes over the Shire, being sucked in deeper and deeper by Sarumans machinations, thinking that he is being so very clever and just taking his due is also very believable, as are the reactions of the other hobbits, not quite sure what is going on, and so letting it happen. The little hobbits Yule puppet show, depicting some of the Gathering that was going on was well done, as children notice things when we think they are unaware. Paladin and Saradoc react differently to what is happening, but both are valid reactions and are true to their characters. All of the other characters are true as well: the Gamgees (though Marigold seems a bit missing, and there is no real mention of the other children), Eglantine, the Cottons, and all of the other hobbits and the Ruffians too.
One thing that makes this story so enjoyable are small things that touch the reader; that Bell Gamgee is buried in the Baggins family plot as per instructions left by Bilbo, the way food and firewood is smuggled to those who need it by being sewn into clothing, the way that the ill and elderly are smuggled into Brandy Hall. There are just too many excellent touches and nice moments in this story to mention, but without a doubt the exchange between Merry and Pippin on First Yule is my absolute favourite. I dont think I will ever read another story without imagining that Pippin has a corner of Merrys monogrammed handkerchief sewn inside his shirt next to his heart, and that Merry has an unraveled tassel from Pippins scarf sewn in the same spot of his own shirt. This is a perfect touch, and really sums up the depth of their relationship to me.
I cant wait for more of this story!
LOTR
DL1: Adaptation by Pervinca
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1175
Rating: G
Poor Legolas! This story really made me feel sorry for Legolas immortality. I liked how the story was told in his voice, and the thoughts that he has are very true to character.
LOTR
DL7: LifeWatch by Lindelea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1273828/1/
I am a sucker for Cormallen stories and this is no exception. I love all the healing and Merry and Pippin interaction in this story.
LOTR
DL8: Pippin's Crucible by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1691156/1/
This is an incredibly powerful story, and is well told in the first person, something that not everyone can write well. The imagery is just amazing, especially Pippins run through the streets of Minas Tirith in search of Gandalf. The thought of innocent Pippin running through blood, past dead, hacked bodies, and body parts, being forced to ignore the screams and pleas of the dying because of his self assigned mission, the stench of burned flesh, his feeling of smallness as he fights through the retreating soldiers well, Tolkien toned down Pippins search for Gandalf because I think that it had to have actually happened just this way. Then he must do it again, when he goes to search for Merry. The thought that he has at the end, that his feet will never feel clean again, was the perfect ending.
Post-WOTR
DPoW3: As the Gentle Rain by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1599
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Wow, just when we thought the hobbits were safe and snug! I particularly liked the bits with Merry and Pippin of course, in Rohan, and Lins descriptions of their relationship. This was a very exciting and emotional section of the story. This is another story that fits well into the universe that the author has created, and its amazing how she keeps track of all the little details of her other stories that she is able to fit into each subsequent story. It was really interesting to read that a small colony of hobbits had relocated to Gondor, an example of how what happened in the Shire changed some hobbits, or affected their long-term health. Most authors usually write all of the hobbits in the Shire bouncing back right away, but some had to have suffered some long-term emotional or physical damage.
Post-WOTR
DPoW9: Little Ones of Their Own by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1571927/1/
This is a lovely story. I like stories about Merry and Estella and Pippin and Diamond living together for a time at Crickhollow. Pippins ability to *talk* with young Theodoc is a nice touch, and knowing that in Pearls universe that Pippin has the Took sight, I can really see this happening here. Pippin has a really nice relationship with baby Theo in this story. Merry, Estella, and Pippin are all well written here, and Diamond too, for the most part, though I did feel that she was a bit too naïve at times. I enjoyed all of the interaction between the four of them. I especially liked the bits about Pippin being able to knit, and when Theo became too old to *converse* with Pippin, saying his name instead, Pap-pap. I like the way Pearl makes all of her characters with so many layers. We know their thoughts, habits, and motivations.
Post-WOTR
DPoW21: Where the Merlin Cries by Lindelea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1384933/1/
Brrr! One of the darker of Lindeleas stories, but as always, completely true to her universe. There is violence yes, and it made me cringe, but that is what violence should do, and so Lin has certainly succeeded here! There are some very clever ideas in this story, and also some wonderful original characters. And I enjoyed Bergil, Legolas, and Gimli very much, as well as the familiar characters! It was especially enjoyable seeing the portrayal of Sam and Rosies older children.
D1: A Flood, A Fall, A Finale, A Fever by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1766693/1/
Rating: PG-13
This is another example of Pearls wonderful imagination. This story is written in a really interesting style, and the content works well within the framework.
D11: The Dragon's Egg by Shireling
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1225
What a good story! I loved the story within the story, and all of the detail.
D13: Thinking of You by Grey Wonderer
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1088
I felt so badly for Merry in this story! The author wrote Pippins injury very realistically. I also liked the length it was perfect for the content.
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DDA2: Lindelea
The Silent Street, Dernhelm's Ride
Such a lot of meaningful content in 100 words! Nicely done!
DA35: Lindelea
Where the Merlin Cries, As the Gentle Rain
When Lindelea wants to write angst, she writes angst! She doesn't hesitate to be grim and graphic if the story calls for it, but she balances the darkness with light moments.
DA44: Pearl Took
The Sacrifice of Soldiers; While We Dwelt in Fear; Pippin's Crucible; Little Ones of Their Own; A Flood, A Fall, A Finale, A Fever
Drama is one of Pearls strong points, and she builds up some wonderful anticipation within her scenes. She also comes up with some wonderfully interesting story lines and plot points, and can always be depended upon to include some very clever details. There are always some unforgettable moments to look forward to in Pearls stories. She writes all of her characters with great care to keep them *in character* - all of her dialogue is appropriate and she doesnt overwrite. Her descriptions are good and all parts of the stories are well thought out. Her chapters are also pretty much long enough, satisfying but leaving readers, including me, eager for more.
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There, peeping among the cloud-wrack above a dark tor high up in the mountains, Sam saw a white star twinkle for awhile. The beauty of it smote his heart, as he looked up out of the forsaken land, and hope returned to him. For like a shaft, clear and cold, the thought pierced him that in the end the Shadow was only a small and passing thing: there was light and high beauty for ever beyond its reach.
Sam, in Mordor, RoTK
Msg# 2587
AW: [MEFAwards] Amnesty Day -- Romance -- Official Voting Ballot Posted by elanor of aquitania October 31, 2004 - 12:06:24 Topic ID# 2587(Votes will come now in bits and pieces as soon as I complete any vote, if
any.)
Romance
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Featuring Legolas
RmL3: Moriquendi by fan81981
(271 characters)
This is a rather long story, wherein I like especially the extensive
description of the Moriquendi culture, which for me is much more interesting
than the culture of the normal Wood-Elves. And I liked to read how Legolas
and his bride Rhinure manage to overcome their quit different upbringing and
view of life and its duties.
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RA14: fan81981
Moriquendi
(380 characters)
In this rather long story I like especially the extensive description of the
Moriquendi culture, which for me is much more interesting than the culture
of the normal Wood-Elves. I do not underscribe the notion that Legolas could
go through without love with an arranged marriage. Thranduil only hopes that
the two will learn to love each other and commands his son to marry, while
Rhinure agrees for the well-being of her people. This is unbelievable for
me.
Msg# 2588
Re: Amnesty Day -- Hobbits Official Voting Ballot Posted by Liza October 31, 2004 - 15:28:56 Topic ID# 2587Official Voting Ballot
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HobD3: Mother Gamgee by Marigold
URL: http://marigoldsredbook.crickhollow.net/fic_mothergamgee.html
Very poignant and sweetly told with lots of analogies that were well
thought out and blended seamlessly into the telling. The progression
of the four pieces works excellently, building each time to a little
more sadness – touching on Frodo's loss and then to Sam's and finally
culminating in a full circle of something the two silently share,
long before the trial of the Quest.
Drabble
HobD4: Resting Places by Marigold
No tears for the bereaved, which makes the sadness of the pieces all
the more heartfelt. How each of them deal with their losses, Frodo,
Esmeralda and Merry is keenly felt by it's very understatement and
the final circle of life and death with Bell Gamgee's grandchildren
playing near her grave is especially well done.
Drabble
HobD6: Then and Now by Marigold
URL: http://marigoldsredbook.crickhollow.net/fic_thenandnow.html
These are sweet! Pippin is generally seen as a sickly child and these
make full use of that piece of fanon. The clever twist is the take on
how this is reversed in later life in a bizarre way because of the
Quest. Each drabble deals with something earlier in Merry and
Pippin's lives that relates to a memorable moment during the war –
the orc whips, Merry being sick and then Merry watching over Pippin's
recovery.
Msg# 2589
Re: Amnesty Day -- Phew - out of time - sorry. Posted by Liza October 31, 2004 - 15:36:41 Topic ID# 2587voting a little at a time - but real life got in the way - as it will!
Although I worked on the Rohan section - which was exacting for me as
I'm more of a hobbit reader - I just didn't get time to check out the
rest of the nominations. Therefore I was limited to just reviewing
stories I have already, at least, looked at.
Everything I had time to read I have commented on, so if I didn't
comment on your story, I just haven't read it. I will try to do
better in future. Nevertheless, I liked the Rohan stories and will
try to read more in that area from now on.
In the meantime I have managed a few little votes and I hope that
helps.
Liza
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Rh1: Bitter Watches of the Night by Sharpeslass
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1691584/1/
The creepiness is enhanced by being told from Grima's pov. A skilful
gapfiller, well written with much restrained sexuality. A good
example of less is more.
Rh2: Complicated Allies by Sun Queen
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/840622/1/
Not really racist as the narrator seems enamoured of his subjects.
Have to quote "one who would outlive the stars, and the one carved in
stone", that line made the whole story worth reading!
Rh3: Daughters of Orome by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1436
Atmospheric telling with wonderful sense of time and place. Liked the
horse shaped cradles and the lullaby and many, many little touches
that bring mood and semblance to the whole. Fine use of language and
the detail is either familiar or well researched. I only skip read
this but plan to go back and give it more attention.
Rh4: For the Dark by Forodwaith
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1571
Dark indeed and hauntingly sad, but strong images. I especially liked
the "man's braid" insult.
Rh5: Gastings Night by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=4&chapter=1
I find the Halloween scenario a little too "American" for my taste,
so nearly didn't read but am glad I did. It is brilliantly executed
with an obvious love of the subject matter and of course excellently
written.
Rh6: Keepers of the Hearth by Alawa
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2980
First chapter made me cry – good start?
Rh8: Myth and Memory by Ainaechoiriel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1256706/1/
I enjoyed the perspective of this as it allows a new look at some of
the races of Middle-earth in particular the elves. The OC's were well
observed too.
Rh9: Namesake by Ainaechoiriel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1359677/1/
This works well as a war memorial piece – reminded me a little
of "After Blenheim" a thought-provoking war poem. A subject always
worth stopping and thinking about.
Rh10: Promises to Keep by Nessime
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1789
Intriguing to hear the famous Rohan meeting from this point of view.
Nicely done.
Msg# 2591
Re: Amnesty Day -- Adventure -- Official Voting Ballot Posted by Liza October 31, 2004 - 15:41:14 Topic ID# 2587Official Voting Ballot
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A10: The Rebel by Lindelea
Fredegar Bolger in this story is one of Lindelea's best-written
characters. He is multi-dimensional, and the background she gives us
in this story really makes the reader sympathetic to this often
overlooked character. The forced march through the Shire is also very
vivid, and very realistically done.
AUTHORS
AA8: Lindelea
The Rebel
Lindelea is a very prolific author, with a very defined universe, and
it is quite well done how she matches the action in every story, all
the while staying true to her universe. She writes her hobbits
differently than I write mine, but clearly loves and understands
them. I also appreciate that her stories tend to be long enough to
really become immersed in.
Msg# 2592
Re: Amnesty Day -- Humour -- Official Voting Ballot Posted by Liza October 31, 2004 - 15:44:28 Topic ID# 2587Official Voting Ballot
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Alternate Universe
HuA2: No Living Man by Elana
Quite an interesting idea, and very bad luck for the Witch King!
Alternate Universe
HuA3: Slightly Muddled by Lindelea
I usually cringe at Americanisms in Lord of the Rings fanfiction, but
here they are quite appropriate and very funny, and the author seems
to have come up with every one imaginable here. A very funny idea,
and the humour is maintained through several chapters. Not normally
the kind of story I would chose to read, but this one made me laugh.
Hu4: Frogs by Lindelea
A very hobbit-type game, and I enjoyed the characterisations,
especially of the hobbits. Very nice story.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the
category, not the story, here):
HuA23: Lindelea
Slightly Muddled, Frogs
Lindelea's sense of humour comes across well in her writing, and she
comes up with some very novel situations.
Msg# 2593
Re: Amnesty Day -- Drama -- Official Voting Ballot Posted by Liza October 31, 2004 - 15:44:47 Topic ID# 2587Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not
commenting on. For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make
sure to keep the top 2 lines of the header information (ex.
subcategory, code: Title by Author) and then comment beneath them.
Drabble
DD2: Dernhelm's Ride by Lindelea
Very grim and in character.
Drabble
DD9: The Silent Street by Lindelea
This drabble is chilling. The circumstance that Beregond finds
himself in is unenviable, and yet he strives to do his best despite
the personal cost.
LOTR
DL8: Pippin's Crucible by Pearl Took
Wonderful glimpse of what Pippin must endure to reach Gandalf. Very
gritty, and told quite well in the first person.
Msg# 2594
AW: [MEFAwards] Amnesty Say -- Romance -- Official Voting Ballot Posted by elanor of aquitania October 31, 2004 - 16:47:02 Topic ID# 2594RmFE2: Knight's Service/Later by Tanaqui
(327 characters)
A very amusing piece. Somehow not feeling like LoTR, somehow not feeling
like Faramir and Eowyn, but very well written sucking one into the arousal
of the protagonists. It works very well as an erotic piece starting from a
comical situation working up to the partly nude Faramir and ending with very
modern acts of mutual performances causing the partner's sexual release.
Masterly crafted.
Faramir/Eowyn
RmFE5: The Influence of Kindred Desires by Tanaqui
(518 characters)
A well crafted erotic story with a feeling of Movie!LoTR, somehow too modern
as to agree with Tolkien's LoTR. But in the milieu of Movie!LoTR I see it
working well with respect to speech, customs, and rites, all rather pointing
to modern cast Middle ages than to timeless antiquity. Though the quilt
gifted by Peregrin has a decidedly U.S. American quality. Why are the
blessings of the Valar invoked and not those of Eru ? The love-making itself
(in the second part encompassing many enlightened words) feels very modern
as the goal is to satisfy equally the female part involved. Thus, as an
erotic story it works very well.
Authors:
RA38: Tanaqui
Knight's Service/Later, The Influence of Kindred
(271 characters)
So these two stories for me do not belong into Romance but into Erotica. But
as such both work very well. Though I have not the feeling to read of Eowyn
and Faramir as I envision them, there is enough stuff there which at least
reminds me of LoTR. The stories itself are well written concerning story
lines and situations rendered.
Msg# 2595
? further counting help needed Posted by elanor of aquitania October 31, 2004 - 17:06:46 Topic ID# 2595> Thanks to all who have voted so far, and to the vote counters who areHi all you hardworking vote counters,
> keeping track of all the votes. And special thanks to Larian, who is
> apparently at least as obsessive and compulsive as I am, who
> is copying all
> the Men comments as I am copying all the Elves comments so
> that we can make
> web pages with all the comments for authors to be able to view their
> comments all in one place.
>
> Anyone want to help with that, by the way? Larian and I are
> liable to end up
> with carpal tunnel syndrome....
if you see any need for further help tomorrow
please write.
I added to my votes the characters as counted by Word without spaces.
Since no one seemingly needed further help until now
I will just say good night to you
and many thanks to all who made this Amnesty Day possible.
I am now reporting off duty as I become too tired
to read any more stories.
Good night !
Elanor
Msg# 2596
Silmarillion Amnesty Ballot from Elena Tiriel Posted by Elena Tiriel October 31, 2004 - 17:36:06 Topic ID# 2596Official Voting Ballot
Romance
SR4: Taming the Wildflower by Sulriel
URL: http://www.theoriginalseries.com/wildflower.htm
Oh, my, this is such a powerful story, Sulriel! I don't often read First
Age stories, especially not having to do with the Kinslayers; and at first,
I thought their meeting was not as believable as I would have liked --
looking back, I think I reacted to her being somewhat forward in a way, yet
not protecting herself forcefully from Maedhros's advances. But as I
continued reading the story, I could see how much they loved and missed each
other, so the "love/lust at first sight" scenario became much more
acceptable. "Riding a chestnut stallion" indeed -- that made me laugh --
out of the mouths of babes with extremely sly elders! Thranduil's and
Nimloth's reactions seemed just about right to me -- good thing Nimloth is
so intelligent, to pick up the things that Rhavloth left unsaid. The
hideous monstrosity of the Fýanorean attack on Menegroth when they learned
that Dior had the Silmaril becomes much more of a fateful tragedy when
Maedhros learns that his lover and daughter and granddaughter are there and
were all likely slaughtered... Okay, I'll admit, I never before expected to
have any sense of sympathy for the Kinslayers, even though I knew that
Maedhros tried to saved Elurýd and Elurýn, but you made me feel that way.
Your ending of the story in Mandos really made me feel joy and relief that
the Kinslayers' Oath was finally ended, and that Maedhros could finally take
another, more positive, oath of his own free will, one that invokes love
instead of hate -- that really bowled me over! Fine story!
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Msg# 2597
Ack! REPLACEMENT Silmarillion Amnesty Ballot from Elena Tiriel Posted by Elena Tiriel October 31, 2004 - 17:44:02 Topic ID# 2597ten minutes ago.
- Elena Tiriel
The Silmarillion
Official Voting Ballot
First Age
S1-11: Steadfast by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1455502/1/
Well, this is really interesting, Zimraphel! You took a moment of history
that I was never particularly interested in and made it a compelling story.
The differences between Ossý and Ulmo alone make the story worth reading. I
was fascinated by the backstory you posited, with the fictional minor House
of the Eagle being decimated by the Battle of the Unnumbered Tears, and how
the major houses took in the widows and children, but the unwed soldiers had
to -- again -- prove their worth to be accepted, and how some Houses had
more desirable lords than others. The bits of canon that I recognized were
spot-on (as I have come to expect from you). It was interesting the way you
had Ulmo speaking through Tuor, and how Voronwý proved his worth by
believing that Turgon should have asked pardon. Really interesting!
Romance
SR4: Taming the Wildflower by Sulriel
URL: http://www.theoriginalseries.com/wildflower.htm
Oh, my, this is such a powerful story, Sulriel! I don't often read First
Age stories, especially not having to do with the Kinslayers; and at first,
I thought their meeting was not as believable as I would have liked --
looking back, I think I reacted to her being somewhat forward in a way, yet
not protecting herself forcefully from Maedhros's advances. But as I
continued reading the story, I could see how much they loved and missed each
other, so the "love/lust at first sight" scenario became much more
acceptable. "Riding a chestnut stallion" indeed -- that made me laugh --
out of the mouths of babes with extremely sly elders! Thranduil's and
Nimloth's reactions seemed just about right to me -- good thing Nimloth is
so intelligent, to pick up the things that Rhavloth left unsaid. The
hideous monstrosity of the Fýanorean attack on Menegroth when they learned
that Dior had the Silmaril becomes much more of a fateful tragedy when
Maedhros learns that his lover and daughter and granddaughter are there and
were all likely slaughtered... Okay, I'll admit, I never before expected to
have any sense of sympathy for the Kinslayers, even though I knew that
Maedhros tried to saved Elurýd and Elurýn, but you made me feel that way.
Your ending of the story in Mandos really made me feel joy and relief that
the Kinslayers' Oath was finally ended, and that Maedhros could finally take
another, more positive, oath of his own free will, one that invokes love
instead of hate -- that really bowled me over! Fine story!
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Msg# 2598
Mystery Amnesty ballot from Elena Tiriel Posted by Elena Tiriel October 31, 2004 - 17:49:23 Topic ID# 2598Official Voting Ballot
My1: Adagio by Rose Sared
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1500960/1/
Interesting idea! A canon note: Frodo was the only Gamgee child surnamed
Gardner (not Gardener). Also, there are a lot of typos (Algorand, Aglorand).
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Msg# 2599
Lord of the Rings Amnesty Ballot from Elena Tiriel Posted by Elena Tiriel October 31, 2004 - 18:06:09 Topic ID# 2599Official Voting Ballot
Vignette
LV6: Repairs by Isabeau of Greenlea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/883019/1/
This is one of my absolute favorite stories, and I have read many Tolkien
fan fictions. Gimli's personality really shows through his pride of craft
-- he knew that not just any orc collar could notch the blade he had forged
himself. You can respect the "differentness" of the Dwarves by Gimli's
comments about how a warrior is judged by the quality of care he lavishes on
his weapons and armor. Gimli's approach to repairing his axe is very
practical; he goes about the repair process in a very quiet, experienced
way. I love the interaction between Legolas and Gimli: Once he sees that the
Elf has arrived, Gimli immediately takes charge and assigns him a task, and
dismisses Legolas' real concern for his head wound. It amuses me that he
ascribes Legolas' good qualities to his mother -- guess Dwarves don't like
Thranduil much! I also very much liked that Gimli talked Legolas into
surrendering his knives so he could give them an keener edge (did you know:
one knife is book-verse, two knives is movie-verse? I just found that out
recently...), and that he allowed Legolas to watch him at work; I was
touched by the level of mutual trust and respect these actions showed
between the two warriors. Also, though he is clearly extremely proud, I
liked that Gimli would admit to Legolas that he is but an "ordinary" smith,
whose talents lie more with prospecting new mines. Some of your phrases are
simply perfection embodied: "my arms remembered the proper rhythm of the
hammer" -- I understand that feeling when I try to ride a bike again; also
like "a gleaming crescent of proper silver death" -- so infinitely Dwarvish!
The repetitiveness of the phrase "My axe was notched" echoes the
repetitiveness of the work Gimli does at the forge, and it pulls the story
together into a tightly-knit, cohesive vignette, and also provides a very
satisfying ending when you change the "was" to "had been". There is
something compelling about "left the fire to die without looking back" --
reminds me of Gimli leaving Middle-earth without looking back. This story is
truly a work of art!
L3: Aglarond by ErinRua
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1394
I have said before of this and (very few) other stories that it is one of my
all-time favorite stories, and I have probably read over a thousand Tolkien
fan fictions. Well, I've changed my mind: This is my all-time favorite
Tolkien fan fiction. I weep in joy for the beauty of your words and the
beauty of your images and the beauty of Legolas and Gimli's mutual
friendship every single time I read this story (and I have done so many
dozens of times). The detailed descriptions of the cave are astounding and
awe-inspiring; I almost feel like I'm watching a fabulous National
Geographic special in color on television while I read them. Every detail,
like how the sound is magnified and intensified, is not only accurate but
serves to enhance the atmosphere. I feel so empathetic for Legolas; you
don't overplay his claustrophobia, but you imbue his actions and words with
just enough unease to make me feel his discomfort (not to mention, I'm
claustrophobic myself -- but you don't give me a full-fledged attack, thank
goodness!). Gimli is such a sympathetic character in his concern for his
friend and his recognition, and acceptance, of the differences between him.
(I like the touch of Gimli admiring the shape of Legolas' face -- like any
artist would -- and deciding that only marble would do it justice, but was
saddened when he decided not to sculpt it because the other Dwarves wouldn't
understand...) I was very touched by both Legolas' willingness to trust
Gimli by staying put and keeping his eyes closed, and Gimli's attempts to
make a bit more noise to reassure his friend that he had not been abandoned.
It is extremely difficult for someone to whom a skill (like being
comfortable underground) comes naturally to have that gut-level
understanding of and empathy for another person to whom that skill does not
come naturally or, worse yet, has fears around that skill (claustrophobia);
Gimli really has the ability to put himself into Legolas' shoes, despite
their differences. And then the grand unveiling: I was very moved by
Legolas' reaction, especially his tears, his thanks, and Gimli's realization
of their similarities in being able to share an appreciation for
extraordinary beauty. Like I said, this is my all-time favorite story, and
I have never said that about any other story. I thank you for sharing this
extraordinary beauty with your readers.
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Msg# 2600
Correction: The Lord of the Rings -- LG2 Posted by elanor of aquitania October 31, 2004 - 18:19:42 Topic ID# 2600> GondorJust saw that here are still words missing.
>
> LG2: As Truly as the Arrow Flies by Fileg
>
> 347 characters
>
> The story "River of fallen stars" has this precursor wherein
> Faramir recalls how his grandfather taught him about the
> Gondorian constellations Archer who defends and who hunts to
> support a family (representing in my mind Faramir) and the
> Swordsman (aka Orion) who defends Arda from the dark
> (evocating in my mind Boromir). Small Faramir still craves
> for battle glory while his grandfather explains that fighting
>
>
In principle an unimportant correction.
LG2: As Truly as the Arrow Flies by Fileg
390 characters
The story "River of fallen stars" has this precursor wherein Faramir recalls
how his grandfather taught him about the Gondorian constellations Archer who
defends and who hunts to support a family (representing in my mind Faramir)
and the Swordsman (aka Orion) who defends Arda from the dark (evocating in
my mind Boromir). Small Faramir still craves for battle glory while his
grandfather explains that fighting is only a means to secure the survival of
the living.
Msg# 2601
Amnesty Ballot - Crossover Posted by angelabrooks@yahoo.com October 31, 2004 - 18:22:43 Topic ID# 2601This was a fun story of a meeting of two worlds I enjoy. You managed
to keep everyone in character through the whole encounter - Captain
Jack's voice was particularly well done. I would have like to have
seen them do more together - perhaps battle a common enemy. Maybe in
the sequel they can meet up with a Corsair ship?
Elana
Msg# 2602
Amnesty vote - Hobbits Posted by angelabrooks@yahoo.com October 31, 2004 - 18:35:43 Topic ID# 2602I first started reading this back when Jo was first posting it, and I
was struck immediately by Rose's voice - very distinctive and hobbity
and all herself. The troubles of the Shire while the Travellers are
gone are realistic and vivid. Then, after they return and the Shire
is scoured, a new part of the story starts and we learn about Rosie's
relationships with Sam and Frodo. I love when Frodo gets to a point
where he is almost healed - he can even joke about finding his lost
ring - but then he begins his inevitable decline in heartbreaking
fashion. Very poignant at the end. This is one where I can't imagine
it happening any other way now that I've read it. Well done.
Author
HobA14: Jodancingtree
I haven't read all of Jo's stories yet, but I've enjoyed every one
I've read. She can really capture hobbits - she gets inside their
heads and lets you see the world though their eyes. I look forward to
reading the rest of her stories and her future work.
Elana
Msg# 2603
Amnesty Ballot - Drama Posted by angelabrooks@yahoo.com October 31, 2004 - 19:03:24 Topic ID# 2603A sweeping alternative version of Frodo's life post-quest. Much as I
love the Grey Havens in the book, I wish it could have happened this
way. Frodo does find healing, and though it isn't easy, it is
profound and very believable. Along with "Another Way of Leaving,"
which is the beginning of the story (which unfortunately wasn't
nominated this year, and error that will have to be corrected next
year), this story had me teary-eyed a dozen times. Vivid
characterizations of Frodo, Radagast, and some of the most complex
Orcs you'll ever meet in fanfic.
Elana
Msg# 2604
Re: Numenor--Official Voting Season Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 31, 2004 - 20:45:13 Topic ID# 2159From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Sunday, September 26, 2004 12:01 AM
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [MEFAwards] Numenor--Official Voting Season
Numenor
Official Voting Ballot
N1: Aglarrama by Zimraphel
I should have followed my own advice and "voted early" for this story.
Because I read it back in Nomination Season and now it's hard to remember
and I'm pressed for time. I'm not all that interested in Numenor. Mainly
because I'm mostly interested in Elves. But this and some others of
Zimraphel's pulled me in. I felt I knew this guy, saw the places in the
story. She brought Numenor to life, not talking about one of the high
people, the royalty, but of this shipwright. That I do remember.
N3: Confessions of a Queen Downfallen by Jen Littlebottom
Poignant telling of the last testament of Tar-Miriel as Numenor is doomed.
Interesting to think that Sauron told her to kill her husband and for that
reason she did not. And a baby? Good addition. It makes terrible sense.
Well done.
N4: Renuvammet by Zimraphel
Beautiful story about the meeting of Elrond and Elendil shortly after the
latter's arrival in Middle-Earth after the distruction of Numenor. Surivor's
guilt is a very realistic thing, and it was good to hear the results of the
storm in Middle-Earth and have Elrond give an account of what happened in
Valinor, as per the communication through the pallantir in London. Good use
of many canon elements.
N5: The Eleventh Hour by Zimraphel
The Eleventh Hour was an adoption of my own Nuzgul, which later became a
challenge at HASA. Zimraphel did a fantastic job with it, writing about Tar
Miriel's tragic life and last days. This was well-written and very well
fleshed out the skimpy story that Tolkien teased us with. Here Miriel gets
all the angst she deserves and yet she's noble still. She sacrifices
herself to save a child and the rest of the Faithful by not going with them
and not drawing unwanted attention to them.
N7: The Sinking of Numenor by Jen Littlebottom
I wrote this in my ff.net review: "It's great to find humor that isn't just
silly slapstick, but also is book-informed! And the Sindarin are better."
and it's still true. This is a very funny story which gives a rather
irreverent alternate reason for the sinking of Numenor.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
NA1: Jen Littlebottom
Jen is delightfully funny without desolving into slapstick spoofiness and
she knows the canon, so she knows what she's playing with! And yet she can
turn serious and write the last testament of Tar-Miriel. Versatile and
talented.
NA4: Zimraphel
I found I had yet one more nomination of Zimraphel I have to comment on.
Well, no one writes Numenor like Zimraphel. I'm not a big Man-fan and yet I
love her Numenor stories. You can see the island through her stories, hear
the sounds, smell the air, know the people, even when they aren't canon
characters like Tar-Miriel or Elendil, though she can write those as well.
She has a wonderful talent, and has wonderful skills. You don't find many
mistakes in her stories, neither typos or errors of grammar. Nor do you find
boring tangents that don't serve the story. She does everything and
everything well. She really is a great writer.
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Msg# 2605
Re: Hobbits--Official Voting Ballot Posted by bljean@aol.com October 31, 2004 - 21:39:28 Topic ID# 2060Official Voting Ballot, part 2
Post-WOTR
Hob4-1: A Crate of Lemons by ShireDweller
I'm not sure I've read any of your stories before. What a delight! Makes me
glad for MEFA all over again, introducing me to this treasure-box full of gems.
You set up the situation very plausibly, and Rose's reaction to the lemons
sounds realistic. Good thing Sam saw what was in the packing crate before she
dumped it all in the dustbin! I like your description of Bilbo's old room, and
the adjoining study. (But the study sounds awfully familiar... we have piles of
papers and books strewn about our living quarters as well.) "Second breakfast
along with the first"! ...Laughing out loud, now, at the thought of drinking
unsweetened lemonade. And at the change in Rosie's expression, once Frodo had
"doctored" the drink up nicely. And a poignant ending. Thanks so much. I had a
lovely time.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-4: Beyond the Havens by jodancingtree
Ah, Jo, this was one of the first stories of yours that I read, and it still
has the capability of bringing tears to my eyes. Tolkien was a Christian,
after all, which influenced all aspects of his life, including his writing. Though
there are no explicit religious references in his work, yet his writing is
infused with the faith that was his foundation, and from which so many of the
themes to which our hearts and spirits respond, spring. (Gee, I hope that
sentence wasn't too rambling!) This story speaks of love in so many ways: your love
of the characters, your love of the story, God's love for us, such that He
gave so much in order to secure peace and healing for those who believe in Him. I
know that some would strip all Christian references from LOTR fanfic, saying
that Tolkien deliberately did so, and yet I suspect they know very little of
the Christian faith if they think his work as divorced from his belief about
spiritual things.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-5: Drunkard of Bag End by jodancingtree
I know I read this one as you were writing it and posting it, a chapter at a
time, but I'd forgotten how much I liked it. How I love your description of
Pippin, in the very first chapter! And Frodo's musing on Bilbo, and if he'd ever
forgive him! (And only half-joking, at that.) I love the little details that
are a trademark of your careful work. You immerse me in this world, and I
smell and taste and touch and hear and see as if I were standing, or sitting, or
lying there, a part of it all. "He would throw himself away." A chilling
picture. No wonder he could find no peace, with the memory of the Ring constantly
gnawing at him. The memory of Bilbo again... I can hear his voice, just see him
sitting across from Frodo, instructing him in the fine art of appreciating
Brandy. Bet he always kept some of the Hall's finest on hand. "a bite of green
apple after too much honey"! Just one of the word pictures that enriches your
writing. Ah, I could go on and on, but then this email would be *way* too long.
Suffice it to say that, while this could not be my favourite of your stories
(for "Sam's Rose" holds that honour, even though your Orc keeps trying to nudge
that one out of first place), it shines brightly on its own account.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-6: Fair Folk At The Free Fair by Snowballjane
I've always been a little afraid of Elves (they awe me and I have a great
deal of trouble writing them) but you write them so approachably, and yet clearly
Elves. Your dialogue flows well, your relationships between characters ring
true, and yes, you do have more than a bit of Elf-angst in the story. I read
this quite awhile ago and was glad to reaquaint myself with this tale.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-9: Garden Plot by ShireDweller
Are you a gardener, per chance? Your descriptions are very realistic. Somehow
your stories make me smile even as they bring a lump to my throat. And the
play on words, very subtle indeed! I was nearly to the end of the story before I
realised the hidden meaning of the word "plot"!
Post-WOTR
Hob4-10: Linden and Laurel by Ariel & Aralithiel
Nicely done. The repetition of phrases and the symbolism of the trees are
well-used. The tree-pictures add so much to the story! (But of course it would
stand alone without.) Such writing! Words fail me, and so I fear this review is
but a poor effort. A heart-warming tale that nonetheless leaves the reader
wistful.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-11: Reckoning by Aratlithiel
This is a wrenching story to read, skilfully woven and heart-breaking, yet
not devoid of hope, even healing. Your love for the characters shines through
your writing. The clock ties everything together very nicely, and Merry's
emotions, played off the clock, are well-done.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-13: Shining Through by Dana
Ah, Dana. Reading this over again brings to mind long conversations and
challenges and talking over ideas. You took a pet idea of mine and gave it weight
and depth and life. It always seemed logical to me that Merry might have
anniversaries similar to Frodo's, and that part of the reason he and Pippin removed
to Crickhollow was so that Pippin could help him fight his way back to the
Light. You are a master (mistress?) of mood, and this story shines (no pun
intended) as a sparkling gem amongst your collection.
Pre-WotR
HobPW1: A Mother's Day by Pearl Took
I just love this story. It has so many of those little details that bring
fiction into the realm of reality. I have experienced at first hand the
frustration of having little ones busy about some project that burdens me with so very
much extra work... only to find that they were doing it all for *my* benefit.
Pearl, you obviously know and love your hobbits, and you've given them a Shire
that they'd be sure to feel at home in.
Pre-WotR
HobPW2: Gandalf and the Seahobbit by Pippinfan1988
I had not seen this story before! I'm so glad it was in the "hobbit list" at
the MEFA, for I vowed to myself that I would at least read the hobbit stories
before the deadline, even if I didn't get to all the others until later. So
many stories, so little time! I skimmed this one, and so have no real "meat" to
offer save I like your bright and breezy writing style.
Pre-WotR
HobPW3: Irrepressible Pippin by Pippinfan1988
Lovely story! Your descriptions are so effortless to read, they must be
carefully crafted... I kept grinning wider as I read. I like your hobbits, they
sound very true-to-life.
Pre-WotR
HobPW5: Messing About in Boats by Grey Wonderer
I do love your stories, as you already know, but this one was new to me. Poor
Sam, did he ever have a chance? I like the way you write your hobbits; they
sound very true-to-character to me. And then the tie-in with the Quest--and how
in the world do you manage to get me to guffaw like that, reading about such
a serious thing???
Pre-WotR
HobPW7: River Stones by Jeodo Brandybuck
I could not get this story to load, and am sorry, for I have enjoyed reading
your contributions to Marigold's challenge tales. Is there another place to
find this one?
Pre-WotR
HobPW8: The Shaping of Samwise by Jodancingtree
This comes very close to rivaling "Sam's Rose" on my favourites list. I
remember reading this at the very beginning of my introduction to fanfic, chapter
by chapter as you posted it to a yahoo list. How I'd cheer as each new
installment arrived! Your characters are so well-drawn, believable. I can understand
how Sam might invent some way to irrigate the garden, to encourage his beloved
plants to grow, especially in a drought. Irritable Bilbo is believable: he's
been living under the influence of the Ring now for how many years? And yet he
is still, for the most part, the Bilbo we know and love. Frodo is fully
deserving of Sam's loyalty, and your picture of how he earned Sam's devotion is
completely plausible, so much so that I even referred to it in "The Rebel"--and
thanks for permission to do so.
The Lord of the Rings
HobL1: Because it's my Birthday by Pervinca
Ah, the friendship between Pippin and Beregond, a subject close to my own
heart, and very well drawn in this story. ("you know I hate that name" "that's
why I use it" *snork*) And then the conversation between Pippin and Merry is so
well done, so natural... you have a good touch with dialogue.
The Lord of the Rings
HobL2: Bedside Chatter by Silvermoon Lady
How I love Cormallen stories, and this shines amongst the best. (Dare I hope,
egotistically, I fear, that you might be referring to the poem "Too Young" in
your ending? If not, well, then, we were merely thinking along the same
lines, something that happens often with writers on my favourites' list...)
The Lord of the Rings
HobL3: Riding the Nightmare by Budgielover
Your writing, as always, is jam-packed with action so real that I can "see"
it happening as I read, just as if it were playing on a large movie screen...
and sometimes I'm drawn into the action and I'm "there". I never have a problem
figuring out where a character is in one of your scenes: you always sketch
your action so realistically that I "know" where everyone is (a pet peeve of
mine in reading--if I cannot "place" a character I get twitchy). This is a dark
and gripping tale, and fully up to your usual high standards.
The Lord of the Rings
HobL4: The Conspiracy of Hobbits by Dreamflower
Somehow I missed this story in the MEFA list and so did not get it read
during reading season, or even voting season. However, I do love your writing style
and the characters you write, both canon and OC, and so I have saved the link
for future reading. ...and as you know, I always comment on what I read
(which is probably why I have so little reading time!), so you may look forward to
feedback. At least I hope you look forward to it! LOL
The Lord of the Rings
HobL5: Through Shadow by Citrine
Full of imagery and the little touches that make the reader feel the
"thereness" of the piece. From the very first paragraph, with the ropes of the canvas
shelter creaking like the ship that had carried Merry to Ithilien, you hooked
me. Ah, those little details, like Merry shaking his burnt fingers! And the
description of the simple soldier's meal (though Pippin's portion was mostly
broth). And Merry undressing for bed. And Pippin's record-book bony knees and
cold feet. You said you took some inspiration from "LifeWatch", but what you have
done is added layer upon layer of rich detail to a basic sketch. The cousin's
scrutiny of each other was touching, both noticing signs of wear and tear,
both pretending to sleep so that the other might rest. Just as I'm frowning with
concern, you poke me in the ribs with an elbow with something like: "Merry,"
Pippin said patiently. "I've had an entire troll fall on me! I shan't fall
apart now if you happen to poke me with an elbow." The little bit of risque
humour is soldierly, somehow. I can imagine they'd've been exposed to such, living
with armies as they were. (Well, maybe. Tolkien did say in his Letters that
anything but monogamy--and I do think he meant male plus female equals
completeness--was under Shadow. It's why I write the way I do, in my efforts to stay
within canon. But I don't mean to start a debate on sexuality in M-e. Now look
what you've done! *g*) Well, here's the review I promised you, all those months
ago when you left me so tongue tied I couldn't comment on this story to save
my life. Better late than never.
Hob1: A Partnership in Villainy by Llinos
I resisted reading this story for a long time because of the mention of
chocolate. Isn't that silly? Somehow I just can't fit my brain around "chocolate"
and "Middle-earth" in the same thought--unless it's munching chocolate whilst
reading or writing about Middle-earth. Still, "Recap" is on my list of
favourite stories, so I suppose it was a silly prejudice, really, especially when I
find the story mentions Ferdibrand! (Not necessarily "my" Ferdi, but a mention
just the same! *g*) Five-year-old Pippin makes me think of other little ones I h
ave known. I love Pearl-the-big-sister. Cute tradition, the magic dragon,
which explains why there's snow and how presents come at Yuletide, a chance for
wonder and excitement and incentive to "be good". I also liked the portrayal of
Paladin and Saradoc as wise fathers. ...and your introduction of chocolate
into the story is believable!
Hob2: A Path With No Returning by Citrine
This story brought me to tears, and was part of the inspiration for the
"Bucca" chapters of "Thain", I'll have you know. I read an incredible account of
the hobbits who never returned in a book (yes! a real live book! legal,
published fanfiction! imagine it! how ever did they manage it?) I got from the
library, the title of which escapes me, and that too, played a part. I've been
avoiding it, while writing "Bucca", but have got past the battle scenes in the
draught now and dare to revisit. What, I never reviewed this story? For shame!
Belated, then: Andy's voice is very hobbity, and the battlefield, seen through his
eyes, is a terrible place. I feel his urgency, his dread, his horror, and his
determination to find his master. Your Captain Bersil is brave and true, and
I like his search for the Halflings that had been in his charge. ...my
goodness! (Stated in shock) Bucca of the Marish was at the battle where Angmar was
overthrown! So it is in "Thain" as well! Now I have to wonder if I got that idea
in passing from reading your story, or if it just makes sense that the one
elected to become the first Thain would have done such a thing....
Hob4: Big Enough to be Thain by Llinos
I read this story early on in my introduction to fanfiction, and sadly didn't
get time to re-read it before voting closed. (Busy time, stressful time, and
then illness and injury struck various members of our family...) However, I
have fond memories of this story. Paladin is believable: How important it was to
"get" an heir in olden times! (We were just talking about Ann Boleyn and
Henry VIII this morning, as a matter of fact, and discussing how his desperation
to have a son influenced history.) You can see here the very beginning of
Merry-and-Pippin, and a lovely beginning it is, too.
Hob6: Moonlight on Summer Leaves by Silvermoon Lady
What a lovely story. "every word from those dry lips was like a tiny treasure
from a hidden hoard, all the more precious for knowing that it was finite and
failing fast"--oh, you made me cry, for never again will I hear stories from
a hidden hoard; now I can only pass on what I remember, poor as it may be.
Your prose is poetry, and I love your take on the ancient history of hobbits. And
then you bring in Legolas, and his childhood memory, and shivers run up my
spine. And Peregrin's elegy (don't know if that's the right word) is a perfect
ending to this gem of a tale.
Hob7: Of Dwarvish Ale and the Fairer Sex by Ariel
Well, I loved "Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars", so I thought I'd give this
one a try, and a treat it was, too! I kept chuckling... and chuckling some
more... and chuckling again... and then outright laughter. Your hobbits sound so
in character to me, and all the funnier for it. (You give me a whole new
insight on why hobbits do not go upstairs to bed!) And then... you are able to
bring a lump to my throat, thinking of Frodo's "what might have beens". Reading
on... no barns? Moving right along, I'm with Merry. Frodo's toast was beautiful.
And more laughter, and then... A combat for the ages? (I must admit, the next
thing I half-expected was that they'd all go off looking for a drink of water
for Frodo...)
Hob8: Recollections by Silvermoon Lady
I read this quite awhile ago, and read it again for the MEFA as I could not
remember what it was about. Ah, what a treat. I do love your description of
Merry-the-grandfather. The details you lace your stories with that put the reader
"there": going out to the orchard, Merry's almost casual pulling at bark and
branch, setting things right as an automatic habit, and then settling on an
overturned crate--I can see it. I'm "there". The ending brought tears to my
eyes. Another perfectly balanced tale, skilfully drawn.
Hob10: Sam's Garden by Shireling
O what a lovely surprise! It took me a few blinks to realise who the gardener
was... very nicely done. I do love the way you write. The second chapter was
a nice fulfillment; it was good to see the reunion of the old friends. And the
way you reversed the roles: the gardener becoming the writer and vice versa,
an interesting and touching picture of two good friends, each honouring the
other.
Hob11: Sam's Rose by jodancingtree
This my absolute favourite of Jo's stories. She pulls me into the picture she
weaves with richness of depth and detail: I smell the odours, I feel the
textures, I hear the sounds as well as seeing the picture she lays out before me
like an unending feast. Speaking of feasts! Her hobbits are so very
hobbity--especially the loving attention that goes into her description of their meals.
She makes *me* hungry, just reading, and has influenced my own writing in that
I try to imagine the dishes and garnishes and little added touches when the
storied hobbits eat, instead of just writing that they sat down to supper and
ate!
Her Frodo, and Samwise and Rosie sound just right to my ear, and I love her
portrayal of Merry and Pippin as well. Her OCs are believable and quickly
become "real". I liked Frodo's interest on literacy for hobbits. After all, if he's
going to the trouble to write down the great events that they might not be
forgotten, I can see him being interested in hobbits being able to read them!
Though we know he's fated to go, he will leave a long-lasting legacy behind him.
One part of the story that particularly struck me was the Free Fair at Michel
Delving. This, in particular, is where Jo's descriptive skills are at their
best. I almost felt as if I was there! Another scene that sticks with me was
when Frodo put on his best clothes and his most "Mayorly" manner to persuade
local hobbits to see things his way. I don't want to spoil it for anyone who
hasn't read this story, so I won't give any more detail than that, but I could
just see Frodo's seriousness, his reckless squandering of his waning energies in
his earnest desire to see his ideas come to fruition.
I'm afraid I'm feeling rather incoherent today, so let me just congratulate
you once more, Jo, on a marvellous story.
Hob12: The Cooking Conspiracy by eretria cowritten with Murron
I don't know how I missed this, but I did! I cannot leave much of a review
here, having had only enough time for chapter one, but do be assured I hope to
come back to this story and leave more feedback at ff.net (if all goes
well--however, with "Murphy's Law" staring me in the face at the top of chapter one,
perhaps I'm being too optimistic!)
Hob13: The Farmer's Wife by Nessime
You'd never know that this author doesn't commonly write hobbits; her Farmer
and Mrs. Maggot ring absolutely true. She has taken a couple of minor
characters and breathed life into them, and made you want to know more.
Hob14: Unfair by Anglachel
Very nice story indeed; you don't see much written about Lobelia. I happen to
be of the private opinion that Otho loved her very much, spoilt her rotten,
in fact, gave to her her every desire, which is why she turned out the way she
did. My only quibble would be the use of "men" towards male hobbits; it jars,
somehow.
Hob15: Weight of Stone by Chris
What an incredible take on an old superstition, indeed! I, too, had to look
up the name of the lake you mentioned, though I had my suspicions. Very sneaky,
making me think the Quest was already over with the "people met and dark
places" line... Haven't read anything of yours before, so am happy to make your
acquaintance!
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Msg# 2606
By the way, that was hobbits part 2 amnesty ballot Posted by shippingindustry October 31, 2004 - 21:41:29 Topic ID# 2606during amnesty day.
Was that clear enough? Feeling rather muddled tonight.
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Msg# 2607
By the way, that was hobbits part 2 amnesty ballot Posted by shippingindustry October 31, 2004 - 21:41:30 Topic ID# 2606during amnesty day.
Was that clear enough? Feeling rather muddled tonight.
Lin
Msg# 2608
Elves Amnesty Ballot from Elena Tiriel Posted by Elena Tiriel October 31, 2004 - 21:49:02 Topic ID# 2608Official Voting Ballot
E2: A Leaf on a Stream by Marnie
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1329431/1/
This story really opened my eyes to how biased is the the Elven history we
see in the Silmarillion - how Noldor-oriented it is. I had never really
understood that the Sindar had really been fighting the Dark long before the
Noldor even returned to Middle-earth. I loved your characters here -- well,
I've always loved your Celeborn, but the twins are interesting and distinct
in this story (impudent young rogues! -- loved their comments about
Galadriel's answers for questions they pose). I was delighted that Celeborn
taught the twins how to travel through the trees -- an obvious oversight in
their prior education (silly Noldor)! The twins' disgust at the love
between Elu and Melian is so like a child, as is Celeborn's revelation that
he would not ever go "home" if that meant leaving his grandchildren. Such a
satisfying story, Marnie!
E4: Across Dark Waters by Zimraphel
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=756
What deliciously creepy just deserts! To think that Maeglin would
eventually replace Fýanor as the most deserving of the punishment of
watching his multitudes of victims! And to think that Fýanor finally began
to show some remorse -- which, obviously, Maeglin is nowhere near having
yet. "when I hear now the word kinslayer I shall hear a name other than my
own." -- what divine justice and amazing irony at the same time!
E5: Battle of the Golden Wood by Marnie
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=358
This was a riveting story from beginning to end. I was so taken by not only
the strong personalities -- boy, I would not want to cross Celeborn when
he's in magnificent warrior mode; fell and full of fury indeed! -- but also
the more tender moments between Celeborn and Galadriel. The fact that she
was so spent at the end saddens me greatly. Also, I was so horrified by the
forces of darkness: the huge projectiles were frightening, poisoning the
waters is simply beyond comprehension, and the captive with eyes sewn open
was a horrific image that creeps me out to no end (and "creeps" is not
nearly a strong enough word...). Oh, and the effect of the ring on Oswy,
turning a decent person into doing unspeakable things, was an eye-opener, to
say the least...
E7: Dissection of the Common WoodElf, Telerius Galadh by bryn_bnw
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=418
This story is just -- evil. Pure evil. You know how it is when you see a
comedian take a pratfall and you have to laugh, knowing that pratfalls are a
low sense of humor that you don't wish to succumb to? Well, this story is
like that. I don't want to laugh, but can't help myself. I laughed at the
standard M. S. capture tactic (carefully selecting the most appropriate
type), "skilled in the art of archery and swearing", and many other parts.
The bioluminescence and associated conjecture on the descent of Elves is,
um, most unique! I most enjoyed the dig at Tolkien's incomplete family
trees, leading to speculation about asexual reproduction or hermaphroditism!
This is such a funny, sly story; I really enjoy it!
E10: Gofi and the Balrog by Levade
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=38&SPOrdinal=1
Ah, Levade, this is such a delightful elfling story! I love how carefully
and gently Glorfindel deals with the sons of Elrond, yet he doesn't spoil
them. He is very sensitive to their quiet mood (these aren't very frequent,
are they?), and draws them out very adeptly. You have very nicely captured
how very young children act in a loving environment. The detail of
Glorfindel catching on to the (near) thumb-sucking and realizing that they
must be frightened is very telling, as is Elladan's assertion that he would
have protected Glorfindel from the Balrog. The interplay between an amused
Elrond and proud warrior Glorfindel was great! I particularly loved the
ending, with Glorfy penning the picture of Thorondor to give to the twins.
What a lovely, and loving, touch!
E14: Notes From the Field by bryn_bnw
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=681
Okay, this is just too funny for words. I do a lot of laughing while
reading this story because it appeals to both my scientific bent and my
funny bone... a LOT. It's hard to even pick out the funniest bitsý I
loved the Elves trying to entice the researchers with food, and the
researchers very professionally recording every contact. Their surprise at
finding a female - snicker! Zippers. Band-aids. Do you know, I can't even
look at either object in Real Life any more without remembering this story
(which I read when you first posted it) and giggling? I also love your Mary
Sue taxonomy and life-span comments. Um, giants spiders, orcs, and vampire
bats do seem to be an occupational hazard of working in the Mirkwood
habitat. (Poor J. Z.) The glowing eyes and bulbous eyes of The Hobbit were
a particular disfavorite of mine. Ah, well, so Dwarves and Elves don't get
along well? What a surprise! Anyway, this is probably my favorite humor
story of all time. Very, very funny story, Bryn!
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Msg# 2609
Amnesty Day Ballot--LOTR Posted by bljean@aol.com October 31, 2004 - 21:50:36 Topic ID# 2609Official Voting Ballot
Incomplete
LI5: Recaptured! Ch. 93-x by Llinos
I have been following this story for a long time now, always hoping for yet
the next chapter. Yes, Llinos, you have me firmly hooked, as bad as if it were
"poppy" itself. This story is so original, so imaginative, so wildly divergent
from the original that inspired it, and yet somehow you manage periodically
to incorporate text from the original into your work--how in the world do you
manage? Your original characters are multi-dimensional and capable of
surprising the reader--very well done! I love the flashes of humour as well, the clever
turns of phrase. You also inject elements of mystery, and I hope that all
will come clear eventually. For example, you've hinted that there is a reason
Pippin talks the way he does--but I'm too thick to have figured it out, yet. And
poor Merry--my goodness, I've never read Merry-angst quite like this! I do
hope you keep writing on this one until you bring us in for a safe landing...
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Msg# 2610
Hobbits Amnesty Ballot Posted by MarigoldCotton@aol.com October 31, 2004 - 22:03:40 Topic ID# 2610Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting on. For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep the top 2 lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code: Title by Author) and then comment beneath them.
Poetry
HobP6: The Lay of Peregrin Took by Llinos
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1637800/1/
I absolutely love this piece! It is amazing! I specifically requested Llinos to write this song for a story bunny that I asked Baylor to write, because I knew that she would do a fantastic job, and the finished work was even better than I knew it would be. It is of an epic length, which is perfect for the subject matter, which is the tale of the life of a hero, and to an extent, those who love him and journey with him. I longed for something that would have the scope and grandeur of one of the old lays and stories that Sam wondered if others would someday sing and tell about them around the fire, but one especially about Pippin. Though I knew that Llinos is a brilliant poet, this work exceeded my wildest expectations. Each stanza is wonderfully and descriptively constructed and moves the story of the hero, Pippin, along smoothly and the words and cadence are just perfect.
The way that Pippin, and the others in the Fellowship are all referred to as various types of birds throughout is wonderful Pippin has been named for a peregrine falcon that Merry saw when Pippin was born, and Llinos uses the bird theme for all of the companions. I especially like that the description/type of bird used for Pippin changes during the course of the song as he matures, from a fledgling, to young falcon, little hawk, hawkling, half-grown falcon, stoic eaglet, and last, falcon.
The song tells the story of his life from birth; his battles with ill health as a child, all of his triumphs on the Quest, through his survival after the Battle of the Black Gate, as well as touching upon all of the major events faced by all of the Fellowship, and it fits Baylors universe and the story it was written for perfectly. That cant be easy, to go into another authors universe and write in a way that suits it so perfectly, and I find that very impressive. Every major event in Pippins life is included and in a very natural way, not seeming forced at all, and everyone is written in perfect character. The song is meant to be written by Legolas in the story, and it certainly could have been written by an elf it is perfect!
Post-WOTR
Hob4-1: A Crate of Lemons by ShireDweller
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1247016/1/
Rosie not knowing to put sweetening in the lemonade was my favourite moment here!
Post-WOTR
Hob4-3: At the End of His Rope by Lindelea
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=309
A really enjoyable story about Pippin and his struggles. Another good tale taking place in Lindeleas universe.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-7: Firestorm by Lindelea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1322393/1/
There are some really exciting and dramatic moments in this story. Its amazing how Lindelea manages to keep all of the facts straight from story to story, including this one, yet she does. The attention to detail is well done here. As always, everyone is in character, and entertainingly written as per Lindeleas universe. I appreciate the length of the story, as it allows the reader to really become involved in the plot.
Post-WOTR
Hob4-13: Shining Through by Dana
URL: http://dana.rosiesamfrodo.com/writing/fan/st.htm
This is a wonderful story, full of angst, but also full of hope, and love, and belief. I was very impressed at the strength of Pippin in this tale Merry showed amazing strength of his own, battling the Shadow, lost for three days in the darkness, but Pippin had to be just as strong as well, both emotionally and mentally, and his strengths in these areas are very hobbity indeed. Pippin was the one steadfastly anchoring Merry to light and life here, all on his own, and his loneliness, fear and desperation were great and difficult to bear, yet were bravely kept at bay because it was necessary for him to concentrate on good thoughts, and speak of good things and happy memories, in order to keep Merry from succumbing. Merry when he wakes has no doubts I think about what role Pippin paid in his recovery. I love their relationship here.
Pre-WotR
HobPW1: A Mother's Day by Pearl Took
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1309496/1/
I think that my favourite part of this was that all the children loved their aunts as though they were another parent. I love that the two families are depicted as being that close. Very sweet and enjoyable.
Pre-WotR
HobPW2: Gandalf and the Seahobbit by Pippinfan1988
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1382
This was a well-done and fascinating look at some of the other Tooks that Gandalf counted among his friends! It is easy to see reading this where Pippin got his bravery and wanderlust. I loved that Isengar was so similar to Pippin. The cuts back and forth between Isengar and the past, to Pippin and the present, were very nicely done.
Pre-WotR
HobPW7: River Stones by Jeodo Brandybuck
URL: http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=45
This is fabulous, and a perfect compliment to the authors other stories in this series. One of the things that I admire most about this author is her complex relationships between the four hobbits, Merry, Pippin, Frodo, and Sam. Her characterisations and dialogue for these four especially are very good. She writes the characters with a very clear understanding of the society in which the story takes place. I beta for Jeodo now, and so I know from experience the amount of research and effort that goes into each of her stories. There are notes and references galore when I receive a story from her to work on, and I can tell that the same effort was put into this story. She does her best to be historically accurate, and is absolutely within canon as much as she possibly can be. The plot of this story is entertaining, and it is a very good read. I enjoyed this very much. There is excitement, adventure, and it is a lovely picture of this authors idea of the Shire. I look forward eagerly to all of her stories.
The Lord of the Rings
HobL2: Bedside Chatter by Silvermoon Lady
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=931
A very nice story. It was interesting to see a story where Pippin and Eomer had some interaction. I liked all of the dialogue here very much! It was a very realistic scene.
The Lord of the Rings
HobL3: Riding the Nightmare by Budgielover
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1222
Budgie came up with a very clever idea here. I dont recall any other story quite like it. The action is very well written, and all of the characterisations are very well done and fit her universe perfectly.
The conflict that she creates by having Boromirs motives misinterpreted at first adds suspense to the story, and by not revealing the identities of the mysterious enemies for so long she really draws out the tension, building it nicely till the revelation, and then she exchanges that sense of unease and mystery with intense danger and horror to keep us on the edge of our seats.
You can really see the scenes she describes Aragorns nobility, the abject terror of the others in the presence of such fearsome evil, the palpable fear of and for Pippin and Frodo when they are suspended in the air as hostages by the dead, the action of Boromir diving to save the falling Pippin, Frodos mid-air rescue by the leader of the dead...all described wonderfully. Aragorn shines here as Isildurs Heir, the only one that can possible aid the dead enemy and grant them any sort of freedom. I also really liked Merry overcoming the terror he felt being surrounded by the dead when Frodo and Pippin were in danger. I really admire her Merrys strength of character and his intelligence. The dead were described so vividly, I could see them perfectly as I read!
The Lord of the Rings
HobL4: The Conspiracy of Hobbits by Dreamflower
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1707
There are many things that I like about this story. First of all it is an entertaining read, and long enough to sink your teeth into. I like Dreamflowers characterisations of the hobbits very much. She has constructed a wonderful universe to showcase her stories, and this is one of my favourites. The situations are very good, and further the plot wonderfully, and all of the dialogue is just right. There are very many nice things that stand out in the story; I liked how Merry, Frodo, and Pippin, before it was understood that they would be going on the adventure together regretted that things werent going exactly how they had always planned it, Merry thinking Pippin would have to be left behind, Pippin upset that Merry would consider leaving him behind, and Frodo thinking that he would have to leave both Merry and Pippin behind. Frodos gift to Folco, Fattys friendship with Folco, as deep in its way as the friendship between Merry and Pippin, Fattys bravery in making the suggestion that he stay behind and impersonate Frodo, a doubly brave gesture as he is terribly afraid of water and has, as Tolkien said, never before crossed the Brandywine Bridge, Fattys first glimpse of Esmeralda, thinking that she looked more like Pippins mother than Merrys&it is attention to character traits and plot points like these that make a story really enjoyable.
The Lord of the Rings
HobL5: Through Shadow by Citrine
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1897
There are some wonderful moments between the cousins here! Each character is well written, and the dialogue and thoughts for each is spot on.
Hob1: A Partnership in Villainy by Llinos
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1141429/1/
Rating: G
This is such a sweet story! I really love Llinos version of Shire Yule traditions, and the loyalty and caring between the two cousins even before Merry is made to understand his responsibilities toward Pippin. Both showed very noble traits, as this authors Merry and Pippin always do, and it is no surprise that they grew up so fine as they did in her universe, while still keeping their sense of mischief and fun. I also like that chocolate is considered to be such a strange and foreign delicacy, as I agree it would be quite rare, even nonexistent in the Shire.
Hob2: A Path With No Returning by Citrine
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1794
Rating: G
This is an amazing story of bravery and friendship and duty. I cant recommend it enough. Even though these are OC hobbits, I was as involved and interested as if they were one of the more well known hobbits. I cry every time I read this.
Hob4: Big Enough to be Thain by Llinos
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1211951/1/
Rating: G
Most authors seem to just take for granted that Pippins father was Thain when he was a child, or that he didnt become Thain until Pippin was 25. The ones that have him Thain when Pippin was a child seldom have a reason for him to already hold the office, and Llinos has come up with a very interesting explanation. I like the reasoning behind Paladin becoming Thain, and Paladins reasoning for sending his own heir to school. I feel very sorry for Pippin here, as he faces something that many children who are small face. Pearl is very well written as the wise older sister, as she is really old enough to act very maternally toward Pippin. I really like that she arranges for Merry, in the role of older brother, to come and help Pippin learn to defend himself, and also to make sure that Pippin learn and understand the importance of fair play. While that is hardly a principle reserved for the aristocracy, here it makes me understand the noble natures and upper class upbringing of these two youngsters. I also like that it was Frodo, and also Sam, who had taught Merry to defend himself. The scenes of Pippin and Merry sparring are lovely, and I like the final fight very much, especially as Paladin was watching and is so very proud of Pippin. Pippin has learned well, and acquits himself honourably. Llinos little Pippin and young Merry are just joys to read about, very much realistically acting young lads.
Hob6: Moonlight on Summer Leaves by Silvermoon Lady
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=850
A bittersweet story, and I loved that Pippin arranged for Paladin met Legolas before the end, and fulfilled his wish.
Hob7: Of Dwarvish Ale and the Fairer Sex by Ariel
URL: http://www.frodosharem.org/cgi-
An excellent sequel to Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars by Aratlithiel! I loved the inclusion of Gandalf in the hobbits drinking contest, and I never doubted who the winner would be!
Hob8: Recollections by Silvermoon Lady
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=431
Rating: G
A lovely tale. I enjoyed how so many of Merrys traits had passed on to his granddaughter. It was wonderful to read of their time together, and I could feel the pride that Merry obviously had for her.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not the story, here):
Poetry
HobPA2: Llinos
The Lay of Peregrin Took
Llinos is a fabulous poet. I am so impressed at the way that she is able to write poetry of any type, just right for its intended purpose. Whether it is an epic lay such as The Lay of Peregrin Took or a very personal poem for a friends birthday, the finished piece never fails to be just exactly right. I was visiting her when the Lay was written, and I will never forget the single-minded creativity and intensity I witnessed when she was working on it, intent on the piece to the exclusion of all else. She knows all of the rules of how many lines, what works and what doesnt, how to inspire a certain feeling. She has a talent and skill that I know I could never master.
HobA4: Ariel
Of Dwarvish Ale and the Fairer Sex
Ariel is better known for very dark pieces, but she also writes wonderful humour!
HobA6: Budgielover
Riding the Nightmare
Budgie has constructed a wonderful universe in which to set her stories, and has some marvelously original ideas and isnt afraid to be a bit different and daring! I also like the characterisations of her Fellowship very much. She always maintains continuity between her stories, so that reading any of her stories is like dropping in to visit a familiar place.
HobA8: Citrine
Through Shadow, A Path With No Returning
I look forward to every story that this talented author writes, and never fail to be impressed and touched by her work, sometimes to the point of tears. Her characters are unforgettable.
HobA9: Dana
Shining Through
Danas Merry and Pippin are fascinating, and so is her writing style.
HobA10: Dreamflower
The Conspiracy of Hobbits
I really enjoy all of Dreamflowers stories. She has a knack for writing in a very hobbity way, and her universe always offers a good, satisfying read!
HobA13: Jeodo Brandybuck
River Stones
A very thorough and painstaking author who really knows her characters, and takes the time necessary to finely craft every word of her enjoyable stories.
HobA16: Lindelea
A Small and Passing Thing; At the End of His Rope; Firestorm; Flames; Going, Going, Gone
I can always count on Lindelea to provide an entertaining tale! I appreciate her prolific habits, and her well constructed, elaborately intertwined stories.
HobA18: Llinos
A Partnership in Villainy, Big Enough to be Thain
Wonderful characterisations, especially Merry and Pippin, and the plot situations she comes up with are always very entertaining. Llinos has the ability to spin a tale that is both entertaining and yet also often has a moral or lesson. She includes lots of details, and is adept at writing a scene so that it appears before the eyes of the reader. Often she adapts personal experiences into events in her stories, and when she does this lends an even greater sense of realism. Her Merry and Pippin have a wonderful relationship, and their motivations and emotions always have a solid basis. She always stays true to their characters and her own LoTR universe.
HobA20: Pearl Took
A Mother's Day
Pearl can always be counted upon to provide a good read, with well written characters and dialogue.
HobA22: Pippinfan1988
Gandalf and the Seahobbit, Irrepresible Pippin
Wonderfully creative ideas, and good story construction. Excellent characterisations.
HobA25: Silvermoon Lady
Bedside Chatter, Moonlight on Summer Leaves, Recollections
I really enjoy this authors ability to get into the minds of her characters.
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There, peeping among the cloud-wrack above a dark tor high up in the mountains, Sam saw a white star twinkle for awhile. The beauty of it smote his heart, as he looked up out of the forsaken land, and hope returned to him. For like a shaft, clear and cold, the thought pierced him that in the end the Shadow was only a small and passing thing: there was light and high beauty for ever beyond its reach.
Sam, in Mordor, RoTK
Msg# 2611
Amnesty Day Ballot: Drama (second try) Posted by bljean@aol.com October 31, 2004 - 22:04:41 Topic ID# 2611Lindelea
Incomplete
DI11: While We Dwelt in Fear by Pearl Took
This is an astonishing story, and explores the idea of "faery blood" of the
Tooks in realistic fashion. I love the way you expand on the original, fleshing
it out and breathing yet more life into it. It's very interesting to see what
was happening in the Shire while the Quest was ongoing, and seeing all
through Esmeralda's eyes was fascinating, especially the frustration that her
connexion was with Pippin and not with her own son, directly.
LOTR
O Pearl... somehow I missed this one. I was idly going back through
Marigold's "Best Bets" and found it, and followed the link, and was bowled over. Your
descriptions of what Pippin saw and felt and thought brought me to the edge of
my seat. You are an incredible storyteller, taking us right inside the
character's head. Great job!
D3: Following the Other Wizard by jodancingtree
What an epic of a story! It almost makes me wish Frodo didn't sail away to
find healing in the West. Only Jo could make me care for Orcs, of all creatures!
Her Radagast was a pleasure to get to know, her Frodo is so well-drawn, and
her Orcs are tragic and unforgettable creatures--and yet she injects her story
with hope and healing.
D13: Thinking of You by Grey Wonderer
I really enjoyed following this story as you were writing it. The
relationships you drew between the characters rang so true, and the love that was there,
resulting in desperation at first, that progressed to sacrifice, to wanting
what was best for the other, giving up selfish needs... Very well done.
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DI11: While We Dwelt in Fear by Pearl Took
This is an astonishing story, and explores the idea of "faery blood" of the
Tooks in realistic fashion. I love the way you expand on the original, fleshing
it out and breathing yet more life into it. It's very interesting to see what
was happening in the Shire while the Quest was ongoing, and seeing all
through Esmeralda's eyes was fascinating, especially the frustration that her
connexion was with Pippin and not with her own son, directly.
LOTR
O Pearl... somehow I missed this one. I was idly going back through
Marigold's "Best Bets" and found it, and followed the link, and was bowled over. Your
descriptions of what Pippin saw and felt and thought brought me to the edge of
my seat. You are an incredible storyteller, taking us right inside the
character's head. Great job!
D3: Following the Other Wizard by jodancingtree
What an epic of a story! It almost makes me wish Frodo didn't sail away to
find healing in the West. Only Jo could make me care for Orcs, of all creatures!
Her Radagast was a pleasure to get to know, her Frodo is so well-drawn, and
her Orcs are tragic and unforgettable creatures--and yet she injects her story
with hope and healing.
D13: Thinking of You by Grey Wonderer
I really enjoyed following this story as you were writing it. The
relationships you drew between the characters rang so true, and the love that was there,
resulting in desperation at first, that progressed to sacrifice, to wanting
what was best for the other, giving up selfish needs... Very well done.
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Msg# 2613
Re: Amnesty Ballot: Drama: Correction Posted by shippingindustry October 31, 2004 - 22:35:40 Topic ID# 2612you include the name of Pearl Took's story where it just says "LOTR".
Somehow I messed up the cutting and pasting when I formatted the
ballot.
Here is the ballot, with the correction inserted.
thanks
Lindelea
> Incompleteblood" of the
> DI11: While We Dwelt in Fear by Pearl Took
> This is an astonishing story, and explores the idea of "faery
> Tooks in realistic fashion. I love the way you expand on theoriginal, fleshing
> it out and breathing yet more life into it. It's very interestingto see what
> was happening in the Shire while the Quest was ongoing, and seeingall
> through Esmeralda's eyes was fascinating, especially thefrustration that her
> connexion was with Pippin and not with her own son, directly.LOTR
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>
> LOTR
DL8: Pippin's Crucible by Pearl Took
> O Pearl... somehow I missed this one. I was idly going back throughbowled over. Your
> Marigold's "Best Bets" and found it, and followed the link, and was
> descriptions of what Pippin saw and felt and thought brought me tothe edge of
> my seat. You are an incredible storyteller, taking us right insidethe
> character's head. Great job!away to
>
>
> D3: Following the Other Wizard by jodancingtree
> What an epic of a story! It almost makes me wish Frodo didn't sail
> find healing in the West. Only Jo could make me care for Orcs, ofall creatures!
> Her Radagast was a pleasure to get to know, her Frodo is so well-drawn, and
> her Orcs are tragic and unforgettable creatures--and yet sheinjects her story
> with hope and healing.love that was there,
>
>
> D13: Thinking of You by Grey Wonderer
> I really enjoyed following this story as you were writing it. The
> relationships you drew between the characters rang so true, and the
> resulting in desperation at first, that progressed to sacrifice, towanting
> what was best for the other, giving up selfish needs... Very welldone.
>
>
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Msg# 2614
Adding my comments to Liza's Posted by shippingindustry October 31, 2004 - 22:39:21 Topic ID# 2614Wouldn't you know it, so much came together to conspire against
reading (and writing). I was glad of the awards, and still have a
list longer than my arm of stories I'd like to read...
I will be leaving feedback, as I read, for I know how much I
appreciate reading the stuff myself.
Thanks to all involved in making this MEFA work! If anything, it has
generated a list of great stories for leisure-time reading, and also
encouraging comments during what has been a very difficult time.
Thanks,
Lin
I haven't read all that is posted of this by a long shot, but it shines with
all the glow of Jo's other carefully crafted work. Heart-breaking and
hope-stirring by turn, I look forward to reading the whole someday.
Poetry
MeP5: Home by Morning by Fileg
This poem has a firm rhythm, and while it has frightening content, the
ultimate message is love, hope, and reassurance. It is a believable children's song
in a culture beset by war.
(Isn't Thundera Tiger's "As the Ring Went South" on one of the ballots
somewhere? I couldn't find it!)
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Msg# 2616
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Msg# 2617
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Msg# 2618
Drama - Marta's honest-to-goodness last ballot Posted by Marta October 31, 2004 - 23:26:52 Topic ID# 2618Ack! I finally found it. I had mislaid the number for this one and had
looked for it but somehow my eyes just skipped over it in drama. I'm
glad I finally found it, because this is one I would definitely
recommend to a friend.
In this fandom Legomances are almost a cliché. Add to that the fact
that the OFC in question is a prostitute and a past lover of Faramir,
and you have a plot line you would think has been done a thousand
times and whose leading female could very easily turn into a Mary Sue.
But not in Lady Aranel's masterful hands.
The erotica is of course delicious. Sulriel wasn't kidding when she
said that there are many of us who are waiting for the long-promised
bath. I have had the pleasure to beta this piece, so I can tell you
that (for me at least) the piece does not grow dull on repeated
reading. (And the mental image of Faramir on that rug is nice, too...)
But more than that, they are entirely in-character for Legolas and the
OC. This is one of the very few fics that gives a convincing
explanation for promiscuity in an Elf (albeit not a Noldo).
What really gets me, though, is the details. Not just the physical
details of their surroundings (those are nice) but I'm thinking mainly
of the back story. Both Lalaith and Legolas have well-defined
backgrounds - and intriguing ones at that! - that effect how they
interact. It's details like that that make "Gift" stand out.
Marta
Msg# 2619
Dwim's Amnesty LOTR Ballot Posted by dwimmer\_laik October 31, 2004 - 23:40:05 Topic ID# 2619Official Voting Ballot
To Vote, hit Reply. Delete the stories/authors you are not commenting
on. For the stories/authors you want to comment on, make sure to keep
the top 2 lines of the header information (ex. subcategory, code:
Title by Author) and then comment beneath them.
Cross-cultural
LCC1: Folk of a Different Race by Lemur
Ah yes, "the moment" as Tolkien carefully did *not* tell it. Nice use
of Gandalf's last request to Gimli and Legolas (unless one counts "Fly
you fools") as the means by which to bring Gimli and Legolas to the
point where they are willing to try to befriend each other.
Cross-cultural
LCC2: Horses and Verses by Altariel and Isabeau
It's always a trick to make two first person points of view read like
two truly different personalities. Unless, of course, you have a
partner in crime. This collaborative story is uniquely structured:
events and words overlap, so that the reader sees the same
conversation through the eyes of the two participants. One might
think that such a structure would lend itself to a certain staleness
due to repetition; certainly the first real conversation between
brothers-in-law can be difficult. The context of a funeral feast, of
two men who have just come into their own in difficult circumstances,
who are still finding their own way in the new lease on life they've
been granted, and are just waking to the real possibility of love in
politics, could easily turn into an angstfest. Finally, first person
points of view lend themselves to heavy, melodramatic introspection.
Yet the authors of this fic have turned out a finely balanced, lively
work that gives the reader a sense of emotional depth for both Faramir
and Éomer, of that ever elusive sense of "place" out of which each
character acts and reacts. In the end, it makes one wish that life
imitated art in such difficult conversations. These two men are not
yet friends, nor are they enemies—rather, they are unchosen family,
and they are bound together by a woman whose influence over them both
while she herself is often absent from the scene is rivaled only by
the influence of the dead. Fans of Faramir or Éomer should enjoy this
immensely.
Cross-cultural
LCC4: Keeping Secrets by Deborah Judge
One of the most unusual, and unusually successful, twists I have seen
in LOTR fanfiction. This story of Gimli and Éowyn takes one of the
most loathed plot twists and makes it work. Gimli and Éowyn behave
believably, and make me believe that the conversation could have
happened. The ideal of love to which Gimli holds, one that will allow
him to share a part of the life of his beloved without ever obtaining
the whole, resonates well both with a warrior ethos of sacrifice for a
beloved brother in arms but also with a sort of prolongation of love
precisely through the renunciation of its earthly possibility. Better
to sacrifice for love's sake than to have no expression at all of love
since it can never be fulfilled. Gimli's sympathetic identification
with Éowyn's plight is well-handled, appropriate to the characters. It
also foreshadows, and validates by supplying it with a tradition and
personal history, Éowyn's decision to take up the sword as Dernhelm.
Cross-cultural
LCC5: Knife Work by Thundera Tiger
An entertaining vignette about the orc slaying scorecard that seems so
disproportionate in its early stages. It could have happened this way,
even though I'm not sure I quite buy the explanation. But hey, it's a
fun action sequence, and we get a somewhat rare interaction between
Éomer, Legolas, and Aragorn. The newcomer, Éomer, gets a brief glimpse
into a more established friendship between Legolas and Aragorn that
allows for some friendly if morbid humorous banter that helps the
reader shift gears after Legolas finally succeeds in slaying his
twenty-fourth orc.
Cross-cultural
LCC8: Those Who Remain by Marnie
Lovely vignette exploring the difficult role of companion to a
ringbearer, what that means, and what returning home without him (or
her) means. Celeborn is very much an Elf, and with that uncanniness
that Elves wear like clothes when seen through unelvish eyes. The
parallel journeys of Celeborn and Sam, as they watch the rings take
hold of those they love, and watch life-long companions pulled away
from them by something stronger it seems than even love are very
poignant.
Drabble
LD1: "And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken…" by Lindelea
Nice juxtaposition of said and unsaid that makes us aware of what is
really going on beneath the light talk.
Drabble
LD2: Fireside Chats by Lindelea
Interesting. I liked Éomer's line suddenly appearing as a final
comment on Frodo's latest fireside chat.
Drabble
LD3: I See the Moon, and the Moon Sees Me by Lindelea
The parallel reassurances worked nicely in a situation where reassurer
and reassured are very much reversed.
Drabble
LD5: That Which is Fairest by Elana
I liked Gimli's little revelation, here, about the nature of beauty.
Would that we all had such moments more often!
Drabble
LD7: The Stone Tree by LKK
That kernel of strangeness left in Legolas intrigues me, although I
suspect it has roots deeper and wider spread than Gimli can yet fathom.
Gondor
LG1: All of Them Together by Fileg
Across leagues and future rivalry, Denethor and Aragorn have something
in common: a child's song that fathers sing to their children. I loved
the rhyme—it had that singsong feel to it that suits those sorts of
ditties, and is easy to remember. That Aragorn has to fight to
remember it, and ends up with the words and the vague impression of
his father's presence was very poignant, especially in the face of
Boromir and Denethor. I always think of Aragorn's wandering years as
the years when he was figuring out who he was and how to make who he
was fit with the expectations of others; that he gets a piece of
himself back in this tale somehow makes that general picture more
complete for me.
Gondor
LG4: Failure by Liz
Tough space to write in, Faramir's dreams just before Aragorn heals
him. I found Finduilas somehow the most horrific, perhaps because she
seems the most untouched (no flesh falling off bones and burning or
rotting, etc.) until the bloodstains become apparent.
Gondor
LG5: Queen's Gambit by A L Milton
Very intense portrait of Arwen and Faramir's embryonic relationship,
and a lovely sense of being in Faramir's head, of having everything
fade away save that chess board and the person pushing the pieces.
Interesting that so ruthless a game would be the point of contact
between these two, and Arwen's willingness to forfeit a clean win in
favor of a stalemate was a rather oblique manner of opening the game
outside the board up, at once a test of Faramir's perception and a the
only possible move she could have made that might have worked. I
suppose this would be the chance she takes on her "opponent", and it
seems she is at the least as good in her risks as Faramir generally
is. Loved this! (And I'm tickled you liked the substitution of
"captain" for "bishop".)
Incomplete
LI3: Messages by Shakes
I've enjoyed following Anakil's (mis)adventures up through the battle
for Osgiliath. This opened the world of Gondor's army up, and I
absolutely love the use that Anborn is put to. For some reason, he
just isn't as popular as Mablung or Damrod in fanfiction, but here we
get to see him front and center. It's a rather hectic and bewildering
world for a boy like Anakil, and one with its jealousies (the other
boys) that threaten to be more unbearable, in their way, than even the
discipline the lieutenants impose; where boyish idealism and desire to
prove oneself lead to ambiguous positions. I thought Boromir showed a
keen eye for judgment in kind when he delivered Anakil over to become
the messenger that Anakil had pretended to be—mercy on the one hand,
but also forcing Anakil to deal seriously with the choice he made.
Poetry
LP1: All Ye Fellowship of Nine by Azalais
Hysterical retelling of LOTR. The parenthetical comments were always
the final nudge that made for laughter rather than simple smirking.
Poetry
LP2: Finduilas by Fileg
Denethor does have a strong voice, and certainly, the fire, pyre, and
light/darkness imagery suit him.
Poetry
LP3: Goldberry's Song by Vulgarweed
This poem has a marvelous rhythm to it, a lovely flowing, sing-song
feel (appropriate given the characters), and Goldberry comes at long
last into her own as an elemental personality who seems truly to fit
Middle-earth.
Poetry
LP5: Song Fight at the Swan and Cygnet Saloon by Chathol-Linn
This poem inevitably makes me think of "The Devil Went Down To
Georgia"—it's about a singing duel between Bard and Legolas to settle
a contested wager, with the "Orkestra" waiting about to take out the
loser. Clever in its word play, irreverent, and just down right
funny—if you have a sense of humor, you will laugh.
Vignette
LV5: Goes A Courting by Chris
This was so well-written, so very dwarvish in sentiment—love and
craft, craft and love, and the joy of being caught up in a work that
challenges and seduces you to carry on. This is everydwarf and any
dwarf who speaks and gives us a glimpse of an underwritten corner of
Middle-earth.
Vignette
LV6: Repairs by Isabeau of Greenlea
Another piece that got at that single-minded dwarvish tenacity. The
repeated line worked very well, orders Gimli's actions and concerns,
orders the unfolding of the story, and gives us a glimpse of how the
dwarvish mind works in this one particular dwarf. Legolas feels to me
more like an elf from "The Hobbit"—there's something almost child-like
about him, despite the turn of talk to weapons-smithing.
L1: A Different Kind of Sacrifice by Suzene Campos
I did like this story. It gave me an angle on movie!Gimli that went
beyond his use as comic relief and underappreciated grunt in the
arsenal of the West. It gave his humor—exaggerated, almost
stereotypical for me by the end of the films—a rationale that was
plausible.
L5: Estel by Viv
I enjoyed this tale of Aragorn's youth. Nice connection of Arathorn's
name with the idea that the eagles bring hope to the Elves, being
messengers of the Valar. The genealogy can't fail to be noted by a
perceptive boy, who recognizes that his father's burden (and that of
the Eagles) has somehow fallen to him: he is hope, and so caught up
already in a tale far vaster than he can probably imagine.
L6: For The Road by Alawa
An unusual interaction—Bilbo and Aragorn, even if only through the
medium of a letter. One imagines Aragorn must have been very drawn to
the one other mortal person in Imladris, despite his affinity for and
familiarity with the Elves. A fitting bon voyage for Bilbo, at once
humorous, humane, and bittersweet.
L7: Gilraen's Memorial by Alawa
This fic managed to take several of my complaints about
movie!Aragorn—his fear of his heritage, his refusal of a burden he has
been preparing to assume since he came of age, the tension between him
and Elrond, and the (at the time) unfathomable (or rather, all too
fathomable, given the Arwen Warrior Princess rumors) motives of PJ for
leaving Anduril in pieces in Rivendell—and make something coherent of
them that was consistent with the themes of the books, or so I thought
and which yet remained solidly within the movie framework. Eloquent,
wise, and incorporating on a much more nuanced level the shadow of
Isildur's tainted legacy, this fic really opened movie!Aragorn up for
me and helped me see the book!character I loved in the scripted
character on the screen.
L16: Whistling Past the Graveyard by Shunt
This story makes the most of the Khazad-dûm scenes. Feeling one's way
in the darkness, aware of the morbid history one is literally passing
through. Boromir's memories of old superstitions in Gondor, of
counting every stair in the Tower, were very aptly juxtaposed with the
climb up the stairway of Khazad-dûm. Great atmospheric writing!
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category,
not the story, here):
Poetry
LPA2: Azalais
All Ye Fellowship of Nine
Azalais' evil song muse is something I look forward to around
Christmas time. Long may it live and inspire transformations of LOTR's
story and characters, all to a singable tune!
Poetry
LPA3: Chathol-Linn
Song Fight at the Swan and Cygnet Saloon
I don't analyze poetry well, but I did find this to be very creative
and eminently speakable. Trips off the tongue very nicely, and the
imagery is wonderful.
Poetry
LPA8: Vulgarweed
Goldberry's Song
Vulgarweed likes to find underwritten corners of Middle-earth and open
them up for readers. The poetry fit the character of Goldberry very
well—it felt like she would have said something like this, that the
form of the narration was integral to the character's self-expression.
Well done!
Msg# 2620
Dwim's Amnesty Romance Ballot Posted by dwimmer\_laik October 31, 2004 - 23:41:35 Topic ID# 2620RmG3: Simple Gifts by Thevina Finduilas
Femslash is rare in Tolkien fandom, it seems, but some of the most
successful uses OFCs, like this fic does, so as to hit upon a
plausible setting. Finduilas' youth, her trust and affection for her
friend, and curiosity combine to make a little exploration seem not
unlikely. Intimate and a lot more peaceful than many slashfics
featuring male characters, this has a qualitatively different feel
from many slash stories.
Incomplete
RmI5: Mock My Innocence by Virvatuli
Take very seriously the author's description: this is a *seriously*
demented fic, and I mean that in the best possible way. Delightfully
so. This could've been in the humor category: I nearly died laughing
over the first ten chapters or so. Orcs who can't stand the sight of
blood; Elves who deliberately get themselves captured by Orcs because
there's nothing to beat a little bondage; the slash clichés get
skewered; so does Tolkienesque language. It is a thing of beauty, if
'beauty' is allowed a certain leeway in the eye of the beholder...
Incomplete
RmI9: Ultimatums by Isabeau of Greenlea
I have greatly enjoyed watching Imrahil take on a life and logic of
his own in Isabeau's hand. It stands to reason that he would fall for
the one woman who won't have him unless he applies himself to the
difficult task of finally growing up and into the wisdom that we later
see hinted at in ROTK. Nimrien holds her own in this story, as a
character and as the object of Imrahil's affection; it was good to
see, too, her strengths as a behind-the-scenes scholar who plays a
pivotal role in her suitor's diplomatic success. That we get to see
Andrahar's and Imrahil's relationship developed as well is just icing
on the cake. I won't even stoop to mention in this forum that it'd be
great to see another chapter soon...
Poetry
RmP1: A Hole Possessed by Marta
*snork* You know, I suspect Lobelia of having a Denethor moment here.
Love of Gondor, love of Bag End...
Poetry
RmP2: Courtship of the Evenstar by White Gull
I liked the use of the star and moon imagery to substitute for Arwen
and Aragorn. Lovely rhythm!
Poetry
RmP5: Love me, Urgren by Werecat
Although I couldn't quite find the rhythm, this is definitely orcish
in sentiment. If an orc were to write love poetry, surely it would be
something like this!
Rm3: Jealous by Oakenshield
Ok, I had to laugh just for that last line. Stiff necks of Dwarves
apparently give way under pressure after all.
Rm5: Quickening by Tyellas
This is just a delightful story. Irreverent, yet entirely too
plausible, here we have "the older woman" scenario played out with wit
and levity in this tale of horsey courtship. The interfering
busibodies' (i.e., the Twins) priceless reaction is a fitting captstone.
Rm6: Ring of Water by Altariel
Four Ages, four paragraphs, one timeless love. This is a dense, highly
polished work that finds a place not only for female friendship but
femslash. The prose is lyrical and very tight. Do not expect a
full-blown narrative—these are snapshots that reflect on each other,
spiralling in on each other. Galadriel and Aredhel go full circle,
through love, anger, loss, and forgiveness that is the test of a true
love. I highly recommend it.
Msg# 2621
Dwim's Amnesty Hobbits Ballot Posted by dwimmer\_laik October 31, 2004 - 23:41:49 Topic ID# 2621HobD4: Resting Places by Marigold
Very peaceful, despite the theme. I thought Frodo's especially brought
out his character.
Drabble
HobD5: Small Hands by Marta
Nice little peek into the Council from the perspecive of a dropper of
eaves.
Poetry
HobP4: Old Will Whitfoot by Tanaqui, co-written with Marta
This was great fun—I think the moral at the end fit the genre
(drinking song) very nicely, and the rhythm worked pretty well too.
Most entertaining!
Post-WOTR
Hob4-1: A Crate of Lemons by ShireDweller
Lemons are such treacherous things to cook with. I am in full sympathy
with Sam's efforts and oversights. Rosie, Sam, and Frodo each had
distinct voices that suited them, I thought. A nice vignette.
HobPW4: Legacy by Anglachel
Anglachel has a good eye for integrating disparate details to form a
coherent and challenging whole. Here, she weaves politics, Shire
history, and economics into the tale of Bilbo's adoption of Frodo with
confidence and adroitness. Through conversation and reflection, we see
the Shire unfold in such a way that it is not a land of merely bucolic
farmers, but has its intrigues and tensions that are appropriate to
it, and are appropriately grave. The changing economic situation
breeds "dragon-heartedness", a desire for gold and liquid assets that
don't tie one to responsibility for the land; there are strangers in
the markets, and the outside world seems to cast a longer shadow than
usual on a land that is, in Frodo's generation, just recovering from
the unequal losses of women to men in the Fell Winter. And those
losses, too, have their social consequence in the sexual behaviors
(and the attitudes adopted towards them) of men in Bilbo's generation,
creating a plausible context for a homosexual relationship to occur.
This is not a fic that portrays sex in a vacuum; all the elements of
the story are carefully and realistically tied together to make for a
complex, satisfying picture of how Frodo came to live with Bilbo. Even
the Ring has its role to play in channeling and problematizing desire.
This is a well-written story, including several controversial but
well-handled components, and other elements that are just delightful
(the apple garden, for example); it is well worth the reader's time.
Pre-WotR
HobPW5: Messing About in Boats by Grey Wonderer
*snork* I admit to not being overly fond of young hobbit antics, but
one *definitely* should not allow Merry and Pippin to be in charge of
boats. Ever. Great last line—I pity Boromir. I mean, the man is going
to die on Parth Galen only after days on the water with Merry and
Pippin. Some guys just don't get any breaks!
Hob2: A Path With No Returning by Citrine
Sad little vignette on the aftermath of the war that broke Arnor,
particularly since it seems as though the hobbit archers were very
nearly forgotten, ending as only a line in the Appendices of the Red
Book.
Hob13: The Farmer's Wife by Nessime
It was good to see Farmer and Mrs. Maggot fleshed out in these
vignettes. Nicely written!
Hob14: Unfair by Anglachel
Lobelia Sackville-Baggins never made much sense to me. She was the
tyrannical matriarch who was nevertheless petty, and behind the text I
thought I saw a woman whose own behavior was outside of the bounds of
propriety she doubtless enforced with oppressive rigor. Her
transformation from that to rebellious heroine was based entirely on
her own sense of place in the world, it seemed to me. This story gave
Lobelia a history that made sense of her bitter dislike of Bilbo
Baggins, the icon of non-comformity in the Shire. Lobelia's history as
a failed idealist here, who believed in love and was betrayed and left
holding the bag as so many women have been, gives her feud with Bilbo
a context. It shows her as a young woman who probably would be Bilbo's
match in terms of personality and courage had it not been for this one
experience which altered everything. It makes sense of her spunk, of
her anger, and of her ability to heal in the end. And I think the
reader will end by agreeing that Lobelia's is a tale most unfair.
Hob15: Weight of Stone by Chris
I liked the way skipping stones became a hobbit superstition for luck.
Wistful, with just a hint of past darkness.
Msg# 2622
Re: Men -- Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 31, 2004 - 23:59:17 Topic ID# 2022read. Alas, but I barely have time to copy these last few comments and hit
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Gondor
MeG6: Death by Water by Altariel
I believe that, in a way, Alteriel does hear Faramir telling her a story.
And since I've already written her author comment, I have to say that here.
Many first person stories feel a little odd at first when you realize they
are in first person and you are used to third. With this one, I think I was
halfway through it before I realized it was first person. So perfectly did
it flow. Alteriel can write Faramir like no one else I know. And this
shows it.
Me4-1: A Kind of Valediction by Altariel
Wow. I liked once his vision started and that he finally figured out what
they wanted of him: release, confirmation of what they had done. A kind of
validiction, just like the title. And he could tell them that what they
waited for had finally come, that what they had done had saved Gondor in the
end. The king had returned. Well-written and well-told. Bravo.
Me4-7 Sufficient by Tanaquie
I like that at the beginning Faramir doesn't understand Legolas, and, at
the end, Legolas doen't understand Faramir. Heck, I didn't either! But I'm
glad Legolas could give him that little bit of wisdom and optimism.
MA9: Dwimordene
I like that at the beginning Faramir doesn't understand Legolas, and, at the
end, Legolas doen't understand Faramir. Heck, I didn't either! But I'm glad
Legolas could give him that little bit of wisdom and optimism.
!
!
*
And what finally can I say of Dwimordene, in this my last comment in this
year's awards? I have already said that she writes syphonies and I have
less than five mintues to write this and copy it into my ballot! I don't
know that I can even do her justice in here, and I can type fast. Eek. A
wonderful writer who cares very much about her writing and wouldn't suffer a
single typo to remain in even her longest story if once she could find it.
She's one of the best fanfic writers I know and maybe one of the best
writers, hands down. Alas, but I really must get this into a ballot and
posted before the time is up.
Gondor
MeG7: From the Other Riverbank by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=5
Rating: R mature themes related to homosexuality
Romance Partners: slash
Summary: Gondor on the brink of war is a political crucible. Those who would
dwell in it must learn never to blink, even when old loyalties are in doubt
and faith in the most basic relationships is shaken.
Gondor
MeG8: Hearth Companions by Alawa
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=780
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A woman of Minas Tirith goes about her business in the aftermath of
the Siege of Gondor.
Gondor
MeG9: Homecoming by Nancy Brooke
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=363
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Boromir Returns to Minas Tirith.
Gondor
MeG10: How Many Years? by Marta
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1664
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The road to the hallows above Minas Tirith is travelled only once a
generation, on the coming-of-age of the current steward's oldest son.
Denethor leads Boromir down that scarce-walked path, and Denethor finally
gives Boromir an honest answer to a question he asked as a child.
Gondor
MeG11: I will always be your brother by Avon
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1960
Rating: PG-13 death and dying mentioned
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Boromir and Faramir's first meeting when Boromir comes home from
his first campaign. There are so many things you can't promise.
Gondor
MeG12: In His Brother's Shadow by Celandine Brandybuck
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=119
Rating: PG-13 discussion of sex and mild adult themes
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A glimpse at Faramir's youth - his first meeting with Gandalf and
his relationship with Boromir. Seventh and last of the Steward's Family
sequence.
Gondor
MeG13: Lady of Silences by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/935836/1/
Rating: PG-13 abusive father (Denethor)
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In Minas Tirith, Finduilas remembers the sea. Features Boromir,
Faramir, and Denethor. A very bleak vignette.
Gondor
MeG14: Leaves on the Wind by Nancy Brooke
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=269
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Letters from Faramir to Boromir before the last defense of
Osgiliath.
Gondor
MeG15: Possessions by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1285796/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In the library in Minas Tirith, Gandalf makes a new friend
(Faramir).
Gondor
MeG16: Proof by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1381980/1/
Rating: PG death by hanging
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: How to win friends and influence people. Faramir and the Ithilien
Rangers.
Gondor
MeG17: Reasons by Saralitazie
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=836
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Boromir and Faramir, the night before Boromir leaves for Imladris.
Gondor
MeG18: Requiem by Nancy Brooke
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=49
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: How Boromir and Faramir remember their mother.
Gondor
MeG19: Singer by the shore by Beth Winter
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3435
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: On a dark night in Dol Amroth, Boromir and Faramir meet a singer
who only sings the truth. Denethor's sons are children in this introspective
story.
Gondor
MeG20: Stargazers by Henneth Annun Writers (Altariel, Starlight, Acacea,
Fileg, Chris, Forodwaith)
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1605391/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Who taught Faramir about the constellations? A series of linked
stories about his lessons.
Gondor
MeG21: The Burial of the Dead by Altariel
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=130
Rating: PG-13 Violent implications
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Denethor remembers the dead and the dying - Boromir, Faramir,
Finduilas.
Gondor
MeG22: The King is Dead by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1124984/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Denethor teaches a young Faramir the game of chess.
Gondor
MeG23: Ties of Love by Avon
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2051
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Boromir and Faramir and the ties that bind us. Boromir explains a
Gondorian superstition to Pippin.
Gondor
MeG24: Too Late for Misgivings by Shadow975
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1197684/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The parting of Boromir and Faramir, in which the brothers again
address the question of which of them should go to Imladris.
Gondor
MeG25: Worship by Destina_Fortunato
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=77
Rating: PG mentions consummated relationship
Romance Partners: Aragorn/Boromir
Summary: Every man needs something to believe in. Slash fic.
Incomplete
MeI1: Blackbow by Isabeau of Greenlea
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1333043/1/
Rating: PG-13 some violence
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: How Hethlin became a Ranger of Ithilien.
Incomplete
MeI2: Of One to Me by M. N & E. M. Theis
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1380712/1/
Rating: R violence, graphic descriptions of wounds, much angst
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A fall in Moria sets Legolas and Boromir on a different and very
dangerous road.
Incomplete
MeI3: Orcbrat by The Lauderdale
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1184601/1/
Rating: R Violence, rape, bad language
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Orcs destroyed Maevyn's village. She wants revenge.
Incomplete
MeI4: The Queen's Orc by jodancingtree
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1741
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: He was the Ringbearer's Orc, bound to him by solemn blood-pact, and
he wore the Jewel that Frodo gave him. That was all Aragorn knew of him
until he appeared in Minas Tirith, seeking the Queen whose Jewel he wore.
Was it blessing or curse that he came during the last springtime of
Aragorn's reign?
Poetry
MeP1: An Elegy for Elfhild by Alawa
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1391656/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Theoden after the death of his wife in childbirth.
Poetry
MeP2: Ascension by Fileg
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=1425&SPOrdinal=1
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A terzanelle that questions the futile nature of waiting for
redemption.
Poetry
MeP3: Darkness Falls by flick
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2575
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A sestina on the death of Boromir. Inspired by both book-verse and
movie-verse.
Poetry
MeP4: Eowyn, my fair one by Dwimordene
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1233
Rating: PG-13 sexuality (non-explicit)
Romance Partners: Grim/Eowyn, sort of
Summary: A very Bitter (and belated) Valentine's Day poetry challenge. Grima
lets his inner poet loose. Pity the world. And Eowyn, of course.
Poetry
MeP5: Home by Morning by Fileg
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=1765&SPOrdinal=1
Rating: G
Romance Partners: A Ranger and his partner
Summary: A love poem from the heart of war and a Nursery Rhyme to scare the
daylights out of the little ones when you tuck them in.
Poetry
MeP6: I Ride by RennWench and Alstaria
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/R/RennWench/IRide.htm
Rating: PG-13
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir's thoughts as he brings news from Osgiliath to Minas
Tirith.
Poetry
MeP7: Oh, Elessar by Malissa Koebel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1812621/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Poem of Elessar coming to the throne of Gondor after the fall of
Sauron.
Poetry
MeP8: The Hamster by Dwimordene
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=2423&SPOrdinal=1
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Poe pastiche silliness. Obsession and the care and dealing with
hamsters collide-welcome to Denethor's world.
Post-WOTR
Me4-1: A Kind of Valediction by Altariel
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=585
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: A Minas Tirith ghost story. Ten years after the pyre, Faramir is
still haunted by the past.
Post-WOTR
Me4-2: Black Captain by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1307131/1/
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Office politics in Minas Tirith; Aragorn and Faramir.
Post-WOTR
Me4-3: Fair Game by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1488736/1/
Rating: PG violent death
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: In which people go bird-watching and find their courage. Set a
little while after the events of 'A Game of Chess'. Faramir, Eowyn, Eomer,
OCs.
Post-WOTR
Me4-4: Light Lingering by Earmire/Nol
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1605
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Over swordplay, dreams and academics, Faramir, Prince of Ithilien,
makes a new friend.
Post-WOTR
Me4-5: Missing by Firerose
URL: http://www.viragene.com/missing.htm
Rating: PG-13 adult situations implied, language
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The new Steward delves into the past, whilst coming to terms with
the present, and the future.
Post-WOTR
Me4-6: My Dark-haired Love by Avon
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2636
Rating: PG some nudity
Romance Partners: Eowyn/Faramir
Summary: On the night of her wedding to Faramir Eowyn thinks about love and
words.
Post-WOTR
Me4-7: Sufficient by Tanaqui
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2784
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir, Legolas, and a bow of the Galadhrim. The morning after
Aragorn's coronation, two archers find themselves down at the practice
grounds. A few arrows, a lot of words, the start of a friendship, and how
Faramir beings to learn to let go of the things he no longer needs. Mild
angst.
Post-WOTR
Me4-8: The Endless Knot by E.M Theis
URL: http://www.illegiblescroll.net/The%20Endless%20Knot/title.htm
Rating: R violence, much angst.
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Shortly after the Ring is destroyed, a group of warriors travels to
eliminate the remnants of Mordor's forces at the citadel of Minas Morgul.
Led by Eomer, the newly crowned King of the Mark, and by Faramir, Steward of
Gondor, the warriors find more at the Moontower than any expected. The
simple mission turns out to be the trial of Faramir's life, and the attack
on Minas Morgul becomes a struggle to simply survive.
Post-WOTR
Me4-9: The Unsung by Alexcat
URL: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/Q_Z/U/Unsung.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Aragorn thinks back to how many gave so much.
Me1: A House Divided by Thevina Finduilas
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2549
Rating: R adult sexual situations (not explicit)
Romance Partners: Morwen of Lossarnach/Thengel and Morwen/Aragorn
Summary: A story about the lesser-written, earlier-generation marital
uniting of Gondor and Rohan--a telling of the lives of Morwen of Lossarnach
and Thengel, their family, and those who intersect with it: Ecthelion,
Aragorn, Rangers and Marshals.
Me2: Bindings of Gold by Lyllyn
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=626
Rating: PG adult themes
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: The Witch-king reflects on his choice and its consequences.
Vignette.
Me3: Captain, My Captain by Isabeau of Greenlea
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Events in RoTK as experienced by a young Ranger of Ithilien. Main
character is OFC. Faramir is featured prevalently in the first half, the
second half features, among others, Imrahil, the sons of Elrond, Elrond
himself, Eowyn and Eomer, Arwen and Lord Celeborn. Warning--this is a
novel-length story.
Me4: Gift Horses by Jedishampoo
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3266
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Eowyn/Faramir
Summary: How is Eowyn to get out of the Houses of Healing or escape an
inescapable future in Rohan?
Me5: Kinsmen by Dwimordene
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=944&SPOrdinal=2
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: Aragorn/f
Summary: From father to son, the line of Isildur has remained unbroken
through long years of toil and peril. Of the names of Chieftains recorded, a
full quarter of them died untimely but were able to pass their title to
their sons. This is a tale of the Dunedain, and of keeping the line alive at
all costs, as seen through the eyes of two mothers.
Me6: Night in Hollin by Nancy Brooke
URL: http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=751
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Aragorn discovers something less than orthodox about Boromir's
teaching methods.
Me7: The Believer by Cori Lannam
URL:
http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=90&STID=2061&SP
Ordinal=11
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Boromir and Aragorn have a little chat about some Gondorian
superstitions..
Me8: The Sickle of the Valar by Altariel
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1588051
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Denethor listens to a lesson about the stars.
Me9: Thorongil by Eledhwen
URL: http://www.dreamyaspirations.co.uk/thorongil.htm
Rating: PG
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Between 2957 and 2980 of the Third Age, Aragorn undertook his great
errantries and journeys. In this time he also served Thengel of Rohan and
Ecthelion of Gondor under the name 'Thorongil' - Eagle of the Star.
Me10: Through A Glass by Altariel
URL: http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=273
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Faramir's answer to the challenge question: Eowyn, heroine or
deserter? Gapfiller set during RotK.
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
Poetry
MPA1: Alawa
An Elegy for Elfhild
Poetry
MPA2: Dwimordene
Eowyn, my fair one; The Hamster
Poetry
MPA3: Fileg
Ascension, Home By Morning
Poetry
MPA4: flick
Darkness Falls
Poetry
MPA5: Malissa Koebel
Oh, Elessar
Poetry
MPA6: RennWench and Alstaria
I Ride
MA1: Alawa
Hearth Companions
MA2: Alexcat
The Unsung
MA3: Altariel
A Pale Light Lingering, Adrift, Death by Water, Lady of Silences,
Possessions, Proof, The Burial of the Dead, The King is Dead, A Kind of
Valediction, Black Captain, Fair Game, The Sickle of the Valar, Through A
Glass
MA4: Avon
I will always be your brother, Ties of Love, My Dark-haired Love
MA5: Beth Winter
Singer by the shore
MA6: Celandine Brandybuck
Courting the Lady, In His Brother's Shadow
MA7: Cori Lannam
The Believer
MA8: Destina_Fortunato
Worship
MA9: Dwimordene
Kinsmen
MA10: E.M Theis
The Endless Knot
MA11: Earmire/Nol
Light Lingering
MA12: Eledhwen
Thorongil
MA13: Firerose
Missing
MA14: Henneth Annun Writers (Altariel, Starlight, Acacea, Fileg, Chris,
Forodwaith)
Stargazers
MA15: Isabeau of Greenlea
Blackbow; Captain, My Captain
MA16: Jedishampoo
Gift Horses
MA17: jodancingtree
The Queen's Orc
MA18: Lindelea
Choices
MA19: Lyllyn
Bindings of Gold
MA20: M. N & E. M. Theis
Of One to Me
MA21: Marta
How Many Years?
MA22: Nancy Brooke
Homecoming, Leaves on the Wind, Requiem
MA23: Saralitazie
Reasons
MA24: Shadow975
Too Late for Misgivings
MA25: Tanaqui
Chance Meetings, Sufficient
MA26: The Lauderdale
MA27: Thevina Finduilas
A House Divided
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Msg# 2623
Re: Humor--Official Voting Ballot Posted by Ainaechoiriel October 31, 2004 - 23:59:58 Topic ID# 2263From: Ainaechoiriel [mailto:mefaadmin@earthlink.net]
Sent: Friday, October 01, 2004 12:21 AM
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Subject: [MEFAwards] Humor--Official Voting Ballot
Humor
Official Voting Ballot
Alternate Universe
HuA2: No Living Man by Elana
Well that certainly left me laughing. Quite a few enemies fit the bill,
didn't they. That prophet really should have been more specific, huh?
Alternate Universe
HuA3: Slightly Muddled by Lindelea
Cute, very cute. I find it hard to believe that Lindelea could keep coming
up with these modern sayings (perhaps from several parts of the world) for 7
chapters, and oh, the preview!
Alternate Universe
HuA7: T'was the Night Before Helm's Deep by Erin's Daughter
I liked best the part where it said the spear lodged in his throat was a
bit of a distraction. ;-) I'd say so! Cleverly done story there.
Parody
HuP2: Boromir: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual by Theresa Green
Oh, that was cute! I especially liked the troubleshooting note about being
accidentally sent a FARAMIR unit. And of course I'd like to know where to
get a Mk I and Mk II LEGOLAS
Romance
HuR3: I'm WHAT? by Ellbee
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1282382/1/
Rating: PG-13 suggestiveness; references to mpreg
Romance Partners: Legolas/Aragorn
Summary: Nine months in the life of Legolas, Bridget-style. You COULD call
this a sort of homage to all those MPREG stories out there.
Hu2: Experiment Gone.Right? by Viv
And here I was expecting an Elf. Hey, I've got a lot of wiry hardware and
posters in my home office. Anyone got the recipe for Legolas. If not, I'll
take Voronwe….
Hu11: Secrets We Dare Not Tell by Coriel
Oh, that was not at all what I expected! But it's quite funny. Thank
goodness Gimli never found out!
Hu14: The Ents of Wrath by Bryn (aka bryn_bnw)
URL: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=726
Rating: G
Romance Partners: n/a
Summary: Into the depths of Fanghorn we go! Merry and Pippin
meet...Treebeard. In which our favorite Elf, Ranger, Dwarf, and Wizard have
a time sorting THIS one out, and we discover why Ents are trees. A bit of
fun nonsense. (Cameos by Eomer, Theoden, Haldir, Rumil, Galadriel, and
Celeborn.)
AUTHORS (remember to comment on the writer as regards to the category, not
the story, here):
´
HuA12: Coriel
Thank your sister for me, Coriel, for encouraging you to write that secret
that dare not be told.
HuA14: Elana
Elana did a fine job with a silly little story! I knew she could write
drabbles, now I know she can write humor, too.
HuA17: Erin's Daughter
Who would have thought to put the minions of Morgoth and Sauron into a
corporation or union-style meeting? Well, Erin's Daughter, apparently. Very
clever idea and carried out rather well.
HuA23: Lindelea
Thanks for the spoof of badfic with modern language, Lindelea, you did a
hilarious job.
HuA30: Viv
Viv put a lovely twist ending on her story. I didn't expect Pippin or
Gollum. Good job on keeping the suspense. And the descriptions of the
computer area were done quite well, too.
This category ends on October 10th at 11:59pm Central US time
--Ainaechoiriel
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