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Msg# 5016

Thanks, Jes Posted by Anthony Holder August 01, 2005 - 0:35:22 Topic ID# 5016
It's nice to hear that those of you who are new to the group notice.
I'm glad to help. I can't believe how much time I've put into this,
though. I need to stop listening when my wife (Elana) says, "Hey Honey,
do you think you could do something for this group I'm part of?"

Seriously, I enjoy doing it, though sometimes it gets pretty close to
burn out. I was there not long after we kicked this off in April/May,
but I've had a nice rest now.

By the way, I just peeked into the database, and there are, at present:

1247 stories
1063 stories with tentative or final reviews
1102 stories with reviews

3041 total reviews:
315 draft reviews
1781 tentative reviews
945 final reviews

Author Reviews:

295 distinct authors
18 authors with tentative or final reviews
19 authors with reviews

2 draft reviews
1 tentative reviews
57 final reviews

Before voting season starts, I need to finish up the pages that will
let you READ all those reviews. What is currently there won't do at
all. I've already made a lot of progress, and I think you'll all like
it. If it works right, you'll be able to mark the reviews you've
already read, and will not have to sort through them all to find new
ones, but will be able to go back and look at old ones when you want
to.

Before you ask, no you can't read them yet (Not even you, Elana!). When
Voting Season starts, there will magically appear a 'Read Reviews' link
(or several, at appropriate places), and all the final reviews will
become readable. If you want people to be able to read those 1781
tentative reviews at that time, you'll have to go make them final (but
once you do, after Voting Season starts, you won't be able to edit them
any more).

As new final reviews are added, they'll come up at the end of the list.
At midnight after Voting Season is over, all the tentative reviews will
be added to the end of the list (in something sort of related to the
order they were written, but I can't guarantee anything there because
I'm kludging that part on).

In two weeks' time, you should be able to get your eyeballs on those
first 1000 or so final reviews.

Happy Reading,
Anthony

Msg# 5017

Re: Thanks, Jes Posted by ghettoelleth@aol.com August 01, 2005 - 0:52:23 Topic ID# 5016
*Deer in headlights look*
On my best day I can power up and get online without getting a migraine.
You rock Anthony.
Elana, you're a lucky girl. So many women I know in the fanfic world have
husbands who aren't even aware of what they're doing and yours is even
pitching a helping hand. As my husband always tells me when we discuss the lack of
spousal participation, "Every husband should no the joy of playing crash test
dummy for the make-out scenes."

Cheers to you both,
Jes

In a message dated 7/31/2005 10:35:39 P.M. Pacific Standard Time,
aaholder@swbell.net writes:

It's nice to hear that those of you who are new to the group notice.
I'm glad to help. I can't believe how much time I've put into this,
though. I need to stop listening when my wife (Elana) says, "Hey Honey,
do you think you could do something for this group I'm part of?"

Seriously, I enjoy doing it, though sometimes it gets pretty close to
burn out. I was there not long after we kicked this off in April/May,
but I've had a nice rest now.

By the way, I just peeked into the database, and there are, at present:

1247 stories
1063 stories with tentative or final reviews
1102 stories with reviews

3041 total reviews:
315 draft reviews
1781 tentative reviews
945 final reviews

Author Reviews:

295 distinct authors
18 authors with tentative or final reviews
19 authors with reviews

2 draft reviews
1 tentative reviews
57 final reviews

Before voting season starts, I need to finish up the pages that will
let you READ all those reviews. What is currently there won't do at
all. I've already made a lot of progress, and I think you'll all like
it. If it works right, you'll be able to mark the reviews you've
already read, and will not have to sort through them all to find new
ones, but will be able to go back and look at old ones when you want
to.

Before you ask, no you can't read them yet (Not even you, Elana!). When
Voting Season starts, there will magically appear a 'Read Reviews' link
(or several, at appropriate places), and all the final reviews will
become readable. If you want people to be able to read those 1781
tentative reviews at that time, you'll have to go make them final (but
once you do, after Voting Season starts, you won't be able to edit them
any more).

As new final reviews are added, they'll come up at the end of the list.
At midnight after Voting Season is over, all the tentative reviews will
be added to the end of the list (in something sort of related to the
order they were written, but I can't guarantee anything there because
I'm kludging that part on).

In two weeks' time, you should be able to get your eyeballs on those
first 1000 or so final reviews.

Happy Reading,
Anthony





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Msg# 5018

Re: Thanks, Jes Posted by angelabrooks August 01, 2005 - 1:52:57 Topic ID# 5016
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, ghettoelleth@a... wrote:

> Elana, you're a lucky girl.

I sure am. :)

>So many women I know in the fanfic world have
> husbands who aren't even aware of what they're doing and yours is even
> pitching a helping hand.

He'll even read my stories if I pester him enough.

As my husband always tells me when we discuss the lack of
> spousal participation, "Every husband should no the joy of playing
crash test
> dummy for the make-out scenes."

Well, yes, he's done some of that too. Not that I always tell him
that's what's going on. ;)

Elana

Msg# 5019

Re: Thanks, Jes Posted by ejackamack@aol.com August 01, 2005 - 5:07:43 Topic ID# 5016
In a message dated 8/1/2005 2:53:09 A.M. Eastern Standard Time,
angelabrooks@yahoo.com writes:

As my husband always tells me when we discuss the lack of
> spousal participation, "Every husband should no the joy of playing
crash test
> dummy for the make-out scenes."

Well, yes, he's done some of that too. Not that I always tell him
that's what's going on. ;)



My husband has very kindly volunteered his services for research in that
department.

Isabeau


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Msg# 5020

Fanfic in the news: Posted by aelfwina@cableone.net August 01, 2005 - 8:01:09 Topic ID# 5020
Fanfic's in the news. Check this out:

http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/magazine/3188813.stm

Dreamflower
(Barbara)

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Msg# 5021

Re: unreviewed stories Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 01, 2005 - 18:47:23 Topic ID# 5021
In a message dated 8/1/2005 4:20:48 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
By the way, I just peeked into the database, and there are, at present:

1247 stories
1063 stories with tentative or final reviews
1102 stories with reviews
Here's a question for you, dumb perhaps, and I've no idea how easy or
difficult to implement.

When voting season opens, is there a way to filter stories that as yet have
no reviews? I'd love to concentrate my efforts on those--wouldn't it be great
if all the entries got at least one review? Or am I being stupid?

It is just that with so very many stories in the database, no way I'm going
to get to all twelve hundred something. I'm reviewing first the stories I
nominated (seems as if I ought to!) and then the stories that I'm interested in and
then hitting what I have time for, dabbling in "new life and new
civilizations" (or whatever that Star Trek quote was).

In haste (what else is new?),
Lin
making a mental note to go back and check those tentative reviews, to see if
they're ready to turn into final reviews.


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Msg# 5022

Dumb question Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 01, 2005 - 18:48:46 Topic ID# 5022
When does voting season start, again?

I know there was someplace to look up dates, but I'm really rushed off my
feet this week.

I'm thinking it's all over September 30, isn't that right?

Aargh.

Just point me to where the timeline is posted and I'll try to stop asking
stupid questions.

Thanks,
Lin


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Msg# 5023

Re: unreviewed stories Posted by ghettoelleth@aol.com August 01, 2005 - 18:59:47 Topic ID# 5021
In a message dated 8/1/2005 4:47:32 P.M. Pacific Standard Time,
BLJean@aol.com writes:

When voting season opens, is there a way to filter stories that as yet have
no reviews? I'd love to concentrate my efforts on those--wouldn't it be
great
if all the entries got at least one review? Or am I being stupid?



Oh man, now I feel terrible about the reviews i'm sitting on. Havent even
entered them. How sad, poor lil fics. But I'm nervous. I don't want to make
a mistake and blow up the world or something.

jes


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Msg# 5024

Unreviewed stories Posted by Anthony Holder August 02, 2005 - 18:34:34 Topic ID# 5024
Lin,

Anything is possible, but not everything *will* be done.

As far as this goes, I don't know what information you all want. I
COULD give running updates of current number of reviews, and even
current points for stories, but I'm not sure how that would affect
things. Would people be more likely to write reviews for the stories
they like if they can see that they're behind?

I can see ways that having running totals could make things better.
It's kind of like the pennant race in baseball, where you check the
scores every day and see whether your team won or lost, and root for
your team. It might make it more exciting, or people might just ignore
it.

If I were going to do that, it might be good to count the points for
tentative reviews, even though the reviews aren't visible yet, so you
could see what's in the pipeline and not get surprised.

There hasn't been any indication of what the group (or Ainae, for that
matter) wants. Last year, anybody that wanted COULD have counted up the
votes during voting season, and had an idea of how well the stories
they liked were doing, but it was a lot of work, and I'm sure nobody
bothered. Last year, all of the information was in the open. This year,
some of it is hidden, but it doesn't have to be, especially for final
reviews.

I hesitate to mention this, because like I said yesterday, I still have
quite a bit of work to do on things that are necessary, before I could
even think about adding sums and filters/sorting.

I'll sit back and listen, and if you all decide you want to have
running totals, I'll see what I can do. If you want them, I probably
won't get them done until a week or two after voting starts, though.
Also, if you want them, I'll need to have a very clear idea of what to
show, and what to hide.

Later,
Anthony

Msg# 5025

Re: unreviewed stories Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 03, 2005 - 3:55:04 Topic ID# 5021
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, ghettoelleth@a... wrote:
>
> In a message dated 8/1/2005 4:47:32 P.M. Pacific Standard Time,
> BLJean@a... writes:
>
>> When voting season opens, is there a way to filter stories that as
>> yet have no reviews? I'd love to concentrate my efforts on
>> those--wouldn't it be great if all the entries got at least one
>> review? Or am I being stupid?
>
> Oh man, now I feel terrible about the reviews i'm sitting on. Havent
> even entered them. How sad, poor lil fics. But I'm nervous. I
> don't want to make a mistake and blow up the world or something.

If you have any doubts about entering them in a system, just let me
know and I will help out. You really have to do weird things with the
system before you blow up the world ;)

As for reviewing: I am so behind on it, so I will just try and do my
best. :c)

Rhapsody

Msg# 5026

Re: Dumb question Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 03, 2005 - 8:55:17 Topic ID# 5022
Voting Season is August 16th through September 30th

Followed by FanArt Season....which means we need banners! I'll make a
separate post.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

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it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

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> Sent: Monday, August 01, 2005 6:49 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Dumb question
>
> When does voting season start, again?
>
> I know there was someplace to look up dates, but I'm really
> rushed off my feet this week.
>
> I'm thinking it's all over September 30, isn't that right?
>
> Aargh.
>
> Just point me to where the timeline is posted and I'll try to
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>
> Thanks,
> Lin
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Msg# 5027

Re: Unreviewed stories Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 03, 2005 - 9:21:44 Topic ID# 5024
I don't mind a list of stories with 0-2 reviews only. Anything else, keep it
blind. I'd like a daily post of reviews though. People can count them
themselves if they want to keep a running total. I did that once during the
ASC Awards. I won, btw. Ah, those were the good ol' days, when I actually
wrote....

Anyway, I don't want to see a running list of total points per stories. Nor
a list of how many reviews each story has. Just a list of stories with 2 or
fewer reviews if we can manage something like that. If not, just a list of
stories with no reviews. Some intrepid reviewers out there may pick them up
and see if they can review them. Note, no one needs to write any reviews if
they can't think of something good to say about a story.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

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> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Anthony Holder
> Sent: Tuesday, August 02, 2005 6:35 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Unreviewed stories
>
> Lin,
>
> Anything is possible, but not everything *will* be done.
>
> As far as this goes, I don't know what information you all
> want. I COULD give running updates of current number of
> reviews, and even current points for stories, but I'm not
> sure how that would affect things. Would people be more
> likely to write reviews for the stories they like if they can
> see that they're behind?
>
> I can see ways that having running totals could make things better.
> It's kind of like the pennant race in baseball, where you
> check the scores every day and see whether your team won or
> lost, and root for your team. It might make it more exciting,
> or people might just ignore it.
>
> If I were going to do that, it might be good to count the
> points for tentative reviews, even though the reviews aren't
> visible yet, so you could see what's in the pipeline and not
> get surprised.
>
> There hasn't been any indication of what the group (or Ainae, for that
> matter) wants. Last year, anybody that wanted COULD have
> counted up the votes during voting season, and had an idea of
> how well the stories they liked were doing, but it was a lot
> of work, and I'm sure nobody bothered. Last year, all of the
> information was in the open. This year, some of it is hidden,
> but it doesn't have to be, especially for final reviews.
>
> I hesitate to mention this, because like I said yesterday, I
> still have quite a bit of work to do on things that are
> necessary, before I could even think about adding sums and
> filters/sorting.
>
> I'll sit back and listen, and if you all decide you want to
> have running totals, I'll see what I can do. If you want
> them, I probably won't get them done until a week or two
> after voting starts, though.
> Also, if you want them, I'll need to have a very clear idea
> of what to show, and what to hide.
>
> Later,
> Anthony
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Msg# 5028

Banners! We need banners! Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 03, 2005 - 9:31:00 Topic ID# 5028
Okay, I think our standard size rule is going out the door next year. I
think it's stymied some creativity. I know it has made it harder for me to
make banners. To date, I've only made 10 and all for one award at that.
Thundera Tiger, on the other hand, has found time for hundreds of reviews
and dozens of banners. I think she's secretly getting at least 3 more hours
in a day than the rest of us.

Anyway, we need banners! And quick. On October 1st, we'll start voting on
them. So we need something to vote on!

These categories don't have ANY banners yet:
Hobbits
Humor
Romance (I've got some in mind for this one)
Non-Fiction
The Hobbit
Lord of the Rings
Post-Ring War

These awards in other categories don't have ANY banners yet:
Rohan: The Helm's Deep Awards (I've got somethign for this one, too)

This is the break down for the categories that at least have some banners
(1st, 2nd, 3rd):
Men: 1,1,1
Elves: 1,3,2
Dwarves: 3,3,2
Villains: 1,1,1
Cross-Cultural: 4,3,2
Gondor: 2,1,2
Rohan: 1,0,1
Adventure: 3,2,1
Horror: 1,1,10
Mystery: 1,1,1
Crossovers: 1,1,2
Alternate Universe: 1,1,2
Movie-verse: 2,2,1
The Silmarillion: 1,1,
Gap-Filler: 3,1,1

And so far I think we have only 2 submitters. Maybe 3. So please, put on
your creativity hats and make some banners!

You can see the current banners at:
http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa/awardbanners.html

If you make any, put them in the appropriate folders in the Photos section
of the YahooSite AND e-mail them to me. If you don't e-mail them, I may not
know they are out there. And if I have to get them from the Yahoo site,
their size will probably be distorted and I'll have to edit them, making
them look even more distorted (that happened last year). So e-mail them.
.jpg's please.

See the rules for making banners:
http://home.earthlink.net/~ainae/mefa/ArtContest.html

Thanks!

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

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Msg# 5029

Re: Banners! We need banners! Posted by Marta Layton August 03, 2005 - 12:18:54 Topic ID# 5028
On 3 Aug 2005, at 10:27, Ainaechoiriel wrote:

> Okay, I think our standard size rule is going out the door next year. 
> I
> think it's stymied some creativity. I know it has made it harder for
> me to
> make banners. To date, I've only made 10 and all for one award at
> that.
> Thundera Tiger, on the other hand, has found time for hundreds of
> reviews
> and dozens of banners.  I think she's secretly getting at least 3
> more hours
> in a day than the rest of us.
>
> Anyway, we need banners! And quick.  On October 1st, we'll start
> voting on
> them.  So we need something to vote on!
>

Hi Ainae,

Can you or anyone else recommend a good program to make banners on
Apple machines? I would love to help out but haven't had a chance to
explore what software is out there. There's probably a basic piece of
software installed, but I haven't figured out how to do it.

If someone can point me toward something like this, I have several
awards I want to do banners for.

Marta
*****
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Msg# 5030

Re: Banners! We need banners! Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 03, 2005 - 14:30:53 Topic ID# 5028
Forgot Drama. We don't have any banners for it yet either.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

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Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com



> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Ainaechoiriel
> Sent: Wednesday, August 03, 2005 9:28 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Banners! We need banners!
>
> Okay, I think our standard size rule is going out the door
> next year. I think it's stymied some creativity. I know it
> has made it harder for me to make banners. To date, I've only
> made 10 and all for one award at that.
> Thundera Tiger, on the other hand, has found time for
> hundreds of reviews and dozens of banners. I think she's
> secretly getting at least 3 more hours in a day than the rest of us.
>
> Anyway, we need banners! And quick. On October 1st, we'll
> start voting on them. So we need something to vote on!
>
> These categories don't have ANY banners yet:
> Hobbits
> Humor
> Romance (I've got some in mind for this one) Non-Fiction The
> Hobbit Lord of the Rings Post-Ring War
>
> These awards in other categories don't have ANY banners yet:
> Rohan: The Helm's Deep Awards (I've got somethign for this one, too)
>
> This is the break down for the categories that at least have
> some banners (1st, 2nd, 3rd):
> Men: 1,1,1
> Elves: 1,3,2
> Dwarves: 3,3,2
> Villains: 1,1,1
> Cross-Cultural: 4,3,2
> Gondor: 2,1,2
> Rohan: 1,0,1
> Adventure: 3,2,1
> Horror: 1,1,10
> Mystery: 1,1,1
> Crossovers: 1,1,2
> Alternate Universe: 1,1,2
> Movie-verse: 2,2,1
> The Silmarillion: 1,1,
> Gap-Filler: 3,1,1
>
> And so far I think we have only 2 submitters. Maybe 3. So
> please, put on your creativity hats and make some banners!
>
> You can see the current banners at:
> http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa/awardbanners.html
>
> If you make any, put them in the appropriate folders in the
> Photos section of the YahooSite AND e-mail them to me. If you
> don't e-mail them, I may not know they are out there. And if
> I have to get them from the Yahoo site, their size will
> probably be distorted and I'll have to edit them, making them
> look even more distorted (that happened last year). So e-mail them.
> .jpg's please.
>
> See the rules for making banners:
> http://home.earthlink.net/~ainae/mefa/ArtContest.html
>
> Thanks!
>
> --Ainaechoiriel
> MEFA Admin and Founder
>
> "This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves,"
> Elrond said, "for it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at
> that." --H.F.
>
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Msg# 5031

Re: Digest Number 443 Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 03, 2005 - 15:21:33 Topic ID# 5031
In a message dated 8/3/2005 12:07:39 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
Anyway, I don't want to see a running list of total points per stories. Nor
a list of how many reviews each story has. Just a list of stories with 2 or
fewer reviews if we can manage something like that. If not, just a list of
stories with no reviews. Some intrepid reviewers out there may pick them up
and see if they can review them. Note, no one needs to write any reviews if
they can't think of something good to say about a story.
Yes, this is what I was thinking as well. I don't want to see a running list
of total points; that would drive me up the wall! But if I've reviewed the
stories that interest me most, and I'm looking for more to read, I'd be more
inclined to read those with no reviews, just in the interest of including them, or
not having the authors feel left out, or something of the sort.

I looked at the 2004 site recently and ran across an author who had no
reviews at all, even though that author had more than one story nominated. How sad!

And no, I cannot bring myself to write a review if I can't think of something
good to say! (Echoes of my mom: "If you can't think of anything good to say,
don't say anything at all...")

Thanks,
Lin


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Msg# 5032

Re: Digest Number 443 Posted by C Dodd August 03, 2005 - 16:47:04 Topic ID# 5031
I'd actually prefer just a list of the stories with no reviews at all,
because I'm exactly the sort of person who would read those first...

On 8/3/05, BLJean@aol.com <BLJean@aol.com> wrote:
> In a message dated 8/3/2005 12:07:39 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
> MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
> Anyway, I don't want to see a running list of total points per stories. Nor
> a list of how many reviews each story has. Just a list of stories with 2 or
> fewer reviews if we can manage something like that. If not, just a list of
> stories with no reviews. Some intrepid reviewers out there may pick them up
> and see if they can review them. Note, no one needs to write any reviews if
> they can't think of something good to say about a story.
> Yes, this is what I was thinking as well. I don't want to see a running list
> of total points; that would drive me up the wall! But if I've reviewed the
> stories that interest me most, and I'm looking for more to read, I'd be more
> inclined to read those with no reviews, just in the interest of including
> them, or
> not having the authors feel left out, or something of the sort.
>
> I looked at the 2004 site recently and ran across an author who had no
> reviews at all, even though that author had more than one story nominated.
> How sad!
>
> And no, I cannot bring myself to write a review if I can't think of
> something
> good to say! (Echoes of my mom: "If you can't think of anything good to say,
> don't say anything at all...")
>
> Thanks,
> Lin
>
>
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Msg# 5033

Image editing software for MacOS X Posted by Anthony Holder August 03, 2005 - 19:15:09 Topic ID# 5033
Marta,

Elana has used GraphicConverter in the past. It works pretty well. It
is shareware from LemkeSoft.

I got her a copy of PhotoShop Elements, which she hasn't used much, but
she says it is pretty good. It is about $100.

There's also GIMP, an open source image editor which has a lot of
capabilities, but might be hard to install. I haven't tried it lately,
though, and they might have improved the install process.

We had an older Adobe product (PhotoDeluxe) which came with a scanner.
Elana used that last year, and it worked pretty well.

Later,
Anthony

Msg# 5034

Re: Image editing software for MacOS X Posted by Elena Tiriel August 03, 2005 - 19:33:54 Topic ID# 5033
I have installed GIMP on a Windows PC recently, and it wasn't hard.
My friend (a GIMP geek) thinks that the installation has become
easier overall, but he doesn't use a Mac either.

According to the website at www.gimp.org/macintosh/ the Mac version
runs on OS/X and requires Apple's X11.app (I'm not a Mac person, so
I'm not familiar with the details).

GIMP is a very full-featured graphics package, which is Open Source --
it's free for non-commercial use, which was its major attraction for
me.

Hope this helps!

- Barbara

On 8/3/05, Anthony Holder <aaholder@swbell.net> wrote:
> Marta,
>
> There's also GIMP, an open source image editor which has a lot of
> capabilities, but might be hard to install. I haven't tried it lately,
> though, and they might have improved the install process.
>
> Later,
> Anthony

Msg# 5035

a reviewer's question Posted by chathollinn August 03, 2005 - 20:19:08 Topic ID# 5035
First, many thanks for all the efforts to make this MEFA 2005 so
successful. - I was wondering how to read reviews that have been
finalized. Please excuse such a dumb question. Regards - Chathol-linn

Msg# 5036

Re: a reviewer's question Posted by Marta Layton August 03, 2005 - 21:07:50 Topic ID# 5035
Hi Chathol-linn,

On 3 Aug 2005, at 21:19, chathollinn wrote:

> First, many thanks for all the efforts to make this MEFA 2005 so
> successful.  - I was wondering how to read reviews that have been
> finalized. Please excuse such a dumb question. Regards - Chathol-linn
>

Finalised reviews still aren't visible. They will be visible from the
beginning of voting season (August 15, I think?)

Tentative reviews will be made visible at the end of voting season, and
draft reviews will never be visible.

I'm sure Anthony or Ainae will post more detailed instructions when the
time comes, but my understanding is there will be a link to see the
reviews beside each story listing, under the "Browse Stories" option.
But that will only appear when the time comes.

Marta
*****
Si hoc legere scis nimium eruditionis habes


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Msg# 5037

Re: Image editing software for MacOS X Posted by Marta Layton August 03, 2005 - 21:10:28 Topic ID# 5033
Hi Barbara and Anthony,

Thanks for the recommendations. I will try to install it and play
around with it this weekend.

Marta

On 3 Aug 2005, at 20:33, Elena Tiriel wrote:

> I have installed GIMP on a Windows PC recently, and it wasn't hard.
> My friend (a GIMP geek)  thinks that the installation has become
> easier overall, but he doesn't use a Mac either.
>
> According to the website at www.gimp.org/macintosh/ the Mac version
> runs on OS/X and requires Apple's X11.app (I'm not a Mac person, so
> I'm not familiar with the details).
>
> GIMP is a very full-featured graphics package, which is Open Source --
> it's free for non-commercial use, which was its major attraction for
> me.
>
> Hope this helps!
>
> - Barbara
>
> On 8/3/05, Anthony Holder <aaholder@swbell.net> wrote:
> > Marta,
> >
> > There's also GIMP, an open source image editor which has a lot of
> > capabilities, but might be hard to install. I haven't tried it
> lately,
> > though, and they might have improved the install process.
> >
> > Later,
> > Anthony
>

<snip>
*****
Si hoc legere scis nimium eruditionis habes


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Msg# 5038

Review Counts Posted by Anthony Holder August 03, 2005 - 23:05:27 Topic ID# 5038
As of right now, I don't have any way of filtering or sorting by number
of reviews, because of how/when the number of reviews is looked up, but
I have done the following:

When voting season starts, the 'storiesBrowse' page review column
(which currently says 'N/A') will have a review count showing 0, 1, 2,
>2. You'll be able to click on that review count to read all the
reviews of that story.

When voting season is over, you'll be able to see all the totals,
including incomplete, which are not counted during voting season. I
probably won't show the scores until Counting Season is over, because
we'll want to check the counting procedure and hand-check some counts
to ensure that the system worked as I designed it, before announcing
the scores and the results.

You can always click on the link for just the reviews of a particular
story and count the reviews, if you want. You won't be able to see the
scores until after voting season is over, though.

I've got all of this working now on my development computer, but
haven't sent it to Ainae yet, and you won't be able to use it until
Voting Season starts, in any case.

Now I just have to figure how to do the same for the Author Reviews.
Mostly it'll be copy/paste, which should help.

Anthony

Msg# 5039

Calendar in files section Posted by Marta August 04, 2005 - 22:08:41 Topic ID# 5039
Hey guys,

I noticed a lot of people have asked when certain seasons start this year. Therefore, I've
added a file for easy reference.

1. Go to http://groups.yahoo.com/group/MEFAwards/
2. Click the "files" link on the left side of the page.
3. Click the "2005 Schedule" link.

The basic dates are available as part of the rules at http://home.earthlink.net/~ainae/
mefa/rules.html , and are entered into the calendar at the Yahoo group. But this may be a
simpler-to-use format.

I've also added some notes explaining what you can do during each season. For your
convenience I'll include it at the bottom of this post.

I hope this helps clear up some confusion. Just to be clear, we're in reading season. And
voting season just around the corner! Where does the time go? ;-)

Marta

~*~*~
A. Nomination Season: April 1st through May 15th
(Nominate new pieces to compete in this year's awards. No new nominations accepted
after May 15. Members may cast votes for nominations as they are submitted, but
remember, if the nomination is not finalised it may not actually run in the awards.)

B. Check Ballot Season: May 16th through May 31st
(An administrative season during which staff categorise all nominations into categories
and subcategories. All stories in the voting website are finalised nominations and will run
in this year's MEFAs.)

C. Reading Season: June 1st through August 15th
(Ten weeks for reading all these lovely stories. Members may enter both story and author
votes, but no votes are visible to other members.)

D. Voting Season: August 16th through September 30th
(Finish entering your votes. Final reviews are visible to other members during this season
and cannot be changed after August 16. You may change tentative votes until the end of
the voting season, at the end of which they will be displayed and counted. Draft reviews
must be changed to final or tentative status by the end of this season to count. Also, make
sure to hae all your submissions for the banner contest to Ainae by the end of this
season.)

E. FanArt Season: October 1st through October 15th
(Vote through the Yahoo site to determine which banner will be used for each award.)

F. Awards Results: Announced by October 15th
(Watch the Yahoo group for final results of who won the categories.)

Msg# 5040

Re: Digest Number 445 Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 05, 2005 - 18:48:23 Topic ID# 5040
In a message dated 8/5/2005 2:16:57 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
noticed a lot of people have asked when certain seasons start this year.
Bless you, Marta. I love easy reference. It makes me feel so much less stupid.

Thanks,
Lin


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Msg# 5041

Re: Digest Number 445 Posted by Marta Layton August 05, 2005 - 19:45:22 Topic ID# 5040
On 5 Aug 2005, at 19:48, BLJean@aol.com wrote:

> In a message dated 8/5/2005 2:16:57 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
> MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
> noticed a lot of people have asked when certain seasons start this
> year.
> Bless you, Marta. I love easy reference. It makes me feel so much
> less stupid.
>

The honest truth is I'm always looking for those dates myself. I know
it's at Ainae's website, but I can never remember exactly where it is.
So I thought if I put it in the files section it would be easier to
find -- and that other people might appreciate being able to find it,
too. ;-)

I'm glad it can help. It really wasn't hard to do.

Marta
*****
Si hoc legere scis nimium eruditionis habes


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Msg# 5042

Reading Season Closing Soon, 8/10/2005, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com August 09, 2005 - 23:41:58 Topic ID# 5042
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Msg# 5043

Server problem? Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 10, 2005 - 9:41:21 Topic ID# 5043
I was just booted off the MEFA server with the following error
messages. Reloading does nothing. Going to the main page gets the same
set of error messages.

Dwim


Warning:
ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTSession.ctcls):
failed to open stream: No such file or directory in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
'/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTSession.ctcls' for
inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning:
ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTForm.ctcls):
failed to open stream: No such file or directory in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
'/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTForm.ctcls' for inclusion
(include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning:
ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTPerson.ctcls):
failed to open stream: No such file or directory in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
'/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTPerson.ctcls' for
inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning:
ct_load_lib(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/phases.lib):
failed to open stream: No such file or directory in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 33

Warning: ct_load_lib(): Failed opening
'/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/phases.lib' for inclusion
(include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 33

Warning:
ct_load_lib(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/person.lib):
failed to open stream: No such file or directory in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 33

Warning: ct_load_lib(): Failed opening
'/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/person.lib' for inclusion
(include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 33

Warning:
ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTStory.ctcls):
failed to open stream: No such file or directory in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
'/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTStory.ctcls' for
inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning:
ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTReview.ctcls):
failed to open stream: No such file or directory in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
'/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTReview.ctcls' for
inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning:
ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTAuthorReview.ctcls):
failed to open stream: No such file or directory in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
'/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTAuthorReview.ctcls' for
inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41

Fatal error: Cannot instantiate non-existent class: ctsession in
c:\program files\apache group\apache\mefa\mefa2005\htdocs\index.php on
line 47

Msg# 5044

MEFA2005 software updated Posted by Anthony Holder August 10, 2005 - 22:27:01 Topic ID# 5044
Hey all,

I've sent Ainae the most recent update to the MEFA2005 site. She
installed it this morning, and it overwrote an important configuration
file. We had a backup, but during the time between when she installed
it and we fixed it, the site was unavailable, as Dwim noticed.

FYI, error messages like that are very helpful, but you should probably
send them directly to me, possibly with a cc: to the group.

You won't see too many changes with the update. Most were reading
season things that you've never seen before (because they didn't
exist).

If you nominated more than 10 stories, or had more than 10 of your
stories nominated, the list of stories on the 'overview' page will now
come in pages. The two lists will always be on the same page, and have
the same number per page, because the paging code isn't supposed to
have two lists per webpage.

There may be a few others. I've been collecting various things I've
noticed and people have mentioned while working on the review reading
pages.

Once reading season starts, be sure to let me know asap if there's
anything that doesn't seem to be working right.

Anthony

Msg# 5045

Re: MEFA2005 software updated Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 11, 2005 - 0:08:11 Topic ID# 5044
Thanks, Anthony. I figured it must not have been too serious, since I
could get back in later that day, but for a second there, I was
convinced my browser hated me.

Anyhow, in other site-type news, HASA is down for scheduled server
maintenance tonight. Should be back up tomorrow, but it puts a cramp
in my reading efforts, it does, preciousss!

Dwim

Msg# 5046

Re: Server problem? Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 12, 2005 - 1:46:51 Topic ID# 5043
There was a problem but we think it's fixed now.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards

Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com



> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of dwimmer_laik
> Sent: Wednesday, August 10, 2005 9:41 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Server problem?
>
> I was just booted off the MEFA server with the following
> error messages. Reloading does nothing. Going to the main
> page gets the same set of error messages.
>
> Dwim
>
>
> Warning:
> ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTSess
> ion.ctcls):
> failed to open stream: No such file or directory in
> c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
> '/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTSession.ctcls'
> for inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning:
> ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTForm.ctcls):
> failed to open stream: No such file or directory in
> c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
> '/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTForm.ctcls' for
> inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning:
> ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTPers
> on.ctcls):
> failed to open stream: No such file or directory in
> c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
> '/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTPerson.ctcls'
> for inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning:
> ct_load_lib(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/phases.lib):
> failed to open stream: No such file or directory in
> c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 33
>
> Warning: ct_load_lib(): Failed opening
> '/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/phases.lib' for
> inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 33
>
> Warning:
> ct_load_lib(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/person.lib):
> failed to open stream: No such file or directory in
> c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 33
>
> Warning: ct_load_lib(): Failed opening
> '/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/person.lib' for
> inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 33
>
> Warning:
> ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTStor
> y.ctcls):
> failed to open stream: No such file or directory in
> c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
> '/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTStory.ctcls' for
> inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning:
> ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTRevi
> ew.ctcls):
> failed to open stream: No such file or directory in
> c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
> '/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTReview.ctcls'
> for inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning:
> ct_load_class(/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTAuth
> orReview.ctcls):
> failed to open stream: No such file or directory in
> c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Warning: ct_load_class(): Failed opening
> '/Library/WebServer/Documents/MEFA2005/lib/CTAuthorReview.ctcl
> s' for inclusion (include_path='.;c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc') in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\etc\conftool.inc on line 41
>
> Fatal error: Cannot instantiate non-existent class: ctsession
> in c:\program files\apache
> group\apache\mefa\mefa2005\htdocs\index.php on line 47
>
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Msg# 5047

Re: Calendar in files section Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 13, 2005 - 3:38:20 Topic ID# 5039
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Marta" <melayton@g...> wrote:
<snip>

> C. Reading Season: June 1st through August 15th
> (Ten weeks for reading all these lovely stories. Members may enter
> both story and author votes, but no votes are visible to other
> members.)
>
> D. Voting Season: August 16th through September 30th
> (Finish entering your votes. Final reviews are visible to other
> members during this season and cannot be changed after August 16.
> You may change tentative votes until the end of the voting season,
> at the end of which they will be displayed and counted. Draft
> reviews must be changed to final or tentative status by the end of
> this season to count. Also, make sure to hae all your submissions
> for the banner contest to Ainae by the end of this season.)

OK, I am confused now (and a bit late with catching up). Until what
date can you write your reviews. The way I read it now, until the end
at the end of reading season. Maybe it is the word votes, in which you
actually mean reviews..

With voting you mean actually: write a review, that is your vote... or
not? I've seen the words and links tentative reviews on the site, but
not the option tentative votes...

Just forgive my muddled brain, but if I can still write my reviews
until the end of September, then I can take it a bit more easy.

Rhapsody

Msg# 5048

Re: Calendar in files section Posted by Marta Layton August 13, 2005 - 11:34:52 Topic ID# 5039
Hi Rhapsody,

On 13 Aug 2005, at 04:38, rhapsody_the_bard wrote:

> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Marta" <melayton@g...> wrote:
> <snip>
>
> > C. Reading Season: June 1st through August 15th
> > (Ten weeks for reading all these lovely stories. Members may enter
> > both story and author votes, but no votes are visible to other
> > members.)
> >
> > D. Voting Season: August 16th through September 30th
> > (Finish entering your votes. Final reviews are visible to other
> > members during this season and cannot be changed after August 16.
> > You may change tentative votes until the end of the voting season,
> > at the end of which they will be displayed and counted. Draft
> > reviews must be changed to final or tentative status by the end of
> > this season to count. Also, make sure to hae all your submissions
> > for the banner contest to Ainae by the end of this season.)
>
> OK, I am confused now (and a bit late with catching up). Until what
> date can you write your reviews. The way I read it now, until the end
> at the end of reading season. Maybe it is the word votes, in which you
> actually mean reviews..
>
> With voting you mean actually: write a review, that is your vote... or
> not? I've seen the words and links tentative reviews on the site, but
> not the option tentative votes...
>

At the end of reading season, any reviews you have already entered with
the status "final" are set in stone. You can't change those at this
point, and they become visible to everyone.

But you can still change reviews that are tentative or draft, and you
can still enter new reviews. You can even give them the status final
(but if you do that they become set in stone immediately, and you can't
change them later).

And don't forget if you want your draft reviews to be counted, you have
to change them to tentative or final status by the end of voting
season.

I hope that's clearer. How can I make it clearer in the file?

Marta
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Msg# 5049

Site time outs? Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 13, 2005 - 22:40:06 Topic ID# 5049
I've been getting site time outs since this afternoon. Is anyone else
having trouble accessing the MEFA site?

Dwim

Msg# 5050

Re: Site time outs? Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 14, 2005 - 0:10:46 Topic ID# 5049
Unfortunately, I haven't been using it enough to know. Let me just take
this opportunity to give an apology to all the authors who are members of
this group. Last year, I gave over 300 reviews. Today, I'm sitting at
something like 30. None of them Author reviews. I have over 500 stories
I'd like to read but may or may not get to this year. Especially the longer
ones. And I love long stories. Sigh. It's just that I'm a much busier
person this year. Taking care of a house by myself, having a boyfriend,
getting in trouble at work (Yes, it finally happened. Gotta do less and
less obvious personal stuff at work. Which, ironically, might get me
reading more.)

So, sorry to all the authors of all the stories I won't get to this year.
And thanks to all the veteran members who have been unconsciously taking up
my slack, and all the new members who will help ensure that most, of not
all, of the nominated stories get read.

--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 5051

Re: Site time outs? Posted by chathollinn@comcast.net August 14, 2005 - 6:39:21 Topic ID# 5049
Hi, Ainaechoiriel. No need to 'pologize. If it wasn't for your efforts MEFA wouldn't be there anyway. Regards - Chathol-linn

-------------- Original message --------------
Unfortunately, I haven't been using it enough to know. Let me just take
this opportunity to give an apology to all the authors who are members of
this group. Last year, I gave over 300 reviews. Today, I'm sitting at
something like 30. None of them Author reviews. I have over 500 stories
I'd like to read but may or may not get to this year. Especially the longer
ones. And I love long stories. Sigh. It's just that I'm a much busier
person this year. Taking care of a house by myself, having a boyfriend,
getting in trouble at work (Yes, it finally happened. Gotta do less and
less obvious personal stuff at work. Which, ironically, might get me
reading more.)

So, sorry to all the authors of all the stories I won't get to this year.
And thanks to all the veteran members who have been unconsciously taking up
my slack, and all the new members who will help ensure that most, of not
all, of the nominated stories get read.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

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Msg# 5052

MEFA 2005 Site timeouts Posted by Anthony Holder August 15, 2005 - 0:09:40 Topic ID# 5052
Dwim,

I just tested, and noticed a 'maximum execution time' error on the
browse stories page.

I just raised the time limit for all the pages to 180 sec, which should
take care of it, unless the database size increases dramatically.

I'll send the update off to Ainae, and we'll see if it helps.

Anthony

Msg# 5053

two or fewer reviews filter Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 15, 2005 - 7:34:13 Topic ID# 5053
I clicked on the "author" heading to try to alphabetize them by author, but
it doesn't work in this case--perhaps because, as the instructions say, all
other filters are disabled?

I'm very glad for this feature. I've already spotted several summaries that I
missed in the tumbling wealth of treasure.

Is there any significance to the stories that show up bright pink? (as
opposed to all the "blue" stories?)

Thanks,
Lin


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Msg# 5054

Suggestion for next year's database Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 15, 2005 - 7:39:38 Topic ID# 5054
It would be really nice if, on entering a review and hitting the "submit"
button, the database would remember where I was when I clicked on the "review
story" link in the first place, and took me back there, so I don't have to go
through the filtering process over again.

But really, I am amazed at the power and versatility and user-friendliness of
this database.

Kudos,
Lin


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Msg# 5055

<2 reviews, and re-filtering after reviews Posted by Anthony Holder August 15, 2005 - 14:59:30 Topic ID# 5055
Lin,

You are right that the sorting doesn't work with <2 reviews. Sorry, but
the way it is done, it is just too much work to make all that happen.

The bright pink listings are stories that were nominated but for some
reason were not completed (duplicates, etc.). That's another one of the
warnings, or should be. If it is not, let me know and I'll fix it.

Don't review those stories!

When you click to review a story, it SHOULD open a new window for the
review. That way, you can close the window and all your old filters are
still there.

If it doesn't work right, let me know. I'll see if I can figure it out.

In the meantime, you can right-click (ctrl-click for Mac users) and
choose "open link in new window" to get this functionality.

Hope that helps.

Anthony

Msg# 5056

Re: MEFA 2005 Site timeouts Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 15, 2005 - 16:24:13 Topic ID# 5052
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Anthony Holder <aaholder@s...> wrote:
> Dwim,
>
> I just tested, and noticed a 'maximum execution time' error on the
> browse stories page.
>
> I just raised the time limit for all the pages to 180 sec, which
> should take care of it, unless the database size increases
> dramatically.

I don't know if this happened, but I keep on getting timeouts or that
he can't find the server at all for a couple of days. I was reviewing,
saved the one I was typing, then I wanted to browse for another story
and ever since it got the time out messages. The story I was reviewing
was one of the stories I nominated myself. In IE explorer I can't
approach the site at all.

I have no clue why, only that it happens in both IE explorer and
Firefox (in case this matters). I don't know what happened, but it's
weird.

Rhapsody

Msg# 5057

Re: MEFA 2005 Site timeouts Posted by aelfwina@cableone.net August 15, 2005 - 16:28:33 Topic ID# 5052
I've been getting "site not available" for a while now.
Dreamflower
(Barbara)
----- Original Message -----
From: rhapsody_the_bard
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Monday, August 15, 2005 4:24 PM
Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: MEFA 2005 Site timeouts


--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Anthony Holder <aaholder@s...> wrote:
> Dwim,
>
> I just tested, and noticed a 'maximum execution time' error on the
> browse stories page.
>
> I just raised the time limit for all the pages to 180 sec, which
> should take care of it, unless the database size increases
> dramatically.

I don't know if this happened, but I keep on getting timeouts or that
he can't find the server at all for a couple of days. I was reviewing,
saved the one I was typing, then I wanted to browse for another story
and ever since it got the time out messages. The story I was reviewing
was one of the stories I nominated myself. In IE explorer I can't
approach the site at all.

I have no clue why, only that it happens in both IE explorer and
Firefox (in case this matters). I don't know what happened, but it's
weird.

Rhapsody





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Msg# 5058

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Msg# 5059

Reading Season Ends/Voting Season Begins!, 8/16/2005, 12:00 am Posted by MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com August 15, 2005 - 23:41:57 Topic ID# 5058
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Msg# 5060

Author Reviews Posted by Leaward August 16, 2005 - 10:47:27 Topic ID# 5060
I notice that some people have entered author reviews that appear
under a single story, while others have entered them for each of the
author's stories. What should be happening? And what will they be
used for? is there an 'author's' award?

Lea

Msg# 5061

Re: Author Reviews Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 16, 2005 - 11:59:03 Topic ID# 5060
Yes, there are Author Awards but not for each story. Say you wrote three
short stories all in the Elf General category. You'd only be elligible once
for the Elf General Author Award.

--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 5062

Re: Author Reviews Posted by Leaward August 16, 2005 - 12:43:50 Topic ID# 5060
So is it per main category, or for each sub category ?

So if an author has a story in "BT The Hobbit" and another in "BT The
Hobbit/Vignette ... you could leave two author reviews? One in the
main category and one in the subcategory? Or would you only need one
in BT The Hobbit?

Just trying to figure out how many I need to write ...

Lea

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> Yes, there are Author Awards but not for each story. Say you wrote
three
> short stories all in the Elf General category. You'd only be
elligible once
> for the Elf General Author Award.
>
>
>
>
>
> > -----Original Message-----

> >
> > I notice that some people have entered author reviews that
> > appear under a single story, while others have entered them
> > for each of the author's stories. What should be happening?
> > And what will they be used for? is there an 'author's' award?
> >
> > Lea
> >

Msg# 5063

Re: Author Reviews Posted by C Dodd August 16, 2005 - 14:04:14 Topic ID# 5060
Is this why some authors have duplicate entries in the author reviews?

On 8/16/05, Leaward <leaward_l@yahoo.com> wrote:
>
> So is it per main category, or for each sub category ?
>
> So if an author has a story in "BT The Hobbit" and another in "BT The
> Hobbit/Vignette ... you could leave two author reviews? One in the
> main category and one in the subcategory? Or would you only need one
> in BT The Hobbit?
>
> Just trying to figure out how many I need to write ...
>
> Lea
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> > Yes, there are Author Awards but not for each story. Say you wrote
> three
> > short stories all in the Elf General category. You'd only be
> elligible once
> > for the Elf General Author Award.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
>
> > >
> > > I notice that some people have entered author reviews that
> > > appear under a single story, while others have entered them
> > > for each of the author's stories. What should be happening?
> > > And what will they be used for? is there an 'author's' award?
> > >
> > > Lea
> > >
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Msg# 5064

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Msg# 5065

Re: Author Reviews Posted by sulriel August 16, 2005 - 14:35:06 Topic ID# 5060
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, C Dodd <rabidsamfan@v...> wrote:
> Is this why some authors have duplicate entries in the author
reviews?

I think that the author awards are only for the main cates, not the
subs.

and that you can paste the same author review in different cates as
long as it's appropriate. (IOW, if you write specifically about how
well the author writes hobbits, you wouldn't want to paste it in that
author's men's entry without modifying it)

Msg# 5066

Re: Author Reviews Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 16, 2005 - 16:24:06 Topic ID# 5060
Yes for the most part. You can copy author reviews. We made that
concession during Post Mortem last year. As for sub cats there are some, but
not as many. They are for formats only. So there is Author General, Author
Poetry, author Drabble, etc. So if you wrote an Elf Drabble, an Elf Poem
and 3 Elf Short Stories, you'd be in the running for three awards:

Elf Author (for the short stories)
Elf Author Drabble (I think you can figure that one out)
Elf Author Poetry (and that one, too.)

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> reviews?
>
> I think that the author awards are only for the main cates, not the
> subs.
>
> and that you can paste the same author review in different cates as
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Msg# 5067

Re: Author Reviews Posted by ghettoelleth@aol.com August 16, 2005 - 16:52:51 Topic ID# 5060
In a message dated 8/16/2005 2:24:30 P.M. Pacific Standard Time,
mefaadmin@earthlink.net writes:

Yes for the most part. You can copy author reviews. We made that
concession during Post Mortem last year. As for sub cats there are some, but
not as many. They are for formats only. So there is Author General, Author
Poetry, author Drabble, etc. So if you wrote an Elf Drabble, an Elf Poem
and 3 Elf Short Stories, you'd be in the running for three awards:



Instead of writing a lot of small words, can we just write one big one, like
we used to do when we were little with the cookie dough or pancake batter
after the novelty wore off? I'm so t-i-r-e-d girls, I don't know how you do
it. I'm running out of adjectives quicker than when I'm writing, as well.

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Msg# 5068

Re: Author Reviews Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 16, 2005 - 17:26:12 Topic ID# 5060
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> Yes, there are Author Awards but not for each story. Say you wrote
three
> short stories all in the Elf General category. You'd only be
elligible once
> for the Elf General Author Award.

So if I wrote an author review and entered it under each story
(modifying it a little each time), how would that be scored? I'd been
thinking if I ever managed to do author reviews, I'd pick write a
giant one according to category, and paste it into a randomly selected
fic by the appropriate author in the appropriate category.

But it seems as if I could paste that author review in multiple times
within a category and up the character count significantly, or use a
minimally different one each time within a category and end up with
the same result.

Is there a filter for this or will volunteers have to read all these
author reviews and recognize which author reviews by a single reviewer
are the same within a category, which ones by a single reviewer are
problematically similar within categories, and which ones are ok
because they cross categories?

I hope I'm making sense, here.

Dwim

Msg# 5069

Can't enter reviews Posted by aelfwina@cableone.net August 16, 2005 - 18:03:08 Topic ID# 5069
Okay, I've been at it off and on all day. I will do a batch of reviews, or go to finalize a tentative review--everything will go fine for a few minutes, and then I get "page not available" when I hit "save review". It doesn't happen every time--but it's happening more and more. It's very frustrating. Am I doing something wrong?

Dreamflower
(Barbara)

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Msg# 5070

Re: Can't enter reviews Posted by aelfwina@cableone.net August 16, 2005 - 18:04:59 Topic ID# 5069
And *now* I'm getting that when I try to log back onto the site! Grrr...
B.
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Sent: Tuesday, August 16, 2005 6:03 PM
Subject: [MEFAwards] Can't enter reviews


Okay, I've been at it off and on all day. I will do a batch of reviews, or go to finalize a tentative review--everything will go fine for a few minutes, and then I get "page not available" when I hit "save review". It doesn't happen every time--but it's happening more and more. It's very frustrating. Am I doing something wrong?

Dreamflower
(Barbara)

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Msg# 5071

Re: Author Reviews Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 16, 2005 - 18:08:22 Topic ID# 5060
That is apparently an unexpected problem with the MEFA2005 site. I'll see
if Anthony can fix it. May take some work. Could I have you guys hold off
on Author Reviews (write them somewhere else for the meantime) while we try
to hammer this out? That way perhaps we can merge the ones that are out
there where we need merging, set them as Draft and then you can rework them
to tentative or final.

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> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of dwimmer_laik
> Sent: Tuesday, August 16, 2005 5:26 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Author Reviews
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel"
> <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> > Yes, there are Author Awards but not for each story. Say you wrote
> three
> > short stories all in the Elf General category. You'd only be
> elligible once
> > for the Elf General Author Award.
>
> So if I wrote an author review and entered it under each
> story (modifying it a little each time), how would that be
> scored? I'd been thinking if I ever managed to do author
> reviews, I'd pick write a giant one according to category,
> and paste it into a randomly selected fic by the appropriate
> author in the appropriate category.
>
> But it seems as if I could paste that author review in
> multiple times within a category and up the character count
> significantly, or use a minimally different one each time
> within a category and end up with the same result.
>
> Is there a filter for this or will volunteers have to read
> all these author reviews and recognize which author reviews
> by a single reviewer are the same within a category, which
> ones by a single reviewer are problematically similar within
> categories, and which ones are ok because they cross categories?
>
> I hope I'm making sense, here.
>
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Msg# 5072

Re: Can't enter reviews Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 16, 2005 - 21:07:01 Topic ID# 5069
I've been having some internet outages here at the house (which is where the
MEFA2005 server lives). Not sure what's going on there. So, be sure to
type up your reviews somewhere else if the site is down. We do have a month
and a half for voting so there's still time.

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> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: Re: [MEFAwards] Can't enter reviews
>
> And *now* I'm getting that when I try to log back onto the
> site! Grrr...
> B.
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>
> Okay, I've been at it off and on all day. I will do a
> batch of reviews, or go to finalize a tentative
> review--everything will go fine for a few minutes, and then I
> get "page not available" when I hit "save review". It
> doesn't happen every time--but it's happening more and more.
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Msg# 5073

Anthony, re reviewing and opening windows Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 16, 2005 - 22:05:22 Topic ID# 5073
At the moment, when I click to *read* a story, it opens in a new window. I
read, close the window, and MEFA is still there where I left it.

When I click to *review* a story the review screen appears (in the same
window, not opening a new window), I type in my review, select what type of review
it is, and hit "submit" or whatever you call it, and get dumped back to the
first screen I saw when I signed in, originally. It is not a new window. I have
to re-set the filters and page through the screens of stories to get back to
where I was (if I remember where I was, *g*). I am on a PC, by the way, if that
helps any.

Sulriel told me about the right-click bypass and I will try that the next
time I am reviewing, probably early tomorrow if I don't oversleep (!).

Thank you so much for all you have done. The database is a wonder to use.

Lin

In a message dated 8/16/2005 1:30:23 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
When you click to review a story, it SHOULD open a new window for the
review. That way, you can close the window and all your old filters are
still there.

If it doesn't work right, let me know. I'll see if I can figure it out.


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Msg# 5074

Anthony, something odd? Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 16, 2005 - 22:24:18 Topic ID# 5074
Was looking at reviews, and clicked on a story to read it, to check on
something, and it opened in the same window, evidently. The strange part is that I
couldn't "back" to get back to MEFA. It was like it got stuck on the first page
of the fic and wouldn't go "back" beyond that.

Had to close the window and go to my "history" to get back to where I'd been
(yes, have learned how to do that recently). (And going back via my "history"
wouldn't even work until I closed the window with the fic in it, altogether.)

Just thought I'd mention it in case it was an anomaly.

Thanks,
Lin


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Msg# 5075

Duplicate Author Reviews Posted by Anthony Holder August 16, 2005 - 23:30:52 Topic ID# 5075
Duplicate Author Reviews:

People have been noticing duplicate author reviews. Here's what's up.

Each story has a link to an author review.

For all stories that are part of the same main category (e.g., BT: The
Hobbit), but are not one of the required subcategories (i.e., drabble,
poem, incomplete), that link points to the same review. On the author
review reading page, you'll see that listed as BT: The Hobbit: General.

Drabble author reviews would come out as BT: The Hobbit: Drabble.

That said, the policy statement is that you can, if you choose, use the
same text for multiple author reviews, rather than writing a new author
review for each category/required subcategory. Thus, some folks have
decided to copy/paste their author review into multiple places.

There is not a 'use this text for all author reviews of this author'
option.

AFAIK, last year Author Reviews had to be more or less independent
(with maybe a bit of duplication being allowed, but not wholesale
duplication).

So Anthony the programmer says:
Author Reviews work exactly as I was told to make them work.

Anthony the person who hasn't, but could, use the site to read/vote on
stories/authors says:
I don't really like the way Author Reviews are set up, but that's the
way people wanted it, and it's really too late now to change it for
this year.

Anthony

Msg# 5076

Links in new windows or reusing windows Posted by Anthony Holder August 17, 2005 - 0:27:27 Topic ID# 5076
Hey all,

Lin has been asking questions about whether the MEFA2005 site should
open new windows or re-use existing windows.

On my system it opens reviews and author reviews in a new window. I use
the target="_blank" code, which works great. (BTW, I noticed a few
instances that used the wrong code for this, and have sent a fix to
Ainae, but they are not for reviews in any case.) It may be that your
browser has overridden this HTML behavior.

If you use Internet Explorer, you may have to right-click and choose
'open in a new window.' I think ctrl-clicking *may* automatically open
in a new window, but I can't remember, because I hardly ever use IE any
more. Ctrl-N will clone the current window. You can do that, then click
on the one you want if it's not opening a new window.

For those of you who use a tabbed browser (Safari or Mozilla/Firefox),
you may prefer to use tabs.

Personally, I like tabbed browsers. With Firefox, if you ctrl-click a
link, it automatically opens in a new tab, saving a menu choice. On my
Mac, holding down command will override the target="_blank" code, and
create a new tab instead.

Safari lets you choose new window/tab in front/back, by holding
command, option and/or shift when you click, tells you exactly what it
is going to do in the status bar before you click, and lets you
override the _blank code.

Experiment a little and find out what you like.

Also, remember that the site has a 2-hour limit on a session, so you
can only take so long writing that review.

You can, however, use the back button, or at least I can in Safari and
Firefox on MacOS X.

Try this: Open a review for editing, set it to draft, and write the
first bit. Then save, and hit back. It'll bring you back to the review,
and you can continue editing, hitting save and back as you go, until
you're done. When you're done, you can hit save, and then back twice to
get to your filters. (Or close the window/tab if it opened a new one.)
Eventually, this might fail due to the 2-hr session limit, but at least
you'll have saved your intermediate copy.

I have used this many times while I've been developing with no ill
effects. The only bad thing would be if you had two windows open
editing the same review, or otherwise are editing something that has
changed in the database, and doing reviews this way won't be a problem.

As far as Lin's most recent issue with the back button not working, it
is possible that the code fix I just sent to Ainae could fix that, but
I'm not really sure what's causing it, so I don't know.

Later,
Anthony

Msg# 5077

Re: Duplicate Author Reviews Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 0:53:17 Topic ID# 5075
We can discuss Author Reviews and how they are done in the post mortem as we
did last year, when we decided to keep them but allowing people to copy
them. They are definitely harder to write than story reviews. I guess the
only thing we're missing in Author Awards is viability. Less than 3 authors
per subcategory means inviable. Sorry, if I didn't explain that before. I
had thought about allowing Ficlet where viable and stated by the author.
Which is only a few places. We can IM about it tomorrow if it should be
changed. Right now I'm 48 minutes late getting to bed (thus no posted
reviews tonight, sorry folks) and I've been told I MUST be to work on time,
which means I need to get to sleep.

--Ainaechoiriel
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> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Anthony Holder
> Sent: Tuesday, August 16, 2005 11:31 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Duplicate Author Reviews
>
> Duplicate Author Reviews:
>
> People have been noticing duplicate author reviews. Here's what's up.
>
> Each story has a link to an author review.
>
> For all stories that are part of the same main category
> (e.g., BT: The Hobbit), but are not one of the required
> subcategories (i.e., drabble, poem, incomplete), that link
> points to the same review. On the author review reading page,
> you'll see that listed as BT: The Hobbit: General.
>
> Drabble author reviews would come out as BT: The Hobbit: Drabble.
>
> That said, the policy statement is that you can, if you
> choose, use the same text for multiple author reviews, rather
> than writing a new author review for each category/required
> subcategory. Thus, some folks have decided to copy/paste
> their author review into multiple places.
>
> There is not a 'use this text for all author reviews of this author'
> option.
>
> AFAIK, last year Author Reviews had to be more or less
> independent (with maybe a bit of duplication being allowed,
> but not wholesale duplication).
>
> So Anthony the programmer says:
> Author Reviews work exactly as I was told to make them work.
>
> Anthony the person who hasn't, but could, use the site to
> read/vote on stories/authors says:
> I don't really like the way Author Reviews are set up, but
> that's the way people wanted it, and it's really too late now
> to change it for this year.
>
> Anthony
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Msg# 5078

author reviews? Posted by sulriel August 17, 2005 - 9:04:07 Topic ID# 5078
I'm not sure if we're supposed to report problems or wait on fixes
already in progress.

most of mine seem to be working fine.

I understand that some have been filtered out because of being
duplicates, but there are two that seem to have an error.

that is my author review for Minuialeth, story id#978.
I have saved a review there for her, but the menu still says 'enter
new...' - but when I click on it, I get a message " You are not
authorized to view detailed information on the stories you selected."

also on Leawards story in the romance category. #181

the others seem to be fine, except one I saved for Marnie appears to
be blank - ?? can that be fixed? $245

Thanks, Sulriel.

Msg# 5079

Site down? Posted by aelfwina@cableone.net August 17, 2005 - 13:44:04 Topic ID# 4452
Is the MEFA site *down* or is it just me again? I keep getting "Page not available."

Dreamflower
(Barbara)

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Msg# 5080

Re: Site down? Posted by elliska67 August 17, 2005 - 14:35:14 Topic ID# 4452
I was on a roll doing reviews and then I started getting that too
about an hours ago. I just checked back now and I am still getting it
so it must be down for a power/internet outage. Oh well, my eyes were
crossing anyway. I will go back to reviewing again later.


--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, <aelfwina@c...> wrote:
> Is the MEFA site *down* or is it just me again? I keep
getting "Page not available."
>
> Dreamflower
> (Barbara)
>
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Msg# 5081

Daw's story is complete.... Posted by Elena Tiriel August 17, 2005 - 21:59:03 Topic ID# 5081
HI everyone,

I just noticed that Daw the Minstrel's story, "A Spring of Joy" (#
1320) is still in the Incomplete:Novella group. It is complete (and
probably has been since shortly after I nominated it.... sorry that I
didn't notice before!)

- Barbara

Msg# 5082

Re: author reviews? Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 22:12:07 Topic ID# 5078
That's really strange. E-mail Anthony directly if he doesn't respond soon.

--Ainaechoiriel
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> Sent: Wednesday, August 17, 2005 9:04 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] author reviews?
>
>
> I'm not sure if we're supposed to report problems or wait on
> fixes already in progress.
>
> most of mine seem to be working fine.
>
> I understand that some have been filtered out because of
> being duplicates, but there are two that seem to have an error.
>
> that is my author review for Minuialeth, story id#978.
> I have saved a review there for her, but the menu still says
> 'enter new...' - but when I click on it, I get a message "
> You are not authorized to view detailed information on the
> stories you selected."
>
> also on Leawards story in the romance category. #181
>
> the others seem to be fine, except one I saved for Marnie
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>
> Thanks, Sulriel.
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Msg# 5083

Re: Site down? Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 22:13:07 Topic ID# 4452
It's not either of you. It's Time Warner or Earthlink. My internet
connection keeps going out and then coming back. The server is just a
computer in my house. So if my connection is down, so is MEFA2005.

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> Sent: Wednesday, August 17, 2005 2:35 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Site down?
>
> I was on a roll doing reviews and then I started getting that
> too about an hours ago. I just checked back now and I am
> still getting it so it must be down for a power/internet
> outage. Oh well, my eyes were crossing anyway. I will go back
> to reviewing again later.
>
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, <aelfwina@c...> wrote:
> > Is the MEFA site *down* or is it just me again? I keep
> getting "Page not available."
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Msg# 5084

Re: Daw's story is complete.... Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 22:20:08 Topic ID# 5081
Okay, thanks. I've moved it to Drama: Mirkwood

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> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Elena Tiriel
> Sent: Wednesday, August 17, 2005 9:59 PM
> To: MEFA Awards
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Daw's story is complete....
>
> HI everyone,
>
> I just noticed that Daw the Minstrel's story, "A Spring of Joy" (#
> 1320) is still in the Incomplete:Novella group. It is
> complete (and probably has been since shortly after I
> nominated it.... sorry that I didn't notice before!)
>
> - Barbara
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Msg# 5085

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 1 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 22:39:28 Topic ID# 5085
Title: Weapons Against The Enemy <http://www.nancybrooke.com/weapons.htm> .
Author: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell . ID: 631
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Reviewer: sulriel
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. 2005-04-11 11:59:27 Score: 4
What a wonderful and delightful surprise to find this gem in this long list
of stories. Your writing is engaging and active, your descriptions balanced,
the humor just a pinch over subtle. I love your description of Glorfindel's
laugh, if thunder could be made of sunshine, and i especially was touched by
what he said about Asfaloth being a mighty warrior in his own right.
Overall, an enjoyable and touching view of an evening in the Hall of Fire.

Title: The Highwayman
<http://www.burpingtroll.com/Tales/The%20Highwayman.doc> . Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Genres: Humor . ID: 330
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Reviewer: sulriel
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. 2005-04-11 22:12:38 Score: 3
A brillant and refreshing bit of original work set not-quite firmly in
Tolkien's Middle-earth. This is a most excellent example of the best of what
fanfiction can be, fun and entertaining. I somehow stumbled on this gem
early in my fanfic reading and it has remained one of my favorites as time
passes.

Title: All
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2929&cid=11235> Hallows'
Day . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 317
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:13:05 Score: 3
Chilling and heart breaking and beautiful all in one chapter. Wonderfully in
character. This is an amazing glimpse through the ages, from the depths of
time to current day. This is what JRR Tolkien intended when he set out to
map the mythologies, that we should be able to tie them in to our modern
legends.

Title: Handmaiden of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3520> Lorien . Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 316
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:13:58 Score: 2
As always, your talent for characterization and your strengths in being able
to see the 'other side' of an issue come through clearly in this unique
work.

Title: Winter
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2807&cid=10858> Encounters
. Author: jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> . Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood . ID: 294
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:14:28 Score: 2
What a beautiful meeting between two old crusties. . You have a wonderful,
balanced attention to detail, and a special way of looking at the stark
truth with a hint of humor underneath.

Title: The Scruff
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=364> Factor . Author:
jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> . Genres: Humor: Aragorn . ID: 293
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:18:58 Score: 3
This is one of my all-time favorites, that I re-read often, I've passed this
link to many of my friends. Your characterizations of the Dunedain and
Princelings, both Elf and Peredhil are priceless, your descriptions are
exquisite and delicious. I was glad to see this one finished, at long last.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13572>
Long Tradition of Ancient Lore . Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles . ID: 206
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:19:40 Score: 2
I don't read a much Faramir and even less Denethor, but this captured
perfectly my own sons. No desire for dry history, but throw in a hero and a
dragon, or a viking or an indian and suddenly it is fun.

Title: Ambush
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13573> in
Ithilien . Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble . ID: 204
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:20:47 Score: 2
So heartbreaking, this brief glimpse into history. How terribly tragic. I'm
struck again by the depth of what JRR Tolkien gave us, that something so
rich could come from the tidbits of his histories.

Title: There
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13575> and Back
Again . Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 202
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:23:55 Score: 2
"A hint of longing" ... isn't that what we all feel for those long-ago days.
Are we so far removed from Middle-earth? I think not. This Wizard and Dwarf,
and Hobbit, are too close to our own hearts not to be real.

Title: Earth
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13576> and Sky .
Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 201
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:26:53 Score: 2
The beginings of a truely ever-lasting friendship, tested by fire and
standing through the ages. We should all be so blessed.

Title: Alas,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13574> Poor
Ufthak! . Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Races/Places: Villains: Drabble . ID: 200
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:27:25 Score: 2
Oh! This is so wonderfully, delightfully nasty and Orchish. Isn't it
frightening to think that they were once Elves, that there may be something
of an Orchish nature lurking in the best of us?

Title: Triumph
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13578> Incarnate
. Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Races/Places: Villains: Drabble . ID: 198
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:28:31 Score: 2
How wonderfully evil. You slipped too easily into Sauron's mind for this
one. very, very scary. (did I mention "very scary?") remind me to
run-away-fast if I ever see you sneer.!

Title: Silver
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13577> and Gold .
Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Genres: Romance: Drabble . ID: 196
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:29:01 Score: 2
A beautiful double drabble about one of Middle-earth's most beloved couples.
Will they or won't they? This gives a satisfactory 'final answer' to that
seemingly eternal question.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13579>
Long, Unexpected Drabble . Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Genres: Humor: Metafic . ID: 193
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-11 22:30:51 Score: 5
This drabble is just so much fun, I find myself giggling and rereading it
each time I see it. It is so typical of the obsessive drabbler, I think we
can all see ourselves in the place of the author, trying to figure out the
very special words that will put the specific meaning in the correct word
count. What's canon, what's acceptable, what is not. ... what we can force
in anyway(!). Now I must go off to research chocolate cake, but I'm sure
that Hobbits wouldn't be without something so divine.

Title: Bearer of Bad
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=356> Tidings .
Author: LOTR_lover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
4> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 12
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-12 08:49:52 Score: 10
I have read a lot of pieces about the Ring-bearers' ship as it approaches
Valinor. Stories about every possible combination between the hobbits,
wizard, and various elves on-board. The kind of interaction you usually find
in these stories touches me particularly because of some things in my
off-line life, but I also love interactions between characters of different
races and cultures, which this setting seems to encourage.

And in stories like this (ones dealing with Elrond, at least), Glorfindel or
some other elf of Rivendell usually helps Elrond deal with the burden of
what he is about to face when he finally reaches Elvenhome. This story does
something that I've seen less of: Elrond receives wisdom from Galadriel. I
know that I often forget that Elrond wasn't the only one bringing Celebrian
bad news. Galadriel was her mother, after all, and Galadriel would have also
been there at Arwen's wedding.

The really innovative thing about this jewel, though, is that the author
doesn't try to address the question of "How the heck am I [Elrond] going to
tell Celebrian about this?" It just recognizes that the problem exists.
Galadriel puts it well: "Arwen has made her choice. Now you have a choice of
your own." In the end, grief is so fundamentally emotional rather than
logical, it's extremely difficult to put it into words without cheapening
the experience. I'm relieved the author didn't try, as I'm not sure anyone
could do it well. I'm not convinced that it *can* be done well.

The other thing I loved so much about this story is that it doesn't descend
into angst. We all know that Elrond and Celebrian have a long road before
them, and a painful road at that, but for the moment at least the author
lets them exist in the moment, and be happy.

Title: Gathering the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3082> Pieces .
Author: Tehta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
5> . Races/Places: Elves: First Age . ID: 13
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-12 10:34:57 Score: 6
The author of this story says in her summary that this is a
Maedhros-sans-hand story that is "darker than most", but when I began
reading this, I think I expected it to be a little more personal. Personal
can be dark, and most post-Thangorodrim stories seem to dwell on the
personal aspect of things.

The way Maedhros kept thinking about how he was going to consolidate support
seemed very believable for him. I also liked how he used even his own
struggles (re-learning how to use the sword, but left-handed) to torment
others (Fingon) as very telling about what his personality might have been
like. This was a nice little gap-filler about a section of history that in
Tolkien's version had failed to really grab my interest.

Title: Greenery <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1945>
. Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor . ID: 14
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-12 11:33:39 Score: 5
I'm a sucker for original characters, especially "common" ones, that is
non-nobility. When I write a story it's more for the interesting situation I
get to explore rather than because I find a particular situation appealing,
rather than that I'm interested in a certain character. And this was a good
story with an OC! Helin was funny and down-to-earth, and I found myself
meeting Arwen through her eyes. Like all of Forodwaith's stories it was well
told. I do love these little snapshots into other people's lives.

Title: Thread of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1272> Fate . Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Genres: Romance: Rivendell . ID: 15
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Reviewer: Marta
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> . 2005-04-12 13:52:37 Score: 9
I've read several pieces that deal with Arwen's weaving the standard, and
this is one of the best on that theme I've come across. I couldn't help
comparing it to Dwimordene's "Standards" as I read it, and both of these
pieces are good in their own right. But whereas "Standards" seemed to focus
more on Arwen's musings, the driving force behind "Thread of Fate" is
Arwen's actions. The cutting of diamond, the infusing of the hair, all of
that has some sort of symbolic or emotional significance, but it's still an
action. This made for a very different read. (Not better or worse, just
different, but I liked it nonetheless.)

I did have one quibble about the fact that Elrond completely did not discuss
Arwen's choice with her. I can see her discussing it *at one point* when the
choice was first made, and then going silent. But not totally refusing to
discuss it. He'd need to understand why Arwen was choosing mortality, to
explain it to Celebrian at the very least. (poor, poor Celebrian, just
having this sprung on her when Elrond reaches Valinor! But that's a
different topic...)

Anyway, I loved this story. Especially the revelation by Arwen that she may
not finish in time. That seems like a very mortal thought for an Elf. Nice
segue.

Title: Leavetaking
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8127> . Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble . ID: 16
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-12 14:04:21 Score: 3
Interesting look at the final parting of GIlraen and Elrond. Of course it
had to happen, but I had never really thought out what form it would take. I
especially like the insight that either Elrond or Gilraen would lose their
child - Elrond would lose Arwen forever to the doom of men, or Gilraen would
lose Aragorn to death if he did not succeed.

Title: Cunning Gold <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1361107/2/> . Author:
Lyllyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
8> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Gondolin . ID: 28
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-12 14:32:38 Score: 2
Oh, interesting! I'd never read the Silm quote that this vignette is based
on, but the one presented here certainly makes as much sense as anything I
could dream up.

Title: About <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1596277/1/> Men . Author: Lyllyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
8> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire . ID: 29
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-12 14:48:44 Score: 2
Interesting view of Men, here, and effective way of showing how that view
might have evolved in light of new experiences. It makes me wonder how rocky
a marriage Merry and Estella had there at the start.

Title: Alqualonde <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=56>
. Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons . ID: 36
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-13 10:57:33 Score: 10
Wow. After I finished reading this story, that was the one word that kept
racing through my mind: wow. This is the story that first introduced me to
Silmarillion-based fanfiction, and as far as I'm concerned it has to be one
of the best stories in the fandom. Maybe that's because of when I read it...
I think I had just found HASA, coming from FF.net, and I was browsing
through the archive alphabetically by title. However I found it I was
completely and totally blown away.

When I was rereading it for these awards, I was really impressed by the
first line of the story: "The thing he knew would haunt him all his days was
the smell of it all." This reminded me of Sergeant Jones, a teacher I had in
high school for a course on American warfare in the twentieth century. He
was a Vietnam veteran himself, the son of a man killed at D-day, and "Saving
Private Ryan" was just coming out that year. One of his comments that stayed
with me was that the *only* way that movie could have been more realistic
was if you could somehow have smelled the scenes.

Now, maybe I have an overactive imagination, but I came away from this tiny
little piece with the same image. I could see the crumbling walls, the
ships, the swans, the crawling ivy... and I coud *smell* it, too. It almost
made me physically sick.

Besides that, you've done a truly masterful job in picking your narrator.
The choice of Maglor is perfect. The theme of peace not making good
narrative (a nice reference to "The Hobbit", at least for me) made me wonder
how other soldier-bards handled the violence. Did Elrond perhaps find it
easier to deal with carnage, knowing that he would be able to immortalize it
in song? Maybe "immortalize" is the wrong word, because such songs aren't
really written for sharing, but I'm sure you'll know what I mean.

Rereading this thing makes me want to write a companion piece to it, about
Maedhros' reaction to hearing Maglor call the Kinslaying "magnificent".
Magnificent! I can certainly see why Maglor would see it that way, but I'd
love to really delve into how Maedhros might react to such a statement.

Title: Last Hero <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=193>
. Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan . Races/Places: Rohan . ID: 37
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-13 12:39:38 Score: 3
Reading this story and "Alqualonde", I have to wonder whether the author has
been involved in some kind of battle. She describes it with such depth, and
really nails the confusion I imagine would pervade such a situation. This
story was very well done, and really evoked an Eomer I wish would rear his
head more often in fanfic.

Title: No <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/nochoice.html> Other Choice .
Author: LadyAranel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 456
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-13 16:32:11 Score: 2
No other choice indeed, but for these two old enemies to get along, little
knowing how close their sons will become. Great job with the balance of
tension and subtle humor.

Title: Ties That Bind <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/tiesthatbind.html> .
Author: LadyAranel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 457
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-13 16:34:54 Score: 2
you put a lot of emotion in so few words. we wonder for a moment if Legolas
is in danger of his grief. he is hurt, as Aragorn asks, -in his heart, where
an Elf is so fragile, but he continues on.

--Ainaechoiriel
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Msg# 5086

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 2 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 22:42:07 Topic ID# 5086
Title: Out of Stone <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/outofstone.html> .
Author: LadyAranel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 315
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-13 17:11:46 Score: 3
I think I've said it before, but I'll happily say it again, I just love the
'mussed' Legolas. You have ane extraordinary setup here in showing the
balanced blending of stone and growth, how each complimente and enhances the
other, and how wonderful to see that crusty old Gloin can see it as well.

Title: Childhood
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=23> Ends . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 474
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-13 17:19:59 Score: 4
How wonderful to find something from you that I haven't read, how
heartbreaking to consider the end of an Age, the the Heirs should no longer
be tutored in Rivendell. How agonizing to feel Eldarion's pain at such a
decision, to feel the weight of the ages and the responsibility of not only
the Kingdom of Gondor, but of Mankind. What a shame to come to realize what
must be done.

Title: Dancing in the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3025> Darkness .
Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 476
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-13 17:24:38 Score: 3
One of the few Elfing-twin stories that I've really enjoyed. I especially
love Celeborn's steady blending and mending of cultures, standing strong and
getting what he wants in his own quiet, bull-headed way. ...shame about the
nakkid dancing, -sigh-

Title: The 10th <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/935655/1/> Walker. . Author:
jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War . ID: 499
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-13 17:31:11 Score: 2
How wonderful! Go Bill! He must be the most underated member of the
Fellowship. I enjoyed seeing this about him, us horse-people have to stick
together!!

Title: A Gardener's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1980> Tale . Author:
Elentari
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
6> Greenwood . Races/Places: Hobbits: Fourth Age . ID: 642
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=642>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-13 21:01:21 Score: 4
What a delightful tale. Your characterization of Sam is wonderful, and I
love how warm and homey, and *Hobbity* your style is, and you maintain it
well through-out. Sam's vision is well done, with smooth transitions. I
especially love his meeting with Celeeborn, you use just the right amount of
compassion and nobility in his speech and actions. It's bittersweet to see
him hand off the Book to Elanor, and sail to spend his last days with Frodo.

Title: Beleg's Doom: or,
<http://www.libraryofmoria.com/turinbeleg/belegsdoom.txt> Most Definitely
Not The Lay Of Turin . Author: Tehta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
5> . Genres: Humor: Metafic . ID: 42
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=42>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-14 14:47:30 Score: 3
"I suppose it is really true, then, what they say about male Men." This
simple statement, and Beleg's subsequent quest to find out what exactly they
*do* say about male men, cracked me up. Nice tying together of arcane canon,
most of which I was completely unaware of until reading this story.

Title: Legacy
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=9468> . Author:
Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 300
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=300>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-14 22:30:49 Score: 3
Elana, I enjoyed this unique viewpoint of such an underused character. What
an interesting perceptive. You handled the introspection well, coming from
the solidity of a Dwarf to add the feminine touch of home and family. Keep
up the good work!

Title: Enmities
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4139&NGID=175> .
Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> . Races/Places: Villains: Orcs . ID: 561
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=561>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-04-14 22:45:42 Score: 3
Ah, the joys of seemingly eternal re-writing, it seems like it is never
done, but isn't it fun to see the story change and grow, deepen and develop
into more than you thought it could be. You must have know i couldn't resist
a good Orc story, and isn't it great to see how the work pays off!

Title: Touche <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3561>
. Author: DragonLady7
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
9> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette . ID: 229
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=229>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-14 23:06:17 Score: 2
A lively depiction of a fencing match I'd love to see. The fencing seems
very well described. I enjoyed Aragorn's entrance at the end...

Title: Words <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2066>
Unsaid . Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller . ID: 55
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=55>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-14 23:19:56 Score: 4
Denethor must have felt great remorse and bitterness during the hours he
spent with his wounded, unconscious son; and this vignette brings out the
bereaved father's anguish. The sense of Denethor's being past the end of his
endurance, of having lost too much, and the horrible realization of the pain
he caused Faramir by sending him out without a farewell, is well-written
here.

Title: Patrimony
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=1> . Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles . ID: 247
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=247>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-14 23:37:05 Score: 2
Excellent drabble! It's rare we see young Faramir as a strong-minded little
boy enjoying his father's undivided attention. Nicely done.

Title: Remembrance
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2566> . Author:
Ancalime8301
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
4> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 90
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=90>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-15 08:28:55 Score: 4
I really like this piece. Any presentation of Frodo's sickness is of course
largely fanon or extrapolation, just because Tolkien gives us such few
details, but your version seemed very reasonable. I especially liked the
idea of Frodo's using the book as a way to hold the demons as bay. That it
wasn't just his duty but it was a tool to help him deal with whatever
psychological issues he had. Very perceptive, I think, and very realistic if
my own experience is any indicator.

Title: The End of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2592> Days . Author:
Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 158
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=158>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-15 12:58:41 Score: 3
This story is a beautiful, almost poetic, account of the last day. I really
enjoyed how the author weaved Tolkien's references (and inferences from
Tolkien's references) to create a convincing account about what life might
have been like in Aman, long after the last of the Elves took the Straight
Road from Middle-earth.

Title: Beauty <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3788>
Mark . Author: Ruby
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
2> Nye . Races/Places: Hobbits: Fourth Age . ID: 508
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=508>
Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-15 16:50:02 Score: 5
I read this quite a while ago and never reviewed (bad me!) so I might as
well do it here where it can count for more than just some nice feelings. I
don't know how much I can say about this fic except that it struck me as
very hobbity and proper. The emotions of the two characters in love are very
clearly presented and quite believable, as are all the characters
themselves. Another aspect I thought was quite nice was the fact that it had
a similar feel to Tolkien's own writing though it was definitely its own
style; a happy storytime feel. I think Tolkien would have liked this one a
lot.

Title: Moving Mountains <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1185>
. Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Races/Places: Hobbits . ID: 627
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=627>
Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-15 16:50:25 Score: 10

I beta'ed this, but because SML leaves so little to be done to her fics, I
don't think you could, by rights, consider me biased - unless it is simply
that I am biased towards good fic.

I absolutely ADORE seeing real issues addressed in fanfic. There are things
that you simply know they would have had to deal with and when I find an
author who has the maturity and experience to have dealt with some of them
(or who can fake it well enough to fool me) I am ecstatic! This piece is
heartbreaking, believable and brilliant. The author knows enough of her
stuff to not say anything incorrect (and considering the incredible amount
of misinformation out there about nursing issues, many authors write
incorrect things about it in their fanfics) and is able to bring a
sensitivity and understanding to a subject that few people want to talk
about.

Besides the realism, SilverMoonLady's gentle touch with a fic conveys a deep
respect and empathy for this subject. She is never overbearing with it, but
simply presents facts and conveys the terrible heartbreak those who have to
watch this from the outside and can do nothing. PPD is heartbreaking even
today, with modern medicines and treatments available. SML's presentation is
a very perceptive look at how hobbits might have handled such an issue.

Lovely, heartbreaking and thought provoking. My favorite type of fic!


Title: A Gift at
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=682> Year's Turning .
Author: Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck . Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas . ID: 186
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-16 04:30:20 Score: 2
A charming story that really makes the reader feel at home in the White
Tower. I loved the details; and the foreshadowing of Finduilas' eventual
death is well done, a subtle shadow on the joy surrounding Faramir's
birth...

Title: Love
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4819&SPOrdinal=1
> Me and Despair . Author: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> . Genres: Alternate Universe: Elves . ID: 645
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=645>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-16 04:35:33 Score: 2
A chilling look at the road I'm very glad that Galadriel didn't take.
Excellent depiction of the glamor she's put on most of our heroes, and the
torment and death she's unleashed upon the world.

Title: Sand-castles
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13220> when the
tide is flowing . Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles . ID: 549
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=549>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-16 04:41:34 Score: 1
Excellent drabble, illuminating and foreshadowing the different destinies of
Gondor's favorite sons.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13216>
Warrior's Skills . Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles . ID: 551
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=551>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-16 04:43:06 Score: 2
One of my favorite Faramir drabbles! I love the way you highlight his skills
as leader and singer, and all in a hundred words!

Title: Natural
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12145> History .
Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age . ID: 112
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=112>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-16 04:48:57 Score: 3
A charming glimpse of a stage in Faramir's life we rarely see - grandfather
to a new generation bred in the peace of the King's reign. Faramir obviously
enjoys his role as grandfather and teacher to young Barahir...Their
relationship is well-written here.

Title: Breaking the Rules
<http://www.geocities.com/sotto-voce/news0830.html> (Harry Potter Exhibition
Game) . Author: Bubbles
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
9> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID: 276
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=276>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-16 05:07:26 Score: 3
Hilarious! More fun than a barrel of balrogs! I hope Legolas gave Strider
and Snape a tutorial on proper hair care - they both could use it! I can
just see a Gandalf/Dumbledore smackdown, too! And the poor Dead Guys Boromir
and Sirius sitting out the game.

Title: Legacy <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1746>
. Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor . ID: 282
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=282>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-16 08:48:04 Score: 7
I have often wondered how it was that Faramir came to have Finduilas's
cloak. I can see Denethor putting it into storage (if he didn't destroy it),
but in that case I don't think Faramir would naturally think to retrieve it,
especailly so soon after Denethor's death. If it was sent to Dol Amroth
Faramir wouldn't have any easy access to it, and if Boromir had kept it he
wouldn't have had any good reason to give it to Faramir before seeking
Rivendell; after all, it wasn't like he thought he would die.

This story provides a very neat explanation for how Faramir, who had only
the haziest of memories concerning Finduilas, came by the cloak. It's also a
beautiful tale about instilling memories of the past in his son, and about
the value of legacy. And besides, it has a realistic portrayal of Denethor
without making him into a monster -- something I appreciate very much! All
in all a good tale.

Title: Restoration
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2989> . Author:
Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 288
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=1&form_story_filter=288>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-17 07:12:08 Score: 7
This is a really nice amalgamation of Faramir's comments about wishing to
see the White Tree in bloom again (to Frodo at Henneth Annun), and Aragorn's
and Gandalf's actually finding the White Tree again on the slopes of
Mindolluin. I particularly liked Faramir's remembrances of Boromir -- not
too angsty, which is a very nice change to see these days, when so many
authors portray Faramir as having nothing but the unhappiest memories for
his brother. I think he'd have those, too, but other memories besides. And
it was a nice touch to introduce how Faramir would help Aragorn with
politics -- that is another thing that I often find missing, or else at the
forefront; most people have a hard time keeping it in the background without
banishing it completely. I know I do. Anyway, this was a very nice read.



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Msg# 5087

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 3 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 22:43:12 Topic ID# 5087
Title: Turning the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=968> Page . Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor . ID: 337
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=2&form_story_filter=337>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-17 07:15:05 Score: 4
This is certainly Eomer, but a more mellowed Eomer. I still see traces of
the hot-headed youth who dominates his character at times in "The Lord of
the Rings", the one who cried "death!" at Pelennor -- but I also see an old
man, remarkably at peace in a world that is no longer governed by the sword
as much as the one he was born into was. It's a testament to a new age, and
is beautifully told.

Title: Telling the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2068> Bees . Author:
Fileg
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
6> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire . ID: 343
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=2&form_story_filter=343>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-17 08:20:08 Score: 4
I was not familiar with this custom before reading this story. If it is a
true one (and given the author, I am tempted to assume it is), then it is
beautifully connected to canonical events and to the Shire culture. And I
for one really like the idea of hobbit traditions forming the basis for
Celtic beliefs, at least in part, since Hobbits would have inhabited the
area before the Celts. It is a very nice touch.

Title: Passages <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3759>
. Author: Flick
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette . ID: 352
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-17 08:26:00 Score: 6
This story has a lovely mythic quality about it, right up until the end. I
wish the author could have maintained that through the final conversation
between Legolas and Gimli -- maybe not reporting the whole thing, keeping a
little more distance. Regardless, it's a nice piece, and has many good
insights into the waning days of The Fellowship. I can't decide whether the
love between Aragorn and Legolas is supposed to be erotic, courtly, or
simply just a very close friendship. Whatever it is, it's beautiful, all the
more so because it does not dominate. There are not enough non-romance
pieces about Legolas, and this was a wonderful glimpse.

Title: Faint
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=13513> Hope .
Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette . ID: 357
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-17 09:15:10 Score: 2
Ah, the return of Parmandil, at least in passing. I love stories like this
that ties the hints canon gives us of the Fouth Age into something more
conclusive.

Title: The Horn-Cry
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1816> of Buckland .
Author: Lulleny
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
2> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire . ID: 467
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-17 15:28:21 Score: 10
This piece has a quality that I see too rarely, yet is important: the
ability to angst without distorting the character of whoever is doing the
angsty. Because Merry does his share of angsting here, but he's still Merry
somehow. This is particularly important -- and particularly difficult with
hobbits. I was truly impressed by the hints of night-time horror that Pippin
would also have endured. It was beautifully done, and all the more
impressive because it was through the eyes of the naive and more youthful
(at least at the time of the Quest) hobbit, instead of the mature organiser
of the Conspiracy.

I was a little confused as to the timeline. I mean, obviously it takes place
thee years after the birth of Faramir's and Eowyn's first child, and while
that date isn't nailed down I always envisioned it taking place fairly soon
after they were married -- certainly within five years or so. So I think
this story would probably take place within a decade after the Quest, yet I
have a hard time seeing both Merry and Pippin as Master of Buckland and
Thain of Tookland respectively, that soon after the war. There's no
indication that their fathers died prematurely, if I recall correctly. While
it wasn't uncanonical, it was a bit confusing toward the beginning, as I
thought the "Master of Buckland" was Saradoc, not Merry.

I also was a little sceptical about Pippin's naming the horse Shadow, as it
seems like that word would have more connection with the Shadow of the East
than with Shadowfax, Gandalf's horse. And was Shadow supposed to be a horse
or a pony? I wasn't sure. Anyway, these minor details notwithstanding, I
thought it was a well-told version of a possible post-Scouring event.

Title: Guarding the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=88> Shire . Author:
Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 513
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-18 21:19:54 Score: 3
This is an interesting answer to the question of why the Rangers would have
been guarding the Shire. I did question whether hardened warriors would be
so opening in discussing their feelings (the Rangers, not so much Merry),
but generally the piece was interesting and well-executed.

Title: Bare Feet and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2945> Beer . Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor . ID: 571
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-19 09:37:08 Score: 9
"Aragorn? Elessar? Estel? Strider? Surely there is one of my names that you
could bear to speak."

This quote seems to capture the heart not only of this story, but also of
what Faramir's and Aragorn's relationship after the War of the Ring would
have been like, at least in my imagination. I tend to write and imagine a
kindler, gentler Denethor than a lot of people, but even I accept that he
was a formidable man. Not that Aragorn wasn't, but I think he would have
been a very different man to serve than Aragorn is.

It was also nice to see how Gwynnyd thought Aragorn being Thorongil would
affect politics in the Fourth Age. Of course the Corsairs would remember the
man who destroyed their fleet a mere generation before! And Faramir would
appreciate the need to be sensitive to situations like that, of course.
Spot-on characterizations.

I think my favourite thing about this piece, though, was the little hints
that Aragorn was interested in Faramir's personal life. Little comments like
"I don't expect to see the candles burning in here once Eowyn is back" when
he's discussing with Faramir how late the steward is working. A few more
commas and a few less apostrophes would help this story, but really, it's a
very enjoyable read.

Title: Faithful
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=3126&NGID=129> Star
. Author: Tiana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
4> Luthien . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor . ID: 593
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-19 16:14:07 Score: 1
This is a nice bit of fluff. I particularly liked the interactions between
Faramir and Legolas.

Title: Of Herbs and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4653> Stewed Rabbit .
Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller . ID: 9
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Reviewer: Larner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> . 2005-04-20 00:37:11 Score: 4
This is a lovely gapfiller for Aragorn's young adult period. I found it to
be gentle, and a good indication of how Aragorn was raised both by Elrond
and by his mother, to always care for and follow the holy days of his
people; and how he reminded his people of this need even in the wilds during
his first stint as a Ranger of Arnor.

Excellently written, gently realized.

I heartily recommend it.

Title: Bed
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4511&SPOrdinal=1
> of Roses . Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits . ID: 793
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Reviewer: Larner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> . 2005-04-20 00:44:08 Score: 3
I love this look at Frodo's thoughts toward Sam as he lies on the slopes of
the mountain, knowing tomorrow is most likely the last for both of them, and
his wishes that Sam were safe with the one he loves instead of lying here
facing destruction. A very deep, loving, caring, angst-filled piece, and
well worth the reading.

Title: Olorin
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1127> I was in
my Youth In the West that is Forgotten . Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 25
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Reviewer: Larner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> . 2005-04-20 00:48:54 Score: 2
An interesting drabble--the Istari remembering the days of being a Maia. It
would be interesting to see this expanded upon, and hope that one day this
might be done.

Title: By All
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/5053.html#cutid1> The
Signs . Author: Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 757
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-20 22:33:58 Score: 3
This story has a lot of potential, and deals with a topic of great interest
to me: modern people finding relics from the Third Age, and trying to
interpret it. I was unclear how the stone survived so long, and how Reggie
knew so much about Middle-earth, and think more details would help the
story. But it's a pleasant read, nonetheless.

Title: March Frost <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1574> .
Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 769
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-04-20 23:01:16 Score: 3
This is a wonderful story; it could very easily fit into "horror", as it
contains many horrific images. It makes sense that Frodo wouldn't be the
only one to suffer "anniversay illnesses", and Merry's role in anchoring him
and helping to fight off the demons is touching as well.

Title: Love
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4819&SPOrdinal=1
> Me and Despair . Author: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> . Genres: Alternate Universe: Elves . ID: 645
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Reviewer: riverotter7
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
3> . 2005-04-21 17:37:10 Score: 7
When I first read this, I think it was in beta on HASA. It was creepily good
then but as the story progressed (and when I read it for review) it became
even more eerie. By the time I was done with it, I had chills, and the wind
rattling at the windows certainly didn't help. Needless to say I bookmarked
this story for future reading and have read and reread it multiple times
since. The story is good in that it's not very graphic. That's not
neccessary to get the point across. Just the menace to each of the
Fellowship and to the Races of Middle Earth is obvious without a lot of
blood spattering across the pages, graphic torture, gnashing and wailing et
al. I'm not much of a suspense or horror reader. I have too graphic of an
imagination for that; but this story moves that imagination without the need
for too many words. It's short duration leaves the essential cold chill and
the nasty taste of "what could have been..." Marvelous.
Molly Littlefoot

Title: Some Nameless
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=197> Place . Author:
Budgielover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> . Genres: Adventure: Long Form . ID: 875
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 14:47:53 Score: 3
I must confess that this is a delightfully fun adventure story. It has it
all, hurt / comfort, drama, adventure and even a little comedy. I often
think of this piece as the most typical example of Budgie's work - it has a
serial quality that just makes reading it fun and easy. Don't forget your
popcorn while you read, but this one is a delightful tale.

Title: Duet <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/DuetIndex.html> . Author:
Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 886
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 14:52:56 Score: 4
Probably one of her best stories but often underrated, this heartbreaking
look at the ways that both Merry and Pippin dealt with Frodo's leaving will
cut your heart in two. I love the way these two tales intertwine one another
and fill in the spaces left in the other's interpretation. It is a skillful
technique and a lovely story that I can heartily recommend to anyone.

Title: All I
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3270&cid=12468> Ever
Wanted . Author: pippinfan88
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 844
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 17:12:37 Score: 3
I have been going through the lists, trying to find stories I have already
read and can review quickly. This is one that was far too short, because it
is delightful and deserves a longer treatment! I would hope I could
encourage the author to expand on this quaint little snippet. It really
deserves much more exploration!

Title: Dreme <http://www.geocities.com/singeaddams/Dreme.html> . Author:
Singe
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 858
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 17:16:16 Score: 4
I read this ages ago and think it is delightful. I adore the very 'hobbity'
tone it has and the wonderful innocence the author gives back to Frodo. He
is very definitely himself as he used to be, before the dark times, and
because of that the story has a hidden poignancy that you don't realize has
crept up on you till you reach the end. Smart, hobbity, quaint and charming,
you will end the story with a tear in your eye and not immediately
understand why. A darling story.

Title: It Takes A
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2893> Took . Author:
Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin . ID: 823
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 19:42:45 Score: 2
A lovely little romance, cleverly told. A sweet read. I would recommend this
story to anyone who likes a light, sweet romance. The author handles it very
well. Probably one of my more favored Pippin/Diamond stories.

Title: A Diamond In
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2941> The Storm .
Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Genres: Romance . ID: 780
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 19:55:51 Score: 10
I positively ADORE this author's work. She is one of the very few whose sexy
stories are good enough to titillate me. She also unerringly provides a
deliciously savory story in the bargain. A Diamond in the Storm is probably
the best Pippin/Diamond story I have ever read for characterization. The two
are presented believably and the Diamond she creates is a character that
anyone could admire and think good enough for Pippin. Her Pippin is also
exceptional - a grown hobbit who you can believe has lived through the wars,
has come of age as a hero of the Shire and has grown into a the remarkable
hobbit I always knew was in him. If I was to pick a strength of this story
it would be the characterizations, because very few of them are undeveloped,
but the storyline is also quite well thought out. I think it could use a few
more twists and turns and a bit more exploration of the villian's motive but
it keeps your interest and is much more plausible than the average fanfic
story.

Another strength is pacing. So many authors belabor points and go into
endless detail about motivation and periferals that finding an author like
Silvermoonlady who, if anything, goes the other direction!, is quite
refreshing indeed. She handles emotion very well and the sex is... well, if
there is anyone who writes sex better (besides me *wink*) I don't know who
it could possibly be.

Title: To the Sea <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1479> .
Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Genres: Adventure . ID: 770
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 20:05:28 Score: 9
I hadn't even seen that this author, one of my all time favourites, had
written this until I found it on some archive. I was delighted to find a new
one of hers and settled myself down with it with gusto. It hadn't gotten
many reviews, probably because it featured none of the fellowship, but it
captivated me at once with the absolutely lyrical quality of the prose, the
spare style and the way it wove a very believable character with only a very
few words.

It is very nearly an original work because the author has created a shipping
industry that Tolkien hardly touched on in any of his works and a
heartbroken and devastated hobbit that was only referred to in a single line
in the master's work. All of the effort she put into this should be roundly
applauded because she DOES succeed, brilliantly, in creating a character
that you can definitely see existing. I know stories with either original or
nearly original characters aren't the ones that everyone seems to want to
read, but when they are written this WELL, they really ought to be
applauded. Thank you, SML, for giving your readers this tantalizing glimpse
into another corner of Tolkien's universe. Bravo!


Title: I Will Know <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=4577>
Suffering . Author: Andy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
4> Longwood . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 704
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 20:12:59 Score: 7
I was totally knocked off my feet by this fic. I am not usually a big one
for crossed species because, well, it just doesn't seem that it would work
to me, but this piece is just brilliant. It is a perfectly believable
snapshot of what Frodo might be like in Valinor from the point of view of
someone who falls, unexpectedly in love with him. The author also does
something I wholeheartedly approve of by not identifying the name (or
gender) of the love interest, thereby allowing both those of us who prefer
het and the people who like slash to enjoy the story. So many fics are
written seeming to suggest that females would not be good enough for these
characters that it is, sadly, a refreshing change to find a story that
allows readers who are proud of and enjoy their own femininity to enjoy a
tale. This fic (and style of writing) doesn't deny either and so welcomes
both - a tack I can wholeheartedly support.

Title: March Frost <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1574> .
Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 769
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=2&form_story_filter=769>
Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-22 20:18:18 Score: 7
A lovely little het piece that is so FULL of mood and angst and written so
compellingly that you simply feel you are there in the story. You become
Estella fighting for Merry's life against the darkness. I swear that while
reading this, I could almost see it happening in my mind's eye.

This author writes from the heart and does something VERY few fanfic writers
do - she writes what she knows... I don't mean that she writes actual
accounts of things that happened, but she writes of emotions and situations
between people with a depth and believability that let you know she has
dealt with this, or something very much like it, in her life before. She
brings such an incredible realism to the story that you can't help being
drawn in. Even though it is make believe, there is just enough of a grain of
truth in it, as in Tolkien's own works, that you buy it as if these events
actually happened. A brilliant piece I highly recommend.


Title: Flame of
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=24> the West .
Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> . Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette . ID: 1
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-04-24 09:32:52 Score: 3
It is easy to picture oneself in this story, the feeling, sounds and smells
of place are extremely well communicated. The pace is steady, characters'
feelings gently and subtly rendered; almost too subtle - while I could see
and hear Aragorn's pain, Faramir's steadfastness, I couldn't feel them as
intensly as I wanted.


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Msg# 5088

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 4 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:08:09 Topic ID# 5088
Title: The
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=196> Flowers
of the Forest . Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor . ID: 2
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-24 09:42:12 Score: 3
I liked this - pointed descriptions and strong voice made immersion was
immediate. Other aspects were, unfortunately, more vague: I wasn't sure if
the narrator with his war-like imagery was Faramir or Eomer, and what
'battle' exactly they were preparing for. The piece seemed both melancholy
and hopeful but wasn't sure which was foremost.

Title: 'Peering
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=808&cid=7811> in the water
as the dark eve fell, I caught him, Gollum.' . Author: Avon
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 19
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-24 09:49:14 Score: 3
Excellent. Even the brevity of the form communicates how little power of
abstract thought Aragorn has left in this journey; he's become just Gollum's
capture with limited articulated feelings. You really capture the whole
experience - every sense and impression.

Title: New
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13198> Home .
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble . ID: 20
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-24 09:52:09 Score: 2
Excellent job. With so few words you still captured and communicated
Beregond's doubt, hope, guilt, and relief, and so much of Bergil's simple
self-centered boyhood thoughts - what am I going to do here? What's in it
for me?

Title: Links
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8126> . Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble . ID: 23
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-24 09:55:34 Score: 3
Great. The whole drabble meanders up to that very forceful and poignant end.
I particularly liked "Pendulum," though - hypnotizing. You've made a lot out
of a powerfully simple idea and, personnaly, it's nice to see Frodo
acknowledging Boromir.

Title: Five Things <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2103245/1/> That Never
Happened to Faramir & Eowyn . Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 39
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
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9> . 2005-04-24 13:30:23 Score: 2
Oh, I *love* these.
These are gorgeous snapshots - all heartbreaking to one extent or another,
number three particularly - and they tend to linger in my head, making me
glad (at very odd moments) that none of these things *did* happen.
Perfect.

Title: Kindred
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12146> Spirits .
Author: annmarwalk
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7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 106
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> . 2005-04-24 13:38:41 Score: 3
I found this particularly touching - Gandalf musing on what it would be like
to have a child- because he would, wouldn't he?
And I love the notion that Gandalf considers Faramir to be the son he will
never have. Makes me wonder if Faramir has any idea...

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8772>
White City . Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble . ID: 21
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-25 10:23:04 Score: 2
Very nice; your language flows easily and clearly. It's nice to have a
tender background story and this little glimpse into a more complicated
Beregond.

Title: The Heirs of <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/heirsofisildurthe.htm>
Isildur . Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Genres: Humor: Drabble . ID: 24
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-25 10:26:03 Score: 2
Very cute and well imagined. I particularly like that you didn't take the
easy way out and use Aragorn, and to see Elrond as someone tired of
responsibility - a unique perspective.

Title: Olorin
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1127> I was in
my Youth In the West that is Forgotten . Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 25
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-25 10:28:14 Score: 2
Very nicely envisioned - both the unique perspective and the details. I
found the words a little crammed, however, even for a drabble.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3594&cid=13632> Protocol
of Princes . Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> . Genres: Humor: Drabble . ID: 26
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-25 10:36:49 Score: 2
Great! Eomer's self-seriousness and self-mocking are priceless! as is
Faramir's lighthearted playfullness. Your language is perfect and reads
effortlessly. Well done.

Title: The Terror of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3089> Buckland .
Author: Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 687
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-04-25 21:25:57 Score: 6
How do I praise this lovely piece? First off, I guess I could say, it's
real. Inkling presents a Shire that has as much depth, magic, goodness and
reality as the Professor's own. You really feel like she is describing a
real place that you could visit or live in. Her characters have depth and
you can tell she worked on the presentation of each and every one. They
almost walk off the page. The story line is both entertaining and compelling
and I challenge you to be able to put it down once you have started. All in
all, this is one of those stories that really brings the Shire to life in a
way that makes me want to live there. Thank you, Inkling!

Title: Flame of
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=24> the West .
Author: Altariel
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1> . Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette . ID: 1
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Reviewer: Marta
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> . 2005-04-26 20:19:25 Score: 4
This story had a nice feel to it. I can imagine Faramir and Aragorn having
just this kind of conversation, and it was nice to see them at least begin
politically. I had some quibbles, and in a way the pledging seemed redundant
(it didn't accpmplish anything more than Faramir accepting Aragorn's
kingship when he first woke up in the books, as Aragorn is not crowned king
yet), but the character interaction was nice nonetheless.

Title: Just
<http://homepage.ntlworld.com/matthew.adams1/personal/isabeau_drabbles.htm#c
hop> A Bit Of Chop . Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble . ID: 30
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke . 2005-04-29 16:17:45 Score: 3
Very humorous, and wonderfully folkloric - the soldier, the scholar, the
sailor - and a very appropriate torture! I can just imagine the various
'pissing contests' been going on between Eomer and Imrahil's boys
culminating in this one - getting Eomer really on their 'turf'. My only
complaint? Too brief!

Title: For
<http://homepage.ntlworld.com/matthew.adams1/personal/isabeau_drabbles.htm#s
eason> Everything There Is A Season . Author: Isabeau
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2> of Greenlea . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble . ID: 31
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-04-29 16:20:01 Score: 2
"Safely wed and heired" that clever and fresh turn of phrase alone is praise
worthy. A lovely little glimpse into the private lives of this family.

Title: Gathering the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3082> Pieces .
Author: Tehta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
5> . Races/Places: Elves: First Age . ID: 13
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:25:51 Score: 3
I found this reading of Maedhros to be compelling. He's so single minded.
And I like the view of everyone else that we get through his eyes. He's
appalling but we can also see why he's the way he is, for the author lets us
see that more than his body was broken by the way he was treated. The author
manages to convey a great deal of feeling with relatively few words.

Title: Sapphire
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2953> Aurae . Author:
Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> . Races/Places: Elves: Imladris . ID: 164
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Reviewer: daw
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6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:26:08 Score: 7
This story was beautiful and terrifying. For me, it had the same feel as a
Greek tragedy. The people of Athens knew the stories before they went to the
theater. They knew what was going to happen to Oedipus but they watched it
unfold in pity and fear. That's what I feel for poor Celebrian. And how
awful for Elrond to think that it was his stewardship of Vilya that exposed
Celebrian to the forces of evil.

The agony of everyone involved is described so well through the detail and
the dialogue. You make us feel it for ourselves. I am particularly struck by
how Celebrian comes across as a strong person, despite what's been done to
her. And her love for Elrond comes through so clearly too.

Elrond's temptation was deeply realized. How awful to have fought this
battle so many times, to think you've won, and to see if come again.

Title: Stability
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/KharessaBloodrose/Stability.htm> .
Author: kharessa_bloodroses
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=77
> . Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien . ID: 617
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:26:55 Score: 2
There are real characters and feelings here, evoked through dialogue and
events and thoughts. And there's a complete sense of story. This is a real
writer.

Title: How Legolas
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=394> Proved His
Bowmanship . Author: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . Genres: Adventure . ID: 8
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Reviewer: daw
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6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:28:01 Score: 3
This story is told in a manner that makes it feel like a legend, and that
seems right to me. The character of Legolas is nicely shown through his
serious devotion to his craft and his fearless behavior. The other
characters are richly realized also.

Title: Elven Song <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=571>
. Author: Jocelyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
3> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 66
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Reviewer: daw
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6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:28:22 Score: 10
This was a tense and moving story.

One scene I liked was the one of the council. It seems to me that everything
in that scene swirls around Thranduil. Remove him, and you have a group of
grieving, angry people, who nonetheless have good will toward one another
and can be reasoned with. But Thranduil is off the deep end. He never did
like some of the people here to start with. And Legolas's thoughts about him
are sadly accepting: this is just the way the king is and his son loves him
anyway.

Then later, after they capture Disaran, all of these people--who we
basically see as decent--feel grief and their reactions vary so. Some of
them, like the hobbits, comfort one another. Other want to hurt one another.
And in the extreme case of the crowd, threaten to descend into madness. But
even the guards who beat on Disaran share a bit of that particular feeling.

The ending ties up all the threads wonderfully. Legolas learns what happened
to each of his friends and how much he is loved. And they confront their
actions and try to come to terms with them. Even Disaran gets what's coming
to him.

But my favorite part was when Gimli lectures Legolas about what to do about
the sea longing. I have to tell you there were actually tears in my eyes
when Legolas realized that Gimli, the elf friend, will be allowed to go with
him so that the wishes his heart and his blood are both answered.

And the ending was lovely. I particularly liked Legolas's vision of Frodo as
young and innocent. Frodo's loss of the ability to live in peace in the
Shire again has always struck me as so tragic. He and Legolas have that in
common -- the loss of contentment in what formerly gave them deep joy.

Title: Captain of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3665> Guard . Author:
Arandil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
9> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 119
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:28:42 Score: 1
Nice characterization of Legolas. I liked his relationship with Thranduil
and Galion too.

Title: The Bow <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1276> . Author:
Space
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5> Weavil . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 161
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Reviewer: daw
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6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:28:58 Score: 3
Wonderful moment at the story's center where you change time frames. Nicely
and subtely done. You catch both the shift from Thranduil the son to
Thranduil the king and the shift from Greenwood to Mirkwood. And then we see
Thrnaduil the father and very satisfying it is too!

Title: Take the Little Ones
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1429> . Author: Space
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
5> Weavil . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 163
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:29:13 Score: 5
First, let me just say I was so deeply relieved that Erestor's children
survived that I can hardly tell you about it. I had to stop myself from
scrolling down to see. You built that tension very well.

Second, do you know Shelley's poem "Ozymandias"? It's about a statue that's
all broken and half buried in the sand and inscribed with the king's name
and a warning about how eternally powerful and wonderful he was. This
reminded me of that. And yet, I wonder if Erestor isn't also teaching a bit
of timidity. It's hard to balance all that, I think.

Title: Departing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2606> . Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings . ID: 183
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:29:30 Score: 1
Nice portrayal of a turning point in the history of ME and the elves.

Title: The Confused
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4619> Elf . Author: Kenaz
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
4> . Genres: Humor: Metafic . ID: 187
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:29:51 Score: 1
This was funny and my sympathies are entirely with Haldir!

Title: Serious <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1633>
Trouble . Author: Karenator
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
> . Genres: Humor: Children . ID: 216
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:30:06 Score: 10
You do a wonderful job with the first person POV. You give us Daeron's
personality by showing us his thought and words, and he certainly is a
handful!

The families are also nicely done. We can see the older brothers and
Daeron's naneth emerging nicely. Thranduil is his intimidating self. Daeron
and Legolas have courage if they cross him regularly.

Your use of first person helps to build suspense too. You really let us
experience what it felt like to be these kids, to see that something in
going on and not know what it is.

Legolas was very bad to put that spider on his poor cousin who had trusted
him and confided in him! I was originally thinking "boys!" but then the
whole family got in on the act. It's actually nice to see some hilarity in
the royal family. And why is it that Daeron is so afraid of spiders but can
pick up beetles?

And the Dwarves in the woods were great. They were so dwarven, scratching
their chins with their axes and so on, but boy did they give good advice.
Too bad the men didn't take it, but it might have been too late for them
anyway.

I liked the way that after the rescue Daeron and Legolas see their brothers
and Thranduil in a new light: as dangerous warriors. And the talk about what
it means to kill as a warrior was properly sobering. No careless glory here.

I cheered when I saw that this story was continuing. Daeron is certainly
learning some hard lessons, and I don't mean how to do laundry. I've
wondered about that bond to a parent too. Perhaps Daeron feels it but
doesn't know it because he's never been without it. Maybe it's like feeling
your heart beat. A spouse is different because the couple forms that bond,
and the same thing with the bond of the parent to the child. The parent
feels the difference when it starts. But the child has always had it.

Daeron's fear was touching, and he does seem to have made peace with his
brother, at least for a while. I like the way you show us the reactions of
the adults even when Daeron can't quite make them out.


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Msg# 5089

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 5 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:08:57 Topic ID# 5089
Title: The Scruff
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=364> Factor . Author:
jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> . Genres: Humor: Aragorn . ID: 293
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=293>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:30:18 Score: 2
This was highly entertaining. The way the twins outthink themselves is
hilarious. All of the characters are well done and the humor is carried out
through the whole thing. Excellent.

Title: Dancing in the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3025> Darkness .
Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 476
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=476>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:30:38 Score: 5
This was beautiful and primitive and very elfy. I love seeing Celeborn tell
his grandchildren these tales. They help me too, to see how these farflung
events might have felt to those who lived through them and long after.

There's lots of little phrasing here that takes these actions out of the
ordinary: the twins walking "as if they didn't own their own bodies,"
Celeborn "feeling" the stars move. There's a bodily knowledge here that's
different from Elrond's lore.

The parallel between the twins and Celeborn's tatoo was nicely drawn.


Title: Seeds of Old
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4440> Trees . Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 478
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=478>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:30:51 Score: 2
Lovely story. I'm so glad that Galadriel let her anger go. I liked the
seeds. I see where the title comes from and the suggestion of things beyond
trees.


Title: With Friends
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1094> Like These .
Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 621
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=621>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:31:08 Score: 10
I liked both halves of this story. In Greenwood, I liked the scene with
Legolas and the wolf cubs, although the parents never seem to have found
out. And the twins didn't believe him about the spiders apparently. You
could see all the plot threads building so that everything was going to come
crashing down on Legolas at once. And he is a very believable kid, a nice
mix of trouble and uncertainty.

Interesting twin stuff. I liked the phantom pain that Elrohir was
experiencing and Elrond's complete lack of scruples in blackmailing him into
chewing the leaves. Sometimes you have to deal with kids on their own level.

Taniquel kisses Elrohir and his brother wonders how he does it! That's
great. I hope Elrohir continues to have such charm with maidens. And his
desire to be an individual was understandable. It must be tough, although
comforting, to always have someone else there.

In the scenes in Rivendell, Legolas really shows a finely developed
conscience. Thranduil should be proud of him, even if he does have to learn
not to be so hard on himself. I like your good Ada Thranduil.

Now the troll stuff was scary. I was struck by how nicely you advanced this
chapter with dialogue and actions. It came alive. It was shown, not told.
Really, really nicely done.

Loved the picture of the two fathers both worried enough that they can't
sleep. Elladan must be petrified by now. Legolas and Elrohir were very lucky
not to be really hurt or even killed.

These three did themselves proud by taking their medicine like "men" so to
speak. And then Elrohir apparently chose just the right confidante. Good for
Glorfindel. He's right. The message got across and that's what matters
anyway.



Title: Along Came A
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2808> Spider . Author:
Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 622
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=622>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:31:25 Score: 6
I liked the sudden arrival of Legolas -- straight from patrol but having to
report to his father. It gave a sense of life going on elsewhere that was
strange in the midst of Elrohir's suffering.

You have realistic details here that make the story more gripping -- the
fresh buising, for instance, or the cracked lips. And then later, as Elrohir
is healing, there's such a sense of realism, as if I'm seeing a real pair of
brothers move out of the infirmary and try to pick their normal lives up
again. You're patient enough to give us enough but not too much so that we
grow tired of it.

I always like to hear about the eagles. Those kind of talking, cooperating
animals are so other-worldly and magical.



Title: Namarie, <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=78>
Elessar . Author: Joanna
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings . ID: 746
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=746>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:31:53 Score: 1
Well written and moving depiction of a significant moment.

Title: Renewal <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3162>
. Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 883
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=883>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:32:06 Score: 2
I truly love the way your Celeborn thinks about Galadriel, Bodkin. "The
sweet greeness of her." What a lovely phrase. And I like the way they are
all dreaming of the ones who have gone before them.


Title: Dragons or
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1963> Ribbons .
Author: Joanna
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
5> . Genres: Humor: Children . ID: 443
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=443>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-04-29 19:32:35 Score: 1
This was hilarious! What a good "uncle" Legolas is.

Title: Alchemy
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=12767> . Author:
Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry . ID: 168
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=168>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-04-30 23:38:38 Score: 2
I normally don't much care for poetry, either RL or Tolkien-based. But this
is an exceptional piece - the fire of creation, the artistic process, all
captured beautifully in this poem about the master-craftsman of the Noldor.

Title: Flame of
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=24> the West .
Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> . Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette . ID: 1
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=1>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-01 00:00:10 Score: 2
One of my favorite fanfic stories with Aragorn and Faramir: understated yet
heavy with emotion, and ending in hope. A pleasure to read and re-read.

Title: Requiem for
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3859> Boromir .
Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 6
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=6>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-01 00:10:07 Score: 3
A Tolkienesque scene that we never got to see in ROTK; very well told. I
particularly admired the verses sung by Faramir for Boromir; they sounded
almost as if JRRT had written them himself, and were a great reminder of
Faramir's interest in music and lore....

Title: Adraefan <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4097>
. Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> . Genres: Alternate Universe . ID: 448
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=448>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-01 00:13:28 Score: 5
A sprawling epic tapestry that takes a quasi-Homeric look at the Boromir
Lives! genre of AU fanfiction. And it works; thanks to the whoosh-bang
pacing, alternating with pathos and quiet moments, and the author's
considerable flair for conveying both pain and humor. The basic humanity of
Boromir, the hobbits, Faramir, even the exiled Elves, is never forgotten.
And the scenes in Barad-dur, and the flashbacks to Boromir's torment there,
are terrifyingly vivid, yet not gratuitious...

Title: The Mark of a... <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1315>
Warrior? . Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID: 133
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=133>
Reviewer: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . 2005-05-01 03:03:08 Score: 3
One of the funniest pieces I've read in FFnet - or anywhere, for that
matter. OK, so it may be what some people might call as "potty humor", but
it was damn funny anyway. As I see it, it's only logical that males of all
species would act this way - I know my brothers do. I only hoped that
Gandalf would participate too... Oh, well, you can't have everything.

Title: A <http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=288>
Chief's Day . Author: Ruby
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
2> Nye . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire . ID: 892
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=892>
Reviewer: Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98
> . 2005-05-01 13:09:49 Score: 4
There is such a heartwrenching sense of hopelessness here, but Lotho doesn't
realise it quite yet, or doesn't let himself. He stubbornly plods on
insisting to himself that he has things well in hand, that things are going
according to his plan, when in reality all is far beyond his control and he
is miserable, and I think has tipped over into actual insanity. Very nice
characterisation of Lotho here, pimples and all. I almost felt sorry for the
poor fellow.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1581&NGID=42>
Wizard and His Pupil . Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor . ID: 53
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=53>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-01 20:52:45 Score: 3
A lovely, understated story. I can't imagine this magical, bittersweet
moment being described any better. Gandalf and Faramir are very much in
character, and the reader can feel the mutual fondness and respect they have
for one another...

Title: Raven and
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=141> Gold .
Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 52
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=52>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-01 20:56:41 Score: 1
A short but sweet snapshot of one of my favorite moments in ROTK. Well done!

Title: No Peace for
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4226> the Living .
Author: faramir_boromir
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
0> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor . ID: 613
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=613>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-01 21:00:58 Score: 3
A great short story that beautifully blends Faramir's sorrow and loneliness
with his determination to prepare for Aragorn's rule. Faramir's errand to
the place of his father's death to find the crown for the Returned King is
skillfully written.

Title: Debbie Does the
<http://www.geocities.com/GypsieRose3000/DDTTTIndex.html> Two Towers .
Author: Gypsie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
2> Rose . Genres: Humor . ID: 896
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=896>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-01 21:05:56 Score: 1
Great parody! Will there be any male left in M-e who has not enjoyed
Debbie's favors by the time she, and you, are done?

Title: Hand in Hand <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2057941/1/> . Author:
illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 888
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=888>
Reviewer: Cuthalion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
7> . 2005-05-02 03:57:49 Score: 7
This is one of the most beautiful and heartbreaking stories about a young
Frodo, his uncle/ cousin Bilbo and their reaction when Frodo's parents die.
Bilbo mets his latter heir on the funeral of Drogo and Primula Baggins and
watches the boy's grief:

"Something small and cold slid into my half-raised hand, and I froze.
Without looking down I could sense that it was someone's hand. Frodo's hand.
His clammy fingers gripped and tugged weakly at mine panic fear and went
limp trust relief when my hand closed protectively around them safe you are
safe I am here."

This precious little vignette is wonderfully written and sensitively told,
and it lasts in the mind of reader for days - a proof for the art of the
author to unravel feelings and explain situation with an astonishing depth.
And again a proof how wonderful someone can be able to use a language
without being a native.

Title: Prayer
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=184> .
Author: illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 887
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=887>
Reviewer: Cuthalion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
7> . 2005-05-02 04:06:03 Score: 10
This was the very first tale I read by this author ( when I strolled through
the new entries of WOTM). And I ended up with a handkerchief, dabbing my
overflowing eyes and frantically typing an email to ask a totally strange
person if she would give me the permission to translate this little, tender
marvel into german.

It is told from Merry's POV; he sits beside the bed of his cousin Frodo who
has just been saved by the eagles. But it seems as if his heroic deed should
lead to a bitter end - Frodo doesn't wake up and gets weaker every day. His
friends seem to give up, and Merry seeks help where he never seeked it
before. But as time goes on, he doubts if he does his deeply beloved cousin
a real favor:

"Should I have done it differently? Should I say something other than my
own selfish pleas? Should put my lifetime happiness, my entire soul, my own
life as an offering? Should I, perhaps, start praying for myself, begging
for strength to find life when you are gone, asking for the courage to
accept your death with resignation and be glad over your release? I don't
know. I don't know. My world now is your face, thin and ravaged, before
me, and the words of my prayer, now frantic and mechanical."

Written with great love and understanding, and with an end that breaks the
reader's heart with a mixture of joy and sorrow. Utterly, utterly beautiful
(like weverything this enormously gifted author creates).

Title: Five Things <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2103245/1/> That Never
Happened to Faramir & Eowyn . Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 39
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=39>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-05-02 16:04:30 Score: 2
Interesting ... a very provocative perspective. I loved the curt but
descriptive style except for the opening line of several - too much like
reporting.

Title: Bittersweet
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1043&PHPSESSID
=466178cd3479a0f686f348cef575786a> . Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble . ID: 43
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=43>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-05-02 16:06:47 Score: 1
Uneasy about this one; it is lovely but doesn't ultimately amount to much -
doesn't say anything new.

Title: Dark
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9911> Memory .
Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 46
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=46>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-05-02 16:09:36 Score: 3
Nice; a deceptively simple scene in which a great deal is told about
friendship and the two men involved. This is an excellent example of a
drabble since it accomplishes so much within the framework of the form. Also
loved your characterizations.

Title: There
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1129> And Back
Again . Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble . ID: 51
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=51>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-05-02 16:16:07 Score: 2
Ho Ho! Nicely done. Your style is so easy it doesn't ever feel like a
drabble, per se. Bilbo's character is, in my opinion, spot on and very
amusing. Well done.

Title: Raven and
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=141> Gold .
Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 52
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=6&form_story_filter=52>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-05-02 16:17:49 Score: 1
Very sweet. Very simple yet your characterizations are clearly drawn even so
briefly. Well Done.


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Msg# 5090

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 6 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:09:36 Topic ID# 5090
Title: The
<http://www.sweetdreamssanctuary.net/sanctuary/viewstory.php?sid=7> World
Within · Author: Minuialeth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=42
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete · ID: 978
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=7&form_story_filter=978>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-02 21:06:15 Score: 6
This unique tale has a hypnotic rhythm that strongly reflects the author's
brilliant capturing of the simple point of view of her not-so-simple human
protagonist. Minuialeth's deceptively complex style delves deeply to bare
the soul with simple questions and simple observations that create deep and
complex thoughts rather than simple answers..

"Behold as the butcher pats the darkest amongst the herd and whispers
endearments of beauty as the trembling sheep stares into its reflection in
the pool of blood.”

both exquisite and terrifying. ... the dark truth, the agony of unrequited
love, the pain of bowing to those known to be better than yourself. The
denial of our utmost yearnings, the eventual fall - we can only hope.




Title: Campdóm and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2931> Lufian · Author:
Drake/Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
0> CoAuthors · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1039
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-05-04 09:07:00 Score: 2
I enjoyed both the style and content of this co-written story. It was
cleverly woven by each author from the different points of view to create a
full and flavorful whole. Well done.

Title: Home Indeed
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3379> · Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1045
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-05-04 09:13:02 Score: 2
This is my favorite kind of story, that enriches the world around what we
already know. I very much enjoyed seeing the home-life of Father Eomer, and
how he enjoys his wife and family.

Title: Novice <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2677>
Rider · Author: Eokat
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7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1048
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-05-04 09:16:31 Score: 2
Wonderful!! It is so very nice to find another horse-focused story, they are
much too under-used in this fandom that is so rich in the Rohirric culture.
Very nice portrayal. Thank you for writing!!

Title: Servant of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2574> Elbereth ·
Author: Beethoven's
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9> 7th · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 796
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-05-04 09:26:40 Score: 2
What a lovely little villain, and yes, it does help to explain some things
that seemed to otherwise be glossed over. Keep up the good work.

Title: May the Valar
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1> Protect Them ·
Author: Nilmandra
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4> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 1055
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · 2005-05-04 20:35:33 Score: 10
This is an absolutely wonderful story of an ordinary Elf-woman doing
extraordinary things because she loves and is brave. It has a gripping plot,
realistic characters, and some fabulous moments along the way.I cannot tell
you how moving I found the Solstice ceremony, for instance. It joined the
mourning and hope of individuals and a whole community. Very nicely done.

I also liked the scenes between Thranduil and Lathron. Thranduil comes
through as a caring parent fumbling his way toward a child who is not easy
for him to understand, but who still finds a place in his heart. And I
really liked how the elves deliberately made themselves as menacing as
possible while questioning the leader of the caravan, particularly the
detail of Sadron and Laerion being so close behind that he could feel their
body heat.

And I love the images of baby Legolas playing and laughing. For him, the
world is very small. It's the people around him and that means the world is
a good place.

And right to the end, I feel for Tathiel. After caring for them so long, the
children must feel like her own, particlarly Legolas, given that she nursed
him. But Rawien is so tender with her that I'm sure she'll find joy too.

Thank you for this wonderful story, Nilmandra. It is exciting and moving. It
picks up major themes and still shows the daily events that are important to
those who live through them. Your battle scenes and family scenes are
equally effective.

Title: History <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=6>
Lessons · Author: Nilmandra
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4> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion · ID: 1056
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Reviewer: daw
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6> the minstrel · 2005-05-04 20:58:19 Score: 10
One of the most original parts of this story is the double time frame. That
is just a brilliant idea. And it makes sense, given the deathlessness of
elves. Nothing like getting history from the horse's mouth. The Third Age
twins are very engaging but throughout this story, it's the First Age events
that I find most gripping. The story shows the depth of your research and
real care in structuring it for us.

The character who stands out is of course Elrond. His adult understanding of
his parents' choice was poignant. No child could be expected to understand
and forgive an adult who abandoned him, but the adult the child becomes
can.The contrast between Elrond's childhood and the one he gives his sons is
poignant. You give us sweaty Glorfindel, mischievous twins, harrassed
Erestor, and elf sex before you even get to the sons of Feanor.

And Maedhros is scary. I like your explanation for why Madros finally
decided to act and return the twins to their own people - it's possible that
Maedhros would have harmed them now that they were of no more use to him. He
would have regretted it afterwards, but he might have done it anyway.

Elrond continued to move me even as he grew toward adulthood. He is so
earnest and so hard on himself. In him, you can really see the lore master
of Imladris who shelters those who need it, especially the heirs of Isildur,
his brother's descendents. It's like he gives to everyone else the stability
and shelter that he missed as a small child and may never have thought he
deserved later.One of the many things I like about this story is that Elrond
now has Celebrian to comfort him for his sense of loss over Elros. It makes
me very sad that he will lose her too, but at least he will find her again.

One of the touching aspects of this is how different Elrond and Elros are
and yet how loyal they are to one another. Neither one seems to feel he has
to say that the other's way is less worthy.

I would never even attempt to write about something as sweeping and mythic
in stature as this battle. And I actually teared up at the sound of the call
of the Valar and the idea that Elros and Elrond heard both calls. The
glimpse of the Feanorians was strangely moving. What a tragedy that all was.

The choice was so painful and Elrond just did not have a clue about what was
coming. I also really liked seeing Gil-galad, Celeborn, and Elrond decide
that they had things they wanted to do yet in Middle-earth. The whole scene
was epic - mountains crashing, floods drowning the land, and the powers that
be trying to decide how to work out the practicalities of dealing with what
they had wrought.

In general, you brought so much of The Silmarillion alive for me in a way I
don't think I could have done for myself. And you have given Elrond a depth
that is so enriching. It colors my view of him now. What a tragic and yet
deeply good person he is. This is just an amazing achievement.


Title: History <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1007>
Lessons: The Second Age · Author: Nilmandra
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4> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 1057
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Reviewer: daw
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6> the minstrel · 2005-05-05 10:59:42 Score: 10
There are a lot of canon things in this story that are worked out in quite
believable ways. I really liked the section about Glorfindel. The tapestries
were a great device for recapping the story and for letting us see that time
has passed while he's been in the Halls of Mandos. His awakening was also
very interesting. IHis joy in just existing in a body is wonderful.

Cirdan is amusing. He has no time for silliness but is so utterly
trustworthy. And despite his gruffness, he loves Gil-Galad, Elrond, and
Elros. I liked the idea that Glorfindel's innocence made him transparent to
the trustworthy.

Annatar is so seductive and creepy. Even his good looks will prejudice
people in his favor. He's so oily and slick and just strange! The scene
where he is working on the rings is wonderful. Celebrimbor makes me want to
slap him even though I know bad things are going to happen to him.

The moment when Galadriel approaches Elrond about using the rings was an
intriguing one. I can see her doing it. And I can see Celeborn being
worried. In general, the stuff about the rings is well done. When we read
LOTR, the rings of power are just given facts and we know about them, but
when you put yourself in the place of the people just learning about them,
you have to wonder how they ever figured them out. No one knew about them,
after all. They were a new threat. And usually with new threats, you only
know how bad they are after it's too late to do you any good. The
description of their making and the meanings of the stones was wonderful.

I thought this was a compelling and terrible picture of war, told through
the young eyes of Erestor. I liked watching Gil-galad confer with his
advisors and decide, with great difficulty, to send Elrond. I am just
riveted by this picture of the Second Age which has never before seemed very
compelling to me.

I loved the finding of the valley of Imladris -- I thought that was
exciting! It was like seeing history at work. We know what Imladris meant
for millennia after this, so to see it being found was just thrilling. Go
Erestor!

I also liked the inclusion of the children -- their presence showed
something about how horrible the war was without you having to belabor the
point. Also I liked the way Glorfindel took them on and cared for them, and
then they turned up as adults in the camp.

I love the way you've brought the seige of Imladris to life and also the
problems of dealing with this mixed population of elves and men. They'd each
have things to find out about the other.

This was truly wonderful, Nilmandra. You've made it all come alive and
anchored it to the quiet, strong figure of Elrond, who struggles along doing
what's right. I

Title: Swan
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4204&NGID=286>
Flight · Author: AmandaK
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9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 84
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Reviewer: Raksha
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8> the Demon · 2005-05-07 03:03:08 Score: 2
Boys will be boys, even the well-instructed sons of Denethor. Nice
characterisation of the young brothers; showing Boromir's reckless,
impulsive nature and Faramir's more cautious temperament. And Denethor is
also well-written.

Title: Just
<http://homepage.ntlworld.com/matthew.adams1/personal/isabeau_drabbles.htm#c
hop> A Bit Of Chop · Author: Isabeau
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2> of Greenlea · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 30
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · 2005-05-07 03:09:07 Score: 1
I loved this piece - short and sweet and very funny. Poor, poor Eomer!

Title: Noble <http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=6>
Jewel · Author: Isabeau
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2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 741
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Reviewer: Raksha
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8> the Demon · 2005-05-07 03:13:30 Score: 3
I'm usually pre-disposed to indifference towards original characters; and
normally would avoid a story whose characters are all-original, not to
mention a story where a connection to a canon-character is made with an
OC...But NOBLE JEWEL is just so compelling and well-written that it took me
along for a wonderful ride. Sigh. Very enjoyable!

Title: The Heirs of <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/heirsofisildurthe.htm>
Isildur · Author: Marta
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> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 24
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Reviewer: Raksha
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8> the Demon · 2005-05-07 03:17:53 Score: 2
Very cute and funny, without making Elrond too commonplace a character. But
even a wise Elf (or half-Elf) can be fuzzy if awakened too quickly or
early...

Title: Realizations
<http://home.earthlink.net/%7Eamebrindrastories/id8.html> · Author:
amebrindra
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Reviewer: Legorfilinde
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> · 2005-05-07 16:57:42 Score: 6
The first time I read Realizations I was absolutely blow away. I could not
believe what an indepth insight Amebrindra had into the young and innocent
lives of Elladan and Elrohir. This was such an emotionally heartrending
account of their first real seperation and their dire need for one another.
She had me in tears as I read through their ordeal and then she filled me
with joy as they were reunited. Amebrindra made these characters come to
life with a vibrancy that is uncanny. They became very real for me; as real
as if I knew them personally and felt each sorrow and joy with them. This is
an excellent piece of creative writing and the others stories in this arc
are even more incredible. --Legorfilinde

Title: Ode to <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1928297/1/> Legolas · Author:
Ainaechoiriel
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· Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 5
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-08 19:23:38 Score: 2
Interesting filk. It might be better if the third line of the second stanza
was a syllable longer, but other than that it was really enjoyable.

Title: Dawn <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=643> ·
Author: Acacea
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6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 251
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-09 18:44:06 Score: 10
"In his own mind, he was there to acquit himself of sins he himself was not
sure of. But sins there must be, his weary mind had told him. Sins committed
long before unknowingly, sins committed recently, knowingly, and worst of
all the sin of dreaming a dream that brought nothing but sorrow in its
wake."

This has to be one of the best lines I've read in the stories nominated this
year (to date, at least). It is entirely true: when something goes wrong, it
is human nature to look for something that *we* did wrong, because then if
we change that thing we do, bad stuff will stop happening to us. Of course
it just does not work that way, but it is the most natural thing in the
world to think that way.

Personally, I belong to the school of thought that Denethor really loved
Faramir. He did not do such a good job of showing it to him at least in the
course of the books. With everything else that was going on (the death of
Boromir, Denethor's mental decline due to his use of the palantír, et
cetera), not to say anything about the stress of being the two most powerful
men in a country on the horizon of a war, where that country's very survival
is at stakes.

Anyway, it is so sad that Faramir needed Éowyn to make him want to return
from war. Understandable, though. At the end, even if Denethor loved him, I
do not think that Faramir necessarily realized it. They were both screwed up
by that point. You did a fine job of getting all of this across, in so few
words and in an entertaining fashion.

Title: On the <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1836>
Flood · Author: Acacea
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6> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 284
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-09 20:20:42 Score: 5
This story had a nice feel to it, sort of like Alawa's "A Jewel in the
Crown". Your original character narrator was just so fully developed. He had
a back story that seemed to extend beyond the limits of the screen, somehow.
Sort of how the props department for the LOTR movies put so much much effort
into things that might never be seen on screen, but gave the set a feel of
realism.

Your OC character was delightful. The riddle about the frogs (one my uncle
also told me) was a very nice touch, and I loved the infusion of politics
and strategy. All in all, a very enjoyable read.

Title: Raven and
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=141> Gold ·
Author: Acacea
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6> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 52
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-09 20:52:33 Score: 4
"He spoke to her of a garden they would build across the river."

There's something magical about this last line. I can't really pinpoint what
it is, exactly, but it just seems such a beautiful and fitting conclusion to
this drabble.

I am not a natural romantic ;-) but I can feel Faramir's love for her. That
may be why I like this line so much: because it's such a practical thing,
and yet effused with emotion all the way through. Well done!

Title: The Riders
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2236> from Erech ·
Author: Acacea
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6> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company · ID: 325
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-09 21:28:43 Score: 4
I really love gapfillers -- the more obscure, the better. It's the reason I
first came to fan fiction, because I want to explore these scenes that
Tolkien never seemed to find the time to write. This isn't a scene that I
particularly ever wanted to write myself, but I loved how you told it.
Angbor -- who was never more than a name to me before I read this -- became
three-dimensional. You told this moment skillfully, and his fear was
palpable. Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Title: Words <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2066>
Unsaid · Author: Acacea
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6> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 55
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-09 23:11:55 Score: 7
It is rare that a piece, especially one this short, moves me to tears -- but
this one did.

You have captured all the poignancy of the relationship between Denethor and
Faramir, and in less than one thousand words. And you have also shed some
light on their family history. Finduilas offering advice to Boromir and
Faramir. Denethor failing to express his love and commitment to Finduilas
like he might like. Denethor regretting sending Faramir out unthanked, and
at the same time he vows not to fail Faramir again.

The greatest thing about this vignette, though, is that it makes sense of
the insensible, at least as much as anything could: Denethor's suicide. And
it makes sense, not by appealing to Denethor's pride, but to his love for
Faramir. (Which I think really did exist, even if it was not as strong or at
least as obvious as his love for Boromir.) You have done a fine job of
getting into what is certainly a very cryptic mind.

Title: Dance of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3312> Terrible Grace
· Author: Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 57
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-09 23:22:17 Score: 2
I really like your story. Too often Legolas is reduced to a bit of a pansy,
but here we see him in all the fury of his Wood-elf glory. Shades of
Celeborn, even. Well done.

Title: Mariner's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3199> Son · Author:
Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 326
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-09 23:46:29 Score: 6
Another enjoyable scene. it's nice to see a new perspective on the great
events of the First Age. Hobbits really do shed new light on such things!
But I think my favourite thing about this vignette is the treatment of
Elrond. So often we get men-are-weak!Elrond, all gloom and doom like he is
portrayed in the recent movies. But here you give him humanity (or elfanity,
I suppose -- you know what I mean, you make him more approachable). He is a
character who generations of young heirs of Isildur (to say nothing of his
own children) would find approachable.

Thank you for this illuminating moment. I never thought how Bilbo might feel
about Aragorn's comment, but this is a nice peak into an area of
Middle-earth lore that I had not considered before.

Title: Opening <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2650>
Doors · Author: Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 359
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-10 01:14:58 Score: 10
There are many things about this story that I could comment on (and a story
like this certainly deserves the points), but I think my favourite part is
probably the fact that Narvi is female. Finally another author who takes
Gimli's words seriously that dwarf-women were often mistaken for dwarf-men.
Not that dwarves of either gender get nearly enough treatment in fan
fiction, but when they are, it is too often assumed that all dwarves we meet
are male. For all we know any of Bilbo's companions could have been female
(Now, there is a challenge! Though I think Tolkien probably meant them to be
male.), and certainly 1/3 of the original character dwarves we create should
be female.

But you have taken the superb challenge of writing femslash between a dwarf
and a Noldor. I'm not sure you could create a more challenging pairing than
we're given here. The Noldor, because there's all of 'Laws and Customs of
the Eldar' that you have to take into account when justifying the slash (and
in this case Galadriel is married, which makes everything even more
complicated, in light of Finwe and Miriel). And the dwarf, because they are
widely considered asexual. How many Gimli romances would there be if not for
Gimli/Legolas slash? Not many, I don't think.

And yet, somehow you pull this off in this piece. I'm really not sure how
you manage it, but we likes it. The erotica works. At times it feels a bit
extraneous to the plot, but that depends on how you view the plot. If it is
just about the construction of the Doors of Moria... well, that is the
obvious plot, but it is also a tad simplistic. If, on the other hand, it is
about Narvi's embracing of a culture besides her own, the romance is very
central. It is interesting to read a story that operates on two levels like
this one does. I cannot wait to read the sequel -- which I will do as soon
as I can find the time.

Title: Walls and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4166> Gates · Author:
Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL · Genres: Romance · ID: 1041
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-10 02:27:50 Score: 9
This piece was very nice. In some ways it was better than the prequel --
there were more details than Elven culture (and Dwarvish culture for tht
matter), which I really liked. And I loved the cast of characters,
especially Cadie. She was delightful and I would love to see more of her.

But the emotional impact of Narvi's falling out with Galadriel seemed cut
short. I felt like I needed more to get her (Narvi) from her very realistic
anger at being manipulated (so she thought) by Galadriel, to her willingness
to stay in Ost-in-Edhil. It seems like she just caves, and it seemed
out-of-character for a Dwarf, especially a Dwarf of the character that you
created throughout this pair of stories.

I also wanted more. Maybe there should be another piece in the series (if
there isn't already -- if there is, please let me know where I can find it!)
I would love to see the relationship between Celebrimbor and Celeborn
explored in more depth. And Celebrimbor's relationship to the Moriquendi,
there seemed to be a lot of material you could develop through that. Would
Noldor or Moriquendi be more willing to reside permanently in Narvi's
fortress, and how would that affect the other's impression of them? And
Galadriel and Narvi... they need to rebuild that relationship.

Just a thought. *evil grin*


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Msg# 5091

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 7 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:10:13 Topic ID# 5091
Title: Fear <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=421> ·
Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 688
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Reviewer: Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> · 2005-05-10 02:37:27 Score: 10
This is an ambitious, complex, and deeply absorbing story, weaving together
two major story lines and several subplots. It’s all here: a large cast of
memorable characters, heart-felt emotions, serious themes, a wealth of
background material…the things that bring a story to life!

The characterizations—both canon and original—are all first-rate. Albarus
Clearwater is the villain you love to hate, one of the few evil doctors I
have encountered in fiction. The thoughtfully portrayed Drogo is the father
you wish every child could have; I kept longing for him to return and set
everything, and everyone, to rights. Just one of the qualities of the story
that made it seem Dickensian to me…

In between are many characters painted in nuanced shades of grey. The
disagreeable Dody is gradually revealed as a deeply troubled youth who wins
our sympathy, while his stepmother, Marietta, turns out not to be the witch
Dody sees her as—though neither is she an angel. Ariel has a talent for
revealing a character’s many facets…for example, managing to make Menegilda
likeable to the reader, even though she and Drogo loathe each other.

Frodo’s strength of character is revealed in so many little ways: his
perception that Dody’s neglect presents an opportunity, his determination to
“fix” his problems with his mother, and above all his refusal to wallow in
self-pity,

The description of Brandy Hall is marvelous; I could picture it perfectly.
And Ariel captured very well the nuances of the hobbits’ social class
system…healers are not working class, but neither are they gentry.
“Primula…retained a distance that Daisy found strangely reassuring.”

I mentioned serious themes, and there are several: alienation, parental
fear, and child abuse. Ariel does a masterful job of capturing the
destructive dynamic between abuser and victim. Especially horrifying was the
idea that Dody was trying to goad his father into beating him to death. And
what a chillingly believable portrait of an abuser—from the eagerness in his
voice beforehand to his creepy repentance afterwards.

While there are many dark moments, the story ends on a lovely note of hope
and redemption, in which everyone truly gets what they deserve and we are
able, for that moment at least, to suspend our knowledge of the sorrow and
loss that lie in Frodo’s future.


Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3086&cid=11963> Colors of
Passing · Author: Larner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 789
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Reviewer: Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> · 2005-05-10 02:39:27 Score: 7
What an emotional rollercoaster this little story is: by turns horrifying,
hopeful, and sad—that Aragorn’s light could bring Frodo back, but not
protect him from the pockets of darkness that lingered still—and yet, in the
end, still hopeful.

The brief, devastating glimpse of Frodo at the Sammath Naur is one of the
most powerful accounts of this famous scene that I have ever read, as this
incredible passage exemplifies: “The agony of his body is now seen as
exquisite pleasure; the agony of his soul as desire fulfilled. His friend is
now his enemy; the Enemy is merely a rival.”

The color symbolism is well done, but not overdone. As in all of Larner’s
stories, there is a nice and thoughtful attention to detail here. We know
that the scent of athelas is different for each person, but how does it
smell to Frodo? Larner tells us, and she has got it exactly right.


Title: Dreme <http://www.geocities.com/singeaddams/Dreme.html> · Author:
Singe
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1> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 858
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Reviewer: Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> · 2005-05-10 02:44:46 Score: 9
Within the first few lines of “Dreme” is a passage that gives you a pretty
good idea of what you’re in for: “Gandalf, a hard traveler who usually
looked like something a bear had caught in its fur…”

The quirky, irreverent humor of this story is just one of its many
charms—and moods. Like hobbits themselves, the off-hand, tongue-in-cheek
style of “Dreme” can be disarmingly deceptive…which makes the angst, when it
comes, all the more powerful by catching you unawares.

“This place was out of a fairy story,” thought Frodo, and so, too, seems
Singe’s prose at times. At one point it actually adopts that form outright,
as a tale Frodo is telling to himself in what is, perhaps, the story’s most
moving passage: “There once was a hero…” The significance of the counting is
devastating when it finally hits you.

For behind all the jabs at the “ridiculous clothes” and Frodo’s
hilarious—and yet touching—flirtation with Celebrian (“I seem to have lost a
finger in your hair” ) lurk some very serious themes of loss, survival, and
the power of memory, and a lovely final note of hope and renewal. This is
one of the most delightfully original Valinor fics I have yet to read…one
that leaves me, on every reading, all choked up but grinning like a fool.


Title: Foreshadowing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1588> · Author:
Zimraphel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
9> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 610
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-10 12:51:19 Score: 4
This is a hauntil tale. I was reminded of Galadriel's statement regarding
the mirror: "things that are, and things that were, and some things that
have not yet come to pass". This seems to fit Palantir's foresight that we
see in this piece. I loved seeing Miriel's fighting spirit, too -- too
often, I tend to view her as the passive victim. At least here she is
resisting Pharazôn, who even she sees is a negative influence.

Title: Making <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1786>
Verses · Author: Zimraphel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
9> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 611
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-11 03:44:37 Score: 4
Obviously Zimraphel couldn't have had Adina ATL's "The Mariner's Son" in
mind when she wrote this piece (at least I don't think she did, as the two
pieces are by different authors). But they do fit together into a nice pair.
Here we get the Elves' side of the story, their biting humour and mocking of
Bilbo. I especially loved the fact that Lindir *did* guess what was
Aragorn's addition -- how funny!

Title: What Cannot be
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2579> Undone ·
Author: Zimraphel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
9> · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 1013
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-11 14:07:40 Score: 2
Nice story -- it gives good insight into how the changes in Elrohir and
Elladan might have impacted the other residents of Rivendell.

Title: Good Enough
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3453> · Author:
Karenator
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
> · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 217
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · 2005-05-11 16:27:45 Score: 10
The most impressive part of this story is the changing first person point of
view. I think first person is hard to do at all, much less to catch the
voices a several characters and this story does that well.

The characters are worth catching too. We see serious Legolas and
not-so-serious Daeron, who is a complete hoot. And we see the older
brothers, who come across as devoted to the realm and to one another

I also liked the clever and often humorous use of language. So for instance
we get Daeron's suggestion that they claim "wood elf defense." That's
hilarious. And these two lines cracked me up:

Daeron sighed heavily. “You are so funny, Legolas,” he said dryly. “I can
hardly contain my laughter. You should ask your adar to assign you to court
jester.”


“I have,” I said. “He does not think I am very humorous.” As best as I could
with limbs as sturdy as straw, I punched my pillow up to raise my head.
“What else did this clean Elf say?”

And then I was completely enthralled by Daeron's report of his encounter
with the clean elf. Wow! What a wonderfully useful smart mouth. Daeron is
perceptive and cynical. What a great combination. It's interesting to
speculate if he has sight like the queen does.

I liked other small details too. I was struck by the finality of the wrist
band Aldamir wears. The fact that it marks him forever seems symbolic of the
way a warrior's experience must mark and change him forever. And I pictured
what it would be like for someone to find a body with this particular
bracelet: Aldamir Thranduilion. There's something touchingly simple about
that.



Title: Last Hope
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2296> · Author:
AfterEver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
2> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 64
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · 2005-05-11 16:28:06 Score: 2
Poor Gilraen. I know she is starting a different part of her life and that
it too can be interesting and rewarding, but she has lost her husband, her
hope of a new baby, and the continuity she could create by telling her son
about his father.


Title: You <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1993&cid=8580>
Ask Too Much · Author: LKK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 643
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=8&form_story_filter=643>
Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · 2005-05-11 16:28:36 Score: 1
Sometimes a drabble is just 100 words. Period. But this one is poetic in its
brevity and compression.

Title: Moriquendi:
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4752> The Gendered
Other in Tolkien Fanfiction · Author: adn_heming
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
0> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 58
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-11 22:43:29 Score: 3
I might argue with the author about whether a certain characteristic is
necessarily "feminine", but that's my feminism getting the better of me, I
think. But moving beyond that, this is a really fabulous essay. I do not
uread enough elf-centric fan fiction to know how prevalent this phenomenon
is, but you have provided a nice explanation of it.

Title: The Sacred
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4252> Warp of
Tolkien's Tapestry · Author: Wordweaver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
8> · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 609
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=8&form_story_filter=609>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-11 23:47:57 Score: 3
This was a nice essay -- the insights overall were nice, and the first half
or so was technically good as well. the second half (when the author been
exploring different Christ-figures) seemed to undercut the overall
structure. That said, it was a very nice read.

Title: 110 <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4427> ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 59
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=8&form_story_filter=59>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-12 00:36:46 Score: 2
This is a nice glimpse into Boromir's search for Imladris. I especially like
the blend of free verse and prose -- very effective way to capture Boromir's
growing desperation!

Title: Sight <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4380> ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 374
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-12 02:27:34 Score: 10
I have never read Plastic Chevy's story "The Captain and the King". It's a
personal thing; I cannot read 'Boromir lives!' stories, no matter how
masterfully written; it's the same reason why I can't bring myself to read
Adraefan, though from the reviews I have read it's a very good story, too.

Getting back to "Sight", I mention all of this because your piece worked
fine for me withoout ANY knowledge of Plastic Chevy's piece (except for the
fact that Boromir survives Amon Hen, which I gleaned from her summary). You
give just enough background information that the narrative functions on its
own, though I am sure I would have enjoyed it on a higher level if I was
familiar with the larger piece.

And you seem to have a real feel for how to make erotica "work". It was so
nice to see Boromir in a heterosexual relationship. Not that I am
necessarily against slash (I enjoy Boromir slash as much as the next girl
*evil grin*), but I do like the idea of him being able to settle down and
create a family. And I think, if Boromir did choose a wife, it would be
someone like Gil, who was very "real" if you know what I mean.

Which brings me to the other thing about this piece that makes it work so
good. Boromir is very strongly in character. Gil is the kind of woman who I
can see Boromir being attracted to, and every aspect of this piece is
uniquely Boromir. If the leading man was Faramir or Aragorn or Pippin or
whomever, it would all proceed so differently. Combined with a knack for
exposition without overwhelming the narrative, beautiful sensory detail, and
leaving just enough to the imagination (not over-explaining), this is
probably one of the best (canonical character)/OFC romance pieces that I
have ever read. Bravo! (And can I respectfully request more stories about
Boromir and Gil? Or even more romance pieces from you? You are so good at
this!)

Title: The Laughing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4456> Oliphaunt ·
Author: Aeneid
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1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 998
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-12 10:16:02 Score: 3
A nice piece -- both the drama and the humour were biting. And the OCs were
very original. I liked seeing what led up to Faramir's revealing his dream
to Boromir, and loved the way you used Gondorian history to develop the folk
lore of the laughing oliphaunts at Poros.

Title: At Losgar
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3732> · Author: Wild
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
7> Iris · Races/Places: Elves: Poetry · ID: 604
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-12 10:28:01 Score: 3
This poem is almost too beautiful and poignant for its gruesome subject
matter. The image of the Teleri ships being nothing but candles was
particularly haunting, especially when you consider that the Kinslaying only
contributed to the metaphorical darkness.

Title: Sercemaitë
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=548> · Author:
Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 382
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-12 12:25:02 Score: 3
I have never been in battle, but I imagine the confusion this story's
narrator exhibits is fairly characteristic; this story also did a
commendable job of getting across his naivete and his anger. I also liked
how you weaved in conflicts between the Noldor and more "primitive" Elves
such as the story's narrator.

Title: The <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=319>
Twilight · Author: Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 399
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=8&form_story_filter=399>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-12 13:39:50 Score: 4
This is an engaging story. More pieces should explore how Arwen's choice
effects her brothers. (I have seen other stories that deal with Elrond's
reaction, but this is the first one I have ever seen that touch on her
brothers at all). I particularly liked how you brought in the meaning of
Elladan and Elrohir's names, and how those might reflect their characters.

Title: Promises to
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2919> Keep · Author:
Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 169
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Reviewer: quirky_orthodox
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3> · 2005-05-12 17:45:20 Score: 8
Before I happened to fall into this fic, I was very suspicious of Original
Characters. Like many readers, I had seen one too many Mary-Sues paired off
with Legolas, Frodo or Aragorn to really have the motivation to read any
story even featuring an OC, let alone a story featuring only OCs.

Then I read this and had my perceptions turned upside down. Here were
characters with depth, realism and a humanity to them that was so refreshing
it spurred me to keep reading. The Author has had evidently taken the
trouble to exhaustively research and note down the backgrounds of her
characters. I was hooked both by the plot, which was clear and concise, and
by the wonderful little asides which hinted at so much more than what was
simply presented on the page.

The story was inside canon, but in a way I had never seen before, existing
just on the edges yet interacting with the tale of the Quest in a way I
found very pleasing. I have been formally converted to reading OCs because
of this story and its subsequent sequels. I honestly think that this is a
fanfic which could spawn its own fanfiction and that is certainly worthy of
praise.


Title: Dolor Meus
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=5032> · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 897
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Reviewer: riverotter7
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3> · 2005-05-12 18:39:17 Score: 9
When I first read the synopsis for this story it seemed rather banal. That
was, of course, before I read the story itself. This is one of those stories
that I would call "perfect". In my opinion, to subtract or add too many more
words would seriously detract from it's effectivness. Although short, the
use of emotion definatly moves the reader on multiple levels from the
ordinary to the sublime. This peice certainly does not need to be of 'epic
proportions' to be effective. Werecat has carried her charecters from their
orginal place in Middle Earth to the 14th century (give or take) of our own
world. Over on HASA, the author worried that this story might offend readers
due to religious content, but I heartily disagree that she should have
worried so. Most religons have both compassion and forgiveness as a basis
for their particular salvations. In the story, the author was able to convey
that forgiveness, and she gave compassion to a lost and lonely son. This
story made me weep in both pain for the singer and in joy for his return. I
thank the author for this wonderful story and am very pleased to nominate it
for an award.
Thank you.
Molly Littlefoot

Title: The Last Elf
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1465> Standing ·
Author: Suzene
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0> Campos · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 1124
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Reviewer: riverotter7
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3> · 2005-05-12 19:31:57 Score: 6
Bless it, I laughed myself off of my chair and rolled around on the rug for
awhile after reading this thing. This is one of those peices that I had to
print off and put in my very own personal hard copy file so I could re-read
it when I really needed a pick-me-up. These two noble elves of rather famous
lineage being petty and snarky with each other was marvelous! I do think
Tranduil did have a point when he mentioned his father and half of the army
vs Elrond's humiliation, though. Heh heh heh. The twins with drum sets,
groupies and a tour schedual; Arwen and the Sindarian kama sutra; Legolas
sent off with a dwarf. I did wonder just *how* it was that the river in
Mirkwood got that unusual repuation. Now I know. Hilarious!
Molly Littlefoot

Title: Circle
<http://www.frodosharem.org/cgi-bin/stories/display.cgi?id=330&sort=date&sto
ryview=toc&chapter=1&cat=7> of Light · Author: White
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=71
> Gull · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 1208
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-13 00:11:33 Score: 3
I really like this. It's a touching scene about the legacy of the Red Book.
I was a little confused, though, by how the Red Book had passed so
thoroughly into myth before Legolas leaves Middle-earth in FA 120. It might
work better, for example, if you changed the picture to Bilbo and the elf to
Elrohir or Elladan. But other than that, it's a nice little story.

Title: Remembrance <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1928301/1/> · Author:
Ainaechoiriel
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· Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 108
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-13 02:37:05 Score: 6
Often a drabble (or even a longber piece) will focus on the death of one of
the mortal members of the Fellowship; it's nice to see ones like this that
focus on the cumulative affect of ALL those deaths.

This is probably just a stylistic issue, but I find long paragraphs
intimidating. I would prefer that the author had utilised paragraph breaks,
perhaps before "Gandalf and I alone" and "Merry and Pippin will follow" (and
maybe even make "Grief is my burden; remembrance, my destiny" its own
paragraph). I almost think this would work better as a trio of drabbles,
focusing on the departure/death of: Frodo, Sam, and Gandalf; Merry and
Pippin; Aragorn, Legolas, and Gimli.

Hmm, maybe I'll have to do that series myself. See, the sign of a good
drabble: it makes me want to write my own. :-D

Title: Ailurophobia
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1662> · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Humor: Animals · ID: 115
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-13 14:23:54 Score: 6
This is a very funny story, and survives re-reading. I have probably read it
a dozen times and each time I end up laughing out loud by "We are hungry,
they said. Feed us, they demanded. Our young are starving, they growled." So
true! Any cat lover knows the shift from plaintive request to demand to
outright viciousness. I can *so* believe that cats would behave like this,
if they figured into Tolkien's mythology. And you've provided a plausible
explanation for his disappearance from canon, besides something like
"Tolkien grew tired of him".

It also plays in niceley with Beruthiel's cats being considered unnatural
and evil by the Gondorians. This story does make me feel for poor Huan,
though. Great big mutt, with all those cats carousing around Angband.



Title: Death,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3840&SPOrdinal=1
> I Call Thee · Author: Werecat
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> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 292
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-13 17:14:46 Score: 4
This piece does a very effective job of showing all the different viewpoints
in so few words. I especially like how the different viewpoints were so
similar. Though I am not sure that Gondorians would think of themselves as
loyal to the shards of Narsil, given that that is a relic of the North, and
Boromir says at the Council of Elrond that the tale of Narsil surviving was
never told in the South. All in all, though, this was a good piece.

Title: Touche <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3561>
· Author: DragonLady7
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9> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 229
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-13 18:29:47 Score: 5
Oh, now *this* is hilarious. Eomer's and Faramir's fencing match was vivid
in my mind (perhaps because I've seen my share), and Lothiriel's and Eowyn's
actions likewise made a lot of sense to me.

I was a little confused, though, about where Aragorn came from. For some
place I envisioned this taken place in Ithilien, and while that's not far
from Minas Tirith, there's really no indication of Aragorn being around.
Maybe this last part would work better if it was someone from Ithilien who
popped up there? Maybe Beregond?


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Msg# 5092

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 8 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:11:16 Topic ID# 5092
Title: Beast of <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2325>
Burden . Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst) . ID: 118
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-13 18:30:33 Score: 6
Your piece reminded me very strongly of a comment made by Aragorn in
Dunharrow to Eowyn, in "The Return of the King": "Then there will be need of
valour without renown, for none shall remember the deeds that are done in
the last defence of your homes. Yet the deeds will not be less valiant
because they are unpraised." You have made your OCs believable and
well-rounded, and that is truly remarkablwe in a horse. Yes, he is a hero;
he probably saved the town, and he showed that he could fight to the very
end. You wrote this without it ever seeing dull or slow, and the horse's POV
seemed distinctly non-human, but still very intelligent. I really enjoyed
this.

Title: In <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3011>
Absentia . Author: Zimraphel
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9> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 1010
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-13 18:34:27 Score: 8
This is a very well-told story where the author has taken the tantalizing
fragments Tolkien gives us (largely in secondary sources like "Unfinished
Tales"), and has woven this into a full picture. Nay, not just a picture --
a tapestry, woven with bright colours and yet dulled by the passing years,
its edges perhaps a little frayed but its glory still in tact. Elrond and
Valandil are understated as lords on less-than-friendly terms might be (and
you never forget that they are lords, no matter how personal their
interactions), but this does not undercut the emotional impact of Valandil's
continued searching for Isildur's remains. There is a bitterness to
Valandil's wish to take Narsil's shards to Annuminas; it reminds me of the
slight bitterness I always imagine in Denethor's answer that "in Gondor, ten
thousand years would not suffice (to make a steward a king)." It is the only
politic answer, but you can just feel that it is not what the speaker really
wishes. At least I can.

Regardless, this is a touching story, and all the more beautiful for its
obscurity.

Title: Can
<http://www.frodosharem.org/cgi-bin/stories/display.cgi?id=270&sort=date&sto
ryview=toc&chapter=1&cat=7> You Hear Me? . Author: White
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=71
> Gull . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry . ID: 1211
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-13 18:36:07 Score: 2
The rhythm could flow more smoothly in this poem; I had difficulty finding
the metre. Nevertheless, the concept is original and the content was
presented in an engaging manner.

Title: Dolor Meus
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=5032> . Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 897
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-13 23:45:38 Score: 4
I love stories that blend modern times (or "real life" history) with
Middle-earth. It makes Tolkien's world seem so much more real. I
particularly liked the idea of Radagast as Saint Francis of Assissi because
Assissi was so connected to nature. And of course Radagast would have to be
told to sail back to Valinor. He seemed to love Middle-earth a bit *too*
much if you know what I mean. (By the way, I am a Christian -- although a
fairly liberal one -- and I was not offended.)

Title: Eyes like the
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=4609> Moon . Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Races/Places: Men: Poetry . ID: 125
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-14 01:07:06 Score: 3
This is a beautiful poem, only made more poignant by the textual notes at
the end. I do not know much about Arabic poetry, but this seemed to flow
well to me. (But I was a bit confused, because the summary suggested a love
poem, while this poem was almost a meditation on a lover who had spurned the
writer.)

Title: Full <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4115>
Circle . Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Races/Places: Villains: Orcs . ID: 348
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-14 01:24:57 Score: 2
Interesting account of the final fate of the race of Orcs. i find it out of
keeping with Tolkien's cahracterisation fo orcs to have them so literary,
especially for a warrior, but as a little AU it is very interesting.

Title: By the Light of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2444> Earendil's Star
. Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete . ID: 173
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Reviewer: Raksha
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8> the Demon . 2005-05-14 22:49:44 Score: 8
20-year-old Faramir's in terrible danger in Ithilien; and Boromir sets out
to save him. This sort of story has been done before, but rarely, if ever,
this well. A thinking woman's (or man's) action story - and more. How the
writer manages to color it with beautiful, evocative description and
excellent characterisations in her spare, elegant narrative, never wasting a
word, is beyond me - but if she bottled the ability, I'd buy it!

The fight scenes are unusually well done, but she never loses the human mind
behind the sword. Even the orcs have personality. And after the danger is
done, the story is still extremely compelling, with clever but unobtrusive
touches of humor.

There are a few original characters, who are written so well that one comes
to care very much about them, but the heart of the story is the relationship
between Faramir and Boromir and Denethor. The latter is depicted more as a
loving father than as a monster or crazy man; but the writer deftly reveals
the seeds of the family's future tragedy.

An outstanding story!



Title: The Men Who Would Be
<http://www.suite101.com/article.cfm/tolkien/92091> Steward . Author:
Michael
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5> Martinez . Races/Places: Gondor: Historical . ID: 1137
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-14 23:21:39 Score: 4
One of my favorite of Michael Martinez' many fine essays on Tolkien's works.
This one examines the heritage and succession of the Stewards of Gondor. The
work is complex, but the issues examined very clearly, with an interesting
comparison with medieval 'stewards' in France and Scotland/England in our
world. Also, points for recognizing Boromir's good points as well as his
shortcomings.

Title: Grasping at
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3272> Moonbeams
Glistening . Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 363
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-15 12:28:19 Score: 10
I'd never thought I'd say this, but I really enjoyed this Legomance. :-) Not
that I have anything in particular against that genre, because there are
some well-done Legolas romances, even Legolas/OFC romances. But the Elf does
little for me, so what really impressed me about this story is that it made
*me* desire Legolas. The funny thing, though, is I don't think this is
because of any novel insight into Legolas' personality or any stunning prose
used to describe his physical beauty. Instead, it's Nanwen. I identified so
much with her, her physical pain and exhaustion and hopes and fears, that I
became completely immersed in her viewpoint. You did a really fabulous job
with developing her, and getting across that sense of "other" in ways that
don't seem out-of-place for someone of her station. And I loved her
interactions with Gimli especially, and with the other canonical characters.
Though I wasn't too sure about Gandalf telling the apothecary to order
westmansweed from Bree. Tolkien says (quoting Merry's text on pipeweed),
that "(it) came northward from the lower Anduin, whither it was, I suspect,
originally brought over Sea by the Men of Westerness. It grows abundantly in
Gondor, and there is richer and larger than in the North." (LOTR Prologue)
So I think the apothecary might be likely to stockpile it if Gandalf
suggested he did, but he wouldn't need to send to Bree; he'd just have to
send people to collect it from the countryside around Minas Tirith. Just a
thought. But that's really just one nitpick in an otherwise great story.

Title: In Defense
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4026> . Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Non-Fiction: Men . ID: 94
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-15 13:27:33 Score: 8
Queen Beruthiel is such a minor character in canon; just a passing reference
in "The Fellowship of the Rings", and a note in "Unfinished Tales", if I
recall correctly. But she has certainly gotten her share of attention in fan
fiction (perhaps because it gives us cat lovers a chance to write about our
beloved pets?), and it is nice to see someone set the record straight. This
essay had a nice down-to-earth quality; it was fun to read, well
thought-out, and informative. You used historical sources to good effect,
too, using them to prove your point without letting them overwhelm the
essay's flavor. I enjoyed this essay and will recommend it to anyone I know
who is looking for information on Beruthiel. (And for your information, I
have "Beruthiel's cats!" be a swear-phrase in Gondor, and "The Queen's Cats"
the name of a tavern in the lower circles of Minas Tirith. That's my own
invention, but I think you're right that other people besides Aragorn would
remember her.)

Title: In Umbar, at
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2307> the docks .
Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Mystery . ID: 117
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-15 13:32:20 Score: 2
A very interesting story -- it tells just enough without telling too much,
and extrapolates wonderfully from what little canon we have to provide a
full picture of Beruthiel after her exile from Goondor. Well done!

Title: Mushroom <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3515>
Lore . Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID: 365
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-15 15:44:55 Score: 7
I had forgotten, until I reached the notes at the bottom of this story, that
I was the one who suggested using the Sindarin for "death-hats" for the name
of the poisonous mushroom. It was an extra treat to see my name attached to
it, not that I needed such a treat at the end of this story. I love
cross-cultural pieces, those that compare different peoples, but this was
one area that even I hadn't thought to compare: mushroom-lore! Who would
have guessed? And Aragorn's attempt to cover up the fact that he had in fact
travelled to Harad was delightful, as was Gandalf's moment of panic when the
hobbits (I think?) ask what kind of meat the orcs ate. But I think I liked
most Sam's indignations that mushrooms are *not* roasted, they are to be
steamed -- and then his and Pippin's liking the roasted mushrooms. My only
suggestion would be to involve Merry more. He seems strangely absent,
especially given the topic.

Title: Narn
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2962&cid=11361> Niben .
Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Adventure . ID: 140
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-05-15 16:28:19 Score: 4
This is another delightful story, Werecat. I really like it; sometimes I
think you shouldn't be allowed to write stories with anything other than
animlas in leading roles, because you do them so well, but then I'm reminded
of "Mushroom Lore"... (By the way, Niben does work for a pet's name, doesn't
it? I used it as a name for a stray cat in one of my stories, and liked it
as well.)

Title: My Girl <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1411> . Author:
Havetoist
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
3> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry . ID: 1067
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=1067>
Reviewer: Ingole
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
1> . 2005-05-15 23:32:08 Score: 3
This piece is bit of a departure for the creator of "Feud of Shadow and
Light" and "Phoenix's Griffin," but, like the other two works, it is quite
simply a stunner. The language has an epic cadence, akin to a tale being
sung by a minstrel rather than a words-only piece...final note sung chin-up
for victory, eyes down for sorrow.

Heartbreaking. Beautiful.

Title: The Feud of Shadow and
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=866> Light . Author: Havetoist
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
3> . Genres: Alternate Universe: Pre-LOTR . ID: 1290
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=1290>
Reviewer: Ingole
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
1> . 2005-05-16 00:04:35 Score: 3
Superb! The writing has a Tolkienesque texture, and the culture that the
author has created breathes it's own very lively breath. "Feud" stands alone
as a mini-epic or, as a prequel, provides an irresistible invitation to
follow the continuing tale of these stunning, wiley, near-savage Rohme.
Catnip. Can't resist it.

Title: Real Men Wear
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=375> Jewelry .
Author: Mouse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
6> . Genres: Humor . ID: 488
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=488>
Reviewer: Alassante
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
2> . 2005-05-16 09:50:27 Score: 10
This is one of the funniest yet most educated Middle Earth stories I have
read. It is very original and innovative. I think Mouse has done a wonderful
job of portraying her characters in the proper fashion which is very
impressive since she had so many characters both from Lord of the Rings and
the Silm.

Not only was the story in the proper form and characterization for each
different character, her style of writing is amazing. I am so impressed with
her fluid style and great flowing rhythm. She completely blows me away with
her excellent dialog as well as her many details.

To have so many characters in this great story and to not go into detail
about their history and story from either the Silm or Lord of the Rings and
yet you still know a lot about them by her writing is impressive. Not many
writers can do that yet she has done a fabulous job in doing so.

This story has not been posted on the site that I usually visit and where I
heard about it from the forum boards. This great story is so popular, people
are recommending it on the forum boards of other sites. Everyone loves it
and raves about. Its companion piece is just as funny. I had nominated both
for a MEFA yet this one is the only one showing so I must research this
right away ! I think Mouse and her story deserve all of the awards that can
be given. It is probably one of the best humorous stories I have read on any
site. As I have said before, it is recommended every where.

If any story deserves a MEFA, this is one completely.

Title: New
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13198> Home .
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble . ID: 20
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=20>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-16 15:57:30 Score: 2
Excellent drabble; showing in just a few words the gradual effect of peace,
as Beregond rejoices in his son's rediscovered childhood.

Title: Kindred
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12146> Spirits .
Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 106
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=106>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-16 16:04:56 Score: 2
Awwww. A great extrapolation on the depth of Gandalf's fondness for Faramir.
A lot of credible feeling in just a few words.

Title: Spring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2982&cid=11477> Planting .
Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor . ID: 170
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=170>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-16 16:31:54 Score: 2
A wonderful ficlet where Denethor first feels the sharp pang of parental
terror for his younger son, along with the foreshadowing of later events,
when Faramir's wounding by an arrow will be the catalyst for Denethor's
madness and death.

Title: Servant of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2574> Elbereth .
Author: Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th . Races/Places: Villains . ID: 796
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=796>
Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . 2005-05-16 18:52:09 Score: 3
An interesting and unconventional look at an Orc. Even the name is
unconventional. I wonder why - did he get to name himself, perhapds
distinguish himself in orther ways than just actions? This story holds the
promise of some good adventures and character development, if the writer
wanted to show how the character go to be the way he's protrayed here.

Title: After <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=471>
Amputations . Author: Ithilwen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
6> . Races/Places: Elves: Poetry . ID: 1075
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=1075>
Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . 2005-05-16 19:29:22 Score: 4
This was probably the first Tolkien fandom poem that I read, and I found it
a powerful and moving lament. Then and now I equated the loss of Maedhros's
hand with the fading of the Elves. The way that Ithilwen captured Maedhros's
sense of loss and regret mirrored and enlarged my own feelings about
Tolkien's immortal Fair Folk. This poem does what good poetry is supposed to
do, and I recommend it highly.

Title: The Old <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1819850/1/> Dwarf and the Sea .
Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete . ID: 3
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=3>
Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade . 2005-05-17 07:04:31 Score: 6
Another wonderful example of Isabeau's brilliant characterisations. How can
you not love her Gimli? And Legolas, so elvishly assuming he didn't need
ship building lessons, while Gimli practically planned 'for the just in
case' with his pump.

Other highlights would have to include Leggy being picked on by the Noldor
for his excessive number of children, and his simple one word answer,
'Feanor'. Plus Gimli's eccentric mate being killed in the experiment
explosion and poor fellow, not even Mandos wanted him! I guess elves can be
geeks and nerds too. Lovely story, deserving of a win, which I hope it has.

Title: Sea <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4818>
Longing . Author: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor . ID: 699
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=9&form_story_filter=699>
Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . 2005-05-17 23:40:23 Score: 2
One of the better explanations for Finduilas' decline and eventual
death...and a charming, atypical but quite credible characterization of
Boromir and Faramir as young children.


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Msg# 5093

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 9 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:12:08 Topic ID# 5093
Title: While the Ring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=449> Went South... ·
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 33
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=33>
Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade · 2005-05-18 07:28:47 Score: 2
A classic story with classic writing. That is, a very very good gapfiller
written by a talented writer. Favourite bit has to be Gimli's pack of rocks!

Title: Old Wives'
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4419> Tales · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 350
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-19 02:51:53 Score: 3
This is a tantalizing tale; I can very easily see these superstitions
arising in Rohan (where cats don't seem to be favored as much as dogs, at
least in the movies, and where superstitions seem to be given more credence.
Your Eowyn was very well rounded and after the read I wanted to know more
about Luthwen. It was spooky without being overwhelmingly horrific.

Title: The One and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4294> True Dark Lord
· Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 358
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=358>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-19 12:31:16 Score: 3
I never would have believed Silmarillion/Harry Potter crossover would work.
Of course I never thought of either Voldemort or Melkor as at all snarky.
Well done -- this very clever piece managed to overcome my preliminary
scepticism, and I really enjoyed it.

Title: Two Drabbles: Tar-Miriel and the
<http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1928291/1/> Waves · Author: Ainaechoiriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=2>
· Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 107
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-20 07:55:27 Score: 2
I appreciate the clever use of repeitition of word and thought in this
drabble set, the meter gives it a unique, almost poetic rythym. very nice.

Title: Remembrance <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1928301/1/> · Author:
Ainaechoiriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=2>
· Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 108
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-20 07:57:42 Score: 2
This is well done, excellent use of the one hundred words of a drabble. your
word choices are pointed and specific and pack a lot of meaning in each
thought. well done!!

Title: The Death of <http://www.finitechess.com/cyberspace/me/morteme.htm>
Middle-Earth · Author: BarrowWight
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
8> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 98
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=98>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-20 08:07:39 Score: 8
This is an wonderfully ambitious work, delightfully rich in JRR Tolkien's
world but at the same time, stretching canon near to breaking without
forceing that 'snap!'. The half-Noldorin Orc, Morsul, and the other original
characters, both Orc and Elf, are deep and well-thought-out. The Canon
characters delightfully subtly darkened. Barrowwight's world shadows and
parallel's Tolkien's to a frightening degree. This is the story that was not
told in the comfortable Hall of Fire or the sitting rooms of Gondor in the
years after; these are the things we may not, probably do not, want to know.
This is the other side of the ending with horrific accuracy and detail,
delving deeper, perhapes, than many of us may want to go into Orc, and
Elvish, culture. and as BarrowWight proclaims, no attempts have been made to
keep this warm and fuzzy like that 'other', more popular writing, the
Redbook. So, while I highly recommend this work, I will also say, "Reader
Beware!" because it shake loose your preconceptions of happy endings and
life in the Fourth Age.

Title: Tides of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3957> Time · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Alternate Universe: Post-LOTR · ID: 368
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=368>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-21 05:01:19 Score: 5
This is an interesting tale, and I like it for its mythic qualities. I
suppose it makes sense that Anduril would survive past Aragorrn; after all,
it had survived since Isildur's time and before that since when Telchar
first forged it. I do wish you could have told it without bringing Gandalf
back from Valinor. It would have been nice to have it canon-compliant, for
example, to have Celeborn or one of the twins or some other immortal who
didn't sail over the seas be the one to move it.

Title: When All
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4279> Lights Pass ·
Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Alternate Universe: Pre-LOTR · ID: 349
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=349>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-21 11:04:52 Score: 9
Oh, this was a delightfully spooky story. I loved it. (And here I was
thinking that there were few corners of Middle-earth left for Werecat to
explore? Foolish me, indeed.) I particularly liked your descriptions of
Gandalf and especially Radagast. They seemed very real and earthy and
consistent with what we know about the Grey and the Brown ones, but you
didn't hit us over the head with who exactly they were. Personally, I'm not
convinced that Earnil could have cured Hithwen's son (sorry, I am forgetting
his name). It seems that the line of the true "king" passed from Anarion's
line when Ondoher died heirless, and the Gondorians chose someone with so
little of Anarion's blood when the northern kings had a much more direct
descendant. Just my two cents. And I think that, if he could heal Black
Breath, surely there would be other soldier's in Pelargir who needed
healing. It's not like the king at this point spent all his time in Minas
Tirith. I can see him travelling to Pelargir on a tour, and the woman
bringing her son to meet with him, almost like the story of the lame man who
Jesus healed after his disciples lowered him through the roof. Anyway, I
digress. This is a nice story, well thought out, and I really enjoyed it.

Title: Wish upon a <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2088089/1/> star · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 194
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=194>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-21 11:42:46 Score: 3
You had me chuckling out loud at "Sometimes wishes do come true" at the very
end. Oh, well done! This is a hilarious parody, turning the typical
Mary-Sue-falls-into-Mordor parody on its head by its sharp characterization
of the Orc. Thanks for the read.

Title: By <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=526> Light Beguiled
· Author: AfterEver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
2> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 445
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=445>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-05-24 00:25:52 Score: 7
I have to admit that, by the time I reached the end of the "Quenta
Silmarillion" I was skimming the text. Elves never were my forte, and I just
wasn't that interested in it. So I was sceptical to start this piece, but
after the first few screens I was certainly hooked. Your descriptions are
vivid, and your treatment of young Elrond and Elros was touching, not to
mention cute. We all know what happens to the havens at Sirion, so in many
ways reading this piece was like watching the movie "Titanic". I mean, we
all knew the ship was going to sink, but there were still some surprises
along the way. I especially loved the tension between Earendil and Elwing,
because it cut both ways; Earendil was uncomfortable with the silmaril, and
Elwing hated Earendil's need to journey the seas. Overall, it was a very
enjoyable tale that held my interest until the end -- which is saying
something, given I usually prefer shorter pieces like vignettes and
drabbles.

Title: Forgetting
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=880&cid=3364> War ·
Author: Karenator
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 1322
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=1322>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-25 17:18:24 Score: 3
a bittersweet and poignant view of Legolas and the longing he feels. ...what
torment to have lived with that for so many years, what a blessing to have
the lifespan to have the years with his friends before he answers that call.
very well done, and enjoyable and thoughtful read.

Title: Price of Delay <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1675> ·
Author: viv
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 782
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=782>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-25 22:26:27 Score: 2
Hi Viv, I'm glad to see this drabble here. I love Thingol, he's much to
underdone in this fandom, and this is one of my favorites.

Title: By All
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/5053.html#cutid1> The
Signs · Author: Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 757
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=757>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-25 22:40:49 Score: 1
This is an engaging little tale, ...what fun to think of such a find!!! ,
wouldn't it be wonderful!

Title: Fëanor
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=51&STID=1238&S
POrdinal=1> Challenged · Author: stultiloquentia
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
4> · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 45
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=45>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-25 22:45:57 Score: 2
I don't often read poetry, but I epecially enjoy Feanor and couldn't resist
this one. You captured the mood and nuances beautifully, as well as the
characterization of the Noldor.

Title: Banners
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=97&STID=2223&S
POrdinal=5> in the Wind · Author: Starlight
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
5> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 519
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=10&form_story_filter=519>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-05-25 22:52:03 Score: 1
A well-done portayal of a proud but difficult time. You captured it well.

Title: One
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?STID=2359&SPOrdinal
=10&NGID=102> Dark Day in Lugbúrz · Author: Starlight
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5> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 521
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-05-25 22:55:51 Score: 1
we love Orcsies, my Precious, yes we do.

Title: Trust to Hope <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=558> ·
Author: Novedhelion
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4> · Genres: Romance · ID: 1294
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Reviewer: Aragorns
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> Gal · 2005-05-26 14:50:06 Score: 9
I truly adored this story! I think that this story brought Eomer to life in
such an endearing way. He comes across as so serious in the movies. Plus
there is not near enough of him in the movies, so this story brings Eomer to
life so cleverly, and so "real". He becomes a man that you can't help but
love. This story shows that he is a great leader, a good guy and a very
lovable man! And Ani... she's wonderful! She's spunky and smart and won't
let people walk over her, including Eomer! Which I really like as a trait in
women. I applaude Eomer & Ani strongly, and if this were a 4th Lord of the
Rings movie, I would go see it without question.

The story is told in such a true way that I could totally picture all the
scenery as they traveled back & forth across Middle Earth. Even the
sub-characters were interesting. The author made me like or dislike them and
care about what happened to them. Cam & Amrothos could be another story on
their own! I really wish they were come to think of it!

And Fenwick... I hated that guy big time and wanted him gone right off the
bat. And thats good writing if an author makes you hate a character that
much!

So I would recommend this story to everyone who loves Lord of the Rings, or
just a good story, it gives us much more of Eomer who deserves every word
written about him.

Sincerely,
Aragornsgal2003


Title: Cursed Queen
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1376> of Angmar ·
Author: khazar_khum
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> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 450
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Reviewer: Raksha
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8> the Demon · 2005-05-26 17:58:37 Score: 3
That Khazar-Khum has the chutzpah to write a romantic epic about the being
who inspires terror and revulsion in LOTR deserves much credit. That the
writer carries it off with style, actually making the reader empathize with
the heroine, and turns the Witch-King into a romantic hero, deserves even
more credit. Very daring and original story!

Title: Trust to Hope <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=558> ·
Author: Novedhelion
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4> · Genres: Romance · ID: 1294
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Reviewer: jbear83
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3> · 2005-05-27 03:26:50 Score: 10
Ahh! Thank You!

That was an absolutely fabulous story. I was hooked from the start. Both the
story and the wonderfully excellent way it was written really appealed to
me.

I have only seen this good writing in maybe 3 or 4 other un-published
authors. Ever thought of writing a book?

This story has kept me up many a night reading ’til 3-4 in the morning, just
because I could not turn away from the screen, wanting to know more about
what would happen. And it has made me become violent against my books, when
they got punched in frustration and anger over Fenwick's actions, (I’ve
learned my lesson from having had to buy a new keyboard after it was hit
into oblivion in frustration before, pocket books are softer.)

The absolutely excellent writing has me floored, I could never write this
good. I just sit here and hope that you get the wonderful idea to write a
novel or something and have it published, because I would definitely buy it.
I have at the moment maybe 12 books lying in a pile, waiting to be read, but
I let them wait until I’ve finished this story because it held me in such a
strong grip reading it. I could really see everything in front of me as I
read, and it’s the way you describe things that really put the reader there
in the story.

I am not a very emotional person, but this story has brought out so many in
me, mirth, sadness, anger, frustration, happiness, relief. In the end just
after Fenwick's fall, I felt this huge need to cry out of relief (could have
been that I was listening to Gregorian's version of the Sound Of Silence, or
the late hour, it’s 2 am as I write this), but probably a combination of all
three. Not many stories do that to me.

You and your beta work very well together, and I hope that the two of you
will continue with that, too give us readers these wonderful and
well-written stories.

I will now continue on reading the sequel, my pile of books will just have
to wait.

I hope you get time and inspiration to continue writing that one so that I
will not have to wonder or go crazy from waiting.

Cheers, and thank you once again,

Jenny

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=808&cid=7657>
Prince of Golden Flowers · Author: Avon
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> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 18
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 22:59:31 Score: 4
There is something wonderfully simple about this drabble: a narrative
quality that at once is suitably solemn for Glorfindel and yet perfectly
suited a to a child's understanding. One senses the rise of legend, here, in
this tale, told to a nameless child who participates, as it were, in the
history of Gondolin through the simple act of linking flowers and memory
together.

Title: 'Peering
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=808&cid=7811> in the water
as the dark eve fell, I caught him, Gollum.' · Author: Avon
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> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 19
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:09:30 Score: 6
Avon makes great use of a line from the books as her title, allowing the
rest of the drabble to stand as an elaboration of it. Gollum's schizophrenic
nature infects his captor, who finds himself caught in a dizzying
relationship with his prisoner. Who is really driving whom? Aragorn ought to
be the dominant end of this relationship, yet he isn't, seeing himself as
both captor and prisoner. There's no point of balance between them, and
Aragorn finds himself unable to escape Gollum, who invades every sense, and
unlocks a rather indeterminate fear. It's clearly connected to the Ring, but
at the same time, what precisely is it about the Ring, as it manifests in
Gollum, that Aragorn fears? It's unclear, and I think it's the more
effective for that openness. Well done!

Title: New
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13198> Home ·
Author: Tanaqui
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> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 20
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:16:13 Score: 6
This is a lovely, sunny drabble about Beregond and Bergil, as they rebuild
their lives in Ithilien. We don't get any chances to see these two interact
with each other, and so have to infer quite a lot. But this seems to me very
plausible. Beregond's anxiety over whether his son, who has endured the
horrors of war and responsibilities beyond his years, will be happy in their
new home, is very touching. He doesn't want for Bergil to have to continue
to soldier on, as it were, but hopes that he'll have a chance to be a boy
for awhile. Bergil is delightfully portrayed, and in the end, Beregond's
hopes are realized, as Bergil is quickly distracted from the chaos of
displacement by the promise of finding a new bird's nest.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8772>
White City · Author: Forodwaith
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> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 21
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:22:13 Score: 4
For those of us who've wondered what would persuade a father to let his son
stay during what seems likely to be the last stand of Minas Tirith, this
drabble suggests an answer. We see here the absent mother playing a vital
role in that decision: she is the ground of Bergil's love for Minas Tirith
and also the ground of one aspect of the father-son relationship that spawns
a rather unexpected consequence. There's irony aplenty here, as the dead
rule the living, who may soon join them.

Title: In <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13136>
the Hands of the King · Author: Gwynnyd
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:28:29 Score: 5
Another good missing moment in the relationship of Beregond and Bergil: how
did Bergil receive the news that his father had committed treason during the
Siege of Minas Tirith? One imagines it would be quite the blow for a boy who
seems to have a healthy boyish case of hero worship for his father, not to
mention quite terrifying once the possibility sank in that Beregond might
even be killed for his actions. We see the limits of justice here, and the
drabble appropriately ends with the hope that mercy will prevail.


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Msg# 5094

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 10 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:12:23 Topic ID# 5094
Title: While the Ring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=449> Went South... ·
Author: Thundera
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> Tiger · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 33
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:32:17 Score: 10
This was the very first fanfic that I read that was absolutely compelling
both in the quality of writing but also in scope. It took gap-filling to new
heights and responded to a lack I'd been feeling, fanfictionally: here was a
story whose author was ambitious enough to take the characters and develop
them over time, rather than stay with a one-shot vignette. This is not to
say that shorter fics aren't also compelling, but most of what I had read at
that point were short fics or less than compelling novellas. Thundera Tiger
took a two week gap that would be critical for the development of the
internal relationships among the Fellowship and filled it in the style to
which we've become accustomed, which is to say very well indeed. Despite the
episodic nature of the story, it holds together in the end as a coherent
whole, and every character in the Fellowship is given his time under the
microscope. This story made the best use I'd seen anyone make of Legolas at
that point; it was practically the *only* use I'd seen made of Gimli that
really tried to get down into the foundations of his perspective as a Dwarf
who has "issues" with Elves, to put it mildly. Thunder made something of the
rivalry of Elves and Dwarves, and if I do think it might've gone over the
top a bit, nevertheless, it was a rousing good tale and I wouldn't have
missed any of it. I think this story really established Thundera as a good
ensemble writer, to borrow from TV terminology. She's an author who thrives
when she's got a fully populated world to play in, where minor characters
can shine alongside the major ones, and the major characters are still given
in depth treatment, and that shows in the depiction of the Fellowship. She
also displays her talent in writing more than just good action (although the
warg hunt was great), more than good drama (although the politicking and
personality clashes within the Fellowship are intense), but also great humor
(I keep coming back to the end of chapter four as particularly amusing). If
you're looking for some good action-adventure to read on a rainy day, clear
a few hours and read "While the Ring Went South".

Title: The
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=196> Flowers
of the Forest · Author: Altariel
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1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor · ID: 2
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:39:08 Score: 9
Given the jingoistic atmosphere in certain parts of the world, this fic is
timely. The war to end all wars must inevitably disappoint its followers, as
it is an unrealizable concept. Taking a poem from World War I and using it
to frame the central point, we once again find Faramir being put to good use
in this reflection on the nature of war and its ideology that calls for one
last sacrifice every time. The juxtaposition of the quiet and peace of the
farmlands that have been created, and the memory of the forest of Ithilien
that had so long been the site of war serve as a powerful reminder of the
responsibility of those who send others to war: to uphold the values of
peace and to tend it at home. At the same time, the paradox is clear: Gondor
had fought its great war—its last war in order that there be a future at
all. And yet that future breeds a need or a want for more wars; and so
there's always a need to believe that ideals are upheld, that the next war
is truly necessary, otherwise, the flowers of the forest—simbelmyne, for
memory of those who died for the hope of a peaceful future—would be
unbearable, as would the thought of all the sons who will die this time for
the sins of their parents.

Title: The King's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3917> Justice ·
Author: maranya14
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0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 4
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:41:21 Score: 8
Those who like their Tolkien fanfic to have that slightly formal flavor
reminiscent of Tolkien's work will probably enjoy the style in which this
fic is written. But beyond that, as a gapfiller centered around the question
of what justice demands when a (soon to be) prince's life is saved through
the commission of a capital crime twice, maybe thrice, over, this is a good
reflection on the complex considerations that go into assessments of worth.
How does one measure what a life is worth, as against other lives,
especially in the chaos of war and a steward gone mad? Is there room for
personal consideration, and if so, where? Such questions, I think, animate
this fic, from Faramir's concern to understand what has been done not just
in his name, but for the sake of his life, to Beregond's willingness to
accept whatever judgment comes down to him (good Platonist that he is, which
is guaranteed to make me swoon), to Aragorn's contrasting of the need for
law with the need to recognize the personal dimension that should give law
its life and meaning. Nicely done!

Title: Requiem for
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3859> Boromir ·
Author: maranya14
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0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 6
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:42:14 Score: 9
This is an excellent rounding out of the tale of the Fellowship, and a
particularly fitting end for Boromir's story. Maya_ar situates the hobbits'
description of Boromir's last battle, and Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli's
recounting of their funerary efforts with the lost (or seemingly lost)
legends of Middle-earth: Goldberry and Tom Bombadil, the Ents of Fangorn,
the *mearas* that alone of all horses understand their masters' speech, and
even Meduseld gets its mythic association with the legendary halls that the
hobbits remember in the stories handed down in the Shire. This puts Boromir
in an interesting position: he, too, by the situating of his story, is a
legend, someone now gone into the past. And yet since all these legends have
been shown to have their life still, Boromir, too, it is hinted at
throughout, has not wholly gone from his loved ones. By Faramir's completion
of the funerary songs (he gives the East Wind its voice), by his giving his
brother in addition a wholly new verse, we see Boromir's story transfigured
for those who loved him. The monument that Legolas and Gimli create for him
in the story's 'postscript' ending puts him firmly on the side of the vital
legends, the ones that remain with a people and continue to give meaning to
other lives far beyond the deaths of the original figures.

Title: How Legolas
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=394> Proved His
Bowmanship · Author: Chathol-linn
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> · Genres: Adventure · ID: 8
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:45:11 Score: 3
I remember reading this on a Tolkien fic e-mail list way back when there
were maybe twenty pages of LOTR fanfiction at FFN. The tone is very
well-suited to the tale and reminiscent of "The Hobbit" to me. We see the
makings of Middle-earth's most infamous archer (sorry, Beleg!), his
formation, drive, and dedication that pay off handsomely in the end.

Title: A Light Beyond
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1520> the Darkness ·
Author: Alawa
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3> · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 10
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:48:13 Score: 7
These two poems seem very apt to the characters they speak of. Gilraen's
villanelle has that certain suggestive mischief to it, appropriate to a
young woman in love, that says the words fall short even as they illuminate
much about her relationship with her husband. The repeated lines are
indispensable both in form and also in moving the content forward, which I
find admirable. Arathorn's sonnet, coming from a very different,
worldly-wise perspective, opens up even as he does in loving Gilraen—we can
see in the progression the ressurection of wonder and delight, and the need
and desire to speak of these things that has been too long suppressed.
Fortunately, speech isn't everything, and the poem in a sense deconstructs
itself—it's only a poem, and the important thing lies elsewhere, in the
feeling that animates it.

Title: Watching
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1677> Thoughts ·
Author: Alawa
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3> · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 11
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:50:33 Score: 7
Another set of poems that admirably suit the characters whose poems they
are. This time, it's Aragorn who has the villanelle, and as hope and
determination tilt against despair and resignation, the spareness of the
form becomes the vehicle for the expression of the stripped-down dignity of
a Ranger. No flights of fancy, nor need of embellishment, here, and once
again, the repeating lines both fit the form and advance the poem's content.
Arwen's poem, by contrast, is filled with long sentences and thoughts that
trail through several lines. She has the time to let a fuller and more
detailed working out of her feelings and hopes emerge, and the poem reflects
this. But at the end of each stanza, she returns to the choice she's made
that puts a stop, as it were, to those meandering reflections, or rather,
completes them with a brevity appropriate to the mortal timeframe she's
about to step into.

Title: Bearer of Bad
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=356> Tidings ·
Author: LOTR_lover
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4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 12
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:51:41 Score: 6
This is a wonderful little one-shot ficlet of Elrond's arrival at Tol
Eressëa, and I think one of the first fics that I read that really brought
him to life for me, in all his turmoil and joy. One has a sense of how long
Elrond has labored, and yet at the same time, he is in a very mortal
position—caught between the certain grief of his parting with Celebrian and
the news he must bear to her of Arwen's choice and the uncertainty of hope
and a chance to be healed himself. He is very human in his worries and
irritation and fears, and yet at the very end, the reversal is perfectly
executed as the fic hits its high point in the last line, as Elrond spies a
familiar figure at the docks: "It was Celebrían, and she was laughing, and
she was beautiful. And this was the first day of his new life." Well done!

Title: Greenery <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1945>
· Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 14
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-05-27 23:55:10 Score: 8
Forodwaith is on record as a champion of Arwen who craves fanfics in which
we see the character acting apart from her significant male relations.
"Greenery" clearly answers to that desire. Here, we see Arwen through the
eyes of an original character apprentice healer, and get a sense of the
Queen of Gondor's interest in and talent for the healing arts. But
primarily, we see Arwen in this fic as a consummately skilled teacher, whose
easy way with others serves as a counterpoint to her age and the remoteness
of Elves. The wisdom of the Elves, however, is starkly evident as Arwen goes
about encouraging and enlightening the young apprentice in some of the ways
of her chosen profession. Speaking of Elves, I must simply note the spots of
dirt on Arwen's dress and the smear of mud on her cheek: dirt does not
discriminate among Races, thankyouverymuchforodwaith. In all, a delightful
vignette, even if Ioreth, alas, comes in for just as much, if not more,
irritation from the Queen as from the King.

Title: Thread of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1272> Fate · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Genres: Romance: Rivendell · ID: 15
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-05-27 23:56:11 Score: 7
Yet another stellar effort by Forodwaith to give Arwen some justice. Whereas
"Greenery" focuses on Arwen in her role as teacher, herbalist, and healer,
here we see Arwen as artisan. The story of Arwen's weaving of the standard
for Aragorn is reduced to a few lines in the Appendix, and a mention on the
sly in "Return of the King"; as a symbol of Arwen's hope and her choice, it
is an obvious and fruitful place to write Arwen, and Forodwaith does it very
well. Here, we can see the effort and anxiety, the ninety-nine percent of
perspiration that gives birth to any work of art or science. It's a labor of
love, but not one free of its own turmoil, since Arwen is not just weaving a
banner, but is literally weaving her own path in life, unbinding herself
from one family and people in the very knitting of fabric that will bind her
to another people, all of them symbolically bound together under one banner
against the darkness. Well done!

Title: Boromir's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1405> Gift · Author:
SueB
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
2> · Genres: Movie-verse · ID: 813
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-05-28 00:03:12 Score: 10
Boromir fans will not want to miss this story, and I hope many have already
enjoyed it as much as I have. Peter Jackon's Boromir is certainly a more
sympathetic character than the bookverse one, or at least, less ambiguous,
less divided between testimonies and appendices that need to be somehow
connected up with each other. Nevertheless, he's a complex individual who,
in the end, is torn apart by his very strength. SueB takes movie!Boromir and
reintegrates him beyond what even Boromir's last scene accomplishes in the
film. Here we have a reconciliation not simply of self with self and Boromir
with his companions in the Fellowship, but with, of all people, Galadriel.
As in the book, she is the revealer of truth, which is not always welcome,
but here she puts truth in the service of Boromir's peace of mind and
healing, right there at the end when it matters most. And it's not
unfitting: who else but the Penitent Queen would know how desperately the
Penitent Warrior desires to know the peace of redemption, of knowing one has
passed the trial by ordeal and that all has not been in vain? And who better
to grant him that mercy? Movieverse fics don't usually "do it" for me, but
this one portrays these two characters in ways that illuminate their
essential core that was translated from books to films. SueB thereby opens
up both incarnations of these characters with a laudable efficiency. Well,
well done!

Title: Leavetaking
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8127> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 16
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-05-28 00:24:39 Score: 4
A succinct statement of the strained situation that Gilraen and Elrond
endure: each one a parent, each seeing in the safe return of the other's
child the death of his or her own. The very thing that should draw them
together—their parenthood—is what ultimately drives them apart. It's a
poignant evocation of one of those fateful scenarios that are no one's
fault, but which cannot but be heartbreaking.

Title: Links
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8126> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 23
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-05-28 00:54:09 Score: 7
This cuts right to the heart of Frodo's and Boromir's relationship: they
shared the same burden, the Ring's temptation, and in fact both fell to it
as others did not. That gives them a measure of retrospective commonality
often overlooked due to their otherwise great differences. In a way, it
turns out that it was Boromir who knew Frodo best (though he couldn't have
realized it at the time) for knowing what it was to be absolutely violated
in his very will—to be absolutely alienated from himself, such that the will
of another was made his own. To quote a favorite philosopher, the horror of
human existence is that "One can do anything with a man", even the
impossible. It's one of those logical contradictions that can only be lived
and endured. It is wholly fitting, then, that Frodo should return to honor
Boromir's memory, to share a token of their mutual suffering, and to wish
him peace.

Title: Interment
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=13257> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 379
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · 2005-05-28 16:51:48 Score: 2
I love that although Denethor thinks it's foolish, he has Finduilas buried
in the place she most wished to be. I also like the glimpse of him facing
his own mortality, and wondering how it will affect his sons.

Title: Sand-castles
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13220> when the
tide is flowing · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 549
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · 2005-05-28 17:04:04 Score: 2
I love the differences in the sand castles reflecting the differences in
Boromir and Faramir's personalities. A bit of creepy foreshadowing as well.
Very nicely symbolic.

Title: Herbs
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=13624> of Healing
· Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 656
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · 2005-05-28 17:10:56 Score: 2
This is a lovely look at Faramir from a different POV. I like the very
realistic notion that sometimes, drugs are not the answer to healing.

Title: Echo <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1002> · Author:
Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 684
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · 2005-05-28 17:13:44 Score: 1
Oh my, you just hurt my heart.*wibble*
I hope Pip took something little no-one would miss.

Title: Call on the Wind <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/callonthewind.htm> ·
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 935
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · 2005-05-28 17:18:43 Score: 2
I haven't seen anything before that reflects on anyone in Rohan hearing
Boromir's horn! Very nice, and rather bittersweet also, in that Eomer takes
the sound as a sign of hope. *sniff*

Title: Mantle of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4914> Stars · Author:
marastar
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=42
9> · Genres: Romance: Vignette · ID: 987
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · 2005-05-28 17:32:44 Score: 4
I love that Faramir knows that Eowyn's coldness is a protection, rather than
truth, and his opinion that her darkness only enhances her internal beauty.
I always thought it was rather daring of him to give her Finduilas' cloak
before he knew how she felt toward him, and I very much like the often
overly-intellectual Faramir realizing that reason is not going to help him
in this situation - he's going to have to trust to his heart.

Title: Translation
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4915> · Author:
marastar
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=42
9> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 988
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=11&form_story_filter=988>
Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · 2005-05-28 17:38:51 Score: 4
I love the parallel between the scars on Eowyn's arm, and the lettering in
the book. Describing runes as "violent" is, IMO, very accurate, and would
probably appear doubly so to someone familiar with the smoother flow of
Elvish writing.
And how very Faramir to compare the woman he loves to a language. *sigh* For
a book-girl, very very romantic.
And you show the depth of his feelings for her very well, without being
maudlin or sticky-sweet, which is so hard to pull off.

Title: The King's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3917> Justice ·
Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 4
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Reviewer: queeniejosephine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52
7> · 2005-06-01 17:03:17 Score: 4
This is a beautiful and well written story,which gave me a great deal of
pleasure to read.I loved the way in which it filled in gaps that Tolkien
left and gave an insight into Faramir's relationship with Aragorn and how
King and Steward are growing in their mutual love and respect towards each
other. I liked the way in which Aragorn privately tells Faramir he wishes
him to remain Steward and gives him the chance to refuse.

Title: Here
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3349&cid=12757> sits, in
secret, blest Theology · Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 388
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · 2005-06-01 18:32:46 Score: 3
A lovely treatment of a subject we don't see drabbled, or treated, often in
LOTR fanfiction - fishing, and some fascinating implications of philosophy
which do fit in with what we know of Faramir's character and Ranger
lifestyle. Subtle and elegant and credible.

Title: Alterations
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=613> · Author:
Eledhwen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 260
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · 2005-06-01 18:52:41 Score: 5
A wonderful look at the White City, and other realms by implication, making
the transition from war to peace, from the Third Age to the Fourth. Aragorn
is changing from war-leader to King, and taking contentment while
shouldering new burdens. (wonderful chapter with him talking to Faramir
about Boromir and Finduilas) Some beautiful moments here; such as the
bearers of the Three Rings sitting near the new White Tree, talking of what
they will leave behind when they return to Valinor.

Title: Mourning
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12155> Cloak ·
Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 394
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · 2005-06-01 19:10:53 Score: 3
Outstanding short piece evoking the joy that Finduilas brought into
Denethor's life with the use of color; and his absolute misery at her loss,
expressed by his rejection of the colors she favored in favor of simple
black. His life darkened in every way; and that's what the piece expresses.
Very nice work from an accomplished drabbler!

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2524&cid=9921>
Room of Tears · Author: Elendiari22
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
3> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor · ID: 759
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-01 19:59:54 Score: 1
This was a nicely written story, though overly sentimental and borrowed too
heavily from "Possession."


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Msg# 5095

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 11 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:12:49 Topic ID# 5095
Title: Grey and Pale
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1252> Gold · Author:
Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 54
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-01 20:43:30 Score: 4
I thought this was a wonderful story. You did a remarkable job capturing
both the textures of daily life beyond Edoras, on the front, as it were, and
your characters through simple actions and dialog that read clear and true.
It is rare to find a story in with four main characters are each so well
drawn. I'm not familiar with most of your work, but I'm going to seek it
out, now.

Title: 110 <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4427> ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 59
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-01 20:53:17 Score: 2
I think this 'experiment' certainly worked, and worked well well,
successfully communicated experience in thought and memory. Well done.

Title: Shire: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1052>
Beginnings · Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> · Genres: Adventure: Long Form · ID: 703
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Reviewer: Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> · 2005-06-03 02:19:44 Score: 10
This wonderful, original story is difficult to categorize: part adventure
saga, part well-researched ME history, part folk/fairy tale, by turns
whimsical and grim. It’s full of the wonder and magic of storytelling that
deals with origins…which is why Lindelea’s allusion to Kipling’s “Just So”
stories in the prologue (the narrator addresses his listener as “Ah, best
beloved”) is so appropriate.

The origins, in this case, are the very early (though not the earliest) days
of the Fallohides, and the events leading to their migration westward. I
love these hobbits! Sharkey’s ruffians would have had a hard time pushing
THEM around! Brave, smart, selfless, generous, resourceful, pragmatic,
adaptable. No self-pity, resentment, vengefulness. Lin said she has received
complaints that the hobbits in this story are “unhobbity.” Now, granted,
these are Fallohides, and Fallohides in their pure, undiluted form at that,
so a pretty special breed. But to me, they are the very essence of
hobbit-kind…all the best qualities of hobbits, with the surface trappings of
Shire civilization stripped away. They do the right thing instinctively,
without thought of what’s in it for them, as when they help “Grandalf” or
the Elves. They have a nobility of spirit and a quiet dignity that are both
inspiring and humbling. You can see how centuries of easy living could turn
them into the fussy, complacent hobbits of the late Third Age, but you can
also detect in the modern hobbits the traces of these forebears: Tolkien's
"seed of courage hidden...in the heart of the fattest and most timid
hobbit.”

One of the high points of the story is when Glorfindel and Blackthorn visit
the king of Rhudaur. This powerful and disturbing chapter brings to mind the
atrocities of the Holocaust…another time when men refused to see the
humanity in other men though it was right before their eyes. Glorfindel’s
unveiling of his power was breathtaking…straight out of one of the great
fairy tales. The murk that is briefly dispelled and then regathers raised,
for me, the same question about the nature of evil that runs throughout
LOTR: whether it resides in the hearts of men, or comes from without…or
both.

Every now and then—not often—I come across a story that I think Tolkien
would have enjoyed. This is one of them.


Title: The Heirs of <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/heirsofisildurthe.htm>
Isildur · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 24
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-03 22:25:50 Score: 4
This drabble captures a rather Elven moment of humor when it comes to
interactions with races of lesser longevity. There's just so much to keep
track of after a few millennia that it's only to be expected that once in
awhile, one might put the wrong name to the wrong face by about fifty years
or so. It gave a bit more flesh to Lindir's one line in FOTR, that to sheep,
other sheep no doubt looked different, or else to shepherds.

Title: Olorin
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1127> I was in
my Youth In the West that is Forgotten · Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 25
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-03 22:26:39 Score: 4
There are so few Gandalf stories that get inside his head, but in one
hundred words, Azalais gives us a glimpse into the existence of a being
whose embodiment is a real alienation, for whom forgetting is not natural,
nor the aches and pains that even an immortal body inevitably comes with.
The juxtaposition of that brief glimmer of remembrance, and the immense
power that Gandalf's body is housing, with the indignities of age and
Pippin's evaluation of him is very nicely done.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3594&cid=13632> Protocol
of Princes · Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 26
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-03 22:27:27 Score: 4
A humorous interlude between Faramir and Éomer is a bit of a rarity so far
as I can tell in fandom. This one is exquisite. There's a lovely, lazy
mischievousness about it that reeks of Rohan, but also suits Faramir, who
shows himself to have a definite wicked streak. There's a verbal agility in
this little exchange that's delightful on both sides—Fourth Age exuberance
and confidence shines through.

Title: Cunning <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1361107/2/> Gold · Author:
Lyllyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
8> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 28
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-03 22:55:13 Score: 10
As with some other stories, I'm going to resort to some older comments I'd
made, since I still think they're accurate to my view of the story and were
fairly well thought out when they were written. This was a wonderfully
unique take on Glorfindel as a commander, and as a veteran. The
ridiculousness of his attire, coupled with his foreboding that there will be
no victory, that the little he can give—laughter and his life—will be taken
from him by the time the smoke clears, is a terribly clear-sighted
commentary on war. It also brings to mind a particularly apt passage in
Kierkegaard's 'Fear and Trembling' that describes the Knight of Infinite
Resignation:

" I am able by my own strength to renounce everything, and then to find
peace and repose in pain. I can stand everything—even though that horrible
demon, more dreadful than death, the king of terrors, even though madness
were to hold up before my eyes the motley of the fool, and I understand by
its look that it was I who must put it on, I still am able to save my soul,
if only it is more to me than my earthly happiness... Then [I] will calmly
put on the motley garb. He whose soul has not this romantic enthusiasm has
sold his soul, whether he got a kingdom for it or only a paltry piece of
silver."

Glorfindel puts on the garb of the fool for the sake of others. By his own
strength he can do this, and he must do this, and it is war that has brought
him to the point of playing the fool. This also reminds me, on a slightly
more sinister note, of Polonius's famous line: "Though this be madness, yet
there is method in it!" There's a certain personal darkness to Glorfindel
here, a grim understanding, that's at odds with his clothing—a sort of fury,
I think, that comes across that this is *it*, that's all he can do, and they
are still doomed. What redeems him is that 'romantic enthusiasm' that will
play the game out to the very end, and so he saves himself in a sense from
descending into real madness, where for no good reason, he will simply fight
and die in isolation—the meanest of all deaths. By his fingernails, he hangs
on to his relations with others, and in so doing is able to inject meaning
into what otherwise might be a very meaningless fight given the overwhelming
forces we know he will face. Sorry there's so little new material here,
Lyllyn, but it was a lovely story nonetheless.


Title: About Men <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1596277/1/> · Author: Lyllyn
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8> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 29
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-03 23:12:49 Score: 10
This fic captures a certain hobbity sensibility, so that you feel as if you
are hearing a hobbit describe the Occupation. Robin Smallburrow was the only
sheriff we ever got to see who had a voice, and it comes through
magnificently here. Lyllyn covers the important bases in this vignette: the
slow changing of the environment; the difficulty of seeing, at first, that
something is wrong; the inevitable regrets that hindsight brings; and most
importantly to my mind, the ambiguity and complicity that occupation
inevitably bring that make vices of virtues, but which can't easily be
condemned. Robin's point of view, as one of the more obvious collaborators
with the ruffians' regime, is not tainted by the kind of realism that is
really merely cynicism in disguise; nor does he fear to offer his judgments
about what he saw and participated in.

In his very complicity, he's afforded insight and distance enough,
paradoxically, to really testify to the generosity and compassion that I
think Tolkien meant to be the sort of 'spiritual character' of his hobbits.
Robin recognizes that the most basic impulses, to care for one's children,
lead, in unjust circumstances, to individuals consciously doing what they
know, in their heart of hearts, will damage others. But although he does not
condemn those who took that route, neither is there a trace of self-serving
justification in his evaluation—it is this that gives his voice its gravity,
despite the lightness of word and tone that is wholly appropriate to hobbits
and which recalls Tolkien's description of Merry and Pippin as they walked
lost in Fangorn: to hear their voices, you would never guess they'd been in
terrible danger, endured a form of torture, and were even at that moment
facing an uncertain future. Given the current state of global affairs, this
fic is one that I find meaningful as a reminder that complicity and
suffering can breed something greater than themselves, and that it's
important to find it, because otherwise, there is no hope for real healing
rather than a false peace.


Title: Beyond This
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=43> World · Author:
Thundera
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> Tiger · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 32
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-03 23:39:42 Score: 10
I remember when I first read it, I had the hankies nearby and needed them,
which is pretty rare for me and hence it stands in my memory as *THE* Fic
That Made Me Cry. I think the thing that struck me most about this story is
that it deals straightforwardly with the debilitations of old age. We all
find it immensely satisfying to put our favorite characters through the
wringer to let their virtues and endurance shine through, but such
situations are artificial on more than one level. It isn't normal to be in a
situation where one might have to kill someone else to survive or to save
others; it isn't normal to expect to be in such situations. But unless one
is an Elf, old age and the slow impairment of the body and, to an extent,
the mind, are as normal as they are inevitable, but they can be very hard to
write about.

The virtue of this fic is that it doesn't flinch from this. There's no
heroism here—Gimli isn't enduring what he's enduring for the sake of some
greater good. It's simply his time, and he and Legolas have to deal with the
fact of his mortality. Thundera has given us a very wrenching tale of
letting go that doesn't end in a sort of dignified repose (Aragorn) or a
life cut short; Gimli is very simply dying, and his body is shutting down in
a variety of ways that alter the scope of one of Middle-earth's more
infamous friendships. That's hard to write, but done well, as it is here, it
is extremely satisfying.

But beyond that, Thundera uses Gimli's dying and death to put a choice
before Legolas. This isn't just a story about death and dying, it's about
family, and ties and loyalties that are stronger than blood. Legolas in the
end casts his lot beyond the world of the Elves, and in so doing, loses that
most elemental of elven traits: being rooted in self and Arda. He literally
becomes something other than he is in order to pursue his friendship with
Gimli to its uttermost end. Now *there's* a good story!


Title: For
<http://homepage.ntlworld.com/matthew.adams1/personal/isabeau_drabbles.htm#s
eason> Everything There Is A Season · Author: Isabeau
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-03 23:40:28 Score: 5
And another story of the Cygnets of Dol Amroth, which is best read, I think,
with "Just A Bit Of Chop" and could accurately be titled "Lothiriel gets her
own back". War time being over, other virtues than martial prowess and
courage in battle become more prominent. Lothiriel, having been consigned to
them by virtue of her sex, shows herself the more practiced in them than her
brothers. Being a soldier isn't nearly as hard as opening oneself
sufficiently to make a good marriage, or so the reaction of her brothers
says. A humorous little interlude, yet with its own edge to it.

Title: Just
<http://homepage.ntlworld.com/matthew.adams1/personal/isabeau_drabbles.htm#c
hop> A Bit Of Chop · Author: Isabeau
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2> of Greenlea · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 30
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-03 23:41:13 Score: 6
No matter how many times I read this, I laugh. I can't help it. The timing
among the conspirators is dead on, and once it comes out what's really going
on, you can't help but feel for poor Éomer even as you applaud his equally
well-timed trip to the railing. Amrothos, the third brother, also gets
points for his exquisite logic, which fails to move Éomer at all, unless
it's to seasickness. One gets the sense from these hundred words that Éomer
will have *earned* the right to pay court to Lothiriel, which is ironic.
Peacetime having its own measures of worth, being instrumental in the
salvation of not one, but two, besieged cities and little trip to the Black
Gate were apparently inadequate to prove his worth on that score. Well done,
Isabeau!

Title: Gathering the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3082> Pieces ·
Author: Tehta
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5> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 13
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-03 23:47:11 Score: 10
Another instance in which I will borrow heavily from comments left in
another forum, and apologize profusely for the lack of originality. If I
were forced to pick the most compelling fanfic characterization of Maedhros,
it'd be a toss up between this Maedhros and Eärmirë's. Both nicely capture
the refraction that is Maedhros—when Elves break, look out, because it gets
frightening very quickly thereafter.

Tehta gives us an interesting portrait of Maedhros "in recovery". I use the
scare quotes because he is clearly suffering from what we'd call PTSD and
keeping healing, which would require a terrifying vulnerability, at arm's
length. However, being Maedhros, he's found a way to compensate for the fact
that mirror- and navel-gazing are endeavors fraught with peril, as is
allowing anyone else to see him clearly in his brokenness: all his energy
gets sublimated into a chessmaster persona, for whom life is a game only
because the possibility that it might be real is too devastating even to
consider. He becomes isolated, and his intense interactions with others are
in fact a disguise that cover over the fact that he's using those closest to
him in order not to have to deal with any real relationship.

This is not to say he might not have been manipulative before his capture
and torment, but the manner in which he calls his younger self foolish, that
he is glad to have lost parts of his soul and can't talk about that loss to
Maglor, who is closest to him—this all suggests that this chessmaster
persona is at the least an extreme modification of his earlier personality.
He's changed, whether others know it or not. At the same time, this fic
maintains the necessary balance between angstiness and a sort of devastated
calm: it shows the bleakness of Maedhros' life without allowing him to pity
himself in any obvious way. That's essential, I think, and it gives the
story something very unique, especially combined with the manner in which
Tehta writes it: third-person, short sentences that imitate the distance
that Maedhros feels from others and even from himself perhaps. As one who
enjoys it when the form fits the content, that trait just makes the whole
fic for me. He's in a sense not permitting feeling; he may, perhaps, have
lost the habit of necessity, in order to stay sane.

Survivorship is an unenviable position to be in, and it can permit of great
triumphs of recovery; it can also descend to appalling depths whence there
is no possibility of return. This story follows the latter path with
Maedhros; having seen even the beginning, the end of his story should come
as no surprise.

Title: Mary Mordor
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=411> Sue · Author:
Meg
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
3> Thornton · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 7
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-03 23:50:17 Score: 10
One of the dangers of Mary Sue parodies is that they become just as annoying
and clichéd as the phenomenon they are trying to counter. Meg's story,
however, goes to the depths that other such stories dare not go: right to
the heart of the specific kinds of banality, frivolity, callousness, casual
brutality, and vulgarity that together form the underbelly of modernity.

And she does it in the first person, which puts the reader uncomfortably
close to the action—you can't help but identify, and yet you're repulsed and
horrified at the same time. It's an excellent demonstration of the
difference between the kind of violence and cruelty Tolkien portrays and the
kind that informs our own conceptions of violence: it's a frightening thing
when we learn that even Sauron is, in a sense, more innocent than we
ordinary, vanilla-flavored citizens are simply because we lack Sauron's
original greatness, to say nothing of the necessity under which he operates,
and are more free to indulge in imaginary violence, which, by definition, is
unrestrained because unreal.

At the same time, there's something rather dreadfully heroic about Mary
Mordor Sue: she's the lab rat who fights back and the unfettered violence of
her imagination gives her the gutter smarts to survive and achieve her end,
through stepping on anyone and everyone as if without remorse to achieve it.
Even madness can be a tool, giving this OFC a rather unexpected connection
to a certain Danish prince, although as with Hamlet, it's a brutal
methodology that consumes friend and foe and self alike. This is a very
unique and pointed fic, and not for the faint of heart for all that it's a
very short fic—just one scene in prison with Mary and her prisoner, whose
identity and status become horribly clear as the fic progresses. Give it a
try—after this, I think I feel safe in saying, "Take a bow, Mary, there's no
more to be said."

Title: Of Herbs and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4653> Stewed Rabbit ·
Author: Alawa
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3> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 9
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-03 23:51:56 Score: 10
With apologies to Alawa, I'm going to repeat much of what I've already said
about this story in a different forum. We begin this story with a
conversation between a Captain and a young Ranger one wet, soggy Yuletide's
eve, and this after a rather disastrous day in the field that has resulted
in some casualties. One automatically suspects that Aragorn might be the
captain.

But in the end, the situation is reversed in a move that serves to highlight
the real dynamic that drives this story: can one really act from hope or
keep hope alive at all if one always bows to necessity/expediency? What is
the meaning of tradition if it is not given practical expression? This is
the heart of the story—it's the battle of idealism versus realism, hope
versus necessity. It's about making meaning where you need it, because to go
without for the sake of sheer expediency is unbearable. As with Altariel's
"Flame of the West", this story forces us to recognize the importance of
practicing ritual, of making the absurd symbol embody an ideal and hope
worth dying for.

Aragorn, Hope embodied and so quintessentially idealist, is able to show
that the mindset of realism is only correct to the extent that custom and
all the things that make a people who they are and that motivate them to act
in a specifically human manner, are actually dead already. In which case,
the means have outlived their end—survival usurps the place of a way of life
that honors more than the simple fact of being not yet dead. Because he
holds to the original purpose of Rangering—the protection of humanly
necessary ties to other persons, past and present, and the need to redeem
the dead for the sake of present and future generations—Aragorn is able to
breathe life back into that purpose by reminding his captain that sacrifice
in itself is meaningless. Why continue to be a Ranger and suffer so much if
one is not willing to make a moral issue of honoring in practice the ties
they are trying to preserve? At some point, one has to decide what one is
living for and what one is, thereby, willing to die for.

That's the alchemy that transforms foolish risks into meaningful ones that
cannot be easily brushed aside, because Aragorn isn't holding out for a
blind adherence to tradition, either, which would deserve to lose to the
necessity of a given moment. Insofar as the meaning of those traditions is
honored as living in the Rangers who take a moment to light a candle, at
peril of their lives, they're upsetting the whole order of war and dominion
that Sauron et al would reduce them to. This is the very logic that I think
the whole of LOTR is based upon. Beautiful writing, wonderful insight,
without a wasted word. Bravo!

Title: Flame of
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=24> the West ·
Author: Altariel
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1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 1
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-04 00:13:40 Score: 10
This would be Altariel doing what she does best: creating tightly paced,
thematically rich drama centering on Faramir. Here we find only the second
conscious meeting of Faramir and Aragorn, in the Houses of Healing, just
before Aragorn leaves for the Black Gate. But it's more than that—this story
is a reflection on loyalty and honor, and the need, I think, for ritual, for
giving a voice and a form to what might "go without saying" otherwise, but
which would be the poorer for being merely understood.

It takes a certain talent to write ritual meaningfully for an audience that
can be assumed to be thoroughly cynical when it comes to the ceremonies of
power, but the key is that we can see here that this oath-taking of steward
to king is personal between Faramir and Aragorn. It's something that Faramir
needs to do, not simply for his peace of mind but as an act of thanksgiving
and out of love, I think, and it is equally something that Aragorn needs to
do for Faramir as the man who would be—and who for this one man already
is—king.

That Altariel ties that interaction back into the profoundly positive
experience of Faramir's oath-taking with his father just makes it better by
affirming that relationship between Denethor and Faramir as important and
vital, no matter what else might have happened between the two of them. The
two oath-takings therefore shed light on each other by contextualizing each
other, and it's impossible to say whether one redeems the other or whether
that earlier pledge is what furnishes the meaning of the later one, by
setting the later in a relationship of continuity. Beautifully written as
always and something every Faramir (and Aragorn) fan can enjoy.

Title: Dandelion
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1694&cid=7027> Clocks ·
Author: Alawa
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3> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 17
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-04 00:16:07 Score: 10
I had to actually think a lot about this drabble. There's so much to find in
it and I quite enjoyed the hunt. Prima facie, it is a story of mourning—that
last line is fairly suggestive that the occasion for recollection is a
funeral, most likely Éowyn's (although I like the idea that it could also be
Aragorn's). But to stop at that would be to cheat oneself of one hundred
quite marvelous words that do far more than tell us a funerary tale. It's
all about time, which we might expect in a drabble where an Elven character
and a mortal are portrayed together.

We begin in the past, with the recollection of an endless moment. Thus we
start, essentially, in two very elvish modes of temporality: the past and
present, with their connotations of the static, the inert, the
by-default-restful. The seemingly timeless present tense of Elvish existence
is captured as a present oriented towards preserving the past. This
backwards-glancing aspect of the present is evoked both by the fact that
this is a memory and by Éowyn's telling of the collected folklore of her
people—their past, endlessly re-presented for its own sake.

Yet even here, in this first, most elven, paragraph, there are hints of the
intrusion of a different, distinctly un-elven temporality: there are
children present; love, romantically associated with the eternal, is tested
in the transformation of flowers to puff-balls; and the hours are told, yet
we know this is a telling that cannot honor the past but depends rather on
the incessant advance towards the future. This futural dimension is most
evident in the middle paragraph, in Arwen's recollection of the dandelion
seeds that "reached beyond the rim waiting for the wind to carry [them]
away". The seeds reach beyond themselves—beyond the source of their
generation and their 'ground'—towards something other that will catch them
and transport them away to another place, destiny unknown, even as time
pulls one up by the roots and drags one beyond oneself into the openness of
the indefinite future.

All of this, however, takes place in Arwen's memory, and Alawa imparts an
immense sense of distance from that past, which is evoked by a hollow
dandelion stem falling to the earth—presumably onto a grave site given the
veil Arwen wears. But at the same time, that veil has symbolic work to do:
it is not there simply for decorative purposes. Rather, it stands in for the
ambiguity of the present and suggests the meaning of this scene: by virtue
of its position in the drabble as well as its being a physical barrier, it
separates Arwen from what has passed even as it separates her from the
inspiration to memory (the hollow stem).

Of a sudden, at the last possible moment, Arwen comes unmoored. Is it the
stem that falls away, or is it Arwen who is losing what has connected her to
Middle-earth? One might as easily say that it's her own ground that's
falling away, that she assumes the seed's eye view, and that she stands now
on the cusp of that journey towards what is unknown, towards really leaving
her elvishness—rootedness in the past and the eternal present—behind for a
genuinely mortal futurity. Death and birth, appropriately enough in light of
the connotations of floral symbolism, find their connection in Arwen in that
moment; nevertheless, there is a beyond of that closed cycle, which haunts
the drabble, and suggests the Gift of Men that transcends the bounds of the
finite. So in closing: read this drabble; take it for all it is worth. Thank
you, Alawa, for perhaps the most suggestive one hundred words I've read in
quite some time.


Title: To Labor and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4557> To Wait ·
Author: Aliana
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8> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 79
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-04 15:42:48 Score: 3
This is an excellent story, the more so for taking the same moment and
giving it five separate voices, five different hopes and fears. I
particularly liked how the City itself was often characterized - with its
smells, quiet and the walls holding their breath.

Title: Swan
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4204&NGID=286>
Flight · Author: AmandaK
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9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 84
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-04 16:06:45 Score: 2
The beginning of this story was an immediate hook, and the characterizations
were good. I found it sort of unfinished, though.

Title: Close your
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4276> Eyes · Author:
Werecat
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> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 95
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-04 16:19:40 Score: 1
Very sweet, and very appropriately Dwarven, I thought. The last line is
particularly poignant and appealing.

Title: Requiem for
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3859> Boromir ·
Author: maranya14
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0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 6
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-05 13:05:07 Score: 3
Thank you. This is a true requiem in that it brings the departed and those
who loved him together again. Your verses, too, bring the lament back
clearly into my mind. I think you did a good and appropriately strategic
thing in not including the whole lament here, but completing it.

Title: Dance of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3312> Terrible Grace
· Author: Adina
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8> ATL · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 57
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-05 13:06:26 Score: 1
A great, flash of an idea unfortunately, I thought, weighed down with too
much unnecessary description.

Title: Fairer Than
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3587> Most · Author:
SlightlyTookish
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5> · Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 69
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-05 13:18:36 Score: 3
This story has a lot of joys: good characterizations, a plausible and
in-keeping with Canon plot, and fun. I particularly liked Sam and Aragorn
coming together; a more unlikely pair in that quintet is hard to imagine but
for the skill and good sense of this author.

Title: On
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=317&NGID=2> His
Stewardship · Author: Alawa
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3> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 73
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-05 13:24:01 Score: 2
Two remarkable poems each catching clearly the Steward's voice. Who but
Denethor could be so vain and proud about serving in another's place? And
sees his city as the only love he can truly have.


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Msg# 5096

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 12 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:13:15 Topic ID# 5096
Title: Travellers'
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2523> Tales · Author:
Alawa
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3> · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 75
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-05 13:28:31 Score: 2
Great story. The way the narrative rambles through all Bilbo's so thoughts
naturally and plausibly is remarkable - not a rough transition anywhere.
This story hits all the right notes in a wonderful little song.

Title: The Machine That Changed the
<http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1948948/1/> World · Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 80
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-05 13:30:51 Score: 2
This was a good story - good characterizations, well told. The "what" of the
machine was obvious, however; cliched. I wish there had been more debate;
that was interesting and original.

Title: Cold <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3414>
Memories · Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 82
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-05 13:31:08 Score: 1
Very sweet, tried and true characterizations.

Title: Beyond
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=3977&NGID=197>
Imagination · Author: annmarwalk
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7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 103
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-05 13:33:11 Score: 2
Very nice. I particularly like the knowing Finduilas and Denethor in an
arena where he has no power or control - he is most endearing that way.

Title: Alqualonde <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=56>
· Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 36
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-05 18:07:41 Score: 7
Joan Milligan poses the question: Would there have been a story if
Alqualonde had not been destroyed? It's a disturbing question, one that
could easily be interpreted as expressing a causal relation: No story, no
interest, without destruction, therefore, destruction causes stories, causes
interest. Maglor certainly finds that Tirion's mettle was uncovered only
when put to the absolute test. The whole meaning of the city is, for him,
uncovered only in its breaking. We might say this is a story about the
monstrousness of the great stories; their very greatness derives from their
destructiveness. Certainly, it's no accident that Maglor, Maedhros, and
Fëanor all find something worthwhile in the ruins. If ever there were a
peculiarly elvish 'sin', making ethics subordinate to aesthetics might well
be it. Well done for bringing that forward, Joan. This is one of the first
round of Tolkien fics I read, and it has remained with me ever since.

Title: Last Hero <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=193>
· Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 37
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-05 18:08:14 Score: 9
Another story about the rather frightful relationship between death and art,
in this case presented through the eyes of Éomer and his memories of Éowyn.
Joan does a good job of giving Éomer the experience he needs of battle,
while at the same time making the battle of Pelennor a turning point for
him. The old songs make war a game, and promise a happy ending by denying
its reality. Éowyn serves here as the voice that disturbs conscience, with
her childhood questions: do Orcs feel pain? Do Easterlings? Will you come
home? She's at once a participant in the games, but also the one who
overturns the board. Éomer finally realizes this when he thinks she's died
on Pelennor, and suddenly, the falsity of the songs, their sly reliance for
their splendor on the omission of death and blood and pain and the sheer
contingency of battle, are brought home to him in a way that even previous
battle experience could not manage. At this point, Éomer is operating under
sheer necessity, and suffering the absolute brutality of that condition.
It's a great reversal, one that isn't quite recuperated back to the level of
songs when he sees Aragorn's standard and has his happy ending for just a
few minutes. But a few minutes only, it's implied, before the reality that
the songs rest upon claims its due again.

Title: Ghost <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3234>
Fires · Author: mir_noldoris
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4> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 34
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-05 21:22:57 Score: 10
Reading this fic, I'm reminded of an Eliot quote that seems to be popular on
professorial doors:

" So here I am, ... having had twenty years—
Twenty years largely wasted...
Trying to use words"

For all the play with words in this fic, it is remarkably silent—a sort of
silence of the tomb. It's appropriate, since this is a fic about the death
of not one, but two people. Though he's survived the Nirnaeth, Maedhros is
an image, a damaged sort of spectre or spectator who returns to a Hithlum
that's become a wasteland. And Fingon as speaker (or rather writer) is
actively deconstructing his letter from beyond the grave—nuancing it, taking
it back, denying it matters, denying the power of words even as he writes
them. There's something cheap about words, as he says.

But Fingon still knows better than to think he can do without saying them,
and so he struggles with them, trying to catch (without killing) something
essential for Maedhros in a final gift that probably still has too much
ambiguity to it for Fingon's taste. Nevertheless, Fingon, in his last
letter, and beyond his death, has somehow managed to cast his lot in with
the living and with life, despite it all. His letter, playful (in a serious
way), self-conscious (in a sophisticated way), almost indecent in its
intimacy, turning back on itself as communication, is nevertheless a
portrait of the relationship he and Maedhros had, and in relating it,
there's a certain liveliness to it that honors the life of that
relationship, and continues it beyond death.

Or it would, if Fingon's letter were received by the person he'd actually
addressed it to. Unfortunately, however, the elf that Fingon knew and loved
is dead in a more final and horrific manner than Fingon himself, who has
lost in the end only his body. Thus Maedhros serves as a bitter counterpoint
to Fingon's ultimate desire for and trust or faith in the vitality of the
relationship they've created.

"Look at this [letter] sometimes," Fingon writes. "Hopefully you will find a
little of the writer in between his lines. At this last, I want you to
remember that everything that you will recognise is a thing of your making.
Everything you know and love, is because of you, and what you have been to
me."

But the letter miscarries, for the Maedhros who should have received it
precisely does not recognize himself in the writer. "Allow a warrior his
moment of sentimentality, and let me say it – I have never known anyone so
wonderfully alive, as you. Everything you do and touch and so much as look
at, seems to overflow with the simple power of your will. That is worth
saving, Maitimo, no matter what happens to the rest. Keep that safe. Keep
that burning," Fingon writes, but there's nothing of that life to be kept
alive in Maedhros any longer, and so the relationship is aborted for lack of
a listener. Finding even the renewal of life in burned out Hithlum to be a
desecration of the dead, Maedhros shows he failed to absorb the lesson of
Men that Fingon had learned: that life does go on. And so ultimately what
Maedhros lets burn is not life in its glory, but the very letter by which
Fingon holds out a lifeline.

Another beautifully, horribly compelling vision of Maedhros and his descent
by Eärmírë, anyone with any love for the Silm will want to read this.


Title: Gloria Mundi <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2149186/1/> · Author:
Altariel
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1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 38
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-05 21:43:55 Score: 10
If there's a theme running through these drabbles, it's "visionary" or
"imagination", and their power to transcend the limits of a bounded
existence. Whether it's the whisper that an aging, blind Malbeth, stripped
of pride and place, faithfully repeats even to the hopelessly deaf, or
Nienna who places faith in the power of pity to move even fate, the subjects
of the tales all stretch towards something they can sometimes scarcely
envision, barely articulate, and which comes to them in often flawed form.

The glory of the world comes in holding on to what is not yet in it, it
seems, but which might be and which involves the visionary or even the
ordinary in something far beyond themselves. It's a kind of absurdity in its
way, but the sort of absurdity that deserves to be taken seriously as a
relaxation of necessity, an escape from the bounds and limits of the past,
from the sense of having always come too late or being too powerless in the
present moment to do any good. Tolkien might have called the sentiment or
orientation running through these drabbles "estel", and opposed it to
"amdir". Thus not only does Altariel once again takes full advantage of the
one hundred words allotted her, but she gives us a lovely quintet of
drabbles, one admirably suited to themes I think Tolkien would recognize as
his own. Well done! I'm very pleased to have provoked this sort of fictional
reaction.


Title: Offerings <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1361107/1/> · Author: Lyllyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
8> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 27
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-05 22:38:57 Score: 10
"Offerings" gives us an introspective Éowyn that makes efficient use of the
few hundred words it permits itself. Éowyn's conversion from despairing,
wounded warrior to a healer willing to put down her shield at last is a
source of some controversy in terms of whether or not it comes too quickly,
whether thematic interests overtook character development to the point of
damaging the latter. And then there is the small matter of whether we should
see Éowyn as a heroine or as a deserter. Lyllyn takes these elements and
shows Éowyn's cyclical struggle to make them all cohere. Where other authors
tend to put the accent on what she accomplished for others in terms of
judging her, Lyllyn gives us a different rubric that makes the most of the
split between the external standard by which Éowyn is normally evaluated and
the internal standard that usually is used to excuse her:

" And that is what she remembers best at this time. That in the end,
whatever difference it made to others, it made little to her when she woke -
still broken. Great deeds did not redeem the damaged soul."

Judging Éowyn from a third person perspective inevitably tends to highlight
either her internal motivations as selfish, or else her external deeds as
outweighing any faults Éowyn may have committed, or it too easily renders
Éowyn a clinical case of depression, pure and simple and in that sense,
neither right nor wrong. By allowing Éowyn to give us her own internal
rubric—to admit that she rode in part because she was damaged, even
crippled, and saw her ride as a last, desperate attempt to recover herself
by doing what her people reserve to healthy persons—the external measure of
deeds gets integrated differently. They have to be judged against the
internal expectations of the relationship that Éowyn entered into with them,
and then we see the real ambiguity of her actions and choice brought out.

On the one hand, the external deeds are shown to be totally inadequate
measures of her endeavor, not because Éowyn is in some objective sense
morally at fault, but because they did not meet her expectations. On the
other, because of that failure, that inadequacy itself forces her to
question whether her expectations, her fixing on Dernhelm as the solution to
her need to heal herself, were fundamentally flawed, so that it's a
question, firstly, of whether she understood the end that a warrior serves,
and then secondly, whether she respected that end *or* the end she had given
herself, namely to mend the broken soul she was and so make herself
serviceable.

That puts her beyond the limits of the heroine/deserter question—in a sense,
it's the wrong question, that ends in a too simple answer. And if we can
infer from this fic that Éowyn remains still in the shadow of the
heroine/deserter debate, in practice, she has moved beyond that and decided
that she was wrong to ride insofar as she misunderstood (and so unwittingly
offended) a warrior's calling; but by the same token, she's realized that
healing, real self-transformation, is not achievable by picking up a sword.
That's the meaning of her atonement, I think: she demonstrates in dedicating
herself to others as a healer that she respects now the separation between
that calling to mend brokenness in self and others from the calling of a
warrior, which is wholly different. It doesn't mean she doesn't still have
doubts or feel conflicted over the ambiguity of her actions as they are
conceived in the terms of the heroine/deserter debate, but she recognizes
that the best apology she can make is success in her new life as healer.


Title: Five Things That Never Happened to
<http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2103245/1/> Faramir & Eowyn · Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 39
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-06 00:05:03 Score: 8
Well, these five hundred words have permanently cured me of any desire to
write an AU to Faramir and Éowyn's romance, which is perhaps unfortunate
since I'm kind of committed by a prior fic... The basic possibilities are
all gracefully covered: that Éowyn didn't ride as Dernhelm, that Faramir
went to Imladris instead of Boromir, that Éowyn married Aragorn, and two
scenarios in which the war is lost but in one way or another, the
relationship between them is won. There are a few other options, but they
strike me as less interesting. Powerful in their brevity, these five
drabbles cut right to the heart of the matter every time, and feel
remarkably complete considering how short they are. Hope and despair each
have their moments, but more times than not, true to Tolkienish form, hope
prevails, even in the darkest of circumstances. I think the last one moved
me most: what do you do when you live to regret the victory of your enemy,
and the utter destruction of the society you knew? Toil, age, and most
importantly love, because that in the end is what keeps hope alive. An
absolutely gorgeous little set—bravo, Altariel!

Title: Fathers' Day Card from
<http://www.berryarts.com/lizallinos/denethor.html> Faramir · Author: Llinos
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
> · Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 788
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · 2005-06-07 03:55:07 Score: 2
Very funny; and well-rhymed! It's always amusing to see humorous takes on
the usually angst-filled relationship of Denethor and Faramir.

Title: Strange
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=3510&NGID=140>
Meeting · Author: JeannieMac
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 743
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · 2005-06-07 04:09:11 Score: 4
A short and powerful retelling of Aragorn's finding Faramir in the "dark
vale" of the Shadow. I envision Faramir to be more resistant to despair at
the time that Aragorn finds him, but this story makes sense and holds the
reader's attention as it is. I particularly liked Faramir's recognition of
Aragorn's wry, self-deprecating humor as well as the kingly authority.

Title: Fever <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4431>
Dreams · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 397
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · 2005-06-07 04:18:23 Score: 4
One of my favorite Faramir-in-the-Houses-of-Healing stories; a lovely take
on Faramir's memories of being healed by Aragorn, and how he perceives them,
a nifty intermingling of past and future. Excellent characterisation of
Faramir and Pippin. I like Faramir's bleak courage when he thinks that the
City is still under attack and prepares to go out to battle even though
injured...

Title: Below the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2996> Balcony ·
Author: Ninamazing
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
9> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 496
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Reviewer: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · 2005-06-07 04:26:16 Score: 2
What a great idea - three scenes showing original characters who see Faramir
and Eowyn's embrace on the walls! Well-written. The best section was that of
that of the elderly gardener trying to will his plants back into life...

Title: Prelude <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/513858/1/> · Author: Mercat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 109
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-07 15:49:59 Score: 3
A very enjoyable story. I particularly liked Legolas's aloofness and simple,
clear view of things - very characteristic to my mind. The detail of Frodo's
not caring about their route rang true and was a great metaphor for his
condition at the time.

Title: Light
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3535&cid=13431> and Leaf
and Color · Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 110
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-07 15:52:33 Score: 3
Very good. I began to wonder at Denethor's seeming sentimentality but, when
I completed the drabble and knew it as a whole saw more his giving her the
news and describing the city he loves before getting straight and to the
point. Very insightful characterization.

Title: Marriage
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12153> Counseling
· Author: annmarwalk
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7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 111
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-07 15:54:05 Score: 2
Very nice, simple, clear; this captures a moment nicely. I love it when a
drabble sounds natural and unforced as this does.

Title: Beast of <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2325>
Burden · Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 118
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Reviewer: jillian
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baade · 2005-06-07 21:48:04 Score: 1
I love this, the story of the old plough horse who is a hero. It shows the
horrors and courage of war so clearly.

Title: Home Cooking
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1468> Hobbit-Stlye ·
Author: Budgielover
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Reviewer: jillian
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baade · 2005-06-07 22:16:58 Score: 1
Great!! I loved the attack of vicious soap bubbles especially.

Title: The Soul of a Sinda <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/soulofasinda.htm>
· Author: Marta
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Reviewer: elfqueen2003
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1> · 2005-06-07 23:14:56 Score: 1
very short, but very touching

Title: The Rooster Man
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=338> of Gondor ·
Author: Chelsea
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2> Nolan · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor · ID: 321
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-08 22:06:03 Score: 10
I remember seeing this pop up as a recommendation in my e-mail, and I
thought at first that it was some sort of joke. But it turned out to be a
story filling a gap I'd never noticed existed, and forever more, the cock
that crowed and signaled the beginning of the end of the siege of Minas
Tirith will be associated with this fic.

Among its many virtues is the fact that here is a tale of the mad in
Middle-earth. You know there must have been people who suffered from various
forms of mostly harmless psychoses (as opposed to Black Breath induced
ailments), but we don't see them in Tolkien's writing. The Rooster Man,
who's really rather cast adrift in this fic and left to scratch among the
deserted streets when everyone else evacuates is a rather forlorn, pitiable
character for a time.

But just because he's mad doesn't mean he's totally without comprehension,
and he ends up finding a unique place in Minas Tirith's embattled forces. I
remember reading somewhere that in some of the most extreme situations
(concentration camps, alas), those who normally would've been considered mad
and unable to cope with society suddenly found themselves in a sense in
their element, able to function as no one else could. It's at once horrible
and wonderful—right on that edge where you don't know quite what to say. As
a mascot who keeps hope alive with a bravery that's childlike in its total
disregard for self-preservation, the Rooster Man becomes emblematic of the
elemental truth of Gandalf's words: even at the worst of times, the Rooster
Man flourishes, and so he falls within Gandalf's realms as one of those who
will bear fruit and flower, as it were, thwarting the Enemy's ultimate
triumph.

In all, a great story. Bravo, Chelsea, for such a memorable character.


Title: Bittersweet
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1043&PHPSESSID
=466178cd3479a0f686f348cef575786a> · Author: Vistula
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3> the Dunadan · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 43
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-08 22:16:32 Score: 7
To me, this drabble gives a nice sense of what's gone into the man that
Aragorn is, despite its brevity. It's structured in a nice triad. One begins
in the more remote past, in Imladris, with the memory of his first home and
a more innocent time; then one moves to the woman who broke him out of that
time in a way that the brute fact of being Chieftain did not, and who set
the tone for the years of isolation as years of testing, not simply
enduring—Vistula gives us a nice sense of the juxtaposition of youth and
experience that Arwen's companionship brings out in him, and the passion
that underlies Aragorn's somewhat remote, stern personality. It still might
be simply nicely nostalgic, but for the ending, when Aragorn awakes to just
another cold day's work in Eriador, and the present, the person that he is,
as the last line signals. A very nicely done sketch of my favorite Rings
character, in just one hundred words.

Title: Fëanor
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=51&STID=1238&S
POrdinal=1> Challenged · Author: stultiloquentia
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4> · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 45
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-08 22:34:58 Score: 8
I don't analyze poetic form with any skill, so I'll spare everyone the
effort, but the rhythm here is just delightful. As is the content. Fëanor
and Galadriel are a match for each other in terms of pride, and this as much
as anything fuels this rather pointed courtship. The poem is called the
"challenge of Fëanor", and he certainly takes up Galadriel's mocking words
as a challenge to his skill: can he win her heart, despite her scorn? Love
and possession go hand in hand with Fëanor, as Stultiloquentia suggests by
the very form of the poem: his stanzas bracket hers, enclosing Galadriel's
reply as if anticipating a successful capture of the lady's affections. It's
all a bit malevolent. Which is not to say Galadriel goes meekly—although I'm
assured that the meter is consistent throughout, to the eye, Galadriel's
stanza has shorter lines. They visibly narrow the poem, and so seem more
pointed, more emphatic echoing her rather sharp rejection of Fëanor. Even
those intimidated by poetry will, I think, find something to enjoy here.

Title: Dark
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9911> Memory ·
Author: Forodwaith
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> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 46
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-08 22:45:38 Score: 5
I can always be tempted by fics featuring Aragorn and Halbarad, and
Forodwaith gives a tantalizing snapshot of the two of them trying to make
their way through Moria. The wherefores and hows are not given, just the
dread and danger of the journey, and a sense of friendship that runs at
least as deep as the mines, which can find comfort in a bare touch to remind
each other that they aren't alone. I would love to see the rest of the
story, but as an evocation of atmosphere and the comfort of companionship,
the drabble suffices. For now...

Title: A Bitter
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3500> Gift · Author:
Avon
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> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 47
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-08 22:47:24 Score: 8
With apologies to Avon, I'm going to resort to an old review I wrote and
expand it a bit. I've seen a couple of different fics that examine how
Elrond would've explained mortality to a young Aragorn. It's certainly an
interesting topic, and the Aragorn addict in me finds the idea fascinating,
that one would have to learn about dying secondhand, because no one around
you naturally ages or dies. "Bitter Gift" does justice to the characters,
both in terms of species but also in terms of age: Aragorn is believably a
child here, but not a caricature of one--I could see the adult Aragorn we're
familiar with from LOTR growing out of this boy. Elrond is believably
immortal, though one who has had to deal with death in a way most Elves do
not. Avon is very effective in using Elrond's own past to create a realistic
ambivalence in him towards death as a gift, one that is matched by Aragorn's
ambivalence in accepting out of duty, but wishing the Gift had not been
given. Well done!


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Msg# 5097

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 13 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:14:30 Topic ID# 5097
Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=90&STID=2061&S
POrdinal=6> Swan Feather · Author: Starlight
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5> · Genres: Romance: Vignette · ID: 50
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-09 23:43:55 Score: 7
This is a very unique depiction of Denethor and Finduilas, quite angst-free,
and with a lovely sense of play to it. We usually see the serious side of
Denethor and Finduilas, but not in this little vignette. Despite the fact it
takes place mostly at night, in the dark, there's a delightful sunniness to
this depiction of the two that is rarely found in fandom. I think what I
love best about it is that we see the private side of their lives that's
totally unattached to government—which means it's not family talk either.
No, instead, we see Finduilas like nearly any other bride, excited by what
seems a good start to her new life, but also bound by the superstitious
traditions of her past. What we don't expect is that Denethor's own
superstitious precautions for a good marriage would thwart hers. The
resolution is both touching and humorous—looks like things are off to a good
start at least!

Title: There
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1129> And Back
Again · Author: Azalais
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7> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 51
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-09 23:44:55 Score: 4
One can never get enough of Bilbo disrupting the expectations of his
neighbors. His arrival back from the quest of Erebor just in time to save
his parlor chairs (but not his silver) is vintage Bilbo, imbued with the
confidence and cheek that survivors of tender mercies of live dragons tend
to have. And a lovely glimpse of Hamfast here, that suggests that family
loyalty we will later see between the Gamgees and the Bagginses.

Title: Grey and Pale
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1252> Gold · Author:
Kielle
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7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 54
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-09 23:47:03 Score: 10
Sorry to repeat an old review. This is a very good exploration of loss of
growing up in Middle-earth. Death happens, it's present, oftentimes
overwhelmingly so, and children learn to deal with it early, in spite of the
efforts of adults to shelter them. "Children weren't supposed to know...."
But Éomer knows what the lack of a body means, and he's waking to the fact
of the title and responsibilities he's inherited. Everything is still rather
black-and-white for him, though: he isn't thinking in the long run, but in
terms of what's present, just as a child would. I kept thinking of Bergil in
LoTR, running herbs back and forth to the healers, and breaking down and
crying over Faramir because it's all just overwhelming. Éomer's fear over
the prospect of leaving the Eastfold and his hostility towards Théodred are
very reminiscent of that scene, or at least it is to me.

Likewise, Éowyn isn't supposed to know that her mother is dying, but she
does. Of all the adults and near-adults who're pulled into this family
tragedy, she's the one who knows what needs, at base, to be done. Shades of
the future, as she shows Théoden with a child's forthrightness how to accept
the unacceptable. It seems she began her training in that early.

Finally, I liked picture of Théodred in this, as well--I can see why Éomer
is so fond of him, and why his loss would be devastating later.


Title: In the <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2759>
Wild · Author: Forodwaith
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> · Genres: Horror · ID: 304
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-09 23:48:01 Score: 7
Ah, yes, the ever popular question: so what sort of knowledge, exactly, did
Aragorn have when he warned the hobbits in Bree about the Nazgûl? What was
behind his apparent recollection of them? Forodwaith provides us with a
plausible answer in this story, sending a young Aragorn, still quite green
and finding his feet as a Ranger, on what ought to be an easy escort mission
home with a wounded older companion. As might be guessed, that's not at all
how things go, as first wargs, and then the Nazgûl themselves ambush them on
the edge of Mirkwood forest.

The writing is nicely atmospheric and brings out the fear and horror of the
situation well—the Nazgûl standing silently by as Aragorn prepares what he
imagines must be his final defense are eerie and enigmatic, which I very
much like. The wargs, too, are quite suitably vicious and cruel, and I still
shudder over Mallor's fate. A very nice gap-filler, one that Aragorn fans
will surely enjoy.


Title: Cover
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=203&STID=3752&
SPOrdinal=1> Him with Violets · Author: Regina
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4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 347
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-10 00:40:10 Score: 6
I seem to be making a tradition of nominating Regina fics that deal with
death and burial customs. As a gap-filler, this gives us Ioreth in a
sympathetic light, which I'm always in favor of finding—no easy task when
she ends up on the wrong side of Aragorn's and Gandalf's opinions. We're
reminded with this vignette of the minor characters--the ones who don't have
a royal or at least noble pedigree lurking somewhere in the background, and
who suffer and die namelessly but necessarily in this war. You see the
'small' struggles that go on, and the need to reclaim, in a way, the
memories and lives of even strangers in order to honor them.

Title: He Who
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=248> Laughs ·
Author: Altariel
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1> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 398
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-10 01:17:27 Score: 8
This is one of those pearls that one occasionally finds, where a lengthy
story gets boiled down to its essence and then distilled in a few lines of
gorgeous prose. The brevity of this fic only heightens its impact—there
really isn't a wasted word in this story, that opens, appropriately, with
the act that closes it: laughter. Túrin's entire arc is present here, in
this short meditation on the movements of fate, and speaking as one who
personally cannot tolerate another reading of the "Narn i hin Húrin", I can
certainly sympathize with *this* Túrin's reflections on his life, and the
way everything seems to tend inevitably towards the undoing of his efforts,
the thwarting of every good intention as action turns back against the
actor. And surely the gift of Men has never been put to such fearful use
before, as the epiphany that moves Túrin to laugh again at the end of his
life, and then choose death. Well written, and the ending, with the vengeful
celestial swordsman, just waiting for Armageddon day to avenge the wrongs of
fate, is a wonderful image.

Title: The Unexpected
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3151> Homecoming ·
Author: JMac
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3> · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 792
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-10 01:40:40 Score: 7
The joy of coming-home fics is the opportunity they afford to show how a
character has changed, and how once-familiar surroundings no longer fit as
they once did. Of course, the Shire is in quite the uproar when Bilbo
returns home after Erebor, a wizard in tow, to the terror of all those
who've gotten bargain prices on Bag End furnishings. Jmac uses the inherent
ridiculousness of the situation very well, as Bilbo goes on a quest to
retrieve his favorite chair from the Sackville-Baggins—although humorous, it
shows his mettle, now well tempered by dragon fire and numerous other
hardships.

Beyond that, Gandalf is put to good use as a foil, and comes off very well,
which I quite enjoyed, Gandalf being a difficult character to capture. This
gapfiller really does round out "The Hobbit" nicely in both tone and
content; I quite enjoyed it.


Title: Reconciliation
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3745> · Author:
Nrink
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4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 44
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-10 09:34:34 Score: 8
Ah, family matters! I think what I like best about this is the sense of
moral pilgrimage that maps onto the physical journey Faramir undertakes to
reunite his mother and father, and so to restore, in a way, family ties that
had been broken. It's appropriate, too, that this begins with a vision—one
that no brother will take from him this time, as it comes to him alone. In a
sense, this dream and the other complement each other, and as Faramir's
first dream helped set the world on the path to liberation, so this one sets
him on his own private path to freedom. Because that urn full of Denethor's
ashes feels awfully like an albatross, which is brought out clearly in his
memories. In setting it down at last with Finduilas in Dol Amroth, Faramir
is able, to borrow a line from the movieverse, to stop carrying the weight
of the dead on his shoulders. His father's final command from beyond the
grave undoes the last command he gave Faramir in life, such that in
fulfilling it, Faramir finds peace at last, rather than torment, in being
the dutiful son.

Title: Natural
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12145> History ·
Author: annmarwalk
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7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 112
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-10 14:20:17 Score: 2
Very nice; I enjoyed seeing Faramir become a content old man in love with
the land around him. This is what peace should feel like.

Title: In Umbar, at
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2307> the docks ·
Author: Werecat
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> · Genres: Mystery · ID: 117
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-10 14:34:31 Score: 2
Excellent, atmospheric story. It stands well on its own. Well paced with the
repititions providing nice structure that both show progress and harken back
to the start.

Title: Foolish <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1930540/1/> Hobbit · Author:
Tialys
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0> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 120
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-10 14:40:09 Score: 2
Great job. The characterizations were particularly strong and refreshing
here; this is the Gandalf of the Hobbit - myterious, obtuse, humorous; and a
lively, impassioned Frodo. Lovely to see.

Title: Eyes like the
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=4609> Moon · Author:
Werecat
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> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 125
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-10 14:43:00 Score: 2
Very nice; I found the repeated line in the poem tiresome after a bit but
the short portrait of Faramir was gripping and moving. I wonder he didn't
think more on the soldier himself, though.

Title: Something Wicked
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4323> This Way Comes ·
Author: Werecat
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> · Genres: Horror · ID: 130
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-10 14:55:43 Score: 2
Very eerie, very interesting. The Captain is a well-drawn character, It's
provocative to see Aragorn and that battle from the other side, and the foe
in some ways as victims.

Title: The Mark of a... <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1315>
Warrior? · Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 133
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-06-10 14:59:35 Score: 2
So funny ... and explores nicely what must have been an ordinary and oft
repeated moment in the trip in a very amusing - but oh so typically male -
way!

Title: Leavetakings
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1124> ·
Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 138
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-10 15:02:04 Score: 2
Very nice, simple and straight forward yet quite evocative. It's an
interesting thought that one's death can bring a friend peace.

Title: Mary Mordor
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=411> Sue · Author:
Meg
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
3> Thornton · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 7
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Reviewer: simon22cat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=45
0> · 2005-06-11 10:54:36 Score: 1
Very good. Kept my attention to the very end.

Title: The Old Dwarf and the Sea <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1819850/1/> ·
Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 3
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-11 12:11:37 Score: 10
Although many of Isabeau of Greenlea's stories incorporate great humorous
episodes, I've never seen her do an out and out comedy until I read this
story. And what a story it is!

Reviewing humor is difficult, but I think it is safe to say that Isabeau
pulls no punches. She exploits the stereotypical differences between Gimli
and Legolas as an Elf and a Dwarf without quite crossing over into boring
clichés. And I must give props for the fact that Gimli gets all the good
lines. Indeed, Gimli is the hero of this story, and I commend her for giving
him his due without reducing this to slapstick; PJ, sit up and take notes!
And Gimli fans, gather round, because you won't want to miss this.

As might be expected with a Dwarf at the comic helm, geeky references and
engineering jokes abound. Isabeau is utterly merciless here: I never thought
I would see references to Star Trek, Murphy's Law, or Gilligan's Island
serving as punchlines for a Tolkien fic and actually *working*. There is
something indescribably wrong, and yet at the same time, so very, *very*
right about the notion of Gimli presiding over the (dangerous,
mishap-ridden) creation of motorized power in Valinor, with geek Elves named
after the Wright Brothers for sidekicks. Truly, the Undying Lands will never
be the same again! Yet the humor never occurs at the expense of
characterization—this is intelligent comedy, thoroughly enjoyable, and far
truer, I think, to book!Gimli than his movie incarnation ever was.

Although a WIP, I recommend it without hesitation—readers should be sorry to
miss it. In any case, I hope whatever mood Isabeau was in when she wrote
this strikes again soon!


Title: Beleg's Doom: or,
<http://www.libraryofmoria.com/turinbeleg/belegsdoom.txt> Most Definitely
Not The Lay Of Turin · Author: Tehta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
5> · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 42
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-11 12:16:17 Score: 7
The author's note says that she took an "over-enthusiastic" interpretation
of "Laws and Customs of the Eldar" and so set poor Beleg on his path of
doom. The utter cluelessness of Elves with regard to their own biology backs
up an account of the bumbling romance in the works between Beleg and Túrin,
the latter of whom is clueless in a more typically masculine way. If ever
they were left alone together, with no interruptions, one gets the feeling
they'd need all night to figure out what they were supposed to do with each
other.

Replete with the enthusiastic application of sword-metaphores, and Beleg's
careful noting of them, and quoted lines you can scarcely believe weren't
begging to be taken subtextually, Tehta skewers the cliché about the
clueless, virginal slash male in an absolutely merciless fashion. Despite
wincing, I couldn't help but laugh.


Title: Not Without
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3879> Hope · Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 48
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-11 12:20:06 Score: 10
This is, without a doubt, the best fictional exposition on this topic that I
have ever seen. Gwynnyd starts with one of those irritating problems of
logic that plague the Appendix, and gives a great explanation of it that
makes sense not just of how Gilraen and Aragorn could be kept in Rivendell
without rousing the suspicions of the Dark Lord that perhaps he'd not quite
managed to stamp out the line of Isildur, but also of Gilraen's apparent
isolation from her people upon her return. It's a gutsy move on Gilraen's
part, and it really shows her commitment, both to the Dúnedain and also to
her son—she can't go to the borders to fight for him, but she is willing to
lay her reputation on the block for him without hesitation, which takes a
psychological toughness as well as calculation.

Beyond the logistical problem that Gwynnyd very neatly solves, the reader is
made to share Gilraen's grief over Arathorn's death, her stifling sense of
helplessness and anger before the designs of Arathorn's second in command,
who is just as devoted to the line of Isildur, but lacks the imagination
that Gilraen has. One can feel for both characters, despite their opposition
and the severe power discrepancy between them. Gwynnyd captures the
emotional rawness in a very satisfying manner, and even though Gilraen is,
in a way, very much defined by her child, it isn't a cheap
identification—you feel for Gilraen, for her limited agency, but you have to
cheer for her for her willingness to claim what little space she has to
maneuver in as an unarmed woman among men. "Not Without Hope" is aptly named
on more than one level, and I highly recommend it to any Aragorn fan or
Dúnedain fanciers—you won't want to miss this one. Thanks for a fic
well-written, Gwynnyd.


Title: A Step
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge14/5258.html#cutid1> in The
Dark · Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 1221
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Reviewer: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> · 2005-06-11 20:39:52 Score: 3
Reading this a second time, I still suffer a chill. What a frightening
image! I don't know if the drop you don't see is better than the drop you
see... sometimes imagination is worse than the reality! I'm certainly glad
Legolas put out his hand, just at that moment!

Title: Sight <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4380> ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 374
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Reviewer: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · 2005-06-12 13:43:39 Score: 4
Mmmmm, I just love this. Unofficial or not, it fits very well with
Plasticchevy's story. Gil's quiet nature is captured *very* nicely, and
Boromir' s moroseness with his blindness manifests in a wholly believably
fashion. There is also a lovely way with detail - the window with the faulty
latch, the description of smells and tastes, etc. -- and the actual physical
act is evocative and rather poignant.

Title: Olorin I Was,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2844> Olorin I Am ·
Author: Arquen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
3> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 137
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-06-12 17:27:46 Score: 2
Arquen. I have always enjoyed this unique gapfiller of such an important
time in Gandalf's life (or death, as the case may be) - we are told so
little about what happened. Thanks for writing.

Title: Something
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3065&cid=13460> to Do
before the End · Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 753
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=14&form_story_filter=753>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-06-13 21:45:11 Score: 2
What a wonderful presentation, warming to have such help and such closure. -
it brought a tear to my eye. Thanks for writing.!!

Title: Cheery Letters
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1951> From Bree ·
Author: Lulleny
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
2> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1094
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-06-13 21:50:32 Score: 2
An enjoyable gap-filler, and what an interesting little bit of time to fill,
great idea - and well done. I enjoyed your writing, very engaging and
active. Good job!

Title: Remembrance
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2566> · Author:
Ancalime8301
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 90
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-13 23:25:48 Score: 2
Interesting take on how Frodo might've dealt with his illnesses after the
War, when he and Sam and Rose were sharing Bag End.


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Msg# 5098

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 14 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:14:34 Topic ID# 5098
Title: Remembrance <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1928301/1/> · Author:
Ainaechoiriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=2>
· Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 108
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-13 23:29:15 Score: 2
I think the last line sums up Legolas' relation to his mortal friends
nicely: "Grief is my burden; remembrance, my destiny". It goes well with
"Immortal" and feels suitably elvish to me. Nice!

Title: Seasong
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1125> ·
Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 149
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-13 23:29:46 Score: 2
Legolas in love—and in only one hundred believable words! I liked Gimli's
observation, that Legolas will need companionship that will outlast his
mortal friends, some of whom he has already lost.

Title: The End of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2592> Days · Author:
Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 158
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-13 23:30:32 Score: 6
Very poignant depiction of Galadriel, patiently waiting for one who will not
come, and of the ultimate uncertainty of the Elves: bound to Arda, whether
or not the last battle is won, they stand a very good chance of dying with
that world so far as they know. At the same time, they still have a duty to
choose to uphold what is good when that time comes, and hope beyond all
reason that after Armageddon, there is not simply nothingness in store for
them, that perhaps they will reunite with mortal friends and family and even
Elves whose bodies have faded utterly and who never came to Valinor. A
lovely tale of hope in the midst of loss and losing. Well done.

Title: The Other Day <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1373> ·
Author: Space
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
5> Weavil · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 159
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-13 23:33:39 Score: 8
Usually we see Elves hanging about in historical time, meeting Dante or
maybe even Tolkien himself, commenting on the sheer waste of the Trojan war,
etc. The Ents have a similarly long view of matters, but it's nonetheless an
extremely differently-paced, differently-oriented view: although Elves think
on an incredibly long time-scale, as the title of this story indicates, from
the time of the Ring War to Greenpeace activism, it's all really just "the
other day" to the Ents, and even day and night aren't really remarked as
discrete intervales. The hastiness of human beings gets put into a very
treeish perspective that Tolkien doubtless would have appreciated and
recognized, as the two ents attempt to have a quiet chat with each other
about the world and are perpetually interrupted by the results of human
hastiness: wars, automobiles, bombs, tree-huggers, and part-time ecologists,
all of them with one common trait: they're so busy moving quickly, they
never learn to pay attention. It's a sad and ironic end for the Ents, but
one that isn't out of pace with the world of Men.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2199&cid=9011>
Merry Meeting at Bree · Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 211
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-13 23:35:00 Score: 8
As usual, Maya imbues the rather formal tone of her writing with a very
pristine sort of color—there's a brightness to the way she writes, and it
seems she is building a nice little repertoire of stories focusing on
reunions that make use of a good-sized ensemble of characters. It was lovely
to see Nob carry much of the story for once, at least as an observer and (in
fine Shire tradition, it seems) a certain amount of eavesdropping. One
always suspected, from the glimpse of the Butterbur-Nob relationship that
Nob couldn't be nearly as slow as Butterbur made him out to be. The story
ends as Maya's stories seem to do often, by sliding into the canonical text,
as it were, but with Maya's own twist on them. I particularly appreciated
Rose's view on Arwen's and Elanor's most memorable attribute (their
beauty)—it adds that needed earthbound touch, so to speak, to keep our
legendary figures from floating straight away into hyperbole. A lovely,
cheerful story about nothing in particular, save friendship—and what, after
all, could be better than that? Well done, Maya!

Title: Garden
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11573> · Author:
Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 220
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-13 23:35:42 Score: 2
It's nice to see something made of the fact that Faramir and Legolas are
neighbors in the new age, and of Legolas' observation that gardens are badly
needed in Gondor.

Title: Touche <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3561>
· Author: DragonLady7
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
9> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 229
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-13 23:36:18 Score: 3
One wonders what the matter was that led up to this little fencing match.
Given that the two are clearly playing, it could've been just about
anything. An amusing vignette—I think Éowyn's assessment of her brother's
ruthlessness right at the beginning was among the best lines and rather set
the tone for things.

Title: Dawn <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=643> ·
Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 251
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:12:44 Score: 3
A brief, in-fic analysis of Faramir's state of mind when he accepted his
father's last command, and the difference it makes to know he has someone to
return to who clearly and unambiguously loves him. It's a thin line between
Pelennor fields and any other battle, it seems, and one that Éowyn maintains
for him.

Title: As
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=2370&NGID=114>
Though to Breathe Were Life · Author: mir_noldoris
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 257
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:13:30 Score: 4
This is a tough space to write in, I think. Giving back the Gift in so late
an age involves so many more people than just Aragorn. But I like the idea
that it's not world-weariness, but a certain necessary restlessness of
spirit, that desires to know the world—and death is that last threshold, the
final lesson, and one that need not be fearful if properly approached.

Title: Butterbur
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=2899&NGID=118> and
the King · Author: Eledhwen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 261
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=15&form_story_filter=261>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:14:10 Score: 5
Another lovely story about Aragorn's return to Bree as King of the newly
resurrected Arnor. Eledhwen caught Butterbur's voice well, I thought—a bit
rambly, but fundamentally cheerful, and not without a certain eye for the
irony of having, on past occasions, put Strider the Ranger up in the stables
rather than an actual room. That Butterbur doesn't even know where Arnor is
just makes the story better—why should he? And I found the unnamed Ranger
who ended up as Aragorn's and Arwen's dinner companion a most delightful
'prop'. An enjoyable sketch.

Title: Blossoms
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> · Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 287
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:14:58 Score: 2
The Aragorn fan in me can always be lured to respond to something like this.
Keen are the eyes of the Elves indeed, and Aragorn's surprise is classic. A
sweet moment, nicely turned out in just one hundred words. Bravo, Erin!

Title: Farewell
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=10268> · Author:
Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 302
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:15:39 Score: 2
I liked the notion that Legolas, on the very verge of sailing, is still
caught between trees and sea. Gimli's understanding, his utter sympathy and
patience, are beautifully portrayed in this short space of words.

Title: All
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2929&cid=11235> Hallows'
Day · Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 317
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:16:13 Score: 8
A well-crafted modern day ghost story that brings Tolkien's Elves into
historical time just long enough to make a rather Biblical exit from it, and
leave behind an extremely grateful marine. Once again, Marnie gives the sea
its due—it is no tame puddle of water in her hands; one can believe Osse is
rumbling about out there, as deadly in his strength as ever. Very aptly does
John have recourse to the kind of raw power and beauty of Biblical
archangels, who are terrifying in their splendor and whose first words to
mortals is necessarily "Be not afraid". If that goes for a couple of
houseless (or nearly houseless) Elves, it goes doubly so for the ocean.
Celeborn in this fic hasn't much of a voice, but his tireless search for his
grandfather is very touching, and although he does, it seems, save John from
a watery grave, I think it's right that he is not overly interested in him.
His attention is given to other things, and a mere mortal is barely going to
register in the face of the fulfillment of his long search for Elmo and a
passage to Valinor. A wonderfully uplifting ghost story, Marnie! I quite
enjoyed it.

Title: Turning the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=968> Page · Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 337
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:16:55 Score: 9
"Turning the Page" goes in with "The Last Grey Ship", both of which are
about facing the inevitable with grace. This time, we have not Aragorn's,
but Éomer's last days, and a very intimate glimpse of Éomer's state of mind,
which is as one might expect it: content with the life he has lived, with
still that particular Rohirric sparkle, ready for what awaits even though
still quite grounded in the worldly. Éomer's no ascetic at the end of his
life—he's spent too much time absorbing the shocks of life in all their
varieties to be hollowed out and drifting at the end. The obvious love and
intimate friendship his last letter demonstrates towards Aragorn is
revealing of a long, well-kept relationship, and there are some lovely,
humorous touches. I particularly laughed at the line: "My son tells me the
men once said that the honor of riding with their king was only matched by
the saddle-sores thus incurred, but of late I prefer a more sedate chair."
That sounds about right for Éomer!

ErinRua is another of those writers who puts the slightly formal style of
Tolkien to good use, and still manages to get a surprising liveliness out of
the language, which her readers will doubtless appreciate.


Title: Telling the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2068> Bees · Author:
Fileg
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 343
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:17:28 Score: 4
I love the quiet feel of this story—a bit subdued in tone, but reading it, I
had a very vivid, colorful image of Bag End and the bees in their fields,
and one can practically hear them buzzing about. Sam's speech seems to
capture his voice well, and contrasts somewhat with his narrated point of
view, but the effect isn't jarring to me and allows for a richer narrative
texture. It ends hopefully, as is, I think, right. A very satisfying ficlet,
fileg.

Title: Passages <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3759>
· Author: Flick
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 352
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:18:05 Score: 5
For so short a story, this is wonderfully evocative, as Legolas watches his
companions succumb to death or departure, one by one (or occasionally three
at a time). One gets that sense of events rounding off, of Tolkien's world
closing to us, even as Legolas finds himself less and less rooted in
Middle-earth as his mortal friends die and pass on to whatever fate awaits
them. Gimli brings a lovely symmetry to it all: he and Legolas will be the
last, and they, like Boromir who went first, will pass by the river and on
to the sea, in pursuit of the only treasure worth having: friendship.

Title: Faint
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=13513> Hope ·
Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 357
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:19:08 Score: 4
Another well-written drabble from Forodwaith. She neatly finds the symmetry
between her and Sam, both of them condemned to find no rest or comfort in
Middle-earth so long as the ones they love leave it ahead of them. Arwen's
prescient vision, that in spite of her hope to see Frodo and Sam happy in
the Shire, she will not see the two of them together again, seems also to
foreshadow her separation from Sam, since Sam will take ship to Valinor,
whereas she will remain in Middle-earth.

Title: Farewell
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9416> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 362
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=15&form_story_filter=362>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:19:40 Score: 4
A very rare fanfic interaction between Middle-earth's remaining wizards.
Forodwaith deftly has Radagast turn Gandalf's own words against him to
justify remaining in Middle-earth: his charge are the plants and animals of
the world, and so long as something lives that can bear fruit, he has not
failed, he simply continues in the task appointed him. A touching moment
that makes one wish for more about the relationship among the istari.

Title: Ithilien,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11967> Part II ·
Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 380
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-14 01:20:12 Score: 2
A nice moment between the Steward and the Queen that leads to Faramir
gaining some new and immortal neighbors in Ithilien. One gets a sense that
Ithilien will be a sort of second Hollin—a way of allowing lost Eregion to
bloom again by proxy.

Title: Father
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1126> to Son ·
Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 139
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-14 15:50:51 Score: 2
This is a fine drabble overshadowed by the unlikelihood created by Tolkien
and clearly illustrated here that Thror could have possibly hidden anything
on him in Dol Goldur. It's a stickler.

Title: Hands
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1134> of a
Healer · Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 142
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-14 15:55:06 Score: 3
I found this an excellent drabble for so many reasons - the rarely seen
pairing of Arwen and Bilbo, Arwen's quiet strength, the unspoken closeness
between Arwen and Elrond ... despite so few words you've created a rich
story of dramatic action and deep characterizations.

Title: Sulnur <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/sulnur.htm> · Author:
sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 145
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-06-14 15:59:18 Score: 2
This is a wonderful characterization, hinting at a more human love but
remaining specifically true to Sulnur's nature. Excellent.

Title: Civitas <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4522>
Mundi · Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 56
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> · 2005-06-14 20:42:26 Score: 5
It was this collection of short shorts that changed my mind about drabbles,
at least when a very good writer puts five of them together with a common
theme. Dwim writes elegantly, sparely, and conveys such an emotional punch
with each piece. My hands-down favorite was Blood Ties because of the way it
captured the tension between danger and courage. I loved the glimpse into
life in late Numenor - please pardon the lack of diacritical marks in that
word - and I thought using "the Templers" was a great touch.

Title: Hardiness <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1325>
· Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 372
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-15 22:39:39 Score: 3
A lovely, hobbity vignette, and what a nice use of the flowers to bring out
the fundamental truth of LOTR: goodness survives, and is hard to root out. I
liked the humor at the end, that it should be the lobelia that survive
Saruman and his minions.


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Msg# 5099

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 15 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:16:38 Topic ID# 5099
Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3348&cid=12756>
City of Scarlet Flowers · Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 390
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-15 22:40:19 Score: 2
A way of remembering the dead without being melancholy or needing recourse
to the sorts of monuments only the rich can afford—a healing gesture indeed,
and a lovely ficlet.

Title: Aragorn
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13122> Himself
Waits for a Sign · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 392
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-15 22:40:51 Score: 1
It's nice to see that palantir put to a good use! But even good use doesn't
always bring the news you want.

Title: Fireside
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13133>
Reflections · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 400
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-15 22:41:22 Score: 3
I really liked this drabble for the implicit use it makes of Faramir's
claim, that he doesn't love warfare for its own sake. Neither, it appears,
does he love it for the bonds it forms among comrades, and that, to me,
speaks very highly of him while remaining true to the character Tolkien
created.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=114&STID=2370&
SPOrdinal=20> Voice of Experience · Author: Ijemanja
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 415
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-15 22:41:54 Score: 2
If ever there were a reason why Éowyn might refuse to let her daughter
become a shieldmaiden, this seems the right one—bitterness over being
trained to do something and then denied the right to do it.

Title: Insomnia <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3019>
· Author: AfterEver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
2> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 62
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 3
This vignette has a spooky quality to it. Spooky might be the wrong word.
Eery, I guess. Anyway, it's moving. Very, very moving; I was immersed in the
world of the Last Alliance completely, and I felt the despair. This probably
isn't the alternative universe I would have written but it was very
interesting nonetheless.

Title: Last Hope
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2296> · Author:
AfterEver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
2> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 64
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 9
I really enjoyed this story. It is a topic that has always particularly
interested me, perhaps because I am particularly interested in cultural and
especially cross-cultural details. So Gilraen's adjustment to life in
Rivendell is a particularly fun read for me. And you have mastered something
that I wish more authors could: creating believable original characters,
without them overwhelming the story. They're definitely there and their
personalities have depth, but they read more like minor characters than
major ones. They are tantalizing.

I think my favourite scene, though, has to be young Estel sitting on
Elrond's throne (for lack of a better term) when he and Gilraen first arrive
in Imladris. That is so unbelievably cute! I can just imagining Estel's
smile. And later, near the end, when he asks Elrond if he needs cuddling...
*awwww*. I can see this pair developing a very close relationship all the
year, which would have of course made Aragorn's love for Arwen (which would
steal Aragorn's only daughter from him) all the more painful.

By the way- is their any basis for the alienating of the Angle from
Rivendell in the time of Aravor's son that you refer to throughout this
story? I am very interested, as I have never heard of it before.

Title: The
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=196> Flowers
of the Forest · Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor · ID: 2
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 2
This is a beautiful vignette, with a penetrating theme. I especially liked
the line "Culumalda, simbelmynë – flowers of Ithilien, flowers of Rohan",
and the use of Faramir's statement at Henneth Annun at the very end.

Title: Mistress <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=635>
Gilraen · Author: AfterEver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
2> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 65
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 4
Nicely told. I particularly liked Gilraen's disdain when she learned of
Elves' diminished sexual drives, and that Elrond really *didn't* desire her
as a mistress. Which of course we all knew anyway, but it was nice seeing
Gilraen discover it, and with it just how different life among the Elves
could be. I do love AfterEver's Gilraen! Probably better than any other I
have ever read, though maybe Gwynnyd's is a tie.

Title: A Light Beyond
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1520> the Darkness ·
Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 10
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=16&form_story_filter=10>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 10
I think what I most enjoyed about these poems was the understatement of the
erotic, especially in Arathorn's sonnet. The imagery there seemed almost
courtly, ponly it was a little forward for such a model. So much romance and
especially erotica in the Lord of the Rings fandom lacks that subtle, almost
ambiguous, quality that makes it feel so much more historical. This is one
of the reasons why I love reading your work so much. Especially with the
lead couples of the Angle (Gilraen and Arathorn, Arwen and Aragorn) you have
a real knack for capturing the tension between duty and pleasure. I can see
the spirit of Aragorn's comment to Bilbo (I think) in the Hall of Fire that
often has he had to put pleasure aside.

But the poem that really took my breath away was Gilraen's villanelle. The
form is what first did it for me. I have tried to write villanelles, but it
is the one form that I have never really been able to capture, so I bow in
homage to those who have mastered it. And here Alawa clearly has. I loved in
particular the way you worked in how different citizens of the Angle
(besides Gilraen and Arathorn, obviously!) might think that the age
difference between Gilraen and Arathorn was too great. Interplaying this
with the erotica that makes it OBVIOUS that Gilraen and Arathorn don't feel
the same way was pure genius.

How could they be improved? There were a few places where, to make it scan,
I had to delete a syllable of a word. Pow'r as opposed to power, that sort
of thing. It would have been easier on a first reading to have these
scanned-over syllables marked (like I did above with pow'r/power). But this
is really a minor criticism in otherwise brilliant love poems. The softer
side of my heart is still demanding more.

Title: Watching
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1677> Thoughts ·
Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 11
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 3
Another set of poems that is nice to read. I like how you captured Aragorn's
and Arwen's love in a period that few seem to touch on, because there isn't
much (canonically) to touch on. But these waiting years are in many ways the
most interesting. Well done.

Title: Dandelion
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1694&cid=7027> Clocks ·
Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 17
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 4
I was not aware of the folklore idea of dandelions being used to "tell time"
until Tanaqui wrote a writers' circle piece several months ago where she
also used the concept. Maybe it's a British, or at least non-American,
concept? It's an interesting one, and I think you used it to good effect
here. Your use of imagery was also strong, and you did a good job of
creating a plausible post-War of the Ring moment in so few words; none were
wasted.

Title: Idle Leaves
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3344> · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 68
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 3
I never imagined one of Tolkien's more heroic types writing freeverse; for
some reason it seems more fitting coming from the pen of Halbarad than
Aragorn. However, you did a fantastic job of working in so many of the hints
we get from canon. This was a very enjoyable read.

Title: Love's Labours
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=300> · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 71
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 2
These vignettes were well-conceived and masterfully executed. I particularly
liked Arathorn's remembrances of his courting of Gilraene, and the impact of
the weight of being Isildur's heirs.

Title: One Day <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2019>
· Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 72
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 1
This is an interesting poem -- and on a topic I never would have thought to
do myself.

Title: On
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=317&NGID=2> His
Stewardship · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 73
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 1
This poem is spooky. Beautiful, vivid, but also spooky. I think the irony
makes it even better; thanks for the good read.

Title: On
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=317&NGID=2> the
Death of His Wife · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 74
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=16&form_story_filter=74>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 2
The first time I read this I wondered what was meant by the first line,
"Now, she is passed and I am yours alone;". Now I think I know, but I don't
want to spoil it for other people. Anyway, this is another nice sonnet. A
very worthwhile read.

Title: Travellers'
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2523> Tales · Author:
Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 75
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 6
When I think of Bilbo, I definitely imagine him in "The Hobbit", which for
me is a pretty light image. The pernacious hobbit who "good morning"ed
Gandalf the Grey, or who worried about whether Thorin and his dwarves would
eat all of his seed cake, leaving none for himself. I'm sure Bilbo had his
grumpier moments, but somehow, that's not the image I am left with. However,
the Bilbo in this short piece was a bit irritated and more than a little
gloomy. If I had to describe him in a phrase, it would be "cabin fever". You
captured this side of his personality very niceless, and you made me
believe. All in all a capturing read, if not exactly a fun one.

Title: Gríma's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1287&NGID=51>
Giftgiving · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 502
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=16&form_story_filter=502>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 2
I never imagined Grima writing any kind of poetry, let alone haikus. Yet
somehow this didn't seem out-of-character for Wormtongue. Good job.

Title: A Lullaby for
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1154> the Longest
Night · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 503
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=16&form_story_filter=503>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 1
This is a nice poem, combining both interesting new year customs and a
strong sense of custom.

Title: The
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/I_P/P/PathsOfTheDead.htm>
Paths of the Dead · Author: alex_cat_45
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=57
> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company · ID: 999
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=16&form_story_filter=999>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 4
I generally imagine things from alternate perspectives, but this is one that
even I never imagined. And you made it very real, very three-dimensional. It
was spooky, which fit the narrator, but it was also touching, especially
there towards the end.

I was confused toward the end, though. In bookverse the Dead don't actually
sail up the Anduin. At least, I don't think it is. If it _is_ movieverse, it
works fine as such, but I would have preferred to have been warned upfront.

Title: A Proper
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3896> Course of
Action · Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> · Genres: Humor · ID: 78
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 7
"And if anyone had mastered the “grim foreboding” expression, it was surely
Aragorn, Gimli thought" As soon as I read this line (maybe even before!) I
knew I was going to enjoy this piece, and I wasn't disappointed. Legolas and
Gimli were a perfect comic pair, and Gimli's raw comedy worked especially
well. Minor characters like Halbarad and the Sons of Elrond also worked very
well. And the image of Eowyn seducing Denethor, who is not only *so* not her
type but also half a century older... well, let's just say I started
chuckling early and didn't stop throughout. Of course we know what happens
canonically (which just makes gimli's last line all the more perfect), but
that doesn't mean this conversation didn't happen. I had never thought about
it before, but I'm sure it probably did at some point. Nice use of the humor
inherent in book-canon, which is so rarely done effectively.

Title: Object
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4015&SPOrdinal=1>
Lessons · Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 586
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=16&form_story_filter=586>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 10
In her story "A Proper Course of Action" I admired Aliana's Eowyn for her
spunk. She was perfect as a comic figure, and I really enjoyed her in that
role. But in the end comedy is not my favourite genre, and this story shows
that Aliana is more than capable of writing Eowyn in a more serious role. I
loved how Eowyn still had a hint of Dernhelm in her. I think there always
will be (and here I'm sure I reveal myself as more of an essentialist than
an existentialist) because I don't think those personality traits that
Tolkien labelled as Dernhelm were unique to that situation, and I don't
think they would disappear after she is "tamed" in the Houses of Healing
sequence with Faramir.

But even more than that I think you really, REALLY nailed Frodo's character.
The comparison with Merry was just too perfect, and exactly how I see those
two. The ring of course played a role, but I think some of that is inherent
in their characters. Merry is not only much younger than Frodo but he is
also a Brandybuck, which I think would make him more adventurous and less
serious. He could be responsible when he needed to but would prefer to let
others take the lead in that area.

Anyway, you captured all of this very well in a short space. The omniscient
style to the very beginning and end was not quite to my liking, but I
suppose that is probably my personal preference, and not any fault of the
author's.

Title: To Labor and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4557> To Wait ·
Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 79
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=16&form_story_filter=79>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 6
I love pieces centring around original characters because they provide such
a novel glimpse into Middle-earth. There's only so much you can do with
canon characters, and OCs often provide a more blue-collar perspective. This
piece offered many characters that seemed very suited to their positions,
and you captured them all so nicely. The story of the herbist especially
touched me, because you did such a fantastic job of capturing what it would
be like to be deprived of your sight, but they were all very good. Reading
this story is what led me to "Fallen", and I never regretted taking the time
to read either of these pieces.

Title: Fallen <http://tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=287> ·
Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 212
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 8
It amazes me when an author can create a world that is almost entirely
original, but yet feels very well integrated with canon. Aliana does that
here. We see glimpses of the Houses of Healing in _The Return of the King_,
of course, but our exposure is more or less limited to Ioreth and the
herb-master. Canon characters skirt along the edges of this story, but the
focus stays firmly on our cast of original characters -- Valacar, Elloth,
Beren, Laeron, and the others

There were some minor things that caused me confusion. For example, the Army
of the Dead seems to have reached Minas Tirith (making this story
movie!verse), but Elrohir and Elladan heal the Gondorians (which would
situate the tale in book!verse). However, there is enough redeeming
qualities to make me forget this discrepancy. I think my favourite
characteristic was how the author developed a sort of version of feminism,
about the place of women in a less domestic environment like the Houses of
Healing. I look forward to seeing where this story goes.


Title: Gloria Mundi <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2149186/1/> · Author:
Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 38
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 2
Each of these drabbles is very interesting. They are on different themes,
but somehow feel connected; they complement each other. I particularly liked
the one about Malbeth, and the talk about blind vs. dumb.


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Msg# 5100

Re: Daw's story is complete.... Posted by Elena Tiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:20:36 Topic ID# 5081
Thanks, Ainae!

- Barbara

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> Okay, thanks. I've moved it to Drama: Mirkwood
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Msg# 5101

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 16 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:20:37 Topic ID# 5101
Title: The Machine That Changed the
<http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1948948/1/> World · Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 80
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 5
This certainly is an imaginative tale. My reading of Tolkien's Gondor is
that he sees it as being more or less antiquity/early mediaeval, so I'm not
sure he envisioned them developing this kind of technology. (It is my
understanding that the printing press did not arise in Europe until a fair
bit later, though the technology was certainly developed in other parts of
the world.) I can see the Elves or perhaps the hobbits (if they had more
widespread literacy) developing the technology more easily. Regardless, it's
a fascinating concept, and Elphir's fear of the results were well handled.

Title: Moss and
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=116> Stone ·
Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 560
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=17&form_story_filter=560>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 2
Another interesting nook of canon that I had never thought that much about.
It was interesting to read, none the less, and I think you really nailed
Bombadil's character.

Title: Enmities
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4139&NGID=175> ·
Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 561
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=17&form_story_filter=561>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 7
I have to admit, this confused me a little at first. Having Drukh (I think I
got that name right -- the protagonist) refer to her children as pups made
me think at first it was some animal, probably a warg. However, later in the
piece you made it clear this was an Orc of Mordor. I am not sure how I would
make the beginning clearer, but if you are interested in editing that might
be something to consider.

Beyond that, it was a very nice read, if reading about the denizens of
Mordor can ever be considered "nice". A lot of this felt like the
conversation overheard by Sam in (I think) "The Choices of Master Samwise",
between the two orcs. You know, the one where they discuss their desires for
the future. This piece offered insight into a culture we really don't see
much of in canon, and made them understandable without being much less
orcsy.


Title: Swan
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4204&NGID=286>
Flight · Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 84
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=17&form_story_filter=84>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 5
Ah, this one brings back memories for me! I remember a stone sculpture of an
owl that a cousin put in an old tree beside her house, where real owls
lived. Of course the wind knocked it down and it fell to a nook in the
roof... and yes, we were just as foolish in our efforts to get it back. Of
course Boromir would act that way, especially for Faramir's toys. Well done.
I also liked how you gave Imrahil's perspective of the council scene at the
beginning -- it avoided the easy way to get across Denethor's panic, and was
doubly effective for tht. Well done on all of it. :-)

Title: Cold <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3414>
Memories · Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 82
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 2
This is a cute moment, but unlike many young-Boromir-and-Faramir stories,
you can see hints of the men these two children will become. And it was very
refreshing to see post-Finduilas Denethor as something other than an abusive
father.


Title: The Captain's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3210> Last Charge ·
Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 5
This is a touching rendition of a touching moment. You took a moment that
felt movieverse, yet managed to instill some of Faramir's sense of duty and
his moral fortitude. As Isabeau had Heth say in "Captain, My Captain", more
should be said of the battle for the causeway forts. She was right; they are
so poignant and emotion-filled and dramatic, yet I guess because Faramir is
the only real canon character that appears, there's nowhere near enough
written about the attempt to hold (or recapture) them. Thank you for this
moment.

Title: Jerusalem
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1748> · Author:
Amarie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
1> · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 658
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=17&form_story_filter=658>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 8
I love stories that connect Middle-earth with our modern times (or at least
those times recorded in actual "history"), and this is one of the best such
stories I have read. It seems that having Elves or other immortals
experience historical figures is one of the most natural ways to do this.

There were a few historical inaccuracies that bothered me slightly. For
example, the fact that the Hebrews call themselves Jews. I think this is a
later term? But perhaps I am wrong, and am being slightly bothered for
nothing. Also, I was unclear why an Elf should think of the kings of NUMENOR
as being majestic? Depending on who exactly the author envisions this elf to
be, surely an elven kingdom like Gondolin or Doriath would be more
appropriate?

That's another thing I liked so much about this story. You never really
specify exactly who the elf in question is. I know from what other people
have said that some assumed it was (I think) Maglor. Or Maedhros? I always
get those two confused. For some reason I thought it was Celeborn, but as
the exact identity is open-ended, it gives the reader even more scope to
imagine things.

Title: His Last
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1713> Words · Author:
Amarie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 85
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=17&form_story_filter=85>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-15 23:46:04 Score: 4
This piece is frightening in its depth, and I don't think I have ever read a
piece that even tried to capture Boromir's madness. Let alone succeeded.
This piece does both, and with an awe-inspiring brevity. It almost felt as
if the author was channeling Boromir. And because I am shameless, I'll ask
here if the author ever considered writing a sequel, in which Faramir
receives one or both of these letters. *evil grin*

Title: The Horn-Cry
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1816> of Buckland ·
Author: Lulleny
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
2> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 467
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-16 00:50:17 Score: 8
This is a very well-crafted little tale that shows the long-lingering
effects of the war on even the most cheerful of hobbits. It is a quite
striking characteristic of hobbits that they seem to keep matters
light—Merry's line in "Houses of Healing", that hobbits tend to make light
of things, and so are robbed of speech when more serious matters need to be
discussed comes very much to mind when reading this fic, as does Tolkien's
narrative voice, drawing attention to the apparent good cheer of Merry and
Pippin when they were wandering lost by the river in Fangorn. But that
lightness doesn't mean there isn't darkness, or that hobbits are always
robbed of words in the face of griefs. The pain of memory, and of the real
contrast between the peace they have now and the price they have paid for it
is made starkly apparent. Sometimes the contrast becomes too much to bear,
but Merry and Pippin have grown up and grown wise in their journeys as well,
and learned that they can be grateful for that very difference. They don't
need the grief to enjoy what's good, but neither do they permit grief to
overwhelm the good. Well done, Lulleny!

Title: As the
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=309> Magnet Finds
Iron · Author: Nessime
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> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 491
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:51:12 Score: 7
A very poignant, but ultimately uplifting story. The survivors of Helm's
Deep, and the poor, burned-out lands around it, are given their due for
toughness, courage, and compassion. Those who are familiar with Nessime's
"If Ever Two Were One" will doubtless get more from it than those who are
not, but even for those who are not, it's a lovely glimpse into the lives of
Westfolders, who overcame the losses suffered during Saruman's invasion only
to sacrifice sons and husbands to Pelennor and the last battle before the
Black Gates. But even amid misfortune, they find in their ties to each other
reason enough to celebrate, and not to mind overmuch the scars of war, on
either bodies or land. It's all a matter of perspective, and an apocalyptic
war tends to focus one nicely on what matters most: family and friends.

Title: Guarding the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=88> Shire · Author:
Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 513
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:51:49 Score: 4
A nice little exploration of the Rangers' long watch on the Shire that
unpacks a bit more Gandalf's motivations. I'm always in favor of giving the
Rangers of Eriador their due for the long labors they undertook, and
Shirebound brings out nicely the sense of isolation they felt from those
they were guarding. Not that they begrudged in any overt manner their work,
but just hearing a hobbit recognize what they had done all those years made
a very real difference for them.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=185&STID=3473&
SPOrdinal=1> Greater Gift · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 540
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:52:42 Score: 3
Very nicely written drabble—I love those last lines in particular, how they
join together a choice of gifts that could not have been offered
independently of each other. Thus temptation becomes also the opportunity
for transcendence and healing. A dangerous offer, but ultimately a means to
a greater end. Good job bringing that out, Tanaqui!

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13193>
Refuge for the Weary · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 547
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:53:25 Score: 1
Here, Tanaqui neatly puts Faramir and Elrond on a level where lost brothers
are concerned. Well done.

Title: Moss and
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=116> Stone ·
Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 560
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:54:25 Score: 5
I'm not normally a fan of Tom Bombadil, if only because I can't bear the
poetry, but as a tying up of loose ends, this is a nice little vignette. I
did love the foxes, and Tom's general disinterest in the world beyond his
borders takes on a different cast as he allies himself with the longer
cycles of the living world. And one gets the sense that Gandalf, too, needs
looking after, and that Bombadil provides that, in his own, inimitable
way—giving Gandalf permission, even orders, to go home at last.

Title: Bare Feet and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2945> Beer · Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 571
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:56:04 Score: 5
I enjoyed this look at the beginning of a friendship between Faramir and
Aragorn, as opposed to of Steward and King. I had rather wondered what
Faramir knew or thought of Aragorn's prior service in Gondor, that he would
be quite so concerned about the state of his king's knowledge; the later
revelation made sense of that, and allowed a certain clearing of the air
between them, and a reassessement of what their relationship is going to be
like on levels both personal and political.

Title: Garden
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13134> Secrets ·
Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 573
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:56:40 Score: 3
You can take the girl out of the army, but you can't take the army out of
the girl. Not if you want your petunias to flourish, apparently. I always
suspected Éowyn couldn't give up her swordwork that easily, and here we see
a rather deadly art in the service of life, if in a very different manner
than usual. Nicely done!

Title: Object
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4015&SPOrdinal=1>
Lessons · Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 586
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:57:25 Score: 8
Ah, very well done! We usually see the fading of Middle-earth from an elvish
perspective; but here we see it played out in this short conversation
between Frodo and Éowyn. I particularly appreciate Aliana's bringing out the
fact that with the worst of evils, the grandest of goods is also lost, and
that for Éowyn, this means that that thread of Dernhelm within her will grow
ever more unsatisfying. For the great deeds of the next Age will one and all
have a certain pettiness to them—they will come in the service of politics,
of ordinary, if messy and tragic, failures among Men, not from the absolute
opposition of all that is good against the very incarnation of evil. Thus
the Ring itself serves as the passing point between two worlds: on the one
hand, it was the product of a higher power in all its perversion, that bent
such power into an innocuous seeming Ring; on the other hand, the very
unassuming, mundane form it took heralds the sort of mundane, banal evils
that Éowyn will face in the new Age. An object lesson, indeed.

Title: Faithful
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=3126&NGID=129> Star
· Author: Tiana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
4> Luthien · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 593
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:58:43 Score: 4
I really enjoyed watching Faramir and Éomer wait for Elboron's birth. I
don't know whether it's that they truly are written well and with a very
sympathetic, yet humorous eye, or whether it's the basic vengeance instinct
at work here: women labor, let the men at least suffer a little!, but in any
event, the story definitely got a smile out of me, not least because of the
priceless Ioreth-Éomer interaction.

Title: Who Will
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4049> Care? · Author:
faramir_boromir
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 612
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 00:59:23 Score: 4
A nice little vignette, this, and one that illustrates that often muted
irrepressibility of Faramir, or perhaps his resilience. Despite the
circumstances, he can still find a reason to persevere, and to go on with
the tasks of living, including cleaning up after the dead. And while pride
might come first in the list of reasons to clean house in the face of
apocalypse, it's duty that ends it, and that brings a smile.

Title: The Masters of Buckland
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1591> Have Always Been Romantic
· Author: Saoirse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
8> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 624
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 01:00:20 Score: 2
A sweet little vignette, with just that touch of chaos that comes of
breaking in one's new home. How nice to find generations' worth of blessings
on the project and Merry and Estella's life to come.

Title: I Will Know <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=4577>
Suffering · Author: Andy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
4> Longwood · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 704
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 01:01:01 Score: 2
Interesting to see the differences among the Elves in Valinor, and how
mortality brings out the burden that sheer innocence can be.

Title: Sunstar
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=138> ·
Author: illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 705
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-16 01:01:40 Score: 2
I think what really made this story for me was the epilogue. That shift in
view rounds the story out, and makes us realize that Sam is really gone,
leaving a gap in the lives of his loved ones. That makes that last flower
the more precious.

Title: Good
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> Stone ·
Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 721
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 18:26:07 Score: 2
Sweet resolution to Legolas' and Gimli's plans. Their effort to make garden
and statuary compliment each other ties it up nicely.

Title: One Day in
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1262> Ithilien ·
Author: jen_loves_elves
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 744
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:08:49 Score: 2
Quite amusing—I've seen that conversation before, but it hardly ever ended
so well... A humorous short that made me laugh.

Title: By All
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/5053.html#cutid1> The
Signs · Author: Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 757
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:10:12 Score: 1
An interesting little interlude. I particularly liked the last paragraph,
for the use it made of the rhyme Frodo sang.


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Msg# 5102

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 17 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:20:59 Topic ID# 5102
Title: March Frost <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1574> ·
Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 769
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:11:38 Score: 2
Nice vignette that gives a wife's eye view of the scars the war has left
even on the most cheerful of hobbits. March frost, indeed.

Title: Light On
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=270> the Way ·
Author: Larner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Romance · ID: 794
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:14:13 Score: 9
This was a very satisfying story for me, as it takes that very difficult,
painful parting in the Appendices and really does something with it that
makes sense of how quickly Arwen faded. At the same time, it's ultimately a
very hopeful look at death and loss. The Gift of Ilúvatar shows up clearly
as a gift, here, as the author intended. This is not to say that the grief,
and particularly Arwen's, is underwritten, but the view from the Uttermost
West, and from the perspective of the dying and the dead, keeps the sadness
firmly within the bounds of a far greater joy, and the dignity of the
characters of course does much to enhance that sense. Even the fading of
Middle-earth, which we see in the death of the niphredil and elanor flowers,
and in the decay of Lothlórien, is kept within that perspective. The light
is, in a sense, going out, but having seen the individual spirits of the
world make their way home to a greater glory, one gets the sense that even
the loss of the world itself will be a transition to something else. That
seems very much in keeping with Ilúvatar's words to Melkor in the
Silmarillion. Aragorn and Arwen fans should quite enjoy this, and it was
nice to see Eldarion carry a significant part of the story. In fact, this is
actually a nicely written ensemble piece, it's just a different ensemble
than usual!

Title: Memory
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/8879.html#cutid1> of Ents
· Author: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 800
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:14:49 Score: 5
Rabidsamfan does an excellent job catching the hobbits' voices here, and
this visit to the Old Forest, intended to help with the restoration of the
Shire, is very well sketched. The banter and the memories all flow nicely,
with Sam providing a contrast to Merry and Pippin: as usualy, Sam is more
grounded, less comfortable with the foreign and tends to fasten on its eerie
aspects, holding onto them when others might let them go. And that
counterpoint of his pays off in the end, as an unseen denizen of the Old
Forest watches the hobbits leave. Nicely done!

Title: Stealth
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/10128.html#cutid1> and
Grace · Author: Anastasia
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 802
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:16:01 Score: 1
Boy do I ever recognize this dance scenario! A cute story; it made me laugh.

Title: At Last <http://www.livejournal.com/users/maripo5a/35483.html#cutid1>
· Author: Mariposa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 808
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:16:44 Score: 2
Nice parallelism between the two drabbles, each hobbit released to the tears
or laughter that had been lurking by a father's welcome home.

Title: Nightly <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3382>
Noises · Author: Pipwise
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
7> Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 827
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:17:30 Score: 3
Lovely to see the Old Forest and Old Man Willow get their due, and be fitted
into the general pattern of adjustment that the hobbits have to go through.
Crickhollow will never be quite the same, and even old, resurgent memories
are changed by the perspective of hindsight. The writing style was very
crisp, which I enjoyed.

Title: Kingly <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2310>
Gifts · Author: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 831
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:18:16 Score: 3
A nice gapfiller, even if I have a particular qualm with Aragorn's
characterization. But it's just in one place, and it was fun to see how
everything spun out around the hobbits as they rested and recovered. I
particularly liked Legolas' gifts in the end—something personal and more in
the line of memory than any physical object.

Title: Truth and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2794> Consequences ·
Author: Mariposa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 837
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:19:50 Score: 10
I quite enjoyed this story. There's always something very odd in hearing
others talk about you, and to find the most difficult, trying, and at least
in some parts joyful, times and deeds, to say nothing of intimate
friendships, of your life written down by people who had never known you,
and then to read those accounts, would be very difficult. And safely
ensconced in the restored Shire, well away from court life and the Mordor
front, Merry, Pippin, and Sam would have little reason to expect such
treatment. Even when the account is favorable, it never quite rings true,
whether it speaks of good or evil deeds. And when the historian is a poor
historian, then further problems arise, which Faramir Took nicely sums up as
follows:

"And also some of these books are just so ugly--written by people who
seemingly could have achieved greater deeds with ease, and have all the time
under the stars to poke holes in the Fellowship."

In truth, the basic circumstances of the Fellowship historians are likely
the same, whether they write beautiful or ugly books. No doubt that is part
of the sense of violation or intrusion—they weren't there, and whether for
good or ill, they do play in a sense with someone else's life in the writing
of it. Pippin and Merry, I thought, handled the whole matter very well—they
have indeed grown wise, and yet they haven't lost their sense of mischief,
either, it seems. A well told tale!


Title: As Good As
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2688> You · Author:
pearltook1
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=72
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 854
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-17 22:21:06 Score: 5
I really liked the Paladin this story presented—wise but down to earth, and
even if he's gotten rather blind in the eyes, he sees himself quite clearly.
His account of his doings during the Occupation was a neat bit of analysis,
as well, allowing for a different view of the Tooks' refusal to bow to the
ruffians. Paladin may not be one to make many friends, but within familiar
bounds, he certainly seems able at bringing his son around to reason without
shaming Pippin; perhaps he was a better Thain than he knew in that regard. A
sweet story about growing up and assuming responsibility.

Title: Renewal <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3162>
· Author: Bodkin
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1> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 883
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-17 22:22:17 Score: 7
An enjoyable look at the decision of Celeborn, and a few other well-known
Elves, to take ship to Valinor. Despite the sense of loss, renewal is, as
the title proclaims, the overriding theme, and it makes for some fine,
humorous moments. Even Elrond has a joke, in absentia, and one must
appreciate a story that puts him at the heart of a classic double-blind
scheme that was doubtless enacted only so that it could later be discovered.
Celeborn's motivations for remaining in Arda, and also his reasons for
leaving it, are nicely explored, and Thranduil, too, acquires depth in what
is clearly an old friendship between him and Celeborn. Elrohir, though
younger, is also well-written, and it's nice to see him in a jesting, if not
overtly mischievous, mood, even as he, too, turns westward.

Title: Light out of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2266> Darkness ·
Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 895
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:09:17 Score: 8
What a lovely series of vignettes, all braided together! Each character's
voice is well done in a brief space, and there is always that uplift at the
end—movement towards the titular light, as it were. Which appears in many
forms—candles, fires, gemstones, sunlight, starlight, inner light,
sword-light, that marvelous scene with the phial in the water ("Pippin",
indeed, does not lack for imagination!), but most of all, friendship as the
one abiding light that draws everyone together. Although I am an absolutely
slobbering Aragorn groupie, I found myself most affected by the chapter with
Gimli and Frodo. Gimli gets so few good stories that each one deserves
remark. Your Gimli-voice is beautiful, and to see him and Frodo have some
substantive, yet not heavy, conversation was a treat. This is the Dwarf I
always wanted to see, and thank you for showing him. For anyone who finds
themselves wanting more than was ever told about the journey home from
Ithilien, this would be an excellent fic to read.

Title: Dolor Meus
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=5032> · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 897
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:10:01 Score: 9
Now this is an unusual meeting, and what a setting! Werecat is to be
commended for a seamless integration of not just one, but two, of
Middle-earth's denizens into a later, much changed time. Her Radagast is
spectacular—a master of hues and shapes he is called, and I remember the
line in which it is said that he is presented as a person of far lesser
power than Gandalf or Saruman. Perhaps so, but here we see the wizard
within. Perhaps it just needed the right Age for us to see that elemental
wisdom of his shining forth, as he brings a message of redemption to Maglor.
I don't know if it was Werecat's intention, but this reads to me as a sort
of inverse annunciation, and it's a delicious thought, that angels might
take an interest in bearing such messages to the desperate.

Beyond that, the Francis of Assisi connection was very fitting, I thought,
and added another layer of depth to the story. I would recommend this story
to anyone who has any interest at all in post-Fourth Age fics, or in the
wizards in general, and of course, Maglor fans will certainly find this an
interesting end to Maglor's tale in Middle-earth. Bravo, Werecat—another
imaginative story from the sideviews of Middle-earth that opens the story up
in unexpected ways.


Title: Adagio <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/5442.html#cutid1>
· Author: simbelmyne
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 902
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:10:44 Score: 2
A sweet, short fic tracing Lothiriel's journey, as she finds her place among
the Rohirrim through learning to love their songs (oh yes, and their king!).

Title: Concerning
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=11940> Ladders ·
Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 926
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:11:13 Score: 2
An enjoyable story, with its humorous moments (particularly the first third
or so, which had me laughing), that looks at the balance of trust between
Merry and Pippin.

Title: Tales
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=9202> of Old Wives
· Author: Lindelea
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> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 927
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:11:59 Score: 2
A nice set of drabbles, from the points of view of wakeful wives. I liked
Diamond's last two lines, and the note about Merry's herblore in the second
drabble.

Title: Always <http://www.livejournal.com/users/maripo5a/25137.html#cutid1>
Dancing · Author: Mariposa
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0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 928
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:12:30 Score: 4
I very much enjoyed this, watching the hobbits pass on something that they
had learned during their journey. "Good teachers make for easy teaching" is
a great line, turning this fic into more than a memory of Hollin and
Boromir, but a tribute to him. It's also a tribute to his students who show
themselves to have been truly good students, having picked up not just the
swordcraft, but the art of teaching from him as well. Bravo!

Title: Homeward bound <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/homewardbound.htm> ·
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 945
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:13:15 Score: 5
Ah, another fic in which Nob gets a bit of attention and shows himself to be
a wiser head than his employer gives him credit for. I particularly liked
the opening paragraph, in which Nob notes the constant presence of scraggly
companions for the four hobbits of the Fellowship, whether of the rangerly
or wizardly variety. And his leaving Sam and Bill alone to their reunion
also leaves them to find their own way to bed, echoing Bill's journey back
from the Mines, but in a much more lighthearted manner.

Title: In Memoriam <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/inmemoriam.htm> · Author:
Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 949
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:13:41 Score: 4
An interesting point is brought out here: the question of at what point do
you mark the turning point of a victory? It's in one way a futile question,
since as soon as you identify one point, you realize it depended upon
another that perhaps deserves to be pointed to equally. But as a question,
it opens horizons, as it does for Bergil, who finds his horizon changed by
the simple act of moving the moment of Gondor's victory from Minas Tirith to
Parth Galen.

Title: Fear no <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2071845/1/> more · Author:
Cuthalion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 970
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:14:10 Score: 5
An interesting way of giving news of Frodo's departure to Gondor. Contrasted
with Faramir's dreams, enumerated in the opening, this single one that has
nothing to do with death or warning, seems to function as a sort of bookend
to his dreamlife: a sign that he, too, need fear no more the prescient
dreams, that Frodo's departure in a sense signals a transition to a less
fearful time, when Sauron's mark on Middle-earth can truly begin to fade.
Couple of grammatical things, but overall, nicely done.

Title: StarFire <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1718>
· Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 983
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:14:48 Score: 10
Lindelea gives us quite a yarn, in the style to which her readers are
accustomed: with nicely rounded characters, whether original or canonical,
humor and darkness by turns and degrees, and a Shire that has gravity behind
it to keep everything anchored. Although the story is named after a horse,
it goes quite far beyond the horse to put together a picture of living in
the Great Smials, amongst "the Talk", as Pippin Took goes that last distance
towards maturing into the hobbit his people need, and whose mettle was
initially tested and tried by the Quest. In the opening (quite humorous)
chapter, we learn of the Rohirric tradition, that the king must tame the
lead stallion of the herd if he is to truly be king, and there is a sense in
which Pippin does just that. Starfire is the catalyst that makes it possible
for Pippin to tame any number of "wild horses" he has inherited: his poor
cousin Ferdibrand, his own temper and remaining careless ways, the Thainship
and its rather bitter legacy, and the challenge of peacetime troubles that
are not nearly so simple to solve in many ways as those that come with war.
There's no army to lead, and such troubles as poverty cannot be solved at
swordpoint.

This story keeps things lively, with enough twists and turns to keep one on
one's toes, and although you can foresee some things, that doesn't take away
from the story's unfolding. I am certain that anyone with curiosity about
the Shire will have found this story already, but if they haven't, it is
well worth the time. For those looking to find some good original characters
or an interesting look at Pippin post-Ring War, this is a story they'll want
to pick up some afternoon and enjoy. The only thing detracting from my
enjoyment is the ending, which feels just a touch incomplete to me. But even
so, one might say it does indeed fit its title and open onto a new day for
the Tooks. Bravo, Lindelea!


Title: That Which
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3255> Remains ·
Author: mir_noldoris
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 1025
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:34:11 Score: 6
A bittersweet set of scenes, in which one can feel the absence of loved ones
even when they are not mentioned. They cover the field of emotional
reaction: with Arwen and Aragorn, there's a "firm and desperate" hope for
the future beyond the loss of the Elf who was a father to both of them; with
Gimli and Celeborn, there is the bitterness of loss and the effort of
consolation; with the twins, confusion and bewilderment; and with Sam and
Rose, a sense of release in a way, almost as one feels when the dead or the
departed are understood to have left their pain behind. Grief gets blunted
by that sense of relief on behalf of Frodo, who is gone. The scenes are
spare and diverse, but Eärmírë holds them all together nicely.

Title: Watery <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1673>
Grave · Author: Ijemanja
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 1074
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 15:34:49 Score: 7
A clever way of allowing these two women, Goldberry and Arwen, to meet, and
at just the right moment. Ijemanja puts a fine point on Arwen's fear and
exhaustion. The bitterness she feels that she cannot see her family, the
bitterness that she feels about dying, and her fear of dying: all these are
brought out and given their full weight but not regret—that is a key
distinction and the fic is the richer for it. This is a story of an Elf
learning how to die as a mortal, a task most mortals don't accomplish with
much in the way of grace. Goldberry's help in this matter, showing Arwen how
faint is the hold on life, and how little worth clinging it is, even as she
gives Arwen the comfort of another being and someone to hold her through the
worst of her fears and loneliness, is well portrayed, and suits a water
spirit very well. Good job, Ijemanja!

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13214> King's
Summons · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 1392
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 23:54:08 Score: 2
A sweet snapshot. Legolas' reaction to the news made me laugh, and I liked
seeing Beregond and the hints of the shape of his relationship with Legolas.

Title: A New
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13190> Age ·
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 1387
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 23:54:39 Score: 2
I like the idea that Faramir, too, might be able to give back the Gift. The
sense of change, but also of resolution and relief, also come through nicely
with Eldarion's.

Title: Mother
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13197> and Son ·
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 1381
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 23:55:10 Score: 2
It seems one never outgrows the need to make one's mother proud, even if one
is an immortal Elf-lord. At least Elwing's response suggests Elrond's new
life will be joyous.


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Msg# 5103

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 18 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:21:48 Topic ID# 5103
Title: Seeing
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13199> · Author:
Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 1356
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-19 23:56:17 Score: 1
Imrahil comes off with an almost hobbity contentment with the present! He's
got clear sight indeed.

Title: In <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13143>
Thranduil's Halls · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 1304
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 23:56:53 Score: 1
Lovely last line. The ficlet evokes Legolas' disorientation "at home" in a
brief space.

Title: Borne to Me <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1674505/1/> By the Sea ·
Author: AngelQueen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=48
3> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 1258
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 23:57:58 Score: 1
I like the uncertainty in which this fic ends, as it gives the reader a
sense of Galadriel's position throughout.

Title: Knitting
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechal12/10357.html#cutid1> · Author:
AngieT
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=45
8> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 1225
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-19 23:59:44 Score: 2
An amusing short. Frodo the tween-aged yet unintentional terror of Buckland
got a smile from me, as did the old Auntie's response to it. It's nice to
see Frodo helping others instead of being helped by others during his stay
in Gondor.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3540&cid=13461> Long
Defeat · Author: Perelleth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=46
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 1213
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-20 00:00:20 Score: 1
Interesting that a tree should set Celeborn on the Straight Path.

Title: Land of Light
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=42> and Shadows ·
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 1202
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 00:01:27 Score: 10
I think this was the second Thundera fic I had ever read, and when it came
up on FF.net, and I saw that Harad was going to be the major playing field,
I was very excited by the prospect of a story that would try to dig into the
problems that land would present for Gondor. The larger setting of the story
is the attempt by one particular tribe of Haradrim to gain mastery over the
rest, which means Gondor, a source of trade and power for the opposition,
must somehow be shaken loose. What better way than to first disgrace, and
then eliminate, the heads of state of Gondor and Rohan, then, thus showing
the other tribes the folly of alliance with the West? With that as the
background, obviously things go awry from nearly the moment Aragorn and
Éomer, with Legolas and Gimli in tow, set foot in Harad. The latter two
become pawns in the game, a position they had already accepted in an effort
to help their friends out, which complicates matters for everyone.

Thundera uses several characters as her eyes and ears, so we spend time in
Aragorn's head, in Éomer's, Legolas', Gimli's, Imrahil's, and several of the
OC Haradrim. One gets a strong sense that Thundera is paying a bit of a
tribute to "Dune" with this fic; while there's plenty of action, there are
also long introspection or discussion pieces. Some of these could use some
tightening, but by and large, the reader gets sucked in regardless. Fans of
Legolas and Gimli will be pleased to know those two are at the heart of the
story. Otherwise, I can but say "Save Dashnir!" and hope the fic will be
continued soon.


Title: Lost
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1828&cid=7613> and Found ·
Author: Bodkin
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 00:03:10 Score: 3
Bittersweet reflections, as Eglantine shows her hobbit toughness or just
parental toughness in resting content with the fact that Pippin has grown
well, despite the injuries and grief. Good to see the adjustment of a hobbit
who stayed behind to one of the Travellers, rather than the reverse.

Title: Maps
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge13/5559.html#cutid1> and
Legends · Author: Anso
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 00:05:47 Score: 1
Nicely evocative gifts for the new Master of Buckland.

Title: Leavetakings
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1124> ·
Author: Azalais
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:18:38 Score: 2
Humor and hurt, love and loyalty—Azalais gives a nice snapshot of the final
parting of Elessar and Legolas. Good use of that line out of "The Ring Goes
South".

Title: Captain of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3665> Guard · Author:
Arandil
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9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 119
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:19:22 Score: 2
I suppose Legolas could have been the captain on the watch during both those
"incidents". Not quite sure I've grasped the father-son dynamic at work
here. Tone more like "The Hobbit" than I'd expected.

Title: Beast of <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2325>
Burden · Author: Werecat
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:19:52 Score: 5
This story reminds me of nothing so much as The Three Trees meets the Ugly
Duckling, save that the unlikely subject of this story is a draught horse of
Rohan, Summerstraw, who has to make choice about what he will be rather than
having it imposed upon him. This story certainly fits, in its way, with the
(somewhat underwritten of necessity) theme 'valour without renown'.
Summerstraw doesn't go to the great battles, but fights his own for the sake
of his human family while all the warhorses are away in Gondor.

Title: Nine Lives
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3209> · Author:
Werecat
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:21:48 Score: 5
An excellent reversal of the usual tale of Berúthiel and her cats—one might
expect it would be Werecat who would find the means to do it without making
it feel contrived. The cats come off quite well, particularly Isilme in his
later, somewhat spooky days as the eyes and ears for the Queen, and some of
Tolkien's notes are put to good, creative use. Berúthiel does indeed come
off as a sympathetic character, although I think the cats retain their
properly enigmatic air, as of creatures that simply do not share human
concerns.Well done, Werecat!

Title: The Sea <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/621289/1/> Sings a Lullaby ·
Author: Camilla
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3> Sandman · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 87
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:24:37 Score: 3
Well, this is certainly one end to the tale of Elf and Dwarf I had not
expected, but then again, the authors of the last pages of the Red Book
never set foot in Valinor. Osse is the most dangerous of the Valar and Maiar
who repudiated the darkness, and one can well imagine his power to destroy
as well as his power to seduce.

Title: Swan
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4204&NGID=286>
Flight · Author: AmandaK
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:25:19 Score: 3
An interesting little vignette. This could be a scene from any childhood—who
didn't set something unintended in motion while playing?—but Amanda inserts
just that hint of things to come in the way Denethor construes what
happened. Nicely done!

Title: The Machine <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1948948/1/> That Changed
the World · Author: Altariel
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:26:28 Score: 4
Very clever! I suppose we shall have to wring the tale of industrialized
Númenor out of Altariel one vignette at a time. Good use of a couple of
minor characters here; one gets a sense of the relationships and
personalities established amongst this little group, though the story is
very brief. The argument over the introduction of this new technology is
well done, as is the conclusion—the Age of Men will have its own marvels,
with their own dangers.

Title: Love's Labours
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=300> · Author: Alawa
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3> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 71
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:27:46 Score: 4
A set of quiet stories, as Gilraen and Arathorn get to acquainted with their
son, and their new titles of "mother" and "father". Wonder and joy come up
against labor and hardship, as the two contemplate what lies ahead for their
child, and their own marriage, defined by long separations. But overall,
warmth prevails over toil and reaffirms them in their love, that keeps them
able to do their duty with grace.

Title: Words <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2066>
Unsaid · Author: Acacea
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-20 23:29:42 Score: 1
Reads smoothly, if too quietly rationally to me for Denethor. Tries to
straddle the line of Appendix and ROTK Denethor.

Title: While the Ring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=449> Went South... ·
Author: Thundera
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 01:14:28 Score: 10
I know that Thundera Tiger has commented somewhere else (perhaps in her
author's note) that this was her first story written in the Lord of the
Rings fandom. If so, she is in good company with the likes of ErinRua's
"Last Grey Ship". And I do not hesitate -- in the slightest! -- to name this
story in the same breath with Erin's. This is a gapfiller, while the other
is set long after the Ring's destruction; this is novella length while
Erin's is multi-part but significantly shorter. But the two pieces have two
main things in common: both are built on tantalising hints left by Tolkien
(the former in the chapter of Fellowship of the Ring by the same name, the
latter in the Appendices), and both make me blush when I think of my own
early attempts.

Where to start on a piece like "While the Ring Went South"? Others might
easily comment on the many pranks Gimli and Legolas play on each other. I'm
sure poor Gimli must have been scared nearly witless by the arrow nailing
his beard to a tree, and Legolas tasted the aftertaste of the pipeweed Gimli
left in his water for hours. But they made me laugh to no end. Aragorn's
unrelenting patience in dealing with them and everyone else is beyond
admirable, and the hobbits are well-drawn. But I think what really struck me
was the characterisation of Boromir. Here is not a simple brute, or a
jingoistic general; I see a complex man, clearly a son of Denethor but oh so
different from his younger brother, proud but not prideful.

If this piece has a fault it would be that there was not enough build up to
the warg. After the fact (especially after the first was killed) I felt the
terror that many had for these beasts, but by then it was in many ways too
late. Until that point I wondered why the Fellowship was so scared of the
wargs. A little more "show don't tell" in the lead-up to the hunts would
make this piece as perfect as any fanfic can be.

Title: Olorin I Was,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2844> Olorin I Am ·
Author: Arquen
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 01:19:15 Score: 6
I love this vignette; it is probably one of my favourite. The scene you
chose to fill is particularly enigmatic, and this vignette fills it nicely.
I particularly like the mythic quality the author infused in this piece; it
does not cross the line by revealing too much. But the plot itself is so
well conceived, and the characterisations of minor characters only hinted at
in the body of Lord of the Rings only enriches it. (The author clearly knows
her Silmarillion, and while the piece is more or less comprehensible if one
only knows Lord of the Rings, it is incredibly enriched by knowledge of the
backstory that plays into the story.) Really, it's too hard to pick one
aspect that I like best!

Title: Forgotten
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2009> Casualty ·
Author: Thundera
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 01:21:11 Score: 3
So that's what happened to that fox! I always wondered, and this piece is
gruesome, yes, but also very compelling. Poor guy. This piece could have
very easily fit into horror, but it is much more connected with canon than
many stories you see. Well done.

Title: Going
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13135> to Rohan ·
Author: Gwynnyd
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 01:41:53 Score: 4
I think my favourite thing about this drabble is the character that you
infuse into Roheryn's character. Of *course* a horse from Rivendell would
have a more complex personality than you often imagine in a non-sentient
character, and his practicality just screams "Strider" to me. Your Roheryn
is a good match for his master. The physical descriptions are also nice;
it's obvious that you have spent time around our four-legged friends.

Title: Second
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13140> Watch ·
Author: Gwynnyd
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 01:43:29 Score: 2
This is a rare interaction between Boromir and Pippin. You don't see the two
interact much, but this felt real. I enjoyed it.

Title: At the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=2706> Witch King's
Feet · Author: Lindelea
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 01:47:50 Score: 4
This is a beautiful moment. You take us from Merry's thoughts that Eowyn
should not die unaided, and bring us full circle to the simple regret that
he may have broken Theoden's commands. I understand that regret. And I
particularly liked how you use words that in less capable hands might seem
nonsense (such as "burn-freeze"), but here they seem to flow quite
naturally.

Title: Not Without
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3879> Hope · Author:
Gwynnyd
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 19:06:43 Score: 10
This is quite possibly the most stunning piece of its length that I have
ever seen. I realise that I was one of the beta readers for it, so perhaps I
am a tad biased, but I don't think that's the whole story. Gwynnyd has taken
two facts that most of us probably never thought twice about -- that both
Aragorn and Gilraen lived in Rivendell, and that Aragorn's identity was
successfully hidden -- and exposed the problem and this and fixed it.

Every one of her characters, both real and original, affected me strongly.
Gilraen is of course the key player, but even young Aragorn is darling.
Arathorn is definitely developed, and you can see why Gwynnyd's Gilraen
would love them. Halbeleg (an original character whose name I also used; in
Gwynnyd's stories this is Halbarad's father so no connection to my grandson
of Halbarad) is a man of action, hardened by necessity but not out of touch
with his feelings, and his caring and concern (and growing frustration!)
with his kinswoman. Both of their reactions are so understandable, and
Gilraen's reaction is extremely understandable.

And the Twins, the Twins... I cannot pinpoint why they are so damned sexy in
this piece. They are not behaving at all romantically, and I don't think you
even describe them physically. But this was probably the piece that made me
fall in love with them, and on more than just a physical level. There is
something so romantic and sweet in the way they relate to Areg. And
Gilraen's surprise when Elrond herself calls on her... well, you can
probably tell that I loved the whole thing from start to finish. As I said
in another review, your Gilraen and Forodwaith's are my favourite in the
fandom, and it speaks highly of this story that the other elements give
Gilraen a run for her money.

Title: Fellowship
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13132> · Author:
Gwynnyd
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6> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 396
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 19:09:10 Score: 3
I liked this one, too. It was interesting that Aragorn asked Legolas to join
the Fellowship, not one of the many Elf-lords in Rivendell, or even Gandalf.
But it makes sense that Legolas might refuse an appeal to honour from
Elrond, but not an appeal to friendship from Aragorn. And the interaction
throughout was very nice.


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Msg# 5104

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 19 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:22:24 Topic ID# 5104
Title: Currents <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3666>
· Author: Thundera
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> Tiger · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1008
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 19:13:20 Score: 3
This is a skillfully told gapfiller that connects the dots between
Lothlórien and Parth Galen. And it was very well-told, touchign on many
memories and painting a full picture without actually doing flashbacks,
which is how I think a person's (or hobbit's) memory would actually work.

Title: Cheery Letters
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1951> From Bree ·
Author: Lulleny
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 19:19:29 Score: 3
This is a very enjoyable read about a possible incident while Aragorn and
the hobbits were in Bree. There should be more stories about this stage of
the story, in my opinion. The interaction between Strider and the hobbits,
especially Merry, was interesting, and Merry's letter was cleverly
constructed.

Title: Envinyatar
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=177&STID=3367&
SPOrdinal=7> · Author: Starlight
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-06-21 19:39:18 Score: 9
I remember when Starlight first posted this beautiful story back on
[Henneth_Annun] for the "Ides of March" onlist challenge in (I think) 2004.
That challenge turned out some very nice pieces, but I think "Envinyatar" is
my favourite piece of all those. Words fail me when I think back to how
profoundly it moved me. Perhaps it is because I am Christian and deeply
spiritual, but this piece affected me so strongly! It is the embodiment of
the messianic hope that we see in so many religions but especially
Christianity, yet it does not feel at all out of place for Middle-earth.

What makes this piece even more remarkable is that it uses almost all
original characters. More than a year later (I'm writing this review without
taking the time to re-read... too many stories!) I forget the names but I
remember the characters. They were rangers, and soldiers, but also Dunedain.
Their king was returning, Aragorn would become Elessar, and they all
realised the importance of that fact. Anyone who is at all spiritual and
values such things as hope and destiny, and especially those who like
Aragorn and the Northern Dúnedain, should not miss this story. It's too
short not to give it a chance, I highly recommend it.

Title: Reunion at <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=91>
Isengard · Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 515
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-21 19:46:41 Score: 2
I really liked this piece, especially the first chapter; the author's
extrapolations are logical and interesting. Of course I always enjoy her
"reunion" pieces.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2199&cid=9011>
Merry Meeting at Bree · Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 211
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-21 20:25:10 Score: 3
There are several things you could say about this piece, but I think my
absolute favourite is the characterisations of Nob and Bergil. The author
has just breathed so much life into these characters that we only see
briefly in canon. This was an engaging piece all the way through, very funny
without being over the top.

Title: All
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2929&cid=11235> Hallows'
Day · Author: Marnie
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5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 317
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-21 20:46:50 Score: 3
Now this is certainly different! I have read many of Marnie's stories but I
don't think I've ever read anything quite this spooky. But it's good, very
good, and it's only proof that there aren't many things Marnie can't write.
Provided it involves Celeborn, of course. ;-) The modern humans were well
done, as was Elmo's sense of desperation.

Title: Fading <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2926>
Leaves · Author: Forodwaith
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> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 356
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-21 20:49:57 Score: 4
This was a delightful story of the start of the Fourth Age, not from the
usual perspective of Gondor or the hobbits or whomever, but from an elf. An
OC from Rivendell, no less. It was a very novel idea, and well done. I
particularly liked how you captured the passing of time with a particularly
elvish fair toward the end, when your main character wonders if there are
any ships left, and decides she doesn't care.

Title: Sing Me Home
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=85> · Author:
Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 516
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-21 21:16:56 Score: 5
This is probably one of my favourite of Shirebound's stories, at least of
the ones I've read to date. Not only does it contain many nice moments but
it answers, or at least poses a possible answer to, a question that I have
wondered for quite some time. How did Arwen know that Frodo would be allowed
to sail West? It's a very nice answer, too. And the scene in Rivendell where
Frodo rides the Eagles? Perfect! This was a very nice read, walking that
fine line between flippancy and angst so heavy it's depressing.

Title: Farewell
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9416> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 362
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-21 22:10:11 Score: 3
What an imaginative drabble! I would never have thought of anything like
this. And yet it seems fitting somehow. Radagast the wanderer would be no
more ready to leave Middle-earth than Celeborn was, and I think Tolkien
would have approved of your version.

Title: That Which
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3255> Remains ·
Author: mir_noldoris
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 1025
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-21 22:16:20 Score: 3
This story reminds me in a way of Flick's "Passages": there is such beauty
in its brevity. You have touched on so many spheres of Middle-earth, how
they were all affected by the departure of the Ring-bearers, and it's
amazing the threads that you picked up on and tied together.

Title: Afterthoughts
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=10> · Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 230
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-22 00:16:34 Score: 2
This isn't a character pair you see interacting very nice, and they were
both well characterised here. I especially like that Faramir had wisdom of
his own, even when around a wise being like Elrond.

Title: As
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=2370&NGID=114>
Though to Breathe Were Life · Author: mir_noldoris
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4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 257
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-22 00:23:33 Score: 2
I would not have thought that anyone could take Aragorn's choice to give
back the Gift to 100 words, but you have done exactly that, and done it
artfully. Well done.

Title: Fireside
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13133>
Reflections · Author: Gwynnyd
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6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 400
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-22 00:31:14 Score: 5
Faramir's statement that he loves the sword not the brightness nor the arrow
for its swiftness is probably one of my favourite lines in Lord of the
Rings, and here you have it realised. Faramir might miss those evenings
round a campfire telling stories, but I am sure he is happy to replace it
with hours by a hearth surrounded by his wife, children, and friends, his
old rangers serving him in a position more befitting peacetime. Yes, he
would prefer that lifestyle. Thank you for this lovely vision.

Title: Shield
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=2> and Standard
· Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 695
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-22 00:35:01 Score: 4
Oh, this was such great fun! Of course Aragorn is a wise man, he would see
the meeting of the woman who loved him, and the woman he loved, as a threat.
It could have gone much worse for him. But it's very nice to see that you
envisioned a happy ending for them too. I'm sure Arwen and Eowyn will have
the Gondorian court eating out of their hand before long. Who could
withstand an alliance between those two?

Title: Good
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> Stone ·
Author: ErinRua
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7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 721
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-22 00:36:40 Score: 2
This moment of friendship between Legolas and gimli is very touching, but
what really amazes me is the imagery. I can see the picture, and it is a
nice one.

Title: A New
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13190> Age ·
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 1387
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-22 00:42:26 Score: 4
This is another of those moments that I never would have thought to explore
myself, but I am glad you did. And you did it very nicely. The language here
is smooht, the point of view is strong, but I think my favourite part is the
last line. Apparently it is not just Aragorn who knows that a wise king
should rely on and trust his steward, and I'm glad to see that condition
continuing into the next generation.

Title: Cursed Queen
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1376> of Angmar ·
Author: khazar_khum
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 450
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-22 23:44:36 Score: 6
This is the story that made us all fall in love with the Witch King of
Angmar. Anyone who can take a man thousands of years old, under the dominion
of Sauron no less, and make us all not only sympathise but find him loveable
-- and all without turning him soft -- deserves props. The fact that
khazar_khum did all of this in the North, where so little is know, at a time
far before the War of the Ring and all of the characters so much of the
fandom loves to write about only makes this story more spectacular. It is
well-conceived and well-executed throughout. Anyone who is at all interested
in Men, the villains, the North, or just a good read all around, you won't
want to miss this one.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13221> Long March
· Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 542
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-22 23:56:48 Score: 7
You know, the thing that I really noticed on reading this (both the first
time through at HASA, and on re-reading it just now) is that it could almost
be describing the Gondorians. I'm sure that the men recruited to join the
Ithilien Rangers were reminded of similar stories. Maybe not of the
Haradrim, but certainly of the Orcs. (It may have been too long since the
Haradrim ventured this far North for them to be fresh in peoples' memories.)
Whether the speaker is Haradric or Numenorean, he sees himself and his
comrades in very clear details. The banners flowing, the gear -- it is all
so sharp. Exactly as I like a drabble to work. If it wasn't for the
reference to war-beasts at the end I don't think I would have picked up the
man was a haradri, and that made it all the better; it made me think about
how similar the two sides were. Very, very well done.

Title: Triumph
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13578> Incarnate
· Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 198
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-23 00:06:58 Score: 4
I think this is one moment that I have never seen anyone -- anyone at all --
try to touch. Until now, of course, and especially in a drabble. But you
gave us a haunting glance of Sauron in the Temple of Melkor on Númenor. It
left me wanting to know more of what Sauron was thinking, but I guess that's
the point. You used imagery to particularly good effect, and crammed a lot
in such a tight space.

Title: For <http://www.quillsandink.com/fiction/viewstory.php?sid=112&i=1>
Love of Creation · Author: Andreth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
6> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 92
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-23 00:19:38 Score: 6
In "A Veiled Light" the author of this story showed that she has a
remarkable talent for making the obscure (at least to those of us who enjoy
primarily the late Third Age like myself) much more accessible. Here she
proves that she can do it for evil as well as for good. I felt like I was in
Sauron's mind. I understood his thoughts, his desires, his regrets, his
fears. This was so powerful! And the weird (and scary) thing is that I it
didn't really feel "evil". Ambiguous, yes, but no more obviously corrupted
than Denethor, for example. It just felt natural. I suppose that is how evil
would have to feel to evil, but it really made the whole mindset more
understandable for me.

Title: The Sand
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1210> Circle ·
Author: A
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=91
> L Milton · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 49
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-23 00:24:09 Score: 1
An interesting look at Haradri culture.

Title: Out of <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2209>
Doubt · Author: Nessime
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 494
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:11:04 Score: 4
This short little piece slots nicely between the lines of Tolkien's text, as
Éomer takes his men on what really should have been their last ride. The
bitter irony—that he had invoked death's name and so, in a sense, made
himself in his rage and despair its very instrument, creating a
self-fulfilling prophecy by getting his Riders into an untenable
situation—is well handled, as is the sudden turn towards hope as the ships
arrive at Harlond.

Title: The Last <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1673>
Hour · Author: Citrine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 465
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:12:28 Score: 6
Another excellent short fic that peeks into the relationship of Merry and
Pippin, as they wait for the muster. That hobbity sense of
humor-in-tight-places is at work here, as is hobbit frankness when push
comes to shove. I think the best line in that regard, comes as Merry
sniffles on Pippin's shoulder, and as Pippin attempts to get him to stop,
ostensibly for fear of his armor rusting and trapping him within it, the
immortal lines are uttered:

""Or we could set you up as a statue."

"Just what the city needs," Pippin laughed, too, though his face was wet. "A
monument to a rusted hobbit!" "

That hit just the right note, as they part ways for what might have been the
last time. Well done, Citrine!


Title: Women's <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3040>
Work · Author: JediShampoo
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
2> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 430
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:13:00 Score: 3
I rather liked the OC in this story, Elleth. She provided a fun counterpoint
to Éowyn. One does wonder what sorts of arrangements would have been made to
care for the orphans after the war, and it fits with Éowyn's dedication to
healing people of the war's hurts to want to help in that regard, and to
include the unwanted children of whores in her care.

Title: Mourning
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12155> Cloak ·
Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 394
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:14:34 Score: 3
There's something refreshing about writing from irritation! I like this
portrait of Denethor, and the turning point in his life. You're right, a
Steward, as a public figure, wears the clothes that fit his office, but his
personal life seeps through in pigmentation.


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Msg# 5105

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 20 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:23:09 Topic ID# 5105
Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> Garden of
Samwise · Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 332
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:15:16 Score: 2
Sam's voice is nicely captured here, although I wonder at the effect sought
in the last two lines. They seem to oppose each other in interesting ways
that perhaps might want a fuller exploration.

Title: Seven Scattered
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3545> Scrolls ·
Author: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 323
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:15:47 Score: 2
The two I find most intriguing of this series are the third and fourth
scenes. It's always interesting to see how the Ring might tempt people, and
I thought Gandalf's point of view in the fourth gives a sense of how Faramir
has grown.

Title: When
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3577&cid=13548> One Door
Closes... · Author: GamgeeFest
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire · ID: 308
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:16:23 Score: 1
I liked the depiction of the Bagginses waking up "on the other side", in a
watery world no longer terrifying.

Title: Gathering
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4201&SPOrdinal=1
> the Pieces · Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 291
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:16:55 Score: 5
An interesting set of interludes. There's an interesting mirroring motif
going on throughout: how Denethor seems to others' eyes, how he seems to
Finduilas, how their son's eyes reflect his father's, how Denethor sees
Finduilas and the image of Finduilas that he reflects back to her in his
fear. For all its spareness, there is a sense of completion, and the last
interlude returns to the first. In both, Finduilas misperceives—the first
time through trusting others, and the last time, by mistrusting them. Fans
of Denethor and Finduilas should find this intriguing.

Title: Upon a Field of
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/the_danamark/20403.html> Gold · Author:
Dana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 277
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:19:06 Score: 6
This reminds me rather of "Life Watch", which covers much the same period of
time. Dana does a good job of breaking things up, of giving each drabble its
separate moment, then linking it up into the whole series. Merry's voice is,
throughout, well written. The exhausting work of being the one who sits by
the bedsides and keeps the sick company is given its full weight. Drabble
eleven stands out in that respect in my mind. Pippin's conversion from a
soft tween to a warrior is well and sparely depicted in drabble fourteen.
One gets a sense of the wearing away of time as one follows the drabbles
towards the series' end. A well put-together set of drabbles.

Title: Destiny
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11569> · Author:
Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 208
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-06-23 18:21:42 Score: 1
Succinct. I particularly liked the turn of phrase about Imladris: "All the
same, yet everything changed in a mere hour."

Title: Ambush
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13573> in
Ithilien · Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 204
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:22:23 Score: 1
Nice juxtaposition of the two Faramirs. It might be nice to see a longer
exploration of their similarities.

Title: Spring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2982&cid=11477> Planting ·
Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 170
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-23 18:22:55 Score: 1
A nice reminder that the leavings of war are a hazard for generations to
come.

Title: Tales
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=9202> of Old Wives
· Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 927
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-06-24 21:45:25 Score: 2
What a delightful perspective - and very well done. It's always interesting
to see someone through someone else's eyes, and you've taken the reader on a
lovely little journey.

Title: Turning the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=968> Page · Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 337
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-06-24 21:50:19 Score: 3
ErinRua, this is absolutely beautiful and heartwrenching. It gave me
goosebumps. You captured the majesty of the Age and the peace of a content
king very well. It breaks my heart to think of Eomer aged and dying, but you
gave him great dignity. Well done!

Title: Strawberry
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3512> Fields · Author:
MysteriousWays
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
2> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Romance · ID: 870
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-06-24 21:58:43 Score: 2
It's wonderful to read such a fun and tender love story, I enjoyed reading
about their fun and games. And how wonderful that Linwe would be there for
him during his flashbacks.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3086&cid=11963> Colors of
Passing · Author: Larner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 789
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:10:15 Score: 2
This reads rather like a meditation on moods, all guided by colors. It won't
be everyone's cup of tea, but it's a nicely crafted exploration of Frodo's
psyche, from despair, to doubtful exhaustion, to healing—red, white and
blue.

Title: Paths for the Dead <http://gila.fakingsanity.net/lotr/pathsdead.html>
· Author: James
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
2> Walkswithwind · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 758
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:11:26 Score: 1
This was interesting, although I confess I rather liked the waystation part
best—it had that surreal comic sense to it.

Title: Winter <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2202>
Solstice · Author: Fileg
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
6> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 727
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:11:55 Score: 4
Fileg gives us a short, but articulate portrait of the Fellowship as a
group, as seen through Elrond's eyes. She nicely captures that sense of
their fidelity to and fellowship in common vocation, embodied differently in
each of them, given their different lives. This line was particularly well
turned: "Sometimes a man was strongest stripped back to his fëa and his
face." This fic, too, is stripped down to the essentials, and it works well
in its spareness.

Title: The Slopes of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3921> Amon Gwareth ·
Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry · ID: 715
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:12:25 Score: 1
Evocative; the last haiku gives me a more humble(d) Maeglin than I'm used to
reading.

Title: On Hither
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3913> Shores ·
Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 713
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:13:02 Score: 2
An interesting meeting between mother and son, and it seems somehow
appropriate that Finduilas should linger for her husband beyond whatever
fate is reserved for Men, even as she faded in life.

Title: Racing with the Devil <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/Racing.html>
· Author: Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire · ID: 707
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:13:29 Score: 2
Loved this line: "What Was’ and ‘What Could Be’ are only bastard children of
Despair and Hope". It nicely captures that need to sink into the present, a
clinging to the moment against what has already been lost, and the loss that
lies still ahead.

Title: Sea <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4818>
Longing · Author: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 699
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:13:57 Score: 4
A very intimate portrait of Finduilas' affliction, if at one remove. The
governess' voice is well drawn, I think, able to range over all that is
needed to complete this portrait of Finduilas' suffering. Boromir and
Faramir are briefly if nicely drawn, in one of their brotherly quarrels, but
also in their calmer and more inquisitive moments. Those who struggle with
Tolkien's maddeningly enigmatic account of Finduilas' demise will surely
enjoy this.

Title: May Endure
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3171> · Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 680
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:15:19 Score: 4
Much foreshadowing of later events, between Denethor's private repentance
and the chilling line that Faramir remembers from "The Silmarillion".
Boromir's quick contextualizing of it seemed too neat and sudden for me, but
I thought she delivered nicely on Denethor's character: he keeps a stern
front, only to let it fall away when he thinks others aren't looking (most
especially the one he's being stern with at other times).

Title: Ashes and the Flame
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1243> · Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 677
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:16:20 Score: 6
Very interesting take on what children mean. I am reminded of another story,
"Fell Fire", that also looked at how different peoples understand the
significance of children. That they are the form of immortality for mortals
is a constant, but the viewpoint here is inverted—it is not simply that
children continue me, but the world is given what is its due from each
couple that bears children. There's an injustice, it seems, in not having
children, in denying others a glimpse of someone who has passed on before
them, and who would otherwise be unknown to them, and had not Frodo had a
child, one might imagine Aragorn getting possessed by the ghost of
Shakespeare and writing instead: "Pity the world or else this glutton be,/To
eat the world's due, by the grave and thee".

Title: Deific <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1564>
Flame · Author: Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete · ID: 672
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:16:54 Score: 8
I think the truly impressive part about this story is just how much time the
author is covering, without creating a story that is completely disjointed.
Over two milennia of the Second Age have already been covered, and there's
still more to come before the Third Age. Using Celeborn and Galadriel as the
central characters undoubtedly helps, as the story feels episodic on an
Elvish time scale. Nevertheless, this story may be less approachable for
those without a fairly firm grasp on the material from "Unfinished Tales",
and having the Tale of Years at hand as a guide is helpful.

Celeborn is given the most prominence in the story, or at least, he seems to
be the character whose personality feels most complete, although other
characters are used as points of view, including the little-known Amroth,
Sauron, and a future Ringwraith. The classic problem of evil haunts this
story, and appropriately so, although it never gets brought to the forefront
for long. One wonders what Celeborn's rejection of theodicy will ultimately
amount to, in terms of the journey his character undergoes. I look forward
to the completion of the tale.


Title: Taur <http://www.nancybrooke.com/tauringem.htm> Ingem · Author:
Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 629
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:17:21 Score: 1
This is rather an empty spot in FOTR. Nice connection of Théoden's state
with Denethor's accelerated aging.

Title: Gríma Goldentongue <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1551>
· Author: Lackwit
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
2> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 625
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-25 21:17:48 Score: 7
Grima is such a tricky character to write, coming as late as we do to his
story and with only Gandalf's assurance that once upon a time, Gríma was not
a worm but a man who served his king as well as he knew how. This fic
follows a few others I have seen, in making Gríma not much of a warrior, and
it gives him a logical connection to Saruman, as well as showing the chink
in his armor that will allow him to be twisted. This story is right at the
turning point, where desire and a certain kind of ascetic barrenness combine
and blossom into ambition and anger. Appropriately, it is also at, one might
say, his moment of greatest triumph—recognized by his king and the woman he
would have love him. For one moment, he can see a better future for himself
and he in letting himself dream, he overreaches himself and makes the fatal
error of seeing Éowyn as something to be won, as a rightful ornament to his
life. With that, love's undone, though he believes he chases it still. Well
done!

Title: Just in <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3082>
Case · Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 477
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Reviewer: LOTR_lover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
4> · 2005-06-26 09:09:00 Score: 5
You get into Celeborn's head better than anyone else I know. Your Celeborn
is the definitive Celeborn, as far as I'm concerned. Of course he was
tempted by the ring, just as much as Galadriel was. I love the way you show
it insinuating itself, even until Celeborn thinks: "Annatar was right." Was
that a cold shower or what!? I was almost as shocked as he was just as I
read that sentence. And then snapping at the young elf guard, and then
apologizing so well that the young one felt comfortable enough to crack the
joke about an arrow in his kneecap. Wonderful story.

Title: Mae
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1123&PHPSESSID
=81bbdff5479eba252b785634d85ebade> Govannen · Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 148
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Reviewer: LOTR_lover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
4> · 2005-06-26 09:22:31 Score: 3
A lovely drabble, showing the wonderful Glorfindel in all his glory. Alas
that we don't know much about him except for his death in the Silmarillion
and Unfinished Tales, and his rescue of Frodo in LotR. (Yes, I am a staunch
believer in one reborn Glorfindel). This poignant drabble does a great job
of showing Aragorn's relief at seeing help arrive, too.


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Msg# 5106

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 21 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:24:09 Topic ID# 5106
Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7778>
Return · Author: Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 295
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-06-26 17:44:46 Score: 2
A lovely thought that Faramir could take Eowyn to that place without a
blindfold. I'm sure it was the location of many a restless night. I'm sure
their night was more pleasant.

Title: Triptych
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/6882.html#cutid1> · Author:
simbelmyne
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 901
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-26 22:29:35 Score: 9
There's something about this triple-drabble. It almost reminds me, in the
vaguest of ways, of the monastic prayers said at specific points during the
day and night. It just has that naturalness, a very un-rushed quality. It's
beautiful.

Also, hurrah for some Boromir/Théodred! I have always wanted to write a
story using the two of those as a drabble pair. I have never written a slash
story, but if there's any pairing that I can see working canonically this
would be it. Not just compatible with canon, but actually encouraged by two
facts: the quote about Boromir being a man after the sort of Earnur, and the
fact that Théodred was so late in taking a wife (especially given the
shorter lifespan of the Rohirrim).

My only qualm is the two seem to be entirely too comfortable with each
other, given the fact that Éomer says that Boromir did not often travel to
Rohan, always being busy with the wars on the eastern borders. On the other
hand Boromir was given a horse, which a long-standing relationship with
Théodred might have encouraged. This story is certainly not impossible, just
not completely how I imagine the two of their's relationship. Regardless,
it's fine writing and accomplishes an astounding amount for such a short
space.

Title: Morwen and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1806> Eredh · Author:
Chris
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 1059
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-26 22:32:06 Score: 3
This is a delicious tale: an ordinary man and woman on an ordinary day, yet
the story keeps from being mundane. The love between them is palpable, but
so are the demands that vie to keep them apart (at least until sunset) --
which of course is true of real life. It was nice to see that captured.

Title: Gathering of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3083> the Grey Company
· Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company · ID: 171
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 04:06:05 Score: 3
I am working my way back through Tarkil's story - and I found this
particularly touching. There were so few of the northern Rangers to ride to
Aragorn's aid - and of those at Rivendell, none but his foster brothers. It
is good to see Halbarad leading his men on what must have seemed a last
hope.

Title: All
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2929&cid=11235> Hallows'
Day · Author: Marnie
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5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 317
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Reviewer: Bodkin
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1> · 2005-06-27 04:14:39 Score: 3
Absolutely brilliant. The description of Celeborn - shining and outlined by
the rain, calling the fire to him - is shiveringly impressive, and the
contrast between the prosaic and the mystical is so well done. And, either
side, the words of Elmo - beginning and ending with his eyes. I find this a
most powerful piece of writing.

Title: Dolor Meus
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=5032> · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 897
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Reviewer: Bodkin
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1> · 2005-06-27 04:19:24 Score: 3
I love this story. I am developing a strong sympathy for Maglor and think
that this shows so well his tormented personality, and offers him the
redemption he seeks. Radagast, with his overtones of Saint Francis, is the
perfect emissary to send Maglor home.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3540&cid=13461> Long
Defeat · Author: Perelleth
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5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 1213
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 04:32:22 Score: 4
'He was lost in a world of grey'. This is such an evocative description of
Celeborn's despair as the world for which he has fought is wrenched from
him. I love the way he is immediately aware of the health of the forest
around him as he awakes - and that it is his continual struggle that has
brought about the beauty around him. And I always like to see him reunited
with Galadriel!

Title: Seeds of Old
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4440> Trees · Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 478
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 04:33:22 Score: 5
Such a good story. So interesting - from Celeborn's arrival, through his
reunion with Elu Thingol and Melian, his meeting with Amroth and Nimrodel
and their new son, his grandsons, the eagle and his eventual painful reunion
with Galadriel, the story is such an emotional journey. I am glad they
overcame their initial difficulties and that Galadriel was able to admit -
to herself at least - that she needed Celeborn. I found the idea of the
Straight Path fascinating - as was the idea of the elves moving on and
continuing to explore. Well written, inventive and satisfying.

Title: Bare Feet and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2945> Beer · Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 571
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=22&form_story_filter=571>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 04:48:07 Score: 3
This is a lovely Faramir and Aragorn friendship story and they must both
have needed friends rather badly at this point - and between them they have
the skills required to stitch up the whole of Gondor's power structure. It
is amusing and touching and heart-warming and I enjoyed every word.

Title: Valour Without
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1864> Renown · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 737
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 04:57:36 Score: 3
This is a very interesting story from the point of view of one who is not
central to the main story. Elfled is a fascinating character and the story
develops a good view of Rohan and the complexities of life there. I can't
wait to find out more about Elfled's ultimate fate.

Title: The Road to
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3578> Edoras · Author:
Dreamflower
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5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 872
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 04:59:28 Score: 2
An interesting follow up story - the characters are interesting and the
story well-developed. I look forward to finding out more about their fate as
they move towards Edoras.

Title: All For Her
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1492> · Author:
SoundOfHorns
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4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 899
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:01:22 Score: 3
This is a long story with very long chapters - and it has grown on me as it
progresses. I find the inclusion of 'Rohirric' is an interesting aspect -
and am glad that, at long last, Eomer and Faramir have overcome their early
difficulties. I look forward to more.

Title: Trust to Hope, Book
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1105> Two · Author: Novedhelion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=49
4> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 1295
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:04:04 Score: 1
Enjoyable continuation of the saga. More please.

Title: Truth and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2794> Consequences ·
Author: Mariposa
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0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 837
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:15:18 Score: 3
I just love the whole concept of this - not to mention the humour and style.
It is just so very hobbity. Of course the men of Gondor would write tomes of
history and children's stories and poems about the war and the halflings -
and of course those who are the subject of the tales would have a job taking
them too seriously. Just as well really. Good story.

Title: While
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3266&cid=12450> There's
Breath · Author: Lindelea
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> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 1277
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:20:39 Score: 3
I like this. Pippin and Ferdi definitely needed something like this to
overcome the - shall we say - hiccups in their early relationship as Thain
and escort. And that dwarf breathing proves very useful. I am very fond of
this whole cycle of stories in Lindelea world - and not just because Ferdi
is my favourite hobbit.

Title: Tangled Web
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2055> · Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 151
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=22&form_story_filter=151>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:26:42 Score: 4
Brilliant. Well written. Well researched. Fits in perfectly with the events
of the Hobbit and provides the Wood Elves viewpoint of the events. In
addition to liking the characterisations of the elves, I also rather took to
Bilbo - and Bard. And I have to say yet again - poor, poor Sinnarn. The
ending was full of promise - and the whole story combined humour, adventure
and grief effectively.

Title: A Short <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4400>
Rest · Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 428
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:33:42 Score: 2
This is a fun story - I can see Estel finding Bilbo absolutely fascinating.
And it is good to see Elladan and Elrohir on form with their little foster
brother. And so dwarf women do have beards?

Title: The Tide of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=890> Times · Author:
daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 681
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=22&form_story_filter=681>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:37:10 Score: 2
Excellent. Again. I like Legolas on the verge of adulthood - so determined
to be grown up. His words at Annael's father's funeral are very touching.
Another good part of the saga.

Title: High
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4473&NGID=203>
Flight · Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID: 419
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:43:35 Score: 2
I like seeing the eagles discuss battle and their participation in great
events. This is an excellent and impressive point of view. And touching.

Title: Intertwined <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2290190/1/> · Author: Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 105
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:47:56 Score: 2
I can just see Sam feeling that elves shouldn't dirty their hands. And I
love the charms that Legolas makes for the hobbits. They are very
appropriate. This is a great feel-good story.

Title: A Question of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=12> Duty · Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 152
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 05:59:13 Score: 3
The relationship between Legolas and his group of elves and Aragorn and the
Dunedain is beautifully established as they ride together - and you can see
why Legolas would agree to leave Mirkwood in its need and join the quest. I
like Beliond - and wouldn't want to have been in his shoes when he returned
to Thranduil.

Title: Spring <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1665>
Awakenings · Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 153
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 06:04:48 Score: 6
In some ways I think this is my favourite of all these stories. I just love
the sheer Eilianishness of Eilian. And yet, at the same time, he is filled
with such love and joy and irrepressibility that he copes with the fact that
he is always driving Thranduil to the edge. Solith is so - well,
pugnaciously resistant to all coaxing - and Thranduil manipulates him in
such a skilful monarchical manner. And Legolas - is just so heartfelt and
well-meaning and attracted to that elleth - and, at the same time, growing
into his adult skin, so that he is able to take on the mature role he is
given. And Tinar! I need say no more. Good story.

Title: May the Valar
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1> Protect Them ·
Author: Nilmandra
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
4> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 1055
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 06:12:00 Score: 7
This was the first novel length story I read - and, as you can see, it led
me on to read a lot more. I love this. Tathiel is very appealing central
character, whose anxiety and response to the manifold crises she has to
endure to protect Legolas and his ellyth are very emotionally stirring. She
is determined, resilient, strong and a whole wodge of other things, but she
is not super-elven and her worries and problems are realistic. The reader
empathises with her and is delighted when she and Rawien are reunited and
they eventually make it back to Mirkwood - and feels for her in her fear
that she and Legolas will be separated. As well as a strong leading
character in Tathiel, the other characters are well drawn - the ellyth are
well differentiated and the infant Legolas is adorable. This is an excellent
story.

Title: A Different
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2690> Kind of Quest ·
Author: Dreamflower
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5> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 777
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 06:30:58 Score: 5
This is just such a lovely story. I love the way Merry and Pippin coax Sam
and Frodo into taking a stipend - for the benefit of the other. The way the
shopkeepers have to be badgered by an indignant Gimli into taking the value
of their goods - and Legolas taking up a second career as a jewellery
designer are great touches. And the observation that the soft-toy maker was
too humble to realise that she should refuse their money is so true to life.
This is a smile-on-the-face-all-the-way-through read.

Title: Yule in
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge11/5148.html#cutid1> Hollin ·
Author: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1143
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 06:34:47 Score: 1
A very sweet little interlude!


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Msg# 5107

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 22 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:24:34 Topic ID# 5107
Title: After All <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2190155/1/> . Author:
jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War . ID: 100
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 06:44:12 Score: 5
Poor Legolas. You can just feel his unhappiness at the beginning - and this
is such a beautiful undertaking where his friends and family deal with the
issue of his separation from his father. Good for Gimli - his secret weapon
is singularly effective. (Vilya - just a piece of jewellery! Ha! And not
particularly tasteful at that!) And the real heartstring-tugger - the
ancient statue of Elbereth - because Legolas sees that as the promise that
Thranduil will come. It's a lovely story. And very well written, to boot.

Title: Out of All
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=533> Knowledge .
Author: Budgielover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell . ID: 178
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 06:47:24 Score: 2
The reader is drawn in to experience all the emotions of the hobbits as they
wait in the hope that Frodo will be healed - and the dread that he will not.
A typically good enthralling Budgielover read.

Title: History <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=6>
Lessons . Author: Nilmandra
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
4> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion . ID: 1056
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=1056>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 06:54:55 Score: 4
Beyond brilliant. History Lessons is just a fascinating read on more than
one level - quite apart from discovering the history of the first age, which
is presented in a manner that is approachable and enthralling, the third age
background with Elrond, Celebrian, Elladan and Elrohir and the rest is
simply delightful. This is a story that can be read and read again with an
equal amount of enjoyment each time. Nilmandra should feel really proud of
what she has produced here.

Title: Of Entwives
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2591> and Sundering
Seas . Author: Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age . ID: 160
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=160>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:06:10 Score: 3
Counsel from an Ent they would do well to remember. 'Fair begetters of
beautiful children' indeed. And the foresight that their descendants would
fill the world with the echoes of their lineage - it's just beautifully put.
This is musical to read and so well-expressed. Lovely.

Title: What
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2771&cid=10747> his Heart
Spoke . Author: LKK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
7> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age . ID: 1026
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:12:23 Score: 1
Very touching. An effective description of the parting of a mother and her
son - and he has offered a hope of reunion.

Title: History <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1007>
Lessons: The Second Age . Author: Nilmandra
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
4> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age . ID: 1057
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:17:47 Score: 6
Now, how many superlatives can I come up with here? I love the
characterisation - of all the characters - but Elrond shines like his father
the star. He is just so gorgeously heroic / paternal / lordly / as a friend
/ a son-in-law / a lover. It's no wonder the Third Age worked out in the end
- thanks largely to his efforts. The descriptions and activities of the
second age are brilliant - and very illuminating and then the family
interactions of the third age are great. All in all, and I think I've said
this before, well written, well plotted, well structured, well characterised
and extremely informative. Loved it when I read it first and love reading it
just as much now.

Title: Narn
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2962&cid=11361> Niben .
Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Adventure . ID: 140
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=140>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:21:46 Score: 2
I thoroughly enjoyed this story - such an original idea and an interesting
perspective on events. I love to picture Arwen telling her children the
story that heroism comes in all shapes and sizes. And who should know that
better?

Title: In the Greening
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3022> of the Year .
Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Genres: Adventure . ID: 774
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=774>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:23:53 Score: 2
It's great to see a heroine of the Shire - and Eglantine certainly shows
where Pippin got his obstinacy. This is a very enjoyable story - and I'm
very pleased that they escaped without too much trouble in the end.

Title: Shire: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1052>
Beginnings . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Genres: Adventure: Long Form . ID: 703
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=703>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:26:21 Score: 2
It took me some time to start this, because I wasn't sure - but I am very
glad I did. This is a fantastic epic story of how the hobbits came to the
Shire and I loved every self-sacrificing moment of it.

Title: Hunting
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1234&cid=5000> . Author:
Nilmandra
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
4> . Genres: Adventure: Long Form . ID: 1307
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=1307>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:31:30 Score: 3
Not only a seriously cute Legolas being - well, seriously cute - but a
gorgeous Glorfindel accompanied by two other rather appealing 'elflings'.
Elladan and Elrohir are a delight here - together with the remainder of your
usual Mirkwood cast. A delightful tale of derring-do - and elves among woods
- and thoroughly enjoyed.

Title: Of Trees and Frogs <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1519>
. Author: Bird
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=49
3> . Genres: Alternate Universe: Elves . ID: 1285
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=1285>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:34:40 Score: 2
I am so glad that Elladan protected his grandmother from the evil tree of
death and despair! He deserved to receive his frog. Cute!

Title: Mind to <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1644>
Mind . Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Genres: Alternate Universe: Post-LOTR . ID: 894
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=894>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 07:46:31 Score: 3
Good story! Saruman is seriously nasty - Frodo is brave - Pippin is gallant
- in fact all the elements combine to provide a gripping story. I like the
combination of the Ringbearers working together. Celeborn telling stories to
Pippin is delicious - especially the threat to tell 'about how Elrond came
to court our daughter'. Great read.

Title: The Last Elf
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1465> Standing .
Author: Suzene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
0> Campos . Genres: Humor: Elves . ID: 1124
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=1124>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-06-27 08:06:26 Score: 3
One of my absolute favorites, I re-read it with delight, - chuckling, then
laughing until I have to wipe the tears away - every time someone sends me
the link and reminds me of how long it's been since I have read it. The
attitude and insults are delightfully in-character for these two proud
fathers.

Title: Land of Light
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=42> and Shadows .
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete . ID: 1202
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=1202>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 09:37:46 Score: 2
This is an epic and a half. It conveys excellently the heat, confusion and
despair of those struggling to survive a world they don't really understand.
I hope more comes soon!

Title: With Friends
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1094> Like These .
Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 621
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=621>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 09:44:43 Score: 1
Great fun - it's good to see our heroes enjoying themselves. Although, of
course, disaster is never far away.

Title: Through <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4538>
Shadows Falling . Author: Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 990
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=990>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 09:47:28 Score: 1
Poor little Elured and Elurin. I'm glad Melian came for them. This is very
effectively done - deceptively simple.

Title: The Machine That Changed the
<http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1948948/1/> World . Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age . ID: 80
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=80>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 09:57:55 Score: 3
The king is, I feel, a master of understatement. The scriveners will not
like this at all. And yet it has an inevitability about it that is rather
sad. Fascinating debate on truth, lies and propaganda, too. And I like
Amrothos as the inventor - and Faramir as the poet.

Title: A Healer's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3552> Tale . Author:
Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete . ID: 754
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=754>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 10:38:51 Score: 3
One of my favourites. I love watching Woodruff develop into the healer of
later days - there is no doubt but that she and Regi are two of the
behind-the-scenes stalwarts of the whole series. The Interludes, with Pippin
struggling back from the point of death, are also very - emotional. A good
story. I am enjoying it.

Title: Deific <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1564>
Flame . Author: Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete . ID: 672
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=672>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 10:42:12 Score: 3
So good. This is so good - and picking up a time that is so full of gaps. I
love the mature Celebrian acting like an adult - Celeborn and Galadriel
being - well - in between roles, in a way. And I want more, please. The
whole thing is so multi-layered and interesting.

Title: Glorious <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2712>
Summer . Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 154
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=154>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 10:45:32 Score: 3
Eilian being - well, Eilian. What more could you want? Good thing he was
right, though, or, king's son or not, he might have spent the next couple of
centuries polishing swords. And Legolas is doing a great job maturing into a
leader of elves. A most enjoyable story.

Title: The Warrior
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1062> . Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 155
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=155>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 10:55:46 Score: 5
Now I've undoubtedly said this before - about two minutes ago, before this
review decided to get lost - this is very high up on my favourites list.
Why? Well, for one thing Legolas is at a really interesting stage of
learning - grown up, but only just - and he's learning things at a
tremendous rate. Mostly from the corner of his eye (laundry). He's also just
coming to terms with the joys of being Beliond's charge. And a Beliond that
isn't really too keen on the whole keeper thing. And I just love it.

Title: Along Came A
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2808> Spider . Author:
Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 622
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=622>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 10:58:18 Score: 3
This is a real emotional roller-coaster! Poor Elrohir at death's door and
the agonies that Elladan goes through. The supporting cast is great and very
- well, supportive and it's a thoroughly good read. I liked the end, too,
with the horse race - I needed a bit of light relief by then.

Title: Interrupted
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2614&cid=10183> Journeys:
Part One - New Journeys . Author: elliska
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
3> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 1309
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=1309>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 11:03:48 Score: 4
I loved the start of this - it's good to see Thranduil falling in love and
undergoing the torments of courtship! Especially since his beloved's father
tends to look at him as something nasty that you might step in! And so many
things are set up that still haven't come to fruition - which makes it all
very exciting. I like Dieneryn, too - it's good that Thranduil has some more
extended family. Even Uncle Engwe.

Title: Interrupted
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2739&cid=10770> Journeys:
Part Two - Journeys Perforce . Author: elliska
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
3> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 1310
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=1310>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 11:08:27 Score: 3
The story continues to develop in a most fascinating way - and the baddies
get no better. I loved the byplay with Aradunnon and Amoneth, when Thranduil
showed himself very skilled at being kingly. Nearly, indeed, as good as
Lindomiel at being subtle and wifely. And the Stronghold is very impressive.

Title: Interrupted
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3116&cid=12144> Journeys:
Part Three - Journeys Begin . Author: elliska
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
3> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 1311
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=23&form_story_filter=1311>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-06-27 11:13:11 Score: 4
Good on so many levels - and these characters are becoming part of the
family. Well, as far as the Black Swan is concerned, somebody else's family.
And the elflings are adorable. The story, however, is getting even more
serious - and dangers are clearly approaching far too close. The
characterisation is excellents - and I am even fond enough of some of the
less-clearly-heroic to want them to be redeemed. I can't wait for more of
this story.



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Msg# 5108

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 23 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:24:52 Topic ID# 5108
Title: Sacrifice
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1464&cid=6068> Under
Shadow · Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1319
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=1319>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 11:16:49 Score: 4
It goes without saying that this is good - yet another excellent development
in the every day story of Mirkwood folk. I love the twofold nature of this
one - past and present - and it is great to see Legolas looking after Eilian
so skilfully. All the characters - and I mean all - have developed so much
life that they work in the absence of any others. I could happily read about
any of them.

Title: A Very Dark,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2446> Very Wet, and
Very Miserable Morning · Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Genres: Humor · ID: 592
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=592>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 11:23:14 Score: 2
If this is only a RATHER bad day in the life of Barad-dûr's commander, I
wouldn't want to be around for a worse one. This is clever and amusing and
just generally show how talented the author is.

Title: The Scruff
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=364> Factor · Author:
jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 293
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=293>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 11:27:21 Score: 3
Brilliant. So cleverly written and just generally so amusing. I love the -
wickedly clever and sneaky Legolas - and the poor unfortunate twins, who
find themselves just out of their league. And unable to understand just how
everything went so wrong. Most enjoyable.

Title: Sneezes and Sword Fights <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1290716/1/> ·
Author: Joanna
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
5> · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 747
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=747>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 11:39:17 Score: 1
Very funny. I enjoyed this enormously.

Title: Dragons or
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1963> Ribbons ·
Author: Joanna
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
5> · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 443
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=443>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 11:40:17 Score: 1
I loved seeing the intrepid elven warrior at the beck and call of the little
princess. Very good.

Title: Serious <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1633>
Trouble · Author: Karenator
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
> · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 216
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=216>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 11:45:39 Score: 5
I love Daeron. I love Daeron excessively much. This elfling has a keen eye,
a sharp tongue and a wicked turn of phrase. I love the family that exists
around him - they make a superb bunch of supporting characters and Legolas
and Thranduil don't often get put in that category. The story is good and
well-sustained, but the greatest gem, I think, apart from the
characterisation, is the use of language. The phrasing is so clever - and
the imagery is original and funny. The more Daeron features in stories, the
better pleased I shall be.

Title: The Travelling
<http://www.geocities.com/berzerkerprime/fanfic/Mouse.html> Mouse of Númenor
· Author: Berzerker
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
6> Prime · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 674
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=674>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 11:50:05 Score: 3
This is a gorgeous tale. It's great to see Faramir and Sam together
interacting with the children - and I love the way the children respond to
them. I enjoyed their solution to who should be lieutenant, too. All of them
is a solution only a group of children could come up with. Lovely.

Title: "The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=10847> Story of
Poor, Unfortunate, Toffin" · Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 764
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=764>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 11:52:55 Score: 3
Now this is one of the few stories that actually had me laughing out loud.
It is, no mistake, absolutely hilarious. And it is built up just perfectly,
with the inevitability of a good joke - all the way through to the
culmination. Pip's face when he is explaining so earnestly - Merry's
reaction - oh, just brilliant.

Title: Silver
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13577> and Gold ·
Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 196
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=196>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 12:30:00 Score: 2
Ahh. So few words. So much emotion. So much power - like opposite poles,
they attract. I love these two drabbles - they seem to sum up the effect
Celeborn and Galadriel have on each other.

Title: Life in the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3325> Angle · Author:
Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Genres: Romance: Incomplete · ID: 181
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=181>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 12:37:33 Score: 5
Now where do I start? This is just SUCH a good story - and my interest in
this story has impelled me to go back and seek out all the earlier
information about this set of Dunedain brothers. I love it. Tarkil and
Poppi, the arrival of the brothers Elrondionnath, the evil, spiteful woman
who expects to be able to do whatever she wants, the stupidly insensitive
chieftain - it's all brilliant. A story where each chapter is anticipated,
grabbed and devoured. The characters are great, the situations gripping, the
impetus of the story is compelling.

Title: Handmaiden of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3520> Lorien · Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 316
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=316>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 12:47:45 Score: 3
This is such an interestingly different point of view on the relationship of
Elu and Melian. A sort of King Cophetua and the Beggarmaid - with Melian as
the Beggarmaid. And when you think of it, it makes perfect sense - and makes
Melian's response to Elu's death so much more understandable. I really
enjoyed this.

Title: In the Deep
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4897> Places ·
Author: Lamiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
8> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 751
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=751>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 12:49:28 Score: 2
Beautifully written, well constructed - and just generally darned good. I
really enjoyed reading this - and loved the way that the relationship
between Legolas and Gimli developed. Excellent.

Title: Lost <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1114&cid=4456>
· Author: FirstMate
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=49
6> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 1318
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=1318>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 12:52:15 Score: 3
I found this late and was able to read almost the whole thing on one go -
and it was breath-taking. I loved it. The whole story was gripping and an
emotional journey from the start. And, every time I thought 'it's all right
now', it started again! Great piece of work.

Title: A Prince's <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1143>
Question · Author: Tathrin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
6> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 113
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=113>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 13:06:22 Score: 2
I loved this. Poor Eldarion - the only sane person in a city of madpeople -
and he can't get a straight answer from anyone. It's no wonder he counts on
Eowyn to give him a sensible explanation.

Title: Of Elves and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3048> Dwarves and Late
Night Philosophy · Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 199
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=199>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 13:08:30 Score: 2
You can't help but feel sorry for Aragorn. This is one of those situations
where the only comment is the wrong comment - and as soon as you appear to
turn on one of the 'brothers', they are both at your throat. Very funny.

Title: Mushroom <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3515>
Lore · Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 365
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=365>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 13:21:03 Score: 2
I do like this. It's good to see them overcoming their differences to come
to a better understanding - and I enjoy seeing hobbits as providers.

Title: The Day <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2767>
After · Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 197
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 13:44:29 Score: 2
Gimli is a very philosophical dwarf. And what he says here - with the aid of
the author - is so true. I love to see stories where the friendship between
elf and dwarf has so many layers of affection and understanding.

Title: Out of Stone <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/outofstone.html> ·
Author: LadyAranel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 315
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 13:50:17 Score: 3
It is good to see old prejudices being worn away at last. I can see
Thranduil and Gloin sitting and shaking their heads in very similar ways
over the vagaries of the young. The pool and garden is a great place for the
dwarves and elves to be together.

Title: Reflections in
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=631> the Dark ·
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 1315
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=1315>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 13:54:21 Score: 2
Gimli's musings in the dark are so typical of him - as is Legolas's ability
to forget his dislike of caves when he needs to retrieve his friend. A good
story.

Title: Musings by
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=945> Torchlight ·
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 1316
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:00:44 Score: 3
It is great to see the same event from Legolas's point of view. He is very
single-minded in his determination to get his friend out - I love it when he
threatens to pulverise him if he is able to reply but just remaining silent
- it's just such a typical carer/cared for response. Move heaven and earth
to save them and then bite their head off. Lovely follow up.

Title: The Life of a
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2760> Bard · Author:
Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 464
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:02:31 Score: 2
Such an enjoyable tale - Pippin is so delightfully young and irresponsible.
Thank goodness Frodo sorted it out when he did. Menelcar is an interesting
addition to the usual suspects.

Title: Dancing in the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3025> Darkness ·
Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 476
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=476>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:05:47 Score: 4
I don't think there is a single word of this that seems out of place - it
just leaves me speechless. The whole piece has the rhythm of a dance and it
is beautiful to see Celeborn's wilder more dangerous side - and I'll bet he
impressed his grandsons. I loved the way they were accepted and were able to
learn about a less familiar part of their ancestry. The whole thing is just
- well - beautiful.

Title: Stars and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2607> Sniffles ·
Author: SlightlyTookish
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 817
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=817>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:07:34 Score: 1
Such a gift! I love eager little Pippin and his reaction to the stars. What
a sweet story.

Title: Toy Story
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3912> · Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 411
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=411>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:20:59 Score: 3
The picture of Estel arriving with a laundry basket full of wooden soldiers
is a wonderful one - as is Elrohir talking him through the information that
must be too much for him to take in. And Aragorn might be doubtful about
Elrond as Adar - but Elrohir is still his brother. I like the light this
shines on their relationship.

Title: Back to the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4384> Valley ·
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Elves · ID: 590
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=24&form_story_filter=590>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:30:39 Score: 2
Poor elf. This is just such a horrific story - both the torment and the
escape into the silly song. I hope the elf finds his release when Barad-dur
collapses. Powerful.


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Msg# 5109

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 25 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:25:49 Topic ID# 5109
Title: What Should Not
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3014> Be Forgotten ·
Author: Budgielover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 179
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=179>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 21:06:45 Score: 4
The characters of all four hobbits were neatly developed here. They were all
distinct, yet they all were clearly hobbits; and the differences were
exactly as I would imagine them based on what Tolkien wrote. I particularly
liked that it was Pippin who procured the food, given his connection to the
Tower Guard. I can just see him organising food coming in and setting aside
the best stuff for himself.

Title: Home Cooking
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1468> Hobbit-Stlye ·
Author: Budgielover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> · Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 175
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=175>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 21:29:40 Score: 2
Absolutely hilarious. This had me laughing, especially when the hobbits got
into the soap crystals. This was a well-written, light-hearted moment, and I
thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done, Budgielover.



Title: My
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1099> Hero ·
Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 640
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=640>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 21:31:12 Score: 2
*snork* Somehow I imagine Sam would show his character in these small
heroics just like he did in the Quest. It's something about his character;
he does what needs to be done. Lucky for Rosie that she has someone like him
around.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3483&cid=13181> Healing
Touch · Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 1312
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=1312>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 22:03:51 Score: 6
This ficlet is simply beautiful. I know the comfort that can come from cats,
personally and through the volunteer work of a close relative giving cats to
terminally ill children. Werecat is exactly 100% right about their healing
abilities. If not physically, then emotionally soothing. It is so nice how
Brannir was able to see past his own close-minded superstition and see the
practical good that a cat could do. I am used to seeing Werecat write cats
as allies of the various dark lords, or just plain selfish, and it was nice
to see this side of a cats' personality brought to light. And I didn't know
Werecat could distill a tale to such a short piece. Obviously, I was wrong.
;-)

Title: The Party Next Door <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1330750/1/> ·
Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 1255
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=1255>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 22:19:04 Score: 2
This was a nice read, though it did have a few niggling errors (for
instance, Baggins' instead of Bagginses'). I particularly liked the glimpse
at how hobbits viewed dwarves and hobbits from other parts of the Shire
(i.e., Tooks).

Title: The Dead
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2920> City · Author:
Wild
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
7> Iris · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 606
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=606>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 23:29:32 Score: 2
I liked this poem, especially the reference to the defences of snow and
steel. It seemed fitting to compare the man-made battlements to more natural
defences.

Title: Sirion <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2551>
· Author: Wild
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
7> Iris · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 607
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=607>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 23:58:51 Score: 2
The form of this piece served the subject matter very nicely -- the short
line length and the free verse form nicely complemented what must have been
fragmented thoughts on the part of those caring for the dead.

Title: Imladris
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3998> Interpreted ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 60
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=60>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 00:42:25 Score: 8
"Mindless senseless troll,
arrogant bastard!"
"Useless whimsy runt!"
"Neeeargh!"
"Oof!"

This section to me captured the heart of what was a brilliant poem. It had
almost a Mystery Science Theatre quality to it, only it wasn't inserting
comments in the usual way. Aeneid took the fanons about the first family of
Gondor and had the characters themselves insert those comments subtextually.
Like where Boromir calls himself stronger, taller, and bolder, and then says
parentheticeally, "(so say you, father; sorry, brother)"... well, I nearly
fell out of my chair laughing.

I think my favourite part, though, was the "Goodbye, my brother." at the
very end. In the actual poem there's not the quotes marks, and it's not 100%
clear which brother is saying it. It's the combination of the serious with
the slapstick humour that makes this poem one of my favourite. This is the
poem that introduced me to Aeneid, and I'm ever so glad that I took the time
to read it over a year ago, because it has introduced me to many other good
pieces; but it's also magnificent in its own right. Well done.

Title: Runaway Star <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/803983/1/> · Author:
Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 1256
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=1256>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 01:15:25 Score: 8
I want to excuse Amrod's actions as the natural outcome of an Oath that he
made perhaps out of familial obligation or out of innocence of a sort.
Really I do. There is something to be said for honour, of course, but honour
is different from blind obedience. And the Oath of Feanor is not fully in
line with what's naturally "good" in Middle-earth. We know this because of
the ends it drove the Feanorians to, and Amrod seems to also recognise it.
Therefore I cannot call his actions good or even excusable because he was
"following orders". But somehow that seems to be part of the point. Amrod is
not necessarily searching for understanding.

The author paints a grim picture here, a picture where war isn't white
washed but where we see the blood and guts for what they really are. And we
also see the despair of losing your twin. It's very well portrayed -- much
too well for my own comfort. This isn't a "comfortable" story, but it also
feels "true" somehow. It was nice to give the despair caused by the Oath of
Feanor given form, even if that form isn't aesthetically pleasing.

Title: Price of Delay <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1675> ·
Author: viv
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 782
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=782>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 01:28:23 Score: 3
The summary on this one was a little vague, so I wasn't quite sure what to
expect. After reading it, I'm still not 100% sure what event is being
described. Yet it still manages to get to the heart of Thingol's character,
and the imagery is very powerful.

Title: Sunshine
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge01/8967.html#cutid1> and
Laughter · Author: Anastasia
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
5> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1232
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=26&form_story_filter=1232>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 10:55:39 Score: 2
I'm not sure how I like the idea of Gandalf intruding into Pippin's
thoughts. It seems a little too magical and elvish for me. Nevertheless,
Gandalf's thoughts were sweet and his interaction with Pippin was
well-portrayed.


Title: With Hope <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2088>
· Author: AfterEver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
2> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete · ID: 501
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 19:04:59 Score: 4
Another fascinating installment of Gilraen's life in Rivendell? Is there any
basis to the belief that Elven horses are also reincarnated? I especially
liked Gilraen's concern over her son; I think she would tend to be a bit
over-protective, given that she had already lost her husband through
premature death and her whole community when she moved to Rivendell. Also, I
think you are exactly right about the ripple effect in Elven grieving.

Title: Stealth
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/10128.html#cutid1> and
Grace · Author: Anastasia
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 802
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 21:21:35 Score: 4
This was quite funny. Legolas seemed a bit too well educated on Gondorian
dancing for a Sylvan elf, but that's just my opinion. And a minor niggle at
that. The interaction between Merry and Pippin was priceless, especially at
the beginning. And it made perfect sense that Pippin, the knight of Gondor,
would want to learn his host-nation's dances. This was quite an enjoyable
gapfiller.

Title: Master
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1089> of the
House · Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 639
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 21:34:08 Score: 3
This is a gorgeous moment connecting Elrond and Sam as two people who cared
deeply about Frodo and knew what it took to heal someone. The connection
made between the two of them in the last paragraph struck me as particularly
astute. I liked this a lot.

Title: Reunion
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1074> ·
Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 634
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 21:42:22 Score: 3
Oh, this was clever, comparing Elanor and Rose to flowers in a garden. And I
liked how you brought to my mind the fact that Faramir says it is a great
land where gardeners are held in high esteem. He certainly seems to respect
Sam in this drabble. Nice drabble.

Title: Bed
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4511&SPOrdinal=1
> of Roses · Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 793
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 21:53:18 Score: 2
This is a gorgeous vignette. I loved the imagery throughout, but especially
the connection between the comfort Sam would get from a bed of Roses
(Rosies) and a bed of roses. That was so poignant!

Title: Bittersweet
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1043&PHPSESSID
=466178cd3479a0f686f348cef575786a> · Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 43
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 22:05:25 Score: 2
This drabble is very romantic, but somehow more than that. It's a very
well-developed image of the strength Aragorn might have called on during his
wandering in the Wild -- especially given that it's only a hundred words
long.

Title: Simple
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1050> Comfort
· Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 636
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 22:24:42 Score: 3
It's nice that Strider and Sam are connecting here after their
somewhat-rocky start in Bree. I think that Strider, having spent so many
years as a ranger, would appreciate a simple comfort like tea more than Sam
ever thought he would. You brought that out very nicely.

Title: Command
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1149>
Performance · Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 641
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 22:37:43 Score: 2
Oh, this was cute! Any parent (or older cousin, in my case) has had to sit
through these kinds of performance at least once. You did a good job of
getting Denethor's character of a loving parent across without softening his
character too far.

Title: Hide
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1080> and Seek
· Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 637
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 22:46:57 Score: 1
Nice. Until the end I didn't know that it was Faramir instead of Boromir.
That made the drabble work even better.

Title: Requiem <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3074>
· Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry · ID: 1064
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-29 23:02:34 Score: 3
This does remind me, especially in the first part of "Where now the horse
and the rider?", as the fictional bard moves from a blocking out or
sketching out of what is no longer to the positive core of loss and the
horror of war. The poet's bitterness comes through clearly.

Title: Disobedience
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3899> · Author:
Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry · ID: 1062
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-29 23:03:25 Score: 7
This gives an interesting image of Denethor. On the one hand, he is clearly
obsessed by his wife's fading away, her depression and longing that pulls
her away from him. The stanzas read like a tally of the complaints he has
heard. On the other hand, there is definitely more than touch of the
controlling Steward in this: "you say, Finduilas" is constantly repeated,
and it serves in my mind to belittle her claims, as if they are only *her*
claims, while he, of course, knows better that the streets don't strangle,
that the stone doesn't laugh at you. 'Stop being so sentimental and pull
your head out of the clouds, Finduilas', is the undercurrent here, along
with what seems to be a rising sense of anger that comes from his feeling
out of control: "If I asked for time, Finduilas, would you dare to disobey?"
It makes sense, and ends the poem on a note that is ominous on multiple
levels. Those who like their Denethor dark (as I do) will enjoy this.

Title: Guilt <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3324> ·
Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 1046
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-29 23:04:28 Score: 2
This story hovers between amusement and angst, with both coming mostly at
Éomer's expense as he waits through his wife's first labor. It's a bit
uneven for my taste, but it has its charm.

Title: Whispers of the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1872> Dark · Author:
MysteriousWays
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
2> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 974
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-29 23:05:16 Score: 5
I liked the device Mysterious Ways used in the earlier dream sequences,
where literally every time Frodo turned around, he saw another part of his
life. The corruption of memory is an interesting way of showing Frodo's
descent, and I rather liked the Old One. Frodo's psyche can indeed get
vicious under the Ring's influence, and turning the torment inflicted into a
test, with the Ring as a reward in Sammath Naur was an excellent and
believable twist—when someone's been ground down so far, anything that seems
to give hope will be snatched at.

Title: A
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1083> Lesson
In Mercy · Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 638
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 23:11:59 Score: 3
I liked how you used the metaphor of a web, so connected with a spider like
Shelob, and connected it with healing. Spiders are natural creatures after
all, and they have a place in the ecosystem. They aren't naturally evil, and
time can use anything like that to heal Sam's wounds. Nicely done.


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Msg# 5110

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 26 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:26:21 Topic ID# 5110
Title: Distance <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2605>
· Author: Ancalime8301
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
4> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 659
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=659>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-29 23:30:13 Score: 3
I liked how you had Pippin anxious to get to Cormallen here. It really fit
the impetuous nature I imagine he had as a tween. And your description of
Frodo was heart-breaking. Gimli was also very well-written. It seemed a bit
too short, though, and the ending felt too abrupt.

Title: Final <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3920>
Choice · Author: Meril
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
3> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 1098
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-29 23:50:30 Score: 7
There's something disturbing about this level of helplessness, and perhaps
it is because something along these lines must be one of the primordial deep
fears ingrained in every woman's psyche: the murderer on the doorstep who
takes the children and then has everything set to have his way with you.
Nimloth can't do very much and is really rather pathetic—she is hardly
effective as a warrior, she cannot save her children, and she certainly
doesn't deal well in threatening promises. All she can do is refuse her
attackers any knowledge of the Silmarils, deny her forgiveness, and die.
She's even reduced to begging her murderers to save her children. For the
angst-lover who perhaps is a little more removed from the wretched
helplessness of most women in fantasy novels to say nothing of real life,
it's a nicely written gap-filler.

Title: High <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1804>
Places · Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 1086
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-29 23:57:27 Score: 6
Ah, the author of "Blood and Warm Blankets" delivers with another lovely
subversion of the Maeglin-Idril-Tuor tragedy, though without the biting
humor this time. Shifting the point of view to a young and innocent
Eärendil's gives Maeglin a very different face and feel, allowing his love
to show through for once in a manner that we recognize as love—this of
course makes the anger and jealousy that warp it more effective in the end.
The move at the end to an older Eärendil's point of view, where his wife's
leap from the tower seems too much a parallel to Maeglin's fall for him to
forebear comment is nicely done.

Title: Silent <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3053>
Memory · Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry · ID: 1065
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-29 23:59:15 Score: 8
I would call these successful experiments. The first quasi-villanelle
intrigues me most for the inclusion of the line "a fragile truth amidst a
thousand lies"—without it, it could be simply an angsty poem, but with it,
we have whole new dimensions. One never knows precisely whose lies are meant
(and there's always the possibility the 'who' might change according to the
stanza) or what their content might be, and it introduces an interesting
note of tension into Denethor's relationship with his wife. Is it simply
that he knows she's weakening, despite efforts to deceive him and others? Or
is there something more at work here?

The second villanelle lacks that note of falsity, and is more
straightforwardly an account of Denethor's plunge towards the emotional
abyss, but that final, crossed out line does so much work, it's practically
ridiculous as well as dead on—a lovely representation of that wretched "ink
blot" that refuses to be erased, forcing the author to recognize the truth
of himself despite his efforts at casting his fear into a less obvious, more
controllable form. Can we say failed sublimation? Well done!


Title: No Going
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3894> Back · Author:
Ancalime8301
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
4> · Genres: Movie-verse · ID: 89
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-30 01:15:20 Score: 7
In bookverse of course Frodo moved to Crickhollow, and Crickhollow was
destroyed by the Nazgul. As bad as that was, Frodo never had to dea with
spoilt milk and moldy bread and moth-infested sheets. In movieverse of
course he did, but that thought had never occurred to me. You did a good job
of getting across the nitty-gritty of that situation here. Beyond that, you
made sense of a section of movieverse that always seemed to me like it was
full of plot holes. You explained some things that always bothered me (such
as how Frodo knew he could sail West), and connected it with bookverse in
other regards -- i.e. getting Sam and Rosie into Bag End. The Quenya script
on Elrond's letter was a particularly nice touch. All around, this was a
very interesting and entertaining reconciliation of bookverse and
movieverse.

Title: Climbing <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=813>
· Author: Ancalime8301
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
4> · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette · ID: 88
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=88>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-30 01:27:10 Score: 2
I really liked the physical details and the way you captured Frodo's
weariness on this. It did feel like it lacked direction, though, and in some
way's Frodo's resolution felt a bit hasty.

Title: Friends in Small Spaces <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2280079/1/> ·
Author: Varda's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
3> Servant · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 102
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=102>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-30 01:43:49 Score: 1
Interesting story. You did a good job communicating clearly using just
dialogue.

Title: I Will Know <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=4577>
Suffering · Author: Andy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
4> Longwood · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 704
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-30 02:21:26 Score: 2
This is a haunting account of a meeting between Frodo and an elf of Valinor.
The contrast of suffering and pleasure, and the problem mortality poses for
an immortal, were both well done.

Title: Two of <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3132>
Thirty-One · Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 174
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 04:27:37 Score: 3
I have gone backwards on these stories - and it is a very interesting way to
read them! I love finding out how Tarkil and Haldon managed in the Ring War
and seeing them among the Rangers. And I admit to liking Elladan and Elrohir
- and enjoying seeing Aragorn become Elessar. Good story.

Title: Promises to
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2919> Keep · Author:
Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 169
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 04:31:21 Score: 2
This is a whole world that is so well thought out and beautifully drawn that
it almost doesn't need setting in Tolkien's world. Except that that is a
delightful bonus. Most enjoyable.

Title: Swords <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3102>
Returned · Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 172
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 04:33:30 Score: 3
This is a delightful telling of a very realistic tradition - and, in
addition, it is lovely to see Tarkil as a child learning about the customs
of his people. I like his reaction, too. Wanting a new sword is a very
sensible, practical child's response to what he has heard.

Title: The Smell of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2344> Mint · Author:
Regina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
4> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 1105
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 04:39:14 Score: 1
I liked the way the hobbits dealt with the issues here - and the link
between scent and memory.

Title: What Should Not
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3014> Be Forgotten ·
Author: Budgielover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 179
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 04:50:11 Score: 1
This is a lovely look at the recovering hobbits.

Title: Turnabout
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3366&cid=12829> · Author:
Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 686
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=686>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 04:52:27 Score: 2
I loved reading about Frodo supporting Merry through this ordeal - and the
efforts of the others in the Fellowship to retrieve them safely.

Title: A Question of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2016> Trolls · Author:
Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 776
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=776>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 04:54:52 Score: 1
A good explanation of the chinese whisper effect of story-telling! And one
Pippin will employ himself.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=9766>
Soldier's Tale · Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Children · ID: 1134
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=1134>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 04:57:16 Score: 1
This is such a brilliant and cleverly written story. One of my favourites.

Title: Noble <http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=6>
Jewel · Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 741
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=741>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 05:02:35 Score: 2
I love this story. Brand is a delightful character - and such a blessing for
Andrahar to find. I enjoyed seeing him find himself among the Swan Knights -
and took great pleasure in seeing Andrahar crush the objectionable Jacyn.

Title: The Best Gift of All
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=467> · Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 739
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=739>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 05:12:42 Score: 2
I love seeing Faramir and Boromir with their Dol Amroth kin. It's the
closest they ever seem to get to happiness and a normal life. Heart-warming.

Title: Letter From
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3251> Elladan ·
Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 1080
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=1080>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 09:30:05 Score: 3
The letter itself is beautiful - so elegantly expressed and balanced, so
resigned and noble, but I think that Elrond receiving the letter in the full
knowledge that both his sons are safe makes a delightful counterpoint to the
letter itself.

Title: First
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1712&cid=12870> Words ·
Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 1324
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=1324>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 09:31:13 Score: 1
So cute. And inevitable.

Title: Time's <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3240>
Turnings · Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 156
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=156>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 09:36:36 Score: 3
It is a delight to see Legolas growing up - and learning to pick locks. I am
sure that he will find the skill remarkably useful. Just as he will benefit
from his understanding of - the nocturnal habits of certain females. A
nicely balanced tale here.

Title: Good Enough
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3453> · Author:
Karenator
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
> · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 217
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=217>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 09:44:52 Score: 5
Daeron was already at the peak of my favourite characters list - his dry wit
is just the best - but this tale told from the point of view of so many of
the stars is just delightful. Combine that with obnoxious 'teenage' elves in
the woods, genetically engineered spiders and a screwed-up romance and you
have just so many beautifully combined elements that make this an excellent
story. Daeron is still my favourite, but I have to say that Seregon and
Aldamir are running him close - and I'm putting in a request for a story
that shows more of the flirtatious Erelas. This story is a real joy.

Title: Winter
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2807&cid=10858> Encounters
· Author: jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 294
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=294>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 10:02:52 Score: 2
Very touching - and there is no better way for two such different characters
to develop a bond than over what has happened to their sons. It should give
Thranduil and Gloin a head start when Gimli and Legolas come back such close
friends.

Title: Creature of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3490> Fire · Author:
daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1218
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=1218>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-30 10:05:27 Score: 2
Alas, poor Tuilinn. She was fated. The part where Legolas betroths himself
to her - very touching. And a great deal of understanding from Beliond. But
sad!

Title: Fall of Osgiliath <http://www.planet-tolkien.com/fan_writings/read/2>
· Author: Valedhelgwath
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
5> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 633
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=27&form_story_filter=633>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-30 10:46:46 Score: 5
Faramir's care here for Callon was beautifully told. Especially the way you
got that across by giving the boy's age as "eleven and a quarter". That was
such a childish way of thinking in things, yet the boy was still ready to do
his duty. He couldn't be more than two or three years older than Bergil at
the point of this story. The injury of Hallon was also well-told, but I
think the part about his son, the useful task Faramir found for him and the
quiet bravery of him, is what really made this story for me.



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Msg# 5111

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 27 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:27:09 Topic ID# 5111
Title: Borne to Me By the Sea <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1674505/1/> .
Author: AngelQueen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=48
3> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 1258
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=1258>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-06-30 11:06:30 Score: 5
This is a very nice piece. Galadriel and Celeborn have always been my
favourite couple of the Elves, but you shed new light on their burden by
comparing them to Finarfin and Earwen. I don't think I would have ever
thought to do. The metaphor of the Sea as the thing that separates the two
loves (C&G, not F&E) and draws Galadriel back to the present and away from
her memories of the woods of Doriath... well, it was both well conceived and
well executed. It was nice to see something about this couple from the
Noldor point-of-view, instead of from the Sindar.

Title: The Sting
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1550> . Author:
tyellas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette . ID: 600
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=600>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-06-30 16:05:52 Score: 8
You really hit the ugly side of Maeglin's character well here. I never
thought much about the origin of Sting (or Orcrist or Glamdring, for that
matter), but it does have a sort of symmetry to it that something that
should prove that dangerous both to the spiders of Mirkwood and to Shelob
and her webs should come from the hand of someone so filled with hatred as
Maeglin. The fact that Maeglin's creative impulse came out of his jealous,
possessive love for Idril and his hatred for Tuor and just about everyone
else only makes the symmetry the more powerful.

It goes to show that even evil is possible of creating something that might
be used for good, and it recalls (in my mind at least) the statement of
iluvatar to Melkor, that good would come out of what Melkor intended to be
evil. To voice a more Biblical sentiment, it reminds me of Joseph telling
his brothers that they had intented his slavery in Egypt for evil, but God
used it for good. That to me was the overriding message I took away from
this little piece. The fact that you brought it out without even mentioning
the

Title: Something
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3065&cid=13460> to Do
before the End . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 753
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=753>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-01 01:02:04 Score: 1
Lovely Boromir, badgering Pippin to remain alive. How could he fail with
such support?

Title: While the Ring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=449> Went South... .
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 33
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=33>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-01 11:46:41 Score: 2
This is a brilliant story - one of the first long stories I read, and it led
me on to reading an awful lot more. I enjoyed every bit when reading it
again.

Title: Just in <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3082>
Case . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 477
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=477>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-01 11:53:50 Score: 2
A very interesting perspective. - and, once pointed out, only too likely.
Cleverly written and beautifully expressed.

Title: Sam's Gift <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/samsgift.htm> . Author:
Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 955
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=955>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-01 11:55:32 Score: 1
I really enjoyed this. Galadriel and Sam make an interesting pairing.

Title: Cheery Letters
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1951> From Bree .
Author: Lulleny
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
2> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 1094
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=1094>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-01 12:01:49 Score: 1
It seems very Merryish to write home - and he did well.

Title: In the <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=80&cid=409>
Keeping of the King . Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 1107
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=1107>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-01 12:15:56 Score: 1
Very touching.

Title: Denial <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3010> .
Author: MysteriousWays
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
2> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble . ID: 871
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=871>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-07-01 22:13:34 Score: 1
A heart-stopping look at a horrific instant. well-done.

Title: An Unexpected
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=872> Party . Author:
Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Genres: Crossovers . ID: 150
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=150>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-07-01 22:18:09 Score: 1
What a wonderful birthday present!

Title: Magnetic
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2056> Force . Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Genres: Crossovers . ID: 1097
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=1097>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-07-01 22:21:17 Score: 3
Marnie, you know this is one of my all-time favorites. ... I certainly wish
it could be true, isn't it a wonderful possibility, to think of meeting
Celeborn and the Sons of Elrond, to dance with them. <v.heavy sigh>. a read
and re-read. I am sure I could never figure out how many times I have passed
this link along.

Title: And Empty Holes
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2942> It Fills .
Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Genres: Horror . ID: 1183
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=1183>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-07-01 22:35:44 Score: 2

chilling and appropriately horrific. I especially like the line about Dark
grabbing his leg and pulling him out of bed. I expect every child has had
that nightmare
.

Title: To Water the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3585> Dust . Author:
Eruanna
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 77
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=77>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-02 10:36:50 Score: 1
I enjoyed this - and it fits in so well with the subtle influences of fate.

Title: Sapphire
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2953> Aurae . Author:
Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> . Races/Places: Elves: Imladris . ID: 164
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=164>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-02 12:00:45 Score: 7
An ending - but not a final one, I hope. Duty keeps Celeborn for now, but he
will sail - accompanied by his grandsons and Glorfindel, when the time is
right. This is just . . . well, I am lost for words. It is beautiful and
satisfying and tragic and philosophically well-thought out and superbly
characterised and just generally delicious. I can understand Celebrian's
anger and Celeborn's accommodation with the fate that faces him and
Galadriel - and see why Celebrian was targeted for attack - and I just love
majestic Elrond. I've just spent the whole afternoon rereading the entire
thing - just to check out if it was that good all the way through - and it
is. There isn't a single bit I would want changed. It is an excellent
representation of your talent and a writer and a thoroughly satisfying read.
I love it.

Title: StarFire <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1718>
. Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 983
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=983>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-02 12:04:38 Score: 1
Another gem - featuring Ferdi, my favourite hobbit!

Title: Weariness <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2317340/1/> . Author:
quirky_orthodox
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
3> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette . ID: 375
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=375>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-02 12:14:55 Score: 1
Two characters I want to find their way home!

Title: Cormallen
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/11000.html#cutid1> .
Author: Frodo
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
4> Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 799
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=799>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-02 12:29:57 Score: 1
A beautifully written look at the thoughts of the fellowship - full of their
concern for each other.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2524&cid=9921>
Room of Tears . Author: Elendiari22
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
3> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor . ID: 759
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=28&form_story_filter=759>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-07-02 12:32:29 Score: 1
I really like this story - and where it leads.

Title: Seven for a
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3119> Secret .
Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 1090
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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. 2005-07-02 21:56:40 Score: 10
I find this to be deliciously vicious, both in a self-recriminatory way on
Nerdanel's part, but also as a certain form of payback to the god of our
small fictional universe. It highlights just why I absolutely loathe, with a
capital 'L', Tolkien's writing about childbearing among Elves. The fall of
the House of Feanor (indeed, much of "The Silmarillion") is brought about by
Nerdanel's fear of giving too much of herself to the children in her womb
and going out like a light, just like Miriel did. Thus her children are all
too much their father's children in spirit to resist his manipulations and
madness and it is All Her Fault. I sense the sublimated expectation that
women lose themselves in their children informing this particular
construction of what motherhood means, and as is my wont, shudder.

So while, in a way, there is nothing I would rather read less of than a
woman aching to dissolve herself in her children just because she can (or
rather could have), this is an entirely too plausible situation, and Kielle
is to be commended for writing a story that brings out the logical
consequence of Tolkien's construction of elven maternity. In a sense, this
portrayal of motherhood makes up for the cosmic injustice (by comparison,
from a mortal standpoint) of the fact that Elven women have no fear of an
unwanted pregnancy.

For extra special bonus points, the final paragraphs nicely conform to one
of my favorite descriptions of shame: it's that feeling riveted to yourself
in your very exposure, where that riveting is the realization that there was
never any way of not being only this exposed thing, a sort of gross and
inescapable excess one is desperate to be rid of. Given how Tolkien writes
Elves, it's a particularly apt analysis of shame. One gets the sense that
Nerdanel understands this, and it truly is horrific-so much for healing in
Valinor. Bravo, Kielle!


Title: Packing for Crickhollow <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1777346/6/> .
Author: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble . ID: 1344
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-03 01:02:46 Score: 3
What a poignant scene for booklovers! I like the fact that all books that
enter Bag End find a home there, and that Frodo should be most torn about
how to deal with them. Making gifts of them before ever he left the Shire,
on the assumption of never returning, strikes the right note given the
dangerous quest he's about to embark upon.

Title: La Belle Dame
<http://www.quillsandink.com/fiction/viewstory.php?sid=1> Sans Merci .
Author: sindohte
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=58
> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete . ID: 1291
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-03 01:04:42 Score: 7
A quite fascinating history of the Ring and its temptations; it gives
revisionism a good name. I like the idea that the Ring only mirrors or
echoes what is in the heart of the tempted one-in this way, they are
defeated and corrupted by truth itself, even as Sauron used truth to
overthrow Denethor's mind. As for Sauron... narcissism is too mild a word
for this rather twisted relationship. I do wonder how the last chapter fits
with Sauron's lessons about embodiment-it's been in a human before, so one
would think it would know something of the nature and feeling of being
embodied. For those who like their stories linear, this one is nicely bent,
but it holds interest throughout and thanks to the episodic nature of the
tale, a strict progression is not necessary. This won't be everyone's cup of
tea, but I found it quite interesting.

Title: Runaway Star <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/803983/1/> . Author:
Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 1256
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-03 01:05:45 Score: 3
Well put-together, although I fear it doesn't affect me as it might, since
the twins were never my interest. But Amrod's war-weariness and grief, and
his desire to spare his brother the doom of an Oathbreaker are nicely
portrayed and surely fans of the Silmarillion will enjoy this short piece.

Title: Lullaby
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge07/6611.html#cutid1> .
Author: Citrine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
0> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire . ID: 1226
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-03 01:06:18 Score: 6
This is an excellent look at how Smeagol might have dealt with his murder of
Deagol in the early days. That sense of love and hate together is very well
drawn, and one can easily see how Smeagol would be driven mad by his guilt,
neither fully able to expiate it or to escape it. It would just fester like
a splinter in his mind, and the Ring would twist its way further and deeper
into his psyche. Already, I like that Smeagol can't even question that there
is this second voice in his mind-it's just the way things are already. The
art of the half-truth and rationalization he's already mastered, despite
being nearly sick over it. Very well done!

Title: Can
<http://www.frodosharem.org/cgi-bin/stories/display.cgi?id=270&sort=date&sto
ryview=toc&chapter=1&cat=7> You Hear Me? . Author: White
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=71
> Gull . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry . ID: 1211
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-03 01:07:03 Score: 3
It's a very sweet poem, although Elanor sounds younger than she would have
been when this was written. Nevertheless, there is something charming about
it, the simple act of saying thank you to someone you've never met in person
but have in a way known all your life.

Title: Fear No <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=41>
Darkness . Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete . ID: 1200
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-03 01:07:42 Score: 4
I fear I've fallen quite behind with this story, and haven't had time to
catch up. However, I would be remiss if I didn't point out the Gimli-Elanor
interaction. I laughed so hard over that I nearly wet myself. "Bush!" And
Gimli has such great dignity with her, it's really quite delightful. One day
I shall catch up-really, I will! In the mean time, it's a fun Fourth Age
romp.


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Msg# 5112

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 28 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:27:37 Topic ID# 5112
Title: Daisy's
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge04/5578.html#cutid1>
Wonderful Day · Author: Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire · ID: 1196
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-03 01:08:50 Score: 2
Nicely done, using all original characters. Some confusion when different
speakers are in the same paragraph, but things clear up. A hobbit betrothal,
with attendant misadventures.

Title: Ghosts
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge01/929.html#cutid1> ·
Author: Sandy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
8> K · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 1147
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-03 01:09:32 Score: 1
A nice short piece, with some lovely fragments of Bilbo's relationship with
Frodo.

Title: Only Shapes to
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1240> See · Author:
Suzene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
0> Campos · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry · ID: 1125
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-03 01:10:16 Score: 2
I rather like the last verse, with its implications that something of Frodo,
Sam, and Gollum has been left within the waters—reflected there for the dead
to remember.

Title: Estella's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4138> Opinion ·
Author: Ruby
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
2> Nye · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 1106
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-03 01:10:47 Score: 2
I'd imagine there would be a definite anti-Men sentiment after the ruffians,
and it might well show up where the Fellowship's hobbits would find it most
painful. I liked the reconciliation at the end.

Title: Magweth Pengolodh: The Question of
<http://www.ansereg.com/mpqp_series.htm> Pengolod · Author: tyellas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion · ID: 1337
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 01:20:18 Score: 9
Anyone who is at all familiar with Tyellas' work knows that she is a master
at writing elves. She proved this to me once again when I re-read her piece
"The Sting", where she captures the heart of Maeglin beautifully. And here
in Pengolod she certainly gets at a less sinister side of Elven character
(i.e., Pengolod's curiosity and how immortality affects his sense of timing.
But what I really admire here is how she writes Men. Soup is brilliant, as
is Aelfwine; they are so delightfully earthy and have their own neat quirks.
Aelfwine's being mamed and the associated physical limitations, and Soup's
impetuousness and his embarrassment, to name a few such things.

But what I really like are the cultural details, specifically the ones about
how the Numenoreans reacted to having an elf about. To give one example,
there's the whole thing with the men from Armenelos not wearing a beard
because they wanted to look like an elf. This makes sense when the king
favoured elves. But then to dress Pengolod so he oculd pass for one of the
King's Men if his ears didn't show... it was, to be frank, perfectly
brilliant. These are the kinds of details that really made this piece for
me. (Though the flashbacks to Gondeolin were excellent as well.)

Title: Celeborn's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1023> Gift · Author:
Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette · ID: 446
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 02:24:21 Score: 3
A very useful, cinematic gift. It must be difficult as immortals, especially
such wandering immortals as Celeborn and Galadriel, to have places to store
all the mementoes of past experience. And Legolas is a worthy recipient of
this last remnant of Doriath.

Title: A Diamond In
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2941> The Storm ·
Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · Genres: Romance · ID: 780
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 02:35:39 Score: 1
I do like this ferocious and determined Diamond. She seems such a good match
for Pippin. Good story.

Title: Elf Slash
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=373> Sarcasm ·
Author: tyellas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 596
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 02:36:43 Score: 5
This is probably the best parody that I have ever read. It brings all the
problems of Aragorn/Legolas slash to the forefront, and makes them funny.
But what really got me was the first paragraph about Elrond's outfit. That
had me cracking up, possibly because I have read too many stories where the
outfit got more characterisation than the man/elf/hobbit/whatever wearing
them. And as if I wasn't laughing hard enough, those foot-notes... well,
after reading this I think that Tyellas should definitely write more humour.

Title: Courage <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2659>
· Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1049
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 02:40:03 Score: 1
Poor Eomer. And such a cunning twist on the expected story! Very cleverly
done.

Title: Home Indeed
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3379> · Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1045
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 02:43:18 Score: 2
A delight - the picture of Eomer, Elfwine and the brown bath water will
remain with me. (I'm only surprised that Lothiriel didn't insist on
re-bathing her baby in clean water!) This is a lovely family reunion.

Title: The Elladan and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=340> Elrohir
Factsheet · Author: tyellas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 598
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 02:56:56 Score: 4
Elrohir and Elladan are not two characters that I care particularly about; I
don't dislike them, they just never particularly interested me. However, if
there is anything Tolkien (either JRR or Christopher) wrote or said about
them that you don't have here, I certainly can't remember it. I particularly
liked how you went through the Great Years and told what exactly the Twins
did, and the etymologies was also information. I didn't know that about
-dan!

Title: The Last <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=387>
Fruit · Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 728
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 03:05:13 Score: 2
I enjoyed this look at Finarfin and Earwen - those left behind are rarely
looked at and yet their despair must have been almost overwhelming. And I am
glad that they were blessed with a last child to give them hope.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3043&cid=12847> Lady’s
Gift · Author: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien · ID: 979
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 03:08:19 Score: 2
I love the link between Galadriel and Sam - one of preservation, perhaps - a
desire to hold what is good and keep it that way. A mallorn in the Shire.
The last of the mallorns, perhaps?

Title: The
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=storyinfo&story=18> Letter · Author: Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1201
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 03:13:40 Score: 2
A lovely look at the relationship between father and son - the memories and
the emptiness and the final satisfying reunion. Most enjoyable.

Title: To Give Love
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=175> Its Due ·
Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 733
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 03:33:21 Score: 2
I am glad to see Finrod return - and happy to see him reunited with Amarie
and discover that he is the father of a son. Did Finarfin and Earwen not
choose to support Amarie, though? Or did she decide to live a life apart? I
enjoyed this story.

Title: A ‘Just <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3503>
Because’ Gift · Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Children · ID: 1187
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-07-03 03:47:07 Score: 4
This is just an absolutely lovely story. Pippin is endearing, Bilbo is wise
and Merry is the son any mother would be proud to have. I love Esmeralda's
reaction to the 'just because' gift. It certainly was worth the time spent
in the junk shop, the long wait and the cost - whatever it was - for both
her and Merry to experience the joy of giving and receiving. A real
sentimental heart-warming tear-jerker.

Title: Bread of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=817> Mírdain ·
Author: tyellas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> · Races/Places: Elves · ID: 595
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 15:43:56 Score: 5
Another fabulous look into Elvish culture in the moments in-between. The
power dynamics between Celeborn and Celebrimbor were nicely told here, as
was Celebrian's infatuation with horses and Celeborn's uneasiness and even
outright disdain for Annatar (to say nothing of the fact that the male maia
was Celebrimbor's lover). And the naugrim and Celeborn's uneasiness around
them was a nice touch. You did a nice job of developing a completely
believable world, and Celeborn's characterisation was just as I would
imagine him throughout.

Title: Of Elvish <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/818189/1/> Equitation and
Shiny Things · Author: AngelsFall
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
3> · Genres: Humor: Animals · ID: 660
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 18:30:01 Score: 5
This was great fun. I think my favourite part was where Glorfindel and
Elrond tried to find companionship for Gil-galad at the very start, though
Glorfindel's thoughts on waking the next morning were nice, too. And not
that I've spent a lot of time drunk ro around intoxicated people, but you
captured that rather nicely. All in all this fic moved along at a good speed
and had that right combination of moving the plot along versus racing
through so fast there's not time for the good jokes. It makes me want to go
read "Faint".

Title: What's Right
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3165> Before You ·
Author: Tom
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
1> Fairbairn · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette · ID: 756
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 19:13:04 Score: 2
This is a cute tale, tieing movie canon in well with book canon. Pippin's
practical attitude and Aragorn's admiration and awe were both well
portrayed, and I was surprised (pleasantly) that it was Pippin who had
taught Pippin to climb.

Title: Knitting
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechal12/10357.html#cutid1> · Author:
AngieT
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=45
8> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 1225
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 19:40:43 Score: 6
This is a neat piece. I always wondered how it was that Pippin came by its
scarf, since it's the only knitted piece I can ever remember seeing on any
hobbit in the movies. (There are enough sheep in many scenes throughout the
movies that I can easily imagine knowledge of knitting being a bit
common-place in Middle-earth in general, and to my knowledge Tolkien never
wrote anything to contradict this.) Frodo's caring nature for Pippin and
Merry's joshing him are just what I would imagine given that Frodo spent
most of Merry's early childhood living in Brandy Hall, and given the age
difference (twenty-one years!) between Frodo and Pippin. All in all this
piece was very well done.

Title: Fool of a Took and the Tree <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2183515/1/>
Wizard · Author: AngieT
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=45
8> · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 1146
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=29&form_story_filter=1146>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 19:58:20 Score: 2
This was a nice read and you nailed Pippin's character as a young child
(especially the endless stream of questions). But it felt a little
unfinished. I would have liked to read more.

Title: Foolish Hobbit <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1930540/1/> · Author:
Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 120
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 20:12:05 Score: 3
This is cute. Frodo certainly was justified in his anger! The language felt
a tad modern to me at times, but not so much that it took away from the
story too much. I think what I liked most about this was Gandalf's patience;
that was particularly well-done.

Title: Pawns
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2624&cid=10226> · Author:
Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 310
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=29&form_story_filter=310>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 20:29:14 Score: 3
An interesting piece. I'm not sure that I agree that chess would be
developed by the wizards (historically I believe it came from India, so I
would think the Haradrim would have invented it). Regardless, this has some
nice interactions between Sam and Gandalf.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3348&cid=12756>
City of Scarlet Flowers · Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 390
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 20:46:55 Score: 9
Oh, this is an absolutely gorgeous idea! I know that every time I hae lost a
family member (as an adult, since I've been old enough to do so) I have
planted a flower of a color and type that symbolised what I remembered about
them. It's a beautiful tradition in my opinion, and one that I can see
having even more of an importance in Middle-earth. Even more especially in
Minas Tirith than in most places: I see Minas Tirith as a place where
craftsmen and soldiers and healers would live, perhaps people who had grown
up in the more rural parts of the rest of Gondor. Those people would have a
great love of growing things, and I think they'd find a way to express that
somehow or other. What better time than in memory of the dead? The whole
custom reminds me of when the families of soldiers would hang yellow ribbons
for their loved ones in the military. (Not necessarily for the dead, but I
think the idea is the same.) There are other things I liked about this. The
nice salute to Aeneid's work for example in the name of the tavern, and the
different types of flowers you mentioned at the beginning. But my favourite
thing is definitely the overall concept of remembering death with life.

Title: Kindred
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12146> Spirits ·
Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 106
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-03 20:48:19 Score: 2
Mmm, nice. You have captured the joy of procreation and family quite of
life, by casting it in the eyes of one who can never know it.


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Msg# 5113

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 24 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:30:15 Topic ID# 5113
Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=157&cid=724>
Prince and the Shipwright · Author: Dragon
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
0> · Races/Places: Elves · ID: 1317
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:34:43 Score: 2
This is a very sweet little Ereinion - and a nicely gruff Shipwright. I
enjoyed reading of their getting to know one another.

Title: Marred <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3461>
Stars · Author: Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 673
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=25&form_story_filter=673>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:43:17 Score: 3
A twisted knife of a story - I wonder how Elmo would have felt if returned
to his body in Valinor, when he met Olwe again. Young Celeborn is a delight
- and it is all an adventure to him. He must have been a tremendous
consolation to his grandfather.

Title: One Word <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=649>
· Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 1081
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-06-27 14:47:52 Score: 2
This is a very powerful and telling tale. I feel so sorry for the Exile -
(but there's nothing like total immersion for learning a language). Banning
Quenya is very isolating - and not petty at all, Nolofinwe!

Title: Hero <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3567> ·
Author: Tiana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
4> Luthien · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 594
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-27 17:16:46 Score: 8
This is a side of Eomer that we never really see: the frustrated impetuous
man (half youth, really), sore at himself for letting things go badly.
Obviously this story is a must-read for Eomer fans, but it's also a lot of
fun for those of us who like to see any of our favourite characters as
something more than mythic symbols. Because even if the Red Book has mythic
elements and the truth is, ahem, exaggerated, it's still based on real
people (working within Tolkien's conceit, here). And real people still get
irritated when the rain gets in their boots, or when a root pokes in their
back all night long or (in this case) when they're locked away unjustly and
can't feel the fresh air on their face. This vignette brings that side of
Eomer's character to light very nicely.

The original character was also a joy. He fits very well within what we know
of Rohirric culture, and I can see him growing up to become a Rider. But for
the moment his own juvenile immaturity (and maturity) draws attention to the
fact that, while Eomer may be a man, he is still a young man and still very
human. Very well done, Tiana.

Title: All That Was Beauitiful <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1242159/1/> ·
Author: Citrine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
0> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 1270
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=25&form_story_filter=1270>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-27 17:31:45 Score: 5
This is a gorgeous attempt at a first meeting. We all know that later
they'll turn into enemies, but that Eowyn had such disdain for him so early
in their relationship... Grima must have been repulsive indeed. That very
fact makes his later actions a bit more understandable if not forgiveable.
The cultural tidbits such as the scarcity of apples are very well done. I
can see these two developing into the characters we see in The Lord of the
Rings, yet they also are different enough toi reflect the yewars that will
pass before we reach the War of the Ring.

Title: Boar and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1403> Steward ·
Author: thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> · Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 564
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=25&form_story_filter=564>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-27 18:01:21 Score: 2
This is an interesting look at what might have become of an artifact. The
characters felt real, and I loved how you made a corner of _Unfinished
Tales_ seem more accessible.

Title: Third
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=2407&NGID=116> Line
· Author: Elvenesse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 331
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-27 21:49:44 Score: 4
This is a beautiful look at Rohirric history. It deals with Eomer's thoughts
as he rides to the Black Gate but covers so much more than that, because
Eomer's thoughts cover so much ground. Will the Third Line of the kings of
Rohan survive, or will it end at the Black Gate? I never would have thought
to do something on this subject, but I'm glad Elvenesse did. It's a very
touching moment she portrays here.

Title: Watch Every
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1768> Shadow · Author:
Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 920
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-28 00:55:15 Score: 2
This is a nice spot to write in. One does wonder what Merry was thinking
when he left the inn, particularly when he decided to follow the Black
Riders.

Title: Keeping
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2555&cid=9989> Secrets ·
Author: Hai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
6> Took · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 853
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-28 00:56:40 Score: 2
Well written, although I find I can't quite see my way to this particular
unfolding of events. But it is a spot that needs to be written in.

Title: Protecting <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1693753/1/> His Own ·
Author: Kit5
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
9> (aka Pippinswolf) · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire · ID: 839
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=25&form_story_filter=839>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-28 00:57:31 Score: 4
Merry sounds a bit too old for his years here, but I do like the way the lad
thinks! Very astute of him to find a way to turn Otho's dirty dealings
against him so easily, and it is in line with Merry's conspiratorial
abilities and interests, which manifested quite early. Merry also displays
the backbone that would later let him stab the Witch-king just because Éowyn
should not have to stad alone.

Title: Without His
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2119> Lifelong Friend
· Author: Lindalëriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 836
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=25&form_story_filter=836>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-28 00:58:00 Score: 3
Lindalëriel uses the line "I wonder what Frodo and Sam are doing?" to pull
the reader through those last hours, until the question can be asked: "I
wonder what Merry is doing?", which gets us to the punchline: "Oh, I know
what Merry's doing. He's waiting for me to catch up. He always waits for
me". As, indeed, he does.

Title: Putting
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/maripo5a/42164.html#cutid1> Memories Away
· Author: Mariposa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Post-Ring War · ID: 826
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=25&form_story_filter=826>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-28 00:58:29 Score: 3
I liked the dilemma that Mariposa played out here. When things are at what
seem their worst, sometimes we do wish our loved ones dead, because we can't
think it would be worse for them than what they (and we) are enduring. And
afterwards, when things improve, that wish can bring shame, and isn't easily
divulged.

Title: Not So
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/1507.html#cutid1> Long a
Time · Author: Gravity
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
3> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 815
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-06-28 00:59:02 Score: 3
The titular "not so long a time" phrase is a bit awkward at one point, but
otherwise serves well to move the reader through the different phases of
Merry's and Pippin's lives together, until the end, when it acquires a new
meaning. Angsty and sweet.

Title: Marriage of
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=220> Souls ·
Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 334
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=25&form_story_filter=334>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 01:38:52 Score: 4
I loved this one. Up until the end I thought Eomer was debating who to
marry. Of course in my mind I thought that the Rohirric people disapproved
of his choice to marry a Gondorian (given Eowyn's and Thengel's choice also
was for that people). But the fact that he was in fact searching for a
horse... that completely caught me off-guard. And somehow it fit the
Rohirrim very well, to have that same kind of emotion invested in their
four-legged brethren.

Title: The Blood of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1631> Kings · Author:
Chris
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
7> · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 225
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 02:47:53 Score: 5
This is a bittersweet story in which Theoden and Eomer share a ritual not
long after Eomund's death. It was very sweet to see Theoden interacting with
his young nephew; the family dynamics were well told, but what I found most
fascinating was the hints at Rohirric culture we get through the ceremony
itself. Here is a culture very closely tied to horses, and while the details
are (I assume) the author's invention, it reads like something that have
come straight from Tolkien. All in all a very enjoyable read.

Title: Who Watches
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3729> the
Watch-stones? · Author: jen_loves_elves
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52
> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 438
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 11:25:16 Score: 5
This is a really interesting piece. Aragorn meeting Ghan-buri-ghan's men
(and women, I suppose)? It's a wonderfully fresh idea. And he very well
might have met them, it makes a lot of sense geographically. In
Jen_loves_elves' rendition they seem to have an outlook that's almost
similar to Tom Bombadil's. The great events may come and go, yet they remain
unimpressed. I see this as consistent with what we know about the Pukel-men,
and it also does a good job of characterising Aragorn. Well done.

Title: And These
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2482> Pearls That
Were Her Eyes · Author: Regina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
4> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 506
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 11:31:20 Score: 7
This is a fascinating look at what Tar-Miriel might have suffered over the
course of her lifestyle. The sexual depravity that her husband subjected her
to. The terror of facing Sauron, the hubris of asking her to prepare a
victory celebration, the threat of what her life would be like if Pharazon
survived and she didn't... all of this is palpable. I particularly liked the
fact that you answered one of my major questions about the "Akallabeth": why
didn't Elendil take her on the ships, given how close of family she was?

I think my favourite part, though, was the affection she had for Isildur.
This seemed tragic and fitting, and it was lovely how she helped him steal
Nimloth's scion. Beyond that, the descriptions of palace life were very well
thought-out, and the language was nice too. All in all a very enjoyable peak
into the last days of Numenor.

Title: Fathers
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13225> and Sons,
Cousins and Brothers · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1383
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=25&form_story_filter=1383>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 11:54:56 Score: 4
Oh, this one was very funny. I have endured the annoyances of younger
siblings and cousins -- and also advice like the advice that Theoden gave to
Theodred here. I can alsmost see him scowling gently, but as he walks away
realising there's some wisdom in what his father has told him. This is a
really nice moment featuring a father-son dynamic that is not explored
nearly enough in fanfic.

Title: Semper <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2401>
Fidelis · Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 249
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 12:05:40 Score: 10
The author says in her summary that this piece "turns on the standard h/c
scenario while attempting to undermine it". That one line made me very
skeptical, and probably kept me from enjoying this piece for at least a
year. I barely knew what h/c was, let alone what a "standard scenario" might
be. After fairly length discussions with the author (Dwim and I can both be
very long-winded when the mood strikes us), I now see what she means, I
think. Under what circumstances would homosexual sex be acceptable in a
patriarchal community like the rangers? What happens if you transgress those
bounds? What consequences would there be to pay?

With subjecct matter as deep as this a lesser author might become bogged
down. Yet there's much more to "Semper Fi" than its theme. This piece gives
a wonderful glimpse into family life among the Dunedain and the structure fo
command within the Rangers. The erotic scenes are, well, extremely erotic,
the deramatic tension stays sharp throughout, and the ending interaction
between Halbarad and Aragorn (who are not the romantic partners,
incidentally) was spot on. Here is Aragorn who is a commander but not an
unsympathetic one, Halbarad the ranger who "falls" but still maintains his
honour by being willing to accept the consequences, and a host of original
characters who complement Halbarad's struggle.

The whole sexual structure reminded me of homosexuality among the ancient
Greeks, where (if my understanding is correct) some form of homosexuality
was acceptable at a certain age, but the men were eventually supposed to set
this aside when the time for marriage came. This is definitely the case with
Halbarad and Dwim's original character whose name I am drawing a blank on,
and it captures quite nicely the problems that might result when someone is
unable to obey any society's sexual expectations. A very enjoyable read.

Title: Battle Song of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4740> the Riddermark
· Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 274
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 19:14:54 Score: 2
The images evoked here were really nice, especially the raven and (if I
recall correctly) the wolf. And you had me chortling at the note at the end!
But the poem itself was serious, and very well done.

Title: The Creation
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4282> of Horses ·
Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 275
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 19:22:15 Score: 2
Wow. This is quite possibly the most chilling poem about the Rohirrim that I
have ever read. You captured the connection they have to their horses very
well, and in language that left me with goosebumps. Well done.

Title: Elves and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4071> Potatoes ·
Author: Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Races/Places: Hobbits · ID: 185
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 19:28:26 Score: 6
This is a very well-written story. The characterisation of Bilbo and Frodo
is well done of course, but I think my favourite aspect of this piece is the
way that young Samwise and the Gaffer interact. The Gaffer clearly doesn't
want Sam to read, and Sam clearly loves stories -- that's canonical -- but
you managed to have these two in the same story without making either one
seem dysfunctional. The Gaffer may not be that expressive in his emotions
toward Sam, but he obviously loves the boy and wants what is best for him.
To get that across takes skill.

I also really liked how Bilbo was surprised that Sam couldn't read. Of
course, being from the upper-middle class, it would never occur to him that
boys wouldn't be at least literate.

Title: Beauty <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3788>
Mark · Author: Ruby
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
2> Nye · Races/Places: Hobbits: Fourth Age · ID: 508
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 19:49:00 Score: 4
This is a gorgeous recounting of Elanor (who is described as being
beautiful) and how she fell in love with her husband. She has a good measure
of her father's practical sense, and I can't see her falling in love with
someone who wanted her as a social climber. Their interaction is portrayed
very well here, and by the end I could completely understand how Elanor
could love Fastred.

Title: Quills and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4158> Thorns ·
Author: Nickey
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
4> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Fourth Age · ID: 1101
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 19:51:36 Score: 4
This is a delightful tale of one of Sam's sons who is exactly the opposite
of Sam growing up: a child who grows up privileged, whose father wants him
to become book-learned, but who has no interest or aptitude in that kind of
thing. The foil is an effective way of developing Sam's character; I
particularly liked Elanor's wisdom in talking some sense into her husband.

Title: The Courtship
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1189> of Samwise
Gamgee · Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 463
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-06-28 19:59:52 Score: 2
When the author described this poem as a "rollicking tune" she wasn't
kidding. I can very easily see Sam's friends writing a song like this, and
it had me laughing -- and tapping my foot.


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Msg# 5114

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 29 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:30:18 Topic ID# 5114
Title: Firelight
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3534&cid=13424> . Author:
annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 393
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-03 20:58:25 Score: 10
This piece has a very nice symmetry to it. In the first half we see the
comfort that a fire can provide: companionship, warmth, a cooked dinner. All
of the Fellowship members (except perhaps the hobbits) are used to long
journeys through the wilderness, and i'm sure by now those words "tonight we
shall venture a fire" bring a special joy to their hearts. So the first
paragraph certainly touches on that common joy.

But the second uses the same symbolism of the fire, but to very different
effects. The sparks are short-lived calling mortality to mind. That made me
think of Legolas, who seems like he hasn't journeyed beyond Mirkwood much.
He is seeing the aches and pains and perhaps injuries or even dangerous
near-death experiences on this frist leg of a journey. And it also reminded
me of Boromir, who is struggling with his temptation with the Ring. In true
Numenorean fashion this seems to be a struggle with the weakness of Men
brought on by their mortality: great captain he may be, but Boromir knows he
and Gondor will not live forever. And the fact that light draws attention to
both the good and the bad (symbolised here by the Ring) was well-told as
well. Light might bring hope when surrounded by dark, but only if hope is
there to be illuminated. Otherwise it draws your mind to baser feelings.

And now that I have written more than twice again as many words as the
drabble, I think I should stop. :^) You packed a lot inot this one. Keep up
the good work, Ann.

Title: Natural
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12145> History .
Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age . ID: 112
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-03 21:00:33 Score: 2
This is an interesting moment. It was nice thinking of Ithilien in peace,
and everyone's favourite angst-maven and his young grandson enjoying the
fruits of the sacrifices of the Ring War's.

Title: Mourning
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12155> Cloak .
Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor . ID: 394
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-03 21:06:19 Score: 6
Anyone who has ever lost a loved ones knows how painful it can be to come
across reminders of that loved one when you don't expect them. If Denethor
did not wear many colours at all before he met Finduilas (an idea I can
easily accept), even sombre ones would only remind him of her.

I particularly liked the thoughts you gave us about her mantle, how he
wanted to give her the stars but recognised he couldn't. It seems to be an
idea that he would have thought. (In fact I worked it into my story "Pride
and Despair", though I hadn't read this drabble at the time.)

This drabble conveyed a lot more than what was literally written in it.
Perhaps I am reading what isn't there but something about it prompted those
thoughts. Very well done.

Title: Light
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3535&cid=13431> and Leaf
and Color . Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Genres: Romance: Drabble . ID: 110
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-03 21:09:44 Score: 2
Nice job connecting Cel's piece with Denethor's reply (which, if I recall
correctly, we don't get). This is a nice glimpse of kinder!gentler!Denethor
very much in love.

Title: Beyond
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=3977&NGID=197>
Imagination . Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble . ID: 103
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-03 21:16:28 Score: 6
This one gave me a definite "awwww" moment. I know some like to think of
Denethor simply as someone who was a cold, calculating ruler, and that side
of him was definitely there. But I also think that he genuinely loved
Finduilas (as Tolkien writes in the appendices), and that she would bring
out a more gentle side of him that we see more in his son Faramir. After
all, the only time we really see him is when he's in grief over Boromir, and
years after Finduilas' passing. Perhaps that's just my wishful thinking,
wanting to think him with a softer and ever-so-cuddly side, but you've
captured that aspect of his personality marvellously.

Title: Marriage
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12153> Counseling
. Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles . ID: 111
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-03 21:19:29 Score: 4
What did I just say in my other review about the soft and ever-so-cuddly
underbelly? Here you do it again. And it definitely brought a smile to my
face! The laughter of Finduilas... I can hear it. But what really gets me
about this drabble is your characterisation of Finduilas. I can't imagine
Denethor marrying any other sort of women, who was not so blinded by passion
that she forgot about duty, or the other way around.

Title: The Days Now
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4954> Are Short .
Author: Anoriath
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
4> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company . ID: 1042
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-03 22:06:33 Score: 3
Oh, this was a joy to read. You gave voice to the despair and slight
hopelessness that I think Halbarad and the other Dunedain Rangers would feel
as they looked for Aragorn and Rohan. Nice tying of the untold events in
with the canon that Tolkien left us, especially in the italicised ones and
the last line. Very nicely done.

Title: For the Common
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4035> Man . Author:
Anoriath
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
4> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring . ID: 661
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-04 15:50:00 Score: 2
An interesting moment. this is a humorous look at a very ordinary moment,
and you did a good job getting that across. Well done.

Title: A Very Dark,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2446> Very Wet, and
Very Miserable Morning . Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Genres: Humor . ID: 592
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-04 20:02:14 Score: 8
I have seen many comments from various people in the fandom that humour
stories revolving around the Mordor-as-bureaucracy theme are overdone.
Indeed, this type of story is hard to do in an original format. But "A Very
Dark, Very Wet, and Very Miserable Morning" is different. There is an
element of the bureaucracy here, but the real humour doesn't lie in
parodying our own world, but the idiosyncracies of Middle-earth. Shelob's
venom, the call of the gulls, slave revolts in Nurn... it was all very well
grounded within Tolkien's world, but also askew. In the books (and movies,
apparently) the forces of Mordor quarrel alot, but somehow Abunai seems to
be in a class of his own. And he has that slight haughtiness that one would
expect from someone high in the hierarchy of Mordor. The Mouth of Sauron
also was richly done. He doesn't seem phased by anything but Abunai's
mishaps certainly get to him. The last line ("Oh yes. This morning could
definitely be salvaged.") was particularly priceless.

Title: Smiting <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2665>
Ruin . Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Genres: Movie-verse . ID: 195
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-04 20:25:45 Score: 10
Oh, this *was* an enjoyable romp through both bookverse and movieverse --
not to mention an alternate universe that is entirely worthy of the name
"Thundera Tiger". From many of her other vignettes such as "A Forgotten
Casualty", "A Very Dark, Very Wet, and Very Miserable Morning" and the
conversation between Elrond and Glorfindel about the make-up of the
Fellowship (whose name I have forgotten), I should have known to expect her
to take a very literal view of things, and expose the folly contained
therein.

The conversation between Legolas, Gimli, and Aragorn reminds me of nothing
so much as a conversation between members of various internet boards who
perhaps have a bit too much time on their hand. In particular, it made me
think of the conversations I've seen aabout just why at Helm's Deep Gimli's
axe had hewn naught but wood since Moria, when there was Amon Hen in
between. What was he doing, exactly? Spitting on the orcs? biting at their
ankles? But Gandalf's frustration echoes what I imagine would be Tolkien's:
you're missing the point!

And that's precisely what made this story work so well. There's a serious
sequence of events being recounted here, but Gandalf can't get it out
because he keeps being interrupted. And the interactions between Legolas,
Aragorn, and Gimli (especially Legolas and Gimli) was priceless.
Particularly Legolas's reference to "strange dwarven customs"... shades of
WTRWS, perhaps?

Title: Of Elves and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3048> Dwarves and Late
Night Philosophy . Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID: 199
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-04 22:22:22 Score: 10
Perhaps the thing that impressed me the most with this piece is the author's
note. And it doesn't really have anything to do with the meat of the piece!
But it had never occurred to me that Legolas and Gimli wouldn't know about
boromir's last hours. Of course the points of bookverse that Thundera brings
out are there and true and make good sense, but it would never have occured
to me to question that point! I suppose that is proof of a true purist. ;-)
(Which in my mind is a good thing...)

Beyond that... the discussion here is purely Socratic. It reminded me of one
of Plato's dialogue, except for an important point: neither Legolas's nor
Gimli's side is a straw man that exists solely to bring out the points of
the other sides. (That's too often the case in classical dialogues for my
taste.) And beyond that, the two are actually having a serious philosophical
debate. If I may recast the question a little, the two are essentially
arguing over whether evil (or conversely, good) has an essence beyond its
manifestation, or is it only a characteristic of the things that manifest
it. That is, is there such a thing as good and evil that exists
independently of whether something exists to be influenced by good or evil.
Which is probably one of the most fundamental philosophical points that
there are to debate.

Beyond that, you actually make it enjoyable. The tit-for-tat of Legolas and
Gimli, and Aragorn's reluctance to get involved was simply priceless. Would
that classical philosophy in the real world was this entertaining!

Title: The Day <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2767>
After . Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 197
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-04 23:25:55 Score: 6
This is an interesting piece and yields nice insight both onto how elves
view time compared to other mortals (such as dwarves), and also how Legolas'
continuing friendship with mortals has made him think more like one.
However, there is something in the style that just doesn't feel quite
dwarvish to me. I know that Gimli was more skilled at words than most
Dwarves, but I would have liked to feel a little more gruffness, even if it
is mellowed by age -- it should still be there. Perhaps this is my own
personal preference, though. The content at least was beautifully done, and
if it was coming from someone besides a dwarf (Aragorn, perhaps, or even
Imrahil) it would work really well.

Title: Bedazzled
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge11/2369.html#cutid1> .
Author: Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th . Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble . ID: 976
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Reviewer: pearltook1
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=72
> . 2005-07-05 21:42:25 Score: 5
This sparkles like the fireworks it describes. A wonderful overarching
description of the joy of the gathering and the wonder and beauty of the
fireworks. There is a wonderful sense of motion in this as well with the
fireworks bursting, dancers spinning and the children chasing the settling
sparks. A tight, well written and beautiful drabble.

"Then when every breath has been held with the joy of those stars, they
fade, only to be rekindled with the lighting of the next wick."

This is the essence of a firworks display, the joy, the fading and the next
flash of wonder.

Title: Reflections in
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=631> the Dark .
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 1315
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-06 19:30:01 Score: 3
This piece had some excellent characterisation of Gimli. I liked the fact
that he was concerned he was becoming more dwarvish, and that it was him who
decided to explore the cave (and that Legolas overcame his apparent
claustrophobia in Aglarond out of friendship). An interesting interlude.

Title: Sunstar
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=138> .
Author: illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings . ID: 705
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-07-06 22:39:51 Score: 10
Illyria is one of the finest authors in LOTR fanfiction. The fact that she
isn't even a native English speaker absolutely astonishes me. She has a
mastery of the language and a skill with words that I have rarely seen in
any writer and a depth of feeling and empathy that I can't resist falling
into.

This story, Sunstar, is not one of her better known pieces, but it is my
hands down favorite. Not too wallowing in angst, but with exquisitely judged
scenes and phrases that describes the maximum longing and heartbreak. She
brings forth a story that is so perfect that I would not change one word of
it, though she credits me with helping her to find what was missing. Indeed,
even when I first read it in its previous incarnation, I could not believe
anyone could write something that so got into my heart, that was such a
perfect and heartwrenching depiction of Sam at the end of Rosie's life. The
love they shared is honored in this tale, blessed and sanctified and it
touches the heart. Rarely to I find such an incredible expression of love
between them, and one that doesn't present Frodo as competition or the
'right' one for Sam instead, but as a dear and beloved friend who never got
to learn the treasure that is a beloved wife. I can't speak highly enough of
this story. It is lyrical and breathtaking and I wish one day to write
something that touches someone as powerfully as Sunstar touched me.

Title: Before I Go To Sleep
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1418> . Author: Cuthalion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
7> . Genres: Romance . ID: 869
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Reviewer: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . 2005-07-06 22:40:57 Score: 10
While many people seem to have issues with stories in which Frodo is
portrayed as having had a romantic interest in his life, there is NO
reasonable argument they could use against this gorgeous story. It is, quite
literally, THE story of Frodo's love and a more credible and heartbreaking
take on this situation, I can't even imagine.

The OFC is a lady whose history and situation are cleverly researched and
believeable, as is her relationship with Frodo. If you think this one is a
Mary Sue, then you don't know what a Mary Sue is. Lily is a delightful and
heartbreakingly credible addition to canon. Her relationship is so well
thought out and so sizzling that you find your heart breaking for her! But
in such a memorable and poignant way.

I am very fond of fanfic romances, which probably makes me unique among
Frodo fans, especially where they allow me the chance to live vicariously
through a character. This one is so well crafted that she really could have
simply been one that was overlooked by the original author. Lily is woven
cleverly into the story while making no changes to the story nor any
significant ones to the personalities suggested in it (or at least, no where
near as significant as the changes most fanfic makes). The care the author
puts into this story makes her OFC's inclusion seamless and delightful. I
can't possibly recommend this story enough. It is the answer to what I have
always dreamed of for Frodo and it is a bloody good read at that. Thank you
Cuthalion!

Title: Fallen <http://tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=287> .
Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete . ID: 212
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-06 22:53:30 Score: 6
An engaging tale, well-handled, all woven about the book's events even
though we get them only in glimpses and side-views. The uncertainty of the
fate of everyone in Minas Tirith is well-portrayed, as well as the trauma of
both healers and patients alike as they deal with an impossible situation.
And as if a siege and the omnipresence of darkness and apocalypse were not
enough, there is also the petty politics and bureaucracy that render the
painful decisions of triage even more unbearable. I will be interested to
see how this turns out, whether Valacar is vindicated or not, whether the
strange whittler claims a victim or not. Aliana has given us a very
enjoyable, if sad, tale, and I look forward to its continuation.

Title: Hands
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1134> of a
Healer . Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 142
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-06 22:54:28 Score: 2
An interaction as rare as it is brief. Nice to see Arwen in her capacity as
healer in her own right, and the concern both she and Bilbo share for Frodo.

Title: In <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=664> the Dark .
Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 132
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-06 22:55:12 Score: 2
Good depiction of Frodo's exhaustion, his being stripped down to nothing but
a resolve he knows he may not be able to fulfill. For those liking Frodo
angst, give this one a read.

Title: Bronwe Athan Harthad <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/BaH.html> .
Author: Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War . ID: 128
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-06 22:56:38 Score: 7
A very difficult moment in the slow journey of Frodo back from Mount Doom to
the Grey Havens; one could imagine an episode like this, despite the hobbity
resiliance that is more often shown in the post-war Minas Tirith chapters.
The effects of the Ring on him are brought out very clearly in a sort of
survivor's guilt, almost, or post-traumatic stress. Whatever the cause, the
utter alienation of will that is the Ring's ultimate effect upon a person
lingers and clearly will take a long time to heal. The theodicy is nicely
handled, going back to the root of pity and the larger context of Frodo's
repeated choices for pity and mercy that prove more powerful and defining
than the final act in the saga. Aratlithiel puts it well when she has Merry
and Aragorn claim that it was the Ring that claimed Frodo, not Frodo who
claimed the Ring in the Sammath Naur.

Title: Kindred
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12146> Spirits .
Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 106
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-06 22:57:17 Score: 3
A very interesting moment, one that fits, I think, with a Maia's distance
from mortal relations and Gandalf's curiosity. Gandalf won't have children,
and in a sense, fatherhood is a mystery, as is the turn of fate that makes
Denethor Faramir's father.

Title: Intertwined <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2290190/1/> . Author: Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 105
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-06 22:58:08 Score: 4
This was a neat little Fellowship gap-filler, and a nice moment of sharing
across cultural boundaries. Elven magic is always a bit of a tricky thing to
handle, because it usually doesn't come in an obvious form, but the idea of
a charm bracelet done in this manner strikes a nice balance between being
too "artificial" and being simply atmospheric. It's tangible, but cause and
effect are not immediately evident, and I think that works well.

Title: Close your
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4276> Eyes . Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry . ID: 95
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-06 22:58:33 Score: 1
Very sweet (appropriate for a lullaby) and nicely dwarvish in content.

Title: His Last
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1713> Words . Author:
Amarie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 85
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-07-06 22:59:16 Score: 1
I like the device of the letter to show a sort of schizophrenia in Boromir
that he cannot reintegrate.


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Msg# 5115

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 30 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:30:40 Topic ID# 5115
Title: One Day <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2019>
· Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 72
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-06 23:00:17 Score: 6
This poem is far, far too true to life. Anyone who has ever had to write
anything at all, whether for pleasure or payment, will recognize him- or
herself in Bilbo. We've all encountered the characters here: the
well-meaning guide who just increases the work fourfold (Elrond), the
well-meaning distraction (Elladan), the renderer of tangential assistance
(Arwen), and the voice of sensible yet slogging doom (Aragorn), and then all
the little mind tricks and interruptions we make all by ourselves to spare
ourselves the pain of that damnably blank page. Time flies, and then
suddenly it's nightfall and you've advanced all of two sentences. Rhyming
couplets throughout, and no tortured constructions to fit the rhythm (I
admire that)—good fun!

Title: Imladris
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3998> Interpreted ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 60
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-06 23:01:02 Score: 2
Some priceless description here. That first verse about Denethor, the "runt"
descripion of Faramir, the "good-bad son" for Boromir (among other
epithets), and the fight at the end. Interesting mix of humor and
seriousness.

Title: An Unexpected
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=872> Party · Author:
Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 150
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-07-07 14:51:14 Score: 3
Nicely done. I enjoyed how the author didn't try to explain anything or make
the characters fit in to a present time and place, but made a place apart
and let the characters be themselves. I only found the use of text from the
books a little disorienting, wondering if the characters would really repeat
themselves that way.

Title: The End of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2592> Days · Author:
Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 158
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-07 14:55:50 Score: 1
It is hard to capture ambivalence and paradox but this story embodies both
extremely well.

Title: The Other Day <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1373> ·
Author: Space
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
5> Weavil · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 159
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-07 15:01:14 Score: 3
This is a wonderful story, told in a simple and liesurely (to a non-ent, at
any ratea) tone that's most appropriate. Your language was lyrical enough to
carry the reader forward, but not so much to sound awkward or false. Hard to
tell a tale of years in so few words.

Title: Of Entwives
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2591> and Sundering
Seas · Author: Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 160
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-07 15:05:53 Score: 2
The author has found a wonderful and unexpected subject for comparison here,
and for an exploration of love. Great job. The characters emerge clearly,
and Fangorn is imagined fully and well.

Title: Take the Little Ones
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1429> · Author: Space
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
5> Weavil · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 163
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-07 15:13:23 Score: 2
The subtext of this story is about imagination, empathy, and understanding.
I do not know the backstory, but through your words I'm able to feel it even
as these elflings are.

Title: Spring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2982&cid=11477> Planting ·
Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 170
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-07-07 15:19:09 Score: 3
This is what I wrote when I reviewed this story in 3/05: "Yowza! Such a
gentle thing to come to such an abrupt and intense end! Amazing! Really
great ..." It was nice to have an opportunity to reread; this story remains
both startling and touching.

Title: Gathering of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3083> the Grey Company
· Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company · ID: 171
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-07 15:20:56 Score: 6
This is what I think fanfiction aught to be - well researched, building on
familiar characterizations and events to create a new vision. I particularly
liked how you portrayed Halbarad as the commander of a great but scattered
force. It gave me a new appreciation for the responsibilities of the
Dunedain. You nicely explained something I had never thought about - how
Saruman could slip so easily into the Shire undetected, and interwove the
known elements of the Standard and Elrond's warning/advice seamlessly. Your
secondary characters were given very appropriate names and a well developed
sense of character even in so few words. Excellent job.

Title: Swords <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3102>
Returned · Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 172
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-07 15:24:37 Score: 3
A lovely story. The author has done an amazing job creating these characters
and Ranger culture out of the little scraps with which Tolkien left us. I
thought the dialog particularly convincing; each 'man' has his own distinct
voice, appropriate and exemplary of his age. A pleasure, again.

Title: Back to the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4384> Valley ·
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Elves · ID: 590
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-08 19:05:47 Score: 7
This was an... interesting story. I won't say "delightful", because I'm not
sure you can enjoy something (in the sense I usually use that term) as dark
as this. The casual way that the Elf described what he knew would follow the
whips...

There's an absurd air about this. The fact that the Elf remembered *that*
song... well, I know I couldn't get it out of my head for weeks after I
first read The Hobbit, so I guess that makes sense! But that it should be a
source of strength, seemed right on. What you were doing here seemed to
infuse all of The Hobbit and the sillier parts of the rest of canon. It
reminded me of old Bombadillo's words:

"None has ever caught him yet, for Tom, he is the master:
His songs are stronger songs, and his feet are faster."

This piece seemed to carry on that tradition of seemingly absurd things
having a hidden sense of power that the casual observer might doubt. It
really made me think.

Title: Warm Beds and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3201> Warmer Heads ·
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 1016
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-08 21:25:30 Score: 8
This was a fun story. You have given us an Aragorn who is fallible. We still
see the honour in him, and he is far from out-of-character, but he is also
human. Able to be tempted both by his love of Butterbur's ale and his love
(and lust, I imagine) for Arwen. Of course he would have moments of weakness
where he thought Elrond's task was impossible, and when he would be tempted
just to rush off into the wilds with Arwen. (Not that I am entirely sure
that she would agree to go. Marrying a mortal is enough of a sacrifice.)

And besides that, Halbarad is brilliantly drawn. There isn't much canonical
information one way or the other, but I see in him a kinsman of Aragorn's
generation, a cousin perhaps. Beyond that, you've given a realistic and
fuller picture of the events of this time period that I really liked. The
hints at the tensions Aragorn's Elven upbringing might have caused among the
Ranger community. This story was two parts keen but not raucous sense of
humour combined with one part serious story. A recipe for a good read. I'm
beginning to wonder if there's a culture you can't write, Thundera.

Title: Ode to the Absent <http://www.thrihyrne.net/OdeAbsent.html> ·
Author: thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> · Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 849
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-08 22:15:44 Score: 2
This poem was interesting and well-executed -- both in its content and in
its form. Who would have thought so many mothers were missing in action in
some form or another?

Title: Fathers and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2874> Sons · Author:
thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 847
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-08 22:51:26 Score: 10
This was an interesting look at how Gimli and Legolas finally resolved their
differences over the former's father's "mistreatment" at the hands of the
latter's father. You know, they both have a point. Legolas is right that the
elves provided for the dwarves' basic needs (and let us not forget that the
dwarves were lost and starving when they were "arrested"), and that the
Dwarves were trespassing in what were already dangerous times. Likewise,
Gimli has a point that the dwarves were deprived of their freedom and were
held indefinitely (especially given their captors were elves). It's an
interesting question for today: which is more important, security or
liberty, and where should we draw the dividing line? Thranduil's treatment
of the dwarves reminds me of Faramir's treatment of Frodo and Samwise; even
if it isn't the best course of action, it was certainly better than most.

I've always felt that the truce between Legolas and Gimli and even the
friendship that seemed to blossom after Lothlórien was a temporary matter.
It was more a matter of putting aside differences to better fight the common
enemy -- so when the common enemy was defeated, those old differences would
resurface.

I was a little unconvinced that dwarves would travel to Minas Tirith so
quickly. Maybe, but I think it would have worked better with a more
compelling reason. That quibble aside, however, this really was a good
story.

Title: Wise
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13230> Enough ·
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 552
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:04:07 Score: 3
"Would he save what he held most dear if nothing would grow fair or bear
fruit or flower again without the Enemy’s taint?" Not just a rhetorical
question, but a question of the fundamental nature of what would be saved if
Faramir used the Ring to achieve his ends. Well done!

Title: Renewed
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13228>
Acquaintance · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 548
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:04:40 Score: 2
Much is made of Boromir's dissimilarity with his father, but here, Tanaqui
shows his likeness through Aragorn's eyes. A nice turn about with that last
line!

Title: The 10th <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/935655/1/> Walker. · Author:
jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 499
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:05:22 Score: 2
Although the ending's a bit abrupt for me, I rather like the fact that even
Bill might have been tempted by the Ring. It's a mild moment, but such is
the stuff of Ringly exploitation. His arguments with the Elven horses, too,
are amusing.

Title: White Against
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1165> Black · Author:
Nath
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 490
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:05:54 Score: 3
Asfaloth's perspective does much to relieve some of the tension of the final
leg of the journey to Imladris. He's very much in the present (except when
he's thinking of a particular mare) and content with that, without any of
the concerns about loyalties or warfare that Glorfindel and Aragorn or the
hobbits have. That strikes me as right.

Title: Interlude
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2932> · Author:
JeannieMac
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 429
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:06:38 Score: 6
I have a sneaking fondness for this particular gap myself and it's nice to
see what others make of it. I was intrigued by the way Lindir was cast,
although I can see where it would come from. It certainly winds the tension
up and turns Aragorn's and Arwen's difficulties inward, away (to a certain
degree) from the tension and fear that the Dark Lord imposes. Not wholly,
but the accent seems to fall more on the problems generated by their
betrothal. Jeannie touches on a number of factors that would be in play
without letting them distract from the Arwen-Aragorn relationship being
developed here. A sweet set of scenes that Aragorn/Arwen fanciers should
enjoy.

Title: Nothing in
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4436> Haste · Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 407
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:08:11 Score: 6
A nicely written vignette that I think does justice to Elrond's fears as
well as his love and many years of experience. I almost wish we had the
second half of this conversation, the one where Elrond first speaks to
Aragorn, but that would, I think, upset the carefully balanced inner
commentary on Arwen's love at this stage, which to Elrond seems still
insufficient to bear up to the final bitterness of the Gift of Men. Also, a
nice handling of the sticky point of dynastic considerations—the story
doesn't ignore them, but neither does it set itself the difficult task of
really digging into them, which would definitely distract from the main
point: showing Elrond's first coming-to-terms with Arwen's choice.

Title: Dies Irae
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3179> · Author:
Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 405
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:10:38 Score: 6
I have really no knowledge of the history of the Dies Irae and had to go
look it up. Somewhere, a parish priest is despairing of me, to say nothing
of anyone who loves Mozart. But anyway, this was quite the outpouring of
defiance in the final breach, as it were! It fits Minas Tirith well, I
think, although I note that it does rather differ from the themes of hope
and supplication in the actual hymn. Quite the reverse, actually. This day
of wrath is one of a continual grinding down of those already without hope,
until all that remains is the need to fight for the memory of a destroyed
Númenor. But it is beautifully done and the rhythm is as relentless as the
Enemy's onslaught. Another lovely poem, Ellisande!

Title: Firelight
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3534&cid=13424> · Author:
annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 393
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:11:05 Score: 4
That last line is what really does it for me, and pulls the whole drabble
together. Obviously, it can serve to remind us that Boromir is mortal and
will soon fade out of the story; but it also, I think, moves us back towards
that first paragraph. The briefness of those sparks, compared with
mortality, is also the brevity of comfort for the Fellowship, but also the
brevity of this intense yet crucial time in their lives, when they are
together in this one moment in history.

Title: Go <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=12302>
not to the Elves for counsel, for they will say both no and yes · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 371
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:11:35 Score: 5
This inspires a lot of ambivalence in me for one hundred short words!
Galadriel's mirror is such a tricky thing, and we all know how the
temptation to know safety within a relationship can break it, that the idea
of Arwen scrying for the future of her love with Aragorn gives me a bit of a
chill. Particularly when put next to her grief and the bitterness of her
loss in the end, one can't help but wonder if the latter has something to do
with this little peek at the future, or rather could be made to have
something to do with it in a longer story.

Title: Brown <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4241>
Spirit · Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 367
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:12:06 Score: 2
A succinct history of Radagast, all turning about the question of Saruman's
judgment of him. I particularly liked the line: "Wisdom of claw and
feather."

Title: Mariner's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3199> Son · Author:
Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 326
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:12:41 Score: 3
A nice, short little interlude. Elrond and Bilbo don't seem to get much time
together, and I like the way this story takes up a single line from "Many
Meetings" and deepens it, gives it a different perspective. It's good to see
a bit of tension between Aragorn and Elrond over something other than Arwen,
too!


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Msg# 5116

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 32 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:31:26 Topic ID# 5116
Title: Nine Riders <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2350522/1/> · Author:
Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 791
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=791>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 06:05:33 Score: 3
I like the different personalities that you have given to the different
nazgul here. They are all basically compatible with how I envision the Nine,
and some are downright eery in how close they come to what I have personally
imagined to fill in the gaps Tolkien left.

Title: Giving <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1870>
Gifts · Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Villains · ID: 241
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 06:21:28 Score: 8
I said that your drabble about the Haradrim chilled me to the core; this one
did, too, but in a different way. So much of the religious rhetoric is
twisted versions of the hints Tolkien gave us for what Elves and Men
believed. Or even Christian tenets, sucha s "The Lord giveth, and the Lord
taketh away" (usually used to describe death, as you describe it here).
There's such a warrior culture portrayed throughout here.

I'm a sucker for symbolism of colours. One of the strongest memories I have
from the Catholic side of my upbringing is making the easter cake, with its
three coloured layers: red for the blood, yellow for the sun, green for the
grass. That was what I thought of when I read of Nharadh and his thoughts on
the burial ceremony. All the elements had such meaning to them! But the
thought that one lived to be a worthy sacrifice on death -- it's just so
different from what we believe (and to me personally, offencive). But it is
also very believable for Harad, and you did a first-rate job here of
developing a culture for a people we only see from the other side of the
sword, so to speak.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=2681&NGID=40>
Cornfield · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 530
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 06:39:24 Score: 9
I suppose I am predisposed to like this piece, both because (as is mentioned
in the notes) my description of corn/maize helped the author write it, and
also because this is the piece that introduced us to each other, and the
first one for which I provided feedback. If I knew her writing like I do
now, I would be pleasantly surprised to find such a good writing about
hobbits, and in movieverse no less!, from her. She generally writes
bookverse and Gondor, but make no mistake: even if this isn't her usual
corner of canon, she writes it well.

Tanaqui starts out with a question that never occurred to me as a problem (I
suppose because I'm an American). What is a cornpatch doing in the middle of
Tolkien's very British Shire? And she goes on to give us a good explanation,
dipping into book-canon. Maggot's grudging respect for Lotho (and you can
tell it isn't genuine) was a nice touch, as was Maggot's very practical
concern about who would buy the strange plant. But I think my favourite part
was probably how Sam reacted to the corn. The whisper of the wind, the
length of the leaves, the "bite" of the husks -- it was all brilliantly
written, and every inch Sam. Thanks for such a great read, Tanaqui.

Title: Servant of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2574> Elbereth ·
Author: Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 796
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 12:25:44 Score: 3
This was a great idea. I loved the thought of an orc who was not completely
abandoned by the Valar: that he had a purpose besides killing. It also gives
new meaning to Elrond's words that the Fellowship would find friends on the
road in the least likely of places. The POV on this piece worked especially
well.

Title: Narn
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2962&cid=11361> Niben ·
Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Adventure · ID: 140
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> · 2005-07-10 16:01:21 Score: 7
I liked the use of the minor character Radagast and the story’s
characterization of the brave little bird. There was even some character
development, which is hard to achieve in a short story. Also I liked seeing
the camaraderie among the various animal tribes, because I don’t normally
think of animals having such attributes and one of the reasons for fiction
is to have new experiences. I also liked the sparing but effective use of
Sindarin - great names!. I would have liked to read more about Niben’s
adventures across the waves. He (Niben would have made a great “she”) had a
lot of help on the way and arrived in pretty good shape. I would have
enjoyed the appearance of a bird-eating shark, say, or Ossë having a
whirlwind of a temper tantrum at Niben’s expense. But I realize that would
have been inappropriate for a nursery tale. Nice job!

Title: To the Sea <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1479> ·
Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · Genres: Adventure · ID: 770
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> · 2005-07-10 16:57:08 Score: 7
This is the only tale I’ve run across that tells of the Hobbit who ran away
to the sea. I thought the story presented plausible motivation for Isengar’s
departure. I liked how his character developed as the years passed, and I
thought that the search for Isengar by his relatives, and the meeting with
Gorbadoc was realistic for both characters. The fleeting reference to the
sailor who did not age was intriguing – lots of potential there for more
stories. I would have liked a characterization of the sea that was different
from “fickle” which is something of a cliché. And near the end of the story
I was put off by one line that suggested that having sisters was a burden.
I’d prefer to read about societies that value women, complete with all their
faults. But these criticisms are a matter of taste, not technique. The story
successfully told us about the Hobbit who went to sea, and I enjoyed it.

Title: Bitter
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=369> as Willow
· Author: Nickey
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
4> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 801
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-11 04:37:30 Score: 7
There's something truly spooky about the point-of-view to this piece. You
did a great job of getting into Old Man Willow's thoughts, how he might have
felt about the hobbits being in the Old Forest. The way you worked in the
battle between the Bucklanders and the Trees of the Old Forest, how Old Man
Willow almost showed mercy to Pippin, all of that... it was brilliantly
done.

Though I was a bit puzzled as to why Old Man Willow didn't see even a little
taint of Brandybuck blood in Pippin. Perhaps not recent blood, but I think
the Brandybucks and Tooks were both supposed to be descended from the
Fallohides. And given that there was a fair amount of intermarrying between
the two I would imagine that Tookish blood also played some role in the
massacre in the Old Forest.

Regardless, this piece was well told. You provided some good insight into an
enigmatic character.

Title: Sweet Meat
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2336> · Author:
Ijemanja
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
5> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 1073
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=1073>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-11 04:52:07 Score: 3
Very well done. I liked the portrait you painted here, of Shelob evil in her
own right but indifferent to other evil, not even mourning Sauron's passing.
The fact that her cold, exactling influence will mar Middle-earth into the
Third Age drives home the point that not all evil has passed.

Title: Red Fire,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2794> Black Blood ·
Author: just_sphinx
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=92
> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 1121
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-11 05:17:00 Score: 5
I don't read much Silmarillion-based fanfic, least of all about the
villains, but this one was spectacular. Maedhros has always had a special
place in my heart because it seems like he is a living contradiction. You
captured that well.

I think my favourite line was: "The heart. What a wonderful invention for
torture. I must thank Eru for creating it the next time I meet him." How
quintessentially Morgoth! That he would value those parts of creation tht
serve his own ends. Well done.

Title: Justice <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=263>
· Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 244
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-11 06:00:36 Score: 7
There have been several stories out there that have tried to address the
question of whether Eowyn was a heroine or a deserter. And they have
addressed that question with a certain amount of success, presenting one
position or the other or something in between. What makes "Justice" stand
out in my mind is that it does not offer an answer on whether Eowyn was
right or not to leave Dunharrow. Eomer has to pass judgment on Elfhelm, of
course (and that judgment seems right, in my mind; even if the mean had a
good end, the mean is not completely excused). But as for Eowyn's fate,
Eomer is honest enough with himself to admit that he does not know the right
answer. That to me is a sign of great wisdom, even if Eomer does not
recognise it as such. It was nice to see a measure of ambiguity inserted
into this question, though I've come to expect no less from this author.

Title: Among the
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=222> Fields of
Green · Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 280
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-11 12:10:27 Score: 4
This piece was very nice. It had an element of quiet grief about it, which I
would expect for a battle-hardened warrior, even one who has just lost his
commanding officer and his prince. But it also had an embracing of life: he
breathes in the meadows and does what Theodred cannot now do. The way you
move from grief to hope (yet hope still tainted by grief) seemed rather true
to form, and your weaving in of details from the books was particularly
appreciated.

Title: The End of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2600> Hope · Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 289
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=289>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-12 14:38:56 Score: 2
This is a nice slice of life in Rohan during the siege of Gondor, when all
the people were holed up in Dunharrow. Your OFC's thoughts seemed very
natural.

Title: Alas,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13574> Poor
Ufthak! · Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=200>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 14:57:20 Score: 2
This is a very clever piece, mostly because it's based on such a small
nugget of text. I love that even small details can inspire fic, and that
that small detail has been fleshed out so well here.

Title: Sheathing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=769> Sting · Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 203
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=203>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 15:03:21 Score: 1
This is a nice little vignette, creating a nice and probable scene, but
somehow lacking in heart.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13572>
Long Tradition of Ancient Lore · Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 206
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=206>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 15:08:38 Score: 2
This is a lovely scene, sounding easy and nicely paced - not a rushed or
crammed drabble. A good relationship between Faramir and Denethor is a
welcome bonus.

Title: Challenge
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11572> · Author:
Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 207
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=207>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 15:10:10 Score: 1
This is a nice story with some good details but a little wordy, actually.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4065&SPOrdinal=1
> Willing Teacher and the Apt Pupil · Author: Elen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
1> Kortirion · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 209
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=209>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 15:13:08 Score: 1
This is a great big wink, cleverly written.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2199&cid=9011>
Merry Meeting at Bree · Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 211
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=211>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 15:20:36 Score: 1
Great! Charmingly woven into Tolkien's text and with a real ear for high and
lower speach alike!


Title: Jessed <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4016>
· Author: Cupiscent
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
4> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 213
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 16:30:08 Score: 3
This is a wonderful and poignant portrait. None of this is hinted at in
Tolkien's text, but is here drawn so well and fully it seems entirely
plausible. This Hama is a wonderfully straightforward but complex character,
serving ever as he is able.

Title: A
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3877&SPOrdinal=1
> Mantle of Silver Stars · Author: Nrink
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
4> · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 214
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 16:37:14 Score: 3
This is wonderful. I liked that the simplicity of giving the cloak is the
catalyst for many complex themes - Boromir's future, Faramir's future,
Finduilas's Illness, Denethor's sternness and his future hurt. There are a
number of rich details also; Finduilas's hair and earrings in particular
give us a glimpse into a rich culture present but unexplored.

Title: Garden
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11573> · Author:
Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 220
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=220>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 16:41:10 Score: 2
It's nice to see Legolas here, so hopeful and practical; engaged for once in
such a simple action. I found Faramir actually extraneous here.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11571> Steward
and the Brother · Author: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 224
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=224>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-13 16:45:33 Score: 2
Together these form a very nice portrait, easily and gracefully told.
Boromir's 'conversion' is cleanly and convincingly told, Faramir's
perceptiveness - an often forgotten facet - a nice touch here.

Title: The Errand
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/rabidsamfan/149289.html> Lad · Author:
Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 884
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=884>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-14 02:31:23 Score: 10
Sometimes you read a story and you feel as if you've been waiting for
someone to write it. This is one of those stories for me, incomplete as it
is. Bergil deserves some kind of attention, and here he gets it. First
things first: Rabidsamfan gets the age right; Bergil's tone suits his years.
Bergil is a child, but a clever child who's had a number of experiences
that'd cause an adult to break down. He's also feeling rather in over his
head amidst the hobbits he's been tasked with serving, out of place amid new
names and titles, and not surprisingly suffering from the things he has seen
in the war, from Nazgûl nightmares, and especially from the nasty rumor mill
concerning what his father might have had a hand in when Lord Denethor died.
Rabidsamfan does justice to a child's perspective without resorting to the
sort of sickly sweetness or innocence that some fall prey to; Bergil's too
wise, and he's seen too much, for that. And yet he isn't grim, either—his
original, cheerful and brave personality come through, as does his capacity
to cry and be upset when things get overwhelming.

On a more general note, the dialogue is marvelous—the characters feel at
home in their speech, as it were. Also, in terms of plot, although the story
so far takes place over just a few hours and is mostly taken up with the
necessary chores of getting ready in the morning, those larger emotional and
political events are always moving in the background, pulling one out of one
boy's chores and thoughts and into something at once larger and more
troubling.

This time, however, rather than the hobbits being on the edge of things, and
getting hints and whispers of tales larger than they are, they're right in
the thick of it, and it's Bergil who is on the outside of the story that
matters most to him: whether his father did something terrible on Rath
Dínen. Worse, he can't even find a way into it, because of his youth and his
sense of where he belongs in the order of things. Sympathetic, cheerful,
with a strong undercurrent of intrigue in the new court, this is a wonderful
story for any LOTR fan. Take the time, you won't regret the read, and even
to those who shy away from WiPs, I'd say give it a try. It's just
fantastically well written. Thank you very much, Rabidsamfan, for writing
this, and I hope you take it up again soon!


Title: Spellbound
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3323&cid=12667> · Author:
Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 880
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=33&form_story_filter=880>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-14 02:32:27 Score: 7
Shirebound went and filled a very undernoticed gap in the tale. I've not
seen anyone else do much with the Barrow-wights, nor attempt to enter the
mind of one of them. A most enjoyable experiment... from a safe distance, of
course! Although the adventure on the downs gets a full treatment here, I
think that opening section was really the most effective and creepy for
me—the wights are brought close, yet they remain "opaque", as it were, and
in their mystery and their enslavement, they retain the full force of
horror. It makes that run for the bottom of the hill that much more
effective. And of course, being the completely helpless Aragorn fangirl that
I am, I loved the epilogue, and the light-hearted contrast to the darkness
of the previous chapters. The extraction of a promise that neither he nor
Arwen will burden a child with a name like "Meriadoc Telcontar" was quite
amusing.

Title: Cormallen
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/11000.html#cutid1> ·
Author: Frodo
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
4> Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 799
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-14 02:33:21 Score: 4
Although all the Fellowship are present (well, minus one, inevitably), this
is really a story about Frodo, the only member whose thoughts we do not see
because he is the focus of everyone else's attention. There are some lovely
little moments—I particularly liked Gandalf's memory of his introduction to
a young Frodo, and Pippin's need to see Frodo eat because that's a measure
that Frodo is real was nicely done.


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Msg# 5117

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 31 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:31:49 Topic ID# 5117
Title: Pawns
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2624&cid=10226> · Author:
Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 310
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=310>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:13:11 Score: 2
I can see how this would work to try and get at that sense of Gandalf's
sacrifice of "pawns" outside the chessboard, although I'm not sure I quite
buy this particular way of going about it. But good concept and
well-written.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4053&SPOrdinal=1
> Dark Night of the Soul · Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 272
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:14:07 Score: 6
I'm impressed with how little narrative was needed to order the poetry. I
had to pull in a lot more to put my piece together. In any event, those
marginal notes and crossed out poems do their work to help us see Denethor's
complex relationship with his wife and himself through his wife and his
writing. That bitter recrimination and turning back upon himself gives me a
good sense of someone desperately enclosed in himself, who has just been
robbed of hte one window he had to the outside. Interesting that the
purgation in the "Catharsis" chapter doesn't achieve its end: Denethor
chooses to keep the pain close and to relish it. He isn't able to let go and
so he's holding onto a splinter of Finduilas that will fester with time and
ruin him. Nicely done.

Title: A Tale of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2798> Years · Author:
Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 269
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=269>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:14:44 Score: 3
Ellisande strikes again, catching Denethor in several different moods
through this series of poems: resentful jealousy, hurt pride, love, grief,
that particular fervor for Gondor that rightly deserves a place in any study
of Denethor's psyche, and the bitter relationship with Aragorn, whether as
Thorongil or Elessar. An impressive display.

Title: The Return of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2904> the King ·
Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 268
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=268>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-08 23:15:10 Score: 4
Ah, a different take on why Denethor might try to take Faramir with him.
Denethor's bitterness and brokenness are given a point by his own words—his
questioning first line that highlights the deeply personal, enclosed
perspective he holds in this fateful moment. That it echoes that "a rose by
any other name", but by putting that certainty in question, is a lovely
twist.

Title: Black <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2496>
Diamond · Author: thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> · Races/Places: Dwarves · ID: 563
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=563>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-09 01:51:39 Score: 3
This was a very nice gap-filler. You did a good job of giving us a peak into
Gimli's heart, making him approachable without un-Dwarvish. And I loved the
comparison of Pippin to a diamond (especially given that he ends up marring
one). It was very well done.

Title: Call of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1573> Druedain ·
Author: thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 565
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=565>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-09 02:02:47 Score: 4
This story was sad, but in a different way than straightforward angst. The
boy's descriptions of his beating are so matter-of-fact! That made it all
the more effective, and I'm glad Thevina was able to capture that part of
her original character's personality. I'm glad that he will be able to find
other drum-makers and hopefully make a life with them. This was very well
told.

Title: The Council of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2303> Elrond in the
Style of Hiawatha · Author: Theresa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
6> Green · Genres: Crossovers: Poetry · ID: 559
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=559>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-09 02:44:47 Score: 2
I'm not familiar with the original, but the meter of this poem worked
nicely, and the humour was very sharp. This was an enjoyable read.

Title: Elves and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4071> Potatoes ·
Author: Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Races/Places: Hobbits · ID: 185
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-09 11:54:26 Score: 5
This is an excellent story, from beginning to end and all along the middle.
Whether meticulously researched or butressed by the author's own knowledge
the small detials - types of flowers, composting - gave wonderful depth and
texture without sounding showy. This story kept my attention throughout;
each character was thoughtfully and authentically realized; the Gaffer
particulalry deserves notice as he is present so little in Tolkien's text. I
felt present at every stage.

Title: A Gift at
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=682> Year's Turning ·
Author: Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 186
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=186>
Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-09 12:09:57 Score: 2
I have always loved this story and I am glad to see it here. Celandine has
done her usually wonderful job at creating a vivid tapestry of a story. All
her characters feel full and real, and pieces of canon are woven in seeming
without effort.

Title: GimlI: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2402> Owner's Guide
and Maintenance Manual · Author: Theresa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
6> Green · Genres: Humor · ID: 1157
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=1157>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-09 18:24:14 Score: 3
I love all of the owner's guides, and this one was no exception. The bit
about Gimli watching "Snow White and the Seven Dwarves" was cute, but I
think what I lived the most was the last line: "Galadriel, baby! Here i
come!" This was an enjoyable romp.

Title: The Gift <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2183>
· Author: Theresa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
6> Green · Genres: Humor · ID: 1156
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=32&form_story_filter=1156>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-09 19:09:49 Score: 6
*snork* This was absolutely hilarious! I loved the concept of Gimli and
Legolas struggling over the idea of what to buy a young Eldarion - since he
is a prince they need to be politic (given that Legolas is for all purposes
a lord under Aragorn and Gimli is a lord under Eomer...) but Eldarion is
also one, which means there are very few things he actually needs or would
even enjoy. I had a similar problem when my own nephew turned one, and I can
certainly sympathise with them.

And Legolas' resolution to the quandry was very funny, as was his thought as
to why they should stop thinking about birthday gifts and start thinking
about more *cough* "enjoyable" endeavours. This whole piece was a very
enjoyable piece of fluff. I really enjoyed it.

Title: Advice <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2603>
· Author: Theresa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
6> Green · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 556
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-07-09 20:53:12 Score: 10
This was a lot of fun. I'm not sure which I enjoyed more: Aragorn's marital
problems; Legolas's and Gimli's, umm, creative solutions; or Aragorn's
growing knowledge of just how many liberties the elf and dwarf had taken
with his palce? "No, not in! But especially not on!" That had me laughing
out loud.

Beyond that, if the reader accepts that Legolas and Gimli developed a
romantic relationship (which is an idea that I have often struggled with,
and really don't think Tolkien intended, but for the purpose of this fic I
was able to put my qualms aside), then this gives us a very canonical
characterisation of Legolas and Gimli. That is, accepting the existence of
the relationship I think Theresa Green's extrapolation of Legolas and Gimli
into the Fourth Age has a lot of connections with book canon, moreso than a
lot of other stories that I have read. The animosity we see in the books is
still there, but it's no longer the only element in their friendship.

I would be hard pressed to pick a favourite point, as I said, but I think if
I had to it would be the very end. "She [Arwen] didn't strike him as the
kind of woman who would get pleasure from being dominated in the bedroom
like that. [...] she would make a superb Empress." It was so nice to see
someone who acknowledged the native strength in Tolkien's women, and the
fact that any man who wished to live in peace with them would learn not to
challenge that power but instead to accept and respect it. As a woman and
something of a feminist, I found that very empowering -- and also very
in-character, and funny in a sensitive sort of way. It was the perfect
ending.

Title: Advice <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2764>
Taken · Author: Theresa
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-07-09 23:59:39 Score: 6
This was great fun, too. While the prequel to this one depended mostly on
word play to entertain me, this one had some endearing scenes. Ellies
"daddy-woof-woof" response to Aragorn's dog collar. Arwen's amusement at
Legolas's, ahem, creative imagination. Legolas-as-troll and the very cute
image of Eldarion riding a horse. But I think my favourite moment had to be
Gimli's encounter with the prime minister. That was truly great!

And then, there's the vague descriptions of Aragorn's and Arwen's "council
meeting". That was a really clever presentation of this -- it's not too
explicit, but I knew more or less what was happening. THis was a
well-written story.

Title: Birthday's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2403> Eve · Author:
Theresa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
6> Green · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 558
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 02:48:01 Score: 3
This was a fun piece. Your characterisations of Legolas and Gimli here is
nice, but I think I most like the interaction between Aragorn and his chief
counsellor. Of course, Gimli's apology at the end was also priceless. This
was a good follow-up to "The Gift".

Title: Melkor <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=395> ·
Author: Joan
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0> Milligan · Races/Places: Villains: Poetry · ID: 440
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-07-10 02:52:23 Score: 4
This song had a very strong, formal, almost Biblical feel to it. To be
perfectly honest, it reminded me of the first chapter of Genesis. Which puts
Melkor's role in an interesting light: creation would not be the same
without him. I think my favourite lines were the last two:

"For only in darkness the light
And only in silence, the song"

This summed up a very neat point about life in Arda marred and the art of
that marring.

Title: Sauron
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=395&SPOrdinal=2>
· Author: Joan
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0> Milligan · Races/Places: Villains: Poetry · ID: 442
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 03:07:24 Score: 7
This was another nice poem. I particularly liked the analogy of Sauron to
the storm; it reminded me of the statement made by Boromir in "The
Fellowship of the Ring", that Sauron could control the storms on the borders
of Mordor. You had some really exemplary turns of phrases in here, but I
think my favourite was:

"Driven by lies and defiance the ships have long left for the West
And I am left here laughing and knowing that once again
Fate I have mocked and godly love and darkened the Gift of Man".

There's also the point that Sauron apparently thinks that what he is doing
is morally acceptable, or at least morally ambiguous ("Say it is evil I
wakened, or say it is freedom of heart / Both I will take, and proudly").
That makes this whole situation all the more tolerable; he suddenly seems
much more pitiable. Just like Sauron he was mislead, or perhaps corrupted;
he was good once.

Title: Strange
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=17> Bedfellows · Author: Dwimordene
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 03:21:48 Score: 6
This was a delicious insight into an orc's mind. I like the fact that Ugluk
recognised his place whereas Grishnakh put on airs like he did. Saruman was
of course power-hungry, but in the books I always sensed a sort of
self-sufficiency in the Isengard orcs. They knew they were good enough, and
they did not feel the need to claim more than that.

Beyond that, there are several phrases I particularly liked for an orc/uruk.
"For where there's an argument, there's blood to be spilled" was probably my
favourite. They had a literary quality to them, but somehow they did not
sound out-of-character. Ugluk is a bit higher than fodder for the war
machine, but he is still in essence a killing machine. That seems fitting
somehow. Well done.

Title: One
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?STID=2359&SPOrdinal
=10&NGID=102> Dark Day in Lugbúrz · Author: Starlight
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5> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 521
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 03:34:55 Score: 4
This was a very neat perspective into why Gollum was set free, and I liked
Grishnakh's thoughts and his enterprising spirit. However, I was under the
impression that Gollum only revealed "Shire" and "baggins" under torture,
and that he never told what had been taken by the Baggins. Perhaps that's
just the movies' impact, though. Regardless this was a neat scene and you
communicated the grisly nature of the Tower well here.

Title: Gift of <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1412>
Rule · Author: Lyllyn
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8> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 470
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 03:49:18 Score: 8
In the note at the end, the author records Tolkien's note that "among those
whom he ensnared with the Nine Rings three were great lords of Numenorean
race". I like her claim that the Witch-king was one of those Numenorean
lords. It's not set in stone by canon, of course, but it makes a lot of
sense that Sauron would get something of a power-rush by having his most
powerful assistants be from the race he hated most. As Elves would not serve
evil of their free will, that meant the Numenoreans.

And your nameless nobleman is every inch a Numenorean. He almost seems a
Numenorean of the same stock as Ar-Pharazon, but this man is quieter.
There's a nobility about him that's hard to pin down. Of course he's trying
to subjugate the "lesser men", but he is not doing it necessarily because he
s power-hungry; he at least makes a good-faith effort through gifts and
assistance.

I can see how he would be courted by Sauron. In fact, he reminds me of
Sauron. This was a very well-drawn portrait of how corruption might work,
and the last line ("I reached for the gift that I should never have needed")
stole my breath.

Title: Once
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1143> ·
Author: Meril
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3> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 485
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 03:58:35 Score: 9
This drouble-drabble accomplishes so much! Even without the context
suggested in the link, I understood roughly what was going on. (And I know
precious little of Numenorean history before the time of Tar-Palantir...)
But you gave him a majesty. I can see his anger at the patronising attitude
of the ladies of the court, his annoyance with the natives of Endore, how
enticing that little lie (that he would be succeeded by his sons) might have
been. It seems that he is bitter to have the so-called Gift taken away means
that he recognises something of the wisdom of Iluvatar: that it is a good
thing to be finite, but to have your work continued by others. In many way
its better than being infinite like the Elves (well, infinite in the sense
that they have no true end; even Elves are not infinite in the sense that
they have a beginning).

And those last two words: "He falls". Again, this was a last line that
simply took my breath away. It is so understated,, has such a simplicity to
it, but it certainly does the job. I really liked this one, Meril.
Congratulations on writing a piece with a word limit, without it feeling
like you were scimping (toward the end or at any point).

Title: Shadowsong
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4038> · Author:
Ellisande
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1> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 714
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 04:33:17 Score: 3
This vignette had a powerful, mythic quality, only augmented by the
point-of-view character's attitude of not being involved in his own fate.
The book-ending of the piece with lines from the Ring's inscription was
particularly effective.

Title: This Too Shall Pass <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=461>
· Author: Isabeau
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2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 742
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 04:46:57 Score: 2
This piece was spooky, but at the same time funny. It also made me wonder if
there's a race in Arda that Isabeau doesn't write well. ;-)

Title: Alas,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13574> Poor
Ufthak! · Author: Elena
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7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 05:21:14 Score: 10
Oh, dear, when I read the title and the (necessarily cribbed ;-P) first few
words, I thought "By the Valar, Elena has gone and put Shakespeare into an
Orc's head". You're just spunky enough to pull that off. But then I read on:
"we suspected he'd deserted like a stinkin' Morgul-rat." And I laughed.
Hard. So much that I almost slid out of my chair. The discongruity was just
so great -- it seems you're spunky enough to not only put Shakespeare into
an orc's head, but then to turn around and cut even those expectations.

And then you made me stop laughing, and sit up and take notice. Your
description in the second paragraph was as well-done as I have come to
expect from you, but it's really the beginning of the third that caught my
attention: "Take heart! Her Ladyship doesn't eat dead meat, or suck cold
blood. She'll keep you alive, here in Her larder, maybe for weeks!" That
this should be an encouraging thought to an Orc, even in jest... wow. Very
orcish, very chilling, but very true to Tolkien. Of course the first half is
straight out of the books, but it didn't seem unnatural at all to have it
here.

And now you've given me the mental image of salted elf-flesh hanging in the
supply shack, perhaps being smoked with dried warg-dung, somewhere in the
farms of southern Mordor. *shivers*

Elena, I told you once hat you were probably one of the top three drabblists
I know. (Incidentally, Annmarwalk is my second favourite, and Meril is my
third.) But it's drabbles like this that make you earn that position in my
ranking. You accomplished so much here! And it's all the more valuable of a
gem because it's so hard to write orcs well, and that's done so rarely. See
what you did? This review is three times as long as your drabble, you have
me thinking that hard.

Title: The <http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=25>
Men of the South · Author: Dwimordene
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 05:49:51 Score: 9
Ouch, Dwim. I've come to expect a high quality of writing about the Haradrim
for you, but this one takes the cake. It is superb, but also makes you
wince. I have read that quote from "The Return of the King" probably a
half-dozen times, and it has always bothered me, but I couldn't particularly
identify why it bothered me so much more than all of the other blanket
killings. And you have captured it so well: for every enlistee in the
Gondorian army, there was a counterpart in the Haradrim who had the bad
fortune to be born where the stars are strange, and who served the Red Eye
instead of the White Tower probably for no better reason than a Gondorian
chose his allegiance.

It also makes me wonder why Tolkien saw fit to spare the Ruffians and the
Dunlendings who survived those battles. Was it racism toward people who
inhabited the land southeast of what became Europe? Because those peoples
didn't threaten the future of all the West, like the Haradrim did (because
the stakes in this battle were higher)? Was it a comment on the Gondorians,
or did Tolkien have any reason at all? I don't know, but reading this
passage in light of what you said actually made me cry. (I think that's a
good thing; tears need to be shed for this kind of blanket massacre.)



Title: Orc's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=13341> Best
Friend · Author: Forodwaith
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-10 05:56:32 Score: 1
Chilling. I had never thought much about the relationship between wargs and
orcs, but this seems plausible to me.



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Msg# 5118

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 33 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:32:37 Topic ID# 5118
Title: Bed
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4511&SPOrdinal=1
> of Roses · Author: Vistula
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-14 02:33:53 Score: 1
Nice play between roses and "Rose's" in that last line.

Title: A Different
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2690> Kind of Quest ·
Author: Dreamflower
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-14 02:34:29 Score: 3
Highest possible praise: I hate shopping, but I quite enjoyed this story.
The bit about the stuffed toys was certainly a nice touch, as was Gimli's
having to constantly haggle in reverse to get merchants to accept money from
the hobbits. Priceless!

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2524&cid=9921>
Room of Tears · Author: Elendiari22
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-14 02:35:01 Score: 1
Interesting interlude. Certainly the scenario would resonate with Éowyn's
experience of feeling caged.

Title: Visions of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=74> Despair · Author:
Aralanthiriel
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-14 02:36:00 Score: 6
With apologies, I'm going to reiterate parts of some older reviews. What I
enjoyed about this story was how we are shown the distorting effect the
palantir has on what Denethor sees and hears around him. This really comes
to the fore in the final chapter, even though the palantir is mostly absent.
All the previous build-up pays off and the reader does not bat an eye at how
Denethor behaves and views matters, particularly Gandalf. Aralanthiriel
keeps things short and focused in each chapter, and the only thing I truly
miss is that awful council where Denethor sends Faramir away. She gives a
good lead-in the chapter that would precede it, but ultimately doesn't show
it. Perhaps another time and another vignette?

Title: Distance <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2605>
· Author: Ancalime8301
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-14 02:36:53 Score: 7
While there are many fine points to admire, doubtless finer than this one, I
must say: it is so nice to see a post-Black Gates fic in which Pippin isn't
unconscious in Ithilien already! In which he actually is conscious to speak
despite the injuries. Anyhow, moving on. Pippin, despite his injuries, shows
his maturity here, his thoughts going to Frodo and Sam who are more badly
hurt than he, rather than remaining focused on himself. I liked that bit of
intimacy of Pippin brushing curls out of Frodo's eyes because he knows Frodo
hates that—it's a nice, understated way of showing both affection and his
concern for them. I also liked Gimli, and that exchanges between Gimli and
Aragorn, as it gives a sense of how badly hurt Pippin is, that he definitely
needs watching for all that he at least is conscious.

Title: You <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1993&cid=8580>
Ask Too Much · Author: LKK
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-14 02:37:25 Score: 3
I quite liked this, particularly those last three, matching lines. The title
gets its meaning and the whole thing gets its punch from them. I like that
it's neither fatherhood alone nor kingship alone, but the two together that
make it impossible for Thranduil not to worry.

Title: Weapons Against The Enemy <http://www.nancybrooke.com/weapons.htm> ·
Author: Nancy
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5> Brooke · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 631
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-14 02:37:54 Score: 6
An entertaining vignette that has me almost liking Glorfindel—a feat, since
I don't care for him much at all. Loved the humorous description of
Glorfindel on a mission to enjoy himself, which amounts to relating his
efforts in a manner not unfitting of a report. This opener rather set the
tone:

"Before him scattered household folk and guests alike; even the darkness
seemed to part way as with such legendary strength and singleness of purpose
did he travel. His destination: the Hall of Fire; his goal: to have some
fun."

I'd not picked up on the possibility of lingering resentment of Glorfindel
on Sam's part, so it was nice to see that angle put into play here.


Title: To Hope's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3063> End · Author:
ErinRua
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 05:54:46 Score: 6
"The great beast leaps in a thunder of leathern wings, with a hell-hawk's
scream of fury. Swift flashes her sword and the monster falls."

In any other piece this would feel convoluted, and if I were asked to beta
this (again, in any other piece) I would reach for the (metaphorical) red
pen immediately. But somehow this slightly backwards way of saying things
seems very fitting in a piece about the Rohirrim and the final faltering of
hope for a future. It is certainly Beowulf-esque; the author acknowledges
that that epic served as an inspiration forthis piece, and I can definitely
see that. But it's not at all unfitting that the Rohirrim would channel that
Nordic spirit. This vignette was very well done, very compelling.

Title: Bystander
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/1131.html#cutid1> · Author:
simbelmyne
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 903
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 06:33:19 Score: 4
This was achingly beautiful, and surprisingly canon-based. Boromir/Theodred
is one of the few pairings that I can see plausible in Tolkien's canon --
not that he particularly meant it, more that he didn't close the door on
this pairing. The main problem (the fact that Boromir didn't come often to
Rohan) is addressed nicely here. The simple details (the hand on a shoulder,
Boromir's saddle) only enhance the simple beauty of this piece.

Title: Rekindled
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3539> · Author:
Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 1089
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 13:00:20 Score: 6
This reminds me in an odd way of Alawa's "Keepers of the Hearth". The
cultural notes -- the things that Frealaf sees ruined in Meduseld, for
example -- are brilliantly done, as is his surprise to see his kinswoman so
soon. And both of their grief at the loss of so much of their family,
coupled with Brytta's simple insistence that life must go on, was so well
told. This could almost be a moment in the Ring War, the characters are told
that warmly, but the fact that it is framed by another, probably more
obscure conflict (at least to the minds of many readers, myself included)
made the story all the more a joy to read. Well done.

Title: Jessed <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4016>
· Author: Cupiscent
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
4> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 213
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 13:27:22 Score: 4
This was beautiful in its sorrow. I liked how Hama recognised the limits of
his relationship with Eowyn, but still seemed to derive some joy from their
"love" (however one-sided it might be). The change in the end ("There has
never been any part of her that he could touch") from the beginning, that
there was some part but never all of her, brought a tear to my eye. Very
well done.

Title: A Question of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=430> Honour · Author:
Honesty
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
4> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 413
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 14:19:46 Score: 10
This is probably one of the wittiest pieces of slash that I have ever read.
Gimli and Eomer is not a pairing that I would have dreamed up (probably
because they are both so often "paired off" with other people in the fanfic
I read -- Gimli with Legolas, or chaste love for Galadriel; Eomer with
Lothiriel). Nevertheless, there it is... and rereading the books, I can see
the chemistry you refer to and build on here.

The mention of the blood and the taste of ash is so uber-masculine, and that
seemed very fitting for races like the Rohirrim and Dwarves. The kiss was
very well done, probably one of the most erotic kisses that I have ever
read. And Gimli's and Eomer's frustration (and attempts to explain the
situation) when they are interrupted! I'm sure that Eomer wanted to be the
one to tend to Eomer, but I really liked that you didn't let their desires
rule them. The Rohirrim were at war, after all, and Eomer (as the de facto
second-in-command of the Rohirrim, and the highest ranking officer in
Aglarond) would have had other things to see to. That one move kept the
piece very strongly in character for me.

And then Saruman's taking the "matter in hand"! And his being interrupted...
the Epilogue was hilarious all the way through. I really liked this piece.
Though perhaps there's room for a sequel? Maybe a moment between Eomer and
Gimli in Minas Tirith, when Gimli educates Eomer as to why Galadriel is more
beautiful than Arwen could ever be.

Title: Translation
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4915> · Author:
marastar
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9> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 988
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 14:58:11 Score: 7
Another gorgeous story! So many wonderful pieces are included in this
category, and "Translation" certainly holds it own. I like the idea that the
Rohirrim had a written script. They were a primarily oral culture, of
course, but you can't run any kind of a kingdom without *some* sort of a
script. Merchants and tax agents need to keep books, contracts deeds of sale
need to be written out, and inscriptions may need to be made on relics and
tapestries. And to compare the scratches on Eowyn's arm to the scratches on
a sheet of parchment... that was simply brelic.

I won't even go into the kiss between them, and the moment "after" in the
second part. Not feeling particularly eloquent after reading it. ;-)
Faramir/Eowyn shippers, this is one that you should all read. Heck, I'll go
one better: if you haven't read this one, you're doing yourself a
significant disservice.

Title: Sulnur <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/sulnur.htm> · Author:
sulriel
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 18:06:27 Score: 3
The style at this piece is probably the thing that sets it apart for me. The
simple sentences in the battle scene, and the sense of longing and the
intimate details that in the first part... Sulriel masters both, and she
does a good job of melding the two into a single unified story. Who would
have guessed it was a horse!

Title: Abrecan <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3053>
· Author: Rhapsody
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 18:37:15 Score: 2
This is an interesting story. I think you did a particularly good job with
Thorongil's interactions with the various horses -- I have not been around
many, but that seemed especially life-like.

Title: Night
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=2732&NGID=111> and
Fog · Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 670
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 21:51:21 Score: 2
I liked this. You captured a sense of terror very well, and I also like the
fact that you incorporated those subtle cultural cues, like having Aragorn
crowned in "Mundburg". This was a very interesting and well-told piece.

Title: We Who <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1597>
Remain · Author: Elvenesse
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> · Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 719
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 22:00:04 Score: 3
This piece captured the straight-forward, practical nature of the Rohirrim
very well. There is a time to weep and a time to move on, or so this short
piece seems to say. You did a good job capturing that, and the situation
that might have existed after the Ring War and the changes that would have
required of the Rohirrim.

Title: Challenge
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11572> · Author:
Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 207
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 22:22:31 Score: 6
"Eomer turned his overconfident gaze to Theodred. He squeezed his legs
firmly into the horse's sides. 'You were...' He found himself lying on the
grown, admiring the blue sky above him, and at a loss as to how eh got
there."

I think this was probably my favourite part of this drabble. It is just so
Eomer, that he would be that cocky and fun-loving, but also resilient. He
came shining through in this one -- as did Theodred (at least how I imagine
him; canon doesn't tell us that much): still fun-loving, but very brotherly
and more mature. Age, and the gruesome nature of war, will do that to you.

All in all, this was a very nice drabble. Well done, Cheryl.

Title: Metamorphosis
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=114&STID=2370&
SPOrdinal=3> · Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 239
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-14 23:06:05 Score: 7
"And so I shall make the cage my armor." I had never thought of Eowyn's
Dernhelm persona in quite those terms, but it's true on several levels.
First, the name itself, "Dernhelm" -- hidden face. As matron of a house she
learned to hide her true self and present only what was acceptable. Then
there's the fact that it taught her to deny her emotions and be cold,
mechanical, whatever it took to protect herself from Wormtongue's
machinations and the more ordinary dangers of family lives. I loved the
image that that line seemed to create, and that the rest of this drabble
supported: a bird so strong that she took what other people used to restrain
her, and used to her own advantage. It reminds me in a strange way of the
Bible story of Samson wrecking the temple. Luckily for Eowyn it turned out
better for her.

Title: To <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397>
Reconcile · Author: ErinRua
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7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 336
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-15 13:24:00 Score: 2
This was nicely done. You did a good job of capturing Eowyn's despair before
Cormallen, which only served to enhance her joy in her love of Faramir.

Title: Folly
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=12976> · Author:
Forodwaith
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> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 366
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-15 13:31:39 Score: 4
Interesting insight into the nature of leadership. But the piece felt a
little unfinished, somehow. I wanted to know Eowyn's reaction. (Though maybe
that's the sign of a good drabble, to leave you wanting more, and I *do*
understand the limits of a hundred words!) Regardless, your discussion of
the empty (rather than defiant) look in her eyes was very perceptive, and an
interesting twist. Very in-character, I thought.

Title: His
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=114&STID=2370&
SPOrdinal=7> Own Wisdom · Author: Nessime
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 493
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-15 13:50:26 Score: 8
Leave it to Nessime to write Rohan, and write it well. This was no
exception: she captures the moment when Hama demands that the Three Hunters
and Gandalf part with their weapons. The use of the Rohirric name "Greyhame"
for Gandalf, "a king must have his own way in his own hall", Gimli's
reluctance to part with his axe... all of these are straight out of the
books, and the fact that Nessime made room for them makes this drabble feel
all the more authentic.

But I wonder... what was it, exactly, that Hama held as dear as Gandalf's
staff? Was it his love of Rohan and the sense that Gandalf seemed to bring
hope? (I imagine that Hama was glad to see Gandalf in the days when Rohan
was darkening, when Gandalf took Shadowfax.) Is it his loyalty to Theoden
first, and not to Wormtongue? Or perhaps just the simple autonomy to make
his own decisions without being burdened by oppressive and unnecessary
edicts? It could be any of these things (or maybe one of a few others), but
now I want to know what Nessime had in mind!

Title: Legacy
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=38> of the
Blessed · Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 1351
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-07-15 14:07:24 Score: 2
Ah, a different kind of courage indeed! The courage to do the right thing,
even when it's not popular. The whole thing was well-told, but the ending
especially made me smile.

Title: Diaspora
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=19> · Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble · ID: 235
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-07-15 14:54:24 Score: 3
This is great. With the economy of words necessitated by a drabble the
author has told us a great deal about dwarves - that they would 'flee' with
the same dedication with which they work, and be both sentimental and
serious - and created a memorable character in Thrain, heir to Durin the
Deathless, inspired leader of his people.

Title: Dirge
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=21> · Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 236
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-15 14:55:37 Score: 1
Interesting, but sadly disappointing.


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Msg# 5119

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 34 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:33:01 Topic ID# 5119
Title: Like a <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=974>
Woman . Author: Salsify
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
4> . Races/Places: Rohan . ID: 509
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-15 15:25:10 Score: 10
I am not sure I entirely agree with Salsify's last line, that "The rules are
not made for women, nor, I [the vignette's narrator] think, are women for
the rules." Or else, if it is true, it is a very unsavoury truth. It reminds
me of the "Law and Order" episode where a homeless man is tried for
murdering another homeless man over an orange, and the defendant's lawyer
argues that the homeless should not be held to the same rules, because they
live in a different world than most of society. (In that episode, Jack McCoy
argues that the homeless must be held to the laws of the rest of the
society, or we make them sub-human. Salsify's narrator seems to be making a
parallel argument, and I am inclined to believe that McCoy's argument still
holds.)

It seems like Salsify's narrator is arguing that women have a different set
of rules that they play by, and that would almost make them a second-class
citizen, or at least the "other". And if Eowyn has no place in a man's
world, then her decission to leave Dunharrow was not motivated by what her
comitatus-like bond with Eomer and Theoden demanded. If the bonds of honour
don't apply to her, she was just acting selfishly, or out of a suicide-like
despair.

But in the end I don't suppose this piece is trying to excuse Eowyn's
actions. (It seems that Salsify's narrator and I largely disagree that they
need to be excused.) If, insead, this piece is viewed as trying to make
Eowyn's actions *understandable*, and to explain the situation that allowed
her to reach this point, then we're dealing with an entirely different
beast. In this view "Like a Woman" is (to put it plainly) bloody brilliant.
She gives us just enough of Eowyn's background to make sense of her later
actions. How would Eomer, who plainly loved her so much, ever not notice her
despair? Because he treated her like a man but expected her to act like a
woman? How could Theoden, who Tolkien presents as a good king, handle her so
badly? For the same reason.

Eowyn is caught in a hard place, torn between worlds in much the same way
that Samwise is torn between his love of Frodo and his love of Rosie, and
how Legolas is torn between Middle-earth and the call of the sea. When
caught in such a mammoth struggle, it is not at all surprising that Eowyn
acted the way she did. It does not make her actions value-neutral, but it
does shed some light into why she acted the way she does.

It also makes me wonder, too, whether the "forces for good" that Gandalf
refers to in Bag End are orchestrating things here, just as it's Gollum who
is compelled to seize (and therefore destroy) the Ring. It's an interesting
idea, and one I clearly need to think more on. (If you can't tell, all of my
disagreeing aside, this was a fantastic vignette, and it made me think about
the heroine/deserter question like I haven't in ages.)

Title: Marked <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/318.html#cutid1>
. Author: simbelmyne
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> . Races/Places: Rohan . ID: 904
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-15 16:18:12 Score: 3
This is another nice peak into the relat9ionship of Boromir and Theodred.
Reading this, I couldn't help thinking of your similar piece when Hama
observes the two of them; I liked how these two pieces differed. As much as
this tells us of the love of the mrchwarden and the captain-general, I think
it tells us even more of Eowyn's character. Well done.

Title: Whispers <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2796>
. Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> . Races/Places: Men: Poetry . ID: 273
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 07:10:11 Score: 3
This poem was certainly moving. There were a few places where I could
suggest slight tweaks to improve it technically, but the content is
definitely powerful. The author does a good job with a difficult topic. And
even the form was well done -- in many ways more scannable than Tolkien's
original!

Title: Song of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3939> Faithful .
Author: Ninquelosse
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0> . Races/Places: Men: Poetry . ID: 498
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 07:29:43 Score: 6
This hymn made some theological points that I'm not sure fit that well
within Middle-earth. Particularly, it had a salvationistic air to it (that
Iluvatar must save us from our sinful tendencies); it seems, from my reading
of the Silmarillion that men and elves in Middle-earth are created basically
good and it is up to them to struggle against and subdue their temptations;
they don't need a god to do that.

That point aside, though, this poem had a very nice feel; it was almost
Victorian. It scanned well and (excepting the few theological points I
mentioned above) you worked in mentions of life on Numenor that moved the
hymn from Christianity into Tolkien's world.

Title: Swords <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3102>
Returned . Author: Leaward
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2> . Races/Places: Men: Eriador . ID: 172
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 10:19:32 Score: 4
This was very sad. Children in the Angle probably would learn about life and
death early on, since it was a part of their life. Tarkil was a cute kid,
but I can see the makings of a great man. Interesting OCs all around, and I
like the custom of watching to see if a ranger carries two swords. (My only
qualm is I think that Beleg would have been more confused about what Tarkil
was asking about at the beginning.)

Title: Heirs of <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=834>
Isildur . Author: Dwimordene
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. Races/Places: Men: Eriador . ID: 243
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 10:47:05 Score: 6
This piece is hilarious, very enjoyable -- at least at the beginning and at
the end. But that light-hearted humour bookmarks a very serious discussion
of the troubles Aragorn would have faced as the (how did Dwim put it?
something like) "the uncrowned and very much in the way of danger
chieftain). And that discussion was well carried out, very insightful both
to the situation and to Halbarad's and Aragorn's character.

I wonder, though... Halbarad says that he too loves someone other than
Thiriel. Having read Dwim's other pieces (specifically "Not In Our Stars"),
is Halbarad speaking of Aragorn himself here? If so, it's wonderfully angsty
and daring for Halbarad to say it to his beloved's face. I'm not sure I
could have pulled it off without giving myself away.

Title: Not
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=944&SPOrdinal=3>
In Our Stars . Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. Races/Places: Men: Eriador . ID: 245
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 12:03:36 Score: 10
This piece does a fine job of getting to the heart of the guilt that a
homosexual Dunedain Ranger, especially if that Ranger happens to Halbarad,
might have faced. The motto of "Do not bring it home" seems like a
reasonable rule of thumb; I have heard about homosexual relationships having
some prevalence and acceptability in male-only institutions like the
military or boarding schools or even among monks, so it makes sense that the
Rangers would have similar "problems". It brings to mind an interesting
question: would homosexuality be more acceptable with races that have an
excess of men, such as dwarves or ents? (I think a shortage of men would
translate more often into polygamy than lesbianism, but that's a completely
separate issue.)

Modig is a first-rate original character, and by the end of NIOS I was
weeping (and raging) right along with Halbarad at his mistreatment. It's so
sad that his society would do this to him, though I can certainly see this
happening. Now I want to know what happened to him -- whether he was only
trying to earn a living and prefers women even though he can tolerate men,
and so was able to evventually marry, or whether he eventually becomes a
Ranger and finds fulfillment that way, or whether he is doomed to a lonely
life in a culture that will make no room for him. As nice as the
relationship between Halbarad and Modig was, though, I think my favourite
part was Halbarad's angsting over Aragorn near the beginning, before he left
the tavern. Very well done, Dwim.

Title: Tales of the Hunter <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=857>
. Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Races/Places: Men: Eriador . ID: 722
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 12:56:53 Score: 5
This story had a nice feel to it. I liked the portrayal of a family of the
Northern Dunedain, the somewhat distant love that influenced so much, and
the story-telling (which I think would be a major way to pass the hours).
The way you used the story to create parallels between the years reminded me
very strongly of "Fried Green Tomatoes", where Itchy tells Rose the story
about the ducks carrying the lake with them to Mississippi. That's a good
association, and your story lives up to it. ;-) Well done, Erin.

Title: Arnor
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=4> Ascendant .
Author: Dwimordene
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. Races/Places: Men: Drabble . ID: 232
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 13:19:44 Score: 6
I had never thought what the Dunedain of Arnor in Isildur's day would have
thought of the fact that Valandil was the last of the line. But of course it
would seem like dark times. First Elendil's and Anarion's death in the Last
Alliance, and then Isildur's own death in such a seemingly meaningless way
(not a great battle or anything). You captured that worry quite well.

Also, I liked how you kept the identities of the three speakers hidden until
the very end. That made the piece work so much the better, because these
were men who had known Isildur and had every reason to be critical of the
new king. Very nice work, Dwim.

Title: Another
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7781> Name .
Author: Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> . Races/Places: Men: Drabble . ID: 296
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 14:28:24 Score: 7
This drabble deals with the age-old question of whether the ends justifies
the mean (though perhaps the author would not frame the question that way),
but with a twist. Usually an ends vs. means debate circles around whether it
is right to hurt others to serve some greater end; here the question is
whether it is worthwhile to harm yourself. And I think Strider (Aragorn,
Estel, Thorongil, whomever ;-P) has the right end of the stick: if he told
Barliman and the rest of the Breelanders what he did in the Wild, that
sacrifice would be less worthy. Perhaps the Breelanders would preserve their
safety, but not their innocence. It's wonderful to think that the decision
to take the surname "Telcontar" -- which would be his offspring's identity,
perhaps the one thing he could give them -- came from the fact that he was
willing to give up his own pride for the innocence of those he served. An
interesting point.

Title: Morgul
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13137> Vale .
Author: Gwynnyd
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6> . Races/Places: Men: Drabble . ID: 1306
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 14:53:40 Score: 2
Interesting. I like the fact that Aragorn is willing to brave Mordor for
friendship of Gandalf; that seems fitting somehow. Your descriptions,
especially in the secend paragraph, were particularly engaging.

Title: A net
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13213> of warring
duties . Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Men: Drabble . ID: 1361
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 15:55:33 Score: 5
"The palantir shows your treachery. I will be the tool of none." (Except of
course, Denethor, of your own paranoia and fear brought on by the palantir.
)

Liz, you did a fine job of showing just how scared Denethor was of Gandalf,
and how unfounded (and ultimately costly) that fear was. You chose good
events to show what Denethor saw as a loss, and through them did a good job
of explaining what he might have been thinking about the weeks before
Gandalf showed up with Pippin. A most interesting slice of his mind.

Title: Pride
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13208> . Author:
Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Men: Drabble . ID: 1366
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-16 17:36:11 Score: 7
What first caught my attention about this drabble was the perspective of the
first paragraph. Tanaqui could have told us that Eomer rubbed his knee where
the colt had kicked him. That would have been (technically) following the
"show-don't-tell" maxim, but what she does here is so much stronger. She
doesn't even tell us that Firefoot has hurt Eomer. It's all "show" and not a
bit of "tell" mixed in.

Moving on from that, we have several details that all combine beautifully.
Not only is Theodred teasing Eomer about his choice in horses, but Eomer
ignores him -- both of which actions seem personally in character. And
Firefoot's scamperings... beautifully told. I am not a horse person, but I
imagine this is very accurate. At least it seemed very accurate to me. All
told, this was one very nice drabble. Well told.

Title: Downfall
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11548> . Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Races/Places: Men . ID: 354
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-17 07:59:47 Score: 5
This story reminds me somehow of the Biblical story of the Flood. Of course
there's the obvious parallel of a deluge, but what really caught my
attention is that the people in this double drabble were too proud to flee
earlier, but now that they want to it's too late. (In terms of the Biblical
story, the door ot the boat is closed.) It was a strong parallel for me,
whether Forodwaith meant it or not, and makes for an interesting add-on to
the Akallabeth. I'm sure that there were couples like this one here, and it
is sad that they had to perish -- but in the end it makes for a good story.

Title: Fairer Than
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3587> Most . Author:
SlightlyTookish
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5> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 69
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-17 17:26:51 Score: 4
Interesting extrapolating of how the hobbits would react to Gandalf's
description of Frodo. Merry and Pippin were written as too soft for my taste
toward the end; I mean, I'm not sure they would have been that open, and
that they would have gotten to the point quite that quickly. But the
beginning was well told, and the big of interaction between Sam and Aragorn
at the very end was priceless!

Title: And the Halfling
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=86> Forth Shall Stand
. Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 511
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-17 17:48:25 Score: 3
This piece had lots of good insights, both into the characters of Merry,
Sam, and Pippin, and into the reason why they would take up the Ring. I also
like the idea that the "halfling" who stood forth didn't necessarily mean
Frodo -- very humble of him.

Title: While the Ring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=449> Went South... .
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 33
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Reviewer: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . 2005-07-17 19:35:03 Score: 9
This was one of the first fanfics I ever read. I was impressed then, and I
am impressed now on rereading. You do such a fine job using dialogue to lay
out the relationships and action. Each character has a distinctive voice.
And they are characterized in ways that make sense given their backgrounds.
Boromir, for instance, is a warrior, a guy who's used to action and to being
in charge. He doesn't know these people, and he's wary and restless, and who
can blame him when Gandalf, Aragorn, and Legolas know about the wargs, for
instance, and don't tell him. The hobbits fantasize about food. Legolas is
very elfy in his talents and his way of speaking about things like the
mountains having no love for elves or dwarves.

Another thing I like is that you let the hobbits be adults, even though
they're still hobbits. For instance, when Pippin talks to Frodo about his
difficulty sleeping, Pippin comes across as caring and insightful.

I admire your pacing. You don't hurry but the story doesn't drag either. I
think with this large cast of characters, that's important. You take your
time to show us all of them, how they are in themselves, and how they relate
to one another.

This is just an all around excellent story.

Title: Together
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2158&cid=8916> In One
Breath . Author: Pipspebble
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
4> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 816
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-07-17 19:47:55 Score: 3
This piece does something I have never seen done effectively before: it
captures that feeling of being so tired that you feel so lost. It's
prevalent especially with fevers, but I can see it with Pippin's kind of
injury as well. You did a good job of capturing that, and that he clung to
Merry even at this desperate pass.

Title: Sapphire
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2953> Aurae . Author:
Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> . Races/Places: Elves: Imladris . ID: 164
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Reviewer: LOTR_lover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
4> . 2005-07-18 10:58:29 Score: 9
What a great story this is! I appreciate how concise your writing is--you
used clear, tight prose and made every word count in this story. I love the
relationship you gave Elrond and Celebrian, and the same for the
relationship between Galadriel and Celeborn.

Elrond is one of my very favorite Elves, and the way you wrote him thrilled
me. He was majestic and approachable at the same time. And Celebrian was
every bit as wonderful as the elleth he loved. She was strong and feminine
as he was strong and masculine. Fine characterizations. The same again for
Galadriel and Celeborn. Celeborn has a difficult time of it as the husband
of a powerful female--he's simply a cipher in too much fanfiction. You're
one of the few writers who write him as strong as he surely must be to hold
Galadriel's love.

Your Glorfindel is also very well written. His anguish when Elrond asks him
to kill him if Sauron wins stands out, as does his sinking to the floor with
his head in his hands when Elrond pulls Vilya from his finger and throws it
on the nightstand. This whole scene, with its various reactions from the
others in the room, is one of the best examples of showing characters'
emotions from their actions that I've seen.

All in all, this story is one of my all-time favorite pieces of fanfiction.

Title: Marred <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3461>
Stars . Author: Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> . Races/Places: Elves: First Age . ID: 673
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Reviewer: LOTR_lover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
4> . 2005-07-18 11:12:09 Score: 3
This is a lovely story, full of hope. I don't know if I would want to go to
Aman either, at this time in the history of the Elves. I loved the way Elmo
listed the denigrating names the other elves had for his people and rebutted
them. Seeing Celeborn as a carefree youngster was refreshing. And I
recognized the sand dollars right away.

Title: Winter
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2807&cid=10858> Encounters
. Author: jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> . Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood . ID: 294
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Reviewer: LOTR_lover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
4> . 2005-07-18 11:14:05 Score: 6
Wonderful story, wonderful Thranduil. Your descriptions of Elf and Dwarf
customs and the interaction between Thranduil and Gloin are spot on--while
reading this story, I get the feeling that "of course, they lived like
this," even though we are writing and reading fanfiction. I guess what I'm
trying to say is that it "feels real"; that is, that even JRRT would read it
and say "Yes, that's just how it was."

I loved the descriptions of the many moods of Thranduil, too. Puckish,
loving, terrified for his son, diplomatic, imposing, and downright scary at
times, and all in the course of a short story! Not to say that you overdid
it--that's not what I mean. He's mercurial, and you write him that way. Good
job.

Title: Afterthoughts
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=10> . Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble . ID: 230
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-07-19 16:19:20 Score: 3
I liked this drabble a lot, and not just because I'm a Boromir fan. It
handled changes in feeling, reactions, and interplay very nicely and
subtely, and I liked that Elrond was interested, that Faramir's first
reaction was to laugh, and that Boromir here was a little superstitious like
any other soldier.

Title: The <http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=25>
Men of the South . Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. Races/Places: Villains: Drabble . ID: 233
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-07-19 16:21:43 Score: 2
This is a remarkable drabble. Within the brevity of 100 words it creates an
entire world of servitude to Sauron, taxes, human trafficking, the pride
even such a society can engender, and memorable characters.

Title: East Wind
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2797> . Author:
Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> . Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry . ID: 264
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . 2005-07-19 16:39:52 Score: 2
This was nicely done and a different take than I've seen before, to have the
East wind be so appropriately sinister. Very fresh and enjoyable.

Title: Intertwined <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2290190/1/> . Author: Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 105
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Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade . 2005-07-19 21:22:36 Score: 3
That was very sweet, not sugery, but cute. Somehow it is appropriate Legolas
gave the three hobbits charms. And each charm suited for each hobbit!

A nice story, um, but the bit I liked best was Legolas was prepared to
sacrifice some of his gorgeous hair to make the charms. Oh, and now I know
why all elves have long hair, LOL.



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Msg# 5120

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 35 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:33:04 Topic ID# 5120
Title: During a journey in the <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1479185/1/>
dark... · Author: Thundera
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> Tiger · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 1254
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:16:36 Score: 6
And once again, I am denied an explanation of why on earth Aragorn
originally dared the mines of Moria. Don't think I didn't notice that
evasion! But at any rate, this takes up nicely from "While the Ring Went
South" in style and substance. It's fun to see those familiar passages given
a reworking, so that they look and feel different. I particularly admire the
way new dialogue is inserted into scenes in such a way as to conform and set
up the original and it still all makes sense. The shifting alliances within
the Fellowship, as they bicker and ponder and attempt not to give their
fears too free a reign (or to allow others' fears to do so) is interesting,
and it's really nice to have a story where every Fellowship member gets to
carry the story for awhile.

Title: Circle
<http://www.frodosharem.org/cgi-bin/stories/display.cgi?id=330&sort=date&sto
ryview=toc&chapter=1&cat=7> of Light · Author: White
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> Gull · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 1208
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:17:06 Score: 1
I liked the rhythm of this, and the sense of that light going full circle,
from star to hand and back to the heavens again.

Title: The Dark
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechal12/5776.html#cutid1> Places ·
Author: Citrine
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0> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1152
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:17:46 Score: 5
This is a nice gap-filler, and Pippin's voice feels very natural. I
particularly liked Frodo's faking a stumble to take Sam's mind off his fears
and give him a sense of purpose during the long trek through Moria, and
Merry's efforts to make light of their situation sounds just right to me.
It's a short story, but everyone gets a little moment to speak and
contribute a little, in an understated manner, towards the author's goal of
showing that it's caring for each other (and even for the dead) that helps
the Fellowship through its trials.

Title: Yule in
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge11/5148.html#cutid1> Hollin ·
Author: Dreamflower
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5> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1143
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:18:16 Score: 1
Short but sweet!

Title: Two of A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1381>
Kind · Author: Gaslight
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1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 1133
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:20:39 Score: 8
A surprisingly sympathetic examination of Gríma, which nevertheless does not
flinch from portraying him as the cowardly, weak creature he is, hating all
and everything that reminds him of himself, yet unable to summon the
inhumanity to be utterly hateful. He and his double, in the form of Lotho,
and their mutual hatred of each other, throw light upon each other,
resulting in a rather unexpected but deeply touching scene that ends in one
of the more horrific acts of selfish mercy ever. This has to be one of the
best examinations of Gríma I've ever read, one that shows his strengths in
his weaknesses, takes advantage of culture shock, and uncovers his
ultimately misguided sense of fellow-feeling. The story does justice to his
complexity, and to Gandalf's observation that once he was a man—he still is,
and that shows. Almost, you can believe that Gríma might have been able to
come back if he'd gotten free of Saruman first. As an added bonus, we see
Saruman's easy opening bid to get himself into the Shire, and convince
others to follow his orders—dwimmercrafty indeed!

Title: Clearing the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3064> Heir · Author:
Lindelea
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> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 1114
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:21:16 Score: 5
Seeing Bilbo manage children before he had Frodo move in with him was very
nice. It's something one doesn't always think of, about how someone who had
been living so long on his own would adjust to having a much younger
housemate all of a sudden. But he shows himself determined, capable, and
resourceful as only a hobbit can be, and the story is very charming. All the
characters have distinct voices, Lobelia's shrewishness is particularly well
done, and the light humor throughout works beautifully.

Title: Maps
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge13/6215.html#cutid1> ·
Author: Kit5
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9> (aka Pippinswolf) · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID:
1111
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:21:44 Score: 3
This is a sweet little story, with an unusual topic and interaction. Trying
to figure out what each of the future Fellowship members might have done
between the Council and their departure is always entertaining, and this
fills a gap quite neatly.

Title: The
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=98> Prodigal
Took · Author: Lulleny
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2> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 1032
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:22:15 Score: 2
Interesting parallelism between Faramir and Denethor on the one side, and
Pippin and Paladin on the other. Also a bit of a reversal from the prodigal
son scenario, but nonetheless a good reference to set this story up.

Title: A
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/3978.html#cutid1> Foolish
Thing · Author: Dana
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4> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1031
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:22:41 Score: 2
I like the elaboration on Pippin's vision, and also that Merry, too, sees
something, if only in hindsight. A lucky thing for Pippin his cousin
understands him as well as he does.

Title: My Sons of Gondor <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2035964/2/> · Author:
Cuthalion
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7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 911
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:23:17 Score: 1
Good to see the victims of total folly remembered, here.

Title: A <http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=288>
Chief's Day · Author: Ruby
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2> Nye · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 892
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:23:54 Score: 2
Well, I can't say this story makes me like Lotho any better, although his
precarious position is made quite evident, even before the end.

Title: The Ringbearer and the Rose <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1872156/1/>
· Author: Rabidsamfan
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0> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 891
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-21 02:24:23 Score: 10
Rabidsamfan really gets the voices right for me, and does so while hitting
some important points in novel ways. The triangle of Frodo, Sam, and Gollum
was one of the enduring relationships through "The Two Towers", and Sam's
belated, half-conscious recognition that he couldn't kill Gollum when he had
the chance at Orodruin, followed by Gollum's inadvertant completion of the
quest, should have consequences. Rabidsamfan brings them out, and goes back
to one of the best lines of the book: that pity and mercy rule the fates of
many, and here we see those qualities getting played out with hindsight, in
the form of remorse. We also see the groundlessness of Sam and Frodo after
the scouring of the Shire, and how it drives them underneath the prettiness
of the text. But it never becomes overdone, the story never really becomes
overwrought; there's always that light quality to the prose that makes me
think, "Yes, these are hobbits!" despite the realistic handling of grief.

And Rabidsamfan does very well to show how that fateful triangle of
Gollum-Frodo-Sam, and the other triangulated relations with the Ring
replacing one of the end terms, are taken apart emotionally by the
establishment of new triangles—of Sam, grounded by his love for Rosie, and
both of them providing purchase for Frodo to stay long enough to see them
both healed, but especially Sam. And then Pippin, Merry, and the girls that
are beginning to come between them a bit. Frodo and the three Rings and
their bearers also get a mention. Anyhow, a thoroughly enjoyable
post-Scouring story!


Title: Ernil i <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=915>
Duremmen · Author: Marnie
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5> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 1095
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-21 13:22:47 Score: 3
Such a brave child, and wise, and so thoughtful with his apple for Nahar.
This is a beautiful and moving glimpse... of how a child already is who he
will be, and at the same time, seeing what events and experiences grow him
to be all that he can be. Well done!

Title: Through <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4538>
Shadows Falling · Author: Karri
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7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 990
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-21 16:46:04 Score: 2
Heartbreaking and beautiful, very well done. You have a good balance of
description and tons of emotion packed into few words

Title: Reflections
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2263&cid=9075> · Author:
Eokat
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7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 1050
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-21 16:52:58 Score: 1

I've always enjoy your Eomer and this one is no exception. Well done.

Title: Captain of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3665> Guard · Author:
Arandil
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9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 119
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-21 17:03:02 Score: 2

I remember reading this when it was new, and it's just as enjoyable now, as
it was then. Excellent characterization and a telling look, from inside
Legolas, at his relationship with Thranduil.

Title: My Girl <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1411> · Author:
Havetoist
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3> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 1067
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-21 22:11:30 Score: 2
A delightful and bittersweet view of this horrific tragedy. You captured the
power and terror of those moments very well.

Title: Guilt <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3324> ·
Author: Eokat
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7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 1046
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-21 22:19:30 Score: 2
A wonderful portrayal of Eomer King, as a father and husband. We so often
seem him as a warrior or a lover that his other strengths are overlooked.
Good job!

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4997&SPOrdinal=1
> Very Model of a Warden of Lothlorien · Author: Kenaz
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4> · Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 614
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Reviewer: Leaward
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2> · 2005-07-22 06:23:00 Score: 5
This is an absolutely hilarious renditions of "I am the Very Model of a
Modern Major General" by Gilbert and Sullivan that I found myself 'singing'
along to! What an incredible work of art and how difficult it must have been
to try to get the metre down.

I can only imagine the amount of fiddling it must have taken to get it just
right, but Kenaz certainly has managed to create a truly inspired 'poem.'
And what is the icing on the ice is that Kenaz has managed to keep not only
the humour but the character in our Marchwarden of Lothlorien while keeping
to the true spirit of Gilbert and Sullivan. Well done!

Title: Swords <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3102>
Returned · Author: Leaward
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2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 172
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-22 08:25:26 Score: 10
It's difficult to write children without turning to silliness and fluff and
Leaward does a wonderful job with this portrayal of her original character
Tarkil as a child. She's taken bits from what Tolkien didn't say and woven a
wonderful, realistic, heartbreaking custom and uses this child to show it to
the reader. Her custom of returning the swords to the widow is poignant and
nothing short of genius. To be handed your husband’s sword, and know he will
be not wielding it again – what more needs to be said. It highlights the
difficulty of expression at such times, that words are weak in the face of
such emotion.

Leaward takes this difficult subject and shows us through the eyes of a
child who will one day be given his father’s sword, his brother’s sword –
who will have to consider that his wife will be given his sword, or their
son’s swords.

Little Tarkil’s words are so very insightful, that he wants a new sword. Who
could argue? -yet who knows what the future holds for him?

- Leaward!?, and all of us who are eagerly following grown-up Tarkil on
patrol, south to Gondor and home again, where he does face these difficult
issues on his own. Will he follow in the footsteps of his father and
brothers, letting someone else return his sword to his wife, or will he do
as his older brother and retire from rangering to raise his own family?

Great job, Leaward.


Title: Patrimony
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=1> · Author:
Dwimordene
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· Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 247
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-07-24 09:40:09 Score: 1
I thought this was fine, but the boy much more characteristic of Boromir
than Faramir.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=113&STID=2497&
SPOrdinal=5> Ride of the Rohirrim · Author: Marta
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> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 1325
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-24 15:41:04 Score: 3
I think my favorite line out of this drabble is the following: "What had
before been created out of nothing was now re-created out of worse than
nothing: disaster and impending doom." Great twist, there, placing disaster
as worse than nothing, so that the alliances forged in the midst of disaster
are in some sense a greater wonder than creation ex nihilo.

Title: Important
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1712&cid=12955> Business ·
Author: Jay
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4> of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 1323
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-24 15:41:41 Score: 3
A very convincing point of view on the Council of Elrond, Jay! Particularly
this line: "The pointless, irritating discussions were over." Well, when
you've got sunshine and warm flagstones to sleep on, what else could
possibly be important?

Title: Isildur's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13127>
Inheritance · Author: Gwynnyd
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6> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 1299
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-24 15:42:57 Score: 2
The Ring's influence is so insidious, it just slips under the radar with
other, more familiar complaints. In a less careful man, that would be
disastrous, and there'd be no recognition of a problem until it was too
late.

Title: Namesake
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3793&SPOrdinal=1
> · Author: Ruby
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2> Nye · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 271
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-07-24 15:50:32 Score: 2
I liked this story, though it seemed overlong somehow. The paragraph where
Faramir summarizes the story he will read to Farry is a jewel, however.


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Msg# 5121

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 36 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:33:57 Topic ID# 5121
Title: On
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=317&NGID=2> the
Death of His Wife · Author: Alawa
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3> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 74
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-07-24 15:56:36 Score: 2
I thought this was very good, with language that was formal without being
stilted and just the right mixture of bitterness and resignation.

Title: Wait for me -
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=4455> Eowyn · Author:
elanor_of_aquitania
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> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 127
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Reviewer: Nancy
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5> Brooke · 2005-07-24 16:23:49 Score: 4
I thought this was a wonderful story. It hit all the marks - scene setting,
characterizations, realistic situations - with a good bit more. There were
some lovely details - the idea that Finduilas would go to the Ocean for the
summer and her family as so many of us do; that Boromir would be so quick to
learn even if not in the area of languages; that Denethor was loving with
his wife and stern with his sons, and have to work late at home.

Title: Beauty
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13129> in the
Light · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble · ID: 1300
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-24 16:30:04 Score: 2
As I read this, I kept thinking of the blurb for the tale of Aldarion and
Erendis: a man can't serve two masters. Can a Dwarf serve two beauties? It
remains to be seen.

Title: Spirit
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=2321&SPOrdinal=1
> of a Sword · Author: Erin's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
6> Daughter · Races/Places: Dwarves · ID: 724
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-24 16:30:44 Score: 1
I like the father-child relationship of Dwarf to work; it seems very
fitting.

Title: In <http://www.wellinghall.net/fanfic/indark.html> Darkness ·
Author: Celandine
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3> Brandybuck · Races/Places: Dwarves · ID: 678
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-24 16:31:11 Score: 3
Balin seems remarkably lucid on his deathbed! But really, the loose
arrangement of his musings suits the setting, and I liked particularly the
last line:

"The halls of my fathers call to me. Perhaps I shall see there Dúrin
himself, and have to admit my failure. I tried. I tried…"

There's something poignant about that sense of failed striving.


Title: Black <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2496>
Diamond · Author: thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> · Races/Places: Dwarves · ID: 563
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-24 16:31:35 Score: 3
I like the edginess of Gimli and Legolas in this fic. They're still not
quite friendly, and a Dwarf exhausted from what should have been the last
battle any of them would ever see is hardly a good conversationalist. I can
imagine the search for and the discovery and rescue of Pippin might have
gone something like this.

Title: From
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13205> the
Eastern Force · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble · ID: 539
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-24 16:32:02 Score: 2
A very sympathetic non-Dwarvish view from midst of the chaos of the Nirnaeth
Arnoediad. Azaghal's people are given their due in tribute from an ally who
recognizes their courage.

Title: Of Durin and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3408> Kibil-nala ·
Author: Mantida
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
4> · Races/Places: Dwarves · ID: 473
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-24 16:32:42 Score: 8
Mantida has really captured the tone and style of mythic lore for this
story. Nevermind that there is a canonical explanation for Cirdan's
beard—you'll be quite willing to overlook that for this story, I feel nearly
certain. In this tale, Durin becomes a kind of Dwarvish Adam, except his
wife, surprisingly in a sense, given the Dwarvish love of craft and the
apparent possessiveness of that people, doesn't arise from his own hands or
body. Instead, he meets a stranger, which is just a wonderful, generous myth
of peace across races there, at the beginning of Dwarvish time that also
takes into account the few facts we have about the Longbeards in a creative,
surprising fashion. There's no conquest, there's no sense of ownership
involved in this relationship, but a celebration of beauty that provokes
desire across differences, like electricity between two opposite poles.
Exquisitely written, it is more effective than many a fic that harps on and
on about how different X and Y are from each other—it just assumes this and
the story unfolds naturally. Give this story a try; it is well worth it.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=97&STID=2223&S
POrdinal=8> Hall of Standards · Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Races/Places: Dwarves · ID: 373
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-24 16:33:14 Score: 5
Although short, one gets a sense of the history and the inherited ethos of
the Dwarves as Balin sees the Hall of Standards for the first time. This is
like looking into King Tut's tomb, I imagine, and recognizing your own
heritage there. I particularly loved this exchange:

"When the Dwarves raise a standard in our halls, we use quickset to see that
it stays put. It may be left behind to be won back later, it may be cut down
by our enemies, but it will never be moved."

"What we have, we hold..."

Quintessentially Dwarvish rootedness in these lines.


Title: Drums
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9417> in the Deep
· Author: Forodwaith
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> · Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble · ID: 355
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-24 16:33:46 Score: 1
A little glimpse into the stoic fellowship of Dwarves in their final
foxhole. Nicely done.

Title: Legacy
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=9468> · Author:
Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> · Races/Places: Dwarves · ID: 300
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-24 16:34:19 Score: 5
Vengeance and willfulness run deep in the Dwarves when they're disturbed,
and it's interesting to see this from a woman's point of view. Dís's
dislocation is far more severe it seems than those of her male kindred.
There's always that substitution, though: she will not be among those who
retake the mountain, but she will give her sons to that task—it's as if
she's made them only for that. There's something beautiful and yet terrible
in her vow that "I will teach you to hunger and thirst for retribution."

Title: Offerings
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3044&cid=11813> · Author:
Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 322
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Reviewer: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · 2005-07-24 16:38:44 Score: 2
The author has drawn a lovely contrast here in the inner life of Denethor
and the exterior life of Faramir. Interesting that Denethor could have also
been a neglected son, and that Faramir would choose light over shadow.

Title: Gathering of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3083> the Grey Company
· Author: Leaward
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2> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company · ID: 171
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-07-24 17:11:08 Score: 6
This is my favorite gap-filler, what a poignant view of the many
difficulties the peoples and the lands were facing on the fringes of JRR
Tolkien's writings. Leaward has woven a cast of original characters into
Tolkien's world in a believable and realistic way, delightfully in character
for the time and the world. She highlights the current issues facing the
Rangers in their world in leaving their loved ones nearly defenseless in
order to go south to fight beside their King Elessar. I especially like the
way she approaches the heartbreak of leaving their families and loved ones.
- not just leaving them to ride into danger, but leaving them unprotected
and in known danger themselves. -leaving their comrades thinly spread to try
to protect too many against too much.

Title: Opening <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2650>
Doors · Author: Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 359
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 00:57:59 Score: 6
There seems to be a certain interest in making Narvi female. It makes for a
fascinating dynamic as dwarven and elven frustrations, customs, and errors
make themselves known. The author also pulls in an added romantic tension
when Galadriel appears—wedded to Celeborn, beloved of Celebrimbor, and the
opener of doors figurative and otherwise for Narvi who also desires her,
Galadriel is a beautiful enigma. It's an interesting quasi-triangle. This
fic draws the reader into a complicated tangle of desire and limitation, and
finds dwarven immortality in the students Narvi will teach—most especially
the elvish students. Well worth the read!

Title: Keeping the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3038> Watch · Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 333
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 00:59:14 Score: 4
I love the hobbits in this story for the way their more usual, generous
habits of thought work against the suspicion demanded by their job as
bounders. It's a brief encounter—a missed encounter, really, or perhaps a
close encounter—with a Ranger on his watch, and something about the fact
that the Bounders and the Rangers walk parallel courses in their duties
without *quite* managing a direct relationship is very endearing.

Title: Handmaiden of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3520> Lorien · Author:
Marnie
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5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 316
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 00:59:38 Score: 4
An interesting take indeed on this mythic couple. The handmaiden twist shows
up some real differences between both Thingol and Melian, but also in the
nature of power. It isn't simply its raw measure that defines it as
'commanding'; it is the attitude of the one who wields it, so that even a
powerful creature is shown to be weak as commander when its nature is to
serve. Read this story for those last few paragraphs; they make the entire
fic.

Title: Kindred
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=9411> Spirits ·
Author: Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 299
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:00:13 Score: 1
An excellent insight into the symmetry of Frodo's and Celebrian's
experiences of evil.

Title: Dragons
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=11653> and
Shadows · Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 285
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:00:46 Score: 2
I like this little interlude, where old myths, memories, and science come
together rather than colliding as they usually do.

Title: There
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13575> and Back
Again · Author: Elena
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7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 202
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:01:19 Score: 2
A nice contextualizing of the Book of Marzabul through Frodo's love of
memoirs. It gives both Frodo and Balin a little more depth.

Title: Of Elves and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3048> Dwarves and Late
Night Philosophy · Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 199
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:02:48 Score: 8
God bless you for reinvigorating the fine tradition of theodicy in
Middle-earth, Thundera! Either that, or may S/He curse you to live in
interesting times because this sort of thing tends to stir the desire to
intervene in the conversation of fictional characters and that way lies
madness and a new white coat. I appreciate your casting Aragorn in the
Socratic role—""I do not believe that the discussion has been worthless,"
Aragorn said slowly, "for it has revealed to us just how little we truly
know."" It's really the only honorable philosophical position, provided one
isn't out to torment one's opponents for the joy of it.

All in all, the jockeying on this chicken-and-egg question was entertaining
to watch, as conversational dominance passes back and forth, and for all the
debate in its substance is less important than the interpersonal dynamics
and games of control, it wasn't simple window-dressing either. So when does
round two happen? And what will be the next question? How many
non-re-embodied Elves can dance on the head of a dwarvish pin, perhaps? I
look forward to the argumentative cage match, whatever it might be.


Title: The Day <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2767>
After · Author: Thundera
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> Tiger · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 197
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:03:24 Score: 7
Huzzah for a story that really tries to get at the elven sense of time and
examine it in as systematic a way as a story can likely sustain. Gimli
proves very insightful as he compares battle-time and the time of the day
after battle to normal elvish time-sense and Legolas' altered time-sense.
This in itself would be merely an interesting exercise, save that there are
consequences to that alteration: an elf's sense of time is suited to the
temporality of an immortal being, that cannot take in the shorter spans of
mortal measures forever without being driven mad; Legolas' having been
affected by his mortal friends to the point of beginning to be tied to their
time frame as much as is elvenly possible is not without risk. Humorous in
parts, but also touching, Gimli and Legolas fans will not want to miss this
fic.

Title: He
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1133> Stands
Not Alone · Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 147
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:03:55 Score: 5
Despite the peril of the Fellowship's position at the time, this drabble
suggests a rather humble beginning to Legolas' and Gimli's friendship. The
almost unthinking reaction of Legolas, to go back for a companion without
thought of racial divisions so much as crossing his mind and Gimli's
unselfconscious thanks point to the fact that there never was a decision
involved in drawing closer to each other. It just happened, as my favorite
line indicates: "Something about the shape of the air behind me makes me
look round: no Dwarf."

Title: The Mark of a... <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1315>
Warrior? · Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 133
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:04:46 Score: 2
The bathroom rituals of males are utterly incomprehensible, but I wouldn't
argue with the author's assertion: yes, this probably would happen at least
once!

Title: A Prince's <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1143>
Question · Author: Tathrin
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6> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 113
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:05:23 Score: 6
I think I've hurt myself laughing over this. It's an interesting slash-fanon
twist on the perennial awkward child's question—a sort of classic gag. And
truly, the most amusing part of the whole thing is, of course, the antics of
Legolas and Gimli as they manage not to answer Eldarion. Aragorn's and
Arwen's setting their son up to provide free entertainment was... evil. But
amusingly so. Éowyn would get the job of being the Aunt Who Knows—why not,
after all the time she must have spent collecting information on Wormtongue?
The ending includes the time-honored fallacy of equivocation and employs it
nicely.

Title: Prelude <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/513858/1/> · Author: Mercat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 109
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-07-25 01:05:51 Score: 5
I'm sorry, Mercat, I'm going to steal an old review of mine almost verbatim,
as I think my opinion has not changed since that time. This story is very
well done. We don't see much (ok, any) interaction between Frodo and Legolas
in the books, and I love the way the elf proposes a very elvish solution to
a hobbit's problems. Good continuity with the reference to the
"transparency" that Gandalf noted, and I love the way you wrote Merry and
Pippin. It's good to see Frodo jest with them even though he maintains a
certain distance. Sam was beautiful, for all his few words. Nicely put
together.



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Msg# 5122

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 38 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:35:01 Topic ID# 5122
Title: Heirlooms
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13126> . Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Genres: Humor: Drabble . ID: 402
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Reviewer: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . 2005-07-31 11:11:24 Score: 1
Cute. The last line was priceless.

Title: Triumph
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13578> Incarnate
. Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Races/Places: Villains: Drabble . ID: 198
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Reviewer: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . 2005-07-31 11:14:50 Score: 1
Probably one of the most powerful drabbles I've read. Good work.

Title: Alas,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13574> Poor
Ufthak! . Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Races/Places: Villains: Drabble . ID: 200
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Reviewer: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . 2005-07-31 11:16:40 Score: 1
Deliciously morbid. Loved it.

Title: Orc's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=13341> Best
Friend . Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Races/Places: Villains: Drabble . ID: 384
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Reviewer: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . 2005-07-31 11:26:21 Score: 1
Awww... Loved the warg's POV.

Title: Sea <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4818>
Longing . Author: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor . ID: 699
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-01 10:28:54 Score: 6
A brief, lovely vision of two small boys and the woman who lavishes all her
love and care upon them. EdorasLass's details are perfect - it's very clear
she is a woman who knows and loves small children, and she brings Boromir
and Faramir to mischievous, irrepressible life as no other author does.
Other details - Finduilas's elfish blood contributing to her decline; the
contrast of sea-kissed Dol Amroth to the impervious Minas Tirith("The White
City is stone -- hard, cold, unyielding. It seems to have no scent of its
own.") are imaginatively and expressively written, with great affection for
each character and feature. The original character of the Governess is well
drawn, realistic, and very engaging - as far from a Mary-Sue as can be
imagined. Very well done!

Title: To the Sea <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1479> .
Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Genres: Adventure . ID: 770
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-01 16:44:33 Score: 5
This is a very nicely-told story. As original fiction it is a compelling
tale of love found, love lost, and the complications that arise from that.
And it has a nice symmetry, how Isengar eventually returned to the Sea.

My only complaint is that it almost doesn't feel like fanfic. I know, there
isn't much canon at this time, and you did incorporate some bits (such as
the unaging old man being Gandalf). However, for many of the canonical
characters there just wasn't much to connect them with the books except
their names. Besides that, though, this was a very enjoyable read.

Title: A Bitter
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3500> Gift . Author:
Avon
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 47
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-02 14:28:45 Score: 6
This piece has a simple majesty to it that is truly captivating. It is easy
to write humour or cute fluff involving Elrond and young Estel, but much
harder to write serious drama. Here you capture the heart of a child just on
the cusp of adolescence, when childish games will have to be put aside bit
by bit, and more adult matters will intrude onto the child's conscience. The
way you tie in bits form the Silm, both Elrond's history with his brother
and the Downfall of Numenor. Before I read this I imagined Elrond must have
had this conversation many times with his brother's heirs, but somehow this
seems fresh; Elrond has to really think about the answers. It seems there's
something truly unique about Estel -- but then we already knew that. ;-)

Title: Intertwined <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2290190/1/> . Author: Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 105
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-02 15:18:17 Score: 3
This was a fun story. As much as I liked the explanation of "elven magic"
(and a different kind than Galadriel's), I really loved how Sam compared
Legolas to the other Elves he had met in Rivendell. Having Sam describe it
really drove home the distinction between High Elves and Wood Elves.
Though... poor Sam, having to march all night with no sleep!

Title: The Other Day <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1373> .
Author: Space
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
5> Weavil . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 159
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-02 15:43:42 Score: 4
This piece had a light humour to it, not slapstick but just gentle mirth. I
have to admit I laughed at the comment about men fighting over roses (I'm
still smiling, thinking about that -- great line), and the way you showed
the years passing... I am truly impressed. But at the end the sadness was
joined by a quiet sorrow that gave it balance. In retrospect I can see the
sadness there all along.

Title: Sing of <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4231>
Eowyn . Author: elanor_of_aquitania
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=69
> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry . ID: 259
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . 2005-08-03 19:40:42 Score: 6
I liked so many features of this poem. First, it praises Eowyn, whom I view
as a heroine of the ages. I love works that show her in a positive light.
The structure of the poem follows the alliterative style closely enough to
seem authentically Rohirric, and the content sounds just like something a
court bard would sing. I enjoyed the device of presenting this as a
documented work of literature, as if the piece were taken from a textbook on
literature or history. I found my self curious about the life and times of
the poet. Last but not least, I loved the names. The author took some
trouble to find unique and appropriate names. Probably she knows Old English
very well. Good job!

Title: Sirion <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2551>
. Author: Wild
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
7> Iris . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry . ID: 607
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . 2005-08-03 19:54:43 Score: 3
Only very good poetry can be both ominous and poignant at once. I liked the
economy of words used to evoke powerful emotions. I would like to have read
more that tied in specifically with the canon of Tolkien, as this poem could
apply to any sea-battle. I can easily imagine this being part of a longer
lament. Is it? In any case, nice job.

Title: Prayer
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=184> .
Author: illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 887
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . 2005-08-04 09:35:33 Score: 1
A sweet if predictable comment on the power of prayer.

Title: A Long-expected
<http://www.freewebs.com/aure/alongexpectedvisitor.htm> Visitor . Author:
Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Genres: Horror . ID: 951
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 13:26:47 Score: 4
This story had some great build-up to the horror at the end. I like the fact
that Fatty's day starts out as a relatively normal day, and then it seems to
get worse even though nothing unusual really happens. It's just a sense that
things aren't right, which is a creepy feeling. I also liked the comparison
between a Nazgul's presence and the air in a graveyard. That made for some
very good imagery.

Title: In the <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2759>
Wild . Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Genres: Horror . ID: 304
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 13:29:40 Score: 4
Good story with good pacing. The action is quick and brutal, and the moments
in between are just long enough to drive up a fair amount of suspense. It
helped that Mallor's death caught me by surprise and made me a bit twitchy
for the rest of the story. I would have liked to see more from the Nazgul,
but given the circumstances, it's probably for the best that the dark night
became a dark and stormy night.

Title: Something Wicked
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4323> This Way Comes .
Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Horror . ID: 130
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 13:34:49 Score: 5
Deliciously creepy. What I love most about this story is that you're never
sure if it's real or if it's a trick of the mind, and that's unnerving
enough in its own right. The Mouth of Sauron (a dark figure any day) feels
like he could still work some mischie, but what makes him especially
frightening is that he's insane enough to be dangerous and sane enough to be
deadly. I loved the poem he keeps repeating, too. The idea of something
pretty being mixed with mud and torture and pain makes for a very nice
juxtaposition. Creepy, creepy, creepy.

Title: Namesake
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3793&SPOrdinal=1
> . Author: Ruby
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
2> Nye . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War . ID: 271
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-04 13:40:20 Score: 3
This is an endearing tale of the first meeting of Faramir Took and Faramir
son of Denethor. I think you did a very nice job of getting at Faramir's
softer side, what he would be like when he was completely free of stress.
Whatever pressures he might be carrying, he checked them at the door. You
did a fine job at getting at the heart of hobbit culture, too.

Title: Freak
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge09/7274.html#cutid1> Show .
Author: Nickey
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
4> . Genres: Horror . ID: 862
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 13:40:40 Score: 7
I'm not sure what I was expecting when I read this story, but it took me by
surprise and completely pulled me in. I think the juxtaposition is what
really grabbed my attention. Initially, the scene is portrayed as bright and
sunny. But the dark and grim italicized portions hint that something is
terribly wrong. Then the sunnier portions also become dark as the hobbits
enter the freak show, and eventually, both portions become darker still
until they meet up in the end and become one. It's like watching two very
different paths join at the final destination and discovering that the roads
are more similar than you'd like them to be. The fact that such a sunny road
could lead to such a dark place makes it that much more unnerving, and in
the end, I think even the reader is left wondering about past, present, and
future. Very well written!

Title: The Last
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4157> Fight . Author:
Nickey
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
4> . Genres: Horror . ID: 1006
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 13:50:34 Score: 8
Quite possibly the most chilling thing I've read recently. I love the way
that Merry's few lines about his experience at the Barrow-downs were used to
create an entire backstory for the wraith that took him. And that backstory
is dark. Very dark. In fact, it's so dark at the beginning that it almost
seems impossible to get darker, but it does and it does so quickly. The
sequence where things are both there and not there is filled with wonderful
imagery that really pulls a reader into the thick of things, but I think
what struck me hardest were the last few lines. The idea that Merry has just
become part of something much bigger and much darker than was ever realized
or appreciated during the course of the books is a terrifying notion. And
the idea that the last fight has become his is it's a brilliant tie to the
defeat of the witch-king and almost everything else Merry does. Somehow this
story manages to embrace all of LotR while never leaving the terrifying
grounds of the Barrow-downs.

Title: Time and Times
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=146> and Half a Time
. Author: Honesty
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
4> . Genres: Horror . ID: 1024
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 13:57:46 Score: 10
This story is gut-wrenching, terrifying, brutal, and absolutely brilliant. I
love it for all those reasons, but what I think I love most about it is just
how many levels of meaning the title has in relation to the story. There are
so many things that are unfinished in this story. Even the story itself is
has an unfinished feel to it, though it's certainly a complete tale. But at
the end, there are still questions without answers, and I love that because
it allows the reader's mind wander and dwell on all sorts of horrible
possibilities as well as hope for redemption of some kind for poor Legolas.
Another reason I love this story so much, though, is the fact that Gimli is
such a strong presence throughout it. The dwarf is only mentioned by name in
the first chapter, but he's definitely essential to what happens. Gimli gets
so little quality time these days, and he's in rare form here. He's what
makes the process unfinished, and he's also part of what makes the tale
unfinished. Which of course goes back to the title, which goes back to what
happens to Legolas, which goes back to what happens to Gimli, and so on.
Beyond all that, I loved the present tense moment-to-moment feel that this
story creates, and I loved the very visceral imagery. And finally, I loved
the final few paragraphs that carry enough resolution to close the story but
not quite enough to completely end it. Powerfully written.

Title: And Empty Holes
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2942> It Fills .
Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Genres: Horror . ID: 1183
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:08:29 Score: 6
Brilliant little piece that builds well on both what has happened and what
is happening. I like the idea that Merry is afraid of the dark, and I like
even more the idea that he used duty as a way of shielding himself. It feels
like the sort of thing that Merry would do. But now it's come full circle,
and the gleam of hope at the end of this little vignette is almost painful
to hear because of how dark the end has become. It reminds me of how light
can temporarily blind those just waking from a long sleep, and I wonder if
that's how it felt to Merry, even though he clung to Pippin's words. Great
imagery, and great build to the end.

Title: A Bitter
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3500> Gift . Author:
Avon
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 47
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:19:40 Score: 5
Deep questions for a nine-year-old to be pondering. I like the way these
questions came about, too, through the death of a horse. It was probably
something of a shock for Estel, and I love the fact that he immediately
begins thinking of his mother. Elrond's words to Estel are perfect both
characters. They're couched in a language that a boy can understand, but
there's more to them in case Estel wants to look further. I liked the
comparison with the trees, too. That's a good visual image for both Estel
and the readers.

Title: Last Hope
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2296> . Author:
AfterEver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
2> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 64
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:24:51 Score: 5
There really ought to be more Gilraen stories, particularly stories with
such great characterizations on all involved. Elrohir, in particular,
intrigued me. I enjoyed his patience with Aragorn, and I loved the little
things that were added to his personality, such as when he accompanied the
gift of an apple with a fantastic tale as to why that apple was enchanted. I
think it was all the little things like this that added together in order to
make the story feel so complete. Very satisfying tale.

Title: He
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1133> Stands
Not Alone . Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 147
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:26:45 Score: 4
I love that moment in Moria, when Legolas drags Gimli from Balin's tomb. And
I like how the title references another moment when Legolas stepped in when
Gimli looked as though he might need assistance. But perhaps I like best the
fact that in this story, Legolas acted without thought. It was just
something he did, and that says a lot about him. What says almost as much is
the fact that Gimli thanked him at the end. Good characterization.

Title: "They
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13142> are
courteous, if they break their silence." . Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID: 575
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:30:19 Score: 5
This was a wonderful little vignette. I loved the complete confusion on the
part of Elladan and Elrohir. I don't think Gimli realizes there's been a
miscommunication, but that just makes it all the more enjoyable. How many
dwarves have to be involved in a fight against orcs to count as a battle?
Priceless. I also loved the miscommunication over "dagor" and "dagger." A
lot might have been explained if Elladan had stuck with Westron, but then,
this story would have never happened. It would be interesting to see how
Legolas explains this. I don't suppose there's a follow-up?

Title: Night and Day <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/nightandday.htm> .
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 953
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:31:52 Score: 3
I love stories that show just how wise Gimli can be, and this is definitely
one of them. His realization that he and Eomer are not so different -
despite the fact that the difference is night and day - is rather profound.
Good expansion on a great scene from the books.


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Msg# 5123

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 37 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:37:15 Topic ID# 5123
Title: Mistress <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=635>
Gilraen · Author: AfterEver
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-25 01:06:22 Score: 5
Apologies, AE, I'm going to resort to an older review! I enjoyed this
story—there aren't many Gilraen writers out there, and the Elrond-Gilraen
relationship is left something of a cipher in the books (as is pretty much
everything Gilraen). It's good to see her as a young woman who makes
mistakes, but who is determined to do her duty at any cost. This isn't a
funny story per se, although it is comical in how badly Gilraen misread or
rather, wrongly assumed, what Elrond's intentions were. It ends on a bit of
a WAFF moment, but it's enjoyable WAFF, I think.

Title: Dance of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3312> Terrible Grace
· Author: Adina
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-25 01:06:59 Score: 6
I greatly appreciate the much emboldened and distinctly scary Legolas in
this fic. It certainly makes sense of later significant Legolas-Gimli
interaction in TTT, and the idea that Legolas first saw beauty in Gimli
during the skirmish in Moria works well here. I also simply love this line
for its in-your-face defiance of fanon:

"I love to kill.... Does it not fit your image of an elf, care-free and
ethereal, Fa-la-la-la-laley, welcome to the valley?"

The valley of the shadow of death, perhaps! Short but worth a few reads,
especially when one grows tired of frolicking, peace-loving Elves and wonder
where the Legolas went who counted coup with such glee at Helm's Deep.


Title: In the Deep
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4897> Places ·
Author: Lamiel
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8> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 751
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:33:22 Score: 10
Without a doubt, this is the finest and most detailed account of the journey
from hostile mistrust to the blossoming of friendship between Legolas and
Gimli that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Lamiel does justice to
both Gimli and Legolas as culturally and essentially different beings and
personalities, which, among other things, means not simply leaving them by
themselves or (the same thing) reducing the other Fellowship members to a
line or two of facile fortune-cookie style lines before they more or less
vanish from the story. This is a great Legolas-Gimli fic, in effect, because
the other Fellowship members with whom they interact and who form their
social context are well-portrayed and given a depth and individuality and
set of struggles all their own.

At the same time, the major focus is on Gimli's and Legolas' interactions
with each other. It's very easy to go overboard on their hostility; Lamiel
avoids that route. Argumentative explosions are rare enough and well-placed.
They are given time to build, and time and events that help diffuse them.
The road is rocky, but not so much so that one ends up wondering how the two
could ever repair the damage of any particular exchange. The more friendly
exchanges never move to the level of the two weeping together or anything of
that sort, but remain at an appropriate distance, using humor, irascability,
even giddy exhaustion to maneuver them together closely enough to get
something from the exchange but also to keep them distant enough for their
own comfort.

Beyond all that, style and substance suit each other; Lamiel pulls off a
blend of book and movies, without managing simply to repeat either. She
finds the open spaces in those two narratives, so that lines borrowed from
Tolkien feel fresh and lively once more; they don't just limp across the
page, pallid, worn-out echoes of themselves. There is absolutely nothing of
emotional or verbal preciosity here; no superfluous angst or anything of
that sort. There's drama, there's humor, there's grief, and there's action,
all of it very well handled, both taken in itself and together. I highly
recommend this fic not only to lovers of Gimli and Legolas and their
friendship, but to anyone who likes to see the Fellowship written well as an
ensemble. Beautifully done, Lamiel. This was a pleasure form beginning to
end.


Title: The Wisdom of
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Author: Finch
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:35:21 Score: 3
I particularly liked the shock that Finrod endured when he realized how
short Men's lives were. It's one of those facts one takes for granted, but
seeing Finrod experience it for the *very* first time lends a freshness to a
stock mortal/immortal confrontation.

Title: An Unexpected Gift
<http://www.freewebs.com/aure/anunexpectedgift.htm> · Author: Marta
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:36:36 Score: 1
Hm, for someone eager to see the back of the old wizard, Denethor doesn't
seem to be in a mood to hurry him along!

Title: Beyond the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4809> Borders ·
Author: Marta
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:37:04 Score: 2
Leave it to Elrond to find the right gift for newly curious hobbits and
their soon-to-be school masters! Also, it was nice to see the extent of
change in the North after the return of the king.

Title: The
<http://www.libraryofmoria.com/legolasgimli/theflowersandthesun.txt> Flower
and the Sun · Author: Ezra's
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:37:38 Score: 3
There's just enough tension in the banter to keep this story nicely out of
angst-land, despite the *cough* flowery metaphor games about the distance
between the earth and the sky, so to speak. I at least found it an enjoyable
tale of the first confessions of love.

Title: Dropping
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=223> Eaves ·
Author: Paranoidangel
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:38:07 Score: 2
Nice to see Frodo and Sam's early relationship, even if as a retelling. I'd
thought a little more might've been made of the encounter with Gandalf,
though.

Title: Heirlooms
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3594&cid=13632> · Author:
maranya14
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:38:39 Score: 2
A very rare interaction, made the more unusual since we don't have a lot of
stories that show Denethor as a young man. Thengel reminds us that the
Rohirrim have a much longer history than their current country.

Title: Dancing in the
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Author: Marnie
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:39:10 Score: 4
It's good to see the arts that don't result in an immediate product shown in
their proper light, as vehicles and expressions of great power and craft
that needn't stand ashamed before smithying or the like. The constant battle
of remembering that there's a fault in valuing purity too highly, that it
becomes narrow-minded and divisive, is well portrayed, as Celeborn comes to
recognize that he is not free of the very mindset he wishes to dispel.

Title: Childhood
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=23> Ends · Author: Marnie
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:39:42 Score: 6
This story, short as it is, exemplifies that transition from a mythic age to
a mundane one, and the pain and dislocation of that transformation that will
be felt for some time, as memories fade both too quickly and too slowly for
anyone's comfort. That Eldarion, in a sense, reiterates Arwen's choice to
surrender immortality, but on the scale of an entire people, is an apt
parallel, very well-played. A hard choice, to liberate oneself from the
self-imposed tutelage, but then Enlightenment was always a painful process.
Exquisitely written, as usual, with that something more that Marnie brings
to all her stories.

Title: One Breath
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4351> · Author: M.
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3> Sebasky · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 472
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:40:23 Score: 3
The answer to Aragorn/Arwen fans who feel their favorite Ranger spends far
too much time frolicking around the slash literature to satisfy! Erotic,
definitely, but not simply erotica. It is also elegantly written and has a
bit of a deeper point to it. I like that Arwen ends on the indrawn breath—in
anticipation of what awaits her, not dread.

Title: Toy Story
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3912> · Author:
Gwynnyd
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:41:08 Score: 5
This goes very nicely alongside "Not Without Hope"; I like the use to which
old toy soldiers were put in this story. It's always a bit strange to
remember that most people who lost a parent or a relative very young would
never see that person's likeness—blame it on the photographic revolution
that is so pervasive! In that sense, Aragorn is very lucky that Elrohir
chose to model toy Rangers on real people. He does have that visual link,
and an answer to very old questions and strange memories that help him to
more easily pull the different strands of his life together.

Title: All In a <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1380>
Hand · Author: Gaslight
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:41:42 Score: 4
This is an unusual interaction, and it could have been terribly angsty, but
Gaslight avoided that route in favor of preserving Éowyn's youth
determination and good spirits over her actual youth. It's good to see
Legolas be unsettled in this way. It's not a long moment, but it's clear he
needs his mortal friends' guidance when dealing with the phenomenon of
aging.

Title: Maturity
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11551> · Author:
Forodwaith
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:42:13 Score: 2
A rather sober comparison of the meaning and mark of maturity among two
peoples, and a bit beyond. Lordship goes beyond maturity into something
perhaps deeper.

Title: Mushroom <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3515>
Lore · Author: Werecat
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> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 365
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:42:43 Score: 4
A rather mouth-watering interlude which certainly makes sense in the context
of a long journey. Food, its preparation, and the social setting of meals is
so central a theme for any culture that it would be surprising if the
Fellowship never once talked about recipes or memories of helping to prepare
a meal. I felt a genuine moment of pity for Legolas, who doesn't get to have
mushrooms in Mirkwood since the only kind that grow there are poisonous.

Title: Grasping at
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3272> Moonbeams
Glistening · Author: Werecat
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-07-27 00:43:51 Score: 5
Ah, Werecat brings a welcome breath of fresh air to the Legomance, and I
think does do justice to the Bloom phenomenon (intensified to the nth degree
in the "real" Legolas). Nanwen's journey, from nightmare (death of husband,
death of patients) to fair dreams (Legolas) to reality (Beregorn) progresses
believably, and there's a great beauty in a woman who can look past a
missing leg, ravaged face and body that will never properly heal to think
she might well fall in love with the man. Proves she's wise enough to know
the difference in the end between elven glamour and something more
substantial.

Title: Defense <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2198>
Enough · Author: Nessime
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-07-29 19:10:43 Score: 5
This story has a quality I am always glad to find: loving engaging of canon
that doesn't seem to overwhelm the story. That is, Grimbold's and Elfhelm's
reasons for how best to defend the fords are an interesting extrapolation of
the material from Unfinished Tales, so this vignette expands on the books
that I love so much, the reason I read fanfic at all. But this piece also
doesn't read like an essay; the characters respect each other but disagree,
and Nessime paints an engaging picture of how that would affect the
political discussions. This was a good read.

Title: Victories
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge08/2119.html#cutid1> Won ·
Author: Garnet
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-07-30 00:04:12 Score: 3
This was a cute tale about Pippin's birth and new-death. (He does seem the
sort to be too excited to wait until the proper time to be born.) I
particularly liked how you recognised the PTB of the West would have placed
more than just Frodo at that juncture in history.

Title: Creatures
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge04/8907.html#cutid1> of Habit
· Author: pipkinsweetgrass
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-07-30 10:16:58 Score: 7
"They shall grow not old, as we that are left grow old:
Age shall not weary them, nor the years condemn.
At the going down of the sun and in the morning
We will remember them."

This piece reminded me of this quote from Laurence Binyon's poem "For the
Fallen". You seemed to capture that spirit of remembering others when we are
separated from them very well, which is all the more commendable that the
person we are remembering is not someone who has died, but merely someone
from whom we are separated temporarily. (The fact that it is later extended
from Faramir to Boromir at the end makes this piece all the more poignant.)

Beyond that you do a first-rate job of writing in an underwritten space:
bothy in the journey before Moria, and in a way that reognizes Pippin's
maturity. It's really touching, and you did a great job in this short piece
of staying in the moment.

Title: Kingly <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2310>
Gifts · Author: Dreamflower
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-07-30 20:23:23 Score: 5
This story reminds me of why I love gapfillers so much. It reminds me of the
first time I read Lord of the Rings (not that long ago!) when everything was
new. Gapfillers like this one hypothesise a series of events that connect
the dots where Tolkien left narrative space. There are lots of moments in
here that I liked, but I think I particularly liked Legolas's and Gimli's
gifts to the hobbits, and the scene between Faramir and Eowyn back in Minas
Tirith. This was av ery enjoyable read.

Title: Life in the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3325> Angle · Author:
Leaward
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2> · Genres: Romance: Incomplete · ID: 181
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-31 00:07:28 Score: 10
Delightfully delicious conflict following the Northern Ranger Tarkil and
Poppi. Tarkil returns home from the War of the Ring to ask Poppi to marry
him. Follow Poppi as she adjusts from being a simple country girl and a
barmaid, leaving Bree and moving with her new husband, who she barely knows,
to live in the hidden Dunadan village of Maple Leaf as a wife and new
mother. It quickly becomes painfully obvious that in addition to the normal
adjustments of married life. Poppi has a lot to deal with in regards to her
new neighbors, how awful to have to live across the street from your new
husbands ex-finance when he's out of town and she's up to no good. -
*really* no-good. Titheniel is deliciously malicious and exactly the kind of
villain we love to hate. Thank goodness that Tarkil’s Ranger buddies, not to
mention his brother Haldon, keep a close eye on Poppi. And what about those
twins! Talk about delicious! They are a little overly obsessive about the
babies, but who can blame them. What an introduction to Elven-kind for
Poppi, she’ll be right at home with them before she knows it.

In addition to all the conflict, Leaward shows her usual attention to
detail, both historical and canon that make her stories a delight to any
reader.

currently a work in progress - I can't wait to see the rest of it and find
out what else she's dealing with and how she handles it.




Title: Two of <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3132>
Thirty-One · Author: Leaward
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2> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 174
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Reviewer: sulriel
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· 2005-07-31 00:10:10 Score: 10
Leaward has a gift in telling the story that was not told, the one that
weaves between the lines of what JRR Tolkien wrote and it shows again in
this fan-fiction. The major events at Gondor and the Black Gates, during the
of the War of the Ring are central to this plot, but the very personal
perspective of her original characters flavor this tale to make it an
original. I can't stay away from my favorite two Rangers Tarkil and Haldon,
and I love how Leaward blends and contrasts the brothers and shows their
love even when they're fussing at each other.

Leaward follows Halbarad’s trials in gathering the Thirty-one men to lead
south. It seems like they would have made more of a difference staying in
the north, defending their own homes, but such men as Halbarad, Tarkil, his
brother Haldon and all the others would never shirk their duty to the
‘Captain’. And I'm glad they got to stand beside Elessar and see him
crowned. Leaward does an especially good job on this fan-fiction, as on all
of hers, in that it is keyed into her series and yet works well as a
completely stand-alone piece with a beginning, middle and end in its own
right, although I'm sure that anyone reading this one will want to pick up
the others as well. The plots are cleverly woven with each story have its
own plot and subplots yet still working into the overall arc of the series.


Title: Blossoms
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> · Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 287
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Reviewer: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · 2005-07-31 11:03:01 Score: 1
A tender, heartwarming drabble. I could just see Aragorn't surprised look!
Good work, Erin!

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3594&cid=13632> Protocol
of Princes · Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 26
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Reviewer: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · 2005-07-31 11:04:49 Score: 1
Lovely! An unexpected moment in their relationship.


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Msg# 5124

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 39 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:37:59 Topic ID# 5124
Title: Dance of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3312> Terrible Grace
. Author: Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID: 57
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:41:31 Score: 6
I love almost anything involving Legolas and Gimli, so of course I loved
this little vignette. But what I really liked about it was how quickly it
characterized Legolas in the beginning and how well it defended what could
be a slightly unorthodox characterization, at least according to fandom
opinions. It makes sense to my mind, especially given the fact that Legolas
and Gimli made a contest of their kills at Helm's Deep, so I appreciated it.
And using that characterization to form a bridge between elf and dwarf was
very nice. It fit the scene, and I can easily see Legolas prizing someone
who enjoyed the thrill of battle.

Title: Handmaiden of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3520> Lorien . Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 316
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:45:56 Score: 6
Marnie strikes again with her customary brilliance. What I love best about
her stories is how true they stay to the characters, and by that I mean more
than just the personalities. She keeps the story true to WHAT the characters
are, and in this case, that means it's true to a Maia. The result is some
amazing imagery and perhaps the most insightful reasononing I've ever seen
for why Melian left Doriath after Thingol's death. It all makes so much
sense now, especially with the quick history lesson at the begining and what
Melian knew before she bound herself to both flesh and Thingol. Great story,
and thanks go out to Marnie for taking us into the mind of a Maia in a way
that would produce both awe and understanding.

Title: Breaking the Rules
<http://www.geocities.com/sotto-voce/news0830.html> (Harry Potter Exhibition
Game) . Author: Bubbles
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
9> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID: 276
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 14:52:34 Score: 4
This is one of those stories that really shouldn't work, yet somehow, it
does. Hilariously so. I loved all the descriptions of the fights, and I
laughed very hard when Boromir and Sirius explained that they didn't fight
because they were dead. But I think I laughed hardest at the thought of
Frodo avoiding the snitch because of past trauma with small, golden objects.
That was brilliant. Great story, fast pace, and I want to see a rematch.

Title: Out of Stone <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/outofstone.html> .
Author: LadyAranel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 315
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:21:16 Score: 7
Wow. The friendship between Legolas and Gimli is one of my favorite subjects
so I read a lot of it, but rarely have I found it so powerfully portrayed.
Using Gloin as the point of view was an inspired stroke because it enabled
us to see just how unusual this friendship was. And also how much good it
did both elves and dwarves. And thank you for giving Gimli his due. His
words to his father struck me hard when he declared that if Legolas was not
welcome, neither was he. That was a beautiful line and it said so much about
the bond and the loyalty between the two, then in its early stages. I also
like the idea that the elves were just as unrelenting as the dwarves in
their first impressions, and I like even more the idea that many on both
sides of the divide were able to overcome their prejudices. And if Gloin can
do it, I suspect that Thranduil will be able to do it, too.

Title: Keeping the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3038> Watch . Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 333
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:23:48 Score: 6
Great little story. I love the way the Bounders sat back and watched for a
while before making any decisions. Hobbits can afford to take a little more
time, I suspect. And I like Falco's ability to guess at things he can't see,
such as what might have become of the enemy this man met. It's a good thing
that both hobbits realize what this man is, or they might have been faced
with a very awkward confrontation. As for the man himself, I wondered if he
would notice them, and if so, whether or not he would let on that he knew.
I'm glad he did, because it further cemented in their minds that he was a
friend, and now I want a follow-up story in which these two find another
Ranger. Maybe one they'll share lunch with.

Title: Deep Waters
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=763> . Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID: 344
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:26:48 Score: 6
Interesting. I liked Balan's analogy of weeds growing about the root of
trees, and I loved Finrod's insistence that they were not weeds but flowers.
That the analogy could be carried forward into very fitting representations
of elven death was an added bonus. The elves certainly have a skill for
words. But I also enjoyed the discussion of things "below the waist," as
observed by a child. And I like how the differences in culture seemed to
push Balan and Finrod further apart before they were drawn back together. I
imagine that the friendship between elves and men had many fits and starts
in the beginning.

Title: All In a <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1380>
Hand . Author: Gaslight
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
1> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 389
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:27:30 Score: 3
I loved the focus on the hands in this story. Legolas is contemplating some
rather weighty ideas about time and aging, and yet it is all boiled down
into Eowyn's hands. The big matters are sometimes best described by the
little things, and this story does that very well. I also loved Eowyn's
wisdom as she informs Legolas that he has also aged.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=12367> Hour of
Our Meeting . Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 378
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:28:16 Score: 4
So that's how Bilbo met Gildor. I love the moment of uncertainty when Bilbo
thinks he's scared the elves off only to discover Gildor standing right
behind him. I can see Gildor pulling something like that. And I like the
fact that both Bilbo and Frodo use an elven greeting to form a connection
with the elves. The two meetings are very similar in that regard, which then
draws all kinds of parallels between Bilbo and Frodo.

Title: Mushroom <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3515>
Lore . Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID: 365
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:29:27 Score: 3
Very cute story. Although I can't stand mushrooms myself, I enjoyed hearing
about the different ways others prepare them. I was almost hoping that
Boromir would continue his comment about where meat might come from in an
Orcish mushroom dinner, but Gandalf's right. Not while they're eating. He's
a wise wizard.

Title: Grasping at
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3272> Moonbeams
Glistening . Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 363
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:30:11 Score: 4
Poor Nanwen. She's reaching high if she's set her sights on Legolas. I love
how Legolas is described in this story, too. He's so very different from
men, and the imagery he inspires in others is fascinating. But I love how
Nanwen comes to realize just what a far-fetched dream she has and how she
finds something far more attainable in an old soldier she's cared for. Good
conclusion that satisfies.

Title: Binding <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2708>
. Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 353
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:30:53 Score: 3
There's a wonderful sense of both dignity and grace in this piece, which is
something that I think must be found in any piece that features Aragorn and
Arwen. And it's simple, too, which is also good. Simple, but with some
profound underpinnings. And to my mind, that's the best way to showcase a
relationship.

Title: Dancing in the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3025> Darkness .
Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 476
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:32:55 Score: 6
This story amazes me with its attention to detail. There's detail in the
dress, the hair, the dance, the song, the philosophy, and even what could be
taken as off-hand remarks or introspection. Celeborn's fear that he might be
lacking in the co-conspirator department is certainly put to rest by the end
of this story as he thoroughly educates his grandchildren on the traditions
of the Silvan elves. And what an education it is! I love how the two
cultures contrast so starkly at first. But by the end, they were coming
together to make something more, and even Celeborn seemed to realize that he
may have gone a little too far in his disapproval. Very intriguing story,
all around, and thank you for giving ALL elven cultures their due.

Title: Childhood
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=23> Ends . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring . ID: 474
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:33:50 Score: 4
Bold move for Eldarion. I think it's the right choice, in the end, but it's
definitely saddening. The elves really have come to an end in Middle-earth.
I doubt that Celeborn would see himself as king, but Eldarion is right.
Gondor will have to change and grow, and though Celeborn is probably better
prepared to handle that than most other elves, it's still a kingdom of men.
Great concept, and as usual, wonderful story telling. Marnie does it again.

Title: The Life of a
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2760> Bard . Author:
Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 464
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:35:39 Score: 6
Pippin might be the star of this little story, but I found myself more
interested in Frodo, and, in particular, Frodo's position in the Shire. He's
apparently trusted enough by the Thain to be able to take responsibility for
Pippin with naught much more than a letter. Granted that Paladin shows up
later, but even then, it's obvious that he respects Frodo. And Frodo
respects him in return, but he's not afraid to turn a rather condescending
look on him. (I love that Bilbo's "look" is even more effective when Frodo
uses it.) But back to Pippin, I liked his relationship with Menelcar, and I
liked the growh Pippin experiences because of that relationship. It leads
nicely into what he does on the Quest.

Title: Beyond the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4809> Borders .
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID: 578
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=40&form_story_filter=578>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:38:04 Score: 6
I really like this story's title and how well it relates to the overall
theme. Elrond's time on Middle-earth is nearly finished, and he's marveling
at how swiftly things move. He marvels even more when Halbeleg brings him
news from beyond his own borders, and I love the descriptions of everything
that's happening. I like best the idea that Halbarad's line is taking a
somewhat formal approach to the idea of stewards in the North, and I agree
with Elrond. Let it never be said that they are indolent. Good interlude
before Elrond sets sail, and nice examination of all the changes that are
taking place as the elves fade.

Title: Uncover
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=16> the Past, Discover the Future . Author: Starlight
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID: 524
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=40&form_story_filter=524>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:39:39 Score: 5
This is a brilliant little vignette about one of my favorite moments in
LotR: the formation of friendship between elf and dwarf. It's a very quiet
moment, too, which I think is appropriate, and I love how it's linked to the
discovery of two worlds. Gimli, with the book found in the Chamber of
Mazarbul, presents an interesting challenge for Legolas, who has now seen
something of the world of dwarves. And curious in turn, Gimli takes him up
on his offer to see something of the world of elves. It's made to feel very
natural in this story, and it's a step I can see both of them taking. Nice
work.

Title: A Matter of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=383> Time . Author:
Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 514
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=40&form_story_filter=514>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:40:50 Score: 3
I think my favorite thing about this story is the way Elrond acknowledges
Merry's search for information. And the way he uses that search as
justification for answering his questions about Pippin. That says quite a
lot about Merry, but also quite a lot about Elrond, who's been keeping tabs
on the way that everyone is preparing.

Title: Dropping
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=223> Eaves .
Author: Paranoidangel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
2> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 505
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=40&form_story_filter=505>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:42:19 Score: 4
So Sam meets Gandalf. I can easily see Gandalf scaring him initially, but I
can also see Sam overcoming his fear in favor of curiosity. That seems to
happen more often than not during the course of his journeys. Good early
characterization. I also liked the way he applied Bilbo's tales to every day
life, such as spiders in the garden or plans to visit the elves. He's a
gardener at heart, but there's more to Sam than just that and this story
shows that well.

Title: Stars and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2607> Sniffles .
Author: SlightlyTookish
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 817
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=40&form_story_filter=817>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:46:40 Score: 4
Gandalf was brilliant in this story. He was that impossible-to-nail-down,
badgering wizard who sends Bilbo off on an adventure while remembering to
bring some pocket handkerchiefs. I loved his conversation with Pippin, and I
love the idea that Pippin actually WANTS to be turned into a toad. That
strikes me as not unlike Pippin. Great moment between the two.

Title: The Wisdom of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=160> Friendship .
Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID: 734
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:49:24 Score: 4
Great story about that first meeting between Finrod and Balan. I like how
the perspective went back and forth between the two and how they both
learned so many things from the other. Balan seems to me to be very wise
indeed, despite his giving of that name to Finrod. I liked how he came to
terms with the idea of immortality and decided it was a good thing because
it meant he wasn't taking up Finrod's time. Certainly an ingenious way to
look at it.

Title: Toy Story
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3912> . Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID: 411
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:51:36 Score: 7
There was a single line in this story that really stood out to me: "A
brother by any name is always welcome." And that's essentially what happens.
Estel, now Aragorn, is welcomed by Elrohir, who has been holding on to the
toy soldier of Arathorn for many years. The conversation between the two is
brilliant, and there are so many levels to Aragorn. He's a young man in a
time of transition, and it shows. He goes from somber to laughing to tears
to uncertainty almost as quickly as an elf might, and it's clear that he's
dealing with a lot of unexpected issues. But he seems to be dealing well, as
laughter wins out in the end. I also love Elrohir's treatment of Aragorn's
questions. He makes the conversation light enough to avoid bogging them both
down, but he gives it the seriousness it deserves, too. Great little
interlude in the change from Estel to Aragorn.

Title: Leaves
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=419&NGID=1> and
Stones . Author: Starlight
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID: 522
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:52:29 Score: 7
This vignette was a fantastic blend of humor, wonder, and friendship. The
first part, particularly the fact that Legolas brought gold into Aglarond in
case he needed to be let out should he stray in, was hilarious. I loved the
idea that Gimli was a bit off in his reckoning but refused to tell Legolas,
instead saying that they weren't lost. They just hadn't been "enlightened."
Very dwarven thing to say. But when they finally found the chamber Gimli had
been looking for, the humor faded into beauty. The descriptions were
amazing, but even more telling were the reactions of elf and dwarf. And then
when Legolas found something to catch his attention, something that both he
and the dwarf could relate to, it brought a wonderful sense of completeness
to the story. Good writing, and good use of many moods and tones.

Title: The Mark of a... <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1315>
Warrior? . Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID: 133
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:53:58 Score: 7
*snort* Oh, this was priceless. Absolutely priceless. I was laughing so hard
the first time I read it that I had to stop a few times in order to breathe.
I think part of what makes this so funny is the way it dances around what is
happening. As readers, we all know what's going on, but the narrative never
comes right out and says it. And the characters do the same thing. No one
ever says anything about what's happening, but they all know it. I loved
watching them get up with various degrees of awareness, and I loved watching
that awareness grow as things begin to click. I gave a loud guffaw at the
reproving remark of "Pippin" and I laughed loudest of all at the very end
when Gandalf looks up and mutters "hobbits." But my favorite part was
probably the fact that the hobbits won, and they won without even trying
because it took them longest to realize there was a contest of sorts
happening. Oh dear. Pardon me while I wander off and guffaw some more.

Title: Ho, Ho! My
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2824> Lads . Author:
Dreamflower/Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=46
1> CoAuthors . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 1170
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:56:38 Score: 6
This was such a fun little story. Pippin's enthusiasm was brilliant, and I
loved the way he greeted the dwarves. Good thing they were patient. I think
my favorite part, though, was the fact that Frodo noticed there were little
eavesdroppers. He's a sharp one, and his subtle efforts at discovering them
were brilliant, even though he couldn't quite spot them the first time
around. It's a good thing that both Merry and Pippin became a lot better at
covering things up later on when they formed their conspiracy. And thank you
for providing a reason for the presence of Merry and Pippin up at Bag End.
That made the story fit so well into Tolkien's world.

Title: In <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3011>
Absentia . Author: Zimraphel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
9> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 1010
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 16:57:26 Score: 5
Fascinating characterization of Valandil. I hadn't ever quite imagined him
this way, but the story was very persuasive and I quickly became a believer.
Kudos to Elrond for reining him in from time to time and for always being
ready with wise advice. It was sorely needed. I really liked the moment when
Valandil broke down, wishing for just something of his father. The emotions
were conveyed very well, and Elrond's response to it was perfect. Great bit
of foreshadowing, too, when Elrond tells him that Narsil will be kept for
some future hope.



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Msg# 5125

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 40 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:38:21 Topic ID# 5125
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3043&cid=12100>
One of The Lads · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=980> 980
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 16:58:48 Score: 6
That was definitely a fun piece. Aragorn's musings are always an interesting
place to go, and I love the way he characterizes various members of the
Fellowship. The respectives roles of Frodo and Sam were very natural, but
the extrapolation of roles for Merry and Pippin was inspired. And it worked,
too. I love how these two little hobbits decided to treat the Fellowship as
one big extended family and how the other members of the Fellowship
responded to this by joining that family. It's a development I hadn't truly
considered myself, and this story lays out how blind I was for not thinking
of things in these terms. Great vignette and great character development for
everyone.

Title: <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=759&chapter=1> Pitfalls
of the Palantir · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=49
5> Haleth · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1296> 1296
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:00:10 Score: 4
What really made this story click were the little things. Like T'Ang, which
was apparently made for Earendil's nighttime voyages. I liked that. And
Inglor's many experiences with betting, or avoiding betting. Or the fact
that the dwarves used the palantir to watch the gold channel. Wonderful
little bits like that added up to make a very fun story. And I really liked
the epilogue, where the walrus discovered another "clam." Boy those palantir
are hard to hold onto.

Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge04/7340.html#cutid1>
The Protector · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
8> Holdur · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1223> 1223
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:00:46 Score: 5
This was such a sweet piece. I like the way that Pippin turns almost
immediately to Gandalf when looking for comfort, and the image of a little
hobbit child burrowing beneath Gandalf's beard is priceless. It gave me
quite a chuckle. The song Gandalf chose to sing was also priceless, though
in a different way, and the story turned from humor to comfort so quickly
and yet so smoothly that it felt magical. And given that one of our primary
characters is Gandalf, that strikes me as very appropriate. Thank you for a
wonderful little tale.

Title: <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1143> A Prince's
Question · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
6> Tathrin · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=113> 113
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:07:22 Score: 5
It was a good thing that I was in the privacy of my room when I first read
this story, because it prompted some rather loud guffaws. The first line
accompanied by Aragorn's reaction hit me hardest, and after that, it was
hard to stop laughing, especially when it seemed that Legolas found the
question as hilarious as everyone else. Poor Gimli. Eowyn's part was equally
fun, particularly the moment when Eldarion consoles her on having to kiss
Faramir and Eowyn thanks him for his concern. Absolutely priceless. Children
are brilliant.

Title:
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3840&SPOrdinal=1
> Death, I Call Thee · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> Werecat · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=292> 292
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:07:58 Score: 6
What I really like about this story is the way it's structured. Each little
segment molds to the same form, which immediately creates a feeling of
similarity between them all. And yet they are all so very different. The
form might be the same, but the motivations and the rationale cover almost
the entire spectrum. Alike, and yet not alike. It's makes for quite an
interesting read, and the contrasts and the similarities accentuate one
another perfectly. So many perspectives on the same battle. And that, of
course, is another like/unlike thing to add to the mix. Brilliant concept
and great writing.

Title: <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/513858/1/> Prelude · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
5> Mercat · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=109> 109
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:11:32 Score: 8
What I love most about this story is its simplicity. There is simplicity in
hobbit form and simplicity in elven form, and somehow they merge. Remind me
never to send Legolas off to look for someone, but if he were to come
looking for me, I'd certainly accept. I love how he doesn't offer to counsel
Frodo when he decides that the hobbit is troubled. It reminds me of Gildor's
reluctance to give advice back in the Shire, and I suspect Legolas would be
even more reluctant. But he definitely knows how to help, even if Frodo is a
bit confused by his actions. As for Frodo, I love the description of the
willow tree and I love how he feels drawn to it. The union with the water
sounds so peaceful and simple that I think it fits him very well. And when
Legolas and Frodo return, I very much enjoyed the reaction of the other
hobbits. Pippin was wonderful, and Sam was also in rare form, reproachful as
well as understanding. He does that a lot during the Quest, and it's good to
see the formation here in this little prelude. Beautiful writing and a
beautiful little vignette to start the Fellowship off.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4316> When
Last We Met · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
4> Nickey · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1005> 1005
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:19:33 Score: 7
Great story, and great expansion on canon! I love the idea that the dwarves
sent Gimli, a dwarf of many journeys already, to the Shire to warn Bilbo
that he was being hunted. And I love the idea that watchful Merry, who was
one of the few in the Shire to know anything about the Ring, turned him
away. Probably not the best way to start out a friendship, but it seems to
work out as Gimli and Merry realize why the other was so cautious. That they
both respect each other for loyalty and secrecy is a testament to their
understanding that larger things are work. But perhaps most of all, I love
Gimli's description and how Merry reacts to him. He's certainly intimidating
when he wants to be, and I can imagine what Merry must have thought when he
turned up with a supposed trading party looking for someone named Baggnis
who had a Ring. Great story, and great bridge-builder between hobbit and
dwarf.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2721> A Chance
Conversation · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
1> Songspinner · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=804> 804
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:22:53 Score: 7
Brilliant and inspired conversation! I don't think I've ever read a story
where Landroval was a featured character, and I love it. He reminds me quite
a bit of Gandalf, actually, but perhaps not quite as brisk or abrupt. Maybe
he's more like Elrond. In any case, he's clearly a very wise bird, and I
love what he says to Merry about Pippin and falcons. I also loved his humor
at the thought that he was but a tale to the hobbits, and I laughed when he
said that he hoped it was a good telling. It was a stroke of genius to have
one of the eagles stay behind in case more urgent care was needed, and it's
probably a good thing that Merry is only learning of this now rather than
learning of it when the danger was greater. As for Merry himself, he was
characterized very well, and I really admire his protectiveness of Frodo,
Pippin, and Sam. Kudos to Aragorn for getting him to leave even for a
moment.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3077> The
King's Commission · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> Larner · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=215> 215
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:31:03 Score: 7
Brilliant. This was a touching, in-depth, and loving story about a
fascinating original character as well as one of the most complete
characterizations I've ever seen of Frodo, who never even entered the story
until the very end. And he was certainly not the only person to be
characterized. Everyone Ruvenir met on his journeys was brilliant and
detailed, but it was really Ruvenir himself that took the cake. I love the
way he drew and the way he sculpted. The descriptions of his art and the way
he went about getting to know his subjects was fascinating. I was drawn in
to all the stories and all the memories. The intrigue was also a brilliant
addition, and I loved the politics that went on behind the scenes and how
Ruvenir found himself caught up in them. Excellent writing, wonderful
narrative, and a very fitting tribute to Frodo and others was created in the
end. Great story!

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4897> In the
Deep Places · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
8> Lamiel · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=751> 751
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 17:34:43 Score: 9
I love this story. It's a brilliant adaptation on the Fellowship's journey
through both Moria and Lothlorien, and it goes without saying that I love
anything with a good focus on Legolas and Gimli. And it's that focus that
really drives the story. There's a balance struck early on, and neither the
dwarf nor the elf are ever completely right or completely wrong in their
disagreements. And I love the way that their friendship progresses slowly,
sometimes stopping and reversing course before finding something else that
might speed it along. It's a very gradual process with many setbacks, and I
love the way it's drawn out with slow relish. The narrative and the
descriptive work is also a brilliant part of this story, and the
surroundings become as much of a character as the Fellowship itself. Beyond
that, Rumil and Orophin get points from me for this fantastic bit of
dialogue in reference to Elrond's choice of a dwarf in the Fellowship:

“I suppose Lord Elrond had his reasons,” said Rúmil thoughtfully.

“Lord Elrond did not have to travel with him,” said Orophin, and Legolas was
inclined to agree.

Amazing story all around and the perfect gap-filler for the development of a
friendship between Legolas and Gimli.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3520>
Handmaiden of Lorien · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> Marnie · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=316> 316
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> Marta · 2005-08-04 17:49:35 Score: 6
Marnie describes this as a "slightly different take on Melian", and I
whole-heartedly agree. Not that I have read a surplus of stories about
Melian (or Thingol, for that matter) but this one is definitely different
than any I have ever seen. So many people assume that Melian, by virtue of
being an Ainur, would be superior to Thingol and the other elves in every
way. But here Marnie recognises an important fact: Melian was not one of the
Valar, the creators and the rulers; instead, she was a handmaiden. She was
never meant to govern. I have to admit that I was stunned by the beauty with
which Marnie captures just why Melian loved Thingol, and her doubts after
Thingol's death. Wodnerfully, brilliantly done.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=11653>
Dragons and Shadows · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> Branwyn · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=285> 285
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:03:01 Score: 3
Fascinating concepts. I can easily see Denethor searching out and finding
the logical solution, but the Rohirrim explanation for an eclipse is so
imaginative and very much in keeping with their culture. Nice exploration of
differences through a simple eclipse.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=9411>
Kindred Spirits · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> Elana · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=299> 299
Reviewer:
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> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:03:42 Score: 2
If Frodo were to meet anyone in the Undying Lands who understood, it would
probably be Celebrian. And I love that in seeing her, he would begin to hope
again. That's comforting for both Frodo and readers.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11551>
Maturity · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> Forodwaith · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=381> 381
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:04:54 Score: 3
I think it very fitting that hobbits would mark a coming of age with a
celebration while the Rohirrim would instead mark a coming of age with a
significant event in life that proved maturity. Hobbits can set a definite
date by it, but the Rohirrim can't allow for that. It has to be a proven
thing instead of an arbitrary age. Interesting look into the two cultures.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13576>
Earth and Sky · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Elena Tiriel · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=201> 201
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:05:57 Score: 4
I love the way this drabble became a turning point in the animosity between
elf and dwarf. Legolas's thoughts about Gimli feeling loss as keenly as any
elf seemed to set the stage, and then the thoughts of black blood on blades
and red blood within were great. It's an even more fitting analogy with the
realization that they are both warriors and their trade is essentially
blood. Good introspection and good descriptive work.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13130>
Children of Aulë, Children of Men · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1301> 1301
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:08:22 Score: 3
I like this accounting of a meeting between two very different cultures, and
I like how the curiosity of youth is able to bridge the gap. The boy sitting
at the dwarves' fire and learning their tales was a warming sight, and I
enjoyed the wisdom of the father who realized that his son will probably
make their land his own.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13138> On
Watch in Moria · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1302> 1302
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:09:57 Score: 3
Something about this drabble makes it feel very lonely. The entire
Fellowship is covered, and Aragorn can find no company and is the only one
able to stay awake. The fact that Aragorn refuses to sleep when the wizard
does is sobering, especially knowing what is to come. Nice work in mood and
foreshadowing.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3594&cid=13632>
The Gift · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> maranya14 · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=480> 480
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:10:19 Score: 3
It seems that quite a few "gifts" are being given in this drabble. A gift
for Bilbo's cousin, the gift of praise for the young man, the gift of having
learned the craft from one who knows it well, and so on. I like the idea
that some in Dale would seek out the dwarves and ask to be taught their
craft. And I like the idea that some would actually succeed in it.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13141>
Two Views for a Stranger · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1303> 1303
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:11:55 Score: 4
I loved the contrasting drabbles here and how they were such opposites of
one another. The second was probably my favorite because of the way it
characterized Boromir as dogged. I also liked its confusion as the elves
tried to figure out what this strange Ranger was doing. If only Boromir had
called to them, but in his own drabble, he's losing hope and drawing into
himself. Fascinating take on his final approach to Rivendell.

Title: <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/nochoice.html> No Other Choice ·
Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> LadyAranel · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=456> 456
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:12:41 Score: 2
This idea intrigues me, that Thranduil and Gloin would try to draw the
attention of the Eye in order to spare their sons. I'm not sure how much of
their kingdom they'd be willing to sacrifice in this venture, but it's an
interesting concept.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3477> It's
Just a Phase: Thirty is Still Fairly Young · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=406> 406
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:12:54 Score: 2
Sage advice from Valandil: Run, then argue. Very cute little drabble, and I
love the argument from the twins, especially their horror upon realizing
that this is not just anybody but the King of Arnor. The quirky humor was
great.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13204>
And There Make a Garden · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> Tanaqui · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1388> 1388
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:14:30 Score: 4
This drabble made me smile. I love the part where Faramir wondered if
Legolas's prattle was a strange test. Actually, I could see Aragorn doing
something like that, more in jest than anything else. But the ending was
great as Legolas explains that these plans are not meant for the city but
for Ithilien. I can see the light dawning now in Faramir's eyes as the
previous conversation suddenly takes on new meaning. Great moment of
realization.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13195>
Legacies · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> Tanaqui · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1385> 1385
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:14:40 Score: 3
Touching! I love the idea that Boromir's lessons to Pippin would be revealed
to Faramir during his own sparring session with the hobbit. It's another
thing they can share in common now, and that's a comforting thought. Great
way of pairing these two up.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13236>
Sea lover · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> Tanaqui · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=1378> 1378
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:15:07 Score: 3
That's definitely an interesting point about Earendil's name, since he was
named long before he could ever see the Sea. I like Idril's pondering of
Tuor's foresight, and I like the description of them as they come toward
her. It seems that they've found a home in exile that they might love better
than Gondolin.

Title: <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/failedforesight.htm> Failed Foresight
· Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> Marta · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=41&form_story_filter=940> 940
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-04 18:16:21 Score: 4
Failed foresight was probably responsible for quite a few good things on the
Quest, and it's fortunate that Gandalf ultimately decided to trust
friendship in the case of Peregrin Took. Foresight couldn't possible see
everything that he accomplished, and this joint realization by both Gandalf
and Faramir makes Pippin's accomplishments seem that much bigger. Nicely
done.


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Msg# 5126

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 41 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:39:10 Topic ID# 5126
Title: An Unexpected Gift
<http://www.freewebs.com/aure/anunexpectedgift.htm> . Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 584
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=584>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 18:16:43 Score: 3
Hmmm. I'm still trying to figure out if Denethor was offering a gift in the
generous nature of gift-giving or simply trying to speed an old wizard on
his way as well as rid his stables of a horse about to go lame. I suppose
either way will work out in the end for Gandalf, and he's definitely wise to
not examine this gift horse too closely. A gift is a gift.

Title: Dirge
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=21> . Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 236
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=236>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 18:18:25 Score: 6
Fascinating idea, that Legolas would turn to Gimli and request a song after
declaring that elven melodies just didn't capture Gandalf. It reminded me of
Gimli's chant in Moria and also of Sam's reaction to it. According to Sam,
he could almost see the lights and the dwarves, and certainly it was unlike
any of the elven songs in Tolkien's works. Perhaps that's why Legolas asked.
Or perhaps because Gimli was someone who had also walked with Gandalf and
who had also seen his fall. This drabble has certainly made me think, and it
has turned me back to several different moments in the Fellowship, which is
probably one of the most powerful ways a drabble can make an impact:
pointing to something bigger. Wonderful allusions.

Title: There
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13575> and Back
Again . Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 202
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=202>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 18:22:19 Score: 5
The tale becomes sad when it's reduced to "there" and no longer has a "back
again." I loved the quiet recounting of the way Frodo looked up to Balin and
remembered his stories, and this drabble hit a wonderfully mournful tone
when Gandalf closed the book on Balin's last story with the words "I fear
their end was cruel." Very powerful drabble with such a light touch that it
almost feels as though all the events prior to Moria were nothing more than
a dream. And at that point, they might as well have been, because they're
only memories now. Great mood work.

Title: Brothers-in-arms
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13243> . Author:
Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 1349
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=1349>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 18:27:58 Score: 5
Now this was a powerful tribute to Folcred and Fastred. I loved the poetic
feel of the narrative, and I really enjoyed the imagery of a single pebble
changing the course of a stream. And while the stream can't flow uphill, it
can still be altered. That's a great thought, and it's very fitting that the
Rohirrim would prove to be that pebble. The final line is perhaps my
favorite, though. The thought of singing in two tongues but one heart is a
great way of expressing the union between Gondor and Rohan and the way that
they need each other.

Title: Cruel
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13203> Caradhras
. Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 1365
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=1365>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 18:28:44 Score: 5
Excellent drabble, and wonderful mood. It felt very much like a moment of
realization for Legolas, even though the tone seems to say that this
realization has happened over the course of many years. But this drabble
concentrates it all into a single moment. And the mood is concentrated, too.
I loved the last line, and I loved the imagery of empty spaces where voices
should be. Definitely sobering. Poor Legolas. It's not wise for the elves to
find too many things to love in mortals, or they find themselves with empty
spaces. Great work here.

Title: To keep you <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2035964/5/> from harm .
Author: Cuthalion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 912
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=912>
Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . 2005-08-04 18:33:53 Score: 3
This is an effective look at the emotional relations among Faramir, Boromir,
and Denethor. I particularly liked it that Boromir came right out and said
that Denethor did not love Faramir. Most accounts dance around the idea that
maybe there just isn't any love there. A sad statement but a strong one. I
liked the honesty of Boromir in this story.

Title: Heirlooms
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3594&cid=13632> . Author:
maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 481
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=481>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 18:35:54 Score: 3
I enjoyed this glimpse of Denethor as a young man, and I like his excitement
over the possibility that Thengel's horn was taken from a dragon's hoard.
That made me smile. His unabashed pride in Gondor shines through, but he's
still young with much to learn and I like his interest in . I suspect his
curiosity will serve him well as a Steward.

Title: Brown <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4241>
Spirit . Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry . ID: 367
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=367>
Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . 2005-08-04 18:42:53 Score: 5
So nice to see a portrait of Radagast the Brown as a strong character. The
poem itself is a spare and effective comment on the revealed wisdom of the
wizard's choices and, in a larger sense, I guess, on the choices of everyone
who cherishes the creatures of the world. Also, the poem is brief but still
solidly grounded in Tolkien's world, thus avoiding a common mistake made by
many poets in the fandom. I mean, many very good poems are written, but they
could be about any battle or true love or friendship. Brown Spirit could
only be about Radagast. Very nice job.

Title: Cover
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=203&STID=3752&
SPOrdinal=1> Him with Violets . Author: Regina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
4> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring . ID: 347
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=347>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-04 19:15:35 Score: 1
Interesting story. You did a good job of integrating the story, and also of
fleshing out Ioreth's backstory.

Title: White Gull From The
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1136> Sea . Author: Sivan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=42
0> Shemesh . Genres: Mystery . ID: 925
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=925>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 19:41:49 Score: 2
Interesting, that the sea would choose to hunt an elf. Intriguing idea. I
like it and would not mind seeing it explored further.

Title: Runes in the leaves
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1536> . Author: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> . Genres: Mystery . ID: 768
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=768>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 19:42:15 Score: 2
Fun story. I like the way Pippin is characterized. He's practical and he's
learned some caution. Definitely a Post-War version. He makes a good Thain
here.

Title: In Umbar, at
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2307> the docks .
Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Mystery . ID: 117
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=117>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 19:42:33 Score: 2
An intriguing idea. I like the imagery in this story and the descriptions of
the Crazy Cat Lady and her odd ways. The last sentence was just cryptic and
mysterious enough to make me pause when I read it. Good conclusion.

Title: Truth <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=476> .
Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Genres: Mystery . ID: 898
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=898>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 19:46:39 Score: 6
I love the way Lindelea writes hobbits, and this particular story is no
exception. The mystery doesn't fully enter the story until about halfway
through, but the elements leading to it are scattered throughout the first
chapters. But they're scattered in such a way that they're hard to pick up
unless you know what you're looking for. Pippin as Thain and Sam as Mayor
were very well portrayed, and I love the way they handled what eventually
became a rift between friendship and duty. Excellently written, and I very
much enjoyed the trick Pippin used to find out the truth in the end. It's
been done before, but it felt very natural here.

Title: Echoes <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1660> .
Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> . Genres: Mystery . ID: 969
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=969>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 19:48:21 Score: 5
Fascinating story that seems to wind around like echoes and then return to
where it began. Only the second time around, things are different. I doubt
that made any sense, but it's the feeling I got. What I really loved about
this story, though, was Merry's characterization. There's a wonderfully dry
sense of humor to him, and though things became dark, he never seemed to
lose this humor. It blended nicely with a hobbity sense of pragmatism,
easily making Merry my favorite character, with Estella making a close
second.

Title: Chasing a Song <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=183> .
Author: Dragon
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
0> . Genres: Mystery . ID: 924
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=924>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 19:51:29 Score: 5
This entire story felt like a song to me. The word choice seemed very
lyrical, and the cresting waves reminded me of rising and falling melodies.
Add to this the fact that I love anything having to do with Maglor, and
perhaps that might explain why I enjoyed this story so much. I also liked
how Elrohir's mystery visitor was seen and yet unseen and how no one truly
believes he saw anything in the end. In the end, it was almost like a
child's fantasy, except that we as readers were also there and we know the
truth.

Title: Legacy
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=9468> . Author:
Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 300
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=42&form_story_filter=300>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 20:00:11 Score: 5
I really liked this little vignette. Dis gets so little recognition in the
fandom, but it cannot be denied that Fili and Kili, the youngest on the
journey, were some of Thorin's greatest assets. I love the way Dis describes
what it felt like to have her home taken from her, and I like the way she
describes it to the mountains and to the rocks. It feels very dwarven, and I
can definitely see the need for a permanent home being ingrained in all
dwarven women. The idea of vengeance was also very strong, and I liked the
part about teaching Fili and Kili to hunger for more than just gold.

Title: Of Durin and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3408> Kibil-nala .
Author: Mantida
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
4> . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 473
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 20:01:54 Score: 5
Ah, so the secret is out at last. I have to admit that I laughed when I
first read this story. It's a brilliant and original take on the parentage
of Cirdan, who is among the more enigmatic figures of the Silmarillion, but
it surprised me with its boldness. I'm not entirely sure about the concept,
but the way it's described feels very Tolkien. The language is such that it
could fit right into the Silmarillion. And it does explain a lot about both
Cirdan and the Long-beards. Nicely done.

Title: In Darkness <http://www.wellinghall.net/fanfic/indark.html> .
Author: Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 678
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 20:03:24 Score: 6
I love the territory covered with this glimpse into Balin's mind. It's
definitely a wandering mind, though given the circumstances, I think we can
forgive him for that. My favorite part were his musings on just how absurd
Bilbo's waistcoats were. That made me laugh, but the tone sobered quickly,
and I was definitely not laughing in the end when Balin thinks about
admitting his failure and then closes on "I tried. I tried..." That was
powerful. The imagery in the beginning, too, when he thinks about reaching
to touch hot metal on an anvil was great and gave me a very vivid picture of
just how Balin perceives his actions.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=97&STID=2223&S
POrdinal=8> Hall of Standards . Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 373
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 20:04:07 Score: 6
This was brilliantly written, and it says so much about dwarven culture and
dwarven thought. I loved Oin's line of "What we have, we hold." It
summarizes the entire thing. Dwarves never give up a home, even though they
may be driven from it and forced into exile for years and even centuries.
And I love the idea that dwarven banners are the poles themselves, carved
and guilded. It reminds me of the pillars in the halls and how they serve as
a visible foundation and a symbol of power. I also really liked the almost
bittersweet way this story ends with Balin thinking about his own standard
and how we as readers know that it's not destined to last long.

Title: Stock
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1178&PHPSESSID
=945c846a955e8a2aa2c67b78a0d7c525> and Stone . Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 608
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 20:05:35 Score: 6
I would really like to meet Thris someday. She was such a wonderful
character to watch, and Borin was equally fun. Their complete bewilderment
over one another's customs was great, and I love how understanding seemed to
be reached only to be blown away but yet another inexplicable custom. But in
the end, it felt as though they were both wiser for the attempt, and I hope
that Thris does go back someday. She and Borin have a lot to learn from each
other. Excellent work on two OCs. It's difficult to make characters like
these come to life, but not only did we see hints of their personality but
we also hints of some fascinating customs among both the men of Dale and the
dwarves of the Lonely Mountain.

Title: Bargaining for
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=283> Beginners .
Author: Honesty
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
4> . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 412
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 20:11:41 Score: 7
This is probably one of the best realizations of Celebrimbor and Narvi that
I have ever read. Both are full, complete characters, and they change so
much over the course of the story as they come to learn about the customs
and culture of the other. They feel natural. Celebrimbor's confusion with
dwarven bargaining and with Khazad-dum in general made a great stepping
stone for Narvi to begin teaching him a fascinating aspect of dwarven
culture. And the favor was more than returned when Narvi went to visit the
elves. I love the fact that he got back at his uncle by explaining the
mathematics of accoustics to the elves, and I loved how after all the
differences, he began to find a host of similarities. And the references to
forbidden subjects (from dwarven women to the kinslaying) were also great,
prompting good reactions from both Celebrimbor and from Narvi.

Title: Spirit
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=2321&SPOrdinal=1
> of a Sword . Author: Erin's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
6> Daughter . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 724
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 20:13:20 Score: 7
Go Telchar. I really enjoyed this look into his mind, and I think it very
appropriate that one of the greatest dwarven craftsmen would look on the
creation of one of his greatest works as the creation of a child. Or even a
lover, depending upon which metaphor he's using. This read almost like a
poem, and the theme of creation was very powerful. But it wasn't creation
solely on Telchar's part, and I love the idea that the sword has already
chosen a form and it is Telchar's role to find that form and bring its shape
to light. Brilliant imagery all throughout, but I think the imagery was most
powerful when Narsil was done and Telchar held it up and discovered the name
it had chosen. And there again, it's the sword that's doing the choosing.
Kind of like a runaway muse in writing, but much more powerful and profound
here. Great job on the narrative, and thank you so much for paying such
wonderful tribute to this dwarf!

Title: Black <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2496>
Diamond . Author: thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> . Races/Places: Dwarves . ID: 563
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-04 20:17:37 Score: 7
I loved the almost meandering tone of this vignette. Gimli is clearly dazed
and exhausted, and his mind takes some interesting turns as it searches for
Pippin. His need to do this on his own was not something I completely
understood, but I definitely sympathized. And in relation to this, kudos are
awarded to the "transient' elf, who was indeed quite transient for the
entire piece, popping up now and then to give aid before disappearing once
more. Very elven. And while I agree that Gimli could definitely heave aside
a troll carcass, it was indeed more dramatic to give him some help. I love
the way he characterizes everyone in his head, from Pippin and Legolas to
the green youth that helps him. And the descriptions he gives of the
battlefield, particularly that of golden hair, were striking. Brilliant
narrative work, and very moving story about Gimli's struggle to find Pippin.

Title: Back to the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4384> Valley .
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Races/Places: Elves . ID: 590
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Reviewer: elfqueen2003
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
1> . 2005-08-04 23:01:56 Score: 1
very touching story. It's not clear if he get's back there for real or only
in his mind

Title: Beauty
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13129> in the
Light . Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble . ID: 1300
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-05 02:41:37 Score: 2
Loved the imagery. My favorite phrase was the water bringing forth "strength
and form," though I also liked the lights scattered about the dome. There is
indeed beauty here, and I like the metaphor of fallow ore. Nicely done.



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Msg# 5127

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 42 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:39:47 Topic ID# 5127
Title: Drums
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9417> in the Deep
. Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble . ID: 355
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-05 02:44:31 Score: 4
There's something very matter-of-fact about this drabble. It's as though
they've all accepted fate and are prepared for it. Even the drums are just
background noise, and Bor's cool assessment of the strength of the door was
done so calmly that it almost hurt. And the fact that Ori finds it within
himself to write at a time like this...I always did wonder how that played
out, and the dwarves' resignation to death was powerful. Great drabble.

Title: Durin's Folk <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/lotrdrabbled.htm> .
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble . ID: 1369
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-05 02:45:16 Score: 4
I really liked this drabble for the way it shows how Durin's folk struggled
over the years, sometimes against impossible odds, and never backed down.
Nor were they ever truly conquered, and though their role in the War of the
Ring was more or less relegated to the sidelines, the part they played in
the history leading to that role and in guarding the eastern front was
vital. Nice recounting of history.

Title: Diaspora
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=19> . Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble . ID: 235
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-05 02:46:26 Score: 4
There was something very strong and very dwarven about this drabble. Yes,
they'd been driven out, and yes, they were now Exiles, but I never got the
sense that this was the end. I love the word "unbowed" because of the way it
defines the dwarves. I also liked the idea that the ends of the earth were
their destiny but Khazad-dum was their heart. I can see that in Gimli and in
nearly all the dwarves in The Hobbit.

Title: From
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13205> the
Eastern Force . Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble . ID: 539
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . 2005-08-05 02:47:19 Score: 6
You know, I think it's actually more powerful to write the dwarves from an
outsider's perspective rather than from someone on the inside. This way, we
see all of what makes them so unique and so powerful as a race. I love the
contrasts spoken of in the first paragraph. They're grim-faced but good
comrades, and short-reaches still deal heavy blows. I also liked the idea
that the dwarves were as enduring as the mountains, but in spite of all
this, they still felt grief as heavily as did any of the other races. Their
mourning in the midst of joy at Glaurung's flight was hard, and I love the
way they're described as they carry Azaghal away, particularly the murmur of
low voices. Great drabble.

Title: Saying <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=159>
Farewell . Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion . ID: 730
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Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade . 2005-08-05 06:43:13 Score: 4
One of my very favourite authors has done it again with what I believe is
her favourite character!

This story aches with sadness, and the Doom of the Noldor. How I wish Amarie
has accompanied Finrod to ME, who knows what they may have accomplished
together! I wonder how much the ache to go back to Valinor, to be near his
lady was part of Finrod's decision to die killing the werewolf, and thus
saving Beren?

Title: Dancing in the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3025> Darkness .
Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 476
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-05 18:03:28 Score: 10
This is a piece that it is hard for me to describe what exactly I like about
it. I would simply say "Go read it", but that wouldn't give it nearly the
points it deserves in this competition. I think the first thing I noticed
about it was that I honestly couldn't tell where Tolkien's canon began and
where Marnie's inventions began. Granted, I am no expert of canon beyond the
corpus of "The Lord of the Rings" and "The Hobbit", but I knew Tolkien
didn't wrote every detail she has Celeborn describe about Nandorin history.
Yet it's there, and it just feels so completely real.

The second thing I noticed was Elrohir and Elladan. Lots of authors write
elflings or children of every species, but it's hard to write them as
anything but cute and cudly. Here they have a stereak in them that, while
not entirely evil or even dangerous, is certainly not reduceable to cuddly!
What's more, you've taken the little tidbits we know about them
(extrapolating form the meanings of their names, for example).

And then there's Celebrian. I have never thought much about what made the
daughter of Celeborn marry the foster-child of Maedhros and Maglor. I always
assumed it was head-over-heals, star-crossed-lovers type romance. But I
really like the idea here that Celebrian seems to have inherited a lot of
Galadriel's personality. Which is a good idea. :-) Their interaction was
priceless, especially how they related to the crown.

The physical descriptions were rich, the story-telling balanced dark history
in an age-appropriate mode with Celeborn's own recollections of the true
horror and what he can't tell the boys. The interactions were
well-developed, and the canon is used simply brilliantly. But then, what
less can I expect from Marnie?

Title: It's Just a
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3477> Phase: Thirty is
Still Fairly Young . Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID: 406
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-05 22:00:02 Score: 4
This is an interesting ficlet. You did a good job of breathing life into
that tidbit for Laws and Customs of the Eldar -- I can see future heirs of
Isildur passing this story down from generation to generation, it becoming a
folk legend of sorts, and children being fostered in Imladris using it as a
defence. "Sure I did that, Elrohir, but just remember what you did to
great-great uncle Valandil!" Well done.

Title: Racing with the Devil <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/Racing.html>
. Author: Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire . ID: 707
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Reviewer: Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> . 2005-08-05 23:15:25 Score: 7
This story is so achingly sad and beautiful, yet at the end so full of hope
and glorious defiance! Like all of Aratlithiel's stories, the language is
gorgeous and the emotions so real and intense as to be almost overwhelming.
The story is wonderfully structured, like the race itself-building slowly
and quietly to the exhilarating climax, tracing an arc from despair to
triumph.

At the story's end I felt-and enjoyed feeling-that Frodo had found a way not
only to outrun the daemon, but somehow to outfox the stars as well. For
their cold and merciless truth had angered me nearly as much as the daemon
had. But it was comforting to think of Frodo's spirit somehow merging with
the spirit of the Shire. "This part of him will ride laughing beneath the
stars for evermore. And this bit of home he will take with him."


Title: At the Sammath Naur <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/ATSN.html> .
Author: Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 126
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Reviewer: Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> . 2005-08-05 23:17:44 Score: 10
"At the Sammath Naur" provides a riveting response to one of Tolkien's great
unanswered questions: What were Frodo's thoughts and feelings when he
claimed the Ring? From its grim opening lines-"He walked to his death. Sweet
relief. He expected nothing more."-to its devastating conclusion, the story
thrusts the reader into the heart of darkness, to experience with Frodo the
horror of the Ring as he hangs "upon the razor's edge."

This is classic gapfiller, and it's a testament to Aratithiel's talent that
the expansion of the scene never seems forced or gratuitous, but completely
logical within the context of the story. In LOTR, we witness the events at
the Cracks of Doom in swiftly passing "real time"-from Sam's POV. But as
seen and experienced by Frodo, trapped in the nightmare world of the Ring,
time in this story seems not to matter, or even exist. Thus he can stand
locked in the Ring's deadly embrace for what seems an agonizing eternity, or
can put It on and simultaneously know and experience "everything"-all in the
fleeting span of an instant.

With deft economy and indelible imagery, "At the Sammath Naur" operates on
both a philosophical level-touching on the nature of good and evil,
sacrifice and betrayal-and a visceral one, capturing Frodo's tortured
struggle in fiery, poetic language. It's not for the faint of heart, but
it's a terrific read.


Title: Bronwe <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/BaH.html> Athan Harthad .
Author: Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War . ID: 128
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Reviewer: Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> . 2005-08-05 23:19:12 Score: 8
When I first read this story in 2003, it was quite a revelation to me. An
angry, articulate Frodo who rails against his fate, against Gandalf, against
Eru Himself, was something I had not encountered before in the LOTR fandom:
"'You'll forgive me Gandalf,' he said, dropping his hands, 'if I'm not in a
charitable mood toward this deity you're so enamored with.'"

Thanks to Aratlithiel's skill and insight this characterization seems not
only plausible, but completely appropriate, deeply satisfying, and
thoroughly in keeping with canon. In short, it feels "right." Tolkien's
portrait of Frodo is subtle and complex, yet in its restraint one feels that
much was left unspoken. This story represents "gapfiller" at its best.for
surely Frodo must have had his moments of rebellion and rage. To be sure,
there is much more than anger to this heart-breaking glimpse of Frodo's
state of mind immediately following the Quest-his self-loathing, feelings of
failure, emotional emptiness-but none of this is uncommon in "Frodo-angst"
fics. In this story, it's the anger that stays with me.


Title: Magnetic
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2056> Force . Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Genres: Crossovers . ID: 1097
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Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade . 2005-08-06 04:02:50 Score: 4
I don't want to visit elves if that's what it does to you!

Um yeah, the story works. It does make a weird, odd kind of sense, as you
state Tolkien insists he translated from a book, and I believe he was
haunted by dreams of ME all his life. Especially Numenor. Who is to say if
he didn't recieve guidance in his writing from a place like Imladris, and
elven or fairy realm of old? Liked it a lot.

Title: The <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/lotrdrabbled.htm> Great Years .
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 1372
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 08:20:55 Score: 1
I liked this bird's eye view of the War of the Ring. Nice build up to the
final two lines.

Title: Bringing
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13215> the Sun .
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 1382
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 08:21:25 Score: 1
Nice mini-gap-fill that makes a little more of Legolas' part on Caradhras.

Title: Envinyatar
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=177&STID=3367&
SPOrdinal=7> . Author: Starlight
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company . ID: 520
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=43&form_story_filter=520>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:44:10 Score: 1
A succinct discussion of what it means to be a Ranger in end times, as it
were.

Title: Reunion at <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=91>
Isengard . Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 515
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:44:40 Score: 3
I particularly liked the first chapter. That sort of manic, riccochet wild
humor and turbulence that greets the realization of a desire one had never
hoped to see accomplished in life. A lot of relief in that scene, and it was
executed perfectly.

Title: Just in <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3082>
Case . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 477
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:45:23 Score: 8
A distinctly different Celeborn, here, lured by the Ring, testing himself,
and able to pull back at the brink. Fortunately. Marnie's Celeborn once more
shows his colors, and a depth of wisdom that understands that much that is
good is done in silence and without recognition, inverse image of the deeds
of evil, which are also often accomplished under cover of secrecy. One can
feel the strength of his love for his land and his people, and his grief at
their passing, but Celeborn is perhaps the one Elf in the Third Age other
than Legolas and Elrond (and eventually Galadriel) who, I think, grasps the
necessity of death. Things have their time, and his and his people's is over
and must be accepted "because it is." He does what is needed to guarantee
the safety of the Ringbearer, and so prevent a more grievous fall for any
who would do him harm, and does not exempt himself or Galadriel from his own
precautions, showing that he knows one must mistrust one's own hands when
dealing with the Ring. Well written and insightful as always, those who love
Celeborn will especially want to read this.

Title: Before
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=8009> the Call to
Muster . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 461
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:46:00 Score: 3
Once again, a good demonstration of how words and feeling often don't match
among hobbits. Speech remains light and courteous, when there's turmoil
underneath. At the same time, it's not just a mechanical substitution of
euphemistic speech: there's gravity and a genuine affection in them, too.

Title: Second
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13140> Watch .
Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 410
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:47:34 Score: 4
A nice little moment, and an unusual point in common for Pippin and Boromir:
their fathers' refusal to hold them back, and which they both now regret in
their own ways. Boromir's uneasiness is particularly well done-understated,
yet present and disturbing, similar enough to Pippin's to avoid rousing
suspicion, but essentially different thanks to what we know will happen
later.

Title: Going
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13135> to Rohan .
Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 401
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:48:11 Score: 3
Mrs. Peele, we're needed! Great use of humor, here, as the poor young Ranger
tries everything he can think of to catch Roheryn. It seems elven horses
have much in common with your average housecat, i.e., a mind of his own and
a will to ignore anything not considered important.

Title: Fellowship
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13132> . Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 396
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=43&form_story_filter=396>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:49:57 Score: 4
Brevity and insight, a lovely combination. One does wonder why Legolas was
chosen at times, and here is one possible reason, having more to do with who
has what skills than with who might happen to be going in a particular
direction. It also covers three likely candidates and explains why they
might *not* be appropriate, when one often wonders why they weren't chosen
to represent the Elves.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11957> Test .
Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 385
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=43&form_story_filter=385>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:50:32 Score: 2
Our Arwen advocate is in fine form with this drabble. It's not a gap I
would've found, but seeing Arwen's temptation-the welling up of pride and
reminder of the power that runs in her veins-is very nicely done.

Title: Halbarad <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2203>
. Author: Fileg
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company . ID: 341
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:51:20 Score: 6
"Why should I fear the dead? I was one of them, just a little warmer. though
not much, and not for long." This insight guides the whole fic. Halbarad is
dying throughout the journey, and he knows it, and as he slowly makes the
shift from one world to the other, he sees through different eyes. Alone of
those on the Paths of the Dead, he feels his strength waxing as they
approach Erech, as he stands before the army of the Dead. The last line,
that he goes to Minas Tirith somewhere between life and death puts him in a
very precarious position: one look, and Schroedinger's cat might always
already have been dead. Very nicely done!

Title: Weeping Iron
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1351> Tears . Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company . ID: 338
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=43&form_story_filter=338>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:51:54 Score: 3
I like the calm of this aftermath scene, and the way that Aragorn returns to
memories of Halbarad, refusing to mourn too much lest he belittle the peace
that Halbarad's death has bought. And I liked the evocation at the end of
Halbarad's presence, still at hand, almost palpable to Aragorn.

Title: The Riders
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2236> from Erech .
Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company . ID: 325
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=43&form_story_filter=325>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:52:35 Score: 4
Acacea picked a good place to write, and put flesh on the skeletal form of
Lord Angbor. It's good to see the Grey Company and their wraith army through
different eyes, and see just how difficult it is to stand against the Dead.
Angbor is a captain's captain, here, and his reward is at hand: not only
will he and his men survive the onslaught of the Corsairs, he becomes the
first man in Gondor to witness the return of the king.

Title: Boys
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> to Men .
Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 286
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-06 09:53:19 Score: 3
I love the first line of this the best, the acknowledgment that maturity
doesn't come in a physical form but in the will and responsibility a child
shows when it matters most. It's a good thing Beregond is perceptive enough
to see it and honor it in his own son.


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Msg# 5128

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 43 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:40:15 Topic ID# 5128
Title: Mae
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1123&PHPSESSID
=81bbdff5479eba252b785634d85ebade> Govannen · Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 148
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 09:55:40 Score: 1
Nice use of the eponymous phrase as bookends to the events of the drabble.

Title: Olorin I Was,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2844> Olorin I Am ·
Author: Arquen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
3> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 137
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 09:56:08 Score: 1
I liked best the realization that Gandalf alone of his kind has tasted the
Gift of Men.

Title: At the <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/ATSN.html> Sammath Naur ·
Author: Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 126
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 09:56:53 Score: 7
Very surreal. A good portrayal of the ambivalent relationship of the
Ringbearer and the Ring, love and hate entwined. I particularly liked the
paradox of Frodo blinded by his claim upon the Ring, yet seeing and being
everything at once—in exchange for his own identity, he's claimed by the
being of everything else and crushed under it, even as I would imagine the
Dark Lord is, who put his essence into things and so left himself vulnerable
to the destruction of one of them. The revelation of Gandalf's and Elrond's
thoughts and knowledge, and Frodo's bitter protest that he would've done
their bidding even with their knowledge is well-played, the transmutation of
compassion into a lie in his eyes the final stripping away Frodo endures,
until Gollum arrives. Interesting also the suggestion that Frodo was in the
end responsible for the destruction of the Ring, if not by his own hand, at
least by his immediately present intention.

Title: Foolish Hobbit <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1930540/1/> · Author:
Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 120
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=44&form_story_filter=120>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 09:57:32 Score: 3
Ah, an excellent gap to be filled! One does miss this scene, once one finds
it. Surely Frodo would have had some objection to the idea of dragging Sam
with him on a dangerous journey. And one imagines that if he had this talk
prior to the one at Crickhollow, it'd make it easier for him to accept the
others' pledges for what they are: inevitable and irrevocable.

Title: The Captain's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3210> Last Charge ·
Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 09:58:17 Score: 4
Thank you for making something more of the movieverse charge than our
esteemed director made of it. It was good to see Faramir acting in a
captain's stead, trying to deal with the bad hand he's been dealt and
actually spare as many of his men as he is able, rather than simply drag all
of them with him to their deaths. One sleepwalks through this fic, which is
as it should be given the context.

Title: To Water the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3585> Dust · Author:
Eruanna
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
7> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 77
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 09:59:17 Score: 1
Nice twist, making the water the one-time effect of Ulmo (perhaps). No
coincidences indeed.



Title: One Who <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2526>
Ran · Author: thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1197
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:30:40 Score: 5
Deep waters here, and certainly the lowest of all places to fall to: total
despair. Pity is a difficult theme to write about, yet it is a cornerstone
of LOTR. The difficulty lies in its effects, in what it implies about the
positions of those who pity with respect to those who are pity, and then
there are the wild cards of temperament and the corruptive proximity to an
evil that makes it its business to know how to worm its way into a person's
heart and break him or her. The nameless rider of this story is another
Denethor in this respect, though he takes his self-loathing out on himself
alone.

Title: In the <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=80&cid=409>
Keeping of the King · Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1107
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:32:12 Score: 5
As promised, the hobbity resilience and light-heartedness come through,
preventing what might've been a real angstfest. The shock factor of simply
being alive is certainly something Frodo and Sam would have to deal with,
and it was handled very well. Not overly weepy, not overly terrified nor
dislocated, but disoriented, disbelieving and with the tears coming only
when they needed to. The dialogue was well done, all the way through, with
Gandalf and the younger hobbits feeling especially in character.

Title: Cheery Letters
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1951> From Bree ·
Author: Lulleny
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
2> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1094
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:32:51 Score: 4
An interesting little interlude in Bree. The hobbit interactions are nicely
done; they know each other, are comfortable with each other. Merry and
Aragorn both feel a bit distant as they come to know a little more about
each other, and Lulleny does well to portray the awkwardness of having to
suddenly share close quarters with strangers, who aren't able to be party to
the little in-jokes the hobbits' talk reveals.

Title: Currents <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3666>
· Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1008
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=44&form_story_filter=1008>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:33:40 Score: 6
A good introspective piece, allowing Frodo a chance to reflect on the
hazards of having companions one cares about on a long journey. Thundera
puts Frodo's need to decide his own course into a context of a continually
renewed choice to sacrifice his own roots—first, to give up the peace of the
Shire, and this time, the harder choice to sacrifice the bonds of
companionship. Of course, little does he realize the Ring is likely driving
him at this point, and people will do as they freely will. He can't control
everything—although he grasps the lesson the currents of Anduin teach on one
level, he hasn't yet recognized that the very fatality of events and the
lack of control one has over them is also a blessing where friends enter
into the picture.

Title: Good
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/5080.html#cutid1>
Memories, Like Good Stories · Author: Jeodo
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
1> Brandybuck · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 906
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=44&form_story_filter=906>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:34:26 Score: 1
Nice interweaving of Bilbo's tale of the trolls with the anxious journey
between Weathertop and Rivendell.

Title: Something
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3065&cid=13460> to Do
before the End · Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 753
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=44&form_story_filter=753>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:35:56 Score: 4
I very much liked seeing a story that keeps Boromir in the fight, even after
his death. It took a moment to realize who he was—Lindelea makes good use of
the device of keeping the character nameless, save for the job he does for a
time, which makes the revelation of his name the sweeter. Boromir remains
one of the Fellowship, and the Captain-General of Gondor, faithful to death
and beyond in the pursuit of those duties. A fitting non-end for him.

Title: Devil of Kindness <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1682>
· Author: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 685
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=44&form_story_filter=685>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:36:32 Score: 2
A nice, brief elaboration of Gandalf's sense of fault for not having
suspected Saruman earlier. I particularly liked that he who had studied the
darkness was thrown off the track by Saruman's light. It adds a layer of
bitter irony.

Title: For the Common
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4035> Man · Author:
Anoriath
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
4> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 661
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:38:01 Score: 3
Oh, the irony! I love it! Here we have the high chivalric tone of Tolkien
clashing against the practicality of the hoi polloi rest of us, with
hilarious results. Save for the rooster, that is. Sublimely ridiculous, in
just the right, black humorous way.

Title: Master
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1089> of the
House · Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 639
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:38:30 Score: 2
Sam shows his native stubborn determination and courage in pursuit of his
duties, and Elrond demonstrates again why he's one of the Wise.

Title: Long Leagues for Little
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=744> Legs · Author: Fadagaski
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
4> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 628
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:39:18 Score: 6
A very honest scene between Sam and Boromir, and for once not over possible
Ringlust. The difference in experience and ability between hobbits and Men
comes in for some frank, unself-conscious (at least on Sam's part)
discussion in this vignette, and it's nice to see that tackled head on
between them, rather than the hobbits being talked about by Boromir,
Aragorn, or Gandalf, or the hobbits' own self-observations kept within their
own little group. Sam's only apparently artless way of bringing that
conversation about is nicely handled, and it shows up his own courage in
humility: he's not afraid of the truth, and isn't afraid to say it out loud,
which I think Boromir would admire and respect. Well done!

Title: The Comfort of Good
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1624> Friends · Author:
SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 626
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:40:04 Score: 4
It's good to see Pippin show himself to be cannier and more resolved than
others give him credit for. It's even better when he throws that in said
others' faces, as he does in this fic, even being the first to recognize
what Fatty has let himself in for in choosing to remain behind in the Shire.
The hobbits' voices are very well-captured throughout, I think, and the
flashback sits well in its bookend scenes.

Title: Making <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1786>
Verses · Author: Zimraphel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
9> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 611
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:40:40 Score: 3
Ah, yes, cheeky Elves, who share a certain skepticism when it comes to
really long Tolkien verses. Amusing, snarky commentary, all while remaining
in canon. I particularly liked the bit where Lindir notices who *isn't*
hanging about to listen to this particular poetic effort, which leaves him
with Bilbo and the wicked Saelbeth for company. Nicely done!

Title: Forgotten
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2009> Casualty ·
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 591
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:41:10 Score: 3
I like to say I've never met a character I couldn't kill, fanfictionally.
Thundera saw the tragedy potential in this one, which comes naturally with
the slaying of small, fuzzy creatures. I salute her for finding the
fox-shaped gap in the story and exploiting it.

Title: No <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13239>
Rival · Author: Tanaqui
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> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 544
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-06 23:41:41 Score: 3
Tanaqui gives us a direct look at the "triangle" of Éowyn-Aragorn-Arwen,
through the eyes of both women, and it's interesting to note that neither of
them are quite right where either they themselves or Aragorn are concerned,
perhaps. But they are dead on with respect to their own relationship, it
seems.

Title: High <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1804>
Places · Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 1086
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Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade · 2005-08-07 07:13:10 Score: 4
A lot of people don't stop to think that as Idril's son, Maeglin may have
been fond of Earendil, and Earendil of the smith. I happen to believe
Maeglin's betrayal of Gondolin was as much because he wanted to save Idril
and Earendil as to be King and have Idril as his wife. Actually, I don't
think Maeglin thought Morgoth would keep his promises at all.

What I'm trying to say is: love the story. It's a different and fresh
perspective on a scene done to death and it deserves an award.

Title: Cup
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=197&STID=3874&
SPOrdinal=1> of Bitterness: First Meeting · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 531
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-07 13:06:48 Score: 10
Like any true Dunedain-fancier I've read my share of stories set during
Boromir's and Faramir's childhood. These can be quite well-done but "Cup of
Bitterness" is probably the best such story I have ever read. As I've said
in other reviews, I really like stories that build on canon, but with the
brothers 'mir often the only canonical events from this period are very
sketchy or very depressing. This story gets very depressing in places, of
course, but it never truly descends into outright angst.

That isn't what I like best about this story, though. For me, the thing that
absolutely makes it work is Denethor. Tanaqui is spot on throughout this
piece; she walks a tightrope and does it admirably. Denethor is neither
abusive nor distant nor a push-over. In the hands of any other author
(myself included) he could be made into any of these things. But Tanaqui
makes sense of Denethor's actions through his thoughts -- and those thoughts
seem very Denethor-esque.

those thoughts lead me to another thing I like so much about this piece,
which is the pacing. Denethor is probably one of the most contemplative
characters in Tolkien's corpus (certainly among the mortals), and it's easy
to let that contemplating overwhelm the piece. But in "Cup of Bitterness"
Tanaqui artfully weaves Denethor's inner thoughts in with rich physical
descriptions and other people's actions (and his own, for that matter). She
uses things like his search for the right key to show his frustration, the
constant threat of slipping on mettare berries to show his respect for (and
to a certain degree disdain for) tradition, and his choice to look at the
palantir instead of accompanying Adrahil to his personal chambers to show
his priority and scholarly fascination.

And when there is the reflection of the brand in the palantir (or so he
thought)... simply perfect way to end the piece.

Title: Ithilien,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11967> Part II ·
Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 380
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-07 13:20:57 Score: 3
This is an interesting drabble. I especially liked the connection you drew
between Ithilien and Hollin (which I thought was a very apt comparison), and
the way you had Faramir reconcile himself to have Elven neighbors. I'm sure
it would seem seem odd to him, but he is wise enough to see the wisdom in
having them around.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13214> King's
Summons · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 1392
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-07 13:28:20 Score: 7
This ficlet did a good job of combining humour with drama. First Beregond's
unease in Ithilien and his inability to traipse through the wilds without
making a sound; I'm sure that Faramir's Ithilien rangers would have teased
him to no end like this. Then Legolas's moment of worry when he is afraid
that something is wrong with Aragorn and possibly also with Arwen. How awful
it would be if Arwen died in child birth or something like that, after
waiting so long for her to safely deliver! But then Beregond clarifies, and
the humour shines through. I know I laughed aloud at Legolas's "un-elven
whoop". This seemed to be perfect thoughts for Beregond (but at the same
time not at all out-of-character for Legolas to behave that way), and the
line itself was great. This was a great moment, just as I would imagine it.

Title: Long
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1712&cid=7135> Live the
King · Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 420
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-07 14:28:51 Score: 3
This is a beautiful drabble. I specifically like the different things that
the people of Numenor thought the visitor was. A powerful elf-lord, the
herald of Gil-Galad. Because he is of course both of those things, but at
this moment he is most of all a grieving brother. That is enough.


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Msg# 5129

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 44 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:40:45 Topic ID# 5129
Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1637> A
Desperate Race · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> Budgielover · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID:
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=675> 675
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> Marta · 2005-08-07 20:02:49 Score: 2
This is a really interesting piece. I especially liked what you did with the
relationship between Aragorn and Glorfindel.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4400> A Short
Rest · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> Jay of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=428> 428
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 01:52:05 Score: 2
Fun look at a very young Aragorn. I like the way that Tolkien's description
of Bilbo's home comes out as he's describing it to Estel. And Estel's
curiosity is something I can easily envision. Nice character work.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=890> The Tide
of Times · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> daw the minstrel · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=681> 681
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 01:52:46 Score: 4
Fascinating insight into the world of Mirkwood. I was most interested in the
White Council, and I wish we could have seen a bit more from Cirdan, who
seems to suspect something about Saruman that escapes the rest of them. But
I also loved the bits with Legolas, Ithilden, and Eilian. The culture of the
elves was fleshed out well, and the coming of age ceremony was very
interesting. Great eye for the details, and great pacing throughout to make
a very fun and adventurous story.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2523>
Travellers' Tales · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> Alawa · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=75> 75
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 01:53:51 Score: 5
I love Bilbo. He's such an interesting character. There are depths, but he
keeps them hidden and you have to probe to find them. I think this story
does a good job of balancing those depths with an older version of the
hobbit, and I love the way he thinks about his travels and also about how
his thoughts keep drifting toward the Ring. Aragorn's appearance was a
welcome addition, and I like the sense of adventure that Bilbo associates
with him. I could easily see that. Good introspection and great
charaterization all around.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1550> The
Sting · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> tyellas · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=600> 600
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 01:57:06 Score: 5
I don't think I've ever read a story in which Maeglin forges Sting, but I
love the idea. His hate and his anger give the story passion from the very
beginning, and I enjoyed the glimpse into Maeglin's mind. I also enjoyed
seeing why he hated people, and I loved the cameo mentions of various
heroes. But I really like how Maeglin channeled his anger into the creation
of a sword that would have served him well on the road to Gondolin. It puts
a new spin on Sting's tale. Why is it that Bilbo always ends up with the
objects that might not have been forged with the best of intentions?

Title:
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=5> Desiring Peace · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
6> Enros · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=279> 279
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 01:58:43 Score: 4
I think I would enjoy more stories about Gollum's origins. This is among the
few I've found, and I love the way it presents Gollum's family, his
grandmother, the society in which he lives, everything! We usually only see
him after he turns into a wretched creature. This vignette was a good
reminder of just how close to hobbits Gollum is, and what might have
happened to others had they kept the Ring for too long. Great backstory.

Title:
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4473&NGID=203> High
Flight · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> Jay of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=419> 419
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 01:58:56 Score: 5
I think the Tolkien fandom should focus more on the eagles. They're
fascinating creatures, and so many things can be done with them. Like in
this story, when they're jostling for position and the young ones push
others off the perches. It's little details like that which really bring the
eagles to life and impress upon the reader just how different they are. But
then the story begins, and the differences fade as we are introduced to a
very noble and a very brave race. Great vignette, and great bridge between
the Battle of Five Armies and the fight before the Morannon.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=274> The
Dragon Gem · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Celandine Brandybuck · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID:
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=184> 184
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 01:59:28 Score: 3
I like the idea that children might dare each other to swim down and try to
get one of Smaug's gems. That strikes me as a very likely activity provided
no supervising adults are around to stop it. Kudos to Dissa for making it
down there and retrieving something, if not precisely a gem.

Title: <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1330750/1/> The Party Next Door ·
Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> Acacea · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=1255> 1255
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 02:00:00 Score: 3
Oh, that poor neighbor. It must have been quite a sight, though, to find a
troop of dwarves plus Gandalf all wandering into Bilbo's house. I love the
way our unknown narrator characterizes everyone, particularly Gandalf who is
not a stranger but is certainly strange. That was a great phrase. Wonderful
outside perspective on a very unexpected party.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2217> Last of
the Summer Wine · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
4> Regina · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=1104> 1104
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 02:00:36 Score: 4
I think I liked its predecessor more, but this is certainly a worthy follow
up. I like the differing views on death, and Legolas's reassurance and how
this gives the old widow peace as he leaves. The idea that he and she have
become friends is a wonderful thought, and it feels very fitting, especially
the way Legolas clings to his mortal friends after the end of RotK. Nice
conclusion to their story.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=769>
Sheathing Sting · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Celandine Brandybuck · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=203> 203
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 02:07:12 Score: 6
I think what made this story so good were the little details. Details like
the confused people in the market, the fact that Dain insisted on giving
Bilbo another bag of gold, the whole idea behind Sting's new sheath, etc.
They filled the story out and made it far more enriching. Of course, the
primary characters were excellent, too. Bilbo was wonderful - every inch a
hobbit but also a hobbit who's grown into somebody more. And Balan was a
great example of a craftsman, almost immediately losing himself in the work
once Bilbo shows him the sword. Great story all around, and a great tribute
to Sting and to everything that happened in The Hobbit.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2055> Tangled
Web · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> daw the minstrel · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=151> 151
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 02:11:48 Score: 8
A tangled web indeed! The sheer scope and depth that Daw brought to the
world of the Wood-Elves was mind-boggling. Working against the backdrop of
events within The Hobbit, Daw managed to bring to life a connected story
that was just as complicated and involved as Bilbo's adventure, if not more
so. So many things are explained, such as the dwarves' sudden blindness, the
reason the Wood-Elves were out celebrating, their involvement in Dol Guldur,
their anger toward both the dwarves and the spiders, etc. I don't think
anything was missed, and the amount of detail that this adds to canon makes
for a very enriching read. I think my favorite part was actually the journey
south that ousted Sauron from Dol Guldur. Glorfindel was an excellent
character with a wonderfully wry sense of humor that blended well with
Eilien and Ithilden. But I very much enjoyed the fact that Legolas seemed to
think Bilbo was the child of Dori and Nori, too. Great story all around, and
it fits easily into canon as presented in The Hobbit.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3151> The
Unexpected Homecoming · Author:
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3> JMac · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=792> 792
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 02:16:46 Score: 8
Brilliant! This was such a wonderful story. The characters were bright and
vivid, and both the dialogue and the actions were so true to the books that
I have trouble believing this isn't hidden somewhere at the end of The
Hobbit. Perhaps it's part of some missing appendices or something. Gandalf
was every bit the wizard, impossible to nail down and at times infuriating,
but warm and caring all the same. Bilbo was certainly a changed creature
from the hobbit we met at the start of his adventures, and I loved to watch
how these changes affected his interactions with the other hobbits. It
wasn't as obvious in the books, but seeing him in contrast to everyone else
in the Shire reveals just how different he is. I loved the way he burgled
the Sackville-Bagginses. They certainly deserved it, and I absolutely loved
the way he took his arm chair home, with almost nobody saying a word to his
face but obviously talking about it with everyone else. Great little
gapfiller for the ending of a wonderful story. Thank you.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2193> The
Finest of Vintages · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
4> Regina · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=1103> 1103
Reviewer:
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> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 02:21:15 Score: 6
At last, Legolas puts all of that charm of his to good use. I very much
enjoyed this story, and I like the way the old widow and Legolas played off
one another. They were perfect foils, and the way they both took it up a
notch toward the end made me laugh. Concede here, give there, and all works
out in the end, especially with a genial smile on the part of Mirkwood's
prince. The "studied casualness" with which Legolas reveals his parentage
was especially good. I wonder if Legolas uses his charm on all the
merchants, but I would hope he'd save it for instances such as this. He was
far more successful than Galion in acquiring the wine, at any rate.
Brilliant little vignette.

Title:
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1781&NGID=81> The
Thrush Who Saved Laketown · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52
> jen_loves_elves · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=432> 432
Reviewer:
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> Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-08 02:25:35 Score: 7
Absolutely brilliant story! I loved the narrative voice. It was just like a
crotchety old grandfather sitting around telling stories of the good ol'
days, except that this was a thrush. I loved his opinion on dwarves, men,
elves, and the "little round thing" that he never really understood. The way
he claims to have known Gwaihir and his complete obsession with snails was
fantastic. And I love his comparison of dwarves to magpies, except that
magpies seem to be smarter. He was so very full of himself! Of course, those
wandering about stuck on the earth are pretty full of themselves, too, so I
suppose he can be excused. The conclusion was perhaps my favorite part, as
it nicely tied off what had gradually become a running snail gag. Wonderful
voice for the character, and great interpretation of Smaug's fall.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=817> Bread of
the Mírdain · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> tyellas · Races/Places: Elves · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=595> 595
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jillian baade · 2005-08-08 04:03:06 Score: 4
Interesting, the descriptions of the food eaten at the meal; I suppose we'd
call it lunch. Like Celeborn, I too have chewed tree sap, mostly pepercorn
or a variety of ecalypt. It is quite addictive! I imagine elves used both
maple and birch sap.

Annatar as always gives me shivers, and I wonder what the relationship of
adult Celebrian to Celebrimbor may have been, had he not died?

Title: <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/IPS.html> In Plain Sight · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=885> 885
Reviewer:
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7> Cuthalion · 2005-08-08 04:18:07 Score: 10
This story was first published in Aratlithiel's LiveJournal, and it came in
eight episodes, day by day - which enabled me to enjoy each installment,
sitting in front of my computer and literally howling with laughter. The
author describes a day during Frodo's stay in Minas Tirith. The Ringbearer
still has to recover, and instead of serving him the food he desires, he has
to stay in bed and endure a diet that makes him rather sour and acid-minded.
On this particular day he finally decides that enough is enough and with the
help of his fellow hobbits he escapes out of the window.

"“Where could he have gone?” Frodo heard Pippin ask.

“How the blue blazes should I know?” Merry cried angrily. “Frodo, I can’t
hold this pose much longer, or you’re going to pull us both out the window.”

“Well, pull me back up, then!”

“What part of ‘I can’t move or I’ll lose my grip’ did you not understand?”

Oh, this was getting worse by the second. He again stretched his legs down,
toes seeking any firm surface to light upon. He was edging on panic now and
worse, so were his cousins above him. Where on earth could Sam be and why
in all the bloody--

“Hello, there, Frodo.”

That voice was familiar. And it wasn’t Sam."

And so the story of Frodo's hilarious escape goes on and on, and again -
like in "Of Dwarvish Ale and Battle Scars" Faramir proves to be very
helpful. Frodo gets the meal he wants and visits an inn - his encounter with
a barmaid sent me on the floor - and even Gandalf is content at last. It's a
brilliant, clever and funny tale. and I simply adore it

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=175> To Give
Love Its Due · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> Finch · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=733> 733
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jillian baade · 2005-08-08 04:39:37 Score: 4
Poor Finrod, thinking Amarie had married again, or taken a lover. Awkward
Finrod when he confronted the son he'd never met and wanted to get to know.

Of course, the happy ending is exactly what one of the great heroes of the
First Age should have expected.

And only Finrod would have felt so much compassion for the last of his
half-cousins as they fell to the wiles of the tainted Silmarils.


Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4130> In the
Forest, Singing Sorrowless · Author:
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4> Nrink · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=318> 318
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-08 10:30:25 Score: 3
I found this to be quite enjoyable, a very vivid portrait of Denethor's and
Finduilas' courtship. The descriptions of Dol Amroth's architecture leant a
slightly and pleasantly surreal sense to the story. I particularly
appreciated the touch of humor at the end, between Denethor and Imrahil.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7890> A
Father’s Choice · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> Elana · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=298> 298
Reviewer:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-08 10:30:55 Score: 1
A nice peek at Beregond's thoughts and why he might've allowed Bergil to
remain in Minas Tirith with him.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1836> On the
Flood · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> Acacea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=284> 284
Reviewer:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-08 10:31:19 Score: 2
I loved the last lines, that sit in contrast to the idea that the sea never
surrenders her secrets. Here, Anduin is more faithful, returning what it can
of Boromir to his people.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3820>
Finduilas' Song · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> Ellisande · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=265> 265
Reviewer:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-08 10:31:53 Score: 3
Poignant, and although the author claims Finduilas will fail to keep her
promise, I am not so certain. After all, Finduilas only promises to try for
her love, and one may strive for short or long, and the failure to achieve
the end does not negate the effort.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2797> East
Wind · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> Ellisande · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=264> 264
Reviewer:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-08 10:32:30 Score: 3
A beautiful addition to the verses sung in Boromir's honor, and that nicely
capture and turn to an advantage the refusal to ask the East Wind for
tidings. It moves this from a lament to a song of resistance and defiance—a
true memorial for the Boromir who will live in memory, not be merely a part
of the dead past.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11571>
The Steward and the Brother · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> Cheryl · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=224> 224
Reviewer:
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-08 10:32:58 Score: 3
The substituted oath makes for an excellent scene, a transformation that
affects all three men involved, Aragorn, Boromir, and Faramir. It breaks
this AU free of what might've been an encombering reliance on what's given,
and makes this scene and the original scenes of stewardly oath-taking, feel
fresh again.

Title:
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3783&SPOrdinal=1
> Forlorn Hope · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
1> Elen Kortirion · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=45&form_story_filter=210> 210
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-08 10:33:30 Score: 3
"We focussed not on moving lips,
Lest our own take on a quiver,
Unbecoming Gondor’s metal."

An excellent play on words, here, mettle/metal, and each appropriate. The
transformation of Faramir and his men into the objects of their craft,
blades and metal without souls or hopes, was well done.



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Msg# 5130

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 46 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:42:32 Topic ID# 5130
Title: Dragon
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13131> of the
North · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 395
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:55:09 Score: 1
Hm, it seems jealousy and strife were early connected to Thorongil in
Denethor's eyes.

Title: The Seeing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2137> Stone · Author:
Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID: 346
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:56:12 Score: 1
Interesting perspective, and the repeating lines do hold the reader steady
as history flows all around.

Title: Offerings
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3044&cid=11813> · Author:
Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 322
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:56:42 Score: 2
Not sure what to think of the transposition of Gandalf's line, but I liked
Faramir's "offering"—reconnecting what had been severed to a new and
brighter future.

Title: That Tall
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1372> Fellow Next to
Galadriel: a Short Essay About Celeborn · Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 479
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-08 18:25:01 Score: 7
In her last note Marnie points us to Michael Martinez's essay as a less
fangirlish defence of Celeborn. While I'm sure "Celeborn Unplugged" is a
fabulous resource, I don't necessarily agree with Marnie's claim that "Tall
Fellow" is at all fangirlish. It's devoted, sure, but it's also
well-reasoned and thorough. And if she's devoted to her elf, she proves time
and time again that she has good reason to be. This essay does an amazing
amount with a small passage, the scene in Fellowwship of the Ring (primarily
books, though movies are referenced as well) where Galadriel and Celeborn
meet the Fellowship -- and then she sweeps back to include The Hobbit, The
Silmarillion, and the Unfinished Tales. And it all fits together. This was
an engaging read, and I feel better-educated for it.

Title: The Slopes of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3921> Amon Gwareth ·
Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Poetry · ID: 715
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=47&form_story_filter=715>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-08 18:31:03 Score: 2
This trilogy of poems was spookily effective. I especially loved the despair
and almost resentment you captured in the third.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9912>
Fourth Attempt · Author: Forodwaith
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> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 369
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-08 19:36:17 Score: 2
This drabble did a good job of capturing the arrogant nature of Smaug. I
especially liked referring to the "thieves" as worms -- that seemed so
ironic coming from a dragon.

Title: Returning
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13194> from a
Wedding · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 1379
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-08 19:51:56 Score: 3
This was a great drabble. You did a good job of capturing the spirit of the
missing Lothiriel, and the return to normalcy as every-day matters impinged
on melancholy. I also think you portrayed Imrahil's contemplative nature
very well; he seemed almost like Denethor without the gruffness, which
seemed very fitting for his character.

Title: I <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=13766>
Pledge My Bow · Author: Cheryl
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2> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 221
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-08 22:19:58 Score: 3
Oh, this was a neat drabble. It did a really good job of explaining some
difficulties with the way Legolas is presented at the Council of Elrond in
the movies. But I think my favourite part was at the very beginning, where
Legolas compaed the Black Speech with the chill of Mirkwood; that was done
especially well.

Title: The Problem of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4062> Eowyn: A Look
at Ethics and Values in Middle-earth · Author: Madgamgee
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
7> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 376
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-09 00:45:56 Score: 5
So many stories and essays deal with this question of whether Eowyn is a
heroine or a deserter. And they can be well done. But this offers an
ambiguous answer, that she was not exclusively one or the other, but was a
bit of both. I'm not entirely sure that I agree with MadGamgee's argument at
a few points, but it at least opens me up to the possibility of those
points. And it does so in such a logical fashion that I am forced to at
least give them serious consideration. That (not whether I agree with the
author in the end) is the true sign of a good essay, at least in my book.
Very well done, MG.

Title: Here
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3349&cid=12757> sits, in
secret, blest Theology · Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 388
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=47&form_story_filter=388>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-09 00:51:52 Score: 2
This was an interesting piece. I liked how you drew the connection between
nature and ranger (which I agree would be quite strong), and how you had
Faramir give in to hope that that incident had been more than just a dream.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13234>
mother's duty · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 1384
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-09 01:20:33 Score: 2
This is a rather sad little moment between women. What a dreadful way to
view one's children, or any children. No wonder Ioreth pities Finduilas.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3483&cid=13181> Healing
Touch · Author: Werecat
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:21:16 Score: 1
Once again, the cat wins the day. Sad, but sweet.

Title: Blackberries in Lossarnach <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1419493/1/>
· Author: jen_loves_elves
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> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 1276
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:21:50 Score: 3
As many Ranger stories as I've read, I'm amazed I've never come across the
classic gag of a Ranger getting himself and his companions lost. That it's
Arathorn who gets lost with his wife and has to be forced to ask for
directions just makes it even funnier. Nice to see that Gilraen has a sharp
sense of humor.

Title: Weregild <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=121>
· Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID: 1091
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:23:02 Score: 6
I remember reading this quite some time ago, and enjoying it greatly. There
were one too many Evil!Isildur stories floating about that I'd chanced upon
before finding this one, which proved an effective cure for what ailed me.
Kielle shows us here a seduction that fits the kind of man Isildur seems to
have been: strong, commanding, loyal, imbued with a sense of pride in his
line and people. Somewhere in Greece, a king with the same qualities orders
a blind soothsayer to name the root cause of his kingdom's malady, sparing
no one, and sets in motion the tragedy that will see him wittingly and
willingly toppled from the throne. Kielle's Isildur would have liked, I
think, Oedipus.

Title: Inheritance
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3120> · Author:
Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID: 1087
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:23:41 Score: 5
Another excellent historical fic from Kielle that highlights that nagging
problem kings always face: what to do when the legitimate heir lacks the
vision to rule. Gondor is sliding towards catastrophe, towards a pair of
weak kings, and the birth of Castamir from that same set of weak heirs.
Minalcar gives his great-grandfather hope, but one wonders what he would
have seen when at last the time came for him to look to his own heirs, and
measure them against the demands of the crown.

Title: Watcher on the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3999> Height ·
Author: Chris
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 1015
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:24:23 Score: 3
I've never seen anyone do anything at all with the poor fellows stuck up on
the heights on beacon duty. A rather dull and barren existence it seems to
be! I loved the banter at the beginning, and the fact that the exchange of
mocking truths, that "each knowing these bone deep truths about the other -
over such inconsequentialities - was a comfort and joy to both."

Title: The Laughing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4456> Oliphaunt ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 998
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:25:12 Score: 5
As good an account of the battle for Osgiliath as I've read for quite some
time. I like the fact that it's done in retrospect, and the succession of
narrators, each having seen different parts of the battle, each reacting in
his own way to Nazgûl-induced terror, exhaustion, and the loss of half of
Osgiliath, gives a sense of the total and overwhelming chaos of that retreat
across the bridge. It comes in short bursts—none of the chapters are
long—but they keep the battle manageable, in a way, by refusing to show too
much.

Title: Not Remembered <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1053> ·
Author: Cadiliniel
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0> · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 992
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:25:55 Score: 2
It's good to see the stewards given their due even in the face of the return
of the king. One wonders what Aragorn makes of those who hold to the
Stewards, remembering their sacrifices.

Title: So Other Men May
<http://www.freewebs.com/aure/soothermenmayfight.htm> Fight · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 958
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:26:45 Score: 4
The timing on this is what I like best. Bergil gives all his good reasons
first, and then, when it seems Beregond won't be persuaded, comes out with,
"Besides, Gelmir is staying." And with that, Beregond realizes he's been
trumped by the classic card "But so and so is staying". The combination of
boyish intransigence and utter seriousness works because of that line and
the realization that follows upon it.

Title: The Girl I Kissed at the
<http://www.freewebs.com/aure/thegirlikissed.htm> Rammas · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 942
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-09 01:27:34 Score: 1
I could definitely see this being popular among the soldiers in Gondor.
Especially after a few rounds in the taverns.

Title: Denethor Limericks
<http://www.berryarts.com/lizallinos/denethor.html> · Author: Llinos
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 787
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-09 01:28:10 Score: 2
Ah, the limerick. That fine poetical form responsible for some of the most
hysterical and depraved verse known to the English language. These are
clever, and they are most definitely irreverent, but delightfully, wickedly
so.

Title: Refraction
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=628> · Author:
Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 750
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-09 01:29:01 Score: 5
Now this is an interesting and different take on Finduilas' death, one that
makes a lot more of her than the Appendices do. All that ambivalence and
addiction to the palantír that is read into Denethor (not wrongly, I think)
in his later years gets a new and personal layering with this story.
Denethor's voice, in all its native strength and tenacity, and its bitter
acceptance of what is, comes through beautifully, here, in both rage and
love and self-reflective, wry despair. Another fine story from Kielle, and
one that Denethor lovers are sure to enjoy.

Title: Noble <http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=6>
Jewel · Author: Isabeau
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2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 741
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:29:44 Score: 7
You need to have at least read "Discretion" to get the most out of this
story. Otherwise, Isabeau demonstrates her skill in constructing a story
that has only OCs in it, and also shows that she can write children as well
as adults with equal facility. I particularly came to like the healer
character, Cuilast, who apparently has guts enough to give his captain a bit
of cheek and not allow himself to be intimidated by Andrahar's rather dour
and prickly manner. One imagines Andrahar needs such people in his life and
that despite his occasional irritation, rather enjoys the fact that Cuilast
isn't at all afraid of him. In the end, this is a story about recovering
from grief as much as it is about the fate of Brand, and for those wishing
Boromir didn't die, well, it's not recompense, but at least here Boromir
manages to achieve the only kind of immortality allotted to mankind.

Title: The Best Gift of All
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=467> · Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 739
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:30:22 Score: 4
A convincng portrait of a young and bookish Faramir, at large in the
libraries of Dol Amroth. Isabeau's Dol Amroth is always a warm and vibrant
place, populated by a lively cast of characters. Imrahil is present even in
his absence, and his wife has a voice of her own. One can see why a rather
reserved young man, with only a rather stern father and an absent older
brother would find it a refuge. The Boromr-Faramir interaction at the end
was well done.

Title: The Sky Wept
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4177> Diamonds ·
Author: Elen
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1> Kortirion · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 710
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-09 01:30:50 Score: 6
Once again, Finduilas is the prophet at the birth of son, and it is rather
chilling what she foresees for Boromir, however hazy. What a way to bring a
child into the world! I definitely appreciated Denethor's
characterization—his powerlessness and anger at it strike me as right for my
favorite anal-retentive, controlling Steward. The narrator doesn't lack for
nerve, given the news she has somehow to bear to Denethor:

"How do you tell a man he's about to lose his wife and his firstborn child?
Quickly, that's how."

Fortunately, it doesn't come to that, but one can imagine that two such
births and the effort and grief expended in them, might well hasten
Finduilas' decline.


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Msg# 5131

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 45 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:42:52 Topic ID# 5131
Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13572>
Long Tradition of Ancient Lore · Author: Elena
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7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 206
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-08 10:33:53 Score: 1
A clever means of demonstrating that history is not nearly so boring as
young minds make it.

Title: Leavetakings
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=891> · Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 188
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-08 10:34:32 Score: 2
It's nice to see Finduilas squarely at the center of decisions, even if they
concern her final farewell. She dies with great dignity, and it's a pity
Denethor wasn't able to grieve with nearly as much of it.

Title: Wait for me -
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=4455> Eowyn · Author:
elanor_of_aquitania
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=69
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 127
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-08 10:35:11 Score: 2
I'm not sure I grasp the function of the poem's form, but one can imagine
Faramir finding comfort in the thought that his wife will keep a watch for
him beyond death.

Title: The Mantle <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1568984/1/> of Stone ·
Author: just_sphinx
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=92
> · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 116
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 10:35:50 Score: 7
Pitting Aragorn, poor mortal that he is, against the exaggerated majesty of
the Argonath and its ability to endure the millennia, seems just slightly
unfair to the king. And yet, it turns out not to be so, as a nameless
wanderer (where have I seen him before...?) shows again that Mithrandir was
right to say that men are better than gates—the living are always more
worthy, more surprising, and greater than memory caught in stone that cannot
truly speak. The meeting of these nameless two men before the Argonath
allows for the construction of an odd, hybrid third: the king of Gondor, all
too well named, yet for all that, distant and anonymous in a way to the
narrator, thus proving that names also do not really tell of the person who
bears them, nor stories, nor stone. It's the person who approaches who
actually gives the best sense of the king, not in speech but in the way he
speaks and the way he bears himself. Well done, Spinx.

Title: Marriage
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3140&cid=12153> Counseling
· Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 111
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 10:36:32 Score: 2
"I see many sides of him that you do not, brother."—I've loved this drabble
for this one line for some time now. Hysterical, true, and an excellent
answer to one's brother's inquiries!

Title: Beyond
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=3977&NGID=197>
Imagination · Author: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 103
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 10:37:03 Score: 3
An intimate little scene between Finduilas and Denethor. I especially liked
this turn of phrase: "Something stirred against his palm, like the flutter
of an owl’s wing brushing silently past on a midsummer’s evening." Very
nicely captures the swiftness and slightness of that movement.

Title: To Labor and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4557> To Wait ·
Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 79
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 10:37:29 Score: 10
A set of exquisitely written sketches to go with Aliana's other fic,
"Fallen". Each of the characters achieves a lyrical solidity in a very short
space, and a distinct voice in his or her namelessness. We don't need their
names, although we recognize at least one of the characters of that larger
story: we take our turn as each of these men and women who, seemingly
reduced to their function (Messenger, Surgeon, Herbalist, Guardsman,
Healer), resist that reduction and open up briefly as personalities
struggling to find a purchase against fear and despair and the machinery of
war that tries to efface all such personality with either death or a kind of
enslavement to circumstance.

The surgeon's reflective nature comes through, as does his somewhat wry
acknowledgment that though he might not have chosen his craft originally and
bore a certain anger towards his father for apprenticing him to it, he's too
weary to hold a grudge. The healer's recognition that she can't be terrified
at every moment because the body just doesn't allow for that, and will
always find small things and tedium to break the sharpness of fear is
wonderfully put. The messenger lad's transformation from a boy to something
more than that in the ending of his innocent play is well turned—I
particularly loved the final line in that segment. And the description of
the blindness of the herbalist is beautifully done, effectively putting us
in a darkened world that doesn't fear darkness so much as emptiness and the
destruction of form. As they speak, we sometimes recognize a character in
the larger story: the surgeon and the healer acquire names, which gives
those of us following "Fallen" a certain thrill, as we get a glimpse into
the closed interiors of these characters. But these pieces stand alone, and
I would recommend them to anyone with an appreciation for a well-turned
phrase or an interest in any aspect of Minas Tirith. Bravo, Aliana!


Title: On
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=317&NGID=2> the
Death of His Wife · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 74
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 10:38:02 Score: 4
Very fitting, that Denethor should address this poem to his first and truer
love, in many ways: Gondor, the jealous lover, who devours all. And I liked
the ambivalence that Denethor's final lines imbues this relationship with:
there's defiance there, and a strong sense of love-hate for Gondor, that
becomes the Shadow that "thresh[es] out all hope" from life, leaving pride
to stand alone against it.

Title: On
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=317&NGID=2> His
Stewardship · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 73
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 10:38:44 Score: 3
All the right words, and yet the knowledge of future events undoes them in
the reader's mind. I particularly liked the bit about Arrogance restrained,
given that it is pride that will break Denethor cause him to wish to keep
the throne permanently empty.

Title: Cat's <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3541>
Cradle · Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID: 452
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-08 10:58:01 Score: 6
You know, I'm a little tempted to label this as AU, and that wouldn't be a
bad thing. It's a beautiful exploration of a "what-if". But the more I think
about it the more possible it seems. Because we don't know what happened to
Beruthiel, and we don't know that she never conceived. I can even imagine
that there are some in Gondor who, at some points in their history, might
have preferred Beruthiel's heir to Isildur's.

Beyond that, this story has such rich sensory details! the cats, the feel of
the hair, and so on. You have characters who most of which are just names
with not much else known about them, but here they jump off the page. And
the politics you worked in all felt authentic. I really enjoyed this short
story; thanks for opening my mind up to this possibility.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3043&cid=12847> Lady’s
Gift · Author: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien · ID: 979
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=979>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-08 11:32:22 Score: 6
This is a charming story. I like how you created a backstory for Galadriel.
And how she collected the dirt herself "with no fear for her white hands" --
this to me shows the influence of living for three ages with a prince of the
Sindar, and of humility that that time has brought. The only thing that
seemed at all out of place was the phrase at the very end "when a lone
mallorn made its way home in the blessed Shire". This seemed a bit too
certain for someone who made a point out of saying that she wasn't sure what
was going to happen in the future. Perhaps "if" would have worked better
than "when". All things considered, though, this was a very nice piece.

Title: Cup
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=197&STID=3874&
SPOrdinal=1> of Bitterness: First Meeting · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 531
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=531>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:45:57 Score: 6
Well-written, and the prophetic inspiration for Faramir's name follows in a
tradition of prophetic mother-names running throughout Tolkien's corpus.
Also, Denethor's disdain for prophecy, his practicality where such matters
are concerned, certainly help tie together his old quarrel with Thorongil
for his father's affections and esteem and also suggest, without being
anything like a cause of, the difficult future relationship he will have
with Faramir. And I was glad to see something made of the Arnor-Gondor
connection: that's rather a black hole in the Appendices, and in the stories
proper, once Aranarth takes office as Chieftain of Arnor.

Title: Before
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=177&STID=3367&
SPOrdinal=2> the Doors of the Houses of Healing · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 529
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=529>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:46:34 Score: 6
Tanaqui fills a gap quite nicely and gives Imrahil a few moments of
worthwhile rage. I liked very much that it's Éomer who steps in at the end
to support Gandalf's decision not to tell Imrahil about what was happening
on Rath Dinen. Éomer ought to know that when it comes to unexpected deaths
in the family, one doesn't act rationally—he nearly did get himself and many
others killed with him when he believed his sister had fallen with his
uncle. Imrahil is wise enough to see that he (and also Gandalf) are right to
have spared him that choice for his sake and the sake of all others
depending upon him at a crucial time in the City's defense.

Title: Written
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=97&STID=2223&S
POrdinal=20> on Cloth · Author: shadow975
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
9> · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 527
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=527>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:47:02 Score: 3
Rachel puts the terms of the Steward's oath to good use in this story, and
reminds us and Faramir that banners are more than the cloth they're woven
from. More importantly, they are recognized to be more than a few threads,
and through the medium of cloth, the memory of the dead is honored and some
peace granted to those who survived them.

Title: When the King
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3938> Returned ·
Author: Ninquelosse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
0> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 497
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=497>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:47:50 Score: 5
A realistic assessment from one of Gondor's long-suffering soldiers. After
all, who except those in the know about the Quest would even think Aragorn's
gamble bore any resemblance to sanity and good leadership? Even Imrahil has
his doubts, and he is one of the select few. For others, it must've been a
shock and a wrench to find they would be fighting the next battle in front
of the unassailable Black Gates. Many must've wondered what on earth Aragorn
was thinking, but the habit of obedience will get you a long ways when
you're newly king among a people recently bereft of its accustomed
leadership.

Title: Below the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2996> Balcony ·
Author: Ninamazing
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
9> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 496
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=496>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:48:21 Score: 3
An interesting response to the line in ROTK where it's said that neither
Faramir nor Éowyn cared who saw them kissing on the heights. Here we see
some of those observers, accidental witnesses drawn out of their daily tasks
and into participation in other lives.

Title: Repose
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=3883&NGID=203>
Earned, Words Unspoken · Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 482
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=482>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:48:50 Score: 3
Ecthelion figures prominently in this story, even though he has only a verse
to start with. But the Faramir-Ecthelion connection, that they ever valued
Denethor second to another, and a stranger at that, clearly wounded deeply,
and sets in motion a rather fatal series of events.

Title: The Ballad of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1770> Isildur and
Elendil · Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 460
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=460>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:49:21 Score: 2
The poem fits the melody nicely, and cradle songs and fairy tales are often
more terrible than we realize until much later in life.

Title: Green Seas
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3540> · Author:
Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 453
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=453>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:50:01 Score: 5
This is a set of characters I'd never seen written in the same room before,
let alone as fast friends. And the story does capture well the sense of
imminent dislocation and uprooting that Théoden would endure upon leaving
Gondor, and just as he would be coming to that age when he'd be starting to
think about entering the military and learning to be an officer and later a
captain. It'd be a very hard parting indeed for him. One wonders what
Imrahil, in the Kielleverse, might have thought upon finding Théoden had
died on the Pelennor so many years later.

Title: Cat's <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3541>
Cradle · Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID: 452
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=452>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:50:55 Score: 7
Kielle gives us a lively, yet politically fraught, family reunion; one
wonders whether there is any other kind among estranged nobility,
particularly royalty. The idea that Beruthiel might've found safe harbor in
the south, and had a son to carry on the southern line directly is an
intriguing one, and one wonders what a descendent of that line in Aragorn's
day might say to the claim of Isildur's Heir, or what Denethor might've done
if faced with a competing claim by one such son. Scylla and Charybdis would
hardly hold a candle to such a choice for Denethor!

But speculation aside, the title is doubly suitable for this fic, the
characterization is well-drawn, and the veiled fencing and integration of
events only mentioned in the Appendices is very well-handled. It's good to
see Beruthiel in fine form on the high ground, a woman you don't want as
your enemy.


Title: Voices of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3269> Forgotten ·
Author: jen_loves_elves
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52
> · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 435
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=435>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:51:57 Score: 8
Well done, Jen! The queens of Gondor in their silence are a crucial link in
the history and continuation of the kingdom. They are a condition for its
survival, yet they never speak, or nearly never. In these thirty-one
drabbles, women of different temperaments and minds, some cold, some angry,
some grieving, some desperately in love, some ambitious (Castamir's wife in
particular stands out in this field, but so too does Firiel, even though she
doesn't have a drabble directly to herself), mellow, and even weak or
foolish come to life in just one hundred words, and give an intimate glimpse
into the life of the royal court. A worthwhile project, one that I think
many will enjoy—a bit vertiginous, as we sweep through so many years and
lives (every drabble is doubled up, the queen in relation to her king), but
the sequence works. It sheds light where there had been none, and in some
ways does better to weave together the names in the Appendices than the
Appendices themselves.

Title: Finduilas'
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1437> Dance · Author:
jen_loves_elves
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52
> · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 431
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=431>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:52:30 Score: 2
An interesting use of the shade (?) of Mithrellas. This has much more the
feel of those Elves who live under the hills than Tolkien's, to me, but all
to the good!

Title: Well <http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=15>
Favored · Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 417
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=417>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:53:06 Score: 6
Once again, Imrahil shows his charm, and Isabeau demonstrates her ability to
construct apparently on the instant believable female characters. This time,
we see our favorite Prince through the eyes of a young refugee, fearful and
upset that her father has been forced to remain behind to help defend the
city. Imrahil, with his usual combination of chivalry and down-to-earth
compassion and level-headedness, manages to bring some comfort to her,
displaying the characteristically generous spirit he's been endowed with
ever since Isabeau got her hands on him. A sweet little vignette all in all.

Title: Discretion
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=16> · Author:
Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 416
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=416>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:54:00 Score: 10
For some reason, a lot of slash focuses on canon character pairings. I don't
know why, since the possibilities often seem more fruitful between one canon
and one original character, or even two original characters. In any event,
this first installment of one such OC/canon slash romance is nicely done.
Boromir's frustration and uncertainty, and his determination to do something
about them, are very in character. As usual, the denizens of Dol Amroth are
well-sketched, even if briefly: a younger Imrahil, though already wiser for
years and the death of his wife, forms part of a brief and hysterical piece
of family comedy, with his young children at the heart of it. Adrahil, too,
and Tarathiel, an OFC, are well-drawn.

And of course, there is Andrahar, to whom Boromir eventually takes his
questions and from whom he seeks a resolution to his problem. Andra's
character, in all its prickly practicality and vaguely Denethorish (though
neither party would care to admit the resemblance) authoritarianism, is
written with confidence. I'm not terribly enamored of the sex scenes, but
that's more a matter of taste than anything else; they are certainly far
better written than many I have read, and the story doesn't end with those
scenes, but gives a good reflection on what Boromir's options are once he
comes to terms with his sexuality: they're not terribly extensive, and it
commits him to keeping secrets from his father, but at least he has a
partner on whom he can rely, whose discretion is without question.


Title: Fever <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4431>
Dreams · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 397
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=46&form_story_filter=397>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-08 17:54:32 Score: 4
The ambiguity with which Faramir faces the news of his father's death is
very well done, I think. One can feel Faramir's weariness in this story, and
anyone who has been sick knows a little of what he's going through. Faramir
seems destined never to be wholly at peace with his dreams: whether their
content is comforting or not, the circumstances he's embroiled in put him in
sad relation with them.


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Msg# 5132

Problems looking at your Author Reviews Posted by Anthony Holder August 17, 2005 - 23:54:07 Topic ID# 5132
Sulriel,

The author review status for the links is not done correctly.

I checked the reviews you mentioned yesterday, and they are all
correct, and in the system.

The error message should read something like: you can't edit the review
because it is final, and it is voting season.

Your review isn't showing up, because for some reason when you do an
author filter, it sets the subcategory filter to General, and this one
is for an Incomplete.

It's clear that there are some glitches, especially with the author
review code.

For the time being, you'll have to ignore the 'enter new author review'
which is showing up no matter what. I should be able to fix it, but it
is saving your reviews, so they're OK.

I'll try to fix the filter issue, but if you don't filter for authors,
your review is in the list.

In short, you can create author reviews just fine. They are being saved
correctly, but they are not being shown correctly by the system.

I still have some more emails to read tonight. I probably won't get any
of this fixed tonight.

Anthony

Msg# 5133

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 47 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:56:00 Topic ID# 5133
Title: Echo <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1002> . Author:
Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble . ID: 684
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=684>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-09 01:31:19 Score: 3
There's definitely something uncanny about the things the dead leave behind.
Despite the fact that Pippin is alone, this feels like a very intimate
moment with Boromir, as Pippin wanders about the space that was his once,
and gets a glimpse of a cut off life in the way Boromir had left things for
his return. Nicely played, that last set of lines!

Title: Promises
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13139> . Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble . ID: 574
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=574>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-09 01:32:06 Score: 2
I'm reminded a bit of Johnny Appleseed, here, though obviously, Faramir's
much more of an "as you can" sower than the legendary Johnny. But as with
Halflings, it's the little things that end up supporting the world.

Title: Call of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1573> Druedain .
Author: thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> . Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters . ID: 565
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=565>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-09 01:32:42 Score: 2
I'm a bit confused, geographically, but it's a neat little story that gives
you a good bit on drum-making as the poor narrator flees unwitting towards
the Woses of the woods.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13216>
Warrior's Skills . Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles . ID: 551
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=551>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-09 01:33:19 Score: 2
Nice use of that particular line! It seems that Faramir, unlike Pippin,
doesn't have qualms about the fittingness of his songs for hard times, when
once he's convinced his men really want him to sing for them.

Title: Just in <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3082>
Case . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 477
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=477>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:28:44 Score: 3
What an interesting side-story. It's rather funny that Celeborn surprised
Annatar with his remark about it being better to have Galadriel on his side
than as an enemy. And I would not have wanted to be one of those elves
ordered to shoot Celeborn or Galadriel! *eep*

Title: Mae
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1123&PHPSESSID
=81bbdff5479eba252b785634d85ebade> Govannen . Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 148
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=148>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:28:59 Score: 1
Yes, I loved Glorfindel's entrance from the first time I read the books. I'm
sure Aragorn was highly relieved.

Title: The
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/I_P/P/PathsOfTheDead.htm>
Paths of the Dead . Author: alex_cat_45
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=57
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company . ID: 999
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=999>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:29:12 Score: 3
Definitely an interesting perspective. We just take for granted that they
will follow Aragorn and fulfill their oath, but never really think about
what they're experiencing. I think the movie gave me more of a sense of how
they felt, when the king demanded their release after the battle.

Title: All
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2929&cid=11235> Hallows'
Day . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 317
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=317>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:29:23 Score: 1
You're totally right, Marnie, Elmo did deserve some compensation. I'm so
glad he got to go home.

Title: Borne to Me <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1674505/1/> By the Sea .
Author: AngelQueen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=48
3> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 1258
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=1258>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:30:11 Score: 2
Oh! I'm anal, I need to have closure, to finish things. I thought Celeborn
would arrive. (I'm a sucker for a happy ending too!) Nice story.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3540&cid=13461> Long
Defeat . Author: Perelleth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=46
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 1213
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=1213>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:30:15 Score: 1
WOW! YES!! That is the perfect ending for Celeborn!! Wonderful story!!

Title: Seeds of Old
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4440> Trees . Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 478
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=478>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:30:20 Score: 8
One of my favorites of yours.

It's almost uncomfortable to see Celeborn at such a loss, I'm so used to
thinking of him as confident and...powerful. And here, you can almost taste
his anxiety, and the longing for 'home'. Then, once he arrives, it must have
been deeply unsettling for Celeborn to realize that yes, the last time he
saw most of these people, his family...they were dying, or dead...*yikes*
I'd want to go home too!

During the middle of the story, I had to wonder if the elves really ever
learned! I know, the old hurts and things still surfaced, but getting second
chances should cause them to be more thoughtful about renewing those old
conflicts. Though maybe, because death wasn't permanent, and they were
immortal, they didn't think they needed to learn.

I liked the closure they all started to achieve at the end, and maybe they
were finally learning. This was another of your stories that re-confirmed my
own love of Celeborn, and got me hooked on Thingol too.

Title: The End of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2592> Days . Author:
Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 158
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=158>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:30:27 Score: 2
I have to disagree with you. Tolkien didn't always go for the all out happy
ending, but I'm not sure he'd not give Elrond a tiny one, and have his sons
and father-in-law return to him in valinor.

Title: Renewal <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3162>
. Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 883
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=883>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:31:30 Score: 2
I love the way you always mentioned that Thranduil and Galadriel needed to
make peace between them. Gives real closure to their story.

Title: May the Valar
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1> Protect Them .
Author: Nilmandra
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
4> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves . ID: 1055
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=1055>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:31:39 Score: 5
One of my all time favorite stories in the entire fandom. I printed the last
few chapters and I read them over and over--the parts where Bregolas shows
up, and then everyone going home. Have to tell you, between you and Daw,
it's hard for me to imagine Legolas having any other families.

I spent the last three chapters of the story crying and sniffling,and I
totally LOVE the part where Legolas yells out Ada King! before the feast,
and the part where Legolas greets 'Rundra's Ada' Thanks so much for sharing
it!

Title: The
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/Q_Z/S/SweetestHarvest.htm>
Sweetest Harvest . Author: alex_cat_45
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=57
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves . ID: 1001
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=1001>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:31:53 Score: 4
You know, I betaed this for you, but I still sniffled when I re-read it
tonight. Such a simple sentiment, but it encompasses all. And you had Elrond
think about all the ones he loved without the sadness and bitterness that so
many other writers give him. And as much as I like slash, I've lately come
to realize that Elrond and Celebrian must have had a great love between
them, and it's harder and harder for me to read fic where Elrond is with
someone else.

Title: A Question of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=12> Duty . Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves . ID: 152
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=152>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:32:04 Score: 5
Wow, Beliond always has to surprise Legolas, doesn't he? Who would have ever
thought he'd back Legolas going on the quest? And if anyone could take the
brunt of Thranduil's anger, I have a feeling it's him. And give it back as
good as he gets too.

I can't even imagine how betrayed the Greenwood elves must have felt...here
they were, feeling the brunt of Sauron's evil, and the others were always so
slow to help, but here they had the rings...and the reason Sauron was so
bent on destroying the elves...

Title: Spring <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1665>
Awakenings . Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves . ID: 153
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=153>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:32:16 Score: 6
I guess this is another favorite of mine. I agree that Eilian isn't given
enough credit, and it's about time Thranduil saw it...and that part of is
anger with Eilian is because he's so much like his mother.

Now...as far as Solith and Anyr are concerned...Well, Solith needs a big
smack upside the head and Anyr needs a keeper of his own.

I think Thranduil really should have cut Eilian some slack for getting
married, I mean, in the long run, I think Celuwen will be good for both of
them and the realm....and even for the settlements, they can better see
Thranduil's side, and he can better see theirs, thanks to her.

Title: The Tide of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=890> Times . Author:
daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 681
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=681>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:32:29 Score: 8
Oh! I went to your ff.net profile so I could read all your nominated stories
in chronological order. This is my second time for this one, and I could
definitely read it many many more times.

I love love love your original characters and your stories. I am terrible
because I rarely leave you reviews, but please know that I read all of your
stories, I never even think twice about it. I know it will be engaging and
keep me interested throughout, and it won't be so complicated that I have to
re-read past chapters in order to keep up.

And you write about such simple, wonderful things. You remind me of one of
my favorite writers...Louisa May Alcott. Strong characters and a good strong
story.

This one caught me off guard as I re-read it. I'd forgotten about the one
elf getting killed during the fire. *sniffle* (I'm not naming names so I
don't spoil it for anyone who just reads the reviews and hasn't read the
story...)

My cat stared at me as I sat there crying about it. I truly love every
single one of your stories. Thank you for being so generous with them.

Title: Tangled Web
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2055> . Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 151
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=151>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:33:00 Score: 6
I loved reading this story. We knew all about the elves from the dwarves'
perspectives, but to see it from the elves, was a real treat! Poor Legolas!
And Poor Sinnarn! I wondered about that when I read the Hobbit--just how
much trouble the elven guards were in for letting the dwarves escape.

I wonder if Saruman was turning bad at this point already. He certainly
seemed like it.

Now then, after the battle. I know warriors have to die, but two of them
that we've all come to know and love a little. And again, poor Sinnarn. I
know Nithron died doing what he was supposed to do, but that would be a
difficult burden to bear, I know I'd feel guilty if anyone died for me.

Title: Touche <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3561>
. Author: DragonLady7
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
9> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette . ID: 229
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=229>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:33:05 Score: 2
You had me laughing in the first two paragraphs...Eomer's complete
reluctance to punch people in the face, indeed! Well done on the fighting
scenes. I was able to picture them pretty well. (And believe me, that is
saying a lot). Good story.

Title: Magnetic
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2056> Force . Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Genres: Crossovers . ID: 1097
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=1097>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:34:49 Score: 2
This one made me fidget. To be there, and yet to come back to tell, then
realize you should be back with the elves. *arrgh* Yeah, I'd go insane too.

Title: The One and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4294> True Dark Lord
. Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Crossovers . ID: 358
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=358>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:35:00 Score: 1
Melkor whining--*hee* That pretty much set the tone for the story for me.
Cute.

Title: The Gift <http://home.earthlink.net/%7Eamebrindra/id35.html> .
Author: Legorfilinde
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=54
> . Genres: Alternate Universe: Elves . ID: 765
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=765>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:35:13 Score: 2
Very emotional. Nice look at the twins. It's kind of funny, but I always see
them as the other way around, Elladan is the less scholarly-driven one.

Title: Hunting
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1234&cid=5000> . Author:
Nilmandra
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
4> . Genres: Adventure: Long Form . ID: 1307
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=1307>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:35:24 Score: 3
I liked this continuation of MTVPT. It was great to get some closure for
Legolas and family. I mean, I know you showed a lot of the 'ending' in the
epilogues, but it's good seeing some of the in-between events. I like your
stories so much because they *are* stories, well-written stories. Thanks.

Title: How Legolas
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=394> Proved His
Bowmanship . Author: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> . Genres: Adventure . ID: 8
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=48&form_story_filter=8>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:35:29 Score: 1
Enjoyable and easy to read...and informative. Nicely told story of middle
earth's possibly most well known archer.


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Msg# 5134

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 49 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:59:14 Topic ID# 5134
Title: The Confused
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4619> Elf · Author: Kenaz
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
4> · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 187
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=187>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:43:20 Score: 1
Poor Haldir! *snicker* Well, practice does make perfect. *hee*

Title: Smiting <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2665>
Ruin · Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Genres: Movie-verse · ID: 195
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=195>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:43:30 Score: 1
Ha! Have to agree, smiting a ruin is probably not a good thing. And you're
right. Smote is a fun word!

Title: Celeborn's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1023> Gift · Author:
Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette · ID: 446
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=446>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:43:40 Score: 2
Yes, I remember reading in the books, and Legolas seemed to be looking for
arrows a lot. Creative answer for the always-full quiver.

Title: That Tall
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1372> Fellow Next to
Galadriel: a Short Essay About Celeborn · Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 479
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=479>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:43:51 Score: 4
I believe this was the very first piece of yours that I ever read. I had
just finished Implacida's stories, and somehow, found your essay. Totally
started my love of Celeborn. (Too bad I don't transfer that into writing
more fanfic about him, I guess). Oh, and I still think Marton C is gorgeous,
though they could have done a better job with his hair in the movies. *grin*

Title: The
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/T/Talullah/LastGoodDayOfTheYear.htm>
Last Good Day of the Year · Author: Talullah
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
7> · Genres: Romance: Rivendell · ID: 618
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=618>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:44:02 Score: 5
I've read this on the list, but wanted to re-read it here. I guess I still
don't understand Lindir, a relationship does take two to work, and he was
ready to take all the blame and none of the credit. They both made some
mistakes, obviously. Reading this time though, Lindir really kind of ticked
me off. He was being a martyr, at least it read that way to me. That's
pretty passive agressive and is very hard to counteract. I'm glad they both
got mad and really started to communicate! Silly elves.

Title: Novice <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2677>
Rider · Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1048
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=1048>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:44:12 Score: 2
This was wonderful!! I loved the part where Firefoot ate the carrots as fast
as he could to show his appreciation...and wnating the king to go back to
his own stall!
Too funny. Well done.

Title: Handmaiden of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3520> Lorien · Author:
Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 316
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=316>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:44:22 Score: 3
What a different perspective. Makes me pity Melian instead of hate her. It
also seems very resonable that she would be unable to lead the people since
she wasn't trained for it, nor was she created to live with the pain of
losing her loved one(s).

Title: A Prince's <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1143>
Question · Author: Tathrin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
6> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 113
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=113>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:44:33 Score: 2
Cute piece. It's a good thing Eldarion has Eowyn to go to! And his reaction
was priceless! I have a young nephew and he thinks kissing is ewww too.

Title: The Mark of a... <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1315>
Warrior? · Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 133
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=133>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:44:46 Score: 2
Yep. Typical males. I was a bit confused by the lack of names, but as I
read, I think that the style fit, it was much more amusing to *not* name
them.

Title: Of Elves and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3048> Dwarves and Late
Night Philosophy · Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 199
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=199>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:44:56 Score: 1
See, I'd be looking for my gameboy about the time those two started
debating. *snicker*

Title: Childhood
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=23> Ends · Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 474
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=474>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:45:06 Score: 2
This was really rather sad, to think that Eldarion would forsake all of his
mother's culture. I guess it's that mortal pride.

Title: Dancing in the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3025> Darkness ·
Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 476
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=476>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:45:23 Score: 2
I liked this the first time I read it. What a circuitous route it took for
Celeborn to realize that Celebrian was just following a family tradition,
really, by blending the works of the Noldor and the wood elves.

Title: Dance of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3312> Terrible Grace
· Author: Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 57
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=57>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:45:45 Score: 1
NIcely done. I liked the sort of poetic style. I could see what was
happening.

Title: Spirit
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=2321&SPOrdinal=2
> Reforged · Author: Erin's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
6> Daughter · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 725
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=725>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:47:44 Score: 2
I like the imagery you used.The cleansing fire, burning out the evil...and
yes, I could see Aragorn's face as he took hold of it. Nicely done.

Title: The <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=319>
Twilight · Author: Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 399
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=399>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:47:58 Score: 2
How difficult it must have been for Arwen to tell them all, and for them to
hear. I think Elrohir reacted with good grace though, after he worked
through his hurt...

Title: Sercemaitë
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=548> · Author:
Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 382
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=382>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:48:09 Score: 2
Eww...yuck. This was so sad! And graphic. Though it was something that
needed to be told, I guess. I mean, so much is written from the Noldor
perspective, good to see it from the other side.

Title: Wish upon a star <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2088089/1/> · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 194
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=194>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:49:56 Score: 2
OOOOH...I want to pass this along to some of my friends who will really
appreciate it. A fitting ending for the 'girl falls into ME' story! *hee*


Title: The Last <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3586>
Stand · Author: Soledad
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
6> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 76
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=76>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:50:05 Score: 3
Totally captivating piece! I really had sworn off all but elf stories, I'm
glad I broke that trend with this one. It all seems so logical, the whole
breeding thing, and the clans, even the grudging respect that Ugluk and
Eomer had for each other. Wonderful! Just wonderful!

Title: Bystander
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/1131.html#cutid1> · Author:
simbelmyne
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 903
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=903>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:50:12 Score: 2

*sniff* Wonder how many soldiers felt that way? Glad that they had no one to
come home to, so no one they loved had to suffer when they died.

Title: Marked <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/318.html#cutid1>
· Author: simbelmyne
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 904
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=904>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:50:20 Score: 1
Another *sniffler* Well done sad little piece, very bittersweet.

Title: The Clasp
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3460> Undone ·
Author: DragonLady7
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
9> · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 691
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=691>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:50:42 Score: 4
Ooohhh...Theodred is one of my favorites of Tolkien's minor characters. I
didn't realize there was information about him in Unfinished Tales, thank
you for that reference! Great gap-filler. I'm so glad I read it. I always
wondered how Theodred reacted while Grima was taking over his father's
mind--I know he would have been trying to counteract it, and I guess he was
successful enough that they had to kill him to make progress with their
plans.

Title: Heart's <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2117>
Ease · Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 1217
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=1217>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:50:53 Score: 2
Oh! I liked this story a lot! Celebrian has become a favorite of mine
recently, and this little scene went exactly as I would have imagined it.
Well done.

Title: The <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=197>
Far-Reaching Hand · Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 745
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=745>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:51:07 Score: 2
I'm usually terrible at understanding/seeing symbolism, which means I
generally don't like stories with it, but this was well-written enough so
that even I understood it. Interesting view of Feanor's little brothers.

Title: A Quiet <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2752>
Love · Author: Erin's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
6> Daughter · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 723
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=723>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:51:18 Score: 3
This was incredibly emotional. I sniffled, thinking about Celeborn talking
to his own daughter about Arwen's death. It was good to see that Celeborn
and the twins held no resentment toward Aragorn, and that they could see
Arwen was at peace, and even joyful about her choice.

Title: Creature of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3490> Fire · Author:
daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1218
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=50&form_story_filter=1218>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:51:32 Score: 5
NOoooooo! I mean, I knew Legolas couldn't marry her, but....Yikes!!

I'm glad that Legolas and Galelas came to an understanding, though under the
circumstances, they could hardly do anything else. It's funny, but I never
liked him much until Eilian did, and you showed more of what his home life
was like--with his older brother and all.

You know, seeing how much Legolas longs for a relationship, I wonder if
you're going to give him one, once he gets to Valinor....*grin* I guess he
could meet Tuillin again? That would be sweet enough even for all of us
mushy romance lovers!


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Msg# 5135

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 48 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 17, 2005 - 23:59:49 Topic ID# 5135
Title: What
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2771&cid=10747> his Heart
Spoke . Author: LKK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
7> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age . ID: 1026
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=1026>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:35:36 Score: 1
That was lovely. I like the idea that Oropher left something for Thranduil
like that letter.

Title: Celeborn's
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/A_H/C/CelebornsChoice.htm>
Choice . Author: alex_cat_45
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=57
> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age . ID: 1002
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=1002>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:35:49 Score: 3
It's really a wonder to me that any of the first age elves wanted to live.
Their lives seemed so sad and dark. I'm glad you gave Finrod a little light
in the form of Celeborn. And I hope that Galadriel forgave him as well. I
have a feeling Celeborn had room in his heart for lots of loves.

Title: Ernil i <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=915>
Duremmen . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age . ID: 1095
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=1095>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:35:55 Score: 2
Oh, Marnie, I've read this more than once and each time, I'm struck anew by
the bravery of the elfling. And how in character he is. I can see a child
doing the things he does--even making Orome laugh. Well done.

Title: A
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/E/Enismirdal/FalconForTheNightingale.h
tm> Falcon for the Nightingale . Author: Enismirdal
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
9> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age . ID: 63
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=63>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:35:59 Score: 3
Funny that we were just talking about angst and darkness tonight, then I
came here to re-read this story. And I still think it's great that it as
dark and angsty and moody artists like Maglor and Daeron can be, that they
found a happy ending here. (Or well, you let them have a happy ending!)

Title: Taking the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=213> Sword . Author:
Ithilwen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
6> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons . ID: 1030
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=1030>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:36:05 Score: 2
A new look at the Feanorians for me. I liked it. Ironic to think of Maglor
as being the one who was willing to take up the sword first, most fanfic
makes him the more reluctant brother.

Title: Wreath of Steel
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=166> and Silver .
Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons . ID: 454
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=454>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:36:22 Score: 2
Ooh...that was incredibly creepy to me, for some reason. I liked the
repetition of the threes, though. Oddly enough, I've never thought about it
before.

Title: Father-Names
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=46> . Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons . ID: 345
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=345>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:36:32 Score: 3
It's funny, and maybe it's mentioned in one of the books, but Maglor is
usually the least evil of the Feanorians, at least in my view. Maybe that's
not canon, but is certainly seems to fit. I liked the story, could just see
a little boy trying to carry that sword. The weird formatting provided a bit
of a distraction, but not enough to make me quit reading. Well done.

Title: Mariner's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3199> Son . Author:
Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell . ID: 326
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=326>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:36:41 Score: 2
Do have to feel sorry for Elrond, to be abandoned for a silmaril. I guess
I'd be bitter too. Though I like to think he saw them again when he went
west, but I like happy endings too. *grin*


Title: After All <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2190155/1/> . Author:
jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War . ID: 100
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=100>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:36:51 Score: 2
Oh, now this was a new twist on Legolas in Valinor. I know people who would
do something simliar for their family/friends, so this was very believable.
Great feel good story. Well done.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2524&cid=9921>
Room of Tears . Author: Elendiari22
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
3> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor . ID: 759
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=759>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:36:59 Score: 1
Yep. Dark. Very eerie too. I got thirsty, thinking about all the dust, and
the empty pitcher. *shudder*

Title: Realizations
<http://home.earthlink.net/%7Eamebrindrastories/id8.html> . Author:
amebrindra
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
8> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller . ID: 771
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=771>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:37:53 Score: 2
I know, you absolutely have to make the twins suffer, but I wish Galadriel
didn't have to be the meanie all the time. *grin* Interesting plot devices
with the one soul and the stepping across time thing.

Title: Women's <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3040>
Work . Author: JediShampoo
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
2> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age . ID: 430
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=430>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:38:05 Score: 1
I never really saw Eowyn as being too girly, so to see her being all....oh,
hormonal was amusing. nicely done.

Title: High <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1804>
Places . Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 1086
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=1086>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:38:19 Score: 2
Nicely told story from young Earendil's view. One tiny thing threw me--the
use of 'kinda' when Earendil is talking about Maeglin's stories.

Title: This
<http://www.libraryofmoria.com/glorfindelerestor/thissilence.txt> Silence .
Author: Ezra's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
8> Persian Kitty . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves . ID: 566
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=49&form_story_filter=566>
Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:38:28 Score: 3
No matter how many times I read this story, I still sniffle at the end. I
fully blame you for starting the entire Glorfindel/Erestor fascination in
the fandom. When people ask me for story recommendations, this is one (of
very few) that I think of right away, and never hesitate to urge others to
go read it.

Title: Guilt <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3324> .
Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst) . ID: 1046
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Reviewer: Larian
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> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:38:40 Score: 2
Sometimes I think those really strong types, like Eomer, lose it the worst
when they have to go through something like their wives having babies. Well
done.

Title: Beast of <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2325>
Burden . Author: Werecat
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Reviewer: Larian
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> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:38:49 Score: 1
Wah!! Great story! I'm glad that Summerstraw got to go to the halls of HIS
ancestors too, with his strong spirit!

Title: A Spring of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3738> Joy . Author:
daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 1320
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<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:39:44 Score: 6
Ack! That must have been so difficult to do, I mean, I'm just reading your
stories and I love every single one of your OCs, I can't imagine having the
will power to do that to two of them!! And it was uplifing in that although
they are tired of fighting, even in the face of such grief, they all
intended to go on, to make the world safe again.

*smart aleck grin* I don't suppose you'll head back to Thranduil's realm
*after* the ring war, will you? Let us know what happens to everyone there
during the fighting? Which ones of them sail? And of course, who goes to
Ithilien with Legolas? Lots more material for you, you know!

Title: Glorious <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2712>
Summer . Author: daw
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6> the minstrel . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 154
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:39:53 Score: 3
Another engaging, interest-drawing story. You should change your handle to
daw the magnificent!

Well, I guess Solith really does have to be hit over the head with a heavy
object before he will come around, doesn't he? Had to laugh though, when he
yelled at them all that he gave the orders in his own house. *hee*

And Celuwen! The knife throwing elf maiden!

Title: The Warrior
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1062> . Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 155
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:40:02 Score: 5
Daw, another great story. It's nice to watch the way Legolas and his friends
and family grow and develop. I think Eilian is my favorite or your OCs,
although Maltanaur and Beliond are close seconds. Those two possibly have
the hardest jobs in the whole kingdom, I think. Although I wouldn't really
want to be in any of the king's sons' shoes either.

And Solith, though I can sort of see where he's coming from,he would drive
me totally nuts. Ideals are fine to live by, but some of those settlers seem
to live there all the time, instead of coming down to earth/reality
sometimes.

Title: Blizzard! <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3576>
. Author: Nilmandra
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4> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 1308
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:40:41 Score: 2
Another great story. That's really what I love about your writing. You have
such great OCs and plots. I get completely involved in every single one of
the adventures Legolas and the others have.

Title: Sacrifice
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1464&cid=6068> Under
Shadow . Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood . ID: 1319
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:40:58 Score: 4
This was one of my favorites of your stories, where you showed a younger
Eilian and Ithiliden, so we know why Thranduil is sometimes so exasperated
with Eilian. (Well, a bit more of why). And Ithilden, I like those moments
when he is not the unflappable elf. Like he is when he's with Sinnarn...

Oh, and Eilian...what could possibly go wrong? That should be the motto of
his house, I'm thinking!

Title: A Proper
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3896> Course of
Action . Author: Aliana
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8> . Genres: Humor . ID: 78
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:41:09 Score: 1
*smirk* Enjoyable tongue in cheek perspective of this situation.
Vice-Chancellor indeed. *laughs*

Title: A Very Dark,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2446> Very Wet, and
Very Miserable Morning . Author: Thundera
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> Tiger . Genres: Humor . ID: 592
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:41:21 Score: 1
Yeah, almost have to feel sorry for Abunai. Then you have to feel sorry for
the laughing elves! How brave are they? Heh.

Title: Dragons or
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1963> Ribbons .
Author: Joanna
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5> . Genres: Humor: Children . ID: 443
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:41:39 Score: 2
*snorts* My niece is as strong willed as Gliriel. I can so see her making
any of the doting males in her life do something similar.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3020&cid=11670> trouble
with Jam . Author: grey_wonderer
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> . Genres: Humor: Children . ID: 882
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar . 2005-08-09 02:43:11 Score: 1
Six year old Pippin! I can so see the whole thing. But...you left us
hanging! He got to eat the jam, right? *grin*


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Msg# 5136

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 50 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:00:12 Topic ID# 5136
Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2863> Falling
Out of Love · Author:
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5> Marnie · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:51:42 Score: 3
How bittersweet. Celeborn trying to find out how to get the sea-longing,
Legolas regretting it, even for a moment. I think Celeborn was really wise
in telling Legolas to go before he started to fade, that would cause
Thranduil more pain than him leaving, I'm sure.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2807&cid=10858>
Winter Encounters · Author:
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> jastaelf · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:51:51 Score: 3
I have to admit, I am glad that Thranduil and Gloin turned out to be
friends, since their sons were destined to be the same. I loved the line
from the letter about Legolas trying to get back home with as much of his
blood as possible (or at least that's close...) Well done.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3240> Time's
Turnings · Author:
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6> daw the minstrel · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:52:06 Score: 6
I laughed so hard every time I read the line right before Beliond goes into
the spice shop to search...

"He hated the idea of leaving the young fool on his own to do anything that
popped into his head, but he solaced himself by vowing that he would beat
the snot out of Legolas if he violated orders."

As an ex-manager, and a present aunt, I can tell you, I have lived those
very moments myself. (And though our missions were not as dangerous, some
were covert!)

I also love the quieter moments between Sinnarn and Ithilden. It must drive
them both a little crazy to be on opposite ends of the duty vs personal
freedom line sometimes...

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2878> Partings
· Author:
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1> Bodkin · Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:52:21 Score: 2
I knew this story would be sad, but I thought maybe it would be more
bittersweet, because there would be reunions later on. The last little bit
killed me though, where Celeborn says the part about the Age of
Men....*sniffs*

Title:
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/K/KharessaBloodrose/Stability.htm>
Stability · Author:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 02:52:31 Score: 3
In my own idealized view of Elven society, I just can't imagine the whole
community leaving Haldir to work, and raise both brothers. I guess maybe
that's because I can see it happening in our mean little men's world, so I'd
like to see that the elves are better than us!

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2268> Far
Horizons · Author:
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1> Bodkin · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 12:31:00 Score: 5
I pretty much sat down and read this in one sitting. It moved a bit slowly
for me at the beginning, but then the action starting getting a bit faster.
I have to admit that all the names and how they were connected was a bit
confusing, maybe a sort of key/legend would be good at the end of the whole
story, something to refer to. Overall, it was a very good mystery, action
story. Very enjoyable read.

Oh, and as soon as the strange elves in the wood mentioned a 'Lady' I just
*knew* it had to be the person it turned out to be :) And I'm glad I'm not
the only one with a thing for happy endings! Perfect!

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1252> Grey and
Pale Gold · Author:
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7> Kielle · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 12:40:05 Score: 3
You captured Eomer like I always saw him as a child. I don't suppose you've
written a back story to this one? You know, maybe to discuss why Theoden
said he liked Eomund, at least when they were younger? Made me wonder if he
disliked him later, and if so, why...

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2953>
Sapphire Aurae · Author:
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6> Bejai · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID:
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> Larian Elensar · 2005-08-09 12:41:11 Score: 5
I do like a story that shows the great love Elrond and Celebrian must have
had for each other. And this is a great story showing how the rings worked.
I read it from ff.net, and there were a lot of formatting and typo errors,
it looked like. A few minor grammar things too. (Like no punctuation at the
end of a line of dialogue). Aside from those things being mildly
distracting, it is still a wonderful story--I've read it before, and was
looking forward to reading it again, and my expectations were met. And I
love the bittersweet ending, but I'm a mush at heart :)

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3077> The
King's Commission · Author:
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2> Larner · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:12:19 Score: 10
This is a wonderfully long story, well worth every minute of reading time. I
was very quickly caught up in the point of view of the main character,
Ruvemir, a sculptor who was commissioned by the King to make a memorial for
the four hobbits, especially for Frodo, who has already left for the West.
We see Ruvemir's quest to understand hobbits in general, and Frodo in
particular. There are several appearances of every remaining member of the
Fellowship, as he talks to them to get an idea of what he is working
towards. And there is also a visit to the Shire, where he gets a chance to
speak to Frodo's family and friends in person. I thoroughly enjoyed that
part of the story. And once the actual work on the statues begins, we have
even more going on. In addition to the underlying character study of Frodo,
which is the main part of the story and the underlying theme of it all,
there is also a character study of Aragorn, as well as some humor, some
hurt/comfort, some exciting adventure, some suspenseful intrigue, and some
sweet romance. There is a bit of darkness as well, but handled with
sensitivity and subtlety. The original character, Ruvemir, is wonderfully
realized, and by the end of the story, he seems like more of a canon
character than an original character, so thoroughly has he captured the
interest. It's a brilliant story!

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3480> Reunion
in Minas Tirith · Author:
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5> Baggins Babe · Genres: Alternate Universe: Post-LOTR · ID:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:13:04 Score: 10
This is one of those very rare occurences, a happy alternate universe. In
this story, Frodo does not sail West, but chooses to remain in the Shire.
For several years, his health continues to deteriorate with each
anniversary, until he is nearly on the point of death. But a crisis, and a
miraculous intervention, enables him to finally heal of his wounds, and to
at last overcome all the guilt and psychological scars he has carried for so
long.
The story begins with a happy occasion: a visit by the Travellers to Gondor
at the invitation of the King, to celebrate the tenth anniversary of
Sauron's downfall. Frodo is among those visitors, and he is so obviously
happy and healthy that all who see him are amazed. We then see his illness
as a flashback, in a couple of very painful and angsty chapters. I like the
way the author used the flashback method, for without knowing in advance
that Frodo did indeed recover, it would be almost too painful. The author's
descriptions of his illness are harrowing. Afterwards, we are treated to a
loving and humorous account of his recovery, in the heart of his loving
family and friends, in the best comforting tradition of the hurt/comfort
genre. I truly loved this AU, and the author has made it very plausible and
appealing. A Frodo healed of his pain, grief and guilt is a marvelous thing,
and devoutly to be desired.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=10847>
"The Story of Poor, Unfortunate, Toffin" · Author:
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> grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor: Children · ID:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:20:30 Score: 9
This is one story in particular that never fails to make me laugh to the
point of hysterical tears, every single time I read it. It is very cleverly
told, a story of Merry's and Pippin's early childhood, framed within one
evening set in Minas Tirith after the Quest, as they tell it to a curious
Sam. The framing itself is cleverly and humorously done; and the
personalities of all four hobbits are also very well done. Each and every
one of them is perfectly in character. This author has a very deft way with
the relationships between them, most especially the cousins, and Merry and
Pippin in particular. This story, of an embarassing prank that a mischievous
and scheming young Merry once pulled on an unsuspecting little Pippin, and
how dear, sweet, little innocent Pippin unwittingly turns the tables on him,
is absolutely hysterical. I have no idea where she came up with the idea for
this story, but it is incredibly funny. Embarassment all around and to
spare. Yet with all of that, the story ends very tenderly and gently,
showing the love between the cousins, that not even ill-concieved pranks
could damage.
And the last sentence is a perfect punchline.

Title: <http://greywonderer.homestead.com/Hound.html> The Hound Of The
Bagginses · Author:
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> grey_wonderer · Genres: Crossovers · ID:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:22:50 Score: 10
This story, begun as an answer to a Live Journal challenge, is an amazing
piece of work. It is a crossover between the nineteenth century world of
Arthur Conan Doyle and J.R.R. Tolkien's Middle-earth. In this story, Merry
is Meriadoc Brandybuck, a sleuth after the mold of Sherlock Holmes; Pippin
is Dr. Peregrin Took, his clueless Dr. Watson. In this version of the Shire,
there is no Ring, for Bilbo refused point blank to go on the adventure with
the Dwarves, setting a whole other chain of events in motion. These hobbits
are not exactly what we are used to, and neither is the Shire; yet they do
not wholely lose their hobbitiness. The plot is convoluted and intriguing
with twists and turns at every point, and with a good deal of humorous
action. Even though it is funny, there is also a good deal of action and
suspense as well. The dialogue is absolutely delightful, and Peregrin is a
lovely character, so bumbling and prone to putting his foot in his mouth
that he drives everyone around him into a frenzy, which he does not
understand. Yet he remains brave and loyal in spite of it. I just adore him!
And Meriadoc makes a splendid Sherlock Holmes--very analytical and logical
in his deductions, and more than a little conceited. The parts that are from
his point of view are a scream. And Frodo is the potential victim of a
curse--he's not at all the Frodo we are used to. I loved this story!

Title: <http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=98>
The Prodigal Took · Author:
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:26:20 Score: 10
This story is seemingly so very simple on the face of it, an appealing
gapfiller, telling of how Peregrin Took came back to his home, and how he
found his family, and raised the Tooks to march back and help reclaim the
Shire. Yet there is so much more here, seen as hints, rather than being
fully stated: Pippin's strangeness to the other hobbits, coming back so
grown and grim, armed and armored; the idea that he had been declared dead
by his father; his relationship with his family, a warm one, yet there is
the hint of past trouble with his father; and the fears and sorrows of those
left behind--why could Paladin not maintain hope, when his wife and
daughters, sister and brother-in-law, could? We see Pippin facing changes
both sad--the premature aging of his parents, the death of a cousin--and
joyful--the marriage of his youngest sister and the birth of a new nephew.
And we see his own sorrows as he cannot seem to explain to his father why he
had to leave the Shire and the importance of what Frodo did, and the echoes
of Denethor and Faramir hover in the background of Pippin's heart, as he
fears for his own relationship with his father. The author has a sure grasp
of her characters' feelings and anxieties, and describes them well. This
lovely story, with its gracious author, is the one which turned me on to
writing fanfiction myself.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3170> A
Mid-Year's Walking Trip · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
9> GamgeeFest · Races/Places: Hobbits: Children · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=1238> 1238
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5> Dreamflower · 2005-08-09 16:28:35 Score: 10
I really love this story, which takes place not too terribly long before the
Quest. Merry, Pippin and Sam, who were frightened by a close call Frodo had
the previous year while on a walking trip, refuse to let him out of their
sight, and he ends up taking them along to a camping trip. The story covers
a good deal of territory--not only Frodo learning that he can depend on the
younger hobbits for good company, but Merry and Sam learning that they can
be friends in spite of the differences in their social standing, as well as
Merry trying to mend a long-standing misunderstanding with Sam, and Pippin
learning that he can hold his own in an unfamiliar situation, and the
mystery of Sam's control over Pippin's appetite. It is a good rehearsal for
their later conspiracy, and there is some nice foreshadowing. The
relationships between the four hobbits are very much in character, yet more
complex than those found in many fics--there are definitely different layers
to each connection, and there is a certain amount of angst. But there is
also a lot of humor and hobbity sweetness as well. My favorite part is after
they have finally returned to Bag End, and Frodo tucks his weary cousins in
as if they were still youngsters. But the funniest part is the epilogue,
when a curious Merry and an observant Frodo finally figure out how Sam keeps
Pippin from eating Frodo out of hole and smial.

Title: <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1242159/1/> All That Was Beauitiful ·
Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
0> Citrine · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=1270> 1270
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:47:27 Score: 3
An interesting foreshadowing of future developments. On the assumption that
Gríma is rather physically loathsome all his life, this does shed
interesting light on his personality, and the attraction Éowyn held for him
once. Well-written, and yes, just a touch creepy.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3539>
Rekindled · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> Kielle · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=1089> 1089
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:50:11 Score: 4
Sorry, Kielle, I'm using an old review once more. Fréalaf and Hanild finding
continuity amidst the wreckage in the preservation of the hearth fires was
very nicely done. They are both people who've endured a lot but are
determined to start anew, yet without losing their ties to the past,
represented in the hearthfire that has been carefully preserved throughout
their exile.

Title: <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/toshieldashieldmaide.htm> To Shield a
Shield-maiden · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> Marta · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=964> 964
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 13:51:20 Score: 4
"[Gríma] would have her, replace the one warrior’s death with a thousand
little ones." Great double entendre, and wholly suited to both its senses,
given what Gríma desires. And poor Théodred, unable to strike and so remove
the traitor at the court, because Gríma is too entwined there to be easily
removed in that manner. And so he's forced to hold back, for the sake of
others, and trust that Éowyn will be able to hold her own.

Title: <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/callonthewind.htm> Call on the Wind ·
Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> Marta · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=935> 935
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:07:58 Score: 3
I think those last lines make the drabble. Studs Terkel's phrase, "hope dies
last", comes to mind, and even though we know that Boromir is dying and will
not return, it is in its way true that hope has not entirely died and will
resurface in other men when one light goes out.

Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/318.html#cutid1> Marked
· Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=904> 904
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:08:31 Score: 2
What I said about there being a third party to any intrigue, and how this is
usually Éowyn in Rohan? Well, there we go! This one is a bit more uplifting
at the end, I suppose, insofar as she finds something to cling to in the
darkness.

Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/1131.html#cutid1>
Bystander · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=903> 903
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:08:58 Score: 4
There is always that third party who sees a little too much of other
people's secrets. Usually, this would be Éowyn in Rohan, but here we have
Elfhelm taking that part, the uninvited witness to Boromir and Théodred's
feelings for each other. He may think there is no one to mourn for him
should he die in war, and that therefore, he is safe in some sense, but I
think he will find eventually that he is mistaken.

Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/6882.html#cutid1>
Triptych · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=901> 901
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:09:27 Score: 3
Aha, a Théodred/Boromir ficlet! They do seem to attract each other, and
certainly the fact that both of them are doomed makes them in one way suited
to each other. I like the sense of rush and knowledge that these brief
moments are all that can be between them, before they part to their separate
deaths.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3460> The
Clasp Undone · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
9> DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=691> 691
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:10:23 Score: 6
This is probably the most complete filling of this particular gap that I've
read, and the confrontation that sent Éomer to the dungeons in the first
place is believably crafted. All the missing pieces are made to fit, and fit
very well together. The discussion between Éomer and Éowyn in the dungeons
is really the heart of the story, and it is a hard, painful discussion that
shows up just how desperate they were, and how determined. Éomer's little
ploy in wounding himself was very well-handled and gives him the kind of
cunning suited to someone who is not first a politician, but who for all
that is hardly stupid, and certainly isn't afraid to give a little (or even
all) of his blood to Rohan. A very satisfying story, and one that
Rohirrim-lovers will want to read.

Title:
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=2732&NGID=111>
Night and Fog · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> Azalais · Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=670> 670
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:10:52 Score: 6
This is a great story to read late at night, preferably in October. The idea
of watching the Ringwraiths clothe themselves and acquire form, where before
there had been nothing, takes you back to the days of watching the closet
door for the monsters that would surely emerge from their invisibility once
the lights had been out long enough. The description of all the animals
fleeing for their lives, as if before a great fire, is very evocative; I've
heard that sort of story recounted before by my mother, who actually saw it
as one of the evacuees, and the image of the animals fleeing and sometimes
burning as they ran left a great impression on me that is brought back to
life, if in a more chill way, by this story.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3567> Hero ·
Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
4> Tiana Luthien · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=594> 594
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:11:26 Score: 6
Éomer shows himself wiser than his years in this story, and brings an
unusual sort of comfort to a disappointed boy. The point at which Éomer
demands to know why Ingild came to see him, getting around Ingild's rather
evasive answer and straight to the heart of the matter, is well played. I
like the idea that Éomer has suspected the answer and been dreading it, as
if he, too, perhaps had an unrealistic expectation of a boy Ingild's age—as
if Ingild reminds him a bit too much of himself, which Tiana also suggests.
If this is so, then Éomer shows too that he has come to terms with his
younger self quite nicely: he isn't harsh, he spares Ingild his dignity, but
his honesty leaves no room for the abstract and unreal heroism of the old
tales.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=974> Like a
Woman · Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
4> Salsify · Races/Places: Rohan · ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=51&form_story_filter=509> 509
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Dwimordene · 2005-08-10 14:11:58 Score: 9
"She is a woman, and men’s codes of honor and duty make no place for us. If
a woman is to accomplish anything at all, it must be through guile and
sometimes a...certain lack of scruples. The rules are not made for women,
nor, I think, are women for the rules."

Salsify goes to the heart of the matter, and points out what is obvious to
anyone who has taken a look at power structures in just about any age. There
will always be some who are excluded from them, and expected to be grateful
or at least dutiful. And since that combination is antithetical to
everything human, it's inevitable that those in that position will either
self-destruct in various ways or learn to circumvent the rules in order not
to break with something greater than faith in someone else's law. The
deviousness of it is disgusting, but such are the choices laid out for
someone like Éowyn, who, as a woman, is not permitted to follow the codes
she was brought up to respect in men. That double standard is shown in this
fic in all its galling 'glory', and it's evident what must come of it, given
who and what Éowyn is. The fact that Gríma finds that double-standard useful
should be a clear hint that it is not of the light in this case. Bravo,
Salsify, for showing us the social context of Éowyn's choice and bringing
out just how untenable her position really was.



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Msg# 5137

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 51 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:00:20 Topic ID# 5137
Title: His
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=114&STID=2370&
SPOrdinal=7> Own Wisdom · Author: Nessime
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 493
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:12:36 Score: 3
I love this drabble—insightful, pithy, and with the necessary killer last
line that makes best use of the form. Háma is no fool—he knows very well
Gandalf hasn't any physical need for a staff. But as Nessime puts it:

"Worm-eaten directives taste foul in my mouth. I let them pass ...

'Tis worth the price to hear the thunder roll."

Well done, Nessime!


Title: Defense <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2198>
Enough · Author: Nessime
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 492
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:13:59 Score: 3
It's nice to see a little of the Battle of the Fords of Isen (both of them),
and from Grimbold's perspective. Even moreso than Elfhelm, he's
underwritten, and here we at least catch a glimpse of the relationship
between the two of them, and how it complicates their battle plans.

Title: Abrecan <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3053>
· Author: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 433
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:14:40 Score: 5
Something about the Rohirrim seems to inspire tales of riders and mares,
wherein the mare gets to play the role, as it were, of seductress or
mistress. Here's yet another! But what good fun, to find it a stormy
courtship and "consummation"—a fitting change given the Rider. And it's
always fun to see Aragorn get back as good as he gives and even get bested
every so often. He needs it, his audidence appreciates it, whether composed
of fictional characters (Thengel, Morwen, and Éofara certainly get a number
of good laughs out of the whole episode) or MEFA readers.

Title: A Question of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=430> Honour · Author:
Honesty
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
4> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 413
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=413>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:15:15 Score: 8
There's just something so wonderfully irreverant about this, and yet so very
right. Too many Éomer slash stories play him as the brainless, walking
hormone; not enough of them get that sense of spirit and challenge, whether
through his eyes or his lover's. Gimli has the right perspective to get at
that contentious nature that isn't easily mastered in Éomer (well, the man
did go to prison for threatening Grima in defiance of the law and in full
sight of everyone); and Honesty has the skill to pull off a set-up like
this:

"[H]e had just insulted the Lady Galadriel in my presence.

It made me want to smack him around the head - preferably with an axe - but
it also made me want to tear his clothes off and ravish him senseless. But I
can't help that. Blondes always have that effect on me - even Galadriel,
though of course I never have"

And make it actually work. This definitely makes much of the adage that love
is war, but unlike some other "fight-sex" fics I've read, I think this one
pulls it off, and leaves both characters in lust, at least, and still
determined to find out just how much the other can take. Well done!


Title: Folly
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=12976> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 366
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=366>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:15:45 Score: 2
I like the fact that Elfhelm is able to impart a lesson in captaincy to
Éowyn, even at that late hour. To lead, one must know the full shape of the
disaster awaiting... and say nothing.

Title: To <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397>
Reconcile · Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 336
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=336>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:16:15 Score: 2
The final line really makes the drabble work, as Éomer finds that healing
his sister is not in his hands, but he has it in him to accept that in good
grace and begin anew with her.

Title: Marriage of
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=220> Souls ·
Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 334
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:16:50 Score: 3
Another bit of sly point of view maneuvering to give the illusion of
imminent romance, although by the time "I know what he would ask of me by
the merest shift of his body, the tension of leg and thigh against me" is
uttered, you know who, or rather what, the narrator must be. Nevertheless,
quite entertaining.

Title: The End of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2600> Hope · Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 289
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=289>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:17:30 Score: 2
Good mood writing, here. The atmosphere of the fic is heavy, and you can
feel the life draining out of Dunharrow's people through the eyes of the
narrator.

Title: Among the
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=222> Fields of
Green · Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 280
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=280>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:17:56 Score: 2
Elfhelm is a somewhat underwritten character, so it's nice to see him get a
few moments to himself, which he of course then goes and dedicates to
others. I especially liked the opening: "I do what they cannot. ... I live."

Title: Jessed <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4016>
· Author: Cupiscent
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
4> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 213
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=213>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:18:37 Score: 6
It is nice to see an Éowyn "romance" with someone other than Faramir or
Gríma, and not yet with Aragorn, although he's in this by the end, if only
in absentia (as always). It's an interesting reversal, with Háma being both
the older man, and also the body that serves another, rather than the
reverse. The desperation is about right, I think, for this sort of
relationship, and Éowyn's untouchability, even in the most intimate of
settings, is well-written. The eroticism fits the story, and I don't have
much trouble, even, putting this alongside the canonical events and seeing
it as something that perhaps might have happened. Bravo, Cupiscent!

Title: Challenge
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11572> · Author:
Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble · ID: 207
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:19:04 Score: 1
A cute, horsey interaction for Éomer and Théodred. Classic punchline.

Title: Sulnur <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/sulnur.htm> · Author:
sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 145
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 14:19:30 Score: 2
Ah, the old point of view trick, which makes what could be a clichéd love
scene something else once one reaches the second half of the story. One
suspects the switch is coming, but it's fun nevertheless.

Title: Light On
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=270> the Way ·
Author: Larner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Romance · ID: 794
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=794>
Reviewer: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan · 2005-08-10 17:51:49 Score: 6
This is absolutely one of the most engaging fics that I have read in quite
some time. The attention to detail, voice and canon, while extrapolating on
a subject only touched upon IN cannon is remarkable. I found myself drawn in
both visually and emotionally.

It is a remarkable story that can impact how a reader views parts of
Tolkien's world, and you have managed to do that for me, and then some. I
will never be able to read or think of the deaths of Aragorn and Arwen again
without having this delightfully sad tale come to mind. The images and
feelings are indelibly etched into my mind and my heart.

A very compelling read and a story that I have bookmarked to read again and
again. I don't do that often!

Title: In Defense
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4026> · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 94
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> · 2005-08-10 21:03:14 Score: 8
I liked the premise and many of the arguments of this article. How
refreshing to see a female Tolkien character defended! Werecat has done a
thoughtful job of tracking down and presenting the scant Berúthiel canon
references. I had one criticism. I wished that the author had been able to
defend the Queen without placing her in a Gondoron society that viewed
queens as having little social worth except as ornaments; a society in which
a bored male who disliked his loveless marriage could indulge himself with
the “willing maids.” Yes, human medieval society was probably like that, but
come on! We’re talking <i> fantasy</i> medieval society written by and for
women, mostly. Can’t we equalize it a little?

Anyway, I loved the practical approach that Werecat used to present her
defenses of this unlucky queen. Werecat, you would make a great
documenatarian! And when we read about the love you extend to your
beautiful, mysterious cats, which shines through all your writing, we can
remember to extend it to the rest of the unique creatures who share the
space with us.

A lovable and enjoyable piece. Good job.


Title: Tolkien and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3843> the Problem of
Characterisation: Eowyn and Arwen · Author: Fionnabhair
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
6> Nic Aillil · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 351
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> · 2005-08-10 21:06:39 Score: 10
I found this essay thought-provoking. While reading it I was reminded of the
many Tolkien fanworks that portray Éowyn, Arwen, and ordinary rank-and-file
women so negatively. Depressed, suicidal, able only to think of a man,
whorish, uneducated, lacking social clout of any kind, etc. etc. ad nauseum.
When I detect this theme in fan fiction I flee, weirdly dismayed and
chortling, and I ask myself, Why?

If these writers, who are almost all women, lived in a genuinely egalitarian
society that made no differentiation between men and women in dispensing the
privileges and resources, then I can see exploring the dark side, trying to
experience vicariously what it might feel like to be a second class citizen.

But since we live in societies in which men predominate in every field that
society rewards - say, education, religion, medicine, corporations,
military, politics, art, and science, for instance – then why would women
portray women as losers in their fantasy fiction? It isn’t as if Tolkien
didn’t provide avenues of equality to explore, especially for the Elves (see
Laws and Customs among the Eldar, HoME Morgoth’s Ring).

Why do they see Éowyn as a coward when Merry, whose actions and feelings are
very nearly identical to hers, is lauded as a hero? The writers hasten to
point out that there are differences between Merry’s motivations and
Éowyn’s. Yes, there are. But why insist that the differences are great, when
you have the choice to view them as negligible and end up with a positive
view of Éowyn?

Why portray poor women as prostitutes in a society that the writer is
careful to specify as male-dominated, and then expect the female reader
enjoy the story?

I think it is some form of desperate denial - that women today have been
raised to think that women’s liberation took care of the problem for them
years ago, when their own present experiences show it has not. So the
writers go out of their way to bash heroines, perhaps thinking that if we
show how even-handed we are, how fair we are in criticizing our own, then
perhaps the society around will straighten out and become fair also.

I wish.

But since that is not how it works, I would rather read about women who are
powerful, talented, confident, strong, fully possessed of all the goodies
that society has to offer.

You see, I said that this article was thought-provoking. The author has made
a diligent and considered effort to analyze Tolkien’s characterizations in
general and as applied to Éowyn and Arwen. Good job. Many thanks for this
piece.

And if any fan fiction writer reads this and wants to write about women
characters, please make them strong, confident, not perfect mind you, but
powerful, purposeful, vibrant, heroines. Please.

*It would be such a refreshing change.*


Title: The Problem of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4062> Eowyn: A Look
at Ethics and Values in Middle-earth · Author: Madgamgee
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
7> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 376
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Reviewer: Chathol-linn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
> · 2005-08-10 21:16:51 Score: 10
“Deserter or Heroine? Actually she is both” – that is the conclusion of this
article.

Well, no. Actually she is a heroine of the ages. But notwithstanding the
equivocation of the writer’s conclusion, I still liked, (no, I loved) the
defense of Éowyn. I will never understand why (mostly) women writers bash
Éowyn when applauding Merry, even though their actions were so similar. The
writer has a choice – to exaggerate the differences and conclude that Éowyn
is defective, or to discount the differences and see Éowyn as equal or
superior to the male Hobbit.

If these writers, who are almost all women, lived in a genuinely egalitarian
society that made no differentiation between men and women in dispensing the
privileges and resources, then I can see exploring the dark side, trying to
experience vicariously what it might feel like to be a second class citizen.

But since we live in societies in which men predominate in every field that
society rewards - say, education, religion, medicine, corporations,
military, politics, art, and science, for instance – then why would women
portray women as losers in their fantasy fiction? It isn’t as if Tolkien
didn’t provide avenues of equality to explore, especially for the Elves (see
Laws and Customs among the Eldar, HoME Morgoth’s Ring).

I think it is some form of desperate denial - that women today have been
raised to think that women’s liberation took care of the equality problem
for them years ago, when their own present experiences show it has not. So
the writers go out of their way to bash heroines, perhaps thinking that if
we show how even-handed we are, how fair we are in criticizing our own, then
perhaps the society around us will prove to be fair also.

It is tough to go against such an attitude, which I think is born of an
internalization of fear. So I applaud this defense of a major female
character in Tolkien’s world. I will go out of my way to read more by this
author. Thank you..

Fan fiction writers, I will be the constant reader of stories that portray
women characters, as strong, confident, not perfect mind you, but powerful,
purposeful, vibrant, heroines. Please. *It would be such a refreshing
change.*


Title: What Thou Lovest <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/lovestwell1.html>
Well · Author: LadyAranel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 458
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Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-08-10 21:27:29 Score: 7
ahh, Lady Aranel, it breaks my heart when you don't update this wonderfully
sad and bittersweet picture of both love and friendship. I'd dearly love to
see this one finished.

It is such a delightful view of Faramir and Eowyn, and especially of Legolas
in the years after the war. All settled down, except for the lonely Wood
Elf. I truly enjoy seeing homey Faramir and mother-Eowyn, but it breaks my
heart to see Legolas with Elboron, and no child of his own. When he talks
about feeling the beat of two hearts in Eowyn, it is just heartbreaking. He
must be fighting the sea longing, and this longing as well, but he must also
know, if he loved a mortal, that he could still have a long life with her
and then sail. I know I have seen other chapters of this, but not so many
that I know where it is headed. Every time I re-read it, I am still curious
to know more. You will have to quit teasing us and get those other chapters
polished and online.


Title: Fathers
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13225> and Sons,
Cousins and Brothers · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1383
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:37:04 Score: 2
Wise words from Théoden, transforming the ordinary dynamics of a
sibling-esque relationship into a lesson for kingship.

Title: More
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13240> like to
the swift sons of Eorl · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1377
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=1377>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:37:31 Score: 1
Interesting to see Boromir among the Rohirrim, and see that titular line in
action.

Title: Pride
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13208> · Author:
Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1366
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:37:59 Score: 2
Love at first sight, it seems, comes with some bruising! Firefoot is rather
adorable, here, and I like Éomer's rationale for naming him so.

Title: A net
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13213> of warring
duties · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1361
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:38:27 Score: 2
That would be classic Denethor: all the right facts, all the wrong
connections around the one point where he might derive some needed hope.

Title: Morgul
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13137> Vale ·
Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1306
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:39:02 Score: 2
The time frame isn't clear, here, but assuming this is Aragorn's earlier
visit, wherein "if a man must... tread the deadly flowers of Morgul Vale,
then perils he will have", that last line is deliciously ironic.

Title: His Lady's Horse <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/hisladyshorse.htm> ·
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 943
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:40:01 Score: 2
Hm. Horses do seem to stand in for romantic partners, whether only
apparently or in truth, in this fandom! I loved that last line. Of course
he's not thinking of Arwen. Right...

Title: Tales of the Hunter <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=857>
· Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 722
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=52&form_story_filter=722>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:40:29 Score: 2
Stories within stories. I like the way the tale is repeated, and that
Anardil hears it differently as a Ranger than he did as a little boy,
mediated as the story is now by the loss of the father who figures in it.

Title: A Lullaby for
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1154> the Longest
Night · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 503
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:41:06 Score: 2
A believably Dúnadan carol. Aragorn is not the only Ranger watched over in
thought, and one gets a sense of the depth to which old customs go for the
Rangers and their people.



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Msg# 5138

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 52 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:01:07 Topic ID# 5138
Title: Downfall
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11548> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 354
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:41:41 Score: 3
Pride goeth—what a tragedy, and in just two hundred words. It seems evident
that not all of the Faithful left in Númenor could have been crammed aboard
those nine ships. But although these two have, sadly, missed the boats, they
still hold onto hope, and remain faithful—to each other, and the hope that
death is not an end.

Title: Swords <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3102>
Returned · Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 172
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:42:23 Score: 1
Good use of a young character to describe a custom that otherwise would go
largely unspoken among the Dúnedain of Arnor.

Title: Idle Leaves
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3344> · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 68
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-10 22:43:53 Score: 5
I think the last three are my favorites from this lot. The bit about Aragorn
pretending not to notice his opponent is letting him win the game says
there's a lot going on more interesting than the chess itself; followed hard
by that sad little wondering about his mother, whose life is growing thin,
these two pieces stretch his homelife between, I would guess, the two women
in his life, between hope and exhaustion. And then the little note
explicitly to his father, assuring him that the North is safe completes that
little family tableau.

Title: You <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1993&cid=8580>
Ask Too Much · Author: LKK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
7> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 643
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=55&form_story_filter=643>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-10 23:53:57 Score: 4
"You beg that I not worry. I cannot. For I am your king and your father."

I think this is my favourite line of this drabble, if only because it
includes the political as well as the personal side of their relationships.
Legolas was carrying Thranduil's messages so he was acting in the capacity
of a liege, and so it was quite daring for Legolas to come on the Quest at
all. This was well done.

Title: Yule in
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge11/5148.html#cutid1> Hollin ·
Author: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1143
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=55&form_story_filter=1143>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-11 00:11:27 Score: 2
I liked this. You did a good job at showing the connections between and
sympathy for the Big People members of the Fellowship (Gandalf, Aragorn,
Legolas, Gimli, and Boromir), and the hobbits.

Title: Wise
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13230> Enough ·
Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 552
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-11 00:24:58 Score: 8
In the beginning this reads like any number of idyllic scenes from the
Fourth Age. But half way through one realises that it isn't a future that
has already been realised, but Faramir's deluded fantasy of what would
happen if he were to take the Ring makes the drabble all the more powerful.
I particularly liked the last line, "Would he save what he held most dear if
nothing would grow fair or bear fruit or flower again without the Enemy's
taint?" I'm not sure if you meant it, but this seemed like a neat play on
Gandalf's line in "Minas Tirith": "And for my part, I shall not wholly fail
of my task, though Gondor should perish, if anything passes through this
night that can still grow fair or bear fruit and flower again in days to
come."

Oh, and kudos for realising that yes Faramir was tempted by the Ring, yes he
had a real danger of not passing the test, but yes he realised in time the
ring's deception. If only Peter Jackson's scriptwriters had been wise enough
to realise that little fact. ;-)

Title: Written
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=97&STID=2223&S
POrdinal=20> on Cloth · Author: shadow975
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
9> · Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 527
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-11 00:44:38 Score: 4
I like to write stories that take objects and use them to explore deeper
themes. This piece, which looked at the deeper themes behind those objects
instead of just using objects as a tool, was a real treat. Add that to the
fact that this story takes two of my favourite characters and writes them in
a way that I found both refreshing and true to canon... this was a really
nice read.

Title: Under
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=12467> Siege ·
Author: Forodwaith
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> · Races/Places: Elves: Drabble · ID: 387
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 01:58:02 Score: 3
I found it very appropriate that even under seige herself, Arwen's thoughts
would turn to Aragorn. It reminds me of how the thoughts of Gandalf and
Aragorn kept turning to Frodo and Sam, who were even nearer the Enemy than
they were. It's a selfless quality in all of them, and I like that it's
shared.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=10269> Sundering
Seas · Author: Elana
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 01:58:51 Score: 3
I like the sense of reluctant acceptance in this drabble. It's certainly not
a happy drabble, but it wasn't overflowing with grief, either. It had the
feel of the inevitable, and Elrond of all people should probably know how to
confront that. His response to Celebrian's departure felt very graceful and
very wise, and I like that idea. Good job.

Title: End of
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/N/Naresha/EndOfDays.htm> Days ·
Author: Naresha
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 01:59:20 Score: 3
Galadriel and Arwen both know what's coming in the future, and I like the
way that even in the midst of joy, neither one can truly forget what Arwen's
choices mean. Galadriel sees it in herself and also in Arwen, and I think it
might be a curse of the elves, to never truly move away from sorrow.
Sobering little piece.

Title: To Let
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1138> Go ·
Author: Meril
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 01:59:44 Score: 3
The elves probably got used to accepting a lot of the things they couldn't
change, so it doesn't surprise me that Celeborn accepts that Galadriel must
depart. And it's probably something he's expected, too. I like the way he
expresses it here, and I like his perspective on Galadriel. She seems
adrift, which I think is very fitting.

Title: Family
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8124> Resemblance
· Author: Forodwaith
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:00:41 Score: 3
I'm becoming more and more attached to the notion of Arwen as a healer.
Elrohir and Elladan are certainly more attuned to the sword than to healing
arts, which leaves Arwen to follow her father's footsteps. And I really like
the idea, particularly as it's presented here with Elrond noting they've
created two healers for two hunters. Nicely done.

Title: Hope <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/hope.htm> · Author: Marta
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:03:15 Score: 4
Now here's a fascinating concept! I like the idea that Glorfindel was
despairing even as he approached Aragorn. This also provided an interesting
contrast to the bells and hoofbeats that were heard by the hobbits when
Glorfindel came up the road. They found them lighter than what is depicted
here, and it's a great demonstration of just how different things are for an
elf than for four lost hobbits. Brilliant play on perspectives. I liked it
very much.

Title: Faithful
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13242> companion
· Author: Tanaqui
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:04:47 Score: 4
This is the kind of drabble that hits hard. It's poised on the edge of
tragic events, but it stops just before they take place. The tone is ominous
and foreboding, but not to the point of suspecting just how wrong things are
about to go. And that stings, because as readers, we know just how
disastrous this venture will prove for Beleg. Loved the words about friendly
hands guarding something and keeping it safe. The irony was subtle but
definitely appreciated. Great drabble.

Title: Overheard
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9085> at a
Wedding · Author: Forodwaith
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:06:16 Score: 4
I like the idea that Elrond and Celebrian would choose contrast as a theme
of sorts for their wedding. And for that contrast, they chose colors and
shades that would compliment the other, essentially blending the contrast.
That's a fascinating concept, especially given their respective backgrounds,
and I enjoyed the comments that circulated because of it.

Title: Details
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13241> · Author:
Tanaqui
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:08:21 Score: 3
I like this take on how the Elessar came back to Galadriel so she could give
it to Aragorn. And I feel it very appropriate that Elrond's daughter would
be concerned enough with the details of a prophecy that she refused to hand
it on herself. She would feel that part belonged to Galadriel. Interesting
concept.

Title: Refuge
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13227> · Author:
Tanaqui
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:09:19 Score: 5
I like the way this drabble plays with different tones. At first, there is a
hint of desperation as Elrond describes the way that their flight is always
hindered by valleys and deep cuttings. But by the end of these hundred
words, the desperation is replaced by a kind of quiet weariness. I loved the
counterpoint of trees and nightingales, especially given Elrond's heritage
on his mother's side. And the appearance of what might be his father's star
suggests that this refuge is indeed a good place for a warrior to rest.
Great writing.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13144> Weaving is
the Easy Part · Author: Gwynnyd
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:13:30 Score: 5
There was some truly amazing imagery in this drabble. I think that my
favorite phrase was "to confound Shadow with its own shades." I love the
intricate dance that Arwen performs in her weaving, and I love the way she
likens it to what Aragorn is doing. It becomes a symbol for not just their
struggle against the Enemy but also for their life and their struggle to be
together. They go about it in different ways, but ultimately, their tasks
are very much the same. I really like that idea, as it lends symmetry to the
tale of their love. Beautifully written.

Title: Optics
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=34> II ·
Author: Dwimordene
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:17:58 Score: 6
The ending of this drabble was wonderful, both for its phrasing and its play
on words. Passed, not past. There's a big difference in there, and it feels
as though Arwen realizes this, especially when she goes back to memories of
Celebrian's lessons for help in singing Celebrian's song. The lessons
themselves are also very fitting. The song will be different depending upon
the singer, and knowing this, who better to sing than Celebrian's daughter?
I love the idea of this being a tribute, and I love the song that comes out
and its metaphors of silver, leaves, and flame. There are echoes for all the
varied parts of Celebrian's ancestry in that, and the notion that these
echoes form an image is brilliant. Thank you so much for this amazing
tribute to both Celebrian and to Arwen.

Title: Three for the
<http://www.freewebs.com/aure/threefortheelvenlord.htm> Elven-lords ·
Author: Marta
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> Tiger · 2005-08-11 02:22:36 Score: 5
I love Celeborn's wisdom in this drabble. He must have had reservations when
Galadriel took Nenya, for he saw with his own eyes what the workmanship of
the Noldor could do and what it could stir in the hearts of those who
desired it. The trees he's seen might not be as glorious, but it's a less
perilous beauty than what Galadriel is coveting. I love that Celeborn
decides to stand beside her no matter the decision, but I love that he
recognizes the danger and tries to warn her. He's not called the Wise for
nothing.

Title: Wreath of Steel
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=166> and Silver ·
Author: Kielle
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-08-11 09:07:33 Score: 10
In the afternote you ask "Did the water's change signify Galadriel's
continued taint, or was the blood washed away at last?" It's interesting
that you ask that question, because I think it could go either way.
Personally I want to believe that the taint was washed away. And I think
canon suggests this answer (unless you want to posit some gargantuan
sacrifice between this point and the end of the Third Age, when she is
allowed to sail West). But I think in this case the interesting point is not
the answer but the question, if you know what I mean. Once I sat down and
thought about it, I realised that I couldn't easily dismiss eithehr option.

You say in your note before the story that Galadriel isn't your normal type
of character, and she isn't my normal character to read. I suppose in that
sense we're an interesting pair. ;-) Because I had a difinite thrill reading
this, comparable (I think) to what you must have felt writing it. I enjoyed
it so much because she was new to me -- and because you brought such a nice
original interpretation to this. My only qualm is that in the Celeborn and
Galadriel essay in UT, Tolkien suggests that Galadriel fought *against* the
Feanorians in defence of her mother's kin. I'm not sure if you would
consider rewriting this with that fact in mind. Because Galadriel still is a
kinslayer if she kills any of her family fighting for Feanor. It could be
very interesting and might be worth considering -- but even without that,
this was really a very good read.

Title: Women's <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3040>
Work · Author: JediShampoo
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-08-11 16:45:32 Score: 10
First things first, I should say how utterly, completely glad I was that you
did not have Eowyn try to marry the women off against their will. We don't
know what led these women to take up prostitution, of course, but I fan't
see it being a particularly honourable profession even among them, and I
don't think there would have been much choice in the matter: they possibly
didn't have any other choice. I hate to think that they would be forced to
give up all choice in their own lives because they weren't wealthy. (And I
will stop here before I stray too far down the road of politics for this
forum.)

Your original characters were lovely. Elleth was very earthly (though I did
wonder at that name for someone from the north), and I loved the mercantile
spirit you infused in your horse-seller. Of course Faramir would let Eowyn
see over that matter. It reminded me of Gandalf's statement that if you have
a ranger as your guide you should listen to him.

I think my favourite part about this, though, was that neither Faramir nor
Eowyn was perfect. Eowyn especially, she really did expect Faramir to read
mindss here. She was delightfully hormonal, but you didn't make her out to
be impossible. And Faramir, too, was irritated just enough to keep him from
becoming a Sue. And the ending... mmm, just enough hints of a truly romantic
scene to make it perfect. This was a very nice little story.

Title: Walk No More
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4475> in Shadow ·
Author: Anoriath
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:39:58 Score: 3
An amusing first meeting of soon-to-be brothers-in-law, and it's good to see
Faramir in tyrannical mode, the terror of his father's erstwhile chamberlain
and insisting on things being done *his* way in no uncertain terms. Éomer
(to say nothing of Éowyn) will be good for him if this is what they inspire.
And I did like the comparison of Éomer and Boromir.

Title: And These
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2482> Pearls That
Were Her Eyes · Author: Regina
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:41:52 Score: 6
Miriel's tale is certainly the nightmare measure of any woman's fears—to be
shackled to her rapist, and forced at the same time to maintain every
appearance of normalcy while anything that makes life worthwhile is leeched
away. Miriel's futile efforts, her inability to be the heroine, don't
perhaps sit well with us, but certainly strike a true chord. I'm not quite
sure what to think of the quasi-seduction of Isildur, at least when
considered w.r.t. him, but I can certainly see Miriel, desperate as she is,
lonely as she is, seeking what she can from anyone who would give her
kindness and mourning its loss, even if that means she'd willingly displace
another woman.

Title: Gríma's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1287&NGID=51>
Giftgiving · Author: Alawa
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:42:17 Score: 3
I think the highest praise I can say of this is that it inspired a definite
wince and a moment of squick to think of exactly what Gríma's gift-giving
is. Twenty-five words, coated with wormy slime--that's this haiku set! And
that's a compliment, even.


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Msg# 5139

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 53 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:01:29 Topic ID# 5139
Title: Song of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3939> Faithful ·
Author: Ninquelosse
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:42:45 Score: 3
Definitely more prayer like than a simple poem; I'm not familiar with this
particular hymn, although Chesterton is certainly a name in apologetics,
iirc. The religion issue in Númenor is always a bit hard to handle, but I
could imagine this being circulated in the Númenorean underground.

Title: The Creation
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4282> of Horses ·
Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:43:13 Score: 2
This seems a very believable myth for the Rohirrim, and in a form that (to
me at any rate) successfully evokes the style of an Anglo-Saxon poem.

Title: Battle Song of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4740> the Riddermark
· Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:43:35 Score: 1
I don't have it in me to analyze the alliterative patterns in this poem, I
only know that I enjoyed them.

Title: Whispers <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2796>
· Author: Ellisande
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:43:55 Score: 3
"The Lament for Boromir" seems to be fertile ground for Ellisande. This does
mimic very nicely the tenor of the original poem, and Anduin gains a
believable voice here, as pallbearer for Boromir. The river does not simply
protect and honor his bones, but keeps his memory clean and safe as well.

Title: Eyes like the
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=4609> Moon · Author:
Werecat
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:45:49 Score: 6
It's not the poetry so much as the setting that's impressive in this piece.
There's nothing worse than receiving hard proof that your enemy is a human
being not so very different from oneself, and that his loved ones exist and
will mourn him and curse his killer—who would be you. Or in this case,
Faramir, who knows full well the ugly image of himself that is reflected
through these words. He can't undo what he's done, or avoid the fact that
whatever he may feel, he *is* the man responsible for the grief the unnamed
lover will feel, and it's to his credit that he allows himself to feel fully
that burden of responsibility and to seek to honor this unknown soldier in
some small way. It's a beautiful little scene, Werecat. Well done, once
again!

Title: 110 <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4427> ·
Author: Aeneid
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-11 21:46:22 Score: 4
I wasn't sure how this would fit together, but after the first verse and
prose set, the rest begins to coalesce and you just let it sweep you along.
Half reflection, half sheer immediacy, but Aeneid holds it together for you,
and gives you a rather impressionist version of Boromir's journey north. It
works well, hits the emotional high points (or low points, however you look
at it) in all their physicality when called for, and there's no sense of
anything missing. Nicely done

Title: Red Fire,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2794> Black Blood ·
Author: just_sphinx
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=92
> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 1121
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:19:15 Score: 3
This just shows the danger of making oneself the object of a Dark Lord's
attention. There are loves that are just pathological, and Morgoth's
obsessional reliving of Maedhros, his enjoyment of him, is certainly that.
An interesting vignette, though.

Title: Sweet Meat
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2336> · Author:
Ijemanja
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
5> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 1073
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=56&form_story_filter=1073>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:19:37 Score: 3
Ijemanja seems to do well with the elemental forces in Middle-earth: first
Goldberry, and now the insatiable hunger of Shelob, find voice in her
writing. A fitting ending, for it's true that hunger will remain with us no
matter what, and Shelob merely personifies it in its lust and greed. In that
sense, she will always be with us, will always recover. Well done!

Title: Under the Lonely Mountain Cold
<http://www.freewebs.com/aure/utlmc.htm> · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Races/Places: Villains: Poetry · ID: 965
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:20:01 Score: 2
Dwarves, it seems, like a certain morbid humor. I have the old Rankin-Bass
tune running through my head now, thanks to this poem!

Title: Death Doth Come <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/deathdothcome.htm> ·
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Races/Places: Villains: Poetry · ID: 936
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:20:23 Score: 2
Chilling, and with that sing-song quality that hints at madness. This seems
to me to fit very well with the barrow-wight and its deadly song.

Title: Bitter
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=369> as Willow
· Author: Nickey
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
4> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 801
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:20:44 Score: 3
Inside the heart of a huorn, things do look different! The seduction of Old
Man Willow is given a fascinating life in Nickey's vignette. Now indeed we
see why there is need of Treebeard and the other Ents to prevent them from
harming others. Well done!

Title: Nine <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2350522/1/> Riders · Author:
Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 791
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:21:18 Score: 6
Rabidsamfan comes through with nine distinctly different Nazgûl. I have to
say, number eight was the most tragic to me—one wonders about him, that he
*should* retain even a shred of love so late into the game. You actually
feel for him when those horses die. On the other hand, number five is
delightful—a bookish, geeky Nazgûl! Who'd have imagined it? if only he would
refrain from dissecting the objects of his interest, one imagines one could
get to like him. And being always slightly annoyed by Elves lately, I can't
but appreciate the annoyance of number four; I also appreciate the problem
of adjectives and their capitalization that the Witch-king encounters.
Brevity is indeed the soul of wit here. Well done!

Title: This Too Shall Pass <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=461>
· Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 742
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:21:43 Score: 4
Probably the most sensible thing to come out of that movieverse scene yet!
The Witch-king, oddly enough, feels strangely human here, if one discounts
little things like being undead, and the image of him poking through
steaming piles of fell beast droppings is amusing. So, too, the orc
beast-tender, who adds that "color" to the Barad-dûr scene. And the last
line is just evil.

Title: Shadowsong
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4038> · Author:
Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 714
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=56&form_story_filter=714>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:22:04 Score: 6
Even when writing prose, there's a rhythm in Ellisande's writing, and the
repetition of lines moves us closer to a kind of poem. That the Witch-king
should reject such things as joy and happiness for raw power, and surrender
even his memories, and think himself blessed in a way—there's the power of
the Ring and the rings, the very evidence of the thralldom that he thinks to
deny by embracing the substitutes for such human things as enjoyment of the
sunrise. He's empty, filled with the darkness that seems eternal only
because in him, it blots out everything else. The very placement of the Ring
inscription, bracketing the Witch-king's narrative, shows what really
controls him.

Title: Enmities
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4139&NGID=175> ·
Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 561
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:22:33 Score: 4
Pity governs many fates, and even though it doesn't save Drukh, or her three
children, it's an interesting moment of mercy nonetheless. I liked the fact
that Drukh was at the battle of Pelennor, working for the defeat of Gondor
like any other Orc, and once again, the extinction of the Orcs is given some
serious consideration as to what it means and why it's happening. It makes
that moment of futile pity at the end feel sharper.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13221> Long March
· Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 542
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:22:58 Score: 2
It's always the same reasons and horror stories that motivate men to fight,
isn't it? A nice little glimpse into our favorite nameless Haradrim's mind.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=2681&NGID=40>
Cornfield · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 530
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:23:31 Score: 2
So Lotho's into import crops, is he? And what, I wonder, would Saruman's
purposes be for sending it to the Shire? Interesting...

Title: Once
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1143> ·
Author: Meril
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
3> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 485
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=56&form_story_filter=485>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:24:01 Score: 3
"But years of trickery and deceit turned him into less-than-a-man: something
small and shriveled and mean." I like how this line gets at the truth of the
Witch-king, in what might otherwise seem the moment of his triumph on
Pelennor fields. Also, the voice that *is* the essence of truth is a
well-turned phrase.

Title: Gift of <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1412>
Rule · Author: Lyllyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
8> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 470
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:24:33 Score: 4
Not everything is evil in the beginning, at least not wholly so. It's a very
plausible seduction, and I like how the reports of the councilors in the
beginning set up the following scenes, so that the future Witch-king isn't
wholly unsuspicious of the being that appears before him. But in the end,
Sauron is too cunning a seducer, and knows very well how to twist what is
good in a desire to his own ends.

Title: Sauron
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=395&SPOrdinal=2>
· Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Races/Places: Villains: Poetry · ID: 442
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=56&form_story_filter=442>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:25:16 Score: 1
Nicely captures the triumphalist spirit of Sauron, in all his defiant pride
and glory, before the breaking of Númenor.

Title: Melkor <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=395> ·
Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Races/Places: Villains: Poetry · ID: 440
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:25:51 Score: 3

"And you, who the story did spin

You alone do not say I was wrong

For only in darkness the light

And only in silence, the song"

Ah, Melkor understands the dialectical nature of being, it seems. It's the
great theodical dilemma, that when God creates in God's goodness, evil too
is born and seems needed to uncover the full nature of goodness.


Title: Orc's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=13341> Best
Friend · Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 384
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:26:16 Score: 3
Ooh, even the wargs have a certain poetry here! I love that they sing to the
stars, while their riders and captors cannot understand and indeed denigrate
their music. And what a lovely, vicious relationship, reminding me of that
line from "The Hobbit", I think, that for wargs to feast on orc flesh is the
friendship of their kinds.

Title: Full <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4115>
Circle · Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 348
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=56&form_story_filter=348>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:26:40 Score: 5
Ah, Werecat, who loves to make orcs into authors! And she does it again, and
does it well, forcing a consideration of what it means that Orcs become
extinct. But also, it's curious that an aging Orc should, suddenly,
unexpectedly, dream of white sails, and that Kolgrun should come to care so
that he would commit his own blood to the setting down of this last, perhaps
only, tale of his own kind. What does it mean that it takes the extinction
of his kind before the Valar dispense a drop of grace into the confused and
damaged mind of an Orc? An unsettling story, all told.

Title: Alas,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13574> Poor
Ufthak! · Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:27:16 Score: 1
Friendship is most definitely fleeting among Orcs, particularly in
misfortune, it seems.

Title: For <http://www.quillsandink.com/fiction/viewstory.php?sid=112&i=1>
Love of Creation · Author: Andreth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
6> · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 92
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:28:59 Score: 3
I think the Fëanor comparison is probably my favorite part of this story. We
all know that Fëanor's deeds were certainly cruel and evil, but that the
initial act of creating the Silmarils might also have been tainted with a
possessiveness that would undermine their 'substantive', I suppose you could
call it, good is one that doesn't seem to enter elvish minds.


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Msg# 5140

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 54 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:01:57 Topic ID# 5140
Title: The Last <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3586>
Stand · Author: Soledad
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
6> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 76
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:29:27 Score: 7
Well it's certainly a much more interesting set of Orcs in this story than
one usually sees. I'm in two minds about the line-swapping, as it really
does dilute the rivalry (as opposed to plain antipathy and hatred) between
Grishnákh and Uglúk, which I personally love, but in terms of serving the
broader purpose of making an Orc band come alive, it does work. I quite
liked Lugdush, and the clan-oriented survivalism of the Uruk-hai, as well as
the ways in which their elvish lineage gets played out in the exhaustion of
bringing a child (or children) into the world. The final battle between
Éomer and Uglúk was well-done, I thought, and an interesting moment. I
suppose Éomer's acknowledgment that Uglúk fought well was as close to a
cross-cultural connection between Orcs and Men as it is possible to come.
Definitely an enjoyable read.

Title: The Sand
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1210> Circle ·
Author: A
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=91
> L Milton · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 49
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 00:30:01 Score: 3
What I love about this story is that Kuon the oliphaunt is such an imperious
character, despite having no speaking part. And the evocation of the
different cultures that A L Milton has created gives one a feeling of being
immersed in a world that feels full and grounded, that has its own gravity.

Title: Wisdom's <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=451>
Thrall · Author: Mouse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
6> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 1011
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-12 00:30:45 Score: 4
I have to admit that I only have a passing acquaintance with the characters
in this piece. But the races are definitely there, both the house of the
Elf-friends and the Easterlings. More than that, I am always amazed by how
well you nail human nature here, and the point you raise (where exactly is
the boundary between man and beast?) is a good one. It makes me wonder if
this wasn't a road like the one Melkor used to make Orcs from Elves.

Title: Blizzard! <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3576>
· Author: Nilmandra
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=44
4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1308
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-08-12 01:33:06 Score: 3
This is the most gorgeous little Legolas story, featuring delightful
characters. I love Tinania - and the suggestion that Legolas's most
perceptive brother might be interested in her. And having Gandalf turn up as
a provider of festive jollity is something to relish. I hope you feel
inspired to extend your stories of Legolas's childhood. I love this world.

Title: Wish upon a star <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2088089/1/> · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 194
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-12 11:15:12 Score: 1
Yet another example of the infamous warning to be careful what you wish for!


Title: Wisdom Long
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2108> Obscured ·
Author: just_sphinx
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=92
> · Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien · ID: 1012
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-12 13:32:31 Score: 4
This story was a very enjoyable read. I think I most appreciate the
treatment of Celeborn. The part where Aragorn is describingCeleborn (and
comparing him to Thranduil) reminded me in a weird way of Marnie's essay
"That Tall Fellow Next to galadriel". It seems like the author of this piece
has taken that interpretation and incarnated him in this story. His advice
make sense, but more than that his sorrow is tangible. It was a great read.

Title: The
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=storyinfo&story=1> Key · Author: Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 421
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-12 15:02:57 Score: 4
This story was a pleasant read for many reasons. The author dares to explore
the darker side of an elf who serves the dark lord only, his opponent is a
young elf, who cannot remember who she is and where she is coming from. The
further the stort enfolds, the more it becomes clear the why and how. It
feels like scaling an onion, the layers are woven into each other. This
story leaves you enough to wonder and speculate about in the end: it makes
you eager to read more.

Title: Sirion's
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=storyinfo&story=2> Gift · Author: Isil
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7> Elensar · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 422
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 15:06:20 Score: 4
Sirion's Gift is compelling story that reveals a hidden side of Amrod. With
detail and care, the author explores a possible romance between a good
written OFC. What strikes me is the eye for detail in the surroundings,
behaviour and body language that tells the tale as well as the dialogue. For
me she paints a beuatiful picture about the live of a somewhat minor
character in Tolkien's world, a side that we rarely see. It surely calls for
more!

Title: Lindë <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3329>
Nerdanelo · Author: Nerdanel
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8> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 424
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 15:06:54 Score: 5
This poem hits the deep pain of Nerdanel with every line and word. While I
read it, it shed a light on the relationship would be between Nerdanel and
her sons. Something tells me that this must have been a difficult choice for
all. But Nerdanel's pain is tangible, she weeps and mourns for her lost
sons. One can only hope at the end that maybe Nerdanel can hear the laments
of her remaining son Maglor, who sings of pain, sorrow and regret. A
beautiful poem, with good pacing and cleverly worded. Every word counts with
this piece of work.

Title: The
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=storyinfo&story=6> Bonding · Author: Isil
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7> Elensar · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 423
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 15:14:20 Score: 5
This story surprised me in the sense that I never thought about how Eowyn
learnt how to ride a horse, well it is obvious in the books and movies that
she can, but this picture is beautifully painted by Isil. Determination, a
strong will and daring to choose for something she really wants: this is an
Eowyn I love to see. And so young! Not only is this a strong
characterisation, but she writes a tradition of bonding with a horse, that I
find very fitting for this culture. Writing confidentially and passionate,
the author writes a convincing story that feels true to the book.

Title: Life after death <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2268900/1/> · Author:
Lady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
0> Ana · Genres: Alternate Universe: Post-LOTR · ID: 588
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 15:27:38 Score: 8
For a first story, this is truly amazing. It is AU, but the author tells you
what would happen if Arwen does not survive giving birth to her first child.
A while ago, I read somewhere that unions of elves and men are often ill
fated. Even love can keep them together, but since Arwen chooses the fate of
men, she is just as vulnerable to death as any other woman in childbirth.

The grief of Aragorn is so tangible: it is heartbreaking. Yet his loyalty
towards her makes him return, wishing to be with her or to talk with her.
One can only be happy at the end that he finds someone who makes his heart
happy, whether it is a man or not. The use of Elanor is profound and adds a
deeper meaning to Arwen's approval. Luthien's dancing feet awoke the Elanor;
the fact that her descendant brings back life to the Elanor and to Aragorn's
life as well is incredibly touching and gives a deeper meaning to this
story. Aragorn loved Arwen more then anything in the world. The fact that he
found someone who brings back the light in his life is well written and very
tender. I appreciate the way the author treats this story: it's written
thoughtfully and tastefully.

Title: With Friends
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1094> Like These ·
Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 621
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 15:28:11 Score: 10
With Friends like these, I was introduced to the word elflings for the first
time. As of the first chapter the author let me plunge into the worlds of
concerns, troubles, mischief and thoughts of the Sons of Elrond, Legolas, at
some degree Arwen and, of course, their friends. Friendship is the central
theme, but I found myself quite often at the edge of my seat, wondering what
would happen next. Then the author made me laugh so hard that I could so
sympathised with one of the characters. As you go along you start to care
deeply for the characters. The angst they go through make you want to tell
them that it will be alright and the drama they experience is heart
wrenching. Being a part of a twin has its advantages, but can be a burden as
well.

Jay plays with different genres, I can imagine that it is hard to choose,
but it makes the story versatile. For every reader there is something in
there to love. The dialogue is fresh and witty, Jay described the homes of
the elves, and their traditions very well, which makes the narrative parts
very vivid and engaging.

Her story telling made me want to read this story from the first one to the
final page, and left me wanting more. But every story needs an end, she
carefully chooses an ending that yet completes this story, but leaves the
reader the impression that more of this storytelling will follow.


Title: Along Came A
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2808> Spider · Author:
Jay
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4> of Lasgalen · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 622
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 15:29:44 Score: 5
Along came a spider starts with a deadly rush that made my heart skip a few
beats. Jay's Elladan and Elrohir have come of age, proud young men who can
hold their own in battle. But soon after all the action, the author writes
such incredible angst and drama that is hard to shake off. The twins go
through hell; the portrayal of the Rivendell is touching. I especially
appreciate the portrayal of Celebrian. Astonishing characterisation is the
first impression when I read it. With a confident and strong voice, the
author really gets into the character's mind.

Title: Lesson
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3043&cid=12813> Learned:
Spring Flood, 1433 · Author: Dreamflower
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5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 1112
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 15:32:00 Score: 2
A short drabble, but to the point. In just 100 words, the author shows us
the strong and confident Merry, who looks forwards trusting on those things
he learnt in the past. For me, in this drabble, every word counts.

Title: The
<http://www.sweetdreamssanctuary.net/sanctuary/viewstory.php?sid=24> Bitter
Taste of Immortality · Author: Eowynangel
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3> · Genres: Alternate Universe: Elves · ID: 1203
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 16:26:43 Score: 3
This story took me by suprise and it explores the concequences for Arwen
with so much emotions that I had chills running down my spine. Arwen excepts
her fate, but oh the cost of it. The author knows how to hook on to the
emotions of the characters, it feels like it is Arwen truly talking to you.
A superb story.

Title: The
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=storyinfo&story=18> Letter · Author: Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1201
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-12 16:27:23 Score: 4
This two-chapter story reflects the consequences of a parent who has to miss
his son, who undoubtly will go on a dangerous mission. I liked the
perspective of Thandruil in this story: it presents the mixture of a King of
an Elven realm and a concerned father. I feel with this character when he
awaits any kind of news.

The conversation flows, the pacing feels good. A fine Mirkwood story.

Title: Love
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=chapterinfo&chapter=68&story=14> Lies Sleeping · Author: Isil
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7> Elensar · Genres: Romance: Vignette · ID: 1199
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-12 16:27:40 Score: 3
A very and simple vignette where the author dares to display the deepest
emotions of her canon character. Caring and loving, it is obvious to me that
there is more going on with Orophin that the author tells us, but yet it is
enough to enjoy this short peek in the life of this elf.

Title: A Chance <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2721>
Conversation · Author: Songspinner
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1> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 804
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-12 17:41:56 Score: 3
I love eagles, and this showed Merry's interactions with Landroval very
nicely. I also found the idea that Merry would tell Pippin about the eagles
when he woke very sweet, considering Pippin's reflections on them at the end
of Book V of LotR. A very nice read.

Title: A
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=76&NGID=30> Choice
Once Made · Author: Celandine
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3> Brandybuck · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 182
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Reviewer: Marta
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> · 2005-08-12 20:06:58 Score: 4
I have read several pieces about Tar-Miriel's actions in the time before the
Downfall, but this one was different, though. I think it's because it's so
minimalistic. Tar-Miriel is definitely there, but she reports everything was
such a distanced tone. It's chilling, almost like Miriel is already
half-dead. After years of mistreatment by Pharazon, I can't say that I'm
particularly surprised.

Title: Fighting the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3291> Long Defeat ·
Author: Elvenesse
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> · Races/Places: Elves: Poetry · ID: 328
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 20:47:13 Score: 3
I liked the repetition of doom in this poem. The villanelle works well as a
means of conveying emotions like futility and desperation, the former of
which I sensed here. I also liked the references to the Silmarillion, as it
reminds us of just how long this fight has been going on.

Title: After <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=471>
Amputations · Author: Ithilwen
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6> · Races/Places: Elves: Poetry · ID: 1075
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 20:49:15 Score: 3
The thing I liked most about this poem was how the loss of a hand became a
gateway for the realization of other losses, such as father, kin, home,
family, etc. Tying them all in together was a brilliant move, and phantom
pains now take the form of not only severed nerves but also severed
memories. Very effective.

Title: To Sing of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=448> Her · Author:
Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: Poetry · ID: 1085
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-12 20:50:13 Score: 5
I'm very taken with this poem. The last few lines about forever begin sealed
in stone really got to me. But the progression up to these lines was also
remarkable. I especially liked the white walls and the descriptive work that
eventually transformed these white walls into white dust. I also enjoyed the
emotions caught up in this poem. There was grief, pride, joy,
love...basically the entire gauntlet. It was as if the poet couldn't decide
whether to describe Gondolin, praise her, or grieve for her. So he ended up
doing all three. And it worked very well.

Title: At Losgar
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3732> · Author: Wild
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
7> Iris · Races/Places: Elves: Poetry · ID: 604
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-12 20:55:22 Score: 4
I really like the way this poem hints at even darker things to come. For
example, the lines about Feanor's fire still not being quenched (even after
burning the boats) made for both dark and powerful foreshadowing. I'm still
not sure I could ever pity the Feanorians, but this poem comes close to
convincing me. I also like the line about the sea being an accusation. There
was some nice imagery associated with it.

Title: Bread of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=817> Mírdain ·
Author: tyellas
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5> · Races/Places: Elves · ID: 595
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:06:35 Score: 5
I enjoyed watching all the events unfold through Celeborn's eyes. His own
peculair perspective on both the dwarves and on Feanor's kin shades this
tale throughout, and I loved his instant distrust of Annatar. He's a shrewd
one, and I suspect he might have been a bit suspicious even without
Gil-galad's warning. The use of Celebrian as a way to ease the bargaining
was inspired, and she was fun to watch. I loved the fact that she was
besotted with horses. I think most young girls go through that stage at one
point or another.

Title: Uninvited <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2499>
· Author: just_sphinx
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> · Races/Places: Elves · ID: 1020
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:08:27 Score: 6
I think this may be my favorite description of the Halls of Mandos and what
elves experience when they go there. It's so very elven. There, yet not
there. And Maedhros is an ideal candidate to head the POV. Feanor was also a
very welcome addition to this story, and as always in a good Feanor
characterization, he both irritated and intrigued me. I loved his remark on
how Namo could use lessons in oratory. That made me laugh. But the
conversation afterwards was brilliant. There was quite a bit of subtlety
from both Maedhros and Feanor, and I loved the fact that they both know it
and they were both reading between the lines. This is a conversation I would
have enjoyed sitting in on, though I know that much of it would have
probably passed me by.


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Msg# 5141

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 55 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:02:46 Topic ID# 5141
Title: Cool <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4938>
Waters · Author: DragonLady7
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9> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 692
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:13:25 Score: 6
This story made wonderful use of contrasts. The action was fast and furious,
but the moments in between were so quiet that it was eerie, particularly the
moments with Glorfindel tending to Ecthelion. They were juxtaposed nicely by
Ecthelion's last hurrah in his fight with Gothmog, a fight that went so fast
and was over so quickly that I was as taken aback as Glorfindel when Tuor
grabbed his arms. The contrasts make this such a powerful story because the
extremes are even more vivid. Hope and despair were another two contrasts
that were used well, especially when Egalmoth showed up. The reunion was
very hopeful, but Glorfindel's acknowledgement of reality made the story
dark again. And it felt darker for having been a little brighter. Great
writing.

Title: Shipwright
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3409> · Author:
Berzerker
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
6> Prime · Races/Places: Elves · ID: 1053
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:17:29 Score: 5
My favorite part of this story is when the viewpoint shifted and became
Gandalf's rather than Cirdan's. Cirdan was so very elven at that moment, and
I loved the deliberation in determining where Narya should go. I also liked
his firm believe that Saruman should NOT get the ring. I wonder just how
much he saw. And fascinating idea that Sauron would go for Narya first among
all the Three, even though it was the furthest away. Great concepts
throughout, and great characterization of Cirdan.

Title: First
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1712&cid=12870> Words ·
Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 1324
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:19:50 Score: 2
Cute! Poor Elrond. His sons' first word wasn't something dignified, or even
Ada. Still, it was very fitting given the fact that this is Elladan and
Elrohir. Loved Glorfindel's attempts to get them to say his name. That was
fun.

Title: Letter From
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3251> Elladan ·
Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 1080
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:20:31 Score: 6
I really enjoyed the epilogue to this story, but as powerful as that was, I
think I liked the letter itself best. It was so very simple. The things that
needed to be said were said, the facts were laid out, and then it ended. The
air of resignation was sorrowing, but it was also the resignation of one who
knew that his cause was worthy, which made it a bit more hopeful. I find it
interesting that this is something the twins wouldn't discuss with one
another, and I have to wonder if the possibility of separation made them
avoid the subject. Elladan did address it in the letter, and that strikes me
as something that would be difficult to confront with his brother. In any
case, great story. And great depiction of a very strong Elladan.

Title: What Cannot be
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2579> Undone ·
Author: Zimraphel
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9> · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 1013
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:21:05 Score: 6
I really like this portrayal of Glorfindel, and I love the understanding
that he brings to the conflict in this story. It's a good thing for Elladan
and Elrohir that he's around. As wise as Elrond is, I'm not sure he would
have understood the depth of the rage these two were nursing. It doesn't
feel as though he would let himself go that far. Which means that Glorfindel
has a golden opportunity to shine because he does know and he is willing to
go further with Elladan and Elrohir because of it. Fascinating exploration
of personalities and the killing spree that the twins went on. It's been
brought into a new light by this story.

Title: Spirit
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=2321&SPOrdinal=2
> Reforged · Author: Erin's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
6> Daughter · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 725
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:22:04 Score: 5
What I loved most about this vignette was the fact that Narsil became a
character in his own right. The elven smith was a great character as far as
we came to know him, but Narsil was a full-fledged personality: one that
changed with the forging and that even named itself before the end. I really
liked that little tidbit, and I loved how Aragorn and the smith could both
sense that Narsil had chosen to be called Anduril. Great imagery, too! The
forging process was brilliantly described.

Title: The <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=319>
Twilight · Author: Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 399
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:23:28 Score: 5
This is a great portrayal of Elrohir and his feelings over Arwen's choice!
Elrohir himself is fleshed out well, and Elladan, too. I loved the easy way
that they drew strength from one another. The bond between the two brothers
was powerfully portrayed, and I enjoyed their section together. But most of
all, I enjoyed the last part where Elrohir goes to Arwen and Arwen proves
herself just as shrewd as her father and brothers when it comes to reading
between the lines. At least there was an agreement of sorts reached between
the two. The end was wonderfully bittersweet as a result.

Title: L for Love
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4995> · Author:
Tehta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
5> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 1128
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:24:31 Score: 5
The humor in this story was absolutely fantastic. Poor Celeborn. And poor
Daeron, too. I don't think that his ideas are going to be understood in the
near future. Or that Celeborn is going to let him do any more carvings on
either trees or himself. What really gets me, though, is that Daeron
pioneered his idea of writing things down by resorting to the tried and true
method of I-Heart-Luthien on an oak. That's hilarious! I really do feel
sorry for Celeborn as he tries to make sense of all this. I wouldn't be
surprised if he had a headache by the time this was over.

Title: One Word <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=649>
· Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 1081
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 21:26:11 Score: 6
Powerful. Very powerful. The ramifications of Thingol's ban on Quenya are
definitely felt in this story. I've wondered once in a while what the Noldor
who didn't know Sindarin did when they came into contact with those
forbidden to speak Quenya, but this story goes far beyond anything my meager
thoughts could have envisioned. The elf's reflections on just how important
language is, especially to the Noldor, were a great bit of foreshadowing,
and then to have him recognize the word "kinslayer" out of all the words he
could have recognized was devastating. And then to be unable to say anything
about it or to explain hurt even more. Thingol really was clever with this
ban, though I have to wonder if he intended for it to go quite this far.
Brilliant concept.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3043&cid=12847> Lady’s
Gift · Author: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien · ID: 979
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 23:49:33 Score: 3
Short yet very sweet. I like the fact that Frodo's gift was created in the
evening while Sam's gift was a morning endeavor. And I like even more the
fact that while it's a symbol of hope to Sam, it's also hope to Galadriel
that something of Lothlorien will endure in the Shire. Good job with packing
so much emotion into such a little vignette.

Title: Bound by
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2394> Difference ·
Author: just_sphinx
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=92
> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 1119
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 23:51:31 Score: 7
The descriptions in this story blew me away. The narrative is so carefully
worded, and the imagery is so precise and so vivid that everything can be
seen clearly. And the picture becomes even clearer when the contrasts are
added. Foiling Nerdanel against Galadriel (and Galadriel against Nerdanel)
was a brilliant idea. The two bring out so many things in each other.
They're very different, but Feanor is right: they're more alike than either
of them would ever admit. I love the idea of lust and love as well as
sunrise and sunset. These things can be both direct opposites as well as
equals. And this continues right up to the point where Galadriel greets
Nerdanel, and their mannerisms take on the same contrasts. It's a polite
greeting but not necessarily a welcome one. Great story, and thank you for
such clear pictures in my mind of these two elves. I can see both their
outward appearance and the demeaner of their hearts.

Title: Marred <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3461>
Stars · Author: Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 673
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 23:52:57 Score: 7
And once again, Celeborn proves why he was eventually called the Wise. The
kid is definitely smart, and his speech to Elmo was brilliant. I loved the
insight that Elmo draws from it about the broken stars versus the perfect
stars. As for Elmo, his talk with Olwe was heart-wrenching. They saw things
so differently, and from their separate perspectives, they were both right
in their decisions. But of course, that doesn't make it any easier on the
other. Olwe, in particular, was very sobering with his observation that he
has now lost two brothers. If only they could have all waited just a little
longer. But for those who did not think that Thingol was still alive, that
wouldn't have made much sense, I suppose. It's heartening that Olwe still
asks, but the fact that it was more of an absent after-thought indicates
that he doesn't have a lot of hope left. Great story on the separation of
the last few elves who crossed the Sea.

Title: Alas for the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2404> Wailing of the
Gulls · Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1079
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 23:55:51 Score: 3
Good gap-filler. The action was fast and easy to follow, and Legolas's
solution to overwhelming odds was ingenius. Very fun. I liked the discussion
that ensued afterwards, too, and how Legolas once believed that Galadriel
foretold his death. It's a tidbit that Tolkien never really expanded upon,
so it's good to see it get more attention here.

Title: Winter
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2807&cid=10858> Encounters
· Author: jastaelf
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
> · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 294
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 23:58:17 Score: 6
This story strikes a wonderful balance between humorous, cross-cultural
encounter and sober anxiety for a pair of sons headed toward Mordor.
Thranduil and Gloin were quite civil to one another, despite a few missteps
over things like the word "Mirkwood" and issues of previous accomodations.
But I think they may have reached an understanding of sorts by the end, and
they might have something in common, too. I loved the idea of anyone
"handling Gandalf." That was priceless, and it was something both Gloin and
Thranduil could laugh over. Great dialogue and nice restraint on the part of
both characters. It's good to see them both painted in a favorable light.

Title: Minuial <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3660>
· Author: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 222
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-12 23:59:04 Score: 4
Thranduil can be a difficult elf to depict, but I like the way he was
portrayed here. One gets the sense that he plays many roles and that he
switches between them so often that it's become natural. His moments of
nostalgia and his words of warning are those of both a father and a king,
and I really like the idea that Thranduil has found a way to balance what
might sometimes be conflicting duties.

Title: Time's <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3240>
Turnings · Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 156
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:00:16 Score: 5
This felt a bit like an in-between story, but even so, it was still a very
enjoyable ride. I loved seeing Eilian, Belion, Legolas, and Maltanaur team
up in Dale. The plot around the spice merchant and the tension between elves
and men was an interesting twist that developed slowly until the entire
story came out with Belion's discovery. Great emotions and reactions from
everyone, and I love the character growth that went on, too. Definitely a
time of learning for all involved, and as a bonus, Legolas can now pick
locks! That should prove both interesting and helpful in the future.

Title: Good Enough
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3453> · Author:
Karenator
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
> · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 217
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:00:37 Score: 3
What impressed me msot about this story was the level of detail given to
customs, circumstances, and characterization. The idea of having a new
red-banded spider was fascinating, and I was interested to learn how novice
warriors trained. The OCs were full characters with faults and strengths,
and even the antagonists had logic to their arguments.

Title: Wisdom Long
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2108> Obscured ·
Author: just_sphinx
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=92
> · Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien · ID: 1012
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:01:54 Score: 6
I think Lothlorien lends itself to introspection, because Aragorn is
certainly doing a lot of it here. He's also doing quite a bit of thinking on
his companion, which is what really makes this story so good. The world
needs more Celeborn. Simple and inescapable fact. Especially the type of
Celeborn that is portrayed here. I loved the descriptions and the
comparisons with Galadriel. He's different from her, there's no doubt about
that, but different does not mean weaker. It means he has other strengths to
call upon, and that is portrayed very well. Great dialogue from Celeborn as
he shows Aragorn why he is known as the Wise. And also why Lothlorien has
survived so long with Dol Guldur as a neighbor. This is an elf to be
reckoned with. Wonderful characterization!

Title: Heart's <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2117>
Ease · Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 1217
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:04:49 Score: 5
I think what I liked most about this story were the changes it depicted in
the elves now that they are in the Blessed Realm. Galadriel, in particular,
really impressed me. She and Celeborn are probably right: the Ring she bore
affected who she was. She was proud and haughty before she came into
possession of Nenya, but the way Celeborn described it seems to indicate
that Nenya had a greater hold on Galadriel than either of them could have
anticipated. Good reunion story that read very smoothly and packed in a few
punches of humor to lighten the mood.

Title: The <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/soulofasinda.htm> Soul of a Sinda
· Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 959
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:05:40 Score: 3
The poor attendants must have been at their wit's ends, trying to figure out
what to do with an elven queen and her visiting grandfather. Good ficlet,
and I love Celeborn's pride at the fact that there is quite a bit of Sinda
in Arwen. I'm in complete agreement with him, too. As long as she is
part-Sinda, Arwen will make a very fine queen indeed.

Title: To Give Love
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=175> Its Due ·
Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 733
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:06:35 Score: 5
How very like Gandalf to be so vague. Gotta love that wizard. Great story. I
knew that something was up when Amarie said that she held her new love in
her arms one year after Finrod left, but for some reason, the meaning of her
words didn't click in my mind. Fortunately, Finrod is quite a bit smarter
than I am and worked out the math. The meeting between father and son, once
one knew who the other was, had some great moments, and the concluding
section between Amarie and Finrod was very good. I liked the banter and the
teasing when Finrod decided to test out his new body.

Title: Sercemaitë
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=548> · Author:
Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 382
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:12:49 Score: 7
The bewilderment these elves felt at the coming of the Noldor was
frightening. And saddening. The kinslayings were certainly terrible events,
but I don't think I had ever realized the full horror until seeing it
through the eyes of one who had no idea what was happening or why. I loved
how the story started large but then narrowed until it was only about a
single elf and his horror at what he was being forced to do. I have to
wonder if the refugees of Doriath told those of Gondolin nothing about what
drove them from Doriath, but the confusion was so effective that I can
forget about that. And the almost calm way in which either Amrad or Amras
avenged the other was chilling. And a very sobering kind of mercy, too. Also
sobering was how much this elf now welcomed death, particularly when many of
the elves had lived with this for years now. I can only imagine what the
horror has done to them.

Title: Sapphire
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2953> Aurae · Author:
Bejai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
6> · Races/Places: Elves: Imladris · ID: 164
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:18:06 Score: 9
Stunning. Perhaps the most in-depth exploration of those who stood by the
bearers of the Three and everything they endured because of it. Tying
Celebrian's capture and torture into her connection to Elrond (and through
that, Vilya) was absolutely brilliant. I love the way that the Rings were
explained and how their powers worked. And I love the fact that Celeborn and
Glorfindel seem to understand the Rings best, even though they're watching
through an outside perspective. Characterization worked the same way. The
outside perspective on others gave clear, vivid portrayals into some of
Tolkien's most ambiguous characters. As the center of the story, Celebrian
and Elrond were powerful characters, but also strong personalities were
Galadriel, Celeborn, Glorfindel, Elladan, and Elrohir. And the personalities
fit. They were all individuals, but they all meshed together to form a
family. But perhaps best of all was the theme of duty and how it became the
cost of love for both Elrond and Celebrian as well as Celeborn and
Galadriel. I really don't think I've ever seen the relationship between
spouses and Ring-bearers portrayed so well and so profoundly. Fantastic
writing! It filled the cracks that Tolkien left behind.

Title: Far <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2268>
Horizons · Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 1214
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 00:26:10 Score: 7
LOVED the politics and the mystery. Wonderfully creative yarn of a story
that had me guessing left and right. There were even a few well-crafted red
herrings thrown in. I have to admit that I suspected Camentur for a while as
he was the first one to accuse Calion when no one had seen the actual shot.
But I'm rather proud of myself for figuring out much of it by the end,
though there were still a few curves. I knew it would boil down to a
personal vendetta rather than a plot against the Sindar, but I was looking
at Elerrina as the target. Great epic, and nice treatment of very sensitive
issues, such as kinslaying. And kudos for a wonderful Finarfin
characterization. He's always intrigued me, and I like his portrayal as
wise, understanding, and merciful but also ruthless and creative when it
comes to getting what he wants.

Title: Creature of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3490> Fire · Author:
daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1218
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 01:39:31 Score: 7
I love the way that the personal issues are woven into the a larger story
arc that affects everyone, such as Legolas losing Tuilinn during Smaug's
destruction of Erebor. Said destruction was brilliantly told, by the way,
with some excellent pacing and riveting action. But sometimes the big
conflicts are best told by boiling them down into something closer to home,
and Legolas's reaction to Tuilinn's death was very personal. His various
stages of shock were so true to real life that it hurt, and his family's
attempts to help, though done with good intentions, only seemed to make
things worse. Thank goodness for Beliond, who gained new respect from me
over the course of this story. Overall, great characterization and great
weaving of bigger events into very personal matters.


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Msg# 5142

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 56 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:02:56 Topic ID# 5142
Title: A Quiet <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2752>
Love · Author: Erin's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
6> Daughter · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 723
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 01:44:21 Score: 7
The story fits its title so well. It's so...quiet. Dignified, almost. I
think a lot of that comes from Arwen, actually. Celeborn sees her as quietly
accepting both what has happened and what will come, and his pride in her is
undeniable. Celeborn himself is very quiet. Almost surprisingly so. And
Elladan and Elrohir were also very...quiet. I like the idea that they let
her grieve alone. They're present if needed but never intrusive. Stately
would be a good word to describe this, too, but really, I need a thesaurus.
The entire story read like a whisper of something faded and precious. It was
consumately elven in nature. As they accepted the changes in Middle-earth at
the end of the Third Age, Celeborn and his twin grandsons accepted Arwen's
death. And they did so quietly and reflectively. Beautifully written. The
mood was absolutely perfect.

Title: A Walk in <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1327949/1/> the Rain ·
Author: Ithilien
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
4> · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 104
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 01:49:40 Score: 7
Brilliant piece, and as layered as its characters. Arwen and Legolas made a
wonderful pair (platonically speaking, of course) and their walk in the rain
seemed to be exactly what Arwen needed. The discussion of control, of giving
up elven characteristics for mortal characteristics, was a masterpiece and
alluded to so many things Arwen must be going through. Legolas's
introduction of the topic was an intriguing balance between blunt and
subtle. In true elf fashion, he sidled up to it, dropping hints along the
way but never fully revealing himself until the discussion became more
candid. Arwen herself was amazing. She so rarely receives good or full
characterization, but she's definitely a solid figure here, complete with
strengths and failings. The discussion of a throat remedy, to be applied
liberally and frequently, was priceless, and I think some important lessons
might have been learned. Loved the elvish, too. Great story!

Title: The Last <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=387>
Fruit · Author: Finch
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4> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 728
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 01:51:20 Score: 7
Finarfin is probably my favorite character out of the Silmarillion, so I'm
overjoyed whenever he gets any attention. And I think he's perfectly
portrayed here. He's not necessarily weaker than his brothers, but he
appears to be milder and in many respects he's certainly wiser. But these
traits seem to make it even more difficult for him to recover from what
happened, and I love the wandering paths his mind takes. Things really don't
click for him until the end of the story, when Earwen seeks him out again.
The darkness around him seems to be one of his own making as he realizes
exactly what he's lost and at what price he's lost it. It's definitely a
good thing that Earwen shows up when she does. Wonderful story through the
depths of Finarfin's mind, and thank you so much for giving poor Finarfin
some screen time.

Title: The <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=197>
Far-Reaching Hand · Author: Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 745
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 01:53:18 Score: 7
This was an eerie change of pace from the usual post-Halls-of-Mandos-reunion
stories, and I loved it for that. I love it for many other reasons, too.
There was so much tension here between Fingolfin and Finarfin, and the
shadow of Feanor seemed to be forever present. The last paragraph was
particularly powerful, with both brothers sitting beneath the shadow of
another until the Morning Star appears. Not the happiest note to end on,
which was definitely for the best. This wasn't a happy, feel-good story.
This was grittier and probably more realistic because of that. The unease,
anger, guilt, blame, and frustration were practically tangible. These are
two elves with blood on their hands who don't find the songs "worthwhile,"
and no amount of water can wash away what has happened to them. Gutsy story.
I loved it!

Title: Anessë <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1913> ·
Author: just_sphinx
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> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 1021
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 01:59:02 Score: 7
This piece feels so timeless. It was over quickly, but while reading, it
seemed to stretch on and one. Which was definitely a good thing! I loved
seeing the world through Nimloth's eyes. She has some fascinating ideas on
her husband, and I love the idea that something of elf, man, and Maia is at
work in him. Her view of Galadriel was also fascinating. I don't think I've
ever found a better description of Galadriel's appearance or the feeling
that comes with being in her presence. She was alive to me, and that rarely
happens when working with Galadriel. But most of all, I loved Nimloth's
views on her uncle. Celeborn was as timeless as the story, and the emotions
in his eyes were painful. He was written with such a deft, light touch.
Definitely powerful in his own right, but also grieving. And passing on a
legacy at the same time. Beautiful story with some truly amazing imagery and
emotions.

Title: Falling Out of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2863> Love · Author:
Marnie
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5> · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1096
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 02:05:15 Score: 7
For me, one of the most interesting things in this story was what Legolas
thought of the Noldor. If his expectations of Celeborn were any indication,
he certainly had a fascinating opinion of them. I loved the idea of Legolas
being "alternately bored and awed" while entertaining his Noldor-like guest
who was only partially present. The sad but brilliant irony is that it's
Legolas who was not all the way there, something Celeborn immediately
sensed. And the conversation that followed was fascinating. I loved
Legolas's description of the Sea-longing, and I was intrigued by Celeborn's
desire to encourage it. I wonder if the past hundred years have felt longer
to him than they have to Legolas. I also laughed at the thought of Celeborn
trying to leash Thranduil. I would be very interested in seeing what that
encounter might produce, but for now, I'll be content with this little gem.

Title: Gathering the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3082> Pieces ·
Author: Tehta
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5> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 13
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-13 02:06:34 Score: 7
Like the summary warns, this story is definitely darker than the average
Maedhros-sans-hand story. But because of this darkness, I think it might be
more true to the character. Maedhros strikes me as someone who would have no
qualms about manipulating others to achieve a greater end, and the strangely
methodical way he goes about this manipulation was pure Feanor. I found it
very intriguing that Maedhros wished for his body to heal but not his soul.
He's definitely a changed elf, and Fingon was so close to seeing it that it
hurt. Maedhros observed that Fingon was problematic, and I think he was
almost more problematic than Maedhros anticipated. The close of this story,
with Maedhros looking down on his game, was chilling, foreboding, and very
true to his fiery spirit and the pride of his father. I don't think I've
ever seen Maedhros depicted so well.

Title: Long Leagues for Little
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=744> Legs · Author: Fadagaski
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
4> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 628
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Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-08-13 07:24:34 Score: 1
The wisdom of Samwise. He is very perceptive - and gets his message across
beautifully!

Title: A Family <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=290>
Affair · Author: Celandine
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3> Brandybuck · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 1054
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-13 12:44:31 Score: 9
Each of these vignettes is great, but I think I love them each for their own
separate reason. The first one, which has Maedhros proposing to Galadriel,
the comedy is genius. I laughed out loud when Galadriel recounted how each
of Feanor's sons (save Maglor) had proposed. And the hints of Galadriel's
relationship with Feanor was also well done. Then there's the second one,
where Nerdanel speaks with Maedhros. That brief reference to bonding between
males was wonderfully done. Shades of "Passages" there, but you've boiled it
down to her essence. And Nerdanel is characterised so well, I can see
someone who would marry Feanor would be one to take risks and defy
convention. And then the last one, where Feanor finds out much and confronts
his wife, was spectacular because it was so empowering of Nerdanel. Her
answers made perfect sense -- but to see a woman stand up to a character as
strong as Feanor, and come out on top, was a real treat. All in all, these
vignettes are very well done. Thank you for treating the rammifications of a
homosexual relationship seriously, and making it more three-dimensional than
is often done in slash stories. This was a real pleasure to read.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7890>
Father’s Choice · Author: Elana
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> · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 298
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-13 12:48:04 Score: 2
What I really liked in this drabble was the reason you gave Beregond for
letting his son stay in Minas Tirith. In my own I took a comedic out, but
you managed to offer a convincing reason -- one that made me respect both
Bergil and Beregond more.

Title: The Elladan <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1511940/1/> Show · Author:
Claudi007
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8> · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 1271
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Reviewer: Larian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
> Elensar · 2005-08-13 18:55:32 Score: 6
Another masterpiece in the Elladan series. There are so many parts in there
that I wanted to remember, to comment on specifically, but I didn't watn to
stop reading long enough to take notes. I actually laughed so hard a several
parts that my cat just sat and stared at me. I loved the part about
Aragorn's speech making--screaming out cliches and pointing at the flag.
*hee*

So many parodies are not funny, the author works too hard to make it funny,
but somehow, you've combined modern college life with Tolkien's world in
such a way that it's not only incredibly funny, but it's easy to imagine the
two fitting together that way.

Title: Long Leagues for Little
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=744> Legs · Author: Fadagaski
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
4> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 628
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Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
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0> · 2005-08-13 23:09:30 Score: 1
Nicely done. It was good of you to let Sam be the one to catch Boromir out
this time.

Title: Beyond
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> the Door ·
Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 283
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Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
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0> · 2005-08-13 23:10:05 Score: 1
A nice expression of Halbarad's faith in Aragorn's abilities. And a good
gapfiller as well! Thank you!

Title: Boys
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> to Men ·
Author: ErinRua
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7> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 286
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Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-08-13 23:10:41 Score: 3
Ah, but here you truly have me. This is a great look at the moment of
decision that Beregond must have had when it came time to decide who would
go on the wagons and who would stay. I like the different things which you
mention, bones and hands and eyes, where Beregond looks for the signs of
change in his son. And I like the strength he finds too. Thank you!

Title: Before
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=8009> the Call to
Muster · Author: Lindelea
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> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 461
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Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-08-13 23:12:02 Score: 1
Neatly done. I like the way that Pippin is taking care of Merry, and the way
that Merry's worries are keeping him silent.

Title: Master
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1089> of the
House · Author: Vistula
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3> the Dunadan · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 639
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Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-08-13 23:12:35 Score: 3
Oh, I do like this. I've always been fascinated by the question of what must
have happened during those days for Elrond to take Sam's appearance at the
Council in such good heart!

Thank you! You've not only caught Elrond neatly, but you've done a wonderful
job on Sam.

Title: Dusk-singer
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=388> ·
Author: illyria-pffyffin
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3> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 702
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Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · 2005-08-13 23:21:23 Score: 3
The soundscape in this story is the most powerful part of it -- not just the
nightingale which Frodo alone hears, but the voices of the other hobbits
doing their best to encourage him, and the weaving in of the legends which
he might have heard -- in fact almost certainly remembers -- in Bilbo's
voice. An excellent gapfiller.

Title: A Gift
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1139> of
Friendship, and A Gift of Love · Author: Meril
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3> · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 484
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-14 00:08:06 Score: 2
These were two good moments. I ahven't read all of the A&E story, but I can
see what I do know of those characters in these drabbles. Nice use of the
pearls.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1581&NGID=42>
Wizard and His Pupil · Author: Acacea
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6> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor · ID: 53
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-14 00:10:10 Score: 2
This is a touching rendition of a scene that must have happened, giving some
insight into a relationship Tolkien only hinted at: the friendship of
Gandalf and Faramir. It was a nice read.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13207>
Good Match · Author: Tanaqui
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> · Genres: Romance: Drabble · ID: 1358
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-14 00:35:08 Score: 6
There are so many things to like about this drabble. Eomer's reflection that
it has been too long since Eowyn has smiled like this, and his moving beyond
the political to the personal. The head-over-heals glee that Eowyn
apparently feels when she thinks about Faramir. Eomer's infatuation with
Lothiriel. But I think my favourite part was a tiny reference: to Lothiriel
being the noblest lady in Gondor. The fact that she is probably the most
important noblewoman in Gondor before Aragorn's marriage to Arwen or
Faramir's to Eowyn isn't what Eowyn is saying, I think -- I can imagine the
two of them being good friends rather quickly, and Eowyn having a different
meaning of "noble" in mind here.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13125>
Long Awaited Party · Author: Gwynnyd
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6> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 1298
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-14 01:08:01 Score: 3
It's the details that really make this one. Pippin's livery, all the details
of Sam's preparations, the Gamgee preferral for beer over wine. They really
make it feel so real, it comes alive. And it's an interesting idea, too,
that the Four Travellers would celebrate the king's birthday in this
fashion.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13572>
Long Tradition of Ancient Lore · Author: Elena
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
7> Tiriel · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 206
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-14 01:16:50 Score: 7
This drabble works on so many levels. First, Faramir is not stuffy. I can't
tell you how much I appreciate it. He isn't a nerd, he isn't interested in
trivia for trivia's sake, he's just... normal. Then there's the fact that
Denethor gets along with him. They display a more-or-less functional
relationship here. Whether that will someday change is of course up for
discussion, but for the moment at least they are father-and-son. And the
fact that Faramir is interested in Rohirric history I think is telling in
several ways. It foreshadows his later attraction for Eowyn, and his comment
to Frodo at Henneth Annun of the Gondorians' love of the Rohirrim, but it
also characterises him as distinct from his older brother.This is the sort
of history that little boys might enjoy, but it's glory in personal triumph,
not glory on the battle field. All in all a very nice drabble.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3581&cid=13579>
Long, Unexpected Drabble · Author: Elena
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7> Tiriel · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 193
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-14 01:25:49 Score: 3
What an awful lot to cram into 111 words. And you got it all in there.

Well, almost. :-D

But that's the whole point, isn't it? This drabble did a good job of
capturing the frustration that all of us drabblist have felt at times, and
quietly parodies the obsession of working within the form. Well done indeed.

Title: Travellers'
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2523> Tales · Author:
Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 75
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:46:12 Score: 5
I admit to a rather "partisan" fondness for Bilbo-Aragorn interactions, and
this fits the bill. Bilbo's lingering obsession with the Ring and his
feeling out of place in Rivendell reinforce each other, as does his sense of
isolation and being useless. There's nothing that'll leech the joy out of
life quicker than that, but fortunatly, he has friends he can't suspect of
being his wardens, whom he can feel responsible for in some small way and so
gain back a sense of the fullness of life where all that magic resides.

Title: Father
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1126> to Son ·
Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 139
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:46:39 Score: 2
Dwarves are tough, and Thror shows his mettle here: he's still got enough
left to recognize a friend and pass on his legacy to his son.


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Msg# 5143

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 57 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:03:36 Topic ID# 5143
Title: The Dragon
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=274> Gem · Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID: 184
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:47:12 Score: 4
In a tradition of dares that usually end either badly or ironically,
Celandine tells us the story of a quiet girl's treasure hunt. One wonders
whether there is something more to Smaug's resting place than meets the eye,
the way the light gives out more quickly each time she swims for the
lakebed. But she does get something for it, even if not a jewel, and we get
a fun story to read.

Title: Sheathing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=769> Sting · Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 203
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:47:47 Score: 2
Well-written interaction between Bilbo and a cordwainer in Dale. Bilbo, as
is usual, manages to be both forthright yet polite and unassuming about his
identity, and the OC, Balan, is well-realized in this brief story.

Title: Desiring
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=5> Peace · Author: Enros
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
6> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID: 279
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:48:12 Score: 3
Enros makes something of Gandalf's line that Smeagol's grandmother must have
been great by the measure of her own people. She's wise enough to know she
can't take the mysterious Precious from Sméagol without becoming that which
he is: a thief.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7782>
Hobbit, Chapter 18 – The Return Journey · Author: Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 297
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:48:38 Score: 2
I like the evocation of Bilbo's Tookish side and his Baggins side, and
seeing the one go to sleep again so that the other can carry him home.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9912>
Fourth Attempt · Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 369
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:49:14 Score: 2
Smaug gets his due, here: he's cannier than Bilbo and the others realized,
and it's luck or fate that they did get out of his lair alive. Smaug's voice
is very well written, despite the brevity of this piece.

Title: High
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4473&NGID=203>
Flight · Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID: 419
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:49:38 Score: 4
The eagles are definitely underexplored, perhaps because we have trouble
with bird-like perspectives. The story peak, and the antics and pecking
orders it inspires and establishes felt right, as did the sense of horror at
the idea of never flying again: "To be an eagle was to fly". The story
definitely fit the poem it was associated with, and it was good to see
Meneldor on the peak, in a nice bit of foreshadowing for Lord of the Rings.

Title: A Short <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4400>
Rest · Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 428
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:50:19 Score: 2
A nice little gap-filler, quite angst-free and featuring a rather excitable
ten year-old Estel. He, Elrohir and Elladan make a lovely trio in terms of
banter and affection. Bilbo, too, is delightful. An enjoyble vignette.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1781&NGID=81>
Thrush Who Saved Laketown · Author: jen_loves_elves
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID: 432
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:51:02 Score: 5
Jen gives this thrush such a wonderful, proud, cantankerous voice, and plays
the bird's eye view to the hilt, inventing appropriate similes and concerns
and observations that would fit a bird in Tolkien's world, one imagines. She
even updates the fisherman's fib: "I caught a fish that was so big..."
becomes a tale of the largest snail ever cracked by a thrush. And while the
thrush may have some things to say about the way the walkers love to hear
themselves talk, it's clear he's not ashamed of his voice, either!

This is a marvelous gap-filler that fans of "The Hobbit" will appreciate.


Title: Mercy <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/mercy.htm> · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 583
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:51:42 Score: 2
Hm, I must wonder: is it then normal procedure for Elves to tie the hands of
captives cruelly? There's a hint of "Have you stopped beating your wife?"
here, which lends an interesting flavor to the quality of mercy.

Title: The Sting
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1550> · Author:
tyellas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID: 600
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:52:40 Score: 4
And thus evil mars evil, one might say—that out of his rage and hatred,
Maeglin should create something like Sting. One wonders what he would have
thought to see not simply a mortal, but so seemingly weak and unworthy a
mortal as a hobbit claiming and using his dagger. Tyellas captures Maeglin's
pride and woundedness as no other does. I particularly liked the bit where
he bribes a harpist to craft the most stinging satire of Idril's and Tuor's
nuptials he can get away with.

Title: Anniversary <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/anniversary.htm> · Author:
Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 923
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=923>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:53:23 Score: 3
Marta gives us a lovely snippet that nicely gives us that sense of adventure
(to say nothing of providential designs) just lying in wait for Bilbo. And I
loved the timing in this drabble—that cough that interrupts makes the scene
very vivid for me.

Title: The Finest of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2193> Vintages ·
Author: Regina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
4> · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 1103
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=1103>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:53:52 Score: 3
Legolas puts on the charm in this one, but all in a good cause. The widowed
wine-merchant seems a canny old thing, despite allowing herself to be
charmed by everyone's favorite elf prince. Nice to see a transaction between
Legolas and mortal woman that is primarily centered on business, and the art
of haggling.

Title: Last of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2217> Summer Wine ·
Author: Regina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
4> · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 1104
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=1104>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:54:19 Score: 6
A worthy sequel to "The Finest of Vintages". Friendship between mortal and
immortal always comes up against the inevitable barrier of time, as it does
here. But in between, we see acknowledged explicitly what was evident in the
prequel: that theirs is a friendship that thrives with a bit of competition
and sharp-worded ripostes. At the same time, there's no need for such when
it comes to farewells, and Legolas is unusual here in arguing that the Elves
envy Men their mortality at times. Perhaps that is meant to highlight his
singularity among Elves, and suggest future friendships with mortals that
await him.

Title: The Party Next Door <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1330750/1/> ·
Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> · Books/Time: The Hobbit · ID: 1255
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=1255>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 10:56:05 Score: 4
Great characterization in the narrator. I love the way he carefully finds
the means to justify spying a bit on Bilbo—labernums, roses, having a hole
on The Hill that just begs to be stood in front of for the view, etc. Acacea
nicely catches that insular tendency towards gossip that doesn't yet want to
admit what it is, and also the suspicion of other places and peoples that
leads to misinterpretation of events. A party indeed! Nicely done, Acacea.

Title: A
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3877&SPOrdinal=1
> Mantle of Silver Stars · Author: Nrink
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
4> · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 214
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-14 12:29:06 Score: 2
This was a lovely moment between the first family of Gondor. Denethor and
Finduilas was well written, but what I really liked was the relationship
between Denethor and Faramir, only hinted at.

Title: Orc
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=220> Sign ·
Author: Kit5
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
9> (aka Pippinswolf) · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 833
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=833>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-08-14 13:25:33 Score: 3
I love this story. The courage of the hobbits as they muster to fight the
orcs is heart-warming - and the nick of time arrival of Pippin and the Tooks
is very exciting. And the whole event gives their fathers a much better idea
of what they suffered and how much they grew. Good stuff.

Title: Time and Times
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=146> and Half a Time
· Author: Honesty
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
4> · Genres: Horror · ID: 1024
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=1024>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 13:43:49 Score: 7
The fate of the first orcs, or of any made orc, speaks to the deepest fears
of transformation that anyone can have: it's not only forced upon the elf,
but brings out what is most ruinous in him or her and amplified until it
overwhelms and the original self is lost, save for a painful memory. One
wonders whether Legolas is fortunate or unfortunate, that he has so much of
himself left. On the other hand, however painful it is for Legolas, perhaps
that he is so much himself despite this rather graphic form of spiritual and
substantive rape, is supposed to underline that Saruman has failed
ultimately. His power is not so great as to leave only the image of an elven
face; he can't make an orc; he can only breed them. So perhaps the ending is
a little more hopeful than it seems. And I must congratulate Honesty on her
Gimli voice—she has him pegged.

Title: Freak
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge09/7274.html#cutid1> Show ·
Author: Nickey
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
4> · Genres: Horror · ID: 862
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=862>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 13:46:12 Score: 3
An intriguing effort to fill in those "dark dreams" the hobbits endured
while they were orc-dragged through Rohan. This story works on the level of
belittling powers that are greater than oneself—the taboo is broken, and
revenge must be had.

Title: Something Wicked
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4323> This Way Comes ·
Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Horror · ID: 130
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=130>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-14 13:47:31 Score: 4
Very creepy indeed! One does wonder what became of men who survived Pelennor
and Pelargir, the ragged few who made it back home to tell the tale. Adnan
is totally believable, as is the Mouth of Sauron in all his foulness and
cruelty. The madness that Sauron created in him is frightening even when
Mouth of Sauron is cast down from his high place. It's as if there's not
enough left of him to recover, and he's a broken but deadly tool now. Well
told!

Title: Kingly <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2310>
Gifts · Author: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 831
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=831>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-08-14 13:55:05 Score: 2
Lovely story. I like the plotting between Aragorn, Eomer and Faramir to
honour Pippin and Merry. The comparison between Aragorn the king and Strider
the healer is great!

Title: Alterations
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=613> · Author:
Eledhwen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 260
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=260>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-08-14 14:43:03 Score: 1
Very touching - the glimpses of so many lives. So much sadness. But hope,
too. I liked this.

Title: Stealth
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/10128.html#cutid1> and
Grace · Author: Anastasia
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 802
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=802>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · 2005-08-14 14:57:55 Score: 1
This is such an enjoyable story!

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7782>
Hobbit, Chapter 18 – The Return Journey · Author: Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 297
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=297>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:31:13 Score: 2
Drabble summaries can be difficult to pull off, but this one works. It's
very concise, yet it still packs some punch, particularly the last line
about the Took sleeping. Nice comment on Bilbo's personality and what he's
going through.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9912>
Fourth Attempt · Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 369
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=369>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:31:40 Score: 3
I like the way this drabble built itself around Smaug's pride, especially
since it was his arrogance that revealed his secret to Bilbo. As for Bilbo,
he had a fun introduction, too, as something that Smaug couldn't quite
place. And I love the fact that this didn't seem to phase Smaug one bit.
Definitely overconfident.

Title: Anniversary <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/anniversary.htm> · Author:
Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 923
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=60&form_story_filter=923>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:32:32 Score: 3
This is one of those drabbles that makes you want to flip open the books and
show the characters just what they're getting themselves into. Or rather,
what they want to get themselves into. Good thing that Bilbo didn't go on to
Moria. He wouldn't have fared well.


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Msg# 5144

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 58 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:04:17 Topic ID# 5144
Title: Mercy <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/mercy.htm> · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 583
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=61&form_story_filter=583>
Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:33:09 Score: 2
I really like drabbles that function as gap-fillers. Though short, they can
add so much to canon, like the idea that Legolas might have captained the
group that captured the dwarves. It adds food for thought.

Title: Our Greatest King <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1762>
· Author: picara
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=46
4> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 1338
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:33:45 Score: 3
Who could offer better or more fitting praise to Thranduil than his
subjects? Especially those who knew exactly what the difference was between
north and south or what Thranduil's limitations were. This little drabble
shows very effectively why Thranduil would be considered Greenwood's
greatest king.

Title: There
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1129> And Back
Again · Author: Azalais
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7> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 51
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:35:42 Score: 4
Bilbo is definitely a sly one. I love the double meaning in his line about
living near a dragon. It was a nice allusion to his recent adventure as well
as a very pointed and wonderful insult towards Lobelia. As for the rest of
the hobbits, I can just imagine the looks Bilbo received when he popped back
in during the auction. "Consternation" is probably a mild way of putting it.

Title: Father
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1126> to Son ·
Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 139
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:36:23 Score: 4
Fantastic gapfiller! The brief mentions of torture are more then enough to
set the scene, and Thrain's ramblings make for a nice capstone on what this
dwarf has endured already. I loved Gandalf's remorse over the fact that he
couldn't do anything more for any of these prisoners. Not while he was in
disguise, at least. And the brief moment of sanity was powerful, and I
wonder just what Thrain saw then. Certainly enough to trust. Good missing
scene.

Title: An Unexpected Party <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/lotrdrabbled.htm>
· Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 1359
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:42:16 Score: 4
This is one of the more effective drabble summaries that I've found, and I
think part of that effectiveness lies in the third paragraph. The list of so
many days, dwarves, and seedcakes is a great way of summarizing everything
that happens, and the added bit about Bilbo finally understanding hints at
the confusion he felt during the first two paragraphs. Nicely done.

Title: Idle Leaves
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3344> · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 68
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:51:33 Score: 3
Very powerful imagery packed into very short phrases. I liked the brevity of
these poems. I imagine Aragorn probably didn't have much time for writing.
My favorite was the one about fireside chess, with Aragorn pretending to be
too tired to notice that the other is only pretending to actually lose. Lots
of pretenses going on here. Good writing.

Title: Song of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3939> Faithful ·
Author: Ninquelosse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
0> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 498
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:54:01 Score: 4
Nice adaptation of the hymn to suit the story. It reads much like a hymn
would and calls to mind Renaissance styles. But of course this is set in
Numenor, and I can easily imagine the Faithful singing this. I like the
references to various Valar as well as their knowledge of their own pride
and downfall. I also like the idea of trying to keep the thunder but lose
the pride. A very difficult concept, and I think it's something that Aragorn
and the Rangers later embody. Nice work.

Title: Gríma's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1287&NGID=51>
Giftgiving · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 502
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:54:51 Score: 3
Well, I personally wouldn't want to be readied for Grima's gift-giving. But
I did like this poem. I enjoyed the allusions to riders and horses, which is
very much the culture of Rohan, and how Grima is trying to tame all of that,
including both Eowyn and Theoden. Good symbolic work.

Title: Battle Song of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4740> the Riddermark
· Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 274
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:56:03 Score: 5
I liked the imagery of the raven and the wolf. They certainly fit the
militaristic feel of this poem, and in light of the Wargs and the crebain,
they certainly fit the idea of Rohan. I also liked how items were paired up
in verses, and how this was paralleled throughout the poem. It kept almost a
march rhythm, as of men riding to war. Or there were the short bursts of
command that all came together, like orders being shouted. The form was
perfect for the subject, and I would have loved to hear this in the
"slightly trashed" mead hall.

Title: Whispers <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2796>
· Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 273
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 19:58:06 Score: 5
I loved this poem much as I loved its inspiration, the Lament for Boromir.
And this poem stayed very close to that lament, but the idea of using the
Anduin as a means of bringing tidings to Gondor was almost more fitting, I
think, than using the winds. The Anduin would be a more certain messenger,
in my opinion. The rhyme and meter were excellent, and I think you could
tuck this poem in at the end of the lament and have it count as canon. It
feels completely authentic and natural. Brilliantly written.

Title: A Lullaby for
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1154> the Longest
Night · Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 503
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 20:04:36 Score: 6
Wonderful poem! I loved the idea of passing hope around during the longest
night of the year. There was some wonderful imagery bound up in the closing
and opening lines of this lullaby, and this set the tone for the rest of it.
I really enjoyed the notion of a mother and child providing a beacon that
might warm or guide a wandering Ranger. And I liked the assurances provided
that this was not all done in vain but rather a noble duty passed down by
noble men. The entire poem was a wonderful tribute to sheltering hope in
dark days, and I can see it bringing comfort not only to a slumbering child
but also to the mother who sang the lullaby. Beautiful writing.

Title: The Creation
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4282> of Horses ·
Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
3> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 275
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:25:30 Score: 8
Quite possibly the most stunning collection of imagery and metaphor that I
have ever come across. This is absolutely beautiful stuff. I loved the idea
of Bema using rippling streams as blood and flint and iron as hooves. Each
one carries with it a host of associated ideas that fit perfectly into the
vision behind the Mearas. The idea of a horn being used to waken the horses
and the idea that their hearts still echo with the sound of that horn is
brilliant, and the descriptions of the horses galloping are so amazing that
I'm digging through the thesaurus in an effort to do them justice but I'm
coming up short. The colors were deep and vibrant. Each one had its own
personality, and it all came together to form fantastic pictures in my mind
as these horses galloped past. And then there's the alliteration: definitely
present but subtle enough that it doesn't draw attention to itself. Rather,
it serves the focus of the poem, which is exactly how it should be done. The
Rohirrim were described as a people who sang many songs, and they would have
been quite good, I imagine, in the creation of songs. This definitely proves
it!

Title: Arnor
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=4> Ascendant ·
Author: Dwimordene
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· Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 232
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:26:37 Score: 2
I really like the phrase "a sunset king for the sunset towers." It's
beautiful imagery, but the sound is a bit ominous, especially considering
the fact that this is the start of a new Age.

Title: Eyes like the
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=4609> Moon · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 125
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:27:56 Score: 3
I really like the idea of Faramir finding this poem among the Haradrim dead
and deciding to keep it. The poem itself was good and clearly written from
the perspective of one who is not a native to Gondor, but my favorite part
was Faramir's reaction. Good characterization.

Title: Morgul
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13137> Vale ·
Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1306
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:29:20 Score: 2
Chilling description of Minas Morgul. The narrative was quite vivid, and the
fact that even Aragorn felt dread says quite a bit about this stretch of
land. Nice descriptive work.

Title: His Lady's Horse <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/hisladyshorse.htm> ·
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 943
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:30:02 Score: 3
I can just see the twinkle in Halbarad's eyes as he delivers those last
lines about the lady being well. And it is definitely a good thing that it's
dark, or Aragorn would have probably lost a great deal of dignity while
earning some ribbing from Halbarad.

Title: Another
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7781> Name ·
Author: Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 296
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:30:59 Score: 3
I loved the way that Aragorn not only accepted his new name but was also
able to take meaning from a title that was probably given in derision. It
says quite a bit about the man and how he's always looking a bit further
than most people, seeing double meanings and portents. Nice elaboration on
the name "Strider." It is an apt description in many ways.

Title: More
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13240> like to
the swift sons of Eorl · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1377
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:31:23 Score: 3
Eomer is entertaining some rather sobering thoughts here, especially the
part about both Rohan and Gondor losing the heirs to the kingdom. But the
imagery used to describe Boromir racing around with Theodred was beautiful.
I like the phrase "skilful havoc." That creates some interesting mental
images.

Title: A net
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13213> of warring
duties · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1361
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:31:47 Score: 3
Traps within traps within traps. Poor Denethor. His suspicions really did
get the better of him, but what a fascinating picture his mind paints! And
seen from this perspective, Gandalf truly is a menacing and untrustworthy
ally. I wouldn't want him near me if I had suspected even a part of what
Denethor suspected.

Title: Fathers
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13225> and Sons,
Cousins and Brothers · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1383
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:32:12 Score: 3
Theoden's response to Theodred's complaint was beautiful. It hit me hard,
and it seems to have hit Theodred hard, too, if his stammered apology is any
indication. I'm very certain he won't make hasty complaints like that again.
Very sobering little drabble and brilliant characterization of a very wise
Theoden.

Title: Pride
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13208> · Author:
Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1366
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:32:42 Score: 3
I really liked this account of Eomer meeting Firefoot. I like the fact that
Firefoot was born the wrong way, too. It adds an extra bit of spice to his
personality. It probably should have warned Eomer that he was up against
quite a bit, but then, I suppose the reverse could be true, too.

Title: Tales of the Hunter <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=857>
· Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 722
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:37:51 Score: 4
I love the stories that focus on the ones left behind, such as the mothers
to all those Rangers who go tromping about in the muck. And I really like
the way this story was told as a series of vignettes, all in the same place
but all so very different as the child grows into a man. But the last one,
where the tale of the hunter and the elf was resumed, brought it full circle
and linked them together so that they weren't so different after all. Great
story.

Title: 110 <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4427> ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 59
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:38:11 Score: 4
I like the way prose and poetry were mixed in this story. It gives a
somewhat jumbled feel, and in this case, that's a good thing. It helps tie
the reader into what Boromir is experiencing. The feeling is that he's
adrift and wandering without ever truly hoping to find what it is he's
searching for. And this means that when he does find it, the relief is that
much more profound. Great play on moods, and I like the switches back and
forth. It was a very effective method.

Title: Downfall
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11548> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 354
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:39:00 Score: 5
This was both very dark and, in a strange way, very upbeat. I'm not quite
sure how that was managed, actually. It's a fascinating idea to have one of
the Faithful go back for a reluctant bride only to sunder them both. Great
concept, but even greater are the words he speaks. He's not looking at the
darkness but rather at her and how they'll be together. Which says a lot for
him, and it also says a lot for her in that she apologizes and admits to her
mistake. There's definitely a lot going on in the background of this story,
and that makes it very rich.

Title: Two of <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3132>
Thirty-One · Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 174
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:40:22 Score: 4
I love looking at familiar scenes through unfamiliar eyes. In this case, the
choice of two Rangers from the north was a brilliant idea. Aragorn was a
familiar presence, and yet he had changed. Other characters were also seen
in new light, such as Elrohir and the hobbits. I like the way that Tarkil
flashed back and forth through time as part of his fever, enabling us to see
other moments, like the Paths of the Dead. Great technique and great new
look at the final battle in RotK.


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Msg# 5145

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 59 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:06:54 Topic ID# 5145
Title: Promises to
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2919> Keep · Author:
Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 169
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Reviewer: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:41:40 Score: 5
Brilliant development of an entire subculture among the Rangers. And when I
say development, I mean full-fledged realization. So many angles and
perspectives were covered, from the grizzled old captains to the new
recruits. Tarkil himself was certainly a developed character, complete with
strengths and faults, and I love the way this story wove in and out of canon
events, such Aragorn meeting the hobbits in Bree as well as the Grey
Company. Great attention to detail and excellent characterization,
especially in making all the OCs come to life.

Title: Where the Stars
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=107> Are Strange ·
Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Men · ID: 255
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:45:33 Score: 8
The "existential Aragorn" had some fascinating musings. This was probably
the best romp through Aragorn's head that I have ever found. My favorite
line from the story sums up what I like best about this particular
characterization of Aragorn: "You value your honor too much to purchase it."
That seemed to be the capstone for a lot of what Aragorn was wrestling with,
first when he couldn't kill Indirkan and later when he was trying to decide
whether or not to trust him. It all came down honor in the end. And also
whether Aragorn could trust his own judgement, which was an interesting
problem in and of itself. I loved the part where he went through what each
of his incarnations might do and ultimately decided that he didn't know
Aragorn well enough to know what Aragorn would do. He was definitely
feverish, but his insights were still sharp, regardless. And I very much
enjoyed the way this story was brought full circle once he was crowned king
of Gondor. And how Indirkan turned out to be kin in more than just matters
of honor. Great story! Now what about that sequel? "Dynasty," anyone?

Title: Swords <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3102>
Returned · Author: Leaward
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2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 172
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:56:23 Score: 6
I loved the cultural exploration in this story and all the little things
that were highlighted, such as Edhelwen being the first to see if the Ranger
carried a second sword, which custom lead into the custom of the second
sword itself. The explanation for that was brilliant, and I loved the way
that Beleg tried to dance around Tarkil's curiosity, with mixed results. And
Tarkil himself was hilarious. Rarely are children portrayed so well.
Celepharn's treatment of his brother was perfect, and I was reminded very
much of my own brothers and they way they acted toward each other. Great
story and great use of OCs.

Title: Heirs of <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=834>
Isildur · Author: Dwimordene
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-14 23:59:59 Score: 8
The balance between humor and drama is sometimes hard to find, but I think
Dwimordene nails it in this story. It starts hilariously, and I had trouble
holding back my laughter. But then it becomes a bit more serious, and the
frank discussion between Halbarad and Aragorn on the need to produce heirs
and the differences between the way Elves see love and the way Men see it
was fascinating. It ultimately resolved again into a much lighter tone,
though perhaps not as light as it had begun. It's a loaded story, for as
teasing as it might be in the beginning, and I love sifting the layers. But
most of all, I think I love the characterization of Aragorn and Halbarad.
The dialogue between them is fast, as one would expect between two friends,
and they respond to changes in mood or tone very quickly. And it's a very
good depiction of a relatively young Aragorn and Halbarad. You can see the
roots of their later personalities, but there's still an innocence about
them that is both refreshing and bittersweet. Great story.

Title: Walk No More
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4475> in Shadow ·
Author: Anoriath
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4> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 1004
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-15 00:03:40 Score: 7
Fabulous characterizations and one of the most entertaining confrontations
I've ever seen. The fact that this confrontation comes from protective
brother and would-be husband (plus the fact that this protective brother is
Eomer and the would-be husband is Faramir) makes it that much more
enjoyable. Eomer was such a strong presence, all but barging in and then
dropping not-so-subtle hints about what the Riders of Rohirrim are willing
to endure. His challenge was a good one, and Faramir answers it well. He's
also in great form, and I love the observation that Eomer's belt is twisted.
It's a little thing, but it's something that Faramir would notice. And had
Eomer been an enemy, he would have probably used it against him. But
strangely enough, this seems to break the ice between the two, and one of
his jests about riding finally seems to register in the end. Wonderful
story, and thank you for making both Faramir and Eomer appear as strong as
possible.

Title: Who Watches
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3729> the
Watch-stones? · Author: jen_loves_elves
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-15 00:09:00 Score: 6
This story caught me a bit by surprise with its characterization of the Wild
Men. They're certainly out of the ordinary, but they seem to have very keen
insights. I really enjoyed their conversation with Aragorn, and he also
seemed to draw quite a bit from it. I loved the question of whether he was
running to or from, and how Aragorn answered it in the end by remembering
Arwen. I think the Wild Men might have caught that as well, or sensed
something of it. And their observation that it wasn't quite time yet was
fascinating. I now wish there was a bit more that might explain exactly what
these people see in Aragorn.

Title: Fall of Osgiliath <http://www.planet-tolkien.com/fan_writings/read/2>
· Author: Valedhelgwath
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5> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 633
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Reviewer: Thundera
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> Tiger · 2005-08-15 00:11:21 Score: 4
Underneath all the hectic battle and the fear and the doubt, there's an
absolutely brilliant characterization of Faramir in this story. His method
of getting Callen out of the city was sheer genius, and I loved the way he
rallied his troops, making certain that they were never routed in their
retreat. Thank you for restoring Faramir to a place of greatness once more.
He desperately needs it.

Title: Maps
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge13/6215.html#cutid1> ·
Author: Kit5
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9> (aka Pippinswolf) · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID:
1111
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Reviewer: Bodkin
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1> · 2005-08-15 01:58:48 Score: 1
I love Merry and maps. And Sam being assured of his own talents. And ominous
foreshadowing!

Title: One
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3043&cid=12100> of The
Lads · Author: Dreamflower
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5> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 980
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Reviewer: Bodkin
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1> · 2005-08-15 02:08:31 Score: 2
This is an enchanting story. I just love Merry and Pippin treating the rest
of the Fellowship as oversized hobbits. And the fact that they are showing
themselves as useful members of the team, able to forage and help supply the
bigger people.

Title: Concerning
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=11940> Ladders ·
Author: grey_wonderer
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> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 926
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Reviewer: Bodkin
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1> · 2005-08-15 02:22:17 Score: 2
How do you produce all these lovely Merry / Pippin stories? The bit I love
best is Merry between the arguing Grubbs - and the way they manage to
confuse him.

Title: Religion
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2911&cid=11177> in Middle
Earth · Author: Nerdanel
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8> · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 436
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Reviewer: Leaward
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2> · 2005-08-15 06:22:54 Score: 6
This non-fiction essay offers a balanced look at what religious practices
were, or more significantly, were not observed by the various cultures in
Middle-earth. Each culture, Rohir, Men, Hobbits, are looked at individually.
Although I was disappointed in the single reference to the Elven traditions,
it is a useful tool when trying to write a character and decide how they
might curse or look for help -- rarely would it be how we might traditional
'pray' although it is pointed out that even Sam called upon Elbereth (in my
own words) the way a Catholic person might call upon a saint.

An interesting read, and a useful source when world-building and
character-creating.

Title: Good Enough
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3453> · Author:
Karenator
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> · Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 217
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Reviewer: Leaward
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2> · 2005-08-15 06:28:59 Score: 10
Nasty spiders combined with nasty training companions all cause problems for
Daeron and Legolas, poor little elves. Well, perhaps they're not so poor,
nor so little anymore.A continuation of the characters from Serious Trouble,
Daeron and Legolas are now old enough to be training to help guard Mirkwood.
Karen has created a new character - Belas - who is a wonderful antagonist.

Karenator has written wonderful descriptions of battle and all while using
first person POV. It is very interesting to see all the different views of
similar situations -- especially when Legolas' brother feels so guilty when
Legolas is hurt. Descriptions of the rock in the water, the elven ties to
nature, while still maintaining humorous 'Daeron' sayings tied this story
together perfectly.

Karenator's inspired idea of how the red-banded spiders originated was an
interesting twist and added to the depth of characters of the cultures she
looks at, and I liked the obvious effort into researching spiders behaviour
made it that much more believable.

Her writing is clear and engaging, with emotion and detail in just the right
quantities. I have often looked to her stories for ideas of how to write
insults, and the 'pretty elf' reference cracks me up everytime. I always
look forward to her writing and this story did not disappoint.





Title: Serious <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1633>
Trouble · Author: Karenator
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Reviewer: Leaward
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2> · 2005-08-15 06:29:19 Score: 8
This story had me sitting down and reading it late into the night, it
captured my attention so. A lovely blend of humour and description using an
original male character, a friend of a young Legolas, to view the dangers of
Mirkwood .

Daeron is a full, well-rounded character who has his own unique personality
that remains elf-like and yet humourous where so many elven stories I have
read have elves as ethereal, almost humourless beings. The writer's ability
to capture his worries and joys brought this story to life.

It was also nice to see a 'nice' Thranduil rather than the monster many in
the fanfic world try to portray him as.

Quotes like "Now, there is a language that has no rhyme or reason! It is
about as pleasing to the ear as a blade scrapped across stone" just grabbed
my attention and held it. Yet hidden amongst the humour are deep questions
... ones that have often been asked -- how can 'good' people do 'bad'
things?

The author has the ability to keep the reader engaged, while presenting
characters with depth. She has an easy to read style yet manages to capture
the emotion and essence of each scene.

A lovely story!

Title: Servant of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2574> Elbereth ·
Author: Beethoven's
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9> 7th · Races/Places: Villains · ID: 796
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Reviewer: Leaward
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2> · 2005-08-15 06:33:35 Score: 8
Beethoven's 7th has provided an interesting look into the workings of an
Orc's mind in this story. I've always wondered if there was an element of
good left in an Orc, considering that usually evil does have some element of
good in it and it would be nice to think that an Orc, especially one who was
originally an Elf and not born Orkan, could remember and return to that
world that he was supposed to inhabit, the Elven world.

I like how her character thinks 'misterfrodo' is a single name and doesn't
see it as two separate words. It is attention to details like this that make
me like a story because it shows that the author is attempting to get into
the character's mind and provides a less flat character.

While staying canon to Frodo's and Sam's movements, the author has managed
to inject a separate viewpoint, and an original idea within the storyline of
the Quest which is a difficult task to achieve. I hope the author continues
writing, and allowing us to see Tolkien's world through fresh eyes. And that
is the whole idea of fanfic writing.





Title: Renewal <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3162>
· Author: Bodkin
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1> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 883
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Reviewer: Leaward
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2> · 2005-08-15 06:39:12 Score: 9
Renewal is a very interesting peek into how Celeborn and Thranduil view the
changing of ME and their decision to go to the West. I think that Bodkin
manages to capture Celeborn's consideration of his choice, along with his
conversation with Thranduil, in a thoughtful, believable manner.

Bodkin's use of metaphors and similes helps you picture the woods
surrounding them ... " It was as if they sought the comfort of the closeness
of the few remaining elves, approaching like dogs slipping closer to the
fire on a bleak winter’s night." She also captures their emotions while not
being dragged down into angst which would have changed the enjoyability of
the story.

I also like how the author gets inside the characters relationships and with
a single line can describe so much -- Elrohir talking about how his
grandparents would fight was hilarious and yet kept everyone within
character. To insert humour while maintaining solemnity is a difficult
balancing act that Bodkin has achieved admirably.

A lovely story about how the decision was made to finally abandon Middle
Earth and go West by the final elves, treated with dignity and respect.

Title: Rohirrim Grey <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/rohirrimgrey.htm> ·
Author: sulriel
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· Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 143
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Reviewer: Leaward
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2> · 2005-08-15 06:56:25 Score: 9
For a non-horse person, this page has often been referred to while I have
been trying desperately to figure out my characters' horses. I had no idea
that horses could change colour as they got older -- that grey horses
actually could turn completely white like that.

This is a great page to use for us 'townies' to use and it's a hidden jewel
that needs to be exposed.

For me as a writer, it contains the little details that I often find so
intriguing and love to put into a story -- that if a horse has a white
'stocking' then the hoof will also be light or how the sun or sweat can
bleach a horse's colour. As a reader, I love it when a writer includes
little details like that to help bring us into the character's world so I
appreciated finding a page that included such detail that I could use within
my stories. And the links to the pictures are helpful too because the way a
horse holds its head, or just stands can also be useful. It was especially
interesting because the page puts modern day horses into the frame of the
Rohirrim horses.

And it also provides a chuckle to see horses with Tolkien names -- I still
wonder what some of her clients must think. I know my own family gives me
looks for being such a Tolkien fanatic.





Title: Travel Times in <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/traveltimes.htm>
Middle-earth · Author: sulriel
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· Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 144
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Reviewer: Leaward
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2> · 2005-08-15 07:02:55 Score: 10
I cannot tell you the number of times I have turned to Travel Times in
Middle-earth to research a trip my character would take, or how many times I
have recommended it and provided the links to it for other Tolkien fanfic
writers who immediately have added it to their list of favourites also. I
know of no other resource that provides such absolutely necessary
information for a fanfic writer who wishes to stay to canon.

Travel Times in Middle-earth has been presented as an easy-to-read chart
with all the starting and ending points and various stops in between as well
as including minimum and maximum lengths of times to reach each point for
any journey in Middle-earth. Alternative routes have also been included so
when I want my character to take a 'different' route, thankfully someone has
already thought of it for me. They've even thought to include how long it
would take if travelling by wagon as well as how often you would need to
rest a horse, and other problems that might be encountered.

On the occasion that I have had my character ride to someone not included on
this chart (only once so far since I was taking a character to Forchel -- a
very obscure place in Tolkien's world) they have included a guide of how
long a horse and rider would take, both in minimum and maximum times so I
can calculate the trip myself.

I highly recommend this extremely useful guide and truly believe that if you
write fanfic this will become a resource that you cannot do without.

And I didn't forget my towel. ;)

Title: Campdóm and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2931> Lufian · Author:
Drake/Eokat
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0> CoAuthors · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1039
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-15 07:06:28 Score: 10
I have used this story many times when writing my own chapters about my two
OC's as an example of how men and women think differently about the same
situation. The authors have taken the idea of following a Rohan warrior and
his wife for a few days while he takes respite from his duties and they have
given us a glimpse of the regular soldier's life into the workings of the
differences between the sexes..

I like being able to see into both Rowen and Halig's minds and what is
important to each character, and why they are reacting the way they are.

The little touches, like how the women talk when they are preparing a meal,
what a lovely glimpse into how women really do talk (men would probably be
shocked if they heard some of our conversations). And Halig's thought of how
he uses his axe to hew Orcs' heads but how it can also be used to chop the
wood to keep his family warm ... what a wonderful way to get into his
character's head.

I have been in discussions arguing against present tense as I generally find
it jarring, yet it was my third reading of this story before I realized this
story is written in present tense, the authors have told the story so well.
Yet its use adds an interesting aspect to the story, as you seem to feel
that you are being carried along with the characters and helps draw you into
their world.

It is a story that I feel I can go back and read many times and each time
pick up a new nuance, and that's what I love from reading a story. Depth and
detail, and these two authors have delivered wonderfully.

Title: Upon a Field of
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/the_danamark/20403.html> Gold · Author:
Dana
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4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 277
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Reviewer: Lindelea
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> · 2005-08-15 07:26:04 Score: 7
I love the way Dana writes Pippin, especially in this Cormallen piece. So
many bright spots shine out:

"No," Pippin says stubbornly; then he does.
"I'm no child," Pippin says, softly. "I am a soldier, you know."
Pippin sits up smiling, hair tousled, cheeks warm with new, unfevered color.
"Merry? Why, you are almost as good as breakfast."
"As well as ever," Pippin smiles. "Though, I do rather have to relieve
myself, cousin."

I guess there's a limit on the amount of quoting or I'd clip more. But these
little snapshots of time during Pippin's recovery at Cormallen are
wonderfully written, the characterisations ring true, the pictures are
deftly sketched with an economy of words, and all fit together in a logical
progression.

A very satisfying piece to read, start to (perfect) finish.


Title: Dandelion
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1694&cid=7027> Clocks ·
Author: Alawa
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3> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 17
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:38:09 Score: 1
I can practically see the brightness of that day, and the feelings the
memories must invoke for the Queen. Well done!

Title: New
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13198> Home ·
Author: Tanaqui
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> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 20
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:38:37 Score: 1
Sweet and warm, and very natural!

Title: 'Peering
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=808&cid=7811> in the water
as the dark eve fell, I caught him, Gollum.' · Author: Avon
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 19
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:39:13 Score: 1
Shiveringly intense! Very evocative, using all the senses; well done!

Title: Leavetaking
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8127> · Author:
Forodwaith
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> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 16
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:39:40 Score: 2
Well written, expressive, true to the characters; this drabble does exactly
what one should, put bring forth a point, a feeling, and Gilraen's loss of
hope is evident here. Well done!

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=808&cid=7657>
Prince of Golden Flowers · Author: Avon
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> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 18
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:40:00 Score: 1
Very sweet; a beautiful and sad thought, to remember and remind of those who
gave to the last measure.

Title: Gloria Mundi <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2149186/1/> · Author:
Altariel
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1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 38
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:40:26 Score: 2
The last line, particularly of a drabble, is often what makes the difference
between memorable and soon forgotten; your final words bring it all home:

"King's Man, he swears, and weeps."


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Msg# 5146

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 60 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:07:01 Topic ID# 5146
Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8772>
White City · Author: Forodwaith
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> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 21
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:41:50 Score: 2
Very lyrical, with that touch of paternal regret and pride; his instruction
is very much in character, as is the inward prayer for forgiveness, should
all go ill. Very well done!

Title: In <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13136>
the Hands of the King · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 22
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · 2005-08-15 08:42:26 Score: 2
What a fine father you give us, concerned for his child but honest; Beregond
gives his son the respect of the truth, with its mingled fear and hope. I
like it!

Title: The Heirs of <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/heirsofisildurthe.htm>
Isildur · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 24
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:42:52 Score: 1
My twin sons thank you! Few things are as horrid as being mistaken for
another by those who should know best!

Title: And Now to
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3596> Bed · Author:
Marigold
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=98
> · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 783
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:43:31 Score: 3
I simply love this little peek into something to essential, and so telling,
as sleep; there is great understanding of the personalities and the changes
that these characters have gone through, most impressive for their short
expression in these drabbles. Well done!

Title: Changes
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=14> · Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 231
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Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
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3> · 2005-08-15 08:43:58 Score: 1
This was very sweet, and well expressed; in character and within canon as
well! Very nicely done!

Title: Links
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8126> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 23
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=23>
Reviewer: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> · 2005-08-15 08:45:01 Score: 2
A lovely remembrance; the imagery of the chain, the thing that binds the
prisoner to his prison, is perfect, as is the shared freedom that Frodo
hopes for his companion. Well done!

Title: Fairer Than
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3587> Most · Author:
SlightlyTookish
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
5> · Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 69
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 10:21:46 Score: 5
A cute and funny story, the dialogue is completely in character; each
hobbit's words would have been clearly his own, even if there had been
nothing to say which one of them was speaking. I adored poor Sam's effort at
diplomacy, and seeing Aragorn's mild frustration and amusement. And yet it
was sweetly serious in showing the deep love between the cousins. I really
love seeing this light-hearted moment of fun, before things got so dire at
Weathertop. A very lovely little gap-filler.

Title: One Day <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2019>
· Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 72
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 10:22:47 Score: 2
Ah, yes! The difficulties of writing, and of resisting temptation, and of
getting throught the day with too few words committed to the page. Poor
Bilbo!

Title: To Water the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3585> Dust · Author:
Eruanna
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7> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 77
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 10:23:10 Score: 2
What a beautiful thought: that even the little trickle of water that Sam and
Frodo come upon in their need was there just for them, to succor them in
their need, placed there by Ulmo, Lord of the Waters.

Title: For
<http://homepage.ntlworld.com/matthew.adams1/personal/isabeau_drabbles.htm#s
eason> Everything There Is A Season · Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 31
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=31>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 10:24:17 Score: 1
Faramir's cousins find themselves cornered by a matchmaker. Very cute.

Title: At the <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/ATSN.html> Sammath Naur ·
Author: Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 126
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 10:26:20 Score: 5
From the first time I read this I was stunned at the amazing imagery and
insight into Frodo's soul as he grappled with the last ditch efforts of the
Ring to save itself. His knowledge that he would have to die to accomplish
his task overcome by the Ring's power there in the heart of the mountain,
his feelings of helplessness, betrayal, and finally of his resignation, as
he thought he was going to die, all brilliantly portrayed. One of the best
depictions of this scene I have ever read.

Title: The Problem of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4062> Eowyn: A Look
at Ethics and Values in Middle-earth · Author: Madgamgee
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
7> · Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 376
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-15 10:52:59 Score: 10
Madgamgee brings a welcome degree of nuance and context to the question of
whether Éowyn is more properly considered a hero or a deserter. This essay
has two parts, one that aims to undermine the charge that Éowyn knowingly
deserted her post, and another containing a novel application of a, shall we
say, 'timely' loyalty structure to serve as a competing ethical structure
that would've created a duty in direct opposition to Éowyn's remaining in
Dunharrow.

The first part of the essay is a rather Jesuitical analysis, but also the
weaker section. I admire the effort to make much vaguer the terms of Éowyn's
regency, and to suggest that perhaps her duty had ended as soon as Théoden
returned from Helm's Deep, but I believe that it founders on the fact that
Théoden explicitly says, when he confines Merry to Éowyn's side, that Éowyn
shall govern the people in his absence. Given that he says this in the
context of keeping Merry out of battle, it seems highly unlikely he would've
been as vague with Éowyn as the essay requires him to be in the setting out
of her duties, such that she could plausibly be said not to have broken her
uncle's decree in leaving Rohan to ride with the Muster. If her duty as
regent had ended upon the king's return, it was quite evidently
reestablished and with the expicit expectation that Éowyn would be
duty-bound to remain in Rohan, or it would've made no sense to commit Merry
to her service as a means of keeping him safe from the battle in Gondor.

Moreover, Éowyn is at hand to hear this exchange, since she rises
immediately afterwards and tells Merry to come with her to show him the gear
she had prepared for him (The Muster of Rohan, 90). Whether or not Théoden
had been vague with her earlier, by the time the host departs, she cannot
claim that her uncle's terms were plausibly vague enough that she had not
disobeyed the terms of her service in riding after him.

The second section, intended to be a second move building on the first,
exists to establish Éowyn's motive, which Madgamgee does in two steps, and
it is this section that I think merits applause. Taking Merry's observation
of Éowyn's hopelessness as accurate, the question becomes: why? What
specifically drove her to ride with Théoden? It isn't, she argues, spurned
love, for the timing doesn't make sense if we assume that her hopeless
attraction to Aragorn is at the root of her decision to ride. After all, she
stayed behind when he told her to. However, that still leaves the
possibility that Éowyn stayed only because she thought Théoden might allow
her to ride with him, thus allowing her to follow Aragorn anyway.

This is where step two comes in, by providing a plausible, positive motive
for Éowyn that has nothing to do with the abortive relationship she desired
with Aragorn. Drawing on the structure of comitatus groups, and using
Tolkien's analysis of one such group in his essay "Ofermod", Madgamgee
convincingly argues that Éowyn's motivation is a cultural one driven by the
terms of a *comitatus* group comprising herself, Théoden, and Éomer, where
to be left behind or exiled from the group is a fate literally worse than
death, as it is a disgrace and a failure of one's obligations. That Théoden
and Éomer did not recognize that they were bound to Éowyn in this manner is
a failing on their part, and must also be taken into consideration when
judging Éowyn.

The nifty comparison of Faramir and Éowyn, arguing that the two are
symbolically complementary, and therefore that they both belong together and
deserve each other is just gravy. While Madgamgee doesn't pretend that she's
definitively answered the question—indeed, she ends by concluding that Éowyn
is both hero and deserter of necessity—she gives an excellent argument that
forgiveness is warranted in Éowyn's case by virtue of mutually incompatible
duties.

Speaking as one who wearies of the fact that it is only Éowyn who is
questioned in this manner (as if Merry didn't do *exactly* the same thing
she did, and also in the face of Théoden explicitly forbidding him to ride
to war—sexism in Tolkien is a debatable matter, but I think sexism in
readership remains a lurking accusation so long as we only put Éowyn under
the microscope, ignoring the question: "Merry: hero or deserter?"), I cannot
but say: "A paper", Madgamgee!


Title: Fool of a Took and the Tree <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2183515/1/>
Wizard · Author: AngieT
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=45
8> · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 1146
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 10:59:26 Score: 3
This is a very charming and humorous bit of wee!hobbit fluff. It's Pippin's
first meeting with Gandalf, and the little Took is as curious and
irrepressible as ever. I love his non-stop chatter and the way that the
questions jus seem to pour out of him.

Title: Shire <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3035>
Reckoning · Author: Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 1176
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:01:00 Score: 3
This author does Merry's POV in such a special way, and this story is no
exception. As Merry watches over his cousins and Sam in Cormallen, he
reminisces about times past in the Shire. It's all done in a very sweet and
gently manner, and I love the interaction between Merry and the rest of the
Fellowship as they wait for their heroes to awaken.

Title: Bilbo’s
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2439&cid=9652> Gift ·
Author: Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 1177
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=1177>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:01:30 Score: 2
In all the hustle and bustle of making his escape from the Shire, Bilbo did
not forget his young cousin Merry. Merry's delight at his special gift, and
his love for Bilbo are shown very clearly in this sweet little vignette.

Title: Growing
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2601&cid=10143> · Author:
Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Races/Places: Hobbits: Children · ID: 1178
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=1178>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:02:05 Score: 3
This is just an adorable bit of wee Merry and young Frodo fluff. I always
love that particular interaction, and this author has a lot of good insight
into Merry at any age. Frodo is so very much the wise older cousin here, and
knows just how to reassure the little one.

Title: A Light
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/9612.html#cutid1> In Dark
Places · Author: Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Genres: Movie-verse · ID: 835
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:02:55 Score: 4
This is a lovely exploration of a movie-verse moment. I really love the
little framing story, with Pippin showing Merry around Minas Tirith, and his
initial reluctance to let his cousin know of his dangerous feat; Merry's
determination to follow Pippin up to the beacon in spite of his own fear,
because he doesn't want them to be seperated again; and his immense pride,
when he realizes that Pippin was responsible for the summons to Edoras. A
very nice story!

Title: Watch Every
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1768> Shadow · Author:
Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 920
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:03:33 Score: 2
A very nice gap-filler, for a moment not often covered in fanfic: Merry's
first encounter with the Black Breath in Bree. Very deft and perfectly in
canon.

Title: Smoke And
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2825> Fire · Author:
Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 805
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:04:47 Score: 5
This story is so filled with urgency; we are inside Merry's head, as he
desperately fights to find his way to his cousin, trapped in the burning
City of Men. The way his fear and anguish are described, each encounter in
battle, all contribute to the suspense, and the feeling of despair. The
author actually makes me forget for a few seconds that we know all ends
well. It is a very skillful blend of book verse and movie verse, and the
insight into Merry's thoughts and character are a highlight of this writer.

Title: A Walk In The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1545> Woods · Author:
Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Genres: Adventure · ID: 1179
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=1179>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:06:04 Score: 3
On a walking trip from Tuckborough to Bag End, poor Merry is seriously
injured, and it is up to little Pippin to save the day. He has to use all
his courage and everything he's been taught to do the job. But it's Merry
who taught him all that he knows. This is just a lovely look at the two
young hobbits, and shows how they grew up to have the pluck to follow Frodo.

Title: Cousins on
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1631> Watch · Author:
Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 984
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:07:23 Score: 3
In two parts, we see first Merry watching over Pippin at Cormallen, and in
the second, Frodo and Pippin watching over Merry as a minor illness causes
him to have a relapse of the Black Breath. Merry h/c is this author's
specialty, and she is spot on in catching the reactions of his cousins to
his illness.

Title: Maps
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge13/5559.html#cutid1> and
Legends · Author: Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 1191
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=1191>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:08:04 Score: 3
This is a lovely and poignant explanation of what became of Thorin's map,
the one of the Lonely Mountain that was used by Bilbo to find Smaug's back
door. Frodo has left it for Merry, but he is not to find out or open it
until he is Master of Buckland. Frodo's message to Merry is so full of love
and wisdom, and Merry's grief is so sharp. Very beautifully done.

Title: Cousins,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2447&cid=9668> Cold and
Comforts · Author: Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 908
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=908>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:08:53 Score: 3
Just what the doctor ordered: a sweet little tale of hurt/comfort, with all
three cousins being slightly sick, and all three of them taking care of one
another. A nice bit of post-Quest coziness, and only slight angst.
It made me want to just cuddle up with them myself.

Title: Of Fish and
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2552> Feverish Hobbits
· Author: Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1180
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=1180>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:09:47 Score: 4
There is not a lot of Merry hurt/comfort, but what there is of it, a good
deal of some of the best, comes from this author. This story turns the
conventions on its head, as Pippin is the one expected to get sick. But he
has only a small cold, while poor Merry lingers on the brink of pneumonia
during the Quest. But the whole Fellowship pulls together to take care of
him, and show him their love.

Title: Walk Warily
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3255> · Author: Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=46
2> the Hobbit/Marigold CoAuthors · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1175
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=63&form_story_filter=1175>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 11:12:51 Score: 7
I love this story, and not just because it came from my bunny. This is a
gapfiller for what I find one of the more intriguing sentences in The Two
Towers. Just how and why DID Merry know that the stones might tip up on the
unwary, and let them down into foul pits?
These authors answer the questions brilliantly, and in an unexpected
fashion. Normally, one would expect the victim to be Pippin, and at one
point it seems as though it might be. But it turns out to be Merry who
nearly drowns and Pippin who saves him--using the knowledge and lessons he
has learned from his older cousin.
The sweet and tender hurt/comfort is so lovingly shown, and the bond between
the two of them is explored in a way that I find thoroughly satisfactory.
This is a good read: suspenseful, sweet and even humorous by turns.


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Msg# 5147

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 61 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:07:14 Topic ID# 5147
Title: Nine Riders <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2350522/1/> . Author:
Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> . Races/Places: Villains: Drabble . ID: 791
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=791>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:17:46 Score: 10
This is a series of nine wonderful drabbles about the Nine Black Riders and
is absolutely brilliant! Before I read these, I had never really given very
much thought at all about the circumstances, personalities or motivations of
any of the Black Riders, save perhaps the chief of the Nine, the dreaded
Witch-king of Angmar. They had always been basically just faceless evil,
enslaved by Sauron through the nine rings, with nothing of their previous
selves left. But the author manages in just a few chilling words apiece to
give them something distinct and separate from simply a terrifying presence.
She manages to endow each of them a distinct back-story and a fitting
personality. For a few of the villains, she actually had me feeling sorry.
(Who wouldn't be tempted by immortality if diagnosed with a terminal
disease? Who would have thought one of them would grieve for the way their
horses were killed at the Ford?) Others made me shudder in revulsion. One or
two of them actually made me smile. ( A passion for books? A love for
flying? Who would have thought of it? ) And I loved the delicious irony of
the first and greatest, as he suddenly finds himself doubting his
invulnerabilty, and then as he speculates on the exact wording of the
prophecy he had been counting on to keep him safe, when he is suddenly
confronted by Eowyn on the field of Pelonnor.

Title: The Mirror of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4018> Angelica .
Author: Salsify
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
4> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 997
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=997>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:19:07 Score: 2
This is a brilliant use of a minor canon character, and a good look at what
a point taken can make to a life. Angelica Baggins got over her vanity, and
grew a backbone, all because of her cousin Bilbo's gift.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3036&cid=11747>
Moments Peace . Author: pearltook1
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=72
> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 973
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=973>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:19:49 Score: 3
Everyone knows Sam carried out his part in the Quest for the love of his Mr.
Frodo. Yet perhaps he also had other reasons for doing what he did, and in
this vignette we learn what at least one of those might be. An excellent
insight into the mind of a gardener.

Title: Together
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2158&cid=8916> In One
Breath . Author: Pipspebble
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
4> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 816
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=816>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:21:19 Score: 3
Pippin's POV as he recovers in Cormallen, and faces his fears that he might
not recover from his injuries. The author has his voice down perfectly, and
the bravery and love that helps him face his fears and overcome them are
Merry's. Very touching.

Title: Meetings
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge02/5622.html#cutid1> .
Author: Elendiari22
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
3> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 798
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=798>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:22:47 Score: 2
In Minas Tirith after the Quest, Frodo has a bit of foresight about the
future. But it seems it was more than just a dream. Delightful insight into
the characters, and absolutely a charming ficlet.

Title: Thicker Than Blood <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=135>
. Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 669
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=669>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:23:42 Score: 3
There are any number of stories out there focusing on the time between
Frodo's stabbing and his recovery. This one is a very plausible version,
showing the deep attachments between the hobbits, and especially Bilbo,
Frodo and Sam. Sam's insights at the end into what the quest will mean for
Frodo are especially touching.

Title: And the Halfling
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=86> Forth Shall Stand
. Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 511
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=511>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:24:41 Score: 3
This examines a rarely considered idea: which of the other hobbits besides
Frodo could have been a Ring-bearer? Frodo's conclusions are very much on
target for his companions; his relief that they would not have to bear his
burden is well shown.

Title: Home Cooking
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1468> Hobbit-Stlye .
Author: Budgielover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 175
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=175>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:25:59 Score: 2
Another of the author's delightful "mischief in Rivendell" stories. I love
that it is not a lack of ability in the kitchen that defeats the hobbits in
their efforts, but simply the size and unfamiliarity of everything.
Hilarious!

Title: Arriving at
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3553> Crickhollow .
Author: Hai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
6> Took . Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 1185
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=1185>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:26:39 Score: 2
A very nice little gap-filler, incorporating much of the dialogue from "A
Conspiracy Unmasked", yet adding many details that the Master left out.

Title: Conspirators
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3003> . Author:
SlightlyTookish
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
5> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 1182
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=1182>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:27:18 Score: 2
A very plausible conversation between Sam and Pippin as they wait for Frodo
to awaken in Woodhall. Very much in character and well-done.

Title: Oath
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/9868.html#cutid1> .
Author: Pipwise
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
7> Brandygin . Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring . ID: 1181
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=1181>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:29:51 Score: 3
This is a very thoughtful and insightful vignette, a wonderful gap-filler
that could easily have taken place. Pippin's insight into what truly will
motivate the Fellowship much more than high-sounding oaths is so very
hobbity, and rings so very true. I loved this the first time I read it, and
am so glad for an opportunity to read it again.

Title: All's Fair
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3416> . Author:
Inkling
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
3> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 1113
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=1113>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:30:23 Score: 2
An interesting account of young Frodo's first love. The Shire society
depicted is distinctly Victorian, and very delightful. I love her little
Merry. And poor young lovestruck Frodo is very well portrayed.

Title: Fear <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=421> .
Author: Ariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 688
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=688>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 11:31:24 Score: 6
This is a long and suspenseful story, centering around a very young Frodo,
and a cousin, a very well-realized OC, who starts out not liking our lad
very well. Through a series of traumatic and dramatic events concerning them
both, they come to admire and care for one another. I also love the
portraits drawn by this author of Frodo's parents, especially Drogo, who
comes across as sensitive and level-headed.
The story is also very well-plotted, with no loose ends dangling. The
picture of life in Brandy Hall and Buckland is intriguing as well. I do love
this story, especially the POV character, Dody.

Title: While the Ring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=449> Went South... .
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 33
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=33>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:30:30 Score: 2
There were two weeks between Rivendell and Caradhras, and this story has
filled them up to the brim with action, adventure, angst, humor and h/c. A
very riveting story, that ramps up the excitement and suspense.

Title: Olorin I Was,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2844> Olorin I Am .
Author: Arquen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 137
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=137>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:31:05 Score: 2
A very beautiful and lyrical look at what happened to Gandalf after the
Balrog and before the Eagle rescues him. Wonderful prose.

Title: Just in <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3082>
Case . Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 477
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=477>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:31:43 Score: 2
A very chilling look at the temptation of Celeborn! Not something often
considered. But he shows why he was considered one of the wisest of the
Elves. A very plausible scenario.

Title: Forgotten
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2009> Casualty .
Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 591
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=591>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:32:14 Score: 2
And what happened to that overly curious fox who watched the hobbits
sleeping as they traveled across the Shire? Poor thing, this little story
answers that question.

Title: Making <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1786>
Verses . Author: Zimraphel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
9> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 611
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=611>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:32:54 Score: 2
Interesting POV--what *did* Lindir *really* think of Bilbo's verse about
Earendil--this little tale attempts to answer that.

Title: Long Leagues for Little
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=744> Legs . Author: Fadagaski
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
4> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 628
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=628>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:33:40 Score: 3
An absolutely perfect conversation between Sam and Boromir, completely in
character for them both. Boromir realizes he has been underestimating the
little folk when Sam hands his opinions back to him. A very nice moment
between the two of them, and very lovingly done.

Title: Dusk-singer
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=388> .
Author: illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 702
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=702>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:34:21 Score: 2
What a unique and wonderful concept! After his wounding at Weathertop,
Frodo's spirit is kept alive by the sound of a nightingale's song. Could it
be Luthien? Amazing originality!

Title: Something
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3065&cid=13460> to Do
before the End . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 753
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=753>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:35:04 Score: 3
Stories in which the spirit of Boromir stays on to look over his young
hobbit friends always make me sniffle, and this one more so than most. I
love the idea that he was able to strengthen and support Pippin's spirit in
those crucial moments before rescue. Beautifully done!

Title: Pippin the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3339> Troll Slayer .
Author: Auntiemeesh
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 832
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=832>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:37:18 Score: 4
A very unsual Cormallen fic. In most of them Pippin is injured the way one
would expect of crushing: broken ribs, broken limbs, and head injuries. In
this one most of his injuries are light, but the head blow caused amnesia,
and poor Pip wakes up with no memory of what happened after the hobbits left
the Shire. A wonderful tale of his gradual recovery from the confusion.

Title: Sam's Gift <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/samsgift.htm> . Author:
Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler . ID: 955
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=955>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:38:09 Score: 2
What a sweet thought, that it was Sam's hard choice to stick by his task in
spite of his fear for home, that gave Galadriel the strength for her own
hard task. This was just lovely and very well done indeed.

Title: Mae
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1123&PHPSESSID
=81bbdff5479eba252b785634d85ebade> Govannen . Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 148
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=148>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:39:18 Score: 1
Wonderful bit from Aragorn's POV about Glorfindel's timely arrival and help
at the Ford.

Title: Charity
<http://www.dwimordenespage.org/index.php?go=7&id=19&chapter=23> . Author:
Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 234
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=64&form_story_filter=234>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:39:48 Score: 1
Aragorn both mourns and ponders, on the subject of funeral pyres.


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Msg# 5148

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 62 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:07:47 Topic ID# 5148
Title: Beyond
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> the Door .
Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 283
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=283>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:40:22 Score: 2
This brief glimpse into Halbarad's thoughts just before they take the Paths
of the Dead show his foresight and determination.

Title: Boys
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> to Men .
Author: ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 286
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=286>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:40:51 Score: 2
This is such a sad and sweet moment, as Beregond yields to his son's pleas
to remain in the City, and realizes his little boy is growing up.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=11957> Test .
Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 385
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=385>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:41:24 Score: 1
I love seeing unexpected characters tempted by the Ring, if only briefly.
This one of Arwen is completely believable.

Title: Going
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13135> to Rohan .
Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 401
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=401>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:42:03 Score: 2
This made me smile, depicting something I had not ever thought twice
about--how Aragorn's horse was brought to him from the north.

Title: Second
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13140> Watch .
Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 410
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=410>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:42:38 Score: 2
Beautiful! It perfectly captures both Pippin's weary youth and Boromir's sad
resignation as they stand watch together on the Quest. The ending is so
bittersweet and rings very true.

Title: Ties That Bind <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/tiesthatbind.html> .
Author: LadyAranel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 457
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=457>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:43:57 Score: 1
This captures that moment when grief and practicality clash.

Title: At the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=2706> Witch King's
Feet . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 459
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=459>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:44:33 Score: 1
Very well done drabble of Merry's POV as he struck the Witch-king, and its
immediate aftermath.

Title: Before
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=371&cid=8009> the Call to
Muster . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 461
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=461>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:45:34 Score: 2
How hard that last little time after Merry's healing and before Pippin
marched off to the Black Gate must have been! It was such a brief and
precious time, and they filled it hobbit fashion.

Title: No <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13239>
Rival . Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 544
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=544>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:46:11 Score: 2
Very nicely done set of drabbles done from two different POVs. I like seeing
this early basis for a true friendship to develope between Arwen and Eowyn.
I like the way each one is very much in the voice of that character.

Title: Master
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1089> of the
House . Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 639
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=639>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:46:38 Score: 2
Very nice little drabble, showing both Sam's and Elrond's thoughts. Sam
shows his determination, and Elrond appreciates it.

Title: Devil of Kindness <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1682>
. Author: Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 685
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=685>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:47:34 Score: 2
Very thoughtful well chosen words, describing how Gandalf came to let
himself be swayed by Saruman. Not something I've seen in fic before.

Title: A Step
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge14/5258.html#cutid1> in The
Dark . Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 1221
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=1221>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 13:48:08 Score: 2
Creepy and evocative, it plays on the idea of Merry's feelings about
heights, and what might have been going on in his head during that endless
trek through Moria.

Title: The Errand
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/rabidsamfan/149289.html> Lad . Author:
Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete . ID: 884
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=884>
Reviewer: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . 2005-08-15 15:43:30 Score: 1
I love this Bergil story - it is delightful. I long to find out more.

Title: Chasing a Song <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=183> .
Author: Dragon
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
0> . Genres: Mystery . ID: 924
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=924>
Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> . 2005-08-15 16:03:46 Score: 6
This is a lovely short story about Elrohir being 'saved' by a singer on the
shore. The writer has used enough detail to allow the reader to imagine
being in the position Elrohir finds himself in, without going overboard into
the 'purple' vein of prose.

I like that the author does not reveal who the elf Elrohir sees is, but the
discriminating reader should know the 'singer by the shore' who, hopefully,
still lingers and saved Elrohir's live from the tide.

It is a nice glimpse into a young Elrohir, and how often we as parents write
off our children's stories as 'overactive' imagination. A well told story.

Title: In Bree <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1777346/7/> . Author:
Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 1345
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=1345>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:08:37 Score: 3
Oh, this is beautiful, and one that I do not remember seeing before! I love
the image of Frodo watching over each of them, and the perception of Merry
as being more affected by their experiences than the others. This is
something that Tolkien hinted at, but never fully explored. And I just love
seeing Frodo tucking his cousin in. Sigh.

Title: Not Without
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3879> Hope . Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 48
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=48>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:10:10 Score: 3
This was a fascinating and well thought out bit of speculation as to what
Gilraen's position was in Aragorn's life and in Elrond's household. The
author came up with a very plausible scenario, and in doing so created a
wonderful personality for a minor canon character.

Title: Fellowship
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13132> . Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 396
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=396>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:11:04 Score: 3
Among the stories examining why Legolas was chosen for the Fellowship, this
one is the most straightforward: the company needed an archer. Yet there is
more going on here than that, as the friendship of Legolas and Aragorn is
shown underneath.

Title: Warring
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3345&cid=12751> Duties .
Author: Pipwise
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
7> Brandygin . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 806
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=806>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:13:28 Score: 4
This story makes perfect sense out of the unanswered questions of just why
Gandalf was at first reluctant to go to Faramir's aid, and why he knew that
Merry had ridden among the Rohirrim. A very good explanation, and shows why
Pippin was searching so urgently for his missing cousin. It brings out the
consequences of foresight, and the difficulty of setting priorities and
making decisions in matters of life or death.

Title: To keep you from harm <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2035964/5/> .
Author: Cuthalion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
7> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 912
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=912>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:14:15 Score: 2
Why did Boromir insist on taking the journey to Imladris, when it was so
clearly meant to be Faramir's errand? His thoughts on the subject are set
forth clearly here.

Title: Currents <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3666>
. Author: Thundera
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Tiger . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 1008
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=1008>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:14:52 Score: 3
This is a magnificent vignette, exploring Frodo's thoughts as the Fellowship
drifts down the Anduin closer and closer to the breaking. He examines his
own motives and feelings, and begins to realize that he will have to go on
alone. His thoughts of each of his companions are very well done, and the
metaphor of being swept along by a current is perfect.

Title: Cheery Letters
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1951> From Bree .
Author: Lulleny
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
2> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 1094
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=1094>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:15:23 Score: 3
A very interesting gap-filler. It certainly addresses the notion that the
hobbits might have written home to let them know they were safely in Bree.
Of the various hobbits, Merry seems the most logical to do so, and his
conversation with Strider is convincing, as is the outcome.

Title: In the <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=80&cid=409>
Keeping of the King . Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama . ID: 1107
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=1107>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:15:57 Score: 2
Frodo's first few moments as he wakens to the surprise of finding himself
alive, and Gandalf, and Sam. His shock, and then his joy, as he realizes
that it is all true. And the ending is so beautiful, it makes me sniffle.

Title: Foolish <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1930540/1/> Hobbit . Author:
Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 120
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=120>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:16:22 Score: 2
Just how happy was Frodo, really, to have Gandalf assign Sam to be his
companion in his journey? A lovely little gap-filler, imagining what Frodo
would say once he was once more alone with Gandalf.

Title: Reunion at <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=91>
Isengard . Author: Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 515
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=515>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:17:10 Score: 2
How much knowing that Gandalf was alive would have meant to Merry and Pippin
when he showed up at Isengard! Their conversation is perfectly in character,
and so very hobbity. I love it!

Title: The Comfort of Good
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1624> Friends . Author:
SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 626
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=65&form_story_filter=626>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:18:13 Score: 4
A very nice mingling of present and flashback, as Merry, back in Crickhollow
after the Quest muses on their last night there, just before they left. Some
wonderful characterization of Merry, Sam and Pippin, all of them desperate
to keep Frodo, and one another, safe. And a bittersweet ending for the
reader, as Merry congratulates himself that all of them are finally home
safe and sound in the Shire.


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Msg# 5149

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 63 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:08:04 Topic ID# 5149
Title: Prayer
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=184> .
Author: illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 887
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=887>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:18:50 Score: 3
Merry learns what it means to pray as he sits by Frodo's side after the
Quest. The author wisely leaves all things to do with "religion" to one
side, a good choice, as JRRT said hobbits were not religious, and simply
shows him reaching out blindly in desperation.

Title: Hand in Hand <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2057941/1/> . Author:
illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 888
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=888>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:19:24 Score: 2
A moment that cries out for a gap-filler. Bilbo observes Frodo's grief at
his parents' funeral, and reaches out to him. Very sweetly done, and showing
why Frodo came to love Bilbo so.

Title: Lightness
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge04/15353.html#cutid1> .
Author: Dana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
4> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 1230
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=1230>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:22:49 Score: 5
This is a Cormallen fic, but that doesn't half do justice to this author's
gorgeous lyrical prose. It shows Merry's painful thoughts in a wonderful
stream-of-consciousness style, as he waits for his Pippin to wake up, his
realization of all they have gone through to arrive at that point, that they
all yet live, and that they have all accomplished what needed to be
done--but he is not really complete until Pippin wakes, and Pippin's first
words are so perfect! This is a Merry-and-Pippin who are truly a part of one
another.

Title: The Diary <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2053419/1/> of Frodo Baggins
. Author: aelfgifuemma
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=59
> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 1243
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=1243>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:23:24 Score: 2
A very melancholy recounting of the first few weeks after Frodo lost his
parents. His confusion, anger and pain are very clear, as well as the
fruitless efforts Saradoc and Esmeralda are making to help him.

Title: The Captain's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3210> Last Charge .
Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring . ID: 81
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=81>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:23:54 Score: 2
Although movie-verse, this captures truly the spirit of weariness and sorrow
that Faramir must have felt when his father ordered him away once more. His
actions here as he prepares for what he is certain will be his last ride
ring true.

Title: For the Common
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4035> Man . Author:
Anoriath
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
4> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring . ID: 661
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=661>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:24:21 Score: 2
A bit of irony here, and a wonderful examination of the difference in
perspective between the noble leaders and captains, and that of the ordinary
soldiers.

Title: Payment
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2486&cid=9769> Put Off .
Author: pippinfan88
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
1> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring . ID: 1038
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=1038>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:24:54 Score: 3
A very unusual look at what it was like for Pippin after his injuries at the
battle of the Black Gate. He very nearly died, and his spirit fled; how was
it he survived? What made his spirit return to his body? The answer in this
story is very insightful, and makes use of other elements of Tolkien's
mythos.

Title: Sunshine
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge01/8967.html#cutid1> and
Laughter . Author: Anastasia
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
5> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: War of the Ring . ID: 1232
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=1232>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:26:27 Score: 2
A very sweet story of Gandalf comforting Pippin's troubled dreams, as they
wait for the siege in Minas Tirith. I love the image of the Wizard calmly
directing the dream as he rubs the hobbit's back.

Title: Lost
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1828&cid=7613> and Found .
Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War . ID: 1253
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=1253>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:26:57 Score: 2
I love this strong and elegant musing from Eglantine's POV; her thoughts are
so clear and her love for not only her son, but for her nephew and cousin
comes through beautifully.

Title: I Will Know <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=4577>
Suffering . Author: Andy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
4> Longwood . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 704
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=704>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:27:21 Score: 1
Frodo finds love in Valinor in the Undying Lands; very lyrical and lovely
and angsty.

Title: Dreme <http://www.geocities.com/singeaddams/Dreme.html> . Author:
Singe
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 858
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=858>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:27:52 Score: 4
This was wonderful. I loved the way Frodo's dreaming was a part of his
healing, and how gradually the good parts of his life begin to come alive
for him and the horrors of the Ring recede as if a dream. The touches of
humor, as Frodo believes his first awakenings to actually be dreams are
lovely--especially the part where he kisses Celebrian.
And the ending is perfect.

Title: Homeward bound <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/homewardbound.htm> .
Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 945
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=945>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:28:23 Score: 1
Very nice reunion of two old friends.

Title: Fear no more <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2071845/1/> . Author:
Cuthalion
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
7> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 970
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=970>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:28:54 Score: 3
Absolutely gorgeous. Poetic and lyrical, and very true to the voice and
character of Faramir as depicted by JRRT, and the dream a very plausible
one, and true to the imagery used in canon. I liked this very much, and
could easily see this happening.

Title: Links
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=8126> . Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble . ID: 23
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=23>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:29:18 Score: 1
Concise, with a real punch to it. I can see Frodo doing this.

Title: Just
<http://homepage.ntlworld.com/matthew.adams1/personal/isabeau_drabbles.htm#c
hop> A Bit Of Chop . Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble . ID: 30
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=30>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:29:44 Score: 1
Very funny. Poor Eomer.

Title: Seasong
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1125> .
Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble . ID: 149
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=149>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:30:14 Score: 1
A very cute drabble; in the West, Legolas finds himself somewhat smitten.
Gimli approves.

Title: Blossoms
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3523&cid=13397> . Author:
ErinRua
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble . ID: 287
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=287>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:30:37 Score: 1
Very sweet. I like a perceptive Legolas.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13125>
Long Awaited Party . Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble . ID: 1298
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=1298>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:31:12 Score: 1
What a cute idea! I like the parallel between this and Bilbo's party.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13214> King's
Summons . Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor . ID: 1392
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=1392>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:31:39 Score: 1
I like this moment from Beregond's POV--very cute.

Title: The Old Dwarf and the Sea <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1819850/1/> .
Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete . ID: 3
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=3>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:32:03 Score: 1
Chuckle. This is funny! I look forward to its completion!

Title: Coming Home
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1868> . Author:
SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Romance . ID: 1071
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=1071>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:33:27 Score: 6
Among the many stories of the homecoming of the Travellers, this one stands
out for me from the first time I read it. Although it is primarily a story
of the romance of Merry and Estella, it is also a story of the strain
between Pippin and his father. For me, the most memorable chapter, and the
emotional climax of the the story, is chapter fourteen, in which, in order
to heal the breach between the Thain and the Brandybucks, Pippin recounts
the tale of Denethor, Boromir and Faramir. It is an emotionally wrenching
scene, and Pippin's equating Merry with Faramir is devastating to his
father. Yet that is not the end of the tale, and there is yet to be found
much suspense and adventure before the very satisfying end.

Title: Where Roses <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1832295/1/> Grow . Author:
pippinfan88
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire . ID: 589
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=589>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:34:27 Score: 4
This little AU story explores what might have happened if Pippin had ended
up a father right after returning from the Quest. It begins with a night of
drunken lust, and gradually developes from there. The author manages to
avoid most of the expected cliches, and the OC character of the unlucky
bride is very well done. It's very sad from the start, and ends very sadly,
as well, yet it is also a sweet and gentle look at Pippin as a young parent.

Title: The Masters of Buckland
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1591> Have Always Been Romantic
. Author: Saoirse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
8> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire . ID: 624
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=624>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:35:02 Score: 2
I love a story with a gallant Merry showing his love for Estella, and this
certainly delivers, as Merry and his wife discover he is not the only
gallant Brandybuck to have graced Brandy Hall. Very sweet and funny as well.

Title: At Last <http://www.livejournal.com/users/maripo5a/35483.html#cutid1>
. Author: Mariposa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
0> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire . ID: 808
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=808>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:35:28 Score: 3
Beautifully describes the intense emotions and feelings that, first Pippin,
and then Merry, have upon returning home and being once more with their
parents. For both of them the realization of how they have grown triggers
their reactions--very different ones.

Title: As Good As
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2688> You . Author:
pearltook1
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=72
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire . ID: 854
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=66&form_story_filter=854>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:36:24 Score: 6
I loved this from the first time I read it. It is a wonderful picture of the
relationship between Paladin and Pippin, one in which they may have had some
difficulties, but were never estranged, as many writers make them. It is a
very realistic and painful conversation between father and son, as they
compare themselves one to the other, and both feel they have come up short.
Pippin finally comes to realize that he is up to the job of Thain, whether
he feels ready for it or not, and that possibly no one is ever really ready
for such a job, but can only do their best when it comes to them. Very
touching, sad and sweet.


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Msg# 5150

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 64 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:08:37 Topic ID# 5150
Title: While
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3266&cid=12450> There's
Breath . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire . ID: 1277
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=1277>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:37:30 Score: 3
Another of this author's tales chronicling the relationship between Pippin
as Thain, and his cousin and chief bodyguard, Ferdibrand. In this story, it
is Pippin who does the saving, at considerable risk to himself. It's amazing
how, even knowing ahead of time that it will turn out all right, there is so
much suspense.

Title: Travellers'
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2523> Tales . Author:
Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 75
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=75>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:37:56 Score: 2
This story shows so well Bilbo's regrets at not having traveled more, his
loneliness in being away from his family, and his delight in seeing his good
friend the Dunadan.

Title: Tangled Web
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2055> . Author: daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 151
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=151>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:38:36 Score: 5
Oh my goodness! What a long and wonderful read! I normally only read
hobbit-fic, although of course this did have Bilbo in it, but even the focus
on Elves was not enough to turn away my interest. Of course, like any
gap-filler, I knew the ultimate outcome, but the author managed to make me
forget that half the time, and cause me to worry about the survival of
characters that I *knew* would survive. The pacing was tense, and swept me
along, and the mix of humor and drama and action was masterful. I also loved
the natural weaving of canon quotes into the story. Very well done!

Title: Sheathing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=769> Sting . Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 203
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=203>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:39:14 Score: 2
Very nice. I remember reading this before, and was impressed with how
realistic it was. I loved Bilbo's bargaining, and the bit about shoes at the
end.

Title: A Short <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4400>
Rest . Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 428
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=428>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:39:57 Score: 3
I do love stories where little Estel meets Bilbo on his Adventure. This was
so sweet and cute. I adored the child's inquisitive nature, and Bilbo's
wistful homesickness as he described his hole. And the question at the end
was lovely. I'd love to see a sequel where Estel attempts to sneak along
with the dwarves!

Title: The Tide of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=890> Times . Author:
daw
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
6> the minstrel . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 681
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=681>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:40:44 Score: 4
Goodness gracious! If I read very many more of this author's stories, I
might become almost as much an Elf fan as I am a hobbit fan. This was
wonderful. I love the OCs, and the deep love and loyalty between Thranduil
and his sons, and between the brothers Thranduilion. I also like the way the
organization of the realm is so clearly delineated. A nice long satisfying
read!

Title: The Unexpected
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3151> Homecoming .
Author: JMac
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
3> . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 792
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=792>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:41:21 Score: 3
Bilbo's return during the auction as they were selling off his goods is
quite a shock to the hobbit. I love the way he really is so very hobbity in
this one, with his talking of food and meals. And the way he goes after his
favorite armchair, spiriting it away from the S.-B.s is hilarious.

Title: The Party Next Door <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1330750/1/> .
Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> . Books/Time: The Hobbit . ID: 1255
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=1255>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:42:12 Score: 3
What Bilbo's unexpected Party, with thirteen dwarves and a wizard might have
looked like to a nosy neighbor! The POV character is never named or
identified, but he (or she) is clearly a very typical narrow minded hobbit.
The whole story is amusing, and very well done, a gap-filler of sorts for
The Hobbit.

Title: There
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1129> And Back
Again . Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble . ID: 51
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=51>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:42:42 Score: 1
This was cute. I loved Bilbo's concise explanation of his absence, and the
comparison of Lobelia to a dragon, LOL!

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13234>
mother's duty . Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> . Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette . ID: 1384
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=1384>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . 2005-08-15 19:43:47 Score: 4
I wonder if Finduilas shared this wisdom with her sister-in-law. It would
certainly explain the three sons of Imrahil! It does seem like the children
of Adrahil had an awful lot of sons, proportionately speaking. Four out of
five. But regardless Finduilas's concern and willingness to do her duty was
touching. this was a very nice moment shared between the two women.

Title: Father
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1126> to Son .
Author: Azalais
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
7> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble . ID: 139
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=139>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:44:03 Score: 2
I don't believe I've ever seen a fic dealing with this before. Very
original, and so concise, the moment of lucidity, yet not quite enough to
give Gandalf all the information he needs.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1865&cid=7782>
Hobbit, Chapter 18 - The Return Journey . Author: Elana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=51
> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble . ID: 297
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=297>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 19:44:22 Score: 1
A perfectly concise summary, with punch.

Title: Mistress <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=635>
Gilraen . Author: AfterEver
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
2> . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID: 65
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=65>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:05:15 Score: 2
An interesting exploration: What would Gilraen, herself unfamiliar with
Elvenkind, have thought was expected of her in Rivendell? Both sad and
amusing.

Title: Remembrance <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1928301/1/> . Author:
Ainaechoiriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=2>
. Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor Drabble . ID: 108
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=108>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:07:17 Score: 1
Pojgnant drabble. Legolas begins to count the cost of his friendship and
love for mortals.

Title: The
<http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/A/Alex/LOTR/Q_Z/S/SweetestHarvest.htm>
Sweetest Harvest . Author: alex_cat_45
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=57
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Elves . ID: 1001
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=1001>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:10:39 Score: 1
A very sweet, wise and insightful look into Elrond's thoughts of those he
loves.

Title: A Proper
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3896> Course of
Action . Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> . Genres: Humor . ID: 78
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=78>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:12:05 Score: 1
This is hilarious! I love how quickly Aragorn lost complete control over the
entire conversation!

Title: Moss and
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=116> Stone .
Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings . ID: 560
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=560>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:14:09 Score: 3
Gandalf's last visit with Tom Bombadil is not what you might expect. But he
knows at the end that he is leaving the Shire to be watched over. I
particularly enjoy the seeming indifference of Bombadil to all the task
Gandalf accomplished--except for one thing.

Title: His Last
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1713> Words . Author:
Amarie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 85
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=85>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:18:24 Score: 1
The Ring's hold over Boromir is made so painfully clear, as he attempts to
write a letter to Faramir. Very angsty!

Title: Stealth
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/10128.html#cutid1> and
Grace . Author: Anastasia
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor . ID: 802
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=802>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:21:43 Score: 1
A very sweet and cute story, as Pippin tries to learn how to dance in the
Gondorian fashion.

Title: Distance <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2605>
. Author: Ancalime8301
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
4> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War . ID: 659
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=659>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:26:02 Score: 2
A very plausible gap-filler: the journey from the Morannon to Cormallen must
have been a long, slow and painful one, as the author shows.

Title: For <http://www.quillsandink.com/fiction/viewstory.php?sid=112&i=1>
Love of Creation . Author: Andreth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
6> . Races/Places: Villains . ID: 92
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=92>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:36:00 Score: 1
A fascinating attempt to get a look at what made Sauron tick.

Title: Borne to Me <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1674505/1/> By the Sea .
Author: AngelQueen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=48
3> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman . ID: 1258
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=1258>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:42:28 Score: 1
A very lonely Galadriel pines for Celeborn, as she awaits him in Valinor.
Very well-thought out and a bit angsty.

Title: Of Elvish Equitation and Shiny
<http://www.fanfiction.net/s/818189/1/> Things . Author: AngelsFall
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
3> . Genres: Humor: Animals . ID: 660
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=660>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:54:19 Score: 1
A very creative prank by a pair of inebriated Elves. Not your usual
pranksters, either.

Title: Knitting
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechal12/10357.html#cutid1> . Author:
AngieT
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=45
8> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 1225
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=1225>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:55:22 Score: 1
I do so love stories about Pippin's scarf, and this one is both funny and
sweet. I love the details this author uses!

Title: Firelight
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3534&cid=13424> . Author:
annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 393
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=67&form_story_filter=393>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-15 20:57:38 Score: 1
The imagery in this drabble is vivid, the feeling intense, and the ending
has a punch.


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Msg# 5151

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 65 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:09:13 Topic ID# 5151
Title: Split <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=477>
Second · Author: Aralanthiriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
5> · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette · ID: 662
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=662>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 21:02:12 Score: 2
A movie-verse vignette, based on the scene in the snow, when Boromir picks
up the Ring: his thoughts are more chilling than the setting.

Title: Abrecan <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3053>
· Author: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 433
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=433>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-08-15 21:06:45 Score: 3
This is one of my favorite tales, you know I have a weakness for stories
that show the bond and the relationship between a rider and his horse. Mares
can be especially, ...well, 'marish', and you captured that very well with
her catch me if you can attitude.

Title: Captain of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3665> Guard · Author:
Arandil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
9> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 119
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=119>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 21:14:27 Score: 2
An interesting gap-filler for both The Hobbit and LotR, dealing with both
the escape of Bilbo and the Dwarves, and of Gollum. Very well-written.

Title: Duet <http://www.lightindarkplaces.net/DuetIndex.html> · Author:
Aratlithiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
1> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 886
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=886>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-15 21:16:51 Score: 4
This was the first piece I ever read that truly moved me to tears; it still
does. The grief expressed by the two cousins is so deep, and so rich and so
filled with the love they still have for the absent Frodo. To know how
bereft they now are without him in their lives is so beautifully painful.
These two vignettes are a powerful and emotional experience. I have seldom
seen grief so well expressed.

Title: La Belle Dame
<http://www.quillsandink.com/fiction/viewstory.php?sid=1> Sans Merci ·
Author: sindohte
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=58
> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete · ID: 1291
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=1291>
Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade · 2005-08-16 00:42:01 Score: 7
This is such an original idea. The whole bit of the Ring being called
Isildur's Bane or Precious makes sense of the way she ensares people. Always
men too, Galadriel resisted. The mean, the names given the Ring do suggest a
personality, a life of it's own, and to have a spirit attached to the Ring
explains this nicely.

I'd also never considered how Sauron made the Ring. Of course, the Dwarves
would be the perfect craftmasters to learn from! Sauron's memories of Aule
are also brilliant; I'd never considered that Aule didn't think to animate
the Dwarves, not that he couldn't.

One last comment. The Ring appearing to all Isildur's heirs and trying to
corrupt each generation is so good. As is the fact she seduced Gil-Galad and
was responsible for the radiance that gave him his name. I can't wait to see
what happens next!


Title: Wisdom's <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=451>
Thrall · Author: Mouse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
6> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 1011
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=1011>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:11:48 Score: 4
Tuor clings to some semblance of sanity by a thread, and one can see why.
He's so confined, so shuttered off and nearly beaten, he can hardly breathe
in the first chapter. The story of his gradual awakening to the fact that he
has still a will of his own and the means to act lead to his escape, half on
a kind of quasi-instinct, half on a sense that if he stays too long, when
he's only just managed to remember how to love another human being, he'll
simply go mad, is an interesting one.

Title: Shards of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4003> Memory ·
Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 1007
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=1007>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:12:17 Score: 3
Finduilas has never been a particular interest of mine, but Ellisande writes
her beautifully. Even if I find I can't be drawn into the story, it's still
a lovely piece of writing that comes far closer than I'd have expected to
making me feel something for Finduilas.

Title: Shining <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2453>
Black · Author: Salsify
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
4> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 996
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=996>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:12:50 Score: 6
Salsify does an excellent job in finding an entirely plausible rereading of
Eöl's tale, in all its bitterness and darkness, and showing a man who isn't
the villain we take him for. The entire situation becomes a much more grey
and complicated one, as prejudice works its ugly deeds and drives Eöl,
Aredhel, Curufin, and the Elves of Gondolin to a completely untenable
position. Eöl becomes a sort of aggressive Job figure, with every insult
heaped on his head for no reason he can discern, unless it's the taint of
Noldorin arrogance, and he's not entirely wrong. You feel for him as you
likely never did reading this version of his story, and I appreciated that.
Well done, Salsify! Another brilliant, bitingly ironic story!

Title: Shadow <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2168019/1/> · Author: Celebsul
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
9> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 775
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=775>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:14:54 Score: 2
Hm. Very interesting confrontation. It's the end that gives the pay-off, the
realization that Morgoth's fall will not undo the hurt of the world, and
that that being so, darkness can claim anyone, including an Elf of Valinor.

Title: Saying <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=159>
Farewell · Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion · ID: 730
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=730>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:17:13 Score: 2
Bittersweet, as one would expect since this isn't labeled an AU. I loved
this: "Almost. One of the saddest words of Arda Marred." That sums up the
story, doesn't it?

Title: Melyanna <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=593>
· Author: Finch
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
4> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 729
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=729>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:18:44 Score: 3
The idolator in Thingol may puzzle Melian, but I rather wonder whether she
shouldn't have caught a glimpse of that in the way he adored his daughter.
Nevertheless, Melian is wise enough to see at least the ultimate futility of
such love as he has for the Silmarils.

Title: The City of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2855> Stone · Author:
Elvenesse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 717
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=717>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:19:17 Score: 4
Nice bookends, these two poems. Aredhel's defiance is caught in that last
line of the first sonnet, as she determines that evil shall not confine her
to any prison, and her hard-won experience of the way love and hatred, good
and evil, are inextricably bound up together is the substance of the second.
One wonders whether she would've seen Gondolin differently, in those same,
explicit terms, if she had lived.

Title: Foreshadowing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1588> · Author:
Zimraphel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
9> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 610
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:19:41 Score: 7
Zimraphel could as easily have called this story "Foreboding" and been just
as right, for it certainly has a nice strand of darkness and anxiety flowing
though it. Inziladûn's visions, and the grief and fear that they subject him
to, being often of dark things, are portrayed very well here through they
eyes of a young Míriel. The little family drama—of a lost mother, of
ill-mannered cousin Calion, and a child's too-observant ways—opens onto the
darker court dramas and ideological fissures of Númenor just prior to the
Downfall. Zimraphel's usual skill at crafting believable characterizations
in short spaces is once again in evidence and gives us a beautiful, if
tragic, image of a father and his daughter, both of them in the path of a
storm that will eventually devour all their dreams.

Title: Sirion <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2551>
· Author: Wild
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
7> Iris · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 607
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:20:18 Score: 2
A bleak sort of exhaustion comes through this one, hammered home by the
repetition of the act of giving the dead to the sea, and finishing up, after
the lyricism, with the simple fact that now the survivors must walk long and
far to find water.

Title: The Dead
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2920> City · Author:
Wild
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
7> Iris · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 606
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:20:43 Score: 2
There's a slightly eerie feel to this, which is wholly appropriate to the
subject matter. I like the image of the wild things and stone claiming their
mastery of the city, which has no one now to defend even the ivy growing
wildly.

Title: High King and <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/highkingandhalfling.htm>
Halfling · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 581
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:21:09 Score: 3
Ah, the persistence of hobbits! No wonder Gandalf thinks it indispensable
for a wizard to have a hobbit or two in his company—they'll keep him
suitably challenged with their tenacity, as Argeleb discovered. And for
people in power, not to get their way the whole time but be confronted with
the proverbial brick wall is a good thing.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=166&STID=3864&
SPOrdinal=1> Tale of Isildur · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 550
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=550>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:21:33 Score: 4
I quite liked this as a highly stylized retelling and filling in of the
minimal tale in "The Silmarillion". One imagines there must've been many
songs about the stealing of the fruit of Nimloth that were popular
underground hits among the Faithful, and that they'd have grown bolder in
naming their hero in such songs once they no longer had to worry about the
King's Men harrassing them in Middle-earth.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3258&NGID=169&
SPOrdinal=3> Death of Glaurung · Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry · ID: 533
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=533>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:22:11 Score: 3
Cleverly turned phrasing in this poem; I'm not sure the words "uplifting"
and "Túrin' are capable of being said in the same sentence, unless there's a
negation of one or the other, so I find this quite well matched to (and
happily much shorter than) to the original story.

Title: House of Dust and Memory <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1864382/1/> ·
Author: Itarille
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
7> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 523
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=523>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:22:42 Score: 6
This seems a very plausible meeting to me. The edginess and discomfort that
comes of two very different personalities confronting each other is only
compounded by grief they are too acutely aware that they share across the
gulf of their particular manners and ways of looking at matters. The wife of
a murdered man and the wife and mother of Kin-slayers desperately need
comfort they can only give each other, but Itarille captures the difficulty
of even finding the means to express it without insult, without rubbing
something raw. She also returns to the elemental truth that neither Indis
nor Nerdanel will grieve forever for "This is life, and there is nothing to
do but accept it."


Title: Forsaken
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1144> Kin ·
Author: Meril
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
3> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 483
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=483>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:23:22 Score: 2
Interesting that Finarfin's decision stems as much from a desire to forcibly
spare his wife blood on her hands as from a personal abhorrence of blood on
his own hands.

Title: Wreath of Steel
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=166> and Silver ·
Author: Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 454
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=454>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 01:23:50 Score: 7
Galadriel is also not my favorite character, but Kielle does justice to her,
in all her complexity and turbulent history. Like Deborah Judge's excellent
Elrond fics, this story is preeminently a story about forgiveness, and
forgiving oneself, but it differs in its ambiguous end. Galadriel keeps
herself and keeps her secrets; we cannot say from the reddened water of the
mirror, which shows her that she blames herself still for the death of her
Teleri cousin, whether she has passed this final test of spiritual maturity
and learned to strike the fine balance between respectful repentance and
forgiving oneself. Moreover, I think the story would be lessened if it were
made too clear—Galadriel is before all else a figure of enigma, and it seems
fitting that she remain in some sense closed to us, perhaps especially after
so intimate a glimpse.

Title: Bed
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/blackbird_song/1449.html#cutid1> Time,
Part 2 · Author: Blackbirdsong
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=48
0> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 1248
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 04:57:36 Score: 1
Very poignant and believable.

Title: Departing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2606> · Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 183
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 04:59:02 Score: 3
This is the first fic I have ever seen dealing with the journey of Legolas
and Gimli to the West that included other Elves. Most of them have the two
of them travelling by themselves. Yet this story makes it seem logical and
fitting that other Elves went with them. Nicely done.

Title: Farewell
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9416> · Author:
Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 362
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=68&form_story_filter=362>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 04:59:34 Score: 2
Gandalf's task is finished, Radagast's is not. An interesting contrast
between the two wizards and their missions in Arda.

Title: Sunstar
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=138> ·
Author: illyria-pffyffin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
3> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 705
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 05:00:48 Score: 2
Sam's acceptance of the Gift of Passage after Rose's death--how did he
decide to go on to the West, and how did his children feel about it?


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Msg# 5152

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 66 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:09:33 Topic ID# 5152
Title: Namarie, <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=78>
Elessar . Author: Joanna
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings . ID: 746
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:01:17 Score: 1
A very poetical and lyrical examination of Arwen's feelings when Elessar
passed from the world, beautifully done.

Title: That Which
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3255> Remains .
Author: mir_noldoris
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
4> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings . ID: 1025
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=1025>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:01:56 Score: 2
An amazing and heart-wrenching picture of each of those who remained when
the Ringbearers left--not only the hobbits, but the Elves, and the King and
Queen of Gondor--all bereft of those they love.

Title: The Last
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3763> Time . Author:
SoundOfHorns
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
4> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Final Partings . ID: 1118
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=1118>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:03:05 Score: 3
The pain and sorrow of being left behind once more--this time by death; yet
the one whose pain is sharpest is not the one you think at first. Such a
beautiful, angst-filled examination of what it means to be mortal, and what
it means to outlive everyone you love.

Title: Memory
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/8879.html#cutid1> of Ents
. Author: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 800
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=800>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:04:10 Score: 6
I love the simplicity of the story, Sam, Merry and Pippin, busy helping to
rebuild the Shire, Merry and Pippin helping Sam to find the trees he needs.
I love the sure grasp of character the author shows. She knows and respects
these characters so much, and she has their voices down pat. I love Merry
and Pippin having a new understanding of the Old Forest after their
experience in Fangorn--something I, too, find entirely plausible, especially
since they drank Ent-draughts, and I love Sam still not being entirely sure
about them. The whole thing is very well crafted, right down to the perfect
last line.

Title: Nightly <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3382>
Noises . Author: Pipwise
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
7> Brandygin . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 827
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:04:55 Score: 2
Newly moved into Crickhollow, and once more in the shadow of the Old Forest,
Pippin relives the fears of their first dangerous encounter of the Quest:
Old Man Willow. Merry comforts him wonderfully, as they remember what
happened.

Title: Orc
<http://www.west-of-the-moon.net/servlet/ReadGenStory?storyID=220> Sign .
Author: Kit5
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
9> (aka Pippinswolf) . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 833
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:05:37 Score: 4
In this story, set a few years after the Quest, Merry and Pippin find
themselves leading the Shire into battle to fend off an invasion of Orcs
which had escaped the destruction of Sauron's downfall. It is a breathtaking
bit of action and adventure, with the urgency of their mission clearly felt.
Characterization, especially of some of the secondary characters such as
Saradoc and Paladin is very well done!

Title: Blood
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge06/10931.html#cutid1> Ties .
Author: Pipspebble
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
4> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 834
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=834>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:06:39 Score: 4
One of the best stories I have seen dealing with the grief that Pippin and
Merry felt after losing Frodo to the Grey Havens. The whole melancholy
account of their journey homeward, Merry's worry for Pippin, and their
reassurance of one another, as they confirm their love for Frodo and their
love for each other, is all so beautifully and realistically done,
intertwining memories of happier times with the poignancy of grief.

Title: All I
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3270&cid=12468> Ever
Wanted . Author: pippinfan88
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=33
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 844
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:07:14 Score: 2
A very different and amusing version of the Merry/Estella romance, it is
funny and touching by turns. The ending is especially touching.

Title: Concerning
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=11940> Ladders .
Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 926
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=926>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:08:19 Score: 4
This story just exemplifies one of this author's great strengths: showing
the affection and friendship of Merry and Pippin with humor. The plot is
pure sit-com, and is as funny as can be, and yet the theme of trust and
misunderstanding and forgiveness is still treated with respect. I love
Pippin in this, so dignified in his hurt, and Esmeralda, so wise and
understanding, and poor Merry who learns just how badly he has jumped to the
wrong conclusion.

Title: Always <http://www.livejournal.com/users/maripo5a/25137.html#cutid1>
Dancing . Author: Mariposa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
0> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 928
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=928>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:09:24 Score: 4
I adored this story the first time I read it: the whole notion of Pippin and
Merry training the other hobbits to help defend the Shire is wonderful, and
the continual refrain of memory, of the teachings of their beloved Boromir
running like a thread through the whole of this is so beautiful. I love all
the detail, the mentions of hobbit weakenesses and strengths, and Boromir's
joke. There is both seriousness and delight in this lovely story!

Title: StarFire <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1718>
. Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 983
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=983>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:10:08 Score: 3
One of Lindelea's post-Quest epics, focusing mainly on the friendship
between Pippin and Ferdi, but also encompassing many more friends and
relations, it is filled with angst and h/c for several characters, but the
ending is just spectacular, and more than makes up for the suffering along
the way.

Title: The
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge13/5226.html#cutid1> Long
Night . Author: Garnet
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
9> Took . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 1102
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=1102>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:11:11 Score: 3
Merry and Pippin wait out a bad storm in Crickhollow. The storm is vividly
and realistically described: the build-up to it, the way the weather made
them feel, the terror as the storm struck, and the devastation of the
aftermath are shown in graphic terms. But it's the love and caring between
the two cousins that carries the tale forward.

Title: Clasps
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge14/3017.html#cutid1> and
Links . Author: Songspinner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship . ID: 1222
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=1222>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:11:48 Score: 3
A lovely story underscoring the sweet friendship between Merry and Eowyn,
and Eomer as well. I love the gentle byplay between Merry and Eowyn, and how
the traditions of the Shire and of Rohan have much in common. A really nice
little vignette.

Title: Object
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4015&SPOrdinal=1>
Lessons . Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 586
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:12:27 Score: 2
A very melancholy and bittersweet encounter between Eowyn and Frodo, from
Eowyn's POV. The author has captured a very strong voice for Eowyn, and her
observations of Frodo are sharp and on target.

Title: Renewal <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3162>
. Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 883
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=883>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:13:21 Score: 2
Celeborn and the last of the Elves prepare finally to leave for the West.
His contemplation of why he lingered so long, and of Galadriel's possible
reaction to his arrival are very well done.

Title: When
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3577&cid=13548> One Door
Closes... . Author: GamgeeFest
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
9> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire . ID: 308
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=308>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:16:55 Score: 4
This is such a unique take on the death of Frodo's parents--sad, yet almost
serene, as they submit to the River when they are finally assured that their
child will be protected: and at that moment Bell Gamgee gives birth to
little Sam. It's not an obvious connection at all, yet once made, it seems
very obvious indeed. The years match, after all. The whole told in a
beautiful, sad, and lyrical style.

Title: Home Again
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2737> . Author:
grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Post-Ring War . ID: 915
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=915>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:17:55 Score: 6
This is a very well done story of Merry's and Pippin's adjustment to once
more being home in the Shire. Grey Wonderer, as usual, has a slightly
different take on things that makes this subject, often covered in fanfic,
original. I especially like the repetiotion of the opening chapter as it
nears the end. The reactions of the hobbit's families to their
circumstances, as they fail to understand what their sons have been through,
are heart-breaking. And I love Frodo's practical compassion for his cousins.
The ending is just lovely. The whole story has the warmth and love one comes
to expect with this author, even though it is not her usual humorous style.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3020&cid=11670> trouble
with Jam . Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> . Genres: Humor: Children . ID: 882
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=882>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:18:49 Score: 5
Grey Wonderer's Pippin is tenacious, persisitant and clever, even at the
tender age of six. When he wants jam, nothing will stand in his way. I love
the way he interacts with the various people who interrupt his difficult
quest. I especially liked the interlude with Bilbo, who thought he had
gotten the better of the little Took, and his thoughts about Merry and
swimming. He can always take a few moments to be proud of his Merry, even
when in the middle of an important quest for jam. The bit about the hammer
at the end was inspired!

Title: Important
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=12806> Choices .
Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> . Genres: Humor: Hobbits . ID: 879
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=879>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:19:31 Score: 4
I love this one. Pippin once more proves his competence to those who really
*should* know by now that he really isn't clueless, he just chooses to
appear that way sometimes. Merry is cute in his peacock vanity, and Frodo's
bewilderment at being confronted with Merry's vast array of waistcoats is
adorable. Pippin's parting shot is a lot of fun as well. "Second best
looking hobbit." Giggle.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=9766>
Soldier's Tale . Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Children . ID: 1134
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=1134>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:20:00 Score: 2
This author has a real penchant for the quirky, and this cute little story,
told from the POV of one of little Merry's toy soldiers is just wonderful.

Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3503> 'Just
Because' Gift . Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Children . ID: 1187
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=1187>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:20:37 Score: 3
This is a very sweet story of what happens when Pippin comes across an old
toy in a junk shop that brings back special memories for Bilbo. I love young
Merry in this story, and Bilbo is absolutely delightful. The ending just
makes you want to go, "aaawww".

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2364&cid=10886> Wedding
Table . Author: grey_wonderer
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=62
> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin . ID: 790
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=790>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:21:25 Score: 4
This one always makes me grin like an idiot. From the bantering argument
between Merry and Pippin at the start of the story on. Poor Merry as a
frustrated inventor is an interesting characterization, and when he finally
retaliates by gluing his cousin to the table it gets even funnier. But the
best part is the Pippin and Diamond interaction. I do not believe I have
ever seen a more original, unusual, or funnier situation in which they have
a first kiss!

Title: Clearing the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3064> Heir . Author:
Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete . ID: 1114
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=1114>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:22:47 Score: 2
A nice little story showing how Bilbo began to think of the possiblity of
adopting an heir. The Sackville-Bagginses are appropriately nasty, and the
unexpected arrival of Tooks put "uncle-ish" thoughts in Bilbo's head.

Title: Shire: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1052>
Beginnings . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Genres: Adventure: Long Form . ID: 703
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=703>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:23:29 Score: 3
A very excellent story detailing the origins of the Fallohide hobbits, how
they came to leave their forest homes and venture west; many of the things
we come to later learn about hobbits are hinted at here, and we see the
ancestors of our heros show the seeds of that heroism. Very logical and
plausible.

Title: The Courtship
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1189> of Samwise
Gamgee . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Poetry . ID: 463
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=69&form_story_filter=463>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:24:08 Score: 4
Now I could easily see Merry and Pippin writing this little ditty to perform
at Sam's wedding. As long as it rhymed they would not be much concerned with
the accuracy of the lyrics. And I am more than certain that Pippin would
have come up with a very catchy tune. I would love to have seen Sam's face
when they sang it. I also enjoyed the "official correspondence"; it was
quite funny!



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Msg# 5153

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 67 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:11:24 Topic ID# 5153
Title: Birthday <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2335>
Present . Author: Lindelea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
> . Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring . ID: 462
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=462>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 05:24:55 Score: 3
I loved this story the first time I read it. It is so wonderfully done in
Merry's own voice. It has humor, friendship, danger, suspense, sorrow and
joy; a lovely tale, though I do miss the one chapter in Frodo's POV that the
author later posted separately.

Title: A Step
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge14/5258.html#cutid1> in The
Dark . Author: SilverMoonLady
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 1221
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=1221>
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> . 2005-08-16 06:29:09 Score: 1
Elegantly chilling. Temptation is very real in this, as is fear.

Title: Bed
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/blackbird_song/1449.html#cutid1> Time,
Part 2 . Author: Blackbirdsong
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=48
0> . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID: 1248
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=1248>
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> . 2005-08-16 06:29:47 Score: 1
Lovely and gentle. I like the echoing last lines, especially Bilbo's!

Title: Nimloth's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3164> Grace . Author:
Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age . ID: 434
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=434>
Reviewer: Minuialeth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=42
7> . 2005-08-16 09:23:55 Score: 9
Saving the white tree is a turning even, as I see it, in the history of M.E.
; it is quite the difficult thing to be able to put it into writing , what
is more difficult is to put it into a piece that not only narrates the event
but gives insight into the characters as well! One of the finer points is
how the narration seems so real.Yes the deed was heroic but Isildur was only
a man. That sort of credibility you can't find often when you're talking
Numenorian tales. I love the fact that Isildur is not only a courageous man
but that you can also feel that he is youthful and has the natural
spontaneity that comes with youth. Another example is how Amandil has the
warmth of the grandfather and the insight and righteous baring of nobility.
The characters are all rich in depth and colour which helps the reader
concentrate instead of just skimming through the events. Another important
thing is that while the descriptions are not lengthy, they manage to make
you feel as though you're an invisible witness throughout the entire story.
The story is not gripping, it possess the authenticity of an account taken
right of a historical recording. I believe it will remain one of the most
memorable accounts out there .So well done!

Title: Good
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/5080.html#cutid1>
Memories, Like Good Stories . Author: Jeodo
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
1> Brandybuck . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits . ID: 906
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=906>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:26:08 Score: 2
Pippin's memories of good times and Bilbo's stories help to give him courage
on the trail. A very sweet gap-filler, and an incident not often portrayed
in fics.

Title: Guarding the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=88> Shire . Author:
Shirebound
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
5> . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 513
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=513>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:26:38 Score: 2
This is a nice little vignette, and touches on the long labor of the
Dunedain in keeping the Shire safe. It seems only fitting that it is Merry
who asks the question, and recieves the answers he needs.

Title: Heartsong <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2288>
. Author: Piplover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
0> (aka Pipfan) . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-Filler . ID: 825
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=825>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:27:36 Score: 4
I am an absolute sucker for stories that show a musically talented Pippin,
and this one is just beautiful. There are two chapters, but really they are
the exact same sequence of events from two points of view: first Pippin, as
he grieves over the devastating idea that he may no longer be able to play
an instrument, and then Merry, as he confronts Pippin's loss as well. The
struggle for Pippin to regain his ability is briefly but vividly told, and
the ending is very gentle and sweet.

Title: The <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=9912>
Fourth Attempt . Author: Forodwaith
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble . ID: 369
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=369>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:28:15 Score: 2
"I am ready for you-" Not really, Smaug. You had no idea what was coming, or
how much trouble one little hobbit burglar would be.

Title: Mercy <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/mercy.htm> . Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble . ID: 583
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=583>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:29:29 Score: 2
It never occured to me before that Legolas could have been the one to
capture the Dwarves in Mirkwood! I love seeing this incident from another
POV.

Title: Anniversary <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/anniversary.htm> . Author:
Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble . ID: 923
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=923>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:30:00 Score: 1
A lovely bit of speculation on how Bilbo might have taken the news of
Balin's venture into Moria.

Title: The Dragon
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=274> Gem . Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette . ID: 184
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=184>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:30:35 Score: 1
An interesting and believable scenario, and a very well-drawn heroine. I
loved the irony of the ending.

Title: Desiring
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter_view.cfm?NGID=102&STID=2359&
SPOrdinal=5> Peace . Author: Enros
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
6> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette . ID: 279
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=279>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:31:19 Score: 3
Oh, this was powerful! Very sad and powerful. The Grandmother and the other
hobbits very clearly drawn. I loved the names for the various Stoor
families, sounding hobbity, yet very different from Shire names. And poor
Smeagol's reaction was so sad, though so predictable.

Title: High
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4473&NGID=203>
Flight . Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette . ID: 419
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=419>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:32:11 Score: 2
A lovely vignette, making good use both of the inspirational poem and JRRT's
canon material, to bring in something quite original. I very much enjoyed
the little bit of foreshadowing of the Eagles' future role.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=1781&NGID=81>
Thrush Who Saved Laketown . Author: jen_loves_elves
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=52
> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette . ID: 432
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=432>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:33:39 Score: 2
Very original! I've never read anything from the Thrushs' POV before. I
loved the voice she gave him, rather opinionated and querulous. And the bit
at the end was just too funny!

Title: The Sting
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1550> . Author:
tyellas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> . Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette . ID: 600
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=600>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:34:56 Score: 3
The one thing the Silm has that LotR does not, is wicked Elves. Maeglor, of
course, is one of the worst of them, though he is a skilled artist. This is
quite an interesting speculation on the origin of Bilbo's Sting. How
appropriate it is that something forged out of anger should come to be so
important for the good!

Title: Intertwined <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2290190/1/> . Author: Karri
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
7> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 105
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=70&form_story_filter=105>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:36:05 Score: 3
I really enjoy this interaction between the hobbits and Legolas. I got a
kick out of Sam thinking it "improper" for Legolas to do the dishes, and
then the bit of mildly jealous byplay as the Elf makes in turn a bracelet
for each of the three younger hobbits. A very enjoyable little quest
gap-filler.

Title: Strength <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3406>
. Author: Songspinner
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1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings . ID: 829
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:36:46 Score: 2
An unusual interaction, Legolas and Merry, as the Elf comforts Merry after
Pippin's encounter with the palantir. It's very sweet. Legolas offers Merry
some insight into what Pippin faced, and how he was able to find strength to
fight it.

Title: Faerie
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3371&cid=12844> Blood .
Author: Saoirse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
8> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits . ID: 306
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
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5> . 2005-08-16 09:37:19 Score: 2
This sweet little story of wee Pippin plays off the idea that the Tooks have
fairy blood in them, and that the fairies are other than Elves, but more
akin to our own legends of fairies. The descriptions are vivid, and the end
is very touching.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2613&cid=10181> Next Day .
Author: Saoirse
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
8> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits . ID: 307
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:37:45 Score: 2
A very sad and melancholy tale of the aftermath of the Battle of Bywater, in
which Estella, helped by Merry does her best to honor the fallen.

Title: Pawns
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2624&cid=10226> . Author:
Tialys
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
0> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits . ID: 310
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
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5> . 2005-08-16 09:38:22 Score: 2
An extended metaphor, in which Gandalf and Sam play chess, and Sam wonders
at the sacrifice of pawns. Very interesting piece, and I could almost follow
the moves.

Title: Learning To
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/nickeyb/3429.html#cutid1> Walk . Author:
Nickey
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4> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits . ID: 760
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
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5> . 2005-08-16 09:39:30 Score: 4
A wonderful series of vignettes about Pippin and his difficulties in such
things as sitting still and walking slowly. It starts with his babyhood and
continues to the cusp of the Quest, when he is struck by the realization
that he will need to keep his pace to that of Frodo, sticking as closely as
he can, and no running off after diversions. Very well done, and very close
to my own understanding of Pippin's personality.

Title: Bed
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4511&SPOrdinal=1
> of Roses . Author: Vistula
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
3> the Dunadan . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits . ID: 793
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:40:33 Score: 1
Very angsty little mood piece, as Frodo watches a sleeping Sam during the
most difficult part of their journey.

Title: A
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge03/3978.html#cutid1> Foolish
Thing . Author: Dana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
4> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hobbits . ID: 1031
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:41:33 Score: 4
This beautiful vignette was written in response to a challenge to expand on
the scene with Pippin and the palantir from Merry's point of view. It is
written in the present tense, which lends it a sense of urgency and
immediacy, as we are caught up in Merry's stream of consciousness. We see
his anger and disappointment in Pippin's action evaporate in the face of his
worry. It is a very evocative piece.

Title: Victories
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge08/2119.html#cutid1> Won .
Author: Garnet
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
9> Took . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hurt/Comfort . ID: 810
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:42:23 Score: 3
A lovely Cormallen fic, as Gandalf and Gimli sit vigil for Pippin, Gandalf
recalls his first meeting with the little Took. The story is so sweet and
loving. I especially enjoy Gandalf's comparing the fight Pippin is having to
stay alive with the one at the beginning of his life.

Title: To Cross a
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2191> River . Author:
Hai
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
6> Took . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hurt/Comfort . ID: 820
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> . 2005-08-16 09:42:59 Score: 2
A very cute story of the Fellowship trying to ford a river. Of course it was
not possible without someone falling in, nor to avoid sneezes afterward.
Lovely gentle humor.


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Msg# 5154

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 68 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:11:40 Topic ID# 5154
Title: On Becoming An
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2494> Adventurer ·
Author: Piplover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
0> (aka Pipfan) · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 1161
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 09:44:17 Score: 3
Poor Pippin, overtired and unable to sleep because of all the thoughts
crowding his memory, soon learns that being responsible to others also means
taking care of himself. Very nicely done, and wonderful description of the
ambivalence Pippin must have felt on being forced to grow up so soon.

Title: The <http://www.rosiesamfrodo.com/users/lilybaggins/fanfiction.html>
Pine-Woods Excursion · Author: lilybaggins
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3> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 1275
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 09:49:24 Score: 2
A classic Frodo h/c, with all the elements one expects and loves: healers
Aragorn and Elrond, attentive Sam and worried cousins, along with lots of
angst and complications.

Title: A Lesson on
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3093> Hobbits ·
Author: Budgielover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 177
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 09:49:54 Score: 2
This is a delightful series of vignettes made up of various Big Folk getting
to know the hobbits. I look forward to more of them.

Title: The Errand
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/rabidsamfan/149289.html> Lad · Author:
Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 884
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 09:51:19 Score: 9
This has got to be one of my favorite works-in-progress. The character of
young Bergil is very finely drawn, and matches so well my own perception of
him: a sweet and helpful child, very serious, and very polite, concerned
about his proper place in the scheme of things, and yet at heart, very much
a child. He is worried about his father, he is still traumatized by the
events of the siege of the City and by the events of the War--yet he retains
a certain lightness of heart and childlike way of viewing the world. He is
very observant and intelligent--altogether a delightful child that anyone
would be proud to know.
But this author also has a deft hand with the established main characters as
well, especially Sam. The interaction between Bergil and his hobbit charges
is lovely. I adore the way he gets to know Sam in the very beginning of the
story, and his perceptions and misperceptions about the hobbits. And his
interaction with Pippin, who is now his good friend, is very finely drawn. I
adore the protectiveness which Pippin seems to show towards Bergil. Aragorn
has so far only made a brief appearance, but that, too is lovely.
And the awe which Bergil shows towards Frodo, mixed with his childlike
practicality is just delightful. I daily check my friend's list for updates
on this one.

Title: Breaking the Rules
<http://www.geocities.com/sotto-voce/news0830.html> (Harry Potter Exhibition
Game) · Author: Bubbles
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
9> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 276
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 09:52:33 Score: 1
What a hilarious send-up! Being a hockey fan, I could easily picture the
chaos on the ice! This was a hoot!

Title: Captain
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge08/9742.html#cutid1> of
Gondor · Author: Sandy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
8> K · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 809
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 09:53:34 Score: 2
A very cute little gap-filler about Boromir making the acquaintance of each
of the hobbits. I especially enjoyed Sam making friends with his horse, and
Pippin's genealogy lesson.

Title: Fathers and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2874> Sons · Author:
thevina_finduilas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=87
> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 847
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 09:55:02 Score: 3
I like this very much. The idea that Legolas and Gimli have come to know one
another very well, yet still they find some of the old grievances difficult
not to quarrel over is interesting. I love Merry's place in this story as
both a catalyst and a peacemaker. Very well done.

Title: Chicken
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge04/11997.html#cutid1> or the
Egg? · Author: Gershwhen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=46
8> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 1220
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 09:55:43 Score: 3
Trust Pippin to come up with a question that will embarass everyone. I loved
the reactions in this, as it finally dawns on the young hobbit just what the
phrase "begetting day" is getting at. And Gimli's wry amusement at the Elf's
increasing embarassment was perfect!

Title: What
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2771&cid=10747> his Heart
Spoke · Author: LKK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
7> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 1026
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:03:46 Score: 7
Such an emotion filled story about Thranduil saying good-bye to his mother
as she heads into the West.

LKK has a wonderful use of similes and metaphors to describe Nethwen's hair
for instance, "Her hair that always reminded him of full ripe blackberries
glistening in the summer's morning dew now seemed wan and flat."

And her understanding of how the King would try to appear strong always in
front of his people, yet also knows when he should show emotion at her
leaving, and that wonderful saying about 'tears being how the heart speaks'
is so evocative.

I also like how even as an adult, Thranduil discovers there are secrets kept
between a husband and wife, that their children do not know. What a lovely
romantic idea!

I think this story is very well written, with wonderful imagery and emotion
that it leaves the reader sighing at the end as they understand both
Nethwen's and Thranduil's decisions.

Title: A Circlet of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=484> Orange Flowers ·
Author: LKK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
7> · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 1027
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:05:03 Score: 2
It took me several readings, and lots of chuckles, to realize that not once
had a dialogue tag been used! And yet it is so clear who is speaking and
when. That is a real art to be able to write like that.





Title: Flowers in His
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=372> hair · Author:
LKK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
7> · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 1028
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:05:49 Score: 5
This story, along with Circlet of Orange Flowers, is masterfully written
using no dialogue tags at all, yet the author has managed to make it very
clear exactly who it is who is speaking and still manage to keep the
characters' very clearly in character.

The idea that Aragorn would call Thranduil 'effeminate' is hilarious, but
Thranduil's response is even better, and very much something I could see the
Elf King doing. Another hilarious vignette that keeps characters 'in
character.'

Title: Home Indeed
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3379> · Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1045
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:06:44 Score: 7
A lovely look into Eomer's return from Lothiriel's Point of View.

I especially enjoy seeing the Warrior-Eomer turning into Daddy-Eomer as he's
bathing with Elfwine, and the author has very deftly managed to show the
love Lothiriel holds for them both.

I appreciate the small details that make this story have so much depth: the
tiny wooden horse that Elfwine holds as he falls asleep -- of course, what
other toy would a Rohir child be given -- so appropriate; and the colour of
the bathwater, Lothiriel's reaction is so typical for a mother; and even the
changes Eomer notices when Lothiriel changes her gown for the evenings meal
... he sees her as the queen, which must be so hard to remember between a
husband and wife in a private setting like that.

Eokat manages to find simple scenes and describe them so well, and so
vividly that they become memorable and realistic.

Title: The
<http://www.sweetdreamssanctuary.net/sanctuary/viewstory.php?sid=7> World
Within · Author: Minuialeth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=42
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete · ID: 978
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 10:06:59 Score: 7
This story completely surprised me. With every chapter, a new fact surfaces
and makes you wonder how many layers there are more in this chapter. The
author takes her time to write intriguing characters and just when you think
you figured it out, a new twist comes that leaves you wondering what just
happened. There is so much meaning in every word: it conveys the emotions
strongly. The tone is confident and powerful: the wording is refined.
Although this is a WIP, I cannot wait until the next chapter comes, curious
as I am and wanting to know what will happen to the, strongly developed,
female original character and Erestor, the seemingly unwilling hero. Canon
wise I am intrigued by the setting and choice of the Numenorean Queen, and
after further research it made sense to me why she choose this time period.
Challenging and incentive, I hope to read more stories from this author in
the future.

Title: Guilt <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3324> ·
Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst) · ID: 1046
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:07:09 Score: 7
A humorous look into Eomer's point of view when Lothiriel is delivering
their child that is masterfully done by Eokat. The author seems to have a
natural insight into the Rohir King's mind and character and I can see this
being a real reaction to the impending event. Lines like "tried to wrap his
pregnant wife in down" and Lothiriel's quip about how much Rohirric she knew
(something I find in common with my own characters ... the women do tend to
pick up on their men's cursing.)

Once again, Eokat has taken a single event and turned it into a wonderful
story, filled with emotion and detail that stays with the reader. The short
flashbacks allow a glimpse of how Eomer thinks he is coping, and bears the
'guilt' of the title for the wonderful event. I have no doubt he will take
all the credit that it is a son his wife has born.

Title: Confessions
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2027&cid=8444> in the Dark
· Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1047
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=71&form_story_filter=1047>
Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:07:57 Score: 6
Eokat certainly has portrayed Eomer in character -- not making him a mincing
fop, but the stronghorse-lord that Tolkien intended the Rohirrim king to be,
I am certain. And I love that Eomer and Lothiriel did not fall in love at
first sight, but needed a little nudge in the right direction. And who
better to be nudged by than Faramir and Eowyn.

She has captured the emotional turmoil both Eomer and Lothiriel are in, as
well as the lighthearted concern of their kin. The language they speak seems
much truer to the time by having it reversed the way Tolkien did ... 'dark
have been my dreams of late.' springs to mind and Eokat has mirrored that
'Beowulf' style wonderfully.

Oh, and having Imrahil show up at the end and his reaction was priceless.



Title: Novice <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2677>
Rider · Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1048
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:08:32 Score: 7
It must have been difficult to try to get into the mind of a horse, but
Eokat has ably managed to do just that.

" If he wants to play the stallion, he should go back to his own stall and
leave me to rest."

This brought a chuck to see a horse's perspective of how/where human's live,
but what an excellent thought.

While I have always pictured Lothiriel, being Imrahil's daughter, as being
an able horsewoman, Eokat's story made me start wondering if perhaps the
Gondor or Dol Amroth idea of riding would be considered to be 'novice'
compared to the Rohirrim who have such a wonderful connection to their
horses. I love stories that tweak my imagination and get me thinking like
that and examining the differences between the people.

Again the pattern of speech and the names are wonderfully researched and in
character. A lovely read.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3540&cid=13461> Long
Defeat · Author: Perelleth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=46
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Aman · ID: 1213
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:09:22 Score: 7
Perelleth has written a lovely view of how she sees Celeborn end up in
Valinor using a very Elven love for his trees. She has captured his
weariness in fighting the death of his beloved forests in a manner that
rings so true for the destruction and clearcutting used even still that
would have so agrieved the Elves.

This line really seemed to capture Celeborn for me: "And now he sat there,
in the embrace of the mighty tree, feeling the powerful heart that still
drummed within the bark, hearing the deep voice that sang of things long
past, and the elf felt that his heart would break."

The idea of the trees that he tried to save being planted in Valinor in his
honour is a wonderful sentiment that is almost biblical in its concept.

The Long Defeat is a wonderfully told tale that captures Celeborn's love for
the trees beautifully and is true of the writing abilities of Perelleth.

Title: Reflections
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2263&cid=9075> · Author:
Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 1050
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=71&form_story_filter=1050>
Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:09:56 Score: 7
This is one of my favourite Eokat stories because of the wide range of
emotions it captures.

Once again, Eokat stays within the Rohir style of speech: "Let us to home
sire" and keeps appropriate Rohirric names. But she also manages to capture
the range of emotions Eomer feels that day, from Eomer's despair at his
remembrances of Theodred's death and the losses of his past, to the gentle
thoughts of how he met Lothiriel and how she entered his life and changed
it, subtly, and breathed new life into his world. And then the softness as
he returns to his chambers and he tenderly tries not to wake his wife while
reflecting upon the miracle of the upcoming birth of their child. All
wonderfully captured and evocative.

A wonderfully romantic look at a man as the quintessential Rohir warrior who
can be 'manly' without being 'maudlin.'



Title: Instruments
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2830> · Author:
Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete · ID: 425
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 10:14:48 Score: 7
This WIP is one of the most promising ones I recently read. It starts very
grim an realistic, but the author makes you want to click for the next
chapter. She writes a compelling and heartfelt story, I certainly feel for
this young hobbit that is put through so much terror. I find myself cheering
when the rescue comes and now the healing of the character can begin. What I
find very strong about this story is the way the author writes her main
character. It has a good build up and she shows what the character goes
through. The introductions of others feel natural and confident. The pacing
in the storytelling is excellent. It is obvious to me that the author enjoys
writing this story with so much care and love that I can imagine it will be
hard to write a final chapter (hopefully that will take a lot of chapters).

Title: Another
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=storyinfo&story=5> Bride · Author: Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 426
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=71&form_story_filter=426>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 10:15:32 Score: 3
A excellent take on what if Aragorn never met Arwen. The dialogue between
Faramir and Aragorn is touching, and written with tact. For me this would be
a well written alternative on the Aragorn/ Arwen romance. The eye for detail
stands out in this story, making you wanting more.

Title: Priceless
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=storyinfo&story=17> Treasure · Author: Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor · ID: 427
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=71&form_story_filter=427>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 10:18:30 Score: 4
One of the most touching moments in Lord of the Rings was the moment Faramir
gave Éowyn his mother's mantle. In this short piece, the author explores the
tender and emotional moment of Faramir while he finds and collects the
mantle for the new woman in his life. Isil gives us a great insight in
Faramir's emotion's and how he looks back on his troubled life. Treated with
care and respect, this is a beautiful vignette.

Title: He Loses Us
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2918> Both · Author:
Lilpippin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
8> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 873
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 10:20:43 Score: 3
Elfling angst... chilling elfling angst. This story is the first story
written by this author and I am impressed by the way the story is written.
To the point, it reveals everything. The inner emotions of those involved
and the strong bond between the twins is very well written.

Title: Fall of Osgiliath <http://www.planet-tolkien.com/fan_writings/read/2>
· Author: Valedhelgwath
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
5> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 633
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=71&form_story_filter=633>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 10:21:40 Score: 3
I loved this short story, featuring an experienced soldier looks back on
serving under Faramir, shortly before they are overrun by the enemy. I like
the author's take on this, written from an unknown character and yet it
feels very vivid and real. The author pictures a beautiful picture of
Faramir's bravery, leaving the reader wondering if there is a sequal.

Title: Courage <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2659>
· Author: Eokat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=43
7> · Genres: Romance: Rohan · ID: 1049
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=71&form_story_filter=1049>
Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:24:21 Score: 8
Another lovely glimpse into the workings of the Rohir King -- this time
having to face the prospect of giving his blessing for his daughter's
marriage. Eomer does everything he can to avoid it and I think Eokat has
wonderfully caught how this rugged man would react -- by initially trying to
avoid the whole situation. I especially liked how Lothiriel had to remind
him that their daughter was the same age she was when they married -- it is
so different from a parent's perspective and I imagine it must be harder for
a father to see his daughter wed than his sons.

Eokat truly does have a grasp on Eomer's and the Rohir's character, so
different from that of the Gondorian nobles. She continues to keep their
speech within the rhythmic confines Tolkien set out for us whereas many of
us, myself included, tend to fall into the more modern day patterns. And
once again, she has managed to give us a glimpse into their world without
getting into a multiple chapter story the way I would be tempted to do. Less
tells us so much more ... and now I have to learn from her how to do that.
Well done, Eokat!

Title: Weariness <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2317340/1/> · Author:
quirky_orthodox
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
3> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 375
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:29:41 Score: 6
Quirky (AKA Sophia Silfaery) writes a prose worthy of Tolkien's world. She
manages to develop layers, both within the characters' personalities but
also within the storyline itself.

I thought Marnie had looked into every aspect of Celeborn but this new young
writer offers a fresh perspective while maintaining the dignity that
Celeborn deserves without diminishing him.

Weariness is a lovely insight into a conversation far after ROTK, of
Celeborn and Maglor still upon ME, the last two elves, and realizing they
need to help each other to journey to Valinor. A unique perspective, and a
lovely insight into them both.

She truly is worthy of Marnie's bestowing the title of 'Lord Celeborn's
Bard' upon her.


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Msg# 5155

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 69 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:13:54 Topic ID# 5155
Title: Foresight <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2305064/1/> · Author:
quirky_orthodox
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
3> · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette · ID: 1044
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=1044>
Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:32:15 Score: 4
I generally try to avoid movie-verse and stick to authors who are
book-verse, but this vignette is an interesting look into Haldir's decision
to go to Helm's Deep despite the foresight that he would die there. And
keeping in character, Celeborn's acceptance of Haldir's decision.

Quirky (Sophia) writes in a classically literary style that has been lost
with the MTV generation and it's lovely to read another story with layers. A
wonderful effort.

Title: The Doom of <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2310694/1/> Mandos ·
Author: quirky_orthodox
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
3> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 1043
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:36:20 Score: 6
This is an interesting Work-in-Progress about what might have happened had
Galadriel taken the ring, and Celeborn's efforts to stop her.

Quirky (Sophia) again has tried to keep all her characters 'in-character'
even while taking Galadriel off in a whole different route as she controls
the ring -- or is the ring in control of her?

While slightly passive in style, the emotion and detail helps make it an
interesting story to watch unfold and Quirky writes it in a way that you
could imagine it happening and find yourself wondering ... "what might have
happened if Galadriel had taken the ring?" It certainly was on Galadriel's
mind, and was a definite possibility. I'm interested to see its conclusion.

Title: Lost
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1828&cid=7613> and Found ·
Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 1253
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=1253>
Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 10:43:22 Score: 4
Bodkin manages to write so much detail, so much emotion using so few words
that she amazes me. I have much to learn from her style, and this story is
one example that I should print out and read often. The idea of Pippin's
return from his mother's point of view, allows Bodkin to get into the depth
and emotion she needs to display the differences betwen the 'before-the-war'
Pippin to the mature, slightly haunted 'after-the-war' Pippin.

A wonderfully haunting story.

Title: Daisy's
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge04/5578.html#cutid1>
Wonderful Day · Author: Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): The Shire · ID: 1196
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=1196>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 10:57:16 Score: 3
A beautiful short story that features OC hobbits only. The author remains
authentic to the hobbit canon, even without the use of canon hobbits like
Merry and Pippin. The storytelling is light, with a pinch of angst in it,
but it makes a delightful read. This is the author's first fanfic and I
think her grasp of the language and storytelling is quite good.

Title: A
<http://www.scribesoferiador.com/story/index.php?option=com_ewriting&Itemid=
42&func=storyinfo&story=15> Betrothal and Wedding · Author: Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Genres: Romance: Elves · ID: 1198
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=1198>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:01:40 Score: 3
A story that needed to be told. A glimpes of Galadriel's childhood, her
mother telling how she fell for her father in Valinor. The author writes a
beautiful story around the Noldo elves on Valinor, making you longing for
more stories around that time. I appreciated the hint that Galadriel had
foresight, this detail makes the story special.

Title: Maps
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge13/5559.html#cutid1> and
Legends · Author: Anso
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
6> the Hobbit · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 1191
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=1191>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:04:13 Score: 4
This is an amazing, warm, and loving story. The author writes with depth and
cares the emotions of the characters. The hesitation and motherly care of
Esmeralda. The letters of Frodo that contains wisdom, but also feelings and
worry on how his friends will take his parting. The effect it has on Merry
is well written, it shows that the author too great effort in background
research to give the story a hobbity touch.

Title: Under
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge14/802.html#cutid1> the
Umbrella · Author: Mysterious
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
7> Jedi · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 1194
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=1194>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:04:57 Score: 2
This story is so sharp and witty written: it makes me laugh every time when
I read it. Lobelia and umbrella's, Pip being Pip. The author makes the
characters come to life for me but does not loose sight of the humorous
undertone a single moment.

Title: White Gull From The
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1136> Sea · Author: Sivan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=42
0> Shemesh · Genres: Mystery · ID: 925
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=925>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:05:20 Score: 2
This is a sweet and little tale that features a friendship between the three
heroes of the fellowship. The dialogue is well written and the manner how
Legolas responds to the sea... chilling.

Title: Circle of Hands <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1493> ·
Author: Ghettoelleth
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
7> · Genres: Romance: Incomplete · ID: 165
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=165>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:07:15 Score: 4
For a WIP.. it is surely a captivating one. I like the way the author takes
you through the history of Arda, starting with the Valar: laying a firm
basis for a compelling and a very addictive story. The dialogue is witty and
sharp, the narrative parts are very well written and the characterisation is
excellent. At the end of the chapters so far, the author has incorporated
author notes, but I cannot wait to see how this story ends.

Title: Hobbits in
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechal12/7246.html#cutid1> 4 · Author:
Isil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
7> Elensar · Races/Places: Hobbits · ID: 1195
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=1195>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:08:42 Score: 3
This is a funny and witty story. I like the format a lot. Four vignettes,
four OC hobbits and it feels very hobbity. But throughout these four
vignettes you can see how the overall story develops. The author has written
this series of vignettes in such a manner, that it makes a full circle.
Cunning storytelling and true to the hobbit spirit.

Title: Riders of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3254> Rohan · Author:
Songspinner
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
1> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 654
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=654>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:09:06 Score: 4
Songspinner weaves an incredibly lovely and touching tale where two cultures
meet. I loved the ritual the author wrote, it feels like a true passage of
the rites. The interaction between the characters is incredibly well
written, and Merry's little girl was very charming, the way she rode her
pony, beaming so proudly. Songspinner created a beautiful image of a family
event in a story that I read often.

Title: Equals
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge13/7734.html#cutid1> ·
Author: Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th · Genres: Romance: Incomplete · ID: 1110
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=1110>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:09:31 Score: 4
Merry and Esmaralda, a given canon marriage, but how on earth did they fall
for each other. The author gives you a wonderful insight in how, according
to her, they came to know each other better. With this she uses the hobbit
culture and convention as a solid base. I love the way she let this romance
evolve, in such a tender and humorous way that made me chuckle. True to
Tolkien and true to the book: an excellent story.

Title: Promises to
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2919> Keep · Author:
Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 169
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=75&form_story_filter=169>
Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:18:34 Score: 9
What a fantastic story! While reading this, I was immensely surprised by the
many layers the author writes to weave an enormous epic tale. More then once
I find myself thinking, wait a minute; I browse back and see the little
suggestions the author left there. Those little gems she leaves, makes a
second, or a third reading absolutely worthwhile. A story with suspense,
romance, angst..., and above all: rangers. What I find really good about
this story is that it contains strongly written original characters, while
maintaining a good writing style. The author takes her time establishing her
characters and surroundings, adding a character trait or a piece of
development as she goes along. She paints a very lively picture of a Ranger
who tries to serve his chieftain during the War of Ring, putting his life
and heart on the line and in the meantime, keeping your eyes glued to the
monitor, or paper, maintaining the suspense in the story. Leaward knows what
she is writing about, for me, Eriador, and her inhabitants come to live for
me through her writing. The twist (or shall I say twists), which I did not
saw coming, is fantastically written and makes you want to read more stories
written by this author.

Title: Swords <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3102>
Returned · Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Races/Places: Men: Eriador · ID: 172
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:19:43 Score: 3
Dunedain traditions explained to a child. How on earth can you approach
that? Which angle do you choose and how do you word it? This beautiful
vignette written by Leaward manages to do so. With care and eye for detail,
the author introduces you into the world of the rangers, seen through a
child's eye. I truly enjoyed this story. Well done!

Title: Sulnur <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/sulnur.htm> · Author:
sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 145
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-16 11:23:50 Score: 3
Sulnur is a beautiful written story seen and experienced through the eyes of
a Rohirrim horse. This unique perspective shows you loyalty and the hardness
of these horses. First the horse jealously, but when it comes down to
protecting her rider, she doesn't want to leave. A well written story
brought by an author which moves me every time when I read it.

Title: Sulnur <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/sulnur.htm> · Author:
sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 145
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 11:24:03 Score: 4
Sulnur is a lovely story with a twist in the middle. The idea of the horse
and rider working together as a team works so well. That it's told from the
unique perspective of the horse, rather than the rider, adds to the mystery,
the intrigue and even the sense that you want the rider to live and wonder
what Sulnur's fate would be should her master die.

A masterful story that captures the emotion of both man and beast.

Title: Travel Times in <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/traveltimes.htm>
Middle-earth · Author: sulriel
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· Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 144
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:28:21 Score: 5
Here is a piece of fiction I cannot go without while writing a story or when
I do research for an author. It is concise, well thought out and presents a
good overview how to travel with your horse, how long it takes and which
route you can choose. The construction of the tables with data is presented
in such a manner, that you can easily combine it with other routes, or
making up new ones.

A must have site/article when you start to plan a story, or even when you
are in the middle of writing one: it helps you a great deal in making your
story more realistic.

Title: Abrecan <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3053>
· Author: Rhapsody
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9> · Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 433
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 11:29:44 Score: 3
I like how Rhapsody has Aragorn determined to ride Abrecan but the horse
still manages to keep its own character/personality despite the
elven-trained rider. I think most writers would have had Aragorn immediately
win over the horse and she would be docile beneath him. It was interesting
to see that 'not' happen. Nicely done!

Title: Rohirrim Grey <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/rohirrimgrey.htm> ·
Author: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 143
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:32:27 Score: 3
This is another essential piece of fiction that can be of great use while
you write a story, especially when it envolves horses. Sulriel explains in
great detail everthing you should know about describing your horse and gives
practical examples. Well structured and good to read, even if you are not
familiar with equine terminology.

Title: Artist's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3252&cid=12417>
Appreciation · Author: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· Genres: Romance: Incomplete · ID: 146
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-16 11:35:46 Score: 2
A tantalizing portrait of a young Celeborn, who cannot wish to be that near
to this Sindar Lord. Since the story is still complete, I am curious where
Lhende will end up next...

Title: Gathering of
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3083> the Grey Company
· Author: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey Company · ID: 171
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> · 2005-08-16 11:40:39 Score: 4
An excellent gapfiller, the author explains in clear storyteller why so many
Dunedain could be mustered. The decisions made must have been incredibly
hard and I love this insight in Halbarad's character. Leaward remains
genuine in her writing and storytelling, her thorough research shines
through, which gives you a realistic feeling, true to Tolkien's world.

Title: Two of <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3132>
Thirty-One · Author: Leaward
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2> · Races/Places: Men · ID: 174
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Reviewer: Rhapsody
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9> · 2005-08-16 11:48:17 Score: 7
This is a hell of a gap filler; those were my initial thoughts when I
finished reading this story. I feel like this story could use more chapters,
but I have that with every story written by this author. She has such a
compelling manner of writing; you just want to read more. This story is an
actual sequel to Promises to keep, but the author writes it in such way that
you can go easily without it.

The story has a linear feel, the events about the war of the ring seen
through a Dunedain ranger who looks back on the events through chilling
flashbacks. But not only the flashbacks tell the story: the severe
consequences of this story is told as well, making you wonder if the
original characters will ever fully heal. Leaward shows her amazing writing
skills with this tale. I simply marvel at the way she is telling the story
that keeps me glued to the screen from the beginning to the end.


Title: Nimloth's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3164> Grace · Author:
Rhapsody
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9> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 434
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 12:01:40 Score: 5
Rhapsody has taken us into a world that is seldom ventured into -- Numenor
just before its fall. Sauron's manipulations and the Elendili is such a
wealth of intrigue and the author has delved into it feet first by exploring
'how' a seed from Nimloth was saved despite the decree to destroy the link
to the Trees of Valinor.

She has developed a world rich with detail and taken Tolkien characters and
infused them with their unique personalities true to canon. An inspiring
story true to the spirit of the Lord of the Rings fanfic world.

Title: Instruments
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2830> · Author:
Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete · ID: 425
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 12:33:49 Score: 7
Instruments is a wonderful look into the dark times of Hobbiton once the
quest has begun and the hobbits are left to their own devices. It begins
peacefully enough but then the author introduces the grim changes and the
characters you have learned to care for, worry about, are threatened. It is
nice to see a hobbit story that is not all sweetness and light yet still
shows the 'grit' of the characters that hobbits obviously have. Beethoven's
7th has a flair for story telling and should continue to write and hone her
craft -- she has talent.

Being a fan of rangers, her Tharon ranger inspired me and reminded me that
not all about Rangers is dark and mysterious but they also have their light
times and I brought some of that into my own stories. I'm interested to see
where this goes, and I hope the writer updates soon!

Title: Good
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13226> welcome
they found · Author: Tanaqui
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> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 1371
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-16 12:35:42 Score: 2
Interesting perspective. I'd not thought how Cirdan might view his own
connection with the naval supremacy of the later Númenoreans.


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Msg# 5156

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 70 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:14:30 Topic ID# 5156
Title: Ernil i <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=915>
Duremmen · Author: Marnie
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5> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: First Age · ID: 1095
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 12:36:08 Score: 3
Those who rebuke gods or their representatives don't normally end well, but
I can't but agree with the prince of Doriath, however young. It seems as if
the Valar have not done well by the rest of Middle-earth in sequestering
themselves and a portion of the Quendi in Aman.

Title: The Song of the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=527> Rock · Author:
Joan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
0> Milligan · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 1084
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 12:36:33 Score: 8
I'd forgotten this fic, and am glad to have found it again. The irony cuts
so deep it *hurts*. Yes, this is a tour of pride, and I love the way Turgon
continually waxes hyperbolic, even to the point of saying "We have made
immortal what the Valar themselves could not." This is idolatry of the
highest sort, and absolute obsession with oneself and one's creations. This
is Noldorin self-centeredness (or any self-centeredness) writ large and
embellished nicely.

The interruptions that recall the fact that Turgon's companion is not
immortal, and is unable to understand the city in the way that Elves would,
are both brutal and yet darkly amusing. It's this niggling mortal whose
presence as mortal and as limitation every so often require to be
acknowledged, even in the midst of Turgon's rhapsodizing, who will overturn
what Turgon assumes is immortal, and it is he who will prove Turgon wrong by
becoming immortal himself, but not by the grace of Gondolin.

Wicked, pointed, and a perfect skewering of a uniquely elvish pride, this
story is well worth the read.


Title: Taking the
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=213> Sword · Author:
Ithilwen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
6> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 1030
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 12:37:04 Score: 7
Ithilwen covers a lot of the issues I have when it comes to thinking about
what it would mean to enter a warrior culture and mindset, and given the
newness of the idea of an army or a guard in Aman, it fits Maedhros at this
stage of his life, I think. Later, I don't doubt it will change, but for the
moment, he has the requisite innocence and distance to ask himself what it
means that he has a gift for martial artistry. Protection and death are
inextricably entertwined here, and he cannot be the protector without being
at least willing to kill, even if he never does. That's a huge step to make,
and a morally troubling one that I assume would be very difficult to
overcome. Fear is also bound up with this choice, and it is given its proper
place: if there had been less fear among the Noldor, would it have come to
this? Clearly not. I'm not sure the execution of this fic entirely works for
me, but conceptually, it's dead on target.

Title: To Look Upon
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4145> It Once ·
Author: Noldo
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1> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion · ID: 1023
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 12:37:27 Score: 2
Reminds me of Moses covering his face, for he could not endure to see the
face of God who passed. Mortals who see the immortal lands never do come
back unchanged, or else do not return at all.

Title: Once in a Fair Green
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1592> Country · Author: Space
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=23
5> Weavil · Books/Time: The Silmarillion · ID: 157
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 12:53:33 Score: 7
The words "Gandalf" and "romance", when put in the same sentence and where
the latter belongs to the former, usually get a sigh if not a groan from me.
But this story does justice to the character, I think, of a Maia trying to
understand something that is absolutely new and in a sense, something that
is foreign to his particular kind of being. Although I can't say I grasp
what he sees in Irimien, the feeling and the interest are obviously genuine,
and the open-ended question mark that is the entire "affair" works very
well, I think. Elrond's characterization is also well-handled, I think, and
between the two of them, the mystery of love gets its due. It is "foolish",
and hearkens back to that idea that some adventures are such that the line
between wisdom and folly is so thin as to be indiscernible save to those
involved in the undertaking, or which only becomes visible to others after a
resolution has been reached.

Title: Sercemaitë
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=548> · Author:
Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Races/Places: Elves: First Age · ID: 382
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 13:16:50 Score: 6
A powerful look into a young, and reasonably innocent, elf's perspective of
being drawn into a battle and the discoveries of exactly what that means.

The feeling of the spear as it punctures the body bringing home to him
exactly what he has done was very well done, as was his end. I also like
that even within the killing that the characters show mercy, and
understanding, and that seems to bring an even more 'elven' characteristic
to the entire story.

Very rarely have I seen a first person present tense that works for me, but
this one does -- and I think it needs to be for it to hold the emotion and
strength that is needed to show how a warrior thinks in battle. And the fact
that it is a young elf, one who has never had to battle before makes it that
much more poignant.



Title: Long Leagues for Little
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=744> Legs · Author: Fadagaski
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
4> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 628
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 13:17:14 Score: 6
This is a lovely story that gives us a glimpse into a conversation between
Boromir and Sam -- a pairing we do not often see. And Fadagaski has kept
Samwise in character well by displaying his innate ability to sum people up
-- in this case the cautious Boromir.

It's also nice to see a Boromir who isn't angst ridden or angry, one who is
cautious and very much a warrior, but also understanding and comes to care
for the hobbits.

This is a nice gapfiller and this scene is a very believable one -- I've
always got the feeling that Boromir did indeed care for the little hobbits
and this could have been the beginning of that relationship.

Title: Heart's <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2117>
Ease · Author: Bodkin
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
1> · Races/Places: Elves: Post-Ring War · ID: 1217
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Reviewer: Leaward
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
2> · 2005-08-16 13:17:37 Score: 6
Bodkin has an insight to Celeborn that few other writers have shown ... and
in this work she also exhibits an understanding of a parents' love for their
child, and even more amusingly the trees ability to challenge Elrond. Her
writing is fresh and easy to ready, while managing to keep each character
'in-character'.

The idea of the family sitting in a tree, Elrond watching Celeborn with
Celebrian and remembering Arwen and feeling the depth of despair at never
seeing her again is especially touching. But Bodkin easily manages to
lighten that angst by having Celebrian reveal to Elrond that the trees 'try'
to make it difficult for him to climb them -- an lovely, and very Elven
idea.

Title: A Prince's <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1143>
Question · Author: Tathrin
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6> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 113
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Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-16 14:24:25 Score: 5
This was cute. Very! I'm not sure the term "lovers" would be as wide-spread
in Middle-earth as this story seems to suggest -- that suggests more
acceptance of long-term romantic relationships outside of marriage than I
see in Tolkien's books. But still... This was brilliantly funny, and I
particularly enjoyed the brief reference to Gimli being in a very tall tree,
and Eowyn's rationalistaion of why she should be the one to explain the
Facts of Life to young Eldarion. Very well-written, and worth the read.

Title: Imladris
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3998> Interpreted ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 60
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:28:42 Score: 2
A very interesting poetic interpretation of how Denethor took the news of
Faramir's (and Boromir's) prophetic dream. Humorous, yet insightful.

Title: The <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1872156/1/> Ringbearer and the Rose
· Author: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 891
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:29:28 Score: 4
This story is *so* beautiful. It's rare to see a story in which Sam is the
one in need of comfort, but when there is, you can just about bet that this
author had a hand in it. I love the dawning realization within Frodo, as he
understands just what it is that his dearest friend needs. And I especially
love this kind, perceptive and shrewd Rosie, who is all I have ever thought
Rosie Cotton should be to deserve Sam. This is just a wonderful story!

Title: Mariner's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3199> Son · Author:
Adina
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> ATL · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 326
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:30:05 Score: 3
What a sweet little moment between Elrond and Bilbo! We are shown so very
clearly, how dear Bilbo is to the Lord of Rivendell, and how fond they are
of one another. I love Elrond's insights into hobbit nature, and the
familiar courtesy between them! A lovely vignette!

Title: Important
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1712&cid=12955> Business ·
Author: Jay
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=13
4> of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 1323
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:30:55 Score: 1
For a cat, the most important business of all is its own!

Title: In Which Frodo
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2106> Makes Tea ·
Author: MysteriousWays
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
2> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 821
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:31:39 Score: 2
What a painful insight into how we take the everyday things of life for
granted, until it appears we will no longer have them. Frodo's thoughts at
doing this one simple task for the last time are just as I would have
imagined them.

Title: The Falcon: <http://homepage.mac.com/jmar/falcon/> The Adventures of
Peregrin Took · Author: Tom
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
1> Fairbairn · Genres: Adventure: Long Form · ID: 755
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=76&form_story_filter=755>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:32:10 Score: 2
This is an unusual look at a very adventurous and heroic Pippin, who is
driven by wanderlust and a lackluster marriage to wander the parts of
Middle-earth JRRT only hinted at. A very long, satisfying and suspenseful
read.

Title: Equinoxium <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1574932/1/> · Author:
Lisette
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
0> · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 83
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:34:10 Score: 4
Not the type of story I would ordinarily think I would like, yet strangely
compelling. I like that it is post-WotR. There is no deviation then from
LotR canon. The characterization of Legolas is brilliant, and Buffy fits in
well in her new setting. I also appreciate that there is no attempt at
romance. Very well done! I find that I probably would not mind seeing more
of the Slayer's adventures in her new home.

Title: Packing for Crickhollow <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1777346/6/> ·
Author: Rabidsamfan
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=38
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 1344
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:35:04 Score: 3
As a book-lover myself, I can so identify with Frodo's dilemma in this
lovely drabble. He is quite right--no one would ever believe that he would
leave his beloved books behind. I am very glad he was able to return after
all, and retrieve them for at least a little while...

Title: Runaway Star <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/803983/1/> · Author:
Aerlinnel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Elves · ID: 1256
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o&navbar_page=0&markpage=76&form_story_filter=1256>
Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:35:33 Score: 1
A chilling look at the consequences of rash oaths and kinslaying...very
intense.

Title: Upon a Field of
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/the_danamark/20403.html> Gold · Author:
Dana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
4> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 277
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:36:22 Score: 2
A brilliant use of drabbles to tell of the miserable, hopeful, days of
Cormallen. Each one is a perfect gem in itself, but together they make a
whole story. Intense and lyrical.

Title: Putting
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/maripo5a/42164.html#cutid1> Memories Away
· Author: Mariposa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
0> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Post-Ring War · ID: 826
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:37:01 Score: 4
The role of remembering dark thoughts and dark times, and how sharing such
memories with those we love can heal is examined here, first, as Merry and
Pippin share their experiences during their separation with Frodo, and then
afterward as Pippin presses Merry to share one more dark thought with him.
The love between the cousins is just beautifully expressed.

Title: Flutterby <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1919>
· Author: Piplover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=39
0> (aka Pipfan) · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Post-Ring War · ID: 876
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:37:42 Score: 4
A thoroughly beautiful Pippin h/c. Pippin, overzealous in his duties for
Aragorn, falls ill from the heat. The picture painted of him, as he rushes
about, the young soldier proud to be doing his King's bidding in spite of
discomfort, is so true to character. And the loving care of his kin and
friends when he succumbs is full of sweet affection. But best of all is the
lovely conversation of Aragorn and Gandalf at the end.

Title: Yule
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge02/13084.html#cutid1> Dinner
· Author: Red
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
1> Autumn · Genres: Humor: Children · ID: 1339
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:38:05 Score: 2
This really tickled me. I could just imagine wee!Pip worrying about the
chicken, and Merry helping him out for Pippin's sake, not the chicken's! The
ending was cute.

Title: Not
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13222> Permitted
· Author: Tanaqui
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 545
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:38:44 Score: 1
Humorous take on how Boromir's responsibilities had he lived to become
Steward might not have been welcome.

Title: Seedlings <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3284>
· Author: Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 905
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:39:11 Score: 1
This is very cute. I like Sam's patience, and Frodo's enthusiasm.

Title: Healing the
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2401> Long Cleeve ·
Author: TopazTook
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
7> · Genres: Romance: Incomplete · ID: 916
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Reviewer: Dreamflower
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> · 2005-08-16 14:40:25 Score: 6
This is a very different and fascinating take on the marriage of Pippin and
Diamond. Although the idea that their marriage was an arranged one has been
used, those stories usually make it to be an unhappy union. In this one,
though they were strangers to one another at the wedding, they gradually
learn to love one another deeply. There is a lot of depth to this character
of Diamond, which is very slowly revealed. And though they soon come to love
one another, there are still problems to overcome in the form of
misunderstandings and meddling relatives. At the time I write this review,
it is still a work in progress, though I expect it will be drawing to an end
soon.


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Msg# 5157

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 71 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:14:38 Topic ID# 5157
Title: <http://www.geocities.com/carolina_fanfictions/Sitting.html> Sitting
by the Seashore . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=48
1> Carolina . Genres: Romance: Poetry . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=1260> 1260
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:40:48 Score: 1
Very touching and sad.

Title: <http://www.freewebs.com/frodobaggins88/Selfless%20Love.htm>
Selfless Love . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
3> FrodoBaggins_88 . Genres: Romance: Vignette . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=1342> 1342
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:41:30 Score: 3
A very sweet and original interpretation. I have come across very few fics
in which Frodo is in love with Rosie, but this one is unusual in the way it
shows his selflessness shining through. It emphasizes that quality of
Frodo--the same quality that led him on a seemingly hopeless quest across
the world for the sake of others.

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4897> In the
Deep Places . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
8> Lamiel . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=751> 751
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:42:30 Score: 6
This is an amazing story, in some ways a gap-filler, as it tells the tale of
the Legolas and Gimli from Moria until they leave Lorien more fully than
JRRT does. We see the events as they occurred in canon, but from the inside
POV of both Gimli and Legolas. The way in which, first respect, and then
friendship, is forged between them, and the way in which we see each of them
groping through the prejudices of their races towards an understanding of
one another is nothing less than brilliant. I am primarily a hobbit-fancier,
but there are a few non-hobbit oriented fics which have truly gripped me.
This is one of them.


Title: <http://www.gardenofithilien.net/nochoice.html> No Other Choice .
Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
1> LadyAranel . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=456> 456
Reviewer:
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5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:43:01 Score: 1
An interesting look at one way it could have happened. I don't think I've
seen a Thranduil-Gloin moment before.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3254> Riders
of Rohan . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=35
1> Songspinner . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=654> 654
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:43:35 Score: 2
A very sweet story, in which Merry introduces his daughter to her namesake
and she participates in a tradition of the Rohirrim. I love the way the
relationships are depicted in this fic.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13203>
Cruel Caradhras . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> Tanaqui . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=1365> 1365
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:44:07 Score: 1
Truly perceptive, exploring Legolas' love for his friends. I love the
metaphor of Caradhras.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13200> A
Good Custom . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> Tanaqui . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=1380> 1380
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:44:39 Score: 2
Very nice interaction of Pippin and Faramir, something I always enjoy. The
hobbits' custom must have amused the Men very much.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13195>
Legacies . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> Tanaqui . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=1385> 1385
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:45:06 Score: 2
I always love stories which explore the teaching that Boromir gave the two
younger hobbits. It was indeed a legacy, and I am glad Faramir got a glimpse
of it.

Title: <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1315> The Mark of a...
Warrior? . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
2> Ariel . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=133> 133
Reviewer:
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5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:45:49 Score: 3
I have to say how tickled I was by this story. I never stopped chuckling
while I read it. Funny how the male of the species--whatever species it may
be--seems to always be competitive. But I never thought I would actually
read a story about a literal pissing contest. The whole thing is so obvious,
yet the author never actually says the word. Very funny!

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3038> Keeping
the Watch . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
7> ErinRua . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=333> 333
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:47:18 Score: 2
I loved this one. The wary, yet compassionate hobbits; the weary, yet wary,
Ranger. The author does not say, but I like to imagine it might have been
Strider.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=1887&cid=12367>
The Hour of Our Meeting . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=50
> Forodwaith . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=378> 378
Reviewer:
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5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:47:42 Score: 1
I *do* love stories with Bilbo, and find this a very plausible first
meeting!

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3488&cid=13250> A
Meeting in the Woods . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=86
> Thundera Tiger . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=1313> 1313
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:48:06 Score: 2
A very different and unexpected meeting. I would love to have it followed up
on, after Bilbo's return. Would Primula remember that meeting then?

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3312> Dance
of Terrible Grace . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
8> Adina ATL . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=57> 57
Reviewer:
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5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:48:36 Score: 1
A very chilling and plausible reason for the friendship between Legolas and
Gimli. The enemy of my enemy is my friend...

Title: <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/513858/1/> Prelude . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
5> Mercat . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=109> 109
Reviewer:
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5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:49:19 Score: 3
Ah, this was nice. Frodo, troubled, yet hobbity still and Legolas very much
a *wood*elf! I loved the way Legolas did not attempt to take him back in to
face the Council until he had a chance to rest his mind. I enjoyed the way
he coaxed Frodo into choosing the tree. And the conversation with the other
hobbits afterwards was on the mark!

Title: <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4809> Beyond
the Borders . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> Marta . Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=578> 578
Reviewer:
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5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:50:07 Score: 3
This was so nice. I liked seeing Elrond as he cares for those beyond his own
borders, speaking to one who is just beginning to learn the borders of his
responsibilities, and then the consideration of a map for Pippin's school,
showing beyond the borders of the Shire ties the theme all together
perfectly.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11571>
The Steward and the Brother . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> Cheryl . Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=224> 224
Reviewer:
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5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 14:50:33 Score: 3
Very nice exploration of how Boromir might have offered his fealty to
Aragorn after the War. Very short, but the feelings of loyalty and pride on
both the brothers' parts is wonderfully shown. And I loved Aragorn saying
"justice" instead of "vengeance".

Title: <http://www.livejournal.com/users/talechallenge14/5258.html#cutid1>
A Step in The Dark . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=34
3> SilverMoonLady . Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=1221> 1221
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> Marta . 2005-08-16 16:38:26 Score: 2
What I love about this drabble is the use of details. You can't see a thing
so you have to focus on the other senses, and that combines for a very vivid
scene.

Title: <http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=24>
Flame of the West . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> Altariel . Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=1> 1
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=11
5> Dreamflower . 2005-08-16 17:58:40 Score: 1
Oh, this was lovely! I like the idea of Faramir pledging his fealty to the
King before the Host of the West marches away.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1492> All For
Her . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
4> SoundOfHorns . Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Incomplete . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=899> 899
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=37
3> Elendiari22 . 2005-08-16 20:57:31 Score: 1
A very well-written and engrossing story, detailing the courtship and
growing love of Faramir and Eowyn.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3484&cid=13216> A
Warrior's Skills . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=40
> Tanaqui . Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=551> 551
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> Marta . 2005-08-16 21:03:06 Score: 5
This is a neat extrapolation of the line from Faramir at Henneth Annun,
about how he didn't love the sword for its brightness. I can so see a moment
like this happening, especially if Faramir had a reputation as a student and
a bit of a loremaster (which I think he would). But now I want to see a
prequel drabble -- the first time a less learned ranger hears Faramir
singing about a more obscrue moment of history, and realises that not all
scholars hide in libraries. Even without that aspect, though, this worked
very well; it was a nice characterisation of Faramir before the Ring War.

Title:
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3877&SPOrdinal=1
> A Mantle of Silver Stars . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
4> Nrink . Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=214> 214
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> annmarwalk . 2005-08-16 21:10:02 Score: 7
Nrink weaves words of magic, no less than the embroiderers of the famous
mantle gifted so tenderly in this tale. Her words sing, and whisper, and
capture exquisite visions:
"You should have seen him, skirling like a curlew round the room, and Aerin
scolding and running after like a mad thing."

This story focuses on a single scene, the gift of the mantle. Descriptions
of family life with a newborn, and a lively older brother, are well crafted
and realistic. Nrink's amazing storytelling gift is in the rich descriptive
detail, and the fabulous use of language: "what her husband called her
singing magic - a soft dark humming that was the whispering of the sea on a
moonlit night."

Her description of Denethor, awed and thankful for the happiness she has
brought him, is heartbreaking for all of us who know how their story will
end.

One of the loveliest contributions to the "kinder, gentler Denethor"
subgenre.



Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=12767>
Alchemy . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> Branwyn . Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Poetry . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=168> 168
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> annmarwalk . 2005-08-16 21:10:35 Score: 5
A simple, 100 word poem, hypnotic as waves on the shore or swaying fronds of
seaweed. The simple, repeated words - "before there was glass." conveys the
mysteries of the natural world as interpreted by a imaginative, curious
craftsman.

I was not familiar with the Silmarillion when I first came across this poem,
but the exquisite use of language - deceptively simple - fascinated me. It's
very easy now to envision the craftsman at work, melding science and magic
to create those fateful orbs.

Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2982&cid=11477>
Spring Planting . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> Branwyn . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=170> 170
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> annmarwalk . 2005-08-16 21:11:21 Score: 6
Very seldom have I come across stories dealing with Denethor and his sons
after the death of Finduilas. This lovely, yet somewhat somber vignette
provides a bittersweet reminder of the fears all parents must face.

When have we ever seen the Steward and his young sons on an outing? Both
boys are drawn quite true to character - bored, restless Boromir, rewarded
for his patience; quiet, curious Faramir, exploring on his own. When Faramir
discovers a fascinating artifact, he runs to show his father; as Denethor
realizes the danger to his young son, he must watch in horror (as parents
often do) until the boy is safe.

Denethor's powerful, anguished thought - This dread will I know for each day
until I die - is a timeless, universal cry, shared by parents in all Ages of
the world.



Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2992> For Eyes
to See as Can . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
2> Larner . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: The Shire . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=176> 176
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> annmarwalk . 2005-08-16 21:12:08 Score: 5
Told entirely from Sam's viewpoint, this rich and lovely tale chronicles
Frodo's life from his arrival as an orphan at Bag End, until he takes ship
for the West, leaving tender words of encouragement for Sam and the others
left behind.

Imaginative and intricately detailed, this tale is like a exquisite tapestry
of Frodo and Sam's life together. Larner has postulated for Frodo a rich
life of service to the shire and its inhabitants far beyond what is covered
by the events of the trilogy; and so the tale magnificently "fills in the
corners", the missing details which we hunger for.



Title: <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2444> By the
Light of Earendil's Star . Author:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> Branwyn . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Incomplete . ID:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=77&form_story_filter=173> 173
Reviewer:
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> annmarwalk . 2005-08-16 21:13:38 Score: 10
The premise of the story is simple - A ranger patrol, led by young Faramir,
is overrun and captured by orcs; Boromir organizes their rescue. In hands of
a skilled writer, though, this becomes a tale of action, horror, suspense,
and humor. Brimming with carefully researched detail, exquisite description,
and very finely drawn characters (both canonical and original) this fine
tale never wanders down the twisted path to A-U, nor descends into the
pathos of hurt/comfort, but remains true to its roots as a gripping
adventure.

Probably the most outstanding feature of this tale is its fine
characterizations: Boromir is young, somewhat reckless, but imaginative and
resourceful. His impetuous decision to steal some boats and ambush the orcs
who have captured Faramir and his companions is completely in character.
Faramir, badly wounded, is still able to inspire his companions to
unimagined acts of strength and courage. Original characters, such as
Boromir's longsuffering second-in-command / bodyguard, Haldan; and cousin,
Eldahil, serve as excellent counterpoints (an occasional comic relief). Even
the orcs have their own personalities, rivalries which are subtle but
integral to the plot.

Special recognition must be made of Branwyn's characterization of Denethor:
certainly not the cartoonish madman of the film; her Denethor is a loving
and compassionate father who has felt himself forced to present a powerful,
controlled persona to his people. Every parent can empathize with his
despair, when he believes Faramir to be dead; and his elation and then worry
when he discovers his child alive, though severely wounded.

Another noteworthy feature of the tale is the meticulous research and wealth
of detail. Fight scenes are realistically and accurately described to
provide marvelous visualizations. Medicinal herbs; structural and
architectural features of a surgical room; Gondorian hangover cures fill out
the corners of the tale. Faramir's feverish dreams (particularly an
exquisite vision of stargazing expedition, as a small child wrapped securely
in his father's arms) provide lovely stories-within-the story, each of them
as intricately detailed as the whole.



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Msg# 5158

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 72 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:15:21 Topic ID# 5158
Title: Wish upon a star <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2088089/1/> · Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 194
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=194>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:22:57 Score: 6
Wonderfully original, creepy, funny, and disgusting all at once - a perfect
example of the black-humor-artistry!

An angsty teenage orc - what genius! And so reminiscent of any teenage human
boy, too: "My boss hates me. My co-workers are jerks, and besides, they
don't like me. Everybody else is getting laid, why not me?" Just proves
there isn't a whole lot of difference between humans and orcs, after all!

The stereotypical annoying-teen-fangirl was right-on, as well. Perfectly
realized caracters and an outrageous plot brimming with gory detail provide
an imaginative, fractured fairy tale.


Title: The Sting
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1550> · Author:
tyellas
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=15
5> · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Vignette · ID: 600
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=600>
Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade · 2005-08-16 21:23:09 Score: 4
How apt that Sting was made by Maeglin as his own personal dagger and it
ended up in first Bilbo's then Frodo's hands and it did slay spiders and cut
their webs with all the ease the smith anticipated.

I wonder if this was also the dagger he threatened young Earendil with?
Maybe? Who knows, I suppose, but it's very relevant that Maeglin made the
dagger. And lucky too, or neither Bilbo nor Frodo would have survived the
giant spiders.

Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4065&SPOrdinal=1
> Willing Teacher and the Apt Pupil · Author: Elen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
1> Kortirion · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 209
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=209>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:23:42 Score: 4
Oh, my! What nasty minds we have! A creative, humorous description of a
newcomer's initiation into one of the more bizarre, unnatural customs of
Men. The double-entendre lines are priceless: “Put the tip in your mouth and
suck gently,”; “No! You’ll choke if you take that much in all at once,” I
laughed myself silly over this story, and still go back and reread it often.

Title: Forlorn
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3783&SPOrdinal=1
> Hope · Author: Elen
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
1> Kortirion · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 210
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=210>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:24:14 Score: 9
Forlorn hope: An arduous or nearly hopeless undertaking
Though a signifcant departure from book canon, Peter Jackson’s invention of
a Gondorian suicide mission to retake Osgiliath has inspired many writers.
However, few have handled the scence with such painful grace and loveliness
as Kortirion, in this poem.

The rhythm of the words themselves seem to echo somber drumbeats. The first
verse is most evocative of the scene from the film: the silent prayers of
the onlookers; the strewing of flowers; the tight-lipped faces of the
soldiers. We have all watched this heartbreaking scene many times, but it
has been brought to life in all its anguished power here.

In the second verse, Kortirion’s exquisite wordsmithy takes flight. The
masterful metaphor –We had become steel and iron- is repeated, reinforced,
through the use of words and expressions related to armorcraft: blades,
tempered steel, scabbards, sheathes.. The juxtaposition of the wreathes of
flowers, gifted to them as a farewell, and the wreath and crown of rubies –
the martyr’s crown they will each soon wear – is as heartrending, as is
their desire for eternal rest in Ithilien, the moon-land.

The utter beauty and sorrow of this piece leaves me breathless each time I
read it.


Title: A <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2199&cid=9011>
Merry Meeting at Bree · Author: maranya14
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=12
0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 211
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=211>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:24:57 Score: 4
A joyous tale, written in a style very evocative of the Professor’s work,
brings many favorite characters together for a brief reunion. Vivid
description and lively dialogue, well in character, make this a most
enjoyable tale. Butterbur has not changed a bit, while Nob is a bit older,
more responsible, and two steps (at least) ahead of his master! I think the
Professor would be very proud of this.

Title: Fallen <http://tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=287> ·
Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 212
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=212>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:25:49 Score: 7
One of the great pleasures of involvement in an awards activity is the
opportunity to go back and revisit old favorites; to discover them anew with
fresh eyes. Such has been my happy experience with “Fallen”, a story I have
followed with great interest and enjoyment since its very first appearance.

This tale focuses almost entirely on original characters; canon characters
such as Eowyn or Merry playing only minor, peripheral parts. Aliana’s
characters are realistic and perfectly drawn, whether frightened or
resigned, making difficult choices or making sweet rolls. Her descriptions
of the House and its staff, atmospheric rather than detailed, perfectly
convey the many moods of the last defenders and supporters of the city.

Aliana, one of our most talented young authors, writes with grace and wisdom
far beyond her years. We can look forward with great anticipation to the
continuation of this tale, and many others.


Title: Jessed <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4016>
· Author: Cupiscent
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
4> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 213
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=213>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:26:52 Score: 7
Starlingly original, sensual without being unnecessarily graphic, full of
vivid falconry images. I loved the comparison of Eowyn to a falcon, an
eagle, a ghost owl – a fierce and beautiful, untamed creature. I
particularly appreciated the vision of Eowyn as a strong young woman,
determined to keep control of her body, and to give herself when and to whom
she chose.

The author’s choice of Hama, a good man and well known to us, was masterful
– a mature man, loyal servant of the king, sworn to serve to whatever end;
yet (an interesting twist on a common situation) a lonely man who knows and
accepts that his body is being used by his lover for her own ends. Hama has
always known that Eowyn would never be his; that she was destined for far
greater deeds, yet we still gasp and share his anguish as Eowyn cries out
another man’s name.



Title: Three
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4315&SPOrdinal=1
> Strands of Golden Hair · Author: Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 270
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=270>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:27:37 Score: 5
It seems very strange to write a review that will have more words than the
piece itself, but I found this haiku sequence to be absolutely gorgeous,
perfect in every way. Gimli himself is a creature of few words, so it makes
perfect sense that he would choose haiku as as art form , and it's quite
wonderful to imagine him carefully crafting this tribute to the Lady who has
enchanted him so.

I never realized how difficult haiku is, until I tried to write it myself.
The author has captured Gimli perfectly and his yearning so well, in so few
words.


Title: Namesake
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3793&SPOrdinal=1
> · Author: Ruby
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
2> Nye · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 271
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=271>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:28:30 Score: 5
A very sweet story that captures perfectly the sense of a child being
introduced to an important family friend. Farry is childlike without being
grating; and the friendship between Pippin and Faramir is very well drawn:
respect, and affection, and their delight in being together again.

I particularly enjoyed the hints of stories-within-the-story: "the
lass who wins back her forgetful lover had a King as the lover, not a Thain,
and had almonds instead of walnuts..." These hints added another wonderful
layer to the story.





Title: The
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4053&SPOrdinal=1
> Dark Night of the Soul · Author: Ellisande
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=26
1> · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry · ID: 272
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=272>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:29:06 Score: 4
A very powerful depiction of Denethor's anger, pain, and desolation at the
impending loss of his Finduilas.

Using the strikethroughs was a very effective device, drawing in the reader
(who may also be a writer, and familiar with the frustration of producing
the perfect combination of words.)

I don't often read poetry,but I found this was very accessible, and not just
because of my strong empathy with Denethor.

Title: Breaking the Rules
<http://www.geocities.com/sotto-voce/news0830.html> (Harry Potter Exhibition
Game) · Author: Bubbles
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=14
9> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 276
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=276>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:30:09 Score: 8
I was amazed, several years back, to find two of my favorite pastimes – Lord
of the Rings and professional hockey – had been engagingly combined into an
outrageously entertaining website, The Dom-Land Caribou. The concept of an
entire Middle-Earth Hockey Association, with a regular season, playoffs, an
astoundingly named home arena, and a championship cup, provided both deep
chuckles and household-rousing belly laughs.

The addition of an exhibition game with the all-stars of the wizarding
world, the Hogwarts combined quidditch teams, was a surprise and a delight.
All the characters are realistically written (considering that the whole
idea is far, far AU) and the combination of hockey and quidditch rules is
imaginative but feasible. In a year without professional hockey, this story
and others in the series helped to fill the great hole in my life formerly
occupied by the Pittsburgh Penguins.

Bubbles has announced that this season for the ‘Bou is the last; they (and
she) will be sorely missed by wacked- out Lord of the Rings and hockey fans
worldwide.



Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=11654> Muster of
Rohan · Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 281
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=78&form_story_filter=281>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 21:30:46 Score: 5
We’ve read, heard, and seen the Riders of Rohan heading off to battle
singing and laughing in the face of danger. We know little of the common
folk of Rohan, so this story brings some of them alive for us in the form of
a devoted but unskilled embroiderer; a loving husband who fears his wife’s
tongue more than he fears battle; and his loyal comrades, laughing and
high-spirited as they ride to war under a somewhat unconventional banner. A
whole world of a village, told simply in 100 words.

Title: Some Nameless
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=197> Place · Author:
Budgielover
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
1> · Genres: Adventure: Long Form · ID: 875
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Reviewer: Elendiari22
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3> · 2005-08-16 21:31:31 Score: 2
An excellent story detailing the adventures of the Fellowship when stranded
in a small town on the early days of the Quest. Both hilarious and
suspenseful, Budgie outdoes herself with this fic.

Title: Dragons
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=11653> and
Shadows · Author: Branwyn
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0> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 285
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:31:34 Score: 6
Cultures collide when Faramir and Eowyn admire a lunar eclipse and seek to
understand its mystery. Faramir, representing a sophisticated and
technologically advanced culture, has a somewhat soulless explanation, while
Eowyn, from a more primitive tradition (where myths and legends are still
vividly alive) shares one of her people's beliefs.

A particularly haunting element of this drabble is when Faramir quotes his
father, admiringly; then remembers suddenly his loss and grief. "My father
says--" Faramir stopped; with the slightest catch in his voice, he carefully
spoke again. "My father said the darkness was merely a shadow..." I think we
probably have all shared that experience, and can empathize with Faramir in
that moment.

Title: Comfort Me Not With Cookies <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2330571/1/>
· Author: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon · Genres: Humor · ID: 290
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:32:22 Score: 5
Originally written for a challenge to produce the absolute worst in
fanfiction, this story succeeds beyond anyone's wildest expectations. All
your favorite cliches are there: the impossibly perfect, beautiful Mary-Sue,
brutish Denethor, angsty Faramir, loving-but-thickwitted Boromir, mysterious
paternity, PWP (only implied, unfortunately), and, of course, Legolas
galore.Hysterically funny allusions to other popular fanfics abound.
Outrageous proof that we don't have to take this fanfic business too
seriously!

Title: Sulnur <http://www.theoriginalseries.com/sulnur.htm> · Author:
sulriel
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· Races/Places: Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 145
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Reviewer: jillian
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baade · 2005-08-16 21:32:26 Score: 2
We horse people really must stick together, yes!

The rider made the right choice with Sulnur, both brave, and beautiful. And
determined to stay by her man no matter what. I hope he the healers cured
him, as he deserved.


Title: Gathering
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4201&SPOrdinal=1
> the Pieces · Author: Ellisande
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1> · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor · ID: 291
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:33:00 Score: 6
A textbook example of a drabble series – seven independent stories,
interwoven but freestanding - allows us to follow Finduilas from her first
meeting with her future husband; through the joyful days of her married life
and the birth of her sons; and on to illness and death.

“…the Steward’s son," they told me, "is a strange man with eyes full of
bitter thoughts.” Ellisande’s heartbreaking descriptions of Denethor’s pain
and desolation make this tale so memorable. Throughout it all, Finduilas’s
love remains constant; though she expresses regret for leaving her family
bereft, there is no bitterness for her loss, only achingly expressed
sadness.


Title: Death,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=3840&SPOrdinal=1
> I Call Thee · Author: Werecat
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> · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 292
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:33:59 Score: 5
“Has the day of my death dawned?” In this startlingly original tale, five
warriors, brought to the Pelennor for very different reasons – love,
loyalty, vengeance, hunger, honor – face their fears and concepts of
mortality.

In just a few brief lines, Werecat has brought each character to expressive
life with her trademark colorful, energetic prose. Sights, sounds, and
smells are vividly described as we, too, join in the fateful day, sharing
the last sensory feast with those who are about to meet their end.


Title: In the Forest,
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4130> Singing
Sorrowless · Author: Nrink
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4> · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 318
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:35:11 Score: 7
From the framework of Tolkien’s poetry and prose, Nrink has created another
richly detailed tapestry. The vision of Denethor, driven by the needs of
political expediency to woo and marry unseen the Maid of Dol Amroth, is an
unusual one – he’s usually portrayed as cold and masterful. He is prepared
to do his duty, but unprepared to be dumbstruck with love at first sight for
the exquisite Finduilas.

Finduilas, too, is brought to life as more than a dutiful, obedient
daughter, but as a sensitive and empathic young woman who is receptive to
the mysterious spark that enchants her with love for this solemn, dour man..

Of special note here, in addition to the marvelously inventive descriptions
of holiday traditions, are the lovely ritual words of betrothal, carefully
researched from celtic, druidic, and wiccan sources, which make the story
come even more to glorious, vivid life.


Title: Who Will
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4049> Care? · Author:
faramir_boromir
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0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 612
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:35:59 Score: 7
A lovely companion piece to “No Peace for the Living”, by the same author.
Faramir takes a brief respite to tend to some housekeeping (and I mean that
quite literally!) matters of his own.

We have a refreshing view of Faramir doing what he loves – organizing books,
pausing occasionally to read and ponder both the minor details of his
library, and, on a larger scale, the ages- old labors of the line of
Stewards, waiting, protecting, remaining faithful to their charge, no matter
what.

What is particularly intriguing about this tale is that no time context is
given. Is Faramir a young adult, achieving his first understanding of the
responsibilities entrusted to his family? Is he a man grown, escaping even
briefly from the military duties to search for a remembered volume? Is he
now the Steward of a kingdom at peace, finally having the opportunity to
explore interests he had long ago set aside? A restful, peaceful, but
thought-provoking tale.


Title: No Peace for
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4226> the Living ·
Author: faramir_boromir
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0> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 613
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:36:39 Score: 6
Suddenly bereft of the two powerful anchors of his life, brother and father,
Faramir
ponders the age-old duties of the House of Hurin . Marriage, family,
princedom are still in the future at the moment of this tale, and so there
is only mourning for what has been lost, and acceptance of what is yet to
come.

Finely captured details – the staleness of the air within the tomb;
Faramir’s almost absent-minded addition of more repair work to the
Steward’sresponsibilities; the message written in silver runes on black
lebethron: Duty, Honor, Wisdom – provide us a clear and somber, but
realistic depiction of Faramir, adrift and lonely but calmly accepting his
heritage and responsibilities.


Title: Triptych
<http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/6882.html#cutid1> · Author:
simbelmyne
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5> · Races/Places: Rohan: Romance · ID: 901
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:37:46 Score: 6
A lush, gorgeously romantic vision. It’s not relevant, really, that the
star-crossed lovers are Boromir and Theodred; the tale is exquisitely apt
for any pair of doomed pair. The hours together are too short; this night is
all that is left to them, for on the morrow they must part.

One element of simbelmyne’s writing that I find particularly powerful is the
utter lack of any element of guilt or shame in the pairing. The lovers are
joyous when reunited, peaceful when sated, and accepting of the
inevitability of their fates. They take their joy when they can; a
refreshing change amidst the angst of the genre, and part of the lovely
perfection of the world simbelmyne has gifted us.



Title: Adagio <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/5442.html#cutid1>
· Author: simbelmyne
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5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 902
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> · 2005-08-16 21:38:27 Score: 6
One of the most beautiful stories I’ve read in a long time, from an
exquisitely talented author whose works are all too rare.

The unifying theme – the songs of the Rohirrim, rich and rolling as the
green hills and plains - provides a rich tapestry upon which the threads of
Lothíriel’s new life is stitched: a new bride in a land of strange people
and customs; a new queen learning the history and heritage she has embraced;
a mother-to-be watching her husband bond almost magically and mystically
with their unborn child.

“…his hands cradling the swell of her belly as he weaves a new verse into
the history of his people.” A lovely depiction of one of Middle-Earth’s few
truly happy, joyous couples.


Title: Nimloth's
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3164> Grace · Author:
Rhapsody
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9> · Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 434
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Reviewer: Isil
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7> Elensar · 2005-08-16 21:40:02 Score: 2
I love the way you spin this tale. It is a dark time in Numenor, and yet
there's hope of love, of a future, and a better life for the Faithful of
Numenor. Very well written!

Title: Blood and Warm
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=436> Blankets ·
Author: Kielle
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7> · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 451
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Reviewer: Dwimordene
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· 2005-08-16 21:43:10 Score: 10
Kielle delivers a pointed, hysterical critique of slash clichés. Not only is
there a wet cave, not only is there an injured man to be treated, not only
are the only available bandages the remains of someone's shirt, and not only
is it cold requiring "sharing of body heat", but the two characters are
fully aware of the incriminating circumstances. As Faramir puts it:

"I'm going to be in bad shape unless you bind it up, and where there's
wound-binding in isolated caves there is always, and I do mean always, sex
before sunrise. Count on that. I'm the one who knows how to read, remember."

What follows from this cultural dig is a steady escalation of innuendo as to
who would kill whom for trifling with either Éomer or Faramir: Elessar,
Boromir, Gimli, Imrahil, Legolas, and the list goes on, expanding to gossipy
discussion of rumors surrounding other possible (and coincidentally
poopular) slash pairings, with the time frames, opportunities, and personal
tastes involved analyzed in a humorous manner that highlights how ridiculous
some plot contrivances are. It escalates until this point:

'"I know as little as you, there. But surely no wild tale is as ridiculous
as that of dwarf and elf?"

To Faramir's surprise, Eomer's cocky smile froze. "Ah. *cough* Actually..."'

At which the reader giggles uncontrollably. Kielle's timing when she threw
that one into the mix was perfect. I won't spoil the ending, but suffice it
to say, this fic is a must-read for any slash fan. After all the drippy
angst we put the characters through, we owe it to ourselves to read this and
laugh at what we're capable of. Well done once again, Kielle!


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Msg# 5159

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 73 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:16:00 Topic ID# 5159
Title: Runes in the leaves
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1536> . Author: Rhapsody
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
9> . Genres: Mystery . ID: 768
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Reviewer: Isil
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7> Elensar . 2005-08-16 21:43:52 Score: 2
A perfect mystery! And a grand happy ending for young Jasmine. I also liked
reading this Pippin-as-Thain story. Very well told, and well written!

Title: Raven and
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=141> Gold .
Author: Acacea
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6> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble . ID: 52
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> . 2005-08-16 21:56:24 Score: 3
"He spoke to her of a garden they would build across the river."
This very simple tale encompasses the essence of Faramir and Eowyn's hopes
for the future - peace in Ithilien, and the home they would build together.
Even the title itself brings to mind a lovely vision of the union of this
perfectly destined pair.

Title: Imladris
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3998> Interpreted .
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> . Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Poetry . ID: 60
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> . 2005-08-16 21:57:12 Score: 4
One of the most original, entertaining pieces I have ever come across. Take
equal parts Tolkien and Homer, shake in a dash of Christopher Logue and a
smattering of Monty Python, and if you are lucky, you might come out with
something half as outrageously, laugh-out-loud funny, but ultimately painful
and heartbreaking as this. Aeneid has taken a missing scene and made it
completely her own - I can't imagine it any other way now.



Title: Adraefan <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4097>
. Author: Aeneid
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1> . Genres: Alternate Universe . ID: 448
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> . 2005-08-16 21:58:08 Score: 9
What an amazing tale Aeneid has spun, as intricate as a spider's web! From
the rather common fanfic conceit of "Boromir Lives!" she has concocted a
rich mixture of high drama, interspersed with adventure, some humor, and
romance. Major and minor canon characters as well as well-drawn and
fascinating original characters provide rich detail, and some welcome
lightness, to the dark tale. So many elements come into play here- prose;
poetry; Tolkien's immense and well-loved creation; The Odyssey; Aeneid's own
amazing storytelling skills.


Boromir's pain and guilt, of course, are at the forefront. Shocked beyond
belief by his own betrayal of the fellowship, and then his survival of the
orc attack, Boromir descends into madness and drink, what we of a more
analytical age identify as post-traumatic stress disorder and alcoholism.
Aeneid's depiction of this was so terrifyingly painful and realistic that I
was left breathless, in tears. The reactions of those around him - the
hobbits, the King, his brother Faramir - are entirely realistic, in that
they are enabling, rather than confrontational. It is Boromir himself, when
he reaches his shocking "rock bottom", who must choose to fight for his
sanity, and to regain his lost honor.



Title: Love
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter_view.cfm?STID=4819&SPOrdinal=1
> Me and Despair . Author: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> . Genres: Alternate Universe: Elves . ID: 645
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
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7> . 2005-08-16 21:59:55 Score: 4
A powerful and terrifying vision of what might have happened had Galadriel
accepted Frodo's offer of the Ring, setting herself up as the Dark Queen and
implementing a ruthless plan for the domination of Middle-earth. Original,
inventive, and shocking in its cool and straightforward depiction of the
fate of the members of the Fellowship; terror, subservience, oblivion, blind
loyalty, brutal death. An unforgettable introduction to one of our most
promising new authors!

Title: Grey and Pale
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1252> Gold . Author:
Kielle
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
7> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst) . ID: 54
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:00:26 Score: 4
Wonderfully lively and realistic depictions of Eomer and Eowyn as children,
as well as excellent depictions of Theoden and Theodred. Young Eomer's
survivor guilt and sense of responsibility for the Eastmark are thoughtfully
presented, as is Eowyn's unspoken understanding of her mother's impending
death. Everything about this tale was spot-on - the Professor would be
proud!

Title: Love's Labours
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=300> . Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst) . ID: 71
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:00:55 Score: 3
An absolutely gorgeous, perfectly realized description of a mother's love
for her newborn child, and a father's bonding with a long-desired gift. It
really doesn't matter overmuch that the characters are Gilraen and Arathorn,
for the surprise, delight, pride, and bittersweet sadness are quite
universal and resonant.

Title: Of Herbs and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4653> Stewed Rabbit .
Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller . ID: 9
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:01:27 Score: 5
Marvelous descriptions and vivid, realistic characterizations. This tale is
lovely on so many levels: the young, green Aragorn, most junior member of
his patrol, boyish yet wise beyond his years; the exquisitely imagined
mettare customs celebrated by those who wait patiently, fearfully at home as
well as those still afield; and, perhaps most painfully, the parallel
between those in our own age who wander dangerous paths in the Wild,
serving, protecting, with meager reward or thanks. This simple, heartrending
tale is a salute to the Rangers of our day as well.

Title: Seven Scattered
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3545> Scrolls .
Author: Raksha
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
8> the Demon . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor . ID: 323
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Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:04:27 Score: 6
In seven brief tales, Raksha has skillfully brought Boromir, Faramir, and
Eowyn to vivid life. Oft-imagined scenes, such as little-boy Faramir
pestering Mithrandir with a thousand questions; Boromir and Faramir's
parting at the gates of Minas Tirith; and Faramir's pre-nuptial jitters are
described with warmth, believability, and charm.

"The Bower" merits special mention as one of the loveliest descriptions of
"the morning after" that I have ever read. The comparison of Faramir to a
great, stretching, purring cat - wow! Perfect! And the vision of Eowyn
watching her husband and son frolicking in the lake is so very endearing.


Title: In <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13136>
the Hands of the King . Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Gondor Drabble . ID: 22
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=22>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:05:02 Score: 1
Father and son, reunited after the battle, exchange the barest of details. A
perfect example of the drabbler's art.

Title: Advice <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2603>
. Author: Theresa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
6> Green . Genres: Humor: Aragorn . ID: 556
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=556>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:05:26 Score: 2
I will have to wash out my brain with Clorox and squeeze it dry with a
bulldozer to get some of those images out of my mind. "Strawberry mouse",
indeed! Too, too, too funny!

Title: Advice <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2764>
Taken . Author: Theresa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=32
6> Green . Genres: Humor: Aragorn . ID: 557
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=557>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:05:49 Score: 1
Teeheee, oh, heavens, oh, my! Hehe.

Title: Weakness of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1226> Men . Author:
shadow975
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=31
9> . Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette . ID: 1014
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=1014>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:06:25 Score: 6
Oh! I had read this tale before, then lost track of both title and author.
What a happy surprised to rediscover it here!

I particularly enjoyed Faramir's laughing response to Aragorn's description
of his first meeting with Boromir. How painful that memory must have been
for Aragorn, and how neatly that pain was eased by Faramir's words! From the
standpoint of time and distance, Faramir is able to help his King see a bit
of the ridiculousness of the scene.

A number of movieverse scenes are fleshed out lovingly here, allowing us to
remember our beloved Boromir once more, and imagine how his pain could have
been eased, somewhat, had Aragorn been able to overcome his reticence and
fear. Very beautifully and movingly done.


Title: A Light Beyond
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1520> the Darkness .
Author: Alawa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
3> . Genres: Romance: Poetry . ID: 10
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=10>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:07:08 Score: 5
Oh, these are lovely!

I'm certainly no student of poetry, but I like rhythm, and pattern, and
order, so the careful form of these spoke to me immediately. Beyond the
form, though, the beauty, and humor, and vitality of the words delighted my
soul. I can so easily envision the young, laughing, Gilraen, certain of her
unconventional choice, and the older, sedate Arathorn, his sober heart
'surprised by joy' in the winning and warmth of his radiant bride. No shadow
of the fate that awaits them, only the bliss of newfound love.


Title: Strength of
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1580> Love . Author:
Fileg
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
6> . Genres: Romance: Poetry . ID: 342
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=342>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:09:16 Score: 4
What a powerful vision of Finduilas! No shrinking violet, she: a young woman
certain of her desires, and certain of the matching passion she sees in her
chosen one. There is certainly a fine undercurrent of eroticism here, but I
like that in the Maid of Dol Amroth, the way she challenges Denethor to
match her vibrant love of life. It's easy to understand, based on this
vision, how he was captivated, and also why he was left so lonely and
desolate when she was torn from him.



Title: Fear and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4271> Desire .
Author: Mimine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
2> . Genres: Romance: Rohan . ID: 408
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=408>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:09:54 Score: 7
I should have been repelled even by the summary itself, but because I am an
fairly adventurous reader, I read on.

I should have been repelled by the very first few paragraphs, where Grima
prepares to rape a drugged Eowyn, but because I am adventurous, I read on.

I should have been repelled by Grima's memory of performing sexual service
for Theoden, but because by this point I had been completely ensnared by
Mimine's seductive prose, I read on.

By the time I reached the first sexual encounter between Eomer and Grima, I
was hooked. To say that the story is one of my greatest guilty pleasures is
a vast understatement: I like to read slash where pretty men have
semi-romantic encounters, but this tale has nothing of that . This tale is
ugly, and violent, and stomach-churning; but also tremendously erotic and
disturbing, and memorable.

Title: Eclipsed by
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4905> the Moon .
Author: EdorasLass
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
9> . Genres: Romance: Vignette . ID: 989
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=989>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:10:39 Score: 6
A cool, dark romance, focusing on an OFC and an unexpected canon character,
he who eclipses the golden sons of Rohan as the moon eclipses the sun.
EdoraLass's writing is a subtle and sleek as a cat as, catlike, a kitchen
wench at Edoras ponders the object of her affection. The parallels between
Grima, cunning and resourceful but treated with contempt, and the kitchen
maid, also clever and devious in achieving her ends, are very skillfully
drawn. A very unexpected pairing, but one that speaks well, I think, to Real
Life - for who can explain the mystery that is sexual attraction? A very
unusual and compelling tale by one of our most promising new authors.



Title: In Dreams
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1637> . Author:
Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck . Races/Places: Elves: Lothlorien . ID: 679
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=679>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:11:16 Score: 6
A very thoughtful tale, well told with gentleness and candor.

I enjoyed the imaginative depiction of Elven society in terms of the
coming-of-age ceremony, and the selection of a craft or trade to explore,
and the description of the different sorts of careers that were considered
useful.

I also found Haldir's confusion about his sexual feelings to be very
realistic, like those of a human teen. Even in our own age, many of those
who have the same sorts of thoughts and desires are, unfortunately, made to
feel shameful about them, just as Haldir does. How sad for him (and for us)
that so much energy must be wasted on guilt and shame.

I know this is the first part of a series, and now that I've read this I'm
very eager to continue!

Title: Language <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=106>
Lessons . Author: Celandine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
3> Brandybuck . Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir . ID: 190
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=190>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:11:57 Score: 6
A rare episode in which the Steward scolds and disciplines his elder son is
thoughtfully recounted. Boromir overhears a soldier's oath, but when he
tries to use it himself, arouses his father's ire over a perceived insult to
the history of Gondor and the line of kings.

Celandine has gotten the details perfectly- the playful interaction between
Boromir and his toddling brother; Denethor's quiet explanation of his anger
and punishment; Finduilas's calm intervention between the two. The vision of
Boromir's efforts to converse in Sindarin, eclipsed by Faramir's amazing
competence at such an early age is very sweet. Boromir's promise to use
Faramir's skills and counsel when he is steward is, of course, quite a
bittersweet scene for those of us who know how the tale will end.


Title: The Best Gift of All
<http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=467> . Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea . Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir . ID: 739
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=739>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:14:11 Score: 5
Full of rich and lovely detail, this tale of young Faramir's holiday with
his Dol Amroth relatives is both charming and heartrending. Isabeau has
brought Imrahil's familily to such vivid life it's impossible for me to
imagine them, now, any other way. The wit, humor, and realism of the
characters, as well as the marvelous descriptions of Gondor's holiday
traditions, make this a wonderful feast for the imagination. Sweet Faramir's
pleasure in his uninhibited, loving relatives is gently contrasted with his
sedate, lonely home life, making for a bittersweet tale which ends joyfully.


Title: The Littlest
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=2922> Balrog .
Author: Dragon
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=36
0> . Genres: Humor: Children . ID: 690
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=690>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
. 2005-08-16 22:15:00 Score: 2
What a delightful little tale. I remember reading this last year at HASA and
enjoyed it then. It is anappy and engaging and I especially enoyed your
lighthearted characterizations. Keep up the good work.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=2998&cid=11571> Steward
and the Brother . Author: Cheryl
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=25
2> . Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble . ID: 224
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=224>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:16:26 Score: 2
A very lovely, very feasible AU vision of what might have been, as Lord
Steward Boromir swears fealty to his King, to the loving admiration of his
brother. Simple, yet very reminisicent of the Professor's writing.

Title: Promises
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3477&cid=13139> . Author:
Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> . Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble . ID: 574
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=574>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:16:47 Score: 1
Gorgeous word pictures in a simple vision of Faramir's daily labors to
restore Ithilien as a garden.

Title: Herbs
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=13624> of Healing
. Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> . Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble . ID: 656
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=656>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:17:21 Score: 4
A deceptively simple, yet elegant demonstration of the value of hard work as
a distraction from physical and emotional pain. The vision of Faramir:
captain, nobleman, and Steward-apparent, drowning his sorrow and pain in a
task as uncomplicated and mindless as weeding, is actually quite powerful.
The contrast of the blood-red poppies, and his perhaps-unconscious
demonstration of hope - or else, why weed a garden? are marvelous, subtle
touches.

Title: Echo <http://www.scribeoz.com/fanfic/story.php?no=1002> . Author:
Nancy
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=10
5> Brooke . Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble . ID: 684
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=79&form_story_filter=684>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> . 2005-08-16 22:17:53 Score: 2
Pippin as hero-worshipper, exploring Boromir's chambers in search of a few
last fragments to add to his memories; A deceptively simple, but painful and
bittlesweet vision.


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Msg# 5160

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 74 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:16:42 Topic ID# 5160
Title: To Labor and
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4557> To Wait ·
Author: Aliana
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
8> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 79
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=79>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:18:16 Score: 4
A companion piece to the exquisite “Fallen”, this tale provides tiny,
perfect cameo-like portraits of some of those who await their doom at the
Houses of Healing. Each character is perfectly realized, providing the
barest hints of lovely and well constructed histories (which I sincerely
hope Aliana will write for us, one day). I’m continually awed by the beauty
and delicacy of Aliana’s wordsmithy, and look forward to great things from
this gifted young artist.

Title: Fever <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4431>
Dreams · Author: Gwynnyd
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
6> · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 397
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=397>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:18:48 Score: 3
A well crafted tale of Faramir’s awakening in the Houses of Healing.
Pippin’s tactful and comforting explanations of the momentous events
surrounding the siege, skillfully melded with Faramir’s own prophetic dreams
and fevered memories, raise this tale far above other depictions of the
scene.




Title: The Heirs of <http://www.freewebs.com/aure/heirsofisildurthe.htm>
Isildur · Author: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 24
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=24>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-08-16 22:19:17 Score: 1
Very cute. I can well imagine the heirs blurred after so many generations.

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=11654> Muster of
Rohan · Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 281
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=281>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-08-16 22:20:13 Score: 2
Ah! The bane of all so-called happily married men. But what lovely men, to
support their commander in his hour of need. ! <G> well done!

Title: On the <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1836>
Flood · Author: Acacea
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=19
6> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 284
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=284>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:20:30 Score: 6
A sad and lovely tale, the main focus of which, to my mind, was the desire
to continue fighting even up to the edge of despair. There are so many
dimensions to Acacea’s story – a soldier reflecting upon the loss of a
revered commander; a brother pondering the losses suffered by his own
family, as others, in defense of their city; a man of Gondor considering the
impact of The Great River as mother, protector, and now, bearer of sorrowful
tidings.

The added layer of the tale of the frog in the well – mentioned only in
passing here, but told in depth in another of Acacea’s stories - contributes
to the bittersweet aspects here, as a Gondorian folk tale carries special
significance to those to continue to battle against persistent odds.


Title: Discretion
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=16> · Author:
Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 416
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=416>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:21:11 Score: 6
For those of us who have long pondered the description of Boromir as “taking
no wife”, this exquisite tale provides quite a plausible explanation.
Isabeau’s Boromir is thoughtful, gracious, and noble in every way, but not
stirred by women. Seeking a discreet partner in order to fully explore his
options, he discovers affection, respect, and fulfillment with an old
friend.

Isabeau’s tale is at once both cool, matter-of-fact, and lushly romantic.
Her eroticism is just vivid enough to provide pleasurable reading, but not
so graphic as to totally squick the unwary or uninitiated. Boromir is, well,
Boromir, but I’d love to have a casting suggestion for Andrahar, to complete
my mental pictures! A quite powerful and satisfying tale by a skilled
artist.


Title: Well <http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Head.php?STid=15>
Favored · Author: Isabeau
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
2> of Greenlea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 417
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=417>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:23:08 Score: 3
Oh, lovely, lovely! The young girl is perfectly described, with her swiftly
discarded shyness upon meeting a gentlemanly stranger; her girlish chatter
warming a father’s heart, and her loving worry for her father rather than
her own safety. Prince Imrahil, as well, is lovingly characterized. The tale
is short, sweet, and wonderful.

Title: Seedlings <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3284>
· Author: Beethoven's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=28
9> 7th · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 905
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=905>
Reviewer: sulriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=7>
· 2005-08-16 22:26:48 Score: 1
Lovely! Poor Frodo, digging away, and Sweet Sam, taking care of him as
always.

Title: The Laughing
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4456> Oliphaunt ·
Author: Aeneid
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 998
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=998>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:27:09 Score: 6
On a hot summer evening, seven survivors of the battle for Osgiliath seek to
calm their trembling nerves at a favorite tavern. Each one carries his own
brutal, terrifying memories of the day, and Aenied’s incomparable
storytelling skills has made each tale breathtaking in its realism. She has
skillfully bound each tale together with warmth, compassion, and humor,
reflecting the relationships of the men to each other, their captain, and
his young brother.

I’m delighted once again to see fanfiction moving towards well developed
original characters who flesh out the many gaps left by the professor.
Aeneid has taken the bare structure that was given to us and built a new
city, bit by bit, for us to inhabit, enjoy, and share.


Title: Flame of
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=24> the West ·
Author: Altariel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=18
1> · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette · ID: 1
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=1>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:29:03 Score: 5
It's very easy to imagine the scene depicted in this tale: early evening;
lamplight:Faramir dozing by the fire; the uncomplicated friendliness of
Aragorn smoking his pipe. Altariel has made it even more lovely by adding
Faramir's dream, wherein he still seeks his father's love; and balancing
this vision with Faramir's vow of fealty to his new liege-lord. It's
particularly meaningful that Faramir chooses to make his vow in private,
swearing his life and service to the one who has given his life back to him.
A very moving vision of these two heroes.

Title: The Last <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3586>
Stand · Author: Soledad
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
6> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 76
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=76>
Reviewer: jillian
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=9>
baade · 2005-08-16 22:29:04 Score: 4
Feeble! Feeble???

That was one of the best efforts to show Orcs as anything but murderous evil
mindless things. And I liked the duel. And the Uruks trying to ensure the
future of their race. Particularly nice was the whole having to consciously
create offspring, clearly the Uruks are still very very close to Elves in
their basic structure even if they have some man blood.




Title: Enmities
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/challenge/chapter.cfm?STID=4139&NGID=175> ·
Author: AmandaK
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=20
9> · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs · ID: 561
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=561>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:31:24 Score: 6
A dying female orc, survivior of the battle for Minas Tirith, newly
delivered of a litter of cubs, recalls with pride the glories of her people,
and her own unique contributions to her society.

What amazing skill to take such an incredibly original character and bring
her to life with such vividness that we empathize with her! Details of
everyday life, the culture and heritage of the orc-hai, and the
contributions of the common orc to the war effort are described colorfully
and with great zest.

This is completely new territory for any writer, as far as I know, but
AmandaK has made Drukh Skullgrinder from Nurn a completely believeable,
almost-but-not-quite sympathetic character.



Title: Once
<http://www.tolkienfanfiction.com/Story_Read_Chapter.php?CHid=1143> ·
Author: Meril
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
3> · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 485
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=485>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:31:55 Score: 3
The most ancient of tales - Man in his pride and beauty; the the appearance
of the Tempter; the tragic fall that ultimately effects us all. Exquisitely,
hypnotically retold here; the parallel to Anakin Skywalker is powerful and
timely. Well done, Allie!

Title: Giving <http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=1870>
Gifts · Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Villains · ID: 241
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=241>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:33:38 Score: 5
Warriors, maidens, crones, and children of Harad come alive in this very
unusual, imaginatively-crafted tale of warrior’s rituals and prayer,. The
parallel to those who are stirred by mindless religious or political
demagoguery in our own age to give their lives as sacrificial offerings is
unmistakeable. Like exquisitely crafted Haradric weaponry, there’s always a
dark and painful edge to Dwimordene’s tales that leaves me feeling
unsettled, but not so unsettled that I don’t want to read more.

Title: All That Was Beauitiful <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1242159/1/> ·
Author: Citrine
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=30
0> · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette · ID: 1270
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=1270>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:34:35 Score: 6
Quite a wonderfully creepy and disturbing tale of Grima's first meeting with
Eowyn. The details are perfect: the shadowy hall; the fabulous tapestries,
fascinating to an imaginative child; Grima's physical infirmaties.

The description of Grima in shadow, seeking to reveal himself bit by bit so
as to avoid frightening Eowyn, produces quite powerful mental pictures.
Grima's character is somewhat teasingly portrayed: is he a pedophile,
presented with a new obsession, or a lonely man, seeking only companionship
and affection?

All the dialog, especially Theoden's comforting distraction of the children
with tales of a new colt, is wonderfully realistic. I had not ever read
anything by this author, but I will most definitely seek out more.

Title: Ad Sum <http://www.lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=4619> ·
Author: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 693
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=693>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-16 22:41:21 Score: 6
"Mother taught me well: never drop a man, nor simply leave him lying once he
is brought to where the pyre is: lay him straight, cross his arms (if he has
any); if he is an enemy, then put a bit of turf in his mouth, but if of
Gondor, then put a pebble instead; always close his eyes if you can."
There's something so wonderfully matter-of-fact throughout this whole piece,
but especially in this line. It reminds me of the attitude of the father in
the movie "My Girl". Deaht is a part of daily life, and Dwim's charwoman
does not flinch. She goes about her Duty. But then we see that she is not
jaded: "Thank you, good sirs, for having lain down for us all." She is still
affected, even if she has learned to suppress it. I can see her very easily
being a part of Tolkien's Middle-earth.

Title: Just in <http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=3082>
Case · Author: Marnie
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
5> · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 477
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=477>
Reviewer: annmarwalk
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=17
7> · 2005-08-16 22:48:10 Score: 6
I very seldom read about Elves, so I’m not sure what impulse caused me to
take a look at this. From the very beginning, though, I was ensnared,
fascinated, by Marnie’s hypnotic tale.

Although the focus of the story is on Celeborn, the most fascinating and
captivating element of the presentation of Sauron as Annatar, the Lord of
Gifts. It’s quite easy to see how Celeborn could have swayed by his soft,
reasonable words, very much a serpent, speaking reasonably and logically to
he whom he wished to beguile. After countless ages Celeborn, feeling once
again the lure of the Ring (and the tiny seed of discontent planted by
Annatar) contemplates what he would do with it, had he the opportunity.


Title: Adagio <http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribendi/5442.html#cutid1>
· Author: simbelmyne
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=41
5> · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Vignette · ID: 902
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=902>
Reviewer: Marta
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=16
> · 2005-08-16 22:58:56 Score: 3
You fit a lot into this triple-drabble. I particularly liked not only the
parallel you created between Lothiriel's growing acquaintance with the land
of Rohan and her growing love of Eomer, but also how you characterised Rohan
through the different types of songs the Eorlingas sang.

Title: Best Laid
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4889> Plans · Author:
Lamiel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=29
8> · Genres: Humor · ID: 455
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=455>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 23:37:47 Score: 5
Lamiel blends humor and seriousness in this story, and manages to cleanly
make it all turn on a case of mistaken identity that throws the best laid
plans into disarray. This is funny without being fun at the expense of any
of the characters. Aragorn gets to play the last man in the know, perpetual
victim-participant of others' plotting; Gimli aggressively forges ahead with
his plans with single-minded intensity; Pippin as usual manages to drive
Merry to the brink of sanity; and Bergil, well, he's a cute kid, but someone
needs to keep him on a leash. A fun romp, all told.

Title: Starlight,
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2785> Starbright ·
Author: Mariposa
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=27
0> · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 309
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=309>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 23:38:15 Score: 2
Could have worked as a "Cross-cultural" fic, actually. Who knew the
Shirefolk were so inventive with their constellating, even taking into
account star motion...?

Title: The
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=3016&cid=11654> Muster of
Rohan · Author: Branwyn
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
0> · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 281
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=281>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 23:38:43 Score: 1
Amusing!

Title: Gimli Takes a
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=3065> Whack · Author:
Celtic
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
9> Bard · Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 205
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=205>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 23:39:05 Score: 2
Oh now this is just priceless. I remember the cartoons Disney did of Casey
at the Bat, and I could hear the whole thing in that voice as I read this.
Well done to put these two unlikely contests into contact, Celtic Bard.

Title: The Confused
<http://henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4619> Elf · Author: Kenaz
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=24
4> · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 187
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=187>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 23:39:45 Score: 4
It's disturbing to imagine John Cleese as Celeborn, but he's the only one
tall enough for it. The movie has certainly been responsible for more than
one moan of "That's NOT how it happened in the books!" and several fics
exploring just that discrepancy. This is a more fully developed sketch than
many, and it works very well, especially if read with one's best Cleese
voice.

Title: The Official
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=30> Fanfiction
University of Middle-earth · Author: Camilla
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=21
3> Sandman · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 180
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=180>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 23:40:23 Score: 10
Other than the VSDs, this was the original classic Lord of the Rings
metafic. Despite the grammatical issues, Camilla Sandman succeeds in
pointedly demonstrating that fandom itself is fertile ground for humor. With
her finger on the pulse of fandom and a healthy sadistic streak required of
all instructors, she assembles the characters of Lord of the Rings to teach
their fanfic writers a lesson or ten. "Learning through pain" is her mantra,
as students are put through the wringer by Elrond, lord of the year-long
reading list and resident canon-nazi; by Boromir, who is only too happy to
debunk fangirl dreams of becoming the greatest warrior in the time it takes
to pick up a sword; and hormones are forced to bend to the rules as Sam and
Frodo, Gimli and Legolas, attempt to convey the intricacies of platonic male
bonding.

This is the fic that gave the fandom the term "nuzgûl" as a vampiric bunny,
the result of the tragic misspelling of "Nazgûl". It gave us grammar boot
camp, mini-balrogs, and the Witch-wall. It gave us a Middle-earth that,
whether inanimate or not, delights in fighting back against the whims of
fanfic authors, incorporating the laws of narrative comedy and/or Murphy's
Laws into the fabric of its being on a whole new level. Contrivance is put
to work in such a way that it deserves applause for once.

And Gimli finally got the girl. Bravo, Miss Cam!


Title: Morgoth's
<http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?STID=4140> Notebook ·
Author: Arandil
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
9> · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 123
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=80&form_story_filter=123>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
· 2005-08-16 23:40:48 Score: 5
Oh ouch. Oh the pain. Yes, this is quite the little set of badfic, but the
author being Morgoth makes it hysterical. The little summaries of what's
going on in M-e, his "inspirations" for writing, the legal problems with
Fëanor, the obvious and pathological hatred of Sauron (who dies in every
story he appears in, and there is literarily much rejoicing each time), the
invention of "the Other Place" whence girls come to Middle-earth—these make
what would be unbearably painful fics into comedy gold.


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Msg# 5161

Reviews Final as of 8/17/2005 part 75 Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 0:19:04 Topic ID# 5161
Title: Ailurophobia
<http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=1662> . Author:
Werecat
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=83
> . Genres: Humor: Animals . ID: 115
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=81&form_story_filter=115>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-16 23:41:17 Score: 4
Priceless! The Prince of Darkness is allergic to cats! All the catty habits
of independence and sovereign indifference to the claims of mere human
beings to control the confines where a cat stalks are put in the service of
turning Angband upside down. For all it's black humor by the end, still,
it's highly entertaining, and a unique rescue of an obscure character of
HoME.

Title: Friends in Small Spaces <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2280079/1/> .
Author: Varda's
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=22
3> Servant . Genres: Humor: Aragorn . ID: 102
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=81&form_story_filter=102>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-16 23:41:46 Score: 4
That was interesting. The all-dialogue style worked: it was actually funnier
not having specific visuals in mind. The humor is entirely in the verbal
exchange. It seems clear that brotherly affection and jokes continue on into
adulthood, and I loved the punchline at the end, regarding what Aragorn
failed to do that got him into his current situation. Nicely done!

Title: Ode to Legolas <http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1928297/1/> . Author:
Ainaechoiriel
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=2>
. Genres: Humor: Poetry . ID: 5
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&show_all=n
o&navbar_page=0&markpage=81&form_story_filter=5>
Reviewer: Dwimordene
<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorDetails&form_id=8>
. 2005-08-16 23:42:12 Score: 1
Snork. "How can we all be wrong?" A question admitting of no contrary
evidence. ;-)


-----

More tomorrow. Or rather less tomorrow. ;-)
--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
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Msg# 5162

Yaaay!!! Posted by aelfwina@cableone.net August 18, 2005 - 4:41:21 Topic ID# 5162
After a very frustrating yesterday, I finally got all my tentative reviews finalized!
Dreamflower
(Barbara)

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Msg# 5163

Re: Problems looking at your Author Reviews Posted by sulriel August 18, 2005 - 7:47:05 Topic ID# 5132
I don't understand all of the below, but I'll just keep entering and
trust that it will all be worked out. :)

Thanks again Anthony!!!


--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Anthony Holder <aaholder@s...>
wrote:
> Sulriel,
>
> The author review status for the links is not done correctly.
>
> I checked the reviews you mentioned yesterday, and they are all
> correct, and in the system.
>
> The error message should read something like: you can't edit the
review
> because it is final, and it is voting season.
>
> Your review isn't showing up, because for some reason when you do
an
> author filter, it sets the subcategory filter to General, and this
one
> is for an Incomplete.
>
> It's clear that there are some glitches, especially with the author
> review code.
>
> For the time being, you'll have to ignore the 'enter new author
review'
> which is showing up no matter what. I should be able to fix it, but
it
> is saving your reviews, so they're OK.
>
> I'll try to fix the filter issue, but if you don't filter for
authors,
> your review is in the list.
>
> In short, you can create author reviews just fine. They are being
saved
> correctly, but they are not being shown correctly by the system.
>
> I still have some more emails to read tonight. I probably won't get
any
> of this fixed tonight.
>
> Anthony

Msg# 5164

Help??? (author review) Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 18, 2005 - 10:43:40 Topic ID# 5164
I should not do this stuff when I have a headache.

I was typing in an author review for Dana in Drama: Gondor Drabble and did
something wrong and it set the review status to "final" and yet tells me I'm not
authorized to see the review (tried to look at it to see just how much of
what I wrote was saved), unlike the other "final" author reviews I've submitted
for other authors, where I can read over the review even though I can't change
anything, and "tentative" reviews where I can read and edit.

Is there a review there, or part of a review, or is it lost in inter-space
somewhere? Is it really set to "final"?

Thanks,
Lin
(off to read some more, having decided to write comments offline this
morning, at least until this headache subsides)


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Msg# 5165

Now I'm really confused. More technical frustrations. Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 18, 2005 - 11:17:18 Topic ID# 5165
Was entering story reviews for Dana that I had typed offline, and accidently
entered them as author reviews. Thankfully I was very careful this time, and
saved them as "tentative", and realising my mistake, I cut-and-pasted the
review contents into where story reviews are supposed to be, saving *those* as
final once I was satisfied and had double-and-triple checked that they were the
right words at the right place at the right time.

I clicked out of the "edit" screen for the author reviews without saving
them, thinking that since they were already "tentative" I could come back and
paste in author reviews later. But somehow clicking out without saving or
resetting changed the statuses to "final", and now these are appearing as final author
reviews, along with a handy-dandy little error message:
Warning: Missing argument 4 for load() in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\lib\CTAuthorReview.ctcls on line 26

Really, I'm sorry to be such a bother today. I think I'm not going to do any
more reviewing for the day. I'm making a terrible mess of it.

Apologies,
Lin


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Msg# 5166

Re: Now I'm really confused. More technical frustrations. Posted by Marta Layton August 18, 2005 - 11:31:52 Topic ID# 5165
Hi Lin,

Don't be sorry. I just wish I could help! I'm not having these
problems, and I'm not familiar enough with the code to guess what's
causing them.

What I am doing is bcc'ing Anthony on this message in case he's not
reading the group mail. I also know that he can't often do this stuff
at work, so it may be tonight until he gets back to you.

Thanks for letting us know, and sorry for your frustration.

Marta


On 18 Aug 2005, at 12:16, BLJean@aol.com wrote:

> Was entering story reviews for Dana that I had typed offline, and
> accidently
> entered them as author reviews. Thankfully I was very careful this
> time, and
> saved them as "tentative", and realising my mistake, I cut-and-pasted
> the
> review contents into where story reviews are supposed to be, saving
> *those* as
> final once I was satisfied and had double-and-triple checked that
> they were the
> right words at the right place at the right time.
>
> I clicked out of the "edit" screen for the author reviews without
> saving
> them, thinking that since they were already "tentative" I could come
> back and
> paste in author reviews later. But somehow clicking out without
> saving or
> resetting changed the statuses to "final", and now these are
> appearing as final author
> reviews, along with a handy-dandy little error message:
> Warning: Missing argument 4 for load() in c:\Program Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\lib\CTAuthorReview.ctcls on line 26
>
> Really, I'm sorry to be such a bother today. I think I'm not going to
> do any
> more reviewing for the day. I'm making a terrible mess of it.
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Msg# 5167

voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by Marta Layton August 18, 2005 - 11:44:21 Topic ID# 5167
Hey guys and esp. Ainae,

I know we still have over a month in voting season, so this isn't a
concern at the moment but I think I should bring it up.

What happens if the MEFA2005 site is unavailabel for whatever reason
near the end of voting season? It could be a local problem with Ainae's
computer or internet, or it could be that there's some bug in the site
that we don't uncover until then. Though I think it's a great site and
we're doing a good job of finding issues now, something may pop up.
Murphy's law and all that.

I think it's bad PR and counter-productive to have people ready to vote
but not be able to. Therefore I suggest, if for some reason you can't
vote, you can post your reviews to this Yahoo group like you did last
year *along with* a reason why you couldn't enter them into the site.
This has to be more than "I was running short on time and wouldn't be
able to enter them one-by-one." An error message or something like
that.

Now, this wouldn't be an official review. It would just be proof of a
good-faith effort to cast a review. What you would have to do is watch
the list for when the problem was resolved, then you'd have 48 hours to
cast your review. If anyone out there has worked for a non-profit, you
might be familiar with the problem of collecting donations before the
end of the fiscal year. My mum manages a customer service department
for a local charity and they use a system similar to this: if for some
reason the web or call center is "down" at the turn of the year, you
can call their business number and leave your credit card number and
amount of donation on their answering machine, and you'll still be able
to deduct it from that year's taxes -- even if the charge isn't handled
until the next business day.

Anyway, I sincerely hope we won't need anything like this, but I
thought it might be helpful to have something in place in case we do.

Marta
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Msg# 5168

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 18, 2005 - 14:39:55 Topic ID# 5167
<snip plan>

That seems like a very reasonable contigency plan to me, Marta. I'd
adopt that or something similar against Murphy's Laws.

I don't know how many more ballots I'm going to be able to complete
before the deadline, but I certainly wouldn't want to lose any of them
to an inopportune site outage. Not after so much reading!

Dwim, looking at Romance next

Msg# 5169

Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Leaward August 18, 2005 - 14:45:29 Topic ID# 5169
I had posted this on the staff site and no one replied other than
Marta on a personal email. Can we get an official decision about
switching of categories now that voting season is upon us and votes
are being finalized?

I saw that Ainae switched Daw's A spring of Joy from Incomplete to
complete -- luckily the reviews for that one were based upon it being
completed. However, I have a story (Life in the Angle) that is in the
Romance: Incomplete section that will be completed before the end of
voting season. The votes/reviews on it mention that it is incomplete
and they are final so they cannot be changed. This may happen with
other stories as well since it is still six weeks before the end of
voting season.

If the story gets changed now to complete, shouldn't the reviewers be
able to adjust their reviews? (which I know isn't possible) So
shouldn't we just leave the story in the Incomplete section?

Lea

Msg# 5170

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by sulriel August 18, 2005 - 14:55:59 Topic ID# 5169
would it be possible for the admin to manually change the final votes
to tenative when a fic is moved from incomplete to complete? That
would allow reviews to update their vote if they wished, and if they
didn't, it would still be counted in the final tally. I don't
*think* that there are going to be so many being completed over the
next month that it should be too much of a problem - if it is possible.



--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> I had posted this on the staff site and no one replied other than
> Marta on a personal email. Can we get an official decision about
> switching of categories now that voting season is upon us and votes
> are being finalized?
>
> I saw that Ainae switched Daw's A spring of Joy from Incomplete to
> complete -- luckily the reviews for that one were based upon it being
> completed. However, I have a story (Life in the Angle) that is in the
> Romance: Incomplete section that will be completed before the end of
> voting season. The votes/reviews on it mention that it is incomplete
> and they are final so they cannot be changed. This may happen with
> other stories as well since it is still six weeks before the end of
> voting season.
>
> If the story gets changed now to complete, shouldn't the reviewers be
> able to adjust their reviews? (which I know isn't possible) So
> shouldn't we just leave the story in the Incomplete section?
>
> Lea

Msg# 5171

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by sulriel August 18, 2005 - 15:02:07 Topic ID# 5167
In general, I think it's a bad idea to offer too many options as it
tends to confuse people (ok-ok, I'm one that's easily confused), but
in this case, it might not be a bad idea. -if I understand what you
are proposing, - that if the site is down, the votes could be posted
to the list????

then - ???

how would that work?

if reviews are posted here, is the the authors responsibility to
either later paste them in the mefa database or be sure that admin
does? I think that would work if there was a delay (one week?)
between closing the votes and tallying the count. - that would give
poeple a chance to verify the ones that were post to this list within
the timeframe made it to the database. -

but on the other hand, while I'm one that sometimes squeezes in at the
last minute, - that's part of life, and maybe we should all be aware
of the outages and take special care to get those reviews in in a
timely manner. I've been doing along as I can, more some days, some
days not, but I don't have any saved in the background. I'm posting
them as I go.


--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:
> <snip plan>
>
> That seems like a very reasonable contigency plan to me, Marta. I'd
> adopt that or something similar against Murphy's Laws.
>
> I don't know how many more ballots I'm going to be able to complete
> before the deadline, but I certainly wouldn't want to lose any of
them
> to an inopportune site outage. Not after so much reading!
>
> Dwim, looking at Romance next

Msg# 5172

Marta Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 18, 2005 - 15:13:57 Topic ID# 5172
Thanks for the reassuring reply, Marta. Headaches always make me feel
especially stupid, and then when the computer fights me and wins, well...

Wanted to know what this sigline means?

The first time I read it I thought it said
si hoc legere scis nimium eruditionis hobbits

Lin

In a message dated 8/18/2005 1:08:46 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
Marta
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Msg# 5173

Sulriel Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 18, 2005 - 15:16:20 Topic ID# 5173
I am having a bad day, but if I read the original suggestion aright, it was
that these were "courtesy votes" and wouldn't be counted. Simply providing the
author with the reviews and an attempt to show good-faith effort to post them.

Then again, I might have read the original wrong. It has not been a good day
for doing brain-work.

Lin

In a message dated 8/18/2005 1:08:46 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
if reviews are posted here, is the the authors responsibility to
either later paste them in the mefa database or be sure that admin
does? I think that would work if there was a delay (one week?)
between closing the votes and tallying the count. - that would give
poeple a chance to verify the ones that were post to this list within
the timeframe made it to the database. -


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Msg# 5174

Re: Sulriel Posted by sulriel August 18, 2005 - 15:24:43 Topic ID# 5173
<blush> ...that actually makes more sense. I thought it was a nice
suggestions, but was afraid of the potential for confusion, and the
amount of backtracking and research in who posted what where, and the
potential for conflict - which is a good thing in a fic, - bad thing
in real life . ...


--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, BLJean@a... wrote:
> I am having a bad day, but if I read the original suggestion
aright, it was
> that these were "courtesy votes" and wouldn't be counted. Simply
providing the
> author with the reviews and an attempt to show good-faith effort to
post them.
>
> Then again, I might have read the original wrong. It has not been a
good day
> for doing brain-work.
>
> Lin
>
> In a message dated 8/18/2005 1:08:46 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
> MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
> if reviews are posted here, is the the authors responsibility to
> either later paste them in the mefa database or be sure that admin
> does? I think that would work if there was a delay (one week?)
> between closing the votes and tallying the count. - that would give
> poeple a chance to verify the ones that were post to this list
within
> the timeframe made it to the database. -
>
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]

Msg# 5175

changing status of stories from complete to incomplete Posted by Marta Layton August 18, 2005 - 15:51:45 Topic ID# 5175
My feeling is that if we switch a story from incomplete to complete at
any time, the people who have already reviewed it need to have an
option to change their reviews if they decide to. If the switch takes
place during reading season, it's not an issue. The problem comes in
when we switch during voting season. Final reviews can't be changed at
that point.

I like the suggestion (by sulriel, maybe?) of changing final votes to
tentative before changing the story's status from incomplete to
complete. But I'm not sure how much work this would take, or even if
it's technically feasible.

For everyone's information, I'm including the email I sent to Lea on
this topic.

Marta
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--- Marta Layton <melayton@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Lea,
>
> I'm cc'ing Ainae in on this.
>
> I've scanned the FAQs and rules at
> http://home.earthlink.net/~ainae/mefa/ , and I
> can'tfind anything that
> addresses this question.
>
> My personal feeling is that things shouldn't be
> moved past the end of
> reading season. This is why: Let's say I voted for
> "A Spring of Joy"
> before it was completed. It's later finished, but I
> don't think the
> last chapters are very good. So I don't think it
> deserves as many
> points, so I go and shorten up my review. I can do
> this during reading
> season, but during voting season I can't if the
> review has the status
> "final".
>
> That's my reasoning, anyway. ;-)
>
> To recap: I don't think an incomplete story should
> be changed to
> complete during voting season. What do you think,
> Ainae?
>
> Marta
>
> On 17 Aug 2005, at 21:05, Leaward wrote:
>
>> Now that we're to voting season are stories that
> are in the incomplete
>> section and get completed staying in the
> incomplete section or what
>> happens to them?
>>
>> I notice that Daw's A Spring of Joy (Drama
> includes Angst: Incomplete)
>> is now completed ...
>>
>> Was just wondering ...
>>
>> Lea
>>


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Msg# 5176

Re: changing status of stories from complete to incomplete Posted by Leaward August 18, 2005 - 16:24:41 Topic ID# 5175
Thanks, Marta, I hadn't wanted to post your email without your
permission...

If the votes can be switched back to tentative that's fine, as long as
the reviewer realizes that's happened and can rewrite them.
Personally I've lost track of who I've reviewed and if I think I've
set them all to final, I'm unlikely to go back and look for tentatives
and they might never get changed and automatically switch to final at
the end of the voting season anyway.

It does become quite a nightmare ...

Lea
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Marta Layton <melayton@g...> wrote:
> My feeling is that if we switch a story from incomplete to complete at
> any time, the people who have already reviewed it need to have an
> option to change their reviews if they decide to. If the switch takes
> place during reading season, it's not an issue. The problem comes in
> when we switch during voting season. Final reviews can't be changed at
> that point.
>
> I like the suggestion (by sulriel, maybe?) of changing final votes to
> tentative before changing the story's status from incomplete to
> complete. But I'm not sure how much work this would take, or even if
> it's technically feasible.
>
> For everyone's information, I'm including the email I sent to Lea on
> this topic.
>
> Marta
> *****
(email snipped)

Msg# 5177

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 16:54:28 Topic ID# 5167
I think it's good to have a contingency plan.

How about this: If on the last day (Sept 30th), you can't reach the site,
paste the URL and Page Not Found message into a new post to this group and
put your review(s) (clearly marked as to where they go) underneath that.
Please also note the time at which you're posting. Yahoo sometimes delays
posts and we need to know that votes made it in under the deadline. Then we
can probably open the site back up for only those votes to be entered and
counted. (We'll check, too!)

That sound doable?

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

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it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

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> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Marta Layton
> Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 11:46 AM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] voting "contingency plan" necessary?
>
> Hey guys and esp. Ainae,
>
> I know we still have over a month in voting season, so this
> isn't a concern at the moment but I think I should bring it up.
>
> What happens if the MEFA2005 site is unavailabel for whatever
> reason near the end of voting season? It could be a local
> problem with Ainae's computer or internet, or it could be
> that there's some bug in the site that we don't uncover until
> then. Though I think it's a great site and we're doing a good
> job of finding issues now, something may pop up.
> Murphy's law and all that.
>
> I think it's bad PR and counter-productive to have people
> ready to vote but not be able to. Therefore I suggest, if for
> some reason you can't vote, you can post your reviews to this
> Yahoo group like you did last year *along with* a reason why
> you couldn't enter them into the site.
> This has to be more than "I was running short on time and
> wouldn't be able to enter them one-by-one." An error message
> or something like that.
>
> Now, this wouldn't be an official review. It would just be
> proof of a good-faith effort to cast a review. What you would
> have to do is watch the list for when the problem was
> resolved, then you'd have 48 hours to cast your review. If
> anyone out there has worked for a non-profit, you might be
> familiar with the problem of collecting donations before the
> end of the fiscal year. My mum manages a customer service
> department for a local charity and they use a system similar
> to this: if for some reason the web or call center is "down"
> at the turn of the year, you can call their business number
> and leave your credit card number and amount of donation on
> their answering machine, and you'll still be able to deduct
> it from that year's taxes -- even if the charge isn't handled
> until the next business day.
>
> Anyway, I sincerely hope we won't need anything like this,
> but I thought it might be helpful to have something in place
> in case we do.
>
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Msg# 5178

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 16:59:44 Topic ID# 5169
Well first , sorry about missing the staff post. I'm lucky to be checking
just two of my inboxes these days. My personal one and this one.

As for stories being completed, a post should be made here so everyone can
see it. Anybody who votes on MEFA2005 is a member here.

Then we can figure out what to do about editing those reviews if the viewer
wishes to. Or even if we should. We may want to put that to a vote. It's
not just about the story being completed and reviewed when it was
incomplete, but the score and is it fair to let someone change a final
review and thus the score.

--Ainaechoiriel
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 2:45 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Incomplete Stories changing categories
>
> I had posted this on the staff site and no one replied other
> than Marta on a personal email. Can we get an official
> decision about switching of categories now that voting season
> is upon us and votes are being finalized?
>
> I saw that Ainae switched Daw's A spring of Joy from
> Incomplete to complete -- luckily the reviews for that one
> were based upon it being completed. However, I have a story
> (Life in the Angle) that is in the
> Romance: Incomplete section that will be completed before the
> end of voting season. The votes/reviews on it mention that
> it is incomplete and they are final so they cannot be
> changed. This may happen with other stories as well since it
> is still six weeks before the end of voting season.
>
> If the story gets changed now to complete, shouldn't the
> reviewers be able to adjust their reviews? (which I know
> isn't possible) So shouldn't we just leave the story in the
> Incomplete section?
>
> Lea
>
>
>
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Msg# 5179

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 17:03:31 Topic ID# 5169
I've changed Life in the Angle to Romance General

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> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 2:45 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Incomplete Stories changing categories
>
> I had posted this on the staff site and no one replied other
> than Marta on a personal email. Can we get an official
> decision about switching of categories now that voting season
> is upon us and votes are being finalized?
>
> I saw that Ainae switched Daw's A spring of Joy from
> Incomplete to complete -- luckily the reviews for that one
> were based upon it being completed. However, I have a story
> (Life in the Angle) that is in the
> Romance: Incomplete section that will be completed before the
> end of voting season. The votes/reviews on it mention that
> it is incomplete and they are final so they cannot be
> changed. This may happen with other stories as well since it
> is still six weeks before the end of voting season.
>
> If the story gets changed now to complete, shouldn't the
> reviewers be able to adjust their reviews? (which I know
> isn't possible) So shouldn't we just leave the story in the
> Incomplete section?
>
> Lea
>
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Msg# 5180

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Leaward August 18, 2005 - 17:09:33 Topic ID# 5169
AKK! But it's still incomplete at the moment!

It won't be completed until next week. I'm still waiting to get the
chapters back from my beta's. And Sulriel's review refers to it as
incomplete. So now what?

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> I've changed Life in the Angle to Romance General
>
> --Ainaechoiriel
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>
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>
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> > [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> > Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 2:45 PM
> > To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > Subject: [MEFAwards] Incomplete Stories changing categories
> >
> > I had posted this on the staff site and no one replied other
> > than Marta on a personal email. Can we get an official
> > decision about switching of categories now that voting season
> > is upon us and votes are being finalized?
> >
> > I saw that Ainae switched Daw's A spring of Joy from
> > Incomplete to complete -- luckily the reviews for that one
> > were based upon it being completed. However, I have a story
> > (Life in the Angle) that is in the
> > Romance: Incomplete section that will be completed before the
> > end of voting season. The votes/reviews on it mention that
> > it is incomplete and they are final so they cannot be
> > changed. This may happen with other stories as well since it
> > is still six weeks before the end of voting season.
> >
> > If the story gets changed now to complete, shouldn't the
> > reviewers be able to adjust their reviews? (which I know
> > isn't possible) So shouldn't we just leave the story in the
> > Incomplete section?
> >
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Msg# 5181

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Leaward August 18, 2005 - 17:55:09 Topic ID# 5169
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> AKK! But it's still incomplete at the moment!
>
> It won't be completed until next week. I'm still waiting to get the
> chapters back from my beta's. And Sulriel's review refers to it as
> incomplete. So now what?
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...>
wrote:
> > I've changed Life in the Angle to Romance General
> >

I've also just noticed that both Daw's and my stories details are
still showing as incomplete, and mine is showing as a novella -- which
is what it was when it was first entered, it is now a complete
full-length novel of 25 chapters. The liaisons can't change the
details anymore ...

How Works in Progress were handled really should have been decided
upon way before voting season and should be discussed during the post
mortem so this doesn't happen again. As an author I can't say I'm
particularly happy at the moment.

Msg# 5182

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 18:29:37 Topic ID# 5169
I thought you'd written it was complete. I'll move it back as soon as my
internet connectionn let's me.

--Ainaechoiriel
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 5:09 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories
>
> AKK! But it's still incomplete at the moment!
>
> It won't be completed until next week. I'm still waiting to
> get the chapters back from my beta's. And Sulriel's review
> refers to it as incomplete. So now what?
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel"
> <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> > I've changed Life in the Angle to Romance General
> >
> > --Ainaechoiriel
> > MEFA Admin and Founder
> >
> > "This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond
> said, "for
> > it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
> >
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> > > [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> > > Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 2:45 PM
> > > To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > > Subject: [MEFAwards] Incomplete Stories changing categories
> > >
> > > I had posted this on the staff site and no one replied other than
> > > Marta on a personal email. Can we get an official decision about
> > > switching of categories now that voting season is upon us
> and votes
> > > are being finalized?
> > >
> > > I saw that Ainae switched Daw's A spring of Joy from
> Incomplete to
> > > complete -- luckily the reviews for that one were based upon it
> > > being completed. However, I have a story (Life in the
> Angle) that is
> > > in the
> > > Romance: Incomplete section that will be completed before
> the end of
> > > voting season. The votes/reviews on it mention that it is
> > > incomplete and they are final so they cannot be changed. This may
> > > happen with other stories as well since it is still six
> weeks before
> > > the end of voting season.
> > >
> > > If the story gets changed now to complete, shouldn't the
> reviewers
> > > be able to adjust their reviews? (which I know isn't possible) So
> > > shouldn't we just leave the story in the Incomplete section?
> > >
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Msg# 5183

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Leaward August 18, 2005 - 18:36:18 Topic ID# 5169
Thank you. I had just been asking what would happen to the votes that
were now finalized saying 'work in progress' knowing they can't be
changed. I'll let you know when it's actually complete.

Lesley

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> I thought you'd written it was complete. I'll move it back as soon
as my
> internet connectionn let's me.
>
> --Ainaechoiriel
> MEFA Admin and Founder
>
> "This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond
said, "for
> it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
>
> http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards
>
> Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com
>
>
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> > Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 5:09 PM
> > To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories
> >
> > AKK! But it's still incomplete at the moment!
> >
> > It won't be completed until next week. I'm still waiting to
> > get the chapters back from my beta's. And Sulriel's review
> > refers to it as incomplete. So now what?
> >
> > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel"
> > <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> > > I've changed Life in the Angle to Romance General
> > >
> > > --Ainaechoiriel
> > > MEFA Admin and Founder
> > >
> > > "This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond
> > said, "for
> > > it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
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> > >
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > > > [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> > > > Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 2:45 PM
> > > > To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > > > Subject: [MEFAwards] Incomplete Stories changing categories
> > > >
> > > > I had posted this on the staff site and no one replied other than
> > > > Marta on a personal email. Can we get an official decision about
> > > > switching of categories now that voting season is upon us
> > and votes
> > > > are being finalized?
> > > >
> > > > I saw that Ainae switched Daw's A spring of Joy from
> > Incomplete to
> > > > complete -- luckily the reviews for that one were based upon it
> > > > being completed. However, I have a story (Life in the
> > Angle) that is
> > > > in the
> > > > Romance: Incomplete section that will be completed before
> > the end of
> > > > voting season. The votes/reviews on it mention that it is
> > > > incomplete and they are final so they cannot be changed. This may
> > > > happen with other stories as well since it is still six
> > weeks before
> > > > the end of voting season.
> > > >
> > > > If the story gets changed now to complete, shouldn't the
> > reviewers
> > > > be able to adjust their reviews? (which I know isn't possible) So
> > > > shouldn't we just leave the story in the Incomplete section?
> > > >
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Msg# 5184

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 18:53:01 Topic ID# 5169
This is spelled out and the only difference between this year's and last
year's is the MEFA2005 site which allowed members to set their reviews to
Final BEFORE voting season, thus basically setting them in stone. I,
personally only ever set mine as high as tentative and would recommend that
everyone do that at least with WIPs until you are ABSOLUTELY sure the story
won't be finished before Voting Season ends.

Leaward, you were here last year so you know exactly how WIPs that got
completed were handled. And people have asked that question this year and
were told the answer.

The only thing different next year will be that I'll remind everyone that
it's best to keep their WIP reviews at tentative.

So, just to be clear: if a story becomes complete during Reading Season or
Voting Season, we will change it to a completed category IF the following
occurs:

Post announcement to THIS group (just like Spring of Joy was) so that not
only the admins but all the reader/members can see it.

No, "it'll be completed next week" announcements either.

Now, the part that is up for debate is if we try to allow voters to rewriter
their reviews. I raised that question already. Some said yes. But did
anyone respond to my point? Is it fair to all the other votes for other
stories? Should anyone be able to go back and edit their previous reviews?
Should we, next year, not allow any votes to be set to Final until Voting
Season so this doesn't come up?

I will say that ASC does allow one to revise a vote. Simple revote. Your
first vote is then thrown out. The problem is that our website doesn't work
that way. As things stand, Final is a lock. If Admins can't change it, no
one can. Except maybe Anthony.

So we'll really need to get him in on this debate.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards

Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com



--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards

Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com





> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 5:55 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> > AKK! But it's still incomplete at the moment!
> >
> > It won't be completed until next week. I'm still waiting
> to get the
> > chapters back from my beta's. And Sulriel's review refers to it as
> > incomplete. So now what?
> >
> > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...>
> wrote:
> > > I've changed Life in the Angle to Romance General
> > >
>
> I've also just noticed that both Daw's and my stories details
> are still showing as incomplete, and mine is showing as a
> novella -- which is what it was when it was first entered, it
> is now a complete full-length novel of 25 chapters. The
> liaisons can't change the details anymore ...
>
> How Works in Progress were handled really should have been
> decided upon way before voting season and should be discussed
> during the post mortem so this doesn't happen again. As an
> author I can't say I'm particularly happy at the moment.
>
>
>
>
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Msg# 5185

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by sulriel August 18, 2005 - 19:02:10 Topic ID# 5169
I think it would be reasonable to allow final votes to be changed
back to tenative in the few cases of a WIP being finished during
voting season. Because - the story has changed, you may want to
comment on the last chapters, if you love them or hate them - the
other voting is still going on, it's not as if voting were finished
completely.

I think it is a good idea not to finalize votes on WIPs, hindsight -
I didn't think of it before I hit that button.




--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...>
wrote:
> This is spelled out and the only difference between this year's and
last
> year's is the MEFA2005 site which allowed members to set their
reviews to
> Final BEFORE voting season, thus basically setting them in stone.
I,
> personally only ever set mine as high as tentative and would
recommend that
> everyone do that at least with WIPs until you are ABSOLUTELY sure
the story
> won't be finished before Voting Season ends.
>
> Leaward, you were here last year so you know exactly how WIPs that
got
> completed were handled. And people have asked that question this
year and
> were told the answer.
>
> The only thing different next year will be that I'll remind
everyone that
> it's best to keep their WIP reviews at tentative.
>
> So, just to be clear: if a story becomes complete during Reading
Season or
> Voting Season, we will change it to a completed category IF the
following
> occurs:
>
> Post announcement to THIS group (just like Spring of Joy was) so
that not
> only the admins but all the reader/members can see it.
>
> No, "it'll be completed next week" announcements either.
>
> Now, the part that is up for debate is if we try to allow voters to
rewriter
> their reviews. I raised that question already. Some said yes.
But did
> anyone respond to my point? Is it fair to all the other votes for
other
> stories? Should anyone be able to go back and edit their previous
reviews?
> Should we, next year, not allow any votes to be set to Final until
Voting
> Season so this doesn't come up?
>
> I will say that ASC does allow one to revise a vote. Simple
revote. Your
> first vote is then thrown out. The problem is that our website
doesn't work
> that way. As things stand, Final is a lock. If Admins can't
change it, no
> one can. Except maybe Anthony.
>
> So we'll really need to get him in on this debate.
>
> --Ainaechoiriel
> MEFA Admin and Founder
>
> "This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond
said, "for
> it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
>
> http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards
>
> Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com
>
>
>
> --Ainaechoiriel
> MEFA Admin and Founder
>
> "This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond
said, "for
> it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
>
> http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards
>
> Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com
>
>
>
>
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> > Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 5:55 PM
> > To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories
> >
> > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...>
wrote:
> > > AKK! But it's still incomplete at the moment!
> > >
> > > It won't be completed until next week. I'm still waiting
> > to get the
> > > chapters back from my beta's. And Sulriel's review refers to
it as
> > > incomplete. So now what?
> > >
> > > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel"
<mefaadmin@e...>
> > wrote:
> > > > I've changed Life in the Angle to Romance General
> > > >
> >
> > I've also just noticed that both Daw's and my stories details
> > are still showing as incomplete, and mine is showing as a
> > novella -- which is what it was when it was first entered, it
> > is now a complete full-length novel of 25 chapters. The
> > liaisons can't change the details anymore ...
> >
> > How Works in Progress were handled really should have been
> > decided upon way before voting season and should be discussed
> > during the post mortem so this doesn't happen again. As an
> > author I can't say I'm particularly happy at the moment.
> >
> >
> >
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Msg# 5186

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Leaward August 18, 2005 - 19:10:34 Topic ID# 5169
>
> Leaward, you were here last year so you know exactly how WIPs that got
> completed were handled. And people have asked that question this
year and
> were told the answer.

EXCUSE ME? I was NOT here last year, I had only just discovered
fanfic last year and had not started writing it.I'd never heard of the
MEFA's until this spring -- you can tell that if you check the
membership dates. Please don't make statements like this, Ainae.

I asked the question this year on the Staff board and got no response.
Marta sent copied you on her private response to me and we got no
response. So I made another inquiry here. I tried.

Msg# 5187

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 18, 2005 - 19:17:21 Topic ID# 5169
> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 7:11 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories
>
>
> >
> > Leaward, you were here last year so you know exactly how
> WIPs that got
> > completed were handled. And people have asked that question this
> year and
> > were told the answer.
>
> EXCUSE ME? I was NOT here last year, I had only just
> discovered fanfic last year and had not started writing
> it.I'd never heard of the MEFA's until this spring -- you can
> tell that if you check the membership dates. Please don't
> make statements like this, Ainae.

I'm sorry, I thought you were here last year. I remembered your name
mistakenly.

I apologize.

Marta, were these questions ever put in the FAQ?

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards

Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com

Msg# 5188

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Leaward August 18, 2005 - 20:13:46 Topic ID# 5169
> Marta, were these questions ever put in the FAQ?
>
> --Ainaechoiriel
> MEFA Admin and Founder

Marta has already said she's checked both the rules and the FAQ's and
there's nothing on there about Incomplete stories. I'm re-copying and
pasting my original note and hers so there are no more mistakes and
accusations.

Hi Lea,

I'm cc'ing Ainae in on this.

I've scanned the FAQs and rules at
http://home.earthlink.net/~ainae/mefa/ , and I can't find anything
that addresses this question.

My personal feeling is that things shouldn't be moved past the end of
reading season. This is why: Let's say I voted for "A Spring of Joy"
before it was completed. It's later finished, but I don't think the
last chapters are very good. So I don't think it deserves as many
points, so I go and shorten up my review. I can do this during reading
season, but during voting season I can't if the review has the status
"final".

That's my reasoning, anyway. ;-)

To recap: I don't think an incomplete story should be changed to
complete during voting season. What do you think, Ainae?

Marta

On 17 Aug 2005, at 21:05, Leaward wrote:

> Now that we're to voting season are stories that are in the
incomplete
> section and get completed staying in the incomplete section or what
> happens to them?
>
> I notice that Daw's A Spring of Joy (Drama includes Angst:
Incomplete)
> is now completed ...
>
> Was just wondering ...
>
> Lea
>
>

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
>
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Leaward
> > Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2005 7:11 PM
> > To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> > Subject: [MEFAwards] Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories
> >
> >
> > >
> > > Leaward, you were here last year so you know exactly how
> > WIPs that got
> > > completed were handled. And people have asked that question this
> > year and
> > > were told the answer.
> >
> > EXCUSE ME? I was NOT here last year, I had only just
> > discovered fanfic last year and had not started writing
> > it.I'd never heard of the MEFA's until this spring -- you can
> > tell that if you check the membership dates. Please don't
> > make statements like this, Ainae.
>
> I'm sorry, I thought you were here last year. I remembered your name
> mistakenly.
>
> I apologize.
>
> Marta, were these questions ever put in the FAQ?
>
> --Ainaechoiriel
> MEFA Admin and Founder
>
> "This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond
said, "for
> it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.
>
> http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards
>
> Blog: http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com

Msg# 5189

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Marta Layton August 18, 2005 - 20:26:16 Topic ID# 5169
Hi Ainae,

On 18 Aug 2005, at 17:56, Ainaechoiriel wrote:

> Well first , sorry about missing the staff post. I'm lucky to be
> checking
> just two of my inboxes these days.  My personal one and this one.
>

I understand being busy, believe me! If I didn't have all of my email
sort into one email, I probably wouldn't read it all myself.

But it is sort of important to know when you aren't reading emails.
Since these are your awards I know I'm hesitant to step up. So if
you're not reading staff mail (or MEFAwards mail, or whatever) and we
know it, we could email you privately if we particularly need your
input. Just for future reference. :-)

> As for stories being completed, a post should be made here so
> everyone can
> see it.  Anybody who votes on MEFA2005 is a member here. 
>
> Then we can figure out what to do about editing those reviews if the
> viewer
> wishes to.  Or even if we should.  We may want to put that to a
> vote.  It's
> not just about the story being completed and reviewed when it was
> incomplete, but the score and is it fair to let someone change a final
> review and thus the score.
>

Anyone who votes is a member of this list, but they don't necessarily
read the posts. This list can be really high-volume at times. (Hey, you
yourself said you're lucky to just check the MEFA posts and your
personal email.) Therefore I think you should use the special notice
feture when you say a certain story has been moved to a complete
status. That way people could sign up just to receive SN posts and not
have to receive all the emails.

Just my $.02, of course. I very rarely read WIPs, so I'm not really
affected by this.

Marta
*****
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Msg# 5190

Re: Marta Posted by Marta Layton August 18, 2005 - 21:10:26 Topic ID# 5172
Hi Lin,

On 18 Aug 2005, at 16:13, BLJean@aol.com wrote:

> Thanks for the reassuring reply, Marta. Headaches always make me feel
> especially stupid, and then when the computer fights me and wins,
> well...
>

That reminds me of a moment from a re-run of "Roseanne" I overheard the
other day when my sister was watching it in the other day. DJ is trying
to get the tv to tune and is hitting the set with his thumb, and Dan
comes in, says there are tools for that, and hits it with the phone
book.

See, being frustrated with technology is like a part of our archetype
as humans or something.*Everyone* understands it.

> Wanted to know what this sigline means?
>
> The first time I read it I thought it said
> si hoc legere scis nimium eruditionis hobbits
>

*snork* No, that's not what it means. I got it off a site, but IIRC
it's Latin for "If you can understand this you're over-educated."
Something like that.

I love funny LOTR quotes, though. The banner on my cell phone reads
"Haldir lives", but I haven't found anything that really fits for an
email signature.

Marta
*****
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Msg# 5191

Re: Incomplete Stories changing categories Posted by Marta Layton August 18, 2005 - 22:06:07 Topic ID# 5169
On 18 Aug 2005, at 21:13, Leaward wrote:

> > Marta, were these questions ever put in the FAQ?
> >
> > --Ainaechoiriel
> > MEFA Admin and Founder
>

Ainae-

They aren't in the current FAQs or rules.

Everyone else-

I am rewriting the FAQs. Sort of. I have the nominations handbook
half-written, still need to finish it, and lots other planned. I hope
to do all that this winter. At the moment I'm reading stories just like
everyone else. :-)

I've even talked to Anthony, and we'll be able to powst them at the
MEFA2005 site.

If you have ideas for questions you'd like addressed somewhere, email
me privately and I'll save the email and be sure I address it. I'll
even respond to your email, eventually.

(And Dreamflower, I saw that I have an email from you I never answered.
It's on the List of things I need to do. In addition to getting back to
that beta you offered. I really will get to that, I promise. RL has
just been majorly busy.)

Marta
*****
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Msg# 5192

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by Marta Layton August 18, 2005 - 22:17:01 Topic ID# 5167
On 18 Aug 2005, at 17:51, Ainaechoiriel wrote:

> I think it's good to have a contingency plan.
>
> How about this:  If on the last day (Sept 30th), you can't reach the
> site,
> paste the URL and Page Not Found message into a new post to this
> group and
> put your review(s) (clearly marked as to where they go) underneath
> that.
> Please also note the time at which you're posting.  Yahoo sometimes
> delays
> posts and we need to know that votes made it in under the deadline. 
> Then we
> can probably open the site back up for only those votes to be entered
> and
> counted.  (We'll check, too!)
>
> That sound doable?
>

That sounds like a very good idea. I honestly hope we don't need it,
but I think we'd rather have it in place than have to deal with needing
ti afterwards, if something goes wrong at the last minute.

My only comment is that not everyone has access every day. How do we
handle it if, for example I'm going out of town on the 28th and on the
27th there's a problem with the site? Is it okay if I do the same type
thing on the last day I'll be able to vote?

Marta

PS- This is hypothetical. I don't expect to be away from my computer
the last few days or anything like that.
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Msg# 5193

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 19, 2005 - 2:45:23 Topic ID# 5167
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Marta Layton <melayton@g...> wrote:
>
> On 18 Aug 2005, at 17:51, Ainaechoiriel wrote:
>
>> I think it's good to have a contingency plan.
>>
>> How about this:  If on the last day (Sept 30th), you can't reach
>> the site,paste the URL and Page Not Found message into a new post
>> to this group and put your review(s) (clearly marked as to where
>> they go) underneath that.
>> Please also note the time at which you're posting.  Yahoo
>> sometimes delays posts and we need to know that votes made it in
>> under the deadline. 
>> Then we can probably open the site back up for only those votes
>> to be entered and counted.  (We'll check, too!)
>>
>> That sound doable?
>
> That sounds like a very good idea. I honestly hope we don't need
> it, but I think we'd rather have it in place than have to deal with
> needing ti afterwards, if something goes wrong at the last minute.
>
> My only comment is that not everyone has access every day. How do
> we handle it if, for example I'm going out of town on the 28th and
> on the 27th there's a problem with the site? Is it okay if I do the
> same type thing on the last day I'll be able to vote?

Another note: I do live in a different timezone, so how detailed do
you want the date? Do I have to calculate an US time when I post it?
or my own local time?

I sometimes think that I want to try the mefa site when there is
maintance planned with Ainea's ISP, because 80% of the time when I do
want to login, I can't. Oh well.

Rhapsody

Msg# 5194

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 19, 2005 - 15:49:48 Topic ID# 5167
> Another note: I do live in a different timezone, so how detailed do
> you want the date? Do I have to calculate an US time when I post it?
> or my own local time?

There's a time zone map in the MEFA yahoo group database, I do
believe, although it's not complete--just some of the more obvious
time zones. Just put what time zone you're in, and surely it can be
looked up.

Dwim

Msg# 5195

Editing Final Reviews Posted by Anthony Holder August 19, 2005 - 16:20:47 Topic ID# 5195
Hey all,

I've been reading the posts today about incomplete stories and final
reviews, and one thing stood out.

Ainae said that ASC does allow one to revise a vote.

That said, I could enable editing of final reviews.

It would change the meaning of Final to 'Visible'.

It would solve many of these problems, but would also bring up a couple
of new ones.

Mostly, people would need to refrain from abusing it and editing
reviews just because they feel like it, or their favorite story is
behind in the voting.

The way it is coded, if someone updates a review, and you've already
marked that review, it changes the 'datefinal' so the review will show
up in your list of unread reviews, and you get to read it again, so
that's not even a problem.

Anthony the programmer says: Enabling editing of reviews is by far the
easiest solution. I could have it ready today.

Anything else either requires me to go dig through the database and
edit things by hand or to add a bunch of code to allow the admins to
edit all reviews easily.

BTW, I'm trying to get a way for you to easily read/review/edit all
your own reviews. I just haven't had much time to work on it lately.

Later,
Anthony

Msg# 5196

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 19, 2005 - 16:22:16 Topic ID# 5167
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:
>
> > Another note: I do live in a different timezone, so how detailed do
> > you want the date? Do I have to calculate an US time when I post it?
> > or my own local time?
>
> There's a time zone map in the MEFA yahoo group database, I do
> believe, although it's not complete--just some of the more obvious
> time zones. Just put what time zone you're in, and surely it can be
> looked up.

Germany. But even so: you have to establish a date with this. Mention
it somewhere, otherwise I can say: well according to my time it was...

Rhapsody

Msg# 5197

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 19, 2005 - 17:16:11 Topic ID# 5167
> Germany. But even so: you have to establish a date with this. Mention
> it somewhere, otherwise I can say: well according to my time it was...
>
> Rhapsody

Hi Rhapsody.

Ainae wrote:

>If on the last day (Sept 30th), you can't reach the
> site,
> paste the URL and Page Not Found message into a new post to this
> group and
> put your review(s) (clearly marked as to where they go) underneath
> that.
> Please also note the time at which you're posting. Yahoo sometimes
> delays
> posts and we need to know that votes made it in under the deadline.
> Then we
> can probably open the site back up for only those votes to be >entered
> and
> counted. (We'll check, too!)

When Reading Season rolled over into Voting Season, it happened at
12:01 a.m. August 16, between the 15th and the 16th. So if, by 12:01
a.m. September 30th (which would be something like 7:01 in the morning
in Germany, iirc) you can't reach the site because of an error
message, start posting your votes. Make sure to include the time on
your clock and your time zone, I guess, just in case Yahoo, in its
infinite evilness, decides to eat or delay the posts.

That, at least, is what I take the proposal to be. Does that work?

Dwim

Msg# 5198

Re: Editing Final Reviews Posted by sulriel August 19, 2005 - 18:18:31 Topic ID# 5195
I wouldn't agree with allowing edits of final votes - except in the
case of the few WIPs that complete during voting season. Is that
possible? - even if it has to be done manually? I can't imagine it
would be very many.



--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Anthony Holder <aaholder@s...>
wrote:
> Hey all,
>
> I've been reading the posts today about incomplete stories and
final
> reviews, and one thing stood out.
>
> Ainae said that ASC does allow one to revise a vote.
>
> That said, I could enable editing of final reviews.
>
> It would change the meaning of Final to 'Visible'.
>
> It would solve many of these problems, but would also bring up a
couple
> of new ones.
>
> Mostly, people would need to refrain from abusing it and editing
> reviews just because they feel like it, or their favorite story is
> behind in the voting.
>
> The way it is coded, if someone updates a review, and you've
already
> marked that review, it changes the 'datefinal' so the review will
show
> up in your list of unread reviews, and you get to read it again, so
> that's not even a problem.
>
> Anthony the programmer says: Enabling editing of reviews is by far
the
> easiest solution. I could have it ready today.
>
> Anything else either requires me to go dig through the database and
> edit things by hand or to add a bunch of code to allow the admins
to
> edit all reviews easily.
>
> BTW, I'm trying to get a way for you to easily read/review/edit all
> your own reviews. I just haven't had much time to work on it lately.
>
> Later,
> Anthony

Msg# 5199

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by sulriel August 19, 2005 - 18:22:49 Topic ID# 5167
> That sounds like a very good idea. I honestly hope we don't need
it, but I think we'd rather have it in place than have to deal with
needing > ti afterwards, if something goes wrong at the last minute.
> > My only comment is that not everyone has access every day. How do
we > handle it if, for example I'm going out of town on the 28th and
on the > 27th there's a problem with the site? Is it okay if I do the
same type > thing on the last day I'll be able to vote?
>
> Marta
>
> PS- This is hypothetical. I don't expect to be away from my computer
> the last few days or anything like that.


I don't mean to be the proverbial wet blanket, but I think at some
point we have to take responsibility. It's been so long since I've
been in an office - I'm trying to remember the PC term - "Take
ownership of the issue."

I think that if we are going to adopt this that reviews should only be
allowed to be posted to the yahoo list on the single final day of
voting and (if I understand what you're proposing - that they will be
counted in the tally of points) that a screen dump should be required
to be pasted with the review.

I see an enormous amount of potential for abuse and confusion on this
issue. - hurt and hard feelings if a 'win' hangs in the balance over a
questionable post. I wonder if it is worth it.?

Msg# 5200

Re: voting "contingency plan" necessary? Posted by sulriel August 19, 2005 - 18:35:40 Topic ID# 5167
> I think at some point we have to take responsibility.

sorry - replying to myself to be sure I'm clear.

I mean that I feel that reviewers need to take responsibility for
getting their reviews in. I know there have been some problems with
the site, but also that it has been up for months at a time, and we
have ?? another fives weeks (I think) to enter votes.

Everyone has a life, me included - I haven't done near as many reviews
as some people, but I'm making an effort and will do as many more as I
can in the remaining time. I've bumped it up on my priority list and I
know I can't get to it every day, but I'll do what I can.

Msg# 5201

When is this over? Posted by Novedhelion August 19, 2005 - 19:06:57 Topic ID# 5201
When is this contest over? And is it possible to read the reviews
other people have left for your story? I have two stories nominated,
and I have yet to be able to access either the stories or the reviews.
Am I doing something wrong?

Thanks
Novedhelion

Msg# 5202

Re: When is this over? Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 19, 2005 - 19:13:10 Topic ID# 5201
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Novedhelion" <novedhelion@y...> wrote:
> When is this contest over? And is it possible to read the reviews
> other people have left for your story? I have two stories nominated,
> and I have yet to be able to access either the stories or the reviews.
> Am I doing something wrong?
>
> Thanks
> Novedhelion

Contest is over September 30th. You should be able to access reviews
by now. Are you able to log in? If so, you should see an option: Read
reviews. Click that, then select your author name, and whatever
reviews are attached to your stories should show up.

If you can't log in, Anthony or someone else will have to help you,
since they have access to admin screens.

Msg# 5203

Re: Editing Final Reviews Posted by Naresha August 20, 2005 - 6:45:26 Topic ID# 5195
Okay, now I'm not suggesting this be done this
year, but would it be possible to say limit the
revising of reviews? That way people have the
possibility of fixing a final review for things
like WIPS that become Completeds but it would
help limit the abuse because they could only
change things once? I'm sure it's all absurdly
complicated in terms of coding etc, but I thought
I'd be annoying and suggest it anyway!

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Msg# 5204

Re: When is this over? Posted by elliska67 August 20, 2005 - 7:01:12 Topic ID# 5201
Also, don't forget that you can only read 'Final Reviews' right now.
So if you click on Read Reviews on your story details page and you
don't see any or you see only a few / not the ones people told you
they left or you otherwise expected, it might be because the review
is still a "Tentative Review" or a "Draft Review."

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Novedhelion" <novedhelion@y...>
wrote:
> > When is this contest over? And is it possible to read the
reviews
> > other people have left for your story? I have two stories
nominated,
> > and I have yet to be able to access either the stories or the
reviews.
> > Am I doing something wrong?
> >
> > Thanks
> > Novedhelion
>
> Contest is over September 30th. You should be able to access
reviews
> by now. Are you able to log in? If so, you should see an option:
Read
> reviews. Click that, then select your author name, and whatever
> reviews are attached to your stories should show up.
>
> If you can't log in, Anthony or someone else will have to help you,
> since they have access to admin screens.

Msg# 5205

a question on the type of a story.... Posted by Elena Tiriel August 21, 2005 - 19:28:01 Topic ID# 5205
Hi, I'm starting to review entries, and noticed something unusual
about the categorization of Gwynnyd's drabble, "A Long Awaited Party"
(#1298). It's listed under Drabble: True Drabble, but it has 111
words. I recognize the challenge that it was written for, having
entered a 111-word drabble into that one myself, but I thought we had
decided to list only 100-word drabbles as True Drabble?

I had reclassified mine as a Ficlet, rather than a drabble... If
Gwynnyd's is a true drabble, then I made a mistake in the category for
mine.

*Sigh* Sorry to not notice such things until Voting Season, and to
make trouble for everyone (especially Gwynnyd)..... I'm trying to get
involved again, after a nudge from Sulriel.... ;-)

- Barbara

Msg# 5206

Re: a question on the type of a story.... Posted by Marta Layton August 21, 2005 - 19:55:08 Topic ID# 5205
Hi Barbara,

On 21 Aug 2005, at 20:27, Elena Tiriel wrote:

> Hi, I'm starting to review entries, and noticed something unusual
> about the categorization of Gwynnyd's drabble, "A Long Awaited Party"
> (#1298). It's listed under Drabble: True Drabble, but it has 111
> words.  I recognize the challenge that it was written for, having
> entered a 111-word drabble into that one myself, but I thought we had
> decided to list only 100-word drabbles as True Drabble?
>
> I had reclassified mine as a Ficlet, rather than a drabble... If
> Gwynnyd's is a true drabble, then I made a mistake in the category for
> mine.
>
> *Sigh* Sorry to not notice such things until Voting Season, and to
> make trouble for everyone (especially Gwynnyd)..... I'm trying to get
> involved again, after a nudge from Sulriel.... ;-)
>
> - Barbara
>

Let me give you two answers: the ideal one and the practical one. :-)

Ideal: a drabble is 100 words. Period. Double drabbles (200 words),
triple drabbles (300 words), and other ficlets of various lengths are
just that, ficlets. So if we had caught this back in March or April we
would not have put it in the drabble category. The drabble series
contains only drabbles of exactly 100 words, or series of 100-word
drabbles.

Practical: At this point in the awards I don't think we ant to shuffle
around categories. The one exception to that is incompletes, but for
all other stories they really should stay where they are at the end of
check-ballot season. So as far as Gwynnyd's ficlet goes, I think we
should leave it in a drabble category. To move it at this point in the
game would cause too much confusion. I suppose we could change its
description from Drabble: True Drabble to Drabble: Ficlet. What do you
think? Would that cause more or less confusion?

And just for the record, I should take the blame for this slip-up. When
I nominated drabbles I was working under an incorrect definition of
drabbles and thought that any ficlet that was written to a certain word
limit (100, 111, 200, 300, etc.) was a drabble. Back in the spring the
staff list decided that only pieces of exactly 100 words (or series of
such pieces) would be put in the drabble subcategories. Unfortunately,
I never got around to checking all the things I had given the drabble
length.

And {{{Barbara}}} - this isn't your fault! Thanks for pointing out the
situation. And good on Sulriel for nudging you. Glad to haveyou more
involved. If you ahve any questions feel free to ask...

To recap: Yes, Gwynnyd's piece is technically a ficlet instead of a
drabble. At this point I think it needs to stay where it is because to
change now would just be too confusing. I'm willing to change the story
information from true drabble to ficlet if people want to, and next
year we'll (I'll) try to be more thorough.

Cheers,
Marta
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Msg# 5207

Re: a question on the type of a story.... Posted by Elena Tiriel August 21, 2005 - 20:08:59 Topic ID# 5205
Hi Marta!

Thanks for responding so quickly! I'm perfectly happy to leave this
as is; I just wanted to point out the problem in case it's something
that the PTB thought should be changed.

And, it's not your fault, either! I nominated this one... but you are
right, the drabble definition did change during the nominating
season. My problem is that I expected the authors to update any
information that was inaccurate, and they either didn't notice the
issue, or didn't realize the definitions had changed in mid-stream.
And I stopped paying attention until now.... Ah, well, such is
life....

Thank you, Marta, for so patiently answering all our questions!

- Barbara

On 8/21/05, Marta Layton <melayton@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Barbara,
>
> On 21 Aug 2005, at 20:27, Elena Tiriel wrote:
>
> And {{{Barbara}}} - this isn't your fault! Thanks for pointing out the
> situation. And good on Sulriel for nudging you. Glad to haveyou more
> involved. If you ahve any questions feel free to ask...
>
> To recap: Yes, Gwynnyd's piece is technically a ficlet instead of a
> drabble. At this point I think it needs to stay where it is because to
> change now would just be too confusing. I'm willing to change the story
> information from true drabble to ficlet if people want to, and next
> year we'll (I'll) try to be more thorough.
>
> Cheers,
> Marta

Msg# 5208

Re: a question on the type of a story.... Posted by Marta Layton August 22, 2005 - 9:51:46 Topic ID# 5205
Hi Barbara,

On 21 Aug 2005, at 21:08, Elena Tiriel wrote:

> Hi Marta!
>
> Thanks for responding so quickly! 

You catch me when I actually have email open, you get a quick reply. :-D

> I'm perfectly happy to leave this
> as is; I just wanted to point out the problem in case it's something
> that the PTB thought should be changed.
>

Thanks for pointing it out. Ainae may feel differently, but as far as I
am concerned that piece should stay where it is.

But hey, you had no way of knowing that unless you asked the question...

> And, it's not your fault, either!  I nominated this one...

You did? I could have sworn I had, but I guess I didn't. We both
nominated a lot of Gwynnyd's drabbles. ;-) Ah, well, it was certainly
good enough that I thought I had nominated it!

> but you are
> right,  the drabble definition did change during the nominating
> season. 

I think it's always hard to have the definitions change in the course
of nominating season. The problem is that most people make a nomination
(or approve one, if they're the author) on the basis of how they
understand the rules atthat point in time. Very few authors or
nominators will go back to edit story information mid-stream, because
they've moved on to other things. That's why it's so important to have
as little as possible change during nominating season.

Mind you, I agree this rule did need to be clarified. I'm not saying we
were wrong to do that. Just saying that, hopefully as the awards get
older, we'll get more of these issues ironed out and will have to
change less and less, so will have less of these problems.

> My problem is that I expected the authors to update any
> information that was inaccurate, and they either didn't notice the
> issue, or didn't realize the definitions had changed in mid-stream.

That's one thing we learned this year: many authors are shy about
correcting the nominator's information. That's why I hope we have the
author provide more of the information themselves. That way the author
doesn't have to feel like they're *correcting* someone else.

> And I stopped paying attention until now.... Ah, well, such is
> life....
>

Which is allowed. ;-)

> Thank you, Marta, for so patiently answering all our questions!
>

You're welcome. I will try to answer as many questions as I can -- as a
fellow research geek, you'll understand my feeling that education is
the antidote to many of our ills. ;-)

Marta

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Msg# 5209

*important reminder* from the moderator Posted by sulriel August 22, 2005 - 11:21:52 Topic ID# 5209
Please remember rule #7 when you are writing your reviews.

*7. Quoting of nominate material will only be allowed "in-line" and
must be no more than 2 sentences/lines.

If you aren't sure, please ask.

Thanks, Sulriel

Msg# 5210

Re: *important reminder* from the moderator Posted by sulriel August 22, 2005 - 12:00:00 Topic ID# 5209
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "sulriel" <Sulriel@h...> wrote:
>
> Please remember rule #7 when you are writing your reviews.
>
> *7. Quoting of nominate material will only be allowed "in-line" and
> must be no more than 2 sentences/lines.
>
> If you aren't sure, please ask.
>
> Thanks, Sulriel


To follow up on this...

No one will be spanked (unless you ask nicely) or run out of town, and
I'll try to refrain from using too much harsh language, but the
reviews will need to fixed. If you see one that you think may have
too much quoting, please let us know. If you're uncertain about the
rule, or concerned but unsure about a particular review, please feel
free to email me privately at Sulriel@htcomp.net I'll try to answer
your questions, and I'll check out any reviews that may be
questionable.

Msg# 5211

Changing of Category from Incomplete to Complete Posted by Leaward August 22, 2005 - 18:27:04 Topic ID# 5211
As you requested, Ainae:

Life in the Angle
(Incomplete: Novella) Rating: R 181
Story Author: Leaward
Nominated by: sulriel
Award Category:Genres: Romance: Incomplete

This story is now completed and should be moved from Romance:
Incomplete to Romance: General. It should also be noted that now it is
complete, this is no longer a novella, but a full-length novel length
story.

Msg# 5212

Just to let you all know Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 22, 2005 - 23:56:04 Topic ID# 5212
...why I'm slow in responding.

I was away for the weekend, visiting Dwim actually in Chicago. But on top
of that (which was great!) my brother-in-law died in a car accident Saturday
night (which is not at all good). The funeral is Friday. I may or may not
get caught up before that.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa> http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The
Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards

Blog: <http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com/>
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Msg# 5213

Re: Just to let you all know Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 23, 2005 - 0:55:07 Topic ID# 5212
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...> wrote:
> ...why I'm slow in responding.
>
> I was away for the weekend, visiting Dwim actually in Chicago. But
> on top of that (which was great!) my brother-in-law died in a car
> accident Saturday night (which is not at all good). The funeral is
> Friday. I may or may not get caught up before that.

My condolences Ainea, my thoughts are with you and your family. As for
here: Sulriel is doing an awesome job as one of the admin's, so don't
worry. She's really on top of things.

Rhapsody

Msg# 5214

Re: Just to let you all know Posted by aelfwina@cableone.net August 23, 2005 - 3:21:39 Topic ID# 5212
Oh No! Oh, dear!
Please, don't feel that you need to apologize at a time like this! I wish I could do more than offer good thoughts and virtual (((hugs)))
Barbara
----- Original Message -----
From: Ainaechoiriel
To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Monday, August 22, 2005 11:52 PM
Subject: [MEFAwards] Just to let you all know


...why I'm slow in responding.

I was away for the weekend, visiting Dwim actually in Chicago. But on top
of that (which was great!) my brother-in-law died in a car accident Saturday
night (which is not at all good). The funeral is Friday. I may or may not
get caught up before that.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

"This evil cannot be concealed by the power of the Elves," Elrond said, "for
it is Windows-compatible, and freeware at that." --H.F.

<http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa> http://gabrielle.sytes.net/mefa The
Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards

Blog: <http://www.ainaechoiriel.blogspot.com/>
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Msg# 5215

Re: Just to let you all know Posted by sulriel August 23, 2005 - 8:43:22 Topic ID# 5212
>> I was away for the weekend, visiting Dwim actually in Chicago. But
> > on top of that (which was great!) my brother-in-law died in a car
> > accident Saturday night (which is not at all good). The funeral
is > > Friday. I may or may not get caught up before that.

Ainae, take care of family first. Please convey condolences from here
as well.



--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "rhapsody_the_bard" > As for> here:
Sulriel is doing an awesome job as one of the admin's, so don't
> worry. She's really on top of things.> > Rhapsody

Thank you for the vote of confidence, although most days I feel kinda
like one of those circus bears on a big beach ball.

Msg# 5216

Database "glitches"? Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 23, 2005 - 10:25:36 Topic ID# 5216
Anthony,

Thank you for fixing the author review for Dana that I wrote for Books/Time:
The Lord of The Rings: General. I was able to go back and edit that review
which the computer somehow had decided was "final" when I x-ed out the window,
even though the "tentative" button was selected.

There are still a couple problem records from that awful day when every
review I wrote seemed to go wrong.


This one is still showing as "final" and with the error message
Warning: Missing argument 4 for load() in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\lib\CTAuthorReview.ctcls on line 26

http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=authorReviewDetails&form_au
thorID=264&form_personID=27&form_categoryID=42&0=0


And this one still gives me an error message, when I try to look at what
might be contained in the author review I accidentally saved:
You are not authorized to view detailed information on the stories you
selected.

http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewAuthor&form_authorID=
264&form_categoryID=18&form_required=3

(Actually, that last link is just a guess. I cut-and-pasted it out of the
browser thingie just before it changed to the address for the error message. This
concerns an author review for "Dana", linked to the story "Upon a Field of
Gold")

I am being very careful not to "x" out of any review windows these days. I
always select "save review" if a review is set to "tentative". Hope that's a
help.

Thanks,
Lin


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Msg# 5217

Menu? Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 23, 2005 - 10:56:00 Topic ID# 5217
The menu suddenly looks very odd. Is this a database problem or something I
did?

Thanks,
Lin

User Data
Here you can access your user data
Member/Author List
Browse a list of MEFA members and authors that have already been added to the
MEFA2005 site. Please check here (and search using the search field), before
adding an author.
Browse Stories
Browse the list of stories, by Category, Type, or Author.
S_INDEX_CMD_AUTHORS_BROWSE
S_INDEX_OPTION_AUTHORS_BROWSE
Read Reviews
Read Reviews already written and scored.
Read Author Reviews
Read Author Reviews already written and scored.
S_INDEX_CMD_READ_REVIEWS_BY_REVIEWER
S_INDEX_OPTION_READ_REVIEWS_BY_REVIEWER
S_INDEX_CMD_READ_AUTHOR_REVIEWS_BY_REVIEWER
S_INDEX_OPTION_READ_AUTHOR_REVIEWS_BY_REVIEWER
FAQ
Frequently Asked Questions
Logout


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Msg# 5218

Error message Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 23, 2005 - 11:03:56 Topic ID# 5218
Just thought I'd let you know I got a fatal error. Gee, sounds serious. I was
looking at the stories with fewer reviews and clicked on the review number
for "The Swan Feather" to read the review left there, and came up with Fatal
error: Call to a member function on a non-object in c:\Program Files\Apache
Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\lib\CTReview.ctcls on line 463

http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&filter=show&f
orm_contributiontypes_filter=0&form_maincategories_filter=0&form_awardcategori
es_filter=0&form_author_filter=0&form_review_status_filter=7&show_all=no&form_
story_filter=50


Anthony, I'm sorry if all I seem to be doing is pointing up errors. If I
wrote to you every time the database performed in a satisfactory manner, or proved
elegantly user-friendly, I'd be flooding the email list with hundreds of
messages.

Thanks again for all your efforts.

Lin


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Msg# 5219

Re: Error message Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 23, 2005 - 11:16:20 Topic ID# 5218
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, BLJean@a... wrote:
> Just thought I'd let you know I got a fatal error. Gee, sounds
serious. I was
> looking at the stories with fewer reviews and clicked on the review
number
> for "The Swan Feather" to read the review left there, and came up
with Fatal

Hm. I tried clicking on a story ID number to see what reviews had been
left. I also got a fatal erro message, but I could see the reviews,
and if I'd not known about this message, I might've overlooked the
error message completely. Everything else on the screen was completely
normal.

Perhaps this is like the AOL fatal error in recipient e-mail address,
yet the message goes through anyway?

Dwim

Msg# 5220

Re: Error message Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 23, 2005 - 13:23:19 Topic ID# 5218
Trying to be more precise on that error. When I go to "Read Reviews"
and specify an Author, I often (but not always) get the following error:

Fatal error: Call to a member function on a non-object in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\lib\CTReview.ctcls on line 463

The only exception (and I'm not saying I've tried every single
author--far from it!) that I've come across is my own page of reviews.
However, since I've been keeping track of particular authors' review
pages, whose stories I've really enjoyed, it doesn't seem as if this
error is affecting either the review count or the display of said reviews.

Lin, is this what you're talking about, too?

Dwim

Msg# 5221

Re: Error message Posted by Chris Grzonka August 23, 2005 - 18:04:21 Topic ID# 5218
I got the same error message when I looked at the reviews for that story.
But everything seemed to be working fine, so I just ignored it.

Chris

> -----Original Message-----
> From: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com [mailto:MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com]On
> Behalf Of BLJean@aol.com
> Sent: Tuesday, August 23, 2005 12:03 PM
> To: MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com
> Subject: [MEFAwards] Error message
>
>
> Just thought I'd let you know I got a fatal error. Gee, sounds
> serious. I was
> looking at the stories with fewer reviews and clicked on the
> review number
> for "The Swan Feather" to read the review left there, and came up
> with Fatal
> error: Call to a member function on a non-object in c:\Program
> Files\Apache
> Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\lib\CTReview.ctcls on line 463
>
> http://gabrielle.sytes.net/MEFA2005/index.php?page=reviewsBrowse&f
ilter=show&f
orm_contributiontypes_filter=0&form_maincategories_filter=0&form_awardcatego
ri
es_filter=0&form_author_filter=0&form_review_status_filter=7&show_all=no&for
m_
story_filter=50



Lin

Msg# 5222

Re: Error message Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 23, 2005 - 18:44:47 Topic ID# 5218
It looks like the same error, though I got it by going through a different
door. I'm pretty sure I was looking at the list of stories ("Browse stories")
and clicked on the number of reviews next to one, to look at a review, to get a
little more info about the story (the summary simply said something about a
wedding night, but not *whose* wedding night).

That's when I got the error message. But yes, I did see the review as well as
the error message. I was interrupted at that point, and didn't see what
happened next (i.e. if it was a fatal error that kicked me out of the database or
whatever--I actually had to sign off and didn't explore any further).

Thanks,
Lin

In a message dated 8/23/2005 3:57:35 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
From: "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@yahoo.com>
Subject: Re: Error message

Trying to be more precise on that error. When I go to "Read Reviews"
and specify an Author, I often (but not always) get the following error:

Fatal error: Call to a member function on a non-object in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\lib\CTReview.ctcls on line 463

The only exception (and I'm not saying I've tried every single
author--far from it!) that I've come across is my own page of reviews.
However, since I've been keeping track of particular authors' review
pages, whose stories I've really enjoyed, it doesn't seem as if this
error is affecting either the review count or the display of said reviews.

Lin, is this what you're talking about, too?

Dwim


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Msg# 5223

Error messages today Posted by Anthony Holder August 23, 2005 - 20:28:31 Topic ID# 5223
Hey all,

I sent Ainae two updates over the weekend, and she installed the second
without doing the first. All the error messages are due to this.

When she saw the first (going backward), she asked me how to deal with
it. As soon as she gets my reply, which is already in the mail, she
should go back and apply the first update, then the second one again.

The funny stuff in the main page S_INDEX_.... means that you need to
'Reload Language File' from near the top of the page, but that may not
work until Ainae gets the two updates in the right order.

Lin,

I believe that your two reviews are OK. In the database they look fine.
When Ainae installs the updates, you SHOULD be able to see the reviews.
Let me know in a couple of days if the problem still persists.

Anthony

Msg# 5224

Reviews Final ~ 8/18/2005 thru 8/22/05 Posted by sulriel August 23, 2005 - 20:46:35 Topic ID# 5224
Guys. I'm going to try to catch this up. Ainae needs to be with her
family. If I screw up, hopefully, she can fix it when she gets
caught up.

**hope this works. ;)

Title: Alas for the Wailing of the Gulls · Author: Jay of Lasgalen ·
Races/Places: Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1079
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 00:39:35 Score: 3
This piece did a good job of fleshing out the day that Legolas first
did the cry of the gulls. The battle scenes seemed realistic if a bit
distant for my tastes, and the interaction between Legolas and the
peredhil struck me as particularly good: light-hearted at times but
serious at need. My one complaint was that the language seemed
distanced at times.



Title: Alchemy · Author: Branwyn · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 168
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 00:49:03 Score: 1
This poem has an almsot sing-song quality about it that I found
particularly effective.

Title: All In a Hand · Author: Gaslight · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 389
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 01:14:41 Score: 6
I have often wondered how Eowyn's aging as one of the Rohirrim would
ahve been viewed both by herself and the Gondorians around her. Even
though her brandmother Morwen was from Gondor as well, I think
Tolkien suggests through her death-date that she aged much more
quickly than, say, Faramir. And that age is definitely there:
arthritic hands, silver hair, chill in her bones. But I had never
thought how an immortal like Legolas would have viewed her, and in
that sense Eowyn and Legolas are a perfect foil. The author uses that
comparison to characterise Eowyn well -- but also to get at something
very central to Legolas's character.

Title: Alqualonde · Author: Aramel · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 135
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 01:33:01 Score: 4
This poem has a nice rambling, almost melancholy feel. It's a
description of the geograhical wonders of the backdrop of Alqualonde,
and nothing hints at the kinslaying -- except for one line that
contains the slightest of hints: "scattered with stars that nothing
mars". And the form was complicated enough to make me think that this
might be written by elves who had an eternity to practice it. It
worked.

Title: Long Leagues for Little Legs · Author: Fadagaski · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler · ID: 628
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:55:55 Score: 6
I don't really remember coming across many tales that focus on
interactions between Boromir and Sam, so this was quite a pleasant
surprise. I like the realism of Boromir coming up on Sam from within
the camp, subtly reminding him to be alert for danger from all
directions, and I loved Sam's description of the hobbits as traveling
half as swiftly, but eating twice as much - too true! Most of all I
appreciated Sam's courage and honesty in speaking frankly to Boromir;
and Boromir's gracious apology and recognition of the hobbits as
sturdy, courageous companions, despite their size. A nicely thought-
provoking tale of honesty and respect.

Title: Boys to Men · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:56:19 Score: 2
What a lovely depiction of a father's realization that his son is
ready to be considered a man! We parents don't often have moments of
sharp clarity such as this; thank you for reminding me to seek and
snatch those moments.

Title: Second Watch · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 410
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:56:41 Score: 2
What a lovely moment of honesty and true fellowship between Boromir
and Pippin! A very simply told tale rings true with sparse, but
perfectly realistic dialogue.

Title: The Captain's Last Charge · Author: AmandaK · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:57:07 Score: 5
A movieverse gapfiller; and a painful and lovely imagining of the
scene in which Faramir assembles his troops for the doomed attempt to
reclaim Osgiliath. AmandaK has brought Faramir to vivid life here in
his terrible realization that even his death will not buy his
father's love, and his own determination to prove his love by paying
the requested price.

The scene in which he sends away volunteers who have families,
allowing only old, solitary campaigners to join him in the sortie,
was particularly heartrending and a thoughtful, imaginative detail.

Title: Sunshine and Laughter · Author: Anastasia · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1232
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:57:28 Score: 3
I really like the way Anastasia has shown the affection Gandalf feels
for Pippin, and the respect with which he holds him as a bright
light, and the hope of Middle-Earth. The concept of Pippin being
troubled by nightmares, and Gandalf able to restore his peaceful
sleep, is a very feasible one, and quite well described here.

Title: Offerings · Author: Lyllyn · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID: 27
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:57:52 Score: 3
A tender and painful vision as Eowyn ponders, in hindsight, the
decision she made to abandon her responsibity to her people. Though
bittersweet, the tale is not angsty or maudlin in the slightest, and
is filled with quite lovely imagery - "The sweet fierceness like a
hawk choosing her own timeand prey" - that suits Eowyn perfectly.

Title: Reconciliation · Author: Nrink · Books/Time: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 44
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:58:27 Score: 5
A gorgeous and heartbreaking depiction of Faramir's last duty to his
father.
Exquisite details, and a misty dreamlike quality perfectly convey the
painfully honest conversation Faramir was never quite able to have
with his father.

Horrific and painful images, such as Denethor striking his younger
son, or weeping on Finduilas's bier, are handled with grace and
compassion, contributing to the reader's feeling of being a helpless
observer to the painful disintegration of the relationship between
father and son.


Title: Dolor Meus · Author: Werecat · Books/Time: Post-Ring War · ID:
897
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 04:59:05 Score: 5
Though I'm not completely familiar with the personalities and events
of "The Silmarillion", I couldn't help but be enchanted by Werecat's
haunting tale of the last of the Eldar, lost and wandering through
the Fourth Age. Cast away on a Celtic shore, identified and rescued
by the last of the Istari, Maglor is granted redemption and allowed
to sail and rejoin his kin.

The cleverly wrought parallels between Radagast and Saint Francis of
Assisi, the imaginative setting in an Irish abbey, and the
exquisitely mournful singing, make this tale a rich and unique feast
for all the senses.


Title: Always Dancing · Author: Mariposa · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship · ID: 928
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:00:02 Score: 8
Tiny flashbacks, memories called forth as Merry and Pip supervise the
training of a hobbit defense force, bring Boromir back to vivid life.
Boromir would have been very experienced in training young soldiers,
so what he gave the hobbits was not exceptional in his view; but to
them these were precious gifts of respect, and self-confidence, and
combat skills that would save not only their own lives, but impact
upon the lives of so many others.

The bits of dialog between Boromir, Pip, and Merry are wonderfully
realistic - one priceless line had me gasping with laughter over a
custom shared by soldiers of all races, ages, and sizes. What a gift
of acceptance for Merry and Pip, to be spoken to in such an
outrageously soldierly manner! How we would have loved to see such a
scene!

What could have been a bittersweet tale is told deftly, with great
affection and humor, demonstrating how Boromir's influence was much
more far-reaching than he would ever have imagined.



Title: For Everything There Is A Season · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea
· Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 31
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:00:22 Score: 2

I adore Isabeau's characterization of the Imrahil's family.This is
loving and joyous, and totally timeless in its depiction of playful
family interactions. Thank you for bringing these young people to
glorious life!

Title: Greenery · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 14
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:01:22 Score: 6
A radiantly lovely tale of the new Queen of Gondor, feeling a bit
lonely in her new role, visiting the healer's gardens and finding a
kindred spirit in a young, artless apprentice.

The voice of the apprentice is quite realistic and natural, carrying
that slightly self-pitying tone common to teenager everywheres, I
think!
The elements of herbalism and healing arts are inserted deftly,
fitting perfectly without interrupting the flow of the tale. Some of
the descriptions are exquisite: "That smile… I cannot think of words
for it. It was a little like coming in to the kitchen on a wet day,
cold and tired, and smelling my mother's seedcakes baking." Just
wonderful, wonderful.


Title: Bare Feet and Beer · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gondor · ID: 571
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:01:57 Score: 4
Ever the overachiever, Faramir has a difficult time adjusting to a
less-stern taskmaster. Over mugs of ale and newly-invented savories,
Faramir and his king come to an understanding over exactly how the
Kingdom of Gondor and Arnor will be rebuilt. An affectionately
written, realistic portrait of two men who immediately recognize and
embrace their kinship.



Title: Good Stone · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 721
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:02:33 Score: 3
What a nice scene between these two, and a blessing for the City!
Legolas is glad for the beauty of birds, while practical Gimli senses
a problem - snork! Between the two of them, the engineer and the
artist, they reach a solution that will fill the city with beauty and
joy for years to come.

Title: Telling the Bees · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Shire · ID: 343
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:03:33 Score: 3
An absolutely enchanting tale, and a perfect use of the charming
Celtic custom. Everything here is lovely – the descriptions of the
scents in each place as Sam tries to find the perfect spot to tell
the bees; the garden and party field with each flower listed; Sam
himself in all his homey simplicity and boundless love. Such a joy to
read on this rainy day!

Title: His Last Words · Author: Amarie · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings · ID: 85
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:03:57 Score: 3
An amazingly original, shocking and powerful piece. The vision of
Boromir, consumed by the power of the ring, vividly describing his
plans for conquest and supremacy, is terrifyingly effective – it's
quite easy to imagine Boromir speaking or acting in this way as he
finally falls victim to the fearsome power he can no longer resist.

Title: Strength · Author: Songspinner · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings · ID: 829
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:04:35 Score: 6
I enjoy reading about quiet moments between members of the
Fellowship, and this brief interlude between Merry and Legolas was an
unexpected pleasure. Legolas's explaining to Merry the true
significance of Pip's battle with Sauron, within the palantir, was
very powerful - obviously Merry understood too little, and Legolas
too much! I also enjoyed the tenderness with which they exchanged
confidences about their loneliness for their home and families. The
small detail of Merry helping Legolas examine his arrows, and Merry
his sword, added a wonderful note of realism and immediacy to the
tale.

Title: Isildur's Inheritance · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings · ID: 1299
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:05:02 Score: 3
Quite a chilly vision of Aragorn's temptation on his very first day
with the Fellowship! In this depiction, Aragorn's patient demeanour
belies the anger he keeps buried. "seize what is rightfully his, the
crown of Gondor...."; "drag Arwen..." Very vivid images, skillfully
handled in a short, powerful tale.

Title: 'Peering in the water as the dark eve fell, I caught him,
Gollum.' · Author: Avon · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble
· ID: 19
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:05:26 Score: 2
An insightful study of Aragorn, his fate bound to that of Gollum, as
he ponders the consequences of possesion of the Ring, and receives an
unwelcome insight into his own possible future. Spare, powerful, as
perfect as a drabble can be.

Title: Olorin I was in my Youth In the West that is Forgotten ·
Author: Azalais · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 25
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:05:49 Score: 3
"once I was not bound in weary bone and chafed flesh, but made of
fire and air"
A lovely, fleeting glimpse of Gandalf remembering his youth. Or is
that his true form, veiled to protect mortals from his searing
beauty? Pippin's youthful innocence is the perfect counterpoint of
this unusual vision.

Title: Twilight · Author: Acacea · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and
Faramir · ID: 1022
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 05:07:51 Score: 6
Acacea's outstanding descriptive skills set the scene and mood
perfectly: the cloudness, stifling night, the dark, motionless waters
of the Anduin, the vague sense of disquiet, certainly not unusual for
soldiers during a brief respite. The songs of the frogs provide the
only illusion of normalcy, there by the river.

I applaud Acacea's creativity in the manner in which she has
skillfully woven the folktale of the frog in the well into the fabric
of the tale as an allegory for Gondor's continued battle against the
forces of the Shadow. The whole tale is lovely and bittersweet, just
as any tale of the Brothers `Mir must be.


Title: Taur Ingem · Author: Nancy Brooke · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Drabble · ID: 629
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-17 08:58:19 Score: 3
This is a very harsh and pointed view of what it means to be human,
to be young and prideful. - disturbing but truthful, what we all see
when we look at our elders, sometimes, not the respect that is due,
but instead - we're seeing in a mirror, seeing our own slow decay.

Title: Alterations · Author: Eledhwen · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 260
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 10:00:30 Score: 2
This has a great mix of gap-filling moments. Each of the characters
portrayed seems in-character, and I can thoroughly imagine the events
written about here actually happening.


Title: Ambush in Ithilien · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 204
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 10:02:38 Score: 4
Don't think for a moment, E.T., that your reference to Gondor
staggering but not falling slipped past me. Lovely way of working in
a book quote (and one of my favourite speeches in the books,
incidentally). I loved so much about this, but mostly the physcial
details. Red-clad and red-bannered for the Southrons coupled with the
crimson slaughter -- brilliant comparison. Really, all-around it is a
very good drabble.

Title: A Gift at Year's Turning · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 186
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 10:06:04 Score: 6
I remember when I was a kid how we had to wait for the adults to
finish eating Christmas eve dinner before we got to open one present
on Christmas eve (the rest waited until Christmas day). I swear they
dragged it out, coffee and desert and endless small talk, just to
torment us. And pity the one of us cousins who pestered if they were
done yet -- he or she had to hand out the presents to everyone else
and had to be the last to open his or hers. So I can completely
understand Boromir's torment. There are many things to like about
this story because it's such a charming series of anecdotes, but I
think that's my favourite part of it: how you've captured the
frustrations and excitement of the holiday time, at many places
through the eyes of a child.

Title: An Ode on Aragorn's Dimple · Author: Flick · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 735
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 10:34:51 Score: 2
This piece was laugh-out-loud funny. It was hilarious to see the way
the different fellowship members actually coveted Aragorn's dimples --
proof that even at the gravest of times the greatest of heroes can
still be quite petty. ;-)

Title: Alas, Poor Ufthak! · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:43:35 Score: 3
Now this drabble is just a confession of how sick and twisted your
sense of humour is. I love it! You do a great job with the voice of
the Orcs and their description of their fellow guard. And their
actions are disgustingly and perfectly in character for who they are.
Funny and sick and another depiction of characters not many authors
tackle. Great job!

Title: Triumph Incarnate · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 198
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:44:01 Score: 3
This is almost poetry--I love the paired lines and the images they
conjure and the significance of those images. It is so simply done
but so powerfully. You do a great job of conveying the evil that is
Sauron. And tackling that subject--Sauron--is something very few
authors do. You have a very unique, powerful and well written drabble
here.

Title: A Long Tradition of Ancient Lore · Author: Elena Tiriel ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 206
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:44:24 Score: 3
I am becoming more and more fond of Denethor and part of the reason
is that I am reading great drabbles about him. I really like seeing
Denethor here as auch a wonderful father. And of course I love seeing
how he is making history come alive for his son (since I do
historical reenactments myself). This is a wonderful piece.

Title: There and Back Again · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 202
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:44:48 Score: 4
Oh what a tragic moment this is. You start out reading this thinking
what a nice portrayal of Frodo it is--I like thinking of him as
fascinated by his uncle's stories and all that. And the drabble makes
you even hear Balin's voice \ it makes you feel like you are in his
presence with Frodo--it creates such atmosphere. And then you hit
that last line and are made to remember and realize what happened to
him. The reader can really feel as Frodo did the impact of this
tragic news.

Title: Silver and Gold · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 196
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:45:13 Score: 5
This is so emotional and provocative and poetic. It is one of my all
time favorite drabbles. I love how you show the many sides of
Celeborn--he was so much more than 'Galadriel's consort' as he came
across in the movies--and you do a wonderful job showing that here.
You also do an incredible job showing how their separation tore them
both up. But my favorite part is the parallel between the last lines
in each drabble--the reference to the gold band and how in the end
that finger begins the healing. This one literally brings tears to my
eyes. So well done!

Title: A Long, Unexpected Drabble · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres:
Humor: Metafic · ID: 193
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:45:33 Score: 3
This drabble is a riot. I recently wrote a drabble (my first one) so
now I can even better understand this drabble. I love the 'make it
Tolkienesque and make it canon' because that is what you do so well
but the frustration of the drabble writer is portrayed so well here.
And the end line! Perfect and hilarious! I laughed myself silly
reading it.

Title: Ambush in Ithilien · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 204
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:45:52 Score: 3
I love how you weave the past and the present moment together in this
to show how this area has been disputed for so many centuries. I can
really feel how Faramir is feelings. And I like this: Our longbows
creak under the strain. Such a simple but effective way to show the
action.

Title: Sam's Gift · Author: Marta · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 955
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:52:02 Score: 4
I think you did a very good job in this of capturing Sam's voice and
his reactions to his environment while in Lothlorien. Somehow I never
linked Galadriel's gift to Sam to what Sam saw in the mirror before
reading this and it seems so natural to me now. So I appreciated your
help in seeing that. But of course I loved 'Sam's gift.' That was
really well done. This is a great piece. Very emotional and very
canon.

Title: Mercy · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble · ID:
583
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:54:00 Score: 2
Being a big Elf fan, I like this piece. You show Legolas and the
elves' surprise at finding the dwarves very well. And I do agree that
they would have showed them some mercy even as they arrested them.
Nice drabble.

Title: Anniversary · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Hobbit: Drabble
· ID: 923
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 10:56:22 Score: 3
This one is really incredibly sad--full of images of what really is
not going to happen. They are happily sitting there imaging a bright
future but we know the dwarves will meet a bad end in Moria and
Bilbo's only remaining adventure will be to sail west. I thought this
was poetically done but very sad.

Title: The Great Years · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Drabble · ID: 1372
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 11:00:12 Score: 3
Okay, just wow! I love the eagles--they are some of my favorite
characters so I will be very partial to this drabble normally. But
this is really powerful, I think. I was enjoying thinking about all
the things they had seen in their lives from their mountain homes and
then you get to the last line--they will watch no more indeed. That
was great! I loved it!

Title: Swords Returned · Author: Leaward · Races/Places: Men: Eriador
· ID: 172
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-17 11:01:55 Score: 10
The woes of war are never as sharply seen, as they are in the eyes of
a child, especially one as observant as little `Kil. I believe it is
quite the smart approach to tackle such a tragic concept as death
through the innocent inquisitiveness of a child. It almost feels as
though the innocent questions he asks do not belong in the real world
where a sword might be returned everyday. I like how Leaward was able
to depict the little child that would soon become a man. I've read
the other stories where Tarkil becomes a man and I can clearly see
how the child here became that man. The relationship between Tarkil
and his older brother is real life but very refreshing considering
the seriousness of the topic. The nickname " runt" had me chuckling
every time. The simple style with which this piece was written not
only adds clarity to the thoughts the author is trying to reveal but
also purity to the emotions. I think that when dealing with topics
such as the loss of loved ones, a writer might be tempted to just run
loose, but with Leaward you can clearly see a well organized logical
thought pattern from the beginning to the end. The characters are all
very true to the age to which they belong: Edhelwen is the stern,
proud woman while Tarkil's father is the seasoned warrior coming home
for his wife's birthday. However, the characters retain depth and
leave you wondering whether they too have their own individual
stories. There are a lot of faces to this short piece other than the
explanation of the ritual of returning swords. I believe the
exploration of such notions as the making of men, the relationship
between fathers and sons, women during war…Are all very important
symbolically presented ideas. To sum up, it's a great job to write on
such an intensely human topic and come out with a piece that touches
each and everyone of us.

Title: The Last Hour · Author: Citrine · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 465
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:03:06 Score: 10
It's the little details, thrown casually into the writing, that bring
this story alive: Merry sitting on his "too-large bed", the buttons
of his "not-quite-the-right-size shirt" too hard to manage with his
right hand "still feeling chilled and half asleep" and then the
mention of his arm aching with the effort. I could go on, for the
first paragraph alone sets the scene so well. Details! I love
details! Especially when they are not set forth in a boring, pedantic
manner, but rather paint in the background to the scene so that the
reader is *there*.

The series of pictures of Pippin, "as solicitous as an old hobbit-
auntie" and then striking a princely pose in his uniform, then taking
off his helmet and climbing up on the bed to play draughts, all
hobbity again, (ah, the "rustle and click" of the pieces in the
silence of the room, more of those scene-painting details!)

The progression of Merry's thoughts, hinted at but not explicitly
stated until he speaks aloud. Lovely, subtle writing that pulls at
the heartstrings.

And the author has used a device I enjoy using, i.e. Pippin's
resemblance to Frodo. Though there is nothing I know of in canon to
support this, it is diverting to speculate on family resemblances.
And what a description of Pippin, his adult, unblinking assessment of
the situation at hand. Pippin makes *me* proud in this moment! And
shortly thereafter, his "Botheration!" and the thoroughly hobbity
speech that follows. And the moment of parting, deep feelings and
light words. Ah, but this is a grand little story for hobbit fans,
well-drawn, skillfully rendered.

Title: The Heirs of Isildur · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 24
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-17 11:03:19 Score: 3
This is humorous and sad at the same time. I can definitely see poor
Elrond with all his brother's heirs in his long life getting a little
confused. And the child's anger was well done. But at the same time,
how sad for him to see so many incarnations of the brother lost
forever--and maybe how hopeful too. Lot's of emotion here, I guess.

Title: While the Ring Went South... · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 33
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:06:41 Score: 10
It is with great anticipation that I opened this story for a re-
read. "It's all here" as the summary promises! (I tried to vote on
this story in last year's MEFA. I searched through the entire list of
stories, looking for this one. I would have nominated it this year if
someone hadn't beaten me to it!)

To start, I appreciated the thoughfulness in establishing the place
on the timeline for those of us who are interested in such things. (I
am.) And only halfway through the first paragraph the author's
trademark dry wit popped up, and continued to poke its head out just
when needed to relieve the tension. O yes, I enjoyed this re-read.

I love the way these hobbits "act their ages" and are not portrayed
as childish or even infantile, a temptation many writers seem unable
to resist. There are a few mis-steps early on, while the author is
finding her way, yet the dialogue is well done and care is taken to
keep the reader "in the picture". I never lose sight of where a
character is as the scenes are set up and written through.

And when the action starts to roll, midway, it grips the reader and
carries one through. No wonder this story sticks in my mind, even a
couple of years after I read it!

Note to Thundera: I know you are dissatisfied with the early chapters
and want to re-write, but this is still an amazing story, especially
for an early effort.

Title: Second Watch · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 410
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:07:24 Score: 2
Nicely done! There seem to be many parallels that could be drawn
between Pippin and Boromir, but this is one that I didn't anticipate.
And elegantly done, as well, with a wonderful economy of words.
Drabbles amaze me!

Title: Master of the House · Author: Vistula the Dunadan ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 639
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:07:52 Score: 3
O but this is wonderful! "He couldn't bid me different, were he King
of all elves" and Elrond's understanding smile, even though it is
unseen by Sam. This is a nice little picture of Sam's determination,
and makes it all the more believable that he will follow Frodo to the
end of Middle-earth.

Title: Devil of Kindness · Author: Nancy Brooke · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 685
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:08:27 Score: 3
It is amazing what can be accomplished in the space of 100 words. You
have said so much, painted such a picture, and covered so much of
Gandalf's wanderings in a short span of time. I admit I haven't read
your work, though your name is familiar. I shall have to seek out
more.

Title: Links · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
General Drabble · ID: 23
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:09:28 Score: 2
It is good to see this resolution of the tension between Frodo and
Boromir, with Frodo's understanding and forgiveness. Nice symbolism.

Title: Dandelion Clocks · Author: Alawa · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor Drabble · ID: 17
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:09:58 Score: 1
Haunting. Nice use of imagery. Astonishing, how much can be said in
100 words.

Title: New Home · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Ithilien Drabble · ID: 20
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:10:28 Score: 2
Heart-tugging. I have a soft spot for Beregond and Bergil, and it is
lovely to see them settling in their new home in Ithilien, with a
chance to start anew.

Title: There And Back Again · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: The
Hobbit: Drabble · ID: 51
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-17 11:11:23 Score: 1
Quite funny, and quite true to Bilbo's character! Nicely done, and
all in 100 words.

Title: The Dress Code · Author: Auntiemeesh · Genres: Humor: Hobbits
· ID: 818
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:21:40 Score: 3
This is a very sweet story, of Sam dealing with the unaccustomed task
of trying to deal with "dress-up" clothes while in Minas Tirith. His
friend's teasing is gentle, yet helpful, and in the end he makes a
realization that will be one more step up for him, though he doesn't
know it yet.

Title: 'Peering in the water as the dark eve fell, I caught him,
Gollum.' · Author: Avon · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble
· ID: 19
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:23:30 Score: 1
A chilling and atmospheric stream-of-consciousness drabble. Powerful.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Azalais · Genres: Crossovers ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:31:11 Score: 2
Absolutely riveting, just the kind of thing you would wish *could*
indeed happen for the Professor; it made me grin and sniffle at the
same time.

Title: Caught Between a Hammer and an Anvil · Author: BookHobbit ·
Genres: Drama (includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 814
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:36:04 Score: 2
A very vivid bit of movie-verse: the battle in Moria, from Pippin's
POV--what was he thinking, as for the first time, he so desperately
battled for his life and the lives of his friends?

Title: Sulnur · Author: sulriel · Races/Places: Rohan: Original
Characters · ID: 145
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-17 11:36:29 Score: 8
It is an Arab tradition in old poetry to depict horses with a human
character. As a matter of fact a knight always, and I mean always
flaunts his mare and his courage in battle in old poems. So you can
understand how delighted I was to read Sulnur and discover that it
had all the elements of the old Arabic poems. It has generally been
thought that the horse is one of the most loyal animals out there. I
have heard stories about horses dying in mourning after their
masters. But to see the relationship from the side of the horse is
particularly captivating. I found myself cheering sulnur on when she
tried to help her master up and then getting all knotted up when she
started fighting for his. All the time I was chanting: don't kill the
horse! The scenes of the battle almost feel dream like, flashes into
the consciousness of some distant fighter---This in turn gave the
writing a sort of romantic feel. The element of surprise is not
shocking but pleasant leaving a stream like flow to the events. Very
lovely and original piece!

Title: Alchemy · Author: Branwyn · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Poetry · ID: 168
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 11:38:36 Score: 1
A very intense bit of verse about Feanor crafting the palantir. I
especially love the play on words at the end.

Title: Celeborn Unplugged · Author: Michael Martinez · Genres: Non-
Fiction: Elves · ID: 1207
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-17 11:56:39 Score: 10
Michael Martinez. I am supposed to be an author, but words fail me
when I try to express appropriate gratitude for the research
materials you have made available to JRRTolkien fan-fiction authors.
I know that it is all interesting and fun to debate for the kind of
people who like to read and talk (argue <G>) about such things, but I
find your articles especially useful in a working frame and refer
back to them as frequently as I do the Lord of the Rings, the
Silmarillion and even the Histories of Middle-earth themselves.

Celeborn is one of my favorites and you are one of the few authors
that I consider really does him justice. He handles so many issues
over so many years, - Ages - with strength and quiet dignity, which
are the real signs of a true leader. In my mind, he is the
ultimate "Strong, Silent Type" and that comes through especially well
in this article about him.

Your fairly done explanations of each of his recorded histories
allows authors to follow the threads that they like, or need for
their particular story. Your suppositions and extensions of logic, I
find to be unfailing, if sometimes entertaining. I see Celeborn as a
difficult fellow who is too often over-looked and under-estimated.
You have done a wonderful job with him in this article. It is one I
have bookmarked and often refer other readers and writers to your
link.


Title: Artist's Appreciation · Author: sulriel · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 146
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-17 12:07:19 Score: 9
Before reading this story, I had never thought of Celeborn as a "
saliva –inducing hunk" . What is more, the idea is tactfully
produced, it just sort of seeps into your system. I could almost
imagine myself sitting on a bench an watching the pair interact. It
is a very captivating first chapter…Where is the rest? I seriously
believe the chemistry between the young artist and the elven lord is
worth more chapters. Speaking of elven lords, I was happy to see a
representation of an elf that portrays him as neither maniacally
lustful nor frustratingly rigid. As for Lhende, she is one of my
favourite OFCs since she's a sort of an odd mixture, innocent yet
attractive, artistic yet clumsy in a sort of cute way… The dialogue
between the pair is charming and witty. However, what I loved most
was the description of Celeborn's dance. At the time I read it I was
listening to Lorenna McKennit - Marrakesh Night , and I just went
into a complete daze. I could almost see every muscle rippling, every
movement magnetically melting into the night, every swish of his hair
turning Lhende's throat( and mine) completely dry. A truly
magnificent start of what promises to be a legendary romance!

Title: Waiting for a King Like You · Author: Michael Martinez ·
Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 1139
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-17 12:20:57 Score: 10
Another critical and well thought-out article. No one who write about
the Northern Dunedain, the Rangers or the dark years of the Men of
the West should do so without studying this article. I especially
enjoyed your parallels and contrasts with our real-life histories,
and the fast-forward discussion and comparison on the reign of
Eldarion. I have not yet written any "Ranger" stories, although I
have brainstormed and beta'd some, and am currently working on a
Fourth Age Eldarion story. This article is another one that I have
saved the link in my favorites so I can easily find it when I need to
check back for details on the alliances and conflicts in their
histories and their relationships. The speculation on the Kings and
their peers, and on the possible reasons for the contrasts of the
differences of the cities. - everything from the libraries to the
entire frraming of the culture. I especially like the (dark)
speculation that the help of the Elves may have ultimately been the
downfall of the Northern Numenorians. - so like the helping (hiding)
of the Valar by bringing the Vanyar, Noldor, - and what others they
could - West in the days before the sun.

I appreciate how you can take such a complicated issue and walk us
through it step by slow step so that the issues become clear and
workable. Thank you again Michael, for this article and for the
others. You are greatly apprecaited in this fandom.

Title: Letters · Author: Breon Briarwood · Genres: Romance: Vignette
· ID: 1245
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:45:43 Score: 1
A love letter with a twist. Very chilling; very well done!

Title: Not Remembered · Author: Cadiliniel · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 992
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:48:50 Score: 1
A lovely drabble, a rather obscure last line--very evocative.

Title: The Sea Sings a Lullaby · Author: Camilla Sandman · Genres:
Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 87
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:52:43 Score: 1
A very sad and chilling AU vignette, a twist on Legolas and Gimli
going across the sea.

Title: Elves and Potatoes · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Hobbits · ID: 185
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:55:26 Score: 3
I really liked this account of how Bilbo came to teach Sam to read.
It's very plausible. I love the description of Bag End's gardens, and
the details of how the Gaffer and Sam care for it, and the account of
how Frodo came to discover that Sam could not read. All of it was
told in a gentle lyrical fashion. Very nice.

Title: Thain · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Incomplete · ID: 913
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-17 12:55:56 Score: 2
Interesting though Pippin's trials are, I really love the Bucca parts
of this story. And look forward to finding out more about him.

Title: Nothing in Haste · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 407
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-17 12:57:29 Score: 2
This is a wonderful insight into how Elrond discovered Arwen's choice
to marry Aragorn and how he coped. I have often thought of writing
the same scene but now feel I don't 'need' to since Gwynneth has
written such a lovely scene.

Title: Shadow · Author: Celebsul · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
First Age · ID: 775
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 12:59:12 Score: 1
An interesting and original perspective. Powerful prose. Bittersweet.

Title: Gimli Takes a Whack · Author: Celtic Bard · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 205
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 13:02:41 Score: 1
A very funny parody, well-done, and perfectly in canon.

Title: Here sits, in secret, blest Theology · Author: annmarwalk ·
Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 388
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-17 13:10:22 Score: 3
This was a wonderful birthday present at HASA. Not only is its title
the most haunting line ever (*green with envy*), but the story is
enchanting as well. A tale that could very well be true and Tolkien
himself would enjoy. Thanks for writing this, Ann.

Title: The Rooster Man of Gondor · Author: Chelsea Nolan ·
Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Gondor · ID: 321
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 15:27:00 Score: 2
A very strange and original story. Was that really a cock's crow
heard before the Rohirrim arrived? Very thought provoking.

Title: Watcher on the Height · Author: Chris · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 1015
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 15:30:31 Score: 2
Another story of endurance beyond hope. What must it have been like
to watch the beacons year after year, seemingly to no purpose?

Title: Anessë · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places: Elves: First Age
· ID: 1021
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 17:53:36 Score: 1
A neat gapfiller. I think I liked most all the physical descriptions
of the hall near the beginning.

Title: And There Make a Garden · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1388
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-17 19:09:04 Score: 3
What I really liked about this one is how you blended the official
and the personal. Faramir is all business looking at maps and
planning beautification projects -- and then Legolas reveals that he
has something else entirely different in mind. I imagine Faramir is
smiling too, just at the mention of his promise to Eowyn.

Title: One Elf: Glorfindel in TTT · Author: Cirdan · Genres: Movie-
verse · ID: 1269
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 19:21:31 Score: 2
A very amusing movie-verse AU, in which Glorfindel gets to make up
for being slighted in the flight to the ford, by showing up, and
showing everyone up, at Helm's Deep.

Title: Cold Memories · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 82
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:24:08 Score: 6
I always enjoy stories about Boromir and Faramir as children, and
happy interactions with their father – I refuse to believe he could
always be grim! This is a light-hearted tale, enfolding some tender
memories of Finduilas, but using the unusual element of a rare
snowfall in Minas Tirith to allow Boromir and Denethor to share a
special memory with Faramir. The descriptive elements of the snow-
covered courtyard and the White Tree, and footsteps, are quite well
done, and the dialogue is realistic and natural. A happy scene which
I'm sure provided refreshing memories in the summer heat of the White
City.

Title: Fairer Than Most · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 69
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:24:57 Score: 4
A very sweetly written story with excellent characterizations of our
four hobbits. The teasing and joking is very much in character, and
the descriptions (of both physical, and personal traits) are quite
vividly done. The vision of a somewhat bemused Aragorn, having his
first experience of hobbits en masse certainly made me smile! Nicely
highlights the bonds of friendship and love between them all.

Title: 110 · Author: Aeneid · Races/Places: Men · ID: 59
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:25:41 Score: 5
A vivid feast of the eyes, the ears, and the imagination. Aeneid's
words sing mischievously, or tenderly, or with rolling humor or
drollery or exquisite, magical poetry. The concept of Boromir
counting the steps of his journey in terms of "sleeps" – like a child
might – also conveys the doggedness of his purpose. The various
aspects of Boromir as he journeys – a stranger in a strange land; a
lonely traveler at the mercy of the elements; sick or wounded or
despairingly ready to give up his spirit to the peace of death – are
all lovingly drawn, and perfect extrapolations of his character.

Title: Fall of Osgiliath · Author: Valedhelgwath · Races/Places: Men
· ID: 633
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:26:01 Score: 2
An incredibly vivid recounting of the fall of Osgilath. Amazing, step-
by-step descriptions of the advance of the orc army, and the valiant
defense and retreat by the Gondorian forces. Incredible detail! Well
done!

Title: Heirs of Isildur · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Men:
Eriador · ID: 243
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:26:38 Score: 5
I had never thought to consider the pressures placed on Aragorn, as
chieftain of the Dunedain and Heir of Isildur, to marry (or not) and
continue the line. Dwimodene's tale presents this conundrum in a
humorous manner, focusing subltley on the affection between Aragorn
and his kinsman Halbarad as they discuss this thorny issue. Aragorn
is perhaps not quite as forthright as his cousin, but the slight
evasiveness of his comments are quite in character for a man who is
used to keeping his own counsel. A very well done interpretation of
somewhat neglected aspect of Aragorn's life.

Title: The Creation of Horses · Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde ·
Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 275
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:27:11 Score: 5
Every time I began to fear that we've mined Tolkien's world too
thoroughly, a piece like this shows up to remind me that there is no
limit to what a uniquely gifted, creative mind can do to refresh our
hungry spirits.

What marvelous imagery! I can so imagine this being sung at Meduseld,
and can smell the woodsmoke, and the sweat, and the yeasty scent of
ale. I can't help but feel Professor Tolkien would be proud of work
and its author, and pleased that he inspired such vivid, musical
writing..




Title: The Clasp Undone · Author: DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan ·
ID: 691
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:27:50 Score: 5
A powerful and vivid depiction of Eomer's imprisonment, through to
the machinations of Grima, until Theoden is freed by Gandalf from
Saruman's spell. The Anglo-Saxon style poetry that opens each chapter
provides the perfect mood and setting, emphasizing Eomer's despair.
The Rohirrim, unlike the cool and collected Gondorians, wear their
emotions quite openly, so it is heartbreaking to share in Eomer's
mourning for his cousin, and his fears for Eowyn and Rohan's future.
A well-told tale.

Title: Marked · Author: simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan · ID: 904
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:28:42 Score: 7
What an achingly lovely piece this is! Although Eowyn's age here is
not specified, I catch the vision of a young girl on the very edge of
adulthood, just beginning to understand about love and heartache. She
may have thought that she understood all, until the vision of Boromir
and Theodred causes her to cast aside all her preconceived notions.

The words used to describe Eowyn here: unmarked, unnoticed,
untouched, unseen - vividly illustrate her transition from girlhood
to adulthood. it's as though Eowyn has stepped through a portal
towards understanding of the world of passion and despair.

The many allusions to light and shadow also, to me, symbolize Eowyn's
loneliness: not only as a young girl wondering about her future, and
longing for love, but also wondering wistfully if she will ever
experience herself the dazzling, bittersweet passion shared by the
two lovers, now imprinted indelibly in her soul.


Title: A Question of Honour · Author: Honesty · Races/Places: Rohan:
Romance · ID: 413
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:29:15 Score: 3
Gah! The testosterone!
This is a pairing I would never have imagined in a million years, but
Honesty did, thank goodness, and wrote it with sly wit and humor.
Those descriptions – wow! And the epilogue was just too, too, funny.
Very original, very outrageous, very well done! Thanks for providing
yet another scenario for my Eomer fantasies.


Title: The End of Hope · Author: ErinRua · Races/Places: Rohan:
Vignette · ID: 289
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:29:53 Score: 6
I'm really enjoying the evolution I've been seeing in fanfiction over
the past year, from recreation (or rehashing) of familiar movie
scenes to very new, creative and original interpretation of the many
wide gaps Professor Tolkien left in scenes and characters.

The narrator here, an unnamed woman of Rohan, is well drawn and
realistic as she awaits her doom. She longs for her old life: her
hearth, her husband, her weaving, all lovingly described by ErinRua.
Her opinion of Eowyn, neither heroine nor deserter, but one who chose
to meet death rather than waiting, is well expressed and reasonable.
I would love to read more of this type of story, especially by this
skilled and sympathetic author.


Title: Bystander · Author: simbelmyne · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette
· ID: 903
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-17 19:30:33 Score: 7
How very imaginative of simblemyne to take two very minor canon
characters – Theodred and Elfhelm – combine them with a perfect dose
of Boromir, and toss lightly to produce such an unexpectedly
delicious, bittersweet tale.

The triple repetition of the words " It was not unusual to see them
together"– when we have in fact never seen Boromir and Theodred
together – adds a depth of untold history to the tale. I had never
considered a Boromir/Theodred pairing, but simblemyne's lovely
writing bring these two to glorious life, for a few brief moments of
happiness together before they each ride to their doom.

Elfhelm, too, is brought to life here in his devotion to his
commander, his dedication to Rohan, and his heartrending realization
that he is better off not to be leaving a loved one behind as he
rides to war.



Title: Tangled Web · Author: daw the minstrel · Books/Time: The
Hobbit · ID: 151
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 19:48:26 Score: 10
I can't tell you have much I enjoyed this whole tale. You did a
superior job of telling it from the Elves' perspective. Your battles
were so well done and realistically portrayed. I think war is a
horrible thing and much worse than I can even imagine. I knew we had
to expect deaths...that's the way of war...but I can't help but feel
bad for the OC's we lost. I think Galelas was the most sad for me.
He'd come so far personally and professionally under Eilian's kind
guidance. I even felt bad for Tinar. He was shocked back to reality
by his brother's death. I suppose even arrogant fools still love
their family and friends. I don't know how this will impact him in
the future, but at this moment, he's a grieving brother, and I can't
help but feel for him at such a time. The whole Woodland Realm will
be in mourning for those lost...even the unnamed ones that we simply
know died.

The main characters were wonderful. Thranduil is indeed the greatest
Elven-king. He's shrewd, but wise, nevering losing sight of what was
really important. He raised his sons well. Eilian and Legolas stepped
up when needed and proved themselves competent and mature. Adar saw
his sons in a new light. Sometimes parents can be the last to see
their child as no longer a child. All our energy goes into seeing
them to this point and are probably the most surprised when we find
they've reached it. If we do our jobs well as parents, we put
ourselves out of a job. Good for Thranduil for acknowledging this.

You did a great job of showing strong, competent Ithilden's weakness:
His family. I know Sinnarn was nearly a goner, but I'm glad you
didn't let him get killed. I would hate to think of that pain it
would have caused Ithilden and Alfirin. (That's the parent in me
suffering with them.)

There are so many little things about the story that I found just
wonderful that it would take me all day and most likely bore you to
tears if I were to list them all. Let me just say that you gave such
warmth and terror, political intrigue and mystery to Tolkien's tale.
Shoot! I think he would even be impressed with the thorough job you
did telling the story from the Elves' point of view. I don't think
I'll ever read the Hobbit again and not picture your story going on
behind the scenes.

Thanks, daw. You've given me much pleasure in reading this. This is
absolutely one of my favorite stories.

Title: The Tide of Times · Author: daw the minstrel · Books/Time: The
Hobbit · ID: 681
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 19:57:53 Score: 10
Thranduil going to Imladris was quite a surprise. You gave us a great
view of what his thoughts were. His ambivalence about Imladris is
certainly understandable, but he always maintains his proper kingly
composure. He guarded his words to Arwen in kindness for her feelings
and shuddered at the thought of Galadriel as a mother-in-law. While
these two scenes made me smile, for different reasons, it told us a
geat deal about the elf king.

The last chapter was a very nice wrap-up, daw. The symbolism of the
ceremony was well done, but it was Thranduil's remembrances that got
to me. Oh my. I was very glad to see Eilian and had wondered if it
was acceptable for someone of another gender to take on assigned
roles. I always thought that Eilian was the best choice to take his
naneth's role. The funny thing about Eilian feeling weighed down by
shadow..though I didn't know that was what it was at the time...was
how strongly I felt it. You did a terrific job of giving him that
heavy slow feeling of despair.

Sinnarn was a sweet note...sort of that circle of life thing. And
what Eilian said about him being grown in five minutes...well, it's
so true.
Legolas was certainly thrilled at the news of his posting...Eilian
was not. "At least we of the House of Oropher are all consistent, he
thought." I chuckled at this...very good. I hoped there for a minute
that Ithilden was going to post Eilian to the eastern border, too,
but I suppose that would defeat the purpose of giving Legolas
sometime without his family hovering.

This ended very nicely. I really enjoyed it...just as I do all your
stories. Thanks for sharing.




Title: A Question of Duty · Author: daw the minstrel · Books/Time:
The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 152
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 20:09:24 Score: 10
This is one of the first stories written by you that I read. It's as
delightful this time as it was the first. I love how you've taken
canon and woven it so seamlessly into a plausible gap-filler for what
went on before the Fellowship actually left Imladris on the Quest..

In our first introduction to Beliond, we get a wonderful glimpse of
how his and Legolas's relationship developed through the many years
that Beliond was Legolas's keeper. He's still a bit wary of letting
Thranduil's youngest son take off on his own, but in the end, he sees
the wisdom of Legolas going on the Quest. This is not just a young
elf's desire for adventure, but an undertaking that will affect all
the people of Middle-earth. That must have been a hard decision for
him to come to, but it was time. Legolas was ready to go. I
particularly loved the part where he tells Legolas that he can
withstand Thranduil's fury. Now that we all know Beliond better, we
know this to be a fact. Beliond is perfect for Legolas as a keeper
and perfect for a worried father to know his son is well looked after.

Your portrayal of Aragorn, Elrond, Mithrandir, the sons of Elrond,
the dwarves...well, the whole cast...was wonderful. I enjoyed seeing
the budding of the friendship of Aragorn and Legolas that will only
strengthen and last until Aragorn's death. And beyond, I suppose.

Beautifully done, daw. And such a pleasure to read again.

Title: Spring Awakenings · Author: daw the minstrel · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 153
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 20:16:13 Score: 10
Oh, Daw! What a wonderful sotry.

I was so proud of Thranduil. He recognized the source of his fear for
his son, narrowed down exactly what it was that frightened him and
admitted it! It seems to me that he never meant to hurt Eilian, he
simply wanted to protect himself from the kind of pain he felt when
he lost Lorellin, and if possible, push Eilian into being different
from his naneth so he could protect them both from this horrible
outcome. I think that by explaining how he had come to set up his
reaction and relationship to Eilian, it helped Eilian finally
understand where his adar was coming from. I can't help but think
that while it might not change who Eilian is, it will make Eilian
more aware of how his behavior affects those who love him. Gee, it
only took them around 350 years to figure this out. What can I say?
They're males! :>) Still, it was a wonderfully written scene. It was
a difficult but poignant moment for Thranduil, and such a sweet
moment when father and son came to an understanding. Utmost in that
understanding was that above all else, they love each other. And for
Thranduil, the realization that Lorellin is still with him in the
form of their son was a real tugger on the heartstrings. Eilian is
the living legacy of two of the people Thranduil loved most: His
wife, Lorellin and his father, Oropher. Oh my goodness. Just
wonderful, daw.

Solith is a slow learner, but he seems to be catching on. Thranduil
was the king and adar through and through at that moment when he
asked if the old goat would dare to insult 'our son'. And the best
blessing the old coot could come up with was one involving the
political advantages of the union of one of the settlers and the
king's son...and a sort of backhanded acknowledgement to his
daughter's happiness! Bless his heart. He has a long way to go.

There were so many nice little details that I loved. The extra food
the people brought out of love for Eilian. The ring that Thranduil
had given Lorellin at Eilian's conception. Legolas searching the
crowd. Thranduil's sense of loss while watching Eilian and Celuwen
dancing. Maltanaur riding all night to be present at the celebration.
And of course, Beliond.

The ending was also well done. How strange it must have felt for
Eilian for Legolas to be riding back south while he stayed home. Of
course, Beliond will not let the whelp out of his sight. Thranduil
seemed to be in a different place with his sons, and it was doubly
hard for him to see Legolas leave again. As difficult as it was, he
let his son go. A very touching moment.

Such a good story, daw. This was a real triumph of personal
examination for your characters. Way to go!



Title: A Spring of Joy · Author: daw the minstrel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1320
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 20:21:17 Score: 10
First off, I think this is one of your best. As each chapter
progressed, the tension just wound tighter and tighter. By the time
we got to the last chapter, the coil was wound so tightly that the
tension was almost unbearable.

Of course, Tolkien's world is fiction, but I think the plot of the
story is so appealing to readers because it's so relevant to the
world in his time and in ours now. He created characters who rose
above the terror and trials of battling evil by choosing to do the
right thing. We have characters who are loyal, brave, self-
sacrificing and determined despite overwhelming odds that they will
most likely perish.

Your story captures the essence of these qualities in your
characters. Mirkwood was unique in that it was the only known Elven
realm of that time without the protection of a ring of power, and
it's people were constantly under assault. In one of your earlier
stories you said that Eilian thought that his father kept the shadow
from their door simply by his strength of will. In this story, we see
that not only was Thranduil's strength of will the barrier that kept
his people safe, but the woodland people themselves were possessed of
the same kind of determination as their king. We can easily see why
Thranduil was considered the greatest of all Elven kings, but we also
see that he was supported by people who helped him reach that height.
When Legolas realized how much strength Ithilden drew from Alfirin,
Ithilden and Alfirin seemed to parallel the relationship of Thranduil
and his people. Both relationships are closely bound in mutual
support. The loss of peace and the loss of life go hand in hand.

My favorite line: There before Legolas stood the king of the Woodland
Realm, one who would fight the Shadow for every inch of soil, every
rock, and every tree, and if by some mischance, an enemy overcame
him, he would grasp it by the neck to drag it down with him and spit
in its face as he did so. This is a beautiful description of the
unmovable determination of the king in the face of such a personal
loss. Sinnarn's loss was felt by everyone, and each in their own way
held up someone else. Everyone seemed to know that Sinnarn's and
Tynd's deaths were symbolic for all the losses that the woodland
people had known and would know again in the future. They were
markers for the death of peace. Dol Guldur was occupied again, but
the people stood firm with resolve. Emmelin and Elowen's leaving
didn't seem to be an escape from evil, but a symbolic step toward
healing the hurts done to the realm.

However, I can't tell you enough how wonderful I thought this story
was. You outdid yourself.



Title: Glorious Summer · Author: daw the minstrel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 154
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-17 20:38:01 Score: 10
What a wonderful job you did with stirring up sit-on-the-edge-of-your-
seat suspense! .

This Zalan guy proved to be quite a challenge. He was reckless and
unafraid to cause harm. Not exactly the kind of guy you can reason
with. I was glad to see that the creep was taken out.

I couldn't help it, but I got all hot under the collar that the men
dismissed Celuwen and Isiwen as inferior. This prejudice might have
serve our hero in the end, but still... Jerks. You did a very nice
job of making the villains believable.

What a heart-stopper during the part where it finally dawned on
Legolas that where goes Maltanaur, there goes Eilian. Or the other
way around. At any rate, he has quite an incentive to see this
operation come off smoothly. He would have done his best anyway, but
knowing your brother is most likely in the clutches of the enemy kind
of adds another dose of stress.

Poor Maltanaur. At least he got in some good licks before he went
down. One of my first thoughts was for his wife. She's probably back
at the ranch pacing the floor and telling herself to be calm; it's
not the first time she sensed danger where her mate is concerned. As
I read this, I envision Maltanaur waking to find Eilian (Maltanaur's
wife just stepped out for a moment) at this bedside, his feet propped
on the bed, and a look of mischief in his eyes. Just think how much
delight Eilian will get out of telling his keeper how he and Legolas
saved his hide. So who's the keeper now? As I said, poor Maltanaur.

Loved the settlers not being intimidated by the danger. After all,
they've lived in these woods and had to know how to protect
themselves to some degree. I imagine they're pretty doggone good with
those bows. They just lack the formal training of warriors. .

I'm loved how you maneuvered Legolas and Eilian freeing the hostages.
In the end Celuwen came through as smart and brave, and she did what
she had to do, just like Legolas and Eilian.

I truly got a kick out of Ithilden and Eilian having a
little 'discussion' on who was going to tell Celuwen that she
couldn't dismiss the guards. No one really wanted to tackle that.

This was an exciting ride and one that I thoroughly enjoyed

Title: Flowers in Disguise · Author: Holdur · Races/Places: Hobbits ·
ID: 377
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 22:03:01 Score: 1
A beautiful and tender moment for Sam and his father, as Sam learns
an important lesson.

Title: Moving Mountains · Author: SilverMoonLady · Races/Places:
Hobbits · ID: 627
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 22:03:18 Score: 3
This is such a dark and different look at the circumstances of
Pippin's birth, telling it from Esmeralda's POV, as she struggles to
help her sister-in-law overcome her depression. The author's way of
describing the friendship and pain is very moving.

Title: The Black Ribbon · Author: Rhapsody · Races/Places: Hobbits ·
ID: 767
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 22:03:51 Score: 3
This is the story of a very young Merry and his first encounter with
the Brandywine in flood. The imagery of the floodwaters at night is
so vivid (and accurate--I've been flooded enough to know.) and
Merry's determination to be of help, as young as he is, shows the
seeds of his character are already in place. Very well done!

Title: Sweet Dreams · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Races/Places:
Hobbits · ID: 1003
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-17 22:04:31 Score: 5
This story combines post-Quest angst with pre-Quest reminiscence, as
we get to see just why it is that Pippin so adores his big cousin
Frodo. Frodo is portrayed as loving and understanding to a little lad
who had an accident, and then we get to see his wicked sense of humor
as well. It's so easy to understand why Pippin would have followed
Frodo across Middle-earth. The intertwinings of flashback and present
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Title: The Hands that Heal · Author: Jeodo Brandybuck · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Merry & Pippin · ID: 797
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:12:10 Score: 3
In this story of Merry and Pippin in the painful months after Frodo
left, we find the two of them fighting their own griefs by attempting
to help and console one another. The sweet love and care they show
one another, and Pippin's cleverness in disguising his intent are
both funny and touching.

Title: Butterfly · Author: Melilot Hill · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 828
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:12:31 Score: 1
Very sweet bit of childhood fluff. An adorable little vignette.

Title: Whispers In The Night · Author: pippinfan88 · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Merry & Pippin · ID: 838
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:13:01 Score: 3
A thoroughly believable gap-filler, that touches on the roots of
Merry's and Pippin's close friendship, and the worry they both feel
for Frodo on the eve of embarking on the Quest. I especially enjoy
the way the author shows Merry's own dependence on Pippin as well as
the other way round.

Title: Believe Me · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Hobbits: Merry
& Pippin · ID: 878
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:14:02 Score: 4
This story, in which a falsely accused and misunderstood, Pippin runs
away is very absorbing. The author paints a young Pip who is
determined to make it on his own, away from those whom he thinks no
longer care about him. There are a couple of absolutely lovely OCs,
who take him in, and eventually help him realize that just because
they didn't believe him doesn't mean his family didn't love him. And
there is another minor canon character as well who also begins to
learn a lesson.

Title: Cradling · Author: Nickey · Races/Places: Hobbits: Merry &
Pippin · ID: 1100
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:14:29 Score: 2
Merry finds himself helping Pippin through another milestone in his
life. Very subtle hints of slashiness, but even more, the true
affection of life-long friends.

Title: Realisation · Author: Ginger Hobbit · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 1165
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:14:52 Score: 1
Very mildly slashy, but sweet all the same.

Title: A Birthday Party · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 1171
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:15:28 Score: 2
This just makes me smile. Usually it's Merry looking out for Pippin,
but in this one, it's Pippin looking out for his Merry, in his breezy
and Tookish fashion. A very sweet and funny little ficlet, with
undertones of seriousness.

Title: The Best Laid Plans · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Merry & Pippin · ID: 1184
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:15:55 Score: 1
Very funny! Merry learns an important lesson--never forget about
Pippin.

Title: When it Rains · Author: Hai Took · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Merry & Pippin · ID: 1251
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:16:21 Score: 2
This is an adorable bit of young hobbit fluff, with just a touch of
foreshadowing. I especially like the easy way between Merry and
Pippin here, and the give and take between their imaginations.

Title: A Letter Home · Author: Llinos · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin
· ID: 761
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:17:17 Score: 3
This is cute. Such a sweet and naive little missive, glossing over
important details, and hitting just enough of the highlights to turn
his parents grey--if they aren't already from raising him--and
leaving a lot to the imagination. I love the lack of punctuation and
run on sentences--Pippin's mind clearly runs far faster than his pen
can write.

Title: Small · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin ·
ID: 1033
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:17:48 Score: 3
A very nice little vignette, in which Pippin comes to realize that
size is not all that matters. I love the way he is persistent in
searching for the little singer, and his realization of how this
applies to himself. I always love a story which has Pippin singing.

Title: Happy Birthday Professor · Author: Llinos · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 762
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:18:29 Score: 3
These are funny little birthday mathoms in honor of JRR Tolkien's one
hundred and eleventh birthday, and they do indeed, sound as though
they were written by hobbits! I could imagine Merry and Pippin table
dancing to the first, and I could just see Sam with his hands behind
his back, seriously reciting the second.

Title: Arise · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits: Poetry · ID: 933
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:18:59 Score: 1
A very well done poem. I can imagine this being proclaimed in the
Hall of Meduseld by a bard.

Title: Hope Everlasting · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Poetry · ID: 948
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:19:20 Score: 1
A rather nice filk, summing up Pippin's feelings before the last
battle.

Title: The Same Story · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits: Poetry
· ID: 956
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:19:42 Score: 1
A very interesting filk, comparing the tale of Beren and Luthien to
the efforts of Frodo and Sam.

Title: What Should Not Be Forgotten · Author: Budgielover ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 179
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:20:29 Score: 3
A very touching a beautiful account of Frodo's realization of all
that his cousins accomplished and endured. I love the way the story
moves from humor and banter to seriousness, without missing a beat or
seeming strained. Gandalf's intervention and praise was just right.

Title: Red Roses, Golden Arrows · Author: Regina · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 507
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:33:39 Score: 3
A banner for Pippin to have for the Battle of Bywater--it makes me
think of the banner that Arwen made for Aragorn. I am sure that
Pippin felt a fierce pride in the faith his family had in his ability
to lead the hobbits in their attempt to throw the ruffians out. I
also enjoyed Pimmie being one of the archers.

Title: First Flower · Author: SilverWolf · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 657
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:33:58 Score: 1
Very sweet! The author captures Sam's nervousness very well.

Title: October Quickenings · Author: Budgielover · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 676
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:34:26 Score: 2
Very nicely done hurt/comfort; Sam's fear, worry and guilt over not
being there is well done. But I really like Frodo's reflections at
the end.

Title: Turnabout · Author: Ariel · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War · ID: 686
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:35:11 Score: 4
Although the author says this is pure hurt/comfort, for it's own
sake, this story is more about the love and loyalty between Merry and
Frodo. The two are trapped in an accident in Minas Tirith after the
Quest, and Merry is injured. The rest of the story is an exploration
of how Frodo tends Merry, and why Merry was the one injured. There is
a beautiful bit of foreshadowing at the end.

Title: Midnight at Bag End · Author: jodancingtree · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 749
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:35:46 Score: 3
Such sad and bitter reflections from Frodo, yet shot through with the
love that he still holds for Sam, Merry, Pippin, Rose and little
Elanor. She shows so clearly how he can still feel pride and joy for
others, though he will accept none for himself. A very moody and
pensive piece.

Title: Growing Pains · Author: Eekfrenzy · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 1068
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:36:18 Score: 2
Poor Merry can't win for losing when he comes back taller than
everyone else except Pippin. It's a very funny look at the long term
effects of the Ent draught, and a very nice Estella, as well.

Title: The Battle of Bywater · Author: Lulleny · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 1093
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:37:10 Score: 3
An incredibly moving piece, full of vivid detail, and the anguish
Frodo felt over the necessity of blood spilling in the Shire. It is
so real: one can see all the details of the battle and its aftermath,
smell the blood, hear the cries. And the bit of foreshadowing at the
end is like a hammerblow.

Title: Beauty · Author: Nickey · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War
· ID: 1099
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:37:34 Score: 2
Sam's sad efforts to persuade Frodo to stay in the Shire on the road
to the Grey Havens are doomed to failure. Frodo's last thoughts in
this are so sad.

Title: The Smell of Mint · Author: Regina · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War · ID: 1105
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:38:04 Score: 3
This is the dark side of Merry's fierce protectiveness to those he
loves; his hatred for Wormtongue because of his persecution of Eowyn
still festers in him. This is done so well, the description of
Merry's feelings and the details of burying the slain Ruffians stand
out.

Title: Return to Rivendell · Author: Shirebound · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 1115
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:38:59 Score: 6
This is an absolutely beautiful story, a gap-filler of the time spent
in Rivendell by the Travellers on their way home. In The Hobbit, JRRT
indicates that pleasant things don't make much of a story, but this
is one author who can make pleasant and happy things just as
interesting and fun to read as unpleasant ones. The love of the
hobbits for one another and the respect of the Elves for all they
accomplished is so clearly delineated. Remarkably, for this author is
a favorite of mine, I had not read this one before, and am so
grateful to the awards for giving me the opportunity to find this
particular story.

Title: Changes · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-
Ring War Drabble · ID: 231
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:39:25 Score: 1
Wonderful concise piece, making the point that some changes are to
the good!

Title: Namesake · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War Drabble · ID: 301
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:39:48 Score: 1
Yes. I can see such a conversation between Sam and Rose, as they
think what that name will come to mean.

Title: Chasing and Burg'ling · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 580
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:40:11 Score: 1
I just love Frodo's exasperated fond amusement in the face of the
Gaffer's complaints.

Title: A Lesson In Mercy · Author: Vistula the Dunadan ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 638
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:40:32 Score: 1
AAaaawww! That's sweet!

Title: My Hero · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 640
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:40:52 Score: 1
That's so funny!

Title: Earth · Author: Jeodo Brandybuck · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pre-
War of the Ring · ID: 320
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:41:28 Score: 3
This story is a lovely long read, and so lovingly portrays the pre-
Quest friendships of the four main hobbits, as well as a few others.
Set against a very plausible Shire society, and using a summer fair
as a backdrop, it shows the depth of love and loyalty that came to be
between them all. The plot is intriguing, and there is a good deal of
humor as well.

Title: A conspiracy forged · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 585
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:41:58 Score: 2
This was so sweet! I love Merry looking out for Pip by getting the
pipe back for him--and without having to give up his marvelous dwarf-
horn as well. Great foreshadowing of the Quest.

Title: The Terror of Buckland · Author: Inkling · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 687
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:42:37 Score: 4
In spite of the light-hearted summary for this story, it is not
funny, though it has its funny moments. Instead, it is a finely drawn
account of Frodo's troubled childhood and youth after his parents'
deaths and before he was taken in by Bilbo, and for the reasons
behind his constant thrill-seeking and courting of danger. It is a
very thought-provoking story, and the characterization of the canon
characters is consisitent throughout.

Title: Tall Tales · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 1153
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 04:54:12 Score: 2
Funny, serious, and sweet by turns, Pippin is a wonderful father and
Faramir a delightful child. And the ending brings tears to my eyes.

Title: Truth and Consequences · Author: Mariposa · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Shire · ID: 837
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 05:10:18 Score: 3
This story covers so many things: the wrong-headedness of ideas that
can ensue when books are written after the fact by those were not
there, the meaning of success and failure, the connections between
the friends and kin, the sorrow for old hurts. But it does so with
real humor and insight.

Title: The Horn-Cry of Buckland · Author: Lulleny · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Shire · ID: 467
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 05:19:02 Score: 2
Like other stories by this author, there is depth to the
characterizations, depth in layers. There is sorrow and pain and
regret, but there is also love, laughter and pride. It's just
beautiful.

Title: Simple Comfort · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 636
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 05:23:24 Score: 1
Very nice. I love the image of Sam; tea is so hobbity, and Aragorn's
musings so fond.

Title: Here sits, in secret, blest Theology · Author: annmarwalk ·
Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 388
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 05:40:21 Score: 3
This is a delightful piece of lore, and a beautifully envisaged scene
of passing on a half-forgotten skill - and then seeing it put to good
use. Tellingly, Faramir uses it for the good of his men as much as
himself - as every good Captain should. Beautifully encapsulted in an
elegantly pared down manner.

Title: Mourning Cloak · Author: annmarwalk · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gondor · ID: 394
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 05:47:13 Score: 2
Very touching - Denethor would never be a man to wear his heart on
his sleeve, but to disguise his emotions in black? Aah, that's
another matter - you've caught his character very nicely I think.

Title: Winter Solstice · Author: Fileg · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 727
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 05:59:57 Score: 3
This is tellingly delicate in its precise evocation of honour and,
for Elrond, an undying love. The weariness of command is defined
without resort to extraneous hyperbole, just the stripping away of
outer clothing to reveal the fea laid bare - a lovely metaphor
beautifully executed.

Title: Anglachel · Author: Fileg · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 339
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 06:06:03 Score: 3
I always admire the construction of formal poetry, but often without
feeling drawn in by the piece, but this has emotion - and too spare!
One can almost feel the heat and pressure made palpable in this
exploration of the power and foreboding bitterness of what love will
and does mean to this pairing.

Title: Halbarad · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 341
Reviewer: Elen Kortirion · 2005-08-18 06:11:49 Score: 4
A fantastically powerful evocation of the terror and the dread, in
this case made so human by this voice. If only Peter Jackson could
have read this version - he would have seen it worth spending the
extra half million on bringing the Rangers forward to ride at
Aragorn's side - and the Paths of the Dead would have become the true
spectacle they were meant to be. 'the spectral banners like winding
sheets' will be an image that stays with me - how I wish I had seen
it on screen!

Title: Waiting for a King Like You · Author: Michael Martinez ·
Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 1139
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 07:09:08 Score: 6
This essay examines the decline and fall of the northern empire
compared to the strength and growth of Gondor. To accomplish this,
Michael Martinez draws comparisons to the Roman empires, Egypt and
our own history and the models Professor Tolkien may have used to
create his story. He also goes into great detail about what caused
Arnor to break into three, and why it did not recover after the
second age the way Gondor did using sources both from the Professor
and real peoples. It answers questions I have had about the
differences between the two Numenorean cultures, as well as the
inevitable question of 'what happened to the Dunedain of the north,
why did they fail?'

And I think it shall now be a source for endless new story ideas. And
that alone makes it worth the read.

Title: The Elladan and Elrohir Factsheet · Author: tyellas · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 598
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 07:27:48 Score: 4
Tyellas' Factsheet is on my favourites' list so that I can make sure
I can stay 'in canon' when writing the twins. Are they Peredhil or
Elrondionnath, this factsheet answers the basic questions, provides a
timeline and a sources that back up her statements. An excellent
source that often saves me from having to look it up in the plethora
of books, or at least gives me the right place to look for myself.

Title: Giving Gifts · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Villains ·
ID: 241
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-18 08:41:16 Score: 10

I've been looking for this one and couldn't remember the name, so I
am glad to find it here. I'll say first that I mean no offense to the
rest of the list in my praise of this one outstanding work, so please
take this in the spirit in which it is given. - In my mind, this is a
shining example of what JRRTolkien meant when he spoke of building a
legend for other hands and other works - the dreaded, very nearly
forbidden, all original cast. Dwimordene builds a world within the
world, carefully, oh so carefully using the Middle-earth base, but
creating something entirely her own. It fits - but it's more.
Carefully matching the edges of the puzzle, she adds to the world
with her own art.

In addition to following the first rule of writing - "tell a good
story" - I especially enjoy that study and work clearly shows in this
short story. It is 'active' and 'engaging', as any good writer's
manual will ask you to do, a balanced mix of narrative with the
dialogue, both spoken and internal, it opens with a hook and the
reader's heart is immediately drawn to little Nharadh as he ritually
braids his father's hair for battle. These simple rules and
guidelines that are so often missed in our excitement to share our
work with others pull together in this piece as a shining example of
a piece of original work set firmly in Middle-earth. Great job!

Title: Telling the Bees · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Shire · ID: 343
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 09:00:16 Score: 2
Very sweet, making use of a real folk tradition, and adapting it to
hobbits. I can see Sam doing this, helping to make it real in his own
heart, as well.

Title: Hardiness · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Shire · ID: 372
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 09:03:22 Score: 1
Sam's in his element in this one, as a gardener. He knows, none
better, how resilient nature is. I adore the ending.

Title: The Black Ribbon · Author: Rhapsody · Races/Places: Hobbits ·
ID: 767
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-18 09:51:11 Score: 8
When I usually think of hobbits I think of cakes, tea and cosiness.
Until I read the Black Ribbon, I had not once stopped once to
consider what their lives might actually be like. To be able to get
such a glimpse into their lives is probably one of the more neglected
aspects of the fanfic world. What's more is that we got to see what
Merry, the youngster was like. Merry being one of my favourite
characters, I had already formed an image of what he must have been
like and I was exceptionally happy to see that what I read did not
jar with that picture. Merry was not only cuddly but inquisitive and
smart. I also liked how the families got together when the flood hit.
It shows a lot of understanding ( in my opinion ) of the hobbit
community. It is a great testimony to your writing talent how you
managed to link between the black ribbon on Esme's hair and the black
ribbon as the flood from Merry's perspective. Furthermore, I was glad
it had a happy ending and it left me with a feeling of contentment
and ease much like those I feel when I imagine myself in the shire
with a warm cup of tea and the beautiful sunshine after a long tiring
day!


Title: Real Men Wear Jewelry · Author: Mouse · Genres: Humor · ID: 488
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 09:58:13 Score: 4
Absolutively hilarious. The idea of all these male elves gathering
around in the weight room comparing experiences, and affairs, is so
well done. From the 'poncy Half-Elf' to the 'faintly glowing halo'
that drops on Beleg's head, 'been there-done that' Glorfindel, Gil-
galad of questionable parentage. What an hilarious insight. This is
what a humorous tale should be!

Title: Hobbits: An Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Humor: Hobbits · ID: 1158
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:51:22 Score: 6
Given how many Owner's Guide stories have been spawned, it's amazing
how fresh Theresa Green keeps them. I've read other Owner's Guide
manuals by other authors, but they just don't quite measure up.
Tackling all four hobbits as a matched set, Theresa Green gives
pointers on how to tell your hobbits apart ("Huge blue eyes, flawless
porcelain complexion, scar on left shoulder, tendency to get sums
wrong if counting on fingers = FRODO."—the mathematical problem was
brilliant), discovering the contents of Sam's backpack ("short sword
that sings 'Every Breath You Take'" among numerous other things), and
problematic interactions with Boromir models. Another fine addition
to the series!

Title: GimlI: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Humor · ID: 1157
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:51:43 Score: 5
Another hilarious owner's guide to make us appreciate the merits of
the Gimli model. Theresa Greene does not hesitate to stoop to the
level of the bad pun "Glóin-in-the-Dark Enterprises"), to trade
ruthlessly on the three modes of Gimli-Legolas interaction (hostile,
friendly, slash), nor to make certain all three settings of certain
interactions are also taken care of (PG-13 slash, R slash, NC-17
slash). Classic line: "Q: What does dwarven foreplay consist of? A:
The words: "Brace yourself!" Who could resist such a charmer?

Title: The Gift · Author: Theresa Green · Genres: Humor · ID: 1156
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:52:05 Score: 3
Mithril chamber pot. As grateful as Aragorn undoubtedly is after
Legolas' and Gimli's assist with his own love life, I have a feeling
he'll be regretting not having had them offed for the offense to the
throne of Gondor once they bring Eldarion his birthday gift. Catty,
slashy humor abounds, among other amusing banter. Well done, Ms.
Green.

Title: Aragorn: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 1154
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:52:43 Score: 5
The first of the "Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual" series that I
read, I do believe, and for obvious reasons. I'd be hard pressed to
pick a single section to highlight as particularly funny, but
the "unpacking" procedure, complete with footnote, that sets up a bit
of a running gag about Aragorn units and cleanliness, is always
entertaining. Would that other technical writers had the sense of
humor of a Theresa Green, but then I suppose their products are a bit
lacking in the care and maintenance area...

Title: The Last Elf Standing · Author: Suzene Campos · Genres: Humor:
Elves · ID: 1124
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:53:11 Score: 6
It may be OOC, but it's entirely too funny. Elrond, however, does
admittedly get his butt kicked in this bit of extended verbal
warfare. From the first letter's priceless analysis of Elrond's and
Cirdan's failure to convince Isildur to destroy the Ring ("I have a
longsword, a bone to pick, and I'm quite ready to take up your
counseling duties if you and that barnacle-faced old salt are having
difficulties bringing yourselves to use more than harsh language in
correcting this problem") to some of the worst musical "hits" to be
imagined (Tom Bombadil's Greatest Disco Hits), to the Middle-earth
Sierra Club, this fic comes through with some memorable zingers.

Title: Flowers in His hair · Author: LKK · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID:
1028
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:53:41 Score: 1
Took a second to get oriented as to who the speakers are. Cute and
quick.

Title: Anticipation · Author: LOTR_lover · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID:
1092
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:55:08 Score: 2
Well written, this is a classic gag. Coitus interruptus gets a new
meaning as Glorfindel finds that well laid plans still fail when
unwanted others continual come barging in on private moments.

Title: When pigs do Fly · Author: Elendiari22 · Genres: Humor:
Animals · ID: 975
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:59:02 Score: 3
An amusing story. The Emyn Arnen menagerie ought to be one of the
wonders of the Fourth Age world. Still, I rather liked the "frog
incident" in all its mystery. Rather like the "noodle incident" of
Calvin and Hobbes fame, it has its power in being mysterious in
itself but in getting reactions out of those who hear of it.

Title: All I Want for Yuletide · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 932
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:59:31 Score: 1
In the fine tradition of Legolusting parodies; I particularly liked
the "Dwarves delve deep" line...

Title: In the Style of Ogden Nash · Author: Dreamflower · Genres:
Humor: Poetry · ID: 917
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 10:59:58 Score: 2
This is doggerel, and I mean that in the best possible way. I
particularly loved the summary of "The Council of Elrond", and that
long parenthetical note!

Title: Important Choices · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Hobbits · ID: 879
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 11:00:28 Score: 1
Cute! I liked Pippin's fashion coup and his parting line.

Title: Ode to the Absent · Author: thevina_finduilas · Genres: Humor:
Poetry · ID: 849
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 11:00:51 Score: 4
Definitely a piece of humor with a bite! And yet so very true—the
absolute dearth of motherly presences shows up. Sam, Merry and Pippin
are the only members of the Fellowship whose mothers we know with
certainty didn't die young or leave Middle-earth. One wonders what's
worse: the deaths of Frodo's, Sam's, and Boromir's mothers, or the
total anonymity of Legolas' and Gimli's. Good job, Thevina, to
highlight the sad fate of the Middle-earth mothers.

Title: Fathers' Day Card from Faramir · Author: Llinos · Genres:
Humor: Poetry · ID: 788
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 11:01:17 Score: 4
So glad to see this again. Llinos captures the animosity of father
and son, and manages to make it hysterical. Faramir, the perpetually
overshadowed, would of course write a card for dear old Dad, but that
it starts off reminding Denethor of his existence ("Remember me? The
other one?") is immediately funny, and the rest just sort of flows
from there. Well done!

Title: A Foolish Thing · Author: Dana · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1031
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-18 11:11:30 Score: 3
Skilfully woven, passing between Merry's self-recriminations
(excellent use of repetition with the phrase "he should have seen it
coming") and Pippin's experience with the Palantir. Dana has a clear
grasp of her characters, and leaves the reader with a bittersweet
tang after the story's close.

Title: Hoped, At Least · Author: Dana · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Hobbits · ID: 1131
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-18 11:12:38 Score: 3
This has got to be my favourite "Dana" story to date. (Of course,
Beregond is my favourite Mannish character, and that might have
something to do with it.) She weaves thought and action, dialogue and
description into a wondeful wholeness that leaves the reader somehow
wanting more.

Title: Lightness · Author: Dana · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits ·
ID: 1230
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-18 11:13:42 Score: 3
"Lightness" is a very nice picture of Merry waiting hopeful-
hopelessly for Pippin to awaken at Cormallen. The words going through
his head ring true; he is caught in regret and memory and even
futility... and it is fitting that Pippin wakens, just at the right
moment, to lead him out of his dark thoughts.


Title: Dragons or Ribbons · Author: Joanna · Genres: Humor: Children
· ID: 443
Reviewer: elliska · 2005-08-18 11:47:54 Score: 6
I remember reading this a long time ago and I was so pleased to find
it here and read it again. I thought this was absolutely wonderful.
The characterization of Legolas was perfect and Aragorn's little
daughter was absolutely adorable. I thought I would die laughing when
she granted Legolas permission to come let her play with his hair.
Needless to say I almost died when Gimli and Aragorn came in on the
scene--that was priceless!

I also loved the touching little parts of this, like the fact that
Legolas had painted her room and her repsonse: "Ada's dearest friend,
and one who loves me very much," she answered automatically, as if
she'd been well-versed in the tale. when Legolas asks if she knew who
painted it.

This is a really great story!

Title: The Warrior · Author: daw the minstrel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 155
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 12:16:48 Score: 10
You wrapped this one up with your usual skill of insight into your
characters and balanced it with an old fashioned good read.

I'm glad you have insight, because poor Tinar is blind as a bat.
Foril's song was a hoot and it was one that everyone 'got' but the
victim. Tinar is so much fun to hate.

Certainly, it was good to see Legolas get a chance to go home. I had
wondered if Thranduil sensed something was amiss with his youngest
when Legolas was wounded. Ithilden handled himself well when faced
with the injury of his 'baby brother' and even gained some insight
into his own mistakes with Eilian.

BUT, my favorite scene was with Thranduil and Beliond....and that
says a lot since Eilian did drop his clothes all over his chamber on
the way to his bath. The more I see of the Beliond, the more I like
him. He's not just a good babysitter, he's a wise elf who was not
afraid to be honest with his king about his task. I loved the line
where he said Legolas reminded him of Thranduil at his age, but was
more biddable. Well, that was a good reminder to the king that he had
once been a handful, too....and still is in his own way. Fortunately,
Thranduil was able to put aside his fatherly fear and see the wisdom
of Beliond's words. I stood up and cheered!

You've done such a good job with peeling away the layers of Eilian's
personality. He's young and he makes mistakes, but I can't help but
want to tell him he should know better. And he does learn better, but
at the moment and in this story, you did a wonderful job of setting
up all the interferences he and Celuwen have that come from not only
their personality differences, but also from outside influence.
Solith has also contributed to the problems. I'm sure he loves his
daughter, but he has not acted wisely as a leader..and, maybe, not
even as a father. I love how you've made these people so real and
complicated.

A bright point was certainly the news of Annael's betrothal.

Wonderful as always, Daw.

Title: Passwords · Author: White Gull · Genres: Humor · ID: 1210
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 14:23:34 Score: 2
*snork!* An interesting interweaving with canon. The innuendo (and
outright admissions) fly pretty thick in this one, but all in good
fun.

Title: Legolas: The Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID: 1193
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-18 14:24:01 Score: 2
I think the most amusing section in this is the Q&A part, wherein we
learn how to deal with the million fangirls who mysteriously appear
upon the front lawn as soon as your Legolas unit has been activated.
Hysterical!

Title: Magnetic Force · Author: Marnie · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 1097
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 15:05:43 Score: 4
This is the first fanfic I ever read and got me hooked. It is written
so believably that you start wondering if it could be real -- is that
how Tolkien came up with the idea of Middle Earth? Do Elves exist,
was Aragorn real? This is a wonderful modern day tale of 'the girl
who falls into Middle-earth' but it is written with such detail, and
taking into account the various strange phenomena that exist that it
makes the idea of discovering Rivendell in this day in age totally
believable.

Title: Back to the Valley · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Elves · ID: 590
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-18 15:26:02 Score: 5
I think the strength of this story shows itself in the simple fact
that only a glance at the title meant I recalled almost all the
poignancy and power of the narrative.

The author employs an amazingly subtle and effective use of
interchanging light and dark imagery in order to show how memories
can carry us through our darkest times and that personhood is
impossible to destroy. The elf in the story still retains something
of himself despite all his years of abuse and mistreatment.

I really do applaud an author who can deliver such a powerful
emotional punch in so few words.

Title: The Very Model of a Warden of Lothlorien · Author: Kenaz ·
Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 614
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-18 15:41:19 Score: 3
This is the most brilliant parody I have ever read. The author
obviously knows Tolkien inside out. This knowledge has been welded to
a fantastic sense of rhythm and meter and has produced a hilarious
poem which fans of Gilbert and Sullivan will find compulsively
hummable.

Title: Back to the Valley · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Elves · ID: 590
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 15:52:55 Score: 4
This is a very moving story of an elf at the end of the third age,
held captive in Barad-dur as the dark forces attempt to extract
information from him and how he copes. Thundera Tiger has written a
brilliantly dark story infused with slivers of light as the elf
retreats into his memories to avoid the pain. The reader can only
pray that the Elf finds his release one way or another once the walls
of Barad-dur come down.

Title: Beyond This World · Author: Thundera Tiger · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Final Partings · ID: 32
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-18 16:32:46 Score: 6
"The whispered words seemed to be torn from the very fabric of his
languishing soul"

That set the stage for me in reading this poignant story of Legolas
facing Gimli's death. I found myself in tears by the end of the first
chapter, both for the beautiful way Thundera wrote Gimli's death, and
for the anguish that Legolas felt.

Thunera reached such depth of emotion - grief, anguish, denial - in
this story and reflects the feelings we have all felt in having to
deal with the loss of someone we love and the rage that is felt, the
questions that are asked.

A wonderfully indepth story, questions asked and answered in two
chapters. This is one to be read, and re-read many times over.

Title: Enigmas- The Life and Love of Linwe and Frodo · Author:
MysteriousWays · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 868
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 16:56:02 Score: 1
An unusual AU Romance for Frodo. The OFC is unique, and the story is
very sweet. A few modernisms, but an absorbing plot.

Title: Aragorn Himself Waits for a Sign · Author: Gwynnyd ·
Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 392
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 16:58:57 Score: 1
Very telling, indicating Aragorn's state of mind after the War was
ended.

Title: Replacements · Author: Meril · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
General Drabble · ID: 486
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 17:00:51 Score: 1
Nice drabble from an unusual POV.

Title: The Greater Gift · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: General Drabble · ID: 540
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-18 17:02:04 Score: 1
Beautiful and powerful. The last line has impact.

Title: Where Roses Grow · Author: pippinfan88 · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 589
Reviewer: MysteriousWays · 2005-08-18 17:21:13 Score: 10
I have to be honest I am a bit biased when it comes to this story.
You see, I happened to be a consultant to the author through the
early stages of the story. Pippinfan and I developed a friendship
thanks to this story and for that reason I love it but there not for
that reason alone.

A little over a year ago PearlTook asked me if her friend Pippinfan88
could ask me some questions about becoming pregnent without benefit
of marriage. (I have experience there). I agreed and soon became
quite caught up in the project of writing this story. I think the
reason for this is because it is so very different from any Pippin
story I have ever read. In fact is quite different from any fan
fiction I have ever read.

Pippinfan88 did with this what I have notice she does with much of
her fan fiction. She pulled an issue from our modern world and
applied it to The Shire and wove a story around it. The issue of
unplanned pregnency between two underaged people is most aggreeably a
highly sensative one. Pippinfan88 handles it with exquisite delicacy
and sensativity.

The characters for our belove "The Lord of the Rings" have truly
reached mythic proportions. For me, as a reader, I like to seek out
those fanfictions that look at our heros as common folk dealing with
the more common issues of life.

In stories dealing with Post Quest Pippin I feel that all too often
he is made out to be too immature for a person of his experience in
life or he is portrayed as too old. In putting Pippin in the
situation this story does I think it portrays what I feel Pippin
likely was at that point a young hobbit teetering on the edge of
child and adulthood. Wise beyond his years yet still young and
innocent as well.

I found the character of Lilas to be much like Pippin. She too
possessed much wisdom and understanding of life yet at the same time
she also had these great gaps in her understanding. Lilas was a
perfect compliment to Pippin.

I once read an annonymous review of this story where the reviewer
harshly criticised this writer for glamourizing the plight of
underaged parenthood. The writer was accused of over symplifying the
issue. I do not believe that particular writer actually read the
entire story as it was posted at that time. "Where Roses Grow"
accurately and tenderly portrays the trials this subject. The
characters find no easy solutions if infact any true "solution" is to
be had, but rather do what we all must in the face of adversity, and
that is the best we can. Sometimes their efforts do not turn out as
they had hoped at other times they are surprised with moments that
have them feeling unexpected joy and wonder. Perhaps most
importantly, throughout the story Pippin finds that his moment of
indiscretion with Lilas has resulted in him being haunted by
insecurity as to the true depths of his feelings for her. He lives
with a continual sense of guilt that perhaps this young hobbitess
that he found so deserving of deep meaningful love did not get that
from him as he felt she ought.

This story is filled with touching moments both happy and
heartbreaking. The emotions of the characters were so finely
illustrated that I truely feel I was able to share in their feelings.
This is a story that this is a story that will never be easily
forgotten by me.

Thank you, T, for inviting me to assist you in bringing this story to
life. I will always be honored by the experience. -Myst


Title: Sacrifice Under Shadow · Author: daw the minstrel · Genres:
Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1319
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:09:49 Score: 10
I loved in this story how you showed Legolas coming into his own.
He's proven himself to Eilian and to the keepers. Not that Beliond
will take his eyes of him, but he must feel proud that his charge
reacted so proficiently in such horrible circumstances.

It was a testament to how shaken Maltanaur was that he was snapping
at everyone. Fortunately, he made peace with Legolas by praising
him...after he had gotten himself under control. Control came a
little harder to Legolas. But who can blame him? He had put his heart
and soul into seeing his brother safe. I suppose one doesn't just
turn that kind of concern off like a light switch. Like Maltanaur
said: "He could not imagine what would separate the sons of Thranduil
from one another unless true disaster had befallen them." Knowing
what love and devotion there is between these two, Maltanaur's
thought was truly a frightening one. And he loves Eilian like his own
son. This is another example of how well you do characterizations.
Each personality is distinct.

I got such a kick out of Beliond expanding Legolas's vocabulary.
Well, that's a good thing. When the time comes for Legolas to hang
out with mangy rangers, gruff dwarves and rough-riding Rohirrim,
he'll be educated.

The scene with Eilian and Ithilden in the garden was so well done.
Poor Ithilden. He's so strong and competent and for the shadow to be
returning must feel like a personal failure to him. He had already
seen what horrors the shadow brings and to be faced with it again was
just heartbreaking. It was certainly an eye-opener for Eilian.

I loved Thranduil at the end. For as tough and solid a ruler as he
is, he's such a good adar. While he and Eilian may be at odds from
time to time, his love for Eilian is no less strong than it is for
his other two sons. I think Eilian needs to know that, too. I imagine
he may feel oftentimes that he doesn't live up to his adar's
expectations. It's good for them to have these downtimes when both of
their defenses are lowered and they can just love each other. Too bad
it has to be when Eilian has nearly been killed! They have really had
to grope in the dark for each other without Naneth to be their
guiding light.

Your writing is always strong and your characters so real that the
reader feels they each one personally. As always, just a delightful
tale.


Title: Time's Turnings · Author: daw the minstrel · Races/Places:
Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 156
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:15:13 Score: 10
I watched with great interest to see how Ithilden handled his
encounter with his wayward son. Ithilden did well. He didn't scold,
kept his composure and put the ball in Sinnarn's court. Good tactics
when dealing with hormonally-driven teenagers. And Sinnarn does have
a lot to juggle. I loved how you showed Sinnarn trying to learn to be
himself while following in the footsteps of some powerful
personalities. Fortunately, he wants to be a warrior and that's a
load off his father's mind. Though, I know Ithilden would allow him
to do something else if he wasn't suited to the warrior life. But it
would still be tough.

Eilian shrugged. "Surely you do not want his spirit to be destroyed
by life in the palace?" He shot Thranduil a provocative grin. LOL!
That Eilian. He's always such fun.

"What I want is for him to survive to adulthood," Ithilden said
emphatically. Thranduil could only sympathize. At times, he had been
reduced to wanting the same thing for each of his own sons. As the
parent of teenage males, I can say that I identify. All you can hope
for sometimes is survival until they can gain some sense. And
Eilian's right; sometimes all we have are the basics.

I also love how Thranduil was wise with the distance of not
interfering in Ithilden's parenting of Sinnarn, but the worm turned
when the commander said he was going to reassign Legolas. The father-
role was sliding all over the place in that scene. Very well done.

And poor Galelas. You have taken Galenas through his own journey in
your stories. He needs someone like Eilian. Not only is Eilian his
captain, but he's a good friend. Eilian has always been perceptive
about people and this is one example of how Eilian has put his gifts
to use. Galelas is a sad figure. He's trying. And of course, knowing
his fate, makes the kindnesses shown by Eilian even more poignant.

I was glad to see Beliond teaching Legolas to pick locks. I think
that speaks of his acceptance of Legolas's ongoing maturity. And I
was pleased that he spoke some about his son. They are beginning to
understand each other better. Beliond might be a grouch, but I think
he's a kind, caring grouch underneath the rough exterior.

I love this story, Daw. So much subtle growth and understanding in
every paragraph! As always, I hate to see your stories end.

Title: Creature of Fire · Author: daw the minstrel · Races/Places:
Elves: Mirkwood · ID: 1218
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:20:54 Score: 10
This is a wonderful examination of grief and the rebuilding of
shattered lives, daw. The pain is still there for Legolas, but he's
slowly taking steps back toward coping and going on.

I really liked the scene where Legolas vaguely recalls returning
home. I could see and feel how exhausted he was from the shock and
grief. He had managed to hang on until Thranduil arrived and then he
could give control over to his adar and he could just sleep. Maybe
even simply escape for a while into sleep. You've created such
wonderfully strong and complex characters. I like the way you let us
ride along on the roller coaster of Legolas's swinging emotions.


He was still having a hard time seeing happy couples and accepting
comfort from his family. He did allow Thranduil to comfort him in his
chambers, but he quickly wanted to get away.
The scene where he went to see Galelas was also nicely done. These
two hardheaded elves are making small steps toward understanding one
another. Legolas also got a glimpse into Galelas's family. Nothing
like seeing how bad some other people have it to appreciate how good
you have it.

Have I mentioned how much I love Beliond lately? He's straight to the
point, isn't he? "Get your gear. We are going camping." No hello, no
kiss my foot, just get moving. But he was right that what Legolas
needed was some quiet time. And he gave it to him. He's a softy for a
tough old bird. And he's quite wise. From personal experience. He's
such a well drawn character.

I was also glad to see Annael. He's a good friend and his mother
certainly did have a good understanding of what Legolas was suffering
at this point. Sweet Elowen. It was good for Legolas to see people
who had experienced what he was going through and see that they had
survived.

Of course, the best example was Adar. The talk in the garden was
perfect. Not too long and full of spoken and unspoken wisdom.
Legolas's sudden memory of his mother was comforting. I'm sure if
Lorellin has any 'Elven magic' at her disposal, she's doing all she
can from wherever she is. The scene was a lovely exchange between a
father and his 'adult' son. I liked the way Thranduil related so
honestly with Legolas during this talk.

I know you nearly went nuts writing so much angst and from writing
only from Legolas's perspective, but I have to say that you did an
amazing job. This is such a good story. Full of everything that makes
a story good. You have much to be proud of in this one.

Great, great story, daw.


Title: May the Valar Protect Them · Author: Nilmandra · Books/Time:
The Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 1055
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:37:47 Score: 10
I read this story quite a while ago and to go back and review it
again was such a delight. In this story, you've woven a complex and
heart wrenching tale to create a gap filler in Legolas's life. The
family you created for him is extraordinarily good. Each character
has a unique personality and each one is important to the story.
There were no wasted words or wasted scenes in telling this story.
Everything fit together like a large jigsaw puzzle and the final
picture was a glorious scene of Legolas's beginning.

Tathiel was such a strong female character. Her struggles to keep the
children safe and alive were almost more than any one person could
survive, but she did what she had to do. And during all the terrible
trials of trying to keep the children safe and get them back home,
she never ran out of love for the little ones. I can't tell you how
much I liked her. It's so nice to see a female character who is
strong, realistic and admirable. Her strength was understated in such
a way that she simply was doing what was right and what came from her
heart and this made her entirely believable. Tathiel is a brilliantly
written character.

Thranduil's grief was difficult to read at times, but then, that's
what grief is...difficult to bear. His strength of character is what
kept him and his family together in the face of such loss. And all
the while, he still ran a kingdom well enough that he was remembered
as the greatest elvenking. Your characterization of him was perfect
for someone to be remembered in such a way.

I could go on and on, but instead of boring you with a blow by blow
of all the things I found outstanding in this story, let me just say
that the story was absolutely wonderful. You wrote a complex piece
about complex people in a complex and difficult situation. And you
pulled it off without a hitch.

Well done, Nilmandra.

Title: History Lessons · Author: Nilmandra · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion · ID: 1056
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:43:17 Score: 10
Nilmandra,
What a wonderful story. It seems Elrond still has trouble with
revealing his emotions to others, but he has found some closure to
the pain of losing his brother through the stories and in talking to
his wife. When he talked about feeling the emptiness when Elros died
and how it would never go away, but new threads had woven around that
space...well...it was just such a indication of his strength and
perseverance. While Elros seemed to be more emotionally open than he
did, Elrond was still able to love.

Elladan and Elrohir were absolutely delightful as little bundles of
joy, compassion and youthful questions. They and, of course,
Celebrian, were the balm that soothed and opened Elrond's heart. He
was right when he thought of all the wonderful support he had been
gifted with throughout his life. It's obvious Elrond was well loved
and his past experiences had helped him become such an elf that was
worthy of this devotion. You painted this trail with vibrant strokes,
minute detail and rich colors. The portrait of Elrond!

My favorite line was what Celeborn said of our golden balrog
slayer: "Who knew that a mighty Balrog slayer would make such a fine
nanny?" mused Celeborn. I loved this. It was a simple statement meant
in jest, but revealed the quality of those who surrounded Elrond and
his family.

The entire story was such a wonderful gift to your readers. You wove
a very interesting and informative story. We got a view that even
Tolkien could not offer in such understandable, yet, beautiful
language.

We got to know Elros. I found him likeable, loving and full of a
bright energy that seeded the best of what man would become. However
as the ages passed and the further man drifted from the light that
led them, they fell into darkness. As testament to the strength of
Elros' blood, the light did not go out completely as we found when
his descendent, Aragorn, brought that seed back to Middle Earth.
Elrond's cost was high in this, as well.

Again, this was such a wonderful piece of work. I can't tell you how
impressed I am with the completeness of it and the detail of
character you expounded on and created. This is one of the most
beautiful writings I've encountered in the fanfiction genre and in
the traditional publishing world.

Title: History Lessons: The Second Age · Author: Nilmandra ·
Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 1057
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:50:38 Score: 10
You covered a lot of ground in this story, but you did it with such
skill. You created a wonderful story to make the Second Age
accessible to the reader in a way that was entertaining and
enlightening.

The death of Gil-galad was heartbreaking. Of course, I wasn't exactly
surprised, but your descriptions made it so real and personal as we
viewed it for the first time with Elrond. Such a horrible death too.

I've enjoyed seeing how you brought the rings to life and the
physical connection the rings make to their bearer. Very impressive.
And didn't Elrond find some nice little side effects? No wonder
Sauron wanted the One Ring back at all costs. He'd go from Pee Wee
Herman to the Brad Pitt of Middle-earth. Explains why those kings
wanted those rings so badly too. Handy little gadgets. :>)

Seriously, this was a great touch. Elrond became hyper-aware, his
sense sharpened and his healing skills heightened. With such power at
one's disposal, it's easy to see how seductive the rings were.

The ending was nice with Glorfindel standing watch over the love of
two of the people he loved most.

Again you've written a story where all the characters are vibrant and
real to the reader. Obviously, you've put a lot of thought and work
into this. It shows. Reading this has been such a treat for me.
Understanding the Silmarillion is a chore at best, but when you
explain it, I could simply get caught up in the story and go along
for the ride. Absolutely wonderful. I loved every word.



Title: Hunting · Author: Nilmandra · Genres: Adventure: Long Form ·
ID: 1307
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 20:57:00 Score: 10
Nilmandra,

What a delightful story. If Legolas were any cuter, he could stop the
shadow with his infectious giggle.

The scene where he was 'the clue' was great. What a trusting little
fellow to jump out of the tree right into Elladan's arms. Good thing
Elladan was paying attention. The relationship that developed between
the little princeling and the big twins was such fun. Since we know
that the elves loved their children dearly, it was nice to see the
adult non-adas taking such an interest in the little one. This child
was truly cherished.

I'm glad the twins are back to normal. That's nice to see..not that I
was too worried. I don't think there's anything that could separate
them for long. I love how you allow the twins to have different
personalities and the clashes of ordinary siblings. That's the real
world, but it doesn't diminish the love between brothers to have a
few differences now and then.

The games were wonderful. What a good imagination you have. I
wouldn't have been able to come up with much more than pin-the-tail-
on-the-donkey. It was such fun to read. Well...and Sadron got a face
full of dirt and grass. Payback can be dirty. :>)

The ending with Thranduil was nicely done. This was my favorite
line: "Thranduil set him on a stool near the table almost
reluctantly, for he enjoyed having an elfling to hold as he moved
among his people." Ah...such a good ada. It brought such a good
visual to me as I read it.

Another wonderful story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.



Title: Blizzard! · Author: Nilmandra · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1308
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 21:00:16 Score: 9
What a sweet story. There was excitement, and I admit that I got
teary eyed a few times. This is one of those stories where you need
to put a tissue warning on it. Little Legolas's hurt feelings were so
realistic. My heart ached for the little guy. He simply couldn't
understand why anyone would be so cruel, especially when all he had
wanted was to be friends. Oh my...just broke my heart! Actually, I
was glad in the end when Abronwë turned out to be good kid at heart.
His sadness was understandable and he dealt with it inappropriately,
but in a childlike manner. The scene between Thranduil and the kids'
families was nice. Thranduil handled it well when I'm sure he wanted
to jerk a knot in the tail of anyone who had hurt his child.

Mirthrandir was a pleasant surprise. I'd like him and his 40 watt
staff to show up if I were stuck out in a blizzard and covered over
with snow.

I love how you weave so many little subplots into your stories.
Like...there might some love brewing in the palace for Lathron? This
would be nice to see. I like the old boy and would like to see him
have a little excitement in his life. He's too calm. He needs a nice
feisty elleth to shake his world up a little.

I really enjoyed this, Nilmandra.


Title: Interrupted Journeys: Part One - New Journeys · Author:
elliska · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1309
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 21:16:55 Score: 10
All of your Mirkwood stories have been wonderful to read, but as I
went back to review this story, I found that I enjoyed it even more
this time.

Your characters are so rich and full. Each one has a distinct
personality and some of those traits are occasionally...less than
desirable. Oh, my...so real. And still a great deal of fun to read.

The politics of any age are nearly beyond me, and I stand in awe of
how well you write intrigue. Thranduil has found himself as a new
king and with all the problems of ruling...many that he didn't
create, but inherited. It's very believable the way you've set up the
relationships between the different elven realms and their leaders.

The courtship of Thranduil and Lindomiel was a delight. Her father is
certainly not one to be trifled with. But what makes him so good is
that he's not just an ordinary ada protecting his little elleth; he's
got real history with Oropher that has colored the way he views
Thranduil. And Thranduil, being Oropher's son, is not one to back
down. You taken two strong personalities and put them head to head.
Of course, Lindomiel isn't a shrinking violet. She might be young,
but she's shaping up to be a woman of strength and character. I love
a good strong female character who is capable and realistic.

The Marty subplot should prove to be quite interesting. Again you've
created a fascinating character that is realistic and not just an
ordinary cardboard cutout. Even though we didn't get to see much of
her, the little we saw was handled so well that she came to life.

This is a terrific story and one that I've followed from the
beginning. It's an impressive story of depth and complexity, but most
of all, it's fun. I love this series.

Title: Interrupted Journeys: Part Two - Journeys Perforce · Author:
elliska · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1310
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 21:34:49 Score: 10
Elliska,

I really enjoyed your explanation of why and when Thranduil moved his
people north. Tolkien tells us little about the moves the wood-elves
made and leaves us to speculate about most of the details. I'm not
entirely certain, but I don't he was ever clear about when the people
moved to the stronghold in the northeastern corner of Mirkwood. This
isn't an entirely bad thing since it give the imaginative writer a
lot of wiggle room. And you're certainly an imaginative writer. Your
set up is completely plausible. Once again, I'm awed by how well you
writer political entanglements.

One of the points of your characterizations I liked is that everyone
is struggling to come to grips with the changes. The move wasn't just
a simple 'let's move' and nearly an entire kingdom just up and moved
without any trouble. Elves might have been easier going in some
aspects than men, but they were intelligent and strong willed and
bound to the Greenwood. Having a few glitches in the moving machinery
is to be expected and you did a wonderful job of rounding out all the
problems that can arise when changing the lives of a group of people.
No matter how well they get along normally...or how much they
disagree...there's bound to be trouble.

Your characterizations are outstanding and your battle scenes are
quite well done! Battle scenes are especially tough, I think, and you
seem to catch a natural flow and just let the battle unfold for the
reader. Just wonderful.

I've enjoyed this tale very much and look forward to following the
next part. Like your other stories in this series, this one is just a
delight to read.

Title: Interrupted Journeys: Part Three - Journeys Begin · Author:
elliska · Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 1311
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 21:42:08 Score: 10
Another terrific read. I've become really invested in your
characters.

You tackled some difficult, but interesting topics in this one.
Thranduil handled the interrogation of Tulus well. What to do with an
immortal being in terms of punishment is certainly a tough one. And
since the elves were supposedly wise...in most instances...wisdom
should cut both ways. Still, just living begets mistakes. Then...it
turns into a big old mess. Not only have Tulus and his cohorts been
involved in sedition, but they've tried to capture/assassinate the
queen and the commander's wife. Not to mention that in the process,
the children were endangered. Thranduil's in a tough place. You did a
nice job of showing how miscommunication/misinterpretation of actions
can result in bad feelings. Tulus has obviously matured and
reconsidered his anger, but he's in so deep now that he'll be lucky
to survive the wrath of She-Who-Can-Carry-a-Grudge. And boy, oh boy,
this grudge has become her life's work.

I have to say though, I'm disappointed in Glílavan. Really, I wanted
to give him the benefit of the doubt. However, it looks like he has
his own agenda...or is still mixed up in SWCCAG's. The bad news is
that he's young and apparently a chip off the old block. I hope his
adar can pound some sense into his head before he ends up as fish
food. Thranduil is wise to not trust either of these fellows.

Such intrigue! What in all of Arda did Oropher do to the elleth and
her family? If nothing else, it demonstrates a frightening level of
determination." I love this line. Determined, indeed. Crazy as a bat
without a belfry! I can't wait to hear what Galadriel and Celeborn
have to say. Surely, the Lady of Light remembers Marti. Surely...

The growth and development of your characters is a delight to watch.
I've really liked the way Amglaur's and Thranduil's relationship has
changed over the years. It's taken a while, but finally Amglaur has
had to admit that Thranduil is devoted to his daughter. Amglaur even
called Thranduil 'ion-nin'. Minor little slip there, but very
telling.

I also liked what Thranduil had to say about how Evil had shaped his
life and how he wanted to focus Legolas on the beauty of Arda rather
than the darkness. And Amglaur is so impressed that he's going to
stay until Legolas is grown. Oh joy! Still, the relationship is
better and there's a chance that it might be civil. A chance....

Marti isn't going to give up, is she? The fact that she believes that
she still has allies...now even closer to the king...is rather
chilling.

This story was wonderful. I really think the stories just get better
and better. There's never a disappointing moment. The story is full
of action, excitement and wonderful characters. A true adventure.

Title: Life in the Angle · Author: Leaward · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 181
Reviewer: Karenator · 2005-08-18 22:01:09 Score: 10
This story has been such a fun adventure to read. The complex plot
has kept the readers on pins and needles as to what Titheniel will do
next. All the characters have been fun to get to know. It's the sweet
love story of a young couple and the trials and tribulations of two
cultures clashing on an unexpected battlefield with the young couple
caught in the middle. Innocent young couple, I might add. But not
everyone is innocent and corruption has a way of infiltrating into
the lives of those who do nothing to deserve it. Poor Poppi.

Oh my! Titheniel really did it this time. She pushed the limits of
everyone's kindness and did it with grand style. She's made Poppi's
life miserable since the poor Bree lass arrived. But in the end,
Poppi's happiness was not tied up in Tithenie<br/><br/>(Message over 64 KB, truncated)

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Title: Tall Tales · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 1153
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:45:05 Score: 4
This author does such a great job of connecting Pippin's quest
adventures to his experiences later on as a father. It is also funny
that the once adventurous Pippin who drove his older cousins crazy
with his daring is now worried about his son's mischief. I loved
Faramir in this tale and the ending with Pippin's silent thanks to
Frodo for saving the Shire so that he son could enjoy it was perfect!

Title: Small · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin ·
ID: 1033
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:47:31 Score: 3
This author always finds an interesting way to look at things in her
tales. I loved her story of a frustrated young Pippin who hasn't
grown as tall as he would like and is mistaken for younger than he is
and his realization that even though he is rather small he can still
do some things very well and make his voice heard. Lovely!

Title: More Than Cousins · Author: pearltook1 · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): The Shire · ID: 1034
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:50:24 Score: 4
This may have been the very first story that I read by this wonderful
author. I still go back and read it again from time to time. I love
Merry and Pippin's relationship in this story and the way that both
of them want to apologize to the other so desperately and are afraid
that they won't get the chance to do so. The ending is sweet and the
characters are so well written.

Title: While We Dwelt in Fear · Author: pearltook1 · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 632
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:54:35 Score: 6
So much good to say about this one. I loved all of the characters in
this one but for obvious reasons Esmeralda Brandybuck is the stand-
out for me. The author's use of the Took fairie blood forming a bond
between Pippin and Esmeralda while Pippin is off on the quest is so
well done. I also like the worry and frustration of Esmeralda who can
only experience her son's situation through Pippin. The rest of the
Shire is included in this tale as well while they struggle on against
the evil that holds the Shire in its grip while Frodo, Merry, Pippin
and Sam are away. This is very creative and very well done. I was
sorry when it was finished.

Title: As Good As You · Author: pearltook1 · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 854
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:56:20 Score: 2
A very heartwarming look at the relationship between Pippin and his
father. Sweet and inspiring. All children should be this close to
their parents.

Title: And the Halfling Forth Shall Stand · Author: Shirebound ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 511
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:57:20 Score: 3
No one writes Frodo's POV like Shirebound! I love her insight into
his character and her care with the other characters as well. This
story is a joy to read. Frodo's thoughts are very in keeping with his
own personality throughout the entire story.

Title: A Matter of Time · Author: Shirebound · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural · ID: 514
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 04:59:08 Score: 2
I enjoyed this interesting look at why Elrond made the decisions that
he did when selecting the Fellowship. This was very creative and a
great read.

Title: Fairer Than Most · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 69
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 05:01:11 Score: 1
Very funny and very hobbity on all counts. I love the banter in this
one.

Title: Stars and Sniffles · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 817
Reviewer: grey_wonderer · 2005-08-21 05:02:48 Score: 2
I love this. The stars actually become characters in this wonderful
tale. Pippin is delightful and Gandalf ever the wise protector of
small hobbits. This is a delight to read and so very imaginative!

Title: Eclipsed by the Moon · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Romance:
Vignette · ID: 989
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:25:52 Score: 2
Warned by the summary, I did guess the man in question before he was
named. Nevertheless, an entertaining change from the more
usual "pairs".

Title: Mantle of Stars · Author: marastar · Genres: Romance: Vignette
· ID: 987
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:26:27 Score: 3
A nice, reflective little piece. The last sentence seems to give the
whole of the fic, and feels very Faramir: "I give her the choice, lay
my heart in her hands. For at the end of all things, amid darkness
and doubt, there is only one thing certain.

Éowyn, love me."


Title: A Diamond In The Storm · Author: SilverMoonLady · Genres:
Romance · ID: 780
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:27:21 Score: 3
Good to see this one finished. It moves too quickly in places for my
taste, and feels a bit rushed, but the characters are well-defined,
and Diamond as the young spitfire works better than the blushing
Shire lass for this newly confident (and competent) Pippin.

Title: Discovery · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Genres: Romance ·
ID: 740
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:28:00 Score: 3
I've got my problems with this one, well-rehearsed in forums. But,
nevertheless, the general set-up is one I can buy. I think my
favorite parts in this story were the fullfillment of one of
Adrahil's visions (I assume) and Boromir and Andrahar saying
farewell. The curse at the end gives me shivers.

Title: Steel and Flame · Author: Flick · Genres: Romance: Poetry ·
ID: 736
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:28:28 Score: 2
Hm, my love-it-can't-believe-it relation to A/B makes this quite the
interesting poem. I quite like it, it's a lovely piece of work, but
it might be harder for non-A/B-shippers to get into it.

Title: Arwen, My Love · Author: Elvenesse · Genres: Romance: Vignette
· ID: 716
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:28:59 Score: 3
The woes of the struggling versifier have seldom been so humorously
recorded. What really made the fic, though, are the notes at the end
to various possible readers. They do rather contradict each other in
parts—if it doesn't matter, why should he be sorry? But that is the
point, after all. Quite amusing!

Title: The Terror Of Buckland · Author: Aratlithiel · Genres:
Romance: Vignette · ID: 698
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:29:26 Score: 6
This was really quite funny, and very well-written. Frodo as the
terror of the *daughters* of Buckland (or perhaps it's their fathers
who are terrorized by the thought of what their daughters are up to
with unknown debonair hobbits) is definitely not the gentlehobbit we
see in later years. Merry's part as the unwilling and just slightly
clueless messenger for ardent young women is well-played, as is
Bilbo's knowing complicity. Maybell stands up very well to scrutiny;
she knows what she wants and is willing to take some risks to get it,
and she's certainly no blushing virgin. Forthright and matter of
fact, with a certain wicked sense of humor, she strikes me as quite
the bold lass. One hopes she never hears about Lilac...

Title: The Clasp Undone · Author: DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan ·
ID: 691
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-21 09:29:51 Score: 2
A haunting tale of an ususually overlooked character in Tolkien's
writings. It could very well be true, and I am pretty sure that the
professor himself would like it. :)

Title: Unafraid · Author: Naresha · Genres: Romance: Poetry · ID: 650
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 09:30:08 Score: 1
I appreciate the sentiment, but couldn't get inside this pairing
through the poem.

Title: The Lady's Gift · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Elves:
Lothlorien · ID: 979
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-21 09:45:02 Score: 1
Sweet and gentle, this story gave me warm feelings and a side of
Galadriel that is often overlooked. Good work.

Title: Diaspora · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Dwarves: Drabble
· ID: 235
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-21 09:55:15 Score: 2
I am always delighted to read stories on the Dwarven culture, and
this drabble caught much of their essence, methinks. And, if I may
add, the title was a stroke of genious. Good work, Dwim!

Title: Good Memories, Like Good Stories · Author: Jeodo Brandybuck ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 906
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 10:28:35 Score: 2
A lovely look at Pippin learning the difference between stories and
real adventures - and finding the courage to do what he must.

Title: Now in silence, now in speech · Author: Tanaqui · Genres:
Romance: Drabble · ID: 1389
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 10:33:03 Score: 2
I like the idea that Faramir is able to bring to life for Éowyn
stories that are dead when she reads them alone. Either that, or he's
secretly writing poems for her! The end's a bit ambiguous, but I like
it that way.

Title: Fire and Ice · Author: Ruby Nye · Genres: Romance: Drabble ·
ID: 1132
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 10:33:43 Score: 2
Nice! I liked the way the fire and ice weren't made to represent the
cold-hearted versus intemperate passion of two lovers, but made to
fit with the memories that Merry and Pippin have and which define and
repell them... towards each other.

Title: Sand and Flame · Author: Tehta · Genres: Romance: Elves · ID:
1130
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 10:34:06 Score: 4
Tehta comes though again with an amusing courtship, cast in the mold
of the Cinderella story, although with several key reversals. Melkor
standing in as a sort of deficient and vaguely malevolent fairy
godfather was quite amusing, as was Nerdanel's quest to find the man
who knows about sand and who made her a glass slipper at the ball.
This is a great blend of an old fairy tale with Tolkien, on the order
of Altariel's "Spirits of the House", except far more funny. Well
done!

Title: Walls and Gates · Author: Adina ATL · Genres: Romance · ID:
1041
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-21 10:35:49 Score: 8
A worthy successur to "Opening Doors"! The glimpses of Elven life, of
the rifts between the Noldor and the Quendi, all get filtered through
a Dwarf's eyes, a Dwarf who has eyes for the stone she must shape but
not, at first, for the partnership she must form with Galadriel. This
is a very unusual sort of romance, since in fact, the romance as such
has already occurred in the previous story. The unusual nature of
this courtship, which is forgotten as soon as dreams fade, only to be
rediscovered at an inopportune moment, makes it hard to track, but
still satisfying as politics and affection and temptation are worked
out in a strange city, which itself seems hardly formed and as new as
this alliance between Galadriel and Narvi. Beyond that, Rohirriel the
elf captain was a lovely original character who gave us a look at
what would later seem to be quintessential elven ways. The first-
person narrative is well-handled, and by the end, one has a glimpse
of the defiant hope that the Last Alliance would raise against the
Shadow of the East.

Well done, Adina ATL, and thank you for a wonderful story.


Title: Memory of Ents · Author: Rabidsamfan · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Friendship · ID: 800
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 10:37:48 Score: 3
I love it that the hobbits have developed an understanding of the
aliveness of the trees, so that they explain why they are taking the
sapling and promise to care for them. And the green eyes at the
end . . . I hope there is some prospect of reunion for the Ents and
Entwives - all thanks to three hobbits. A lovely story.

Title: Sun on the Water · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Romance · ID: 971
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 10:56:36 Score: 1
What a delightful moment in the lives of Faramir and Eowyn. And I am
sure Eowyn preferred it to a swimming lesson!

Title: The Masters of Buckland Have Always Been Romantic · Author:
Saoirse · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Shire · ID: 624
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 11:09:26 Score: 2
I loved this. The generations of Masters and their ladies - sending
messages of love and support down the generations. And in addition,
Merry and Estella are so beautifully drawn.

Title: Spirit of a Sword · Author: Erin's Daughter · Races/Places:
Dwarves · ID: 724
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-21 11:10:45 Score: 1
I am always happy to find good Dawrf stories, and this one was a
little jewel.

Title: Wagers In Rivendell · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Hobbits · ID: 1233
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-21 11:16:12 Score: 3
This is another of GW's delightful gigglers. Written for a challenge,
she manages to work the seven swans in unobtrusively, as she once
more displays her keen understanding of the relationships between the
cousins, and an unsuspecting Legolas is caught in the middle.

Title: Comes the Dawn · Author: Ithilwen · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 418
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 11:44:37 Score: 1
I am so pleased to see Maedhros purge his demons and learn to live
again - and to see him reunited with Maglor.

Title: A Quiet Love · Author: Erin's Daughter · Races/Places: Elves:
Post-Ring War · ID: 723
Reviewer: Ariel · 2005-08-21 11:47:49 Score: 6
I don't read may non-hobbit fics, but I dearly love this one. I read
it ages ago and had to re-read it just now - it's that good.

This story gives Arwen a much deserved better ending than Tolkien
described. It always puzzled me how an immensely aged elf lady could
be so much less 'wise' than her relatively youthful husband? Surely
she knew what would happen when Aragorn died and considered the joy
of her love worth her impending sacrifice? Tolkien's description
makes her almost surprised! This is a much more satisfying and in
character for a woman than the original work. An insightful and much
needed end for the lady. Thank you for giving her peace.

Title: Comfort Me Not With Cookies · Author: Raksha the Demon ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 290
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2005-08-21 11:55:55 Score: 5
Raksha the Demon fiendishly skewers her subject matter, leaving no
cliché unturned and no stereotype unhackneyed in this paean to bad-
fic. This story has it all—crazy, abusive Denethor; teary eyed
Faramir; overly solicitous Boromir; blond and beatiful Legolas; randy
rangers; and an OFC who is the mother of all Mary Sues. There is even
a guest appearance by the mysterious but strangely attractive Figwit.
Special moments include the revelation of the identity of Faramir's
long-lost father (no, it isn't Darth Vader) and Boromir's thoughtful
birthday presents for his little brother.

Title: A Took by Any Other Name · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 773
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 12:06:18 Score: 4
And poor Ferdi continues to suffer. . . But I do love this story -
and I do appreciate the way you dealt with Pippin's ignorance of the
effect his behaviour had on his cousin - even though poor Uncle
Badger has to go. His moments of foresight come in quite handy, too!

The orc story is really tense, but it is the fallout from Paladin and
Pippin's relationships that moves me most.

Title: Oath · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Races/Places: Hobbits: War
of the Ring · ID: 1181
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:08:31 Score: 3
I love how Pippin and Merry work decide that Elrond's words might
have been directed towards Boromir, Legolas and Gimli. It's such a
hobbity thought that they have, when they reason that if the other
members of the Company love Frodo too, then no one would leave. This
is a great gap-filler!

Title: Together In One Breath · Author: Pipspebble · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 816
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:10:37 Score: 2
I love how confident Merry is in Pippin, even when Pippin doubts
himself. And Pippin's determination is remarkable, I love how he
focuses on getting to Merry. It really shows the depth of their
relationship.

Title: All That Glisters · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 914
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 12:12:35 Score: 3
So many good parts - and so many great characters - it is hard to
know where to begin. I like Jack and his boys - and Denny - and the
twining together of humour and drama. I think this is one of my
favourite stories - but the same thing could be said of many of
Lindelea's other tales, too. Well crafted and entertaining.

Title: Away from the Window · Author: Pipspebble · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1082
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:13:54 Score: 2
I love how Merry and Frodo look after Pippin, and how Pip finally
gets well enough to go outside. Hopeful hurt/comfort at its best!

Title: The Trial of Frodo Baggins · Author: Gentle Hobbit · Genres:
Drama (includes Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 1273
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-21 12:15:21 Score: 2
I really enjoyed this careful analysis of Frodo's self-flagellation
and Aragorn's measured judgment of his actions. And he came to the
right conclusions!

Title: Warring Duties · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 806
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:17:16 Score: 3
I love how you show Gandalf's history with people other than hobbits,
that tends to get overlooked in many fics. Pippin's voice is so vivid
here, and I love how you show his concern and pride for Merry. This
really does seem like a missing book-scene.

Title: In the Company of Friends · Author: SlightlyTookish ·
Races/Places: Cross-Cultural · ID: 830
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-21 12:20:24 Score: 5
What a lovely story! Of course there would be need for a dentist
after the battles they saw!

You have captured my vision of Pippin so perfectly, well, actually
all the hobbits. So pure of heart, such good and dedicated, loyal
friends, yet concerned for others. And even Gimli, who softens up and
yet doesn't want to reveal it.

"You'll feel a bit of pressure," Belecthor warned, You MUST either
work for a dentist or have just been to a dentist when you wrote
this. WHY do they ALWAYS say 'pressure' ... It always feels like more
than just pressure to me!

Very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed your story!

Title: Nightly Noises · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Friendship · ID: 827
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:20:54 Score: 3
An excellent look at Merry and Pippin's life at Crickhollow, and
their recovery from their hurts. I love all the hurt/comfort here,
and Pippin's nightmare is so terrifyingly vivid. I especially like
how you stage the final conversation near the Hedge where their
adventure began, showing how they have come full circle.

Title: Echoes · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Mystery · ID: 969
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-21 12:23:13 Score: 3
I can't believe I found a GW story that I had not before read! This
was amazing, angsty, and suspenseful, yet completely shot through
with the patented GW brand of humor as well. I absolutely loved the
plot device, though I won't give it away here for any who might still
want to be surprised! Brilliant!

Title: Pitfalls of the Palantir · Author: Haleth · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 1296
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-21 12:23:18 Score: 2
"walrus-handled it" What a wonderful description!

I've often wondered this myself what would have happened if a
Palantir found its way onshore. I love the idea of the Odob -- who
better! What an interesting plot-bunny to watch hatch.

Title: Tall Tales · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 1153
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:25:19 Score: 2
I love your Farry! This is such a great father-son story. I love
seeing Pippin as a father here, and trying to be so brave for his
son, and it's no wonder why Faramir wants to be just like him.

Title: Wizard's Watch · Author: Pipspebble · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings · ID: 1227
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:26:36 Score: 2
I love how Gandalf emphasizes that the hobbits are his family, and
that he loves them and will look after them even when they anger him.
This is such a great moment of friendship between Gandalf and Pippin.

Title: Blood Ties · Author: Pipspebble · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship · ID: 834
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:27:03 Score: 2
This is a great moment between Merry and Pippin as they remember
Frodo. Esmeralda's presence here is great as she cares for her son
and nephew and yet keeps her distance, knowing that they have to work
through their pain alone.

Title: The trouble with Jam · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 882
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-21 12:27:46 Score: 2
This is adorable! Wee young Pippin sure can be logical when it comes
to getting his food. And I love how you ended it .. even once he gets
the jam, he still can't get 'to' it! A nicely told story.

Title: The Bow · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 161
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-21 12:30:57 Score: 4
"...glittered like the dappled sunlight falling through the leaves
onto the stream..."

What evocative description you have used throughout this story, and
then to realize what it was Thranduil watched, and how the tradition
continued -- and improved -- from father to son.

What a lovely concept -- and you have managed to capture the emotions
of Thranduil even while he tries not to show them. Well done!

Title: It Takes A Took · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Pippin · ID: 823
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 12:57:28 Score: 2
This is a lovely version of how Pippin and Diamond's relationship
started. The epilogue is especially wonderful, I love the Frodo's
presence was felt on their special day.

Title: A Question of Trolls · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 776
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 13:00:42 Score: 3
You don't see too many moments between Bilbo and Pippin, and this is
an especially wonderful one! I love how Bilbo explains how he altered
his stories to make them suitable for children, and how he never
expected his young cousins to face anything so terrible.

Title: Lamentation · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Post-Ring War · ID: 919
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 13:03:35 Score: 2
I love how musical your Pippin always is. This is such a great angsty
piece; I love how Merry panics for a bit, wondering where Pippin is,
and how he comforts him.

Title: A `Just Because' Gift · Author: grey_wonderer · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1187
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 13:09:05 Score: 2
This is so lovely. I adore their trip to the junk shop and all the
descriptions of what's in it, and most especially Bilbo's
conversation with Merry.

Title: The trouble with Jam · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Children · ID: 882
Reviewer: SlightlyTookish · 2005-08-21 13:12:18 Score: 1
I love how determined Pippin is, even when he is constantly (and
unwittingly) thwarted in his quest.

Title: Payment Put Off · Author: pippinfan88 · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1038
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-21 13:31:35 Score: 6
This is such a sweet and touching story. I like the explanation given
for why Pippin must return and live, and the way that it was shown to
him.

The thought that Merry and Pippin were two halves of one whole at
that time in their lives is so believable. The thoughts that the
other was safe was so often the only thing that kept each of them
going. I have no doubt that Merry would have followed shortly if
Pippin had died.

The depiction of Pippin's innocense and cheek, even to the powers
that be of the Over-Heaven, is wonderful.

The scene at the end just made for a nice image of what eventual was
to come in its own rightful time.

Thanks.

Title: Sunshine and Laughter · Author: Anastasia · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1232
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-21 13:40:07 Score: 2
I could see Gandalf doing something like that for Pippin. The old
Wizard really did love that little hobbit, and it shows.

Thank you for sharing this sweet moment in their lives with us.

Title: Take the Little Ones · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Elves · ID: 163
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 13:52:37 Score: 8
Take the little ones is an impressive story. Spaceweavil approaches
this story in such a magnificent manner: it is breathtaking. Every
word is carefully balanced; the narrative is truly stunning. The way
he author describes Ost-in-Edhil, the pride and the downfall… for me
it fits canon perfectly. As a reader, I feel like if I am truly
there, witnessing the events through the main character's eyes. The
grief of Erestor is so tangible and yet he manages to keep himself
under control. Until the moment one of the children asks for nana,
which was truly heartbreaking. In Tolkien canon, not much is known
about Erestor, but the way his history is written in such a short
piece is masterfully done.

This story is an incredible story that gives us more insight of
Erestor, I like the manner the author approached it, weaving in the
flaws of elvenkind and yet leaving hope for the future to come. Well
written, carefully constructed in story building, the pacing is
excellent and the way the author keeps the tension in the story: this
story is a great piece of work written by Spaceweavil.


Title: Where Roses Grow · Author: pippinfan88 · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 589
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-21 13:53:04 Score: 8
When I read this story, I was so relieved that I wasn't the only one
that thought something like this could happen. I always suspected
that if any of the four hobbits were to make this mistake, it would
be Pippin. He's so impulsive.

The bitter feeling of both young people at the time of the wedding
are quite believable. The fact that they only slowly come to like and
then even love each other is very realistic, too.

I cried when I figured out that Pippin was going to lose both his
young wife and little girl. The emotional roller-coaster was almost
too much, but life is like that sometimes. The alternate ending was
sweet, but we all knew it couldn't really be that way. Pippin had to
move on and build a new life with the person he was meant to be with.

I found it clever that the timing of this story is such that it could
have fit within canon, if people could accept that hobbits have
moments of moral weekness just like we do, without messing up any
established relationships or timelines.

Well done. Just thinking about this story can make me misty-eyed.

Title: Seven for a Secret · Author: Kielle · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Elves · ID: 1090
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 13:59:52 Score: 3
I like this vignette written by Kielle because it is extremely
thought provoking. Her starting line immediately makes me wonder what
will follow next. Although her second son is much alike her, it makes
me wonder if Nerdanel gave more to him then she thought. A good
exploration of a character that deserves more attention.

Title: Foresight · Author: quirky_orthodox · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 1044
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 14:03:43 Score: 2
This is a story worth while telling. One can only wonder why Haldir
was the one showing up at Helms Deep. Quirky takes her time in
exploring Haldir and why he seemed so determined to march. Nicely
written: compact and effective.

Title: The Doom of Mandos · Author: quirky_orthodox · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 1043
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 14:07:03 Score: 3
I had the privilegde of reading more of this story then author has
online. I absolutely like the author's approach of this au-story, she
explores the what if to the maximum. It still needs a bit of
tweaking, but I am confident that she manages to do so. Tricky
Galadriel, the members of the Fellowship gets unique cameo's. Keep it
up Quirky!

Title: Weariness · Author: quirky_orthodox · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Vignette · ID: 375
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 14:08:30 Score: 2
This is such a sad story, but yet there is hope for redemption. While
the author explores the differences between Maglor and Celeborn, you
can see in the end that all elves are the same, despite their
background. Thoughtfully written.

Title: The Dare · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin
· ID: 778
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-21 14:53:40 Score: 4
I really enjoyed this tale because it takes a very dangerous
situation and teaches us all a lesson from it which starts with peer
pressure, takes us through the anguish of possible loss of life over
this pointless dare, and then we see how the bonds of love between
the best of friends are renewed, strengthened. We can all learn a
lesson or two from this wonderful story.

Title: Under The Lilac Bushes · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1168
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-21 15:00:18 Score: 2
What a sweet and lovely tale! Merry and Sam as wee children--and
little Marigold is a scene stealer! I had to laugh at Merry thinking
both Marigold and Pervinca being so bossy. Loved it!

Title: Artist's Appreciation · Author: sulriel · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 146
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-21 15:01:34 Score: 3
Now I would make a bet that a great many of your readers wished that
they were Lhende, because I certainly did. This is a lovely find both
because of its unusual take on Celeborn, who for once gets to be a
bit of a poster boy, and also because it isn't overdone or mushy. I
really did enjoy reading it on many different levels. Great job!

Title: The Bow · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 161
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-21 15:07:43 Score: 4
The bow is a beautiful story about a father and a son, but it is
written in such way that it covers more then one generation. I love
the insight in Thandruil's life his thoughts, emotions regarding his
father and his son and his role in Mirkwood. This is an excellent
character piece, written with so much care that I surely hope there
will be more. Space Weavil says she's considering it... one can only
hope.

Title: The Road to Edoras · Author: Dreamflower · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 872
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-21 15:18:06 Score: 6
This is proving to be a wonderful, imaginative story that I'm
thoroughly hooked on. I just finished the prequel, "A New Reckoning",
so I am ready to travel with Captain Freddy, Jolly, Poppy, and the
rest of the envoy all the way to Edoras--and hopefully to Gondor,
though its not clear yet how far the telling of this tale will go--as
for kingdoms, so to speak. Poor author--I keep badgering the poor
lass about one of the prisoners redeeming himself--as if I could
influence her! She is a fantastic author with a brilliant imagination
and a natural talent for writing. I am looking forward to more of
this tale in the coming days.

Title: Important Choices · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Humor:
Hobbits · ID: 879
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-21 15:32:46 Score: 10
The author had me rolling on the floor laughing my guts out with this
story! She has this flair, this gift for writing my favorite hobbits
bantering back and forth to the point of exhaustion--on my part--from
too much laughter. Merry is so serious--and rightly so--about which
waistcoat to wear while proposing to Estella. Then he opens up this
huge walk-in closet full of neatly folded waistcoats of all colors
and designs. Frodo has absolutely no idea as how to proceed with
helping Merry decide with all the different types to choose from.
Pippin, who is amusing himself by pushing Merry's buttons during the
whole agonizing process. Merry ignores Pippin's choices while
entertaining Frodo's. It's all so hilarious! Finally, Pippin forces
his way in to offer Merry some sound advice regarding fashion
statements. Merry is so nervous that only after Frodo agrees with
their young cousin does Merry consider Pippin's choice as a good
one...or a fair one. Poor Merry! I loved this wee tale of Merry's
indecision.

The author has always captured me with her wild imagination, which
excels greatly at slapstick--and she's GOOD at it. Not many people
can get away with blending hobbits and that sort of comedic element.
I have enjoyed every single one of Grey Wonderer's tales--this is
just one of them. Thanks, G.W. for a fantastic read!

Title: The Creation of Horses · Author: Elwen_Aiwelinde ·
Races/Places: Men: Poetry · ID: 275
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:23:41 Score: 3
Ah! a poem that is near and dear to my heart. I always love to read
about horses.

I especially love this line:
"Wild and wandering, the wind arose,
Blew its breath through bone and sinew,"

you capture their nuances so well - a very enjoyable read. Thank you.


Title: The Arial Object · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 972
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:36:14 Score: 2
very very cute, - the arial object indeed. - my sons play with such,
not in the house anymore due to the potential for damage *G*

Title: A Soldier's Tale · Author: grey_wonderer · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Children · ID: 1134
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:38:02 Score: 2
So like the kids! I especially enjoyed how you transitioned between
real-life and fantasy, pulling the reader easily in both directions.

Title: Bedazzled · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 976
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:46:00 Score: 2
"Dancers dizzy themselves" - I love this line. we so often think only
of food and drink, but I'm sure that the Hobbits loved the dance as
well.

Title: House of Dust and Memory · Author: Itarille · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 523
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 18:54:28 Score: 2
A heart-rending yet healing picture of two under-written
characters... -two of the strongest women of Middle-earth, supporting
each other in their pain of loss. I would love to read more about
them.

Title: A Missing Piece of History. · Author: jillian baade ·
Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 646
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 19:01:53 Score: 2
Oh Jillian, what a wonderful terrible twist to LaCE - so well done,
woven in and through canon the way you know I love to do, playing
with the loopholes.

Title: The Song of the Rock · Author: Joan Milligan · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Gondolin · ID: 1084
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 19:04:05 Score: 2
I especially enjoy the depth of imagery in this, the irony, the pride
and the pain.

"Now, what were those tidings you have said you bring me?"

terribly chilling...

Title: Eärendil's Tale · Author: Bodkin · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion · ID: 1331
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-21 19:15:37 Score: 5
I do believe Earendil to be the single greatest hero of JRRTolkien's
entire epic and I especially enjoyed your tale of him.

" ... And you came out of the West, blazing with white flame, the
host of Eagles accompanying you ..."

This one line, from early in your first chapter summarizes for me who
and what he is - a son of kings and queens and heroes, the father of
the same, he gave -all- even his family- for the chance to bring help
to them, and to this day sails the night skies with the bright
Silmaril on his brow.

Title: As Good As You · Author: pearltook1 · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Shire · ID: 854
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-21 19:52:26 Score: 5
This is such an honest look at Paladin and his Thainship. I don't
think I've read any other story that has him so accurately assess his
strengths and weaknesses as a leader.

Pippin's lack of confidence is so believable, too. The fear of losing
himself seems truly like something he would deal with.

This is so sad and yet so hopeful, all at once. It made me want to
know what they did in the few remaining days they had together, and
how Pippin handled his first few days as Took and Thain. I'm sure his
do would have been proud.

Thanks.

Title: Offerings · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races/Places: Gondor:
Boromir and Faramir · ID: 322
Reviewer: Branwyn · 2005-08-21 20:47:49 Score: 8
This is a beautiful piece of writing. The two sections are written in
close parallel to show the contrast between the characters of Faramir
and his father.

Denethor has great respect for tradition so he brings the customary
garland of flowers as a funerary offering for his father. His actions
have the feel of ancestor worship, which is appropriate since
Denethor is highly suspicious of change and venerates the past.
Though he goes through these acts of filial love and duty, they are
empty motions since his thoughts dwell on the bitterness of the past.
His assertion that "We inherit our fathers' shadows" is ominous and
sad.

When Faramir visits Denethor's tomb, he puts aside tradition and,
instead of flowers, he brings the new heir to their house. His
thoughts and actions look to the future. I love how the birth of his
son gives him a new perspective on his own father; now he can
understand how Denethor had been driven mad by the loss of a child.

The piece is written in a spare and formal style that perfectly fits
the subject matter. Well done!


Title: Where the Stars Are Strange · Author: Dwimordene ·
Races/Places: Men · ID: 255
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-21 23:14:44 Score: 7
Dwim claims in her summary that this is "the existential Aragorn".
I'm not sure I necessarily agree with that statement. At least so far
as I understand existentialism, it means that we determine our
essential qualities, rather than having those essential qualities
determined by some other before we come into existence. Throughout
this story Aragorn struggles with his identity and which of his many
names capture the true essence of him -- but who he is seems to be
something of which he does not have control. Not to say this piece
doesn't have existential moments, like Aragorn's injunction to
Indirkan to "Turn your questions inward! Ask yourself: why did you
not slit my throat when you could easily have done so?" All in all,
it's a nice blend of philosophy, angst, and action, somehow universal
but also well-situated in Middle-earth.

Title: For Eyes to See as Can · Author: Larner · Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings: The Shire · ID: 176
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-21 23:17:52 Score: 6
Someone asked me once if I was trying to rewrite the entire story
from Sam's point of view, and I laughed, but the truth is, Larner got
there ahead of me. This is a masterpiece, one which not only tells
the story again, but adds layers and layers to it. Here is Sam,
choosing Frodo as his own master at the age of ten, observing Bilbo
and Frodo together through the years, and learning still more once
the quest has begun.

I love the details in this story, the things which weave through it
from beginning to end, like the little writing desk which Bilbo gave
to Frodo, and the cloak and watch which are symbols of the mastery of
Bag End. It is a tale touched with sorrow, but which still holds joy.

Excellent.

Title: Out of All Knowledge · Author: Budgielover · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 178
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-21 23:18:24 Score: 5
Rereading this, I am overwhelmed again by the detail and the care
that goes into it. There are so many elements which enrich this that
it's hard to call it a gap-filler. I love Bilbo's meeting with Sam,
and the hobbits' reaction to Elrond's search for the Morgul shard. I
love too poor Aragorn realizing that he's sadly miscalculated hobbit
capacity, and the reaction of the Cook and other Elves to having such
hearty appetites among them. The resolution of the story is still
frightening, but all to the good. Thank you!

Title: A Lesson on Hobbits · Author: Budgielover · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 177
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-21 23:19:02 Score: 4
I do love this tale, and I'll admit to being both curious and excited
to find it in the "Incomplete" section. Does that mean there will be
more? I certainly hope so!

Boromir's chapter is a delight, of course, and so is Legolas', but my
favorite is Gimli's. There's something which is so delightful about
the image of our favorite dwarf bundled up with two hobbits on either
side like a broody hen!

Thank you!

Title: Thicker Than Blood · Author: Ariel · Races/Places: Hobbits:
War of the Ring · ID: 669
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-21 23:26:08 Score: 3
There can never be too many tales telling us about those dark days
when Frodo lay injured at Rivendell for me, and this one always
leaves me weeping. It has some of the best insights into Sam's part
of it, and Bilbo's too, as well as a great sense of tension -- I know
perfectly well how it will all turn out and yet I sit and read,
losing fingernails as I go.

Thank you.

Title: Before the Call to Muster · Author: Lindelea · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 461
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-21 23:28:49 Score: 5
I think my favourite line is this was Pippin's observation that
he "was almost used to Merry falling into silence, this new and
strange Merry, called back to life by the hands of the King" --
called back to life struck me, because it means that, at least to
some degree, Merry was dead. That seems a good way of describing the
black breath. Although I also really liked Merry's thoughts "When did
you grow so wise? When did your eyes grow old?" The perfect way of
getting to the heart of the sobering effect trauma can have on
people. And the ending of just saying thank-you was perfectly hobbity.

Title: When the King Returned · Author: Ninquelosse · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 497
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-22 00:04:06 Score: 5
A while ago I suggested a challenge over at HASA about characters who
disagreed with their leaders' chosen course of action. While I think
this story was written before I suggested that challenge (and I
certainly have no cause to think it was written in response to it),
this seems to be a good embodiment of that challenge's spirit. Here
we have an "everyman", a bit like Beregond though his political
ambitions differ. He is perfectly situated in Gondor's politics so
much as they effect him, but he also is his own man (or boy, more
like), and his fears felt real.

Title: Before the Doors of the Houses of Healing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 529
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-22 00:30:47 Score: 7
This is another one of those gapfillers that takes on a moment I
never imagined happening before I read the piece, but which I am glad
were written because they enrich Middle-earth so well. It makes sense
that Imrahil would be livid at the fact that Gandalf didn't share his
knowledge of what was happening in the hallows. Of course Imrahil
being Imrahil would be pretty restrained about his feelings and not
let them rule him.

That's the other thing that I like so much about this piece: the
choice of point-of-view. I think anything other than first would have
been too distanced for the emotional impact this story relies on, and
the choice of Imrahil as narrator was perfect. He's not an impetuous
youth, which I think would have taken the story too close to
maudlin.Yet he was just close enough to the people involved that it
really tugged on the strings of your heart. Well done, Liz.

Title: Bedazzled · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 976
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:22:44 Score: 1
A joyous jangle of words, description at it's best. Thank you!

Title: What Should Not Be Forgotten · Author: Budgielover ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 179
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:23:13 Score: 3
As much as I love this story for the main part of it, I also love it
for the small details about Merry and Pippin doing as much to take
care of Sam as they are doing to take care of Frodo. And I love it
for the wisdom too, of knowing that some scars are worth everything
that was paid.

Title: Elves and Potatoes · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Hobbits · ID: 185
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:23:35 Score: 2
This story is rich in marvelous details, particularly the details
about gardening and the kind of plants and flowers which might be in
the gardens of Bag End. It's a wonderful, gentle story, and I thank
you for it.

Title: Changes · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-
Ring War Drabble · ID: 231
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:24:01 Score: 1
Nicely done. I like the contrast between Bilbo's party and this one.

Title: A Gift · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:26:18 Score: 2
Excellent! This one made me smile at the thought of Pippin getting
well-worn mathoms as presents most of his life until Bilbo gives him
something new, and then laugh out loud at the end when his
imagination takes over.

Title: Flowers in Disguise · Author: Holdur · Races/Places: Hobbits ·
ID: 377
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:29:05 Score: 2
The Gaffer doesn't always come off well in fanfic, but in this
lovely, gentle piece he teaches Sam a lesson which resonates
strongly. Very nice!

Title: Spoons · Author: LKK · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 644
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:31:16 Score: 2
*snort* I love this glimpse of Lobelia's thoughts, and the
consequences! That umbrella was probably bulging like a piglet...

Title: Marigold · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 784
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:32:34 Score: 2
Nice. This series about Marigold provides a good look at the "make it
while you can" opportunistic necessity of being from a poor family,
and of the satisfactions of earning your own money too. Very hobbity!

Title: Elements of the Resistance · Author: Marta · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 939
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:35:55 Score: 2
Fascinating and dark, this drabble series gives us a quick, chilling
sense of Fatty's experiences during that terrible year. I loved
Shadow, especially, and the way that the story brought in Estella and
Farmer Maggot.

Title: My Sons of Gondor · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 911
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:40:16 Score: 2
The scene where Faramir and the Rangers ride out in the film is
terribly bitter, and that bitterness is caught here in a glimpse of
the thoughts of one family member watching. Excellent.

Title: Cormallen · Author: Frodo Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) ·
Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 799
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:47:31 Score: 6
This loving piece has each of the members of the Fellowship looking
at Frodo at the Feast of Cormallen. Aragorn and Gandalf are caught up
in memories, Pippin and Sam are trying to console Frodo and heal him
with food and drink, and Merry is caught between, with his own hurts
giving him a horrible understanding of what Frodo's injuries mean,
and the heart of his fascination with herbs giving him some
consolation.
And then, the piece expands its view, with Gimli looking at all the
hobbits, and Legolas able to step back and look at the entire
Fellowship, with an understanding that has grown and changed.


Title: The Bone That He Boned From Its Owner · Author: lilybaggins ·
Genres: Humor · ID: 1237
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 05:52:40 Score: 3
As Frodo rests near the stone trolls after Weathertop he sees more
than he had considered before, and he can't help but consider it now!

This is one of those stories that leaves your eyebrows nested
somewhere in your hair even while you find yourself giggling
helplessly. What great fun!

Title: While the Ring Went South... · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 33
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:46:32 Score: 4
There's a reason this story is a classic in LotR fanfic, and that
reason is good characterization. Each member of the fellowship is
recognizable here -- acting from motivations which fit well into
canon. The additional details of the journey south fit well too,
which only adds to the delight.

This story is one of my all time favorites and will probably stay
near the top of the list for a long long time.

Title: At the Sammath Naur · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 126
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:47:36 Score: 3
I've read this before, but it's stunning every time. I particularly
like the way that the words wind Frodo deeper and deeper into the
thrall of the Ring, and how the new perception he gains with claiming
it does not completely bury the hobbit who would have tried anyway...

Title: To Water the Dust · Author: Eruanna · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 77
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:48:03 Score: 2
Excellent. This is an ingenious story that weaves what we know of
Ulmo into Sam and Frodo's tale seamlessly and makes me think of
Gandalf telling Frodo that Sauron is not the only power in the world.

Title: Foolish Hobbit · Author: Tialys · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 120
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:48:37 Score: 2
Angry Frodo! And imperious too, when he's giving Gandalf what for! I
like Gandalf's calm way of taking it. He knows Sam pretty well for an
old wizard, doesn't he?

Title: A Merry Meeting at Bree · Author: maranya14 · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War · ID: 211
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:49:58 Score: 3
This is such a fun story! I like the characterization of Nob, and of
Barliman too, as well as the way the hobbits and Big People interact.
Thanks for sneaking in the line about a "proper fourteen twenty" too -
- it's the grounding in what we know of the Fourth Age that makes
this story work so well. (And bringing along Bergil helped, at least
for me.)

Title: Lesson Learned: Spring Flood, 1433 · Author: Dreamflower ·
Books/Time: Post-Ring War: General Drabble · ID: 1112
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:50:54 Score: 1
There are things beyond anyone's power to change and this drabble
lets us see Merry learning that.

Title: Fire and Ice · Author: Ruby Nye · Genres: Romance: Drabble ·
ID: 1132
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:51:59 Score: 3
I remember loving this the moment I first read it, and I love it all
the more now. This story ties in Merry's experiences with cold, and
Pippin's experiences with fire in such a way that the echoes are
almost painful. But the end is lovely and soothing.

Title: Climbing · Author: Ancalime8301 · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 88
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:52:55 Score: 2
A neat bit of storytelling, this. It makes me ache just reading it,
and catches the dilemma of whether to trust or not trust Smeagol very
well indeed.

Title: Entitlement · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID:
537
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:57:59 Score: 3
*snicker* When Aragorn decides to take on the fanfic writers over
certain... inaccuracies... and ends up with a small entourage at a
convention, delight ensues -- at least for the readers of this
ficlet! I think my favorite part must be Pippin preparing to defend
Legolas from the ladies...

Title: The Mark of a... Warrior? · Author: Ariel · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 133
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 06:58:54 Score: 4
Omg, help! *falls off chair howling*

I loved this the first time I read it, although you hadn't dealt with
Gandalf then, and I love it now all the more. I thought I'd break
something when I read that last line and considered the implications!

*takes a deep puff on her asthma inhaler* This is still one of the
most brilliant, hilarious, bang-on-target vignettes about the travels
of the Fellowship that has ever hit the internet and I hope you get
lots of points for it!

Title: Fairer Than Most · Author: SlightlyTookish · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 69
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:07:04 Score: 3
"No, sir," Sam replied, shaking his head. "Sometimes they're even
worse."

This story is a delight! I love Frodo's description of his cousins,
and Sam's brave attempts to keep out of the discussion at all. And
the explanations at the end as the cousins clear the air are just
right.

Title: And the Halfling Forth Shall Stand · Author: Shirebound ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 511
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:07:28 Score: 2
I've always thought this was a neat summation of the answer to the
question about who else might have done the task if Frodo hadn't
survived Weathertop. Very well done.

Title: 110 · Author: Aeneid · Races/Places: Men · ID: 59
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:07:54 Score: 3
If I hadn't been messing around trying to see how to put stories into
order I might not have read this, and it would have been a loss. I
enjoyed it very much, and finished thinking, "No wonder he was cranky
at the Council!" But I was smiling. Thank you!

Title: And Now to Bed · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 783
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:09:49 Score: 2
I like the way the four drabbles are split into eight notions, before
and after for each of the hobbits or even more if you count Sam's
forward knowledge of Frodo across the sea. I can see them all quite
clearly.

Title: Small · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin ·
ID: 1033
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:10:21 Score: 2
I rather enjoyed this. I liked the comparison of the hawk and the
wren, and I certainly felt Pippin's pain at being passed over for
someone younger on the basis of size!

Title: Chasing and Burg'ling · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 580
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:11:40 Score: 2
Ah, the Gaffer! He does have his own way of seeing things, doesn't
he? And in this small story Frodo can listen in and find a bit of the
truth in the old hobbits grumbling.

Title: The Lady's Gift · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Elves:
Lothlorien · ID: 979
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:12:17 Score: 2
Aw, I love this. I love the details, the way that she had made
Frodo's gift the night before but waited til dawn for Sam, and the
much longer list of "G"s than we had before. But the end nearly had
me in tears... Marvelous! Thank you!

Title: A Proper Course of Action · Author: Aliana · Genres: Humor ·
ID: 78
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:12:48 Score: 3
*snorgle*

This is fun. It's just serious enough to be logical and just silly
enough to have me grinning by the time I'd read three paragraphs.
Each suggestion only makes it funnier. I love Eowyn's solution -- and
the Elvish translation at the very end left me howling.

Thank you!

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Hobbit:
Drabble · ID: 1359
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:15:17 Score: 2
This drabble is a very nice summary of the chapter of the same name
from The Hobbit, with a soupcon of fresh insight. I particularly like
Bilbo's conflicting thoughts in the last line.

Title: Upon a Field of Gold · Author: Dana · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 277
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-22 07:19:47 Score: 3
An excellent example of what a drabble series can do. This tale is
told in short swift breaths, some of them painful and some of them
sighs of relief. A beautiful look at the time that Merry spent when
he was the only hobbit standing at Cormallen. (And a nice bit of
hurt/comfort for Pippin as well!)

Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 702
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-22 09:28:18 Score: 3
Gosh, now that was a wonderful read. I really felt drawn into the
narrative by the brilliantly evocative descriptions. A stunning
little gem of a fic which intertwines several aspects of canon into
one seamless whole and produces something special. Lovely!

Title: Renewal · Author: Bodkin · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gap-
Filler · ID: 883
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-22 09:50:10 Score: 4
Absolutely perfect! This story has everything I ever want to read in
a fanfic. It is emotional without going overboard, honest without
being soppy and to top it all off it is also downright hilarious in
places. I think if ever someone were to nominate a best fanfiction
paragraph it would have to be the one describing the 'fights' between
Celeborn and Galadriel. I really do love reading Bodkin's work and,
although I may not often say so, I think she's brilliant.

Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 702
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 09:59:45 Score: 5
WOW, Do you describe pain well or WHAT! Laughter causing pain
reminded me of my very painful first cescarian. My husband would try
to cheer me, only to have my own laughter bring me to tears.
FanTAstic job with all that, and the muddled insights going through
his mind! Nothing seemed unlikely or out of place to me. And oh dear
the nightengale! What happened to it? I should probably reread so as
to understand, dang it. It is probably another one of those "I would
understand if i had read the Sil" things. Still, such beautiful
imagry! Nice job interweaving the two tales as well. congrats and
good luck!

Title: Ties That Bind · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 457
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 10:09:31 Score: 2
A lovely look into the sadness felt by Legolas. Very touching! "my
heart too heavy. . " is a great line! A prelude to the feelings he
expresses in lothlorien. Very tolkienish. i Loved it.

Title: Life in the Angle · Author: Leaward · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 181
Reviewer: Minuialeth · 2005-08-22 10:11:02 Score: 10
When I first started reading this story, I was amazed at how much
Leaward could channel in her feelings to the reader and yet
intricately describe everything around her hero Tarkil. Soon enough
it became clear that it was not just the opening scene, but an entire
story that borders on being an original fic. The emotions are not
only shining brightly across each page and paragraph, they are clear,
penetrating and diverse. Ranging from moments of witty humour to
thrilling, breath stopping suspense, the events flowed in a light
rhythm that left the reader wanting more. Though the ambience is not
heavily stressed, one feels that it comes quite naturally. The words
simply stimulate the imagination and you find yourself smiling at
Haldon's antics, sympathising with Poppi and cheering Tarkil on.
This, I believe, gave the story a human feel, rarely found in fanfic,
particularly ones that deal with such ambiguous characters as the
rangers, not to mention their everyday lives and worries. The
vividness of every character breathes life into the story so much
that the readers' interaction only becomes natural. Even though the
style is simple, the ideas are not.
Some of the ideas, Leaward tackled not only hit home with every
reader, they are at the very heart of human life. "Tired of being
patient" Yes, it seems like we keep willing ourselves to be patient
and endure but we always lose control at some point. We all have a
boss figure in our lives, who drives us up the wall but we can make
up excuses for him when we are in our finer mood. The plot is quite
original. Yet, it weaves itself intimately into Tolkien's bigger one…
In short, a brilliant work in its complex simplicity! If this just
the beginning of the series, I'ld definitely love to see what comes
next.


Title: Hand in Hand · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Hobbits · ID: 888
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 10:49:09 Score: 7
Oh dear! I exaggerate not. You had me in tears. I have felt, as frodo
felt, empty, must stay empty, must keep that wall in place or all
will crumble. and Oh, the inanities of what people say when they are
trying to comfort those who have lost more than their heart can
handle loosing. You captured bilbo's thoughts SO well to me. That
spark of life that drew Frodo to him above all Bagginses, put out
like a quenched candle. How wonderful that it was bilbo himself to
help spark that light. That wall will keep trying to raise itself,
but Frodo has Bilbo so that is good.

I loved that it was from Bilbo's pov. I love how B handled the
situation. And Oh! A foreshadowing of Frodo "saving" B from the ring?
when he puts his small hand into the one which wanted to reach for
the ring!

Fabulous fabulous. I do LOVE a story that makes me cry!

Title: In Plain Sight · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gap-Filler · ID: 885
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 11:00:56 Score: 8
Fantastic. Utterly wonderful. Not the feeling of Tolkien, but that is
all for the better. You still managed to capture the personalities of
your cast. Not a moment of the story went by when I didn't at least
have a smile on my face. Much of the time I was litteraly laughing
out loud. What a refreshing story. How wonderful of you to realize,
that yes, frodo went through some tough times; later leading to his
leaving middle earth, but even those in the midst of such times can
appreciate good food and good times. (i speak somewhat from
experience) I know quoting is frowned upon for this voting process,
and anyway, I would end up quoting a great deal of the story back to
you. And well, having written it, I'm sure you've already read it.
Just know that i found it to be utterly perfect. Especially the scene
with gandalf and frodo at the end. I do hope you have another story
out there where the wizard takes part in the fun? I look forward to
reading more of your works. Great job!! congrats!

Title: Object Lessons · Author: Aliana · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 586
Reviewer: Beethoven's 7th · 2005-08-22 11:02:49 Score: 10
That was FANTASTIC. I almost didn't read it, wary to read another
badly done frodo story. But this was NOT one of those. The insites
into Frodo's feelings about his part in the quest and the state of
the world were perfectly done. Not overly stated, nor under. Almost
poetic. Quite beautiful really! I'm gushing I know.

"That burden. . " This part so clearly spoke of his feelings of
failure. He succumbed to the ring's call and was not truly the one
who threw it in. We know of course that this fact does not lessen his
accomplishment. Your Eowyn knows this as well, when she speaks of it
holding so many in its thrall.

The fact that you made this encounter the only Eowyn and Frodo have
just adds to the perfection of it. Makes it all the more beautiful
and precious, if i may use that word (wink). I love the way she
hordes the memory to herself, afraid to cheapen it by the retelling.

A paragraph that truly made my jaw drop with it's fantastic poetry is
the one that includes "Look long and well, he seems to say to her, "
So sad and wonderful. How many in the excitement of of the winning of
the war saw the cost of that win so truly as your frodo has. The
elves I"m sure, but what of Men? Do they know that with the worst,
they have also lost the best?

I just can't seem to gush enough over this wonderful piece. You were
SO right to nominate yourself for it. It deserves it's chance in the
sun.
Oh and WOW, the "receding" imagry at the very end! Perfect! I will be
recommending this story to others and I look forward to reading more
of your works.

Title: Enmities · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs ·
ID: 561
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-22 12:11:19 Score: 1
What must it have been like, for the last few pitiful remnants of
orcs left after the War? An orc's POV.

Title: This Too Shall Pass · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea ·
Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 742
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-22 12:21:09 Score: 1
A very dark and very funny bit of AU movie-verse humor!

Title: The Cornfield · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Villains · ID:
530
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-22 12:25:57 Score: 2
A very good explanation for the otherwise inexplicable movie-verse
moment. Of course Sam *would* notice a previously unknown plant,
wouldn't he?

Title: Well Favored · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 417
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-22 12:33:26 Score: 2
I really love this! An engaging OFC, not at all a Mary Sue, and a
brilliant use of a minor cano<br/><br/>(Message over 64 KB, truncated)

Msg# 5227

Author reviews: incompletes Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 23, 2005 - 21:30:30 Topic ID# 5227
I've noticed that there's not a separate category for incompletes when
it comes to Author Reviews. Should there be?

Dwim

Msg# 5228

Re: Author reviews: incompletes Posted by sulriel August 23, 2005 - 21:34:46 Topic ID# 5227
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:> I've noticed that there's not a separate category for
incompletes when> it comes to Author Reviews. Should there be?
> > Dwim



I was initially confused because two of the author reviews I did, I
thought, weren't showing up. - because they were in the incomplete
cate.

but - then the incomplete cate disappeared and they were popped into
general in their main cates.

but - then - someone else posted an author review for one of them,
and it went in an incomplete.

so the answer is, - I don't know. Anthony will have to answer that
one or Ainae, because I think there are some errors with that.

Sulriel

Msg# 5229

Re: Just to let you all know Posted by Elena Tiriel August 24, 2005 - 2:31:58 Topic ID# 5212
My condolences, Ainae.

- Barbara

On 8/22/05, Ainaechoiriel <mefaadmin@earthlink.net> wrote:
> ...why I'm slow in responding.
>
> I was away for the weekend, visiting Dwim actually in Chicago. But on top
> of that (which was great!) my brother-in-law died in a car accident Saturday

Msg# 5230

Community Spirit / Support ~ w/your MEFA reviews/votes Posted by sulriel August 24, 2005 - 13:48:03 Topic ID# 5230
You've signed up for these awards - if you've reading, reviewing and
vote - THANK YOU!

... if you're uncertain or unsure, think about these things ...

This is your chance to reward those authors you know and the stories
you love, and a wonderful opportunity to find new stories, including
those hidden gems that everyone talks about that are so seldom seen.

There are over 1200 stories nominated for the MEFA's and already
nearly 2500 reviews. That sounds like a lot of reviewing, but
considering the number of stories available, that's a low average - a
lot of stories don't even have one or two reviews yet.

Consider that most sub-categories have between 5 and 15 entries, so
competition is very fierce in some categories.

This is your chance to make a real difference to someone in the
fandom. Just think about how excited you are to hear from a new
reader, this is the perfect time to pass that along, to pay it
forward. Even a single line of praise is worth at least a point,
maybe two. YOUR VOTE MATTERS. Even if you only read and review a
few stories, you've been a part of these awards.

Remember that fanfiction is about community as much as it is about
the craft. Be a part of that community. We need you to participate
to make these awards work. In most contests, the winners are
decided by a handful of judges. In this contest, ANYONE, EVERYONE,
contributes to the judging pool. But you have to sign up, log in and
do some reviewing. The more reviewers we have, the more even the
results will be. *Every single individual counts.* The more you
review, the more you count. It's entirely up to YOU.

In most organizations, any kind of local or national club, you have a
few activists who do most of the work. The MEFAs are the same way -
and we greatly appreciate those who have the time and energy to
devote to managing and especially those who are putting in high
numbers of reviews, but unless you take a proactive role in this
community, those few are deciding for you who'll win these awards.

Do you feel that your work is overlooked for the more popular names?
This is your chance to read/review and publicly recognize other
authors like yourself who may be new to the community or have only a
few stories to their name.

If you care about seeing authors and stories recognized for their
work, sign up, log in, read and review. If you can only do one or
two - you've made a difference. If you can do a couple a week,
you've made a lot more difference and that's what this community is
all about. Sharing our work and supporting each other.

Voting season ends Sept 30th, so don't think for too long, go ahead
and get some votes in.

Sulriel

Msg# 5231

Community Spirit / Support ~ w/your MEFA reviews/votes Posted by sulriel August 24, 2005 - 14:03:15 Topic ID# 5230
You've signed up for these awards - if you've reading, reviewing and
vote - THANK YOU!

... if you're uncertain or unsure, think about these things ...

This is your chance to reward those authors you know and the stories
you love, and a wonderful opportunity to find new stories, including
those hidden gems that everyone talks about that are so seldom seen.

There are over 1200 stories nominated for the MEFA's and already
nearly 2500 reviews. That sounds like a lot of reviewing, but
considering the number of stories available, that's a low average - a
lot of stories don't even have one or two reviews yet.

Consider that most sub-categories have between 5 and 15 entries, so
competition is very fierce in some categories.

This is your chance to make a real difference to someone in the
fandom. Just think about how excited you are to hear from a new
reader, this is the perfect time to pass that along, to pay it
forward. Even a single line of praise is worth at least a point,
maybe two. YOUR VOTE MATTERS. Even if you only read and review a
few stories, you've been a part of these awards.

Remember that fanfiction is about community as much as it is about
the craft. Be a part of that community. We need you to participate
to make these awards work. In most contests, the winners are
decided by a handful of judges. In this contest, ANYONE, EVERYONE,
contributes to the judging pool. But you have to sign up, log in and
do some reviewing. The more reviewers we have, the more even the
results will be. *Every single individual counts.* The more you
review, the more you count. It's entirely up to YOU.

In most organizations, any kind of local or national club, you have a
few activists who do most of the work. The MEFAs are the same way -
and we greatly appreciate those who have the time and energy to
devote to managing and especially those who are putting in high
numbers of reviews, but unless you take a proactive role in this
community, those few are deciding for you who'll win these awards.

Do you feel that your work is overlooked for the more popular names?
This is your chance to read/review and publicly recognize other
authors like yourself who may be new to the community or have only a
few stories to their name.

If you care about seeing authors and stories recognized for their
work, sign up, log in, read and review. If you can only do one or
two - you've made a difference. If you can do a couple a week,
you've made a lot more difference and that's what this community is
all about. Sharing our work and supporting each other.

Voting season ends Sept 30th, so don't think for too long, go ahead
and get some votes in.

Sulriel

Msg# 5232

Help with a password Posted by lainien01 August 24, 2005 - 14:58:40 Topic ID# 5232
I sent this to the mefaadmin address, but I think maybe no one there
will see it since Ainaechoiriel has had a tragedy in the family. So
sorry to read about that.

I was hoping someone else might be able to help though. I went a while
without logging in while I was reading the list of stories I printed
from the site that I wanted to read. Now I'm ready to enter my reviews
and I can't remember my password. Can anyone send it to my email
address. I think I changed my username to lainien instead of
lainien01. But I have no recollection what my password is. Thanks for
you help and sorry to be a bother.

Msg# 5233

Re: Help with a password Posted by sulriel August 24, 2005 - 15:12:08 Topic ID# 5232
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "lainien01" <lainien01@y...> wrote:
> I sent this to the mefaadmin address, but I think maybe no one there
> will see it since Ainaechoiriel has had a tragedy in the family. So
> sorry to read about that.
>
> I was hoping someone else might be able to help though. I went a
while
> without logging in while I was reading the list of stories I printed
> from the site that I wanted to read. Now I'm ready to enter my
reviews
> and I can't remember my password. Can anyone send it to my email
> address. I think I changed my username to lainien instead of
> lainien01. But I have no recollection what my password is. Thanks
for
> you help and sorry to be a bother.


No bother at all. I sent that privately. Let me know if you have any
other problems.

Sulriel

Msg# 5234

Re: Error messages today Posted by shippingindustry August 24, 2005 - 19:27:39 Topic ID# 5223
Thanks, I will check those reviews again in a couple of days.

Lin

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Anthony Holder <aaholder@s...> wrote:

> Lin,
>
> I believe that your two reviews are OK. In the database they look
fine.
> When Ainae installs the updates, you SHOULD be able to see the
reviews.
> Let me know in a couple of days if the problem still persists.
>
> Anthony

Msg# 5235

Re: Just to let you all know Posted by shippingindustry August 24, 2005 - 19:29:45 Topic ID# 5212
My concolences, Ainae, and our prayers are with you and your family.

Lin

Msg# 5236

Reviews Final ~ 8/23/2005 (sorta) Posted by sulriel August 24, 2005 - 20:51:55 Topic ID# 5236
Great day today!! 90 new final reviews!!


Title: One Day in Ithilien · Author: jen_loves_elves · Books/Time:
Post-Ring War · ID: 744
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 08:12:14 Score: 2
A very cute bit of silliness featuring a happy, but harried, Faramir,
who must deal with wife, children and an overly enthusiastic Elf-
neighbor. It's fun to see a non-angsty Faramir.

Title: In Plain Sight · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gap-Filler · ID: 885
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 08:17:00 Score: 2
This is a true howler! The author takes all the usual assumptions
about Frodo's frailty and turns them on their heads. This particular
Frodo is anything but frail, and resents being told no.

Title: Light out of Darkness · Author: Shirebound · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Gap-Filler · ID: 895
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 08:23:51 Score: 3
All of the little vignettes comprising this little series are
thoughtful, touched with sweet melancholy, and somehow comforting. It
is interesting to see Frodo's interaction with the various people in
each tale, and how the theme of light is incorporated.

Title: Greenery · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 14
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 08:25:22 Score: 1
A very sweet little confrontation, between Arwen and a very finely
drawn OC. Thoughtful and gentle.

Title: Bare Feet and Beer · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gondor · ID: 571
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 08:31:21 Score: 3
There are a number of stories exploring how the friendship of King
and Steward developed. This is definitely one of the better ones.
Persuading Faramir to lay aside formality and become a friend was one
of Aragorn's more difficult tasks. I love the way this one plays out.

Title: In The Shadow of His Blade · Author: pipkinsweetgrass ·
Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 803
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 08:45:13 Score: 3
Every fanfic author seems to have certain favorite aspects of canon
to explore, that touches her own heart. The relationship of
Boromir,Merry and Pippin is this author's, and in this story, the
sacrifice Boromir made for the hobbits is placed in its perspective
with deep love and understanding. This story's mythic qualities are
outstanding.

Title: Reunion · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Ithilien Drabble · ID: 634
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 08:48:35 Score: 1
A wonderful drabble, and a conversation that I can easily imagine
taking place! Perfect voices, for both characters!

Title: Cormallen · Author: Frodo Baggins of Bag End (Febobe) ·
Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings · ID: 799
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 09:03:25 Score: 6
This is an amazing piece. The thoughts of Frodo's dearest friends and
companions at the Feast in Cormallen are each captured with such
clarity. Aragorn, king and friend, but above all, his healer, knowing
how vain his efforts may have been. I found Gandalf's the most heart-
breaking, as he sorrows over what he wrought. And the hobbits, each
of them so much in character, limning their own personal relationship
with Frodo with their own unique POV. And Gimli and Legolas, oft
neglected in this sort of thing are perfect as well. And the insight
Legolas brings echoes my own thoughts of how he would react to Frodo.

Title: Spellbound · Author: Shirebound · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings · ID: 880
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 09:04:52 Score: 2
This is one very creepy gap-filler about one of the very creepiest
episodes in the entire trilogy! Very well-thought out, very vivid,
and very beautifully done!

Title: Hands of a Healer · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: Drabble · ID: 142
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 09:07:16 Score: 1
A very nice moment frozen in 100 words; I could easily see it as I
read.

Title: Wise Enough · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Drabble · ID: 552
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 09:09:18 Score: 2
Yes, Faramir was wise enough, to know the ruses of the Enemy and
resist. This is one picture of the kind of temptation he had to
overcome.

Title: Beyond the Borders · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Vignette · ID: 578
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-24 10:32:03 Score: 9
This is a moving story showing the adjustments being made by various
characters and peoples in the North after the end of the Ring War.
While Elrond's gift to Pippin at the end of the story will help the
Hobbits learn what lies "beyond the borders", they are not the only
ones in this story making discoveries as they move beyond the limits
that have previously circumscribed their activities and expectations.

The small details about the changes that the destruction of evil has
brought to the North for dwarves, hobbits, men and elves have been
thought through well, but it is in the characterisation of her two
protagonists that Marta shows her skill. In young Halbeleg, Marta has
created an endearing portrait of a ranger who finds himself
unexpectedly thrust into a diplomatic and administrative role he
probably never expected would be his. He is nervous and unsure, yet
the reader senses Aragorn is as fortunate in his choice of Stewards
in the North as he in the South. Meanwhile, Elrond's weariness and
desire to be re-united with his wife, now that his task is over and
the power of the Ring has faded, is palpable. Yet he is still
courteous, welcoming and wise. All in all, a very well-crafted piece
about how we "move on".

Title: A conspiracy forged · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 585
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-24 10:33:45 Score: 8
This is a delightful story in which Marta smoothly blends Tolkien
canon and her own invention to show how the roots of the "conspiracy"
between Frodo's four friends in Fellowship of the Ring might have
formed.

She does an excellent job of exploring the particular affection
between Bilbo and Pippin which is hinted at in the books. As Merry
tells Pippin: "You two come from the same mold…. Bilbo can't help
liking you; you remind him of himself." And Marta makes us like
Pippin very much in this piece -- as well as Merry. She gives us a
convincing and moving portrait of the protective and comforting role
Merry has already assumed with regard to his cousin. She also nicely
draws out the travails of sibling relationships and family
obligations for the future heir of a large and important family. And
the history of the pipe fits well into Tolkien's world.

The dialogue is lively and naturalistic, and the descriptive passages
are as rich and satisfying as Bilbo's birthday feast.

Title: Flawed and Fair · Author: Tehta · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID:
1129
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-24 13:36:06 Score: 10
Intimidated by the prospect of a novella length Elf-slash story
between the two Elves I arguably care least about and which was also
supposed to be funny, I avoided this story. Bad move. Good thing such
logic as, "Well, other people like it" and "Damn, but the Orc-slaying
Ditty was comically awful—Tehta!Ecthelion must have some good taste"
convinced me to surrender to chapter one. And then two through seven
and the non-chapter, all in a go. This story definitely plays on some
staple slash clichés that we all know and use and love/hate depending
on the day of the week—guilt, obliviousness to completely obvious
hints of interest, wounds requiring backrubs—but it manages to do so
in such a way that the characters actually seem to progress towards a
relationship that doesn't leave one cold and totally indifferent. As
with Mary Sue and a good OFC, the line between the story being
hindered by clichés and the story making use of them is very thin.

So where does this leave me in the end? Well, "Flawed and Fair" is
not always laugh aloud funny, but it definitely gets some chuckles
and grins, keeps the brooding at bay with internal mockery, and even
manages to drag in *Symposium*, which always gets bonus points from
me when it's done well. It's well-written, snarky in the right
places, and it got me to care about Ecthelion and Glorfindel, which
is a major feat, so Tehta must be doing something right. Good work!


Title: Stock and Stone · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Dwarves · ID:
608
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-24 13:40:39 Score: 10
Creating a story populated entirely by original characters is always
a risky business, but Marta succeeds brilliant in creating two non-
canon but entirely believable characters in a girl-dwarf of the
Mountain and boy-Man of Dale. Marta has captured the dwarven mind
particularly well in her characterisation of Thris, who is proud,
fierce and passionate about crafts, yet also quick witted and
intellectually curious.

Her two characters still have the openness and curiosity of youth
that allows them to question and explain in a way their elders would
not -- and because of that, they are able to learn about each other's
culture and customs. In outlining those customs, particularly with
respect to funerary practices and beliefs in the afterlife, Marta
makes effective use of the little canon information we do have on
those topics. She also demonstrates effectively the similarities and
commonality of beliefs. And because the characters themselves must
explain their customs in simple terms and words, Marta is able to
help us, as readers, understand those concepts.

This alone would make this one of the best cross-cultural stories I
have read, but Marta's lightness of touch in language in both
dialogue and description are a great foil to the ideas she expounds.
And while there are many serious aspects to this piece, there are
also numerous quiet moments of amusement for the reader, such as when
Borin assuming Thris is a boy, because she has a beard, when
apparently fearless Thris is shocked and repulsed by the customs of
Men.

Title: A City of Scarlet Flowers · Author: annmarwalk · Books/Time:
Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 390
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:06:17 Score: 2
A new tradition grows up in the White City, in tribute to those who
were fallen, and Faramir is happy to take note of it. Very true to
the spontaneous way things can happen, and a nice OC.

Title: A Refuge for the Weary · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 547
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:08:23 Score: 3
Yes, I can see Faramir wishing to speak to Elrond of Boromir's days
in Rivendell, perhaps hoping that his brother had some peace and
enjoyment while there; and I think that Elrond would indeed, be
sympathetic to the concern of a grieving brother.

Title: Seeing · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor
Drabble · ID: 1356
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:11:05 Score: 2
And that's all it really comes down to for anyone, isn't it? Saving
the world and winning battles is all well and good, but seeing your
loved ones safe, happy and thriving is what it's really all about.

Title: Faint Hope · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Vignette · ID: 357
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:13:24 Score: 1
Sweet, tender and melancholy, very true to both characters.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The Hobbit:
Drabble · ID: 1359
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:14:40 Score: 1
Very cute and accurate summary of the first chapter of The Hobbit.

Title: High King and Halfling · Author: Marta · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 581
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:20:23 Score: 2
*Snicker.* Persistence, that most hobbity of all traits is clearly
present in this ancestor of Tooks and Brandybucks. Very cute
interpretation of how it might have happened.

Title: Bittersweet · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 43
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:22:28 Score: 1
Very poetic and descriptive.

Title: Time in the Ditch · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 253
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:24:32 Score: 2
And that is much the way it must have gone for most of Aragorn's
adult life, before he became King. Very thought provoking.

Title: Mathesis · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 532
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:26:37 Score: 1
An interesting look at one way in which Denethor's mind worked;
possibly explaining a lot of things.

Title: Heirlooms · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 402
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:29:41 Score: 2
This is exactly the sort of snarky humor I love for Aragorn, all of a
piece with his canon retorts to Butterbur, to the herbmaster in the
House of Healing, and his gentle teasing of Merry in the same place.
Very nice!

Title: "They have a Cave Troll" · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Humor:
Drabble · ID: 572
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:31:18 Score: 1
Now this made me laugh out loud! What a unique POV, and exactly as I
would imagine it!

Title: Knight's Service · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Rohan ·
ID: 582
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:33:44 Score: 1
Grin. Good old Pippin, he knows just what's important. This is a very
cute tribute to another story. Lovingly done.

Title: The Gift · Author: maranya14 · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 480
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:36:31 Score: 2
Very nice! I have often imagined that Bilbo regularly commissioned
gifts from the toymakers of Dale for his young cousins. And a thrush
would be a perfect reminder of his own Adventure.

Title: An Unexpected Gift · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 584
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:38:02 Score: 1
Trust Denethor to want to speed Gandalf away; trust Gandalf to be
practical about it. Very funny in a snarky kind of way!

Title: High Places · Author: Kielle · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Elves · ID: 1086
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2005-08-24 14:41:23 Score: 4
What a sad, sweet story! I never thought that Maeglin might love
little Earendil, think of him as the son he should have had. The
child's POV is very well-written and believable. The poignancy of his
clinging to Maeglin as Gondolin falls down around them, when it is
Maeglin who played a crucial part in the city's fall, and Maeglin who
wants to carry him and Idril away and let Tuor perish, adds extra
texture.

And the conclusion is excellent!

Title: Recaptured! Drabbles · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1172
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:41:29 Score: 3
These are a perfect tribute to one of the most intriguing AUs
around, "Recaptured"". Each drabble is easily recognizable and could
actually be a gapfiller to the longer story. I especially like the
one about Diswygr. I very much enjoy the long story, and these
drabbles are a nice contribution to that. Very well done!

Title: On Watch in Moria · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1302
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 14:43:45 Score: 3
Not a single wasted word in this little mood piece from Aragorn's
POV, as he stands watch in the black of Moria. I especially love the
image of Gandalf's light gradually going out as he sleeps, and the
hobbits sleeping "tumbled like puppies". Beautiful.

Title: A Diamond In The Storm · Author: SilverMoonLady · Genres:
Romance · ID: 780
Reviewer: Angmar · 2005-08-24 15:51:57 Score: 3
Pippin is off on another adventure, this time in the cold north. Why
are there strange disappearances? What will Pippin find? Diamond is a
real shrew who finally warms up. Excitement, adventure, mystery and
romance makes for a good read in the story.

Title: At the Sammath Naur · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 126
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:52:14 Score: 3
Not sure of the ending but the portrayal of Frodo being seduced by
the Ring with all its contradictions was very well played out and I
liked the visions of all he could see, all he was, once he put the
Ring on. The part at the end that I liked a lot was Frodo's
weariness, his willingness to accept the peace of death.

Title: By All The Signs · Author: Tialys · Books/Time: Post-Ring War
· ID: 757
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:52:29 Score: 3
Ah, they just don't get it, do they? And it's nice to know Hobbits
are still around. Gives me hope that there's an Elf around here
somewhere. But rightly, would any archaeologists believe such a
story? They might if they uncovered the bones under those stones.
Especially after that find in (was it Indonesia?). Nicely done.


Title: Links · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
General Drabble · ID: 23
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:52:48 Score: 1
Poignant and fitting remembrance for Boromir and a nice treatment of
the tie between these two.

Title: A City of Scarlet Flowers · Author: annmarwalk · Books/Time:
Post-Ring War: Gondor · ID: 390
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:53:07 Score: 1
I like the picture this little story painted of the renewal and
remembrance after war. Nicely done.

Title: Who Will Care? · Author: faramir_boromir · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Gondor · ID: 612
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:53:20 Score: 3
It wasn't perfectly clear when the story took place though I did
guess the who. And I like the reasoning he comes up with. He has a
bigger picture than his father and that, in the end, was the making
of a good steward for the returned king. He would be the type to try
to remake the library into something more suited to all the land.


Title: The Finest of Vintages · Author: Regina · Books/Time: The
Hobbit · ID: 1103
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:53:40 Score: 2
Who could really resist such a handsome charmer? The lady has no
choice really, as this writer wrote very well. Good
characterizations, especially of the OC wine seller. And I like this
portrayal of Legolas.

Title: Bringing the Sun · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: Drabble · ID: 1382
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:53:56 Score: 1
A nice little gap-filler drabble, showing a friendship between
Aragorn and Legolas.

Title: A Lesson on Hobbits · Author: Budgielover · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 177
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:54:17 Score: 4
Oh, I enjoyed these stories. Each of the three Big Folk (though Gimli
is a Dwarf) saw something different to wonder at about the Hobbits. I
loved that Boromir recognized Merry's intelligence, and how Gimli and
Aragorn likened Hobbits to cats (and Aragorn's descriptions of those
creatures were perfect!), and then Legolas's gentle curiosity and
keen observations. Good characterizations all around!


Title: After All · Author: jastaelf · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 100
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:54:45 Score: 4
What a lovely story! I loved that Legolas ruined all those arrows,
but also the playfulness of his family in Valinor. And the banter
with Gimli…. I've mostly read stories by Jasta that are before The
Lord of the Rings, so I don't think I've gotten a good example of her
Gimli-Legolas banter before. But this was great. My favorite bit was
when Gimli reminded Legolas that what he'd said was a long speech for
him. Well done!

Title: A Desperate Race · Author: Budgielover · Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 675
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:55:08 Score: 3
My favorite part of this story was right near the end. Merry, taking
charge. When I read the books, I was so impressed with Merry's being
on top of everything. I missed that in the movies. It was very nice
to see that Merry again in this short story. The descriptions
otherwise were quite good and it fleshed out a small part of the
story of the trek to Rivendell.

Title: Alqualonde · Author: Joan Milligan · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 36
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:55:19 Score: 4
This, like Maglor's view of the ruins, is beautiful in its
horridness. The writing isn't horrid. That's the beauty. It's the
subject. The destruction and yet with it the author makes a point:
There would be no drama if there had been no Kinslaying. Would we
have remembered Alqualonde without it? It doesn't condone it but it
is true. Maglor was a good choice of character to look at it this way.

Title: Shadow · Author: Celebsul · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
First Age · ID: 775
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:55:34 Score: 1
Good descriptions of the valar at war

Title: A Choice Once Made · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Second Age · ID: 182
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:56:09 Score: 3
While I stick to a particular part of the story published in the Silm
(she did not choose Pharazon), setting that aside, I enjoyed this
story. And oh the hope it gives at the end, but we, unlike Miriel
know what was coming on that dawn that she waited for for other
reasons. A beautiful, sad portrayal. Well done!

Title: The Stars of Harad · Author: Cassia & Siobhan · Genres:
Adventure: Long Form · ID: 1219
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 16:57:15 Score: 6
It took me a while to get hooked into this story as I'm not so hooked
on Aragorn as I am Legolas, but Cassia and Siobhan never let me down.
It may have started out with just Aragorn's angst and trials, but
then they evened it out with Legolas's searching for Aragorn and the
trouble he gets in too. It was interesting to see the different
culture of the Simbani in this story and an unusual treatment of
slave-life, which, while it never shied away from the horrors of what
slavery means, it showed that those very slaves could find joy in
life even in their servitude. Very intriguingly done. And another
great adventure in the Mellon Chronicles.


Title: The Last Time · Author: SoundOfHorns · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Final Partings · ID: 1118
Reviewer: Garnet Took · 2005-08-24 16:59:57 Score: 3
I have tears in my eyes after this story. That was amazing.

I've never read a story like this one that has torn out my heart the
way this one did. I think the thing that surprised me most was the
way Aragorn reacted to Merry's passing. It made me really stop and
think about how his life had been impacted by those four swee, little
hobbits.

Thanks. so much for this one.

Title: Words Unsaid · Author: Acacea · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gapfiller · ID: 55
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:00:14 Score: 3
A good story, though perhaps repetitive at times. It fits the
challenge well though subtly of a superstition, that a farewell, in
the truest sense, could mean the safe return of a loved one or ease
their passing should they not return, but harsh words were a poison.
And it's nice to see how Denethor changes once he thinks Faramir is
lost to him.

Title: Time and Times and Half a Time · Author: Honesty · Genres:
Horror · ID: 1024
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:01:00 Score: 3
An odd title perhaps but a deeply sad and disturbing tale. Legolas's
fate is perhaps the worst he could ever have, and Gimli's grief is
well-played. It's a beautifully told story of something extremely
awful, and how friends could handle it best. Not for the squeamish,
but well worth the read. Keep a tissue on hand.


Title: Best Laid Plans · Author: Lamiel · Genres: Humor · ID: 455
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:01:15 Score: 4
This was hilarious! All the characters seemed just right even given
this comic twist. Pippin conspiring to make a cake, and Merry trying
to keep him from going overboard. How many candles will fit on the
cake and how old is Legolas anyway? Bergil dressed as an Easterling
and Aragorn trying not to give in to Gimli's use of his private
quarters. And it all came together so nicely! Or messily depending on
how you look at it. Terribly funny!

Title: Ailurophobia · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor: Animals · ID:
115
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:01:35 Score: 2
I'm not sure about Telvido, but I like the cats in this one! Not even
Melkor could tame them. The depictions of the cats were so realistic.
I have five. I should know. But thankfully, unlike Morgoth, I don't
sneeze. Well done.

Title: The Willing Teacher and the Apt Pupil · Author: Elen Kortirion
· Genres: Humor: Aragorn · ID: 209
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:01:53 Score: 2
This is one of those stories where someone overhears something and
thinks it's something totally different. Only this time it's us doing
the overhearing, and I'm quite glad it wasn't what it sounded like!
Good twist! Deftly done.


Title: The Scruff Factor · Author: jastaelf · Genres: Humor: Aragorn
· ID: 293
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:02:27 Score: 3
I think my absolute favorite part is when Legolas comes out of the
bath saying he has a Plan and the twins can hear the capital P! That
was brilliantly funny, and I loved the way Legolas was so brilliant
himself. Always at the top of everything, tricking Aragorn and the
even the twins, who thought they were in on it. This is a playfully
evil Legolas...in a good way!

Title: The Official Fanfiction University of Middle-earth · Author:
Camilla Sandman · Genres: Humor: Metafic · ID: 180
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:02:46 Score: 2
A very funny story set in a place where very bad fanficcers go to
learn the right way to write, even if it kills them. And even the
typos are part of the story. A very long, fun ride, that will make
you want to enroll.

Title: Death, I Call Thee · Author: Werecat · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural · ID: 292
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:03:03 Score: 3
Wow! Five drabbles with very different views of death, each
distinctive to the cultures and individuals. The Rohirrim felt
Rohirric, the Gondorian Gondorian and so on. The human from Harad
very distinct from the orc. And the dead guy. And each line was
perfect, calling death what it is for each. Very nicely done.

Title: The Gift · Author: maranya14 · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 480
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-24 17:03:24 Score: 2
Interesting. It took 2 reads for it to sink in. I liked it. The
respect between Dale and the mountain and the devotion of this man to
apprentice under the Dwarves. Good job.

Title: Take the Little Ones · Author: Space Weavil · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Elves · ID: 163
Reviewer: Angmar · 2005-08-24 17:14:58 Score: 3
A group of elflings, escorted by Erestor, takes a journey to the
ruins of Ost-in-Edhil to learn a lesson of the cost of pride. Erestor
makes his own painful mental journey, comparing the past with the
present. Great use of description to convey a mood.

Title: Best Laid Plans · Author: Lamiel · Genres: Humor · ID: 455
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-24 18:00:30 Score: 10
There are some stories that have all the canon facts straight, have
all the commas in the right place, and the writing is certainly
sufficient. But something about them just doesn't zing. this was not
one of those categories.

The author takes us on a wild ride set a few years into the Fourth
Age, involving most of the major players from Gondor, plus Gimli,
Legolas, Merry, and Pippin. They are all delightfully in character,
which makes the zany antics all the more hilarious. Each element by
itself is perfectly believable: Legolas' reaction to a shady man in
Haradric dress moving toward the king's resident (and Bergil's
reasoning, both for being dressed like that and being where he was,
for instance). And the debate over cakes was oh-so-hobbity.

But what I really liked was the portrayal of so many parts of canon
in a thoroughly integrated way. A good example of this would be
Legolas's claustrophobia (which I suppose is fanon not canon, but the
author supports it using canon facts). We are never told that Legolas
is claustrophobic. We're never even described a situation where he
displays that. Instead we are given Gimli's jabs with perfect comedic
timing, and Legolas's physical reaction -- which is so much better
than anything else could have been.

Perfect comedic timing, great descriptions, seemingly effortless in-
character interactions that result in completely off-the-wall
scenarios, topped off with Aragorn out-manoeuvred at every turn...
what more could a girl want?

Title: What Thou Lovest Well · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 458
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-24 18:02:00 Score: 6
This is a great story. In addition to the charming and detailed
images of daily life in Fourth Age-Ithilien, there's a latent
eroticism infused throughout this piece -- obviously these are people
at peace with their own love for each other, which seemed fitting for
peacetime. Faramir's and Eowyn's love for each other is at the
forefront, whether it's their slipping off to their room after a
quiet evening talking with Legolas, or the glee Faramir feels over
hearing of Eowyn's carrying their child. This is a very enjoyable
peace. In fact, it's one of the WIPs that I most want to see move
forward (Lalaith is also right up there. :-P ).

Title: On Watch in Moria · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1302
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:25:48 Score: 3
Nicely drawn snapshot in time. I love the word-pictures: "daylight
dignity" and the image of the sleeping hobbits tumbled together like
puppies, huddled to share their warmth. And one cannot help thinking
that the "sounds of stealthy feet" either have been heard, or soon
will be.

Title: In Thranduil's Halls · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Vignette · ID: 1304
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:29:04 Score: 2
Here is a picture of Legolas home at last, but not at rest. Home has
become an alien place, a stopping place, and yet... even in
Greenwood, he hears the echoes of the gulls' cries and feels the tug
of the Sea. Haunting.

Title: The Weaving is the Easy Part · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places:
Elves: Drabble · ID: 1305
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:35:13 Score: 3
Fascinating little gem. You can almost hear the rhythm of the shuttle
in the words, and see Arwen's fingers at their work. The parallels
between the banner she is weaving for Aragorn, and the mission and
destiny of the man himself, are thoughtfully drawn.

Title: Two Views for a Stranger · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1303
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:39:45 Score: 4
The author has taken a brief passage, Boromir's travels, and given it
life and reality. The clash of cultures is clear in the two
contrasting drabbles, the stranger who does not even realise he is in
Elvish woods, and who worries about the implications of talking aloud
to himself (and answering), and those who wonder why he doesn't call
out! How *did* he manage to find Imladris, anyhow?

Title: Back to the Valley · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Elves · ID: 590
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:41:20 Score: 5
I remember the first time I read this story! It lurks in the back of
my memory, a fine example of this author's powerful writing, vivid
imagery, and banquet for the senses. Even as I despair for the
nameless prisoner, I feel the small satisfaction at his continued
defiance, even victory (if that is not too strong a term) over his
captors. I can hear them grinding their teeth in frustration, see
them stopping their ears, even, somehow, see through the battered
flesh to the smile that remains deep inside, that spark of defiance
in the midst of hopelessness. Incredible writing. Simply incredible.

Title: A Gift · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 370
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:43:43 Score: 1
A sweet picture, indeed. If you could call a sword sweet!

Title: The Taint of Guilt Lingering · Author: Vistula the Dunadan ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 635
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:45:35 Score: 1
How bitter and haunting. I could weep for Sam, reading this.

Title: Spoons · Author: LKK · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 644
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:46:29 Score: 2
Very funny, nice gapfiller, sounds true to the character (she
wouldn't *steal* actually, just take things that really ought to have
been hers).

Title: And Now to Bed · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 783
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:48:10 Score: 5
Very nicely done indeed; giving each Traveller a unique personhood
and clearly delineating the changes that the Quest made in each of
them. I feel a sense of sorrow, reading about Merry and Pippin (and
to some extent, Frodo, though after his healing I cannot imagine
anything but healing and blessed sleep as appropriate). I can only
hope that marriage to wives who love them will help Merry and Pippin
as much as Rosie helps Sam. I like the way this ends with Sam; thus
ending on a hopeful note, and it is a bright spot that he has a
connexion with Frodo.

Title: The King's Commission · Author: Larner · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Post-War of the Ring · ID: 215
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:49:31 Score: 4
This is an astonishing story, broad in depth and rich in detail,
showing familiar characters through the eyes of a deftly-drawn
original character. The story is compelling, drawing the reader from
chapter to chapter. The setting is carefully-thought-out, such that
one can smell the smells, feel the textures, as well as see and hear.
The characters are multi-dimensional and sound "real". It is a long
story, but well worth the time to read.

Title: Marigold · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 784
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:50:33 Score: 3
O I do like the pictures you paint here. You make Marigold very real
to me, someone I think I would like to know. She is as bright and
sunny as her name! I can see how her industry and determination and
hard-working ways could have sustained the Gaffer through the
Troubles.

Title: Elements of the Resistance · Author: Marta · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Drabble · ID: 939
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:55:37 Score: 4
Ah how I love to read stories about Fatty Bolger that show him as
more than a buffoon or a clown. But you have broken my heart!
Excellent job, using the five themes to tie this drabble series
together, and Freddy's indomitable spirit shines through, even after
fearful torment and through its lingering effects. The contrast of
the ruffians' brutality with his simple thoughts of home at the end,
especially, was very effective.

Title: Bedazzled · Author: Beethoven's 7th · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Drabble · ID: 976
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:56:06 Score: 4
This is a wonderful sensory experience, bringing the reader into the
scene with an economy of words that paint a vivid picture, nearly so
vivid as the fireworks themselves. I can see in my mind's eye the
whirling dancers, the children jumping to try to catch the pretty
falling stars, the wince and duck at the thunderous noise, and the
breathless pause as the next rocket goes up...

Title: A Letter Home · Author: Llinos · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin
· ID: 761
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:56:41 Score: 5
It was an interesting exercise to imagine Paladin's face as he
proceeded through the letter. In fact, I began to imagine the whole
scenario: the arrival, the exclamations, sitting down all together,
Paladin clearing his throat and beginning to read, trailing off, his
face getting red, scanning the pages, clearing his throat again and
saying, "And how are the crops this year?" LOL! And that last line,
the p.s., was so delightful, your timing so true, that I really did
laugh out loud.

Title: Changes · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-
Ring War Drabble · ID: 231
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 18:59:59 Score: 3
Very nice! A gentle look, a deft touch, and somehow I can see that
sudden smile. Merry is always seen as the most introspective of the
hobbits (unless Frodo takes that role), and he sounds very "true"
here. I especially like the hopeful ending.

Title: Namesake · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War Drabble · ID: 301
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 19:01:00 Score: 2
"Could he bear to keep that name alive?" Here is a different take on
the story than I've seen before. Sam's devotion to his master is
drawn as clearly as his courage here.

Title: Chasing and Burg'ling · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 580
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 19:02:20 Score: 2
Why do I get the feeling the Gaffer will never completely understand?
(And that, somehow, that's okay.)

(Burgling dragons. Snort.)

Title: A Lesson In Mercy · Author: Vistula the Dunadan ·
Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 638
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 19:03:00 Score: 1
Lovely use of word-pictures and parallels, especially the dewdrops in
the web and the tears on Elanor's face.

Title: The Terror of Buckland · Author: Inkling · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Pre-War of the Ring · ID: 687
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 19:03:38 Score: 5
This gap-filler explores the early years of Frodo's life, after he
lost his parents. This is Frodo as I could well imagine him, "taller
and fairer than most", graceful, daring, full of fire and life,
easily fitting Bilbo's opinion of the finest hobbit in the Shire. All
the characters, not just Frodo, are drawn with care against a lushly-
imagined background. The story pulls you in and keeps you reading,
all the way from the exciting beginning to the heart-tugging end.
Well done!

Title: My Hero · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 640
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 19:05:52 Score: 1
Very funny, and vividly told. Don't even know what Sam was facing--a
normal-sized spider or a mouse perhaps?

Title: Rohirrim Grey · Author: sulriel · Genres: Non-Fiction · ID: 143
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 19:09:43 Score: 4
What a helpful article! I know I have referred to this more than once
in my never-ending quest for accuracy. Sulriel knows her horses, and
her genetics, and writes clearly for the layman without
condescending. The photos are particularly helpful.

Now I understand why so many of JRRT's steeds were grey...

(And did you know that, according to a history of fire-fighting, grey
horses show up best in smoke, which is why this colour was favoured
to pull fire wagons?)

Title: Travel Times in Middle-earth · Author: sulriel · Genres: Non-
Fiction · ID: 144
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 19:12:49 Score: 4
An excellent and most helpful article, that I have referenced in the
never-ending quest for accuracy and making a story more "real".
Travel times can be quite a puzzle to modern readers/writers, who are
used to whizzing down the road in a mechanical contraption. Even
those of us who've used ponies or shanks' ponies in our travels
sometimes have trouble reconciling distance. I am so glad that since
I first looked at this, it has been expanded to include distances in
the Shire.

Title: A Long, Unexpected Drabble · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres:
Humor: Metafic · ID: 193
Reviewer: Lindelea · 2005-08-24 19:14:17 Score: 1
You left me laughing! Very clever, indeed, and you managed to fit all
the words in. Well, sort of. (*g*)

Title: Mae Govannen · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 148
Reviewer: LadyAranel · 2005-08-24 19:17:14 Score: 2
Oh. I really like this! It shows both Glorfi in all his shining glory
and the emmense relief of Aragorn at his coming. Take that Movie!
Arwen!

Title: Mistress Gilraen · Author: AfterEver · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural · ID: 65
Reviewer: LadyAranel · 2005-08-24 19:18:03 Score: 2
A wonderful story! Of course, *I* knew that it was not Elrond's
intent to take her to mistress from the start, but still I was swept
along by her not knowing! Excellent!

Title: The Prince of Golden Flowers · Author: Avon · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Drabble · ID: 18
Reviewer: LadyAranel · 2005-08-24 19:21:06 Score: 2
This was interesting and depends on your take of the first
Glorfindel.. is he dead or not? It most definitely stirs the muse.

***********

Msg# 5237

items on list Posted by sulriel August 24, 2005 - 21:20:30 Topic ID# 5237
I didn't make a note of it, but if I remember, a couple of days ago,
the number of stories with 2 reviews or less was well over 700 of the
1226 nominated. As of now, it's down to 686.

- browsing the pages, it looks like most of them do have a review or
two,

...I'm not seeing any zeros!! (Is that true or did I miss some?)

<shakes pom-poms and waggels butt in a happy dance>


Keep up the good work!!


(**remember the pink ones are deleted stories.)

Msg# 5238

Re: items on list Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 24, 2005 - 21:59:42 Topic ID# 5237
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "sulriel" <Sulriel@h...> wrote:
>
> I didn't make a note of it, but if I remember, a couple of days ago,
> the number of stories with 2 reviews or less was well over 700 of the
> 1226 nominated. As of now, it's down to 686.
>
> - browsing the pages, it looks like most of them do have a review or
> two,
>
> ...I'm not seeing any zeros!! (Is that true or did I miss some?)

There are some stories, probably more than "some", that don't yet have
any reviews, but I know the number has gone down a bit. May it
continue to drop.

> <shakes pom-poms and waggels butt in a happy dance>

*joins in*

> Keep up the good work!!
>
>
> (**remember the pink ones are deleted stories.)

Pink...?

Should I be aware of this when I'm reviewing? Or is this an admin
screen thing?

Dwim

Msg# 5239

Re: items on list Posted by sulriel August 24, 2005 - 22:05:20 Topic ID# 5237
> > I'm not seeing any zeros!! (Is that true or did I miss some?)
>
> There are some stories, probably more than "some", that don't yet
have> any reviews, but I know the number has gone down a bit. May it
> continue to drop.


I'm not sure what I'm seeing. When I look use the filter and browse
the stories with "2 reviews or fewer", I'm not seeing any with 0
reviews, but when I filter by category, I'm still seeing quite a few
with no reviews. :(


>
> > <shakes pom-poms and waggels butt in a happy dance>
>
> *joins in*

Thanks Dwim ... not as happy as I was a minute ago, but I'll keep
dancing...


> > (**remember the pink ones are deleted stories.)
>
> Pink...?
>
> Should I be aware of this when I'm reviewing? Or is this an admin
> screen thing?

uummmm... I thought everyone could see them. ...? They look like
they're being reviewed so I thought I should mention it.

Msg# 5240

Re: items on list Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 24, 2005 - 22:25:51 Topic ID# 5237
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "sulriel" <Sulriel@h...> wrote:
> > > I'm not seeing any zeros!! (Is that true or did I miss some?)
> >
> > There are some stories, probably more than "some", that don't yet
> have> any reviews, but I know the number has gone down a bit. May it
> > continue to drop.
>
>
> I'm not sure what I'm seeing. When I look use the filter and browse
> the stories with "2 reviews or fewer", I'm not seeing any with 0
> reviews, but when I filter by category, I'm still seeing quite a few
> with no reviews. :(

Hm. Weird! I'd not used that filter before, I just have been watching
particular authors' fics to see which ones are getting reviewed, which
not, and I know which of my own fics haven't (yet, I hope) gotten a
review.

I've also never seen the pink show up before. It must be tied to
certain filters since I know I've skimmed through every page in every
category to see what was in them over the course of reading season.
When I get my ballots for a particular category, the pink doesn't show
up, but it may also be that neither do the withdrawn stories.
Certainly the words "No stories withdrawn on this page" have appeared
before.

> >
> > > <shakes pom-poms and waggels butt in a happy dance>
> >
> > *joins in*
>
> Thanks Dwim ... not as happy as I was a minute ago, but I'll keep
> dancing...

It's good for your fingers. Gives them a rest...

Dwim

Msg# 5241

Re: items on list Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 24, 2005 - 22:40:30 Topic ID# 5237
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "sulriel" <Sulriel@h...> wrote:
> > > I'm not seeing any zeros!! (Is that true or did I miss some?)
> >
> > There are some stories, probably more than "some", that don't yet
> have> any reviews, but I know the number has gone down a bit. May it
> > continue to drop.
>
>
> I'm not sure what I'm seeing. When I look use the filter and browse
> the stories with "2 reviews or fewer", I'm not seeing any with 0
> reviews, but when I filter by category, I'm still seeing quite a few
> with no reviews. :(

*smacks self*

Mystery solved. That "2 or fewer" filter is tied to stories that *you*
have actually reviewed. That means there will *always* be at least one
review for every story listed through that filter--yours.

So of course no zeroes are showing up. We don't have a filter that
sorts reviews independently of the reviewer currently logged in.

Dwim

Msg# 5242

Re: items on list Posted by sulriel August 24, 2005 - 22:45:06 Topic ID# 5237
> > the stories with "2 reviews or fewer", I'm not seeing any with 0
> > reviews, but when I filter by category, I'm still seeing quite a
few
> > with no reviews. :(
>
> *smacks self*
>
> Mystery solved. That "2 or fewer" filter is tied to stories that
*you*> have actually reviewed. That means there will *always* be at
least one> review for every story listed through that filter--yours.
>
> So of course no zeroes are showing up. We don't have a filter that
> sorts reviews independently of the reviewer currently logged in.
>
> Dwim

no, that can't be true. I've reviewed just over 100, and that count
read 638 or something.

if you go to 'overview' and 'browse stories' and look at the lower
filter, you have several options, most of them are only for stories
you've reviewd, but I'm pretty sure the bottom one "stories with 2
reviews or less" is for all of the stories. ...maybe everyone
doesn't have that option?

<now more confused than ever>

Sulriel

Msg# 5243

Re: items on list Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 24, 2005 - 22:50:01 Topic ID# 5237
*sigh* again. Ok, I spoke too soon. There are some stories (not in
pink) that are showing up that I haven't entered a review for, as I
can see from the Actions menu on the right. Which explains why that "2
or fewer" filter gives me more pages of reviewed stories than the one
that shows me every review I've done so far. So it is, weirdly,
independent of me, even though nothing in that filter should be,
supposedly, unless the filter override warned to be in place also
overrides the filter that attaches everything to my ID.

So I don't get it. Either the stories without any reviews yet just
*happen* to be clustered in the middle of the 28 pages of fics
generated by the "2 or fewer reviews" filter, or it's a question to
pose to tech support.

Dwim

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "sulriel" <Sulriel@h...> wrote:
> > > > I'm not seeing any zeros!! (Is that true or did I miss some?)
> > >
> > > There are some stories, probably more than "some", that don't yet
> > have> any reviews, but I know the number has gone down a bit. May it
> > > continue to drop.
> >
> >
> > I'm not sure what I'm seeing. When I look use the filter and browse
> > the stories with "2 reviews or fewer", I'm not seeing any with 0
> > reviews, but when I filter by category, I'm still seeing quite a few
> > with no reviews. :(
>
> *smacks self*
>
> Mystery solved. That "2 or fewer" filter is tied to stories that *you*
> have actually reviewed. That means there will *always* be at least one
> review for every story listed through that filter--yours.
>
> So of course no zeroes are showing up. We don't have a filter that
> sorts reviews independently of the reviewer currently logged in.
>
> Dwim

Msg# 5244

Re: items on list Posted by sulriel August 24, 2005 - 22:54:21 Topic ID# 5237
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:> *sigh* again. Ok, I spoke too soon. <snipped>
> So I don't get it. Either the stories without any reviews yet just
> *happen* to be clustered in the middle of the 28 pages of fics
> generated by the "2 or fewer reviews" filter, or it's a question to
> pose to tech support.
>
> Dwim
>

<offers Dwim a pillow and blankie> and toodles off to bed, confident
that Anthony the Brave will set us all straight on this issue sometime
tomorrow.

Sulriel

Msg# 5245

Site Update installed Posted by Anthony Holder August 25, 2005 - 1:05:41 Topic ID# 5245
Hey all,

The updates from the past week have been properly installed now, so all
of the error messages should go away (except some on review pages that
have only one page of reviews on them). That error message says:"Fatal
error: Call to a member function on a non-object in c:\Program
Files\Apache Group\Apache\mefa\MEFA2005\lib\CTReview.ctcls on line
463", and all it does is keeps the 'mark' link from working on that
page. Ainae has a fix for it, and it will go away sometime soon.

If you see any other error messages, please copy/paste them and send me
an email.

Also in this update:

C Dodd noticed that the '2 or fewer reviews' filter on the story list
wasn't showing zero! <oops!>

I tried to get a true filter to work but couldn't figure out how to ask
the database the right question, so I hacked it to just skip the ones
with more than 2 reviews. Therefore, when you select that option, you
will see fewer stories on a page than you expect, because some stories
just don't show. On the plus side, you won't have to worry about
withdrawn stories any more.

Hopefully, there will be some pages with no stories on them because all
the stories have 3 or more reviews. If so, just go on to the next page,
or tell it to show more per page.

In fact, you might start with 100 per page, just to be safe. Switching
number per page when you're not on page 1 will probably make you miss
some stories.

The 'read reviews by reviewer' pages should be nice. They show you (by
default) all your reviews, including draft and tentative, and will have
links to edit the reviews that are editable. You can switch to a
different reviewer if you like. You can't mark on those pages, as the
marks are by story or author/category/required, depending on what
you're reading, and not by reviewer, and marking would mess it all up.

BTW, as you've probably heard, a couple of reviews got entered with
quotes that were too long. The admins will edit those reviews, and add
<blockquote> </blockquote> around the "offending" material, after the
first couple of lines. This edit will cause the stuff between the
<blockquote></blockquote> pair to not be counted in determining the
score, but it will still be part of the review. It will also be clear
why the review doesn't add up to the "correct" score.

The <blockquote> is not a true HTML blockquote, because the system
'encodes' the reviews, so you'll actually be able to see the tags in
reviews. Also, admin edits do not change the 'datefinal,' so these
edited reviews will not have their 'mark' status reset, and you won't
see them again if you've already read them.

Hypothetically, <blockquote> </blockquote> could be used by non-admins
to include longer quotes in a review, but not pad the review score by
doing so. Such a hypothetical non-admin would need to consider that
people will probably think that the admins had to go back and edit his
hypothetical review, however. <grin>

Anthony

Msg# 5246

Re: Site Update installed Posted by sulriel August 25, 2005 - 10:50:59 Topic ID# 5245
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Anthony Holder <aaholder@s...> wrote:
> Hey all,
>
> The updates from the past week have been properly installed now, so
all > of the error messages should go away (except some on review
pages that > have only one page of reviews on them).

Thanks Anthony!!!

Msg# 5247

more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by sulriel August 25, 2005 - 10:58:26 Topic ID# 5247
I've corrected quite a few reviews that had excessive quoting, I
think I did ten this morning. You should see the /blockquote/ tags
and a ADMIN note if one has been corrected. There were a couple that
were close but ok, and I noted those as well, that they were ok.

The rule says, no more than two lines, and I'm capping that at 100
characters. It may or may not make a difference on the points for
that story, depending on where in the point range the character
counts falls.

If you know you've used quotes in your reviews, please go back and
skim over your reviews and let me know if there is one that needs to
be checked or corrected. Or if you notice one of someone else's,
please let me know and I'll check it - it's fine to post here or
email me privately at Sulriel@htcomp.net - no one is in trouble, I
even had to correct one of my own.

Play Hard, Play Fair, Have fun. -

Sulriel

Msg# 5248

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 25, 2005 - 12:46:38 Topic ID# 5247
Not to be unduly querulous when this is clearly one of those judgment
calls that won't satisfy everyone no matter how hard the admins try,
but where's the 100 characters coming from for two lines of quote? In
a Word doc, I count a minimum of 93 characters fitting in a single
line. Naturally, there'll be blank spaces when you have a real
sentence, so it won't hit that maximum but cutting off at 100
characters is like saying you really can only quote about 75% of one line.

Dwim

>
> I've corrected quite a few reviews that had excessive quoting, I
> think I did ten this morning. You should see the /blockquote/ tags
> and a ADMIN note if one has been corrected. There were a couple that
> were close but ok, and I noted those as well, that they were ok.
>
> The rule says, no more than two lines, and I'm capping that at 100
> characters. It may or may not make a difference on the points for
> that story, depending on where in the point range the character
> counts falls.
>
> If you know you've used quotes in your reviews, please go back and
> skim over your reviews and let me know if there is one that needs to
> be checked or corrected. Or if you notice one of someone else's,
> please let me know and I'll check it - it's fine to post here or
> email me privately at Sulriel@h... - no one is in trouble, I
> even had to correct one of my own.
>
> Play Hard, Play Fair, Have fun. -
>
> Sulriel

Msg# 5249

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 25, 2005 - 12:54:31 Topic ID# 5247
> > I've corrected quite a few reviews that had excessive quoting, I
> > think I did ten this morning. You should see the /blockquote/ tags
> > and a ADMIN note if one has been corrected. There were a couple that
> > were close but ok, and I noted those as well, that they were ok.
> >
> > The rule says, no more than two lines, and I'm capping that at 100
> > characters. It may or may not make a difference on the points for
> > that story, depending on where in the point range the character
> > counts falls.
> >
> > If you know you've used quotes in your reviews, please go back and
> > skim over your reviews and let me know if there is one that needs to
> > be checked or corrected.

By "corrected", does this mean that you can alter the review if you
have it as draft or tentative? If it's finalized, does it mean you
just have to accept the blockquote, or can you submit a slightly
altered review that brings the quoting back down to the 100 character
limit?

Dwim

Msg# 5250

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by sulriel August 25, 2005 - 12:59:34 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:
> Not to be unduly querulous when this is clearly one of those
judgment> calls that won't satisfy everyone no matter how hard the
admins try,> but where's the 100 characters coming from for two lines
of quote? In> a Word doc, I count a minimum of 93 characters fitting
in a single > line. Naturally, there'll be blank spaces when you have
a real > sentence, so it won't hit that maximum but cutting off at 100
> characters is like saying you really can only quote about 75% of
one line.
>
>


a judgement call, but not entirely subjective.

my MSWord template is set to pro standards of courier 12 pt w/one
inch margins. I spot checked several full lines of text and they
ranged from 48 to 51 characters, so I decided to average that to
50/char per lines = 100 characters for two lines.

I realize fanfic and pro are worlds apart, and I apologize for
imposing one on the other - but I felt like this is something that
needed to move forward so I made the call.

This is something that will need to be discussed and clarified post-m
for next year, but at this point in this years awards, we'll muddle
forward as best we can.

Msg# 5251

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by sulriel August 25, 2005 - 13:11:38 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:
>
> > > I've corrected quite a few reviews that had excessive quoting,
I > > > think I did ten this morning. You should see
the /blockquote/ tags > > > and a ADMIN note if one has been
corrected. There were a couple that > > > were close but ok, and I
noted those as well, that they were ok.
> > >
> > > The rule says, no more than two lines, and I'm capping that at
100 > > > characters. It may or may not make a difference on the
points for > > > that story, depending on where in the point range
the character > > > counts falls.
> > >
> > > If you know you've used quotes in your reviews, please go back
and > > > skim over your reviews and let me know if there is one that
needs to > > > be checked or corrected.
>


> By "corrected", does this mean that you can alter the review if you
> have it as draft or tentative? If it's finalized, does it mean you
> just have to accept the blockquote, or can you submit a slightly
> altered review that brings the quoting back down to the 100
character> limit?
>
> Dwim


I can't see, and wouldn't alter if I could, the draft and tent votes.

Once it's finalized, if it has more than two lines and/or 100
characters of quoted text, I'll /blockquote/ the additional
lines/characters - they'll still be readable in the review, but those
characters won't count toward the points total.

You can't resubmit a finalized vote. - another exec decsion made on
the fly that needs to be addressed before things gear up for next
year.

- out for a ride, if I survive the flight and the heat exhaustion,
I'll answer anything else when I get back.

Sulriel.

Msg# 5252

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by Leaward August 25, 2005 - 13:14:46 Topic ID# 5247
I think what might make part of the difference is that the page
width/line length on Word is different than it is on the review panel.
I copied a single line of text from one of my own reviews and copied
it into Word -- it took two lines on Word for 116 characters.

I cannot speak for the other reviews but the quote on the original
review was of multiple lines and 500+ characters so that did indeed
make a difference to the points.

Lea

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "sulriel" <Sulriel@h...> wrote:
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
> wrote:
> > Not to be unduly querulous when this is clearly one of those
> judgment> calls that won't satisfy everyone no matter how hard the
> admins try,> but where's the 100 characters coming from for two lines
> of quote? In> a Word doc, I count a minimum of 93 characters fitting
> in a single > line. Naturally, there'll be blank spaces when you have
> a real > sentence, so it won't hit that maximum but cutting off at 100
> > characters is like saying you really can only quote about 75% of
> one line.
> >
> >
>
>
> a judgement call, but not entirely subjective.
>
> my MSWord template is set to pro standards of courier 12 pt w/one
> inch margins. I spot checked several full lines of text and they
> ranged from 48 to 51 characters, so I decided to average that to
> 50/char per lines = 100 characters for two lines.
>
> I realize fanfic and pro are worlds apart, and I apologize for
> imposing one on the other - but I felt like this is something that
> needed to move forward so I made the call.
>
> This is something that will need to be discussed and clarified post-m
> for next year, but at this point in this years awards, we'll muddle
> forward as best we can.

Msg# 5253

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by C Dodd August 25, 2005 - 14:01:59 Topic ID# 5247
I read the word "line" to mean sentence, in this instance, but the 100
character limit seems reasonable to me.

On 8/25/05, Leaward <leaward_l@yahoo.com> wrote:
> I think what might make part of the difference is that the page
> width/line length on Word is different than it is on the review panel.
> I copied a single line of text from one of my own reviews and copied
> it into Word -- it took two lines on Word for 116 characters.
>
> I cannot speak for the other reviews but the quote on the original
> review was of multiple lines and 500+ characters so that did indeed
> make a difference to the points.
>
> Lea
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "sulriel" <Sulriel@h...> wrote:
> > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
> > wrote:
> > > Not to be unduly querulous when this is clearly one of those
> > judgment> calls that won't satisfy everyone no matter how hard the
> > admins try,> but where's the 100 characters coming from for two lines
> > of quote? In> a Word doc, I count a minimum of 93 characters fitting
> > in a single > line. Naturally, there'll be blank spaces when you have
> > a real > sentence, so it won't hit that maximum but cutting off at 100
> > > characters is like saying you really can only quote about 75% of
> > one line.
> > >
> > >
> >
> >
> > a judgement call, but not entirely subjective.
> >
> > my MSWord template is set to pro standards of courier 12 pt w/one
> > inch margins. I spot checked several full lines of text and they
> > ranged from 48 to 51 characters, so I decided to average that to
> > 50/char per lines = 100 characters for two lines.
> >
> > I realize fanfic and pro are worlds apart, and I apologize for
> > imposing one on the other - but I felt like this is something that
> > needed to move forward so I made the call.
> >
> > This is something that will need to be discussed and clarified post-m
> > for next year, but at this point in this years awards, we'll muddle
> > forward as best we can.
>
>
>
>
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Msg# 5254

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 25, 2005 - 14:03:50 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> I think what might make part of the difference is that the page
> width/line length on Word is different than it is on the review panel.
> I copied a single line of text from one of my own reviews and copied
> it into Word -- it took two lines on Word for 116 characters.
>
> I cannot speak for the other reviews but the quote on the original
> review was of multiple lines and 500+ characters so that did indeed
> make a difference to the points.
>
> Lea

The problem here is that what we're trying to avoid is that lovely
phenomenon of "padding". Every year, you ding some student for padding
his/her essay with totally irrelevant or unexplained stuff, for
"hiding behind the quotes", that is there only to reach a page limit
and to avoid showing off that the student doesn't understand the
material. It's a pain in the rear to deal with because padding isn't
reducible to a cut and dried standard, which is what all the students
want; you have to read the paper and see whether anything significant
is actually being made of the quoted material to justify its inclusion.

So it's a problem of quantitative standards imposing an artificial
limit on a something that is properly judged qualitatively. I don't
see that there's a way around this problem by refining the
quantitative end of the standard--it's just a clash of
incommensurables. Either quotes count to a degree, and we have to deal
with artificial limits that are going to be broken because 100
characters often times can't even express a complete thought if the
author is writing a couple of long but noteworthy sentences, or else
they don't count at all, and every quote is blockquoted, but we can
use them as much as we like.

That would be how I see the options playing out. Hopefully in
post-mortem, we'll be able to thrash it out properly for next year.

Dwim

Msg# 5255

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by Leaward August 25, 2005 - 14:11:50 Topic ID# 5247
It's already set out in the rules ...

V: Voting:

Section C: Method:

*7. Quoting of nominate material will only be allowed "in-line" and
must be no more than 2 sentences/lines.

So Rabidsamfan is correct. No more than 2 sentences and they must be
'in-line.'

The original review that came to our attention quoted approximately 6
paragraphs of speech and description and came well over 500
characters. But since then other quotes have been pointed out (I must
admit I asked Sulriel to cut down two of my own reviews where the
quote was a single sentence and it was in-line but rambled for for
over three lines. In one case, it made no point difference, in the
other it made a single point difference.) I think the idea is to make
it fair ... and not pad the reviews simply to get the points up.




--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:


>
> The problem here is that what we're trying to avoid is that lovely
> phenomenon of "padding". Every year, you ding some student for padding
> his/her essay with totally irrelevant or unexplained stuff, for
> "hiding behind the quotes", that is there only to reach a page limit
> and to avoid showing off that the student doesn't understand the
> material. It's a pain in the rear to deal with because padding isn't
> reducible to a cut and dried standard, which is what all the students
> want; you have to read the paper and see whether anything significant
> is actually being made of the quoted material to justify its inclusion.
>
> So it's a problem of quantitative standards imposing an artificial
> limit on a something that is properly judged qualitatively. I don't
> see that there's a way around this problem by refining the
> quantitative end of the standard--it's just a clash of
> incommensurables. Either quotes count to a degree, and we have to deal
> with artificial limits that are going to be broken because 100
> characters often times can't even express a complete thought if the
> author is writing a couple of long but noteworthy sentences, or else
> they don't count at all, and every quote is blockquoted, but we can
> use them as much as we like.
>
> That would be how I see the options playing out. Hopefully in
> post-mortem, we'll be able to thrash it out properly for next year.
>
> Dwim

Msg# 5256

Re: items on list Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 25, 2005 - 17:35:27 Topic ID# 5237
Well, my poem "The Council of Elrond" was still showing 0 reviews this
morning. There may be draft or tentative reviews for it, but it doesn't have any
final reviews.

But great work!

Lindelea

In a message dated 8/25/2005 3:19:22 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
...I'm not seeing any zeros!! (Is that true or did I miss some?)


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Msg# 5257

Clustered reviewless stories (Dwim) Posted by BLJean@aol.com August 25, 2005 - 17:40:12 Topic ID# 5257
But actually that would make sense... I for one have been nibbling away at
the ends, except when the name of an author I know happens to cross my mind (I
am subject to lots of random impulses...) and I look up their stories in
particular and start writing reviews.

So of course stories in the middle would get fewer reviews. They are harder
to get to!

You have to make a point of paging through until you reach the middle.

(making mental note)

HTH, (actually, hope it's an accurate assessment of the situation)
Lin

In a message dated 8/25/2005 3:19:22 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
So I don't get it. Either the stories without any reviews yet just
*happen* to be clustered in the middle of the 28 pages of fics
generated by the "2 or fewer reviews" filter, or it's a question to
pose to tech support.


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Msg# 5258

Re: items on list Posted by Chris Grzonka August 25, 2005 - 18:28:37 Topic ID# 5237
>
> Mystery solved. That "2 or fewer" filter is tied to stories that *you*
> have actually reviewed. That means there will *always* be at least one
> review for every story listed through that filter--yours.
>
> So of course no zeroes are showing up. We don't have a filter that
> sorts reviews independently of the reviewer currently logged in.
>
> Dwim

Now I'm confused. I used that filter today. But I got way more hits than I
have ever reviewed. I found some nice stories I had never seen before.

Chris

Msg# 5259

Re: items on list Posted by C Dodd August 25, 2005 - 20:18:39 Topic ID# 5237
I wrote to Anthony, to point out the problem and he said the filter queried
the review database and not the story database, so in effect a story has to
have a review in order to show up in the filter.

On 8/25/05, Chris Grzonka <grzonka@adelphia.net> wrote:
>
> >
> > Mystery solved. That "2 or fewer" filter is tied to stories that *you*
> > have actually reviewed. That means there will *always* be at least one
> > review for every story listed through that filter--yours.
> >
> > So of course no zeroes are showing up. We don't have a filter that
> > sorts reviews independently of the reviewer currently logged in.
> >
> > Dwim
>
> Now I'm confused. I used that filter today. But I got way more hits than I
> have ever reviewed. I found some nice stories I had never seen before.
>
> Chris
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Msg# 5260

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by C Dodd August 25, 2005 - 20:23:13 Topic ID# 5247
Maybe next year we could just always put the quotations we want into the
/blockquote/ tags so that quotations don't count in the voting at all, no
matter what the length of the quotation. That neatly destroys any desire to
quote superflously and makes it easier on the admins at the same time. Just
remind us how to tag on the actual review page so we see the info about how
quotations should be formatted every single time we write a review.

On 8/25/05, Leaward <leaward_l@yahoo.com> wrote:
>
> It's already set out in the rules ...
>
> V: Voting:
>
> Section C: Method:
>
> *7. Quoting of nominate material will only be allowed "in-line" and
> must be no more than 2 sentences/lines.
>
> So Rabidsamfan is correct. No more than 2 sentences and they must be
> 'in-line.'
>
> The original review that came to our attention quoted approximately 6
> paragraphs of speech and description and came well over 500
> characters. But since then other quotes have been pointed out (I must
> admit I asked Sulriel to cut down two of my own reviews where the
> quote was a single sentence and it was in-line but rambled for for
> over three lines. In one case, it made no point difference, in the
> other it made a single point difference.) I think the idea is to make
> it fair ... and not pad the reviews simply to get the points up.
>
>
>
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
> wrote:
>
>
> >
> > The problem here is that what we're trying to avoid is that lovely
> > phenomenon of "padding". Every year, you ding some student for padding
> > his/her essay with totally irrelevant or unexplained stuff, for
> > "hiding behind the quotes", that is there only to reach a page limit
> > and to avoid showing off that the student doesn't understand the
> > material. It's a pain in the rear to deal with because padding isn't
> > reducible to a cut and dried standard, which is what all the students
> > want; you have to read the paper and see whether anything significant
> > is actually being made of the quoted material to justify its inclusion.
> >
> > So it's a problem of quantitative standards imposing an artificial
> > limit on a something that is properly judged qualitatively. I don't
> > see that there's a way around this problem by refining the
> > quantitative end of the standard--it's just a clash of
> > incommensurables. Either quotes count to a degree, and we have to deal
> > with artificial limits that are going to be broken because 100
> > characters often times can't even express a complete thought if the
> > author is writing a couple of long but noteworthy sentences, or else
> > they don't count at all, and every quote is blockquoted, but we can
> > use them as much as we like.
> >
> > That would be how I see the options playing out. Hopefully in
> > post-mortem, we'll be able to thrash it out properly for next year.
> >
> > Dwim
>
>
>
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Msg# 5261

Reviews Final ~ 8/24/2005 Posted by sulriel August 25, 2005 - 22:07:55 Topic ID# 5261
121 new reviews today ! That's more than we had yesterday, can we do
it again tomorrow?? <shakes pom-poms>

************

Title: Friends in Small Spaces · Author: Varda's Servant · Genres:
Humor: Aragorn · ID: 102
Reviewer: LadyAranel · 2005-08-24 21:03:17 Score: 2
This was charming, amusing and slightly irreverent. Prissy elf? LOL.
It was interesting in that, while there was only dialoug, I found
that I could picture the entire scene quite well. Made me smile.

Title: Weregild · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical ·
ID: 1091
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-24 21:07:51 Score: 3
This short piece is spookily convincing. There's an internal logic to
Isildur's argument, but it's slightly unhinged, almost gollumish --
and that only serves to show how desperate the situation was, much
better than any direct exposition could have.

Title: A Father's Choice · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 298
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-24 21:37:54 Score: 2
As a mother of a pre-teen, and a young teen, son and the state of the
world today, the emotion in this drabble touches me in a fearful way.

Title: Kindred Spirits · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 299
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-24 21:39:43 Score: 2
This is an insightfull look at an unusual pairing. - but what a
connection, to see how much these two really had in common. well done.

Title: Wait for me - Eowyn · Author: elanor_of_aquitania ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 127
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-24 21:46:19 Score: 3
oh gosh, I've broken so many of my old 'rules of reading' during this
year's MEFAs. - poetry was one of them, and I find yet another poem
that touches me. I like the unusual style and meter of this one. -
and the pain Faramir must know with his Numenorian gift of long life.

Title: Best Laid Plans · Author: Lamiel · Genres: Humor · ID: 455
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-24 22:08:21 Score: 4
Oh my word! This was such a funny story! I love it when a story can
combine slapstick hilarity with an undertone of seriousness. Gimli's
affection for Legolas, Legolas' protectiveness of Aragorn, his
reaction to seeing Merry and Pippin--all underscore the deep love and
friendship of the Fellowship--one that not even encounters with
unexpected cakes can dim! Yet with all that, I was still chuckling
the whole way through.

Title: On His Stewardship · Author: Alawa · Races/Places: Gondor:
Poetry · ID: 73
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:32:05 Score: 3
There was something very noble and honorable about this poem. I like
the comparison of the white virgin banner to loyalty toward an absent
King. It takes a great man to be truly humble, and this poem
represents a lot of that. It's a good contrast for some of the things
Denethor said to Gandalf ere the end.

Title: On the Death of His Wife · Author: Alawa · Races/Places:
Gondor: Poetry · ID: 74
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:33:00 Score: 5
Oh, I liked this poem very much. I hadn't really considered the
problems for Denethor as he attempted to serve both Gondor and
Finduilas, but the way they clashed in this poem was beautiful. I
especially loved the sea imagery associated with Finduilas and how
the stone of Minas Tirith was used when illustrating her decline,
essentially trading one for the other. But perhaps my favorite part
was the idea that Finduilas was a steward, too. I can easily see that
about her, and it's portrayed very well here.

Title: East Wind · Author: Ellisande · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry ·
ID: 264
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:33:43 Score: 5
Good gap-filler. There have been a couple attempts at filling in for
the East Wind, but this one seems to pay special attention to
completing the song as crafted by Aragorn and Legolas. It fits the
style very well, and it has a note of finality to it, as though the
East Wind was the last wind contemplated and the last one listened
to. Or not listened to, as the case is here. Which is probably for
the best. I like the line about the wind spreading lies in silent
lands. Those would be lands most receptive to such things.

Title: The Ballad of Isildur and Elendil · Author: Lindelea ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 460
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:34:16 Score: 3
Training Gondor's future soldiers does indeed begin at an early age.
I liked this lullaby, though it felt a bit dark at times. But given
the times during which this lullaby was sung, that seems all too
appropriate. The repetition was good, and I enjoyed the fact that the
line most repeated was that of men holding to their duty. Let the
training begin.

Title: Denethor Limericks · Author: Llinos · Races/Places: Gondor:
Poetry · ID: 787
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:34:52 Score: 4
Mmm, yes, these limericks are very irreverent, but fun, too. My
favorite has to be the second one. I was reading along quietly when I
got to the line about having sons to squandor, and for some reason,
that forced a loud guffaw out of me. Very nice delivery. The limerick
is leading to that kind of a finish, but it's so blunt that it still
surprises you. Which makes it that much more enjoyable.

Title: The Girl I Kissed at the Rammas · Author: Marta ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 942
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:35:46 Score: 5
For some reason, as I was reading this, I kept remembering the song
from the 50s about a traveling man who has a girl in every country he
visits. Which struck me as appropriate, because some of the soldiers
of Gondor would probably have a similar setup. But of course there
would be one special girl in a soldier's drinking song, and why not
the girl at the Rammas? The rhythm and style of this poem definitely
fit its purpose, and I can see this being sung after a few too many
drinks in smokey taverns. Good work.

Title: Wait for me - Eowyn · Author: elanor_of_aquitania ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 127
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:38:30 Score: 7
When I first stumbled upon this poem, I was completely blown away.
It's a brilliant use of the form seen in Tolkien's poem "The Lay of
the Children of Hurin," and it might just be done even better. By
virtue of its structure, you can read at least three different poems
out of it, and I'm sure there's more to be found if I had more
experience dissecting poetry. The lines on the right remind me most
of Gondor as Faramir contrasts light and dark and talks of shadows
and high-mindedness. The lines on the left remind me of Rohan, where
it speaks of reaching and flying unfettered. The two sides together
seem to form a more complete poem, much like the union between
Faramir and Eowyn. And though this poem is dark, there seems to be a
hopefulness about it as Faramir tells Eowyn to wait. Very moving and
very layered. Quite possibly the best way to depict the relationship
between this unusual couple.

Title: Beregond's Prayer standing on watch · Author:
elanor_of_aquitania · Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 258
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:39:39 Score: 6
Fascinating poem. I very much enjoyed the three divisions of men into
fickle, mortal, and frail. And I like the order in which they come.
Beregond's concern for Bergil should obviously be first, then he is
concerned with mortality and other individuals involved in the fight,
and then he seems to be concerned with those still fighting as they
try to keep Gondor safe. It starts narrow and then broadens until
it's a prayer for all of them. The structure is very fun, too, as
snippets of smaller poems emerge thanks to the break in the lines.
And these smaller poems seem to be very telling of Beregond's
emotions.

Title: Forlorn Hope · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races/Places: Gondor:
Poetry · ID: 210
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:46:03 Score: 6
I love the way this poem uses contrasts. The most obvious ones are
those involving the men themselves as they are turned from creatures
of soft feelings into bared steel. But I like the way sound is also
used. So much of poetry is based on sight and touch, but this uses
hearing as well. I like the idea of silence leaching everything away
and how they rode in that silence toward "coming thunder." Nice,
ominous overtones and it's a good contrast to the silence that has
made them what they are. Maybe the thunder will find a way to unmake
them. The imagery of men as blades that will be sheathed in the
ground was particularly moving, too, as was the idea of "moon-
drenched Ithilien." Powerful stuff.

Title: Beyond Imagination · Author: annmarwalk · Races/Places:
Gondor: Drabble · ID: 103
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:54:58 Score: 2
Very touching. I like the good!Denethor moments. There aren't nearly
enough of them, and this is something that most people can relate to.
Very simple, and yet still beyond what we understand.

Title: Echo · Author: Nancy Brooke · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble ·
ID: 684
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:55:58 Score: 3
The title of this story was actually what affected me most,
especially how it seems to put all of Boromir's things into the realm
of metaphor. This is just an echo of his life, and no one's going to
come in and tell Pippin to get out of it because it's just an echo.
Good introspection on Pippin's part, too.

Title: So Other Men May Fight · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 958
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:56:51 Score: 3
I love the weapons Bergil turns on his father to get him to stay:
defiance and loyalty. Both are sorely needed, and I like the fact
that they appeal to Beregond now. He knows how much these traits will
help Gondor in the coming days, and he can't turn them down in his
son. Good drabble.

Title: Goldfinch and Nightingale · Author: Nrink · Races/Places:
Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 504
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 01:59:39 Score: 2
Definitely ominous given the man that Finduilas will end up marrying.
I like the way this shows Minas Tirith in different perspectives and
how some can see its beauty but others only want what they were
brought up with.

Title: Dragon of the North · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Gondor:
Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 395
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:00:01 Score: 3
I enjoyed Denethor's attitude in this story. Gondor is everything to
him, both now and up until his death. And he wants only the best for
Gondor. I can see how this want would affect his perceptions of an
unknown Northerner. Good characterization.

Title: Patrimony · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-
Quest Drabbles · ID: 247
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:01:59 Score: 4
There really need to be more stories in which Denethor and Faramir
are on more than just speaking terms. I liked the way that Faramir's
thirst for knowledge was portrayed, and I loved Denethor's reaciton
when this thirst extended into darker subject matter. Faramir's brave
vow was wonderful, but even better was the fact that Denethor seemed
to believe him. I just wish his confidence in his second son could
have lasted. Great drabble.

Title: A Warrior's Skills · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Gondor:
Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 551
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:04:30 Score: 4
Faramir is truly fortunate to have men like this in his patrol. I
love the idea that they would not only understand his knowledge
beyond the art of war but also want and appreciate it. Faramir's
words about not loving the sword but rather what the sword protects
have weighed in as some of my favorite Tolkien quotes, and I can see
those words being put into action in this drabble. Warriors do need
more than just skill with the sword, and I'm glad that Faramir's men
recognize this.

Title: Hide and Seek · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Races/Places:
Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 637
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:06:39 Score: 4
The fandom needs more drabbles like these. I love the stories that
focus on a good relationship between Denethor and Faramir. It's
definitely bittersweet, because we see what could have been and know
how far astray it went, but at the same time, it's heartwarming to
think that Faramir had his father's love and approval as a child. And
it also feeds nicely into Denethor's grief at the end of his life
when he thinks Faramir is dying.

Title: Sand-castles when the tide is flowing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 549
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:07:42 Score: 4
More than anything else, this drabble reminded me of what Boromir's
and Faramir's names meant. Boromir is certainly the faithful jewell,
who creates high and lofty places that his father can be proud of.
But Faramir is sufficient, and his tower is the one still standing
after the tide retreats. Nice use of sand-castles as a metaphor, and
great foreshadowing of what will ultimately become of these two
brothers.

Title: Elements of Ithilien · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 536
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:11:28 Score: 4
Very thorough characterization of Faramir! I think I liked the first
drabble best, actually. He seemed to be lying in ambush, but even
then, he was still very observant and was even making note of the
minor things in life. It's so very Faramir. I also liked the water
drabble quite a bit and how he resisted the temptation of the Ring by
remembering Numenor. I can see Faramir falling back on history as a
shield against the Ring.

Title: A Long Tradition of Ancient Lore · Author: Elena Tiriel ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 206
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:18:01 Score: 4
Denethor's a sly one. I love the way he sparked Faramir's interest by
expanding history to include more than just rote memorization. I
wonder if he'll regret it later when Faramir decides to expand his
understanding where Gandalf is concerned. Or the Ring. But for the
moment, this was a wonderfully touching little drabble between father
and son before the relationship soured. Loved it.

Title: Interment · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-
Quest Drabbles · ID: 379
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:18:29 Score: 4
Denethor's grief was very well portrayed in this drabble, but I
actually enjoyed the characterization of Finduilas more. Which is odd
since she isn't really in the drabble. But I love the idea of quiet
stubbornness that extends even beyond death to a grave that Denethor
considers foolish. That's a very strong-willed lady, and I suspect
that she was a good match for Denethor.

Title: Duty · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble ·
ID: 240
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:20:03 Score: 5
I was as chilled as Boromir after reading this drabble. I liked the
way that the sight of the Argonath drew out his thoughts, and I liked
the way that he suddenly felt very alone, abandoned by the kings, by
perhaps even Rohan, and (had he gone further) I'm sure he could have
distanced himself from his father. Which left only Boromir and his
duty, which was to protect Gondor using what he had at hand.
Definitely ominous, and it doesn't look good for Frodo. Great insight
into Boromir's mind.

Title: Shipwright · Author: Berzerker Prime · Races/Places: Elves ·
ID: 1053
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:24:25 Score: 4
I really thought this was very well written. It's just the kind of
thing I would write and therefore it is nice that someone has got
there first and done such a good job. I do like how you played off
the geographical opposition with the opposition in Cirdan's mind. I
also admired the way in which you captured your characters. I have a
bit of a soft spot for Gandalf and it was lovely to see him done well.

Title: Voices of the Forgotten · Author: jen_loves_elves ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 435
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:27:03 Score: 6
What amazed me most about this drabble series was how individual each
drabble was. Every characterization of each queen and also each king
was unique. They all received a different place in the spotlight, and
they call came with their own failings and strengths. I could picture
each one, and I was actually sorry to move on to the next drabble
because I wanted to get to know them better. The emotions tied into
these drabbles were also fascinating. There was humor, sorrow,
desperation, fear, arrogance, and just about every other emotion
imaginable. Fascinating journey through Gondor's royal family!

Title: Gathering the Pieces · Author: Tehta · Races/Places: Elves:
First Age · ID: 13
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:32:03 Score: 3
This was a very clever piece of writing. I loved the juxtaposition
between the metaphor of the game and the events in Maedhros' life. I
think it enabled the reader to see his sheer detachment without
having to sidetrack us from the narrative - something I felt was
quite brilliant. Excellent canon knowledge, skillfully employed.

Title: Marriage Counseling · Author: annmarwalk · Races/Places:
Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 111
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:32:32 Score: 4
There's something unnerving about the fact that Finduilas never
directly answers Imrahil's question. She appears happy enough, but
I'm not entirely satisfied with her remarks that marriage is
affection and respect. Clearly, Imrahil is not either, but Finduilas
seems content right now. It's probably enough to satisfy her brother
for the moment, but I can't help shivering. Something about this
feels slightly ominous.

Title: A Father's Choice · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Gondor:
Drabble · ID: 298
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 02:32:56 Score: 4
Kudos to Beregond for being such an understanding parent. And there's
definitely wisdom here, too, though perhaps a different kind than
what one might normally expect. Bergil would definitely be safer
somewhere else, but Beregond can see deeper than that, and he can see
that this is something Bergil needs to do. Great portrayal of a very
bittersweet moment.

Title: The Last Fruit · Author: Finch · Races/Places: Elves: First
Age · ID: 728
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:41:09 Score: 3
How wonderful to finally find someone who thinks about the people who
were abandoned as well as the ones who abandoned them. I really did
enjoy this, I thought it was realistic, well written and powerful in
the extreme. I find myself longing for a sequel in which the second
daughter to house of Finarfin meets the first. If one exists then let
me know.

Title: One Word · Author: Joan Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: First
Age · ID: 1081
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:44:06 Score: 2
A very poignant look at the power language holds over our very
selves. I think the story works better for it not focussing on one of
the 'great and powerful' - bans like that have an effect on everyone.
Very enjoyable read indeed.

Title: Wisdom Long Obscured · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places:
Elves: Lothlorien · ID: 1012
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 02:56:16 Score: 6
Wonderful, lovely, fantastic, brilliant - right I'd better stop or I
will use up all my vocabulary before I've even started. Suffice it to
say I really liked that. Celeborn is, as I am sure you know, a very
neglected and maligned character and it is great to see him finally
given the respect he deserves. More importantly, not only do you
recognise his existence, you separate him out from Galadriel both in
history and temperament. I believe you really have a handle on him.

Aragorn too was written excellently and realistically. You homed in
on exactly the recriminations and guilt that he would be feeling
after such a painful loss and did so without making him overly
emotionally weepy.

Loved it!

Title: Here sits, in secret, blest Theology · Author: annmarwalk ·
Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 388
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:13:09 Score: 3
Interesting. I like the idea of a grizzled old Ranger passing
something like this on to Faramir, and I like the idea of his using
this in a time of need. Stewardship has many demands, and Faramir is
the type of person who might chance a hunch or a vague memory to meet
those demands.

Title: Finduilas' Dance · Author: jen_loves_elves · Races/Places:
Gondor · ID: 431
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:14:18 Score: 4
There's almost an eerie feel to this story. Something surreal and
mystical, particularly the moment when Mithrellas appears. Finduilas
herself, though, was a very solid character. She's clearly of an
independent mind, which might explain how she survived in Gondor for
as long as she did. And the differences already appearing between
Boromir and Faramir were very telling. Good characterization work on
all involved, and good tone.

Title: Written on Cloth · Author: shadow975 · Races/Places: Gondor ·
ID: 527
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:14:50 Score: 4
Something I liked best about Aragorn's coronation was his decision
that the office of the Steward should not end, and this story seems
to reinforce that idea. The Steward is still Steward, and his banner
can still be found in Minas Tirith. I think Faramir also feels a bit
more at ease, now, and hearing his father's words repeated by Aragorn
probably did a lot to assure his fealty.

Title: Truth Be Told · Author: pearltook1 · Races/Places: Gondor ·
ID: 852
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:16:13 Score: 5
I've always wondered when and how Faramir was told of his father's
death. This was an excellent recounting of the event. I liked how
Faramir made certain that both Pippin and Beregond were around to
share the story. It was probably easier with both of them there, and
they would have been able to fill in any gaps that the other might
have had. Faramir's persistence in wanting to know what happened made
my heart ache, and I can only imagine what he went through when all
that he knew was that his father was dead and no one would tell him
how or why. Good characterization work.

Title: Language Lessons · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 190
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:17:17 Score: 5
I really liked this early look into the Steward's family, and I liked
the way that Denethor let Boromir know that some things were not to
be taken lightly. Denethor's characterization was wonderfully
complex, from his disciplinary measures with Boromir to his talk with
Finduilas about Dol Amroth. I can see quite a bit of his father in
Boromir, and I think it very appropriate that Finduilas would find it
difficult to understand her oldest son. I lalso iked the comparison
to her kinsmen in Dol Amroth. It helped explain where Faramir comes
from and what things shaped him. Nicely written.

Title: Offerings · Author: Raksha the Demon · Races/Places: Gondor:
Boromir and Faramir · ID: 322
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:18:23 Score: 5
At the end of Return of the King, Faramir was in desperate need of
some closure as far as matters with his father were concerned. Sadly,
though, Tolkien never really gave us any, so I'm glad we can revert
to fanfics like this one. I loved the way he was trying to forgive in
the first ficlet but was still mired in the shadows. The second
ficlet was much brighter, and Faramir seemed to have reached an
understanding of sorts. He still acknowledged the shadows, but he was
finally able to step out of them. Beautifully written. Loved the
parallels between the two.

Title: On the West Slopes of Mindolluin · Author: Gwynnyd ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 576
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:19:32 Score: 5
I liked the idea that Boromir was a willing conspirator to Faramir's
truancy. It gave both men some interesting characterization. But I
was even more intrigued with Boromir's choice of hunting grounds. It
was an interesting extrapolation of Faramir's statement that Boromir
didn't take well to the fact that their father wasn't king. I liked
the fact that Faramir ias uneasy, but despite that, he did what was
needed. And he did it in a way that didn't necessarily mesh with the
military manner. Lovely bit of foreshadowing.

Title: Leavetakings · Author: Celandine Brandybuck · Races/Places:
Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 188
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:20:45 Score: 4
I really like the way that Finduilas was such a large part of
Denethor's life. Her death seems to have served as a catalyst for a
sterner, grimmer man, which paves the way for a man who was willing
to risk the palantir later on. I also really liked Adrahil and
Imrahil in this story, and I liked Imrahil's attempt to persuade
Denethor that Faramir and Boromir should come to Dol Amroth. He's a
tricky one, appealing to duty in that way. Very tender and moving
story!

Title: A Gift at Year's Turning · Author: Celandine Brandybuck ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 186
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:21:25 Score: 5
Brilliant moment with the Steward's family. I loved how well defined
all the characters were, and I enjoyed the tidbits of culture and
history that were thrown in, such as the rules dictating the custom
of gift exchanging. Little things like that made this a very
enriching story. And of course I loved Faramir's introduction to the
world. Interesting take on it, and it explains quite a bit. Loved the
foreshadowing toward the end, too, with Finduilas's head on the
pillow. That was chilling.

Title: The Sky Wept Diamonds · Author: Elen Kortirion · Races/Places:
Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 710
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:26:32 Score: 6
Great imagery! I loved the descriptions of light and shadows. The
omens surrounding Boromir's birth were definitely foreboding, but I
loved the fact that Finduilas wouldn't shrink from them. Her
characterization was brilliant. She was strong and hopeful, but she
was also wise. Definitely a good match for Denethor. As for Denethor
himself, he didn't have much time in this story, but he certainly
made the most of what he had. He was stern and relentless, but as the
serving woman observed, he was completely devoted to Finduilas. I
loved the descriptions of the lengths he went to just to please her.
And like Finduilas, he was also strong when he needed to be. I see a
lot of what both Boromir and Faramir will inherit.

Title: The Men Who Would Be Steward · Author: Michael Martinez ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Historical · ID: 1137
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:26:56 Score: 6
I really enjoyed this look at the stewards, and particularly the look
at Boromir. It drew firmly from canon, constructed logical
extrapolations, and then used those extrapolations to create other
theories. The end result was a far more complete picture of Boromir,
Faramir, and Denethor than what is given on the surface of LotR. I
loved the idea of Boromir thinking on his own terms and assessing
things based on opportunity, not on risk. I had not thought of
his "so be it" answer as a diplomatic side step, but the more I think
about it, the more sense it makes. And it gives Boromir a few more
qualities that weren't quite as obvious in LotR.

Title: The Best Gift of All · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and Faramir · ID: 739
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:27:37 Score: 6
This story was definitely enjoyable, but it didn't really hit me
until the end. The moment where Imrahil takes Faramir out into the
hall only to discover that Boromir has come along for the ride was
wonderfully portrayed. I loved Boromir's method of greeting his
brother with a book that Boromir "can't make head or tails of." That
was a wonderful bit of insight into the relationship between the two.
Good characterization. I also enjoyed the characterization of the
Prince's family, and I loved the fact that Elphir is already in love
with dragons and adventures while Enchirion is concentrating on
boats. Nice touches all around.

Title: A Mantle of Silver Stars · Author: Nrink · Races/Places:
Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 214
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:28:31 Score: 6
There really are too few of these kinds of stories. Denethor is in
desperate need of better press, and moments like these (where he and
Faramir are behaving as a father and son ought to behave) are very
welcome. Especially when they're done as tenderly as in this story.
Finduilas was in fine form, too, and I loved her moments of
foresight, even the somewhat foreboding ones. Boromir's mention was
classic, and I can easily envision him causing all sorts of problems
for his caretakers. But the moments between Faramir and Denethor were
far and away my favorites. Great depictions and wonderful
characterizations.

Title: In the Forest, Singing Sorrowless · Author: Nrink ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 318
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:29:15 Score: 5
There was almost a mystical quality to this story, and I think that
might have been due to some excellent descriptive work as well as the
use of the Lay of Leithian, which was a great addition to the tale.
It felt like something out of dreams, and maybe this is one of the
few times that Denethor has let that happen. I really liked the
description of Dol Amroth, and I also liked fiery Imrahil and his
threat. Even more than that, I liked Denthor's response to it, and
it's all such a promising beginning for both Denethor and Finduilas.
A shame it couldn't continue.

Title: Repose Earned, Words Unspoken · Author: maranya14 ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 482
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:31:01 Score: 6
The thing I liked most about this story was the way Denethor likened
Faramir to Ecthelion. That's a comparison I hadn't seen before.
Faramir and Finduilas are often compared, and Denethor's grief is
frequently turned to anger because Faramir reminds him of his wife.
But to have Faramir compared with Ecthelion is a brilliant stroke,
especially considering Ecthelion's friendliness with Thorongil and
Gandalf.

Another thing I liked about this story was how the narrative changed
over the months as events take their toll, and I loved the defiance
in the very end as Denethor decides to burn hot enough for both
himself and Faramir. Very powerful ending passage.

Title: Pride and Despair · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Gondor:
Denethor and Finduilas · ID: 579
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:32:27 Score: 6
I love how Denethor progressed through the flashbacks to the man that
he became. He changed quite a bit over the years, and yet some things
remained the same. His defiance, for example, and his yearning to
serve Gondor to the best of his ability. That's something that can be
seen in all the flashbacks, and the defiance was certainly something
that fueled his decision to create a pyre for himself and for
Faramir. Very nice character development on Denethor's part, and
great characterization of Faramir and Boromir in the two flashbacks
that they share. Within the boys were hints of the men they would
become.

Title: Refraction · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Denethor
and Finduilas · ID: 750
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:34:59 Score: 5
Very chilling tale! I loved this new version of Finduilas's death,
and I loved how so often in the course of the telling, Denethor
seemed to be trying to convince himself more than anyone else. The
prospect of a third child and the palantir made for a very dark
combination, and I have to wonder exactly what Finduilas saw when she
confronted it. Or why Denethor decided to overcome it. Or what
haunted Faramir before his mother took the brunt of the visions upon
herself. Fascinating tale, and I think it made Finduilas a stronger
character than what exists in canon. I can never say no to that.

Title: Inheritance · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor:
Historical · ID: 1087
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:36:30 Score: 6
I loved the way this story took the little bits known about Narmacil,
Calmacil, and Minalcar and expanded them until it could be seen
exactly why Minalcar made such a good regent and - afterwards - such
a good king. Hyarmendacil is right. If his sons and grandsons
can't "see," then no amount of words on his part is going to do any
good. But Minalcar does see, and I loved the way that this brought
hope to Hyarmendacil. I also liked the line about usurpers and
kinslayers. Sadly, I actually understood that joke. And here I was
thinking I had stayed out of the geek crowd. Ah well. Brilliant
story, and brilliant expansion upon the little that canon gives us.

Title: Weregild · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Historical ·
ID: 1091
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:38:23 Score: 7
I've got something of a soft spot for Isildur, too, though I can't
really say that I approve of his choice. But he was certainly valiant
back in Numenor, and he proved it again in this story. I really liked
the part where Isildur said that their fight was meant to give hope
to enslaved descendents. That was a very sobering statement and spoke
volumes about the odds they'd gone up against and the desperation
they had felt. It certainly shed new light onto Isildur's feelings
regarding their victory. And I liked the way his own fight with
Sauron (striking off the Ring) paralleled the rest of the battle. It
wasn't meant as a victory stroke. Rather, it was meant to buy time
and set an example. Fascinating perspective, and I loved the
justification given for keeping the Ring. There was certainly a taint
there in the reasoning, but it was slight enough that Isildur would
never have been aware of it.

Title: The Seeing Stone · Author: Finch · Races/Places: Gondor:
Historical · ID: 346
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:39:33 Score: 5
This is definitely the first time that I've seen a palantir used as a
viewpoint, and I'm amazed with the results. The stone was
clearly...well, a stone. He saw things and noted that such was the
way of the world even if he couldn't understand the reasons. It felt
very much like what a stone would think, and I loved the idea that
the faces of all who looked into him/her/it were still there but
could no longer be seen. And while stones may not weep, it seemed as
though he wanted to. Moving little piece.

Title: A mother's duty · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 1384
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:42:20 Score: 4
I was quite moved by this little vignette. Finduilas is such a
strong, shrewd character here who seems to see something unsettling
in the future. She is combining a mother's duty with her duty to
Gondor, and there seem to be compromises made all around. Definitely
sobering, but it says volumes about the strength of Finduilas's
personality. I also love the hesitation on Ioreth's part and how it's
pity that moves her in the end. Great characterization for both women.

Title: Green Seas · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor: Vignette ·
ID: 453
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:42:51 Score: 4
I love the little touches of humor in this story, such as the fact
that nobody can remember the name of a child who was crushed between
the docks and the ships. The humor stays throughout, too, which
prevents this story of parting from becoming an angst-fest. It stays
light, though not too light, and the dialogue between the three
participants feels very appropriate for their ages. Interesting look
at an interesting turning point for Theoden.

Title: Finduilas' Song · Author: Ellisande · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 265
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:43:46 Score: 5
Very sobering song and beautifully written. Great imagery, and I love
how the metaphors were carried over to the point where they became
action-oriented. The repeated use of waters and dream says a lot
about Finduilas's background as well as how much the stone walls of
Minas Tirith are hurting her spirit. Great diagnosis of some of her
problems, and great characterization, particularly with her
willingness to keep trying. That seems very fitting in the woman that
Denethor chose to marry.

Title: Cold Memories · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 82
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:44:38 Score: 4
I would have paid money to see Faramir hit Denethor with a snowball.
I loved the Steward's reaction to that little incident, too. And the
idea of Denethor helping Faramir and Boromir build a snowman was
brilliant. Definitely light-hearted, but the idea of Faramir keeping
this cold-yet-warm memory close to his heart gives it a depth it
might not otherwise have had. Good story!

Title: Watcher on the Height · Author: Chris · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 1015
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:45:09 Score: 3
I like the stories focusing on those characters who were seldom seen
or severely unappreciated, so of course I liked this story. I enjoyed
the details given to each of the characters and the little quirks and
traits that came out over the course of the day. It made them seem
very real, which made the emotions easier to realize in the end.

Title: The Healing Touch · Author: Werecat · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 1312
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:45:29 Score: 3
I really enjoyed the twist in this story when the healer realized
that the cat might be doing far more good than harm. And I can easily
envision a purring cat soothing a troubled boy. I've had a cat fall
asleep mid-purr against my side before, and it's a remarkable
experience. This brings back very good memories, so many thanks for
that.

Title: The Laughing Oliphaunt · Author: Aeneid · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 998
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:46:38 Score: 6
Great series of vignettes! I loved how it was all tied in with the
fateful night when the last bridge was cast down, and how the ending
brought it even closer to canon events as Faramir recited his dream.
But as for the vignettes themselves, there was such a wide assortment
of different characters coming from different backgrounds. It was
truly amazing. Each had his own story to tell, and each had something
different to offer, from grizzled older captains to trembling young
soldiers to the Steward's sons themselves. Brilliant
characterizations on each of them. The canon characters were firmly
rooted in what Tolkien gave us, and the original characters were
solid enough to stand beside them. Great writing.

Title: Call of the Druedain · Author: thevina_finduilas ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 565
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:49:04 Score: 5
Fun story. I really enjoyed the rambling nature of the narrative. It
felt very much like he was sitting there relating all of this to me.
I think I learned something about drum making, and I learned even
more about his character. I liked how went on about what kind of wood
was right, particularly the part about fickle musicians whom he would
lead into the woods and who would then pay more money. But most of
all, I liked the thought that he might find the Druadan and be happy.
That was a wonderfully wistful note of hope to conclude on.

Title: Old Wives' Tales · Author: Werecat · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 350
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:52:45 Score: 4
Interesting tale. I enjoyed the initial encounter between Eowyn and
the cat, and I liked how her superstitions were rebuffed by Luthwen.
She seemed to be a very competent lady, and her story was told very
well. It's interesting that Eowyn's distaste for cats would be shared
by some of Gondor, but for those who escaped the plague, the old
superstitions would be replaced by new ones.

Title: Strange Meeting · Author: JeannieMac · Races/Places: Gondor:
Houses of Healing · ID: 743
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 03:54:00 Score: 6
I loved the myriad of emotions and roles that both Aragorn and
Faramir went through during the course of this story. Aragorn, in
particular, was fascinating to watch. He was commanding and regal,
but he could also be quiet and watchful. Initially, it was almost as
though he was sorting through to see which one Faramir would respond
to, which is an intriguing concept. And in the end, he seemed to
settle on friendship between lords. Faramir himself was
heartbreaking. His despair was tangible, and his reluctance to return
hurt. He came around by degrees, and it felt as though he fought for
every step he took in the right direction. Definitely a strange
meeting between these two, and very well told in this story.

Title: On the Flood · Author: Acacea · Races/Places: Gondor: Original
Characters · ID: 284
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:01:20 Score: 5
Very nice descriptive work in this vignette. The scene is set well,
and through it, we come to know the original character. I like the
way his personality is shown through his thoughts on his surroundings
and his grief for his brother. It felt as though his character was
being reflected back at us through the setting, and that tied the
story together nicely. But I think the part I liked best was the idea
of the mud sliding out from under him when he realizes what the river
has brought and how bittersweet a giver it can be.

Title: Before the Doors of the Houses of Healing · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Houses of Healing · ID: 529
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:02:55 Score: 6
I must defer to Gandalf's wisdom in this story. And Eomer's, too.
There were many rash deeds that day, and Imrahil certainly didn't
need to add to the tally. I like the emphasis given to his role as a
leader in Gondor and the possibility that he might have turned back
with Gandalf if he'd learned that the Steward and his son were both
near death. I think Imrahil would have been wise enough to see
Gondor's need, but I think it might have also distracted him just
enough to be costly. I loved Imrahil's anger when he learned what
happened and also learned that others knew but did not tell him.
Emotions were running high, and his played very well into the mix.

Title: Making of Boys · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor:
Houses of Healing · ID: 237
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:03:40 Score: 6
Ioreth always struck me as a very maternal presence in the Houses of
Healing, and I get the same impression from her here, too. And given
all the boys wandering around, I think that's not an unfounded
feeling. I loved her thoughts on them and the idea that for now they
should be lambs instead of lions. There was a lot of great
introspection, but it never went so deep that it stopped sounding
like Ioreth. It seemed to brush greater things and then move on to
more practical matters. And I really enjoyed the bits of humor, too,
such as the missing broom she spies in someone's hand. Very well-
rounded story, and great character voice for Ioreth. She sounds just
as I'd imagined her.

Title: Below the Balcony · Author: Ninamazing · Races/Places: Gondor:
Houses of Healing · ID: 496
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:04:22 Score: 4
So now we know what everybody was thinking when Faramir kissed Eowyn
in full view of the city. I enjoyed seeing hope come in different
ways to different people, and how they associated this hope with
Faramir and Eowyn. Times were changing quickly by then, and I can see
the people of Minas Tirith looking to their Steward and to the White
Lady for a sign that these changes were for the best.

Title: Fever Dreams · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses
of Healing · ID: 397
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:04:50 Score: 4
This is definitely an interesting take on Faramir's experience in the
Houses of Healing. He was certainly weak when Aragorn first called
him back, but the idea that he might not remember that experience on
his second waking intrigues me. He has to go through it all again,
and the fact that his dreams have been disturbing isn't going to
help. It feels as though he's mixed dreams and reality, and that can
be a very confusing experience. I don't envy him.

Title: To Labor and To Wait · Author: Aliana · Races/Places: Gondor:
Houses of Healing · ID: 79
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:07:50 Score: 4
This was a very interesting series of vignettes showcasing different
people, and I enjoyed seeing how they prepared for the task ahead in
different ways. From the very old to the very young, they sensed what
was coming. Sense was also an interesting part of these vignettes,
because so many aspects of sense were utilized. Smell, sound, sight,
and touch were all present in one form or another, and by using such
a variety, this became a very complete picture.

Title: Twilight · Author: Acacea · Races/Places: Gondor: Boromir and
Faramir · ID: 1022
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:13:28 Score: 7
The frog had me smiling all the way through the story. Poor little
amphibian. I suspect that Boromir was an even greater help to Faramir
as the frog climbed higher, and I loved the idea that they felt
compelled to name the frog and find a place for the well. It's a very
light-hearted moment, but true to the Steward's family, they find a
way to make it apply to what they've been talking about. And also
true to the Steward's family, they never come right out and say that
this could be a metaphor for Ithilien. They walk around the issue,
each knowing what the other is thinking but also knowing that to say
as much would ruin the moment and bring the darkness back. Best to
leave it as a simple problem of a frog climbing out of a well. And I
think that's what I liked best about this story: the depth of
understanding between the two brothers. They are definitely a good
team, whether it's commanding the men or bolstering each other. Great
story.

Title: Flame of the West · Author: Altariel · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 1
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:16:04 Score: 7
It's a shame that Tolkien never wrote more about Aragorn and Faramir
after the War of the Ring, because if stories like these are any
indication, they made an incredible team. The give and take of the
dialogue, turning phrases around to meet other phrases which were
also turned, was beautiful. These two men foiled against one another
well, bringing out strengths and weaknesses both. I loved the moment
when Faramir made his oath, and I loved Aragorn's pause, ensuring
that he had Faramir's undivided attention for the last part. And
framing the exchange between the two men was some amazing narrative
and descriptive work. The contrast between the beginning and the end
played well into the discussion between Steward and King, and the
last line about Earendil seaeds the story nicely. Great job with
setting, symbolism, and characterization.

Title: Ad Sum · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Gondor: Original
Characters · ID: 693
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:26:40 Score: 8
Easily one of the best alternative viewpoints I've read, and perhaps
one of the most thought-provoking. Given the author, that's really
not a surprise, but even so, I was still caught off guard by this
woman's perspective on battle. It's so very different from most of
what's out there, but it rings true and there's a very simple kind of
logic behind it all. It was so easy to see where she was coming from
and how her life had been boiled down into her chosen profession to
the point where she could no longer escape it. Or wanted to escape
it. She'd found beauty and she was content. To be honest, I'm still
not sure how to react to this story. I want to pity her for her lot
in life, but she seemed to have no qualms about it, which makes pity
feel wasted. In any case, it was definitely a fascinating read, and I
like to think that the clasp she found toward the end belonged to
Halbarad. Somehow, it feels right that someone so devoted to her own
way of life should see to his final remains.

Title: Well Favored · Author: Isabeau of Greenlea · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 417
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:31:55 Score: 5
I really enjoyed this story. I had a few suspicions about the
identity of the man Luthien spoke to, but Imrahil was a long-shot
until he started describing Dol Amroth. I should have known it from
the horse, but I think I was too preoccupied with Luthien, who made a
charming character with a wonderful blend of childish curiosity and
shyness. I liked seeing the description of war from her eyes, and I
absolutely loved her reasoning in the end when she decided that
Imrahil was better off keeping her favor. He was a fantastic
character, too, and I loved all the moments that he was fighting back
a smile.

Title: The Mantle of Stone · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places:
Gondor · ID: 116
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:33:44 Score: 6
This is among the best characterizations of Aragorn that I have ever
read. Both Strider and Elessar can be seen in this story, and I love
the way that the story teller describes Aragorn upon meeting him. My
favorite moment from the story is actually a later elaboration on the
description. Aragorn turns to leave the storyteller and then stops in
response to a question, standing with the Pillars of the Argonath on
either side of him in the distance. Beautiful imagery work went into
this, and I can imagine how he might have looked, bordered by his
ancestors. This particular moment concludes with the answer to the
question of what is this man. Aragorn's response is simple
brilliance: "He is King." Enough said. Wonderful story.

Title: Cat's Cradle · Author: Kielle · Races/Places: Gondor:
Historical · ID: 452
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:45:27 Score: 8
Brilliant story! So that's what happened to the line of kings. It's
an intriguing theory, and it fits very well with canon, particularly
considering Beruthiel's thought that "blood will tell." As for
Beruthiel herself, I loved her portrayal here. I enjoyed seeing her
from Earnil's side as a somewhat distant and peculiar relation, and I
enjoyed even more seeing things from her perspective as she conferred
with Taron. It felt as though she had a much sharper vision than
Earnil and was more willing to look at the bigger picture. The cats
were also a good addition as a tie-in with the legend surrounding
Beruthiel, but I can't help wondering if some of the other aspects of
the legend were also true. Maybe not the part about being a
sorcereress, but she certainly seems to see into the heart of both
her nephew and her own son. And while the cats might not have had
anything to do with that, such an ability could have certainly made
her suspicious in the eyes of her subjects, especially if she was as
shrewd as their queen as she seems to be while watching Earnil. Great
story.

Title: When the King Returned · Author: Ninquelosse · Races/Places:
Gondor: Original Characters · ID: 497
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:46:41 Score: 6
The alternate viewpoint can be a tricky and dangerous thing, but it's
pulled off brilliantly here. The focus of this vignette is absolutely
right. Aragorn and Gandalf more or less admit it themselves during
the Last Debate, and Elrond certainly said it during the Council. A
host of men will not ensure victory but rather earn Mordor's
attention. And the leaders certainly aren't going to explain all the
Ring-lore as well as their desperate gamble to those serving beneath
them, which leaves them to draw their own conclusions. And this was a
fabulous example of what those conclusions might be. The practically
minded people have to wonder what in the world the captains are
thinking. Great story! I don't think I've seen something quite like
this before, and I love it.

Title: Cup of Bitterness: First Meeting · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Gondor · ID: 531
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-25 04:54:01 Score: 8
I had always wondered how Faramir came to be called Faramir. It's not
the most flattering of names if used with Boromir, even if it has
been used that way before before, and it struck me as unlikely that
Denethor would have taken an immediate disliking to his second son.
He was too deliberate and calculating for that. Thankfully, there are
stories like this one around to explain things, and I love the
explanation that Finduilas named him on the strength of a dream.
Denethor's reaction to the dream, and also to the prophecies that
Ecthelion mentions, felt very natural and carried some ominous
foreshadowing of the day when Boromir and Faramir would come to their
father with a dream. I liked Finduilas's words about Boromir being
faithful and Faramir being sufficient, and I liked how those two
complimented each other. But the thing I liked most of all in this
story was Denethor's characterization from beginning to end. He was a
loving husband and father, ambitious leader, a cunning politician, a
practical analyst, and a servant to his country. Very good and very
comprehensive analysis of his character throughout the story.

Title: Saying Farewell · Author: Finch · Books/Time: The Silmarillion
· ID: 730
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-25 05:15:44 Score: 2
Beautiful. Love it. I intend to go immediately and look for more.
Finrod and Amarie are an under-represented couple, whose devotion in
the face of their long separation is admirable. (Shame he didn't
stay!)

Title: House of Dust and Memory · Author: Itarille · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 523
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-25 05:21:49 Score: 2
Overlooked victims of the mess created by the desires and demands of
Finwe and Feanor. Abandoned to bear the scorn and pity of those who
remain in Valinor. Moving.

Title: The Letter · Author: Isil Elensar · Races/Places: Elves:
Mirkwood · ID: 1201
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-25 07:15:44 Score: 3
I liked how this story gave Thranduil a 'real' and fleshed out
personality instead of the 2D baddie that he so often is
misrepresented as being. What is more you gave him good family
dynamics to play with and a real concern for his son came across
clearly. Keep on ficcing.

Title: Butterbur and the King · Author: Eledhwen · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Vignette · ID: 261
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 09:12:26 Score: 5
This is a wonderful story told from a character we rarely hear from --
Barliman Butterbur. Eledhwen has captured Butterbur's speech
patterns wonderful, as well as offering his unique perspective of
seeing the people of Bree welcoming their new King. Little details
like Butterbur wondering where Arnor was and that they drank three
barrels dry allowed the reader to crawl inside the innkeeper's head
and remember that while the war went on south, life went on as usual
for our beloved Bree Barkeep.

Title: The Sweetest Harvest · Author: alex_cat_45 · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Elves · ID: 1001
Reviewer: erin_riwen · 2005-08-25 09:14:15 Score: 5
What a sweet and beautiful piece. So often, writers fail to find joy
with Elrond, seeing only anger or sadness - all there as well, but
with no balance, you don't see the entire character. I started out
loving slash Elrond and it is only recently that I have begun to
think on him and Celebrian to any degree and my thoughts are changing
from most slash writers and your story captures that. Love is indeed
like ripples and Elrond, I think, must have caused a lot of them, for
in my mind, he loved a lot. Well done, Alex.

Title: Touche · Author: DragonLady7 · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Vignette · ID: 229
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 09:29:12 Score: 4
A very enjoyable vignette that captures both Faramir and Eomer
totally in character. I would still like to know what it was they
were fighting for -- a bet, a matter of honour? Or just play? but
that's the joy of these stories because the reader can fill in their
own backstory. I find action sequences the hardest to write, yet this
author has written them so the movement is clear. Well done!

Title: Memory of Ents · Author: Rabidsamfan · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Friendship · ID: 800
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 09:36:02 Score: 4
Rabidsamfan has wonderfully captured the hobbits as they venture back
to the edges of the Old Forest. Little gems that talk about the trees
bending over to listen to the tale, and how they would understand the
hobbits weren't hurting the saplings but taking them to somewhere
they could grow tall and strong really give this story a depth and
layers that I love within a story.

Title: Weeping Iron Tears · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Grey Company · ID: 338
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 09:37:20 Score: 3
This scene has a nice soothing quality to it. Aragorn mourns for
Halbarad, but he remembers more the good than the last moments of his
life. I like the way Aragorn looks forward to the future Halbarad's
and so many others deaths has enabled instead of lingering in the
past. I like the last paragraph where he gets the feeling his friend
is still with him.

Title: Halbarad · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 341
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 09:43:01 Score: 4
This story has a creepy feeling to it. I don't know if it comes from
my knowledge that Halbarad will die or if it comes from the way the
reader gets the impression Halbarad knows he will die. He is so sure
for himself that he belongs to the dead although he still lives.

I like the difference in vision between the living and the dead.
Halbarad seems to stand between them. Seeing what the living see and
knowing what the dead would see.

Title: Reconciliation · Author: Nrink · Books/Time: Post-Ring War ·
ID: 44
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 09:45:45 Score: 3
This is a sad story but satisfying. Faramir comes to terms with his
father and lays his family to rest to be able to go on to the future.
I like the symbolism of throwing away the key to his parents grave.
He closes the door to his past and locks all past hurts away.

Title: The Swan Feather · Author: Starlight · Genres: Romance:
Vignette · ID: 50
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 09:46:11 Score: 3
This is a delightful little vignette. Who would have thought that
Denethor pays heed to superstition. No match in the drawer because it
brings ill luck, indeed. I love the tender touch of him fastening the
feather to the pillow to accommodate his brides customs.

Title: Insomnia · Author: AfterEver · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Second Age · ID: 62
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-25 10:43:24 Score: 3
This is an AU I have thought of while reading other stories about
this time. But I agree with Cirdan and Glorfindel, it feels not
right. Although this is a short piece the images and characters come
to life and I can vividly see the characters on the eve of battle.

Title: Always Dancing · Author: Mariposa · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship · ID: 928
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 10:48:03 Score: 4
This is a very interesting layered story -- on the surface Pippin
preparing young hobbits to defend the Shire, but there is so much
more. From the relationship between Merry and Pippin and the
adventures and horrors they have shared, to the memories of Boromir
teaching them how to defend themselves and the comparison of
swordplay to an intimate dance. Very well told, and very in-
character. Lovely.

Title: Fear no more · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 970
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 11:05:49 Score: 3
This is one of those hidden gems that you hope to find while reading
the volume of stories in the MEFA's. This is a beautifully written,
evocative glimpse and the author has managed to capture the emotion
of each character. And each character stays totally within Tolkien's
character. Faramir and his dreams, Arwen realizing their import.
Beautifully done!

Title: Fear no more · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 970
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-25 11:41:43 Score: 5

I'm delighted to find this incredible work, full of emotion and
imagery - both of pain and love. I'm awe-struck at the level of
technical skill of this piece that completely disappears under the
layers to form a beautiful work of art. I'm especially impressed with
how the description is perfectly balanced, deep and flavorful without
being overdone. The canon is well-woven and extended from the ancient
past into the Fourth Age. Very well done. I look forward to reading
more of your work.


Title: Binding · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 353
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-25 12:03:23 Score: 6
This story reminded me of the orthodox Jewish practice of a married
woman not exposing her hair in front of males outside her immediate
family or her husband. According to my suitemate (a Modern Orthodox
Jew, not married but she was talking about her parents) having
something that's private except to two people can provide a very
strong bond. I see a very similar thing playing out in this story:
whether there's any supernatural truth to Arwen's invocation to keep
Aragorn safe as she binds her hair, he has cleaved to her, and that
must have an amazing psychological power, to will him to "take care
of himself". Very evocative story.

Title: The Cornfield · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Villains · ID:
530
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 12:11:03 Score: 1
A good idea of what Sam might have been doing to lose sight of Frodo
and a good way to bridge that gaffe in the movie.

Title: Binding · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural ·
ID: 353
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-25 12:36:48 Score: 3
An interesting idea and one I think could very well be elven even if
it's not canon, it definitely deserves a place. Forodwaith has
captured two very intimate times between Aragorn and Arwen and put a
wonderfully romantic spin upon a simple ritual. Well written and
another 'hidden gem' well worth finding.

Title: Weapons Against The Enemy · Author: Nancy Brooke · Books/Time:
The Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 631
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-25 12:41:15 Score: 1
This is a cute story. Lots of unusual interactions!

Title: The Seeing Stone · Author: Finch · Races/Places: Gondor:
Historical · ID: 346
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 13:53:40 Score: 2
An interesting voice to hear in a story and a hard one to write with
well, yet well done it was. Good use of repetition about stones not
weeping. Perhaps this stone is mistaken in th end. It certain sounded
like weeping.

Title: Forgotten Casualty · Author: Thundera Tiger · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 591
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 14:06:54 Score: 3
I guess I should have guessed the ending from the title, but it was
still sad to see this curious little fox go. Good personification
here, drawing from what Tolkien wrote and expanding on the thoughts
of a wild animal. I liked this little fox and knew what he sensed and
hoped that he would get away.

Title: The Captain's Last Charge · Author: AmandaK · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 15:46:59 Score: 2
A well-captured dark moment in Faramir's life just before he thought
it would end. And so did we. It broke my heart when I first read
those lines by his father, and I felt it again in this story.

Title: Wreath of Steel and Silver · Author: Kielle · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 454
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 16:22:14 Score: 3
Ah, another who still chafes under the Kinslaying and Galadriel's
part in it. And is not willing to worship her beauty and let her off
the hook. But it does her some justice to show that she herself has
not forgiven, not earned forgiveness, not rationalized away her part.
Good work.

Title: Death Doth Come · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Villains:
Poetry · ID: 936
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 16:23:17 Score: 1
Good use of rhythm and rhyme here and quite a spooky look into the
thoughts of the barrow-wight.


Title: Alas, Poor Ufthak! · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-25 16:23:32 Score: 1
No loyalty among orcs, huh? Good use of a drabble here.

Title: Sweet Meat · Author: Ijemanja · Races/Places: Villains · ID:
1073
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Msg# 5262

Re: Clustered reviewless stories (Dwim) Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 25, 2005 - 22:39:20 Topic ID# 5257
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, BLJean@a... wrote:
> But actually that would make sense... I for one have been nibbling
away at
> the ends, except when the name of an author I know happens to cross
my mind (I
> am subject to lots of random impulses...) and I look up their
stories in
> particular and start writing reviews.
>
> So of course stories in the middle would get fewer reviews. They are
harder
> to get to!

Well, but I've ordered my reviewing this way:

Click first story number that displays to get everything in overall
numerical order.

Review one category at a time moving straight through from earliest
nomination to latest one within it.

Choose new category, roughly according to number of stories in it and
interest in category. Repeat process.



My review distribution should therefore be pretty evenly spread over
early, middle, and late nominations. I'm sure there must be others
using similar methods to review.

But perhaps you're right, and more people are moving through from the
ends of the spectrum. As long as all stories show up, I'll just keep
lighting the votive candles to the coding gods...

Dwim

>
> You have to make a point of paging through until you reach the middle.
>
> (making mental note)
>
> HTH, (actually, hope it's an accurate assessment of the situation)
> Lin
>
> In a message dated 8/25/2005 3:19:22 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
> MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com writes:
> So I don't get it. Either the stories without any reviews yet just
> *happen* to be clustered in the middle of the 28 pages of fics
> generated by the "2 or fewer reviews" filter, or it's a question to
> pose to tech support.
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Msg# 5263

Re: items on list Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 25, 2005 - 22:40:47 Topic ID# 5237
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, C Dodd <rabidsamfan@v...> wrote:
> I wrote to Anthony, to point out the problem and he said the filter
queried
> the review database and not the story database, so in effect a story
has to
> have a review in order to show up in the filter.


Aha. And the coding gods have answered...

Dwim, lighting another candle anyway ;-)


>
> On 8/25/05, Chris Grzonka <grzonka@a...> wrote:
> >
> > >
> > > Mystery solved. That "2 or fewer" filter is tied to stories that
*you*
> > > have actually reviewed. That means there will *always* be at
least one
> > > review for every story listed through that filter--yours.
> > >
> > > So of course no zeroes are showing up. We don't have a filter that
> > > sorts reviews independently of the reviewer currently logged in.
> > >
> > > Dwim
> >
> > Now I'm confused. I used that filter today. But I got way more
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Msg# 5264

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by Laura August 26, 2005 - 1:48:24 Topic ID# 5247
sulriel wrote:
>> If you know you've used quotes in your reviews, please go back and
>> skim over your reviews and let me know if there is one that needs to
>> be checked or corrected. Or if you notice one of someone else's,
>> please let me know and I'll check it - it's fine to post here or
>> email me privately at Sulriel@htcomp.net - no one is in trouble, I
>> even had to correct one of my own.
'Fessing up over here. I do have one finalized review with a quote of 135 characters. I swear I thought it met the two-line limit, but I forgot about the in-line stipulation. Anyway, I'm bad. Very, very bad. The good news, though, is that I checked it and the review has the same point value with or without the quote. But if you want to edit it anyway, it's my review for Lamiel's "The Deep Places." Sorry, Sulriel! I'm evil!!!
Thundera

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Msg# 5265

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by dwimmer\_laik August 26, 2005 - 8:43:41 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Laura" <thunderalaura@j...> wrote:
> sulriel wrote:
> >> If you know you've used quotes in your reviews, please go back and
> >> skim over your reviews and let me know if there is one that needs to
> >> be checked or corrected. Or if you notice one of someone else's,
> >> please let me know and I'll check it - it's fine to post here or
> >> email me privately at Sulriel@h... - no one is in trouble, I
> >> even had to correct one of my own.

> 'Fessing up over here. I do have one finalized review with a quote
of 135 characters.

One? *One*? Pish tosh, I say! That's about as evil as apple pie. Ask
Sulriel for my list sometime...

Dwim, the Dark Queen of Over-Quoting

Msg# 5266

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by Leaward August 26, 2005 - 9:49:35 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
wrote:
Ask
> Sulriel for my list sometime...
>
> Dwim, the Dark Queen of Over-Quoting

Dwim, how many stories would have NO reviews if not for you? Between
you and Marta, you've written 1/3 of all final reviews so far! I'm
going through my list and I have at least two out of only 70 that
exceed those guidelines (and I KNEW about the two sentences, just
never thought about the two 'lines' bit) I think there may be a few
more that exceed it as well. Don't worry about it.

Lea

Msg# 5267

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by Leaward August 26, 2005 - 9:51:07 Topic ID# 5247
Hmm, for a writer that was exceedingly unclear.

... two of only 70 that I've written ...

You've written how many? Over 500?

--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
> wrote:
> Ask
> > Sulriel for my list sometime...
> >
> > Dwim, the Dark Queen of Over-Quoting
>
> Dwim, how many stories would have NO reviews if not for you? Between
> you and Marta, you've written 1/3 of all final reviews so far! I'm
> going through my list and I have at least two out of only 70 that
> exceed those guidelines (and I KNEW about the two sentences, just
> never thought about the two 'lines' bit) I think there may be a few
> more that exceed it as well. Don't worry about it.
>
> Lea

Msg# 5268

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by sulriel August 26, 2005 - 12:07:06 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Laura" <thunderalaura@j...> wrote:
> 'Fessing up over here. I do have one finalized review with a quote
of 135 characters. I swear I thought it met the two-line limit, but I
forgot about the in-line stipulation. Anyway, I'm bad. Very, very bad.
The good news, though, is that I checked it and the review has the
same point value with or without the quote. But if you want to edit it
anyway, it's my review for Lamiel's "The Deep Places." Sorry, Sulriel!
I'm evil!!!
> Thundera

THANKS!! I'll go ahead and put a note on it.

Sulriel

Msg# 5269

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by sulriel August 26, 2005 - 12:14:37 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...> >
One? *One*? Pish tosh, I say! That's about as evil as apple pie. Ask
> Sulriel for my list sometime...
>
> Dwim, the Dark Queen of Over-Quoting


YES!! LOL! I went out in the yard and threw rocks in a northerly
direction when I got your second list. *G*

Sulriel

Msg# 5270

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by sulriel August 26, 2005 - 12:19:22 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
> wrote:
> Ask
> > Sulriel for my list sometime...
> >
> > Dwim, the Dark Queen of Over-Quoting
>
> Dwim, how many stories would have NO reviews if not for you? Between
> you and Marta, you've written 1/3 of all final reviews so far! I'm
> going through my list and I have at least two out of only 70 that
> exceed those guidelines (and I KNEW about the two sentences, just
> never thought about the two 'lines' bit) I think there may be a few
> more that exceed it as well. Don't worry about it.
>
> Lea

totally agree. Dwim's done a ton of reviews, I think probably the
highest reviewer and the limited quote rule should have been
emphasized from the beginning. It's too easy to get wrapped up in all
the good stuff and forget about rules. Like I said, I had to edit one
of my own and it was quite a bit over - it was just such a great line
I never thought about it adding points or anything except wanting to
say how much I appreciated it.

Sulriel

Msg# 5271

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by C Dodd August 26, 2005 - 12:42:07 Topic ID# 5247
Yeah, that's usually why I want to quote something too. Some phrasing is
just so delicious you want to highlight it.
I'll admit that the "In line" part of the rule confused me, because it
didn't (and still doesn't) make sense to me. Depending on which computer I'm
at, what the font setting is, etc., I see wide variations in number of
characters per line. Which is one of the reasons I haven't done much
quoting, even when I was tempted strongly.
Ah, the difficulties of separating the baby and the bathwater...


On 8/26/05, sulriel <Sulriel@htcomp.net> wrote:
>
> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "dwimmer_laik" <dwimmer_laik@y...>
> > wrote:
> > Ask
> > > Sulriel for my list sometime...
> > >
> > > Dwim, the Dark Queen of Over-Quoting
> >
> > Dwim, how many stories would have NO reviews if not for you? Between
> > you and Marta, you've written 1/3 of all final reviews so far! I'm
> > going through my list and I have at least two out of only 70 that
> > exceed those guidelines (and I KNEW about the two sentences, just
> > never thought about the two 'lines' bit) I think there may be a few
> > more that exceed it as well. Don't worry about it.
> >
> > Lea
>
> totally agree. Dwim's done a ton of reviews, I think probably the
> highest reviewer and the limited quote rule should have been
> emphasized from the beginning. It's too easy to get wrapped up in all
> the good stuff and forget about rules. Like I said, I had to edit one
> of my own and it was quite a bit over - it was just such a great line
> I never thought about it adding points or anything except wanting to
> say how much I appreciated it.
>
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Msg# 5272

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by sulriel August 26, 2005 - 12:55:50 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, C Dodd <rabidsamfan@v...> wrote:
> Yeah, that's usually why I want to quote something too. Some
phrasing is > just so delicious you want to highlight it.
> I'll admit that the "In line" part of the rule confused me,


I'll honestly say that I don't care for rule#7 because it's too
vague. I think I mentioned that before, but I'm not sure it was on
this list. - which is why I used the "two lines" to define a
character count that I could enforce fairly across the board.

two lines could be:

**
"Oh no," said Sam.

Frodo nodded.
**

27 characters - where a *sentence* (shouldn't be *G*) but might be,
100 words or more. A 'line' is dependant on your font size and type
and your template or monitor settings.

I'm not sure exactly what 'in line' is supposed to mean, but I've
taken it to be that the quote has to be relevant to review, part of
the review or discussed in the review. I haven't seen any that
looked like they were just pasted at random.

Sulriel

Msg# 5273

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 26, 2005 - 13:27:08 Topic ID# 5247
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> Hmm, for a writer that was exceedingly unclear.
>
> ... two of only 70 that I've written ...
>
> You've written how many? Over 500?

I am very happy with my 41. With no quoting in it ;)

Rhapsody

Msg# 5274

Re: Changing of Category from Incomplete to Complete Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 26, 2005 - 15:35:59 Topic ID# 5211
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> As you requested, Ainae:
>
> Life in the Angle
> (Incomplete: Novella) Rating: R 181
> Story Author: Leaward
> Nominated by: sulriel
> Award Category:Genres: Romance: Incomplete
>
> This story is now completed and should be moved from Romance:
> Incomplete to Romance: General. It should also be noted that now it is
> complete, this is no longer a novella, but a full-length novel length
> story.

I noticed today that it is still in Romance: incomplete...

Rhapsody
(completely understands how busy the admin is)

Msg# 5275

Re: Changing of Category from Incomplete to Complete Posted by Marta Layton August 26, 2005 - 16:19:41 Topic ID# 5211
On 26 Aug 2005, at 16:35, rhapsody_the_bard wrote:

> --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> > As you requested, Ainae:
> >
> > Life in the Angle
> > (Incomplete: Novella) Rating: R      181
> > Story Author: Leaward
> > Nominated by: sulriel
> > Award Category:Genres: Romance: Incomplete
> >
> > This story is now completed and should be moved from Romance:
> > Incomplete to Romance: General. It should also be noted that now it
> is
> > complete, this is no longer a novella, but a full-length novel
> length
> > story.
>
> I noticed today that it is still in Romance: incomplete...
>

I've moved this. I forgot to change the ccategories earlier when I
fixed the story information.

Let me know if it's still not right.

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Msg# 5276

Re: Changing of Category from Incomplete to Complete Posted by rhapsody\_the\_bard August 26, 2005 - 17:10:20 Topic ID# 5211
--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, Marta Layton <melayton@g...> wrote:
>
> On 26 Aug 2005, at 16:35, rhapsody_the_bard wrote:
>
> > --- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "Leaward" <leaward_l@y...> wrote:
> > > As you requested, Ainae:
> > >
> > > Life in the Angle
<snip>
> > I noticed today that it is still in Romance: incomplete...
> >
>
> I've moved this. I forgot to change the ccategories earlier when I
> fixed the story information.
>
> Let me know if it's still not right.

It looks good to me! Thanks Marta! *thumbs up here*

Rhapsody

Msg# 5277

Reviews Final ~ 8/26/2005 Posted by sulriel August 26, 2005 - 21:32:21 Topic ID# 5277
58 new reviews finalized today!


Title: The Council of Elrond · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Crossovers:
Poetry · ID: 900
Reviewer: Rabidsamfan · 2005-08-25 22:28:59 Score: 3
Oh, this is fun. I'd found a Council of Elrond in the style of
Hiawatha once, and I'm going to have to put your Lewis Carroll
version next to it, so that whenever I reach that part of the book I
can chortle in joy. I particularly enjoyed the exchange between Bilbo
and Elrond!

Title: Back to the Valley · Author: Thundera Tiger · Races/Places:
Elves · ID: 590
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2005-08-25 23:36:14 Score: 4
This is a powerful, chilling story that nevertheless brings forth a
smile. The contrast between the silliness of the Tra-la-la song and
the prisoner's condition and torment is sharply and effectively
written. The poor prisoner has lost freedom and identity and will
ultimately lose his life, either when Barad-dur falls or before, but
he still has his integrity and he still can escape the torture by the
use of that seemingly simple, silly song.

Title: When All Lights Pass · Author: Werecat · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Pre-LOTR · ID: 349
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-25 23:46:30 Score: 3
The paws of the king heal once again. I rather liked Radagast's means
of handling Hithwen. It recalls Gandalf's way of dealing with Beorn,
when he and the Dwarves and Bilbo were passing through. Very clever
of him, and he would know where else in the world to find royalty
that might perhaps be able to heal a wraith-wounded boy.

Title: Tides of Time · Author: Werecat · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Post-LOTR · ID: 368
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-25 23:46:57 Score: 7
Werecat strikes again, and combines two of our favorite stories,
linking them up through a legendary sword and a well-loved wizard. At
the same time, she continues one of the themes of Tolkien's world:
that all things have their ending, that nothing lasts forever within
the world, and that time rules. As Werecat writes of the broken and
forgotten city of Minas Tirith, deserted in its age:

"Where the Dark Lord had failed, omnipotent Time succeeded. But such
is the way of the world."

There's something incredibly poignant and sad in that, but it's also
the lesson of mortality that Tolkien wanted his work to bear witness
to: death is a reality, and forgetfulness is death. But even so, in
that very oblivion, the stories are continued, the immortality of
mortals goes on in the many-times-great-grandchildren who never know
their forebears names, and in the transmutation of the great stories
for each generation. Well, well done, Werecat!


Title: Love Me and Despair · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Elves · ID: 645
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-25 23:47:58 Score: 9
This reminds me of Kate Bolin's stellar AU, in which Galadriel claims
the Ring. As in Kate's story, EdorasLass finds the moment where
something other could reasonably have happened and exploits it. I
think she rightly paints the image of a Dark Queen who uses her very
radiance as a weapon, who invades the minds that trusted her and
twists them when she can, appealing to their own desires in such a
way that they undermine their very strengths and twist them. Those
who retain enough of themselves to try to resist are brutally
eliminated.

Sam, in the "real" world of LOTR, once said that Galadriel was like
the rock in the river that you could break yourself against, though
she'd not be to blame for it. Here we see that adamantine quality
turned to blameworthy purposes; she shines like a diamond, and is as
hard as one as well, as Merry and Pippin perceive. In the last verse,
as we see Galadriel from the inside, EdorasLass leaves us with the
deliciously ironic last line that I think shows the real perversion
and opportunity of that temptation before the Mirror: "If not for
Frodo, she would have diminished, and gone into the West. She would
still be Galadriel." Dead on, EdorasLass! Brilliant!


Title: Not to Beg Any Boon · Author: Flick · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 859
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-25 23:48:20 Score: 2
Hm. I liked the OCs, but the "slightly" part of the "slightly AU"
shows. It's interesting, but not quite compelling for me, although
very well-written and with some memorable moments.

Title: The Bitter Taste of Immortality · Author: Eowynangel · Genres:
Alternate Universe: Elves · ID: 1203
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-25 23:48:44 Score: 3
Bitter indeed, but unlike some who decide to kill Arwen off so as to
have Aragorn paired with whomever, Eowynangel finds the opportune
moment where Arwen might well have chosen otherwise, leaving Aragorn
free to marry another. It seems to have been a bitter choice for
Arwen indeed.

Title: Life in the Angle · Author: Leaward · Genres: Romance · ID: 181
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-26 05:48:50 Score: 10
Life in the Angle.. where shall I start. It is a fantastic story
written by Leaward. The story has every ingredient that makes it an
outstanding piece of fictional work: a good main plot, with many tiny
plotlines that in their own unique way add to the whole. Her pacing
and writing is excellent, which makes it an enjoyable read.

Leaward writes a good and believable character development of her two
characters: Poppi and Tarkil. Both have to find their own way in
their joined life together in a new world after the War of The Ring.
One of the underlying themes is how new beginnings can cause old
traditions or the things you know well (for example Tithiniel's
clinging to how it always has been regarding bloodlines and in her
own sheltered world), can be slightly adapted to improve what once
was. I do feel for Poppi how she has to adjust into this new world, a
language and her personal changes. She came out incredibly strong and
became the solid support of the brave Ranger Tarkil. Tarkil has his
own development, being confronted with himself mainly and the things
he did in the past come back to haunt it. The way Leaward writes his
learning curve is simply amazing. The author not only writes strong
main original characters, but also her minor characters are written
carefully, without them interfering too much.

The story has more gems: Leaward pictures a lively Dunedan community
and it shows that she has done a lot of research on this topic. The
addition of elves *wink* in this splendid tale is well done and
extremely enjoyable.

I know this story has a special meaning for Leaward as well, for her
it became a learning experience as well and all I can say: Bravo
Leaward! And thank you for writing this amazing story.


Title: Ambush in Ithilien · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Gondor Drabble · ID: 204
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-26 05:57:53 Score: 6
This is a beautifully constructed drabble providing an elegant
connection between the events of two battles separated by more than a
thousand years. The sense of being poised on the edge of battle is
palpable, and it seems very in character for Faramir to make
connections with the past even as he prepares for the immediate
action. One thing I have discovered about Elena Tiriel's drabbles is
that there is always at least one outstanding phrase in each of them.
In this drabble, it is "the sanguine horde crowd heedlessly": there
are so many shades of meaning in sanguine that all fit perfectly in
this context. Well done!

Title: A Long, Unexpected Drabble · Author: Elena Tiriel · Genres:
Humor: Metafic · ID: 193
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-26 05:58:05 Score: 5
This was both a very clever way of including all the many "required"
elements in the drabble challenge, and a very amusing paean to the
art (and struggle) of the drabblist. Ah, we have all stubbornly
chased down a place to cut that last extraneous word. But I think
what I like most about this drabble is the way that, even in a
metafic, Elena Tiriel has captured some of the traits that naturally
seem to creep into drabbles (well, mine at least), such as
alliteration, compressed grammar and a tendency to poetical words
that would never appear in my prose.

Title: Alas, Poor Ufthak! · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-26 05:58:16 Score: 4
Although I'm not sure she'd thank me for saying so, Elena Tiriel has
a distinct talent for channelling the dark side of Tolkien, which is
well displayed in this drabble. The behaviour and taunting of the
orcs is extremely convincing. Part of the humour of this drabble also
arises from the juxtaposition of the Shakespearean misquote with a
very good ear for Orcish dialogue. A neat little snapshot of Orc-
minded talk and behaviour.

Title: A Long Awaited Party · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: General Drabble · ID: 1298
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:18:49 Score: 2
This is a festive vignette that captures the voices of the hobbits
very nicely. I especially enjoyed the mention of "squibs and crackers
from Dale"; a nice tie-in with the obscure canon about toy markets of
Dale...

Title: Isildur's Inheritance · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: The Lord
of The Rings · ID: 1299
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:19:08 Score: 3
Very chilling! What an insidiously smooth transition from "a final
bulwark against marauding Nazgûl" to such horrifying visions of power
and glory! And the subtle sexual undertones are just scary... Poor
Aragorn! I'm glad he realized how dangerous his situation and his
reaction were, before it was too late.


Title: Beauty in the Light · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Dwarves:
Drabble · ID: 1300
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:19:38 Score: 3
I really enjoy this vignette of a Dwarven smith, and the hints of a
lover in the smith's actions. The description makes the inside of a
hot, stuffy, noisy forge seem like a sensual lover's retreat. You've
captured the voice of the Dwarf very well, something that few people
ever try -- especially in a drabble!


Title: Children of Aulë, Children of Men · Author: Gwynnyd ·
Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1301
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:19:56 Score: 3
I like this wry look at the contrasts in attitudes between the
generations, not to mention the races. But every race is enchanted by
friendly, open-minded children; and the father's glimpse of the
future seems hopeful to me -- his son will not feel like an exile.


Title: On Watch in Moria · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1302
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:20:33 Score: 3
What a tense situation! You make the darkness sound so oppressive,
and Aragorn has been abandoned by everyone else in the Fellowship,
one by one. It's fortunate that he is so accustomed to self-
sufficiency. I like that you associate Gandalf with "the staff that
lit their way"... so perceptive!


Title: Two Views for a Stranger · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1303
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:20:53 Score: 3
Oh, a very interesting cultural juxtaposition... Boromir's
frustration seems to be coming to a boil; it almost seems like he is
ready to return home in defeat and despair. He sees a "curséd autumn
wilderness", whereas the Elves see "home", and want to see whether he
is a threat to it -- a good thing, since he is behaving strangely in
their eyes.


Title: In Thranduil's Halls · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Vignette · ID: 1304
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:21:10 Score: 4
Nice progression from the greetings of the trees and the familiarity
of coming home, to the slight misalignment with the customary
position of his hands, to the unease of the sea calling, and the
tension with the friendships that held him to Middle-earth for a
while. He had been in Mirkwood long enough to leave an imprint on the
rock, but his time there was ending.... Well done!


Title: The Weaving is the Easy Part · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places:
Elves: Drabble · ID: 1305
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:21:29 Score: 4
I really like the rich terminology of craft that you, er, weave
throughout the drabble, and the parallels between the process of
creating the banner and the process of re-creating the kingdom.
(Though, I have to admit that I laugh at the idea of pristine Arwen
standing there in a messy apron, dying the wool black -- somehow,
that image does not compute!) A thoroughly lovely use of both
language and imagery!


Title: Morgul Vale · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Men: Drabble ·
ID: 1306
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:22:17 Score: 6
This is an extremely perceptive view of an extraordinarily evil
environment. You have taken Tolkien's words about the Morgul Vale --
which are rather easy to overlook -- and painted them into an image
that, unfortunately, is hard to clean out of my mind.... It is a
tribute to Aragorn's courage, and his respect for Mithrandir, that he
would agree to reconnoiter such an evil place. I love your use of
language, particularly "Fear clung like ground fog" and "Miasma
wafted up"... You have described such a creepy place that I get
shivers whenever I think of it! This is the stuff that induces some
seriously nasty nightmares.... Very well done, Gwynnyd!


Title: "They are courteous, if they break their silence." · Author:
Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Humor · ID: 575
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:22:42 Score: 4
Oh, bwahahahahaha! This is so funny! I particularly
enjoyed "Dagor...?" versus dagger, a wry bit of unwitting (to the
characters) word-play.... The sons of Elrond must have had some very
strange ideas about Gimli, after that moment of misunderstanding… I'm
glad that they decided to find Legolas and check out the story with
him, though it might be funnier if they were left in a confused
state…. Very original vignette!


Title: The Healing Touch · Author: Werecat · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 1312
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:23:19 Score: 2
This is an interesting vignette with an unexpected twist at the end.
It is easy to think of how comforting a cat's purring is -- and
having a cat comfort the dying is a great idea. I enjoyed reading
this.


Title: Important Business · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 1323
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:23:38 Score: 6
Oh, bwahahahahahaha! I really enjoyed this, Jay! What a creative
idea -- the extremely important, pompous, and oh-so-deadly-serious
Council of Elrond, from the point of view of an extremely important,
pompous, and oh-so-deadly-serious cat who is grumpy because those
awful creatures are rudely interrupting her beauty sleep! I love that
she thinks of Elrond as "her elf", who is so gentle and mannerly
compared to those loud, heathen outsiders. And such shocking
language! This vignette left me with a very big, silly grin,
especially after reading that the Council and pointless and
irritating! Very nicely done!


Title: First Words · Author: Jay of Lasgalen · Races/Places: Elves:
Imladris · ID: 1324
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:24:49 Score: 6
This is a funny and sweet vignette of everyday family life,
competitive parents and all. I especially liked the cameo by
Glorfindel, who probably realizes that he doesn't have much chance of
getting them to say his name, but is so comfortable within the family
circle that he can tease Elrond and Celebrían at will. I loved that
when Elladan and Elrohir spoke, it was clear and obvious who they
were referring to -- they weren't just babbling, and they weren't
mimicking any adult! (And I liked that they made their displeasure at
being separated known....) But I don't know why Elrond is so
disbelieving -- "êl" means "star", so it's a fitting thing for Elven
babies to say first!


Title: Legacy of the Blessed · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places:
Rohan: Drabble · ID: 1351
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:25:25 Score: 3
How optimistic! The Ring War may put an end to hostilities between
the two peoples, but it takes present-day heroes to recognize that
possibility when the past has been so conflicted. The dialog seems
right, and I especially enjoyed the reference to Cirion and Eorl.
P.S. "Eorl" and 2nd "Éowyn" misspelled - see note 36 of "C&E"
in "Unfinished Tales".


Title: To Shield a Shield-maiden · Author: Marta · Races/Places:
Rohan: Drabble · ID: 964
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:26:54 Score: 6
This is so poignant! I had never thought of what a difficult position
Gríma's evil placed Théodred in, how desperately Théodred must have
wanted to protect Éowyn (and his own position with his father), but
how certainly he knew that Rohan depended upon him to survive. What a
truly honorable man!

It illustrates how vulnerable Rohan was (despite the ferocity of its
Riders), how devastating Théodred's death was, and how the courage of
those who stepped up to fill his shoes turned around truly impossible
odds against Rohan...

And the ending "... or so the ancient bards say." is perfect, since
Rohan is a classic bardic society. Very nice work!


Title: Call on the Wind · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Rohan:
Drabble · ID: 935
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:27:13 Score: 3
This is emotional. You show what made Boromir unique -- his brashness
and courage, per Éomer's slightly amused view. The middle part is
filled with terrible portents, and we the readers, knowing what will
happen, are saddened by them. Then, the last part seems to end
hopefully, but it is tenuous.

(Typos: cousin "throught"; & "it it" defies)


Title: Forsaken Kin · Author: Meril · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Drabble · ID: 483
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:27:39 Score: 4
Oh, this is so chilling... The sympathy that Finarfin shows for
Eärwen shines through here; how devastated she must have been to
arrive at Alqualondë after such unthinkable acts of brutality. He was
an extraordinary Elf to forsake the pursuit and return; this drabble
gives a very plausible explanation for one of his motives. A moment
that I have never seen written about before -- very nicely done,
Meril!


Title: He Stands Not Alone · Author: Azalais · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 147
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:28:13 Score: 8
Oh, now this is so chilling. You start with an obviously dire warning
from Gandalf, then use a phrase like "forever entombed in darkness",
which is claustrophobia-inducing. It is clear that everyone is
fleeing for their lives... and I shivered in fear.

Then you use a phrase like "Something about the shape of the air
behind me"... Azalais, that is such a beautiful turn of phrase!
Reading it was a revelation, like seeing a whole new side of Elven
senses, and understanding them for the first time! It was
breathtaking....

Then, without even thinking about it, the Elf rescues the Dwarf,
despite his fear of being trapped as the orcs arrive... and after
they can pause a bit, the Dwarf thanks him in his typically laconic
Dwarf fashion... Somehow, I can envision Legolas really beginning to
see Gimli as a person here (albeit perhaps a very annoying one) and
know now that a friendship can develop. Excellent work, Azalais! (And
both the title and the quote are favorites of mine...)


Title: The Sundering Seas · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Elves:
Drabble · ID: 303
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:28:36 Score: 5
This is beautiful and poignant, Elana. I have attempted to write a
drabble on this topic myself, and I think you captured the pathos
extremely well. You really showed the irony of Celebrían being
rescued, but not saved... and Elrond's anguish at not being able to
heal his beloved wife. His fear that she won't make it to Aman is
palpable, as is the finality of their being parted by the aptly named
Sundering Seas. Very sad, very lovely and loving writing, and it
shows a sense of reluctant acceptance that befits Elrond!


Title: Heirlooms · Author: Gwynnyd · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID: 402
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:29:05 Score: 2
What *was* Tolkien thinking? I'm glad you made his weird decision
funny. The last line is so solemn and pretentious! Very funny,
Gwynnyd!
(BTW "Elrohir" is misspelled.)

Title: The Heirs of Isildur · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 24
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:29:26 Score: 6
Bwahahahaha! Well, you know how it is with those mortals... they just
keep begetting and begetting, till an Elven loremaster can't even
keep track... (but I bet a Hobbit could!). This simply hilarious,
Marta! And it really arouses my sympathy for poor, beleaguered Elrond
(translation: I am ***so*** not a morning person myself!).

What a graphic depiction of the difference in the numbers of
generations between mortals and immortals! I can see why Elrond would
be so befuddled at the crack of dawn... and the reaction of Arador is
so quintessentially six-year-oldish, stomping feet and all! Well
done, Marta!


Title: The Protocol of Princes · Author: maranya14 · Genres: Humor:
Drabble · ID: 26
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:29:46 Score: 5
LOLOL! Two hunky guys out, sitting in the sun (it would be, except
for the oak tree), wasting time, and joking around... What could be
better?

Éomer seems to be enjoying mock-lording... And Faramir is clearly
planning mutiny... On one hand, Éomer is an excellent warrior and
will be highly vigilant for any form of attack; but, on the other
hand, Faramir is an Ithilien Ranger, accomplished in stealth... and
obviously, they can both wield words with ease....

I wonder who is going to end up getting beaned?


Title: The Muster of Rohan · Author: Branwyn · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 281
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:30:25 Score: 4
Very amusing! These poor Rohirrim warriors, so fearless in battle, so
clueless in marriage. In sympathy with Hildwyn, I can only imagine
that it would be extremely difficult to create a convincing appliqué
of a galloping horse -- assuming, that is, that you are not Elvish,
and therefore capable of extraordinary works of beauty and
perfection. *snicker*

Guys will be guys.... even Riders of the Mark!


Title: Not Permitted · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Humor: Drabble · ID:
545
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:31:11 Score: 6
Bwahahahahaha! Hilarious, Liz! I guess there would be all sorts of
interesting... complications... if Boromir had lived!

I love that you've rolled so much characterization into such a short
work: Boromir the warrior, planning the battle tactics meticulously
and looking forward to captaining six companies, Éomer the hunk
(although you left that out!), leading the cavalry charge fearlessly
as always, Aragorn the reigning monarch, calling upon his extensive
travels as a much younger man, and Faramir -- dear Faramir, the
accomplished warrior AND handsome loremaster AND military/political
strategist and guerrilla-fighter, one-upping his big brother, and
grinning madly, I'll warrant.

I wonder if this caused a civil war?


Title: Command Performance · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Genres:
Humor: Drabble · ID: 641
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:31:57 Score: 4
Well, it could have been worse... it might have started "There once
was a maid from Nantucket...". No? Oh, well -- Denethor might
actually have enjoyed that a bit more....

This is terribly funny, in a way that I'm not sure Denethor could
possibly fathom. Finduilas has to work awfully hard to make that man-
child sit still, pay attention, and stop whining... We can certainly
tell who is accustomed to dealing with wayward children here....

Nice work, Vistula! *grin*


Title: Olorin I was in my Youth In the West that is Forgotten ·
Author: Azalais · Books/Time: The Lord of The Rings: Drabble · ID: 25
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:32:14 Score: 10
Azalais, I adore drabbles, and this is truly one of my all-time
favorites. When the MEFA nomination season started, I searched hard
for this one, vaguely remembering the content but not who wrote it or
when... and was happy to see that Dwimordene had already nominated
it. For forgetful me to remember the beauty of something I read so
many months after seeing it, is a tribute to how much my heart was
touched by your words.

Your descriptions are extraordinary, precise yet concise ("Peregrin's
plaintive tones"). I can *feel* Gandalf's aching and fatigue, the
pall of ageing on him, and sympathize with the misery shared by the
others in the Fellowship.

Yet it is the memories of Valinor that soar to extraordinary
heights... your description is breathtaking; you actually made me sad
that I cannot be a Vala, "alive in endless Music"! And your "not
bound in weary bone" is a wonderful phrase, so clearly showing the
extremeness of the contrast between Gandalf's reality in his free-
floating Maiar form and his Middle-earthbound one...

Also, your indications that the memory, though bright, was very brief
and soon forgotten struck me as terribly sad... You made me empathize
with Gandalf even more than I had before reading your drabble... it
moved me that much. And the ending is perfect: Gandalf, losing the
comfort of his memory, has to comfort himself as best he can in a
miserable setting in Middle-earth, by lighting up his mundane pipe,
and placate naïve Pippin. It is good that he has that comfort now,
but the contrast with what he had in Aman is poignant.

Extremely well done, Azalais! This drabble is an inspiration to me,
as a writer as well as a reader. Thank you for sharing it with us!


Title: My Hero · Author: Vistula the Dunadan · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Post-Ring War Drabble · ID: 640
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:32:43 Score: 5
LOL! What an amazing hero Sam is to his beloved Rosie... yet she
probably doesn't have a real clue as to the heroic role he had in
saving Middle-earth from overwhelming evil. And he's just as glad to
keep her in the dark, so she can believe than when terrible monsters
come into her kitchen, her Sam will dispose of them to protect her.

The everyday spiders must seem awfully minuscule to Sam! (And, being
a good gardener, I don't think he would kill any spider unless they
bothered Rosie or the children...) A lovely vignette, Vistula! Shows
Sam can wield a broom as well as a spade, or even a sword....


Title: Faithful companion · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Elves:
Drabble · ID: 1348
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 06:33:43 Score: 5
Ah, I just love Beleg's fondness of, and appreciation for, fine-
quality instruments of his trade. With a Kitchenaid mixer, I can
create masterpieces of baking or candy-making. With Belthronding and
Beleg's finely-honed reflexes, he can be an extraordinarily skilled --
and deadly -- warrior. His "quick, customary caress of thanks" is
like a prayer of thanks -- a very Elven sentiment. But I am really
saddened when I think of what's going to happen... Really touching
drabble, Liz! You get to the heart of being an expert in one's
trade...


Title: Promises to Keep · Author: Leaward · Races/Places: Men:
Eriador · ID: 169
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-26 07:11:47 Score: 10
Promises to keep. Isn't that what Tolkien wrote about, if you get
down to the kernel of it all? Love and death and duty, all with
honor? And how life goes on in spite of all the problems? It's the
generations that tie his sagas together.

With this first long work in her connected series about the Northern
Dunedain, Leaward address real life issues in Middle-earth. What *is*
the difference between love and lust, what does a promise mean –
really? Does the intent make a difference or only the words.

Her young OMC Ranger Tarkil is very much a product of his world,
honest, and noble, and very handsome. Easy to love in spite of his
failings. His lack of confidence in his own ability make you want to
slap some sense into him, while his stubborn devotion make you want
to hug him and fix him a warm cup of tea – until his irrepressible
and irresponsible temper gets him in trouble yet again, that
infamous `Sons of Beleg' temper.

And what about that Bad!Rascal, Tarkil's big brother Haldon – how can
sweet Poppi resist? I'd say she went after the wrong brother, -
but... is there really a female, available or otherwise, who would
want to know – really – that Haldon was `taken'?

The first rule of writing is to tell a good story, and Leaward does
that in full measure with this delicious mix of tangled emotions and
feelings, confusing that spark in the eye with that tingling up from
between your legs... and questions on cultural differences and duty, -
with this story and continuing throughout her series. Thanks for the
great reading Leaward!


Title: While the Ring Went South... · Author: Thundera Tiger ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 33
Reviewer: digdigil · 2005-08-26 08:19:58 Score: 10
This is a very humourous look at the members of the Fellowship. Each
character is unique, and has his own funny side. They are extremely
well drawn. The situations are very funny within the pacing of the
story, which moves along slowly, yet in perfect time in order to
recount the hilarious adventures that the Fellowship members find
themselves in. Exciting adventures take place also, along with the
funny stuff. The reader is always left on tenterhooks wondering what
is going to happen next. The way that the Fellowship members interact
with each other is unique, and while they are in agreement with
Tolkien canon, they play off of each other very well in this story,
in a way that is unique to the author. There are situations within
this story that also carry quite a lot of sentiment. In spite of the
comedic qualities, one is drawn into feeling quite sympathetic with
the long-suffering Aragorn, the frazzled Gandalf, the long-suffering
hobbits, who do not have enough food to eat, and must trudge on
despite being much smaller and weaker than the others, the beleagured
Boromir, upon whose shoulders rest the welfare of an entire country
and he knows it and is distracted by that as well as the Ring, and
even Legolas and Gimli, who, while being completely self-absorbed and
possibly a danger to the Fellowship, are obviously struggling with
their animosity for each other while in a completely new situation
and having to come terms with that as well as learn to get along
together. I don't know when I've had such a good read as this.

Title: Trust to Hope · Author: Novedhelion · Genres: Romance · ID:
1294
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-26 09:58:14 Score: 1
I really enjoyed this spin on Eomer and Lothiriel. Good story.

Title: Sand and Flame · Author: Tehta · Genres: Romance: Elves · ID:
1130
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-26 10:06:21 Score: 3
This is such a delightful reinterpretation of Cinderella. Poor Indis,
being cast as the wicked stepmother - though Feanor might agree! I
love Nerdanel's practicality and common sense, too. Shame she and
Feanor didn't manage happy ever after - but then there would be no
more stories, so maybe it's just as well. Most enjoyable!

Title: Thunder Sings · Author: Ellisande · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Poetry · ID: 404
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-26 10:06:49 Score: 3
This sounds like the Beruthiel I imagine—proud, defiant, mistress of
her own destiny (if she could be), and as absolute in her judgments
as she is in her condemnation of vice. I'm no judge of poetical form,
but this came nicely off my tongue reading it, so I'm inclined to
think the author's done quite well with the sonnet.

Title: A Betrothal and Wedding · Author: Isil Elensar · Genres:
Romance: Elves · ID: 1198
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-26 10:12:08 Score: 2
Sweet. I love picturing little Artanis listening to her own parents'
description of their meeting and marriage - and dreaming of her own
future. Shame this happiness cannot last!

Title: What Thou Lovest Well · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Incomplete · ID: 458
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-26 12:19:58 Score: 7
It was a pleasure to reacquaint myself with this story, and I hope
Lady Aranel's muse will return to it soon and allow her to complete
it. As always, she provides a skilful portrait of Legolas, carefully
delineating his involvement with the Steward's family, showing us how
he enriches life in Ithilien, and yet hinting delicately at his odd
detachment and melancholy. The description of Faramir and Legolas in
the courtyard -- day and night -- is very powerful, and their teasing
of Éowyn amusing. The scenes with Elboron are also, capturing the
child's voice and fears effectively, while Lady Aranel leaves us with
tantalising mysteries regarding Éowyn that I hope we will see
resolved. I also very much like the way Lady Aranel chronicles the
details of post-War life in Ithilien. Please let us see the rest of
this story!

Title: No Other Choice · Author: LadyAranel · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 456
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-26 12:20:11 Score: 3
This begins with an entertaining vision of an enraged Thranduil and
ends with an unlikely and touching alliance as the two fathers
resolve to do what they can to protect their sons as well as the
wider Quest. Another skilfully wrought piece by Lady Aranel exploring
elf-dwarf relationships.

Title: Ties That Bind · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 457
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-26 12:20:22 Score: 4
In this drabble, Lady Aranel cleverly shows us Legolas's pain by
initially having him project his own feelings on to the other members
of the Fellowship. She makes Legolas's feelings at the loss of
Gandalf evident through her subtle description of the alteration in
his voice, as well as making clear his strength to go on with the
present task in his response to Aragorn. A nicely characterised
moment.

Title: Best Laid Plans · Author: Lamiel · Genres: Humor · ID: 455
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-26 12:27:35 Score: 4
This is a lovely chaotic romp of a story. What with robes and
circlets and cakes and disguised Bergil and Legolas flattening Gimli -
it is just fun from start to finish. Loved it. And as for Gimli's
suggestion of cutting down Legolas's oak tree to discover his
friend's age - even on paper that caused an intake of breath. I think
he might be tormented for that for some time!

Title: Of Elvish Equitation and Shiny Things · Author: AngelsFall ·
Genres: Humor: Animals · ID: 660
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-26 12:30:53 Score: 1
What an evil trick to play on your king. Good to see them having fun!

Title: Lothíriel - Book 1 · Author: juno_magic · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 1159
Reviewer: digdigil · 2005-08-26 16:06:26 Score: 9

This story takes you on a journey with a modern girl named Lothiriel,
which starts in Germany, but takes her to Middle Earth! She becomes
one of the Fellowship of the Ring as a tenth walker, and a messenger
between Gondor and Dol Amroth. It is beautifully written, not only in
the way the narrative is told, but also in the characterizations of
the various fellowship members. We see them in a different way than
they are presented in both the books and the films, but completely
true to life, and the way that we would see them also, if we were
Lothiriel, looking at them, as she is, through modern eyes. The
reader is completely drawn in, in an empathetic way, to this
character, and follows her, every step of the way, along her journey.
We cry with her, we laugh with her, and joyously, we love with her.
We also share her pain when she is hurt. Some of Tolkien's peripheral
characters are gloriously realized in this story, such as Glorfindel.
I dare anyone to read this characterization of Glorfindel and not see
him as an Eldar of the Elves, set apart from all others. He is a
creature out of fantasy, to be sure, and yet a completely believable
person. The prose is beautiful. It is extremely moving. This story is
highly recommended for anyone who loves a good, long book to curl up
with.

Title: Morgoth's Notebook · Author: Arandil · Genres: Humor: Metafic
· ID: 123
Reviewer: digdigil · 2005-08-26 16:11:40 Score: 3
This is a very funny story. To have it be from Morgoth's point of
view is very unique. His view on the other characters in this story
are completely hilarious, and it is a good characterization of
Morgoth himself as well, as it shows his megalomania to quite good
effect. I would definitely recommend this story to anyone who is
interested in having a good laugh!

Title: The Quest · Author: Isil Elensar · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings · ID: 437
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-26 17:22:22 Score: 10
The Quest is a story that I love a lot. Its depth is truly amazing.
It tells the story of a young woman who cannot remember her past, but
is well aware that her roots are in Rohan. Her world changes
drastically when Isil's character arrives in Lorien.

There she falls in love with Orophin, but nothing is as simple as it
seems. Isil writes a heartfelt story where a young woman falls for an
elf, whose protective brothers keep a close eye on their little
brother's new love. Isil carefully writes the impact of the romance
between an elf and a mortal woman, and the grief it brings for
Orophin who is left behind. For both characters, it is a learning
curve. I can imagine that an author wants to keep it to a simple
romance, but Isil sticks to the development of her original character
and forces her to move on to the next phase of the young woman's
life. You can truly feel how hard it is for the female character to
do this, especially when another puzzle is added to the mix. A
decision is made and it is not the easiest one. What I admire about
this character is the strength of her. In that respect Isil
establishes a strong character, despite that there isn't that much
known of the character's background. Combine this with the excellent
narrative style and eye for detail, for me Lorien came alive through
her words. Isil's portrayal of the canon characters feel very
natural. I like the differences between the Marchwarden brothers and
their position in the family. Theoden and Theodred are cleverly
written as well, the way they act and speak give you a good idea how
many years before the War of the Ring this takes place.

Moving and challenging: this is a great story with many layers to
read!


Title: Strawberry Fields · Author: MysteriousWays · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Romance · ID: 870
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-26 17:35:57 Score: 6
Strawberry fields is such a touching story. I cannot help to feel
very happy to see Frodo in the arms of a caring hobbit lass. The love
for each other is so tangible, but as some stories go, there is also
darkness in it. Even Frodo cannot shake off the shadow that still has
a hold over his soul. That part is so incredibly chilling, but
Linwe's response is so tender as a believable opposite. Mysterious
Ways carefully balances playfulness with the bitterness that still
haunts Frodo, and she does it in such a great way that it reads very
natural. And what makes the story more hobbity then a raid of…
strawberries!

Title: Denial · Author: MysteriousWays · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Drabble · ID: 871
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-26 17:40:59 Score: 3
I am always amazed how much emotion Mysterious Ways can put into her
writings. In this drabble we experience Frodo's very emotional
reaction to Gandalf's fall into the depths of Moria. Every time when
I read it, a chill runs down my spine. In that respect the author has
achieved her goal... in just hundred words... A magnificent drabble
Mysterious Ways!

Title: A mother's duty · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 1384
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-26 17:47:10 Score: 6
Oh, Liz, this is such a chilling drabble! I would expect that going
to a midwife would normally be a joyous thing, but the reason for
Finduilas' desire to please her lord with sons is depressing. There
is a certain fatalism about her wish, and the dynamics between her
and Ioreth are fascinating -- Ioreth was about to turn her away, when
she thought that the knowledge that Finduilas wanted was not fitting,
in her mind.

Finduilas knows her duty well -- to produce enough sons so that there
will always be an heir, even after some go to war and die. That is
just so disgusting to those of us who are not raised in a society on
a constant war basis. *Sigh* Finduilas is truly doing her best here
in an extremely difficult situation... Your drabble evokes my
sympathy for her!


Title: Reason in Madness · Author: Niennanir · Genres: Romance:
Incomplete · ID: 950
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-26 17:54:45 Score: 4
The sequel to a tangled web started with a captivating prologue, a
signal to fasten your seatbelts to be taken along another amazing
journey written by Niennanir. She has grown into her writing and it
clearly shows. Sharp witted dialogue, the pacing, and tone of the
story is excellent. I cannot wait to see where this tale will lead
the reader too. Don't let the reader wait too long Niennanir!

Title: A Tangled Web · Author: Niennanir · Genres: Romance: Rivendell
· ID: 947
Reviewer: Rhapsody · 2005-08-26 17:56:54 Score: 3
A tangled web is a great and well-written story. With humour, great
dialogue, plot twists, and lovable characterisations, Niennanir makes
you want to read on to see how it ends. Her characters come tolive
with the display of their emotions. You actually feel a bit deprived
when the story ends. A great story Niennanir!

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Msg# 5278

Re: more on quoteing in review/votes Posted by Laura August 26, 2005 - 23:55:40 Topic ID# 5247
dwim wrote:
>> > 'Fessing up over here. I do have one finalized review with a quote
>> of 135 characters.
>>
>> One? *One*? Pish tosh, I say! That's about as evil as apple pie. Ask
>> Sulriel for my list sometime...
>>
>> Dwim, the Dark Queen of Over-Quoting

Oh come on, let me have my moment of evil! You'll get the dark and ominous-looking tower back in a minute. At least let me hang out the window and laugh maniacally at all the minions. Besides, the apple pie smell has yet to permanently mar any fortress of evil.
Thundera (who wonders why the minions are looking at her strangely...)

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Msg# 5279

Final reviews for 8/27 Posted by sulriel August 27, 2005 - 21:07:44 Topic ID# 5279
up from yesterday! 65 new final reviews today.


Title: Night Course in Pet Care · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor:
Animals · ID: 360
Reviewer: Ariel · 2005-08-26 22:15:50 Score: 5
Oh, I have to review this one! I must confess to grinning through
this story. It has an expertly handled comedy, wry but never off key
or forced, as comedy so often feels in fanfic. I wouldn't call it a
laugh out loud piece, but the little tale builds up well and
believably, is just the right length (have been reading things lately
that would have been much improved with half the verbage) and is
memorable enough to warrant a second read for this contest. Now I
will have to read through the rest of your list - there are a few
here I haven't read!

Title: Wish upon a star · Author: Werecat · Races/Places: Villains:
Orcs · ID: 194
Reviewer: Ariel · 2005-08-26 22:21:05 Score: 2
Oh, this thing is twisted! I read this with horrified fascination and
while I don't hate Mary Sues nearly as much as everyone else
supposedly does, I am not crying for this one's end. A definitely
creepy fic. Well done!

Title: Wandering in the Wild · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance:
Drabble · ID: 1391
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-26 23:18:21 Score: 3
This drabble has a lot of gritty details. The description of all the
different types of rain, and all of Aragorn's reasons for hating
certain types of reasons -- very vivid. But then that last line
shines a warm light on his whole thing. I have to tell you, I had a
ridiculously goofy smile across my face at that point.

Title: Safe in My Arms · Author: Elendiari22 · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 907
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 00:00:14 Score: 1
A sweet retelling of Pippin's search for Merry, and its aftermath,
after the battle on the Pelennor. Very true to canon!

Title: Stay Here With Me · Author: Marigold · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): War of the Ring · ID: 1173
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 00:06:56 Score: 3
Merry agonizes over Pippin at Cormallen, as he waits for him to
either recover or die. A very angsty little ficlet, but the sweet
love and the genuine bond between the cousins is clear, and Pippin's
knowledge that Merry could not go on without him is what finally
anchors him to life. Gandalf is wise and comforting in this, as
always.

Title: Freak Show · Author: Nickey · Genres: Horror · ID: 862
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 00:11:48 Score: 5
This is a brilliant piece--creepy and atmospheric and full of
foreshadowing, heavy on the shadows. The idea of a "freak show" in
the Shire, and of what it truly implies, and Merry's strong and
unexpected reaction is all very original. Yet underneath the
frightening parts, we see the strong love and affection of the
friends for one another, that will carry them through when that
frightening future arrives.
The symbolism and imagery are outstanding and memorable--I remember
how impressed I was on the first reading of it.

Title: Boys to Men · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-27 00:54:14 Score: 1
Interesting reflection on just why Beregond allowed Bergil to stay in
the White City.

Title: A Mist of Tears and Weariness · Author: Dreamflower ·
Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Friendship · ID: 981
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 01:13:13 Score: 2
It's good to see Gandalf offering comfort to Merry - he brings a lot
of conviction with him. But someone who, it seems to me, could do
with a bit of this bolstering is poor old Strider. He has the weight
of the world on his shoulders!

Title: Knitting · Author: AngieT · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Friendship · ID: 1225
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 01:23:43 Score: 2
What could motivate Frodo to relearn the skill more than doing
something for Pippin.

Frodo in a frock is something to imagine! Although the one I feel
sorry for is his poor old auntie. She had to do something to squash
the irrepressible lad!

Title: Clasps and Links · Author: Songspinner · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Friendship · ID: 1222
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 01:25:02 Score: 1
Very touching. I love Merry / Eowyn stories. And concerned Eomer.

Title: To Cross a River · Author: Hai Took · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: Hurt/Comfort · ID: 820
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 01:39:45 Score: 2
So Pippin will happily throw himself in any body of water if he
thinks it will gain him sympathy and extra rest, huh? But at least
Frodo is onto him! Fun.

Title: Namesake · Author: Ruby Nye · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 271
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 01:49:06 Score: 4
This is such a lovely story from Farry's point of view, that picks
out so many details of the affectionate relationship between two
people whose lives keep them apart. Faramir is lovingly depicted -
and I can quite see how Farry would immediately treat him as a
favourite uncle. I hope they all get to meet again - but can see them
regretting that it is not likely to be often or soon.

Title: Reunion at Cormallen · Author: Shirebound · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 1116
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 01:52:44 Score: 1
I love Sam's humour - he is usually so sober. But threatening Mr
Frodo! He has gained in confidence.

Title: Brothers-in-arms · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1349
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-27 02:40:43 Score: 8
Oh, dear, Liz, you really know how to make a normally unsentimental
adult like me get tears in her eyes.... This drabble grabs my heart
from the first two lines, so parallel in form and matched in drama.

The metaphor of the chance-dropped pebble is beautifully visual, but
also very apt: were it not for the Rohirrim becoming staunch allies
and fulfilling the Oath of Eorl repeatedly, Gondor might well not
have existed long enough to oppose Sauron at the end of the Third
Age. Faramir, with his family's long tradition of ancient lore, seems
to have understood this and truly valued their contribution.

Yet what a poignant and unhappy trade for some: land for sons.... My
heart goes out to Folcwine, who might have preferred to go and fight
himself -- but sent both his oldest sons instead, in high hopes that
they would return safely. What a bitter victory that was for him! No
weregild can ever assuage the grief of a parent losing his beloved
children....

The ending is extremely powerful: they are united in death, and the
two allies are united in their grief for them. *sniff*


Title: Nothing to fear but fear itself · Author: Tanaqui · Genres:
Romance: Drabble · ID: 1350
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-27 02:50:25 Score: 4
Poor Faramir! He is having such a difficult time grappling with his
feelings... the line "guard against past hurts with scarce-
acknowledged dreams" is tremendously poignant -- with his history of
a father who withheld his favor, how could he allow himself to show
vulnerability to another? That is the unfortunate legacy that his
dead father left him.

But I love that it is his dead brother that gave him the courage to
proceed. Such a hopeful ending!


Title: Defiance · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Drabble · ID: 1355
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-27 03:00:07 Score: 5
This is one of those moments in the Silmarillion that left me almost
too depressed to continue reading. Never was the valor of a group of
men so tested... and none returned alive. "Crushed beneath the weight
of hewed hands" is such a compelling image, and so gruesome. And we
know the fates of the family that he worries for, and they are
horrific.

This is one of those epic stories that is optimistic about the fate
of entire peoples, but crushingly pessimistic for any of the people
involved.


Title: Seeing · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor
Drabble · ID: 1356
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-27 03:12:01 Score: 5
While his family may have big visions of major events like Númenor
falling, Imrahil looks around and sees that his sons and a nephew
survived the Ring War, have made loving marriages and are giving him
grandchildren....

It takes a certain age and wisdom to be able to reflect on your life
and see what contentment has come in it; and that wisdom is sharpened
by having gone through such a horrendous war.

Imrahil survives, he's wise, he's content, he has a loving family and
a sense of humor... What more could one want out of life?


Title: From the Eastern Force · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places:
Dwarves: Drabble · ID: 539
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-27 03:20:31 Score: 4
What a sad, touching, and sympathetic view of the dwarves at the
Nirnaeth Arnoediad. Warriors of the Elves and Men, who may not
believe that they have much in common with Dwarves, can empathize
with the grief of losing their lord.

The description of the Dwarves leaving shows the dignity of their
behavior as the Silmarillion did, but gives me a more personal
feeling of loss than Tolkien did. Very evocative.


Title: The Full Tragedy of the Kinslaying · Author: Cirdan ·
Books/Time: The Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 1268
Reviewer: jillian baade · 2005-08-27 03:36:37 Score: 4
It is so sad, yet so fitting that Maglor bought the other elves the
luxury of time. I guess it's his way of trying to atone for his
family's sins. Good for you Maglor, I always liked you for a reason.

Cirdan, the thing that touched me is that Maglor has clearly lost his
tenous grip on sanity, yet his song is as powerful as ever, maybe
more so if he could make Maia weep. Well done indeed.


Title: A Good Match · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Drabble ·
ID: 1358
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-27 03:42:08 Score: 6
Oh, I just love this! There's such a contrast between the in-control,
concerned older brother -- and warrior and King -- quizzing his
beloved younger sister as to whether she will be happy in a match
with such a grave Man of Gondor (especially after she has been
unhappy for so long)... and the breathless male who loses his place
in the conversation, distracted in the presence of such a wondrous
beauty...

And Éowyn laughs! Sisters can be so mean.... LOL!

The brevity and outright eagerness of the last line are absolutely
perfect! (And I bet that Éomer would never have believed in the
existence of love at first sight....)


Title: What can be saved · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 1360
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-27 03:51:53 Score: 5
You just drop your readers smack dab in the middle of a dangerous
storm complete with raging wind, broken ship, and worry that they
will never see their companion ships again.

In other words, a fight for survival.

But the nightmare vision of Númenor being drowned is even worse, and
so stark that it haunts Isildur even with eyes open... what a vivid
image!

And then, he finds a bit of calm -- the scion of Nimloth has
survived, and it gives him new hope that a tiny bit of Númenor can
endure. Liz, this is a beautifully-written drabble about an
incredibly wrenching experience. Very powerful!


Title: A Very Dark, Very Wet, and Very Miserable Morning · Author:
Thundera Tiger · Genres: Humor · ID: 592
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 05:44:04 Score: 2
Ah, the trials and tribulations of life as a henchman. Villians just
have so much to put up with, and dealing with upper management can be
such a pain--literally. *snicker*

Title: A Matter of Time · Author: Shirebound · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural · ID: 514
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 07:32:58 Score: 2
I love thoughtful Merry - one who believes in the power of knowledge.
And trusts Pippin, of course. And pairing him with Elrond just makes
this for me. Most enjoyable.

Title: Creatures of Habit · Author: pipkinsweetgrass · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 811
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 07:39:48 Score: 3
I love Boromir / hobbit stories - and the relationship here between
the man of Gondor and Pippin is delightful. The habit of Boromir-
watching led to some interesting customs and the thought of Pippin
declaring himself Boromir's big brother was, I think, the sweetest of
all. And I like to think of Pippin remembering Boromir each night at
sunset.

Title: A Flower for My Mother · Author: Lindalëriel · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural · ID: 841
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 07:44:29 Score: 4
This is a very touching story on so many levels. The budding
relationship between Legolas and Pippin is sweet and the affection
Pippin shows for his mother and his desire to preserve the beauty of
the flower for her shows both his youth and his generosity. The
conclusion that the flower is not principally preserved in its image
but in Pippin's heart says a lot about elves and hobbits. Good story.

Title: The Dare · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Hobbits: Pippin
· ID: 778
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 08:04:57 Score: 4
Clovis Banks - the hobbit who makes Lotho Sackville-Baggins look a
decent chap. And Cado. Who, if taken away at birth, might have been
all right. I suppose the only surprise is how they managed to survive
Merry's wrath as long as they did. I am being complimentary when I
say what a truly nasty story about truly nasty hobbits. Who do,
finally, get their comeuppance.

Title: The Wedding Table · Author: grey_wonderer · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Pippin · ID: 790
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 08:09:09 Score: 3
Yet another of your truly delicious stories. How do you manage to
turn out so many? And at least this instance of Merry and Pippin
chaos turned out to have a most convenient outcome! And I think
Pippin has quite forgiven Merry now he has allowed Diamond's presence
to distract him. Another amusing episode - may you write many more.

Title: It Takes A Took · Author: Dreamflower · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Pippin · ID: 823
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 08:11:45 Score: 3
I enjoyed the tale of Pippin and the lovely healer's apprentice. I
can't think of a better qualified hobbit to become his bride, either.
Perhaps she will manage to keep him in one piece - for a while. I
love the Shire you have created and the relationships within it and
look forward to reading a lot more about all the characters.

Title: Fever Dreams · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Gondor: Houses
of Healing · ID: 397
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-27 08:37:31 Score: 8
This is a superb piece about my two favourite characters from one of
my favourite authors in the fandom. I love the mixture of future
hope, present fatalism and courage in the face of despair which
Gwynnyd gives to Faramir at the start of story. This is entirely in
character and deeply moving. Pippin's concern, love and pity for
Faramir shines throughout strongly, particularly in the descriptions
of his small gestures of support and help for Faramir, as does his
sense of humour at points. The repeated motifs of the dream
of "Gondor renewed" are used well throughout the story, and convey
Faramir's fragmented thought patterns and gradual understanding
effectively. Pippin breaks the difficult news of Denethor's death
with sensitivity, and we are left with a heartbreaking conclusion in
which Faramir is unsure why he weeps, and we as readers feel both his
sorrow and joy mingled together. In short, this is a beautifully
crafted story, with wonderful phrasing and imagery throughout.

Title: Toy Story · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Vignette · ID: 411
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-27 09:19:54 Score: 10
Gwynnyd picks up the brief mention in "Not Without Hope" of the toy
soldiers carved by Elladan and Elrohir, and uses them to weave a
subtle story about Aragorn's response to learning about his lineage.
Through this clever device, she has the perfect medium to explore
Aragorn's heritage.

It's entirely convincing both that Aragorn would have strong if
confused memories of the toy he played with as a child, and that
Elrohir would have so carefully kept the model of Arathorn he found
necessary to confiscate. Watching Aragorn's reaction through
Elrohir's eyes allows Gwynnyd to explore the full possible range of
reactions Aragorn might have to the news, and reflect on them through
Elrohir's wisdom and experience, rather than inappropriately giving
insights to Aragorn that he wouldn't possess at that age. I also love
tge sly in-joke on Gwynnyd's part when Elrohir tells Aragorn to "Go
practice in the woods or go down to the Hall of Fire and introduce
yourself to the household": little does he realise he is sending
Aragorn off to fall in love with his sister!

However, I think what I like most in this piece is the light touch
Gwynnyd shows in bringing out the brotherly affection and teasing,
along with the wry humour of both Elrohir and Aragorn in what could
otherwise have been an overly-sentimental moment. Yet she doesn't
neglect the very real turbulence of emotions that Aragorn must have
experienced at Elrond's revelation.

Title: Boar and Steward · Author: thevina_finduilas · Races/Places:
Rohan: Original Characters · ID: 564
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 09:30:10 Score: 3
I like it! Strider coming out of the woods to tempt the girl into
discovering more about her people's history - the mere idea of
history being found in unexpected places. I like the red-headed girl
and her brother, too. But, in a way, the star is the open wind-swept
plains of Rohan.

Title: Truth · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Mystery · ID: 898
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 10:04:49 Score: 5
Another excellent story. I can just see Sam and Rosie having doubts
about the propriety of Faramir and Goldi's relationship. And being
remarkably difficult to shift on the subject. And I've said it before
and will say it again - Ferdi is my favourite hobbit! He is such a
star - and deserves all the good things that come his way in these
later years to make up for the suffering of his earlier ones. I like
the way the truth was tricked out of Ned - and the Thain's kindness
to the Sandymans (no-one's favourite family). Good story

Title: Marriage of Souls · Author: ErinRua · Races/Places: Rohan ·
ID: 334
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 12:54:19 Score: 1
What could be more important to the King of Rohan than the choice of
a horse? Beautifully written.

Title: Warmth for the White Lady · Author: Anoriath · Genres:
Romance: Vignette · ID: 995
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-27 13:31:01 Score: 2
Lovely. Faramir is so adorable in his tentative approach to Eowyn.
And Bergil is seriously sweet. The blue mantle has a life of its own,
too.

Title: Blood and Warm Blankets · Author: Kielle · Genres: Humor:
Metafic · ID: 451
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-27 13:41:27 Score: 3
I know there are some completely believable slash pairings out there.
However, there are a lot out there. That just aren't. This piece does
great justice to exposing the follies therein, while providing an
entertaining conversation between Faramir and Eomer in their own
right.

Title: Bound by Difference · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places:
Elves: First Age · ID: 1119
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-27 13:42:20 Score: 4
Now that kindler!gentler!Denethor has become something of a sub-
genre, it makes sense that people would try to make sense of
(arguably) Middle-earth's other best-known good-bad boy. This storyh
does a good job of characterising Feanor indirectly -- through
Nerdanel and Galadriel. It's a fascinating portrait, if a bit
unnerving. Hey, I'm by no means a silm-atic, but even I made it to
the end. Well done.

Title: Watcher on the Height · Author: Chris · Races/Places: Gondor:
Original Characters · ID: 1015
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-27 13:43:02 Score: 4
This is a great yarn, examining the unique frame of mind that would
lead someone to serve at such a lonely outpost (or perhaps that such
a soldier would have to develop to survive it). I particularly liked
the blending of Rohirric and Gondorian traits: these were certainly
Gondorians, but Gondorians of the north, with some carry-overs from
being so close to Rohan like the oral transmission of tales. Nice use
of believable OCs.

Title: War Stories · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 1367
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-27 13:44:58 Score: 3
I think my favourite part of this ficlet is the way Eldarion is
described in such detail. He's so vivid, and that makes the scene
also feel very vivid. Also, there's the interaction between Faramir
and Aragorn (indirectly, but it's there): Aragorn's re-affirming of
Faramir's courage, and thus of Gondor as a whole, was a delightful
change from what I often see.

Title: The Heirs of Isildur · Author: Marta · Genres: Humor: Drabble
· ID: 24
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-27 14:01:47 Score: 5
In this drabble about the issues facing an immortal fostering the
mortal children of his brother's line, Marta has created a scene
which is both very funny and very insightful. The irritation of
young "whassisname" is very vividly drawn, while she gives just the
right touch of confusion to the newly awoken Elrond. Of course, it
doesn't help that all those chieftains have such similar names….
There is also sadness in Elrond's recollection of Aravir's fate: in
the use of just three names, Marta has shown us the weight of the
generations of Men that Elrond has witnessed.

Title: To Shield a Shield-maiden · Author: Marta · Races/Places:
Rohan: Drabble · ID: 964
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-27 14:42:00 Score: 5
Ah, this is a wonderful drabble about the difficult line that those
closest to the throne had to walk when Gríma began to extend his evil
influence over Théoden. This drabble not only gives me insight into
how Théodred must have felt, but also helps me understand Éomer's
emotions and actions after Théodred's death, when grief meant he was
no longer able to exercise the same restraint. It is also beautifully
phrased, and the echoes of a number of well-known quotes that
resonate with the reader and add richness and depth to its meaning.

Title: Gimli and Boromir Strike Back · Author: Boromir Defender ·
Genres: Crossovers · ID: 1069
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 14:48:05 Score: 4
Well, I give the first Sue points for originality. I don't think I've
ever seen a Sue so persistently call upon the powers of Odin before.
That was definitely a surprise. What did the Norse gods ever do to
get pulled into this crazy mess? Or the Greek gods, for that matter?
Good thing Boromir and Gimli are there to straighten things out, and
thank heavens that Denethor and Faramir can keep their heads on
straight, too. Fun parody. I enjoyed Luthien's presence.

Title: A Gift for Frodo · Author: Dreamflower · Genres: Crossovers ·
ID: 909
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 14:48:39 Score: 4
I kept expecting someone to start whistling while I was reading this
story. I grew up on old reruns of Lassie, so this brought back quite
a few memories. Loved Frodo's complete confusion during the dream,
and I loved even more that Lassie found him in a well. She's always
finding people in wells. You'd think that someone would catch on once
in a while. Ah well. Fun story!

Title: Jerusalem · Author: Amarie · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 658
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 14:49:41 Score: 4
I'm always a little uneasy when Tolkien's world and theology start
mixing. One usually ends up being sacrificed to the other, and both
are too dear to me to allow for that. But this story managed to merge
the two while still respecting both, and for that, I thank Amarie.
Definitely an interesting take on many issues, and if anyone out of
the Silmarillion needed a chance like this, I suspect it would be
this particular elf.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Azalais · Genres: Crossovers ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 14:51:08 Score: 5
Great fun! I loved the good Professor's confusion as each of the
characters were introduced. Aragorn's introduction, particularly, had
some fabulous imagery to back it up, but I think I actually liked
Gandalf's entry best as he manages to block the entire door. How very
like a wizard to make an entrance. I loves the ties to a certain
chapter in The Hobbit that bares an identical name, right down to
Gimli's deep bow and the fact that he hung a green hood on a peg.
Brilliant touch! Wonderful idea and great tribute to the Professor
for his eleventy-first birthday. Loved it!

Title: The Shadow of an Image · Author: Finch · Genres: Crossovers ·
ID: 732
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 14:51:34 Score: 5
Brilliant! Wonderful story, and I very much enjoyed the use of works
from both Plato and Aristotle. Maglor is among the most intriguing of
the Silmarillion's vast cast of characters, and I think he would make
a very interesting conversationalist in the company of Aristotle. The
idea of various types of wisdom and knowledge, as well as the
different ways in which wisdom and knowledge are acquired, was
definitely of interest to me, and I liked the conclusion, in which it
seemed that both Maglor and Aristotle truly did see. Great stuff.

Title: The Hound Of The Bagginses · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres:
Crossovers · ID: 766
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 14:58:00 Score: 6
Great combination of characters and tales! I loved Peregrin's
astonishment at some of the very "elementary" observations that Merry
was making, and I loved the reactions of Frodo and Sam as they wonder
what in the world Merry is doing with the Took. He proves himself in
the end, but in the beginning, it's hilarious. I think the altered
personalities fit both worlds very well. There were enough ties to
LotR and to "The Hound of the Baskervilles" to make it very
entertaining, and I loved seeing where things diverged and where they
came together. Great writing, too, and a wonderful sense of humor.
Loved it!

Title: Magnetic Force · Author: Marnie · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 1097
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 14:58:52 Score: 6
I remember reading this story when it was first posted, and I loved
it then. I think I love it even more now. I enjoy the almost
scientific method Jasmine uses to examine her own madness once she
finds herself in Rivendell, and I love the explanation for Tolkien,
the Red Book, and everything else. I think Tolkien's world fits in
very well with the world of the Fortean Times, particularly as it's
described here. But most of all, I love the last section in which
Jasmine decides that Tolkien was wrong and the old tales were right:
elves taint the soul. The very ending had that bittersweet longing
about it that seems to haunt almost every elf important enough to
attain canon significance, and I like the way it's translated here to
fit with Jasmine's mortal limitations. Great story.

Title: The One and True Dark Lord · Author: Werecat · Genres:
Crossovers · ID: 358
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:05:06 Score: 6
Poor Morgoth. Poor Voldemort. I can't imagine those two trapped
together in the Void for long. Good thing Voldemort was there on a
temporary basis this time. Loved the discussion between the two, and
I laughed at the thought that Morgoth might have been a Muggle. I
also loved how Morgoth/Melkor handled things from his end. He's
definitely a foe to be reckoned with. And while I don't want to seem
unfairly biased toward the LotR universe, Morgoth does have far more
experience than Voldemort. I suspect he'll be proven right in the
end. And then they'll have all of eternity to practice snubbing one
another. Great story, and kudos for giving both Morgoth and Voldemort
the credit they deserve.

Title: Equinoxium · Author: Lisette · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 83
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:10:56 Score: 8
I was a fairly big fan of both Buffy and Angel, but the funny thing
about it is that I never actually liked Buffy as a character. I liked
most of the other characters (Angel, Spike, and Oz were particular
favorites) but not Buffy herself. I think it had something to do with
the way light and dark were constantly at war in the other three.
Buffy never really had that until the seventh season, but the great
thing about this story is that it takes the idea of balance between
good and evil and expands it into a giant epic that works
surprisingly well in the LotR world. I actually like the way this
closes out Buffy's season seven more than the actual ending for
season seven, and as for tying it into Tolkien's world, themes of
light and dark battling it out are prevalant and they were made to
match the almost contradictory role of the Slayer very well.
Brilliant adaptation and merging of two worlds! Loved the way that
balance was achieved in the end, and even more than that, I loved the
continuation of one of the main themes from both Buffy and Angel: in
the end, all you have is yourself.

Title: Where Now the Rider? · Author: Marta · Genres: Crossovers:
Poetry · ID: 968
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:13:09 Score: 3
If anybody in Middle-earth were given to composing sweeping, rallying
national anthems, it would be the Rohirrim. They practically did it
already in "Where now the horse and the rider?" and the adaptation
fits really well. Good choice of people and song for the adaptation.

Title: The Forest of Mirkwood · Author: Arandil · Genres: Crossovers:
Poetry · ID: 121
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:13:48 Score: 2
Great fun! Oh, this was priceless, particularly the part about
possibly sharing the king's son. That was great. Loved all the
slightly altered words and the Seuss rhythm. Good job.

Title: The Queen and her Pussycats Went to Sea · Author: Fileg ·
Genres: Crossovers: Poetry · ID: 726
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:15:27 Score: 4
You know, I could see this as becoming sort of a bizarre children's
nursery rhyme in Gondor. It definitely has a nonsensical Lear feel to
it, but it's got enough of a Mother Goose feel, too, that it could
pass itself off as a nursery rhyme. That's rather frightening,
actually. I wonder if Boromir grew up reciting poems about a pea-
green boat. Good writing! It's certainly made me both smile and think.

Title: Palantír · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Crossovers: Poetry · ID:
546
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:16:53 Score: 4
Dark and moody with some brilliant imagery. I'm not as familiar with
Plath as I am with some poets, but from what little I remember or her
work, this is very much in keeping with her style, from the choice of
perspective to the style of narration. I particularly like the idea
of burning a bright hope within the Palantir and then seeing the
failing West rising like a flame day by day. Wonderful stuff.

Title: Water and Flame · Author: Marta · Genres: Crossovers: Poetry ·
ID: 966
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:24:17 Score: 6
I really like the Frost's poem "Fire and Ice," and I think that this
poem does a wonderful job of capturing much of the imagery and also
much of the message behind Frost's creation. First of all, there are
the contrasting images of water and flame at work, and water, as with
fire in Frost's work, goes to work first. Numenor is taken by the
Sea. But there's also the fire, and there are some Numenoreans who
are destined to perish twice, as Frost puts it. And on the second go-
around, they run into fire in Orodruin. It's a brilliant way to
literally illustrate some of the things that Frost was talking about.
Good job with the content, and also kudos for sticking to form. It
was done very well.

Title: The Council of Elrond · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Crossovers:
Poetry · ID: 900
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:29:57 Score: 6
This poem was brilliant. I loved the way it adhered to form and
style. It stuck so close to a few of Lewis Carroll's poems that it
couldn't help but be hilarious, and I can imagine this thing making
itself right at home in Wonderland. And the periodic interjections
from various characters about the chapter dragging itself on had me
laughing throughout the entire thing. I loved the discussion between
Gandalf and Elrond about how unclear the dwarves were being, and I
loved the fact that the Council thanked Elrond for encouraging Bilbo
to be brief about his tale. Gandalf showed why he was accounted one
of the Wise by denying Elrond a song to finish the thing off with.
Great writing, great style, and wonderful humor. I loved it!

Title: The Council of Elrond in the Style of Hiawatha · Author:
Theresa Green · Genres: Crossovers: Poetry · ID: 559
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-27 15:38:16 Score: 6
I'm almost certain that this poem made me hurt something while
laughing. It was absolutely hilarious! I nearly choked when I came
across the title of "Aragorn the Unwashed," though "Bombadil the
Hippy" was pretty good, too. Poor Longfellow. And poor Tolkien. I did
cheer on Frodo's efforts to dump the Ring off on somebody. They were
noble, albeit futile. Gandalf's trick of getting Frodo read a
parchment aloud and thus doom himself was brilliant. Kudos to the
wizard for getting the whole thing over with before it got any
further out of hand. Although, had this REALLY been a collaboration
between Longfellow adn Tolkien, I suspect the section dedicated to
the Council of Elrond would have been as long as that particular
chapter in FotR is. Heaven help us all.

Title: Roast Mutton · Author: Marta · Races/Places: Villains: Drabble
· ID: 1362
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 16:38:12 Score: 1
Cute little summary of the chapter "Roast Mutton" in The Hobbit; very
droll--I especially loved the last line.

Title: Once · Author: Meril · Races/Places: Villains: Nazgul · ID: 485
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 16:47:31 Score: 2
Chilling and inevitable, a man who takes a ring of power has doomed
himself to shrinking away to nothing...Very well done.

Title: Pipes After Supper · Author: Ariel · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Aman · ID: 134
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-27 17:01:25 Score: 2
this work presents a beautiful little picture of Sam and Frodo, I
enjoyed your detailed descriptions and characterizations.

Title: Old Angband · Author: Arandil · Genres: Humor: Poetry · ID: 124
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-27 17:04:34 Score: 1
Very funny, well done point of view and a good turn on an old song.

Title: Beyond Reach · Author: Elvenesse · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 327
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-27 17:20:21 Score: 1
Thank you for this heartbreaking moment that Elwing must have thought
would be her last.

Title: Guarding Gondor · Author: emn1936 · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gondor · ID: 278
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-27 17:25:41 Score: 2
Well done. I enjoyed this little bit of the Fourth Age. A bit of the
King and Queen, but with the husband and wife as well. Lovely writing.

Title: Triumph Incarnate · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 198
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-27 17:26:09 Score: 4
Once again, Elena Tiriel writes magnificently about the darker
characters in Arda and their motivations. His elaboration of the
crimes of the Númenoreans under his direction is chilling. And one of
the most impressive things about this drabble is her subtle use of
capitalisation and lack of capitalisation to indicate Sauron's
arrogance and self-importance.

Title: There and Back Again · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Cross-Cultural: Drabble · ID: 202
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-27 17:26:29 Score: 3
Hmm, I suspect Frodo was only fascinated by memoirs with a happy
outcome.... The Book of Mazarbul made rather grim reading. I love the
way Elena Tiriel has shown us Balin's unrest and desire even in the
middle of contentment. It's also impressive that we don't realise
exactly which moment we're in until the last line. A very nicely
constructed piece.

Title: A Long Tradition of Ancient Lore · Author: Elena Tiriel ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 206
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-27 17:28:02 Score: 4
Great to see a non-studious small Faramir -- a rarity in the fandom! -
- and a kindly yet still wily Denethor using underhand tactics
tempting his son into taking an interest in dull history. Also, given
we know Faramir is Tolkien's alter ego and given Tolkien had an
obsession with dragons as a child himself, this is a nice parallel! A
nicely constructed scene handled primarily through dialogue.

**end**

Msg# 5280

Hurricanes and reviews Posted by aelfwina@cableone.net August 28, 2005 - 11:33:37 Topic ID# 5280
Well, as hard as I've been trying, I expect that the next little while is going to seriously impair my ability to review. The power and cable will probably be out for a few days, starting sometime this afternoon or evening. Even if all goes well, and it's only out for a short time, we are supposed to go out of town the following week, and I don't think I will have much in the way of internet access. If the damage is bad enough to keep us from going, then I expect it will also be bad enough to keep me from doing much in the way of reviewing. And there won't be many days left afterward.

So, I apologize in advance to all the wonderful authors of wonderful stories that it doesn't look like I will get to. 8-(

Ah, well...

Dreamflower
(Barbara)

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Msg# 5281

Re: Hurricanes and reviews Posted by sulriel August 28, 2005 - 11:40:31 Topic ID# 5280
Hang on tight, Barbara, and anyone else in that area. I'm in FW and
we are having some pretty heavy winds and occasional rain, - even as
far away as we are.

You've done a ton of reviews, I'd be afraid to try to guess how many -
every one is appreciated, I'm sure. Hopefully you'll get to enjoy
your holiday and maybe have time for a couple more reviews when you
get back.

Sulriel


--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, <aelfwina@c...> wrote:
> Well, as hard as I've been trying, I expect that the next little
while is going to seriously impair my ability to review. The power
and cable will probably be out for a few days, starting sometime this
afternoon or evening. Even if all goes well, and it's only out for a
short time, we are supposed to go out of town the following week, and
I don't think I will have much in the way of internet access. If the
damage is bad enough to keep us from going, then I expect it will
also be bad enough to keep me from doing much in the way of
reviewing. And there won't be many days left afterward.
>
> So, I apologize in advance to all the wonderful authors of
wonderful stories that it doesn't look like I will get to. 8-(
>
> Ah, well...
>
> Dreamflower
> (Barbara)

Msg# 5282

~ Final Reviews 8/27/05 Posted by sulriel August 28, 2005 - 20:47:55 Topic ID# 5282
54 new final reviews today.


Title: In the Greening of the Year · Author: Lindelea · Genres:
Adventure · ID: 774
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:00:48 Score: 4
This author has a knack for drawing suspense out of situations in
which we already know the outcome. In this tale, in which Pippin's
mother and one of Lindelea's OCs are trapped in a flood, we are
treated to the harrowing and nerve-wracking search by Pippin for his
mother, and Eglantine's determined stubbornness in taking care of
Tolly. We definitely get to see that the Took side of Pippin is not
the only place he came by his stubbornness--the Banks side
contributed as well!

Title: A Took by Any Other Name · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 773
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:12:09 Score: 4
In this story, Pippin is still living in Buckland, and he and Diamond
are expecting their first child, when a serious encounter with some
roving Orcs in the Old Forest leaves him near death. The tale of his
recovery, and how it fits into his estrangement with his father, and
his position in Buckland is absorbing. And there is some marvelous
development of some minor canon characters. I do not want to give
away the lovely ending.

Title: Giving Ground · Author: Suzene Campos · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 1123
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:16:24 Score: 3
Suzene Campos picks up on a target I wouldn't have found in this
argument, and exploits it well to give us a better sense of Legolas'
history and of a much more substantive relationship between Elf and
Dwarf than movie!Gimli tends to allow. I hope one day she may take on
the Legolas-Aragorn angle of the confrontation as well!

Title: All That Glisters · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 914
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:16:31 Score: 5
Long and suspenseful, nearly every chapter ending in one of
Lindelea's patented cliffhangers, and filled with angst and humor
both! There are some absolutely delightful OCs in this story, and the
development of them is very well done. And she has a deft way with
some of the canon characters who seldom populate her stories, set
mostly in the Post-Quest Shire: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan and Elrohir
are just right.
A very satisfying story, tying up a number of loose ends n the
author's universe.

Title: Foresight · Author: quirky_orthodox · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 1044
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:16:57 Score: 4
Points to quirky_orthodox for doing something with movie!Haldir that
actually moved me. It's a rare thing. Giving him a personal stake in
the battle at Helm's Deep, even if by the unexplained glance into the
Mirror, gives him an interesting conflict with authority that is
satisfactorily resolved: Haldir retains his honesty and courage, and
Celeborn shows himself to be a wise enough commander to know better
than to give an order that will not be obeyed.

Title: Weakness of Men · Author: shadow975 · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 1014
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:17:22 Score: 8
Rachel has a good eye and ear for navigating the uneven, sometimes
not terribly comprehensible, relationship of movie!Boromir and movie!
Aragorn. The films had their moments of brilliance with these two,
but some of those aren't obtained save through the extended scenes,
which unfortunately gives in the measure that it takes—confrontations
that made sense in the theater versions lose it when extra material
is added that, frankly, deserved the cut. Other times, the reverse is
true.

Rachel somehow manages to pull it altogethe in her psychological
pieces and turn that unevenness into something that makes sense. And
she doesn't go overboard with the angst, either, or the doubts
Aragorn has, given the portrayal of Aragorn in the movies. No
weepiness or the like, just an honest, regretful introspection from
Aragorn, who is wise enough to accept with grace the good, and own
the faults and bad judgments without allowing them to reflect a false
representation of himself or of Boromir.


Title: Chains · Author: ldhenson · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette ·
ID: 994
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:17:42 Score: 4
Idhenson likes to jerk our chains a bit, appropriately enough. One
imagines this must be about Frodo. Or else about that scene at
Caradhras at first. But then one realizes that it's a meditation on a
different elven-wrought chain and different form of bondage: Arwen's
love for Aragorn, and Aragorn's love for Arwen, that prevents Boromir
from having the relationship he wants with Aragorn. Nicely done,
Idhenson!

Title: Fell Deeds, Awake · Author: Marta · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 941
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:18:06 Score: 4
This has evolved from when I first read it, and I like the changes.
I'm still not quite sure it convinces me, but it does shed a little
more light on movie!Gimli's personality and connections with the
story of "The Hobbit". It also ties one of his more memorable
movieverse lines into this scene to give it that proper feel of
defiance, of the old 'spiro, spero': "Whether we would live to see
the afternoon was not yet certain; but we still drew breath."

Title: On Pelennor Fields · Author: Nickey · Genres: Movie-verse ·
ID: 824
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:18:34 Score: 4
I think my favorite line is this one:

"I promised to protect her, shield arm am I, and her shield is
broken. "

That makes sense as Merry's motivation to stab the Witch-king, by
referencing that visual shot of him acting, as Nickey noes, as
Éowyn's shield-arm. I also rather liked Windfola in this one, as he
took on a bit of personality here. About time, every other horse in
the Mark has a story, after all!


Title: What's Right Before You · Author: Tom Fairbairn · Genres:
Movie-verse: Vignette · ID: 756
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:18:59 Score: 4
Nicely played. It takes a certain skill to be able to move a story so
quickly forward and through so much without seeming to make a cheap
transition, but Tom Fairbairn has that skill and you don't miss any
of the briefly mentioned events. The hint at the end of Frodo's final
climb up Mt. Doom, and of the philosophy of climbing that in fact
likely informs Frodo's entire journey as the capacity for reflection
sinks away under the weight of the Ring, is well done. Good job, sir!

Title: Split Second · Author: Aralanthiriel · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 662
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:19:28 Score: 3
Interesting. A little uneven to me, but there's a rightness to the
way that the Ring sinks its invisible fangs into Boromir, so that it
does take him some time to shake off that influence, and come to a
point where he realizes he is afraid of himself, and not really of
the others of the Fellowship.

Title: End Games · Author: Lyllyn · Genres: Movie-verse: Vignette ·
ID: 469
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:19:49 Score: 7
Thank you, Lyllyn, for making some sense of that encounter. Granted,
the reward for that illogic in the movie is one of my favorite dirty
looks of all time, but still... I appreciate, too, that "End Games"
tries to walk that fine line between Arwen's evident skill with a
blade in the movie, but also the fact that in the books, she simply
isn't a warrior. Here, she's untried, and Aragorn has to deal with
this as a captain would, trusting that training and the fact that
Arwen doesn't have the visceral knowledge of the terror of the
wraiths that he does will keep her moving where another, more
experienced head might let that knowledge get the better of him—as
happened to him. That "End Games" turns what I always felt was a
rather misplaced romantic line into advice about the enemy is just
gravy. Good job, Lyllyn!

Title: Celeborn's Gift · Author: Karri · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 446
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:20:16 Score: 3
Fabulous! A creative, in-fic answer to the special effects that keep
our Elf topped out in arrows no matter what happens. I particularly
liked Celeborn's response to Legolas' sense of inadequate thanks:
outlive the enemy, that's the only way to thank one's benefactors.

Title: A Healer's Tale · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Incomplete · ID: 754
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:20:39 Score: 5
This story features one of the best uses of flashback that I have
ever seen, with each chapter alternating between telling the story of
Pippin's healer, Woodruff (a marvelous OC) and Pippin in
the "present", suffering from a potentially fatal bout of pneumonia.
There is a lot of development of Shire society and customs, as well
as some marvelous humor, a bit of fluff, and a good deal of angst and
h/c. Even though one who has read the author's story "At the End of
His Rope" will already know the outcome, it still manages to be
suspenseful anyway. I look forward to each update!

Title: Survivor · Author: Raksha the Demon · Genres: Movie-verse ·
ID: 324
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:20:54 Score: 3
Nice to see a story dealing with movei!Faramir's survivor's guilt. He
would certainly suffer from it, particularly if he had endured what
Raksha has him endure. I can't say I'm quite convinced of the manner
of Faramir's return, but then again, this is mostly the fault of the
movie.

Title: The Path Before Me · Author: Cheryl · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 223
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:21:15 Score: 2
Not quite enough there for my satisfaction, but one imagines Aragorn
would need to come to terms with that argument more than once.

Title: Smiting Ruin · Author: Thundera Tiger · Genres: Movie-verse ·
ID: 195
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:21:38 Score: 1
*snork* Ok, so now when is round three of the interspecies rhetoric
society going to occur?

Title: Climbing · Author: Ancalime8301 · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 88
Reviewer: Dwimordene · 2005-08-27 22:22:10 Score: 2
Given that I've now watched the full movie, it's hard to read a fic
based on the trailer that excluded much of what we now know comes
after. Still, the sense of Frodo's physical effort and the line about
dark windows were well done.

Title: Thain · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Incomplete · ID: 913
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:23:49 Score: 3
This story alternates between telling of how Paladin became Thain and
how Bucca of the Marish helped the last refugees of the North Kingdom
to escape from Angmar. It's very deft, though I have to confess I
like the Paladin-Pippin chapters better. I am eager to learn what
happens next in both timelines.

Title: The Council of Elrond · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Crossovers:
Poetry · ID: 900
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:28:41 Score: 2
Brilliant, hilarious and absolutely perfect in parodying Lewis
Carroll's style! I loved the way she gave equal time to book and
movie verse without confusing them. And some lines had me laughing
out loud!

Title: And Empty Holes It Fills · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Horror ·
ID: 1183
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:32:03 Score: 3
Although the author is better known for her Pippin angst, she very
clearly has a good insight into Merry as well, and in this story she
explores all that the Dark has meant to him during his lifetime, and
how his cousins were what kept him anchored to the light. Very
beautiful, though chilling and melancholy, imagery!

Title: Truth · Author: Lindelea · Genres: Mystery · ID: 898
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:38:45 Score: 4
A wonderful story featuring Sam's son Frodo, but also concerning
Goldilocks and Pippin's son Faramir. The disparate story elements are
woven together expertly. There is a bit of mystery when young Frodo
is accused of something he didn't do; unravelling it falls to Pippin,
as Thain, and his remarkable cousin Ferdi Took. In the process, they
uncover injustice and help along the course of true love.

Title: The Ballad of Isildur and Elendil · Author: Lindelea ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Poetry · ID: 460
Reviewer: Dreamflower · 2005-08-27 22:40:01 Score: 2
This definitely sounds like the sort of song that would have been
sung in Minas Tirith, in the days when it stood so long against the
Dark.

Title: Waiting for a King Like You · Author: Michael Martinez ·
Genres: Non-Fiction: Men · ID: 1139
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-27 22:47:16 Score: 4
This piece has a lot of interesting extrapolation on the possible
reasons for the downfall of Arnor. They seemed well-thought out, but
I think it would ahve been more helpful if I had more sources. As it
was, at some places I wans't 100% sure what was Tolkien's (either
Christopher's or JRR's) facts, and what was the author of this
essay's own extrapolation. In any event, I quite liked this vision of
the Third Age.

Title: Bringing the Sun · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: Drabble · ID: 1382
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 00:07:28 Score: 4
This drabble captured the scene so sharploy: the bite of the snow and
the wind, Legolas's almost impervious hope and Boromir's and
Aragorn's frustration. When I read the book Legolas always felt
flippant, but this does a good job of giving this moment more depth.
Nice job taking a moment from the books and really fleshing it out. I
really enjoyed this moment between Legolas and Aragorn.

Title: Voices of the Forgotten · Author: jen_loves_elves ·
Races/Places: Gondor: Drabble · ID: 435
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 00:15:44 Score: 3
What I love about this drabble series is the uniquely female voices
this provides. Not necessarily feminine (at least as many people use
that term), as many of the women here were forces to be reckoned
with -- but distinctly coming from the world of women nonetheless.
Nice use of limited canon available.

Title: Deep Waters · Author: Finch · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Vignette · ID: 344
Reviewer: jillian baade · 2005-08-28 00:45:21 Score: 6
Once again Finch, you manage to show the differences and the
similiarities between mortals and elves. The use of the young boy,
sorry I forget his name, is excellent for he is like the glue that
binds the story together, bringing his father and Finrod together in
conversation in a way that would not have happened without the
child's innocent comment on male anatomy! Which brings me to the
comment that if one found an elvish skeleton there would no way to
tell it from that of a young adult mortal's would there?

I mean, the physical differences are few. This story emphasis the
cultural and spiritual differences, but at the end, both men seem to
realise they are only two living beings, each as afraid of failure
and death as the other.

Title: A net of warring duties · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Men:
Drabble · ID: 1361
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 02:47:53 Score: 5
Chilling! Denethor in his palantír-induced paranoia.... It is one
thing to resent Gandalf's influence on Faramir, but to accuse him of
sending the riddling dream to Boromir to get rid of him is... well,
crazy. And accusing Gandalf of megalomania? He can't accept that
anyone who is not under his direct control can also be fighting
Sauron's evil.

He is so delusional, he thinks that Boromir's greatest danger was
corruption by the wizard, not the Ring.

The final line is starkly ironic.


Title: Cruel Caradhras · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Drabble · ID: 1365
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 03:02:56 Score: 4
What an aching loneliness awaits Legolas!

You can see Legolas's dawning awareness of just how much he his
mortal friends mean to him, and just how painful their departures,
one by one, are to his loving heart. He will be haunted by their
memories.

This is heart-wrenching, and that last line, especially the "spaces
where their voices will be", just breaks my heart. *sniff* Very
perceptive, Liz...


Title: Pride · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1366
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 03:14:02 Score: 4
"Hind legs first and still inclined to use them"? Oh, Liz, that is so
funny! A colt that is obstreperous from before birth!

I can just feel Éomer's frustration (and pain!), yet he keeps his
eyes open and focused on his goal, and learns from the colt's dam.
I'm glad that he decides to make the best use of the colt's already-
evident skills....

Though he seems young here (otherwise Théodred's jibes wouldn't
be "gentle"), one gets the impression that Éomer recognizes a kindred
spirit.


Title: War Stories · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 1367
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 03:23:44 Score: 4
Just exactly how does one raise a child to understand the difference
between truth and fiction, when the truth is so strange?

Eldarion here seems just on the cusp of recognizing that some stories
are fiction -- and some are not.

I like that unassuming Faramir has been regaling Eldarion with
stories of
Aragorn's feats, without mentioning his own. Maybe he doesn't
recognize their valor? But Aragorn will set Eldarion, and Faramir,
straight. Well done!


Title: Risk and Reward · Author: Tanaqui · Genres: Romance: Drabble ·
ID: 1364
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 03:29:34 Score: 3
Ah, Liz, this is sweet and subtle and erotic and beautiful. I love
the imagery of the daisy, turning to the sun; their mutual attraction
is clear. And I particularly enjoyed the "homecoming to a place he
has only known in dreams." That is a perfect cap to a loving vignette!


Title: The Long March · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Villains:
Drabble · ID: 542
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 03:40:38 Score: 4
Ah, it is clear that "they" are not so very different from "us". The
discipline, battle-gear, banners, and propaganda are all the same.
The exhaustion, endless marching, and not knowing what lies ahead,
are also the same. And the boredom.

Until the arrows fly... and there is confusion, and fear, for a very
short moment before their training kicks in... and their contempt for
the enemy fuels their defiance.

No, they are no different at all.


Title: Good welcome they found · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Drabble · ID: 1371
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 04:09:41 Score: 4
Círdan was foresighted, but obviously did not see all of the
implications of his teaching -- though I cannot imagine him turning
away anyone who genuinely wished to learn shiplore. And given what
happened in Minhiriath and Enedwaith, it's pretty obvious that
the "planting of trees" part didn't register with this king-to-be.
*Sigh* The Númenóreans were so vain and greedy...


Title: Refuge · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Elves: Drabble · ID:
1375
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 04:19:17 Score: 3
This drabble is so evocative -- I can see the wild moorland and feel
the weariness of the escapees, and then the calmness that pervades
the valley, with shelter to nurture the body, water to nurture the
thirst, beauty to nurture the soul, and peacefulness to nurture the
spirit. This is beautiful writing, Liz, that touches my heart!


Title: Father-Names · Author: Finch · Books/Time: The Silmarillion:
Feanor and Sons · ID: 345
Reviewer: jillian baade · 2005-08-28 04:22:32 Score: 4
I find it fascinating that you show Maglor as a ruthless warrior,
something few people are prepared to admit he must have been, to have
survived so many battles. Killing the servant who left the boys in
the forest and his own admission that he hoping not to find the
children shows the Oath at work at it's worst too.

Best of all is the end, with Maglor able to sing again. Elrond and
Elros saved him that day, as much as he saved them.

Title: Wise Enough · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Drabble · ID: 552
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-28 04:29:16 Score: 5
What beautiful visions of the future of his beloved Gondor! What a
simple way to obtain what he -- no, what Gondor! -- needs; after all,
is he not a warrior, sword to protect Gondor?

I love this, Liz. You show so clearly what it is that separates the
real Faramir from most who would protect Gondor (including -- or
especially -- his father): he recognizes how a tainted victory would
irretrievably stain Gondor's future with evil. Beautifully done!

Definitely "sufficient" enough for a future leader....

Title: Garden · Author: Cheryl · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Ithilien
Drabble · ID: 220
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-28 06:54:01 Score: 4
This is a beautiful drabble. Cheryl has strongly conveyed the way
Legolas is in touch with the rhythms of nature in his slow and
peaceful planting, and his whispered words to each plant. His
affection for Faramir and Éowyn, and his appreciation of their work
in renewing Ithilien shines through, as does Faramir's appreciation
of Legolas's input. A great moment of friendship.

Title: I Pledge My Bow · Author: Cheryl · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Drabble · ID: 221
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-28 06:54:24 Score: 3
A very nice insight into how movie!verse Legolas reacted to the
Council of Elrond and why he spoke up so quickly. Cheryl's
description of the way Frodo speaks and the "ray of sunshine" it
brings makes us feel Legolas's response is convincing and heartfelt.
Well done!

Title: The Path Before Me · Author: Cheryl · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 223
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-28 07:34:27 Score: 5
This is a beautiful movie!verse vignette in which Cheryl shows us how
Aragorn moves from his doubts on the river bank to his assumption of
his role as Isildur's Heir. Aragorn's reflections on his companions
and how he uses that to understand and accept his own destiny are
well handled. His tribute to Boromir, the recognition of their
differences and similarities, and how Aragorn can do no less than
Boromir in overcoming his weakness. Although I dislike the movies
characterisation of Aragorn, I think Cheryl has done an excellent job
with the material.

Title: Challenge · Author: Cheryl · Races/Places: Rohan: Drabble ·
ID: 207
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-28 07:34:38 Score: 4
This is a lovely cousinly moment. Cheryl shows us clearly how Éomer
has the overconfidence of youth and Theódred the wisdom of greater
experience. But she also shows us how Theódred rather unfairly goads
Éomer into taking on a challenge he knows he's unlikely to succeed
at. And the moment of Éomer's disorientation after he is thrown is
handled beautifully: well done "show not tell".

Title: Not Without Hope · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drama · ID: 48
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-28 08:00:35 Score: 10
This is among the best stories I have read in this fandom and one I
have happily re-read several times. Gwynnyd effectively and
intelligently solves one of the more significant absurdities in
Aragorn's backstory. She does so in beautifully crafted prose that
plunges us deep into the world of the Dúnedain of the North.

Gwynnyd's Gilraen is truly fit to be wife of the chieftain, showing
her strength of character to do what is necessary -- even at the cost
of her own reputation -- to ensure her son has the stability and care
to ensure he grows into a loving and generous man rather than a
bitter and angry one. She is well opposed by Halbeleg -- perhaps my
favourite original character in the fandom -- and Elrond, who are
both given strong arguments and objections that Gilraen must work
hard to overcome.

Gwynnyd also paints a touching portrait of Arathorn and Gilraen's
marriage and her love for her husband. Young Aragorn is sweetly drawn
without being sickly, while Elrond's willingbess to abandon his
dignity to get down on the floor and play toy soldiers is charming
and yet clearly remains in character with the stern loremaster and
counsellor. However, I think my favourite scene is the encounter in
the garden between Halbeleg and Gilraen.

All of this is complimented by the small details of family life in
Arnor at this point, which provide a rich and satisfying background
to these strong emotions.

Title: Voices in the Wilderness · Author: Ithilwen · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 1018
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 10:42:59 Score: 3
This piece does a good job of gap-filling the various implications of
Feanor's banishment. I particularly liked Ithilwen's examinations of
how the Valar's decision would have affected Finwe's ability to rule.
That was something I hadn't thought of before.

Title: An Unexpected Party · Author: Azalais · Genres: Crossovers ·
ID: 150
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-28 10:52:49 Score: 1
Beautifully done. Very impressive, very enjoyable - the characters
shone through, including that of the Professor.

Title: Mering Market · Author: Dwimordene · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Gondor · ID: 238
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-28 11:06:14 Score: 4
This is very cleverly done. I liked seeing Denethor in his younger,
smartypants days. And this is just the sort of young man I would
think that Denethor was, in his pre-Palantir, before-bitterness, son
of the Steward days. Not the sort to go for simple basic banana-
slipping humour - he would have to have a score in there somewhere.
Good thing that Theoden is a typically casual and sporting Rohir.
Nice to see Aragorn, too - more politically ept than either.

Title: Swords Returned · Author: Leaward · Races/Places: Men: Eriador
· ID: 172
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-28 11:25:06 Score: 7
When I first read this I was almost convinced that Leaward had, as
she always does, done some fantastic research and unearthed a real
cultural practice found somewhere in feudalistic societies. The fact
that I was wrong is testament both to the way in which the narrative
utterly convinces you that this would be a perfectly 'rangerly' thing
to do and also to Leaward's amazing ability to create the entire
world and culture of the Dunedain virtually from scratch.

For an author who claims she cannot write shorts this piece certainly
hits you hard and fast between the eyes. Tarkil is written as a very
realistic and inquisitive young child, I just loved the bit about 'a
neek' it seemed so natural. The way in which everyone waited to see
if the person in the first house waved was yet another wonderful
human touch. Very, very good!

Title: Home Again · Author: grey_wonderer · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): Post-Ring War · ID: 915
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-28 13:26:33 Score: 7
This is a most beautifully written tale of what our favorite lads go
through once all the dust settles in the Shire after the occupation
of Sharkey and his ruffians. The Battle of Bywater is over, and the
ruffians are shown to the borders. How do Frodo, Sam, Merry, and
Pippin go on with their lives after so much has happened? All of our
hobbits return to the Shire changed in varying degrees, and not all
for good. In one case, it's not necessarily a Traveller who is
affected. The author takes a daring step in portraying what the Four
Travellers plus another endure as they try to return to their lives.
Some get emotional support from family and friends...some do not. The
story follows each of them as they begin to pick up the pieces of
their lives and begin again. I encourage anyone who has not read this
wonderful tale, to do so; it will tug at your heartstrings--and be
sure to have handy a box of tissue!

Title: Marigold · Author: Marigold · Races/Places: Hobbits: Drabble ·
ID: 784
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-28 13:48:50 Score: 4
If any tale made me feel as if I were sitting next to the character
watching the entire story unfold, it's this one. Let me rephrase
that; through this wee tale, I almost felt as if I knew Marigold for
her whole life. The author paints one of those lovely old pictures
that I can actually "feel" and be touched from in this lovely story.
I would encourage anyone to read this wonderful tale.

Title: Promises Promises · Author: Llinos · Races/Places: Hobbits:
Children · ID: 786
Reviewer: pippinfan88 · 2005-08-28 14:29:10 Score: 5
I loved every single aspect of this sweet, wonderful tale! I love
stories that depict our favourite lads as children. The sky is the
limit with a child's tender heart and imagination. I got a nice laugh
out of Pippin giving Pervinca his most cherished toy boat, being
cheeky to Pearl, and dipping Pimmie's plaits into custard, but his
fervent promise was out of love for his beloved cousin. I especially
appreciated that Pippin found solace in Those who watch out for
little hobbits. ;-) Thank you for a wonderful story.

Title: Elven Song · Author: Jocelyn · Genres: Drama (includes Angst):
Elves · ID: 66
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-28 17:33:24 Score: 7
This is a gripping story, which took me on quite an emotional
rollercoaster ride.

I remember starting this story once before, but I could not get into
it. The prologue put me off. I'm not one for old Numenor and it
looked like it centered mostly on elves, which are not my preferred
characters.

But I gave it a second try and once past the prologue I couldn't
stop. The reactions of the characters to the tragedy that befell one
of the fellowship were very well written. I don't think they were too
extreme or out of character. They were so well written that I would
have been content if the story would be finished with chapter 3. At
first I felt cheated that the story went on. But in the end I'm glad
that everything worked out.

I liked that they all had a good look at their motives and had to
look at their behavior during the crisis.

Great job!

Title: A Walk in the Rain · Author: Ithilien · Races/Places: Elves:
Post-Ring War · ID: 104
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-28 18:04:30 Score: 5
This is a delightful piece. I admit I was confused at first about the
purpose of this scene (no Legolas for the first half of the story).

Arwen's insistence on doing her luncheon outside although it is
raining, struck me as strange until her conversation with Legolas
about the difference between being elvish and being mortal. I loved
the discussion about throat medication and Arwen's dawning
understanding what it is to be mortal. Legoals seems to know more
about it than Arwen, although she is mortal now.



Title: Bronwe Athan Harthad · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Post-Ring War · ID: 128
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 18:30:56 Score: 10
This piece is beautiful. Simply beautiful... breathtakingly true to
its very core. It's probably the best thought-out exposition on the
internal torture that Frodo must have faced after the Sammath Naur.
Someone with less experience with grief might be tempted to say Frodo
was "blaming himself", but Aratlithiel clearly has a good grasp on
the emotions that come into play here.

The only fault that this piece has, if it can be called a fault, is
that it seems to switch into Aragorn's thoughts in two places. This
is certainly "allowed", but I found it a bit jarring because we were
so strongly in Frodo's head, especially at the beginning, that this
just seemed "off". Not sure how to avoid it, though.

What I really like about this piece is that it doesn't try to wrap
everything into a neat tidy package. Frodo's grief is not resolved by
the end of the story, though Aragorn (and presumably Gandalf)
understand it better and Aragorn is resolved to do whatever he can
about it. This fits very well with the tone of Lord of the Rings.
Unlike "The Hobbit", this is not some "There and Back" journey; and
as Gandalf says to Sam at Cormallen, not all the bad things are
coming undone. Thank you for not trying to provide an emotionally
satisfying but ultimately false conclusion to a scene where there's
just too much being resolved. And thank you for a very well-written
story.

Title: Unspeakable · Author: Dwimordene · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Drabble · ID: 254
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 19:13:45 Score: 3
How delightfully orcsy, to delight in torment -- and for Tegrid to
realise that that "fun" was not for him, that he had more important
things to go about. And the dunadan's silence and quick thinking
seemed very in-character for that group. Well done.

Title: Brotherly Love · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings: Drabble · ID: 1393
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 19:16:05 Score: 3
What a cute moment in the day-to-day life of the first family of
Gondor. This is the moment in "Cup of Bitterness" that never ceases
to make me smile, and you've boiled it down to 100 words quite well.
It really does stand on its own here; very nice work.

***end***

Msg# 5283

MEFA2005 site appears to be down. Posted by ainaechoiriel August 29, 2005 - 9:36:28 Topic ID# 5283
My whole internet connection appears to be down. I'm at work, not at
home, so I can't really check it out.

I'll ping it now and then to see if it's back up.

--Ainaechoiriel

Msg# 5284

MEFA2005 is back up. Posted by ainaechoiriel August 29, 2005 - 10:38:06 Topic ID# 5284
Pinged it and it worked. Don't know what happened as I'm here and my
cable modem is there.

Bye for now. Gotta look like I'm workin'.

--Ainaechoiriel

Msg# 5285

Re: MEFA2005 is back up. Posted by sulriel August 29, 2005 - 10:43:53 Topic ID# 5284
It was up and down earlier this morning, maybe related to the storms
with Katrina? - maybe stuff being rerouted ?


- glad to see you back.


Sulriel



--- In MEFAwards@yahoogroups.com, "ainaechoiriel" <mefaadmin@e...>
wrote:
> Pinged it and it worked. Don't know what happened as I'm here and my
> cable modem is there.
>
> Bye for now. Gotta look like I'm workin'.
>
> --Ainaechoiriel

Msg# 5286

And it's down again. Posted by ainaechoiriel August 29, 2005 - 11:22:42 Topic ID# 5286
Sigh.

Msg# 5287

It's back up again. Posted by ainaechoiriel August 29, 2005 - 12:09:59 Topic ID# 5287
Hope it stays that way.

--Ainaechoiriel

Msg# 5288

Final reviews for 8/28 Posted by sulriel August 29, 2005 - 21:57:45 Topic ID# 5288
29 new final reviews today

*Prayers going out for those dealing with Katrina.*

Title: Not Without Hope · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drama · ID: 48
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-28 21:30:29 Score: 7
This story, along with Dwimordene's Sarn Ford, is one of the reasons
I hesitated to write about the Dunedain of the North when I first
started writing LOTR fanfic. They are so well-written and well-
researched that I feel humbled when I read them and thoroughly doubt
my own abilities. Gilraen has been wonderfully portrayed by Gwynnyd,
and the choices that she makes so heartbreaking yet understandable.
The grief at being faced with losing not only your husband but your
only child -- at so young an age at that -- would have been
unfathomable. Yet Gilraen manages to keep her head, and her son, with
her at all times despite Halbeleg's stern insistence, and then Elrond
to boot. I have returned to this story a few times, and Gwynnyd was
even nice enough to point me in the right direction for her research.
Thanks, Gwynnyd!

Title: Comes the Dawn · Author: Ithilwen · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 418
Reviewer: jillian baade · 2005-08-28 21:39:10 Score: 5
How sweet the ending, when Mandos releases Maedhros just in time for
the destruction of Arda, and how sad Maedhros realises this, and must
be silent, and simply enjoy his beloved brother's company.

Of course this story is all about hope; hope that even the worst of
people can find forgiveness if they truly wish it, and hope that
tomorrow (in this case, the end of Arda Marred will lead to Arda
Remade) will be better, and everything will Ok at last. Quite an
appropriate end for the eldest of Feanor's sons.


Title: Captive of Fate · Author: Ithilwen · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 1076
Reviewer: jillian baade · 2005-08-28 21:50:20 Score: 3
Seen from Maedhros' perspective, as he hangs, thinking, the events of
the Kinslaying and Oath are so calmly rational. Of course, he isn't
as rational as he thinks in his torment and dispair, who could be?

His blind faith that Fingon is safe in Aman with his father after the
ship burning is heart-wrenching especially as we all know who is
singing!

Title: Uninvited · Author: just_sphinx · Races/Places: Elves · ID:
1020
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 22:08:29 Score: 1
Interesting description of what the Halls of Mandos might have felt
like.

Title: Voices in the Wilderness · Author: Ithilwen · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion: Feanor and Sons · ID: 1018
Reviewer: jillian baade · 2005-08-28 22:15:52 Score: 7
Of course Feanor and Finwe are right, the Valar's interference in the
affairs of the Noldor is a classic example of too little, too late.
Really they ought to have left Finwe to have dealt with his sons,
which I think he ought to have done by banging their heads together
until they begged for mercy! I wonder too, how much of Finwe's desire
to go into exile with Feanor was not because he felt 'unkinged' but
to watch his volatile eldest?

How the family was torn apart by this was tragic, yet amongst the
tradegy is hope. Hope from Fingon who has not forgotten his best
friend, hope from Curufin's wife, so recently with child. How does it
happen she refuses to go with such a loving husband, or is he changed
so by the Oath? Again a brilliant ending using Morgoth's POV to send
a shiver up the reader's spine!

Title: The Elladan and Elrohir Factsheet · Author: tyellas · Genres:
Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 598
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-28 22:43:01 Score: 4
This is a very well done fact-sheet combining quotes and various
timeline and details about the twins. I have referred back to this
page, I can't say how many times. I especially appreciate how the
quotes and references are listed, then explained and discussed in a
casual, understandable and yet factual way, allowing the reader to
come to their own understanding of the passage. Well done, and thank
you for providing this.

Title: Hero · Author: Tiana Luthien · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette ·
ID: 594
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-28 22:52:11 Score: 5
I remember reading this last year and being impressed with the
reality of the scenes and the depth of the emotions. And thinking of
my own young sons. What a harsh time for all, but especially the
children. This boy does an awful lot of growing during their
converstation and in his thinking afterward. - he realizes the most
important lesson of all. Courage and hope in the face of fear. I
especially appreciate your excellent characterizations and that you
don't 'pull punchs' with the reality of the grimness of the
situatiion. Good Job!

Title: That Tall Fellow Next to Galadriel: a Short Essay About
Celeborn · Author: Marnie · Genres: Non-Fiction: Elves · ID: 479
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-28 23:01:01 Score: 4
Another excellent non-fiction, and about another one of my favorite
guys. Non-fiction can be difficult to read as it is often dry, not so
with Marnie's casual conversation style. She takes you on a personal
tour, a thought process and a love affair with one of the greatest
Elven lords of all time. Piece by piece proving to the reader excatly
what there is to love about the "Strong, Silent Type." Thanks again
for another great work.

Title: Cursed Queen of Angmar · Author: khazar_khum · Races/Places:
Villains: Nazgul · ID: 450
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-28 23:07:29 Score: 3
An excellent epic working pulling in details from all the Ages and
weaving them together to give us a love affair with the incrediable
Witch King himself. I especially enjoyed the characterization, the
pace and flow of the plotting and the balance of detail and flavor.

Title: Butterbur and the King · Author: Eledhwen · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Vignette · ID: 261
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 23:07:42 Score: 4
Eledhwen does a very good job in this piece of capturing Butterbur's
indomitable (if somewhat slow) spirit. His embarrassment over how he
treated Aragorn when he was Strider was particularly well-handled,
and I really liked the fact that Arwen could roll up her sleeves and
drink ale. Eledhwen also did a good jobof incorporating hints from
canon, such as the pronouncement that big folk couldn't travel to the
Shire and Gandalf's laying words on Butterbur's ale.

Title: Hero · Author: Tiana Luthien · Races/Places: Rohan: Vignette ·
ID: 594
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-28 23:13:28 Score: 3
I enjoyed seeing Ingild's realization that you're more heroic for
acting despite your fear. Tiana has written a lovely vignette of a
young boy coming to terms with his hero's faults, something we all
try to ignore or pretend we don't have. And Eomer realized that he
was being put on a pedestal, the same way he had idolized his heroes
too. Wonderfully done.

Title: Under Siege · Author: Forodwaith · Races/Places: Elves:
Drabble · ID: 387
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-28 23:25:05 Score: 8
You know, I have my own nuzgul about Arwen where she is tempted to
ride south with Halbarad and her brothers, not as a soldier but as a
healer. I haven't written it and don't have immediate plans to, but
this drabble makes me think about it (tricksy Forodwaith...) The
reason I bring this up is because I so cannot see Arwen as a warrior.
She just seems to be cut from a different cloth than someone like
Eowyn, at least in "Dernhelm" mode. I see Arwen as much more like
Lothiriel, or Finduilas.

But it's a testament to your skill as a writer that this is the one
story that sells me on the possibility of warrior-maiden!Arwen. It's
not so far-fetched as one might think; I think LACE suggests that
elven-maidens weren't so different from elven-men before they bore
children, and she does have Galadriel as an ancestress. but something
about this drabble... it's just so matter-of-fact, and Arwen seems at
home here. I do think that she might defend her home like this, if it
came to it. Very nicely done.

Title: Alas, Poor Ufthak! · Author: Elena Tiriel · Races/Places:
Villains: Drabble · ID: 200
Reviewer: Raksha the Demon · 2005-08-29 00:27:20 Score: 2
Poor old Ufthak! The implications are ghastly. A deft and skilful
snapshot of what passes for humor and friendship among the Orcs.

Title: Bitter as Willow · Author: Nickey · Races/Places: Villains ·
ID: 801
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-29 04:55:23 Score: 3
Very nice, I really liked the way in which you portrayed Old Man
Willow's connection to the trees around him. I loved the metaphors
used - very 'tree-like' if such a phrase can be used. I always think
it is one of the most difficult things to get inside the head of an
alien creature and you have done so very well here.

Title: Nothing in Haste · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: The Lord of
The Rings: Rivendell · ID: 407
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-29 07:06:58 Score: 10
This is another superb gap-filler from Gwynnyd in which she fleshes
out a few lines from "The Tale of Aragorn and Arwen" to give us
Elrond's reaction to news of Arwen's betrothal.

She begins by showing us the strain Elrond is under from the politics
of the age, and the responsibilities he bears as one of the leading
members of the resistance to Sauron. She makes clear to us the
personal loss and division in his family that this marriage will
bring -- and yet also shows us that Elrond understands love for a
spouse all too well. This allows her to drive the story neatly
through a number of twists and turns, and resolve it in a
satisfactory way.

We see Elrond in his role as politician, as he immediately begins to
plot alternative arrangements for Aragorn – yet Gwynnyd evokes pity
for him as we realise how unsuspecting he is. The moment of
revelation is beautifully handled: Arwen is giddy with love but
clearly aware of how painful this moment will be for her father, and
already trying to justify her choice before revealing it. The
metaphor of the boating incident conveys strongly Elrond's reaction.
And Gwynnyd shows us both Elrond's compassion in understanding his
daughter's desire, and how he must consider a wider picture beyond
the emotions of two people, and therefore reach the conditions he
imposes upon Aragorn.

As always in Gwynnyd's pieces, there is strong writing that evokes
the scenes she creates clearly, with elegant phrasing that
complements her idea and allows us to lose ourselves completely in an
entirely convincing world.

Title: Dragon of the North · Author: Gwynnyd · Races/Places: Gondor:
Pre-Quest Drabbles · ID: 395
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-29 08:24:56 Score: 5
Poor Denethor! How cruel Ecthelion's evident preference for Thorongil
must have seemed -- especially on his birthday! -- and how it must
have increasingly tortured Denethor over the subsequent years. No
wonder Sauron was eventually able to play so effectively on it. While
we perhaps see Denethor's pride get the better of him in his
decision, Gwynnyd also shows us his legitimate concerns about this
stranger. A wonderful drabble capturing the complexities of the
future Steward.

Title: Fell Deeds, Awake · Author: Marta · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 941
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-29 08:27:27 Score: 7
In this story, Marta does a great job of explaining why Gimli, of all
people, sounds the Horn of Helm Hammerhand. She shows us it's not
just due to his lack of ability as a horseman, but also the
inspiration he gains from Aragorn's leadership and Théoden's renewed
hope. While I don't really like the movie!characterisations, Marta
explains them well in this story. I particularly like her use of
canon events outside the movies to create a backstory for Gimli's
experiences in Erebor which she uses to give us, as readers, deeper
insight into the exchange between Théoden and Aragorn and to give us
strong reasons for Théoden's despair and lack of action. And her
closing lines expressing the joint endeavours of men, elves and
dwarves -- and their endurance in the face of so much reckless hate --
are deeply moving.

Title: Love Me and Despair · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Elves · ID: 645
Reviewer: quirky_orthodox · 2005-08-29 08:48:35 Score: 6
Massive congratulations to EdorasLass for being the first person to
pick up on the potential that a 'Galadriel takes the ring' A/U could
have. I love the clear way in which she differenciates all of the
victims of this disaster and explains how each is burdened by thier
own particular demon in consequence.It is truly brilliant how she has
managed, in so few words, to paint such a sombre and yet possible
picture of life for all the characters after Galadriel had committed
her break of faith.

Like the best of art, whether literary or visual, she leaves us
wanting to just peer a little harder around the hidden corners
implied by the narrative picture she paints. Great effort.

Title: Sugar and Spice · Author: Marta · Genres: Romance: Incomplete
· ID: 960
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-29 12:23:09 Score: 8
If I didn't already know this was Marta's first foray into erotica, I
would be highly -- and pleasantly -- surprised to learn that's the
case. She exhibits a very sure touch. I like several things about
this piece. The first thing I admire is that the foreplay between the
two characters seems distinctly "hobbiity" in nature, through the
relation of sexual pleasure to food, and the mention of foot hair.
This scene simply wouldn't work between any two random characters,
and I'm always delighted to encounter that kind of careful
specificity on the part of the author. A second area that delights me
is that this is an encounter between two mature characters, neither
of whom are portrayed as particularly attractive. Kudos to Marta for
writing a sexy fanfic scene doesn't just have to take place between
two "hot" characters. Finally, what shines through in this piece is
tenderness and deep-rooted desire, rather than simple lust. It may
not be to everyone's taste, but it impresses me.

Title: Captain of the Guard · Author: Arandil · Genres: Drama
(includes Angst): Mirkwood · ID: 119
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-29 13:02:32 Score: 7
This is a really interesting gap-filler about how things might have
gone in Mirkwood around the time of Gollum's captivity. Thranduil in
especially was particularly well-drawn: every inch a ruler, and every
inch a father, without the two being incompatible. I did love that
bit of temper I've come to expect in my Sindarin kings. (But then,
what less can I expect than a fabulous characterisation of him, from
the author of "Morgoth's Notebook"?)

But what I really liked was Legolas. He had an impatience that I
associate with youth, but it was definitely an Elvish impatience. So
he seemed anxious to do stuff without actually feeling like he had to
do it that minute. Does that soun inconsistent? That's my own lack of
eloquence, not Arandil's. Fans who are looking for a well-developed
glimpse into Mirkwood's first family (that goes beyond treating
father and son as lust objects and develops them as real characters)
won't be disappointed with this one.

Title: His Last Words · Author: Amarie · Books/Time: The Lord of The
Rings · ID: 85
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-29 16:45:24 Score: 5
Wow. Those letters were amazing to show the hold of the Ring and the
decline of Boromir. It fit to both book and movie, as the movie gave
image to what was in the book in terms of Boromir, like him slumped
in the boat, exhausted and anxious, as they pulled up to the shore. I
think my favorite bit was the last though, when he discovered what
he'd written and how far he'd fallen and warns his brother away from
the thing that was and would consume him. And in that we also see the
Boromir that would redeem himself, standing between Merry and Pippin
and the Uruk-Hai as long as he could. Very well done.


Title: Equinoxium · Author: Lisette · Genres: Crossovers · ID: 83
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-29 16:45:43 Score: 10
Perhaps Buffy survived more wounds than she should have (thinking of
the final ones there) but at least it did keep me from crying at
work. That aside, I really liked this crossover. It's perhaps the
most believable "girl gets dropped in Middle-Earth" stories because
the Buffy-verse does give us a method of transport and a reasonable
reason for doing so. And the story does keep you guessing now and
then as to just what Vashnak is or just how he got that way, or just
who that old man with the ability to appear and disappear was, or how
Buffy will survive this and that. And how Legolas will survive being
pinned to a tree by a sword. Yep. You read that right and it's not
easy, let me tell you. Lisette did a great job of reproducing the
angst of the Buffy-verse in it's final year and the wit and humor of
the dialogue when Buffy is transported to Middle-Earth. She worried
me a little that she'd build a Legolas/Buffy romance but I needn't
have worried. Yes, she forgot that Halbarad had died, but letting go
of that one slip of canon, she handled the rest quite well, and even
used some cleverness to decide where to put the bad guys' secret
lair. Quite clever, indeed. Things did get a bit expository when
Giles was visiting but otherwise the story was kept moving and active
and never boring. The visions, both Legolas's and Buffy's were quite
enigmatic and yet carried out quite well, except that perhaps
Legolas's got laid by the road side in the end. My favorite line, I
think, was when Buffy was gazing out at Rhosgobel and was finally
able to understand how someone could "see the quaint and quiet appeal
of the small town... if you were a blind Pilgrim with no sense of
smell." Very Buffy. Well done.

Title: Night Course in Pet Care · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor:
Animals · ID: 360
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-29 16:46:02 Score: 1
Cute story. Loved the cat. And his foreboding answer to the fell
beast that no man could slay her….No man, indeed.


Title: One Day in Ithilien · Author: jen_loves_elves · Books/Time:
Post-Ring War · ID: 744
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-29 16:46:35 Score: 3
I think I read this one before, but enjoyed it again. How could I
not? It has Legolas being cute and kitty cats (big, big kitty cats
and one big kitten/cub…) and cute children, a frustrated Faramir who
in the end is won over and a really mad Eowyn who is, too. Cute is
just the right word for the whole story.


Title: To Look Upon It Once · Author: Noldo · Books/Time: The
Silmarillion · ID: 1023
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-29 17:16:56 Score: 2
Would it be worth it? To see those quays and white towers, the
glittering beaches strewn with gems? If it meant your last breath?
maybe. I think it might be.

Title: The Doom of Mandos · Author: quirky_orthodox · Books/Time: The
Lord of The Rings: Incomplete · ID: 1043
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-29 17:28:13 Score: 2
... an interesting question, with a multitude of answers, that
intriguing 'what if?' A Dark Queen indeed. I'll be interested to see
how this work progresses as chapters are added.

Title: Foresight · Author: quirky_orthodox · Genres: Movie-verse:
Vignette · ID: 1044
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-29 17:29:31 Score: 2

another alliance of Men and Elves, one of the few of Jackson's
changes that I agreed with. Well done, Quirky, to show us this
glimpse of one who was willing to die for the sake of others.

Title: Ode to Legolas · Author: Ainaechoiriel · Genres: Humor: Poetry
· ID: 5
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-29 17:32:30 Score: 1
So very true, - funny and totally irreverent! I love it!

Title: Uncover the Past, Discover the Future · Author: Starlight ·
Races/Places: Cross-Cultural: Vignette · ID: 524
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-29 19:53:16 Score: 3
This is a very nice story about the early days of Legolas's and
Gimli's relationship. I particularly liked the physical details about
the Book of Mazarbul, and the insight that shared experience in both
of their cultures would give them a foundation for friendship.

**end**

Msg# 5289

8/30/05 Final Reviews Posted by sulriel August 30, 2005 - 20:35:15 Topic ID# 5289
15 Final reviews today - many thanks to those reviews for keeping us
going. Sulriel.

**

Title: Anticipation · Author: LOTR_lover · Genres: Humor: Elves · ID:
1092
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-30 00:49:28 Score: 2

Oh, this was cute! Combining many cliches with slash and het, and non-
romantic elements as well... well, I can see why Glorfindel was so
frustrated. Very clever idea.

Title: Cold Memories · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 82
Reviewer: Tanaqui · 2005-08-30 11:52:11 Score: 7
This piece is a charming portrait of Gondor's first family, yet one
which never descends to mawkishness or becomes sickly, thanks to
AmandaK's skilled handling of the material. Faramir's wonder at the
strangeness of snow and his distraction by small details are well
drawn, while Boromir displays the right mix of teasing and concern
for his younger brother. What I like most in her characterisation is
the way AmandaK gives both brothers a mischievous -- but not
malicious -- nature: she does not slip into the common fanfic
conventions of making young Faramir too serious or Boromir too
boyish.

And I, too, held my breath when the snowball hit Denethor… and was
delighted when AmandaK pulled off the rare trick of showing us
Denethor as a loving and considerate father without downplaying his
stern nature, grief or dedication to duty. I am not surprised this
memory kept a special place in Faramir's heart in years to come.

Title: Fear no more · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 970
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-30 15:31:09 Score: 2
This is a nice bittersweet vignette. An original way to convey a
message to Aragorn and Arwen by way of Faramir's dreams. I love the
imagery of the dream with the birds.


Title: Greenery · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 14
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-30 15:41:03 Score: 3
This is a lovely little scene. I can see Arwen being wistful to
escape the protocoll at court and finding refuge in one of the few
green places Minas Tirith has. Teaching someone herblore and not
being recognized as the queen immediately is an added bonus.

Title: Dawn · Author: Acacea · Books/Time: Post-Ring War: Gondor ·
ID: 251
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-30 15:51:25 Score: 3
I never really thought about Faramir's mood when he rode to his last
battle to retake Osgliath. That maybe his father's parting words may
have contributed to him nearly not coming back. Having Eowyn now
makes all the different for his will to survive a battle. Good
insight into Faramir's psyche.

Title: Not to Beg Any Boon · Author: Flick · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 859
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:21:27 Score: 4
Great story! I enjoyed the way it filled out Boromir's journey from
Gondor to Imladris. Very good gapfiller. And nice characterization,
too. The OCs were full characters in their own right, capable of
standing beside Boromir without being overshadowed, and I love the
quirks each one was given. Boromir himself was well done, and the
narrative had a nice, brisk pace to it that never felt rushed. All
around, very good writing.

Title: Tides of Time · Author: Werecat · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Post-LOTR · ID: 368
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:22:12 Score: 4
I like the uniting of Tolkien's world to the Arthurian legend. I'm a
big fan of both, and this was done simply and believably, with
Gandalf serving as an instrument of both. There was a very distant
quality to this story, too, as if these were legends that really
couldn't be touched. It made them seem a bit more mystical, and I
really liked that. They felt as though they were both remnants of an
older world. Beautiful imagery and a very light touch in the writing.
Well done.

Title: Mind to Mind · Author: Shirebound · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Post-LOTR · ID: 894
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:23:13 Score: 4
Definitately an innovative and imaginative take on the journey back
home. I'd often wondered what would happen if Frodo ever tried to
sense the thoughts of the Three, and it seemed to come in useful,
here. Also useful was the bond between Elladan and Elrohir, and I
liked the expansion of Saruman's Ring-obsession to include forging a
One Ring of his own. Good build on elements already within Tolkien,
and good tension in the dramatic parts.

Title: When All Lights Pass · Author: Werecat · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Pre-LOTR · ID: 349
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:24:31 Score: 4
I really enjoyed this story. It's a trifle unusual, but kudos
certainly for putting Radagast to good work. He found a solution
where Gandalf was stymied, and that made me grin. And bonus points
for spotting the loophole in the King's Foil rhyme. Tricky bit of
writing! And the descriptions of the animals was very well done. I
could see the cat on the boy's chest, and I could hear his purrs.

Title: Quarantined · Author: Shirebound · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Pre-LOTR · ID: 877
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:25:40 Score: 5
Aragorn meeting Frodo early on would have certainly simplified things
later, and I liked the new developments because of their early
encounter. But strangely enough, the things I liked best about this
story were the asides and the throw-away remarks rather than the main
plot. Such as the fact that Gandalf's conjuring reputation suffered
when it turned out that he hadn't spirited Frodo away. The little
remarks like that were really entertaining, and I enjoyed them
immensely.

Title: Mary Mordor Sue · Author: Meg Thornton · Genres: Alternate
Universe · ID: 7
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:28:51 Score: 6
Brilliant and twisted. When I first read this, I spent half the story
trying to figure out who she was talking to before I finally settled
down and just enjoyed it. Fitting that it would turn out to be who it
was. And wonderful twist at the end, too. I didn't see it coming, no
matter how many hints were thrown, and I think it's deliciously evil.
As for the narrative, the rambling nature was wholly appropriate and
lent credence to her claims of insanity. I laughed hard at the idea
of a dungeon filled with Legolas Lusters, but one of the best moments
in the entire story (to me, anyway) was the shout-out to the Evil
Overlord website, which has to be one of my favorite websites of all
time. If Sauron had discovered that, LotR would certainly have ended
very differently. As can be seen here.

Title: The Care and Feeding of Young Hobbits · Author: James
Walkswithwind · Genres: Alternate Universe · ID: 1252
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:35:07 Score: 7
I have no idea what I was expecting when I read this story, but that
certainly was not it! What an absolutely brilliant twist on the lines
between Merry and Pippin in the movies! Really, this is sheer genius.
I keep thinking back to the moment in the books when Butterbur warns
Frodo about taking up with a Ranger, and I now wonder if he shouldn't
have reversed it and warned the Ranger about taking up with Frodo!
Poor Aragorn. And poor hobbits. So they were on their third guide? At
this rate, they'll never get to Rivendell. I think my favorite part
of this story was the end where Frodo lays down the law about their
fourth guide. He says it so matter-of-factly, but the concept is so
absurd that I was clutching my sides laughing at it. Very, very good
concept. I loved it! Highly original, and brilliantly hilarious.

Title: Love Me and Despair · Author: EdorasLass · Genres: Alternate
Universe: Elves · ID: 645
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:43:39 Score: 8
The first thing I thought of when reading this story was Galadriel's
line from the books as she considers taking the Ring: "Beautiful and
terrible as the Morning and the Night." And the section with Merry
and Pippin seemed to really emphasize this because they appeared to
be caught in the between both sides. At night, they saw (or at least
wondered about) the beauty, but in the morning, they saw the terror.
And leave it to hobbits to be able to recognize both. Everyone else
seemed to be caught in one extreme or the other.

And kudos for a very creepy portrayal of events, too. The story began
with an almost mystical and dreamlike quality. Then we hit Legolas's
section, and after that, the dream became a nightmare which was made
worse by the flashes of happier visions that were clearly tainted.
Wonderful mood pacing. The contrasts played off one another
beautifully. I wonder if the last part wasn't a bit too extreme, but
considering the build and Galadriel's latent power, I can see it
happening. Well done.

Title: Triumvirate · Author: Scribe · Genres: Alternate Universe:
Post-LOTR · ID: 114
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 18:49:43 Score: 10
It's so difficult to write a believable modern-day LotR story, and
because of this, I have to grovel before Scribe's skill. Her series
of modern-day adventures in which Tolkien's characters merge with the
events of today are amazing, and "Triumvirate" is probably my
favorite out of the bunch. This is a stunning, fantastic story,
packed with almost anything you could ever want from a piece of
fiction: humor, action, suspense, drama, mystery, horror, surprise,
twists, etc. It's a brilliant build on her previous story, "The
Patient," only this time we get to add one of my favorite Fellowship
members: Boromir. Well, Bryan, but he's definitely got Boromir's
personality. And we add Frodo, too, whom I adore in this story. I
also love that Scribe never forgets just how foreign the modern world
is to the elves, and just how foreign they are to it. Aaron and Eve
serve as wonderful go-betweens, and I love the occasionally managled
attempts of both Haldir and Legolas to understand what they're
facing. The plot itself is a fantastic ride, never once letting up as
things start rolling, and the final showdown with Saeron as Bryan
finally redeems Boromir is brilliant. I love the surprises, I love
the twists, and I love the writing. Quite possibly my favorite modern-
day LotR story, it also comes in near the top of my list of favorite
stories altogether, both published and fanfiction.

Title: Just in Case · Author: Marnie · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID:
477
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-30 19:07:07 Score: 7
As I've told Marnie in the past, I'm definitely a fan of Ring War-era
stuff. Anything from the quest for Erebor to the early Fourth Age is
fair game, but stories about the First Age and so on are a little out
of my comfort zone. Nevertheless, Marnie is a first-class writer so
whenever I see a piece by her that I think I have enough background
to follow, I always read. So I was a bit surprised by the flashback
to Doriath here. But that was fine -- Marnie spinned a yarn that even
I could follow. the things that tempted Celeborn seemed so well
thought-out, just the sort of vision he might be tempted of. In fact,
it reminded me of Sam's vision at Cirith Ungol. (Fitting, given the
parallels she drew between the two of them in another of her
stories.) And that was a chilling thought, that there were
marchwardens ready to attack Galadriel or Celeborn if need be.

**end**

Msg# 5290

8/31/05 Final Reviews Posted by sulriel August 31, 2005 - 21:04:01 Topic ID# 5290
85 Final Reviews today! Great job!


Title: Faithful Star · Author: Tiana Luthien · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War: Gondor · ID: 593
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-30 20:55:48 Score: 5
Engaging dialogue and lovely descriptions raises this tale far above
the usual crop of Father-in-waiting tales. The humorous banter
between Faramir and Eomer, as they both impatiently await the birth
of the Steward's heir, is well written and shows the depth of
friendship between the two. Cameo appearances by Queen Arwen and
Ioreth the Midwife are pleasant surprises which add a nice touch of
realism to the birthing room. Faramir's delight in his newborn son is
touching and very lovely.

Title: Sight · Author: Aeneid · Races/Places: Gondor: Original
Characters · ID: 374
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-30 20:57:44 Score: 9
A mundane scene: a chilly evening, bedtime, an invalid and his
attendant.
That the invalid is our own beloved Boromir, and that his attendant
is a forthright young woman, quickly lift this tale far beyond
anything else we've encountered in the fandom.

This is most definitely an AU Boromir, (inspired by
PlasticChevy's "The Captain and the King") where he not only lives
but suffers blindness, helplessness, insecurity. Aeneid's marvelous
characterization skills (for Aeneid lives and breathes Boromir in any
and all possible moods) bring this unfamiliar Steward glowingly to
life. The writing is gorgeously atmospheric– every detail, every
phrase carefully crafted to create a hushed, expectant, mood . The
love scene – for that is the purpose of this tale, to fill in a
rather large gap left by the original author – is breathtakingly
beautiful, exquisitely understated, and so, satisfyingly erotic.
"He used his hands to see, running them over her, feeling every
curve, while she guided him, so that his kisses were slow and
meaningful and sometimes clumsy…"
Who wouldn't want to be Gilthaethil? And who, reading this, wouldn't
bless Aeneid for making it all so wonderfully real?


Title: Fear no more · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gap-Filler · ID: 970
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-30 20:58:32 Score: 6
There is a misty, dreamlike quality to the tale from beginning to
end. Faramir's remembrance of his last dream of his mother melds
seamlessly with the arrival of King Elessar and Queen Arwen, figures
from the long dreaming of Gondor's history finally brought to
fruition in the Fourth Age. All the details of the meeting – the
autumn garden, the crystal goblets, the waiting pavilion are
described lushly, a treat for the senses.

Faramir's recounting of his most recent dream, and Arwen's immediate
recognition of its meaning, is gently and tenderly described, much
like the actions within the dream itself. How very imaginative of
Cuthalion to envision such a scene, and to present it to us so
perfectly!


Title: Shield and Standard · Author: Dwimordene · Books/Time: Post-
Ring War: Gondor Drabble · ID: 695
Reviewer: annmarwalk · 2005-08-30 20:59:09 Score: 3
Very ingenious! I'd not ever thought of what the first meeting
between these two would be like. Aragorn's nervousness adds a very
human dimension. The metaphors of shield and standard are very apt
for these two women and the manner in which each one served her king.

Title: The Clasp Undone · Author: DragonLady7 · Races/Places: Rohan ·
ID: 691
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-30 21:16:48 Score: 2
The language was a bit modern at places in this piece, but I still
liked this one. It really fleshed out some emotionally powerful
material.

Title: Charity · Author: Dwimordene · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble
· ID: 234
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-30 21:34:53 Score: 3
This is a nice snapshot into the thoughts of Aragorn relating to his
kinsman and the one he didn't personally know well (at least not for
years), but who had served him in much the same way. Nice reflection
on the merits of fire, and on the value of limiting one's thoughts to
the here and now.

Title: Mae Govannen · Author: Azalais · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 148
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:37:38 Score: 2
Good emotion in this drabble. Aragorn's relief is easy to feel and is
conveyed well. I love that this drabble spans the course of several
days but doesn't make it feel forced. It's just one long spell of
relief. Nicely written.

Title: Boys to Men · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 286
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:39:12 Score: 4
Beregond learns a hard lesson about boys and the fact that they grow
up. I liked the idea that the transition to manhood is a change that
is never truly seen until after it happens, and then we see only the
results. Definitely a bittersweet moment, and I liked the fact that
this drabble couldn't seem to decide whether it was happy or sad.
Proud, definitely, but the rest still seemed to be up in the air.
Given the context, I found that to be very appropriate.

Title: The Test · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 385
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:39:32 Score: 4
I've always wondered who transferred the Ring from Frodo's pocket to
a necklace around his neck. This was a great answer to that, as well
as a wonderful way of showing that Boromir, Gandalf, and Galadriel
were not the only ones to be tempted by the Ring. The temptation
itself was handled very well, and Arwen's wisdom was certainly
evident in her refusal. Good characterization.

Title: Going to Rohan · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 401
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:40:08 Score: 4
For as dire as the circumstances surrounding this drabble were, the
drabble itself contains quite a bit of humor. I liked Roheryn's
teasing, and I liked his almost immediate compliance when it became
apparent that Aragorn needed him. Nice characterization of a horse. I
can see Aragorn riding a horse like this: one who has a bit of a
rebellious streak but will never fail in any duty he is given. Sounds
very much like a Ranger, actually.

Title: Ties That Bind · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 457
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:41:03 Score: 2
I very much appreciated the line "He was not supposed to fall." That
sounds like something an elf would say in response to Gandalf's
apparent demise. Good emotions and good pause in the action as the
Fellowship tries to get to Lothlorien.

Title: At the Witch King's Feet · Author: Lindelea · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 459
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:41:26 Score: 3
Sometimes the best way to express confused and disoriented thoughts
are to put them into drabble form. The short format is a very good
place for quick, abrupt, and even jarring narratives. Or streams of
consciousness, either one. And it works very well for Merry here as
he struggles to help Eowyn. Nice choice of form, and nice use of it,
too.

Title: Before the Call to Muster · Author: Lindelea · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 461
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:42:25 Score: 4
I felt something very bittersweet in this drabble, which is great
because I love bittersweet. I really liked Pippin's thoughts about a
new, strange Merry who kept falling silent, and I loved even more the
thoughts that Merry never shared. All he says is "thank you" but he's
feeling as though something is lost or being lost. How like a hobbit
to keep those things to himself, though. Even to hide them from
Pippin.

Title: No Rival · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble ·
ID: 544
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:43:09 Score: 4
What I liked most about this drabble series is how the different
perspectives were worded. Eowyn talks about politics and challenges
and epic dreams. Arwen, in sharp contrast, talks about long years and
makes observations using the imagery of plants and flowers. The two
personalities are very different, and I like how they see both
differences and similarities in the other.

Title: Devil of Kindness · Author: Nancy Brooke · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 685
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:44:05 Score: 4
The idea that Gandalf is not a student of light but of darkness is a
fairly profound one, and I like the way it was explored in this
drabble. There's not a lot of room in drabbles for exploration, but
this one made the most of it and pulled it off well. I like the
ending where Gandalf is lulled by Saruman's whispers, which seem to
come from the light, and I like the phrase in the beginning where he
claims to know the name of each shadow. Good stuff.

Title: A Step in The Dark · Author: SilverMoonLady · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 1221
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:44:39 Score: 4
Great missing moment from Moria. I've been in places that are so dark
you can't see your way, and that one moment of hesitation can make a
world of difference. I love the way it was described here, and I love
the very gentle way in which Merry was drawn back from it. Legolas
was wise not to startle him. But most of all, I love the descriptions
of dark chasms, and how the light ahead only seemed to make them
darker. That's a great way to describe Moria!

Title: Bed Time, Part 2 · Author: Blackbirdsong · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drabble · ID: 1248
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:45:39 Score: 3
I enjoyed what all the different hobbits were dreaming off. It seemed
to be very indicative of their personalities. And I liked the fact
that they all seemed to be doing something that they felt to be more
important than bed. Well, most of them, anyway. It shows their
determination, something they'll all need later on. Good writing.

Title: In Bree · Author: Rabidsamfan · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 1345
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:46:27 Score: 4
I really liked this. Merry seemed to be the one with the clearest
memory of his time spent beneath the influence of the Wight (with the
exception of Frodo) and also the one who put the blade from the
Barrow to the best use. It's interesting to think that even that
early on, he might have been affected by a growing shadow. It
certainly caught hold of him later in the books. Perhaps it found its
roots here. Great idea, and great exploration of an intriguing
possibility.

Title: Master of the House · Author: Vistula the Dunadan ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble · ID: 639
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:49:35 Score: 5
This was a great treat. Sam's devotion to Frodo is one of my favorite
things about the books, and I love the way that Sam is willing to
defy even Elrond as he insists upon waiting by Frodo's side.
Secretly, of course. Or so he thinks. But what I love most of all is
the fact that Elrond is standing in the corner and understands why
Sam has returned. There's a lot to be said about Sam in this little
drabble, but there's almost as much to be said about Elrond,
especially knowing his past and all that has happened to him. Well
written!

Title: Charity · Author: Dwimordene · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble
· ID: 234
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-30 23:54:39 Score: 5
There was one line from this drabble that really caught my
attention: "Men not yet corpses have their needs." I loved that. So
much of death seems to be about servicing or comforting the living,
and it's good to see Aragorn acknowledge that. But of course Aragorn
wouldn't be Aragorn if he didn't acknowledge everything else, and I
like his observations on stewardship. I also like the comparison to
the wind and dust, and the phrase "indifferent-generous" seemed very
appropriate.

Title: Second Watch · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 410
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 00:01:58 Score: 6
Wow. I'm often amazed at how much impact a well-written drabble can
have, and this one took me very much by surprise. I think it was the
timing more than anything. Pippin's little diatribe was expected, but
what wasn't quite as expected was Boromir's three-word response. It
made the words about a father's plea to stay seem that much more
profound. They have a completely different meaning and impact coming
from Boromir's direction than they do coming from Pippin's. And
turing Boromir's answer into the final words of the drabble was an
inspired move. They leave you hanging, which forces you to imagine
everything that Boromir could mean.

Title: Beyond the Door · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 283
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 00:09:04 Score: 5
I really liked Halbarad's description of Aragorn as "my comfort and
my doom." He's following Aragorn even though he knows it will lead to
his death, and I think that requires an unusual man who would be able
to entertain seemingly contradictory thoughts. There's a very quiet
feel to this drabble, almost one of resignation. But it's not a
despairing resignation, and therein lies a rather profound
characterization stroke in Halbarad's favor. He can see a bigger
picture beyond the door. Truly a remarkable man. Nice drabble.

Title: The Machine That Changed the World · Author: Altariel ·
Genres: Drama (includes Angst): Fourth Age · ID: 80
Reviewer: Ainaechoiriel · 2005-08-31 00:33:32 Score: 3
Ah, so that's what the machine was! I'd been wondering. And very
fitting it is. Is it not the Guttenburg press which changed our
world? And, more personally, in some ways, our lives as writers? A
well-written story capturing both the magical allure of this new
thing but also the inherent danger in it. One that is worth the good,
I think.


Title: Enmities · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Villains: Orcs ·
ID: 561
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 00:47:37 Score: 4
Very well done! You have managed to turn this orc mother into a real
person for whom the reader feels sympathy - even going so far at to
hope for the survival of her and her cubs. Until, that is, you
remember the savagery of the orcs. I am glad that the warrior held
his hand - but cannot imagine that he either left the cubs to starve
or raised them, so suspect he must have culled them. A good twist.

Title: Cold Memories · Author: AmandaK · Races/Places: Gondor:
Vignette · ID: 82
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 00:53:53 Score: 4
I love big brother Boromir. Faramir's admiration must have been so
good for him, not to mention developing his huge sense of
responsibility. And it is so good to see Denethor acting as a father -
even if a slightly scary, we-do-have-to-be-careful-what-we-say
father. A jewel of a memory for Faramir - sparkling, clean and pure,
like the sun on the snow. Very effective.

Title: More like to the swift sons of Eorl · Author: Tanaqui ·
Races/Places: Men: Drabble · ID: 1377
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-31 03:24:51 Score: 5
This is such a beautiful example of word-pictures, Liz! Expressions
like "sparks wheeled upwards" and "blade wrought skilful havoc" give
me such vivid mental pictures that I can hear the wood-sap snapping
in the fire, and see piles of decapitated orcs.

And, of course, sparks are vivid but not as long-lived as you would
wish them to be... a fitting description of both Boromir and
Théodred, which you play up in the phrase "brightest and best". This
is truly lovely, Liz! I like the fact that Éomer had a chance to see
these kindred spirits in action together.


Title: Sea lover · Author: Tanaqui · Races/Places: Cross-Cultural:
Drabble · ID: 1378
Reviewer: Elena Tiriel · 2005-08-31 03:40:08 Score: 4
You know, I never thought of why Eärendil was named that, when he was
born in Gondolin, far from the sea.... I guess mothers aren't the
only ones who can have insight in the naming of their children.

You capture Eärendil's excitement beautifully here, and Tuor's at-
homeness with the sea. I especially like the line "my great, golden-
haired love, hair bleached silver by salt spray"; that seems to
capture Tuor perfectly. Nice job, Liz!


Title: A Very Dark, Very Wet, and Very Miserable Morning · Author:
Thundera Tiger · Genres: Humor · ID: 592
Reviewer: Werecat · 2005-08-31 04:18:26 Score: 3
This was such a joy to read! Being a HUGE fan of Mouth of Sauron, I
always enjoy reading stories on this minor character, regardless of
genre. And I found this to be a real treat, imaginative and witty.
Sea gulls as torture devices... I still laugh about that. Thank you,
Thundera, for this gem of a story.

Title: Meetings · Author: Elendiari22 · Races/Places: Hobbits: War of
the Ring · ID: 798
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 07:21:37 Score: 3
I do like twisted time-line meetings - and Frodo encountering Faramir
is a lovely example of two people who ought to get the chance to
meet. I love it that Faramir is so impressed by the apple - and that
Frodo is too sleepy to be disbelieving. That, and possibly his grasp
on reality is weakening. Good story.


Title: Chicken or the Egg? · Author: Gershwhen · Races/Places: Cross-
Cultural: Humor · ID: 1220
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 07:27:43 Score: 3
Pippin would be wide-eyed over that, now, wouldn't he? And, unlike
most people with senses of self-preservation, wouldn't hesitate to
ask an elf just how it is that elven parents happen to know to the
very minute . . . But I suspect Pippin's curiosity was rather less
irritating to the elf than Gimli's amusement. A very entertaining
tale.

Title: Kali's Rory · Author: GTA Otaku · Genres: Drama (includes
Angst): The Shire · ID: 1224
Reviewer: Bodkin · 2005-08-31 07:39:44 Score: 3
What a sad tale. The loss of a baby brother or sister affects a child
so profoundly. It's no wonder that Merry tended so carefully to his
baby cousin when he came to take up some of the space in Merry's
heart. And Frodo shows again his depth of understanding of loss and
sorrow. Very touching.

Title: The Shadow Within · Author: Arandil · Books/Time: Post-Ring
War · ID: 122
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-31 11:09:21 Score: 1
This is an interesting reversal of the curse of mortality. Why
shouldn't elves feel the other side of the coin?

Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 702
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:16:42 Score: 6
Oh, this was beautifully, masterfully told. I have a real thing for
gapfillers that enrich Tolkien's world, and for stories that use
unique devices (such as this one, which told the story without
resorting to sight. And since I wrote a drabble not too long ago
about Glorfindel searching for the hobbits, this corner of canon has
had a special part in my heart. You did it justice in every part of
the word. I had never thought how Frodo, with his sense of sight
deadened by slipping into the wraiths' world, would be more attuned
to hearing and so particularly affected by the arrival of Glorfindel
with all his bells. Thank you so much for a very illuminating read.

Title: The Test · Author: Forodwaith · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 385
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:18:01 Score: 6
Another lovely piece exploring a character being tempted by the Ring
besides the ones we see in canon. You know, someone wise once said
that character is how we behave when we think no one is watching us.
Forodwaith doesn't explicitly say that Arwen and Frodo are alone (who
has room, in just a hundred words), but when I read this one I
imagine that they were. If we assume Arwen was trained in the healing
arts (which this drabble implies) I think they might have had some
moments alone. And the fact that she passed on the opportunity to
take away HIS jewellery makes the giving of the Evenstar at the end
of Return of the King (book) even more poignant.

Title: Ties That Bind · Author: LadyAranel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 457
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:18:22 Score: 4
"I feel my heart too heavy for my heart to bear it hence." That has
to be one of the most poignant turns of phrases I've come across in a
long time. Especially when said in the voice no longer lilting (as
Lady A. aptly describes it), it gets to the heart of grief. But the
fact that Legolas knew he had to go on, for others' sakes... very
like a warrior who would have to endure until the end of time. Well
done.

Title: No Rival · Author: Tanaqui · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drabble ·
ID: 544
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:18:50 Score: 10
I think my favourite thing about this pair of drabbles is that Arwen
sees something in Eowyn that Eowyn can't seem to see in herself.
Arwen sees those things that might have attracted Aragorn to her, and
I think her perceptions are keen: Eowyn does have a beauty and a
ferocity, though I think her qualities really are better suited to
Faramir. But it was touching that Arwen saw her as havving the
potential to rival the famed evenstar, not a lesser. I think in later
years this will translate into respect and hopefully form the
backdrop for a deep friendship as the two wild ladies from the north
tame their Gondorian counterparts. (Not that I'm trying to nuzgul you
on that idea, absolutely not...)

I do have to disagree with Eowyn,, though. She says she looked only
for an honourable way out of Rohan, but I don't think that's entirely
true. We don't really get into her head that much in canon, but if
her brother Eomer is any judge I think there would have been a
measure of love between them. The problem is of course that it's the
wrong kind of love, and I can't blame Eowyn for the mistake. She had
to keep herself pretty well locked off, hiding behind a wall of ice
as it were, when Grima was so obviously interested in her. As his
power grew I think Eowyn wouldn't have had very many other suitors,
and those she did have she probably would have suspected alterior
motives. So Aragorn comes in, respected by everyone from Hama to
Theoden himself, and pretty much wipes her off her feet without even
meaning to.

But I digress. I can see Eowyn as being embarrassed by her love of
Aragorn and wanting to write it off as that, perhaps even convincing
herself. Really, these were very insightful drabbles.

Title: Blossoms · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
General Drabble · ID: 287
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:19:08 Score: 3
Oh, what a lovely idea that Legolas would see it not just in Arwen's
eyes but also in Aragorn's. That speaks of an Aragorn very much in
love with Arwen (and involved in her life), which is a notion that I
really like. Such a beautiful drabble, Erin.

Title: Changes · Author: Dwimordene · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-
Ring War Drabble · ID: 231
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:19:31 Score: 2
This is an interesting glimpse at the things that are changing after
the Ring War, and the things that aren't. Without a little smidgen of
angst it wouldn't be Dwim, but there's a happy ending -- fitting,
really.

Title: The Mirror of Angelica · Author: Salsify · Races/Places:
Hobbits: War of the Ring · ID: 997
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:20:14 Score: 7
In "Angelica's Mirror", Salsify takes an almost off-hand statement
from "A Long-Expected Party", and explores its full implications in
the years to come. This is the story of a hobbit reformed in a way.
She still has the hints of the vain tweenager who received Bilbo's
gift and she's royally embarrassed of the thought that
Aldo's "infidelities" might cause more gossip to be attached to her
name, but the sparring she's received over her vanity has become a
sense of pride for her. She uses this first when Largo stops by the
sewing circle to hide her emotions and change the subject, and then
later when she must hide the real truth from the shirriffs and
Lotho's men. With all the richness I have come to expect from
Salsify's stories, this is a story that any lover of gap-fillers,
minor/original charactors, and/or hobbits won't want to mix.

Title: Namesake · Author: Elana · Races/Places: Hobbits: Post-Ring
War Drabble · ID: 301
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 13:20:58 Score: 5
What a sad thought! I can imagine calling the name Frodo would be a
painful reminder, especially in those earlier days when memories of
the old outweighed memories of the new. But Sam's right: there really
wasn't any other name. And I think after Sam had made the decision to
call his firstgborn son Frodo (before Frodo Baggins sailed West), to
name his son anything else would have also hurt, because every time
Sam said the new name he'd think about why he *didn't* name him
Frodo. Interesting investigation of a topic I hadn't thought about
before.

Title: The Eagle Silmarillion · Author: Tehta · Genres: Humor:
Animals · ID: 554
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-31 13:46:20 Score: 4
I've often wondered why there aren't more stories told from the
Eagles' POV. And I love this humorous spin on the meeting between
Glorfindel and Thorondor -- oops, got there a little late, sorry
about that but gravity is a bit tricky now. And staying in character
to look at some of the other events of the Silm. Especially equating
Morgoth to a magpie in search of 'shiny things.' Well done.

Title: Ailurophobia · Author: Werecat · Genres: Humor: Animals · ID:
115
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-31 14:05:45 Score: 5
This is a hilarious extrapolation of what might have happened to the
Prince of Cats that Tolkien mentions in the Lost Tales. And the
author must have cats to realize how they would bow to no one, not
even Melkor. I love the idea of a Valar having allergies, and his
absolute horror at the cats' manners. I was chuckling when he found
the cat on his pillow, and at the idea that they were eating the
dragon eggs. But I think the clincher was finding them enjoying
themselves on the throne. The true icing on the cake. As they say,
dogs drool but cats rule!

Title: Alterations · Author: Eledhwen · Books/Time: Post-Ring War:
Gondor · ID: 260
Reviewer: obsidianj · 2005-08-31 14:13:16 Score: 3
This is a delightful series of scenes in post-war Minas-Tirith. All
the scenes are true to character. The hobbits sound very like the
hobbits I came to love by reading the books. I like Imrahil
recognizing Aragorn and in turn Aragorn's talk with Faramir best.

Title: The Eagle Silmarillion · Author: Tehta · Genres: Humor:
Animals · ID: 554
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-31 14:14:24 Score: 3
The number of great lines and thoughts in this piece tempt me to
misuse the quoting rule, and since I can't pick just one, I'll give
an overall thumbs up for a fabulous job with the humorous mis-use of
a majestic character. Great job with the pacing and in working the
deep thoughts and profound truths in with and between the ironys.

Title: One Word · Author: Joan Milligan · Races/Places: Elves: First
Age · ID: 1081
Reviewer: sulriel · 2005-08-31 14:27:31 Score: 3
Very powerful. In a world of verbal tradition, only things spoken are
remembered through the generations. I've heard a lot of people talk
about how silly and petty Thingol's decree was, but in truth, it
would eventually have killed the memory of the glory of the Noldor.

Title: Cursed Queen of Angmar · Author: khazar_khum · Races/Places:
Villains: Nazgul · ID: 450
Reviewer: Leaward · 2005-08-31 14:33:01 Score: 6
This is an amazing story that makes you care about the Witch King --
Khazar-khum manages to instill her characters with qualities that
make you realize what must have happened to have ensnared a
Numenorean King into becoming Sauron's slave by the use of the ring.
It is a wonderfully written and interesting look into what went on in
Angmar, and his justifications for what he did, and how he lived. The
characterizations of the other realms of Cardolan and Rhudaur give an
interesting insight to how Arnor fell from the great land it was to a
wandering band of Dunedain. It's on my list of all-time favourites.
Well told, Khazar-khum!

Title: The Battle of Bywater · Author: Lulleny · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 1093
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 14:47:20 Score: 1
An interesting look into the thoughts and actions of the four habbits
before and during the Battle of Bywater.

Title: Olorin I Was, Olorin I Am · Author: Arquen · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 137
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:38:33 Score: 4
I love the way light and dark were used to herald each new stage in
this journey. And a fascinating journey it was, too. There was a very
timeless, mystical quality to Olorin's visit with the Valar, and
having once again been in their presence, I can easily imagine that
it would take time to readjust. Nice narration throughout, and I
loved the way that Manwe and Varda are portrayed, as well as all the
music.

Title: Long Leagues for Little Legs · Author: Fadagaski · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler · ID: 628
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:39:22 Score: 4
Samwise can be shrewd when he needs to be. And as the one looking out
for Mr. Frodo, I appreciate the fact that it was Sam who so
nonchalantly confronted Boromir about the matter one night. He's very
sensible about it, too, which is what I would expect from Sam. He
acknowledges that the hobbits might not be used to this, but he asks
for a little faith and patience in the meantime. Nice conversation to
set things right.

Title: Something to Do before the End · Author: Lindelea ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 753
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:40:34 Score: 4
This vignette took me by surprise. I have to admit that I didn't
predict the identity of the Captain until Pippin named him. And the
whole concept behind this is inspired. I really loved the idea of
Boromir sticking around to watch over the City while it was still
struggling. That's something he would definitely do, and I loved the
way he thanked Pippin and Beregond both for their role in helping
Faramir. Very imaginative moment, but I think it fits well into canon.

Title: Pippin the Troll Slayer · Author: Auntiemeesh · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler · ID: 832
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:41:58 Score: 6
This was a great fleshing out of the events that were hinted at in
the books. I loved the added details of Gimli skipping out on sleep
and rest to watch over Pippin, and then there was Legolas and Eomer
conferring over what his health might be. I also loved how naturally
Aragorn's healing abilities were described by simple statements. For
example, when he was telling Gandalf that the thoughts he could touch
were confused. It's said so matter-of-factly, but it's quite an
unusual gift. In fact, the whole story had this tone when dealing
with extraordinary things, and it made for a very fun read altogether.

Title: Fellowship · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama ·
ID: 396
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:45:05 Score: 4
Great ficlet. I love the fact that Aragorn was practicing his own
archery when he broached this topic with Legolas, and I can't help
but wonder if he was goading Legolas into agreeing by giving him an
archery display and then declaring that a true archer is needed. If
that was his design, kudos to him for deft maneuvering. Of course, I
would expect no less from Gondor's future king. Nicely done.

Title: Sam's Gift · Author: Marta · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID: 955
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:50:41 Score: 6
When he's written correctly, Samwise Gamgee always has a fascinating
perspective on life. And that's definitely apparent here. Things
seemed fresh and new through his eyes. The elves were very elven when
Sam was looking at them, and I loved the fact that he couldn't quite
remember what they fed him during their meal together. But most of
all, I loved the practicality he brought to everything. His refusal
to see himself as a hero or a giver of a great gift was very
touching, and I loved his conversation with Galadriel, which was like
but unlike the one she'd had with Frodo. Great gapfiller, and great
perspective from Sam.

Title: Warring Duties · Author: Pipwise Brandygin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 806
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:51:31 Score: 6
I feel like beating myself over the head right now. I never stopped
to consider how Pippin knew that Merry was on the fields. I guess I
always assumed that Elfhelm filled everyone in, but that doesn't make
nearly as much sense as this story does. This is much better, and as
an added bonus, it addresses some of the other loose threads that
Tolkien left dangling, such as what Gandalf saw when he spoke of
grievous sights. Brilliant gap-filler that does exactly what a gap-
filler should do: donate theories to fill the holes and offer
insights to explain the actions. And it's all done in an evenly paced
narrative that catches readers quickly and holds them until the end.

Title: To keep you from harm · Author: Cuthalion · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 912
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:52:32 Score: 4
I must admit that I'm a bigger fan of the idea that Boromir shared
Faramir's dream, but this story does a good job of presenting an
alternative theory. It's very convincing, and I'm drawn to the idea
that Boromir claimed to have the dream as a way of persuading his
father to let at least one of them pursue the counsel given.
Interesting idea, and it gives Boromir a nice role as a protective
brother.

Title: In the Keeping of the King · Author: Shirebound · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1107
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:53:50 Score: 5
The closing lines of this story seemed to be the best message:
Hobbits don't need a king. Only each other. Very sweet tale with a
peaceful, mellow feel to it. Exactly what would be needed in Ithilien
during the aftermath of the Ring's desctruction. There were spices of
humor (I like Frodo's warning that he didn't want to see any lembas
around his meal) but by and large, this was a story of recovery. And
it held to that tone, moving quickly enough so that it was never
boring but always remembering that peace and rest are what weary
bodies need most.

Title: Walk Warily · Author: Anso the Hobbit/Marigold CoAuthors ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Drama · ID: 1175
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:54:24 Score: 4
This story vividly brought to mind some of my own ventures into mirky
lake waters, and I was constantly wincing with every step they took.
If you can't see what you're walking on and you're not sure as to
what exactly has been washing up on the shore, it's sometimes better
to stay put. But at least they have food to compensate their
adventure. That's more than most get.

Title: Gathering of the Grey Company · Author: Leaward · Books/Time:
Gap-Filler: Grey Company · ID: 171
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:55:38 Score: 6
This is an area I wish Tolkien had told us more about. But thankfully
there are stories like these out there to rectify the situation.
There was a wealth of information smashed into this little vignette,
but surprisingly, it all works. And because it's in such a tight
space, the feeling of haste comes across very clearly. I love
Halbarad's reaction to Elladan and Elrohir when they spring this news
on him, and I love even more the fact that he's willing to try and do
as they ask even though it's impossible to achieve as much as they're
hoping for. Great narrative pacing, and movement through time was
also handled well. Nicely done.

Title: To Water the Dust · Author: Eruanna · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 77
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:56:47 Score: 5
I love the way this brings so many layers and so much meaning to that
little stream that Frodo and Sam found while wandering across Mordor.
And later to Frodo's dream, too. Tolkien's world really doesn't leave
much room for coincidences, and this neatly ties up another one.
Gandalf and Elrond both seemed to hint that Frodo was meant to carry
the Ring, and the idea that a certain watery Vala involved himself
when times seemed most desperate lends support to that idea. As well
as giving a sense of hope to both Frodo and Sam. Wonderful tone in
the writing, and nice use of a quote to tie it all off.

Title: Envinyatar · Author: Starlight · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 520
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:57:57 Score: 4
I love perspectives from the unknown soldiers, and the Northern
Rangers always make for fascinating subjects. Their dread on going to
Gondor only to find it ruined feels very real, but I like the way
they keep their hope through all of it, realizing that now they can
be the men they were supposed to be. Nice tribute to these Rangers,
and great perspective on the long road up the Anduin.

Title: The Riders from Erech · Author: Acacea · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Grey Company · ID: 325
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:58:46 Score: 5
There's almost nothing in the fanfiction world about Angbor, despite
his bravery, so it's a welcome surprise to find him starring in a
vignette. And I love the way he's described. He's desperate and he
doesn't see any chance of victory, but he's going to stick this out
and stand against whatever's sent his way for as long as he can. This
is a man I would want in my army. And when he sees the other army
approaching and realizes who is leading them, hope can return. That
was brilliantly portrayed and made for a great capstone to a very
good vignette.

Title: The Paths of the Dead · Author: alex_cat_45 · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Grey Company · ID: 999
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 16:59:32 Score: 3
I love the feeling of reluctant anticipation in the first part of
this fic. It's almost as though he's afraid to hope that it will be
over. And that feeling is contrasted nicely by the peace in the end.
I love the little details that completed the scene of homecoming, and
I love the way a warm embrace seems to make everything disappear.

Title: Sunshine and Laughter · Author: Anastasia · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1232
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:02:15 Score: 3
This is a side of Gandalf that is seen in brief glimpses only
throughout LotR, and that idea is kept very well in this story
because Pippin never knows who or what it is that soothes his dreams.
It remains an unseen, unthanked, and unasked for act, which is like
most of what Gandalf did during his stay in Middle-earth. Very
touching, and very well written.

Title: One Who Ran · Author: thevina_finduilas · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1197
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:02:49 Score: 5
To be honest, I hadn't given much thought to the men that left
Aragorn on the road to the Morannon. I certainly never considered the
idea that either road would spell certain death for them. Then this
story came along. But as grim and depressing as it is, there's
something about the main character that keeps it from being a
complete wallow. I think it's his pride, which will not allow a
deserter to live. In any case, definitely a gloomy look at the men
Aragorn dismissed in an act of pity. I wonder if he ever knew.

Title: Prayer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 887
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:03:28 Score: 4
Intriguing little tale. The fact that it is Legolas who gives Merry
the idea of praying is an interesting one to me, but then, he is the
one who exclaimed "Elbereth" when the Nazgul soared above the banks
of the Anduin. Fate and guidance are both powerful ideas, and I think
they were expressed beautifully here. There was a very real sense of
desperation, and there was also a very real sense of hope in the end.
Nicely done.

Title: Good Memories, Like Good Stories · Author: Jeodo Brandybuck ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 906
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:04:08 Score: 6
Very nice gap-filler. I loved the flashes of memory from Pippin's
perspective as he remembers Bilbo telling them about trolls. He
didn't seem very much at ease during that time in the books, and I
wonder how much of the danger was beginning to sink in for the first
time. This story does a wonderful job of exploring what Pippin's
thinking and feeling. And it also adds some wonderful character
strokes to Merry's personality, who seems to be a bit braver than
Pippin and who also seems to be a bit wiser. The idea of "we do what
we can" sounds like a very hobbit thing to say, and it's more or less
how the Quest is completed, too. Good foundation work for the rest of
the series.

Title: For the Common Man · Author: Anoriath · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 661
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:04:38 Score: 5
There are only a handful of stories that can truly exploit or create
the wonderful "D'oh!" moments in Middle-earth, and this is one of
them. Gaflin seems to be an capable enough actor to convince Imrahil
that the chicken came from "over younder" even as he's struggling to
clean his teeth, so kudos to him for avoiding the full impacts of the
D'oh moment. But I was grinning the entire time, and I wonder if
Imrahil didn't suspect something after all but chose to let it slide
in view of the battle they'd all just survived. Brilliant story! I
always did wonder what happened to that bird..

Title: The Captain's Last Charge · Author: AmandaK · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 81
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:05:40 Score: 5
I very much enjoyed the road that Faramir's thoughts took throughout
this story. It was a very natural progression from dread and sorrow
to resignation and acceptance, but at no point did it lose its grim,
foreboding atmosphere. The mood was a constant for the entire story,
and it worked well to tie it all together. The first and last lines,
also, were a wonderful way to open and close the story, and almost it
became a plea to Denethor to at least witness his son's death. Very
powerful and very moving. Nicely done.

Title: Reunion at Isengard · Author: Shirebound · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Hobbits · ID: 515
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:06:38 Score: 4
A reunion story! These are always fun, and there really ought to be
more of them that focus on the moment when Pippin and Merry realize
that Gandalf is still alive. Their own accounting in the books is not
nearly enough for my tastes, and I like the shock and disbelief
contained within this story at the thought that the wizard is still
alive. And the imagery of a Balrog flapping around with an old grey
hat was priceless. Thank you very much for that mental picture!

Title: Lightness · Author: Dana · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits ·
ID: 1230
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:08:19 Score: 4
Sweet and simple. Well, not quite simple. Pippin has done some
growing up, and he proves it to Merry with some very good answers to
Merry's doubt and guilt. But this story definitely reads like a
hobbit story should: it's very simple while at the same time hinting
that greater things lie beneath the surface. A very light touch was
used in the tone and the mood, but the emotions are clearly there.
Excellent writing.

Title: Payment Put Off · Author: pippinfan88 · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: War of the Ring · ID: 1038
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:08:54 Score: 3
I've read quite a few stories of Pippin's recovery in Ithilien, but
this story manages to stand out from the rest. It's very different,
and I love the distance it manages to put between itself and Pippin.
He's always "the child," and it makes for a very other worldly feel.
Which, of course, is exactly what is needed. Very nice mood work.

Title: Dusk-singer · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler · ID: 702
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:11:01 Score: 6
The perspective in this story is wonderfully tight. I really felt as
though I was seeing events through Frodo's eyes. Or rather, hearing
them through his ears. There wasn't much in the way of sight, but
there was plenty of sound. I love the way Frodo tracks it and how he
measures the status of his friends by the fact that they're now too
weary to even complain any more. And I like the way that the story of
Beren and Luthien wove in with the nightingale. That strikes me as
something that Frodo would cling to and find strength from. And then
Glorfindel's timely appearance at the end was like a ray of hope
after the nightingale's departure. Great missing scene/perspective
for the flight to Rivendell.

Title: The Days Now Are Short · Author: Anoriath · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Grey Company · ID: 1042
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:19:17 Score: 7
The narrative in this story is a thing of beauty. I love the clipped
pace it adopts at the beginning, mirroring the frantic race to find
Aragorn. The descriptions and imagery are great, and it paints a very
clear, very dark picture for us. We know the Grey Company will get to
Rohan, but for a moment, we're forced to doubt. And then comes the
moment when Aragorn answers Halbarad, and here the pace of the story
changes. I love the final line about the time for skulking in shadows
being finished. In fact, the ending feels almost like a beginning.
The story feels as though it's preparing to leap into something big
and climactic, but there's also enough closure to leave the remaining
adventure to the reader's imagination (or to canon). Great narrative
work, and great emotional work, too, especially when Halbarad and
Aragorn are reunited.

Title: At the Sammath Naur · Author: Aratlithiel · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 126
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:28:18 Score: 10
Sharp, poignant, and gut-wrenching. I don't think I've ever found a
more encompassing and involving look at Frodo's moment of decision. I
love the way that it both begins and ends with a sobering expectation
of failure and death. The resignation in Frodo is chilling, but it
becomes even more so when we realize that Frodo has felt this way
ever since Cirith Ungol. That was a master stroke on the part of
Aratlithiel, and it was perfectly paced to strike a very grim tone in
the story. And it makes so much sense! Trapped in Cirith Ungol, Frodo
experiences exactly what it feels like to have the Ring ripped from
him and given to another. He will never willingly throw it into the
fires after that, and he knows it. But he still tries, and herein
lies one of this piece's greatest strengths: Frodo himself. This is a
brilliantly complete characterization of Frodo, showing his wisdom,
his acceptance, his courage, and his tenacity. The moment when Frodo
realizes that he was sent as a sacrifice is powerful, but even more
powerful is his response: he would have gone anyway. They didn't need
to keep their covert plots and plans from him. It's exactly what one
would expect of Frodo, and even as he claims the Ring, it's a mark of
his integrity that he can hold to this much of himself, especially in
the face of such stinging betrayal. Great story with brilliant
character introspection and a wonderful gauntlet of emotions. It's
been a long time since I read anything quite this good.

Title: Weeping Iron Tears · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Grey Company · ID: 338
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:35:33 Score: 8
The first paragraph in this story is one of the most fitting tributes
to Halbarad that I have ever found. The simple fact that Halbarad
even came to Rohan is shone to be the amazing act of faith that it
truly is, which of course makes his fall on the Pelennor that much
more depressing. But it doesn't stay depressing, because Aragorn
wanders off into some very pleasant memories of his friend. A
Ranger's life sounds very lonely, so to have someone you could meet
once in a while in the spring must have been a priceless treasure.
And it doesn't sound as if Aragorn ever took it for granted, either.
So having now established a great contrast with just two paragraphs,
Aragorn finds that he is also torn in two over Halbarad's fall. He
doesn't want to demean the sacrifice by mourning too much, but he's a
bit selfish, too. The balance between bitter and sweet struck within
this vignette is heartwrenching, and I love the way it lingers just
long enough to play with a reader's emotions. But the ending makes up
for all. Great way to conclude. It brings a brilliant sense of both
closure and peace to the entire story.

Title: Halbarad · Author: Fileg · Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Grey
Company · ID: 341
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:37:03 Score: 6
Wow. This vignette floored me. I'm not sure what I was expecting, but
I was definitely taken by surprise. The notion that Halbarad is
practically one of the dead but a little warmer was sobering. And yet
it rang so true for Halbarad. His loyalty and faithfullness were
breathtaking, and I loved the way he found his strength through
Aragorn and how he rode at Aragorn's side as a brother alongside
Elrohir. This is a fantastic tribute to a man who knew his own end
was near, and I loved how he took that knowledge and used it to shake
away his fear. The final line about being somewhere between the
living and the dead was chilling at the same time that it contained a
strange sort of hope. But then, it was hard not to be hopeful with a
man like this following Aragorn. Great portrayal!

Title: Not Without Hope · Author: Gwynnyd · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drama · ID: 48
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:39:34 Score: 7
Thank goodness for good Gilraen characterizations. More than good, in
fact. Great. Brilliant. Tenacious. That last was probably what
impressed me most, actually. This is one of the most tenacious,
stubborn, and ingenius versions of Gilraen that I've ever read, and I
loved her personality almost immediately. The arguments and
situations put forth in this story were very good, and the setup
surrounding them was thorough and convincing. The Rangers were
presented with quite a quandry, and by the end, it felt as though
everyone was completely at his or her wit's end. And now we see where
Aragorn gets his second winds. Gilraen's idea of hiding Aragorn
beneath the guise of an illegitimate son is nothing short of genius,
and it solves a variety of problems as well as preventing a slew of
new ones. Fantastic story, and thank you so much for letting Gilraen
shine. She sorely needs it.

Title: Hand in Hand · Author: illyria-pffyffin · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Hobbits · ID: 888
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:40:41 Score: 7
I really enjoyed this story. Death fics have a habit of becoming
bogged down in their own grief, but this story took a slightly
different approach. Bilbo's perspective is always an interesting
journey, and his hesitancy and fear for Frodo, coupled with a
bumbling awkwardness, make for some beautiful scenes. Trust a hobbit
to start the grieving process with a request for food. Frodo, though,
is what really makes this story work, and his almost callous nature
in the beginning was a wonderful way of keeping this fic from
dissolving into an angst-fest. It added a new dimension to the
turmoil, and it was enhanced by all the unspoken thoughts that chimed
in while others were giving their condolences. Very well handled, and
good resolution as Frodo finally breaks down in the end and turns to
Bilbo.

Title: Cheery Letters From Bree · Author: Lulleny · Books/Time: Gap-
Filler: Drama · ID: 1094
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:48:02 Score: 6
Without a doubt, my favorite hobbit of the foursome is Merry, and I
love the attention he gets in this story. He's a fascinating
creature, and he always seems to be drawn into situations with
Wrights or Nazgul. It makes sense that in order to endure his first
couple of encounters, he needs to speak with someone about it. And
Strider makes a surprisingly sympathetic companion, even if he has
adopted a grim and dour demeanor. Nice character work on Aragorn, by
the way. But for me, the highlight of this piece was Merry's letter.
He does reveal quite a bit, but he also confuses it with phrases
like "Bywater relation." It's a shrewd letter, and it's exactly what
I would expect from the hobbit who immediately focused on the key to
unraveling the Moria gates mystery. Brilliantly done.

Title: Just in Case · Author: Marnie · Books/Time: Gap-Filler · ID:
477
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 17:54:49 Score: 8
I think one of Sauron's big weaknesses was his tendency to dismiss or
underestimate certain people and races. Which is why Celeborn's
conversation with him is so much fun! Celeborn uses the misconception
that the Sindar are weak compared to the Noldor and comes up with an
answer that makes Sauron reevaluate a number of things. But the
conversation is a minor part of a wonderful vignette, and the rest is
equally intriguing. Tolkien gave us a detailed account of Galadriel's
encounter with the One Ring, but what about Celeborn? His refusal to
take the Ring grants a fate that feels more bitter than the one
Galadriel endures. And the safeguards he puts up (such as the
sentries) to bolster himself and protect against others is exactly
the kind of practical wisdom we should expect from Celeborn. I very
much appreciate the sentiment that the worst is usually what happens
when the Noldor get involved. That's the voice of experience
speaking, and it makes me respect Celeborn all the more!

Title: The Comfort of Good Friends · Author: SilverMoonLady ·
Books/Time: Gap-Filler: Hobbits · ID: 626
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 18:03:35 Score: 9
This is how flashback stories should be done. Of course, it doesn't
hurt that there is masterful characterization involved as well as
some excellent pacing and mood work. Every word rings true, every
action follows naturally, and a very real sense of danger pervades
the flashback, accompanied by a wonderful sense of relief in the
present, which frames the flashback on either side. But the flashback
itself has a perfect lead in. The surroundings are set up in just the
right way and with just the right touch so as to lead in naturally to
Merry's memories of what happened when the hobbits gathered at
Crickhollow.

And then there's the substance of the flashback, which is something I
now feel should have been a part of canon. What possessed Merry to
allow Pippin to come on this journey? Pippin answers that question in
this story as well as I've ever seen it answered. He HAS grown quite
a bit, and though none of the hobbits really appreciate what they are
getting into, they're certainly aware that things will get darker
before they get better. I like Sam's line about trusting the shivers.
It's something they all learn. Excellent writing as usual for
SilverMoonLady, and wonderful conclusion to a very satisfying gap-
filler.

Title: Making Verses · Author: Zimraphel · Books/Time: Gap-Filler ·
ID: 611
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 18:15:30 Score: 7
This scene from the Hall of Fire has now been completely turned on
its head for me. And I must confess that I prefer this new version.
Lindir is so...cynical. He's got a lovely sarcastic voice and his
inner monologue was hilarious. I've also decided that I really like
Saelbeth, who was indeed very cheeky. What really amazes me, though,
is how Aragorn, Elrond, Glorfindel, and Erestor were characterized by
their very absence. They had no part whatsoever into this story
(appart from the fact that Aragorn wanted the inclusion of the
Elfstone) and yet that by itself is very telling. Poor Bilbo. I
wonder how often this happened and whether he had any inkling
whatsoever about what the elves actually thought of him. Still, it's
gratifying to know that they appreciated the songs from the Shire.
Brilliant reinterpretation!

Title: Foolish Hobbit · Author: Tialys · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Hobbits · ID: 120
Reviewer: Thundera Tiger · 2005-08-31 18:16:28 Score: 8
This is a fantastic story, and I really think it ought to be in the
books. Tolkien never really tells us what Frodo thinks about bringing
Sam along. He has musings later down the road after speaking to the
elves, but at the moment of decision, when the full magnitude is just
sinking in, surely he would have had some kind of reaction. And I
can't think of a more canonical reaction than this one. Frodo is
wonderfully in character, and the gauntlet of emotions that he runs
is an absolute thrill. But perhaps my favorite thing about this story
is Gandalf. He's every bit the wily, rascally wizard that sent Bilbo
out the door at a run without a pocket handkerchief, and Gandalf's
amusement at Frodo's outrage had me chuckling and wincing in turns.
This is a wonderful picture of the wizard before Saruman's betrayal
is known and also before the tone of the story turns desperate, and I
loved every minute of it. Gandalf has a good point, too. It's
unlikely that Sam will even hear of being abandoned, and I certainly
wouldn't want to tell him that a trip to see the elves has been
cancelled. Wonderful story telling!

Title: Red Roses, Golden Arrows · Author: Regina · Races/Places:
Hobbits: Post-Ring War · ID: 507
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 19:18:19 Score: 3
How sweet that, unlike the hobbits in Hobbiton, the Tooks really do
understand the sacrifice Pippin made. This whole story is infused
with rich detail and believable scenarios, and each of Pippin's
family members (mere names for the most part, canonically) takes on a
life of their own. This was a fun yarn.

Title: Beyond the Door · Author: ErinRua · Books/Time: Gap-Filler:
Drabble · ID: 283
Reviewer: Marta · 2005-08-31 19:19:54 Score: 3
Oh! This is a beautiful drabble. I particularly like how Halbarad
sees to hope (no pun intended :^P ) beyond death, and the detail of
Aragorn's warm hand on his shoulder. This isn't a moment that I have
ever seen drabbled, but you wrote it very well.

***end***

Msg# 5291

Thank you, Sulriel Posted by Ainaechoiriel August 31, 2005 - 23:42:08 Topic ID# 5291
Thank you so much for taking over for me while I was busy dealing with
family business and grieving for my brother-in-law and my sister in losing
him. I'm still quite busy and getting down about gas prices which means I
might have to take on a 2nd job, thus making me more busy. But I'll try and
get back to managing this site, at least in the evenings. I got in trouble
for doing too much non-work at work, so mostly I just read stories there
now. Copy them onto Word documents so it might still look like I'm working.
;-)

There's no way I can possibly catch up with all the e-mails that have gone
by so if someone can give me an update, here and on the staff list, I'd
appreciate it.

Also, I hope all our members are safe from the disaster of hurricane
Katrina. It's quite ovewhelming to think of 80% of New Orleans flooded. And
most insurance companies won't insure against flood damage, making things
even worse for the survivors.

--Ainaechoiriel
MEFA Admin and Founder

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